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  1. 51 51
      locations/albina_chat.qsrc
  2. 2 2
      locations/albinahome.qsrc
  3. 8 15
      locations/bed2.qsrc

+ 51 - 51
locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		act 'The new maid':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Have you seen the new maid, Milena, yet? She''s a little older but just as, if not more, attractive than the last one, but my father isn''t here to charm her into sucking his dick. Not that it would work anyway. She bats for the other team, if you know what I mean..." she says with a wink. Mama says I shouldn''t disturb her when she''s doing her work, but we like chatting with each other about pretty much everything. That''s when I found out about her girlfriend."'
+			'"Have you seen the new maid, Milena, yet? She''s a little older but just as, if not more, attractive than the last one, but my father isn''t here to charm her into sucking his dick. Not that it would work anyway. She bats for the other team, if you know what I mean..." she says with a wink. "Mama says I shouldn''t disturb her when she''s doing her work, but we like chatting with each other about pretty much everything. That''s when I found out about her girlfriend."'
 			'You laugh. "Disappointed that you can''t get in her panties?"'
 			'She gives you a hard stare in response. "She has to hide the fact that she''s openly lesbian or she''d get fired by her asshole boss. He''s not quite... accepting and I wouldn''t risk her job like that." She then smiles softly. "Mama would no doubt find out anyway, but she would understand and not say anything. She''d be more pissed at me for fucking the maid and preventing her from doing her job. Mama likes a clean house after all." You both laugh before she changes the subject.'
 			AlbinaQW['Maid'] = 0
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				'"<i>Is</i> it just sex or is there something more?" you imply.'
 				'She shakes her head. "No, we''re just friends with benefits. Or ''fuck buddies'' as Marcus says it''s called in America."'
 				'"So there''s nothing serious then? No chance of you guys ever becoming a couple?"'
-				'Albina hesitates, as if trying to decide how much to say. "Lazar was a shoulder for me to cry on when I needed it. He listened to me and helped me when I was down without expecting anything in return. He was and still is a good friend to me. It ended up turning into casual sex one day and we found we liked it that way. We''re never going to hook up, end of story."  She really doesn''t want to continue this conversation and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
+				'She hesitates, as if trying to decide how much to say. "Lazar was a shoulder for me to cry on when I needed it. He listened to me and helped me when I was down without expecting anything in return. He was and still is a good friend to me. It ended up turning into casual sex one day and we found we liked it that way. We''re never going to hook up, end of story."  She really doesn''t want to continue this conversation and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
 				'"So what about you? Hooked up with anyone?" she asks, turning the conversation on you.'
 			else
 				'"What''s the deal with you and Lazar?" you ask her.'
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				'"It''s no secret that the two of you hook up at school. Is it just sex or is there something more?" you imply.'
 				'She shakes her head. "No, we''re just friends with benefits. Or ''fuck buddies'' as Marcus says it''s called in America. We just have sex when we feel like it, no strings attached. I don''t care about being his ''girlfriend'' and he enjoys all the female attention he gets. It would never work between us."'
 				'"So there''s nothing serious then? No chance of you guys ever becoming a couple?"'
-				'She gives you a cold stare in response. "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lazar was a shoulder for me to cry on when I needed it. He listened to me and helped me when I was down without expecting anything in return. He was and still is a good friend to me. It ended up turning into casual sex one day and we found we liked it that way. We''re never going to hook up, end of story." She really doesn''t want to continue this conversation and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
+				'She hesitates, as if trying to decide how much to say.. "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lazar was a shoulder for me to cry on when I needed it. He listened to me and helped me when I was down without expecting anything in return. He was and still is a good friend to me. It ended up turning into casual sex one day and we found we liked it that way. We''re never going to hook up, end of story." She really doesn''t want to continue this conversation and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
 				'"So what about you? Hooked up with anyone?" she asks, turning the conversation on you.'
 			end
 			act 'No':
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 	'You''re curious about her anal fetish and now seems like a good time to ask. "So..." you sheepishly ask. "What is it, you like, about...anal?"
 	She glares at you for a few seconds before answering. "And why do you want to know?"'
 	'You stutter, flustered by her response. "Oh, it''s just...you know there''s...stuff going around school about you?"'
-	'Oh I know all about that. "Albina is just a cheap butt slut whore.", "I bet Albina''s asshole is looser than Lizeveta''s lips!", "I would fuck Albina''s asshole while slapping her juicy cheeks like I''m playing some bongos!", "I bet her pussy is tighter than a nun''s with all the anal she does." I''ve heard them all, but none of the perverted fucking cowards dare mention them in front of me. To answer your question, I''m not going to. I don''t need to explain my sex life to anyone." She then turns away and goes quiet.'
+	'"Oh I know all about that. ''Albina is just a cheap butt slut whore.'', ''I bet Albina''s asshole is looser than Lizeveta''s lips!'', ''I would fuck Albina''s asshole while slapping her juicy cheeks like I''m playing some bongos!'', ''I bet her pussy is tighter than a nun''s with all the anal she does.'' I''ve heard them all, but none of the perverted fucking cowards dare mention them in front of me. To answer your question, I''m not going to. I don''t need to explain my sex life to anyone." She then turns away and goes quiet.'
 	'You''ve clearly hit a nerve and know better than to push her further, so you change the subject.'
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 	act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ if NikoPayback > 1 and AlbVsNiko = 0:
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
     'You feel Albina wrap an arm around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>? You''re looking pretty glum."'
     'You collect your thoughts before replying. "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he''s been raping me at lunchtime and I..."'
-    'Her face contorts in rage. "That slimy motherfucker! Don''t worry, I''ll sort him out..." She doesn''t eleborate on what she''s planning when you ask, but you give her a tight hug. "Thanks Albina, I just don''t know what to do."'
+    'Her face contorts in rage. "That slimy motherfucker! Don''t worry, I''ll sort him out..." She doesn''t eleborate on what she''s planning when you ask, but you give her a tight hug. "Thanks Albina, I just don''t know what to do!"'
     'She holds you tight and comforts you as tears run down your cheeks. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll make it all go away... How about we do something to take your mind off it?"'
     act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
     end
@@ -386,53 +386,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 			gs 'stat'
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/drink_wine.jpg"></center>'
-			'"What is going on Albina? Seriously, what is this about? I don''t understand."'
+			'"What''s going on Albina? Seriously, what is this about? I don''t understand."'
 			'"He''s finally fucking gone!" she rants, as if that makes any more sense. "All his emails, text messages, phone calls, all the witnesses proving what a scumbag he is!"'
 			'"Albina, what are you talking about?!"'
-			'"Shut up and drink," she says, filling her glass a second time. You take a small sip while she downs the whole thing again. Several minutes go by in silence, broken only by your occasional sips and the glugging of Albina pouring herself glass after glass until the bottle is empty.'
+			'"Just shut up and drink!" she scorns while filling her glass a second time. You take a small sip while she downs the whole thing again. Several minutes go by in silence, broken only by your occasional sips and the glugging of Albina pouring herself glass after glass until the bottle is empty.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
 				'"<i><b>FUCKING BASTARD!!</b></i>"'
-				'Without warning, Albina smashes her glass down on the table, causing you to jump. The glass snaps at the stem and leaves her holding just the top part which she stares at, as if she doesn''t understand how it got into her hand. You look at her in fright and watch tears begin to stream from her unblinking eyes before she hurls the rest of the cup across the room, shattering against a cabinet and screaming.'
+				'Without warning, Albina smashes her glass down on the table, causing you to jump. The glass snaps at the stem and she blankly stares at the broken remains in her hand, as if she doesn''t understand how they got there. You look at her in fright and watch tears begin to stream from her unblinking eyes before she hurls the rest of the glass across the room. It shatters against a cabinet as she lets out a loud scream.'
 				act 'Try to talk':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Albina..." you start. "I-'
-					
-					'"My father turned me into a whore," she blurts out. "He sold me. Let men drag his only daughter away into hotel rooms and fuck her in every hole. And they''d give him money. Donate right into his campaign fund like it was charity."'
+					'"My father turned me into a whore!" she blurts out. "He sold me! Let men drag me away into hotel rooms and fuck me however they pleased! And they''d give him money. Donate right into his campaign fund like it was charity."'
 					if AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] > 0:
 						'She turns to face you, eyes brimming. "And when it wasn''t enough, he sold my friends too. Sold <i>you</i>."'
-						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly, sobs racking her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I''m so sorry! I should''ve stopped them! But I didn''t! I just handed you over to be raped-! Because I didn''t want it to be me-! I had-! You-! I-! I''m-! <i>UWAHHHH!!</i>"'
+						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly as sobs rack her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I''m so sorry! I should''ve stopped them! But I didn''t! I just handed you over to be raped-! Because I didn''t want it to be me-! I had-! You-! I-! I''m-! <i>UWAHHHH!!</i>"'
 						*nl
-						'You throw your arms around her, wrapping her in a tight hug as she continues to cry, fingers gripped tight across the back of your top and tears soaking into your shoulder.'
-						act'Forgive her':
+						'You throw your arms around her, wrapping her in a tight hug as she continues to cry, her fingers gripped tight across the back of your top as her tears soak into your shoulder.'
+						act 'Forgive her':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort1.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Shhhh, shhhh. It''s okay..." you whisper comfortingly.'
 							'"It''s not okay!" she wails back. "I-! I-!"'
 							'"It''s okay..." you continue on cooing. "I forgive you Albina. I''m not holding this against you."'
 							'"But I-!"'
-							'"I don''t care. You''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and her words become completely unintelligable  for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
-							act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','first_visit2'
+							'"I don''t care. You''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and she becomes completely unintelligable for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
+							act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','first_visit2'
 						end
 					else
 						'She turns to face you, eyes brimming. "And when it wasn''t enough, he sold my friends too."'
-						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly, sobs racking her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I didn''t want to! But I didn''t stop them! I just handed them over to be raped because I didn''t want it to be  me! I had-! They-! I-! I''m-! <i>UWAHHHH!!</i>"'
+						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly as sobs rack her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I didn''t want to! But I didn''t stop them! I just handed them over to be raped because I didn''t want it to be  me! I had-! They-! I-! I''m-! <i>UWAHHHH!!</i>"'
 						*nl
-						'You throw your arms around her, wrapping her in a tight hug as she continues to cry, fingers gripped tight across the back of your top and tears soaking into your shoulder.'
+						'You throw your arms around her, wrapping her in a tight hug as she continues to cry, her fingers gripped tight across the back of your top as her tears soak into your shoulder.'
 					end
-					act'It''s not your fault':
+					act 'It''s not your fault':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort1.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Shhhh, shhhh. It''s okay..." you whisper comfortingly.'
 						'"It''s not okay!" she wails back. "I-! I-!"'
 						'"It''s okay..." you continue on cooing. "It''s not your fault."'
 						'"But I-!"'
-						'"It''s not. No matter what you tell yourself, it wasn''t your fault. And no matter what you think, you''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and her words become completely unintelligable for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
-						act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','first_visit2'
+						'"It''s not. No matter what you tell yourself, it wasn''t your fault. And no matter what you think, you''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and she becomes completely unintelligable for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
+						act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','first_visit2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -444,7 +443,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 	'Eventually Albina''s body stops shuddering and she pulls back. Her eyes are bloodshot and the fierce sobs that coursed through her have been reduced to small hiccuping gasps.'
-	'"My mama is coming home you know," she whispers with a small smile. She glances up at you with eyes that look like they could burst in to tears again at any moment, but this time with joy. "All these years after he chased her away... She''s going to come home. She''s going to come back to me! <i>For</i> me!" Albina is practically beaming.'
+	'"My mama is coming home you know," she whispers with a small smile. She glances up at you with eyes that look like they could burst in to tears again at any moment, but this time with joy. "All these years after he chased her away... She''s going to come home. She''s going to come back to me! <i>For</i> me!" She is practically beaming.'
 	'"You really miss her, don''t you?"'
 	'Instead of answering you, she lunges forward and presses her lips against yours, forcing her tongue between them.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -460,52 +459,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You jump back in fright, breaking the kiss and nearly falling off the sofa. In turn, Albina jumps back from you, looking distraught.'
 			'"I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I-! I shouldn''t have... I don''t know what came over me! I... I''m sorry," she repeats. "You should go... I don''t want to..."'
-			act'Do as she suggests':
+			act 'Do as she suggests':
 				cla & *clr
-				'Not saying anything else, you awkwardly pick up your things and walk towards the door. Albina continues to sit there, shoulders hunched staring downward. As far as you know, she doesn''t move even as you close the door behind you.'
-				act'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
+				'Not saying anything else, you awkwardly pick up your things and walk towards the door. Albina sits in silence, her shoulders hunched as she stares downward. As far as you know, she doesn''t move even as you close the door behind you.'
+				act 'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
 			end
 			
-			act'Comfort her':
+			act 'Comfort her':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 				'"No, it''s okay," you shake your head. "I was just... surprised. I didn''t mean to react that way."'
-				'"You should go," she says again, her voice flat.'
+				'"You should go..." she says again, her voice flat.'
 				'"No, I''m not leaving you like this. If you want, I could just sit here and we could chat for a while?"'
 				'Raising her head, Albina looks at you with a sad smile. "I''d like that."'
 				*nl
-				act'Continue':
+				act 'Continue':
 					cla & *clr
 					minut += 60
 					npc_rel['A23'] += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You sit by her side as she begins to tell you everything about herself that was once hidden from you. How her father never wanted children. How he abused her mother because of her birth. The way he chased her mother away and then blamed Albina for it after. Many of her rapes, described in graphic, painful detail. How she seeks comfort from women because of the abuse she''s endured at the hands of men. And finally, how she gathered evidence for years before submitting it to the police and having him arrested. You do nothing but sit there and nod along the entire time, listening intently.'
+					'You sit by her side as she begins to tell you everything about herself that was once hidden from you. How her father never wanted children. How he abused her mother because of her birth. The way he chased her mother away and then blamed Albina for it after. Many of her rapes, described in graphic, painful detail. How she seeks comfort from women because of the abuse she''s endured at the hands of men. And finally, how she gathered evidence for years before submitting it to the police and having him arrested. You do nothing but sit and nod along the entire time, listening intently.'
 					*nl
-					'At the end of an hour, it seems a weight has been lifted from her shoulders and has <i>slightly</i> sobered up.'
+					'At the end of an hour, it seems a weight has been lifted from her shoulders and she has <i>slightly</i> sobered up.'
 					'"I''ve never told anyone that before," she says. "You... you really don''t think worse of me?"'
-					act'No I don''t':
+					act 'No I don''t':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome.jpg"></center>'
 						'"No," you shake your head. "I don''t. I think you''re one of the bravest people I''ve ever met."'
 						'Your friend truly comforted, you finally collect your things and bid her farewell. She takes you to the door and as you walk down the driveway, both of you waving goodbye, you think you catch sight of the first genuine smile you''ve ever seen on Albina''s face.'
-						act'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
+						act 'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
 					end
 					
-					act'Kiss her':
+					act 'Kiss her':
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', -5
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
-						'Instead of answering with words, you lean in and press your lips against Albina''s. She practically melts into it opening her mouth to brush her tongue across your lips. You oblige and open your mouth to press back against her with your own tongue. You feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+						'Instead of answering with words, you lean in and press your lips against Albina''s. She practically melts into it, opening her mouth to brush her tongue across your lips. You oblige and open your mouth to press back against her with your own tongue. You feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 						'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
-						'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs into her room.'
-						act'Follow':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
+						'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
+						act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 			
 			
-			act'Kiss her':
+			act 'Kiss her':
 				cla & *clr
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', -5
 				cla & *clr
@@ -513,10 +512,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 				'Unwilling to leave Albina like this, you lean in and press your lips against hers. She stiffens.'
 				'"No, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says around your lips. "I don''t want to make you-"'
 				'"I was just surprised," you whisper back. "I don''t mind. I want this."'
-				'You press your tongue against her lips and Albina melts into it opening her mouth to allow you in. Her tongue swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+				'You press your tongue against her lips and Albina melts into it, opening her mouth to allow you in. Her tongue swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 				'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
-				'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs into her room.'
-				act'Follow':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
+				'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
+				act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -532,7 +531,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. It swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 		'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 		'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs into her room.'
-		act 'Follow':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
+		act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -540,7 +539,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'The moment you get into her room, you tear each other''s clothes off. Albina''s panties are drenched, coming away with a trail of juices. As soon as you''re completely naked, two of you fall back onto the bed and go right back to making out again. But it isn''t enough. You can feel Albina''s juices smearing against your thigh and you''re pretty sure she can feel the same from you.'
+	'The moment you get into her room, you start tearing each other''s clothes off and tossing them aside without a care. Her thong is drenched and comes away with a trail of juices as she wiggles out of it. As soon as you''re completely naked, she pushes you back onto the bed and climbs on top of you. You wrap your legs around her back and you go right back to passionately making out again. But it isn''t enough. You can feel Albina''s juices smearing against your thigh and you''re pretty sure she can feel the same from you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 	gs 'arousal', 'massage', -2, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -552,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/uanuli22.jpg"></center>'
 		'Albina breaks the kiss and flips you around, shoving two fingers into your pussy and her tongue up your ass. The second one causes you to gasp and she capitalizes on it, sending undulating motions through her tongue to drive you into a frenzy.'
-		'"Albina!" you moan. "I want to make you feel good too!"'
+		'"Oh Albina!" you moan. "I want to make you feel good too!"'
 		act '69':
 			*clr & cla
 			if npc_sex['A23'] = 0: npc_sex['A23'] = 1 & girl += 1
@@ -560,11 +559,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -10, 'no_orgasm_msg'
+			gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/69_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You turn, forcing her tongue away from your ass and towards your other hole instead, wrapping your thighs around her torso. In the same motion, you dive between her legs and run your tongue across her pussy. It''s <i>soaked</i> with her arousal. The two of you eat each other out with mutually reckless abandon, relentlessly teasing each other''s clits.'
+			'You turn, forcing her tongue away from your ass and towards your other hole instead, wrapping your thighs around her torso. In the same motion, you dive between her legs and run your tongue across her pussy. It''s absolutely <i>soaked</i>. The two of you eat each other out with mutually reckless abandon as you relentlessly tease each other''s clits. Albina''s tongue occasionally slides up and rims your ass before moving back down to your pussy, which grows wetter and wetter.'
 			*nl
-			'Albina''s body begins to tense and her legs pull you tight against her pussy, practically burying you in it. She''s close, and you feel exactly the same way, mimicking her actions and you can feel her lips directly against your lower ones. She shrieks into your pussy, her cry of orgasm vibrating through you. Suddenly, a burst of fluid sprays into your face and the shock sends you over the edge. Your eyes roll back in your head as you too, release a wordless groan into her dripping sex. You can feel her spasming underneath your tongue and her juices spray directly into your mouth. It''s unbelievably hot, sustaining your orgasm for longer and longer.'
+			'Albina''s body begins to tense up and her legs pull you tight against her pussy, practically burying you in it. She''s close, and you feel exactly the same way, mimicking her actions as you feel her lips against your labia. She shrieks into your pussy, her cry of orgasm vibrating through you as a burst of fluid suddenly sprays into your face and the shock sends you over the edge. Your eyes roll back in your head as you too release a wordless groan into her dripping wet pussy. You can feel her spasming underneath your tongue and her juices spray directly into your mouth. It''s unbelievably hot, sustaining your orgasm for longer and longer.'
 			*nl
 			'Finally, the tension gives out and both of you are left panting. You can feel Albina''s breath between your legs.'
 			act'Continue':
@@ -579,22 +579,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 				*nl
 				'Pulling her herself up, Albina turns herself around and gives you the most gentle kiss before pulling back. You can taste yourself on her lips.'
 				*nl
-				'"That might have been... the biggest orgasm... I''ve ever had..." Albina pants, giving you a sultry look as she combs back her deshevled hair. "Holy shit, you''re wasted on men."'
+				'"That might have been... the biggest orgasm... I''ve ever had..." Albina pants, giving you a sultry look as she combs back her deshevled hair. "Holy shit, you''re wasted on men!"'
 				'"You didn''t... tell me... you were a squirter!" you huff back.'
-				'"You never asked," she smirks.'
-				act'Afterglow':
+				'"You never asked," she smirks and gives you another soft kiss.'
+				act 'Afterglow':
 					minut += rand(5,10)
 					gs 'stat'
 					cla & *clr
-					'The two of you lay like that on her bed, slowly recovering after your high-intensity orgasms. Incredibly, Albina''s pussy continues to trickle a steady stream of juices, even several minutes later.'
+					'The two of you lay on her bed, slowly recovering after your high-intensity orgasms. Incredibly, Albina''s pussy continues to trickle a steady stream of juices, even several minutes later.'
 					'"Oh fuck," she breathes. "I get so wet after I cum, but this is just ridiculous! What did you do to me <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 					'You laugh, finally managing to prop yourself up. You look over at her and her expression seems to change to something more tender.'
-					'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out... and I''m not just talking about my feelings," she says, expression turning mischevious again. "Thanks for being a good friend."' 
-					act'Get dressed':
+					'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out... and I''m not just talking about my feelings..." she says, expression turning mischevious again. "Thanks for being a good friend."' 
+					act 'Get dressed':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome.jpg"></center>'
 						'Albina helps you clean up before you get dressed and you finally collect your things, preparing to bid her farewell. She forgos her clothes, choosing to walk you to the door instead. As you walk down the driveway, you turn and see her, standing naked in the doorway waving you goodbye and you think you catch sight of the first genuine smile you''ve ever seen on Albina''s face.'
-						act'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
+						act 'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
 					end
 				end
 			end

+ 2 - 2
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 		AlbinaQW['visiting'] = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/zoya.jpg"></center>'
 		'You walk up the long driveway to the front door and knock. It opens to reveal a woman you estimate to be in her late 30s. She''s very attractive and well dressed, wearing high heels, a pencil skirt, and a partially unbuttoned blouse that gives you a view of her substantial cleavage that bulges against the fabric.'
-		'"You must be <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she smiles. "Albina has told me quite a bit about you. All good things, I assure you," she adds with a laugh.'
+		'"You must be <<$pcs_firstname>>!" she smiles. "Albina has told me quite a bit about you. All good things, I assure you," she adds with a laugh.'
 		'The woman holds out her hand for you to shake and you do so tentatively. "I''m sorry, and you are...?"'
 		'"Oh! Forgive my rudeness. I''m Albina''s mother, Zoya Petrenko." <i>Albina''s mother??</i> you think, shocked by the introduction.'
 		'"It''s a pleasure to meet you!" you blurt out. "Mrs... Ms... Uhh..." With a start, you flounder, realizing she didn''t use the same last name as Albina and you''re not sure what to do.'
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 		act'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/zoya.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Albina is in her room right now, I expect the maid has told her of your arrival already." She grabs her coat and clatters her way to the front door. "I wish I could be a more entertaining host, but I have to get to the hospital so I will just have to leave that to my daughter. If you are a frequent visitor, you might not see me a lot, but do come and say hello if I''m ever home when you visit. It was nice meeting you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'"Albina is in her room right now, I expect the maid has told her of your arrival already." She grabs her coat and clatters her way to the front door. "I wish I could be a more entertaining host, but I have to get to the hospital so I will just have to leave that to my daughter. If you are a frequent visitor, you might not see me a lot, but do come and say hello if I''m ever home when you visit. It was nice meeting you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 			'She gives a parting smile and closes the door behind her.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		end

+ 8 - 15
locations/bed2.qsrc

@@ -392,30 +392,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dream':
 		if varsleep['minutes to wakeup'] > 0:jump 'loopson_bed'
 	end
 
-
 	varsleep['time_now'] = daystart*1440 + hour * 60 + minut
 
+	gs 'stat'
 	if slept_in = 1:
-		gs 'stat'
 		$waketext = 'You wake up at <b><<$mid(100+hour,2,2)>>:<<$mid(100+minut,2,2)>></b>, after sleeping-in a little longer than planned, but at least you''ve had plenty of sleep.'
-		gs 'bed2', 'wake'
-	elseif pcs_sleep >= 100 and budilnikOn = 0:
-		gs 'stat'
-		$waketext = 'You wake up at <b><<$mid(100+hour,2,2)>>:<<$mid(100+minut,2,2)>></b>, no longer tired and ready to start the day with plenty of sleep.'
-		gs 'bed2', 'wake'
 	elseif pcs_sleep >= 100 and budilnikOn = 1 and varsleep['time_now'] >= varsleep['alarm_time']:
-		gs 'stat'
 		$waketext = 'You wake up at <b><<$mid(100+hour,2,2)>>:<<$mid(100+minut,2,2)>></b>, just before your alarm goes off. You''ve had plenty of sleep.'
-		gs 'bed2', 'wake'
+	elseif pcs_sleep >= 100:
+		$waketext = 'You wake up at <b><<$mid(100+hour,2,2)>>:<<$mid(100+minut,2,2)>></b>, no longer tired and ready to start the day with plenty of sleep.'
 	elseif budilnikOn = 1 and varsleep['time_now'] = varsleep['alarm_time']:
 		pcs_mood -= 10
-		gs 'stat'
 		$waketext = 'Your alarm goes off at <b><<$mid(100+hour,2,2)>>:<<$mid(100+minut,2,2)>></b>, '+iif(pcs_sleep < 90, 'but you could do with some extra sleep.', 'and you''ve had plenty of sleep.')+''
 		gs 'bed2', 'extra'
-		gs 'bed2', 'wake'
+	else
+		!! I do not think that it could go here
+		$waketext = ''
 	end
-	*nl
 
+	gs 'bed2', 'wake'
+	*nl
 	'<<$waketext>>'
 end
 
@@ -601,9 +597,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'extra':
 	act '"Snooze" a few minutes more...':
 		menu_off = 1
 		slept_in = 1
-		stime = 0
-		minut += (100-pcs_sleep)*6
-		pcs_sleep += 100
 		gs 'stat'
 		gt 'bed2', 'dream'
 	end