[text edit] clean up traits and fix the description of how many points are needed to reach level 3 for nerd_status

locations/traits.qsrc

@@ -9,12 +9,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 	'<center><b>Bimbo</b></center>'
 	if bimbolevel = 0:
 		'You do not have this trait.'
-		'To gain this trait you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes for a few days.'
+		'To gain this trait, you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes for a few days.'
 		'You have <<bimbo>> out of 10 points towards level 1.'
 	elseif bimbolevel = 1:
 		'You have this trait at level 1.'
-		'To maintain this trait you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes and/or have regular sex.'
-		'Due to this trait you gain a very small bonus to appearance and a very small penalty to intelligence.'
+		'To maintain this trait, you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes and/or have regular sex.'
+		'Due to this trait, you gain a very small bonus to appearance and a very small penalty to intelligence.'
 		'You have <<bimbo>> out of 20 points towards level 2.'
 		if bimbowithdrawal = 0:
 			'You are not in withdrawal.'
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 		end
 	elseif bimbolevel = 2:
 		'You have this trait at level 2.'
-		'To maintain this trait you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes and/or have regular sex.'
-		'Due to this trait you gain a small bonus to appearance and a small penalty to intelligence.'
+		'To maintain this trait, you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes and/or have regular sex.'
+		'Due to this trait, you gain a small bonus to appearance and a small penalty to intelligence.'
 		'You have <<bimbo>> out of 30 points towards level 3.'
 		if bimbowithdrawal = 0:
 			'You are not in withdrawal.'
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 		end
 	else
 		'You have this trait at level 3.'
-		'To maintain this trait you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes and/or have regular sex.'
-		'Due to this trait you gain a moderate bonus to appearance and a moderate penalty to intelligence.'
+		'To maintain this trait, you must wear bimbo clothing / shoes and/or have regular sex.'
+		'Due to this trait, you gain a moderate bonus to appearance and a moderate penalty to intelligence.'
 		if bimbowithdrawal = 0:
 			'You are not in withdrawal.'
 		else
@@ -47,16 +47,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 	'<center><b>Exhibitionist</b></center>'
 	if Exhibitionist_lvl = 0 and exhib_cheat = 0:
 		'You do not have this trait.'
-		'To gain this trait you must have low enough inhibition and choose to expose your breasts in public.'
+		'To gain this trait, you must have low enough inhibition and choose to expose your breasts in public.'
 		'You have <<pcs_exhib>> out of 10 points towards level 1. This will slowly decrease each day unless you expose yourself.'
 	elseif Exhibitionist_lvl = 1:
 		'You have this trait at level 1.'
-		'To increase this trait you must choose to expose your breasts and/or bare bottom in public.'
+		'To increase this trait, you must choose to expose your breasts and/or bare bottom in public.'
 		'This trait grants you a small amount of excitement from exposing yourself.'
 		'You have <<pcs_exhib>> out of 50 points towards level 2.'
 	elseif Exhibitionist_lvl = 2:
 		'You have this trait at level 2.'
-		'To increase this trait you must choose to expose your breasts, bare bottom and/or pussy in public.'
+		'To increase this trait, you must choose to expose your breasts, bare bottom and/or pussy in public.'
 		'This trait grants you a moderate amount of excitement from exposing yourself.'
 		if pcs_exhib < 100:
 			'You have <<pcs_exhib>> out of 100 points towards level 3.'
@@ -75,13 +75,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 	
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 0:
 		'<center><b>Likes learning</b></center>'
-		'You don''t have this trait and <<traits[''nerd_points'']>> points. You need to earn <<40 - traits[''nerd_points'']>> more points to get level 1 of this trait.'
+		'You don''t have this trait but have <<traits[''nerd_points'']>> points. You need to earn <<40 - traits[''nerd_points'']>> more points to get level 1 of this trait.'
 	elseif traits['nerd_status'] = 1:
 		'<center><b>Likes learning</b></center>'
 		'You have level 1 of this trait and <<traits[''nerd_points'']>> points. You need to earn <<60 - traits[''nerd_points'']>> more points to get level 2 of this trait. If you fall below 20 points, you''ll lose this trait.'
 	elseif traits['nerd_status'] = 2:
 		'<center><b>Loves to learn</b></center>'
-		'You have level 2 of this trait and <<traits[''nerd_points'']>> points. You need to earn <<60 - traits[''nerd_points'']>> more points to get level 2 of this trait. If you fall below 40 points, you''ll fall back to level 1.'		
+		'You have level 2 of this trait and <<traits[''nerd_points'']>> points. You need to earn <<80 - traits[''nerd_points'']>> more points to get level 3 of this trait. If you fall below 40 points, you''ll fall back to level 1.'		
 	elseif traits['nerd_status'] = 3:
 		'<center><b>Teacher''s pet</b></center>'
 		'You have level 3 of this trait and <<traits[''nerd_points'']>> points. If you fall below 60 points, you''ll fall back to level 2.'		
@@ -93,18 +93,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 	'<center><b>Addictive Personality</b></center>'
 	if addictive_trait_lvl = 0 and addictive_cheat = 0:
 		'You do not have this trait.'
-		'To gain this trait you have to use 2 different types of drugs several times. At the moment you have <<addictive_exp>> out of 2 points towards level 1.'
+		'To gain this trait, you have to use 2 different types of drugs several times. At the moment, you have <<addictive_exp>> out of 2 points towards level 1.'
 	elseif addictive_trait_lvl = 1:
 		'You have this trait at level 1.'
-		'You have some experience with taking drugs and it becomes harder for you to refuse to take them.'
-		'To increase this trait you have to use 3 different types of drugs several times. At the moment you have <<addictive_exp>> out of 3 points towards level 2.'
+		'You have some experience with taking drugs, and it becomes harder for you to refuse to take them.'
+		'To increase this trait, you have to use 3 different types of drugs several times. At the moment, you have <<addictive_exp>> out of 3 points towards level 2.'
 	elseif addictive_trait_lvl = 2:
 		'You have this trait at level 2.'
-		'Taking drugs has become something normal and that makes it even harder for you to refuse to take them.'
-		'To increase this trait you have to use 4 different types of drugs several times. At the moment you have <<addictive_exp>> out of 4 points towards level 3.'
+		'Taking drugs has become something normal, and that makes it even harder for you to refuse to take them.'
+		'To increase this trait, you have to use 4 different types of drugs several times. At the moment, you have <<addictive_exp>> out of 4 points towards level 3.'
 	elseif addictive_trait_lvl = 3:
 		'You have this trait at level 3.'
-		'Taking drugs is a normal part of your life which makes it difficult for you to refuse to take them.'
+		'Taking drugs is a normal part of your life, which makes it difficult for you to refuse to take them.'
 		'This is the highest level of this trait.'
 	end
 	
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 	'<center><b>Cumeater</b></center>'
 	if trt_cumeater = 0 and cumeater_cheat = 0:
 		'You do not have this trait.'
-		'To gain this trait you must swallow cum 10 times.'
+		'To gain this trait, you must swallow cum 10 times.'
 		'You have swallowed cum <<swallow>> times.'
 	elseif trt_cumeater = 0 and cumeater_cheat = 1:
 		'You do not have this trait.'
@@ -127,10 +127,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'menu':
 	
 	if traits['alko_status'] = -1:
 		'<center><b>Lightweight</b></center>'
-		'It doesn''t take much for you to get drunk. You don''t have to drink as much to feel the affects of alcohol.'
+		'It doesn''t take much for you to get drunk. You don''t have to drink as much to feel the effects of alcohol.'
 	elseif traits['alko_status'] = 1:
 		'<center><b>Heavyweight</b></center>'
-		'You''ve built up a tolerance, making it harder for you to feel the affects of alcohol.'
+		'You''ve built up a tolerance, making it harder for you to feel the effects of alcohol.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Exit the menu': gt $loc, $loc_arg