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+ 20 - 20
locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -1791,16 +1791,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckornot':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/fuckornot/fuckable_list.jpg"></center>'
 	gs 'gschool_groups', 'fuckornot'
 	
-	'10: Perfection. - Would let her do whatever she wants to me'
-	'9: Smoking Hot. - Would eat her ass'
-	'8: Hot. - Would fuck that ass'
-	'7: Damn girl. - Bragging rights for fucking.'
-	'6: Mos def smashable. - Totally fuckable, fuck buddy material'
-	'5: Merely fuckable. - wouldn''t mind smashing it, blowjob buddy material.'
-	'4: Almost fuckable. - Doable, in the dark or to get a blowjob from.'
-	'3: Unattractive. - Doable, if I get myself drunk first, good match for Petria'
-	'2: Fugly. - Has potential compared to a trash bin, even Lesco could do better'
-	'1: Hideous. - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick'
+	'10: Perfection - Would let her do whatever she wants to me.'
+	'9: Smoking Hot - Would eat her ass.'
+	'8: Hot - Would fuck that ass.'
+	'7: Damn girl - Bragging rights for fucking.'
+	'6: Smashable - Totally fuckable. Fuck buddy material'
+	'5: Merely fuckable - Wouldn''t mind smashing it. Blowjob buddy material.'
+	'4: Almost fuckable - Doable in the dark or to get a blowjob from.'
+	'3: Unattractive - Doable if I get myself drunk first. Good match for Petia.'
+	'2: Fugly - Has potential compared to a trash bin. Even Lesco could do better.'
+	'1: Hideous - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the site':
 		if $view_location = 'school':
@@ -1817,16 +1817,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotornot':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
 	gs 'gschool_groups', 'hotornot'
 	
-	'10: Perfection. - Would let him do whatever he wants to me'
-	'9: Smoking Hot. - Arm Candy'
-	'8: Hot. - Would ride him'
-	'7: Damn man. - Bragging rights for fucking.'
-	'6: Ridable. - Totally fuckable, fuck buddy material'
-	'5: Merely fuckable. - maybe doggy style so I don''t have to look at him.'
-	'4: Almost fuckable. - might sit on his face.'
-	'3: Unattractive. - Not even Zinaida would be seen with him.'
-	'2: Fugly. - Horribly ugly, just being seen with him would lose you social standing.'
-	'1: Hideous. - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick, not even Sonia would take his money.'
+	'10: Perfection - Would let him do whatever he wants to me.'
+	'9: Smoking Hot - Arm candy.'
+	'8: Hot - Would ride him.'
+	'7: Damn son - Bragging rights for fucking.'
+	'6: Rideable - Totally fuckable. Fuck buddy material'
+	'5: Merely fuckable. - Doggy style so I don''t have to look at him.'
+	'4: Almost fuckable - Might sit on his face.'
+	'3: Unattractive - Not even Zinaida would be seen with him.'
+	'2: Fugly - Horribly ugly. Just being seen with him would lose you social standing.'
+	'1: Hideous - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick. Not even a whore would take his money.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the site':
 		if $view_location = 'school':

+ 17 - 16
locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc

@@ -61,10 +61,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
-			'You blush. "No... no I havn''t."'
-			'He confidently continues. "Are say I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
+			'You blush. "No... no I haven''t."'
+			'He confidently continues. "Are you saying I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
 			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar smirks, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
 			'You glance around, waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 			'You laugh. "You wish... Are any of the girls dumb enough to fall for that?"'
 			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it''s a simple fact. You don''t have to hide it." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit that he has a great body. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
 			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe you''re too drunk to find the stairwell?" Lazar asks with a laugh, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
 			'You sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 			'"Looks like the loser is lost." someone comments as you approach.' 
 			'"Nah, I bet even Lesco and Petia can''t stand being around her and, honestly, who can blame them?" Lazar replies, which gets the group laughing so hard you know it''s pointless to even try and talk to him.'
 		else
-			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -123,15 +123,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
 			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. He starts talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'You approach him and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
 			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
@@ -560,25 +560,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 2:
 			if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
-				'Albina has a friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about your shared interests, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
+				'Albina has a friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about the sports you enjoy and which of the jocks have caught your attention lately, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
 			elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 				'Albina scoffs at you. "I don''t like you, I barely tolerate you being in the same social group as me, so why would I want to talk to you?" You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
 			else
 				'Albina sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 3:
-			if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
+			if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
+				'"You know you remind me of a character from LOL?" you tell her and she looks at you in confusion.'
+				'"League of Legends? The online strategy game?" you continue and she looks even more confused.'
+				'Before you can explain, she puts a finger against your lips and shushes you. "I don''t play any of that dumb geeky shit, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I only play fighting games like Tekken and Mortal Kombat. It helps me relax when people are... annoying me."'
+				'Catching her drift, you change the subject to something you think she''ll be more interested in.'
+			elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 				'Albina rolls her eyes and crosses her arms. "This isn''t your stop, <<$pcs_firstname>>. The train to Geeksville terminates over there." She motions towards the door to the classroom that the nerds hang out in. "So get back on board and piss off!"'
 			else
 				'Albina sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 4:
-			if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-				'Albina recoils back from you with a look of utter contempt on her face. "What the hell do <i>you</i> want? Go find the other knuckle brained morons. The zoo is over there." She motions towards the stairway that the gopniks usually hang out in before returning to her phone and ignoring you.'
-			else
-				'Albina stares at you, seemingly in confusion. "Uhh, can I help you?"
-				"I just wanted to talk is all," you reply and she sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. It''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with a conversation she doesn''t actually care about.'
-			end
+			'Albina glares at you with a look of utter contempt on her face. "What the hell do you want? Go find the other knuckle brained morons. The zoo is over there." She motions towards the stairway that the gopniks usually hang out in before returning to her phone and ignoring you.'
+			'"Fucking stuck up rich bitch..." you mutter as you walk away, but she doesn''t hear you.'
 		else
 			'Albina is on her phone as you approach. She looks up at you before returning her attention to her phone and ignoring you. After a few seconds, she looks up at you again and stares in confusion. "What do you want loser?" She then laughs. "Wait, you want to talk to <i>me</i>? As if that will ever happen! Fuck off and go hang out with the other losers where you belong." She shoos you away with a motion of her hand before going back to her phone.'
 		end

+ 104 - 110
locations/gschool_lessons1.qsrc

@@ -7,9 +7,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 	intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one. Mr. Yenotin enters the classroom, and just as he is about to close the door, one of your classmates grabs the door from outside the room. Mr. Yenotin turns to the tardy student and informs them that they are late and that next time he will have to report them. This instruction is followed by an awkward wink and the student is allowed in to find a seat.  All the students know that he never reports the tardy students. As everyone settles in, Mr. Yenotin does a roll call and then opens a grammar book, telling you to open your textbooks to where you left off last lesson.'
-	*nl
-	'After a while, he tells the class to do the assignments on the last page of the chapter. He starts walking up and down the classroom, mostly talking to the students about off topic things like how their time off was often disrupting them from thier focus. He''s always trying to impress the students with his endeavors, but no one really believes what he says because most of it sounds exaggerated or simply not possible. When someone has a real question he''s quick to answer as fair as possible without being arrogant, no matter what kind of question it is.'
+	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one before Mr. Yenotin enters the classroom. Just as he''s about to close the door, one of your classmates grabs the door from outside the room. Mr. Yenotin turns to the tardy student and informs them that they are late and that next time he will have to report them. This instruction is followed by an awkward wink and the student is allowed in to find a seat. Everyone knows that he never reports the tardy students. As everyone settles in, Mr. Yenotin does a roll call before opening a grammar book, telling you to open your textbooks to where you left off last lesson.'
+	'After a while, he tells the class to do the assignments on the last page of the chapter as he starts walking up and down the classroom, mostly talking to the students about off topic things like how their time off was often disrupting them from their focus. He''s always trying to impress the students with his endeavors, but no one really believes what he says because most of it sounds exaggerated or simply not possible. When someone has a real question he''s quick to answer as fair as possible without being arrogant, no matter what kind of question it is.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -42,10 +41,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mr. Yenotin''s lecture has brought the whole class to inattention, most of your classmates are paying more attention to the clock than to the lesson.'
-		'All of a sudden you hear a loud bang, making the whole class jump up from their chairs.'
-		'Like a well trained unit, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Lesco on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Lesco struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
-		'Mr. Yenotin approaches Lesco, you''re certain he''ll get a scolding, but to your dismay Mr. Yenotin starts joking with Lesco instead. He shares an embarrassing story about how the same thing happened to him once, except there were no phones in his time. No one is buying his story and instead are focusing their attention on the gopniks. They''re laughing loudly, wondering what Lesco was doing when he fell.'
+		'Mr. Yenotin''s lecture has brought the whole class to inattention. Most of your classmates are paying more attention to the clock than to the lesson when you suddenly hear a loud bang, making the whole class jump up from their chairs.'
+		'Like a well trained unit, everyone in the room turns to see Lesco on the floor, his desk overturned as his cellphone slides across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Lesco struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
+		'Mr. Yenotin approaches Lesco and you''re certain he''ll get a scolding, but to your dismay Mr. Yenotin starts joking with Lesco instead. He shares an embarrassing story about how the same thing happened to him once, except there were no phones in his time. No one is buying his story and are instead focusing their attention on the gopniks. They''re laughing loudly, wondering what Lesco was doing when he fell.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 		
 		act 'Draw dick in margin':
@@ -57,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Svyatoslav(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Svyatoslav(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -66,11 +64,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Svyatoslav glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you when Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Svyatoslav glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you when Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Svyatoslav (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Svyatoslav (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -84,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to the class. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to the class. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -103,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk.  You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to the class. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk.  You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to the class. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -120,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while still sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of the rest either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'While Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while still sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -137,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you turn to face the class like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you turn to face the class like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -182,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -207,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -231,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -243,14 +241,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		act 'Tease Svyatoslav':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits, threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Svyatoslav glances around, then leans over a bit to say. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Sonia, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits, threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Svyatoslav glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Sonia, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Sonia''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -258,24 +256,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Sonia had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Sonia had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden sharply from the excitement. Svyatoslav stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden sharply from the excitement as Svyatoslav stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for the lesson to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				end
@@ -285,14 +283,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties to Svyatoslav, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little to show off a glimpse of your panties to Svyatoslav, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 							end
 						else
@@ -303,18 +301,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 							npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up so your panties are exposed and Svyatoslav grins wide. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up so your panties are exposed and Svyatoslav grins wide. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just as you are about to cover up, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, give me a peek at that pussy." Svyatoslav whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just as you''re about to cover up, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, give me a peek at that pussy..." he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few moments, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few moments, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 									end
 								else
@@ -327,11 +325,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Then let go and I will show you." you say with a sly smile. He pauses for a moment, but then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
+									'"Then let go and I''ll show you..." you say with a sly smile. He pauses for a second, but then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. You find the remainder of class to be a little less boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. You find the remainder of the class to be a little less boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 									end
 								end
@@ -347,11 +345,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are mostly facing him as you sit in your seat sideways and quickly pull up your skirt, flashing your pan'
+						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re facing him as you sit in your seat sideways and quickly pull up your skirt, exposing your pussy.'
 						act 'Put your pussy away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-							'After a couple of moments you pull your panties back in place, close your legs, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crest fallen obviously hoping for it to last longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your top. This of course keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+							'After a few seconds, you pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of the class from being boring.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					end
@@ -370,9 +368,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so you decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
-					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending down to pick them up, you realize some of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -387,7 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lesson is dragging on and you find yourself drifting off constantly. All of a sudden you hear Mr. Yenotin clapping and without any hesitation, you also begin clapping. It doesn''t take long time before you realize that you''re the only one clapping. You feel your cheeks getting warm as you start blushing.'
+			'Today''s lesson is dragging on and you find yourself drifting off constantly. You suddenly hear Mr. Yenotin clapping and without any hesitation, you also begin clapping. It doesn''t take long for you to realize that you''re the only one clapping and you feel your cheeks getting warm as you start blushing.'
 			'"Welcome back Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Now, please pay attention. You don''t want to miss today''s topic since it''s going to be on the exam."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -419,7 +417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 							grupvalue[3] -=1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 							'"It''s not like I''m the one interrupting the lesson. That would be you." you answer brashly, feeling pretty confident.'
-							'Mr. Yenotin walks back to the front of the class, but your smug smile drops when he opens the door. "OK <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''ve had your fun. Now get to the principal''s office!"'
+							'Mr. Yenotin walks back to the front of the class, but your smug smile drops when he opens the door. "Okay <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''ve had your fun. Now get to the principal''s office!"'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -447,8 +445,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		elseif daydream = 3:
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr. Yenotin is talking about the history of the Russian language and it''s dragging on. You nod off from time to time and you''re having a hard time keeping awake.'
-			'All of a sudden, you find yourself in the Middle Ages walking around in a castle. You''re look around and see soldiers, clergymen and farmers going about their lives. In one corner, you see a girl your age waving you over to her. You happily run over, but just as you''re about to reach her, a clergyman stops you and speaks to you in a language you can''t seem to understand.'
+			'Mr. Yenotin is talking about the history of the Russian language and it''s dragging on. You nod off from time to time and you''re having a hard time staying awake.'
+			'All of a sudden, you find yourself in the Middle Ages walking around in a castle. You look around and see soldiers, clergymen and farmers going about their lives. In one corner, you see a girl your age waving you over to her. You happily run over, but just as you''re about to reach her, a clergyman stops you and speaks to you in a language you can''t seem to understand.'
 			'You''re panicking and try to answer back, but he doesn''t seem to understand you and is getting more and more agitated as time goes on. By now, there''s quite a crowd gathered that are listening to what the clergyman is saying. He''s pointing at you and talking angrily. Two soldiers appear through the crowd of people and the man starts explaining something. They turn to you, once again speaking in the strange language.'
 			*nl
 			'You look at them with a pleading look, trying to tell them that you don''t belong here, but they grab you by the arms and forcefully drag you away while you scream. They carry you over to a pillory and strip you of all your clothes before they lock you in.'
@@ -463,11 +461,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			'"I''m sorry Mr. Yenotin, I''ll be quiet." you reply, but it''s too late. Mr. Yenotin is insisting that you walk up to the chalkboard and carry on with the lesson instead. You''re now standing in front of the class, blushing as he sits down in your seat.'
 			*nl
 			'"Well? We''re waiting. Tell us all about grammar." he pushes on. You take a deep breath, but as you''re about to speak, your voice cracks and the whole class starts laughing.'
-			'You are wondering what to do when the bell suddenly rings, startling you awake from your nightmare.'
+			'You''re wondering what to do when the bell suddenly rings, startling you awake from your nightmare.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
@@ -502,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						grupvalue[3] += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takephone.jpg"></center>'
 						'You decide it''s not worth it and silently hand your phone over to him.'
-						'He walks back to the front of the class and tosses your phone in a drawer in his desk. "You can have it back after class <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
+						'He walks back to the front of the class and tosses your phone in a drawer in his desk. "You can have it back after class, <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -565,7 +563,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/geography/geography.jpg"></center>'
 	openpage = rand(1,250)
 	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Sokoloff sitting by her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one under her watchful eye. Some of them get a friendly smile while others get a stern look.'
-	*nl
 	'Without wasting any time, she sternly tells the class to open their textbooks. "I hope you have all done your homework." Mrs. Sokoloff is a no nonsense teacher. She expects discipline and hard work and the ones able to abide by her rules are treated very kindly.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
@@ -599,8 +596,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of class.'
-		'That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of class. That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
 		'Without any hesitation, Mrs. Sokoloff starts shouting at Vitek, who is fast asleep. Her eyes sharpen as she approaches his desk. She slams her hand on his desk while Vitek struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return to his senses.'
 		'Mrs. Sokoloff scowls at him, and is about to offer a few stern words when the bell rings. He''ll likely get a talking to, but as class is over, you won''t get to listen in. One of the girls whispers that Vitek is in deep trouble now.'
 		
@@ -615,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -624,11 +620,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 			
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -642,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -661,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -678,7 +674,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up. '
+					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -695,7 +691,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -707,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -739,7 +735,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -764,7 +760,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				else
@@ -801,13 +797,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
 			'You get Vitek''s attention by smiling at him when he looks your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Vitek glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Stasya, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'Vitek glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Stasya, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Stasya''s suggestion.':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Stasya leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Stasya leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -815,24 +811,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Vitek frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Stasya had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Vitek frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Stasya had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden from the excitement. Vitek stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden from the excitement as Vitek stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Stasya to giggle and Vitek to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they missed something. You ignore their looks, Vitek''s stare and Stasya''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Stasya to giggle and Vitek to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they missed something. You ignore their looks, Vitek''s stare and Stasya''s giggles and wait for the lesson to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				end
@@ -843,14 +839,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Vitek so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little to Vitek, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Vitek so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Vitek, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 							end
 						else
@@ -861,18 +857,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 							npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. Vitek grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. Vitek grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Vitek whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 									end
 								else
@@ -885,11 +881,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vitek and anyone else who happens to look your way. You can see the bulge growing in Vitek''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses for second, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vitek and anyone else who happens to look your way. You can see the bulge growing in Vitek''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Vitek looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class.  The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal.  The evidence is currently soaking your panties and poking through your top. The remainder of class is a little less boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Vitek looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. The remainder of class is a little less boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 									end
 								end
@@ -911,9 +907,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending down to pick them up, you realize some of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1092,7 +1088,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 	openpage = rand(1,250)
 	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Sokoloff sitting by her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one under her watchful eye. Some of the students get a friendly smile while others get a stern look.'
-	*nl
 	'Without wasting time, she sternly tells the class to open their textbooks. "I hope you all have done your homework." Mrs. Sokoloff is a no nonsense teacher. She expects discipline and hard work and the ones able to abide by her rules are treated very kindly.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
@@ -1126,8 +1121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of the class.'
-		'That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of the class. That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
 		'Without any hesitation, Mrs. Sokoloff starts shouting at Radomir, who''s fast asleep. Her eyes sharpen as she approaches his desk. She slams her hand on his desk while Radomir struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return to his senses.'
 		'Mrs. Sokoloff scowls at him, and is about to offer a few stern words when the bell rings. He''ll likely get a talking to, but as class is over, you won''t get to listen in. One of the girls whipsers that Radomir is in deep trouble now.'
 		
@@ -1142,7 +1136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1151,11 +1145,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1169,7 +1163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1188,7 +1182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1205,7 +1199,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the students either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the students either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1222,19 +1216,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but instead you pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Get up and flash panties (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		end
-			
+		
 		act 'Take selfie':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -1327,14 +1321,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		act 'Tease Roman':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Roman''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Roman glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Lera, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Roman''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Roman glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Lera, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Lera''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Lera leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Lera leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1342,24 +1336,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Roman frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Lera had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Roman frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Lera had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Roman stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Roman stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Lera to giggle and Roman to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they just missed something. You ignore their looks, Roman''s stare and Lera''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Lera to giggle and Roman to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they just missed something. You ignore their looks, Roman''s stare and Lera''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1370,14 +1364,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Roman so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Roman so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1388,18 +1382,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 							npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Roman, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Roman, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Roman whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 									end
 								else
@@ -1412,11 +1406,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Roman looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal.  The evidence is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Roman looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 									end
 								end
@@ -1439,8 +1433,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1495,7 +1489,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about since you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mrs. Sokoloff call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mrs. Sokoloff scolds you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mrs. Sokoloff scolds you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
@@ -1505,7 +1499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. Mrs. Sokoloff is droning on about the Tsar''s family and their life.'
 			'You close your eyes as you fantasize about living at that time as a noble. You''re in a large room in your underwear while an entourage of women and girls run around presenting a number of dresses for you to wear to the party.'
 			'You''re having a hard time picking out a specific dress as you really want to impress a certain duke. You turn to your head maiden with a dejected sigh. "So many choices, what should I wear?"'
-			'"The lady will look fabulous in whatever she chooses." the head maiden answers.'
+			'"The lady will look fabulous in whatever she chooses," the head maiden answers.'
 			'As you''re about to pick out a dress, you suddenly jolt awake while blurting out your choice. The person sitting closest to you looks at you confused, but luckily no one else hears what you said.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
@@ -1513,12 +1507,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. Mrs. Sokoloff is talking about a grand female leader from the Middle Ages. You''re finding her story pretty boring and keep dozing off.'
 			'All of a sudden, you find yourself on a battlefield riding a horse. You seem to be wearing a heavy suit of armor and you''re riding up and down a flank as you''re trying to amass the troops for an attack.'
-			'You are just about to give a grandiose speech when everything goes quiet as you hear church bells ringing loudly in the distance.'
+			'You''re just about to give a grandiose speech when everything goes quiet as you hear church bells ringing loudly in the distance.'
 			'You twitch in your seat upon hearing the class bell ringing.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'

+ 116 - 117
locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,1)
 				intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
-				if grupTipe=3:
+				if grupTipe= 3:
 					'Mr. Ivanov nods approvingly. He happily spends some extra time explaining the topic again to you, and answers any extra questions you might have. You feel like you learned a lot, thoroughly understanding today''s lessons now.'
 				else
 					'Mr. Ivanov audibly sighs. "Why are you unable to grasp this? I know you''re not the smartest student, but this is really very simple. Even a small child should be able to grasp it." He goes on to explain the part you asked about again, but he does so in a completely belittling manner.'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -70,12 +70,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-				'Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+				'Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone in looking. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone in looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the others students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem just stares with his mouth wide open, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the others students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem just stares with his mouth wide open, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -251,14 +251,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Tease Vasily':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Vasily''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have for breasts. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Vasily glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Sonia who watched it all gets your attention.'
+			'You get Vasily''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Vasily glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Sonia, who watched it all gets your attention.'
 			act 'Sonia''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -272,17 +272,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Vasily stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Vasily stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Vasily to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Vasily''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Vasily to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Vasily''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 					end
 				end
@@ -292,14 +292,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Vasily so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties to Vasily, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Vasily so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Vasily, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 							end
 						else
@@ -310,18 +310,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Vasily whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 									end
 								else
@@ -334,11 +334,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell himw ith a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Vasily looks crest fallen obviously hoping for it to last longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class but the thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of class again. Vasily looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class but the thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 									end
 								end
@@ -359,9 +359,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.  At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.'  
-					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.'  
+					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -370,13 +370,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'Today''s lessons doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice Mr. Ivanov has stopped talking and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. This is apparently the third time he has asked; you missed the first two while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you.'
-			if grupTipe=3:
+			if grupTipe= 3:
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam."'
 			else
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, if you don''t want to listen and learn, then I suggest you stop coming to class. Now stop wasting my time and pay attention!"'
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				'You roll your eyes at him when he turns his back and sit through the rest of the lesson in silence. Despite your best efforts, you struggle to pay attention and don''t learn anything.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
-			act'Try to focus on the lesson':
+			act 'Try to focus on the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'grades', 'class_activity_attributes', 'school', 'comp', pcs_intel
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,2)
 				intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-				'You don''t want to get in trouble so you straighten up in your chair. "Sorry." Mr. Ivanov gives you one final look and then goes back to teaching the class, you do your best to pay attention for the rest of class.'
+				'You don''t want to get in trouble so you straighten up in your chair and apologize. Mr. Ivanov gives you one final look before he goes back to teaching the class as you do your best to pay attention.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[4] += 1
 					grupvalue[3] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Oh please do continue your super fascinating lesson. I don''t think there''s enough condescending arrogance in your voice though." you answer boldly.'
+					'"Oh please do continue your super fascinating lesson. I don''t think there''s enough condescending arrogance in your voice though," you answer boldly.'
 					'Some of your classmates burst into loud laughter while others are stunned into silence. Mr. Ivanov turns and gives the rest of class a hard look. "SILENCE!" he loudly booms before turning back to you.'
 					'"You think you''re being funny Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Well you''re taking your smart mouth to the principal right now."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			    'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 			    'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Ivanov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 			    *nl
-		        'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Ivanov tells you the correct answer. "Pathetic. I honestly wonder why you even bother coming to school at all if you can''t answer such a simple question. You''ll be flipping burgers after you graduate." he says in disgust.'
+		        'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Ivanov tells you the correct answer. "Pathetic. I honestly wonder why you even bother coming to school at all if you can''t answer such a simple question. You''ll be flipping burgers after you graduate." he says in disgust.'
 			    'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
@@ -537,11 +537,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'When Mr. Ivanov arrives at your desk, he sternly asks "I''m not going to ask twice <<$pcs_lastname>>. Hand it over!"'
 							'You give him a sly smile as you hand over your phone with the last picture you took still on the screen.'
 							if grupTipe = 3:
-								'He looks at the screen and shakes his head before stuffing your phone in his pocket. "You are better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." he says before returning to the front of the class and continuing his lesson.'
+								'He looks at the screen and shakes his head before stuffing your phone in his pocket. "You''re better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." he says before returning to the front of the class and continuing his lesson.'
 							else
-								'He looks at the screen and doesn''t react at first. He walks back to the front of the class, looks at the image a final time then puts the phone in his desk while shaking his head.'+iif(npc_rel['A69'] >+50, ' "You are better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." He then continues his lesson.', ' "I expected nothing less from you <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." He then continues his lesson.')
-!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I am commenting it out for now because I need to write the after school scene first.
-!!'He adds to you "Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
+								'He looks at the screen and doesn''t react at first. He walks back to the front of the class, looks at the image a final time then puts the phone in his desk while shaking his head.'+iif(npc_rel['A69'] >+50, ' "You''re better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." He then continues his lesson.', ' "I expected nothing less from you <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." He then continues his lesson.')
+								!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I''m commenting it out for now because I need to write the after school scene first.
+								!! if grupTipe ! 3:
+								!!'"Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
 							end
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 						end
@@ -560,8 +561,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'You deftly shove the phone in your bra, and smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on your teacher''s face.'
 							'You pretend it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, and use your cute voice as you tell him, "Is there a problem, Mr. Ivanov? Go ahead, take my phone if it''s not allowed." You thrust your chest forward and the outline of your phone is visible through the fabric.'
 							'Realizing he can''t retrieve your phone without causing any awkward situations, he returns to the front of the class in defeat. "I expected nothing less from you Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." You pull your phone back out as he resumes his lesson, looking somewhat annoyed.'
-!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I am commenting it out for now because I need to write the afterschool scene first.
-!!'He adds to you "Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					elseif $braworntype ! 'none' and will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
@@ -632,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A5'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -641,11 +640,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -659,7 +658,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -678,7 +677,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -695,7 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -712,7 +711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -724,7 +723,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you  decided now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -756,7 +755,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -781,7 +780,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 					end
 				else
@@ -804,7 +803,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -824,9 +823,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.  At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.'  
-					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.'  
+					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -835,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,6)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -874,8 +873,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone.'
-							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she is going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
+							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone."'
+							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she''s going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					else
@@ -899,7 +898,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
@@ -1011,7 +1010,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 	chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classmusic.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great music is while you wait for class to start. You do have to commend the fact that he is always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
+	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great music is while you wait for class to start. He''s always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -1028,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/attention.jpg"></center>'
-			'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of music and famous artist.'
+			'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of music and famous artists.'
 			act 'Ask a question about the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
 				instrmusic_exp += rand(0,1)
@@ -1061,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A6'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1070,11 +1069,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1088,7 +1087,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1107,7 +1106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1124,7 +1123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1141,7 +1140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1153,7 +1152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -1185,7 +1184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1210,7 +1209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1234,7 +1233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1246,14 +1245,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		act 'Tease Lavrenti':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Lavrenti''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have for breasts. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Lavrenti glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Katja, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Lavrenti''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Lavrenti glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Katja, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Katja''s suggestion.':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Katja leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Katja leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1261,24 +1260,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Katja had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Katja had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Lavrenti stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Lavrenti stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Katja to giggle and Lavrenti to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Lavrenti''s stare and Katja''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Katja to giggle and Lavrenti to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Lavrenti''s stare and Katja''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1289,14 +1288,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Lavrenti so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little to Lavrenti, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Lavrenti so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Lavrenti, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1307,18 +1306,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 							npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Lavrenti. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Lavrenti. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me your pussy." Lavrenti whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me your pussy," he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 									end
 								else
@@ -1331,11 +1330,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
+									'Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Lavrenti looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Lavrenti looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 									end
 								end
@@ -1358,8 +1357,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1368,7 +1367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -1410,8 +1409,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone." you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
-							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands, pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
+							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone!" you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
+							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands while pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1434,7 +1433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Vasilyev call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
@@ -1445,7 +1444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take out your phone and begin to play a game, hoping the boring lesson will be over soon.'
@@ -1585,7 +1584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Lesco (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Lesco (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A5'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1594,11 +1593,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Lesco glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who continues to stare at you with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Lesco glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who continues to stare at you with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Lesco (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Lesco (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1612,7 +1611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your naked ass while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your naked ass while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1631,7 +1630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at you while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at you while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1648,7 +1647,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1665,7 +1664,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1676,7 +1675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		act 'Take selfie':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				i = rand(1,classroom_clotot)
@@ -1698,7 +1697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					i = rand(1,classroom_titflash)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1718,7 +1717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 						i = rand(1,classroom_pussyflash)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1742,7 +1741,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1763,8 +1762,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1773,7 +1772,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -1811,8 +1810,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone.'
-							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she is going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
+							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone!"'
+							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she''s going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1836,7 +1835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
@@ -1853,7 +1852,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take out your phone and begin to play a game, hoping the boring lesson will be over soon.'
@@ -1949,7 +1948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'arina_dream':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/arina/sex/dream/dream1.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you walk up to her desk, you notice the lighting is reddish and there is a Saint Andrew''s cross in front of the chalkboard, with a variety of sex toys scattered across her desk. She takes a seat on the edge of her desk. "Get down on your knees and lick my shoes clean."'
 	'"What?" You ask, shocked at her request.'
-	'"Lick my shoes clean or your punishment will be even worse." she sternly tells you. You can''t help yourself and so pick up her foot and start licking her shoes.'
+	'"Lick my shoes clean or your punishment will be even worse!" she sternly tells you. You can''t help yourself and so pick up her foot and start licking her shoes.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'BDSM', 3, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Further punishment':

+ 113 - 116
locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/classlit.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I want everyone quiet and in a seat!" Ms. Braakman demands as she finishes writing today''s lesson plan on the chalkboard. The room lets out a collective groan as they see the mountain of work they have to do today.'
-	'"She''s always piling on the work and expects everyone to have it finished by the end of class." you overhear a girl complain with a heavy sigh.'
-	'Clearing her throat, Ms. Braakman raises her voice to speak over the noise "The sooner everyone takes out their textbooks, the quicker we can get started. Who knows, maybe we''ll finish early and you''ll have some free time." Hearing this, the room settles down and soon the lesson begins.'
+	'"She''s always piling on the work and expects everyone to have it finished by the end of class!" you overhear a girl complain with a heavy sigh.'
+	'Clearing her throat, Ms. Braakman raises her voice to speak over the noise. "The sooner everyone takes out their textbooks, the quicker we can get started. Who knows, maybe we''ll finish early and you''ll have some free time." Hearing this, the room settles down and the lesson begins.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -38,19 +38,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				elseif $boy = 'A140':
 					'Upon being called on, Lizaveta quickly hides her phone under her desk, an innocent smile gracing her face as Ms. Braakman glares at her. "Uh... what page are we on?" she asks with a nervous chuckle. There''s a few scattered laughs, but Ms. Braakman quickly silences the room. A nearby girl points out the right page number and paragraph, and with a smile Lizaveta starts reading as if nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A156':
-					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms. Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation with the gopnik since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms. Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, the gopnik closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
+					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms. Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms. Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, Arkadi closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A157':
-					'Roman scoffs. "Fuck that." he says nonchalantly. You can feel the tension growing as Ms. Braakman narrows her eyes and tells him again to read, only to be met with a taunting smile and silent defiance from the gopnik. After what feels like an eternity, Ms. Braakman chooses a different student and continues on with the lesson like nothing ever happened.'
+					'Roman scoffs. "Fuck that," he says nonchalantly. You can feel the tension growing as Ms. Braakman narrows her eyes and tells him again to read, only to be met with a taunting smile and silent defiance from the gopnik. After what feels like an eternity, Ms. Braakman chooses a different student and continues with the lesson like nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A144':
-					'Anushka throws her head back and sighs dramatically. "The quicker you read, the sooner this will be over." Ms. Braakman insists. Hearing this, Anushka straightens up and starts to read, taking Ms. Braakman''s comment literally and speaking so fast that you can barely understand her.'
+					'Anushka throws her head back and sighs dramatically. "The quicker you read, the sooner this will be over," Ms. Braakman insists. Hearing this, Anushka straightens up and starts to read, taking Ms. Braakman''s comment literally and speaking so fast that you can barely understand her.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A6':
-					'Pekta obediently reads the passage and does so without any mistakes. "It''s always a pleasure to hear you read. If only your fellow students took their studies as seriously as you." Ms. Braakman compliments. Petka smiles slightly, but you can tell that he doesn''t like being openly complimented by the teacher, especially when students start to groan and call him a teacher''s pet.'
+					'Pekta obediently reads the passage and does so without any mistakes. "It''s always a pleasure to hear you read. If only your fellow students took their studies as seriously as you." Ms. Braakman compliments. Petka smiles slightly, but you can tell that he doesn''t like being openly complimented by the teacher, especially when the others giggle and call him a teacher''s pet.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A152':
-					'You watch Feofan frantically hide the comic book he was secretly reading before trying to find the right passage to read. "Save the cartoons for after class." Ms. Braakman warns him. Feofan starts to correct her, but the laughter from the other students silences him.'
+					'You watch Feofan frantically hide the comic book he was secretly reading before trying to find the right passage. "Save the cartoons for after class, Mr. Krupin," Ms. Braakman warns him. Feofan starts to correct her, but the laughter from the other students silences him.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A159':
-					'"Can''t you pick someone else?" Petia asks, slumping back into his seat. "I don''t even know what page we''re on." He garners a few laughs, but Ms. Braakman is quick to reprimand him, reminding him that if he keeps this up he''ll end up in detention and fail her class.'
+					'"Can''t you pick someone else?" Petia asks, slumping back into his seat. "I don''t even know what page we''re on!" He garners a few laughs, but Ms. Braakman is quick to reprimand him, reminding him that if he keeps this up he''ll end up in detention and fail her class.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A145':
-					'You look over to see Ekaterina has her head down, presumably asleep. Ms. Braakman asks her again, but the gopnik doesn''t respond. "We can always continue the lesson during detention." she threatens. After a moment, Ekaterina slowly sits up and lazily stretches before asking a nearby student for the page number and reading as instructed.'
+					'You look over and notice that Ekaterina has her head down, presumably asleep. Ms. Braakman asks her again, but the gopnik doesn''t respond. "We can always continue the lesson during detention..." she threatens. After a few seconds, Ekaterina slowly sits up and lazily stretches before asking a nearby student for the page number and reading as instructed.'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -68,15 +68,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 			*nl
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>!!"'
 			*nl
-			'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality just in time to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
-			'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention." she warns while pointing to the door.'
+			'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
+			'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention," she warns while pointing to the door.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				grupvalue[1] -=1
 				grupvalue[4] -=1
 				grupvalue[3] +=1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big137.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
+				'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman..." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -90,15 +90,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 					grupvalue[4] +=1
 					grupvalue[3] -=1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/eyeroll.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily, "I can''t help it. You just keep talking and talking." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
+					'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it. You just keep talking and talking..." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
 					'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Anushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
 					'Ms. Braakman''s face turns red and her expression darkens, a mixture of rage and embarrassment. "Get out of my class and report to the principal''s office right now!" she barks.'
 					act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 						*clr & cla
 						demerit +=5
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/smirk.mp4"></video></center>'
-						*nl
-						'"Fine by me." you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class, where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
+						'"Fine by me," you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class, where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
 						act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 					end
 				end
@@ -117,16 +116,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'As Ms. Braakman continues talking, you find yourself unable to stay awake. You''re just on the edge of falling completely asleep when you''re snapped back to reality by the teacher calling your name. "Well? What''s the answer?" she asks with a smug smile.'
 				'You didn''t catch what the question was, so you take a quick look around the room and piece together an answer you hope is right. Unfortunately, you answer incorrectly, which Ms. Braakman is happy to point out to the entire class.'
-				'"A perfect example of how to fail my class." she smirks as the others begin to laugh at you.'
+				'"A perfect example of how to fail my class," she smirks as the others begin to laugh at you.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'literature'
 		elseif daydream = 3 and npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anush_sex >= 15 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
+			'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eye for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
+				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -143,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You shake your head and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops paying attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
-								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
+								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'literature'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -165,11 +164,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 		else
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'You fell asleep and the end of class bell wakes you up. You slowly get up and stretch before heading to your next class.'
+			'You fell asleep and the bell wakes you up. You slowly get up and stretch before heading to your next class.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
@@ -223,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 								'With a mischievous smile, you deftly slide your phone under your skirt and spread your legs to take a picture of your bare pussy. Ms. Braakman stops in front of your desk, her hands on her hips as she stares daggers at you.'
 								'"Hand it over." she orders, one of her hands now held out in front of you. You obediently hand over your phone to her without argument. When she sees the screen is still on, she smiles smugly. "You were texting, weren''t you? Of course you were, that''s all you kids do these days. Well, I''m sure you wouldn''t mind if I shared with the class what you were--"'
-								'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen for a long moment. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
+								'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
 								'"I don''t want to see you doing such things in my class again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! You can have this back after class." She says sharply, but the way she licks her lips afterwards speaks of something else. Without another word, she turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class to resume the lesson.'
 							end
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
@@ -245,7 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 							'"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Your teacher''s eyes darken dangerously, and you start to think you''ve won this fight, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
 							'"You think you''re clever, don''t you?" she whispers, her voice low so only you can hear. You try to respond, but your words get caught in your throat as she starts to tease one of your nipples between her fingertips. Suddenly, she''s no longer searching but groping, her skillful fingers carefully moving between each breast until both of your sensitive buds are hard and straining almost uncomfortably against your bra. You can''t help but shift slightly in your seat as you feel a tightening sensation in your lower belly and an aching throb between your legs.'
 							*nl
-							'"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl." Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she removes her hand and with it your phone. "You can get this back after class."'
+							'"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl!" Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she fishes your phone out and removes her hand from your shirt. "You can get this back after class."'
 							'Flustered and aroused, you regain your senses and remember that you''re sitting in class right now. You look around the room, but it seems like her groping went unnoticed and was seen as her fishing out your phone like you challenged her to do.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 						end
@@ -273,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
 		if lit_late_counter > 15:
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you with a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Obviously, you''re not listening to me, so maybe the principal can help you understand good timekeeping. Get to her office now young lady!" she says as she points to the door behind you.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you with a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Obviously, you''re not listening to me, so maybe the principal can help you understand good timekeeping. Get to her office now young lady!" she says as she points to the door behind you.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -290,12 +289,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 			end
 			act 'Do as she says':
 				*clr & cla
-				 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
-				 'Knowing she will force you to go anyway, you choose to avoid embarrassing yourself again and avert her fiery gaze as you begrudingly turn and leave the room. The door slams behind you once you step out.' 
-				 gs 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
+				'Knowing she''ll force you to go anyway, you choose to avoid embarrassing yourself again and avert her fiery gaze as you begrudingly turn and leave the room. The door slams behind you once you step out.' 
+				gs 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 		elseif lit_late_counter > 10:
-			'When you open the door and walk in Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You obviously haven''t learned your lesson. Come here now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You obviously haven''t learned your lesson. Come here now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -304,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 					demerit += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/sleeppun2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head and then take your seat at your desk instead. Her eyes flicker with fury when you disobey her and she walks over and twists your ear. "You will learn your place in my classrom <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now get out and go to the principal!" she yells while pointing at the door.'
+					'You shake your head and take your seat at your desk instead. Her eyes flicker with fury when you disobey her and she walks over and twists your ear. "You will learn your place in my classroom <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now get out and go to the principal!" she yells while pointing at the door.'
 					act 'Go to principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
@@ -312,13 +311,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 			end
 			act 'Do as she says':
 				*clr & cla
-				 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
-				 'You walk up and she drags a desk and chair to her desk so they are facing the class. "Sit." she orders while tapping the desk. You sheepishly sit down and your classmates start snickering at you. "Since you can never be on time and keep rudely interrupting my class, you will now experience the full power of my wrath."'
-				 '"From now on, every time you are even one minute late to my class, you will sit right here in front of your classmates. Maybe their stares will convince you to be here on the double." she says smugly before resuming her lesson. You are forced to sit through the lesson while your classmates look at you with their mocking gazes.'
-				 act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
+				'You walk up and she drags a desk and chair to her desk so they are facing the class. "Sit!" she orders while tapping the desk. You sheepishly sit down and your classmates start snickering at you. "Since you can never be on time and keep rudely interrupting my class, you will now experience the full power of my wrath."'
+				'"From now on, every time you are even one minute late to my class, you will sit right here in front of your classmates. Maybe their stares will convince you to be here on the double," she says smugly before resuming her lesson. You are forced to sit through the lesson while your classmates look at you with their mocking gazes.'
+				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 				end
 		elseif lit_late_counter > 5:
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? I warned you I would not tolerate this. Now come up here right now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? I warned you I would not tolerate this. Now come up here right now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'pay'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -337,18 +336,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you walk up, she grabs a chair and puts it in front of her desk, right in front of the whole class. She motions for you to sit. "Take a seat, young <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can sit here until you apologize to the class for disrupting the lesson."'
-				'"What? This is outrageous! It''s unfair!" you protest, but Ms. Braakman isn''t interested. She again points to the seat and so you begrudingly sit down and face the stares and snickers of your classmates for several seconds. "What do you have to say?" Ms. Braakman asks. "Sorry for being late and interrupting you." you reply.'
-				'"Goood. Now get to your desk and pay attention!" she snarls. You sheepishly stand and walk to your desk as your classmates continue to snicker at you. Ms. Braakman then resumes her lesson.'
+				'"What? This is outrageous! It''s unfair!" you protest, but Ms. Braakman isn''t interested. She again points to the seat and you begrudingly sit down and face the stares and snickers of your classmates for several seconds. "What do you have to say?" Ms. Braakman asks.' 
+				'"Sorry for being late and interrupting you..." you begrudingly reply.'
+				'"Good. Now get to your desk and pay attention!" she snarls. You sheepishly stand and walk to your desk as your classmates continue to snicker at you. Ms. Braakman then resumes her lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
 		else
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will not tolerate students being late to my class." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted class.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will not tolerate students being late to my class." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted class.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				demerit += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You look down a bit. "Sorry, I was running late and time just got away from me."'
+				'You look down. "Sorry, I was running late and time just got away from me."'
 				'She shakes her head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now take your seat."'
 				act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 				demerit += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You roll your eyes a bit, but say nothing in response. She narrows her eyes at you a little and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, now take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
+				'You roll your eyes, but say nothing in response. She narrows her eyes at you and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, now take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
 				act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
 		end
@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 	agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classart.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great art is. You will give him one thing. He is always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
+	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great art is. He''s always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -408,12 +408,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		bored = rand(1,4)
 		if bored=1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr. Vasilyev has gone on one of his exhaustively long and indepth explanations about one of the art styles, how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this class was about art, not history.'
-			*nl
-			'That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
-			'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Svyatoslav on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Svyatoslav struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
-			*nl
-			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it up off the floor and starts looking at it. "Ooooh what''s this? Whose panties are these Svyatoslav?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Svyatoslav easily overpowers her, but you have to give it to her. She doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone as long as she can.'
+			'Mr. Vasilyev has gone on one of his exhaustively long and indepth explanations about one of the art styles, how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this class was about art, not history. That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+			'Everyone in the room turns to see Svyatoslav on the floor, his desk overturned as his cellphone slides across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Svyatoslav struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
+			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it off the floor and starts looking at it. "Ooooh what''s this? Whose panties are these Svyatoslav?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Svyatoslav easily overpowers her, but she doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone for as long as she can.'
 			temp = rand(0,5)
 			if temp=0:
 				'"White cotton panties by the look of it. Must be Julia''s." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Julia blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
@@ -422,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			elseif temp = 2:
 				'"Oooooh. It looks like Albina''s leopard print g-string." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Albina closing her knees together as she scratches her desk and glares at Svyatoslav with fiery eyes. He starts frantically apologizing to her as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 3:
-				'"Black and yellow ''Slippery when wet'' panties." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down as Anushka laughs. "Those are mine!" She grins at Svyatoslav, places a hand on his chest and looks him right in the eyes. "If you wanted to see, then all you had to do was ask." she says as she hikes up her skirt to show off her black and yellow panties. Mr. Vasilyev opens his jacket wide to try and block the view.'
+				'"Black and yellow ''Slippery when wet'' panties." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down as Anushka laughs. "Those are mine!" She grins at Svyatoslav, places a hand on his chest and looks him right in the eyes. "If you wanted to see, then all you had to do was ask," she says as she hikes up her skirt to show off her black and yellow panties. Mr. Vasilyev opens his jacket wide to try and block the view.'
 			elseif temp = 4:
 				'"Natasha''s rather stylish red cotton panties by the looks of it." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Natasha blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 5:
@@ -430,15 +427,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			end
 			killvar 'temp'
 			*nl
-			'Once Svyatoslav has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them. He is obviously reprimanding Svyatoslav about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Svyatoslav looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
+			'Once Svyatoslav has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them, reprimanding Svyatoslav about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Svyatoslav looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
-		elseif bored=2 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
+		elseif bored= 2 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 			''
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
+				'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eye for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -488,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash boobs at Feofan (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Feofan (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -496,11 +493,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You notice Feofan glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+					'You notice Feofan glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Flash boobs at Feofan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Feofan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end	
 			
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -513,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'butt', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -531,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -547,7 +544,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+						'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -563,7 +560,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -607,7 +604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You think that taking a selfie of your bare bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You think that taking a selfie of your bare bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -632,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You feel the excitement growing inside you at the idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You feel the excitement growing inside you at the idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					else
@@ -656,7 +653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					else
@@ -668,14 +665,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Tease Svyatoslav':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your boobs to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+				'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your breasts to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
 				'Svyatoslav glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-				'Before you can decide what to do Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+				'Before you can decide what to do, Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 				act 'Anushka''s suggestion':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-					'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+					'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 					'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -683,24 +680,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+							'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					else
 						act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
-					act 'Flash your boobs':
+					act 'Flash your breasts':
 						*clr & cla
 						npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 						gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-						'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Svyatoslav stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+						'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Svyatoslav stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 						act 'Put them away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					end
@@ -711,14 +708,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+							'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 								act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+									'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 								end
 							else
@@ -731,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Svyatoslav, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Svyatoslav, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -742,7 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 										end
 									else
@@ -755,11 +752,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 										gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
+										'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
 										act 'Put your pussy away':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+											'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 										end
 									end
@@ -780,7 +777,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles. You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize that a few people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
+						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles. You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize that a few people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -831,8 +828,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone." you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
-							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands, pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
+							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone!" you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
+							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands while pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -853,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Vasilyev call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
@@ -1001,7 +998,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
+				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1018,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You shake your head and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops paying attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
-								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
+								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1052,7 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash boobs at Fedor(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1061,12 +1058,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed breasts.' 
-					'A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+					'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts.' 
+					'A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 			
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1080,8 +1077,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1100,8 +1097,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1119,7 +1116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 						'While Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1136,8 +1133,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but your drop you skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but your drop you skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1181,7 +1178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1206,7 +1203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1230,7 +1227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1242,14 +1239,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Tease Dan':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get Dan''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your boobs to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-				'Dan glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-				'Before you can decide what to do Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+				'You get Dan''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your breasts to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+				'Dan glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+				'Before you can decide what to do, Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 				act 'Anushka''s suggestion.':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
 					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-					'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+					'You''re ataken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 					'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1257,23 +1254,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head and Dan frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+							'You shake your head and Dan frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					else
 						act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
-					act 'Flash your boobs':
+					act 'Flash your breasts':
 						*clr & cla
 						npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 						gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-						'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Dan stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+						'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Dan stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 						act 'Put them away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Dan to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they have realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Dan''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Dan to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they have realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Dan''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					end
@@ -1283,14 +1280,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 2, 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn towards Dan so you are sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+							'You turn towards Dan so you''re sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 								act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+									'You shake your head and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 								end
 							else
@@ -1301,18 +1298,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Dan, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Dan, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-									'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+									'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 									gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 									if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 										act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 										end
 									else
@@ -1324,11 +1321,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 										gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 										gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
+										'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
 										act 'Put your pussy away':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Dan looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+											'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Dan looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 										end
 									end
@@ -1350,7 +1347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-						'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize that people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
+						'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize that people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1393,12 +1390,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Do I really have to sit here and listen to you drone on and on about tools?" you answer boldly.'
 					'The whole class bursts into loud laughter and Mr. Kuznetsov has a rough time getting everyone to quieten down.'
-					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will see me after class." he says in a stern voice. Maybe you shouldn''t have mouthed off to him. He is the assistant Headmaster after all.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will see me after class!" he says in a stern voice. Maybe you shouldn''t have mouthed off to him. He is the assistant Headmaster after all.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of class':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop1.jpg"></center>'
 						'At the end of class, you walk up to Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. "You wanted to see me?"'
-						'He looks up at you for a moment before saying. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I will be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
+						'He glares up at you. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I''ll be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
 						Kuznetsov_punishment = 1
 						act 'Go to next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -1419,14 +1416,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Kuznetsov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Kuznetsov chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Kuznetsov chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 		else
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'You fell asleep and the end of class bell wakes you up.'
+			'You fell asleep and the bell wakes you up.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1483,7 +1480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 							end
 							'You decide to have some fun. You quickly slide the phone between your legs and snap some photos under your skirt.'
-							'Mr. Vasilyev arrives at your desk. "Unless you''re listening to some music, then what is more important than paying attention in my class? Hand it over."'
+							'Mr. Kuznetsov arrives at your desk. "What is more important than paying attention in my class? Hand it over."'
 							'"Wouldn''t you like to know!" you tease. You hand over your phone with the last picture you took still on the screen.'
 							'You hold in a laugh when you see the wide eyed and shocked look on his face when he sees what''s on the screen. He blushes a bright red as he hastily turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class.'
 							'He composes himself and gets ready to continue the lesson.'
@@ -1509,7 +1506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 									Kuznetsov_punishment = 1
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop1.jpg"></center>'
 									'At the end of class, you walk up to Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. "You wanted to see me?"'
-									'He looks up at you for a moment before saying "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I will be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
+									'He glares up at you. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I''ll be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
 									act 'Go to next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 								end
 							end

+ 106 - 104
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -14,14 +14,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
 	if VK = 1:
 		VKrand = rand(1,2)
-		'You sit down in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms as he begins the lesson. "Today we will be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you are looking for, especially with word problems. You will need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
+		'You sit in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms as he begins the lesson. "Today we will be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you are looking for, especially with word problems. You will need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
 		*nl
 		if VKrand = 1:
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Arkadi, who answers "They have six of course because four plus two equals six." Mr. Tsarev chuckles as he replies "Of course four plus two is six, but are those the number of BOTTLE CAPS they have? The correct answer is no. Anna has four bottle caps and Dina has two PEBBLES, not bottle caps. You need to pay better attention to the actual question." Some of the other boys begin laughing at Arkadi while some of the girls giggle.'
-		    'Mr. Tsarev continues. "Do not let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers then begins handing them out while Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
+		    'Mr. Tsarev continues. "Do not let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers and begins handing them out while Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
 		else
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Natalia, who answers "The answer is four because Anna is the only one with bottle caps. Dina only has pebbles, which might as well not be mentioned as it does not pertain to the answer needed." Mr. Tsarev tilts his head in surprise at Natalia''s answer while Christina whispers to one of the other girls. "Wow, she is really smart. Is she studying to be a teacher or something?"'
-		    'Mr. Tsarev nods his head then responds. "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to as a ''trick question''. Now I would like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I will be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
+		    'Mr. Tsarev nods his head then responds. "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to as a ''trick question''. Now I would like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I will be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		VK = rand(1,3)
@@ -34,42 +34,55 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			else
 				$mathNikoimg = 'images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg'
 			end
-			'Mr. Tsarev pauses, then turns to the door as Niko casually strolls in. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms then says "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts then says'
+			'Mr. Tsarev pauses and turns to the door as Niko casually strolls in. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts.'
 			killvar '$mathNikoimg'
 			*nl
 			if VK = 1:
-				'"I was on my way to class when this crazy old lady began shouting at me, so I asked her what is wrong. She told me that I stepped on her dress when I was nowhere near her. She created a big scene and I had to deal with that, which is why I arrived late." Mr. Tsarev sighs then shakes his head. "So an old woman screamed at you and created a big scene because you stepped on her dress which you didn''t actually step on? Do I have that right?"'
-				'Niko shrugs then continues walking toward his seat while Mr. Tsarev says "Fine, try not to anger any more old ladies, will you?" Niko uses his thumb to point to Christina as he jokingly replies "I can''t control when Christina gets angry at me." Christina recoils, obviously caught off guard and offended by his comment. She lifts up her fist then punches Niko several times in the arm before Mr. Tsarev breaks it up with a stern voice. "Hey, knock it off you two! Niko, sit down before I send you to the principal''s office!"'
-				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm, then opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks to Niko, who shakes his head. The class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out worksheets. He''s obviously not in a good mood.'
+				'"I was on my way to class when this crazy old lady began shouting at me, so I asked her what was wrong. She told me that I stepped on her dress when I was nowhere near her. She created a big scene and I had to deal with that, which is why I''m late." Mr. Tsarev sighs and shakes his head. "So an old woman screamed at you and created a big scene because you stepped on her dress, which you didn''t actually step on? Do I have that right?"'
+				'Niko shrugs and continues walking toward his seat while Mr. Tsarev says "Fine, but try not to anger any more old ladies, will you?" Niko uses his thumb to point to Christina as he jokingly replies "I can''t control when Christina gets angry at me." Christina recoils, obviously caught off guard and offended by his comment. She lifts her fist and punches Niko several times in the arm before Mr. Tsarev breaks it up with a stern voice. "Hey, knock it off you two! Niko, sit down before I send you to the principal''s office!"'
+				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm and opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks at Niko, who shakes his head, and the class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out worksheets. He''s obviously not in a good mood.'
 			elseif VK = 2:
-				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
-				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
-				'Christina then replies. "That''s why I have no interest in dating losers like you." She then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr. Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some worksheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
+				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform, so I had to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee, right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?"'
+				'"Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time," Niko replies.'
+				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway."'
+				*nl
+				'Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask."' 
+				'"I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." she whispers in a seductive tone. "Oh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply.'
+				'"That''s why I have no interest in dating losers like you!" she laughs in his face and he clenches his fist before walking to his seat.'
+				*nl
+				'"Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Mr. Tsarev interrupts and Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some worksheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
 			else
-				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm wasn''t working." Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You''re really bad at it."'
-				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out." Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry." Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working.'
-				'Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms. Niko then chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you''ve all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
+				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm wasn''t working."'
+				'Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning."' 
+				'Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something."' 
+				*nl
+				'Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?"' 
+				'Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You''re really bad at it."'
+				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me, faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out!" Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry."' 
+				*nl
+				'Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working. Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms as Niko chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you''ve all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
 			end
 		else
-			'Dimka scoffs as he says "Why would they do that? That sounds stupid to me." Mr. Tsarev responds "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
-			*nl
-			'<a href="exec:gs ''shortgs'',''img msg'',''images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big1.jpg''">Dimka</a> responds "If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk then begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
-			*nl
-			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
+			'Dimka scoffs as he says "Why would they do that? That sounds stupid to me."' 
+			'Mr. Tsarev chuckles. "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
+			'"If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk and begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
+			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer."' 
+			'"Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies and Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		VKrand = rand(1,3)
-		'You walk into the classroom and sit down at your desk just as Mr. Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what is the smallest number in existence?"'
-		*nl
+		'You walk into the classroom and sit at your desk just as Mr. Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what the smallest number in existence? is"'
 		if VKrand = 1:
-			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s dick?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
+			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva."' 
+			'"Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s dick?" she answers and Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
 		elseif VKrand = 2:
-			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible." Mr. Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
+			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible."' 
+			'Mr. Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
 		else
-			'No one raises their hand, so Mr. Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr. Tsarev shakes his head before responding. "Is infinity a number?"' 
-			'"Um I guess so... right?" Igor replies. "No it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
+			'No one raises their hand, so Mr. Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr. Tsarev shakes his head. "Is infinity a number?"' 
+			'"Um I guess so... Right?" Igor asks sheepishly.' 
+			'"No, it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
 		end
-		*nl
 		'The smallest number in existence is... nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I will be handing out some worksheet with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes." He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
 	end
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
@@ -95,7 +108,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					intel_exp += rand(1,2)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You take a second to ask a question about a part of the lesson that you don''t fully understand. Mr. Tsarev nods approvingly then says "Sure thing, we can go over the solution again and I will show you the many ways that you can find the solution to these problems." He happily spends some time explaining the topic in greater detail and answers any questions you might have, teaching you some new ways of solving many problems in the process.'
-					*nl
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
@@ -117,7 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/rest.jpg"></center>'
-				'You can feel the day dragging on so slowly, so you rest your head on the desk, trying your best to focus on anything but today''s lesson. The light occasionally creeps in between your arms, so you keep re-adjusting until it stops, causing you to feel at peace as you slumber through the lesson.'
+				'You can feel the day dragging on slowly, so you rest your head on the desk, trying your best to focus on anything but today''s lesson. The light occasionally creeps in between your arms, so you keep re-adjusting until it stops, causing you to feel at peace as you slumber through the lesson.'
 				act 'Wake up':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
@@ -130,16 +142,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few seconds, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you as you nervously ask "What?" Mr. Tsarev replies "I asked you for the answer to my question."'
+				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few seconds, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you. "I asked you for the answer to my question," Mr. Tsarev tells you.'
 				*nl
 				if (VKrand = 1 and npc_rel['A2'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 1 and grupTipe = 3):
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you faintly hear "Psst!" You look toward Artem to see him holding up a paper scrap behind his seat which has the answer written out. You confidently look toward Mr. Tsarev before telling him the correct answer, resulting in a surprised look on his face before he says "Hmm. Very good, but do try to keep your head up during class, okay?" You give him a nod before he continues his lesson.'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you faintly hear "Psst!" You look at Artem and see him holding up a paper scrap behind his seat which has the answer written out. You confidently look toward Mr. Tsarev before telling him the correct answer, resulting in a surprised look on his face before he says "Hmm. Very good, but do try to keep your head up during class, okay?" You give him a nod before he continues his lesson.'
 				elseif (VKrand = 2 and npc_rel['A12'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 2 and grupTipe = 3):
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Natalia ask Mr. Tsarev "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y" Mr. Tsarev turns to Natalia and says "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Natalia ask Mr. Tsarev "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y?" Mr. Tsarev turns to Natalia and says "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
 					'Natalia nods with a smile as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson, completely forgetting about you. Natalia turns to you with a warm smile then turns back toward Mr. Tsarev for the rest of the class.'
 				elseif VKrand = 3 and NikoLuv >= 2 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you suddenly hear Evgeny let out a yelp as his chair is pulled out from under him, causing him to fall to the ground. Mr. Tsarev recoils in shock before suddenly shouting "NIKOLAI! WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU!?" Niko and most of the class are laughing loudly as Mr. Tsarev shouts out "NIKOLAI GO TO THE PRINCIPAL''S OFFICE NOW!" Niko packs his stuff in his bag then heads toward the door, giving you a wink as he passes by.'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you suddenly hear Evgeny let out a yelp as his chair is pulled out from under him, causing him to fall to the ground. Mr. Tsarev recoils in shock before suddenly shouting "NIKOLAI! WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU!?" Niko and most of the class are laughing loudly as Mr. Tsarev shouts out "NIKOLAI GO TO THE PRINCIPAL''S OFFICE NOW!" Niko packs his stuff in his bag and heads toward the door, giving you a wink as he passes by.'
 				elseif class['school_math_grade'] >= 80:
 					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was. You pretend to clear your throat while you quickly study the equation on the board, then quickly solve the problem in your head before answering the question correctly. Mr. Tsarev gives you a satisfied nod before responding "Very good, but try and keep your head up during class, if you don''t mind."'
 				else
@@ -147,9 +159,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'					
-					'You are feeling far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few minutes, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-					'You take your best guess at what Mr. Tsarev asking. Some of your classmates snicker at your obviously wrong answer as Mr. Tsarev says "Sleeping in class huh? You are never going to get anywhere in life that way, unless you end up working as a politician."'
-					'He then cluckles to himself before saying "Just try to stay awake this time." Before continuing his lesson, he asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer. You still feel embarrassed, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the lesson.'
+					'You''re feeling far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few minutes, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
+					'You take your best guess at what Mr. Tsarev was asking and some of your classmates snicker at your obviously wrong answer as Mr. Tsarev says "Sleeping in class, huh? You''re never going to get anywhere in life that way, unless you end up working as a politician."'
+					'He then chuckles to himself before saying "Just try to stay awake this time." Before continuing his lesson, he asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer. You still feel embarrassed, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the lesson.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
@@ -157,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
-				'Today''s lesson doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice that Mr. Tsarev has paused his lesson and is giving you a stern look. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you would like to explain what I have just went over?" You give him a puzzled look while trying to figure out what to say; feeling embarrassed, not knowing what to say and having the class stare at you.'
+				'Today''s lesson doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice that Mr. Tsarev has paused his lesson and is giving you a stern look. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you would like to explain what I have just went over?" You give him a puzzled look while trying to figure out what to say. You feel embarrassed having the class stare at you.'
 			    act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'grades', 'class_activity_attributes', 'school', 'math', pcs_intel
@@ -178,7 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						grupvalue[3] -= 1
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/kickedout.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Of course. Please continue your super-fascinating lesson. Just keep it a bit upbeat please. If you talk any slower, I might fall asleep!" You answer boldly.'
+						'"Of course. Please continue your super-fascinating lesson. Just keep it a bit upbeat please. If you talk any slower, I might fall asleep!" you answer boldly.'
 						'The whole class bursts into laughter and Mr. Tsarev has a rough time getting everyone to quiet down. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, do you find this kind of behavior amusing? Or are you just seeking attention? Try to answer this question for yourself while you head to the principal''s office." He then points to the door.'
                         gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -191,8 +203,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 								grupvalue[3] -= 2
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-								'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your classes, so just leave me alone. I''m having some... girl problems." You answer brashly, not having any intentions of getting up. Mr. Tsarev sighs then shakes his head. "If you are having some personal issues, then I won''t punish you for that, but do try to pay attention if you can. I am only trying to prepare you all for the future."'
-								'You remain silent as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson. You obviously have no interest in learning anything today. You hear one of the boys behind you mutter "It must be that time of the month." then giggle as you turn around to flip him off.'
+								'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class, so just leave me alone. I''m having some... girl problems," you answer brashly, not having any intentions of getting up. Mr. Tsarev sighs and shakes his head. "If you''re having some personal issues, then I won''t punish you for that, but do try to pay attention if you can. I''m only trying to prepare you all for the future."'
+								'You remain silent as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson. You obviously have no interest in learning anything today. You hear one of the boys behind you mutter "It must be that time of the month..." You turn around to flip him off.'
 							    act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
 						else
@@ -213,23 +225,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'The day seems to be dragging in and you find yourself constantly staring at the clock, waiting for the class to finally be over. You decide to play on your phone to pass the time.'
 		    if VK = 1 and (christinaQW['fight'] = -1 or christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2) and salocatnow >= 5:
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A18', 'loathe'
-				'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face flushing in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
+				'As you''re browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face flushing in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 2 and NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-				'You are browsing the web when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia depicting your name and her''s inside of a heart together. You turn to Natalia to see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before replying with "You are so precious to me, Natalia." Natalia quickly replies "I am so happy that I have you in my life." You reply to Natalia. "Ohhh you are just so cute. Muah." Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
+				'You''re browsing the web when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia depicting your names inside a heart together. You turn to Natalia and see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before exchanging some flirty messages with her. Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 3 and NikoVolkovQW >= 5 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
-				'While you are browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko to see him with a loving smile. You then type back. "You are so sweet Niko." Niko gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
+				'While you''re browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko, who has a loving smile on his face. You then type back "You''re so sweet, Niko." and he gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 4 and npc_rel['A25'] >= 80:
-				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive. You type back "Those heels look very... you." Sonia replies. "I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?" You reply. "They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." Sonia giggles as she messages you back.'
-			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile as she returns it. Sonia then turns back toward the teacher while continuing to cruise the internet.'
+				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive.' 
+				'"Those heels look very... you." you text back.' 
+				'"I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?"'
+				'"They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." you reply.'
+			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile before she turns back towards the teacher while continuing to browse the internet.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you are browsing the web, you notice Mr. Tsarev giving you a stern look. He seems to have noticed that you''re not paying attention to his lesson.'
+				'As you''re browsing the web, you notice Mr. Tsarev giving you a stern look. He seems to have noticed that you''re not paying attention to his lesson.'
 				act 'Put your phone away':
 					*clr & cla
 					grupvalue[3] += 1
@@ -249,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						demerit += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtonphone.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decide to try your luck and continue using your phone. Mr. Tsarev pauses the lesson then begin walking toward your desk.'
+						'You decide to try your luck and continue using your phone. Mr. Tsarev pauses the lesson and begins walking toward your desk.'
 						act 'Hand over the phone':
 							*clr & cla
 							grupvalue[4] -= 1
@@ -291,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 								gs'stat'
 								demerit += 5
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/nophone.jpg"></center>'
-								'You deftly shove the phone in your bra then smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on his face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you tease him in an innocent tone. "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, raising your breast toward him, giving him a nice view of your ample cleavage; the outline of your phone very visible through the fabric.'
+								'You deftly shove the phone in your bra and smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on his face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you tease him in an innocent tone. "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, the outline of your phone visible through the fabric.'
 								'Mr. Tsarev seems flabbergasted by your actions. He remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head, turning around and walking back to the front of the class. It seems that he realized that it''s not worth the effort to take your phone away from you without causing all sorts of awkward situations. You pull your phone back out of your bra and continue browsing the web as the lesson goes on.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
@@ -312,16 +327,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math_late':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/late.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the halls of the school, they are completely empty. You pass by several classes already underway as you make your way down to math class. You finally arrive at the door to your class and you can hear Mr. Tsarev already starting today''s lesson inside.'
+	'As you walk down the halls of the school, they are completely empty. You pass by several classes already underway as you make your way down to math class. You finally arrive at the door to your class and can hear Mr. Tsarev already starting today''s lesson inside.'
 	act 'Go into class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem1.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you open the door and walk in, Mr. Tsarev stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. "So good of you to join us Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>." Several of the kids smirk while a few look annoyed that you have interrupted the class or that you are getting away with being late.'
-		act 'Say you''re sorry':
+		'When you open the door and walk in, Mr. Tsarev stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. "So good of you to join us Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted the class or that you''re getting away with being late.'
+		act 'Apologize':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look down a bit. "Sorry I was running late. Time just got away from me."'
-			'He shakes his head slightly and sighs a bit. "Very well Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please take your seat and try not to let it happen again."'
+			'You look down. "Sorry I was running late. Time just got away from me."'
+			'He shakes his head slightly and sighs. "Very well Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please take your seat and try not to let it happen again."'
 			act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'math'
 		end
 		act 'Say nothing':
@@ -329,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math_late':
 			demerit += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You roll your eyes a bit, but say nothing in response. He shakes his head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now please take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
+			'You roll your eyes, but say nothing in response. He shakes his head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now please take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
 			act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'math'
 		end
 	end
@@ -341,8 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 	intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/classlit.jpg"></center>'
-	*nl
-	'"Everyone sit down, class is starting." Ms. Braakman says in English, her voice thick with a Russian accent. A few students take their seat, but most of the class continues socializing as if they didn''t hear her. "Class is starting, now take a seat!" she repeats loudly in Russian. The groups reluctantly scatter and everyone settles into their seats.'
+	'"Everyone sit down, class is starting." Ms. Braakman says in English, her voice thick with a Russian accent. A few students take their seat, but most of the class continues socializing as if they didn''t hear her. "Class is starting, now take a seat!" she repeats loudly in Russian and the groups reluctantly scatter as everyone settles into their seats.'
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaRevenge', 1
 	else
@@ -359,7 +373,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'				
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/work2.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
 				'You actively take part in the lesson, raising your hand to answer questions, following along in your textbook and working quietly on the worksheets when given them.'
 				act 'Keep working':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -381,7 +394,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A15', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
 						'"I saw this video of an American girl dancing all sexy and stuff, and I''m thinking of learning the dance. Next time I go to the community center, I''ll show up all the girls and steal their boyfriends!" she jokes with a playful smile, but you notice a wicked twinkle in her eyes.'
-						*nl
 						'Vicky''s bubbly personality makes her easy and fun to talk to, and you end up spending the rest of class smiling and laughing with her.'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -390,11 +402,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A20', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Lena sighs heavily, "Fuck, what''s taking her so long?"'
-						*nl
+						'Lena sighs heavily. "Fuck, what''s taking her so long?"'
 						'"Who are you waiting for?" you ask.'
-						*nl
-						'"Lera! She had to go take a piss but she''s taking forever." she snaps back. "Her tongue probably needed a break anyways..." she mumbles quietly after a moment, a small smile spreading across her face.'
+						'"Lera! She had to go take a piss, but she''s taking forever!" she snaps back. "Her tongue probably needed a break anyways..." she mumbles quietly as a small smile spreads across her face.'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
 					act 'Lera':
@@ -418,10 +428,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A3', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkboy' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'With a confident smile, Ivan starts to tell you about a recent match he had at the community center. "This kid I''ve never seen before comes up to me and starts talking shit, saying my form is bad and that I couldn''t hit someone even if they were standing still right in front of me!" he says with a scoff. "I told him to put his money where his mouth is and get in the ring, and guess what happened?"'
-						*nl
+						'With a confident smile, Ivan starts telling you about a recent match he had at the community center. "This kid I''ve never seen before comes up to me and starts talking shit, saying my form is bad and that I couldn''t hit someone even if they were standing still right in front of me!" he says with a scoff. "I told him to put his money where his mouth is and get in the ring, and guess what happened?"'
 						'"You beat the crap out of him?" you say with a smile.'
-						*nl
 						'Ivan laughs and you can see his chest puff out slightly. "Of course! The best part is that his girlfriend was there to see it happen, and while he was lying on the mat knocked out, she gave me her number."'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -430,7 +438,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A22', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'"God, this place is more like a daycare than a high school." Bella says, scoffing in disgust. A moment later, a group of students start talking and laughing loud enough to disrupt the class. "See what I mean?" she adds as she rolls her eyes. "They''re practically adults, but they act so childish. I hate it. They need to act their age, like I do."'
+						'"God, this place is more like a daycare than a high school!" Bella says, scoffing in disgust. A few seconds later, a group of students start talking and laughing loud enough to disrupt the class. "See what I mean?" she adds as she rolls her eyes. "They''re practically adults, but they act so childish. I hate it. They need to act their age, like I do."'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
 					act 'Veronika':
@@ -449,15 +457,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							if NikoPayback > 0:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he sneers at you before saying "What do you want?" You carefully reply with "Hey I just want to talk." He scoffs then says "Fine, why not?" You and Niko spend the next few minutes having a strained conversation until the end of the class.'
+								'Niko sneers at you as you approach. "What do you want?"'
+								'"I just want to talk," you reply and he scoffs before nodding. You spend the next few minutes having a strained conversation until the end of the class.'
 							elseif NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
 								gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile before saying "My princess graces with me with her presence. How can be of assistance?" You giggle before replying "I have spare time and I can''t think of a better use of my time then spending it with you." Niko chuckles then grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both spend the next few minutes chatting while exchanging loving glares until the end of the class.'
+								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile. "My princess graces with me with her presence. How can be of assistance?"' 
+								'You giggle. "I have spare time and I can''t think of a better use of it than spending it with you." Niko chuckles and grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both spend the next few minutes chatting while exchanging loving glares until the end of the class.'
 							else
 								gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile before saying "Ahh a lovely princess decides to grace me with her presence. How can I be of assistance?" You giggle before replying "You''re so weird, I just want to chat for a bit okay?" Niko chuckles then grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both begin chatting until the end of the class.'
+								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile. "Ahh a lovely princess decides to grace me with her presence. How can I be of assistance?"' 
+								'You giggle. "You''re so weird! I just want to chat for a bit, okay?" Niko chuckles and grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both begin chatting until the end of the class.'
 							end
 							act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
@@ -465,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			 act 'Listen attentively (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Listen attentively (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		act'Daydream':
@@ -477,17 +488,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				*nl
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>!"'
 				*nl
-				'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality just in time to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
-				*nl
-				'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention." she warns as she points to the door.'
+				'Hearing your name being called, you snap back to reality to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
+				'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention!" she warns as she points to the door.'
 				act 'Apologize':
 					*clr & cla
 					grupvalue[1] -= 1
 					grupvalue[4] -= 1
 					grupvalue[3] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big137.jpg"></center>'
-					*nl
-					'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
+					'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman..." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -501,14 +510,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						grupvalue[4] += 1
 						grupvalue[3] -= 1
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/eyeroll.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it, you just keep talking and talking." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
+						'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it, you just keep talking and talking..." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
 						'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Anushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
 						'Ms. Braakman''s face turns red and her expression darkens, a mixture of rage and embarrassment. "Get out and report to the principal''s office right now!" she barks.'
 						act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 							*clr & cla
 							demerit += 5
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/smirk.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'"Fine by me." you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
+							'"Fine by me," you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					end
@@ -572,7 +581,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							grupvalue[4] -= 1
 							grupvalue[3] += 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-							'Realizing it isn''t worth it, you hand over your phone without argument. "You can have this back after class." Ms. Braakman says as she walks back to the blackboard.'
+							'Realizing it isn''t worth it, you hand over your phone without argument. "You can have this back after class," Ms. Braakman says as she walks back to the blackboard.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 						end
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -594,7 +603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 									'With a mischievous smile, you deftly slide your phone under your skirt and spread your legs to take a picture of your bare pussy. Ms. Braakman stops in front of your desk, her hands on her hips as she stares daggers at you.'
 								    '"Hand it over." she orders, one of her hands now held out in front of you. You obediently hand over your phone to her without argument. When she sees the screen is still on, she smiles smugly. "You were texting, weren''t you? Of course you were, that''s all you kids do these days. Well, I''m sure you wouldn''t mind if I shared with the class what you were--"'
-								    'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen for a long moment. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
+								    'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
 								    '"I don''t want to see you doing such things in my class again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! You can have this back after class." She says sharply, but the way she licks her lips afterwards speaks of something else. Without another word, she turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class to resume the lesson.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 								end
@@ -616,7 +625,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							    '"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Her eyes darken dangerously as you think you''ve won, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
 							    '"You think you''re clever, don''t you?" she whispers, her voice low so only you can hear. You try to respond, but your words get caught in your throat as she starts to tease one of your nipples between her fingertips. Suddenly, she''s no longer searching but groping, her skillful fingers carefully moving between each breast until both of your sensitive buds are hard and straining almost uncomfortably against your bra. You can''t help but shift slightly in your seat as you feel a tightening sensation in your lower belly and an aching throb between your legs.'
 							    *nl
-							    '"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl." Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she removes her hand and with it your phone. "You can get this back after class."'
+							    '"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl!" Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she grabs your phone and removes her hand from your shirt. "You can get this back after class."'
 							    'Flustered and aroused, you regain your senses and remember that you''re sitting in class right now. You look around the room, but it seems like her groping went unnoticed and was seen as her fishing out your phone like you challenged her to do.'
 								act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 							end
@@ -1066,7 +1075,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 			act 'Keep watching':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cocksuck3.jpg"></center>'
-				'The coach grabs Christina''s head and starts face fucking her. She grips his legs, obviously trying to get him to slow down, but he doesn''t relent, as gagging sounds fill the room.'
+				'The coach grabs Christina''s head and starts face fucking her. She grips his legs, obviously trying to get him to slow down, but he doesn''t relent as gagging sounds fill the room.'
 				'The sounds and sight start making you wet, but you aren''t here to masturbate, so you keep taking as many pictures as you can.'
 				'Pavlovich seems to reach his limit and pulls out, ordering her to keep her mouth open before he shoots thick ropes of cum into her mouth.'
 				'Deciding you have enough evidence, and not wanting to play your hand just yet, you quietly close the door and sneak off, extremely pleased with yourself.'
@@ -1145,9 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
 				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. "Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" Lera says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue as you stare up at her.'
-				*nl
 				'"What? You''ll suck the boys off, but won''t eat us out? Aren''t dick and pussy the same thing to you? Get to it you fucking whore!" Lera says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking Lera''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as Lera orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you. "Good slut." is all she says before Pauline takes her place.'
-				*nl
 				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1169,9 +1176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
 				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. You look up, and to your despair, see that it was Christina. "Let''s make it a party girls! Now we have TWO sluts to eat us out!" she says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue.'
-				*nl
 				'With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humilation and start licking Christina''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as she orgasms hard, then slams your face back into her crotch. "Lick me clean bitch! I want you to drink every last drop of my cum!" When she''s finally done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you hard. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place.'
-				*nl
 				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and quickly run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1200,7 +1205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Stay':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Pauline, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
+				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Pauline, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop watching':
@@ -1244,7 +1249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/nudepic.jpg"></center>'
 			'You try to ignore their insults, but it really gets under your skin and it shows. Seeing their effectiveness, they re-double their abuse, taunting you more and more.'
 			'"If I''ve got a landing strip, what does she have? A farmer''s field?!" Bella says.'
-			'"She probably lets it grow out like that because she doesn''t want to let boys know she''s got beef curtains down there." Stasya says.'
+			'"She probably lets it grow out like that because she doesn''t want to let boys know she''s got beef curtains down there," Stasya says.'
 			'"Ha! Are you kidding? What boy would want to fuck a furball like that? They probably see it and run away!" Irina says.'
 			'They cackle to themselves while you miserably douse your head under the shower, trying to drown out their hurtful words.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_post_shower', 'post_shower'
@@ -1253,20 +1258,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/postphyssho1.jpg"></center>'
 			if grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5:
-				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-				'Bella steps up and gets in your face. "What did you say to me? Watch your mouth, unless you want us to ruin your life bitch."'
-				'You won''t meet her gaze, you know the popular girls could destroy your reputation in a heart beat, so you just start taking your shower and ignore them as best you can.'
+				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+				'Bella steps up and gets in your face. "What did you say to me? Watch your mouth, unless you want us to ruin your life, bitch."'
+				'You don''t meet her gaze. You know the popular girls could destroy your reputation in a heartbeat, so you just start taking your shower and ignore them as best you can.'
 				*nl
-				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina says.'
+				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina taunts.'
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
-				'"A machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya says.'
+				'"And a machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya adds.'
 				'They cackle in sadistic glee and you spend the rest of your shower blushing, your face somehow feeling hotter than the water streaming down it.'
 			elseif grupTipe = 4 or grupTipe = 2:
-				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina says.'
+				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina taunts.'
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
 				*nl
-				'"A machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya says.'
+				'"And a machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya adds.'
 				'You stop and take a few steps closer to them, with your hands balled up into fists. They stop their cackling when you get close. "I said fuck off!"'
 				'They all take a step back before Bella smirks. "What, can''t take a joke? Fine fine, don''t get your panties in a twist." They leave you in peace for the rest of the shower and instead spend the time gossiping about a variety of stuff..'
 			else
@@ -1283,7 +1288,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You roll your eyes and ignore them completely, turning on the faucet and rinsing your hair. They continue to sling insults at you, but you pay them no mind, picking up the soap and beginning to scrub your body.'
-			*nl
 			'After a few more tries, they realize that they aren''t going to get any reaction out of you and turn back to conversing amongst themselves, finally letting you shower in peace.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_post_shower', 'post_shower'
 		end
@@ -1461,8 +1465,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1506,7 +1510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 								'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
-								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind." she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind," she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 								gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1531,8 +1535,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1648,7 +1652,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/lockerflash.jpg"></center>'
 		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Anushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Anushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call.'
-		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you''re finished, most of the other girls have already left.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 2:
@@ -1657,7 +1660,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locselfiedan.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Bella is at the mirror, taking a selfie of herself trying to look sexy. As she does, Albina walks up beside her and then starts to dance next to her, bending over and grinding her ass against her. She can''t help but laugh and grind back, and soon both of them are teasing each other and laughing, along with many of the other girls in the locker room that saw the whole thing.'
-		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you are finished, most of the other girls have already left the locker room.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 3:
@@ -1697,10 +1699,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 5:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/boysraid.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway and leering at all the pretty girls in the locker room. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only a rather eyecatching bright pink g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here." she says in a low, menacing tone.'
+		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway leering at everyone. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only her g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here!" she says in a low, menacing tone.'
 		'Dan snorts. "Or what?"'
 		'Albina, not backing down, says "Do you really want to find out?" Everyone can hear the implied threat and considering her fearsome temper and willingness to get violently physical, Dan backs off.'
-		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your panties in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
+		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your cute little thong in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
 		'You see Albina''s fist clench before she grabs his hand and painfully twists it. "How''s this for a workout?" she shouts before swiftly swinging her leg up and kicking Vitek straight in the balls. He yelps in pain and almost collapses before hobbling out of the doorway, clutching his crotch. Dan backs out behind him and Albina slams the door. "Fucking perverted assholes." With that taken care of, the girls go back to getting dressed. You notice most of them do it quicker than normal, seemingly afraid of a repeat visit.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 6:
@@ -1718,7 +1720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 7:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/alynushwedgie.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Aylona sneak up behind Anushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and yank them up, giving Anushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Anushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Anushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing as Anushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
+		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Alyona sneak up behind Anushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and yank them up, giving Anushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Anushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Anushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing as Anushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 8:
 		*clr & cla

+ 1 - 0
locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -537,6 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/badlanguage.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Sure, repeat after me: I''m a worthless cock-sleeve who enjoys being a cum dump for all the boys in school."'
 					'Lera and Lena seem surprised with how much you say, but you reassure them it''s a really good insult; the worst of the worst. With a smile, they repeat the sentence, completely unaware of what they''re actually saying.'
+					'You glance over and see Albina smirking. To most people''s surprise, she is rather fluent in English and seems impressed with you.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else

+ 98 - 71
locations/pav_beach_chat.qsrc

@@ -79,63 +79,89 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/beach_chat.jpg"></center>'
 	if rand(1,4) = 1 and npc_sex['A149'] > 0:
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 'small'
-		'Seeing you, Lazar smirks. "Back for more? I know, it was amazing."'
-		'You only let out a short "Mhm" as you roll your eyes.'
-		'Lazar breaks out in a smile. "No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m sure we''ll hook up again." You notice several others pay attention to what he says, you are not real happy he is pretty much bragging publicly about banging you. You try and change the topic, you talk for a bit but mostly it is sexual banter from him.'
+		'Lazar smirks when he sees you. "Back for more? I know, it was amazing."'
+		'You only let out a short "Mmhmm" as you roll your eyes.'
+		'Lazar breaks out in a smile. "No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m sure we''ll hook up again." You notice several others paying attention to what he says and aren''t happy about him bragging publicly about banging you. You try and change the topic, but all you get from him is sexual banter.'
+	elseif AlbinaQW['Lazar_Threesome'] = 1:
+		'Lazar smirks when he sees you. "Back for more? Albina is a little busy right now, but I''m sure we can work something out next time she''s in the mood."'
+		'You blush at his comment and he smiles. "I''m sure you enjoy our... sessions as much as she does." He has a wide grin on his face and winks at you.'
+	elseif fame['pav_slut'] > 225:
+		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A149', 'dislike'
+		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
+			'"Taking a break from sucking dicks?" Lazar snickers.'
+			'You sigh. "I just wanted to talk to you."'
+			'"I''m sure you do, but I''m pretty busy, so get lost." Several of the other jocks and cool kids start mocking you, forcing you to flee as their laughter echoes behind you.'
+		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
+			'He turns to look at you as you approach. "Get the fuck away from me you skank." Several of the jocks and cool kids start mocking you, forcing you to flee.'
+		else
+			'"You here to suck me off, slut?" Lazar snickers.'
+			'You sigh. "I just wanted to talk to you."'
+			'"Come on, everyone knows that you''re the school''s biggest slut! Your mouth is good for only one thing. Sucking dick!" he says with a laugh and several of the other jocks and cool kids join in. "If you''re not going to get on your knees and suck me off, then get lost." You walk away with the laughter echoing behind you.'
+		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
-			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
+			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you eyeballing me." Lazar winks.'
 			'You laugh. "Nice line Lazar... Is that how you get the ladies interested in you?"'
-			'He confidently continues. "You know it. And it works like a charm every time. You just wait, you''ll fall for me too." From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'He confidently continues. "You know it. And it works like a charm every time. You just wait, you''ll fall for me too." You talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'"Are you the one that''s been going around and telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks.'
-			'"No... Like I give a shit about you! You''re not the center of the world, Lazar!" you yell back.'
-			'"Good. Keep it that way or else we might have a problem..." he says as he brushes pass you.'
+			'"Are you the one that''s been going around telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks.'
+			'"No? Like I give a shit about you! You''re not the center of the world, Lazar!" you yell back.'
+			'"Good. Keep it that way or else we might have a problem..." he says as he brushes past you.'
 		else
 			'"I didn''t take you for one of them girls <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar smiles.'
 			'"What?" you ask surprised.'
-			'"Didn''t take you for one of my fan girls, that''s all." he winks. You roll your eyes and shake your head, you know he is full of himself even if he is the most gifted athlete in school and cute to boot, but sadly he knows it. The two of you talk about a variety of things, which mostly he twists into you just liking him.'
+			'"Didn''t take you for one of my fan girls, that''s all." he winks. You roll your eyes and shake your head. You know he''s full of himself, even if he is the most gifted athlete in school and cute to boot. You talk about a variety of things, which he twists into you just liking him.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Did you see that move I made at the last game <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar boasts.'
-			'"I heard about it." you inform him.'
-			'The two of you start talking about his last game but soon are talking about a variety of topics.'
+			'"I heard about it..." you inform him.'
+			'You start talking about his last game, but soon move on to a variety of other topics.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Lazar is standing with his arms crossed.'
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Lazar smirks as he stands with his arms crossed.'
 			'You sigh. "What now Lazar? I don''t have time for your games today..."'
-			'He huffs. "Somebody has been talking shit behind my back to some girls, but I haven''t figured out who it is yet. I wanted you to know that I''m keeping my eyes on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'He huffs. "Somebody''s been talking shit behind my back to some girls, but I haven''t figured out who it is yet. I wanted you to know that I''m keeping my eyes on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'"Okay..." you say as you roll your eyes. "What does that have to do with me?"'
 		else
 			'"Did you hear my own little cheer squad at the last game <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar boasts.'
-			'"I heard many boys are out to get at your level <i>Mister Superstar</i>. Watch out so you don''t lose that cheer squad of yours." you jokingly reply.'
-			'Lazar bursts out in a laughter. "No no, I''m not worried. That only makes me want to improve even more..."'
+			'"I heard many boys are out to get at your level <i>Mister Superstar</i>. Watch out, you might lose that cheer squad of yours!" you jokingly reply.'
+			'Lazar bursts out in laughter. "No no, I''m not worried. That only makes me want to improve even more..."'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
-			'You blush a bit. "No... no I havn''t."'
-			'He confidently continues. "Are say I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and then he laughs showing he is just messing with you. From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'You blush. "No... no I haven''t."'
+			'He confidently continues. "Are you saying I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up and try and talk to him he just flat ignores you and pretends like you are not there. After several minutes of this he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you taking a fucking hint? No one wants you around." Then he goes back to ignoring you as you walk off.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar says as it brings everyones attention to you.'
-			'You glance around waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it, makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
-			'"Okay..." you say not sure how to respond to this. He does start talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough even if he and the rest don''t pay much attention to you, at least no one is picking on you.'
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar smirks, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
+			'You glance around, waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
+			'"Okay..." you reply, not sure how to respond. He starts talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough, even if he and the others don''t pay much attention to you. At least no one is picking on you.'
 		end
-	else
+	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
 			'You laugh. "You wish... Are any of the girls dumb enough to fall for that?"'
-			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it is simple a fact, you don''t got to hide it, I got a rocking bod." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit if you are into guys he has a great body. From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it''s a simple fact. You don''t have to hide it." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit that he has a great body. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
+		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+		else
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe you''re too drunk to find your way to the dump where you lot hang out?" Lazar asks with a laugh, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
+			'You sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
+			'"Okay..." you reply, not sure how to respond. He starts talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough, even if he and the others don''t pay much attention to you.'
+		end
+	else
+		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A8', 'dislike'
+		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
+			'As you approach, several of the other jocks and cool kids start giving you a hard time. Before you can even say a word, he scoffs at you. "Get lost! This isn''t for you." He starts talking to the others as you walk away. At least he wasn''t mean about it.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up and try and talk to him he just flat ignores you and pretends like you are not there. After several minutes of this he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you taking a fucking hint? No one wants you around." Then he goes back to ignore you as you walk off.'
+			'"Looks like the loser is lost." someone comments as you approach.' 
+			'"Nah, I bet even Lesco and Petia can''t stand being around her and, honestly, who can blame them?" Lazar replies, which gets the group laughing so hard you know it''s pointless to even try and talk to him.'
 		else
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe to drunk to find some alleyway to squat in." Lazar says with a laugh as it brings everyones attention to you. Sure the gopniks are well known for drinking and drugs but it gets old, that everyones seems to think that is all you guys do.'
-			'You just sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it, makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
-			'"Okay..." you say not sure how to respond to this. He does start talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough even if he and the rest don''t pay much attention to you, at least no one is picking on you.'
+			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Talk to someone else': gt 'pav_beach_chat', 'beach_hangout'
@@ -153,19 +179,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
 			'"Well isn''t this a surprise. Are you here to wish me good luck in the next race?" Svyatoslav curiously asks.'
 			'Seeing him excited and not wanting to hurt his feelings, you just nod. "Yeah... that''s exactly what I wanted to say..."'
-			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ll be sure to win this time!" he boastfully replies. Then the two of you talk about the many times he fails to either beat Ivan or Lazar in one of the varies sports at school.'
+			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ll be sure to win this time!" he boastfully replies. The two of you then talk about the many times he fails to beat Ivan or Lazar in one of the various sports at school.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he gives you a dirty look. "I got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
+			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
 		else
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, he starts talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, the two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he gives you a dirty look. "I got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
+			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
 		else
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, the two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
@@ -173,29 +199,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
 			'He snorts. "What ever, hey make sure you don''t lean to far forward in class so I can copy off you." Then he mostly ignores you but doesn''t pick on you at least.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost nerd?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He steps towards you and places his hand on your shoulder and shoves you hard, hard enough you stumble a couple of steps away catching your balance. "Get the fuck out of here." You notice the looks on the face of some of the others and decided it is best to leave before things get worse.'
+			'"You get lost, nerd?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He steps towards you, places his hand on your shoulder and shoves you hard enough that you stumble back. "Get the fuck out of here!" You notice the stares of some of the others and decide it''s best to leave before things get worse.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost nerd?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He laughs. "Yeah well you said, so why don''t you just go back to your fellow losers and pretend to be a elf or what ever it is you loser do." Then he partially ignores you and when he isn''t he mocks and makes fun of you.'
+			'"You get lost, nerd?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He laughs. "Why don''t you just go back to your fellow losers and pretend to be an elf or whatever it is you losers do." He continues mocking you when he isn''t talking to someone else.'
 		end
-	else
+	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You come to see what real men are like?"'
-			'You shake your head no and roll your eyes at his comment. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He snorts. "Sure you didn''t well take a good look." He does a little flexing and he has a pretty nice body, finally you are able to engage him in a bit of a conversation.'
+			'"You come to see what real men are like?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head and roll your eyes at his comment. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He snorts. "Sure you didn''t. Well, take a good look." He does a little flexing before you''re able to engage him in something resembling a conversation.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You come to beg for some money, so you can buy drugs?" He says with a laugh and several others join in.'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'"Yeah well no one wants to talk to your skank ass, so go back to your own kind." You notice the looks on the face of some of the others and decided it is best to leave before things get worse.'
+			'"You come to beg for some money to buy drugs?" he asks with a laugh, causing several others to join in.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'"Yeah? Well no one wants to talk to your skank ass, so go back to your own kind." You notice the stares of the others and decide it''s best to leave before things get worse.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost drugy?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He laughs. "Yeah well you said, so why don''t you just go back to your fellow wannabe gangsters and pretend like you matter." Then he partially ignores you and when he isn''t he mocks and makes fun of you.'
+			'"You get lost, junkie?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He laughs. "Why don''t you just go back to your fellow wannabe gangsters and pretend like you matter?" He continues mocking you when he isn''t talking to someone else.'
 		end
-	end
+	else
+		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
+			'As you approach, he walks towards you and grabs you by the arm before dragging you away so no one can hear his whispers. "What the fuck do you think you''re doing? Don''t ever come up to me in public." He then shoves you away. "And stay the fuck away from us, loser!" he says loud enough for the others to hear and several of them laugh and commend him for getting rid of you as he walks back to them. You just sigh and walk away, knowing it''s pointless to try and talk to him.'
+		else
+			'He shakes his head as you approach. "Fuck no! Stay the fuck away from me, you worthless fuck. No one likes you, so just turn your fucking ass around and walk the fuck away from here." He glares at you and you notice a lot of the others giving you unkind looks. You sigh before turning and walking away.'
+		end
+	end	
 	act 'Talk to someone else': gt 'pav_beach_chat', 'beach_hangout'
 end
 
@@ -288,8 +320,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light.'
-			'She engages you in a friendly, yet awkward conversation where you both talk about your shared interests, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off to swim in the lake. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
+			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before smiling.'
+			'She engages you in a friendly, yet awkward conversation where you both talk about the sports you enjoy and which of the jock have caught your eye, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off to swim in the lake. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light.'
 			'She scoffs at you. "I don''t like you, I barely tolerate you being in the same social group as me, so why would I want to talk to you?" You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
@@ -298,7 +330,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'She sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
-		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
+		if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
+			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before laughing.'
+			'"I didn''t think I''d see you here. Getting some sunlight in before you go back to hiding indoors?" she asks.'
+			'You smile. "Something like that," you reply and have a short conversation before she asks to be left alone to work on her tan.'
+		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light and rolls her eyes.'
 			'"What the fuck do you want? I thought you losers were allergic to the sun and do all that geeky shit indoors where it can''t hurt you? Can you fuck off now and stop blocking my light?"'
 			'Realizing you''re not going to get anywhere with her, you back away.'
@@ -307,23 +343,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'She sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
-		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light. "Oh god, it''s you. What the fuck do you want?"'
-			'"What''s your problem, bitch? I just want to talk," you scornfully reply.'
-			'Albina looks at you unimpressed. "My problem is that some knuckle brained moron is blocking my sunlight. Can you fuck off now?"'
-	    else
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light.'
-			'She sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
-		end	
+		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light. "Oh god, it''s you. What the fuck do you want?"'
+		'"What''s your problem, bitch? I just want to talk," you scornfully reply.'
+		'Albina looks at you unimpressed. "My problem is that some knuckle brained moron is blocking my sunlight. Can you fuck off now?"'
+		'"Fucking stuck up rich bitch..." you mutter as you walk away, but she doesn''t hear you.'
 	else
-		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before closing her eyes again.'
-			'When you don''t move and continue blocking her light, she looks up at you with an annoyed glare. "What the fuck do you want, you social reject? Can''t you see I''m working on my tan?"'
-			'You open your mouth to reply, but she shoos you away. "I don''t care, loser. Now piss off and stop blocking my light!"'
-		else
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light. She stares at you, seemingly in confusion. "Uhh, can I help you?"'
-			'"I just wanted to talk is all," you reply and she sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. It''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with a conversation she doesn''t actually care about.'
-		end
+		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before closing her eyes again.'
+		'When you don''t move and continue blocking her light, she looks up at you with an annoyed glare. "What the fuck do you want, you social reject? Can''t you see I''m working on my tan?"'
+		'You open your mouth to reply, but she shoos you away. "I don''t care, loser. Now piss off and stop blocking my light!"'
 	end
 	act 'Talk to someone else': gt 'pav_beach_chat', 'beach_hangout'
 end

+ 2 - 2
locations/pornhist.qsrc

@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ $pornfilmdesc = {
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'blowjob, vaginal, facial'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob and he fucked before giving you a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob and he fucked you before giving you a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 4:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 60
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ $pornfilmdesc = {
 		pfactor = 2
 		actbonus = rand(1,3)
 		$tags = 'facial, vaginal, anal, blowjob, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass and came in your ass while you sucked off an another guy who gave you a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass and came in your ass while you sucked off another guy who gave you a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 6:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 90