chopeks 4 years ago
parent
commit
1aa123d9a8

+ 1 - 1
locations/BDSM.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ act 'Begin participating in the shooting':
 !!Image needed			if pcs_haircol = 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/redhead_3.jpg"></center>'
 !!Image needed			if pcs_haircol = 3:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/blonde_3.jpg"></center>'
 
-			'You purse your lips and start sucking on the first cock while vigorously pistoning the other shaft with your hand. You alternate sucking and pistoning each cock with gusto, going as far as trying to swallow both simultaneously all while making eye contact with the lense in the hope enticing your viewers.'
+			'You purse your lips and start sucking on the first cock while vigorously pistoning the other shaft with your hand. You alternate sucking and pistoning each cock with gusto, going as far as trying to swallow both simultaneously all while making eye contact with the lens in the hope enticing your viewers.'
 
 			act 'Get into doggy-style':
 				cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/BDSM_Club.qsrc

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 		'"Well... everything here seems to be in order, there are no issues. Let''s sign some papers. A mere formality, to formally record, that you have grasped everything.'
 		'The man puts a sheet of paper on the table, take a videocamera from the draw and points it at you and clicks the button.'
 		'"Read aloud and sign."'
-		'You take the sheet and read "The application for voluntary informed consent" a long, binding document filled with legal terms, confirming your consent to voluntarily participate in actions of a sexual nature, which may be humiliating or degrading in nature and be accompanied by mild corporal punishment. You are not a lawyer, but you understand, this covers them if somthing goes wrong and takes every step to prevent that.'
+		'You take the sheet and read "The application for voluntary informed consent" a long, binding document filled with legal terms, confirming your consent to voluntarily participate in actions of a sexual nature, which may be humiliating or degrading in nature and be accompanied by mild corporal punishment. You are not a lawyer, but you understand, this covers them if something goes wrong and takes every step to prevent that.'
 		'"I agree."'
 		'"Well," the woman puts her hands together and looks at you. Who do you want to be? Top or bottom?'
 		'"I do not know," you shrug. "What does that mean?"'
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 				'"There is a registration fee of 10,000 <b>₽</b>. You should wear an expensive or formal clothing."'
 				'"That seems reasonable" You reply.'
 				'"If you find a submissive and come together, then they can earn you tips."'
-				'"Before you can get started, you will have some orientation under the guidance of an experienced mistress." She points at herself, "The cost of this is covered by your registation fee. If you are satisfied, sign this document."'
+				'"Before you can get started, you will have some orientation under the guidance of an experienced mistress." She points at herself, "The cost of this is covered by your registration fee. If you are satisfied, sign this document."'
 				'You sign the document. The man places the paper in a folder.'
 				'As you are leaving, you think, where will you get the money for the registration fee and if you can persuade someone to come here as a sub.'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'BDSM_Club', 'start'

+ 1 - 1
locations/BDSM_training.qsrc

@@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'd_start':
 					'"This isn''t actually required as I have covered the rules, except to say you must wear expensive or formal clothing when visiting the club. So this is a little bonus for you."'
 					'You do feel quite aroused and are about to thank Elektra, when she hands you a body massager. Normally she would have to ask to cum, but as this is your treat, you can stop when ever you like. For the first time since you met Eletra she cracks a smile.'
 					'Using the body massager you tease the sub for about 10 minutes, but stop short of letting her orgasm. Eletra surprises you by kissing you on the cheek, "I think I''m going to like having you around."'
-					'She walks back to the front gate with you and gives you a shiny new memebership card. Suddenly realising she is still in her leather outfit she blushes lightly and briskly walks back.'
+					'She walks back to the front gate with you and gives you a shiny new membership card. Suddenly realising she is still in her leather outfit she blushes lightly and briskly walks back.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe_give', 10, 'dom', 'lesbian'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'lesbian'
 					minut -= 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ elseif fotoCFNMsex > 0:
 
 elseif fotoCFNMblowjobCum > 0:
 	!!cum on face in the strip club
-	$kompromatFoto = 'In the photo you are sitting infront of a guy, kissing his cock. There seems to be cum on your face. This photo must have been taken in the stripclub.'
+	$kompromatFoto = 'In the photo you are sitting in front of a guy, kissing his cock. There seems to be cum on your face. This photo must have been taken in the stripclub.'
 
 elseif fotoCFNMblowjob > 0:
 	!!sucked in front of everyone

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -1252,7 +1252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Rescue':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big5.jpg"></center>'
 		end		
-		'You cry for help then suddenly, the door bursts open and Fedor storms into the room and punches the guy in the face knocking him into the wall. The guy grabed his face in pain as Fedor approached him then drove his knee into the guy''s face, breaking his nose. Fedor grabed the guy then dragged him into one of the stalls where he dipped the guy''s head into the toilet and began drowning him while shouting "How dare you touch my girl! <b>I WILL FUCKING KILL YOU!</b>"'
+		'You cry for help then suddenly, the door bursts open and Fedor storms into the room and punches the guy in the face knocking him into the wall. The guy grabbed his face in pain as Fedor approached him then drove his knee into the guy''s face, breaking his nose. Fedor grabbed the guy then dragged him into one of the stalls where he dipped the guy''s head into the toilet and began drowning him while shouting "How dare you touch my girl! <b>I WILL FUCKING KILL YOU!</b>"'
 
 		act 'Calm Fedor':
 			*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/_stock_item_info.qsrc

@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ $item_info['painkiller'] = '<center><b>Painkillers</b></center><br>A pack of pil
 $item_info['tampon'] = '<center><b>Tampons</b></center><br>A pack of cylinder-shape cotton swabs with a string that is capable absorb menstrual fluids during your period.'
 $item_info['sanpad'] = '<center><b>Sanitary napkins</b></center><br>A pack of absorbent towels that provide protection during your period. They attach to the inside of panties to avoid any leakage onto your clothes'
 $item_info['breastpump'] = '<center><b>Breast Pump</b></center><br>A breast pump is a mechanical device that lactating women use to extract milk from their breasts. This is a manual model and comes with one bottle.'
-$item_info['bpbottles'] = '<center><b>Breastmilk Bottle S</b></center><br>Used to collect breastmilk with a breast pump. This set contains three 150ml bottles.'
-$item_info['bpbottlem'] = '<center><b>Breastmilk Bottle M</b></center><br>Used to collect breastmilk with a breast pump. This set contains two 250ml bottles.'
+$item_info['bpbottles'] = '<center><b>Breastmilk Bottle S</b></center><br>Used to collect breast milk with a breast pump. This set contains three 150ml bottles.'
+$item_info['bpbottlem'] = '<center><b>Breastmilk Bottle M</b></center><br>Used to collect breast milk with a breast pump. This set contains two 250ml bottles.'
 $item_info['bpnipplebalm'] = '<center><b>Nipplebalm</b></center><br>Nipplebalm is used to ease sore nipples after and before breastfeeding or while using a breast pump. One tube lasts for 20 uses.'
 $item_info['fairy'] = '<center><b>Dishwashing detergent</b></center><br>A liquid dishwashing soap with a light almond scent. It claims to cut through grease and grime with ease AND leave your hands feeling soft and moisturized.'
 $item_info['poroshok'] = '<center><b>Clothing detergent</b></center><br>A box of powdered clothing detergent with a light flowery scent that leaves your clothes smelling fresh and clean.'

+ 3 - 3
locations/balkon2.qsrc

@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masopt':
 			if badildo = 2:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/balcony_dildo2.jpg"></center>'
 
 			'You begin to rub yourself, having your hand moving in small circles as you feel your wetness growing. Feeling aroused enough you take out your dildo and begin teasing your clit by gently rubbing the area.'
-			'As you stop teasing yourself, you slowly push the head inside your vagina. You slowly begin to fuck yourself picking up the pace. The feeling of your inside being streched out is great and you let out a quiet wimp as you keep on playing with the dildo.'
+			'As you stop teasing yourself, you slowly push the head inside your vagina. You slowly begin to fuck yourself picking up the pace. The feeling of your inside being stretched out is great and you let out a quiet wimp as you keep on playing with the dildo.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			$orgasm_txt = 'After pleasuring yourself intensely with the dildo for a few minutes and as you reach orgasm you try to keep your voice down as you don''t want to get exposed.'
 			
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'finger_solo':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/balcony_mas1-8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are way too horny to pace yourself now, as you use one more finger to strech out your inside, expanding the pleasant feeling. While trying your hardest to keep as quiet as possible, the walls begin to crumble as you begin moaning making sure that your closest neighbours can hear you.'
+				'You are way too horny to pace yourself now, as you use one more finger to stretch out your inside, expanding the pleasant feeling. While trying your hardest to keep as quiet as possible, the walls begin to crumble as you begin moaning making sure that your closest neighbours can hear you.'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 3, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'finger_solo':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/balcony_orgasm.jpg"></center>'
 						
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-						$orgasm_txt = 'Within seconds your toes curl as you feel a wave of ecstasy sweeping all over your body, your legs and hands are shaking in delight of a possiblity that someone might have noticed you.'
+						$orgasm_txt = 'Within seconds your toes curl as you feel a wave of ecstasy sweeping all over your body, your legs and hands are shaking in delight of a possibility that someone might have noticed you.'
 						'After a few moments you withdraw your fingers from your stretched vagina, still pulsating from the intense orgasm.'
 						gs 'stat'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/barbershop.qsrc

@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dyehair':
 !			gs 'stat'
 !			'"I want to try something really different." you tell him.'
 !			'"And what would that be?" Mr. Syomin asks cheerfully.'
-!			'"I''d like a nice froest green, like summer leaves." you announce.'
+!			'"I''d like a nice forest green, like summer leaves." you announce.'
 !			'"As you wish, although I''not done too many like that. Please have a seat.", he says and turns around one of the chairs for you.'
 !
 !			act 'Sit down':

+ 1 - 1
locations/bedr.qsrc

@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					pcs_horny += 30
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/h2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You put on the strapon and pull out the butt plug. You gently move the shaft of the strapon inside his ass, <<$husName>>  moves but doesn''t wake up. You continue to slowly move it in and out, trying not to wake him. You notice his cock is getting rock hard and <<$husName>> starts to moan softly, still not waking up. Hopeing that he won''t wake up, you increase your speed and push the entire length of the strapon into his has. You see his hard dick and you start to stroke it in addition to pounding him like a little bitch. Realizing he is not far from cumming, you pull out and funish him by giving him a blowjob. He cums inside it, you swallow it down and clean his cock. You carefully put back on his underpants.'
+					'You put on the strapon and pull out the butt plug. You gently move the shaft of the strapon inside his ass, <<$husName>>  moves but doesn''t wake up. You continue to slowly move it in and out, trying not to wake him. You notice his cock is getting rock hard and <<$husName>> starts to moan softly, still not waking up. Hopeing that he won''t wake up, you increase your speed and push the entire length of the strapon into his has. You see his hard dick and you start to stroke it in addition to pounding him like a little bitch. Realizing he is not far from cumming, you pull out and finish him by giving him a blowjob. He cums inside it, you swallow it down and clean his cock. You carefully put back on his underpants.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 20

+ 1 - 1
locations/beg1.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		bronzebeg += 1 & money += 500 & 'You fought hard and managed to take 3rd place, earning a prize: You receive a bronze badge and a prize of 500 <b>₽</b>'
 	elseif begresult < 32:
 		gs 'fame', 'city', 'running', 3
-		silverbeg += 1 & money += 1000 & 'You fought hard and managed to take 2nd place, earning a prize: You reveice a silver badge and a prize of 1, 000 <b>₽</b>'
+		silverbeg += 1 & money += 1000 & 'You fought hard and managed to take 2nd place, earning a prize: You receive a silver badge and a prize of 1, 000 <b>₽</b>'
 	elseif begresult >= 32:
 		gs 'fame', 'city', 'running', 4
 		razradbeg = 2 & goldbeg += 1 & money += 2000 & 'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place! You receive a gold badge, a prize of 2, 000 <b>₽</b> and are now part of your club''s senior squad, representing it at the next city championship!'

+ 1 - 1
locations/belgang.qsrc

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workofdebt':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/strela/vadimbely.jpg"></center>'
 			'A few minutes later you arrive at an apartment block, it isn''t is great shape but Vadim leads you inside and up to a second floor apartment.'
 			'The apartment is actually in decent shape. The minimal amount of furniture and decorations don''t make it look very hospitable though, and you assume this might just be one of the places Vadim rented for business or pleasure, not for living in.'
-			'Noticing you''re spending too much time looking around and aren''t following him swiftly enough, he grabs you by your hair and pulls your face to his, roughly shoving his tongue in your mouth. You can smell the tabacco on his breath, and do your best to ignore the taste as he kisses you.'
+			'Noticing you''re spending too much time looking around and aren''t following him swiftly enough, he grabs you by your hair and pulls your face to his, roughly shoving his tongue in your mouth. You can smell the tobacco on his breath, and do your best to ignore the taste as he kisses you.'
 	
 			act 'Kiss him': gt 'BelSex', 'sex'
 		end

+ 2 - 2
locations/billsvid.qsrc

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	*clr & cla
 	bilsvidkiy = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/6.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$telsob>> climbs on the table and spreads her legs wide. Picking up the cue you deside to try and pot the pink in the middle pocket. <<$telsob>> diligently responds your movements and rhythm. A few minutes later collapsing on the table in a shuddering orgasm.'
+	'<<$telsob>> climbs on the table and spreads her legs wide. Picking up the cue you decide to try and pot the pink in the middle pocket. <<$telsob>> diligently responds your movements and rhythm. A few minutes later collapsing on the table in a shuddering orgasm.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/10.jpg"></center>'
-	'During the game <<$telsob>> is constantly trying to put her arms around you, she wraps her hand around your hips, then casually touchs your chest.'
+	'During the game <<$telsob>> is constantly trying to put her arms around you, she wraps her hand around your hips, then casually touches your chest.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/body.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # body
 
 !! I have gone through and added a new category of string variables, standardised to be used for descriptive writing. You will notice some duplication here -- this is for purposes of backwards compatibility, as if I completely rename and discard some of these strings,
-!! extant saved games will irrepairably break, and this would be Bad. One day down the line, most of the duplicated variables here can be culled, when there is a new release that warrants new saves being used, but until then the duplication needs to stay. Use of
+!! extant saved games will irreparably break, and this would be Bad. One day down the line, most of the duplicated variables here can be culled, when there is a new release that warrants new saves being used, but until then the duplication needs to stay. Use of
 !! strings for descriptions that do not begin with $pcdesc_ should be avoided, as it would be best to have everything standardised when moving forward into the present and future.
 !! Available strings follow this format: $pcdesc_type, $pcdesc_typewordy, and $pcdesc_typerandom. The last will give a new string each time, to allow for repeatedly referencing something accurately without it becoming repetitive.  Not EVERYTHING has a wordy 
 !! or even random variation, but these should work regardless -- they just may use a non-wordy, or non-random version, if it is something that does not really warrant such. 

+ 22 - 22
locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -207,8 +207,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		*nl
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pinchandfingertiedtobed.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'He jumps on to you, grabing your ass and pinching your cheeks.'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It..hrts.. Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a consciousness for a brief moment.'
+		'He jumps on to you, grabbing your ass and pinching your cheeks.'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It..hurts.. Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a consciousness for a brief moment.'
 		'Aroused with your reaction, he pushes his finger into your pussy, one by one until there are four of them.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"What a whore! She''s already wet!"</font>'
 		'He uses the juiced fingers and thrusts them into your anus, once again forcing you back to a living world.'
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		*nl
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/wakeupboundonbedanalplug.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You wake up, still being bound to the bed. Behind the curtians you can see that it is late morning.'
+		'You wake up, still being bound to the bed. Behind the curtains you can see that it is late morning.'
 		'Your head is in pain and spinning, your stomach is like on a water.'
 		'You feel strange fullness in your abdomen and your pussy and anus itch.'
 		'As you try to struggle out of the bounds you realize what has happened.. and what is left as a reminder..'
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"OK, I understand. I''ll think it through.."</font>'
 			'He looks at you as if he''s trying to read in you:'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Oh I think you will come soon enough. When you do so, go to whoever is behind the bar and tell him that you want a special drink. The Blue Blooded Russian. Everything else will be taken care of."</font>'
-			'He seems to be finished talking to you. On his way back to the door he tossses a pile of your clothes your way. Without a word he shuts the door and is gone.'
+			'He seems to be finished talking to you. On his way back to the door he tosses a pile of your clothes your way. Without a word he shuts the door and is gone.'
 			hotelWhore = 1
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/abusedface.jpg"></center>'
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar:order:password':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/whisper.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'"Oh I see. Come with me please." he leads you to the lobby, looking for the Errand Boy. He finds him leaning on a wall near the elevator.'
-	'"This young miss is here for the special drink. The Blue Blooded Bussian."'
+	'"This young miss is here for the special drink. The Blue Blooded Russian."'
 	'The boy just nods and saying not a word leads you to the elevator. "Please look the other way, I now have to enter the combination."'
 	act 'Turn around and don''t look':gt 'brothel','brothel:elevator'
 end
@@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:start':
 	'<h3>Playroom</h3>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/playroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'This room is designed for any perverted action you could think of. The thick walls indicate it is soundproof, though the walls are painted with smooth coating, probably to be easily washable.'
-	'It is quite spacy, in each corner there is a different bounding device. Next to the already locked doors lies large boxes with who-knows-what kinds of devices.'
+	'It is quite spacious, in each corner there is a different bounding device. Next to the already locked doors lies large boxes with who-knows-what kinds of devices.'
 	'The only thing that connects you with the outside are cameras in each corner of the room, watchfully recording all that happens here.'
 	if rageMeter <= 100:
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"So what will we do today, my little painslut?"</font>'
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play':
 		analplay = 1
 
 		if orgasmMeter = 100:
-			'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>So my little lightbulp, ready for the next step?</font>'
+			'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>So my little light bulb, ready for the next step?</font>'
 			fin = rand (1, 4)
 			if fin = 1:
 				$finType = 'behind:anal'
@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckMouth':
 	*nl
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedonbackfuckmouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and kness tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
+	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Uhm...a fucking of my pussy? Or anus?"</font>'
@@ -1181,7 +1181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckAnal':
 	*nl
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedonbackfuckanal.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and kness tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
+	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
 	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your...anus!'
@@ -1210,7 +1210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckVaginal':
 	*nl
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedonbackfuckvaginal.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and kness tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
+	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
 	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your...pussy!'
@@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackVibroPussy':
 	'He puts the top of the device right on your exposed pussy lips, also spreading them to get right onto your clitoris.'
 	'Then he slowly reaches for the button with big red ON.'
 	gs 'pain', 3, 'clitoris', 'bind'
-	$orgasm_or = 'What comes next is too intesive for you, forcing you into an orgasm mixed with pain and loud screams!'
+	$orgasm_or = 'What comes next is too intensive for you, forcing you into an orgasm mixed with pain and loud screams!'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe', 15, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1326,7 +1326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackWhipPussy':
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Is your pussy a sensitive one, girl?"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..I would say regularly sensitive, master."</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"After this, it will be nothing like regular, haha!"</font>'
-	'With those words his face turn grim - and you get unpleasenat shiver on your back.'
+	'With those words his face turn grim - and you get unpleasant shiver on your back.'
 	'Your fears come true in few seconds - he takes out a whip!'
 	'He puts the top of the whip right on your exposed pussy lips, enjoying the frightened face you are giving him.'
 	'Then suddenly he starts to punish the most sensitive part of your young body, giving you no mercy.'
@@ -1423,7 +1423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 		gs 'pain', 3, 'nipples', 'pierce'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'He comes with a set of needles of various sizes. Judging by the fancy bag he carries them in, he is not doing this to a first girl..'
-		'One by one he takes them out of the bag and slowly penetrates your aearola.'
+		'One by one he takes them out of the bag and slowly penetrates your areola.'
 		'It hurts like being at doctor taking blood, but worse, because they don''t take blood from your nipples in the hospital!'
 		'When you think it''s over he takes out one large needle with longer rod than the others..'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now where do you think this one goes?"</font>'
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:whiptits':
 	'<b>Orgasm meter: <<orgasmMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/whiptits.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a whip and repeatedly punishes your tender tities..'
+	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a whip and repeatedly punishes your tender titties..'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww! Not.. Any.. More.. Please... Oww.."</font> with each stroke you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1520,7 +1520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:canetits':
 	'<b>Orgasm meter: <<orgasmMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/canetits.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a wooden cane and repeatedly punishes your tender tities..'
+	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a wooden cane and repeatedly punishes your tender titties..'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww! Not.. Any.. More.. Please... Oww.."</font> with each stroke you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1536,8 +1536,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:pinchtits':
 	'<b>Orgasm meter: <<orgasmMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pinchtits.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a wooden pins and pinches your sensitive nipples and earola.'
-	'First it is just unpleasenat but the repeated attacks on your tits make it worse with each attempt..'
+	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a wooden pins and pinches your sensitive nipples and areolas.'
+	'First it is just unpleasant but the repeated attacks on your tits make it worse with each attempt..'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww!"</font> with each pinch you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1554,7 +1554,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:punchtits':
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/punchtits.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client closes his strong manly fists.'
-	'Your tender tities are but punchbags for as if this was a boxing session!'
+	'Your tender titties are but punchbags for as if this was a boxing session!'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww!"</font> with each punch you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1644,9 +1644,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:hangbytits':
 	'<b>Orgasm meter: <<orgasmMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/hangbytits.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Client attaches anoter rope to your already bound tits, using a pulley attached to the ceiling.'
+	'Client attaches another rope to your already bound tits, using a pulley attached to the ceiling.'
 	'You start to shake in the moment you connect the ropes attached to your breasts and the pulley above you..'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"No Master, you can''t be serious!! You will tear the off! It is against the rules, stop it!</font> you desparetly try to avoid whats coming.'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"No Master, you can''t be serious!! You will tear the off! It is against the rules, stop it!</font> you desperately try to avoid whats coming.'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"NO, it''s not against the rules. They won''t tear off, you''ll see!"</font> with those words he starts to pull the rope up, leveling you from the ground just by your tits.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"AYYYEEEEEEEEEEEE!</font> you yell more from horror than actual pain, as you slowly realize..'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
@@ -1703,7 +1703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:electrodesAss':
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'The sensation fades away in a few seconds, leaving a feeling of something being sticked to your bottom parts.'
+	'The sensation fades away in a few seconds, leaving a feeling of something being stuck to your bottom parts.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $sessionB
 end
 
@@ -1812,7 +1812,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:pushplugout':
 	'<b>Orgasm meter: <<orgasmMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pushplugout.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Unable to withstand all the pain your muscles pull themself in a massive cramp, causing the anal plug fall out like an apple from a tree.'
+	'Unable to withstand all the pain your muscles pull themselves in a massive cramp, causing the anal plug fall out like an apple from a tree.'
 
 	chRod = rand(0, 100)
 	if chRod < prob_chRod:

+ 1 - 1
locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if npc_QW['A34'] > 20 and npc_QW['A34'] < 25: npc_QW['A34'] = 20
 ! npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1 - Kolka does know sveta is lactating
 ! npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 2 - Kolka does know that sveta was lactating
 ! npc_breastfeed_by_sveta['A34'] = 0 or 1 - Kolka was not/was breastfeed by sveta
-! npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] = 0 or 1 - Does Kolka know how svetas breastmilk taste? 0 = no, 1 = yes
+! npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] = 0 or 1 - Does Kolka know how svetas breast milk taste? 0 = no, 1 = yes
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':

+ 1 - 1
locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if npc_QW['A34'] > 20 and npc_QW['A34'] < 25: npc_QW['A34'] = 20
 ! npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1 - Kolka does know sveta is lactating
 ! npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 2 - Kolka does know that sveta was lactating
 ! npc_breastfeed_by_sveta['A34'] = 0 or 1 - Kolka was not/was breastfeed by sveta
-! npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] = 0 or 1 - Does Kolka know how svetas breastmilk taste? 0 = no, 1 = yes
+! npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] = 0 or 1 - Does Kolka know how svetas breast milk taste? 0 = no, 1 = yes
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 	dick = npc_dick['A<<34>>']

+ 1 - 1
locations/buklinik.qsrc

@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'registr3':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b>Mercy Clinic. desk</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/bukli_reg.jpg"></center>'
-	'In registature usually sit either Karina or Regina.'
+	'At register desk usually sit either Karina or Regina.'
 
 	act 'In the corridor':gt 'buklinik', 'holl'
 end

+ 8 - 8
locations/club.qsrc

@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toi':
 	menu_off = 0
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Shit, there''s a very long queue infront of the womens toilet. You can''t tell how long this is going to take.'
+	'Shit, there''s a very long queue in front of the womens toilet. You can''t tell how long this is going to take.'
 
 	act 'Wait in line':
 		cla
@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar':
 		elseif temp = 13:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand10.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice a women who is giving a guy a blowjob, then the women opens her mouth, with the cock in her hand and the guy pours champangne into her mouth.'
+			'You notice a women who is giving a guy a blowjob, then the women opens her mouth, with the cock in her hand and the guy pours champagne into her mouth.'
 			'You''re too drunk to continue partying here. The security has to escort you out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
@@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 					spafinloc = 11
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/clubfacial1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You grabed his cock and point his "gun" at your face. He groans as he cums and you can feel hot streams of semen covering your face.'
+					'You grabbed his cock and point his "gun" at your face. He groans as he cums and you can feel hot streams of semen covering your face.'
 
 					act 'Stand up':gt 'club', 'tou'
 				end
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			spafinloc = 12
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/clubswallow.jpg"></center>'
-			'The guy came in your mouth, you can feel his hot and salty semen pouring into it. Without hesistation you swallow it, you can''t tell why, but somehow you start to enjoy the taste of fresh, warm sperm.'
+			'The guy came in your mouth, you can feel his hot and salty semen pouring into it. Without hesitation you swallow it, you can''t tell why, but somehow you start to enjoy the taste of fresh, warm sperm.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -826,7 +826,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/clubsex.jpg"></center>'
 		'You turn around and kneel on the toilet seat. "Fuck me", you say and present your ass and pussy to him.'
-		'You don''t have to tell him twice, he grabs your hips, positions his cock infront of your pussy and with a strong push he enters your vagina. You moan with pleasure and you are surprised by the sheer force he used to enter you.'
+		'You don''t have to tell him twice, he grabs your hips, positions his cock in front of your pussy and with a strong push he enters your vagina. You moan with pleasure and you are surprised by the sheer force he used to enter you.'
 		'He grunts heavy as he fucks you like the bitch in heat that you are. He continues with force and speed, if he''s slowing down, you can''t notice it, but it doesn''t take long and both of you are reaching the state of orgasm.'
 		'You look at him, "Don''t you dare to cum inside.". In between his grunts he nods and a few seconds later he cums outside of you, you are relived that he at least acts a bit like a gentleman.'
 		spafinloc = 14
@@ -1165,7 +1165,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lezbsort2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">WC</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/sortkuni.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit donw on the toilet and move your feet up. "Lick it", you tell her. She seductively bites her lips and happily follows your orders. The woman parts your pussy lips and begins to lick your cunt. Every so often she switches between licking your pink flesh and your flower. She doesn''t stop until you cry out in pleasure and cum.'
+	'You sit down on the toilet and move your feet up. "Lick it", you tell her. She seductively bites her lips and happily follows your orders. The woman parts your pussy lips and begins to lick your cunt. Every so often she switches between licking your pink flesh and your flower. She doesn''t stop until you cry out in pleasure and cum.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'dinSex', 'std_trigger_oral'
@@ -1247,7 +1247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif clubr = 1:
-		'"OK <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you to go around the club getting people to try and hopfully switch to these spirits. You can''t go wrong here, just smile and give out free drinks."'
+		'"OK <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you to go around the club getting people to try and hopefully switch to these spirits. You can''t go wrong here, just smile and give out free drinks."'
 		'"No need to hold back with it, the suppliers are paying and if you''re curious and want to try it, don''t its horrible. I''ll see you back here in an hour."'
 		act 'Get to work':
 			cla
@@ -1280,7 +1280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club12.jpg"></center>'
 			if pcs_danc > rand (30, 100):
 				money += 300
-				'You put on a great show, getting alot of attention and drawing people up to dance.'
+				'You put on a great show, getting a lot of attention and drawing people up to dance.'
 				'Erik is very happy and pays you 300 <b>₽</b>.'
 			else
 				money += 200

+ 2 - 2
locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -106,10 +106,10 @@ $shower = {
 
 		if lactation['active'] > 0 and pain['nipples'] < 60 and lactation['pc_aware'] <= 0:
 			if pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts <= 0:
-				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk.<br>Using the breast pump regularily probably made you lactate!'
+				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk.<br>Using the breast pump regularly probably made you lactate!'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself <= 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
-				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk. Regularily massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
+				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk. Regularly massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
 				'During showering you clean your breasts and something catches your eye. White drops come from your nipples. It is milk. All that pumping and massaging your breasts probably caused you to lactate!<br>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/fit.qsrc

@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fitgirl':
 
 					act 'Go':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
 				elseif pcs_apprnc >= 80:
-					'The girl quickly turns around. She looks a little bit puzzled as she realizes that it was you who grabed her. She probably expected to see a guy and isn''t sure what to do.'
+					'The girl quickly turns around. She looks a little bit puzzled as she realizes that it was you who grabbed her. She probably expected to see a guy and isn''t sure what to do.'
 
 					act 'Take advantage of the confusion':
 						cla

+ 4 - 4
locations/gpoli.qsrc

@@ -1462,7 +1462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 							lact_ev['gpoli_milkedvolume'] = 0
 							lactation['pc_aware'] = 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/mward/pump_room.jpg"></center>'
-							'The nurse leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breastpump.'
+							'The nurse leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breast pump.'
 							'You sit down and the nurse invites you to take off your top.'
 							'Reluctantly, you pull up your shirt and present your breasts to her.'
 							'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/t<<tits>>.jpg"></center><br>'
@@ -1506,7 +1506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 									minut += 15
 									pcs_gpolimilkdonation = 3
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/mward/pump_room.jpg"></center>'
-									'The nurse leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breastpump.'
+									'The nurse leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breast pump.'
 									'You sit down and the nurse invites you to take off your top.'
 									if pain['nipples'] >= 60 and pcs_knows_nipplecream <= 0:
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/nipples/sore_nipple.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1590,7 +1590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 									minut += 15
 									pcs_gpolimilkdonation = 3
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/mward/pump_room.jpg"></center>'
-									'The nurse leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breastpump.'
+									'The nurse leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breast pump.'
 									'You sit down and the nurse invites you to take off your top.'
 									if pain['nipples'] >= 60 and pcs_knows_nipplecream <= 0:
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/nipples/sore_nipple.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1667,7 +1667,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward':
 						minut += 15
 						pcs_gpolimilkdonation = 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/mward/pump_room.jpg"></center>'
-						'The nurse smiles and gets up, then she leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breastpump.'
+						'The nurse smiles and gets up, then she leads you into a room. It is quiet in here. There is a chair a table and a breast pump.'
 						'You sit down and the nurse invites you to take off your top.'
 						if pain['nipples'] >= 60 and pcs_knows_nipplecream <= 0:
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/nipples/sore_nipple.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlovsk slut':
 		'"Stay away from us and go hang out with the other losers, I am sure you and Sonia have a lot in common now slut." Then she leans in close "Or I will show you what happens to sluts that don''t know their place." With that they turn and walk away. Not being part of the jock clique anymore the other students are ready to prey on your weakness as they either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
-		'A couple of students stand infront of you, wanting to get a better look at the slut based on what''s written on your locker, when you look at them they start laughing and then quickly hurry away from you as if you''ve been struck with the plague. You turn and try to find some of your friends, most seem to be hiding or when they see you coming hurry off. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim. As you''re about to say something he turns to you. "Please go away, I don''t know what got into you. But the things they say you have done." He looks disgusted. "I''m sorry but I can''t be seen hanging out with you, I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse."'
+		'A couple of students stand in front of you, wanting to get a better look at the slut based on what''s written on your locker, when you look at them they start laughing and then quickly hurry away from you as if you''ve been struck with the plague. You turn and try to find some of your friends, most seem to be hiding or when they see you coming hurry off. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim. As you''re about to say something he turns to you. "Please go away, I don''t know what got into you. But the things they say you have done." He looks disgusted. "I''m sorry but I can''t be seen hanging out with you, I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse."'
 		'When he notices the dejected look on your face as he''s told you off, ending with that you are an outcast he sighs a little. "I''m sorry I really am, but this is your own fault, I don''t know what you were thinking doing all those sex things and I don''t care, but please leave me alone." The last part he says loudly enough for others to hear, which causes some of the other students to laugh at you, as he wheels himself away from you decidedly. As you look around, most of the other students either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/gopnikslut.jpg"></center>'
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd outcast':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/outcast.jpg"></center>'
-	'A couple of students stand infront of you, wanting to get a better look at the slut based on what''s written on your locker, when you look at them they start laughing and then quickly hurry away from you as if you''ve been struck with the plague. You turn and try to find some of your friends, most seem to be hiding or when they see you coming hurry off. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim. As you''re about to say something he turns to you. "Please go away, I don''t know what got into you. But the things they say you have done." He looks disgusted. "I''m sorry but I can''t be seen hanging out with you, I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse." When he notices the dejected look on your face as he''s told you off, ending with that you are an outcast he sighs a little. "I''m sorry I really am, but this is your own fault, I don''t know what you were thinking doing all those sex things and I don''t care, but please leave me alone." The last part he says loudly enough for others to hear, which causes some of the other students to laugh at you, as he wheels himself away from you decidedly. As you look around, most of the other students either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
+	'A couple of students stand in front of you, wanting to get a better look at the slut based on what''s written on your locker, when you look at them they start laughing and then quickly hurry away from you as if you''ve been struck with the plague. You turn and try to find some of your friends, most seem to be hiding or when they see you coming hurry off. You finally manage to catch up to Gerasim. As you''re about to say something he turns to you. "Please go away, I don''t know what got into you. But the things they say you have done." He looks disgusted. "I''m sorry but I can''t be seen hanging out with you, I''ve got enough problems without you making it worse." When he notices the dejected look on your face as he''s told you off, ending with that you are an outcast he sighs a little. "I''m sorry I really am, but this is your own fault, I don''t know what you were thinking doing all those sex things and I don''t care, but please leave me alone." The last part he says loudly enough for others to hear, which causes some of the other students to laugh at you, as he wheels himself away from you decidedly. As you look around, most of the other students either start mocking you or actively look away. You grab your stuff and hurry to your next class.'
 	'<font color = red>*You have lost your social group and become an outcast.*</font>'
 	
 	grupvalue[1] -= 50

+ 1 - 1
locations/hunterLoveSex.qsrc

@@ -3509,7 +3509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_hunters_bj9':
 	'<center><H4>Hut</H4></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/kotovbj9'+rand(0,1)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 	h = rand(1,3)
-	'You start to rythmically bob your head up and down his cock, swallowing his member of deeper and deeper. You can feel the head of his cock resting at the back of your mouth and you do your best to swallow it down, squeezing it with the muscles in your throat.'
+	'You start to rhythmically bob your head up and down his cock, swallowing his member of deeper and deeper. You can feel the head of his cock resting at the back of your mouth and you do your best to swallow it down, squeezing it with the muscles in your throat.'
 	*pl
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 	gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc

@@ -1754,7 +1754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'striptease':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance4.jpg"></center>'
 								*nl
-								'You remove the bra and throw it on the table, the men cheer you on and you flash your breasts infront of them.'
+								'You remove the bra and throw it on the table, the men cheer you on and you flash your breasts in front of them.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10
 								gs 'stat'
 !!ToDo: Huntersex in the else is a dead end, if that is fixed, remove this comment and the next line (julzor)

+ 1 - 1
locations/kuhr2x.qsrc

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 								*clr
 								analorgasm += 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m13.jpg"></center>'
-								'<<$husName>> takes out his dick and starts to masturbate right infront of you, you''re surprised, because you expected he''d want to fuck you or something like that along the line. You sigh silently and continue to fuck your ass with the dildo. <<$husName>> now masturbates furiously, as your moaning becomes louder. Both of you realize, it won''t be long until either of you cums.'
+								'<<$husName>> takes out his dick and starts to masturbate right in front of you, you''re surprised, because you expected he''d want to fuck you or something like that along the line. You sigh silently and continue to fuck your ass with the dildo. <<$husName>> now masturbates furiously, as your moaning becomes louder. Both of you realize, it won''t be long until either of you cums.'
 								'With a final thrust, it''s you, who experiences the first orgasm and it''s so strong, that you fall off the couch onto the floor. You take the dildo out of your ass and lick it clean, while locking eyes with your husband. He finds this incredibly erotic and it takes him merely a few more seconds before he cums, spraying his salty fluids all over the couch and carpet. In the afterbliss of both of your orgasms you kiss each other passionately.'
 
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'

+ 41 - 41
locations/lact_bp.qsrc

@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bp_milking':
 					'As you prepare for pumping you weight your breasts in your hands. You feel that your breasts carry a large amount of milk and pumping will probably take a long time.'
 					'Getting relieve for your breasts with the manual breast pump will probably take at least <<pumptime>> minutes.'
 					if pcs_know_mward <= 0:
-						'You consider visiting a hospital to get help or buying a better breastpump.'
+						'You consider visiting a hospital to get help or buying a better breast pump.'
 						pcs_ask_mward_help = 1
 						pcs_knows_electric_pump = 1
 					end
@@ -446,11 +446,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'man_milking':
 				'You prepare yourself and weight your breasts in your hands. You feel that your breasts carry a large amount of milk and manually expressing it will probably take a long time.'
 				'Getting relieve for your breasts with manual expression will probably take at least <<pumptime>> minutes.'
 				if breastpump <= 0 and bp_unbox <= 1:
-					'You should consider buying a breastpump'
+					'You should consider buying a breast pump'
 				elseif breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox <= 1 and pain['nipples'] <= 60:
-					'You should consider using your breastpump.'
+					'You should consider using your breast pump.'
 				else
-					'You should consider the use of a breastpump.'
+					'You should consider the use of a breast pump.'
 				end
 				'Do you want to continue?'
 				act 'Don''t express':menu_off = 0 & gt $loc, $metka
@@ -513,11 +513,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bp_unbox_event':
 		cla
 		minut += 5
 		if $location_type = 'bathroom':
-			'You push down the toilet seat to sit down and slowly start to unbox your newly aquirred breast pump.'
+			'You push down the toilet seat to sit down and slowly start to unbox your newly acquired breast pump.'
 		elseif $location_type = 'private' and $locclass = 'bedr':
-			'You sit down on your bed and slowly start to unbox your newly aquirred breast pump.'
+			'You sit down on your bed and slowly start to unbox your newly acquired breast pump.'
 		elseif $location_type = 'private':
-			'You sit down and slowly start to unbox your newly aquirred breast pump.'
+			'You sit down and slowly start to unbox your newly acquired breast pump.'
 		end
 		if kid <= 0 and preg <= 0 and pregtimes <= 0 and pregchem <= 0 and bp_unbox <= 0:
 			'While examining it, you think about why you bought it in the first place. You are not pregnant nor do you have a kid that needs breast milk.'
@@ -544,37 +544,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bp_unbox_event':
 				cla
 				'You pull up your top to release your breasts'
 				'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/t<<tits>>.jpg"></center><br>'
-				'Your fingers glide around the sucktion cup of the breast pump, while your other hand holds the pump.'
+				'Your fingers glide around the suction cup of the breast pump, while your other hand holds the pump.'
 				'Making sure that no one is around, you lift the breast pump to your left breast. The cold cone feels uncomfortable on your nipple.'
 				milkedvolume = (func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 3, 1))/100
 				minut += 1
 				bp_unbox = 2
 				if lactation['active'] > 0 and milkedvolume > 0:
 					if milkedvolume <= 50:
-						'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-						'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
+						'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+						'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
 						'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected some milk, but it is just a small puddle in the bottle.'
 						'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_milkdrops.jpg"></center>'
 					elseif milkedvolume > 50 and milkedvolume <= 1500:
-						'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-						'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
-						'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected <<milkedvolume/10>>ml of your breastmilk.'
+						'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+						'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
+						'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected <<milkedvolume/10>>ml of your breast milk.'
 						'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_half.jpg"></center>'
 					else
-						'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-						'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
+						'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+						'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
 						'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You easily filed the breast pump bottle with your breast milk just with this little pumping.'
 						'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_full.jpg"></center>'
 					end
 					'You nod at the breast pump, thinking it will come in handy.'
 				elseif lactation['active'] > 0 and milkedvolume <= 0:
-					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it.'
+					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it.'
 					'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected some milk, but it is just a small puddle in the bottle.'
 					'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_milkdrops.jpg"></center>'
 				else
-					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it.'
+					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it.'
 					'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. As expected no milk was collected in the bottle.'
 					'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/breast_pump.jpg"></center>'
 				end
@@ -638,37 +638,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bp_unbox_event':
 		else
 			'You pull up your top to release your breasts'
 			'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/t<<tits>>.jpg"></center><br>'
-			'Your fingers glide around the sucktion cup of the breast pump, while your other hand holds the pump.'
+			'Your fingers glide around the suction cup of the breast pump, while your other hand holds the pump.'
 			'Making sure that no one is around, you lift the breast pump to your left breast. The cold cone feels uncomfortable on your nipple.'
 			milkedvolume = (func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 3, 1))/100
 			minut += 1
 			bp_unbox = 2
 			if lactation['active'] > 0 and milkedvolume > 0:
 				if milkedvolume <= 50:
-					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
+					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
 					'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected some milk, but it is just a small puddle in the bottle.'
 					'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_milkdrops.jpg"></center>'
 				elseif milkedvolume > 50 and milkedvolume <= 1500:
-					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
-					'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected <<milkedvolume/10>>ml of your breastmilk.'
+					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
+					'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected <<milkedvolume/10>>ml of your breast milk.'
 					'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_half.jpg"></center>'
 				else
-					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
+					'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+					'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it. The pump starts to draw milk from your breast.'
 					'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You easily filed the breast pump bottle with your breast milk just with this little pumping.'
 					'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_full.jpg"></center>'
 				end
 				'You nod at the breast pump, thinking it will come in handy.'
 			elseif lactation['active'] > 0 and milkedvolume <= 0:
-				'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-				'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it.'
+				'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+				'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it.'
 				'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. You collected some milk, but it is just a small puddle in the bottle.'
 				'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_milkdrops.jpg"></center>'
 			else
-				'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the sucktion on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
-				'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rythmically squeeze it.'
+				'You start to squeeze the bulb. Your nipple is sucked into the cone, getting elongated a bit. It feels weird at first and you release the lever, the suction on your nipple goes away and the nipple retracts.'
+				'With your hand you squeeze down again, your nipple sucked in again. You go on, and start to rhythmically squeeze it.'
 				'You go on for a minute and then detach the pump. As expected no milk was collected in the bottle.'
 				'<br><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/breast_pump.jpg"></center>'
 			end
@@ -750,9 +750,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milking':
 		pump_timestamp = func('lact_bp','time_stamp')
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_lactating.jpg"></center>'
 		if pumptime > 1:
-			'You attach the pump to your breast and start rythmically squeezing the bulb for <<pumptime>> minutes.'
+			'You attach the pump to your breast and start rhythmically squeezing the bulb for <<pumptime>> minutes.'
 		else
-			'You attach the pump to your breast and start rythmically squeezing the bulb for one minute.'
+			'You attach the pump to your breast and start rhythmically squeezing the bulb for one minute.'
 		end
 		if milkedvolume > pump_bottletype and (bp_useable_sbottle*1500 + bp_useable_mbottle*2500) = pump_bottletype:
 			'During pumping you have to empty the collecting bottle as it filled up with your milk.'
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milking':
 		end
 		breastcounter += 1
 		if energytomilkpump > 0 and pcs_energy = 0:
-			'<br>During pumping you feel really hungry, producing breast milk seems to be more exhausing then thought.'
+			'<br>During pumping you feel really hungry, producing breast milk seems to be more exhausting then thought.'
 			energytomilkpump = 0
 		elseif energytomilkpump > 0:
 			'<br>You feel a bit thirsty after pumping.'
@@ -1004,10 +1004,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milking':
 	elseif lactation['active'] > 0 and pain['nipples'] < 60 and lactation['pc_aware'] <= 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/pump_milkdrops.jpg"></center>'
 			if pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts <= 0:
-				'As usual, you attach the pump, but after a few pumps white liquid suddenly starts flowing from your nipples.<br>Using the breast pump regularily probably made you lactate!'
+				'As usual, you attach the pump, but after a few pumps white liquid suddenly starts flowing from your nipples.<br>Using the breast pump regularly probably made you lactate!'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself <= 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
-				'You attach the pump but after a few pumps white liquid suddenly comes from your nipples. Regularily massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
+				'You attach the pump but after a few pumps white liquid suddenly comes from your nipples. Regularly massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
 				'You attach the pump but after a few pumps white liquid suddenly comes from your nipples. All that pumping and massaging your breasts probably caused you to lactate!<br>'
@@ -1066,10 +1066,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milking':
 			end
 			if milkedvolume > 1500 and bpbottles <= 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/milk_sink.jpg"></center>'
-				'<center>You pour 150ml of your breast milk into the sink and clean up your breastpump.</center>'
+				'<center>You pour 150ml of your breast milk into the sink and clean up your breast pump.</center>'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/milk_sink.jpg"></center>'
-				'<center>You pour <<milkedvolume/10>>ml of your breast milk into the sink and clean up your breastpump.</center>'
+				'<center>You pour <<milkedvolume/10>>ml of your breast milk into the sink and clean up your breast pump.</center>'
 			end
 			minut += ((milkedvolume/1500) + 3)
 			act 'Finish':
@@ -1091,7 +1091,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milking':
 				*clr
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/milk_drink.jpg"></center>'
-				'<center>You drink your own breast milk and clean up your breastpump.</center>'
+				'<center>You drink your own breast milk and clean up your breast pump.</center>'
 				'<center>The milk is still warm from your breasts.</center>'
 				di_i = 0
 				:di_emptyloop
@@ -1132,10 +1132,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hand_milking':
 	elseif lactation['active'] > 0 and pain['nipples'] < 60 and lactation['pc_aware'] <= 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tits/lactate_start.jpg"></center>'
 			if pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts <= 0:
-				'You start to massage your breasts, your fingers gliding down your breasts skin, over the areolas. Your fingers pressing down into the areola, stretching it forwards to your nipple. After a few squeezes white liquid suddenly starts flowing from your nipples.<br>Using the breast pump regularily probably made you lactate!'
+				'You start to massage your breasts, your fingers gliding down your breasts skin, over the areolas. Your fingers pressing down into the areola, stretching it forwards to your nipple. After a few squeezes white liquid suddenly starts flowing from your nipples.<br>Using the breast pump regularly probably made you lactate!'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself <= 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
-				'You start to massage your breasts, your fingers gliding down your breasts skin, over the areolas. Your fingers pressing down into the areola, stretching it forwards to your nipple. After a few squeezes white liquid suddenly starts flowing from your nipples. Regularily massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
+				'You start to massage your breasts, your fingers gliding down your breasts skin, over the areolas. Your fingers pressing down into the areola, stretching it forwards to your nipple. After a few squeezes white liquid suddenly starts flowing from your nipples. Regularly massaging your breasts probably made you lactate!<br>'
 				lactation['induced'] = 1
 			elseif pcs_usedbreastpumponherself > 0 and pcs_massagedherbreasts > 0:
 				'You start to massage your breasts, your fingers gliding down your breasts skin, over the areolas. Your fingers pressing down into the areola, stretching it forwards to your nipple. After a few squeezes white liquid suddenly starts flowing from your nipples. All that pumping and massaging your breasts probably caused you to lactate!<br>'

+ 6 - 6
locations/lact_lib.qsrc

@@ -738,8 +738,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'get_suckflowrate':
 	!!	lactation['suck_flow_rate'] = func('lact_lib','get_suckflowrate', sucktion_type)
 	!!	The suck flow rate is the demand that is applied to Svetas breasts per minute. Be it breast massaging, direct nipple sucking or the simple use of a breast pump.
-	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of sucktion. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
-	!!	what type of sucktion is happening? different sucktion can cause a different demand of breastmilk.
+	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of suction. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
+	!!	what type of sucktion is happening? different sucktion can cause a different demand of breast milk.
 	!!	Result is base rate of sucktion 10ml/minute x 1000. So if the sucktion rate is 10ml/min then suck_flow_rate = 10000.
 	if ARGS[1] = 0:
 		!!	'adult sucking'
@@ -795,7 +795,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'get_moodmod':
 	!!	during breastfeeding or pumping or whatever, svetas mood can be pushed up.
 	!!	pcs_mood += func('lact_lib','get_maxnipflowrate', sucktion type, sucktion time)
-	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of sucktion. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
+	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of suction. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
 	!!	Result = additional mood
 	if ARGS[1] = 0:
 		!!	'adult sucking'
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ end
 !!	get breastmilktime function
 if $ARGS[0] = '$get_breastmilk_time':
 	!!	func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk_time', sucktion_type, milk_demand)
-	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of sucktion. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
+	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of suction. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
 	!!	ARGS[2] = milk_demand: how much milk is demanded. Warning: Should be ml and not in ml*10 for ease of use. :D
 	!!	result = Time in Minutes
 	!!	Usage: breastmilktimetoget = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk_time', 2, 150)
@@ -917,7 +917,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '$get_breastmilk':
 	!!	func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', sucktion_type, sucktion_time)
-	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of sucktion. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
+	!!	ARGS[1] = sucktion_type: the type of suction. adult_mouth [0], child_mouth [1], baby_mouth [2], manual_breastpump [3] , electric_breastpump [4], hand_expressing [5], cow milker [6], weak baby_mouth [7], stimulation during sex/sex play [8]
 	!!	ARGS[2] = sucktion_time: how many minutes the sucking/pumping takes place
 	!!	Usage: breastmilkvolume = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 4, 20)
 	!! 	result = Milk in ml*10
@@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '$get_breastmilk':
 			!!	time to add the pumped lactation['breastmv'] to the milkedvolume and empty lactation['breastmv'].
 			lactation['get_bm_milkedvolume'] += lactation['breastmv']
 			lactation['breastmv'] = 0
-			!!	Here we have nipple and breastpain. The idea is - if there is more sucktion than the nipples can take more pain is applied. If the breasts make less milk then demanded pain to the breasts is applied.
+			!!	Here we have nipple and breastpain. The idea is - if there is more suction than the nipples can take more pain is applied. If the breasts make less milk then demanded pain to the breasts is applied.
 			!!	Else - there will only be nipple pain.
 			if lactation['max_nip_flow_rate'] < lactation['suck_flow_rate']:
 				temp_var = pain['nipples'] + ((lactation['suck_flow_rate'] - lactation['max_nip_flow_rate'])*ARGS[2])/2000 - (lactation['soreness_mod']*ARGS[2])*15

+ 1 - 1
locations/nichTanya.qsrc

@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 				'"What the hell are you doing, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! Get lost!"'	
 				act 'Leave': gs 'underwear', 'wear' & gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'nichBathMaster','return'
 			elseif pcs_apprnc >= 80:
-				'Tanya quickly turns around. She looks a little bit puzzled as she realizes that it was you who grabed her. Did she expect somebody else?.'
+				'Tanya quickly turns around. She looks a little bit puzzled as she realizes that it was you who grabbed her. Did she expect somebody else?.'
 
 				act 'Take advantage of the confusion':
 					cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -1004,7 +1004,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut':
 	act 'Suck him off':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/newyear/sex/snybj.jpg"></center>'
-		'You kneel down infront of Vasily and begin sucking his cock. After a few moments you hear the door open and a few guys from your class wander in. Before you know it all the boys in your class, except Kotova, who was rumored to have already passed out, are surrounding you. You hear someone unzipping their fly, pulling out their cock. Shortly thereafter the others follow suit.'
+		'You kneel down in front of Vasily and begin sucking his cock. After a few moments you hear the door open and a few guys from your class wander in. Before you know it all the boys in your class, except Kotova, who was rumored to have already passed out, are surrounding you. You hear someone unzipping their fly, pulling out their cock. Shortly thereafter the others follow suit.'
 		$rand_boy = $npc_firstname['A9']
 		pav_sex += 60
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A11', '1'

+ 1 - 1
locations/parkivent.qsrc

@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'find_baby':
 					if kid <= 0:
 						'Something feels weird in your breast, a pulling tension goes through it from the base to the nipple.'
 					end
-					'The boy is in your arms and you lead your nipple into his small dry mouth. You can feel the small lips clamping weakly onto your nipple, only light sucktion coming from the mouth.'
+					'The boy is in your arms and you lead your nipple into his small dry mouth. You can feel the small lips clamping weakly onto your nipple, only light suction coming from the mouth.'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/park_baby/feeding_01.jpg"></center>'
 					temp_var = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk_time', 7, 30)
 					if temp_var > 10:

+ 2 - 2
locations/poli.qsrc

@@ -1522,7 +1522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation_room':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/milkbank/pumping_room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Woman: So, sit down here. I''ll prepare the pump and you can prepare yourself.'
-					'You start to uncover your breasts and the woman puts the sucktion cups over your nipples.'
+					'You start to uncover your breasts and the woman puts the suction cups over your nipples.'
 					'The pump starts to work, drawing out milk from your breasts'
 					lact_ev['poli_pumptime'] = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk_time', 4, 50)
 					if lact_ev['poli_pumptime'] > 15:
@@ -1583,7 +1583,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_bank':
 	'You come in and see one of the milk donation service employees sitting at the desk.'
 	if lactation['breastmv'] > lactation['breastmm']*6/10:
-		'Nurse: Oh hi! Do you want to donate your breastmilk?'
+		'Nurse: Oh hi! Do you want to donate your breast milk?'
 	else
 		'Nurse: Oh hi! How can I help you?'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/ptu_dush.qsrc

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos2':
 					gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/gyno/sex/ptu_shower_4.jpg"></center>'
-					'Not being able to keep yourself silent, you let out a small moan. Right away you regret not being able to keep quiet and as you open your eyes there are two guys standing infront of you, watching as your hand is still touching your clit.'				
+					'Not being able to keep yourself silent, you let out a small moan. Right away you regret not being able to keep quiet and as you open your eyes there are two guys standing in front of you, watching as your hand is still touching your clit.'
 					act 'View them':
 						cls
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3

+ 1 - 1
locations/saunawhore.qsrc

@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cumTits':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/cumtits'+rand(1, 5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You kneel down infront of him, raising your breasts higher for him to shoot his cum on them.'
+	'You kneel down in front of him, raising your breasts higher for him to shoot his cum on them.'
 	if useCondom = 1:
 		'The client strips the condom from his dick and shoots <<$cumType>> cum all over your tits.'
 	else

+ 1 - 1
locations/sitr2x.qsrc

@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 								orgasm += 1
 								pcs_horny = 0
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m13.jpg"></center>'
-								'<<$husName>> takes out his dick and starts to masturbate right infront of you, you''re surprised, because you expected he''d to fuck you or something like that a long the line. You sigh silently and continue to fuck your ass with the dildo. <<$husName>> now masturbates furiously, as you moaning becomes louder. Both of you realize, it won''t be long until either of you cums.'
+								'<<$husName>> takes out his dick and starts to masturbate right in front of you, you''re surprised, because you expected he''d to fuck you or something like that a long the line. You sigh silently and continue to fuck your ass with the dildo. <<$husName>> now masturbates furiously, as you moaning becomes louder. Both of you realize, it won''t be long until either of you cums.'
 								'With a final thrust, it''s you, who experiences the first orgasm and it''s so strong, that you fall off the couch onto the floor. You talk your dildo out of your ass and lick it clean, while locking eyes with your husband. He finds this incredibly erotic and it takes him merely a few more seconds to cum, spraying his salty fluids over the couch and carpet. In the afterbliss of both of your orgasms you kiss each other passionately.'
 
 								act 'Finish':gt 'sitr2x'

+ 2 - 2
locations/swamphouse.qsrc

@@ -1456,7 +1456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hunterstable':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance4.jpg"></center>'
 									*nl
-									'You remove the bra and throw it on the table, the men cheer you on and you flash your breasts infront of them.'
+									'You remove the bra and throw it on the table, the men cheer you on and you flash your breasts in front of them.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10
 									gs 'stat'
 									if temp_sh = 1:
@@ -1633,7 +1633,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hunterstable':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance4.jpg"></center>'
 									*nl
-									'You remove the bra and throw it on the table, the men cheer you on and you flash your breasts infront of them.'
+									'You remove the bra and throw it on the table, the men cheer you on and you flash your breasts in front of them.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10
 									gs 'stat'
 									if temp_sh = 1:

+ 9 - 9
locations/train_incidental.qsrc

@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '28':
 							else
 								'You grab into your top to pull out your breast.'
 							end
-							'You give your breasts some squeezes until milk drops start to develop on your nipple. The man watches at you suprised and nods positively at you.'
+							'You give your breasts some squeezes until milk drops start to develop on your nipple. The man watches at you surprised and nods positively at you.'
 							gs 'train_incidental', 'breastfeedthebaby'
 						end
 					end
@@ -259,18 +259,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 		'The man hands you his baby. You take it into your arms and pull your top up, revealing your breasts.'
 		if vidage <= 16:
 			if tits <=4:
-				'The man blushs a bit as you pull out your young breasts infront of him.'
+				'The man blushes a bit as you pull out your young breasts in front of him.'
 				'He doesn''t seem to be to comfortable with a girl breastfeeding his son like this, so he looks somewhere else.'
 			else
-				'The man blushs a bit as you pull out your young large breasts infront of him.'
+				'The man blushes a bit as you pull out your young large breasts in front of him.'
 				'He doesn''t seem to be to comfortable with a girl breastfeeding his son like this, but couldn''t help to stare at your large breasts for a moment before he looks somewhere else.'
 			end
 		else
 			if tits <=4:
-				'The man blushs a bit as you pull out your breasts infront of him.'
+				'The man blushes a bit as you pull out your breasts in front of him.'
 				'He looks at your every move.'
 			else
-				'The man blushs a bit as you pull out your large breasts infront of him.'
+				'The man blushes a bit as you pull out your large breasts in front of him.'
 				'He looks at your every move but couldn''t help to stare at your large breasts for a moment.'
 			end
 		end
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 					end
 				end
 				'As he continues to watch he adds: I always wanted to try her milk, but there is barely enough for our son.'
-				'It seems like he would be interested in trying your breastmilk it but is to shy to ask. You feel the firm grip of the baby easing down, and the suckling turned down too. You look down and see that the eyes of the baby are closed now and the breathing is calm.'
+				'It seems like he would be interested in trying your breast milk it but is to shy to ask. You feel the firm grip of the baby easing down, and the suckling turned down too. You look down and see that the eyes of the baby are closed now and the breathing is calm.'
 				milkedvolume = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 2, temp_var)
 				milkedvolume = 0
 				act 'Finish':
@@ -387,13 +387,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 						'You smile at him: Would you like to try?'
 						'The man asks: Try what?'
 						'You grab your right breast with your right hand and pull it out of your top, slightly weighting it in your hand.'
-						'You whisper: My breastmilk ...'
+						'You whisper: My breast milk ...'
 						if vidage <=16:
 							'The man looks nervously at you. Shaking is head: No, no ... you are too young for that...'
 							'You lean in: ...but not to young to breastfeed your son?'
 							'Offering your breast to him again: Come on, it is no big deal...'
 						end
-						'The man leans up and looks over the seats left and right, then around the car. He then gets down on his seat again, leaning over to you and moves his hands up, then hasitating. He looks in your eyes as if he want''s approval. You nod and he grabs around your breast with both hands, holding it firmly. You move your right hand into his neck. Then he moves his mouth towards your nipple and latches on too. He is producing way more sucktion force than the baby, making you moan up. Your nipple pulses, and you feel your breastmilk gushing out into his mouth. He closes his eyes and nozzles into your breast, drinking your milk. After about 5 minutes he is done and latches off.'
+						'The man leans up and looks over the seats left and right, then around the car. He then gets down on his seat again, leaning over to you and moves his hands up, then hesitating. He looks in your eyes as if he want''s approval. You nod and he grabs around your breast with both hands, holding it firmly. You move your right hand into his neck. Then he moves his mouth towards your nipple and latches on too. He is producing way more suction force than the baby, making you moan up. Your nipple pulses, and you feel your breast milk gushing out into his mouth. He closes his eyes and nozzles into your breast, drinking your milk. After about 5 minutes he is done and latches off.'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/train/breastfeeding/adult_breastfeeding.mp4" ></video></center>'
 						milkedvolume = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 0, 5)
 						if milkedvolume >= 80000:
@@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'breastfeedthebaby':
 							if tits <=4:
 								'He wipes his mouth off and looks at you: As I expected,there wasn''t much milk inside your breasts...'
 							else
-								'He wipes his mouth off and looks at you: Huh, I didn''t expect so little milk inside those magnificient breasts...'
+								'He wipes his mouth off and looks at you: Huh, I didn''t expect so little milk inside those magnificent breasts...'
 							end
 						end
 						act 'Continue':