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improved some translations

stcg 9 years ago
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5 changed files with 124 additions and 124 deletions
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      glife.txt
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      locations/152_sitr
  3. 20 20
      locations/153_vanr
  4. 53 53
      locations/154_kuhr
  5. 11 11
      locations/155_korr

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glife.txt


+ 40 - 40
locations/152_sitr

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # sitr
-ACT 'In the corridor':
+ACT 'Go to the corridor':
 	gt 'korr'
 END
 
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ $locM = $CURLOC
 
 $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
-'<center><B><font color = maroon>Hall</font></B></center>'
+'<center><B><font color = maroon>Living room</font></B></center>'
 if remsitr = 0 and TV = 0 or komp = 0 and remsitr = 0: '<center><img src="images\etogame\sitr.jpg"></center>'
 if remsitr = 0 and TV > 0 and komp > 0: '<center><img src="images\etogame\sitr1.jpg"></center>'
 if remsitr = 1: '<center><img src="images\etogame\sitr2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -21,12 +21,12 @@ set minut += 1
 set housrA = 1
 set elektro += 1
 
-if TV = 0: set $TV = 'great place for TV, which you don''t have.'
-if TV = 1: set $TV = 'Ancient <a href="exec:GT ''TV'',''start''">TV</a>'
-if TV = 2: set $TV = 'huge plasma <a href="exec:GT ''TV'',''start''">TV</a>'
+if TV = 0: set $TV = 'a great place for TV, which you don''t have'
+if TV = 1: set $TV = 'an ancient <a href="exec:GT ''TV'',''start''">TV</a>'
+if TV = 2: set $TV = 'a huge plasma <a href="exec:GT ''TV'',''start''">TV</a>'
 
-if divan = 0: set $divan = '<a href="exec:GT ''divan'',''start''">old sofa</a>'
-if divan = 1: set $divan = 'luxury <a href="exec:GT ''divan'',''start''">leather sofa</a>'
+if divan = 0: set $divan = '<a href="exec:GT ''divan'',''start''">an old sofa</a>'
+if divan = 1: set $divan = 'luxury <a href="exec:GT ''divan'',''start''">a leather sofa</a>'
 
 if komp = 0: set $komp = ''
 if komp = 1: set $komp = 'with a <a href="exec:GT ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> on top of it.'
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ if komp = 1: set $komp = 'with a <a href="exec:GT ''Komp'',''start''">computer</
 if selfPornvidDVD = 0: set $selfPornvidDVD = ''
 if selfPornvidDVD > 0: set $selfPornvidDVD = 'You have <a href="exec:Dynamic $selfPorno_Take"><<selfPornvidDVD>></a> of your amateur porn videos available.'
 
-if remsitr = 0: set $zal = 'Cramped room'&set $zal2 = 'dilapidated wall stands'
-if remsitr = 1: set $zal = 'Modern, bright room'&set $zal2 = 'papered walls with light stands'
+if remsitr = 0: set $zal = 'A cramped room'&set $zal2 = 'faded wall'
+if remsitr = 1: set $zal = 'A modern, bright room'&set $zal2 = 'papered walls with light'
 
 if stol = 0: set $stol = 'decrepit <a href="exec:GT ''stol'',''start''">table</a>'
 if stol = 1: set $stol = 'new <a href="exec:GT ''stol'',''start''">table</a>'
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if stol = 1: set $stol = 'new <a href="exec:GT ''stol'',''start''">table</a>'
 if obruch > 0: 'In one corner stands the hoop.'
 if skak > 0: 'On a shelf is a jump rope.'
 if bookYog > 0: 'The cabinet allowance yoga and meditation'
-'<<$zal>> y <<$zal2>> <<$divan>>. In front of the sofa <<$TV>>. Podaleku not worth the window a <<$stol>> <<$komp>> <<$selfPornvidDVD>>'
+'<<$zal>>, <<$divan>> stands next to the <<$zal2>>. In front of the sofa is <<$TV>>. In front of the window is a <<$stol>> <<$komp>> <<$selfPornvidDVD>>'
 if mishka > 0: 'On a shelf is <<mishka>> teddy bear'
 *nl
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ sports = 0
 $sportStringPrefix = ''
 
 if pushday ! day:
-	$sitrpush = '<a href="exec: dynamic $sitrpushd ">push-ups</a>'
+	$sitrpush = ' <a href="exec: dynamic $sitrpushd ">push-ups</a>'
 	sports = 1
 	$sportStringPrefix = ','
 else
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ else
 end
 
 if pressday ! day:
-	$sitrpress = $sportStringPrefix + '<a href="exec: dynamic $sitrpressd ">abdominal exercises</a>'
+	$sitrpress = $sportStringPrefix + ' <a href="exec: dynamic $sitrpressd ">abdominal exercises</a>'
 	sports = 1
 	$sportStringPrefix = ','
 else
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ else
 end
 
 if skak > 0 and skakday ! day:
-	$sitrskak = $sportStringPrefix + '<a href="exec: dynamic $sitrskakd ">jumping rope</a>'
+	$sitrskak = $sportStringPrefix + ' <a href="exec: dynamic $sitrskakd ">jumping rope</a>'
 	sports = 1
 	$sportStringPrefix = ','
 else
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ else
 end
 
 if obruch > 0 and obruchday ! day:
-	$sitrobr = $sportStringPrefix + '<a href="exec: dynamic $sitrobrd ">twist hoop</a>'
+	$sitrobr = $sportStringPrefix + ' <a href="exec: dynamic $sitrobrd ">twist hoop</a>'
 	sports = 1
 	$sportStringPrefix = ','
 else
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ else
 end
 
 if treadmill > 0 and treadmillday ! day:
-	$sitr_tread = $sportStringPrefix + '<a href="exec: dynamic $sitr_tread_d ">treadmill</a>'
+	$sitr_tread = $sportStringPrefix + ' <a href="exec: dynamic $sitr_tread_d ">treadmill</a>'
 	sports = 1
 	$sportStringPrefix = ','
 else
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ else
 end
 
 if bookYog > 0 and bookYogday ! day:
-	$sitryog = $sportStringPrefix + '<a href="exec: dynamic $sitryogd ">meditation</a>'
+	$sitryog = $sportStringPrefix + ' <a href="exec: dynamic $sitryogd ">meditation</a>'
 	sports = 1
 	$sportStringPrefix = ','
 else
@@ -100,12 +100,12 @@ end
 
 if sports = 1:
 	$sportsitr = '<<$sitrpush>><<$sitrpress>><<$sitrskak>><<$sitrobr>><<$sitr_tread>><<$sitryog>>'
-	'In the hall is enough space for a variety of sport activities: <<$sportsitr>>.'
+	'The room has enough space for a variety of sport activities:<<$sportsitr>>.'
 end
 
 !set housegostrand = RAND(1,20)
 !if husband > 0 and husbandrink ! 10 and week = 5 and hour > 17 and hour < 21 and housegostrand > 15:gt 'sitr','guest'
-if suhbelo2 > 0: 'Lying on the table <<suhbelo2>> pieces of dried laundry that need <a href="exec: dynamic $gladbelo ">stroke</a>.'
+if suhbelo2 > 0: 'Lying on the table <<suhbelo2>> pieces of dried laundry that need <a href="exec: dynamic $gladbelo ">ironing</a>.'
 
 *nl
 
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 					set zoo += 1
 					set horny = 0
 					set orgasm += 1
-					'"What´s he doing dear, stop him," cries the husband'
+					'"What''s he doing dear, stop him," cries the husband'
 					'"I can not, try myself," you reply.'
 					set husband -= 1
 					'<<$husName>> trying to shove the dog, but he growls and snarls. "I can not get it to drive away what to do dear?" he asks.'
@@ -172,12 +172,12 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 						'You reluctantly start trying to push the dog and move away, but it appears to him backwards, and <<$namesob>> leans on you and all your weight is on. You feel his penis rubs against your thighs ischya hole.'
 						if izvratH = 0:
 							'"Oh my God, I can not look at it," cried the husband slammed the door and ran. Meanwhile, a member of the dog has found a hole and full-pecked you. You moaned and podmahivat him soon you covered orgasm, and after a few seconds dog cum inside you and radosnym ran out into the corridor. My husband came back, and you still were cancer and dog sperm flowed from your pussy.'
-							'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+							'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 						end
 
 						if izvratH = 1:
 							'"Well get off of her," shouts <<$husName>> at the dog, but close to it does not fit. Meanwhile, a member of the dog has found a hole and full-pecked you. You moaned and podmahivat him and your husband decided that your movement is an attempt to free you cheered "Yes Svetsik so can get more wiggle lose it." Soon you covered orgasm, and after a few seconds dog cum inside you and radosnym ran out into the corridor. Husband looked at you standing cancer hips peremazanymi canine semen flowing out of your pussy.'
-							'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+							'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 						end
 
 						act 'Allow':
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 
 						act 'Not authorized':
 							cla
-							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I´ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
+							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I''ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
 							'"Well dear, whatever you say."'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
 						end
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 					'"I can not, try myself," you reply.'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						'<<$husName>> tries to pull the dog, but he growls and grins, then he goes into the tub and what that brings an old sheet, threw it at the dog picks up the ends and picks up dog is in improvezirovannom bag.'
-						'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+						'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 						act 'Allow':
 							set sobaka = 0
 							set zoo = 0
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 
 						act 'Not authorized':
 							cla
-							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I´ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
+							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I''ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
 							'"Okay, look itself, your dog."'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
 						end
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 							'<center><img src="images\zoo\z3.jpg"></center>'
 							'You grab his cock and takes his mouth to suck, soon begins to cover you and you end sodragayas whole body, a second <<$husName>> ends up in your mouth. You swallow sperm and continue to suck his dick fading. Soused dog began naprygivat you with nedvuhslyslennymi intentions.'
 							'"But this is too much" said <<$husName>> and tried ottoschit dog, but he growls and grins, then he goes into the tub and what that brings old sheets, throwing her to the dog picks up the ends and picks up dog is in improvezirovannom bag.'
-							'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+							'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 							act 'Allow':
 								set sobaka = 0
 								set zoo = 0
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 									set husband -= 40
 									'<center><img src="images\zoo\z7.jpg"></center>'
 									'You loshite dog on the floor and take his cock in my mouth, my husband looks at you with disgust as you sucking dog in a couple of minutes dog diluted into your mouth and you swallow sperm.'
-									'"Well, you´re a pervert," the husband says with obvious distaste.'
+									'"Well, you''re a pervert," the husband says with obvious distaste.'
 									act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
 								end
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 						set willpower -= 15
 						'<<$husName>> trying ottoschit dog, but he growls and grins, then he smashes the dog leg in the ribs and he screeched flies into a corner, did not have time to climb dog as man begins to kick harder, seeing his condition, you scored in angle and covering his head with hands close your eyes. A few minutes later the dog stops.'
 						'"What are you hiding there shalt here, and then krovischi from your skunk" said <<$husName>>. Opening her eyes you see a dead dog in a pool of blood.'
-						'"Well, what froze shalt say to you, I do this on the trash Dogmeat´ll take." he takes the dog, wrap in sheets and make it in the trash. And you have some time to scour the blood from the floor.'
+						'"Well, what froze shalt say to you, I do this on the trash Dogmeat''ll take." he takes the dog, wrap in sheets and make it in the trash. And you have some time to scour the blood from the floor.'
 						act 'Finish':
 							set sobaka = 0
 							set zoo = 0
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 								set sex += 1
 								set anal += 1
 								'<center><img src="images\zoo\z5.jpg"></center>'
-								'You obediently spreads her legs and her husband comes to you in the pussy, he hews suck you until you have a dog, but you do not dostovlyaet pleasure. Soon her husband cums and gets "A dog that is not yet finished, something you´re not trying, as well, cup your point."'
+								'You obediently spreads her legs and her husband comes to you in the pussy, he hews suck you until you have a dog, but you do not dostovlyaet pleasure. Soon her husband cums and gets "A dog that is not yet finished, something you''re not trying, as well, cup your point."'
 								act 'Substitute ass':
 									cla
 									*clr
@@ -346,12 +346,12 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 				if hour = 16 or hour > 22: 'Once you get a taste of how enters the room <<$husName>>'
 				if harakHusb = 0:
 					'"What are you doing dear?" he asks.'
-					'"I´m sorry dear, but I really need, and you´ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need, and you''ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
 					'"And often you do that," he asks.'
 					'"Owned so often, less often in the ass, if you want to see?" you asked'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						set husband -= 1
-						'"I´ll wait outside the door until you´re done," he said and left. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished.'
+						'"I''ll wait outside the door until you''re done," he said and left. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished.'
 						set horny = 0
 						set orgasm += 1
 						act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
@@ -382,14 +382,14 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 				end
 
 				if harakHusb = 1:
-					'"That´s a number I mean you is not enough?" he asks.'
-					'"I´m sorry dear, but I really need, and you´ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
-					'"Well then, show me everything that you know how I´ll look," he says.'
+					'"That''s a number I mean you is not enough?" he asks.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need, and you''ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"Well then, show me everything that you know how I''ll look," he says.'
 					'"And how do I do it in the ass, too, to show?" you asked'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						set husband += 1
 						set husbizvradd += 1
-						'"No, do not, and yet that´s enough," he said, and sat down on a chair began to watch. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished in front of her husband. <<$husName>> stood up and began to applaud "Bravo and encore again?" he said laughing.'
+						'"No, do not, and yet that''s enough," he said, and sat down on a chair began to watch. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished in front of her husband. <<$husName>> stood up and began to applaud "Bravo and encore again?" he said laughing.'
 						'"For such a lovely audience anything, but only after the intermission," you laughed. <<$husName>> helped you get down from the table.'
 						set horny = 0
 						set orgasm += 1
@@ -406,12 +406,12 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 							'<center><img src="images\img\hasb\m12.jpg"></center>'
 							'You pull out the dildo from pussy and winking at her husband, insert a dildo in her anus. <<$husName>> closely watched as a dildo in your ass disappears and then reappears. Do you see how his pants swell.'
 							'"Dear anything else you want?" smiling you ask.'
-							'"I do not just want to but I´ll do," he said, unbuttoning his pants and substitute member of your face.'
+							'"I do not just want to but I''ll do," he said, unbuttoning his pants and substitute member of your face.'
 							act 'Take by mouth':
 								cla
 								*clr
 								'<center><img src="images\img\hasb\m14.jpg"></center>'
-								'You enfold him some more flaccid penis and start sucking lips, continuing to drive the dildo his anus. When his cock finally firmed, <<$husName>> to stop you, "Well, now I´ll take this hole."'
+								'You enfold him some more flaccid penis and start sucking lips, continuing to drive the dildo his anus. When his cock finally firmed, <<$husName>> to stop you, "Well, now I''ll take this hole."'
 								act 'Substitute ass':
 									set picrand = 88
 									gt 'sex','anal'
@@ -423,11 +423,11 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 
 				if harakHusb = 2:
 					'"What hole itching?" he asks.'
-					'"I´m sorry dear, but I really need, and you´ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need, and you''ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						set husband += 1
 						set husbizvradd += 1
-						'"Well then, open your mouth," he said pulling member and rudely pushing it in your mouth, he held you by the hair and fucked in the mouth, saying something you did not stop masturbating. Soon he was tired of your mouth, "Now take out of this hole rubber stuff, now I´m going to fuck you"'
+						'"Well then, open your mouth," he said pulling member and rudely pushing it in your mouth, he held you by the hair and fucked in the mouth, saying something you did not stop masturbating. Soon he was tired of your mouth, "Now take out of this hole rubber stuff, now I''m going to fuck you"'
 						act 'Spread her legs':
 							set picrand = 88
 							gt 'sex','vag'
@@ -437,12 +437,12 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 					if izvratH = 1:
 						set husband += 1
 						set SUB += 1
-						'"Insert this crap myself in the ass and mash, I´ll popolzuyut it, as long as pine Quick" he said, pulling member. You quickly rearrange the dildo from pussy anus and mouth open submissively.'
+						'"Insert this crap myself in the ass and mash, I''ll popolzuyut it, as long as pine Quick" he said, pulling member. You quickly rearrange the dildo from pussy anus and mouth open submissively.'
 						act 'Take by mouth':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img src="images\img\hasb\m14.jpg"></center>'
-							'You enfold him some more flaccid penis and start sucking lips, continuing to drive the dildo his anus. When his cock finally firmed, <<$husName>> stopped you "All cup your point now I´m ass Flare."'
+							'You enfold him some more flaccid penis and start sucking lips, continuing to drive the dildo his anus. When his cock finally firmed, <<$husName>> stopped you "All cup your point now I''m ass Flare."'
 							act 'Substitute ass':
 								set picrand = 88
 								gt 'sex','anal'

+ 20 - 20
locations/153_vanr

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ set poroshok -= 1
 set dirtbelo = 0
 set manna -= 10
 '<center><img src="images\etogame\stir.jpg"></center>'
-'You soaked linen in a basin and poured the powder there, and then you become a wash clothes until it finally became clear.'
+'You soaked the dirty linen in a basin and poured the powder on them. You wash the clothes until they''re finally clean.'
 act 'Hang the laundry out to dry': gt 'korr'
 }
 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if stiralka > 0:
 		clrbelo += dirtbelo
 		poroshok -= dirtbelo
 		dirtbelo = 0
-		'Washing machine laundered your laundry'
+		'The washing machine washed your laundry'
 	elseif poroshok<dirtbelo:
 		'You ran out of powder for washing machine.'
 	end
@@ -56,30 +56,30 @@ if tampon > 0:
 else
 '<B><font color = red>You have no tampons.</font></B>'
 end
-if stanok > 0: 'On a shelf is a machine for shaving, it will have the blades that would shave <B><<stanok>></B> times.'
+if stanok > 0: 'On a shelf above the sink are razors. You have enough blades for <B><<stanok>></B> shaves.'
 
 if clrbelo > 0:
-	*p'In the locker is <font color=blue><B><<clrbelo>></B></font> clean linen.'
+	*p'In the cupboard is <font color=blue><B><<clrbelo>></B></font> pairs of clean underwear. '
 else
 	*p'<B><font color=red>You do not have clean underwear.</font></B>'
 end
-if dirtbelo>0:'In the cart is <font color=red><B><<dirtbelo>></B></font> units dirty laundry.'
+if dirtbelo>0:'In the hamper is <font color=red><B><<dirtbelo>></B></font> pieces of dirty laundry.'
 if poroshok > 0:
 if dirtbelo = 0:$stirka = ''
 if dirtbelo > 0:$stirka = '<a href="exec: dynamic $stirkad ">You can wash clothes</a>'
-'Under the bath worth can detergent powder, which is enough for <B><<poroshok>></B> washes. <<$stirka>>'
+'Under the sink there''s detergent powder, which is enough for <B><<poroshok>></B> washes. <<$stirka>>'
 else
-'<B><font color = red>You do not have detergent and nothing to wash clothes.</font></B>'
+'<B><font color = red>You have no detergent powder and nothing to wash clothes with.</font></B>'
 end
 
 if shampoo > 0:
-'Do you have enough shampoo <b><<shampoo>></b> times. You can <a href="exec: gt ''vann'',''start'' ">Washing</a>.'
+'Do you have enough shampoo for <b><<shampoo>></b> times. You can <a href="exec: gt ''vann'',''start'' ">wash yourself</a>.'
 else
-'You ran out of shampoo, so problems with washing.'
+'You''ve ran out of shampoo.'
 end
 
 if mosolmaz>0:'On a shelf is a tube of ointment protivomozolnoy, which will be enough for <B><<mosolmaz>><B> applications.'
-if stiralka > 0: 'In the bathroom, a washing machine.'
+if stiralka > 0: 'In the bathroom is a washing machine.'
 
 	!'if tanga = 0 and clrbelo > 0:
 		act 'Wear underwear':
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if tampon > 0 and mesec > 0 and isprok = 0:
 	end
 
 if shampoo > 0:
-	act 'Washing':
+	act 'Wash yourself':
 		gt'vann','start'
 	end
 end
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if cumpussy > 0 and clrbelo > 0 or cumbelly > 0 and clrbelo > 0 or cumass > 0 an
 end
 
 if cumlip > 0 or cumface > 0:
-	act 'Wash cum off the face (0:05)':
+	act 'Wash cum off your face (0:05)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	set mop = 1
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ if cumlip > 0 or cumface > 0:
 	set sweat -= 1
 	set minut += 5
 	'<center><img src="images\etogame\facesp.jpg"></center>'
-	'You carefully washed sperm from her face.'
+	'You carefully washed the sperm off your face.'
 	act 'Exit': gt 'vanr'
 	end
 end
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if mop ! 1:
 	cla
 	set mop = 1
 	set minut += 15
-	'You flushed makeup.'
+	'You washed the makeup from your face.'
 	act 'Exit': gt 'vanr'
 	end
 end
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ if klisma = 1 and klismaday ! day:
 	set klismaday = day
 	set klismaday1= 1
 	'<center><img src="images\picV\klisma.jpg"></center>'
-	'You put yourself an enema and clean intestines, now your ass ready for anal sex.'
+	'You give yourself an enema and clean your intestines. Your ass is now ready for anal sex.'
 	act 'Exit': gt 'vanr'
 	end
 end
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ if vibrator = 1 and vibratorIN = 0:
 	set vibratorIN = 1
 	if vagina < 30: set vagina += 2
 	'<center><img src="images\etogame\vibrator.jpg"></center>'
-	'You bent over and inserted the phallic object their pussy.'
+	'You bent over the sink and inserted the vibrator in your pussy.'
 	act 'Exit': gt 'vanr'
 	end
 end
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if vibrator = 1 and vibratorIN = 1:
 	set vibratorIN = 0
 	if vagina < 30: set vagina += 1
 	'<center><img src="images\etogame\vibrator.jpg"></center>'
-	'You bent over and took the vibrator out of the vagina.'
+	'You bent over the sink and took the vibrator out of your pussy.'
 	act 'Exit': gt 'vanr'
 	end
 end
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ if analplug = 1 and analplugin = 1:
 end
 
 if husband > 0 and husbanday > 0 and husporday ! day and poroshok >= 2:
-	act 'Wash clothes husband 1:00 (2 units of washing powder)':
+	act 'Wash your husbands clothes 1:00 (2 units of washing powder)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	husband += 5
@@ -239,13 +239,13 @@ if husband > 0 and husbanday > 0 and husporday ! day and poroshok >= 2:
 	husporday = day
 	manna -= 25
 	'<center><img src="images\etogame\stir.jpg"></center>'
-	'You an hour washes smelly socks husband and his prossannye and properdannye truselya.'
+	'You spend an hour washing your husbands smelly socks and his prossannye and properdannye truselya.'
 	act 'Move away from the bathroom': gt 'vanr'
 	end
 end
 
 if husband > 0 and husbanday > 0 and huspolday ! day:
-	act 'Cl ean apartment (1:00)':
+	act 'Clean the apartment (1:00)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	husband += 5

+ 53 - 53
locations/154_kuhr

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # kuhr
-ACT 'In the corridor':
+ACT 'Go to the corridor':
 	gt 'korr'
 END
 $metkaM = $ARGS[0]
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ set cltarelka += dirttarelka
 set dirttarelka = 0
 set manna -= 5
 '<center><img src="images\pics\dirt.jpg"></center>'
-'Using detergent you washed the dishes.'
+'Using the dishwashing liquid you washed the dishes.'
 act 'Wipe your hands': gt $locM, $metkaM
 else
-'<B><font color = red>You have no detergent.</font></B>'
+'<B><font color = red>You have no dishwashing liquid.</font></B>'
 end
 }
 $edagotd = {
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ minut += 1
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images\img\house\s3.jpg"></center>'
 'You helplessly shrugged and mumbled that have no idea what to do now. Plumber examined you with oily eyes and told you with the infamous smirk, "Maybe on another thank you? I can take to work not only with money."'
-act 'Let´s debt.': dynamic $santehnikend2
-	act 'It´s like, on another?':
+act 'Let''s debt.': dynamic $santehnikend2
+	act 'It''s like, on another?':
 	cls
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -140,11 +140,11 @@ cls
 kransloman = 0
 minut += 15
 santehnikDolg = 1500
-if Grisha >= 1:$textsan = 'Grisha you smiled. "We are not in whose first and last time working with you. Mail receipt, I like something you´ll come to the money."'
-if Grisha = 0: Grisha = 1 & $textsan = 'I´m way Grisha, and yours? "You smiled feeling that the storm has passed and the plumber said that your name is <<$name>>.'
+if Grisha >= 1:$textsan = 'Grisha you smiled. "We are not in whose first and last time working with you. Mail receipt, I like something you''ll come to the money."'
+if Grisha = 0: Grisha = 1 & $textsan = 'I''m way Grisha, and yours? "You smiled feeling that the storm has passed and the plumber said that your name is <<$name>>.'
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images\img\house\s3.jpg"></center>'
-'You offered a job in the plumbing issue debt. He thought for a moment and said, "Okay. Just write a receipt. Like something I look in and you give me the money. <<$textsan>> Then took a pen and paper and began to write plumbing receipt that you owe him 1,500 rubles. Grisha took the paper and put it in his pocket. "If that slomaetsya again, call, here´s my card."'
+'You offered a job in the plumbing issue debt. He thought for a moment and said, "Okay. Just write a receipt. Like something I look in and you give me the money. <<$textsan>> Then took a pen and paper and began to write plumbing receipt that you owe him 1,500 rubles. Grisha took the paper and put it in his pocket. "If that slomaetsya again, call, here''s my card."'
 act 'Carry out plumbing.': gt $curloc
 }
 $santehnikend = {
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ kransloman = 0
 set minut += 20
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images\img\house\s0.jpg"></center>'
-'You´ve reached the clock service repair. After 20 minutes, a plumber arrived.'
+'You''ve reached the clock service repair. After 20 minutes, a plumber arrived.'
 'You carried him into the kitchen and started to involve themselves in the affairs. When you reached out to one of the shelves, it was noticed that he was staring at your ass.'
 act 'Become confused': dynamic $santehnikend
 if shameless > 5: act 'Disregard': dynamic $santehnikend
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ if husband > 0 and husbandrink ! 10:
 						set husbizvradd += 1
 						set horny = 0
 						'<center><img src="images\img\house\s12.jpg"></center>'
-						'You released a member of her husband´s mouth and quickly pushed him standing on the couch, and jumped on top of themselves, quickly planted a pussy on his dick. You jumped on it like crazy, ignoring the plumbing that all this time and stood in the doorway, watching you. When you were again close to orgasm you feel as sperm gushed into you, and making a few movements uvedayuschem already a member, you have reached orgasm, uttering a cry you limp and fell to the husband. He took you still quaking with myself wearing pants and walked out with a plumber in the hallway.'
+						'You released a member of her husband''s mouth and quickly pushed him standing on the couch, and jumped on top of themselves, quickly planted a pussy on his dick. You jumped on it like crazy, ignoring the plumbing that all this time and stood in the doorway, watching you. When you were again close to orgasm you feel as sperm gushed into you, and making a few movements uvedayuschem already a member, you have reached orgasm, uttering a cry you limp and fell to the husband. He took you still quaking with myself wearing pants and walked out with a plumber in the hallway.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'sitr'
 						end
 					end
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ if husband > 0 and husbandrink ! 10:
 						if harakHusb = 2:
 							cla
 							set guy += 1
-							'You tried to spit from the mouth of a member, but you vskhvatil husband´s head and he started to fuck you in the mouth, talking with obnovremenno plumber "We´re a little busy, wait a minute, now zhenushku feed" he laughed, "How much do I owe you," he continued.'
+							'You tried to spit from the mouth of a member, but you vskhvatil husband''s head and he started to fuck you in the mouth, talking with obnovremenno plumber "We''re a little busy, wait a minute, now zhenushku feed" he laughed, "How much do I owe you," he continued.'
 							'"Fifteen hundred," said the plumber.'
 							'"Well, you and the prices can agree that if you feed it too and disperse?" he asked.'
 							'"I do not know, blow it unless discount pull, but if it all to try, then yes," replied the plumber.'
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ if husband > 0 and husbandrink ! 10:
 								set houseslut += 1
 								set husband += 2
 								'<center><img src="images\img\house\s10.jpg"></center>'
-								'"That´s not for nothing that they say all women are whores, hey man this whore want to write out two, but then the repair free of charge," said the husband. Plumber twice predlogat had not, he quickly approached and pulled out his dick Framed to your face, you clung to him and started to suck both alternately, and her husband stood komentirovat your actions "That sucked, fresh meat, do not forget about me, like this boy, swallowing deeper and deeper. "'
+								'"That''s not for nothing that they say all women are whores, hey man this whore want to write out two, but then the repair free of charge," said the husband. Plumber twice predlogat had not, he quickly approached and pulled out his dick Framed to your face, you clung to him and started to suck both alternately, and her husband stood komentirovat your actions "That sucked, fresh meat, do not forget about me, like this boy, swallowing deeper and deeper. "'
 								act 'Serve both': set picrand = 43 & gt 'sexdvoe','var'
 								end
 							end
@@ -377,44 +377,44 @@ if posudomashina > 0:
 		dirttarelka = 0
 		'Dishwasher washed the dirty dishes.'
 		elseif fairy<dirttarelka:
-		'Ended dishwashing detergent.'
+		'Ended dishwashing liquid.'
 		end
 	end
 
 if cltarelka > 0:
-'Standing over the sink <B><<cltarelka>></B> pieces of clean plates'
+'<B><<cltarelka>></B> pieces of clean plates are stored in the cupboard.'
 else
-'<B><font color = red>You have not left clean dishes.</font></B>'
+'<B><font color = red>You have no clean dishes left.</font></B>'
 end
-if dirttarelka > 0: 'In the sink are <B><<dirttarelka>></B> pieces of dirty dishes. <a href="exec: dynamic $dirtarm ">Which can be washed and</a>.'
+if dirttarelka > 0: '<B><<dirttarelka>></B> pieces of dirty dishes are lying in the sink. <a href="exec: dynamic $dirtarm ">Wash the dishes</a>.'
 if fairy > 0:
-'Standing over the sink dishwashing detergent, which is enough for <B><<fairy>></B> times.'
+'Next to the sink is dishwashing liquid, enough for <B><<fairy>></B> uses.'
 else
-'<B><font color = red>You have nothing to wash dishes, to buy dishwashing detergent.</font></B>'
+'<B><font color = red>You have nothing to wash dishes with, you need to buy dishwashing liquid.</font></B>'
 end
 if eda > 0:
 if cltarelka = 0 or edahot > 0:$edagot = ''
 if cltarelka > 0 and edahot = 0:$edagot = '<a href="exec: dynamic $edagotd ">Cook meal (0:30)</a>'
-'In the refrigerator stored food that´s good for <B><<eda>></B> servings. <<$edagot>>'
+'In the refrigerator there''s food, good for <B><<eda>></B> servings. <<$edagot>>'
 end
 if edaD = 0 and eda = 0:
-'<B><font color = red>in the fridge almost empty, nothing to eat at all.</font></B>'
+'<B><font color = red>The refrigerator is empty, nothing to eat at all.</font></B>'
 end
 if edaD > 0:
-'The refrigerator is kept healthy meal that´s good for <B><<edaD>></B> servings.'
+'The refrigerator contains healthy meals, good for <B><<edaD>></B> servings.'
 end
 if posudomashina > 0: 'The kitchen has a dishwasher.'
 
-if edahot > 0: '<a href="exec: dynamic $edahotd ">On the table is a cooked meal (0:30).</a>'
+if edahot > 0: '<a href="exec: dynamic $edahotd ">A cooked meal is on the table (0:30).</a>'
 if husband > 0 and husbandrink ! 10:
 	if hour = 7 or hour = 17:
-	'<a href="exec: gt ''husb'',''start'' ">At the table eating husband.</a>'
+	'<a href="exec: gt ''husb'',''start'' ">Your husband is eating at the table.</a>'
 	end
 end
 
 if pranik > 0:
 'Cookies will be enough for <b><<pranik>></b> time.'
-	act 'Drink tea with cookies (0:15)':
+	act 'Have tea with cookies (0:15)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	minut += 15
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if pranik > 0:
 	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images\pics\food.jpg"></center>'
-	'You drank tea with cookies, sweet and very bad for the figure, but so nice.'
+	'You had tea with cookies. Sweet and very bad for your figure, but so good.'
 	act 'Get up from the table': gt 'kuhr'
 	end
 end
@@ -465,18 +465,18 @@ if edaD > 0:
 end
 
 if fatdel > 0:
-	act 'Consume fat burners':
+	act 'Take fat burners':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	set fatdel -= 1
 	set fat -= 25
 	if fat < 0: fat = 0
-	'You drank fat burning capsule. These capsules are gradually and results will be seen immediately.'
+	'You drank the fat burning capsule. These capsules are gradually and results will be seen immediately.'
 	act 'Get up from the table': gt 'kuhr'
 	end
 end
 
-	act 'Drink':
+	act 'Drink water':
 	cla
 	set minut += 5
 		if water >= 20:
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ end
 	end
 
 if husband > 0 and husbanday > 0 and huseatday ! day and eda >= 2:
-	act 'Cook a meal for your husband, 2 servings (1:00)':
+	act 'Cook a meal for your husband and yourself, 2 servings (1:00)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	husband += 5
@@ -524,14 +524,14 @@ if lekarstvo > 0:
 		if lekrand = 6: '<center><img src="images\inBed\lekr7.jpg"></center>'
 		if lekrand = 7: '<center><img src="images\inBed\lekr8.jpg"></center>'
 		if lekrand = 8: '<center><img src="images\inBed\lekr9.jpg"></center>'
-		'You drank the pill'
+		'You took the pill'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'kuhr'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if vitamin > 0:
-'You have <b><<vitamin>></b> vitaminok.'
+'You have <b><<vitamin>></b> vitamin drinks.'
 	if vitaminday ! day:
 		act 'Drink Vitamins':
 		cla
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if vitamin > 0:
 		if SifacOnce = 1 and Sifilis >= 10: Sifilis -= RAND(0,1)
 		set skinvan += 1
 		if skinvan = 20: set skinvan = 0 & set skin += 1
-		'You drank Vitaminki'
+		'You drank a vitamin drink.'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'kuhr'
 		end
 	end
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 					set zoo += 1
 					set horny = 0
 					set orgasm += 1
-					'"What´s he doing dear, stop him," cries the husband'
+					'"What''s he doing dear, stop him," cries the husband'
 					'"I can not, try myself," you reply.'
 					set husband -= 1
 					'<<$husName>> trying to shove the dog, but he growls and snarls. "I can not get it to drive away what to do dear?" he asks.'
@@ -578,11 +578,11 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 						'You reluctantly start trying to push the dog and move away, but it appears to him backwards, and <<$namesob>> leans on you and all your weight is on. You feel his penis rubs against your thighs ischya hole.'
 						if izvratH = 0:
 							'"Oh my God, I can not look at it," cried the husband slammed the door and ran. Meanwhile, a member of the dog has found a hole and full-pecked you. You moaned and podmahivat him soon you covered orgasm, and after a few seconds dog cum inside you and radosnym ran out into the corridor. My husband came back, and you still were cancer and dog sperm flowed from your pussy.'
-							'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+							'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 							end
 						if izvratH = 1:
 							'"Well get off of her," shouts <<$husName>> at the dog, but close to it does not fit. Meanwhile, a member of the dog has found a hole and full-pecked you. You moaned and podmahivat him and your husband decided that your movement is an attempt to free you cheered "Yes Svetsik so can get more wiggle lose it." Soon you covered orgasm, and after a few seconds dog cum inside you and radosnym ran out into the corridor. Husband looked at you standing cancer hips peremazanymi canine semen flowing out of your pussy.'
-							'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+							'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 							end
 						act 'Allow':
 							set sobaka = 0
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 							end
 						act 'Not authorized':
 							cla
-							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I´ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
+							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I''ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
 							'"Well dear, whatever you say."'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
 							end
@@ -602,7 +602,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 					'"I can not, try myself," you reply.'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						'<<$husName>> tries ottoschit dog but he growls and grins, then he goes to the bath and what that brings old sheets, throwing her to the dog picks up the ends and picks up dog is in improvezirovannom bag.'
-						'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+						'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 						act 'Allow':
 							set sobaka = 0
 							set zoo = 0
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 							end
 						act 'Not authorized':
 							cla
-							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I´ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
+							'"No, dear, he is not guilty, he has the instincts, I''ll take it for mating and he will calm down," you said.'
 							'"Okay, look itself, your dog."'
 							act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
 							end
@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 							'<center><img src="images\zoo\z3.jpg"></center>'
 							'You grab his cock and takes his mouth to suck, soon begins to cover you and you end sodragayas whole body, a second <<$husName>> ends up in your mouth. You swallow sperm and continue to suck his dick fading. Soused dog began naprygivat you with nedvuhslyslennymi intentions.'
 							'"But this is too much" said <<$husName>> and tried ottoschit dog, but he growls and grins, then he goes into the tub and what that brings old sheets, throwing her to the dog picks up the ends and picks up dog is in improvezirovannom bag.'
-							'"I´ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
+							'"I''ll take him now on euthanasia," said <<$husName>>'
 							act 'Allow':
 								set sobaka = 0
 								set zoo = 0
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 									set husband -= 40
 									'<center><img src="images\zoo\z7.jpg"></center>'
 									'You loshite dog on the floor and take his cock in my mouth, my husband looks at you with disgust as you sucking dog in a couple of minutes dog diluted into your mouth and you swallow sperm.'
-									'"Well, you´re a pervert," the husband says with obvious distaste.'
+									'"Well, you''re a pervert," the husband says with obvious distaste.'
 									act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
 									end
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sitr'
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 						set willpower -= 15
 						'<<$HusName>> trying ottoschit dog, but he growls and grins, then he smashes the dog leg in the ribs and he screeched flies into a corner, did not have time to climb dog as man begins to kick harder, seeing his condition, you scored in angle and covering his head with hands close your eyes. A few minutes later the dog stops.'
 						'"What are you hiding there shalt here, and then krovischi from your skunk" said <<$husName>>. Opening her eyes you see a dead dog in a pool of blood.'
-						'"Well, what froze shalt say to you, I do this on the trash Dogmeat´ll take." he takes the dog, wrap in sheets and make it in the trash. And you have some time to scour the blood from the floor.'
+						'"Well, what froze shalt say to you, I do this on the trash Dogmeat''ll take." he takes the dog, wrap in sheets and make it in the trash. And you have some time to scour the blood from the floor.'
 						act 'Finish':
 							set sobaka = 0
 							set zoo = 0
@@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ if zoo >= 6:
 								set sex += 1
 								set anal += 1
 								'<center><img src="images\zoo\z5.jpg"></center>'
-								'You obediently spreads her legs and her husband comes to you in the pussy, he hews suck you until you have a dog, but you do not dostovlyaet pleasure. Soon her husband cums and gets "A dog that is not yet finished, something you´re not trying, as well, cup your point."'
+								'You obediently spreads her legs and her husband comes to you in the pussy, he hews suck you until you have a dog, but you do not dostovlyaet pleasure. Soon her husband cums and gets "A dog that is not yet finished, something you''re not trying, as well, cup your point."'
 								act 'Substitute ass':
 									cla
 									*clr
@@ -744,12 +744,12 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 				if hour ! 7 or hour ! 17: 'Once you get a taste of how the kitchen is included <<$husName>>'
 				if harakHusb = 0:
 					'"What are you doing dear?" he asks.'
-					'"I´m sorry dear, but I really need, and you´ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need, and you''ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
 					'"And often you do that," he asks.'
 					'"Owned so often, less often in the ass, if you want to see?" you asked'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						set husband -= 1
-						'"I´ll wait outside the door until you´re done," he said and left. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished.'
+						'"I''ll wait outside the door until you''re done," he said and left. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished.'
 						set horny = 0
 						set orgasm += 1
 						act 'Finish': gt 'kuhr'
@@ -778,14 +778,14 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 						end
 					end
 				if harakHusb = 1:
-					'"That´s a number I mean you is not enough?" he asks.'
-					'"I´m sorry dear, but I really need, and you´ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
-					'"Well then, show me everything that you know how I´ll look," he says.'
+					'"That''s a number I mean you is not enough?" he asks.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need, and you''ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"Well then, show me everything that you know how I''ll look," he says.'
 					'"And how do I do it in the ass, too, to show?" you asked'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						set husband += 1
 						set husbizvradd += 1
-						'"No, do not, and yet that´s enough," he said, and sat down on a chair began to watch. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished in front of her husband. <<$husName>> stood up and began to applaud "Bravo and encore again?" he said laughing.'
+						'"No, do not, and yet that''s enough," he said, and sat down on a chair began to watch. You continued to satisfy themselves rapidly and soon finished in front of her husband. <<$husName>> stood up and began to applaud "Bravo and encore again?" he said laughing.'
 						'"For such a lovely audience anything, but only after the intermission," you laughed. <<$husName>> helped you get down from the table.'
 						set horny = 0
 						set orgasm += 1
@@ -801,12 +801,12 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 							'<center><img src="images\img\hasb\m2.jpg"></center>'
 							'You pull out the dildo from pussy and winking at her husband, insert a dildo in her anus. <<$husName>> closely watched as a dildo in your ass disappears and then reappears. Do you see how his pants swell.'
 							'"Dear anything else you want?" smiling you ask.'
-							'"I do not just want to but I´ll do," he said, unbuttoning his pants and substitute member of your face.'
+							'"I do not just want to but I''ll do," he said, unbuttoning his pants and substitute member of your face.'
 							act 'Take by mouth':
 								cla
 								*clr
 								'<center><img src="images\img\hasb\m4.jpg"></center>'
-								'You enfold him some more flaccid penis and start sucking lips, continuing to drive the dildo his anus. When his cock finally firmed, <<$husName>> to stop you, "Well, now I´ll take this hole."'
+								'You enfold him some more flaccid penis and start sucking lips, continuing to drive the dildo his anus. When his cock finally firmed, <<$husName>> to stop you, "Well, now I''ll take this hole."'
 								act 'Substitute ass':
 									set picrand = 87
 									gt 'sex','anal'
@@ -817,11 +817,11 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 					end
 				if harakHusb = 2:
 					'"What hole itching?" he asks.'
-					'"I´m sorry dear, but I really need, and you´ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need, and you''ve been busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						set husband += 1
 						set husbizvradd += 1
-						'"Well then, open your mouth," he said pulling member and rudely pushing it in your mouth, he held you by the hair and fucked in the mouth, saying something you did not stop masturbating. Soon he was tired of your mouth, "Now take out of this hole rubber stuff, now I´m going to fuck you"'
+						'"Well then, open your mouth," he said pulling member and rudely pushing it in your mouth, he held you by the hair and fucked in the mouth, saying something you did not stop masturbating. Soon he was tired of your mouth, "Now take out of this hole rubber stuff, now I''m going to fuck you"'
 						act 'Spread her legs':
 							set picrand = 87
 							gt 'sex','vag'
@@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and horny >= 50:
 					if izvratH = 1:
 						set SUB += 1
 						set husband += 1
-						'"Insert this crap myself in the ass and mash, I´ll popolzuyut it, as long as pine Quick" he said, pulling member. You quickly rearrange the dildo from pussy anus and mouth open submissively.'
+						'"Insert this crap myself in the ass and mash, I''ll popolzuyut it, as long as pine Quick" he said, pulling member. You quickly rearrange the dildo from pussy anus and mouth open submissively.'
 						act 'Take by mouth':
 							cla
 							*clr

+ 11 - 11
locations/155_korr

@@ -11,27 +11,27 @@ END
 ACT 'The hall':
 	gt 'sitr'
 END
-ACT '<font color = maroon>Porch</font>':
+ACT '<font color = maroon>Apartment hallway</font>':
 	cls
 	if sick <= 72 and nude = 0:
 	xgt 'etoexhib','pos51'
 	elseif nude = 0:
-	'<B><font color = red>YOU TOO MUCH THAT WOULD sick to walk the streets.</font></B>'
+	'<B><font color = red>You''re too sick to walk around in the streets.</font></B>'
 	xgt $curloc
 	else
-	'<B><font color = red>You need to get dressed.</font></B>'
+	'<B><font color = red>You need to get dressed before going out.</font></B>'
 	xgt $curloc
 	end
 END
-ACT '<B><font color = maroon>Outdoor</font></B>':
+ACT '<B><font color = maroon>Go outside</font></B>':
 	cls
 	if sick <= 72 and nude = 0:
 	xgt $HouseLocation
 	elseif nude = 0:
-	'<B><font color = red>YOU TOO MUCH THAT WOULD sick to walk the streets.</font></B>'
+	'<B><font color = red>You''re too sick to walk around in the streets.</font></B>'
 	xgt $curloc
 	else
-	'<B><font color = red>You need to get dressed.</font></B>'
+	'<B><font color = red>You need to get dressed before going out.</font></B>'
 	xgt $curloc
 	end
 END
@@ -56,16 +56,16 @@ set housrA = 1
 set housrMir = 0
 set elektro += 1
 if ring = 1: '<B><font color = red>The phone is ringing</font></B>'
-if remkorr = 0: 'In the hallway wallpaper which where moved away from the walls, and has long faded. At the entrance hangs outerwear and a shelf for shoes, a wall-mounted <a href="exec: GT ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> and a <a href="exec:GT ''telefon'',''start''">phone</a>.'
+if remkorr = 0: 'In the hallway wallpaper which where moved away from the walls, and has long faded. A coat rack and a shelf for shoes are near the entrance. A wall-mounted <a href="exec: GT ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> and a <a href="exec:GT ''telefon'',''start''">phone</a> hang on the wall.'
 if remkorr = 1: 'Modern hall with stylish furniture, a wall-mounted <a href="exec: GT ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>, and a <a href="exec:GT ''telefon'',''start''">phone</a>'
-if suhbelo > 0: 'Drying on the clothesline <<suhbelo>> laundry items.'
-if umbrella > 0: 'Umbrella hangs on a hook.'
+if suhbelo > 0: 'Drying on the clothesline are <<suhbelo>> laundry items.'
+if umbrella > 0: 'An umbrella hangs on a hook.'
 if palto > 0: 'Hanging on the hook <<$palto>>.'
 if sobaka = 1: 'Near the entrance to the bedroom rests your dog <a href="exec: GT ''soba'',''start''"><<$namesob>></a>.'
 if krolik = 1: 'Resting on the floor your rabbit <a href="exec: GT ''krol'',''start''"><<$namekrol>></a>.'
 if popugai = 1: 'In the cage sits your parrot <a href="exec: GT ''popu'',''start''"><<$namepopu>></a>.'
 if parkday ! day and parkblackmail = 1:
-	'Heavy envelope has arrived in the mail, when you open it you can see pictures in it. Damn, it´s pictures of you where you are giving blowjobs to two guys in the park.'
+	'A heavy envelope has arrived in the mail. When you open it you can see pictures in it. Damn, it''s pictures of you where you are giving blowjobs to two guys in the park.'
 	'Small note says:'
 	'If you do not want to have these pictures posted on your porch and sent to your work, come to this address (address listed is a Studio)'
 	'PS, if you do not come today, these pictures will be hanging in your entryway tomorrow.'
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if hour >= 9 and hour <= 20 and santehnikDolg > 0 and money >= santehnikDolg:
 	act 'Go to the door':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You went to the door and looked through the peephole. You see a dark male figure. Apparently the man heard you and said through the door. "It´s me. Plumber Grisha. You´ll need money."'
+	'You went to the door and looked through the peephole. You see a dark male figure. Apparently the man heard you and said through the door. "It''s me. Plumber Grisha. You''ll need money."'
 		act 'Answer the door':
 		cls
 		money -= santehnikDolg