Merge remote-tracking branch 'upstream/master' into minor-fixes

.gitignore

@@ -26,5 +26,8 @@ images.zip
 *.png
 
 #ignore Visual Studio build files
-tools/qsp-analyser/QSP_Analyser/[Bb]in/
-tools/qsp-analyser/QSP_Analyser/[Oo]bj/
+/tools/qsp-analyser/QSP_Analyser/[Bb]in/
+/tools/qsp-analyser/QSP_Analyser/[Oo]bj/
+
+#don't ignore this file
+!.gitignore

.gitlab-ci.yml

@@ -1,8 +0,0 @@
-build:
-  script:
-    - python3 txtmerge.py locations glife.txt
-    - ./txt2gam.linux glife.txt glife.qsp
-  artifacts:
-    name: "glife-dev-${CI_BUILD_ID}"
-    paths: ['glife.qsp']
-    expire_in: 1 week

build.sh

@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
 		<Location name="$attributes_cats_dress"/>
 		<Location name="$attributes_bomba_outfits"/>
 		<Location name="$attributes_bomba_dress"/>
-		<Location name="$attributes_misc_outfit"/>
+		<Location name="$attributes_misc_outfits"/>
 		<Location name="lost_clothes_here"/>
 		<Location name="portnoi"/>
 		<Location name="portnoi2"/>

insanity.sh

@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ $din_zajava_albfather_no2 = {
 		AlbinaQW['Chernov'] = 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/chernov.jpg"></center>'
-		'While a part of you wants to help, you don''t trust him and refuse to help. He sighs in resignation. "If that''s how it''s going to be, but just remember...You could have made that one bit of difference." He gets back in the car and it drives away.'
+		'While a part of you wants to help, you don''t trust him and refuse to help. He sighs in resignation. "If that''s how it''s going to be, but just remember... you could have made that one bit of difference." He gets back in the car and it drives away.'
 
 		act 'Call Albina':
 			*clr & cla

locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina4':
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'The girls turn on their stereo and start dancing. It immediately becomes clear to you that they dance professionally, obviously better than you. Albina alone dances much better than you can. It is obvious that they have practiced this routine many times as their movements are closely synchronized with no wasted effort.'
-	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls....take a breather."'
-	'She comes up to you, breathless. "You see...We are pros...Real dancers. We are "The Starlets". We do shows and have even been in a music video."'
+	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls... take a breather."'
+	'She comes up to you, breathless. "You see... We are pros... Real dancers. We are "The Starlets". We do shows and have even been in a music video."'
 
 	if pregtime >= 90:
 		'You might try out for them after you''ve had your child.'
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina4':
 						'Finally, she answers. "Okay, we''ll take a shot. Maybe you''ll learn something and be worthwhile. We practice every day except Tuesday and Thursday, so don''t be late."'
 						'When the other girls leave, Albina pulls you aside. "Hey, are you ''pure''?" she whispers.'
 						'"Why would you want to know such a personal thing?" you reply as you blush.'
-						'"Oh, it''s...nothing. I just...look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
+						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
 						AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] = 1
 					else
 						'"Well, am I good enough to join?" you ask.'
@@ -208,8 +208,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'The girls turn on their stereo and start dancing. It immediately becomes clear to you that they dance professionally, but only slightly better than you. Only Albina outmatches your ability. It is obvious that they have practiced this routine many times as their movements are closely synchronized with no wasted effort.'
-	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls....take a breather."'
-	'She comes up to you, breathless. "These are...My Starlets. We do... professional shows and... have been in a music video..."'
+	'When the music ends, Albina says "Okay girls... take a breather."'
+	'She comes up to you, breathless. "These are... my Starlets. We do... professional shows and... have been in a music video..."'
 
 	if pregtime >= 90:
 		'You might try out for them after you''ve had your child.'
@@ -228,20 +228,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You begin to dance to the music and put very little effort into your moves before the other girls are pointing and talking to each other, intrigued by your skill. When the music stops, Albina walks up to you.'
 				'You stand panting before her as she gleefully claps. "I knew you could it!" she says.'
-				'"Do...what?" you reply.'
+				'"Do... what?" you reply.'
 				'"We''ve been dancing together for years <<$pcs_nickname>>, so I had no doubts about you. The others here, they wanted to see you first. They didn''t believe me when I said you were <i>almost</i> as good as me."'
 				act 'You are a Starlet?!':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
-					'"You...mean...I''m a...Starlet?" you ask as you continue panting.'
+					'"You... mean... I''m a... Starlet?" you ask as you continue panting.'
 					'"Well of course you are! I can''t let someone as good as you go to waste on these amateurs. We practice every day except for Tuesday and Thursday, so don''t be late!" Albina replies.'
 					AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] = 1
 					!! If Sveta is virgin
 					if pcs_vag = 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
 						'When the other girls leave, Albina pulls you aside. "Hey, are you ''pure''?" she whispers.'
 						'"Why would you want to know such a personal thing?" you reply as you blush.'
-						'"Oh, it''s...nothing. I just...look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
+						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				end
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 					end
 
 					if AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] <= 6:
-						'Albina walks up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we... We need to...To talk." she quietly stammers.'
+						'Albina walks up to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we... We need to... to talk." she quietly stammers.'
 						act 'About what?':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 15
@@ -365,11 +365,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 							'You can see a little bit of fear in Albina''s eyes as you ask her what''s wrong.'
 
 							if AlbinaQW['StarletsCustomerCount'] = 1:
-								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just...see that guy? If you go with him and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
-								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just...please."'
+								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just... see that guy? If you go with him and be... ''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
+								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just... please."'
 							else
-								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just..see those guys? If you go with them and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
-								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just...please."'
+								'Albina avoids eye contact. "Nothing, it''s just... see those guys? If you go with them and be...''affectionate''" she says hesitantly, "you will get <<AlbinaQW[''StarletPay'']*1000>> <b>₽</b>."'
+								'She looks you in the eye, the fear within her apparently growing. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need you to do this for me. Just... please."'
 							end
 							
 							gs 'willpower', 'prostitution', 'resist', 'hard'
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore4':
 		cls
 		guy += 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackbj.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The man sits on a sofa and asks you to give him a striptease. You comply and after you''ve stripped nude, you kneel between his legs and unzip his pants. "Oh.My.God!" you exclaim as you pull his massive cock out. You stare in bewilderment and compare the length and thickness of his shaft to your forearm.'
+		'The man sits on a sofa and asks you to give him a striptease. You comply and after you''ve stripped nude, you kneel between his legs and unzip his pants. "Oh. My. God!" you exclaim as you pull his massive cock out. You stare in bewilderment and compare the length and thickness of his shaft to your forearm.'
 		'"You like what you see baby? Go on." he chuckles.'
 		'Wide eyed, you wrap your hands around his shaft and slowly jerk it before taking it into your mouth. You suck and jerk the monster cock as the thought of it being inside you enters your mind.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'

locations/BDsex.qsrc

@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'autobj':
 	if pcs_horny >= 100:
 		pcs_mood += 15
 
-		'As you suck the dick before you, a fire smolders between your legs, building into a conflagration of orgasm. you moan around the cock in your mouth, never once slowing your pace.'
+		'As you suck the dick before you, a fire smolders between your legs, building into a conflagration of orgasm. You moan around the cock in your mouth, never once slowing your pace.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', -5, 'sub'
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/BelSex.qsrc

@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal1':
 	belact -= 1
 	anal_temp += 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/anal/piledriver/kotovsexanal36.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'<<$boydesc>> begins rubbing the tip of his dick against you anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>> cm cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away, but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his dick as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering away.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> begins rubbing the tip of his dick against your anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>> cm cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away, but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his dick as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering away.'
 	'"All the other girls I''ve fucked over the years loved getting their ass destroyed," he informs you between slaps of flesh against flesh. "I hope you don''t mind." The only response you manage to let out is a little squeak as if you''re giving him permission to continue on, not that he needs it.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'rough'
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal1':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		picrand = rand(1,2)
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. He huffs and puffs quite heavily now. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips, his movements more erratic, and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles from you asshole once he pulls out his cock.'
+		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. He huffs and puffs quite heavily now. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips, his movements more erratic, and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles from your asshole once he pulls out his cock.'
 
 		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end

locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 								fat += 4
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/kafe.jpg"></center>'
-								'Sergei takes you to a local restaurant not far from work. he orders food and drinks for both of you, after you find a table. Soon you are chatting, eating and drinking wine with Sergei. Before you realize it, you start feeling a little tipsy, but the conversation is still pleasant enough. When you are finished Sergei pays for everything, and invites you back to his place.'
+								'Sergei takes you to a local restaurant not far from work. He orders food and drinks for both of you, after you find a table. Soon you are chatting, eating and drinking wine with Sergei. Before you realize it, you start feeling a little tipsy, but the conversation is still pleasant enough. When you are finished Sergei pays for everything, and invites you back to his place.'
 						
 								act 'Let him down easy':
 									*clr&cla
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 										if preziktype = 2:
 											sexcontra = 7
 											'Anatoly reaches for a condom, but you stop him. "Please, allow me," you say.
-											You fish out one of the sabotaged condoms from your purse, and put it on him using you mouth. He then lies back on the bench. You straddle him ready to fuck his brains out, and maybe more you think with a wicked little thrill.'
+											You fish out one of the sabotaged condoms from your purse, and put it on him using your mouth. He then lies back on the bench. You straddle him ready to fuck his brains out, and maybe more you think with a wicked little thrill.'
 										else
 											sexcontra = 3
 											'Anatoly puts a condom on saying, "You can never be too careful. My wife would kill me if I knocked up some sweet young thing." He then grabs you by the hand pulling you on top of him. You throw a leg over and sit on top of him, ready for action.'
@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan_work':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/work.jpg"></center>'
 	'The senior manager Ivan shows up in your office.'
-	'Ivan grins, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I would have never imagined this from a sweet young thing like you." He puts a photo on your desk. You pick it up, and take a look. <<$BurgerQW[''IvanQWBlackmailPhoto'']>>. Ivan is looking at you like a cat about to catch a mouse: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we can''t have this our boss has aims at a career in politics. If something like this were to get out it would it would...well we can''t let that happen. I''m afraid you are just going to have to quit. Anatoly can''t be known as a man who keeps a slutty secretary."' 
+	'Ivan grins, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I would have never imagined this from a sweet young thing like you." He puts a photo on your desk. You pick it up, and take a look. <<$BurgerQW[''IvanQWBlackmailPhoto'']>>. Ivan is looking at you like a cat about to catch a mouse: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we can''t have this our boss has aims at a career in politics. If something like this were to get out it would it would... well we can''t let that happen. I''m afraid you are just going to have to quit. Anatoly can''t be known as a man who keeps a slutty secretary."' 
 	
 	act 'Plead with him not to show the pictures': gt 'BurgerTip', 'ivan_work2'
 

locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -18,6 +18,17 @@ $cheatmenu['work'] = {
 	end
 }
 
+$cheatmenu['willpower'] = {
+	if cheatWillpower = 0:
+		cheatWillpower = 1
+		dynamic $cheatmenu['permanent']
+		exit
+	elseif cheatWillpower = 1:
+		cheatWillpower = 0
+		dynamic $cheatmenu['permanent']
+	end
+}
+
 $cheatmenu['hair'] = {
 	if cheatHapri = 0:
 		cheatHapri = 1
@@ -434,6 +445,8 @@ $cheatmenu['permanent'] = {
 	gs 'obj_din', 'cheattabs'
 	if cheatWork = 0:$cheatWork = 'Currently OFF'
 	if cheatWork = 1:$cheatWork = 'Currently ON'
+	if cheatWillpower = 0:$cheatWillpower = 'Currently OFF'
+	if cheatWillpower = 1:$cheatWillpower = 'Currently ON'
 	if cheatHapri = 0:$cheatHapri = 'Currently OFF'
 	if cheatHapri = 1:$cheatHapri = 'Currently ON'
 	if cheatKlisma = 1:$cheatKlisma = 'Currently OFF'
@@ -492,6 +505,7 @@ $cheatmenu['permanent'] = {
 	'<center><table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top"><tr>'
 	'<td width="450" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
 	'More than one job is possible: <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''work'']"><<$cheatWork>></a>'
+	'Willpower cost always zero: <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''willpower'']"><<$cheatWillpower>></a>'
 	'Always combed: <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''hair'']"><<$cheatHapri>></a>'
 	'Cosmetics never smeared: <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''nomakeup'']"><<$cheatNomakeup>></a>'
 	'Never sweat: <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''nosweat'']"><<$cheatNoSweat>></a>'
@@ -1389,7 +1403,7 @@ $cheatmenu['reputation'] = {
 		'<font color="red"><b>WARNING</b></font>: Clearing reputation flags with your family may cause bugs. Use at your own risk!'
 		*nl
 		if motherKnowWhore > 0:
-			'Your mother knows, that you are sexually active and considers you are whore. <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear both reputations</a>    <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear only whore reputation</a>'
+			'Your mother knows, that you are sexually active and considers you are a whore. <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear both reputations</a>    <a href="exec:motherKnowWhore = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear only whore reputation</a>'
 		elseif motherKnowSpravka > 0:
 			'Your mother knows that you are sexually active. <a href="exec:motherKnowSpravka = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''reputation'']">Clear</a>'
 		else

locations/FedorEv.qsrc

@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gorslut':
 			gs 'stat'	
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m sorry Fedor but I enjoy the attention of men and I''m not really one for commitment. I thought you understood this." Fedor lowers his head clearly upset but after a few seconds he raises his head then looks in your eyes and says, "I guess what we had was a lie then...Go be with as many men as you want, I won''t hold you back anymore." he takes a few steps back, never breaking eye contact with you until he suddenly turns away and walks off.'
+			'"I''m sorry Fedor but I enjoy the attention of men and I''m not really one for commitment. I thought you understood this." Fedor lowers his head clearly upset but after a few seconds he raises his head then looks in your eyes and says, "I guess what we had was a lie then... Go be with as many men as you want, I won''t hold you back anymore." he takes a few steps back, never breaking eye contact with you until he suddenly turns away and walks off.'
 			
 			act 'Move away':
 				if $loc = 'gschool_lunch':
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 		fedorkozqw = 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/hold.jpg"></center>'
-		'You giggle lightly then tell Fedor "I would love to go with you and watch some movies that I''m sure you downloaded...legally" as you grin at him he says, "Yeah..about that..." which causes both of you to laugh simultaneously. Fedor then wraps his arm gently around your neck and leads you to his house.'	
+		'You giggle lightly then tell Fedor "I would love to go with you and watch some movies that I''m sure you downloaded... legally" as you grin at him he says, "Yeah.. about that..." which causes both of you to laugh simultaneously. Fedor then wraps his arm gently around your neck and leads you to his house.'	
 		
 		act 'Go with Fedor to his home':gt 'FedorEv2', 'Home'
 	end

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park Walk':
 		FedorLuv -= 2						
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Nah, I''m too old for that, Let''s find something more my age." Fedor''s smile melts away as he responds, "Sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I didn''t mean to...Let''s just forget I asked." and you both continue walking together in silence.'
+		'"Nah, I''m too old for that, Let''s find something more my age." Fedor''s smile melts away as he responds, "Sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I didn''t mean to... let''s just forget I asked." and you both continue walking together in silence.'
 
 		act 'Continue your walk': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Train Tracks'				
 	end		
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Train Tracks':
 		FedorLuv += 2			
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/park/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you stare into Fedor''s eyes you see a look of desire in his eyes and you can almost feel how badly he wants you which causes your heart to race and unable to resist you further, Fedor moves in and kisses you passionately, massaging your lips with his while never breaking eye contact. You occasionally feel his breath on your upper lip, his hands on your hips ans his lips on yours. the passionate kiss lasts for what feels like an hour until Fedor slowly lowers you to your feet as he whispers in your ear "<<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve never met a girl like you, I feel like I can relax around you" Fedor then lowers you back to you feet "I had a great time with you but I should really get you home before it gets too late. I wouldn''t want your parents to scorn me but feel free to meet me after school whenever you would like to go out again." Fedor says, as he takes your hand and walks you home.'
+		'As you stare into Fedor''s eyes you see a look of desire in his eyes and you can almost feel how badly he wants you which causes your heart to race and unable to resist you further, Fedor moves in and kisses you passionately, massaging your lips with his while never breaking eye contact. You occasionally feel his breath on your upper lip, his hands on your hips ans his lips on yours. The passionate kiss lasts for what feels like an hour until Fedor slowly lowers you to your feet as he whispers in your ear "<<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve never met a girl like you, I feel like I can relax around you" Fedor then lowers you back to you feet "I had a great time with you but I should really get you home before it gets too late. I wouldn''t want your parents to scorn me but feel free to meet me after school whenever you would like to go out again." Fedor says, as he takes your hand and walks you home.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 		gs 'stat'			
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cinema':
 			pcs_breath = 0				
 			gs 'stat'				
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/seat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. as you both get settled in Fedor hands you your popcorn and snacks then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
+			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. As you both get settled in Fedor hands you your popcorn and snacks then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
 		
 			act 'Watch the movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movies 2'
 		end	
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cinema':
 			pcs_breath = 0				
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/seat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. as you both get settled in Fedor hands you a bag of popcorn then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
+			'You enter the theater to see it pretty packed and Fedor leads you to the back corner row where there are 4 empty seats. As you both get settled in Fedor hands you a bag of popcorn then the lights start to dim and the advertisments start up meaning the movie is getting ready to start.'
 
 			act 'Watch the movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movies 2' 
 		end	
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 2':
 			FedorLuv -= 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/turnaway.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Fedor leans in for a kiss, You turn away, pretending not to notice and continue watching the movie. After a few seconds you glance over to Fedor to see a really disappointed look on his face as he continues watching the movie in silence.'
+			'As Fedor leans in for a kiss, you turn away, pretending not to notice and continue watching the movie. After a few seconds you glance over to Fedor to see a really disappointed look on his face as he continues watching the movie in silence.'
 
 			act 'Finish watching movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movie 3'
 		end
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/endbye.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You tell Fedor that you need to go and he wraps his arms around you, giving you a warm hug as he replies, "I understand, maybe next time." and he walks you home. Fedor fetches your coat and walks you out the door. When you arrive at your apartment, You give Fedor a soft kiss on the cheek. "Until next time." as you give him a wink and close the door.'
+				'You tell Fedor that you need to go and he wraps his arms around you, giving you a warm hug as he replies, "I understand, maybe next time." and he walks you home. Fedor fetches your coat and walks you out the door. When you arrive at your apartment, you give Fedor a soft kiss on the cheek. "Until next time." as you give him a wink and close the door.'
 								
 				act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
 			end
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/bj.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You gently push Fedor onto the bed and he lays back anxiously waiting to see what you do next and you climb on the bed and start licking his dick and then begin sucking his hard cock causing him to moan softly. you occasionally pull it out and lick the length of his penis to keep him from cumming too quickly. After a few moments he sits up and lifts you up by you shoulders and drops you onto the bed on your back.'			
+					'You gently push Fedor onto the bed and he lays back anxiously waiting to see what you do next and you climb on the bed and start licking his dick and then begin sucking his hard cock causing him to moan softly. You occasionally pull it out and lick the length of his penis to keep him from cumming too quickly. After a few moments he sits up and lifts you up by you shoulders and drops you onto the bed on your back.'			
 					*nl	
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'	
 					gs 'stat'						
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vaginal Sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you feel Fedor start breathing rapidly and then his breath stops, he then quickly pulls out of you and groans as he cums all over your stomach. Squirt after squirt, Fedor drains his penis over your stomach, he takes a second to catch his breath, then tells you "You were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>" as he wipes the sweat off his forehead. You take a few seconds to catch your breath then respond, "You were great as well...Thank you."'
+			'After a few minutes you feel Fedor starting to breathe rapidly and then his breathing stops. He then quickly pulls out of you and groans as he cums all over your stomach. Squirt after squirt, Fedor drains his penis over your stomach. He takes a second to catch his breath, then tells you "you were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>", as he wipes the sweat off his forehead. You take a few seconds to catch your breath before you respond, "you were great as well... thank you."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 			gs 'stat'				
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virgintalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?...ohh you mean ...I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
+	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?... ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
 	
 	act 'Lose Virginity <b><h4><font color=#ff00cc>[Go steady]</font></h4></b>':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginvag2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Fedor stops for a moment to make sure that you are alright. Fedor rubs your cheek with his hand and then starts to thrust. You feel you vagina stretching for his <<dick>> centimeter penis and as he continues to thrust you feel the pain fade and pleasure take its place as you lay back and enjoy the pleasure building up.'
+			'Fedor stops for a moment to make sure that you are alright. Fedor rubs your cheek with his hand and then starts to thrust. You feel your vagina stretching for his <<dick>> centimeter penis and as he continues to thrust you feel the pain fade and pleasure take its place as you lay back and enjoy the pleasure building up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'	
 			
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/cowgirlkiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You return his kiss as you continue to thrust yourself up and down and soon you feel the pleasure that was building erupt and suddenly all your muscles tenses up, and you feel a warm heat in your groin and your breath stops then suddenly you feel a burst of pleasure erupt inside you. Unable to think of anything but the pleasure you moan so loudly you are almost screaming and you ride out this intense feeling. when it is over you realize that you have just had your first vaginal orgasm then suddenly Fedor pushes you on your back.'
+					'You return his kiss as you continue to thrust yourself up and down and soon you feel the pleasure that was building erupt and suddenly all your muscles tenses up, and you feel a warm heat in your groin and your breath stops then suddenly you feel a burst of pleasure erupt inside you. Unable to think of anything but the pleasure you moan so loudly you are almost screaming and you ride out this intense feeling. When it is over you realize that you have just had your first vaginal orgasm then suddenly Fedor pushes you on your back.'
 					*nl	
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/orgasm.mp4"></video></center>'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met...Thank you for letting me be your first, you were amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
+						'Fedor groans while jerking his cock over your stomach as you lay back enjoying the warmth of his seed washing over you. You can''t help but feel great joy seeing Fedor so blissful. After Fedor''s finishes, he looks down at you with an adoring gaze as he tells you. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, You are the sexiest girl I''ve ever met... thank you for letting me be your first, you were amazing." and you respond. "You were incredible Fyodor, I will never forget this day." and he leans forward and gives you a gentle kiss.'
 						*nl	
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginanal.jpg"></center>'
-	'"If I lose my virginity now then my mother will kill me but I guess you can...do my ass if you like." Fedor gives you a warm smile. "It''s ok I know how tough parents can be." he kisses you then flips you on your stomach as he licks his fingers and lubricates your asshole. After a few seconds you can feel Fedor''s penis pressing against your anus.'
+	'"If I lose my virginity now then my mother will kill me but I guess you can... do my ass if you like." Fedor gives you a warm smile. "It''s ok, I know how tough parents can be." he kisses you then flips you on your stomach as he licks his fingers and lubricates your asshole. After a few seconds you can feel Fedor''s penis pressing against your anus.'
 	
 	act 'Anal':
 		*clr & cla			
@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Skate Kiss':
 	pcs_mood += 20
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/skate/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slow down the speed of your skating then turn to face Fedor and look into his eyes. You slowly lean your head forward toward his as he does the same. After a second you feel his lips pressed against yours. You and Fedor enjoy a long kiss. After a minute you both pull away from each other then Fedor says, "I had a great time with you <<$pcs_firstname>>. would you like me to walk you home or will you be fine on your own?"'
+	'You slow down the speed of your skating then turn to face Fedor and look into his eyes. You slowly lean your head forward toward his as he does the same. After a second you feel his lips pressed against yours. You and Fedor enjoy a long kiss. After a minute you both pull away from each other then Fedor says, "I had a great time with you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Would you like me to walk you home or will you be fine on your own?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 	gs 'stat'		
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park 2':
 				FedorLuv += 2
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/swing2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take Fedor''s hand and pull his face down toward yours then tilt your head forward, planting your lips on his, in a passionate show of affection. You can feel his tongue enter your mouth as you caress it with yours, feeling some of his saliva dripping into your mouth as you swallow it eagerly while completely lost in the moment. After a minute of passion, Fedor slowly pulls away and says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you are so beautiful and your tongue...so soft." You give him a smile followed by a wink then grab his shoulders, using them to pull yourself to your feet.'
+				'You take Fedor''s hand and pull his face down toward yours then tilt your head forward, planting your lips on his, in a passionate show of affection. You can feel his tongue enter your mouth as you caress it with yours, feeling some of his saliva dripping into your mouth as you swallow it eagerly while completely lost in the moment. After a minute of passion, Fedor slowly pulls away and says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you are so beautiful and your tongue... so soft." You give him a smile followed by a wink then grab his shoulders, using them to pull yourself to your feet.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'	
 				gs 'stat'		

locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Back Caught':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cinema/sex/kinosex9.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You spread your legs and feel Fedor enter you, causing you to moan lightly and Fedor start to thrust faster. You completely forget where you are as you enjoy Fedor roughly fucking your pussy until he lets out a muffled groan as he pulls out of you and paints your stomach with his seed. You open your eyes to see a flashlight shined on you, then Fedor exclaims. "Oh shit!" as many people in the theater are staring at both of you. You quickly put on you pants while trying to cover yourself as much as possible then you and Fedor quickly walk out of the theater.'
+	'You spread your legs and feel Fedor enter you, causing you to moan lightly and Fedor start to thrust faster. You completely forget where you are as you enjoy Fedor roughly fucking your pussy until he lets out a muffled groan as he pulls out of you and paints your stomach with his seed. You open your eyes to see a flashlight shined on you, then Fedor exclaims. "Oh shit!" as many people in the theater are staring at both of you. You quickly put on your pants while trying to cover yourself as much as possible then you and Fedor quickly walk out of the theater.'
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy, 1
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'	
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Restroom':
 		act 'Front':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/fedor/fedrestf1.jpg"></center>'	
-			'Fedor lifts you up to your feet with almost no effort then pulls down you shirt exposing your breasts, he then lifts you up by your waist and places you on the sink where he inserts his <<dick>> centimeter penis into you pussy. Fedor starts slow then begins to pick up the pace.'
+			'Fedor lifts you up to your feet with almost no effort then pulls down you shirt exposing your breasts, he then lifts you up by your waist and places you on the sink where he inserts his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your pussy. Fedor starts slow then begins to pick up the pace.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Lady':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/ladies/lady7.jpg"></center>'
-							'The pleasure begins building quickly as you close your eyes, surrendering yourself to the pleasure and soon you feel your entire body begin to heat up as you reach your breaking point. You suddenly feel your muscles stiffen as you hit an explosive orgasm causing your body to twitch and spasm as her soft tongue continues massaging your clit. You ride out your orgasm then take a few seconds to catch your breath before opening your eyes to see the woman''s face in front of yours as she says,"It looks like you enjoyed yourself. I guess I still have it. I have to go now but I had a great time and I do hope to see you again." she then gets dressed and leaves the restroom.'
+							'The pleasure begins building quickly as you close your eyes, surrendering yourself to the pleasure and soon you feel your entire body begin to heat up as you reach your breaking point. You suddenly feel your muscles stiffen as you hit an explosive orgasm causing your body to twitch and spasm as her soft tongue continues massaging your clit. You ride out your orgasm then take a few seconds to catch your breath before opening your eyes to see the woman''s face in front of yours as she says, "It looks like you enjoyed yourself. I guess I still have it. I have to go now but I had a great time and I do hope to see you again." she then gets dressed and leaves the restroom.'
 							*nl	
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/ladies/kiss1.jpg"></center>'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Guy in restroom', rand(19,45)
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/scene5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up behind him and wait for him to finish peeing then you reach out and grab his penis. The man jumps up obviously surprised, He quickly turns to face you with a shocked look on his face but after looking you up and down he smiles and lays against the wall and enjoys your touch gently stroking your hair as you continue to slowly stroke his penis.'
+			'You walk up behind him and wait for him to finish peeing then you reach out and grab his penis. The man jumps up obviously surprised, he quickly turns to face you with a shocked look on his face but after looking you up and down he smiles and lays against the wall and enjoys your touch gently stroking your hair as you continue to slowly stroke his penis.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'					
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -843,7 +843,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 						*clr & cla				
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/cumface1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You quickly pull off him and get on your knees in front of him as he groans then paints your face with his seed. He continues to spray his load in your face until he has nothing left, he then takes a few seconds to catch his breath while admiring the view. You begin wiping the cum off of your eyelids as the man says, "Whoa, I must be the luckiest guy in the world right now, You were amazing girl. I hope we meet again." he then pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
+						'You quickly pull off him and get on your knees in front of him as he groans then paints your face with his seed. He continues to spray his load in your face until he has nothing left, he then takes a few seconds to catch his breath while admiring the view. You begin wiping the cum off of your eyelids as the man says, "Whoa, I must be the luckiest guy in the world right now, you were amazing girl. I hope we meet again." he then pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face'						
 						gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'					
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 						*clr & cla				
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. you can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, You are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
+						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. You can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, you are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus'							
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'dom'					
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Rape':
 			minut -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/mensrape3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'He then grabs you by the hair and pulls you up to his dick. You try your best to break free but he is too strong, Just as he lifts his hand to slap you, You raise your hand in submission and then wrap your lips around his cock doing your best to satisfy him, so that this can end as quickly as possible. He then says, "You''re starting to understand your place. Good! Now get up bitch!"'
+			'He then grabs you by the hair and pulls you up to his dick. You try your best to break free but he is too strong, Just as he lifts his hand to slap you, you raise your hand in submission and then wrap your lips around his cock doing your best to satisfy him, so that this can end as quickly as possible. He then says, "You''re starting to understand your place. Good! Now get up bitch!"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough'	
 			gs 'stat'				
 			
@@ -1045,7 +1045,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'	
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang2.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I didn''t mean to interrupt. Can I please go." One of the guys grins. "You can go...After we''re done with you." He then lunges into the stall and grabs you by the throat and whispers in your ear "I bet you came in here hoping to get caught, so that you can get a good fucking. Well we''ll give you a fucking you''ll never forget." he then pulls you out of the stall where the other guys are waiting with their cocks in their hand.'
+				'"I didn''t mean to interrupt. Can I please go." One of the guys grins. "You can go... after we''re done with you." He then lunges into the stall and grabs you by the throat and whispers in your ear "I bet you came in here hoping to get caught, so that you can get a good fucking. Well we''ll give you a fucking you''ll never forget." he then pulls you out of the stall where the other guys are waiting with their cocks in their hand.'
 
 				act 'Submit':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -1064,7 +1064,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 						minut -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang4.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you are sucking, The guy behind you shoves his dick into your vagina causing a rush of pain and pleasure. The pain quickly subsides and you start to actually feel less afraid as you enjoy the pleasure build up. You can hear one of the guys say, "Hey look at her. I think she''s starting to like it." and another responds, "I knew she was a dirty whore when I saw her." the words offend you at first but begin to excite you as you continue getting fucked.'
+						'As you are sucking, the guy behind you shoves his dick into your vagina causing a rush of pain and pleasure. The pain quickly subsides and you start to actually feel less afraid as you enjoy the pleasure build up. You can hear one of the guys say, "Hey look at her. I think she''s starting to like it." and another responds, "I knew she was a dirty whore when I saw her." the words offend you at first but begin to excite you as you continue getting fucked.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 						gs 'stat'							
@@ -1074,7 +1074,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 							minut -= 10
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang5.jpg"></center>'
-							'One of the guys grabs you by your legs and lifts you up as another one lays under you then you feel a sharp sting in your ass as you are lowered onto a guy''s dick. You let out a pained grunt as you feel another guy''s dick enter you vagina and one in your mouth so you continue sucking trying your best to make them cum, so that they will no longer need you and hopefully let you go.'
+							'One of the guys grabs you by your legs and lifts you up as another one lays under you then you feel a sharp sting in your ass as you are lowered onto a guy''s dick. You let out a pained grunt as you feel another guy''s dick enter your vagina and one in your mouth so you continue sucking trying your best to make them cum, so that they will no longer need you and hopefully let you go.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'									
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
@@ -1341,7 +1341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 3':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
 	end		
-	'Fedor walks you home and you both spend the whole time talking about the movie and some future films you both want to see. After a few minutes you are right in front of your building and Fedor gives your ass a grab as he says, to you "<<$pcs_firstname>> I hope you had as much fun as I had. I can''t wait to see you again." You respond, "Don''t worry Fedor, You won''t have to wait long." as you kiss him and then walk away with a confident smile.'
+	'Fedor walks you home and you both spend the whole time talking about the movie and some future films you both want to see. After a few minutes you are right in front of your building and Fedor gives your ass a grab as he says, to you "<<$pcs_firstname>> I hope you had as much fun as I had. I can''t wait to see you again." You respond, "Don''t worry Fedor, you won''t have to wait long." as you kiss him and then walk away with a confident smile.'
 	*nl	
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/kiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 

locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hall Sex':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/hall/sex/hall4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Fedor grabs your leg and lifts it up on his shoulders, giving himself better access to you pussy as he continues caressing your clitoris at an increased pace, trying his best to give you an orgasm. You tilt your head back and say, "Ohh yes Fedor, just like that." as he continues to pick up the pace making you feel weak in the knees as his strong arms hold you up.'
+			'Fedor grabs your leg and lifts it up on his shoulders, giving himself better access to your pussy as he continues caressing your clitoris at an increased pace, trying his best to give you an orgasm. You tilt your head back and say, "Ohh yes Fedor, just like that." as he continues to pick up the pace making you feel weak in the knees as his strong arms hold you up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3Way':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You scold Fedor and as you state "I''m not that kind of girl Fedor!" He stammers as he responds, "I didn''t mean to imply that you... I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan then responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>. It was just a joke. I wouldn''t want to come in between you...Or would I?" he then laughs as he walks away. You get dressed then grab Fedor by the hand. "It''s alright Fedor, I know you care for me, so I''m willing to look past this." as you give Fedor a sweet smile while leading him to the livingroom.'
+			'You scold Fedor and as you state "I''m not that kind of girl Fedor!" He stammers as he responds, "I didn''t mean to imply that you... I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>." Ivan then responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>. It was just a joke. I wouldn''t want to come in between you... or would I?" he then laughs as he walks away. You get dressed then grab Fedor by the hand. "It''s alright Fedor, I know you care for me, so I''m willing to look past this." as you give Fedor a sweet smile while leading him to the livingroom.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			
 			act 'Go with Fedor':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Home 2'
@@ -301,9 +301,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way1':
 					IvanPregChat = 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed4.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick and Fedor responds, "Sure thing." Ivan then turns to Fedor. "You''re gonna get <<$pcs_nickname>> pregnant...Well If that''s what you want but don''t go asking me to babysit for you." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat while you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of you, causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed.'
+					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick and Fedor responds, "Sure thing." Ivan then turns to Fedor. "You''re gonna get <<$pcs_nickname>> pregnant... well If that''s what you want but don''t go asking me to babysit for you." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat while you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of you, causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed.'
 					*nl
-					'You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan talking. "Dude I can''t believe you''re already knocking up a girl. Do your parents know?" Fedor shakes his head. "Nah man, You have to keep quiet about this or my mother will freak out." Ivan responds, "No problem man but I''d be more worried about <<$pcs_firstname>>''s parents finding out, if I were you" Fedor remains silent as Ivan pats him on the back. "Don''t let it get it you down. I''m sure It will all work out in the end." and then he gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor sits still for a second before turning to you. "Let''s get you washed up <<$pcs_nickname>>." then carries you to the bathroom.'
+					'You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan talking. "Dude I can''t believe you''re already knocking up a girl. Do your parents know?" Fedor shakes his head. "Nah man, you have to keep quiet about this or my mother will freak out." Ivan responds, "No problem man but I''d be more worried about <<$pcs_firstname>>''s parents finding out, if I were you" Fedor remains silent as Ivan pats him on the back. "Don''t let it get it you down. I''m sure It will all work out in the end." and then he gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor sits still for a second before turning to you. "Let''s get you washed up <<$pcs_nickname>>." then carries you to the bathroom.'
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way2':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You turn to Ivan, letting Fedors dick slide out of your mouth but then extend your hand to jerk him off as you respond, "I want you both to fill me up." Ivan grins. "Hell yeah <<$pcs_firstname>> I''ll fill you up real good." he then rapidly increases his pace and soon Ivan grabs your hips tightly as he pumps his load into your ass, doing his best to fill your ass to the brim with his seed. Soon after Fedor groans as he shoots his load down your throat which you swallow obediently, savoring every drop. When they both finish with you, they begin chatting with each other. "<<$pcs_nickname>> is a great catch. You need to hold onto this one Fey."'
 				*nl
-				'Fedor responds, "Don''t worry, I don''t plan on letting her go, She is my number one girl." as he gently rubs your ass. Ivan gets dressed then leaves the room and Fedor turns to you "You''re a great girl. I hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did." You reply, "I had a wonderful time getting fucked by 2 strong men." Fedor smiles as he kisses you on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
+				'Fedor responds, "Don''t worry, I don''t plan on letting her go, she is my number one girl." as he gently rubs your ass. Ivan gets dressed then leaves the room and Fedor turns to you "You''re a great girl. I hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did." You reply, "I had a wonderful time getting fucked by 2 strong men." Fedor smiles as he kisses you on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A3'
@@ -511,9 +511,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way3':
 							IvanPregChat = 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/double.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'"I want both of you to fill me up at the same time. Think you can do that?" Fedor nods and Ivan has a puzzled look on his face as he says, "Uhh sure, I''m down." as he picks up the pace. You lay in between Ivan and Fedor completely in a trance of pleasure, waiting for them to finish and soon enough you hear them groan as you feel a warm rush filling both your anus and womb simultaneously, causing all of you to let out a perfectly in sync moan as they pump their seed into both of your holes. While you are catching your breath Ivan pulls out from under you and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>> I trust that you are you on the pill...right?"'
+							'"I want both of you to fill me up at the same time. Think you can do that?" Fedor nods and Ivan has a puzzled look on his face as he says, "Uhh sure, I''m down." as he picks up the pace. You lay in between Ivan and Fedor completely in a trance of pleasure, waiting for them to finish and soon enough you hear them groan as you feel a warm rush filling both your anus and womb simultaneously, causing all of you to let out a perfectly in sync moan as they pump their seed into both of your holes. While you are catching your breath Ivan pulls out from under you and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>> I trust that you are on the pill... right?"'
 							*nl
-							'You lower your head and turn away as you hesitantly reply, "Well...Not exactly..." Ivan shoots Fedor a shocked look. "Fedor you are intentionally getting <<$pcs_firstname>> pregnant?!" Fedor scratches the back of his neck as he responds, "Yeah we''ve both decided to take our relationship to the next level." Ivan says, "I hope you both know what you are doing. I trust that you will both find a way to make it work." as he gets dressed and leaves the house. Fedor slowly turns to you "I know things will work out great for us." You respond, "Of course it will. Nothing can tear us apart." Fedor gives you a kiss on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
+							'You lower your head and turn away as you hesitantly reply, "Well... Not exactly..." Ivan shoots Fedor a shocked look. "Fedor you are intentionally getting <<$pcs_firstname>> pregnant?!" Fedor scratches the back of his neck as he responds, "Yeah we''ve both decided to take our relationship to the next level." Ivan says, "I hope you both know what you are doing. I trust that you will both find a way to make it work." as he gets dressed and leaves the house. Fedor slowly turns to you "I know things will work out great for us." you respond, "Of course it will. Nothing can tear us apart." Fedor gives you a kiss on your forehead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
 							*nl
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum8.mp4"></video></center>'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Livingroom 2':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/livingroom/sex/sofa6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"Pull out and cover me with your cum." Fedor begins picking up his pace, clearly trying to finish as quickly as possible and after a few seconds he pulls out of you and begins spraying his cum all over your chest and stomach as you grab onto his dick doing your best to milk him dry while feeling the squirt of warm cum covering you body. You continue milking him until he''s finished and then rub all the cum off his dick while rubbing it all over your chest, enjoying the warmth. Once you''re done, Fedor admires your body, covered in his cum. "You really seem to love my cum. Don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You respond, "Of course I do, Your cum is just the moisturizer I need to keep my skin nice and...moist for you." You and Fedor begin laughing as he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom to clean up.'
+				'"Pull out and cover me with your cum." Fedor begins picking up his pace, clearly trying to finish as quickly as possible and after a few seconds he pulls out of you and begins spraying his cum all over your chest and stomach as you grab onto his dick doing your best to milk him dry while feeling the squirt of warm cum covering you body. You continue milking him until he''s finished and then rub all the cum off his dick while rubbing it all over your chest, enjoying the warmth. Once you''re done, Fedor admires your body, covered in his cum. "You really seem to love my cum. Don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" you respond, "Of course I do, your cum is just the moisturizer I need to keep my skin nice and... moist for you." You and Fedor begin laughing as he picks you up and carries you to the bathroom to clean up.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum110.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy, 1
@@ -871,7 +871,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Livingroom 2':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/livingroom/sex/sofa6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Fedor grins as he pulls out of you and climbs over you while jerking his penis in front of your face. You stare at Fedor''s penis while licking your lips and soon you see it begin to erupt and spray cum all over you face. You close your eyes while enjoying the warmth of his seed on your face, giving Fedor a pleased smile as he continues pumping your face with his cum. When Fedor finishes he looks down to you "You really seem to enjoy cum on your face. don''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Which you respond, "Only yours babe." Fedor flashes a bright smile as he replies, "That''s my girl" Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the room.'
+				'Fedor grins as he pulls out of you and climbs over you while jerking his penis in front of your face. You stare at Fedor''s penis while licking your lips and soon you see it begin to erupt and spray cum all over you face. You close your eyes while enjoying the warmth of his seed on your face, giving Fedor a pleased smile as he continues pumping your face with his cum. When Fedor finishes he looks down to you "You really seem to enjoy cum on your face. Don''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Which you respond, "Only yours babe." Fedor flashes a bright smile as he replies, "That''s my girl" Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the room.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum9.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy, 1
@@ -1063,9 +1063,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom Cam':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/cam/no2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shoot Fedor a firm stare "I said <b>NO!</b>" Fedor recoils back and then you take a deep breath then tell Fedor "It''s not that I don''t trust you but someone could swipe or even hack your phone then share the video with all their friends or even upload it online."'
-			'Fedor nods "I understand....You are just worried that the camera will add 200 pounds to you, Aren''t you?"'
-			'You laugh as you push him against the counter almost knocking him down on it as you reply "I''m just worried that your fat head will get in the way and ruin the whole video." You and Fedor burst into laughter as he closes the camera and winks at you as he walks out of the bathroom.'
-			
+			'Fedor nods "I understand... You are just worried that the camera will add 200 pounds to you, aren''t you?"'
+			'You laugh as you push him against the counter, almost knocking him down on it as you reply "I''m just worried that your fat head will get in the way and ruin the whole video." You and Fedor burst into laughter as he closes the camera and winks at you as he walks out of the bathroom.'
 			act 'Wash up':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Quick Wash'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1204,7 +1203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom Cam 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/cam/camanal1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn to face Fedor as you say, "I want you to fill my as with your cum." Fedor flashes a wide smile as he replies, "As you wish milady." and begins increasing his pace while giving your ass an occasional smack. After a few seconds Fedor grips your hips firmly and begins filling your ass with his seed as you thrust your hips against his, doing your best to milk him dry. Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath as he pulls out of you causing a jet of sperm to pour out of your ass, causing a loud moan to escape your. mouth. Fedor picks up the camera and says to himself, "Maybe I should have placed the camera on the other side... oh well, I''m sure it will come out great anyway." he then looks to you "Good job <<$pcs_nickname>> you were great." as he gets dressed and leaves the bathroom.'
+						'You turn to face Fedor as you say, "I want you to fill my as with your cum." Fedor flashes a wide smile as he replies, "As you wish milady." and begins increasing his pace while giving your ass an occasional smack. After a few seconds Fedor grips your hips firmly and begins filling your ass with his seed as you thrust your hips against his, doing your best to milk him dry. Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath as he pulls out of you causing a jet of sperm to pour out of your ass, causing a loud moan to escape your mouth. Fedor picks up the camera and says to himself, "Maybe I should have placed the camera on the other side... oh well, I''m sure it will come out great anyway." he then looks to you "Good job <<$pcs_nickname>> you were great." as he gets dressed and leaves the bathroom.'
 						*nl
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
@@ -1297,7 +1296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/sex3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Fedor nods as he thrusts inside you a few more times then pulls out, covering your chest with his cum as you reach out and start jerking his dick, milking him as best you can while moaning as you feel his warm seed covering your chest. After Fedor finishes spraying you with his load, He looks down at you and says, "You''re really good at milking. Were you raised on a farm or something?" You give him a smirk as you reply, "No, I''ve never milked cows, only men." He breaks out in laughter and then responds, "Not too many men I hope." You turn away from Fedor as you say, "Well a girl doesn''t kiss and tell." he smirks and gives you a playful stare before getting dressed and walking out of the bathroom.'
+				'Fedor nods as he thrusts inside you a few more times then pulls out, covering your chest with his cum as you reach out and start jerking his dick, milking him as best you can while moaning as you feel his warm seed covering your chest. After Fedor finishes spraying you with his load, he looks down at you and says, "You''re really good at milking. Were you raised on a farm or something?" You give him a smirk as you reply, "No, I''ve never milked cows, only men." He breaks out in laughter and then responds, "Not too many men I hope." You turn away from Fedor as you say, "Well a girl doesn''t kiss and tell." he smirks and gives you a playful stare before getting dressed and walking out of the bathroom.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $boy, 1
@@ -1615,7 +1614,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom Cam':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal8.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You give Fedor a wink then walk up to a nearby stool and bend over. You lick your fingertips then begin massaging your anus with your fingers while giving Fedor a very inviting look.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
-				'Fedor gives you a seductive smile as he takes off his pants then approaches you and soon you feel his penis tip pressing against you anus. Suddenly you feel Fedor''s penis enter your ass causing a jolt of pain. Fedor holds still for a few seconds, giving your ass some time to adjust to his dick before slowly fucking your ass. After a few minutes of Fedor fucking your ass he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you ready for my cum?"'
+				'Fedor gives you a seductive smile as he takes off his pants then approaches you and soon you feel his penis tip pressing against your anus. Suddenly you feel Fedor''s penis enter your ass causing a jolt of pain. Fedor holds still for a few seconds, giving your ass some time to adjust to his dick before slowly fucking your ass. After a few minutes of Fedor fucking your ass he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you ready for my cum?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1770,7 +1769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/lick'+rand(2,3)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch every time your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re...driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on mush longer"'
+			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch everytime your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re... driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on much longer"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1810,7 +1809,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You let out a smile as you greatly increase the pace almost fucking his dick with your throat while trying to hold back from gagging. Fedor''s head quickly jerks back as his cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his cum. You can feel Fedor''s warm cum squirting down your throat and leaking from your lips as you do your best to swallow every single drop, not wanting to waste a drop of Fedor''s sweet necter. When Fedor finishes, He looks down to you and says, "You really are amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s time for your reward."'
+				'You let out a smile as you greatly increase the pace almost fucking his dick with your throat while trying to hold back from gagging. Fedor''s head quickly jerks back as his cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his cum. You can feel Fedor''s warm cum squirting down your throat and leaking from your lips as you do your best to swallow every single drop, not wanting to waste a drop of Fedor''s sweet necter. When Fedor finishes, he looks down to you and says, "You really are amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s time for your reward."'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy, 1
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1842,7 +1841,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/bj3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"I''m always ready to cum with you." Fedor immediately returns to licking your clit as you continue sucking his dick, feeling the pleasure build up quickly and then feeling your clitoris heat up as your body begins squirming as waves of pleasure hit your whole body. You moan loudly as you feel Fedor''s hands tighten around your hips and his penis begins throbbing in your mouth filling it with his cum which you can''t seem to keep from leaking out of your mouth as you climax. After you both finish, you roll off of Fedor and catch your breath as he says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> You''re the best. you know that right?" You reply, "Only the best deserves the best." Fedor give you a very passionate kiss before getting dressed then walking out of the bedroom.'
+				'"I''m always ready to cum with you." Fedor immediately returns to licking your clit as you continue sucking his dick, feeling the pleasure build up quickly and then feeling your clitoris heat up as your body begins squirming as waves of pleasure hit your whole body. You moan loudly as you feel Fedor''s hands tighten around your hips and his penis begins throbbing in your mouth filling it with his cum which you can''t seem to keep from leaking out of your mouth as you climax. After you both finish, you roll off of Fedor and catch your breath as he says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> You''re the best. You know that right?" You reply, "Only the best deserves the best." Fedor give you a very passionate kiss before getting dressed then walking out of the bedroom.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vagkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -2015,7 +2014,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 2':
 		act 'Doggystyle':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginanal3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Fedor gives you ass a few seconds to adjust to his cock and then begins thrusting his dick inside you which causes a bit of pain at first but the pain begins to dissipate and it is quickly replaced with pleasure. The feeling of Fedor''s hard cock inside your ass which fills you with excitement as you shout out "Ohh yes Fyodor. Fuck me like a bitch!" Fedor gives you a firm smack on the ass as he replies, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ll fuck you real good."'
+			'Fedor gives your ass a few seconds to adjust to his cock and then begins thrusting his dick inside you which causes a bit of pain at first but the pain begins to dissipate and it is quickly replaced with pleasure. The feeling of Fedor''s hard cock inside your ass which fills you with excitement as you shout out "Ohh yes Fyodor. Fuck me like a bitch!" Fedor gives you a firm smack on the ass as he replies, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ll fuck you real good."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2051,7 +2050,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 2':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/ride2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'As you continue riding Fedor, He wraps his arms around your legs and pulls you toward him, so that he is basically carrying you. Feeling Fedor''s strong arms holding you up, increases your excitement, knowing that he is in control of the pace despite you being on top. Fedor gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you fuck like an energized bunny." You respond, "Well this bunny is yours to fuck anytime you want, babe." His eyes light up as he responds "You always know just what to say." Fedor then gives you a few more thrusts before saying "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m ready to cum for you, so tell me how you want it."'
+			'As you continue riding Fedor, he wraps his arms around your legs and pulls you toward him, so that he is basically carrying you. Feeling Fedor''s strong arms holding you up, increases your excitement, knowing that he is in control of the pace despite you being on top. Fedor gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you fuck like an energized bunny." You respond, "Well this bunny is yours to fuck anytime you want, babe." His eyes light up as he responds "You always know just what to say." Fedor then gives you a few more thrusts before saying "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m ready to cum for you, so tell me how you want it."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2231,7 +2230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Shower 2':
 	act 'Leave shower and jerk him off':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/shower/shower.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You climb out of the shower without ever breaking eye contact then walk up to Fedor until you are both face to face, You then kneel in front of him and begin massaging his penis with your hand and his balls with the other which causes Fedor to moan as he leans forward, bringing his face to yours then kisses your lips as you continue gently stroking his penis.'
+		'You climb out of the shower without ever breaking eye contact then walk up to Fedor until you are both face to face, you then kneel in front of him and begin massaging his penis with your hand and his balls with the other which causes Fedor to moan as he leans forward, bringing his face to yours then kisses your lips as you continue gently stroking his penis.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2569,7 +2568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/fedorhome/bedroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'Fedor''s bedroom is very neat, It has a bed, a computer desk with a chair and a <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>, where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing.'
+	'Fedor''s bedroom is very neat, it has a bed, a computer desk with a chair and a <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>, where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing.'
 	if FedorLove = 1:
 		'Fedor has a <a href="exec:gt ''FedorEv4'', ''Picture''">framed picture</a> by his bed.'
 	end
@@ -2601,7 +2600,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Picture':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-	'Fedor has framed the picture he took of you and placed it by his bed with your name on the frame. After seeing the picture by his bed, you can''t help but think to yourself. "That''s so sweet. I must mean a lot to him...Ohh Fyodor." you then place the picture back.'
+	'Fedor has framed the picture he took of you and placed it by his bed with your name on the frame. After seeing the picture by his bed, you can''t help but think to yourself. "That''s so sweet. I must mean a lot to him... ohh Fedor." you then place the picture back.'
 
 	act 'Step away':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 end
@@ -2678,7 +2677,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Sleeping':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
-	'Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m a bit too tired to walk you home right now but you can climb into bed and spend the night if you like. just don''t let my mother see you leave.'
+	'Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m a bit too tired to walk you home right now but you can climb into bed and spend the night if you like. Just don''t let my mother see you leave.'
 	if pcs_health < 100: 'Fedor then looks back at you and frowns. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re hurt. My mother works as a nurse. You should have her take a look at you."'
 
 	act 'Walk away':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
@@ -2849,7 +2848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Regina Intro':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="#FF00FF"><<"Regina Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/fedorhome/regina.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Fedor''s mother and her eyes light up when she sees you. "Ahh, you must be <<$pcs_firstname>>. Fedor told me a bit about you but I can never get that boy to talk to me about anything. So how serious are things between you two? Ohh but where are my manners? My name is Regina. I am Fyodor''s mother. I have been looking forward to meeting my son''s first girlfriend." You tilt your head as you reply, "His first?" Regina replies, "Well yes. Fyodor usually spends too much time in front of that TV or with his friend Ivan. His father always lectures that boy about not being more active, that is...when he''s here... Anyway, I''ve droned on for long enough. Would you like me to make you something to eat?"'
+	'You approach Fedor''s mother and her eyes light up when she sees you. "Ahh, you must be <<$pcs_firstname>>. Fedor told me a bit about you but I can never get that boy to talk to me about anything. So how serious are things between you two? Ohh but where are my manners? My name is Regina. I am Fyodor''s mother. I have been looking forward to meeting my son''s first girlfriend." You tilt your head as you reply, "His first?" Regina replies, "Well yes. Fedor usually spends too much time in front of that TV or with his friend Ivan. His father always lectures that boy about not being more active, that is... when he''s here anyway, I''ve droned on for long enough. Would you like me to make you something to eat?"'
 
 	act 'No thank you':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Kitchen'
 	act 'Only if it''s no trouble':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Dinner 1'
@@ -3080,7 +3079,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Bedroom':
 	*nl
 	'Fedor is laying on his bed, relaxing.'
 	if FedorLove = 0:
-		'He seems lost in thought but as soon as you approach, he opens his mouth to speak but no words escape his mouth. he then closes his mouth and stares at the ceiling. It seems as though he has something he wants to talk to you about.'
+		'He seems lost in thought but as soon as you approach, he opens his mouth to speak but no words escape his mouth. He then closes his mouth and stares at the ceiling. It seems as though he has something he wants to talk to you about.'
 	end
 
 	if pcs_health < 100:
@@ -3199,7 +3198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Love Talk Strela 2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next ot Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With tears streaming down his cheeks Fedor responds, "I can''t get that day out of my head. I was completely helpless as those...Fuckers took everything away from me...my reputation, my friends and my girl..." You lay down next to him "You never lost your girl. I''ll always be here with you." He wraps his arm around your neck but remains silent, so you decide to break the silence. "Fedor I know what happened to you was horrible but I never thought less of you, not even for one second. You are the man I want to be with and nothing will change that."'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With tears streaming down his cheeks Fedor responds, "I can''t get that day out of my head. I was completely helpless as those... fuckers... took everything away from me, my reputation, my friends and my girl..." You lay down next to him "You never lost your girl. I''ll always be here with you." He wraps his arm around your neck but remains silent, so you decide to break the silence. "Fedor I know what happened to you was horrible but I never thought less of you, not even for one second. You are the man I want to be with and nothing will change that."'
 	*nl
 	'Fedor lets out a mild smile as he continues staring at the ceiling and after a few seconds responds, "You are the greatest gift I can ever ask for and I''m so glad I met you. <<$pcs_firstname>> you are the perfect girl and I will always strive to be the best boyfriend you can ever have." You lightly kiss his cheek as you reply, "You are already the best boyfriend I could ever have." Fedor quickly turns to you and kisses your lips very passionately.'
 	*nl
@@ -3238,14 +3237,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Future':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look Fedor in the eyes. "I have always wanted to one day...be a mother and I was thinking that maybe we could...have a baby together." Fedor''s eyes widen and his jaw lowers. "You want... You want us to? I don''t know. That''s a very big step. Are you sure you want this?"'
+			'You look Fedor in the eyes. "I have always wanted to one day... be a mother and I was thinking that maybe we could... have a baby together." Fedor''s eyes widen and his jaw lowers. "You want... You want us to? I don''t know. That''s a very big step. Are you sure you want this?"'
 
 			act 'I''m sure':
 				*clr & cla
 				FedorLoveTalk = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-				'You give Fedor a light kiss then reply, "I''m positive. I want you to be the father of my child so...what do you think? Would you like to be a father?" Fedor thinks it over for a few seconds then responds, "I care for you so much and would love to start a family with you. Whenever you feel ready to try for a baby then let me know." You lean forward and give Fedor a passionate kiss before responding "Thank you so much Fyodor. I''m sure any child we make together will be perfect."'
+				'You give Fedor a light kiss then reply, "I''m positive. I want you to be the father of my child so... what do you think? Would you like to be a father?" Fedor thinks it over for a few seconds then responds, "I care for you so much and would love to start a family with you. Whenever you feel ready to try for a baby then let me know." You lean forward and give Fedor a passionate kiss before responding "Thank you so much Fyodor. I''m sure any child we make together will be perfect."'
 
 				act 'Get up':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Fedor Bedroom'
 			end
@@ -3325,7 +3324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Private Chat':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then ask, "Can we talk for a moment...In private?" Fedor turns to you with a concerned look on his face. "Of course <<$pcs_firstname>>. Let''s head to my room where we can talk in private." Fedor takes your hand then leads you to the bedroom.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then ask, "Can we talk for a moment... in private?" Fedor turns to you with a concerned look on his face. "Of course <<$pcs_firstname>>. Let''s head to my room where we can talk in private." Fedor takes your hand then leads you to the bedroom.'
 
 	act 'Follow Fedor to his bedroom':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Dimka Help'
 end
@@ -3336,7 +3335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Shelter':
 	FedorShelter = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor...I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor... I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3374,9 +3373,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka Help':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I...well...Dimka has a video of me and I need to know if you can help me get it back or erase it." Fedor frowns as he asks "Have you been having an affair with him?" You reply, "No. He blackmailed me into doing something...dirty and he filmed me. I''m sorry that I didn''t tell you about this before but I needed to know for sure that I could trust you not to share the video." Fedor places his finger under your chin and raises your face to meet his as he replies, "I understand <<$pcs_firstname>> and don''t worry, we will get that video from Dimka even if I have to beat it out of him. I never liked that cocky like punk anyway."'
+		'"I... well... Dimka has a video of me and I need to know if you can help me get it back or erase it." Fedor frowns as he asks "Have you been having an affair with him?" You reply, "No. He blackmailed me into doing something... dirty and he filmed me. I''m sorry that I didn''t tell you about this before but I needed to know for sure that I could trust you not to share the video." Fedor places his finger under your chin and raises your face to meet his as he replies, "I understand <<$pcs_firstname>> and don''t worry, we will get that video from Dimka even if I have to beat it out of him. I never liked that cocky like punk anyway."'
 		*nl
-		'You remain speechless for a few seconds before you respond, "Ohh thank you Fyodor. I thought that he was going to keep blackmailing me forever." Fedor gives you a kiss on the forehead. "You have nothing to fear with me around. Meet me after school and we''ll deal with that punk together." Fedor then gives you a long passionate kiss.'
+		'You remain speechless for a few seconds before you respond, "Ohh thank you Fedor. I thought that he was going to keep blackmailing me forever." Fedor gives you a kiss on the forehead. "You have nothing to fear with me around. Meet me after school and we''ll deal with that punk together." Fedor then gives you a long passionate kiss.'
 
 		act 'Get out of bed':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 	end	

locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/school/lockerroom/lr8.jpg"></center>'
-				'Fedor gives your ass a quick smack before pulling out of you then rubbing his penis in between your ass cheeks until he groans and begins spraying his load on your lower back. You move your hips up and down, trying to milk Fedor with your ass cheeks while enjoying the warmth of his cum covering your back. After Fedor finishes, he looks down at you and says, "You have an great ass <<$pcs_firstname>>. so soft and plump." You look back at him and reply, "Well maybe next time you can give it a good fucking." Fedor gives your ass a playful smack as he responds, "I might just do that sometime." Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the locker room.'
+				'Fedor gives your ass a quick smack before pulling out of you then rubbing his penis in between your ass cheeks until he groans and begins spraying his load on your lower back. You move your hips up and down, trying to milk Fedor with your ass cheeks while enjoying the warmth of his cum covering your back. After Fedor finishes, he looks down at you and says, "You have an great ass <<$pcs_firstname>>. So soft and plump." You look back at him and reply, "Well maybe next time you can give it a good fucking." Fedor gives your ass a playful smack as he responds, "I might just do that sometime." Fedor then gets dressed and walks out of the locker room.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A5'
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hall':
 	minut -= 5
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You approach Fedor with a mischievous smile on your face as you begin rubbing on his crotch. Fedor gives you a pleased look as he begins gently kissing your lips. while rubbing your ass with both his hands and pushing you toward the windowsill.'
+	'You approach Fedor with a mischievous smile on your face as you begin rubbing on his crotch. Fedor gives you a pleased look as he begins gently kissing your lips. While rubbing your ass with both his hands and pushing you toward the windowsill.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 5, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Workout':
 		FedorWorkout = 1
 		minut += 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Fedor begins doing push ups as you do a few yourself until you look up and see him grinning at you as he says, "Would you like to see me do 45 push ups in 2 minutes?" You respond, "Only if I can ride your back as you do it." Fedor tilts his head as his grin widens. "Challenge accepted." you then climb on his back and he lift you both in repeated cycles. You can feel his muscles tighten as he lifts and his heartbeat gradually increase as he lifts you on his back. Fedor finally reaches 45 push ups then lowers his body to the ground where he lays with you still on his back. "So <<$pcs_nickname>>...Impressed?" You reply "Yes very, I''m a lucky girl to have such a strong man to myself." Fedor winks then gets up and walks toward his bag.'
+		'Fedor begins doing push ups as you do a few yourself until you look up and see him grinning at you as he says, "Would you like to see me do 45 push ups in 2 minutes?" You respond, "Only if I can ride your back as you do it." Fedor tilts his head as his grin widens. "Challenge accepted." you then climb on his back and he lift you both in repeated cycles. You can feel his muscles tighten as he lifts and his heartbeat gradually increase as he lifts you on his back. Fedor finally reaches 45 push ups then lowers his body to the ground where he lays with you still on his back. "So <<$pcs_nickname>>... impressed?" You reply "Yes very, I''m a lucky girl to have such a strong man to myself." Fedor winks then gets up and walks toward his bag.'
 		*nl
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/gym/strength1.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast Intro':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Fyodor [Masha] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast1.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you approach Fedor, he turns to you with a distraught look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>>... What are you doing here. I bet Viktor will be upset with us both if he sees you with me." You reply, "Viktor doesn''t own me. I came here to check on you." Fedor responds, "How did you know to find me here." You give Fedor a sweet smile as you reply, "On our first date since hooking up, You told me that this is where you go when you are feeling down." Fedor returns the smile. "You remembered? I always knew you were one of the good ones."'
+			'As you approach Fedor, he turns to you with a distraught look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>>... What are you doing here. I bet Viktor will be upset with us both if he sees you with me." You reply, "Viktor doesn''t own me. I came here to check on you." Fedor responds, "How did you know to find me here." You give Fedor a sweet smile as you reply, "On our first date since hooking up, you told me that this is where you go when you are feeling down." Fedor returns the smile. "You remembered? I always knew you were one of the good ones."'
 
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast':
 	if VK = 1:
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/parkalone'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walk toward the train tracks to see Fedor, He seems to be lost in thought.'
+		'You walk toward the train tracks to see Fedor, he seems to be lost in thought.'
 	else
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/parkalone'+rand(4,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
@@ -953,7 +953,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Vs Dimka':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'Fedor nods then tells you "You lure him to the other side of school and I will wait for you there." you give Fedor a kiss before responding "I will..and thank you again Fedor. This means a great deal to me." Fedor gives you a wink as he walks off.'
+		'Fedor nods then tells you "You lure him to the other side of school and I will wait for you there." you give Fedor a kiss before responding "I will.. and thank you again Fedor. This means a great deal to me." Fedor gives you a wink as he walks off.'
 
 		act 'Lure Dimka':
 			*clr & cla

locations/HotelHole.qsrc

@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 					'It looks like <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>> is drunk.'
 					'"You will never disobey me? right <<$pcs_firstname>> ? "'
 					'"Your face is so pretty, I really don''t want to mess that up"'
-					'"What are you saying <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>>? stop that , you are scaring me."'
+					'"What are you saying <<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>>? stop that, you are scaring me."'
 					'"What ? I give you a compliment and you get scared. You don''t have to fear me, I wouldn''t hurt a fly."'
 					'<<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>> had too much to drink and he is only talking nonsense.'
 				end
@@ -1024,9 +1024,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 									'You slowly open your eyes'
 									'"<<$pitfs>>Where am I?<<$pitfe>>" Your vision is blurry and you have to blink several times to clear it.'
 									'You find yourself lying on a soft bed. You look around and see a sterile white room with a woman in light blue scrubs standing with her back to you. Your mind pieces together the clues and you realize this is the hospital.'
-									'"H..hello?" You choke out the word, trying to get the nurse''s attention.'
+									'"H-hello?" You choke out the word, trying to get the nurse''s attention.'
 									'The nurse turns around, slightly startled, and says, "Oh you are awake. Just one minute, I will get the doctor for you." The nurse quickly exits the room.'
-
 									gs 'medical_din', 'remove_preg'
 									abortionbirthdate = daystart
 									unintendedabort = 1

locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 					'You lie down on the bed and spread your legs. Uliana takes Motya''s cock in her hand and guides it towards your pussy.'
 					'"Just relax Honey, he will be very gentle." she said while giving you a little smile.'
 					'<left><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotcouple6.jpg"></left>'
-					'Motya began pressing his dick into your pussy. he was slow and careful not to push too hard.'
+					'Motya began pressing his dick into your pussy. He was slow and careful not to push too hard.'
 					'You let out a little moan as the dick had slowly but surely invaded your pussy.'
 					'His shaft sank in deeper and suddenly you let out a little grunt and twitch. You looked into Motya''s eyes and you both knew that your virginity was no more.'
 					'You could feel every inch of his <<dick>> cm dick inside you now. He gave you a little wink and then started moving again.'
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 		'As you continue servicing Pavlin''s manhood, the black guy moves behind you. He suddenly grabs you by the hips and yanks you up to a standing position.'
 		if pcs_vag = 0:'As you feel the massive member rub up against your exposed snatch, your heart skips a beat. "Oh god, am I really about to lose my virginity to a black man?!?! What would my family think of me if they knew? And why do I feel so excited about it?" You think, mind racing with emotion. '
 		'He places one calloused hand on you back and starts pushing his big <<dick>> cm schlong inside your dripping pussy. "Oh fuck!" You groan as he buries himself inside you.'
-		if pcs_vag = 0:'As the thick, dark dick slams into you, you yelp in pain as tears roll down your cheeks. It feels as if your being split in half and you''re sure there''s some blood leaking from your conquered maidenhead. "Too late to turn back now." you think. "My virginity is his. It will always be his. God, how am i going to explain this to my mother?"'
+		if pcs_vag = 0:'As the thick, dark dick slams into you, you yelp in pain as tears roll down your cheeks. It feels as if you''re being split in half and you''re sure there''s some blood leaking from your conquered maidenhead. "Too late to turn back now." you think. "My virginity is his. It will always be his. God, how am i going to explain this to my mother?"'
 		' '
 		'Mr. Black gives you little time to adjust to his size before he''s pounding away in force.'
 		'"Don''t get distracted skank, you got plenty of dick right here too." Pavlin says as he forces your mouth back onto his cock.'
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 			'You feel the impossibly large, bell-shaped head of his cock push up against your back door.'
 			'Slowly he applies pressure, pushing his <<dick>> cm dick into your ass. Your hole resists, but eventually you feel the head break through, stretching you sphincter. You let out a pained yelp, tears welling up in your eyes. Showing a bit of chivalry for the first time, Mr. Black waits a moment so you can get used to the feeling. All too soon the mercy disappears as he starts pumping his dick back and forth in your bowels. The intense feeling melds into a mixture of extreme pleasure and extreme pain, and you can''t decide If it''s enjoyable or not.'
 			' '
-			'But before your mind can decide, Pavlin once again forces his long dick back into your throat and begins face-fucking you at full force. You gag as strands of spit fly out of your mouth and drip down the huge penis. You''re angry, but a little thankful to have something to distract you from the pain in you asshole as Mr. Black continues to ream your orifice.'
+			'But before your mind can decide, Pavlin once again forces his long dick back into your throat and begins face-fucking you at full force. You gag as strands of spit fly out of your mouth and drip down the huge penis. You''re angry, but a little thankful to have something to distract you from the pain in your asshole as Mr. Black continues to ream your orifice.'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/hotel_threesome4.jpg"></center>'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/LBZhouse.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/handjob/hj0.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You slowly lower to your knees in front of him then raise your hand, wrapping your fingers around his hard shaft, causing his eyes immediately squint as he welcomes your hand on his cock. Seeing his excitement you begin stroking his cock gently while looking up at him. His cock lightly throbs a bits as you stroke it and it even leaks a bit with precum. You continue stroking his hard cock as he lightly moans , occasionally moving his hips with your strokes. After a few more seconds, <<$boydesc>> starts to pant heavily then says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, slow down, I''m about to cum."'
+			'You slowly lower to your knees in front of him then raise your hand, wrapping your fingers around his hard shaft, causing his eyes immediately squint as he welcomes your hand on his cock. Seeing his excitement you begin stroking his cock gently while looking up at him. His cock lightly throbs a bits as you stroke it and it even leaks a bit with precum. You continue stroking his hard cock as he lightly moans, occasionally moving his hips with your strokes. After a few more seconds, <<$boydesc>> starts to pant heavily then says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, slow down, I''m about to cum."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal9.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'<<$boydesc>> reaches down then helps you to your feet before positioning himself behind you. He places his hand on your shoulder then pushes you forward before you hear him licking his finger before using it to lubricate your asshole. You try to relax yourself but the excitement is getting intense. You then feel his cock pressing against you asshole before slowly pushing its way inside, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill you. <<$boydesc>> then waits for your asshole to settle before thrusting his dick in your ass, causing him to moan loudly as he fucks your ass.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> reaches down then helps you to your feet before positioning himself behind you. He places his hand on your shoulder then pushes you forward before you hear him licking his finger before using it to lubricate your asshole. You try to relax yourself but the excitement is getting intense. You then feel his cock pressing against your asshole before slowly pushing its way inside, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill you. <<$boydesc>> then waits for your asshole to settle before thrusting his dick in your ass, causing him to moan loudly as he fucks your ass.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Shower':
 	LBZhouseShower = 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You grab your stuff then enter the bathroom before climbing into the shower. You carefully run the faucet, check the water temperature before washing yourself off while enjoying the warm water hitting your body. You spend the next few minutes. taking a relaxing bath before climbing out, drying yourself off, getting dressed then leaving the bathroom.'
+	'You grab your stuff then enter the bathroom before climbing into the shower. You carefully run the faucet, check the water temperature before washing yourself off while enjoying the warm water hitting your body. You spend the next few minutes. Taking a relaxing bath before climbing out, drying yourself off, getting dressed then leaving the bathroom.'
 	if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 
 	act 'Get out of the bathroom': gt 'LBZhouse', 'End'

locations/LCporn.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toiletsex':
 	'You come up from behind the man, and suddenly wrap your arms around him. He''s startled for a moment, but relaxes when you whisper: "That''s a nice cock you have there! I bet we could have some fun together, you and I..."'
 	'The man gives you a dirty grin when he feels you wrap your fingers around his cock, but he wants more. He takes you by the hand and guides you to the rear entrance of the diner, into the back alley. He positions you against the dumpsters and eagerly shoves his cock inside you.'
 	gs 'dinsex', 'vaginal_sex', 6, 'unknown'
-	'Not a surprise, he barely lasts any time at all, with in a few minutes he grunts and pulls out of your pussy and shoots his load all over you ass and without a further word he goes back into the cafe.'
+	'Not a surprise, he barely lasts any time at all, with in a few minutes he grunts and pulls out of your pussy and shoots his load all over your ass and without a further word he goes back into the cafe.'
 	gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
 	gs 'npccleanc',$npclastgenerated
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start1':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bbq/sex/bjride.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You walk up to the group of men and give them a friendly smile as you say: "Good evening, sirs. I will be your waitress tonight."'
 	'The guys understand what you mean immediately, and all get up and guide you to their car. They make you sit in the back seat between two of them, and drive off. During the trip you constantly have hands on your body. The men fondle your boobs and legs eagerly, shove their hands underneath your clothes and fondle your pussy.'
-	'Before long one of them pulls down his pants and drags your head over to his dick. You suck his dick for the rest of the ride, while the other guys grab at your breasts, ass, or even fingers you pussy.'
+	'Before long one of them pulls down his pants and drags your head over to his dick. You suck his dick for the rest of the ride, while the other guys grab at your breasts, ass, or even fingers your pussy.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 10, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'

locations/LariskaHome.qsrc

@@ -1085,7 +1085,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dog_1':
 		'You spread your legs and take the vibrator out of your pussy, letting out a slight moan as you do so. You feel somewhat empty now.'
 	end
 	if vaginal_slip < 4: gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'vag'
-	'Going down onto your hands and knees, You look over your shoulder at Lariska and wag your ass seductively. Smiling at you, Lariska starts by rubbing the tip along your slit, making you moan in anticipation. Done teasing, she lines herself up and starts pushing it in.'
+	'Going down onto your hands and knees, you look over your shoulder at Lariska and wag your ass seductively. Smiling at you, Lariska starts by rubbing the tip along your slit, making you moan in anticipation. Done teasing, she lines herself up and starts pushing it in.'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
 		'She pushes the strap-on back inside, and you feel something inside of you rip. You know it was your hymen, you are no longer a virgin.'
 	end

locations/MagEncounterFairy.qsrc

@@ -232,11 +232,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fairychattopic':
 			!show and teach Teleport spell
 			'The Fairy wraps her arms around your thumb and lightly tugs you over to a mysterious circle of trees.'
 			''
-			'She says, "You may have seen these circles of trees around the lands.  Fairies planted them long ago and used their magic to tether them together.  Since you also have Fae magic, I can show you how to use them."'
+			'She says, "You may have seen these circles of trees around the lands. Fairies planted them long ago and used their magic to tether them together. Since you also have Fae magic, I can show you how to use them."'
 			''
-			'She continues,"Most of the work was already done in the binding.  In a way, the trees of each circle are the same trees.  You just have to stand inside the circle, then hold in your mind a picture of another circle that you have been to before.  Then you say the word <i>inla</i>.  If your will is strong enough and you have enough magical energy, your energy can be used to enact your will."'
+			'She continues, "Most of the work was already done in the binding. In a way, the trees of each circle are the same trees. You just have to stand inside the circle, then hold in your mind a picture of another circle that you have been to before. Then you say the word <i>inla</i>. If your will is strong enough and you have enough magical energy, your energy can be used to enact your will."'
 			''
-			'She giggles.  "This lets you dance through any field you like!  "Let''s go!"'
+			'She giggles. "This lets you dance through any field you like! "Let''s go!"'
 			''
 			'She grunts and give you a nudge into the circle.'
 			act 'Stumble into Circle':

locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
+	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
 		
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/natalia.jpg"></center>'			
-				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back, as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
+				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back, as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up... naked at school?"'
 
 				act 'Return to your story':	
 					*clr & cla
@@ -64,14 +64,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lightly grip your hair, as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up, and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
+							'You lightly grip your hair, as you respond, "I just... need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up, and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
 
 							act 'Watch <<$VK_VikName>> leave':	
 								*clr & cla
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-	'You quickly jump up, and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead, as she responds,"Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
+	'You quickly jump up, and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead, as she responds, "Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
 	*nl
 	'You both giggle before Katja tells you, "Natalia has some activity that she thinks we will all enjoy. It''s hard to imagine what she has planned but who knows? It might be fun. Anyway you should get yourself washed up. A nice relaxing bath can work wonders for the body and mind. You should also see Vicky when you have the chance. She will be pleased to see you up.' 
 	if NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the kitchen, as Katja, and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen, as Katja, and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow... that''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
 	
 	act 'Finish eating':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat 4':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>>  smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
+	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>> smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
 	*nl
 	'where you spend all of your time doing what you think others want you to do. Not enough people just says fuck that and do what they want. Try not to be one of those people <<$pcs_nickname>>. Be what you want to be. Nothing else matters. Only you and whoever you decide to let in. Be it a friend a boyfriend or even a girlfriend. I don''t judge. Just be happy with what you want and who you are. Don''t let anyone get in the way of that okay?" You nod your head and continue dancing as you ponder what <<$VK_VikName>> said. After a few more minutes of dancing, <<$VK_VikName>> begins breathing heavy as she grows tired. She then spins 4 times before falling face first into her bed and not getting up. You walk over to her radio then turn it off so that <<$VK_VikName>> can get some sleep.'
 	
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat 5':
 	'You approach Vicky but she seems fast asleep. Not wanting to disturb her, you carefully walk out of the room.'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Hallway'	
-end		
+end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Reminder':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/Natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit, and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
+	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit, and I wanted to ask you... would you like to walk home with me?"'
 
 	act 'I would love to':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park':
 	'You, and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench, and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles, as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did, and be unphased." You nod, as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
 	*nl
 	if SexTalkNatalia = 4 or NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'"I..um..care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds, as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
+		'"I.. um.. care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds, as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
 		act 'Kiss her':VKNataliaKiss = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Kiss'
 		act 'Change subject':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	else	
@@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big240.jpg"></center>'
-	'You, and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home.  When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia, as she walks away.'
+	'You, and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home. When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia, as she walks away.'
 	
 	act 'Enter your apartment':gt 'korrPar'
 end	
@@ -791,7 +791,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 	*clr & cla	
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'  	
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes, as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red, as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia, and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs'stat'	
@@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kat Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end
@@ -1043,7 +1043,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end

locations/Military.qsrc

@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 			cumprecheck = 1
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/military/sex/rape3.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you are starting to lose consciousness choking on his cock, he takes it out of you mouth, pulls the baf from your head and throws you on a crate. He steps to you, forcing his dick into your vagina quite forcefully. Although you can see now, you still tied up to do effectively anything.'
+			'When you are starting to lose consciousness choking on his cock, he takes it out of your mouth, pulls the baf from your head and throws you on a crate. He steps to you, forcing his dick into your vagina quite forcefully. Although you can see now, you still tied up to do effectively anything.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/Charmer1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You...You may.."' 
+							'You downcast your eyes; feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face one inch from yours. "So, May I?" You finally get up the courage to tell him, "You... you may..."' 
 							
 							act 'Kiss Niko':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You downcast your eyes, feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face 1 inch from yours. "So what can I do for you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You finally get your courage to tell him. "I want you to...kiss me." Niko responds, "As you wish m''lady."'
+							'You downcast your eyes, feeling more bashful as Niko approaches you; moving his face 1 inch from yours. "So what can I do for you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You finally get your courage to tell him. "I want you to... kiss me." Niko responds, "As you wish m''lady."'
 							
 							act 'Kiss Niko':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 						inhib_exp += 1
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/cover.jpg"></center>'
-						'You suddenly hear Niko snapping pictures with his phone, causing you to quickly cover yourself and face Niko as you exclaim, "I didn''t agree to taking pictures." Niko gives you a meek smile as he responds, "It will be okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. I will never let these pictures get out, honestly. I just need to preserve this beautiful moment that I am spending with you. Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, let me take a few photos...for us."'
+						'You suddenly hear Niko snapping pictures with his phone, causing you to quickly cover yourself and face Niko as you exclaim, "I didn''t agree to taking pictures." Niko gives you a meek smile as he responds, "It will be okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. I will never let these pictures get out, honestly. I just need to preserve this beautiful moment that I am spending with you. Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, let me take a few photos... for us."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
 						
 						act 'Agree':
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 										minut -= 5
 										gs'stat'								
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/pose4.jpg"></center>'
-										'Niko begins fidgeting as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens you mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
+										'Niko begins fidgeting as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens your mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'
 
 										act 'Suck Niko''s dick':
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 								minut += 5
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence...yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
+								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence... yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
 								act 'Follow Niko':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Home Sad'
 							end
 						else
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko shows you how to properly catch fish for a few minutes. You turn to Niko then say, "You make this look so easy. Where did you learn to fish?" Niko smiles as he replies, "My father used to always teach me when I was little." You ask, "Where is he now? Do you still live with him?" Niko replies, "No...he passed away a few years ago." You respond, "I''m sorry to hear that. Were you two close?" Niko replies, "I rarely saw him. He was always so focused on his studies." '
+		'Niko shows you how to properly catch fish for a few minutes. You turn to Niko then say, "You make this look so easy. Where did you learn to fish?" Niko smiles as he replies, "My father used to always teach me when I was little." You ask, "Where is he now? Do you still live with him?" Niko replies, "No... he passed away a few years ago." You respond, "I''m sorry to hear that. Were you two close?" Niko replies, "I rarely saw him. He was always so focused on his studies." '
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You ask, "Was he a teacher?" Niko replies, "No he was a psychiatrist who was obsessed with finding a cure for psychosis." You tilt your head as you respond, "What could have made him so absorbed by that?" Niko takes a deep breath then replies, "My little brother was diagnosed with psychosis and he was always screaming to himself in his room. My father didn''t want him put in an asylum, so he had to keep him in the house to protect him and everyone else from him. My sister Matilda was really upset. She and Eduard were very close before he was diagnosed. My brother and I did our best to console her and help keep her mind off of our little brother." You place your hand on Niko''s shoulder then ask, "Did she ever move on from her loss?"'
 			*nl
-			'Niko remains silent for a few seconds before responding, "She died...My big brother only needed to watch her for a few minutes, but of course he was too distracted by that Bitch Vio..." You place your hand on his shoulder, causing him to calm down before continuing, "His girlfriend distracted him and he didn''t see our sister run onto the street chasing after our spooked cat then... A car came out of nowhere and she...She didn''t survive. All because of Yurik! One fucking job to do and he failed it!"'
+			'Niko remains silent for a few seconds before responding, "She died... my big brother only needed to watch her for a few minutes, but of course he was too distracted by that Bitch Vio..." You place your hand on his shoulder, causing him to calm down before continuing, "His girlfriend distracted him and he didn''t see our sister run onto the street chasing after our spooked cat then... a car came out of nowhere and she... she didn''t survive. All because of Yurik! One fucking job to do and he failed it!"'
 
 			act 'Place your hand on his shoulder':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Niko takes a long breath and remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then saying, "Never mind. It was a long time ago and I have moved on, so wanna try something interesting?" You raise an eyebrow as you reply, "What do you have in mind?" Niko unbuttons his pants then says, "I am really feeling stressed right now and if you can help me relax then I would be so grateful. Can you please do this little favor for me <<$pcs_firstname>>?...Please." Niko gives you an innocent frown.'
+				'Niko takes a long breath and remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then saying, "Never mind. It was a long time ago and I have moved on, so wanna try something interesting?" You raise an eyebrow as you reply, "What do you have in mind?" Niko unbuttons his pants and then says, "I am really feeling stressed right now and if you can help me relax then I would be so grateful. Can you please do this little favor for me <<$pcs_firstname>>?... please." Niko gives you an innocent frown.'
 
 				act 'Sure':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your...family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who...passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my brother and I have never really spoken much, at least not without it ending in a fight.'
+			'As Niko is applying the sunscreen, you say, "Do you mind if I ask you some more questions about your... family? I am really interested in getting to know you better." Niko pauses for a second then replies, "Sure, why not? Ask away." You then say, "You told me that you had a sister who... passed away, but you never told me what happened to your younger brother or your father." Niko continues applying the sunscreen to your skin as he answers, "After my sister''s death, my brother and I have never really spoken much, at least not without it ending in a fight.'
 
 			act 'Continue listening':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 																	*clr & cla
 																	gs'stat'															
 																	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d9.jpg"></center>'
-																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, You ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
+																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, you ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
 
 																	act 'Wait for ice cream':
 																		*clr & cla
@@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Burly Bearded Man">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/Niko/yurikev/avatars/yurik.jpg"></center>'
-		'You turn around to see a man standing across the room from you; covered in tattoos. You take a closer look and recognize him as the burly bearded man that attacked you before. You gasp, "You''re the one that attacked me." The bearded man chuckles as he replies, "Oh yeah. You''re the girl that Nikolai is dating, He got you here a lot quicker than I thought. That boy works fast, I see." The man approaches you as you let out a scream, causing Niko to storm into the room.'
+		'You turn around to see a man standing across the room from you; covered in tattoos. You take a closer look and recognize him as the burly bearded man that attacked you before. You gasp, "You''re the one that attacked me." The bearded man chuckles as he replies, "Oh yeah. You''re the girl that Nikolai is dating, he got you here a lot quicker than I thought. That boy works fast, I see." The man approaches you as you let out a scream, causing Niko to storm into the room.'
 
 		act 'See what Niko does':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -929,14 +929,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-					'After Yurik angrily storms out of the room, Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder and says, "Oh that brother of mine, he is such a wild card. Are you alright?" You pull away from him, "What did he mean by <font color=#FF00FF>gift</font>? You didn''t send him after me, did you?" Niko chuckles for a few seconds before replying, "Of course not, He was just talking... about a bet we had a few days ago which I promised him 50 ruble if he won an arm wrestling contest. That''s all, really." You stare him in the eyes for a few seconds.'
+					'After Yurik angrily storms out of the room, Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder and says, "Oh that brother of mine, he is such a wild card. Are you alright?" You pull away from him, "What did he mean by <font color=#FF00FF>gift</font>? You didn''t send him after me, did you?" Niko chuckles for a few seconds before replying, "Of course not, he was just talking... about a bet we had a few days ago which I promised him 50 ruble if he won an arm wrestling contest. That''s all, really." You stare him in the eyes for a few seconds.'
 
 					act 'Listen to Niko':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'						
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer3.jpg"></center>'					
-						'Niko''s posture lowers as he tells you, "I know it sounds hard to believe, but please try to believe me. I would never do anything to harm you. You mean everything to me <<$pcs_firstname>>. All the time I have spent with you has been the greatest time in my life...Please <<$pcs_firstname>>. I love you." Niko lifts your hands to his face and begins kissing them repeatedly.'
+						'Niko''s posture lowers as he tells you, "I know it sounds hard to believe, but please try to believe me. I would never do anything to harm you. You mean everything to me <<$pcs_firstname>>. All the time I have spent with you has been the greatest time in my life... please <<$pcs_firstname>>. I love you." Niko lifts your hands to his face and begins kissing them repeatedly.'
 
 						act 'I believe you':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head as you say, "I''m not falling for it Niko. I know that you''ve been lying to me and to have your brother attack me...Why? To make you look tough?"' 
+								'You shake your head as you say, "I''m not falling for it Niko. I know that you''ve been lying to me and to have your brother attack me... why? To make you look tough?"' 
 								
 								act 'See Niko''s response':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -1038,7 +1038,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hallway Strip':
 			inhib_exp += 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/strip/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There...I took off my top...I feel more daring now..Thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
+			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There... I took off my top... I feel more daring now... thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs'stat'
 			
@@ -1246,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You happily take the bottle then give Niko a wink. You both take a seat and begin chatting about various topics as Niko continues pouring you more beer. After a few minutes, You begin feeling the alcohol kicking in, causing you to feel groggy. Niko grabs on your ass and asks, "Are you up for a dance?"'
+		'You happily take the bottle then give Niko a wink. You both take a seat and begin chatting about various topics as Niko continues pouring you more beer. After a few minutes, you begin feeling the alcohol kicking in, causing you to feel groggy. Niko grabs on your ass and asks, "Are you up for a dance?"'
 
 		act 'Dance':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1334,7 +1334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 													minut += 5
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/Valentin.jpg"></center>'
-													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d...be right back. I was waiting...for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
+													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
 													
 													act 'Hear Niko''s reply':
 														*clr & cla
@@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'After School 2':
 							minut -= 3
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow4.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You suddenly hear Niko groan as he begins spraying his hot cum down your throat. You swallow it while enjoying the sting as it slides down your throat, knowing that you have fully satisfied Niko. You slowly look up to Niko, "I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." Niko recoils in shock, "Uhh, I love you too and I''m...glad you enjoy our time together." You can tell that your sudden show of affection caught Niko off guard which makes you giggle for a few seconds as Niko buttons his pants then says, "You were outstanding today. I always have a blast when I''m with you. Here are your clothes. You should get dressed before anyone sees us."'
+							'You suddenly hear Niko groan as he begins spraying his hot cum down your throat. You swallow it while enjoying the sting as it slides down your throat, knowing that you have fully satisfied Niko. You slowly look up to Niko, "I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." Niko recoils in shock, "Uhh, I love you too and I''m... glad you enjoy our time together." You can tell that your sudden show of affection caught Niko off guard which makes you giggle for a few seconds as Niko buttons his pants then says, "You were outstanding today. I always have a blast when I''m with you. Here are your clothes. You should get dressed before anyone sees us."'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A189', 1
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1483,7 +1483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sonia Block':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Sonia Ivanko">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/soniaupset.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. As you are both walking, you suddenly hear, "No walking in the halls until class is back in session!" You turn to see Sonia Ivanko holding a notepad. Niko responds, "What''s it to you?" Sonia replies, "I''m the school hall monitor and it''s my duty to stop students from breaking the rules. so get back to the lunch room before I report you to the principle."'
+	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. As you are both walking, you suddenly hear, "No walking in the halls until class is back in session!" You turn to see Sonia Ivanko holding a notepad. Niko responds, "What''s it to you?" Sonia replies, "I''m the school hall monitor and it''s my duty to stop students from breaking the rules. So get back to the lunch room before I report you to the principle."'
 	*nl
 	'Niko grunts, "Fine! You really need to lighten up sometime Sonia. Better yet, try getting laid. It will help you not being such an up tight bitch." Sonia scowls then points her pencil at Niko. "Lunch room, NOW!" You can hear Niko utter under his voice, "If only <font color=#FF00FF>Sonia wasn''t such a prude and got laid</font> then we could have had a good time." As you both walk back to the cafeteria.'
 

locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/ra8.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!...Don''t drop her!....Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
+							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!... Don''t drop her!... Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
 
 							act 'Turn around':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'								
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum10.mp4"></video></center>'								
-									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright?....She will be fine. She just needs some more rest....She''s moving. Do you think she is?..."'
+									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright...? She will be fine. She just needs some more rest... she''s moving. Do you think she is...?"'
 									
 									act '...':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Aftermath'
 								end	
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00>Viktoria "Vicky" Meynold</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance..for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance.. for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
 	
@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Classroom Dream':
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'	
-		'You recoil in shock. "Wha...Me?" The teacher places both hands on the desk then says, "Of course I mean you. Do you know of any other whores that haven''t already volunteered?" You can just barely make out Sonia under the table sucking on the teacher''s dick.'
+		'You recoil in shock. "Wha... me?" The teacher places both hands on the desk then says, "Of course I mean you. Do you know of any other whores that haven''t already volunteered?" You can just barely make out Sonia under the table sucking on the teacher''s dick.'
 
 		act 'Walk to the front of the class':	
 			*clr & cla

locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/niko3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have a surprise activity for today, We could be out all afternoon. Are you up for it?"'
+	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have a surprise activity for today, we could be out all afternoon. Are you up for it?"'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 80:'You and Niko have a great relationship.'	
 	*nl	
 	if NikoLuv > -4 and  NikoPayback = 0 and NikoAlko = 0:
-		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "Good to see you again. would you like a drink?"'
+		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "Good to see you again. Would you like a drink?"'
 	elseif NikoLuv > -4 and  NikoPayback = 0 and NikoAlko >= 2:
 		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "You''re looking lovely today, Would you like to dance."'
 	elseif NikoPayback = 2 and NikoPayed ! daystart:
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Breakup':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, You disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
+	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, you disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
 
 	act 'Walk away':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -703,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Disco Breakup':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, You disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
+	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, you disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
 
 	act 'Walk away':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="maroon"><<"Dmitriy [Dimka] Nosov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko and give him a smile then see Dimka approach you before giving Niko a puzzled look. "What are you with <<$pcs_firstname>>. She is my girl." Niko gives Dimka a blank stare as he responds, "Sure she is...Why don''t you just piss off before you piss me off?" Dimka then says, "Why don''t we ask her who she''s dating?" Niko replies, "Because asking a girl to kiss and tell is rude." Dimka looks shocked as he responds, "You don''t care? But would you care if I told you that <<$pcs_nickname>> here is a cocksucker?" Niko raises an eyebrow. "Well do you have proof of that, or are you just blowing smoke?"'
+	'You walk up to Niko and give him a smile then see Dimka approach you before giving Niko a puzzled look. "What are you with <<$pcs_firstname>>. She is my girl." Niko gives Dimka a blank stare as he responds, "Sure she is... why don''t you just piss off before you piss me off?" Dimka then says, "Why don''t we ask her who she''s dating?" Niko replies, "Because asking a girl to kiss and tell is rude." Dimka looks shocked as he responds, "You don''t care? But would you care if I told you that <<$pcs_nickname>> here is a cocksucker?" Niko raises an eyebrow. "Well do you have proof of that, or are you just blowing smoke?"'
 
 	act 'See what Dimka does':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/pissoff.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Niko begins lighting his cigarette before Dimka suddenly shouts, "How dare you!? You fucking sack of shit! That was my video!" Niko gets off the wall then approaches Dimka, causing Dimka to immediately back up. Niko grabs Dimka''s face with one hand then brings it to his before blowing smoke in his face then saying, "I will give you one more chance to leave before I accept Lavrenti''s offer to make your life a living hell." Dimka quickly backs off as he says, "You''re insane!...Whatever...Keep her!" Dimka then quickly walks away.'		
+			'Niko begins lighting his cigarette before Dimka suddenly shouts, "How dare you!? You fucking sack of shit! That was my video!" Niko gets off the wall then approaches Dimka, causing Dimka to immediately back up. Niko grabs Dimka''s face with one hand then brings it to his before blowing smoke in his face then saying, "I will give you one more chance to leave before I accept Lavrenti''s offer to make your life a living hell." Dimka quickly backs off as he says, "You''re insane! Whatever... keep her!" Dimka then quickly walks away.'		
 		
 			act 'Thank Niko':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/hug1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly...Unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
+				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly... unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
 
 				if NikoEv >= 17:
 					act 'Sure thing':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Events'

locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko guides you through the park as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of...a...Crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
+	'Niko guides you through the park as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of a... a crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
 	*nl
 	'You ask, "But how much does he want exactly?" Niko replies, "Uh don''t worry about that. I will handle that when the time comes. Just know that it is a lot!" You shake your head, "How the hell will we be able to pay "A lot" to this man?"'
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters\pavlovsk\school\boy\fedor\fedorev2\home\3way/foreplay2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, You obediently switch dicks and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
+					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, you obediently switch dicks and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
 
 					act 'Continue':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Yurik Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/avatars/threaten1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continues pulling you through the hallway as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik...Just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
+						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continuous pulling you through the hallway as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik... just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/deek/deek.jpg"></center>'
-								'You meekly nod and he says, "Good, you know your place." Yurik lifts you up then drops you on the bed with your head at the foot of the bed then he quickly romoves his pants causing his 19 centimeter penis to spring out. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Ohh wow. his dick is so big. There is no way that will fit inside me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' Yurik approaches your face as you lay still, in complete shock.'
+								'You meekly nod and he says, "Good, you know your place." Yurik lifts you up then drops you on the bed with your head at the foot of the bed then he quickly romoves his pants causing his 19 centimeter penis to spring out. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Ohh wow. His dick is so big. There is no way that will fit inside me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' Yurik approaches your face as you lay still, in complete shock.'
 
 								act 'See what Yurik does':	
 									*clr & cla
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Wake':
 		minut += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/bedroom/relaxing1.jpg"></center>'
-		'After relaxing for a few minutes, You get up then stretch your body before saying, "I should head home. It is getting late." Niko places his hand on your shoulder. "Will you be alright on your own?" You reply, "Of course. I''ll see you tomorrow." You lean forward and kiss Niko on the cheek before getting up, getting dressed then leaving Niko''s house.'			
+		'After relaxing for a few minutes, you get up then stretch your body before saying, "I should head home. It is getting late." Niko places his hand on your shoulder. "Will you be alright on your own?" You reply, "Of course. I''ll see you tomorrow." You lean forward and kiss Niko on the cheek before getting up, getting dressed then leaving Niko''s house.'			
 
 		act 'Walk onto the street':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'		
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'					
-					'You are quickly repulsed by the smell of it. Clearly Petia doesn''t bathe well, but you look up to Niko and see him slowly nodding at you to start, You take a deep breaths ask Petia says, "Don''t be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>. I know that you always wanted to be with me. Well now is your chance." Niko then says, "Shut the fuck up loser before I come over there and smack the shit out of you." Petia quickly silences as he rubs his dick against your lips, obviously very excited to have it sucked.' 
+					'You are quickly repulsed by the smell of it. Clearly Petia doesn''t bathe well, but you look up to Niko and see him slowly nodding at you to start, you take a deep breaths ask Petia says, "Don''t be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>. I know that you always wanted to be with me. Well now is your chance." Niko then says, "Shut the fuck up loser before I come over there and smack the shit out of you." Petia quickly silences as he rubs his dick against your lips, obviously very excited to have it sucked.' 
 					
 					act 'Suck Petia''s dick':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'			
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'Niko says, "If you have the cash then I have the girl for you. Speaking of cash..." Niko extends his hand. Petia scratches his head before saying, "I don''t exactly have it on me but I''ll be more than ha..." Niko immediately darts across the room then grabs Petia by his neck and says, "Where is the money Shithead!?" Petia suddenly replies, "Oh I.. I.. have it right here. I was just joking."  He reaches into his pocket then pulls out his wallet. Niko immediatly snatches it and takes all of the money before throwing it across the room. Petia hollers, "Hey man, you didn''t need to do that!" Niko then shoves him toward the door and Petia quickly runs out.'
+								'Niko says, "If you have the cash then I have the girl for you. Speaking of cash..." Niko extends his hand. Petia scratches his head before saying, "I don''t exactly have it on me but I''ll be more than ha..." Niko immediately darts across the room then grabs Petia by his neck and says, "Where is the money Shithead!?" Petia suddenly replies, "Oh I.. I.. have it right here. I was just joking." He reaches into his pocket then pulls out his wallet. Niko immediatly snatches it and takes all of the money before throwing it across the room. Petia hollers, "Hey man, you didn''t need to do that!" Niko then shoves him toward the door and Petia quickly runs out.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Vicky Talk':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vickysmile1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You turn around to see Vicky Meynold with a playful look on her face as she says, "You seem to be spending a lot of time with the boys. having fun out there?" You lower your head, feeling ashamed. Vicky approaches you and places both of her hands on your shoulders then says,. "You still with Niko aren''t you?" You keep your head lowered as you reply, "Yes... I am." Vicky lightly rocks you from side to side. "Maybe this is the path for you. Maybe you are a... uhh... You know."'		
+		'You turn around to see Vicky Meynold with a playful look on her face as she says, "You seem to be spending a lot of time with the boys. Having fun out there?" You lower your head, feeling ashamed. Vicky approaches you and places both of her hands on your shoulders then says,. "You still with Niko aren''t you?" You keep your head lowered as you reply, "Yes... I am." Vicky lightly rocks you from side to side. "Maybe this is the path for you. Maybe you are a... uhh... You know."'		
 
 		act 'finish her sentence':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -442,9 +442,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#9b5800><<"Petia Alkaev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big159.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you enter the locker room you see Petia waiting for you. You immediately know what he wants and you turn to Niko then ask, "Do you want me to suck his dick again?" But you say it with a smile. Niko looks at you with a surprised, but pleased look on his face, "You really seem to be getting into this, good, but no, he wants to fuck you this time. Don''t worry, he will pay a lot more this time. so take off your clothes." You obediently nod then remove your clothes. Petia watches you undress while removing his pants and stroking his penis.' 
+				'As you enter the locker room you see Petia waiting for you. You immediately know what he wants and you turn to Niko then ask, "Do you want me to suck his dick again?" But you say it with a smile. Niko looks at you with a surprised, but pleased look on his face, "You really seem to be getting into this, good, but no, he wants to fuck you this time. Don''t worry, he will pay a lot more this time. So take off your clothes." You obediently nod then remove your clothes. Petia watches you undress while removing his pants and stroking his penis.' 
 				*nl
-				'After fully undressing, you walk up to Petia then ask him, "How do you want me?" His jaw is hanging as he freezes for a few moments while scanning you body with his eyes. "SPEAK UP LOSER! TIME IS MONEY!" Niko exclaims. Petia jumps up in shock before replying, "Oh.. Oh.. Oh yes, Over.. By.. Um.. here..Climb on me." He then quickly sits on a bench. You can see the sweat trailing down his face.'
+				'After fully undressing, you walk up to Petia then ask him, "How do you want me?" His jaw is hanging as he freezes for a few moments while scanning you body with his eyes. "SPEAK UP LOSER! TIME IS MONEY!" Niko exclaims. Petia jumps up in shock before replying, "Oh.. Oh.. Oh yes, Over.. By.. Um.. here.. Climb on me." He then quickly sits on a bench. You can see the sweat trailing down his face.'
 				
 				act 'Approach Petia':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering you vagina, You feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering your vagina, you feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs'stat'	
 						
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Talk':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/smile1.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes as she says, "I''m...just happy to help." She then waves as she walk away while looking back at you.'
+		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes as she says, "I''m... just happy to help." She then waves as she walk away while looking back at you.'
 		
 		act 'Continue toward the hallway':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	end
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-			'The biker responds, "Of course I''m not interested because I''m not a fucking faggot!" Niko pauses for a second then bursts into laughter. "Oh  no. i didn''t mean....I meant my girl here, will take care of you...for a price of course." The biker chuckles for a few seconds before responding. "I see now. I thought you were hitting on me, kid. You''re lucky you weren''t, but let me take a look at her."'
+			'The biker responds, "Of course I''m not interested because I''m not a fucking faggot!" Niko pauses for a second then bursts into laughter. "Oh no, I didn''t mean... I meant my girl here, will take care of you... for a price of course." The biker chuckles for a few seconds before responding. "I see now. I thought you were hitting on me, kid. You''re lucky you weren''t, but let me take a look at her."'
 			
 			act 'Let the biker examine you':	
 				*clr & cla
@@ -992,7 +992,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik BJ':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you reach the top of the stairs, you see Niko walk out of the bathroom. Niko gives you a smile as he says, "Are you ready to head home. I''m ready to walk you home whenever you are ready." You return the smile as you nod. Niko then takes your hand then walks you out of the house, toward your apartment. When you reach your apartment Niko says,  "I had a wonderful time with you today. It is fun to sometimes relax and enjoy each other''s company isn''t it?" You nod happily as you reply, "I always enjoy being with you." Niko chuckles before responding, "You are just too sweet, anyway have a good night." Niko leans forward then gives you a kiss on the cheek before turning around and walking away.'
+						'As you reach the top of the stairs, you see Niko walk out of the bathroom. Niko gives you a smile as he says, "Are you ready to head home. I''m ready to walk you home whenever you are ready." You return the smile as you nod. Niko then takes your hand then walks you out of the house, toward your apartment. When you reach your apartment Niko says, "I had a wonderful time with you today. It is fun to sometimes relax and enjoy each other''s company isn''t it?" You nod happily as you reply, "I always enjoy being with you." Niko chuckles before responding, "You are just too sweet, anyway have a good night." Niko leans forward then gives you a kiss on the cheek before turning around and walking away.'
 						
 						act 'Enter apartment':gt 'KorrPar'	
 					end	
@@ -1033,7 +1033,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 			'Trucker2: "I wish my wife looked as good as you."'
 			'Trucker3: "Is that the girl you were talking about? The slu...." another guy shoves him in the ribs before whispering, "Watch what you say. We don''t want her to leave."'
 			*nl
-			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m...glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
+			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m... glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
 
 			act 'Give them your real name':	
 				*clr & cla

locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
 		
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
@@ -48,8 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/natalia.jpg"></center>'			
-				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
-
+				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back as you consider your options. Natalia asks, "So how did you end up... naked at school?"'
 				act 'Return to your story':	
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
@@ -64,14 +63,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lightly grip your hair as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
+							'You lightly grip your hair as you respond, "I just... need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up and says in a cheerful tone, "Well, you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
 
 							act 'Watch <<$VK_VikName>> leave':	
 								*clr & cla
@@ -100,7 +99,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-	'You quickly jump up and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead as she responds,"Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
+	'You quickly jump up and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead as she responds, "Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
 	*nl
 	'You both giggle before Katja tells you, "Vicky has something planned that she thinks we will all enjoy. It''s hard to imagine what it is but who knows? It might be fun. Anyway you should get yourself washed up. A nice relaxing bath can work wonders for the body and mind. You should also see Vicky when you have the chance. She will be pleased to see you up.' 
 	if NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
@@ -360,7 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the kitchen as Katja and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen as Katja and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow... that''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
 	
 	act 'Finish eating':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -470,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat 4':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>>  smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
+	'You approach <<$VK_VikName>>  as she is dancing and she turns to then grabs you by the hand and says, "Don''t just stand there. Join in and have some fun!" You begin moving to the beats of the music trying your best to stay in sync as <<$VK_VikName>> dances fast and loose, moving to her own beat. You continue dancing when <<$VK_VikName>> smiles at you and says, "Life can be damn fun when you stop thinking about what everyone else wants and focus on what you do. Everyone always seem to want to be normal but being normal just leads to boring routine,' 
 	*nl
 	'where you spend all of your time doing what you think others want you to do. Not enough people just says fuck that and do what they want. Try not to be one of those people <<$pcs_nickname>>. Be what you want to be. Nothing else matters. Only you and whoever you decide to let in. Be it a friend a boyfriend or even a girlfriend. I don''t judge. Just be happy with what you want and who you are. Don''t let anyone get in the way of that okay?" You nod your head and continue dancing as you ponder what <<$VK_VikName>> said. After a few more minutes of dancing, <<$VK_VikName>> begins breathing heavy as she grows tired. She then spins 4 times before falling face first into her bed and not getting up. You walk over to her radio then turn it off so that <<$VK_VikName>> can get some sleep.'
 	
@@ -630,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/Natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -689,7 +688,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
+	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit and I wanted to ask you... would you like to walk home with me?"'
 
 	act 'I would love to':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -710,7 +709,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love to, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess... just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I... I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -770,7 +769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park':
 	'You and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did and be unphased." You nod as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
 	*nl
 	if SexTalkNatalia = 4 or NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'"I..um..care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
+		'"I... uhm... care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground in front of her.'
 		act 'Kiss her':VKNataliaKiss = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Kiss'
 		act 'Change subject':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	else	
@@ -785,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big240.jpg"></center>'
-	'You and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home.  When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>> and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia as she walks away.'
+	'You and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home. When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>> and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia as she walks away.'
 	
 	act 'Enter your apartment':gt 'korrPar'
 end	
@@ -793,7 +792,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 	*clr & cla	
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'  	
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs'stat'	
@@ -930,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kat Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You are very important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end
@@ -1045,7 +1044,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... You should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out...And <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... Take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
+									'After the long passionate kiss Katja says, "Well... you should probably go see Vicky. She will see you out... and <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t forget about what I told you. Niko is no good for you and please... take care of yourself. You''re important to me." You give Katja a approving nod as she climbs out of the tub and you both get dried, dressed.'
 	
 									act 'Continue':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
 								end

locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 			if NikoVolkovQW = -1:
 				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for breaking up with you. I was just really upset and didn''t give you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you don''t give a shit about me but you will pay me back. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			else	
-				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. and never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you''re not fucking sorry but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
+				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. And never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you''re not fucking sorry but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			end	
 
 			act 'I understand':	
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/virgin.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You downcast your eyes as you tell Niko. "I''m a virgin but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding, "Wow you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." Niko then gently guides you toward the sink then undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants and pressing his dick against you vagina. Niko whispers in your ear, "I will take this slow for you ok?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his penis inside of your vagina, causing your hymen to stretch for his dick and after a few seconds, you feel your hymen give. You can feel a slight pain in your vagina as your hymen breaks and is soon increase slightly when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his penis deeper inside you and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
+			'You downcast your eyes as you tell Niko. "I''m a virgin but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding, "Wow you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." Niko then gently guides you toward the sink then undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants and pressing his dick against your vagina. Niko whispers in your ear, "I will take this slow for you ok?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his penis inside of your vagina, causing your hymen to stretch for his dick and after a few seconds, you feel your hymen give. You can feel a slight pain in your vagina as your hymen breaks and is soon increase slightly when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his penis deeper inside you and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'	
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/thighs.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko continues fucking you as he keeps you off the ground. You can''t help but feel somewhat impressed at his strength as he holds you up. You can hear Niko whispering in your ear. "How are you liking your fucking?" You look back at him then nod which seems to turn him on ,as he begins breathing faster. Niko''s breath suddenly stops as he pulls his dick out of you then begins rubbing his dick between your legs, milking his penis on the floor in front of you. After Niko finishes, you turn to him then ask, "Are you satisfied Niko? May I leave now?" Niko gives your ass a firm smack as he replies, "You can go now but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes then get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
+				'Niko continues fucking you as he keeps you off the ground. You can''t help but feel somewhat impressed at his strength as he holds you up. You can hear Niko whispering in your ear. "How are you liking your fucking?" You look back at him then nod which seems to turn him on, as he begins breathing faster. Niko''s breath suddenly stops as he pulls his dick out of you then begins rubbing his dick between your legs, milking his penis on the floor in front of you. After Niko finishes, you turn to him then ask, "Are you satisfied Niko? May I leave now?" Niko gives your ass a firm smack as he replies, "You can go now but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes then get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 					gs'stat'	
 					'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big9.jpg"></center>'					
-					'Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching you, wrapping his arms around you and saying, "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I will make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on, and I''ll see you later." You lean forward, and give Vitek a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Viktor. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives you ass a light smack before responding, "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
+					'Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching you, wrapping his arms around you and saying, "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I will make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on, and I''ll see you later." You lean forward, and give Vitek a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Viktor. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives your ass a light smack before responding, "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 1':
 	minut += 15
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/highway/borisdiner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'A biker approaches Niko then says, "I want to spend some time with this girl again." He then begins rubbing your cheek gently. as he hands Niko the money. Niko counts the money then nods to the biker, who leads you to the restroom where he says, "Take off your clothes please." The biker removes his pants while watching you undress.'
+	'A biker approaches Niko then says, "I want to spend some time with this girl again." He then begins rubbing your cheek gently. As he hands Niko the money. Niko counts the money then nods to the biker, who leads you to the restroom where he says, "Take off your clothes please." The biker removes his pants while watching you undress.'
 
 	act 'Blowjob':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 1':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/1/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lean over the toilet and spit on your two fingers then use them to lubricate your anus. The man immediatly realizes what you are doing then lines up behind you then slowly inserts his penis inside of your anus, causing you to let out a low, but long lasting moan. After you anus adjusts, for this man''s penis then he begins thrusting his thick penis in your ass. The pleasure of his big dick is so intense as it squeezes its way through your ass. The man begins moaning loudly before saying, "Holy fuck! Your ass is so tight." You can tell by his heavy breathing that he is about ready to cum.'
+		'You lean over the toilet and spit on your two fingers then use them to lubricate your anus. The man immediatly realizes what you are doing then lines up behind you then slowly inserts his penis inside of your anus, causing you to let out a low, but long lasting moan. After your anus adjusts, for this man''s penis then he begins thrusting his thick penis in your ass. The pleasure of his big dick is so intense as it squeezes its way through your ass. The man begins moaning loudly before saying, "Holy fuck! Your ass is so tight." You can tell by his heavy breathing that he is about ready to cum.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow7.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills you mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. Great work." He then walks back into the diner as Niko approaches you. "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+				'He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills your mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. Great work." He then walks back into the diner as Niko approaches you. "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'Trucker'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow7.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'As you reach forward and grab onto the man''s crotch, he immediately pulls down his pants then let''s you touch his hard penis. You lean more and wrap your lips around his dick, hearing him let out a long moan as you are sucking and licking his rock hard cock. He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills you mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. great work." He then walks back into the diner as you spit his cum onto the floor. Niko approaches you then asks, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+				'As you reach forward and grab onto the man''s crotch, he immediately pulls down his pants then let''s you touch his hard penis. You lean more and wrap your lips around his dick, hearing him let out a long moan as you are sucking and licking his rock hard cock. He begins squirming almost immediately then groans as he fills your mouth with his cum. <font color=#FF00FF>Wow, he came so quickly. Touching on my body must have really turned him on.</font> The man fully milks his dick in your mouth before pulling up his pants then saying, "Damn girl, you really got me off quickly. Great work." He then walks back into the diner as you spit his cum onto the floor. Niko approaches you then asks, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/Home/bedroom/cum/cum10.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'The man''s breathing suddenly stops as he begins pumping your vagina with his warm seed. You close your eyes and focus on the warmth of the man''s cum filling you. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that I''m letting this man, who I don''t even know cum inside me. Am I insane?</font> The man pulls out of you, causing his cum to leak out as he says, "That was amazing, You are one sexy girl <<$NikoSlutName>>. I can''t wait to use your services again." The man watches his cum leaking out of you as he pulls up his pants then walks back to the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+						'The man''s breathing suddenly stops as he begins pumping your vagina with his warm seed. You close your eyes and focus on the warmth of the man''s cum filling you. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that I''m letting this man, who I don''t even know cum inside me. Am I insane?</font> The man pulls out of you, causing his cum to leak out as he says, "That was amazing, you are one sexy girl <<$NikoSlutName>>. I can''t wait to use your services again." The man watches his cum leaking out of you as he pulls up his pants then walks back to the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 						gs 'cum_call', '', 'Trucker'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/2/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get up and walk over to the nearby wall then lean forward while lubricating your anus, signaling him to fuck your ass. The man''s eyes light up as he approaches you then begins rubbing his penis against you anus before slowly pushing it inside. You moan as you feel his warm hard cock, enter your ass, pushing its way inside you. The man start moaning with you before muttering under his breath. "Fuck her ass is so tight. I won''t last long at this rate." The man begin fucking your ass as he moans loudly.'
+				'You get up and walk over to the nearby wall then lean forward while lubricating your anus, signaling him to fuck your ass. The man''s eyes light up as he approaches you then begins rubbing his penis against your anus before slowly pushing it inside. You moan as you feel his warm hard cock, enter your ass, pushing its way inside you. The man start moaning with you before muttering under his breath. "Fuck her ass is so tight. I won''t last long at this rate." The man begin fucking your ass as he moans loudly.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You start rapidly licking and sucking his dick when you hear him moan as he begins filling your mouth with his warm seed which you spit out into the nearby trashcan, causing the man to frown as he looks down to you and says, "Does it really taste that bad? Oh well, You were great. I look forward to doing this again." The man then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready, for another customer, or would you like to wash up first?"'
+				'You start rapidly licking and sucking his dick when you hear him moan as he begins filling your mouth with his warm seed which you spit out into the nearby trashcan, causing the man to frown as he looks down to you and says, "Does it really taste that bad? Oh well, you were great. I look forward to doing this again." The man then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready, for another customer, or would you like to wash up first?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/vag1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as he fills the condom with his warm seed, You continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you and says, "You did a great job. Now let''s get back to the diner. We don''t want to keep your customers waiting." You and Niko head back inside the diner.'
+					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as he fills the condom with his warm seed, you continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you and says, "You did a great job. Now let''s get back to the diner. We don''t want to keep your customers waiting." You and Niko head back inside the diner.'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', 'Biker'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/vag1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as it begins filling your womb with his warm seed, You continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko then approaches you and says, "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. You should probably get washed up for the next customer."'
+					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as it begins filling your womb with his warm seed, you continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko then approaches you and says, "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. You should probably get washed up for the next customer."'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', 'Biker'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 5':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/5/anal1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You begin unbuttoning the trucker''s pants as you say, "I want you to fuck my ass." The truckers eyes light up. "Hot damn, that sound great to me." You giggle at his accent as you pull down his pants then begin lubing his penis before approaching the nearby wall. You bend over then give the trucker a seductive wink, causing him to approach you then slowly push his penis inside of your ass.'
 			*nl
-			'You close your eyes then focus on his hard penis slowly making its way inside you. After the trucker gives your ass a chance to adjust to his penis, he begins slowly thrusting, causing pleasure to build as you anus tightens around his dick. The trucker begin moaning loudly before saying, "You''re rear end is so tight. It''s so nice feeling."'
+			'You close your eyes then focus on his hard penis slowly making its way inside you. After the trucker gives your ass a chance to adjust to his penis, he begins slowly thrusting, causing pleasure to build as your anus tightens around his dick. The trucker begin moaning loudly before saying, "You''re rear end is so tight. It''s so nice feeling."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/ride1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "I want to ride your cock." The man gets noticeably excited as he responds, "Now that''s a good girl." He then rubs your cheek as you remove your pants. The trucker lays on the ground then signals you to ride him. You mount him, guiding his penis inside of your vagina  before riding him at a moderate pace. The man suddenly lifts you up by your legs, pushing his dick deeper inside of you as he whispers in your ear, "How does it feel <<$NikoSlutName>>? Good?" You meekly nod your head, enjoying the pressure of his dick deep inside of your vagina.'
+			'You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "I want to ride your cock." The man gets noticeably excited as he responds, "Now that''s a good girl." He then rubs your cheek as you remove your pants. The trucker lays on the ground then signals you to ride him. You mount him, guiding his penis inside of your vagina before riding him at a moderate pace. The man suddenly lifts you up by your legs, pushing his dick deeper inside of you as he whispers in your ear, "How does it feel <<$NikoSlutName>>? Good?" You meekly nod your head, enjoying the pressure of his dick deep inside of your vagina.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -901,7 +901,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/rear1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You turn around then slowly begin removing your pants before leaning over the desk then rubbing your fingers across your vagina, signaling him to fuck you. The man happily approaches you before shoving him penis inside of you vagina then thrusting his hip, pushing his penis deeper inside you. The trucker begins moaning as he fucks you at a moderate pace as he says, "How are you enjoying this sweetie?" You give him a smile as you reply, "I''m loving it."'
+			'You turn around then slowly begin removing your pants before leaning over the desk then rubbing your fingers across your vagina, signaling him to fuck you. The man happily approaches you before shoving him penis inside of your vagina then thrusting his hip, pushing his penis deeper inside you. The trucker begins moaning as he fucks you at a moderate pace as he says, "How are you enjoying this sweetie?" You give him a smile as you reply, "I''m loving it."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 8':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/8/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take ther truckers dick into you mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. '
+				'You take ther truckers dick into your mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. '
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 8':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum1.11.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You take ther truckers dick into you mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. After a few more seconds, the man groans as his penis begins throbbing in your mouth, filling it with his warm seed which you let leak out of your mouth and onto the floor. The man takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying, "You were outstanding <<$NikoSlutName>>. I look forward to seeing you again soon." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+					'You take ther truckers dick into your mouth, firmly wrapping your lips around it before licking and sucking it. The man begins moaning frequently, clearly enjoying your performance. After a few more seconds, the man groans as his penis begins throbbing in your mouth, filling it with his warm seed which you let leak out of your mouth and onto the floor. The man takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying, "You were outstanding <<$NikoSlutName>>. I look forward to seeing you again soon." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 9':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/6/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You wrap you lips around the truckers dick, evoking a moan from him. You begin sucking his dick while massaging his cock with your tongue, enjoying the warmth of his penis in your mouth. After a minute, the trucker groans as he begin pumping his seed into your mouth which you let slide out of you mouth as you tip your head sideways, letting his warm cum leak out. The trucker catches his breath then says, "You are a really good cocksucker. I will definitely be calling for your services again." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+				'You wrap you lips around the truckers dick, evoking a moan from him. You begin sucking his dick while massaging his cock with your tongue, enjoying the warmth of his penis in your mouth. After a minute, the trucker groans as he begin pumping his seed into your mouth which you let slide out of your mouth as you tip your head sideways, letting his warm cum leak out. The trucker catches his breath then says, "You are a really good cocksucker. I will definitely be calling for your services again." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1319,7 +1319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner Interior':
 
 	if hour = 18:
 		if $YurikEv['Name'] = 'Yurik':
-			'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik In''">Yurik</a> sitting in the corner of the bar. eating some dinner.'
+			'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik In''">Yurik</a> sitting in the corner of the bar. Eating some dinner.'
 		else
 			'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Yurik In''">a burly bearded man</a> sitting in the corner of the bar, eating some dinner.'
 		end
@@ -1550,7 +1550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bikers':
 		if rand (1,2) = 1:
 			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "When people ask me why I travel the roads instead of getting a normal job and a family, I always tell them this; last I worked as a bank teller, can you believe that? Anyway one day this fat woman walks into the bank and she asks me to check her balance. Guess what I did? I pushed the bitch over! How is that for checking your balance bitch?" You and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
 		else
-			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "Alright guys you gotta hear this one. What do you tell a woman with tow black eyes?...Nothing you haven''t already told her twice!" The other bikers break into laughter before the biker tells another joke, "Now what do you call a woman with two black "GUYS"?... A bitch looking for a good time!" He then sexually thrusts his hips back and forth, causing you and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
+			'You approach one of the bikers, you see him telling a joke to the others. "Alright guys you gotta hear this one. What do you tell a woman with tow black eyes...? Nothing you haven''t already told her twice!" The other bikers break into laughter before the biker tells another joke, "Now what do you call a woman with two black "GUYS"?... A bitch looking for a good time!" He then sexually thrusts his hips back and forth, causing you and all the other bikers break into loud laughter as the biker prepare to tell another story...'
 		end
 	end	
 	

locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker5.mp4"></video></center>'	
 										'You lower your head in submission, "Please don''t do that. I''ll stay quiet." Dan quickly turns you around then unbuttons his pants before sliding his dick inside of your ass, causing a surge of pressure and pain to fill your ass. Dan wastes no time and begins fucking your ass, slowly at first then continues picking up the pace. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I can''t believe this is happening. Niko where are you? Please help me!'+$CloseInnerThought+' Dan continues fucking your ass when his phone begins ringing.'
 										*nl
-										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room...Sure you can come." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room... sure you can come." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 										$orgasm_txt = ''
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker6.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why...mmmmm...Why''d you....mmmm..Tell him abo...." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
+											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why... mmmmm... Why''d you.... mmmm... tell him abo..." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
 											$orgasm_txt = ''
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big9.jpg"></center>'
 												if kotovloveQW > 0:
 													kotovloveQW = -1
-													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a...whore and I can...Grr...prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
+													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a... whore and I can... grr... prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
 													*nl
 													'"I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." You suddenly realize what that Dan must have recorded you as you sucked Niko''s dick in the hallway, after school. '+$OpenInnerThought+'There is no way I can talk my way out of this. What will Viktor do to me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vitek watches the video for a few more seconds before releasing Dan''s throat then turning to you with his face; seething with rage. "You fucking worthless whore!" He then lifts his hand and smacks you hard, knocking you to the ground. Vitek begins smashing a nearby garbage can in rage then Dan places his hand on Vitek''s shoulder, "It''s alright Vitek, you don''t need her, you never did." Vitek takes a few seconds to calm himself then brushes Dan''s hand off his shoulder as he unbuttons his pants then pushes his dick against your lips. "What are you waiting for, whore? Start sucking." You meekly nod before wrapping your lips around his dick.'
 												else
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 															*nl
 															'Dan: I told you that she was a freak. She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass.'
 															'Vasily: Come on guys, we already have Sonia, we don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too.'
-															'Dan: She might be like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong, for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. the boys are still on the stairwell.'
+															'Dan: She might be like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong, for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. The boys are still on the stairwell.'
 															if hotcat >= 6 and salocatnow < 5:
 																'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> is much hotter than Sonia anyway. Let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
 															else
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 																		'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say, punk?" Dan approaches them and says, "Hey, I''m sure that Fedor is just misunderstanding what''s going on. Let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl, who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>> and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
 																		*nl
-																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?...Why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
+																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?... why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
 																		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation','exhibitionism'
 																		gs 'stat'
 																		
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																			gs'stat'															
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You..You bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
+																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You... you bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
 																			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 																			gs 'stat'
 																			act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 									'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/photos/big10.jpg"></center>'
 								end
 								if npc_rel['A144'] >= 80:
-									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body wont let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck you asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
+									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body wont let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
 									*nl
 									'Valentin pulls Anushka away while Alyona follows, he pulls her to where the stairs exit out into the hallway. Anushka jerks her arm away from him. Valentin puts his hands in the air. "Just go Nush, you can''t do anything here... So just go." She shakes her head in disgust at him. "Fuck you Val." She then turns and walks off while Alyona gives Roman a dirty look as she follows Anushka. Valentin calls after them. "Come on, don''t be like that Nush." Then he starts walking back to the group. "Fuck... She is pissed." Radomir pats him on the shoulder. "She will get over it, she always does."'
 								elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 										inhib_exp = 5
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock1.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'You can feel Radomir''s penis enter your vagina causing a jolt of pressure as your weight pushes his cock completely inside of you. knowing that it is too late to go back, you begin riding Radomir. You can hear the boys cheering as they enjoy the show. You can still see Pauline recording you and the other girls cheering with malicious smirks on their faces.'
+										'You can feel Radomir''s penis enter your vagina causing a jolt of pressure as your weight pushes his cock completely inside of you. Knowing that it is too late to go back, you begin riding Radomir. You can hear the boys cheering as they enjoy the show. You can still see Pauline recording you and the other girls cheering with malicious smirks on their faces.'
 										$orgasm_txt = ''
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 												*clr & cla
 												gs'stat'					
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images\shared\sex\cum\mouth\cum1,3.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'You obediently  open you mouth as Valentin grabs you head then holds it to his dick before jerking off then shooting his load onto your tongue. You keep your mouth open accepting his cum inside as you swallow it as quickly as you can to make room for more. The taste is horrible but you know that you have no choice. After Valentin fully drains his cock into your mouth he then brushes your cheek and says, "That''s how you do it <<$pcs_nickname>>." He then zips up his pants and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on the floor.'
+												'You obediently  open your mouth as Valentin grabs you head then holds it to his dick before jerking off then shooting his load onto your tongue. You keep your mouth open accepting his cum inside as you swallow it as quickly as you can to make room for more. The taste is horrible but you know that you have no choice. After Valentin fully drains his cock into your mouth he then brushes your cheek and says, "That''s how you do it <<$pcs_nickname>>." He then zips up his pants and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on the floor.'
 												gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A158', 1
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 												gs 'stat'	
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 														!!we don''t have to worry about it right now, but next release we need to revisit this and add in a alternative version if Sveta was dating Artem.
 														'<center><b><h4><font color=#fb00b7><<"Valeria [Lera] Tsarev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big21.jpg"></center>'
-														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying...Hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
+														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying... hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
 														gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 														gs 'stat'	
 														
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																*clr & cla
 																gs'stat'
 																'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock7.mp4"></video></center>'
-																'Petka begins fondling your breasts as Artem spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, You lay still as Artem begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see Artem, Petka, Petia, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. Artem''s pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
+																'Petka begins fondling your breasts as Artem spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, you lay still as Artem begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see Artem, Petka, Petia, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. Artem''s pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
 																$orgasm_txt = ''
 																gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 																gs 'stat'
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 					gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 					gs'stat'				
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/1.jpg"></center>'
-					'He begins undressing you as he runs his hands down your body. You can feel you shirt being removed, followed by your pants. Roman finishes undressing you then begins sliding his hand up your leg arriving at you vagina which he begins fingering as you close your eyes, letting him do as he wants to your body. After a few seconds, Roman begins taking off his shirt then pulling down his pants. Roman whispers in your ear, "I''ve never had a girl suck my balls before. I want you to be the first." He then lightly pushes down on your shoulders.'
+					'He begins undressing you as he runs his hands down your body. You can feel you shirt being removed, followed by your pants. Roman finishes undressing you then begins sliding his hand up your leg arriving at your vagina which he begins fingering as you close your eyes, letting him do as he wants to your body. After a few seconds, Roman begins taking off his shirt then pulling down his pants. Roman whispers in your ear, "I''ve never had a girl suck my balls before. I want you to be the first." He then lightly pushes down on your shoulders.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you...Ehh...take it slow...Ehhh...Please." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, It seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -807,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/6.jpg"></center>'
-										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. '+$OpenInnerThought+'So...He didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why wont anyone care for me anymore?'+$CloseInnerThought+' you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
+										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. '+$OpenInnerThought+'So... he didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why won''t anyone care for me anymore?'+$CloseInnerThought+' you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
 										gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A189', 1
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, He is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 
 		act 'Embrace Niko':
 			*clr & cla

locations/ParChurch.qsrc

@@ -114,17 +114,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sermon':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/church'+ rand(1,5) +'.jpg"></center>'
 	if VK >= 0:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> listen intently to the priest as he teaches you the word of god. You study his teachings, feeling enlightened, until you reach the end of the sermon. You turn to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she gives you an approving smile before you both stand up.'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> listen intently to the priest as he teaches you the word of god. You study his teachings, feeling enlightened, until you reach the end of the sermon. You turn to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she gives you an approving smile before you both stand up.'
 	elseif VKChurch = 0 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 1:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 1 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 2:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 2 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 3:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 3 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 4:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	else
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	end
 
 	act 'Stand up':gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'

locations/ParChurch2.qsrc

@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secrets':
 			end
 			if evgenQW < 3:
 				'You shake your head then realize that Father Kirill can''t see you.'
-				'"No, Father. we only watched the movies." you tell him.'
+				'"No, Father. We only watched the movies." you tell him.'
 				'"Well then, no harm done then." he says, almost sounding disappointed.'
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla

locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ if numnpc = 16:
 				orgasm += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natasha/sex/school/natschoolowe.jpg"></center>'
-				'Her tongue starts to lick your clit, you bite your lip to try and keep from moaning to loudly. You lean back and relax, as you let Natasha pleasure you with her tongue. She is getting a lot better at this and if your not mistaken she is starting to like it a lot.'
+				'Her tongue starts to lick your clit, you bite your lip to try and keep from moaning to loudly. You lean back and relax, as you let Natasha pleasure you with her tongue. She is getting a lot better at this and if you''re not mistaken she is starting to like it a lot.'
 				'She starts using her fingers on you as well and is really getting into it, you start to pant and moan. Clamping a hand over your own mouth to keep yourself from crying out, it doesn''t her long to bring you to a climax.'
 				'Your whole body shudders as the orgasm rocks your body, you grind your pussy against her face as it does. Once the sensation has passed you look down and see Natasha smiling up at you, obviously pleased with herself. You lean down and give her a long slow passionate kiss, tasting your own pussy juices. A few moments later the bell rings and you both hurry to class.'
 				if $loc ! 'gdkin':

locations/Terminal.qsrc

@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ $askfather = {
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_17.jpg"></center>'
-						'Sitting at the table, You order food and drinks, and dad started asking you about everything.'
+						'Sitting at the table, you order food and drinks, and dad started asking you about everything.'
 						'You started with enthusiasm and a lot of talk about yourself, what you do, where go to school. Talk about Anya, that she was not admitted to the university, and worked as a salesgirl in the supermarket.'
 						'You tell him about your mother, she remarried, and you now have a stepfather and half brother Kolka..'
 						'After talking for awhile your father says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> I have to go, schedule to keep, I am here on weekends 12 00 to 14 00, I would be happy if you would visit me sometimes." With that he got up, paid for lunch and kissed you on the cheek goodbye.'
@@ -102,8 +102,8 @@ if trfatherQW = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/terminal/trfatherqw_3.jpg"></center>'
 			'You go up to the managers office. "Good afternoon! What I can help you?" he says.'
 			'"Hello, I wanted to know, if you know a Mikhail Kuznetsov or if he works here?"'
-			'He turns to his computer and pulls something up. "I''ll check in our database, yes, we have a driver by that name. He is on the road right now and only comes in on  Saturday at 12:00."'
-			'"Thank you very much, You helped me a lot."  With that you leaved but now you know when and where to find him.'
+			'He turns to his computer and pulls something up. "I''ll check in our database, yes, we have a driver by that name. He is on the road right now and only comes in on Saturday at 12:00."'
+			'"Thank you very much, you helped me a lot."  With that you leaved but now you know when and where to find him.'
 			act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt $curloc
 		end
 		act 'Approach the men':
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ elseif (trfatherQW >= 3 or trfatherQW < 0) and week = 6 and hour = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_9.jpg"></center>'
 		'You go to a group of men, drinking, laughing and talking loudly.'
 		'Approaching them, their eyes immediately turned to you.'
-		'"Hello, beauty, You want to have a drink with us?'
+		'"Hello, beauty, you want to have a drink with us?'
 		act 'Drink':
 			cls
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer'
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ elseif (trfatherQW >= 3 or trfatherQW < 0) and week = 6 and hour = 12:
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/sex/trfatherqw_12.jpg"></center>'
-					'You are barely aware of what they are doing, they quickly strip you naked. Soon you feel a dick being pushed inside or you pussy and ass at the same time.'
+					'You are barely aware of what they are doing, they quickly strip you naked. Soon you feel a dick being pushed inside or your pussy and ass at the same time.'
 					'The only time a hand is not covering your mouth is when there is a dick in it. Each of them seems to take multiple turns on all of your holes, with them switching so much, you completely lose track of how many men are even using you. By the time the start to finish, all you know is all three of your holes are acheing from being roughly used by the large gang of men around you.'
 					'When they finally all finish and leave, laughing. You feel cum leaking from all of your holes, as well as covering nearly every part of you body.'
 					act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt $curloc

locations/VolleyTrenerSpeak.qsrc

@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ if volleysostav > 0:
 	   gt 'Voltrenersex', 'discoSex'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go up to Mikhail Nikolaevich and politely say hello.'
+		'You go up to Mikhail Nikolaevich, and politely say hello.'
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I was told you were here, are you really that stupid? There''s a game tomorrow!"'
-		'"I...err...was...erm...dropping off a book for a friend," you mumble.'
+		'"I... err... was... erm... dropping off a book for a friend," you mumble.'
 		if alko > 1:
 			'"You''ve been drinking! If you can''t even take the team seriously, then you''re not playing tomorrow."'
 			npc_rel['A69'] -= 1
@@ -52,14 +52,14 @@ else
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, don''t piss me off. What I do is my business, and what you are doing here is also my business.'
 		if pcs_horny > 79:
 			trenerlust += 1
-			'"Is that the truth, Mikhail N. Are you here because of me?" You move closer to the coach and flutter your eyes at him.'
+			'"Is that the truth, Mr. Nikolaevich? Are you here because of me?" You move closer to the coach and flutter your eyes at him.'
 			'"I meant as your coach, and don''t think you can win just by fluttering your eyes. Want to impress me? Workout, and no partying."'
 		else
 			'"As your coach," he adds with a slight blush.'
 		end
 	else
 		'The coach looks at you with condemnation. "<<$pcs_lastname>>, you here again, what the fuck? This is not the place for candidates for the team.'
-		'"Mikhail N. you never said anything about not going out on a Friday."'
+		'"Mr. Nikolaevich, you never said anything about not going out on a Friday."'
 		'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, are you thick? When does the team play?"'
 		'"Saturday," you respond, sheepishly.'
 		'"So, on Friday I expect my players not to hang out here but go home and get some sleep. Or they aren''t going to be fit to play tomorrow. Clear? You have some skill, sort out your attitude and you might yet make the team."'

locations/Voltrener.qsrc

@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 		elseif pcs_vball < 40:
 			'Mikhail looks at you and says, "<<$pcs_lastname>>, you certainly don''t play bad, at least not for an amateur. With more work, you could reach a higher level."'
 		else
-			'Mikhail looks at you and says,"Ah, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you have the makings of an athlete, though I''m not sure if you are up to a professional level yet."'
+			'Mikhail looks at you and says, "Ah, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you have the makings of an athlete, though I''m not sure if you are up to a professional level yet."'
 			act 'Ask to join the team':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trener_speak':
 		trener_Speak = 6
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/voltrenerspeak19.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take Mikhail''s hand in yours and say, "Coach, I want you to know that I would never betray you. I certainly like to gossip, but human relationships are not the reason for the chatter. I''m not like the girl from the national team." Blurting this out, you stare at the coach and wait for his reaction.'
-		'"That damn Chinaman just can''t help but gossip." Mikhail says,smiling, "And you''re a stubborn wench, <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will think about it, now go home."'
+		'"That damn Chinaman just can''t help but gossip." Mikhail says, smiling, "And you''re a stubborn wench, <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will think about it, now go home."'
 	elseif trener_Speak = 6 and trenerSex >= 1:
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/event/voltrenerspeak21.jpg"></center>'

locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc

@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					cls
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voltrenersexshower12.jpg"></center>'
-					'Scared, you cover you ass with your hands and look at him like a deer caught in the headlights.'
+					'Scared, you cover your ass with your hands and look at him like a deer caught in the headlights.'
 					'Mikhail Nikolaevich gives you an evil look, "Prokhorov fucks your ass and you scream with joy, but your coach just wants to alleviate some tension and you curl up all scared?"'
 					'You can see from the look in his eyes that he''s been at the wine, and his slurring and unsteady legs confirm this. "Your ass isn''t that special." He spits on you and stumbles out of the showers.'
 					gs 'stat'

locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anal':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A69'
 			sexpartkno = 1
 			gs 'dinSex', 'boy_wants_anal', 'lubri'
-			'Once he has your ass good and wet, he sits back and pulls you on top of him. With one hand he guides his cock to your asshole, with the other he pulls you down. You feel the head of his cock against you ass. You bite your lip a little at the pain as he pulls you down, forcing his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. Once he has the head in, he uses both hands to hold your hips and pull you down. He encourages you to set the pace, and you lift yourself up and down to fuck his dick with your ass.'
+			'Once he has your ass good and wet, he sits back and pulls you on top of him. With one hand he guides his cock to your asshole, with the other he pulls you down. You feel the head of his cock against your ass. You bite your lip a little at the pain as he pulls you down, forcing his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. Once he has the head in, he uses both hands to hold your hips and pull you down. He encourages you to set the pace, and you lift yourself up and down to fuck his dick with your ass.'
 			gs 'dinsex', 'analsex', 10
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'discoSex':
 					npc_rel['A69'] += 5
 					if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensexdisco2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You sit on one of the toilets, pulling your skirt up and spreading your legs. Watching your little display for a moment, he pulls you up and then pulls you panties down, letting them pool around your ankles.'
+						'You sit on one of the toilets, pulling your skirt up and spreading your legs. Watching your little display for a moment, he pulls you up and then pulls your panties down, letting them pool around your ankles.'
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensexdisco3.jpg"></center>'
 						'Stepping out of your panties, you pull up your skirt, showing him your naked wet pussy. The coach pulls out his hard dick and starts stroking it as he watches you.'

locations/_attributes_misc_outfit.qsrc → locations/_attributes_misc_outfits.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# $attributes_misc_outfit
+# $attributes_misc_outfits
 
 if ARGS[1] = 1:
     CloQuality = 1
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ if ARGS[1] = 1:
     CloExhibit = 0
 end
 
---- $attributes_misc_outfit ---------------------------------
+--- $attributes_misc_outfits ---------------------------------
 

locations/_body_image.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clothes':
 	elseif $clothingworntype = 'nude' and $pantyworntype = 'none':
 		$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/nude1.jpg'
 		$body_image_msg += 'You are completely naked.'
-	elseif $clothingworntype = 'misc_outfit' and clothingwornnumber = 1:
+	elseif $clothingworntype = 'misc_outfits' and clothingwornnumber = 1:
 		$RESULT = FUNC('$clothing_image', $clothingworntype, clothingwornnumber)
 		$body_image_msg += 'You are wearing a hessian sack the hunters gave you.'
 	else

locations/_clothing_image.qsrc

@@ -7,22 +7,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gm_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/gm/outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/gm/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'misc_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'misc_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/misc/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/cats/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/cats/outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/flamingos/outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/flamingos/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/coco/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fashionista':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/fashionista/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/fashionista/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/4formal/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'office':
@@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fancy_burlesque':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/fancy/burlesque/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/dolls/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/dolls/outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_dress':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/bomba/goth_dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_outfits':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/bomba/goth_outfits/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/15beachbabe/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'

locations/_clothing_name.qsrc

@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 211:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with floral print, it has a triangle top and a Brazilian bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 212:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit in the color pine green, it has a full coverage top and a thong bikini bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 213:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit in the color black, it has a halter top with transparent mesh and a double-strap thong bottom.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 214:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit that looks like one-piece. it has a tankini top and a classic full bikini bottom.' 
+	if ARGS[1] = 214:$RESULT = 'A two-piece swimsuit that looks like one-piece. It has a tankini top and a classic full bikini bottom.' 
 
 
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':

locations/_purse_image.qsrc

@@ -4,15 +4,21 @@
 !! ARGS 1 - panty index
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dolls':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/dolls/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/dolls/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fashionista':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/fashionista/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cheap':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/cheap/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'kats':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/kats/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'boutique':
-	$RESULT = 'images/pc/purses/moncheri/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/fashionista/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/coco/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/flamingos/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'danilovich':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/danilovich/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/gm/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/cats/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/moncheri/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 end
 
 --- $purse_image ---------------------------------

locations/_short_description.qsrc

@@ -1,21 +1,33 @@
 # $short_description
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'cheap':
-	$RESULT = 'Cheap outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'average':
-	$RESULT = 'Pussy-Kats outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'expensive':
-	$RESULT = 'Fashionista outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'formal':
-	$RESULT = 'Mon Chéri outfit number '
+if $ARGS[0] = 'gm_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'G&M dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'G&M outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'misc_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'Outfit that is not in a shop number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Pussy-Cats dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'Pussy-Cats outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'Flamingos outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Flamingos dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'Coco outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Coco dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fashionista':
+	$RESULT = 'Fashionista dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
+	$RESULT = 'Mon Chéri dress number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'office':
 	$RESULT = 'Office wear number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 	$RESULT = 'School uniform number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exercise':
 	$RESULT = 'Exercise outfit number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
-	$RESULT = 'Patchwork Dolls outfit number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fetish':
 	$RESULT = 'Fetish outfit number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exhibit':
@@ -34,8 +46,16 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	$RESULT = 'Swimwear number '
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':
 	$RESULT = 'Slutty swimwear number '
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'burlesque':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fancy_burlesque':
 	$RESULT = 'Burlesque outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Patchwork Dolls dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'Patchwork Dolls outfit number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_dress':
+	$RESULT = 'Tsar Bomba dress number '
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_outfits':
+	$RESULT = 'Tsar Bomba outfit number '
 end
 
 --- $short_description ---------------------------------

locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout1':
 	'You remember this man from one of the parent-school conferences. It''s Dimka''s dad, <<$bName>>!'
 	'He recognizes you too. "Oh... what the? Who do we have here? Isn''t this that missing girl, <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>?'
 	*nl
-	'With a trembling voice, only a few words leave your mouth. "Th...that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>..."'
+	'With a trembling voice, only a few words leave your mouth. "Th... that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>..."'
 	'"You do realize that the police have already given up searching for you. As if they made any effort though..."'
 	'"I-I don''t even know how long I''ve been here. The only thing I remember is being a plaything for these perverts..."'
 	'There is a short period of silence, but despite the unexpected situation, you keep kneeling with your back straight and breasts jutting forward, as you have been trained to do.'

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					*nl
 					'But now that he''s going down, she''s come back to live with and look after me. Get me counselling if I need it, you know? That''s why she''s always checking up on me. She''s on edge about what my father can do, even in prison."'
 					'She continues. "The truth is his political campaign never took off. He loved abusing his position as a cop to bully others, including me, but when he retired, he didn''t have that power anymore. A political career was his chance to get that back."'
-					'"Nobody was willing to back him however." She stops talking for a few seconds and you can clearly see her hands shaking. "That''s when...that''s when he decided to...whore me out to his friends. For ''a bit of fun'' with me, they would ''donate'' to his campaign fund.". She is on the verge of bursting into tears in front of you.'
+					'"Nobody was willing to back him however." She stops talking for a few seconds and you can clearly see her hands shaking. "That''s when... that''s when he decided to... whore me out to his friends. For ''a bit of fun'' with me, they would ''donate'' to his campaign fund.". She is on the verge of bursting into tears in front of you.'
 
 					act 'Your father did what?':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -72,10 +72,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 							'"What did he do?" you ask.'
-							'"It was bad enough being forced to whore out my friends to abusive creeps who almost choked them to death, but......but....."'
+							'"It was bad enough being forced to whore out my friends to abusive creeps who almost choked them to death, but... but..."'
 							'"But what?" you ask softly. She steels herself before answering you. "If I didn''t get the girl the guys wanted, my father said it was perfectly fine for them to take me and do what they wanted, even rape me." she cries.'
 							'"They would take their anger at not getting the girl they wanted out on me. I would be choked, slapped, even spat on! Some nights, I''d come home and he would berate me for not ''helping his donors'' and I would be subjected to his abuse as well. Other times, he would bring his friends home and let them have their way with me. One guy or four, he didn''t care what they done to me so long as they paid.'
-							'"My dad abusing me my entire life while running a prostitution ring where my friends were subjected to abusive sexual exploitation...and I...I couldn''t anything about it!" The words barely make it out of her mouth before she bursts into a flood of tears.'
+							'"My dad abusing me my entire life while running a prostitution ring where my friends were subjected to abusive sexual exploitation... and I... I couldn''t do anything about it!" The words barely make it out of her mouth before she bursts into a flood of tears.'
 
 							act 'Comfort her':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -97,9 +97,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort1.jpg"></center>'
 										'You pull away from her, not wanting to kiss her. "Sorry I just..." She jumps back from you, almost falling from the sofa.'
-										'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what came over me! It''s just....I''ve suffered a lot from all the men in my life....so I enjoy seeking....comfort from girls, if you know what I mean..." You don''t want to kiss her, but she clearly needs reassurance. You place her head on your shoulder and gently stroke her hair for the next few minutes.'
+										'"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what came over me! It''s just... I''ve suffered a lot from all the men in my life... so I enjoy seeking... comfort from girls, if you know what I mean..." You don''t want to kiss her, but she clearly needs reassurance. You place her head on your shoulder and gently stroke her hair for the next few minutes.'
 										'She seems to appreciate this and sits up. "I should really get going." you say and Albina nods her head in understanding. "I will see you later OK?" you reassure her.'
-										'She smiles at you. "Of course and...thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to just let this all out and talk about it to someone. I''m glad it was you and that I can call you my friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she runs up and embraces you in a tight hug before walking you to the door.'
+										'She smiles at you. "Of course and... thank you <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to just let this all out and talk about it to someone. I''m glad it was you and that I can call you my friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she runs up and embraces you in a tight hug before walking you to the door.'
 
 										act 'Continue':gt 'pav_residential'
 									end
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 												'Albina lets out a pleasured scream as her pussy twitches and sprays a huge amount of her juices across your face. You buckle as your own orgasm overwhelms you and you scream loudly. You both collapse in ecstasy.'
 												'Albina pulls her herself up and turns back around, cuddling into you. "I didn''t take you for a squirter!" you laugh. She smirks. "I''ve been with a few girls <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you gave me the greatest orgasm I''ve ever had! I think that was the biggest squirt I''ve ever done!"'
 												'She leans over and grabs some tissues from a box on a nearby table, handing you some to clean your face. She runs her hand over her still twitching pussy. "I think I''m still cumming!" she says. You both lie on the sofa, your powerful orgasms pulsing through the both of you. You eventually recover and manage to get dressed.'
-                                                'Albina remains on the sofa, pussy juices still trickling from her. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out and just talk about it...among other things." she smirks. "Thanks for being a good friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she suddenly embraces you in a tight hug, her breasts squeezing against you, before walking you to the door.' 
+                                                'Albina remains on the sofa, pussy juices still trickling from her. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>. It was nice to let it all out and just talk about it... among other things." she smirks. "Thanks for being a good friend." You smile at her and start leaving when she suddenly embraces you in a tight hug, her breasts squeezing against you, before walking you to the door.' 
 												gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 30
 												$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 												gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 30
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me....hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
+		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me... hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
 		'After you''ve pulled out, she inserts a few fingers into her gaping hole as juices continue leaking from her pussy. "Oh fuck yes <<$pcs_nickname>>! That was fucking amazing!"'
 		'"Fucking such a nice looking ass was amazing!" you reply and you both laugh.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'

locations/alexandriaEv.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever seen, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Reinhold, It''s seems that your protege''s words sound truer than you seem to imagine, as our presence here attest."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'hard'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"With our help as our presence here attest."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 			else
 				npc_rel['A241'] -=2
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'Reinhold facepalm, groan, and look at you in disbelief, your little quip has worked, but now Alexandria is gritting her teeth and seems concentrated on you, as purple sparks fly between her gloves, and then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Stop Councilor Alexandria, don''t make us intervene, because you have been testing our wrath."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus her anger on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappears, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality, a tense moment later, Alexandria dispel away her powers.'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 			'You don''t know what to do, to stop the magical battle that seems at the brink to begin, so you begin back away slowly from the powerful sorcerers, and then, you stop, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 			'"We are very disappointed with this act Reinhonecessaryeems that our intervention is necessary"'
 			'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-			'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+			'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 			'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -207,14 +207,14 @@ end if
 if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei?</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
-	'You finally reach a study where a morose... Alexandria? sit on a couch, and in an interesting twist, there isn''t another one for you to lie.'
+	'You finally reach a study where a morose... Alexandria? Sit on a couch, and in an interesting twist, there isn''t another one for you to lie.'
 	if $start_type = 'tg':
 		npc_rel['A241'] +=1
-		'"Yes Mr.Kuznetsu... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
+		'"Yes Mr. Kuznetsu... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
 	else
 		if csb_start = 1:
 			npc_rel['A241'] +=1
-			'"Yes Mr.Ivanov... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
+			'"Yes Mr. Ivanov... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'
 		else
 			'"Yes... Cursed by Rikudo, the being that created The Talisman of Power, and the reason for my interest in you."'
 		end if

locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 			if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 				money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 				'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
-				'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
+				'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 				! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 				young_shop_salary = 0
 				young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
-					'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
+					'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 					! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 					young_shop_salary = 0
 					young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
-					'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts out <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
+					'Mr. Sobulyagin counts out <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 					! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 					young_shop_salary = 0
 					young_shop_bonus = 0

locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -1390,7 +1390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 							'Still curious, you continue your line of questioning. "What do you think could happen?"'
-							'He looks at you for a moment, then frowns and sighs deeply. "This is what I meant. The fact that you even had to ask proves my point and makes me worry the way I do." As he talks, his tone becomes serious and maybe even a bit angry. "When I realized that Anushka was...sexually active, I knew better than to try and stop her. Instead, I made sure she got on birth control. I even remind her to get checked for STD''s every month." he says. When he says that last part, you hear a bit of sadness in his voice. Like most dads, he still sees his daughter as his "little girl."'
+							'He looks at you for a moment, then frowns and sighs deeply. "This is what I meant. The fact that you even had to ask proves my point and makes me worry the way I do." As he talks, his tone becomes serious and maybe even a bit angry. "When I realized that Anushka was... sexually active, I knew better than to try and stop her. Instead, I made sure she got on birth control. I even remind her to get checked for STD''s every month." he says. When he says that last part, you hear a bit of sadness in his voice. Like most dads, he still sees his daughter as his "little girl."'
 							*nl
 							'He shakes his head slightly. "I hope she is keeping up on it at least. A lot of boys your age, especially the type she hangs out with, would be all too happy to take advantage of a girl who was drunk or stoned, or even just force themselves on her." He sounds more than a bit angry when he says that. "Aside from them, there are those that will get girls strung out on drugs to turn them into whores. Those are the worst of the worst. They are the ones that will lure pretty things like you and my daughter into a life like theirs. It happens more often than it''s talked about. Girls being pimped out, turned into drug mules, or sold to the highest bidder."'
 							act 'Keep listening':

locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'She shakes her head. "Where did you hear that? Never mind because it doesn''t matter. We''re not friends that is... not really. He is ok I guess."'
 			*nl
 			'You are a bit confused by her response. "Why are you hooking up if you''re not friends?"'
-			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo and you know how people are. He''s black... he''s an American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong. but both just makes it doubly taboo. That makes it fucking hot. Not to mention he has a huge fucking dick."'
+			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo and you know how people are. He''s black... he''s an American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong. But both just makes it doubly taboo. That makes it fucking hot. Not to mention he has a huge fucking dick."'
 			'You nod in agreement, he does have a big dick, at least from what you have seen and heard. "Is it just because he has a big dick and is black?"'
 			'She shrugs slightly. "Yeah, pretty much. I mean just thinking about getting ploughed by his big black cock is making me horny." she says with a laugh, but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused.'
 			*nl
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							'You are mad at her for talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
 							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... Uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s because he has a really big dick, isn''t it?" she says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
 							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it, you bite your lip and add "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end

locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_selfie':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 	'Wondering why she took that selfie of the two you, with you having cum on your face. "What are you going to do with that selfie of us?"'
 	'She shrugs a little. "Keep it as a memento at least for awhile, I often take selfies during sex or after sex as keep sakes, why?"'
-	'You nod a little. "Your not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
+	'You nod a little. "You''re not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
 	'She looks a little surprised you would ask. "No of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to."'
 	act 'Hangout in her room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 												'Anushka grabs your hips a bit harder. "Oh yeah fucking take that bitch, you dirty little slut. You love getting fucked in the ass don''t you?"'
 												'You play along and nod. "Yes Nush fuck my ass." She seems to be as amused as you are about this. As you play at getting fucked by Anushka, Valentin grabs a bottle of lube out of the night stand and squirts some lube on his dick, then moves up behind Anushka.'
 												*nl
-												'She stops moving a moment then moans out in pleasure and pain. "Oh fuck! Yes, god yes!" You feel her being banged against you. You glance back and see Valentin fucking her from behind, with each thrust it forces her hips to bounce against you ass. Several minutes go by like this. "Yes yes, fuck my ass Val! Harder!" she cries out, then you can feel her wetness from her orgasm dripping onto you ass cheeks as she cums from the anal fucking Valentin just gave her. "Ok your ass is next <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+												'She stops moving a moment then moans out in pleasure and pain. "Oh fuck! Yes, god yes!" You feel her being banged against you. You glance back and see Valentin fucking her from behind, with each thrust it forces her hips to bounce against your ass. Several minutes go by like this. "Yes yes, fuck my ass Val! Harder!" she cries out, then you can feel her wetness from her orgasm dripping onto your ass cheeks as she cums from the anal fucking Valentin just gave her. "Ok your ass is next <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 												gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 												gs 'stat'
 												act 'No anal':
@@ -907,7 +907,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 													gs 'boyStat', 'A158'
 													gs 'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs11.jpg"></center>'
-													'You nod at the request to be fucked in the ass. "Sure, you can fuck my ass." You tell him. With that Anushka rolls off the top of you, as Valentin moves up behind you. He grabs you by the hips and pulls you up into a doggy position. As he does Anushka moves around in front of you and lays on her back with her legs spread. She places her hand on the back of your head and pulls your face to her crotch. As you lower your face to her crotch, you feel Valentin cock pressing against you ass, along with a squirt of the lube. He rubs the tip of his dick against your asshole, while you start to lick Anushka sopping wet pussy.'
+													'You nod at the request to be fucked in the ass. "Sure, you can fuck my ass." You tell him. With that Anushka rolls off the top of you, as Valentin moves up behind you. He grabs you by the hips and pulls you up into a doggy position. As he does Anushka moves around in front of you and lays on her back with her legs spread. She places her hand on the back of your head and pulls your face to her crotch. As you lower your face to her crotch, you feel Valentin cock pressing against your ass, along with a squirt of the lube. He rubs the tip of his dick against your asshole, while you start to lick Anushka sopping wet pussy.'
 													*nl
 													'You groan a bit as Valentin <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock pops into your ass. He pauses a moment to let you adjust and then he slowly starts fucking your ass, as you moan more he starts picking up speed and fucking you a bit harder and faster. The louder you moan the harder and rougher he gets, he seems to be really getting into it making you think he is close when he says. "Fuck I''m about to cum.".'
 													gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'group', 'lesbian', 'lube'
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talkaboutval':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 			'Wondering why she took that selfie of the two you, with you having cum on your face. "What are you going to do with that selfie of us?"'
 			'She shrugs a little. "Keep it as a memento at least for awhile, I often take selfies during sex or after sex as keep sakes, why?"'
-			'You nod a little. "Your not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
+			'You nod a little. "You''re not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
 			'She looks a little surprised you would ask. "No of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to."'
 			act 'Hangout in her room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_about_marcus':
 			else
 				'Wondering why she took that selfie of the two you, with you having cum on your face. "What are you going to do with that selfie of us?"'
 				'She shrugs a little. "Keep it as a memento at least for awhile, I often take selfies during sex or after sex as keep sakes, why?"'
-				'You nod a little. "Your not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
+				'You nod a little. "You''re not going to show it to anyone are you?"'
 				'She looks a little surprised you would ask. "No of course not." Then she grins. "Unless you want me to."'
 			end
 			if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['nush_inv'] = 0:

locations/arousal.qsrc

@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'auto_lube':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'anal' and auto_anal_lube = 1:
 		if lubri > 0:
 			if $ARGS[2] ! 'custom': 
-				'You rub some lube in and around you anus.'
+				'You rub some lube in and around your anus.'
 			elseif $lube_txt ! '':
 				$lube_txt
 			end

locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 						npc_rel['A2'] -= 25
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already let me fuck you. Meanwhile, you...  fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck your ass and you turn into a prude? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
+						'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already let me fuck you. Meanwhile, you... fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck your ass and you turn into a prude? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
 						'You can tell Artem is seriously offended by your refusal, and won''t help you any further. Hopefully someone else can help you with your homework.'
 						act 'Refuse': gt 'artemEv', 'finalrefuse'
 						act 'Let him fuck your ass': gt 'artemEv', 'slut_anal'
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 							npc_rel['A2'] -= 25
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you...  fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
+							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you... fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
 							'You can tell Artem is seriously offended by your refusal, and won''t help you any further. Hopefully someone else can help you with your homework.'
 							act 'Refuse': gt 'artemEv', 'finalrefuse'
 							act 'Let him butt fuck you': gt 'artemEv', 'slut_anal'
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 							npc_rel['A2'] -= 25
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you...  fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
+							'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve already sucked my dick. Meanwhile, you... fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But now I can''t fuck you? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
 							'You can tell Artem is seriously offended by your refusal, and won''t help you any further. Hopefully someone else can help you with your homework.'
 							act 'Refuse': gt 'artemEv', 'finalrefuse'
 							act 'Let him fuck you': gt 'artemEv', 'slut_fuck'
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
+							'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, you want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 							'He blushes but then he nods. "Yes I do, I think it is the least you can do for me."'
 							'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, it isn''t like a boy has never seen you naked before. "Ok fine." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'
 							act 'Start stripping': gt 'artemEv', 'striptease'
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/strip1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You give him a serious look when you say. "You want me to get naked for you?"'
-					'You see him visible swallow but then he nods. "Yes I do, I think it  is the least you can do for me."'
+					'You see him visible swallow but then he nods. "Yes I do, I think it is the least you can do for me."'
 					'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, it isn''t like a boy has never seen you naked before. "Ok fine." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'
 					act 'Start stripping': gt 'artemEv', 'striptease'
 				end
@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artdryhump':
 	*clr & cla
 	artdryhump += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/assjobc.jpg"></center>'
-	'You turn around in front of Artem, so he has a nice view of your butt. Artem carefully runs his hands over your ass cheeks, and you can feel him hesitating for a second. The he starts squeezing your butt and rubbing it with his hands. After a couple of minutes of this he places one of his hands on your shoulder and pushes you forward, you go with it and bend over. He grabs onto you and you can feel something hard pressing between you ass cheeks. When you glance back over your shoulder, you see him rubbing his erect cock against your clothes, at the crack of your ass.'
+	'You turn around in front of Artem, so he has a nice view of your butt. Artem carefully runs his hands over your ass cheeks, and you can feel him hesitating for a second. The he starts squeezing your butt and rubbing it with his hands. After a couple of minutes of this he places one of his hands on your shoulder and pushes you forward, you go with it and bend over. He grabs onto you and you can feel something hard pressing between your ass cheeks. When you glance back over your shoulder, you see him rubbing his erect cock against your clothes, at the crack of your ass.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay',3
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artdryhump1':
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/buttcump.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your butt, all over your panties, you can feel the wetness through them as his cum soaks into them. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>,  It felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
+		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your butt, all over your panties, you can feel the wetness through them as his cum soaks into them. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, it felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
 		'Just then you hear his mothers voice out in the hall, just outside his door. "Artem I need you to run a errand into town for me."'
 		'Artem freaks out and starts to panic. "Um yes mom, I will." He looks at you with a panicked looked, obviously afraid his mom almost caught him dry humping a girl in his room. "I should really go do what my mom wants, see you tomorrow?"'
 		'You smile at him. "Maybe, I will have to see whats going on." With that you gather up your stuff and leave.'
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artdryhump2':
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/buttcumn.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your naked butt and lower back. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>,  It felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
+		'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your naked butt and lower back. After he finishes, you can tell he is embarrassed by it: "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, it felt so good." He turns red he blushes so hard.'
 		'Just then you hear his mothers voice out in the hall, just outside his door. "Artem I need you to run a errand into town for me."'
 		'Artem freaks out and starts to panic. "Um yes mom, I will." He looks at you with a panicked looked, obviously afraid his mom almost caught dry humping a girl in his room. "I should really go do what my mom wants, see you tomorrow?"'
 		'You smile at him. "Maybe, I will have to see whats going on." With that you gather up your stuff and leave.'
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		act 'Pull his pants off':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first4.jpg"></center>'
-			'With you clothes now longer a problem you turn your attention to his clothes impeding your fun. You unbutton his pants then grab them by the legs and pull them and his underwear off. With them free you toss his pants and underwear across the room, his erect penis is standing at attention now that it is free of his pants.'
+			'With your clothes now no longer a problem you turn your attention to his clothes impeding your fun. You unbutton his pants then grab them by the legs and pull them and his underwear off. With them free you toss his pants and underwear across the room, his erect penis is standing at attention now that it is free of his pants.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Give him a blowjob':
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
 							'You crawl over to him, noticing a bit of your blood on his penis. A quick glance between your legs reveals a small trickle has run out of your pussy too. Using some tissues from the nightstand you wipe the blood away before straddling Artem.'
-							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of you pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							act 'Mount him':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
-								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of you pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'
@@ -777,7 +777,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_surprise':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstcpie.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you are riding him, getting lost in your own pleasure you glance down at his face and see him tense up and you realize that he is cumming too late. You can feel his cum shooting into you. As you lift yourself up, you can feel his cum oozing out of your pussy.'
 		'Then it hits him and he suddenly looks alarmed as he realizes he just came inside of you. "Oh my god, I am so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t mean to do that."'
-		'You smile to him as you get off him. "It''s ok, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved obviously thinking your are on birth control.'
+		'You smile to him as you get off him. "It''s ok, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved obviously thinking you are on birth control.'
 		act 'Continue': gs 'artemEv', 'after_sex', 'cp'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstfacial.jpg"></center>'

locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 				end
 			else
 				if artlie = 2 or artembrokenheart = 1 or artemblok = 1:
-					'You stand outside the Chebotarev household, knocking on the door. The door is quickly answered by Artem''s mother, who has a big friendly smile on her face, until she recognizes you then it turn to a frown, you have never seen her frown before. "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again. I thought you was such a sweet girl, but he says your not, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
+					'You stand outside the Chebotarev household, knocking on the door. The door is quickly answered by Artem''s mother, who has a big friendly smile on her face, until she recognizes you then it turn to a frown, you have never seen her frown before. "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again. I thought you was such a sweet girl, but he says you''re not, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
 					act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 				elseif pav_slut >= 200 or grupTipe = 4:
 					'You stand outside the Chebotarev household, knocking on the door. The door is quickly answered by Artem''s mother, who has a big friendly smile on her face, that falters when she sees you. "Oh, Hello again <<$pcs_firstname>>, can I help you?" She asks.'
@@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								'Masharin tries to excuse himself, "It worked for me but it doesn''t mean it will work for anyone else. We all have our own quirks that helps us when it comes to that stuff, you have your breaks and I have mine."'
 								'"Well, I would love to hear what you did, it would be of great help." you tell him.'
 								'Masharin smiles, "Fine, fine, I''ll tell you then. I used to close my eyes and think that I''m in the middle of a forest, only hearing those unusual sounds that you can hear in a silent forest. This always cleared my mind and it helped me re-focus."'
-								'Hmm maybe but what does a forest have to do with math or science? "I might try this some time, thank a lot for the advice but it''s probably best that I head back."'
+								'Hmm maybe but what does a forest have to do with math or science? "I might try this some time, thanks a lot for the advice but it''s probably best that I head back."'
 								act 'Leave':gt 'artemhome','hallway'
 							end
 						end
@@ -1702,7 +1702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripagree':
 	if ARGS[1] = 0:
 		'You give him a serious look when you say. "You want me to get naked for you?"'
 	else
-		'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
+		'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, you want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 	end
 	'You see him visible swallow, as he blushes but then he nods. "Yes I do, I would really love it if you did."'
 	'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, you like Artem and it sounds thrilling, plus it will make him happy. "Ok fine, sit back and enjoy the show." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'

locations/arturQW.qsrc

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'arturQW_2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/arthur/artur.jpg"></center>'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you are my treasure! Because of you our profits have doubled. I always said what we need is a sexy girl behind the counter, and I was right!" Arthur declares proudly.'
 	'"Thanks Arturik, but I''m tired of working behind the counter. I think I need to find something else. I''m sorry." You say regretfully, hoping he won''t be upset with you.'
-	'"What? Damn it! I thought you liked it. It is fine, It is fine, a girl like you should have a decent place to work."'
+	'"What? Damn it! I thought you liked it. It is fine, it is fine, a girl like you should have a decent place to work."'
 	'He appears to be thinking to himself before his eyes light up and he quickly adds. "Look, I fired my bookkeeper, the old hag. Now you can take over her job! You will enjoy it much more, I promise. You will receive twice the money and won''t have to deal with asshole customers. Just come every day by 16.00, otherwise I will have to fire you, despite your fine ass." Arthur says.'
 	'You see a look of desperation in his eyes as he finishes the job offer. He clearly doesn''t want to lose having you around every day. You consider your options...'
 

locations/arturSex.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ act 'Kneel down':
 		*clr & cla
 		artbj += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/arthur/sex/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You open you mouth and slowly wrap your lips around the hefty cock. The corners of your mouth stretch to accommodate the rod as you begun to suck at a gradual pace.'
+		'You open your mouth and slowly wrap your lips around the hefty cock. The corners of your mouth stretch to accommodate the rod as you begun to suck at a gradual pace.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		

locations/balkon2.qsrc

@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masopt':
 				*clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/balcony_anal2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'As you''re pleasuring yourself inserting the finger in and out, you grab your dildo and begin sucking on it, trying to lube it as much as you can.'
-				'Not being able to contain yourself you remove the dildo from your mouth and slowly insert it into you anus. At first you feel discomfort but the amazing feeling as the dildo penetrates makes you forget all about it.'
+				'Not being able to contain yourself you remove the dildo from your mouth and slowly insert it into your anus. At first you feel discomfort but the amazing feeling as the dildo penetrates makes you forget all about it.'
 				'As your anus eases you start to pump away the dildo at a faster speed. The sexual pleasure you''re experiencing is greater than anything you''ve ever known would be possible to feel.'
 				
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'

locations/barbershop.qsrc

@@ -144,8 +144,8 @@ if barbershop_wrk = 0:
 		'"I was wondering if you''re looking for some help around here"'
 		'"Well, I don''t think you have experience as a hairdresser..." He thinks for a second. "..., but my back isn''t the best anymore, so I could use some help keeping the shop clean. It''s not much work, but I''d be happy if you could come in once a day for about an hour. Just come by, when you''re done with school and when I''m still open, obviously."'
 		'You smile cheerfully. "That sound great! What would I have to do?"'
-		'"Well," he says, while looking around and gathering tasks for you. "...,  you''d have to mop the floor here in the main room and the break room in the back as well. Take out all the trash, clean the breakroom kitchen, clean the mirrors, windows, chairs and toilet and of course dust the shelves. It might sound like a lot, but don''t worry, even doing one thing, makes my life easier."'
-		'You think about it for a second, but you guess it won''t be too bad and you could need any amount of money... "I...uhm...hate to ask, but how much would I earn per hour?"'
+		'"Well," he says, while looking around and gathering tasks for you. "..., you''d have to mop the floor here in the main room and the break room in the back as well. Take out all the trash, clean the breakroom kitchen, clean the mirrors, windows, chairs and toilet and of course dust the shelves. It might sound like a lot, but don''t worry, even doing one thing, makes my life easier."'
+		'You think about it for a second, but you guess it won''t be too bad and you could need any amount of money... "I... uhm... hate to ask, but how much would I earn per hour?"'
 		'"Ah yes," Mr. Syomin chuckles. "..., the most important question. Are you alright with 125 <b>₽</b> per hour?"'
 			
 		act 'Accept the job':

locations/bedr2x.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if husbandrink = 11 and husbanstrapon > 0 and husbandrinkday ! daystart:
 				if pcs_intel > 40 or izvratH = 1:
 					husbharmin += 1
 
-					'"Are you really trying to tell me, that I asked you to fuck me with a strap-on bitch?" he bellowed, when you started crying, with tears running down your face  and began to lament that only wanted to please him, he looked at you and said, exhaled. "Fine, fine, I believe you. I believe you wanted to pleasure me and make me happy, but never do that again."'
+					'"Are you really trying to tell me, that I asked you to fuck me with a strap-on bitch?" he bellowed, when you started crying, with tears running down your face and began to lament that only wanted to please him, he looked at you and said, exhaled. "Fine, fine, I believe you. I believe you wanted to pleasure me and make me happy, but never do that again."'
 				elseif pcs_intel <= 40:
 					husbizvradd = 0
 					husbharmin = 0

locations/beg1.qsrc

@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'evro':
         gs 'fame', 'village', 'running', rand(1,3)
         razradbegEG += 1
         money += 20000
-        'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place. You get a gold medal, a prize of 20,000 <b>₽</b> and are now the "St.Petersburg Track Champion"!'
+        'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place. You get a gold medal, a prize of 20,000 <b>₽</b> and are now the "St. Petersburg Track Champion"!'
     end
 
     act 'Leave':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'

locations/billsvid.qsrc

@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 
 	bilsvidukiy = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit on the edge of the table, throwing one leg on the table. "How''s my cueing action?" <<$telsob>> jokes as she dramatically uses her tongue to moisten her cue, before quickly inserting it into you pussy. You squeal in surprise. She diligently fucks you with the cue, turning it in different directions, you''re massaging your clitoris with a finger. After a few minutes pleasant sensations spread through your body and you float into a world of orgasm.'
+	'You sit on the edge of the table, throwing one leg on the table. "How''s my cueing action?" <<$telsob>> jokes as she dramatically uses her tongue to moisten her cue, before quickly inserting it into your pussy. You squeal in surprise. She diligently fucks you with the cue, turning it in different directions, you''re massaging your clitoris with a finger. After a few minutes pleasant sensations spread through your body and you float into a world of orgasm.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 5, 'lesbian'

locations/bordel.qsrc

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel':
 			act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'
 		elseif $clothingworntype ! 'burlesque' and PCloStyle ! 4 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			cla
-			'You need to wear an outfit that can be used for prostitution. if you haven''t got anything suitable and you are desperate, you could work naked but you will get paid less and might get treated badly.'
+			'You need to wear an outfit that can be used for prostitution. If you haven''t got anything suitable and you are desperate, you could work naked but you will get paid less and might get treated badly.'
 			'You can change your clothes in the bathroom.'
 
 			act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'

locations/brosh.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if evgentipe = 0:
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'Zhendos', 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum50.jpg"></center>'
-				'Zhendos doesn''t last long and fills you mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
+				'Zhendos doesn''t last long and fills your mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ elseif evgentipe = 1:
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'Mishan', 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/bscum'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mishan doesn''t last long and fills you mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
+				'Mishan doesn''t last long and fills your mouth with sperm, you quickly swallow it down.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ elseif evgentipe = 2:
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum43.jpg"></center>'
-				'Kolka doesn''t last long and fills you mouth with sperm, you make a show of swallowing it.'
+				'Kolka doesn''t last long and fills your mouth with sperm, you make a show of swallowing it.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'incest'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pinchandfingertiedtobed.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'He jumps on to you, grabbing your ass and pinching your cheeks.'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It..hurts.. Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a consciousness for a brief moment.'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It.. hurts.. Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a consciousness for a brief moment.'
 		'Aroused with your reaction, he pushes his finger into your pussy, one by one until there are four of them.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"What a whore! She''s already wet!"</font>'
 		'He uses the juiced fingers and thrusts them into your anus, once again forcing you back to a living world.'
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now slut let''s get you your drink!"</font>'
 		'He reaches for a bottle of champagne from the minibar.'
 		'All you can hear in that moment is a popping sound as the bottle plug shoots out.. The barman covers the neck of the bottle with his thumb and shakes it to build up a pressure..'
-		'..and then he forces it into you anus as far as it goes, while the sparkling wine gushes out deep into your intestines.'
+		'..and then he forces it into your anus as far as it goes, while the sparkling wine gushes out deep into your intestines.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Ayyyieeee!"</font> Again you scream aloud shaking both in surprise and pain.'
 		gs 'pain', 6, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:leave':
 	*nl
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		'The Receptionist looks up from his desk and gazes upon you: <font color=#<<$rec_font>>>"Didn''t you forget something, whore?"</font>'
-		'It takes you few seconds to realize that you are naked! <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oops..let me get my clothes first, I guess.."</font>'
+		'It takes you few seconds to realize that you are naked! <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oops.. let me get my clothes first, I guess.."</font>'
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/nude.jpg"></center>'
 		else
@@ -1372,7 +1372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:lieOnBack':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/onbackkneeshigh.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'The client reaches for your neck, forcefully leading you to one of the beds.'
-	'You know what''s coming..he throws you on the soft pillows: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Lie on your back and put your knees as close to your head as you can!"</font>'
+	'You know what''s coming.. he throws you on the soft pillows: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Lie on your back and put your knees as close to your head as you can!"</font>'
 	'You do as ordered..'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $sessionB
 end
@@ -1389,7 +1389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 	if step = 0:
 		'The Client is obviously aroused beyond his expectation: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I have these beautiful nails and needles here with me.."</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What the..?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"..and I think those nipples of yours are aching for them!"</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"... and I think those nipples of yours are aching for them!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"You can''t be serious! This IS against the rules, let me out!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Not if you agree with this. So what will it be?"</font>'
 		step = 1
@@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 	elseif step = 1:
 		caneFeetCount = 0
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Would a bonus to your pay change your mind?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Wh..what bonus?"</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Wh.. what bonus?"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Ah, let''s say 50% more?"</font>'
 		act 'Say you''ll do it': step = 2 & bonus = 50 & gt 'brothel', $this
 		act 'Say you''ll do it fot 100% more': step = 3 & gt 'brothel', $this
@@ -1415,7 +1415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 			act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $this
 		else
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"What? Who do you think I am slut? A fucking monger?"</font>'
-			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..No! I didn''t mea.."</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I... No! I didn''t mean..."</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Shut up slave! You will agree to it for free NOW!"</font>'
 			step = 10
 			act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $this
@@ -1460,7 +1460,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/nailedbytitstotheground.jpg"></center>'
 		'At the end of the session, you lie on the wooden ground with your nipples being nailed to it, hanging by your hair and barely staying awake.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"So slut, how did you like it?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ehh..I...Master..."</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ehh... I... Master..."</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"You know? I don''t care anyways. Actually I hope it was horrible for you. You deserve it, such a naughty whore."</font>'
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now beg me to fuck you!"</font>'

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_end':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/b (end<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 !--- Need to expand
 !	if npc_QW['A34'] < 5
-		'Confused, surreptitiously looking at your brother, You take a towel and wrap it around your flushed, steamed body.'
+		'Confused, surreptitiously looking at your brother, you take a towel and wrap it around your flushed, steamed body.'
 		'You shudder at the realization this is wrong. Kolka quietly closes the door and tiptoes out.'
 		'You feel uncomfortable and ashamed, but smile at recalling his wide open eyes, his flushed face and red ears and how they increased the more you decided to tease him.'
 !	else
@@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'virginitydialog':
 	'You chastise him, "Hey, you little creep, are you ready to learn or are you just going to stare?"'
 	'"N-no, no, I want to... learn," he stutters out.'
-	'You begin to explain to your brother all the differences between the male and female body, why a woman has breasts , etc., simultaneously struggling with excitement and shame knowing that you are naked in front of your brother.'
+	'You begin to explain to your brother all the differences between the male and female body, why a woman has breasts, etc., simultaneously struggling with excitement and shame knowing that you are naked in front of your brother.'
 	'Kolka suddenly interrupts you. "Does it hurt?" he asks.'
 	'You blink in confusion, "Does what hurt?"'
 	'He sits for a moment, silently, before asking slowly, "When a boy puts <i>it</i> in?"'

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "I didn''t know you had milk again..."'
 							npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 2 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] <= 0:
-							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "I didn''t know you had milk again...and it tastes really good."'
+							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "I didn''t know you had milk again... and it tastes really good."'
 							npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1
 						else
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "Hmm - I didn''t think your milk would taste so good...".'
@@ -680,10 +680,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 				if guy > 0:
 					'"That I''ve had sex? Yeah. Someone already took my v-card," You say somewhat proudly. "But don''t tell <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!"'
 				else
-					'"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "... mastur...bating..."'
+					'"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "mastur... bating..."'
 				end
 			end
-			
 			'He nods in acknowledgement while writing down some more notes.'
 			*nl
 
@@ -703,7 +702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 
 				act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
 					cla
-					'"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There''ve been a few uhh, big guys inside me..." you trail off.'
+					'"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There have been a few uhh, big guys inside me...", you trail off.'
 					'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
 					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 				end

locations/budgetclothes.qsrc

@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'office':
 		end
 
 		:loopoffice
-			if office[i] = 0:
+			if gm_office[i] = 0:
 				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'office', i
 				gs 'clothing_QV', 'shop_filter'
 
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'officeclo':
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	if office[i] ! 0:
+	if gm_office[i] ! 0:
 		msg 'You already own these clothes.'
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'office'
 	end
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uniform':
 		end
 
 		:loopuniform
-			if uniform[i] = 0:
+			if gm_uniform[i] = 0:
 				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'uniform', i
 				gs 'clothing_QV', 'shop_filter'
 
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'uniformclo':
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	if uniform[i] ! 0:
+	if gm_uniform[i] ! 0:
 		msg 'You already own these clothes.'
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'uniform'
 	end
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 		end
 
 		:loopschool
-			if school[i] = 0:
+			if gm_school[i] = 0:
 				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'school', i
 				gs 'clothing_QV', 'shop_filter'
 
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'schoolclo':
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	if school[i] ! 0:
+	if gm_school[i] ! 0:
 		msg 'You already own these clothes.'
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'school'
 	end

locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -636,7 +636,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 					'- Podn... To podnabratsya experience.'
 					'- WHAT??? Michael A. what you can? - Offended you.'
 					'- Excuse me, I didn''t mean to offend you or to insult, just...'
-					'- Just that? what do you take me for?'
+					'- Just that? What do you take me for?'
 					'- Izvinite again... I shouldn''t have to offer you this. Just forget.'
 					act 'Okay I think!':
 						cls
@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 						minut += 15
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/misha.jpg" ></center>'
-						'I don''t know how to predict the fate, I''ll just help you to prepare to met the right woman, you could build a strong, healthy relationship, you said. - Let''s talk about how everything will go , what your body is capable of.'
+						'I don''t know how to predict the fate, I''ll just help you to prepare to met the right woman, you could build a strong, healthy relationship, you said. - Let''s talk about how everything will go, what your body is capable of.'
 						'- Suppose, you have entered into a relationship with someone who you think is perfect for you. What do you feel?'
 						'- Many things, probably. Anxiety, joy, relief.'
 						'He talked about 15 minutes. As he was ready for it, it''s time to move on to physical exercises.'
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 										stat['cuni'] += 1
 										cls
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/sex/facesitting.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You told him about it. he immediately agreed. You sat on his face and began to slowly move his hips. Arousal gushed on and you reschili...'
+		'You told him about it. He immediately agreed. You sat on his face and began to slowly move his hips. Arousal gushed on and you reschili...'
 										act'To accelerate the pace':
 											cls
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/sex/tube.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -865,7 +865,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 		- God, my! - you screamed.
 		- Respirator... pipes... - after saying the last word you gave him.
 		- I think it''s worth to wait for later. - you said.
-		After inhaling he asked if we could have sex. you asked him to listen to your breath, reached into my purse for a condom and quickly put it on.'
+		After inhaling he asked if we could have sex. You asked him to listen to your breath, reached into my purse for a condom and quickly put it on.'
 											act'Take the dick':
 												cls
 												gs 'boyStat', 'A185'

locations/burger.qsrc

@@ -192,9 +192,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 						*clr & cla
 						BurgerQW['Level'] = 50
 						guy += 1
-						average[23] = 1
-						averageH[23] = 160
-						averageB[23] = pcs_hips
+						cats_dress[23] = 1
+						cats_dress_h[23] = 160
+						cats_dress_b[23] = pcs_hips
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/sex/bj.jpg"></center>'
 						'You squat down in front of Anatoly, he unbuttons his pants and pulls out his penis. You lean over his hard cock and kiss it, feeling its warmth. You run your tongue along his cock finally putting it in your big wet mouth and start to suck his dick.'
 						'Soon Anatoly groans and you feel a spurt of warm liquid like in your mouth. You are giving your best to swallow all of his cum, trying not to choke. Anatoly straightens his clothes and leaves.'
@@ -230,9 +230,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 							minut += 1
 							BurgerQW['Level'] = 50
 							guy += 1
-							average[24] = 1
-							averageH[24] = 160
-							averageB[24] = pcs_hips
+							cats_dress[24] = 1
+							cats_dress_h[24] = 160
+							cats_dress_b[24] = pcs_hips
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/sex/pr.jpg"></center>'
 							'You look up at him startled as you notice the hot head of his cock resting on your lips. Anatoly pushes his dick to your lips. "Don''t shy baby, lick it with your tongue."'

locations/cardgame_durak.qsrc

@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_casual_sex':
 			'"Yes, they use my body every day, I get off and letting guys fuck me like a whore. The more I can find to fuck me, the happier I am."'
 			if pcs_horny >=70:
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-				$orgasm_txt = 'You are overcome by surging emotions and your body convulses with waves of pleasure. You let out a loud moan. "Oh! More...don''t stop. Oh yeah! Oh!"'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'You are overcome by surging emotions and your body convulses with waves of pleasure. You let out a loud moan. "Oh! More... don''t stop. Oh yeah! Oh!"'
 				gs 'arousal','masturbation',2,'exhibitionism'
 				'"The guy is surprised by your stormy climax and he says with a grin: "You cum like a wild cat, I love nymphos like you. Could you give me your phone number?"'
 				'"Maybe, but first you should finish", You answer with a smirk.'

locations/city_center.qsrc

@@ -82,14 +82,13 @@ if shantpopala > 0:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/sex/rape.jpg"></center>'
 	'On the street close to you, a black jeep suddenly hit the brakes. You turn your head to see what''s happening and see two large men jump of it and start to run towards you in. Before you can react and run away, they grap you and drag you into the car.'
 	'"You''re doing this for a living? Taking pictures of naked people in the park?", one of the shouts, holding one of the pictures to your face you''ve made awhile back and sent someone over a social network, hoping they would pay the ransom.'
-	'"No...what? What the hell is going on? I don''t know what you''re talking about!", you try to explain.'
+	'"No... what? What the hell is going on? I don''t know what you''re talking about!", you try to explain.'
 	'"Don''t lie to use you stupid bitch.", as he said that, he hits you on your head and you pass out.'
 	'You wake up somewhere out of town, you''re tied up and naked. You look down on yourself and notice traces of cum on your body, it also seems like that cum is flowing from your ass and your pussy.'
 	'You notice that the blokes, who captured you sit next to you and seem to have a break, some of them are smoking.'
 	'"Oh, she is finally awake, then the next fuck-cycle will be far more fun.", one of the men said, as he noticed you moving. Some of them are starting to get an evil grin on their face.'
 	'They got up and came back at you, barely a minute later you wished your were still knocked out, as these jackasses had their ways with. You tried to resist, but the tape hindered you from moving. Not long after, everything faded to black and you lost you consciousness again.'
 	'You feel groggy as you wake up, but it feels like someone is grapping you by the hair and shouts at you. "Let this be a lesson for you, bitch.", he shouts, then kicks you into the stomach and leaves. As you collapse on the ground holding your stomach in pain, you take a glimpse at the street and see the assholes driving away in their black jeep. The mainroad is about 200m away, you crawl most of the way there, but soon you can walk again and eventually you find your way back to one of the mainstreets.'
-
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang','humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', -60, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'humiliation', 'rough'

locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -821,8 +821,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 														*clr
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam11.jpg"></center>'
 														'With trembling hands, you start to pull on your panties. Ninel already slipped her robe back on, only her flushed face betraying her apparent innocence.'
-														'"So...how do you feel?"'
-														'"Ooh...Just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
+														'"So... how do you feel?"'
+														'"Ooh... just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
 														'"Well, you see. It''s magic, baby. Mm-m ... You''re especially full of it, I don''t normally get so much pleasure. If you get sick again, please come and see me or phone me."'
 														'"If you like, we could spend some time together, look for me in the clinic."'
 														'You promise to be sure to find her, clean up and leave.'
@@ -967,7 +967,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 											'Ninel sees this and smiles.'
 											'"Oh, no. Enough is enough. But you come in another time for something else and we''ll have some fun.."'
 											'You think to yourself that your next illness can''t come soon enough. You are healthy and satisfied, thanks to Ninel.'
-
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
 											

locations/city_irinaroom.qsrc

@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first8':
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ira/sex/irinaqw6.jpg"></center>'
-	'You mouth begins to wander lower and lower until you come to Iras pussy. Moisture is already seeping from it and your tongue begins to caress her clit. Soon she shudders and moans in orgasm.'
+	'Your mouth begins to wander lower and lower until you come to Iras pussy. Moisture is already seeping from it and your tongue begins to caress her clit. Soon she shudders and moans in orgasm.'
 	'Ira decides to pay you back in the same coin and not speaking a word puts you on the edge of the tub and her lips sink into your pussy.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'

locations/city_kavkazkafe.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'podgivi':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You rebel "What do you take me for?"'
-							'Givi gives you his best puppy dog eyes and clasps his hands like he is begging. "Come my bold goddess. Hey, You want money? I''ll give you five thousand? And a bonus."'
+							'Givi gives you his best puppy dog eyes and clasps his hands like he is begging. "Come my bold goddess. Hey, you want money? I''ll give you five thousand? And a bonus."'
 
 							act 'Kneel':
 								money += 5000

locations/city_lake.qsrc

@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/andrew/sex/andreia.jpg"></center>'
 									'You try to break out of his grasp, but your struggles just seem to make him even more excited and you feel his now rock hard cock firmly press into your tender thigh.'
-									'The stranger turn you to your stomach and begins to wet you anus with his saliva.'
+									'The stranger turn you to your stomach and begins to wet your anus with his saliva.'
 									'He forcefully spreads your buttocks, opening up your quivering hole and crushing you with its heavy body. You blinked, a wheeze escapes from your throat and painfully his giant cock enters into your inner sanctum.'
 									'You do not feel pleasure, only acute pain, your aversion to the rapist and the feeling that you are being using, like a whore. However, his fingers casually touch your clit, and you catch the wave of lust. Over and over again as if you punched through by the huge cock of your abuser, you push back wanting more of him, and can not hold back the sweet moans.'
 									$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dinribak':
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/lake/sex/walk1/walk1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You call the idiot an idiot and get ready to leave. The guy says, "Well, maybe I was wrong, and you are not whore and a slut. Maybe I''m right and you are a slut, and you will stay and earn two thousand."'
+		'You call the idiot an idiot and get ready to leave. The guy says, "Well, maybe I was wrong, and you are not a whore and a slut. Maybe I''m right and you are a slut, and you will stay and earn two thousand."'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:

locations/city_market.qsrc

@@ -199,21 +199,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo':
 	end
 
 	i = 15
-	:loopcheap
-	if cheap[i] = 0:*p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''city_market'', ''marketclo''"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/1cheap/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="400" /></a>'
+	:loopgm_outfits
+	if gm_outfits[i] = 0:*p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''city_market'', ''marketclo''"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/gm/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="400" /></a>'
 	i += 1
-	if i <= 20:jump 'loopcheap'
+	if i <= 20:jump 'loopgm_outfits'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'marketclo':
 	cla
 
-	if cheap[i] ! 0:
+	if gm_outfits[i] ! 0:
 		msg 'You already own these clothes.'
 		gt 'city_market', 'clo'
 	end
 
-	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'cheap',i, 750
+	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'gm_outfits',i, 750
 
 end
 

locations/city_marketsex.qsrc

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_beginning':
 				cla
 
 				'While Artur is fucking you, you hear the creaking of the front door, you look up to see two more men enter the room. You know them it''s Abdul and Hassan, owners of the neighboring stalls.'
-				'You freeze in astonishment and shame, caught moaning as your being fucked, laying naked on your stomach as Artur rides you, he apparently doesn''t mind the audience as he keeps fucking you. The men smile and laugh, saying something to each other and then they say something to Artur who barely grunts a reply to them as he keeps fucking you.'
+				'You freeze in astonishment and shame, caught moaning as you''re being fucked, laying naked on your stomach as Artur rides you, he apparently doesn''t mind the audience as he keeps fucking you. The men smile and laugh, saying something to each other and then they say something to Artur who barely grunts a reply to them as he keeps fucking you.'
 				'Hasan then says to you. "Hey girl, why don''t you give us a turn when Artur is done and we won''t tell everyone in the market." You glance back at Artur as he is still riding you and he doesn''t show any indication he cares.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		elseif rand_act = 1:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/miss/vagmis1.jpg"></center>'
-			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and lays you down on a couch on your back. He spreads your legs, exposing your pussy. He lines up his dick, rubbing the tip a bit against you pussy lips and then shoves his dick in and starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
+			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and lays you down on a couch on your back. He spreads your legs, exposing your pussy. He lines up his dick, rubbing the tip a bit against your pussy lips and then shoves his dick in and starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal28.jpg"></center>'
-			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and bends you over, pulling your hips up, till you are on all fours. He kneels down behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, getting a bit of your natural lube on the head of his dick. Then he moves the tip of his dick up and rubs it against you asshole. He pushes his dick in, with only your slavia and a bit of your pussy juices on the tip for lucubration, you squeal a bit in pain.'
+			'He pulls his dick out of your mouth and bends you over, pulling your hips up, till you are on all fours. He kneels down behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, getting a bit of your natural lube on the head of his dick. Then he moves the tip of his dick up and rubs it against your asshole. He pushes his dick in, with only your slavia and a bit of your pussy juices on the tip for lucubration, you squeal a bit in pain.'
 			'He works his way slowly deeper into your ass, holding onto your hips tightly so you can''t pull away. He works his way down till he is balls deep and then starts to fuck you hard and fast. He pounds into you hard and fast, purely doing this for his own pleasure.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'rough'

locations/city_trashplace.qsrc

@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ $workbomzdi = {
 				'This sauna is located near your home, it is strange that you did not notice it before.'
 			end
 
-			'You go to the sauna, and you''re introduced to the local managers. it is explained to you who you need to deliver to, and reminded that it is necessary to return the envelope the same day you receive it.'
+			'You go to the sauna, and you''re introduced to the local managers. It is explained to you to whom you need to deliver to, and reminded that it is necessary to return the envelope the same day you receive it.'
 			'"Don''t forget to use secure transport. We''ll see you on Fridays and don''t fuck up."'
 
 			act 'Leave':bomzQW = 2 & minut += 1 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ if bomzQW = -10 and rand(0,5) = 0:
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', -20, 'rough', 'group', 'submissive', 'gangbang'
 				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'hobo', rand(35,55)
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-				$orgasm_txt = 'The three hobos all start fucking you in unison, and they''re definitely not tender with you, the fourth man is stroking himself next to you and encouraging his friends to fuck you brains out, which they gladly do. The fucking lasts for a good 40 minutes and your holes are as sore as they can be, they all randomly swap and mercilessly abuse you for their own pleasure, your mind clouds from the intense stimulation, and it happens, your whole body is shaking in a powerful orgasm, you pussy and anus tightly clenching around the two cocks fucking you. The hobos all start laughing at you and crudely tell you how much of a filthy slut you are...'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'The three hobos all start fucking you in unison, and they''re definitely not tender with you, the fourth man is stroking himself next to you and encouraging his friends to fuck you brains out, which they gladly do. The fucking lasts for a good 40 minutes and your holes are as sore as they can be, they all randomly swap and mercilessly abuse you for their own pleasure, your mind clouds from the intense stimulation, and it happens, your whole body is shaking in a powerful orgasm, your pussy and anus tightly clenching around the two cocks fucking you. The hobos all start laughing at you and crudely tell you how much of a filthy slut you are...'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -20, 'rough', 'group', 'submissive', 'gangbang'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/city_trashplaceevents.qsrc

@@ -251,8 +251,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 						bomjshet += 1
 						gs 'cum_call', 'vaginal', 'hobo'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/old1,'+rand(0,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'It is not your first time dealing with such people. You have already learned to overcome any aversion. So you decide to give the homeless man something a little better to just a blow job.
-						You take off your panties and threw them to the homeless. He is, of course, shocked by this. But the shock does not last long. After throwing off his pants full of holes, The old man moves to you.'
+						'It is not your first time dealing with such people. You have already learned to overcome any aversion. So you decide to give the homeless man something a little better to just a blowjob.
+						You take off your panties and throw them to the homeless. He is, of course, shocked by this. But the shock does not last long. After throwing off his pants full of holes, the old man moves to you.'
 						
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'prostitution'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/clothing.qsrc

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ $clothing_list_line = {
 		$RESULT += '<TD colspan="2"></TD>'
 	end
 
-	if $ARGS[1] = 'misc_outfit' and ARGS[2] = 1:
+	if $ARGS[1] = 'misc_outfits' and ARGS[2] = 1:
 		$RESULT += '<TD>A hessian sack the hunters gave you.</TD>'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] ! 'coat' and $ARGS[1] ! 'swimwear' and $ARGS[1] ! 'beach':
 		gs 'clothing_descriptions'
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Choose an item to sell</font></b></center></h3>'
 	end
 
-	if $ARGS[2] = 'gm' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
+	if $ARGS[2] = 'gm' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office' or $ARGS[2] = 'school' or $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
 		!'<center><b><font color="maroon">Viewing clothes from G&M</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/gm.png"></center>'
 	elseif $ARGS[2] = 'kats':
@@ -186,13 +186,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 	if $ARGS[2] = '':
 		'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ARGS[1]>>'', ''gm''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/gm.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('misc_outfit') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''misc'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''misc''"><img src="images/pc/items/misc/misc.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('misc_outfits') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''misc'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''misc''"><img src="images/pc/items/misc/misc.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('cats_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('cats_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''kats'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''kats''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pussycat.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('cats_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('cats_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''kats'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''kats''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pussycat.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''flamingos'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''flamingos''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''flamingos'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''flamingos''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('coco_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''coco'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/city/residential/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('coco_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''coco'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/city/residential/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 		if ARRSIZE('fashionista') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''fashionista'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''fashionista''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -206,9 +206,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 
 		if ARRSIZE('exhibit') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''exhibitshop'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''exhibitshop''"><img src="images/locations/oldtown/exhibitshop/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('dolls_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('dolls_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''dolls'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''dolls''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('dolls_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('dolls_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''dolls'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''dolls''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''bomba'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/oldtown/tsar/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''bomba'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/oldtown/tsar/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 		if ARRSIZE('exercise') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''sports'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''sports''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/sports.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -236,11 +236,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 
 			if ARRSIZE('gm_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_dress'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_dress''">Regular G&M clothing</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_office'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_office''">Office wear</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''office'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''office''">Office wear</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_school'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_school''">School uniforms</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''school'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''school''">School uniforms</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_uniform'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''uniform'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 		end
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopgm_outfits
-				if gm_outfits[i] = 1 and gm_outfitsS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_outfits', i)
+				if gm_outfits[i] = 1 and gm_outfits_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_outfits'):jump 'loopgm_outfits'
 
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopgm_dress
-				if gm_dress[i] = 1 and gm_dressS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_dress', i)
+				if gm_dress[i] = 1 and gm_dress_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_dress', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_dress'):jump 'loopgm_dress'
 
@@ -269,11 +269,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'office':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopoffice
-				if office[i] = 1 and officeS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'office' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'office', i)
+				if gm_office[i] = 1 and gm_office_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'office' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'office', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('office'):jump 'loopoffice'
 
@@ -281,14 +281,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'school':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 
-			if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and schoolS[6] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'school' or clothingwornnumber ! 6):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'school', 6)
+			if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and gm_school_s[6] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'school' or clothingwornnumber ! 6):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'school', 6)
 
 			i = 1
 			:loopschool
-				if school[i] = 1 and schoolS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'school' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'school', i)
+				if gm_school[i] = 1 and gm_school_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'school' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'school', i)
 				i += 1
 				if i = 6: i = 7
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('school'):jump 'loopschool'
@@ -297,11 +297,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopuniform
-				if uniform[i] = 1 and uniformS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'uniform' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'uniform', i)
+				if gm_uniform[i] = 1 and gm_uniform_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'uniform' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'uniform', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('uniform'):jump 'loopuniform'
 
@@ -312,10 +312,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 		if $ARGS[2] = 'misc':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
-			:loopmisc_outfit
-				if misc_outfit[i] = 1 and misc_outfitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'misc_outfit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'misc_outfit', i)
+			:loopmisc_outfits
+				if misc_outfits[i] = 1 and misc_outfitsS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'misc_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'misc_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('misc_outfit'):jump 'loopmisc_outfit'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('misc_outfits'):jump 'loopmisc_outfits'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
@@ -325,15 +325,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopcats_dress
-				if cats_dress[i] = 1 and cats_dressS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'cats_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'cats_dress', i)
+				if cats_dress[i] = 1 and cats_dress_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'cats_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'cats_dress', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('cats_dress'):jump 'loopcats_dress'
 
 			i = 1
-			:loopcats_outfit
-				if cats_outfit[i] = 1 and cats_outfitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'cats_outfit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'cats_outfit', i)
+			:loopcats_outfits
+				if cats_outfits[i] = 1 and cats_outfits_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'cats_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'cats_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('cats_outfit'):jump 'loopcats_outfit'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('cats_outfits'):jump 'loopcats_outfits'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
@@ -343,15 +343,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopflamingos_dress
-				if flamingos_dress[i] = 1 and flamingos_dressS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'flamingos_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'flamingos_dress', i)
+				if flamingos_dress[i] = 1 and flamingos_dress_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'flamingos_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'flamingos_dress', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress'):jump 'loopflamingos_dress'
 
 			i = 1
-			:loopflamingos_outfit
-				if flamingos_outfit[i] = 1 and flamingos_outfitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'flamingos_outfit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'flamingos_outfit', i)
+			:loopflamingos_outfits
+				if flamingos_outfits[i] = 1 and flamingos_outfits_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'flamingos_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'flamingos_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfit'):jump 'loopflamingos_outfit'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfits'):jump 'loopflamingos_outfits'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
@@ -361,15 +361,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopcoco_dress
-				if coco_dress[i] = 1 and coco_dressS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'coco_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'coco_dress', i)
+				if coco_dress[i] = 1 and coco_dress_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'coco_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'coco_dress', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_dress'):jump 'loopcoco_dress'
 
 			i = 1
-			:loopcoco_outfit
-				if coco_outfit[i] = 1 and coco_outfitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'coco_outfit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'coco_outfit', i)
+			:loopcoco_outfits
+				if coco_outfits[i] = 1 and coco_outfits_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'coco_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'coco_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfit'):jump 'loopcoco_outfit'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfits'):jump 'loopcoco_outfits'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopfashionista
-				if fashionista[i] = 1 and fashionistaS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fashionista' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fashionista', i)
+				if fashionista[i] = 1 and fashionista_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fashionista' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fashionista', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('fashionista'):jump 'loopfashionista'
 
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopfetish
-				if fetish[i] = 1 and fetishS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fetish' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fetish', i)
+				if fetish[i] = 1 and fetish_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fetish' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fetish', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('fetish'):jump 'loopfetish'
 
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopexhibit
-				if exhibit[i] = 1 and exhibitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'exhibit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'exhibit', i)
+				if exhibit[i] = 1 and exhibit_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'exhibit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'exhibit', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('exhibit'):jump 'loopexhibit'
 
@@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopfancy_burlesque
-				if fancy_burlesque[i] = 1 and burlesqueS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fancy_burlesque' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fancy_burlesque', i)
+				if fancy_burlesque[i] = 1 and burlesque_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fancy_burlesque' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fancy_burlesque', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('fancy_burlesque'):jump 'loopfancy_burlesque'
 
@@ -451,15 +451,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			cla
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
-			:loopdolls_outfit
-				if dolls_outfit[i] = 1 and dolls_outfitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'dolls_outfit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'dolls_outfit', i)
+			:loopdolls_outfits
+				if dolls_outfits[i] = 1 and dolls_outfits_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'dolls_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'dolls_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('dolls_outfit'):jump 'loopdolls_outfit'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('dolls_outfits'):jump 'loopdolls_outfits'
 
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopdolls_dress
-				if dolls_dress[i] = 1 and dolls_dressS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'dolls_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'dolls_dress', i)
+				if dolls_dress[i] = 1 and dolls_dress_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'dolls_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'dolls_dress', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('dolls_dress'):jump 'loopdolls_dress'
 
@@ -471,14 +471,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			cla
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
-			:loopbomba_outfit
-				if bomba_outfit[i] = 1 and bomba_outfitS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'bomba_outfit' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'bomba_outfit', i)
+			:loopbomba_outfits
+				if bomba_outfits[i] = 1 and bomba_outfits_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'bomba_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'bomba_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('bomba_outfit'):jump 'loopbomba_outfit'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits'):jump 'loopbomba_outfits'
 
 			i = 1
 			:loopbomba_dress
-				if bomba_dress[i] = 1 and bomba_dressS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'bomba_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'bomba_dress', i)
+				if bomba_dress[i] = 1 and bomba_dress_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'bomba_dress' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'bomba_dress', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('bomba_dress'):jump 'loopbomba_dress'
 
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopexercise
-				if exercise[i] = 1 and exerciseS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'exercise' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'exercise', i)
+				if exercise[i] = 1 and exercise_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'exercise' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'exercise', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('exercise'):jump 'loopexercise'
 
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 	$RESULT = FUNC('$short_description', $ARGS[2], CloStyle2)
 	$RESULT += '<<ARGS[3]>>'
 	'<<$RESULT>>'
-	if $ARGS[1] = 'misc_outfit' and ARGS[2] = 1:
+	if $ARGS[1] = 'misc_outfits' and ARGS[2] = 1:
 		'A hessian sack the hunters gave you.'
 	elseif $ARGS[2] ! 'coat' and $ARGS[2] ! 'swimwear' and $ARGS[2] ! 'beach':
 		gs 'clothing_descriptions'
@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
 						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
-						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfit':
+						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfits':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'moncheri':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
 						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
-						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfit' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfit':
+						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfits':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'moncheri':
 							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'
@@ -1072,16 +1072,16 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'swamp_clothes':
 	if ARGS[1] = 1:
 	!hessian clothing to owned, sets size and equipped.
-		misc_outfit[1] = 1
-		misc_outfitS[1] = 0
-		misc_outfitH[1] = 100
-		misc_outfitB[1] = pcs_hips
+		misc_outfits[1] = 1
+		misc_outfitsS[1] = 0
+		misc_outfitsH[1] = 100
+		misc_outfitsB[1] = pcs_hips
 		swamp_clothes = 1
-		gs 'clothing', 'wear', 'misc_outfit', 1
+		gs 'clothing', 'wear', 'misc_outfits', 1
 	end
 	if ARGS[1] = 0:
 	!hessian clothing no longer owned, but not unequipped.
-		misc_outfit[1] = 0
+		misc_outfits[1] = 0
 		swamp_clothes = 0
 	end
 end

locations/clothing_QV.qsrc

@@ -29,11 +29,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 	if ARRSIZE('school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''school''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/s.uniform2.png"></a></center>'
  
-	if ARRSIZE('cats_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('cats_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''kats''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pussycat.png"></a></center>'
+	if ARRSIZE('cats_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('cats_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''kats''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pussycat.png"></a></center>'
 
-	if ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''flamingos''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+	if ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''flamingos''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
-	if ARRSIZE('coco_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+	if ARRSIZE('coco_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 	if ARRSIZE('fashionista') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''fashionista''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -45,7 +45,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 	if ARRSIZE('exhibit') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''exhibitshop''"><img src="images/locations/oldtown/exhibitshop/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
-	if ARRSIZE('dolls_outfit') > 0 or ARRSIZE('dolls_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''dolls''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></a></center>'
+	if ARRSIZE('dolls_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('dolls_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''dolls''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></a></center>'
+
+	if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/old town/bomba/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 	if ARRSIZE('exercise') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''sports''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/sports.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -84,9 +86,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if gm_outfitsS[i] = 0 and gm_outfitsH[i] > 0 and gm_outfitsB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_outfitsB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_outfits_s[i] = 0 and gm_outfits_h[i] > 0 and gm_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if gm_outfitsS[i] = 0 and gm_outfitsH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_outfits_s[i] = 0 and gm_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -114,9 +116,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if gm_dressS[i] = 0 and gm_dressH[i] > 0 and gm_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_dress_s[i] = 0 and gm_dress_h[i] > 0 and gm_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if gm_dressS[i] = 0 and gm_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/gm_dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if gm_dress_s[i] = 0 and gm_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/gm/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -139,10 +141,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*nl
 		i = 1
 		:loopoffice
-		if office[i] = 1:
+		if gm_office[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'office', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if officeS[i] = 0 and officeH[i] > 0 and officeB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and officeB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''office'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/5office/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if gm_office_s[i] = 0 and gm_office_h[i] > 0 and gm_office_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_office_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''office'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/5office/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -164,10 +166,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*nl
 		i = 1
 		:loopuniform
-		if uniform[i] = 1:
+		if gm_uniform[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'uniform', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if uniformS[i] = 0 and uniformH[i] > 0 and uniformB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and uniformB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''uniform'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/10uniform/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if gm_uniform_s[i] = 0 and gm_uniform_h[i] > 0 and gm_uniform_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_uniform_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''uniform'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/10uniform/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -188,14 +190,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		'<center>These are the school uniforms you own that are currently available for you to wear.</center><br>'
 		*nl
 
-		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and schoolS[6] = 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''school'', 6"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/6.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and gm_school_s[6] = 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''school'', 6"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/6.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopschool
-		if school[i] = 1:
+		if gm_school[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'school', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if schoolS[i] = 0 and schoolH[i] > 0 and schoolB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and schoolB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''school'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if gm_school_s[i] = 0 and gm_school_h[i] > 0 and gm_school_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_school_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''school'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -217,19 +219,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*nl
 
 		i = 1
-		:loopcats_outfit
-		if cats_outfit[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cats_outfit', i
+		:loopcats_outfits
+		if cats_outfits[i] = 1:
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cats_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if cats_outfitS[i] = 0 and cats_outfitH[i] > 0 and cats_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and cats_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if cats_outfits_s[i] = 0 and cats_outfits_h[i] > 0 and cats_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and cats_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if cats_outfitS[i] = 0 and cats_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if cats_outfits_s[i] = 0 and cats_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('cats_outfit'):jump 'loopcats_outfit'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('cats_outfits'):jump 'loopcats_outfits'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopcats_dress
@@ -237,9 +239,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cats_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if cats_dressS[i] = 0 and cats_dressH[i] > 0 and cats_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and cats_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if cats_dress_s[i] = 0 and cats_dress_h[i] > 0 and cats_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and cats_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if cats_dressS[i] = 0 and cats_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if cats_dress_s[i] = 0 and cats_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''cats_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/cats/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -261,19 +263,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*nl
 
 		i = 1
-		:loopflamingos_outfit
-		if flamingos_outfit[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'flamingos_outfit', i
+		:loopflamingos_outfits
+		if flamingos_outfits[i] = 1:
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'flamingos_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if flamingos_outfitS[i] = 0 and flamingos_outfitH[i] > 0 and flamingos_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and flamingos_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if flamingos_outfits_s[i] = 0 and flamingos_outfits_h[i] > 0 and flamingos_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and flamingos_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if flamingos_outfitS[i] = 0 and flamingos_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if flamingos_outfits_s[i] = 0 and flamingos_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfit'):jump 'loopflamingos_outfit'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfits'):jump 'loopflamingos_outfits'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopflamingos_dress
@@ -281,9 +283,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'flamingos_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if flamingos_dressS[i] = 0 and flamingos_dressH[i] > 0 and flamingos_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and flamingos_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if flamingos_dress_s[i] = 0 and flamingos_dress_h[i] > 0 and flamingos_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and flamingos_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if flamingos_dressS[i] = 0 and flamingos_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if flamingos_dress_s[i] = 0 and flamingos_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''flamingos_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/flamingos/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -297,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*clr & cla
 		$ward_list_store = $ARGS[1]
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Wardrobe</font></b></center></h3>'
-		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/residential/coco/shop_name.png"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop_name.png"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<center><table border=1><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to wardrobe list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''store'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to stored clothing list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''unwanted'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to unwanted clothing list</a></TH></table></center>'
 		*nl
@@ -306,18 +308,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopcoco_outfit
-		if coco_outfit[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'coco_outfit', i
+		if coco_outfits[i] = 1:
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'coco_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if coco_outfitS[i] = 0 and coco_outfitH[i] > 0 and coco_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and coco_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if coco_outfits_s[i] = 0 and coco_outfits_h[i] > 0 and coco_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and coco_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if coco_outfitS[i] = 0 and coco_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if coco_outfits_s[i] = 0 and coco_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfit'):jump 'loopcoco_outfit'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('coco_outfits'):jump 'loopcoco_outfit'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopcoco_dress
@@ -325,9 +327,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'coco_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if coco_dressS[i] = 0 and coco_dressH[i] > 0 and coco_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and coco_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if coco_dress_s[i] = 0 and coco_dress_h[i] > 0 and coco_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and coco_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if coco_dressS[i] = 0 and coco_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if coco_dress_s[i] = 0 and coco_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''coco_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/coco/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -354,9 +356,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'fashionista', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if fashionistaS[i] = 0 and fashionistaH[i] > 0 and fashionistaB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and fashionistaB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/3fashionista/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if fashionista_s[i] = 0 and fashionista_h[i] > 0 and fashionista_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and fashionista_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fashionista/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if fashionistaS[i] = 0 and fashionistaH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fashionista/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if fashionista_s[i] = 0 and fashionista_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fashionista'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fashionista/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -382,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		if moncheri[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'moncheri', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if moncheriS[i] = 0 and moncheriH[i] > 0 and moncheriB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and moncheriB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''moncheri'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/4formal/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if moncheri_s[i] = 0 and moncheri_h[i] > 0 and moncheri_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and moncheri_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''moncheri'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/4formal/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -407,7 +409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		if fetish[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'fetish', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if fetishS[i] = 0 and fetishH[i] > 0 and fetishB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and fetishB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fetish'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/8fetish/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if fetish_s[i] = 0 and fetish_h[i] > 0 and fetish_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and fetish_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fetish'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/8fetish/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -431,7 +433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		if burlesque[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'burlesque', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if burlesqueS[i] = 0 and burlesqueH[i] > 0 and burlesqueB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and burlesqueB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''burlesque'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fancy/burlesque/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if burlesque_s[i] = 0 and burlesque_h[i] > 0 and burlesque_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and burlesque_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''burlesque'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fancy/burlesque/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -455,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		if exhibit[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'exhibit', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if exhibitS[i] = 0 and exhibitH[i] > 0 and exhibitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and exhibitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''exhibit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/9exhibit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if exhibit_s[i] = 0 and exhibit_h[i] > 0 and exhibit_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and exhibit_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''exhibit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/9exhibit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -476,19 +478,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*nl
 
 		i = 1
-		:loopdolls_outfit
-		if dolls_outfit[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'dolls_outfit', i
+		:loopdolls_outfits
+		if dolls_outfits[i] = 1:
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'dolls_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if dolls_outfitS[i] = 0 and dolls_outfitH[i] > 0 and dolls_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and dolls_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if dolls_outfits_s[i] = 0 and dolls_outfits_h[i] > 0 and dolls_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and dolls_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if dolls_outfitS[i] = 0 and dolls_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if dolls_outfits_s[i] = 0 and dolls_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('dolls_outfit'):jump 'loopdolls_outfit'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('dolls_outfits'):jump 'loopdolls_outfits'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopdolls_dress
@@ -496,9 +498,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'dolls_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if dolls_dressS[i] = 0 and dolls_dressH[i] > 0 and dolls_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and dolls_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if dolls_dress_s[i] = 0 and dolls_dress_h[i] > 0 and dolls_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and dolls_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if dolls_dressS[i] = 0 and dolls_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if dolls_dress_s[i] = 0 and dolls_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''dolls_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/dolls/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -512,7 +514,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*clr & cla
 		$ward_list_store = $ARGS[1]
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Wardrobe</font></b></center></h3>'
-		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/island/bomba.png"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/old town/bomba/shop_name.png"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<center><table border=1><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to wardrobe list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''store'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to stored clothing list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''unwanted'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to unwanted clothing list</a></TH></table></center>'
 		*nl
@@ -520,19 +522,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*nl
 
 		i = 1
-		:loopbomba_outfit
-		if bomba_outfit[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'bomba_outfit', i
+		:loopbomba_outfits
+		if bomba_outfits[i] = 1:
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'bomba_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if bomba_outfitS[i] = 0 and bomba_outfitH[i] > 0 and bomba_outfitB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_outfitB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_outfits_s[i] = 0 and bomba_outfits_h[i] > 0 and bomba_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if bomba_outfitS[i] = 0 and bomba_outfitH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfit'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_outfits_s[i] = 0 and bomba_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('bomba_outfit'):jump 'loopbomba_outfit'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits'):jump 'loopbomba_outfits'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopbomba_dress
@@ -540,9 +542,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'bomba_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if bomba_dressS[i] = 0 and bomba_dressH[i] > 0 and bomba_dressB[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_dressB[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_dress_s[i] = 0 and bomba_dress_h[i] > 0 and bomba_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if bomba_dressS[i] = 0 and bomba_dressH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_dress_s[i] = 0 and bomba_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -568,7 +570,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		if exercise[i] = 1:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'exercise', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if exerciseS[i] = 0 and exerciseH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''exercise'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/7exercise/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if exercise_s[i] = 0 and exercise_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''exercise'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/7exercise/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
@@ -595,7 +597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gym':
 	if exercise[i] = 1:
 		gs 'clothing_attributes', 'exercise', i
 		if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-			if exerciseS[i] = 0 and exerciseH[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''exercise'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/7exercise/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+			if exercise_s[i] = 0 and exercise_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''exercise'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/7exercise/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 		end
 	end
 	i += 1
@@ -659,7 +661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'change':
 	cla
 	gs 'clothing_attributes', $ARGS[1], ARGS[2]
 	'<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$clothing_image'',  $ARGS[1], ARGS[2])>>"></center>'
-	if $ARGS[1] = 'misc_outfit' and ARGS[2] = 1:
+	if $ARGS[1] = 'misc_outfits' and ARGS[2] = 1:
 		'A hessian sack the hunters gave you.'
 	else
 		$RESULT = FUNC('$short_description', $ARGS[1], CloStyle2)

locations/clothing_attributes.qsrc

@@ -93,17 +93,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gm_outfits':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_gm_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_gm_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'misc_outfit':
-	*P FUNC('$attributes_misc_outfit', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'misc_outfits':
+	*P FUNC('$attributes_misc_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_cats_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats_outfits':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_cats_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_outfits':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_flamingos_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'flamingos_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_flamingos_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_outfits':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_coco_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coco_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_coco_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
@@ -133,11 +133,11 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fancy_burlesque':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_fancy_burlesque', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_dolls_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dolls_outfits':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_dolls_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_dress':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_bomba_dress', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_outfit':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba_outfits':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_bomba_outfits', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 end
 

locations/club.qsrc

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 		act 'Hear him out':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club11.jpg"></center>'
-			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, It includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
+			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, it includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
 			'"The pay depends on results, get more people in, get people buying up the promotional drinks or if you dance well and you get 200 <b>₽</b>. Do worse, you get less, do very well, you get a bonus. When you finish you can stay in the club, so you get free entry as well."'
 			'"So, are you interested?"'
 			act 'No':clubno = 1 & gt 'club', 'inside'
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 					act 'Return':gt 'club', 'inside'
 				end
 			else
-				'You ask him about work, but he says your not pretty enough and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
+				'You ask him about work, but he says you''re not pretty enough and walks off. You are shocked enough that you just stand there and watch him walk away.'
 			end
 
 			exit

locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_school':
 				'Dimka downcasts his eyes nervously, obviously afraid of Fedor, and looking around for some type of escape, but he doesn''t know who to shut up "Yes, it''s true, she sucked me off outside the community center."'
 				'Fedor shoves Dimka to the ground and raise his fists. Dimka begin to panic as he remembers that Fedor is a boxer, "Keep your hands off me! Why would you want to date a cocksucker like her anyway?"'
 				'Fedor grabs Dimka by the lapels and lifts him off the ground, then rams his fist into Dimka''s stomach. "You talk shit about <<$pcs_firstname>> again and I''ll start collecting teeth."'
-				'Dimka falls to the ground, trying to catch his breath and escape from Fedor, he crawl back. "Come on..cof..calm down..augh..I won''t, I won''t..."'
-				'Fedor turns, leaving Dimka on the ground, then grabs your hand and lead you away. You don''t know what is going to happen, but Fedor doesn''t seem happy. Looking over your shoulder to the fallen form of Dimka, you suddenly realize the hotness and wetness between your legs.'
+				'Dimka falls to the ground, trying to catch his breath and escape from Fedor as he crawls back. "Come on... cough... calm down... augh... I won''t, I won''t..."'
+				'Fedor turns, leaving Dimka on the ground, then grabs your hand and leads you away. You don''t know what is going to happen, but Fedor doesn''t seem happy. Looking over your shoulder to the fallen form of Dimka, you suddenly realize the hotness and wetness between your legs.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstvisitsex':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/arthur/sex/facefuck0.jpg"></center>'
 				if pcs_throat < 16:
-					'Your sense of time seems altered, minutes?, hours?, it doesn''t seem to be important, you just keep sucking his cock as if it is the only thing in your little world. Dimka grabs you by the hair and pulls you onto his member. His hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock enters your throat, you choke but are too confused to really do anything about it. Dimka doesn''t pay any attention to your distress, and in fact, seems to enjoy your gagging sounds. he just fucks your mouth with his hard cock. Finally the torture ends and he fills your mouth with his hot slimy sperm that you instinctively swallow.'
+					'Your sense of time seems altered, minutes?, hours?, it doesn''t seem to be important, you just keep sucking his cock as if it is the only thing in your little world. Dimka grabs you by the hair and pulls you onto his member. His hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock enters your throat, you choke but are too confused to really do anything about it. Dimka doesn''t pay any attention to your distress, and in fact, seems to enjoy your gagging sounds. He just fucks your mouth with his hard cock. Finally the torture ends and he fills your mouth with his hot slimy sperm that you instinctively swallow.'
 				else
 					'Your sense of time seems altered, minutes?, hours?, it doesn''t seem to be important, you just keep sucking his cock as if it is the only thing in your little world. Dimka grabs you by the hair and pulls you onto his member. His hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock enters your throat, you resist gagging, but are too confused to really understand what he is doing. Dimka enjoys the fact that he can push his hard cock to the back of your throat and relentlessly fucks your mouth. Finally the torture ends and he cums his hot slimy sperm that you instinctively swallow.'
 				end
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackmail':
 		'"Hello, Dimka." you say softly, then stand waiting.'
 		'"Hello, Dimka? That is what you say?" Dimka says in a low, menacing tone, "After all I''ve done for you? Let you into my world? Hello, Dimka?"'
 		'"You fucking whore!" he roars, standing quickly and flinging his chair halfway across the room, "You useless fucking whore. You think you can come prancing in here just like that and all is forgiven?"'
-		'You barely have time to register that he is moving before he grabs your lower jaw with bruising force. He spits in your face violently. "You..You..Fucking whore." he screams in your face.'
+		'You barely have time to register that he is moving before he grabs your lower jaw with bruising force. He spits in your face violently. "You... you... fucking whore." he screams in your face.'
 		'You never felt the blow, but he must have hit you as you curl now on the floor into a ball. He grabs you by the hair and forces you into a chair.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaEv', 'dimkawarns'
 	else
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse6':
 	if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 	minut += 20
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/nip.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position.. Hmm.. lets see if a you can learn something" Then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurt, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He release you.'
+	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position... Hmm, let''s see if you can learn something" then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurts, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He releases you.'
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka pulls the needles out of your nipples and sets you free.'
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'nipples', 'pierce'
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse8':
 	sub += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/vag.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex..Something about more blood flow..So..I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here..So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
+	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex..Something about more blood flow... So... I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here... So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
 	if pirsG > 0:'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka takes the pins out of your pussy and sets you free.'
 	if pirsG = 0:
 		pirsG = 1

locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen1':
 	'"Oh, I''m sorry! I didn''t mean to startle you." you tell her.'
 	'She manages to let out a somewhat fake smile, "No no, don''t worry! It''s completely my fault. I wasn''t aware we had guests."'
 	'You smile back, "I''m <<$pcs_firstname>> but you can call me <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m in the same class as Dimka."'
-	'Uncertain how to react she replies back,"O-Oh, hello, I''m Olya and am Dimka''s mother. Please take a seat, let me make some tea."'
+	'Uncertain how to react she replies back, "O-Oh, hello, I''m Olya and am Dimka''s mother. Please take a seat, let me make some tea."'
 	act 'Have a seat':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_chat':
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decided to press on anyways, as you want to know more about her. "She seems, well I don''t mean to be rude but, overly subservient I guess." You say, trying not to sound rude.'
-				'He snorts a bit. "Yeah, like my dad says, She has been well trained." He seems to find that amusing and, apparently, all the answer you need. Something about the way he says it makes you think there is more to it.'
+				'He snorts a bit. "Yeah, like my dad says, she has been well trained." He seems to find that amusing and, apparently, all the answer you need. Something about the way he says it makes you think there is more to it.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'dimaHome', 'dimka_chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'dimaHome', 'dimkaroom'
 			end
@@ -1100,7 +1100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_makeout':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/stop.jpg"></center>'
-					'With that he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, You push him away with all your strength and you barely manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
+					'With that he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, you push him away with all your strength and you barely manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
 					'He suddenly gets furious. "Oh, you fucking tease! Get the hell out of my house, then!" With that he gets up and practically drags you out of his house, pushing you out the front door, before slamming it behind you.'
 					act 'Leave Dimka''s home': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end
@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_makeout2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/stop.jpg"></center>'
-					'With that, he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, You push him away with all your strength and finally manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
+					'With that, he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, you push him away with all your strength and finally manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
 					'He suddenly gets furious. "Oh, you fucking tease! Get the hell out of my house, then!" With that he gets up and practically drags you out of his house, pushing you out the front door, before slamming it behind you.'
 					act 'Leave Dimka''s home': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end
@@ -1220,7 +1220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_knees':
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A1'
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/kiss3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You mouth waters as your wrap your lips around his juicy cock. You use one hand to gently stroke his balls and the other to stroke his shaft in rhythm with your head. You look up into his eyes with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick in your mouth, looking for approval as you suck your way up and down his shaft. After a few minutes you feel his hands on the back of your head and he starts forcing you towards him as he thrusts his hips. Both of you hands move to his thighs as he begins to facefuck you, his cock sliding down your throat, gagging you viciously. Soon he is slamming into your esophagus balls deep until you feel yourself reaching the limit of what you can handle.'
+		'Your mouth waters as your wrap your lips around his juicy cock. You use one hand to gently stroke his balls and the other to stroke his shaft in rhythm with your head. You look up into his eyes with his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick in your mouth, looking for approval as you suck your way up and down his shaft. After a few minutes you feel his hands on the back of your head and he starts forcing you towards him as he thrusts his hips. Both of you hands move to his thighs as he begins to facefuck you, his cock sliding down your throat, gagging you viciously. Soon he is slamming into your esophagus balls deep until you feel yourself reaching the limit of what you can handle.'
 		*nl
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			gs 'panties', 'remove'

locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -726,8 +726,8 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 3:
 			*nl
 			'"Shut your god damn mouth, you bitch!" You must have really touched a nerve there.'
 			'"So that''s how it is then. Okay I''m off to show the video around. Bye."'
-			'"No wait! I''m sorry. I''ll stop everyone from talking. I swear. just don''t show that to anyone."'
-			'"That''s more like it. You have until the end of the day to get results, or else you know what will happen. don''t you? I don''t want to see you in class until you get it done." He nods and heads into the hall. You breathe a sigh of relief. You were seriously scared there, but it was also exciting seeing him so scared himself. You think about following him around to make sure he keeps his word, but that would mean skipping class. You know he won''t cross you as long as you have dirt on him. You head to class.'
+			'"No wait! I''m sorry. I''ll stop everyone from talking. I swear. Jst don''t show that to anyone."'
+			'"That''s more like it. You have until the end of the day to get results, or else you know what will happen. Don''t you? I don''t want to see you in class until you get it done." He nods and heads into the hall. You breathe a sigh of relief. You were seriously scared there, but it was also exciting seeing him so scared himself. You think about following him around to make sure he keeps his word, but that would mean skipping class. You know he won''t cross you as long as you have dirt on him. You head to class.'
 			act 'Go to class':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
@@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 6:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/revenge/crying.jpg"></center>'
 			'As you hide in the stall, crying hysterically, all you can think about is how your life is over. All the girls are going to give you the cold shoulder. The boys are going to treat you like a whore and make you give them blowjobs alongside Sonia. Your mother will disown you. Your despair is interrupted by a banging on the restroom door.'
-			'"Come out, <<$pcs_nickname>>. you can''t stay in their forever." It''s Dimka, that fucking asshole.'
+			'"Come out, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You can''t stay in there forever." It''s Dimka, that fucking asshole.'
 			'"Your public is waiting for you, slut. Come out and show us what a good cocksuc- Ow! Fuck! Get the hell off me Artem!"'
 			act 'peek your head out':
 				*clr & cla

locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina3':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D2.jpg"></center>'
 			'Gritting your teeth, you look to Dimka. He''s distracted adjusting some settings, so you throw the pills into your clothes and hide them. Relieved that he hasn''t noticed, you put on the gag ball. Fortunately, this time it''s you who put this thing on and manage to do so without hurting your jaw. Dimka ends what he was doing and looks at you with an expression of satisfaction on his face.' 
 			'"Look Slut, if you behave, the next time I will give you a gift. OK?"'
-			'You wordlessly agree by nodding, and he seems satisfied. as usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
+			'You wordlessly agree by nodding, and he seems satisfied. As usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
 			act 'Watch': gt 'dimalina', 'watch3'
 		end
 	else
@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina3':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You are trapped and without options. Gritting your teeth, you take them. After eating the pills, you put in the gag. Fortunately, this time it''s you who put this thing on and manage to put it on without hurting your jaw. Dimka ends what he was doing and looks at you with an expression of satisfaction on his face.' 
 		'"Look Slut, if you behave, the next time I will give you a gift. OK?"'
-		'You wordlessly agree with a nod, and he seems satisfied. as usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
+		'You wordlessly agree with a nod, and he seems satisfied. As usual he chains you up in the closet but weirdly, today he seems genuinely in a good mood. You wait there as Dimka prepare the cameras in the room.'
 		act 'Watch': gt 'dimalina', 'watch3'
 	end
 end
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch3':
 		act 'Dream of Lina':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/F3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You can hear Lina''s cries of pleasure and a sudden image of her comes to mind. She is on all fours moaning as you massage lube into her tight little ass. She looks at you with concern, but you know what to do, You are going to fill that cute hole with the beads. Your fingers were only the beginning. You lick the beads and spread her cheeks. When you begin to push, she gasps, cries and clenches her teeth as she adjusts to the toy and slowly starts to enjoy the feeling. You smile knowing that by the end of this, she''ll be the perfect anal slut for you.' 
+			'You can hear Lina''s cries of pleasure and a sudden image of her comes to mind. She is on all fours moaning as you massage lube into her tight little ass. She looks at you with concern, but you know what to do, you are going to fill that cute hole with the beads. Your fingers were only the beginning. You lick the beads and spread her cheeks. When you begin to push, she gasps, cries and clenches her teeth as she adjusts to the toy and slowly starts to enjoy the feeling. You smile knowing that by the end of this, she''ll be the perfect anal slut for you.' 
 			'Just as you begin to thrust the beads in and out of her ass a bit, you''re pulled back to reality by the sound of grunting from Dimka'
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -576,9 +576,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina5':
 		'Lina winces at his words and avoids Dimka''s gaze, reddens and look out of the corner of her eye towards you'
 		'"I don''t fucking hear you Little Slut!"'
 		'"That... If I don''t come, and do whatever you like, you will show the... The video to everyone."'
-		'"Good Little Slut! As a clarification, You are going to come here once a week, and remember, I''ve made copies of everything and stored them somewhere safe. I''m sure right now you''re thinking of doing something, maybe telling the police? If you think that the police will help you, forget it. I''m a minor and my father has money and a great lawyer. So... you understand?"'
+		'"Good Little Slut! As a clarification, you are going to come here once a week, and remember, I''ve made copies of everything and stored them somewhere safe. I''m sure right now you''re thinking of doing something, maybe telling the police? If you think that the police will help you, forget it. I''m a minor and my father has money and a great lawyer. So... you understand?"'
 		'Quivering and on the verge of tears, the only thing that she can do is agree.'
-		'"Ok...Good...Now get naked!"'
+		'"Ok... Good... Now get naked!"'
 		act 'Watch Lina obey her new master': gt 'dimalina', 'linaundress'
 	end
 end
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina6':
 			'"Uhm... thank you." Why is he suddenly being so... nice? Is this just a trick to get your guard down? '
 			'"So tell me... how is your mother? I mean, the gossip is that she is quite a slut."'
 			'Your expression hardens into a grimace. So this is what he was up to. "She''s a happily married woman, so that rumor... well it''s just that; a rumor."'
-			'Dimka snickers, "Yeah right! Alright, You don''t want to talk about that... so lets talk about what I should do next with my new Little Slut, hm?"'
+			'Dimka snickers, "Yeah right! Alright, you don''t want to talk about that... so lets talk about what I should do next with my new Little Slut, hm?"'
 			'"New...? You mean Lina?"'
 			'His eyes light up with delight as he watches you make the horrific realization of Lina''s fate with him. "Just like how I had to train you to be a good obedient girl, her performance as my girlfriend leaves a lot to be desired, so I''ve been thinking I should train her to be something much better instead..."'
 			'"I... I mean... I don''t really know..."'
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina8':
 	if dimlinaQW = 7: dimlinaQW = 8
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/dimkaroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Slut, You didn''t have enough, Hm? Coming so you can be with me? but, what can be expected from the women in your family?"'
+	'"Slut, you didn''t have enough, Hm? Coming so you can be with me? but, what can be expected from the women in your family?"'
 	'Cringing, you suppress the urge to hit his head against the wall and make humanity''s a favor. Dimka feels your incommodity and just give you an evil smile.'
 	'"Come on! Recognize it! You are a total Slut! I am trying to pass some quality time with my girlfriend and you come over to be fucked!"'
 	'"Well, you told me that I should come to visit, so..."'
@@ -815,12 +815,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'endure':
 	elseif pcs_ass < 20 and sucskill < 4:
 		'"Fuck, no!" You shudder.'
 		'"Shut up! Slut!"'
-		'You push your face in the couch and grit your teeth, as Dimka rapes your anus. You are humiliated and must endure this new violation of your body. Dimka seems to try to break you and continually forces more of it up your asshole until you feel his cock pressing against you pussy.'
+		'You push your face in the couch and grit your teeth, as Dimka rapes your anus. You are humiliated and must endure this new violation of your body. Dimka seems to try to break you and continually forces more of it up your asshole until you feel his cock pressing against your pussy.'
 	! If usually slightly anus or superior plus itchy from arousal
 	else
 		'"Fuck!" You gasp.'
 		'"I know you like it Slut!"'
-		'You moan as the metal rubs your innards. Your arousal and anal experience combined, make you enjoy the anal rape. Dimka senses this and begins to probe your asshole more until you feel his cock pressing against you pussy.'
+		'You moan as the metal rubs your innards. Your arousal and anal experience combined, make you enjoy the anal rape. Dimka senses this and begins to probe your asshole more until you feel his cock pressing against your pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		minut -= 5

locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rex_dance':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_3_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	end
-	'Rex takes you by the hand and drags you out to dance. you are happy to follow him.'
+	'Rex takes you by the hand and drags you out to dance. You are happy to follow him.'
 	'You dance, slowly getting closer to each other and finally grinding a bit against each other.'
 	'You turn around, putting your back to him and grind your tight ass against his crotch. You can feel his hard cock against your ass as you grind against it.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg 

locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ $pavser1 = {
 
 $pavser3 = {
 	menu_off = 1
-    'Condition Bedrooms more you plunged into a stupor. quite ragged room with awkward standing in the midst of her perfectly preserved ancient, plush ottoman.'
+    'Condition Bedrooms more you plunged into a stupor. Quite ragged room with awkward standing in the midst of her perfectly preserved ancient, plush ottoman.'
     act '- The chair would look good in a hall, - You dropped it withheld.':
         *clr & cla
         pcs_mana -= 50
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ $pavser4 = {
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/bathroom/sittingtoilet.jpg" ></center>'
     'You went into the corridor and headed to the bathroom, waiting, he will move after, but by the sound of steps realized, that he stayed in the kitchen. Scattered look you ran about the bathroom, listening to, he wanders in the other end of the apartment. The room was bathed in light, which fell through the glass window with glass.'
     'Finishing the old shell in harmony with frame oval mirror. You stayed in front of him to check his hair, Do not gone cosmetics.'
-    'Then, instantly deciding, She lifted her skirt, He pulled down her panties and sat on the toilet. Do you understand, resultinge herself slo, not only locked, but not even closing the bathroom door, and that he may at any time enter, but this-then you and excited. You become terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
+    'Then, instantly deciding, she lifted her skirt, he pulled down her panties and sat on the toilet. Do you understand, resultinge herself slo, not only locked, but not even closing the bathroom door, and that he may at any time enter, but this-then you and excited. You become terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
     'You were terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ $pavser4 = {
             gs'stat'
             '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/11684312.mp4"></video></center>'
             'You koknulis his wet with excitement and urine pisichki.'
-            'From that sensation, that you''re caught for such indecent occupation, You further podstёguet. And you barely contained, not to publish and sound.'
+            'From that sensation, that you''re caught for such indecent occupation, you further podstёguet. And you barely contained, not to publish and sound.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ $pavser5 = {
 		*clr & cla
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
-        'You enter the kitchen; it, in accordance with the requirements of politeness, You missed a little ahead and behind. Against the wall were piled bundles of yellowed newspapers.'
+        'You enter the kitchen; it, in accordance with the requirements of politeness, you missed a little ahead and behind. Against the wall were piled bundles of yellowed newspapers.'
         'You have a thought in my head slipped, that he always waits, How will you. You are immersed in their own emotional throwing,'
         'you are attracted to him and at the same time you are afraid of it, and he decided, that will not help you or customized : He decides to let itself. And what will happen next - he does not care whether or not?'
         'For he and you were two beings in ridiculous situation, devoid of purpose or meaning in life.'
@@ -274,9 +274,9 @@ $pavser7 = {
         pcs_horny += 10
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/phone.jpg" ></center>'
-        'You raised the phone in the bedroom, He along with you - in the corridor. An unfamiliar voice came to nothing, The connection was lost, but you both continued to press the receiver to his ear, listening to each other''s breath.'
+        'You raised the phone in the bedroom, he along with you - in the corridor. An unfamiliar voice came to nothing, the connection was lost, but you both continued to press the receiver to his ear, listening to each other''s breath.'
         'You want, that he spoke with you, I went to some-a trifling concession - showed what-weakness, - And then you can just get up and leave. You were not able to lower the tube, although you desperately tempted to slap her blunder on the lever of the old machine.'
-        'This keeps you from his inflexible arrogance. May be, He knew about it, and proud of their power over you.'
+        'This keeps you from his inflexible arrogance. Maybe, he knew about it, and proud of their power over you.'
         *nl
         act 'Listen tube':dynamic $pavser8
     end
@@ -290,8 +290,8 @@ $pavser8 = {
     pcs_mana = pcs_mana - 50
     gs'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
-    'And then he appeared,You involuntarily held his tongue over the lip.'
-    '– Well, We choose? - I asked you to inadvertently break into the voice irritation. - Removes this apartment?'
+    'And then he appeared, you involuntarily held his tongue over the lip.'
+    '– Well, we choose? - I asked you to inadvertently break into the voice irritation. - Removes this apartment?'
     '– Yes. It was decided from the outset.'
     '- But now I hesitate, - He continued. - Do you like her?'
     'He helped you get up and again asked,, - Do you like her?'
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ $pavser9 = {
         *clr & cla
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/sex/01.jpg" ></center>'
-        'He put you in the chair, but do not let go of the hands of the mighty, He ran your hand under her blouse and began to stroke your breasts.'
+        'He put you in the chair, but do not let go of the hands of the mighty, he ran your hand under her blouse and began to stroke your breasts.'
         ''
         ''
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ $pavser9 = {
             *clr & cla
             gs'stat'
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/sex/02.jpg" ></center>'
-            'Picked up the chest, palms and thumbs had nipples. The rough skin on the balls of his fingers made her rush of desire, You clung to him.'
+            'Picked up the chest, palms and thumbs had nipples. The rough skin on the balls of his fingers made her rush of desire, you clung to him.'
             'At the end-all he bared your breasts and hot lips touched your nipples and wild heat sladotnogo madness began to rise from the bottom to the top of your body.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -311,29 +311,33 @@ $brit = {
 					else
 						$shave_txt1 = 'You do your legs first before realizing that the stubble growing around your pussy is starting to become irritating and you can''t put it off any longer. Lathering your crotch up, you carefully scrape away the rough itchy hairs that cover it until you''re left smooth and clean shaven.'
 					end
+				else
+					$shave_act = ''
 				end
 			
-				act '<<$shave_act>> (0:15)':
-					menu_off = 1
-					*clr & cla
-					minut += 15
-					pcs_leghair = 0
-					pcs_pubes = shave_length
-					pcs_horny += 5
-					stanok -= 2
-					if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 0:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
-					if $loc ='gadbana':
-						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-					else
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+				if $shave_act ! '':
+					act '<<$shave_act>> (0:15)':
+						menu_off = 1
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 15
+						pcs_leghair = 0
+						pcs_pubes = shave_length
+						pcs_horny += 5
+						stanok -= 2
+						if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 0:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+						if $loc ='gadbana':
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
+						else
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+						end
+						*nl
+						'<<$shave_txt1>>'
+						*nl
+						'<<$shave_txt2>>'
+						dynamic $dryOff
+						gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
+						gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
 					end
-					*nl
-					'<<$shave_txt1>>'
-					*nl
-					'<<$shave_txt2>>'
-					dynamic $dryOff
-					gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
-					gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
 				end
 			end
 			
@@ -406,21 +410,25 @@ $brit = {
 				else
 					$shave_txt1 = 'The itchy stumps of hair growing around your pussy is starting to become too annoying even for your lazy self and you decide to clean yourself up. Lathering up your crotch, you carefully scrape away the rough stubble until you''re left clean shaven, the smooth skin of your pussy a relief until the next time it becomes annoying for you.'
 				end
+			else
+				$shave_act = ''
 			end
-			act '<<$shave_act>> (0:10)':
-				menu_off = 1
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 10
-				pcs_pubes = shave_length
-				pcs_horny += 5
-				stanok -= 1
-				if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
-				'<<$shave_txt1>>'
-				dynamic $dryOff
-				gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
-				gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
+			if $shave_act ! '':
+				act '<<$shave_act>> (0:10)':
+					menu_off = 1
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 10
+					pcs_pubes = shave_length
+					pcs_horny += 5
+					stanok -= 1
+					if obdysh = 1 and rand(0, 5) = 5:gt 'vann', 'brit1'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
+					*nl
+					'<<$shave_txt1>>'
+					dynamic $dryOff
+					gs'selfplay','bathtub_dildo_check'
+					gs'selfplay','shower_dildo_check'
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end

locations/dormev1.qsrc

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'djibrilgb':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/boy/djibril/sex/gangbang10.jpg"></center>'
 							'You take the dick out of your mouth long enough to say "Sorry, I don''t want to have sex. But you can fuck my butt, if you want." They laugh at that, and seem pleased with the idea. "I get first crack at her ass!" You hear Djibril loudly exclaim. They pull you up, and one of them sits on the couch while another kneels on it. You get on your hands and knees, joining them on the couch. You start stroking the one sitting on the couch, while sucking the one kneeling on it.'
 							*nl
-							'You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your butthole. The pressure builds, until it pops into you ass - stretching it. It must be Djibril, judging by how huge the cock feels in your ass. He starts fucking you anally, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
+							'You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your butthole. The pressure builds, until it pops into your ass - stretching it. It must be Djibril, judging by how huge the cock feels in your ass. He starts fucking you anally, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'hj', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'lube'
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'djibrilgb':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/boy/djibril/sex/gangbang10.jpg"></center>'
-											'You say nothing, and keep sucking their dicks and jerking them off. They take your silence as consent. You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your asshole again. The pressure builds, until it pops into you ass - stretching it. Djibril''s massive dick stretches your ass to its limits. He starts fucking your ass, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
+											'You say nothing, and keep sucking their dicks and jerking them off. They take your silence as consent. You feel someone applying lube to your ass, and moments later you feel the head of someone''s dick pressed against your asshole again. The pressure builds, until it pops into your ass - stretching it. Djibril''s massive dick stretches your ass to its limits. He starts fucking your ass, slow at first, but as things progress, he starts fucking you harder and faster. The others switch whose dick you are sucking, so they all get a turn.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 											gs 'arousal', 'hj', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'gangbang', 'sub', 'lube'

locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/losefight.jpg"></center>'
 		'Christina is a hell of a fighter. She is fast, hits harder than most boys and knows what she is doing. Yet despite all that she just isn''t a match for you. You finally land a few hard blows and she goes down gasping for breath, holding up her hand in surrender. You smirk as she lies beaten at your feet. You reach down and pull her phone out of her pocket and then toss it as far as you can out into the lake where it plops into the water.' 
-		'Lina seems to be stunned that you beat Christina and she looks a little afraid of you. "Neither you seen me here naked, right? And since I wasn''t here, that means I didn''t beat you ass, but from now on we both know who''s the bitch don''t we?" you say to both of them. Lina nods quickly while Christina is reluctant to agree, but soon nods herself. You confidently walk away as Lina helps Christina back to her feet.'
+		'Lina seems to be stunned that you beat Christina and she looks a little afraid of you. "Neither you seen me here naked, right? And since I wasn''t here, that means I didn''t beat your ass, but from now on we both know who''s the bitch don''t we?" you say to both of them. Lina nods quickly while Christina is reluctant to agree, but soon nods herself. You confidently walk away as Lina helps Christina back to her feet.'
 
 		act 'Walk off': gt 'gLake'
 	elseif fightEnding = 16:
@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		'With one last kick, the bitch squad lies fallen before you, whimpering in pain thanks to the sound beating they''ve received at your hand, but as you look around for your next victim, a redheaded girl grabs you and pulls you away from the brawl turned riot, towards the waiting Vanya & Vicky.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what to do with you! What were you thinking?!"'
 		'You...aren''t too sure why the hell you incited the massive brawl that now is being broken apart by the police, and as you try to look for a good answer, Vanya chooses that moment to express his opinion.'
-		'"Well...Katja, I want to say, well...That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
+		'"Well... Katja, I want to say, well... That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
 		'Katja looks dumbfounded as he raises his hand, more even when you clap it, followed by a shrugging Vicky, who jumps and does the same. As you turn smiling towards Katja, waiting for her to join, she facepalms, turns and begins to walk away, musing about your idiocy. Well, it is probably better if you follow her, so after saying goodbye to Vanya & Vicky, you go with her. It was "fun" but it is time to look for something else to do.'
 
 		act 'Continue': gt 'katjaEV', 'kathan'
@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'surrender':
 
 
 		'Kisame swims around you and laughs. "I''m having a great time baby." He grabs and drags your feet to the bottom of the pool, where he thrusts his cock in your pussy.'
-		'You try not to drown in the water while you are fucked by Kisame, You feel him pounding your insides with his member like a hammer. You can no longer hold your breath as you begin to drown.'
+		'You try not to drown in the water while you are fucked by Kisame, you feel him pounding your insides with his member like a hammer. You can no longer hold your breath as you begin to drown.'
 		'Kisame smiles and leans over you. "Kiss me." You stick your lips to his mouth, as his breath fills your lungs with air before keeping on pounding your pussy. Finally he finishes, pouring his shark seed into the surrounding water.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'rough', 'sub'

locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/solar4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You undressed and went naked into the solarium. There is just a person on the door looking at you. Of curiosity, you attach your legs and bent them to the side , peering into the darkness of the slightly open door. You can actually see and hear the shadow sniffing. There is no doubt, someone is obviously watching you. From the realization that someone is watching you, and that you are lying completely naked, your body begins to tremble. There is a pleasant feeling in the abdomen. You get so excited to the point that you start to spread your legs in different directions. To the joy of the mysterious stranger.'
+				'You undressed and went naked into the solarium. There is just a person on the door looking at you. Of curiosity, you attach your legs and bent them to the side, peering into the darkness of the slightly open door. You can actually see and hear the shadow sniffing. There is no doubt, someone is obviously watching you. From the realization that someone is watching you, and that you are lying completely naked, your body begins to tremble. There is a pleasant feeling in the abdomen. You get so excited to the point that you start to spread your legs in different directions. To the joy of the mysterious stranger.'
 
 				act 'Spread your legs ':
 					cla
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos15':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/market/butplag.jpg"></center>'
 		'You showed no displeasure by his actions even with a lot of people around. All you could hear were people groaning because of the heat.'
-		'He moved his hand to your other cheek stopping in the middle, a little below. Little by little. he began to squeeze your ass in his hands. You did not react so he began to move his fingers under the fabric of your skirt to between your legs.'
+		'He moved his hand to your other cheek stopping in the middle, a little below. Little by little. He began to squeeze your ass in his hands. You did not react so he began to move his fingers under the fabric of your skirt to between your legs.'
 		'He felt that his "victim" was startled, but not surprised. Because he was experienced, he realized that you were excited and already quite wet.'
 		'You felt really excited. You wanted the guy to pull up your skirt and put cock inside... The sensations claimed you, your excitement increasing. You had to keep yourself from starting to groan and moan ...'
 		'The man, meanwhile, pulled at your skirt, and with skillful movements got under your skirt. His hand was on your damp with sweat ass and his fingers touched your anal tunnel.'
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos22':
 		pcs_horny += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/altschool/ptu_rand.jpg"></center>'
-		'You met Olga L. the teacher of Foreign Languages. She is wearing a pretty sexy outfit, you think that''s against the rules.'
+		'You met Olga L., the teacher of Foreign Languages. She is wearing a pretty sexy outfit, you think that''s against the rules.'
 
 		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
 	end
@@ -1029,7 +1029,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos25':
 		'You:"Zhenya, you have something written on your nose." You point to the mirror.'
 		'Eugene looks in the mirror and immediately becomes red as a lobster'
 		'Zhenya:"This is what I get for playing with the boys, excuse me and thank you..." He begins to rub his nose hard'
-		'It seems some students make fun of this guy, You feel like you should cheer him up.'
+		'It seems some students make fun of this guy, you feel like you should cheer him up.'
 		'You:"Do not worry, so tell me, how are you doing? Do you have a girlfriend? Almost every young man your age has a girl.'
 		'Zhenya:"Unfortunately, I do not. I am not acquainted with many girls, they always make fun of me... it hurts my feelings.'
 		'You:"Well, what do you like to do? Do you have a hobby? Going to the movies, games maybe?'

locations/event.qsrc

@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima32':
 	'"Oh, you''re awake! Just in time for your lessons!" Says Alex.'
 	'You look around. While you were unconscious, you were dressed and taken to the street. In your mouth, a metallic taste. Your hands are tied behind your back.'
 	'"And now, bitch, I''ll teach you safe sex".'
-	'With these words, Alex puts you on your knees in front of him, He pulls out his penis and puts it in your mouth.'
+	'With these words, Alex puts you on your knees in front of him, he pulls out his penis and puts it in your mouth.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Resist':gt 'event', 'dima33'
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 	'Alex enters you from behind. He grabs your but with both hands and squeezes it tightly, while thrusting vigorously. After a while, you orgasm from the sensation.'
 	'"Much like this morning, only this time no bitting!" Says Alex, further increasing the tempo.'
 	'Suddenly he stops, you are turned around and pushed to your knees. You hit the marble floor hard, and feel something warm hit and then run down your face.'
-	'"Your Stuff is in that box. Hope, You enjoyed the lesson." With these words Alex loosens the straps on your hands, and you hear him walking away.'
+	'"Your Stuff is in that box. Hope, you enjoyed the lesson." With these words Alex loosens the straps on your hands, and you hear him walking away.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough', 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima36':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/10028_tommypistoljacquelineblacklady_352.jpg"></center>'
-	'After sitting in this position for a few minutes, you start to free your hands. Once they''re loose, You tear off the blindfold, and wipe as much of the sperm of your face as is possible.'
+	'After sitting in this position for a few minutes, you start to free your hands. Once they''re loose, you tear off the blindfold, and wipe as much of the sperm of your face as is possible.'
 	'Looking around, you find the box Alex had put your stuff it. You get dressed and find a passage that leads to the street above.'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima47':
 	'The realization that you are not alone in the room hits you just as he forcefully rams his cock into your pussy.'
 	'You have decide to try not to be distracted, and continue to suck, despite the pounding you are receiving.'
 	'When the man you are serving finishes, you, as before, swallow and are ready to accept the next, but the hole remains empty. It seems you have work off the money Alex had gotten.'
-	'Alex efforts have not gone unnoticed, and soon you shake in orgasm. Almost immediately, He pulls out his penis, and turns your head so that it is jabbing you in the face.'
+	'Alex efforts have not gone unnoticed, and soon you shake in orgasm. Almost immediately, he pulls out his penis, and turns your head so that it is jabbing you in the face.'
 	'It is now a reflex action for you to help him to finish. After you cleaned his cock, he leaves the booth.'
 	'After a few minutes the girl you met at the door comes in, removes your gag and takes you to the lavatory, where you wash your face and rinse your mouth.'
 	'When you are done, she hands you your things, and some cash, adding, "From your friend, for a job well done." You dress.'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima48':
 	'It looks like you misunderstood the girl.'
 	'"You want to do this the hard way? Fine, I can do that."'
 	'With these words, she forces your head back to the hole.'
-	'Another cock appears from the hole, She puts it in your mouth, and begins to drive your head. It feels like she''s fucking the stranger behind the wall with your head.'
+	'Another cock appears from the hole, she puts it in your mouth, and begins to drive your head. It feels like she''s fucking the stranger behind the wall with your head.'
 	'It takes more time, but he finishes in your mouth. She holds your head against the wall, not giving you room to spit anything out. This was repeated several times.'
 	'When the last "customer" disappeared from the hole, she lets go of your head, and leaves the room. Soon she comes back with your stuff. You dress, and she leads you out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 50, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
@@ -850,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima51':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/10022_paristommy_088.jpg"></center>'
-	'You immediately understand the hint. Kneeling, you unzip his fly, and get down to business. Barely a couple of minutes later the guy begins to cum. Finished, He says goodbye to you, and quickly leaves.'
+	'You immediately understand the hint. Kneeling, you unzip his fly, and get down to business. Barely a couple of minutes later the guy begins to cum. Finished, he says goodbye to you, and quickly leaves.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'unknown'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'

locations/fathersex.qsrc

@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fathersex_act1':
 															spafinloc = 0
 															gs 'cum_manage'
 															'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumvaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-															'With his cock deep inside you and between his moans and cum pumping deep inside you. your dad looks at you and says... "i love you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+															'With his cock deep inside you and between his moans and cum pumping deep inside you. Your dad looks at you and says... "i love you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 															$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 															gs 'cuminsidereact'
 															gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'

locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -910,7 +910,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 			gs 'stat'
            	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/models.jpg"></center>'
             'You are trying to find the "McGuffin" that Tatiana told you was somewhere in the agency and that was cursing the place, but you haven''t had much luck... until now. You feel a magic tingle and snoop on an interesting titbit.'
-            '"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass...massa...masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
+            '"Oh my god! You need to meet this girl! She is an incredible mass... massa... masse... Damn! She is good with her hands!"'
             '"Sorry, I don''t swing that way. Well... except on my boyfriend''s birthday."'
             '"Huh?! No! Well... maybe? I mean that she can help you with your boob pains!"'
             '"You mean my BACK pains? Are you feeling alright? You sound a little off today."'
@@ -2058,7 +2058,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackm':
 					'On the back of a chair hangs sexy lingerie and white shirt. Apparently, all of this is meant to you. You dress up and sit on the edge of the bed. Almost immediately two men enter the room - one blond and buff the other slim and brunette.'
 					'"OK, a simple scenario." Directs Victor, following them with his camera. "Girl undressing. Sexy but quickly, then you get to know the boys. For the girl the actions will be a surprise." He winks at the guys and you suspect they know full well that you have no idea what to expect.'
 					'You start trying to undress but your hands won''t respond, but after the blond guy starts poking and probing your mental resistance fails. You take off your shirt and undo your bra, by then the guys are already taking matters into their own hands. The blond guy literally ripped the bra off you as the brunette pushes you back on to the bed and swiftly pulls your panties off.'
-					'Foreplay is clearly not part of the scene as the blond guy flips you over on to all fours and abruptly enters you, you have no time to get in the mood and are not ready for it. It hurts, but he seems to have used a little lube as he is able to fuck you deeply with little resistance. his hands roughly grope at your chest and you feel sore and violated.'
+					'Foreplay is clearly not part of the scene as the blond guy flips you over on to all fours and abruptly enters you, you have no time to get in the mood and are not ready for it. It hurts, but he seems to have used a little lube as he is able to fuck you deeply with little resistance. His hands roughly grope at your chest and you feel sore and violated.'
 					'The other guy having undress kneels in front of you and presents his erect cock to your mouth. You stare at it and your lack of action earns you a hard slap in the face, tears gush from your eyes with the pain.'
 					gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Brunette', rand(19,45)
 					gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated, 'a'

locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -131,13 +131,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio_strip_talk2':
 				cla & *clr
 				if $braworntype ! 'none':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip1.mp4"><center>'
-					'"No! Please!"  you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
+					'"No! Please!" you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
 					gs'bras','remove'
 					gs'stat'
 					'In your desperation, you throw off your bra as fast as you can. You don''t feel confident enough to be doing this but even this is better than having to take off your panties and show your pussy too. Once your bra is on the floor, the manager glances up and down, back and forth between your breasts and your increasingly red face.'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
-					'"No! Please!"  you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
+					'"No! Please!" you cry. "I''m still not ready! I need more time! What if I just keep my panties for a little longer? Just go topless instead of full nude?"'
 					'The manager looks at your already breasts with obvious confusion and resist the urge to cover them up with your hands with great difficulty.'
 					'"But you''re already topless."'
 					'"Exactly!" you say, trying to cover yourself with excuses. "I, uhh, purposely didn''t wear a bra today. I''m still not ready but I took the initiative to help myself get more used to it. That has to count for something right?"'

locations/foto_events2.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing_documentary':
                     if city_kickboxing >=150 and razradKik >= 5:						                               
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews end. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.'
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 
-                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not the BEST, female kickboxer in all St.petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Mean and Famous!'                            
+                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not the BEST, female kickboxer in all St. Petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Mean and Famous!'                            
                     elseif city_kickboxing >=60 and razradKik >= 2:
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews end. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.' 
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'track_&_field_documentary':
                     if city_running >=90 and razradbeg >= 3:					
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews ends. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.'
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 
-                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not THE best runner in The Women''s 400 Meter Dash category in all of St.petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Fast and Famous!'                            
+                        'And is a little awkward... The realization, that you are getting famous, as one of the best, if not THE best runner in The Women''s 400 Meter Dash category in all of St. Petersburg. Practically, the article turns around you. With even fans asking all kinds of personal questions. Damn! You are Hot, Fast and Famous!'                            
                     elseif city_running >=30 and razradKik >= 1:
                         'Two hours later, the model session/interviews ends. After returning to the studio, you are handed <<modelpayfin>> <b>₽</b> in payment for the job.' 
                         'Sometime later, the article is sent to your phone...' 

locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_chatter':
 		'"Tsk-! You really think you could do better than her, Ivanna? She''s smart, she''s beautiful, and she''s knows how to carry herself. What do you have that she doesn''t?"'
 		'"I don''t have a fat ass."'
 	elseif model_chatter = 2:
-		'"...cking making me do my makeup here."'
+		'"...ucking making me do my makeup here."'
 		'"What do you mean? How is Katherine making you do makeup in the bathroom? What''s wrong with your station?"'
 		'"I caught her fucking her boyfriend there again! Fucking left cum all over my fucking seat! Like, I''m going to fucking sit down there after that. Probably come up with fucking herpes or some shit."'
 		'"God! What is wrong with that girl? Can''t she keep it in her pants for two seconds?"'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_chatter':
 		*nl
 		'The girls giggle together as you tune out again...'
 	elseif model_chatter = 5:
-		'"...nd he offered me a job at the porn studio down the road."'
+		'"...and he offered me a job at the porn studio down the road."'
 		'"Oh! You finally did your first nude shoot?"'
 		'"About time, girl. How long have you been here? Four months?"'
 		'"What?? Who took four months to do their first nude shoot?"'
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mari_chat':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading19.jpg"></center>'
 										'She looks a little confused and picks up her book again.'
-										'Mari blushes intensely and says,"N-no... I like boys..." You see her whisper the words again quietly to herself, "I like boys..."'
+										'Mari blushes intensely and says, "N-no... I like boys..." You see her whisper the words again quietly to herself, "I like boys..."'
 										act'Continue':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/portraits/mari_e/talking/reading10.jpg"></center>'