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locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'Albina leads you to the rather well furnished and decorated sitting room. "You''ll have to excuse the mess. The maid was... loyal to my father, so she had to go." She then disappears into the kitchen. While she is gone, her phone vibrates on the table. You look and see that "Mama" is trying to call her.'
 	'<i>Strange. She''s never mentioned her mother. Hell, she barely talks about her father,</i> you think to yourself.'
-	'The phone rings out as Albina returns with a bottle of wine and two glasses. She places them on the table and notices her missed call. Quickly picking up her phone up, she types a message before stuffing it in her pocket.'
+	'The phone rings out as Albina returns with a bottle of wine and two glasses. She places them on the table and notices her missed call. She quickly picks her phone up and types a message before stuffing it in her pocket.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 15
@@ -180,7 +180,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 		npc_rel['A23'] += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
-!!		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. It swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but you go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 		'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 		'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
@@ -287,7 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 			act 'Continue':gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		end
 		
-		act'Join her in the tub':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
+		act 'Join her in the tub':gt 'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Hesitantly join her':
@@ -309,8 +308,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 			'Before you can finish, Albina shoves you from behind. The shocking cold goes right through you and you feel like you''ve just been turned into a block of ice. As your head breaks through the water, Albina leaps over, splashing into the pool behind you and sending another freezing wave to wash over your head. She comes up looking just as cold as you but wearing the biggest grin you''ve ever seen on her before.'
 			*nl
 			'"You bitch!" you shriek. Albina just keeps grinning at you and swims over to the side.'
-			'"Come on!" she says with chattering teeth. "Get out before you get frostbite and jump in the hot tub with me!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throw yourselves over the side.'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
+			'"Come on!" she says with chattering teeth. "Get out before you get frostbite and jump in the hot tub with me!" The two of you swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throw yourselves over the side.'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 		end
 		act 'Jump in with her':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -319,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 			'With a running start and a scream, the two of you leap into the water together. The immediate shock of ice cold sends shivers through your whole body. "Fuck!" you gasp. "Why did I let you talk me into this?!"'
 			*nl
 			'Albina just grins at you and quickly swims over to the side, hauling herself up, clearly trembling in the cold. "Come on!" she says with chattering teeth. "Hurry up before you get frostbite!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throw yourselves over the side.'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -333,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		'"Waiting on you now!" you call over your shoulder before leaping into the pool. The immediate shock of the icy cold sends shivers through your whole body and you gasp as your head breaches the surface, just in time to see Albina jump over you and into the water behind. "<i>Ohmygod!</i>" you manage to chatter out, shivering tremendously but unable to stop yourself from smiling at Albina when she comes up for air.'
 		*nl
 		'"Now into the hot tub! Hurry!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and pull yourselves over the side.'
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -404,9 +403,9 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 	if rand(0,1) = 1:
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_invite'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_invite'
 	else
-		act'Continue':
+		act 'Continue':
 			minut +=6
 			gs 'stat'
 			cla & *clr
@@ -419,7 +418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 				cla & *nl
 				'You turn down her offer and she looks a little disappointed, but she directs you to the bathroom anyway.'
 				'"Use whatever you want in there. There''s towels in the cupboard," she says before disappearing into her bedroom. You walk down to the bathroom, enter and place your clothes in a neat pile. You turn the shower on and lock the door as you wait for the water. When it''s the right temperature, you step in and start washing yourself.'
-				act'Shower':
+				act 'Shower':
 					cla & *clr
 					shampoo += 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -437,14 +436,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 				end
 			end
 			
-			act'Agree':
+			act 'Agree':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Sure," you say, returning her smile. "Why not?" Her smile turns into a grin and she grabs your hand, pulling you through her bedroom and into the bathroom.'
 				*nl
 				'Once inside, she releases you, bending over to turn on the water. She seems to be a little far away, needing to stretch to reach it. You can see all of the muscles in her toned legs go taut and her posture gives you a great view of both her holes. She hesitates just before turning the tap, glancing back at you, and you realize she''s doing this on purpose. Shit. What are you getting yourself into here?'
 
-				act'Continue':
+				act 'Continue':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
 					'Albina turns the faucet and steaming water immediately comes rushing out. She must pay a lot of money to have such good plumbing. As the tub begins to fill, you see her grab various bottles, squeezing a small squirt of liquid from each into the tumbling waterfall. They don''t seem to change the color of the water or add any bubbles, but a sharp aromatic scent immediately spreads through the room. She also grabs a few handfuls of salt, sprinkling them generously into the tub.'
@@ -453,7 +452,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 					*nl
 					'Unable to resist her teasing, you smile and climb into the bath beside her.'
 
-					act'Continue':
+					act 'Continue':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/1.jpg"></center>'
 						'Albina doesn''t waste anytime and immediately soaps up her breasts before getting up on her knees and using a loofah to squeeze soapy water over her shapely ass. She then stands, bends over and spanks herself before wiggling her ass at you, giving you a clear invitation. She spreads her legs to let you slide underneath her and start gently tracing your tongue along her labia before you reach her clit. You start vigoursly eating her pussy, causing her to moan loudly in pleasure as she pushes a few of her fingers into her asshole and starts fingering herself, adding to her pleasure.' 
@@ -464,8 +463,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
-							gs'arousal','vaginal_finger', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
-							gs'arousal','cuni', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
+							gs 'arousal','vaginal_finger', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
+							gs 'arousal','cuni', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -473,14 +472,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 							*nl
 							'Her face disappears into your crotch, causing you to gasp loudly in pleasured surprise when you suddenly feel her tongue piercing swirling over your clit. You place your hand on the back of her head and hold her down as you sit back and let her pleasure you, her tongue expertly running all over your labia and clit as she passionately eats your pussy. She''s <i>really</i> good at this and her piercing only adds to your pleasure. You don''t want her to stop and feel your orgasm building when she suddenly shoves her fingers back inside you and starts vigoursly fingerbanging you as she sucks on your clit. A few minutes of this is enough to send you over the edge and you scream loudly in pleasure as you have an explosive orgasm, smearing Albina''s face with your wetness.'
 							act 'Continue':
-								gs'arousal','kiss', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
-								gs'arousal','end'
+								gs 'arousal','kiss', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
 								gs 'stat'
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/3.jpg"></center>'
 								'When you finally stop cumming, she climbs up and sits next to you on the edge of the tub. You both start passionately making out and groping each other''s bodies as you sit in your post-climax bliss. After a few minutes of this, you both climb out of the tub and she pulls the plug before grabbing a towel and walking out to her room, leaving you to get dressed.'
 								*nl
-								'You grab yourself a towel and dry off before getting dressed. When you walk into Albina''s room, you are greeted by the sight of her wearing only a lacy white thong as she dries her hair. "Just give me a few seconds to get dressed and we can do something, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+								'You grab yourself a towel and dry off before getting dressed. When you walk into Albina''s room, you''re greeted by the sight of her wearing only a lacy white thong as she dries her hair. "Just give me a few seconds to get dressed and we can do something, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 								*nl
 								'She finishes drying her hair and pulls on a skimpy tank top before leading you out the door. "My favourite show is about to start. I think you''ll like it."'
 								
@@ -519,9 +518,9 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 	if $pantyworntype = 'none':
-		act'Strip down':gt'albina_house_events','hot_tub_no_panties'
+		act 'Strip down':gt 'albina_house_events','hot_tub_no_panties'
 	else
-		act'Get in':
+		act 'Get in':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/hottub.jpg"></center>'
 			'You smile and peel off the rest of your clothes until you''re left in just your panties and climb in across from her as she closes her eyes, leaning back and relaxing. "This is the fucking life, am I right?" You murmur in agreement and you both spend quite a bit of time in the tub relaxing and chatting away.'
@@ -546,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 					'You both turn in shock and see Zoya standing there, shaking her head as she throws some towels at you. "Well next time, can you bring the towels with you <i>before</i> you get in? I don''t want you ruining the carpets by dripping water all over them." She walks back into the house and Albina rolls her eyes, climbs out and dries herself off before wrapping herself back in her robe.'
 					*nl
 					'"Mama will have a fit if you go in there naked, so you better get dressed," she warns as she passes you a towel. "You''ll just have to make do without your panties for now."'
-					act'Get dressed':
+					act 'Get dressed':
 						cla & *clr
 						if month >= 11 or month <= 3:
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool.jpg"></center>'
@@ -597,7 +596,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 						'"Well I think you two have had enough. Time to get out." She walks back into the house and Albina rolls her eyes, but obeys, climbing out of the tub and walking over to the side where a stack of folded towels sit. You climb out after her and she tosses you one of the towels and the two of you dry off together.'
 						*nl
 						'"Mama will have a fit if you go in there naked, so you better get dressed," she warns as she passes you a towel.'
-						act'Get dressed':
+						act 'Get dressed':
 							cla & *clr
 							if month >= 11 or month <= 3:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool.jpg"></center>'
@@ -715,26 +714,26 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'goodie_two_shoes':
 	'A look of genuine surprise flashes across Albina''s face. Her eyebrows scrunch together and she begins to study you more closely.'
 	'"You know," she starts. "Before we became friends, I always thought you were a stuck up goodie two shoes. But you''re actually kind of a slut aren''t you?"'
-	act'Offended':
+	act 'Offended':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Look who''s talking, bitch," you scowl at Albina, making her laugh out loud.'
 		gs 'albina_house_events', 'hot_tub_no_panties2'
 	end
 	if trait['commando_lvl'] > 0:
 		albina['goodie_two_shoes_commando'] = 1
-		act'Guess you didn''t know me':
+		act 'Guess you didn''t know me':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Guess you didn''t know me so well back then," you shrug, smiling.'
 			gs 'albina_house_events', 'hot_tub_no_panties2'
 		end
 		
-		act'Rebellious phase':
+		act 'Rebellious phase':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I''m going through my rebellious phase right now," you grin mischeviously.'
 			gs 'albina_house_events', 'hot_tub_no_panties2'
 		end
 	else
-		act'Protest':
+		act 'Protest':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I''m not-" you stammer, blush deepening. "I told you, I just-"'
 			'"Forgot?" Albina laughs. "Not even I ''forget'' to wear panties <<$pcs_nickname>>. Only a slut would forget."'
@@ -1035,7 +1034,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alb_yoga_1':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src=locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albyoga.jpg"></center>'
 	'The maid answers the door and lets you enter. "Miss Albina is in the gym," she says before leading you there. You find Albina doing yoga by herself. She smiles when she sees you before raising a finger, telling you to wait. The maid bows and leaves as you sit and watch Albina finish her routine.' 
-	'You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility... I invited Lazar over one time to work out together and he loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns.' 
+	'You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility... Lazar came over one time and loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns.' 
 	'"Anyway, I showed him more of my flexibility by sucking and fucking his dick in positions he could never have imagined," she says with a sly grin. A few seconds later, she finishes her routine and you follow her upstairs to her room.'  
 
 	act 'Go with her':

locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

@@ -88,9 +88,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 	act 'Keep watching':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/alblaz2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You keep watching as she pulls his dick out of her mouth with a loud slurp, ropes of her saliva covering his shaft as she gasps for air. "I love... sucking your dick. It tastes... so good! But I really... want you to... give it to me!"' 
+		'You keep watching as she pulls his dick out of her mouth with a loud slurp, ropes of her saliva covering his shaft as she gasps for air.' 
 		'She grins up at him before standing and wiggling out of her thong. She then climbs onto the bed and gets on her back before leaning her head over the edge. You push the door open just a little more so you can see all the action.' 
-		'Albina opens her mouth wide and Lazar steps in and shoves his cock down her throat, causing her to gag before he starts face fucking her. He''s somewhat rough, yet Albina seems to be enjoying it. Despite gagging and choking, she vigoursly rubs her clit and fingers herself as he slams his cock in and out of her throat.'
+		'Albina smiles and beckons Lazar over before opening her mouth wide. Lazar steps in and shoves his cock down her throat, causing her to gag before he starts face fucking her. He''s somewhat rough, yet Albina seems to be enjoying it. Despite gagging and choking, she vigoursly rubs her clit as he slams his cock in and out of her throat.'
 		*nl
 		'Drool dribbles out of her mouth and runs down her face, getting in her hair as he continues face fucking her. He only stops when it looks like Albina is about to pass out. He pulls out and she splutters a large amount of drool down her face as she gasps for air.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 		act 'Keep watching':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/alblaz3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see a glimpse of an aroused smile on Albina''s face as she wipes her face and slowly jerks his drool coated cock in her hands. "Okay, enough foreplay. I need this thing inside me <i>now</i>." All Lazar can do is grin as Albina sucks on her fingers, getting a taste of her now wet pussy.' 
+			'You see a glimpse of an aroused smile on Albina''s face as she wipes her face and slowly jerks his drool coated cock in her hands. "Okay, enough foreplay. I need this thing inside me <i>now</i>."' 
 			'He climbs on the bed and gets on his back as Albina crawls over to him. She straddles him and guides his cock into her slit before slowly lowering herself down, taking his full length into her pussy. She slowly rides him before he grabs her hips and starts slamming her up and down on his dick as they both grunt and moan in pleasure.' 
 			'"Fuck, your pussy is so damn tight!" he grunts and lets go of her. She giggles and starts riding him harder, her bubble butt loudly slapping against his thighs as she lets his hands roam all over her curvy body.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 						act 'Get your ass fucked':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/alblaz6.jpg"></center>'
-							'You stare at the size of Lazar''s dick and bite your lip. "Yeah, I want you in my ass, now." you say teasingly and bend over on all fours, giving him a good wiggle of your ass. You look back and see Albina squirting a good amount of lube onto her fingers and gasp when you feel the cold liquid touch your asshole as she starts rubbing it in. You moan softly when two of her fingers slide into you and she slowly fingers you, stretching you out for Lazar''s dick.'
+							'You stare at the size of Lazar''s dick and bite your lip. "Yeah, I want you in my ass <i>now</i>," you say teasingly and bend over on all fours, giving him a good wiggle of your ass. You look back and see Albina squirting a good amount of lube onto her fingers and gasp when you feel the cold liquid touch your asshole as she starts rubbing it in. You moan softly when two of her fingers slide into you and she slowly fingers you, stretching you out for Lazar''s dick.'
 							anal_slip = 8
 							'Once she thinks you''re ready, she pulls her fingers out and you feel the tip of Lazar''s dick pressing against your hole.'
 							'You relax, and thanks to the lube, his dick easily pushes into your ass, causing you to groan a little as it does. He goes slow at first to let you adjust, but as you moan louder in pleasure, he starts picking up the pace and is soon pounding your backdoor, his hips slapping off your ass with every thrust.'