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[text edit](christina) add missing punctuation and missing plot

yanchi 2 years ago
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      locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

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locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # gschool_chats1
 !2021/06/17
-	
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You nod your head and dig in your purse, pulling out the money and handing it to him. He takes his time slowly counting it out, then nods as it seems to all be there. You briefly talk back and forth as he puts the money away.'
 				act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
-				if dimarudorient = 1: act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs' 
+				if dimarudorient = 1: act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs'
 			end
 		else
 			cla
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka':
 				act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 			act 'Go with Dimka': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dimka_sex'
-		end		
+		end
 	elseif DimaRudeQW > 0 and DimaRudeBlock = 0:
 		'Dimka looks into your eyes with a disinterested look and after a while says "Whatever. After school, we''re going to my place. I''ll wait for you by the entrance."'
 	elseif npc_rel['A1'] >= 50 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka':
 		else
 			'Dimka greets you with a friendly smile, making room for you in the group made up of Bella, Igor and a few other students you don''t recognize. Some of them give you an odd look, obviously not sure why you''re here since you''re not part of their clique, but Dimka makes you feel welcome. "Relax, she doesn''t have the plague." he playfully chides everyone and soon you are engaged in a conversation with Dimka.'
 		end
-		if dimarudorient = 1:act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs' 
+		if dimarudorient = 1:act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs'
 	elseif npc_rel['A1'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 		npc_rel['A1'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 1:
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka':
 			'"I just wanted to say hi is all" you reply'
 			'He looks around like this is a common burden. "Of course you did, everyone does." You talk to him a bit but he acts like he is barely tolerating you, like a Tsar might a peasant in his court.'
 		end
-		if dimarudorient = 1:act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs' 
+		if dimarudorient = 1:act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs'
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 250:
 		'Dimka sees you approaching and gives you a blank look, his gaze cold and unblinking. "Do you really think I would talk to a whore like you?" he dryly states. He continues to stare you down until you finally leave.'
 	elseif (dimaRevenge = 6 and (dimaRevChoice = 3 or dimaRevChoice = 5 or dimaRevChoice = 6)) or (dimaRevenge = 7 and dimaRevChoice = 2) or (dimaRevenge = 8 and (dimaRevChoice = 1 or dimaRevChoice = 4)):
@@ -63,10 +63,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka':
 		'As you walk up he glares at you. "What the fuck do you want slut?"'
 		'You sigh a bit. "Look I know a lot has happened between us, but I thought we could leave it in the past and just be friends or something."'
 		'He gets a odd look on his face then shrugs. "Whatever." The two of you make a little small talk, but you get the feeling he is planning something.'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A1'] += 1
 		'Dimka is willing to entertain you for a bit, occasionally taking part in the conversation but letting you do most of the talking. "Hey, Bella!" he calls as he spots her walking by. "Sorry, I hope you don''t mind." He follows after her before you can even reply. At least he let you talk to him.'
-		if dimarudorient = 1: act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs' 
+		if dimarudorient = 1: act 'Ask for some pale lady': gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dim_drugs'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -77,10 +77,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dim_drugs':
 	'"Please Dimka, can I have some pale lady?"'
 	'He smiles at you with a smug knowing smile. "Sure do you have any money?"'
 	if money >= 420:
-		act 'Change your mind': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'	
-		if money >= 420: act 'Buy enough for 1 lines (420 <b>₽</b>)': palelady = 1 & gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dimka_pay'	
+		act 'Change your mind': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+		if money >= 420: act 'Buy enough for 1 lines (420 <b>₽</b>)': palelady = 1 & gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dimka_pay'
 		if money >= 840: act 'Buy enough for 2 lines (840 <b>₽</b>)': palelady = 2 & gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dimka_pay'
-		if money >= 1680: act 'Buy enough for 5 lines (1680 <b>₽</b>)': palelady = 5 & gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dimka_pay'		
+		if money >= 1680: act 'Buy enough for 5 lines (1680 <b>₽</b>)': palelady = 5 & gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dimka_pay'
 		if money >= 3720: act 'Buy enough for 10 lines (3320 <b>₽</b>)': palelady = 10 & gt 'gschool_chats1', 'dimka_pay'
 	else
 		*nl
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'igor':
 			'Igor is almost offended that you''d even have to ask that. "What kind of boyfriend would I be if I didn''t help my girlfriend?" he chuckles. "Of course I''ll help you."'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
-		
+
 		if igorstrap = 1:
 			act 'Tease him':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'igor':
 			'Igor can''t help but laugh a bit at your request. "Of course you''re behind on your work. Maybe if you spent less time whoring around..." He doesn''t finish the sentence before walking away with a look of disgust.'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A4'] += 1
 		'"Hey Igor, what are you doing?" you ask as you see him looking around for someone.'
 		'Igor kind of shrugs. "Just waiting for Dimka."'
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'igor_peg':
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Bend over bitch boy':
 					*clr & cla
-					gs 'boyStat', 'D<<strapnumber>>' 
+					gs 'boyStat', 'D<<strapnumber>>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/sex/school/break5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Once he has the strapon nice and wet with his saliva, you tell him "Get up and bend over for me my little slut."'
 					'He stands up and bends over one of the desks. You step up behind him and rub the tip of your strapon against his little puckered asshole. You bend over a bit and spit in the crack of his ass to add a little more lubrication. Then you press the head of the strapon against his asshole until it pops in. He moans in a mixture of pain and pleasure as it does.'
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja':
 			'Katja is as red as a lobster and her chest is heaving from her heavy breaths. She''s idly rubbing her thighs against one another while you talk.'
 		end
 	end
-			
+
 	if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50 and fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
 		npc_rel['A14'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 1:
@@ -389,13 +389,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja':
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 250:
 		'"Oh hey, Kat. I was wondering if you had any recommendations for lipstick that won''t smear? Things can get kind of messy when I''m... y''know." You press your tongue against the inside of your cheek to imitate sucking cock.'
 		'She looks at you confused for a long moment before she gasps softly. "That... that''s gross!" she huffs. "How can you even ask me that?!"'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A14'] += 1
 		'With Katja being a quiet girl, she doesn''t do much talking, but she seems to enjoy some lighthearted banter with you, so long as you''re doing most of the talking. You get the feeling that if you were closer, she''d open up more, but for now you''ll have to settle with this.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
-	
+
 	if meynoldQW = 3:
 		act 'Thank Katja for taking you home from the disco':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -443,8 +443,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif meynoldQW > 1 and pcs_makeup > 1 and npc_rel['A14'] > 60:
-		
-		
+
+
 	    if KatjaOTN > 0 and KatjaLust > 15:
 			act 'Kiss Katja':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -464,15 +464,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	
+
 	if rand(1,3) = 1 and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 1 and tangaday ! daystart:  gt 'Katja_tanga', 'start'
-	
+
 	if rand(1,2) = 1 and katschoolsex = 1 and pcs_horny > 40:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga_kiss.jpg"></center>'
 		'Katja slowly leans in towards you, almost closing her eyes and slowly opening her mouth. Unable to resist, you lean in and meet her with a kiss.'
 		gs 'katjaEv', 'kiss_events'
-	end	
+	end
 end
 
 
@@ -493,10 +493,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katjaproblems':
     '"Ok... Ehm... Look Katja, just think about it, ok? Just... give me a chance... Yeah... Ehm... Until later."'
     'As Svyatoslav leaves, Katja releases a long-winded sigh.'
     gs 'stat'
-		
+
 	act 'Talk with the twins':
 	    *clr & cla
-		'<center><table><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big15.jpg"></td></table></center>' 
+		'<center><table><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big15.jpg"></td></table></center>'
 		'"Thanks Vicky. I don''t know how to tell him that I''m not interested... Sigh... But I don''t think that will make him relent... Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>! You heard us?!"'
         'You don''t answer, only looking around the crowded corridor and at a smiling Lizaveta, who is furiously recording into her phone. "Thankfully, Vicky came to her sister''s rescue."'
         '"Come on Katja! It isn''t that bad. You didn''t do anything wrong! Relax! If you want to evade Slavik, beyond paying Vitek to break his legs, you only need to hang around other people, tell him that you have a full schedule!"'
@@ -516,19 +516,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katjaproblems':
             '"You know <<$pcs_nickname>>... I have my hands more or less full with Vanya. So... I was thinking... Can you protect my sister''s chastity?"'
             'The twins proceed to give you puppy eyes. At this point, any answer beyond "Of course Katja! Whatever you want Katja! Whenever you want Katja! We can hang around after school Katja!" is socially suicidal with everyone looking at their cute display. Damm, the shit these girls make you do...'
             'After this little scene, you chat with the twins until it is time to return to class.'
-		else 
-		    'Katja rests against the lockers, pondering her sister''s words, then smiles and turns happily towards you and grabs your hands.'    
-            '"<<$pcs_nickname>> please! You must help me! Can we hang around after school?"'        
+		else
+		    'Katja rests against the lockers, pondering her sister''s words, then smiles and turns happily towards you and grabs your hands.'
+            '"<<$pcs_nickname>> please! You must help me! Can we hang around after school?"'
             'She looks at you with puppy eyes, full of hope... looking breathtakingly cute... Yeah... Only Christina would say "no" to the redhead, so you answer with a happy "Yes! Of course Katja!" that prompts her to hug you.'
             '"Hey that is unjust Katja! We are sisters! I also want a hug!"'
             'Vicky joins the (now)group embrace and all you can think about how all the guys in the hall (and maybe some girls) are going to masturbate furiously tonight thanks to this embarrassing event.'
-            'After this little scene, you chat with the twins until it is time to return to class.'												
+            'After this little scene, you chat with the twins until it is time to return to class.'
 		end
 		npc_rel['A14'] += 1
 		npc_rel['A15'] += 1
         gs 'stat'
-			
-		act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'								
+
+		act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			else
 				'Albina spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but you think she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 			end
-		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:	
+		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
 			npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 			if grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
 				'"Hey Albina, how are things?" you ask her with a smile.'
@@ -572,12 +572,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			else
 				'"Hey Albina, how are things?" you ask her with a smile.'
 				'"Is this some kind of fucking joke?" she growls before she grabs you, shoves you against one of the lockers and glares at you. "Who put you up to this!?" she snarls. The rest of the group watch, stunned by her outburst.'
-				'"No... Nobody? I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, but her tightening grip on you and her angry demeanor tell you that she doesn''t believe you. You try buttering her up with compliments, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before releasing you and storming off, the others being smart enough not to follow her.' 
+				'"No... Nobody? I just wanted to talk..." you sheepishly reply, but her tightening grip on you and her angry demeanor tell you that she doesn''t believe you. You try buttering her up with compliments, but she isn''t interested in your grovelling. She gets up in your face and tells you to stay away from her before releasing you and storming off, the others being smart enough not to follow her.'
 			end
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 150:
 			'Albina just stares at you in disbelief. "There''s some <i>nasty</i> rumors about you going around school. Everyone is saying you''re a cock hungry whore! How can you live like that - just letting guys... use you like that?"'
 			'You are about to speak up, but she shakes her head and walks away. You can''t tell if she was feeling disgusted or disappointed at you. She might even have been both.'
-		else 
+		else
 			npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 			'Your conversation, if you can call it that, with Albina is shallow and is over after only a minute or two as she excuses herself.'
 			'"You know my... father... cares... a lot..." She trails off before walking away. You''re certain that you hear her holding back tears as she does, but you don''t want to push it and anger her.'
@@ -596,7 +596,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lizaveta':
 		if grupTipe = 1:
 			'The perks of being a close friend of Liza go beyond just running in the same social circle, as she tells you some gossip that no one else should know about.'
 			'"I heard from a little red bird that one time while Vicky was out partying at the community center, she couldn''t hold it in, so she went to go do her business behind a bush, buuuut..." Liza drags it out to build a little suspense. "She was so drunk that she ended up falling into her own piss! Luckily Kat-- her friend, I mean, was there to take her home before anyone saw!"'
-		else		
+		else
 			'You would think that being close friends with Lizaveta woud mean getting some exclusive gossip from her, but she keeps her lips sealed. "I know everyone likes to say I can''t keep my mouth shut, but even I need to have some secrets of my own." she winks.'
 			'"Oh come on!" you plead. "You gotta give me a little bit of something..."'
 			'With a dramatic sigh, Liza caves a little bit and shares some harmless, yet juicy gossip you hadn''t heard about until now.'
@@ -610,10 +610,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lizaveta':
 			'"You''re dumber than I thought..." she mutters. You try to get an answer out of her, but she dances around your questions while the two of you make smalltalk.'
 		else
 			'The conversation is stale and lifeless as Lizaveta taps away at her phone while you talk, only managing an occasion "Yeah..." or "Uh-huh..."'
-		end		
+		end
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 200:
 		'"The current rumor is that you''ve ridden well over 100 dicks!" Lizaveta exclaims with a cruel laugh. "There''s even a bet that you''ll have sucked or fucked 1,000 dicks by the end of the year. Want to know if I''m betting against or for you?" she taunts before dismissing it as a joke, but you''re not sure if she''s telling the truth...'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A140'] += 1
 		'You spend some time talking with Lizaveta, and for a while you manage to avoid talking about anything gossipy, but considering she''s the queen of it, eventually it devolves into some "He said, she said."'
 	end
@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus':
 		if grupTipe = 1:
 			'Talking with Marcus is always fun. He always knows how to make you laugh with the stories he tells. "You should have seen his face!" He lets out a deep laugh. "We walk by the bathroom on the way to his room and BAM! There''s his mom, butt naked, and we see it all! You ever seen someone change colors? Poor guy was as pink as... as his mom''s nipples now that I think about it!"'
 			'You spend the rest of break laughing along with him as he tells you some more stories.'
-		else		
+		else
 			'You enjoy hearing the stories Marcus tells about his life in America. "It''s kind of funny, I don''t think I was nearly as popular as this back home. I''m not complaining though!"'
 			'You spend the rest of break asking more questions about his home life and he''s happy to tell you all about it.'
 		end
@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus':
 		'"Known what?" you reply.'
 		'He smirks and steps closer to you, cornering you between himself and a locker. "I thought Russian girls were different, but I guess a slut is a slut no matter where you are. Ain''t that right, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		'You expect him to grab at you, but he just shakes his head and walks away.'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A146'] += 1
 		'Marcus is a friendly guy that gets along with nearly everyone, which makes talking to him easy and fun even when you''re not that familiar with each other.'
 	end
@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'andrey':
 			'"Hanging out with Marcus has been great for me!" Andrey says with a grin.'
 			'"Oh yeah?" You can''t help but smile when you see the good mood he''s in. "Did something happen recently?"'
 			'"Nah, nah. It''s just that hanging around him has made me more popular than ever! I maen, I was already pretty popular but this... being his friend sure has its perks!"'
-		end		
+		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A147'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
 		npc_rel['A147'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 1:
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'andrey':
 		end
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 250:
 		'Andrey glances your way for a second before focusing back on looking through his locker, completely uninterested in you. "Shouldn''t you be in the bathroom with Lazar sucking him off?"'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A147'] += 1
 		'"Hey, Andrey! How''s it been?" you ask with a small smile.'
 		'Andrey just shrugs. "Oh you know, Stasya and my parents still complain about Marcus, so the usual," he teases halfheartedly.'
@@ -723,7 +723,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mefodiy':
 		end
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 250:
 		'"Don''t worry, I''m not going to make a slut joke." Mefodiy reassures you. "That would just be a <i>whoreable</i> thing to do."'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A148'] += 1
 		'Mefodiy has you laughing nonstop the entire time you''re hanging out with him. You lose track of time and in the end feel a bit disappointed that break is nearly over.'
 	end
@@ -735,7 +735,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viktoria':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big15.jpg"></center>'
-		
+
 	if npc_rel['A15'] >= 50 and fame['pav_slut'] < 250:
 		npc_rel['A15'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 1:
@@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viktoria':
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 250:
 		'"Well, well, well, look who''s taken a break from sucking cocks!" Vicky announces with a grin. She gives your ass a quick slap and you let out a surprised squeak.'
 		'"Oh don''t act so innocent! we all know you''ve had that ass broken in plenty of times. Or maybe you''re just sore from your last go?"'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A15'] += 1
 		'It can be hard to follow Vicky as she keeps up a lively conversation, jumping from one topic to another, but you don''t really mind and find her upbeat attitude intoxicating.'
 	end
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stasya':
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 200:
 		'"You better stay the fuck away from Andrey or you''ll end up with some extra holes you can stuff with more cocks."'
 		'You''re slammed into the lockers as she shoves past you.'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A139'] += 1
 		'You spend some time conversing with Stasya until she holds out her hand to stop you from talking. "I don''t mean to cut you off, but I need to get see Andrey before break ends." She gives you a half-assed apologetic smile before walking off in search of her elusive boyfriend.'
 	end
@@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'irina':
 		end
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 200:
 		'"I would rather have Petia staring at my tits until he creams himself than to talk to you, skank!" Irina hisses with disgust.'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A17'] += 1
 		'It''s easy to please Irina since she likes to talk about herself. So long as you ask her about herself and then don''t interrupt her, she''s more than happy to talk with you.'
 	end
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sonia':
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 200:
 			npc_rel['A25'] += 1
 			'Unlike most people, Sonia isn''t calling you a slut or whore. Instead she asks you about some of the best sex you''ve had lately and some of your favorite positions. The conversation continues like this and you end up enjoying hanging out with her as you talk about all kinds of naughty things.'
-		else 
+		else
 			npc_rel['A25'] += 1
 			'"Hey Sonia!" you greet her with a smile and gives you a friendly little wave.'
 			'"What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she asks and you tell her you just wanted to hang out for a bit. "Sure, I got a little bit of time."'
@@ -932,7 +932,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 		'"You here to suck me off, slut?" Lazar snickers.'
 		'"What did you say?" you angrily reply.'
 		'"Come on, everyone knows that you''re the school''s biggest slut! What''s another dick to you?" he winks.'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A149'] += 1
 		'"I didn''t take you for one of them girls <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar smiles.'
 		'"What?" you ask surprised.'
@@ -972,7 +972,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 		'"So when am I going to get the complementary blowjob?" Svyatoslav asks.'
 		'"Never..." you sourly reply.'
 		'"Come on, don''t play hard to get. I know you loving sucking cock, you little slut." he starts approaching you.'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 		'"Well isn''t this a surprise. Are you here to wish me good luck in the next race?" Svyatoslav curiously asks.'
 		'Seeing him excited and not wanting to hurt his feelings, you just nod. "Yeah... that''s exactly what I wanted to say..."'
@@ -1023,7 +1023,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vanya':
 		'Vanya breaks out in a mischievous smile. "Yeah, you know. We''ve heard that you''ve become such a big slut, so we wanted to try a threesome."'
 		'"Hmm..." you start to think...'
 		'"Never mind, I was only kidding. Like I would share Vicky with a slut like you."'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A165'] += 1
 		'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Check this out!" Vanya yells out as he throws a crumbled paper ball onto Vitek''s head.'
 		'He in turn quickly turns around and staring, trying to figure out who threw the crumbled paper. "Who was it?!" Vitek yells out. "Tell me who the fuck it was!"'
@@ -1065,8 +1065,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 		'"Well..." he looks around, avoiding meeting your eyes. "I heard that you''ve built quite the reputation..."'
 		'"What reputation?! Out with it!!!" You''re getting irritated by him trying to avoid the subject.'
 		'"Well..." he takes a deep breath. "I heard you''ll sleep with anyone so I was thinking about if I had a shot..."'
-		'Before you''re able to reply, he grabs his stuff and walks away, clearly blushing...'		
-	else 
+		'Before you''re able to reply, he grabs his stuff and walks away, clearly blushing...'
+	else
 		npc_rel['A150'] += 1
 		'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>... What''s up?" Erast asks.'
 		'"Nothing much just hanging around waiting for the next class to start. You?" you ask.'
@@ -1079,7 +1079,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>' 
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
 	if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2 or christinaQW['dompath'] >= 2:
 		if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 3:
 			npc_rel['A18'] += 1
@@ -1161,7 +1161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 			'"What does the biggest school slut want from me? Don''t you have a cock to suck somewhere?" Christina says mockingly.'
 			'"Shut up Christina! I''m tired of your bullshit." you tiredly reply.'
 			'"Poor little thing. It must''ve been, what, at least a few minutes since you last spread your legs for someone?" She begins to laugh as she walks away.'
-		else 
+		else
 			npc_rel['A18'] += 1
 			'"What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>? I don''t really have the time right now." She''s looking around, for someone or something.'
 			'"Well... I wanted to ask you..." you choke up a little.'
@@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 	if christinaQW['dompath'] = 0 and christinaQW['subpath'] = 0:
 		act 'Think about Christina': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'christina_decide'
 	end
-	
+
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
@@ -1208,7 +1208,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 		'"I heard some rumors that you''re interested in older guys? Is it true?" Bella asks.'
 		'You stand in silence as she continues on.'
 		'"Well I''ve told some of my older male friends about you and they would love to meet you." she winks.'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A22'] += 1
 		'"Make it quick <<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t really have the time to stand here and chat..." Bella hurries you on.'
 		'"I was thinking we could maybe hang after school one day?" you cheerfully ask.'
@@ -1252,7 +1252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'veronika':
 		'Veronika stops and starts looking at you intensely.'
 		'"Fine, be that way then." you sourly reply.'
 		'You can just barely hear Veronika''s reply as you start walking away. "Slut..."'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A141'] += 1
 		'"I..." It''s as Veronika wants to say something.'
 		'"Something you wanted?" you ask.'
@@ -1318,7 +1318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lina':
 			'"Christina doesn''t know what she''s talking about it." you reply.'
 			'"I knew it! It''s true isn''t it? Christina is always correct... Go and suck someone off!" she fires back.'
 			'"Whatever, bitch. Like you know anything about me," you laugh, and walk away.'
-		else 
+		else
 			npc_rel['A19'] += 1
 			'"What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>? Christina is looking for me..." Lina says irritatingly.'
 			'"I wanted to ask you if you had the notes from the class. I need to copy it." you tell her.'
@@ -1341,7 +1341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 					LariskaQW['story'] = 4
 					'Pulling out the the volleyball she dropped outside your parents apartment the other day, you hand it to her. "You dropped this, Lariska."'
 					'When she sees the ball, her eyes go wide and she looks around fearfully. Seeing that Christina is engrossed in her conversation with Lina, she snatches the ball and stuffs it out of sight.'
-					'I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If Christina finds out I was there instead of the sports center like I told her I would be...'
+					'"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If Christina finds out I was there instead of the sports center like I told her I would be..."'
 					'"Then why were you there? You ask her teasingly, pretty sure you already know the answer."'
 					'Her face and neck turn bright red. "I-I...uh...I..." she stammers, trying to think of a something to tell you, unwilling to admit the truth.'
 					'"Relax," you say laughing. "I already talked to her, she agreed to let you hang out with me outside of school. I promise. Just ask her about it the next time you get a chance, ok?"'
@@ -1363,7 +1363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 				npc_rel['A13'] += 1
 				'Pulling out the the volleyball she dropped outside your parents apartment the other day, you hand it to her. "You dropped this, Lariska."'
 				'When she sees the ball, her eyes go wide and she looks around fearfully. Seeing that Christina is engrossed in her conversation with Lina, she snatches the ball and stuffs it out of sight.'
-				'I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If Christina finds out I was there instead of the sports center like I told her I would be...'
+				'"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If Christina finds out I was there instead of the sports center like I told her I would be..."'
 				'"Then why were you there? You ask her teasingly, pretty sure you already know the answer."'
 				'Her face and neck turn bright red. "I-I...uh...I..." she stammers, trying to think of a something to tell you, unwilling to admit the truth.'
 				'"Relax," you say laughing. "I am pretty sure I already know," you say with a twinkle in your eye.'
@@ -1419,7 +1419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska':
 			'"Aren''t you looking for a cock to suck you big slut?" Lariska says mockingly.'
 			'"Shut up Lariska! Don''t you have Christina''s tail to run after or something?" you tiredly reply.'
 			'"Poor little slut. Go chase another cock." she begins to laugh as she walks away.'
-		else 
+		else
 			npc_rel['A13'] += 1
 			'"What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>? I don''t really have the time right now." Lariska says as she quickly walks towards the classroom.'
 			'"Well... I wanted to ask you..." you choke up a little.'
@@ -1512,7 +1512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan':
 		'"Come on, don''t be like that... I thought we could have some fun..." You give him a wink.'
 		'Ivan looks apathetically at you without any response, making the whole situation a bit awkward and after what feels like an eternity, he just walks off.'
 		act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
-	else 
+	else
 		npc_rel['A3'] += 1
 		'"Hi Ivan! Did you hear about how Vitek, Dan and Vasily got drunk and started acting like degenerates?"'
 		'Ivan thinks about it for a moment and sighs. "No not really. I haven''t paid attention to any of it. I''ve been busy focusing on other stuff..."'
@@ -1521,4 +1521,3 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan':
 end
 
 --- gschool_chats1 ---------------------------------
-

+ 20 - 21
locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
 	'You decide on to walk over to see what the fuss is about. As usual Lazar is showing off his skills as he has some of the younger kids challenge him 1-on-1 or even 1-on-2 and he''s still managing to beat them quite easily.'
 	'As you step on the field he waves to you to come over before he kicks the ball further away so that the younger kids go chasing after it. You stop in your tracks as you see your brother being one of the kids chasing the ball that Lazar kicked away and you know he would do anything to embarrass you in front of him.'
-	
+
 	act 'Run away':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 10
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 		'Lazar is standing there a bit dumbfounded, wondering why you suddenly had a change of heart but shrugs it off and quickly yells to the kids who''s next to challenge him.'
 		act 'Run back to the school grounds': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end
-	
+
 	act 'Walk over to him':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 10
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 						end
 					else
 						act 'No (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-					end	
+					end
 					act 'Lets go':
 						cla & *clr
 						npc_rel['A149'] += 1
@@ -138,14 +138,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 													act 'Walk off': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 												end
 											end
-										end	
+										end
 									else
 										act 'No (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-									end	
+									end
 								end
 							else
 								act 'Only a blowjob (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-							end	
+							end
 							act 'Let him': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'lazar_vaginal'
 							act 'You can fuck my butt':  gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'lazar_anal'
 						end
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_vaginal':
 		end
 	end
 end
-	
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_anal':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/getfucked.jpg"></center>'
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tIvan':
 		'"Great!" Ivan replies, "Well, that''s enough resting, Fedor. Time for another lap."'
 		'The two of them say their goodbye''s and it doesn''t take long before you''re only able to see their backs on the horizon.'
 		act 'Return to the secluded beach': gt 'gLakeNude'
-		
+
 	end
 end
 
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_decide':
 	menu_off = 1
 	cla & *clr
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>' 
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
 	'You can''t ever seem to decide how to deal with Christina. No matter how you treat her, she always seems to come off as cold or fake. She has been this way for as long as you can remember.'
 	'She can be such a bully to everybody, Albina seems to be the only one she is wary of. You have mixed feelings about how to handle it, though.'
 	'It might be fun to be in her shoes, telling the girls what to do all the time, and punishing them when they misbehave.'
@@ -548,8 +548,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chris_sub':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/strip.jpg"></center>'
 				'You reluctantly nod your head and meekly agree. "Ok," you tell her.'
-				'Hesitantly you start taking your clothes off. She watches you impassively, Lina behind her looking at you in shock.'
-				'When you stand before, completely naked, she pulls out her phone and starts taking pictures'
+				'Hesitantly you start taking your clothes off and kneel down again. She watches you impassively, Lina behind her looking at you in shock.'
+				'When you stand before, completely naked, she pulls out her phone and starts taking pictures.'
 				'You don''t mind if I take some pictures and send them to everyone, right? They''re going to love seeing these."'
 				'You start to panic as you realize what this means, this could ruin your reputation.'
 				if pcs_inhib > 60:
@@ -644,9 +644,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chris_sub':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Hey Christina, what are you two up to?"'
 			'She turns and looks at you, apparently annoyed. "What, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Can''t you see I''m busy trying to get this lazy ass to perform better..." Christina sourly answers. "Thanks to her we lost the last relay race. And now I''ve got to whip her into shape before the next one."'
-			'"You''re lucky she spends so much time working with you, Lina. Pay attention to what she says and you could be a great runner someday!"'
-			'Christina looks at you in suprise, not expecting you to compliment her. "No, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I wont train you too. I have my hands full with this one."'
-			'"Please? I would train hard, and listen to anything you say."'
+			'"You''re lucky she spends so much time working with you, Lina. Pay attention to what she says and you could be a great runner someday!" You try to draw Christina''s attention.'
+			'Christina looks at you in suprise, not expecting you to compliment her. "No, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I won''t train you too. I have my hands full with this one."'
+			'"Please? I would train hard, and listen to anything you say." You beg her.'
 			'"Grovel, and maybe I would consider it," she says with a sinister look on her face.'
 			'"Oh, I...uh...ok." Dropping to your knees in the sand, you look up at her with a pleading expression on your face. "Please train me to be a fast runner, mistress."'
 			'"You call that groveling? Pathetic. Apparently I would have to teach you how to beg, too. Remove your clothes."'
@@ -655,9 +655,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chris_sub':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/strip.jpg"></center>'
 				'You reluctantly nod your head and meekly agree. "Ok," you tell her.'
-				'Hesitantly you start taking your clothes off. She watches you impassively, Lina behind her looking at you in shock.'
-				'When you stand before, completely naked, she pulls out her phone and starts taking pictures'
-				'You don''t mind if I take some pictures and send them to everyone, right? They''re going to love seeing these."'
+				'Hesitantly you start taking your clothes off and kneel down again. She watches you impassively, Lina behind her looking at you in shock.'
+				'When you stand before, completely naked, she pulls out her phone and starts taking pictures.'
+				'"You don''t mind if I take some pictures and send them to everyone, right? They''re going to love seeing these."'
 				'You start to panic as you realize she tricked you, and probably will ruin your reputation too.'
 				if pcs_inhib > 60:
 					inhib_exp += rand(3,5)
@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tBella':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big22.jpg"></center>'
 	'You approach her and tap her on her shoulder, "Hi, Bella! You''re heading into the city?" you ask.'
 	'Sighing, Bella replies, "Yeah, I''m meeting some of my older friends in town. There''s a new gym opening so we though we might check it out."'
-	
+
 	act 'Sounds amazing':
 		cla & *clr
 		npc_rel['A22'] += 2
@@ -826,7 +826,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tBella':
 		'"Oh, the stories I''ve got to tell..." Bella replies but before she can continue on there''s an announcement and she excuses herself saying that''s the train she needs to catch.'
 		act 'Return to the train station': gt 'pav_train_hall'
 	end
-	
+
 	act 'What''s wrong with the gym in Pavlovsk?':
 		cla & *clr
 		npc_rel['A22'] -= 2
@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVeronika':
 			'Stone cold Veronika only shrugs her shoulders, turning around and skates away like the two of you never had a conversation...'
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'gLake'
 		end
-		
+
 		act 'Encourage':
 			cla & *clr
 			npc_rel['A141'] += 2
@@ -884,4 +884,3 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVeronika':
 end
 
 --- gschool_socialchg1 ---------------------------------
-