Proofreading and added option for Albina to help with Niko

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile at her. "I''m in the same boat as you. I like it keeping things casual. It''s just easier that way."'
-				'She smiles. "Don''t I know it. I just want sex, not a love story."'
+				'She smiles. "Don''t I know it. I just want some good fucking sex, not a cheesy love story."'
 				act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			end
@@ -84,6 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							cla
 							'"Niko..." you tell her.'
 							'Albina gives you a concerned look. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, he''s bad news. He isn''t what he seems, so just... just be careful with him, okay?"'
+							'"What do you mean?" you ask curiously, but she just dimisses the question and changes the subject.'
 							act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 						end
@@ -303,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'telling_marrige_dreams':
 	act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 end
-					
+
 !!if $ARGS[0] = 'You':
 !!	menu_off = 1
 !!	gs 'stat'
@@ -311,7 +312,7 @@ end
 !!	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 !!	'You blush as you answer. "Uhhh...You."'
 !!	'She raises her brow. "Really? Me?" she replies and you nod.'
-!!	'"Yeah, you. You eat pussy like a pro and know your way around using a strap on. You would make a pretty decent guy if I''m honest."'
+!!	'"Yeah, you. You really know what you''re doing and I always cum so hard when I''m with you..."'
 !!	'She seems surprised by your answer, but accepts your compliment anyway. "You''re pretty good yourself." she says with a wink and a slight hint of arousal.'
 !!	act 'Her best':
 !!		*clr & cla
@@ -319,13 +320,28 @@ end
 !!		'So what was your best?" you ask in turn.'
 !!		'She smiles. "It was this girl I met at a nightclub in the city. Long story short, I have a fake ID and you already know the police don''t question me. Anyway, I saw this cute girl at the bar. I can''t remember her name, but she said she worked in some BBQ place in the city. We had a few drinks together and ended up back at her place. I was expecting some good pussy on pussy action, but I can''t help but notice the bulge under her little dress..."'
 !!		'You raise a brow and she smiles. "Yeah, it''s what you think it was. She pulls up her dress and out springs this massive, rock hard fucking cock! I''m just standing there staring at it, so she pushes me down to my knees in front of her and I just start jerking and sucking it before she makes me deepthroat her as deep as I can go. After that, she threw me onto the bed, pulled my thong off and rammed it right into my pussy. My <i>god</i>, the sex we had was <i>amazing</i>, especially when she fucked me from behind and was pulling my hair and slapping my ass. I don''t know how many times she made me cum, but she made me <i>cum</i>.'
-!!		'She fucked me silly and next thing I know I feel her cum pouring into my pussy. I was too exhausted to say anything, but I''m on the pill anyway so I didn''t mind. We snuggled in bed afterwards and I fell asleep right there in her arms as she stroked my hair. She had already left by the time I woke up and I never seen her again. It''s the best sex I''ve ever fucking had and I still get horny just thinking about it." she says and softly bites her lip. "Don''t tell Mama though. She wouldn''t like me going all the way to the city that late at night and coming home in the morning hungover having clearly hooked up with a stranger." she adds.'
+!!		'She fucked me silly and next thing I know I feel her cum shooting into my pussy. I was too exhausted to say anything, but I''m on the pill anyway so I didn''t mind. We snuggled in bed afterwards and I fell asleep right there in her arms as she stroked my hair. She had already left by the time I woke up and I never seen her again. It''s the best sex I''ve ever fucking had and I still get horny just thinking about it." she says and softly bites her lip. "Don''t tell Mama though. She wouldn''t like me going all the way to the city that late at night and coming home in the morning hungover having clearly hooked up with a stranger." she adds.'
 !!		'You feel yourself getting turned on by her story and picture it in your head as you imagine yourself in her position. She snaps you out of it and you decide to do something else.'
 !!		act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 !!		act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 !!	end
 !!end
 
+if NikoPayback > 1 and AlbVsNiko = 0:
+	act 'Ask for help with Niko':
+    *clr & cla
+    AlbVsNiko = 1
+    minut += 30
+    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
+    'You feel Albina wrap an arm around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>? You''re looking pretty glum."'
+    'You collect your thoughts before replying. "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he''s been raping me at lunchtime and I..."'
+    'Her face contorts in rage. "That slimy motherfucker! Don''t worry, I''ll sort him out..." She doesn''t eleborate on what she''s planning when you ask, but you give her a tight hug. "Thanks Albina, I just don''t know what to do."'
+    'She holds you tight and comforts you as tears run down your cheeks. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll make it all go away... How about we do something to take your mind off it?"'
+    act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
+    end
+end
+
+
 
 --- albina_chat ---------------------------------
 

locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -259,18 +259,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 30
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look away from her and downcast your eyes before saying, "Nush I need your help... I..."'
-			'You feel her warp a arm around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'
-			'You try to collect your thoughts before saying, "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he has been raping me at lunchtime and I..."'
-			'She jerks in surprise. "He what?" Then hugs you tighter. "That mother fucker, don''t worry he won''t be doing it anymore, when does this happen." You explain how he comes to you at lunch and demands things from you. She nods. "Meet him at lunch like normal and we will put a end to this."'
+			'You look away from her and downcast your eyes before speaking. "Nush, I need your help... I..."'
+			'You feel her wrap an arm around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>? You can tell me."'
+			'You collect your thoughts before continuing. "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he has been raping me at lunchtime and I..."'
+			'She jerks back in surprise. "He WHAT?!" She hugs you tight. "That motherfucker! Don''t worry, he won''t be doing it anymore. When does this happen?" You explain how he comes to you at lunch and demands things from you and she nods. "Meet him at lunch like normal and we''ll put an end to this."'
 			*nl
-			'You wrap your arms around Nush then say, "Thank you so much. I didn''t know what to do."'
-			'Nush replies, "Don''t worry it won''t happen again." You lay there on her bed in her embrace feeling warm and safe for the first time in a long time, you are not sure how long you laid with her but eventually you feel the need to be alone.'
-			'You gently pull away from her and she lets go. "Thank you, I needed this, but I should get going..."'
+			'You wrap your arms around Anushka. "Thank you so much! I didn''t know what to do."'
+			'She smiles. "Don''t worry, it won''t happen again." You sit in her embrace, feeling warm and safe for the first time in a long time. You''re not sure how much time passes, but you eventually feel the need to be alone.'
+			'You gently pull away from her and she lets go. "Thanks. I needed that, but I should get going..."'
 			*nl
-			'She says gently. "You don''t have to go, you can stay."'
-			'You nod to her thanks. "But I need to be alone for a bit." Then you off the bed and head for the door. "Thanks again, I''ll talk to you later."'
-			'"Ok see you later and if you need anything just call." She doesn''t get off the bed, you imagine she is unsure what is best to do, either way you leave the apartment to be alone for a bit.'
+			'"You don''t have to go. You''re welcome to stay." she says softly.'
+			'You nod at her. "Thanks, but I just need to be alone for a while." You climb off the bed and head for the door. "Thanks again. I''ll talk to you later."'
+			'"Okay, see you later. If you need anything, just call." She doesn''t get off the bed and you silently leave the apartment.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
 		end
 	end