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locations/intro_sg_select.qsrc

@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerdqueen':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Queen of the nerds</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'While you love all things nerdy, what you love the most is hanging out with your fellow nerds and doing nerdy things together. This has made you fairly social for a nerd and more general in your areas of knowledge. As you got older and started to develop as a woman, it also made you much more aware of your sexuality than most nerds are comfortable with. As such, you cultivated that awareness more than most and are now more at ease with your body than most of the other nerds.'
-	'By nerd standards, you are confident, dynamic and attractive and this has led to you being the leader of your group of friends. You are more acceptable to other social groups as a result, especially the cool kids, who seem to respect your social skills and looks.'
+	'By nerd standards, you are confident, dynamic and attractive and this has led to you being the leader of your group of friends. You''re more acceptable to other social groups as a result, especially the cool kids, who seem to respect your social skills and looks.'
 
 	act 'Confirm this starting option':
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'nerd'
@@ -788,9 +788,9 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dancer':
 	'You fell in love with dancing at an early age and never looked back. You spent a lot of your free time trying to improve your skills, and it paid off; you''re actually quite good now!'
 	'<<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>> helpfully pointed out that an added benefit of dance was a greater increase in your flexibility (that is, of course, typical of <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>). Your obsession with dancing, however, has had some repercussions on your school performance. You''re a sub-par student, and you haven''t made many friends other than your fellow jocks.'
 	*nl
-	'You are particularly close with <<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>>, who is just as passionate about dancing as you are. You trained a lot together as children and have a mutual respect for each other''s abilities.'
-	'At the end of the school year you took an ballet assessment and are awaiting a letter from the prestigious ballet academy to see if you are accepted into their summer school.'
-	'Note: The ballet is currently under active development and events are character driven which can lead to inescapable events. You must start in June to activate this content.'
+	'You''re particularly close with <<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>>, who is just as passionate about dancing as you are. You trained a lot together as children and have a mutual respect for each other''s abilities.'
+	'At the end of the school year, you took a ballet assessment and are awaiting a letter from the prestigious ballet academy to see if you were accepted into their summer school.'
+	'Note: The ballet is currently under active development and events are character driven, which can lead to inescapable events. You must start in June to activate this content.'
 
 	act 'Confirm this starting option':
 		gs 'intro_sg_select', 'jock'
@@ -1061,7 +1061,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'socialite':
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Beautiful</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/popular_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You might not be the smartest, be the most social or have the toughest attitude - but what you do have is natural good looks. You blossomed earlier than most girls and the boys took note, especially <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>, who started acting differently around you. As you got older your looks only improved, and you are often considered one of the best looking girls wherever you go.'
+	'You might not be the smartest, the most social or have the toughest attitude, but you do have natural good looks. You blossomed earlier than most girls and the boys took note, especially <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>, who started acting differently around you. As you got older your looks only improved, and you''re often considered one of the best looking girls wherever you go.'
 	'You are especially popular with the cool kids and jocks.'
 
 	act 'Confirm this starting option':
@@ -1129,7 +1129,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 	act 'Return to starting options': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'anorexic':
-	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Just Hangin in There</font></h4></center>'
+	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Just Hanging in There</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/popular_3.jpg"></center>'
 	'You had good looks growing up and naturally ended up falling in with the cool crowd. You enjoyed being the center of attention and became obsessed with looking like the models you''d seen on social media and in magazines. You started dieting, but took it too far and ended up losing a lot of weight, which caused some of your fellow students to start talking about you and make the odd joke at your expense. This led to a vicious cycle and as your looks deteriorated, the jokes got worse, which only spurred you on further.'
 	'Your family and some of your friends, especially <<$npc_nickname[''A15'']>> and <<$npc_nickname[''A148'']>>, became concerned and with their support, you were able to start recovering. You now have a good relationship with your mother and sister, as well as <<$npc_nickname[''A15'']>> and <<$npc_nickname[''A148'']>>, who defended you and prevented you from becoming an outcast. You''re still a member of your clique, albeit only barely.'

locations/uni_dorm.qsrc

@@ -31,14 +31,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	else
 		menu_off = 1
-		'Since you''re not attending the university and don''t have an ID, you won''t be allowed access to the dorms unless you''re on the guest list of a student.'
+		'Since you''re not attending the university and don''t have a student ID, you won''t be allowed access to the dorms unless you''re on the guest list of a student.'
 
 		if DjibrilQW['invite'] = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 			act 'I''m here to visit Djibril':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Djibril."' 
-				'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "What, your own kind not good enough for you? Go ahead and take care of those black cocks. He''s on the eighth floor, room 810." She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
+				'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "What, your own kind not good enough for you? Go ahead and take care of those black cocks. He''s on the eighth floor, room 810."' 
+				'She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
 
 				act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 			end
@@ -49,7 +50,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Gosha."' 
-				'The woman shakes her head in disapproval. "You''re Gosha''s new whore? I''ll never understand what you sluts see in that scrawny bastard. He''s been through half of the dorm already! He''s on the sixth floor, room 602." She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
+				'The woman shakes her head in disapproval. "You''re Gosha''s new whore? I''ll never understand what you sluts see in that scrawny bastard. He''s been through half of the dorm already! He''s on the sixth floor, room 602."' 
+				'She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
 				reccoldorm = 1
 				goshiflag = 1
 
@@ -63,7 +65,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
 				if kendraQW['sub'] < 0:
 					'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Kendra."' 
-					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "It seems like she''s gotten tired of you since you''re no longer on the guest list. Now get out of here before I call security." Surprised, you turn and quickly leave before the woman calls security.'
+					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "It seems like she''s gotten tired of you since you''re no longer on the guest list. Now get out of here before I call security!"' 
+					'Surprised, you turn and quickly leave.'
 
 					act 'Head outside':
 						killvar 'university_dorm'
@@ -72,7 +75,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					end
 				else
 					'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Kendra."' 
-					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "What, a man not good enough for you? Go ahead and serve that black whore. She''s on the eighth floor, room 801." She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
+					'The woman gives you a look of complete disgust. "What, a man not good enough for you? Go ahead and serve that black whore. She''s on the eighth floor, room 801."' 
+					'She turns away from you and goes back to what she was doing. Not wanting to get into an argument with her, you say nothing and quickly head for the elevator.'
 
 					act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 				end
@@ -84,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Katja Meynold."' 
-				'The woman smiles. "You''re one of Katja''s friends?" she asks. "She''s such a sweet girl. She''s on the second floor, room 204."'
+				'The woman smiles. "You''re one of Katja''s friends? She''s such a sweet girl. She''s on the second floor, room 204."'
 				'She lets you in and you thank her before heading for the elevator.'
 
 				act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
@@ -96,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				!!*clr & cla
 				!!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm.jpg"></center>'
 				!!'You walk over to the counter and pull out your ID. "I''m here to visit Albina Barlovskaya."' 
-				!!'"Oh. Her," the woman says with a frown. "That girl needs discipline. Strolling in here like she owns the place after spending the night in a place like <i>that</i>. Her mother should be ashamed of herself for raising such a slut!"'
+				!!'"Oh. <i>Her</i>," the woman says with a disgusted frown. "That little whore needs some discipline. Her mother should be ashamed of herself for raising such a slut!"'
 				!!'She gives you a judgmental stare. "Your ''friend'' is on the seventh floor, room 707." She points you at the elevator before going back to what she was doing.'
 				!!'You''ve better things to do than stand around and argue with her, so you head for the elevator.'
 				!!act 'Take the elevator': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
@@ -173,22 +177,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'second_floor':
 				if locat['katja'] = 29 and sofiaQW['know'] = 1 and rand(0,1) = 0 and week < 5:
 					if rand(0,2) = 0 and sofiaQW['spying_day'] ! daystart:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
-						'You know on the door and can clearly hear that somebody is in the room, but nobody opens the door.'
+						'You knock on the door and can clearly hear somebody in the room, but they don''t answer.'
 						if pcs_prcptn > rand(30,70):
 							gs 'exp_gain', 'prcptn', rand(1,2)
-							'Listening a little more carefully, you are sure that somebody is having sex in the room.'
+							'Listening a little more carefully, you''re sure that you can hear them having sex...'
 							act 'Take a peek': gt 'sofia', 'spying'
 						else
 							act 'Open the door': gt 'sofia', 'not_spying'
 						end
 					else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big260.jpg"></center>'
-						'Sofia opens the door. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Katja is at the library right now and I have Maxim over so I don''t have time to talk. See you later!" she says before closing the door.'			
+						'Sofia opens the door. "Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Katja is at the library right now and I have Maxim over, so I don''t really have time to talk. See you later!" she says before closing the door.'			
 					end
 				elseif (locat['katja'] = 32 or locat['katja'] = 33) and katjaQW['kitchen_day'] ! daystart:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
-					'You knock on the door, but no one answers. Noticing what time it is Katja is probably in the shared Kitchen eating or preparing food.'
-					act 'See if Katja is in the shared kitchen': gt 'katja_pantyquest', 'kitchen'
+					'You knock on the door, but no one answers. Noticing what time it is, you realise that Katja is likely in the shared kitchen.'
+					act 'Check if Katja is in the kitchen': gt 'katja_pantyquest', 'kitchen'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
 					'You knock on the door, but no one answers. She must be asleep or not home.'
@@ -223,7 +227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sixth_floor':
 			*clr & cla 
 			if (week <= 4 and hour >= 16 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 2) = 2) or (week = 6 and hour >= 9 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 2) = 2) or (week = 7 and hour >= 9 and hour < 23 and rand(1, 3) >= 2):
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big83.jpg"></center>'
-				'Gosha opens the door. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, why don''t you come in?" He stands aside tp let you enter before closing the door behind you.'
+				'Gosha opens the door. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, why don''t you come in?" He stands aside to let you enter before closing the door behind you.'
 
 				act 'Enter': gt 'gosha', 'gosha_room'
 			else
@@ -286,10 +290,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'seventh_floor':
 					'You have no idea where she would be at this time of night, so you head back to the elevator.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
 				end
+			elseif locat['albina'] = 26:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
+				if AlbinaQW['know_uni_sex'] = 0:
+					'You knock on the door, but don''t recieve an answer.'
+					'Listening carefully, you can faintly hear her on the other side of the door...'
+					if rand(0,1) = 0:
+						AlbinaQW['know_uni_sex'] = 1
+						gs 'stat'
+						'Placing your ear to the door, you can hear a bed squeaking, accompanied by Albina''s loud moans and a boy grunting.'
+						'<b>"FUCK YES, JUST LIKE THAT! DON''T STOP, I''M GONNA FUCKING CUM!!"</b>'
+						'Seeing that you''re not going to get an answer anytime soon, you step away from the door.'
+						act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'seventh_floor' & minut += 2
+					else
+						'Placing your ear to the door, you can hear a faint gagging sound and the voice of a boy that you can''t quite place.'
+						'"Fuck, keep sucking my dick like that, I''m gonna cum!"'
+						'Realising that they''re almost finished, you back away from the door before you''re caught.'
+						act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'seventh_floor' & minut += 2
+					end
+				else
+					'You knock on the door, but don''t receive an answer. Hearing the faint sound of her bed squeaking and flesh slapping against flesh, you remember that she''s normally having sex right about now.'
+					'You back away from the door, knowing you won''t get an answer.'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'seventh_floor' & minut += 2
+				end
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_hall.jpg"></center>'
-				'You knock on the door, but there''s no answer. She''s either still asleep or isn''t home.'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'uni_dorm', 'elevator'
+				'You knock on the door, but there''s no answer. She''s either asleep or isn''t home.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'seventh_floor'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -545,7 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mens_restroom':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Dormitory - Men''s Restroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/restrooms/bathroom_mens.jpg"></center>'
-	'You peek around the corner. Inside this room, stalls line the right side, with urinals on the far wall and rows of sinks and <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a> to the left. The room has a smell of disinfectant and stale piss.'
+	'You peek around the corner. Stalls line the right side of the room, with urinals on the far wall and rows of sinks and <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a> to the left. The room smells strongly of disinfectant and stale piss.'
 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'tenth_floor'
 
@@ -566,7 +593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'womens_restroom':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Dormitory - Women''s Restroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/restrooms/bathroom_womens.jpg"></center>'
-	'You peek around the corner. Inside this room, stalls line the right side and rows of sinks, with <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a> to the left. The room has a smell of disinfectant.'
+	'You peek around the corner. Stalls line the right side of the room, with rows of sinks with <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a> to the left. The room smells strongly of disinfectant.'
 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'tenth_floor'
 
@@ -591,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	*clr & cla
-	'<center><b>Your room</b></center>'
+	'<center><b>Your dorm room</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/dorm_room/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'This is the dorm room you share with Vika.'
 	'Your <a href="exec:gt ''bed'',''start''">bed</a> is positioned in one of the corners of the room. Your <a href="exec:gt ''stol'' ,''start''">desk</a> sits at the foot of it.'
@@ -682,7 +709,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room':
 	gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
 	
 	if func('homes_properties', 'is_current_home') ! -1:
-		act 'Set this dorm room as your main home':gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home' & gt 'uni_dorm', 'dorm_room'
+		act 'Set your dorm room as your main home': gs 'homes_properties', 'set_home' & gt 'uni_dorm', 'dorm_room'
 	end
 	!! Removed the check to see if Sveta has access to the place as the check happens before Sveta reaches 
 	!! this location, at the "Go to your room" actions.

locations/uni_grounds.qsrc

@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 	*clr & cla
 	killvar '$locclass'
 	gs 'katja_meynold_schedule'
+	!!gs 'albina_schedule'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	!! fix for time cheat
@@ -23,11 +24,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 		university['campus_event_time'] = totminut
 		if hour > 7 and (daystage = 2 or daystage = 3):
 			if (hotornot_uni = 0 or fuckornot_uni = 0) and yearstart = 2 and month >= 9 and day >= 11:
-				!!this bit of code and text needs to be added to the University. So it fires on the 2nd monday after the University has started.
-				!!This might need a better location. Blame Nutluck.
+				!!This bit of code and text needs to be added to the university so it fires on the 2nd Monday after university has started.
+				!!(This might need a better location. Blame Nutluck.)
 				fuckornot_uni = 1
 				hotornot_uni = 1
-				'As you head to class, you can''t help but overhear a lot of your fellow students talking. It seems someone has made website ranking the girls of the University on how bangable they are and a list of the guys on how bangable they are. You over heard the URL and make a note of it to check it on a computer when you get a chance.'
+				'As you head to class, you can''t help but overhear a lot of your fellow students talking. It seems someone has made websites ranking both the male and female students on how bangable they are. You overhear someone mention the links and make a note of them to check when you get a chance.'
 			elseif temper >= 12 and rand(0,3) = 0:
 				gt 'uni_grounds', 'day_warm'
 			elseif temper >= 8 and rand(0,9) = 0:
@@ -57,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 	if month >= 11 or month <= 3:
 		if daystage = 2 or daystage = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/uni_day_winter.jpg"></center>'
-			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes. Snow covers the ground and the cold wind bites through your clothes, only a few of the walkways are cleared of the snow.'
+			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes. Snow covers the ground and the cold wind bites through your clothes. Only a few of the walkways have been cleared of snow.'
 			if week > 5:
 				'The campus is pretty quiet right now. The few students you see are rushing across the cold snowy quad.'
 			else
@@ -65,16 +66,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			end
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/uni_winter_night.jpg"></center>'
-			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes. Snow covers the ground and the cold night air with biting wind chills you to the bone, only a few of the walkways are cleared of the snow. The lights around the walkways glare off the snow giving it a surreal glow, lighting the night up surprisingly well. It is very quiet with only a few students rushing across the campus, trying not to slip on any patches of ice.'
+			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes. Snow covers the ground and the biting wind chills you to the bone. The lights around the walkways glare off the snow and give it a surreal glow, lighting the night up surprisingly well.' 
+			'It''s very quiet, with only a few students rushing across the campus, trying not to slip on any patches of ice.'
 		end
 	else
 		if daystage = 2 or daystage = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/uni_day.jpg"></center>'
 			'The university boasts a large amount of buildings hosting many different types of classes. It is nice and warm out.'
 			if week = 7:
-				'Despite it being a Sunday, the quad is busy with students taking advantage of the nice weather - At least those who aren''t still in their dorm rooms, recovering from a weekend of partying.'
+				'Despite it being a Sunday, the quad is busy with students taking advantage of the nice weather, at least those who aren''t still in their dorm rooms, recovering from a weekend of partying.'
 			elseif week > 5:
-				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are taking advantage of the weather to hang out in the quad.'
+				'The campus is quite lively right now. Many of the students are taking advantage of the weather to hang out on the quad.'
 			else
 				'The campus is quite lively right now. Most of the students are on their way to their next class, or hanging out with friends.'
 			end
@@ -91,9 +93,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 		end
 	end
 
-	if locat['katja']  = 25:
-		'You see '+iif( katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0 and ($start_type['loc'] ! 'sg' and $start_type['magic'] = 'tg'), 'a redheaded girl', '<a href="exec:gt ''katja_chat'', ''start''">Katja</a>')+' sitting  talking on her phone.'
+	if locat['katja'] = 25:
+		'You see '+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0 and ($start_type['loc'] ! 'sg' and $start_type['magic'] = 'tg'), 'a redheaded girl', '<a href="exec:gt ''katja_chat'', ''start''">Katja</a>')+' sitting while talking on her phone.'
 	end
+	
+	!!if locat['albina'] = 20:
+		!!'You see '+iif(AlbinaQW['know_albina_uni'] = 0 and ($start_type['loc'] ! 'sg' and $start_type['magic'] = 'tg'), 'an attractive looking brunette', 'Albina')+' jogging around the quad. Her well toned physique and tight fitting clothes are drawing the attention of multiple boys around her, but she appears to have earbuds in and doesn''t pay much attention to them as she continues her run.'
+	!!end
 
 	act 'Return to the city':
 		minut += 5
@@ -109,7 +115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 
 	act 'Go to the dorms': minut += 3 & gt 'uni_dorm', 'start'
 
-	!!act 'Got to the gym':
+	!!act 'Go to the gym':
 	!!	minut += 3
 	!!	gt '', ''
 	!!end
@@ -457,18 +463,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_warm':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 13:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/girl_vomit1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You across a group of students, all dressed nicely while stumbling along clearly drunk, though some are worse than others. A few of them are leaning against each other to keep their balance. A girl in the group suddenly lunges over to the wall and begins puking her guts out as one of the less drunk guys sighs and reluctantly walks over to try and help her out.'
+		'You across a group of nicely dressed students all stumbling along clearly drunk, though some are worse than others. A few of them are leaning against each other to keep their balance when a girl in the group suddenly lunges over to the wall and starts puking her guts out as one of the less drunk guys sighs and reluctantly walks over to try and help her out.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 14:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/help_pee1.jpg"></center>'
-		'There''s a movie festival happening out on the quad tonight. A lot of students are hanging out near a wall temporarily constructed to project the films on, but there are others milling around the edges in the dark. A few of these latter students have taken the opportunity to start drinking, and quite a few of them are already drunk. One of them, a guy with two cups in his hands, is stumbling over to you with a girl beside him. He loudly tells the girl that he needs to pee and makes a show of holding up the two full cups of beer. The girl shakes her head before unzipping his shorts and pulling out his dick. She holds his dick and aims it as he starts to urinate. As you walk by him, trying to ignore what he''s doing, he turns to you and gives you a wide, drunken grin.'
+		'There''s a movie festival happening out on the quad tonight. A lot of students are hanging out near a wall that''s temporarily been constructed to project the films on, but there are others milling around the edges in the dark. A few of these latter students have taken the opportunity to start drinking, and quite a few of them are already drunk. One of them, a guy with two cups in his hands, is stumbling over to you with a girl beside him. He loudly tells the girl that he needs to pee and makes a show of holding up the two full cups of beer. The girl shakes her head before unzipping his shorts and pulling out his dick. She holds his dick and aims it as he starts to urinate. As you walk by him, trying to ignore what he''s doing, he turns to you and gives you a wide, drunken grin.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/ir_pickup1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see an African boy with two white girls hanging out near one of the buildings. He has his arm around one in a tight dress, while he drops his other hand to squeeze the ass of the other. They''re carrying a bottle of vodka with them and they all seem to be fairly drunk. The girl in the dress starts rubbing on the boy''s chest as he continues playing with her friend''s ass, then reaches down and grabs his crotch, which only makes him grin. When he sees you, he winks and then starts leading the two girls off towards the dorm building nearby.'
+		'You see an African boy with two white girls hanging out near one of the buildings. He has his arm around one in a tight dress, while he drops his other hand to squeeze the ass of the other. They''re carrying a bottle of vodka with them and they all seem to be fairly drunk. The girl in the dress starts rubbing on the boy''s chest as he continues playing with her friend''s ass, then reaches down and grabs his crotch, which only makes him grin. When he sees you, he winks and then starts leading the two girls off towards the dorm building.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -486,7 +492,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_warm':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 18:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/2girls_dryhump2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see two cute girls being followed by a group of guys walking across the quad. They guys are calling out to the girls, trying to pick them up, but it''s clearly not working. When they reach one of the buildings, one of the girls grabs the other, turns her around and starts grinding against her ass. The second girl laughs and starts moaning along. "Is that what you boys are hoping for tonight?" the first girl shouts. The guys grin and nod their heads enthusiastically. "Well, too bad," she laughs. "The only action you assholes are getting tonight is from your own hands!" The two girls laugh and run off, leaving the group of guys, and you, bewildered.'
+		'You see two cute girls being followed by a group of guys walking across the quad. The guys are calling out to the girls, trying to pick them up, but it''s clearly not working. When they reach one of the buildings, one of the girls grabs the other, turns her around and starts grinding against her ass. The second girl laughs and starts moaning along. "Is that what you boys are hoping for tonight?" the first girl shouts. The guys grin and nod their heads enthusiastically. "Well, too bad," she laughs. "The only action you assholes are getting tonight is from your own hands!" The two girls laugh and run off, leaving the group of guys, and you, bewildered.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'