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      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

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locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1004,7 +1004,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 			'Jumping jacks is a surprisingly good workout. You do very well and beat most of your classmates. While you never win any of the competitions, you don''t embarrass yourself either. You''re tired by the time you''re done. You have no doubt why the boys are watching - you can feel your breasts bouncing with every jump, despite the help of the sports bra.'
 		else
 			grupvalue[2] += 2
-			'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how many jumping jacks you can do. You manage to go the longest in a few of the rounds and could actually go for quite a bit longer, but notice that the longer the class goes on, the more boys have found their way over to watch you. Some of the girls you were competing with make snide remarks about just which particular parts of you they are so keen on watching.'
+			'The other girls in your group are surprised at just how many jumping jacks you can do. You manage to go the longest in a few of the rounds and could actually go for quite a bit longer. However, you notice that the longer the class goes on, the more boys walk over to watch you. Some of the girls you were competing with make snide remarks about just which particular parts of you they are so keen on watching.'
 		end
 		gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'fiz_rand'
 		act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jumping_jacks':
 			'You''re barely able to do more than a few before you''re too tired to continue. You did the fewest in your class and most of the jocks snicker or make snide remarks. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a few more tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. "Come on already! We want to see them bounce!" Vasily shouts.'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 40:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/jumpr.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You do about average among the girls before you stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Vasily shouts, "Come on, get those titties bouncing!" Dan shouts.'
+			'You do about average among the girls before stopping. The teacher wants to make sure you get enough exercise though, so you''re made to give it a couple of tries. There''s outright jeering from some of the boys whenever you screw up. Vasily starts shouting "Come on, get those titties bouncing!"'
 		elseif pcs_vital <= 60:
 			grupvalue[2] += 1
 			'Jumping jacks is a complete misery. You can''t manage it for very long; although your coordination and endurance are there, the pain from your breasts slapping around builds up fast, despite the help of the sports bra. The girls you''re competing with are sympathetic at first, but that slowly changes as some of the boys wander over to cheer you on. It''s completely apparent what their eyes are focused on each time a round begins.'