locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_talk1':
 				act 'I didn''t want people to know':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I just didn''t want to spread it around," you say, rubbing your arm. "Word gets around town fast, you know? Could you imagine what my mother would say if she found out?"'
-					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, looking at you seriously. "I''ve kept a lot worse secrets than this over the years. I would''ve kept this one. Don''t you trust me?"'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, looking at you seriously. "I''ve kept secrets a lot worse than this over the years. I would''ve kept this one. Don''t you trust me?"'
 					'Albina looks away from you, seeming genuinely offended that you didn''t tell her until now.'
 					gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 				end
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_talk_shy2':
 			'"Oh, I am <i>so</i> going to schlick off to naked pictures of you later," she grins.'
 			'"You are not!" you gasp, mouth open wide.'
 			*nl
-			'You start beating her with her own pillow and Albina cackles maniacally the whole time.'
+			'You start beating her with a pillow as she cackles maniacally the whole time.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
@@ -205,9 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model_talk_shy3':
 		'"Then why are you so embarrassed about this?" Albina laughs out loud. "You got what you asked for didn''t you?"'
 		'"It''s embarrassing to tell people I actually know!" you protest. "It''s different when <i>you</i> know!"'
 		'"Well, get used to it," she says, leaning back. "If you get famous off this, everyone you talk to will have seen your tits. Do you go full frontal too?"'
-		'"Stop it!" you say, blushing even harder, pushing her backwards as if it will make her stop.'
-		*nl
-		'But she doesn''t stop and you have to endure Albina''s teasing for several minutes longer.'
+		'"Stop it!" you say, blushing even harder as you push push her backwards, but she doesn''t stop and you have to endure her teasing for several minutes longer.'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -417,8 +415,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk1':
 				else
 					'"You are! It''s sex for money! You just don''t-"'
 				end
-				'"Albina," you say again, firmly. "This <i>isn''t</i> Starlets. I''m not being forced into this. I''m shooting porn because I want to. Nobody else gets to take credit for it. This is <i>my</i> choice. And I need you to be okay with that."'
-				'"I..." She turns to face you, eyes shimmering. "I don''t know if I can be..."'
+				'"Albina," you say again, firmly. "This <i>isn''t</i> the Starlets. I''m not being forced into this. I''m shooting porn because I want to. Nobody else gets to take credit for it. This is <i>my</i> choice. And I need you to be okay with that."'
+				'"I..." She turns to face you, eyes shimmering. "I don''t know if I can..."'
 				*nl
 				'. . .'
 				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'

locations/albina_mother_events.qsrc

@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 	minut += 2
 	gs'stat'
-	'You walk up the long driveway to Albina''s house, reaching it a couple of minutes later. Upon knocking on the door, it''s opened by the maid. "Hello. Miss Albina and Ms. Zoya are sunbathing by the pool. If you''d like to come this way..." She leads you through the house out through the back door.'
+	'You walk up the long driveway to Albina''s house, reaching it a few minutes later. Upon knocking on the door, it''s opened by the maid. "Hello. Miss Albina and Ms. Zoya are sunbathing by the pool. If you''d like to come this way..." She leads you through the house and out through the back door.'
 	minut += 6
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/sunbathing.jpg"></center>'
 		'Stepping out onto the deck of the pool, you find Albina and her mother just as the maid told you. Zoya is drifting around the pool on a floatie while Albina is laying on her stomach on one of the lounge chairs with some earbuds in, listening to some music. They are both topless, their bodies glistening in the sun from what you assume is tanning lotion.'
-		'"Miss Albina, you have a guest," the maid says, performing a small curtsy before leaving to head back inside. Albina pulls out her earbuds, looking over her shoulder.'
+		'"Miss Albina, you have a guest," the maid says, performing a small curtsy before leaving to head back inside. Albina pulls out her earbuds while looking over her shoulder.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 		'"It''s about time to get out of the sun anyways Albina," Zoya calls over from the pool. "Tans, not skin cancer."'
 		'"Yes Mama," she says, getting up from her chair. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go."'
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 				'"No thanks. But I wouldn''t mind talking while you do."'
 				'"Suit yourself," she shrugs. Albina heads into her personal bathroom, leaving the door open for you to follow her in. You sit down on the edge of her bath while she steps into the shower.'
 				'"So you and your mother sunbathe together?"'
-				'"When we can," her voice echos back off the glass and tile. "Sometimes I''m busy, sometimes she''s busy. I wish she''d let me go full nude to avoid pantylines, but topless is the most she lets me get away with. Says I shouldn''t be worrying about those kinds of tanlines anyways. I sneak in a few nude sessions when she''s not home though." she adds with a small laugh.'
+				'"When we can," her voice echos back off the glass and tile. "Sometimes I''m busy, sometimes she''s busy. I wish she''d let me go full nude to avoid pantylines, but topless is the most she lets me get away with. Says I shouldn''t be worrying about those kinds of tanlines anyways. I sneak in a few nude sessions when she''s not home though," she adds with a small laugh.'
 				if motherKnowWhore > 0:
 					'"Pff. Better than my mother. Ever since she found out I''ve been having sex, she doesn''t even call me by my name anymore. Usually just ''whore'' or ''slut''. It fucking blows."'
 					'The tap squeaks off and Albina steps out of the shower, grabbing a towel to dry herself off.'
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 					'"Mama always leaves condoms out for me even though I''m on the pill," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I always thought it was a little overbearing, but I guess your mother''s probably a lot worse huh?" You follow her into her room to continue chatting while she gets dressed.'
 				elseif motherKnowDildo > 0:
 					'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She keeps scolding me about leaving my dildos lying around the house. A girl has needs, you know?"'
-					'"Ugh, I know exactly what you mean," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I love Mama, but I wish she wasn''t so uptight about where I leave my toys. Always saying, ''What if a guest comes over and sees that laying around?'' or ''What if they catch you in your underwear?'' As if we have any guests these days other than my friends. Besides, isn''t this what we have a maid for? Cleaning stuff up?" She heads into her room and you follow behind, sitting down on her bed and continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
+					'"Ugh, I know exactly what you mean," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I love Mama, but I wish she wasn''t so uptight about where I leave my toys. Always saying, ''What if a guest comes over and sees that laying around?'' or ''What if they catch you in your underwear?'' As if we have any guests these days other than my friends. Besides, isn''t this what we have a maid for? Cleaning stuff up?" She heads into her room and you follow behind, sitting on her bed and continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
 				else
 					if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 						'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She still makes me see the gyno every month just to confirm I''m still a virgin."'
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 						'"I know right?!"'
 						'"Maybe you should lose it," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing her towel. "Just to stick it to her, you know?"'
 						'"I don''t know... Maybe..."'
-						'You follow her into her room and sit down on her bed, continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
+						'You follow her into her room and sit on her bed, continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
 					end
 				end
 
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 		cla & *nl
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'"That''s okay, I''ll just wait down here until you''re done."'
-		'"Whatever. Suit yourself I guess." She swaggers up the stairs while you sit down on her couch and pull out your phone to pass the time. About ten minutes later, Albina comes back down with damp hair and a new outfit.'
+		'"Whatever. Suit yourself I guess." She swaggers up the stairs while you sit on her couch and pull out your phone to pass the time. About ten minutes later, Albina comes back down with damp hair and a new outfit.'
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -280,11 +280,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 			act 'Finger her pussy':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/shower_finger1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You smile and move your hand back down between her legs. Being rather flexible, Albina lifts her leg straight up and places her foot against the shower wall, giving you better access to her pussy, which is dripping wet in anticipation. You slide two fingers inside her and start finger fucking her pussy as your thumb massages her clit. She moans loudly in pleasure as she leans against you to steady herself. A few minutes of this is enough to bring her to the edge and she starts moaning even louder. "Keep going <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m about to cum!" You finger her even faster and she lets out a pleasured shriek as her pussy starts squirting her juices over your arm. She steadies herself against you as she rides through the pleasure of her orgasm. You pull your fingers out of her and shove them in her mouth. She sucks on them before smiling at you.' 
+				'You smile and move your hand back down between her legs. Being rather flexible, Albina lifts her leg straight up and places her foot against the shower wall, giving you better access to her pussy, which is dripping wet in anticipation. You slide two fingers inside her and start finger fucking her pussy as your thumb massages her clit. She moans loudly in pleasure as she leans against you to steady herself. A few minutes of this is enough to bring her to the edge and she starts moaning even louder. "Don''t you dare stop <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m about to cum!" You finger her even faster and she lets out a pleasured shriek as her pussy starts squirting her juices over your arm. She steadies herself against you as she rides through the pleasure of her orgasm. You pull your fingers out of her and shove them in her mouth. She sucks on them before smiling at you.' 
 				'"Ohhh <<$pcs_nickname>>, that... that was amazing! Just let me finish up in here and I''ll be out." You nod and step out of the shower, grabbing one of the nearby towels and wrapping yourself in it before walking back into her bedroom.'
 				'As you dry off, you hear the water turn off and a naked Albina casually strolls into the room.'
 				'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favour." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
-
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -407,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peep2':
 				"Oh, uuhh... I was... just leaving the bathroom." you reply, awkwardly trying to hide the fact that you were peeping on her employer.
 				You awkwardly laugh and she seems even more confused. "I''m just... I''m fine. I promise."
 				The maid gives you an awkward stare, but Zoya walks out into the hallway before she can push you further.' 
-				'"Is everything okay out here Milena?" The maid silently nods and continues on her duties, giving you a disapproving glare as she enters Zoya''s bedroom. You avoid eye contact with Zoya as you hastily walk past her and return to Albina.'
+				'"Is everything okay out here, Milena?" The maid silently nods and continues on her duties, giving you a disapproving glare as she enters Zoya''s bedroom. You avoid eye contact with Zoya as you hastily walk past her and return to Albina.'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/zoyapeeping1.jpg"></center>'
 				'Before you can watch any further, you hear someone coming and run over to the bathroom, pretending to leave just as Albina arrives. She has an inquisitive look on her face.
@@ -416,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peep2':
 				Albina raises a brow. "You didn''t clog the toilet did you?"
 				You awkwardly laugh and she seems even more confused. "No! I''m just... I''m fine. I promise."
 				Albina gives you an awkward glare, but her mother walks out into the hallway before she can push you further.
-				"Is everything out here okay girls?" Albina silently nods and motions for you to follow her. You avoid eye contact with Zoya as you walk past her.'
+				"Is everything okay out here girls?" Albina silently nods and motions for you to follow her. You avoid eye contact with Zoya as you walk past her.'
 			end
 			
 			gs 'stat'

locations/albina_school_sex.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # albina_school_sex
 
-!! If AlbinaQW['Friend'] = 2 and npc_sex[A23] > 0 when the player tries speaking to Albina during break, then there is the random chance that they will get this event instead. This should only happen once or twice a week and be somwhat uncommon.
+!! If AlbinaQW['Friend'] = 2 and npc_sex['A23'] > 0 when the player tries speaking to Albina during break, then there is the random chance that they will get this event instead. This should only happen once or twice a week and be somwhat uncommon.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_1':
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 	*clr & cla
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/maekup.jpg"></center>'
-		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that." she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. She walks over to the mirror to touch up her makeup when her phone then pings with a text message and she suddenly takes off. "I''d love to return the favour <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I promised Vicky I would do something with her before our next class. I need to go, but I owe you one!" she says and winks at you before walking out the door with some sway in her hips. You clean up at the sink and prepare to leave yourself, feeling very horny and a little disappointed that you won''t get a release.' 
+		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. She walks over to the mirror to touch up her makeup when her phone pings with a text message and she suddenly takes off. "I''d love to return the favour <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I promised Vicky I would do something with her before our next class. I need to go, but I owe you one!" she says and winks at you before walking out the door with some sway in her hips. You clean up at the sink and prepare to leave yourself, feeling very horny and a little disappointed that you won''t get a release.' 
 		act 'Continue': 
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that." she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. A sly grin appears on her face as she pulls her phone out and looks at it. "We''ve got just enough time for me to return the favour." she says before pushing you down onto the toilet and kneeling in front of you.'
+		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. A sly grin appears on her face as she pulls her phone out and looks at it. "We''ve got just enough time for me to return the favour..." she says before pushing you down onto the toilet and kneeling in front of you.'
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			'She pushes your skirt up and is surprised at what she sees. "No panties <<$pcs_nickname>>? You are a naughty girl!" she says with a laugh before spreading your legs and burying her face in your crotch.'
 		else
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1':
 	act 'Refuse':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Not today Albina. I don''t feel like it." you tell her while shaking your head.'
+		'"Not today Albina. I don''t feel like it," you tell her while shaking your head.'
 		'She looks a little disappointed, but doesn''t press the matter any further. "In that case, just know that I''ll be sitting in class with a <i>very</i> wet pussy thinking about great you are at eating it." she whispers teasingly.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1_2':
 							'"Oh no no no! Lunch is almost over! I.. I need to go before Zinadia wonders where I am. I said I would discuss strategies for our game night with her after I finished studying."'
 							'You and Albina sit and watch in amusement as Julia frantically picks up her clothes and stumbles around pulling them on as quickly as she can before she picks up her scattered belongings from the floor, stuffs them into her bag and runs out of the room.'
 							'Once she''s gone, the two of you share a laugh at what just happened before you both get dressed yourselves.'
-							'"Well that certainly was fun. I suspected Julia had a thing for me, but I wasn''t expecting her to be so...enthusiastic." Albina says with a grin as she pulls her skirt back on. "The girl''s got some great tits and an amazing ass. Shame she hangs with those geeks." The bell rings as you finish dressing and you both head out to your next class.'
+							'"Well that certainly was fun. I suspected Julia had a thing for me, but I wasn''t expecting her to be so... enthusiastic..." Albina says with a grin as she pulls her skirt back on. "The girl''s got some great tits and an amazing ass. Shame she hangs with those geeks." The bell rings as you finish dressing and you both head out to your next class.'
 							act 'Continue': 
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_2':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/class3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh...oh. Wow. That was...fucking amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>. I really needed that." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour." She sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
+			'"Oh...oh wow. That was...fucking amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>. I really needed that," she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour." She sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
 			'Seeing this, she stops licking your pussy and stands up; you barely have time to ask what''s happening before she jams her fingers deep inside you and starts fingerbanging you. "That''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>, cum for me." she whispers teasingly in your ear before making out with you. You moan loudly into her mouth as she brings you to orgasm. You lie panting on the desk as she pulls her fingers out and sucks on them. "Mhmm. You taste really fucking good, you know that?" she says teasingly with a wink.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 6, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/albina_wine_event.qsrc

@@ -539,8 +539,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 					'"That you''re... flat...?"'
 					'Shockingly, Albina seems... <i>embarrassed?</i> Have you ever seen her embarrassed about anything before?'
 					gs'albina_wine_event','small_tits'
-		!!		elseif pcs_cupsize <= 10:
+				elseif pcs_cupsize <= 10:
 		!!			$titsize = 'A cup'
+					'"That your... boobs are... tiny...?"'
+					'Shockingly, Albina seems... <i>embarrassed?</i> Have you ever seen her embarrassed about anything before?'
 				else
 					'"That your... boobs are... small...?"'
 					'Shockingly, Albina seems... <i>embarrassed?</i> Have you ever seen her embarrassed about anything before?'
@@ -551,15 +553,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			else
 				if pcs_cupsize <= 20:
 		!!			$titsize = 'C cup'
-					'"I wish I had bigger tits," Albina sighs, staring longingly at your shapely breasts that hang above her.'
+					'"I wish I had bigger tits," Albina sighs while staring longingly at your shapely breasts that hang above her.'
 					gs'albina_wine_event','medium_tits'
 				elseif pcs_cupsize <= 30:
 		!!			$titsize = 'E cup'
-					'"Your tits are so fucking hot," Albina sighs, staring longingly at your large breasts that hang above her. "Why couldn''t I get boobs as big as yours? How did I get stuck with these?"'
+					'"Your tits are so fucking hot," Albina sighs while staring longingly at your large breasts that hang above her. "Why couldn''t I get boobs as big as yours? How did I get stuck with these?"'
 					gs'albina_wine_event','large_tits'
 				else
 		!!			$titsize = 'K cup'
-					'"Your tits are so fucking huge," Albina says, staring in wide eyed awe at your enormous breasts that hang above her. "How do you survive carrying those puppies around?"'
+					'"Your tits are so fucking huge," Albina says while staring in wide eyed awe at your enormous breasts that hang above her. "How do you survive carrying those puppies around?"'
 					gs'albina_wine_event','huge_tits'
 				end
 			end
@@ -629,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 				act 'I just forget sometimes':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"Not <i>never</i>," you slur. "I just...  forget to put them on sometimes..."'
-					'"Ha! Slut!" she shouts, taking another slurp of her wine.'
+					'"Ha! Slut!" she shouts before taking another slurp of her wine.'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
 				
@@ -675,7 +677,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 						'"Only when I''m wearing skirts," you say. "My pussy gets itchy when it rubs against my pants."'
 						'"So you''re saying you just like potentially getting caught."'
 						'"No! That''s not what I sai-"'
-						'"Yeah yeah, whatever you say," Albina says, slurping up another gulp of wine. "Skirts only? Someone wants to show off the goods."'
+						'"Yeah yeah, whatever you say," Albina says before slurping up another gulp of wine. "Skirts only? Someone wants to show off the goods."'
 						'"Bitch," you growl.'
 						'"Slut," she grins back.'
 						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
@@ -685,7 +687,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 				act 'It was just that one time':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"It was just that one time!" you protest loudly.'
-					'"Ahuh," she smirks, taking another sip. "Yeah. <i>Suuuuure.</i>"'
+					'"Ahuh," she smirks before taking another sip. "Yeah. <i>Suuuuure.</i>"'
 					'"One time... You forget your panties <i>one</i> time..." you grumble. "And you never get to live it down."'
 					'"Only sluts forget to wear panties <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					'"Shut up!"'
@@ -714,7 +716,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 				'"What the fuck is that supposed to mean?"'
 				'"You''d rip the balls off the first guy who called you a slut," you say matter of factly. "You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
 				'"... fuck."'
-				'"See? Bitchy," you smile, smuggly sipping your wine.'
+				'"See? Bitchy," you smile, smugly sipping your wine.'
 				'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back, taking a much bigger gulp.'
 				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
@@ -728,14 +730,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk_blur.jpg"></center>'
 		'Your vision begins to fuzz and you tilt your head back, slumping against the back of the couch.'
 		'<i>I''ll just rest my eyes...</i> you think to yourself. <i>For... just a...</i>'
-		act 'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','end'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','end'
 	end
 	act 'Call her a butt slut':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"You''re such a butt slut Albina," you remark, taking another sip from your glass.'
 		'"Fuck yeah, I am. And I <i>love</i> being one," she grins back, almost spilling her wine all over her face when you both cackle with uncontrollable laughter.'
-		act 'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Spit or swallow?':
@@ -749,14 +751,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 			'"What the fuck else am I supposed do?" she asks, sounding confused.'
 			'"Just spit it out!"'
 			'"The fuck are you talking about?" Albina says, giving you a look like you just said one plus one equals five. "If he cums in your mouth, you swallow."'
-			act 'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 		end
 		
 		act 'Me too':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Me too," you mumble. "Spitting is quitting."'
 			'"Damn straight," Albina says, throwing up her hand and high fiving you.'
-			act 'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 		end
 		if trait['cumeater'] > 0:
 			act 'I love the taste':
@@ -767,7 +769,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 				'"No! It fuckin'' tastes like shit!"'
 				'"Then why do you do it?"'
 				'"Cuz you''re supposed to? If he cums in my mouth, I can''t spit it out," she says, looking genuinely confused that you''re suggesting there''s a choice.'
-				act 'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+				act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -779,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 		*nl
 		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you blurt out. Your mouth autocompleted your thought before it actually passed through your brain and you freeze in panic.'
 		'"Fucking shit, I <i>know!</i>" Albina whines beneath you. "I got ass for days, but she''s gots tits to match. Big fucking bootyful bouncy tits that give her cleavage in a motherfucking t-shirt. <i>And</i> a great ass! Life is so un-fucking-fair!"'
-		act 'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Why do you like it rough?':
@@ -802,13 +804,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 				'You nod appreciatively.'
 			end
 			'"And after months of this, I couldn''t take it anymore. I was tired of the pain, tired of crying into the sheets, tired of feeling sore and used. So... I made myself learn to like it." Tears glimmer in her eyes. "I thought, ''If I can''t make it stop, maybe I can at least take away the pain.'' And it worked. I started to feel good. I started <i>anticipating</i> it. I got wet when they ripped off my panties. I moaned when they spanked me. My nipples stiffened when they grabbed my hair."'
-			act'Keep listening':
+			act 'Keep listening':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Eventually, I stopped being so... ''busy,'' and there was a boy who was really nice to me, and he wanted to do things with me and I wanted to do things with him, he made me feel happy when we were together. So I let him fuck me. But I couldn''t feel it. He was kind and gentle and he was asking me if I was okay the whole time but... I just couldn''t feel <i>anything</i>."'
 				'Albina wipes her eyes, voice hardening.'
 				'"So, there you have it. That''s why I like it rough. Because I''m a slut who gave her first orgasms to the men who raped her for years. Because I''m a freak who can''t be loved. That''s just who I am now."'
-				act'Comfort her':
+				act 'Comfort her':
 					minut += 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					cla & *clr
@@ -816,11 +818,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 					'Despite her supposed acceptance, it''s easy to tell that Albina is trying to be stoic, covering up for the still-open wounds inside her. Taking her head in your arm, you pull her close against your chest. She stiffens at your touch, but slowly loosens up, closing her eyes and nuzzling her face into your breasts. The two of you sit like that for a few minutes and when you finally release her, a real smile is spread across her face.'
 					*nl
 					'No further words are necessary between you.'
-					act 'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+					act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 				end
 				
-!!{				if npc_sex['A23'] = 1:
-					act'Even by me?':
+				if npc_sex['A23'] >= 1:
+					act 'Even by me?':
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						cla & *clr
@@ -829,9 +831,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 						'You stare into her eyes tenderly and see years of hurt and pain welling up inside them, but also a glimmer of hope staring back at you.'
 						*nl
 						'Albina doesn''t say anything, but her breathing grows heavy and hot against your skin. Her thighs rub together and you can see she''s already soaking wet.'
-						act 'Kiss her':gt'albina_wine_event','kiss1'
+						act 'Kiss her':gt 'albina_wine_event','kiss1'
 					end
-				end}
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -888,7 +890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbate_answer2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Something like what you do," you say. "I like taking my dildo up the ass too."'
-			'"Isn''t it the best?" Albina nods vigorously, rubbing her thighs together.'
+			'"Isn''t it the best?" Albina nods vigorously while rubbing her thighs together.'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 	end
@@ -899,7 +901,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
 		cla & *nl
 		'You hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
 		'"I''s sho itchy," you mumble around the glass.'
-		'"<i>Right?!</i>" she says, sitting up and to look at you with wide exhasperated eyes before laying her head back down on your lap.'
+		'"<i>Right?!</i>" she says, sitting up to look at you with wide exhasperated eyes before laying her head back down on your lap.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
@@ -944,7 +946,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer2':
 	
 	act 'I was in a rush':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I was running late for something," you say, shrugging. "I''ll take care of it later." you mumble before taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		'"I was running late for something," you say, shrugging. "I''ll take care of it later," you mumble before taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
@@ -1009,55 +1011,55 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'small_tits':
 	if pcs_cupsize <= 5:
-		act'I love being flat':
+		act 'I love being flat':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Are you kidding me? I love being flat!" She looks back at you completely bewildered.'
-			'"You''re not serious."'
-			act'I think it suits me':
+			'"Are you kidding me? I love being flat!" you reply.' 
+			'She looks back at you completely bewildered. "You''re not being serious!"'
+			act 'I think it suits me':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I think I look good like this," you say, looking down and smiling at your barren chest. "I can''t imagine what it would be like to have boobs, even small ones."'
 				'"No way!" Albina says, shaking her head. "I don''t believe you! It has to bother you on some level! I''m not even as small as you and I still get jealous as <i>fuck</i> whenever I catch a glimpse of nerdy Natasha''s tits!"'
-				act'I don''t care':
+				act 'I don''t care':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I don''t care," you shrug, taking a sip of wine. "They''re her tits. I''m happy with mine."'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 			end
 			
-			act'No bras':
+			act 'No bras':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I never have to wear a bra," you sigh blissfully. "No sweat rashes, no strap lines, I can just throw on a shirt and go out whenever I feel like it and I don''t have to worry!"'
 				'"But don''t you ever feel... lacking?" Albina mumbles, groping herself self-consciously. "Guys like big boobs..."'
-				act'I don''t care':
+				act 'I don''t care':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I don''t care," you shrug, taking a sip of wine. "As long as I don''t have to wear a bra, I''m fine with being flat."'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				act'Worth it':
+				act 'Worth it':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"A small price to pay," you shrug, taking a sip of wine. "As long as I don''t have to wear a bra, I''m fine with being flat."'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 			end
 			
-			act'No back pain':
+			act 'No back pain':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"No back pain," you sigh blissfully. "No bounce pain when I go running, no need for sports bras, it''s the best! What''s not to love?"'
-				'"Well... Guys like big boobs," Albina mumbles, groping herself self-consciously. "Doesn''t that bother you?"'
-				act'I''m happy like this':
+				'"Well... Guys like big boobs," Albina mumbles while self-consciously groping herself. "Doesn''t that bother you?"'
+				act 'I''m happy like this':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I''m happy like this," you shrug, taking another sip of wine.'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 			end
 			
-			act'Sleeping on my stomach':
+			act 'Sleeping on my stomach':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I love sleeping on my stomach," you smirk. "Even my sister complains her boobs are always sore when she wakes up. But not me!"'
@@ -1066,57 +1068,57 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_tits':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif pcs_cupsize <= 10:
-		act'I love having small boobs':
+		act 'I love having small boobs':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Are you kidding me? I love having small boobs!" She looks back at you completely bewildered.'
-			'"You''re not serious."'
-			act'They''re perky and cute':
+			'"Are you kidding me? I love having small boobs!" you reply.' 
+			'She looks back at you completely bewildered. "You''re not serious!"'
+			act 'They''re perky and cute':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I like how perky they are," you say, looking down and smiling at your modest chest. "I think they make me look cute."'
 				'"No way!" Albina says, shaking her head. "I don''t believe you! It has to bother you on some level! I''m not even as small as you and I still get jealous as <i>fuck</i> whenever I catch a glimpse of nerdy Natasha''s tits!"'
-				act'I don''t care':
+				act 'I don''t care':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I don''t care," you shrug, taking a sip of wine. "They''re her tits. I''m happy with mine."'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 			end
 			
-			act'No bras':
+			act 'No bras':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I never have to wear a bra," you sigh blissfully. "No sweat rashes, no strap lines, I can just throw on a shirt and go out whenever I feel like it and I don''t have to worry!"'
 				'"But don''t you ever feel... lacking?" Albina mumbles, groping herself self-consciously. "Guys like big boobs..."'
-				act'I don''t care':
+				act 'I don''t care':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I don''t care," you shrug, taking a sip of wine. "As long as I don''t have to wear a bra, I''m fine with being small."'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				act'Worth it':
+				act 'Worth it':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"A small price to pay," you shrug, taking a sip of wine. "As long as I don''t have to wear a bra, I''m fine with being small."'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 			end
 			
-			act'No back pain':
+			act 'No back pain':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"No back pain," you sigh blissfully. "No bounce pain when I go running, no need for sports bras, but still round enough to look feminine. It''s the best! What''s not to love?"'
-				'"Well... Guys like big boobs," Albina mumbles, groping herself self-consciously. "Doesn''t that bother you?"'
-				act'I''m happy like this':
+				'"Well... Guys like big boobs," Albina mumbles while self-consciously groping herself. "Doesn''t that bother you?"'
+				act 'I''m happy like this':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I''m happy like this," you shrug, taking another sip of wine.'
 					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'It bothers me a little':
+	act 'It bothers me a little':
 		cla & *nl
 		if pcs_cupsize <= 5:
 			'"I guess it bothers me a little," you say, frowning in displeasure as you look down at your flat chest. "It would be nice to have at least a <i>little</i> bounce in my boobs. Why? Does it bother <i>you</i>?"'
@@ -1125,17 +1127,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_tits':
 		end
 		'"Y-yeah," she stammers, a furious blush spreading through her cheeks. "Whenever I look at the other girls in our class, I get jealous. It''s bad enough that I have to hang out with Irina and Bella, but even nerdy Natasha has bigger tits than me. It drives me crazy!"'
 		
-		act'Me too':
+		act 'Me too':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Me too," you pout. Albina starts shouting into the ceiling from your lap.'
 			'"It''s not fucking fair! Why did all the other girls get bigger boobs? Why not us?!"'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 	end
 	
-	act'It bothers me a lot':
+	act 'It bothers me a lot':
 		cla & *nl
 		if pcs_cupsize <= 5:
 			'"Of course it bothers me," you say uncomfortably, looking down at your flat chest. "I''m flatter than drywall, Albina. Guys like big boobs, things they can grab and play with. At the least, they want a view. I can''t even give them that. I''m practically a boy!"'
@@ -1146,109 +1148,115 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_tits':
 		end
 		'"It''s the worst when I''m with Irina and Bella," she mumbles, a furious blush spreading through her cheeks. "But even nerdy Natasha has bigger tits than us. It drives me crazy!"'
 		
-		act'Me too':
+		act 'Me too':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Me too," you pout. Albina starts shouting into the ceiling from your lap.'
 			'"It''s not fucking fair! Why did all the other girls get bigger boobs? Why not us?!"'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 	end
 	
-!!{	act'Does it really bother you that much?':
+	act 'Does it really bother you that much?':
 		cla & *nl
-		if pcs_cupsize <= 5:
-			'"Does it really bother you that much?" you ask, your brow scrunched with incomprehension. '
+		if pcs_cupsize >= 5:
+			'"Does it really bother you that much?" you ask, your brow scrunched with incomprehension.'
+			'"Yes! How can being flatchested <i>not</i> bother you?! Don''t you get jealous of the boys always checking out Bella and Irina? I want big tits like them!" she pouts with a loud tantrum.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'like_your_boobs'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'mom_boobs'
 		elseif pcs_cupsize <= 10:
-			
+			'"Does it really bother you that much?" you ask, your brow scrunched with incomprehension.'
+			'"Yes! How can having such small tits <i>not</i> bother you?! Don''t you get jealous of the boys always checking out Bella and Irina? I want big tits like them!" she pouts with a loud tantrum.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'like_your_boobs'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'mom_boobs'
 		end
-	end}
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'medium_tits':
-	gs'albina_wine_event','like_your_boobs'
+	gs 'albina_wine_event','like_your_boobs'
 	
-	act'Me too':
+	act 'Me too':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Me too," you sigh in return. "I get so jealous of the girls in our class who have big boobs."'
 		'"It''s not fair!" she moans. "I want big tits! I want them! I want them! I want them!"'
-		gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 	end
 	
-	act'I wish I were smaller':
+	act 'I wish I were smaller':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I wish I were smaller actually," you sigh in return. "Like you. I feel like your tits are so much cuter than mine!"'
 		'"No way!" she says, looking shocked. "Big tits are so much sexier than small tits! Better to be your size than my size. And even better to be bigger than both of us."'
 		'She looks down at her chest, seeming almost ashamed of her perky B-cups. A slow blush spreads across her face and shockingly, Albina seems... <i>embarrassed?</i> Have you ever seen her embarrassed about anything before?'
-		gs'albina_wine_event','each_their_own'
-		gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','each_their_own'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'large_tits':
-	gs'albina_wine_event','like_your_boobs'
-	act'I wish I were smaller':
+	gs 'albina_wine_event','like_your_boobs'
+	act 'I wish I were smaller':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I wish I were smaller actually," you sigh in return. "Like you. I feel like your tits are so much cuter than mine!"'
 		'"No way!" she says, looking shocked. "Big tits are so much sexier than small tits! Your tits are the best size! Big, bouncy, beautiful, they''re super sexy! I-"'
 		'Albina cuts off suddenly and looks away, a slow blush spreading across her face. Shockingly, Albina seems... <i>embarrassed?</i> Have you ever seen her embarrassed about anything before?'
-		gs'albina_wine_event','each_their_own'
-		gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','each_their_own'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 	end
 end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'huge_tits':
-	act'It hurts':
+	act 'It hurts':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Barely," you grimace. "It really sucks having boobs this big. I think it''s giving my back problems to be honest."'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 	end
 	
-	act'A good bra':
+	act 'A good bra':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"A really good bra," you say, sighing deeply. "If it weren''t for that, my back would hurt constantly. I even have to wear it at night or it hurts my chest."'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 	end
 	
-	act'I wish I were smaller':
+	act 'I wish I were smaller':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I wish they weren''t so big," you say, sighing deeply. "If I were like, your size, then I wouldn''t have to spend all this money on bras, deal with all this back pain and it would be so much more convenient."'
 		'"I wish I were bigger," she mumbles and you watch her face go red. "Maybe not as big as you, but bigger would be nice. A D-cup or an E-cup would make me feel super sexy."'
 		'Shockingly, Albina seems <i>embarrassed</i> by the admission. Have you ever seen her embarrassed about anything before?'
-		gs'albina_wine_event','each_their_own'
-		gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','each_their_own'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 	end
 end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'like_your_boobs':
-	act'I like your boobs':
+	act 'I like your boobs':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"What''s with the complaints?" you ask. "I love your boobs! They''ve got such a nice shape and are still bouncy without being dramatic. Your tits are super hot!"'
-		'"But big boobs are sexier!" she moans. "It''s not fair! I want big tits! I want them! I want them! I want them!"'
-		act'Your boobs are perfect':
+		'"But big boobs are sexier!" she moans. "It''s not fair! I want big tits!"'
+		act 'Your boobs are perfect':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Well <i>I</i> think your boobs are perfect," you say above Albina''s loud tantruming. "You should learn to love them too."'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
-		gs'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'each_their_own':
-	act'To each their own':
+	act 'To each their own':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"To each their own I guess," you say, shrugging. "Big boob girls aren''t happy, small boob girls aren''t happy, is anybody happy?"'
+		'"To each their own I guess," you say, shrugging. "Big boob girls aren''t happy, small boob girls aren''t happy. Is anybody happy?"'
 		'"Boys with big dicks are happy," Albina grins, rubbing her thighs together. "Nnngh~! I wish I had a big fat cock up my ass right now! Don''t you?"'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mom_boobs':
-	act'Is this because of your mom?':
+	act 'Is this because of your mom?':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You stare at Albina for a moment, judging her exppression, peering deep into her psyche.'
@@ -1261,7 +1269,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mom_boobs':
 		*nl
 		'Albina sighs deeply.'
 		'"So... yeah. I guess you could say I''m a little jealous of my mom''s boobs."'
-		'"Makes sense," You nod sagely. "But your mom''s tall? Being short doesn''t seem to bother you?"'
+		'"Makes sense," you nod sagely. "But your mom''s tall? Being short doesn''t seem to bother you?"'
 		'"That''s cause I found out being short makes it easy to get manhandled in bed," Albina grins and both of you explode into giggles.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 	end
@@ -1270,19 +1278,20 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	
+	'You passionately, if drunkenly, make out with each other before Albina settles back into your lap and guzzles her wine.'
+	act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event', 'end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
-	act'Continue':
+	act 'Continue':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk_blur.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you take another sip of your wine everything begins to get hazy. You try to sit up, but the room spins and the next thing you know-'
-		act'Continue':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/4_csb/11.jpg"></center>'
 			'. . .'
-			act'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','caught'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','caught'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1299,10 +1308,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What the hell do you think you''re doing young lady?!" Zoya says before grabbing Albina by the ear and yanking her to her feet. "Drunk in the middle of the day? And naked!"'
-		'"Ow! Ow ow ow ow ow!" Albina whines in pain while standing on her tip toes trying to escape her mother''s grasp. "We''re just having some fun! Lay off mama!"'
+		'"Ow! Ow ow ow ow ow!" Albina whines in pain while standing on her tip toes trying to escape her mother''s grasp. "We''re just having some fun! Lay off Mama!"'
 		'"What is this indecency?!" Zoya goes on, ignoring her pleas. "I thought even you had better sense than this!"'
 		'"What are you gonna do? <i>Spank me?</i>" Albina glares back rebelliously. "Don''t be such a bitch!"'
-		'"What did you just say to me?!" Zoya sputters. She drags Albina off towards the stairs, howls of pain following. "I am your <i>mother!</i> I will not tolerate such disrespect! <<$pcs_firstname>>!" she calls back towards you. "Put on your clothes!"'
+		'"What did you just say to me?!" Zoya sputters. She drags Albina off towards the stairs, howls of pain following. "I am your <i>mother</i>! I will not tolerate such disrespect! <<$pcs_firstname>>!" she calls back towards you. "Put your clothes on!"'
 		act 'Get dressed':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/hallway.jpg"></center>'

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gate':
 		'You push a button on the intercom and a female voice blasts through. "What kind of ungodly hour do you call this?! Come back later for a social call!" That must have been her mother.'	
 	elseif hour <17:
 		if (kanikuli = 0) and (week < 6):
-			'Nobody answers when you buzz the intercom a few times and so you decide to leave.'
+			'Nobody answers when you buzz the intercom a few times and you decide to leave.'
 		else
 			gt 'albinahome', 'mom answers'
 		end
@@ -60,11 +60,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 		'"You must be <<$pcs_firstname>>!" she smiles. "Albina has told me quite a bit about you. All good things, I assure you," she adds with a laugh.'
 		'The woman holds out her hand for you to shake and you do so tentatively. "I''m sorry, and you are...?"'
 		'"Oh! Forgive my rudeness. I''m Albina''s mother, Zoya Petrenko." <i>Albina''s mother??</i> you think, shocked by the introduction.'
-		'"It''s a pleasure to meet you!" you blurt out. "Mrs... Ms... Uhh..." With a start, you flounder, realizing she didn''t use the same last name as Albina and you''re not sure what to do.'
+		'"It''s a pleasure to meet you!" you blurt out. "Mrs... Ms... Uhh..." you flounder, realizing she didn''t use Albina''s surname and you''re not sure what to do.'
 		'"Doctor actually," she says, handling it with grace. "But," she continues, holding up her hand. "You can just call me Zoya."'
 		'"Oh no! I could-"'
 		'"I insist," she smiles warmly. "Would you like to come inside?"'
-		act'Continue':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/zoya.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Albina is in her room right now, I expect the maid has told her of your arrival already." She grabs her coat and clatters her way to the front door. "I wish I could be a more entertaining host, but I have to get to the hospital so I will just have to leave that to my daughter. If you are a frequent visitor, you might not see me a lot, but do come and say hello if I''m ever home when you visit. It was nice meeting you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
@@ -119,13 +119,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 					!! Zoya greets you
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/zoya.jpg"></center>'
 					'The door opens and you see that it''s Zoya, who smiles at you.'
-					'Please make yourself at home <<$pcs_nickname>>. Albina is up in her room. I''m sure she''ll be thrilled to see you."'
+					'"Please make yourself at home <<$pcs_nickname>>. Albina is up in her room. I''m sure she''ll be thrilled to see you."'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 				else
 					!! Albina greets you
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
 					'The door flies open and Albina greets you with a rather tight hug.'
-					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Come in, come in." she says while dragging you inside and closing the door.'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Come in, come in," she says while dragging you inside and closing the door.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 				end
 			end
@@ -226,7 +226,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroom':
 		act 'Chat with Albina': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 		act 'Talk about video games': gt 'albinahome', 'game'
 		act 'Talk about clothes': gt 'albinahome', 'dressing'
-		act 'Talk about video games': gt 'albinahome', 'game'
 		if AlbinaQW['SportDay'] ! daystart:
 			act 'Talk about dancing': gt 'albinahome', 'dancing'
 		end
@@ -247,9 +246,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dancing':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I don''t like the sweaty perverts at the gym staring at my ass, so I prefer training at home instead." she replies.'
+			'"I don''t like the sweaty perverts at the gym staring at my ass, so I prefer training at home instead," she replies.'
 			'You can''t help but stare at her firm, shapely rear as she says that and she grins at you.'
-			'Eyes up here <<$pcs_nickname>>! Anyway, I could teach you about stripping and poledancing if you want?"'
+			'"Eyes up here <<$pcs_nickname>>! Anyway, I could teach you about stripping and poledancing if you want?"'
 			act 'No thanks': AlbinaQW['SportDay'] = daystart & gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			act 'Teach me stripping': gt 'albinahome', 'stripping'
 			act 'Teach me poledancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
@@ -433,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 		'You laugh and nod. "Sure, but you are so going down."'
 		'She laughs in response. "You''re that sure? Then how about we make it a bit more interesting then?"'
 		'You arch your brow curiously. "What do you have in mind?"'
-		'She grins at you, gets up and goes over to her dresser. She rummages around in it for a moment before pulling out a strapon harness with a large black dildo attached. "I bought this the other day, just for fun. The winner gets to use it on the loser... However. They. Want." she says with a smirk.'
+		'She grins at you, gets up and walks over to her dresser. She rummages around in it for a moment before pulling out a strapon harness with a large black dildo attached. "The winner gets to use this on the loser... However. They. Want," she says with a smirk.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -480,7 +479,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_bet':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/game.jpg"></center>'
 	'You stare at the size of the attached dildo. It''s almost as long and thick as your forearm. "Where did you get that?!" you laugh. "Whatever, you''re on. You''re so going to get fucked!"'
-	'Albina laughs as she brings the strapon over with a bottle of lube and places them on the floor. She lies back down beside you and picks her controller up. "Please! You''re so going to lose." She starts the game and you both fall silent, your focus only on winning.'
+	'Albina laughs as she brings the strapon over with a bottle of lube and tosses them on the bed next to you before she lies back down beside you and picks her controller up. "Please! You''re so going to lose."' 
+	'She starts the game and you both fall silent, your focus only on winning.'
 	act 'Play until someone wins':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -500,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_bet':
 			'You completely trounce her. She isn''t even close to you in score. Before the game can end, she lets out an exacerbated sigh and tosses her controller down in defeat, knowing she has no chance of beating you. You give her a gloating smirk as she reaches over and grabs the strapon harness before handing it to you. You both undress and you grin as you slide the harness on.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'wear_strapon'
 		elseif albplay = 2:
-			'It is really close, but in the end you just manage to win the game. "Yes!" you exclaim triumphantly. She laughs a little and reaches over, grabbing the strapon harness and handing it to you. You both undress and you grin as you slide the harness on.'
+			'It''s close, but in the end you just manage to win the game. "Yes!" you exclaim triumphantly, and she laughs as she grabs the strapon harness and hands it to you. You both undress and you grin as you slide the harness on.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'wear_strapon'
 		elseif albplay = 1:
 			'Although you try your best, Albina proves a worthy opponent and manages to just barely defeat you. Laughing in a mocking and villianous tone, she slaps you on the ass. "Show me your ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re my bitch now!" You both undress and Albina slides the harness on with a smirk on her face.'
@@ -512,14 +512,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_bet':
 		killvar 'gameresult'
 		killvar 'albplay'
 	end
-	    act 'Throw the game':
-		    *clr & cla
-			menu_off = 1
-			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/game.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re not sure why, but part of you <i>wants</i> her to use the strapon on you, so you purposefully lose the game. Albina looks at you suspiciously with a raised brow, but smiles knowingly and smacks your ass. "Show me your ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re my bitch now!" You both undress and Albina slides the harness on with a smirk on her face.'
-			act 'Get fucked with the strapon': gt 'albinahome', 'receive_strapon'
-        end
+	act 'Throw the game':
+		*clr & cla
+		menu_off = 1
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/game.jpg"></center>'
+		'You''re not sure why, but part of you <i>wants</i> her to use the strapon on you, so you purposefully lose the game. Albina looks at you suspiciously with a raised brow, but smiles knowingly and smacks your ass. "Show me your ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re my bitch now!" You both undress and Albina slides the harness on with a smirk on her face.'
+		act 'Get fucked with the strapon': gt 'albinahome', 'receive_strapon'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wear_strapon':
@@ -539,7 +539,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wear_strapon':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/bj.jpg"></center>'
 		'With the strapon firmly in place, you stand next to the bed and pull her head down to the dildo. "Suck my dick loser!" you giggle.'
-		'She laughs before she takes the dildo in her mouth and starts sucking while stroking the shaft with one hand. You spend several minutes making her suck on the dildo, getting it nice and wet with her drool.'
+		'She laughs before she takes the dildo in her mouth and starts sucking while stroking the shaft with one hand. You spend several minutes making her suck on the dildo, getting it wet with her drool.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Fuck her pussy':
@@ -547,20 +547,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wear_strapon':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/givevag.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pull away until the dildo slides out of her mouth, climb onto the bed next to her and lie on your back. "Come and ride it cowgirl!" you laugh. She straddles you and lowers herself down until the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo slides easily inside of her wet pussy, causing her to moan in pleasure. She starts riding you slowly, but picks up speed, moaning louder and louder.'
+			'You pull away until the dildo slides out of her mouth, climb onto the bed next to her and lie on your back. "Come and ride it cowgirl!" you laugh. She straddles you and lowers herself down until the dildo slides easily inside of her wet pussy, causing her to moan in pleasure. She starts riding you slowly, but picks up speed, moaning louder and louder.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 8, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Fuck her ass': gt 'albinahome', 'fuck_albina_ass'
 			act 'Fuck her faster':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/givevag.jpg"></center>'
-				'You slap her on the ass. "Come on Albina! Ride it like you mean it." With your encouragement, she starts really riding you hard and fast, her ass slapping against your thighs as she takes the whole length inside her. She rides you for several minutes until she cries out in ecstasy and slams down on the dildo, her body shuddering as an intense orgasm passes through her. She slides off the dildo, which glistens with her juices, and collapses on the bed next to you.'
-				'Once her orgasm has passed, she looks at you with an appreciative smile on her face.'
+				'You slap her on the ass. "Come on Albina! Ride it like you mean it!" With your encouragement, she starts really riding you hard and fast, her ass slapping against your thighs as she takes the whole length inside her. She rides you for several minutes before she slides off the dildo, which glistens with her juices, and collapses on the bed next to you. She looks at you with an appreciative smile on her face before she leans over and whispers in your ear.'
+				'"I want you to fuck my ass now..."' 
+				'You grin as she giggles and gets on all fours to wiggle her bubble butt at you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 7, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Fuck her ass': gt 'albinahome', 'fuck_albina_ass'
-				act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
 			end
 		end
 		act 'Fuck her ass': gt 'albinahome', 'fuck_albina_ass'
@@ -575,17 +574,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina then leans over and whispers in your ear. "I want you to fuck my ass <<$pcs_nickname>>..." You grin as she giggles and gets on all fours. You grab the bottle of lube and squirt some onto the dildo, rubbing it up and down the shaft until it is very slick. You then spread her huge ass cheeks and rub the excess onto her asshole. You grab her ass in your hand and appreciate how firms it feels in your grip.'
-	'"Like what you see?" she giggles. You kneel down behind her, line the head of the dildo up with her asshole and slowly push forward. There is a bit of resistance, but with a little more pressure the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo pops into her ass. She moans in a mixture of pain and pleasure as you start off with slow shallow strokes, but as her groans of pain turn into moans of pleasure, you take deeper and faster strokes. You look down and admit that her ass is amazing, the dildo being enveloped by her huge, firm cheeks as you thrust in and out of her hole.' 
-	'You wonder how the guys in your class would feel knowing you''re actually fucking the best ass in school while they can only dream of it. After a few minutes, you pull out of her and she looks back over her shoulder, obviously wondering why you stopped.'
+	'You grab the bottle of lube and squirt some onto the dildo, rubbing it up and down the shaft until it is very slick before spreading her ass cheeks and applying a generous amount onto her asshole. You grab her ass in your hand and appreciate how firms it feels in your grip.'
+	'"Like what you see?" she giggles. You kneel down behind her, line the head of the dildo up with her asshole and slowly push forward. There is little resistance, and the huge dildo slides into her ass with ease, causing her to moan in pleasure as you go deeper and faster. You look down and admit that her ass is amazing, the dildo being enveloped by her huge, firm cheeks as you thrust in and out of her back door.' 
+	'You wonder what the guys in your class would do to be in your position right now as you continue fucking her ass. After a few minutes, you pull out of her and she looks back over her shoulder at you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
 	act 'Keep fucking her ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me... hard." she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo as she reaches back and starts rubbing her clit. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
+		'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Put it back in and fuck me... hard," she says while wiggling her hips. You smile at her and slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo as she reaches back and starts rubbing her clit. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm and juices squirt from her pussy, soaking the sheets beneath her. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
 		'After you''ve pulled out, she inserts a few fingers into her gaping hole as juices continue leaking from her pussy. "Oh fuck yes <<$pcs_nickname>>! That was fucking amazing!"'
 		'"Fucking such a nice looking ass was amazing!" you reply and you both laugh.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -601,8 +599,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/bj.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slide your panties off while she tightens the strapon firmly in place, standing next to the bed. You lie down next to her and she pulls your head down to the dildo. "Suck my dick loser!" she says with a giggle.'
-	'You take the dildo into your mouth and start sucking on it while stroking the shaft with one hand. "Yeah, just like that <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she moans as she reaches between the straps and gently rubs her pussy. You spend several minutes sucking on the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your drool before she pulls it out of your mouth. "I''m so going to enjoy fucking you!"'
+	'You slide your panties off as she tightens the strapon firmly in place while standing next to the bed. You lie down next to her and she pulls your head down to the dildo. "Suck my dick loser!" she says with a giggle.'
+	'You take the dildo into your mouth and start sucking on it while stroking the shaft with one hand. "Yeah, just like that <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she moans as she reaches between the straps and gently rubs her pussy. You spend several minutes sucking on the dildo, getting it wet with your drool before she pulls it out of your mouth. "I''m so going to enjoy fucking you!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
@@ -610,21 +608,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/bj.jpg"></center>'
-			'You blush deeply and she looks at you. "Oh, right. You haven''t done this before." she says, remembering that you''re still pure.'
-			'You blush even more. "Yes, I''m... still a virgin." you reply.'
-			'"Well, I can just fuck your ass if you want?" Then she grins. "Unless you want me to pop your cherry that is?"'
+			'You blush deeply and she looks at you. "Oh, right. You haven''t done this before," she says, remembering that you''re still pure.'
+			'You blush even more. "Yes, I''m... still a virgin..." you reply.'
+			'"Well, I can just fuck your ass if you want?" She then gives you a small smile. "Unless you want me to pop your cherry?"'
 			act 'Just fuck my ass': gt 'albinahome', 'albina_ass_fucks_you'
 			act 'Get your cherry popped':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getvag1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You give her an awkward smile. "I... I want you to... take me. My... virginity, that is." you tell her as your cheeks burn bright red.' 
-				'She smiles back. "Okay, don''t worry. I''ll be gentle since it''s your first time. Just lie on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she climbs onto the bed and scoots in between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough. She adds a little lube to the dildo anyway and you feel it rubbing against your slit. She then slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo into your virgin pussy.' 
-				'It is both painful and pleasurable at the same time and you moan softly as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. After a few minutes, it starts to hurt less but she stops. "OK that''s enough. I don''t want to wear it out the first time, but I''m not finished with you yet. Roll over so I can fuck that tight little ass of yours."'
+				'You give her an awkward smile in return. "I... I want you to... take me. My... virginity, that is..." you tell her as your cheeks burn bright red.' 
+				'She smiles back. "Okay, don''t worry. I''ll be gentle since it''s your first time. Just lie on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she climbs onto the bed and scoots in between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers to make sure it''s wet enough, but adds some lube to the dildo anyway. You feel it rubbing against your slit before she slowly slides it into your virgin pussy.' 
+				'It''s both painful and pleasurable at the same time and you moan softly as she slowly starts to fuck you. After a few minutes, it starts to hurt less and you find yourself moaning louder.'
+				*nl
+				'After a few more minutes, Albina starts growing tired and pulls out, leaving you feeling a little empty. "So how was that for your first time?" she asks with a smile.'
+				'"It was amazing! I''m glad it was you I shared it with, you were so gentle and considerate," you reply and Albina smiles even wider.'
+				'"I couldn''t have your first time being a shitty experience like mine...." she replies, but gasps and looks away when she realises what she said.'
+				*nl
+				'You quickly sit up next to her and give her a hug. "Hey, it''s okay. This was the best thing I could hope for when losing my virginity."'
+				'She looks at you as tears well up in her eyes, the memories of what were clearly a traumatic event flooding back to her. "Really? I wanted it to be good for you because-"'
+				'You can see this is a painful memory for her and pull her into another hug. "I know..." you gently reassure her and you both sit in silence for a few minutes before she gets up and pulls the harness off before cleaning the dildo and tossing it back in the drawer.'
+				'"This is supposed to be your happy memory and I don''t want to ruin it for you. Let''s do something fun!" She clearly needs a distraction, so you nod in agreement.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Take it up the ass': gt 'albinahome', 'albina_ass_fucks_you'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -633,7 +640,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/getvag1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Lie on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she climbs onto the bed and scoots in between your legs. She rubs your pussy with her fingers a bit to make sure it is wet enough and then slowly slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo inside you. You moan a bit as she slowly starts to fuck your pussy. As you start to moan louder, she starts fucking you a little faster.'
+			'"Lie on your back and spread your legs." You do as she commands and she climbs onto the bed and scoots in between your legs. She rubs the head of the dildo against your pussy before she pushes it inside you. You moan as she slowly starts fucking your pussy, going a little faster the louder you moan.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 8, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Keep getting your pussy fucked':
@@ -650,28 +657,115 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_ass_fucks_you':
+	if stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['anal_strap'] = 0:
+		if stat['anal_dildo'] = 0 and stat['anal_fist'] = 0 and stat['self_fisting_anal'] = 0:
+			!!The player character has never had anything larger than a finger in her ass.
+			act 'Anal virgin':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
+				'Thoughts race through your head as you look at the huge dildo, and Albina notices your hesitation.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever been fucked in the ass before?"'
+				'You shake your head as you feel your cheeks burning bright red. "Uhh... No, I haven''t..."'
+				'She places a hand on your shoulder. "Hey, it''s nothing to be embarrassed about. Plenty of girls don''t do anal."'
+				'You stare at the dildo again before Albina snaps your attention back to her. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, be honest with me. Do you want me to fuck your ass? I''ll be as gentle as you want."'
+				act 'Yes': gt 'albinahome', 'first_anal'
+				act 'No': gt 'albinahome', 'anal_refuse'
+			end
+		else
+			!!The player character has had a dildo or fist (her own or another persons) in her ass.
+			act 'Anal virgin':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
+				'Thoughts race through your head as you look at the huge dildo, and Albina notices your hesitation.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever been fucked in the ass before?"'
+				'You feel your cheeks burning bright red. "Well, I''ve used a dildo and I''ve managed to take a fist..."'
+				*nl
+				'Albina looks at you in what you can only describe as awe. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, even I''ve never taken a fist up my ass and I''m the queen of butt stuff."'
+				'"Is it weird to do that?" you ask with concern.'
+				'"No, not at all! To be honest, I''ve always wanted to try it, but I''ve never found anyone interested in doing it. Maybe that''s about to change..."'
+				'She looks you over with lustful desire before continuing. "It''s good that you''re experimenting back there. It''ll make your first proper butt fuck easier if you''ve had some experience shoving something up there, whether that''s a dildo or a whole fucking hand. I can''t believe you''ve done that..."'
+				'She then places a hand on your shoulder. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, be honest with me. Do you want me to fuck your ass? I''ll be as gentle as you want."'
+				act 'Yes': gt 'albinahome', 'first_anal'
+				act 'No': gt 'albinahome', 'anal_refuse'
+			end
+		end
+	else	
+		act 'Get your ass fucked':
+			*clr & cla
+			menu_off = 1
+			npc_sex['A23'] += 1
+			lesbian += 1
+			gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her applying lube to the dildo. She squirts some on the dildo and strokes the shaft with it before she massages a generous amount into your asshole with her fingers. You and the dildo now lubed up, she moves behind you and you feel the dildo pressing against your asshole, the pressure building until the tip pops into your ass, causing you to groan slightly in pain. She slowly starts to slide the dildo up your ass, steadily working it deeper.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
+			gs 'stat'
+
+			act 'Get your ass hammered':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
+				'Once you''re comfortable with her in your ass, she stands up over you. "Get ready, because now I''m <i>really</i> going to fuck your ass!" she laughs before she starts slamming the full length of the dildo in and out of your ass, causing you to grip the sheets tightly. Despite this, she isn''t too rough and you start enjoying the pleasurable sensation. Albina seemingly grows more aroused the more she fucks you.' 
+				'Just as it''s starting to hurt, she lets out a loud, pleasured scream as you feel her juices spraying across your legs. You then feel the dildo slide out of you and turn to see Albina sprawled out on the bed in orgasmic bliss, her juices slowly trickling out of her soaking wet pussy as a huge wet patch soaks into the sheets. "You were such a good little buttslut, <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she says softly.'
+				'After riding through her orgasm, she pulls the harness off and tosses it aside.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian'
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'first_anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	npc_sex['A23'] += 1
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Y-yes, I would. Just promise you''ll be gentle," you reply and Albina smiles.'
+	'"I will. Now get on all fours and bring your ass up as high as you can."'
+	'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her squirting lube onto her fingers. You shiver when you feel the cold liquid being applied to your asshole and Albina starts massaging it in before you feel her slowly pushing a finger inside you. You moan softly at the sensation as you feel her finger curling up inside you.'
+	'After a few minutes, she pulls her finger out. "Okay, that should be enough. Are you sure you want to do this, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Just because I''m a buttslut doesn''t mean you have to be one too."'
+	'You stare at the dildo hanging between her legs, but steel yourself and nod. "Yes, I want to do this. Just go slow please?"'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her applying lube to the dildo. She squirts plenty on the dildo and strokes the shaft with it, getting it nice and lubed up. She then rubs the excess lube onto your asshole. You and the dildo now lubed up, she moves behind you and you feel the dildo press against your asshole. The pressure builds up until the tip pops into your ass, causing you to groan slightly in pain. She slowly starts to slide the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo up your ass, steadily working it deeper.'
-	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
-	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Get your ass hammered':
-		*clr & cla
+
+	act 'Get your ass fucked':
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once you''re comfortable with her in your ass, she stands up over you and pins your head to the bed with her foot. "Get ready, because now I''m <i>really</i> going to fuck your ass!" she laughs before she starts slamming the full length of the dildo in and out of your ass, causing you to grip the sheets tightly. Despite this, she isn''t too rough and you start enjoying the pleasurable sensation. Albina seemingly grows more aroused the more she fucks you.' 
-		'Just as it is starting to hurt, she stops and lets out a loud pleasured moan before lifting her foot off your head and pulling out of you. You feel a rush of cold air around your gaping asshole. "You were such a good little butt slut <<$pcs_nickname>>." she says as you turn and see her sliding the harness off, apparently finished with you. You also notice the wet patch on the bed. She obviously greatly enjoyed hammering your ass.'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
+		'Your heart races as you feel Albina moving in behind you. You instinctively tense up when you feel the head of the dildo pressing against your asshole. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is going to feel strange and definitely hurt a little, but you''re going to have to try and relax as best as you can for me," Albina tells you, and you grip the sheets tightly as you do what she says.' 
+		'You feel her start slowly pushing and the pressure builds until the tip of the dildo suddenly pops into your ass, causing you to groan and grit your teeth while gripping the sheets even tighter. It''s a painful sensation and you instinctively feel the urge to pull yourself free. "You okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I can take it out if you want?" Albina asks as you feel a stinging pain shooting through you.'
+		'Remembering what she said, you try to relax. "No, I just need a second," you reply as you look back at her and she nods.'
+		*nl
+		'After taking a few seconds to adjust to the sensation, you nod at Albina. She squirts more lube onto the already slick dildo before placing her hands on your hips. "Okay, just keep your ass relaxed and tell me if it gets too painful. I don''t want you hurting yourself trying to impress me. Got it?"'
+		'You nod and prepare yourself as you feel Albina start slowly pushing the dildo deeper into your ass. You feel yourself being stretched out as she reaches a depth she feels you''ll be comfortable with and starts gently thrusting.'
+		'Despite the shallow depth and Albina being gentle, the pain becomes too much after a few minutes and you ask her to pull out. You sit up on your knees and cluch your ass cheeks in your hands as pain pulses through your stretched asshole.'
+		'"You lasted longer tan I thought you would. Not bad for your first go, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says as she hands you some wipes to clean yourself up. "Next time you lose, maybe we can go deeper and... harder," she adds with a teasing grin as she cleans the dildo and puts it away.'
+		*nl
+		'You slowly get dressed as the stinging pain continues to pulse through your ass. Albina watches with an amused grin. "Don''t worry, it gets less painful the more you do it."'
+		'"You would know," you reply with a smirk and she laughs.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
+		act 'Do something else': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 	end
 end
 
+if ARGS[0] = 'anal_refuse':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think I''m ready for that yet."'
+	'Albina smiles. "That''s okay, but if you do want to do it with me or just want some advice, then just ask. It''s best to get help from someone with... experience on the matter," she says with a grin.'
+	'You grin back. "I''ll be sure to ask the master buttslut for any of her wisdom."'
+	'She punches you on the arm. "Damn right you will."'
+	act 'Do something else' :gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -680,8 +774,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
 	gs 'stat'
 	if rand(0,3) = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/aftermath.jpg"></center>'
-		'Albina pushes you down onto the bed and climbs on top of you. You spend the next few minutes passionately making out while fondling each other before she gives you a sly smile and moves into position to start scissoring you. Before she can, her phone buzzes and she looks at it, obviously reading a text message and frowns in disappointment. "Sorry, but I need to go <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see later?"'
-		'You nod in understanding. "Sure, not a problem. I had fun." you smirk. "I''ll see you later." You share a final kiss with each other before you both quickly get dressed. She wipes the dildo clean and shoves it back in the drawer before ushering you out of her room. She walks with you into town before leaving you to attend to her business.'
+		'Albina pushes you down onto the bed and climbs on top of you. You spend the next few minutes passionately making out while fondling each other before she gives you a sly smile and moves into position to start scissoring you. Before she can, her phone buzzes and she looks at it before frowning in disappointment. "Sorry, but I need to go <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see later?"'
+		'You nod in understanding. "Sure, not a problem. I had fun."'
+		'You share a final kiss with each other before you both quickly get dressed. She wipes the dildo clean and shoves it back in the drawer before ushering you out of her room. She walks with you into town before leaving you to attend to her business.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/beg1.qsrc

@@ -479,66 +479,66 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 				end
 			end
 		end
-	end
-else
-	if npc_rel['A33'] > 50:
-		'As you receive congratulations from your coach and fellow competitors, you look towards the crowd to acknowledge their support. You are surprised to see your sister frantically waving at you and trying to make her way down to the track-side.'
-		'Breaking out into a huge grin, you jog over to the barrier and reach over give each other a hug.'
-		'"You go girl! That was some race. I knew you were into your running, but I never thought you were at this level. Well done!"'
-		'"Thanks for coming sis. It means a lot."'
-		'"How come you never told me? It was lucky I found out because the coach mentioned it to me last week while I was hanging out with Roma and the crew outside the community center. I wasn''t going to miss the opportunity for a possible little celebration with my little sis, was I? Let''s go for a few beers! I know a cool bar just a short metro ride from here."'
-		'"Okay, cool. I''m up for that! Let me go and shower and change first."'
-		'"Okay, just don''t be too long or I may have to leave without you!"'
-		act 'Go for a shower':
-			*clr & cla
-			dynamic $showerdin
-			if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & 'Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
-			pcs_hairbsh = 1
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You have a shower and get dressed.'
-			*nl
-			'After your shower, you meet Anya in the reception and head off to the metro.'
-			minut += 10
-			gs 'stat'	
-			act 'Go to the bar':
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/metro"></center>'
+	else
+		if npc_rel['A33'] > 50:
+			'As you receive congratulations from your coach and fellow competitors, you look towards the crowd to acknowledge their support. You are surprised to see your sister frantically waving at you and trying to make her way down to the track-side.'
+			'Breaking out into a huge grin, you jog over to the barrier and reach over give each other a hug.'
+			'"You go girl! That was some race. I knew you were into your running, but I never thought you were at this level. Well done!"'
+			'"Thanks for coming sis. It means a lot."'
+			'"How come you never told me? It was lucky I found out because the coach mentioned it to me last week while I was hanging out with Roma and the crew outside the community center. I wasn''t going to miss the opportunity for a possible little celebration with my little sis, was I? Let''s go for a few beers! I know a cool bar just a short metro ride from here."'
+			'"Okay, cool. I''m up for that! Let me go and shower and change first."'
+			'"Okay, just don''t be too long or I may have to leave without you!"'
+			act 'Go for a shower':
 				*clr & cla
-				'You take the metro to the industrial area and head towards the Rabotnik bar.'
-				minut += 20
+				dynamic $showerdin
+				if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & 'Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
+				pcs_hairbsh = 1
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'You have a shower and get dressed.'
+				*nl
+				'After your shower, you meet Anya in the reception and head off to the metro.'
+				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'	
-				act 'Hava a drink':
+				act 'Go to the bar':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/metro"></center>'
 					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar"></center>'
-					'You both make your way to the bar and order some beers, which you drink at the bar.'
-					'When you''ve both finished your beer, you order another and head towards the pool table.'
-					gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer', 1
-					minut += 15
+					'You take the metro to the industrial area and head towards the Rabotnik bar.'
+					minut += 20
 					gs 'stat'	
-					act 'Play pool':
+					act 'Hava a drink':
 						*clr & cla
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/sex/poolw"></center>'
-						'You both enjoy a game of pool and after the game, Anya heads off to the bar to get some more beers.'
-						'In the meantime, you set the table up for another game.'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar"></center>'
+						'You both make your way to the bar and order some beers, which you drink at the bar.'
+						'When you''ve both finished your beer, you order another and head towards the pool table.'
 						gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer', 1
 						minut += 15
 						gs 'stat'	
-						act 'Another game':
+						act 'Play pool':
 							*clr & cla
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/sex/pooll"></center>'
-							'You spend a few minutes playing another game before taking your final shot and winning the game.'
-							'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, that''s one game each. Let''s have one more beer then I''ve got to go."'
-							'"Sounds good sis." After a final beer, you both leave the bar and Anya gives you a hug before hurrying off. "See you later, sis! And well done again!"'
-							gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer', 2
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/sex/poolw"></center>'
+							'You both enjoy a game of pool and after the game, Anya heads off to the bar to get some more beers.'
+							'In the meantime, you set the table up for another game.'
+							gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer', 1
 							minut += 15
-							gs 'stat'
-							act 'Leave the bar': gt 'city_industrial', 'start'
+							gs 'stat'	
+							act 'Another game':
+								*clr & cla
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/sex/pooll"></center>'
+								'You spend a few minutes playing another game before taking your final shot and winning the game.'
+								'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, that''s one game each. Let''s have one more beer then I''ve got to go."'
+								'"Sounds good sis." After a final beer, you both leave the bar and Anya gives you a hug before hurrying off. "See you later, sis! And well done again!"'
+								gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer', 2
+								minut += 15
+								gs 'stat'
+								act 'Leave the bar': gt 'city_industrial', 'start'
+							end
 						end
 					end
 				end
 			end
+		else
+			gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
 		end
-	else
-		gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
 	end
 end
 

locations/booty_call.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,35 @@
 # booty_call
+if $ARGS[0] = 'scheduler':
+	i = 0
+	:booty_call_time_sched_loop
+	if i < ARRSIZE('$FuckBuddy'):
+		!! clear SMS
+		!! clear schedule
+		killvar 'booty_call_time'
+		if (rand(1,10) <= npc_sexdrive[$FuckBuddy[i]]) and (rand(1,npc_rel[$FuckBuddy[i]]) > 0):
+			booty_call_time[$FuckBuddy[i]] = 900 + rand(0,210)
+		else
+			booty_call_time[$FuckBuddy[i]] = 2000
+		end
+		i += 1
+		jump 'booty_call_time_sched_loop'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'SMS raiser':
+	i = 0
+	:booty_call_sms_raiser_loop
+	if i < ARRSIZE('$FuckBuddy'):
+		if booty_call_time[$FuckBuddy[i]] < hour*24+minut:
+			gs 'booty_call_sms', 'start',$FuckBuddy[i]
+			gs 'booty_call_sms', 'Add SMS', $FuckBuddy[i]
+			booty_call_time[$FuckBuddy[i]] = 2000
+		end
+		i += 1
+		jump 'booty_call_sms_raiser_loop'
+	end
+end
+
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'text':
 	!! boy code?

locations/gschool_coolkid_chats.qsrc

@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Marcus_Katja_talk':
 	'"So you know how we sometimes have fun together?" you ask.'
 	'"Yeah?" he answers and you smile. "Well, I have this friend who''s never been with a boy before, but would like to try it. So I was wondering if you were up for helping me give her an amazing first time? She''s '+iif( hotcat < hotcat_rating['A14'], 'even hotter than I am,', 'totally hot,')+' so you won''t regret it."'
 	'"Are you asking me if I want to have a threesome with two beautiful girls, with one of them even being a virgin?" he asks with a surprised look on his face. "Of course I''m up for this!" he exclaims as his face turns into a huge grin.'
-	'"Great," you answer. "I''ll call you with her address when we are ready. But you have to be discrete, we don''t want any rumors spread around!" you tell him and he smiles. "Of course, I''m a gentleman and gentlemen never kiss and tell. I look forward to your call."'
+	'"Great," you answer. "I''ll call you with her address when we are ready. But you have to be discreet, we don''t want any rumors spread around!" you tell him and he smiles. "Of course, I''m a gentleman and gentlemen never kiss and tell. I look forward to your call."'
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
@@ -1401,7 +1401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'irina':
 			'"I don''t know, what did she say?" you reply and Irina takes a mouthful of water.'
 			'"I love you!" she replies and the water drips out of her mouth, Irina implying that it''s cum.' 
 		elseif npc_rel['A1'] <= 20:
-			'"I would rather have Petia stare at my tits until he creams himself than to talk to you, slut!" Irina hisses with disgust. "Keep your legs together, cunt! This isn''t a whorehouse, it''s a fucking school! You''re a fucking embarrassment, you know that?" Irina taunts you before she spits in front of your legs "Use this as lube to go and fuck yourself!"'
+			'"I would rather have Petia stare at my tits until he creams himself than to talk to you, slut!" Irina hisses with disgust. "Keep your legs together, cunt! This isn''t a whorehouse, it''s a fucking school! You''re a fucking embarrassment, you know that?" Irina taunts you before she spits in front of your legs. "Use this as lube to go and fuck yourself!"'
 			'You let her finish her rant before putting your hand under your skirt and letting your fingers slide over your clit. "When there''s an itch, you''ve got to scratch it!" Irina stands silently, shocked at your actions.'
 		else
 			'"I would rather have Petia stare at my tits until he creams himself than to talk to you, slut!" Irina hisses with disgust.'
@@ -1414,15 +1414,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'irina':
 			'"But that would make me a slut, wouldn''t it?" you reply.'
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, everybody does it. It''s just that nobody talks about it," she assures you.'
 			'"So, it''s like a secret society?"'
-			'"That''s one way looking at it..." she nods in an approving manner, then gives you a friendly smile before walking away.'
+			'"That''s one way of looking at it..." she nods in an approving manner, then gives you a friendly smile before walking away.'
 		else
-			'"Liza told me that some girl overheard this group of girls talking at lunch. Apparently, they heard Stasya talking shit about me!" Irina exclaims and the both of you let out a little gasp, even though it really isn''t much of a surprise.'
-			'"What did she say?"'
+			'"Liza told me that some girl overheard this group of girls talking at lunch. Apparently, they heard Stasya talking shit about me!" Irina exclaims and both of you let out a little gasp, even though it really isn''t much of a surprise.'
+			'"What did she say?" you ask.'
 			'"Oh I wouldn''t dare repeat the things she said. It would just leave a bad taste in my mouth." Irina shakes her head in disappointment, but you notice the hint of a smirk on her lips. "Jealousy is such an ugly look..." The two of you continue gossiping until the bell rings.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A1'] >= 70:
-			'"Back when we were kids, Bella tried to ride a cow." Irina giggles'
+			'"Back when we were kids, Bella tried to ride a cow," Irina giggles.'
 			'"What, like a real life cow? How''d that go?" you ask curiously.'
 			'"She managed for few minutes before the cow shook her off and she landed in cowshit!" she cackles. "But you didn''t hear it from me, okay?"'
 			'You tap your nose, assuring Irina her secret is safe is safe with you.'

locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc

@@ -264,8 +264,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 			'You listen to him very carefully and try to remember as much as you can, which isn''t easy since he''s so passionate about this topic that he often uses technical terms you don''t understand.'
 			'When you realize the bell is about to ring, you thank him for his useful tips and you both head to the classroom for the next lesson.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
-			'"Hey Erast!" you greet him, but he''s so focused on watching something on his mobile that he doesn''t even notice you. You poke him and greet him again.'
-			'"Oh.. Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Sorry, I didn''t notice you were talking to me." He glances at you before immediately stares at the screen again.'
+			'"Hey Erast!" you greet him, but he''s so focused on watching something on his phone that he doesn''t even notice you. You poke him and greet him again.'
+			'"Oh.. Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Sorry, I didn''t notice you were talking to me." He glances at you before immediately staring at the screen again.'
 			'"Okay, no problem. What are you watching anyway? You seem to be lost in it," you say as you have a look at the video he''s watching.'
 			*nl
 			'"Oh, he''s my favorite bodybuilder. He just uploaded this new motivational video on his channel. It''s really worth watching. So inspirational."'
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 			'"I can''t believe it!" you say when you approach Erast, who is watching something on his phone.'
 			'"Whoa, what''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>?" he asks. You can see by his expression that he doesn''t understand what your problem is.'
 			'"You know, I''ve been trying to pay more attention to my shape lately and I feel like I''m not getting the results I should, according to my training plan," you explain as you get your plan out of your pocket and show it to him.'
-			'"It''s not a horse race." he quickly replies. "People usually think they get the required result within weeks when it actually needs months, even years sometimes."'
+			'"It''s not a horse race," he quickly replies. "People usually think they get the required result within weeks when it actually needs months, even years sometimes."'
 			*nl
 			'"Years?" you ask in despair before asking if he could explain some things to you.' 
 			'He looks around, as if looking for someone to talk to instead, before he sighs and starts to talk about nutrition, metabolism, resting, bulking, calisthenics, and everything that can affect your progress.'
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 			'"Hey Erast! I''ve been looking for you all day. Could you give me some more tips on strength and conditioning? I think I might be doing something wrong since I''m not gaining as much as I think I should."'
 			'"Gladly," he replies. "You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should try to increase your training volume and decrease between-set rest intervals."'
 			*nl
-			'"Also, get enough sleep. Your muscle needs enough recovery time." he adds. He clearly knows a lot about strength and conditioning and could continue talking about it for hours, but the bell rings after only a few minutes.'
+			'"Also, get enough sleep. Your muscles need enough recovery time," he adds. He clearly knows a lot about strength and conditioning and could continue talking about it for hours, but the bell rings after only a few minutes.'
 			'"Thanks Erast, that''s really helpful. See you later."'
 			'"Don''t sweat it. Come and find me if you have more questions." With that, you both grab your things and head to the next lesson together.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
@@ -400,10 +400,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 			menu_off = 1
 			NatbelQW['chrispaid'] = 3
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see Christina chatting with Lina when you approach her. As Christina notices you, she glares at you and then turns to Lina.'
+			'You see Christina chatting with Lina when you approach her. As Christina notices you, she glares at you before turning to Lina.'
 			'"Later, Lina," she says. Lina smiles at Christina and leaves.'
-			'Christina turns back to you, "What do you want, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-			'You decide to ignore her attitude, "I believe Natasha owes you some money. Five hundred rubles?"'
+			'Christina turns back to you. "What do you want, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'You decide to ignore her attitude. "I believe Natasha owes you some money. Five hundred rubles?"'
 			'"What about it? It''s not any of your business," she snaps.'
 			'"Actually, it is," you say, pulling out the money and handing it to her. "I''m here to pay you back."'
 			'She snatches the money from your hand. "What, was she too scared to speak to me? She had to get you to do it for her?"'
@@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lina':
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A19'] >= 60:
 			if tatarm = 0 or tatass = 0 or tatback = 0 or tatblly = 0 or tatbrst = 0 or tatchst = 0 or tatfce = 0 or tatankle = 0 or tathand = 0 or tatleg = 0 or tatlip = 0 or tatneck = 0 or tatvag = 0 or tatlech = 0 or tatside = 0 or tatupb = 0 or tatunder = 0 or tatwrist = 0:
-				'"Why don''t you have tattooes, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+				'"Why don''t you have any tattoos, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 				'"I don''t know," you say with a shrug.'
 				'"I''m surprised the other gopniks let you hang around without at least one. Like an initiation or something."'
 				'Laughing, you say "We aren''t a gang, Lina."'

locations/intro_city_select.qsrc

@@ -16,18 +16,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 !!		Body
 	pcs_hgt = 170
 	salo = 60
+	pcs_teeth = 0
 	dick = 0
 !!		Stats
-	pcs_stren = 20
+	pcs_stren = 40
 	strenbuf = 20
-	pcs_agil = 15
+	pcs_agil = 40
 	agilbuf = 15
-	pcs_vital = 25
+	pcs_vital = 40
 	vitalbuf = 25
-	pcs_intel = 30
-	pcs_sprt = 25
-	pcs_react = 25
-	pcs_chrsm = 15
+	pcs_intel = 40
+	pcs_sprt = 40
+	pcs_react = 40
+	pcs_chrsm = 40
 	pcs_prcptn = 40
 	pcs_makeup = 5
 	gm_purses[7] = 1
@@ -48,6 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	eda = 5
 	poroshok = 5
 	shampoo = 20
+	sanpad = 10
 	tampon = 15
 	pcs_energy = 100
 	pcs_hydra = 100
@@ -349,7 +351,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
 		pcs_lashes = 0
 	end
 	pcs_butt = 8
-	pcs_intel = 50
+	pcs_intel = 60
 	pcs_compskl = 30
 	pcs_chess = 20
 	pcs_gaming = 30
@@ -401,7 +403,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerdqueen':
 			pcs_lip = 2
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
-		pcs_skin = 400
+		pcs_skin = 700
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_butt = 12
 		genbsize = 22
 !!d cup for ideal bmi
@@ -437,11 +440,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goodstudent':
 		traits['nerd_status'] = 3
 		alterstrtimg = 9
 		if glass < 1 : glass = 1
-		pcs_intel = 55
+		pcs_intel = 70
 		pcs_instrmusic = 10
 		pcs_artskls = 10
 		money += 2000
-		pcs_skin = 200
+		pcs_skin = 600
 		salo = 93
 		genbsize = 18
 !!c cup for ideal bmi
@@ -477,12 +480,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computergeek':
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'nerd'
 		alterstrtimg = 10
 		if glass < 1 : glass = 1
-		pcs_intel = 50
+		pcs_intel = 65
 		pcs_compskl = 50
 		pcs_comphckng = 20
 		pcs_gaming = 40
 		internet = 20
-		pcs_skin = 200
+		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_teeth = 1
 		salo = 56
 		pcs_inhib = 20
 		npc_rel['A152'] += 10
@@ -518,11 +522,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chessplayer':
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'nerd'
 		alterstrtimg = 11
-		pcs_intel = 50
-		pcs_prcptn = 40
-		pcs_react = 40
+		pcs_intel = 65
+		pcs_prcptn = 45
+		pcs_react = 45
 		pcs_chess = 40
-		pcs_skin = 250
+		pcs_skin = 600
 		salo = 97
 		pcs_inhib = 15
 		chessyear = year
@@ -548,14 +552,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chessplayer':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'jock':
-	pcs_sprt = 45
-	pcs_stren = 45
-	pcs_vital = 45
-	pcs_react = 45
-	pcs_agil = 45
+	pcs_sprt = 50
+	pcs_stren = 80
+	pcs_vital = 50
+	pcs_react = 50
+	pcs_agil = 50
 	genbsize = 12
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
-	pcs_skin = 400
+	pcs_skin = 600
 	pcs_butt = 12
 	kosmetica = 10
 	stanok = 10
@@ -605,8 +609,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'volleyball':
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'jock'
 		alterstrtimg = 12
-		pcs_react = 50
-		pcs_agil = 50
+		pcs_react = 55
+		pcs_agil = 55
 		genbsize = 17
 !!c cup for ideal bmi
 		salo = 75
@@ -642,12 +646,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dancer':
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'jock'
 		alterstrtimg = 13
-		pcs_sprt = 50
-		pcs_agil = 50
-		pcs_chrsm = 35
+		pcs_sprt = 55
+		pcs_agil = 55
+		pcs_chrsm = 45
 		pcs_perform = 40
 		pcs_makupskl = 40
-		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_skin = 700
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_tan = 5
 		salo = 50
 		if player_avatar = 0:
@@ -694,7 +699,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'runner':
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'jock'
 		alterstrtimg = 14
 		pcs_vital = 55
-		pcs_agil = 50
+		pcs_agil = 55
 		pcs_inhib = 25
 		salo = 60
 		pcs_run = 55
@@ -732,9 +737,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'football':
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'jock'
 		alterstrtimg = 15
-		pcs_stren = 50
-		pcs_react = 50
-		pcs_vital = 50
+		pcs_stren = 80
+		pcs_react = 55
+		pcs_vital = 55
 		salo = 80
 		genbsize = 17
 !!c cup for ideal bmi
@@ -767,9 +772,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'football':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cool':
-	pcs_sprt = 40
-	pcs_chrsm = 40
-	pcs_prcptn = 40
+	pcs_sprt = 50
+	pcs_chrsm = 50
+	pcs_prcptn = 50
 	pcs_icesktng = 10
 	pcs_danc = 20
 	pcs_persuas = 30
@@ -792,7 +797,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cool':
 		pcs_lip = 2
 		pcs_lashes = 1
 	end
-	pcs_skin = 500
+	pcs_skin = 700
 	pcs_butt = 16
 	pcs_tan = 5
 	npc_rel['A33'] += 10
@@ -862,7 +867,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 			pcs_lashes = 2
 		end
 		school_clothing = 6
-		pcs_skin = 600
+		pcs_skin = 800
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_tan = 50
 		genbsize = 22
 !!d cup for ideal bmi
@@ -902,11 +908,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
-	pcs_sprt = 40
-	pcs_stren = 40
-	pcs_vital = 40
-	pcs_react = 40
-	pcs_agil = 40
+	pcs_sprt = 45
+	pcs_stren = 55
+	pcs_vital = 45
+	pcs_react = 45
+	pcs_agil = 45
 	genbsize = 13
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
 	pcs_inhib = 25
@@ -934,7 +940,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
 		pcs_lip = 2
 		pcs_lashes = 1
 	end
-	pcs_skin = 400
+	pcs_skin = 600
 	pcs_vag = 1
 	pcs_throat = 1
 	pcs_butt = 8
@@ -956,7 +962,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnikstart':
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'gopnik'
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'socialgroup_setting', -10, -10, -10, 5, -10, -10
 		alterstrtimg = 18
-		pcs_stren = 45
+		pcs_stren = 75
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_vital = 45
 		pcs_jab = 35
 		pcs_punch = 35
@@ -1002,7 +1009,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'troublemaker':
 		traits['nerd_points'] = -50
 		gs 'intro_city_select', 'gopnik'
 		alterstrtimg = 19
-		pcs_stren = 45
+		pcs_stren = 65
 		pcs_react = 45
 		pcs_jab = 20
 		pcs_punch = 20
@@ -1093,7 +1100,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
 		school_clothing = 4
-		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_skin = 700
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_tan = 5
 		pcs_inhib = 35
 		pcs_vag = 1
@@ -1153,7 +1161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcast':
 		pcs_lip = 1
 		pcs_lashes = 0
 	end
-	pcs_skin = 0
+	pcs_skin = 500
 	pcs_tan = 0
 	pcs_butt = 4
 	grupTipe=5
@@ -1174,7 +1182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friendless':
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
 		pcs_chrsm = 20
 		pcs_observ = 20
-		pcs_skin = 10 
+		pcs_skin = 300 
 		pcs_makupskl = 10
 		npc_rel['A11'] -= 20
 		willpowermax = 80
@@ -1210,7 +1218,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uglyduckling':
 		genbsize = 28
 !!e cup for ideal bmi
 		pcs_inhib = 5
-		pcs_skin = 1
 		if player_avatar = 0:
 			pcs_eyesize = 0
 			pcs_lip = 0
@@ -1222,6 +1229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uglyduckling':
 		gm_purses[8] = 1
 		bag = 1
 		salo = 130
+		pcs_teeth = -2
 		willpowermax = 70
 		gs 'grades', 'grade_award', 'school', 'math', 55
 		gs 'grades', 'grade_award', 'school', 'rus', 25
@@ -1264,7 +1272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goodgirl':
 		church_moral = 40
 		money += 1000
 		shampoo = 10
-		pcs_skin = 200
+		pcs_skin = 500
 		$currentpursetype = 'gm'
 		currentpursenumber = 6
 		dolls_purses[6] = 1
@@ -1347,7 +1355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut':
 		end
 		school_clothing = 2
 		pcs_perform = 20
-		pcs_skin = 400
+		pcs_skin = 600
 		pcs_tan = 20
 		pcs_vag = 10
 		pcs_ass = 10
@@ -1413,8 +1421,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goth':
 		genbsize = 13
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
 		salo = 55
-		pcs_chrsm = 40
-		pcs_intel = 40
+		pcs_chrsm = 45
+		pcs_intel = 45
 		pcs_sprt = 50
 		pcs_observ = 5
 		pcs_heels = 35
@@ -1422,7 +1430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goth':
 		pcs_danc = 20
 		pcs_artskls = 20
 		pcs_sewng = 20
-		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_skin = 700
 	    pcs_inhib = 25
 		willpowermax = 100
 		if player_avatar = 0:

locations/intro_sg_select.qsrc

@@ -14,22 +14,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 !!	Body
 	pcs_hgt = 170
+	pcs_teeth = 0
 	dick = 0
 	pcs_energy = 60
 	pcs_hydra = 60
 	pcs_sleep = 70
 !!	Stats
-	pcs_stren = 25
+	pcs_stren = 35
 	strenbuf = 10
-	pcs_agil = 25
+	pcs_agil = 35
 	agilbuf = 10
-	pcs_vital = 25
+	pcs_vital = 35
 	vitalbuf = 10
-	pcs_intel = 25
-	pcs_sprt = 25
-	pcs_react = 25
-	pcs_chrsm = 25
-	pcs_prcptn = 25
+	pcs_intel = 35
+	pcs_sprt = 35
+	pcs_react = 35
+	pcs_chrsm = 35
+	pcs_prcptn = 35
 	pcs_magik = 0
 
 	pcs_heels = 5
@@ -415,17 +416,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
 	grupTipe=3
 	money += 3000
 	shampoo = 20
+	sanpad = 40
 	if player_avatar = 0:
 		pcs_eyesize = 1
 		pcs_lip = 1
 		pcs_lashes = 0
 	end
 	pcs_butt = 8
-	pcs_intel = 40
+	pcs_intel = 45
 	pcs_compskl = 20
 	pcs_chess = 20
 	pcs_gaming = 20
-	pcs_skin = 20
+	pcs_skin = 500
 	pcs_inhib = 10
 	pcs_heels = 10
 	pcs_makupskl = 15
@@ -482,7 +484,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerdqueen':
 			pcs_lip = 2
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
-		pcs_skin = 400
+		pcs_skin = 700
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_butt = 12
 		genbsize = 22
 !!d cup for ideal bmi
@@ -517,11 +520,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goodstudent':
 		traits['nerd_status'] = 3
 		alterstrtimg = 9
 		if glass < 1 : glass = 1
-		pcs_intel = 50
+		pcs_intel = 60
 		pcs_instrmusic = 10
 		pcs_artskls = 10
 		money += 2000
-		pcs_skin = 200
 		salo = 93
 		genbsize = 18
 !!c cup for ideal bmi
@@ -558,12 +560,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computergeek':
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'nerd'
 		alterstrtimg = 10
 		if glass < 1 : glass = 1
-		pcs_intel = 45
+		pcs_intel = 55
 		pcs_compskl = 40
 		pcs_comphckng = 20
 		pcs_gaming = 30
 		internet = 20
-		pcs_skin = 200
+		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_teeth = 1
 		salo = 56
 		pcs_inhib = 20
 		npc_rel['A152'] += 10
@@ -599,11 +602,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chessplayer':
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'nerd'
 		alterstrtimg = 11
-		pcs_intel = 45
+		pcs_intel = 55
 		pcs_prcptn = 40
 		pcs_react = 40
 		pcs_chess = 40
-		pcs_skin = 250
 		salo = 97
 		pcs_inhib = 15
 		chessyear = year
@@ -629,18 +631,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chessplayer':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'jock':
-	pcs_sprt = 40
-	pcs_stren = 40
-	pcs_vital = 40
-	pcs_react = 40
-	pcs_agil = 40
+	pcs_sprt = 45
+	pcs_stren = 75
+	pcs_vital = 45
+	pcs_react = 45
+	pcs_agil = 45
 	genbsize = 12
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
-	pcs_skin = 400
+	pcs_skin = 600
 	pcs_butt = 12
 	kosmetica = 10
 	stanok = 10
 	shampoo = 20
+	sanpad = 20
 	tampon = 20
 	pcs_run = 20
 	pcs_bushcraft = 5
@@ -731,10 +734,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dancer':
 		alterstrtimg = 13
 		pcs_sprt = 45
 		pcs_agil = 50
-		pcs_chrsm = 35
+		pcs_chrsm = 40
 		pcs_perform = 35
 		pcs_makupskl = 40
-		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_skin = 700
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_tan = 5
 		salo = 50
 		if player_avatar = 0:
@@ -818,7 +822,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'football':
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'jock'
 		alterstrtimg = 15
-		pcs_stren = 45
+		pcs_stren = 80
 		pcs_react = 45
 		pcs_vital = 45
 		salo = 80
@@ -854,9 +858,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'football':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cool':
-	pcs_sprt = 40
-	pcs_chrsm = 40
-	pcs_prcptn = 40
+	pcs_sprt = 45
+	pcs_chrsm = 45
+	pcs_prcptn = 45
 	pcs_icesktng = 10
 	pcs_danc = 10
 	pcs_persuas = 30
@@ -865,6 +869,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cool':
 	kosmetica = 20
 	shampoo = 20
 	stanok = 20
+	sanpad = 20
 	tampon = 20
 	money += 1000
 	grupvalue[1] = 800
@@ -884,7 +889,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cool':
 		pcs_lip = 2
 		pcs_lashes = 1
 	end
-	pcs_skin = 500
+	pcs_skin = 700
 	pcs_butt = 16
 	pcs_tan = 5
 	npc_rel['A33'] += 10
@@ -900,7 +905,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'socialite':
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'cool'
 		alterstrtimg = 16
-		pcs_chrsm = 45
+		pcs_chrsm = 50
 		genbsize = 18
 !!c cup for ideal bmi
 		pcs_humint = 40
@@ -954,7 +959,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 			pcs_lashes = 2
 		end
 		school_clothing = 6
-		pcs_skin = 600
+		pcs_skin = 800
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_tan = 50
 		genbsize = 22
 !!d cup for ideal bmi
@@ -996,11 +1002,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
-	pcs_sprt = 35
-	pcs_stren = 35
-	pcs_vital = 35
-	pcs_react = 35
-	pcs_agil = 35
+	pcs_sprt = 40
+	pcs_stren = 50
+	pcs_vital = 40
+	pcs_react = 40
+	pcs_agil = 40
 	genbsize = 13
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
 	pcs_inhib = 25
@@ -1009,6 +1015,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
 	kosmetica = 10
 	shampoo = 20
 	stanok = 10
+	sanpad = 30
+	tampon = 10
 	siga = 20
 	fakepassport = 1
 	pirsC = 1
@@ -1033,7 +1041,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
 		pcs_lip = 2
 		pcs_lashes = 1
 	end
-	pcs_skin = 400
+	pcs_skin = 600
 	pcs_vag = 1
 	pcs_throat = 1
 	pcs_butt = 8
@@ -1055,13 +1063,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnikstart':
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'gopnik'
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'socialgroup_setting', -10, -10, -10, 5, -10, -10
 		alterstrtimg = 18
-		pcs_stren = 40
-		pcs_vital = 40
+		pcs_stren = 70
+		pcs_vital = 45
 		pcs_jab = 35
 		pcs_punch = 35
 		pcs_kick = 35
 		pcs_def = 35
 		salo = 86
+		pcs_teeth = 1
 		school_clothing = 5
 		npc_rel['A9'] += 10
 		npc_rel['A10'] += 10
@@ -1102,7 +1111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'troublemaker':
 		traits['nerd_points'] = -50
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'gopnik'
 		alterstrtimg = 19
-		pcs_stren = 40
+		pcs_stren = 60
 		pcs_react = 40
 		pcs_jab = 20
 		pcs_punch = 20
@@ -1158,11 +1167,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitekgf':
 		traits['nerd_points'] = -10
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'gopnik'
 		alterstrtimg = 20
-		pcs_sprt = 30
-		pcs_stren = 30
-		pcs_vital = 30
-		pcs_react = 30
-		pcs_agil = 30
 		pcs_chrsm = 40
 		genbsize = 32
 !!e cup for ideal bmi
@@ -1193,7 +1197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitekgf':
 			pcs_lip = 2
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
-		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_skin = 700
 		pcs_tan = 5
 		pcs_vag = 1
 		pcs_throat = 1
@@ -1247,7 +1251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
 		genbsize = 18
 !!c cup for ideal bmi
 		salo = 75
-		pcs_chrsm = 35
+		pcs_chrsm = 45
 		pcs_humint = 20
 		pcs_persuas = 10
 		pcs_makupskl = 40
@@ -1269,7 +1273,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
 		school_clothing = 4
-		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_skin = 700
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 		pcs_tan = 5
 		pcs_inhib = 35
 		pcs_vag = 1
@@ -1340,6 +1345,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcast':
 	pcs_tan = 0
 	grupTipe=5
 	shampoo = 20
+	sanpad = 40
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'friendless':
@@ -1355,7 +1361,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friendless':
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
 		pcs_chrsm = 20
 		pcs_observ = 20
-		pcs_skin = 100
+		pcs_skin = 400
+		pcs_teeth = 1
 		pcs_makupskl = 10
 		npc_rel['A11'] -= 20
 		grupvalue[1] = 50
@@ -1396,7 +1403,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uglyduckling':
 		genbsize = 28
 !!e cup for ideal bmi
 		pcs_inhib = 5
-		pcs_skin = 1
+		pcs_teeth = -2
 		if player_avatar = 0:
 			pcs_eyesize = 0
 			pcs_lip = 0
@@ -1447,7 +1454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goodgirl':
 		church_moral = 40
 		money += 1000
 		shampoo = 10
-		pcs_skin = 200
+		pcs_skin = 500
 		$currentpursetype = 'gm'
 		currentpursenumber = 6
 		dolls_purses[6] = 1
@@ -1536,7 +1543,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut':
 		end
 		school_clothing = 2
 		pcs_perform = 20
-		pcs_skin = 400
+		pcs_skin = 600
 		pcs_tan = 20
 		pcs_vag = 10
 		pcs_ass = 10
@@ -1546,6 +1553,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut':
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 600
 		GspravkaT = 2
 		motherKnowSpravka = 2
+		sanpad = 0
+		tampon = 40
 		Gspassed = 0
 		salo = 70
 		stat['porn'] = 75
@@ -1605,8 +1614,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goth':
 		genbsize = 13
 !!b cup for ideal bmi
 		salo = 55
-		pcs_chrsm = 35
-		pcs_intel = 35
+		pcs_chrsm = 40
+		pcs_intel = 40
 		pcs_sprt = 45
 		pcs_observ = 5
 		pcs_heels = 30
@@ -1614,7 +1623,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goth':
 		pcs_danc = 10
 		pcs_artskls = 20
 		pcs_sewng = 20
-		pcs_skin = 500
+		pcs_skin = 700
+		pcs_teeth = -1
 	    pcs_inhib = 25
 		willpowermax = 100
 		if player_avatar = 0:

locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Cats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week, on Fridays.'
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Cats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Monday through Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week, on Fridays.'
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workFabrika = 1:'You work as a seamstress in the factory in Pavlovsk. Work is every weekday, with weekends off. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.'
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and TourGuide = 1:'You work as a tour guide in the Pavlovsk park. Work is any day during the summer holidays for 6 hours, starting between 08:00 and 12:00. Salary is 1,000 <b>₽</b> .'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and TourGuide = 1:'You work as a tour guide in the Pavlovsk park. Work is any day during the summer holidays for 8 hours, starting between 08:00 and 12:00. Salary is 1,000 <b>₽</b> .'
 	if workrin = 1:'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as a clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.'
 	if maidqw = 1:
 		'You work in the Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 375 <b>₽</b> plus tips.'

locations/pav_park.qsrc

@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	elseif month >= 6 and month <= 8 and TourGuide = 1:
 		if hour >= 8 and hour <= 12:
-			act 'Work as Tour Guide (6:00)':gt 'tour_guide', 'tourstart'
+			act 'Work as Tour Guide (8:00)':gt 'tour_guide', 'tourstart'
 		end
 	elseif (month >= 9 or month <= 5) and TourGuide = 1:
 		'Your work as a tour guide has finished now that it is no longer the summer holidays.'

locations/saveupdater.qsrc

@@ -1252,6 +1252,7 @@ if ((100*version_major +version_minor)*100+version_revision)*100+version_patch
 	!!update base appearance to the new calculation
 	gs 'AppearanceSystem', 'UpdateBaseAppearnce'
 	gs 'AppearanceSystem'
+	if $wloc = 'default':$wloc = 'default1'
 end
 
 gs 'saveg'

locations/wardrobe.qsrc

@@ -869,6 +869,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'default_sport_options':
 	else
 		if default_sport_number[1] = 0:
 			act'Put on your sports clothes':
+				default_sport_number[1] = 1
 				$lastwornclothingtype['sport'] = $clothingworntype
 				lastwornclothingnumber['sport'] = clothingwornnumber
 				lastwornunderwear['sport'] = underwear['type']
@@ -891,6 +892,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'default_sport_options':
 			end
 		else
 			act'Put your regular clothes back on':
+				default_sport_number[1] = 0
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear', $lastwornclothingtype['sport'], lastwornclothingnumber['sport']
 
 				if lastwornunderwear['sport'] = 2: