Merge https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife into master

locations/AlbFatherQW.qsrc

@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ $din_zajava_albfather_no2 = {
 		AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-		'While a part of you wants to help, you don''t trust him and refuse to help. He sighs in resignation. "If that''s how it''s going to be, but just remember...You could have made that one bit of difference." He gets back in the car and it drives away.'
+		'While a part of you wants to help, you don''t trust him and refuse to help. He sighs in resignation. "If that''s how it''s going to be, but just remember... you could have made that one bit of difference." He gets back in the car and it drives away.'
 
 		act 'Call Albina':
 			*clr & cla

locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina4':
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'The girls turn on their stereo and start dancing. It immediately becomes clear to you that they dance professionally, obviously better than you. Albina alone dances much better than you can. It is obvious that they have practiced this routine many times as their movements are closely synchronized with no wasted effort.'
-	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls....take a breather."'
-	'She comes up to you, breathless. "You see...We are pros...Real dancers. We are "The Starlets". We do shows and have even been in a music video."'
+	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls... take a breather."'
+	'She comes up to you, breathless. "You see... We are pros... Real dancers. We are "The Starlets". We do shows and have even been in a music video."'
 
 	if pregtime >= 90:
 		'You might try out for them after you''ve had your child.'
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina4':
 						'Finally, she answers. "Okay, we''ll take a shot. Maybe you''ll learn something and be worthwhile. We practice every day except Tuesday and Thursday, so don''t be late."'
 						'When the other girls leave, Albina pulls you aside. "Hey, are you ''pure''?" she whispers.'
 						'"Why would you want to know such a personal thing?" you reply as you blush.'
-						'"Oh, it''s...nothing. I just...look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
+						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
 						AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] = 1
 					else
 						'"Well, am I good enough to join?" you ask.'
@@ -208,8 +208,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'The girls turn on their stereo and start dancing. It immediately becomes clear to you that they dance professionally, but only slightly better than you. Only Albina outmatches your ability. It is obvious that they have practiced this routine many times as their movements are closely synchronized with no wasted effort.'
-	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls....take a breather."'
-	'She comes up to you, breathless. "These are...My Starlets. We do... professional shows and... have been in a music video..."'
+	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls... take a breather."'
+	'She comes up to you, breathless. "These are... my Starlets. We do... professional shows and... have been in a music video..."'
 
 	if pregtime >= 90:
 		'You might try out for them after you''ve had your child.'
@@ -228,20 +228,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You begin to dance to the music and put very little effort into your moves before the other girls are pointing and talking to each other, intrigued by your skill. When the music stops, Albina walks up to you.'
 				'You stand panting before her as she gleefully claps. "I knew you could it!" she says.'
-				'"Do...what?" you reply.'
+				'"Do... what?" you reply.'
 				'"We''ve been dancing together for years <<$pcs_nickname>>, so I had no doubts about you. The others here, they wanted to see you first. They didn''t believe me when I said you were <i>almost</i> as good as me."'
 				act 'You are a Starlet?!':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
-					'"You...mean...I''m a...Starlet?" you ask as you continue panting.'
+					'"You... mean... I''m a... Starlet?" you ask as you continue panting.'
 					'"Well of course you are! I can''t let someone as good as you go to waste on these amateurs. We practice every day except for Tuesday and Thursday, so don''t be late!" Albina replies.'
 					AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] = 1
 					!! If Sveta is virgin
 					if pcs_vag = 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
 						'When the other girls leave, Albina pulls you aside. "Hey, are you ''pure''?" she whispers.'
 						'"Why would you want to know such a personal thing?" you reply as you blush.'
-						'"Oh, it''s...nothing. I just...look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
+						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				end
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 					end
 
 					if AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] <= 6:
-						'Albina walks up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we... We need to...To talk." she quietly stammers.'
+						'Albina walks up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we... We need to... to talk." she quietly stammers.'
 						act 'About what?':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 15
@@ -365,11 +365,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 							'You can see a little bit of fear in Albina''s eyes as you ask her what''s wrong.'
 
 							if AlbinaQW['StarletsCustomerCount'] = 1:
-								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just...see that guy? If you go with him and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
-								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just...please."'
+								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just... see that guy? If you go with him and be... ''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
+								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just... please."'
 							else
 								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just... see those guys? If you go with them and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
-								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just...please."'
+								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just... please."'
 							end
 							
 							gs 'willpower', 'prostitution', 'resist', 'hard'
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore4':
 		cls
 		guy += 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackbj.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The man sits on a sofa and asks you to give him a striptease. You comply and after you''ve stripped nude, you kneel between his legs and unzip his pants. "Oh.My.God!" you exclaim as you pull his massive cock out. You stare in bewilderment and compare the length and thickness of his shaft to your forearm.'
+		'The man sits on a sofa and asks you to give him a striptease. You comply and after you''ve stripped nude, you kneel between his legs and unzip his pants. "Oh. My. God!" you exclaim as you pull his massive cock out. You stare in bewilderment and compare the length and thickness of his shaft to your forearm.'
 		'"You like what you see baby? Go on." he chuckles.'
 		'Wide eyed, you wrap your hands around his shaft and slowly jerk it before taking it into your mouth. You suck and jerk the monster cock as the thought of it being inside you enters your mind.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'

locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan_work':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/work.jpg"></center>'
 	'The senior manager Ivan shows up in your office.'
-	'Ivan grins, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I would have never imagined this from a sweet young thing like you." He puts a photo on your desk. You pick it up, and take a look. <<$BurgerQW[''IvanQWBlackmailPhoto'']>>. Ivan is looking at you like a cat about to catch a mouse: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we can''t have this our boss has aims at a career in politics. If something like this were to get out it would it would...well we can''t let that happen. I''m afraid you are just going to have to quit. Anatoly can''t be known as a man who keeps a slutty secretary."' 
+	'Ivan grins, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I would have never imagined this from a sweet young thing like you." He puts a photo on your desk. You pick it up, and take a look. <<$BurgerQW[''IvanQWBlackmailPhoto'']>>. Ivan is looking at you like a cat about to catch a mouse: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we can''t have this our boss has aims at a career in politics. If something like this were to get out it would it would... well we can''t let that happen. I''m afraid you are just going to have to quit. Anatoly can''t be known as a man who keeps a slutty secretary."' 
 	
 	act 'Plead with him not to show the pictures': gt 'BurgerTip', 'ivan_work2'
 

locations/FedorEv.qsrc

@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gorslut':
 			gs 'stat'	
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m sorry Fedor but I enjoy the attention of men and I''m not really one for commitment. I thought you understood this." Fedor lowers his head clearly upset but after a few seconds he raises his head then looks in your eyes and says, "I guess what we had was a lie then...Go be with as many men as you want, I won''t hold you back anymore." he takes a few steps back, never breaking eye contact with you until he suddenly turns away and walks off.'
+			'"I''m sorry Fedor but I enjoy the attention of men and I''m not really one for commitment. I thought you understood this." Fedor lowers his head clearly upset but after a few seconds he raises his head then looks in your eyes and says, "I guess what we had was a lie then... Go be with as many men as you want, I won''t hold you back anymore." he takes a few steps back, never breaking eye contact with you until he suddenly turns away and walks off.'
 			
 			act 'Move away':
 				if $loc = 'gschool_lunch':

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park Walk':
 		FedorLuv -= 2						
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Nah, I''m too old for that, Let''s find something more my age." Fedor''s smile melts away as he responds, "Sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I didn''t mean to...Let''s just forget I asked." and you both continue walking together in silence.'
+		'"Nah, I''m too old for that, Let''s find something more my age." Fedor''s smile melts away as he responds, "Sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I didn''t mean to... let''s just forget I asked." and you both continue walking together in silence.'
 
 		act 'Continue your walk': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Train Tracks'				
 	end		
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 2':
 			FedorLuv -= 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/turnaway.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Fedor leans in for a kiss, You turn away, pretending not to notice and continue watching the movie. After a few seconds you glance over to Fedor to see a really disappointed look on his face as he continues watching the movie in silence.'
+			'As Fedor leans in for a kiss, you turn away, pretending not to notice and continue watching the movie. After a few seconds you glance over to Fedor to see a really disappointed look on his face as he continues watching the movie in silence.'
 
 			act 'Finish watching movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movie 3'
 		end
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/endbye.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You tell Fedor that you need to go and he wraps his arms around you, giving you a warm hug as he replies, "I understand, maybe next time." and he walks you home. Fedor fetches your coat and walks you out the door. When you arrive at your apartment, You give Fedor a soft kiss on the cheek. "Until next time." as you give him a wink and close the door.'
+				'You tell Fedor that you need to go and he wraps his arms around you, giving you a warm hug as he replies, "I understand, maybe next time." and he walks you home. Fedor fetches your coat and walks you out the door. When you arrive at your apartment, you give Fedor a soft kiss on the cheek. "Until next time." as you give him a wink and close the door.'
 								
 				act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
 			end
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vaginal Sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you feel Fedor start breathing rapidly and then his breath stops, he then quickly pulls out of you and groans as he cums all over your stomach. Squirt after squirt, Fedor drains his penis over your stomach, he takes a second to catch his breath, then tells you "You were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>" as he wipes the sweat off his forehead. You take a few seconds to catch your breath then respond, "You were great as well...Thank you."'
+			'After a few minutes you feel Fedor starting to breathe rapidly and then his breathing stops. He then quickly pulls out of you and groans as he cums all over your stomach. Squirt after squirt, Fedor drains his penis over your stomach. He takes a second to catch his breath, then tells you "you were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>", as he wipes the sweat off his forehead. You take a few seconds to catch your breath before you respond, "you were great as well... thank you."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 			gs 'stat'				
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virgintalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?...ohh you mean ...I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
+	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?... ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
 	
 	act 'Lose Virginity <b><h4><font color=#ff00cc>[Go steady]</font></h4></b>':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met...Thank you for letting me be your first, you were amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
+						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met... thank you for letting me be your first, you were amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
 						*nl	
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginanal.jpg"></center>'
-	'"If I lose my virginity now then my mother will kill me but I guess you can...do my ass if you like." Fedor gives you a warm smile. "It''s ok I know how tough parents can be." he kisses you then flips you on your stomach as he licks his fingers and lubricates your asshole. After a few seconds you can feel Fedor''s penis pressing against your anus.'
+	'"If I lose my virginity now then my mother will kill me but I guess you can... do my ass if you like." Fedor gives you a warm smile. "It''s ok, I know how tough parents can be." he kisses you then flips you on your stomach as he licks his fingers and lubricates your asshole. After a few seconds you can feel Fedor''s penis pressing against your anus.'
 	
 	act 'Anal':
 		*clr & cla			
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park 2':
 				FedorLuv += 2
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/swing2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take Fedor''s hand and pull his face down toward yours then tilt your head forward, planting your lips on his, in a passionate show of affection. You can feel his tongue enter your mouth as you caress it with yours, feeling some of his saliva dripping into your mouth as you swallow it eagerly while completely lost in the moment. After a minute of passion, Fedor slowly pulls away and says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you are so beautiful and your tongue...so soft." You give him a smile followed by a wink then grab his shoulders, using them to pull yourself to your feet.'
+				'You take Fedor''s hand and pull his face down toward yours then tilt your head forward, planting your lips on his, in a passionate show of affection. You can feel his tongue enter your mouth as you caress it with yours, feeling some of his saliva dripping into your mouth as you swallow it eagerly while completely lost in the moment. After a minute of passion, Fedor slowly pulls away and says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you are so beautiful and your tongue... so soft." You give him a smile followed by a wink then grab his shoulders, using them to pull yourself to your feet.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 				gs 'stat'		

locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Lady':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/ladies/lady7.jpg"></center>'
-							'The pleasure begins building quickly as you close your eyes, surrendering yourself to the pleasure and soon you feel your entire body begin to heat up as you reach your breaking point. You suddenly feel your muscles stiffen as you hit an explosive orgasm causing your body to twitch and spasm as her soft tongue continues massaging your clit. You ride out your orgasm then take a few seconds to catch your breath before opening your eyes to see the woman''s face in front of yours as she says,"It looks like you enjoyed yourself. I guess I still have it. I have to go now but I had a great time and I do hope to see you again." she then gets dressed and leaves the restroom.'
+							'The pleasure begins building quickly as you close your eyes, surrendering yourself to the pleasure and soon you feel your entire body begin to heat up as you reach your breaking point. You suddenly feel your muscles stiffen as you hit an explosive orgasm causing your body to twitch and spasm as her soft tongue continues massaging your clit. You ride out your orgasm then take a few seconds to catch your breath before opening your eyes to see the woman''s face in front of yours as she says, "It looks like you enjoyed yourself. I guess I still have it. I have to go now but I had a great time and I do hope to see you again." she then gets dressed and leaves the restroom.'
 							*nl	
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/ladies/kiss1.jpg"></center>'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Guy in restroom', rand(19,45)
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/scene5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up behind him and wait for him to finish peeing then you reach out and grab his penis. The man jumps up obviously surprised, He quickly turns to face you with a shocked look on his face but after looking you up and down he smiles and lays against the wall and enjoys your touch gently stroking your hair as you continue to slowly stroke his penis.'
+			'You walk up behind him and wait for him to finish peeing then you reach out and grab his penis. The man jumps up obviously surprised, he quickly turns to face you with a shocked look on his face but after looking you up and down he smiles and lays against the wall and enjoys your touch gently stroking your hair as you continue to slowly stroke his penis.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'					
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -843,7 +843,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 						*clr & cla				
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/cumface1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You quickly pull off him and get on your knees in front of him as he groans then paints your face with his seed. He continues to spray his load in your face until he has nothing left, he then takes a few seconds to catch his breath while admiring the view. You begin wiping the cum off of your eyelids as the man says, "Whoa, I must be the luckiest guy in the world right now, You were amazing girl. I hope we meet again." he then pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
+						'You quickly pull off him and get on your knees in front of him as he groans then paints your face with his seed. He continues to spray his load in your face until he has nothing left, he then takes a few seconds to catch his breath while admiring the view. You begin wiping the cum off of your eyelids as the man says, "Whoa, I must be the luckiest guy in the world right now, you were amazing girl. I hope we meet again." he then pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face'						
 						gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'					
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 						*clr & cla				
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. You can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, You are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
+						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. You can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, you are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus'							
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'dom'					
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Rape':
 			minut -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/mensrape3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'He then grabs you by the hair and pulls you up to his dick. You try your best to break free but he is too strong, Just as he lifts his hand to slap you, You raise your hand in submission and then wrap your lips around his cock doing your best to satisfy him, so that this can end as quickly as possible. He then says, "You''re starting to understand your place. Good! Now get up bitch!"'
+			'He then grabs you by the hair and pulls you up to his dick. You try your best to break free but he is too strong, Just as he lifts his hand to slap you, you raise your hand in submission and then wrap your lips around his cock doing your best to satisfy him, so that this can end as quickly as possible. He then says, "You''re starting to understand your place. Good! Now get up bitch!"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough'	
 			gs 'stat'				
 			
@@ -1045,7 +1045,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'	
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang2.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I didn''t mean to interrupt. Can I please go." One of the guys grins. "You can go...After we''re done with you." He then lunges into the stall and grabs you by the throat and whispers in your ear "I bet you came in here hoping to get caught, so that you can get a good fucking. Well we''ll give you a fucking you''ll never forget." he then pulls you out of the stall where the other guys are waiting with their cocks in their hand.'
+				'"I didn''t mean to interrupt. Can I please go." One of the guys grins. "You can go... after we''re done with you." He then lunges into the stall and grabs you by the throat and whispers in your ear "I bet you came in here hoping to get caught, so that you can get a good fucking. Well we''ll give you a fucking you''ll never forget." he then pulls you out of the stall where the other guys are waiting with their cocks in their hand.'
 
 				act 'Submit':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -1064,7 +1064,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 						minut -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang4.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you are sucking, The guy behind you shoves his dick into your vagina causing a rush of pain and pleasure. The pain quickly subsides and you start to actually feel less afraid as you enjoy the pleasure build up. You can hear one of the guys say, "Hey look at her. I think she''s starting to like it." and another responds, "I knew she was a dirty whore when I saw her." the words offend you at first but begin to excite you as you continue getting fucked.'
+						'As you are sucking, the guy behind you shoves his dick into your vagina causing a rush of pain and pleasure. The pain quickly subsides and you start to actually feel less afraid as you enjoy the pleasure build up. You can hear one of the guys say, "Hey look at her. I think she''s starting to like it." and another responds, "I knew she was a dirty whore when I saw her." the words offend you at first but begin to excite you as you continue getting fucked.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 						gs 'stat'							
@@ -1341,7 +1341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 3':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
 	end		
-	'Fedor walks you home and you both spend the whole time talking about the movie and some future films you both want to see. After a few minutes you are right in front of your building and Fedor gives your ass a grab as he says, to you "<<$pcs_firstname>> I hope you had as much fun as I had. I can''t wait to see you again." You respond, "Don''t worry Fedor, You won''t have to wait long." as you kiss him and then walk away with a confident smile.'
+	'Fedor walks you home and you both spend the whole time talking about the movie and some future films you both want to see. After a few minutes you are right in front of your building and Fedor gives your ass a grab as he says, to you "<<$pcs_firstname>> I hope you had as much fun as I had. I can''t wait to see you again." You respond, "Don''t worry Fedor, you won''t have to wait long." as you kiss him and then walk away with a confident smile.'
 	*nl	
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/kiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 

locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3Way':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You scold Fedor and as you state "I''m not that kind of girl Fedor!" He stammers as he responds, "I didn''t mean to imply that you... I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan then responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>. It was just a joke. I wouldn''t want to come in between you...Or would I?" he then laughs as he walks away. You get dressed then grab Fedor by the hand. "It''s alright Fedor, I know you care for me, so I''m willing to look past this." as you give Fedor a sweet smile while leading him to the livingroom.'
+			'You scold Fedor and as you state "I''m not that kind of girl Fedor!" He stammers as he responds, "I didn''t mean to imply that you... I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan then responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>. It was just a joke. I wouldn''t want to come in between you... or would I?" he then laughs as he walks away. You get dressed then grab Fedor by the hand. "It''s alright Fedor, I know you care for me, so I''m willing to look past this." as you give Fedor a sweet smile while leading him to the livingroom.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			
 			act 'Go with Fedor':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Home 2'
@@ -301,9 +301,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way1':
 					IvanPregChat = 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed4.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick and Fedor responds, "Sure thing." Ivan then turns to Fedor. "You''re gonna get <<$pcs_nickname>> pregnant...Well If that''s what you want but don''t go asking me to babysit for you." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat while you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of you, causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed.'
+					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick and Fedor responds, "Sure thing." Ivan then turns to Fedor. "You''re gonna get <<$pcs_nickname>> pregnant... well If that''s what you want but don''t go asking me to babysit for you." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat while you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of you, causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed.'
 					*nl
-					'You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan talking. "Dude I can''t believe you''re already knocking up a girl. Do your parents know?" Fedor shakes his head. "Nah man, You have to keep quiet about this or my mother will freak out." Ivan responds, "No problem man but I''d be more worried about <<$pcs_firstname>>''s parents finding out, if I were you" Fedor remains silent as Ivan pats him on the back. "Don''t let it get it you down. I''m sure It will all work out in the end." and then he gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor sits still for a second before turning to you. "Let''s get you washed up <<$pcs_nickname>>." then carries you to the bathroom.'
+					'You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan talking. "Dude I can''t believe you''re already knocking up a girl. Do your parents know?" Fedor shakes his head. "Nah man, you have to keep quiet about this or my mother will freak out." Ivan responds, "No problem man but I''d be more worried about <<$pcs_firstname>>''s parents finding out, if I were you" Fedor remains silent as Ivan pats him on the back. "Don''t let it get it you down. I''m sure It will all work out in the end." and then he gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor sits still for a second before turning to you. "Let''s get you washed up <<$pcs_nickname>>." then carries you to the bathroom.'
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way2':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You turn to Ivan, letting Fedors dick slide out of your mouth but then extend your hand to jerk him off as you respond, "I want you both to fill me up." Ivan grins. "Hell yeah <<$pcs_firstname>> I''ll fill you up real good." he then rapidly increases his pace and soon Ivan grabs your hips tightly as he pumps his load into your ass, doing his best to fill your ass to the brim with his seed. Soon after Fedor groans as he shoots his load down your throat which you swallow obediently, savoring every drop. When they both finish with you, they begin chatting with each other. "<<$pcs_nickname>> is a great catch. You need to hold onto this one Fey."'
 				*nl
-				'Fedor responds, "Don''t worry, I don''t plan on letting her go, She is my number one girl." as he gently rubs your ass. Ivan gets dressed then leaves the room and Fedor turns to you "You''re a great girl. I hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did." You reply, "I had a wonderful time getting fucked by 2 strong men." Fedor smiles as he kisses you on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
+				'Fedor responds, "Don''t worry, I don''t plan on letting her go, she is my number one girl." as he gently rubs your ass. Ivan gets dressed then leaves the room and Fedor turns to you "You''re a great girl. I hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did." You reply, "I had a wonderful time getting fucked by 2 strong men." Fedor smiles as he kisses you on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A3'
@@ -511,9 +511,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way3':
 							IvanPregChat = 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/double.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'"I want both of you to fill me up at the same time. Think you can do that?" Fedor nods and Ivan has a puzzled look on his face as he says, "Uhh sure, I''m down." as he picks up the pace. You lay in between Ivan and Fedor completely in a trance of pleasure, waiting for them to finish and soon enough you hear them groan as you feel a warm rush filling both your anus and womb simultaneously, causing all of you to let out a perfectly in sync moan as they pump their seed into both of your holes. While you are catching your breath Ivan pulls out from under you and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>> I trust that you are you on the pill...right?"'
+							'"I want both of you to fill me up at the same time. Think you can do that?" Fedor nods and Ivan has a puzzled look on his face as he says, "Uhh sure, I''m down." as he picks up the pace. You lay in between Ivan and Fedor completely in a trance of pleasure, waiting for them to finish and soon enough you hear them groan as you feel a warm rush filling both your anus and womb simultaneously, causing all of you to let out a perfectly in sync moan as they pump their seed into both of your holes. While you are catching your breath Ivan pulls out from under you and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>> I trust that you are on the pill... right?"'
 							*nl
-							'You lower your head and turn away as you hesitantly reply, "Well...Not exactly..." Ivan shoots Fedor a shocked look. "Fedor you are intentionally getting <<$pcs_firstname>> pregnant?!" Fedor scratches the back of his neck as he responds, "Yeah we''ve both decided to take our relationship to the next level." Ivan says, "I hope you both know what you are doing. I trust that you will both find a way to make it work." as he gets dressed and leaves the house. Fedor slowly turns to you "I know things will work out great for us." You respond, "Of course it will. Nothing can tear us apart." Fedor gives you a kiss on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
+							'You lower your head and turn away as you hesitantly reply, "Well... Not exactly..." Ivan shoots Fedor a shocked look. "Fedor you are intentionally getting <<$pcs_firstname>> pregnant?!" Fedor scratches the back of his neck as he responds, "Yeah we''ve both decided to take our relationship to the next level." Ivan says, "I hope you both know what you are doing. I trust that you will both find a way to make it work." as he gets dressed and leaves the house. Fedor slowly turns to you "I know things will work out great for us." you respond, "Of course it will. Nothing can tear us apart." Fedor gives you a kiss on your forehead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
 							*nl
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum8.mp4"></video></center>'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Livingroom 2':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/livingroom/sex/sofa6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"Pull out and cover me with your cum." Fedor begins picking up his pace, clearly trying to finish as quickly as possible and after a few seconds he pulls out of you and begins spraying his cum all over your chest and stomach as you grab onto his dick doing your best to milk him dry while feeling the squirt of warm cum covering you body. You continue milking him until he''s finished and then rub all the cum off his dick while rubbing it all over your chest, enjoying the warmth. Once you''re done, Fedor admires your body, covered in his cum. "You really seem to love my cum. Don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You respond, "Of course I do, Your cum is just the moisturizer I need to keep my skin nice and...moist for you." You and Fedor begin laughing as he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom to clean up.'
+				'"Pull out and cover me with your cum." Fedor begins picking up his pace, clearly trying to finish as quickly as possible and after a few seconds he pulls out of you and begins spraying his cum all over your chest and stomach as you grab onto his dick doing your best to milk him dry while feeling the squirt of warm cum covering you body. You continue milking him until he''s finished and then rub all the cum off his dick while rubbing it all over your chest, enjoying the warmth. Once you''re done, Fedor admires your body, covered in his cum. "You really seem to love my cum. Don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" you respond, "Of course I do, your cum is just the moisturizer I need to keep my skin nice and... moist for you." You and Fedor begin laughing as he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom to clean up.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum110.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy, 1
@@ -1063,9 +1063,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom Cam':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/cam/no2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shoot Fedor a firm stare "I said <b>NO!</b>" Fedor recoils back and then you take a deep breath then tell Fedor "It''s not that I don''t trust you but someone could swipe or even hack your phone then share the video with all their friends or even upload it online."'
-			'Fedor nods "I understand....You are just worried that the camera will add 200 pounds to you, Aren''t you?"'
-			'You laugh as you push him against the counter almost knocking him down on it as you reply "I''m just worried that your fat head will get in the way and ruin the whole video." You and Fedor burst into laughter as he closes the camera and winks at you as he walks out of the bathroom.'
-			
+			'Fedor nods "I understand... You are just worried that the camera will add 200 pounds to you, aren''t you?"'
+			'You laugh as you push him against the counter, almost knocking him down on it as you reply "I''m just worried that your fat head will get in the way and ruin the whole video." You and Fedor burst into laughter as he closes the camera and winks at you as he walks out of the bathroom.'
 			act 'Wash up':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Quick Wash'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1297,7 +1296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/sex3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Fedor nods as he thrusts inside you a few more times then pulls out, covering your chest with his cum as you reach out and start jerking his dick, milking him as best you can while moaning as you feel his warm seed covering your chest. After Fedor finishes spraying you with his load, He looks down at you and says, "You''re really good at milking. Were you raised on a farm or something?" You give him a smirk as you reply, "No, I''ve never milked cows, only men." He breaks out in laughter and then responds, "Not too many men I hope." You turn away from Fedor as you say, "Well a girl doesn''t kiss and tell." he smirks and gives you a playful stare before getting dressed and walking out of the bathroom.'
+				'Fedor nods as he thrusts inside you a few more times then pulls out, covering your chest with his cum as you reach out and start jerking his dick, milking him as best you can while moaning as you feel his warm seed covering your chest. After Fedor finishes spraying you with his load, he looks down at you and says, "You''re really good at milking. Were you raised on a farm or something?" You give him a smirk as you reply, "No, I''ve never milked cows, only men." He breaks out in laughter and then responds, "Not too many men I hope." You turn away from Fedor as you say, "Well a girl doesn''t kiss and tell." he smirks and gives you a playful stare before getting dressed and walking out of the bathroom.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $boy, 1
@@ -1770,7 +1769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/lick'+rand(2,3)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch every time your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re...driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on mush longer"'
+			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch everytime your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re... driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on much longer"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1810,7 +1809,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You let out a smile as you greatly increase the pace almost fucking his dick with your throat while trying to hold back from gagging. Fedor''s head quickly jerks back as his cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his cum. You can feel Fedor''s warm cum squirting down your throat and leaking from your lips as you do your best to swallow every single drop, not wanting to waste a drop of Fedor''s sweet necter. When Fedor finishes, He looks down to you and says, "You really are amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s time for your reward."'
+				'You let out a smile as you greatly increase the pace almost fucking his dick with your throat while trying to hold back from gagging. Fedor''s head quickly jerks back as his cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his cum. You can feel Fedor''s warm cum squirting down your throat and leaking from your lips as you do your best to swallow every single drop, not wanting to waste a drop of Fedor''s sweet necter. When Fedor finishes, he looks down to you and says, "You really are amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s time for your reward."'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy, 1
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -2051,7 +2050,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 2':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/ride2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'As you continue riding Fedor, He wraps his arms around your legs and pulls you toward him, so that he is basically carrying you. Feeling Fedor''s strong arms holding you up, increases your excitement, knowing that he is in control of the pace despite you being on top. Fedor gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you fuck like an energized bunny." You respond, "Well this bunny is yours to fuck anytime you want, babe." His eyes light up as he responds "You always know just what to say." Fedor then gives you a few more thrusts before saying "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m ready to cum for you, so tell me how you want it."'
+			'As you continue riding Fedor, he wraps his arms around your legs and pulls you toward him, so that he is basically carrying you. Feeling Fedor''s strong arms holding you up, increases your excitement, knowing that he is in control of the pace despite you being on top. Fedor gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you fuck like an energized bunny." You respond, "Well this bunny is yours to fuck anytime you want, babe." His eyes light up as he responds "You always know just what to say." Fedor then gives you a few more thrusts before saying "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m ready to cum for you, so tell me how you want it."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2231,7 +2230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Shower 2':
 	act 'Leave shower and jerk him off':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/shower/shower.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You climb out of the shower without ever breaking eye contact then walk up to Fedor until you are both face to face, You then kneel in front of him and begin massaging his penis with your hand and his balls with the other which causes Fedor to moan as he leans forward, bringing his face to yours then kisses your lips as you continue gently stroking his penis.'
+		'You climb out of the shower without ever breaking eye contact then walk up to Fedor until you are both face to face, you then kneel in front of him and begin massaging his penis with your hand and his balls with the other which causes Fedor to moan as he leans forward, bringing his face to yours then kisses your lips as you continue gently stroking his penis.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2569,7 +2568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/fedorhome/bedroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'Fedor''s bedroom is very neat, It has a bed, a computer desk with a chair and a <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>, where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing.'
+	'Fedor''s bedroom is very neat, it has a bed, a computer desk with a chair and a <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>, where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing.'
 	if FedorLove = 1:
 		'Fedor has a <a href="exec:gt ''FedorEv4'', ''Picture''">framed picture</a> by his bed.'
 	end
@@ -2601,7 +2600,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Picture':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-	'Fedor has framed the picture he took of you and placed it by his bed with your name on the frame. After seeing the picture by his bed, you can''t help but think to yourself. "That''s so sweet. I must mean a lot to him...Ohh Fyodor." you then place the picture back.'
+	'Fedor has framed the picture he took of you and placed it by his bed with your name on the frame. After seeing the picture by his bed, you can''t help but think to yourself. "That''s so sweet. I must mean a lot to him... ohh Fedor." you then place the picture back.'
 
 	act 'Step away':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 end
@@ -2849,7 +2848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Regina Intro':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="#FF00FF"><<"Regina Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/fedorhome/regina.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Fedor''s mother and her eyes light up when she sees you. "Ahh, you must be <<$pcs_firstname>>. Fedor told me a bit about you but I can never get that boy to talk to me about anything. So how serious are things between you two? Ohh but where are my manners? My name is Regina. I am Fyodor''s mother. I have been looking forward to meeting my son''s first girlfriend." You tilt your head as you reply, "His first?" Regina replies, "Well yes. Fyodor usually spends too much time in front of that TV or with his friend Ivan. His father always lectures that boy about not being more active, that is...when he''s here... Anyway, I''ve droned on for long enough. Would you like me to make you something to eat?"'
+	'You approach Fedor''s mother and her eyes light up when she sees you. "Ahh, you must be <<$pcs_firstname>>. Fedor told me a bit about you but I can never get that boy to talk to me about anything. So how serious are things between you two? Ohh but where are my manners? My name is Regina. I am Fyodor''s mother. I have been looking forward to meeting my son''s first girlfriend." You tilt your head as you reply, "His first?" Regina replies, "Well yes. Fedor usually spends too much time in front of that TV or with his friend Ivan. His father always lectures that boy about not being more active, that is... when he''s here anyway, I''ve droned on for long enough. Would you like me to make you something to eat?"'
 
 	act 'No thank you':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Kitchen'
 	act 'Only if it''s no trouble':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Dinner 1'
@@ -3199,7 +3198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Love Talk Strela 2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next ot Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With tears streaming down his cheeks Fedor responds, "I can''t get that day out of my head. I was completely helpless as those...Fuckers took everything away from me...my reputation, my friends and my girl..." You lay down next to him "You never lost your girl. I''ll always be here with you." He wraps his arm around your neck but remains silent, so you decide to break the silence. "Fedor I know what happened to you was horrible but I never thought less of you, not even for one second. You are the man I want to be with and nothing will change that."'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With tears streaming down his cheeks Fedor responds, "I can''t get that day out of my head. I was completely helpless as those... fuckers... took everything away from me, my reputation, my friends and my girl..." You lay down next to him "You never lost your girl. I''ll always be here with you." He wraps his arm around your neck but remains silent, so you decide to break the silence. "Fedor I know what happened to you was horrible but I never thought less of you, not even for one second. You are the man I want to be with and nothing will change that."'
 	*nl
 	'Fedor lets out a mild smile as he continues staring at the ceiling and after a few seconds responds, "You are the greatest gift I can ever ask for and I''m so glad I met you. <<$pcs_firstname>> you are the perfect girl and I will always strive to be the best boyfriend you can ever have." You lightly kiss his cheek as you reply, "You are already the best boyfriend I could ever have." Fedor quickly turns to you and kisses your lips very passionately.'
 	*nl
@@ -3238,14 +3237,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Future':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look Fedor in the eyes. "I have always wanted to one day...be a mother and I was thinking that maybe we could...have a baby together." Fedor''s eyes widen and his jaw lowers. "You want... You want us to? I don''t know. That''s a very big step. Are you sure you want this?"'
+			'You look Fedor in the eyes. "I have always wanted to one day... be a mother and I was thinking that maybe we could... have a baby together." Fedor''s eyes widen and his jaw lowers. "You want... You want us to? I don''t know. That''s a very big step. Are you sure you want this?"'
 
 			act 'I''m sure':
 				*clr & cla
 				FedorLoveTalk = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-				'You give Fedor a light kiss then reply, "I''m positive. I want you to be the father of my child so...what do you think? Would you like to be a father?" Fedor thinks it over for a few seconds then responds, "I care for you so much and would love to start a family with you. Whenever you feel ready to try for a baby then let me know." You lean forward and give Fedor a passionate kiss before responding "Thank you so much Fyodor. I''m sure any child we make together will be perfect."'
+				'You give Fedor a light kiss then reply, "I''m positive. I want you to be the father of my child so... what do you think? Would you like to be a father?" Fedor thinks it over for a few seconds then responds, "I care for you so much and would love to start a family with you. Whenever you feel ready to try for a baby then let me know." You lean forward and give Fedor a passionate kiss before responding "Thank you so much Fyodor. I''m sure any child we make together will be perfect."'
 
 				act 'Get up':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Fedor Bedroom'
 			end
@@ -3325,7 +3324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Private Chat':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then ask, "Can we talk for a moment...In private?" Fedor turns to you with a concerned look on his face. "Of course <<$pcs_firstname>>. Let''s head to my room where we can talk in private." Fedor takes your hand then leads you to the bedroom.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then ask, "Can we talk for a moment... in private?" Fedor turns to you with a concerned look on his face. "Of course <<$pcs_firstname>>. Let''s head to my room where we can talk in private." Fedor takes your hand then leads you to the bedroom.'
 
 	act 'Follow Fedor to his bedroom':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Dimka Help'
 end
@@ -3336,7 +3335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Shelter':
 	FedorShelter = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor...I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor... I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3374,9 +3373,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka Help':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I...well...Dimka has a video of me and I need to know if you can help me get it back or erase it." Fedor frowns as he asks "Have you been having an affair with him?" You reply, "No. He blackmailed me into doing something...dirty and he filmed me. I''m sorry that I didn''t tell you about this before but I needed to know for sure that I could trust you not to share the video." Fedor places his finger under your chin and raises your face to meet his as he replies, "I understand <<$pcs_firstname>> and don''t worry, we will get that video from Dimka even if I have to beat it out of him. I never liked that cocky like punk anyway."'
+		'"I... well... Dimka has a video of me and I need to know if you can help me get it back or erase it." Fedor frowns as he asks "Have you been having an affair with him?" You reply, "No. He blackmailed me into doing something... dirty and he filmed me. I''m sorry that I didn''t tell you about this before but I needed to know for sure that I could trust you not to share the video." Fedor places his finger under your chin and raises your face to meet his as he replies, "I understand <<$pcs_firstname>> and don''t worry, we will get that video from Dimka even if I have to beat it out of him. I never liked that cocky like punk anyway."'
 		*nl
-		'You remain speechless for a few seconds before you respond, "Ohh thank you Fyodor. I thought that he was going to keep blackmailing me forever." Fedor gives you a kiss on the forehead. "You have nothing to fear with me around. Meet me after school and we''ll deal with that punk together." Fedor then gives you a long passionate kiss.'
+		'You remain speechless for a few seconds before you respond, "Ohh thank you Fedor. I thought that he was going to keep blackmailing me forever." Fedor gives you a kiss on the forehead. "You have nothing to fear with me around. Meet me after school and we''ll deal with that punk together." Fedor then gives you a long passionate kiss.'
 
 		act 'Get out of bed':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 	end	

locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Workout':
 		FedorWorkout = 1
 		minut += 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Fedor begins doing push ups as you do a few yourself until you look up and see him grinning at you as he says, "Would you like to see me do 45 push ups in 2 minutes?" You respond, "Only if I can ride your back as you do it." Fedor tilts his head as his grin widens. "Challenge accepted." you then climb on his back and he lift you both in repeated cycles. You can feel his muscles tighten as he lifts and his heartbeat gradually increase as he lifts you on his back. Fedor finally reaches 45 push ups then lowers his body to the ground where he lays with you still on his back. "So <<$pcs_nickname>>...Impressed?" You reply "Yes very, I''m a lucky girl to have such a strong man to myself." Fedor winks then gets up and walks toward his bag.'
+		'Fedor begins doing push ups as you do a few yourself until you look up and see him grinning at you as he says, "Would you like to see me do 45 push ups in 2 minutes?" You respond, "Only if I can ride your back as you do it." Fedor tilts his head as his grin widens. "Challenge accepted." you then climb on his back and he lift you both in repeated cycles. You can feel his muscles tighten as he lifts and his heartbeat gradually increase as he lifts you on his back. Fedor finally reaches 45 push ups then lowers his body to the ground where he lays with you still on his back. "So <<$pcs_nickname>>... impressed?" You reply "Yes very, I''m a lucky girl to have such a strong man to myself." Fedor winks then gets up and walks toward his bag.'
 		*nl
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/gym/strength1.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast Intro':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Fyodor [Masha] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast1.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you approach Fedor, he turns to you with a distraught look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>>... What are you doing here. I bet Viktor will be upset with us both if he sees you with me." You reply, "Viktor doesn''t own me. I came here to check on you." Fedor responds, "How did you know to find me here." You give Fedor a sweet smile as you reply, "On our first date since hooking up, You told me that this is where you go when you are feeling down." Fedor returns the smile. "You remembered? I always knew you were one of the good ones."'
+			'As you approach Fedor, he turns to you with a distraught look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>>... What are you doing here. I bet Viktor will be upset with us both if he sees you with me." You reply, "Viktor doesn''t own me. I came here to check on you." Fedor responds, "How did you know to find me here." You give Fedor a sweet smile as you reply, "On our first date since hooking up, you told me that this is where you go when you are feeling down." Fedor returns the smile. "You remembered? I always knew you were one of the good ones."'
 
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast':
 	if VK = 1:
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/parkalone'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walk toward the train tracks to see Fedor, He seems to be lost in thought.'
+		'You walk toward the train tracks to see Fedor, he seems to be lost in thought.'
 	else
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/parkalone'+rand(4,5)+'.jpg"></center>'

locations/HotelHole.qsrc

@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 					'It looks like <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>> is drunk.'
 					'"You will never disobey me? right <<$pcs_firstname>> ? "'
 					'"Your face is so pretty, I really don''t want to mess that up"'
-					'"What are you saying <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>>? stop that , you are scaring me."'
+					'"What are you saying <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>>? stop that, you are scaring me."'
 					'"What ? I give you a compliment and you get scared. You don''t have to fear me, I wouldn''t hurt a fly."'
 					'<<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>> had too much to drink and he is only talking nonsense.'
 				end
@@ -1024,9 +1024,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 									'You slowly open your eyes'
 									'"<<$pitfs>>Where am I?<<$pitfe>>" Your vision is blurry and you have to blink several times to clear it.'
 									'You find yourself lying on a soft bed. You look around and see a sterile white room with a woman in light blue scrubs standing with her back to you. Your mind pieces together the clues and you realize this is the hospital.'
-									'"H..hello?" You choke out the word, trying to get the nurse''s attention.'
+									'"H-hello?" You choke out the word, trying to get the nurse''s attention.'
 									'The nurse turns around, slightly startled, and says, "Oh you are awake. Just one minute, I will get the doctor for you." The nurse quickly exits the room.'
-
 									gs 'medical_din', 'remove_preg'
 									abortionbirthdate = daystart
 									unintendedabort = 1

locations/LBZhouse.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/handjob/hj0.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You slowly lower to your knees in front of him then raise your hand, wrapping your fingers around his hard shaft, causing his eyes immediately squint as he welcomes your hand on his cock. Seeing his excitement you begin stroking his cock gently while looking up at him. His cock lightly throbs a bits as you stroke it and it even leaks a bit with precum. You continue stroking his hard cock as he lightly moans , occasionally moving his hips with your strokes. After a few more seconds, <<$boydesc>> starts to pant heavily then says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, slow down, I''m about to cum."'
+			'You slowly lower to your knees in front of him then raise your hand, wrapping your fingers around his hard shaft, causing his eyes immediately squint as he welcomes your hand on his cock. Seeing his excitement you begin stroking his cock gently while looking up at him. His cock lightly throbs a bits as you stroke it and it even leaks a bit with precum. You continue stroking his hard cock as he lightly moans, occasionally moving his hips with your strokes. After a few more seconds, <<$boydesc>> starts to pant heavily then says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, slow down, I''m about to cum."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 

locations/LariskaHome.qsrc

@@ -1085,7 +1085,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dog_1':
 		'You spread your legs and take the vibrator out of your pussy, letting out a slight moan as you do so. You feel somewhat empty now.'
 	end
 	if vaginal_slip < 4: gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'vag'
-	'Going down onto your hands and knees, You look over your shoulder at Lariska and wag your ass seductively. Smiling at you, Lariska starts by rubbing the tip along your slit, making you moan in anticipation. Done teasing, she lines herself up and starts pushing it in.'
+	'Going down onto your hands and knees, you look over your shoulder at Lariska and wag your ass seductively. Smiling at you, Lariska starts by rubbing the tip along your slit, making you moan in anticipation. Done teasing, she lines herself up and starts pushing it in.'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
 		'She pushes the strap-on back inside, and you feel something inside of you rip. You know it was your hymen, you are no longer a virgin.'
 	end

locations/MagEncounterFairy.qsrc

@@ -232,11 +232,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fairychattopic':
 			!show and teach Teleport spell
 			'The Fairy wraps her arms around your thumb and lightly tugs you over to a mysterious circle of trees.'
 			''
-			'She says, "You may have seen these circles of trees around the lands.  Fairies planted them long ago and used their magic to tether them together.  Since you also have Fae magic, I can show you how to use them."'
+			'She says, "You may have seen these circles of trees around the lands. Fairies planted them long ago and used their magic to tether them together. Since you also have Fae magic, I can show you how to use them."'
 			''
-			'She continues,"Most of the work was already done in the binding.  In a way, the trees of each circle are the same trees.  You just have to stand inside the circle, then hold in your mind a picture of another circle that you have been to before.  Then you say the word <i>inla</i>.  If your will is strong enough and you have enough magical energy, your energy can be used to enact your will."'
+			'She continues, "Most of the work was already done in the binding. In a way, the trees of each circle are the same trees. You just have to stand inside the circle, then hold in your mind a picture of another circle that you have been to before. Then you say the word <i>inla</i>. If your will is strong enough and you have enough magical energy, your energy can be used to enact your will."'
 			''
-			'She giggles.  "This lets you dance through any field you like!  "Let''s go!"'
+			'She giggles. "This lets you dance through any field you like! "Let''s go!"'
 			''
 			'She grunts and give you a nudge into the circle.'
 			act 'Stumble into Circle':

locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
+	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
 		
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/natalia.jpg"></center>'			
-				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back, as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
+				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back, as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up... naked at school?"'
 
 				act 'Return to your story':	
 					*clr & cla
@@ -64,14 +64,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lightly grip your hair, as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up, and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
+							'You lightly grip your hair, as you respond, "I just... need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up, and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
 
 							act 'Watch <<$VK_VikName>> leave':	
 								*clr & cla
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-	'You quickly jump up, and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead, as she responds,"Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
+	'You quickly jump up, and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead, as she responds, "Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
 	*nl
 	'You both giggle before Katja tells you, "Natalia has some activity that she thinks we will all enjoy. It''s hard to imagine what she has planned but who knows? It might be fun. Anyway you should get yourself washed up. A nice relaxing bath can work wonders for the body and mind. You should also see Vicky when you have the chance. She will be pleased to see you up.' 
 	if NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the kitchen, as Katja, and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen, as Katja, and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow... that''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
 	
 	act 'Finish eating':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat 4':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>>  smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
+	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>> smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
 	*nl
 	'where you spend all of your time doing what you think others want you to do. Not enough people just says fuck that and do what they want. Try not to be one of those people <<$pcs_nickname>>. Be what you want to be. Nothing else matters. Only you and whoever you decide to let in. Be it a friend a boyfriend or even a girlfriend. I don''t judge. Just be happy with what you want and who you are. Don''t let anyone get in the way of that okay?" You nod your head and continue dancing as you ponder what <<$VK_VikName>> said. After a few more minutes of dancing, <<$VK_VikName>> begins breathing heavy as she grows tired. She then spins 4 times before falling face first into her bed and not getting up. You walk over to her radio then turn it off so that <<$VK_VikName>> can get some sleep.'
 	
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat 5':
 	'You approach Vicky but she seems fast asleep. Not wanting to disturb her, you carefully walk out of the room.'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Hallway'	
-end		
+end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Reminder':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/Natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit, and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
+	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit, and I wanted to ask you... would you like to walk home with me?"'
 
 	act 'I would love to':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big240.jpg"></center>'
-	'You, and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home.  When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia, as she walks away.'
+	'You, and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home. When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia, as she walks away.'
 	
 	act 'Enter your apartment':gt 'korrPar'
 end	
@@ -791,7 +791,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 	*clr & cla	
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'  	
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes, as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red, as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia, and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs'stat'	
@@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kat Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end
@@ -1043,7 +1043,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end

locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/Charmer1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You...You may.."' 
+							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You... you may..."' 
 							
 							act 'Kiss Niko':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You downcast your eyes, feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face 1 inch from yours. "So what can I do for you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You finally get your courage to tell him. "I want you to...kiss me." Niko responds, "As you wish m''lady."'
+							'You downcast your eyes, feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face 1 inch from yours. "So what can I do for you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You finally get your courage to tell him. "I want you to... kiss me." Niko responds, "As you wish m''lady."'
 							
 							act 'Kiss Niko':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 						inhib_exp += 1
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/cover.jpg"></center>'
-						'You suddenly hear Niko snapping pictures with his phone, causing you to quickly cover yourself and face Niko as you exclaim, "I didn''t agree to taking pictures." Niko gives you a meek smile as he responds, "It will be okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. I will never let these pictures get out, honestly. I just need to preserve this beautiful moment that I am spending with you. Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, let me take a few photos...for us."'
+						'You suddenly hear Niko snapping pictures with his phone, causing you to quickly cover yourself and face Niko as you exclaim, "I didn''t agree to taking pictures." Niko gives you a meek smile as he responds, "It will be okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. I will never let these pictures get out, honestly. I just need to preserve this beautiful moment that I am spending with you. Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, let me take a few photos... for us."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
 						
 						act 'Agree':
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 								minut += 5
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence...yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
+								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence... yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
 								act 'Follow Niko':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Home Sad'
 							end
 						else
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko shows you how to properly catch fish for a few minutes. You turn to Niko then say, "You make this look so easy. Where did you learn to fish?" Niko smiles as he replies, "My father used to always teach me when I was little." You ask, "Where is he now? Do you still live with him?" Niko replies, "No...he passed away a few years ago." You respond, "I''m sorry to hear that. Were you two close?" Niko replies, "I rarely saw him. He was always so focused on his studies." '
+		'Niko shows you how to properly catch fish for a few minutes. You turn to Niko then say, "You make this look so easy. Where did you learn to fish?" Niko smiles as he replies, "My father used to always teach me when I was little." You ask, "Where is he now? Do you still live with him?" Niko replies, "No... he passed away a few years ago." You respond, "I''m sorry to hear that. Were you two close?" Niko replies, "I rarely saw him. He was always so focused on his studies." '
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You ask, "Was he a teacher?" Niko replies, "No he was a psychiatrist who was obsessed with finding a cure for psychosis." You tilt your head as you respond, "What could have made him so absorbed by that?" Niko takes a deep breath then replies, "My little brother was diagnosed with psychosis and he was always screaming to himself in his room. My father didn''t want him put in an asylum, so he had to keep him in the house to protect him and everyone else from him. My sister Matilda was really upset. She and Eduard were very close before he was diagnosed. My brother and I did our best to console her and help keep her mind off of our little brother." You place your hand on Niko''s shoulder then ask, "Did she ever move on from her loss?"'
 			*nl
-			'Niko remains silent for a few seconds before responding, "She died...My big brother only needed to watch her for a few minutes, but of course he was too distracted by that Bitch Vio..." You place your hand on his shoulder, causing him to calm down before continuing, "His girlfriend distracted him and he didn''t see our sister run onto the street chasing after our spooked cat then... A car came out of nowhere and she...She didn''t survive. All because of Yurik! One fucking job to do and he failed it!"'
+			'Niko remains silent for a few seconds before responding, "She died... my big brother only needed to watch her for a few minutes, but of course he was too distracted by that Bitch Vio..." You place your hand on his shoulder, causing him to calm down before continuing, "His girlfriend distracted him and he didn''t see our sister run onto the street chasing after our spooked cat then... a car came out of nowhere and she... she didn''t survive. All because of Yurik! One fucking job to do and he failed it!"'
 
 			act 'Place your hand on his shoulder':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Niko takes a long breath and remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then saying, "Never mind. It was a long time ago and I have moved on, so wanna try something interesting?" You raise an eyebrow as you reply, "What do you have in mind?" Niko unbuttons his pants then says, "I am really feeling stressed right now and if you can help me relax then I would be so grateful. Can you please do this little favor for me <<$pcs_firstname>>?...Please." Niko gives you an innocent frown.'
+				'Niko takes a long breath and remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then saying, "Never mind. It was a long time ago and I have moved on, so wanna try something interesting?" You raise an eyebrow as you reply, "What do you have in mind?" Niko unbuttons his pants and then says, "I am really feeling stressed right now and if you can help me relax then I would be so grateful. Can you please do this little favor for me <<$pcs_firstname>>?... please." Niko gives you an innocent frown.'
 
 				act 'Sure':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your...family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who...passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my brother and I have never really spoken much, at least not without it ending in a fight.'
+			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your... family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who... passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my brother and I have never really spoken much, at least not without it ending in a fight.'
 
 			act 'Continue listening':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 																	*clr & cla
 																	gs'stat'															
 																	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d9.jpg"></center>'
-																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, You ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
+																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, you ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
 
 																	act 'Wait for ice cream':
 																		*clr & cla
@@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Burly Bearded Man">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/Niko/yurikev/avatars/yurik.jpg"></center>'
-		'You turn around to see a man standing across the room from you; covered in tattoos. You take a closer look and recognize him as the burly bearded man that attacked you before. You gasp, "You''re the one that attacked me." The bearded man chuckles as he replies, "Oh yeah. You''re the girl that Nikolai is dating, He got you here a lot quicker than I thought. That boy works fast, I see." The man approaches you as you let out a scream, causing Niko to storm into the room.'
+		'You turn around to see a man standing across the room from you; covered in tattoos. You take a closer look and recognize him as the burly bearded man that attacked you before. You gasp, "You''re the one that attacked me." The bearded man chuckles as he replies, "Oh yeah. You''re the girl that Nikolai is dating, he got you here a lot quicker than I thought. That boy works fast, I see." The man approaches you as you let out a scream, causing Niko to storm into the room.'
 
 		act 'See what Niko does':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -929,14 +929,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-					'After Yurik angrily storms out of the room, Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder and says, "Oh that brother of mine, he is such a wild card. Are you alright?" You pull away from him, "What did he mean by <font color=#FF00FF>gift</font>? You didn''t send him after me, did you?" Niko chuckles for a few seconds before replying, "Of course not, He was just talking... about a bet we had a few days ago which I promised him 50 ruble if he won an arm wrestling contest. That''s all, really." You stare him in the eyes for a few seconds.'
+					'After Yurik angrily storms out of the room, Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder and says, "Oh that brother of mine, he is such a wild card. Are you alright?" You pull away from him, "What did he mean by <font color=#FF00FF>gift</font>? You didn''t send him after me, did you?" Niko chuckles for a few seconds before replying, "Of course not, he was just talking... about a bet we had a few days ago which I promised him 50 ruble if he won an arm wrestling contest. That''s all, really." You stare him in the eyes for a few seconds.'
 
 					act 'Listen to Niko':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'						
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer3.jpg"></center>'					
-						'Niko''s posture lowers as he tells you, "I know it sounds hard to believe, but please try to believe me. I would never do anything to harm you. You mean everything to me <<$pcs_firstname>>. All the time I have spent with you has been the greatest time in my life...Please <<$pcs_firstname>>. I love you." Niko lifts your hands to his face and begins kissing them repeatedly.'
+						'Niko''s posture lowers as he tells you, "I know it sounds hard to believe, but please try to believe me. I would never do anything to harm you. You mean everything to me <<$pcs_firstname>>. All the time I have spent with you has been the greatest time in my life... please <<$pcs_firstname>>. I love you." Niko lifts your hands to his face and begins kissing them repeatedly.'
 
 						act 'I believe you':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head as you say, "I''m not falling for it Niko. I know that you''ve been lying to me and to have your brother attack me...Why? To make you look tough?"' 
+								'You shake your head as you say, "I''m not falling for it Niko. I know that you''ve been lying to me and to have your brother attack me... why? To make you look tough?"' 
 								
 								act 'See Niko''s response':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -1038,7 +1038,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hallway Strip':
 			inhib_exp += 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/strip/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There...I took off my top...I feel more daring now..Thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
+			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There... I took off my top... I feel more daring now... thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs'stat'
 			
@@ -1246,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You happily take the bottle then give Niko a wink. You both take a seat and begin chatting about various topics as Niko continues pouring you more beer. After a few minutes, You begin feeling the alcohol kicking in, causing you to feel groggy. Niko grabs on your ass and asks, "Are you up for a dance?"'
+		'You happily take the bottle then give Niko a wink. You both take a seat and begin chatting about various topics as Niko continues pouring you more beer. After a few minutes, you begin feeling the alcohol kicking in, causing you to feel groggy. Niko grabs on your ass and asks, "Are you up for a dance?"'
 
 		act 'Dance':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1334,7 +1334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 													minut += 5
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/Valentin.jpg"></center>'
-													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d...be right back. I was waiting...for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
+													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
 													
 													act 'Hear Niko''s reply':
 														*clr & cla
@@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'After School 2':
 							minut -= 3
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow4.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You suddenly hear Niko groan as he begins spraying his hot cum down your throat. You swallow it while enjoying the sting as it slides down your throat, knowing that you have fully satisfied Niko. You slowly look up to Niko, "I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." Niko recoils in shock, "Uhh, I love you too and I''m...glad you enjoy our time together." You can tell that your sudden show of affection caught Niko off guard which makes you giggle for a few seconds as Niko buttons his pants then says, "You were outstanding today. I always have a blast when I''m with you. Here are your clothes. You should get dressed before anyone sees us."'
+							'You suddenly hear Niko groan as he begins spraying his hot cum down your throat. You swallow it while enjoying the sting as it slides down your throat, knowing that you have fully satisfied Niko. You slowly look up to Niko, "I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." Niko recoils in shock, "Uhh, I love you too and I''m... glad you enjoy our time together." You can tell that your sudden show of affection caught Niko off guard which makes you giggle for a few seconds as Niko buttons his pants then says, "You were outstanding today. I always have a blast when I''m with you. Here are your clothes. You should get dressed before anyone sees us."'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A189', 1
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/ra8.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!...Don''t drop her!....Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
+							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!... Don''t drop her!... Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
 
 							act 'Turn around':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'								
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum10.mp4"></video></center>'								
-									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright?....She will be fine. She just needs some more rest....She''s moving. Do you think she is?..."'
+									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright...? She will be fine. She just needs some more rest... she''s moving. Do you think she is...?"'
 									
 									act '...':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Aftermath'
 								end	
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00>Viktoria "Vicky" Meynold</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance.. for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance.. for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
 	
@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Classroom Dream':
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'	
-		'You recoil in shock. "Wha...Me?" The teacher places both hands on the desk then says, "Of course I mean you. Do you know of any other whores that haven''t already volunteered?" You can just barely make out Sonia under the table sucking on the teacher''s dick.'
+		'You recoil in shock. "Wha... me?" The teacher places both hands on the desk then says, "Of course I mean you. Do you know of any other whores that haven''t already volunteered?" You can just barely make out Sonia under the table sucking on the teacher''s dick.'
 
 		act 'Walk to the front of the class':	
 			*clr & cla

locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/niko3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have a surprise activity for today, We could be out all afternoon. Are you up for it?"'
+	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have a surprise activity for today, we could be out all afternoon. Are you up for it?"'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Breakup':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, You disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
+	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, you disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
 
 	act 'Walk away':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -703,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Disco Breakup':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, You disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
+	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, you disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
 
 	act 'Walk away':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="maroon"><<"Dmitriy [Dimka] Nosov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko and give him a smile then see Dimka approach you before giving Niko a puzzled look. "What are you with <<$pcs_firstname>>. She is my girl." Niko gives Dimka a blank stare as he responds, "Sure she is...Why don''t you just piss off before you piss me off?" Dimka then says, "Why don''t we ask her who she''s dating?" Niko replies, "Because asking a girl to kiss and tell is rude." Dimka looks shocked as he responds, "You don''t care? But would you care if I told you that <<$pcs_nickname>> here is a cocksucker?" Niko raises an eyebrow. "Well do you have proof of that, or are you just blowing smoke?"'
+	'You walk up to Niko and give him a smile then see Dimka approach you before giving Niko a puzzled look. "What are you with <<$pcs_firstname>>. She is my girl." Niko gives Dimka a blank stare as he responds, "Sure she is... why don''t you just piss off before you piss me off?" Dimka then says, "Why don''t we ask her who she''s dating?" Niko replies, "Because asking a girl to kiss and tell is rude." Dimka looks shocked as he responds, "You don''t care? But would you care if I told you that <<$pcs_nickname>> here is a cocksucker?" Niko raises an eyebrow. "Well do you have proof of that, or are you just blowing smoke?"'
 
 	act 'See what Dimka does':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/pissoff.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Niko begins lighting his cigarette before Dimka suddenly shouts, "How dare you!? You fucking sack of shit! That was my video!" Niko gets off the wall then approaches Dimka, causing Dimka to immediately back up. Niko grabs Dimka''s face with one hand then brings it to his before blowing smoke in his face then saying, "I will give you one more chance to leave before I accept Lavrenti''s offer to make your life a living hell." Dimka quickly backs off as he says, "You''re insane!...Whatever...Keep her!" Dimka then quickly walks away.'		
+			'Niko begins lighting his cigarette before Dimka suddenly shouts, "How dare you!? You fucking sack of shit! That was my video!" Niko gets off the wall then approaches Dimka, causing Dimka to immediately back up. Niko grabs Dimka''s face with one hand then brings it to his before blowing smoke in his face then saying, "I will give you one more chance to leave before I accept Lavrenti''s offer to make your life a living hell." Dimka quickly backs off as he says, "You''re insane! Whatever... keep her!" Dimka then quickly walks away.'		
 		
 			act 'Thank Niko':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/hug1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly...Unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
+				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly... unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
 
 				if NikoEv >= 17:
 					act 'Sure thing':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Events'

locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko guides you through the park as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of...a...Crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
+	'Niko guides you through the park as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of a... a crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
 	*nl
 	'You ask, "But how much does he want exactly?" Niko replies, "Uh don''t worry about that. I will handle that when the time comes. Just know that it is a lot!" You shake your head, "How the hell will we be able to pay "A lot" to this man?"'
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters\pavlovsk\school\boy\fedor\fedorev2\home\3way/foreplay2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, You obediently switch dicks and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
+					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, you obediently switch dicks and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
 
 					act 'Continue':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Yurik Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/avatars/threaten1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continues pulling you through the hallway as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik...Just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
+						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continuous pulling you through the hallway as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik... just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Wake':
 		minut += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/bedroom/relaxing1.jpg"></center>'
-		'After relaxing for a few minutes, You get up then stretch your body before saying, "I should head home. It is getting late." Niko places his hand on your shoulder. "Will you be alright on your own?" You reply, "Of course. I''ll see you tomorrow." You lean forward and kiss Niko on the cheek before getting up, getting dressed then leaving Niko''s house.'			
+		'After relaxing for a few minutes, you get up then stretch your body before saying, "I should head home. It is getting late." Niko places his hand on your shoulder. "Will you be alright on your own?" You reply, "Of course. I''ll see you tomorrow." You lean forward and kiss Niko on the cheek before getting up, getting dressed then leaving Niko''s house.'			
 
 		act 'Walk onto the street':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'		
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'					
-					'You are quickly repulsed by the smell of it. Clearly Petia doesn''t bathe well, but you look up to Niko and see him slowly nodding at you to start, You take a deep breaths ask Petia says, "Don''t be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>. I know that you always wanted to be with me. Well now is your chance." Niko then says, "Shut the fuck up loser before I come over there and smack the shit out of you." Petia quickly silences as he rubs his dick against your lips, obviously very excited to have it sucked.' 
+					'You are quickly repulsed by the smell of it. Clearly Petia doesn''t bathe well, but you look up to Niko and see him slowly nodding at you to start, you take a deep breaths ask Petia says, "Don''t be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>. I know that you always wanted to be with me. Well now is your chance." Niko then says, "Shut the fuck up loser before I come over there and smack the shit out of you." Petia quickly silences as he rubs his dick against your lips, obviously very excited to have it sucked.' 
 					
 					act 'Suck Petia''s dick':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'			
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'Niko says, "If you have the cash then I have the girl for you. Speaking of cash..." Niko extends his hand. Petia scratches his head before saying, "I don''t exactly have it on me but I''ll be more than ha..." Niko immediately darts across the room then grabs Petia by his neck and says, "Where is the money Shithead!?" Petia suddenly replies, "Oh I.. I.. have it right here. I was just joking."  He reaches into his pocket then pulls out his wallet. Niko immediatly snatches it and takes all of the money before throwing it across the room. Petia hollers, "Hey man, you didn''t need to do that!" Niko then shoves him toward the door and Petia quickly runs out.'
+								'Niko says, "If you have the cash then I have the girl for you. Speaking of cash..." Niko extends his hand. Petia scratches his head before saying, "I don''t exactly have it on me but I''ll be more than ha..." Niko immediately darts across the room then grabs Petia by his neck and says, "Where is the money Shithead!?" Petia suddenly replies, "Oh I.. I.. have it right here. I was just joking." He reaches into his pocket then pulls out his wallet. Niko immediatly snatches it and takes all of the money before throwing it across the room. Petia hollers, "Hey man, you didn''t need to do that!" Niko then shoves him toward the door and Petia quickly runs out.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering your vagina, You feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering your vagina, you feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs'stat'	
 						
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Talk':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/smile1.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes as she says, "I''m...just happy to help." She then waves as she walk away while looking back at you.'
+		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes as she says, "I''m... just happy to help." She then waves as she walk away while looking back at you.'
 		
 		act 'Continue toward the hallway':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	end
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-			'The biker responds, "Of course I''m not interested because I''m not a fucking faggot!" Niko pauses for a second then bursts into laughter. "Oh  no. i didn''t mean....I meant my girl here, will take care of you...for a price of course." The biker chuckles for a few seconds before responding. "I see now. I thought you were hitting on me, kid. You''re lucky you weren''t, but let me take a look at her."'
+			'The biker responds, "Of course I''m not interested because I''m not a fucking faggot!" Niko pauses for a second then bursts into laughter. "Oh no, I didn''t mean... I meant my girl here, will take care of you... for a price of course." The biker chuckles for a few seconds before responding. "I see now. I thought you were hitting on me, kid. You''re lucky you weren''t, but let me take a look at her."'
 			
 			act 'Let the biker examine you':	
 				*clr & cla
@@ -992,7 +992,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik BJ':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you reach the top of the stairs, you see Niko walk out of the bathroom. Niko gives you a smile as he says, "Are you ready to head home. I''m ready to walk you home whenever you are ready." You return the smile as you nod. Niko then takes your hand then walks you out of the house, toward your apartment. When you reach your apartment Niko says,  "I had a wonderful time with you today. It is fun to sometimes relax and enjoy each other''s company isn''t it?" You nod happily as you reply, "I always enjoy being with you." Niko chuckles before responding, "You are just too sweet, anyway have a good night." Niko leans forward then gives you a kiss on the cheek before turning around and walking away.'
+						'As you reach the top of the stairs, you see Niko walk out of the bathroom. Niko gives you a smile as he says, "Are you ready to head home. I''m ready to walk you home whenever you are ready." You return the smile as you nod. Niko then takes your hand then walks you out of the house, toward your apartment. When you reach your apartment Niko says, "I had a wonderful time with you today. It is fun to sometimes relax and enjoy each other''s company isn''t it?" You nod happily as you reply, "I always enjoy being with you." Niko chuckles before responding, "You are just too sweet, anyway have a good night." Niko leans forward then gives you a kiss on the cheek before turning around and walking away.'
 						
 						act 'Enter apartment':gt 'KorrPar'	
 					end	
@@ -1033,7 +1033,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 			'Trucker2: "I wish my wife looked as good as you."'
 			'Trucker3: "Is that the girl you were talking about? The slu...." another guy shoves him in the ribs before whispering, "Watch what you say. We don''t want her to leave."'
 			*nl
-			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m...glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
+			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m... glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
 
 			act 'Give them your real name':	
 				*clr & cla

locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
 		
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
@@ -48,8 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/natalia.jpg"></center>'			
-				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
-
+				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back as you consider your options. Natalia asks, "So how did you end up... naked at school?"'
 				act 'Return to your story':	
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
@@ -64,14 +63,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lightly grip your hair as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
+							'You lightly grip your hair as you respond, "I just... need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up and says in a cheerful tone, "Well, you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
 
 							act 'Watch <<$VK_VikName>> leave':	
 								*clr & cla
@@ -100,7 +99,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-	'You quickly jump up and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead as she responds,"Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
+	'You quickly jump up and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead as she responds, "Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
 	*nl
 	'You both giggle before Katja tells you, "Vicky has something planned that she thinks we will all enjoy. It''s hard to imagine what it is but who knows? It might be fun. Anyway you should get yourself washed up. A nice relaxing bath can work wonders for the body and mind. You should also see Vicky when you have the chance. She will be pleased to see you up.' 
 	if NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
@@ -360,7 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the kitchen as Katja and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen as Katja and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow... that''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
 	
 	act 'Finish eating':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -470,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat 4':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>>  smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
+	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>> smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
 	*nl
 	'where you spend all of your time doing what you think others want you to do. Not enough people just says fuck that and do what they want. Try not to be one of those people <<$pcs_nickname>>. Be what you want to be. Nothing else matters. Only you and whoever you decide to let in. Be it a friend a boyfriend or even a girlfriend. I don''t judge. Just be happy with what you want and who you are. Don''t let anyone get in the way of that okay?" You nod your head and continue dancing as you ponder what <<$VK_VikName>> said. After a few more minutes of dancing, <<$VK_VikName>> begins breathing heavy as she grows tired. She then spins 4 times before falling face first into her bed and not getting up. You walk over to her radio then turn it off so that <<$VK_VikName>> can get some sleep.'
 	
@@ -630,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/Natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -689,7 +688,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
+	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit and I wanted to ask you... would you like to walk home with me?"'
 
 	act 'I would love to':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -710,7 +709,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -770,7 +769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park':
 	'You and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did and be unphased." You nod as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
 	*nl
 	if SexTalkNatalia = 4 or NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'"I..um..care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
+		'"I... uhm... care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground in front of her.'
 		act 'Kiss her':VKNataliaKiss = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Kiss'
 		act 'Change subject':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	else	
@@ -785,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big240.jpg"></center>'
-	'You and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home.  When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>> and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia as she walks away.'
+	'You and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home. When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>> and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia as she walks away.'
 	
 	act 'Enter your apartment':gt 'korrPar'
 end	
@@ -793,7 +792,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 	*clr & cla	
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'  	
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs'stat'	
@@ -930,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kat Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end
@@ -1045,7 +1044,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/Home/bedroom/cum/cum10.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'The man''s breathing suddenly stops as he begins pumping your vagina with his warm seed. You close your eyes and focus on the warmth of the man''s cum filling you. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that I''m letting this man, who I don''t even know cum inside me. Am I insane?</font> The man pulls out of you, causing his cum to leak out as he says, "That was amazing, You are one sexy girl <<$NikoSlutName>>. I can''t wait to use your services again." The man watches his cum leaking out of you as he pulls up his pants then walks back to the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+						'The man''s breathing suddenly stops as he begins pumping your vagina with his warm seed. You close your eyes and focus on the warmth of the man''s cum filling you. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that I''m letting this man, who I don''t even know cum inside me. Am I insane?</font> The man pulls out of you, causing his cum to leak out as he says, "That was amazing, you are one sexy girl <<$NikoSlutName>>. I can''t wait to use your services again." The man watches his cum leaking out of you as he pulls up his pants then walks back to the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 						gs 'cum_call', '', 'Trucker'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You start rapidly licking and sucking his dick when you hear him moan as he begins filling your mouth with his warm seed which you spit out into the nearby trashcan, causing the man to frown as he looks down to you and says, "Does it really taste that bad? Oh well, You were great. I look forward to doing this again." The man then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready, for another customer, or would you like to wash up first?"'
+				'You start rapidly licking and sucking his dick when you hear him moan as he begins filling your mouth with his warm seed which you spit out into the nearby trashcan, causing the man to frown as he looks down to you and says, "Does it really taste that bad? Oh well, you were great. I look forward to doing this again." The man then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready, for another customer, or would you like to wash up first?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/vag1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as he fills the condom with his warm seed, You continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you and says, "You did a great job. Now let''s get back to the diner. We don''t want to keep your customers waiting." You and Niko head back inside the diner.'
+					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as he fills the condom with his warm seed, you continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you and says, "You did a great job. Now let''s get back to the diner. We don''t want to keep your customers waiting." You and Niko head back inside the diner.'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', 'Biker'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/vag1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as it begins filling your womb with his warm seed, You continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko then approaches you and says, "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. You should probably get washed up for the next customer."'
+					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as it begins filling your womb with his warm seed, you continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko then approaches you and says, "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. You should probably get washed up for the next customer."'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', 'Biker'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/ride1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "I want to ride your cock." The man gets noticeably excited as he responds, "Now that''s a good girl." He then rubs your cheek as you remove your pants. The trucker lays on the ground then signals you to ride him. You mount him, guiding his penis inside of your vagina  before riding him at a moderate pace. The man suddenly lifts you up by your legs, pushing his dick deeper inside of you as he whispers in your ear, "How does it feel <<$NikoSlutName>>? Good?" You meekly nod your head, enjoying the pressure of his dick deep inside of your vagina.'
+			'You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "I want to ride your cock." The man gets noticeably excited as he responds, "Now that''s a good girl." He then rubs your cheek as you remove your pants. The trucker lays on the ground then signals you to ride him. You mount him, guiding his penis inside of your vagina before riding him at a moderate pace. The man suddenly lifts you up by your legs, pushing his dick deeper inside of you as he whispers in your ear, "How does it feel <<$NikoSlutName>>? Good?" You meekly nod your head, enjoying the pressure of his dick deep inside of your vagina.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1550,7 +1550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bikers':
 		if rand (1,2) = 1:
 			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "When people ask me why I travel the roads instead of getting a normal job and a family, I always tell them this; last I worked as a bank teller, can you believe that? Anyway one day this fat woman walks into the bank and she asks me to check her balance. Guess what I did? I pushed the bitch over! How is that for checking your balance bitch?" You and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
 		else
-			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "Alright guys you gotta hear this one. What do you tell a woman with tow black eyes?...Nothing you haven''t already told her twice!" The other bikers break into laughter before the biker tells another joke, "Now what do you call a woman with two black "GUYS"?... A bitch looking for a good time!" He then sexually thrusts his hips back and forth, causing you and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
+			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "Alright guys you gotta hear this one. What do you tell a woman with tow black eyes...? Nothing you haven''t already told her twice!" The other bikers break into laughter before the biker tells another joke, "Now what do you call a woman with two black "GUYS"?... A bitch looking for a good time!" He then sexually thrusts his hips back and forth, causing you and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
 		end
 	end	
 	

locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker5.mp4"></video></center>'	
 										'You lower your head in submission, "Please don''t do that. I''ll stay quiet." Dan quickly turns you around then unbuttons his pants before sliding his dick inside of your ass, causing a surge of pressure and pain to fill your ass. Dan wastes no time and begins fucking your ass, slowly at first then continues picking up the pace. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I can''t believe this is happening. Niko where are you? Please help me!'+$CloseInnerThought+' Dan continues fucking your ass when his phone begins ringing.'
 										*nl
-										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room...Sure you can come." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room... sure you can come." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 										$orgasm_txt = ''
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker6.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why...mmmmm...Why''d you....mmmm..Tell him abo...." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
+											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why... mmmmm... Why''d you.... mmmm... tell him abo..." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
 											$orgasm_txt = ''
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big9.jpg"></center>'
 												if kotovloveQW > 0:
 													kotovloveQW = -1
-													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a...whore and I can...Grr...prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
+													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a... whore and I can... grr... prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
 													*nl
 													'"I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." You suddenly realize what that Dan must have recorded you as you sucked Niko''s dick in the hallway, after school. '+$OpenInnerThought+'There is no way I can talk my way out of this. What will Viktor do to me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vitek watches the video for a few more seconds before releasing Dan''s throat then turning to you with his face; seething with rage. "You fucking worthless whore!" He then lifts his hand and smacks you hard, knocking you to the ground. Vitek begins smashing a nearby garbage can in rage then Dan places his hand on Vitek''s shoulder, "It''s alright Vitek, you don''t need her, you never did." Vitek takes a few seconds to calm himself then brushes Dan''s hand off his shoulder as he unbuttons his pants then pushes his dick against your lips. "What are you waiting for, whore? Start sucking." You meekly nod before wrapping your lips around his dick.'
 												else
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 																		'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say, punk?" Dan approaches them and says, "Hey, I''m sure that Fedor is just misunderstanding what''s going on. Let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl, who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>> and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
 																		*nl
-																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?...Why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
+																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?... why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
 																		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation','exhibitionism'
 																		gs 'stat'
 																		
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																			gs'stat'															
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You..You bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
+																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You... you bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
 																			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 																			gs 'stat'
 																			act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 														!!we don''t have to worry about it right now, but next release we need to revisit this and add in a alternative version if Sveta was dating Artem.
 														'<center><b><h4><font color=#fb00b7><<"Valeria [Lera] Tsarev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big21.jpg"></center>'
-														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying...Hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
+														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying... hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
 														gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 														gs 'stat'	
 														
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																*clr & cla
 																gs'stat'
 																'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock7.mp4"></video></center>'
-																'Petka begins fondling your breasts as Artem spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, You lay still as Artem begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see Artem, Petka, Petia, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. Artem''s pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
+																'Petka begins fondling your breasts as Artem spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, you lay still as Artem begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see Artem, Petka, Petia, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. Artem''s pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
 																$orgasm_txt = ''
 																gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 																gs 'stat'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you...Ehh...take it slow...Ehhh...Please." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, It seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/6.jpg"></center>'
-										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. '+$OpenInnerThought+'So...He didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why wont anyone care for me anymore?'+$CloseInnerThought+' you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
+										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. '+$OpenInnerThought+'So... he didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why won''t anyone care for me anymore?'+$CloseInnerThought+' you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
 										gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A189', 1
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, He is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 
 		act 'Embrace Niko':
 			*clr & cla

locations/ParChurch.qsrc

@@ -114,17 +114,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sermon':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/church'+ rand(1,5) +'.jpg"></center>'
 	if VK >= 0:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> listen intently to the priest as he teaches you the word of god. You study his teachings, feeling enlightened, until you reach the end of the sermon. You turn to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she gives you an approving smile before you both stand up.'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> listen intently to the priest as he teaches you the word of god. You study his teachings, feeling enlightened, until you reach the end of the sermon. You turn to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she gives you an approving smile before you both stand up.'
 	elseif VKChurch = 0 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 1:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 1 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 2:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 2 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 3:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 3 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 4:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	else
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	end
 
 	act 'Stand up':gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'

locations/Terminal.qsrc

@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ $askfather = {
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_17.jpg"></center>'
-						'Sitting at the table, You order food and drinks, and dad started asking you about everything.'
+						'Sitting at the table, you order food and drinks, and dad started asking you about everything.'
 						'You started with enthusiasm and a lot of talk about yourself, what you do, where go to school. Talk about Anya, that she was not admitted to the university, and worked as a salesgirl in the supermarket.'
 						'You tell him about your mother, she remarried, and you now have a stepfather and half brother Kolka..'
 						'After talking for awhile your father says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> I have to go, schedule to keep, I am here on weekends 12 00 to 14 00, I would be happy if you would visit me sometimes." With that he got up, paid for lunch and kissed you on the cheek goodbye.'
@@ -102,8 +102,8 @@ if trfatherQW = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/terminal/trfatherqw_3.jpg"></center>'
 			'You go up to the managers office. "Good afternoon! What I can help you?" he says.'
 			'"Hello, I wanted to know, if you know a Mikhail Kuznetsov or if he works here?"'
-			'He turns to his computer and pulls something up. "I''ll check in our database, yes, we have a driver by that name. He is on the road right now and only comes in on  Saturday at 12:00."'
-			'"Thank you very much, You helped me a lot."  With that you leaved but now you know when and where to find him.'
+			'He turns to his computer and pulls something up. "I''ll check in our database, yes, we have a driver by that name. He is on the road right now and only comes in on Saturday at 12:00."'
+			'"Thank you very much, you helped me a lot."  With that you leaved but now you know when and where to find him.'
 			act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt $curloc
 		end
 		act 'Approach the men':
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ elseif (trfatherQW >= 3 or trfatherQW < 0) and week = 6 and hour = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_9.jpg"></center>'
 		'You go to a group of men, drinking, laughing and talking loudly.'
 		'Approaching them, their eyes immediately turned to you.'
-		'"Hello, beauty, You want to have a drink with us?'
+		'"Hello, beauty, you want to have a drink with us?'
 		act 'Drink':
 			cls
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer'

locations/VolleyTrenerSpeak.qsrc

@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ if volleysostav > 0:
 	   gt 'Voltrenersex', 'discoSex'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go upto Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
+		'You go up to Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I was told you were here, are you really that stupid? There''s a game tomorrow!"'
-		'"I...err...was...erm...dropping off a book for a friend." you mumble.'
+		'"I... err... was... erm... dropping off a book for a friend." you mumble.'
 		if alko > 1:
 			'"You''ve been drinking! If you can''t even take the team seriously, then you''re not playing tomorrow."'
 			npc_rel['A69'] -= 1
@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@ if volleysostav > 0:
 else
 	!---------------------------While not in the squad-------------------------
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go upto Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
+	'You go up to Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
 	if pcs_vball < 20:
-		'Mikhail turns and looks at you. "UH...Have we met?" He doesn''t seem to recognize you. "Ah, I''ve seen you at school, you''re in pretty good shape, you should come to volleyball training".'
+		'Mikhail turns and looks at you. "Uh... have we met?" He doesn''t seem to recognize you. "Ah, I''ve seen you at school, you''re in pretty good shape, you should come to volleyball training".'
 	elseif pcs_vball < 35:
 		'The coach looked at you with condemnation. "<<$pcs_lastname>>, well done, you''re getting a hang of the basics. You don''t belong here though... although, what do I know?"'
 	elseif pcs_vball < 60:
@@ -52,14 +52,14 @@ else
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, don''t piss me off, what I do is my business, and what are you doing here is also my business.'
 		if pcs_horny > 79:
 			trenerlust += 1
-			'"Is that the truth, Mikhail N. Are you here because of me?" You move closer to the coach, and flutter your eyes at him.'
+			'"Is that the truth, Mr. Nikolaevich? Are you here because of me?" You move closer to the coach, and flutter your eyes at him.'
 			'"I meant as your coach, and don''t think you can win just by fluttering your eyes. Want to impress me? Workout, and no partying."'
 		else
 			'"As your coach." he adds with a slight blush.'
 		end
 	else
 		'The coach looked at you with condemnation. "<<$pcs_lastname>> you here again, what the fuck? This is not the place for candidates for the team.'
-		'"Mikhail N. you never said anything about not going out on a Friday."'
+		'"Mr. Nikolaevich, you never said anything about not going out on a Friday."'
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, are you thick? When does the team play?"'
 		'"Saturday." You respond, sheepishly.'
 		'"So, on Friday I expect my players not to hang out here but go home and get some sleep. Or they aren''t going to be fit to play tomorrow. Clear? You have some skill, sort out your attitude and you might yet make the team."'

locations/Voltrener.qsrc

@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 		elseif pcs_vball < 40:
 			'Mikhail looks at you and says, "<<$pcs_lastname>>. You certainly don''t play bad, at least not for an amateur. With more work you could reach a higher level."'
 		else
-			'Mikhail looks at you and says,"Ah, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You have the makings of an athlete, though I''m not sure if you are up to a professional level yet."'
+			'Mikhail looks at you and says, "Ah, <<$pcs_lastname>>. You have the makings of an athlete, though I''m not sure if you are up to a professional level yet."'
 			act 'Ask to join the team':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 		trener_Speak = 6
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/voltrenerspeak19.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take Mikhail''s hand in yours and say, "Coach, I want you to know that I would never betray you. I certainly like to gossip, but human relationships are not the reason for the chatter. I''m not like the girl from the national team." Blurting this out, you stare at the coach and wait for his reaction.'
-		'"That damn Chinaman just can''t help but gossip." Mikhail says,smiling, "And you''re a stubborn wench, <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will think about it, now go home."'
+		'"That damn Chinaman just can''t help but gossip." Mikhail says, smiling, "And you''re a stubborn wench, <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will think about it, now go home."'
 	elseif trener_Speak = 6 and trenerSex >= 1:
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/voltrenerspeak21.jpg"></center>'

locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex24.jpg"></center>'
-	'Invitingly you reach back and pull the buns of your ass apart,so your asshole is exposed and gapping slightly from the pressure.'
+	'Invitingly you reach back and pull the buns of your ass apart, so your asshole is exposed and gapping slightly from the pressure.'
 	act 'Further':
 		cls
 		npc_rel['A69'] += 1

locations/_clothing_image.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfit':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/flamingos/outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/flamingos/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/coco/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'

locations/_purse_image.qsrc

@@ -4,15 +4,21 @@
 !! ARGS 1 - panty index
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dolls':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/dolls/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/dolls/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fashionista':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/fashionista/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cheap':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/cheap/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'kats':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/kats/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'boutique':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/moncheri/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/fashionista/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/coco/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/flamingos/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'danilovich':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/danilovich/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/gm/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/cats/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/moncheri/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 end
 
 --- $purse_image ---------------------------------

locations/_short_description.qsrc

@@ -1,21 +1,33 @@
 # $short_description
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'cheap':
-	$RESULT = 'Cheap outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'average':
-	$RESULT = 'Pussy-Kats outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'expensive':
-	$RESULT = 'Fashionista outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'formal':
-	$RESULT = 'Mon Chéri outfit number '
+if $ARGS[0] = 'gm_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'G&M dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'G&M outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'misc_outfit':
+	$RESULT = 'Outfit that is not in a shop number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Pussy-Cats dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_outfit':
+	$RESULT = 'Pussy-Cats outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfit':
+	$RESULT = 'Flamingos outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Flamingos dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'Coco outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Coco dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fashionista':
+	$RESULT = 'Fashionista dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
+	$RESULT = 'Mon Chéri dress number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'office':
 	$RESULT = 'Office wear number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 	$RESULT = 'School uniform number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exercise':
 	$RESULT = 'Exercise outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
-	$RESULT = 'Patchwork Dolls outfit number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fetish':
 	$RESULT = 'Fetish outfit number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exhibit':
@@ -34,8 +46,16 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	$RESULT = 'Swimwear number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':
 	$RESULT = 'Slutty swimwear number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'burlesque':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fancy_burlesque':
 	$RESULT = 'Burlesque outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Patchwork Dolls dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_outfit':
+	$RESULT = 'Patchwork Dolls outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Tsar Bomba dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_outfit':
+	$RESULT = 'Tsar Bomba outfit number '
 end
 
 --- $short_description ---------------------------------

locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout1':
 	'You remember this man from one of the parent-school conferences. It''s Dimka''s dad, <<$bName>>!'
 	'He recognizes you too. "Oh... what the? Who do we have here? Isn''t this that missing girl, <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>?'
 	*nl
-	'With a trembling voice, only a few words leave your mouth. "Th...that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>..."'
+	'With a trembling voice, only a few words leave your mouth. "Th... that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>..."'
 	'"You do realize that the police have already given up searching for you. As if they made any effort though..."'
 	'"I-I don''t even know how long I''ve been here. The only thing I remember is being a plaything for these perverts..."'
 	'There is a short period of silence, but despite the unexpected situation, you keep kneeling with your back straight and breasts jutting forward, as you have been trained to do.'

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					*nl
 					'But now that he''s going down, she''s come back to live with and look after me. Get me counselling if I need it, you know? That''s why she''s always checking up on me. She''s on edge about what my father can do, even in prison."'
 					'She continues. "The truth is his political campaign never took off. He loved abusing his position as a cop to bully others, including me, but when he retired, he didn''t have that power anymore. A political career was his chance to get that back."'
-					'"Nobody was willing to back him however." She stops talking for a few seconds and you can clearly see her hands shaking. "That''s when...that''s when he decided to...whore me out to his friends. For ''a bit of fun'' with me, they would ''donate'' to his campaign fund.". She is on the verge of bursting into tears in front of you.'
+					'"Nobody was willing to back him however." She stops talking for a few seconds and you can clearly see her hands shaking. "That''s when... that''s when he decided to... whore me out to his friends. For ''a bit of fun'' with me, they would ''donate'' to his campaign fund.". She is on the verge of bursting into tears in front of you.'
 
 					act 'Your father did what?':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -72,10 +72,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 							'"What did he do?" you ask.'
-							'"It was bad enough being forced to whore out my friends to abusive creeps who almost choked them to death, but......but....."'
+							'"It was bad enough being forced to whore out my friends to abusive creeps who almost choked them to death, but... but..."'
 							'"But what?" you ask softly. She steels herself before answering you. "If I didn''t get the girl the guys wanted, my father said it was perfectly fine for them to take me and do what they wanted, even rape me." she cries.'
 							'"They would take their anger at not getting the girl they wanted out on me. I would be choked, slapped, even spat on! Some nights, I''d come home and he would berate me for not ''helping his donors'' and I would be subjected to his abuse as well. Other times, he would bring his friends home and let them have their way with me. One guy or four, he didn''t care what they done to me so long as they paid.'
-							'"My dad abusing me my entire life while running a prostitution ring where my friends were subjected to abusive sexual exploitation...and I...I couldn''t anything about it!" The words barely make it out of her mouth before she bursts into a flood of tears.'
+							'"My dad abusing me my entire life while running a prostitution ring where my friends were subjected to abusive sexual exploitation... and I... I couldn''t do anything about it!" The words barely make it out of her mouth before she bursts into a flood of tears.'
 
 							act 'Comfort her':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -97,9 +97,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort1.jpg"></center>'
 										'You pull away from her, not wanting to kiss her. "Sorry I just..." She jumps back from you, almost falling from the sofa.'
-										'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what came over me! It''s just....I''ve suffered a lot from all the men in my life....so I enjoy seeking....comfort from girls, if you know what I mean..." You don''t want to kiss her, but she clearly needs reassurance. You place her head on your shoulder and gently stroke her hair for the next few minutes.'
+										'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what came over me! It''s just... I''ve suffered a lot from all the men in my life... so I enjoy seeking... comfort from girls, if you know what I mean..." You don''t want to kiss her, but she clearly needs reassurance. You place her head on your shoulder and gently stroke her hair for the next few minutes.'
 										'She seems to appreciate this and sits up. "I should really get going." you say and Albina nods her head in understanding. "I will see you later OK?" you reassure her.'
-										'She smiles at you. "Of course and...thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to just let this all out and talk about it to someone. I''m glad it was you and that I can call you my friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she runs up and embraces you in a tight hug before walking you to the door.'
+										'She smiles at you. "Of course and... thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to just let this all out and talk about it to someone. I''m glad it was you and that I can call you my friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she runs up and embraces you in a tight hug before walking you to the door.'
 
 										act 'Continue':gt 'pav_residential'
 									end
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 												'Albina lets out a pleasured scream as her pussy twitches and sprays a huge amount of her juices across your face. You buckle as your own orgasm overwhelms you and you scream loudly. You both collapse in ecstasy.'
 												'Albina pulls her herself up and turns back around, cuddling into you. "I didn''t take you for a squirter!" you laugh. She smirks. "I''ve been with a few girls <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you gave me the greatest orgasm I''ve ever had! I think that was the biggest squirt I''ve ever done!"'
 												'She leans over and grabs some tissues from a box on a nearby table, handing you some to clean your face. She runs her hand over her still twitching pussy. "I think I''m still cumming!" she says. You both lie on the sofa, your powerful orgasms pulsing through the both of you. You eventually recover and manage to get dressed.'
-                                                'Albina remains on the sofa, pussy juices still trickling from her. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out and just talk about it...among other things." she smirks. "Thanks for being a good friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she suddenly embraces you in a tight hug, her breasts squeezing against you, before walking you to the door.' 
+                                                'Albina remains on the sofa, pussy juices still trickling from her. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out and just talk about it... among other things." she smirks. "Thanks for being a good friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she suddenly embraces you in a tight hug, her breasts squeezing against you, before walking you to the door.' 
 												gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 30
 												$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 												gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 30
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me....hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
+		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me... hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
 		'After you''ve pulled out, she inserts a few fingers into her gaping hole as juices continue leaking from her pussy. "Oh fuck yes <<$pcs_nickname>>! That was fucking amazing!"'
 		'"Fucking such a nice looking ass was amazing!" you reply and you both laugh.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'

locations/alexandriaEv.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever seen, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Reinhold, It''s seems that your protege''s words sound truer than you seem to imagine, as our presence here attest."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'hard'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"With our help as our presence here attest."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 			else
 				npc_rel['A241'] -=2
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'Reinhold facepalm, groan, and look at you in disbelief, your little quip has worked, but now Alexandria is gritting her teeth and seems concentrated on you, as purple sparks fly between her gloves, and then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Stop Councilor Alexandria, don''t make us intervene, because you have been testing our wrath."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus her anger on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappears, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality, a tense moment later, Alexandria dispel away her powers.'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 			'You don''t know what to do, to stop the magical battle that seems at the brink to begin, so you begin back away slowly from the powerful sorcerers, and then, you stop, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 			'"We are very disappointed with this act Reinhonecessaryeems that our intervention is necessary"'
 			'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-			'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+			'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 			'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -210,11 +210,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 	'You finally reach a study where a morose... Alexandria? Sit on a couch, and in an interesting twist, there isn''t another one for you to lie.'
 	if $start_type = 'tg':
 		npc_rel['A241'] +=1
-		'"Yes Mr.Kuznetsu... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
+		'"Yes Mr. Kuznetsu... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
 	else
 		if csb_start = 1:
 			npc_rel['A241'] +=1
-			'"Yes Mr.Ivanov... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
+			'"Yes Mr. Ivanov... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
 		else
 			'"Yes... Cursed by Rikudo, the being that created The Talisman of Power, and the reason for my interest in you."'
 		end if

locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -1390,7 +1390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 							'Still curious, you continue your line of questioning. "What do you think could happen?"'
-							'He looks at you for a moment, then frowns and sighs deeply. "This is what I meant. The fact that you even had to ask proves my point and makes me worry the way I do." As he talks, his tone becomes serious and maybe even a bit angry. "When I realized that Anushka was...sexually active, I knew better than to try and stop her. Instead, I made sure she got on birth control. I even remind her to get checked for STD''s every month." he says. When he says that last part, you hear a bit of sadness in his voice. Like most dads, he still sees his daughter as his "little girl."'
+							'He looks at you for a moment, then frowns and sighs deeply. "This is what I meant. The fact that you even had to ask proves my point and makes me worry the way I do." As he talks, his tone becomes serious and maybe even a bit angry. "When I realized that Anushka was... sexually active, I knew better than to try and stop her. Instead, I made sure she got on birth control. I even remind her to get checked for STD''s every month." he says. When he says that last part, you hear a bit of sadness in his voice. Like most dads, he still sees his daughter as his "little girl."'
 							*nl
 							'He shakes his head slightly. "I hope she is keeping up on it at least. A lot of boys your age, especially the type she hangs out with, would be all too happy to take advantage of a girl who was drunk or stoned, or even just force themselves on her." He sounds more than a bit angry when he says that. "Aside from them, there are those that will get girls strung out on drugs to turn them into whores. Those are the worst of the worst. They are the ones that will lure pretty things like you and my daughter into a life like theirs. It happens more often than it''s talked about. Girls being pimped out, turned into drug mules, or sold to the highest bidder."'
 							act 'Keep listening':

locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							'You are mad at her for talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
 							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... Uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s because he has a really big dick, isn''t it?" she says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
 							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it, you bite your lip and add "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end

locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 						npc_rel['A2'] -= 25
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already let me fuck you. Meanwhile, you...  fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck your ass and you turn into a prude? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
+						'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already let me fuck you. Meanwhile, you... fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck your ass and you turn into a prude? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
 						'You can tell Artem is seriously offended by your refusal, and won''t help you any further. Hopefully someone else can help you with your homework.'
 						act 'Refuse': gt 'artemEv', 'finalrefuse'
 						act 'Let him fuck your ass': gt 'artemEv', 'slut_anal'
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 							npc_rel['A2'] -= 25
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you...  fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
+							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you... fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
 							'You can tell Artem is seriously offended by your refusal, and won''t help you any further. Hopefully someone else can help you with your homework.'
 							act 'Refuse': gt 'artemEv', 'finalrefuse'
 							act 'Let him butt fuck you': gt 'artemEv', 'slut_anal'
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 							npc_rel['A2'] -= 25
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you...  fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
+							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you... fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
 							'You can tell Artem is seriously offended by your refusal, and won''t help you any further. Hopefully someone else can help you with your homework.'
 							act 'Refuse': gt 'artemEv', 'finalrefuse'
 							act 'Let him fuck you': gt 'artemEv', 'slut_fuck'
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
+							'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, you want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 							'He blushes but then he nods. "Yes I do, I think it is the least you can do for me."'
 							'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, it isn''t like a boy has never seen you naked before. "Ok fine." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'
 							act 'Start stripping': gt 'artemEv', 'striptease'
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/strip1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You give him a serious look when you say. "You want me to get naked for you?"'
-					'You see him visible swallow but then he nods. "Yes I do, I think it  is the least you can do for me."'
+					'You see him visible swallow but then he nods. "Yes I do, I think it is the least you can do for me."'
 					'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, it isn''t like a boy has never seen you naked before. "Ok fine." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'
 					act 'Start stripping': gt 'artemEv', 'striptease'
 				end
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artdryhump1':
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/buttcump.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your butt, all over your panties, you can feel the wetness through them as his cum soaks into them. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>,  It felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
+		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your butt, all over your panties, you can feel the wetness through them as his cum soaks into them. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, it felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
 		'Just then you hear his mothers voice out in the hall, just outside his door. "Artem I need you to run a errand into town for me."'
 		'Artem freaks out and starts to panic. "Um yes mom, I will." He looks at you with a panicked looked, obviously afraid his mom almost caught him dry humping a girl in his room. "I should really go do what my mom wants, see you tomorrow?"'
 		'You smile at him. "Maybe, I will have to see whats going on." With that you gather up your stuff and leave.'
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artdryhump2':
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/buttcumn.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your naked butt and lower back. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>,  It felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
+		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your naked butt and lower back. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, it felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
 		'Just then you hear his mothers voice out in the hall, just outside his door. "Artem I need you to run a errand into town for me."'
 		'Artem freaks out and starts to panic. "Um yes mom, I will." He looks at you with a panicked looked, obviously afraid his mom almost caught dry humping a girl in his room. "I should really go do what my mom wants, see you tomorrow?"'
 		'You smile at him. "Maybe, I will have to see whats going on." With that you gather up your stuff and leave.'

locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								'Masharin tries to excuse himself, "It worked for me but it doesn''t mean it will work for anyone else. We all have our own quirks that helps us when it comes to that stuff, you have your breaks and I have mine."'
 								'"Well, I would love to hear what you did, it would be of great help." you tell him.'
 								'Masharin smiles, "Fine, fine, I''ll tell you then. I used to close my eyes and think that I''m in the middle of a forest, only hearing those unusual sounds that you can hear in a silent forest. This always cleared my mind and it helped me re-focus."'
-								'Hmm maybe but what does a forest have to do with math or science? "I might try this some time, thank a lot for the advice but it''s probably best that I head back."'
+								'Hmm maybe but what does a forest have to do with math or science? "I might try this some time, thanks a lot for the advice but it''s probably best that I head back."'
 								act 'Leave':gt 'artemhome','hallway'
 							end
 						end
@@ -1702,7 +1702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripagree':
 	if ARGS[1] = 0:
 		'You give him a serious look when you say. "You want me to get naked for you?"'
 	else
-		'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
+		'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, you want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 	end
 	'You see him visible swallow, as he blushes but then he nods. "Yes I do, I would really love it if you did."'
 	'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, you like Artem and it sounds thrilling, plus it will make him happy. "Ok fine, sit back and enjoy the show." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'

locations/arturQW.qsrc

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'arturQW_2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/arthur/artur.jpg"></center>'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you are my treasure! Because of you our profits have doubled. I always said what we need is a sexy girl behind the counter, and I was right!" Arthur declares proudly.'
 	'"Thanks Arturik, but I''m tired of working behind the counter. I think I need to find something else. I''m sorry." You say regretfully, hoping he won''t be upset with you.'
-	'"What? Damn it! I thought you liked it. It is fine, It is fine, a girl like you should have a decent place to work."'
+	'"What? Damn it! I thought you liked it. It is fine, it is fine, a girl like you should have a decent place to work."'
 	'He appears to be thinking to himself before his eyes light up and he quickly adds. "Look, I fired my bookkeeper, the old hag. Now you can take over her job! You will enjoy it much more, I promise. You will receive twice the money and won''t have to deal with asshole customers. Just come every day by 16.00, otherwise I will have to fire you, despite your fine ass." Arthur says.'
 	'You see a look of desperation in his eyes as he finishes the job offer. He clearly doesn''t want to lose having you around every day. You consider your options...'
 

locations/barbershop.qsrc

@@ -144,8 +144,8 @@ if barbershop_wrk = 0:
 		'"I was wondering if you''re looking for some help around here"'
 		'"Well, I don''t think you have experience as a hairdresser..." He thinks for a second. "..., but my back isn''t the best anymore, so I could use some help keeping the shop clean. It''s not much work, but I''d be happy if you could come in once a day for about an hour. Just come by, when you''re done with school and when I''m still open, obviously."'
 		'You smile cheerfully. "That sound great! What would I have to do?"'
-		'"Well," he says, while looking around and gathering tasks for you. "...,  you''d have to mop the floor here in the main room and the break room in the back as well. Take out all the trash, clean the breakroom kitchen, clean the mirrors, windows, chairs and toilet and of course dust the shelves. It might sound like a lot, but don''t worry, even doing one thing, makes my life easier."'
-		'You think about it for a second, but you guess it won''t be too bad and you could need any amount of money... "I...uhm...hate to ask, but how much would I earn per hour?"'
+		'"Well," he says, while looking around and gathering tasks for you. "..., you''d have to mop the floor here in the main room and the break room in the back as well. Take out all the trash, clean the breakroom kitchen, clean the mirrors, windows, chairs and toilet and of course dust the shelves. It might sound like a lot, but don''t worry, even doing one thing, makes my life easier."'
+		'You think about it for a second, but you guess it won''t be too bad and you could need any amount of money... "I... uhm... hate to ask, but how much would I earn per hour?"'
 		'"Ah yes," Mr. Syomin chuckles. "..., the most important question. Are you alright with 125 <b>₽</b> per hour?"'
 			
 		act 'Accept the job':

locations/bedr2x.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if husbandrink = 11 and husbanstrapon > 0 and husbandrinkday ! daystart:
 				if pcs_intel > 40 or izvratH = 1:
 					husbharmin += 1
 
-					'"Are you really trying to tell me, that I asked you to fuck me with a strap-on bitch?" he bellowed, when you started crying, with tears running down your face  and began to lament that only wanted to please him, he looked at you and said, exhaled. "Fine, fine, I believe you. I believe you wanted to pleasure me and make me happy, but never do that again."'
+					'"Are you really trying to tell me, that I asked you to fuck me with a strap-on bitch?" he bellowed, when you started crying, with tears running down your face and began to lament that only wanted to please him, he looked at you and said, exhaled. "Fine, fine, I believe you. I believe you wanted to pleasure me and make me happy, but never do that again."'
 				elseif pcs_intel <= 40:
 					husbizvradd = 0
 					husbharmin = 0

locations/beg1.qsrc

@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'evro':
         gs 'fame', 'village', 'running', rand(1,3)
         razradbegEG += 1
         money += 20000
-        'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place. You get a gold medal, a prize of 20,000 <b>₽</b> and are now the "St.Petersburg Track Champion"!'
+        'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place. You get a gold medal, a prize of 20,000 <b>₽</b> and are now the "St. Petersburg Track Champion"!'
     end
 
     act 'Leave':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'

locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -1389,7 +1389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 	if step = 0:
 		'The Client is obviously aroused beyond his expectation: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I have these beautiful nails and needles here with me.."</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What the..?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"..and I think those nipples of yours are aching for them!"</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"... and I think those nipples of yours are aching for them!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"You can''t be serious! This IS against the rules, let me out!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Not if you agree with this. So what will it be?"</font>'
 		step = 1
@@ -1415,7 +1415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 			act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $this
 		else
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"What? Who do you think I am slut? A fucking monger?"</font>'
-			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..No! I didn''t mea.."</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I... No! I didn''t mean..."</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Shut up slave! You will agree to it for free NOW!"</font>'
 			step = 10
 			act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $this
@@ -1460,7 +1460,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/nailedbytitstotheground.jpg"></center>'
 		'At the end of the session, you lie on the wooden ground with your nipples being nailed to it, hanging by your hair and barely staying awake.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"So slut, how did you like it?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ehh..I...Master..."</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ehh... I... Master..."</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"You know? I don''t care anyways. Actually I hope it was horrible for you. You deserve it, such a naughty whore."</font>'
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now beg me to fuck you!"</font>'

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_end':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/b (end<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 !--- Need to expand
 !	if npc_QW['A34'] < 5
-		'Confused, surreptitiously looking at your brother, You take a towel and wrap it around your flushed, steamed body.'
+		'Confused, surreptitiously looking at your brother, you take a towel and wrap it around your flushed, steamed body.'
 		'You shudder at the realization this is wrong. Kolka quietly closes the door and tiptoes out.'
 		'You feel uncomfortable and ashamed, but smile at recalling his wide open eyes, his flushed face and red ears and how they increased the more you decided to tease him.'
 !	else
@@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'virginitydialog':
 	'You chastise him, "Hey, you little creep, are you ready to learn or are you just going to stare?"'
 	'"N-no, no, I want to... learn," he stutters out.'
-	'You begin to explain to your brother all the differences between the male and female body, why a woman has breasts , etc., simultaneously struggling with excitement and shame knowing that you are naked in front of your brother.'
+	'You begin to explain to your brother all the differences between the male and female body, why a woman has breasts, etc., simultaneously struggling with excitement and shame knowing that you are naked in front of your brother.'
 	'Kolka suddenly interrupts you. "Does it hurt?" he asks.'
 	'You blink in confusion, "Does what hurt?"'
 	'He sits for a moment, silently, before asking slowly, "When a boy puts <i>it</i> in?"'

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "I didn''t know you had milk again..."'
 							npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 2 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] <= 0:
-							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "I didn''t know you had milk again...and it tastes really good."'
+							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "I didn''t know you had milk again... and it tastes really good."'
 							npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1
 						else
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "Hmm - I didn''t think your milk would taste so good...".'
@@ -680,10 +680,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 				if guy > 0:
 					'"That I''ve had sex? Yeah. Someone already took my v-card," You say somewhat proudly. "But don''t tell <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
 				else
-					'"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "... mastur...bating..."'
+					'"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "mastur... bating..."'
 				end
 			end
-			
 			'He nods in acknowledgement while writing down some more notes.'
 			*nl
 
@@ -703,7 +702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 
 				act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
 					cla
-					'"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There''ve been a few uhh, big guys inside me..." you trail off.'
+					'"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There have been a few uhh, big guys inside me...", you trail off.'
 					'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
 					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 				end

locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 						minut += 15
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/misha.jpg" ></center>'
-						'I don''t know how to predict the fate, I''ll just help you to prepare to met the right woman, you could build a strong, healthy relationship, you said. - Let''s talk about how everything will go , what your body is capable of.'
+						'I don''t know how to predict the fate, I''ll just help you to prepare to met the right woman, you could build a strong, healthy relationship, you said. - Let''s talk about how everything will go, what your body is capable of.'
 						'- Suppose, you have entered into a relationship with someone who you think is perfect for you. What do you feel?'
 						'- Many things, probably. Anxiety, joy, relief.'
 						'He talked about 15 minutes. As he was ready for it, it''s time to move on to physical exercises.'

locations/burger.qsrc

@@ -192,9 +192,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 						*clr & cla
 						BurgerQW['Level'] = 50
 						guy += 1
-						average[23] = 1
-						averageH[23] = 160
-						averageB[23] = pcs_hips
+						cats_dress[23] = 1
+						cats_dressH[23] = 160
+						cats_dressB[23] = pcs_hips
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/sex/bj.jpg"></center>'
 						'You squat down in front of Anatoly, he unbuttons his pants and pulls out his penis. You lean over his hard cock and kiss it, feeling its warmth. You run your tongue along his cock finally putting it in your big wet mouth and start to suck his dick.'
 						'Soon Anatoly groans and you feel a spurt of warm liquid like in your mouth. You are giving your best to swallow all of his cum, trying not to choke. Anatoly straightens his clothes and leaves.'
@@ -230,9 +230,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 							minut += 1
 							BurgerQW['Level'] = 50
 							guy += 1
-							average[24] = 1
-							averageH[24] = 160
-							averageB[24] = pcs_hips
+							cats_dress[24] = 1
+							cats_dressH[24] = 160
+							cats_dressB[24] = pcs_hips
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/sex/pr.jpg"></center>'
 							'You look up at him startled as you notice the hot head of his cock resting on your lips. Anatoly pushes his dick to your lips. "Don''t shy baby, lick it with your tongue."'

locations/cardgame_durak.qsrc

@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_casual_sex':
 			'"Yes, they use my body every day, I get off and letting guys fuck me like a whore. The more I can find to fuck me, the happier I am."'
 			if pcs_horny >=70:
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-				$orgasm_txt = 'You are overcome by surging emotions and your body convulses with waves of pleasure. You let out a loud moan. "Oh! More...don''t stop. Oh yeah! Oh!"'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'You are overcome by surging emotions and your body convulses with waves of pleasure. You let out a loud moan. "Oh! More... don''t stop. Oh yeah! Oh!"'
 				gs 'arousal','masturbation',2,'exhibitionism'
 				'"The guy is surprised by your stormy climax and he says with a grin: "You cum like a wild cat, I love nymphos like you. Could you give me your phone number?"'
 				'"Maybe, but first you should finish", You answer with a smirk.'

locations/city_center.qsrc

@@ -82,14 +82,13 @@ if shantpopala > 0:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/sex/rape.jpg"></center>'
 	'On the street close to you, a black jeep suddenly hit the brakes. You turn your head to see what''s happening and see two large men jump of it and start to run towards you in. Before you can react and run away, they grap you and drag you into the car.'
 	'"You''re doing this for a living? Taking pictures of naked people in the park?", one of the shouts, holding one of the pictures to your face you''ve made awhile back and sent someone over a social network, hoping they would pay the ransom.'
-	'"No...what? What the hell is going on? I don''t know what you''re talking about!", you try to explain.'
+	'"No... what? What the hell is going on? I don''t know what you''re talking about!", you try to explain.'
 	'"Don''t lie to use you stupid bitch.", as he said that, he hits you on your head and you pass out.'
 	'You wake up somewhere out of town, you''re tied up and naked. You look down on yourself and notice traces of cum on your body, it also seems like that cum is flowing from your ass and your pussy.'
 	'You notice that the blokes, who captured you sit next to you and seem to have a break, some of them are smoking.'
 	'"Oh, she is finally awake, then the next fuck-cycle will be far more fun.", one of the men said, as he noticed you moving. Some of them are starting to get an evil grin on their face.'
 	'They got up and came back at you, barely a minute later you wished your were still knocked out, as these jackasses had their ways with. You tried to resist, but the tape hindered you from moving. Not long after, everything faded to black and you lost you consciousness again.'
 	'You feel groggy as you wake up, but it feels like someone is grapping you by the hair and shouts at you. "Let this be a lesson for you, bitch.", he shouts, then kicks you into the stomach and leaves. As you collapse on the ground holding your stomach in pain, you take a glimpse at the street and see the assholes driving away in their black jeep. The mainroad is about 200m away, you crawl most of the way there, but soon you can walk again and eventually you find your way back to one of the mainstreets.'
-
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang','humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'humiliation', 'rough'

locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -821,8 +821,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 														*clr
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam11.jpg"></center>'
 														'With trembling hands, you start to pull on your panties. Ninel already slipped her robe back on, only her flushed face betraying her apparent innocence.'
-														'"So...how do you feel?"'
-														'"Ooh...Just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
+														'"So... how do you feel?"'
+														'"Ooh... just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
 														'"Well, you see. It''s magic, baby. Mm-m ... You''re especially full of it, I don''t normally get so much pleasure. If you get sick again, please come and see me or phone me."'
 														'"If you like, we could spend some time together, look for me in the clinic."'
 														'You promise to be sure to find her, clean up and leave.'
@@ -967,7 +967,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 											'Ninel sees this and smiles.'
 											'"Oh, no. Enough is enough. But you come in another time for something else and we''ll have some fun.."'
 											'You think to yourself that your next illness can''t come soon enough. You are healthy and satisfied, thanks to Ninel.'
-
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
 											

locations/city_kavkazkafe.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'podgivi':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You rebel "What do you take me for?"'
-							'Givi gives you his best puppy dog eyes and clasps his hands like he is begging. "Come my bold goddess. Hey, You want money? I''ll give you five thousand? And a bonus."'
+							'Givi gives you his best puppy dog eyes and clasps his hands like he is begging. "Come my bold goddess. Hey, you want money? I''ll give you five thousand? And a bonus."'
 
 							act 'Kneel':
 								money += 5000

locations/city_market.qsrc

@@ -199,21 +199,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo':
 	end
 
 	i = 15
-	:loopcheap
-	if cheap[i] = 0:*p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''city_market'', ''marketclo''"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/1cheap/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="400" /></a>'
+	:loopgm_outfits
+	if gm_outfits[i] = 0:*p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''city_market'', ''marketclo''"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/gm/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="400" /></a>'
 	i += 1
-	if i <= 20:jump 'loopcheap'
+	if i <= 20:jump 'loopgm_outfits'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'marketclo':
 	cla
 
-	if cheap[i] ! 0:
+	if gm_outfits[i] ! 0:
 		msg 'You already own these clothes.'
 		gt 'city_market', 'clo'
 	end
 
-	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'cheap',i, 750
+	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'gm_outfits',i, 750
 
 end
 

locations/city_trashplaceevents.qsrc

@@ -251,8 +251,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 						bomjshet += 1
 						gs 'cum_call', 'vaginal', 'hobo'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/old1,'+rand(0,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'It is not your first time dealing with such people. You have already learned to overcome any aversion. So you decide to give the homeless man something a little better to just a blow job.
-						You take off your panties and threw them to the homeless. He is, of course, shocked by this. But the shock does not last long. After throwing off his pants full of holes, The old man moves to you.'
+						'It is not your first time dealing with such people. You have already learned to overcome any aversion. So you decide to give the homeless man something a little better to just a blowjob.
+						You take off your panties and throw them to the homeless. He is, of course, shocked by this. But the shock does not last long. After throwing off his pants full of holes, the old man moves to you.'
 						
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'prostitution'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/clothing.qsrc

@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Choose an item to sell</font></b></center></h3>'
 	end
 
-	if $ARGS[2] = 'gm' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
+	if $ARGS[2] = 'gm' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office' or $ARGS[2] = 'school' or $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
 		!'<center><b><font color="maroon">Viewing clothes from G&M</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/gm.png"></center>'
 	elseif $ARGS[2] = 'kats':
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 
 		if ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''flamingos'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''flamingos''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('coco_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''coco'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/city/residential/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('coco_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''coco'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/city/residential/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 		if ARRSIZE('fashionista') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''fashionista'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''fashionista''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -236,11 +236,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 
 			if ARRSIZE('gm_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_dress'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_dress''">Regular G&M clothing</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_office'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_office''">Office wear</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''office'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''office''">Office wear</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_school'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_school''">School uniforms</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''school'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''school''">School uniforms</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_uniform'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''uniform'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 		end
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'office':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopoffice
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'school':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 
 			if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and schoolS[6] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'school' or clothingwornnumber ! 6):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'school', 6)
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopuniform
@@ -366,10 +366,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_dress'):jump 'loopcoco_dress'
 
 			i = 1
-			:loopcoco_outfit
-				if coco_outfit[i] = 1 and coco_outfitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'coco_outfit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'coco_outfit', i)
+			:loopcoco_outfits
+				if coco_outfits[i] = 1 and coco_outfitsS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'coco_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'coco_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfit'):jump 'loopcoco_outfit'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfits'):jump 'loopcoco_outfits'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
 						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
-						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfit':
+						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfits':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'moncheri':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
 						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
-						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfit':
+						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfits':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'moncheri':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'

locations/clothing_QV.qsrc

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 	if ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''flamingos''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
-	if ARRSIZE('coco_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+	if ARRSIZE('coco_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 	if ARRSIZE('fashionista') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''fashionista''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -47,6 +47,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 	if ARRSIZE('dolls_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('dolls_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''dolls''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></a></center>'
 
+	if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/old town/bomba/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+
 	if ARRSIZE('exercise') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''sports''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/sports.png"></a></center>'
 
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'gm':
@@ -84,9 +86,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if gm_outfitsS[i] = 0 and gm_outfitsH[i] > 0 and gm_outfitsB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_outfitsB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_outfitsS[i] = 0 and gm_outfitsH[i] > 0 and gm_outfitsB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_outfitsB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if gm_outfitsS[i] = 0 and gm_outfitsH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_outfitsS[i] = 0 and gm_outfitsH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -114,9 +116,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if gm_dressS[i] = 0 and gm_dressH[i] > 0 and gm_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_dressS[i] = 0 and gm_dressH[i] > 0 and gm_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if gm_dressS[i] = 0 and gm_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_dressS[i] = 0 and gm_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -297,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*clr & cla
 		$ward_list_store = $ARGS[1]
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Wardrobe</font></b></center></h3>'
-		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/residential/coco/shop_name.png"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop_name.png"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<center><table border=1><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to wardrobe list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''store'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to stored clothing list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''unwanted'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to unwanted clothing list</a></TH></table></center>'
 		*nl
@@ -306,18 +308,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopcoco_outfit
-		if coco_outfit[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'coco_outfit', i
+		if coco_outfits[i] = 1:
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'coco_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if coco_outfitS[i] = 0 and coco_outfitH[i] > 0 and coco_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and coco_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if coco_outfitsS[i] = 0 and coco_outfitsH[i] > 0 and coco_outfitsB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and coco_outfitsB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if coco_outfitS[i] = 0 and coco_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if coco_outfitsS[i] = 0 and coco_outfitsH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfit'):jump 'loopcoco_outfit'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfits'):jump 'loopcoco_outfit'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopcoco_dress
@@ -354,9 +356,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'fashionista', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if fashionistaS[i] = 0 and fashionistaH[i] > 0 and fashionistaB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and fashionistaB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/3fashionista/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if fashionistaS[i] = 0 and fashionistaH[i] > 0 and fashionistaB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and fashionistaB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fashionista/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if fashionistaS[i] = 0 and fashionistaH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fashionista/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if fashionistaS[i] = 0 and fashionistaH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fashionista/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -481,9 +483,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'dolls_outfit', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if dolls_outfitS[i] = 0 and dolls_outfitH[i] > 0 and dolls_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and dolls_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if dolls_outfitS[i] = 0 and dolls_outfitH[i] > 0 and dolls_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and dolls_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if dolls_outfitS[i] = 0 and dolls_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if dolls_outfitS[i] = 0 and dolls_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -512,7 +514,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*clr & cla
 		$ward_list_store = $ARGS[1]
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Wardrobe</font></b></center></h3>'
-		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/island/bomba.png"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/old town/bomba/shop_name.png"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<center><table border=1><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to wardrobe list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''store'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to stored clothing list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''unwanted'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to unwanted clothing list</a></TH></table></center>'
 		*nl

locations/clothing_attributes.qsrc

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfit':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_flamingos_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_flamingos_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfits':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_coco_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_coco_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])

locations/club.qsrc

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 		act 'Hear him out':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club11.jpg"></center>'
-			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, It includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
+			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, it includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
 			'"The pay depends on results, get more people in, get people buying up the promotional drinks or if you dance well and you get 200 <b>₽</b>. Do worse, you get less, do very well, you get a bonus. When you finish you can stay in the club, so you get free entry as well."'
 			'"So, are you interested?"'
 			act 'No':clubno = 1 & gt 'club', 'inside'

locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_school':
 				'Dimka downcasts his eyes nervously, obviously afraid of Fedor, and looking around for some type of escape, but he doesn''t know who to shut up "Yes, it''s true, she sucked me off outside the community center."'
 				'Fedor shoves Dimka to the ground and raise his fists. Dimka begin to panic as he remembers that Fedor is a boxer, "Keep your hands off me! Why would you want to date a cocksucker like her anyway?"'
 				'Fedor grabs Dimka by the lapels and lifts him off the ground, then rams his fist into Dimka''s stomach. "You talk shit about <<$pcs_firstname>> again and I''ll start collecting teeth."'
-				'Dimka falls to the ground, trying to catch his breath and escape from Fedor, he crawl back. "Come on..cof..calm down..augh..I won''t, I won''t..."'
-				'Fedor turns, leaving Dimka on the ground, then grabs your hand and lead you away. You don''t know what is going to happen, but Fedor doesn''t seem happy. Looking over your shoulder to the fallen form of Dimka, you suddenly realize the hotness and wetness between your legs.'
+				'Dimka falls to the ground, trying to catch his breath and escape from Fedor as he crawls back. "Come on... cough... calm down... augh... I won''t, I won''t..."'
+				'Fedor turns, leaving Dimka on the ground, then grabs your hand and leads you away. You don''t know what is going to happen, but Fedor doesn''t seem happy. Looking over your shoulder to the fallen form of Dimka, you suddenly realize the hotness and wetness between your legs.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackmail':
 		'"Hello, Dimka." you say softly, then stand waiting.'
 		'"Hello, Dimka? That is what you say?" Dimka says in a low, menacing tone, "After all I''ve done for you? Let you into my world? Hello, Dimka?"'
 		'"You fucking whore!" he roars, standing quickly and flinging his chair halfway across the room, "You useless fucking whore. You think you can come prancing in here just like that and all is forgiven?"'
-		'You barely have time to register that he is moving before he grabs your lower jaw with bruising force. He spits in your face violently. "You..You..Fucking whore." he screams in your face.'
+		'You barely have time to register that he is moving before he grabs your lower jaw with bruising force. He spits in your face violently. "You... you... fucking whore." he screams in your face.'
 		'You never felt the blow, but he must have hit you as you curl now on the floor into a ball. He grabs you by the hair and forces you into a chair.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaEv', 'dimkawarns'
 	else
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse6':
 	if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 	minut += 20
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/nip.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position.. Hmm.. let''s see if a you can learn something" Then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurt, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He release you.'
+	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position... Hmm, let''s see if you can learn something" then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurts, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He releases you.'
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka pulls the needles out of your nipples and sets you free.'
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'nipples', 'pierce'
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse8':
 	sub += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/vag.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex..Something about more blood flow..So..I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here..So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
+	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex..Something about more blood flow... So... I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here... So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
 	if pirsG > 0:'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka takes the pins out of your pussy and sets you free.'
 	if pirsG = 0:
 		pirsG = 1

locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen1':
 	'"Oh, I''m sorry! I didn''t mean to startle you." you tell her.'
 	'She manages to let out a somewhat fake smile, "No no, don''t worry! It''s completely my fault. I wasn''t aware we had guests."'
 	'You smile back, "I''m <<$pcs_firstname>> but you can call me <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m in the same class as Dimka."'
-	'Uncertain how to react she replies back,"O-Oh, hello, I''m Olya and am Dimka''s mother. Please take a seat, let me make some tea."'
+	'Uncertain how to react she replies back, "O-Oh, hello, I''m Olya and am Dimka''s mother. Please take a seat, let me make some tea."'
 	act 'Have a seat':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_chat':
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decided to press on anyways, as you want to know more about her. "She seems, well I don''t mean to be rude but, overly subservient I guess." You say, trying not to sound rude.'
-				'He snorts a bit. "Yeah, like my dad says, She has been well trained." He seems to find that amusing and, apparently, all the answer you need. Something about the way he says it makes you think there is more to it.'
+				'He snorts a bit. "Yeah, like my dad says, she has been well trained." He seems to find that amusing and, apparently, all the answer you need. Something about the way he says it makes you think there is more to it.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'dimaHome', 'dimka_chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'dimaHome', 'dimkaroom'
 			end
@@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_makeout':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/stop.jpg"></center>'
-					'With that he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, You push him away with all your strength and you barely manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
+					'With that he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, you push him away with all your strength and you barely manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
 					'He suddenly gets furious. "Oh, you fucking tease! Get the hell out of my house, then!" With that he gets up and practically drags you out of his house, pushing you out the front door, before slamming it behind you.'
 					act 'Leave Dimka''s home': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_makeout2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/stop.jpg"></center>'
-					'With that, he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, You push him away with all your strength and finally manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
+					'With that, he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, you push him away with all your strength and finally manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
 					'He suddenly gets furious. "Oh, you fucking tease! Get the hell out of my house, then!" With that he gets up and practically drags you out of his house, pushing you out the front door, before slamming it behind you.'
 					act 'Leave Dimka''s home': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end

locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch3':
 		act 'Dream of Lina':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/F3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You can hear Lina''s cries of pleasure and a sudden image of her comes to mind. She is on all fours moaning as you massage lube into her tight little ass. She looks at you with concern, but you know what to do, You are going to fill that cute hole with the beads. Your fingers were only the beginning. You lick the beads and spread her cheeks. When you begin to push, she gasps, cries and clenches her teeth as she adjusts to the toy and slowly starts to enjoy the feeling. You smile knowing that by the end of this, she''ll be the perfect anal slut for you.' 
+			'You can hear Lina''s cries of pleasure and a sudden image of her comes to mind. She is on all fours moaning as you massage lube into her tight little ass. She looks at you with concern, but you know what to do, you are going to fill that cute hole with the beads. Your fingers were only the beginning. You lick the beads and spread her cheeks. When you begin to push, she gasps, cries and clenches her teeth as she adjusts to the toy and slowly starts to enjoy the feeling. You smile knowing that by the end of this, she''ll be the perfect anal slut for you.' 
 			'Just as you begin to thrust the beads in and out of her ass a bit, you''re pulled back to reality by the sound of grunting from Dimka'
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -576,9 +576,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina5':
 		'Lina winces at his words and avoids Dimka''s gaze, reddens and look out of the corner of her eye towards you'
 		'"I don''t fucking hear you Little Slut!"'
 		'"That... If I don''t come, and do whatever you like, you will show the... The video to everyone."'
-		'"Good Little Slut! As a clarification, You are going to come here once a week, and remember, I''ve made copies of everything and stored them somewhere safe. I''m sure right now you''re thinking of doing something, maybe telling the police? If you think that the police will help you, forget it. I''m a minor and my father has money and a great lawyer. So... you understand?"'
+		'"Good Little Slut! As a clarification, you are going to come here once a week, and remember, I''ve made copies of everything and stored them somewhere safe. I''m sure right now you''re thinking of doing something, maybe telling the police? If you think that the police will help you, forget it. I''m a minor and my father has money and a great lawyer. So... you understand?"'
 		'Quivering and on the verge of tears, the only thing that she can do is agree.'
-		'"Ok...Good...Now get naked!"'
+		'"Ok... Good... Now get naked!"'
 		act 'Watch Lina obey her new master': gt 'dimalina', 'linaundress'
 	end
 end
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina6':
 			'"Uhm... thank you." Why is he suddenly being so... nice? Is this just a trick to get your guard down? '
 			'"So tell me... how is your mother? I mean, the gossip is that she is quite a slut."'
 			'Your expression hardens into a grimace. So this is what he was up to. "She''s a happily married woman, so that rumor... well it''s just that; a rumor."'
-			'Dimka snickers, "Yeah right! Alright, You don''t want to talk about that... so lets talk about what I should do next with my new Little Slut, hm?"'
+			'Dimka snickers, "Yeah right! Alright, you don''t want to talk about that... so lets talk about what I should do next with my new Little Slut, hm?"'
 			'"New...? You mean Lina?"'
 			'His eyes light up with delight as he watches you make the horrific realization of Lina''s fate with him. "Just like how I had to train you to be a good obedient girl, her performance as my girlfriend leaves a lot to be desired, so I''ve been thinking I should train her to be something much better instead..."'
 			'"I... I mean... I don''t really know..."'
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina8':
 	if dimlinaQW = 7: dimlinaQW = 8
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/dimkaroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Slut, You didn''t have enough, Hm? Coming so you can be with me? but, what can be expected from the women in your family?"'
+	'"Slut, you didn''t have enough, Hm? Coming so you can be with me? but, what can be expected from the women in your family?"'
 	'Cringing, you suppress the urge to hit his head against the wall and make humanity''s a favor. Dimka feels your incommodity and just give you an evil smile.'
 	'"Come on! Recognize it! You are a total Slut! I am trying to pass some quality time with my girlfriend and you come over to be fucked!"'
 	'"Well, you told me that I should come to visit, so..."'

locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ $pavser4 = {
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/bathroom/sittingtoilet.jpg" ></center>'
     'You went into the corridor and headed to the bathroom, waiting, he will move after, but by the sound of steps realized, that he stayed in the kitchen. Scattered look you ran about the bathroom, listening to, he wanders in the other end of the apartment. The room was bathed in light, which fell through the glass window with glass.'
     'Finishing the old shell in harmony with frame oval mirror. You stayed in front of him to check his hair, Do not gone cosmetics.'
-    'Then, instantly deciding, She lifted her skirt, He pulled down her panties and sat on the toilet. Do you understand, resultinge herself slo, not only locked, but not even closing the bathroom door, and that he may at any time enter, but this-then you and excited. You become terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
+    'Then, instantly deciding, she lifted her skirt, he pulled down her panties and sat on the toilet. Do you understand, resultinge herself slo, not only locked, but not even closing the bathroom door, and that he may at any time enter, but this-then you and excited. You become terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
     'You were terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ $pavser4 = {
             gs'stat'
             '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/11684312.mp4"></video></center>'
             'You koknulis his wet with excitement and urine pisichki.'
-            'From that sensation, that you''re caught for such indecent occupation, You further podstёguet. And you barely contained, not to publish and sound.'
+            'From that sensation, that you''re caught for such indecent occupation, you further podstёguet. And you barely contained, not to publish and sound.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ $pavser5 = {
 		*clr & cla
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
-        'You enter the kitchen; it, in accordance with the requirements of politeness, You missed a little ahead and behind. Against the wall were piled bundles of yellowed newspapers.'
+        'You enter the kitchen; it, in accordance with the requirements of politeness, you missed a little ahead and behind. Against the wall were piled bundles of yellowed newspapers.'
         'You have a thought in my head slipped, that he always waits, How will you. You are immersed in their own emotional throwing,'
         'you are attracted to him and at the same time you are afraid of it, and he decided, that will not help you or customized : He decides to let itself. And what will happen next - he does not care whether or not?'
         'For he and you were two beings in ridiculous situation, devoid of purpose or meaning in life.'
@@ -273,9 +273,9 @@ $pavser7 = {
         pcs_horny += 10
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/phone.jpg" ></center>'
-        'You raised the phone in the bedroom, He along with you - in the corridor. An unfamiliar voice came to nothing, The connection was lost, but you both continued to press the receiver to his ear, listening to each other''s breath.'
+        'You raised the phone in the bedroom, he along with you - in the corridor. An unfamiliar voice came to nothing, the connection was lost, but you both continued to press the receiver to his ear, listening to each other''s breath.'
         'You want, that he spoke with you, I went to some-a trifling concession - showed what-weakness, - And then you can just get up and leave. You were not able to lower the tube, although you desperately tempted to slap her blunder on the lever of the old machine.'
-        'This keeps you from his inflexible arrogance. May be, He knew about it, and proud of their power over you.'
+        'This keeps you from his inflexible arrogance. Maybe, he knew about it, and proud of their power over you.'
         *nl
         act 'Listen tube':dynamic $pavser8
     end
@@ -289,8 +289,8 @@ $pavser8 = {
     pcs_mana = pcs_mana - 50
     gs'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
-    'And then he appeared,You involuntarily held his tongue over the lip.'
-    '– Well, We choose? - I asked you to inadvertently break into the voice irritation. - Removes this apartment?'
+    'And then he appeared, you involuntarily held his tongue over the lip.'
+    '– Well, we choose? - I asked you to inadvertently break into the voice irritation. - Removes this apartment?'
     '– Yes. It was decided from the outset.'
     '- But now I hesitate, - He continued. - Do you like her?'
     'He helped you get up and again asked,, - Do you like her?'
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ $pavser9 = {
         *clr & cla
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/sex/01.jpg" ></center>'
-        'He put you in the chair, but do not let go of the hands of the mighty, He ran your hand under her blouse and began to stroke your breasts.'
+        'He put you in the chair, but do not let go of the hands of the mighty, he ran your hand under her blouse and began to stroke your breasts.'
         ''
         ''
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ $pavser9 = {
             *clr & cla
             gs'stat'
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/sex/02.jpg" ></center>'
-            'Picked up the chest, palms and thumbs had nipples. The rough skin on the balls of his fingers made her rush of desire, You clung to him.'
+            'Picked up the chest, palms and thumbs had nipples. The rough skin on the balls of his fingers made her rush of desire, you clung to him.'
             'At the end-all he bared your breasts and hot lips touched your nipples and wild heat sladotnogo madness began to rise from the bottom to the top of your body.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -311,29 +311,33 @@ $brit = {
 					else
 						$shave_txt1 = 'You do your legs first before realizing that the stubble growing around your pussy is starting to become irritating and you can''t put it off any longer. Lathering your crotch up, you carefully scrape away the rough itchy hairs that cover it until you''re left smooth and clean shaven.'
 					end
+				else
+					$shave_act = ''
 				end
 			
-				act '<<$shave_act>> (0:15)':
-					menu_off = 1
-					*clr & cla
-					minut += 15
-					pcs_leghair = 0
-					pcs_pubes = shave_length
-					pcs_horny += 5
-					stanok -= 2
-					if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 0:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
-					if $loc ='gadbana':
-						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-					else
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+				if $shave_act ! '':
+					act '<<$shave_act>> (0:15)':
+						menu_off = 1
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 15
+						pcs_leghair = 0
+						pcs_pubes = shave_length
+						pcs_horny += 5
+						stanok -= 2
+						if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 0:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+						if $loc ='gadbana':
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
+						else
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+						end
+						*nl
+						'<<$shave_txt1>>'
+						*nl
+						'<<$shave_txt2>>'
+						dynamic $dryOff
+						gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
+						gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
 					end
-					*nl
-					'<<$shave_txt1>>'
-					*nl
-					'<<$shave_txt2>>'
-					dynamic $dryOff
-					gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
-					gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
 				end
 			end
 			
@@ -406,21 +410,25 @@ $brit = {
 				else
 					$shave_txt1 = 'The itchy stumps of hair growing around your pussy is starting to become too annoying even for your lazy self and you decide to clean yourself up. Lathering up your crotch, you carefully scrape away the rough stubble until you''re left clean shaven, the smooth skin of your pussy a relief until the next time it becomes annoying for you.'
 				end
+			else
+				$shave_act = ''
 			end
-			act '<<$shave_act>> (0:10)':
-				menu_off = 1
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 10
-				pcs_pubes = shave_length
-				pcs_horny += 5
-				stanok -= 1
-				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
-				'<<$shave_txt1>>'
-				dynamic $dryOff
-				gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
-				gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
+			if $shave_act ! '':
+				act '<<$shave_act>> (0:10)':
+					menu_off = 1
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 10
+					pcs_pubes = shave_length
+					pcs_horny += 5
+					stanok -= 1
+					if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+					*nl
+					'<<$shave_txt1>>'
+					dynamic $dryOff
+					gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
+					gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end

locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		'With one last kick, the bitch squad lies fallen before you, whimpering in pain thanks to the sound beating they''ve received at your hand, but as you look around for your next victim, a redheaded girl grabs you and pulls you away from the brawl turned riot, towards the waiting Vanya & Vicky.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what to do with you! What were you thinking?!"'
 		'You...aren''t too sure why the hell you incited the massive brawl that now is being broken apart by the police, and as you try to look for a good answer, Vanya chooses that moment to express his opinion.'
-		'"Well...Katja, I want to say, well...That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
+		'"Well... Katja, I want to say, well... That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
 		'Katja looks dumbfounded as he raises his hand, more even when you clap it, followed by a shrugging Vicky, who jumps and does the same. As you turn smiling towards Katja, waiting for her to join, she facepalms, turns and begins to walk away, musing about your idiocy. Well, it is probably better if you follow her, so after saying goodbye to Vanya & Vicky, you go with her. It was "fun" but it is time to look for something else to do.'
 
 		act 'Continue': gt 'katjaEV', 'kathan'
@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'surrender':
 
 
 		'Kisame swims around you and laughs. "I''m having a great time baby." He grabs and drags your feet to the bottom of the pool, where he thrusts his cock in your pussy.'
-		'You try not to drown in the water while you are fucked by Kisame, You feel him pounding your insides with his member like a hammer. You can no longer hold your breath as you begin to drown.'
+		'You try not to drown in the water while you are fucked by Kisame, you feel him pounding your insides with his member like a hammer. You can no longer hold your breath as you begin to drown.'
 		'Kisame smiles and leans over you. "Kiss me." You stick your lips to his mouth, as his breath fills your lungs with air before keeping on pounding your pussy. Finally he finishes, pouring his shark seed into the surrounding water.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'rough', 'sub'

locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/solar4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You undressed and went naked into the solarium. There is just a person on the door looking at you. Of curiosity, you attach your legs and bent them to the side , peering into the darkness of the slightly open door. You can actually see and hear the shadow sniffing. There is no doubt, someone is obviously watching you. From the realization that someone is watching you, and that you are lying completely naked, your body begins to tremble. There is a pleasant feeling in the abdomen. You get so excited to the point that you start to spread your legs in different directions. To the joy of the mysterious stranger.'
+				'You undressed and went naked into the solarium. There is just a person on the door looking at you. Of curiosity, you attach your legs and bent them to the side, peering into the darkness of the slightly open door. You can actually see and hear the shadow sniffing. There is no doubt, someone is obviously watching you. From the realization that someone is watching you, and that you are lying completely naked, your body begins to tremble. There is a pleasant feeling in the abdomen. You get so excited to the point that you start to spread your legs in different directions. To the joy of the mysterious stranger.'
 
 				act 'Spread your legs ':
 					cla
@@ -1029,7 +1029,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos25':
 		'You:"Zhenya, you have something written on your nose." You point to the mirror.'
 		'Eugene looks in the mirror and immediately becomes red as a lobster'
 		'Zhenya:"This is what I get for playing with the boys, excuse me and thank you..." He begins to rub his nose hard'
-		'It seems some students make fun of this guy, You feel like you should cheer him up.'
+		'It seems some students make fun of this guy, you feel like you should cheer him up.'
 		'You:"Do not worry, so tell me, how are you doing? Do you have a girlfriend? Almost every young man your age has a girl.'
 		'Zhenya:"Unfortunately, I do not. I am not acquainted with many girls, they always make fun of me... it hurts my feelings.'
 		'You:"Well, what do you like to do? Do you have a hobby? Going to the movies, games maybe?'

locations/event.qsrc

@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima32':
 	'"Oh, you''re awake! Just in time for your lessons!" Says Alex.'
 	'You look around. While you were unconscious, you were dressed and taken to the street. In your mouth, a metallic taste. Your hands are tied behind your back.'
 	'"And now, bitch, I''ll teach you safe sex".'
-	'With these words, Alex puts you on your knees in front of him, He pulls out his penis and puts it in your mouth.'
+	'With these words, Alex puts you on your knees in front of him, he pulls out his penis and puts it in your mouth.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Resist':gt 'event', 'dima33'
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 	'Alex enters you from behind. He grabs your but with both hands and squeezes it tightly, while thrusting vigorously. After a while, you orgasm from the sensation.'
 	'"Much like this morning, only this time no bitting!" Says Alex, further increasing the tempo.'
 	'Suddenly he stops, you are turned around and pushed to your knees. You hit the marble floor hard, and feel something warm hit and then run down your face.'
-	'"Your Stuff is in that box. Hope, You enjoyed the lesson." With these words Alex loosens the straps on your hands, and you hear him walking away.'
+	'"Your Stuff is in that box. Hope, you enjoyed the lesson." With these words Alex loosens the straps on your hands, and you hear him walking away.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough', 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima36':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/10028_tommypistoljacquelineblacklady_352.jpg"></center>'
-	'After sitting in this position for a few minutes, you start to free your hands. Once they''re loose, You tear off the blindfold, and wipe as much of the sperm of your face as is possible.'
+	'After sitting in this position for a few minutes, you start to free your hands. Once they''re loose, you tear off the blindfold, and wipe as much of the sperm of your face as is possible.'
 	'Looking around, you find the box Alex had put your stuff it. You get dressed and find a passage that leads to the street above.'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima47':
 	'The realization that you are not alone in the room hits you just as he forcefully rams his cock into your pussy.'
 	'You have decide to try not to be distracted, and continue to suck, despite the pounding you are receiving.'
 	'When the man you are serving finishes, you, as before, swallow and are ready to accept the next, but the hole remains empty. It seems you have work off the money Alex had gotten.'
-	'Alex efforts have not gone unnoticed, and soon you shake in orgasm. Almost immediately, He pulls out his penis, and turns your head so that it is jabbing you in the face.'
+	'Alex efforts have not gone unnoticed, and soon you shake in orgasm. Almost immediately, he pulls out his penis, and turns your head so that it is jabbing you in the face.'
 	'It is now a reflex action for you to help him to finish. After you cleaned his cock, he leaves the booth.'
 	'After a few minutes the girl you met at the door comes in, removes your gag and takes you to the lavatory, where you wash your face and rinse your mouth.'
 	'When you are done, she hands you your things, and some cash, adding, "From your friend, for a job well done." You dress.'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima48':
 	'It looks like you misunderstood the girl.'
 	'"You want to do this the hard way? Fine, I can do that."'
 	'With these words, she forces your head back to the hole.'
-	'Another cock appears from the hole, She puts it in your mouth, and begins to drive your head. It feels like she''s fucking the stranger behind the wall with your head.'
+	'Another cock appears from the hole, she puts it in your mouth, and begins to drive your head. It feels like she''s fucking the stranger behind the wall with your head.'
 	'It takes more time, but he finishes in your mouth. She holds your head against the wall, not giving you room to spit anything out. This was repeated several times.'
 	'When the last "customer" disappeared from the hole, she lets go of your head, and leaves the room. Soon she comes back with your stuff. You dress, and she leads you out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 50, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
@@ -850,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima51':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/10022_paristommy_088.jpg"></center>'
-	'You immediately understand the hint. Kneeling, you unzip his fly, and get down to business. Barely a couple of minutes later the guy begins to cum. Finished, He says goodbye to you, and quickly leaves.'
+	'You immediately understand the hint. Kneeling, you unzip his fly, and get down to business. Barely a couple of minutes later the guy begins to cum. Finished, he says goodbye to you, and quickly leaves.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'unknown'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'

locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -910,7 +910,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 			gs 'stat'
            	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/models.jpg"></center>'
             'You are trying to find the "McGuffin" that Tatiana told you was somewhere in the agency and that was cursing the place, but you haven''t had much luck... until now. You feel a magic tingle and snoop on an interesting titbit.'
-            '"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass...massa...masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
+            '"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass... massa... masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
             '"Sorry, I don''t swing that way. Well... except on my boyfriend''s birthday."'
             '"Huh?! No! Well... maybe? I mean that she can help you with your boob pains!"'
             '"You mean my BACK pains? Are you feeling alright? You sound a little off today."'

locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -131,13 +131,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio_strip_talk2':
 				cla & *clr
 				if $braworntype ! 'none':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip1.mp4"><center>'
-					'"No! Please!"  you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
+					'"No! Please!" you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
 					gs'bras','remove'
 					gs'stat'
 					'In your desperation, you throw off your bra as fast as you can. You don''t feel confident enough to be doing this but even this is better than having to take off your panties and show your pussy too. Once your bra is on the floor, the manager glances up and down, back and forth between your breasts and your increasingly red face.'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
-					'"No! Please!"  you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
+					'"No! Please!" you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
 					'The manager looks at your already breasts with obvious confusion and resist the urge to cover them up with your hands with great difficulty.'
 					'"But you''re already topless."'
 					'"Exactly!" you say, trying to cover yourself with excuses. "I, uhh, purposely didn''t wear a bra today. I''m still not ready but I took the initiative to help myself get more used to it. That has to count for something right?"'

locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_chatter':
 		'"Tsk-! You really think you could do better than her, Ivanna? She''s smart, she''s beautiful, and she''s knows how to carry herself. What do you have that she doesn''t?"'
 		'"I don''t have a fat ass."'
 	elseif model_chatter = 2:
-		'"...cking making me do my makeup here."'
+		'"...ucking making me do my makeup here."'
 		'"What do you mean? How is Katherine making you do makeup in the bathroom? What''s wrong with your station?"'
 		'"I caught her fucking her boyfriend there again! Fucking left cum all over my fucking seat! Like, I''m going to fucking sit down there after that. Probably come up with fucking herpes or some shit."'
 		'"God! What is wrong with that girl? Can''t she keep it in her pants for two seconds?"'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_chatter':
 		*nl
 		'The girls giggle together as you tune out again...'
 	elseif model_chatter = 5:
-		'"...nd he offered me a job at the porn studio down the road."'
+		'"...and he offered me a job at the porn studio down the road."'
 		'"Oh! You finally did your first nude shoot?"'
 		'"About time, girl. How long have you been here? Four months?"'
 		'"What?? Who took four months to do their first nude shoot?"'
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading19.jpg"></center>'
 										'She looks a little confused and picks up her book again.'
-										'Mari blushes intensely and says,"N-no... I like boys..." You see her whisper the words again quietly to herself, "I like boys..."'
+										'Mari blushes intensely and says, "N-no... I like boys..." You see her whisper the words again quietly to herself, "I like boys..."'
 										act'Continue':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading10.jpg"></center>'

locations/foto_shoot.qsrc

@@ -897,7 +897,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports_underwear':
 	*nl
 	'Modeling sport underwear, is slighty different from other jobs. First, you are taken to the Havanna Fitness Center, as the studio doesn''t have all the necessary props to do it. Second, you must look "dynamic", and that means do some warm-ups, and add some oil, to give that "sweaty" and "sporty" look. After that, you are ready to pose the next two hours for the photographer.'
 	*nl
-	'After having taken all his pictures, you and the crew head back to Aphrodite , counting out your <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> to hand to you.'
+	'After having taken all his pictures, you and the crew head back to Aphrodite, counting out your <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> to hand to you.'
 	act 'Leave':gt 'foto', 'end'
 end
 

locations/gLakeNude.qsrc

@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9:
 					voyeurism += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/self/lake_legs.jpg"></center>'
-					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> You can''t remember a single instance in your life when you were watching someone. So is it worth to start doing it now? YES!'
+					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha-... what am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> You can''t remember a single instance in your life when you were watching someone. So is it worth to start doing it now? YES!'
 					act'Stop Watching!': gt'gLakeNude'
 				else
 					voyeurism_start = 2
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9:
 					voyeurism += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/voyeurism/voyeurism_start_event.jpg"></center>'
-					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha....What am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... Am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> But then you remember how you recently were watching others on the beach and think: <dh>"That was scary, cool, and hot. I need to keep at least one eye always watching."</dh>'
+					'From the corner of your eye you see several naked people. You think they look right at you. You blush and you freeze in terror, tears well up in the corner of your eyes. After a few moments you find yourself looking at your own feet.<br><dh>"Wha-... what am I doing?! Why do I feel like watching... am I a voyeur? Yes, I am! I''m a girl who likes to watch nude people!"</dh> you think.<br> But then you remember how you recently were watching others on the beach and think: <dh>"That was scary, cool, and hot. I need to keep at least one eye always watching."</dh>'
 					act'Watch the couple': 	gs'gLakeNudeEvent','gLakeNude_sex'
 				end
 			end

locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -245,11 +245,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_edge':
 						gt'gaddvor'
 					end
 				else
-					average[520] = 1
-					averageS[520] = 0
-					averageH[520] = 100
-					averageB[520] = pcs_hips
-					gs 'clothing', 'wear', 'average', 520
+					gm_outfits[2] = 1
+					gm_outfitsS[2] = 0
+					gm_outfitsH[2] = 100
+					gm_outfitsB[2] = pcs_hips
+					gs 'clothing', 'wear', 'gm_outfits', 2
 
 					if CloSkirtShortness = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/nudeforest.jpg"></center>'
 					if CloSkirtShortness > 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/nudeforest1.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'

locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk over to Grandma and set the heavy basket of berries on the ground next to her.'
 				'"Grandma, I got all the berries!"'
-				'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Grandma replied. "Those look perfect.  They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
+				'"Oh, thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Grandma replied. "Those look perfect. They will have to go down in the root cellar until we are ready to can them."'
 				'You heft the basket up and carry it in the kitchen. Walking back over to Grandma, you ask, "Do you think that will be enough for the winter?"'
 				'"Oh no dear," your Grandma says, "the winter is long and cold and you must gather as much as you can, while you can."'
 				'Seeing the dismayed look on your face, she adds, "But that is enough for today! I know it is harder work than it seems. You can rest now, child."'
@@ -1131,7 +1131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				'"Ugh, yes Grandpa, I did everything just like you showed me when I was a kid."'
 				'"Don''t sass me, <<$pcs_firstname>>," you grandfather says with a scowl. "Properly brushing a horse is very important for their health."'
 				'The rebuke stings a little. "Sorry, Grandpa."'
-				'His face softens when he sees he upset you. "...No, child, I''m sorry. You did me a favor and here I am berating you for it. Thank you for brushing the horse, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+				'His face softens when he sees he upset you. "...no, child, I''m sorry. You did me a favor and here I am berating you for it. Thank you for brushing the horse, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 				'"It''s okay Grandpa. I know Desperado is important to you," you say.'
 				'He smiles and rubs your shoulder. "Thank you again. You may rest now, there is nothing else to do today."'
 
@@ -1152,7 +1152,6 @@ if $ARGS[0]='grandpa':
 				'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says.'
 				'"You''re welcome! Is there anything else you need?"'
 				'"No, you can take the rest of the day off, granddaughter."'
-
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1557,9 +1556,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 				*nl
 				'You let out an exasperated sigh, "Yeah, yeah I know, you told me that already. So, how early are we talking?"'
 				if month = 6:
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right...Anya used to wake up at 06:00 when she slept here. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 when she slept here. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
 				else
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right...Anya used to wake up at 06:00 for school. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shoots you a sharp look and you know to fix your attitude or else. "Well, depends on what you plan to do in the morning. There''s showering and brushing your teeth, doing your hair and then makeup and shaving if you really need to. If I remember right... Anya used to wake up at 06:00 for school. Besides, while you are staying at your grandparents house, you should be up extra early helping them tend to the farm, this isn''t a holiday camp!"'
 				end
 				act 'Continue':
 					cla & *clr

locations/gadprostitutes.qsrc

@@ -74,10 +74,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 							gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-							'You call her over to you. Mira, hurries over and looks at you with downcast eyes.  "Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>.  You having a good night?"'
-							'You look at her angrily. "A better question, my lovely whore, is ''Are you having a good night''?  I want 200 <b>₽</b> per customer you have each night."  You tell her earnestly.'
-							'Mira looks up in shock and with a hurt look on her face.  "What are you talking about?  Do you think I am a hooker?"'
-							'You step up to her and place your hand on her face.  Mira closes her eyes and leans into your hand.  You look into her eyes once she opens them and then SLAP her hard across the face.  Mira falls to the ground and starts to cry.  "You''re my property whore.  You will do whatever I tell you.  You will never lie to me ever again, or I swear I will make you pay.  Understand me?!"'
+							'You call her over to you. Mira, hurries over and looks at you with downcast eyes. "Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You having a good night?"'
+							'You look at her angrily. "A better question, my lovely whore, is ''Are you having a good night''? I want 200 <b>₽</b> per customer you have each night." You tell her earnestly.'
+							'Mira looks up in shock and with a hurt look on her face. "What are you talking about? Do you think I am a hooker?"'
+							'You step up to her and place your hand on her face.  Mira closes her eyes and leans into your hand.  You look into her eyes once she opens them and then SLAP her hard across the face. Mira falls to the ground and starts to cry.  "You''re my property whore.  You will do whatever I tell you.  You will never lie to me ever again, or I swear I will make you pay.  Understand me?!"'
 							'Mira nods and she wipes away tears.'
 							'You reach down and help her back to her feet.  You brush her off and help her fix her makeup.  "Good, now get that cute ass back out on that road and earn us some money."'
 							'You give Mira a little slap on the ass and smile as you watch Mira start a new chapter of her life as your prostitute.'

locations/gdksex.qsrc

@@ -1495,7 +1495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drugs':
 		'As horny as you are right now, you can barely contain how eager you are and you''re getting more excited by the seccond. By now you can feel the wet spot in your panties forming and you''re longing after his cock as your empty pussy just screams to be filled.'
 		'<<$boydesc>> gets up from the chair and stands behind you. He starts roughly pawing at your breasts through the fabric and hell, even his hamfisted groping is just turning you on more and more.'
 		'The two of you start making out and you let out a little moan when <<$boydesc>> starts stroking your thighs.'
-		'Before you know it you''re stripped down to your underwear while <<$boydesc>> is squeezing and grabbing at your breasts. He gives you a few more kisses and hooks one finger into your panties, looking at you ,"Time for some pleasure." <<$boydesc>> tells you.'
+		'Before you know it you''re stripped down to your underwear while <<$boydesc>> is squeezing and grabbing at your breasts. He gives you a few more kisses and hooks one finger into your panties, looking at you, "Time for some pleasure." <<$boydesc>> tells you.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'no'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 		gs 'stat'

locations/gopnik_initiation.qsrc

@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Niko':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/brother/upset.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko seems to be resting while having a smoke, You take a look at him then think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>It''s probably best not to disturb him</font>.'
+		'Niko seems to be resting while having a smoke, you take a look at him then think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>It''s probably best not to disturb him</font>.'
 	end
 	if NikoGOPParty = 0:
 		act 'Wave and walk away':gt 'gopnik_initiation', 'explore'

locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -1543,12 +1543,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 !masturbation hands
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'text_sex_hj':
 		txt_sex_hj = RAND(0,3)
-		if txt_sex_hj = 0:$txt_sex_hj = 'Without talking, <<$boydesc>> shoves his cock in your face.
-		"That''s like jerk off." You say laughing, take his member into your hand and start pumping.'
+		if txt_sex_hj = 0:$txt_sex_hj = 'Without talking, <<$boydesc>> shoves his cock in your face.'
+		'"That''s like jerk off." You say laughing, take his member into your hand and start pumping.'
 		if txt_sex_hj = 1:$txt_sex_hj = 'You take his still soft cock into your hand and it starts growing noticeably. You begin a hand job feasting your eyes on his strong prick.'
-		if txt_sex_hj = 2:$txt_sex_hj = '<<$boydesc>> shoves his cock into your hand. Your fingers grip on his fat elastic trunk shakily. He tells you to hold it firmer.
-		"Don''t release it and move your hand up and down .." He takes hold showing how to do it.
-		"Not so sharply ... yes so. Don''t pull  ... Yes,that''s it. Great! ... More ... More.!" '
+		if txt_sex_hj = 2:$txt_sex_hj = '<<$boydesc>> shoves his cock into your hand. Your fingers grip on his fat elastic trunk shakily. He tells you to hold it firmer.'
+		'"Don''t release it and move your hand up and down .." He takes hold showing how to do it.'
+		'"Not so sharply ... yes so. Don''t pull ... Yes,that''s it. Great! ... More ... More.!"'
 		if txt_sex_hj = 3:$txt_sex_hj = '<<$boydesc>> asks you to do hand job to him. You take his dick firmly into your hand and start to rub the skin back and forth.'
 		'<<$txt_sex_hj>>'
 		killvar '$text_sex_hj'
@@ -1613,12 +1613,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 !doggie in the ass
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'text_sex_doggy_anal':
 		txt_sex_doggy_anal = RAND(0,8)
-		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 0:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock to your anus and shoves it in your tight hole up to his sack with one stroke. You succeed only twitch and scream, when his big prick pierces your butt. After a couple of minutes, you become used and start moaning.
+		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 0:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock to your anus and shoves it in your tight hole up to his sack with one stroke. You succeed in only twitching and screaming, when his big prick pierces your butt. After a couple of minutes, you become used and start moaning.
 		"Oh yess! .... mmm .... deeper! .... mmmm .."
 		He grabs your hips and starts banging increasing his pace gradualy. You diligently fuck back wanting to get even more on his shaft. You are insanely excited and serve him with pleasure.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 1:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> is kneeling between your legs and shoving his prick into your ass hole up to his balls.You are on all fours having your bum lifted and you are fucking back in pace and moaning with pleasure. Your lover is propelled even more by your moaning. He is fucking you in silence for a while and then begins moaning excitedly.
-		"You have got nice big butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>...", he tells you still keeping his pace.
-		"Mmmm ... yesss ...yess ... harder ..... deeper ... mmm... oh yees, you have such big cock ... mmmm..." You are cheering him.'
+		"You have got a nice big butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>...", he tells you, still keeping his pace."
+		"Mmmm... yesss... yess... harder... deeper... mmm... oh yesss, you have such big cock... hmmmm..." you are cheering him on.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 2:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '"I missed your tight tushie, baby! I''m going to fuck your bum now, my sweet chick". You feel that his prick is hard and jostles against your butt. <<$boydesc>> spits into his palm, greases his cock head and sets the glans to your anus. He starts pushing and slowly and gentle shoves his cock in your ass. As soon as the cock is fully in your bum, <<$boydesc>> starts wiggling with his pelvis holding your hips. You moan loudly and start fucking back and impaling yourself on his big cock.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 3:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> puts his cock head to your narrow entrance and pushes in. Your sphincter stretches and allows his thin prick to slide into your bum without exceptional resistence. He grabs your hips and starts fucking fast your bum. You shriek out at each thrust, which he enjoyes it a lot he is banging you faster and faster. He was seize with animal instincts and he desires so as you scream louder and louder continuously. <<$boydesc>> shoves his prick deep into your bowels so his balls smash your taint.'
 		if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 4:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$boydesc>> moves you on your knees and he spoons to you from behind. He holds your bum with one hand and with other hand he aims his prick into the brown eye. It is seen that you enjoyed it. Holding your butt firmly, he is swinging his hips back and forth so forcefully, so smacks are somewhat frenzied, are both sonorous and muffled. And so fast: a swing, a hit, a swing, a hit. He starts drawing you close, when he reaches your womb, he draws close your ass, which rippled by his strokes.'

locations/grigory.qsrc

@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 					'For several minutes he fucks you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
 					'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 					'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum, mingled with your virgin blood, drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
-					'With his clothes in hand, he stops to look at you, "I want nothing more than to stay here with you, but I need to get back to work," Grigory says, You can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later Kishka."'
+					'With his clothes in hand, he stops to look at you, "I want nothing more than to stay here with you, but I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later Kishka."'
 					'Without another word, he exits the barn. After he is gone, you can''t help but think about how happy he looked before leaving.'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', $boy
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 			'He almost immediately removes his hand and takes hold of both of your hips. You can feel the tip of his cock brush the inside of your thigh, finding your slit he thrusts forward, sinking his entire length into you in one rough shove. Without so much as a pause, he begins to fuck you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
 			'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 			'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
-			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, You can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
+			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
 			'Without another word, he exits the barn.'
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boy
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 			'He almost immediately removes his hand and takes hold of both of your hips. You can feel the tip of his cock brush the inside of your thigh, finding your slit he thrusts forward, sinking his entire length into you in one rough shove. Without so much as a pause, he begins to fuck you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
 			'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 			'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
-			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, You can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
+			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
 			'Without another word, he exits the barn.'
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boy
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10

locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -1655,7 +1655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy7':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/sex/school/boysroom2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You pull your strapon out of your purse, "I thought I might fuck you with this."'
 			'His eyes get a little big, but you can also see the little bulge in his pants from him quickly getting a hard on, "Um, I don''t know."'
-			'You attach the dildo to the harness and start to slide the harness up your legs, under your skirt,"Come on, you know you want to and you will love it."'
+			'You attach the dildo to the harness and start to slide the harness up your legs, under your skirt, "Come on, you know you want to and you will love it."'
 			'He watches the strapon slide up your thighs, then glances to the door, "What if someone comes in?"'
 			'You finish pulling the straps tight on the harness, then you grab him by the shirt and pull him into the largest stall, "No one will know what''s happening in here. Now down on your knees and suck my dick."'
 			'He looks down at your dildo and you can tell he wants to but then he glances at the door, showing he is afraid of getting caught.'

locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -559,12 +559,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'"No...Nobody? I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, but her tightening grip on you and her angry demeanor tell you that she doesn''t believe you. You try buttering her up with compliments, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before releasing you and storming off, the others being smart enough not to follow her.' 
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 200:
-		'Albina just stares at you in disbelief. "There''s some <i>nasty</i> rumors about you going around school. Everyone is saying you''re a cock hungry whore! How can you live like that - just letting guys...use you like that?"'
+		'Albina just stares at you in disbelief. "There''s some <i>nasty</i> rumors about you going around school. Everyone is saying you''re a cock hungry whore! How can you live with that - just letting guys... use you like that?"'
 		'You are about to speak up, but she shakes her head and walks away. You can''t tell if she was feeling disgusted or disappointed at you. She might even have been both.'
 	else 
 		npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 		'Your conversation, if you can call it that, with Albina is shallow and is over after only a minute or two as she excuses herself.'
-		'"You know my...father...cares...a lot..." She stops herself from laughing before walking away. You''re certain that you hear her holding back tears as she does, but you don''t want to push it and anger her.'
+		'"You know my... father... cares... a lot...", she stops herself from laughing before walking away. You''re certain that you hear her holding back tears as she does, but you don''t want to push it and anger her.'
 		'She outright refuses to speak about her home life, her father in particular, and more than a few people have been on the receiving end of her wrath when they press her about the subject.'
 	end
 	
@@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mefodiy':
 		else
 			'"Who would have thought that being funny and kinda cute would make me so popular?" Mefodiy says and you can''t help but laugh.'
 			'"You really couldn''t be more wrong." you tease him.'
-			'He takes a moment to think. "Hmm...Ah, you''re right! What I should have said was <i>incredibly handsome and hilarious</i>. Thanks for correcting me <<$pcs_nickname>>." he says with a wink.'
+			'He takes a moment to think. "Hmm... ah, you''re right! What I should have said was <i>incredibly handsome and hilarious</i>. Thanks for correcting me <<$pcs_nickname>>." he says with a wink.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A148'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 250:
 		npc_rel['A148'] += 1
@@ -760,8 +760,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stasya':
 	if npc_rel['A139'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 200:
 		npc_rel['A139'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 1:
-			'When Stasya sees you, she pulls you into a quick hug. "Glad you showed up, I was starting to get bored...and desperate." she tells you with a dramatic sigh.'
-			'"Desperate enough to hang out with Irina for the rest of break?" you joke with a cheeky smile.'
+			'When Stasya sees you, she pulls you into a quick hug. "Glad you showed up, I was starting to get bored... and desperate." she tells you with a dramatic sigh.'
+			'"Desperate enough to hang out with Irina for the rest of the break?" you joke with a cheeky smile.'
 			'"I''ll never be that fucking desperate!" she blurts out before the two of you break out into laughter.'
 		else
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you think of this?" Stasya gives her reflection in the little mirror hanging inside her locker one last look before turning towards you.'

locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc

@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natalia':
 		elseif VK = 2:
 			'Natalia sits quietly staring at the other students chatting, looking very lonely. You approach her and wave. Natalia''s eyes immediately light up as she says "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s so great to see you. Would you like to chat for a while?" You nod and reply."Of course I would." You both spend the next few minutes swapping stories while laughing and joking.'
 		elseif VK = 3:
-			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida. "Come on Natalia, you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies. "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia and say "Hey Nat, the guidance counselor wants to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you an approving nod then says "Okay I better go. See you Zin.. and you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
+			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida. "Come on Natalia, you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies. "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia and say "Hey Nat, the guidance counselor wants to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you an approving nod and then says "Okay I better go. See you Zin. And you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye!" She leaves as Zin hollers "But we were... oh fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
 		elseif VK = 4:
 			'As you approach Natalia, she closes her notebook and waves at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come and have a seat." You sit down next to Natalia and discuss current events while occasionally gossiping about your classmates.'
 		else		

locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -778,7 +778,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m feeling...tense again and Lazar is going to help me.. relax. I was wondering if you wanted to join me again? I must admit that I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
+			'While you''re getting dressed, Albina approaches you with a mischievious grin on her face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m feeling... tense again. And Lazar is going to help me... relax. I was wondering if you wanted to join me again? I must admit that I loved you being a submissive little minx and would enjoy playing with you again."'
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla

locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -1237,13 +1237,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follow_petka':
 				'You release his ear, but as you do you knee him hard in the balls, causing him to crumple to the floor with a gasp, holding his crotch. "Get up pussy." Grabbing him, you haul him up onto his hands and knees while he is still recovering from the hit. You shove him forward until his face is over the toilet bowl. "Ready to give me your homework yet?" you ask him.'
 				'He pleads with you and resists by placing his hands on the toilet bowl. "No! Let me go! Please!"'
 				*nl
-				'Maneuvering a bit, you get into a position where you can push down on his head and deliver another kick to his balls. He crumples as he cries out and you easily push his head down. You place one of your knees on his upper back while using one hand to force his head into the toilet. After a couple of dunks and him still refusing, you use your other hand to reach down the back of his pants. Clutching his underwear, you yank on them until you hear cloth tearing. Finally, he relents. "OK...OK! You...You can have...my homework! Just...please...stop!" he pleads through what sounds like sobs.'
+				'Maneuvering a bit, you get into a position where you can push down on his head and deliver another kick to his balls. He crumples as he cries out and you easily push his head down. You place one of your knees on his upper back while using one hand to force his head into the toilet. After a couple of dunks and him still refusing, you use your other hand to reach down the back of his pants. Clutching his underwear, you yank on them until you hear cloth tearing. Finally, he relents. "OK... OK! You... You can have my homework! Just, please... stop!" he pleads through what sounds like sobs.'
 				act 'Let him up':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/homeworksuccess.jpg"></center>'
 					'You let go of him and back off, letting him shakily get back on his feet. "Well?" you demand.'
-					'He grabs his pack and pulls out some papers, quickly handing them over. "Here, now please...leave me alone." he says as his voice cracks.'
+					'He grabs his pack and pulls out some papers, quickly handing them over. "Here, now please leave me alone..." he says as his voice cracks.'
 					'You smile at him and pat him on the cheek, causing him to flinch. It is hard to tell with the toilet water on his face if he is crying or not. "See, that wasn''t so hard was it? Next time you will know better." you say in a mocking tone.'
 					'He is on the verge of tears and just nods. You leave with the homework to find a quiet place to copy it before class.'
 					act 'Take the homework': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
@@ -1274,8 +1274,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follow_petka':
 		pcs_grades += 3
 		lernHome -= 1
 		'You follow Petka into the bathroom and as the door closes, he quickly turns around alarmed. When he sees you he looks a little afraid and crest fallen. "What do you want this time?" he asks.'
-		'"The same thing as last time Petka...or do you need a reminder?" you reply.'
-		'He quickly pulls out his homework, obviously afraid of you. "Here, take it! Just please...leave me alone."'
+		'"The same thing as last time Petka... or do you need a reminder?" you reply.'
+		'He quickly pulls out his homework, obviously afraid of you. "Here, take it! Just please, leave me alone..."'
 		act 'Take the homework': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
 	end
 end

locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc

@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
 		'"I don''t know. I heard it was <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
 		'"Fuck they''re both lesbians? That sucks."'
 		'"Well I heard Ivan fucked them both, so I think they are both bi."'
-		'"Sweet...Lucky bastard."'
+		'"Sweet... lucky bastard."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 14:
 		'"I heard Ivan only fucks girls in the ass and they all seem to be lining up to let him do it."'
 		'"I wonder how he convinces them to take it? Maybe we should ask him what his secret is?"'
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
         '"I don''t know. Is worth it?"'
         '"An ass like that is always worth it. You''ve had a crush on her for as long as I know. Just go flirt with her. She might surprise you."'
         *nl
-        'His friends push him towards her and she turns to face him. "Uh, hey. Do you wear space pants to gym class.....because your ass is out of this world." he asks with a crack in his voice, but still making a cringey attempt to act smooth.'
+        'His friends pushes him towards her and she turns to face him. "Uh, hey. Do you wear space pants to gym class... because your ass is out of this world." he asks with a crack in his voice, but still making a cringey attempt to act smooth.'
         'Everyone, upon seeing or hearing what''s happening, turn and await Albina''s reaction. She is unimpressed by the attempted flirting, crossing her arms and laughing.'
         '"No, I wear volleyball shorts because my ass is out of your league!" she answers before she stares him right in the eyes. "You have 3 seconds to get out of my sight. One..."'
         'He doesn''t need to be told twice and flees in a panic, his laughing friends following close behind. You have never seen anyone run so fast in your life. Albina just smirks and turns back to what she was doing.'

locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -360,9 +360,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 			gs 'sweat', 'add', 20
 			gs 'stat'
 			if month > 2 and month < 9:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school//grounds/runsummer.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/runsummer.jpg"></center>'
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school//grounds/runwinter.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/runwinter.jpg"></center>'
 			end
 			'You spend an hour on the track going for a run.'
 

locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				if $boy = 'A4':
 					'You watch Igor sink lower into his seat; it seems he was also trying to hide. He reluctantly and quietly starts to read the passage, but Ms Braakman interrupts and asks him to speak clearly. Some kids start to snicker and whisper to each other, causing Igor to awkwardly clear his throat before continuing. By the time he''s finished reading, his cheeks are colored a rosy red and he refuses to look up from his desk for the rest of the class.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A140':
-					'Upon being called on, Lizaveta quickly hides her phone under her desk, an innocent smile gracing her face as Ms Braakman glares at her. "Uh...what page are we on?" she asks with a nervous chuckle. There''s a few scattered laughs, but Ms Braakman quickly silences the room. A nearby girl points out the right page number and paragraph, and with a smile Lizaveta starts reading as if nothing happened.'
+					'Upon being called on, Lizaveta quickly hides her phone under her desk, an innocent smile gracing her face as Ms Braakman glares at her. "Uh... what page are we on?" she asks with a nervous chuckle. There''s a few scattered laughs, but Ms Braakman quickly silences the room. A nearby girl points out the right page number and paragraph, and with a smile Lizaveta starts reading as if nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A156':
 					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation with the gopnik since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, the gopnik closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A157':

locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm, then opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks to Niko, who shakes his head. The class remains silent as Mr Tsarev begins handing out work sheets. He is obviously not in a good mood.'
 			elseif VK = 2:
 				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean out the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
-				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I have been looking for a handsome, strong and...sexy man in my life." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
+				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I have been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
 				'Christina then replies. "That is why I have no interest in dating losers like you." Christina then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr Tsarev begins handing out some work sheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive her on time. It''s not hard."'
 			else
 				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm was not working at all." Mr Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You are really bad at it."'
@@ -54,22 +54,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			*nl
 			'<a href="exec:gs ''shortgs'',''img msg'',''images/characters/shared/photos/big1.jpg''">Dimka</a> responds "If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk then begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
 			*nl
-			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s...Real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
+			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		VKrand = rand(1,3)
 		'You walk into the classroom and sit down at your desk just as Mr Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what is the smallest number in existence?"'
 		*nl
 		if VKrand = 1:
-			'Christina raises her hand and Mr Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s penis?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
+			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s penis?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
 		elseif VKrand = 2:
 			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible." Mr Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
 		else
 			'No one raises their hand, so Mr Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr Tsarev shakes his head before responding. "Is infinity a number?"' 
-			'"Um I guess so...Right?" Igor replies. "No it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr Tsarev replies.'
+			'"Um I guess so... right?" Igor replies. "No it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
 		end
 		*nl
-		'The smallest number in existence is...Nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I will be handing out some worksheet with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes." He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
+		'The smallest number in existence is... nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I will be handing out some worksheet with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes." He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
 	end
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaRevenge', 1
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				'While you are browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko to see him with a loving smile. You then type back. "You are so sweet Niko." Niko gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 4 and npc_rel['A25'] >= 80:
-				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive. You type back "Those heels look very...you." Sonia replies. "I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?" You reply. "They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." Sonia giggles as she messages you back.'
+				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive. You type back "Those heels look very... you." Sonia replies. "I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?" You reply. "They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." Sonia giggles as she messages you back.'
 			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile as she returns it. Sonia then turns back toward the teacher while continuing to cruise the internet.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 								end
 								'You decide to have some fun and quickly slide the phone between your legs and snap some photos under your skirt. When Mr Tsarev arrives at your desk, he asks "What is so important that you need to use your phone during my lesson? If nothing, then I will hold onto it until the end of class." He then extends his hand out. "Would you like to see?" you reply in a seductive tone.'
-								'You then hand him your phone with the picture you took still on the screen. Mr Tsarev looks at what''s on the screen and he stares at it for a few seconds before turning the screen off and returning to the front of the class. After he reaches the front of the classroom, he turns to you and says "Well...Uhhh, I''ll be holding onto your phone for now. You can have it back after class."'
+								'You then hand him your phone with the picture you took still on the screen. Mr Tsarev looks at what''s on the screen and he stares at it for a few seconds before turning the screen off and returning to the front of the class. After he reaches the front of the classroom, he turns to you and says "Well... uhhh, I''ll be holding onto your phone for now. You can have it back after class."'
 								'He puts your phone in his pocket before returning to teaching his lesson. You occasionally see him turn the phone on and peek at the screen when he believes that no one is watching.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end

locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptrolan/rolansoup0.jpg"></center>'
-						'"...shit!...i hate to puke... " ... BLUURB...And you spend some time to clean your stomach. "What the fuck!...that ... roll... . Better clean..." Fortunately you avoid to make a mess...just in time.'
+						'"...shit!... I hate to puke... " ... BLUURB... and you spend some time to clean your stomach. "What the fuck! That... roll... better clean..." Fortunately you avoid to make a mess... just in time.'
 						'<i>Shit! I''m going to puke!</i> You race to the restroom and find an empty stall just in time. If you''d thought it tasted awful the first time...'
 						act 'Leave ': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end

locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -882,7 +882,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_lockerroom_cum':
 	*nl
 	if grupTipe = 2:
 		'"Hey you going to the game on Saturday?" he asks as he starts getting cleaned up.'
-		'You smile to him. "Maybe.  Depends on what is going on. Why?" you ask him.'
+		'You smile to him. "Maybe. Depends on what is going on. Why?" you ask him.'
 		'He grins. "I thought we might hook up after the game? I am sure I could use another release by then. So what do you think?" he asks.'
 		'You grin yourself in reply. "Maybe, maybe not." you say in a teasing tone, which makes him laugh.'
 		'"OK, got it. Well I hope to see you at the game then. I think you got a little something there." he says, indicating the right side of your face.'
@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 							'Albina gives Petka a dirty look, not that he can see it with his face buried in your pussy. "Is that so? And he agreed?" she asks.'
 							'You giggle a little. "I told him it was that or I would go get the coach and bring it up with the principal, who would likely call his parents in. He decided against that."'
 							'Albina can''t help but laugh. "Well that works for me." she says. "Mind if I help ''teach him a lesson'' as well?"'
-							'You smile at her. "No...not at all."'
+							'You smile at her. "No... not at all."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom', 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Against the locker':
@@ -1132,7 +1132,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomcum1.jpg"></center>'
 															'Once he stops cumming, Albina pulls him off the bench and down onto his knees, then forces his head down to your shoes. "Lick your nasty cum off her shoe! Lick it clean!" she commands him and puts her foot on his back as her hands force his head to your shoe. He starts quickly licking his cum off your shoe, doing a pretty good job of licking your shoe completely clean.'
 															*nl
-															'Once your shoe is good and clean, she lets go of him and steps away. "Now get the fuck out here before we decide to have another go with you!" she commands. Terrified, he grabs his clothes and bolts out of the locker room, still naked. Albina laughs loudly and you can''t help but join in.  The two of you then take your strapons off and clean them up. "Well that was fun..." Albina says as she gently rubs her soaking wet pussy, her juices trickling down her leg. "Good thing I forgot something."'
+															'Once your shoe is good and clean, she lets go of him and steps away. "Now get the fuck out here before we decide to have another go with you!" she commands. Terrified, he grabs his clothes and bolts out of the locker room, still naked. Albina laughs loudly and you can''t help but join in. The two of you then take your strapons off and clean them up. "Well that was fun..." Albina says as she gently rubs her soaking wet pussy, her juices trickling down her leg. "Good thing I forgot something."'
 															'"We might have to track him down and do that again sometime. Or maybe he will be stupid enough to spy on us again?" she adds. Before you can make sense of what she said, she has already got dressed and walked out, leaving you to finish up.'
 															gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3, 'dom', 'group'
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joingopnik.jpg"></center>'
-		'You nod your head, "Yeah  that sounds great, I love hanging out and maybe getting a little wasted."'
+		'You nod your head, "Yeah that sounds great, I love hanging out and maybe getting a little wasted."'
 		'Viktor smirks and gives Lena a long glance, you can tell they shared something but you don''t know what. "Lena will let you know where and when." With that, he turns and walks off, but you can''t help but feel you missed something, like he found something amusing which makes you a bit nervous.'
 		'Lena leans over. "Meet me and Lera after school at the apartment garages at eight this evening and we will take you there." She smiles like she knows something you don''t and then without further word or letting you ask anything she briskly walks away.'
 		gopnik_initiation = 1

locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tChristina':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/talknaked.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What are the two of you up to now?" you ask Christina, ignoring Lina, as you walk up to them.'
 		'Lina''s eyebrows shoot up when she sees you''re naked, but when Christina sees you, she just looks straight down and mumbles something. Grabbing her by the arm, you give her a shake, and say "I''m talking to you, bitch! Speak up." Meekly, she replies "Training, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m not allowed to run anymore, but I thought I could still help Lina."'
-		'Lina is looking back and forth, between the two of you, unsure how to behave in this new dynamic. The fact that you''re also naked seems to be messing with her even more. Still, she tries to cover for Christina by saying "I did horrible in the last race, so I...uh...asked her for help."'
+		'Lina is looking back and forth, between the two of you, unsure how to behave in this new dynamic. The fact that you''re also naked seems to be messing with her even more. Still, she tries to cover for Christina by saying "I did horrible in the last race, so I... uh... asked her for help."'
 		act 'Let them train in peace': gt 'gLake'
 		act 'Train Lina yourself (0:30)':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLina':
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/talknaked.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What are the two of you up to now?" you ask Lina, ignoring Christina, as you walk up to them.'
-		'Lina''s eyebrows shoot up when she sees you''re naked, but all she says is "I did horrible in the last race, so I...uh...asked Christina for help." Christina just nods, staring at her feet, too afraid to even look at you.'
+		'Lina''s eyebrows shoot up when she sees you''re naked, but all she says is "I did horrible in the last race, so I... uh... asked Christina for help." Christina just nods, staring at her feet, too afraid to even look at you.'
 		'"Training is good, Lina. A much better plan than trying to suck the coach off, if you ask me." Christina''s cheeks flush a little, but she keeps looking down. Lina just smiles, but still seems too afraid of Christina to say anything against her.'
 		act 'Let them train in peace': gt 'gLake'
 		act 'Train Lina yourself (0:30)':

locations/hotel_resep.qsrc

@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbarcont':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/pavlin/pavlin_violent3.jpg"></center>'
 				'This brings <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>> to his knees, catching his breath.'
 				'You take this opportunity to turn around and run away.'
-				'"Screw you , bitch, I will get you for this" is the last thing you hear before you are back on the street.'
+				'"Screw you, bitch, I will get you for this" is the last thing you hear before you are back on the street.'
 				pavldom = 1
 			else
 				'You are terrified and the only thing you dare to say is "I am sorry <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>>. It won''t happen again."'

locations/housecall.qsrc

@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 										'Shaking your head. "No, I do not think so."'
 										'"It''s magic, based on sensuality and sex. Roughly speaking, I can cast only while I''m having sex."'
 										'"So?"'
-										'Since you have not asked her to stop she keeps caressing your clitoris. "That is, if we have sex,  I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
+										'Since you have not asked her to stop she keeps caressing your clitoris. "That is, if we have sex, I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
 										'"And what do you get in return?"'
 										'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I having an orgasm."'
 										'Feeling your arousal mounting you find yourself nodding your head. "Then I agree."'

locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc

@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters_theme':
 			cla
 			hunter_sexual_comfort -= 5
 			hunter_collective_opinion += 1
-			'"Huh...what? No I have not!" you answer, blushing to your ears'
+			'"Huh... what? No I have not!" you answer, blushing to your ears'
 			if hunter_sexual_comfort < 35 and hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
 				'"Stop embarrassing the little lady" says Sergey. "She is our guest, we have to be polite"'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'swamp_yard', 'campfire'
@@ -1414,7 +1414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_encounter':
 					hunter_collective_opinion += 3
 
 					'"That''s the spirit <<$pcs_nickname>>. You have got nothing to hide so why hide it?" says Andrei'
-					'"I...uh...wow." stammers Igor. "Still not used to you prancing around like that"'
+					'"I... uh... wow." stammers Igor. "Still not used to you prancing around like that"'
 					act 'Help him get more used to it':	gs 'hunter_interactions', 'igor_demonstration'
 				else
 					hunter_sexual_comfort += 3

locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -714,7 +714,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_sisterkom_krossdress':
 			'You start looking through the clothes and quickly find some beautiful lingerie.'
 			'"Wow, look at this beautiful lingerie." you comment and see Igor appreciatively nodding.'
 			'"Well, if you like it that much, can''t you try it on?" you jest and toss the lingerie at him.'
-			'"Hardy...har har. Very funny..." said Igor as he picked up the lingerie from the floor.'
+			'"Hardy har har... Very funny..." said Igor as he picked up the lingerie from the floor.'
 			'"Yeah!" you continue searching on... "Let''s find something nice for you to try on! Here, try these panties on... and... this bra too!" you laugh as you toss the items into his face. You are laughing to yourself as you find this being such a good joke!'
 			'"Say what?! You want me to dress like a girl?" Igor said indignantly.'
 			'"Come on, don''t be such a bore! Let''s have some fun!" you say playfully, and giggle sweetly while looking at him.'
@@ -907,7 +907,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 						'You go for a walk in the park. Igor is very scared, leaning onto you, holding your hand. You were both constantly looking around, fearing seeing someone you know.'
 						'"Igor, please, calm down! You are drawing attention to yourself acting this way. Just act like you are enjoying yourself and no one will notice." you tell him as you hold his hand.'
 						'"It does not work! I swear it looks like everyone is staring at me all the time. I am so screwed!" he said while shivering nervously.'
-						'"Don''t worry.	 No one has recognized you yet, no one suspects you of being a boy." you reassure him.'
+						'"Don''t worry. No one has recognized you yet, no one suspects you of being a boy." you reassure him.'
 						act 'Continue walking':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/crossdress/progulka_3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka':
 				'Dimka runs over to the store and returns with a couple of beers and you find a secluded place where you could drink in peace. Dimka pours the beer in plastic cups. You all have a drink and chat about little things.'
 				'Dimka entertains the both of you, but its so obvious he''s just interested in Diana. He''s truly intrigued by Diana and asks her many questions about her personal life, coming up with different questions all the time.'
 				'Diana looked a little frazzled as she answered his onslaught of questions. You are amazed that Diana was able to keep it together and answer as many of the questions as she did.'
-				'With the beer gone, You hastily says "Thank you for the beers, Dimka. It was nice of you to treat us, but we have to go, right Diana, so bye." and with that started Diana pulling you away from Dimka.'
+				'With the beer gone, you hastily say "Thank you for the beers, Dimka. It was nice of you to treat us, but we have to go, right Diana, so bye." and with that started Diana pulling you away from Dimka.'
 				act 'Well, now what?':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/dimanos/obnimaet.jpg"></center>'

locations/ivanRoom.qsrc

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-			'Tatiana began to explain, "I can cast a temporary spell on you. Ivan will not recognize you. We can seduce him, and get him talking and maybe have a few drinks.  Then when he''s in our power we get him to write out a confession. "'
+			'Tatiana began to explain, "I can cast a temporary spell on you. Ivan will not recognize you. We can seduce him, and get him talking and maybe have a few drinks. Then when he''s in our power we get him to write out a confession. "'
 
 			act 'Let''s get down':
 				cls
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-								'After a short conversation where Tatiana asked quite a few very personal questions of Ivan, all the while displaying her cleavage, you take your que and ask if Ivan would like to have a drink with you and Tatiana. He chuckled, "Girls, I do not know what you''re up to here, but I think this is over." You start to protest but he cuts you off. ""No. Two good looking but strange girls, come to my house, asking me stupid questions, trying to entice me, then you want to drink, then what, I pass out?  Then you rob my house as I sleep?" Tatiana is noticeably flustered realizing that her plan has unravelled at the seams. Ivan gets up from the couch and asks you to leave the apartment. Tatiana tries to think of something else but Ivan is already holding the door open for you have nothing left to do but to leave.'
+								'After a short conversation where Tatiana asked quite a few very personal questions of Ivan, all the while displaying her cleavage, you take your que and ask if Ivan would like to have a drink with you and Tatiana. He chuckled, "Girls, I do not know what you''re up to here, but I think this is over." You start to protest but he cuts you off. ""No. Two good looking but strange girls, come to my house, asking me stupid questions, trying to entice me, then you want to drink, then what, I pass out? Then you rob my house as I sleep?" Tatiana is noticeably flustered realizing that her plan has unravelled at the seams. Ivan gets up from the couch and asks you to leave the apartment. Tatiana tries to think of something else but Ivan is already holding the door open for you have nothing left to do but to leave.'
 
 								act 'Leave the apartment':
 									cls
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 															cumface = 0
 															gs 'stat'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tatiana meanwhile handed him a glass of water, thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tatiana asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what I wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tatiana grinned, "It''s done Ivan you go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tatiana turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tatiana, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
+															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tatiana meanwhile handed him a glass of water, thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tatiana asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what I wanted. Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tatiana grinned, "It''s done Ivan you go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tatiana turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tatiana, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
 
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
 															gs 'stat'
@@ -240,14 +240,14 @@ else
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-			'Tanya started to explain "In your disguise Ivan won''t recognize you. We have to seduce him, for that I have the means,this aphrodisiac is  enough strong and he just has to smell it, and immediately he''ll be horny. The main thing we keep ourselves out of the vapor. Then when he is ready to offer him a drink, that shoul untie his tongue. We record his confession on camera. And thats it."'
+			'Tanya started to explain "In your disguise Ivan won''t recognize you. We have to seduce him, for that I have the means,this aphrodisiac is enough strong and he just has to smell it, and immediately he''ll be horny. The main thing we keep ourselves out of the vapor. Then when he is ready to offer him a drink, that shoul untie his tongue. We record his confession on camera. And thats it."'
 			act 'Let''s begin':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-				'Tanya said "Here, take this bottle its the aphrodisiac. Carefull with that remember it will affect us as well." Tanya gives you the bottle and you splash a little on the frame of the door, trying not to inhale the aroma. Tanya rang the bell and waited a few minutes for him to answer it. On the threshold appeared Ivan, He looked a little perplexed at you. Tanya smiled sweetly Ivan "We conducting a social survey, Can we ask you a few questions?" Ivan stands aside inviting you to go to the apartment.'
+				'Tanya said "Here, take this bottle its the aphrodisiac. Carefull with that remember it will affect us as well." Tanya gives you the bottle and you splash a little on the frame of the door, trying not to inhale the aroma. Tanya rang the bell and waited a few minutes for him to answer it. On the threshold appeared Ivan, he looked a little perplexed at you. Tanya smiled sweetly Ivan "We conducting a social survey, Can we ask you a few questions?" Ivan stands aside inviting you to go to the apartment.'
 				act 'Go in to the apartment':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ else
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-								'After a short conversation where Tanya asked quite a few very personal questions of Ivan, all the while displaying her cleavage, you take your que and ask if Ivan would like to have a drink with you and Tanya. He chuckled, "Girls, I do not know what you''re up to here, but I think this is over." You start to protest but he cuts you off. ""No. Two good looking but strange girls, come to my house, asking me stupid questions, trying to entice me, then you want to drink, then what, I pass out?  Then you rob my house as I sleep? " Tanya is noticeably flustered realizing that her plan has unravelled at the seams. Ivan gets up from the couch and asks you to leave the apartment. Tanya tries to think of something else but Ivan is already holding the door open for you have nothing left to do but to leave.'
+								'After a short conversation where Tanya asked quite a few very personal questions of Ivan, all the while displaying her cleavage, you take your que and ask if Ivan would like to have a drink with you and Tanya. He chuckled, "Girls, I do not know what you''re up to here, but I think this is over." You start to protest but he cuts you off. ""No. Two good looking but strange girls, come to my house, asking me stupid questions, trying to entice me, then you want to drink, then what, I pass out? Then you rob my house as I sleep? " Tanya is noticeably flustered realizing that her plan has unravelled at the seams. Ivan gets up from the couch and asks you to leave the apartment. Tanya tries to think of something else but Ivan is already holding the door open for you have nothing left to do but to leave.'
 
 								act 'Get out of the apartment':
 									cls
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ else
 															cumface = 0
 															gs 'stat'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tanya meanwhile handed him a glass of water after putting something into it,  thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tanya asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what i wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tanya grinned, "it''s done Ivan, go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tanya turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tanya, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
+															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tanya meanwhile handed him a glass of water after putting something into it,  thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tanya asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what i wanted. Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tanya grinned, "it''s done Ivan, go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tanya turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tanya, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
 															gs 'stat'
 															act 'Leave':gt'city_industrial'

locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 					'As you suggest to pass some time in the public sauna, Katja frowns.'
-					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, spending too much time in there isn''t going to do any good, It is best to leave it for another day."'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, spending too much time in there isn''t going to do any good, it is best to leave it for another day."'
 					'It is evident that this isn''t a good idea. You better to look for something else to do.'
 
 					act 'Continue': gt 'katjaEV','kathan'
@@ -920,19 +920,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 							if KatjaSlut >= 20 and KatjaHorny >= 20:
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KS6.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you prepare to put on your swimwear at the lockers, Katja lies against a wall and observes you undressing. The redhead has stopped midway, and stands there in (sexy)underwear, with eyes full of mischief.'
+								'As you prepare to put on your swimwear at the lockers, Katja lies against a wall and observes you undressing. The redhead has stopped midway, and stands there in (sexy) underwear, with eyes full of mischief.'
 								'"Hm. Is something wrong Katja?"'
 								'The ginger just smiles and begins to caress and play with her red mane without breaking eye contact.'
-								'"I... was thinking <<$pcs_nickname>>. Maybe it is better if we go naked, I mean, the hot steam will make us sweat and...my bikini will feel uncomfortable. What do you think? All that sweat all over my skin. It gives you ideas, doesn''t it?"'
+								'"I... was thinking <<$pcs_nickname>>. Maybe it is better if we go naked, I mean, the hot steam will make us sweat and... my bikini will feel uncomfortable. What do you think? All that sweat all over my skin. It gives you ideas, doesn''t it?"'
 								'Oh fuck! Is she tempting you?'
-
 								act 'You can''t resist her!':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KL2.jpg"></center>'
-									'Groaning in frustration, you get naked, as sweet... candid... Katja... get naked, and exaggeratedly sighs giving you sensuall eyes.'
+									'Groaning in frustration, you get naked, as sweet... candid... Katja... get naked, and exaggeratedly sighs giving you sensual eyes.'
 									'"Bitch!"'
-									'You varelly whisper your insult and take the gigling bimbo wannabe towards the sauna.'
-
+									'You whisper your insult and take the giggling bimbo wannabe towards the sauna.'
 									act 'Go to the sauna':
 										gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 										if pcs_inhib < 20: inhib_exp += 1
@@ -941,7 +939,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 										gt 'katjaEv','kathan10'
 									end
 								end
-								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'hard' & !!This does not take into consideration inhibition/exhibitionism because Sveta chose to put on the swimwear and Katja is forcing her to undress.
+								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'hard' !!This does not take into consideration inhibition/exhibitionism because Sveta chose to put on the swimwear and Katja is forcing her to undress.
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Resist her!': gt 'katjaEV','kathansaunasw2'
 								else
@@ -974,7 +972,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 					
 					if pcs_inhib > 20:
 						act 'Go in the nude!':	gs 'clothing', 'strip' & gs 'underwear', 'remove' & gt 'katjaEv','kathan10'
-
 					elseif pcs_inhib < 20:
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'easy'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -991,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 							act 'Go in the nude! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 						end
 					end
-					act 'Hm... Is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+					act 'Hm... it is probably better if you find something else to do': npc_rel['A14'] -= 1 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1003,7 +1000,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 			'Everyone knows, at least in your school, that being cool costs money and if you aren''t called Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov or Dimka Nosov, your parents are going to frown at any "unnecessary" expenditure. Sigh. What would they know about being a teen in modern Russia?'
 			'So, what is a high school student with no money going to do? You visit open-air markets, jumble sales and the occasional van with "second hand" merchandise in the back.'
 			'That is precisely what you and Katja have decided to do. Look for that elusive bargain that will propel your standing a little higher in the school''s totem. An always important enterprise that requires time, patience and the endless manhandling of the sympathetic sellers'' products.'
-
 			act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
 		end
 
@@ -1326,9 +1322,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan2':
 		'That is the thing that passes by your head in the aftermath of laying in the frozen soil. The snow, trying to its heart content, to pass the flimsy protection that your winter clothes try to give but you remember one thing.'
 		'"I am a Russian bitch! You can''t stop me Winter!"'
 		'You scream at the heavens, and with an effort of will, your arms and legs begin to move against the snow''s cold resistance, shaping it on your heavenly form''s visage, but winter is not defeated, and a sudden icy wind blows against your face, trying to stop you.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Snort! You are crazy! Just...Hahaha!"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Snort! You are crazy! Just... hahaha!"'
 		'You look to the smiling redhead, who is trying to stand, but fails and sits on the ground, laughing at your antics until you get up and help her to her feet. There in the ground are your silhouettes. It has been fun, but now you are cold and it is probably best to look for something else to do.'
-
 		act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	end
 
@@ -1336,10 +1331,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan2':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWT12.jpg"></center>'
-		'You know the drill, it isn''t really that hard. Three big snowballs, some stones for details, maybe some discarded clothes from a dumpster...and bingo! A snowman! Then why is it taking you so much time to finish it?!'
+		'You know the drill, it isn''t really that hard. Three big snowballs, some stones for details, maybe some discarded clothes from a dumpster... and bingo! A snowman! Then why is it taking you so much time to finish it?!'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I think that the red scarf doesn''t go with those sticks."'
 		'You two have examined the dumpsters and piked the most selected branches around the zone, but somehow that isn''t enough.'
-		'"Hm, you are right Katja. I''m thinking...on that old jacket!"'
+		'"Hmm, you are right Katja. I''m thinking... on that old jacket!"'
 		'Of course, kids around you want to help, but really, what will those snot-nosed kiddos know about dressing your creation! So, that is why you have "encouraged" the kids to, well, build their own far away so your work continues undisturbed, changing clothes, stones, and sticks until your snowman is ready.'
 		'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>! Let''s do a selfie!"'
 		'And then, after half an hour of intense work, your masterful creation is ready for posterity. It is time to look for something else to do.'
@@ -2243,9 +2238,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan13':
 		'It takes a long while for you both to catch your breath after the frenetic sex you just had, the sauna''s atmosphere not helping much.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>> Woah! Te-he Uff! I''m wasted, but... it was worth it!"'
 		'You smile tiredly to the good-spirited girl, who now sits happily by your side, tiredly caressing and kissing you.'
-		'"Yeah Katja...But we must leave before we dry up like raisins."'
+		'"Yeah Katja... but we must leave before we dry up like raisins."'
 		'You help her get up and prepare to exit the sauna.'
-
 		if month >11 or month <3:
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -2590,7 +2584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 11:
 		'"Yeah, I know! Mefody is always the life of the party, but remember the rule! Do not leave him alone with Vanya for more than five minutes!"'
 	elseif random_event = 12:
-		'"Fine! Ok! I will admit it! I think that Ivan has a great ass. Every girl in our class will say it and...you are going to make say it? Sigh... Yes, I fantasied with him taking me to the church, but I was 13! I now have...other things in my head."'
+		'"Fine! Ok! I will admit it! I think that Ivan has a great ass. Every girl in our class will say it and... you are going to make say it? Sigh... Yes, I fantasized about him taking me to the church, but I was 13! I now have... other things in my head."'
 	elseif random_event = 13:
 		'"I don''t know if you saw this film, what''s it called? Captain America? Well, there was this guy Buck? Bully? Bucky! Yes, that was his name! Well Fedor is Ivan''s Bucky!"'
 	elseif random_event = 14:
@@ -2600,7 +2594,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 16:
 		'"Ok, she knows how to dress? Yes! Use make up? Yes! Beautiful? Yes! Leadership skills that grant her the respect and admiration of all her friends! Yes! So why doesn''t Albina hang around with us?! I don''t have anything against "cough" most "cough" jocks, but it''s like she doesn''t belong with them."'
 	elseif random_event = 17:
-		'"I have seen her dancing over the ice, It is one of the most beautiful things I have ever saw. Ronnie, is whithout doubt, one of the most talented and driven individuals I will ever meet, but all that comes with a cost. She is rich and beautiful, but the weirdest part? Ronnie doesn''t care! I don''t know if I could live that way."'
+		'"I have seen her dancing over the ice, it is one of the most beautiful things I have ever saw. Ronnie, is whithout doubt, one of the most talented and driven individuals I will ever meet, but all that comes with a cost. She is rich and beautiful, but the weirdest part? Ronnie doesn''t care! I don''t know if I could live that way."'
 	elseif random_event = 18:
 		'"Pfff. Lazar? Great biceps! A Greek god in the flesh! I can''t believe I sucked his penis! God he needs to breed all of us so the human race can reach the next stage of evolution! I have heard girls saying these things TO him. Seriously! If somebody strokes more than his ego, there is going to be an explosion!"'
 	elseif random_event = 19:
@@ -2608,7 +2602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 20:
 		'"I don''t remember ever seeing Vanya sad, depressed or angry. He has always been this Happy-Go-Lucky hyperactive fellow that tries to make everybody smile. I really envy my sister for being with him, but remember no matter how much he cries, or how much he begs, never, ever give him a Red Bull."'
 	elseif random_event = 21:
-		'"Artem is...nice, I guess? I mean I don''t know. I do my own homework and don''t deal a lot with him."'
+		'"Artem is... nice, I guess? I mean I don''t know. I do my own homework and don''t deal a lot with him."'
 	elseif random_event = 22:
 		'"Sometimes, I think that Petka likes being bullied by the girls."'
 	elseif random_event = 23:
@@ -2618,9 +2612,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 25:
 		'"Zina? Who is Zina?"'
 	elseif random_event = 26:
-		'"Evgeny is...weird. I''m not sure what his problem is, but he is just too centered on chess. Obsessed I will say."'
+		'"Evgeny is... weird. I''m not sure what his problem is, but he is just too centered on chess. Obsessed I will say."'
 	elseif random_event = 27:
-		'"Te-he! Look, there is this little rumour...Jejeje...about Feofan. It''s seems, that after being send to detention, he met our favorite bully and somehow, well...She deflowered him."'
+		'"Te-he! Look, there is this little rumour... Jejeje... about Feofan. It seems, that after being send to detention, he met our favorite bully and somehow, well... she deflowered him."'
 	elseif random_event = 28:
 		'"The truth is that Gerasim and I don''t interact too much. He is a pretty good student, but beyond that, there isn''t really any relation."'
 	elseif random_event = 29:
@@ -2630,7 +2624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 31:
 		'"Pussy Riot''s music isn''t exactlly my style, but I admit that the band is pretty cool and that is the problem! Anushka is incredibly cool with the capacity to put on clothes ours moms would burn on a stake! Why does she hang around with the gopniks?"'
 	elseif random_event = 32:
-		'"I...Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about this, but...We failed Lavrenti. He had all the reasons in the world to hate us and I don''t know how to fix the situation."'
+		'"I... look <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about this, but... we failed Lavrenti. He had all the reason in the world to hate us and I don''t know how to fix the situation."'
 	elseif random_event = 33:
 		'"Some men were born lucky. Some men were born very lucky. Lesco? God shat all over him."'
 	elseif random_event = 34:
@@ -2725,9 +2719,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan19':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big140.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Hey girls! Just a moment! Ending this, and I am with you!"'
 	'Catching your attention is a smiling Lizaveta, your school''s "Gossip Girl" that, as always, is typing away on her phone. It is evident that the girl''s sixth sense for gossiping has pinpointed Lizaveta towards you, and now the always eager for news girl is zeroing in on your position.'
-	'"Hm. <<$pcs_nickname>>.Time to look for something else to do?"'
+	'"Hmm <<$pcs_nickname>>, time to look for something else to do?"'
 	'Katja seems somewhat troubled about Lizaveta''s apparition, trapped between the need to know and the knowledge that if you aren''t very careful, anything you tell the spook will end up in everyone''s ears. So, what to do?'
-
 	act 'Quickly sneak away':
 		menu_off = 1
 		*clr & cla
@@ -2768,11 +2761,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan19':
 		elseif random_event >= 75 and random_event >= pcs_intel:
 			'"Don''t worry Katja! What''s the worst that could happen?!"'
 			'Katja opens her mouth to answer, but stops and facepalms at your not exactly well-chosen words that have somehow made Lizaveta stop and turn towards you smiling, before she quickly runs towards your sitting place.'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! You won''t believe what I just learned, but...you know what, forget about that! I wanted to ask you something!"'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! You won''t believe what I just learned, but... you know what, forget about that! I wanted to ask you something!"'
 			'You are taken back by the gossiper''s sudden assault and don''t have time to react to the girl''s burning interest. You must admit certain proudness at her questioning. Obviously, your life must be pretty interesting for her, so decide to satiate that thirst for knowledge.'
-			'"Well, yes, my mother went to see him...Albina? After that she was angry...I dunno, it seemed a good idea..."'
+			'"Well, yes, my mother went to see him... Albina? After that she was angry... I dunno, it seemed a good idea..."'
 			'For the next half hour, you and Lizaveta proceed to gossip about basically everything with, curiously, a progressively more silent Katja, but it ends with Lizaveta getting up.'
-			'"Oh! Look at the time! Sorry, Katja! <<$pcs_nickname>>! I must go, you know, some chores to do! So...Bye!"'
+			'"Oh! Look at the time! Sorry, Katja! <<$pcs_nickname>>! I must go, you know, some chores to do! So... bye!"'
 			'Lizaveta turns and leaves, but not without taking her phone out to continue the gossiping online, so you turn towards an embarrassed looking Katja.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Why did you tell her those things?"'
 			'You stand there trying to process what exactly was said. Nothing special? At your stunned expression, Katja rolls her eyes, grabs your hand and takes you away. Just pray that this doesn''t hurt you, but for the moment, it is time to look for something else to do.'
@@ -2788,7 +2781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan19':
 			'Katja looks at you embarrassed, but the little smile in her lips is evident that yes, maybe the infamous Lizaveta Petrov has a really big mouth. But seriously, the gossiping is great, so you both sit and wait patiently until the typing ends and she deigns herself to talk.'
 			'"Sorry! Sorry! You won''t believe what I just learned!"'
 			'Looking like the cat that just ate the mouse, and knowing that you are eager for some news, Lizaveta quickly sits and begins to talk. As it can''t be otherwise, you eat up all the juicy gossip before adding your own knowledge to this special stew.'
-			'"What? No! We can''t tell Stasya...Seriously, I''m surprised that Feofan knows his way around a girl...Oh my god! You are such a slut!"'
+			'"What? No! We can''t tell Stasya... seriously, I''m surprised that Feofan knows his way around a girl... oh my god! You are such a slut!"'
 			'And this is how the three of you pass the next half hour. Gossiping, badmouthing, rumormongering. In general, being like a group of parrots taking pleasure in every word, but all good things must end and the signal is Lizaveta''s phone ringing.'
 			'"Hm? What am I doing? Hu? What time is it? Shit! Sorry, Katja! <<$pcs_nickname>>! I must go! Bye!"'
 			'Lizaveta stands quickly and says goodbye. It is time to look for something else to do.'
@@ -2904,11 +2897,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan21':
 	elseif random_event = 13:
 		'"Fuck! You are dressed, and I''m cumming!"'
 	elseif random_event = 14:
-		'"I will bed a man for you, so...Are you up for some DP?"'
+		'"I will bed a man for you, so... are you up for some DP?"'
 	elseif random_event = 15:
 		'"What? Are you ignoring me? Fortunately, I want your mouth for other things."'
 	elseif random_event = 16:
-		'"Your mouth says NO! Sniff...but my cock say YES!"'
+		'"Your mouth says NO! Sniff... but my cock say YES!"'
 	elseif random_event = 17:
 		'"Deep inside, you are all the same. Cock hungry whores, so let''s skip the foreplay."'
 	elseif random_event = 18:
@@ -2939,7 +2932,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan22':
 		'It was a dull moment in your conversation when it happened. Suddenly, in a little-travelled street corner, Katja turned towards you and...'
 		'"Hmf?!"'
 		'You grunt surprised as the redhead forcefully kisses your lips and merges in a warm embrace. Time stops and you can only stand there, reciprocating Katja''s kisses with your own. Some bystander says something... encouraging? Insulting? You are barely aware, but somehow that stops the making out session.'
-		'"Woah! That was...Great Katja!"'
+		'"Woah! That was... great Katja!"'
 		'She gives you a cheeky smile and grabbing your hand, takes you away to look for something else to do.'
 
 		if hour >= 20:
@@ -3008,7 +3001,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan23':
 				'Smiling nervously, you unhook your arm from the redhead, and feeling insecure, stride towards the approaching Svyatoslav.'
 				'"Hey Slavik! I..."'
 				'As Svyatoslav tries to pass by your side towards Katja, he gives you an exasperated gaze. It is evident that a little outcast girl like you isn''t going to stop the big jock boy from reaching the redheaded beauty...or at least that''s what would happen if you were in school.'
-				'"But...But...I just wanted to talk! Slavik why are you all so mean to me?!"'
+				'"But, but... I just wanted to talk! Slavik, why are you all so mean to me?!"'
 				'You then whine and put on scared eyes for all the people on the street''s enjoyment, and in that instant, the atmosphere changes as around you, the pedestrians instantly form a dislike to the BIG BAD BULLY threatening the SCARED CUTE GIRL'
 				'"Fuck you <<$pcs_nickname>>! Why don''t you go and fuck your therapist? Just leave Katja and I alone for a minute!"'
 				'"Nope!" you angrily answer and grab his arm "And if you don''t follow me, I will begin to scream about how your bullying has made me need one!"'
@@ -3084,14 +3077,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 		'You try to calm the hyper-ventilating redhead as she maniacally gets up and takes a peek beyond her room''s door. Finally, she calms enough to talk with you.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you saw that didn''t you? I mean...They were...Oh God!"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you saw that didn''t you? I mean... they were... oh God!"'
 		'Taking her hand, you force Katja to sit by your side and embrace the redhead, mostly to stop her from driving you crazy.'
 		'"There there Katja. Just stop and breathe."'
 		'She takes your advice, and takes a big gulp of air. That seemed to quieten her down, deflating and returning her to a more "normal" mindstate. Even at that, she is troubled.'
-		'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s just that a lot of things suddenly made sense. Look, Valentina lived here some time ago here. I don''t know all the history, but she left her mother to live in the city and ended up in some kind of trouble. Mom welcomed her to our home, and...Remember how she clung to my mom? Valentina was always that way and seemed jealous of Vicky and me and now I''m thinking..."'
+		'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s just that a lot of things suddenly made sense. Look, Valentina lived here some time ago here. I don''t know all the history, but she left her mother to live in the city and ended up in some kind of trouble. Mom welcomed her to our home, and... remember how she clung to my mom? Valentina was always that way and seemed jealous of Vicky and me and now I''m thinking..."'
 		'"That maybe your mother and Valentina were, or are, lovers? That troubles you? You don''t like that?"'
 		'Katja looks at you with a mix of emotions in her face. Confusion, surprise, doubt, fear. She opens and closes her mouth, looks at you, blushes and says something surprising...'
-		'"I don''t know...Maybe? I never thought about something like that. Ehm...<<$pcs_nickname>>...What would you think, if I...I mean...Ehm...behaved like Valentina and...tried to kiss you?"'
+		'"I don''t know... maybe? I never thought about something like that. Ehm... <<$pcs_nickname>>... what would you think, if I... I mean... ehm... behaved like Valentina and... tried to kiss you?"'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'force', 'hard'
 		minut += 5
@@ -3105,8 +3098,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 				'"Yes?"'
 				'You lean against her and give her a little kiss on the lips. She doesn''t react, so you continue, grabbing at her face, cheeks and neck. Her hands raise against your chest, but she doesn''t try to push you away. In fact, she begins to kiss you back.'
 				'This escalates into an awkward make out, as the inexperienced girl shyly tries to follow your lead, biting you on more than one occasion. More and more, your lips and eventually tongues mix, arousing the two of you in an ever-increasing loop, but it all stops when Katja gives a surprised "Epp!" and moves away from you.'
-				'It seems that one of your hands had somehow reached below her clothes and, well, began to play with one of her tits. Now the two of you are looking at the transgressive hand in confusion. Biting her lips,she looks around nervously and tries to fix her ruffled clothes.'
-				'"That was...Woah. Hm. Something <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
+				'It seems that one of your hands had somehow reached below her clothes and, well, began to play with one of her tits. Now the two of you are looking at the transgressive hand in confusion. Biting her lips, she looks around nervously and tries to fix her ruffled clothes.'
+				'"That was... woah. Hmmm... Something <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
 
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force', 'hard'
@@ -3130,7 +3123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 		gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'self', 'hard'
 
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act '"Katja...Hm...Want to try it?"':
+			act '"Katja... want to try it?"':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3157,7 +3150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 				act 'Time to leave': gt 'katjaEv','TamVal_2'
 			end
 		else
-			act '"Katja...Hm...Want to try it?" (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act '"Katja... want to try it?" (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 
 		act 'Stare at her awkwardly.':
@@ -3166,9 +3159,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Hu?!"'
 			'That is the most your brain seems capable of answering to Katja''s question and obviously she didn''t take it too well.'
-			'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I wasn''t insinuating...I mean...I didn''t want to...Ehm..."'
-			'You stare at her. She stares at you. The silence only seems to make the two of you more embarrassed by the second...Fuck!'
-
+			'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I wasn''t insinuating... I mean... I didn''t want to... ehm..."'
+			'You stare at her. She stares at you. The silence only seems to make the two of you more embarrassed by the second... fuck!'
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			npc_rel['A14'] -= 5
 			minut += 5
@@ -3188,7 +3180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 				'You can''t stop smiling at her cuteness, but the truth is that Katja''s childishness is getting boring. Her mother has a worshiping toygirl at her beck and call, Vicky has acquired the munch-eating services of a rock-hard-abs jock. Well, Katja can have a fucking superhuman succubus! What is she thinking?! End up as the only virgin in your class? Time to change that.'
 				'"Ok Katja, time for a lesson. Let''s get naked."'
 				'You begin to take away your clothes as a flabbergasted Katja stops in her tracks and tries to process what you just said.'
-				'"Eh...What? <<$pcs_nickname>>, is this a joke?"'
+				'"Eh... what? <<$pcs_nickname>>, is this a joke?"'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'No it isn''t':
@@ -3205,13 +3197,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal':
 					act 'She sits on the bed.':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/SL1.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>...What...What are you planning to do?"'
+						'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>... what... what are you planning to do?"'
 						'You don''t answer. In it''s place, there is only an embrace. Katja squirms nervously, but doesn''t try to break away. Kissing her beautiful neck, you wait and let the redhead relax... A  difficult task, so after a few minutes, your hands begin to roam her body.'
-						'"Listen to me shy, innocent, self-conscious, virginal Katja. From now on, you will respond only with "Oh...Oh...Oh..." Do you understand my Pet?"'
-						'Your right hand finally reaches between her legs and rests over the soft fabric of her panties. A promise of things to come....stopped when she closes her legs.'
+						'"Listen to me shy, innocent, self-conscious, virginal Katja. From now on, you will respond only with "Oh... oh... oh..." Do you understand my pet?"'
+						'Your right hand finally reaches between her legs and rests over the soft fabric of her panties. A promise of things to come.... stopping when she closes her legs.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Ouch!"'
 						'At Katja''s transgression, you give her crotch a little pinch, startling her, but making her shut up. Your enhanced senses let you caress all her erogenous zones and soon she is moaning, forgetting her reluctance at your dominant act.'
-						'"That is ok Pet. Just... let me do all the work. But first, I need you to give me something... Will you let me in?"'
+						'"It is ok my pet. Just... let me do all the work. But first, I need you to give me something... will you let me in?"'
 						'She looks at you confused, but unquestionably aroused. With a vague understanding of your words, she opens her legs.'
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -3266,7 +3258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal_2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	'A few minutes pass with Katja in contemplative silence before you finally decide to leave, but as you reach for the door, she finally talks.'
-	 '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I...look this is going to sound awkward, Especially... Ehm...taking into consideration what just happened... I was thinking about this before, well, you know. Will you want to...come home to study? I''m not trying to...Ehm...Fuck!"'
+	 '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I... look this is going to sound awkward, Especially... ehm... taking into consideration what just happened... I was thinking about this before, well, you know. Will you want to... come home to study? I''m not trying to...Ehm...Fuck!"'
 	'You smile at Katja''s awkwardness.'
 	'"Yes, I would like that Katja, don''t worry."'
 	'She gives you a timid smile before climbing under her bed''s covers as you leave. This has been a full afternoon. There is nothing more for you here... Except Katja''s mother waiting for you in the entry hall...'
@@ -3292,7 +3284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TamVal_2':
 
 		else
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>> isn''t it? I''m Tamara Mikhailovna, my pleasure."'
-			'"Hello Mrs.Mikhailovna."'
+			'"Hello Mrs. Mikhailovna."'
 			'"So... <<$pcs_nickname>>, what exactly is troubling my little girl?"'
 			'She is asking you without concern, and for a moment, you don''t know what to say, but finally decide to answer.'
 			'"She is troubled about the fact that Valentina and you are in a... well... romantic relationship."'
@@ -3429,7 +3421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS6.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ok Slut, this is what is going to happen. You see cute little Katja here? Well, you are coming with us and will eat her pussy like there is no tomorrow. Do that and I will condone some of your debt. Understood?"'
-	'Natasha looks at you, but doesn''t retort, She just looks to Katja for a moment and then nods. Yeah! Total control!'
+	'Natasha looks at you, but doesn''t retort, she just looks to Katja for a moment and then nods. Yeah! Total control!'
 	'"Hey! Let''s show Natasha your room!"'
 	'You grab Katja''s hand and exit the shop, followed by a meekly Natasha. The journey back seems to take an eternity as the two girls eye one another silently, but finally, you enter Katjas''s room, quickly undress and jump onto the bed.'
 	'"So girls, how do we begin?"'
@@ -3475,7 +3467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 
 					'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-					'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+					'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 					'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 					'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 					'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3496,7 +3488,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 
 				'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-				'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+				'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 				'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 				'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 				'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3560,7 +3552,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 
 					'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-					'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+					'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 					'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 					'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 					'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3580,7 +3572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-			'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+			'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 			'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 			'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 			'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'
@@ -3616,7 +3608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS10.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shove Natasha away and jump on the redhead who, faking surprise, lets your tongue ravage her mouth.'
-		'"Now... Muach...you are...Slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
+		'"Now... Muach... you are... slurp... mine Katja! I am horny, so you two can do your job!"'
 		'The redhead doesn''t retort. She just caresses your face and begins to kiss you. Then, a wet sensation reaches your back. It is Natasha, who has positioned herself behind you and has just licked your back. She stops when you turn towards her with curiosity, but after an embarrassing silence in which you don''t say anything, the nerdy girl continues licking and kissing her way back down your back, her hands groping your butt.'
 		'"Shh... Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, Natasha and I know what to do."'
 		'Katja embraces you and lies down, so you end on top, where you lash on her gorgeous bosom. Natasha meanwhile doesn''t stand idle and her hands begin to work you, her cold tongue tasting your asshole, startling you, but Katja embraces your body so you can''t escape the nerd''s probing. They continue doing this, slowly drilling your soaking cunt, exploring your hungry mouth and caressing your burning skin.'

locations/kazinosvid.qsrc

@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			act 'Keep playing':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/cards/5.jpg"></center>'
-				'Minutes later, You are both naked, and he is standing in front of you with his pants down. It must''ve been the wine that lead you to this predicament.'	
+				'Minutes later, you are both naked, and he is standing in front of you with his pants down. It must''ve been the wine that lead you to this predicament.'	
 				'"Well ladies, it looks you''re all out of clothes. There is only one thing you have left to offer as payment," he says, while slowly stroking himself.'
 
 				act 'Go for it':

locations/kotovdom.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kotov_kom':
 		act 'Walk home with Vitek': gt 'kotovdom', 'walk'
 	end
 	if npc_rel[$boy] <= 50 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and pcs_sweat < 20 :
-		'"Thanks for fun <<$pcs_nickname>>. " he says looking up at you from the bed. Seeing that you are ready to go, he tells: "Take care, You are always welcome here."'
+		'"Thanks for fun <<$pcs_nickname>>. " he says looking up at you from the bed. Seeing that you are ready to go, he tells: "Take care, you are always welcome here."'
 		act 'Say goodbye and leave his apartment':gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 	if pcs_sweat >= 20:

locations/kuhr2x.qsrc

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if dirttarelka > 0:'The sink has <b><<dirttarelka>></b> pieces of dirty dishes.
 if fairy > 0:
 	'above the sink is a detergent to wash the dishes with, there is enough for <b><<fairy>></b> time.'
 else
-	'<b><font color = red>you do not have any detergent to wash the dishes, You need to buy detergent.</font></b>'
+	'<b><font color = red>you do not have any detergent to wash the dishes, you need to buy detergent.</font></b>'
 end
 
 if eda > 0:

locations/kuhrPar.qsrc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if hour = 7 and breakfast_day ! daystart and indorf = 0:
 		if kanikuli = 0 and StoryLine > 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0:
             if pcs_grades >= 80:
                 'You smile to him. "Really great. We were just learning something interesting the other day." You go on to talk about some of the stuff you have learned recently in school. He just nods, while you mother gives you a proud smile, Kolka just rolls his eyes.'
-                'The rest of breakfast is taken up with some small talk about what everyone has been up to of late, You thoroughly enjoy your breakfast with your family.'
+                'The rest of breakfast is taken up with some small talk about what everyone has been up to of late, you thoroughly enjoy your breakfast with your family.'
             else
                 'You glance to him. "Um ok, I guess." You notice your mother frowning at you, so you quickly try to change the subject, but they won''t let you. You do your best to make them think you are doing better than you are, but neither seem to have bought it. Kolka snickers at you getting grilled.'
                 'The rest of breakfast is taken up with talk about how Kolka is doing in school. He seems to be doing better than you and is showered with praise from your mother and stepfather. The food is good, even if the conversation wasn''t the best. You quickly finish your meal.'

locations/leonid.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstTime':
 	''
 	'"Do you think I am stupid? The authorities are under my grasp. I own them. Do it and nobody will see you ever again."'
 	'You get up back to your knees.'
-	'"All right Mister <<$bSurname>>, I''ve got the idea. I promise to keep quiet and be your...slave."'
+	'"All right Mister <<$bSurname>>, I''ve got the idea. I promise to keep quiet and be your... slave."'
 	'"Very well. I will call you if I require your presence. Until then you are free to go."'
 	if SchoolAtestat = 0:
 		'"But Mister <<$bSurname>>, what do I tell to my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>? How do I explain my absence from the school and everything?"'

locations/love.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if modelfoto_nude > 30:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Why are you not telling us about the photos you shot for these web sites?" She pulls out the nude photos of you and lies them out on the table. "My son, your mother cares about you. This girl is not worthy of you."'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and screams, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and screams, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if kavslut > 0:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, everyone knows that this girl is a slut. <<$pcs_nickname>> does not just wait tables, she lets every customer, even the Armenians who go there, tear up every hole she has. She doesn''t deserve you!"'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if frot > 3:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, this girl is a slut and lets every pervert who settles down next to her on the subway grope her. She is not worthy of you!"'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	if gloryhole > 30:
 		loverrelation[lover_number] = 0
 		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, your girlfriend moonlights at the sex shop, sucking the members of countless strangers. Do you want a wife like that? She is not worthy of you!"'
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> blushes and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I loved you so, and you... you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 

locations/lover_meet.qsrc

@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		elseif loverrelation[lover_number] > 20:
 			randchan = rand(0, 1)
 			if randchan = 0:
-				$greet = 'says with a faint smile,"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+				$greet = 'says with a faint smile, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			elseif randchan = 1:
-				$greet = 'says with a smile , "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+				$greet = 'says with a smile, "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			end
 		else
 			$greet = 'says, "Hi <<$pcs_firstname>>."'