Merge remote-tracking branch 'SpackledLanturn/minor-fixes'

locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
 	'Valentin sits across from you while Anushka takes the seat next to you. She slides her arm around your shoulders and pulls you close to her. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we need your help with a plan."' 
 	*nl
-	'"What plan,", you ask. You look from her to Valentin then back. Anushka''s answer comes so fast that you are certain she was waiting for that exact question. "We want to drug Mr <<$rand_teacher>>... you know... so we can go have fun." You are almost certain you misheard her, but she casually ignores your shocked expression. She explains the part she expects you to play in this, "I will go up and distract him. When I do we need you to drop these in his drink." She places several pills in your hand.'
+	'"What plan?" you ask. You look from her to Valentin then back. Anushka''s answer comes so fast that you are certain she was waiting for that exact question. "We want to drug Mr. <<$rand_teacher>>... you know... so we can go have fun." You are almost certain you misheard her, but she casually ignores your shocked expression. She explains the part she expects you to play in this, "I will go up and distract him. When I do, we need you to drop these in his drink." She places several pills in your hand.'
 	*nl
-	'You look at the pills then turning them uncertainly in your fingers. You look up at the two of them again. "What exactly will these do to him?"'
+	'You look at the pills, turning them uncertainly in your fingers. You look up at the two of them again. "What exactly will these do to him?"'
 	'Valentin answers before Anushka can, "They will make him tired is all. He will sleep for a few hours and feel a little groggy for the rest of the day, but nothing serious. We''re just gonna make detention a bit less boring <<$pcs_nickname>>. We''re not trying to kill him. Are you going to do this or not?"'
 	gs 'willpower', 'crime', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 			'You shake your head and hand back the pills. "Sorry guys, but I can''t be part of that. It just... does''nt feel right."'
 			'Valentin looks over at Anushka then says, "See... I told you she wouldn''t be game."'
 			*nl
-			'Anushka shakes her head and gives you a disgusted look. "I thought you were cool. What a fucking loser that you are." With that they both get up and move over to another table. You spend the rest of the detention playing on your phone. You try to ignore the glares they shoot in your direction. It''s not easy, because you know that you didn''t turn down just "anyone". You have lost a lot of respect with the gopniks today.'
+			'Anushka shakes her head and gives you a disgusted look. "I thought you were cool. What a fucking loser you are." With that, they both get up and move over to another table. You spend the rest of the detention playing on your phone. You try to ignore the glares they shoot in your direction. It''s not easy, because you know that you didn''t turn down just "anyone". You have lost a lot of respect with the gopniks today.'
 			act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 		end
 	else
@@ -45,13 +45,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 		'You nod. "Okay let''s do this." Anushka grabs your head to turn your face towards hers and gives you a long, deep kiss with so much tongue and passion that even Valentin seems to start feeling a little awkward. Once she breaks the kiss, she turns towards him. "See? I told you she would do it." Valentin just shrugs slightly and smirks at you. You''re still catching your breath from her kiss. Anushka crushes up the pills, with obvious skill, into a fine powder in less than a minute. She gets up and motions for you to follow her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3
 		gs 'stat'
-		'She walks up to the side of the teacher''s desk where Mr <<$rand_teacher>> is sitting while his, unguarded, drink is conveniently located at the opposite end. You causally stroll over then sit down on the edge of the table. You use your body to block his drink from view from the rest of the room. Mr <<$rand_teacher>> looks at the two of you questioningly. "Can I help you girls?"'
+		'She walks up to the side of the teacher''s desk where Mr. <<$rand_teacher>> is sitting, his unguarded drink conveniently located at the opposite end. You causally stroll over then sit down on the edge of the table. You use your body to block his drink from view from the rest of the room. Mr. <<$rand_teacher>> looks at the two of you questioningly. "Can I help you girls?"'
 		*nl
-		'Anushka leans forward then pulls her shirt apart and bra slightly down which nearly exposes her nipples, but definitely gives him a better view of her cleavage. However, her mock-anxious anxious tone is what takes the cake, "Sir, what do you think that spot is? Should I be worried?"'
+		'Anushka leans forward then pulls her shirt apart and bra slightly down, which nearly exposes her nipples and definitely gives him a better view of her cleavage. However, her mock-anxious tone is what takes the cake, "Sir, what do you think that spot is? Should I be worried?"'
 		'He seems flustered by her actions, but quickly gets himself under control. "What spot? I don''t see anything."'
 		'She leans in a bit closer and pushes her breasts together even more. "Right there... between my breasts."'
 		*nl
-		'He leans in slightly closer to get a better look and as he does you drop the powdered pills in his drink. Anushka gives you an almost imperceptible nod. She looks down then leans back and lets go of her shirt to hide her cleavage again. "Oh... it''s gone!" She turns to you. "See? I told you it was just some lint." She gives Mr <<$rand_teacher>> another look and smiles. "Thanks anyways." Anushka gets up and walks back to your table with you following right behind her. He looks at the two of you for a moment then shakes his head. He''s obviously unsure what that was all about. He takes a big gulp from his cup then another one a few minutes later. Within a half an hour, he is slumped back in his chair, snoring, and saliva is running down his chin.'
+		'He leans in slightly closer to get a better look, and as he does, you drop the powdered pills in his drink. Anushka gives you an almost imperceptible nod. She looks down then leans back and lets go of her shirt to hide her cleavage again. "Oh... it''s gone!" She turns to you. "See? I told you it was just some lint." She gives Mr. <<$rand_teacher>> another look and smiles. "Thanks anyways." Anushka gets up and walks back to your table with you following right behind her. He looks at the two of you for a moment then shakes his head. He''s obviously unsure what that was all about. He takes a big gulp from his cup then another one a few minutes later. Within a half an hour, he is slumped back in his chair, snoring, and saliva is running down his chin.'
 		act 'Go to the Teachers'' Lounge':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A158'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once the teacher starts snoring, Valentin gets up. "Come on let''s go." Anushka follows suit and pulls you up as well. You wander down the halls ''til the three of you reach the teachers'' lounge. Valentin pulls some lockpicks out from his pocket and expertly uses them to unlock the door. You and your companions head inside quickly and he locks the door behind you. While he does, Anushka pulls you towards a big leather couch. You both flop down on the comfy couch and Valentin sits down between you a few seconds later. He pulls a small flask from his jacket pocket. He takes a quick gulp from it before passing it to Anushka. She takes a healthy swig and passes it to you.'
+			'Once the teacher starts snoring, Valentin gets up. "Come on let''s go." Anushka follows suit and pulls you up as well. You wander down the halls till the three of you reach the teachers'' lounge. Valentin pulls some lockpicks out from his pocket and expertly uses them to unlock the door. You and your companions head inside quickly, and he locks the door behind you. While he does, Anushka pulls you towards a big leather couch. You both flop down on the comfy couch, and Valentin sits down between you a few seconds later. He pulls a small flask from his jacket pocket. He takes a quick gulp from it before passing it to Anushka. She takes a healthy swig and passes it to you.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'No thanks (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -72,11 +72,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head denying the offered drink. He gives a snort and she rolls her eyes slightly. She soon pulls out a joint then lights it up. Before long, the two of them are mostly ignoring you while having a smoke and a drink together. It doesn''t take long for the two of them to start making out next to you. You watch in fascination as he starts pulling his pants down.' 
+					'You shake your head denying the offered drink. He gives a snort, and she rolls her eyes slightly. She soon pulls out a joint then lights it up. Before long, the two of them are mostly ignoring you while having a smoke and a drink together. It doesn''t take long for the two of them to start making out next to you. You watch in fascination as he starts pulling his pants down.' 
 					*nl
 					gs 'stat'
 					if hotcat >= 6:
-						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands to grab your head and push you down into his lap.'
+						'As Anushka and Valentin make out, she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands to grab your head and push you down into his lap.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Pull away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-								'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
-								'Anushka seems completely unfazed. Before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-								'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party then get lost."'
-								'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+								'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have an orgy with the two of you."'
+								'Anushka seems completely unfazed. Before you even finish speaking, she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+								'Valentin gives his head a little jerk towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party, then get lost."'
+								'After that, the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move further away from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone, trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 								act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 							end
@@ -100,13 +100,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-							'You reflexively open your mouth to wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down which makes you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you. You are getting seriously turned on at the thought of having a threesome in the teachers lounge.'
+							'You reflexively open your mouth to wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down which makes you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you. You are getting seriously turned on at the thought of having a threesome in the teachers'' lounge.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'group'
 							act 'Her turn': gt 'anushka', 'Her turn'
 						end
 					else
-						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking his cock.'
-						'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+						'As Anushka and Valentin make out, she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking his cock.'
+						'Valentin gives his head a little jerk towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move further away from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone, trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 						act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 					end
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take the offered drink then take a swig as well. You immediately regret it because you choke and cough from the burning liquid. This results in them both laughing. Whatever is in the flask it''s much stronger than you expected. Anushka soon takes out a joint and lights it up then passes it around as well. After only a few drinks each, the flask is empty. The joint doesn''t last much longer. With the flask drunk empty and the joint smoked to ashes you are feeling pretty buzzed and watch in dazed fascination as he pulls his pants down.' 
+				'You take the offered drink then take a swig as well. You immediately regret it because you choke and cough from the burning liquid. This results in them both laughing. Whatever is in the flask it''s much stronger than you expected. Anushka soon takes out a joint and lights it up then passes it around as well. After only a few drinks each, the flask is empty. The joint doesn''t last much longer. With the flask drunk empty and the joint smoked to ashes, you are feeling pretty buzzed and watch in dazed fascination as Valentin pulls his pants down.'
 				*nl
 				gs 'stat'
 				if hotcat >= 6:
@@ -138,10 +138,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-							'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
-							'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+							'Before your face gets too close to his cock, you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have an orgy with the two of you."'
+							'Anushka seems completely unfazed, and before you even finish speaking, she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
 							'Valentin shakes his head a little. "Be quiet and watch. Maybe you''ll learn something today."'
-							'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone or watching the two of them fuck on the couch. You wonder if you made the right decision.'
+							'After that, the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move further away from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and watching the two of them fuck on the couch. You wonder if you made the right decision.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 							act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 						end
@@ -158,8 +158,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 						act 'Her turn': gt 'anushka', 'Her turn'
 					end
 				else
-					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+					'As Anushka and Valentin make out, she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move further away from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone, trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 				end
@@ -173,44 +173,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly her hands are gone and you can feel her head next to yours. You stop sucking to make room, so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start taking turns bobbing, sucking, and licking by passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you. Both of you occasionally licking it at the same time or kissing each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, so long as you please him.'
+	'Suddenly her hands are gone, and you can feel her head next to yours. You stop sucking to make room so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you, taking turns bobbing, sucking, and licking. Occasionally you lick it at the same time or kiss each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, so long as you please him.'
 	*nl
-	'While it''s your turn to suck his dick again Anushka takes your shirt off and works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
+	'While it''s your turn to suck his dick again, Anushka takes your shirt off and works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock, and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down ''til he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
+	'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop, and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute, the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down till he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
 	act 'No fucking':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowgirl.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick youm but I don''t want to get fucked."'
-		'Anushka doesn''t say a word to you, so she just climbs on top of him herself. She mounts him cowgirl style the starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing, and kissing her lovely ass as she rides him.'
+		'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick you, but I don''t want to get fucked."'
+		'Without saying a word to you, Anushka climbs on top of him herself. She mounts him cowgirl style then starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing and kissing her lovely ass as she rides him.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		act 'Suck him again':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcwbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'After riding him for a while, she pulls off of him to let his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over to grab your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking his glistening dick. You can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck his dick for a while and lets you suck up all her pussy juices before pulling your head away. She eases herself back down onto his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
+			'After riding him for a while, she pulls off of him, letting his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over to grab your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking. You can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck her juices off his dick for a while before pulling your head away. She eases herself back down onto his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowanal.jpg"></center>'
-				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast. Nush bucks and grinds against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, and takes his cock as deep in her asshole as far as it can go. She takes a loud shuddering breath... her body shakes all over with her eyes rolling up in the back of her head while she slowly comes to a stop. Valentin''s dick is still buried deep in her ass.'
+				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast. Nush bucks and grinds against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later, she really picks up the pace. Moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, and takes his cock as deep in her asshole as it can go. She takes a loud shuddering breath... her body shakes all over with her eyes rolling up in the back of her head while she slowly comes to a stop. Valentin''s dick is still buried deep in her ass.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-					'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes you hear Valentin pant and grunt as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock. You know he is getting, so very close. It seems Anushka does as well, because she lifts up again to quickly get off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while she pulls you down as well, so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though... as a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face right where she was aiming at. The next spurt she aims at her own face followed by your tits then her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you by coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes, you hear Valentin pant and grunt as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock. You know he is getting so very close. It seems Anushka does as well, because she lifts up again to quickly get off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while she pulls you down as well so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though... as a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face right where she was aiming at. The next spurt she aims at her own face followed by your tits then her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
 					*nl
-					'When the well has dried up she diligently licks you clean and doesn''t leave a trace of his sperm on your body. Of course, you return the favor. When all the cum has been collected she gives you a deep... passionate french kiss. Both of you make sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done the three of you get dressed. Valentin unlocks the lounge door he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it. You''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nush was right. You''re a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
+					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean and doesn''t leave a trace of his sperm on your body. Of course, you return the favor. When all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep... passionate french kiss. Both of you make sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed. As Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it. You''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right. You''re a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Going back to the library you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside you each go your separate ways.'
+					'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
 					
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
@@ -223,9 +223,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcvag.jpg"></center>'
 		'She''s right... you are sopping wet and ready. As you lower yourself down towards his crotch, she guides his cock into your pussy. You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly filling and stretching you open. You start moaning softly because the sensation is incredible. Somehow, the alcohol is just adding to the feeling.'
 		*nl
-		'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick. As if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up to fuck you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure with your body unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions and as they keep going you can feel yourself getting close already. The rising electric shocks, that is spreading, in your body threatens to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
+		'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick. As if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up to fuck you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure with your body unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions, and as they keep going, you can feel yourself getting close already. The rising electric shocks that are spreading in your body threaten to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
 		*nl
-		'Just then; when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp; Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place. She slams her pussy down on his cock and impales herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
+		'Just then when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp, Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place. She slams her pussy down and impales herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'group'
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control. While she''s straddling him and when she pulls herself off to make him get up to change positions. She lays herself down on the couch in his place. She opens her legs and grips her butt cheeks to spread them as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease. Even without any additional lubrication he begins fucking her right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
+			'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control while she''s straddling him and when she pulls herself off to make him get up to change positions. She lays herself down on the couch in his place. She opens her legs and grips her butt cheeks to spread them as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease. Even without any additional lubrication, he begins fucking her right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
 			*nl
 			'Her tongue laps at your clit and slit as soon as they are within reach. Every now and then her tongue darts inside of you as well. Meanwhile, Valentin lays himself down on his side and pounds her ass from behind. This allows him to lick and suck on your nipples while she eats you out. This goes on for some time... all three of you audibly content with this position until Anushka makes the two of you move again.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'group'
@@ -244,13 +244,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal.jpg"></center>'
-				'She gets up and has you lay down in her place to straddle your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. You have no reservations about giving her pussy a through licking after the enthusiasm she treated you to. You go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart to have Valentin kneel down between your legs.'
+				'She gets up and has you lay down in her place, straddling your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. You have no reservations about giving her pussy a through licking after the enthusiasm she treated you to. You go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart to have Valentin kneel down between your legs.'
 				*nl
 				gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
 				*nl
-				'You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole, for a brief moment, before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus into your ass.'
+				'You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole for a brief moment before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus.'
 				*nl
-				'By not knowing how much experience you might have, he starts off slow and gentle, for a moment, to allow you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit, though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass. Each of them taking turns playing with your nipples. This adds another instrument to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that fills your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
+				'Not knowing how much experience you have, he starts off slow and gentle, for a moment, to allow you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass, each of them taking turns playing with your nipples. This adds another instrument to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that fills your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -15, 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -259,9 +259,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Through the haze of pleasure you can hear Valentin panting and grunting. Deep down, you instinctively know that he is getting close. Anushka does also, it seems, because she gets off your face immediately. She pulls him away from you as well which leaves your ass, suddenly, feeling empty. She has him stand and she kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though, because only a few seconds later a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face. It''s right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits and, finally, her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you which coats both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					'Through the haze of pleasure, you can hear Valentin panting and grunting. Deep down, you instinctively know that he is getting close. Anushka does also it seems, because she gets off your face immediately. She pulls him away from you as well which leaves your ass suddenly feeling empty. She has him stand, and she kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though, because only a few seconds later a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face. It''s right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits and, finally, her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
 					*nl
-					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor, of course, and when all the cum has been collected she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss. She makes sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done the three of you get dressed again. As Valentin unlocks the lounge door he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>>. Nush was right. You are a pretty cool chick and not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush then give Anushka a sideways glance to find her grinning at you.' 
+					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss. She makes sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. As Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>>. Nush was right. You are a pretty cool chick and not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush then give Anushka a sideways glance to find her grinning at you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -283,43 +283,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie fight':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/wedgiefight.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are not about to let go first, because you know Anushka well enough to know she has a twisted sense of humor. "No, you let go first then I will," you tell her.'
-	'"Yeah right, like I will fall for that," she replies as the two of you wrestle around still pulling on each others panties. She suddenly switches tack, instead of yanking your panties up, she starts trying to yank your clothes off. You panic for a moment and let go of her to hold onto your own clothes before she gets them off you. She, still, manages to show half your ass off to everyone that is watching. Now you know you are in a losing position. If you let go of your clothes she will pull them off, but if all you do is hold onto them then you can''t do anything to her in response. Before you can figure out a different plan of attack the teacher walks in.'
+	'"Yeah right, like I will fall for that," she replies as the two of you wrestle around still pulling on each other''s panties. She suddenly switches tack. Instead of yanking your panties up, she starts trying to yank your clothes off. You panic for a moment and let go of her to hold onto your own clothes before she gets them off you. She still manages to show half your ass off to everyone that is watching. Now you know you are in a losing position. If you let go of your clothes, she will pull them off, but if all you do is hold onto them, then you can''t do anything to her in response. Before you can figure out a different plan of attack, the teacher walks in.'
 	*nl
-	'"Just what are the two of you doing," He asks as he holds up his hand. "Actually, I don''t care, because both of you come with me. The rest of you behave until I get back." He then grabs both you and Anushka by the arms to drag you both out of detention. He''s directing you both towards the principal''s office.'
+	'"Just what are the two of you doing?" He asks as he holds up his hand. "Actually, I don''t care, because both of you come with me. The rest of you behave until I get back." He then grabs both you and Anushka by the arm and drags you both out of detention. He''s taking you both to the principal''s office.'
 	act 'In trouble':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big134.jpg"></center>'
-		'He knocks then waits until he hears, "Enter," from inside. He proceeds to drags you both in. Once inside, he releases the two of you and addresses the school principal, "These two where trying to pull each others clothes off in the middle of the library."'
-		'The principal doesn''t seem remotely surprised by this. "Miss Konstantinov, I have come to expect this kind of behavior from you, but <b>you</b> miss <<$pcs_lastname>> I had hoped you would know better. It seems that hope was in vain." She nods to the teacher. "I will deal with them." With that he leaves the office and closes the door behind him.'
+		'He knocks then waits until he hears, "Enter," from inside. He proceeds to drags you both in. Once inside, he releases the two of you and addresses the school principal, "These two where trying to pull each other''s clothes off in the middle of the library."'
+		'The principal seems a little surprised by this. "Miss Konstantinov, I have come to expect this kind of behavior from you, but <b>you</b> miss <<$pcs_lastname>> I had hoped you would know better. It seems that hope was in vain." She nods to the teacher. "I will deal with them." With that he leaves the office and closes the door behind him.'
 		act 'Punishment':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly take off your clothes," she says as she pulls a chair close to her leather couch then takes a seat. Anushka quickly takes off all her clothes seeming not to care in the slightest. You, however, are a little slower, but finally you manage to remove all of your clothes as well. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within an arms reach, she grabs you then pulls you across her lap. She proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red. The result is they are stinging like crazy, while Anushka takes a seat on the couch. She silently just watches you get spanked.'
+			'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly, take off your clothes," she says as she pulls a chair close to her leather couch then takes a seat. Anushka quickly takes off all her clothes seeming not to care in the slightest. You, however, are a little slower, but finally you manage to remove all of your clothes as well. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within arms reach, she grabs you and pulls you across her lap. She proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red and stinging like crazy. Anushka takes a seat on the couch, silently watching you get spanked.'
 			act 'Next':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. You leave your clothes where they are then face the corner." You do as you are told while gingerly rubbing your butt as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh. It seems to be Anushka''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap and getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear Anushka moaning. She''s either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking Anushka''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally, she seems to grow tired of it and lifts Anushka off her lap. She points to to your corner and commands Nush, "Go join your friend."'
+				'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. Leave your clothes where they are, and face the corner." You do as you are told, gingerly rubbing your butt. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh. It seems to be Anushka''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap and getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear Anushka moaning. She''s either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking Anushka''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally, she seems to grow tired of it and lifts Anushka off her lap. She points to your corner and commands Nush, "Go join your friend."'
 				act 'Standing':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together. Your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while. However, neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner while naked with your butts on fire.'
+					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together. Your ass is seriously stinging, and if anything, Anushka''s butt must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while. However, neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner while naked with your butts on fire.'
 					act 'Rebel':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank4.jpg"></center>'
-						'After a while, Miss Volkov either loses interest in the both of you or forgets about the two naked teenage girls standing in her office. Either way, she stops paying attention to you two. Some time later Anushka gives you a quick grin and leans over to say something. When you lean closer a bit to hear what she has to say you are surprised as she kisses you instead. It''s soft quick kiss, but you can feel some real passion behind it. A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again, "Alright you two you can get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
+						'After a while, Miss Volkov either loses interest in the both of you or forgets about the two naked teenage girls standing in her office. Either way, she stops paying attention to you two. Some time later, Anushka gives you a quick grin and leans over, seeming like she wants to say something. When you lean closer to hear, you are surprised as she kisses you instead. It''s a soft, quick kiss, but you can feel some real passion behind it. A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again, "Alright you two, you can get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
 						*nl
-						'With that you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again. As the two of you head out, Anushka asks you, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to come by my place?"'
+						'With that, you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again. As the two of you head out, Anushka asks you, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to come by my place?"'
 						act 'Can''t':
 							cla
-							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, but maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs and replies noncommittaly, "Sure... whatever..."'
+							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, but maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs and replies noncommittally, "Sure... whatever..."'
 							act 'leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 						act 'Sure':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-							'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex, you both live at, and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+							'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex you both live at and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you inside.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								if anushkaFirstvisit = 0:
@@ -347,37 +347,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you are sitting at a table, bored out of your mind and waiting for detention to end, you look around a bit to notice that Anushka has snuck off into the book stacks. You can just barely see her between the books and the row above. Once she catches you looking she smiles, pulls up her shirt and flashes you her boobs. This is quickly followed by her motioning you over.'
+	'As you are sitting at a table, bored out of your mind and waiting for detention to end, you look around a bit and notice that Anushka has snuck off into the book stacks. You can just barely see her between the books and the row above. Once she catches you looking, she smiles, pulls up her shirt and flashes you her boobs. This is quickly followed by her motioning you over.'
 	act 'Can''t risk it':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detention.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look around and consider it, but decide it''s too risky. When she looks back over you shake your head to say no. You can tell she is disappointed and soon disappears somewhere among the book stacks. The rest of detention passes very slowly and you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
+		'You look around and consider it, but decide it''s too risky. When she looks back over, you shake your head to say no. You can tell she is disappointed, and she soon disappears somewhere among the book stacks. The rest of detention passes very slowly, and you don''t see her again.'
 		act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 	act 'Might be fun':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look around. When you''re sure that there is no one watching you get up and quickly slip in behind one of the shelves. You make your way over to where you saw Anushka. As you get close you spot her much further back in the library silently waving you on. You follow her to near the very back of the library which is far away from where everyone else is. She gives you a grin that you are all too aware means she''s cooking up trouble. "<<$pcs_nickname>> lets have some fun."'
+		'You look around. When you''re sure that there is no one watching, you get up and quickly slip in behind one of the shelves. You make your way over to where you saw Anushka. As you get close, you spot her much further back in the library silently waving you on. You follow her to near the very back of the library, far away from where everyone else is. She gives you a grin that you are all too aware means she''s cooking up trouble. "<<$pcs_nickname>> lets have some fun."'
 		act 'What kind of fun?':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
 			'Her playful tone and her obvious excitement is making you nervous. "What kind of fun," You ask as you glance back in the direction you came to make sure no one else is coming this way.'
-			'"The best kind of fun! The thrilling, exciting, and risky kind of course," You hear her say behind you. As you turn back towards her you see that her top is gone and you have no idea where it went. Her shorts are around her ankles while her panties are already around her knees. You are a completely stunned. Seriously, you only turned away for a moment, so how in the hell did she get naked so fast? Not just that, but why is she naked in the first place? Huh... she must have a lot of practice speed stripping...'
+			'"The best kind of fun! The thrilling, exciting, and risky kind of course," You hear her say behind you. As you turn back towards, her you see that her top is gone, and you have no idea where it went. Her shorts are around her ankles while her panties are already around her knees. You are a completely stunned. Seriously, you only turned away for a moment, so how in the hell did she get naked so fast? Not just that, but why is she naked in the first place? Huh... she must have a lot of practice speed stripping...'
 			*nl
-			'"Well come on and take your clothes off," she says, waiting, obviously expecting you to start stripping also. You really have no idea what to expect from her. Even if half the stuff you have heard is true she might want to molest you, have you paint each other blue then howl at the moon, or just swap clothes with each other.'
+			'"Well come on and take your clothes off," she says, waiting, obviously expecting you to start stripping also. You really have no idea what to expect from her. Even if half the stuff you have heard is true, she might want to molest you, have you paint each other blue then howl at the moon, or just swap clothes with each other.'
 			*nl
-			'As you just stand there lost in your own thoughts and gaping like a fish, she decides to clear things up a bit. "Come on haven''t you ever wanted to run around the school naked before? It''s thrilling knowing you could be caught at any time." Yep, it she clearly sounds like she has done this before and she''s right. It would actually be <i>very</i> easy to get caught, but then again it might also be quite thrilling.'
+			'As you just stand there lost in your own thoughts and gaping like a fish, she decides to clear things up a bit. "Come on haven''t you ever wanted to run around the school naked before? It''s thrilling knowing you could be caught at any time." Yep, it she clearly sounds like she has done this before and she''s right. It would actually be <i>very</i> easy to get caught, but then again, it might also be quite thrilling.'
 			act 'No I don''t think so':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] -= 5
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-				'You step back and shake your head. "Sorry, but I just can''t do that since we might get caught."'
+				'You step back and shake your head. "Sorry, but I just don''t want to risk getting caught."'
 				'Her grin fades a little. "That''s what makes it fun, so come on!"'
-				'"Sorry I just can''t." You turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly and you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
+				'"Sorry I just can''t." You turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly, and you don''t see her again.'
 				act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -390,9 +390,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-					'You blush a little at the thought and bite your lip. It could be fun and you actually would like to, but what if you got caught? "I don''t know Nush. What if we get caught?"'
-					'She can see your reluctance, but also your willingness. She steps up close and starts pulling your shirt up. "You worry too much <<$pcs_nickname>> and you''ve got to live in the moment. Besides it''ll be so much fun."'
-					'As she pulls your shirt over your head, you nod your head slightly. "Ok, lets do this," you say as you start taking off your clothes.'
+					'You blush a little at the thought and bite your lip. It could be fun and you actually would like to, but you''re still not completely sold. "I don''t know Nush. What if we get caught?"'
+					'She can see your reluctance, but also your willingness. She steps up close and starts pulling your shirt up. "You worry too much <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''ve got to live in the moment. Besides, it''ll be so much fun."'
+					'As she pulls your shirt over your head, you nod your head slightly. "Ok, lets do this," you say as you start taking off the rest of your clothes.'
 					act 'Get Naked': gt 'anushka', 'naked'
 				end
 			else
@@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 	gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you start stripping off your clothes, she steps out of her shorts and panties saying, "That''s the spirit! I knew you were a fun girl." Once the two of you are both naked, she gathers up the clothes to stuff them behind some books on the bottom shelf of one of the bookcases. She gives your naked body a quick look over before heading towards the library''s side door. "Come on we have to go out this way."'
+	'As you start stripping off the rest of your clothes, she steps out of her shorts and panties saying, "That''s the spirit! I knew you were a fun girl." Once the two of you are both naked, she gathers up your clothes and stuffs them behind some books on the bottom shelf of one of the bookcases. She gives your naked body a quick look over before heading towards the library''s side door. "Come on we have to go out this way."'
 	act 'Into the halls':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
@@ -423,9 +423,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly duck into the room and pull the door closed behind you. You can still hear the janitor slowly coming in your direction as he polishes the floor. Anuska leads you into the back corner of the classroom. It''s where someone would need to come all the way into the room to see you. She pulls a poster off the wall and lays down it on the floor before sitting on top of it.'
+			'You quickly duck into the room and pull the door closed behind you. You can still hear the janitor slowly coming in your direction as he polishes the floor. Anushka leads you into the back corner of the classroom where someone would need to come all the way into the room to see you. She pulls a poster off the wall and lays it down on the floor before sitting on top of it.'
 			*nl
-			'You don''t have much of a choice, since there is nowhere else, you sit down next to her. You notice she seems to be completely comfortable being naked while you find yourself unconsciously using your hands to cover up. She pulls a joint out from behind her ear, which you never even noticed it there, and lights it with the single match that was stuck in the end of the joint. When she sees your dumbfounded look she gives you a quick smile. "I knew we were going to be running around naked and I wanted to bring it, so I prepared." She takes a long drag off the joint and then offers it to you.'
+			'You don''t have much of a choice, since there is nowhere else, so you sit down next to her. You notice she continues to seem completely comfortable being naked while you find yourself unconsciously using your hands to cover up. She pulls a joint out from behind her ear, which you never even noticed was there, and lights it with the single match that was stuck in the end of the joint. When she sees your dumbfounded look, she gives you a quick smile. "I knew we were going to be running around naked, and I wanted to bring it, so I prepared." She takes a long drag off the joint and then offers it to you.'
 			act 'Smoke the joint with her':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] += 1
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head. "No, thanks I am paranoid enough about getting caught bare-assed without its effects adding to the situation." She snorts in mild amusement at your answer and just smokes it herself. While the two of you make small talk you hear the machine getting steadily closer.'
+					'You shake your head. "No, thanks I am paranoid enough about getting caught bare-assed without adding that to the situation." She snorts in mild amusement at your answer and just smokes it herself. While the two of you make small talk, you hear the machine getting steadily closer.'
 					act 'Wait for the janitor to pass': anushLimitedQuestions = 4 & gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			else
@@ -482,9 +482,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 					end
-					'After a bit you get curious where she gets her clothes, it''s quite obvious that she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like the ones she wears and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush, where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
+					'After a bit, you get curious where she gets her clothes, as it''s quite obvious that she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like the ones she wears, and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush, where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
 					'She lifts an eyebrow at that. She looks down at her naked body and grins causing you to laugh a bit as well. Her unspoken comment about you asking about her clothes while she is naked is not lost on you. "Dolls, well... Patchwork Dolls to be exact near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
-					'"If you stop by, tell Savva or Viola I said they still owe me a round from last time." You nod that you will, though you have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you suppose that you will find out.'
+					'"If you stop by, tell Savva or Viola I said they still owe me a round from last time." You nod that you will. You have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store, you suppose that you will find out.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			end
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			'You know it can be a touchy subject, but you are just too curious. "Um Nush, do you ever worry, you know... about your reputation?"'
 			'She laughs a bit. "Which one? Where I am a nympho? a slut? a whore? a lesbian? Or do you mean that I am a party girl that spends all her time getting drunk or stoned and wasting her life away? Or maybe how I am the band whore? You will need to be a bit more specific there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'You pause a moment, at first afraid she might get pissed, but she seems more amused than anything. "Uh all of it I guess." You''re not sure what else to say, since her rep is kinda based on all of that and more.'
-			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways and the stuff that is shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone then I do. Just Because I like it," she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around that''s not what makes me, <b>me</b>. All that is just small parts of me. I do what I want and that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who understand that are my friends. The rest.... well... fuck''em."'
+			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways, and the stuff that is shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone, then I do. Just because I like it," she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around, that''s not what makes me, <b>me</b>. All that is just small parts of me. I do what I want, and that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who understand that are my friends. The rest.... well... fuck''em."'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 		end
 		
@@ -515,8 +515,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Looking at her for a moment, all naked like that, you just have to ask, "So what''s the deal with always getting naked? I mean I know of a few times and if even half the gossip is true this is a pretty normal state for you." You add a bit of friendly ribbing to your tone.'
-			'Snorting a bit, she seems to think a moment then shrugs. "Honestly I don''t know. I am proud of my body and not ashamed of it. I don''t see why it should be a big thing anyways. Plus, I like thrill that you get from doing something that''s a little taboo, where you can get caught, I just love it! Like knowing the janitor is going to be passing by this room shortly, maybe coming in to catch us without a stitch on." She bites her lower lip a moment and looks mildly turned on. "I just love the thrill of almost getting caught or actually getting caught."'
+			'Looking at her for a moment, all naked like that, you just have to ask, "So what''s the deal with always getting naked? I mean I know of a few times, and if even half the gossip is true, this is a pretty normal state for you." You add a bit of friendly ribbing to your tone.'
+			'Snorting a bit, she seems to think a moment then shrugs. "Honestly, I don''t know. I am proud of my body and not ashamed of it. I don''t see why it should be a big thing anyways. Plus, I like the thrill that you get from doing something that''s a little taboo, where you can get caught, I just love it! Like knowing the janitor is going to be passing by this room shortly, maybe coming in to catch us without a stitch on." She bites her lower lip a moment and looks mildly turned on. "I just love the thrill of almost getting caught or actually getting caught."'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 		end		
 
@@ -529,15 +529,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 !!ToDo: Is anushHearband set?
 			if bandpracticeinvite = 0:
 				bandpracticeinvite = 1
-				'"How is the band going," you ask her.'
+				'"How is the band going?" you ask her.'
 				'Nodding a little she says. "Pretty good, but you should come by and hear us play."'
 				'"Yeah that sounds great," you tell her.'
 				'"Nice, I will text you the next time we practice, so you can come check us out. I think, well, I hope you''ll like our music. We are not as good as Rad likes to think we are, but we are getting there." She adds your phone number to her cell phone, so she can text you in the future.'
 			else
 				'"Is the band still going well?"'
-				'She lights up a bit. "Yeah, we''re working on a semi permanent gig at a place where we will get to play every week which would be awesome. You should totally come by to some more of our practices. Better yet, come to one of the shows. You could help out and be our roadie. You know, help us carry the heavy shit, get all set up, then break it all down again."'
-				'You nod to her. "Sounds good, but let me know the next time. If I have time I will help out."'
-				'She gives you a quick sideways hug and you can feel her breast push against the side of your arm. "Sweet... Of course, I will text you when we have our next gig or practice. That way you can come listen."'
+				'She lights up a bit. "Yeah, we''re working on a semi permanent gig at a place where we will get to play every week, which would be awesome. You should totally come by to some more of our practices. Better yet, come to one of the shows. You could help out and be our roadie. You know, help us carry the heavy shit, get all set up, then break it all down again."'
+				'You nod to her. "Sounds good, but let me know the next time. If I have time, I will help out."'
+				'She gives you a quick sideways hug, and you can feel her breast push against the side of your arm. "Sweet... Of course, I will text you when we have our next gig or practice. That way you can come listen."'
 			end
 !!ToDo: A flag probably needs to be set here to keep track of Nush having Svetas number.
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'You know that she is seeing some guys and girls, so it is not really a secret. You''re not sure if you should even ask, but you are curious. "Do you have a boyfriend? Or even girlfriend?"'
-			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not really looking right now. I''m young and carefree. I plan to, as they say, sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you. If that right person came along and just blew me away I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? Are you wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
+			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not really looking right now. I''m young and carefree. I plan to, as they say, sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you. If that right person came along and just blew me away, I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? Are you wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
 			'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and makes it sound so dirty, yet, so exciting at the same time. Did she mean that?'
 			act 'Maybe':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -557,9 +557,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/scnakiss.jpg"></center>'
 				'You feel put on the spot since that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously it is why you asked. Either way, a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess... maybe I have been thinking about it a bit."'
-				'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction and you''re not sure you want to know it. You feel her place a finger under your chin to raise it up until you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face. You find yourself looking into her eyes. The two of you have your lips meet and kiss. It''s a deep long passionate kiss. It''s not a lustful one, or at least there isn''t much lust, but it''s something deeper. This kiss holds more meaning than any words that could have passed between you two. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you... all you know is that the kiss was amazing.'
+				'With your eyes downcast, you don''t see her reaction, and you''re not sure you want to know it. You feel her place a finger under your chin to raise it up until you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours, and you can feel her breath. You find yourself looking into her eyes. Your lips meet. It''s a deep, long, passionate kiss. It''s not a lustful one, or at least there isn''t much lust, but it''s something deeper. This kiss holds more meaning than any words that could have passed between you two. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you... all you know is that the kiss was amazing.'
 				*nl
-				'Finally, the kiss ends and both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back then sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. She gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking, but then again I''m not against the idea. Let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
+				'Finally, the kiss ends, both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back then sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. She gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking, but then again, I''m not against the idea. Let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes, and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 			end
 			act 'No':
@@ -578,34 +578,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 				end
+				'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+				'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
 				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
 					'"Niko," you tell her.'
-					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life do what you want. Just... just be careful with him.'
-					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, he is bad news, and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing her bad mouthing your boyfriend is clearly annoying you, she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life do what you want. Just... just be careful with him.'
+					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
+					'"Fedor," you tell her.'
 					if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
-						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Fedor," you tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school."'
-						'You frown at her. You expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, because those criminals where going to take everything from his family. He couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
-						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay. I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you," she says, obviously, trying to make peace.'
-						'You nod accepting her apology of sorts and you both let the topic drop.'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+						'She arches a slender brow, obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school?"'
+						'You frown at her. You expected her to be more understanding. "He''s not gay! He didn''t have a choice. Do you think he should have let those criminals chop his fingers off? He couldn''t pay them."'
+						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay. I don''t care if he is or bisexual or whatever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy, then I am happy for you," she says, obviously trying to make peace.'
+						'You nod, accepting her apology of sorts, and you both let the topic drop.'
+						act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 					else
 						if hotcat >= 5:
-							'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-							'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
-							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like an Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
-							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face. You realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it," She asks with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" As you think about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'She laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome," she asks as she winks as she makes a kissy face at you.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like an Ivan-lite," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face. You realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She asks with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" As you think about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome?" she asks as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
 							act 'Maybe':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
@@ -613,10 +606,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it then I''ll talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
-								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
-								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it then I''ll talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know."'
+								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if there''s probably some truth to it. You decide to change the subject.'
+								act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 							end
 							act 'I will ask him':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -625,52 +617,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure, yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks it could be fun," you tell her.'
+								'You can''t help but grin at that. You think about it, and it does sound fun. "Sure, yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks. It could be fun," you tell her.'
 								'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways, I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree. He is a guy after all."'
-								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah, most likely, so I''ll let you know what he says."'
-								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah, most likely, but I''ll let you know what he says."'
+								act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 							end
 							act 'No, I don''t think so':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-								'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
-								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+								'You shake your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine," You tell her with a grin.'
+								'She makes a tsking sound. "Too bad. Oh well, if you change your mind, let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
+								act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 							end
 						else
-							'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-							'She grins at you. "Right and who are you dating again?"'
-							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
-							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
-							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-lite," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face, and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
 							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help, but to join in.'
-							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She pretends to hump the air doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help, but to join in.'
+							act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 						end
 					end
 				elseif kotovLoveQW = 1:
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
 					'"Vitek," you tell her.'
-					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah... yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." She notices your facial expression from her bad mouthing your boyfriend, so she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life, so do what you want. Doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time because of how much she talks about how great he is. At least, when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something," she says with a smirk. You roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
-					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah... yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." She notices her bad mouthing your boyfriend is clearly annoying you, so she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life, so do what you want. Doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time though with how much she talks about how great he is? At least, when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life. You would think she wants to suck his dick or something," she says with a smirk. You roll your eyes slightly, and she lets it drop.'
+					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				elseif artQW = 3 or artQW = 10 or artQW = 20:
+					'"Artem," you tell her.'
+					'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute, and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
+					'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
 					if hotcat >= 5:
-						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Artem," you tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
-						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
 						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking?"'
-						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah, he is pretty good at it... good enough anyways."'
-						'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement. I''m sure that strokes his ego," she says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself. Do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
+						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Seeing the look on her face, you add, "Ok yeah, he is pretty good at it... good enough anyways."'
+						'She grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement. I''m sure that strokes his ego," she says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick between her legs. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself. Do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
 						act 'Maybe':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
@@ -678,9 +659,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
-							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
-							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if there''s probably some truth to it. You decide to change the subject.'
+							act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 						end
 						act 'I will ask him':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -688,53 +668,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure... yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks because it could be fun. He is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say," you tell her.'
-							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy and all boys want to fuck as much as they can. Having sex with two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, so I doubt he is any different. Besides, maybe, I can teach him a new trick or two for you," she says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
+							'You can''t help but grin at that. You think about it, and it does sound fun. "Sure... yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks. He is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say," you tell her.'
+							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy, and all boys want to fuck as much as they can. Having sex with two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, so I doubt he is any different. Besides, maybe, I can teach him a new trick or two for you," she says in a teasing tone with a wink.'
 							'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him if he would like to."'
-							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 						end
 						act 'No, I don''t think so':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine," you tell her with a grin.'
-							'She makes a tsking sound. "Too bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
-							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							'You shake your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine," you tell her with a grin.'
+							'She makes a tsking sound. "Too bad. Oh well, if you change your mind, let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
+							act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 						end
 					else
-						'You tell her, "You do know I have a boyfriend."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Artem," you tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah... ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
-						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
 						'She snorts. "Yeah, sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
 						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "What? Why would you ask that?"'
-						'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D, or something like that."'
+						'She grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D or something like that."'
 						'You shake your head. "No, we don''t, because we make love."'
-						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh then talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
+						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick, and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that, you both laugh then talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
 					end
 				elseif Rex_Love = 1:
-					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
 					'"Rex," you tell her.'
-					'"Who," She asks as she cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. It seems that she thinks of him. "Wait, isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
-					'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah, that''s him."'
-					'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years older than you," she asks obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
-					'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party" You tell her then you add, "Ok, he is friends with my sister. She invited me to his party and that''s where we met." You talk about the night you met him and your first date.'
-					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+					'"Who?" She asks as she cocks her head slightly, obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. It seems that she thinks of him. "Wait, isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
+					'You nod. "Yeah, that''s him."'
+					'She gets an inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years older than you?" she asks obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
+					'You smile at her. "I was invited to his party" You tell her then you add, "Ok, he is friends with my sister. She invited me to his party and that''s where we met." You talk about the night you met him and your first date.'
+					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				else
-					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
 					'"<<$boyfriend>>," you tell her.'
-					'"Who?" She asks, asshe cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
-					'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him. I just met him."'
+					'"Who?" She asks as she cocks her head slightly, obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
+					'You shake your head slightly. "You''ve never met him. I just met him."'
 					'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you met huh?" You laugh then tell her about him.'
-					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			end
 		end	
@@ -746,19 +713,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				anushAskedofAlyona = 1		
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You have heard some messed up things about Alyona. You, also, know she is friends with Anushka, so you''re curious. "You''re friends with Alyona right?" You ask her. She nods yes back. "How is she doing?"'
-				'Anushka''s eyes narrow ever so slightly and her tone takes on a cooler, lot less playful, edge to it, "Why?"'
+				'You have heard some messed up things about Alyona. You also know she is friends with Anushka, so you''re curious. "You''re friends with Alyona right?" You ask her. She nods yes back. "How is she doing?"'
+				'Anushka''s eyes narrow ever so slightly and her tone takes on a cooler, much less playful edge to it, "Why?"'
 				'You rarely see Anushka not in a good mood, but her body language and tone suggest that you should tread carefully on this subject. "I was just curious, because I heard some stuff and I wanted to know if she was alright is all."'
-				'She looks at you a moment then softens a bit. "She''s has a fucked up life and it''s more fucked up than anyone I know. She is dealing with it and getting by well enough considering."'
+				'She looks at you a moment then softens a bit. "She''s has a fucked up life, more fucked up than anyone I know. She is dealing with it and getting by well enough considering."'
 				act 'Let it drop': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				act 'Is it that bad?':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A144'] -= 2
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
-					'You know this might be a bad call but you want to know. "Is it really that bad?"'
-					'She arches her brows at you as if to ask if you are serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself, but she would likely blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is a abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious, is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad... so yeah. It''s really that bad, So just drop it."'
-					'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare you change the subject.'
+					'You know this might be a bad call, but you want to know. "Is it really that bad?"'
+					'She arches her brows at you as if to ask if you are serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself, but she would likely blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is an abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious, is as meek as a mouse and lets him do whatever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad... so yeah. It''s really that bad, so just drop it."'
+					'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare, you change the subject.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			end		
@@ -789,7 +756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
 					'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. Now I will know someone there for sure."'
-					'She gets thoughtful for a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates when we go. As you said, we would know someone and we already get along. Let''s talk about it some more when the time comes and we can decide then."'
+					'She gets thoughtful for a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates when we go. As you said, we would know someone and we already get along. Let''s talk about it some more when the time comes, and we can decide then."'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 				act 'Get married':
@@ -814,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 					
 					'You sigh in a way that only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully, <<$boyfriend_temp>> and I can get married soon."'
 					'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and shrugs. "Well, best of luck with that."'
-					'You are not sure what more to say on the topic you decided to change it.'
+					'You are not sure what more to say on the topic, so you decide to talk about something else.'
 					killvar '$boyfriend_temp'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
@@ -830,7 +797,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			'You listen and don''t hear anything at all. "No, I don''t hear anything."'
 			'She grins at you. "Yeah that means the janitor has moved on, so we can head out. Come on, lets go." She gets up and heads for the door. She opens it slowly then looks out both ways checking to see if it is clear. She steps out and hurries down the hall with you following just behind her.'
 			*nl
-			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library to sneak back in the way you left. You both head back to where you stashed your clothes and you both start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on the bell that signals detention is over begins ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "That''s perfect timing as always. I''ll see you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
+			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library and sneak back in the way you left. You both head back to where you stashed your clothes and start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on, the bell that signals detention is over begins ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "That''s perfect timing as always. I''ll see you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
 			'With that the two of you leave school.'
 			act 'Can''t today': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			act 'Go with Anushka':
@@ -847,7 +814,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'meet_after_school':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You find Anushka waiting just outside the doors of school for you. "Are you ready," she asks and you nod your head yes. The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+	'You find Anushka waiting just outside the doors of school for you. "Are you ready?" she asks, and you nod your head yes. The two of you walk back to your apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'anushapt', 'firstvisit'
 end
 

locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 4:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/revenge/girlbeatsguy2.jpg"></center>'
 						'"What''s up asshole," you say as you punch Dimka in the face. He runs for the exit right away. Straight into Alyona''s fist which knocks him to the ground.'
 						'"Fucking slut set me up," he yells just before Anushka kicks him repeatedly in the side.'
-						'"Who the fuck are you calling a slut?!" Anuska says as she bends over and punches Dimka in the face a few times, followed by several more kicks to his ribs. Dimka curls up on the floor in pain as the three of you continue to rain blows down on him until he stops moving.
+						'"Who the fuck are you calling a slut?!" Anushka says as she bends over and punches Dimka in the face a few times, followed by several more kicks to his ribs. Dimka curls up on the floor in pain as the three of you continue to rain blows down on him until he stops moving.
 						Alyona checks to make sure he''s breathing and, more importantly, to see what''s in his pockets. 10000 roubles again! Does he go home and beg his parents for more money every time he gets robbed?'
 						'"Fucking rich kid," you hear Alyona say under her breath. "How many bottles of Zhiguljovskoje can we buy with this do you think?"'
 						'"Lets find out," you say. "But first I have an idea. Help me lift him."'
@@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 4:
 			pav_sex -= 40
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'The first thing you hear when you enter the school is how Dimka was caught jacking off in the girls restroom at the disco.
-			Only three people know the truth, but they aren''t going to tell anyone. You feel someone tap your shoulder and you turn around to see Anuska. "Forty," she says.'
+			Only three people know the truth, but they aren''t going to tell anyone. You feel someone tap your shoulder and you turn around to see Anushka. "Forty," she says.'
 			'"Uhh, Forty what?"'
 			'"Bottles of Zhiguljovskoje. 10000 roubles buys forty bottles of Zhiguljovskoje! We''re having a little party in the old building. Get your ass there."
 			She''s in a good mood, today. You wanted to listen to gossip, but getting drunk sounds like way more fun. You head up there.'

locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/gopgirls.jpg"></center>'
 					'As you take a seat you say to them. "How about you pass me one of those beers?"'
-					'Anuska laughs and hands you a beer'
+					'Anushka laughs and hands you a beer'
 					act 'Drink beer': gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'female_gopnik_beer_1'
 				end
 			end

locations/saveupdater.qsrc

@@ -876,5 +876,10 @@ end
 if npc_sex['A14'] > 1: npc_sex['A14'] = 1
 if npc_sex['A16'] > 1: npc_sex['A16'] = 1
 
+!! University related vars update
+if student >= 0:
+	gs 'uniutil', 'transfer_legacy_vars'
+end
+
 --- saveupdater ---------------------------------
 

locations/strela.qsrc

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/strela/strela1.jpg"></center>'
-'When you approach Fedor, he guides you to the group that just arrived at the school. You look around the group and recognize Vitek, Dan and Vasily. Most of the others have criminal tattoos, and look quite intimidating; you recognize the fat older man to be Vadim Bely, a local crime lord. He motions for Fedor to come closer to him, "So... you''re Fedor Kozlov? My dear friend Viktor here tells me you were very disrespectful to him."'
-'He nods over at Vitek. "You can''t just go stealing other people''s girls, Fedor. That''s not how the world works." The guys are circle in around the two of you, and even though no one pays you any heed you feel very uncomfortable being here.'
+'When you approach Fedor, he guides you to the group that just arrived at the school. You look around the group and recognize Vitek, Dan and Vasily. Most of the others have criminal tattoos and look quite intimidating; you recognize the fat older man to be Vadim Bely, a local crime lord. He motions for Fedor to come closer to him, "So... you''re Fedor Kozlov? My dear friend Viktor here tells me you were very disrespectful to him."'
+'He nods over at Vitek. "You can''t just go stealing other people''s girls, Fedor. That''s not how the world works." The guys circle in around the two of you, and even though no one pays you any heed, you feel very uncomfortable being here.'
 *nl	
-'Vadim continues, "Nevertheless, that''s not why I''m here. I know how girls can be, they change their mind all the time... you can sort that out amongst yourselves. It gets personal when you are rude to Vitek. No one treats a friend of mine like that. Why didn''t you show him some respect, Fedor?" Fedor is thoroughly intimidated by the guys, and mutters, "But... they started it..."'
+'Vadim continues, "Nevertheless, that''s not why I''m here. I know how girls can be. They change their mind all the time... you can sort that out amongst yourselves. It gets personal when you are rude to Vitek. No one treats a friend of mine like that. Why didn''t you show him some respect, Fedor?" Fedor is thoroughly intimidated by the guys, and mutters, "But... they started it..."'
 
 act 'Listen':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -13,16 +13,16 @@ act 'Listen':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Vadim Bely">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/strela/vadimbely.jpg"></center>'
-	'Vadim nods, "So, you don''t dispute it. Well kid, you''ll learn that if you are rude to the wrong people, you get trouble. I''ll give you one chance to pay for your mistakes. 30,000 <b>₽</b>, tomorrow. If you don''t pay up you lose fingers, one for every day you''re late. Understood?"'
-	'Fedor''s face pales, and tears form in his eyes. Vadim Bely is quite notorious in your region, and this wouldn''t be the first time he''s actually taken fingers from someone for missing payments. He exclaims, "Please sir, I don''t have that kind of money! I''m just a kid going to school!"'
-	'Vadim shrugs, "You should''ve thought of that before you were disrespectful, ''kid going to school''. That''s really not my problem. 30,000, tomorrow." At this point a number of other students have noticed and wandering a little closer to get a better look at what is going on.'
+	'Vadim nods, "So, you don''t dispute it. Well kid, you''ll learn that if you are rude to the wrong people, you get trouble. I''ll give you one chance to pay for your mistakes. 30,000 <b>₽</b>, tomorrow. If you don''t pay up, you lose fingers, one for every day you''re late. Understood?"'
+	'Fedor''s face pales and tears form in his eyes. Vadim Bely is quite notorious in your region, and this wouldn''t be the first time he''s actually taken fingers from someone for missing payments. He exclaims, "Please sir, I don''t have that kind of money! I''m just a kid going to school!"'
+	'Vadim shrugs, "You should''ve thought of that before you were disrespectful, ''kid going to school''. That''s really not my problem. 30,000, tomorrow." At this point, a number of other students have noticed the commotion and wandered a little closer to get a better look at what is going on.'
 
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<"Vasily [Shulga] Shulgin">></font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big11.jpg"></center>'
-		'Fedor is panicking now, and begins to beg, "Sir, please! I can''t get that amount of money!"'
-		'Vasily grins and suggests, "Come on guys. The only way this kid could get 30,000 <b>₽</b> together is if his parents sold their house. Let''s cut him a deal." He waits a moment to make sure he has everyone''s attention, and continues, "How about this... he sucks my dick. Right here, right now. If he does, we''re even."'
+		'Fedor is panicking now and begins to beg, "Sir, please! I can''t get that amount of money!"'
+		'Vasily grins and suggests, "Come on guys. The only way this kid could get 30,000 <b>₽</b> together is if his parents sold their house. Let''s cut him a deal." He waits a moment to make sure he has everyone''s attention and continues, "How about this... he sucks my dick. Right here, right now. If he does, we''re even."'
 		'Vadim smirks and shakes his head as he looks at Dan and Vitek, "This guy... unbelievable. Still, it''s up to you. If you''re okay with it, I am too."'
 		'Vitek shrugs, "I don''t care."'
 		'Dan adds, "Fine by me too. So... your call, Fedor. 30,000 <b>₽</b> tomorrow, or you suck Shulga''s dick right now."'
@@ -32,11 +32,11 @@ act 'Listen':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/dandick.jpg"></center>'
 			'Vasily unbuttons his pants and pulls his dick out. A number of the students that stayed to watch keep doing so, a few leave, either in fear or disgust.'
 			'Fedor face pales again, and he stutters, "But... I''m not a faggot..."'
-			'Vasily, in a fake voice as if he were trying to cheer Fedor up, says, "No one says you''re a faggot. You''re being offered a way out. Either you suck my dick, go home and tell your parents to sell their house before tomorrow, or start losing fingers. That''s the only way you''d get the money together. Do you even realize how much trouble you''re in?"'
+			'Vasily, in a fake voice as if he were trying to cheer Fedor up, says, "No one says you''re a faggot. You''re being offered a way out. Either you suck my dick, go home and tell your parents to sell their house before tomorrow, or start losing fingers. Those are your only options. Do you even realize how much trouble you''re in?"'
 			*nl
 			'As Fedor breaks down and cries, he drops to his knees and continues to beg, "Please guys, I don''t have that kind of money... Vitek, I''m sorry... please..."'
-			'Vadim looks at him indifferently and says, "This is taking way too long, I have other places to be today.'		
-			'Wipe the snot from your face and make a decision, you have one minute." Vasily, still using his mocking supportive voice, encourages him as he unbuttons his pants, "Don''t be foolish. You can erase your debt within a few minutes."'
+			'Vadim looks at him indifferently and says, "This is taking way too long. I have other places to be today.'		
+			'Wipe the snot from your face and make a decision. You have one minute." Vasily, still using his mocking supportive voice, encourages him as he unbuttons his pants, "Don''t be foolish. You can erase your debt within a few minutes."'
 			
 			if money >= 30000:
 				act 'Pay the money for Fedor (30,000 <b>₽</b>)':
@@ -49,14 +49,14 @@ act 'Listen':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="red"><<"Vadim Bely">></font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/strela/vadimbely.jpg"></center>'
-					'You can''t watch this any more, and quickly blurt out, "I''ll give you the money." You hadn''t said a word yet in this entire exchange, and most of the guys forgot you were even there.'
+					'You can''t watch this anymore and quickly blurt out, "I''ll give you the money." You hadn''t said a word yet in this entire exchange, and most of the guys had forgotten you were even there.'
 					'Vadim looks at you confused and asks, "What... why?"'
 					'"This is just wrong. I can''t let him give out blowjobs to clear his debt" you say, disgusted by the proposition.'
-					'Vadim sighs in exasperation, "Women... they just don''t understand how the world works. Nevertheless... fine. Give me the money and we''re even."'
+					'Vadim sighs in exasperation, "Women... they just don''t understand how the world works. Nevertheless... fine. Give me the money, and we''re even."'
 					*nl
-					'He counts the money when you hand it over, and gives you a pleased nod. He then turns to his henchmen, "It''s all there. Alright guys, we''re done here. Let''s go."'
-					'You watch the cars drive off, and you can see that Vitek is clearly angry that his plan to get back at Fedor failed. Nevertheless... you paid Vadim Bely to get Fedor off the hook. There''s not a lot he can do about it now, without getting on Vadim''s bad side himself. He angrily turns to Dan and Vasily and says: Come on guys, let''s get out of here. I need a beer."'
-					'As they leave, Fedor comes to you and mumbles, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, thank you! Thank you so much... you saved me. I''ll pay you back, I promise! I can''t pay it all at once, but I will try to save up." You assure him that''s not neccessary, and get ready to leave the school grounds.'
+					'He counts the money when you hand it over and gives you a pleased nod. He then turns to his henchmen, "It''s all there. Alright guys, we''re done here. Let''s go."'
+					'You watch the cars drive off, and you can see that Vitek is clearly angry that his plan to get back at Fedor failed. Nevertheless... you paid Vadim Bely to get Fedor off the hook. There''s not a lot he can do about it now without getting on Vadim''s bad side himself. He angrily turns to Dan and Vasily and says "Come on guys, let''s get out of here. I need a beer."'
+					'As they leave, Fedor comes over to you and mumbles, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, thank you! Thank you so much... you saved me. I''ll pay you back, I promise! I can''t pay it all at once, but I will try to save up." You assure him that''s not necessary and get ready to leave the school grounds.'
 
 					act 'Leave the school courtyard':gt 'pav_residential'
 				end	
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ act 'Listen':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/sex/vasfed1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Even if you wanted to help, you know there''s nothing you can do for him. Fedor starts to cry even harder, but slowly crawls over to Vasily on his knees. Vasily''s cock is already rock hard and Fedor reluctantly starts to suck on it, knowing this is his only way out. Vasily laughs and warns him, "Careful. If I feel any teeth, I''ll knock em out."'
+				iif(money >= 30000,'Even though you have enough money to pay off Fedor''s debt, you decide you''d rather not step in.','Even if you wanted to help, you know there''s nothing you can do for Fedor.') + ' He starts to cry even harder, but slowly crawls over to Vasily on his knees. Vasily''s cock is already rock hard, and Fedor reluctantly starts to suck on it, knowing this is his only way out. Vasily laughs and warns him, "Careful. If I feel any teeth, I''ll knock em out."'
 				'One of the criminals who hadn''t said anything so far shakes his head and says to his friends, "Fuckin'' Vasily... what a nutbag. Never a dull moment with that guy."'
 				*nl
-				'Vitek turned his head away in disgust, most of the students other than some of the gopniks have left by now. Dan pulls out his phone and begins to shoot a video of the scene, as does a few others, a few of the girls shout tips for Fedor on how to suck better.'
-				'Vadim, who observed it all with an amused face, grins and turns to his guys, "Alright lads, let''s go. The boys can play with their toy in peace." Seconds later, the cars drive off while, Fedor is still sucking Vasily''s dick. Once the Vadim has left the students left approach closer, some laugh, others jeer or call Fedor a fag.'
+				'Vitek turns his head away in disgust. Most of the students other than some of the gopniks have left by now. Dan pulls out his phone and begins to shoot a video of the scene, as do a few others. A few of the girls shout tips to Fedor on how to suck better.'
+				'Vadim, observing all this with an amused face, grins and turns to his guys, "Alright lads, let''s go. The boys can play with their toy in peace." Seconds later, the cars drive off while Fedor is still sucking Vasily''s dick. Once Vadim has left, the students left approach closer. Some laugh. Others jeer or call Fedor a fag.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Watch':
@@ -87,12 +87,12 @@ act 'Listen':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/sex/vasfed2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Apparently not satisfied with how good a job Fedor is doing, Vasily grabs him by the back of the head and starts fucking his mouth, shoving his dick down Fedor''s throat as he does. Several minutes go by before Vasily groans and begins to cum in Fedor''s mouth. "Swallow it all, faggot. Don''t miss a drop", he instructs Fedor, who does as he''s told and keeps sucking Vasily''s cock, swallowing his cum until Vasilly finishes and pulls his dick out of Fedor''s mouth. "You suck cock better than most bitches Fedor, you been sucking Ivan off all this time?" He says with a laugh.'
+					'Apparently not satisfied with how good a job Fedor is doing, Vasily grabs him by the back of the head and starts fucking his mouth, shoving his dick down Fedor''s throat as he does. Several minutes go by before Vasily groans and begins to cum in Fedor''s mouth. "Swallow it all, faggot. Don''t miss a drop", he instructs Fedor, who does as he''s told and keeps sucking Vasily''s cock, swallowing his cum until Vasily finishes and pulls his dick out. "You suck cock better than most bitches Fedor. You been sucking Ivan off all this time?" He says with a laugh.'
 					'Fedor then moves to get up, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. Vasily lets him get up and says with a smirk on his face, "So, cocksucker... what should we call you now? Fedor is a man''s name, and you''re no longer a man... you''re a bitch. Your new name will be Masha, that suits a bitch like you much better. Ain''t that right, cocksucker?"'
 					*nl
-					'Fedor, too tired to fight it, just nods. Vasily continues, "We''ll come get you when we want more. That''s your place now, Masha. Understood? And knock it off with the deep voice, bitches don''t have deep voices."'
+					'Fedor, too tired to fight it, just nods. Vasily continues, "We''ll come get you when we want more. That''s your place now, Masha. Understood? And knock it off with the deep voice. Bitches don''t have deep voices."'
 					'Fedor nods again, his resolve broken. Vasily spits in Fedor''s face and asks, "What''s your name, bitch?" Fedor mutters, "Masha... my name is Masha."'
-					'With that everyone starts wondering off, Vitek, Vasily and Dan go to their usual spot in the park to have some beers. Fedor is sitting on the ground by himself, trying to take it all in. He knows his life won''t be the same after what happened today.'
+					'With that, everyone starts wandering off, Vitek, Vasily and Dan go to their usual spot in the park to have some beers. Fedor sits on the ground by himself, trying to take it all in. He knows his life won''t be the same after what happened today.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'

locations/uniutil.qsrc

@@ -165,10 +165,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'student':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'status':
-		if student >= 0:
-			gs 'uniutil', 'transfer_legacy_vars'
-		end
-
 		if student > 0:
 			uni_semvdateres = func('uniutil', 'check_semester_vs_date')