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  1. 6 6
      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc
  2. 36 36
      locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

+ 6 - 6
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -567,14 +567,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 
 					act 'Leave school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
-				act 'Help out':
+				act 'Help her out':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/lina3.jpg"></center>'
 					'You''ve been feeling rather horny yourself and what you just saw has aroused you even more.
 					"How about we help each other out here? I think we both need a release right now..." you ask as you look at her seductively. She bites her lip as you move over and give her a passionate kiss before you both drop to the floor. You continue making out as you fondle her wet pussy.'
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Next':
+					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/lina4.jpg"></center>'
 						'You lay her down on her back and move between her legs. You lick her anus before running your tongue over her pussy lips and onto her clit. She moans in delight as you start lapping at her engorged bean.'
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Next':
+						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/lina5.jpg"></center>'
 							'While flicking your tongue over her clit, you decide to add to the pleasure by sliding a few fingers inside her. She moans at the sensasation as you feel her pussy tightly clench around your fingers. You continue to both lick her and finger her in tandem when she says that she is reaching climax. You pull your fingers out and flick your tongue faster and she soon screams in pleasure, her squirt splashing across your face.'
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 
-							act 'Next':
+							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/facesp.jpg"></center>'
 								'"That was just what I fucking needed <<$pcs_nickname>>! You eat pussy like a pro!"
@@ -732,7 +732,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Tongue fuck her':
+						act 'Tongue fuck her ass':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'You decide to go further and plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
@@ -822,7 +822,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
 
-							act 'Tongue fuck her':
+							act 'Tongue fuck her ass':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You decide to go further and plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 

+ 36 - 36
locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -883,11 +883,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_lockerroom_cum':
 	if grupTipe = 2:
 		'"Hey you going to the game on Saturday?" he asks as he starts getting cleaned up.'
 		'You smile to him. "Maybe.  Depends on what is going on. Why?" you ask him.'
-		'He grins. "I thought we might hook up after the game, I am sure I could use another release by then. So what do you think?" he asks.'
+		'He grins. "I thought we might hook up after the game? I am sure I could use another release by then. So what do you think?" he asks.'
 		'You grin yourself in reply. "Maybe, maybe not." you say in a teasing tone, which makes him laugh.'
 		'"OK, got it. Well I hope to see you at the game then. I think you got a little something there." he says, indicating the right side of your face.'
 		'You roll your eyes, knowing full well his cum is still all over your right cheek. "Ha ha, very funny."'
-		'He laughs. "See ya later <<$pcs_nickname>>." He walks out of the girls shower and you go into the girls locker room to get dressed.'
+		'He laughs. "See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>." He walks out of the girls shower and you go into the girls locker room to get dressed.'
 	else
 		'"Hey would you like to hook up sometime?" he asks as he starts getting cleaned up.'
 		'You smile to him. "Maybe. Depends on what is going on."'
@@ -1026,7 +1026,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 				'You just want to suck him until he cums and want his cum all over your body. You love the feeling of a hard cock in your mouth as you keep sucking him off. His moans grow louder and louder and you start to wonder if someone might hear him and if you should shut him up when you feel his dick start to twitch.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Cumtastic': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
+				act 'Cum': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1065,7 +1065,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomlocker2.jpg"></center>'
 							'As you sit on the bench letting Petka lick your pussy, you notice Albina walk back in. She stops, stunned at what she sees before her. "What the fuck?"'
 							'He stops licking you and whips his head around to look at Albina and turns bright red. You grab his head and pull it back to your crotch and he starts licking you again. "I didn''t say you could stop pervert."'
-							'Albina gives you a confused look, obviously trying to figure out what is going on. You hold up your strapon and show it to her. "This little pervert was hiding naked in one of the lockers, jerking off while watching us get dressed. So I thought I would teach him a lesson." you tell her, indicating the strapon.'
+							'Albina gives you a confused look, obviously trying to figure out what is going on. You hold up your strapon and show it to her. "This little pervert was hiding naked in one of the lockers, jerking off while watching us get dressed. So I thought I would... teach him a lesson." you tell her, indicating the strapon.'
 							*nl
 							'Albina gives Petka a dirty look, not that he can see it with his face buried in your pussy. "Is that so? And he agreed?" she asks.'
 							'You giggle a little. "I told him it was that or I would go get the coach and bring it up with the principal, who would likely call his parents in. He decided against that."'
@@ -1077,22 +1077,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomlocker3.jpg"></center>'
 								'You push him away. "Stand against the locker and watch." He does as you say and he watches, his eyes wide, as you start strapping the harness on and making sure the dildo is firmly attached. Albina helps you get the harness nice and firm. "Look at this bitch boy! His dick is hard knowing he is about to get fucked! I think he might be gay." Albina says.'
-								'Petka blushes. "I''m not gay, I can''t help it." he stammers. You don''t know if he is gay, turned on by the idea of getting fucked by a girl or just because you are still naked. Either way, it doesn''t really matter.'
-								'You smile to her. "No I don''t mind he spied on all of us."'
+								'Petka blushes. "I''m not gay, I can''t help it." he stammers. You don''t know if he is gay, turned on by the idea of getting fucked by a girl or just because you are naked. Either way, it doesn''t really matter.'
+								'You smile at her. "No I don''t mind. He spied on all of us after all."'
 								gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2, 'dom', 'group'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Turn around':
 									*clr & cla
 									petkasub = 1
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomlocker4.jpg"></center>'
-									'You grab him and turn him around as you say "Get ready pervert." With your manhandling, he turns around quickly so he is facing the lockers. When you start to reach for your bag, Albina seems to know you were going for lube. "He doesn''t need it. This is a punishment after all. If you lube it up, he might enjoy it too much." she says and spits on your dildo. You follow suit and spit on it as well, rubbing the saliva onto the dildo while she spits on his ass and lets it run down his crack. You step up behind him and slide the dildo between his asscheeks. Albina helps out by spreading his ass so you can get a better look. You rub the tip of the dildo against his asshole, rubbing the spit in and then push forward. There is a lot of resistance before the dildo suddenly pops into his ass, causing him to cry out and Albina to giggle.'
+									'You grab him and turn him around as you say "Get ready pervert." With your manhandling, he turns around quickly so he is facing the lockers. When you start to reach for your bag, Albina seems to know you were going for lube. "He doesn''t need it. This is a punishment after all. If you lube it up, he might enjoy it too much." she says and spits on your dildo. You follow suit and spit on it as well, rubbing the saliva onto the dildo while she spits on his ass and lets it run down his crack. You step up behind him and slide the dildo between his asscheeks.' 
+									'Albina helps out by spreading his ass so you can get a better look. You rub the tip of the dildo against his asshole, rubbing the spit in and then push forward. There is a lot of resistance before the dildo suddenly pops into his ass, causing him to cry out and Albina to giggle.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'dom', 'group'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Albina wants some':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomlocker5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You work the dildo deeper into his ass and he grunts loudly in pain. You are fairly sure he doesn''t like this, but then he shouldn''t have been spying. "Oh my god he is still rock hard! He is loving you fucking his ass!" Albina laughs while pointing. You look around and sure enough, his dick is rock hard. Maybe he likes more than he is letting on? Albina undresses, sits on a bench and leans back against the lockers. "Come over here and eat me bitch boy."'
-										*nl
+										'You work the dildo deeper into his ass and he grunts loudly in pain. You are fairly sure he doesn''t like this, but then he shouldn''t have been spying. "Oh my god, he is still rock hard! He is loving you fucking his ass!" Albina laughs while pointing. You look around and sure enough, his dick is rock hard. Maybe he likes more than he is letting on? Albina undresses, sits on a bench and leans back against the lockers. "Come over here and eat me bitch boy."'
 										'You grab him by the hair, turn him towards her and then shove him forward, which causes your dildo to slip out of his ass. "You heard her! Go over there and eat her pussy." you tell him. He scrambles over and kneels down to eat her pussy as you slowly walk over behind him, grab his hips and pull them up. Now standing bent over, he licks Albina''s pussy while presenting his ass to you.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2, 'dom', 'group'
 										gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3, 'dom', 'group'
@@ -1108,20 +1108,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 											act 'Albina''s turn':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomlocker7.jpg"></center>'
-												'You nod, pull out and step aside. She turns him until he is facing you, then spits on his ass and then on her dildo. She steps closer and then he groans loudly from her forcefully shoving her dildo up his ass. "Yeah, you love that don''t you you little fucking anal whore?! Tell me you love getting fucked by my huge dick!"'
+												'You nod, pull out and step aside. She turns him until he is facing you, then spits on his ass and then on her dildo. She steps closer and then he groans loudly from her forcefully shoving her dildo up his ass. "Yeah, you love that don''t you you little fucking butt slut whore?! Tell me you love getting fucked by my huge dick!"'
 												'Petka groans loudly, but answers her. "Yes I love it! I love you fucking my ass!" You don''t know if he really does or if he is just saying what he thinks she wants to hear.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'dom', 'group'
 												gs 'stat'
 												act 'No mercy':
 													*clr & cla
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomlocker8.jpg"></center>'
-													'"That''s right you fucking slut!" Albina says as she grabs hold of Petka''s hips tightly with both hands and starts just hammering away at his ass as fast and hard as she can. He starts crying out and you think he isn''t enjoying her being this rough, if he is even enjoying it at all. "I''m going to keep fucking your ass until you cum for me like the little slut that you are!" Albina growls. Apparently taking her at her word, Petka starts jerking off as hard and fast as he can, trying to cum while Albina rips up his ass.'
+													'"That''s right you fucking slut!" Albina says as she grabs hold of Petka''s hips tightly with both hands and starts just hammering away at his ass as fast and hard as she can. He starts crying out and you think he isn''t enjoying her being this rough, if he is even enjoying it at all. "I''m going to keep fucking your ass until you cum for me like the little slutty whore that you are!" Albina growls. Apparently taking her at her word, Petka starts jerking off as hard and fast as he can, trying to cum while Albina rips up his ass.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'dom', 'group'
 													gs 'stat'
 													act 'About to cum':
 														*clr & cla
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomcum1.jpg"></center>'
-														'"I''m about to cum." Petka grunts out.'
+														'"I''m about to cum!" Petka grunts out.'
 														'"You better cum! If you don''t, then I am going to fuck you so hard you''ll wish you had." Albina threatens.'
 														'"I swear!" Pekta cries out. Albina gives him a few more hard full length strokes before pulling out of him.'
 														'"Put your shoe on the bench, <<$pcs_nickname>>." When you do as she asks, she grabs Petka by the throat and forces him to sit on the bench right in front of your shoes. "Now cum on her shoe." You are about to say something, but she gives you a wink, so you decide to just wait and see. Petka, true to his word, doesn''t take long and he starts cumming, coating your shoe in his cum.'
@@ -1130,9 +1130,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 														act 'Petka cleans up':
 															*clr & cla
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/femdomcum1.jpg"></center>'
-															'Once he stops cumming, Albina pulls him off the bench and forces him down to his knees, then forces his head down to your shoes. "Lick your nasty cum off her shoe! Lick it clean!" she commands him and puts her foot on his back as her hands force his head to your shoe. He starts quickly licking up his own cum off your shoe, doing a pretty good job of licking your shoe completely clean.'
+															'Once he stops cumming, Albina pulls him off the bench and down onto his knees, then forces his head down to your shoes. "Lick your nasty cum off her shoe! Lick it clean!" she commands him and puts her foot on his back as her hands force his head to your shoe. He starts quickly licking his cum off your shoe, doing a pretty good job of licking your shoe completely clean.'
 															*nl
-															'Once your shoe is good and clean, she lets go of him and steps away. "Now get out here before we decide to have another go with you!" she commands. Terrified, he grabs his clothes and bolts out of the locker room, still naked. Albina laughs loudly and you can''t help but join in.  The two of you then take your strapons off and clean them up. "Well that was fun..." Albina says as she gently rubs her soaking wet pussy, her juices trickling down her leg. "Good thing I forgot something."'
+															'Once your shoe is good and clean, she lets go of him and steps away. "Now get the fuck out here before we decide to have another go with you!" she commands. Terrified, he grabs his clothes and bolts out of the locker room, still naked. Albina laughs loudly and you can''t help but join in.  The two of you then take your strapons off and clean them up. "Well that was fun..." Albina says as she gently rubs her soaking wet pussy, her juices trickling down her leg. "Good thing I forgot something."'
 															'"We might have to track him down and do that again sometime. Or maybe he will be stupid enough to spy on us again?" she adds. Before you can make sense of what she said, she has already got dressed and walked out, leaving you to finish up.'
 															gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3, 'dom', 'group'
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1175,7 +1175,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 								act 'Use spit':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/pegging3.jpg"></center>'
-									'You push him forward until he is bent over. "Spread your cheeks." He grabs his asscheeks and spreads them for you. You spit in the crack of his ass a couple of times and watch your saliva run down to his asshole. You rub the tip of your dildo against your spit on his ass and work it in, along with his saliva on your dildo. You feel him tense up and eventually hiss a little in pain as you keep pushing against his asshole with your dildo. The pressure builds up until your dildo suddenly pops into his ass and he cries out in pain and tries to pull away. You were ready for that, however, and grab his hips and pull him back as you start fucking his ass.'
+									'You push him forward until he is bent over. "Spread your cheeks." He grabs his asscheeks and spreads them as you spit in the crack of his ass a couple of times and watch your saliva run down to his asshole. You rub the tip of your dildo against your spit on his ass and work it in, along with his saliva on your dildo. You feel him tense up and eventually hiss a little in pain as you keep pushing against his asshole with your dildo. The pressure builds up until your dildo suddenly pops into his ass and he cries out in pain and tries to pull away. You were ready for that, however, and grab his hips and pull him back as you start fucking his ass.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'dom'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Keep fucking his ass': gt 'gschool_sex', 'femdom_petka_doggy'
@@ -1207,19 +1207,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'femdom_petka_doggy':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/pegging5.jpg"></center>'
 		'You pound his ass and soon he is back to just moaning in pleasure. "You really love getting fucked in the ass don''t you? You are such a dirty little slut."'
 		'He moans. "Yes! I''ll be your slut."'
-		'Those words send a thrill of excitement through your body. A boy letting you completely dominate him and being your willing submissive to the point of letting you fuck his ass with a strapon.'
+		'His words send a thrill of excitement through your body. A boy letting you completely dominate him to the point of letting you fuck his ass with a strapon is arousing you greatly.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Lay down':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/pegging6.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pull out of him and he glances back at you as you say "Lay on your back." He does as you say and lays down on the bench. You push his legs up and apart then step over the bench, straddling it as you slide your strapon back in his ass, making him moan loudly in pleasure as you do. He grabs hold of his dick with one hand and jerks off as you keep fucking him.'
+			'You pull out of him and he glances back at you as you say "Lie on your back." He does as you say and lies down on the bench. You push his legs up and apart then step over the bench, straddling it as you slide your strapon back in his ass, making him moan loudly in pleasure as you do. He grabs hold of his dick with one hand and jerks off as you keep fucking him.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Keep fucking him':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/pegging7.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a while, you are balls deep in his ass, taking long hard strokes and he seems to be loving it. Several minutes go by and you are starting to feel a little tired from all this hip thrusting when he starts moaning louder and louder. "I''m about to cum."'
+				'After a while, you are balls deep in his ass, taking long hard strokes and he seems to be loving it. Several minutes go by and you are starting to feel a little tired from all this thrusting when he starts moaning louder and louder. "I''m about to cum!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Let him cum on you':
@@ -1273,7 +1273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_eatpussy':
 	act 'Make him lick your ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka8.jpg"></center>'
-		'You put your foot down and step away from him. Turning away from him, you put one foot on the bench and bend over slightly. You look back at him expectantly as he crawls over and starts licking your pussy from behind. "Now lick my asshole." you command him and he doesn''t even hesitate and immediately starts lapping away at your hole. You feel empowered and very turned on, making a boy do what you want.'
+		'You put your foot down and step away from him. Turning away from him, you put one foot on the bench and bend over slightly. You look back at him expectantly as he crawls over and starts licking your pussy from behind. "No, lick my asshole." you command. He doesn''t even hesitate and immediately starts lapping away at your hole. You feel empowered and very turned on, making a boy do what you want.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Ride him': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_ride'
@@ -1289,16 +1289,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_ride':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A6'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petkaride1.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Lay down on the bench." you tell him. At your command, he lays down on his back as you walk over and straddle him. You reach down to take hold of his cock as you lower yourself down, guiding it to your entrance. Once you feel the tip of his dick against your slit, you lower yourself and it slides into your wet pussy, causing you both to moan in pleasure. You let go of his dick and slowly lower yourself further, taking all of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside of you. You start riding him cowgirl style, enjoying the control and sensation.'
+	'"Lie down on the bench." you tell him. At your command, he lies down on his back as you walk over and straddle him. You reach down to take hold of his cock as you lower yourself down, guiding it to your entrance. Once you feel the tip of his dick against your slit, you lower yourself and it slides into your wet pussy, causing you both to moan in pleasure. You let go of his dick and slowly lower yourself further, taking all of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside of you. You start riding him cowgirl style, enjoying the control and sensation.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Reverse cowgirl':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petkaride2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lift one leg and spin yourself around, with his dick still inside of you, until you are facing the other way. Putting your foot back down, you start riding him reverse cowgirl style, completely controlling the rhythm and depth. Petka is just your fuck toy to do with as you please. Every girl should have one really. You ride him for a bit more and then you hear him grunting and you can tell he is about to cum. You quickly get off him and drop down to your knees. You grab him by the dick and pull him toward you and start stroking his dick.'
+		'You lift one leg and spin yourself around, with his dick still inside of you, until you are facing the other way. Putting your foot back down, you start riding him reverse cowgirl style, completely controlling the rhythm and depth. Petka is just your fuck toy to do with as you please. Every girl should have one really. You ride him for a bit more before you hear him grunting and you can tell he is about to cum. You quickly get off him and drop down to your knees. You grab him by the dick and pull him toward you and start stroking his dick.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Cumtastic': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
+		act 'Cum': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1306,7 +1306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_fuck':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A6'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petkafuck1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You lay back on the bench and spread your legs wide. "Come over here and fuck me bitch." He eagerly walks over, nearly tripping over his own feet in his haste. He lines his dick up and slides it into your wet hole. He eagerly thrusts his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick balls deep inside of you. You can tell that he doesn''t have much experience with sex. He isn''t very good, but he is really eager.'
+	'You lie back on the bench and spread your legs wide. "Come over here and fuck me bitch." He eagerly walks over, nearly tripping over his own feet in his haste. He lines his dick up and slides it into your wet hole. He eagerly thrusts his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick balls deep inside of you. You can tell that he doesn''t have much experience with sex. He isn''t very good, but he is really eager.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Not so fast':
@@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_fuck':
 		'You grab his head and pull him close until he is looking in your eyes as you tell him "Slow down, this isn''t a race." He looks a little sheepish and slows down a little, but it doesn''t take too long before he starts grunting anyways and you can tell he is getting ready to cum already.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Cumtastic': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
+		act 'Cum': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1332,7 +1332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_anal':
 		'The mixture of pleasure and pain is intoxicating. Pain soon starts to give way to just pleasure as he reams your little asshole with his cock. He starts moaning loudly and hammering away faster and faster and you can tell he is on the verge of cumming. You pull away and he tries to follow, but you pull away fast enough that his dick slides out of your hole and you get down on your knees and start stroking him with your hand.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Cumtastic': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
+		act 'Cum': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_titcum'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1357,9 +1357,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_homework':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka4.jpg"></center>'
 	'You smile at him. "You are going to do my homework for <i>all</i> my classes from now on. You can drop it off in my locker every morning before school."'
 	'He looks crest fallen. "All of it? Every day?" he says in a whinny voice.'
-	'You give him a hard look. "Either that or I go get the coach right now."'
+	'You give him a hard look. "It''s either that or I go get the coach right now."'
 	'He pales and nods. "OK ,OK. I''ll do all of your homework. Can I leave now?"'
-	'You make him squirm a moment then nod. "Yeah get out of here you little pervert." He quickly gets dressed then runs out of the locker room. With that taken care of, you go back to getting dressed.'
+	'You make him squirm before nodding. "Yeah. Now get out of here you little pervert!" He quickly gets dressed then runs out of the locker room. With that taken care of, you go back to getting dressed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1373,7 +1373,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_home':
 	'You cover up. "Get out of here before I shout the coach!"'
 	'He nods and quickly starts getting dressed. "Thank you! And I''m sorry I spied on you."'
 	'You shake your head. "Get the fuck out of here before I change my mind!"'
-	'He turns and takes off towards the door, half dressed. Just before he makes it out, you call out "Consider this a lesson to not sneak into the girls locker room." He doesn''t reply and just runs out.'
+	'He turns and takes off towards the door, half dressed. Just before he makes it out, you call out to him. "Consider this a lesson to not sneak into the girls locker room." He doesn''t reply and just runs out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1383,10 +1383,10 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_homenaked':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk away from him with his clothes. "Well what are you waiting for? Fuck off!"'
+	'You walk away from him with his clothes. "Well, what are you waiting for? Fuck off!"'
 	'He turns pale. "You want me to go home naked?"'
-	'You nod. "It''s either that or I go get the coach and tell him what you were doing you pervert."'
-	'He just nods and takes off naked towards the door. Just before he makes it out, you call out "Consider this a lesson to not sneak into the girls locker room." He doesn''t reply and just runs out naked. You throw his clothes in the trash and go back to getting dressed.'
+	'You nod. "It''s either that or I go get the coach and tell him what you were doing you dirty pervert."'
+	'He just nods and takes off naked towards the door. Just before he makes it out, you call out to him. "Consider this a lesson! I better not see you in here again." He doesn''t reply and just runs out naked. You throw his clothes in the trash and go back to getting dressed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1405,7 +1405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_lockerroom':
 	act 'Eat her out':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerles1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get down on your hands and knees and place your head between her legs and start licking her already wet pussy. You can taste her juices as you lick her labia and clit. She reaches over and places a hand on the back of your head and pulls your face harder into her crotch as she starts to grind her pussy against your face. Her moans of pleasure echo in the empty locker room as your face gets smeared in her wetness. Eventually, she pulls your head away from her and stands up. "Your turn."'
+		'You get down on your hands and knees, place your head between her legs and start licking her already wet pussy. You can taste her juices as you lick her labia and clit. She reaches over and places a hand on the back of your head, pulling your face harder into her crotch as she starts to grind her pussy against your face. Her moans of pleasure echo in the empty locker room as your face gets smeared in her wetness. Eventually, she pulls your head away from her and stands up. "Your turn."'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Lie down':
@@ -1472,13 +1472,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_lockerroom69':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/getdressed.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you both get dressed she comments "It''s nice being with another girl. Men can be such assholes sometimes." with a look of slight frustration on her face.'
 		'You nod slightly in agreement with her. "Yeah...."'
-		'She giggles a little. "Don''t get me wrong, it''s nice to just get fucked hard and put away wet, but sometimes it is nice feeling another girl''s touch. It is so much softer and gentler than a guy''s, especially some of the guys I know."'
-		'You don''t know about that. You are sure some guys can be gentle and some girls really rough, but you suppose in general it is true. "Yeah most times..."'
+		'She giggles a little. "Don''t get me wrong, it''s nice to just get fucked hard and put away wet, but sometimes it is nice feeling another girl''s touch. It''s so much softer and gentler than a guy''s, especially some of the guys I know."'
+		'You don''t know about that. You are sure some guys can be gentle and some girls really rough, but you guess it''s true. "Yeah, most times..."'
 		if AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0:
 			'As she finishes dressing, she turns to you. "I''ll see you at practice yeah?"'
 			'You nod. "Yeah, see you at practice."'
 		end
-		'Once you are both dressed, she heads out of the locker room. "See ya later <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+		'Once you are both dressed, she heads out of the locker room. "See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 		act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	end
 end
@@ -1589,7 +1589,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom':
 						act 'Say nothing':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker8.jpg"></center>'
-							'You moan and groan loudly as you grip the bench tightly as he pounds your little ass hard and fast. Part of you is really enjoying this, but you are still unsure if he did it on purpose until he moans out "Fuck you have a tight little ass." He keeps pounding away at your ass for a couple more minutes before he starts moaning loudly and pulls out of you. "I''m about to cum. Get on your knees and take off your shirt." You turn around and drop to your knees.'
+							'You moan and groan loudly, gripping the bench tightly as he pounds your little ass hard and fast. Part of you is really enjoying this, but you are still unsure if he did it on purpose until he moans out "Fuck you have a tight little ass." He keeps pounding away at your ass for a couple more minutes before he starts moaning loudly and pulls out of you. "I''m about to cum. Get on your knees and take off your shirt." You turn around and drop to your knees.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Cum on tits': gt 'gschool_sex', 'victor_lockerroom_cum'