[text edit] clean up text in abduction

locations/abduction.qsrc

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	menu_off = 1
 	i = rand(1, 2)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/girltocar<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly you hear someone come up from behind and you feel something hit your head.  Your vision goes black...'
+	'Suddenly you hear someone come up from behind, and you feel something hit your head.  Your vision goes black...'
 	act 'Pass out':gt 'abduction', 'abdCarTrunk'
 end
 
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCarTrunk':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/trunkint1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You wake up in a very tight, dark place. You can feel that it is probably a car and you are most likely in the trunk.'
-	'You try to kick the walls with your feet, but after while you can see it''s pointless.'
+	'You try to kick the walls with your feet, but after a while you can see it''s pointless.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdRoomFirstEntry'
 end
 
@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRoomFirstChaining':
 	i = rand(1, 5)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/shackled<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'You''re thrown onto a dirty bed. The man forcibly removes your clothes and puts wrist and ankle shackles on you. He slaps a collar around your neck then leashes you to the wall.'
-	'"You must have really have pissed someone off girl," he says.'
-	'"What is this place? What are you going to do to me," you ask.'
+	'"You must have really pissed someone off girl," he says.'
+	'"What is this place? What are you going to do to me?" you ask.'
 	'"This is where girls are brought to be trained as sex slaves!"'
 	'"... but... how... no..."'
-	'"Shut up slut. Usually, we torture you for fun and for as long as we want. When you''ve become broken enough then we sell you to the highest bidder."'
+	'"Shut up slut. Usually, we torture you for fun and for as long as we want. When you''ve become broken enough, then we sell you to the highest bidder."'
 	'"You cannot do this to me! It''s illegal!'
 	'"Ha! Who do you think are our best customers? They are politicians, police officers, businessmen... We have our cover, so you should shut up and get used to it!"'
 	'The man leaves without saying another word as you tearfully sob and yell for him to come back...'
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRoom':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/basement1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are in a dark basement that has only one window and some lights. A chain holds you to the wall and is connected to your collar.'
-	'You can only move few meters from the wall to reach several things left for you by your abductors.'
+	'You can only move a few meters from the wall to reach several things left for you by your abductors.'
 
 	act 'Look around':gt 'abduction', 'abdFood'
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdSomeoneComing':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/shave1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You are forced to shave yourself.'
 		'Obviously, your captors do not fancy women with body hair.'
-		'You are being watched the whole time, so you, probably, don''t cut your arteries or something similar.'
+		'You are watched the whole time, probably so you don''t cut your arteries or something similar.'
 		pcs_pubes = 0
 		pcs_leghair = 0
 		pcs_horny += 5
@@ -122,14 +122,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdSomeoneComing':
 	if broken = 0 and rapeCount = 0 and tortureCount = 0 and examed = 0:
 		*nl
 		'The man comes up to you. He grabs your leash and forcibly puts a blindfold on your head to cover your eyes.'
-		'He leads you up the stairs as you feel a breath of fresh air that sensually careeses your bare skin.'
+		'He leads you up the stairs as you feel a breath of fresh air that sensually caresses your bare skin.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdExamStart'
 	else
 		if broken = 0:
 			'Your body starts to tremble in fear of what is going to happen next.'
-			act 'Cover in panic on your bed':gt 'abduction', 'abdRape'
+			act 'Cower in fear on your bed':gt 'abduction', 'abdRape'
 			
-			if rapeCount >= 5: act 'Plead that you cannot bear anymore rough treatment':gt 'abduction', 'abdBreak1'
+			if rapeCount >= 5: act 'Plead that you cannot bear any more rough treatment':gt 'abduction', 'abdBreak1'
 		else
 		
 		end
@@ -195,11 +195,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdExamResist':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/examslap.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Due to being scared of what they''ll do you start yelling and shaking to get loose of the leash.'
-	'Your captor is very strong, on top of your leash and cuffs that makes your attempt to escape futile.'
-	'He grabs you by the leash which knocks you down to the ground. He slaps your face hard and leaves it stinging with a red hand mark across the cheek.'
+	'Due to being scared of what they''ll do, you start yelling and shaking to get loose of the leash.'
+	'Your captor is very strong, on top of your leash and cuffs that make your attempt to escape futile.'
+	'He grabs you by the leash, which knocks you down to the ground. He slaps your face hard and leaves it stinging with a red hand mark across the cheek.'
 	'"You''re only making it harder bitch."'
-	'With these words he picks you up like you weigh nothing and slams you into the chair then restrains you.'
+	'With these words, he picks you up like you weigh nothing and slams you into the chair then restrains you.'
 	'He, calmly, sits down in a chair over in the far corner of the room.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdExam1'
 end
@@ -209,8 +209,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdExamObey':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/examsit.jpg"></center>'
 	'Willingly, like the slave you obviously have just become, you climb up onto the chair and sit there. You wonder what perverse things that are going to happen to you.'
-	'The man ties you up anyway, probably, to make sure you don''t try to escape after they start. This makes you even more nervous.'
-	'He, calmly, sits down in a chair over in the far corner of the room.'
+	'The man ties you up anyway, probably to make sure you don''t try to escape after they start. This makes you even more nervous.'
+	'He calmly sits down in a chair over in the far corner of the room.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdExam1'
 end
 
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdExam1':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/exam1.jpg"></center>'
-	'A man dressed like a doctor, wearing a lab coat and suit with stethoscope around his neck. He walks, as if he''s unconcerned about you, through the door.'
+	'A man enters the room dressed like a doctor, wearing a lab coat and suit with stethoscope around his neck. He walks, as if he''s unconcerned about you.'
 	'Obviously, He doesn''t speak to you, but rather to the man sitting in the chair. The doctor says, "Wow, a nice catch indeed."'
 	'The doctor puts on a pair of rubber gloves then sits down on a small chair in front of you. He looks at your spread legs and what''s between them.'
 	*nl
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdExam1':
 	'He pulls his finger out of your ass and finally reaches for your pussy.'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
 		'"Oh, you''ll like this, her pussy is a virgin one."'
-		'"Looks like we hit the jackpot once again dear Doctor," says the man with happy smile.'
+		'"Looks like we hit the jackpot once again dear Doctor," says the man with a happy smile.'
 	else
 		'"And her pussy is <<$vaginatipe>>.'
 	end
@@ -267,13 +267,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdBrokenGiveTools':
 	'Your master approaches you. It looks like he is holding something big in his hands.'
 	'When he steps into the light, you can see he holds some very large dildos.'
 	'"Hello, my newly broken slave. I have a gift for you," he says.'
-	'You are rather quiet, because the fearful thoughts of having these dreadfully big dildos shoved anywhere into your body makes you puke.'
+	'You are rather quiet, because fearful thoughts of having these dreadfully big dildos shoved anywhere into your body make you feel like you might puke.'
 	'"Aren''t you glad whore? These dildos are here for you to train on, so you can perform better later in a "live" situation."'
 	'"Uhmm... thank you Master."'
-	'He them down next to your bed and leaves without saying another word.'
+	'He puts them down next to your bed and leaves without saying another word.'
 	if lactation['active'] > 0:
 		if breastpump = 0:breastpump = 1
-		'In the bottom of the box, under the various dildos, you also found a working breast pump.'
+		'In the bottom of the box, under the various dildos, you also find a working breast pump.'
 		if lact_engorgement > 3:
 		 'You are relieved that you can now empty your painfully full breasts'
 		end
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdBreak1':
 	'"You don''t understand bitch. You will leave this place in the end. As a broken sex slave or as a corpse."'
 	'"But..."'
 	'"You will be sold to someone as their slave. If you won''t accept that role you will be utilized for the more perverted needs of our customers. Those girls usually don''t survive for long.'
-	'A slight sense of dread washes over you as your mind races to think of what the horrors might await you.'
+	'A sense of dread washes over you as your mind races to think of what horrors might await you.'
 	'"Now, show me what a good sex slave you are."'
 
 	tortureType = rand(1,3)
@@ -367,8 +367,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdBrokenGivePainkillerNo':
 	'Your master takes a clamp and pulls your tongue out. It tightly and painfully squeezes it.'
 	'He then secures the pill on top of a dildo and pushes the tip down your throat.'
 	'Your gag reflex activates, but he doesn''t remove the dildo for as long as you try to throw up.'
-	'You almost pass out. Everything goes dark and at that moment he removes it.'
-	'You have been forced to swallow the pill... but master looks still very angry.'
+	'You almost pass out. Everything goes dark, and at that moment he removes it.'
+	'You have been forced to swallow the pill... but master still looks very angry.'
 	pain['killer'] += 1
 	broken -= 5
 	pain['tongue'] += 5
@@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdBreak2FuckA1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/brokena1.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your tormentor unchains you and throws you onto your dirty bed.'
 	'Spreading your legs wide apart you spit on your hand and smear it on your pussy saying, "Come, take me, Master."'
-	'"I like my bitches restrained," your master says and ties your hands and feet together. Thus, it secures your position.'
+	'"I like my bitches restrained," your master says and ties your hands and feet together, securing your position.'
 	'His dick penetrates your pussy easily with the saliva doing its job.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'sub', 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdBreak2FuckA2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/brokena2.jpg"></center>'
 	'Fucking you wildly for some time your master stops right before he orgasms.'
 	'He unties your hands and legs. He then ties your hands behind your back.'
-	'Knowing what he expects you to do you open your mouth wide and await his cock.'
+	'Knowing what he expects you to do, you open your mouth wide and await his cock.'
 	'After some mouthfucking and gagging he cums in your mouth.'
 	if broken = 1:
 		*nl
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdBreak2FuckB1':
 	'Your master unchains you and leads you to a device.'
 	'You can see that it''s meant to restrain a person in a laying down position with their head at the same height as someone''s crotch.'
 	'You want to please your master, so you lie down on it straight away. You dutifully await the attaching of the restraints.'
-	'After your master ties you, he walks up to your head. Your already open mouth is then roughly fucked by his member.'
+	'After your master ties you up, he walks up to your head. Your already open mouth is then roughly fucked by his member.'
 	'When he''s about to cum, he pulls his dick out and points it towards your face. You welcome the flying sperm with open eyes and mouth with your tongue out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'sub', 'bound', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdBreak2FuckB2':
 	'Fucking you furiously for some time your master cums deep inside you.'
 	if broken = 1:
 		*nl
-		'"Very good, slave. You are on the path to redeem yourself," With these words he releases your arms to secure you back in your usual location. He then leaves your room with the door closing behind him.'
+		'"Very good, slave. You are on the path to redeem yourself." With these words, he releases your arms to secure you back in your usual location. He then leaves your room with the door closing behind him.'
 	end
 	broken += 1
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'Master'
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdEscape':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/cellarwindow1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are looking at the only window in the whole basement.'
-	'However, there is a lock on it to prevent your escape though.'
+	'However, there is a lock on it to prevent your escape.'
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Try to break the lock':gt 'abduction', 'abdEscapeWindow1'
@@ -522,8 +522,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdEscapeWindow2':
 		failedEscapeCount += 1
 		act 'Panic':gt 'abduction', 'abdTorture'
 	else
-		'You did it! Just in time! Before someone managed to discover your actions you manage to loosen the window and pull yourself through it.'
-		'As you land you see some clothes hanging on a line. It looks like the clothes for 4 or 5 girls, but by luck one of the outfits is yours!'
+		'You did it! Just in time! Before someone managed to discover your actions, you manage to loosen the window and pull yourself through it.'
+		'As you land, you see some clothes hanging on a line. It looks like the clothes for 4 or 5 girls, but by luck one of the outfits is yours!'
 		act 'Run away':gt 'abduction', 'abdEscapeWindow3'
 	end
 end
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFood':
 	'There''s enough space to do some basic <a href="exec:gt ''abduction'', ''abdexercise''">exercise</a>.'
 	chainChance = rand(1,100)
 	if chainChance <= 20 and (rapeCount > 5 or tortureCount > 5):
-		'Suddenly you spot a loose link on your leash chain. You try to manipulate it and you manage to free yourself from the wall.'
+		'Suddenly you spot a loose link on your leash chain. You try to manipulate it, and you manage to free yourself from the wall.'
 		'<a href="exec:gt ''abduction'', ''abdEscape''">Go to the window</a>'
 	end
 	act 'Eat dried food (0:10)':
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFood':
 		gs 'cum_cleanup'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/driedbread1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You ate the dried meat and bread. It causes your throat to become dry, so some water could come in handy.'
+		'You eat the dried meat and bread. It causes your throat to become dry, so some water could come in handy.'
 
 		act 'Get back':gt 'abduction', 'abdFood'
 	end
@@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFood':
 		dynamic $showerdin
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/shower1.jpg"></center>'
-		'The shower is cold and you don''t have any shampoo, but at least you got clean again...'
+		'The shower is cold and you don''t have any shampoo, but at least you get clean again...'
 		if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 		act 'Get back':gt 'abduction', 'abdFood'
 	end
@@ -733,8 +733,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRape':
 		else
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/mouthgagblow1.mp4"></video></center>'
 		end
-		'Your hands are tied. A metal ring, fastened by a leather gag, is inside your mouth that keeps it pried open.'
-		'You have to endure a very rough mouth fuck. He knows no limits and gags you as he much as wants. He does let you breathe from time to time, but for most of the experience you feel like passing out. Your saliva is all over his dick while dripping onto your tits and stomach.'
+		'Your hands are tied. A metal ring, fastened by a leather gag, is inside your mouth, keeping it pried open.'
+		'You have to endure a very rough mouth fuck. He knows no limits and gags you as much as he wants. He does let you breathe from time to time, but for most of the experience you feel like passing out. Your saliva is all over his dick and drips onto your tits and stomach.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRape':
 		gs 'cum_call', '', 'Master', 0
 		i = rand(1,5)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/fucktiedpussy<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your hands are tied and you''re bent over the bed.'
+		'Your hands are tied, and you''re bent over the bed.'
 		'The guy starts to penetrate your pussy without warning. A sharp pain goes through your abdomen because your pussy is not wet enough to receive a dick.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -759,7 +759,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRape':
 		else
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/fucktiedanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
 		end
-		'Your hands are tied and you''re bent over the bed.'
+		'Your hands are tied, and you''re bent over the bed.'
 		'The guy starts to penetrate your ass without warning. A sharp pain goes through your anus as your ass is neither relaxed nor wet enough to receive a dick.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -771,8 +771,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRape':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/fistanal'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		'Your hands and feet are tied with your ass being high above your head.'
 		'This is because you are hanging upside down.'
-		'The guy starts pushing his thick fist to be inside your anus. At least he used a bit of lubricant...'
-		'When your sphincter fails to resist anymore you can hear a loud pop as his fist quickly penetrates your insides.'
+		'The guy starts trying to push his thick fist inside your anus. At least he used a bit of lubricant...'
+		'When your sphincter fails to resist anymore, you hear a loud pop as his fist quickly penetrates your insides.'
 		'He doesn''t stop there and pushes his hand deep. You can feel your intestines expanding as he opens his fist inside you.'
 		'The pain is unbearable, but he doesn''t care.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_fist', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso'
@@ -784,9 +784,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRape':
 		pain['cervix'] += 10
 		pcs_vag += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/fistvaginal'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your hands and feet are tied with your ass is raised higher than your head.'
-		'The guy starts pushing his thick fist inside your pussy. At least he used a bit of lubricant...'
-		'He pushes his hand deep inside your pussy. Suddenly, you can feel his fingers touch your cervix. He''s doing it on purpose!'
+		'Your hands and feet are tied with your ass raised higher than your head.'
+		'The guy starts pushing his thick fist deep inside your pussy. At least he used a bit of lubricant...'
+		'Suddenly, you feel his fingers touch your cervix. He''s doing it on purpose!'
 		'He''s pinching and pressing your cervix. You cry out loudly and try to shake him off, but you are bound. There''s no hope of success...'
 		'"What? Bitch, do you like it? I see that you do?" He stops pushing, but you can feel a finger brushing up against the cervix. "Should we penetrate another hole girl?"'
 		'"No, please... stop... just stop..."'
@@ -806,8 +806,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRape':
 		else
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/mouthgagblow1.mp4"></video></center>'
 		end
-		'Your hands are tied. A metal ring, fastened by a leather gag, is inside your mouth that keeps it pried open.'
-		'You have to endure a very rough mouth fuck. He knows no limits and gags you as he much as wants. He does let you breathe from time to time, but for most of the experience you feel like passing out. Your saliva is all over his dick while dripping onto your tits and stomach.'
+		'Your hands are tied. A metal ring, fastened by a leather gag, is inside your mouth, keeping it pried open.'
+		'You have to endure a very rough mouth fuck. He knows no limits and gags you as much as he wants. He does let you breathe from time to time, but for most of the experience you feel like passing out. Your saliva is all over his dick and drips onto your tits and stomach.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -856,9 +856,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureA2':
 	pain['nipples'] += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/torturea2.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your tormentor secures a rope around your neck and starts to play with your idle nipples.'
-	'As your nipples harden he firmly attaches the rope to them and tightens it around your neck.'
+	'As your nipples harden, he firmly attaches the rope to them and tightens it around your neck.'
 	'"Ouch! It hurts... please remove it!"'
-	'In response, the tormentor slaps a gag in your mouth and walks away which leaves you alone.'
+	'In response, the tormentor slaps a gag in your mouth and walks away, leaving you alone.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -871,11 +871,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureA3':
 	pain['asshole'] += 5
 	pcs_ass += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/torturea3.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a while the tormentor comes back and brings a dildo that''s attached to long stick.'
-	'"Mmmphh!" It is the only sound you are able to shout in protest about what''s coming to you.'
+	'After a while, the tormentor comes back and brings a dildo that''s attached to a long stick.'
+	'"Mmmphh!" is the only sound you are able to make in protest of what''s coming towards you.'
 	'Without any warning, he stuffs the dildo inside your ass. It goes so deep that you can feel it push against your intestines.'
 	'He secures the stick to the ground then leaves the room.'
-	'You swing on the rope to the left and right as you try to push it out of your ass. However, it is too deep inside of you and the stick does not move.'
+	'You swing on the rope to the left and right as you try to push it out of your ass. However, it is too deep inside of you, and the stick does not move.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureA4':
 	pain['tummy'] += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/torturea4.jpg"></center>'
 	'After what seems like an eternity, the tormentor comes back again.'
-	'Pleased to find you with tears and saliva all over your tits and stomach he unscrews the stick.'
+	'Pleased to find you with tears and saliva all over your tits and stomach, he unscrews the stick.'
 	'As a last sign of the torture, he pushes the stick even deeper inside you in a single stroke then swiftly takes it out.'
 	'You start to tremble a lot, but you know it is finally over.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
@@ -914,9 +914,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureB2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	pain['asscheeks'] += 10
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/tortureb2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can hear your tormentor going back to you.'
-	'"Uummmphh!" It is the sound your gagged mouth makes as the cane suddenly strikes your ass.'
-	'You are given thorough ass whipping.'
+	'You hear your tormentor coming back towards you.'
+	'"Uummmphh!" is the sound your gagged mouth makes as the cane suddenly strikes your ass.'
+	'You are given a thorough ass whipping.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -930,9 +930,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureB3':
 	pain['vaginal'] += 2
 	pcs_ass += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/tortureb3.jpg"></center>'
-	'As soon as the whipping stops you can feel pain in your arse and pussy.'
+	'As soon as the whipping stops, you feel a new source of pain in your arse and pussy.'
 	'Something is being pushed inside both of your holes.'
-	'You are given no time to adjust and both holes are fucked viciously, fast and deep.'
+	'You are given no time to adjust, and both holes are fucked viciously, fast and deep.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 10, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -945,7 +945,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureB4':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/tortureb4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Finally, your pussy and anus are left alone. Whatever what was inside of you has been removed.'
+	'Finally, your pussy and anus are left alone. Whatever was inside of you has been removed.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdRoom'
 end
 
@@ -956,7 +956,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureC1':
 	'Your tormentor looks angry. Your hands are tied behind your back and your legs also...'
 	'He attaches a rope to your feet - you are lifted like a pig to be cleaned!'
 	'After some minutes of just hanging, your tormentor comes at you with a leather whip.'
-	'He spins you around and whips whatever comes before him. Ass, back, belly, pussy, legs, tits. The whip hits your exposed flesh to leave angry looking welts behind.'
+	'He spins you around and whips whatever comes before him. Ass, back, belly, pussy, legs, tits. The whip hits your exposed flesh and leaves angry looking welts behind.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -998,7 +998,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureD2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/tortured2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are forced down on your knees on top of some kind of weird bench. The ropes are fixed so you cannot move an inch.'
 	'Not being able to see what is going on behind you, you suddenly feel something cold touching your asshole.'
-	'With single thrust something is shoved really deep inside your anus.'
+	'With a single thrust, something is shoved really deep inside your anus.'
 	'Tears stream down your face and you cry out loudly...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 10, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1011,10 +1011,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureD3':
 	menu_off = 1
 	pcs_throat += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/tortured3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Next is your tender pussy. He''s not giving you any time to adjust the dildo is shoved in.'
-	'Last comes your mouth. Finally, you can see what is being inserted into your every hole.'
-	'Dildos were attached to long wooden sticks.'
-	'The sticks are fixed tightly to the device - if you move just a bit any one of them gets shoved even deeper. It brings you even more discomfort and pain to your already abused body.'
+	'Next is your tender pussy. He shoves the dildo in, not giving you any time to adjust.'
+	'Last comes your mouth. Finally, you can see what is being inserted into your every hole: dildos attached to long wooden sticks.'
+	'The sticks are fixed tightly to the device - if you move just a bit, any one of them gets shoved even deeper. It brings you even more discomfort and pain to your already abused body.'
 	'Your tormentor walks away to leave you in this state for what feels like an eternity.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 60, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1046,7 +1045,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTortureD5':
 	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'Master'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/tortured5.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Even though your head is spinning and everything is aching inside you, you are able to make him cum in few minutes of work.'
+	'Even though your head is spinning and everything is aching inside you, you are able to make him cum in a few minutes of work.'
 	'Being bound, he shows you no remorse and fucks you raw before cumming in your very sore throat.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
@@ -1080,11 +1079,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdSoldSauna':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'"A nice lady from an established business" he smiles.'
 	'You are blindfolded and led away to a car.'
-	'After some time, you are led through doors and finally you can see. You are in a backroom of a brothel.'
-	'"Madame, "I paid 8000 for you bitch. Don''t make me regret this."'
-	'"Yes, madame."'
-	'"I''m not a bad person. If you earn me at least five times more than what I paid I may let you go."'
-	'With this faint sign of hope she leaves you alone.'
+	'After some time, you are led through doors and finally the blindfold is removed. You are in a backroom of a brothel.'
+	'"The madame of the brothel stands before you, "I paid 8000 <b>₽</b> for you bitch. Don''t make me regret this."'
+	'"Yes, madame" you reply'
+	'"I''m not a bad person" she continues. "If you earn me at least five times more than what I paid, I may let you go."'
+	'With this faint sign of hope, she leaves you alone.'
 	workDolg = 40000
 
 	painkiller = painkiller_bak
@@ -1107,7 +1106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomer':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailed.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'With anger you are led back to the basement.'
+	'Angrily, your master leads you back to the basement.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdFailedCustomer1'
 end
@@ -1117,7 +1116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomer1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailed1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Your master looks very upset.'
-	'First, he takes some ropes and ties you up. Your breasts start to turn purple from the lack of blood circulation, because of how tightly fastened they are.'
+	'First, he takes some ropes and ties you up. Your breasts start to turn purple from the lack of blood circulation because of how tightly fastened they are.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 15, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1129,7 +1128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomer2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	pain['asshole'] += 2
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailed2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Being tied up and unable to resist in any way a considerable plug is forced into your anus with little warning.'
+	'He then forces a considerable plug into your anus with little warning. Being tied up, you cannot resist in any way.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1142,9 +1141,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomer3':
 	pain['mouth'] += 5
 	pain['throat'] += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailed3.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You''re blindfolded and ring gag is attached, which stops you from closing your mouth. You are completely helpless and at the whims for any use or torture.'
-	'After some time of relative quiet, you hear someone coming. In a matter of seconds, someone grabs your head. He pushes his warm cock into your mouth and down your throat.'
-	'You panic and freak out, but he doesn''t let go. You are suffocating.'
+	'Continuing, he blindfolds you and attaches a ring gag, which stops you from closing your mouth. With you now completely helpless, you hear him walking away, leaving you to wonder what he has planned next.'
+	'After some time of relative quiet, you hear someone coming. In a matter of seconds, someone grabs your head. He pushes his warm cock into your mouth and down your throat, making it impossible to breathe.'
+	'You panic and freak out, but he doesn''t let go until you are on the verge of passing out.'
+	'Only then does he stop, not letting you escape into unconsciousness.'
 	pcs_mood = 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1166,10 +1166,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerElectro1':
 	pain['nipples'] += 20
 	pain['breasts'] += 20
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailedelectro1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Next, your restraints are removed, but you are led to a wall to be chained anew to a different device.'
-	'This time, you can see everything - but you probably wish you hadn''t.'
-	'Electrodes are taped to your nipples , clitoris, and vagina.'
-	'Your master takes few steps back and pushes a button on a remote - in that moment an electric shock goes through your whole body, making you shake like a wobbly gelatin.'
+	'Your restraints are removed, but you are led to a wall to be chained anew to a different device.'
+	'This time, you can see everything - but you wish you couldn''t.'
+	'Electrodes are taped to your nipples, clitoris, and vagina.'
+	'Your master takes a few steps back and pushes a button on a remote. In that moment, an electric shock goes through your whole body, making you shake like a wobbly gelatin.'
 	'You moan loudly and beg for him to stop.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1183,11 +1183,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerElectro2':
 	pain['asshole'] += 20
 	pain['tummy'] += 20
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailedelectro2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Your legs are pulled into the air and restrained to a wall - you are hanging by your hands with both of your holes fully at their disposal.'
+	'Your legs are pulled into the air and restrained to a wall. You hang by your hands with both of your holes fully at their disposal.'
 	'The first plug is violently taken out with a loud "SCHLOP".'
-	'However your anus isn''t left empty for long as in a few moments a new plug is inserted. Fear grips you as you see the wires hanging out of it.'
-	'The remote button is pushed again and this time you can feel it all inside your intestines and anus.'
-	'The sensation is very strange, it''s as if your belly was full of popping popcorn.'
+	'However, your anus isn''t left empty for long as in a few moments a new plug is inserted. Fear grips you as you see the wires hanging out of it.'
+	'The remote button is pushed again, and this time you can feel it all inside your intestines and anus.'
+	'The sensation is very strange. It''s as if your belly was full of popping popcorn.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1204,12 +1204,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerElectro3':
 	pcs_mood = 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailedelectro3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Finally your torment is at an end.'
-	'"Remember this lesson slave. If you disappoint a customer again a more severe punishment may be forced upon you."'
-	'"If you are found to be more trouble than you are worth one of our more perverse customers will pay us well for the opportunity to torture you to death."'
+	'Finally, your torment is at an end.'
+	'"Remember this lesson slave. If you disappoint a customer again, a more severe punishment may be forced upon you."'
+	'"If you are found to be more trouble than you are worth, one of our more perverse customers will pay us well for the opportunity to torture you to death."'
 	'You just nod that you understand and remain silent.'
 	*nl
-	'Your master leaves without another word - and you are left hanging like that!'
+	'Your master leaves without another word - and you are left hanging on the wall!'
 	'You are tired, everything hurts, and there seems to be no sign of when or if at all you will be removed from this terrible bondage.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdFailedCustomerChainedBack'
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerHook1':
 	pain['asshole'] += 5
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailedhook1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You are put on all fours and chained. Your ass is high in the air, showing both your holes to anyone standing behind you.'
-	'Somebody you don''t see comes up from behind to remove the buttplug with loud "SCHLOP" and immediately after... very violently... shoves something cold inside your anus.'
+	'Somebody you don''t see comes up from behind to remove the buttplug with a loud "SCHLOP" and immediately after... very violently... shoves something cold inside your anus.'
 	'You cry in both pain and surprise.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 10, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1235,9 +1235,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerHook2':
 	pain['labia'] += 20
 	pain['clitoris'] += 20
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailedhook2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Trying to look behind you, you can see your master bring something in his hands.'
+	'Trying to look behind you, you see your master bring something in his hands.'
 	'He puts it up against your pussy and suddenly it starts to vibrate.'
-	'The intensity is too much for you and instead of bringing you pleasure - it feels like a devious mix of intense pain and orgasmic pulses.'
+	'The intensity is too much for you, and instead of bringing you pleasure, it feels like a devious mix of intense pain and orgasmic pulses.'
 	'After a while, you piss yourself while experiencing something like a very painful orgasm.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
@@ -1252,8 +1252,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerHook3':
 	pain['vaginal'] += 10
 	pain['cervix'] += 20
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailedhook3.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Your pussy is very sensitive after the vibrator treatment - and your master knows that all too well.'
-	'He slams his dick deep inside you to hit your cervix. It seems to you that he is doeing it on purpose.'
+	'Your pussy is very sensitive after the vibrator treatment, and your master knows that all too well.'
+	'He slams his dick deep inside you to hit your cervix. It seems to you that he is doing it on purpose.'
 	'You try to beg for mercy, but he just doesn''t care. He wants you to suffer - this is your punishment...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1272,13 +1272,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerHook4':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefailedhook4.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Finally, you faint from all the abuse.'
-	'You wake up alone in the room, but your position has been changed while you were unconcious.'
+	'You wake up alone in the room, but your position has been changed while you were unconscious.'
 	'You are bound on some kind of a stool, hands tied together, and most importantly, your ass is lifted in the air and hanging by the hook.'
-	'You start to realize the pain of hanging by your asshole - so you try to push your legs up to move your ass even higher.'
+	'You start to realize the pain of hanging by your asshole, so you try to push your legs up to move your ass even higher.'
 	'However, you can only remain in that position for a little while before you get tired and relax your legs. The pain quickly returns to your hook elevated asshole.'
 	'No one is near and you already know all too well that no one will take pity on you anyway...'
 	*nl
-	'You just have to wait hoping this part of punishment will end soon.'
+	'You just have to wait hoping this part of your punishment will end soon.'
 
 	act 'Wait':gt 'abduction', 'abdFailedCustomerChainedBack'
 end
@@ -1305,12 +1305,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerWhip2':
 	pain['clitoris'] += 10
 	pain['asscheeks'] += 20
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorewhip2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'After a while, he cools down but your pussy is already red as a tomato.'
+	'After a while, he cools down, but your pussy is already red as a tomato.'
 	'He grabs you by your hair and leads you to another device. You have to lie down on your shoulders and put your ass high in the air.'
 	'He affixes you into this uncomfortable position with some straps and pipes.'
 	*nl
-	'Being content with your looks, how helpless and at his disposal you are, He grabs a rubber baton after seeing how you''re helpless and easy to torture while being content with how you look..'
-	'His hits you, especially targeting your exposed labia, by slapping you very hard and causing intense pain to shoot through your body.'
+	'Content with how helpless and at his disposal you are, he grabs a rubber baton.'
+	'His hits you, especially targeting your exposed labia, slapping you very hard and causing intense pain to shoot through your body.'
 	'From time to time, he alternates, by giving your asscheeks an even harder hit.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 20, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1326,10 +1326,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerWhip3':
 	pain['asshole'] += 10
 	pcs_ass += 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorewhip3.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As if it wasn''t hard enough, your master brings a long dildo attached to a stick.'
-	'With one stroke he penetrates your dry ass and fixes the stick to the wall. The stick is not wooden... it is metal and very heavy - its own weight enough to push your guts aside as it presses against your intestinal walls.'
+	'As if baton wasn''t enough, your master reaches for a long dildo attached to a stick.'
+	'With one stroke he penetrates your dry ass and fixes the stick to the wall. The stick is not wooden... it is metal and very heavy, its own weight enough to push your guts aside as it presses against your intestinal walls.'
 	*nl
-	'He then brings a different weapon - a cat-o-nine whip that''s made of leather.'
+	'He then picks up a different weapon - a cat-o-nine whip that''s made of leather.'
 	'His target is the same - your poor labia and clitoris.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1346,13 +1346,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerWhip4':
 	pcs_mood = 5
 	pcs_ass += 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorewhip4.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'After this even rougher punishment you are on a brink of fainting.'
-	'Your master brings another device on a stick - it is a vibrator with large head.'
-	'Your position is ideal for this - he buries the head nicely deep between your labia while touching your clitoris directly.'
+	'After this even rougher punishment, you are on the brink of fainting.'
+	'Your master brings another device on a stick - a vibrator with a large head.'
+	'He buries the head nicely deep between your labia while touching your clitoris directly, your position ideal for this.'
 	*nl
 	'When the device is turned on, you realize it must be on the highest setting. It almost makes you go crazy right away!'
-	'Your master leaves and you are left alone with this device turned on. The anal dildo still pushing deep into your ass and everything aches from this inhuman position.'
-	'You faint every now and then you have strong orgasms mixed with lot of pain. You shake like gelatin.'
+	'Your master leaves, and you are left alone with this device turned on, the anal dildo still pushing deep into your ass as well. Everything aches from this inhuman position.'
+	'You pass in and out of consciousness, every now and then having strong orgasms mixed with lot of pain. You shake like gelatin.'
 	'The only sounds in the room are your moans and the humming of the vibrator...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe', 240, 'sub', 'bound', 'maso', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1364,7 +1364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdFailedCustomerChainedBack':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/chainedback.jpg"></center>'
-	'After what seems as an eternity, you''re unbound and returned to your usual place, again restrained to the wall.'
+	'After what seems like an eternity, you''re unbound and returned to your usual place, again restrained to the wall.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdRoom'
 end
@@ -1377,7 +1377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildos':
 	dildoHorse = 35
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildos1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You take the dildos from the ground and clean them up a bit in the shower.'
-	'There are four of them: small, regular, big, and one that''s horse sized.'
+	'There are four of them: small, regular, big, and horse sized.'
 
 	act 'Train your ass':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosAnalGate'
 	act 'Train your mouth':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosMouthGate'
@@ -1421,7 +1421,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosSmall':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_vag > dildoSmall:
-		'You feel that your pussy can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your pussy can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 	else
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your pussy making it a bit deeper and wider.'
 	end
@@ -1439,7 +1439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosSmallUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildossmallhurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += 5
 		pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1452,7 +1452,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosRegular':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_vag >= dildoRegular:
-		'You feel that your pussy can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your pussy can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosRegularUse'
 	elseif pcs_vag <= dildoRegular and pcs_vag > dildoSmall:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your pussy, making it a bit deeper and wider.'
@@ -1469,11 +1469,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosRegularUse':
 	dick = 20
 	if pcs_vag > dildoRegular:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosregular.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start fucking the dildo with ease, your pussy swallows it whole without any problem.'
+		'You start fucking the dildo with ease. Your pussy swallows it whole without any problem.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosregularhurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += 5
 		pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1486,7 +1486,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosBig':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_vag >= dildoBig:
-		'You feel that your pussy can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your pussy can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosBigUse'
 	elseif pcs_vag <= dildoBig and pcs_vag > dildoRegular:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your pussy making it a bit deeper and wider.'
@@ -1503,11 +1503,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosBigUse':
 	dick = 30
 	if pcs_vag > dildoBig:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosbig.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start fucking the dildo with ease, your pussy swallows it whole without any problem.'
+		'You start fucking the dildo with ease. Your pussy swallows it whole without any problem.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosbighurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += 5
 		pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1520,7 +1520,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosHorse':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_vag >= dildoHorse:
-		'You feel that your pussy can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your pussy can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosHorseUse'
 	elseif pcs_vag <= dildoHorse and pcs_vag > dildoBig:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your pussy, making it a bit deeper and wider.'
@@ -1541,7 +1541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosHorseUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildoshorsehurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += 5
 		pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1555,7 +1555,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalSmall':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_ass > dildoSmall:
-		'You feel that your anus can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your anus can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 	else
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your anus making it a bit deeper and wider.'
 	end
@@ -1573,7 +1573,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalSmallUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosanalsmallhurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['asshole'] += 5
 		pcs_ass += 1
@@ -1586,7 +1586,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalRegular':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_ass >= dildoRegular:
-		'You feel that your anus can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your anus can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosAnalRegularUse'
 	elseif pcs_ass <= dildoRegular and pcs_ass > dildoSmall:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your anus making it a bit deeper and wider.'
@@ -1607,7 +1607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalRegularUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosanalregularhurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['asshole'] += 5
 		pcs_ass += 1
@@ -1620,7 +1620,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalBig':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_ass >= dildoBig:
-		'You feel that your anus can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your anus can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosAnalBigUse'
 	elseif pcs_ass <= dildoBig and pcs_ass > dildoRegular:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your anus, making it a bit deeper and wider.'
@@ -1641,7 +1641,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalBigUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosanalbighurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['asshole'] += 5
 		pcs_ass += 1
@@ -1654,7 +1654,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalHorse':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_ass >= dildoHorse:
-		'You feel that your anus can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your anus can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosAnalHorseUse'
 	elseif pcs_ass <= dildoHorse and pcs_ass > dildoBig:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your anus making it a bit deeper and wider.'
@@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosAnalHorseUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosanalhorsehurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
+		'You start to fuck yourself with this dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['asshole'] += 5
 		pcs_ass += 1
@@ -1688,7 +1688,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthSmall':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_throat > dildoSmall:
-		'You feel that your throat can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your throat can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 	else
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your throat making it a bit deeper.'
 	end
@@ -1706,7 +1706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthSmallUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'deepthroat', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosmouthsmallhurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to sucking the dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
+		'You start to suck the dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['throat'] += 5
 		pcs_throat += 1
@@ -1719,7 +1719,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthRegular':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_throat >= dildoRegular:
-		'You feel that your throat can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your throat can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosMouthRegularUse'
 	elseif pcs_throat <= dildoRegular and pcs_throat > dildoSmall:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your throat making it a bit deeper.'
@@ -1740,7 +1740,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthRegularUse':
 		gs 'arousal', 'deepthroat', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosmouthregularhurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to sucking the dild, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
+		'You start to suck the dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
 		'It hurts but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['throat'] += 5
 		pcs_throat += 1
@@ -1753,7 +1753,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthBig':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_throat >= dildoBig:
-		'You feel that your throat can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your throat can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosMouthBigUse'
 	elseif pcs_throat <= dildoBig and pcs_throat > dildoRegular:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your throat making it a bit deeper.'
@@ -1770,11 +1770,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthBigUse':
 	dick = 30
 	if pcs_throat > dildoBig:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosmouthbig.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start sucking the dildo with ease your throat swallows it whole without any problem.'
+		'You start sucking the dildo with ease as your throat swallows it whole without any problem.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'deepthroat', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosmouthbighurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to sucking the dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
+		'You start to suck the dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['throat'] += 5
 		pcs_throat += 1
@@ -1787,7 +1787,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthHorse':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if pcs_throat >= dildoHorse:
-		'You feel that your throat can accomodate this dildo easily.'
+		'You feel that your throat can accommodate this dildo easily.'
 		act 'Use it':gt 'abduction', 'abdTrainDildosMouthHorseUse'
 	elseif pcs_throat <= dildoHorse and pcs_throat > dildoBig:
 		'You feel that this dildo will stretch your throat making it a bit deeper.'
@@ -1804,12 +1804,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdTrainDildosMouthHorseUse':
 	dick = dildoHorse
 	if pcs_throat > dildoHorse:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosmouthhorse.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start sucking the dildo with ease while your throat swallows it whole without any problem.'
+		'You start sucking the dildo with ease as your throat swallows it whole without any problem.'
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'arousal', 'deepthroat', 60
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoredildosmouthhorsehurt.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start to suck the dildo knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
+		'You start to suck the dildo, knowing it is bigger than what you can handle and pushing it as deep as possible while trying not to suffocate.'
 		'It hurts, but you can feel that some progress was made.'
 		pain['throat'] += 5
 		pcs_throat += 1