Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/master'

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -696,9 +696,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 	AlbinaQW['albride'] = 2
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina leads you to the rather well furnished and decorated sitting room. "You''ll have to excuse the mess. The maid was... loyal to my father, so she had to go." She then disappears into the kitchen. While she is gone, her phone vibrates on the table. You look and see that "Mama" is trying to call her.'
+	'Albina leads you to the rather well furnished and decorated sitting room. "You''ll have to excuse the mess. The maid was... loyal to my father, so she had to go." She then disappears into the kitchen. While she''s gone, her phone vibrates on the table. You look and see that "Mama" is trying to call her.'
 	'<i>Strange. She''s never mentioned her mother. Hell, she barely talks about her father,</i> you think to yourself.'
-	'The phone rings out as Albina returns with a bottle of wine and two glasses. She places them on the table and notices her missed call. Quickly picking up her phone up, she types a message before stuffing it in her pocket.'
+	'The phone rings out as Albina returns with a bottle of wine and two glasses. She places them on the table and notices her missed call. Quickly picking her phone up, she types a message before stuffing it in her pocket.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 15
@@ -729,10 +729,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Albina..." you start. "I-'
-					'"My father turned me into a whore!" she blurts out. "He sold me! Let men drag me away into hotel rooms and fuck me however they pleased! And they''d give him money. Donate right into his campaign fund like it was charity."'
+					'"My father turned me into a whore!" she blurts out. "He sold me! Let men drag me away into hotel rooms and fuck me however they pleased! And they''d give him money. Donate right into his campaign fund like it was charity!"'
 					if AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] > 0:
 						'She turns to face you, eyes brimming. "And when it wasn''t enough, he sold my friends too. Sold <i>you</i>."'
-						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly as sobs rack her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I''m so sorry! I should''ve stopped them! But I didn''t! I just handed you over to be raped-! Because I didn''t want it to be me-! I had-! You-! I-! I''m-! <i>UWAHHHH!!</i>"'
+						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly as sobs rack her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I''m so sorry! I should''ve stopped them! But I didn''t! I just handed you over to be raped-! Because I didn''t want it to be me-! I had-! You-! I-! I''m-!"'
 						*nl
 						'You throw your arms around her, wrapping her in a tight hug as she continues to cry, her fingers gripped tight across the back of your top as her tears soak into your shoulder.'
 						act 'Forgive her':
@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 						end
 					else
 						'She turns to face you, eyes brimming. "And when it wasn''t enough, he sold my friends too."'
-						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly as sobs rack her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I didn''t want to! But I didn''t stop them! I just handed them over to be raped because I didn''t want it to be me! I had-! They-! I-! I''m-! <i>UWAHHHH!!</i>"'
+						'Albina suddenly breaks, bawling loudly as sobs rack her body. "I''m a monster, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she wails. "I didn''t want to! But I didn''t stop them! I just handed them over to be raped because I didn''t want it to be me! I had-! They-! I-! I''m-!"'
 						*nl
 						'You throw your arms around her, wrapping her in a tight hug as she continues to cry, her fingers gripped tight across the back of your top as her tears soak into your shoulder.'
 					end
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 					npc_rel['A23'] += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You sit by her side as she begins to tell you everything about herself that was once hidden from you. How her father never wanted children. How he abused her mother because of her birth. The way he chased her mother away and then blamed Albina for it after. Many of her rapes, described in graphic, painful detail. How she seeks comfort from women because of the abuse she''s endured at the hands of men. And finally, how she gathered evidence for years before submitting it to the police and having him arrested. You do nothing but sit and nod along the entire time, listening intently.'
+					'You sit by her side as she begins to tell you everything about herself that was once hidden from you. How her father never wanted children. How he abused her mother because of her birth. The way he chased her mother away and then blamed Albina for it after. Many of her rapes, described in graphic, painful detail. How she seeks comfort from women because of the abuse she''s endured at the hands of men. And finally, how she learned that Chernov had been investigating her father for years and so gathered enough evidence for him to have her father arrested. You do nothing but sit and nod along the entire time, listening intently.'
 					*nl
 					'At the end of an hour, it seems a weight has been lifted from her shoulders and she has <i>slightly</i> sobered up.'
 					'"I''ve never told anyone that before," she says. "You... you really don''t think worse of me?"'
@@ -858,7 +858,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
 		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but you go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 		'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
-		'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs into her room.'
+		'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
 		act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
 	end
 end

locations/albina_election_events.qsrc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	AlbinaQW['RideDaystart'] = daystart + rand(2,5)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-	'A car suddenly pulls up next to you and a man wearing a nice suit and hat steps out and introduces himself. "Captain Chernov, State Security Service," he says and pulls out his badge.' 
+	'A car suddenly pulls up next to you and a man wearing a suit and hat steps out and introduces himself. "Captain Chernov, Federal Security Service," he says and pulls out his badge.' 
 	'"Why are you here? What did I do? Am I under arrest?" you ask in panicked surprise, but he just ignores you and continues.' 
 	'"You are <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, correct? Please come and sit in my car. We need to have a little chat."'
 	act 'Speak with Chernov':
@@ -16,45 +16,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		minut += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-		'He opens the back door and motions for you to step inside. Upon closer examination, you notice he is holstering a gun under his left armpit and so decide to listen to him. You step inside and he slides in after you, closing the door behind him. A second man sits silently behind the wheel as Chernov turns to you.'
+		'He opens the back door and motions for you to step inside. You notice he is holstering a gun under his jacket and so decide to listen to him. You step inside and he slides in after you, closing the door behind him. A second man sits silently behind the wheel as Chernov turns to you.'
 		'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, I know that you are a member of Barlovskaya''s entourage. I also know that this is just a front. These criminal activities are about to be put on hold permenantly, with or without your collaboration."'
 		'You freeze, your body stiff with worry as you wonder what he''s about to do.'
-		'"Our little talk here is quite important. When this case starts getting coverage, the whole town will know about the Starlets'' secret. We''ll have to inform your parents and your school that you were an illegal prostitute. You can testify anonymously like the other girls and keep your name out of it if you wish."'
+		'"Our little talk here is quite important. This investigation will soon be the talk of the town, but you can testify anonymously like the other girls and keep your name out of it."'
 		act 'Protest':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-			if age < 18:
-				'"Albina didn''t whore me out!" you protest, but Chernov just smiles.'
-				'"I never said it was Albina, did I? All you have to do is give me your testimony stating that you are underage and were forced into an illegal prostitution ring. You don''t have to worry about Albina. We''ll keep her safe from any consequences of her actions."'
-			elseif age >= 18:
-				'"Albina didn''t whore me out!" you protest, but Chernov just smiles.'
-				'"I never said it was Albina, did I? All you have to do is give me your testimony stating that you were forced into an illegal prostitution ring. You don''t have to worry about Albina. We''ll keep her safe from any consequences of her actions."'
-			end
+			'"Albina didn''t whore me out!" you protest, but Chernov just smiles.'
+			'"I never said it was Albina, did I? All you have to do is give me your testimony stating that you were forced into an illegal prostitution ring. You don''t have to worry about Albina. We''ll keep her safe from any consequences of her actions."'
+			*nl
 			'He pauses and gives you time to think before continuing.'
-			'"We already have enough evidence through an anonymous source and statements from your fellow dancers to take down these activities, but your testimony will help solidify the prosecution. Your name will be kept secret, of course."'
+			'"I already have enough evidence through an anonymous source and statements from your fellow dancers to take down these activities, but your testimony will still help. Your name will be kept secret, of course."'
 			if pcs_intel >= 70:
 				act 'Ask why the Security Service is involved':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-					'"What''s so important about Albina that the Security Service are involved?" you ask, causing Chernov to raise a brow.'
-					'"You''re a smart girl, huh? You know Boris Barlovskay, her father? He''s a retired police officer who served as the chief of police for years. In his retirement, we believe he has formed connections with the local criminal syndicate and is bribing his successor to block our investigations into them. Your friend is our way in. All we need to do is prove that Albina''s dance troupe is actually a front for illegal prostitution and it opens the door to all other kind of investigations. All we want is your statement Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-					if pcs_intel >= 75:
-						act 'Ask about Albina''s involvement':
-							*clr & cla
-							minut += 1
-							gs 'stat'
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-							'"How could Albina''s affairs affect her father?" you ask.'
-							'"It''s very simple really," he replies. "Barlovskay wishes to become the mayor. We don''t want him running the town and so exposing the family affairs is how we are going to prevent that from happening."'
-							gs 'albina_election_events', 'din_zajava_albfather'
-							gs 'albina_election_events', 'din_zajava_albfather_no'
-						end
-					end
-
+					'"What''s so important about the Starlets that the Security Service are involved?" you ask, causing Chernov to raise a brow.'
+					'"You''re a smart girl, huh? You know that slimeball Boris Barlovskay, her father who served as the chief of the St. Petersburg police? He wishes to become the mayor, but I don''t want the corrupt scumbag running the town in the interests of the criminal syndicates he formed connections with while in office. I''ve spent years investigating him, but was never able to prove he was dirty - until now."' 
+					'He places a hand gently on your shoulder. "All I need to do to put him behind bars where he belongs is prove that young Albina''s dance troupe is actually a front for illegal prostitution. I need your statement, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 					gs 'albina_election_events', 'din_zajava_albfather'
 					gs 'albina_election_events', 'din_zajava_albfather_no'
 				end
@@ -75,14 +59,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_zajava_albfather':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
 		'You agree to write a statement and Chernov nods.'
-		'"You''re a smart girl. Just write your statement here and sign it." He hands you a pen and paper.'
-		act 'Go with Chernov':
+		'"You''re a smart girl. Just write your statement here and sign it," he says and hands you a pen and paper.'
+		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/misc/signature.jpg"></center>'
 			'You write your statement and he lets you go without a fuss.'
-			'"You''ve really helped us here Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Thank you." He motions for you to leave the car and it drives away as soon as you close the door.'
+			'"You''ve really helped me here, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Thank you." He motions for you to leave the car and it drives away as soon as you close the door.'
 			act 'Call Albina':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
@@ -113,13 +97,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_zajava_albfather_no':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
 		'You are reluctant to write a statement, but Chernov keeps trying. "Look, I know you''re scared right now, but do you really not want to help stop this illegal exploitation of you and your friends? I promise you, nothing will happen to Albina."'
 		if pcs_intel >= 80:
-			act 'Why should you give him information?':
+			act 'Why should I give you information?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
 				'"If you already have everything you need, then why do you need my testimony?" you ask.'
-				'"To be honest, we don''t. Like I said, we got more than enough from the other girls, but a statement from you would still help us out and hopefully guarantee our success."'
+				'"To be honest, I don''t. Like I said, I got more than enough from the other girls, but a statement from you would still help me out and hopefully guarantee my success."'
 				'"What about Albina? Have you questioned her? I doubt she would act against her father."'
 				'"We have other arrangements for her," is all he says in reply.'
 				gs 'albina_election_events', 'din_zajava_albfather'
@@ -140,8 +124,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_zajava_albfather_no2':
 		AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-		'While a part of you wants to help, you don''t trust him and refuse to help. He sighs in resignation.'
-		'"If that''s how it''s going to be, but just remember... You could have made that one bit of difference." He motions for you to get out of the car and it drives away as soon as you close the door.'
+		'While a part of you wants to help, you don''t trust him and refuse.' 
+		'He sighs in resignation. "I can''t force you, but just know that you could have really helped your friend out here." He motions for you to get out of the car and it drives away as soon as you close the door.'
 		act 'Call Albina':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 1

locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 								'Once she recovers, Albina sits up on the bed. "You must be close by now?"'
 								'Lazar grins. "Another round with that sweet pussy should do it."'
 								'Albina gets back on all fours. "Just don''t cum inside me, okay?"'
-								'Lazar gets her down on her stomach and mounts her before he shoves his cock in her pussy and starts pounding her.'
+								'Lazar pushes her down on her stomach and mounts her before he shoves his cock in her pussy and starts pounding her.'
 								'Albina looks back at him when he starts panting. "Pull out, you idiot!"'
 								'Lazar keeps thrusting until the last second when he pulls out and starts cumming over her lower back. He collapses on the bed when he''s finished.' 
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -140,11 +140,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 								act 'Finished':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/cuddle1.jpg"></center>'
-									'Albina cleans the cum off of her back before climbing on top of him and lightly smacking him on the chest. "What have I told you about waiting until the last second to pull out?" she asks him with a hint of annoyance.'
-									'"I wasn''t going to cum inside you, Albina! I would never abuse your trust like that!" he replies before grinning and gently squeezing her ass in his hand. "Especially if it meant I couldn''t fuck this amazing ass anymore."'
-									'Albina glares at him before grabbing a pillow and playfully hitting him with it. "I swear I would''ve beat your dumb ass by now if I didn''t like you so much!"'
-									'"Yeah, I''m sure you like me for my amazing personality and not my cock that made you orgasm within seconds!"'
-									'You hear them laughing as you quickly close the door and hurry away before you''re spotted. You hide in the bathroom until you hear Lazar leaving the room and heading down the stairs. You then walk up to Albina''s door, deciding not to say anything about what you just saw.'
+									'Albina climbs on top of him and smacks him on the chest. "What have I told you about waiting until the last second to pull out?" she asks him with a hint of annoyance.'
+									'"Hey! I wasn''t going to cum inside you!" he replies before grinning and gently squeezing her ass in his hand. "Especially if it meant I couldn''t fuck this amazing ass anymore."'
+									'She smacks his hand away and glares at him before grabbing a pillow and hitting him with it. "It''s not funny Lazar! You know I don''t like being creampied!"'
+									'They continue arguing as you quickly close the door and hurry away before you''re spotted. You hide in the bathroom until you hear Lazar leaving the room and heading down the stairs. You then walk up to Albina''s door, deciding not to say anything about what you just saw.'
 									act 'Go to her room': gt 'albina_lazar_sex', 'go_to_bedroom1'
 								end
 						    end
@@ -338,9 +337,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'go_to_bedroom1':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/nudealbina.jpg"></center>'
 	'You knock on her door, a somewhat surprised sounding Albina asking who it is. When she hears that it''s you, she lets you enter. You walk into her room and are stunned by the sight of her sprawled out on her bed in the nude, her soaking wet pussy on display to you.'
-	'She smiles at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. How are you?" You can hear the hint of annoyance still in her voice.'
-	'You just smile at her, not wanting to give away that you were spying on her. "I''m good. How are you?" you reply and she laughs.'
-	'"You almost had a perfect moment ruined by a guy''s stupidity? Me too." She climbs off the bed and gathers her clothes up. "Give me a few minutes to clean up and we can do something," she says before disappearing into her en-suite bathroom. You hear the sound of her shower running before she reappears and smiles at you before getting dressed.'
+	'She smiles at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>." You can hear the hint of annoyance still in her voice.'
+	'You just smile at her, not wanting to give away that you were spying on her. "I''m good. How are you?" you reply and she scoffs.'
+	'"You ever had a perfect moment ruined by a guy''s stupidity? Me too." She climbs off the bed and gathers her clothes up, seemingly not caring about the cum still plastered to her back as she disappears into her en-suite bathroom. You hear the sound of her shower running before she reappears and smiles at you before getting dressed.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/albina_starlets_aftermath.qsrc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ AlbinaQW['RideDaystart'] = 0
 AlbinaQW['albride'] = 1
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/bmw.jpg"></center>'
-'An SUV pulls up to you and the front window rolls down. Albina is sitting in the driver''s seat and she smiles at you. "Let''s go to my place. We need to talk."'
+'An SUV pulls up to you and the front window rolls down. Albina is sitting in the driver''s seat and smiles at you. "Let''s go to my place. We need to talk."'
 
 act 'Get in':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ act 'Get in':
 	!!If Sveta helped Chernov
 	if AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 1:
 		'"Is this your car? And since when could you drive?" you ask. She laughs in response. "No, this is my father''s car. I don''t have a licence, but the police ignore me since my father was the chief."'
-		'She stops at a red light and turns to you, looking rather happy. "You don''t know what good you''ve done <<$pcs_nickname>>. I didn''t think the Security Service would actually have jumped on the lead I gave them."'
-		'"Wait, <i>you</i> were their ''anonymous source'' that exposed the Starlets? Why?" you ask in surprise.'
+		'She stops at a red light and turns to you, looking rather happy. "You don''t know what good you''ve done <<$pcs_nickname>>. I didn''t think Chernov would have acted this fast with the leads I gave him."'
+		'"Wait, <i>you</i> were his ''anonymous source'' that exposed the Starlets? Why?" you ask in surprise.'
 		'"I have my reasons. The main thing is that you and the other girls all testified against the ringleader and took them down." She looks away meekly as she finishes her sentence and the light turns green. She continues driving in silence.'
 		*nl
 		'After driving for a while, you reach her house. She drives through the gate and stops outside the front door. She tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
@@ -28,10 +28,11 @@ act 'Get in':
 	if AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 2:
 		'"Is this your car? And since when could you drive?" you ask. She laughs in response. "No, this is my father''s car. I don''t have a licence, but the police ignore me since my father was the chief."'
 		'"I really wish you had told that man everything he was asking for <<$pcs_nickname>>. It would have been very helpful to me."'
-		'"What do you mean ''helpful to you?'' He was trying to get me to speak out against the Starlets." you reply.'
+		'"What do you mean ''helpful to you?'' He was trying to get me to speak out against the Starlets!" you reply.'
 		*nl
 		'Yes, because I wanted him to expose us. I gave him the evidence he needed to take down the ringleader."'
-		'"Wait a second. <i>You''re</i> the ''anonymous source''? Why?" you ask in confusion. "I have my reasons." is all she says in reply and continues driving in silence.'
+		'"Wait a second. <i>You''re</i> the ''anonymous source''? Why?" you ask in confusion.' 
+		'"I have my reasons," is all she says in reply and continues driving in silence.'
 		'After driving for a while, you reach her house. She drives up the driveway and stops outside the front door. She tells you to follow her and exits the car.'
 	end