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[text edit] clean up text in alex

Spackled Lanturn 3 years ago
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locations/alex.qsrc

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ frost = 0
 minut += 30
 gs 'boystat', 'A81'
 gs 'stat'
-'Arriving at Alexey''s apartment, he offers you various alcoholic beverages before sitting down at a table in the hall to talk to each other.'
+'Arriving at Alexey''s apartment, he offers you various alcoholic beverages, and the two of you sit down at a table in the hall to talk to each other.'
 'After a while of talking and drinking you feel a bit drunk, and Alexey asks you to come closer.'
 
 act 'Get on your knees and take it in your mouth':
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ act 'Get on your knees and take it in your mouth':
 	alexeySex += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<rand(29, 41)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'Kneeling before him, you unbutton his pants and take a firm grasp of his erect cock.'
-	'Leaning in closer, you give it a quick kiss with your <<$liptalk>> before guiding it your mouth.'
-	'As you suck on his hard dick, Alexey relaxes in his chair letting you take care of his needs.'
+	'Leaning in closer, you give it a quick kiss with your <<$liptalk>> before guiding it to your mouth.'
+	'As you suck on his hard dick, Alexey relaxes in his chair, letting you take care of his needs.'
 	'Suddenly, he removes his penis from your mouth, pulls you up on your feet and leads you to the bedroom.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ act 'Get on your knees and take it in your mouth':
 		gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10,'sub'
 		'Alexey slaps you on your ass with the palm of his hand and says, "You''re wet like a slut already, do you like being fucked like this?"'
 		if analplugin = 1:
-			'<<$boy>> pulls the plug out of your narrow and tight ass.'
+			'Alexey pulls the plug out of your narrow and tight ass.'
 			analplugout = 1
 		end
 		'Without stopping his relentless pounding of your pussy, Alexey smears one of his fingers with your lovejuices, and sticks it in your anus.'