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[text edit] clean up sitrPar

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      locations/sitrPar.qsrc

+ 13 - 13
locations/sitrPar.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			wipo += 1000
 			gs 'food', 'l_meal'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You sit at the festive table laid in front of the TV and celebrate the New Year with your family, the TV providing some background noise. At the table people strike up a conversation and common problems are forgotten for a while, everyone is having fun talking to each other. At midnight, everyone wishes one another a happy New Year and enjoys the champagne and fireworks outside. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives you an envelope with a greeting card and 5000 <b>₽</b>. For a while you continue to watch TV, enjoying the champagne and company of your family, but after a while everyone is kind of tired and one by one they go to bed.'
+			'You sit at the festive table laid in front of the TV and celebrate the New Year with your family, the TV providing some background noise. At the table, people strike up a conversation and common problems are forgotten for a while, everyone is having fun talking to each other. At midnight, everyone wishes one another a happy New Year and enjoys the champagne and fireworks outside. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives you an envelope with a greeting card and 5000 <b>₽</b>. For a while, you continue to watch TV, enjoying the champagne and company of your family, but eventually, everyone is kind of tired and one by one they go to bed.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/leftovers.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have finished the leftovers remaining on the table from the holidays.'
+			'You finish the leftovers remaining on the table from the holidays.'
 
 		act 'Get up from the table':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 
@@ -72,22 +72,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/uborka1.jpg"></center>'
 		if kanikuli = 0 and StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and week < 6:
 			if CloStyle2 = 4:
-				'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up at and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Go to school, now!" With that she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does she adds ones more. "Go to school."' 
+				'As you walk into the living room, you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Go to school, now!" With that, she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does, she adds once more, "Go to school."' 
 				act 'Continue': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 			else
 				gs 'wardrobe', 'school_outfit'
-				'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up at and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Why are you not wearing your unifrom? Go get changed and go to school, now!" She follows you back to your room and watches as you change into your uniform, after that she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does she adds ones more. "Go to school."' 
+				'As you walk into the living room, you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Why are you not wearing your uniform? Go get changed and go to school, now!" She follows you back to your room and watches as you change into your uniform. After that, she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does, she adds once more, "Go to school."' 
 				act 'Continue':  gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 			end
 		else
-			'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She hasn''t noticed you, she is intent on cleaning.'
+			'As you walk into the living room, you see your mother sweeping the floor. She hasn''t noticed you, she is intent on cleaning.'
 			act 'leave': gt 'korrPar'
 		end
 		exit
 	elseif momloc = 19:
 		!! Watches TV with Vladimir
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/momvladtv.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk into the living room you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and Vladimir sitting on the couch watching tv, while Kolka sits in the armchair watching tv.'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/momvladTV.jpg"></center>'
+		'As you walk into the living room, you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and Vladimir sitting on the couch watching TV, while Kolka sits in the armchair doing the same.'
 		act 'leave':gt 'korrPar'
 		
 		act 'Join them':
@@ -98,8 +98,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			npc_rel['A29'] += 1
 			npc_rel['A34'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familytv.jpg"></center>'
-			'You move over to join them and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scoots away from Vladmir and pat the spot between her and him. You take a seat between them, Vlad barely even glances as you with a brief smile before he goes back to watching tv. Kolka never even looks up, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> pats you on the shoulder before returning her attention to the tv, apparently happy the family is spending time together.'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familyTV.jpg"></center>'
+			'You move over to join them, and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scoots away from Vladimir and pats the spot between her and him. You take a seat between them. Vlad barely even glances at you with a brief smile before he goes back to watching TV, and Kolka never even looks up. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> pats you on the shoulder before returning her attention to the TV, apparently happy the family is spending time together.'
 			act 'leave':gt 'korrPar'
 			
 			act 'Keep watching':gt 'sitrPar', 'TVmom'
@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TVmom':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'family_schedule'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familytv.jpg"></center>'
-	'You continue to watch tv with the family, everyone seems very engrossed in the program and almost never says much. Though Kolka occasional makes a crack about what is happening, often getting shushed by Vlad or <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familyTV.jpg"></center>'
+	'You continue to watch TV with the family. Everyone seems very engrossed in the program and almost never says anything, though Kolka occasionally makes a crack about what is happening, often getting shushed by Vlad or <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
 	if momloc = 19: act'Keep watching TV with your family': gt 'sitrPar', 'TVmom'
 	act 'Finish watching':gt 'sitrPar', 'TVend'
 end
@@ -134,8 +134,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'TVend':
 	cla & *clr
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familytv.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once the show is over Vladimir picks up the remote and turns the tv off, he gets up. Then he stretches, before he turns and walks out of the room, likely heading to bed. <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gets up and says to you. "You should go to bed or at least go to your room so your brother can get his rest." She then turns to Kolka and says to him. "Don''t stay up, go to bed." With that she also leaves, after making sure you leave as well. As you walk out, you see Kolka putting his pillow and sheet on the couch.'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familyTV.jpg"></center>'
+	'Once the show is over, Vladimir picks up the remote and turns the TV off. He gets up then stretches before he turns and walks out of the room, likely heading to bed. <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gets up and says to you, "You should go to bed or at least go to your room so your brother can get his rest." She then turns to Kolka and says to him, "Don''t stay up, go to bed." With that, she also leaves after making sure you leave as well. As you walk out, you see Kolka putting his pillow and sheet on the couch.'
 	act 'leave':gt 'korrPar'
 end