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[text edit] clean up stallion

Spackled Lanturn 3 سال پیش
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1فایلهای تغییر یافته به همراه11 افزوده شده و 11 حذف شده
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      locations/stallion.qsrc

+ 11 - 11
locations/stallion.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Run away':
 		*clr & cla
 		'You quickly sort yourself out and get out of the stall. You try the bathroom door. It''s locked. There is no handle, and the lock is just a keyhole.'
-		'"It''s no use. You are trapped." The strange man says.'
+		'"It''s no use. You are trapped," The strange man says.'
 		'A naked middle aged man exits the other stall and walks towards you.'
 		gs 'stallion', 'fight'
 	end
@@ -60,13 +60,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 	'The man pushes you down, and you fall on your ass. He advances towards you, grabs a hold of your clothes and rips them open. He falls on top of you. You feel his hot breath against your face as he ruthlessly grabs your arms. You feel his penis poking you in the leg.'
 	'"So you know what''s coming next, don''t you my little <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 	if pcs_horny < 30:
-		'You feel his cock stab you in the unprepared vagina, not even the slightest slowed down by the lack of lubrication. It''s rough and raw, pulling at your skin and pressing against your sensitive flesh painfully. You can''t help but cry out.'		
+		'You feel his cock stab you in your unprepared vagina, not even the slightest slowed down by the lack of lubrication. It''s rough and raw, pulling at your skin and pressing against your sensitive flesh painfully. You can''t help but cry out.'		
 	elseif pcs_horny < 50:
 		'You feel his cock stab you in the vagina. It''s not very well lubricated, and it rubs painfully against your sensitive flesh as it penetrates you.'
 	elseif pcs_horny < 70:
 		'You feel his cock stab you in the vagina. It slides into your lubricated entryway, penetrating you.'
 	else
-		'You feel his hard cock enter your wet vagina, easily entering you.'
+		'You feel his hard cock push against your wet vagina, easily entering you.'
 	end
 	if pcs_vag = 0: 'It brings tears to your eyes as he painfully rips your hymen, taking your virginity.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'rough', 'sub'
@@ -88,12 +88,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			'You feel a tingling in your body. He places a powerful enchantment on you, increasing your fertility and binding your life force to the fruit of your womb. You realize with horror that he has practically guaranteed all sexual encounters will result in pregnancy in the future. Furthermore, your life is now tied to your womb. An abortion will result in your death.'
 		end
 		act 'What have you done to me?':
-			'"I have given you a gift, sweet <<$pcs_nickname>>. I have turned you into a broodmare." He replied as he continued to repeatedly thrust into you.'
+			'"I have given you a gift, sweet <<$pcs_nickname>>. I have turned you into a broodmare," he replies as he continues to repeatedly thrust into you.'
 		end
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'easy'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-		act 'Beg for Mercy (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+		act 'Beg for mercy (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'easy'
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
@@ -108,14 +108,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			end
 			if broodcurse = 0:
 				'Stallion smiles as you plead for him not to cum inside you.'
-				'"I''m sure you''ll manage to bear my child just fine." He says as he continues to thrust into you.' 
+				'"I''m sure you''ll manage to bear my child just fine," he says as he continues to thrust into you.' 
 			else
 				'Stallion smiles. "I''m not lifting the curse. You should accept your fate. It will be easier on you in the long run."'
 			end
 			act 'Continue': gt 'stallion', 'finish'
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Beg for Mercy (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+		act 'Beg for mercy (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'resist', 'stren_lvl'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'resist', 'stren_lvl'
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			'You attempt to throw him off you, but he is able to resist your efforts.'
-			'"Tightening up like that, makes it feel so good." He says as he continues to thrust into you.'
+			'"Tightening up like that makes it feel so good," he says as he continues to thrust into you.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'stallion', 'finish'
 		end
 	else
@@ -140,9 +140,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'finish':
 	cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/jora/sex/klof10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Stallion moaned. "I''m cumming!"'
+	'Stallion moans, "I''m cumming!"'
 	'He twitches on top of you, and you feel him fill you with his seed.'
-	'"Give birth to a cute baby for me, <<$pcs_nickname>>. But don''t you dare kill it. You won''t survive it long. Ta ta!" He said, pulling out.'
+	'"Give birth to a cute baby for me, <<$pcs_nickname>>. But don''t you dare kill it. You won''t survive it long. Ta ta!" He says, pulling out.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'stallion', 'end'
 end
 
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'awaken':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/bathroom/publictoilet.jpg"></center>'
 	minut += 160
-	'You come to several hours later laying on the cold bathroom floor. Your clothing is folded neatly in a pile nearby.'
+	'You come to several hours later lying on the cold bathroom floor. Your clothing is folded neatly in a pile nearby.'
 	if bag > 0: 
 		'Your handbag is sitting on top of the clothing. You check it for missing items.'
 		if money > 0: 'You have <<money>> rubles.'