Added missing image call and rewrote some text

locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -271,13 +271,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/dance_studio/fit1.jpg"></center>'
 
 	if pcs_dancero < 15:
-		'Your dancing is terrible and Albina constantly yells at you, calling you a bowlegged cow.'
+		'Your dancing is terrible and Albina constantly yells at you. "Did I make a mistake letting you join <<$pcs_nickname>>?'
 	elseif pcs_dancero < 30:
-		'You sometimes manage to get the moves right, but most of the time you are out of sync or make the wrong move. Albina constantly yells at you and calls you a bowlegged cow.'
+		'You sometimes manage to get the moves right, but most of the time you are out of sync or make the wrong move. Albina constantly yells at you and calls you "a bowlegged cow."'
 	elseif pcs_dancero < 45:
 		'You manage to get into the general rhythm and move well with the other girls, but Albina is still not happy. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you are very sluggish! You need to put more life into it!"'
 	elseif pcs_dancero < 55:
-		'You perform the routine with no mistakes, but Albina still nags at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you are not at a funeral! Raise your head and smile!"'
+		'You perform the routine with no mistakes, but Albina still nags at you. "You''re not at a funeral, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Raise your head and smile!"'
 	else
 
 		AlbinaQW['ShowTriggerCount'] += 1
@@ -291,11 +291,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 			if AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] >= 8:
 				AlbinaQW['AlbFatherQW']  = 1
 				'At the end of the session, Albina beckons you to her. "I''ve been told to tell you that you''re doing good <<$pcs_nickname>> and that the clients are saying that you''re their new favourite girl. You''re handling it all quite well, but it will all be over soon. He won''t get away with it much longer. I promise."'
-				'You raise an eyebrow at her, but she just pats you on the shoulder and walks away before you can ask her who she is talking about.'
+				'You raise an eyebrow at her, but she just pats you on the shoulder and walks away before you can ask her who or what she is talking about.'
 			end
 
 			AlbinaQW['ShowTriggerCount'] = 0
-			albpayrand = rand(1, 5)
+			albpayrand = rand(1,5)
 			'After you finish training, Albina gathers you and the girls round. "We have a small show planned. Each of you will receive <<albpayrand*1000>>. The show will last for a few hours."'
 
 			act 'Do the show':
@@ -317,8 +317,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 				
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/dance.jpg"></center>'
-				'Albina calls for a car. Once the car arrives, you all bundle in. You arrive at a building with a large hall, where people are sitting around a stage.'
-				'You dress in costumes designed by Albina herself, then go on stage to dance to the fiery music. You dance very well and everything goes smoothly. You leave the stage and Albina distributes the money. You take turns using the shower in the small dressing room.'
+				'Albina calls for a car. Once the car arrives, you all bundle in. You arrive at the performance hall and are ushered into a small dressing room, where you all change into outfits designed by Albina herself. You are then grouped up at the edge of a stage.'
+				'Once everyone is ready, you walk out onto the stage and take your positions. You notice a number of older men in the audience who all seem to be checking you and the other girls out. Fiery music then starts blasting through speakers and you start dancing. Your performance goes smoothly and you leave the stage, where Albina distributes the money before you all take turns using the single shower in the dressing room.'
 				if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 
 				if pcs_apprnc >= 52 and (pcs_vag > 0 or stat['vaginal'] > 0):
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 					if AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] = 1:
 						AlbinaQW['StarletsCustomerCount'] = 1
 						AlbinaQW['StarletPay'] = rand(3,6)
-						'You see a flabby, balding Armenian man in an expensive suit approach Albina and start talking to her.'
+						'You see a flabby, balding Armenian man in his 50s wearing an expensive suit approach Albina and start talking to her.'
 					elseif AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] = 2:
 						AlbinaQW['StarletsCustomerCount'] = 2
 						AlbinaQW['StarletPay'] = rand(6,9)
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 					elseif AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] = 3:
 						AlbinaQW['StarletsCustomerCount'] = 2
 						AlbinaQW['StarletPay'] = rand(6,9)
-						'You see two young men approach Albina and start talking to her.'
+						'You see two young men awkwardly approach Albina and start talking to her.'
 					elseif AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] = 4:
 						AlbinaQW['StarletsCustomerCount'] = 1
 						AlbinaQW['StarletPay'] = rand(3,6)
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 					elseif AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] = 6:
 						AlbinaQW['StarletsCustomerCount'] = 1
 						AlbinaQW['StarletPay'] = rand(3,6)
-						'You see a man in a modest suit approach Albina and start talking to her.'						
+						'You see a well groomed man in a modest suit approach Albina and start talking to her.'						
 					end
 
 					if AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] <= 6:
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 
 
 	gs 'stat'
-	'The Armenian, still tightly gripping your arm, drags you into his hotel room. "Time to earn your money whore!" he says as he forces you to your knees in front of him.'
+	'The Armenian, still tightly gripping your arm, drags you into his hotel room where he forces you to strip naked, his hungry eyes inspecting every inch of you. "Time to earn your money whore!" he says as he forces you to your knees in front of him.'
 	act 'Please him':
 		cls
 		guy += 1
@@ -483,15 +483,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 				tipdarand = rand(0, 1)
 
 				if tipdarand = 0:
-					'Suddenly, he thrusts deeply into your mouth and holds you tightly down on his cock.'
-					'You let out a strangled gurgle as spurts of cum hit the back of your throat.'
-
-					act 'Swallow':
+					
+                    act 'Swallow':
 						cls
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cumf60.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'The man pulls out of your mouth and crudly says "Now swallow it like a good little cum slut."'
-						'He squats down and grabs your chin. You do as you''re told and show him your empty mouth. He gives you a pat on the cheek and throws you to the floor.'
-						'You lay there catching your breath as the man goes to the bathroom.'
+						'Suddenly, he thrusts deeply into your mouth and holds you tightly down on his cock.'
+					    'You let out a strangled gurgle as spurts of cum hit the back of your throat and spill out of your mouth.'
+						'He pulls out of your mouth and roughly pulls your head up by your hair, forcing you to look up at him. "Now swallow it like the good little cum whore that you are."'
+						
+						'You do as you''re told and show him your empty mouth. You make out his perverted smile through your tear filled eyes before he suddenly thrusts his cock back into your mouth and starts deepthroating you again, not caring as you choke and gag once more on his dick.'
+						'After a few minutes of this, he is seemingly finished with you and throws you to the floor. You lay there catching your breath as the man goes to the bathroom.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', -1, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -505,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 						cls
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You close your eyes just in time as spurts of warm cum splatter across your face. The man finishes with a loud, satisfied groan.'
-						'You are taken by surprise when he thrusts his cock back into your mouth, but you obidiently suck it.'
+						'You are taken by surprise when he thrusts his cock back into your mouth and you are forced to suck it.'
 						'Your face is a wet, sticky mess of drool, tears and cum. The man makes some crude remarks, apparently aroused by the sight of you, before leaving you there.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
@@ -518,17 +519,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 1:
 			'You spend a few minutes sucking his dick when he suddenly pulls out, grabs you by the hair and roughly throws you face down onto the bed.'
-
+            'You look back and see him undressing, his hairy, out of shape body making you wish you hadn''t agreed to this.' 
 			act 'Painal':
 				cls
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'The man climbs in behind you. He spreads your ass and you feel him spit on your anus before pressing his cock against it.'
-                'You let out a pained squeal and thrash your legs as he pushes his entire length deep into your unprepared ass. As he roughly and painfully grinds in and out of your hole, he reaches forward and starts pulling on your mouth with his fat fingers. He leans in close to your ear.'
-                '"Yeah, keep squirming like that bitch! It just makes you tighter!" You moan in distress at the pain he is inflicting on you, but he just laughs and fucks you even harder.'
+                'You let out a pained squeal and thrash your legs as he pushes his entire length deep into your unprepared ass. As he roughly and painfully grinds in and out of your hole, he reaches forward and starts pulling on your mouth with his fingers. He leans in close to your ear.'
+                '"Yeah, keep squirming like that bitch! It just makes you tighter!" You whimper in distress at the pain he is inflicting on you, but he just laughs and fucks you even harder.'
                 *nl				
-				'After what feels like an eternity, you finally feel his cock twitching and a warmth floods your ass. He pulls out and his load trickles from your anus, which throbs in immense pain.'
+				'After what feels like an eternity, you feel his cock twitching inside you and a warmth floods your ass. He pulls out and his load trickles from your ravaged anus, which throbs in immense pain.'
 				'"Only that cute little head dancer has ever taken it in the ass better than you, whore. All the other bitches just cry." You let out a loud yelp as he finishes with a stinging smack on your ass that echoes into the room.'
-				'To your despair and disgust, he then forces you into his now sweaty embrace, his flabby arm wrapped around your neck as he fondles your breast while bragging on his phone to his friend about "some of the best anal" he''s ever had. This post sex torture finally ends 10 minutes later.'
+				'To your despair and disgust, he then forces you to lie on your side next to him with your ass hanging out, his sweaty, flabby arm wrapped around your back as he squeezes and slaps your ass while bragging on his phone to his friend about "some of the best anal" he''s ever had. This post sex torture finally ends 10 minutes later.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'mouth', 'pull' 
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'asshole', 'stretch'
@@ -540,18 +541,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 				act 'Call a taxi': gt 'AlbStars', 'cab_home'
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 2:
-			'You spend a few minutes sucking his dick when he suddenly pulls out, grabs you by the hair and roughly throws you onto the bed.'
-			
+			'You spend a few minutes sucking his dick when he suddenly pulls out, grabs you by the hair and roughly throws you face down onto the bed.'
+			'You look back and see him undressing, his hairy, out of shape body making you wish you hadn''t agreed to this.' 
 			act 'Get your pussy fucked':
 				cls
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/miss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'The man moves in, roughly flips you on your back and spreads your legs. "What a tight and inviting looking pussy you have." You feel the tip of his cock spread your labia apart as he pushes into you.'
-				'He grabs your throat and pins you to the bed as he starts to very roughly pound your pussy. He occasionally uses his other hand to tightly squeeze and twist your nipple, making you squeal. He seems to enjoy treating you this roughly.'
-                'You panic when he stops thrusting and tightens his grip around your neck. You thrash your arms and legs in distress, but he just smiles and doesn''t loosen his grip until you are close to blacking out. He then resumes fucking you, faster and seemingly closer to climax.'  
+				'The man moves in, roughly flips you on your back and spreads your legs. "This pussy looks like it will be worth every ruble!" You feel the tip of his cock spread your labia apart as he pushes into you.'
+				'He grabs your throat and pins you to the bed as he starts to very roughly pound your pussy. He occasionally uses his other hand to very tightly squeeze and twist your nipple, making you squeal. He seems to enjoy treating you this roughly.'
+                'You panic when he stops thrusting and tightens his grip around your neck. You thrash your arms and legs in distress, but he just smiles and doesn''t loosen his grip until you are on the verge of blacking out. He then resumes fucking you, faster and seemingly closer to climax.'  
 				*nl
 				'You endure the remainder of the rough sex for what feels like an eternity, but he eventually lets go of you and pulls out. He starts jerking his cock and you feel his cum splattering onto your labia.'
-                'He is relieved to have pulled out. "Last time I was here, I came inside that cute little head dancer and her fath... uh, I mean a <i>certain someone</i> almost killed me! You sluts have a ''no pussy creampie'' policy it seems. A shame really, your little pussy was just asking for me to cum inside it." he crudly remarks before climbing off of you.'
-				'To your despair and disgust, he then forces you into his now sweaty embrace, his flabby arm wrapped around your neck as he fondles your breast while bragging on his phone to his friend about "the fine little pussy" he just fucked. This post sex torture finally ends 10 minutes later.'				
+                'He is annoyed at not being able to finish inside you. "A waste of a good fucking pussy if you can''t cum inside it I say, especially when it''s hot little numbers like you." he crudly remarks before climbing off of you. "That cute little head dancer is just begging for me to fill her smooth, tight as a vice fuck hole again, but he almost killed me for doing it once already." he adds.'
+				'To your despair and disgust, he then forces you into his now sweaty embrace, his flabby arm wrapped around your neck as he fondles and squeezes your breast while bragging on his phone to his friend about "the fine little pussy" he just fucked. This post sex torture finally ends 10 minutes later.'				
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'choke'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'precum', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
@@ -577,17 +578,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust1'], 'a'
 
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Laughing, the two Armenians push you into their hotel room and you fall to the floor. "It''s time to show us what you''ve got little lamb!" one says.' 
-	'The other man replies "I want see what those <<$lip1>> lips of yours can do. They look like they were made to suck cock.'
+	'Laughing, the two Armenians shove you into their hotel room and you fall to the floor. "Get up, it''s time to show us what you''ve got little lamb!" one says.' 
+	'"I want see what those <<$lip1>> lips of yours can do. They look like they were made to suck cock! The other man replies.'
 	act 'Please them':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bjd.jpg"></center>'
-		'The two men unbuckle their pants and pull their cocks out before one of them grabs you by the hair and pulls you to your knees.' 
-		'He maintains a tight grip on your hair as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they are both rock hard. You look up at the two men, seeking approval.'
-		'"Very good little lamb. Now take my cock. Take it all!" one of the men says.'
-		'The man grabs your head and forces his entire length into your mouth, causing you to choke. The two men laugh at you.'
+		'The two men watch with hungry perversion as you stand and reluctantly undress in front of them. Once you''re naked, they unbuckle their pants and pull their cocks out before one of them grabs you and forces you to your knees.' 
+		'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they are both rock hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
+		'"Very good little lamb. Now take my cock. Take it all!" one of the men barks and forces his entire length into your mouth, causing you to choke. The two men laugh and force you to keep sucking and jerking them off.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'dick', 'group', 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 6, 'dick', 'group', 'sub', 'rough', 'humiliation'
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'throat', 'choke'
@@ -599,8 +599,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 		if tipdarand = 0:
 			'After sucking their cocks for a good ten minutes, one of them says: "It''s time for you to get roasted, little lamb."'
 			'You are grabbed by the hair and roughly pulled to your feet before you are thrown onto the bed on all fours.'
-			'The two men move into position at both ends. "You might be the sweetest thing I''ve ever seen. Even sweeter than that last whore your friend gave us!" one of the men laughs.'
-			'You start thinking of that girl and how she handled these men when a slap to the face brings you back and you notice the cock in front of you. "Get back to work whore!" he shouts.'
+			'The two men undress and move into position at both ends. "You might be the sweetest thing I''ve ever seen. Even sweeter than that last whore your friend gave us!" one of the men laughs.'
+			'You start thinking of that girl and how she handled these men when a sharp slap to the face brings you back and you notice the cock hanging in front of you. "Get back to work whore!" he shouts.'
 			act 'Get spitroasted':
 				cls
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/group/threesomepm8.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 1:
 			'After sucking their cocks for a few minutes, you are grabbed by the hair and roughly thrown onto the bed.'
-			'The men climb in beside you. One kneels beside you, his cock at your face while the other lies behind you and lifts your leg.'
+			'The men undress and climb in beside you. One kneels beside you, his cock at your face while the other lies behind you and lifts your leg.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dick', 'group', 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -725,23 +725,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore3':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'Shyly, the young men lead you into their hotel room.'
-	'You think it''s sweet that they look a little nervous. Deciding to put their minds at ease, you take action.'
+	'You think they might be virgins who don''t know what to do, so you take action.'
 	act 'Get their pants off':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bjd.jpg"></center>'
 		'Kneeling in front of them, you unzip their pants and get their cocks out. You start licking their shafts and gently sucking their heads and they are both soon hard. You hold in a giggle when you see that, even when hard, they''re both a little on the smaller side.'
-		'As you continue sucking their dicks, their confidence has grown and they start pulling you back and forth by your hair to get you to suck them while making crude remarks about you. You ignore their attempts at compensating for their lack of endowment, despite their roughness.'
+		'As you continue sucking their dicks, their confidence grows and they start pulling you back and forth by your hair to get you to suck them while making crude remarks about you. You ignore their attempts at compensating for their lack of endowment, despite their roughness.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dick', 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dick1', 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		tipdarand = rand(0, 1)
 
 		if tipdarand = 0:
-			'No longer nervous, the guys pick you up and move you to the bed, getting you on all fours.'
+			'No longer nervous, the guys pick you up, strip you naked and move you to the bed, getting you on all fours.'
 			'"That is one tight little ass you have there!" one of them says before giving your ass a good smack.'
 			'You let out a little yelp and his finger slowly begins to massage his spit around your anus before he slides his digit inside you.'
-			'The other guy moves in front of you and taps his cock against your cheek, urging you to get back to work.'
+			'The other guy pulls his pants off and moves in front of you. He taps his cock against your cheek, urging you to get back to work.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick1', 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', -1, 'dick', 'sub', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -791,7 +791,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore3':
 				end
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 1:
-			'The guys lift you to your feet before throwing you on your back on the bed. One of them spreads your legs and settles between them, while the other dangles his cock near your face.'
+			'The guys lift you to your feet and strip you naked before throwing you on your back on the bed. They pull their pants off and one of them spreads your legs and settles between them, while the other dangles his cock near your face.'
 			act 'Part your lips':
 				cls
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/threesome1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore4':
 		cls
 		guy += 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackbj.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The man sits on a sofa and you kneel between his legs and unzip his pants. "Oh.My.God!" you exclaim as you pull his massive cock out. You stare in bewilderment and compare the length and thickness of his shaft to your forearm.'
+		'The man sits on a sofa and asks you to give him a striptease. You comply and after you''ve stripped nude, you kneel between his legs and unzip his pants. "Oh.My.God!" you exclaim as you pull his massive cock out. You stare in bewilderment and compare the length and thickness of his shaft to your forearm.'
 		'"You like what you see baby? Go on." he chuckles.'
 		'Wide eyed, you wrap your hands around his shaft and slowly jerk it before taking it into your mouth. You suck and jerk the monster cock as the thought of it being inside you enters your mind.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
@@ -930,7 +930,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore4':
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 1:
 			'After you''ve spent a few minutes sucking him, he pulls out of your mouth and smiles at you. "Girl I''m glad you got me nice and lubed-up. Where this is going, you''ll be glad too." He pulls you up beside him and gives your ass a good squeeze.'
-			'You bite your lip as equal parts of fear and excitement fill your thoughts. The guy gives your ass a playful slap and then pulls you on top of him.'
+			'You bite your lip as equal parts of fear and excitement fill your thoughts. The guy gives your ass a playful slap before pulling his pants down to his knees and having you straddle him.'
 
 			act 'Take it in the ass':
 				cls
@@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore4':
 				act 'Call a taxi': gt 'AlbStars', 'cab_home'
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 2:
-			'After you''ve spent a few minutes sucking him, he pulls his cock out of your mouth and easily lifts you up. He gets you on all fours on the sofa.'
+			'After you''ve spent a few minutes sucking him, he pulls his cock out of your mouth and easily lifts you up. He gets you on all fours on the sofa before undressing himself.'
             '"I want some of this little white pussy." You bite your lip, your pussy already wet in anticipation, as he grinds his tip between your labia.'
 			
 			act 'Get taken from behind':
@@ -1006,7 +1006,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackbjd.jpg"></center>'
-		'The men undress as you kneel in front of them. They soon present their cocks to you. "Oh wow" you exclaim.'
+		'You and the men undress before you kneel in front of them and they present their cocks to you. "Oh wow!" you exclaim.'
 		'"Go on, you know you want to." one of the guys says to you.'
 		'You spend the next ten minutes licking, jerking and sucking the two massive cocks.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick', 'sub', 'group'
@@ -1059,6 +1059,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
                     '"Get ready for it girl!"'
 					act 'Open your mouth':
 						cls
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackfacial.jpg"></center>'
 						'You close your eyes and stick your tongue out and soon a stream of warm cum is landing on your face and splashing your tongue, drenching you.'
 						'Once he is finally finished, you take his cock back into your mouth and suck him clean. You then wipe the cum from your eyes and look at them.'
 						'"Damn girl, I guess you are a hot mess!" one of the men laughs.'
@@ -1081,7 +1082,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackthreesome1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You relax your lips and the huge girth slides all the way into your throat as the other monster cock pushes into your pussy.'
+				'You relax your lips and the huge girth slides all the way into your throat as the other monster cock pushes into your pussy, stretching and filling you.'
 				'You gag and moan as the guys start to fuck you. They also each grab hold of your breasts, kneading them and pinching your nipples.'
 				gs 'pain', 1, 'nipples', 'pinch'
 				gs 'pain', 1, 'breasts', 'ache'
@@ -1143,7 +1144,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore6':
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
 	gs 'stat'
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
-	'The man leads you by the hand into the hotel room. You are led over to the bed, where he undresses you and lays you on your back.'
+	'The man leads you by the hand into the hotel room. You are led over to the bed, where he undresses you and lays you on your back. You notice the ring on his finger, but since he hasn''t paid for you ask questions, you ignore it.'
 	
 	act 'Get eaten out':
 		cls
@@ -1243,8 +1244,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Starletsreact':
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	'As you approach the Starlets, Albina motions you aside. "What the hell <<$pcs_nickname>>!? Who knocked you up? You can''t dance if you''re pregnant! I''m sorry, but I''m going to have to cut you loose." she says while placing a hand on your shoulder.' 
-	'You nod in understanding and say your goodbyes and Albina walks back to the group, directing them to start from the beginning.'
+	'As you approach the group, Albina motions you aside. "What the hell <<$pcs_nickname>>!? Who knocked you up?" Her eyes then grow wide. "It wasn''t one of <i>them</i> was it? Regardless, you can''t dance if you''re pregnant! I''m sorry, but I''m going to have to cut you loose." she says while placing a hand on your shoulder.' 
+	'You nod in understanding and say your goodbyes before Albina walks back to the group, directing them to start from the beginning.'
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -1253,7 +1254,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'StarletsEnd':
 	cla
-	'As you approach the Starlets, you see the disapproving looks on the girls faces as you enter the locker room. Albina walks over to you and, looking severly disappointed, shakes her head. "Why <<$pcs_nickname>>? You used to be cool, but now you''ve gone and done this to yourself. I''m sorry, but I just can''t have someone like you being associated with us anymore." She motions to the door and you walk out in shame, tears welling up in your eyes.'
+	'You enter the locker room and immediately see the disapproving looks on the girls faces. Albina walks over to you and, looking severly disappointed, shakes her head. "Why <<$pcs_nickname>>? You used to be cool, but now you''ve gone and done this to yourself. I''m sorry, but I just can''t have someone like you being associated with us anymore." She motions to the door and you walk out in shame, tears welling up in your eyes.'
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'