More city files improved

locations/city_library.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ $downlibrary['BookStudy'] = {
 	menu_off = 1
 	if blizoruk = 500 or glassqw = 1:
 		glassqw = 1
-		msg'	The text blurs across the page, it seems you have poor eyesight. Maybe you should visit an ophthalmologists.'&gt $curloc
+		msg'	The text blurs across the page. It seems you have poor eyesight. Maybe you should visit an ophthalmologists?'&gt $curloc
 	end
 	if pcs_nerd > 0:
 		lastread = totminut
@@ -43,45 +43,46 @@ $downlibrary['BookStudy'] = {
 
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">National Library of Russia</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/library/downlibint.jpg"></center>'
-'A huge library with thousands upon thousands of books. You could spend years here and you probably still wouldn''t be able to read it all.'
+'A huge library with thousands upon thousands of books. You could spend years in here and probably still wouldn''t be able to read it all.'
 
-act 'Leave the library': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
+act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
-	act 'Read a science book (1:00)':
+	act 'Read a science book':
 		intel_exp += 4 + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 
 		dynamic $downlibrary['BookStudy'], ''
 
-		'	You read the book for an hour trying to make sense of all clever propositions and understand the subject of the description.'
+		'You read a science book for an hour, trying to make sense of and understand the subject matter.'
 
 		act 'Put the book down':gt $curloc
 	end
 
-	act 'Read an entertaining book (1:00)':
+	act 'Read an entertaining book':
 		pcs_mood = 100
 
 		dynamic $downlibrary['BookStudy'], ''
 
-		'	You read an adventure fiction for an hour.'
+		'You read an adventure book for an hour.'
 
 		act 'Put the book down':gt $curloc
 	end
 
-	act 'Read the collected works of Leo Tolstoy (1:00)':
-			dynamic $downlibrary['BookStudy'], 'sprt'
-
-		'	You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, no one denies this, but he wrote exceptionally wordily.'
+	act 'Read the collected works of Leo Tolstoy':
+	
+		dynamic $downlibrary['BookStudy'], 'sprt'
+      
+		'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, but his works are certainly exhaustive.'
 
 		act 'Put the book down':gt $curloc
 	end
 	if MagicLibrary = 1:
-		act 'Read in magic books':
+		act 'Read magic books':
 			dynamic $downlibrary['BookStudy'], 'splcstng'
 
-			'	You pick out one of the magic books you can actually read and sit down with it.'
+			'You pick out one of the magic books you can actually read and sit down with it.'
 			'Not only is the subject matter complex and mostly a mystery to you, but the descriptions and explanations are unnecessarily wordy, as if the writer had something to prove.'
-			'After about an hour, you decide to take a break from it and, instead, test your memory. You don''t remember much, but you understand magic a tiny bit better than before nonetheless.'
+			'After about an hour, you decide to take a break from it and instead test your memory. You don''t remember much, but you understand magic a little better than before.'
 
 			! Find Researchable Spells
 			if func('spellList','numAvailableSpells','librarySpells') > 0:
@@ -91,7 +92,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 					*pl 'You have come across a lead on a new spell.'
 				end
 			else
-				'There don''t seem to be any more spells to learn here, but perhaps I can still improve my skills in the ones that I''ve already found.'
+				'There doesn''t seem to be any more spells to learn here, but you can still improve your skills in the ones that you''ve already found.'
 			end
 
 			!!Adding to the Actions opportunity to practice spells MC found

locations/city_marketsex.qsrc

@@ -23,15 +23,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 	horand = rand(1, 100)
 	gbrand = rand(1, 100)
 	
-	'You go into a large warehouse and with several adjoined dwellings, where he pulls out a bottle of vodka and a snack.'
+	'You enter a large warehouse, where he pulls out a bottle of vodka and a snack.'
 
-	act 'Drink with Artur':
+	act 'Drink with Arthur':
 		cla
 		minut += 15
 		
-		'Arthur goes to a table, puts the bottle of vodka on it and invites you to sit on a chair.'
-		'You drink together with the owner, he tells you about a few funny adventures he has had. He keeps refilling your glass and encouraging you to keep drinking.'
-        'Not wanting to be rude and you are having fun, you keep drinking. Once you start to feel the effects of the booze, he pulls you close to him and gives you a big long hug. Then he begins to fondle your breasts, with one hand, while the other squeezes your ass.'
+		'Arthur walks over to a table, places the bottle of vodka on it and invites you to sit on a chair.'
+		'You drink together together and he tells you about a few funny adventures he has had. He keeps refilling your glass and encouraging you to keep drinking.'
+        'Not wanting to be rude, you keep drinking. Once you start feeling tipsy, he pulls you in close and gives you a hug before he begins to fondle your breasts and squeeze your ass.'
 
 		act 'Let him undress you':
 			cla
@@ -43,10 +43,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 			spafinloc = 4
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/doggy/rinsex.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are relaxed and start hugging your host in response. Once you return his hug, he starts undresses you'
-			'Once he has taken all your clothes off, he lays you down on your stomach. Then spreads your legs a little and your buttocks, until he has a clear view and easy access to your pussy.'
-			'He moves up close, you can feel the tip of his cock rubbing against the lips of your pussy. Once your pussy starts to get wet and lubricate the tip of his dick, he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your pussy.'
-			'He is a little slow and gentle at first but quickly starts to pick up speed, pounding you hard and deep. Periodically slapping your ass, first one cheek then the other.'
+			'You feel relaxed and start hugging him back in response. Once you return his hug, he starts undressing you.'
+			'Once he has taken all your clothes off, he lies you down on your stomach, then spreads your legs and buttocks until he has a clear view and easy access to your pussy.'
+			'He moves up close and you feel the tip of his cock rubbing against your pussy lips. Once your pussy starts to get wet and lubricates the tip of his dick, he slides it inside you.'
+			'He is slow and gentle at first, but quickly starts to pick up speed, pounding you hard and deep while periodically slapping your ass cheeks in turn.'
 
 			if horand > pcs_horny:
 				$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -61,8 +61,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 				
 			if (gbrand < 95 and palevorin = 1) or palevorin > 1:
 				money += 2000
-				'After some time, he pulls out of you and you feel hot wet spurts of cum landing all over your ass and lower back. Once he is done cumming he wipes his dick off on your ass and gets off you.'
-				'As you get dressed he writes you a premium for the amount of 2,000 <b>₽</b> and leaving it on the table as he leaves.'
+				'After some time, he pulls out and you feel spurts of warm cum splattering across your ass and lower back. Once he''s done, he wipes his dick on your ass and climbs off you.'
+				'As you get dressed, he writes you a premium for 2000 <b>₽</b> and leaves it on the table before walking out.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -72,26 +72,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 			elseif gbrand >= 95 and palevorin = 1:
 				cla
 
-				'While Artur is fucking you, you hear the creaking of the front door, you look up to see two more men enter the room. You know them it''s Abdul and Hassan, owners of the neighboring stalls.'
-				'You freeze in astonishment and shame, caught moaning as you''re being fucked, laying naked on your stomach as Artur rides you, he apparently doesn''t mind the audience as he keeps fucking you. The men smile and laugh, saying something to each other and then they say something to Artur who barely grunts a reply to them as he keeps fucking you.'
-				'Hasan then says to you. "Hey girl, why don''t you give us a turn when Artur is done and we won''t tell everyone in the market." You glance back at Artur as he is still riding you and he doesn''t show any indication he cares.'
+				'While Arthur is fucking you, you hear the creaking of the front door and look up to see two more men enter the room. It''s Abdul and Hassan, the owners of the neighboring stalls.'
+				'You freeze in shock and shame, but Arthur apparently doesn''t care and keeps fucking you. The men smile and laugh, whispering something to each other before they say something to Arthur, who barely grunts a reply to them as he keeps fucking you.'
+				'Hassan then smiles at you. "Hey girl, why don''t you give us a turn? We won''t tell anyone in the market." You glance back at Arthur, but he doesn''t show any indication that he cares.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Tell them no':
+				act 'No':
 					cla
 					money += 2000
 					palevorin = 2
-					'With your face red with shame, you shake your head and say quietly "No." The other two say something to each other and then sit down to watch as Artur fucks you. Unable to do anything about it, you try to ignore them. Though it is hard as they keep talking to each other.'
-					'After some time, he pulls out of you and you feel hot wet spurts of cum landing all over your ass and lower back. Once he is done cumming he wipes his dick off on your ass and gets off you.'
-					'Once Artur has finished you get up and start to gather up your things, the other two laugh and talk more, staring at your naked body. You get dressed as quickly as you can. Artur writes you a premium for the amount of 2,000 <b>₽</b>, as you take the money Artur says to you quietly. "It is alright I will deal with them." You look at him a moment, nod and then leave.'
+					'Your face red with shame, you just silently shake your head. They again whisper something to each other and then sit down to watch as Arthur continues fucking you. Unable to do anything about it, you try to ignore them.'
+					'After some time, he pulls out and you feel spurts of warm cum splattering over your ass and lower back. Once he''s done, he wipes his dick on your ass and climbs off you.'
+					'You get up and start to gather up your things as Abdul and Hassan laugh and stare at your naked body. You get dressed as quickly as you can as Arthur writes you a premium for 2000 <b>₽</b>. "It''s okay, I''ll deal with them." he says quietly. You silently nod and leave.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Go home':gt 'city_residential'
 				end
-								
+				
 				gs 'willpower', 'gangbang', 'resist', 'hard'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Agree to gangbang (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -114,13 +114,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 						
 						money += 5000
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/rinkrug.jpg"></center>'
-						'You nod your head yes, the other two laugh and start pulling out their dicks as they head over. The stroke themselves as they wait for Artur to finish. It doesn''t take him long, he pulls out of you and you feel hot wet spurts of cum landing all over your ass and lower back. Once he is done cumming he wipes his dick off on your ass and gets off you.'
-						'As soon as Artur gets off you, Adbul moves behind your and pulls your up by your hips till you are on all fours. He wastes no time and plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your pussy. You notice he was not blessed by nature almost at once. But that doesn''t seem to bother him in the slightest as he fucks you hard and fast, constantly slapping your ass cheeks. As he comments to the others and laughs.'
+						'You nod your head and they laugh and pull out their dicks as they walk over. They stroke themselves as they wait for Arthur to finish. It doesn''t take long before he pulls out and you feel spurts of warm cum splattering over your ass and lower back. Once he''s done, he wipes his dick on your ass and climbs off you.'
+						'Adbul immediately moves in behind you and pulls you up by the hips onto all fours. He wastes no time and plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your pussy. You notice he doesn''t feel very big, but that doesn''t seem to bother him in the slightest as he fucks you hard and fast, constantly slapping your ass cheeks as he makes comments to the others and laughs.'
 						
-						'Meanwhile Hasan kneeled down in front of you and slaps his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick against you face and keeps slapping it hard against your cheek until you open up your mouth. As soon as your mouth opens he shoves his cock in your mouth, holding your head he fucks your mouth and into your throat. Not seeming to care if you are gagging or not, though he is careful to make sure to let you breath.'
-						'As the two guys spit-roast you, Artur gets dressed and then takes a seat. He drinks as he watches you getting fucked by the other two.'
-						'Finally Abdul pulls out and spurts his load all over your ass and lower back. His sperm adding to the mess Artur already spewed on you. A few moments latter Hasan groans and shots his load in your mouth. As soon as they have both shot their load, they get up, say something to Artur as they put their dicks away and then they leave with out a further word.'
-						'Once they are gone, Artur says. "So you like cock do you? Well I can use that, it will be very useful to my business. Here this is a bonus." With that he gets up and walks out, leaving you a bonus of 5,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+						'Meanwhile Hassan kneels in front of you and slaps his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick against your face several times until you open your mouth. As soon as you do, he shoves his cock inside and holds your head tight as he fucks your mouth and throat.'
+						'As the two guys spitroast you, Arthur gets dressed and takes a seat. He takes a swig of his drink as he watches you getting fucked.'
+						'After a few minutes, Abdul pulls out and shoots his load over your ass and lower back, adding to the mess Arthur has already made. A few seconds later, Hassan groans and shoots his load into your mouth. Satasfied, they get up and say something to Arthur as they put their dicks away. They then leave without saying anything more.'
+						'Once they''re gone, Arthur looks at you with a smile. "So you like cock do you? Well I can use that. It''ll be very useful to my business. Here is a bonus." He gets up and walks out, leaving you a bonus of 5000 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'sub', 'rough', 'group'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub', 'rough', 'group'
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 			spafinloc = 12
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/deep4.jpg"></center>'
-			'You kneel down before Artur. He takes out his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock, you take it in your mouth and start sucking him, he lets you guide the action and do all the work, only occasionally thrust himself down your throat making you gag.'
+			'You kneel down in front of Arthur as he takes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock out. You take it into your mouth and start sucking it, Arthur letting you guide the action and do all the work, only occasionally thrusting himself down your throat and making you gag.'
 
 			if horand > pcs_horny:
 				$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -161,22 +161,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 
 			if (gbrand < 95 and palevorin = 1) or palevorin > 1:
 				money += 2000
-				'After some time, he pulls his dick mostly out of your mouth. Only leaving in the head and with in moments you feel and taste his sperm as he shoots his load in your mouth, spurt after spurt, filling your mouth up with his semen. Once he is done cumming he pulls his dick out of your mouth and wipes it off on your lips. As you get dressed he writes you a premium for the amount of 2,000 <b>₽</b> and leaving it on the table as he leaves.'
+				'After some time, he pulls his dick almost all the way out of your mouth, leaving only the tip inside. Within a few seconds, you taste his cum as he shoots his load into your mouth, spurt after spurt filling your mouth. Once he''s done, he pulls his dick out of your mouth and wipes it on your lips. As you get dressed, he writes you a premium for 2000 <b>₽</b> and leaving it on the table before walking out.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go home':gt 'city_residential'
 			
 			elseif gbrand >= 95 and palevorin = 1:
 			
-                'After some time, he pulls his dick mostly out of your mouth. Only leaving in the head and with in moments you feel and taste his sperm as he shoots his load in your mouth, spurt after spurt, filling your mouth up with his semen. Once he is done cumming he pulls his dick out of your mouth and wipes it off on your lips.'
-				'As he finishes you notice that Abdul and Hasan are there watching, you don''t remember hearing them enter, you freeze in astonishment and shame, you were caught with a mouth full of sperm, the men smile and laugh, saying something to each other and then they say something to Artur who barely grunts a reply to them.'
-				'Hasan then says to you. "Hey girl, why don''t you give us a turn and we won''t tell everyone in the market." You glance back at Artur as he doesn''t show any indication he cares.'
+                'After some time, he pulls his dick almost all the way out of your mouth, leaving only the tip inside. Within a few seconds, you taste his cum as he shoots his load into your mouth, spurt after spurt filling your mouth. Once he''s done, he pulls his dick out of your mouth and wipes it on your lips.'
+				'As he finishes, you notice that Abdul and Hassan are watching. You don''t remember hearing them enter and freeze in shock and shame. The men smile and laugh, whispering something to each other before they say something to Arthur, who barely grunts a reply to them.'
+				'Hassan then smiles at you. "Hey girl, why don''t you give us a turn? We won''t tell anyone in the market." You glance back at Arthur, but he doesn''t show any indication that he cares.'
 				
 				act 'Wipe your mouth and leave':
 					cla
 					money += 2000
 					palevorin = 2
-					'You your face red with shame you wipe the remnants of sperm from your lips and correct your clothes, at this time Artur hands you 2,000 <b>₽</b> as a bonus, as you take the money Artur says to you quietly. "It is alright I will deal with them." You look at him a moment, nod and then leave.'
+					'Your face red with shame, you wipe the cum from your lips and fix your clothes before Arthur hands you 2000 <b>₽</b>. "It''s okay, I''ll deal with them." he says quietly. You silently nod and leave.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -203,9 +203,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						money += 5000
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/rintri.jpg"></center>'
-						'You nod your head in agreement. The two men immediately take out their members and walking over to you hold them by your mouth, you suck the two dicks. Sometimes one of them in your mouth while you jerk the other one off and sometimes they stick both their dicks in your mouth at the same time.'
-						'Finally Abdul and Hassan cum in your mouth, once they pull their dicks out of your mouth. They wipe them off on your lips and cheeks before putting their dicks away, They same something to Artur, laughing as they leave.'
-						'Once they are gone, Artur says. "So you like cock do you? Well I can use that, it will be very useful to my business. Here this is a bonus." With that he gets up and walks out, leaving you a bonus of 5,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+						'You nod your head and the two men immediately walk over and pull their dicks out. You start sucking them in turn, but they sometimes force you to suck both at the same time.'
+						'After a few minutes, they both cum in your mouth. They then pull their dicks out and wipe them on your lips and cheeks before putting them away They say something to Arthur, laughing as they leave.'
+						'Once they''re gone, Arthur looks at you with a smile. "So you like cock do you? Well I can use that. It''ll be very useful to my business. Here is a bonus." He gets up and walks out, leaving you a bonus of 5000 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'sub', 'rough', 'group'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -228,18 +228,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 	if repa < 6:repa = 6
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A91'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/tri6.jpg"></center>'
-	'Artur leads you into the warehouse where Abdul and Hasan wait. They all talk to each other for a few minutes in their native language. Then Artur turns to you and says. "take off your clothes and get on your knees." Abdul and Hasan are pulling out their dicks and heading over. You do as you are instructed, as soon as your knees touch the floor you have three dicks thrust in your face. You take turns sucking one and jerking the others.'
+	'Arthur leads you into the warehouse where Abdul and Hassan are waiting. They all talk to each other in their native language before Arthur turns to you. "Take off your clothes and get on your knees." Abdul and Hassan are pulling out their dicks and heading over. You do as instructed and as soon as your knees touch the floor, you have three dicks thrust in your face. You take turns sucking one and jerking the others.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 	minut -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
-					
+
 	act 'More':
 		cla
 		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/triplep.jpg"></center>'
-		'For a bit they are satisfied with this, then Abdul stops and lays down on a couch, pulling you over with him. Pulling your on top of him you straddle him and feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick slip inside of your pussy at once. Artur stands to the side and pulls your head towards him.'
+		'Satisfied with this, Abdul stops and lies down on a couch, pulling you over with him. You straddle him and feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick slide inside your pussy as Arthur stands to the side and pulls your head towards him.'
 		
 		swallow +=1
 		gang += 1
@@ -251,11 +251,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		spafinloc = 11
 		gs 'cum_manage'
-		'You open your mouth and start sucking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick at once. While Hasan kneels down behind you, you feel the tip of his cock rubbing against your ass hole. After a moment your groan in pain as he forces his dick into your ass.'
+		'You open your mouth and start sucking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick while Hassan kneels down behind you and you feel the tip of his cock rubbing against your asshole. You groan in pain as he forces his dick into your ass.'
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A92'
 		spafinloc = 11
 		gs 'cum_manage'
-		'You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock stretching your ass. Once all three of them are in you, they start fucking you with earnest. This goes on for some time, occasionally they stop to switch positions. In the end all of them take a turn fucking you in each of your holes before they are done. Once they get close they all stop and get you back on your knees, pushing your head back and telling you to open your mouth. Then they all jerk off on your face and into your mouth.'
+		'You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock stretching your ass. The three men then all start fucking you in tandem. This goes on for some time, occasionally stopping so they can switch positions. They eventually stop and get you back on your knees, pushing your head back and telling you to open your mouth. They all jerk off on your face and into your mouth.'
 		horand = rand(1, 100)
 
 		if horand > pcs_horny:
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 		act 'Finish':
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial10.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once they are all done, Artur gives you a bonus of 5,000 <b>₽</b>. Then all the men walk out, leaving you to get cleaned up and dressed.'
+			'Once they''re done, Arthur gives you a bonus of 5000 <b>₽</b> before they all walk out, leaving you to get cleaned up and dressed.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -292,11 +292,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 	menu_off = 1
     gs 'boyStat', 'A73'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj15.jpg"></center>'
-	'The Artur takes you into the warehouse, and with you on your knees in front of him pulls out his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. He smacks you in the face with it and then rubs the tip against your lips, when you open your mouth he shoves his dick in your mouth and roughly fucks your mouth.'
+	'Arthur leads you into the warehouse and pushes you onto your knees in front of him before he pulls his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick out. He smacks you in the face with it and then rubs the tip against your lips before he shoves his dick into your mouth and starts roughly fucking your throat.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
-					
+
 	!!random chance on which of the three trigger.
 	act 'Further':
 		cls
@@ -308,8 +308,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			pcs_throat += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/rinslutbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'The Armenian grabs you by the hair and fucks your mouth roughly, jamming his dick down your throat often and making you gag. He pulls out and shoots his load on your face and in your mouth, then he shoves his dick back in your mouth and he makes you suck his dick clean.'
-			'After Artur has finished, he tucks his dick in his pants and throws you five hundred-ruble notes.'
+			'He grabs you by the hair and fucks your mouth roughly, forcing his dick down your throat and making you gag. He then pulls out and shoots his load across your face and into your mouth before shoves his dick back in your mouth and making you suck it clean.'
+			'Once he''s finished, he tucks his dick back in his pants and throws 500 <b>₽</b> at you.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		elseif rand_act = 1:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/miss/vagmis1.jpg"></center>'
-			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and lays you down on a couch on your back. He spreads your legs, exposing your pussy. He lines up his dick, rubbing the tip a bit against your pussy lips and then shoves his dick in and starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
+			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and pushes you down on a couch on your back. He spreads your legs and lines his dick up with your pussy, rubbing the tip against your lips before he shoves his dick inside and starts fucking you hard and fast.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -329,8 +329,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/stomach/bellycum.jpg"></center>'
-				'He roughly fucks you for some time, he begins panting and you can tell he is getting close to finishing. He suddenly pulls his dick out of your pussy and shoots his load all over your stomach.'
-				'After the Artur has finished, he tucks his dick in his pants and throws you five hundred-ruble notes.'
+				'He roughly fucks you for some time before he begins panting and you can tell he is close to finishing. He then suddenly pulls out and shoots his load over your stomach.'
+				'Once he''s finished, he tucks his dick back in his pants and throws 500 <b>₽</b> at you.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -341,8 +341,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal28.jpg"></center>'
-			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and bends you over, pulling your hips up, till you are on all fours. He kneels down behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, getting a bit of your natural lube on the head of his dick. Then he moves the tip of his dick up and rubs it against your asshole. He pushes his dick in, with only your slavia and a bit of your pussy juices on the tip for lucubration, you squeal a bit in pain.'
-			'He works his way slowly deeper into your ass, holding onto your hips tightly so you can''t pull away. He works his way down till he is balls deep and then starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
+			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and bends you over onto all fours. He kneels down behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips before he moves up and rubs it against your asshole. He pushes his dick in, with only your saliva and pussy juices for lucubration. You squeal in pain.'
+			'He slowly works his way deeper into your ass, holding onto your hips tightly so you can''t pull away. He works his way balls deep and then starts fucking you hard and fast.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -353,8 +353,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/analcum.jpg"></center>'
-				'He roughly fucks you for some time, he begins panting and you can tell he is getting close to finishing. He suddenly shoots his load deep in your ass, you can feel the hot spurts of cum filling up your ass.'
-				'After the Artur has finished, he tucks his dick in his pants and throws you five hundred-ruble notes.'
+				'He roughly fucks you for some time before he begins panting and you can tell he is close to finishing. He then suddenly shoots his load deep inside your ass.'
+				'Once he''s finished, he tucks his dick back in his pants and throws 500 <b>₽</b> at you.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/city_marketwork.qsrc

@@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Marketplace</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/market/rinok.jpg"></center>'
-	'You stand at your clothes stall waiting for buyers.'
-	'Cash taken <<rinmon>> <b>₽</b>, You have sold <<rinvesh>> items.'
-	'The average price on the market <<prodpayum>>'
+	'You stand at your clothes stall waiting for customers.'
+	'You have sold <<rinvesh>> items and taken <<rinmon>> <b>₽</b> in cash.'
+	'The average price on the market is <<prodpayum>>.'
 
 	if hour = 14:
-		'Arthur comes to you and you start to calculate how much you should give him.'
+		'Arthur comes up to you and you start to calculate how much you should give him.'
 		act 'Give money to Arthur':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -47,18 +47,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			rinmon -= rinart
 			money += rinmon
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You gave Arthur <<rinart>> per sold <<rinvesh>> things.'
-			'Today you have earned <<rinmon>> <b>₽</b>'
+			'You give Arthur <<rinart>> per sold <<rinvesh>> items.'
+			'You have earned <<rinmon>> <b>₽</b> today.'
 
 			rinmon = 0
 			rinvesh = 0
 			
 			if rinart < arturplan:
 				arturnoo += 1
-				'Uh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is bad, you haven''t made enough money. You will completely ruin me.'
+				'This is bad, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You haven''t made enough money. You''ll completely ruin me!'
 			else
 				arturyes += 1
-				'Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>, good job.'
+				'Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>, good job today.'
 			end
 
 			if arturnoo > arturyes:arturnoo = arturnoo - arturyes & arturyes = 0
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				arturnoo = 0
 				work = 0
 				workrin = 0
-				'Uh, you''re fucking useless. Here''s your papers. Hit the road, I do not want to see you ever again!'
+				'You''re fucking useless! Here''s your papers. I don''t want to see you again!'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
 
@@ -81,18 +81,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if rinrand < pcs_apprnc:
 				if palevorin <= 1 or palevorin = 3:
 					if palevorin = 0:
-						'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you and I have not even met properly. Come into the warehouse, eat barbecue, drink and get acquainted.'
+						'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you and I have not met properly. Come into the warehouse. We can have a drink and a bite to eat while we get acquainted."'
 					elseif palevorin = 1:
-						'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, want to Come to the warehouse again, eat barbecue, drink and have some fun.'
+						'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, want to come to the warehouse again?"'
 					else
-						'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come into the warehouse, eat barbecue, drink, rest." He walks right up to you and slaps you on the ass.'
+						'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come into the warehouse and have a drink with me." He walks right up to you and slaps you on the ass.'
 					end
 
 					act 'Refuse':
 						cla
-						'You start making excuses. Arthur says to you, "Hey, don''t insult me, your stall is dirty, it has dust and dirt all over it. I should fine you, but if you''re nice I will let you off.'
+						'You start making excuses and Arthur frowns. "Hey, don''t insult me! Your stall is filthy, just look at all this dust and dirt! I should fine you, but if you''re nice, I''ll let you off.'
 
-						act 'Go to warehouse':gt 'city_marketsex', 'the_beginning'
+						act 'Go to the warehouse':gt 'city_marketsex', 'the_beginning'
 
 						act 'No':
 							cla
@@ -100,9 +100,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 							if money >= 1000:
 								money -= 1000
-								'"Hey, your stall is dirty, you owe a thousand <b>₽</b>, in fine." Arthur takes the money.'
+								'"Your stall is filthy! I''m fining you 1000 <b>₽</b>." You hand over the money and Arthur quickly snatches it.'
 							else
-								'Go with him, before it gets worse'
+								'Go with him before it gets worse.'
 							end
 
 							act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
@@ -112,14 +112,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					act 'Go with him':gt 'city_marketsex', 'the_beginning'
 					
 				elseif palevorin = 2:
-					'Artur goes behind you into the stall carrying some stuff, then he comes up behind you are working and gives your ass a slap and squeeze. "I am glad you turned Abdul and Hasan down. I like having you all to myself."'
-					'You turn your head to look at him and smile. "I like that too, but maybe from now on you can lock the door first?"'
-					'He laughs and nods. "Of course of course, anything for you my sweet. If you wish the door to be locked from now on the door will be locked from now on. Speaking of which, come let us go try locking the door to make sure it works and have lunch."'
-					act 'Go with Artur':palevorin = 3 & gt 'city_marketsex', 'the_beginning'
+					'Arthur walks into the stall behind you carrying some boxes. He places them down and walks up behind you, giving your ass a slap and squeeze. "I''m glad you turned Abdul and Hassan down. I like having you all to myself."'
+					'You turn your head to look at him and smile. "I like that too, but maybe you can lock the door first from now on?"'
+					'He laughs and nods. "Of course of course, anything for you my sweet. If you wish for the door to be locked, the door will be locked. Why don''t we go and make sure it works first..."'
+					act 'Go with Arthur':palevorin = 3 & gt 'city_marketsex', 'the_beginning'
 					
 				elseif palevorin = 4:
-					'Artur goes behind you into the stall carrying some stuff. He comes up behind you are working and gives your ass a slap and squeeze, with one hand while the other one snakes around and roughly grabs your tit, as he whispers in your ear. "So you like cock, I didn''t think you were a little slut but that''s ok, I like dirty sluts."'
-					'He cuts you off before you can make any protest about being slut. "No it is good, I can use this. Now come let us go to the warehouse so I can fuck you."'
+					'Arthur walks into the stall behind you carrying some boxes. He places them down and walks up behind you, giving your ass a slap and squeeze with one hand while the other snakes around and roughly grabs your breast as he whispers in your ear. "So, you like cock? I didn''t think you were a little slut but that''s okay, I like dirty sluts."'
+					'He cuts you off before you can protest. "No it''s good, I can use this. Now let''s go to the warehouse so I can fuck you."'
 					
 					act 'Go with him ':palevorin = 5 & gt 'city_marketsex', 'sex'
 					
@@ -129,9 +129,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
-							'You shake your head and pull out of his grasp. "I am not a slut Artur and I am not going with you."'
-							'You see the anger flare up in his eyes. "So you think you are to good for me whore? I gave you a job, I treated you nice and then you fuck those two and now I am not good enough?" He shakes his head. "No get your ass in the warehouse now or you are fired and I will tell Abdul and Hasan they are free to tell everyone about how you greedily took their cocks like the little slut you are."'
-							'You are a bit shocked at this level of anger and the ultimatum. You are unsure what to do, go with him, keep your job, and your rep. Or refuse and find a new job and hope no one believes them.'
+							'You shake your head and pull out of his grasp. "I''m not a slut and I''m sure as hell not going with you!"'
+							'You see the anger flare up in his eyes. "So you think you''re too good for me whore? I gave you a job and treated you well. Then you fucked those two and now I''m not good enough?" He shakes his head. "Get your ass in the warehouse <i>now</i> or you''re fired and I''ll tell Abdul and Hassan they are free to tell everyone about how you greedily took their cocks like the little slut you are."'
+							'You''re shocked at this level of anger and the ultimatum. You are unsure of what to do...'
 
 							act 'Go to warehouse':palevorin = 5 & gt 'city_marketsex', 'sex'
 
@@ -142,9 +142,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									gs 'pain', 5, 'cheeks', 'slap'
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									gs 'stat'
-									'You shake your head no. "No I won''t go with you."'
-									'Before you notice him raising his hand, you feel the burning on your cheek as he slaps you. "Then get out of her whore, your fired and I don''t want to see you back here!" He says very loudly as he pushes you out from behind his stall, loud enough that many people are looking your direction now at what is going on.'
-									'With shame and a burning cheek you walk away.'
+									'You shake your head. "No, I won''t go with you."'
+									'Before you notice him raising his hand, you feel the burning sensation on your cheek as he slaps you. "Then get out of here whore! You''re fired and I don''t want to see you back here!" He pushes you out from behind his stall, loud enough that many people are looking in your direction to what''s going on.'
+									'You walk away in shame while rubbing your stinging cheek.'
 									if rinslut = 0:rinslut = 1
 									act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
 								end
@@ -160,11 +160,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					sexgrouprand = rand(0,1)
 					
 					if sexgrouprand = 1:
-						'Artur walks up and slaps your ass hard and grabs you roughly by one arm. "Hey bitch, how would you like to make some extra money? My friends need company."'
+						'Arthur walks up and slaps your ass hard before grabbing you roughly by the arm. "Hey bitch, how would you like to make some extra money? My friends need company."'
 						
 						act 'Go with him':gt 'city_marketsex', 'group'
 					else
-						'Artur walks up and slaps your ass hard and grabs you roughly by one arm. "Bitch get your fucking ass in the warehouse."'
+						'Arthur walks up and slaps your ass hard before grabbing you roughly by the arm. "Get your fucking ass in the warehouse, bitch."'
 						
 						act 'Go with him':gt 'city_marketsex', 'sex'
 					end
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
-							'You start making excuses. Arthur says to you, "Hey, don''t insult me you fucking slut, I was there. I know what a whore you are. Now get your fucking ass in the warehouse or the whole town will know what a whore you are."'
+							'You start making excuses and Arthur frowns. "Don''t insult me you little fucking slut! I was there. I know what a cock loving whore you are. Now get your fucking ass in the warehouse or the whole town will know about you!"'
 							if sexgrouprand = 1:
 								act 'Go to warehouse':gt 'city_marketsex', 'group'
 							else
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									gs 'stat'
 									if rinslut = 0:rinslut = 1
 									if repa < 6:repa = 6
-									'Then fuck you, you little fucking whore, your fired and by tomorrow the whole town will know what a whore you are."'
+									'"Then fuck you, you little fucking whore! You''re fired and by tomorrow the whole town will know what a cock loving whore you are!"'
 
 									act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
 								end
@@ -231,86 +231,86 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		talkrand = rand(0, 2)
 		if hour = 9:
 			if rintakrand = 0:
-				$rintak = ' Hassan unloads clothes in front of saleswoman Nadias stall.'
+				$rintak = 'Hassan unloads clothes in front of Nadia''s stall.'
 
-				act 'See Hassan and Nadia':
+				act 'Watch Hassan and Nadia':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					
-					if talkrand = 0:'Hassan utters to Nadia. "Today you will sell more, and to the rich ladies, I need the money."'
+					if talkrand = 0:'"You will sell more today, and to the rich ladies. I need the money, Nadia."'
 					if talkrand = 1:'Hassan opens trunks and puts clothes on the counter.'
 					if talkrand >= 2:'Hassan drags trunks to his stall.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 1:
-				$rintak = 'On the next stall Abdul is talking loudly and giving clothes to saleswoman Anna.'
+				$rintak = 'Abdul is talking loudly and giving clothes to Anna at the next stall over.'
 
-				act 'Look at Abdul and Anna':
+				act 'Watch Abdul and Anna':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 
-					if talkrand = 0:'Abdul swears. "We''re fucked, you can not sell anything!" Anna retorts, "You give me this rotten shit to sell, take it nobody wants it."'
-					if talkrand = 1:'Abdul slaps Annas ass, she pretends that nothing happened.'
+					if talkrand = 0:'"We''re fucked, you can''t sell anything!" Abdul shouts at Anna. "No wonder! You give me this rotten shit to sell! Nobody wants it!" she retorts.'
+					if talkrand = 1:'Abdul slaps Anna''s ass, but she pretends that nothing happened.'
 					if talkrand >= 2:'Abdul drags trunks to his stall.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 2:
-				$rintak = 'Abdul and Hassan stand beside your stall and saying something guttural.'
+				$rintak = 'Abdul and Hassan stand beside your stall speaking to each other in their native language.'
 
-				act 'View the Armenians':
+				act 'Watch them':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 
-					if talkrand = 0:'Abdul and Hassan continue to talk about something, you do not know the language, and can not understand what they are saying.'
-					if talkrand = 1:'Abdul and Hassan ignore you and discuss what sounds like clothes prices.'
-					if talkrand >= 2:'Abdul looks at you and says to Hassan, "Look at that a girl, she looks like a good fuck, yeah."'
+					if talkrand = 0:'They continue to talk, but you don''t know the language and can''t understand what they''re saying.'
+					if talkrand = 1:'They ignore you and discuss what sounds like clothes prices.'
+					if talkrand >= 2:'Abdul looks at you. "Look at that girl. She looks like a good fuck." Hassan looks you over and nods in agreement.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 3:
-				$rintak = 'Anna hangs clothes on her stall shouting at Nadia.'
+				$rintak = 'Anna hangs clothes on her stall while shouting at Nadia.'
 
-				act 'Chat with girls':
+				act 'Chat with the girls':
 					cla
 					annaQW += 1
 					NadiaQW += 1
 					minut += 15
 
 					if talkrand = 0:
-						'Anna tells you that her skirt needed altering, there is a great Jewish tailor, his shop is nearby.'
+						'Anna tells you that her skirt needed altering and that there is a great tailor''s shop nearby.'
 					else
-						'Nadia tells her how some pervert molested her on the subway rubbing his dick on her ass.'
+						'Nadia tells you how some pervert molested her on the subway by rubbing his dick on her ass.'
 					end
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 4:
-				$rintak = 'Arthur is talking about something with Abdullah.'
+				$rintak = 'Arthur is talking about something with Abdul.'
 
-				act 'View the Armenians':
+				act 'Watch them':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 
-					if talkrand = 0:'Abdul and Hassan continue to talk about something, you do not know the language, and can not understand what they are saying.'
-					if talkrand = 1:'Abdul and Arthur ignore you and discuss what sounds like clothes prices.'
-					if talkrand >= 2:'Abdul looks at you and says to Arthur, "Nice girl you got there, you fucking her?."'
+					if talkrand = 0:'They continue to talk, but you don''t know the language and can''t understand what they''re saying.'
+					if talkrand = 1:'They ignore you and discuss what sounds like clothes prices.'
+					if talkrand >= 2:'Abdul looks at you. "Nice looking girl you got there. You fucking her?"'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand >= 5:
-				$rintak = 'Arthur, Abdul Hassan are talking loudly, about something in foreign language.'
+				$rintak = 'Arthur, Abdul and Hassan are talking loudly to each other in their native language.'
 
 				act 'View the Armenians':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 
-					if talkrand = 0:'Abdul and Hassan continue to talk about something, you do not know the language, and can not understand what they are saying.'
-					if talkrand = 1:'Armenians ignore you and discuss what sounds like clothes prices.'
-					if talkrand >= 2:'Abdul looks at you and says to the other Armenians, "Pretty little girl, can i have her?"'
+					if talkrand = 0:'They continue to talk, but you don''t know the language and can''t understand what they''re saying.'
+					if talkrand = 1:'They ignore you and discuss what sounds like clothes prices.'
+					if talkrand >= 2:'Abdul looks at you. "Pretty little girl you have there. Can I have her?"'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -319,56 +319,56 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if rintakrand = 0:
 				$rintak = 'Hassan sits on a chair dejectedly chewing food and talking with his mouth full to his saleswoman Nadia.'
 
-				act 'Watch Hasan':
+				act 'Watch':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
-					'Hassan says to Nadia "Nadia, why you refuse? Come here, have some wine."'
+					'"Nadia, why do you refuse? Come and have some wine."'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 1:
-				$rintak = 'At the stall in front of you sits Nadia doing crossword puzzles.'
+				$rintak = 'Nadia sits in her stall doing crossword puzzles.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Nadia':
 					cla
 					NadiaQW += 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Nadia leaves the crossword and willingly gossips with you.'
+					'Nadia sits her crossword down and willingly gossips with you.'
 					
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 2:
-				$rintak = 'Nadias stall in front of you has many buyers and she fusses before them laying out goods.'
+				$rintak = 'Customers are crowded around Nadia''s stall. She fusses around before them laying out her goods.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Nadia':
 					cla
 					NadiaQW -= 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Nadia is not happy, "Shoo, no distractions, I have buyers."'
+					'Nadia frowns at you. "Shoo, no distractions! I have customers."'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 3:
-				$rintak = 'At the next stall Anna is drinking coffee.'
+				$rintak = 'Anna is drinking coffee in her stall.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Anna':
 					cla
 					annaQW += 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Anna is happy to chat with you about any old nonsense.'
+					'Anna is happy to chat with you about pretty much anything.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 4:
-				$rintak = 'At the next stall Anna tries to interest buyers in her goods.'
+				$rintak = 'Anna is in her stall, trying to interest customers in her goods.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Anna':
 					cla
 					annaQW -= 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Anya is not happy, "Shoo, no distractions, I have buyers."'
+					'Anna frowns at you. "Shoo, no distractions! I have customers."'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand >= 5:
 				$rintak = 'Anna is gossiping with Aunt Katya.'
@@ -378,89 +378,89 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					annaQW += 1
 					tetaKataQW += 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Aunt Katya is talking about her pies and Anya complains that it because of her bloody pies that her ass is twice as big as it was.'
+					'Aunt Katya is talking about her pies and Anna complains that it''s because of her pies that her ass is twice as big as it was.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 
 			'<<$rintak>>'
 		elseif hour = 11:
 			if rintakrand = 0:
-				$rintak = 'Nadia is approached by three Armenians, Aslan, Camille and Mukhtar and they begin to molest her, she swears at them and tries to dodge.'
+				$rintak = 'Nadia is approached by three Armenians who begin to molest her. She swears at them and tries to dodge their groping hands.'
 
-				act 'Look at Nadia and Armenians.':
+				act 'Look at Nadia and Armenians':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					'The Armenians seem to be trying to persuade Nadia to have sex with them.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 1:
-				$rintak = 'At the stall in front of you sits Nadia eating cake.'
+				$rintak = 'Nadia is eating cake in her stall.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Nadia':
 					cla
 					NadiaQW += 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Nadia finishes the cake and mumbles about the usual nonsense with you.'
+					'Nadia finishes her cake and chats with you.'
 
 					if clener = 0:
 						clener = 1
 						'Nadia tells you about an office building not too far away that is looking for a cleaner.'
 					end
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 2:
-				$rintak = 'Nadias stall in front of you has many buyers and she fusses before laying out goods.'
+				$rintak = 'Customers are crowded around Nadia''s stall. She fusses around before them laying out her goods.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Nadia':
 					cla
 					NadiaQW -= 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Nadia is not happy, "Shoo, no distractions, I have buyers."'
+					'Nadia frowns at you. "Shoo, no distractions! I have customers."'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 3:
-				$rintak = 'At the next stall Anna is reading a newspaper.'
+				$rintak = 'Anna is reading a newspaper in her stall.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Anna':
 					cla
 					annaQW += 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Anna is happy to chat with you about any old nonsense.'
+					'Anna is happy to chat with you about pretty much anything.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 4:
-				$rintak = 'At the next stall Anna tries to interest buyers in her goods.'
+				$rintak = 'Anna is in her stall, trying to interest customers in her goods.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Anna':
 					cla
 					annaQW -= 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Anya is not happy, "Shoo, no distractions, I have buyers."'
+					'Anya frowns at you. "Shoo, no distractions! I have customers."'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand >= 5:
-				$rintak = 'Nadia is approached by three Armenians, Aslan, Camille and Mukhtar and they begin to molest her, she swears at them and tries to dodge.'
+				$rintak = 'Nadia is approached by three Armenians who begin to molest her. She swears at them and tries to dodge their groping hands.'
 
-				act 'Look at Nadia and Armenians.':
+				act 'Look at Nadia and Armenians':
 					cla
 					minut += 15
 					'The Armenians seem to be trying to persuade Nadia to have sex with them.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 
 			'<<$rintak>>'
 		elseif hour = 12:
 			if rintakrand = 0:
-				$rintak = 'Hasan has bought chebureki and is eating it while sitting behind Nadia in the stall.'
+				$rintak = 'Hassan has bought chebureki and is eating it while sitting behind Nadia in the stall.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Nadia':
 					cla
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					minut += 15
 					'Nadia shies away from talking in front of Hassan.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 1:
 				$rintak = 'Nadia is surrounded by customers.'
@@ -477,62 +477,62 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					cla
 					NadiaQW -= 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Nadia is not happy, "Shoo, no distractions, I have buyers."'
+					'Nadia frowns at you. "Shoo, no distractions! I have customers."'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 2:
-				$rintak = 'Nadia talks with Anna.'
+				$rintak = 'Nadia is talking with Anna.'
 
-				act 'Chat with girls':
+				act 'Chat with the girls':
 					cla
 					annaQW += 1
 					NadiaQW += 1
 					minut += 15
 
 					if talkrand = 0:
-						'Anna tells you that her friend used to clean an office building not far from here, they are looking for a new cleaner if you need to make some extra cash.'
+						'Anna tells you that her friend used to clean an office building not far from here and that they are looking for a new cleaner if you need to make some extra cash.'
 
 						if clener = 0:clener = 1
 
 					elseif talkrand = 1:
-						'Nadia tells her how some pervert molested her on the subway rubbing his dick on her ass.'
+						'Nadia tells you how some pervert molested her on the subway by rubbing his dick on her ass.'
 					end
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 3:
-				$rintak = 'Anna  is selling clothing to customers.'
+				$rintak = 'Anna is selling clothing to customers.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Anna':
 					cla
 					annaQW -= 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Anna is not happy, "Shoo, no distractions, I have buyers."'
+					'Anna frowns at you. "Shoo, no distractions! I have customers."'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand = 4:
-				$rintak = 'Anna is drinking coffee sitting at her stall.'
+				$rintak = 'Anna is drinking coffee while sitting at her stall.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Anna':
 					cla
 					annaQW += 1
 					minut += 15
-					'Anna happily chats with you about nonsense.'
+					'Anna happily chats with you about pretty much anything.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			elseif rintakrand >= 5:
-				$rintak = 'Nadia is idly trying to catch flies.'
+				$rintak = 'A bored looking Nadia is idly sitting in her stall looking for something to do.'
 
 				act 'Chat with Nadia':
 					cla
 					NadiaQW += 2
 					minut += 15
-					'Nadia glad for the distraction and has fun chatting with you.'
+					'Nadia is glad for the distraction and has fun chatting with you.'
 
-					act 'Further':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+					act 'Go back to work':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -566,14 +566,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			pokupatel = 1
 			poktiprand = rand(0, 7)
 
-			if poktiprand = 0:$pokup = 'A middle-aged man approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Man' & pokti = 1
-			if poktiprand = 1:$pokup = 'A young man approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Guy' & pokti = 2
-			if poktiprand = 2:$pokup = 'A teenage boy approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Boy' & pokti = 3
-			if poktiprand = 3:$pokup = 'A woman approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Woman' & pokti = 1
-			if poktiprand = 4:$pokup = 'A girl approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Girl' & pokti = 2
-			if poktiprand = 5:$pokup = 'A teen girl approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Teen girl' & pokti = 3
-			if poktiprand = 6:$pokup = 'An old man approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Old man' & pokti = 0
-			if poktiprand = 7:$pokup = 'A Grandma approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Old woman' & pokti = 0
+			if poktiprand = 0:$pokup = 'A middle-aged man approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The man' & pokti = 1
+			if poktiprand = 1:$pokup = 'A young man approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The guy' & pokti = 2
+			if poktiprand = 2:$pokup = 'A teenage boy approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The boy' & pokti = 3
+			if poktiprand = 3:$pokup = 'A woman approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The woman' & pokti = 1
+			if poktiprand = 4:$pokup = 'A girl approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The girl' & pokti = 2
+			if poktiprand = 5:$pokup = 'A teenage girl approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The teenager' & pokti = 3
+			if poktiprand = 6:$pokup = 'An old man approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The old man' & pokti = 0
+			if poktiprand = 7:$pokup = 'An old woman approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'The old woman' & pokti = 0
 		end
 
 		'<b><<$pokup>></b>'
@@ -585,11 +585,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				pokvnirand = rand(0, 2)
 
 				if pokvnirand = 0:
-					'<<$poktip>> with little interest examines your wares.'
+					'<<$poktip>> examines your wares with little interest.'
 				elseif pokvnirand = 1:
-					'<<$poktip>> with interest looks through the clothes for sale.'
+					'<<$poktip>> looks through your wares with interest.'
 				elseif pokvnirand = 2:
-					'<<$poktip>> picks up the item.'
+					'<<$poktip>> picks up an item.'
 				end
 
 				act 'Now this is very fashionable':
@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'answerrin':
 		elseif pokvnirand = 2:
 			pokpay = rand(1300, 1500)
 		end
-		'<<$poktip>> asks you for a price'
+		'<<$poktip>> asks you for a price.'
 		gs 'city_marketwork', 'tellprice'
 	else
 		'<<$poktip>> puts the item back and leaves.'
@@ -646,30 +646,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tellprice':
 
 		if prodpay < 1000:prodpay = prodpayum
 		poknorand = rand(1, 100 + pcs_apprnc/4)
-		'You tell them <<prodpay>> <b>₽</b>'
+		'"<<prodpay>> <b>₽</b>." you tell them.'
 
 		if prodpay <= pokpay:
 			if poknorand >= 10:
 				rinmon += prodpay
 				rinvesh += 1
-				'The buyer takes the item and pays <<prodpay>> <b>₽</b>.'
+				'The customer takes the item and pays <<prodpay>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
 				act 'Sell it':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 			else
-				'The buyer twirls clothing in their hands <<prodpay>> <b>₽</b> is too expensive.'
+				'The customer twirls the clothing in their hands. "<<prodpay>> <b>₽</b> is too expensive."'
 				gs 'city_marketwork', 'haggling'
 			end
 		elseif prodpay > pokpay and prodpay <= pokpay + 100:
 			if poknorand >= 10:
-				'The buyer twirls clothing in their hands <<prodpay>> <b>₽</b> is too expensive.'
+				'The customer twirls clothing in their hands. "<<prodpay>> <b>₽</b> is too expensive."'
 				gs 'city_marketwork', 'haggling'
 			else
-				'Buyer puts the item back and leaves'
+				'They put the item back and leaves'
 
 				act 'Return':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 			end
 		elseif prodpay > pokpay + 100:
-			'The buyer puts the item back and leaves.'
+			'The customer puts the item back and leaves.'
 
 			act 'Return':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 		end
@@ -686,9 +686,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'haggling':
 			if poknorand >= 10:
 				rinmon += prodpay - 100
 				rinvesh += 1
-				'The buyer takes the item and pays <<prodpay - 100>> <b>₽</b>'
+				'The customer takes the item and pays <<prodpay - 100>> <b>₽</b>'
 			else
-				'The buyer puts the item back and leaves.'
+				'The customer puts the item back and leaves.'
 			end
 			
 			act 'Haggle':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
@@ -702,15 +702,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'haggling':
 			if poknorand >= 30:
 				rinmon += prodpay - 50
 				rinvesh += 1
-				'The buyer takes the item and pays <<prodpay - 50>> <b>₽</b>'
+				'The customer takes the item and pays <<prodpay - 50>> <b>₽</b>'
 			else
-				'The buyer puts the item back and leaves.'
+				'The customer puts the item back and leaves.'
 			end
 			
 			act 'Haggle':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'You can not take less, take the item back':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
+	act 'Take the item back':gt 'city_marketwork', 'start'
 end