Text edits and fixes

locations/albina_school_sex.qsrc

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_1':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/maekup.jpg"></center>'
 				'You shake your head at her. "Sorry Albina, but I don''t want to do that."'
-				'She looks a little disappointed as she fixes her skirt, but walks over to you and leans in to whisper in your ear. "That''s okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, but just know that I''ll be sitting in class with a <i>very</i> wet pussy thinking about how good you are eating it." she says softly before walking over to the mirror and touching up her makeup before leaving. You find yourself feeling a little aroused.'
+				'She looks a little disappointed as she fixes her skirt, but walks over to you and leans in to whisper in your ear. "That''s okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, but just know that I''ll be sitting in class with a <i>very</i> wet pussy thinking about how good you are at eating it." she says softly before walking over to the mirror and touching up her makeup before leaving. You find yourself feeling a little aroused.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Accept':

locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -1539,12 +1539,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_lockerroom69':
 		'As you both get dressed she comments "It''s nice being with another girl. Men can be such assholes sometimes." with a look of slight frustration on her face.'
 		'You nod slightly in agreement with her. "Yeah..."'
 		'She giggles a little. "Don''t get me wrong, it''s nice to just get fucked hard and put away wet, but sometimes it''s nice feeling another girl''s touch. It''s so much softer and gentler than a guy''s, especially some of the guys I know."'
-		'You don''t know about that. You are sure some guys can be gentle and some girls really rough, but you guess it''s true. "Yeah, most times..."'
-		if AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0:
-			'As she finishes dressing, she turns to you. "I''ll see you at practice yeah?"'
-			'You nod. "Yeah, see you at practice."'
-		end
-		'Once you are both dressed, she heads out of the locker room. "See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+		'"Yeah, I guess..." you softly reply.'
+		'Once you''re both dressed, she heads out of the locker room. "See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 		act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	end
 end

locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						if fame['pav_sex'] > 10: gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', -10
 						'You hear the clattering of heels and turn to see Albina storming over, her furious gaze directed towards Vasily. "I distinctly remember telling you and the other tiny dick morons to fuck off and leave <<$pcs_nickname>> alone, or has your tiny dick brain forgotten that conversation?"'
 						'Vasily has already let go of you and bravely - or stupidly - lunged for Albina. "What did you call me, you buttslut whore? You want me to fuck you instead?"'
-						'Albina gives him her most charming smile and then, with lightning-fast reflexes, launches her knee right into his crotch, causing the howling Vasily to fall to the floor. Albina then squats down beside him as he rolls back and forth in pain and sweetly says "If you approach <<$pcs_nickname>> or attack, insult or even look at me again, I''ll bury you alive where nobody will ever find you..."'
+						'Albina gives him her most charming smile and then, with lightning-fast reflexes, delivers a swift yet brutal kick to his crotch, causing the howling Vasily to fall to the floor. Albina then squats down beside him as he rolls back and forth in pain and sweetly says "If you approach <<$pcs_nickname>> or attack, insult or even look at me again, I''ll bury you alive where nobody will ever find you..."'
 						*nl
-						'Vasily curls into a ball on the floor, nursing the pain in his crotch. Either he didn''t listen to her or he doesn''t know when to stop, because the next thing he utters between incoherent moans of pain is clearly "Fuck you, you dirty anal-loving whore!" Albina rises to her feet and smiles. Then, without warning, she viciously stomps on his crotch and then painfully twists her heel into him. "You''re testing my fucking patience! Do you want me to burst your little balls in front of everyone?"'
+						'Vasily curls into a ball on the floor, nursing the pain in his crotch. Either he didn''t hear her or he doesn''t know when to stop, because the next thing he utters between incoherent moans of pain is clearly "Fuck you, you dirty anal-loving whore!" Albina rises to her feet and smiles. Then, without warning, she viciously stomps on his crotch and then painfully twists her heel into him. "You''re testing my fucking patience! Do you want me to burst your little balls in front of everyone?"'
 						*nl
-						'Vasily squeals pathetically in pain. "No!! I''m sorry! I''m sorry! Just please, stop!" A strangely satisified, almost erotic grin creeps onto Albina''s face and she squats down next to him again, patting his head like a dog while mocking him. "Who''s a good boy? You are! Yes you!" She then stands and looks at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you better leave before somebody sees you here. With what people already think of you, you really don''t want them to think you did this."'
+						'Vasily squeals pathetically in pain. "No!! I''m sorry! I''m sorry! Just please, stop!" A strangely satisified, almost erotic grin creeps onto Albina''s face and she squats down next to him again, patting his head like a dog while mocking him. "Who''s a good boy? You are! Yes you!" She then stands and looks at you. "You better leave before somebody sees you here, <<$pcs_nickname>>. With what people already think of you, you really don''t want them to think you did this."'
 						*nl
 						'Several of the other students are howling in laughter at Vasily''s humiliating misfortune, but more than a few take another look at you and seem to see you a little differently thanks to Albina coming to your aid. Seeing that you are not going to be left alone, you safely slip out while everyone is distracted by Vasily and Albina.'
 						gs 'stat'

locations/pav_library.qsrc

@@ -11,14 +11,14 @@ gs 'stat'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
-'For such a small town, this library is surprisingly large - containing many interesting books on a wide variety of subjects.'
+'For such a small town, the library is surprisingly large - containing many interesting books on a wide variety of subjects.'
 *nl
 'Between the bookshelves are some tables which can be used for studying. Some of them have <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">computers</a> for public use.'
 if lernHome > 0:
-'You could do your homework with the help of one of the computers'
+'You could do your homework with the help of one of the computers.'
 end
 if 	storyline = 1 and kanikuli = 0 and week < 6 and nerdstudynight['day'] ! daystart and hour > 14:
-	'The nerd''s are siting at a table studying together.'
+	'The nerds are sitting at a table studying together.'
 end
 
 act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter'
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 18:
 			if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			gs'stat'
 			gs 'grades', 'homework', 'school', 'yes', 1, 0, 0
-			'You sit down at one of the tables with a a computer and use it to help you do your homework'
+			'You sit down at one of the tables with a a computer and use it to help you do your homework.'
 			'After an hour you have '+iif(lernHome = 0, 'completed', 'done a part of')+' your homework.'
 			act 'Get up form the table': gt 'pav_library'
 		end
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 18:
 		act 'Do your homework (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 	if storyline = 1 and kanikuli = 0 and week < 6 and nerdstudynight['day'] ! daystart and hour > 14:
-		act 'Join the nerd''s study goup': gt 'pav_library_nerdstudy', 'nerd_study_night'
+		act 'Join the nerd''s study group': gt 'pav_library_nerdstudy', 'nerd_study_night'
 	end
 else
 	'The library is closed.'