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[Fixed] minor typos in the text reported on TFGS

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locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_talk':
 			'Preparing what you think is the best thing to say, you take a deep breath before finally speaking.'
 			'"Look Kolka, it was just a kiss. There wasn''t any more meaning behind it than wanting to give you one. There''s nothing wrong with a sister wanting to show her brother some affection, right?" you rationalize, almost more to yourself than to your brother.'
 			'He stammers, "Uh... R-right. Nothing wrong with that, I guess..."'
-			'"I just don''t want you getting any ideas," you say, looking away. "It''s not like we''re going to start dating or do... other stuff... It''s not like we could anyways. We''re blood family. Your my brother and that''s it."'
+			'"I just don''t want you getting any ideas," you say, looking away. "It''s not like we''re going to start dating or do... other stuff... It''s not like we could anyways. We''re blood family. You''re my brother and that''s it."'
 			'"R-right..." he says. You look back towards him and find yourself shocked by his expression. Even though all this is wrong and taboo, you can''t help but feel bad about the wounded look on his face. His hurt hurts you too.'
 			'You look away again, mulling over what you should say next...'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/lariska_storyline.qsrc

@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Boyfriend_3':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/boyfriend/lev_lariska_meal.jpg"></center>'
 	'You go into the restaurant and find Lariska and Lev already seated. They wave you over and you join them.'
-	'"Lev, this is <<$npc_firstname>>. <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is Lev, my new boyfriend." The two of you greet each other as you sit down.'
+	'"Lev, this is <<$pcs_firstname>>. <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is Lev, my new boyfriend." The two of you greet each other as you sit down.'
 	'"So tell me about yourself, Lev. Lariska said you met at the disco?"'
 	'"Yeah, I work there. I help set up and maintain the lights."'
 	'"That''s cool. How do you like it?"'

+ 1 - 1
locations/metro_events.qsrc

@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 			'You stop and listen to them play several songs, they really is pretty good. You wonder why they are playing in a metro station, perhaps the old adage about starving artist applies to musicians as well.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			if money > 50:
-				act 'Give her money':
+				act 'Give them money':
 					*clr & cla
 					money -= 50
 					pcs_mood += 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/natbelapt.qsrc

@@ -1957,7 +1957,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natmother':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							killvar '$orgasm_txt'
-							'You can''t take it anymore and pull away, you mutter a excuse about needed to go and leave.'
+							'You can''t take it anymore and pull away. You mutter an excuse about needing to go, and then leave.'
 							NatbelQW['CaughtByNatMomHitachi'] += 1
 							act 'Leave': gt 'natbelapt','hallway'
 						end