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Text Edits - Anna

Rin 1 month ago
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      locations/hotel_anna.qsrc

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locations/hotel_anna.qsrc

@@ -145,13 +145,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2a':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionhotel/annaintrob1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"It''s easy to imagine the Dom''s benefit but subs have their own. I can simply tell you that a sub generally like to be dominated, but there''s something else; to live as a sub is to avoid having to make hard choices for example and the stress that comes from that. Of course some subs just really like pain, but every case is something unique with a little or a lot of many things. What is universally accepted in our lifestyle is that all the benefits increase according the relationship. This is not something you can have immediately, you have to feed it. Communication, levels/limits, safe words, preparation and after care are the tools which help you to build your BDSM relationship and they must be provided by both parties. You cannot achieve this goal if you don''t completely trust your partner. Here comes the need some feel to declare their relationship in contracts, like a wedding; this is often for a proper M/s or Master/slave relationship. Even without this the agreement both parties reach through words can be seen as a verbal contract."'
+			'"It''s easy to imagine the Dom''s benefit but subs have their own. I can simply tell you that a sub generally likes to be dominated, but there''s something else; to live as a sub is to avoid having to make hard choices for example and the stress that comes from that. Of course some subs just really like pain, but every case is something unique with a little or a lot of many things. What is universally accepted in our lifestyle is that all the benefits increase according the relationship. This is not something you can have immediately, you have to feed it. Communication, levels/limits, safe words, preparation and after care are the tools which help you to build your BDSM relationship and they must be provided by both parties. You cannot achieve this goal if you don''t completely trust your partner. Here comes the need some feel to declare their relationship in contracts, like a wedding; this is often for a proper M/s or Master/slave relationship. Even without this the agreement both parties reach through words can be seen as a verbal contract."'
 			act'...a-a contract?':
 				minut += 10
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionhotel/annaintrob1.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Do not be surprised, it''s like a wedding a real wedding. The difference is in the details the parties agree on. For example, some real weddings can be made because they have had an unwanted child without an real feeling between those getting married. BDSM contracts cannot exist without mutual agreement.'
+				'"Do not be surprised. It''s like a wedding, a real wedding. The difference is in the details the parties agree on. For example, some real weddings can be made because they have had an unwanted child without an real feeling between those getting married. BDSM contracts cannot exist without mutual agreement.'
 				'They are not legally enforceable of course as they limit the rights of one or both parties and actual slavery is not legal, nonetheless I can assure you that since it''s a mutual agreement M/s contracts usually last longer than regular marriages, not to mention that breaking these contracts will end the mutual benefits.'
 				'Usually these contracts are made between a Dom and a sub but that''s not a general rule; they can involve switches too. A switch is a person who can both Top and bottom depending on the situation and their partner, they can be a Dom and a sub."'
 				'"So you are a switch?"'
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 3:
 	'You decide to visit Anna again, she did say you would be talking about fun stuff this time. You knock on the door which to your surprise the door is open.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come in I''m on the sofa."'
 	'"Hi Anna, I was passing and I...oh, erm...."'
-	'"I hope you don''t mind <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''d like to let my body breathe a little, all day wearing the same tight dress starts to feel a bit claustrophobic, please take a seat. I want to show you some toys i''ve brought to cover a number of activities in my lifestyle."'
+	'"I hope you don''t mind <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''d like to let my body breathe a little, all day wearing the same tight dress starts to feel a bit claustrophobic, please take a seat. I want to show you some toys I''ve brought to cover a number of activities in my lifestyle."'
 	
 	act'Cover your eyes':
 		Annatoy = 1
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 4:
 	*nl
 	*nl
 	*nl
-	'<font color = #ff0000>Developer note: This is last in this event chain for now and two demo options are missing<\font>'
+	'<font color = #ff0000>Developer note: This is last in this event chain for now and two demo options are missing</font>'
 	act'Test her':
 		minut += 10
 		*clr & cla
@@ -366,9 +366,9 @@ if ARGS[0] = 4:
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '4a':
-	'"Well first of all you have to know that fisting is a common and highly pleasurable practice that have to be done in secure position. You need lubed gloves for inexperienced practitioners, those more advanced can start small and work up to it using the women''s arousal and natural lubrication although anal fisting requires lube no matter how good you are.'
+	'"Well first of all you have to know that fisting is a common and highly pleasurable practice that has to be done in secure position. You need lubed gloves for inexperienced practitioners, those more advanced can start small and work up to it using the women''s arousal and natural lubrication although anal fisting requires lube no matter how good you are.'
 	'Now the swing''s role, it allows the person being fisted to decide the deepness of the penetration giving them control that is otherwise entirely in the hands of the person fisting. It lets you control something that is usually controlled by another and that is a way to trigger new mental sensations.'
-	'It is not cheap though. BDSM gear can cost a lot especially elaborate furniture. That is not a worry if you get it as a gift though" She smiles. Now for the restriction part, the fisting swing can be used to pose a sub not without a need to fist them, the pose can be very exposing making them available for various sex acts or simply to be admired.'
+	'It is not cheap though. BDSM gear can cost a lot especially elaborate furniture. That is not a worry if you get it as a gift though" She smiles. "Now for the restriction part, the fisting swing can be used to pose a sub not without a need to fist them, the pose can be very exposing making them available for various sex acts or simply to be admired.'
 	'OK enough about my fabulous new swing let''s talk about restriction and again I ask you to wait until the end where I''ll give you a choice for a demonstration."'
 	act 'Focus':
 		minut += 10