[text edit] more cases of : " that needed updating

locations/BelSex.qsrc

@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 
 			if belgangPay <= 0:
 				money += belsexpayment
-				'Vadim looks at you and says: "That was a good fuck, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Here, this is for you," and with those words he hands you <<belsexpayment>> <b>₽</b>.'
+				'Vadim looks at you and says, "That was a good fuck, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Here, this is for you," and with those words he hands you <<belsexpayment>> <b>₽</b>.'
 			else
 				belgangPay -= belsexpayment
 				belgangPayWeek -= belsexpayment

locations/brother2.qsrc

@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nattalk':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Kolka</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/kolka/brother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"She was dripping wet all day long." You say, eyeing the growing bulge in his pants.'
-		'You lean in close to him and whisper in his ear: "Now you''ll have something to jerk off to tonight."'
+		'You lean in close to him and whisper in his ear, "Now you''ll have something to jerk off to tonight."'
 		act'Continue':gt'brother','start'
 	end
 end

locations/city_market.qsrc

@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 	$menu_arg = 'tailor'
 	menu_off = 0
 	gs 'stat'
-	'A sign reads: "Jacob Solomonovich Schneersohn, tailor, 8:00-16:00 Monday - Friday"'
+	'A sign reads, "Jacob Solomonovich Schneersohn, tailor, 8:00-16:00 Monday - Friday"'
 	act 'Speak to the tailor':
 		cla
 		*clr

locations/city_suburbs.qsrc

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='ps1':
 	menu_off = 0
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><H4>Insane asylum<H4></center>'
-	'The inscription on the sign by the road reads: "Closed to the public".'
+	'The inscription on the sign by the road reads, "Closed to the public".'
 	if psiklik = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/asylum0.jpg" ></center>'
 	if psiklik = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/asylum1.jpg" ></center>'
 

locations/cuminsidereact.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if eff_contra ! 3:
 	if succubusflag = 1:
 		'You think to yourself, "This should be Yummy!"'
 	elseif tmp = -4:
-		'You chuckle to yourself: "Well, at least I can''t get any more pregnant than I already am!"'
+		'You chuckle to yourself, "Well, at least I can''t get any more pregnant than I already am!"'
 	elseif tmp = -3:
 		'"I don''t think I can get pregnant on my period..." you think to yourself.'
 	elseif tmp = -2:

locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cleanup':
 	elseif dimadalrand = 6:
 		'How you sucked him off and showed his cum before drinking it. With a dopey smile in your face the entire time.'
 	end
-	'You are shocked. Once he sees that you understand he adds: "If you don''t do as I say and come by here once a week to see to my needs, I will make sure everyone in school and your house gets this video."'
+	'You are shocked. Once he sees that you understand he adds, "If you don''t do as I say and come by here once a week to see to my needs, I will make sure everyone in school and your house gets this video."'
 	'At his threat, your blood runs cold and you go pale, you know what this would mean to your reputation, not counting how your mother would react.'
 	act 'Run out of his house': gt 'pav_residential'
 	act 'Plead': gt 'dimaEv', 'plead'

locations/event.qsrc

@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima2':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	'You drank one shot, then another, and so on, until you are a little tipsy. The men took turns to telling you entertaining stories, you had a lot of fun. The wife did not come of course, but you never thought to ask about it.'
-	'Dima turns on some music, and invites you to dance. Alexei protested: "You can''t dance with Dima and not me!"'
+	'Dima turns on some music, and invites you to dance. Alexei protested, "You can''t dance with Dima and not me!"'
 	'You smile at Alex. Dima immediately begins to grope your ass, you dance slowly, and so close to each other, that you can feel his erect penis pressed against your crotch. Alex cames up behind you, holds your shoulders and his hands began to slowly lower to your chest.'
 	*nl
 	'Drunk and the presence of two excited men has an effect. You shamelessly twist your hips, alternating between pushing your ass against Alexs groin and then forwards to caress Dimas cock. Alexei caresses and squeezes your breasts, pinching your nipples through the fabric.'

locations/foto_models2.qsrc

@@ -1640,7 +1640,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_photoshoot5':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Anushka Photoshoot</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nush_model/set5/pose4.jpg"></center>'
-				'As he takes more photos of her he says: "Pull the sides apart so we can see your breasts." She does as he says, and then makes several more poses, the suit making noise every time she moves. Likely a good thing that this is just photos and not a video, but maybe guys are into that noise too.'
+				'As he takes more photos of her he says, "Pull the sides apart so we can see your breasts." She does as he says, and then makes several more poses, the suit making noise every time she moves. Likely a good thing that this is just photos and not a video, but maybe guys are into that noise too.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				act'Leave':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'foto','studio'

locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'Grandma frowns at you as you walk by. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you said you would help me yesterday, and you did not."'
 		'You cringe a little as you remember what you told her you would do. "I''m sorry Grandma, I forgot all about it..."'
 		'"I am an old woman, child. It is difficult for me to do many of the things I once could. But I can still do them if I know I have to."'
-		'You look at the ground, feeling guilty, as she continues: "But it is even harder for me if I expected help and did not receive it."'
+		'You look at the ground, feeling guilty, as she continues, "But it is even harder for me if I expected help and did not receive it."'
 		'"Sorry, Grandma," you mumble again.'
 		'She softens a little, finally. "It''s okay child," she says. "But it makes it harder for me to give you your allowance for sweets if you cannot follow through on your promises."'
 		'"Yes, ma''am," you nod.'

locations/gadukino.qsrc

@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus_hunt':
 			!Just took a guess at where this image might go - Adjust src accordingly
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/succubus/kitchennude.jpg"></center>'
 			'Heavy footsteps echo through the corridor, approaching the kitchen, and with nowhere to hide, you decide to strip instead. You are here to feed, after all, and if he sees you nude, surely he will forget what he is angry about.'
-			'When the man enters the dark kitchen, his first reaction is about what you''d expect: "Who the hell are you!?"'
+			'When the man enters the dark kitchen, his first reaction is about what you''d expect, "Who the hell are you!?"'
 			'You give him a good look at your body; according to your plan, that should be enough to calm him down. Unfortunately, he doesn''t seem to be aware of the plan, cause he is having none of it.'
 			'"Have you been eating my food?! Get the hell out of my house!"'
 			*nl

locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bulding':
 		menu_off = 1
 		'You''re in a good mood today as you enter the school. That changes when Dimka stops you in the hall on the way to class.
 		"I know what you did, bitch. Did you really thing I wouldn''t figure out it was you that wiped my hard drive?"
-		Before you can deny anything, he continues: "I don''t even need that video to ruin your life. Just you wait. Soon the whole school will know what a whore you are."
+		Before you can deny anything, he continues, "I don''t even need that video to ruin your life. Just you wait. Soon the whole school will know what a whore you are."
 		His words fill you with dread as you make your way to class.'
 	end
 

locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you''re too tired to continue. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. "Come on already! We want to see them bounce!" Vasily shouts.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Vasily shouts: "Come on, get those titties bouncing!" Dan shouts.'
+			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Vasily shouts, "Come on, get those titties bouncing!" Dan shouts.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			'Jumping jacks is a complete misery. You can''t manage it for very long; although your coordination and endurance are there, the pain from your breasts slapping around builds up fast, despite the help of the sports bra. The girls you''re competing with are sympathetic at first, but that slowly changes as some of the boys wander over to cheer you on. It''s completely apparent what their eyes are focused on each time a round begins.'

locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -1848,7 +1848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ask about Dianas date':
 															*clr & cla
 															'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/dimanos/kiss4.mp4"></video></center>'
 															'Then he whispered in my ear, "I want to have sex with you."'
-															'"I got frightened and started panicking, wondering what I was supposed to do, he was about to undress me. So I said the first thing that came to mind: "I''m on my period, I can''t have sex..."'
+															'"I got frightened and started panicking, wondering what I was supposed to do, he was about to undress me. So I said the first thing that came to mind, "I''m on my period, I can''t have sex..."'
 															'And he was like "Fuck, Diana, I''m so turned on and hard as a rock! Can''t you help me out!'
 															act 'And?':
 																*clr & cla

locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-				'Katja happily grins as she quickly straightens your hair: "What do you want? A light touch-up, some normal make-up or shall I just shovel it on?"'
+				'Katja happily grins as she quickly straightens your hair. "What do you want? A light touch-up, some normal make-up or shall I just shovel it on?"'
 				pcs_hairbsh = 1
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'

locations/kinoM.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'a':
 		act 'Hug his arm':
 			cla
 			loverrelation[lover_number] += 1
-			'You lean against him and hug his arm, taking his hand in yours. He leans over and kisses you. Once the lights go out and the theatre gets dark, his hand breaks free from yours and begins to rub your knee. A few minutes later the hand works its way up your thighs, sliding between them to your crotch. He rubs your pussy with his fingers and leans over to whisper: "Baby, I want you right here, right now."'
+			'You lean against him and hug his arm, taking his hand in yours. He leans over and kisses you. Once the lights go out and the theatre gets dark, his hand breaks free from yours and begins to rub your knee. A few minutes later the hand works its way up your thighs, sliding between them to your crotch. He rubs your pussy with his fingers and leans over to whisper, "Baby, I want you right here, right now."'
 
 			act 'Shush him and remove his hand, so you can watch the movie':xgt 'kinoM', 'b'
 			act 'Jerk him off':gt 'kinoM', 'hj'

locations/kompMFCoral.qsrc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 !2021/04/26
 cls
 gs 'stat'
-'One of the visitors asks: "Do you have a dildo or something? I''d love to see your throat skills..."'
+'One of the visitors asks, "Do you have a dildo or something? I''d love to see your throat skills..."'
 if dildo = 1 or middildo = 1 or largedildo = 1 or bigdildo = 1 or extradildo = 1 or superdildo = 1 or maddildo = 1:
 		act 'Suck':
 		cls

locations/korrPar.qsrc

@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ if hour >= 16 and hour <= 20 and locat['Fam_inGad'] = 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/spank.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
 			'You stand in the hallway staring at the floor, too embarrassed to say anything.'
-			'Your mother grabs you by the arm and pulls you into the living room. "Take off your pants and bend over!" You shake your head, not liking where this is going at all. Getting even angrier by your refusal, she shouts: "Vladimir, come and hold her down!"'
+			'Your mother grabs you by the arm and pulls you into the living room. "Take off your pants and bend over!" You shake your head, not liking where this is going at all. Getting even angrier by your refusal, she shouts, "Vladimir, come and hold her down!"'
 			'A few seconds later, your stepfather enters the living room and immediately pulls you down and keeps you in place while your mother pulls away your clothing. She then grabs a belt and starts to flog your bare ass with it, not holding back at all.'
 			'You take your punishment as good as you can, but towards the end you''re in tears and your cries are heard throughout the apartment. When it''s finally over, you raise your head just in time to catch the startled faces of your brother and sister in the doorway.'
 

locations/leonid.qsrc

@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sold':
 	'You find yourself once again in a trunk of a car, travelling somewhere else to an unknown and possibly unpleasant future...'
 	''
 	'After about half an hour you are unloaded from the trunk and lead somewhere inside.'
-	'The fat lady removes the hood: "You are in brothel, bitch. I guess you know what are you going to do here."'
+	'The fat lady removes the hood. "You are in brothel, bitch. I guess you know what are you going to do here."'
 	'"Over there is your room where you can sleep. Some food is in the cabinet."'
 	'"When whoring, I want you clean and made up. Earn me enough money and I may let you leave. Understood?"'
 	workDolg = 100000 + money