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[changed] formatting and text edits

hornguy6 3 years ago
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      locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

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locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -718,7 +718,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 		end
 	end
 	if pcs_inhib >= 50 or npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
-	act'Suggest you wash each other (0:10)':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash_first'
+		act'Suggest you wash each other (0:10)':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash_first'
 	end
 
 	if brother_shower_times > 2:
@@ -2058,10 +2058,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showerbj.mp4"></center>'
 		'"Yeeeech..."'
 		'Opening your mouth, you drool and let his cum drip down off your tongue before wadding up what''s left and spitting it onto the bottom of the bathtub.'
-		if brotherbjcomment = 1:
-			'"A little warning next time maybe?"'
-			'"Sorry sis. Your mouth just felt so good and your blowjobs are so great and... Sorry... I just couldn''t hold it."'
-			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It''s not like I can be mad at you for saying I''m good at giving head." You give him a quick kiss on the tip of his cock before standing up.'
+		if broshowerfuck = daystart:
+			'"Thanks for the warning Kolka," you say, smiling as you standing up.'
+		elseif brotherbjcomment = 1:
+			'"Sorry sis," he says looking somewhat ashamed. "I just couldn''t hold it any longer. I tried, I really did!"'
+			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It happens sometimes. Just try to warn me a little sooner next time, okay?" He nods promisingly.'
+			if brotherbj > 5:'You suppress a grin when he promises to do better in the future. You''ve given him enough blowjobs to suspect that he doesn''t give any warning because he wants to cum in your mouth. He never seems to have this problem when he asks to give you a facial. <i>Oh well,</i> you mentally shrug to yourself. <i>What''s a girl to do?</i>'
 			'"Now come on, let''s finish up before someone wonders where we are."'
 			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
 				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_end'
@@ -2069,17 +2071,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
 			end
 		elseif brotherbjcomment = 2:
-			'"Sorry sis," he says looking somewhat ashamed. "I just couldn''t hold it any longer. I tried, I really did!"'
-			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It happens sometimes. Just try to warn me a little sooner next time, okay?" He nods promisingly.'
-			if brotherbj > 5:'You suppress a grin when he promises to do better in the future. You''ve given him enough blowjobs to suspect that he doesn''t give any warning because he wants to cum in your mouth. He never seems to have this problem when he asks to give you a facial. <i>Oh well,</i> you mentally shrug to yourself. <i>What''s a girl to do?</i>'
+			'"A little warning next time maybe?"'
+			'"Sorry sis. Your mouth just felt so good and your blowjobs are so great and... Sorry... I just couldn''t hold it."'
+			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It''s not like I can be mad at you for saying I''m good at giving head." You give him a quick kiss on the tip of his cock before standing up.'
 			'"Now come on, let''s finish up before someone wonders where we are."'
 			if broshowerfuck = daystart:
 				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_end'
 			else
 				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
 			end
-		elseif brotherbjcomment = 3:
-			'"Thanks for the warning Kolka," you say, smiling as you standing up.'
 			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck_end'
 		end
 	end