Bläddra i källkod

Re-working of Volleyball trainer and related locations by EKay.

KevinSmarts 8 år sedan
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+ 1 - 1
glife-notepad++

@@ -87,6 +87,7 @@
             <File name="locations\BnameGen" />
             <File name="locations\bobka" />
             <File name="locations\body" />
+            <File name="locations\boilerroom" />
             <File name="locations\bordel" />
             <File name="locations\bordelv" />
             <File name="locations\bouling" />
@@ -679,7 +680,6 @@
             <File name="locations\Voltrener" />
             <File name="locations\Voltrenersex" />
             <File name="locations\VoltrenerSexShower" />
-            <File name="locations\Voltrener_din" />
             <File name="locations\webcam_site" />
             <File name="locations\WorkHosp" />
             <File name="locations\worksalon" />

+ 1 - 1
glife.qproj

@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@
       <Location name="VolleyTrenerSpeak"/>
       <Location name="Voltrenersex"/>
       <Location name="chessplay"/>
-      <Location name="Voltrener_din"/>
+      <Location name="boilerroom"/>
       <Location name="krupo"/>
       <Location name="kruchess"/>
       <Location name="VoltrenerSexShower"/>

+ 4 - 4
locations/DanceWhore1

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'The man took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate in front of your face it.'
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facial.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/anal.jpg"></center>'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $analsex
-			dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+			act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 		end
 	elseif tipdarand = 2:
 		'The man took a member of your mouth and put you on the back.'
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart2
 			dynamic $sexcum
-			dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+			act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 4 - 4
locations/DanceWhore2

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'Man fuck you in the mouth, took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate him in front of your face.'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facial.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'Man fuck you in the mouth, took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate him in front of your face.'
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facial.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 4 - 4
locations/DanceWhore3

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'The man took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate in front of your face it.'
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facial.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/anal.jpg"></center>'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $analsex
-			dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+			act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 		end
 	elseif tipdarand = 2:
 		'The man took a member of your mouth and put you on the back.'
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart2
 			dynamic $sexcum
-			dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+			act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 4 - 4
locations/DanceWhore4

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'Man fuck you in the mouth, took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate him in front of your face.'
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facial.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'Man fuck you in the mouth, took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate him in front of your face.'
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facial.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/DanceWhore5

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ act 'Squat':
 					'You kneel and readily opened his mouth. Caucasians started you finish filling in the open mouth of his sperm. When the flow of sperm stopped and turned your mouth is filled to the brim with sperm, you swallow it.'
 				end
 
-				dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+				act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 			end
 		end
 	end

+ 4 - 4
locations/DanceWhore6

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'The man took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate in front of your face it.'
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facialn.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/analn.jpg"></center>'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $analsex
-			dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+			act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 		end
 	elseif tipdarand = 2:
 		'The man took a member of your mouth and put you on the back.'
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart2
 			dynamic $sexcum
-			dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+			act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 4 - 4
locations/DanceWhore7

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'Man fuck you in the mouth, took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate him in front of your face.'
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facialn.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/swallow.jpg"></center>'
 					'You began frantically swallow cum until a member has not finished pour the seed into your mouth.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			elseif tipdarand = 1:
 				'Man fuck you in the mouth, took a member of your mouth and began to masturbate him in front of your face.'
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/dance/facialn.jpg"></center>'
 					'You closed your eyes and felt like you hit in the face and a warm jet of sperm flowed down. Then the next jet hit you in the face. Then another and another. Finally a member has ceased to finish.'
-					dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+					act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/DanceWhore8

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ act 'Squat':
 					'You kneel and readily opened his mouth. Negros you started to cum into her open mouth filling it with sperm. When the flow of sperm stopped and turned your mouth is filled to the brim with sperm, you swallow it.'
 				end
 
-				dynamic $din_go_to_home_dance
+				act 'Drive back': gt 'gdksport', 'cab_home'
 			end
 		end
 	end

+ 19 - 18
locations/KatjaHomeTalk

@@ -120,24 +120,6 @@ else
 	!!not sweaty
 	if hour < 20:
 		if npcSex[14] = 1 and dom>=KatjaDom:
-			act 'Offer to take a walk in the Park':
-				dom-=1
-				minut += 15
-				KatjaHorny += 5
-				$ev_name = 'Katja'
-				$ev_name_a = 'Katja'
-				$ev_name_om = 'Katja'
-				dick = 0
-				place = 1
-				Frend_num = 14
-				p_lust = KatjaLust
-				p_slut = KatjaSlut
-				p_dom = KatjaDom
-				p_horny = KatjaHorny
-				p_alko = 0
-				gt'placer'
-			end
-		end
 		act 'Chat with Katja':
 			cls
 			KatjaHorny += 1
@@ -198,6 +180,25 @@ else
 			act 'further':gt $curloc
 		end
 
+		act 'Offer to take a walk in the Park':
+				dom-=1
+				minut += 15
+				KatjaHorny += 5
+				$ev_name = 'Katja'
+				$ev_name_a = 'Katja'
+				$ev_name_om = 'Katja'
+				dick = 0
+				place = 1
+				Frend_num = 14
+				p_lust = KatjaLust
+				p_slut = KatjaSlut
+				p_dom = KatjaDom
+				p_horny = KatjaHorny
+				p_alko = 0
+				gt'placer'
+			end
+		end
+
 		if KatjaLust > 10:
 			katkisrand = rand(0, 5)
 

+ 62 - 48
locations/LariskaHome

@@ -1,4 +1,10 @@
 # LariskaHome
+!{Change log
+March 25,2016
+Cleaned up the dialog
+added a few lines to the BDSM room to improve immersion
+}
+
 cls
 CLOSE ALL
 gs'stat'
@@ -6,10 +12,10 @@ gs'stat'
 if (hour >= 16 and hour < 19 and week < 6) or (hour >= 9 and hour < 19 and (week >= 6 or kanikuli > 0)):
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Lariska/Home/home_1.jpg"></center>'
 	if beInLariskaHome = 0:
-		'Entering the apartment, you see, What did she do in the Japanese style.'
-		'- You have a nice apartment - you say.'
-		'- Yes, Mom earns well, true home on the weekends there. - Says Larissa sad voice.'
-		'You go into the room to Lariska'
+		'Entering the apartment, you see that it is decorated in a Japanese style.'
+		'"You have a nice apartment, Lariska." you said while looking around with interest.'
+		'"Thank you, Mom makes a good living, although she is only home on weekends usually." Lariska said with a sad voice.'
+		'You go into Lariska''s room.'
 		beInLariskaHome = 1
 	else
 		lariskaRand = rand(1,10)
@@ -18,35 +24,35 @@ if (hour >= 16 and hour < 19 and week < 6) or (hour >= 9 and hour < 19 and (week
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Lariska/LariskaMother.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have reached the door to the Lariska and you open a smart brunette. You watch helplessly into the cut on her chest and you pulled an involuntary sigh.'
-			'- Good afternoon. You Larisa? - I ask you for a woman.'
-			'- Yes, I thereto.  I <<$name>>. - Barely up from the cut you say.'
-			'- A, <<$name>>, Larisochka many of you said. I`m Anna I. - Mama Larisa. My bunny at all lately so joyous. I am glad that she had such a friend! She has long had to rouse. Well, let`s go to her room, I will not bother you.'
+			'You knock on the dorr of Lariska''s apartment and a smart looking brunette opens the door. You looked helplessly into her impressive cleavage and let out an involuntary sigh.'
+			'"Hello, are you looking for Lariska?" the woman asked you with a smile.'
+			'"Yes, I''m <<$name>>." you reply tearing your eyes away from her nearly exposed breasts.'
+			'"Ah, <<$name>>, Larisochka has told me all about you. I''m Anna, Lariska''s mother. My bunny has been so joyous lately. I am glad that she has such a good friend! She needed someone to get her back on her feet. Well, let''s go to her room, I will not bother you.'
 			lariskaMotherKnown = 1
 		end
-		'You went to the room Lariska.'
+		'You went to Lariska''s room.'
 	end
 	minut += 5
-	act 'Further':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+	act 'Continue':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
 else
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Lariska/LariskaMother.jpg"></center>'
 	if lariskaMotherKnown = 0:
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
-		if hour >= 9:$text_home = 'Only, <<$name>>, Larissa is not at home.'
-		if hour < 9:$text_home = '<<$name>>. Night Street, come no earlier than nine.'
-		'You have reached the door to the Lariska and you open a smart brunette. You watch helplessly into the cut on her chest and you pulled an involuntary sigh.'
-		'- Good afternoon. You Larisa? - I ask you for a woman.'
-		'- Yes, I thereto.  I <<$name>>. - Barely up from the cut you say.'
-		'- A, <<$name>>, Larisochka many of you said. I`m Anna I. - Mama Larisa. My bunny at all lately so joyous. I am glad that she had such a friend! She has long had to rouse. <<$text_home>>'
+		if hour >= 9:$text_home = 'I''m sorry, <<$name>>, Lariska is not at home.'
+		if hour < 9:$text_home = '<<$name>>. I''m sorry but Lariska is still in bed. She doesn''t get up before nine.'
+		'You knock on the dorr of Lariska''s apartment and a smart looking brunette opens the door. You looked helplessly into her impressive cleavage and let out an involuntary sigh.'
+		'"Hello, are you looking for Lariska?" the woman asked you with a smile.'
+		'"Yes, I''m <<$name>>." you reply tearing your eyes away from her nearly exposed breasts.'
+		'"Ah, <<$name>>, Larisochka has told me all about you. I''m Anna, Lariska''s mother. My bunny has been so joyous lately. I am glad that she has such a good friend! She needed someone to get her back on her feet. <<$text_home>>'
 		lariskaMotherKnown = 1
-		act 'Going home':gt'gorodok'
+		act 'Go back to town':gt'gorodok'
 		exit
 	end
-	if hour >= 9:'The door opened to you mom Larissa "Hello, <<$name>>. And no home Larissa."'
-	if hour < 9:'The door opened to you mom Larissa "<<$name>>. Night Street, come no earlier than nine."'
+	if hour >= 9:'Lariska''s mother opened the door. "Hello, <<$name>>. I''m sorry, but Lariska isn''t home."'
+	if hour < 9:'Lariska''s mother opened the door. "Good morning , <<$name>>. I''m sorry but Lariska is still in bed. She doesn''t get up before nine."'
 
-	act 'Going home':gt'gorodok'
+	act 'Return to town':gt'gorodok'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
@@ -55,17 +61,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Lariska/Home/home_1.jpg"></center>'
 	if frost > 0: frost = 0
 	if lernHome ! 0:
-		act 'Learning lessons':
+		act 'Do homework':
 			cla
 			lernHome = 0
 			minut += 30
 			gs'stat'
 			if Suspeh >= 90:
-				'You do together simultaneously, Lariska explaining difficult passages'
+				'You did your homework together and Lariska explained the hard parts to you.'
 			else
-				'You do together simultaneously, examining the difficult passages'
+				'You did your homework together and figured out the hard parts together.'
 			end
-			act 'Breather':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+			act 'Take a break': minut +=10 & gt 'LariskaHome','in'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Chat':
@@ -73,42 +79,49 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 		minut += 10
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/13.jpg"></center>'
-		'Have you talked with any nonsense about Lariska.'
+		'You talked with Lariska about whatever came to mind.'
 		
-		act 'Further':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
 	end
-	if hour = 19:
+	if hour = 19 and hour < 20 and minut <= 40:
 		cla
-		'Larissa looked at his watch and said,, it`s time to go to the section'
+		'Larissa looked at her watch and said, "It''s time to go to the sports club.'
 		act 'Go with Lariska':lariskaTrain += 1 & minut += 20 & gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt'gorodok'
 		exit
 	end
-	if water >= 18:
-		act 'Depart in a toilet':
+	if water <= 18:
+		act 'Go to get a drink':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
+			water = 20
 			gs'stat'
 
-			if week < 6:
-				'You see, the room next to the toilet is closed, curiosity takes over and you try to open it, but without result, You need a key.'
-				act 'Return':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+			if week < 6 and doorpeek = 0:
+				doorlocked = 1
+				'On your way back from the kitchen, you noticed that the room next to the toilet was closed, curiosity took over and you tried to open it but it is locked.'
+				act 'Return to Lariska''s room':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+			elseif < 6 and doorpeek ! 0:
+				'On your way back from the kitchen, you noticed that the room with the BDSM stuff was closed, you tried to open it but it is locked again.'
 			elseif week >= 6:
 				lariskaRand = rand(1,100)
+				doorpeek = 1
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Lariska/Home/home_2.jpg"></center>'
 				if lariskaRand <= 10 and lariskaBDSM < 10:
-					'You are opening the door and your room full view appears BDSM accessories and toys from sex-shop. In the center of the room stands a mother Lariska - Anna Igorevna in a suit of leather and what- It is doing something with a rope.'
+					'You opened the door and you saw that the room was full of what appeared to be BDSM accessories and toys. In the center of the room stood Lariska''s mother, Anna Igorevna, in a suit of leather. she was doing something with a rope. You quietly closed the door before she noticed you, you hoped.'
 					lariskaBDSM += 1
 				elseif lariskaRand >= 90 and lariskaBDSM < 10:
-					'You are opening the door and your room full view appears BDSM accessories and toys from sex-shop. In the center of the room stands a mother Lariska - Anna Igorevna in a suit of leather and what- It is doing something with a rope. She obviously you noticed and smiled. You quickly shut the door.'
+					'You opened the door and you saw that the room was full of what appeared to be BDSM accessories and toys. In the center of the room stood Lariska''s mother, Anna Igorevna, in a suit of leather. she was doing something with a rope. She obviously noticed you and smiled. You quickly shut the door.'
 					lariskaBDSM += 1
 				elseif lariskaRand <= 10 and lariskaBDSM >= 10:
-					'You are opening the door and your room full view appears BDSM accessories and toys from sex-shop. In the center of the room stands a mother Lariska - Anna Igorevna in a suit of leather and what- It is doing something with a rope. She invites you to have fun.'
+					'You opened the door and you saw that the room was full of what appeared to be BDSM accessories and toys. In the center of the room stood Lariska''s mother, Anna Igorevna, in a suit of leather. she was doing something with a rope. She invites you to have fun.'
 					lariskaBDSM += 1
+				elseif doorlocked = 1:
+					'On your way back from the kitchen, you noticed that the room next to the toilet was closed, curiosity took over and you tried to open it. You opened the door and you saw a room full of what appears to be BDSM accessories and toys.' 	
 				else
-					'You are opening the door and your room full view appears BDSM accessories and toys from sex-shop.'
+					'You opened the door and you saw a room full of what appears to be BDSM accessories and toys.'
 				end
-				act 'Return':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+				act 'Return to Lariska''s room':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -124,24 +137,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/13.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have decided to talk to the pros about becoming Lariska.'
-			'- Laris, You did very well to play volleyball, Why do you Mikheil Nikolayevich has a team do not ask?'
-			'- Well, I am afraid a little bit. He did, and can refuse.'
+			'You decided to talk to Lariska about joining the professional volleyball team.'
+			'"Lariska, you are an excellent volleyball player. Coach Mikheil Nikolayevich has a professional team, why don''t you ask to jpin it?" you asked your friend.'
+			'"Well, I guess I''m afraid he''ll tell me I''m not good enough. I''ve seen him tell other good players they aren''t good enough to play for him.'
 			if volleyboll < 100:
-				act 'Stop talking':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
-				act 'Say, that go along with it, to support it.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
+				act 'Drop the subject':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+				act 'Tell you that you''ll go with her for support.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
 			elseif volleyboll >= 100 and volleysostav = 0:
-				act 'Stop talking':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
-				act 'Say, that go along with it, to support it.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 2 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
-				act 'Say, that go along with it, together to be asked to the team.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 3 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
+				act 'Drop the subject':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+				act 'Tell you that you''ll go with her for support.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 2 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
+				act 'Tell her that you should both go together and ask to be on the team.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 3 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
 			elseif volleyboll >= 100 and volleysostav > 0:
-				act 'Stop talking':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
-				act 'Say, that go along with it, to support it.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 4 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
+				act 'Drop the subject':gt 'LariskaHome','in'
+				act 'Tell you that you''ll go with her and since you''re already on the team, you can help convince the coach.':lariskaTrenerTalk = 4 & minut += 15 & gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
 	act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt'gorodok'
 end
+
 --- LariskaHome ---------------------------------
 

+ 5 - 1
locations/SgrupDisco

@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 # SgrupDisco
+!{ Change log
+March 25, 2016
+Fixed coach''s name
+}
 gs 'stat'
 $textgrup = ''
 $textgrup2 = ''
@@ -18,7 +22,7 @@ if i < 26:jump 'markgruploop'
 ''
 'In one corner stand <<$textgrup2>>'
 
-if hour >= 21 and hour < 23 and week=5: 'At the entrance stands  <a href="exec:GT ''VolleyTrenerSpeak''">Michael N.</a>'
+if hour >= 21 and hour < 23 and week=5: 'At the entrance stands <a href="exec:GT ''VolleyTrenerSpeak''">Coach Mikhail Nikolayevich</a>'
 
 act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 

+ 8 - 4
locations/VolleyTrenCentr

@@ -1,22 +1,27 @@
 # VolleyTrenCentr
+!{Change log
+March 25, 2016
+Added missing centr variable
+}
 minut += 15
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak18.jpg"></center>'
-if ShowerIvan = 4:
+if ShowerIvan = 4 and centr = 1: centr = 2
 	'You have come to the coach talking with a strange man.'
-	act 'Hello':
+	act 'Say hello to Coach':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak11.jpg"></center>'
 		'After greeting both, after that, you may be stuck in an awkward silence, not knowing, what to say. Michael looked at you with amazement, I asked: "<<$name>>, what are you doing here?". You answered about study and improving your physical fitness. The coach looked approvingly at you. And the stranger, smile, said: "I Guang, a friend of your coach, as I understand it, you don''t look at me so surprised, I''m Chinese long you live, we bear the competition met, here and meet from time to time". While the Chinese seemed, the coach was concerned about his wife, and then said, that is late and leaves you in the care of Guanggu.'
 		act 'Ask about the coach':
 			cla & *clr
+			
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak12.jpg"></center>'
 			'As soon as Michael left you fell asleep other trainer questions, about his life, about your girlfriend, about competitions and, of course, about the European championship. Dumbfounded Plaza a few minutes could not, insert your monologue word. Finally having flung themselves into the moment, when you typed the air, for the following questions, he said: "If you don''t know, so, Misha didn''t tell, and why would I tell you once against my friend?",- you are lost, what this cunning Chinese need, if he''s going to harass you, then you decided to leave. But Guang said dreamily: "Now, if you had rice wine. I would have answered some of your questions", - you puzzled stare at Chinese, you will not sell ordinary, now what-it asks rice: "Okay, bring a bottle of wine, where did you get rice wine".'
 			ShowerIvan = 5
 			act 'Move away':gt 'fit', 'start'
 		end
 	end
-elseif ShowerIvan = 5:
+elseif ShowerIvan = 5 and centr = 2:
 	'Seeing Chinese you rushed to his side.'
 	act 'Hello':
 		cla & *clr
@@ -57,6 +62,5 @@ elseif ShowerIvan = 5:
 	end
 end
 
-
 --- VolleyTrenCentr ---------------------------------
 

+ 5 - 2
locations/VolleyTrenerSpeak

@@ -1,8 +1,11 @@
 # VolleyTrenerSpeak
+!{ Change log
+March 25, 2016
+fixed goto reference
+}
 minut += 15
 CLOSE ALL
 gs 'stat'
-gs 'Voltrener_din'
 
 !At disco
 if volleysostav > 0:
@@ -28,7 +31,7 @@ if volleysostav > 0:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/gorodok.jpg"></center>'
 			'You walk through town, as you get near your apartment, the coach stops and looks at you.'
-			dynamic $din_trener_speak
+			gt 'Voltrener', 'trener_speak'
 		end
 	end
 else

+ 55 - 35
locations/Voltrener

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/Tren/VolleyTrener6.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the coach''s office in which there are cups, balls, sports equipment, a massage table, and a desk where the coach sometimes sits and does paperwork. Coach Mikhail Vlasov does not only teach amateur volleyball but he also coaches a professional volleyball team.'
+	'You enter the coach''s office in which there are cups, balls, sports equipment, a massage table, and a desk where the coach sometimes sits and does paperwork. Coach Mikhail Vlasov does not only teach amature volleyball but he also coaches a professional volleyball team.'
 
 	if trenerepa <= 0:
 		'The coach hates you.'
@@ -190,6 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 	else
 		if trenerSex = 0:
+			trenerlust += 1
 			'Coach looks at you, "<<$surname>>. Here''s your stats, now go out there and work harder."'
 			'"Your volleyball skill is <<volleyboll>>, the team has played <<volsesongame>> games: Won - <<volsesonwin>>, lost - <<volsesonloss>>."'
 		else
@@ -218,6 +219,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 			'Win a <<r>> victories, and stop losing, so we need to get it together and to work alot harder.'
 		end
 		if rand(0,3) = 0:
+			trenerlust +=1
 			act 'Try to talk':gt 'Voltrener', 'trener_speak'
 		end
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
@@ -240,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gorslut':
 		gt 'Voltrenersex', 'bj'
 	end
 
-	act 'Put your hand on coach''s knee':
+	act 'Put your hand on coaches knee':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You lean forward slightly and put your palm on his knee, coach grins and you whisper, "I understand, you need a little demonstration of my other skills?" Coach leans back in his chair, "You''re a smart girl, <<$name>>, carry on."'
@@ -251,35 +253,37 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 	gs 'stat'
 	cla
+	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/Tren/VolleyTrener6.jpg"></center>'
 	if trenerepa > 40 and VoltrenerVoyeur = 2:
-		'"Michael, don''t you like me? You like to spy on me in the shower, and cum on me, but do you like me?" You look at coach adoringly, with big enthusiastic eyes.'
+		'"Coach, don''t you like me? You like to spy on me in the shower, and cum on me, but do you like me?" You look at coach adoringly, with big enthusiastic eyes.'
 		'Coach takes your hand in his, and says, "<<$name>>, you are very beautiful girl, and will be a great athlete, as long as you stay focused, but I told you I''m a married man, and I am worried about what we have done."'
-		'You angrily frown, not having expected this. "Well, at least he''s not dismissing or patronizing me, maybe he just needs me to nudge him more in my direction? Maybe I should be the one who is jealous?" you think as your mind whirls in confusion.'
+		'You frowned angrily, not having expected this. "Well, at least he''s not dismissing or patronizing me, maybe he just needs me to nudge him more in my direction? Maybe I should be the one who is jealous?" you thought as your mind whirled in confusion.'
 		VoltrenerVoyeur = 3 & ! flag start looking trainer for Ivan and you
-		if horny > 80: trenerepa += 3 & 'You decide to test his resolve.'
+		if horny > 80: trenerepa += 3 & 'You decided to test his resolve.'
 		act 'Test him':
 			cls
 			horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			if Discoclose = 1 and tanga = 1:
-				trenerlust += 3
+				trenerlust += 5
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak5.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for a positive nod from coach, then lean over, exposing your panties and say, "Please look it seems to me during training something was rubbing, and it''s all sore."'
-				'Coach tries to look indifferent as he carefully inspects your butt, "Nothing there, generally comfortable and well fitted underwear will prevent rubbing." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you see his dick is straining to escape his pants.'
+				'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You waited for an affirmative nod from the coach then leaned over, exposing your panties and said, "Please look, I think something was rubbing during training, and now it''s all sore."'
+				'Coach tried to look indifferent as he carefully inspected your butt, "Nothing there, generally comfortable and well fitted underwear will prevent rubbing." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you saw that his dick was straining to escape his pants.'
 			elseif Discoclose = 1 and tanga = 0:
 				trenerlust += 5
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak6.png"></center>'
-				'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for a positive nod from coach, you rest against the back of a bench and lean over, you aren''t wearing panties and coach has a perfect view of your crotch, you say, "Please look it seems to me during training something was rubbing, and it''s all sore."'
-				'Coach tries to look indifferent as he carefully inspects your holes. "Nothing there, but generally wearing panties and not showing off your bare ass will give you much better protection." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you see his dick is straining to escape his pants.'
+				'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for an affirmative nod from the coach. You rest your upper body against the back of a chair and lean over arching your back. You aren''t wearing panties and the coach got a perfect view of your crotch. You said, "Please look. I think something was rubbing during training, and now it''s all sore."'
+				'Coach tried to look indifferent as he carefully inspected your holes. "Nothing there, but generally wearing panties and not showing off your bare ass will give you much better protection." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you saw that his dick was straining to escape his pants.'
 			else
-				trenerlust += 3
+				trenerlust += 5
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak7.gif"></center>'
-				'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for a positive nod from coach, you get down on your knees and turning your ass to the coach, lower your shorts: "Please look it seems to me during training something was rubbing, and it''s all sore."'
-				'Coach tries to look indifferent as he carefully inspects your butt, "Nothing there, generally comfortable and well fitted underwear will prevent rubbing." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you see his dick is straining to escape his pants.'
+				'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for an affirmative nod from coach then you get down on your knees and, turning your ass to the coach, lowered your shorts: "Please look. I think something was rubbing during training, and now it''s all sore."'
+				'Coach tried to look indifferent as he carefully inspected your butt, "Nothing there, generally comfortable and well fitted underwear will prevent rubbing." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you saw that his dick was straining to escape his pants.'
 			end
 			act 'Say goodbye':
 				if Discoclose = 1:
 					Discoclose = 0
+					CLOSE ALL
 					gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 				else
 					gt 'gdksport', 'start'
@@ -288,24 +292,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 		end
 	elseif trenerepa >= 0 and trener_Speak = 0:
 		trener_Speak += 1
-		'You decided to talk to the coach, he is rumoured to have played in the European championship winning team. But the coach as painful response to your inquiries and besieged you: "<<$surname>>, I am not up to satisfy your curiosity".'
+		'You decided to talk to the coach about how he is rumored to have played on the European championship winning team. But the coach responded painfully to your inquiries and begged you, "<<$surname>>, I don''t want to talk about that just to satisfy your curiosity".'
 		if horny > 80 or GorSlut > 0:
 			trenerepa += 2
-			'"Not able to satisfy the curiosity? How about just meeting", - Flirty whispered you. Coach only puzzly looked at you, and turned away.'
+			trenerlust += 2
+			'"You don''t want to satisfy my curiosity? How about just satisfying me?" you whispered suggestively. Coach looked uncertainly at you as if he were about to say something but turned away instead.'
 		end
 	elseif trenerepa > 10 and trener_Speak = 1:
 		trener_Speak += 1
-		'Seeing what-the irritable condition, Mikhail Nikolaevich you made attempts to cheer him up. Chatting and asking nonsense. Chirping all sorts of nonsense, you, by the way, asked about his girlfriend or wife. On what coach said: "<<$surname>> you do nothing except stuff you don''t to ask concerning?". But you continued to moan and say that you are very interested. Coach, all-still gave up and told: "There are, of course, beautiful and jealous, so will see, what are you hanging around me, get the first number".'
+		'Seeing that the subject upset Mikhail, you made attempts to cheer him up. Chirping all sorts of nonsense, you eventually asked if he has a girlfriend or wife. Coach said, "<<$surname>> do you have nothing better to do than ask about stuff that doesn''t concern you?" You continued to pester him and say that you are very interested. Coach finally gave up and said, "Yes, I have a wife. She is, of course, beautiful and jealous. So if she sees you hanging around me, she''ll try to kill you."'
 		if horny > 80 or GorSlut > 0:
 			trenerepa += 2
-			'"And suddenly I''m not afraid, and is prettier to me", - at your words the coach just smiled.'
+			'"I''m not afraid, and I doubt she is prettier than me." you retort and the coach just smiled at your words.'
 		end
 	elseif trenerepa > 20  and trener_Speak = 2:
 		trener_Speak += 1
-		'Studiously avoiding all mention of CHE, you asked the coach to talk about volleyball last. He tells us that before the youth more responsible approach to the competition, did not go to the dance and not guzzled booze, practically belonged to a senior. Are you hoping to hear something more interesting, and got a lecture about that before the grass was greener and the trees above.'
+		'Studiously avoiding all mention of the European championship, you asked the coach to talk about volleyball. He told you that being a competitive player means being focused. Responsible players do not go to dances and guzzle booze right before competitions. You were hoping to hear something more interesting, and instead got a lecture about the grass was greener and the trees above, yada yada yada.'
 		if horny > 80 or GorSlut > 0:
 			trenerepa += 3
-			'Quickly bored you decided to interrupt this monologue, a bit provocative actions.'
+			'Quickly bored, you decided to interrupt his monologue with a bit of provocative action.'
 		end
 		act 'Interrupt':
 			cls
@@ -314,14 +319,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 			trenerlust += 2
 			if Discoclose = 1:
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spun around yourself, and your skirt hiked, so coach your feet become visible and even a little ass. The look of the trainer chased your ass and legs. "The ball on the court so you don''t watch carefully", - rather you noticed. Michael N., a bit confused, turned away. "Still beautiful legs coach more interesting trees", -  you smiled to himself, and I thought:-" In the main part you will get".'
+				'You spun around and your skirt flared up, giving coach a glimpse of your upper thighs and even a little ass. Coach''s eyse chased your ass and legs.' 
+				'"The ball is in your court so watch carefully." you said noticing his interest. 
+				Coach, looking a bit confused, turned away. 
+				"Aren''t beautiful legs more interesting than trees, Coach?" you said and smiled to yourself, and then you thought, "Hopefully you''ll get the hint".'
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You went to the window and straightening his hair gave the coach the opportunity to admire your flexible figure. "Still young girls coach of interesting trees", -  you smiled to himself, and I thought:-" In the main part you will get".'
+				'You went to the window and straightening your hair giving the coach the opportunity to admire your flexible figure. "Still young girls are more interesting than trees," you smiled to yourself, and thought:-"Hopefully, you''ll get the hint."'
 			end
 			act 'Say goodbye':
 				if Discoclose = 1:
 					Discoclose = 0
+					CLOSE ALL
 					gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 				else
 					gt 'gdksport', 'start'
@@ -330,8 +339,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 		end
 	elseif trenerepa > 30 and trener_Speak = 3:
 		trener_Speak += 1
-		'Once again you decided to talk about volleyball with coach. Coach is a bit photoprocesses, lost your head and began his story: "In the next days of sports of the USSR we settled into the hotel. I was not small  194 cm height, and now waiting for the lift was quite impressed by the team of our ordinary Soviet athletes, standing nearby. I felt like a pygmy next to these monumental figures from the great sport. All together we went into the Elevator and began to go upstairs. On the middle floors, the Elevator slows, go two puny Asian growth  "tester with cap" and begin enthusiastically tries to speak, looking on the bottom of our girls. Apparently, they had an argument between themselves on frivolous topic, because when you release the women from the Elevator, one of the Asians playfully slaps the last coming on the ass. The, without turning around, pure reflex, makes a sharp move, elbow hands back, getting sepalika right between the ears. There was a dull thud and unfortunate falls unconscious under the rear wall of the Elevator under the laughter of his friend. Lady lazily turns his head and utters the immortal phrase: - "Oh, exotics wanted..."'
-		'As the coach told this story, with its sexual overtones, you think, "Maybe he''d be more into me if I made him jealous. What if he saw me with one of the other jocks? and if I didn''t wear panties to training he might catch a glimpse of what he really wants."'
+		'Once again you decided to talk about volleyball with coach. Coach''s eyes became a bit unfocused and began his story: "When we arrived at the competition, the USSR teams settled into the hotel. I was not small, 194 cm in height, but while waiting for the lift I was quite impressed by the team of our Soviet athletes standing nearby. I felt like a pygmy next to these monumental figures from the great sport. All together we went into the elevator and began to go upstairs. On the middle floors, the elevator stopped, and two puny Asians wearing coaches'' caps got on and begin enthusiastically to speak to each other, looking at the bottoms of our girls. Apparently, they had an argument between themselves on frivolous topic, because when the elevatort stopped and the women got off, one of the Asians playfully slaps the last one on the ass. Without turning around, and by pure reflex, she thrusts her elbow back, catching the Asian right between the eyes. There was a dull thud and the unfortunate guy falls unconscious sliding down the rear wall of the elevator under the laughter of his friend. The woman slowly turns her head and utters the immortal phrase: - "Oh, exotics wanted..."'
+		'As the coach told this story, with its sexual overtones, you thought, "Maybe he''d be more into me if I made him jealous. What if he saw me with one of the other jocks? And if I don''t wear panties to training he might catch a glimpse of what he really wants."'
 		volleytanga = 1 & ! flag start training without panties in  gdksport - go to coaching
 		act 'Check':
 			cls
@@ -340,14 +349,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 			trenerlust += 2
 			if Discoclose = 1:
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Open neckline, so your CECE broke out, you turned to the coach, and arched his back has exhibited her juicy melons forward. the look of the trainer immediately focused on them, swallowing hard, the coach looked up from your Tits. "I''ll have something to tease him, maybe not to wear panties on a workout", - the thought flashed in your head, and the thought of sinking feeling in the pit of your stomach intensified.'
+				'You undid your top enough that your breasts fell out then you turned to the coach, arching your back thrusting your juicy melons forward. Coach''s eyes immediately focused on them, Swallowing hard, the coach looked up from your tits. "I''ll have to do something more to tease him, maybe not to wear panties during our workout." the thought flashed in your head, and with the thought, the quivery feeling in the pit of your stomach intensified.'
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pulled the shorts, like correcting them, and pulled them so hard, that is clearly covered your pussy.  Opinion of the coach staring at you between legs. "The ball on the court so you don`t watch carefully", - rather you noticed. Michael N., a bit confused, turned away. "I''ll have something to tease him, maybe not to wear panties on a workout", - the thought flashed in your head, and the thought of sinking feeling in the pit of your stomach intensified.'
+				'You pulled on your shorts as if you were adjusting them, and pulled them so hard that your pussy is clearly outlined in a camel-toe. It''s easy to see the opinion of the coach as he stared at your crotch.' 
+				'"The ball is in your court so watch carefully." you noted. Mikhail, a bit confused, turned away.' 
+				'"I''ll have to do something more to tease him, maybe not wear panties during our next workout." the thought flashed in your head, and with the thought, the quivery feeling in the pit of your stomach intensified.'
 			end
 			act 'Say goodbye':
 				if Discoclose = 1:
 					Discoclose = 0
+					CLOSE ALL
 					gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 				else
 					gt 'gdksport', 'start'
@@ -356,32 +368,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 		end
 	elseif ShowerIvan = 3 and trener_Speak = 4:
 		trener_Speak += 1
-		'"Michael N. Are you angry with me about Ivan, we''re not serious, he only cares about his competition. Anyway I like you better." Coach, tries to gather himself, only able to stare at you and cough.'
+		'"Mikail, are you angry with me about Ivan, we''re not serious, he only cares about his competition. Anyway I like you better." Coach, tries to gather himself, only able to stare at you and cough.'
 		'You seize the initiative, "I wanted to ask you, do the coaches of the Junior volleyball teams get paid well? Then I might also want to become a coach, you have a car and you dress up stylishly, but you, as a former international player and European championship winner probably get paid extra." You decided to once again touch on the topic of the championship.'
 		act 'Humbly listen':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak20.jpg"></center>'
-			'But, It seems, the coach does not like your return to this topic. "<<$surname>>, I will not be drawn into talking about the championship, and coaches don''t get paid a lot, I spend my Sunday mornings training rich women in the fitness center, one lesson there pays more than a month working as a coach in our town." Still got nothing out of him there <<$surname>>, although he did mention about the classes in the fitness center, that''s got to be worth investigating.'
+			'But, it seems, the coach did not like your return to this topic.' 
+			'"<<$surname>>, I will not be drawn into talking about the championship. And, no, coaches don''t get paid a lot. I spend my Sunday mornings training rich women in the fitness center, one lesson there pays more than a month working as a coach in our town." Coach replied gruffly.' 
+			'"Still got nothing out of him there <<$surname>>, although he did mention about the classes in the fitness center, that''s got to be worth investigating." you thought to yourself'
 			trenerepa += 3
 			'Seeing coach is a little upset by your questions, you decide to cheer him up.'
 			ShowerIvan = 4 & ! the flag on the emergence of Turner in the centre
 			act 'Kiss':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak8.jpg"></center>'
-				'Clasping the neck of the Coach''s hands, you stared at his lips with a kiss. The coach stood dumbfounded, rolling his eyes. Deciding not to stop local success, you have got to pants coach...'
-				act 'To get member':
+				'Wrapping your arms around Coach''s neck, you surprise him by kissing him on the lips. The coach stood dumbfounded, rolling his eyes. Deciding not to stop with this little success, you slip your hand into Coach''s pants...'
+				act 'Grab his cock':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak9.jpg"></center>'
-					'Without wasting time, you pulled standing stake member, squeezed it into a fist, and several times walked upside down on the trunk...'
-					act 'Take in the mouth':
+					'Without wasting time, you pulled his stiff cock out of his pants, squeezed it in your fist, and slid your hand up and down his shaft...'
+					act 'Take him in your mouth':
 						cla & *clr
 						horny += 10
+						centr = 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak10.jpg"></center>'
-						'But as soon as your lips wrapped standing stake member, as a coach pushed your head and hastily tucked in the pants member: "<<$nickname>>, stop trying to molest me. I those explained everything, be good.  And then who knows-something I never make excuses, especially after what happened in the championship", - you pretended pie girl, and myself decided that we must go to the fitness center can get there what to learn something about the damn championship.'
+						'But as soon as your lips wrapped around his hard cock, Coach pushed your head away and hastily tucked his coch back into his pants.' 
+						'"<<$nickname>>, stop trying to molest me. I explained everything so be good. I can''t allow this to happen, especially after what happened in the championship..." He abruptly broke off and walked away.'
+						'You watched him walk with interest and decided that you must go to the fitness center anf try to learn something about the damn championship because something definitely did happen.'
 						act 'Say goodbye':
 							if Discoclose = 1:
 								Discoclose = 0
+								CLOSE ALL
 								gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 							else
 								gt 'gdksport', 'start'
@@ -394,13 +412,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 	elseif trener_Speak = 5 and ShowerIvan = 6:
 		cls
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak19.jpg"></center>'
-		'You took the hand of the coach in his: "Michael N. I want to tell you, that will never betray you, I certainly Prater Park, but human relationships are not the reason for the chatter. I''m not like the girl from the national team",- having blurted out this, you stared at the coach and waited for his reaction: "That damn Chinese, gossip is the same", - saying it, the coach smiled and continued: "And you''re a stubborn wench <<$surname>>, I will think about your words, now go home".'
-		centr = 4
+		'You took the hand of the coach in your''s, "Mikhail, I want to tell you, that I will never betray you, I certainly like to gossip, but human relationships are not the reason for the chatter. I''m not like the girl from the national team." having blurted this out, you stared at the coach and waited for his reaction.' 
+		'"That damn Chinaman just can''t help but gossip." the coach smiled and continued, "And you''re a stubborn wench <<$surname>>, I will think about your words, now go home".'
+		centr = 3 & ! to close the fitness center encounters
 		trener_Speak += 1
 	elseif trener_Speak = 6 and trenerSex >= 1:
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak21.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decided to ask the coach whether he will take you into the main part of, while trying to look as erotic. But Mikhail Nikolaevich why-then frowned and said: "Look at your behavior <<$surname>>". You have already caught his breath at the insult, how to rip your ass it''s the behavior not looks, and what in composition to include so it will look.'
+		'You decided to ask the coach whether he will let you be a starter for the team while trying to look as sexy as possible. But Mikhail Nikolaevich for some reason frowned and said, "You''re not acting like a starter, <<$surname>>."' 
+		'You sucked in your breath at the insult, you''ve been working your ass off. '
 		act 'To recall the incident':
 			cla & *clr
 			trenerepa = -20

+ 6 - 2
locations/VoltrenerSexShower

@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 # VoltrenerSexShower
+!{ Change log
+March 25, 2016
+Changed dynamic calls to argument location calls
+}
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	minut += 20
 	CLOSE ALL
@@ -24,7 +28,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	cls
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSexShower1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You hear a suspicious noise. Wiping the steam off the glass, you see the coach hiding quite poorly in the dark, spying on you as you showered.'
+	'You hear a suspicious noise. Wiping the steam off the glass, you see the coach hiding quite poorly in the dark, spying on you as you shower.'
 	act 'Scream':
 		cls
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSexShower4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -37,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			trenerlust += 2
 			cls
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSexShower6.jpg"></center>'
-			'You smile at Mikhail Nikolaevich, and continued to wash, making a show of cleaning your bulging ass and breasts, coach watches, but stays perfectly still.'
+			'You smiled at Mikhail Nikolaevich, and continued to wash, making a show of cleaning your bulging ass and breasts, coach watches, but stays perfectly still.'
 			VoltrenerVoyeur += 1
 			horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'

+ 0 - 236
locations/Voltrener_din

@@ -1,236 +0,0 @@
-# Voltrener_din
-$din_trener_SpeakHis = {
-	trenerepa += 1
-	'"Seeing as you are showing some interest in volleyball, I''ll fill you in on some history:"'
-	$volleyhistory[1]='"In 1895 Williaam J. Morgan instructor at a young men`s Christian Association (YMCA, Holyoke, Mass.(religion is the cradle of modern civilization)) decided to blend elements of basketball, baseball, tennis and handball, to create a new game, as he saw basketball to be too high contact. He created the game of volleyball (at that time it was called mintonette). Morgan borrowed the net from tennis and installed it at the approximate height of 196 cm from the floor, slightly above the heads of the average person.'
-	$volleyhistory[2]='"During a demonstration of the game Morgan noticed, that the players volley the ball back and forth over the net, and maybe Volleyball would be the most appropriate name for this sport. On 7 July 1896 in Springfield College first game of volleyball was played.'
-	$volleyhistory[3]='"In 1916 in the Philippines saw the first demonstration of combination pass and smash, with a high pass on a trajectory designed for another player to attack.'
-	$volleyhistory[4]='"1920 saw the establishment of the rule of three touches of the ball by players of one team before the ball has to cross over the net, as well as the typically positioning of attacking and back line players. '
-	$volleyhistory[5]='"In 1930 the first game of beach volleyball between teams of two players was played.'
-	$volleyhistory[6]='"1934 brought about volleyball judges (before then the matches were refereed by a priest in a cassock of the young men''s Christian Association).'
-	$volleyhistory[7]='"In 1947 the International volleyball Federation (FIVB) was formed.'
-	$volleyhistory[8]='"In 1948 the first beach volleyball tournament was held.'
-	$volleyhistory[9]='"In 1949 the first volleyball world championships took place in Prague.'
-	$volleyhistory[10]='"In 1964 Volleyball was introduced to the Olympics at the Tokyo games.'
-	*pl $volleyhistory[rand(1,10)]
-}
-
-$din_trener_speak = {
-	act 'To try to talk':
-		cla
-		if trenerepa > 40 and ShowerIvan = 1:
-			'"Michael, you like me? You like to spy on me in the shower, and cum on me, but do you like me?" You look at coach adoringly, with big enthusiastic eyes.'
-			'Coach takes your hand in his, and says, "<<$name>>, you are very beautiful girl, and will be a great athlete, as long as you stay focused, but I told you I''m a married man, and I am worried about what we have done."'
-			'You angrily frown, not having expected this. "Well, at least he''s not dismissing or patronizing me, maybe he just needs me to nudge him more in my direction? Maybe I should be the on who is jealous?" These thoughts have you confused.'
-			ShowerIvan = 2 & ! flag start looking trainer for Ivan and you
-			if horny > 80: trenerepa += 3 & 'You decide to test his resolve.'
-			act 'Test him':
-				cls
-				horny += 10
-				gs 'stat'
-				if Discoclose = 1 and tanga = 1:
-					trenerlust += 3
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak5.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for a positive nod from coach, then lean over, exposing your panties and say, "Please look it seems to me during training something was rubbing, and it''s all sore."'
-					'Coach tries to look indifferent as he carefully inspects your butt, "Nothing there, generally comfortable and well fitted underwear will prevent rubbing." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you see his dick is straining to escape his pants.'
-				elseif Discoclose = 1 and tanga = 0:
-					trenerlust += 5
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak6.png"></center>'
-					'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for a positive nod from coach, you rest against the back of a bench and lean over, you aren''t wearing panties and coach has a perfect view of your crotch, you say, "Please look it seems to me during training something was rubbing, and it''s all sore."'
-					'Coach tries to look indifferent as he carefully inspects your holes. "Nothing there, but generally wearing panties and not showing off your bare ass will give you much better protection." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you see his dick is straining to escape his pants.'
-				else
-					trenerlust += 3
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak7.gif"></center>'
-					'"Mikhail, could you please help me?" You wait for a positive nod from coach, you get down on your knees and turning your ass to the coach, lower your shorts: "Please look it seems to me during training something was rubbing, and it''s all sore."'
-					'Coach tries to look indifferent as he carefully inspects your butt, "Nothing there, generally comfortable and well fitted underwear will prevent rubbing." Despite his efforts to remain objective, you see his dick is straining to escape his pants.'
-				end
-				act 'Say goodbye':
-					if Discoclose = 1:
-						Discoclose = 0
-						gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
-					else
-						gt 'gdksport', 'start'
-					end
-				end
-			end
-		elseif trenerepa >= 0 and trener_Speak = 0:
-			trener_Speak += 1
-			'You decided to talk to the coach, he is rumored to have played in the European championship winning team. But the coach as painful response to your inquiries and besieged you: "<<$surname>>, I am not up to satisfy your curiosity".'
-			if horny > 80 or GorSlut > 0:
-				trenerepa += 2
-				'"Not able to satisfy the curiosity? How about just meeting", - Flirty whispered you. Coach only puzzly looked at you, and turned away.'
-			end
-		elseif trenerepa > 10 and trener_Speak = 1:
-			trener_Speak += 1
-			'Seeing what-the irritable condition, Mikhail Nikolaevich you made attempts to cheer him up. Chatting and asking nonsense. Chirping all sorts of nonsense, you, by the way, asked about his girlfriend or wife. On what coach said: "<<$surname>> you do nothing except stuff you don''t to ask concerning?". But you continued to moan and say that you are very interested. Coach, all-still gave up and told: "There are, of course, beautiful and jealous, so will see, what are you hanging around me, get the first number".'
-			if horny > 80 or GorSlut > 0:
-				trenerepa += 2
-				'"And suddenly I''m not afraid, and is prettier to me", - at your words the coach just smiled.'
-			end
-		elseif trenerepa > 20  and trener_Speak = 2:
-			trener_Speak += 1
-			'Studiously avoiding all mention of CHE, you asked the coach to talk about volleyball last. He tells us that before the youth more responsible approach to the competition, did not go to the dance and not guzzled booze, practically belonged to a senior. Are you hoping to hear something more interesting, and got a lecture about that before the grass was greener and the trees above.'
-			if horny > 80 or GorSlut > 0:
-				trenerepa += 3
-				'Quickly bored you decided to interrupt this monologue, a bit provocative actions.'
-			end
-			act 'Interrupt':
-				cls
-				horny += 10
-				gs 'stat'
-				trenerlust += 2
-				if Discoclose = 1:
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You spun around yourself, and your skirt hiked, so coach your feet become visible and even a little ass. The look of the trainer chased your ass and legs. "The ball on the court so you don''t watch carefully", - rather you noticed. Michael N., a bit confused, turned away. "Still beautiful legs coach more interesting trees", -  you smiled to himself, and I thought:-" In the main part you will get".'
-				else
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You went to the window and straightening his hair gave the coach the opportunity to admire your flexible figure. "Still young girls coach of interesting trees", -  you smiled to himself, and I thought:-" In the main part you will get".'
-				end
-				act 'Say goodbye':
-					if Discoclose = 1:
-						Discoclose = 0
-						gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
-					else
-						gt 'gdksport', 'start'
-					end
-				end
-			end
-		elseif trenerepa > 30 and trener_Speak = 3:
-			trener_Speak += 1
-			'Once again you decided to talk about volleyball with coach. Coach is a bit photoprocesses, lost your head and began his story: "In the next days of sports of the USSR we settled into the hotel. I was not small  194 cm height, and now waiting for the lift was quite impressed by the team of our ordinary Soviet athletes, standing nearby. I felt like a pygmy next to these monumental figures from the great sport. All together we went into the Elevator and began to go upstairs. On the middle floors, the Elevator slows, go two puny Asian growth  "tester with cap" and begin enthusiastically tries to speak, looking on the bottom of our girls. Apparently, they had an argument between themselves on frivolous topic, because when you release the women from the Elevator, one of the Asians playfully slaps the last coming on the ass. The, without turning around, pure reflex, makes a sharp move, elbow hands back, getting sepalika right between the ears. There was a dull thud and unfortunate falls unconscious under the rear wall of the Elevator under the laughter of his friend. Lady lazily turns his head and utters the immortal phrase: - "Oh, exotics wanted..."'
-			'As the coach told this story, with its sexual overtones, you think, "Maybe he''d be more into me if I made him jealous. What if he saw me with one of the other jocks? and if I didn''t wear panties to training he might catch a glimpse of what he really wants."'
-			volleytanga = 1 & ! flag start training without panties in  gdksport - go to coaching
-			act 'Check':
-				cls
-				horny += 10
-				gs 'stat'
-				trenerlust += 2
-				if Discoclose = 1:
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Open neckline, so your CECE broke out, you turned to the coach, and arched his back has exhibited her juicy melons forward. the look of the trainer immediately focused on them, swallowing hard, the coach looked up from your Tits. "I''ll have something to tease him, maybe not to wear panties on a workout", - the thought flashed in your head, and the thought of sinking feeling in the pit of your stomach intensified.'
-				else
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak4.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pulled the shorts, like correcting them, and pulled them so hard, that is clearly covered your pussy.  Opinion of the coach staring at you between legs. "The ball on the court so you don`t watch carefully", - rather you noticed. Michael N., a bit confused, turned away. "I''ll have something to tease him, maybe not to wear panties on a workout", - the thought flashed in your head, and the thought of sinking feeling in the pit of your stomach intensified.'
-				end
-				act 'Say goodbye':
-					if Discoclose = 1:
-						Discoclose = 0
-						gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
-					else
-						gt 'gdksport', 'start'
-					end
-				end
-
-			end
-		elseif ShowerIvan = 3 and trener_Speak = 4:
-			trener_Speak += 1
-			'"Michael N. Are you angry with me about Ivan, we''re not serious, he only cares about his competition. Anyway I like you better." Coach, tries to gather himself, only able to stare at you and cough.'
-			'You seize the initiative, "I wanted to ask you, do the coaches of the Junior volleyball teams get paid well? Then I might also want to become a coach, you have a car and you dress up stylishly, but you, as a former international player and European championship winner probably get paid extra." You decided to once again touch on the topic of the championship.'
-			act 'Humbly listen':
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak20.jpg"></center>'
-				'But, It seems, the coach does not like your return to this topic. "<<$surname>>, I will not be drawn into talking about the championship, and coaches don''t get paid a lot, I spend my Sunday mornings training rich women in the fitness center, one lesson there pays more than a month working as a coach in our town." Still got nothing out of him there <<$surname>>, although he did mention about the classes in the fitness center, that''s got to be worth investigating.'
-				trenerepa += 3
-				'Seeing coach is a little upset by your questions, you decide to cheer him up.'
-				ShowerIvan = 4 & ! the flag on the emergence of Turner in the centre
-				act 'Kiss':
-					cla & *clr
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak8.jpg"></center>'
-					'Clasping the neck of the Coach''s hands, you stared at his lips with a kiss. The coach stood dumbfounded, rolling his eyes. Deciding not to stop local success, you have got to pants coach...'
-					act 'To get member':
-						cla & *clr
-						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak9.jpg"></center>'
-						'Without wasting time, you pulled standing stake member, squeezed it into a fist, and several times walked upside down on the trunk...'
-						act 'Take in the mouth':
-							cla & *clr
-							horny += 10
-							gs 'stat'
-							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak10.jpg"></center>'
-							'But as soon as your lips wrapped standing stake member, as a coach pushed your head and hastily tucked in the pants member: "<<$nickname>>, stop trying to molest me. I those explained everything, be good.  And then who knows-something I never make excuses, especially after what happened in the championship", - you pretended pie girl, and myself decided that we must go to the fitness center can get there what to learn something about the damn championship.'
-							act 'Say goodbye':
-								if Discoclose = 1:
-									Discoclose = 0
-									gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
-								else
-									gt 'gdksport', 'start'
-								end
-							end
-						end
-					end
-				end
-			end
-		elseif trener_Speak = 5 and ShowerIvan = 6:
-			cls
-			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak19.jpg"></center>'
-			'You took the hand of the coach in his: "Michael N. I want to tell you, that will never betray you, I certainly Prater Park, but human relationships are not the reason for the chatter. I''m not like the girl from the national team",- having blurted out this, you stared at the coach and waited for his reaction: "That damn Chinese, gossip is the same", - saying it, the coach smiled and continued: "And you''re a stubborn wench <<$surname>>, I will think about your words, now go home".'
-			centr = 4
-			trener_Speak += 1
-		elseif trener_Speak = 6 and trenerSex >= 1:
-			cla & *clr
-			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak21.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decided to ask the coach whether he will take you into the main part of, while trying to look as erotic. But Mikhail Nikolaevich why-then frowned and said: "Look at your behavior <<$surname>>". You have already caught his breath at the insult, how to rip your ass it''s the behavior not looks, and what in composition to include so it will look.'
-			act 'To recall the incident':
-				cla & *clr
-				trenerepa = -20
-				volleysostav = -10
-				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak22.jpg"></center>'
-				'"<<$surname>>, are you stupid, I think its the holes in the base to get", - the coach said with anger. "I seem mistaken when you believed your words, don''t come near me, I''m very disappointed in you, Yes and workout, too, may never come, you don''t belong on the team", - Michael N. Serkov in your direction quite frantic glance, turned around and left. '
-				act 'Escape':
-					if Discoclose = 1:
-						Discoclose = 0
-						gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
-					else
-						gt 'gdksport', 'start'
-					end
-				end
-			end
-			act 'To bear a grudge':
-				cla & *clr
-				trenerepa += 5
-				trener_Speak += 1
-				'You really wanted to blurt out that-evil, but you resist, still faithfully looking into the eyes of the coach, you said you''re ready good behavior to show. Bending down and exposing ass,'
-				if Discoclose = 1 and tanga = 1:
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak25.jpg"></center>'
-					'you pulled her panties together with clothes. Coach with intercom of posmotrela you.'
-				elseif Discoclose = 1 and tanga = 0:
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak24.gif"></center>'
-					'the hem of your dress lifted from under him and looked out not covered pussy panties, the coach looked at you, on your ass, and lifted her hem even higher, freeing up the ass from under the dress.'
-				else
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/VoltrenerSpeak23.gif"></center>'
-					'putting a hand on the ass coach, pushed to the side knickers, spread her ass and held her hard trained thousands of feeds and techniques, fingers you on the hole.'
-				end
-				'And you''re interested in can we assume this behavior is good. "<<$nickname>> I, I, why are you all driving",- you chuckled and decided to be patient quirks coach well and patrapada with him. It seems, the basis I dont get.'
-				act 'Escape':
-					if Discoclose = 1:
-						Discoclose = 0
-						gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
-					else
-						gt 'gdksport', 'start'
-					end
-				end
-			end
-		elseif trener_Speak = 7 and trenerepa > 150 and volleyboll > 150:
-			trener_Speak += 1
-			cla
-			*clr
-			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/Tren/VolleyTrener5.jpg"></center>'
-			'The coach smiled at you and, raising his thumb up, said: "<<$name>>, I want to congratulate you I think, that you are now a first team regular, but most importantly don''t sweat, keep practicing, well and less booze-gadding". You squealed happily and threw herself on the neck of the coach. "Now we have them... I always... Yes we like...",- the unexpectedness of confused thoughts, and the coach just smiled to this confusion, and he said,, Go.'
-			volleysostav = 2
-		else
-			trenerepa += 1
-			dynamic $din_trener_speakHis
-		end
-
-		act 'Say goodbye':
-			if Discoclose = 1:
-				Discoclose = 0
-				gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
-			else
-				gt 'gdksport', 'start'
-			end
-		end
-	end
-}
-
---- Voltrener_din ---------------------------------
-

+ 15 - 10
locations/Voltrenersex

@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 # Voltrenersex
+!{Change log
+March 25, 2016
+Changed dynamic calls to argument location calls
+}
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	minut += 15
 	gs'stat'
@@ -23,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Escape':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
+	act 'Escape':gt'gdksport', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
@@ -71,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			act 'Jump':
 				cls
 				Joke += 1 &! the counter start sex on disco
-				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/voitrensex5.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/voitrensex5.JPG"></center>'
 				'Already preparing to move from the scrotum, for the main dish, in my head flashed to play a joke on coach, jumping to his feet, waving Tits in front of the coach, you corrected the light and jumped out of the coaching laughing and showing the language coach. After you came: "<<$surname>>, the little zaraska, catch, somewhere in a secluded corner of fuck right there", - but through a terrible roar, there was a hint of laughter.'
 				act 'Escape':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
@@ -127,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 					end
 				end
 				if trenerSex >= 3:
-					act 'Substitute the language':
+					act 'Stick out your tongue':
 						cls
 						swallow += 1
 						spafinloc = 12
@@ -141,10 +145,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 				end
 			end
 			if trenerSex >= 10:
-				act 'Substitute the ass':	gt 'Voltrenersex', 'Anal'
+				act 'Take it in your ass':	gt 'Voltrenersex', 'Anal'
 			end
 			if trenerSex >= 15 and vagina > 13 and sex > 0 and mesec <= 0:
-				act 'Substitute pussy':	gt 'Voltrenersex', 'vag'
+				act 'Take it in your pussy':	gt 'Voltrenersex', 'vag'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -268,7 +272,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 	Act 'To expose pussy':
 		cls
 		mastr += 1
-		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/voitrensex12.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/voitrensex12.JPG"></center>'
 		'Sitting you are widely spread legs showing coach oozing pussy juices.'
 		Act 'Fondle nipples':
 			horny += 10
@@ -476,7 +480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'discoSex':
 							act 'Further':
 								cls
 								spafinloc = 4
-gs 'cum_manage'
+								gs 'cum_manage'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/voitrensexdisco6.gif"></center>'
 								'In spasms of pleasure you has a tight grip on the stick trainer the anus, saviv in voice with you, the coach pulled his cock from the anus and began to cover your ass with sperm.'
 								act 'To go with the coach':
@@ -488,7 +492,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 									cls
 									'<center><img src="images/etogame/gorodok.jpg"></center>'
 									'You walk through town, as you get near your apartment, the coach stops and looks at you.'
-									dynamic $din_trener_speak
+									gt 'Voltrener', 'trener_speak'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -505,7 +509,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					cls
 					'<center><img src="images/etogame/gorodok.jpg"></center>'
 					'You walk through town, as you get near your apartment, the coach stops and looks at you.'
-					dynamic $din_trener_speak
+					gt 'Voltrener', 'trener_speak'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -518,9 +522,10 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			'Having brought you to the toilet, the coach opened the door and sees it is full of students. "Now that is a pity." says coach.'
 			'He looks genuinely upset and dejectedly offers to walk you home. You don''t think he''ll let you say no, so you agree.'
 			'You walk through town, as you get near your apartment, the coach stops and looks at you.'
-			dynamic $din_trener_speak
+			gt 'Voltrener', 'trener_speak'
 		end
 	end
 end
+
 --- Voltrenersex ---------------------------------
 

+ 15 - 0
locations/boilerroom

@@ -0,0 +1,15 @@
+# boilerroom
+if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
+	CLOSE ALL
+	$metkaM = $ARGS[0]
+	$locM = $CURLOC
+	$metka = $ARGS[0]
+	$loc = $CURLOC
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/boiler/boilerroom'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
+	'This event is still not completed. Please bug Ekay until he gets it done.'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'godorok'
+end
+
+--- boilerroom ---------------------------------
+

+ 82 - 54
locations/gdksport

@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ removed dynamic call from 'Wash in shower'
 reduced dance skill gain to 0-2 per lesson
 capped dance skill at 75 for lessons
 reduced dance skill requirement for Albina quest to 75
-added alternate starts to Albina quest based on relationship level
+added alternate starts to Albona quest based on relationship level
 moved content of 'volley' to 'gdksport','volley'
-fixed missing ShowerIvan = 1 variable }
+fixed missing ShowerIvan = 1 and ShowerIvan = 2 variables }
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	CLOSE ALL
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">community center</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/gdksport.jpg"></center>'
-	'The community center gym offers lessons for <a href="exec: gt ''gdksport'',''racing1''">Racing</a>, <a href="exec:gt ''gdksport'',''dance1''">Dance</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''gdksport'',''vball1''">Volleyball</a>.'
-	
+	'The community center sports club offers lessons for <a href="exec: gt ''gdksport'',''racing1''">Racing</a>, <a href="exec:gt ''gdksport'',''dance1''">Dance</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''gdksport'',''vball1''">Volleyball</a>.'
+
 	if kotovLoveQW > 0 and hour = 16:
-		'You see <a href="exec:minut += 3 & gt ''kotovEv''">Vitek Kotov</a> with a large sports bag enter the gym.'
+		'You see <a href="exec:minut += 3 & gt ''kotovEv''">Vitek Kotov</a> with a large sports bag enter the sports club.'
 	elseif grupNPC[3] >= 80 and hour = 17 and ivansportday ! daystart:
-		'You see <a href="exec:minut += 3 & gt ''IvanEv''">Ivan Prokhorov</a> with a large sports bag enter the gym.'
+		'You see <a href="exec:minut += 3 & gt ''IvanEv''">Ivan Prokhorov</a> with a large sports bag enter the sports club.'
 	end
 	
 	! WD: Uninitialised ~ 'UNSTARTER' allways false
@@ -35,6 +35,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	!!event does not start as it is incomplete, needs home location and cinema location!!
 	
 	act 'Go outside': 
+		if lariskaQwestStart = daystart: gt 'LariskaStart', 'start'
+		if lariskaQwestDay = daystart: gt 'LariskaStart', 'end'
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			gt 'gdk'
 		else
@@ -45,28 +47,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if albinaQWdance > 0 or gsAboDance > 0 or gsAboBeg > 0 or gsAboVolley > 0:
 		act 'Change clothes in the locker room':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', 'wardrobe'
 	end	
-	if  $clothingworntype ! 'exercise' and (albinaQWdance > 0 or gsAboDance > 0 or gsAboBeg > 0 or gsAboVolley > 0):'You are not dressed in sports clothes.'
+	if  sport = 0 and (albinaQWdance > 0 or gsAboDance > 0 or gsAboBeg > 0 or gsAboVolley > 0):'You are not dressed in sports clothes.'
 	if sweat >= 0:
 		act 'Wash in the shower':gt 'gdksport', 'shower'
 	end
 	if hour < 16 or hour > 20: exit
-	if gsAboDance > 0 and $clothingworntype = 'exercise': 
+	if gsAboDance > 0 and sport = 1 and albinaQWdance = 0: 
 		act 'Go to dance lesson, you have <<gsAboDance>> lessons remaining':gt 'gdksport', 'dance2'
 	end
-	if albinaQWdance > 0 and AlbinaBlokDance = 0 and ZvezdEnd = 0 and $clothingworntype = 'exercise':
+	if albinaQWdance > 0 and AlbinaBlokDance = 0 and ZvezdEnd = 0 and sport = 1:
 		act 'Train with Starlets':gt 'gdksport', 'starlets'
 	end
-	if gsAboBeg > 0 and $clothingworntype = 'exercise':
+	if gsAboBeg > 0 and sport = 1:
 		act 'Go to track lesson, you have <<gsAboBeg>> lessons remaining':gt 'gdksport', 'racing2'
 	end
-	if gsAboVolley > 0 and volleysostav = 0 and $clothingworntype = 'exercise':
+	if gsAboVolley > 0 and volleysostav = 0 and sport = 1:
 		if week ! 5:
 			act 'Go to volleyball lesson, you have <<gsAboVolley>> lessons remaining':gt 'gdksport', 'vball2'
 		else
 			act 'Go to volleyball lesson, you have <<gsAboVolley>> lessons remaining':gt 'gdksport', 'vball3'
 		end
 	end
-	if volleysostav > 0 and $clothingworntype = 'exercise':
+	if volleysostav > 0 and sport = 1:
 		if week ! 6 and volkomday ! daystart:
 			act 'To engage with the team':gt 'gdksport', 'vball4'
 		elseif week = 6 and sorevday ! daystart:
@@ -171,7 +173,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance2':
 		elseif albinaQWdance = 0 and StoryLine ! 0 and grupNPC[23] > 20 and grupNPC <= 60: gt 'gdksport', 'albina2'
 		elseif albinaQWdance = 0 and StoryLine ! 0 and grupNPC[23] >= 60: gt 'gdksport', 'albina3'
 		end
+		act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 	end
+	act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 end
 			
 if $ARGS[0] = 'albina1':
@@ -400,8 +404,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 			end
 
 			if DanceWhoreT > 0: DanceWhoreT = 0
-			if AlbFather = 0 and DanceWhore > rand (1, 20): AlbFather = 1
-			'Albina after training beckoned you to her. "Good work, <<$name>>. The clients were satisfied and you were very discrete. You''re doing fine, doing excellent, in fact. Stick with me and you will have all the money, cars and apartments you could want."'
+			if AlbFather = 0 and DanceWhore > rand (1, 20): 
+				AlbFather = 1
+				'Albina after training beckoned you to her. "Good work, <<$name>>. The clients were satisfied and you were very discrete. You''re doing fine, doing excellent, in fact. Stick with me and you will have all the money, cars and apartments you could want."'
+			end
 		else
 			stardance = 0
 			albpayrand = rand(1, 5)
@@ -518,6 +524,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'cab_home':
+	cls
+	minut += 15
+	gs 'stat'
+	'You called a taxi and it brought you back to town.'
+	if spafinloc = 11:
+		cumspclnt = 11
+		gs 'cum_cleanup' 
+		'Along the way you wiped the sperm from your face.'
+	end
+
+	act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'racing2':
 	cla
 	*clr
@@ -612,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vball3':
 				if andGevknow = 0:$nameAndGev = 'some guy'
 				if andGevknow > 0:$nameAndGev = 'Andrei'
 
-				'During the game you got pushed by <a href="exec:gt ''volAndGev''"><<$nameAndGev>></a>.'
+				'During the game you got pushed by <a href="exec:gt ''volAndGev'', ''start''"><<$nameAndGev>></a>.'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -640,8 +660,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vball4':
 	dom += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/gdksport.jpg"></center>'
-	'Number of games <<volsesongame>>, Win - <<volsesonwin>>, lesions - <<volsesonloss>>, draws - <<volsesondraw>>.'
-	'At the beginning of the workout you ran a few laps around the room. After you press the jog and do abdominal exercises. Then began to practice reception and feeding the ball. At the end of the workout you had a game.'
+	'Number of games <<volsesongame>>, Win - <<volsesonwin>>, lesions - <<volsesonloss>>.'
+	'At the beginning of the workout you ran a few laps around the room. Afterwards the coach has you do push-ups and crunches. Then you practiced receiving and setting up plays and serving the ball. At the end of the workout you had a practice game.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 	if tanga = 0 and rand(0,1) = 1 and (volleytanga = 1 or VoltrenerVoyeur >= 5): 
 		act 'Correct clothing':  
@@ -649,9 +669,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vball4':
 			TrenerLust += 3
 			Voltrenersee += 1 & ! setcheck on gg without panties 
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/volley/game'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'It seems the coach noticed your manipulation and your young pussy, his eyes lit up and he said turning away: "<<$surname>> Will you come to me after training. I need to show you UH  ... a few things" '
-			act 'Escape':gs'stat'& gt'gdksport' 
-			act 'To come to the door coaching':gt'Voltrenersex', 'start'
+			'It seems the coach noticed your manipulation and your young pussy, his eyes lit up and he said turning away: "<<$surname>>. Come see me after training. I need to show you UH  ... a few things" '
+			act 'Escape':gs'stat'& gt 'gdksport', 'start' 
+			act 'Go to the coach''s office':gt 'Voltrenersex', 'start'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Go to coaching':gt 'Voltrener', 'start'
@@ -678,7 +698,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vball5':
 	trenerepa += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/gdksport.jpg"></center>'
-	'You gathered their things together with other the rest of the team and got on a bus that took you to a place where there will be a match.'
+	'You gathered your things together with the rest of the team and got on a bus that took you to a place where there will be a match.'
 		act 'Play':gt 'gdksport', 'volley'
 	end
 end
@@ -803,20 +823,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'volley':
 	elseif volltime = 3:
 		*clr
 		cla
-		'Final whistle.'
 		volsesongame += 1
 		if rand (1, 100) < 3:
 			if volpointv = 2:
-				volpoint = 2
-				volpointv = 0
-				'Despite your teams poor performance.'
-			elseif volpoint = 2:
 				volpoint = 0
 				volpointv = 2
-				'Even though your team clearly played better, your luck was out.'
+			elseif volpoint = 2:
+				volpoint = 2
+				volpointv = 0
 			end
 		end
 
+		'Final whistle.'
 		seealko = 0
 		if volpoint > volpointv:
 			volsesonwin += 1
@@ -857,34 +875,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 	'<center><img src="images/pics/dush.jpg"></center>'
 
 	if IvanShowerYes = 1 and rand(0,3) = 1:
-		'You enter the women''s shower and turning the water on begin to lather your body with a washcloth. Suddenly the door creaks and you remember that you agreed not to close it for Ivan. You look around and see, that threshold is Ivan Prokhorov considers you. "Hello <<$nickname>>. In the men`s shower all, so I`m back to you." Ivan smiled after these words.'
+		if ShowerIvan = 1: ShowerIvan = 2
+		'You entered the women''s shower and turning the water on you began to lather your body with a washcloth. Suddenly, you hear the door creak as it opened and you remember that you agreed not to lock it for Ivan. You looked around and see Ivan Prokhorov stand there looking at you. "Hello <<$nickname>>. The men''s shower is full, so I thought I would join you instead." Ivan smiled after these words.'
 		act 'Further':gt 'gdksport', 'ShowerWithIvan'
 	elseif kotovVSprohorov = 1:
 		kotovVSprohorov = 2
-		'You enter the women''s shower and turning the water on begin to lather your body with a washcloth. Suddenly, the door creaked and you remember that you forgot to close it. You looked back and saw that standing in the doorway Ivan Prokhorov and treat you. "Hi <<$name>>. Can I join? And then the men''s shower place." Ivan smiled after these words.'
-		act 'expel Ivan':
+		'You enter the women''s shower and turning the water on begin to lather your body with a washcloth. Suddenly, you hear the door creak as it opened and you remember that you forgot to lock it. You looked around and saw Ivan Prokhorov standing in the doorway looking at you. "Hi <<$name>>. Can I join you? The men''s shower is full." Ivan smiled after these words.'
+		act 'Throw Ivan out':
 			cls
 			IvanShowerQW = 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/shower1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You covered the chest hand and the other hand launched a washcloth in Ivan. He easily dodged the flying sponges and laughter came out of the shower. You locked the door and quickly domylis shower.'
+			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev/Shower1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You covered your chest with one hand and hurled your washcloth at Ivan. He easily dodged the flying cloth and laughed as he exited the shower room. You locked the door and quickly finished your shower.'
 				act 'Get out of the shower':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		end
 
 		act 'Uh, what?':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/shower2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Were you surprised like, and your insecurities Ivan regarded as consent. He went into the shower and closed the door behind him.'
+			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev/Shower2.jpg"></center>'
+			'Completely surprised and confused by Ivan''s sudden appearance, you are struck speachless. Ivan regarded your inaction and silence as consent. He came into the shower room and closed the door behind him.'
 
-		act 'Escape from the shower':IvanShowerQW = 1 & gt 'gdksport', 'start'
+			act 'Escape from the shower':
+				IvanShowerQW = 1 
+				cls
+				IvanShowerQW = 1
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev/Shower1.jpg"></center>'
+				'You cover your breasts with one hand as you quickly grab your towel and escape from the shower. As you ran into the changing room, you could hear Ivan laughing.'
+				gt 'gdksport', 'start'
+			end
 		act 'Wash together':
 			IvanShowerYes = 0
+			if ShowerIvan = 0: ShowerIvan = 1
 			gt 'gdksport', 'ShowerWithIvan'
 		end
 	end
 	else
-		'You enter the women''s shower and turning the water on begin to lather your body with a washcloth. After washed soap and washed her hair with shampoo. Rinse the shampoo you become completely clean.'
+		'You entered the women''s shower and turning the water on began to lather your body with a washcloth. After you rinsed off the soap, you washed your hair with shampoo. You rinsed out the shampoo and became completely clean.'
 		if (trenerlust >= 40 or trenersex = 1) and rand(0,3) = 0:
 			if VoltrenerVoyeur = 0:
 				gt 'VoltrenerSexShower', '0'
@@ -894,7 +922,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 				gt 'VoltrenerSexShower', '2'
 			end
 		end
-			'After a shower, you comb your hair and dressed.'
+			'After your shower, you combed your hair and dressed.'
 		act 'Get out of the shower':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 	end
 end
@@ -903,11 +931,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ShowerWithIvan':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
 	horny += 10
-	ShowerIvan = 1
 	gs'stat'
 
 	'<center><img src="images/pics/dush.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ivan took off his boxer shorts and went under a jet shower. His muscular body was very close to yours. You tried not to look at him but his eyes involuntarily dropped to his groin where hung thick cock. Ivan winked "Want to soap?"'
+	'Ivan took off his boxer shorts and wet himself under the shower. His muscular body was very close to yours. You tried not to look at him but your eyes involuntarily dropped to his groin where hung his thick cock. Ivan winked, "Want to wash me?"'
 
 	act 'lather Ivan':
 		cls
@@ -915,7 +942,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ShowerWithIvan':
 		horny += 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/shower.jpg"></center>'
-		'You took a washcloth and began to lather body of Ivan. His cock began to get up and touched your thigh. Ivan began to hug you and caress your body with your hands.'
+		'You took a washcloth and began to lather Ivan''s body. His cock began to rise up and touched your thigh. Ivan began to hug you and caress your body with his hands.'
 
 		act 'Give blowjob':
 			cls
@@ -927,18 +954,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ShowerWithIvan':
 
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/shover.jpg"></center>'
-			'You slowly sank to his knees in front of Ivan and his cock was in front of your face. Ivan spent impatiently you head lips mouth open and you let his cock. Your lips tightly wraps solid rod Ivan and you sucked in the shower under the streams of water. Suddenly Ivan took a member of your mouth and taking you by the hand raised to his feet, he dug his lips to your breast and began to suck. You swept bliss. Ivan turned your back to him and pushed you back.'
-			act 'To allow him to continue': 
+			'You slowly sank to your knees in front of Ivan and his cock was in front of your face. Ivan probed impatiently with the head of his cock against your lips. Your mouth opened almost against your will and you let his cock slide in. Your lips tightly wrapped around Ivan''s solid rod and you sucked him as the streams of warm water wash over you. Suddenly Ivan pulled his member out of your mouth and, taking you by the hand, raised you to your feet. He brought his lips to your breast and began to suck. Bliss swept over you as he suckled your stiff nipple. Releasing your nipple with a wet pop, Ivan pushed you back onto your knees and beent you backwards as he staddled your face, once again sliding his hot cock into your mouth. He began pushing it deeper into your throat.'
+			act 'Allow him to continue': 
 				cla & *clr
 				if throat<15: 
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/shower6.gif"></center>'
-					'Penetrating further and further into his mouth, then in the throat, member has blocked you breath and started to cause a gag reflex, hardly restrain himself, freeing her mouth from his dick and wiping my tears, you screamed at Vanya: "For me there is not a black hole, where are you shoving your Drin", - Vanya taking a guilty look, he began to kiss you, and caress your Breasts and ass, again you rosalea, turning to his back and pushing you on your back bent you to his ass.'
+					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev/shower6.gif"></center>'
+					'Penetrating further and further into your mouth, then into your throat, his member blocked you breath and started to cause a gag reflex, nearly causing you to vomit. Freeing your mouth from his dick and wiping your tears, you screamed at Ivan, "This isn''t some bottomless hole for you to shove your dick into, you know!" Ivan gave you a guilty look then he began to kiss you and caress your breasts and ass until you began to moan with desire. He turned you around then bent you over with your ass towards him.'
 				else 
-					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/shower7.gif"></center>'
-					'Penetrating further and further into his mouth, then in the throat, member is placed there without any problems, without causing you discomfort, and bringing Ivan  "heavenly delight", in any case, his groans and moans were talking about it. Feeling that a little-a little and a classmate will flood your throat with my seed, you pulled it out of his mouth, turned to van ass and leaned, you also wanted to get satisfaction.'
+					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev/shower7.gif"></center>'
+					'Penetrating further and further into your mouth, then into your throat, you take his member to the root without any problems and without causing you discomfort, and bringing Ivan "heavenly delight", if his groans and moans were any indication. Feeling that your classmate would flood your throat with his seed at any moment, you pulled your mouth off of his cock and turned and bent over, presenting your ass to Ivan. You also wanted some satisfaction.'
 				end
 
-				act 'stand cancer':
+				act 'stand doggy-style':
 					cls
 					IvanShowerQW = 10
 					minut += 5
@@ -948,14 +975,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ShowerWithIvan':
 					lubonus = 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/shover2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bent over and felt the hand of Ivan stroking your ass and anus.'
+					'You bent over and felt Ivan''s hand stroking your ass and anus.'
 					dynamic $analsex
 					cumspclnt = 1
 					gs 'cum_cleanup'
 					if VoltrenerVoyeur = 3:gt 'VoltrenerSexShower', '3'
 					if VoltrenerVoyeur = 4:gt 'VoltrenerSexShower', '4'
 					if VoltrenerVoyeur = 5:gt 'VoltrenerSexShower', '5'				
-					'Ivan pulls a member of your buttocks and you feel like you are on the back and buttocks land warm trickle of sperm.'
+					'Ivan pulls his member out of your ass and you feel the warm splatter of sperm on your back and ass cheeks.'
 
 					act 'Get out of the shower':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				end
@@ -972,7 +999,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fedor_date':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[numnpc]>> <<$npcSurName[numnpc]>></font></b></center>'
 	! WD: Remove Dupe Images ~ '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'The club you unexpectedly met Fedor Kozlov in your class. He smiled affably you "Hello <<$name>>. Hmm ... Here is the deal ... I have an extra ticket to the movies. Let''s go together."'
+	'You unexpectedly met Fedor Kozlov from your class as you entered the sports club. He smiled affably at you.' 
+	'"Hello <<$name>>. Hmm ... Here is the deal ... I have an extra ticket to the movies. Let''s go together."'
 
 	act 'Refuse':
 		cls
@@ -981,7 +1009,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fedor_date':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[numnpc]>> <<$npcSurName[numnpc]>></font></b></center>'
 		! WD: Remove Dupe Images ~ '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You refused to Fedor referring to employment. Fedor frowned. "Okay. Whereas some other time."'
+		'You told Fedor that you have too much to do and don''t have the time. Fedor frowned. "Okay. Maybe some other time."'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 	end
@@ -995,7 +1023,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fedor_date':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[numnpc]>> <<$npcSurName[numnpc]>></font></b></center>'
 		! WD: Remove Dupe Images ~ '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You agreed and delighted Fedor took you to a movie theater located in the park.'
+		'You agreed and Fedor was delighted. He took you to the movie theater located in the park.'
 
 		act 'Watch a movie':
 			cls
@@ -1005,7 +1033,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fedor_date':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[numnpc]>> <<$npcSurName[numnpc]>></font></b></center>'
 			! WD: Remove Dupe Images ~ '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'Fedor gave tickets at the entrance and you went into the hall. Soon the lights went out and started the movie. Fedor sat motionless and only occasionally glancing at you. Movie was quite interesting and you watched it with pleasure. When the movie ended, the hall lights were turned on and Fedor became accompany you. "<<$name>>. I like you. Maybe we could meet?"'
+			'Fedor presented the tickets at the entrance and you went into the theatre. Soon the lights went out and started the movie. Fedor sat motionless and only occasionally glancing at you. Movie was quite interesting and you watched it with pleasure. When the movie ended, the lights were turned on and Fedor walked you out. "<<$name>>. I like you. Maybe we could go out together?"'
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				cls
@@ -1016,7 +1044,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fedor_date':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[numnpc]>> <<$npcSurName[numnpc]>></font></b></center>'
 				! WD: Remove Dupe Images ~ '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'You refused to meet with him to Fedor and was invited to stay friends. Fedor visibly upand silently carried you home.'
+				'You refused to go out with him and said you wanted to just stay friends. Fedor was visibly upset and silently walked you home.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
 			end

+ 22 - 11
locations/gorodok

@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
 # gorodok
+!{Change log
+25 March 2016
+Fixed diplaced period after church link
+Fixed visting links to look the same
+Added start of Andrei kidnapping
+}
+
 $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
 $metkaStreet = $ARGS[0]
@@ -24,17 +31,9 @@ boynumBlock = 0
 '<center><h4>Pavlovsk<a href="exec:dynamic $objnewmenu">.</a></h4></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/etogame/gorodok.jpg"></center>'
 '<center>A quiet province town in a rural area of Russia. Population: about 10000 inhabitants.</center>'
-'<center>Apart from the old palace and fort, it looks much like all the other towns in the area. The tallest building in town is the <a href="exec:gt ''ParChurch'',''start''">church of St Nikolas</a></center>.'
+'<center>Apart from the old palace and fort, it looks much like all the other towns in the area. The tallest building in town is the <a href="exec:gt ''ParChurch'',''start''">church of St Nikolas.</a></center>'
 ''
 
-if flag_rape_1 = 1: 
-	flag_rape_1 = 0
-	'You stop under a street lamp hoping the bright light will protect you. Breathing hard and wincing from the pain in the pussy, you think, "Go home and immediately go to bed, no one will know, and I won`t tell anyone." You decide that you will not let this monster get to you.'
-elseif flag_rape_1 = 2: 
-	flag_rape_1 = 0
-	'You wake up from your thoughts in the center of town. You cannot understand your own behaviour, you got raped, but you enjoyed it so much that you orgasmed. You know this is wrong, but somehow you just can''t convince yourself. '
-end
-
 if marudatestinterface = 1:
 	!!!!!
 	!!! Transportation
@@ -340,13 +339,13 @@ if marudatestinterface = 0:
 
 ''
 if Enable_tablemap = 0:
-	if storyline = 1:'The Shulgin family live in the <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''shulgahome''">apartment</a> above your parents.'
+	if storyline = 1:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''shulgahome''">The Shulgin family</a> live in the apartment above your parents.'
 	if ArtemBeInHome > 0 and artemblok = 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artemhome''">Artem Chebotarev</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the same apartment building as your parents, on the first floor.'
 	if BeInJulMilHome = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour <= 20 and week < 6 or hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and week >= 6:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''JuliaMilVhod''">Julia Milova</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the same apartment building as your parents, on the third floor.'
 	if BeInNatBelHome = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour <= 20 and week < 6 or hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and week >= 6:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''NatBelHome''">Natasha Belova</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the same apartment building as your parents, on the fourth floor.'
 	if DimaBeHomeOnce = 1 and DimaRudeBlock = 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaGoHome2''">Dimka Nosov</a>, one of your classmates, lives in one of the fancier houses in town.'
 	if katjaFirstKiss >= 1:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''KatjaHome''">Katja Meynold</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the richer part of town.'
-	if LariskaHomeIn > 0: '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & GT ''LariskaHome''" class=plain>Larissa Gruzdev</a>, one of your classmates, lives about 15 minutes away from your parents.'
+	if LariskaHomeIn > 0: '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & GT ''LariskaHome''">Larissa Gruzdev</a>, one of your classmates, lives about 15 minutes away from your parents.'
 	if beinalbinahome > 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaporog''">Albina Barlovskaya</a>, one of your classmates, lives in one of the few luxurious mansions Pavlovsk has to offer.'
 else
 	st_count=0 & $show_table=''
@@ -422,6 +421,18 @@ if magik >= 1 and mainQW = 0 and altQS = 1:
 	exit
 end
 
+if storyline ! 0 and AndRev = 1 and hour >=22 and hour >=2 and rand(1,100) >= 90 and AndRevstart ! daystart:
+	cls
+	'<center><img src="images/qwest/main.jpg"></center>'
+	'It was late and you were hurring to get home when you are suddenly grabbed from behind. A large hand covered your mouth and you cannot scream. A powerful arm wrapped around your arms and chest and lifted you from your feet. You are dragged into an alleyeway between two buildings and the arm around you loosened for just a moment.' 
+	act 'Continue':
+		cls
+		'<center><img src="images/qwest/main.jpg"></center>'
+		'Before you could try to escape, you felt something sting your arm and you felt your body relax against your will. Just before your eyes closed and you lost consciousness, you heard a familiar voice rasp in your ear. "Now you''ll pay fro breaking my nose, you little slut."'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'boilerroom', 'start'
+	end
+end
+
 if rand (0,2) ! 0:gs 'din_bad' & dynamic $mobile_check
 
 --- gorodok ---------------------------------

+ 46 - 22
locations/volAndGev

@@ -1,31 +1,55 @@
 # volAndGev
-gs 'stat'
-! WD: Missing Code, Logic Var Uninitialised ~ 'andGevknow'
-if andGevknow = 0:
-	if vnesh < 15:
-		'The guy that something vaguely probubnel, of the text you''ve seen only the word bow-legged cow.'
-	else
-		'The guy smiled looking at you.'
-	end
+!{ Change log
+March 25, 2016
+fixed "goto"s to reflect new argument format
+added retaliation count and scene
+added trigger for Andrei kidnap event
+}
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
+	$metkaM = $ARGS[0]
+	$locM = $CURLOC
+	$metka = $ARGS[0]
+	$loc = $CURLOC
+	CLOSE ALL
+	gs 'stat'
+	if andGevknow = 0:
+		bumpK += 1
+		if vnesh < 15:
+			'The guy sneered at you and muttered something about a bow-legged cow.'
+		else
+			'The guy smiled, looking at you.'
+		end
 
-	if dom > 0:
-		act 'Swear Man':
-			cls
-			gs 'stat'
-			'You cursed Man, for what he roughly pushed you.'
+		if dom > 0:
+			act 'Swear at him':
+				cls
+				gs 'stat'
+				'You cursed at the guy for roughly pushing you.'
 
-			if vnesh < 15:
-				'What guy showed you fuck and smile.'
-			else
-				'To which the guy just shrugged.'
-			end
+				if vnesh < 15:	
+					'The guy flipped you the bird and smiled.'
+				else
+					'The guy just looked at you and shrugged.'
+				end
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
+				act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
+			end
 		end
 	end
-end
-
-!!if andGevknow > 0:!
+	
+	if bumpK >= 7 and dom >=10:
+		andGevknow = 1
+		gs 'stat'
+	
+		'You finally had enough. The same guy pushed you again and you lost it. You grabbed the ball and whipped it at him with all your strength, aiming at the back of his head.'
+		if rand(0,2) = 2:
+			AndRev = 1
+			'Unfortunately, he turned towards you just as you released the ball and it connected right on his nose. The cracking sound of his nose breaking could be clearly heard. Fortunately for you, no one really liked him and they all declared they saw nothing.'
+		else
+			'The ball connected with the back of his head and sent him head over heels. By the time he got back on his feet, you managed to make it look like you had been doing something else the entire time.'
+		end
+	
 
 act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'