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locations/city_lake.qsrc


+ 28 - 28
locations/city_market.qsrc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $loc_arg = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Marketplace</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/market/rinok.jpg"></center>'
 	''
-	'On one of the stalls has a sign "Cash paid for secondhand clothes", here you can <a href="exec:cloc=2 & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''sell''">sell individual items</a> or <a href="exec:gs ''portnoi''">all of your unwanted clothes</a>.'
+	'One of the stalls has a sign attached to it that reads "Cash paid for secondhand clothes". You can <a href="exec:cloc=2 & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''sell''">sell individual items</a> or <a href="exec:gs ''portnoi''">all of your unwanted clothes here</a>.'
 
 	if $message ! '':
 		'<center>'+$message+'</center>'
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $loc_arg = 'start':
 		if nurand >= 80:
 			pcs_mood -= 5
 			gs 'flash', 'butt', 'outdoors', 1
-			'You feel someones hand gently touch <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos15''">your butt</a>.'
+			'You feel a hand gently pawing at <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos15''">your ass</a>.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -78,18 +78,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $loc_arg = 'start':
 					hour = 9
 					minut = 0
 					prodpayum = 1200
-					'Arthur unloads stuff from his truck and gives them to you. You start hanging the clothes on the stall.'
-					'Before leaving Arthur gives you instructions. "Sell at whatever price you want, but at the end of your shift I will charge you 1000 <b>₽</b> for each item sold. You should be making me no less than <<arturplan>> <b>₽</b>."'
+					'Arthur unloads boxes from his truck and gives them to you. You start hanging the clothes inside around the stall.'
+					'Before leaving, Arthur gives you instructions. "Sell it all at whatever price you want, but at the end of your shift, I''ll charge you 1000 <b>₽</b> for each item sold. You should be making me no less than <<arturplan>> <b>₽</b>."'
 
-					act 'To work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Start working':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 		end
-		act 'Retire from work':
+		act 'Quit':
 			cla
 			work = 0
 			workrin = 0
-			'You retired from work and collect papers.'
+			'You quit your job at the market and collect your papers.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'city_market', 'start'
 		end
@@ -97,13 +97,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $loc_arg = 'start':
 
 	if (work = 0 or cheatWork = 1) and workrin = 0:
 		nl
-		'On one of the tents hangs an ad, "Need female market stall staff. Paychecks big."'
+		'A messily written ad hangs from one of the stalls. "Need female market stall staff. Paychecks big."'
 
 		act 'Approach the owner of the ad':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			'Hi, my name is Arthur. I own many stalls here, I need a saleswoman. The last one moved to St. Petersburg. Want the job?'
-			'Pay is a percentage of sales, paid at end of shift. Your shifts would be Tuesdays, Thursdays and Saturdays. From 8 till 14.'
+			'Hi, my name is Arthur. I own many stalls here and I need a saleswoman. Want the job?'
+			'Pay is a percentage of sales, paid at end of shift. Your shifts would be Tuesdays, Thursdays and Saturdays from 08:00 to 14:00.'
 			'Government insist I have your papers, so it would be your main job.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'city_market', 'start'
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $loc_arg = 'start':
 				work = 1
 				workrin = 1
 				arturplan = 5000
-				'You give your papers to Arthur and shaking your hand he welcomes you on board.'
+				'You give your papers to Arthur and he shakes your hand, welcoming you aboard.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'city_market', 'start'
 			end
@@ -125,45 +125,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $loc_arg = 'start':
 		minut += 15
 		gs'stat'
 
-		'On the counter is a very entertaining fantasy book, a science fiction book and women''s romance novels. They all cost 350 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You wlak up to the stall and inspect what''s on sale. You see a fantasy book, a science fiction book and various romance novels. They all cost 350 <b>₽</b> each.'
 
 		if money >= 350:
-			act 'Buy a book of fantasy 350 <b>₽</b>':
+			act 'Buy the fantasy book':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				money -= 350
 				f_book += 1
 				gs'stat'
 
-				'You bought the book for fantasy 350 <b>₽</b>.'
+				'You buy the fantasy book for 350 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt'city_market','start'
 			end
 		end
 
 		if money >= 350:
-			act 'Buy a book of science fiction 350 <b>₽</b>':
+			act 'Buy the science fiction book':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				money -= 350
 				f_book += 1
 				gs'stat'
 
-				'You bought the book for science fiction 350 <b>₽</b>.'
+				'You buy the science fiction book 350 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt'city_market','start'
 			end
 		end
 
 		if money >= 350:
-			act 'Buy ladies for romance 350 <b>₽</b>':
+			act 'Buy a romance novel':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				money -= 350
 				w_book += 1
 				gs'stat'
 
-				'You bought the novel for the ladies 350 <b>₽</b>.'
+				'You buy a romance novel for 350 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt'city_market','start'
 			end
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo':
 	gs'stat'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Clothes.</font></b></center>'
-	'Cheap clothing on the market stall.'
+	'You inspect the cheap clothing the stall has to offer.'
 
 	act 'Return':
 		cla
@@ -217,14 +217,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 	CLOSE ALL
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Above the window the sign says, Jacob Solomonovich Schneersohn, tailor, 8:00-16:00 Monday - Friday'
+	'A sign reads: "Jacob Solomonovich Schneersohn, tailor, 8:00-16:00 Monday - Friday"'
 	act 'Speak to the tailor':
 		cla
 		*clr
-		'Elderly Jewish man makes a pattern at the table, he pulls his glasses down a little and looking over the top of them he points at you.'
+		'An elderly Jewish man is sitting at a table. He pulls his glasses down a little and looks over the top of them as he points at you.'
 
 		if portnoyQW > 0:
-			'Aah <<$pcs_nickname>>, come, come to adjust clothes again?'
+			'"Ah <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come to adjust your clothes again?"'
 
 			if money >= 500:
 				act 'Take in the clothes you are wearing (500 <b>₽</b>)':
@@ -232,11 +232,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 					*clr
 					minut += 15
 					if CloStyle = 5 or $clothingworntype = 'danilovich_outfits':
-						'What are you wasting my time for? This type of clothing does not need to be resized.'
+						'"What are you wasting my time for? This does not need to be resized!"'
 					else
 						money -= 500
 						dynamic '<<$clothingworntype>>_b[<<clothingwornnumber>>] = pcs_hips'
-						'You undress and give the clothes you need adjusting to Jacob Solomonovich, it is fifteen minutes until your clothes and returned to you.'
+						'You undress and give your clothes to Jacob. Fifteen minutes pass before he returns.'
 					end
 
 					act 'Leave': minut += 10 & gt 'city_residential'
@@ -246,13 +246,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 				act 'Take in all the clothes':gt 'portnoi2'
 			end
 		else
-			'Hello young lady. I am Solomonovich Jacob, for you simply Yasha. And what is your name?'
+			'"Hello young lady. I am Jacob Solomonovich, but you can call me Yasha. And what is your name?"'
 
 			act 'Tell him your name':
 				cla
 				portnoyQW = 1
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>"'
-				'"What a pretty name. <<$pcs_nickname>>, come, sit here on this chair. Anyway how can I help you?'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>....What a pretty name. Come, sit here on this chair. How can I help you?"'
 
 				act 'Ask him about your clothes':
 					cla
@@ -261,8 +261,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'"Can you tailor my clothes to fit me better?"'
 					'"Of course I can! Otherwise, what kind of tailor would I be? Here, let me see what you''re wearing."'
-					'Jacob Solomonovich jumps up smartly and nimbly removes the tape from his neck and begins to measure your chest, waist and hips.'
-					'"Well, I can adjust any clothing that doesn''t fit you any more for 500 <b>₽</b> per item."'
+					'He jumps up and nimbly removes the tape from his neck and begins to measure your chest, waist and hips.'
+					'"I can adjust any clothing that doesn''t fit you for 500 <b>₽</b> per item."'
 
 					act 'Leave': minut += 10 & gt 'city_residential'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_park.qsrc

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'A man walks past you and notices that you didn''t put on any panties. He whistles at you, "Did you forget to put on your underwear today, honey?"'
 		*nl
 		if pcs_inhib >= 35:
-			gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'outdoors', 2
+			gs 'flash', 'butt', 'outdoors', 2, 2
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			'"Nope!" you call back. "Just remembered not to!" You flip up the back of your skirt, flashing your ass at him, and keep walking, a bit of a spring in your step.'
 		elseif pcs_inhib > 30:

+ 7 - 7
locations/city_pharmacy.qsrc

@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		*pl '<center><b><font color="maroon">Pharmacy</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/pharmacy/aptekabusy<<people>>.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'When you go up to check out their is <<people>> ' + iif(people < 2 or people > 4, 'people' , 'man' ) + ' in line before you.'
-		act 'Leave the pharmacy': minut += 5 & gt 'city_residential'
-		act 'Wait for your turn' :
+		'There is <<people>> ' + iif(people < 2 or people > 4, 'people' , 'man' ) + ' in line as you walk up to the counter to check out.'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_residential'
+		act 'Wait in line' :
 			minut += rand(1,4) * people
 			people = 0
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		killvar '$message'
 		'<center>"Do you need anything else?"</center>'
 	else
-		'<center>Their is a young woman behind the counter in a white coat,as you approach she asks. "Hello, what can I help you with?"</center>'
+		'A young woman in a white coat stands behind the counter. She smiles as you approach. "Hello, what can I help you with?"'
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave the pharmacy': minut += 5 & gt 'city_residential'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_residential'
 
 	!! output for purchased item
 	iif($ARGS[1] = '', '', '<center><<$ARGS[1]>></center>')
@@ -81,10 +81,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_antifungal':
 		money -= 1050
 		Kandidoz = 0
 		gs 'stat'
-		$gardmess = '<center><font color="green">You bought 1 <b>Antifungal medication</b>.</font></center><br>You put the money on the counter and immediately open the package and swallow the tablet. A while later, you feel better.'
+		$gardmess = '<center><font color="green">You bought 1 <b>Antifungal medication</b>.</font></center><br>You put the money on the counter before immediately opening the package and swallowing the tablet. A while later, you start feeling better.'
 		gt 'city_pharmacy', 'shop'
 	elseif Kandidoz < 30 and KandidozOnce > 0:
-		'You don''t need the medication right now. Your thrush is currently in remission, taking vitamins will ensure that it stays that way.'
+		'You don''t need medication right now. Your thrush is currently in remission and taking vitamins will ensure that it stays that way.'
 	else
 		msg '<center>You don''t need any antifungal medication right now.</center>'
 		*nl

+ 17 - 17
locations/city_residential.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ gs'street_event','city_residential', 'extras'
 
 if opusk > 0 or gnewQW = 5:
 	if rand(0,9) = 0:gt 'gopnew', 'start5'
-	if home_owned[1] > 0:'Near the entrance to where you live there is something written on the wall. It says:<b>"<<$pcs_nickname>> from apartment 69 is a cheap slut!"</b>'
+	if home_owned[1] > 0:'Something is written on the wall near the entrance to your building. It reads:<b>"<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> from apartment 69 is a cheap slut!"</b>'
 end
 
 gs 'stat'
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ end
 
 housrA = 0
 
-if car > 0 and cardrive = 1: 'In the parking lot is <a href="exec:GS ''carF'', ''start''">your <<$car>></a>.'
+if car > 0 and cardrive = 1: '<a href="exec:GS ''carF'', ''start''">Your <<$car>></a> is in the parking lot.'
 
 if home_owned[1] > 0:
 	act '<b>Go home</b>':
@@ -93,13 +93,13 @@ gs 'taxi'
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:$loc = ''city_residential'' & minut += 1 & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
 if Enable_tablemap = 0:
 	if katkey = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''katspalnya'', ''start''">Kat''s</a> apartment'
-	if IrinaQW >= 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''city_irinaroom'', ''start''">Irene''s</a> apartment is not far away from yours.'
+	if IrinaQW >= 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''city_irinaroom'', ''start''">Irene''s</a> apartment is not far from yours.'
 	if hour >= 16 and hour < 22 and dimaQW > 0:'<a href="exec:gt ''city_dima'', ''start''">Dima''s</a> apartment'
 	if klofQW >= 2:'<a href="exec:gt ''city_jorahouse'', ''start''">Jora''s</a> apartment'
 else
 	st_count=0 & $show_table=''
 	if katkey = 1:gs'show_table','<a href="exec:gt ''katspalnya'', ''start''">Kat''s</a> apartment','3'
-	if IrinaQW >= 1:gs'show_table','<a href="exec:gt ''city_irinaroom'', ''start''">Irene''s</a> apartment is not far away from yours.','3'
+	if IrinaQW >= 1:gs'show_table','<a href="exec:gt ''city_irinaroom'', ''start''">Irene''s</a> apartment is not far from yours.','3'
 	if hour >= 16 and hour < 22 and dimaQW > 0:gs'show_table','<a href="exec:gt ''city_dima'', ''start''">Dima''s</a> apartment','3'
 	if klofQW >= 2:gs'show_table','<a href="exec:gt ''city_jorahouse'', ''start''">Jora''s</a> apartment','3'
 	if hour >= 10 and hour < 22 and lesbiQW = 1:
@@ -114,12 +114,12 @@ else
 	if st_count > 0 :'<TABLE BORDER=1><<$show_table>></TR></TABLE>'
 end
 
-if hour >= 5 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a> Station is within a 5 minute walk from here.'
+if hour >= 5 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a> station is a 5 minute walk away.'
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The <a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''shop'', ''start''">supermarket</a> is not far from here.'
 if (hour >= 8 and hour <= 20) or preg = 2:
 	'The <a href="exec:gt ''city_clinic'', ''start''">clinic</a> is also nearby.'
 else
-	'The clinic is close. It will open again at 08:00.'
+	'The clinic is close. It will open at 08:00.'
 end
 if hour >= 6 and hour <= 9 and military = 1 and week = 6:
 	'There is a <a href="exec:minut += 60 & gt ''Military'', ''start''">military bus</a> waiting on the other side of the street.'
@@ -137,18 +137,18 @@ else
 	'Near the market is a tailor shop where you can get your clothes resized if needed. '+iif(week < 6, 'It closes at 16:00.', 'It''s closed on weekends.')
 end
 if hour >= 11 and hour < 12 and week > 1 and week < 5 and workKafe = 1:
-	'The side door of <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''city_kafe'', ''work''">"The Roadhouse"</a> is open, so employees can enter to begin their shift.'
+	'The side door of <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''city_kafe'', ''work''">"The Roadhouse"</a> is open, allowing employees to enter to begin their shift.'
 elseif hour >= 12 and hour <= 22 and week ! 1:
-	'In a side alley, next to the uniquely styled diner <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''city_kafe'', ''start''">"The Roadhouse"</a>, you can hear the swearing and laughing of some <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''gopnew'', ''start''">gopniks</a>.'
+	'In a side alley, next to the uniquely styled diner <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''city_kafe'', ''start''">"The Roadhouse"</a>, you can hear some <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''gopnew'', ''start''">gopniks</a> swearing and laughing.'
 elseif hour > 22 or hour <= 3:
-	'In the parking lot of "The Roadhouse" diner you can hear the swearing and laughing of some <a href="exec:gt ''gopnew'', ''start''">gopniks</a>.'
+	'You can hear the swearing and laughing of some <a href="exec:gt ''gopnew'', ''start''">gopniks</a> in the parking lot of "The Roadhouse" diner.'
 else
-	'The Roadhouse diner is closed right now. It''s open 12:00 to 23:00 every day except Monday.'
+	'The Roadhouse diner is closed right now. It''s open between 12:00 and 23:00 every day except Monday.'
 end
 if clener >= 1 and hour >= 7 and hour <= 22:'There''s a small office building where a <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''city_smalloffice'', ''start''">cleaning lady</a> is needed.'
 
-'The city''s large <a href="exec:minut += 20 & gt ''city_park'', ''start''">central park</a> is about a 20-minute walk away.'
-'The city''s only <a href="exec:minut += 40 & gt ''city_lake'', ''start''">lake</a> is just a 40-minute walk away.'
+'The city''s large <a href="exec:minut += 20 & gt ''city_park'', ''start''">central park</a> is a 20 minute walk away.'
+'The city''s only <a href="exec:minut += 40 & gt ''city_lake'', ''start''">lake</a> is a 40 minute walk away.'
 '24 Hour <a href="exec:$loc = ''city_residential'' & gt ''city_pharmacy'', ''start''">Pharmacy</a>.'
 
 if Enable_tablemap = 0:
@@ -164,17 +164,17 @@ if Enable_tablemap = 0:
 end
 
 if home_owned[1] = 0:
-	'In the courtyard of one of the apartment buildings, you see several <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''city_trashplace''">trash bins</a>.'
+	'You see several <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''city_trashplace''">trash bins</a> in the courtyard of one of the apartment buildings.'
 else
-	'In the courtyard of your <a href="exec: gt ''city_apt_building'',''floor_1''">apartment building</a>, you see several <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''city_trashplace''">trash bins</a>.'
+	'You see several <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''city_trashplace''">trash bins</a> in the courtyard of your <a href="exec: gt ''city_apt_building'',''floor_1''">apartment building</a>.'
 end
 
-if SNarkPriton > 0:'The <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''city_drugden''">drug house</a> is clearly recognizable by the syringes and the trash that lies in front of it.'
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 23 or saunaWorkWhore > 0 or workDisk = 2:'<a href="exec:minut += 10 & gt ''city_sauna''">The Sauna</a> is a 10 minute walk away. Rumors say the sauna is just the front for a brothel.'
+if SNarkPriton > 0:'The <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''city_drugden''">drug house</a> is clearly recognizable by the syringes and trash that lies in front of it.'
+if hour >= 8 and hour <= 23 or saunaWorkWhore > 0 or workDisk = 2:'<a href="exec:minut += 10 & gt ''city_sauna''">The sauna</a> is a 10 minute walk away. Rumors say that it''s just a front for a brothel.'
 
 if hour >= 20 or hour <= 4:
 	*nl
-	'There are prostitutes working in places near here.'
+	'There are prostitutes working near here.'
 	if pcs_makeup > 2 and PCloStyle = 4 and pcs_inhib >= 40 and (stat['vaginal'] >  0 or fame['pav_slut'] >= 100):
 		act 'Prostitute yourself': gt 'street_walker', 'work'
 	elseif pcs_inhib >= 40 and (stat['vaginal'] >  0 or fame['pav_slut'] >= 100):  

+ 10 - 10
locations/city_sauna.qsrc

@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Sauna</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sauna.jpg"></center>'
-	'Luxurious high quality public sauna founded long time ago. The sauna houses separate changing rooms and shower facilities for men and women.'
+	'A luxurious high quality public sauna built a long time ago. The sauna houses separate changing rooms and shower facilities for men and women.'
 
 	act 'Leave':minut += 10 & gt 'city_residential'
 
-	if SaunaWhore > 0:act 'Head to work':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
+	if SaunaWhore > 0:act 'Go to work':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
 
 	if week = 5 and workDisk = 2:
 		'There''s a security guard waiting at the entrance for you to arrive.'
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			workDisk = 3
 			konvert = 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You hand over the disk to him and you are handed back a thick envelope.'
+			'You hand over the disk and are given a thick envelope in return.'
 
 			act 'Leave':minut += 10 & gt 'city_residential'
 		end
@@ -51,12 +51,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sauna2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Sauna</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sauna1.jpg"></center>'
-	'One hour visit - 2,000 <b>₽</b>'
+	'A one hour session costs 2000 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'city_sauna'
 
 	if money >= 2000 and saunaday ! daystart:
-		act 'Stay (2,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Stay':
 			cls
 			money = money - 2000
 			minut += 60
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sauna2':
 			pcs_mana = (pcs_intel*pcs_magik) + pcs_magik*100 + pcs_vital*10 + rikudo
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/sauna/sau.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spend an hour relaxing in the heat of the sauna, having a cool shower and dressing. You feel revitalised.'
+			'You spend an hour relaxing in the heat of the sauna before having a cool shower and dressing. You feel revitalised.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'city_sauna'
 		end
@@ -102,17 +102,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunaroom':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/saunaroom.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'<br>The room has a thread bare <a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''bed2''">bed</a> and a cheap <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing).'
+	'<br>The room has a thread bare <a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''bed2''">bed</a> and a cheap <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing.'
 	*nl
 
-	'<br>Hanging on the wall is a dirty <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>. The floor is littered with dozens of porn magazines, and a selection of adult toys are scattered throughout the room. There''s so much crap laying around, there''s barely enough space to do some basic <a href="exec:gt ''city_sauna'', ''saunafitness''">exercise</a>.'
+	'<br>Hanging on the wall is a dirty <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>. The floor is littered with dozens of porn magazines and a selection of sex toys are scattered throughout the room. There''s so much stuff lying around, there''s barely enough space to do some basic <a href="exec:gt ''city_sauna'', ''saunafitness''">exercise</a>.'
 	*nl
 
 	'Your <a href="exec:gt ''budilnik'', ''start''">alarm clock</a> is set to <b>'+iif(timer < 10,'0<<timer>>','<<timer>>')+':'+iif(timerM < 10,'0<<timerM>>','<<timerM>>')+'</b> during the week and <b>'+iif(timerEnd < 10,'0<<timerEnd>>','<<timerEnd>>')+':'+iif(timerEndM < 10,'0<<timerEndM>>','<<timerEndM>>')+'</b> during the weekend. It is currently turned '+iif(budilnikOn = 0, '<a href="exec: budilnikOn = 1 & gt ''city_sauna'', ''saunaroom''">OFF</a>.', '<a href="exec: budilnikOn = 0 & gt ''city_sauna'', ''saunaroom''">ON</a>.')
 	
 	*nl
 
-	'If you run out of personal hygeine or beauty products, you can ask for some more, but at a cost.'
+	'If you run out of personal hygeine or beauty products, you can ask for more at a cost.'
 	*nl
 	'You can access your <a href="exec: quick_dress = 1 & gt ''wardrobe'', ''default''">default clothing</a> options directly.'
 	*nl
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunaroom':
 				end
 				killvar '$sleep_txt'
 			else
-				'<br>You don''t have enough money (850 <b>₽</b>) to sleep her tonight.'
+				'<br>You don''t have enough money to sleep her tonight.'
 			end
 		end
 	end

+ 139 - 146
locations/city_saunawhore.qsrc

@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Sauna</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sauna1.jpg"></center>'
 	''
-	'The sauna is open between 08:00 and 24:00. Only in that time customers can arrive.'
+	'The sauna is open to "customers" between 08:00 and 00:00.'
 	'All the walls are covered in <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a>.'
 
 	if saunaWorkNow = 1:
 		saunaWorkNow = 0
 		money -= paymamka
-		'Nurse cames to you and takes from you <<paymamka>> per customer.'
+		'A nurse enters the room and takes <<paymamka>> per customer from you.'
 	end
 
 	gs 'city_saunawhore','debtPay'
@@ -53,8 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 		cls
 		workDolg += 420
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You are beckoned by the nurse. "Hey, come here."'
-		'You go up to her and she demands your bared arm. You present your arm as required and she takes out a syringe filled with drugs. "Sit still, I''ll give you a shot now and it will make you feel like normal again."'
+		'You are beckoned by the nurse. You walk up to her and she demands to see your arm. You present your arm and she takes out a syringe filled with drugs. "Sit still, I''ll give you a shot now and it will make you feel like normal again."'
 
 		act 'Leave':
 			gs 'drugs', 'heroin'
@@ -65,12 +64,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 		exit
 	end
 	if workDolg <= 0 and pcs_mood <= 50 and SaunaWhore > 0 and money >= 420:
-		act 'Ask for some drugs (420 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Ask for some drugs':
 			cls
 			menu_off = 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You are beckoned by the nurse. "OK, come here."'
-			'You go up to her and she asks for your bared arm. You present your arm and she takes out a syringe filled with drugs. "Sit still, I''ll give you a shot now and it will make you feel like normal again."'
+			'"Okay, come here."'
+			'You walk up to her and she asks to see your arm. You present your arm and she takes out a syringe filled with drugs. "Sit still, I''ll give you a shot now and it will make you feel like normal again."'
 
 			act 'Leave':
 				gs 'drugs', 'heroin'
@@ -88,18 +87,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 			minut += 25
 			menu_off = 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You explain how you feel nauseous and have pain in your pubic area.'
-			'The nurse checks you over and eventually comes to a conclusion.'
-			'"I think it might be toxic shock, we''ll have to get you sorted out. Wait here I''ll call the doctor."'
+			'You explain how you feel nauseous and have pain in your pubic area. The nurse checks you over and eventually comes to a conclusion.'
+			'"I think it might be toxic shock. We''ll have to get you sorted out. Wait here I''ll call the doctor."'
 			act 'Some time later':
 				cla
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'cum_cleanup', 'cleanloc', 17
 				cumcondslip = 0
 				gs 'stat'
-				'When he arrives the doctor quickly examines you, and establishes that you are suffering from toxic shock from a spent condom in your body.'
+				'When he arrives, the doctor examines you and establishes that you''re suffering from toxic shock from a spent condom in your body.'
 				'"I removed it as soon as I found it. If you were feeling sick, it should slowly subside."'
-				'You reflexively thank the Doctor even though he''s visiting you in this place.'
+				'You reflexively thank the doctor, even though he''s visiting you in this place.'
 
 				act 'Return':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
 			end
@@ -107,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 	end
 
 	if hour >= 8:
-		act 'Sit on the couch (1:00)':
+		act 'Sit on the couch':
 			if pcs_makeup > 1 and pcs_hairbsh = 1 and pcs_sweat < 26 and pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes <= 3:
 				cls
 				minut += 60
@@ -134,11 +132,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 					cls
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/saunawhore.jpg"></center>'
-					'A client has arrived at the sauna, and the girls line up so that the customer can choose his favorite.'
+					'A client has arrived at the sauna, and the girls line up so that the customer can choose one of them.'
 
 					if rand(0, 120) < pcs_apprnc:
-						'Client jabs a finger at you, "This one."'
-						act 'Go to the sauna with client':
+						'The client jabs a finger at you. "This one."'
+						act 'Go with the client':
 							saunaWorkKlient = 1
 							guy += 1
 							slutty += 1
@@ -147,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 							gt 'city_saunawhore', 'clientGate'
 						end
 					else
-						'The client examines you closely but turns away to chose another girl.'
+						'The client examines you closely, but turns away to chose another girl.'
 
 						act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
 					end
@@ -158,14 +156,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 				end
 			else
 				cla
-				'The brothel madam comes over to you and says, "Our customers expect you to be clean, shaven, made-up and with your hair looking nice. Go and sort yourself out, now!"'
+				'The brothel madam walks over to you. "Our customers expect you to be clean, shaven, made-up and with your hair looking nice. Go and sort yourself out, now!"'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
 	if clenerSauna ! daystart:
-		act 'Clean toilets (1:00)':
+		act 'Clean toilets':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 60
@@ -176,10 +174,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener2.jpg"></center>'
 			if workDolg > 0:
-				'You scrub the sauna toilets for an hour until they shine and reducing your debt by 100 <b>₽</b>.'
+				'You scrub the sauna toilets for an hour, reducing your debt by 100 <b>₽</b>.'
 				workDolg -= 100
 			else
-				'You scrub the sauna toilets for an hour until they shine. You get payed 100 <b>₽</b> for your hard work.'
+				'You scrub the sauna toilets for an hour. You are paid 100 <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				money += 100
 			end
 
@@ -188,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 	end
 
 	if clenerSauna2 ! daystart:
-		act 'Scrub floors (1:00)':
+		act 'Scrub floors':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			menu_off = 1
@@ -198,10 +196,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener1.jpg"></center>'
 			if workDolg > 0:
-				'You spend an hour mopping and scrubbing all the floors and reducing your debt by 100 <b>₽</b>.'
+				'You spend an hour mopping and scrubbing all the floors, reducing your debt by 100 <b>₽</b>.'
 				workDolg -= 100
 			else
-				'You spend an hour mopping and scrubbing all the floors. You get payed 100 <b>₽</b> for your hard work.'
+				'You spend an hour mopping and scrubbing all the floors. You are paid 100 <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 				money += 100
 			end
 
@@ -217,17 +215,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 		menu_off = 0
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/strela/vadimbely.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you enter the sauna you see a familiar face. It''s Vadim Bely standing there with his brother. "Good news little whore, you''ve finally paid off your debt. You''re free to do whatever you want now."'
-		'You look at him with hate-filled eyes, "Do you know what you put me through here? You''re the most despicable man I''ve ever met in my life."'
-		'Vadim starts laughing loudly, "Choose you words carefully girl. I''m still in control of your future, maybe you haven''t payed off your debt yet?"'
-		'Not wanting to escalate the situation, you look down on the floor, "I''m sorry. I should know my place."'
-		'"Good girl, now that you''re free wanna go party with us to celebrate your freedom?"'
-		act 'No, thanks':
+		'You see a familiar face as you enter the sauna. Vadim Bely stands with his brother. "Good news little whore, you''ve finally paid off your debt. You''re free to do whatever you want now."'
+		'You look at him with hate-filled eyes. "Do you know what you put me through here? You''re the most despicable man I''ve ever met in my life!"'
+		*nl
+		'Vadim laughs loudly. "Choose your words carefully girl. I''m still in control of your future and maybe I think you haven''t paid off your debt yet?"'
+		'Not wanting to escalate the situation, you look down at the floor in silence.'
+		'"Good girl. Now that you''re free, how about you come and party with us to celebrate your freedom?"'
+		act 'No':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/strela/vadimbely.jpg"></center>'
-			'"No, I''m sorry but I just want to go home... Maybe some other time."'
-			'Vadim looks at you with a serious look, "You''re lucky I''m in a good mood today. I''ll let it slide this time." he says laughing.'
-			'You quickly gather your stuff before he has a change of heart and step outside the sauna.'
+			'"No. I''m sorry, but I just want to go home... Maybe some other time."'
+			'Vadim looks at you with a serious stare. "You''re lucky I''m in a good mood today. I''ll let it slide this time."'
+			'You quickly gather your stuff before he has a change of heart and run outside the sauna.'
 			npc_QW['A113'] = 2
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
@@ -247,10 +246,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/brothelshower.jpg"></center>'
 	''
-	'You enter the staff bathroom, which is usually cleaned by the girls that have only just started work here, voluntary or otherwise.'
-	'There is a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, a shower, toilet, and basin.'
+	'You enter the staff bathroom, which is usually cleaned by the new girls who have just started working here, whether they want to or not.'
+	'There is a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, a shower, toilet and a sink.'
 
-	act 'Return to foyer': minut += 1 & gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
+	act 'Return to they foyer': minut += 1 & gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
 
 	act 'Take a shower (0:15)':
 		cls
@@ -261,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 		'<center><h3>Staff Bathroom</h3></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/brothelshower.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'After taking off all of your clothes, you gather up your towel, washcloth and soap, then head to the shower. You wash yourself thoroughly to be as clean as possible for potential customers.'
+		'You strip from your clothes and gather up your towel, washcloth and soap before heading to the shower. You thoroughly wash yourself so you''re as clean as possible for potential customers.'
 		if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 		if workDolg > 0:
 			if stanok <= 0: stanok = 5
@@ -278,14 +277,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 		dynamic $brit
 	elseif workDolg > 0 and stanok = 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <<stanok>> razors left. You should go to your room and ask for more razors.'
+		'You have <<stanok>> razors left. You should go to your room and ask for more.'
 	elseif workDolg <= 0 and stanok > 0:
 		*nl
 		'Your current pack of razors will last for <b><<stanok>></b> more shaves. <a href="exec:gs ''din_van'', ''shave_options''">Shave Options</a>'
 		dynamic $brit
 	elseif workDolg = 0 and stanok = 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <<stanok>> razors left. You should to go to the store and buy more razors.'
+		'You have <<stanok>> razors left. You should to go to the store and buy more.'
 	end
 	gs 'din_van', 'prvt_pee'
 	dynamic $enema
@@ -434,8 +433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clientGate':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'You lead the client into your room, closing the door behind him.'
-	'He sits down in the chair and stares at you with obvious lust.'
+	'You lead the client into your room, closing the door behind him. He sits down in the chair and stares at you with obvious lust.'
 	'He is <<$ageType>> <<$raceType>> man, and he is <<$heightType>> and <<$bodyType>>.'
 	if dick >= 16:'From the bulge in his pants, you can tell he probably has <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
 	'He seems to be in a <<$moodType>> mood.'
@@ -489,10 +487,10 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strippedGate':
 	minut += 2
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/nakedstand.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are fully naked in front of the client, his eyes devouring every inch of your young body.'
+	'You are fully naked in front of the client, his eyes devouring every inch of your body.'
 
 	if pcs_dancero >= 20:act 'Dance naked':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'nakeddance'
-	if guy >= 20:act 'Present him your holes':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'holeshow'
+	if guy >= 20:act 'Present your holes to him':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'holeshow'
 	act 'Kneel and open your mouth':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'blowjob'
 end
 
@@ -517,9 +515,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'holeshow':
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	end
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/holeshow'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You decide to tease him further, so you lean closer to him and open your mouth, sticking your tongue out as far as possible and then sucking your fingers.'
-	'Then you turn around, bend over, and grab your ass with both hands.'
-	'You pull your ass cheeks apart, giving him a great view of both of your holes.'
+	'You decide to tease him further. You lean in close to him and open your mouth, sticking your tongue out and sucking your fingers before you turn around, bend over and grab your ass with both hands.'
+	'You pull your ass cheeks apart, giving him a great view of both your holes.'
 	moodTypeRand += 1
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -531,8 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob':
 	
 	if $moodType = 'fairly normal':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/blowjob'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You kneel in front of him and bite your lip, caressing his cock through his pants with your hands.'
-		'He pulls out his <<$dick_girth>> dick and brings it to your <<$liptalk>>.'
+		'You kneel in front of him and bite your lip, caressing his cock through his pants with your hands. He pulls out his <<$dick_girth>> dick and brings it to your <<$liptalk>>.'
 		'You start kissing the tip, licking it all around and putting it a bit inside your mouth and sucking the head.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'prostitution'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -540,17 +536,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob':
 		act 'Suck it':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'blowjobGate'
 	elseif $moodType = 'good':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/blowjob'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You kneel in front of him and bite your lip, caressing his cock through his pants with your hands.'
-		'He comes close to you, fondles your hair and face and takes you gently by your arm, raising you up from the floor.'
-		'He directs you to the bed, undresses and both of you lie down.'
+		'You kneel in front of him and bite your lip, caressing his cock through his pants with your hand.'
+		'He then fondles your hair and face and takes you gently by your arm, pulling you up from the floor. He directs you to the bed, undresses and both of you lie down.'
 
 		act 'Embrace him':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckGate'
 	elseif $moodType = 'bad':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/slapface'+rand(1, 1)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You kneel in front of him and bite your lip, caressing his cock through his pants with your hands.'
-		'He comes close to you and suddenly slaps your face hard.'
-		'You are caught by surprise and tears well up in your eyes.'
-		'He seems very angry and even aroused by your misfortune.'
+		'He comes close to you and suddenly slaps your face hard. You''re caught by surprise and tears well up in your eyes. He seems very angry and even aroused by your misfortune.'
 		'As you kneel in front of him in tears, he grabs you roughly by your arms, painfully twisting them behind your back, and slams you down on the bed.'
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'cheeks', 'slap'
 		if slutty < 10:
@@ -567,9 +560,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjobGate':
-	'You begin to suck his cock in earnest, bobbing your head back and forth while you work it, running your tongue along the underside of his shaft.'
+	'You begin to suck his cock in earnest, bobbing your head back and forth while running your tongue along the underside of his shaft.'
 	'He is rock hard now and you can see his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm member in all its glory.'
-	'Client seems to be so far content with your performance, but you think it may be time to switch to efficient approach:'
+	'He seems to be content with your performance, but you think he wants you to go further.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if dick > pcs_throat:
@@ -589,22 +582,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjobCaress':
 
 	if $moodType = 'good':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/blowjob'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'He seems to enjoy your efforts anyway, and signals to you that he''s ready to move on to the next stage.'
+		'He seems to enjoy your efforts anyway, and signals that he''s ready to move on to the next stage.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckGate'
 	elseif $moodType = 'fairly normal':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/blowjob'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'He seem to have enough of this. He takes your hand and directs you towards the bed.'
+		'He seem to have had enough as he takes your hand and directs you towards the bed.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckGate'
 	elseif $moodType = 'bad':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/slapface'+rand(1, 1)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'He scowls at your pathetic attempt and pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
 		question = rand (1, 3)
 		if question = 1:
-			'He slaps your face hard and shouts: "What the hell is wrong with you? What kind of a whore is this bad at sucking cock?"'
+			'He slaps your face hard. "What the hell is wrong with you? What kind of whore is this bad at sucking cock?!"'
 		elseif question = 2:
-			'He slaps your face hard and shouts: "My cock isn''t tasty enough for you to suck on properly, bitch?"'
+			'He slaps your face hard. "My cock isn''t tasty enough for you to suck on properly, bitch?!"'
 		elseif question = 3:
-			'He slaps your face hard and shouts: "Christ, what kind of a good-for-nothing whore are you?"'
+			'He slaps your face hard. "What kind of good-for-nothing whore are you?!"'
 		end
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'cheeks', 'slap'
 		'Furious, he grabs you roughly by your arms, painfully twisting them behind your back, and slams you down on the bed.'
@@ -617,14 +610,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjobDeepthroat':
 	moodChange += rand (-1, 2)
 	moodTypeRand += moodChange
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/deepthroat'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'The client groans as you take him all the way to the hilt - his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm member is buried all the way inside your throat.'
-	'You try to hold it as long as possible, while teasing his balls with your tongue, your nose pressed against his pubic area.'
+	'The client groans as you take him all the way to the hilt - his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock is pushing deep into your throat.'
+	'You try to hold it as long as possible while teasing his balls with your tongue.'
 	if $moodType = 'bad':
 		'He gets a sadistic look in his eye, and then grabs the back of your head and holds you down, not letting you escape.'
-		'You feel yourself beginning to suffocate and panic, trying to get away from him, but he is much stronger than you and holds you tightly in place. Your eyes begin to roll back and you feel your conciousness fading when he finally releases you. You hack and sputter, thick strands of saliva hanging from his cock to your mouth. He seems to have enjoyed that quite a bit.'
+		'You feel yourself beginning to suffocate and panic, trying to get away from him, but he is much stronger than you and holds you tightly in place. Your eyes begin to roll back and you feel your conciousness fading when he finally releases you. You hack and sputter, thick strands of saliva hanging from his cock to your mouth. He seems to have enjoyed that quite a lot.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'prostitution', 'deepthroat'
-	'Finally he seems to have had enough of oral sex and signals you that he wants some more.'
+	'He seems to have had enough and signals that he wants some more.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckGate'
 end
@@ -633,8 +626,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckGate':
 	minut += 2
 	noCondChance = rand(1, 100)
 	if noCondChance < 40:
-		'He leers at you lustfully and asks, "So baby, how much for not using a condom?"'
-		'When you hesitate, he adds, "C''mon, I''ll pay you double."'
+		'He leers at you lustfully. "So baby, how much for not using a condom?"'
+		'When you hesitate, he adds, "Come on, I''ll pay you double."'
 		act 'Let him fuck you without a condom':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckGateCondomNo'
 		act 'Insist on using a condom':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckGateCondomYes'
 	else
@@ -659,7 +652,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckGateGo':
 	minut += 2
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/lieonbedboth.jpg"></center>'
 	'You lie back on the bed in front of the client.'
-	'"How do you want me?" you ask him.'
+	'"How do you want me?" you ask teasingly.'
 	if $moodType = 'bad':
 		'"How do I want you whore? I want you screaming!"'
 		forced = 1
@@ -680,23 +673,23 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckVaginal':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/fuckvaginal'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He climbs on top of you and pushes his member inside of you.'
+	'He climbs on top of you and pushes his dick inside you.'
 	if dick > pcs_vag:
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock is too big for your pussy and causes you intense pain, stretching you past your limit and bringing tears to your eyes. At least he isn''t too rough.'
-		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock in you over and over, seeming to enjoy the tightness and not caring much about your own pain.'
+		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock into you over and over, seeming to enjoy the tightness and not caring much about your pain.'
 		DMG = (dick - pcs_vag) / 2
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'vaginal', 'stretch'
 		pcs_mood -= (DMG * 5)
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'prostitution', 'rough'
 	else
-		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock in you over and over, not caring much about technique or your own pleasure.'
+		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock into you over and over, not caring much about technique or your own pleasure.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'prostitution'
 	end
 	''
-	'After a while, you can sense that he is almost ready to come.'
+	'After a while, you can sense that he''s about to cum.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if 	useCondom = 2:
-		act 'Ask him not to cum inside of you':
+		act 'Ask him not to cum inside you':
 			not_inside = 1
 			gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumClientGate'
 		end
@@ -709,20 +702,20 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckAnal':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/fuckanal'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He climbs on the bed behind you and presses the tip of his dick against your asshole. After waiting a moment, he begins to push it in.'
+	'He climbs on the bed behind you, presses the tip of his dick against your asshole and begins to push it in.'
 	if dick > pcs_ass:
 		'His <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock is too big for your ass and causes you intense pain as it stretches you out painfully and presses deep inside of you.'
-		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock in your ass over and over, seeming to enjoy the tightness and not caring much about your own pain.'
+		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock into your ass over and over, seeming to enjoy the tightness and not caring much about your pain.'
 		DMG = (dick - pcs_ass) / 2
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 		pcs_mood -= (DMG * 5)
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'prostitution', 'rough'
 	else
-		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock in your ass over and over, not caring much about technique or whether or not you''re enjoying it.'
+		'He thrusts his <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm cock into your ass over and over, not caring much about technique or whether or not you''re enjoying it.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'prostitution'
 	end
 	''
-	'After a while, you can sense that he is almost ready to come.'
+	'After a while, you can sense that he''s about to cum.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Let him cum wherever he wants':
 		not_inside = 2
@@ -734,8 +727,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckRoughGate':
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/bedoverpowered.jpg"></center>'
-	'The man is much stronger than you, and you are completely overpowered, entirely at his will.'
-	'He keeps your arms pinned painfully behind your back.'
+	'The man is much stronger than you, and you are completely overpowered and entirely at his will.'
+	'He keeps your arms pinned painfully behind your back as he fucks you hard.'
 	pcs_mood -= 50
 	useCondom = rand(1,2)
 	forced = 1
@@ -743,13 +736,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckRoughGate':
 	gs 'pain', 2, 'armR', 'twist'
 	holeType = rand(1, 2)
 	if holeType = 1 and useCondom = 1:
-		'You feel the tip of his cock against your pussy... at least it feels like he''s using a condom.'
+		'You feel the tip of his cock against your pussy. It feels like he''s using a condom.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckRoughVaginal'
 	elseif holeType = 1 and useCondom = 2:
-		'You feel the tip of his cock against your pussy... and it feels like he''s not wearing a condom!'
+		'You feel the tip of his cock against your pussy. It feels like he''s not wearing a condom!'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckRoughVaginal'
 	elseif holeType = 2:
-		'You feel the tip of his cock pressing against your asshole... this is probably not going to be pleasant.'
+		'You feel the tip of his cock pressing against your asshole.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'fuckRoughAnal'
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -757,7 +750,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckRoughVaginal':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/fuckroughvaginal'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He forces his dick inside of you, and begins to fuck your tender pussy furiously.'
+	'He forces his dick inside you and begins to roughly fuck your tender pussy.'
 	'You cannot help but scream in pain, which seems to arouse him even more and makes him push even harder and deeper.'
 	if dick > pcs_vag:
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm is too big for your pussy and causes you intense pain, stretching you horribly and slamming against your cervix.'
@@ -768,10 +761,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckRoughVaginal':
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'prostitution', 'rough', 'bound'
 	''
-	'After seemingly endless fucking, you can finally sense that he is almost ready to come.'
+	'After seemingly endless fucking, you finally sense that he''s about to cum.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if 	useCondom = 2:
-		act 'Beg him not to cum inside of you':
+		act 'Beg him not to cum inside you':
 			not_inside = 1
 			gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumClientGate'
 		end
@@ -784,7 +777,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckRoughAnal':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/fuckroughanal'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He roughly shoves his entire cock up your ass, and begins to fuck it furiously.'
+	'He roughly shoves his entire cock up your ass and begins to fuck it furiously.'
 	'You cannot help but scream in agony, which arouses him even more and makes him push even harder and deeper.'
 	if dick > pcs_ass:
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> <<dick>>cm is too big for your ass and causes you intense pain, stretching you out and making it feel like you''re being ripped open.'
@@ -795,7 +788,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckRoughAnal':
 	not_inside = 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'prostitution', 'rough', 'bound'
 	''
-	'After seemingly endless assfucking, you can finally sense that he is almost ready to come.'
+	'After seemingly endless assfucking, you finally sense that he''s about to cum.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Let him cum wherever he wants':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumClientGate'
 end
@@ -805,22 +798,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumClientGate':
 		if not_inside = 2:
 			cumRand = rand(1, 10)
 			if cumRand <= 9 and holeType = 1:
-				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he is about to cum inside of you.'
+				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he''s about to cum inside you.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumVaginal'
 			elseif cumRand <= 9 and holeType = 2:
-				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he is about to cum in your ass.'
+				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he''s about to cum in your ass.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumAnal'
 			else
-				'He pulls out and brings his cock up in front of your face.'
+				'He pulls out and brings his cock up to your face.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumFace'
 			end
 		else
 			cumRand = rand(1, 2)
 			if cumRand = 1 and holeType = 1:
-				'He just laughs and you realize he is going to cum inside of you anyway.'
+				'He just laughs and you realize he''s going to cum inside you anyway.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumVaginal'
 			elseif cumRand = 2:
-				'He smirks and says "Fine, how about in your eyes then, whore?"'
+				'He just smirks. "Fine. How about in your eyes then, whore?"'
 				gs 'pain', 1, 'eyes', 'burn'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumFace'
 			end
@@ -829,16 +822,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumClientGate':
 		if not_inside = 2:
 			cumRand = rand(1, 5)
 			if cumRand = 1 and holeType = 1:
-				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he is about to cum inside of you.'
+				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he''s about to cum inside you.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumVaginal'
 			elseif cumRand = 1 and holeType = 2:
-				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he is about to cum in your ass.'
+				'You feel his cock twitch and realize he''s about to cum in your ass.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumAnal'
 			elseif cumRand = 2:
-				'He pulls out and brings his cock up in front of your face.'
+				'He pulls out and brings his cock up to your face.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumFace'
 			elseif cumRand = 3:
-				'He pulls out and brings his cock up in front of your face.'
+				'He pulls out and brings his cock up to your face.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumMouth'
 			elseif cumRand = 4:
 				'He pulls out and holds his cock over your body.'
@@ -850,19 +843,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumClientGate':
 		else
 			cumRand = rand(1, 9)
 			if cumRand <= 2:
-				'He nods, pulls out, and brings his cock up in front of your face.'
+				'He nods, pulls out and brings his cock up to your face.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumFace'
 			elseif cumRand <= 4:
-				'He nods, pulls out, and brings his cock up in front of your face.'
+				'He nods, pulls out and brings his cock up to your face.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumMouth'
 			elseif cumRand <= 6:
-				'He nods, pulls out, and holds his cock over your body.'
+				'He nods, pulls out and holds his cock over your body.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumBelly'
 			elseif cumRand <= 8:
-				'He nods, pulls out, and holds his cock over your body.'
+				'He nods, pulls out and holds his cock over your body.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumTits'
 			else
-				'He shakes his head and says "Sorry, I can''t stop now!" and you realize he''s going to cum in you anyway!'
+				'He shakes his head. "Sorry, I can''t stop now!" You realize he''s going to cum in you anyway!'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'cumVaginal'
 			end
 		end
@@ -873,16 +866,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumVaginal':
 	minut += 5
 	if useCondom = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumcondomvaginal.jpg"></center>'
-		'The client''s cock twitches several more times as he cums into the condom inside of you.'
-		'He strips the condom from his dick, and you see that it has <<$cumType>> cum in it.'
+		'The client''s cock twitches several more times as he cums into the condom.'
+		'He rips the condom from his dick, and you see that it has <<$cumType>> cum in it.'
 		moodTypeRand += rand (-2, 2)
 		if $moodType = 'bad':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumcondompourface.jpg"></center>'
-			'Suddenly he grabs your head and pours the contents all over your face.'
+			'He then suddenly grabs your head and pours the contents over your face.'
 			gs 'cum_call', '', 'sauna client', 0, 3, 0, cumVolMl
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'sauna client', 0, 0, 0, cumVolMl
 		elseif $moodType = 'fairly normal':
-			'He throws it away on the floor, not caring about spilling the fluids around.'
+			'He throws it on the floor, not caring about spilling the fluids around.'
 			gs 'cum_call', '', 'sauna client', 0, 3, 0, cumVolMl
 		elseif $moodType = 'good':
 			'He throws it in the waste bin and gently caresses your hair afterwards.'
@@ -890,7 +883,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumVaginal':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumvaginal'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The client''s cock twitches several more times, and you feel a warmth spreading inside of you as he pumps <<$cumType>> cum deep inside your pussy.'
+		'The client''s cock twitches several more times, and you feel a warmth spreading inside you as he pumps <<$cumType>> cum deep inside your pussy.'
 		gs 'cum_call', '', 'sauna client', 0, 0, 0, cumVolMl
 		if rand(1,100) >= 70:gs 'dinSex', 'std_trigger'
 	end
@@ -901,16 +894,16 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cumAnal':
 	if useCondom = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumcondomanal.jpg"></center>'
-		'The client''s cock twitches several more times as he cums into the condom inside of your ass.'
-		'He strips the condom from his dick, and you see that it has <<$cumType>> cum in it.'
+		'The client''s cock twitches several more times as he cums into the condom.'
+		'He rips the condom from his dick, and you see that it has <<$cumType>> cum in it.'
 		moodTypeRand += rand (-2, 2)
 		if $moodType = 'bad':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumcondompourface.jpg"></center>'
-			'Suddenly he grabs your head and pours the contents all over your face.'
+			'He then suddenly grabs your head and pours the contents over your face.'
 			gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'sauna client', 0, 3, 0, cumVolMl
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'sauna client', 0, 0, 0, cumVolMl
 		elseif $moodType = 'fairly normal':
-			'He throws it away on the floor, not caring about spilling the fluids around.'
+			'He throws it on the floor, not caring about spilling the fluids around.'
 			gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'sauna client', 0, 3, 0, cumVolMl
 		elseif $moodType = 'good':
 			'He throws it in the waste bin and gently caresses your hair afterwards.'
@@ -918,7 +911,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumAnal':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumanal'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The client''s cock twitches several more times, and you feel a warmth spreading inside of you as he pumps <<$cumType>> cum deep inside your gut.'
+		'The client''s cock twitches several more times, and you feel a warmth spreading inside you as he pumps <<$cumType>> cum deep inside your bowels.'
 		if rand(1,100) >= 70:gs 'dinSex', 'std_trigger'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'sauna client', 0, 0, 0, cumVolMl
 	end
@@ -930,9 +923,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cumFace':
 	facial += 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumface'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if useCondom = 1:
-		'The client strips the condom from his dick and blows <<$cumType>> cum all over your face.'
+		'The client rips the condom from his dick and <<$cumType>> cum splatters all over your face.'
 	else
-		'The client finishes himself off and blows <<$cumType>> cum all over your face.'
+		'The client finishes himself off and <<$cumType>> cum splatters all over your face.'
 	end
 	gs 'cum_call', 'face', 0, 0, 0, cumVolMl
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -942,9 +935,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cumMouth':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cummouth'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if useCondom = 1:
-		'The client strips the condom from his dick and shoots <<$cumType>> cum inside your mouth.'
+		'The client rips the condom from his dick and shoots <<$cumType>> cum inside your mouth.'
 	else
-		'The client stuffs his dick back inside your mouth, and as you suck it, he shoots <<$cumType>> cum inside your mouth.'
+		'The client stuffs his dick back inside your mouth and shoots <<$cumType>> cum into your throat.'
 	end
 	if rand(1,100) >= 70:gs 'dinSex', 'std_trigger_oral'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0, 0, 0, cumVolMl
@@ -955,9 +948,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cumBelly':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumbelly'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if useCondom = 1:
-		'The client strips the condom from his dick and shoots <<$cumType>> cum all over your belly.'
+		'The client rips the condom from his dick and <<$cumType>> cum splatters all over your belly.'
 	else
-		'The client finishes himself off and shoots <<$cumType>> cum all over your belly.'
+		'The client finishes himself off and <<$cumType>> cum splatters all over your belly.'
 	end
 	gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 0, 0, 0, cumVolMl
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -966,9 +959,9 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cumTits':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumtits'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You kneel down in front of him, raising your breasts higher for him to shoot his cum on them.'
+	'You kneel down in front of him, raising your breasts higher for him to shoot his load on them.'
 	if useCondom = 1:
-		'The client strips the condom from his dick and shoots <<$cumType>> cum all over your tits.'
+		'The client rips the condom from his dick and shoots <<$cumType>> cum all over your tits.'
 	else
 		'The client finishes himself off and shoots <<$cumType>> cum all over your tits.'
 	end
@@ -981,10 +974,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bdsmclient':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/bdsm1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re brought into one the private sauna rooms where they tell you that today you''ll be performing a different task than your regular routine.'
-	'As you stand in the sauna looking around you see some ropes hanging by a bench. Your body tenses as you come to the realization that the ropes are there for you.'
-	'"Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. This client is only somewhat kinky he won''t hurt you." they assure you as they make you sit on the bench and tie you up.'
-	'"Just one last thing." they say as they put a paper bag over your head. They leave the room as you sit there in silence.'
+	'You''re brought into one of the private sauna rooms where they tell you that today you''ll be performing a different task than your regular routine.'
+	'You look around and see some ropes hanging by a bench. Your body tenses as you come to the realization that the ropes are for you...'
+	'"Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. This client is only somewhat kinky, so he won''t hurt you." they assure you as they make you sit on the bench and tie you up.'
+	'"Just one last thing." they say as they put a paper bag over your head. They leave the room as you sit in silence.'
 	act 'Sit and wait':
 		cla
 		*clr
@@ -993,9 +986,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bdsmclient':
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/bdsm2.jpg"></center>'
-		'The ropes are chaffing, you''re uncomfortable and it takes a while until you hear someone open the door. You hear some heavy steps come towards you but you can''t see anything because of the bag.'
-		'"Let me help you out girl." you hear a deep voice say as he removes the paper bag from your head, you flinch as you see he''s wearing a mask over his head to keep anonymous.'
-		'The man tells you to relax and that he doesn''t want to fuck you but only to watch you squirm as you''re tied.'
+		'The ropes are chaffing, you''re uncomfortable and it feels like an eternity until you hear someone open the door. You hear some heavy steps come towards you but you can''t see anything.'
+		'"Let me help you there." you hear a deep voice say as he removes the bag from your head. You flinch as you see he''s wearing a mask over his head.'
+		'The man tells you to relax and that he doesn''t want to fuck you, only watch you squirm.'
 		act 'Squirm':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -1003,20 +996,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bdsmclient':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/bdsm3.jpg"></center>'
 			'Not wanting to upset the patron you begin acting as you''re fighting to get loose, grunting and moaning.'
-			'"Good good." the man says as he drops his pants and begins touching his little cock, it''s quite clear why you needn''t have worried about getting fucked by this guy.'
-			'You do this for some time while the man begins touching himself. He''s getting off at having all this control. All of a sudden he stops touching himself and also commands you to stop, he walks over to the door and whispers something to the goons standing outside the door.'
+			'"Good good." the man says as he drops his pants and begins touching his little cock. It''s quite clear why you needn''t have worried about getting fucked by this guy.'
+			'You do this for some time while the man begins touching himself. This continues for a few minutes until he suddenly stops touching himself and also commands you to stop. He walks over to the door and whispers something to the men standing outside.'
 			act 'Stand up':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/bdsm4.jpg"></center>'
-				'The goons quickly enter the room, grab hold of you and stand you up. "How do you want her?" they ask.'
-				'The man stands for a moment pondering what to do next, "Tie her up like she is I want to observe her while standing." the voice behind the mask commands.'
-				'The goons are pretty quick and they tie your hands, mid-section and legs so you can''t move. They leave as soon as they''re done while the man begins touching his cock once again.'
+				'The men quickly enter the room, grab hold of you and stand you up. "How do you want her?"'
+				'The man stands pondering what to do next. "Tie her up like she is. I want to observe her while standing." the voice behind the mask commands.'
+				'The men are pretty quick and tie your hands, mid-section and legs so you can''t move. They leave as soon as they''re done while the man begins touching his cock once again.'
 				'"You have a great body girl, has anyone told you that?" he asks as you try to move your body to a comfortable position.'
 				'"That''s right, squirm you little whore. I know you''re uncomfortable. How does it feel having someone else in control of your fate?"'
-				'By now you''re getting worried about what the man is really up to.'
+				'You''re starting to worry about what his intentions actually are.'
 				act 'On all fours':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -1024,20 +1017,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bdsmclient':
 					minut += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/bdsm5.jpg"></center>'
-					'All of a sudden the man claps his hands and the goons run inside the room again. "I want to see her from behind. And be sure to tie her up nicely, no weak ass shit, like the last time."'
-					'They quickly finish up leaving you at the mercy of the man. "Like I said, you don''t have to worry I won''t fuck you. For me it''s enough to feel in control to get me off."'
-					'You nod as you''re too afraid to what he might be up to. "Now girl. Spread your legs I want to see your beautiful pussy lips."'
-					'You try to spread as much as you can but the ropes are preventing you and as harder you''re trying the more you feel the pain from the ropes. You let desperate cry as he starts grunting.'
+					'The man claps his hands and the men run inside the room again. "I want to see her from behind. And be sure to tie her up nicely, no weak ass shit like the last time."'
+					'They quickly finish up, leaving you at the mercy of the man. "Like I said, you don''t have to worry. I won''t fuck you. To be in control is enough for me."'
+					'You nod as you''re too afraid to speak. "Now spread your legs. I want to see your beautiful pussy lips."'
+					'You try to spread your legs as much as you can, but the ropes are preventing you and the harder you try, the more painfully the ropes dig into you. You let out a desperate cry as he starts grunting.'
 					act 'On your back':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						gs 'pain', 4, 'labia', 'pinch'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/bdsm6.jpg"></center>'
-						'"You little minx do you want me to cum this quickly? No, no, we''re not done yet." He once again calls in the goons and they lay you on the back, spread your legs and tie you so that your pussy is wide open, at the same time they tie your hands above the head.'
-						'"Good job fellas." the man praises them. "Did you bring what I asked for?"'
-						'As he says that you get this bad feeling and your stomach starts churning. <i>"What is he up to now?"</i> you wonder. The goons hand over a brown bag and leave the room.'
-						'The man steps close to you and without saying anything he takes out a number of pins and clips them along each side of your vaginal opening, on the outer labia. The pinching hurts but at the same time it''s making you a bit aroused.'
-						'"Feels great right? I know how to please women." the man confidently says. You answer by a louder moan. That''s enough of an answer for him as he starts tugging at his cock and it doesn''t take long before he cums on the floor. He quickly gets dressed, leaving you laying there still tied up.'
+						'"You little minx! Do you want me to cum this quickly? No no, we''re not done just yet." He once again calls in the men and they lie you on your back, spread your legs and tie you tightly. They also tie your hands above your head.'
+						'"Excellent work. Did you bring what I asked for?" the man asks.'
+						'Your stomach starts churning as you listen. The men hand over a brown bag and leave the room.'
+						'The man walks up to you and without saying anything, takes out a number of pins and clips them along your labia. The pinching hurts, but is arousing at the same time.'
+						'"Feels great, right? I know how to please women." the man confidently says. You answer with a loud moan. That''s enough for him as he starts tugging at his cock and it doesn''t take long before he cums on the floor. He quickly gets dressed, leaving you tied up.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 15, 'prostitution', 'bound', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish':
@@ -1049,10 +1042,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bdsmclient':
 							if workDolg > 0:
 							    workDolg -= payment
 								'The client leaves the room and pays the sauna <<payment>> <b>₽</b> for your services.'
-								'His goons untie you and have you slowly turn around so the madam can be sure you are unmarked, then leave.'
+								'The men untie you and have you slowly turn around so the madam can be sure you are unmarked, then leave.'
 							else
 								money += payment
-								'The client counts the money out as his goons untie you. He hands you <<payment>> <b>₽</b> for your services.'
+								'The client counts the money out as his men untie you. He hands you <<payment>> <b>₽</b> for your services.'
 							end
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1084,7 +1077,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clientLeave':
 
 	if workDolg > 0:
 		workDolg -= payment
-		'Having finished with you, the client gets dressed, leaves the room, and pays the sauna <<payment>> <b>₽</b> for your services.'
+		'Having finished with you, the client gets dressed, leaves the room and pays the sauna <<payment>> <b>₽</b> for your services.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1092,14 +1085,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clientLeave':
 		act 'Head back to the main area':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
 	elseif nichTarSauna = 1:
 		nichTarSaunaPay += payment
-		'Having finished with you, the client gets dressed, leaves the room, and pays the sauna <<payment>> <b>₽</b> for your services. This money will be collected by Taras later.'
+		'Having finished with you, the client gets dressed, leaves the room and pays the sauna <<payment>> <b>₽</b> for your services. This money will be collected by Taras later.'
 		'You earned <<nichTarSaunaPay>> <b>₽</b> for Taras.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Head back to the main area':gt 'city_saunawhore', 'saunawork'
 	else
 		money += payment
-		'Having finished with you, the client gets dressed, takes his wallet and hands you <<payment>> <b>₽</b>.'
+		'Having finished with you, the client gets dressed, takes his wallet out and hands you <<payment>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 373 - 115
locations/flash.qsrc

@@ -3,12 +3,14 @@
 !!Centralised flashing location
 !!For flashing events only, do not use for exposure leading to sex
 !!To be used in the following format
-!!gs 'flash', '[type]', '[location]', [time]
+!!gs 'flash', '[type]', '[location]', [time], [option]
 !![time] in minutes, default is 0
 !!Available options as follows
 !![type] - bra, butt, full, panties, pussy, tits
 !![location] - indoors, outdoors
-!!eg. gs 'flash', 'tits', 'outdoors', 15
+!![option] - Noting or 0 will clear the screen and give a standard text and randome picture, if you set $flash_image to image string this image will be used instead of a random one. 
+!! - 1 will only advance time and set the diferent variables but not clear the screen, print text or picture. - 2 will add the variabels an advance time and set the random picture, but not clear screen and print text. 
+!!eg. gs 'flash', 'tits', 'outdoors', 15, 0
 !!There is no continue action so you must add this as required
 !!You should add checks for underwear before allowing the player to flash them but a non-event contingency is included
 
@@ -55,208 +57,464 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flashtotals':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bra':
-	*clr
 	if Exhibitionist_lvl < 1 or pcs_inhib < 40: gs 'flash', 'exhibitionism', 1
 	gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', ARGS[2]
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'flash', 'flashtotals'
-	if PCloSkirt > 0:
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/bra/' + rand(1,dress_ind_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	if ARGS[3] < 1:
+		*clr
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/bra/' + rand(1,dress_ind_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/bra/' + rand(1,dress_out_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/bra/' + rand(1,dress_out_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/bra/' + rand(1,pants_ind_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/bra/' + rand(1,pants_out_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		end
-	else
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/bra/' + rand(1,pants_ind_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	elseif ARGS[3] = 2:
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/bra/' + rand(1,dress_ind_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/bra/' + rand(1,dress_out_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/bra/' + rand(1,pants_out_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bra clad breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
-		end
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/bra/' + rand(1,pants_ind_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/bra/' + rand(1,pants_out_bra) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
+		end	
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'tits':
-	*clr
 	gs 'flash', 'exhibitionism', 1
 	gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', ARGS[2]
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'flash', 'flashtotals'
-	if PCloSkirt > 0:
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/tits/' + rand(1,dress_ind_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	if ARGS[3] < 1:
+		*clr
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/tits/' + rand(1,dress_ind_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/tits/' + rand(1,dress_out_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/tits/' + rand(1,dress_out_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/tits/' + rand(1,pants_ind_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/tits/' + rand(1,pants_out_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		end
-	else
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/tits/' + rand(1,pants_ind_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	elseif ARGS[3] = 2:
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/tits/' + rand(1,dress_ind_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/tits/' + rand(1,dress_out_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/tits/' + rand(1,pants_out_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your top and expose your bare breasts to the world. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your top back down, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
-		end
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/tits/' + rand(1,pants_ind_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/tits/' + rand(1,pants_out_tits) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
+		end	
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'panties':
-	*clr
 	gs 'flash', 'exhibitionism', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', ARGS[2]
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'flash', 'flashtotals'
-	if PCloSkirt > 0:
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/panty/' + rand(1,dress_ind_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you lift the front of your skirt to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	if ARGS[3] < 1:
+		*clr
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/panty/' + rand(1,dress_ind_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you lift the front of your skirt to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/panty/' + rand(1,dress_out_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you lift the front of your skirt to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/panty/' + rand(1,dress_out_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you lift the front of your skirt to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/panty/' + rand(1,pants_ind_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/panty/' + rand(1,pants_out_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		end
-	else
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/panty/' + rand(1,pants_ind_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	elseif ARGS[3] = 2:
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/panty/' + rand(1,dress_ind_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/panty/' + rand(1,dress_out_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/panty/' + rand(1,pants_out_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
-		end
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/panty/' + rand(1,pants_ind_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/panty/' + rand(1,pants_out_panties) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
+		end	
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy':
-	*clr
 	gs 'flash', 'exhibitionism', 3
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', ARGS[2]
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'flash', 'flashtotals'
-	if PCloSkirt > 0:
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pussy/' + rand(1,dress_ind_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+	if ARGS[3] < 1:
+		*clr
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pussy/' + rand(1,dress_ind_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,dress_ind_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the front of your skirt to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,dress_ind_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pussy/' + rand(1,dress_out_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,dress_out_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the front of your skirt to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
 			end
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the front of your skirt to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
 		else
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pussy/' + rand(1,dress_out_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,dress_out_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
 			end
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the front of your skirt to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
 		end
-	else
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+	elseif ARGS[3] = 2:
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 			end
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
 		else
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pussy/' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pussy/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_pussy_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 			end
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the front of your pants to show off your pussy. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
-		end
+		end	
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'panties_rear':
-	*clr
 	gs 'flash', 'exhibitionism', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', ARGS[2]
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'flash', 'flashtotals'
-	if PCloSkirt > 0:
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,dress_ind_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your skirt to show off your pantied butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	if ARGS[3] < 1:
+		*clr
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,dress_ind_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your skirt to show off your pantied butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,dress_out_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your skirt to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,dress_out_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up your skirt to show off your panties. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back and place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,pants_ind_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your panty clad butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,pants_out_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your panty clad butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		end
-	else
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,pants_ind_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your panty clad butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	elseif ARGS[3] = 2:
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,dress_ind_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,dress_out_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,pants_out_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your panty clad butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
-		end
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,pants_ind_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/pantyrear/' + rand(1,pants_out_pantyrear) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
+		end	
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'butt':
-	*clr
 	gs 'flash', 'exhibitionism', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', ARGS[2]
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'flash', 'flashtotals'
-	if PCloSkirt > 0:
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/butt/' + rand(1,dress_ind_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the back of your skirt to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back in place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	if ARGS[3] < 1:
+		*clr
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/butt/' + rand(1,dress_ind_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the back of your skirt to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back in place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/butt/' + rand(1,dress_out_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the back of your skirt to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back in place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/butt/' + rand(1,dress_out_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull up the back of your skirt to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You lower the skirt back in place, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/butt/' + rand(1,pants_ind_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			else
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/butt/' + rand(1,pants_out_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+			end
 		end
-	else
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/butt/' + rand(1,pants_ind_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
+	elseif ARGS[3] = 2:
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/butt/' + rand(1,dress_ind_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/butt/' + rand(1,dress_out_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
 		else
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/butt/' + rand(1,pants_out_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance around to see who all is in the area, then you pull down the back of your pants to show off your butt. Most people don''t notice but a few do, some smile, others frown or shake their head in disgust. You pull your pants back up, feeling the thrill of excitement running down your spine.'
-		end
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/butt/' + rand(1,pants_ind_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			else
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/butt/' + rand(1,pants_out_butt) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			end
+		end	
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'full':
-	*clr
 	gs 'flash', 'exhibitionism', 3
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', ARGS[2]
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'flash', 'flashtotals'
-	if PCloSkirt > 0:
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/' + rand(1,dress_ind_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+	if ARGS[3] < 1:
+		*clr
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/' + rand(1,dress_ind_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/' + rand(1,dress_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		else
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/' + rand(1,dress_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/' + rand(1,pants_ind_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if $flash_image ! '':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<$flash_image>>.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/' + rand(1,pants_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+					end
+				end
+				'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		end
-	else
-		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/' + rand(1,pants_ind_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+	elseif ARGS[3] = 2:
+		if PCloSkirt > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/' + rand(1,dress_ind_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/' + rand(1,dress_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		else
-			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/' + rand(1,pants_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/' + rand(1,pants_ind_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end	
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				if pcs_pubes <= 20:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/' + rand(1,pants_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
+				end
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 22 - 22
locations/pav_disco.qsrc

@@ -321,34 +321,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
 				exit
 			end
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/wallflower.jpg"></center>'
 			if alko > 0:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/wallflower.jpg"></center>'
-			elseif alko = 1:
+				if alko = 1:
 					'You''re buzzed and stand against the wall, watching the others dance.'
-			elseif alko < 4:
+				elseif alko < 4:
 					'You''re tipsy and stand against the wall, watching the others dance.'
-			elseif alko < 6:
-				if StoryLine = 1 and meynoldQW >= 2 and rand(1,10) = 1: 
-					gt 'pav_disco', 'katja_too_drunk'
-				elseif npc_rel['A25'] >= 50 and rand(1,10) = 1:
-					gt 'pav_disco', 'sonia_too_drunk' 
-				elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and rand(1,10) = 1: 
-					gt 'pav_disco', 'anushka_too_drunk'
-				else
-					'You''re pretty drunk and stand against the wall, for support, as you watch the others dance.'
-				end	
-			elseif alko < 10:
-				if StoryLine = 1 and meynoldQW >= 2 and rand(1,5) = 1: 
-					gt 'pav_disco', 'katja_too_drunk'
-				elseif npc_rel['A25'] >= 50 and rand(1,7) = 1:
-					gt 'pav_disco', 'sonia_too_drunk' 
-				elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and rand(1,7) = 1: 
-					gt 'pav_disco', 'anushka_too_drunk'
+				elseif alko < 6:
+					if StoryLine = 1 and meynoldQW >= 2 and rand(1,10) = 1: 
+						gt 'pav_disco', 'katja_too_drunk'
+					elseif npc_rel['A25'] >= 50 and rand(1,10) = 1:
+						gt 'pav_disco', 'sonia_too_drunk' 
+					elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and rand(1,10) = 1: 
+						gt 'pav_disco', 'anushka_too_drunk'
+					else
+						'You''re pretty drunk and stand against the wall, for support, as you watch the others dance.'
+					end	
 				else
-					'You''re too drunk to dance and you lean against the wall for support to stop yourself from falling.'
+					if StoryLine = 1 and meynoldQW >= 2 and rand(1,5) = 1: 
+						gt 'pav_disco', 'katja_too_drunk'
+					elseif npc_rel['A25'] >= 50 and rand(1,7) = 1:
+						gt 'pav_disco', 'sonia_too_drunk' 
+					elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and rand(1,7) = 1: 
+						gt 'pav_disco', 'anushka_too_drunk'
+					else
+						'You''re too drunk to dance and you lean against the wall for support to stop yourself from falling.'
+					end
 				end
 			else
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/wallflower.jpg"></center>'
 				'You are standing next to the wall while watching the others dance.'
 			end
 			if alko < 6:

+ 72 - 0
locations/pav_disco_coolkids.qsrc

@@ -399,24 +399,47 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 	'You start dancing with him. He''s a pretty good dancer and you both enjoy dancing together for a while.'
 	act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
 	act 'Keep dancing':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 15
+		pcs_stam -= 5
+		gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+		fat -= 1
+		danc_exp += 1
+		frost = 0
+		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/dimka_dance.jpg"></center>'
 		'You continue dancing, having fun and enjoying yourself so much that you really don''t care about those that might be watching. It really is great fun.'
 		act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
 		act 'Keep dancing':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
+			pcs_stam -= 5
+			gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+			fat -= 1
+			danc_exp += 1
+			frost = 0
+			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance1.jpg"></center>'
 			'The two of you dance energetically, really getting into the beat of the music. You''re having a lot of fun dancing with Dimka and you think he''s having fun dancing with you too.'
 			act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
 			act 'Keep dancing':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
+				pcs_stam -= 5
+				gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+				fat -= 1
+				danc_exp += 1
+				frost = 0
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance2.jpg"></center>'
 				'He pulls you in close and you are soon dancing with your face only a few inches from his. You feel his hand slide down your back to just above your ass as you keep dancing together before a girl comes over and asks him to dance. She is very pretty and he looks her over and grins before looking back to you. "Sorry, but I think it''s this lovely lady''s turn." He turns and starts dancing with her, leaving you to walk off the dance floor.'
 				act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
@@ -459,6 +482,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_pay':
 	act 'Do a line':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'drugs', 'cocaine'
+		minut += 10
+		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/drugs/lineschool.jpg"></center>'
 		'You leave the disco and walk down the hall, looking into rooms until you spot one that''s unlocked and empty. You glance around and when no one is looking, you duck inside and rush over to a table. You pour out a line and quickly snort it, immediately feeling the sensation of relief and pleasure rushing through your body. You spend a few moments in a stupor before heading back to the disco.'
 		act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
@@ -508,6 +533,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_sex':
 						act 'Go back to the disco': gt 'pav_disco'
 						act 'Do a line':
 							*clr & cla
+							minut += 10
+							gs 'stat'
 							gs 'drugs', 'cocaine'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/drugs/lineschool.jpg"></center>'
 							'You get up and rush over to a table. You pour out a line and quickly snort it, immediately feeling the sensation of relief and pleasure rushing through your body. You spend a few moments in a stupor before heading back to the disco.'
@@ -626,6 +653,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/marcus_dance.jpg"></center>'
 	'You start dancing with him. He''s a pretty good dancer and you both enjoy dancing together for a while.'
@@ -709,6 +741,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'andrey_stasya':
 				act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
 				act 'Keep dancing with them':
 					*clr & cla
+					pcs_stam -= 5
+					gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+					fat -= 1
+					danc_exp += 1
+					frost = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/andrey_stasya_dance2.jpg"></center>'
 					if hotcat >= 6 and Marcus_sextype >= 1:
@@ -930,6 +967,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mefodiy_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 	'Mefodiy grabs you by the hand and leads you right into the middle of the dance floor. He''s really good, and confident enough to match your goofiest moves. He quickly adapts to your moves, making you look far better at dancing than you are.'
@@ -1101,6 +1143,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'igor_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/igor_dance.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Igor move out onto the dance floor and start dancing together. He seems to be really enjoying himself, but you can''t help but notice that he sways his hips around more than guys normally do.'
@@ -1176,6 +1223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A22', 'like'
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big22.jpg"></center>'
 	'You see Bella hanging out with the other cool kids.'
 	if grupTipe = 5:
@@ -1220,6 +1268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vicky':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A15', 'like'
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big15.jpg"></center>'
 	'You see Vicky hanging out with the other cool kids.'
 	if grupTipe = 5:
@@ -1261,6 +1310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inna':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A17', 'like'
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big17.jpg"></center>'
 	'You see Irina hanging out with the other cool kids.'
 	if grupTipe = 5:
@@ -1298,6 +1348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
+	gs 'stat'
 	if rand(1,4) <= 3 and meynoldQW = 2: 
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Disco</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_dance1_1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1340,6 +1391,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'katja_dance':
 	minut += 15
 	menu_off = 1
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	*clr & cla
 	dancerand = rand(1,5)
@@ -1451,6 +1507,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lizaveta':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A140', 'like'
+	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big140.jpg"></center>'
 	'You see Lizaveta hanging out with the other cool kids.'
 	if grupTipe = 5:
@@ -1570,6 +1627,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sonia_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/sonia_sveta_dance.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Sonia move out onto the dance floor and start dancing together. She seems to be really enjoying herself, laughing and dancing with lots of energy and doesn''t seem to care what anyone thinks. She just wants to have fun.'
@@ -1695,6 +1757,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sonia_outcast_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/sonia_outcast_dance3.jpg"></center>'
 	if npc_rel['A25'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 5:
@@ -1862,6 +1929,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'natasha_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/natasha_sveta_dance.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Natasha move out onto the dance floor and start dancing together. She seems to be really enjoying herself, laughing and dancing with lots of energy and doesn''t seem to care what anyone thinks. She just wants to have fun.'

+ 25 - 0
locations/pav_disco_gopniks.qsrc

@@ -578,6 +578,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/radomir_dance1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Radomir takes you out onto the dance floor and starts dancing with you. He''s a pretty good dancer and seems very confident as he moves around the dance floor. He soon dances around behind you and you feel him moving in closer behind you.'
@@ -1031,6 +1036,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/lavrenti_dance1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Lavrenti leads you out onto the dance floor and you start dancing together. He''s a very good dancer and you can''t help but wonder if he''s had dance lessons at some point in his life. The two of you enjoy your time dancing together.'
@@ -1319,6 +1329,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lena_lera_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/lena_lera_dance2.jpg"></center>'
 	'The three of you dance together. Lena seems interested in getting the boys attention by any means possible, even if it means dancing close with you or Lera and even trading a few kisses with Lera when some boys start paying attention. Lera on the other hand seems mostly interested in dancing with Lena and happily trades kisses with her. They don''t exclude you from dancing with them, but you don''t feel like you belong either.'
@@ -1468,6 +1483,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/anushka_dance2.jpg"></center>'
 	'The two of you dance together, ignoring the boys around you. Most of them eventually get the hint and leave you to dance in peace, but some other guys will come over and try their luck instead. You ignore them as well and enjoy dancing together.'
@@ -1724,6 +1744,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'alyona_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/alyona_dance2.jpg"></center>'
 	'The two of you dance together, but she doesn''t seem to be aware that you''re there most of the time and just dances like she''s the only one on the dance floor. She doesn''t seem to care though.'

+ 60 - 0
locations/pav_disco_jocks.qsrc

@@ -121,6 +121,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/lazar_dance1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Lazar start dancing together. He''s a very good dancer for a boy, likely due to his natural athletic talents and well toned body. He seems to be enjoying dancing with you as much as you like dancing with him. Several songs go by as the two of you keep dancing - he seems to have endless endurance.'
@@ -299,6 +304,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/school_kids/svyatoslav_dance2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Svyatoslav start dancing. He''s a decent dancer who lacks the rhythm of some of the other boys, but makes up for in enthusiasm. The two of you dance away, not caring what the others think.'
@@ -514,18 +524,33 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 2
+	frost = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 	'You go out onto the dance floor and start dancing with Albina.'
 	act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
 	act 'Keep dancing':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 15
+		pcs_stam -= 5
+		gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+		fat -= 1
+		danc_exp += 2
+		frost = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 		'You continue dancing with Albina, and you both seem to be enjoying yourselves. Albina is dancing in an ever increasingly erotic manner. She sways her hips and wiggles her ass for all to see, and seems to enjoy the attention that comes with being the best dancer present.'
 		act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
 		act 'Keep dancing':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
+			pcs_stam -= 5
+			gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+			fat -= 1
+			danc_exp += 2
+			frost = 0	
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 			if npc_sex['A23'] >= 1:
 				'You continue to dance with Albina, who smiles at you and pulls you in closer into a seductive dance. Her tight fitting dress is accenting her curves rather well, and you find your hands roaming over her body as she erotically dances in front of you, her ass slowly grinding against you. She seemingly doesn''t care about you feeling her up and encourages you to continue.'
@@ -536,6 +561,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_dance':
 			act 'Keep dancing':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
+				pcs_stam -= 5
+				gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+				fat -= 1
+				danc_exp += 2
+				frost = 0
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 				if npc_sex['A23'] >= 1:
 					'When the song ends, Albina looks back at you and winks. "That was hot <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I need to go and sit down for a bit and have a drink." She excuses herself and walks away with a seductive sway in her hips directed at you, leaving you standing in the middle of the dance floor feeling a little flustered.'
@@ -719,6 +749,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_dance':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance9.jpg"></center>'
 			'The two of you start dancing, separately at first, before she starts sliding closer to you. Getting behind you, she wraps an arm around your waist and begins grinding her crotch up against your ass. Your skirt slides up enough to show your bare pussy and you desperately hope no one is paying enough attention to notice.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'
+			pcs_stam -= 5
+			gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+			fat -= 1
+			danc_exp += 1
+			frost = 0
 			inhib_exp += 1
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 15
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -729,6 +764,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_dance':
 			act 'Keep dancing':
 				*clr & cla
 				inhib_exp += 2
+				pcs_stam -= 5
+				gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+				fat -= 1
+				danc_exp += 1
+				frost = 0
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club_dance9.jpg"></center>'
@@ -743,6 +783,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_dance':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 15
+			pcs_stam -= 5
+			gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+			fat -= 1
+			danc_exp += 1
+			frost = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'The two of you start dancing, separately at first, before she starts sliding closer to you. Getting behind you, she wraps an arm around your waist and begins grinding her crotch up against your ass. You dance together like this for a while.'
 			act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_coolkids', 'classmates'
@@ -761,6 +806,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_dance':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 		minut += 15
+		pcs_stam -= 5
+		gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+		fat -= 1
+		danc_exp += 1
+		frost = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2:
 			inhib_exp += 1
@@ -881,6 +931,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2: inhib_exp += 1
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 	'Dancing with her, you notice several guys hungrily eyeing the two of you. She doesn''t seem to be paying attention though, and you try not to think about it yourself and let loose a little.'
@@ -1015,6 +1070,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lina_dance':
 	*clr & cla
 	if $pantyworntype = 'none' and PCloSkirt > 2: inhib_exp += 1
 	minut += 15
+	pcs_stam -= 5
+	gs 'sweat', 'add', 3
+	fat -= 1
+	danc_exp += 1
+	frost = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/club.jpg"></center>'
 	'You spend some time dancing with Lina. She seems to enjoy dancing, her face lit in a bright smile, even laughing when one of you tries a risky dance move.'

+ 10 - 10
locations/preCUST.qsrc

@@ -477,8 +477,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 		gm_outfits[55] = 1
 		gm_outfits_h[55] = 100
 		gm_outfits_b[55] = pcs_hips
-		danilovich_outfits[43] = 1
-		danilovich_outfits_h[43] = 100
+		danilovich_outfits[102] = 1
+		danilovich_outfits_h[102] = 100
 		gm_dress[7] = 1
 		gm_dress_h[7] = 100
 		gm_dress_b[7] = pcs_hips
@@ -488,8 +488,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 		gm_outfits[58] = 1
 		gm_outfits_h[58] = 100
 		gm_outfits_b[58] = pcs_hips
-		danilovich_outfits[1] = 1
-		danilovich_outfits_h[1] = 100
+		danilovich_outfits[87] = 1
+		danilovich_outfits_h[87] = 100
 		gm_dress[39] = 1
 		gm_dress_h[39] = 100
 		gm_dress_b[39] = pcs_hips
@@ -499,8 +499,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 		gm_outfits[91] = 1
 		gm_outfits_h[91] = 100
 		gm_outfits_b[91] = pcs_hips
-		danilovich_outfits[48] = 1
-		danilovich_outfits_h[48] = 100
+		danilovich_outfits[96] = 1
+		danilovich_outfits_h[96] = 100
 		gm_dress[57] = 1
 		gm_dress_h[57] = 100
 		gm_dress_b[57] = pcs_hips
@@ -510,8 +510,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 		gm_outfits[95] = 1
 		gm_outfits_h[95] = 100
 		gm_outfits_b[95] = pcs_hips
-		danilovich_outfits[40] = 1
-		danilovich_outfits_h[40] = 100
+		danilovich_outfits[48] = 1
+		danilovich_outfits_h[48] = 100
 		gm_dress[63] = 1
 		gm_dress_h[63] = 100
 		gm_dress_b[63] = pcs_hips
@@ -543,8 +543,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 		gm_outfits[145] = 1
 		gm_outfits_h[145] = 100
 		gm_outfits_b[145] = pcs_hips
-		danilovich_outfits[143] = 1
-		danilovich_outfits_h[143] = 100
+		danilovich_outfits[17] = 1
+		danilovich_outfits_h[17] = 100
 		gm_dress[123] = 1
 		gm_dress_h[123] = 100
 		gm_dress_b[123] = pcs_hips

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