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[Changed] alternative take on the village gangbang event, subject to reverse if needed.

Gwen 2 years ago
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locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # gadukino_event
-!2021/05/02
+!!2022/05/03
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -188,11 +188,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk along the path, fully immersed in your inner thoughts. You don''t pay any attention to the crowd of drunken village men as you walk by. Noticing you alone the men turn their attention towards you.'
-	'One of the men grabs you and forces you away from the village. They start stripping you, surround you on all sides, taking out their cocks, warming up for what''s supposed to come.'
-	'As you humbly kneel, you think about resisting, but considering your reputation in the village, you find it''s not worth fighting, plus there was no way you could fight against this many men.'
-
-	act 'Suck the nearest cock':
+	'You walk by yourself and lost in your thoughts. You pass by a crowd of drunken men from the village but decide not to pay them any attention. Seeing how you''re alone, the drunkards turn their attention on you.'
+	'One of the men grabs your arm and forcefully lead you away from the village''s main path as the rest of men cheers and follows you.' 
+	'They remove all your clothes and leer at your naked body before surround you on all sides, taking out their cocks and start to stroke, getting ready for an outdoor gangbang.'
+	'You think about running away or resisting, but considering your tattered reputation and how men from the village alreayd treating you.' 
+	'You just don't even have the will to stop or give a damn about your imminent fuck fest.'
+	'One of the men put both of his hands on your shoulders and not so gently pushes you down on your knees. You sighed and open your mouth willingly, resigned to your fate...'
+	
+	act 'Start to suck':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'clothing', 'strip_all', 'VillageRiver'
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'drunk man', rand(19,45)
@@ -200,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 		guy += 1
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take the first available cock in your hand, jerking him off for a bit and then started sucking...'
+		'You caress and start to please one of men with your mouth while bring pleasure to two other men with your hands. Stroking and jerking their hardened cocks.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 		minut -= 5
@@ -213,18 +216,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 			guy += 1
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You turn around and start sucking on the next cock...'
+			'You turn the other way and start sucking on the cock you''ve been stroking...'
+			'You give him a wink before twist the tip of your tongue on the head of the man''s penis. You received a hard and appreciative groan in return.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Deepthroat two at once':
+			act 'Two cocks at once':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'some country guy', rand(19,45)
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated, 'b'
 				guy += 1
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral3.jpg"></center>'
-				'The men continue lining up, one after another. Some of the men are so impatient they shoved two cocks at you at once. You sucked each one of them off, embracing their penis with your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips lips, deepthroating them all.'
+				'The drunkend and horny men continue to line up, one after another. Some of the men are so impossibly horny that you are stuffed with two cocks in your mouth at once. You eventually sucked each one of them off, embracing and welcoming their hard penis with your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips lips, pleasuring them all.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -236,7 +240,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy2, 1
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum1.jpg"></center>'
-					'It doesn''t take long before the first men finish, cumming in your mouth, and on your face and chest. You continue sucking more men off, however...'
+					'It doesn''t take long before the first group of men finish, cumming in your mouth, and on your face and tits. You feel quite accomplished and enjoy the feeling of warm and gooey cum slidding down your face and drip onto your body.'
+					'However, you soon come back to your senses at loud and cheering sound around you and start to suck the rest of the men.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -247,13 +252,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 						guy += 1
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You are actually feeling a bit ecstatic from all of this, you didn''t even notice that you''ve changed position. Your ass sticks out in the air teasing the men. While you were busy pleasing someone''s cock with your mouth, one of the men entered your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> vagina from behind.'
+						'You are actually feeling a bit ecstatic from all that have happened so far and want to experience more of it.' 
+						'You didn''t even notice when and how but now you on all fours in ront of the men. Your wiggle and sticks out your butt in anticipation. One of the men plunges his cock into your wet and willing vagina from behind while another man fucks your throat quite enthusiastically.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 						minut -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Continue':
+						act 'Continue the sex fest':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'man', rand(19,45)
@@ -261,8 +267,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 							guy += 1
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog2.jpg"></center>'
-							'After a while the man that first entered your wet pussy started slowing down. He got quickly replaced by another man, who picked up the pace once again.'
-
+							'The man that fucks your pussy slows down after a good while of wild and savage thrusting. Another man taps him on the shoulder and take his place then proceed to hammer your vgagina just the same.'
+							'All the men near you all greeted by your moans of pleasure as well as your begging for them to fuck you and use your holes harder.'
+							
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 							minut -= 5
@@ -272,16 +279,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 							pose = 1
 							if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 
-							act 'Let another man fuck your ass':
+							act 'Let the men fuck your ass':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'drunk man', rand(19,45)
 								gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 								guy += 1
 
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog3.jpg"></center>'
-								'The third man was in no hurry to to start pounding your pussy, instead you felt his fingers exploring your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
-								if pcs_ass <= 5:'"Well, well what a tight hole you have here..." you hear a male voice. "Let me help you stretch it out."'
-								if pcs_ass <= 10:'You could only mumble in protest as your mouth was busy.'
+								'The third man was in no hurry to to start pounding your pussy, instead you felt his index finger probing and exploring your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
+								if pcs_ass <= 5:'"Well, well what a tight hole you have here..." you hear a male voice from behind you. "Let me help you stretch it out."'
+								if pcs_ass <= 10:'You could only muffled in protest since your mouth was busy servicing another man.'
 
 								gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
 								gs 'dinsex','analsex'
@@ -297,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 									npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog2.jpg"></center>'
-									'The next man, not wanting to be outdone by the man before, grabbed his cock, thrust it in your anus and started pounding you relentlessly.'
+									'The next man, wanting to outdone the man before, grabbed his cock, thrust it in your anus and started to slam into you eager butt relentlessly .'
 
 									gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
 									gs 'dinsex','analsex'
@@ -306,15 +313,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 									minut -= 5
 									gs 'stat'
 
-									act 'Lie down':
+									act 'Lie on your back':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'boyStat', 'A171'
 										npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis1.jpg"></center>'
-										'The men lay you on your back. You move your head wanting to see who''s about to enter you this time and you see your Uncle Stepan, the fisherman, readying his cock between your splayed legs.'
-										'You look straight into his eyes begging him not to do this, showing no remorse, you only hear him say "I''ve been fantasizing about this for a very long time."'
-
+										'You''re on your back. You move your head wanting to see who''s about to ravage you next and you see Stepan the fisherman, the man whom you are quite close to and found of...'
+										'You look into his eyes and asking him not to do this while Stepan readying his cock between your splayed legs... You only hear him say "I''ve been fantasizing about this for a very long time."'
+										'Your eyes widen in shock as Stepan's full length enters your body and feel your heart breaks a little. To the drunk Stepan, you are nothing but a lubricated meat tunnels that existed only to pleasure his cock.'
+										'Stepan start to groan and soon finish and release his load inside you and stumble off to the side and soon fallen into a peaceful slumber...'
+										'You take your mind off him and bite inside your cheeck as you realize there are still many men left waiting to be pleasured...'
+										
 										pose = 0
 										protect = rand(0,1)
 										if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
@@ -331,7 +341,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 											guy += 1
 
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis2.jpg"></center>'
-											'Your next "fan" steps up to pound your sore pussy.'
+											'The next man lifts your leg up to allow himself a better access to your pussy with his impressive cock.'
+											'You enjoy the sensation and moans out quite unabashedly as the tip of the man''s cock press lightly against your cervix.'
+											'The man who has been fucking your mouth soon tense up and cup your face as he ejaculate into your mouth, you swallowed his cum without much thought and licks your upper lips seductively at him.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'rough'
@@ -341,16 +353,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 											if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 											gs 'stat'
 
-											act 'Watch Vasyan pound you':
+											act 'Vasyan''s turn':
 												*clr & cla
 												minut += 5
 												gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 												npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis3.jpg"></center>'
-												'You see a familiar face again, this time it is Vasyan.'
-												'"Mitka and Kolyamba are also here somewhere waiting for their turn", he tells you before shoving his cock deep inside you.'
-
+												'You see another familiar face, this time it is Vasyan.'
+												'"Mitka and Kolyamba are also here somewhere waiting for their turn", he tells and smiles wickedly at you.'
+												'You shudder as his parts your pussy lips with his hands then proceed to burry his lengthy cock deep inside you.'
+												'Vasyan fucks your pussy hard and without tenderness, your begging do nothing to slow down his unfaltering and domineering thrust. Your escatic moans soon fill the air...'
+												'Vasyan start to tense up and climax, he release his load on your stomach and with his own hand, he mush your cum and spread them on your skin...'
+												'He walks off, receive loud cheering and hi-fives from men, leaving you a quivering mess on the ground with still many cocks to serve...'
+												
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 												gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 												minut -= 5
@@ -360,7 +376,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 												gs 'stat'
 												*pl
 
-												act 'Kneel for them':
+												act 'Kneel and suck':
 													*clr & cla
 													minut += 5
 													if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
@@ -371,9 +387,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 													gs 'stat'
 
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral4.jpg"></center>'
-													'The men decide that your holes need a rest, so the next few men are only going to get oral pleasure. They tell you to get on your knees and order you to suck.'
+													'The men decide to give you a short rest from fucking, so the next group of men are here for you to please them with your mouth.'
+													'They tell you to get on your knees and order you to suck. You nod meekly and start to kiss and caress their cocks before open your mouth to service them'
 
-													act 'Make this group cum':
+													act 'Make them cum':
 														*clr & cla
 														gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy, 1
 														gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'unknown drunk guy', rand(19,45)
@@ -389,18 +406,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 														gs 'stat'
 
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum2.jpg"></center>'
-														'You can feel the men''s penises pulsate, getting harder and finally cumming all over your face'
-														'They finish and walk away.'
+														'You can feel their cocks pulsate, getting hotter and harder. The trio of men cry out in pleasure and one of them hold your head in place as the rest of them orgasm and coat your face with their cum.'
+														'They steady themselves after a moment and start to walk away while receive hi-fives from other men. They tell you that they definetely want to group fuck your and fill your little holes next time.'
+														'You blushes at the crude and lewd compliments but bat your eyelashes at them at hollering and laughing men around you.'
 														gs 'stat'
 
-														act 'Bend over':
+														act 'Bend over again':
 															*clr & cla
 															gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'man', rand(19,45)
 															gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 															guy += 1
 
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog5.jpg"></center>'
-															'Once again they order you to assume the doggy style position, and once again one of the men starts pounding your long-suffering, <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>>, pussy.'
+															'After the short rest, you''re some what ready to be fucked again as the remain men cheered you on.'
+															'They tell you to be on all fours and stick out your butt, one of the men starts mount you from behind and start to fuck you in earnst.'
 
 															gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 															gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -408,7 +427,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 															pose = 1
 															protect = rand(0,1)
 															if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
-															'The men cum and walk away feeling satisfied.'
+															'The men cum inside you and slowly backing out from you feeling satisfied. He proclaimed loudly that he loves fucking your pussy and proceed to motorboat despite the presence of other men''s cum.'
+															'The crowd laughing and gaive him thumbs up as the man take his leaves.'
 															gs 'stat'
 
 															act 'Please them all':
@@ -418,7 +438,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																guy += 1
 
 																'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog6.jpg"></center>'
-																'The next three men stepped up arguing who''s going to get to fuck you first...'
+																'The next trio of men stepped up whiling arguing who''s going to get to fuck you first...'
+																'You give those men your best come-hither look and begging them just come here to cock-roast you!'
+																'The men chuckles and soon you receive your wish of pleasuring three cocks at once and again.'
+																'These men are fucking you quite ferociously and without wanting to slow down...'
 
 																gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -426,16 +449,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																protect = rand(0,1)
 																pose = 1
 																if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
-																'The men cum and walk away feeling satisfied.'
+																'They soon cum all over your body, one of them twist your nipples lightly before give you a wink before they all departed.'
 																gs 'stat'
 
-																act 'Continue':
+																act 'Continue the sex fest':
 																	*clr & cla
 																	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'guy', rand(19,45)
 																	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 																	guy += 1
 																	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog7.jpg"></center>'
-																	'Then someone uses your ass for his enjoyment.'
+																	'Then someone else grabs your hips and start to penetrate your ass.'
 
 																	protect = rand(0,1)
 																	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
@@ -452,7 +475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																		guy += 1
 
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog8.jpg"></center>'
-																		'Next up is a drunk man barely able to stand straight, his cock is pretty limp as he''s having difficult getting an erection. He doesn''t seem to mind too much as he enters your anus.'
+																		'Next up is a drunk man barely able to stand straight, his cock is pretty limpy as he''s having difficult getting an erection. He doesn''t seem to mind too much as he enters your anus.'
 																		gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','','lubri'
 																		gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 																		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
@@ -460,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																		minut -= 5
 																		gs 'stat'
 
-																		act 'Continue':
+																		act 'Another one':
 																			*clr & cla
 																			gs 'boyStat', 'A172'
 																			npc_sex[$boy] += 1
@@ -477,15 +500,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																			minut -= 5
 																			gs 'stat'
 
-																			act 'Look at Kolyamba':
+																			act 'Kolyamba''s waiting':
 																				*clr & cla
 																				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'a man', rand(19,45)
 																				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 																				guy += 1
 
 																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog10.jpg"></center>'
-																				'You continue to get anally fucked, when the next man decided to take advantage of your pussy. In the corner of your eye, you notice Kolyamba standing in the crowd eagerly awaiting his turn.'
-
+																				'While you are sucking the men near you. In the corner of your eye, you notice Kolyamba stepping up and getting ready for his turn with you.'
+																				'You whimper a little as another man plunge deep inside of you, hard and fast.'
+																				'"What a good little fuck doll, so ready and willing to please, huh?" Kolyamba grins and he watches as you keep copulating with others.'
+														
 																				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 																				minut -= 5
@@ -500,18 +525,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																					if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
 
 																					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral5.jpg"></center>'
-																					'You''re suddenly surprised to find that no one is using your pussy or ass.'
-																					'"I really hope that that was the last one..." you thought.'
-																					'This was just unfortunately wishful thinking. The men soon put you on your knees and then several men shove their cocks in your face.'
+																					'You''re suddenly realized that no one is fucking your pussy or ass.'
+																					'"I hope that that was the last one, it was fun but my body start to feel sour" you thought.'
+																					'This turns out to be wishful thinking as other naked durnken men soon surround you again.'
+																					'The men soon make you kneel your knees before several of them shove their cocks in your face.'
 
-																					act 'Continue':
+																					act 'Continue on':
 																						*clr & cla
 																						gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'stranger', rand(19,45)
 																						gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 																						guy += 1
 
 																						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow1.jpg"></center>'
-																						'"And now, let the slut work herself for a while." you hear someone say. Turning your head you see a naked man lying on the ground. You climb on top of him and start grinding up and down his cock.'
+																						'"And now, let the little nympho doll work herself for a while." you hear someone say. Turning your head you see a naked man lying on the ground.'
+																						'You climb on top of him and start grinding up and down his cock.'
 
 																						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -528,7 +555,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																							guy += 1
 
 																							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow2.jpg"></center>'
-																							'The next guy was also lying on the ground, you climb on top of him on your own, without any hesitation. Someone else steps up to you with his cock out which you immediately began sucking.'
+																							'The next guy was also lying on the ground, you climb on top of him on your own, without any hesitation.' 
+																							'Someone else steps up to you with his cock out which you immediately began sucking.'
 
 																							dick = rand(10,20)
 																							guy += 1
@@ -541,26 +569,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																							if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 																							*pl
 
-																							act 'Continue':
+																							act 'Continue on':
 																								*clr & cla
 																								gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'a man', rand(19,45)
 																								gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 																								guy += 1
 
 																								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow3.jpg"></center>'
-																								'You see another man lying on the ground, as you''ve already gotten used to it, you climb on him too.'
+																								'You see another man lying on the ground, as you''ve already gotten used to it, you climb on the top of him as well.'
 
 																								protect = rand(0,1)
 																								pose = 1
 																								if rand(0,1) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 																								'Bouncing on the cock of another guy you suddenly hear the voice of Kolyamba.'
-																								'"Fuck yeah, finally. I was fucking getting tired of waiting, it better be worth it." he immediately grabs his cock and shoves his cock in your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
+																								'"Fuck yeah, finally. I was fucking getting tired of waiting, it is worth it tho." He winks as you blush.' 
+																								'He immediately grabs and shoves his cock in your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
 																								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 																								minut -= 5
 																								gs 'stat'
 
-																								act 'Continue':
+																								act 'Who''s next?':
 																									*clr & cla
 																									gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'unknown man', rand(19,45)
 																									gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -570,14 +599,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 
 																									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dp1.jpg"></center>'
 																									'Kolyamba and the other man start double pounding you, the feeling you''re experiencing is indescribable.'
-																									'"Wow, a sandwich," you hear someone''s drunken laughter.'
+																									'"Wow, a sandwich," you hear someone''s drunken laughter followed by other drunkards.'
+																									'Kolyamba soon finishes like others and takes a moment to compose himself.'
+																									'Kolyamba tells you that Mitka takes off already to visit Mira because he doesn't want to wait any longer.'																																																
 																									gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 																									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'dick[2]', 'sub', 'gangbang'
 																									minut -= 5
 																									gs 'stat'
 
-																									act 'Continue':
+																									act 'Sandwiched again':
 																										*clr & cla
 																										gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'a villager', rand(19,45)
 																										gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -586,7 +617,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																										guy += 2
 
 																										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dp2.jpg"></center>'
-																										'The next two men appreciating the joke start fucking you simultaneously.'
+																										'The next two men appreciating the joke start fucking you also simultaneously.'
+																										'Kolyamba gives them a nod before he takes off.'
 
 																										gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -594,14 +626,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																										minut -= 5
 																										gs 'stat'
 
-																										act 'Plead for relief':
+																										act 'End in sight':
 																											*clr & cla
 																											minut += 5
 																											if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
 
 																											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral6.jpg"></center>'
-																											'Finally, they manage to break you. With your face down, you fall down in front of their knees pleading them to finish this nightmare.'
-																											'They look at each other a bit confused and order you to start sucking them and that they''ll decide your fate depending on how you good you please them. You immediately began sucking them off, trying to finish quickly.'
+																											'Finally, with a handful of men left, you only want this whole village-gang-fuck-slash-rape-fest to end, you are sore all over, even in place you don't know it existes.'
+																											'You gesture them to gather around you as you kneel down again. You began sucking them off and double fisting pumping some cock, trying to finish them off quickly.'
 																											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																											gs 'stat'
 
@@ -621,7 +653,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																												gs 'stat'
 
 																												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum3.jpg"></center>'
-																												'Like a panicked animal being pushed against a wall you gave it all, using all your might to please them. Your endeavor didn''t go unnoticed, some of men began cumming in your mouth and some of them on your face. There was so much sperm that your chest and abdomen also got covered.'
+																												'Not unlike the final dash of a runner. you give it all into sucking and pleasuring the remaining men'
+																												'Your endeavor didn''t go unnoticed, some of men began groan aprreciatively and start cumming in your mouth and some of them on your face.'
+																												'There was so much sperm that your chest and abdomen also got covered.'
 																												act 'Finally finish':
 																													*clr & cla
 																													minut += 5
@@ -634,6 +668,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 
 																													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum4.jpg"></center>'
 																													'When the last men finally came, the crowd began to disperse, leaving you wrapped in a tattered blanket. You hear them sharing impressions of their drunken antics.'
+																													'Some of them even give you a thumb up, you just don't know what to feel about this whole thing...'
+																													'You hated being forced into anything but it would be a lie that you did not enjoy at some level as well...'
+																													'More importantly, what will you do now and how will you face people in the village?'
+																													'"Best to clean myself up first and deal with the consequences later." You think to yourself."
 																													gs 'arousal', 'end'
 																													gs 'stat'
 																													act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt'gadriver', 'gadbitch'