Proofreading and variable updates

locations/Club2.qsrc

@@ -8,34 +8,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Gloryhole Client', rand(18,60)
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory.jpg"></center>'
-	*nl
-	'You went into the booth and closed the door. The walls are covered with obscene graffiti, and holes are carved in opposite walls. Sitting on the toilet you hear a noise coming from the next stall, and then someone''s eye appears at the hole.'
-	'The next thing you know, a cock is pushed through the hole. A lustful voice says, "here''s a treat for you, baby."'
-	'This is so unexpected, that you hardly believe any of this is real, as you tentatively touch their member. It is hard and hot.'
+	'You head into the stall and close the door. The walls are covered with obscene graffiti and circular holes are carved in the walls. Sitting on the toilet, you hear a noise coming from the next stall.'
+	'The next thing you know, a cock is pushed through the hole. "Here''s a treat for you, baby," a lustful voice says with a laugh.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
 
 	act 'Take a closer look':
 		*clr & cla
-
-		if TQuest = 1:TQuest = 2
-
+		if TQuest = 1: TQuest = 2
 		guy += 1
 		pcs_throat += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory1.jpg"></center>'
-		*nl
-		'This is so surreal, but you lean closer to their member and impulsively find yourself licking it, again and again.'
-		
+		'You lean closer and find yourself impulsively licking the cock in front of you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Cover lips':
+		act 'Suck it':
 			*clr & cla
+			minut += 2
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory2.jpg"></center>'
-			*nl
-			'You wrap your lips around the head and start sucking, trying to take it as deep as possible.'
-			'Suddenly, the reality of the situation comes flooding back into your head - and a warm liquid comes flooding into your mouth.'
-
+			'You wrap your lips around the head and start sucking, trying to take it as deep as possible. After a few minutes, a warm liquid starts flooding into your mouth as you hear a loud groan coming from the next stall.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -44,31 +36,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet1':
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy
 				money += 1000
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory3.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
-				'You gather a mouthful of sperm, and then swallow it. Their sperm has a sticky and sharp taste which makes you grimace.'
-				'A man''s voice tells you - "That was fucking great, here, you deserve it." and then 1,000 RUB are pushed through the hole.'
-
+				'You swallow. The cum has a sharp, tart taste which makes you grimace.'
+				'"That was fucking great, and you swallow! Here, you deserve it."' 
+				'1000 rubles is pushed through the hole.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				
-				act 'Leave':gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
 			end
 
-			act 'Spit out':
+			act 'Spit it out':
 				cla
 				spafinloc = 11
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				money += 500
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory3.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
-				'You gather a mouthful of sperm, but the sticky and sharp taste overwhelms you, and you spit it on the floor.'
-				'A man''s voice tells you - "Here, your money." and then 500 RUB are pushed through the hole.'
-
+				'The sharp, tart taste overwhelms you and you spit the cum out onto the floor.'
+				'500 RUB is pushed through the hole.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				
-				act 'Leave':gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
-			end
+				act 'Leave': gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+			end 
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -76,12 +63,10 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You pee sitting on the toilet and begin to wipe with toilet paper. Apparently you pressed too hard, as you feel a thrill coming from between the legs.'
-	
+	'You grab some toilet paper to wipe yourself, but press a little too hard and feel a warmth growing between your legs.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 3 
 	gs 'stat'
-
-	act 'Leave':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+	act 'Leave': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
 
 	act 'Caress yourself':
 		cla
@@ -90,35 +75,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet':
 		money += 500
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/tomas.jpg"></center>'
-		*nl
-		'You caress swollen pussy with your fingers until you orgasm enthusiastically.'
-		'After orgasm, you catch your breath, but then notice someone is peeking at you through a hole in the wall.'
-		'The man behind the wall realises he has been caught, and giggles that you put on a great show. Suddenly the eye disappears, and 500 rubles are pushed through the hole.'
-
+		'You caress your swollen pussy with your fingers until you orgasm. When you catch your breath, you notice someone peeking at you through a hole in the wall.'
+		'500 rubles is pushed through the hole as the man thanks you for the show.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'masturbate'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-	
-		act 'Leave':gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 	*clr & cla
-	'You sit in a booth and hear both adjacent doors closing as two others enter.'
-	'A voice from the next stall tells you - "Don''t be afraid baby, we won''t hurt you! On the contrary, we will give you some delicious candy with extra cream filling.'
+	'As you''re sitting on the toilet, you hear both adjacent stall doors closing.'
+	'"Don''t be afraid baby, we won''t hurt you. On the contrary, we''ll give you some delicious candy with extra cream filling!" a voice says with a laugh.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
 
-	act 'Take a closer look':
+	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		slutiness += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory4.jpg"></center>'
-		*nl
-		'On both sides of your booth cocks poke through holes in the wall. The same voice says, "Come on, baby, come on, feeding time".'
-		'You take both members and begin to caress them, then bend over to one and take it into your mouth.'
-		
+		'Two cocks poke through the holes in the walls. "Come on, baby. You know you want to..." the voice says.'
+		'You reach out and start stroking both cocks before leaning over and taking one into your mouth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
@@ -127,33 +106,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory5.jpg"></center>'
-			*nl
-			'You are enthusiastically fucked in the mouth by both members in turn.'
-			
+			'You alternate between sucking one cock while jerking off the other.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory6.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
-				'Finally one of the men finishes in your mouth.'
-				'You lick it up and turn all your attention to the other.'
-				
+				'After a few minutes, one of the men finishes in your mouth. You lick it up and turn all your attention to the other.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 		
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/glory7.jpg"></center>'
-					*nl
-					'Before long, the second man also comes in your mouth.'
-					'You swallow a mouthful and wipe your face, but find semen smeared all over it.'
-					
+					'Before long, the second man also cums in your mouth. You swallow both loads and wipe your face.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
-					
-					if rand(1, 100) > pcs_horny:
-						pcs_horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied - after all, they were only in your mouth!'
+					if rand(1,100) > pcs_horny:
+						pcs_horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied and feel your pussy burning with desire.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					else
 						pcs_horny = 0 & 'Even though they only fucked your mouth, you feel an orgasm wash over you from the sheer depravity of the situation.'
@@ -165,9 +135,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 						cla
 						money += 2000
 						TQuest = 3
-						'A pleased voice says from behind the wall - "You were great, I think you''ve earned a reward."'
-						'2,000 RUB pokes through the hole.'
-
+						'"You were great, I think you''ve earned a reward."'
+						'2000 rubles pokes through the hole.'
 						guy += 2
 						gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Gloryhole Client', rand(18,60)
 						gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -180,14 +149,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 						
 						if pornstudio = 0:
 							act 'Continue':
-								pornstudio = 2
-								'A male voice says "I have some more work for you."'
-								'He pushes a card through the hole and says "Come find me at my studio if you want to have fun and make more money."'
-
-								act 'Leave':gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+								pornstudio = 1
+								'A business card is then pushed through the hole. "That was some amazing cock sucking there, girl! Come here if you want to have some fun and make more money with that mouth of yours."'
+								'You look at the card. It''s for a porn studio located in the city''s industrial district.'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
 							end
 						else
-							act 'Leave':gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'city_nightclub', 'inside'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -196,4 +164,4 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet2':
 	end
 end
 
---- Club2 ---------------------------------
+--- Club2 ---------------------------------

locations/Peterroom.qsrc

@@ -2,8 +2,7 @@
 
 !! Peter, the owner of the sexshop
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start_door':
-	cla
-	*clr
+	*clr & cla
 	$menu_loc = 'Peterroom'
 	$menu_arg = 'start_door'
 	menu_off = 0
@@ -28,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start_door':
 			petersexday += 1
 			'You ring the doorbell and wait. After a few seconds, Peter opens the door and smiles. "Come in and get changed."'
 
-			act 'Enter the apartment':gt 'peterroom', 'start'
+			act 'Enter the apartment': gt 'peterroom', 'start'
 		else
 			'You ring the doorbell a few times, but no one answers.'
 
@@ -42,25 +41,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start_door':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
-	cla
-	*clr
+	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if peter > 0 :
-		peterrand = rand(1, 2)
+		peterrand = rand(1,2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/9.jpg"></center>'
 		'You get undressed and fasten your collar around your neck.'
 		'"Who''s my good bitch?" you hear Peter ask from the next room.'
 
 		act 'I am, Master':
 			petersex = petersex + 1
-
-			if analplugin = 1 :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
-			if peterrand < 2 :gt 'peterroom', 'd1'
-			if peterrand > 1 :gt 'peterroom', 'd2'
+			if analplugin = 1: gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
+			if peterrand < 2: gt 'peterroom', 'd1'
+			if peterrand > 1: gt 'peterroom', 'd2'
 		end
-	elseif peter < 1 :
+	elseif peter < 1:
 		petersexday += 1
 		minut += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -68,60 +65,56 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'He puts the collar down in front of you. It''s a broad strip of leather with a ring at the front where a leash can be attached.'
 
 		act 'Put it on':
-			*clr
-			cla
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You eagerly put the collar on and Peter strokes you gently on the cheek, but then suddenly pulls his hand back and slaps you.'
-			'"Lustful girl! Stand up and turn around - hands behind your back!"'
+			'"Lustful girl! Stand up and turn around, hands behind your back!"'
 			'You do as he says and feel leather cuffs being tightly fastened around your wrists.'
 
-			if analplugin = 1 :
+			if analplugin = 1:
 				analplugin = 0
-				'"What do we have here?" Peter grips the end of the butt plug sticking out of your ass, and eases it out.'
+				'"What do we have here?" he asks as he grips the end of your butt plug and eases it out.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Smile':
-				cla
-				*clr
+				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/3.jpg"></center>'
 				'Peter pulls you by the collar and forces you onto your knees in front of him. "Open your mouth, bitch!" he sternly orders.'
 
 				act 'Please him':
-					cla
-					*clr
+					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/4.jpg"></center>'
 					'Peter unbuttons his pants and pulls out his cock before grabbing you by the hair and shoving it into your mouth. You obediently wrap your lips around it and start sucking it, feeling it grow and strain inside your mouth.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					
 					act 'Continue':
-						cla
-						*clr
+						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/5.jpg"></center>'
-						'After a few minutes, Peter slides his dick out of your mouth, pulls you to your feet and pushes you onto the bed. He pushes your legs up to your chest before binding your hand cuffs behind them.'
-						'He climbs onto the bed and thrusts his dick into your pussy before he starts fucking you hard and fast. After a few minutes, he stops and pulls out, unties you and shoves you to the floor.'
+						'After a few minutes, Peter slides his dick out of your mouth, pulls you to your feet and pushes you onto the bed. He pushes your legs up to your chest before binding your handcuffs behind them.'
+						'He climbs onto the bed and thrusts his dick into your pussy before he starts fucking you hard and fast. After a few minutes, he stops and pulls out, unties you and shoves you on the floor.'
 						'He walks across the room before turning back to you. "Crawl to me, bitch!"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 					
-						act 'Crawl' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
+						act 'Crawl': gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
 					end
 				end
 				
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
-						cla & *clr
+						*clr & cla
 						gs 'pain', 8, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/4_1.jpg"></center>'
 						'You remain where you are and refuse to move. Peter scowls with disappointment.'
-						'"A disobidient bitch like you needs to be punished!" he says as he rounds the table and forces you onto your knees and pulling your ass high in the air. You squeal when he shoves a butt plug deep into your ass, but it gets worse. He reaches for his whip and starts flogging your ass. He counts the strikes aloud, ignoring your sobs as the leather tails burn across your raw, stinging ass.'
+						'"A disobidient bitch like you needs to be punished!" he says as he rounds the table and forces you onto your knees before pulling your ass high in the air. You squeal when he shoves a butt plug deep into your ass, but it gets worse. He reaches for his whip and starts flogging your ass. He counts the strikes aloud, ignoring your sobs as the leather tails burn across your raw, stinging ass.'
 						'"Beg me to fuck you, whore!" he snarls as he whips you extra hard.'
 						'"Please fuck me, Master! Fuck me like the dirty little whore I am!" you beg through your tears and you see a faint smile on his face.'
-						act 'Continue' :gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'peterroom', 'klap'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -134,8 +127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
-	cla
-	*clr
+	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/6.jpg"></center>'
 	'Peter puts you on a leash and leads you into the bedroom. He pushes you onto the bed and ties your hands and feet to the headboard before fastening a ball gag into your mouth.'
@@ -144,28 +136,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 	gs 'stat'
 	
 	act 'Moan':
-		cla
-		*clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/7.jpg"></center>'
 		'Your moans are muffled by the gag as Peter bears down on you from above. "Let''s see how well your sweet ass takes me..." he says'
 
-		if analplugin = 1 :
+		if analplugin = 1:
 			analplugin = 0
 			', pulls out your butt plug'
 		end
 
-		'and starts pushing his dick against your asshole. After a few seconds, the tip pops into you and you moan into the gag. You can''t wait for him to bury himself in your ass completely. Peter sees your reaction and begins to fuck your ass, penetrating deeper with each stroke, until his dick is completely buried inside you and his balls slap hard against your buttocks. He fucks you so hard that your knees start to shake, and pussy juices trickle down your ass.'
+		'and starts pushing his dick against your asshole. After a few seconds, the tip pops into you and you moan into the gag. You can''t wait for him to bury himself in your ass completely. Peter sees your reaction and starts fucking your ass, penetrating deeper with each thrust until his dick is completely buried inside you. He fucks you so hard that your knees start to shake and pussy juices trickle down your leg.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Moan again':
-			cla & *clr
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/8.jpg"></center>'
 			'He continues to fuck you hard and fast, then slows the rhythm, finishing with several sharp uneven thrusts that fill your insides with a hot stream of cum.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
-			if pcs_ass < 25:pcs_ass += 1
+			if pcs_ass < 25: pcs_ass += 1
 
 			if pcs_horny >= 100:
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -175,40 +166,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klap':
 
 			'Your ass makes a loud squelching noise when he pulls his dick out. Peter sits on the bed, breathing heavily while you remain bound, his cum slowly leaking from your asshole.'
 			
-			act 'Relax' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
+			act 'Relax': gt 'peterroom', 'end'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
-	cla
-	*clr
+	*clr & cla
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/vanroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'"You were great." Peter says as he smacks your ass. He then picks you up and carries you to the bathroom, where you take a bath together.'
+	'"You were great," he says as he smacks your ass. He then picks you up and carries you to the bathroom, where you take a bath together.'
     'He greatly enjoys "washing" you, his hands paying special attention to your breasts and pussy as you lean back and make out with him.'
 	act 'Leave':
-		cla
-		*clr
+		*clr & cla
 		peter += 1
 		minut += 20
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/mash.jpg"></center>'
-		'You relax in the bath together for a while until Peter states that he has business to attend to. You climb out of the bath and dry off before getting dressed. Peter grabs his keys and locks up before you walk outside together. When you reach his car, Peter leans in to kiss you.'
-		'"You''re a breath of fresh air, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You never fail to brighten my day." he says while gently stroking your cheek. "I hope I can see you against soon."'
-		'He climbs into his car and starts the engine, but just as he''s about to drive off, he suddenly calls to you. "Do you need a lift?"'
+		'You relax in the bath together for a while until Peter states that he has business to attend to elsewhere. You climb out of the bath and dry off before getting dressed. Peter then grabs his keys and locks up before you walk outside together. When you reach his car, he leans in to kiss you.'
+		'"You''re a breath of fresh air, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You never fail to brighten my day," he says while gently stroking your cheek. "I hope I can see you against soon."'
+		'He climbs into his car and starts the engine, but just as he''s about to drive off, he suddenly calls out to you. "Do you need a lift?"'
 	
 		act 'To the city center':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			'You nod and get into the car next to him. "Just into the city center is fine, thanks."'
-            'You spend the journey talking about the sex you just had and you reach the city center a few minutes later. Peter leans over and gives your ass a firm squeeze as you climb out of the car. "Until next time <<$pcs_nickname>>." You smile at him and close the door before he drives off.' 			
+            'You spend the journey talking about the sex you just had and you reach the city center a few minutes later. Peter leans over and gives your ass a firm squeeze as you climb out of the car. "Until next time, <<$pcs_nickname>>." You smile at him and close the door before he drives off.' 			
 			gt 'city_center'
 		end
+		
 		if func('homes_properties', 'has_access', 'city_house'):
 			act 'To your apartment':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				'You nod and get into the car next to him, giving him directions to your apartment complex.'
-				'You spend the journey talking about the sex you just had and you eventually reach your apartment building. Peter leans over and gives your ass a firm squeeze as you climb out of the car. "Until next time <<$pcs_nickname>>." You smile at him and close the door before he drives off.' 
+				'You spend the journey talking about the sex you just had and you eventually reach your apartment building. Peter leans over and gives your ass a firm squeeze as you climb out of the car. "Until next time, <<$pcs_nickname>>." You smile at him and close the door before he drives off.' 
 				gt 'city_residential'
 			end
 		end
@@ -216,15 +206,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
-	cla
-	*clr
-	if pcs_ass < 25:pcs_ass += 1
+	*clr & cla
+	if pcs_ass < 25: pcs_ass += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/d1-1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Peter binds your torso and hands before he lifts you up and hangs you from a hook.'
 	
 	act 'Suck his fingers':
-		cla
-		*clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-2.jpg"></center>'
 		'Peter grabs your head and shoves all of his fingers into your mouth, forcing you to suck on them.'
 		'After a few seconds of you sucking and gagging on his fingers, he withdraws them and moves around behind you.'     
@@ -232,8 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
 		gs 'stat'
 		
 		act 'Penetration':
-			cla
-			*clr
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-3.jpg"></center>'
 			'You think he is about to finger your ass, but squeal in surprise when he shoves his dick into you instead.'
             'You moan in a mix of pleasure and pain as he starts thrusting, quickly picking up the pace.'
@@ -241,10 +228,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
 			gs 'stat'
 		
 			act 'Moan':
-				cla
-				*clr
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d1-4.jpg"></center>'
-				'He continues to fuck you hard and you submit yourself to the pleasure of your ass being hammered, your pussy juices running down your legs.'
+				'He continues to fuck you hard and you submit yourself to the pleasure of your ass being hammered as your pussy juices run down your legs.'
 
 				if pcs_horny >= 100:
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -258,56 +244,50 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd1':
 				
 				'Your ass makes a loud squelching noise when he pulls his dick out. Peter sits on the bed, breathing heavily while you remain kneeling with your ass in the air, his cum trickling down your leg.'
 
-				act 'Further' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
+				act 'Further': gt 'peterroom', 'end'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'd2':
-	cla
-	*clr
+	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Peter forces you on your knees, then lifts your head and thrusts his cock into your mouth. The head of his cock goes down your throat, but he continues to thrust, forcing more of its 25cm length inside.'
-
+	'Peter forces you on your knees, then lifts your head and thrusts his cock into your mouth. The head of his cock goes down your throat, but he continues to thrust, forcing more of it inside.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	act 'Suck':
-		cla
-		*clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-2.jpg"></center>'
 		'He thrusts mercilessly, fucking deeper into your mouth. Eventually, you feel his balls slap your chin, and realize that he''s bottomed out.'
-		'You feel a sense of pride in managing to take it all, but the feeling melts away as he begins to use your throat.'
-
+		'You feel a sense of pride in managing to take it all, but the feeling melts away as he starts to fuck your throat.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 		gs 'stat'
 	
 		act 'Moan':
-			cla
-			*clr
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Tears stream from your eyes as he begins moving slowly. He takes his hands away from your head, and you desperately grab onto him while you let him use your throat. Trembling, you are lost in sensations - caught between the fire raging between your legs and your shameless awareness of the depravity of the situation.'
+			'Tears stream from your eyes and you desperately grab onto him, trembling as you let him use you in such a depraved manner.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 		
 			act 'Moan':
-				cla
-				*clr
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/sex/d2-4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Peter is nearing climax, his thrusts becoming ragged, when he suddenly stops and pushes in deep. His balls draw up, coated with your saliva, and you feel his sperm shooting down your throat.'
+				'Peter is nearing climax, his thrusts becoming ragged, when he suddenly stops and pushes in deep. His balls draw up, coated with your saliva, and you feel his cum shooting down your throat.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 		
 				if pcs_horny >= 100:
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-					'Your orgasm suddenly hits you. Waves of pleasure ripple through your body, and you moan and shudder with release, but Peter holds you in place and refuses to allow his cock to slip out of your mouth.'
+					'Your orgasm suddenly hits you. Waves of pleasure ripple through your body, and you moan and shudder with release, but Peter holds you in place and refuses to allow his cock out of your mouth.'
 				end
 
-				act 'Swallow' :gt 'peterroom', 'end'
+				act 'Swallow': gt 'peterroom', 'end'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
---- Peterroom ---------------------------------
+--- Peterroom ---------------------------------

locations/city_redlight.qsrc

@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	else
 		'The strip club is closed for the day and will reopen at 18:00.'
 	end
-	if pornstudio >= 1 and hour >= 10 and hour < 22:
-		'A <a href="exec:gt ''pornstudio'', ''start''">porn studio</a> is housed within one of the few warehouses that hasn''t been abandoned.'
-	elseif pornstudio >= 1 and (hour < 10 or hour >= 22):
+	if pornstudio = 1 and hour >= 10 and hour < 22:
+		'The <a href="exec:gt ''pornstudio'', ''start''">porn studio</a> is housed within one of the few warehouses that hasn''t been abandoned.'
+	elseif pornstudio = 1 and (hour < 10 or hour >= 22):
 		'The porn studio is closed and will reopen at 10:00.'
 	end
 	if hour < 3 or hour >= 11: 

locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -327,13 +327,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
 		if AlbinaQW['Friends'] >= 1 and SchoolGossip > 0 and rand(0,1) = 0:
-			AlbinaBlockHumiliation = 1
+			AlbinaQW['Protect'] = 1
 			minut += 60
-			'During the break, you''re approached by Vitek and some other gopniks. "I know why you look so glum <<$pcs_nickname>>, you miss our cocks! Ain''t that right, cocksucker? Don''t worry, you can come with us and we''ll give you all the dick you want."'
-			'They tightly grab your arms and begin to drag you to the restrooms. Your futile attempts to resist are met with laughter and you are forcefully pulled along, hoping for some miracle to get you out of this nightmare. When you arrive at the restrooms, Albina suddenly blocks the doorway. They try to shove her out the way and pull you into the restroom, but she stands firm and doesn''t budge an inch, which annoys Vitek. "Get the fuck out of my way rich bitch! Or do you want to join us? I know you''d love having my dick in your ass, right between those big juicy cheeks of yours!" he says with a laugh and the others join in.' 
+			'During the break, you''re approached by Vitek and some other gopniks. "I know why you look so glum, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You miss our cocks! Don''t worry, you can come with us and we''ll give you all the dick you want."'
+			'They tightly grab your arms and start dragging you to the restroom. Your futile attempts to resist are met with laughter and you''re forcefully pulled along, hoping for some miracle to get you out of this nightmare. When you arrive at the restroom, Albina suddenly blocks the doorway. They try to shove her out the way, but she stands firm and doesn''t budge, which annoys Vitek. "Get the fuck out of my way, rich bitch! Or do you want to join us? I know you''d love having my dick in your ass, right between those big juicy cheeks of yours!" he says with a laugh and the others join in.' 
 			*nl
-			'Albina is not amused and gets right up in Vitek''s face. "Like I''d actually feel anything. My pinky finger is bigger than your micro dick. Now let <<$pcs_nickname>> go and fuck off! If I see you pestering her again, I''ll cut your little balls off and feed them to your sister. Got it!?'
-			'The other gopniks look at each other for a second, both amused and stunned by what Albina said as Vitek stands fuming, his fists clenched in anger before he loudly scoffs and storms off. "Come on boys, these whores aren''t worth it. Let''s find a girl who actually knows what she''s good for!" The gopniks quickly let you go and follow Vitek away. You give Albina a weak smile in gratitude and she returns an encouraging nod and a pat on the shoulder before continuing on her way.'
+			'Albina isn''t amused. "Like I''d actually feel anything with your micro dick," she replies while holding up her pinky finger. "Now fuck off and leave <<$pcs_nickname>> alone. If I see any of you pestering her again, then I''ll kick your balls back up inside you. Got it!?"'
+			'Vitek stands fuming, his fists clenched in anger before he loudly scoffs and storms off. "Come on boys, these whores aren''t worth it. Let''s find a girl who actually knows what she''s good for!"' 
+			'The other gopniks let you go and follow Vitek away. You give Albina a weak smile in gratitude and she gives you a pat on the shoulder before continuing on her way.'
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
 		else
 			'During the break, you''re approached by some gopniks. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, I hear you''re an amazing cocksucker. I think you should show us. Come on, let''s go to a restroom and you can show us your skills."'

locations/model_krystal.qsrc

@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'krystal_porn_card':
 	act'Continue':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/krystal_b/talking/face.jpg"></center>'
-		pornstudio = 2
+		pornstudio = 1
 		if krystal['porn_card_day'] = daystart:
 			'"Glad I caught you before you left!" She extends her arm, holding out a small rectangular card between her fingers towards you. Taking it from her, you see it reads:'
 		elseif krystal['porn_card_day'] = daystart - 1:

locations/saveupdater.qsrc

@@ -209,6 +209,7 @@ if temp_current_save_version  < 00080000:
 	if AlbFaterBlackTime > 0:  AlbinaQW['ElectionCampaignTime'] = AlbFaterBlackTime     & killvar 'AlbFaterBlackTime'
 	if startletsday > 0:       AlbinaQW['startletsday']         = startletsday          & killvar 'startletsday'
 	if AlbVsNiko > 0:		   AlbinaQW['niko_help']            = AlbVsNiko             & killvar 'AlbVsNiko'
+	if AlbinaBlockHumiliation > 0: AlbinaQW['Protect']			= AlbinaBlockHumiliation & killvar 'AlbinaBlockHumiliation'
 	! ----- Albina story variables migrated to array
 
 

locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'Vibrator - 800 <b>₽</b>'
 	'Butt plug - 800 <b>₽</b>'
 	'Strap-on harness - 500 <b>₽</b>'
-	'Dildo - starting at 800 <b>₽</b>'
+	'Dildos - starting at 800 <b>₽</b>'
 	*nl
 	'Private booths are available in the basement for viewing porn. (50 <b>₽</b> for 15 minutes)'
 
@@ -37,92 +37,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	if mc_inventory['buttplug'] = 1 and mc_inventory['dildo_small'] = 1 and hotcat >= 5 and Peter = 0:
 		if rand(0,1) = 1:
-			'You see an interesting looking middle-aged man. Apparently, he is the owner of this store.'
+			'You see an interesting looking middle-aged man, the apparent owner of the store.'
 
 			act 'Introduce yourself':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/peter.jpg"></center>'
 				'You approach the counter and introduce yourself. "Hey there, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-				'"I''m Peter," he replies. "I''ve been watching you for a while and I find you rather...interesting. Do you want to come back to my place for some ''fun''?"'
+				'"I''m Peter," he replies. "I''ve been watching you for a while and I find you rather... interesting. Do you want to come back to my place for some ''fun''?"'
                 act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_redlight', 'start'
 				act 'Go with him': gt 'Peterroom', 'start'
-				! Where will Peter be set to non 0?
+				!! Peter needs to be set to 1
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to the basement':gt 'sexshop', 'podval'
+	act 'Go to the basement': gt 'sexshop', 'podval'
 
 	if ghnow['sexshop_total'] >= 20 and pornstudio = 0:
-		'You notice the salesman trying to get your attention.'
+		'You notice a shady looking man trying to get your attention.'
 
-		act 'Approach':
+		act 'Approach him':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			menu_off = 1
-			'"You give a great blowjob, so why not put that mouth to use and work as a porn actress? The pay is certainly better than here."'
+			pornstudio = 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/pierre.jpg"></center>'
+			'"You give a great blowjob girl, so why not put that mouth to better use and work as a porn actress?"'
 
 			act 'Agree':
-				*clr & cla
+				cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/pierre_1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You head to the porn studio with the man, where you''re approached by a man who introduces himself as Dimitri.'
-                '"Okay, I''ve got to get back to work, but Dimitri here is our manager. He can explain everything you need to know." the salesman says before disappearing.'
-				act 'Explain the purpose of your visit':
-					*clr & cla
-					minut = minut + 60
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Dimitri smiles. "New actresses are always welcome, but if they''re terrible, the studio won''t take them. The auditions are made public, so remember that if you ever consider it."'
-		            '"I''ll tell you everything else under one condition - you have to undress."'
-
-					act 'Undress':
-						*clr & cla
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/casting_3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You strip out of your clothes. Once you''re nude, Dimitri smiles and starts his tour.'
-			            '"We start with the casting auditions. As I said, if you''re terrible, then you have no hope. This can be overlooked if you have an attractive appearance, however."'
-
-						act 'Continue':
-							*clr & cla
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/model_0.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Then a girl is chosen for the lead role. Only the most attractive of girls are chosen."'
-
-							act 'Continue':
-								*clr & cla
-								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/film_0.jpg"></center>'
-								'"Then she shoots the scenes, an interesting and exciting process that can take hours. The films we shoot...'
-
-								act 'Continue':
-									*clr & cla
-									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/dvd-disx.jpg"></center>'
-									'He pulls a DVD off the top of a nearby stack. "Are how we make money."'
-
-									act 'How and where is it all sold?':
-										*clr & cla
-										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-										'"We mostly sell it digitally on our premium websites, but we have guys at the sauna in the residential area and in the sex shop for those who want to buy physically.' 
-										'We''re thinking of moving in on the university as well- and not just selling our films there. We could possibly shoot a few films on campus. There''s a huge market for young college students and we want a slice."'
-
-										act 'Is that legal?':
-											*clr & cla
-											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/ment_0.jpg"></center>'
-											'"It doesn''t matter since we bribe the cops. Maybe in the future you''ll be able to help us with that? In the meantime, I''ve told you everything you need to know."'
-
-											act 'You understand':
-												*clr & cla
-												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-												'"Enjoy yourself. I hope to see you around here more often." he says before returning to his business.'
-												pornstudio = 3
-												act 'Continue': gt 'pornstudio', 'start'
-											end
-										end
-									end
-								end
-							end
-						end
-					end
-				end
+				'You nod your head. "Okay, where do I sign up?" you ask.'
+				'The man smiles and hands you a business card. "Just come to this location and ask for Dimitri. He''ll tell you everything you need to know and do. I do hope I''ll see you working there soon," he says before returning to his business.'
+				'You look over the card and see that the porn studio apparently operates out of the city''s industrial district. You then pocket the card and return to what you were doing.'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'prostitution', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -130,14 +81,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
-					pornstudio = 1
-                    'You shake your head and quickly move away from the man, feeling his gaze on the back of your head the entire time.'
-					gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+					'You shake your head and quickly move away from the man, feeling his gaze on the back of your head the entire time.'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		end
+		act 'Ignore him':
+			cla
+			minut += 2
+			gs 'stat'
+			'You ignore the man and quickly move away from him, feeling his gaze on the back of your head the entire time.'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+		end
 	end
 
 	act 'Look through the fetish dresses':	minut += 1 & gt 'sexshop', 'dress'
@@ -159,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexshop_menu' or $ARGS[0] = '':
     gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	$backimage= 'images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sexshop.jpg'
 
-	act 'Stop browsing':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+	act 'Stop browsing': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
@@ -450,11 +407,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'podval':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/gloryholebooths1.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 
-	act 'Leave the basement':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
-	act 'Enter a free booth':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
-	act 'Enter the bathroom':gt 'sexshop', 'toi'
+	act 'Leave the basement': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+	act 'Enter a free booth': gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+	act 'Enter the bathroom': gt 'sexshop', 'toi'
 
-	if masharab = 1:act 'Go to Masha':gt 'masharoom', 'start'
+	if masharab = 1: act 'Go to Masha': gt 'masharoom', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'toi':
@@ -473,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toi':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">WC</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/bathroom/publictoilet.jpg"></center>'
 
-	act 'Leave the toilet':gt 'sexshop', 'podval'
+	act 'Leave the toilet': gt 'sexshop', 'podval'
 
 	act 'Look in the mirror': gt 'mirror', 'start'
 	if pcs_hairbsh < 1: act 'Brush your hair': gt 'mirror', 'brush'
@@ -491,7 +448,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Movie Booth</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/ghbooths.jpg"></center>'
 	'The small booth has a TV on the wall, a terminal to choose films and a chair to sit in. There is also two holes in the walls at waist level.'
@@ -503,19 +459,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 		ghnowcheck = ghnow * 2
 	end
 	
-	if ghnow > 0:'You served <<ghnow>> cocks this visit.'
+	if ghnow > 0: 'You served <<ghnow>> cocks on this visit.'
 
-	act 'Leave the booth':gt 'sexshop', 'podval'
+	act 'Leave the booth': gt 'sexshop', 'podval'
 
 	if money >= 50 and (hour >= 11 or hour < 3):
 		act 'Watch porn':
 			cla
 			money -= 50
 			minut += 10
-			'You insert 50 <b>₽</b> into the terminal and the TV on the wall begins showing a pornographic film.'
-			'You sit in the chair and watch the porn, feeling yourself becoming a little excited.'
+			'You insert 50 <b>₽</b> into the terminal and the TV on the wall starts showing a pornographic film.'
+			'You sit in the chair and watch the film, feeling yourself becoming a little excited.'
 
-			act 'The film ends':minut += 5 & gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+			act 'The film ends': minut += 5 & gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 
 			act 'Masturbate':
 				cla
@@ -524,7 +480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'	
 
-				act 'The film ends':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+				act 'The film ends': minut += 5 & gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 			end
 
 
@@ -532,8 +488,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 				'You hear the TV in the next stall turn on.'
 
 				act 'Stick a finger in the hole (serve a stranger)':
-					cla
-					*clr
+					*clr & cla
 					ghnow += 1
 					ghnow['sexshop_total'] += 1
 					if ghnow < 5:
@@ -546,10 +501,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 					'The stranger slips ' + iif(ghnow < 5, '300', '150') +	'<b>₽</b> into the hole, followed by his erect cock.'
 
 					act 'Suck his dick':
+						*clr & cla
 						gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Guy at the gloryhole', rand(21,50)
 						gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-						cla
-						*clr
 						stat['gloryhole'] += 1
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy
 						ghprand = rand(1, 38)
@@ -564,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 							'You have sucked <<mistressqwest - 1>> cocks for Mistress.'
 						end
 
-						act 'Wipe your face':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+						act 'Wipe your face': gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -608,16 +562,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				if kendratoy = 1:
-					act 'Use the dildo':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra1'
+					act 'Use the dildo': gt 'sexshop', 'kendra1'
 				else
-					act 'Use the strap-on':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
+					act 'Use the strap-on': gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	elseif kendraslave >= 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you browse the store, you see Kendra trying on latex clothes. She smiles when she notices you looking at her.'
-		'"Who do we have here? My favorite bitch. Come and service me. I just bought a new toy and I''m eager to try it out." she laughs as she motions for you to follow her.'
+		'"Who do we have here? My favorite bitch. Come and service me. I just bought a new toy and I''m eager to try it out," she laughs as she motions for you to follow her.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -642,9 +596,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if kendratoy = 1:
-				act 'Use the dildo':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra1'
+				act 'Use the dildo': gt 'sexshop', 'kendra1'
 			else
-				act 'Use the dildo':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
+				act 'Use the dildo': gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif hotcat >= 5:
@@ -655,7 +609,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		'She smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a pretty name. I''m Kendra, but you can call me Mistress Kendra," she says with confidence.'
 		'"Oh..." you reply. She''s one of those people.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_redlight', 'start'
-		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+		act 'Go back to shopping': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 		act 'Talk to her':
 			*clr & cla
 			meet_kendra = 1
@@ -673,7 +627,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile at her. "Sorry, but I don''t belong to anyone."'
 				'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there''s plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an ebony Mistress. Perhaps we''ll meet again and you''ll change your mind?" She gives you directions to her dorm room and you both return to shopping.'
-				act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+				act 'Go back to shopping': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
 			act 'Call her Mistress Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -691,9 +645,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					if kendratoy = 1:
-						act 'She pulls out a dildo':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra1'
+						act 'She pulls out a dildo': gt 'sexshop', 'kendra1'
 					else
-						act 'She pulls out a strap-on':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
+						act 'She pulls out a strap-on': gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -702,7 +656,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/sex/shkend0.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you browse the store, you see a very attractive young black woman trying on latex clothes. She notices you and gives you a quick once over before she goes back to what she was doing. After a few minutes, she moves to another section of the store.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_redlight', 'start'
-		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+		act 'Go back to shopping': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -736,7 +690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra1':
 				'"Now it''s time for your reward," she says as she pulls a strap-on out of her bag.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Yes, Mistress':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
+				act 'Yes, Mistress': gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -768,9 +722,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra2':
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
-				act 'Anal':gt 'sexshop', 'kendraanal'
+				act 'Anal': gt 'sexshop', 'kendraanal'
 			else
-				act 'Vaginal':gt 'sexshop', 'kendravag'
+				act 'Vaginal': gt 'sexshop', 'kendravag'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -794,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendravag':
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		minut -= 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Anal':gt 'sexshop', 'kendraanal'
+		act 'Anal': gt 'sexshop', 'kendraanal'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -924,7 +878,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendrafinish':
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Return to the store':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+	act 'Return to the store': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
@@ -935,7 +889,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/redlight/erotomaniac/shprod.jpg"></center>'
 	'The cashier stands in front of you, holding a miniskirt and offering to help you. "Girl, this is very you. Will you try it on?"'
 
-	act 'Refuse':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+	act 'Refuse': gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 
 	act 'Try it on':
 		*clr & cla