[text edits] Various typos or wrong terms spotted by yoyodyne

locations/fight.qsrc

@@ -174,23 +174,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'applyDamage':
 		!!If the target has clones, destroy one
 		if <<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_clone[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] > 0:
 			<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_clone[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] -= 1
-			""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses a clone.""
+			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> lose a clone.""
+			else
+				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses a clone.""
+			end
 		!!if the target has enough shields to mitigate, remove some shields
 		elseif <<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] >= <<fightAppDam['Damage']>>:
 			<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] -= <<fightAppDam['Damage']>>
-			""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses <<fightAppDam['Damage']>> defense.""
+			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> lose <<fightAppDam['Damage']>> defense.""
+			else
+				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses <<fightAppDam['Damage']>> defense.""
+			end
 		!!otherwise remove shields to 0 and the remainder comes from health
 		else
 			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] > 0:
 				<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] = 0
-				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> losses <<fightAppDam['Shield']>> defense.""
+				if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+					""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> losse <<fightAppDam['Shield']>> defense.""
+				else
+					""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> losses <<fightAppDam['Shield']>> defense.""
+				end
 			end
 			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_health[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] > <<fightAppDam['OverShieldDamage']>>:
 				<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_health[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] -= <<fightAppDam['OverShieldDamage']>>
 			else
 				<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_health[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] = 0
 			end
-			""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses <<fightAppDam['OverShieldDamage']>> health.""
+			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> lose <<fightAppDam['OverShieldDamage']>> health.""
+			else
+				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses <<fightAppDam['OverShieldDamage']>> health.""
+			end
 		end
 	"
 	killvar '$fightAppDam'

locations/lug.qsrc

@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'prut2':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'It would be a good place for skinny dipping but you''re too worry about what people would think to do such a thing.'
+			'It would be a good place for skinny dipping but you''re too worried about what people would think to do such a thing.'
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/mirror.qsrc

@@ -168,7 +168,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 		'<<$pcs_apprnc>>'
 		'<<$hair>>'
-		'<<$pcs_makeup>>. Your<<$pc_desc[''eye size'']>> eyes are <<$pc_desc[''eye colour'']>> <<$pc_desc[''eyelashes'']>>.<<$pc_descWordy[''vision'']>>.'
+		'<<$pcs_makeup>>. Your<<$pc_desc[''eye size'']>> eyes are <<$pc_desc[''eye colour'']>> <<$pc_desc[''eyelashes'']>>.'
+		if glass > 0: 'You are wearing <<$pc_descWordy[''vision'']>>.'
 		'You have <<$pcs_lipbalm>>  <<$pc_desc[''lip size'']>> lips.'
 		'<<$skin>>'
 

locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -950,7 +950,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_1':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/eatmelera.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head no. "No I don''t think so, I wouldn''t win so no reason for me to make that bet." You reach for another beer but Lera pulls it away before you can grab it. Then he stands up and pulls her pants down enough to show off her clit. "If you want another beer you have to eat me <<$pcs_nickname>>." She says with a smirk. The other girls perk up at this and seem interested in what you''re going to do.'
+						'You shake your head no. "No I don''t think so, I wouldn''t win so no reason for me to make that bet." You reach for another beer but Lera pulls it away before you can grab it. Then she stands up and pulls her pants down enough to show off her clit. "If you want another beer you have to eat me <<$pcs_nickname>>." She says with a smirk. The other girls perk up at this and seem interested in what you''re going to do.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':