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Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/master' into del-parco-storyline

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  1. 3 3
      locations/HotelRoom.qsrc
  2. 1 1
      locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc
  3. 8 6
      locations/Komp.qsrc
  4. 1 1
      locations/LariskaSex.qsrc
  5. 1 1
      locations/abduction.qsrc
  6. 2 2
      locations/agentned.qsrc
  7. 2 2
      locations/albina_house_events.qsrc
  8. 1 1
      locations/artem_sex.qsrc
  9. 1 1
      locations/audition_sex1.qsrc
  10. 1 1
      locations/audition_sex2.qsrc
  11. 1 1
      locations/audition_sex3.qsrc
  12. 0 6
      locations/bedr.qsrc
  13. 0 6
      locations/bedr2x.qsrc
  14. 1 1
      locations/bedrPar.qsrc
  15. 10 10
      locations/bicycle.qsrc
  16. 1 1
      locations/cardgame_durak.qsrc
  17. 1 1
      locations/city_clinic.qsrc
  18. 1 1
      locations/city_lake.qsrc
  19. 1 1
      locations/clothing_QV.qsrc
  20. 1 1
      locations/dachain.qsrc
  21. 1 1
      locations/dreams.qsrc
  22. 35 1
      locations/fit.qsrc
  23. 2 2
      locations/gadforest.qsrc
  24. 3 3
      locations/gopsex.qsrc
  25. 2 2
      locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc
  26. 1 1
      locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc
  27. 2 2
      locations/gschool_sex.qsrc
  28. 1 1
      locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc
  29. 108 108
      locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc
  30. 2 2
      locations/homes_properties.qsrc
  31. 8 8
      locations/hookup_after.qsrc
  32. 3 3
      locations/hotel_anna_gear.qsrc
  33. 4 4
      locations/internet_mobile.qsrc
  34. 1 1
      locations/intro_customization.qsrc
  35. 11 7
      locations/journal_quests.qsrc
  36. 3 3
      locations/katja_uni.qsrc
  37. 1 1
      locations/katja_uni_sex.qsrc
  38. 143 143
      locations/meadow.qsrc
  39. 2 2
      locations/mey_home.qsrc
  40. 15 15
      locations/mirafather.qsrc
  41. 61 61
      locations/mirasex.qsrc
  42. 71 71
      locations/miroslava.qsrc
  43. 12 12
      locations/miroslavahome.qsrc
  44. 1 1
      locations/music_onlinemusic.qsrc
  45. 1 0
      locations/nichApartment.qsrc
  46. 1 1
      locations/nichBedroomServant.qsrc
  47. 2 2
      locations/nichBedroomTanja.qsrc
  48. 23 1
      locations/nichTanya.qsrc
  49. 21 19
      locations/obj_din.qsrc
  50. 1 1
      locations/pav_shared_apt.qsrc
  51. 40 26
      locations/saveupdater.qsrc
  52. 10 1
      locations/sitr2x.qsrc
  53. 5 5
      locations/stripclub.qsrc
  54. 9 9
      locations/swamp.qsrc
  55. 23 23
      locations/swamp_woods.qsrc
  56. 12 12
      locations/swamp_yard.qsrc
  57. 4 0
      locations/telefon.qsrc
  58. 43 26
      locations/therapist.qsrc
  59. 1 1
      locations/uni_dorm.qsrc
  60. 1 1
      locations/uni_lessons.qsrc
  61. 1 1
      locations/unused/webcam_site.qsrc
  62. 1 1
      locations/vann.qsrc
  63. 6 6
      locations/vasilyhome.qsrc
  64. 2 6
      locations/wardrobe.qsrc

+ 3 - 3
locations/HotelRoom.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'normal':
 	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$hotel] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.normal.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed2''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
-	'Your hotel room also has a <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(komp = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
+	'Your hotel room also has a <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(komp = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
 	*nl
 	act'Go to the hotel lobby':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'better':
 	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$hotel] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.better.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your hotel room is not very large, but it has everything you need and is quite stylish. The large <a href="exec:gt ''bed2''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
-	'Your hotel room also has a small flat-screen <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(komp = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
+	'Your hotel room also has a small flat-screen <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(komp = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
 	act'Go to the hotel lobby':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			hotelWiFi = 0
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'best':
 	'<center>You have paid to stay for <<hotelRoomDays[$hotel] - daystart>> more nights in the room.</center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.best.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your hotel room is quite spacious, and is beautifully furnished. For a second, you wonder why a hotel in a town like Pavlovsk even has such a luxurious suite. The room is filled with expensive appliances. The gorgeous <a href="exec:gt ''bed2''">double bed</a> takes up most of the room. A modern <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a> (where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing) stands near the entrance of the room. Next to the door, you can find a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>. The door to the <a href="exec:gt ''hotelroom'',''shower1''">bathroom</a> is to the right.'
-	'Your hotel room also has a huge flat-screen <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(komp = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
+	'Your hotel room also has a huge flat-screen <a href="exec:gt ''HotelRoom'',''tv''">TV</a>'+iif(komp = 1, ' and your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk. The hotel offers all guests free Wi-Fi.', '.')
 	act'Go to the hotel lobby':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			hotelWiFi = 0

+ 1 - 1
locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secretroom':
 						act'Use dildo':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tanga4_7.jpg"></center>'
-							'As her quivering body subsides and her panting breath gets under control, you pull the dildo out of her pussy and your tongue out of her ass. She gives you a dreamy smile and reaches over to take the dildo out of your hand. She gets up and sits down between your legs, lifting them up and and dragging your pussy up to her. "You''re so beautiful, I could just eat you right up..." she whispers before she starts licking your pussy, her tongue occasionally darting inside you. As your pussy gets wetter, you reach up and grab her hair. "Yes, faster, faster!" you moan, wanting more. For several minutes, she only uses her tongue before she pulls away, slides the dildo into your wet pussy and begins furiously fucking you with it. Using her other hand, she slips one of her fingers in your ass and begins to finger fuck your ass at the same time.'
+							'As her quivering body subsides and her panting breath gets under control, you pull the dildo out of her pussy and your tongue out of her ass. She gives you a dreamy smile and reaches over to take the dildo out of your hand. She gets up and sits down between your legs, lifting them up and dragging your pussy up to her. "You''re so beautiful, I could just eat you right up..." she whispers before she starts licking your pussy, her tongue occasionally darting inside you. As your pussy gets wetter, you reach up and grab her hair. "Yes, faster, faster!" you moan, wanting more. For several minutes, she only uses her tongue before she pulls away, slides the dildo into your wet pussy and begins furiously fucking you with it. Using her other hand, she slips one of her fingers in your ass and begins to finger fuck your ass at the same time.'
 							$orgasm_txt = 'You can''t take it and quickly orgasm. Your pussy overflows with your juices and you feel them running down your stomach as the intense orgasm rocks your body.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', -5, 'lesbian'

+ 8 - 6
locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'browse':
 		if bankAccount > 0: act 'Visit your bank, maybe to purchase more online time': gt 'komp', 'bank'
 		if shantfoto > 0:act 'Find the girl you took photos of in the park on "Assbook"':gt 'komp', 'foto'
 		if gor_dorm = 7:act 'Read letter from Eugene':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos91'
-		if camhwore = 1 and access['nocamshow'] = 0: act 'Go to MyFreeCams.org': gt 'komp', 'mfc'
+		if camwhore = 1 and access['nocamshow'] = 0: act 'Go to MyFreeCams.org': gt 'komp', 'mfc'
 		if (mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and SchoolAtestat = 0) or func('uniutil', 'student', 'enrolled'):act 'Spend time studying':gt 'komp', 'study'
 		if sucpcinfo = 0 and succubxp > 0: act 'Research the strange feelings you''ve been having': gt 'succubus', 'kompresearch'
 	end
@@ -434,9 +434,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rabota':
 
 		act '<B>Close the browser</B>':gt 'komp','start'
 	else
-		minut += 60
-		elektro += 6
-		gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 60
+		minut += 30
+		elektro += 3
+		gs 'internet_mobile', 'use_internet', $subs, 30
 		komprabota = rand(0, 10)
 		if $loc = 'vasilyhome':komprabota = rand(5, 15)
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1840,8 +1840,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'waitclients':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/camwhore2.jpg"></center>'
 		'Suddenly you hear the handle of your door creak, and an annoyed voice shouting: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what the hell!? Why is the door locked? Let me in!"'
-		'Oh crap, it''s your sister! "Sorry everyone, show''s over!" you whisper to the camera, and you slap your laptop shut. You quickly put your clothes back on and open your door, trying to avoid the scrutinizing gaze of your sister.'
-		'When she''s no longer paying attention to you, you open your laptop again and find yourself in the main lobby of MyFreeCams. You''re a bit bummed that you couldn''t get more out of that session, but cash in your earnings.'
+		'Oh crap, it''s your sister! "Sorry everyone, show''s over!" you whisper to the camera, and you close the stream and hide the website. You quickly put your clothes back on and open your door, trying to avoid the scrutinizing gaze of your sister.'
+		'When she''s no longer paying attention to you, you open the site again and find yourself in the main lobby of MyFreeCams. You''re a bit bummed that you couldn''t get more out of that session, but cash in your earnings.'
+		gs 'internet_mobile', 'add_limitation', 'noporn', 'You can''t watch porn with your sister in the room'
+		gs 'internet_mobile', 'add_limitation', 'nocamshow', 'You can''t do a camshow with your sister in the room'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'komp','mfc'
 	else
 		act 'Turn off the webcam':gt 'komp','startpagemfc'

+ 1 - 1
locations/LariskaSex.qsrc

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lick1':
 	'You start by running your fingers along her outer lips, making her shudder and pant, before laying on your back and pulling her onto your face. You attack her pussy with your tongue, drawing circles around her clitoris, but carefully not touching it.'
 	'She starts grinding into your face as you start fucking her with your tongue, begging for you to keep going. She grabs your head with one hand and reaches behind her to grab one of your tits to keep herself stable, but the pleasure is too much for her to sit still for long.'
 	'As her juices begin to coat your face, you stop licking and just keep your tongue out, letting her decide her own pace. She humps your tongue in glee, loving it, as you reach between your own legs and start rubbing your wet pussy.'
-	'You decide to step it up and and start licking her clit directly, before closing your lips around it and gently sucking. This sends her into a frenzy, moaning her way into pure bliss. As the orgasm breaks over her, her hips begin to jerk, her back arches, and her head swings around wildly.'
+	'You decide to step it up and start licking her clit directly, before closing your lips around it and gently sucking. This sends her into a frenzy, moaning her way into pure bliss. As the orgasm breaks over her, her hips begin to jerk, her back arches, and her head swings around wildly.'
 	$orgasm_txt = 'You are so aroused by the sight of Lariska riding your tongue that your fingers manage to trigger a massive orgasm. Your hips start bucking, and your feet flail in the air, as you try and keep yourself focused enough to continue eating Lariska out.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 	gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -5, 'lesbian'

+ 1 - 1
locations/abduction.qsrc

@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRoom':
 	act 'Look around':gt 'abduction', 'abdFood'
 
 	eventChance = rand(1,100)
-	if eventChance <= 60:
+	if pcs_sleep > 30 and eventChance <= 60:
 		act 'Take a nap (4:00)':gt 'abduction', 'abdSomeoneComing'
 	else
 		act 'Take a nap (4:00)':gt 'abduction', 'abdSleep'

+ 2 - 2
locations/agentned.qsrc

@@ -346,8 +346,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'get_rent_detail_dialogue':
 		$result = '"We have a flat available right now in the St. Petersburg residential area."'
 	else
 		gs 'agentned', 'get_rent_detail_dialogue_hook', $ARGS[1]
-		$result = agency_rental_dialogue
-		killvar 'agency_rental_dialogue'
+		$result = $agency_rental_dialogue
+		killvar '$agency_rental_dialogue'
 	end 
 end
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 					act 'Enter':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/nudealbina.jpg"></center>'
-						'You enter the room and are taken aback slightly when you find a nude Albina laying on her bed, her legs spread. She smiles at you knowingly and winks. It''s obvious that she was rubbing one out before you disturbed her, but she doesn''t seem to care and and stands up and walks over to her closet. She slides on a lacy white thong and skimpy tank top and walks out. "My favourite show is about to start. I think you''ll like it."'
+						'You enter the room and are taken aback slightly when you find a nude Albina laying on her bed, her legs spread. She smiles at you knowingly and winks. It''s obvious that she was rubbing one out before you disturbed her, but she doesn''t seem to care and stands up and walks over to her closet. She slides on a lacy white thong and skimpy tank top and walks out. "My favourite show is about to start. I think you''ll like it."'
 						act 'Go and watch TV': gt 'albina_house_events', 'tv_1'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1292,7 +1292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_drive':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
-	'You plug the flash drive into your laptop and open its contents. You''re presented with a series of videos.'
+	'You plug the flash drive into your computer and open its contents. You''re presented with a series of videos.'
 
 	act 'Watch the first video':
 		cla & *clr

+ 1 - 1
locations/artem_sex.qsrc

@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_surprise':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstfacial.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you are riding him, getting lost in your own pleasure, you glance down at his face and see him tense up before he warns you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>... I''m going to cum..."'
 		'You quickly climb off him, and he rolls up to his knees. You start jerking his cock, with it pointed right at your face. As a stream of his sperm hits you, you keep jerking him off. Then, causing several more streams of cum to land on your face, you stop jerking him off and open your eyes once the last of his cum has been drained.'
-		act 'Continue': gs 'artem_events', 'after_sex', 'facial'
+		act 'Continue': gs 'artem_sex', 'after_sex', 'facial'
 	end
 end
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/audition_sex1.qsrc

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 4 - gave a blowjob and took a facial and swallowed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 5 - gave a blowjob and took a facial
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 6 - fucked and swallowed
-!! audition['cast_couch'] = 7 - fucked and and tried to swallow but failed
+!! audition['cast_couch'] = 7 - fucked and tried to swallow but failed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 8 - fucked and spit
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 9 - fucked and took a facial and swallowed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 10 - fucked and came in condom

+ 1 - 1
locations/audition_sex2.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 4 - gave a blowjob and took a facial and swallowed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 5 - gave a blowjob and took a facial
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 6 - fucked and swallowed
-!! audition['cast_couch'] = 7 - fucked and and tried to swallow but failed
+!! audition['cast_couch'] = 7 - fucked and tried to swallow but failed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 8 - fucked and spit
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 9 - fucked and took a facial and swallowed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 10 - fucked and came in condom

+ 1 - 1
locations/audition_sex3.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 4 - gave a blowjob and took a facial and swallowed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 5 - gave a blowjob and took a facial
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 6 - fucked and swallowed
-!! audition['cast_couch'] = 7 - fucked and and tried to swallow but failed
+!! audition['cast_couch'] = 7 - fucked and tried to swallow but failed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 8 - fucked and spit
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 9 - fucked and took a facial and swallowed
 !! audition['cast_couch'] = 10 - fucked and came in condom

+ 0 - 6
locations/bedr.qsrc

@@ -213,12 +213,6 @@ if sick >= 1:
 end
 
 dynamic $palelady
-!! Computer and internet use.
-if komp = 1:
-	gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access'
-	!!TODO: Need to build a check for husband being at home or something.			
-	'On the other bedside table is your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a>.'
-end
 
 if pcs_horny >= 50: act 'Masturbate':gt 'selfplay', 'start'
 

+ 0 - 6
locations/bedr2x.qsrc

@@ -29,12 +29,6 @@ if pcs_magik >= 6 and spellbefshild = 1 and tobiQW = 0:gt'tobiQW','start'
 *nl
 'Against the wall is a table with a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> above it.'
 *nl
-!! Computer and internet use.
-if komp = 1:
-	!!TODO: Need to build a check for husband being at home or something.			
-	gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access'
-	'On the other bedside table is your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a>.'
-end
 
 *nl
 if husbandrinkday = daystart:

+ 1 - 1
locations/bedrPar.qsrc

@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			msg 'You have detention this morning and must be at school before 09:00.'
 		end
 
-		if komp = 1: 'Your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on your desk.'
+		if komp = 1: 'Your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on your desk.'
 
 		if npc_QW['A33'] > 10:npc_QW['A33'] = 10
 

+ 10 - 10
locations/bicycle.qsrc

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/findvel.jpg"></center>'
 		end
 		*nl
-		'You see your old bike. It looks like it''s still in a good condition, you can probably ride it without any trouble.'
+		'You see your old bike. It looks like it''s still in good condition. You can probably ride it without any trouble.'
 
 		if BikeLoc = 1:
 			act 'Leave your bike alone':gt 'gadsarai'
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/bike_tanga_1.jpg"></center>'
 							*nl
-							'During your ride you lift your skirt several times, showing a glimpse of your panties to a few lucky villagers passing-by.'
+							'You lift your skirt several times during your ride, showing a glimpse of your panties to a few lucky villagers passing by.'
 						else
 							pcs_horny += 10
 							pcs_mood += 10
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/bike_tanga_2.jpg"></center>'
 							*nl
-							'During your ride you lift your skirt several times, showing your bare ass to a few lucky villagers passing-by.'
+							'You lift your skirt several times during your ride, showing your bare ass to a few lucky villagers passing by.'
 						end
 					else
 						pcs_mood += 5
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/bike.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'You ride your bike, enjoying the surrounding country-side.'
+					'You ride your bike, enjoying the surrounding countryside.'
 				end
 				act 'Finish your ride':gt 'gadsarai'
 			end
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 
 		if BikeLoc ! 1:
 			if BikeLoc = 2:
-				$bikeaction = 'Bike to your grandparents barn (0:12)'
+				$bikeaction = 'Bike to your grandparents'' barn (0:12)'
 			elseif BikeLoc = 3:
-				$bikeaction = 'Bike to your grandparents barn (0:44)'
+				$bikeaction = 'Bike to your grandparents'' barn (0:44)'
 			end
 			act '<<$bikeaction>>':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 					pcs_mood += 5
 					pcs_sweat += 1
 					if swamp_clothes = 1:
-						'You remove the terrible excuse for clothing the hunters gave you. You''re sure you can find something better to wear at your grandparents house.'
+						'You remove the terrible excuse for clothing the hunters gave you. You''re sure you can find something better to wear at your grandparents'' house.'
 						gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadforest'
 						gs 'clothing', 'swamp_clothes', 0
 					end
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 					pcs_mood += 15
 					pcs_sweat += 3
 					if swamp_clothes = 1:
-						'You remove the terrible excuse for clothing the hunters gave you. You''re sure you can find something better to wear at your grandparents house.'
+						'You remove the terrible excuse for clothing the hunters gave you. You''re sure you can find something better to wear at your grandparents'' house.'
 						gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadforest'
 						gs 'clothing', 'swamp_clothes', 0
 					end
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 
 				gs 'bicycle', 'clothes'
 				*nl
-				'You jump onto your bike and ride to your grandparent barn.'
+				'You jump onto your bike and ride to your grandparents'' barn.'
 
 				act 'Finish your ride':gt 'gadsarai'
 			end
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'gadsarai' and BikeLoc = 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'gadforest' and BikeLo
 
 				gs 'bicycle', 'clothes'
 				*nl
-				'You jump onto your bike and ride to the hunters cabin.'
+				'You jump onto your bike and ride to the hunters'' cabin.'
 
 				act 'Finish your ride':gt 'swamp_yard','start'
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/cardgame_durak.qsrc

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
-				gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+				gt 'vasilyhome', 'livingroom'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Not now (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -1566,7 +1566,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_reception':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/milkbank/milk_reception.jpg"></center>'
-	'The woman at the reception looks at you annoyed and and stands up.'
+	'The woman at the reception looks at you annoyed and stands up.'
 	'Nurse at the reception: Yes, yes... go this way.'
 	'She waves into a general direction down the hallway.'
 	'Nurse at the reception: There should be a sign on the door, it is only a small room.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_lake.qsrc

@@ -1079,7 +1079,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vlake1':
 	act 'Flirt with them':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/lake/sex/vlake1/vlake2.jpg"></center>'
-		'The men sit next to you and and start flirting with you while trying to sneak a touch of your body.'
+		'The men sit next to you and start flirting with you while trying to sneak a touch of your body.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:

+ 1 - 1
locations/clothing_QV.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clothing_list':
 		i = 1
 		:loopgm_outfits
 		if gm_outfits[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_server', i
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_outfits', i
 			gs 'clothing_QV', 'clo_filter'
 			!!sort by filter
 			if (clothingfilter['quality'] = 0 and CloQuality = clo_i) or (clothingfilter['inhibition'] = 0 and CloInhibit = clo_i) or clothingfilter['number'] = 0:

+ 1 - 1
locations/dachain.qsrc

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'start':
 	*nl
 	if komp = 1:
 		gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access'
-		'Your <a href="exec: internet_free = 2 & gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the table, but there is no internet coverage here.'
+		'Your <a href="exec: internet_free = 2 & gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the table. Unfortunately, there is no internet service in the village.'
 	end
 	*nl
 	

+ 1 - 1
locations/dreams.qsrc

@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypno_dreams':
 	if guy = 0:
 		'You wake up feeling strange and excited, even though you have never had sex the dream felt very real.'
 	elseif pcs_vag > 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
-		'You have never had a cock in your pussy and and yet the sensations from the dream felt very real and have gotten you a little excited.'
+		'You have never had a cock in your pussy and yet the sensations from the dream felt very real and have gotten you a little excited.'
 	elseif stat['vaginal'] > 0 or pcs_vag > 0:
 		'It seems your <<$vaginatipe>> pussy urgently needs some attention.'
 	end

+ 35 - 1
locations/fit.qsrc

@@ -83,6 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dressing room':
 	$locclass = 'changingroom'
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
+
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Dressing</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/gym/locker.jpg"></center>'
 	'Recruiting girls for local track team, the winners will receive cash prizes.'
@@ -93,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dressing room':
 	if nichTanyaKnown = 0 and (rand(1,100) <= 20 or nichDebug = 1):
 		'In the locker room you notice <a href="exec:gt ''fit'', ''fitgirl''">a cute girl</a>.'
 	end
-
+	'There is a <a href="exec: gt ''fit'', ''watercooler''">drinking fountain</a> near the doors to the bathrooms.'
 	act 'Exit the locker room':
         if $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and PCloswimwear = 0:
             if Fit['FMR'] = 0 and vidage <= 40 and hotcat >=6 and fame['city_sport'] >=10:
@@ -825,5 +826,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'FMR':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'watercooler':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 1
+	$menu_arg = 'watercooler'
+	$loc_arg = 'watercooler'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community Center - Restrooms</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/bathroom_entrance.jpg"></center>'
+	
+	act 'Leave': gt 'fit', 'start'
+	act 'Take a drink':
+		*clr & cla
+		frost = 1
+		if alko > 0: alko -= 1
+		minut += 2
+		pcs_health += 10
+		pcs_energy += 4
+		if pcs_hydra >= 100:
+			pcs_hydra += 25
+		else
+			pcs_hydra += 50
+		end
+		cumspclnt = 2
+		gs 'cum_cleanup'
+		gs 'stat'
+		
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/waterfountain.jpg"></center>'		
+		'You drink some water.'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'fit', 'start'
+	end
+end
+
 --- fit ---------------------------------
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -747,8 +747,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'walking':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				if month >= 4 and month <= 10:
-					! 10% chance of finding meadow (needed to advance Miras quest)
-					if rand(0,9) = 0 and meadow = 0 and $forest_args1 = 'forest_edge':
+					!  25% chance of finding meadow (needed to advance Miras quest)
+					if rand(0,4) = 0 and meadow = 0 and $forest_args1 = 'forest_edge':
 						gt 'gadforest_event', 'find_meadow'
 					else
 						if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/miraforest'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'

+ 3 - 3
locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopsex_select':
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
-			gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+			gt 'vasilyhome', 'livingroom'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
-			gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+			gt 'vasilyhome', 'livingroom'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_group':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
-			gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+			gt 'vasilyhome', 'livingroom'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practice':
 					'The squad is already out practicing when you arrive at the locker room and change. You don''t have the privelege of owning a uniform and instead train in your sports clothing.'
 				end
 			else
-				'Heading into the locker room, you see Albina and the rest of the squad have already arrived and are in various states of changing into their outfits while chatting to each other. You head to your locker and and strip down. You pull your uniform out and start getting dressed. You just finish tying your shoes when Albina gives the order to head out into the PE hall.'
+				'Heading into the locker room, you see Albina and the rest of the squad have already arrived and are in various states of changing into their outfits while chatting to each other. You head to your locker and strip down. You pull your uniform out and start getting dressed. You just finish tying your shoes when Albina gives the order to head out into the PE hall.'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game':
 	if pregtime >= 90:
 		gt 'gschool_cheerleading', 'Cheerleadersreact'
 	else
-		'Heading into the locker room, you see Albina and the rest of the squad have already arrived and are in various states of changing into their uniforms while chatting to each other. You head to your locker and and strip down. You pull your uniform out and start getting dressed.'+iif(cheerleadingQW['backup_game'] = 1,' The fact that you are actually wearing the uniform and are going out to perform with them doesn''t seem real to you, even if the girls have only reluctantly let you join them.','')+' You finish tying your shoes when Albina stands on the bench. "You already know that today is game day! So let''s go out there and cheer our boys to victory!"'
+		'Heading into the locker room, you see Albina and the rest of the squad have already arrived and are in various states of changing into their uniforms while chatting to each other. You head to your locker and strip down. You pull your uniform out and start getting dressed.'+iif(cheerleadingQW['backup_game'] = 1,' The fact that you are actually wearing the uniform and are going out to perform with them doesn''t seem real to you, even if the girls have only reluctantly let you join them.','')+' You finish tying your shoes when Albina stands on the bench. "You already know that today is game day! So let''s go out there and cheer our boys to victory!"'
 		'The squad cheers in unison as you all head out onto the field.'
 
 		act 'Go to the field':

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc

@@ -1113,7 +1113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan':
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 225:
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
 			'You see Ivan standing by the lockers and approach him. You cover his eyes from behind with your hands and whisper in his ear. "Guess who?"'
-			'Ivan grabs your hands, pulls free and and turns around. "Judging by the mixture of your perfume and the shame I can smell in the air, who else could it be but the school''s resident minx?" he jokingly replies.'
+			'Ivan grabs your hands, pulls free and turns around. "Judging by the mixture of your perfume and the shame I can smell in the air, who else could it be but the school''s resident minx?" he jokingly replies.'
 			'"Come on, since when are you interested in gossip?" you reply, twirling a lock of hair with your finger and then running your eyes over Ivan''s body. "Besides, a little flirting never hurts, right?" you ask playfully.'
 			*nl
 			'"You sure know how to play this game, I''ll give you that," he replies. You flirt back and forth with each other for the next few minutes. The air between you is almost glowing. "By the way, if you ever decide you want to train your ass, let me know. I can help you with that." Ivan winks.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -1282,7 +1282,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'femdom_petka_doggy':
 				act 'Let him cum on you':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/peggingfacial.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pull your dildo out of his ass and and squat down next to the bench. "Stand up." you tell him. He does as you ask and stands up. You take his dick in your hand and start jerking him off. It doesn''t take long until he starts cumming, his cum splattering all over your chin and breasts. He just keeps cumming, more than you have ever seen anyone cum. Once he finally stops, he has coated you pretty well. You let go of him and stand up.'
+					'You pull your dildo out of his ass and squat down next to the bench. "Stand up." you tell him. He does as you ask and stands up. You take his dick in your hand and start jerking him off. It doesn''t take long until he starts cumming, his cum splattering all over your chin and breasts. He just keeps cumming, more than you have ever seen anyone cum. Once he finally stops, he has coated you pretty well. You let go of him and stand up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A6'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A6'
@@ -1671,7 +1671,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'victor_lockerroom_cum':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/locker9.jpg"></center>'
 	'He grabs you by the hair with one hand while he jerks off with the other. It doesn''t take long before he starts moaning loudly and hot sperm comes streaming out. Most of it lands on your face, but a little ends up in your open mouth. He keeps stroking his dick until he stops cumming. You lick the tip of his dick, licking up the last couple of drops of cum.'
 	*nl
-	'He pulls up his shorts, tucking his dick away as he looks around, apparently making sure no one is coming to find out what the noise was. He then looks down at you and smiles. "Congratulations, you just passed P.E. Now you better get cleaned up." Satisfied, he turns and and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on your knees with his cum all over your face.'
+	'He pulls up his shorts, tucking his dick away as he looks around, apparently making sure no one is coming to find out what the noise was. He then looks down at you and smiles. "Congratulations, you just passed P.E. Now you better get cleaned up." Satisfied, he turns and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on your knees with his cum all over your face.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 	gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A131'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlovsk slut':
 		if soniaPS = 0:
 			'"Go and hang out with the other losers because none of us give a shit about you anymore." Lazar says before turning and walking away. Albina looks at you with what you think is disappointment before she shakes her head and follows Lazar. Having been publicly shamed and disavowed by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 		else	
-			'"Go and hang out with the other losers because none of us give a shit about you anymore. I''m sure you and and Sonia have a lot in common now." Lazar says mockingly before walking away. Albina looks at you with what you think is disappointment before she shakes her head and follows Lazar. Having been publicly shamed and disavowed by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+			'"Go and hang out with the other losers because none of us give a shit about you anymore. I''m sure you and Sonia have a lot in common now." Lazar says mockingly before walking away. Albina looks at you with what you think is disappointment before she shakes her head and follows Lazar. Having been publicly shamed and disavowed by your clique, the other students are ready to prey on your weakness and either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 		end	
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'

+ 108 - 108
locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 	socialchg['tLazar_day'] = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
-	'You decide to walk over and see what the fuss is about. As usual, Lazar is showing off his skills as some of the younger kids challenge him 1-on-1 or even 1-on-2 and he easily bests them. You see several of the girls from school sitting on the bleachers watching Lazar and notice that he glances over at them from time to time, obviously trying to show off.'
-	'As you walk out onto the field, he waves at you to come over before he kicks the ball away so that the younger kids go chasing after it. You stop in your tracks when you see your brother is among the kids chasing the ball and you know he would do anything to embarrass you.'
+	'You decide to walk over and see what the fuss is about. As usual, Lazar is showing off his skills as some younger kids challenge him 1-on-1 or even 1-on-2, and he easily bests them. You see several girls from school sitting on the bleachers watching Lazar and notice that he glances at them from time to time, obviously trying to show off.'
+	'As you walk out onto the field, he waves at you to come over before he kicks the ball away so that the younger kids go chasing after it. You stop in your tracks when you see your brother among the kids chasing the ball, and you know he would do anything to embarrass you.'
 
 	act 'Run away':
 		cla & *clr
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 		npc_rel['A149'] -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
-		'You blush and quickly turn your back before Kolka notices you. Lazar watches dumbfounded, wondering why you suddenly had a change of heart before he shrugs it off and challenges the kids to try and best him again.'
+		'You blush and quickly turn your back before Kolka notices you. Lazar watches dumbfounded, wondering why you suddenly had a change of heart before he shrugs it off and challenges the kids to try besting him again.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
 			'Turning around, you see Kolka and his friends laughing. Your face turns bright red and just as you''re about to yell at him, Lazar steps in. "Hey! Why did you do that?!"'
 			'You sigh. "It''s okay... He''s my stupid little brother. He''s probably just jealous that I''m talking to you."'
-			'Lazar nods before walking over and whispering at them. Kolka and his friends then walk up to you and apologize. You smile and turn to Lazar, giving him a little nod. The kids then start organizing themselves into teams for a game of football, asking Lazar to watch and give them some pointers. He laughs at their request, but eventually agrees. You feel it''s time for you to leave since it looks like Lazar is going to be busy, but just as you start to leave Lazar stops you. "Hey, why don''t you hang around and watch?"'
+			'Lazar nods before walking over and whispering at them. Kolka and his friends then walk up to you and apologize. You smile and turn to Lazar, giving him a little nod. Next, the kids start organizing themselves into teams for a football game, asking Lazar to watch and give them some pointers. He laughs at their request but eventually agrees. Finally, you feel it''s time to leave since it looks like Lazar will be busy, but just as you start to go, Lazar stops you. "Hey, why don''t you hang around and watch?"'
 			!! Maybe show photo request
 			gs 'camera', 'check_person', 'lazar'
 			act 'Maybe another time':
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
 				'You shake your head. "That''s okay, I''ve got some stuff I need to do. Maybe some other time."'
-				'He nods in response. "Okay, suit yourself." He then turns back to watch Kolka and his classmates play.'
+				'He nods in response. "Okay, suit yourself." He then turns back to watch Kolka and his classmates'' play.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 			end
 			act 'Sure':
@@ -58,13 +58,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/football4.jpg"></center>'
 				end
-				'The kids constantly yell at Lazar to watch them and he gives them support or advice, but after a while, they get into the game and you''re pretty sure they''ve forgotton that you and Lazar are there. "Hey, I''m going to take off. Talk to you later, okay?"'
+				'The kids constantly yell at Lazar to watch them, and he gives them support or advice. Still, after a while, they get into the game, and you''re pretty sure they''ve forgotten that you and Lazar are there. "Hey, I''m going to take off. Talk to you later, okay?"'
 				if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50 and hotcat > 5 and fame['pav_slut'] > 150:
-					'He reaches over and grabs you by the hand to stop you. "Why don''t you stick around? We could go over there behind those trees and have a little fun..."'
-					'"Yeah? What kind of fun?" you reply and he smiles.'
-					'"You know... fun." His body language and tone of voice leaves no doubt in your mind what he means, but you want him to say it anyway.'
-					'"Yeah, and exactly what is fun to you?" you ask teasingly and he grins. "Well... blowjobs are fun."'
-					'You roll your eyes and look over at Kolka and his friends. "They might see." you tell him while indicating to them. The trees aren''t that far away from the field.'
+					'He reaches over and grabs you by the hand to stop you. "Why don''t you stick around? We could go behind those trees and have a little fun..."'
+					'"Yeah? What kind of fun?" you reply, and he smiles.'
+					'"You know... fun." His body language and tone of voice leave you no doubt about what he means, but you want him to say it anyway.'
+					'"Yeah, and exactly what is fun to you?" you ask teasingly, and he grins. "Well... blowjobs are fun."'
+					'You roll your eyes and look over at Kolka and his friends. "They might see," you tell him while indicating to them. The trees aren''t that far away from the field.'
 					'He shakes his head confidently. "They won''t see anything. We''ll be too far away and they won''t even be looking anyway."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -73,10 +73,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
-							'You roll your eyes. You''re not taking any chances. "No, I don''t think it''s a good idea." you tell him as you pull your hand free from his.'
+							'You roll your eyes. You''re not taking any chances. "No, I don''t think it''s a good idea," you tell him as you pull your hand free from his.'
 							'He shrugs and laughs. "Well, you can''t blame a guy for trying."'
 							'You shake your head and start walking away. "See you later, Lazar."'
-							'"Bye <<$pcs_nickname>>." he calls after you.'
+							'"Bye, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he calls after you.'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 						end
 					else
@@ -87,14 +87,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 						npc_rel['A149'] += 1
 						minut += 2
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/stay.jpg"></center>'
-						'Your brother and his friends seem engrossed in the game and haven''t looked your way in a while, and the treeline is far enough way for them to hopefully not see anything. "Sure, why not? Let''s go."'
+						'Your brother and his friends seem engrossed in the game and haven''t looked your way in a while, and the treeline is far enough for them to hopefully not see anything. "Sure, why not? Let''s go."'
 						'He grins and walks with you over to the trees. Once you''re behind the trees, he lets go of your hand and unbuttons his pants, pulling his underwear down enough for his stiffening cock to spring free. You take hold of it and give it a few strokes, feeling it harden in your hand.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'hj', 2, 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Get on your knees':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You get down on your knees and take his cock into your mouth. You start sucking his dick while stroking his shaft and playing with his balls, his moans of pleasure telling he''s enjoying it. After a few minutes, he starts trying to thrust into your mouth. "I want to fuck you now, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+							'You get down on your knees and take his cock into your mouth. You start sucking his dick while stroking his shaft and playing with his balls, his moans of pleasure saying he''s enjoying it. Then, after a few minutes, he starts trying to thrust into your mouth. "I want to fuck you now, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 							gs 'stat'
 							gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/bjtalk.jpg"></center>'
-									'You pop his dick out of your mouth and slowly stroke with your hand. "I said I would give you a blowjob, nothing else."'
-									'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! You know you want it just as bad as I do. Just let me fuck you, I promise I won''t cum in you."'
+									'You pop his dick out of your mouth and slowly stroke it with your hand. "I said I would give you a blowjob, nothing else."'
+									'"Come on, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You know you want it just as bad as I do. Just let me fuck you. I promise I won''t cum in you."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'hj', 1, 'exhibitionism'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Give in': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'lazar_vaginal'
@@ -116,19 +116,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLazar':
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/bj2.jpg"></center>'
 											'You''re getting a little annoyed at the way he keeps pushing things. "I said no! We can just stop if you want?"'
-											'"No, a blowjob is fine. I just thought you wanted to get off too is all..." His excuse rings hollow in your ears as you take his dick back into your mouth and start sucking him off again.'
+											'"No, a blowjob is fine. I just thought you wanted to get off too, is all..." His excuse rings hollow in your ears as you take his dick back into your mouth and start sucking him off again.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 											gs 'stat'
 											act 'Continue':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/bj3.jpg"></center>'
-												'You keep working his cock with your mouth as you stroke his shaft and play with his balls. He moans softly in pleasure, enjoying the blowjob you''re giving him.'
+												'You keep working his cock with your mouth as you stroke his shaft and play with his balls. He moans softly, enjoying the blowjob you''re giving him.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 												gs 'stat'
 												act 'No warning':
 													*clr & cla
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/bj3.jpg"></center>'
-													'You keep one eye on the sports field to make sure no one is coming over when you suddenly feel his cum squirting into your mouth without warning. When he finishes cumming, he pulls his dick out of your mouth and tucks it away before buttoning his pants up as you swallow his cum. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. I needed that, but I should get back before they notice I''m gone. Catch you later." He turns and heads back to the sports field.'
+													'You keep one eye on the sports field to ensure no one is coming over when you suddenly feel his cum squirting your mouth without warning. When he finishes cumming, he pulls his dick out of your mouth and tucks it away before pressing his pants as you swallow his cum. "Thanks, Sveta. I needed that, but I should get back before they notice I''m gone. Catch you later." He turns and heads back to the sports field.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 													gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A149'
 													gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -160,20 +160,20 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_vaginal':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/getfucked.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Fine, you can fuck me." you tell him and he grins. "Awesome. Now just turn around and bend over."'
-	'You turn around and face the tree before pulling your clothes aside to expose your pussy to him and bending over. You feel the tip of his dick rubbing against your wet slit before he slides his massive dick into your pussy. You feel it stretching to accommodate him and you feel completely full.'
+	'"Fine, you can fuck me," you tell him, and he grins. "Awesome. Now just turn around and bend over."'
+	'You turn around and face the tree before pulling your clothes aside to expose your pussy to him and bending over. You feel the tip of his dick rubbing against your wet slit before he slides his massive dick into your pussy. You can feel it stretching to accommodate him and feel completely full.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get fucked':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/vaginal1.jpg"></center>'
-		'It starts to feel amazing despite it''s size, or maybe because of it. Either way you feel yourself getting wetter as he fucks your pussy and you start moaning in pleasure, trying not to be too loud and attracting any attention.'
+		'It starts to feel amazing despite its size, or maybe because of it. Either way, you feel yourself getting wetter as he fucks your pussy. Then, you start moaning in pleasure, trying not to be too loud and attract any attention.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep going':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/vaginal2.jpg"></center>'
-			'As your moans get louder, he starts fucking you harder and faster, eventually fucking you balls deep with each thrust. His dick slides out of you during one thrust, but he misses when he tries sliding it back in. Instead of penetrating your pussy, his massive dick slides balls deep into your ass with a single thrust.'
+			'As your moans get louder, he starts fucking you harder and faster, eventually fucking you balls-deep with each thrust. His dick slides out of you during one thrust, but he misses when he tries sliding it back in. So instead of penetrating your pussy, his massive dick slides balls deep into your ass with a single thrust.'
 			anal_slip += 4
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -181,18 +181,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_vaginal':
 			act 'Wrong hole!':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You squeal at the pain and try to pull away, but he has a firm grip of your hips. When you try to pull away, he just pulls you back as he pounds your ass without mercy. "Lazar, stop! That''s my ass!"'
+				'You squeal at the pain and try to pull away, but he has a firm grip on your hips. When you try to pull away, he pulls you back as he pounds your ass without mercy. "Lazar, stop! That''s my ass!"'
 				'He keeps pounding away and grunting with exertion. "What?"'
 				*nl
 				'"I said that''s my asshole! You''re fucking my ass!" you cry out as you keep trying in vain to get him to slow down or pull away.'
-				'He looks at you before looking down. He slows down, but doesn''t stop fucking you as he grins. "Sorry, I didn''t notice. Seriously, it was an accident! I''m almost there anyway."'
+				'He looks at you before looking down. He slows down but doesn''t stop fucking you as he grins. "Sorry, I didn''t notice. Seriously, it was an accident! I''m almost there anyway."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/buttcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'A few minutes later, he pulls out and you feel his warm cum splatter across your ass cheeks. When he finishes cumming, he tucks his dick away and buttons his pants up. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. I needed that, but I should get back before they notice I''m gone. Catch you later." He turns and heads back to the sports field, leaving you bent over the tree with his cum running down your ass.'
+					'A few minutes later, he pulls out, and you feel his warm cum splattered across your ass cheeks. When he finishes cumming, he tucks his dick away and buttons his pants up. "Thanks, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I needed that, but I should get back before they notice I''m gone. Catch you later." He turns and heads back to the sports field, leaving you bent over the tree with his cum running down your ass.'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A149'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
@@ -208,11 +208,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_anal':
 	'"Fine, but you can only fuck my ass!"'
 	'His grin tells you he doesn''t mind at all. "Works for me. Now just turn around and bend over."'
 	if lubri = 0:
-		'You turn around and face the tree before pulling your clothes aside to expose your ass to him and bending over. He spits on your asshole a few times and rubs it in with his fingers to give you some lubrication. You then feel the tip of his dick pressing up against your wet hole and the pressure builds until his dick pops into your asshole, causing you to gasp in pain. He pauses to let you adjust before he starts to slowly fuck your ass.'
+		'You turn around and face the tree before pulling your clothes aside to expose your ass to him and bending over. He spits on your asshole a few times and rubs it with his fingers to give you some lubrication. You then feel the tip of his dick pressing up against your wet hole, and the pressure builds until his dick pops into your asshole, causing you to gasp in pain. Finally, he pauses to let you adjust before he starts to slowly fuck your ass.'
 		anal_slip += 4
 	else
 		lubri -= 1
-		'You dig around in your purse and pull out your bottle of lube and hand it to him. You then turn around and face the tree before pulling your clothes aside to expose your ass to him and bending over. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and rubs it in to give you some lubrication before you feel the tip of his dick press up against your hole and the pressure builds until the head of his dick pops into your asshole, causing you to gasp in pain. He pauses to let you adjust and squirts a little more lube onto his dick before he starts to slowly fuck your ass.'
+		'You dig around in your purse, pull out your bottle of lube, and hand it to him. You then turn around and face the tree before pulling your clothes aside to expose your ass to him and bending over. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and rubs it in to give you some lubrication before you feel the tip of his dick press up against your hole. The pressure builds until the head of his dick pops into your asshole, causing you to gasp in pain. Then, he pauses to let you adjust and squirts a little more lube onto his dick before he starts to slowly fuck your ass.'
 		anal_slip += 10
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -220,20 +220,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_anal':
 	act 'Get fucked':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-		'He tries to be gentle, but it feels like he''s splitting your ass in two. He keeps working his cock deeper and deeper up your ass and you take several deep breaths, trying to relax to make it feel more pleasant. It starts to feel good after a few seconds despite it''s size, or maybe because of it. Either way the pain gives way to pleasure and you start to moan as he holds you by the hips and fucks you.'
+		'He tries to be gentle, but it feels like he''s splitting your ass. He keeps working his cock deeper and deeper up your ass, and you take several deep breaths, trying to relax to make it feel more pleasant. It starts to feel good after a few seconds despite its size, or maybe because of it. Either way, the pain gives way to pleasure, and you start to moan as he holds you by the hips and fucks you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep going':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-			'He steadily works himself deeper into your ass until you feel his balls slapping against your pussy with each thrust. Once he''s sure you''re into it, he tightens his grip on your hips and starts to really hammer your ass, grunting and moaning loudly. You can tell he is getting close.'
+			'He steadily works deeper into your ass until you feel his balls slap against your pussy with each thrust. Once he''s sure you''re into it, he tightens his grip on your hips and starts hammering your ass, grunting and moaning loudly. You can tell he is getting close.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Cum':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/sportsfield/buttcum.jpg"></center>'
-			    'A few seconds later, he pulls out and you feel his warm cum splatter across your ass cheeks. When he finishes cumming, he tucks his dick away and buttons his pants up. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. I needed that, but I should get back before they notice I''m gone. Catch you later." He turns and heads back to the sports field, leaving you bent over the tree with his cum running down your ass.'
+			    'A few seconds later, he pulls out, and you feel his warm cum splatter your ass cheeks. When he finishes cumming, he tucks his dick away and buttons his pants up. "Thanks, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I needed that, but I should get back before they notice I''m gone. Catch you later." He turns and heads back to the sports field, leaving you bent over the tree with his cum running down your ass.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A149'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
@@ -256,10 +256,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tIvan':
 		npc_rel['A3'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You carefully listen while Ivan rambles a bit. "You should join us sometime <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m sure you can''t be any worse than Fedor over here."'
+		'You carefully listen while Ivan rambles a bit. "You should join us sometime, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You can''t be any worse than Fedor over here."'
 		'He winks at Fedor, who makes a funny face while you smile back. "I''ll think about it."'
 		'"Great!" Ivan replies, "Well, that''s enough resting, Fedor. Time for another lap."'
-		'The two of them bid you farewell and you watch them disappear over the horizon.'
+		'The two of them bid you farewell, and you watch them disappear over the horizon.'
 		act 'Return to the secluded beach': gt 'pav_lake_nude'
 
 	end
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tFedor':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"> <img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big5.jpg"></center>'
 	'A flustered Fedor is huffing and puffing. "You really need to take it easy. I can barely keep up with you, Ivan..."'
-	'"Come on, Fedor. Don''t sell yourself short. You''ve got potential and remember the dirtbag you wanted to get revenge on..." Ivan replies in an attempt to motivate a dejected Fedor.'
+	'"Come on, Fedor. Don''t sell yourself short. You''ve got potential, and remember the dirtbag you wanted to get revenge on..." Ivan replies in an attempt to motivate a dejected Fedor.'
 	act 'Ask about the dirtbag':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 5
@@ -279,13 +279,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tFedor':
 		npc_rel['A3'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"> <img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big5.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I don''t mind to pry but what is this about a dirtbag?" you ask.'
+		'"I don''t mean to pry, but what is this about a dirtbag?" you ask.'
 		'Fedor looks uncomfortable, but Ivan gives him a nudge. "Go on, tell her."'
-		'Fedor starts telling you about a boxing fight last year where he went against an opponent that beat him badly and ever since then he''s been seeking revenge.'
-		'Ivan chimes in. "And we just found out our opponents for the next fight and Fedor here is going to meet that guy again."'
+		'Fedor starts by telling you about a boxing fight last year where he went against an opponent that beat him badly, and ever since then, he''s been seeking revenge.'
+		'Ivan chimes in. "And we just found out who our opponents will be for the next fight, and Fedor here is going to meet that guy again."'
 		'You give Fedor an encouraging smile. "I''m sure you''ll do great! He''s got nothing on you."'
 		'Fedor acknowledges your attempt to motivate him by giving you a slight nod as he takes a deep breath. "No time to rest. Let''s go!" he says before taking off running again.'
-		'Ivan gives you a thumb up as he starts running after Fedor. "Hey champ, wait up! You''re running too fast!"'
+		'Ivan gives you a thumbs-up as he starts running after Fedor. "Hey champ, wait up! You''re running too fast!"'
 		act 'Return to the secluded beach':gt 'pav_lake_nude'
 	end
 end
@@ -297,36 +297,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan_fedor_naked':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/talknaked1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You put on your best smile, despite feeling exposed. You really should have considered that you might run into someone you knew while walking around the beach naked. "Hey guys..."'
 	if fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
-		'Ivan has a huge grin on his face while Fedor looks shocked and tries to cover you up with his hands. "What are you doing <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"'
+		'Ivan has a massive grin, while Fedor looks shocked and tries to cover you up with his hands. "What are you doing, <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"'
 		'You shrug in response. "You know, just out to enjoy the cool breeze and warm sun on my skin while I take a walk. How about you guys?" you reply while trying to act as casual as you can.'
-		'Fedor glances around. "What if someone else sees you? What will they think? What will they say?" He sounds very worried.'
+		'Fedor glances around. "What if someone else sees you? What will they think? What will they say?" He sounds perturbed.'
 		*nl
-		'You frown. "I understand you''re worried about what people will think and say about your girlfriend Fedor, but this is my body and this makes me happy. I don''t care what anyone else says. Unless you''re ashamed of me?"'
-		'He shakes his head while Ivan walks off a little, obviously not wanting to get involved. "No no, it''s not that. It''s just... I worry... never mind." He sighs. "You''re right, it is your body and if you want to do this, then I won''t stop you."'
-		'You smile at him and give him a quick kiss which is interupted by Ivan. "You ready? We''ve got a few more miles to go."'
+		'You frown. "I understand you''re worried about what people will think and say about your girlfriend, Fedor, but this is my body, and it makes me happy. I don''t care what anyone else says. Unless you''re ashamed of me?"'
+		'He shakes his head while Ivan walks off a little, obviously not wanting to get involved. "No, no, it''s not that. It''s just... I worry... never mind." He sighs. "You''re right, it is your body, and if you want to do this, then I won''t stop you."'
+		'You smile at him and give him a quick kiss, interrupted by Ivan. "You ready? We''ve got a few more miles to go."'
 		'Fedor nods at Ivan before turning back to you. "Okay, I''ve got to go. Talk to you later, okay?" He turns and runs after Ivan, who has already started running again.'
 		act 'Leave them to their training':gt 'pav_lake_nude'
 	else
-		'Ivan has a huge grin while Fedor seems to be shocked. "So what are you up to <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+		'Ivan has a massive grin, while Fedor seems to be shocked. "So what are you up to, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		'You shrug in response. "You know, just out to enjoy the cool breeze and warm sun on my skin while I take a walk. How about you guys?" you reply while trying to act as casual as you can.'
-		'Ivan chuckles. "We were out training. So, is it normal for you to be walking around naked like this?"'
+		'Ivan chuckles. "We were out training. So, is it normal for you to walk around naked like this?"'
 		act 'I made a mistake':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/coverupnaked.jpg"></center>'
-			'You blush and suddenly feel very self conscious, quickly covering yourself up with your hands as best as you can. "I... I made a mistake. I don''t know what I was thinking. Please don''t tell anyone." you beg them.'
-			'Fedor shakes his head. "Don''t worry, we won''t tell anyone." he says as he glances at Ivan.'
+			'You blush and suddenly feel very self-conscious, quickly covering yourself up with your hands as best as possible. "I... I made a mistake. I don''t know what I was thinking. Please don''t tell anyone." you beg them.'
+			'Fedor shakes his head. "Don''t worry, we won''t tell anyone," he says as he glances at Ivan.'
 			'Ivan nods. "Yeah, not a problem. We won''t tell anyone, but if you don''t want anyone to see you, maybe you should go put some clothes on?" he says with a bemused smile.'
-			'You nod and turn to head back towards your clothes. "Thanks guys, see you around." With that, they wave goodbye and go back to their run.'
+			'You nod and turn to head back towards your clothes. "Thanks, guys. See you around." With that, they wave goodbye and go back to their run.'
 			act 'Go to your clothes':gt 'pav_lake_nude'
 		end
 		act 'I''m not ashamed':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/talknaked1.jpg"></center>'
 			if hotcat => 5:
-				'"I have nothing to be ashamed of. This is how I was made and I look amazing, plus I like showing it off." you reply.'
-				'Their eyes roam all over your naked body and you feel more than a bit of a thrill from it. "Yeah you do, and no you have nothing to be ashamed of." Ivan says. "Yeah, you have every reason to be proud." Fedor adds before they exchange looks and grin at you.'
+				'"I have nothing to be ashamed of. This is how I was made, and I look amazing, plus I like showing it off," you reply.'
+				'Their eyes roam all over your naked body, and you feel more than a thrill from it. "Yeah, you do, and no, you have nothing to be ashamed of," Ivan says. "Yeah, you have every reason to be proud," Fedor adds before they exchange looks and grin at you.'
 				'You arch a brow at them. "What?"'
-				'They exchange looks again and Ivan speaks up. "Would you want to go somewhere more private where we could...appreciate your body even more?" You know exactly what he means.'
+				'They exchange looks again, and Ivan speaks up. "Would you want to go somewhere more private where we could...appreciate your body even more?" But, of course, you know precisely what he means.'
 				if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 					act 'Sure': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'ivanfedor_threesome'
 				end
@@ -335,14 +335,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan_fedor_naked':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/talknaked1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You shake your head with a bemused smile. "Thanks, but just because I like to walk around naked doesn''t mean I want to have sex."'
-					'They both shake their heads and stammer and talk over each other while trying to explain themselves.'
-					'You interrupt them. "It''s okay, I don''t mind you asking but no."'
+					'They both shake their heads, stammer, and talk over each other while trying to explain themselves.'
+					'You interrupt them. "It''s okay. I don''t mind you asking but no."'
 					'Ivan nods. "Yeah, cool. Well okay... I guess we''ll get back to training then... Have fun on your walk." With that, they wave goodbye and go back to their run.'
 					act 'Leave them to their training':gt 'pav_lake_nude'
 				end
 			else
-				'"I have nothing to be ashamed of. This is how I was made and I look amazing, plus I like showing it off." you reply.'
-				'They''re both looking at anything but your naked body, and Ivan scratches his head while looking up at the clouds. "Yeah, I guess. But... we should really get back to training." Ivan says. "Yeah, have fun." Fedor adds and they exchange looks before they go back to their run.'
+				'"I have nothing to be ashamed of. This is how I was made, and I look amazing, plus I like showing it off," you reply.'
+				'They''re both looking at anything but your naked body, and Ivan scratches his head while looking up at the clouds. "Yeah, I guess. But... we should really get back to training." Ivan says. "Yeah, have fun," Fedor adds, and they exchange looks before returning to their run.'
 				act 'Leave them to their training':gt 'pav_lake_nude'
 			end
 		end
@@ -353,14 +353,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanfedor_threesome':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/sex/ivanfed3some1.jpg"></center>'
-	'The three of you walk further down the beach past the sauna where almost no one ever goes. Once you''re sure no one else is around, the boys start stripping off their clothes as you drop to your knees between them. You take both their cocks in your hands and start jerking them until you get them both rock hard.'
+	'The three of you walk further down the beach past the sauna, where almost no one ever goes. Once you''re sure no one else is around, the boys start stripping off their clothes as you drop to your knees between them. You take their cocks in your hands and start jerking them until you get them both rock hard.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', -5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Suck them':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/sex/ivanfed3some2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once they''re both hard, you take Ivan''s cock into your mouth and start sucking it while you keep stroking it with your hand. You use your other hand to keep stroking Fedor''s dick. After a few minutes, you switch cocks and the boys give each other a high five.'
+		'Once they''re both hard, you take Ivan''s cock into your mouth and start sucking it while you keep stroking it with your hand. You use your other hand to keep stroking Fedor''s dick. After a few minutes, you switch cocks, and the boys give each other a high five.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', -5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanfedor_threesome':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/sex/ivanfed3some3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once you switch back to sucking on Ivan''s cock, Fedor takes hold of your hips and pulls you up. You keep sucking Ivan''s cock, which forces you to bend over as Fedor pulls you up into a standing position. Fedor steps in behind you and teases your clit to get you wet before he rubs the tip of his dick against your slit. Once he is sure you''re wet enough, he pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside your pussy, stretching and filling it out. He slowly starts fucking you, steadily going deeper with each thrust as you suck on Ivan''s cock.'
+			'Once you switch back to sucking on Ivan''s cock, Fedor takes hold of your hips and pulls you up. You keep sucking Ivan''s cock, which forces you to bend over as Fedor pulls you up into a standing position. Next, Fedor steps in behind you and teases your clit to get you wet before he rubs the tip of his dick against your slit. Once he is sure you''re wet enough, he pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside your pussy, stretching and filling it out. Then, he slowly starts fucking you, steadily going deeper with each thrust as you suck on Ivan''s cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', -5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -376,8 +376,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanfedor_threesome':
 				cla & *clr
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A3'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/sex/ivanfed3some4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You moan around Ivan''s cock as Fedor fucks you before Ivan interupts things. "Fedor, get on your back so <<$pcs_nickname>> can ride you. I want some of that ass."'
-				'Fedor pulls out of you and lays down on his back. You straddle him and Ivan fingers you before smearing your juices on his dick. You lower yourself down onto Fedor''s dick and it slides inside your pussy. Ivan kneels down behind you, spits on your asshole and rubs it with his fingers before you feel the tip of his dick pressing against your asshole. The pressure builds until the head of his dick pops in your ass and Ivan starts slowly fucking your ass, being as gentle as he can while you adjust to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick stretching your ass.'
+				'You moan around Ivan''s cock as Fedor fucks you before Ivan interrupts things. "Fedor, get on your back so <<$pcs_nickname>> can ride you. I want some of that ass."'
+				'Fedor pulls out of you and lays down on his back. You straddle him, and Ivan fingers you before smearing your juices on his dick. You lower yourself down onto Fedor''s dick, which slides inside your pussy. Ivan kneels down behind you, spits on your asshole and rubs it with his fingers before you feel the tip of his dick pressing against your asshole. The pressure builds until the head of his dick pops in your ass, and Ivan starts slowly fucking your ass, being as gentle as he can. At the same time, you adjust to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick stretching your ass.'
 				anal_slip += 4
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
@@ -385,17 +385,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivanfedor_threesome':
 				act 'Double the fun':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/sex/ivanfed3some5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Ivan grabs your hips and holds them in place while Fedor thrusts into your pussy from below and Ivan pounds your asshole. You find yourself moaning louder and louder as the boys fuck both your holes.'
+					'Ivan grabs your hips and holds them in place, Fedor thrusts into your pussy below, and Ivan pounds your asshole. You moan louder and louder as the boys fuck both your holes.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Cum':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/event/sex/ivanfed3some5.jpg"></center>'
-						'They both start grunting and you can tell they''re both getting close. They both quickly pull out of you and stand up as you get on your knees. Their cum starts splattering over your breasts, covering them. You can feel it running down your chest until they finally both finish.'
+						'They both start grunting, and you can tell they''re both getting close. Then, they both quickly pull out of you and stand up as you get on your knees. Their cum starts splattering over your breasts, covering them. You can feel it running down your chest until they finally both finish.'
 						*nl
-						'They start getting dressed. "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re amazing." Fedor says when he finishes.'
-						'Ivan nods in agreement. "We should get back to our training. I hope we see you around again <<$pcs_nickname>>. Catch you later." Ivan says with a wink. They wave goodbye and start running again.'
+						'They start getting dressed. "That was great, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''re amazing," Fedor says when he finishes.'
+						'Ivan nods in agreement. "We should get back to our training. I hope we see you around again, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Catch you later." Ivan says with a wink. They wave goodbye and start running again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'group', 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A3'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A5'
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tSvyatoslav':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big8.jpg"></center>'
 	'You wait patiently until Svyatoslav ends one of his runs. "You''re improving greatly!" you compliment him with a smile.'
-	'"Thanks! I''ve been trying my hardest to one up Ivan this year." he replies while panting as sweat runs down his forehead.'
+	'"Thanks! I''ve been trying my hardest to one-up Ivan this year," he replies while panting as sweat runs down his forehead.'
 	act 'Keep up the good work':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 5
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tSvyatoslav':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big8.jpg"></center>'
 		'You give him some encouraging words. "If you continue working out as hard as you''re currently doing, then I''m sure you''ll finally be able to beat Ivan."'
-		'Still panting, Svyatoslav smiles and nods while picking up the water bottle and taking a sip. You stand and chat with him a little longer until he tells you that his break is up and once again gets ready to do some sprints.'
+		'Still panting, Svyatoslav smiles and nods while picking up the water bottle and taking a sip. You stand and chat with him a little longer until he tells you that his break is up and again gets ready to sprint.'
 		act 'Leave him to it': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 	end
 	act 'Laugh at him':
@@ -433,8 +433,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tSvyatoslav':
 		npc_rel['A8'] -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big8.jpg"></center>'
-		'You can''t contain your laughter as you listen to him. "Don''t be silly! You''ll never be able to beat Ivan. You''ve tried and failed so many times that it''s not even funny anymore."'
-		'You can clearly see that Svyatoslav is agitated by your words. "You know what, I''ll show you and the rest of the school that I''m going to be the best. I''ll beat Ivan and you''ll feel like idiots for laughing at me!"'
+		'You can''t contain your laughter as you listen to him. "Don''t be silly! You''ll never be able to beat Ivan. You''ve tried and failed so often that it''s not even funny anymore."'
+		'You can clearly see that Svyatoslav is agitated by your words. "You know what, I''ll show you and the rest of the school that I will be the best. I''ll beat Ivan, and you''ll feel like idiots for laughing at me!"'
 		'"Okay, champ, take it easy now." you patronize him.'
 		'Svyatoslav scoffs before he turns and starts sprinting up and down the makeshift track while ignoring you.'
 		act 'Leave him to it': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVanya':
 	socialchg['tVanya_day'] = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big165.jpg"></center>'
-	'Vanya stops in his tracks when he sees you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re out early today!" he says with a subtle smile.'
+	'Vanya stops in his tracks when he sees you. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re out early today!" he says with a subtle smile.'
 	'"The same can be said about you!" you answer playfully.'
 	'"Well, to be honest, I was looking for something..." he mumbles before trailing off.'
 	act 'Ask what he''s up to':
@@ -457,10 +457,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVanya':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big165.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What are you up to, Vanya?" you impatiently ask.'
-		'Vanya lights up in a snicker. "Well, since you asked, I might as well tell you." He goes silent for a few seconds before continuing. "I was looking for a secluded spot for Vicky and I..."'
-		'Looking at him, you start loudly laughing. "Why am I not surprised? That''s so typical of you!"'
-		'"Well, you know, there''s barely anyone in the park right now, so seems like the perfect time to be on the look out..." He touches the back of his head and nervously laughs.'
-		'"If it was anyone else I would say you were being really weird, but I get that. I hope you find a decent spot. And tell Vicky I said hi!" You give him a smile and a wink.'
+		'Vanya lights up in a snicker. "Well, since you asked, I might as well tell you." He goes silent for a few seconds before continuing. "I was looking for a secluded spot for Vicky and me..."'
+		'Looking at him, you start laughing loudly. "Why am I not surprised? That''s so typical of you!"'
+		'"Well, you know, there''s barely anyone in the park right now, so it seems like the perfect time to be on the lookout..." He touches the back of his head and nervously laughs.'
+		'"If it was anyone else, I would say you were being really weird, but I get that. So I hope you find a decent spot. And tell Vicky I said hi!" You give him a smile and a wink.'
 		'"Sure, sure!" he replies as he slowly starts scampering away from you.'
 		act 'Go back to what you were doing': gt 'pav_park', 'start'
 	end
@@ -471,8 +471,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tErast':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big150.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Erast. You don''t want to bother him, but you feel the need to ask him how it works. "Sorry Erast, I don''t want to bother you..." you start as he puts down the weights.'
-	'"Oh, hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. You need some help?" Erast politely replies.'
+	'You walk up to Erast. You don''t want to bother him, but you must ask him how it works. "Sorry, Erast, I don''t want to bother you..." you start as he puts down the weights.'
+	'"Oh, hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You need some help?" Erast politely replies.'
 	act 'Nod your head':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 20
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tErast':
 		'You silently nod your head. "Have you seen the new machine they''ve added?"'
 		'Erast gives a subtle smile and nods. "Yeah, what about it?"'
 		'You squirm a little as you continue. "Well, I want to try it out, but I don''t know how to use it..."'
-		'"Don''t worry, <<$pcs_nickname>> I''ll show you on how to use it." He leads you back to the machine and shows you on how to usee it, making sure that you''ve got the hang of it before leaving.'
+		'"Don''t worry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll show you how to use it." He leads you back to the machine and shows you how to use it, ensuring you''ve got the hang of it before leaving.'
 		act 'Thank him':gt 'pav_commcenter'
 	end
 	act 'Shake your head':
@@ -493,8 +493,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tErast':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big150.jpg"></center>'
-		'Feeling rather embarrassed, you quickly shake your head as your face turns bright red.'
-		'"Are you sure you don''t need any help?" he asks once more.'
+		'Feeling somewhat embarrassed, you quickly shake your head as your face turns bright red.'
+		'"Are you sure you don''t need any help?" he asks again.'
 		'"N-No, I''m sorry to have bothered you..." you shyly reply and quickly move away.'
 		'Erast is still scratching his head as you quickly dash away.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'pav_commcenter'
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska_gm_1':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big13.jpg"></center>'
 	if LariskaQW['story'] = 4:
-		'She sees you coming into the store behind her and smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Here to do some shopping?"'
+		'She sees you coming into the store behind her and smiles. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Here to do some shopping?"'
 		act 'Leave the store': gt 'pav_commercial'
 		act 'Stay and shop alone': gt 'shop_coco_carmen', 'start'
 		act 'Offer to try on clothes with Lariska': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'lariska_gm_2'
@@ -521,19 +521,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska_gm_1':
 			act 'Stay and shop alone': gt 'shop_coco_carmen', 'start'
 			act 'Offer to try on clothes with Lariska': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'lariska_gm_2'
 		elseif npc_rel['A13'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 200:
-			'She sees you coming in the store behind her and frowns, but doesn''t say anything.'
-			'"Hey Lariska. Doing some shopping?"'
+			'She sees you in the store behind her and frowns but doesn''t say anything.'
+			'"Hey, Lariska. Doing some shopping?"'
 			'She just looks at you and doesn''t respond at all. It''s pretty obvious she wants nothing to do with you.'
 			act 'Leave the store': gt 'pav_commercial'
 			act 'Stay and shop alone': gt 'shop_coco_carmen', 'start'
 		elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 200:
-			'She sees you coming in the store behind her, and with a disgusted look on her face says "What are <i>you</i> doing here? This place doesn''t sell anything slutty enough for <i>you</i> to wear."'
-			'Your face turns red with anger and you shoot back. "At least I can make my own decisions. Are you even allowed to be here without Christina keeping an eye on you?"'
-			'She just sneers at you. "Go fuck yourself, slut." With that, she turns and leaves the store, obviously not wanting to shop anymore.'
+			'She sees you coming into the store behind her and, with a disgusted look on her face, says, "What are <i>you</i> doing here? This place doesn''t sell anything slutty enough for <i>you</i> to wear."'
+			'Your face turns red with anger, and you shoot back. "At least I can make my own decisions. Are you even allowed to be here without Christina keeping an eye on you?"'
+			'She just sneers at you. "Go fuck yourself, slut." With that, she leaves the store, obviously not wanting to shop anymore.'
 			act 'Leave the store': gt 'pav_commercial'
 			act 'Stay and shop alone': gt 'shop_coco_carmen', 'start'
 		else
-			'She sees you coming in the store behind her and nods at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Doing some shopping?"'
+			'She sees you coming into the store behind her and nods at you. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Doing some shopping?"'
 			act 'Leave the store': gt 'pav_commercial'
 			act 'Stay and shop alone': gt 'shop_coco_carmen', 'start'
 			act 'Offer to try on clothes with Lariska': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'lariska_gm_2'
@@ -553,10 +553,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska_gm_2':
 		cla & *clr
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/gm/gm_lariska_2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Eventually you start changing in the same room, laughing and giggling as you try on the various items you picked out for each other.'
-		'At one point you catch her staring at you in the mirror while you are both topless. You notice her nipples are hard, and checking her out, you feel yours getting hard too. Slipping an arm around her waist, you both stare at your reflections in the mirror, comparing yourselves to each other.'
+		'Eventually, you start changing in the same room, laughing and giggling as you try on the various items you picked out for each other.'
+		'At one point, you catch her staring at you in the mirror while you are both topless. You notice her nipples are hard, and you feel yours getting hard checking her out too. Slipping an arm around her waist, you both stare at your reflections in the mirror, comparing yourselves to each other.'
 		if lariskalove < 7 and LariskaQW['story'] < 10:
-			'She eventually gets embarrassed at the attention and turns away, her face bright red.'
+			'She eventually gets embarrassed at the attention and turns away, her face turning bright red.'
 		else
 			'You smile at her through her reflection in the mirror with a suggestive look in your eyes.'
 		end
@@ -584,14 +584,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska_gm_3':
 	lariskalove += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/gm/gm_lariska_3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You maintain eye contact as you slide your hand down her back until you reach her panties. Soflty hooking your finger over them, you slowly drag them down until her pink pussy is exposed. Dropping your own panties, you gently push her against the mirror, taking a moment to enjoy the sight of her naked in the stand-up mirror before pulling her into your arms and kissing her.'
+	'You maintain eye contact as you slide your hand down her back until you reach her panties. Softly hooking your finger over them, you slowly drag them down until her pink pussy is exposed. Dropping your panties, you gently push her against the mirror, enjoying the sight of her naked in the stand-up mirror before pulling her into your arms and kissing her.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Finger her':
 		cla & *clr
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/gm/gm_lariska_4.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you make out with her, you push her up against the wall and reach between her legs to rub her pussy. Her breath quickens as lust takes over and she starts exploring your body with her hands, keeping her lips locked on yours. Eventually her fingers find their way between your legs, and you both finger each other.'
+		'You push her up against the wall as you make out with her. Then, you reach between her legs to rub her pussy. Her breath quickens as lust takes over, and she starts exploring your body with her hands, keeping her lips locked on yours. Eventually, her fingers find their way between your legs, and you both finger each other.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -599,18 +599,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lariska_gm_3':
 			cla & *clr
 			menu_off = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/gm/gm_lariska_5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit on the bench in the changing room, pulling her onto your lap while you continue to explore her mouth with your tongue. Her hips start moving, as if she was riding an imaginary cock, grinding her pussy into yours.'
+			'You sit on the bench in the changing room, pulling her onto your lap while you continue to explore her mouth with your tongue. Her hips start moving like she is riding an imaginary cock, grinding her pussy into yours.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'trib', -8
 			gs 'stat'
 			act '69':
 				cla & *clr
 				menu_off = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/gm/gm_lariska_6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Face red with desire, Lariska stands up and pulls you off the bench and down to the floor, on your back. Straddling your bare chest, she buries her face between your legs, licking and slurping wildly. You do the same, licking her clit while thrusting your fingers inside her pussy.'
-				$orgasm_txt = 'You can tell she is getting close, her pussy is soaking wet and leaking like crazy. The sight and feeling of her going wild on your clit sends you over the edge, and your body starts shaking. Your orgasm sets hers off as well, both of you writhing on the floor, attempting to keep licking your way through the others orgasm.'
+				'Face red with desire, Lariska stands up, pulling you off the bench and down to the floor on your back. Straddling your bare chest, she buries her face between your legs, licking and slurping wildly. You do the same, licking her clit while thrusting your fingers inside her pussy.'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'You can tell she is getting close. Her pussy is soaking wet and leaking like crazy. The sight and feeling of her going wild on your clit sends you over the edge, and your body starts shaking. Your orgasm also sets hers off, both of you writhing on the floor, attempting to keep licking your way through the other orgasm.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-				'Exhausted, you let your head fall back while you catch your breath. You hear her panting and can feel her breath on your now sensitive lower lips as you come down in a post orgasmic bliss.'
-				'Once you catch your breath, you stand up and share a long kiss while stroking her cheek with your hand. When you pull back from it, she seems to remember you''re in a public place and gets nervous, hger face red again.'
+				'Exhausted, you let your head fall back while you catch your breath. You hear her panting and feel her breath on your now sensitive lower lips as you come down in post-orgasmic bliss.'
+				'Once you catch your breath, you stand up and share a long kiss while stroking her cheek with your hand. When you pull back from it, she seems to remember you''re in a public place and gets nervous, her face red again.'
 				act 'Clean up and leave the store':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -627,18 +627,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tBella':
 	minut += 20
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big22.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Bella and tap her on her shoulder. "Hey Bella! You heading into the city?"'
-	'Bella sighs loudly as she replies. "Yeah, I''m meeting some of my friends in town. There''s a new gym opening and we thought we might check it out."'
+	'You approach Bella and tap her on her shoulder. "Hey, Bella! You''re heading into the city?"'
+	'Bella sighs loudly as she replies. "Yeah, I''m meeting some of my friends in town. There''s a new gym opening, and we thought we might check it out."'
 
 	act 'Sounds amazing':
 		cla & *clr
 		npc_rel['A22'] += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big22.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start grinning, but then turn serious. "That sounds great, but isn''t there an age limit at those gyms though?"'
+		'You start grinning but then turn serious. "That sounds great, but isn''t there an age limit at those gyms?"'
 		'"Hanging around with older people does have its perks." she winks. "One of my friends can get me in, no questions asked."'
 		'You nod your head. "Must be great hanging around with older people..."'
-		'"Oh, the stories I''ve got to tell..." Bella replies, but before she can continue there''s an announcement and she excuses herself saying that''s the train she needs to catch.'
+		'"Oh, the stories I''ve got to tell..." Bella replies, but before she can continue, there''s an announcement. She excuses herself, saying that''s the train she needs to catch.'
 		act 'Return to the train station': gt 'pav_train_hall'
 	end
 
@@ -647,11 +647,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tBella':
 		npc_rel['A22'] -= 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big22.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Why not just train here instead? We have a perfectly good gym." you innocently ask.'
+		'"Why not just train here instead? We have an excellent gym." you innocently ask.'
 		'Bella starts laughing loudly. "Poor little <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''re so innocent and still have a lot to learn..."'
 		'"Like what?" you ask, a little offended.'
-		'Bella just smirks. "Well first of all, there''s fully grown men there, not little wimpy boys that think they''re the shit. Real men that know how to treat women... And let''s not talk about all the sexy women that work out."'
-		'As she''s about to continue, you hear an announcement. "That''s my train. Too bad <<$pcs_nickname>>. I thought about inviting you, but you disappointed me. I had higher hopes about you..." she says before walking away from you.'
+		'Bella just smirks. "Well, first of all, there are fully grown men there, not little wimpy boys that think they''re the shit. Real men that know how to treat women... And let''s not talk about all the sexy women that work out."'
+		'As she''s about to continue, you hear an announcement. "That''s my train. Too bad, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I thought about inviting you, but you disappointed me. I had higher hopes about you..." she says before walking away from you.'
 		act 'Return to the train station': gt 'pav_train_hall'
 	end
 end
@@ -661,15 +661,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVeronika':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big141.jpg"></center>'
-	'Noticing it''s Veronika, you start waving and trying to catch her attention. She barely bats an eye towards you as you try your hardest to get her attention.'
-	'After a while, she stops practicing and starts skating towards you.'
+	'Noticing it''s Veronika, you start waving and trying to catch her attention. But, unfortunately, she barely bats an eye towards you as you try your hardest to get her attention.'
+	'After a while, she stops practising and starts skating towards you.'
 	act 'Greet her':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big141.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Hey Veronika!" you shout out. "Looking great out there!"'
-		'Ice cold with a blank expression, she stops in front of you. "What do you want? Can''t you see that I''m practicing?"'
+		'Ice cold with a blank expression, she stops in front of you. "What do you want? Can''t you see that I''m practising?"'
 
 		act 'Discourage her':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -680,7 +680,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVeronika':
 			'"Sheesh, why are you always such a bitch?" you reply, irritated by her nonchalant greeting.'
 			'Veronika rolls her eyes and lets out a sigh. "Do I really need to explain it to you?"'
 			'"You''re such an ungrateful bitch!!!" you yell out. "I just wanted to encourage you, but since you''re being a bitch about it, I hope you break your leg! Or your face."'
-			'Stone cold Veronika just shrugs her shoulders before turning and skating away like the conversation never happened.'
+			'Stone-cold Veronika shrugs her shoulders before turning and skating away like the conversation never happened.'
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'pav_lake'
 		end
 
@@ -690,7 +690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tVeronika':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big141.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I just wanted to say that you''re looking great out there." you smile. "I bet you''ll have no issues getting on the Russian team."'
-			'Veronika, still stone faced and rigid, replies a little reluctantly. "Thanks, I guess... I train a lot so I can leave this god forsaken hellhole behind."'
+			'Veronika, still stone-faced and rigid, replies a little reluctantly. "Thanks, I guess... I train a lot, so I can leave this god-forsaken hellhole behind."'
 			'You awkwardly smile. "I know what you mean. It really is a dump, isn''t it?"'
 			'She just blankly stares at you. "If there''s nothing more, I need to get back to my training..." Before you''re able to reply, Veronika has already started skating away from you.'
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'pav_lake'

+ 2 - 2
locations/homes_properties.qsrc

@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'get_properties_for_sale':
 				hasprice = iif($accessible_property[$getforsalespropcode] = '', property['price'] > 0, accessible_property['<<$getforsalespropcode>>-sales-price'] > 0)
 				if (($ARGS[1] ! 'home' and ishome = 0) or ($ARGS[1] ! 'business' and ishome)) and hasprice:
 					$property_code[j] = $getforsalespropcode
-					$property_name[j] = iif($accessible._property[$getforsalespropcode] = '', $property['name'], $accessible_property['<<$getforsalespropcode>>-name'])
+					$property_name[j] = iif($accessible_property[$getforsalespropcode] = '', $property['name'], $accessible_property['<<$getforsalespropcode>>-name'])
 					$property_type[j] = iif($accessible_property[$getforsalespropcode] = '', $property['type'], $accessible_property['<<$getforsalespropcode>>-type'])
 					if property['construction_needed'] = 1:
 						$property_display[j] = iif($accessible_property[$getforsalespropcode] = '', $property['display_0'], $accessible_property['<<$getforsalespropcode>>-display'])
@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'get_internet_enabled_properties':
 				accesscheck = ($ARGS[2] = 'hasaccess' and accessible_property[$getnetenabledprocode] ! 0 and accessible_property[$getnetenabledprocode] ! 4) or $ARGS[2] = ''
 				typecheck = (($ARGS[1] ! 'home' and INSTR($property['type'], 'residence') = 0) or ($ARGS[1] ! 'business' and INSTR($property['type'], 'residence') > 0))				
 				if accesscheck and typecheck and property['internet_enabled']:
-					$property_name[j] = $poperty['name']
+					$property_name[j] = $property['name']
 					$property_code[j] = $getnetenabledprocode
 					if accessible_property[$getnetenabledprocode] = 0: 
 						$property_status[j] = 'no access'

+ 8 - 8
locations/hookup_after.qsrc

@@ -867,7 +867,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'light_cigarette':
 					act'Continue':
 						cla & *clr
 						siga_bum = 1
-						gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+						gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/bed_smoke3.jpg"></center>'
 						'Smoke fills your lungs and you hold it there, savoring it, before exhaling slowly. As the smoke blows past your lips, it''s like all your stress goes with it and you sigh happily, relaxing into the bed as both of you unwind with a post-fuck smoke together.'
@@ -885,7 +885,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'light_cigarette':
 				'Pulling a cigarette from your purse, you place it in your mouth, sparking it with your lighter while you inhale.'
 				act'Continue':
 					cla & *clr
-					gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+					gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/bed_smoke1.jpg"></center>'
 					'Smoke fills your lungs and you hold it there, savoring it, before exhaling slowly. As the smoke blows past your lips, it''s like all your stress goes with it and you sigh happily, relaxing into the bed.'
@@ -909,7 +909,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'light_cigarette2':
 			cla & *clr
 			siga += 1
 			siga_bum = 1
-			gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+			gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/bed_smoke3.jpg"></center>'
 			'He leans over with the lighter and lights it for you and you inhale with him, savoring the smoke that fills your lungs as the two of you sit back and puff away together.'
 			gs 'hookup_after', 'pre'
@@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'light_cigarette2':
 			'You decide to grab a smoke too, pulling one from your purse. You place it in your mouth, sparking it with your lighter while you inhale.'
 			act'Continue':
 				cla & *clr
-				gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+				gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/bed_smoke3.jpg"></center>'
 				'Smoke fills your lungs and you hold it there, savoring it, before exhaling slowly. As the smoke blows past your lips, it''s like all your stress goes with it and you sigh happily, relaxing into the bed as both of you unwind with a post-fuck smoke together.'
@@ -1400,7 +1400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif hookup['cigarette'] = 3:
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/phone_smoke.jpg"></center>'
-		gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+		gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 		if npc_smoker[$boy] > 0:
 			'Reaching down to your purse, you pull out your phone and a cigarette, sparking the latter and taking a long enjoyable drag from it. <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> sees you light up and does the same, pulling his own smokes from his nightstand. The two of your relax, smoking together, while you unwind checking messages and scrolling through social media feeds.'
 		else
@@ -1411,16 +1411,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/bed_smoke3.jpg"></center>'
 		siga += 1
 		siga_bum = 1
-		gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+		gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 		'The two of you lay back and relax, enjoying a post-fuck smoke together as you wind down.'
 	elseif npc_smoker[$boy] > 0 and hookup['cigarette'] = 1:
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/bed_smoke3.jpg"></center>'
-		gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+		gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 		'Seeing you light up, <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> does as well, pulling a pack from his nightstand. You spark the end with your lighter and relax, taking a long drag, relishing the flavor as it fills your mouth and lungs. The two of you just sit there in silence for a few minutes, enjoying a post-fuck smoke together as you wind down.'
 	elseif hookup['cigarette'] = 1:
 		cla & *clr
-		gs 'drugs ', 'smoke'
+		gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/bed_smoke1.jpg"></center>'
 		'Smoke fills your lungs and you hold it there, savoring it, before exhaling slowly. As the smoke blows past your lips, it''s like all your stress goes with it and you sigh happily, relaxing into the bed.'

+ 3 - 3
locations/hotel_anna_gear.qsrc

@@ -1263,7 +1263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'restraints_cuff':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionhotel/cuff1.jpg"></center>'
 						'"Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>... just give me a moment." Anna starts freeing your ankles and wrists.'
-						'"Just remember <<$pcs_nickname>> I won''t force you to do anything you don''t want to... the main things is for you to learn, and and it seems you''ve learned enough today."'
+						'"Just remember <<$pcs_nickname>> I won''t force you to do anything you don''t want to... the main things is for you to learn, and it seems you''ve learned enough today."'
 						'"Just get me out of this please." Anna smiles as she removes your cuffs. Once your arms and legs are free you hurriedly get dressed, you chat a little with Anna before she she walks you to the front door and say goodbye and walk out to the residential area.'
 						act 'Leave': gt'pav_hotel'
 					end
@@ -1361,7 +1361,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'restraints_leash':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionhotel/leashnakfine.jpg"></center>'
 					'"I''m happy to hear it... anyway we should stop for now. The walk ends. "We shouldn''t get carried away, this is a practice session after all, so <<$pcs_nickname>> I hope it has been instructive for you, you should have a better idea about the collar and the leash. You can get dressed now, and we''ll continue next time"'
-					'"Thank you Anna." You get dressed and and chat a little about collars before saying goodbye and leaving.'
+					'"Thank you Anna." You get dressed and chat a little about collars before saying goodbye and leaving.'
 					act 'Leave': gt'pav_hotel'
 				end
 				act'S-stop...':
@@ -1403,7 +1403,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'restraints_leash':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionhotel/leashnakfine.jpg"></center>'
 					'"I''m happy to hear it... But we should stop for now." The walk ends. "We shouldn''t drag this on too long, this is for you to learn after all, so <<$pcs_nickname>> I hope it has been a learning experience for you, hopefully you should have a better idea about the collar and the leash. You can get dressed now, and we''ll follow up on this next time"'
-					'"Thank you Anna."You get dressed and and chat a little about collars before saying goodbye and leaving.'
+					'"Thank you Anna."You get dressed and chat a little about collars before saying goodbye and leaving.'
 					act 'Leave': gt'pav_hotel'
 				end
 				act'S-stop...':

+ 4 - 4
locations/internet_mobile.qsrc

@@ -147,14 +147,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'renew_subscription':
         karta -= finalfee        
         subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-discount'] = rem_discount
         if app_discount > 0: $discounttext = '<<renewfee>>₽ and you had <<acc_discount>><b>₽</b> left on your account. After applying <<app_discount>><b>₽</b> to your monthly fee, your final payable was <b><font color="green"><<finalfee>>₽</b></font>  and you were left with <<rem_discount>><b>₽</b> on your account.'
-        $subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-contract_message'] = 'Your monthly fee was' + iif(app_discount > 0, $dicounttext, '<b><font color="green"><<renewfee>>₽</font></b> which was taken from your bank account.')
+        $subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-contract_message'] = 'Your monthly fee was' + iif(app_discount > 0, $discounttext, '<b><font color="green"><<renewfee>>₽</font></b> which was taken from your bank account.')
         if subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-suspension_month'] > 0: subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-suspension_month'] = 0
         if subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-suspension_day'] > 0: subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-suspension_day'] = 0
     else
         remainingday = 5
         if subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-suspension_day'] > 0: remainingday = subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-suspension_day'] - day
         if app_discount > 0: $discounttext = ' and you had <<acc_discount>><b>₽</b> left on your account. After applying <<app_discount>><b>₽</b> to your monthly fee, your final payable was <<finalfee>><b>₽</b>  and you were left with <<rem_discount>><b>₽</b> on your account.'
-        $subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-contract_message'] = 'Your monthly fee was <<renewfee>><b>₽</b>'+ iif(app_discount >0, $dicounttext,', unfortunately your payment was declined. We will try to take the payment over the next <b><font color="red"><<remainingday>> days</font></b> before suspending services.')
+        $subscription['<<$ARGS[1]>>-contract_message'] = 'Your monthly fee was <<renewfee>><b>₽</b>'+ iif(app_discount >0, $discounttext,', unfortunately your payment was declined. We will try to take the payment over the next <b><font color="red"><<remainingday>> days</font></b> before suspending services.')
         gs 'internet_mobile', 'set_suspension_date', $ARGS[1]
     end
     killvar 'renewfee'
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ end
 !! $ARGS[2] - Custom message - optional
 if $ARGS[0] = 'add_limitation':
     access[$ARGS[1]] = 1
-    $access[$ARGS[1]] = $ARGS2
+    $access[$ARGS[1]] = $ARGS[2]
 end
 
 !!Remove the limiation passed in $ARGS[1] and set's it's custom message to ''
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ end
 !! $ARGS[1] - Limitation code: : 'noporn', 'nocamshow'
 !! $ARGS[2] - Custom message 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'set_limitation_message':
-    if access[$ARGS[1]] = 1: $access[$ARGS[1]] = $ARGS2
+    if access[$ARGS[1]] = 1: $access[$ARGS[1]] = $ARGS[2]
 end
 
 !! Sets the date when the subscription will be cancelled if not paid.

+ 1 - 1
locations/intro_customization.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modite':
 		end
 		gt 'intro_customization','modite'
 	end
-	act 'Laptop (<<komp>>/1)':
+	act 'Computer (<<komp>>/1)':
 		if komp = 0:
 			komp = 1
 		else 

+ 11 - 7
locations/journal_quests.qsrc

@@ -19,17 +19,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><h2>Quests</h2></center>'
 	
 	if metmira = 1:
-		'<center><h3>Miroslava Maximova</h3></center>'
-		*nl
+		if meadow > 0:
+			'<center><h3>Miroslava Maximova</h3></center>'
+			*nl
+		end
 		if meadow = 1 or meadow = 2:
 			'You have found a Secret Meadow. Maybe Mira would like to see it.'
 		elseif meadow = 3:
-			'You have shown Mira your Secret Meadow and told her she could visit it on her own. You did make her promise not to show anyone else, but maybe you should keep an eye on her, in case she breaks that promise.' 
 			if npc_QW['A60'] = 0:
+				'You have shown Mira your Secret Meadow and told her she could visit it on her own. You did make her promise not to show anyone else, but maybe you should keep an eye on her, in case she breaks that promise.'
 				'You could show Mira around, maybe introduce her to some of the local boys...'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 1:
+				'You have shown Mira your Secret Meadow and told her she could visit it on her own. You did make her promise not to show anyone else, but maybe you should keep an eye on her, in case she breaks that promise.'
 				'You introduced Mira to Mitka and the boys. Maybe you should ask her what she thinks about them.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 2:
+				'You have shown Mira your Secret Meadow and told her she could visit it on her own. You did make her promise not to show anyone else, but maybe you should keep an eye on her, in case she breaks that promise.'
 				'Mira admitted she likes Mitka. Only time will tell what will come from that. In the meantime, you could visit your meadow, from time to time, while you wait to see what happens.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 3:
 				'You caught Mira having sex with Mitka, in your meadow after she promised not to show anyone else. You really need to talk to her, and confront her about it.'
@@ -41,18 +45,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'You have watched Mira having anal sex with Mitka and she sucessfully fulfilled her First Wish. You are still thinking on what you want her to do for your Second Wish. You should keep getting her drunk with the boys for now, until something comes to mind.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 15 and miraprost = 0:
 				'You have watched Mira having anal sex with Mitka and she sucessfully fulfilled her First Wish. You are still thinking on what you want her to do for your second wish. Maybe a walk through the village will give you some ideas.'
-			elseif (npc_QW['A60'] = 16 or npc_QW['60'] < 20) and miraprost > 0:
+			elseif (npc_QW['A60'] = 16 or npc_QW['A60'] < 20) and miraprost > 0:
 				!! Sveta can make her third wish. Can be raised by either prostitution or having sex with the boys when drunk.
 				'Congratulations, you are now Mira''s pimp, thus fulfilling your Second Wish. You should check up on her at the road in the evenings and make sure she is working for you, until you come up with an idea for your third and Final Wish.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 21 and Mira_no > 0:
 				'You have convinced her to walk through town naked, to fufill your Third Wish. She is red with shame and has stayed home. Maybe if you talk to her you can convince her to come out of the house again. It may take a few tries though.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 21 and Mira_no = 0:
-				'You have convinced her to walk through town naked, to fufill your Third Wish. She came out of her house and you can continue to pimp her out during the evenings. <b>This is the end of Mira and the Three Wishes/b>'
+				'You have convinced her to walk through town naked, to fufill your Third Wish. She came out of her house and you can continue to pimp her out during the evenings. <b>This is the end of Mira and the Three Wishes</b>'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 22:
-				'In the end, you couldn''t force Mira to walk through town naked, and let her off the hook and forgave her for breaking her promise. She is happy with your decision and you grow even closer. You are still able to pimp her out in the evenings. <b>This is the end of Mira and the Three Wishes/b>'
+				'In the end, you couldn''t force Mira to walk through town naked, and let her off the hook and forgave her for breaking her promise. She is happy with your decision and you grow even closer. You are still able to pimp her out in the evenings. <b>This is the end of Mira and the Three Wishes</b>'
 			end
 		elseif meadow = 4:
-			'You have found a Secret Meadow and shown Mira, but told her she could not go there without you. <b>This choice blocked Mira and the Three Wishes/b>'
+			'You have found a Secret Meadow and shown Mira, but told her she could not go there without you. <b>This choice blocked Mira and the Three Wishes</b>'
 		end
 	end
 

+ 3 - 3
locations/katja_uni.qsrc

@@ -1261,7 +1261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'experienced_tell':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		gs 'stat'		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers, carefully but eagerly pressing back against yours. You push it further, and you spend the next few minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
+		'You move closer to Katja and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers, carefully but eagerly pressing back against yours. You push it further, and you spend the next few minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
 		act'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
 			!! IMAGE HERE
@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inexperienced_tell':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		gs 'stat'		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers. She recoils on instinct but you chase after her, making sure her lips never leave yours. You push it further and end up spending the next few minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
+		'You move closer to Katja and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers. She recoils on instinct but you chase after her, making sure her lips never leave yours. You push it further and end up spending the next few minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
 		'Eventually, the two of you break apart, a thin trail of saliva trailing between her lips and yours.'
 		*nl
 		'"Whoa..." she murmurs. "That was something else..."'
@@ -1337,7 +1337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_experienced_tell':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		gs 'stat'		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. The two of you awkwardly bump together, feeling the heat of your blushes radiating off each other''s cheeks. Very, very carefully, you experimentally push your tongue into her mouth. As soon as it touches her lips, she flinches but settles into it and clumsily tries to reciprocate, letting her tongue brush against your own.'
+		'You move closer to Katja and slowly put your lips to hers. The two of you awkwardly bump together, feeling the heat of your blushes radiating off each other''s cheeks. Very, very carefully, you experimentally push your tongue into her mouth. As soon as it touches her lips, she flinches but settles into it and clumsily tries to reciprocate, letting her tongue brush against your own.'
 		'Eventually, the two of you break apart, a thin trail of saliva trailing between her lips and yours.'
 		*nl
 		'"Whoa..." she murmurs. "That was something else..."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/katja_uni_sex.qsrc

@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'library_threesome2':
 						act 'Switch positions':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/library_threesome8.jpg"></center>'
-							'You climb off his dick and and tell Katja that it''s her turn. You then guide his dick into her very wet pussy as she sits down on it. As she starts riding it, you get up and crawl over to <<$npc_nickname[$npclastgenerated]>>''s face before sitting on it and letting him eat your pussy.'
+							'You climb off his dick and tell Katja that it''s her turn. You then guide his dick into her very wet pussy as she sits down on it. As she starts riding it, you get up and crawl over to <<$npc_nickname[$npclastgenerated]>>''s face before sitting on it and letting him eat your pussy.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 3, 'group'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Get on all fours':

+ 143 - 143
locations/meadow.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/meadow/meadow1_<<rand(0,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'A quiet and deserted open field of grass and wildflowers in the forest, well hidden from civilization.'
-	'There are <a href="exec:gt ''meadow'', ''ruins''">ruins</a> of a long-abandoned house as well as some <a href="exec: gt ''meadow'', ''fruit_trees''">fruit trees</a> hinting at the areas original purpose.'
+	'There are <a href="exec:gt ''meadow'', ''ruins''">ruins</a> of a long-abandoned house and some <a href="exec: gt ''meadow'', ''fruit_trees''">fruit trees</a>  hinting at the area''s original purpose.'
 	
 	!events trigger before everything
 	if (meadow = 3 or meadow = 6) and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] = 2 and temper >= 12 and sunWeather = 1:gt 'meadow','mira_mitka'
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	if MiraLoc = 2:
 		act 'Talk to Mira': gt 'meadow', 'Mira'
-		'<a href="exec: gt ''meadow'', ''Mira''">Mira</a> is in the meadow and is spinning with a delightful smile and laughing.'
+		'<a href="exec: gt ''meadow'', ''Mira''">Mira</a> is in the meadow, spinning with a delightful smile and laughing.'
 	elseif Mira_no = 0:
 		temp_md = 20
 		if (meadow = 3 or meadow = 6) and sunWeather = 1:temp_md = rand(0,20)
@@ -78,15 +78,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		if pcs_stam >= 15 or (pcs_stam >= 10 and bookYog + obruch > 0):
 			if $clothingworntype ! 'danilovich_outfits':
 				*nl
-				'Your meadow is a perfect place to workout if you were wearing exercise clothes'
+				'Your meadow would be a perfect place to workout if you were wearing exercise clothes'
 			   if temper >= 10:
                     *nl
                     gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'resist'
                     if Miraloc ! 2 or npc_rel['A60'] > 40 or mirasex = 1:
                         if Miraloc = 2:
-                            'Your meadow is a perfect place to exercise. Mira is here but she wouldn''t mind if you exercised for a little bit, even if in the nude.'
+                            'Your meadow is a perfect place to exercise. Mira is here, but she wouldn''t mind if you exercised for a little bit, even if in the nude.'
                         else
-                            'Your meadow is a perfect place to exercise. There is no one around, so you could probably exercise nude if you wanted.'
+                            'Your meadow is a perfect place to exercise. No one is around, so you could probably exercise nude if you wanted.'
                         end
                         if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
                             act 'Exercise nude':gt 'meadow', 'workout', 'nude'
@@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fruit_trees':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/meadow/meadow_fruit_<<rand(0,1)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'These fruit trees are flourishing in the undisturbed beauty of the meadow. Unfortunately all the fruit is out of your reach.'
+	'These fruit trees are flourishing in the undisturbed beauty of the meadow. But, unfortunately, all the fruit is out of your reach.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'meadow', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ruins':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/meadow/meadow_nearby_ruins.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'The ruins of this old house look intriguing. You wonder how long it has been here.'
+	'The ruins of this old house look intriguing. But, you wonder how long it has been here.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'meadow', 'start'
 end
 
@@ -151,15 +151,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 	! first time here with Mira
 	if meadow = 2:
 		gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-		'"Wow! This place is awesome. My family and I have only been in the village a few months, but I have never heard anyone ever talk about this place." Mira tells you. "Now I know where I can come to, when I want to be alone. You don''t mind, do you?"'
+		'"Wow! This place is awesome. My family and I have only been in the village for a few months, but I have never heard anyone talk about this place." Mira tells you. "Now I know where I can come to when I want to be alone. You don''t mind, do you?"'
 		act 'You allow her to come here on her own':
 			*clr & cla
 			meadow = 3
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"I think you are a responsible person, Mira, you can come to the meadow whenever it pleases you. But, I want this place to remain a secret so you can never tell anyone about this place."'
-			'Mira, readily agrees and is as happy as a lark. Mira energetically nodding her head and says, "I''ll take this secret to the grave, I swear. If I don''t, then I''ll grant you three wishes, that I promise I will perform no matter what..."'
+			'"I think you are a responsible person, Mira. So, you can come to the meadow whenever it pleases you. But, I want this place to remain a secret, so you can never tell anyone about this place."'
+			'Mira readily agrees and is as happy as a lark. Mira energetically nods and says, "I''ll take this secret to the grave, I swear. But, if I don''t, I''ll grant you three wishes, which I promise I will perform no matter what..."'
 			act 'Finish': gt 'meadow', 'start'
 		end
 		act 'Sorry, I want to keep this meadow private':
@@ -168,10 +168,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'You tell her that this is your haven, you would prefer if she wants to come to the meadow that she can only do so with you. Mira looks crestfallen, tears start to well up in her eyes, though she tries not to let you see.'
-			'Mira looks at you seriously, "I will abide by your wishes. I swear. If I don''t, then I''ll grant you three wishes, that I promise I will perform no matter what..."'
+			'You tell her that this is your haven, and you would prefer that if she wants to come to the meadow, she can only do so with you. Mira looks crestfallen. Tears start to well up in her eyes, though she tries not to let you see.'
+			'Mira looks at you seriously, "I will abide by your wishes. I swear. If I don''t, I''ll grant you three wishes that I promise to perform no matter what..."'
 			if npc_QW['A64'] < 15:
-				'You and Mira speak for awhile. Her mood is a little down, but as you chat a smile slowly creeps onto her face.'
+				'You and Mira speak for a while. Her mood is a little down, but a smile slowly creeps onto her face as you chat.'
 				'Mira then asks if you could help cheer up her father. He has been depressed ever since her mother''s death nearly two years ago.'
 				act 'Maybe':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -185,23 +185,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
 					end
-					'You agree, intrigued. You ask Mira what see has in mind? After a few seconds, she tells you she saw her father masturbating that morning. She doesn''t think her father has been with a woman since her mother passed away. Mira is sorry for her father''s loss, her''s too for that matter, but she has an overwhelming desire to help him. She can''t just do nothing.'
-					'You know Mira loves her father very much, you don''t know what you can do to help. You don''t want or need this drama in your life. You tell her that there is nothing you can do to help with her father''s depression. Mira''s pouts and stands with her arms crossed. Her whole demeanor is one of injured innocence.'
-					'A few minutes later, to your surprise, you feel a bit sorry for the way you snapped Mira. You think to yourself, chatting with her dad couldn''t hurt and it would be a good deed.'
+					'You agree, intrigued. You ask Mira what she has in mind? After a few seconds, she tells you she saw her father masturbating that morning. She doesn''t think her father has been with a woman since her mother died. Mira is sorry for her father''s loss, she''s too, for that matter, but she has an overwhelming desire to help him. She can''t just do nothing.'
+					'You know Mira loves her father very much. But you don''t know what you can do to help. You don''t want or need this drama in your life. So you tell her that there is nothing you can do to help with her father''s depression. Mira pouts and stands with her arms crossed. Her whole demeanour is one of injured innocence.'
+					'A few minutes later, to your surprise, you feel a bit sorry for how you snapped at Mira. But, you think to yourself, chatting with her dad couldn''t hurt, and it would be a good deed.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'meadow', 'start'
 				end
 				act 'Leave': gt 'meadow', 'start'
 			else
 				meadow = 6
-				'You and Mira speak for awhile. Her mood is a little down, but as you chat a smile slowly creeps onto her face.'
+				'You and Mira speak for a while. Her mood is a little down, but a smile slowly creeps onto her face as you chat.'
 				'"I saw you meeting with my father. I want to thank you for attending to him. He had been depressed since my mother died two years ago. Being with you has really cheered him up."'
 				minut += 2
 				!! If Svetka has some shame left she can blush at being told she was seen with Afanasiy
 				if pcs_inhib <= 30:
 					act 'Blush':
 						cla
-						'You are a bit surprised that Mira must have been spying on you, and even though you two are friends, you are a still bit embarrassed.'
-						'You feel you''re cheeks get warm and quickly say goodbye to Mira.'
+						'You are a bit surprised that Mira must have been spying on you, and even though you two are friends, you are still a bit embarrassed.'
+						'You feel your cheeks get warm and quickly say goodbye to Mira.'
 						pcs_horny += 20
 						inhib_exp -= 2
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 		end
 	elseif MiraLoc = 2:
 		gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-		'"What a wonderful place you have found, it''s so comfortable and sunny!"'
+		'"What a wonderful place you have found. It''s so comfortable and sunny!"'
 		if pcs_horny >= 60 and npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and temper >= 20 and sunWeather = 1:
 			act 'Mira, come here and stick that tongue of your in my wet pussy!':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -234,21 +234,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 				gs 'stat'
 				if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick.jpg"></center>'
-					'Mira immediately sits on the grass and waits until you get undressed. Holding out your hand, you throw caution to the winds and push your panties aside, revealing your already dripping snatch...'
+					'Mira immediately sits on the grass and waits until you get undressed. Then, holding out your hand, you throw caution to the winds and push your panties aside, revealing your already dripping snatch...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You enjoy, Mira''s gentle touch between your legs. She teases you by gently touching your clit...'
+						'You enjoy Mira''s gentle touch between your legs. Then, she teases you by gently touching your clit...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick2.jpg"></center>'
-							'A couple of minutes later you eagerly get rid of your panties, while Mira lowers her mouth to your pussy and lightly nibbles on your clit, suddenly you are in the midst of an orgasm.'
+							'A couple of minutes later, you eagerly get rid of your panties while Mira lowers her mouth to your pussy and lightly nibbles on your clit. Suddenly, you are in the midst of an orgasm.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Mira obediently kneels at your feet and starts licking your clit and fingering your pussy. After a few minutes of this treatment, Mira brings you to a blazing orgasm.'
+						'Mira obediently kneels at your feet, licking your clit and fingering your pussy. After a few minutes of this treatment, Mira brings you to a blazing orgasm.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira, pulls up harshly on her panties so that they bite deeply between her labia. Mira looks around again, but you are concealed in the dense thicket thus she fails to spot you watching...'
+			'Mira pulls up harshly on her panties, so they bite deeply between her labia. Mira looks around again, but you are concealed in the dense thicket. Thus, she fails to spot you watching...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Next she pulls down her panties and you can see her wet pussy.'
+					'Next, she pulls down her panties, and you can see her wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr6.jpg"></center>'
-								'Finally she leans against the nearest tree as she brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+								'Finally, she leans against the nearest tree as she brings herself to orgasm. You watch for a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10, 'lesbian'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -336,13 +336,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr8.jpg"></center>'
-			'She plays with herself for a few minutes before she stopping to look at a nearby log...'
+			'She plays with herself for a few minutes before stopping to look at a nearby log...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr9.jpg"></center>'
-				'Having made her decision, she walk over to the log and starts to remove her panties.'
+				'Having made her decision, she walks over to the log and starts to remove her panties.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr11.jpg"></center>'
-						'Mira begins to caress herself again and brings herself to orgasm... You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Mira begins to caress herself again and brings herself to orgasm... You watch for a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira starts to get dressed, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -366,11 +366,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 	else
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr12.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see Mira standing on a tree stump with a hand in her pants and her tits exposed enjoying the cool breeze.'
+		'You see Mira standing on a tree stump with a hand in her pants and her tits exposed, enjoying the cool breeze.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr13.jpg"></center>'
-			'She soon gets bored and she, as if on purpose, turns her ass towards you and pulls off her skirt.'
+			'She soon gets bored and, as if on purpose, turns her ass towards you and pulls off her skirt.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
@@ -382,13 +382,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr15.jpg"></center>'
-					'Getting up from the stump, Mira takes off her top and is now only in her panties.'
+					'After getting up from the stump, Mira takes off her top and is only in her panties.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr16.jpg"></center>'
-						'Finally she takes off her shirt, squats, and brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Finally, she takes off her shirt, squats, and brings herself to orgasm. You watch for a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowsex.jpg"></center>'
-	'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they are saying from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
+	'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they say from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowsex1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -431,19 +431,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	temp_md = RAND(0,1)
 	if temp_md = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowanal.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see Mira lower her ass onto Mitka''s member and begin to bounce on top of him. You can hear the sound everytime her butt cheeks hit his thighs...'
+		'You see Mira lower her ass onto Mitka''s member and begin to bounce on top of him. You can hear the sound every time her butt cheeks hit his thighs...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowanal1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira get down on all fours and spreads her ass cheeks wide apart.She moans loudly as Mitka drives his cock into her ass.'
+		'Mira gets down on all fours and spreads her ass cheeks wide apart. She moans loudly as Mitka drives his cock into her ass.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 	end
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'After a couple of minutes Mitka slaps her ass and pulls out of Mira. She gets up on her knees before him and sticks her tongue out as his warm cum shoots all over her face.'
+		'After a couple of minutes, Mitka slaps her ass and pulls out of Mira. She gets up on her knees before him and sticks her tongue out as his warm cum shoots all over her face.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj1.jpg"></center>'
-			'But, apparently, you''re a little late, because after a couple minutes Kolyamba puts a hand on the back of Mira''s head and holds her while he cums down her throat. At first she gags, but eventually obediently swallows his cum...'
+			'But, apparently, you''re a little late because, after a couple minutes, Kolyamba puts a hand on the back of Mira''s head and holds her while he cums down her throat. At first, she gags but eventually obediently swallows his cum...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'All Mira has on is some flip-flops with her face in the ground and her ass in the air. She''s moaning loudly as Kolyamba pounds her pussy and cums inside of her...'
+		'All Mira has on is some flip-flops with her face on the ground and her ass in the air. She moans loudly as Kolyamba pounds her pussy and cums inside of her...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -482,28 +482,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4' or $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if temper < 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is tied to a tree as Vasyan enthusiastically drives his cock in her mouth. She gags and coughs, but at the same time, she moves her head farther down his member. After a couple of minutes Vasyan tilts back his head and with a blissful roar cums in her mouth...'
+		'Mira is tied to a tree as Vasyan enthusiastically drives his cock in her mouth. She gags and coughs, but simultaneously, she moves her head farther down his member. After a couple of minutes, Vasyan tilts back his head and, with a blissful roar cums in her mouth...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Hide until they leave': minut += 10 & gt 'meadow'
 	elseif temper >= 12 and temper < 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj3.jpg"></center>'
-		'They are both completely naked and Mira is sticking her ass up in the air as she deepthroats Vasyan. After a couple of minutes you see Mira gulp down his sperm without even removing her mouth from his cock.'
+		'They are completely naked, and Mira sticks her ass up in the air as she deepthroats Vasyan. After a few minutes, you see Mira gulp down his sperm without removing her mouth from his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Hide until they leave': minut += 10 & gt 'meadow'
 	elseif temper >= 15 and temper < 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj4.jpg"></center>'
-		'They are both completely naked and Mira squeals with joy as she rides on Vasyan''s member. He does not last long and cums all over her butt as soon as he pulls out of her.'
+		'They are completely naked, and Mira squeals joyfully as she rides on Vasyan''s member. Unfortunately, he does not last long and cums all over her butt as soon as he pulls out of her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Hide until they leave': minut += 10 & gt 'meadow'
 	elseif temper >= 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj6.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is completely naked and bent over in front of Vasyan. She is really enjoying it as he thrusts into her ass. After a few minutes he pulls out and sprays cum all over back.'
+		'Mira is completely naked and bent over in front of Vasyan. She is really enjoying it as he thrusts into her ass. After a few minutes, he pulls and sprays cum over his back.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -528,11 +528,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if temper < 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
+		'Mira is kneeling between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. But, unfortunately, they are all crowded around her, so you can''t determine who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 15
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj8.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
+		'Mira is kneeling between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. But, unfortunately, they are all crowded around her, so you can''t determine who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -549,11 +549,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 15
 	elseif temper >= 15 and temper < 25:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj10.jpg"></center>'
-		'Two boys are fucking Mira in her mouth and pussy at the same time. The whole time they are laughing and talking while Mira moans in between them... Fifteen minutes later they finish with her and leave.'
+		'Two boys are fucking Mira in her mouth and pussy simultaneously. The whole time they are laughing and talking while Mira moans in between them... Fifteen minutes later, they finish with her and leave.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 15
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj9.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira and the two boys she is with are all naked. She is sucking one of them while another plays with her breasts and pusy from behind.'
+		'Mira and the two boys she is with are all naked. She is sucking one of them while another plays with her breasts and pussy from behind.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 15
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 	npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj12.jpg"></center>'
-	'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching, as the men take turns fucking Mira until they are all tired out.'
+	'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching as the men take turns fucking Mira until they are all tired.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 30
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadows.jpg"></center>'
-	'You see Mira on all fours with her back to you. She is shoving an ear of corn in her ass which looks painful but she is still moaning. Eventually, Mira finishes and tosses the cum covered ear of corn off into the bushes almost hitting you!'
+	'You see Mira on all fours with her back to you. She is shoving an ear of corn in her ass which looks painful, but she is still moaning. Eventually, Mira finishes and tosses the cum covered ear of corn off into the bushes, almost hitting you!'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 30
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -589,7 +589,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_mitka':
 	pcs_horny += 15
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowsex.jpg"></center>'
-	'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they are saying from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
+	'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they say from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_gang':
 	mirasextimes += 1
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj12.jpg"></center>'
-	'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching, as the men take turns fucking Mira until they are all tired out.'
+	'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching as the men take turns fucking Mira until they are all tired.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 30
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -633,11 +633,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miraperversion11':
 
 	gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-	'You don''t know where to begin, so you stay silent just staring at Mira. Mira at the same time is looking at her feet and blushing hard.'
-	'Finally you gather your wits and ask what happened last night? Mira, still not looking you in the eye, stammers out that she doesn''t know why she did it. She says that she was out of control.'
-	'But you were also drunk, and did not do what she did. Her face sinks with shame and she continues to look at the ground.'
-	'You speak with her awhile and somehow manage to soothe her and tell her that, she should just bite the bullet and move on.'
-	'Mira thanks you most sincerely for your support, but her eyes still look down...'
+	'You don''t know where to begin, so you stay silent, staring at Mira. At the same time, Mira is looking at her feet and blushing hard.'
+	'Finally, you gather your wits and ask what happened last night? Still not looking you in the eye, Mira stammers out that she doesn''t know why she did it. She says that she was out of control.'
+	'But you were also drunk and did not do what she did. Her face sinks with shame, and she looks at the ground.'
+	'You speak with her awhile and somehow manage to soothe her and tell her that she should just bite the bullet and move on.'
+	'Mira sincerely thanks you for your support, but her eyes still look down...'
 	act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_mira':
 	miraday = daystart
 	mirahorny = rand(0,80)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirakiss1.jpg"></center>'
-	'"I''m glad you came Mira" you say.'
+	'"I''m glad you came, Mira," you say.'
 	'You continue, "Mira, I want you," you whispered in her ear and kissed her passionately on the lips.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -659,8 +659,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb':
 	miraday = daystart
 	mirahorny = rand(40,80)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirakiss4.jpg"></center>'
-	'In the meadow Mira walks up to you, smiling mischievously.'
-	'" - <<$pcs_nickname>>, let me see your pussy" - she whispered in your ear, while pinning you to the tree and kissing your lips.'
+	'In the meadow, Mira walks up to you, smiling mischievously.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let me see your pussy", she whispered in your ear while pinning you to the tree and kissing your lips.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if pcs_horny < 20:act 'Agree':gt 'mirasex','mirakiss'
@@ -673,8 +673,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb':
 			npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_lesb_talk2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You tried hard to break out of her embrace.'
-			'" - Mira, come on now, " you said, seeing the silent question in her eyes. - The mood is not right.'
-			'"- You''re mean, " she sulked at you in response.'
+			'"Mira, come on now, " you said, seeing the silent question in her eyes. The mood isn''t right.'
+			'"You''re mean, " she sulked at you in response.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -688,17 +688,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira1':
 	pcs_horny += 5
 	gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-	'You are a long time silent, looking at Mira, not knowing how to start the conversation. But then still dare.'
-	' - Mira, you let all the boys in our village fuck you. Why?'
-	' - Yeah, so what?, Mira is bit embarrassed as she replies.'
-	' - I was thinking that you served all the boys but you forgot about your best friend.'
-	' - You are not a guy thought so why would want to do that?, Mira answered surprised.'
-	' - Everyone knows girls know the best ways to pleasure other girls, you shoot back.'
-	' - But I don''t do that, I''m not a lesbian said Mira.'
-	'She may not be a lesbian but you can tell by her flushed cheeks and shaky voice that she is finding the idea very arousing.'
-	' - Don''t worry I won''t be mean or rough like Mitka, you continue to push her. We can lick each other or I''m leaving and you can go back to the village boys instead and forget about me.'
-	'Mira thought for a second but it was an easy choice. She didn''t want to lose your friendship.'
-	' - Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll do it, " she said falling to her knees.'
+	'You are long silent, looking at Mira, not knowing how to start the conversation. But then still dare.'
+	'"Mira, you let all the boys in our village fuck you. Why?"'
+	'"Yeah, so what?" Mira is a bit embarrassed as she replies.'
+	'"I thought; you served all the boys, but you forgot about your best friend."'
+	'"You are not a guy, so why would you want to do that?" Mira answered, surprised.'
+	'"Everyone knows girls know the best ways to pleasure other girls." You shoot back.'
+	'"But I don''t do that. I''m not a lesbian," said Mira.'
+	'She may not be a lesbian, but you can tell by her flushed cheeks and shaky voice that she finds the idea very arousing.'
+	'"Don''t worry, I won''t be mean or rough like Mitka", you continue to push her. "We can lick each other, or I can leave, and you can go back to the village boys instead and forget about me."'
+	'Mira thought for a second, but it was an easy choice. She didn''t want to lose your friendship.'
+	'"Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll do it, " she said, falling to her knees.'
 
 	act 'Let Mira lick you':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
 end
@@ -711,14 +711,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira2':
 	gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'You walk up to Mira with a malicious smile on your face.'
-	' - Well, Mira, congratulations, you said. - You are now the same whore as me. All the boys fucked you too.'
-	'She tried to keep silent, but you are not satisfied.'
-	' - So did they or did they not?, - you insist on an answer.'
-	' - Well, yes - she acknowledged.'
-	' - You know what that means?, - you continue.'
-	' - What? - blushing terribly asked Mira, although she already guessed where this is going.'
-	' - It''s time to return the favor, - you replied in a triumphant tone while leaning on a tree, and beckoned her with your finger. - You can start.'
-	'Mira hesitated a couple of moments, as if pondering something, and then sat down in front of you on her knees.'
+	'"Well, Mira, congratulations," you said. "You''re are whore now. The same as me. All the boys fucked you too."'
+	'She tried to keep silent, but you were not satisfied.'
+	'"So, did they or didn''t they? You insist on an answer.'
+	'"Well, yes", she acknowledged.'
+	'"Do you know what that means? You continue.'
+	'"What?" Mira asked, blushing terribly, although she already guessed where this was going.'
+	'"It''s time to return the favour", you replied triumphantly while leaning on a tree and beckoning her with your finger. "You can start."'
+	'Mira hesitated a couple of moments as if pondering something and then sat down in front of you on her knees.'
 	act 'Let Mira lick you':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
 end
 
@@ -730,8 +730,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb_talk_mira3':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'You leaned on the tree and beckoned Mira the finger.'
-	'" - Get over her Mira. You know what to do"'
-	'She already know what to do and got down on her knees in front of you.'
+	'"Get over her, Mira. You know what to do."'
+	'She already knew what to do and got down on her knees in front of you.'
 
 	act 'Let Mira lick you':gt 'mirasex','miralick_first'
 end
@@ -744,21 +744,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk1':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_lesb_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	if MiraLoc ! 2:'In the clearing you met Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came up with a sly smile on his lips.'
+	if MiraLoc ! 2:'In the clearing, you met Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came up with a sly smile on his lips.'
 	if MiraLoc = 2:'When you came into the clearing, Mira immediately came to you with a sly smile on his lips.'
-	'" - <<$pcs_nickname>>, you fucked all the boys in the village now.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you fucked all the boys in the village now.'
 	'You tried to keep silent, but Mira wouldn''t let it go.'
-	'" - So did they or did they not?," - she insisted you answer.'
-	'" - Well, yeah so?"'
-	'" - I was thinking you served all the boys and forgot about your best friend." Mira said looking you in the eye.'
+	'"So did they or didn''t they?" - she insisted on your answer.'
+	'"Well, yeah, so?"'
+	'"I was thinking about how you served all the boys and forgot about your best friend," Mira said, looking you in the eye.'
 	if lesbian = 0:
-		'" - So you''re not a guy. Do you want to do that?," - you say surprised'
-		'" - Everyone knows girls know the best ways to pleasure girls," she answered you.'
+		'"So you''re not a guy. Do you want to do that?" - you say, surprised'
+		'"Everyone knows girls know the best ways to pleasure girls," she answered.'
 	else
-		'You already guessed where she was going with this, but still hesitated.'
-		'" - Come on, don''t sulk <<$pcs_nickname>>, it doesn''t suit you, " she continued to get comfortable on the nearest stone.'
-		'" - Well Mira, I''ll do it, " you said falling on his knees.'
-		'"In the end, why not make her friend pleased?" - you thought to yourself.'
+		'You already guessed where she was going with this but still hesitated.'
+		'"Come on, don''t sulk, <<$pcs_nickname>>, it doesn''t suit you," she continued to get comfortable on the nearest stone.'
+		'"Well, Mira, I''ll do it, " you said, falling on your knees.'
+		'"In the end, why not please your friend?" you thought.'
 	end
 	if lesbian = 0:
 		act 'Hesitate':
@@ -768,8 +768,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk1':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_lesb_talk2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After these words, you stared dumbfounded Mira.'
-			'" - But I don''t do that, I''m not a lesbian, " you try to find a way out of this. But the idea that you will go down on a girl right here in the middle of the clearing, makes your pussy soaking wet even if you didn''t want it to.'
+			'After these words, you stared dumbfounded at Mira.'
+			'"But I don''t do that. I''m not a lesbian," you try to find a way out of this. But the idea that you will go down on a girl right here in the middle of the clearing makes your pussy soaking wet, even if you didn''t want it to.'
 			act 'Try to convince Mira':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
@@ -777,11 +777,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk1':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_lesb_talk3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You still hoped, that you could change Mira''s mind.'
-				'" - Come on, don''t be a prude now <<$pcs_nickname>>," - said Mira, taking you by the shirt and pulling you to the nearest stone. - "Sluts should always pleasure their friends first."'
-				'Sitting on the stone she looked eagerly at you:'
-				'" - Well what are you waiting for, I''m ready."'
-				'" - Well Mira, I''ll do it, " you finally gave in, sinking to his knees. "In the end, why not help Mira out?" - thinking to himself.'
+				'You still hoped that you could change Mira''s mind.'
+				'"Come on, don''t be a prude now, <<$pcs_nickname>>," said Mira, taking you by the shirt and pulling you to the nearest stone. "Sluts should always pleasure their friends first."'
+				'Sitting on the stone, she looked eagerly at you.'
+				'"Well, what are you waiting for? I''m ready."'
+				'"Well, Mira, I''ll do it, " you finally gave in, sinking to your knees. "In the end, why not help Mira out?" thinking to yourself.'
 				act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -800,14 +800,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk2':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_lesb_talk2.jpg"></center>'
 	'Mira walks up to you with a malicious smile on her face.'
-	' - Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, congratulations, she said. - You are now the same whore as me. All the boys fucked you too.'
-	'You tried to keep silent, but she is not satisfied.'
-	' - So did they or did they not?, - she insists on an answer.'
-	' - Well, yes - you acknowledged.'
-	' - You know what that means?, - she continues.'
-	' - What? - blushing terribly you ask, although you already guessed where this is going.'
-	' - It''s time to return the favor, - a triumphant tone she replied leaning on a tree, beckoned you with her finger. - You can start.'
-	'You hesitated a couple of moments, as if pondering something, and then sat down in front of her on your knees.'
+	'"Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>," congratulations, she said. "You are now the same whore as me. All the boys fucked you too."'
+	'You tried to keep silent, but she was not satisfied.'
+	'"So, did they or didn''t they?" she insists on an answer.'
+	'"Well, yes", you acknowledged.'
+	'"You know what that means?" she continues.'
+	'"What?"  you ask, blushing terribly, although you already guessed where this is going.'
+	'"It''s time to return the favour, " she said triumphantly, leaning on a tree, beckoning you with her finger. "You can start."'
+	'You hesitated for a couple of moments as if pondering something, and then you knelt down on your knees in front of her.'
 	act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
 end
 
@@ -821,13 +821,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk3':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_lesb_talk3.jpg"></center>'
 	if MiraLoc ! 2:
-		'In the clearing you met Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came to you with an excited face.'
-		'" - But where are you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was looking for you," she said. - Get over here and help me out.'
+		'In the clearing, you meet Mira. Seeing you, she immediately approached you with an excited face.'
+		'"Where were you, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I was looking for you," she said. So get over here and help me out.'
 	else
 		'When you came into the clearing, Mira immediately turned to you with an excited face.'
-		'" - Come help me out, <<$pcs_nickname>>," - she said and started to get comfortable.'
+		'"Come help me out, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she said and started to get comfortable.'
 	end
-	'You are already familiar with how this works and get on your knees before her.'
+	'You are already familiar with this and get on your knees before her.'
 
 	act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
 end
@@ -842,12 +842,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_lesb_talk4':
 
 	gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
-	'Walking through the village you meet Mira. Seeing you, she immediately came up to you with an excited face.'
-	'" - But where were you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was looking for you," she said. - "Let''s go take a walk in our meadow."'
-	'She grabs you by the hand, and literally dragged you behind her. You can hear Mira''s excited breath and know full well why she is taking you to the meadow.'
+	'Walking through the village, you meet Mira. Seeing you, she immediately approaches you with an excited face.'
+	'"Where were you, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I was looking for you," she said. "Let''s go take a walk in our meadow."'
+	'She grabs you by the hand and literally drags you behind her. You can hear Mira''s excited breath and know fully why she is taking you to the meadow.'
 	'When you came into the clearing, Mira immediately turned to you with an excited face.'
-		'" - Come help me out, <<$pcs_nickname>>," - she said and started to get comfortable.'
-	'You are already familiar with how this works and get on your knees before her.'
+		'"Come help me out, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she said and started to get comfortable.'
+	'You are already familiar with this and get on your knees before her.'
 	act 'Lick Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_first'
 end
 
@@ -859,11 +859,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr.jpg"></center>'
-		'You were about to approach her, but stop as she undoes her pants. You decide to watch to what she does...'
+		'You were about to approach her but stopped as she undoes her pants. You decide to watch what she does...'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira, pulls up harshly on her panties so that they bite deeply between her labia. Mira looks around again, but you are concealed in the dense thicket thus she fails to spot you watching...'
+			'Mira pulls up harshly on her panties, so they bite deeply between her labia. Mira looks around again, but you are concealed in the dense thicket. Thus, she fails to spot you watching...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
@@ -875,7 +875,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Next she pulls down her panties and you can see her wet pussy.'
+					'Next, she pulls down her panties, and you can see her wet pussy.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr6.jpg"></center>'
-								'Finally she leans against the nearest tree as she brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+								'Finally, she leans against the nearest tree as she brings herself to orgasm. You watch for a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -913,13 +913,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr8.jpg"></center>'
-			'She plays with herself for a few minutes before she stopping to look at a nearby log...'
+			'She plays with herself for a few minutes before she stops to look at a nearby log...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr9.jpg"></center>'
-				'Having made her decision, she walk over to the log and starts to remove her panties.'
+				'Having made her decision, she walks over to the log and starts to remove her panties.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
@@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr11.jpg"></center>'
-						'Mira begins to caress herself again and brings herself to orgasm... You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Mira begins to caress herself again and brings herself to orgasm... You watch for a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira starts to get dressed, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr13.jpg"></center>'
-			'She soon gets bored and she, as if on purpose, turns her ass towards you and pulls off her skirt.'
+			'She soon gets bored and, as if on purpose, turns her ass towards you and pulls off her skirt.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
@@ -960,13 +960,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 				act 'Watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr15.jpg"></center>'
-					'Getting up from the stump, Mira takes off her top and is now only in her panties.'
+					'After getting up from the stump, Mira takes off her top and is only in her panties.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowmastr16.jpg"></center>'
-						'Finally she takes off her shirt, squats, and brings herself to orgasm. You watch a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so, you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
+						'Finally, she takes off her shirt, squats, and brings herself to orgasm. You watch for a couple minutes in hopes of a sequel, but Mira begins to get dressed, so you decide to make a hasty retreat...'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -982,7 +982,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowsex.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they are saying from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
+		'You see Mira and Mitka talking to each other. You can''t hear what they say from this far away, but they begin to undress in your meadow.'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadowsex1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1008,12 +1008,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if temp_md = 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowanal.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see Mira lower her ass onto Mitka''s member and begin to bounce on top of him. You can hear the sound everytime her butt cheeks hit his thighs...'
+			'You see Mira lower her ass onto Mitka''s member and begin to bounce on top of him. You can hear the sound every time her butt cheeks hit his thighs...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowanal1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira get down on all fours and spreads her ass cheeks wide apart.She moans loudly as Mitka drives his cock into her ass.'
+			'Mira gets down on all fours and spreads her ass cheeks wide apart. She moans loudly as Mitka drives his cock into her ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
@@ -1021,7 +1021,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 			*clr & cla
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowanal2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a couple of minutes Mitka slaps her ass and pulls out of Mira. She gets up on her knees before him and sticks her tongue out as his warm cum shoots all over her face.'
+			'After a couple of minutes, Mitka slaps her ass and pulls out of Mira. She gets up on her knees before him and sticks her tongue out as his warm cum shoots all over her face.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 				*clr & cla
 				mirasextimes += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj1.jpg"></center>'
-				'But, apparently, you''re a little late, because after a couple minutes Kolyamba puts a hand on the back of Mira''s head and holds her while he cums down her throat. At first she gags, but eventually obediently swallows his cum...'
+				'But, apparently, you''re a little late because, after a couple minutes, Kolyamba puts a hand on the back of Mira''s head and holds her while he cums down her throat. At first, she gags but eventually obediently swallows his cum...'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1049,7 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 			*clr & cla
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj2.jpg"></center>'
-			'All Mira has on is some flip-flops with her face in the ground and her ass in the air. She''s moaning loudly as Kolyamba pounds her pussy and cums inside of her...'
+			'All Mira has on is some flip-flops with her face on the ground and her ass in the air. She moans loudly as Kolyamba pounds her pussy and cums inside of her...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		if temper < 20:
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj5.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira is tied to a tree as Vasyan enthusiastically drives his cock in her mouth. She gags and coughs, but at the same time, she moves her head farther down his member. After a couple of minutes Vasyan tilts back his head and with a blissful roar cums in her mouth...'
+			'Mira is tied to a tree as Vasyan enthusiastically drives his cock in her mouth. She gags and coughs, but simultaneously, she moves her head farther down his member. Finally, after a couple of minutes, Vasyan tilts back his head and, with a blissful roar cums in her mouth...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		else
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj6.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira is completely naked and bent over in front of Vasyan. She is really enjoying it as he thrusts into her ass. After a few minutes he pulls out and sprays cum all over back.'
+			'Mira is completely naked and bent over in front of Vasyan. She is really enjoying it as he thrusts into her ass. After a few minutes, he pulls out and sprays cum over her back.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1083,14 +1083,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		if temper < 20:
 			mirasextimes += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj3.jpg"></center>'
-			'They are both completely naked and Mira is sticking her ass up in the air as she deepthroats Vasyan. After a couple of minutes you see Mira gulp down his sperm without even removing her mouth from his cock.'
+			'They are completely naked, and Mira sticks her ass up in the air as she deepthroats Vasyan. After a few minutes, you see Mira gulp down his sperm without removing her mouth from his cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Hide until they leave': minut += 10 & gt 'meadow'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj4.jpg"></center>'
-			'They are both completely naked and Mira squeals with joy as she rides on Vasyan''s member. He does not last long and cums all over her butt as soon as he pulls out of her.'
+			'They are completely naked, and Mira squeals joyfully as she rides on Vasyan''s member. Unfortunately, he does not last long and cums all over her butt as soon as he pulls out of her.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1102,11 +1102,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		mirasextimes += 1
 		if temper < 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj7.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
+			'Mira is kneeling between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her, so you can''t determine who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj8.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mira is kneeling in between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her so you can''t make out who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
+			'Mira is kneeling between the three friends and sucking their cocks with great pleasure. They are all crowded around her, so you can''t determine who is in her mouth, who is grabbing her tits, and who is getting a handjob.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		elseif temper >= 20 and temper < 25:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj10.jpg"></center>'
-			'Two boys are fucking Mira in her mouth and pussy at the same time. The whole time they are laughing and talking while Mira moans in between them... Fifteen minutes later they finish with her and leave.'
+			'Two boys are fucking Mira in her mouth and pussy simultaneously. The whole time they are laughing and talking while Mira moans in between them... Fifteen minutes later, they finish with her and leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj9.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1138,7 +1138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 		npc_QW['A60'] += 1
 		mirasextimes += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mirameadowbj12.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching, as the men take turns fucking Mira until they are all tired out.'
+		'Mira is almost invisible with all the bodies around her. You can only see her naked ass and feet swaying in the air. You spend half an hour watching as the men take turns fucking Mira until they are all tired.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 30
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirameadow':
 	if meadow = 3 and MiraLoc = 0 and npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and temp_md = 9:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirameadows.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see Mira on all fours with her back to you. She is shoving an ear of corn in her ass which looks painful but she is still moaning. Eventually, Mira finishes and tosses the cum covered ear of corn off into the bushes almost hitting you!'
+		'You see Mira on all fours with her back to you. She is shoving an ear of corn in her ass which looks painful, but she is still moaning. Eventually, Mira finishes and tosses the cum covered ear of corn off into the bushes, almost hitting you!'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 2 - 2
locations/mey_home.qsrc

@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		!! TODO: for now, if Sveta is at the Meynolds'' she can''t use their internet for porn and camshows. 
 		!! Need an agreement on the final options with everyone
 		gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access', 'free', 'noporn', 'nocamshow'
-		'Your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the desk.'
+		'Your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is on the desk.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Return to the hallway':
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mey_morning_vomit':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/hotel.room.best1.jpg"></center>'
-	'At that moment, a sharp knocking sounds on the door and and Tamara''s muffled voice comes through the fine wood.'
+	'At that moment, a sharp knocking sounds on the door and Tamara''s muffled voice comes through the fine wood.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>? Are you all right? I thought I heard you throwing up. Is everything okay?"'
 	
 	act'Everything is fine':

+ 15 - 15
locations/mirafather.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if npc_QW['A64'] = 0:'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mira''s Father</font></b><
 if npc_QW['A64'] > 0:'<center><b><font color = maroon>Afanasiy</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big64.jpg"></center>'
 *nl
-'Mira''s father, <<boyage>> years old. After his wife died, he drank heavily and looks much older than he actually is. He is still in good shape for a man his age.'
+'Mira''s father is <<boyage>> years old. After his wife died, he started to drink heavily. As a result, he looks much older than he actually is. However, he is still in good shape for a man his age.'
 
 act 'Leave him be':gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'start'
 
@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ if Mira_no > 0 and mirafathertalk = 0 and miraday ! daystart:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big64.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'You are passing Mira''s house when you see Mira''s father headed in your direction.'
-	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, wait. I need to speak with you," he says coming closer to you.'
+	'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, wait. I need to speak with you," he says, coming closer.'
 	'You stop and look at him frightfully. "Did Mira tell him what I made her do?" you think as panicked thoughts race through your head.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you know what happened to Mira?" Afanasiy asks, looking you in the eye.'
 	'"N-no, what happened to her?" you ask in a confused voice, expecting him to start shouting any second.'
 	'"I don''t know. She is just sitting at home all the time. She doesn''t leave the yard, I''m concerned." Mira''s father answers.'
-	'"Oh, ah... I don''t know," you say, trying to make it sound believable and make your eyes look innocent. "Maybe she was by hurt some local boy, or had a fight with someone..."'
-	'"Okay, I think it will pass... soon I hope. But, I want you to come and visit us, I think your company would do Mira a lot of good. It might bring her out of this funk faster." Mira''s father says good-bye, and leaves to resume working around his house.'
+	'"Oh, ah... I don''t know," you say, trying to make it sound believable and make your eyes look innocent. "Maybe she was hurt by some local boy or had a fight with someone..."'
+	'"Okay, I think it will pass... soon, I hope. But I want you to come and visit us. I think your company would do Mira a lot of good. It might bring her out of this funk faster." Mira''s father says goodbye and leaves to resume working around his house.'
 	'"Close call," you think as you watch his retreating back and exhale with relief.'
 	MiraLoc = 0
 	minut += 10
@@ -55,16 +55,16 @@ else
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big64.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'Mira''s father tells you that she''s not home, she left without telling him where she was going.'
+				'Mira''s father tells you that she''s not home. She left without telling him where she was going.'
 
 				if mirapimp = 1:
-					'Mira is not home but you know exactly where to find her. She has been working as your prostitute on the highway.'
+					'Mira is not home, but you know exactly where to find her. She has been working as your prostitute on the highway.'
 				elseif miraprost > 1:
-					'Mira is not home but you know exactly where to find her. You have seen her working as a prostitute on the highway.'
+					'Mira is not home, but you know exactly where to find her. You have seen her working as a prostitute on the highway.'
 				elseif miraprost = 1:
-					'Mira is not home but you think you know where to find her. Ever since granting your second wish you have heard rumors that Mira has been earning money as a prostitute on the highway.'
+					'Mira is not home, but you think you know where to find her. Ever since granting your second wish, you have heard rumours that Mira has been earning money as a prostitute on the highway.'
 				else
-					'Mira is not home and you have no idea where she might be. Maybe you should go look around town.'
+					'Mira is not home, and you have no idea where she might be. So maybe you should go look around town.'
 				end
 				act 'Go back to the village center':gt 'gadukino'
 				if miraprost > 0: minut += 20 & act 'Go to the highway': gt 'gadprostitutes','start'
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ else
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big64.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'Mira''s father tells you that she''s not home, she said she was going to the river.'
+				'Mira''s father tells you that she''s not home. She said she was going to the river.'
 
 				act 'Go back to the village center':gt 'gadukino'
 				act 'Go to the river':gt 'gadriver','start'
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ else
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big64.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You spend several minutes with Afanasiy, playful looking him over and smiling meaningfully at him.	 He is happy with the company of a beautiful young woman.  A couple of times during your conversation, you notice his eyes roving up and down your body appraisingly.'
+				'You spend several minutes with Afanasiy, playful looking him over and smiling meaningfully at him. He is happy with the company of a beautiful young woman. During your conversation, you notice his eyes roving up and down your body appraisingly.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'mirafather'
 			end
@@ -148,14 +148,14 @@ else
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big64.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You move over and stand next to Afanasiy.	You let your hand start to stroke his thigh and slowly move towards his crotch. Afanasiy looks at you for a while deep in thought. Eventually he sighs, and then nods to himself as if he has made a decision. He takes you by the hand and leads you into his house, and then down the hall into his room.'
+				'You move over and stand next to Afanasiy.	You let your hand start to stroke his thigh and slowly move towards his crotch. Afanasiy looks at you for a while, deep in thought. Eventually, he sighs and then nods to himself as if he has made a decision. He takes you by the hand, leads you into his house, and then down the hall into his room.'
 
 				act 'Enjoy his touch':
 					*clr & cla
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirafathersexkuni.jpg"></center>'
 					*nl
-					'Afanasiy is a gentle lover. With practiced ease he gently undresses you and crouches before you.  His mouth and fingers play across the lips of your pussy, he skillfully licks you until, until he brings you a powerful orgasm.'
+					'Afanasiy is a gentle lover. With practised ease, he gently undresses you and crouches before you. His mouth and fingers play across the lips of your pussy, and he skillfully licks you until he brings you a powerful orgasm.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ else
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big64.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You expressly wink at Afanasiy and he understands your meaning.  Looking about for nosy neighbors, he quickly waves for you to enter the house.'
+				'You expressly wink at Afanasiy, and he understands your meaning. Then, looking for nosy neighbours, he quickly waves for you to enter the house.'
 
 				act 'Go inside':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ else
 							if temp_mf < 5:
 								'Afanasiy gently pulls away from you, leaving a couple of pearly drops of semen on your lips, and continues cumming on your tits and abdomen.'
 							else
-								'Afanasiy gently pulls out of you, you kneel in front of him as he begins cumming on your tits and abdomen.'
+								'Afanasiy gently pulls out of you. You kneel before him as he begins cumming on your tits and abdomen.'
 							end
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', -2
 							gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy, 1,'','',15

+ 61 - 61
locations/mirasex.qsrc

@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirakiss':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirakiss'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	temp = rand(1,4)
 	if temp = 1:'You passionately bite Mira''s luscious lips. She responds to your kiss no less passionately, causing you to moan out of joy.'
-	if temp = 2:'You kiss Mira feeling her soft lips and her slim nimble tongue penetrate into your mouth.'
-	if temp = 3:'Mira gently kisses your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips and you feel the thrill of her kiss washing over you.'
-	if temp = 4:'Mira passionately kisses your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips and you return the kiss, feeling the exhilaration in every part of your body.'
+	if temp = 2:'You kiss Mira as her soft lips, and slim, nimble tongue penetrate your mouth.'
+	if temp = 3:'Mira gently kisses your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips, and you feel the thrill of her kiss washing over you.'
+	if temp = 4:'Mira passionately kisses your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips, and you return the kiss, feeling exhilaration in every part of your body.'
 	*nl
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'lesbian'
 	minut -= 5
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'foreplay':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miraforeplay'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	temp = rand(1,3)
-	if temp = 1:'You passionately kiss with Mira, stroking her crotch and arousing both of you even more.'
+	if temp = 1:'You kiss Mira passionately, stroking her crotch and arousing you even more.'
 	if temp = 2:'You give Mira a gentle kiss while stroking her pussy through her panties...'
 	if temp = 3:'You kiss Mira, your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips touching her lips in a hot kiss, and your hand on her crotch making her moan excitedly.'
 	*nl
@@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'foreplay':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miraforeplay'+rand(5,7)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		temp = rand(1,3)
-		if temp = 1:'Mira fondles your <<tits>> cup breasts, gently squeezing them in her hands and kissing them.'
-		if temp = 2:'You feel her hot breath on your chest, and her slick tongue caressing your nipples and giving you great pleasure.'
-		if temp = 3:'Mira fondles your breasts, gently squeezing them in her hands. She kisses and teases your nipples with her tongue.'
+		if temp = 1:'Mira fondles your <<$titsize>> breasts, gently squeezing them in her hands and kissing them.'
+		if temp = 2:'You feel her hot breath on your chest and her slick tongue caressing your nipples and giving you great pleasure.'
+		if temp = 3:'Mira fondles your breasts, gently squeezing them in her hands. Then, she kisses and teases your nipples with her tongue.'
 		mirahorny += 10
 		svetahorny += 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -72,17 +72,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horny_talk':
 	svetahorny += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/horny_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	'Mira caught your gaze and smiled. She turns you around and lifts your top so she can grope you breast.'
-	'You hold a tree branch for support and let her after a few minutes she guides your free hand into her panties.'
-	'You feel she is quite wet right now! She lets your hand stay in her panties for another couple of moments.'
+	'Mira caught your gaze and smiled. She turns you around and lifts your top so she can grope your breast.'
+	'You hold a tree branch for support and let her. After a few minutes, she guides your free hand into her panties.'
+	'You feel she is pretty wet right now! She lets your hand stay in her panties for another couple of moments.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	if npc_rel['A60'] < 15:
-		'"Get the fuck off me you slut." Mira says, pulling away. She doesn''t sound convincing but you will have to improve you relationship is you want to take things further.'
-		'She walks home alone singing a song. You watch her for a moment before heading back to the village as well.'
+		'"Get the fuck off me, you slut." Mira says, pulling away. She doesn''t sound convincing, but you must improve your relationship to take things further.'
+		'She walks home alone, singing a song. You watch her for a moment before heading back to the village.'
 		act 'Leave':MiraLoc = 0 & minut += 10 & gt 'gadukino'
 	else
-		'Mira moans in enjoyment then starts to pull at your panties.'
-		'You help her pull them down and she step out of them.'
+		'Mira moans in enjoyment and then starts to pull at your panties.'
+		'You help her pull them down, and she steps out of them.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'mirasex','mirafinger'
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_dog':
 	if svetahorny >= 50 and rand(0,2) ! 0:
 		you_orgasm = 1
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'You cannot hold out any more from the stimulation that Mira is providing and with a shudder you cum in her face.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'You cannot hold out anymore from Mira''s stimulation, and you cum in her face with a shudder.'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick_dog_cum.jpg"></center>'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick_dog'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
@@ -154,9 +154,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_start':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/lickmira_start.jpg"></center>'
 	if lesbian < 10:
-		'Kneeling down, you gently touch Mira''s panties and begin pulling them down. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
+		'You gently touch Mira''s panties and begin pulling them down. She is excitedly hot and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	else
-		'Kneeling down, you reach for Mira''s panties and began pulling them off of her. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
+		'Kneeling down, you reached for Mira''s panties and began pulling them off her. She is excitedly hot and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 	minut -= 5
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		if you_orgasm = 0:'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself up and head home.'
+		if you_orgasm = 0:'After Mira''s orgasms, you get out between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. Then, you clean yourself up and head home.'
 	elseif mirahorny < 50:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/lickmira_mis'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$textmis[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis2':
 	elseif miraorgasm = 0 and you_orgasm = 1:
 		act 'Continue licking Mira':gt 'mirasex','lickmira_mis2'
 	else
-		'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself up and head back to village with Mira.'
+		'After Mira''s orgasms, you get out between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. Then, you clean yourself up and head back to the village with Mira.'
 		act 'Leave':
 			gs 'mirasex', 'end'
 		end
@@ -212,10 +212,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_start':
 	miralick += 1
 	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mira_start_tanga1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Kneeling down, Mira pulls down your panties with a smile on her face, while looking you in the eyes. You lean against the tree, close your eyes, and wait for her to continue...'
+		'Mira pulls down your panties with a smile while looking you in the eyes. You lean against the tree, close your eyes, and wait for her to continue...'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mira_start_tanga0.jpg"></center>'
-		'Dropping to her knees and not finding any panties, Mira licked your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> vagina, sampling it''s taste, and causing an involuntary moan of pleasure from you. You lean against the tree, close your eyes, and wait for her to continue...'
+		'Dropping to her knees and not finding any panties, Mira licked your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> vagina, sampling its taste and causing an involuntary moan of pleasure from you. You lean against the tree, close your eyes, and wait for her to continue...'
 	end
 	*nl
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira and you cum together. Your mouth filled with her taste and her scent filling the air you lie for a minute blissed out before you slowly regain your senses and get ready to go.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira and you cum together. Your mouth filled with her taste, and her scent filled the air. You lie for a minute blissed out before you slowly regain your senses and get ready to go.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 15
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum1.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]+$text_cum[1]
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'The stimulation both from Mira''s ministrations and your efforts to get her off hits you hard and you cum. You take a moment then decide to focus on Mira.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'The stimulation from Mira''s ministrations and your efforts to get her off hits you hard, and you cum. You take a moment and then decide to focus on Mira.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 15
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_1':
 		mirahorny = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/lickmira_69_cum2.jpg"></center>'
 		$text69[4]+$textlick[iif(lesbian < 10,rand(7,9),rand(10,12))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,5,iif(pcs_horny < 80,6,7))]+$text69[5]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[iif(pcs_horny < 60,1,iif(pcs_horny < 80,2,3))]
-		'After a while Mira cums, her juices covering your face. For a minute she rides the wave of pleasure before she turns her attention to you...'
+		'After a while, Mira cums, her juices covering your face. For a minute, she rides the wave of pleasure before she turns her attention to you...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 15
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_stand2':
 		you_orgasm = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick_stand_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textstand[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[3]
-		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira licks your pussy, it feels great. In fact it feels incredible, you can''t hold back any more and a warmth spreads through your abdomen as you cum.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira licks your pussy. It feels great. In fact, it feels incredible, you can''t hold back anymore, and a warmth spreads through your abdomen as you cum.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick_stand'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
@@ -353,10 +353,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_first':
 	if mirasex = 0:mirasex = 1 & girl += 1
 	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mira_start_tanga1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Kneeling down, Mira timidly reaches for your panties. She locks eyes with you and smiles shyly. You relax against the tree, close your eyes and tremble in the anticipation.'
+		'Kneeling down, Mira timidly reaches for your panties. She locks eyes with you and smiles shyly. You relax against the tree, close your eyes and tremble in anticipation.'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/mira_start_tanga0.jpg"></center>'
-		'Dropping to her knees and not finding you wearing panties, Mira timidly touches your vagina, causing you involuntary moan of pleasure. You lean against the tree, and close your eyes, wait for her to continue...'
+		'Dropping to her knees and not finding you wearing panties, Mira timidly touches your vagina, causing you an involuntary moan of pleasure. You lean against the tree and close your eyes, waiting for her to continue...'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miralick_stand1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/miralick_stand_cum.jpg"></center>'
 		$textstand[rand(1,3)]+$textlick[iif(miralick < 10,rand(1,3),rand(4,6))]+$text_emotions[3]+$text_cum[1]
 		$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira continues to lick you until you cum. After some time, you head back to the village together.'
+		$orgasm_txt = 'Mira continues to lick you until you cum. Then, after some time, you head back to the village together.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 		minut -= 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -398,9 +398,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_first':
 	if mirasex = 0:mirasex = 1 & girl += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/sex/lickmira_start.jpg"></center>'
 	if lesbian < 10:
-		'Kneeling down, you gently touch Mira''s panties and begin pulling them down. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
+		'You gently touch Mira''s panties and begin pulling them down. She is excitedly hot and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	else
-		'Kneeling down, you reach for Mira''s panties and begin pulling them off of her. She is hot with excitement and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
+		'Kneeling down, you reach for Mira''s panties and begin pulling them off her. She is excitedly hot and wiggles her ass to help you get them off faster...'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 	minut -= 5
@@ -429,9 +429,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis1':
 		minut -= 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		if pcs_horny < 60:
-			'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself up and head home.'
+			'After Mira''s orgasms, you get out between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. Then, you clean yourself up and head home.'
 		else
-			'After Mira orgasms,you get out from between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. You clean yourself up and smile at Mira before heading back to the village with her.'
+			'After Mira''s orgasms, you get out between her legs and wipe her juices off your face. Then, you clean yourself up and smile at Mira before returning to the village with her.'
 		end
 		act 'Leave':MiraLoc = 0 & minut += 10 & gt 'gadukino'
 	end
@@ -442,45 +442,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lickmira_mis1':
 	killvar '$text_cum'
 end
 
-$textstand[1] = 'Leaning against the tree, you feel the Mira''s hot breath and stimulating touch of her toungue between your legs. '
+$textstand[1] = 'Leaning against the tree, you feel Mira''s hot breath and the stimulating touch of her tongue between your legs. '
 $textstand[2] = 'Closing your eyes and leaning against the tree, you feel the light touch of Mira''s tongue lick your vagina. '
-$textstand[3] = 'Leaning against the tree, you feel Mira''s hot breath and light touch of her tongue on your vagina. '
-$textdog[1] = 'Standing with your ass facing Mira, you feel her hot breath and stimulating touch of her tongue on your pussy. '
+$textstand[3] = 'Leaning against the tree, you feel Mira''s hot breath and the light touch of her tongue on your vagina. '
+$textdog[1] = 'Standing with your ass facing Mira, you feel her hot breath and the stimulating touch of her tongue on your pussy. '
 $textdog[2] = 'Closing your eyes and sticking your ass out in front of Mira, you feel the light touch of her tongue to your vagina. '
 $textdog[3] = 'Standing with your ass facing Mira, you feel her hot breath between your legs and the exciting touch of her tongue and fingers in your vagina. '
 $textdog[4] = 'Standing with your ass facing Mira, you feel the stimulating touch of her hands caressing your wet pussy. '
-$textmis[1] = 'Mira is sitting on the rock in front of you with her legs spread wide, watching your progress. '
+$textmis[1] = 'Mira is sitting on the rock in front of you, her legs spread wide, watching your progress. '
 $textmis[2] = 'Sitting on the stone with her legs spread wide, Mira enjoys the caress of your lips and tongue. '
-$textmis[3] = 'Mira is relaxing with her legs spread wide apart, feeling your hot breath on her crotch and feeling the stimulating touch of your tongue in her vagina. '
-$text69[1] = 'You and Mira are lying on top of one another, greedily licking the others pussy. '
-$text69[2] = 'You lie on the ground and right before your eyes, is Mira''s dripping wet pussy. '
-$text69[3] = 'Spread her legs wide apart, Mira is hanging her pussy over you and enjoying your hot breath on her crotch and feeling the stimulating touch of your tongue on her vagina. '
-$text69[4] = 'You lie on the ground with Mira, throwing a leg over you, takes the position on top. You feel Mira''s hot breath between your legs and stimulating touch of her tongue on your pussy. '
-$text69[5] = 'Licking Mira you feel her hot breath between your legs and stimulating touch of her tongue at the same time. '
+$textmis[3] = 'Mira is relaxing with her legs spread wide apart, feeling your hot breath on her crotch and the stimulating touch of your tongue in her vagina. '
+$text69[1] = 'You and Mira lie on top of one another, greedily licking the other''s pussy. '
+$text69[2] = 'You lie on the ground, and right before your eyes is Mira''s dripping wet pussy. '
+$text69[3] = 'Spread her legs wide apart. Mira is hanging her pussy over you, enjoying your hot breath on her crotch, and feeling the stimulating touch of your tongue on her vagina. '
+$text69[4] = 'You lie on the ground with Mira, throwing a leg over you, and she takes a position on top. You feel Mira''s hot breath between your legs and the stimulating touch of her tongue on your pussy. '
+$text69[5] = 'Licking Mira, you feel her hot breath between your legs and the stimulating touch of her tongue simultaneously. '
 $textlick[1] ='Spreading your labia with her fingers, she licks clumsily, her inexperienced tongue swiping across the length of your pussy. '
 $textlick[2] ='She timidly kisses your labia, sometimes touching gently touching your clitoris. '
 $textlick[3] ='She carefully moves her inexperienced tongue from top to bottom, sometimes gently touching your clitoris. '
 $textlick[4] ='Spreading your labia with her fingers, she licks skillfully, swiping her tongue across the length of your pussy and tickling your clitoris. '
-$textlick[5] ='She kisses your pussy, sometimes trying to penetrate a naughty finger in your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> vagina '
-$textlick[6] ='She quickly but skillfully licks your pussy from top to bottom, sometimes making a circular motion, and gently touching your clitoris. '
-$textlick[7] ='Your face buried between her legs, your lick clumsily, swiping your inexperienced tongue over her vagina, '
-$textlick[8] ='You timidly kisses your labia, sometimes attempting to finger your clitoris as well. '
+$textlick[5] ='She kisses your pussy, sometimes trying to penetrate a naughty finger in your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> vagina. '
+$textlick[6] ='She quickly but skillfully licks your pussy from top to bottom, sometimes making a circular motion and gently touching your clitoris. '
+$textlick[7] ='Your face buried between her legs, your lick clumsily, swiping your inexperienced tongue over her vagina. '
+$textlick[8] ='She timidly kisses your labia, sometimes attempting to finger your clitoris. '
 $textlick[9] ='You gently move your inexperienced tongue from top to bottom, across her pussy, and sometimes gently touch her clitoris. '
-$textlick[10] ='Your face is buried between her legs. You licking her enthusiastically, swiping your tongue across the length of her pussy, not forgetting about her clitoris. '
+$textlick[10] ='Your face is buried between her legs. You lick her enthusiastically, swiping your tongue across the length of her pussy, not forgetting about her clitoris. '
 $textlick[11] ='You kiss her pussy, caress her labia lips, and occasionally penetrate them with your tongue to lick her clitoris. '
-$textlick[12] ='You quickly and skillfully lick her pussy, penetrating her vagina and caressing her clitoris too. '
-$textfinger[1] ='You feel a quick movement of her fingers, moving back and forth in your pussy, '
-$textfinger[2] ='She moves two fingers inside your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> vagina, '
-$textfinger[3] ='She moves her fingers along the entire length of your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>>, making you squirm, '
-$text_emotions[1] = 'causing a storm of emotions to wash over you.'
-$text_emotions[2] = 'causing you screams of pleasure.'
-$text_emotions[3] = 'making moans of pleasure escape your lips and forcing her to move her hips to meet yours.'
-$text_emotions[4] = 'making moans of pleasure escape your lips and forcing her to move her ass to meet yours.'
-$text_emotions[5] = 'making you tremble from every touch.'
-$text_emotions[6] = 'making moans of pleasure escape your lips.'
-$text_emotions[7] = 'making your whole body arch and press her head into deeper into your crotch.'
-$text_cum[1] = 'Gradually, a pleasant warmth grows and spreads from your belly, then the sensations wash over you and your body is uncontrollable in the hot waves of an orgasm. You involuntarily scream in pleasure as your whole body squirms and shudders.'
-$text_cum[2] = 'After some time, Mira began to tremble and her pussy started rhythmically pulsing in front of your face. She arched in orgasm, moaned, and held your head with her feet as her juices flooded over your face.'
-$text_cum[3] = 'Gradually, a pleasant warmth grows and spreads from your belly, then the sensations wash over you and your body is uncontrollable in the hot waves of an orgasm. You involuntarily scream in pleasure as your whole body squirms and shudders. At the same time you notice that Mira trembled all over and her pussy started rhythmically pulsing. She arched in orgasm, moaned, and held your head with her feet as her juices flooded over your face.'
+$textlick[12] ='You quickly and skillfully lick her pussy, penetrating her vagina and caressing her clitoris. '
+$textfinger[1] ='You feel a quick movement of her fingers, moving back and forth in your pussy. '
+$textfinger[2] ='She moves two fingers inside your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> vagina. '
+$textfinger[3] ='She moves her fingers along the entire length of your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>>, making you squirm. '
+$text_emotions[1] = 'Causing a storm of emotions to wash over you. '
+$text_emotions[2] = 'Causing your screams of pleasure. '
+$text_emotions[3] = 'Making moans of pleasure escape your lips and forcing her to move her hips to meet yours. '
+$text_emotions[4] = 'Making moans of pleasure escape your lips and forcing her to move her ass to meet yours. '
+$text_emotions[5] = 'Making you tremble from every touch. '
+$text_emotions[6] = 'Making moans of pleasure escape your lips. '
+$text_emotions[7] = 'Make your whole body arch and press her head deeper into your crotch. '
+$text_cum[1] = 'Gradually, a pleasant warmth grows and spreads from your belly. Then the sensations wash over you, and your body is uncontrollable in the hot waves of orgasm. Finally, you involuntarily scream in pleasure as your whole body squirms and shudders. '
+$text_cum[2] = 'After some time, Mira began to tremble, and her pussy started rhythmically pulsing in front of your face. Finally, she arched in orgasm, moaned, and held your head with her feet as her juices flooded your face. '
+$text_cum[3] = 'Gradually, a pleasant warmth grows and spreads from your belly. Then the sensations wash over you, and your body is uncontrollable in the hot waves of orgasm. You involuntarily scream in pleasure as your whole body squirms and shudders. At the same time, you notice that Mira trembled all over and her pussy started rhythmically pulsing. Finally, she arched in orgasm, moaned, and held your head with her feet as her juices flooded your face. '
 
 --- mirasex ---------------------------------

+ 71 - 71
locations/miroslava.qsrc

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 	! Mira_no > 0 Mira hiding in her house after 3rd wish. Reduces 1 per day, plus 1 more per day if you talk to her
 
 	gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-	'Mira is a sociable girl. She is <<girlage>> years old. She lives with her father, who recently had to move in here because of the huge debts he had to some disreptuble men in the city. He had to sell all the families property, including an apartment in the city center. With the little money they had left over, they could only afford to buy a house in a rundown village, like this one.'
+	'Mira is a sociable girl. She is <<girlage>> years old. She lives with her father, who recently moved in here because of his considerable debts to some disreputable men in the city. He had to sell all the family''s property, including an apartment in the city centre. With the money left over, they could only afford to buy a house in a rundown village like this one.'
 
 	!npc_rel['A60'] is the measure of your friendship with Mira
 	if npc_rel['A60'] < 5:
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if pcs_inhib < 50:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/graze_cow_river_mira.jpg"></center>'
-				'You wade in the river, splashing around with Mira is lot of fun.'
+				'You wade in the river, splashing around with Mira is a lot of fun.'
 				if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the water.'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow2'
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						end
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/girls_walking'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'You invite her along to wander around the village and she gladly accepts, then you walk together around the small village, telling each other different stories from your lives.'
+						'You invite her to wander around the village, and she gladly accepts. Then you walk together around the small village, telling each other different stories from your lives.'
 						if gadriver_gang = 2 and npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and hour >= 7 and hour < 20:
 							mitkarand = rand(1,12)
 							! 33% chance one of the village boys will demand sex from Mira and Sveta
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_shy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Mira to take a stroll around the village, but Mira only shakes her head, saying that she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
+					'You ask Mira to stroll around the village, but Mira only shakes her head, saying she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 				end
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						end
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
-						'You offer go with Mira to the meadow and she readily agrees. On the way you tell each other different stories, some true but mostly tall tales.'
+						'You offer to go with Mira to the meadow, and she readily agrees. On the way, you tell each other different stories, some genuine but primarily tall tales.'
 
 						act 'Continue':gt 'meadow'
 					else
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_shy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Mira if she wants to go to the meadow, but Mira only shakes her head, saying that she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
+					'You ask Mira if she wants to go to the meadow, but Mira only shakes her head, saying she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 				end
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-				'You ask Mira if she has already met everyone in the village. When she says no, you offer to introduce her to some of the local guys and she readily agrees, asking you to wait a couple of minutes while she changes and freshens up. When she comes out, you go drinking with the group of boys near your house...'
+				'You ask Mira if she has already met everyone in the village. When she says no, you offer to introduce her to some local guys, and she readily agrees, asking you to wait a few minutes while she changes and freshens up. When she comes out, you go drinking with the group of boys near your house...'
 
 				act 'Continue':mira_guest = 0 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh'
 			end
@@ -325,9 +325,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 					if npc_QW['A60'] = 5:
-						'You suggest drinking with the village boys and Mira agrees. Then she whispers that when she leaves with Mitka you should wait for a little then follow them to his home.'
+						'You suggest drinking with the village boys, and Mira agrees. Then she whispers that when she leaves with Mitka, you should wait for a little and follow them to his home.'
 					else
-						'You suggest drinking with the village boys and Mira readily agrees, then asks you to wait a couple of minutes while she changes. When she comes out, you go to drink with the group of boys near your house...'
+						'You suggest drinking with the village boys, and Mira readily agrees, then asks you to wait a few minutes while she changes. When she comes out, you go to drink with the group of boys near your house...'
 					end
 					if npc_QW['A60'] >= 16 and gadriver_gang = 2:
 						act 'Continue':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh_group'
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_shy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Mira if she wants to go drink with the boys, but she only shakes her head, saying that she is too ashamed and she will not leave the house.'
+					'You ask Mira if she wants to go drink with the boys, but she only shakes her head, saying she is too ashamed and will not leave the house.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 				end
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						mira = 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-						'You offer Mira the opportunity to relax with you in the bath. She pauses for a few moments to think, but then agrees slowly. You lead her into your grandparent''s backyard...'
+						'You offer Mira the opportunity to relax with you in the bath. She pauses for a few moments to think but then agrees slowly. Then, you lead her into your grandparents'' backyard...'
 
 						act 'Go to your home':gt 'gadbana'
 					else
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						MiraLoc = 0
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_said_no.jpg"></center>'
-						'You offer Mira together to relax you in the bath, but she rudely answers that will never go bathe with such a whore like you.'
+						'You offer Mira together to relax you in the bath, but she rudely answers that she will never go bathe with such a whore like you.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 					end
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					MiraLoc = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_shy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Mira is she wants to come over and take a steam bath, but she only shakes her head, saying that after what she did she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
+					'You ask Mira if she wants to come over and take a steam bath, but she only shakes her head, saying that after what she did, she is too ashamed to leave the house.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 				end
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						MiraLoc = 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-						'You suggest going to the river to swim or sunbathe, Mira readily agrees.'
+						'You suggest going to the river to swim or sunbathe, and Mira readily agrees.'
 
 						act 'Go to the river':gt 'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
 					else
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_shy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Mira if she wants to go to the river with you, but she only shakes her head, saying that after her humiliation she will not leave the house.'
+					'You ask Mira if she wants to go to the river with you, but she only shakes her head, saying that she will not leave the house after her humiliation.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 				end
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						end
 						gs 'stat'
 						gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-						'You offer her to go to the forest to look for mushrooms and berries and she willingly agrees.'
+						'You offer her to go to the forest to look for mushrooms and berries, and she willingly agrees.'
 
 						act 'Go into the woods':minut += 45 & gt'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
 					else
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						MiraLoc = 0
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_said_no.jpg"></center>'
-						'You have to offer Mira together to go to the forest for mushrooms and berries, but she contemptuous snorts in response and says that she''s not going anywhere with this slut as you.'
+						'You have to offer Mira together to go to the forest for mushrooms and berries. Still, she contemptuously snorts in response and says she''s not going anywhere with a slut like you.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 					end
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_shy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Mira to go to the forest with you to look for mushrooms and berries, but she only shakes her head, saying that after her humiliation she will not leave the house.'
+					'You ask Mira to go to the forest with you to look for mushrooms and berries, but she only shakes her head, saying that she will not leave the house after her humiliation.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 				end
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					gs 'clothing', 'strip_all', 'forest_edge'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/miraforest6.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offered Mira to take a walk through the woods naked and she immediately agreed.'
+					'You offered Mira to walk through the woods naked, and she immediately agreed.'
 
 					act'Continue':gt'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
 				end
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					if npc_rel['A60'] < 30:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-					'You are tired of hanging around on the street and you decided to invite Mira to dinner.'
+					'You are tired of hanging around on the street, and you decide to invite Mira to dinner.'
 
 					act'Go home':
 						if ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and PCloswimwear = 0):
@@ -538,9 +538,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					if npc_rel['A60'] < 20: npc_rel['A60'] += rand(1,2)
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_tv'+rand(1,12)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask your grandparents if Mira can sleep over. They tell you it''s fine with them, so you invite Mira to sleep over.'
+					'You ask your grandparents if Mira can sleep over. They tell you it''s okay with them, so you invite Mira to sleep over.'
 					*nl
-					'You and Mira head over to the huge wardrobe where your clothes are and spend an hour trying on different clothes and underwear.'
+					'You and Mira head over to the vast wardrobe where your clothes are and spend an hour trying on different dresses and underwear.'
 
 					act 'Mira and you raid the kitchen for a late night snack (0:15)': 'You and Mira head to the kitchen to make a quick snack' & gs 'food', 'snack'
 					act 'Go to sleep': 'You''re feeling tired. You and Mira head to your bed and crawl under the covers together and get into bed.' & gt 'bed2'
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					MiraLoc = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-					'You say goodbye to Mira, and she went home.'
+					'You say goodbye to Mira, and she goes home.'
 
 					act 'Walk back home':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 				end
@@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				minut += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come watch TV with me, that''s boring -"  Mira said.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come watch TV with me. That''s boring -"  Mira said.'
 
 				act'Agree':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				minut += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, can we go to the meadow?" Mira asked you. "Let''s take a walk, get some fresh air."'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, can we go to the meadow?" Mira asked you. "Let''s take a walk and get some fresh air."'
 
 				act'Agree':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
-					'You go to Mira through the dense undergrowth to the hidden meadow. Along the way she merrily tells stories from her past city life.'
+					'You go with Mira through the dense undergrowth to the hidden meadow. Along the way, she merrily tells stories from her past city life.'
 
 					act 'Continue': gt 'meadow'
 				end
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go hang out with those guys and drink a little?" Mira asks you. "I''m bored and want to party."'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s hang out with those guys and drink a little?" Mira asks you. "I''m bored and want to party."'
 				if npc_QW['A60'] >= 16 and gadriver_gang = 2:
 					act 'Agree':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh_group'
 				else
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Not right now Mira," you say. "I''m not in the mood to talk right now."'
+					'"Not right now, Mira," you say. "I''m not in the mood to talk right now."'
 
 					act 'Continue': gt 'miroslava', 'Start'
 				end
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/girls_go.jpg"></center>'
-					'You decided to go with Mira to the village beach and all the way she goes, merrily chattering and telling stories.'
+					'You decided to go with Mira to the village beach, and all the way, she goes, merrily chattering and telling stories.'
 
 					act 'Continue': gt'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
 				end
@@ -765,7 +765,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-					'You tell Mira that you don''t feel like going to the river right now.'
+					'You tell Mira that you don''t feel like going to the river now.'
 
 					act 'Continue': gt 'miroslava', 'Start'
 				end
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-				'You remind Mira about the third wish, and she reluctantly nods her head and says that she remembers it. You, act mysterious and with a sinister smile, command her to follow you...'
+				'You remind Mira about the third wish, and she reluctantly nods and says she remembers it. But, then, you act mysterious and, with a sinister smile, command her to follow you...'
 				act 'Make Mira walk through village naked':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 15
@@ -797,10 +797,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_looks.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lead her to the center of the village square, in front of the market. Here you turn to her and demand in a haughty that see undress. You tell her that this is your final wish and after she completes this task you will forgive her betrayal. Mira''s mouth slowly drops open and she looks at you like you insane.'
-						'"Come on, you''re like a little girl," you snort, "we both know you''re a big whore and can''t live without having cock on a daily basis. And now this is the mother load, entirely for free."'
-						'Mira in silence and looks at you, then looks around at the village street on which people walk about their business.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please don''t make this your wish. I will die of embarrassment!" - Mira plaintively begs hoping it will change your mind.'
+						'You lead her to the centre of the village square, in front of the market. Here, you turn to her and demand disdainfully that she undress. You tell her that this is your final wish and you will forgive her betrayal after she completes this task. Mira''s mouth slowly drops open, and she looks at you as if you''re insane.'
+						'"Come on, you''re like a little girl," you snort, "we both know you''re a big whore and can''t live without having cock every day. And now this is the mother load, entirely for free."'
+						'Mira, in silence, looks at you and then looks around at the village street on which people walk about their business.'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please don''t make this your wish. I will die of embarrassment!" - Mira plaintively begs, hoping it will change your mind.'
 
 						act 'Confirm your wish':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -808,9 +808,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 							pcs_horny += rand(5,10)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_nude1.jpg"></center>'
-							'"No, you freely made the promise of three wishes. Anything I want. I want you to strip naked and head through the village to the fields. I will meet you there with your clothes. Now, do as you promised," you stated in an adamant voice.'
-							'Mira hesitates for another minute shifting uncomfortably from foot to foot, then nods to herself and finally decides to undress before you. Once nude, she hands you her clothes.'
-							'"Well, now you have get through the entire village and to the fields. Once you get to me you can consider yourself forgiven," you said with a malicious smile and slammed the palm of you hand into Mira''s ass to help her on the way. You slowly follow her and watch with interest.'
+							'"No. You freely made the promise of three wishes. Anything I want, and I want you to strip naked and head through the village to the fields. I''ll meet you there, and I''ll bring your clothes to you. Now, do as you promised," you stated in an adamant voice.'
+							'Mira hesitates for another minute, shifting uncomfortably from foot to foot, nods to herself and finally decides to undress before you. Once nude, she hands you her clothes.'
+							'"Well, now you must walk through the entire village and go to the fields. Once you get to me, you can consider yourself forgiven," you said with a malicious smile and slammed the palm of your hand into Mira''s ass to help her on the way. You slowly follow her and watch with interest.'
 
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -830,9 +830,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 									npc_rel['A60'] = 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_nude3.jpg"></center>'
-									'Finally flushed crimson, Mira gets to the fields just beyond the village. She then turn and rushes up to you.'
-									'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, we''re even!", - Mira states and looks at you imploringly.'
-									'You nodding his head while handing her clothes back. After watching a few more minutes as Mira dresses several of the village men are hooting as she sprint to her house, slowly the men settle down and go about their business.'
+									'Finally flushed crimson, Mira arrives in the fields just beyond the village. She then turns and rushes up to you.'
+									'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, we''re even!" Mira states and looks at you imploringly.'
+									'You nod your head while handing her clothes back. After watching a few more minutes as Mira dresses, several of the village men are hooting as she sprints to her house. Slowly the men settle down and go about their business.'
 
 									act 'Finish':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 0 & gt 'gadukino'
 								end
@@ -846,9 +846,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 							npc_QW['A60'] = 22
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_leaves.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Well Mira, fuck you. I had a good day planned. You can consider yourself forgiven," - you said, after a pause.'
-							'The girl was still for several moments, shifts uncomfortably from foot to foot, unable to believe his ears, then jumps up to you and kisses you on the cheek.'
-							'"Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>, I... I..., "- not retrieves as she could and ran home.'
+							'"Well, Mira, fuck you. I had a good day planned," You pause. "You can consider yourself forgiven,"'
+							'The girl is still for several moments, shifts uncomfortably from foot to foot, unable to believe her ears, then jumps up to you and kisses you on the cheek.'
+							'"Thank you, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I... I..., "- she stammers before running home.'
 
 							act 'Finish':mira_guest = 0 & gt 'gadukino'
 						end
@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if $clothingworntype = 'nude':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_go_home_nude.jpg"></center>'
 			end
 			if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but Dad has chores for me to work on." Mira tells you.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but my dad has chores for me to work on," Mira tells you.'
 
 			if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
@@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if $clothingworntype = 'nude':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_go_home_nude.jpg"></center>'
 			end
 			if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but I gotta get home. Dad has chores for me to work on.," Mira tells you.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but I gotta get home. My dad has chores for me to work on." Mira tells you.'
 
 			if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				if $clothingworntype = 'nude':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira_go_home_nude.jpg"></center>'
 			end
 			if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but I gotta get home and get to bed. Dad has chores for me to work on tomorrow." Mira tells you.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fun to be with, but I gotta get home and get to bed. My dad has chores for me to work on tomorrow." Mira tells you.'
 
 			if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
@@ -950,7 +950,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 		if npc_QW['A63'] < 13 or mirasex > 1:
 			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'
 		else
-			'While you''re trying to talk with Mira, she remained silent, sometimes giving you scornful glances.'
+			'While trying to talk with Mira, she remained silent, sometimes giving you scornful glances.'
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -962,9 +962,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 		if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		if MiraLoc = 1:gs 'miroslava', 'mira_river'
 		if npc_QW['A63'] < 13 or mirasex > 1:
-			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia and sometimes, how you got drunk with village guys...'
+			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia and, sometimes, how you got drunk with village guys...'
 		else
-			'While you''re trying to talk Mira, she remained silent, sometimes giving you scornful glances.'
+			'While trying to talk to Mira, she remained silent, sometimes giving you scornful glances.'
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -977,7 +977,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 				npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 				npc_QW['A60'] = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You ask Mira if there is something between her and Mitka. She looks at you a little timidly, but responds yes, there is. She refuses to go into further detail, so you decide to leave the subject until a more appropriate time comes up...'
+				'You ask Mira if there is something between her and Mitka. She looks at you a little timidly but responds yes, there is. However, she refuses to go into further detail, so you decide to leave the subject until a more appropriate time comes up...'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Finish':gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -990,12 +990,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 		if MiraLoc = 1:gs 'miroslava', 'mira_river'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Tell her that you saw her fucking Mitka in the meadow':
+		act 'Tell her that you saw her fucking Mitka in the meadow.':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You coldly tell Mira that you saw her when she fucked Mitka in your meadow. You remind her that she swore not to tell anyone about your secret place. Mira turns red and flutters her eyes at you trying to look innocent as she mumbles that she''s sorry about breaking her promise. Mira asks if there is any way to make amends. You smile and remind her that she promised you three wishes if she ever revealed the meadow to anyone. Mira meekly nods her head confirming that she does indeed remember making that promise and is ready to fulfill them.'
+			'You coldly tell Mira you saw her when she fucked Mitka in the meadow. You remind her that she swore not to tell anyone about your secret place. Mira turns red and flutters her eyes at you trying to look innocent as she mumbles that she''s sorry about breaking her promise. Mira asks if there is any way to make amends. You smile and remind her that she promised you three wishes if she ever revealed the meadow to anyone. Mira meekly nods her head, confirming that she does indeed remember making that promise and is ready to fulfil them.'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'force'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1011,11 +1011,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/miraqw3.jpg"></center>'
 						*nl
 						'"To start, you will pull down your panties and show me your pussy, and tell me what it felt like fucking Mitka in my meadow." you tell her sternly, "I want to know what is so special about his dick that you would exchange it for our friendship."'
-						'Mira gasps in shock from the sting in your words and jumps to her feet. She stares at you stupified and you can see the protest welling up in her but you don''t give her time to recover.'
-						'"If you want us to stay friends, you had better stick to the deal, and if you can''t keep your word then our friendship is over." you state, glaring at her angrily.'
-						'Mira''s eyes fill with tears and she blushes deeply. Hesitantly, she shifts from foot to foot before you, unable to say anything. Finally, you decide to up the ante and you turn away from her and start to leave...'
-						'"Wait!" Mira cries, reaching out to you, "Stop, please do''t go!" but you pretend to ignore her and keeping moving away.'
-						' Mira hesitates for a moment then rushes after you. She catches up with you and, red-faced, she grabs you by the hand and pulls you behind a rickety shed.'
+						'Mira gasps in shock from the sting in your words and jumps to her feet. She stares at you, stupified, and you can see the protest welling up in her, but you don''t give her time to recover.'
+						'"If you want us to stay friends, you had better stick to the deal, and if you can''t keep your word, then our friendship is over," you state, glaring at her angrily.'
+						'Mira''s eyes fill with tears, and she blushes deeply. Then, hesitantly, she shifts from foot to foot before you, unable to say anything. Finally, you decide to up the ante, and you turn away from her and start to leave...'
+						'"Wait!" Mira cries, reaching out to you, "Stop, please don''t go!" but you pretend to ignore her and keep moving away.'
+						'Mira hesitates for a moment, then rushes after you. She catches up with you red-faced, grabs you by the hand, and pulls you behind a rickety shed.'
 
 						act 'Go for it':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -1023,7 +1023,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 							pcs_horny += 15
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirawish1.jpg"></center>'
-							'Mentally exulting over your victory, you allow Mira to drag you behind the shed. She stops and turns to you, her face filled with a mix of anger and shame. Mira searches your face for a few seconds, hoping that you will relent until she sees that you meant what you said. She stomps her feet a few times on the ground in frustration, and then, with a heavy sigh, she starts to remove her panties.'
+							'Mentally exulting over your victory, you allow Mira to drag you behind the shed. She stops and turns to you, her face filled with anger and shame. Mira searches your face for a few seconds, hoping you will relent until she sees that you meant what you said. She stomps her feet a few times on the ground in frustration, and then, with a heavy sigh, she starts to remove her panties.'
 							act 'Watch':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
@@ -1032,8 +1032,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 								Mira4day = daystart
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mirawish1_1.jpg"></center>'
-								'Taking off her panties, Mira turns her ass to you and lifts up her skirt as she bends low. You smile broadly and in an indifferent voice order her to pull her ass cheeks apart. Mira reluctantly fulfills your requirement. You then ask her to tell you what she felt as she fucked with Mitka on your meadow. Mira tries to straighten but you place a restraining hand on her back and tell her that your wishes will be humiliating punishments for her. Over the next five minutes, you rub Mira buttocks as she tells you in detail what she felt when she fucked Mitka...'
-								'Finally, you tell her that you do not feel she has fully atoned for her actions and this was only part of your first wish but futher punishments will have to wait for another time.'
+								'Taking off her panties, Mira turns her ass to you and lifts up her skirt as she bends low. You smile broadly and, in an indifferent voice, order her to pull her ass cheeks apart. Mira reluctantly fulfils your requirement. You then ask her what she felt as she fucked with Mitka in the meadow. Mira tries to straighten, but you place a restraining hand on her back and tell her that your wishes will be humiliating punishments for her. Over the next five minutes, you rub Mira''s buttocks as she tells you in detail what she felt when she fucked Mitka...'
+								'Finally, you tell her that you do not feel she has fully atoned for her actions and this was only part of your first wish, but further punishments will have to wait for another time.'
 
 								act 'Turn around and walk away': gt 'gadukino'
 							end
@@ -1051,8 +1051,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You say you want to see Mitka fuck her ass because she told him your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from the suggestion and just looks at you, but you don''t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if your word doesn''t matter, then our friendship will end. Mira blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot. You decide to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
-				' - Wait, so it''s screaming you in the back of Mira, but you pretend to not notice and go on.'
+				'You say you want to see Mitka fuck her ass because she told him your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from the suggestion and just looks at you. Still, you don''t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if your word doesn''t matter, our friendship will end. Mira blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot. Finally, you decide to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
+				'  - Wait, so it''s screaming at you in the back of Mira, but you pretend to not notice and go on.'
 				' - Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, - after a couple of seconds until you hear a hysterical scream from Mira, I''ll think of something!'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
@@ -1068,7 +1068,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/miraqw4b.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You remind Mira that you are still not satified with her atonement and she asks you what you want her to do.'
+			'You remind Mira that you are still unsatisfied with her atonement, and she asks you what you want her to do.'
 
 			act 'Tell her that you want to watch as Mitka fucks her in the ass':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1077,9 +1077,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 				npc_QW['A60'] = 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You tell her that what you want to see, is Mitka fucking her in the ass. Mira jumps to her feet in shock and looks at you with disbelief in her eyes. But you don''t give her time to recover and continue to speak, emphasizing the deal she made with you, and if she can''t uphold her end then your friendship is at an end. Miroslava deeply blushes and hesitantly shifting from foot to foot watching you. After a few seconds of silence, you nod your head and turn around and start to leave...'
-				'Mira loudly shouts at you to stop, but you pretend to not hear her and keep walking on.'
-				'"Fine, <<$pcs_nickname>> you win," Mira states loud enough for you to hear. She is on the verge of hysteria, eyes watering and nose running, Mira nearly screams, "I, I''ll figure something out!"'
+				'You tell her that what you want to see is Mitka fucking her in the ass. Mira jumps to her feet in shock and looks at you with disbelief. But you don''t give her time to recover and continue to speak, emphasizing the deal she made with you, and if she can''t uphold her end, then your friendship is at an end. Miroslava deeply blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot, watching you. Finally, after a few seconds of silence, you nod your head, turn around, and start to leave...'
+				'Mira shouts at you to stop, but you pretend to not hear her and keep walking on.'
+				'"Fine, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you win," Mira states loud enough for you to hear. She is on the verge of hysteria, eyes watering and nose running. Mira nearly screams, "I, I''ll figure something out!"'
 
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gadukino'
 			end
@@ -1099,7 +1099,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 			npc_QW['A60'] = 7
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/gadukino/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tell Mira, that you have now seen Mitka fuck her in the ass. Maliciously you ask, does she like having her ass fucked? To your surprise, Mira responds that yes she does like it a bit. You are slightly disappointed because this was supposed to be a punishment, and then remind her, that she still has two wishes to fullfill. Once they are all fullfilled, she will have satisfied her debt to you. Mira nods her head and says, she is ready to redeem your wishes upon demand. You think it over several moments before walking away...'
+			'You tell Mira that you have now seen Mitka fuck her in the ass. Maliciously you ask, does she like having her ass fucked? To your surprise, Mira responds that she does like it a bit. You are slightly disappointed because this was supposed to be a punishment. Remind her that she still has two wishes to fulfil. Once they are all fulfilled, she will have satisfied her debt to you. Mira nods and says she is ready to redeem your wishes upon demand. You think it over for several moments before walking away...'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'miroslava','Leave'
 		end
@@ -1115,11 +1115,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 		if npc_QW['A60'] < 3 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
 			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 16 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
-			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, Mira can''t seem to focus and barely looks you in the eyes. She seems distracted by other thoughts.'
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia. Mira can''t seem to focus and barely looks you in the eyes. She seems distracted by other thoughts.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
-			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, you often refer to Mira as a whore, but she just pretends not to hear.'
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, and you often refer to Mira as a whore, but she just pretends not to hear.'
 		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
-			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, but Mira isn''t listening, all she wants to talk about is sex.'
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, but Mira isn''t listening. Instead, all she wants to talk about is sex.'
 		else
 			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'
 		end

+ 12 - 12
locations/miroslavahome.qsrc

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	else
 		*nl
-		if hour > 22 or hour < 3: 'It''s too late, most of Mira''s family is asleep, no need to wake them up unnecessarily.' else 'It''s too early, most of Mira''s family is still asleep, no need to wake them up unnecessarily.'
+		if hour > 22 or hour < 3: 'It''s too late. Most of Mira''s family is asleep. No need to wake them up unnecessarily.' else 'It''s too early. Most of Mira''s family is still asleep. No need to wake them up unnecessarily.'
 		act 'Go back to the village center': gt 'gadukino'
 	end
 end
@@ -71,9 +71,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 		'You ask Mira''s brother for a ride on his motorcycle.'
 		if hotcat < 5:
 			if npc_rel['A60'] > 20:
-				'He looks you up and down checking you out and says, "Some other time."'
+				'He looks you up and down, checking you out and says, "Some other time."'
 			else
-				'He gazes at you a couple of seconds, and then asks, "Who are you again?"'
+				'He gazes at you for a couple of seconds and then asks, "Who are you again?"'
 			end
 
 			act 'Walk away': gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'start'
@@ -83,11 +83,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 				act 'Look at him in disgust and walk away': gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'start'
 				act 'Remove panties':
 					gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-					'You really want a ride on his motorcycle, and quickly slide them down your legs and stuff them in your pocket.'
+					'You really want a ride on his motorcycle and quickly slide them down your legs and stuff them in your pocket.'
 					gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'mirabrother'
 				end
 			else
-				'"No problem", he says to you, and then adds with a mischievous smile, "but first, sit down on him and he''ll check to make sure he likes you. He is a fussy son of a bitch."'
+				'"No problem", he says to you and then adds with a mischievous smile, "but first, sit down on him, and he''ll check to make sure he likes you. He is a fussy son of a bitch."'
 				act 'Get on the bike':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_horny += 10
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto.jpg"></center>'
-					'You quickly swing your leg up and over the motorcycle, plop your ass down on the padded seat and grab the handlebars. Mira''s brother, with a satisfied smile, never takes his eyes off your crotch. You wiggle your ass on the seat a little giving him a great view of your naked pussy.'
+					'You quickly swing your leg up and over the motorcycle, plop your ass down on the padded seat and grab the handlebars. With a satisfied smile, Mira''s brother never takes his eyes off your crotch. You wiggle your ass on the seat a little giving him a great view of your naked pussy.'
 					'"Fine", he says, still smiling, "Just fine! You have an awesome pussy, and I''m sure my friend," and he slaps the gas tank, "is looking forward to having you ride on him. You know what I mean, yes?" You give him a wicked grin and nod. "We''ll give you a ride to remember, and then you can give me a ride to remember..." You just continue to nod.'
 
 					act 'Change your mind and leave': gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'start'
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto1.jpg"></center>'
 
-							'You slide your ass back to allow him room to mount the motorcycle. He grabs his helmet from the handlebars and slams it down on his head.'
+							'You slide your ass back to allow him room to mount the motorcycle. But instead, he grabs his helmet from the handlebars and slams it down on his head.'
 
 
 							act 'Wrap your arms around his waist...':
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto2.jpg"></center>'
 
-								'He guns the engine, which roars and then sets out at furious pace. The rear wheel burns rubber and smokes a little as he rides down the highway. After a few miles, he does a U-turn and heads back towards Gadukino, but does not stop in the village.'
+								'He guns the engine, which roars, then sets out at a furious pace. The rear wheel burns rubber, and smokes a little as he rides down the highway. After a few miles, he does a U-turn and heads back towards Gadukino but does not stop in the village.'
 
 
 								act 'One ride ends and another begins...':
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 									gs 'stat'
 
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto3.jpg"></center>'
-									'He rolls down the highway another mile before pulling off onto a little side track and parks a couple hundred meters off the road. He jumps off the bike, pulling off his helmet, and turns to you with a "devil may care" attitude. He pulls the helmet of your head and drops it to the ground. He turns you around and begins to feel your bare pussy...'
+									'He rolls down the highway another mile before pulling onto a side track and parks a couple hundred meters off the road. He jumps off the bike, pulls off his helmet, and turns to you with a "devil may care" attitude. He removes the helmet from your head and drops it to the ground. Then, he turns you around and begins to feel your bare pussy...'
 
 									act 'Stand':
 										*clr & cla
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 											gs 'stat'
 
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You feel his hand rub your crotch, fingering your labia. A minute later he turns you around and presses down on your shoulders...'
+											'You feel his hand rub your crotch, fingering your labia. Then, a minute later, he turns you around and presses down on your shoulders...'
 
 
 											act 'Kneel':
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 													gs 'stat'
 
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto7.jpg"></center>'
-													'You stare for a few seconds, transfixed, as he grows larger and larger. You take his dick in your mouth and begin to suck on it, caressing his balls with your hands.'
+													'You stare for a few seconds, transfixed, as he grows larger and larger. Then, you take his dick in your mouth and begin to suck on it, caressing his balls with your hands.'
 
 													act 'Swallow':
 														*clr & cla
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mirabrother':
 														if mirabrosextime = 0:mirabrosextime = 1 & guy += 1
 														gs 'stat'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirabromoto8.jpg"></center>'
-														'After a couple of minutes you feel his warm sticky cum hit the back of your throat and begin to swallow it all down. Mira''s brother stands still for a minute, his eyes closed in bliss. Finally, he takes his cock out of your mouth and zips up his pants. You put your helmets back on, get on the motorcycle once again, and he drives you back to the village...'
+														'After a couple of minutes, you feel his warm sticky cum hit the back of your throat and begin to swallow it all down. Mira''s brother stands still for a minute, eyes closed in bliss. Then, finally, he takes his cock out of your mouth and zips up his pants. You put your helmets back on, get on the motorcycle once again, and he drives you back to the village...'
 
 														act 'Ask him to take you back to Mira''s house': gt 'MiroslavaHome', 'start'
 														if grandmaQW['block'] = 0:act 'Ask him to drop you off at your grandparents house': gt 'gaddvor'

+ 1 - 1
locations/music_onlinemusic.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'liveStream':
 		gs 'music_onlinemusic', 'streaming_stats'
 		if komp = 1 and webcamera = 1 and $location_type ! 'public_outdoors':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/music/gomixer_hero.jpg"/></center>'
-			'You set up your webcamera and start the streaming app on your laptop. After settling down comfortably, you start to stream.'			
+			'You set up your webcamera and start the streaming app on your computer. After settling down comfortably, you start to stream.'			
 			'Your fans tipped you <<ml_superchats>> rubels for your performance.'
 		else		
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/music/gomixer_hero.jpg"/></center>'

+ 1 - 0
locations/nichApartment.qsrc

@@ -422,6 +422,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'visitTanya':
 	menu_off = 1
 	
 	if nichWork = 1:
+		if npc_rel['A218'] < 30: npc_rel['A218'] += rand(1,2)
 		*clr & cla
 		!! PC agreed to meet the parents for the job interview. Tanya expects her to be unemployed and dressed as a maid.
 		if nichTanyaFuckLast = daystart:

+ 1 - 1
locations/nichBedroomServant.qsrc

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 	if komp = 1:
 		!! TODO: Sveta can''t do camshows from this place - unless Gala makes her at some point, but unlikely.
 		gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access', 'free', 'nocamshow'
-		$komp = ' with your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'', ''start''">laptop</a>.'
+		$komp = ' with your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'', ''start''">computer</a>.'
 	else
 		$komp = '.'
 	end

+ 2 - 2
locations/nichBedroomTanja.qsrc

@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'tanya':
 		nichRand = rand(0,3)
 		if nichRand = 0:
-			'<a href="exec: gt ''nichTanya'', ''bedroomTanya''">Tanya</a> is lieing on her bed listening to music.'
+			'<a href="exec: gt ''nichTanya'', ''bedroomTanya''">Tanya</a> is lying on her bed listening to music.'
 		elseif nichRand = 1:
-			'<a href="exec: gt ''nichTanya'', ''bedroomTanya''">Tanya</a> is lieing on her bed watching tv.'
+			'<a href="exec: gt ''nichTanya'', ''bedroomTanya''">Tanya</a> is lying on her bed watching TV.'
 		elseif nichRand = 2:
 			'<a href="exec: gt ''nichTanya'', ''bedroomTanya''">Tanya</a> is in her walk-in closet trying on some outfits.'
 		else

+ 23 - 1
locations/nichTanya.qsrc

@@ -41,6 +41,7 @@
 !! nichTanyaDominance: how dominant Tanya is <= -70: very submissive, <= -20: submissive, >= 20: dominant, >= 70 very dominant
 !! nichTanyaUni = 1: Nicholas has asked Tanya to go to university, 11: PC has agreed to help convince Tanya, 50: Tanya has decided to quit university and Nicholas hasnt reacted yet, 51: Nicholas has reacted to 50, 100: Tanya goes to university and Sveta has not been rewarded by Nicholas, 101: Sveta got her reward
 !! nichTanyaUniStart: the day Tanya decided to attend university again. Her schedule will not be affected on this day (meaning she will not just vanish to university)
+!! npc_rel['A218'] relationship value, only used for journal
 
 !! nichTanyaRoom: 0= Tanya doesnt clean her room herself, 1= Tanya cleans her room herself
 
@@ -80,6 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 					nichTanyaRelationship = 0
 					nichTanyaRelationshipState = 1010
 					nichGalaKnowsPT = 11
+					npc_rel['A218'] = 30
 					killvar 'nichTanyaRelationshipBreakup'
 					cla
 					act 'Leave':
@@ -94,6 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 					nichTanyaRelationship = 0
 					nichTanyaRelationshipState = 1010
 					nichGalaKnowsPT = 11
+					npc_rel['A218'] = 30
 					cla
 					act 'Leave':
 						gt $loc,'return'
@@ -108,6 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 						nichTanyaRelationship = 0
 						nichTanyaRelationshipState = 1000
 						nichGalaKnowsPT = 11
+						npc_rel['A218'] = 10
 						cla
 						act 'Leave':
 							gt 'nichApartment'
@@ -119,6 +123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 						'You continue comforting her for a few minutes until she appears to be fine again. You kiss her passionately before leaving her.'
 						minut += 15
 						nichGalaKnowsPT = 12
+						npc_rel['A218'] -= rand(2,3)
 						cla
 						act 'Leave':
 							gt $loc,'return'
@@ -163,6 +168,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 				cla
 				nichTanyaRelationship = 0
 				nichTanyaRelationshipState = 1011
+				npc_rel['A218'] = 50
+				gs 'stat'
 				'"Of course."'
 				'"Oh <<$pcs_nickname>>, I hoped you''d say that." She hugs you.'
 				if nichTanyaUni >= 100:
@@ -213,6 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 				nichTanyaRelationshipState = 20
 				!! Tanya will break off with Nicholas
 				nichNTRelation = 10
+				npc_rel['A218'] += rand(8,12)
 				act 'Fuck her':
 					gt 'nichTanya', 'sexL'
 				end
@@ -242,6 +250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 		act 'Propose having sex':
 			cla
 			if nichTanyaFuckToday >= 3:
+				npc_rel['A218'] += rand(1,2)
 				'As you propose going for yet another round Tanya slowly shakes her head.'
 				'"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m really exhausted. Doing it four times a day is too much for me. But we can cuddle if you''d like."'
 				act 'Cuddle':
@@ -251,6 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 					gt $loc
 				end
 			else
+				npc_rel['A218'] += rand(2,4)
 				'"Hey Tanya. I was wondering if you are in the mood to have some fun."'
 				'"Of course! Just give me a minute."'
 				act 'Wait for her':
@@ -263,6 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroomTanya':
 	
 	if nichTanyaPropDate = 1 and (nichTanyaDateLast ! daystart or nichDebug = 1):
 		act 'Propose going on a date':
+			npc_rel['A218'] += rand(1,2)
 			cla
 			*nl
 			nichTanyaDateCounter += 1
@@ -327,6 +338,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	'Tanya is currently taking a shower. She hasn''t noticed you so far.'
 	if nichTanyaRelationship = 1:
 		act 'Join her':
+			npc_rel['A218'] += rand(2,4)
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tanya/gym/shower_mol0.jpg"></center>'
@@ -362,6 +374,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 				'"What the hell are you doing, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! I told you it''s over! Get lost!"'	
 				act 'Leave': gs 'underwear', 'wear' & gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'nichBathMaster','return'
 			elseif pcs_apprnc < 80:
+				npc_rel['A218'] -= rand(1,2)
 				'Tanya pushes you off.'
 				'"What the hell are you doing, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! Get lost!"'	
 				act 'Leave': gs 'underwear', 'wear' & gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'nichBathMaster','return'
@@ -369,6 +382,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 				'Tanya quickly turns around. She looks a little bit puzzled as she realizes that it was you who grabbed her. Did she expect somebody else?.'
 
 				act 'Take advantage of the confusion':
+					npc_rel['A218'] += rand(1,2)
 					cla
 					*clr
 					
@@ -386,10 +400,12 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					if pcs_apprnc < 120:
+						npc_rel['A218'] += rand(1,2)
 						'Tanya smiles at you, but removes your hand and leaves, blowing you a kiss.'
 
 						act 'Leave': gs 'underwear', 'wear' & gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'nichBathMaster','return'
 					elseif pcs_apprnc >= 120:
+						npc_rel['A218'] += rand(2,4)
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tanya/gym/shower_mol2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -433,6 +449,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'date':
 			end
 			
 			act 'Kiss Tanya':
+				npc_rel['A218'] += rand(1,2)
 				nichDateState = 20
 				gt 'nichTanya','date'
 			end
@@ -654,6 +671,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'date':
 			'She takes out some kind of rope of her shopping bag. One by one she connects your wrists and ankles to the posts of her bed. You are trapped, lieing in a spread position, unable to move.'
 			'The next thing Tanya takes out is a whip. She whips your back for a few minutes.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound', 'sub'
+			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Further':
 				nichDateState = 30
 				gt 'nichTanya','date'
@@ -664,6 +682,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'date':
 			'"I think this is going to be our favorite toy."'
 			'She probes your holes before generously applying lube on her strap-on.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound', 'sub'
+			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Further':
 				nichDateState = 40
 				gt 'nichTanya','date'
@@ -674,8 +693,9 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'date':
 			'From your position you can''t see her. You can only feel her hands on your hips and her fake member grinding into you.'
 			dick = nichTanyaStrapon
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 15, 'lesbian', 'sub'
+			gs 'stat'
 			'After a while you hear a breath quicken. She pulls back your head by pulling on your hair. With a deep moan she cums.'
-			'She doens''t untie you for another ten minutes. You feel her lying on your back, her breasts resintg on your shoulders. Finally she unties one of your wrists so you are able to untie the other knots.'
+			'She doens''t untie you for another ten minutes. You feel her lying on your back, her breasts resting on your shoulders. Finally she unties one of your wrists so you are able to untie the other knots.'
 			
 			minut += 15
 			act 'Finish':
@@ -746,6 +766,8 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'desc':
 		end
 	end
 	
+	'Friendship with Tanya:' & gs 'journal', 'relindex', 'A218'
+	
 	$nichTemp = func('nichUtil','npcActivity','tanya')
 	
 	if $nichTemp = 'sleep':

+ 21 - 19
locations/obj_din.qsrc

@@ -230,9 +230,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'description':
 	!!!
 
 	if func('homes_properties', 'get_accessible_property_count') = 0:
-		'You have nowhere to live, if this is an error set your current home <a href="exec:gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">here</a>.'
+		'You have nowhere to live, if this is an error, you can set your current home <a href="exec:gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">here</a>.'
+	elseif $home['current'] = '':
+		'You don''t have a current home set. If this is an error, you can set your current home <a href="exec:gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">here</a>.'
 	else
-		'Your current home is <a href="exec:gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>"><<$home[''name'']>></a>.'
+		'Your current home is <a href="exec:gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''"><<$home[''name'']>></a>.'
 	end
 
 	if succubusflag = 1 and sucpcinfo >= 4:
@@ -345,7 +347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'description':
 	'</td></tr></table></center>'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'curr_home':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'current_home':
 	*clr & cla
 	!'<center><img src="images/system/icons/description.png"><br></center>'
 	'<center><h1><<$pcs_firstname>>''s Home Location</h1></center>'
@@ -355,22 +357,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'curr_home':
 	*nl
 	act 'Return to main description': gt 'obj_din', 'description'	
 !!This is correct it just looks wrong
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'city_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''city_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">City residential apartment</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'parents_home'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''parents_home'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Parent''s home in Pavlovsk</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'village_cottage'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''village_cottage'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">My cottage in the cooperative farm</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'old_town_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''old_town_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Old town apartment</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'matryona_mansion'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''matryona_mansion'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Matryona mansion</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'pavlovsk_hotel'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''pavlovsk_hotel'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">My hotel room in Pavlovsk</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'maid_bedroom'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''maid_bedroom'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Nicholas'' apartment</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'niko_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''niko_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Niko''s apartment</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'shulga_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''shulga_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Uncle Sergey''s apartment</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'lyceum_dorm'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''lyceum_dorm'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Lyceum school</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'university_dorm'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''university_dorm'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">University halls</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'hunters_lodge'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''hunters_lodge'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Hunter''s lodge in Gadukino</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'shared_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''shared_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Shared apartment in Pavlovsk</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'grandparents_house'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''grandparents_house'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Grandparent''s house in Gadukino</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'city_house'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''city_house'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">My house in the City residential district</a>'
-	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'meynold_household'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''meynold_household'' & gs ''obj_din'', <<$home[''current'']>>">Meynold Houshold</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'city_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''city_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">City residential apartment</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'parents_home'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''parents_home'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Parent''s home in Pavlovsk</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'village_cottage'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''village_cottage'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">My cottage in the cooperative farm</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'old_town_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''old_town_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Old town apartment</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'matryona_mansion'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''matryona_mansion'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Matryona mansion</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'pavlovsk_hotel'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''pavlovsk_hotel'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">My hotel room in Pavlovsk</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'maid_bedroom'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''maid_bedroom'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Nicholas'' apartment</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'niko_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''niko_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Niko''s apartment</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'shulga_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''shulga_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Uncle Sergey''s apartment</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'lyceum_dorm'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''lyceum_dorm'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Lyceum school</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'university_dorm'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''university_dorm'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">University halls</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'hunters_lodge'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''hunters_lodge'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Hunter''s lodge in Gadukino</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'shared_apartment'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''shared_apartment'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Shared apartment in Pavlovsk</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'grandparents_house'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''grandparents_house'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Grandparent''s house in Gadukino</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'city_house'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''city_house'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">My house in the City residential district</a>'
+	if func('homes_properties', 'can_live_here', 'meynold_household'): 'Set current home as <a href="exec:gs ''homes_properties'', ''set_home'', ''meynold_household'' & gs ''obj_din'', ''current_home''">Meynold Houshold</a>'
 	
 !!Apostrophe colour correction - KS ''''
 	'</td></tr></table></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_shared_apt.qsrc

@@ -739,7 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pcsRoom':
 		!! Sveta can''t do camshows unless she is blowing the guys for rent.
 		gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access', 'free', 'nocamshow'
 		if servitudeLvl = 2: access['nocamshow'] = 0
-		'Your <a href="exec:gorodokKomp = 1 & gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is sitting on small table.'
+		'Your <a href="exec:gorodokKomp = 1 & gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> is sitting on small table.'
 	end
 
 	if vcard > 0: act 'View your vintage porn cards':card_deck = 0 & gt 'card'

+ 40 - 26
locations/saveupdater.qsrc

@@ -1301,15 +1301,16 @@ if ((100*version_major +version_minor)*100+version_revision)*100+version_patch <
 	
 	!! Transferring the owned, rented, accessible properties
 	! city apartment
-	if home_owned[1] = 1: 
+	if home_owned[1] = 1 or owned_property['city_apartment'] = 1: 
 		gs 'homes_properties', 'rent_property', 'city_apartment', ArendHouseSL
-	elseif home_owned[1] = 2: 
+	elseif home_owned[1] = 2 or owned_property['city_apartment'] = 2: 
 		gs 'homes_properties', 'buy_property', 'city_apartment'
-	elseif home_owned[1] = 3: 
+	elseif home_owned[1] = 3 or owned_property['city_apartment'] = 3: 
 		gs 'homes_properties', 'tenants_move_in', 'city_apartment',sdaday, sdamonth
 	end
+
 	!! Checking for renovation
-	if home_owned[1] > 0:
+	if home_owned[1] > 0 or owned_property['city_apartment'] = 1:
 		if rembedr = 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'renovate_property', 'city_apartment', 50000, 'bedroom'
 		if remsitr = 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'renovate_property', 'city_apartment', 50000, 'living room'
 		if remkorr = 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'renovate_property', 'city_apartment', 50000, 'hallway'
@@ -1317,46 +1318,59 @@ if ((100*version_major +version_minor)*100+version_revision)*100+version_patch <
 		if remkuhr = 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'renovate_property', 'city_apartment', 50000, 'kitchen'
 	end
 	! parents home
-	if home_owned[2] > 0: gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'parents_home'
+	if home_owned[2] > 0 or owned_property['parents_home'] > 0: gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'parents_home'
 	! cottage in the village
-	if home_owned[3] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'buy_property', 'village_cottage'
-	if home_owned[3] > 1:  gs 'homes_properties', 'renovate_property', 'village_cottage', 200000
+	if home_owned[3] > 0 or owned_property['village_cottage'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'buy_property', 'village_cottage'
+	if home_owned[3] > 1 or owned_property['village_cottage-renovated'] = 1:  gs 'homes_properties', 'renovate_property', 'village_cottage', 200000
 	! Pushking old town apartment
-	if home_owned[4] = 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'rent_property', 'old_town_apartment', ArendHouseSL4
+	if home_owned[4] = 1 or owned_property['old_town_apartment'] = 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'rent_property', 'old_town_apartment', ArendHouseSL4
 	! Matryona mansion
-	if home_owned[5] > 0: gs 'homes_properties', 'buy_property', 'matryona_mansion'
-	if home_owned[5] > 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'progress_construction_status', 'matryona_mansion'
-	if home_owned[5] > 2: gs 'homes_properties', 'progress_construction_status', 'matryona_mansion'
+	if home_owned[5] > 0 or owned_property['matryona_mansion'] > 0: gs 'homes_properties', 'buy_property', 'matryona_mansion'
+	if home_owned[5] > 1 or owned_property['matryona_mansion-construction-status'] = 1: gs 'homes_properties', 'progress_construction_status', 'matryona_mansion'
+	if home_owned[5] > 2 or owned_property['matryona_mansion-construction-status'] = 2: gs 'homes_properties', 'progress_construction_status', 'matryona_mansion'
 	! Pavlovsk hotel room
-	if home_owned[6] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'pavlovsk_hotel'
+	if home_owned[6] > 0 or owned_property['pavlovsk_hotel'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'pavlovsk_hotel'
 	! Live in maid bedroom
-	if home_owned[7] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'maid_bedroom'
+	if home_owned[7] > 0 or owned_property['maid_bedroom'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'maid_bedroom'
 	! Niko apartment
-	if home_owned[8] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'niko_apartment'
+	if home_owned[8] > 0 or owned_property['niko_apartment'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'niko_apartment'
 	! Shulga apartment
-	if home_owned[9] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'shulga_apartment'
+	if home_owned[9] > 0 or owned_property['shulga_apartment'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'shulga_apartment'
 	! Lyceum dorm room
-	if home_owned[10] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'lyceum_dorm'
+	if home_owned[10] > 0 or owned_property['lyceum_dorm'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'lyceum_dorm'
 	! University dorm room
-	if home_owned[11] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'university_dorm'
+	if home_owned[11] > 0 or owned_property['university_dorm'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'university_dorm'
 	! Hunters lodge
-	if home_owned[12] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'hunters_lodge'
+	if home_owned[12] > 0 or owned_property['hunters_lodge'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'hunters_lodge'
 	! Shared apartment in Pavlovsk
-	if home_owned[13] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'shared_apartment'
+	if home_owned[13] > 0 or owned_property['shared_apartment'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'shared_apartment'
 	! Grandparents house
-	if home_owned[14] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'grandparents_house'
+	if home_owned[14] > 0 or owned_property['grandparents_house'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'grandparents_house'
 	! City residential house
-	if home_owned[15] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'buy_property', 'city_house'
+	if home_owned[15] > 0 or owned_property['city_house'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'buy_property', 'city_house'
 	! Meynold household
-	if home_owned[16] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'meynold_household'
+	if home_owned[16] > 0 or owned_property['meynold_household'] > 0:  gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'meynold_household'
 
 	!! Setting the current home and fixing potential missing access issues
-	if curr_home > 0: gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home', '', STR(curr_home)
-	if home['current'] = 'parents_home' and accessible_property['parents_home'] = 0: gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'parents_home'
+	if curr_home > 0 and $home['current'] = '': gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home', '', STR(curr_home)
+	if $home['current'] = 'parents_home' and accessible_property['parents_home'] = 0: gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'parents_home'
  
 	killvar 'home_owned' & killvar 'curr_home' & killvar 'ArendHouseSL' & killvar 'ArendHouseSL4'
-	killvar '$home_rent_txt' & killvar 'home_value' & killvar '$home_value_txt'
-	killvar 'sdaday' & killvar 'sdamonth'
+	killvar 'home_rent_txt' & killvar 'home_value' & killvar 'home_value_txt'
+	killvar 'sdaday' & killvar 'sdamonth' & killvar 'owned_property'
+
+	if $home['current'] = '':
+		if mid($start_type, 1, 2) = 'sg':
+			gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'parents_home'
+			gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home', 'parents_home'
+		elseif mid($start_type, 1, 4) = 'city':
+			gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'city_apartment'
+			gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home', 'city_apartment'
+		elseif mid($start_type, 1, 3) = 'uni':
+			gs 'homes_properties', 'give_access', 'university_dorm'
+			gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home', 'university_dorm'
+		end
+	end
 
 	!! Setting the internet
 	if internet > 0:

+ 10 - 1
locations/sitr2x.qsrc

@@ -24,11 +24,20 @@ gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Hall</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sitr2.jpg"></center>'
 
+
+!! Computer and internet use.
+if komp = 1:
+	!!TODO: Need to build a check for husband being at home or something.			
+	gs 'internet_mobile', 'get_access'
+	$komp = ' with your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> on it along with some papers and pens.'
+end
+
+
 'huge plasma <a href="exec:gt ''TV'',''start''">TV</a>'
 
 'luxurious <a href="exec:gt ''divan'',''start''">leather sofa</a>'
 
-'modern <a href="exec:gt ''stol'',''stolPar''">desk</a>'
+'modern <a href="exec:gt ''stol'',''stolPar''">desk</a>' + iif($komp = '', '.', $komp)
 
 if obruch > 0:'Your hula hoop stands in a corner.'
 if skak > 0:'Your jump rope is on a shelf.'

+ 5 - 5
locations/stripclub.qsrc

@@ -63,6 +63,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						'You don''t have enough money to pay the entry fee.'
 					end
 				end
+				if pcs_dancero > 0 and stripwork = 0 and pcs_inhib >= 50:
+					act 'See the manager for work': gt 'stripclub', 'manager'
+				elseif stripwork = 0 and pcs_inhib < 50:
+					'You could ask the manager for a job, but you don''t feel confident enough to be a stripper. You should get more used to showing off your body first.'
+				end
 			else
 				'The security guard stops you. Looking you up and down, he asks to see your ID.'
 				'You make a show of rummaging through your purse. "Sorry, I must have left my ID at home."'
@@ -171,11 +176,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forman':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	if pcs_dancero > 0 and stripwork = 0 and pcs_inhib >= 50:
-		act 'See the manager for work': gt 'stripclub', 'manager'
-	elseif stripwork = 0 and pcs_inhib < 50:
-		'You could ask the manager for a job, but you don''t feel confident enough to be a stripper. You should get more used to showing off your body first.'
-	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'privat':

+ 9 - 9
locations/swamp.qsrc

@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif(DayStage < 4,'swamp_winter.jpg','swamp_winter_night.jpg')+'"></center>'
 	end
 	*nl
-	'You are at the swamp on the far side of the woods from the village.'
-	'It can be dangerous to hike in this area, unless you are physically fit or have a good knowledge of the forest.'
+	'You are at the village''s swamp on the far side of the woods.'
+	'It can be dangerous to hike in this area unless you are physically fit or know the forest well.'
 
 	act 'Head back to the forest (0:15)': minut += 15 & gt 'gadforest', 'forest_center'
 
 	if hunterscabin = 1:
-		'You can see the small path to the clearing that contains the hunters cabin.'
-		act 'Walk to the hunters cabin (0:15)':
+		'You can see the small path to the clearing that contains the hunters'' cabin.'
+		act 'Walk to the hunters'' cabin (0:15)':
 			! daytime chance to get stuck in swamp - use bike to get there 100% of the time
 			if DayStage < 4:
 				swamp_stuck = 0
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
 						end
 					end
 					*nl
-					'Your efforts are not in vain as you begin to feel the mud''s hold loosen. With another burst of strength, you free yourself and breathe a sigh of relief.'
+					'Your efforts are not vain as you begin to feel the mud''s hold loosen. Then, with another burst of strength, you free yourself and sigh in relief.'
 
 					act 'Success!':gt 'swamp_yard','start'
 				else
@@ -140,13 +140,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
 				'<center><H4>Swamp</H4></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/gadforestlosthelp.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You don''t think you''re strong enough to break free of the mud and decide your best chance is to simply yell for help. Hopefully you''re close enough to the hunters cabin that they''ll hear you.'
+				'You don''t think you''re strong enough to break free of the mud and decide your best chance is to simply yell for help. Hopefully, you''re close enough to the hunters'' cabin that they''ll hear you.'
 
 				if swamprand = 1:
 					act 'Success!':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/handshelp.jpg"></center>'
-						*nl 'You hear men speaking and begin to shout louder. The voices come closer, and finally, you feel strong hands grab you and drag you out to solid ground.'
+						*nl 'You hear men speaking and begin to shout louder. The voices come closer, and finally, you feel strong hands grab you and drag you out to the solid ground.'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Relax':gt 'swamp_yard','start'
@@ -169,10 +169,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stuck':
 		*nl
 		if $ARGS[1] = 'forest_edge':
 			minut += 60
-			'After an hour walking through the forest, you finally see the hunters cabin ahead.'
+			'After an hour of walking through the forest, you finally see the hunters'' cabin ahead.'
 		elseif $ARGS[1] = 'swamp':
 			minut += 15
-			'After a few minutes walking through the swamp, you finally see the hunters cabin ahead.'
+			'After walking through the swamp for a few minutes, you finally see the hunters'' cabin ahead.'
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'swamp_yard', 'start'

+ 23 - 23
locations/swamp_woods.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/nearby_woods.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are in the woods near the hut. You can see it not too far in the distance.'
-	'You can also venture deeper into woods to circle around the swamp, granted you do not get lost trying.'
+	'You can also venture deeper into the woods to circle around the swamp, granted you do not get lost trying.'
 	gs 'gadukino_event', 'sound'
 	gs 'hunter_ambient', 'schedule'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Collect firewood (0:15)':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif($clothingworntype ! 'nude','firewood_normal.jpg','firewood_nude.jpg')+'"></center>'
-			'You pick up some dry branches and twigs, putting them in a pile near the fire pit before coming back.'
+			'You pick up some dry branches and twigs, putting them in a pile near the fire pit before returning.'
 			firewood += rand(2,6)
 			if firewood < 15:
 				'You have <<firewood>> pieces of firewood and should probably grab some more to keep the fire going.'
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			act 'Further': gt 'swamp_woods', 'start'
 		end
 	else
-		'You think about picking up some firewood before you remember you have plenty back at the yard.'
+		'You think about picking up firewood before remembering you have plenty back at the yard.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Try to circle around the swamp':
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			act 'Further': gt 'swamp_woods', 'start'
 		elseif pcs_bushcraft < 40:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/thinks2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You consider trying to circle around the swamp. You have a vague idea on how to accomplish that, but there is a good chance you may get lost.'
+			'You consider trying to circle around the swamp. You have a vague idea of how to accomplish that, but there is a good chance you may get lost.'
 
 			act 'Stay around for now': gt 'swamp_woods', 'start'
 			act 'Try anyway':
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					!End up stuck in the swamp
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif($clothingworntype ! 'nude','nearby_woods_stuck.jpg','nearby_woods_stuck_nude.jpg')+'"></center>'
 					'You stick as close to the swamp as possible and follow the edge in one direction.'
-					'Trusting the ground, you keep going, but at some point, you sink right into the swamp without even realizing.'
+					'Trusting the ground, you keep going, but you sink right into the swamp at some point without even realizing it.'
 					*nl
 					'Seems like the forest can camouflage parts of the swamp, fooling careless hikers.'
 
@@ -84,10 +84,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif($clothingworntype ! 'nude','nearby_woods_hike.jpg','nearby_woods_hike_nude.jpg')+'"></center>'
 					!Circle back to where the pcs started
 					'You start going into the woods in a direction you think will take you around the swamp.'
-					'After a few hours walking, you realize your surroundings are a bit familiar.'
+					'After a few hours of walking, you realize your surroundings are familiar.'
 					'Then you look around you and can see the hut in the distance. Seems like you just walked around in circles and ended up where you started.'
 					*nl
-					'You can see some broken branches and prints nearby ahead of you, marking the direction you initially started walking towards.'
+					'You can see broken branches and prints ahead of you, marking the direction you initially started walking towards.'
 
 					act 'That''s interesting...': gs 'exp_gain', 'bushcraft', 2 & gt 'swamp_woods', 'start'
 				end
@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			minut += 90
 			!Make it back without effort
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif($clothingworntype ! 'nude','pathfinder.jpg','pathfinder_nude.jpg')+'"></center>'
-			'You have a rough idea of how the forest curves around the swamp from having seen part of the swamp''s edge from the hut yard.'
-			'With that in mind, you go into the forest, aware of your surroundings to make sure you are not stepping too far from the edge of the swamp.'
+			'You have a rough idea of how the forest curves around the swamp from seeing part of the swamp''s edge from the hut yard.'
+			'With that in mind, you go into the forest, aware of your surroundings, to ensure you are not stepping too far from the swamp''s edge.'
 			'After a couple hours, you are on the other edge of the forest.'
 
 			act 'Further': gt 'swamp_woods', 'start'
@@ -114,10 +114,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 			if hunter_collective_opinion > 50 and rand(1,4) = 1:
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andrei_shooting.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Sure thing! But say, how about we spice it up a bit? If you can hit that bottle over there in one shot, I will do anything you want," says Andrei.'
+				'"Sure thing! But, say, how about we spice it up a bit? If you can hit that bottle over there in one shot, I will do anything you want," says Andrei.'
 				'"And what if I cannot?" you ask.'
-				'"Well, in that case, you get to do anything I ask for. It is only fair, right?" he asks with a smirk.'
-				'"I guess it is," you respond, slightly blushing thinking about what Andrei could ask you to do.'
+				'"Well, in that case, you get to do anything I ask for. So it is only fair, right?" he asks with a smirk.'
+				'"I guess it is," you respond, slightly blushing, thinking about what Andrei could ask you to do.'
 
 				act 'Take the bet':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 				else
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andrei_shooting.jpg"></center>'
-					'You try to get Andrei''s attention, but he kind of ignores you. When you keep on trying, he waves his hand in a gesture for you to go away.'
+					'You try to get Andrei''s attention, but he ignores you. Finally, when you keep trying, he waves his hand to gesture for you to go away.'
 					act 'Further': gt 'swamp_woods', 'start'
 				end
 			end
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'practice':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif($clothingworntype ! 'nude','shooting.jpg','shooting_nude.jpg')+'"></center>'
-		*nl '"Alright, I will show you a few tricks while you try," says Andrei. You spend about an hour practicing your shooting under Andrei''s guidance.'
+		*nl '"Alright, I will show you a few tricks while you try," says Andrei. You spend about an hour practising your shooting under Andrei''s guidance.'
 		minut += 60
 		gs 'exp_gain', 'shoot', 2
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'andrei_request':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andrei_shooting.jpg"></center>'
-		'"You see, these bullets don''t come free," says Andrei. "My time looking over your shoulder also doesn''t come free. You gotta pay me back somehow."'
+		'"You see, these bullets don''t come free," says Andrei. "My time looking over your shoulder also doesn''t come free. So you gotta pay me back somehow."'
 		'"What do you mean?" you ask, with a vague idea of where this is going.'
 
 		if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
@@ -174,12 +174,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 		else
 			andrei_shooting_request = rand(1,4)
 			if andrei_shooting_request = 1:
-				'"I want you to show me your tits. Just lift your top and let me have a good look at em. You can shoot the rifle then."'
+				'"I want you to show me your tits. Just lift your top and let me have a good look at them. You can shoot the rifle then."'
 				act 'Flash your tits':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/shooting_tit_flash.jpg"></center>'
 					'You lift your top and expose your tits to Andrei for a minute. You then cover up and ask, "Enough payment for a lesson?"'
-					'"Would appreciate a longer look, but I will take it," responds Andrei'
+					'"I''d appreciate a more extended look, but I will take it," responds Andrei'
 					hunter_sexual_comfort += 3
 					gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 3
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/shooting_pussy_flash.jpg"></center>'
 					'You lift your bottom and expose your pussy to Andrei for a minute. You then cover up and ask, "Enough payment for a lesson?"'
-					'"Would appreciate a longer look, but I will take it," responds Andrei'
+					'"I''d appreciate a longer look, but I will take it," responds Andrei'
 					hunter_sexual_comfort += 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -202,12 +202,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 					act 'Further': gt 'swamp_woods', 'shooting_practice', 'practice'
 				end
 			elseif andrei_shooting_request = 3:
-				'"I want you to take off all your clothes. Then hand them all to me. If you wanna shoot my rifle, you gotta be in your birthday suit."'
+				'"I want you to take off all your clothes. Then hand them all to me. If you want to shoot my rifle, you have to be in your birthday suit."'
 				act 'Strip naked':
 					cla & *clr
-!!Image needed						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/shooting_strip.jpg"></center>'
+
 					'You slowly take off your clothes one by one until you are completely naked in front of Andrei.'
-					'You look at the ground and blush a bit as he stares at your exposed tits, ass and pussy. You cannot help but feel your pussy moisten.'
+					'You look at the ground and blush as he stares at your exposed tits, ass and pussy. You cannot help but feel your pussy moisten.'
 					'"This naked look suits you better, do you know that?" says Andrei. He ogles your body for a few more minutes before handing you the rifle.'
 					hunter_sexual_comfort += 7
 					gs 'clothing', 'strip_all', 'swamphouse'
@@ -218,12 +218,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_practice':
 					act 'Further': gt 'swamp_woods', 'shooting_practice', 'practice'
 				end
 			elseif andrei_shooting_request = 4:
-				'"Seeing a young pretty thing like you prancing around gives me a boner. I want you to suck my dick," demands Andrei.'
+				'"Seeing a young, pretty thing like you prancing around gives me a boner. I want you to suck my dick," demands Andrei.'
 				act 'Suck his dick':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/shooting_bj.jpg"></center>'
 					'You kneel down obediently and start sucking his dick until you feel him cumming down your throat. You make sure to catch every drop.'
-					'"Now that''s a good girl. Good girls get to shoot the rifle," says Andrei with a chuckle.'
+					'"Now that''s a good girl. Good girls get to shoot the rifle," says Andrei.'
 					hunter_sexual_comfort += 8
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A172'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'

+ 12 - 12
locations/swamp_yard.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	*nl
 
 
-	'Behind the hut, there is a <a href="exec: gt ''swampspring'' ">spring</a>. If you continue a little further down, there is a small <a href="exec: gt ''backwater'' ">creek</a> with relatively clean water.'
+	'Behind the hut, there is a <a href="exec: gt ''swampspring'' ">spring</a>. If you continue further down, there is a small <a href="exec: gt ''backwater'' ">creek</a>  with relatively clean water.'
 
 	if hunters_available = 1:
 		if hunters_were_met = 0:
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		else
 			if hunters_outside = 1:
 				if hunters_evening = 1:
-					'You hear some gunshots and see <a href="exec: gt ''swamp_woods'', ''shooting_practice'' ">Andrei</a> not too far in the distance shooting some bottles.'
+					'You hear some gunshots and see <a href="exec: gt ''swamp_woods'', ''shooting_practice'' ">Andrei</a>, not too far in the distance, shooting some bottles.'
 					'<a href="exec: gt ''hunters'', ''start'' ">Igor and Sergey</a> are standing in the front yard.'
 				else
 					if campfire = 1 and hunters_chattime = 0:
@@ -97,14 +97,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 	if campfire = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif(DayStage = 2,'campfire_day.jpg','campfire_night.jpg')+'"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'A nice, warm campfire you can sit and relax by. You can use it to cook something or heat up some water to bathe.'
-		'You can also put it out with the bucket if there is enough water in it.'
+		'A nice, warm campfire you can sit and relax by. You can use it for cooking something or heating up some water to bathe.'
+		'You can also put it out with the bucket if there is enough water.'
 
 		if hunters_breakfast = 1 or hunters_lunch = 1:
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanters1.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'The hunters are also sitting around the campfire, talking and joking about all kinds of stuff before heading out hunting.'
+			'The hunters also sit around the campfire, talking and joking about all kinds of stuff before heading out hunting.'
 
 			act 'Chat (0:30)':
 				gt 'hunter_interactions', 'chat_with_hunters'
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 						act 'Further': gt 'hunter_favors', 'creekside_gangbang_request'
 					else
 						minut += 20
-						'The hunters do not even bother to answer you. You simply sit in awkward silence for twenty minutes before getting on to other business.'
+						'The hunters do not even bother to answer you. Instead, you sit quietly for twenty minutes before getting on to other business.'
 					end
 				end
 
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/fireside_drink.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'The hunters are drinking and chatting loudly. You can join them for a chat, or maybe a drink or two if you would like.'
+			'The hunters are drinking and chatting loudly. You can join them for a chat or maybe a drink or two if you like.'
 			act 'Chat (0:30)':
 				gt 'hunter_interactions', 'chat_with_hunters'
 			end
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 				if water_heated > 5 and (pcs_inhib < 85 or hunter_sexual_comfort > 25):
 					'"It is too tedious to keep heating up water", you think to yourself.'
 				else
-					'With the now heated water, you can bathe yourself in the tub.'
+					'With the now-heated water, you can bathe yourself in the tub.'
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 					if meat_stew > 0:
 						'There''s <<meat_stew>> '+iif(meat_stew > 1, 'servings','serving')+' of stew left in the pot'
 					else
-						'You have finished the last of the stew, the pot is empty.'
+						'You have finished the last of the stew. The pot is empty.'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 					if mushroom_soup > 0:
 						'There''s <<mushroom_soup>> '+iif(mushroom_soup > 1, 'servings','serving')+' of soup left in the pot'
 					else
-						'You have finished the last of the soup, the pot is empty.'
+						'You have finished the last of the soup, and the pot is empty.'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif(DayStage = 2,'campfire_out_day.jpg','campfire_out_night.jpg')+'"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You can use this firepit to light a fire, if you have some firewood available.'
+		'You can use this firepit to light a fire if you have some firewood available.'
 		!TODO: Tie fire lighting to bushcraft, make hunters do it on their schedule or with Sveta asking
 		if firewood >= 10 and campfire = 0:
 			act 'Light fire':
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 			end
 		elseif firewood < 10 and campfire = 0:
 			*nl
-			'There is some wood and twigs by the pit but not enough to light a new fire. You will probably need to collect some branches, chop some or ask a hunter to do so.'
+			'There is some wood and twigs by the pit but not enough to light a new fire. You will probably need to collect branches, chop some or ask a hunter to do so.'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 4 - 0
locations/telefon.qsrc

@@ -1653,6 +1653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Phone_sms':
 		i += 1
 		jump 'smsloop'
 	end
+	$telefon['body'] += '<b><a href="exec:gs ''telefon'', ''delete_sms'',''0'',''all''">Delete All</a></b><br>'
 	$telefon['body'] += '</TABLE><br>'
 
 	dynamic $telefon['print']
@@ -1693,6 +1694,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'delete_sms':
 	killvar '$SMSPicture4', telefon['SMSid']
 	killvar 'SMSMessageRead', telefon['SMSid']
 	telefon['SMSCount'] -= 1
+	if $ARGS[2] = 'all' and telefon['SMSCount'] > 0 :
+		gs 'telefon','delete_sms','0','all'
+	end	
 	gs 'telefon', 'Phone_sms'
 end
 

+ 43 - 26
locations/therapist.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,10 @@
 # therapist
 
+! 18/09/22 - Hooded Silence
+! modified font colours to give command/thought text contrast in dark themes.
+! $hypnocolour sets the colour default - brown.
+
+
 CLOSE ALL
 if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',80
 $loc = 'pav_clinic'
@@ -13,6 +18,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	therapistFuckedPussy = 0
 	therapistFuckedAss = 0
 	therapistFuckedMouth = 0
+
+	! Set colour for dark themes
+	if night_mode = 1 or night_mode = 2:
+		$hypnocolour = '#e27c00'
+	else
+		$hypnocolour = 'brown'
+	end
+	
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Psychologist</font></b></center>'
 	PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',10 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',20 & PLAY 'sound/sucking.mp3',200
 	therapistday = daystart
@@ -356,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypno':
 			elseif $therapy = 'mood':
 				$session = 'Your mood will be uplifted when you have hypnosis therapy. The more you have, then the better you will feel. When you go without them, you will feel terrible, your body will ache, you NEED therapy."'
 			end
-			'<font color=brown>'
+			'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 			$firsthypno2
 			'"Good. <<$firsthypno>>"'
 			'"All right <i>Cunt</i>, let''s work on your <<$therapy>>. <<$session>>"'
@@ -394,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypno':
 					*clr
 					if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',20 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',40
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/stripping<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'<font color=brown>'
+					'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 					'You get up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing.'
 					if hypnoTime < 4:
 						randSuck = rand(1,4)
@@ -512,7 +525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstHypnoStage':
 		hypnoStripped = 1
 		hypnoTimesResistedStage = 0
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/stripping<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'<font color=brown>'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 		'You get up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing.'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -833,10 +846,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleepProblems':
 		willpowermax -= rand(4,8)
 
 		
-		'<font color=brown>'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 		'"<i>Cunt</i>, what do you know about the black room?</font>"<br>"I know that everything that happens here I will not remember, <i>Master</i>."'
 		
-		'<font color=brown>'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 		'"Good. Now take off your clothes."'
 		'</font>'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -850,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleepProblems':
 			dick = 13
 			$dick_girth = 'massive'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/stripping<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'<font color=brown>'
+			'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 			'You get up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing.'
 			'Sit down, <i>Cunt</i>.'
 			
@@ -860,7 +873,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleepProblems':
 				'"You said you had problems sleeping, but it''s obvious you were withholding something. Tell me what it was."'
 				'You tell <i>Master</i> about your sexual dreams and how he was the one fucking you.'
 				'"I see, so then you remember when you are sleeping. This makes sense and I have a simple fix for you <i>Cunt</i>."'
-				'<font color="brown">You will believe these sexual dreams are normal for a young girl to have. You will believe that your body is simply reacting to its natural need to be bred by an older man like myself. You will have sexual thoughts and desires to be bred by me.</font>'
+				'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">You will believe these sexual dreams are normal for a young girl to have. You will believe that your body is simply reacting to its natural need to be bred by an older man like myself. You will have sexual thoughts and desires to be bred by me.</font>'
 				'"And now I will use your body again. On your knees <i>Cunt</i>. I will use your mouth first.'
 				'"Yes, <i>Master</i>." Your pussy is already wet, your body knows what is coming.'
 				act 'Sink to your knees':
@@ -917,7 +930,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoResist':
 	minut += 5
 	cla
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',20 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',40
-	'<font color=brown>'
+	'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
+	
 	if hypnoTimesResistedStage = 0:
 		'Your body tenses, and you shake your head as you reject Dr. Pavlov''s suggestion to <<$ARGS[1]>>. Seeing that you might awaken, he quickly tells you to forget the command he gave you. As the suggestion fades from your memory, you once again relax.'
 		'"Hmmm," Dr. Pavlov muses. "Your will is quite strong. It may take some time to break you, but you will break."'
@@ -949,7 +963,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoFuckThroat':
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',10 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',20 & PLAY 'sound/sucking.mp3',200
 	cls
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/throatFuck<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'<font color=brown>'
+	'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 	'You lay down on the couch with your head hanging off the edge. He places his cock before your face and you feel yourself getting wet between your legs at the sight. Your Master wastes no time and immediately shoves his massive cock down your throat. This makes you gag a bit but as he enthusiastically fucks your face, without a care for you, your throat opens up and accepts his cock.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		cls
@@ -979,7 +993,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoSitSuck':
 		cls
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/sitBlow<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	end
-	'<font color=brown>'
+	'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 	'Dr. Pavlov sits down and you kneel to suck him off. You feel yourself getting moist between your legs at the sight of his massive dick, and taking it all in your mouth excites you greatly. You continue to pleasure him enthusiastically, and judging from the breathing of your <i>Master</i>, you appear to be doing a great job.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		cls
@@ -1013,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoForceSuck':
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnoFuckMouth<<rand(1,5)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	end
-	'<font color=brown>'
+	'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 	'You kneel to suck off Dr. Pavlov, but instead he grabs you by the head and begins thrusting into your throat full force. Your pussy drools with excitement as he uses you. Judging from the breathing of your <i>Master</i>, he appears to be enjoying the use of your mouth.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		cls
@@ -1306,7 +1320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoAnal':
 	$cumdesciption2 = 'ass is full of fresh sperm, slowly leaking out of you'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A186', 2, 0, 15000, 60
 	randpos = rand(0,2)
-	'<font color=brown>'
+	'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">'
 	if randpos = 0:
 	!on your back
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnoanalback<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1521,7 +1535,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 	'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 	if therapistFuckedPussyStage > 1 and pillsleft[5] < 5 and tabletkifert ! 1:
 		''
-		'<font color=brown>"You are probably low on pills by now." he hands you a new box of unknown pills. "Continue taking them just like before, Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"You are probably low on pills by now." he hands you a new box of unknown pills. "Continue taking them just like before, Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		tabletki = 1
 		tabletkiold = 0
@@ -1538,6 +1552,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 	'...'
 	act 'Wake up':
 		*clr & cla
+
+		! clean up hypnocolour as leaving
+		killvar $hypnocolour
+		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/room.jpg"></center>'
 		''
 		'<<$hypnoTxt0>>'
@@ -1614,8 +1632,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		tabletkicheck = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'<font color=brown>"Now lets make sure you start having my children... <font color=brown>Although you won''t consciously know my cum is inside of you, you will subconsciously feel it. Everytime I cum inside of you, your body will crave my seed more. You will keep your pussy clenched so my cum doesn''t leak out."</font>'
-		'<font color=brown>Also, take these." He hands you a package of pills. "You will take one every day. If you have any birth control pills, you will throw them away. You won''t think about buying more. You won''t notice anything wrong with this and you will think these are simply normal birth control pills. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"Now lets make sure you start having my children... <font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">Although you won''t consciously know my cum is inside of you, you will subconsciously feel it. Everytime I cum inside of you, your body will crave my seed more. You will keep your pussy clenched so my cum doesn''t leak out."</font>'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">Also, take these." He hands you a package of pills. "You will take one every day. If you have any birth control pills, you will throw them away. You won''t think about buying more. You won''t notice anything wrong with this and you will think these are simply normal birth control pills. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		act 'Continue':
 			gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
@@ -1672,7 +1690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'<br><font color="brown">"From now on, when you come in for therapy you will feel that it is common courtesy to allow me to check if you are not wearing panties. You will think this is normal. In fact, if you are caught wearing panties, you will feel ashamed that you wore them. When I compliment you for not wearing panties, you will feel proud and grateful for the compliment.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+		'<br><font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"From now on, when you come in for therapy you will feel that it is common courtesy to allow me to check if you are not wearing panties. You will think this is normal. In fact, if you are caught wearing panties, you will feel ashamed that you wore them. When I compliment you for not wearing panties, you will feel proud and grateful for the compliment.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		'"Good ..."<br>'
 		hypnoCheckPanties = 1
@@ -1686,7 +1704,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'<br><font color="brown">"From now on, when you come in for therapy you will feel that it is common courtesy to show me your bare pussy. You will think this is perfectly normal behavior. It is simply the polite thing to do. Any comments I make about your bare pussy you will be grateful for.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+		'<br><font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"From now on, when you come in for therapy you will feel that it is common courtesy to show me your bare pussy. You will think this is perfectly normal behavior. It is simply the polite thing to do. Any comments I make about your bare pussy you will be grateful for.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		'"Good ..."<br>'
 		hypnoFlashGreet = 1
@@ -1702,7 +1720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		hypnoRandomCounter = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'<font color="brown">"From now on, you will find it perfectly acceptable for me to touch you on any place of your body. It''s common sense that I should be able to touch you where ever and whenever I please. Any vulgar comments I make are perfectly normal. You won''t notice anything out of the ordinary.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"From now on, you will find it perfectly acceptable for me to touch you on any place of your body. It''s common sense that I should be able to touch you where ever and whenever I please. Any vulgar comments I make are perfectly normal. You won''t notice anything out of the ordinary.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		''
 		act 'Continue':
@@ -1716,7 +1734,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		hypnoRandomCounter = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'<font color="brown">"From now on, before you leave, you will feel that it is natural to kiss me before you leave as thanks for your therapy session. You won''t find anything wrong with this. Doing so will feel perfectly normal. When you kiss me, you will do so with enthusiasm. You will enjoy the kiss and you will prefer kissing with your tongue. When we are finished, you will thank me for the session.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"From now on, before you leave, you will feel that it is natural to kiss me before you leave as thanks for your therapy session. You won''t find anything wrong with this. Doing so will feel perfectly normal. When you kiss me, you will do so with enthusiasm. You will enjoy the kiss and you will prefer kissing with your tongue. When we are finished, you will thank me for the session.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		''
 		act 'Continue':
@@ -1730,7 +1748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		hypnoRandomCounter = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'<font color="brown">"From now on, you will have difficulty orgasming if I''m not the one making you cum.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"From now on, you will have difficulty orgasming if I''m not the one making you cum.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		''
 		act 'Continue':
@@ -1744,7 +1762,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		hypnoRandomCounter = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		''
-		'<font color="brown">"From now on, you will feel that it is perfectly normal for you to ask me to fuck you instead of asking for therapy sessions. In fact, you will think that taking my cock is simply a normal therapy session and that doing so is not sex at all. Also, anytime you see my cock, your mind will enter the black room.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"From now on, you will feel that it is perfectly normal for you to ask me to fuck you instead of asking for therapy sessions. In fact, you will think that taking my cock is simply a normal therapy session and that doing so is not sex at all. Also, anytime you see my cock, your mind will enter the black room.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 		'"Good ..."<br>'
 		act 'Continue':
@@ -1767,7 +1785,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoPerv':
 			'"With my family, <i>Master</i>."'
 			'"Who lives with you?" he says.'
 			'"My <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, stepfather, my sister and my brother, <i>Master</i>"'
-			'"So we need to come up with a way for you to get kicked out. There would be too much suspicion if you simply disappeared. <font color="brown">You will tell your mother that your stepfather got you pregnant. After you do this, you will return here.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+			'"So we need to come up with a way for you to get kicked out. There would be too much suspicion if you simply disappeared. <font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">You will tell your mother that your stepfather got you pregnant. After you do this, you will return here.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 			'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 			'"Good, get dressed and go now."'
 			act 'Get dressed':
@@ -1802,7 +1820,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoPerv':
 			'"I live at my cottage in the cooperative farm, <i>Master</i>."'
 			'You have a cottage?"'
 			'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
-			'"Okay then... <font color="brown">You will sell your cottage to me for a single ruble. I will take you to an agency and they will officiate the sale. You will agree with everything I say while we are there. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>"'
+			'"Okay then... <font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">You will sell your cottage to me for a single ruble. I will take you to an agency and they will officiate the sale. You will agree with everything I say while we are there. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>"'
 			'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 			'"Good, put on your clothes and come with me."'
 		elseif $home['current'] = 'old_town_apartment':
@@ -1817,7 +1835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoPerv':
 			'"I live in my mansion, <i>Master</i>."'
 			'"A mansion. You live in a mansion?"'
 			'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
-			'"Ha! Okay then... <font color="brown">You will sell your mansion to me for a single ruble. I will take you to an agency and they will officiate the sale. You will agree with everything I say while we are there. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>"'
+			'"Ha! Okay then... <font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">You will sell your mansion to me for a single ruble. I will take you to an agency and they will officiate the sale. You will agree with everything I say while we are there. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>"'
 			'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 			'"Good, put on your clothes and come with me."'
 		elseif $home['current'] = 'pavlovsk_hotel':
@@ -2604,5 +2622,4 @@ $RestTherapyVariables ={
     killvar 'therapistFuckedPussyStage'
 }
 
---- therapist ---------------------------------
-
+--- therapist ---------------------------------

+ 1 - 1
locations/uni_dorm.qsrc

@@ -453,7 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 			$access['noporn-message'] = 'You shouldn''t watch porn with Vika in the room!'
 			$access['nocamshow-message'] ='You can''t do any webcam shows with Vika in the room!'
 		end
-		'Your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> sits on your desk.'
+		'Your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">computer</a> sits on your desk.'
 	end
 
 	'To the left of the entrance is an old <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/uni_lessons.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # uni_lessons
 close all
 !2021/22/12
-!! This file includes the code to make sure that the player characters can go to class and and exams when they are enrolled in the university.
+!! This file includes the code to make sure that the player characters can go to class and exams when they are enrolled in the university.
 !! The file does not include the selection of classes depending upon which program they are enrolled in only the part of the code that don''t depend on the program.
 !! The code for the individual programs is in uni_programs
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/unused/webcam_site.qsrc

@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ $webcam_show = {
 !------------------------------!
 !---------Sex - Vasily---------!
 !------------------------------!
-		if $loc='shulga_room' and npc_rel['A11'] >= 100 and week >= 6 and hour >= 15 and vgape < 3 and agape < 3 and pcs_vag >= 1 and my_show_sex = 0:
+		if $loc_arg ='livingroom' and npc_rel['A11'] >= 100 and week >= 6 and hour >= 15 and vgape < 3 and agape < 3 and pcs_vag >= 1 and my_show_sex = 0:
 			act 'Call Vasily and arrange a sex show':
 				gs'stat'
 				*clr

+ 1 - 1
locations/vann.qsrc

@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'v2':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			picrand = 75
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/sex/bathroom/v3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Let me help you..." you say sweetly. The guy pauses. "What?" he replies. You walk up to him and slide your hand under his towel, slowly jerking his cock in your hand. The guy relaxes and drops his towel as you drop to your knees and and keep stroking his shaft. He begins to moan in pleasure.'
+			'"Let me help you..." you say sweetly. The guy pauses. "What?" he replies. You walk up to him and slide your hand under his towel, slowly jerking his cock in your hand. The guy relaxes and drops his towel as you drop to your knees and keep stroking his shaft. He begins to moan in pleasure.'
 
 			act 'Get your pussy eaten':gt 'sex', 'kuni'
 			act 'Give him a blowjob':gt 'sex', 'minet'

+ 6 - 6
locations/vasilyhome.qsrc

@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 	act '<b>Leave the apartment</b>': minut += 1 & killvar '$boy' & gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
 	act 'Go to the living room': gt 'vasilyhome', 'livingroom'
 	act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'vasilyhome', 'bathroom'
-	act 'Go to the kitchen': gt 'vasilyhome', 'kitchen'
+	act 'Go to the kitchen': gt 'vasilyhome', 'vasilykitchen'
 	act 'Go to Sergey''s room': gt 'vasilyhome', 'sergey_room'
 	act 'Go to Vasily''s room': gt 'vasilyhome', 'vasily_room'
 end
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 
 	roomsex_sonia = rand(0,100)
 	if roomsex_sonia <= 5 and soniaPS >=1 and sexev_sonya_count > 0 and ((week >= 6 and hour >= 10 and hour < 17) or (week = 7 and hour >= 20)):
-		gt 'vasily_home', 'vasily_sex_sonya'
+		gt 'vasilyhome', 'vasily_sex_sonya'
 	end
 	if roomsex_sonia >= 97 and soniaPS >=3 and sexev_sonya_count > 0 and week < 5 and hour >= 20:
 		gt 'vasily_home_sex', 'gang_sex_sonya'
@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shultv':
 	act 'Change the channel': gt 'vasilyhome', 'shultv'
 
 	porno_tv_rand = rand(0,100)
-	if porno_tv_rand < 50 or porno_tv_rand >= 50 and week < 6 and hour >= 3 and hour <= 23 or porno_tv_rand >= 50 and week >= 6 and hour > 2 and hour < 10 or porno_tv_rand >= 50 and week >= 6 and hour > 16 and hour <= 23: gs 'vasily_home', 'view_pornotv'
+	if porno_tv_rand < 50 or porno_tv_rand >= 50 and week < 6 and hour >= 3 and hour <= 23 or porno_tv_rand >= 50 and week >= 6 and hour > 2 and hour < 10 or porno_tv_rand >= 50 and week >= 6 and hour > 16 and hour <= 23: gs 'vasilyhome', 'view_pornotv'
 	if porno_tv_rand >= 50:
 		if week >= 6 and hour >= 10 and hour <= 16: gs 'vasily_home_sex', 'view_pornotv_vasily'
 		if week >= 6 and hour >= 0 and hour <= 2: gs 'vasily_home_sex', 'view_pornotv_vasily'
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vasily_bazar_night':
 			if fame['pav_slut'] < 150 and bazar_count > 0: '<<$vasyan_textb>>'
 			if fame['pav_slut'] >= 150 and bazar_count > 0: '<<$vasyan_textb_gorslut>>'
 		end
-		act 'Further': gt 'vasilyhome', 'shulga_bazar_night'
+		act 'Further': gt 'vasilyhome', 'vasily_bazar_night'
 	end
 	act 'Drink beer': gt 'vasilyhome', 'shulga_beer'
 	if npc_rel['A11'] >= 70 and alko >= 1 or npc_rel['A11'] >= 70 and pcs_horny > 50 or fame['pav_slut'] >= 200 and alko >= 1:
@@ -552,7 +552,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dan_bazar':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dan/dan.jpg"></center>'
 	'Dan (Denis) Ryzhov is a tall and skinny guy, who usually communicates to others with disdain and contempt. He''s a very stubborn guy who will never let an argument go. He''s best friends with Vitek and Vasily, and can be considered the smartest one of the three.'
-	act 'Move away': gt 'vasilyhome'
+	act 'Move away': gt 'vasilyhome', 'livingroom'
 	act 'Talk':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
@@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitek_bazar':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/vitek/vitek.jpg"></center>'
 	'Vitek (Viktor) Kotov is an aggressive and strong guy, who considers himself a gangsta. But his personality is pretty much see-through. Lena is his twin-sister.'
-	act 'Move away': gt 'vasilyhome'
+	act 'Move away': gt 'vasilyhome','livingroom'
 	act 'Talk':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5

+ 2 - 6
locations/wardrobe.qsrc

@@ -71,9 +71,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 	'<center><font color="maroon">These are the clothes you are currently wearing - Click on an item to change it</font></center><center><table border=0 cellspacing=<<ward_img_hgt/25>> cellpadding=5>'
 	if underwear['type'] = 0:
 		*p '<TH>Bra worn</TH><TH>Outfit worn</TH><TH>Coat (only worn outside when cold)</TH>'
-!!	This will replace the line below when bodysuits are active
-!!		*P '<TR><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''underwear_options'', ''bra''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''bra'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt * 2>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''clothes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'
-		*P '<TR><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''bras'', ''view_bra_list'', ''wardrobe''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''bra'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt * 2>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''clothes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'
+		*P '<TR><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''underwear_options'', ''bra''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''bra'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt * 2>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''clothes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'
 	else
 		*p '<TH>Bodysuit worn</TH><TH>Outfit worn</TH><TH>Coat (only worn outside when cold)</TH>'
 		*P '<TR><TD ROWSPAN=4><center><a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''underwear_options'', ''full''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>>*2 src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''bodysuit'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt * 2>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''clothes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'
@@ -110,9 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 
 	if underwear['type'] = 0:
 		*p '<TR><TH>Panties worn</TH><TH>Shoes (Only worn outside)</TH><TH>Purse worn</TH>'
-!!	This will replace the line below when bodysuits are active
-!!		*P '<TR><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''underwear_options'', ''panties''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''panties'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''shoes'', ''view_shoe_list'', ''wardrobe''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'', ''shoes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'
-		*P '<TR><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''panties'', ''view_panty_list'', ''wardrobe''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''panties'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''shoes'', ''view_shoe_list'', ''wardrobe''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'', ''shoes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'
+		*P '<TR><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''underwear_options'', ''panties''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'',''panties'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''shoes'', ''view_shoe_list'', ''wardrobe''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'', ''shoes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'
 	else
 		*p '<TR><TH>Shoes (Only worn outside)</TH><TH>Purse worn</TH>'
 		*P '<TR><TD><center><a href="exec:gt ''shoes'', ''view_shoe_list'', ''wardrobe''"><img Height = <<ward_img_hgt>> src="<<FUNC(''$body_image'', ''shoes'')>>"></a></center></TD><TD><center>'