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Upped minimum stat exp to 1 from 0 and some minor punctuaction and grammar fixes.

Lurk_Morrison 5 years ago
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  1. 7 7
      locations/BMloc.qsrc
  2. 2 2
      locations/Gaddvor.qsrc
  3. 1 1
      locations/Gadgarden.qsrc
  4. 8 8
      locations/Gadhouse.qsrc
  5. 8 8
      locations/Gadsarai.qsrc
  6. 1 1
      locations/HotelHole.qsrc
  7. 10 10
      locations/HotelWork.qsrc
  8. 11 11
      locations/ParChurch.qsrc
  9. 4 4
      locations/albinahome.qsrc
  10. 5 5
      locations/anushapt.qsrc
  11. 174 174
      locations/artemEv.qsrc
  12. 14 14
      locations/belpicknick.qsrc
  13. 6 6
      locations/bicycle.qsrc
  14. 2 2
      locations/billiard.qsrc
  15. 2 2
      locations/brother.qsrc
  16. 2 2
      locations/chessplay.qsrc
  17. 9 9
      locations/cikl.qsrc
  18. 9 9
      locations/dinParty.qsrc
  19. 15 15
      locations/downlibrary.qsrc
  20. 29 29
      locations/father.qsrc
  21. 8 8
      locations/gLakeNude.qsrc
  22. 12 12
      locations/gadfield.qsrc
  23. 6 6
      locations/gadforest.qsrc
  24. 49 49
      locations/gadforest_event.qsrc
  25. 5 5
      locations/gadforestswamp.qsrc
  26. 2 2
      locations/gadriver.qsrc
  27. 1 1
      locations/garfather.qsrc
  28. 2 2
      locations/gdkin.qsrc
  29. 15 12
      locations/gdksport.qsrc
  30. 9 9
      locations/gschool_events.qsrc
  31. 1 1
      locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc
  32. 8 8
      locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc
  33. 64 65
      locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc
  34. 6 6
      locations/katjaEv.qsrc
  35. 2 2
      locations/kruchess.qsrc
  36. 11 8
      locations/kseniyaQW.qsrc
  37. 196 195
      locations/lesbimistress.qsrc
  38. 6 6
      locations/park.qsrc
  39. 5 5
      locations/party_girls.qsrc
  40. 1 1
      locations/pavtrainhall_events.qsrc
  41. 84 84
      locations/postdeliveries.qsrc
  42. 12 12
      locations/qwBarEncounters.qsrc
  43. 1 1
      locations/qwBarPolet.qsrc
  44. 4 4
      locations/saunawhore.qsrc
  45. 14 13
      locations/swamphouse.qsrc

+ 7 - 7
locations/BMloc.qsrc

@@ -18,21 +18,21 @@ act 'Dance':
 			if bmANAL[Tboynum] > 0:$text2 = 'you let me fuck you in the ass.'
 			if bmGANG[Tboynum] > 0:$text2 = 'you let me and my friend fuck you.'
 
-			'<<$niknameboy>> tells you "Remember me, <<$text2>>. I''m <<$boydesc>>."'
+			'<<$niknameboy>> asks you, "Remember me, <<$text2>>. I''m <<$boydesc>>."'
 		else
 			if bmKISS[Tboynum] > 0 or bmTITS[Tboynum] > 0:
-				'<<$niknameboy>> tells you "Remember me, we hung out and drank together beer. I''m <<$boydesc>>."'
+				'<<$niknameboy>> asks you, "Remember me, we hung out and drank together beer. I''m <<$boydesc>>."'
 			else
-				'<<$niknameboy>> tells you "Remember me, we danced together. I''m <<$boydesc>>."'
+				'<<$niknameboy>> asks you, "Remember me, we danced together. I''m <<$boydesc>>."'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
-	if bmTip[Tboynum] = 0:'After the Dance <<$boydesc>> offers to go out and drink beer.'
-	if bmTip[Tboynum] = 1:'After the Dance <<$boydesc>> offers to go hang out.'
-	if bmTip[Tboynum] = 2:'After the Dance <<$boydesc>> offers to go to his hotel.'
+	if bmTip[Tboynum] = 0:'After the dance <<$boydesc>> offers to go out and drink beer.'
+	if bmTip[Tboynum] = 1:'After the dance <<$boydesc>> offers to go hang out.'
+	if bmTip[Tboynum] = 2:'After the dance <<$boydesc>> offers to go to his hotel.'
 
-	act 'Refuse': sprt_exp += rand(0,1) & gt 'gdkin'
+	act 'Refuse': sprt_exp += rand(1,2) & gt 'gdkin'
 	
 	act 'Agree':
 		*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/Gaddvor.qsrc

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 			menu_off = 1
 			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 			'You went out into the yard and noticed Mira standing there.'
-			'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>> hi, hope you don’’t mind me visiting. I was bored being home alone." she said smiling.'
+			'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>> hi, hope you don’’t mind me visiting. I was bored being home alone," she said smiling.'
 			mira_guestday = daystart
 			minut += 5
 			mira_guest = 1
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chickens':
 			minut += 30
 			grandmahelp += 1
 			feed_chickens = 0
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Finish':gt'Gaddvor'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Gadgarden.qsrc

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden':
 		    grandmahelp += 1
 		    vital_exp += 1
 		    fat -= RAND(1,2)
-		    hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+		    hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 		    gs 'stat'
 			
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/water_garden.jpg"></center>'

+ 8 - 8
locations/Gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -194,10 +194,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Main':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			minut += 1
-			inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
-			grandma_trouble += rand(1,3)
+			inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+			grandma_trouble += rand(0,2)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/gaddvor_nude.jpg"></center>'
-			'It''s certainly risky leaving the hosue like this, and while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside naked, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught'
+			'It''s certainly risky leaving the house like this, and while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside naked, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -208,9 +208,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Main':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			minut += 1
-			inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
-			grandma_trouble += rand(1,3)
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/gaddvor_nude.jpg"></center>''It''s certainly risky leaving the hosue like this, and while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside in your underwear, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught'
+			inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+			grandma_trouble += rand(0,1)
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/gaddvor_nude.jpg"></center>''It''s certainly risky leaving the house like this, and while it''s unlikely anyone saw you go outside in your underwear, there''s a thrill in almost getting caught'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 					'"One day she came home from work, and the floor boards all of a sudden started creaking! And through the glass panes in the door in the hallway, she could see the silhouette of a man. It looked remarkably like her late husband!"'
 					'"She was terrified! She quickly left her house, and only went back when I promised to go with her... but of course, we found nothing. Do you believe in ghosts, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Because ever since then, I do..."'
 				elseif temp = 2:
-					'"I wasn''t born in Gadukino, I grew up in a different village", your grandmother begins. "This is a true story, by the way!"'
+					'"I wasn''t born in Gadukino, I grew up in a different village," your grandmother begins. "This is a true story, by the way!"'
 					'"When I was still a little girl, one of our neighbors died. Then, less than two weeks later, one of his brothers died too! And as the legend goes, death comes in threes..."'
 					'"His one surviving sister was terrified. She was a friend of mine, but her parents wouldn''t let her leave the house."'
 					'"It was well into the winter season then, and people could only go to other towns by sleigh. For forty days, they waited... just when they were about to accept that the legend might not be true, they found one of her relatives. Dead. Muzhik I believe his name was, he was found frozen solid, basically a block of ice! He''d tried to attend his cousin''s funeral, but it cost him his life!"'
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 
 				!Keep the word brigade if you want to change the text. It''s what the people working on the kolkhoz were called.
 				elseif temp = 7:
-					'"One day my mother, rest her soul, sent us four siblings out to the forest for berry gathering", your grandma begins. "We took our berry collectors and headed out. We reached the entrance of the forest pretty quickly and decided that it would be best to split up to complete the task faster. Since we were familiar with the area we all dispersed to our cherished spots and began gathering berries."'
+					'"One day my mother, rest her soul, sent us four siblings out to the forest for berry gathering," your grandma begins. "We took our berry collectors and headed out. We reached the entrance of the forest pretty quickly and decided that it would be best to split up to complete the task faster. Since we were familiar with the area we all dispersed to our cherished spots and began gathering berries."'
 					'"My favorite spot was a plot surrounded by dense bushes and in the middle of the plot there was a huge stump. It’’s was really a great spot and as I approached I noticed very large number of ripe strawberries. I was rejoicing over the thought that I would gather more than my brothers, slowly gathering the berries and putting them in my berry collector. All of a sudden I hear some rustling behind the bushes. I turn towards the sound, but I''m met with silence. I didn''t notice anyone but I still couldn''t get rid of the eerie feeling."'
 					'"I shook off the eerie feeling and go back gathering strawberries again. All of a sudden I get this strange feeling... I look up and I see a person squatting on the stump. He''s completely still and just stares at me. I got really scared and ran away screaming and crying towards my brothers. They tried to stop and calm me down, but I just kept on running. My brothers started running after me, trying to keep up. I could hear my oldest brother shouting to run towards the kolkhoz. You see <<$pcs_nickname>> long time ago we had central collective farms that were called kolkhoz, your grandma explains."'
 					'"We were lucky that the farms were close to the forest and didn''t have to run through the woods for long. I kept looking back if this person was following us but there was no sign of him. We knew we were safe when we see the farmers belonging to the brigade. My brothers and I ran up to the foreman and explained to him what had happened. He immediately grabbed the phone and called someone. The other farmers reassured us that we were safe now. After we had calmed down we got sent home. Our mother met as at home, she fed us and comforted me."'

+ 8 - 8
locations/Gadsarai.qsrc

@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boar':
 			minut += 30
 			grandmahelp += 1
 			feed_boar = 0
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/feed_boar.jpg"></center>'
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 			minut += 30
 			milk_cow = 0
 			grandmahelp += 1
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/milk_cow.jpg"></center>'
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 			minut += 30
 			feed_cow = 0
 			grandmahelp += 1
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/feed_cow.jpg"></center>'
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 			minut += 60
 			cow_field = 0
 			grandmahelp += 1
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cow_field.jpg"></center>'
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horse':
 			minut += 30
 			feed_horse = 0
 			grandmahelp += 1
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/feed_horse.jpg"></center>'
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horse':
 			minut += 60
 			horse_field = 0
 			grandmahelp += 1
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/horse_field.jpg"></center>'
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horse':
 			*clr
 			minut += 30
 			horse_river = 2
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/horse_field.jpg"></center>'
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horse':
 			minut += 60
 			comb_horse = 0
 			grandmahelp += 1
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/comb_horse.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/HotelHole.qsrc

@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if hour = 0 and $prevloc = 'HotelRoom':
 	end
 	exit
 	if resepseen = 0:
-	    observ_exp += rand(0,1)
+	    observ_exp += rand(1,2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/sex/resep_event2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You enter the lobby and you can see the desk girl and the manager talking to each other.'
 		'When they notice you they both give you a very disappointing look.'

+ 10 - 10
locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 		'She begins to reach under your skirt and starts removing your underwear'
 		'Once removed she places the panties in your hand; you can feel they are already soaking wet.'
 	else
-		'She begins to reach under your skirt and notices you are not wearing any underwear. “hmm free access, how kinky ", she says while removing her own panties and placing them in your hand.'
+		'She begins to reach under your skirt and notices you are not wearing any underwear. "Hmm, free access. How kinky," she says while removing her own panties and placing them in your hand.'
 		'You can feel the panties are already soaking wet.'
 	end
 	'Motya is sitting in a chair next to the bed and is happily watching this scene unfold.'
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Motya', rand(30,40)
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
-				'When she reached your hymen she yelled out: "Oh my god, she is still a virgin!"'
+				'When she reached your hymen she yelled out, "Oh my god, she is still a virgin!"'
 				'"How about it honey, do you want my husband to be your first?"'
 				act 'No, I want to save myself.':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotcouple':
 					act 'Continue':gt 'HotelWork', 'hotcoupledoggy'
 				end
 			else
-				'"Well darling I have bad news and good news. The bad news is that you won''t be able to fuck a virgin this time. The good news is that she is definitely ready to accept your beautiful dick" Uliana said while she put her fingers, soaked with your juices, in Motya''s mouth.'
+				'"Well, darling, I have bad news and good news. The bad news is that you won''t be able to fuck a virgin this time. The good news is that she is definitely ready to accept your beautiful dick," Uliana said while she put her fingers, soaked with your juices, in Motya''s mouth.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'HotelWork', 'hotcoupledoggy'
 			end
 		end
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firsthotelprosevent':
 						act'Back to the lobby':gt 'hotelhole'
 					end
 					if prosmoneyhot = 2:
-						'You look at Pavlin and ask: "So about my money...?"'
+						'You look at Pavlin and ask, "So about my money...?"'
 						' '
 						'"Sure, no problem, you definitely earned it." Pavlin takes two 100 <b>₽</b> bills out of his pocket and slaps them onto your forehead, the bills sticking to the spooge still covering your face.'
 						'"If you want to earn back the rest of your money you can come by any day. Just go to the receptionist and ask for ''The Peacock''. She will understand."'
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 						'There are dozens of pictures here. From the time stamps you can see that she always exposes herself around midnight.'
 						'You wonder what would happen if you went to the lobby around midnight?'
 						resepseen = 1
-						observ_exp += rand(0,3)
+						observ_exp += rand(1,3)
 						act'Place the pictures back and continue your maid work ':gt 'hotelwork', 'maid'
 					end
 				else
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				maidcheck_2 = daystart
 				hotelcouple = max(1 , hotelcouple)
 				gs 'stat'
-				'While you are cleaning the room, a man, a woman and 2 young children enter the room. When the man sees you he says : " Oh girl you are sent by the heavens, can you please take my children for a walk so my wife and I can spent some ''alone'' time."'
+				'While you are cleaning the room, a man, a woman and 2 young children enter the room. When the man sees you he says, "Oh girl you are sent by the heavens, can you please take my children for a walk so my wife and I can spent some ''alone'' time."'
 				'he pushes 100 <b>₽</b> into your hands and then pushes you out the door with the 2 young children. So before you even had a chance to reply you were standing there with 100 <b>₽</b> in your hand and the 2 little brats looking at you.'
 				money += 100
 				minut += 60
@@ -676,15 +676,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/work/maid.event0.jpg"></center>'
 				'You knock on the door. Just when you were about to open it yourself, a girl opens the door. She''s naked, except for a pair of sexy stockings!'
-				'You embarrassedly mumble some apologies while you try not to look at her: "Oops! I erm... sorry miss. I will come back later."'
+				'You embarrassedly mumble some apologies while you try not to look at her, "Oops! I erm... sorry miss. I will come back later."'
 				if chai > 0:
-					'The girl chases after you, into the hallway: "Excuse me? Come back here for a second!"'
+					'The girl chases after you, into the hallway, "Excuse me? Come back here for a second!"'
 
 					act 'See what she wants':
 						'Uh oh, you hope you''re not in trouble.'
 						'She notices you staring at her jiggling boobs while she approaches you, and grins when she sees your embarrassed look. Then she gives you <<chai>> <b>₽</b>.'
-						'She gives you a sexy smile as she says: "Here, sweetie... for your discretion. You have a nice day now!"'
-						'Still rendered speechless, you realize you really should say something now. You finally manage to mumble: "Ta-, erm... thank you miss", trying to hide the deep red blush on your cheeks. She giggles as she turns around, giving you a lewd grin while she walks back to her room.'
+						'She gives you a sexy smile as she says, "Here, sweetie... for your discretion. You have a nice day now!"'
+						'Still rendered speechless, you realize you really should say something now. You finally manage to mumble, "Ta-, erm... thank you miss", trying to hide the deep red blush on your cheeks. She giggles as she turns around, giving you a lewd grin while she walks back to her room.'
 						money+=chai
 						chai=0
 						cla

+ 11 - 11
locations/ParChurch.qsrc

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vigil':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	PLAY 'sound/church/Blessing.mp3',30
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/church'+ rand(1,5) +'.jpg"></center>'
-	'You attend the vigil and reflect on the recent events in your life. The harmonies as the hymns and psalms are sung sweep aside some of the worries in your heart, although you know they will return once you leave this holy place, you still enjoy the rest. The sweet scent of incense tickles your nose and reminds you of the scent of' + iif(rex_love = 1, 'Rex', 'your step-father') + '''s cologne.'  
+	'You attend the vigil and reflect on the recent events in your life. The harmonies as the hymns and psalms are sung sweep aside some of the worries in your heart, although you know they will return once you leave this holy place, you still enjoy the rest. The sweet scent of incense tickles your nose and reminds you of the scent of' + iif(rex_love = 1, 'Rex', 'your stepfather') + '''s cologne.'  
 	if pav_slut >= 125:
 		'Most of the parishioners seem upset that you are here. You notice that parents are making sure their children don''t go near you. Even a couple of the acolytes glare at you angrily.'
 	elseif pav_slut >= 100:
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'liturgy':
 		*nl
 		'The people in the congregation seem a bit uncomfortable while hearing these words. Some look towards you and seem to have trouble looking you in the eyes. Those that do meet your eyes look away guiltily. You feel better and it seems the townsfolk might see you in a slightly better light.'	
 	end
-    vokal_exp += rand(0,3) 
+    vokal_exp += rand(1,3) 
     gs 'stat'
 	
 	act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_priest':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/ch_talk.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you approach the priest, you recall your previous behavior, your sins, your transgressions, and the daily temptations you face.'
-	'Going up to the priest, you bow down, touching the floor with your right hand then place your right hand over the left with your palms upward and say, "Bless me father."'
+	'Going up to the priest, you bow down, touching the floor with your right hand then place your right hand over the left with your palms upward and say, "Bless me, Father."'
 	'"May the Lord bless you," the priest answers and blesses you with the Sign of the Cross then places his right hand in your hands.' 
 	'You kiss his hand and then straighten taking a deep breath.'
 	if Churchbad > 0 and amends_day ! daystart:
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_priest':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/ch_talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Father, I want to tell you how sorry I am for the way I acted the last time I was here," you apologize, hoping he can hear the sincerity in your voice. "It was inexcusable."'
 			'"Your behavior was indeed... ill-fitting of a young lady," the priest replies gravely. "However, God asks us to forgive... If you truly wish to make amends, there is something you could do."'
-			'"Of course, father," you reply, eager for forgiveness.'
+			'"Of course, Father," you reply, eager for forgiveness.'
 			act 'What do you need me to do':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk_priest':
 					cla
 					'The priest leads you to a bench in the Narthex and has you sit down with him.'
 					'"I feel that you have lost your way, <<$pcs_nickname>>," he begins softly. "Such behavior can only lead to a life of misery and sin."'
-					'"I know father," you reply with a sigh. "But I just can''t seem to help it sometimes."'
+					'"I know, Father," you reply with a sigh. "But I just can''t seem to help it sometimes."'
 					act 'Tease him': gt 'ParChurch', 'tease'
 				end
 			end
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spank':
 			*clr & cla
 			Churchbad -= 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/event/spank5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You nod your head. "Yes, I''m sorry father. I don''t know what came over me. Please forgive me."'
+			'You nod your head. "Yes, I''m sorry, Father. I don''t know what came over me. Please forgive me."'
 			'He relaxes a bit and sighs. "I forgive you, I am sorry I had to do that. But sometimes stern measures are needed."'
 			'You cover yourself back up and walk out.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1, 'unknown'
@@ -489,7 +489,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spank':
 				*clr & cla
 				Churchbad -= 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/event/spank5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You nod your head. "Yes, I''m sorry father. I have seen the errors of my way. Please forgive me."'
+				'You nod your head. "Yes, I''m sorry, Father. I have seen the errors of my way. Please forgive me."'
 				'He relaxes a bit and sighs. "I forgive you. I am sorry I had to do that and I am sorry it took you so long to learn your lesson. But sometimes stern measures are needed."'
 				'You cover yourself back up and walk out a bit gingerly with your ass stinging.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1, 'unknown'
@@ -502,17 +502,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spank':
 				Kirill_Crpt += 1
 				Churchbad += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/event/spank3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You cry out. "Yes father more, spank me harder please!" While sticking your butt out a bit more.'
-				'You see his eyes widen slightly and his cheeks blush a bit. Again he puts puts a lot of force into the blows, the hard shoe sole is starting to make your ass feel like it is on fire. You can''t help it as a few tears roll down your cheeks. After a few minutes of this he stops and leans forward and asks. "Now have you learned your lesson?"'
+				'You cry out. "Yes, Father, more! Spank me harder, please!" While sticking your butt out a bit more.'
+				'You see his eyes widen slightly and his cheeks blush a bit. Again he puts puts a lot of force into the blows, the hard shoe sole is starting to make your ass feel like it is on fire. You can''t help it as a few tears roll down your cheeks. After a few minutes of this he stops and leans forward and asks, "Now have you learned your lesson?"'
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'maso'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Yes':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/event/spank5.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod your head and sniffle a bit. "Yes, I''m sorry father. The pain has purified me of my wickedness. Please forgive me."'
+					'You nod your head and sniffle a bit. "Yes, I''m sorry, Father. The pain has purified me of my wickedness. Please forgive me."'
 					'He relaxes a bit and sighs. "I forgive you. I am sorry I had to do that and but I don''t believe you are over your wicked ways. I would like you to start coming to church on a regular bases and I would like you to take confession."'
-					'You cover yourself back up. "I will father, I promise." With your ass stinging like it is on fire you walk out rather stiffly.'
+					'You cover yourself back up, "I will, Father. I promise." With your ass stinging like it is on fire you walk out rather stiffly.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1, 'unknown'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'

+ 4 - 4
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game':
 		minut += 60
 		pcs_mood += 15
 		pcs_willpwr += 20
-		react_exp += rand(0, 1)
+		react_exp += rand(1,2)
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/game.jpg"></center>'
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game':
 		if albsexday = daystart:
 			act 'Rest':gt 'albinahome'
 		else
-			'Albina winks at you and says "<<$pcs_firstname>>, let''s have a wager. If I win, I can do anything I want with you, and if you win you can do anything you want with me"'
+			'Albina winks at you and says "<<$pcs_firstname>>, let''s have a wager. If I win, I can do anything I want with you, and if you win you can do anything you want with me."'
 
 			act 'Refuse':gt 'albinahome'
 
@@ -359,9 +359,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game':
 				end
 
 				if albplay = 0:
-					'Although you tried your best, Albina proved a worthy opponent. Laughing like the villain of a theater play, she slaps you on the ass with the palm of her hand, saying "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_firstname>>! You are my bitch now!"'
+					'Although you tried your best, Albina proved a worthy opponent. Laughing like the villain of a theater play, she slaps you on the ass with the palm of her hand, saying, "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_firstname>>! You are my bitch now!"'
 
-					if rand(0, 1) = 0:
+					if rand(0,1) = 0:
 						gt 'albinahome', 'vag_strapon'
 					else
 						gt 'albinahome', 'anal_strapon'

+ 5 - 5
locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guitar':
 		act 'Pretend to play':
 			minut += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
-			instrmusic_exp += rand(0,1) 
+			instrmusic_exp += rand(1,2) 
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/guitar.jpg"></center>'
 			'Grabbing hold of the guitar, you begin pretending to play and putting on a show just like a real rock star. After a while you need to catch your breath; this was harder than you thought.'
@@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guitar':
 		end
 		act 'Try to play it':
 			*clr & cla
-			instrmusic_exp += rand(0,2)
+			instrmusic_exp += rand(1,3)
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			minut += 20
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'fingers', 'ache'
@@ -1303,10 +1303,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	elseif AnushkaLoc = 3:
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Maksim is here, doing whatever it is a teenage boy does. He gives Anushka a dirty look and stares at your tits for a moment before saying: "Leave me alone."'
+		'Maksim is here, doing whatever it is a teenage boy does. He gives Anushka a dirty look and stares at your tits for a moment before saying, "Leave me alone."'
 		act 'Leave': AnushkaLoc = 1 & gt'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	else
-		'Maksim is here, doing whatever it is a teenage boy does. He stares at your tits for a couple of moments, but then ignores you."'
+		'Maksim is here, doing whatever it is a teenage boy does. He stares at your tits for a couple of moments, but then ignores you.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	end		
 end 
@@ -1331,7 +1331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 		'You enter the living room and before Anushka''s father reacts, Anushka tells him, "Dad! This is my classmate <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 		'You greet each other. His face looks worn out making him look older than he actually is. You also notice his tattoo covered arms, you heard that Anushka''s dad was this badass biker that didn''t give a damn about anything before. "So schoolmate eh?"'
 		if seenEd = 1:
-			'He sizes you up, the knit of his brow giving away that he is trying to remember something, and he does: "Of course, I recognize you. I''ve seen you hanging around the garages. You''re Vladimir''s step-daughter, right?"'
+			'He sizes you up, the knit of his brow giving away that he is trying to remember something, and he does, "Of course, I recognize you. I''ve seen you hanging around the garages. You''re Vladimir''s step-daughter, right?"'
 			'You smile nodding, "Yeah, I''ve also seen you around there as well, you''re fixing a bike right? I see Valentin there sometimes with you."'
 			'"Yeah, yeah. Anushka''s bandmate Valentin. A decent guy, with a decent head on his shoulders. He owns his own bike so I help him out sometimes when it breaks down."'
 			*nl

+ 174 - 174
locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'leghump':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/artomhump.jpg"></center>'
 	'You get down on all fours in front of Artem, still wearing all of your clothes. Artem carefully runs his hands over your ass cheeks, and you can feel him hesitating for a second. When you turn around to ask him what''s wrong, you see him rubbing his erect cock against your clothes, at the crack of your ass.'
 	'Mere moments later, you see him cum all over your butt, on your clothes! He''s embarrassed and tries to catch the rest of it in his hand, but there''s already some stains in your clothes.'
-	'After he finishes, he apologizes: "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t mean to soil your clothes. Just give me a minute, I''ll clean it up."'
+	'After he finishes, he apologizes, "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t mean to soil your clothes. Just give me a minute, I''ll clean it up."'
 	'He quickly gets a bowl of water and washes out the cum stains with a piece of cloth. After a while, there are a few wet spots on your clothes but they''re clean otherwise. They should dry up soon enough, no one will notice.'
 	gs 'arousal','foreplay',5,'dom'
 	npc_sex[$boy] += 1
@@ -63,18 +63,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'leghump2':
 	gs 'clothing','strip'
 	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/artomhump2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You grin and tease him a little: "You like it when I wear nothing but panties for you... don''t you, Artem? Go on then, help yourself."'
+		'You grin and tease him a little, "You like it when I wear nothing but panties for you... don''t you, Artem? Go on then, help yourself."'
 		'You undress and lay down on his bed, wearing nothing but a pair of fancy panties you brought just for the occasion.'
-		'You feel strangely empowered by the obsession he has with your ass, and encourage him: "Go on Artem... this is what you want, isn''t it? Jerk yourself off on me."'
+		'You feel strangely empowered by the obsession he has with your ass, and encourage him, "Go on Artem... this is what you want, isn''t it? Jerk yourself off on me."'
 		'Artem sits down on top of your feet, and rubs his erect cock against your ass cheeks. He jerks himself off, rubbing his cock against your panty-clad ass, and soon he finishes on them.'
 		'The thought of you controlling a guy with your body like that turns you on a little. You give him a little smirk as you change back into your normal clothes.'
 		gs 'arousal','foreplay',5,'dom'
 		gs 'cum_call','pantyrear',$boy,1
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/artomhump3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You grin and tease him a little: "You like it when I wear nothing for you... don''t you, Artem? Go on then, help yourself."'
+		'You grin and tease him a little, "You like it when I wear nothing for you... don''t you, Artem? Go on then, help yourself."'
 		'You undress and lay down on his bed, not wearing a stitch.'
-		'You feel strangely empowered by the obsession he has with your ass, and encourage him: "Go on Artem... this is what you want, isn''t it? Jerk yourself off on me."'
+		'You feel strangely empowered by the obsession he has with your ass, and encourage him, "Go on Artem... this is what you want, isn''t it? Jerk yourself off on me."'
 		'Artem sits down on top of your feet, and rubs his erect cock against your ass cheeks. He jerks himself off, rubbing his cock against your ass, and soon he finishes on them.'
 		'The thought of you controlling a guy with your body like that turns you on a little. You give him a little smirk as you dress up.'
 		gs 'arousal','foreplay',5,'dom'
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 		if artemBJQW = 0 and (artemsex = 0 or artQW = 5):
 			cla
 			if artQW = 5:
-				'After you finish your homework, Artem has a serious look on his face when he says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, with how much I''ve been helping you... We both know what you are willing to do. I think it''s only fair you give me a little something in return."'
+				'After you finish your homework, Artem has a serious look on his face when he says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, with how much I''ve been helping you... We both know what you are willing to do. I think it''s only fair you give me a little something in return."'
 				act 'Suck him off': gt 'artemEv','bj'
 				
 				act '"No way!"':
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':gt 'artemhome','leave',5
 				end
 			else
-				'After you finish your homework, Artem has a serious look on his face when he says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, everyone in the school is talking about how much of a slut you are. With how much I''ve been helping you... I think it''s only fair you give me a little something in return."'
+				'After you finish your homework, Artem has a serious look on his face when he says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, everyone in the school is talking about how much of a slut you are. With how much I''ve been helping you... I think it''s only fair you give me a little something in return."'
 				act 'Suck him off': gt 'artemEv','bj'
 
 				act '"No way!"':
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					npc_rel['A2'] = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 	
-					'You decline, and he''s very offended by that: "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, I spent a lot of time and effort helping you out. Meanwhile, you... you suck off or fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But you won''t touch me? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
+					'You decline, and he''s very offended by that, "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, I spent a lot of time and effort helping you out. Meanwhile, you... you suck off or fuck pretty much everyone who asks! But you won''t touch me? That''s so not fair! We''re done... find someone else to help you. Good luck, with that attitude."'
 					'You can tell Artem is seriously offended by your refusal, and won''t help you any further. Hopefully someone else can help you with your homework.'
 					act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':gt 'artemhome','leave',5
 				end
@@ -144,24 +144,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 		elseif (artemBJQW > 0 and artemBJQW < 10 and artemsex = 0) or (artemStripSee = 3 and artemsex = 0 and artemTouch > daystart) or (artemBJQW > 0 and artQW = 5):
 			cla
 			'Artem unbuttons his pants and pulls his stiff erection from his pants.'
-			'He looks at you expectantly: "You know our deal, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
+			'He looks at you expectantly, "You know our deal, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
 
 			act 'Suck him off': gt 'artemEv','bj'
 		elseif artemBJQW = 10 and artemsex = 0 and artQW ! 5:
 			cla
-			'After you finish your homework with Artem, he says a little shyly: "You know... I''ve never seen a girl naked before. Only on pictures. Maybe you could..."'
+			'After you finish your homework with Artem, he says a little shyly, "You know... I''ve never seen a girl naked before. Only on pictures. Maybe you could..."'
 			if pcs_dom >= 30 and dimaFilm > 0 and arthakQW = 0 and pcs_vag > 0:
 				act 'Agree to strip, in exchange for a favor':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/anatomy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You give him a serious look when you say: "You want me to get naked for you? You know what... I''ll show you what you want to see, but I need something in return."'
+					'You give him a serious look when you say, "You want me to get naked for you? You know what... I''ll show you what you want to see, but I need something in return."'
 					'Artem is mostly surprised you''re not ripping him a new one and nods enthusiastically, pretty much agreeing to whatever it is you want without even asking what it is.'
-					'You tell him: "But if you do not keep your promise, I know some guys that will break your nose. And that''d be just the beginning. Are we clear?"'
-					'You see him gulp, but he''s still interested in seeing you nude. You continue: "Now, about the service... Dimka Nosov has some video footage of me. I need it to disappear. I need you to break into his computer and remove it. Can you do that for me?"'
-					'Artem looks a bit unsure, but says: "Yea... I think I can do that. What''s on the recording?"'
-					'You smile at him and tell him a lie while you take off your clothes: "Oh, don''t worry about it. It''s just me dancing after I had a few drinks in the disco. My <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> doesn''t know I sometimes drink alcohol, and he threatened to show her."'
+					'You tell him, "But if you do not keep your promise, I know some guys that will break your nose. And that''d be just the beginning. Are we clear?"'
+					'You see him gulp, but he''s still interested in seeing you nude. You continue, "Now, about the service... Dimka Nosov has some video footage of me. I need it to disappear. I need you to break into his computer and remove it. Can you do that for me?"'
+					'Artem looks a bit unsure, but says, "Yea... I think I can do that. What''s on the recording?"'
+					'You smile at him and tell him a lie while you take off your clothes, "Oh, don''t worry about it. It''s just me dancing after I had a few drinks in the disco. My <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> doesn''t know I sometimes drink alcohol, and he threatened to show her."'
 					*pl
-					'Once you''re naked, Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly: "You know our deal, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
+					'Once you''re naked, Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly, "You know our deal, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
 					minut += 5
 					artemhakday = daystart
 					arthakQW = 1
@@ -176,12 +176,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/anatomy.jpg"></center>'
 					'You think it over for a second, but realize Artem is not a very good negotiator. You figure you can probably get something in exchange.'
-					'You look at him, feigning doubt: "I don''t know, Artem. I guess I could give you some female anatomy lessons, but my family is kinda pressed for cash. You see, my sister really needs some medication, and we can''t afford it. If you''d give me 300 <b>₽</b>, that would go a long way... maybe we can help each other out?"'
-					'Artem readily agrees, and gives you the money without a second thought: "Of course, of course! That sounds fair. Here you go... now, your clothes?"'
+					'You look at him, feigning doubt, "I don''t know, Artem. I guess I could give you some female anatomy lessons, but my family is kinda pressed for cash. You see, my sister really needs some medication, and we can''t afford it. If you''d give me 300 <b>₽</b>, that would go a long way... maybe we can help each other out?"'
+					'Artem readily agrees, and gives you the money without a second thought, "Of course, of course! That sounds fair. Here you go... now, your clothes?"'
 					'Well... fair''s fair, he paid for it. You slowly take off your clothes, making a little show out of it. When you''re completely naked you sit back and spread your legs, exposing your bare pussy to Artem.'
 					'You were clear he''s not allowed to touch you, but you spread your pussy lips and show him everything he wants to see.'
 					*pl
-					'Once you''re naked, Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly: "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
+					'Once you''re naked, Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly, "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
 					money += 300
 					artemStripSee = 1
 					minut += 5
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			*clr & cla
 			if artemRand = 5:
 				'After you finish your homework with Artem, he puts 300 <b>₽</b> down on the table out of nowhere.'
-				'He has a greedy grin on his face when he says: "Let''s repeat that anatomy lesson you gave me... get rid of those clothes, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+				'He has a greedy grin on his face when he says, "Let''s repeat that anatomy lesson you gave me... get rid of those clothes, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 				artemStripSee = 2
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -207,14 +207,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					'You slowly take off your clothes, and spread your legs for Artem. He knows he doesn''t have the right to touch you, but he ogles your body greedily.'
 					money += 300
 					*pl
-					'Once you''re naked, Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly: "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
+					'Once you''re naked, Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly, "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					act 'Suck him off': gt 'artemEv','bj'
 				end
 			else
 				*clr & cla
-				'Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly: "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
+				'Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly, "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Suck him off': gt 'artemEv','bj'
@@ -222,8 +222,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 		elseif artemStripSee = 2 and artemsex = 0:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you finish your homework, you can see Artem think for a second. He then asks, with a blush on his cheeks: "Listen... I''ve thought about this for a long time. I want to touch you, down there. I have 500 <b>₽</b>, it''s my lunch money. Maybe you can help your sister with that?"'
-			'You smirk at him: "Are you sure? You''d be starving for a week!"'
+			'When you finish your homework, you can see Artem think for a second. He then asks, with a blush on his cheeks, "Listen... I''ve thought about this for a long time. I want to touch you, down there. I have 500 <b>₽</b>, it''s my lunch money. Maybe you can help your sister with that?"'
+			'You smirk at him, "Are you sure? You''d be starving for a week!"'
 			'Artem is very serious, and gives you the money without any doubts.'
 			money += 500
 			minut += 5
@@ -234,12 +234,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				if pcs_horny >= 80:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/anatomy3_1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You smile at Artem as you take your clothes off, deciding you might as well enjoy this. You spread your legs and encourage him: "Go ahead... I''m all yours."'
+					'You smile at Artem as you take your clothes off, deciding you might as well enjoy this. You spread your legs and encourage him, "Go ahead... I''m all yours."'
 					'Artem carefully rubs one finger over your pussy lips. It feels surprisingly good, and you tell him to continue.'
-					'Your pussy is quite wet from his fondlings, and you explain to him: "You see that little button? That''s my clitoris... if you gently rub that, it''ll make a girl feel really good."'
+					'Your pussy is quite wet from his fondlings, and you explain to him, "You see that little button? That''s my clitoris... if you gently rub that, it''ll make a girl feel really good."'
 					'He follows your instructions and gently rubs one finger over your clitoris while his other hand is playing with your nipples.'
-					'He''s quite taken aback by your body: "You''re so warm and soft..."'
-					'You softly moan as you encourage him: "Don''t stop, Artem... just keep rubbing it."'
+					'He''s quite taken aback by your body, "You''re so warm and soft..."'
+					'You softly moan as you encourage him, "Don''t stop, Artem... just keep rubbing it."'
 					gs 'shortgs','undress'
 					gs 'arousal','vaginal_finger',5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -247,13 +247,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/anatomy3_2.jpg"></center>'
 						'Artem grows bolder, and sticks several of his fingers inside you.'
-						'He grins: "I bet this feels really good for you, too..."'
+						'He grins, "I bet this feels really good for you, too..."'
 						'He fucks your pussy with three of his fingers, teasing your clit with his thumb. After a little while, you can''t hold back any longer and just enjoy your orgasm.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal','vaginal_finger',5
 						'When the feeling subsides, you feel a tinge of shame when you realize how loud you were.'
-						'You quietly ask him: "Where did you learn how to do that?"'
-						'With a proud grin he says: "I saw someone do it in a porn movie."'
+						'You quietly ask him, "Where did you learn how to do that?"'
+						'With a proud grin he says, "I saw someone do it in a porn movie."'
 						'You''re a bit flustered by the situation, and quietly tell him the lesson is over. You quickly get dressed, and get ready to leave his apartment.'
 						artemHorny = 1
 						gs 'shortgs','dress'
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				else
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/anatomy3_1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lie back and let him touch your pussy and breasts for a while. After a while, Artem pulls away from you. He unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly: "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
+					'You lie back and let him touch your pussy and breasts for a while. After a while, Artem pulls away from you. He unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly, "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					artemHorny = 0
@@ -277,20 +277,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			'During a break in your study session, you have a chat with Artem. You end up talking about sex.'
 			artemStripSee = 4
 			if artemHorny = 1:
-				'Artem has a smug grin on his face when he asks you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, when I touched you the other day... did you have an orgasm?"'
-				'With a slight blush you admit: "Yes, I came. Why?"'
-				'Artem blushes when he says: "I was hoping you could let me have sex with you... I want you to take my virginity."'
-				'You''re baffled. You quickly try to recuperate, and hesitate for a second before you tell him: "I don''t know, Artem. I like how things are between us."'
-				'Then you continue: "But... my family really needs money to help my sister. If I have sex with you, could you give me 1000 <b>₽</b>?"'
-				'Artem scoffs: "I see... I guess the rumors about you really are true. I could pay you, but I can''t go that high. How much would you really take?"'
-				'That stings. You shrug and tell him off: "You know what, forget it. I don''t want to talk about it any more. Shall we get back to our homework, or should I just go?"'
-				'Artem quickly apologizes: "No no, I''m sorry. I shouldn''t have brought it up. We can just do our homework."'
+				'Artem has a smug grin on his face when he asks you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, when I touched you the other day... did you have an orgasm?"'
+				'With a slight blush you admit, "Yes, I came. Why?"'
+				'Artem blushes when he says, "I was hoping you could let me have sex with you... I want you to take my virginity."'
+				'You''re baffled. You quickly try to recuperate, and hesitate for a second before you tell him, "I don''t know, Artem. I like how things are between us."'
+				'Then you continue, "But... my family really needs money to help my sister. If I have sex with you, could you give me 1000 <b>₽</b>?"'
+				'Artem scoffs, "I see... I guess the rumors about you really are true. I could pay you, but I can''t go that high. How much would you really take?"'
+				'That stings. You shrug and tell him off, "You know what, forget it. I don''t want to talk about it any more. Shall we get back to our homework, or should I just go?"'
+				'Artem quickly apologizes, "No no, I''m sorry. I shouldn''t have brought it up. We can just do our homework."'
 				'The two of you continue your homework session. You feel rather awkward after his suggestion, and when you finish your homework you quickly gather your things and leave.'
 			else
-				'You smile at Artem seductively as you ask him: "Tell me, Artem... have you ever had sex yet? I don''t just mean oral, but actual sex with a girl?"'
-				'Artem grins: "I see what you''re getting at, <<$pcs_nickname>>. How much would it cost me?"'
-				'You think it over for a second, and suggest: "Two weeks of being hungry during lunch at school, 1000 <b>₽</b>."'
-				'He reels back: "That much!? I heard from other people that you''ve had sex with guys for 50 <b>₽</b>!"'
+				'You smile at Artem seductively as you ask him, "Tell me, Artem... have you ever had sex yet? I don''t just mean oral, but actual sex with a girl?"'
+				'Artem grins, "I see what you''re getting at, <<$pcs_nickname>>. How much would it cost me?"'
+				'You think it over for a second, and suggest, "Two weeks of being hungry during lunch at school, 1000 <b>₽</b>."'
+				'He reels back, "That much!? I heard from other people that you''ve had sex with guys for 50 <b>₽</b>!"'
 				'"Who the hell told you that?" you exclaim, pretending to be insulted. "That''s such a lie! You know what... forget about sex, let''s just do our homework and leave it at that."'
 				'The two of you continue your homework session. You feel rather awkward after his insinuation, and when you finish your homework you quickly gather your things and leave.'
 			end
@@ -300,19 +300,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 		elseif artemStripSee = 4 and artemAndPetja = 0:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After you finish your homework, Artem suggests: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ve been thinking. How about we meet up with a friend of mine next time after homework? He wants to touch you too... we will give you 500 <b>₽</b> each, so you get the 1000 <b>₽</b> you wanted."'
-			'You indignantly respond: "Artem! Are you out of your mind? I did those things with you in confidence, and you tell all your friends and invite them to a gangbang!?"'
-			'Artem quickly reponds: "No, nothing like group sex or anything! Let me explain."'
+			'After you finish your homework, Artem suggests, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ve been thinking. How about we meet up with a friend of mine next time after homework? He wants to touch you too... we will give you 500 <b>₽</b> each, so you get the 1000 <b>₽</b> you wanted."'
+			'You indignantly respond, "Artem! Are you out of your mind? I did those things with you in confidence, and you tell all your friends and invite them to a gangbang!?"'
+			'Artem quickly reponds, "No, nothing like group sex or anything! Let me explain."'
 			'"I accidentally boasted to him about you giving me a blowjob. Then when he asked for details, I told him about your... extracurricular anatomy lessons. He''s my best friend, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You can trust him. He has no experience with girls, and was hoping you could help him... kind of like the same way you helped me? I promised him I would ask you. We won''t tell anyone, it''d be our secret!"'
-			'You doubtfully look at Artem: "I don''t know... I need to think about it. You couldn''t keep what we did quiet either."'
-			'Artem pressures you: "Come on... you need the money, right? We would both pay you."'
+			'You doubtfully look at Artem, "I don''t know... I need to think about it. You couldn''t keep what we did quiet either."'
+			'Artem pressures you, "Come on... you need the money, right? We would both pay you."'
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Refuse to meet his friend':
 				cla
-				'You can''t do it. You tell him: "It''s not about the money. Sorry Artem, but I don''t feel comfortable doing that."'
-				'Artem is deeply insulted: "Really, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Plenty of other guys have sex with you, a lot of them not even offering you anything in return, but we''re not good enough for you? Despite me always helping you out with school, and making you a very fair offer?"'
-				'He continues: "If you''re not willing to help, pack up your stuff and get out. And find someone else to help you with your homework, I''m not doing it any more."'
+				'You can''t do it. You tell him, "It''s not about the money. Sorry Artem, but I don''t feel comfortable doing that."'
+				'Artem is deeply insulted, "Really, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Plenty of other guys have sex with you, a lot of them not even offering you anything in return, but we''re not good enough for you? Despite me always helping you out with school, and making you a very fair offer?"'
+				'He continues, "If you''re not willing to help, pack up your stuff and get out. And find someone else to help you with your homework, I''m not doing it any more."'
 				pcs_dom += 1
 				artemLernQW = -1
 				artemblok = 1
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				artemAndPetja = 1
 				artemStripSee = 5
 				'You think about it for a while. You could definitely use the money, and the lessons you have been giving Artem were actually kind of fun sometimes.'
-				'You nod at Artem and tell him: "Okay, we can give it a try. Tell your friend we''ll meet him, after we finish our homework next time."'
+				'You nod at Artem and tell him, "Okay, we can give it a try. Tell your friend we''ll meet him, after we finish our homework next time."'
 				'As you pack your books, you see Artem quickly grab his phone and send a text message with a big smile on his face.'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'artemhome','inside'
 			end
@@ -334,11 +334,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
 			'After class Artem leads you to the his parents'' garage. It''s not far from where you live.'
-			'As you walk, he explains: "My parents might walk in, at home. I figured we''d be safer in the garage, no one will bother us there. My friend is Petka Klyuyev by the way... he''s in our class. You remember him, right?"'
+			'As you walk, he explains, "My parents might walk in, at home. I figured we''d be safer in the garage, no one will bother us there. My friend is Petka Klyuyev by the way... he''s in our class. You remember him, right?"'
 			'When you enter the garage with Artem, you find Peter already waiting there. He looks at you eagerly, but you can tell he''s quite nervous.'
-			'Artem smiles at the both of you and says: "Shall we begin the anatomy lesson? Petka, what would you like to see?"'
+			'Artem smiles at the both of you and says, "Shall we begin the anatomy lesson? Petka, what would you like to see?"'
 			'Petka looks at you, unsure what he''s supposed to say now. He''s still afraid you''ll get angry if he suggests anything out of line.'
-			'Artem notices his reluctance and suggests: "Maybe start with her breasts? <<$pcs_nickname>>, show Petka your boobs."'
+			'Artem notices his reluctance and suggests, "Maybe start with her breasts? <<$pcs_nickname>>, show Petka your boobs."'
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -347,10 +347,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy1_1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re a bit confused... is Artem going to order you around like this the whole time in front of Peter? Or is he just trying to make his friend feel comfortable?'
 				'Nevertheless... they''re paying you, and if you''re truly honest you don''t find the idea of teaching these boys about your body all that bad. You slowly peel away your clothes and expose your boobs for the guys.'
-				'It''s not going quick enough for Artem''s taste, and he says: "Just take your clothes off completely. We need to be able to see your body, remember?"'
+				'It''s not going quick enough for Artem''s taste, and he says, "Just take your clothes off completely. We need to be able to see your body, remember?"'
 				'With some doubt, you do as he says and take off your clothes, putting them on a neat pile on a shelf nearby. Your nipples are rock hard; partially from the cold, but also from your arousal.'
-				'Artem gives you a satisfied nod: "Very nice. Now turn your back to us and show us your pussy and ass."'
-				'You do as he says, still not used to the idea that Artem can be so commanding. He continues: "Good. Now spread your pussy lips wide, we need to be able to see inside."'
+				'Artem gives you a satisfied nod, "Very nice. Now turn your back to us and show us your pussy and ass."'
+				'You do as he says, still not used to the idea that Artem can be so commanding. He continues, "Good. Now spread your pussy lips wide, we need to be able to see inside."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 3, 'group', 'sub'
 				gs 'clothing','strip'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'group', 'sub'
@@ -361,11 +361,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy1_2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You rub your fingers over your pussy lips, slightly embarrassed at how wet you are. You take them by the edges and pull them apart. Suddenly, you feel a hand on your ass. When you turn around, you see both of the boys standing right behind you.'
-					'You slap the hand away and tell them: "Hey, no touching!"'
-					'Peter innocently says: "Isn''t the customer always right, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-					'He certainly grew a lot bolder. You scold him: "No. I''m warning you, if either of you touch me again, I''m walking. Then you can go touch each other for all I care."'
+					'You slap the hand away and tell them, "Hey, no touching!"'
+					'Peter innocently says, "Isn''t the customer always right, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+					'He certainly grew a lot bolder. You scold him, "No. I''m warning you, if either of you touch me again, I''m walking. Then you can go touch each other for all I care."'
 					'The boys apologize and step away from you. You get back to what you were doing, and pull your pussy wide open.'
-					'Artem keeps giving you orders: "Wider! Very good. Now shove your fingers in there and masturbate for us."'
+					'Artem keeps giving you orders, "Wider! Very good. Now shove your fingers in there and masturbate for us."'
 					'You nod and shove two fingers inside your pussy, and skilfully try to bring yourself to orgasm. It doesn''t take long at all, and soon you lie shaking and quivering on the sofa.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal','masturbate',10,'group','sub','exhibitionism'					
@@ -375,9 +375,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					act 'Collect your money':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you get dressed again, Artem tells you: "Petka liked it. He would like to join us for your lessons more regularly. He''s willing to keep paying, and so am I. 1000 <b>₽</b> per session in total, just like today. We do want to see and do more, though. Your lessons should be more... interactive."'
+						'As you get dressed again, Artem tells you, "Petka liked it. He would like to join us for your lessons more regularly. He''s willing to keep paying, and so am I. 1000 <b>₽</b> per session in total, just like today. We do want to see and do more, though. Your lessons should be more... interactive."'
 						'You see the greedy grin on his face, and realize: they want to fuck you. Together.'
-						'"I don''t know, Artem", you sigh. "I appreciate you helping me with my homework, and I could definitely use the money. But if word of this comes out... I''ll think about it, okay?"'
+						'"I don''t know, Artem," you sigh. "I appreciate you helping me with my homework, and I could definitely use the money. But if word of this comes out... I''ll think about it, okay?"'
 						'He happily nods, and offers you the 1000 <b>₽</b> as promised. After you put the money away you leave the garage, waving Artem goodbye.'
 						pcs_mood = 100
 						minut += 10
@@ -397,16 +397,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				artemAndPetjaRand = rand(0,5)
 			end
 			if artemAndPetjaRand ! 0:
-				'Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly: "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
+				'Artem unbuttons his pants and looks at you expectantly, "Our previous deal still stands, <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you want my help, I want your mouth."'
 
 				act 'Suck him off': gt 'artemEv','bj'
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy2_1.jpg"></center>'
 				'When you finish your homework session with Artem, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage again. Peter is already waiting there.'
-				'Artem looks at you expectantly: "Remember your promise, <<$pcs_nickname>>? If I kept helping you in school, you would teach Petka and me other things in return. Here, take these."'
+				'Artem looks at you expectantly, "Remember your promise, <<$pcs_nickname>>? If I kept helping you in school, you would teach Petka and me other things in return. Here, take these."'
 				'He holds out his hand, and gives you two condoms.'
-				'You nod: "I remember..."'
+				'You nod, "I remember..."'
 				'The guys enthusiastically take off their pants, exposing their hard cocks to you. You sit down on the couch between them, and begin to masturbate them both. Then you take their cocks in your mouth in turns, first Artem''s, then Peter''s.'
 				gs 'shortgs','undress'
 				gs 'boystat','A2',1
@@ -422,9 +422,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				act 'Demonstrate the cowgirl position':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy2_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'After you''ve given them a blowjob for a little while, you tell Artem: "Artem, sit down here. Petka, you stay where you are."'
+					'After you''ve given them a blowjob for a little while, you tell Artem, "Artem, sit down here. Petka, you stay where you are."'
 					'You quickly put the condom on Artem''s cock and straddle him. You guide his dick towards your pussy and slowly lower yourself on it, until he is all the way inside you.'
-					'As you take Peter''s cock back into your hand, you explain: "This is called the ''cowgirl'' position. Do you like it, Artem?"'
+					'As you take Peter''s cock back into your hand, you explain, "This is called the ''cowgirl'' position. Do you like it, Artem?"'
 					'Artem can only grunt in response. You smile smugly and slowly ride Artem, while you take Peter''s cock back into your mouth and continue to suck him off.'
 					gs 'arousal','vaginal',7,'dick[1]','dom','group'
 					gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dick[2]','dom','group'
@@ -434,17 +434,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					act 'Make them change places':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy2_3.jpg"></center>'
-						'After a few minutes you hand Peter a condom and tell the guys: "Alright boys, let''s change places. Petka, put on your condom and sit down here."'
+						'After a few minutes you hand Peter a condom and tell the guys, "Alright boys, let''s change places. Petka, put on your condom and sit down here."'
 						'He fumbles a bit with the condom, but finally manages to get it on. You turn your back towards him and lower your hips towards his groin as you explain:'
 						'"The girl can also face the other way, that''s called the ''reverse cowgirl'' position."'
 						'You take the condom off Artem''s cock and give him a vigorous blowjob, while you slowly grind your hips against Peter''s. Within seconds you feel Peter''s grip tighten around your waist, and he groans as he shoots his load into the condom.'
 						gs 'arousal','vaginal',7,'dick[2]','dom','group'
 						gs 'cum_call','','A6',1,3
-						'You release Artem for a second and smile at Peter: "That was fast! Don''t worry, Petka... it''s completely normal for inexperienced guys. You''ll last longer the next time, you''ll see. We''ll keep practising until you can hold it back for as long as you need". You then turn to Artem: "How about you Artem, are you getting close yet?"'
-						'You give him a devious smile as you redouble your efforts, and soon you can feel his jets of sperm hitting the back of your mouth."'
+						'You release Artem for a second and smile at Peter, "That was fast! Don''t worry, Petka... it''s completely normal for inexperienced guys. You''ll last longer the next time, you''ll see. We''ll keep practising until you can hold it back for as long as you need." You then turn to Artem, "How about you Artem, are you getting close yet?"'
+						'You give him a devious smile as you redouble your efforts, and soon you can feel his jets of sperm hitting the back of your mouth.'
 						gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dick[1]'
 						gs 'cum_call','mouth','A2',1
-						'The guys take a while to recover, and then give you 1000 <b>₽</b> after you get dressed. You wink at them as you leave: "See you next time, boys!"'
+						'The guys take a while to recover, and then give you 1000 <b>₽</b> after you get dressed. You wink at them as you leave, "See you next time, boys!"'
 						artemBJQW += 1
 						swallow += 1
 						money += 1000
@@ -466,10 +466,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			npc_sex['A6'] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy3.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you finish your homework session with Artem, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage again. Peter is already waiting there.'
-			'You decide to take the initiative this time and explain: "Petka, last time you lasted quite long and nearly brought me to an orgasm when you fucked me. It''s time for a new position: today you''re going to fuck me from behind. It''s kind of like doggy style, but we''ll be standing up."'
-			'Artem offers you some condoms, but you wave them away: "No need as far as I''m concerned, I''m on birth control. You can use them if you want to, but it feels better without. Just don''t come inside me, okay boys?"'
+			'You decide to take the initiative this time and explain, "Petka, last time you lasted quite long and nearly brought me to an orgasm when you fucked me. It''s time for a new position: today you''re going to fuck me from behind. It''s kind of like doggy style, but we''ll be standing up."'
+			'Artem offers you some condoms, but you wave them away, "No need as far as I''m concerned, I''m on birth control. You can use them if you want to, but it feels better without. Just don''t come inside me, okay boys?"'
 			'The guys happily agree and Artem tosses them aside. Artem gets behind you, rubbing his cock against your pussy before shoving it in. You lean forward and take Peter''s dick into your mouth. After a few minutes they swap places, and Peter pounds you from behind while you give Artem a skilful blowjob. Since the beginning of your lessons, they both have really come a long way.'
-			'You give Peter some instructions: "That feels great, Petka. Take my boobs in your hands. Good... now play with my nipples. And fuck me harder!"'
+			'You give Peter some instructions, "That feels great, Petka. Take my boobs in your hands. Good... now play with my nipples. And fuck me harder!"'
 			gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dick[1]','sub'
 			gs 'arousal','vaginal',5,'dick[1]','sub'
 			gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dick[2]','sub'
@@ -486,13 +486,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			act 'Finish the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
-				'The three of you sit down for a minute and catch your breath. You smile at them: "That was nice, boys. Next time we''ll be trying cunnilingus, do you know what that is?"'
-				'Artem''s nose wrinkles, and he says: "Eww! I don''t know <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to lick a pussy! That sounds disgusting!"'
-				'You look at him with disbelief... you''ve taken his cock in your mouth many times already, and he refuses to reciprocate? You sternly say: "You asked me to teach you about the female body, and that''s what I''m doing. If you find a nice girl some day, you''ll need to know how to satisfy her! You already know how to please a girl with your cock, but you also need to know how to do it with your tongue."'
-				'Artem still has his doubts, but caves: "Well, alright. I guess we can try. If you say girls like it that much."'
-				'You put on a confident smile, and ask Peter the same thing: "And you, Petka? How do you feel about cunnilingus?"'
+				'The three of you sit down for a minute and catch your breath. You smile at them, "That was nice, boys. Next time we''ll be trying cunnilingus, do you know what that is?"'
+				'Artem''s nose wrinkles, and he says, "Eww! I don''t know <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to lick a pussy! That sounds disgusting!"'
+				'You look at him with disbelief... you''ve taken his cock in your mouth many times already, and he refuses to reciprocate? You sternly say, "You asked me to teach you about the female body, and that''s what I''m doing. If you find a nice girl some day, you''ll need to know how to satisfy her! You already know how to please a girl with your cock, but you also need to know how to do it with your tongue."'
+				'Artem still has his doubts, but caves, "Well, alright. I guess we can try. If you say girls like it that much."'
+				'You put on a confident smile, and ask Peter the same thing, "And you, Petka? How do you feel about cunnilingus?"'
 				'"I''ve always wanted to taste a girl, I''m in!" Peter says enthusiastically.'
-				'Artem gives you 1,000 <b>₽</b> after you get dressed. You wink at them as you leave: "See you next time, boys! Better get those tongues ready!"'
+				'Artem gives you 1,000 <b>₽</b> after you get dressed. You wink at them as you leave, "See you next time, boys! Better get those tongues ready!"'
 				minut += 5
 				money += 1000
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -508,10 +508,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			npc_sex['A6'] += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/kuni53.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you finish your homework session with Artem, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage again. Peter is already waiting there, eager to get started.'
-			'You sit down on the couch between them, and explain: "Alright, boys. You''ve seen my pussy, you''ve fucked it... today it''s time you kiss it."'
-			'You take off your clothes, and spread your legs wide. Smiling at Artem, you encourage him: "Go on, Artem. Close your eyes and have a taste. I''ll tell you what to do."'
+			'You sit down on the couch between them, and explain, "Alright, boys. You''ve seen my pussy, you''ve fucked it... today it''s time you kiss it."'
+			'You take off your clothes, and spread your legs wide. Smiling at Artem, you encourage him, "Go on, Artem. Close your eyes and have a taste. I''ll tell you what to do."'
 			'Artem drops to his knees in front of you, and hesitantly licks your pussy lips.'
-			'You smile and run your hand through his hair as you encourage him: "Go on, you can be bolder. Thrust your tongue inside me. Notice that little pea? Focus on that..."'
+			'You smile and run your hand through his hair as you encourage him, "Go on, you can be bolder. Thrust your tongue inside me. Notice that little pea? Focus on that..."'
 			'Even though you can tell his heart is not really into it, he does his best to make you feel good. Following your instructions, you can feel yourself soon approaching orgasm.'
 			gs 'arousal','cuni',5,'dick[1]','dom'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -519,16 +519,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			act 'Make them change places':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/sexrand/kuni17.jpg"></center>'
-				'You know Artem isn''t into this that much, and you also don''t want to orgasm before Peter had a turn. You quickly stop him: "Stop! That was good... your turn, Petka. Artem, come here, I''ll suck you off while Petka licks me."'
+				'You know Artem isn''t into this that much, and you also don''t want to orgasm before Peter had a turn. You quickly stop him, "Stop! That was good... your turn, Petka. Artem, come here, I''ll suck you off while Petka licks me."'
 				'Artem did his best, and you try to reward him by giving him a good blowjob. Peter is doing a great job on your pussy though, and you can''t hold your orgasm back any longer.'
-				'You scream: "Petka! Don''t stop! Aaaaahhh!"'
+				'You scream, "Petka! Don''t stop! Aaaaahhh!"'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal','cuni',5,'dick[2]','dom'
 				gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dick[1]','sub'
 				gs 'cum_call','face','A2',1
 				'Artem cums all over your face, just as you have the strongest orgasm you''ve had in quite a while. You lick up Artem''s cum automatically in your current state of euphoria, not even realizing what you''re doing until you already swallowed most of it.'
-				'When you recover, you praise them: "Wow boys, that felt great! In fact... it felt so good, I''d feel bad taking your money. Today''s lesson is on me."'
-				'Peter seems to be in shock, and you reassure him: "Petka, I know that must''ve looked strange, but that''s what it looks like when a girl has an orgasm. You did great!"'
+				'When you recover, you praise them, "Wow boys, that felt great! In fact... it felt so good, I''d feel bad taking your money. Today''s lesson is on me."'
+				'Peter seems to be in shock, and you reassure him, "Petka, I know that must''ve looked strange, but that''s what it looks like when a girl has an orgasm. You did great!"'
 				'He smiles shyly, and you get dressed again. You quickly gather your things and wave the boys goodbye as you get ready to leave the garage.'
 				artemBJQW += 1
 				swallow += 1
@@ -543,10 +543,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you finish your homework session with Artem, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage again. Peter is already waiting there, eager to get started.'
-			'Artem smiles shyly as he asks: "You know, <<$pcs_nickname>>... me and Petka have been wanting to fuck your ass. It would only make sense, as the next step in our anatomy class... what do you say?"'
-			'You laugh: "You both have assholes... why don''t you practise on each other, and I''ll just watch today?"'
-			'Seeing their distraught faces, you smile: "Fine, fine... you should''ve seen your faces! But jokes aside, when you want to have anal sex, the girl should first clean herself. Do you have an enema kit, Artem?"'
-			'He quickly nods: "Yes, we have one in the bathroom at my house you can use."'
+			'Artem smiles shyly as he asks, "You know, <<$pcs_nickname>>... me and Petka have been wanting to fuck your ass. It would only make sense, as the next step in our anatomy class... what do you say?"'
+			'You laugh, "You both have assholes... why don''t you practise on each other, and I''ll just watch today?"'
+			'Seeing their distraught faces, you smile, "Fine, fine... you should''ve seen your faces! But jokes aside, when you want to have anal sex, the girl should first clean herself. Do you have an enema kit, Artem?"'
+			'He quickly nods, "Yes, we have one in the bathroom at my house you can use."'
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Go give yourself an enema':
@@ -560,16 +560,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				npc_sex['A6'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy5.jpg"></center>'
 				'You quickly walk back to Artem''s apartment with him, and give yourself an enema in the bathroom.'
-				'When you return to the garage, you get down on your hand and feet on the couch and wiggle your ass at them. You ask Artem: "So, now that I''m clean... do you have something we can use as lubricant? Maybe some petroleum jelly, or vegetable oil?"'
-				'Artem comes back with a jar of Vaseline. You smile at him and say: "That will do just fine. Now put some on your finger and slowly put it in my ass... don''t be stingy, use lots of it. It''ll feel much better for both of us."'
+				'When you return to the garage, you get down on your hand and feet on the couch and wiggle your ass at them. You ask Artem, "So, now that I''m clean... do you have something we can use as lubricant? Maybe some petroleum jelly, or vegetable oil?"'
+				'Artem comes back with a jar of Vaseline. You smile at him and say, "That will do just fine. Now put some on your finger and slowly put it in my ass... don''t be stingy, use lots of it. It''ll feel much better for both of us."'
 				gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','A2','lubri'
 				'He does as you say, and testily slides his finger inside your ass a few times. When he''s satisfied it''s going smooth enough, he adds a second finger and fucks your ass carefully.'
-				'"Very good, Artem... now take some more and smear it all over your cock". When you see he''s using good amounts, you nod: "Alright, now put it in slowly."'
-				'Artem slowly guides his dick into your tight asshole. Once the head is in, he groans: "Wow... it''s so tight, and so warm! I feel like I''m going to cum already!"'
+				'"Very good, Artem... now take some more and smear it all over your cock." When you see he''s using good amounts, you nod, "Alright, now put it in slowly."'
+				'Artem slowly guides his dick into your tight asshole. Once the head is in, he groans, "Wow... it''s so tight, and so warm! I feel like I''m going to cum already!"'
 				gs 'arousal','anal',8,'dick[1]'
 				gs 'arousal','anal',7,'dick[2]'
 				gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dick[1]','sub'
-				'You quickly tell him to stop: "Okay, pull out! I''ll give you a blowjob to finish, can''t have you shooting your load inside me when Petka hasn''t even had a turn yet! Your turn, Petka... it should be easier, now that Artem has warmed me up. Just go slow, okay?"'
+				'You quickly tell him to stop, "Okay, pull out! I''ll give you a blowjob to finish, can''t have you shooting your load inside me when Petka hasn''t even had a turn yet! Your turn, Petka... it should be easier, now that Artem has warmed me up. Just go slow, okay?"'
 				'Peter nods and carefully slides his cock in. He slowly fucks your ass, making sure he''s not hurting you while you suck Artem off, ignoring the taste of your ass on his cock.'
 				'Neither of them last long, and soon you feel Peter shooting his load in your ass while Artem cums inside your mouth.'
 				minut -= 5
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					gs 'arousal','end'
 					gs 'shortgs','dress'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'After they take a moment to catch their breath, you tell him: "You see why I had you wait so long to fuck my ass? It''s much more intense back there, for both of us... you had to build up some stamina before you could handle it. I guess that''s it for today."'
+					'After they take a moment to catch their breath, you tell him, "You see why I had you wait so long to fuck my ass? It''s much more intense back there, for both of us... you had to build up some stamina before you could handle it. I guess that''s it for today."'
 					if pain['asshole'] + (agape * 10) > 40: gs 'dinSex','after_anal','no_plug' else gs 'dinSex', 'after_anal','pc'
 					'The guys definitely liked today''s lesson, and Artem thanks you heartily when he gives you the 1000 <b>₽</b>. The boys are staying around in the garage for a while, talking enthusiastically as they wave you goodbye. You hear your name a lot in their conversation, and you wonder what they could be talking about.'
 
@@ -599,8 +599,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/ap_anatomy6_1.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you finish your homework session with Artem, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage again. When you reach the garage, you see Peter has prepared a table with two bottles of wine, some glasses and several fruits.'
-			'Artem smiles at you: "You''ve done so much for us... we just wanted to say thank you, for all the lessons you''ve taught us!"'
-			'Peter pours the wine in some glasses and proposes a toast: "To expanding our horizons!"'
+			'Artem smiles at you, "You''ve done so much for us... we just wanted to say thank you, for all the lessons you''ve taught us!"'
+			'Peter pours the wine in some glasses and proposes a toast, "To expanding our horizons!"'
 			'You happily toast with them, and drink the wine. As soon as your glass is empty, Peter refills it for you. Half-way into your third glass, you feel quite drunk.'
 			'The boys noticed as well, and offer you one more glass for good measure. Once they''re positive you''re hammered, Artem pulls out his phone and begins to record.'
 			minut += 5
@@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 				gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dick[2]','sub'
 				gs 'arousal','hj',5,'dick[1]','sub'
 				minut -= 10
-				'Peter then says: "<<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, take off your clothes. We''re going to fuck you now."'
+				'Peter then says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, take off your clothes. We''re going to fuck you now."'
 				gs 'shortgs','undress'
 				gs 'arousal','',5,'dick[1]','sub'
 				gs 'arousal','anal',5,'dick[2]','sub'
@@ -645,7 +645,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 					'You obediently swallow their sperm, and then drink the glass of urine the guys offered you without even wincing. Artem makes sure he films all of that too.'
 					gs 'dinSex', 'after_anal','boy',$boydesc[1]
 					'Both the boys have an evil grin on their faces, and you slowly realize they had been planning this for some time.'
-					'Artem arrogantly tells you: "So... <<$pcs_nickname>>. As you probably realize, there are going to be some changes now. I won''t have time to help you with your homework any more, next time we will go to the garage immediately after school. We have lots of plans with you. As long as you do what we say, no one will see the video of you getting drilled in all of your holes by the biggest nerds in school."'
+					'Artem arrogantly tells you, "So... <<$pcs_nickname>>. As you probably realize, there are going to be some changes now. I won''t have time to help you with your homework any more, next time we will go to the garage immediately after school. We have lots of plans with you. As long as you do what we say, no one will see the video of you getting drilled in all of your holes by the biggest nerds in school."'
 					'You quietly get dressed, and quietly leave the garage, You know this is probably just the beginning.'
 					minut += 5
 					pcs_hydra += 10
@@ -681,16 +681,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 	if pav_slut < 125:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kiss.jpg"></center>'
 		'You smile, and slowly move your face towards Artem''s. Artem reads your signal and leans in, softly kissing your <<$liptalk3>>.'
-		'When you finally end the kiss, he shyly says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I really like you."'
+		'When you finally end the kiss, he shyly says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I really like you."'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Just hang out':gt 'artemhome','inside'
 
 	if artemtimes >= 20 and leghumpArtem = 0:
-		'Artem trips over his words when he tries to suggest something: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe we could... maybe I... I really want you... can I touch your ass? Please?"'
+		'Artem trips over his words when he tries to suggest something, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe we could... maybe I... I really want you... can I touch your ass? Please?"'
 		act 'Let him caress your ass': gt 'artemEv','leghump'
 	elseif leghumpArtem >= 1:
-		'Artem looks at you with embarrassment, but gathers the courage to ask: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best thing that''s ever happened to me. I enjoyed last time so much... could we play like that again?"'
+		'Artem looks at you with embarrassment, but gathers the courage to ask, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best thing that''s ever happened to me. I enjoyed last time so much... could we play like that again?"'
 		act 'Let him caress your ass': gt 'artemEv','leghump'
 		if pcs_dom > 0:
 			act 'Strip and let Artem rub his dick against your ass': gt 'artemEv','leghump2'
@@ -765,7 +765,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 				'You kiss him again, and impatiently tug at his clothes. He puts his hands on your <<$titsize>> boobs, and massages them through your clothes.'
 				'You finally manage to unbutton his pants, and when you reach for his cock you can feel it''s already fully erect. You keep kissing him while you masturbate him.'
 				'Then, you drop to your knees and take his cock in your mouth. You suck him off enthusiastically, and do everything you can to make him feel good.'
-				'After a few minutes you hear him mutter: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you..."'
+				'After a few minutes you hear him mutter, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you..."'
 				'He gathered all his courage and looks at you expectantly. You can tell from the greedy look in his eyes that he wants to fuck you now.'
 				npc_sex['A2'] += 1
 				bja += 1
@@ -774,14 +774,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 
 				if mesec > 0:
 					if artemanal > 0:
-						'You take his dick out of your mouth for a second and quickly tell him: "Sorry Artem... it''s that time of the month, we can''t."'
-						'He immediately replies: "How about your ass then, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+						'You take his dick out of your mouth for a second and quickly tell him, "Sorry Artem... it''s that time of the month, we can''t."'
+						'He immediately replies, "How about your ass then, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 
 						act 'Agree to have anal sex instead':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/anal.jpg"></center>'
 							'You grin despite yourself... there''s no way he would''ve ever dared to say that, if you hadn''t introduced him to it yourself.'
-							'You smile and tell him: "Alright, you perv... I just need an enema real quick in that case, give me a minute."'
+							'You smile and tell him, "Alright, you perv... I just need an enema real quick in that case, give me a minute."'
 							gs 'dinSex','enema','You quickly go to the bathroom and give yourself an enema, and walk back to his room.'
 							'When you get back, you drop to your knees on the couch and put up your ass without saying another word, simply giving him a lewd wink to let him know you''re ready for him.'
 							gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','lubri'
@@ -798,20 +798,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 						act 'Tell him you''re on your period':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You smile at him a bit apologetically and say: "Sorry, Artem. I''d love to, but it''s that time of the month, you know? I bet I could still make you feel good with my mouth."'
-							'Artem blushes, but presses on and asks: "Maybe I can try your ass then? I heard it would feel really good, for both of us..."'
+							'You smile at him a bit apologetically and say, "Sorry, Artem. I''d love to, but it''s that time of the month, you know? I bet I could still make you feel good with my mouth."'
+							'Artem blushes, but presses on and asks, "Maybe I can try your ass then? I heard it would feel really good, for both of us..."'
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							act 'Reject and finish him with your mouth':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum48.jpg"></center>'
-								'You take his dick out of your mouth and look at him wide-eyed: "What!? I love that you''re feeling more confident since we met, but this... maybe I should just go home."'
-								'He quickly apologizes: "Sorry! Don''t go, please!"'
+								'You take his dick out of your mouth and look at him wide-eyed, "What!? I love that you''re feeling more confident since we met, but this... maybe I should just go home."'
+								'He quickly apologizes, "Sorry! Don''t go, please!"'
 								'Artem takes your hand and kisses it, slowly working his way upwards. You smirk as you enjoy him kissing your neck gently... damn, you can''t stay mad at him. You drop back down to your knees and take his cock in your mouth again, sucking him off slowly.'
 								'Even though you''re doing your best to tease him and not make him cum to punish him for that suggestion, it''s not working. After mere seconds you can feel his hand gripping your head, keeping your mouth in place as he shoots his load onto your tongue. You quickly swallow it, giving his cock a quick kiss before getting back up.'
-								'Artem apologizes: "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>... I wanted too much. I''ll never bring it up again."'
-								'You take his hand in yours and reassure him: "It''s okay, babe. Just... don''t pressure me for anal, okay? I will let you know when I''m ready and in the mood for it."'
+								'Artem apologizes, "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>... I wanted too much. I''ll never bring it up again."'
+								'You take his hand in yours and reassure him, "It''s okay, babe. Just... don''t pressure me for anal, okay? I will let you know when I''m ready and in the mood for it."'
 								'He nods hopefully, very happy with the fact that you still gave him a blowjob after his blunder <b>and</b> that you''re still open to the prospect of having anal sex with him some day.'
 								gs 'arousal','bj',5
 								swallow += 1
@@ -824,12 +824,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 							act 'Agree to have anal sex':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/anal.jpg"></center>'
-								'You give him your best surprised look, and ask: "My ass, Artem? Really!?"'
-								'When you see him panic, you grin and say: "Just kidding, you pervert... alright, we can try. I''ll need to clean myself first though... do you have anything for that?"'
-								'Artem nods as he hands you something: "I have an enema kit... here."'
+								'You give him your best surprised look, and ask, "My ass, Artem? Really!?"'
+								'When you see him panic, you grin and say, "Just kidding, you pervert... alright, we can try. I''ll need to clean myself first though... do you have anything for that?"'
+								'Artem nods as he hands you something, "I have an enema kit... here."'
 								gs 'dinSex','enema','You quickly go to the bathroom and give yourself an enema.'
 								'When you return to his room, you get down on the couch and offer him your bare ass with a smile.'
-								'You ask him: "We need some lubricant also... do you have any? Maybe some petroleum jelly, or oil? Check the medicine cabinet, there might be something in there."'
+								'You ask him, "We need some lubricant also... do you have any? Maybe some petroleum jelly, or oil? Check the medicine cabinet, there might be something in there."'
 								gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','lubri'
 								anala += 1
 								artemanal += 1
@@ -859,8 +859,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 						gs 'stat'
 						if artemsex = 0:
 							artemsex = 1
-							'After he finishes, you run your hand over his chest and smile at him: "So... you''re a man now..."'
-							'Artem is not sure what to say, and mutters: "<<$pcs_nickname>>... I... I love you..."'
+							'After he finishes, you run your hand over his chest and smile at him, "So... you''re a man now..."'
+							'Artem is not sure what to say, and mutters, "<<$pcs_nickname>>... I... I love you..."'
 							'You don''t say anything, but just cuddle with him for a while. You can tell it means a lot to him.'
 						end
 
@@ -878,15 +878,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 					end
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum48.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore his pleas and pick up the pace, trying to get him to cum in your mouth while you fondle yourself.'
-					'Sure enough, a few seconds later he warns you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>... I''m going to cum..."'
+					'Sure enough, a few seconds later he warns you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>... I''m going to cum..."'
 					'You redouble your efforts, and a few seconds later you feel his cock erupt in your mouth. <<$timeorgart>>'
 					gs 'arousal','bj',5,'dom'
 					gs 'cum_call','mouth',$boy,1
 					swallow += 1
 					gs 'arousal','end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You give him a sweet smile as you give his cock a kiss, and ask him: "I know it''s not what you wanted, but did you enjoy it?"'
-					'He happily nods: "It was great! Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best."'
+					'You give him a sweet smile as you give his cock a kiss, and ask him, "I know it''s not what you wanted, but did you enjoy it?"'
+					'He happily nods, "It was great! Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best."'
 
 					act 'Continue':gt 'artemhome','inside'
 				end
@@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem stops you when you try to kiss him: "I don''t think so <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ve heard way too many stories about where that mouth has been. You can still use it on me, though..."'
+		'Artem stops you when you try to kiss him, "I don''t think so <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ve heard way too many stories about where that mouth has been. You can still use it on me, though..."'
 		'He lets those words linger in the air for a second, and then unbuttons his pants and pulls out his erect cock.'
 		act 'Suck him off': gt 'artemEv','bj'
 	end
@@ -923,7 +923,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemSkver':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/walk_<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'You enjoy a pleasant walk in the park, sharing all kinds of small talk with Artem.'
-	'After a while you end up near the movie theater. When Artem sees it, he suggests: "Hey, let''s go see a movie!"'
+	'After a while you end up near the movie theater. When Artem sees it, he suggests, "Hey, let''s go see a movie!"'
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'artemEv','artemGopSkver'
@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemSkver':
 					'You enter the movie theater with Artem. After he buys tickets for the both of you, you find some nice seats in the back row and watch the movie.'
 					'The movie turns out to be quite dull. You lean over towards Artem and ask him what he thinks of the movie.'
 					'He''s not impressed either. You kind of like him... maybe there are better ways for you to spend your time in a dark movie theater?'
-					'You lean over towards Artem again and say: "Hey Artem...", and kiss him on the lips when he turns to look at you. The rest of the movie results in being one long make-out session for the two of you. Neither of you have any clue what the movie was actually about, by the time the lights go back on.'
+					'You lean over towards Artem again and say, "Hey Artem..." and kiss him on the lips when he turns to look at you. The rest of the movie results in being one long make-out session for the two of you. Neither of you have any clue what the movie was actually about, by the time the lights go back on.'
 					artemKinoKiss += 1
 					minut += 10
 				elseif artemKinoKiss >= 5:
@@ -953,7 +953,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemSkver':
 					'By now, ''going to the movie theater'' usually equals an hour long make-out session with Artem. Nevertheless, you get into your usual seats and wait for the lights to go out.'
 					'You like Artem... he''s a genuinely nice guy, and he treats you with respect. You bet there''s something else you could do, that would probably make him feel even better than just kissing him.'
 					'When Artem moves closer to you and tries to put his arm around your shoulders, you push him back.'
-					'Just when he''s about to ask if something''s wrong, you put your hand on his thigh and slowly begin to work your way up, while you whisper to him: "Relax, sit back and enjoy the movie. Just let me know what it''s about afterwards."'
+					'Just when he''s about to ask if something''s wrong, you put your hand on his thigh and slowly begin to work your way up, while you whisper to him, "Relax, sit back and enjoy the movie. Just let me know what it''s about afterwards."'
 					'For the next few minutes, you gently massage the growing bulge in his pants, and then open his zipper and take it in your hand. After you take a quick look around to ensure for yourself that no one can see you, you lean over and take the head of his erect cock inside your mouth.'
 					'You know you have nearly an hour before the movie is over, so you take your sweet time with him. You lick his cock teasingly slow, play with his balls and only barely put your lips around it, backing off every time you think he''s getting close.'
 					'Finally you decide you''ve teased him enough, and you let him finish in your mouth. You do have to swallow his load; you can''t spit it out anywhere, so it''s the only way to not stain your clothes. After making sure you didn''t miss a drop, you give the head of his dick a light kiss before getting back into your seat like nothing happened. The movie is just about over.'
@@ -985,7 +985,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemSkver':
 	end
 	act '"Let''s just keep walking"':
 		cla
-		'You don''t really feel like going the cinema, and tell him: "Nah, let''s just enjoy the walk we''re on."'
+		'You don''t really feel like going the cinema, and tell him, "Nah, let''s just enjoy the walk we''re on."'
 		'Artem is happy enough to just spend time with you, regardless of what the two of you are doing.'
 		'He nods and takes your hand in his as you continue on your walk, talking about everyday things.'
 		minut += 10
@@ -1004,7 +1004,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/park/walkgop.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you enjoy a pleasant walk in the park, some Gopniks suddenly stop you. They don''t look familiar to you.'
-	'Somehow, one of them knows your name. They look at you with disdain and the leader of their group says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing with this bitch?"'
+	'Somehow, one of them knows your name. They look at you with disdain and the leader of their group says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>? What are you doing with this bitch?"'
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1019,15 +1019,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 	end
 	act 'Stand up to them':
 		cla
-		'You indignantly reply: "He''s not a bitch, Artem is my friend!"'
-		'The Gopnik walks up to Artem, and pokes him in the chest with his finger. He asks: "Oh really... what do you think, bitch? Are you a bitch or what?"'
+		'You indignantly reply, "He''s not a bitch, Artem is my friend!"'
+		'The Gopnik walks up to Artem, and pokes him in the chest with his finger. He asks, "Oh really... what do you think, bitch? Are you a bitch or what?"'
 		act 'Get between them':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/park/walkgop_knee.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly get inbetween Artem and the Gopnik, shielding him with your body. You threaten them: Don''t touch him! I''ll call the police!"'
-			'The Gopnik is not impressed. He pulls out a knife and puts it against your throat: "Why are you wasting your time with this loser, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'You quickly get inbetween Artem and the Gopnik, shielding him with your body. You threaten them, "Don''t touch him! I''ll call the police!"'
+			'The Gopnik is not impressed. He pulls out a knife and puts it against your throat, "Why are you wasting your time with this loser, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			'You can see his friends slowly encroaching around you. There''s no way you can run away now.'
-			'You look into his eyes and sigh: "Come on... just let us leave. Please? You can take my money."'
+			'You look into his eyes and sigh, "Come on... just let us leave. Please? You can take my money."'
 			'The Gopnik is satisfied with that prospect, and lowers the knife. After you give him all your money, he lets you and Artem leave. You feel bad for getting robbed like that, but you still feel you did the right thing. Who knows what they would''ve done to Artem, if you didn''t get involved!'
 			minut += 5
 			money = 0
@@ -1038,12 +1038,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 		act 'Watch in silence':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/park/walkgop_udar.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m not a bitch", Artyom says quietly.'
-			'The Gopnik grins: "We''ll see about that!"'
+			'"I''m not a bitch," Artem says quietly.'
+			'The Gopnik grins, "We''ll see about that!"'
 			'He hits Artem hard in the stomach. Artem buckles over and falls to his knees. The Gopnik and his friends laugh while Artem lies groaning on the ground.'
-			'He turns to you: "Everyone can see he''s a bitch, <<$pcs_nickname>>. What do you even see him him? Seriously..."'
-			'Then he continues, with an evil smirk on his face: "So... you really like him? Enough to help him out of this mess he talked himself into? There is one thing you could do..."'
-			'The other Gopniks are all laughing when their leader suggests: "Do a striptease! If it''s a good one, we''ll leave him alone. Someone, play some music."'
+			'He turns to you, "Everyone can see he''s a bitch, <<$pcs_nickname>>. What do you even see him him? Seriously..."'
+			'Then he continues, with an evil smirk on his face, "So... you really like him? Enough to help him out of this mess he talked himself into? There is one thing you could do..."'
+			'The other Gopniks are all laughing when their leader suggests, "Do a striptease! If it''s a good one, we''ll leave him alone. Someone, play some music."'
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1051,9 +1051,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/park/walkgop_udar2.jpg"></center>'
 				'Wait, what!?'
-				'You answer: "No way, you perverts! Just leave us alone!"'
+				'You answer, "No way, you perverts! Just leave us alone!"'
 				'The Gopnik walks back over to Artem and kicks him in the face. A few seconds later, one of his friends also kicks Artem in the back. You quickly throw yourself on top of Artem and hug him, so they can''t kick him any more.'
-				'The Gopnik looks down at the two of you, and spits on the ground. He sighs: "Whatever..."'
+				'The Gopnik looks down at the two of you, and spits on the ground. He sighs, "Whatever..."'
 				'The Gopniks leave you alone and go deeper into the park, probably to go drink some beer or something. You help Artem up on his feet, carefully.'
 				'Artem wipes the blood from his face, deeply embarrassed you have to see him like this. You walk in silence as you help him get home.'
 				minut += 5
@@ -1061,17 +1061,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 				act 'Put him in bed and leave':gt 'artemhome','leave',15
 			end
 			act 'Dance for them':
-				inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+				inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/park/walkgop_strip.jpg"></center>'
 				'Well, if that''s what you have to do to get out of here...'
 				'You begin to dance to the music a bit awkwardly, and immediately get boo''d.'
-				'The Gopnik threatens: "We said striptease, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Not dance!"'
+				'The Gopnik threatens, "We said striptease, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Not dance!"'
 				'You nod and slowly begin to undress to the music, trying to avoid their greedy looks.'
-				'Artem noticed their looks as well and shouts: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, stop! You don''t have to do this!"'
-				'The Gopnik punches him in the ribs and tells him: "Shut up, bitch! She''s saving your ass, show some respect."'
+				'Artem noticed their looks as well and shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, stop! You don''t have to do this!"'
+				'The Gopnik punches him in the ribs and tells him, "Shut up, bitch! She''s saving your ass, show some respect."'
 				'Artem is too afraid to argue with them, and soon the only thing you''re still wearing is your boots.'
-				'All of the Gopniks gather around you. Their leader grins and gives you a choice: "Not bad <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice tits. It''s a shame you''re wasting them on him. And now, you''re going to suck us all off. If you do a good job, we''ll let you go."'
+				'All of the Gopniks gather around you. Their leader grins and gives you a choice, "Not bad <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice tits. It''s a shame you''re wasting them on him. And now, you''re going to suck us all off. If you do a good job, we''ll let you go."'
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'shortgs','undress'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1108,7 +1108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/walk_slap.jpg"></center>'
 						'You can see Artem is mulling something over, while you walk back home.'
-						'Once you reach your apartment building, Artem says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>... I don''t think we should see each other any more, after what just happened. That was gross!"'
+						'Once you reach your apartment building, Artem says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>... I don''t think we should see each other any more, after what just happened. That was gross!"'
 						'That fucking bastard... you did that to save him! Too angry to say anything, you slap him in the face as hard as you can and then storm off, vowing to never speak to him again.'
 						act 'Leave':
 							minut += 15
@@ -1139,7 +1139,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 						pcs_dom += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/walk_save.jpg"></center>'
-						'You look around you, and suddenly shout in a random direction: "Dad, I''m over here!"'
+						'You look around you, and suddenly shout in a random direction, "Dad, I''m over here!"'
 						'As the Gopniks turn around to see who you''re shouting at, you quickly grab Artem by the arm and start running. When you''re satisfied the Gopniks are no longer following you, you find a quiet area and put your clothes back on.'
 						act 'Go back to Artem''s apartment':gt 'artemhome','inside'
 					else
@@ -1187,15 +1187,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemGopSkver':
 
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/park/walkgop_rape.jpg"></center>'
-						'You look around you, and suddenly shout: "Dad, I''m over here!"'
+						'You look around you, and suddenly shout, "Dad, I''m over here!"'
 						'As the Gopniks turn around to see who you''re shouting at, you quickly grab Artem by the arm and start running. Unfortunately, one of the Gopniks wasn''t fooled by your diversion, and you trip over his foot when he tackles you.'
-						'The guy drops to his knees and grabs you by the hair while you lie flat on your stomach: "We warned you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''re all ours now."'
-						'One of them takes off his pants and drops to his knees in front of you, while the other holds his knife to your neck. He threatens: "Open up whore, or we''ll be spilling your guts all over the ground."'
+						'The guy drops to his knees and grabs you by the hair while you lie flat on your stomach, "We warned you, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You''re all ours now."'
+						'One of them takes off his pants and drops to his knees in front of you, while the other holds his knife to your neck. He threatens, "Open up whore, or we''ll be spilling your guts all over the ground."'
 						'Two of them go stand watch, while the other four gather around you. Two of them hold you down, while the third fucks your throat and the last one fucks your pussy. They keep switching places, fucking your helpless body relentlessly while Artem watches, unable to assist you in any way.'
 						'By this point you''re too tired to resist and just let them have their way with you, and just groan through the pain when one of them puts you on your hands and knees and fucks your tight asshole. Several more follow his example, and after what feels like forever they tell you to get up to your knees.'
 						'You do as they say, and meekly open your mouth while they jerk themselves off over your face one by one. Then they all spit into your mouth, and force you to swallow it.'
-						'To add insult to injury, several of them finish it off by urinating all over you. They laugh as they get dressed again, and their leader grins benevolently: "Go home and get cleaned up. We have nothing against you, but remember this lesson, <<$pcs_nickname>>... if you keep hanging out with bitches, people will treat you like one too. You know where to find us, when you decide you want a real man". Then they leave.'
-						'Artem quietly helps you get dressed, and quietly walks you home. When you get home he finally says something: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m so sorry. I know what you did for me and... I owe you. Big time. I don''t know what I can do to repay you, but if you ever need anything... please. I''m there for you."'
+						'To add insult to injury, several of them finish it off by urinating all over you. They laugh as they get dressed again, and their leader grins benevolently, "Go home and get cleaned up. We have nothing against you, but remember this lesson, <<$pcs_nickname>>... if you keep hanging out with bitches, people will treat you like one too. You know where to find us, when you decide you want a real man." Then they leave.'
+						'Artem quietly helps you get dressed, and quietly walks you home. When you get home he finally says something, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m so sorry. I know what you did for me and... I owe you. Big time. I don''t know what I can do to repay you, but if you ever need anything... please. I''m there for you."'
 						gs 'shortgs','dress'
 						act 'Leave': artemblag = 1 & gt 'artemhome','leave',15
 					end
@@ -1211,12 +1211,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A2'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A2'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big2.jpg"></center>'
 	if kotovLoveQW > 0 and artemVitokQW = 0:
-		'You walk across the school courtyard to meet up with Artem. He gives you a friendly nod as you approach, and asks: "You ready to go?"'
+		'You walk across the school courtyard to meet up with Artem. He gives you a friendly nod as you approach, and asks, "You ready to go?"'
 		'Just when you leave the courtyard with Artem to go study at his house, you run into Vitek Kotov. He doesn''t look pleased.'
-		'Vitek looks at Artem disdainfully and sneers: "Where are you going with that four-eyed loser, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-		'You smile at him and reassure him: "Relax Vitek, Artem is tutoring me a bit after class. My school performance needs a boost, and he kindly offered to help me out."'
-		'Vitek frowns though, and says: "He ''kindly offered''... right. I don''t trust that freak! Just look at him, he''s eyeing you up and down constantly!"'
-		'Artem is getting quite nervous, and tries to appease Vitek: "Vitek, come on man! You know I would never do that! I''m only helping <<$pcs_nickname>> out with her studies, I swear!"'
+		'Vitek looks at Artem disdainfully and sneers, "Where are you going with that four-eyed loser, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+		'You smile at him and reassure him, "Relax Vitek, Artem is tutoring me a bit after class. My school performance needs a boost, and he kindly offered to help me out."'
+		'Vitek frowns though, and says, "He ''kindly offered''... right. I don''t trust that freak! Just look at him, he''s eyeing you up and down constantly!"'
+		'Artem is getting quite nervous, and tries to appease Vitek, "Vitek, come on man! You know I would never do that! I''m only helping <<$pcs_nickname>> out with her studies, I swear!"'
 		'You can see Vitek''s body tense. He''s not buying Artem''s story at all, and looks at Artem with distrust.'
 
 		if pcs_dom >= 10:
@@ -1226,10 +1226,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				artemVitokQW = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You decide that you should step up for Artem, but also reassure Vitek you''re still with him. You need to be delicate about it, though.'
-				'You know Vitek well enough to know that he''s seething right now, so you try to placate him: "Come on baby, don''t you trust me? You know I''m your girl... Artem is only helping me get better grades, that''s all. We can still hang out later?"'
+				'You know Vitek well enough to know that he''s seething right now, so you try to placate him, "Come on baby, don''t you trust me? You know I''m your girl... Artem is only helping me get better grades, that''s all. We can still hang out later?"'
 				'That makes Vitek feel a bit better, and you can see his body relax a little.'
-				'Still, he drives his point home by punching Artem in the shoulder. He sneers: "You''re lucky, four-eyes. Still... if I even suspect that you''ve laid a finger on <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll put you in a wheelchair and have you pissing blood for the rest of your life! Got that?"'
-				'Artem is terrified, and quickly nods while he rubs his painful shoulder: "Yes, yes! I understand!"'
+				'Still, he drives his point home by punching Artem in the shoulder. He sneers, "You''re lucky, four-eyes. Still... if I even suspect that you''ve laid a finger on <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll put you in a wheelchair and have you pissing blood for the rest of your life! Got that?"'
+				'Artem is terrified, and quickly nods while he rubs his painful shoulder, "Yes, yes! I understand!"'
 				'Vitek leaves you be, and you go to Artem''s home with him to study. You can see Artem''s body still trembling as you walk down the streets.'
 				act 'Do homework with Artem': gt 'artemEv','learn'
 			end
@@ -1240,10 +1240,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			artemVitokQW = 2
 			'You silently watch the two of them, and wonder if you should help Artem.'
 			'Suddenly, Vitek punches Artem in the chest, knocking the wind out of him.'
-			'Artem curls up into a ball and squeals like a girl: "Vitek, please! Don''t hit me again, please!"'
-			'Vitek leans over Artem''s prone body and scoffs: "Walk away, now. If I ever see you near <<$pcs_nickname>> again, I''m knocking your teeth out! Got that?"'
-			'Artem, still curled up on the ground, wails: "Okay, okay! I''ll leave her alone! Just please, let me go!"'
-			'Vitek gives him one more kick in the ass, just as Artem gets up. He growls: "Now get the fuck out of here, freak... before I change my mind!"'
+			'Artem curls up into a ball and squeals like a girl, "Vitek, please! Don''t hit me again, please!"'
+			'Vitek leans over Artem''s prone body and scoffs, "Walk away, now. If I ever see you near <<$pcs_nickname>> again, I''m knocking your teeth out! Got that?"'
+			'Artem, still curled up on the ground, wails, "Okay, okay! I''ll leave her alone! Just please, let me go!"'
+			'Vitek gives him one more kick in the ass, just as Artem gets up. He growls, "Now get the fuck out of here, freak... before I change my mind!"'
 			'The terrified Artem quickly gathers his things and runs away from you, deciding it''s not worth the risk to help you. Vitek spits on the ground with a pleased grin on his face, and walks away.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1253,18 +1253,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		cla
 		FedorArtemTalk = 1
 		'As you leave the school courtyard with Artem to go study, Fedor stops you.'
-		'He looks questioningly at Artem and asks: "Artem, what''s going on? Are you taking <<$pcs_nickname>> somewhere? She''s with me, you know..."'
-		'Artem blushes, and says: "I know she is, Fedor. We''re just going to do our homework together. I''m tutoring <<$pcs_nickname>>, to help her school performance a little. She asked me to help her, by the way!"'
-		'You smile at Fedor, and pitch in: "I did ask him, Fedor. I really need the help for school, and Artem was friendly enough to help me out. We''re just studying together, nothing more."'
-		'Fedor sighs, but concedes: "Well... alright, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I don''t like you going with <b>him</b>, but I trust you."'
+		'He looks questioningly at Artem and asks, "Artem, what''s going on? Are you taking <<$pcs_nickname>> somewhere? She''s with me, you know..."'
+		'Artem blushes, and says, "I know she is, Fedor. We''re just going to do our homework together. I''m tutoring <<$pcs_nickname>>, to help her school performance a little. She asked me to help her, by the way!"'
+		'You smile at Fedor, and pitch in, "I did ask him, Fedor. I really need the help for school, and Artem was friendly enough to help me out. We''re just studying together, nothing more."'
+		'Fedor sighs, but concedes, "Well... alright, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I don''t like you going with <b>him</b>, but I trust you."'
 		'After that he walks away, and you and Artem leave the schoolyard.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Do homework with Artem': gt 'artemEv','learn'
 	else 
 		cla
-		'You walk across the school courtyard to meet up with Artem and go study at his place. He gives you a friendly nod as you approach, and asks: "You ready to go?"'
-		'You smile: "Let''s go study!"'
+		'You walk across the school courtyard to meet up with Artem and go study at his place. He gives you a friendly nod as you approach, and asks, "You ready to go?"'
+		'You smile, "Let''s go study!"'
 		'The two of you don''t have much to talk about on the way there, and after a few minutes just decide to walk in silence.'
 		gs 'stat'
 		

+ 14 - 14
locations/belpicknick.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	tatarGangTimes = rand(1,3)
 	times_picknick = sashaBeliTimes + sipliGangTimes + kolGangTimes + tatarGangTimes
 	minut += 15
-	'The band of criminals quickly fold out a convenient steel grill, and have it heated up within minutes. The one named Tatar fries the meat they brought with them, while one of the others pours vodka into some glasses. Vadim hands you a glass: "Here, drink". They didn''t bring any other snacks, so you''re pretty much drinking the vodka on an empty stomach.'
+	'The band of criminals quickly fold out a convenient steel grill, and have it heated up within minutes. The one named Tatar fries the meat they brought with them, while one of the others pours vodka into some glasses. Vadim hands you a glass, "Here, drink." They didn''t bring any other snacks, so you''re pretty much drinking the vodka on an empty stomach.'
 	act'Drink the vodka':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
@@ -23,18 +23,18 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	minut += 15
 	'The criminals get rowdier and rowdier, the more they had to drink. The food is all gone by now, and all they have left is more vodka. One of them runs to the car and turns on the radio, before turning up the volume as high as it will go. He puts one fist in the air and screams "Stripteeaaaase!"'
-	'The others join him in his chant, and soon all of them are pushing you to the middle of a circle while chanting: "Striptease! Striptease! Striptease!"'
+	'The others join him in his chant, and soon all of them are pushing you to the middle of a circle while chanting, "Striptease! Striptease! Striptease!"'
 	act'Perform a striptease for them':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
-		inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		gs'stat'
 		if pcs_danc < 40:
 			prevdance = 1
 			'You know this is your cue, and you attempt to do a striptease for them. You would have to be very good at dancing to overcome you drunkenness and begin to dance a bit awkwardly, tugging at your clothes.'
-			'The criminals are not impressed in the slightest, and one of them yells: "What kind of crap is this!? My elderly aunt Katinka could do a better job!"'
-			'His friend agrees: "Yea, this is fucking terrible!"'
-			'"Maybe she''s better at other things. Given how bow-legged she''s dancing, perhaps a different kind of show is in order", Siple says as he hands you an empty bottle. "Go ahead slut, entertain us."'
+			'The criminals are not impressed in the slightest, and one of them yells, "What kind of crap is this!? My elderly aunt Katinka could do a better job!"'
+			'His friend agrees, "Yea, this is fucking terrible!"'
+			'"Maybe she''s better at other things. Given how bow-legged she''s dancing, perhaps a different kind of show is in order," Siple says as he hands you an empty bottle. "Go ahead slut, entertain us."'
 			act'Shove the neck into your vagina':gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_light'
 			act'Shove the bottom into your vagina':gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_hard'
 			act'Shove the neck into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vb_light':
 	gs'stat'
 	'Okay, so dancing is not something you do well. You have to entertain them with the bottle now, and decide to take the easiest route: you spread your legs and put the neck of the bottle against your pussy lips. You slowly push it in as far as it will go, trying to make a show of it by spreading your legs as far as you can and fucking yourself slowly with the neck of the bottle.'
 	if rand(1,100) <= 10:		
-		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated: "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
+		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated, "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
 		act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 	else
 		'The guys are not impressed however. "What kind of weak shit is this? You''d better put some more effort into it, otherwise we''re going to do it for you."'
@@ -76,10 +76,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vb_hard':
 		'Not sure what they want to see you consider putting it in your ass but at the last second you turn the bottle around in your hand. You spread your legs and put the bottom of the bottle against your pussy lips, and slowly begin to push it in. You try to make a show of it by spreading your legs as far as you can and fucking yourself slowly with the bottom of the bottle, which is stretching your pussy out a great deal.'
 	end
 	if rand(1,100) <= 80:
-		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated: "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
+		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated, "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
 		act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 	else	
-		'The bandits look at each other for a second, and then shake their heads: "Not good enough, slut. Put it in your ass and be quick about it, otherwise we''re doing it for you."'
+		'The bandits look at each other for a second, and then shake their heads, "Not good enough, slut. Put it in your ass and be quick about it, otherwise we''re doing it for you."'
 		act'Shove the neck into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
 		act'Shove the bottom into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
 	end
@@ -98,10 +98,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ab_light':
 		'Realising they want you to put it in your ass, you spread your legs and put the neck of the bottle against your puckered butthole. After lubricating it with a bit of saliva you slowly push it in as far as it will go, trying to make a show of it by spreading your legs as far as you can and fucking yourself slowly with the neck of the bottle.'
 	end
 	if rand(1,100) <= 70:	
-		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated: "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
+		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated, "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
 		act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 	else
-		'The bandits look at each other for a second, and then shake their heads: "Not good enough, slut. Use the other end and be quick about it, otherwise we''re doing it for you."'
+		'The bandits look at each other for a second, and then shake their heads, "Not good enough, slut. Use the other end and be quick about it, otherwise we''re doing it for you."'
 		act'Shove the bottom into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
 	end
 end
@@ -117,13 +117,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ab_hard':
 	else
 		'The realization of what they really want from you scares you. But not as much as earning their displeasure does. So you decide to go as far as you can with this: you spread your legs and put the bottom of the bottle against your puckered butthole. After lubricating it with a bit of saliva and stretching a bit with your fingers you actually manage to get it in, even though it hurts a lot. Deciding you don''t want the guys to take over for you, you soldier on and slowly push it in as far as it will go, trying to make a show of it by spreading your legs as far as you can and fucking yourself slowly with the bottom of the bottle.'
 	end
-	'The guys slap each other on the back, thoroughly impressed: "What an ass, look at it stretch! It''s gonna take all of our cocks combined in there to even feel something!"'
+	'The guys slap each other on the back, thoroughly impressed, "What an ass, look at it stretch! It''s gonna take all of our cocks combined in there to even feel something!"'
 	act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	'You slowly take off your clothes one piece at a time, while you skillfully try to give the bandits the sexy dance they want from you. You can tell they want you badly, and that your dancing is definitely having an effect on them.'
-	'Once you''re completely naked, they applaud you and tell you: "Very nice, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now let''s see how good you are with your mouth."'
+	'Once you''re completely naked, they applaud you and tell you, "Very nice, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now let''s see how good you are with your mouth."'
 	act'Get down on your knees':
 		cls
 		if sashaBeliSex = 0:sashaBeliSex = 1 & guy += 1
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	
 	if belgangPay <= 0:
 		money += belsexpayment
-		'Vadim looks at you and says: "That was a good fuck, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Here, this is for you," and with those words he hands you <<belsexpayment>> <b>₽</b>.'
+		'Vadim looks at you and says, "That was a good fuck, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Here, this is for you," and with those words he hands you <<belsexpayment>> <b>₽</b>.'
 	else
 		belgangPay -= belsexpayment
 		belgangPayWeek -= belsexpayment

+ 6 - 6
locations/bicycle.qsrc

@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sarai':
 				menu_off = 1
 				findvelday = daystart
 				minut += 60
-				run_exp += RAND(0,2)
-				stren_exp += rand(0,2)
+				run_exp += RAND(1,3)
+				stren_exp += rand(1,3)
 				fat -= 5
 				pcs_mood += 5
 				pcs_sweat += 2
@@ -107,8 +107,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sarai':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			minut += 75
-			run_exp += RAND(0,1)
-			stren_exp += rand(0,1)
+			run_exp += RAND(1,3)
+			stren_exp += rand(1,3)
 			fat -= 1
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			pcs_sweat += 1
@@ -200,8 +200,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swamp':
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude' or pcs_inhib > 50:
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 75
-			run_exp += RAND(0,1)
-			stren_exp += rand(0,1)
+			run_exp += RAND(1,3)
+			stren_exp += rand(1,3)
 			fat -= 1
 			pcs_sweat += 1
 			pcs_mood += 10

+ 2 - 2
locations/billiard.qsrc

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:
 			money -= 250
 			minut += 60
 			billvar = 0
-			pool_exp += rand(0, 3)
+			pool_exp += rand(1,2)
 			billrand = rand(0, 5)
 
 			if billrand = 0:
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:
 		act 'Play for money (300 <b>₽</b>)':
 			menu_off = 1
 			minut += 60
-			pool_exp += rand(0, 1)
+			pool_exp += rand(1,3)
 			billvar = 3
 			gt 'billiard', 'randwin'
 		end

+ 2 - 2
locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -397,9 +397,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playfootball':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 60
 		if npc_rel['A34'] <50:npc_rel['A34'] += rand(1,2)
-		agil_exp += rand(0, 2)
+		agil_exp += rand(1,3)
 		pcs_sweat += 30
-		run_exp += rand(0, 2)
+		run_exp += rand(1,3)
 		fat -= rand(2, 7)
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/football3.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/chessplay.qsrc

@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'game':
-	chess_exp += rand(0,1)
-	intel_exp += rand(0,1)
+	chess_exp += rand(1,2)
+	intel_exp += rand(1,2)
 	chess_move += 1
 	chess_time = rand(1,3)
 	minut += chess_time

+ 9 - 9
locations/cikl.qsrc

@@ -1356,15 +1356,15 @@ if storyline = 1:
 	end
 	!!Brother''s dick growth as he gets older
 	
-	if kolka_dick_day + 30 < daystart and npc_dick['A34'] < 26: 
-		kolka_dick_day = daystart
-		npc_dick['A34'] += 1
-	end
-	if npc_dick['A34'] < 20 and npc_dick['A34'] > 16:
-		$npc_thdick['A34'] = 'well proportioned'
-	elseif npc_dick['A34'] >= 20 and npc_dick['A34'] <= 26:
-		$npc_thdick['A34'] = 'thick'
-	end
+	!if kolka_dick_day + 30 < daystart and npc_dick['A34'] < 26: 
+	!	kolka_dick_day = daystart
+	!	npc_dick['A34'] += 1
+	!end
+	!if npc_dick['A34'] < 20 and npc_dick['A34'] > 16:
+	!	$npc_thdick['A34'] = 'well proportioned'
+	!elseif npc_dick['A34'] >= 20 and npc_dick['A34'] <= 26:
+	!	$npc_thdick['A34'] = 'thick'
+	!end
 end
 
 killvar 'natholi'

+ 9 - 9
locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_5_5.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you jerk him off he moans and sperm starts spewing everywhere getting on your hands. "Ooh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you saved me, but next time use your mouth." He said with a wink.'
+					'As you jerk him off he moans and sperm starts spewing everywhere getting on your hands. "Ooh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you saved me, but next time use your mouth," he said with a wink.'
 					
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -153,15 +153,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_4.jpg"></center>'
 					'Once they finish you walk in. Ira and Lena look at each other and then smile at you.'
-					'"Oh, it''s you <<$pcs_nickname>>, glad it is not some guy. We do not know what we would have done with him."'
-					'"Yes, I just wanted to tidy myself up." you said with a slight blush.'
-					'Lena came up to you and leaned in close as she whispered in your ear: "I know, liked watching, what we was doing. Stay with us, and you''d like it even more."'
+					'"Oh, it''s you <<$pcs_nickname>>. Glad it''s not some guy. We don''t know what we would have done with him."'
+					'"Yeah, I just wanted to tidy myself up," you said with a slight blush.'
+					'Lena came up to you and leaned in close as she whispered in your ear, "I know you liked watching what we were doing. Stay with us, and you''ll like it even more."'
 					act 'Stay':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_5.jpg"></center>'
 						'Looking at the naked girls you bite your lower lip as your eyes roam over their bodies with a lustful look. Ira and Lena start taking your clothes off as they start kissing you all over.'
-						'"Mmm, Oh yes, don''t stop." You moan out. With these words, Lena sucks your clit and began licking your wet pussy.'
+						'"Mmm! Oh yes, don''t stop," you moan out. With these words, Lena sucks your clit and begins licking your wet pussy.'
 						
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -271,10 +271,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_thank':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
 	dj_bad =1
-	instrmusic_exp += rand(0,2) 
+	instrmusic_exp += rand(1,3) 
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are happy to take this opportunity, putting your fingers on the records you move them around, making god awful noises. The guys stop you before to long. "Ok I think that''s enough, I think you made my ears bleed." He says with a laugh.'
+	'You are happy to take this opportunity, putting your fingers on the records you move them around, making god awful noises. The guys stop you before too long. "Okay, I think that''s enough. I think you made my ears bleed," he says with a laugh.'
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc,$metka
 !why not add in an option here to start the series below?
 end
@@ -300,8 +300,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_cock':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Seeing the interest from the smiling guys watching you, you get rid of your top and take off your bra and then place your naked breasts on the turntable and try to play it topless. "I think I did better that time, what do you think?"'
-	'The guy pulled out his erection as he said "Not bad, maybe try this instead."'
+	'Seeing the interest from the smiling guys watching you, you lose your top, then place your bare breasts on the turntable and try to play it topless. "I think I did better that time, what do you think?"'
+	'The guy pulled out his erection as he said, "Not bad, but maybe try this instead."'
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc,$metka
 	act 'Give his dick a try':gt 'dinParty', 'dj_suck'
 end

+ 15 - 15
locations/downlibrary.qsrc

@@ -30,17 +30,17 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 		end
 		minut += 60
 		if pcs_intel >= 50:
-			intel_exp += RAND(0,1) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
-		elseif pcs_intel >= 25:
 			intel_exp += RAND(1,2) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
+		elseif pcs_intel >= 25:
+			intel_exp += RAND(2,3) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 		else
-			intel_exp += RAND(1,3) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
+			intel_exp += RAND(3,4) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 		end
 
 		blizoruk += 1
 		gs'stat'
 
-		'	You read the book for an hour trying to make sense of all clever propositions and understand the subject of the description.'
+		'You read the book for an hour trying to make sense of all clever propositions and understand the subject of the description.'
 
 		act 'Put the book down':gt $curloc
 	end
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 		blizoruk += 1
 		gs'stat'
 
-		'	You read an adventure fiction for an hour.'
+		'You read an adventure fiction for an hour.'
 
 		act 'Put the book down':gt $curloc
 	end
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 		menu_off = 1
 		if blizoruk = 100 or glassqw = 1:
 		glassqw = 1
-		msg'	The text blurs across the page, it looks like you have got poor eyesight. It would be suitable to visit an ophthalmologists.'&gt $curloc
+		msg'The text blurs across the page, it looks like you have got poor eyesight. It would be suitable to visit an ophthalmologists.'&gt $curloc
 		end
 		if pcs_nerd > 0:
 			lastread = totminut
@@ -82,17 +82,17 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 		end
 		minut += 60
 		if pcs_sprt >= 50:
-			sprt_exp += RAND(0,1)
-		elseif pcs_sprt >= 25:
 			sprt_exp += RAND(1,2)
+		elseif pcs_sprt >= 25:
+			sprt_exp += RAND(2,3)
 		else
-			sprt_exp += RAND(1,3)
+			sprt_exp += RAND(3,4)
 		end
 
 		blizoruk += 1
 		gs'stat'
 
-		'	You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, no one denies this, but he wrote exceptionally wordily.'
+		'You read the book for an hour. Tolstoy is certainly a classic writer, no one denies this, but he wrote exceptionally wordily.'
 
 		act 'Put the book down':gt $curloc
 	end
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 			menu_off = 1
 			if blizoruk = 100 or glassqw = 1:
 			glassqw = 1
-			msg'	The text blurs across the page, it looks like you have got poor eyesight. It would be suitable to visit an ophthalmologists.'&gt $curloc
+			msg'The text blurs across the page, it looks like you have got poor eyesight. It would be suitable to visit an ophthalmologists.'&gt $curloc
 			end
 			if pcs_nerd > 0:
 				lastread = totminut
@@ -111,17 +111,17 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 			end
 			minut += 60
 			if pcs_splcstng >= 50:
-				splcstng_exp += RAND(0,1)
-			elseif pcs_splcstng >= 25:
 				splcstng_exp += RAND(1,2)
+			elseif pcs_splcstng >= 25:
+				splcstng_exp += RAND(2,3)
 			else
-				splcstng_exp += RAND(1,3)
+				splcstng_exp += RAND(3,4)
 			end
 			
 			blizoruk += 1
 			gs'stat'
 
-			'	You pick out one of the magic books you can actually read and sit down with it.'
+			'You pick out one of the magic books you can actually read and sit down with it.'
 			'Not only is the subject matter complex and mostly a mystery to you, but the descriptions and explanations are unnecessarily wordy, as if the writer had something to prove.'
 			'After about an hour, you decide to take a break from it and, instead, test your memory. You don''t remember much, but you understand magic a tiny bit better than before nonetheless.'
 

+ 29 - 29
locations/father.qsrc

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if pirsA > 0 and pirsA < 10000 and pirsAfather=0 and pirsadaytalk!daystart:
         'Your stepfather looks at your mouth funnily as you greet him. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you have something shiny in your mouth?"'
         act'"No"':
             cla
-            'You shake your head: "Umm, no! No I don''t!"'
+            'You shake your head, "Umm, no! No, I don''t!"'
             'You quickly turn away before he can get a good look at your tongue piercing.'
             act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
         end
@@ -72,8 +72,8 @@ if pirsA > 0 and pirsA < 10000 and pirsAfather=0 and pirsadaytalk!daystart:
             gs'stat'
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/piercings/a<<pirsA>>.jpg" ></center>'
             'You open your mouth and stick out your tongue, showing him your piercing.'
-            if TouchedByFather=0:'Your stepfather shakes his head: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, tongue piercings are only for lewd women who use their mouth to please men."'
-            if TouchedByFather>0:'Your stepfather grins: "Nice, I bet you could make someone feel really good with that..."'
+            if TouchedByFather=0:'Your stepfather shakes his head, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, tongue piercings are only for lewd women who use their mouth to please men."'
+            if TouchedByFather>0:'Your stepfather grins, "Nice, I bet you could make someone feel really good with that..."'
             act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
         end
         exit
@@ -83,18 +83,18 @@ end
 ! lip piercing
 if pirsB > 0 and pirsB < 10000 and pirsBfather=0 and pirsbdaytalk!daystart:
     pirsadbytalk=daystart
-    'Your stepfather takes a long look at your mouth, specifically at your new piercing. He seems confused and asks: "Why did you get that?"'
+    'Your stepfather takes a long look at your mouth, specifically at your new piercing. He seems confused and asks, "Why did you get that?"'
     act '"Don''t you think it looks cute?"':
         *clr & cla
         pirsBfather=1
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/piercings/b<<pirsB>>.jpg" ></center>'
-        'You shrug. "I don''t know... I just like the way lip rings look, so I got one. Don''t you think it looks cute?"'
+        'You shrug, "I don''t know... I just like the way lip rings look, so I got one. Don''t you think it looks cute?"'
         if TouchedByFather=0:
-            'Your stepfather shakes his head: "Kids these days, always adding new holes to themselves..."'
+            'Your stepfather shakes his head, "Kids these days, always adding new holes to themselves..."'
         end
         if TouchedByFather>0:
-            'Your stepfather grins: "I must admit, it does look sexy on you."'
+            'Your stepfather grins, "I must admit, it does look sexy on you."'
         end
         act 'Move away':gt 'father'
     end
@@ -104,19 +104,19 @@ end
 ! earrings
 if pirsC > 0 and pirsC < 10000 and pirsCfather=0:
     pirsCfather=1
-    'Your stepfather looks at your ears, noting your earrings: "I see you got your ears pierced? Your earrings are very cute."'
+    'Your stepfather looks at your ears, noting your earrings, "I see you got your ears pierced? Your earrings are very cute."'
 end
 
 ! nose ring
 if pirsD > 0 and pirsD < 10000 and pirsDfather=0:
     pirsDfather=1
-    'Your stepfather looks a bit shocked at your nose ring: "Jesus, <<$pcs_nickname>>, what is- why?! I understand putting a ring in a bull''s nose to lead them by, but on a person? There''s no reason to do that!"'
+    'Your stepfather looks a bit shocked at your nose ring, "Jesus, <<$pcs_nickname>>, what is- why?! I understand putting a ring in a bull''s nose to lead them by, but on a person? There''s no reason to do that!"'
 end
 
 ! eyebrow piercing
 if pirsE > 0 and pirsE < 10000 and pirsEfather=0:
     pirsEfather=1
-    'Your stepfather looks surprised when he sees your eyebrow piercing: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, why would you want that thing in your eyebrow?" He shakes his head in exasperation. "Kids these days..."'
+    'Your stepfather looks surprised when he sees your eyebrow piercing, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, why would you want that thing in your eyebrow?" He shakes his head in exasperation, "Kids these days..."'
 end
 
 ! lip tattoo
@@ -129,22 +129,22 @@ if tatlip>0 and fatherTatLip=0 and npc_rel['A28']>=60:
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/tattoos/lip/tatlip<<tatlip>>.jpg" ></center>'
         if tatlip = 2: $textFatherTatLip = 'A tattoo on the inside of your lip?! That must''ve hurt like hell... it is cute, though.'
         if tatlip ! 2: $textFatherTatLip = 'That''s crazy! Why would you get something like that written on you, much less there?! No one would even think of doing that when I was your age.'
-        'You pull your lip down, showing your stepfather the tattoo on the inside of your lip. Your stepfather looks surprised: "<<$textFatherTatLip>>"'
+        'You pull your lip down, showing your stepfather the tattoo on the inside of your lip. Your stepfather looks surprised, "<<$textFatherTatLip>>"'
         act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
     end
 end
 
 if $clothingworntype = 'nude' and npc_pregtalk['A28'] = 0 and pregchem > 2688:
-    'Your stepfather looks at your belly with a surprised look on his face: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re pregnant?"'
+    'Your stepfather looks at your belly with a surprised look on his face, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re pregnant?"'
     if npc_sex['A28']!0:
-        'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does: "It''s not mine, I hope?"'
+        'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does, "It''s not mine, I hope?"'
     end
     npc_pregtalk['A28'] = 1
     
 elseif $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and npc_pregtalk['A28'] = 0 and pregchem > 3600:
-    'Your stepfather looks at your belly with a surprised look on his face: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re pregnant?"'
+    'Your stepfather looks at your belly with a surprised look on his face, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re pregnant?"'
     if npc_sex['A28']!0:
-        'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does: "It''s not mine, I hope?"'
+        'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does, "It''s not mine, I hope?"'
     end
     npc_pregtalk['A28'] = 1
 end
@@ -224,12 +224,12 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
         act 'Move away':gt 'father'
 
         if fatherPayDay = daystart:
-            'Trying your cutest face on your stepfather, you ask him for some money. He just shook his head wearily: "No, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ve already given you some money today, don''t be greedy."'
+            'Trying your cutest face on your stepfather, you ask him for some money. He just shook his head wearily, "No, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ve already given you some money today, don''t be greedy."'
         else
             if (npc_rel['A28'] <= 40 or (pcs_apprnc + (npc_rel['A28']/10)) <= 60) and TouchedByFather = 0:
-                'You ask your stepfather for some money, but he shakes his head in response: "I already gave my salary to your mother, go ask her."'
+                'You ask your stepfather for some money, but he shakes his head in response, "I already gave my salary to your mother, go ask her."'
             else
-                'You ask your stepfather for some money, but he shakes his head in response: "I already gave my salary to your mother, go ask her."'
+                'You ask your stepfather for some money, but he shakes his head in response, "I already gave my salary to your mother, go ask her."'
                 if npc_rel['A28'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A28'] < 60 and fatherPayDay ! daystart:FatherMolest = RAND(1,4)
                 if npc_rel['A28'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A28'] < 80 and fatherPayDay ! daystart:FatherMolest = RAND(1,2)
                 if npc_rel['A28'] >=80 and fatherPayDay ! daystart:FatherMolest = 1
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
                             '"Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, like I said, I have no money. Go ask your mother."'
                         else
                             money += rand(200,300)
-                            persuas_exp += rand(0,2)
+                            persuas_exp += rand(1,3)
                             fatherPayDay = daystart
                             gs 'stat'
                             '"Oh, alright then. Just don''t tell your mother!" he says in a tired voice, keeping his eyes on the doorway as he gives you the money. You act genuinely happy as you take the money from him, giving him a kiss on the cheek as you go.'
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
         gs 'stat'
         '<center><b><font color="maroon">Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/father.jpg"></center>'
-        'You ask your stepfather how he met your mother. Your stepfather scratches his slightly balding head and replies: "I used to work as a taxi driver back then, drove your mother to places from time to time and we got along very well. Natasha is a strong and independant woman, raising you and Anya all by herself after she left your father. I didn''t know him very well, I''ve only met him a couple of times. All I know is that his name is Mikhail Kuznetsov, and that he moved to a different city soon after he and your mother divorced."'
+        'You ask your stepfather how he met your mother. Your stepfather scratches his slightly balding head and replies, "I used to work as a taxi driver back then, drove your mother to places from time to time and we got along very well. Natasha is a strong and independant woman, raising you and Anya all by herself after she left your father. I didn''t know him very well, I''ve only met him a couple of times. All I know is that his name is Mikhail Kuznetsov, and that he moved to a different city soon after he and your mother divorced."'
 
         act 'Move away':gt 'father'
     end
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
 		menu_off = 1
         npc_rel['A28'] = 0
         motherKnowSpravka = 2
-        'Your stepfather angrily walked up to you: "Damnit <<$pcs_nickname>>, your mother told me you''re sexually active already! You''re still so young! I know I can''t stop you, but at least have some decency and don''t bring them to our house." His facial expression then softens, and he adds in a milder voice: "And please... be careful, okay?" You can tell your stepfather is very disappointed in you.'
+        'Your stepfather angrily walked up to you, "Damnit <<$pcs_nickname>>, your mother told me you''re sexually active already! You''re still so young! I know I can''t stop you, but at least have some decency and don''t bring them to our house." His facial expression then softens, and he adds in a milder voice, "And please... be careful, okay?" You can tell your stepfather is very disappointed in you.'
 
         act 'Move away':gt 'father'
         exit
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
 
         ''
         if npc_rel['A28'] <= 40 or (pcs_apprnc + (npc_rel['A28']/10)) <= 60:
-            'You ask your stepfather what he thinks of your outfit. It looks like he''s not in the mood to indulge you, and impatiently waves you away with his hand: "Don''t bother me <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m busy.'
+            'You ask your stepfather what he thinks of your outfit. It looks like he''s not in the mood to indulge you, and impatiently waves you away with his hand, "Don''t bother me <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m busy."'
         else
             'You move slightly closer towards your stepfather, flirtatiously smile at him and ask him what he thinks of your outfit.'
             if pcs_hairbsh <= 0:
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
                             pcs_horny -= RAND(1,5)
                             gs 'stat'
                             if $pantyworntype ! 'none':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim47.jpg"></center>' & 'Even though your body is definitely having an effect on him your stepfather is clearly embarrassed, and surprised you would do such a thing. He clears his throat loudly and looks at you disapprovingly, and the silence that follows makes you feel a bit uncomfortable.'
-                            if $pantyworntype = 'none':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim48.jpg"></center>' & 'You avoid his gaze while you keep swaying your ass back and forth, slowly pulling your clothes away so he can see you''re not wearing any underwear. He sighs wistfully and tries to look away, saying in a stern voice: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, this is not fair, you know I am not made of stone. Don''t show me your bare ass like that." Realizing he wants no more part of your little show, you leave.'
+                            if $pantyworntype = 'none':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim48.jpg"></center>' & 'You avoid his gaze while you keep swaying your ass back and forth, slowly pulling your clothes away so he can see you''re not wearing any underwear. He sighs wistfully and tries to look away, saying in a stern voice, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, this is not fair, you know I am not made of stone. Don''t show me your bare ass like that." Realizing he wants no more part of your little show, you leave.'
                         elseif fatherLust=1:
                             if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
                                 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim49.jpg"></center>'
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
                                         gs 'stat'
                                         gs 'panties', 'dispose'
                                         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim50.jpg"></center>'
-                                        'Wanting to see just how riled up you can get your stepfather, you bend over and slowly pull your panties down. "Is this better, Daddy?" you sweetly ask him, and your stepfather panics while you run your hands over your naked ass, gently kneading your ass cheeks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please don''t do that! Someone could come in at any second! What do you think your mother would do to you AND me when she sees this!?" he whispers, as he moves to you and frantically tries to cover you up. You sweetly smile at him and whisper: "Relax Daddy, we''re fine! Here, for later," as you stuff your panties in his pocket.'
+                                        'Wanting to see just how riled up you can get your stepfather, you bend over and slowly pull your panties down. "Is this better, Daddy?" you sweetly ask him, and your stepfather panics while you run your hands over your naked ass, gently kneading your ass cheeks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please don''t do that! Someone could come in at any second! What do you think your mother would do to you AND me when she sees this!?" he whispers, as he moves to you and frantically tries to cover you up. You sweetly smile at him and whisper, "Relax Daddy, we''re fine!" You stuff your panties into his pocket, "Here, for later."'
                                         act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
                                     end
                                 end
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
                         end
                         act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
                     end
-                    if fatherLust=1:'"Even though he did not expect this from you, you can tell by the spark in his eyes and his heavier breathing that he is, at least, pleasantly surprised by your request.'
+                    if fatherLust=1:'Even though he did not expect this from you, you can tell by the spark in his eyes and his heavier breathing that he is, at least, pleasantly surprised by your request.'
                 end
 
                 if pcs_horny >= 90 or TouchedByFather = 1:
@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
                                 pcs_horny -= RAND(1,5)
                                 gs 'stat'
                                 if $pantyworntype ! 'none':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim45.jpg"></center>' & 'Your stepfather realizes you''re going too far, and interrupts you by clearing his throat loudly. He tells you to go away, making you feel rather uncomfortable.'
-                                if $pantyworntype = 'none':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim46.jpg"></center>' & 'Deciding to take your teasing to the next level, you pull your clothes to the side and show him your bare pussy. Your stepfather realizes you''re taking it too far, and sends you off: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, stop that. And go put on some underwear, that''s no way for a lady to behave."'
+                                if $pantyworntype = 'none':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim46.jpg"></center>' & 'Deciding to take your teasing to the next level, you pull your clothes to the side and show him your bare pussy. Your stepfather realizes you''re taking it too far, and sends you off, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, stop that. And go put on some underwear, that''s no way for a lady to behave."'
                             end
 
                             if fatherLust=1:
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@ if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
     'Your stepfather stares at your naked body, you can''t help but notice the admiring look on his face mixed with the torment of him knowing that he should know better. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you no shame? You shouldn''t be flaunting your naked body like that, you have no idea what kind of effect it has on men!"'
     if npc_sex['A28']=0:
         if npc_rel['A28'] >= 40:
-            'He reluctantly turned his face away from you, and added: "Your body does look fantastic... but you really should go put some clothes on, your mother is around the house somewhere. Who knows what she''ll do when she sees you walking around like this!"'
+            'He reluctantly turned his face away from you, and added, "Your body does look fantastic... but you really should go put some clothes on, your mother is around the house somewhere. Who knows what she''ll do when she sees you walking around like this!"'
             npc_rel['A28'] += 1
             act 'Move away':gt 'bedrPar'
             exit
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
         end
     else
         if mother_go = 0:$mother_go_text = '"You really should go put some clothes on though, your mother is home."'
-            'His eyes never stop looking at your naked body, you can tell he''s very much impressed by your beauty as you walk around the room.<<$mother_go_text>>"'
+            'His eyes never stop looking at your naked body, you can tell he''s very much impressed by your beauty as you walk around the room. <<$mother_go_text>>'
         if mother_go = 0:
             act 'Move away':gt 'bedrPar'
             exit
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ if npc_sex['A28']!0 and fatherwantssex = 1 and mother_go = 1 and hour = 16 and n
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/father.jpg"></center>'
     ! WD: Fix old nude variable
     if $clothingworntype = 'nude': 'You give your stepfather a lewd smile. "I figured my clothes would only get in the way Daddy, so I took them off for you."'
-    'No words are neccessary, your stepfather simply unbuttons his pants revealing his stiff cock: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, help your old man out will you?"'
+    'No words are neccessary, your stepfather simply unbuttons his pants revealing his stiff cock, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, help your old man out will you?"'
     act 'Change your mind and leave':gt $loc, $metka
     act 'Get down on your knees': gs 'fathersex', 'fatherblow4'
 end

+ 8 - 8
locations/gLakeNude.qsrc

@@ -362,10 +362,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sauna':
 				pcs_mood += 10
 				if $clothingworntype = 'swimwear':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/saunabikini.jpg"></center>'
-					if pcs_inhib < 40: inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+					if pcs_inhib < 40: inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/saunanude.jpg"></center>'
-					if pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
+					if pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += rand(2,3)
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You spend 30 minutes relaxing in the sauna.'
@@ -388,10 +388,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sauna':
 				pcs_mood += 10
 				if $clothingworntype = 'swimwear':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/saunabikini.jpg"></center>'
-					if pcs_inhib < 40: inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+					if pcs_inhib < 40: inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/saunanude.jpg"></center>'
-					if pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
+					if pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += rand(2,3)
 				end
 				'You spend 30 minutes relaxing in the sauna.'
 				
@@ -428,10 +428,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sauna':
 				pcs_mood += 10
 				if $clothingworntype = 'swimwear':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/saunabikini.jpg"></center>'
-					if pcs_inhib < 40: inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+					if pcs_inhib < 40: inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/saunanude.jpg"></center>'
-					if pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+					if pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += rand(2,3)
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You spend 30 minutes relaxing in the sauna.'
@@ -455,10 +455,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ice_plunge':
 		if pcs_sweat > 10: pcs_sweat = 10 + rand(0,4)
 		if $clothingworntype = 'swimwear':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/icedipbikini.jpg"></center>'
-			if pcs_inhib < 50:inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+			if pcs_inhib < 50:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/sauna/icedipnude.jpg"></center>'
-			inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
+			inhib_exp += rand(2,3)
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You leave the sauna and as soon as you do the cold air nips at your body, you rush down to the edge of the lake where the ice is broken and a ladder as been put in place and you take the plunge into the ice cold water. It is refreshing the sudden change from the hot sauna to the freezing waters of the lake. After a couple of minutes you climb out of the water.'

+ 12 - 12
locations/gadfield.qsrc

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'field':
 			minut += 360
 			grandmahelp += 1
 			haying_time = 0
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,2)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','field'
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horse':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/horse_field.jpg"></center>'
 			'You spot your grandfather''s horse wandering loose in the field and decide to help out by taking Desperado home. Reaching for the bridle, you start leading Desperado towards the village.'
 			minut += 60
-			grandmahelp += rand(0,1)
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			grandmahelp += 1
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'To your grandparent''s barn':gt'Gadsarai'
@@ -137,8 +137,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/cow_field.jpg"></center>'
 			'Seeing the cow herd on the field, you decide to help your grandfather bring the cows home...'
 			minut += 60
-			grandmahelp += rand(0,1)
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			grandmahelp += 1
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'To your grandparent''s barn':gt'Gadsarai'
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 
 				if hour >= 9:minut += 20
 				if hour < 9:minut += 60
-				hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,4)
+				hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,4)
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow'
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 				if temper >= 25 and sunWeather = 1:pcs_hydra -= 12
 				graze_cow_exp = 1
 				grandmahelp += 1
-				hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+				hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow'
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 			if temper >= 25 and sunWeather = 1:pcs_hydra -= 12
 			grandmahelp += 1
 			minut += 60
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Herd the cows to the river':gt'gadfield','cow2'
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow2':
 				if temper >= 25 and sunWeather = 1:pcs_hydra -= 12
 				grandmahelp += 1
 				graze_cow_exp = 1
-				hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+				hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow2'
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow2':
 			grandmahelp += 1
 			if temper >= 25 and sunWeather = 1:pcs_hydra -= 12
 			minut += 60
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Herd the cows to the forest':gt'gadfield','cow3'
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 				if temper >= 25 and sunWeather = 1:pcs_hydra -= 12
 				grandmahelp += 1
 				graze_cow_exp = 1
-				hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+				hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow3'
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 			mira = 0
 			graze_cow = 0
 			grandmahelp += 1
-			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+			hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Back to the village':gt'gadukino'

+ 6 - 6
locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	act 'Leave the woods':
 		if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 			*clr & cla
-			inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+			inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 			if hour >= 6 and hour < 22:
 				if rand(0,100) > 50:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gadukino_nude.jpg"></center>'
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 				end
 			end
 			if clothesAtLocation = 0:
-				inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+				inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 				'You seem to have misplaced your clothes! You have little choice but to sneak out the woods, hiding your naked body in shadow and moving toward your grandparents house. You wonder where you might have left your clothes.'
 			elseif gadforest_clothestorn = 1:
 				! no clothes here, they must be ripped apart enough times in the woods or swamp to get destroyed.
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 	menu_off = 1
 	caught_rand = rand(0, 100)
 	if caught_rand > 90:
-		inhib_exp += rand(0,3)
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		grandma_trouble += rand(7,10)
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gadukino_old_woman.jpg"></center>'
 		'You''ve been spotted walking home naked by all the women of the village. They are all sitting there scolding you. Your grandparents are definitely going to find out about this.'
 	elseif caught_rand > 70:
-		inhib_exp += rand(0,4)
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		grandma_trouble += rand(1,3)
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -338,8 +338,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gadukino_old_woman'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		'You''ve been spotted walking home naked by a woman from the village. You want to hope she doesn''t tell your grandparents.'
 	elseif caught_rand > 50:
-		inhib_exp += rand(0,3)
-		grandma_trouble += rand(1,3)
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+		grandma_trouble += rand(0,1)
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 49 - 49
locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -2381,21 +2381,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 					'"Yes, indeed, let''s go sit down" you agree with the first hunter.'
 					'The hunters begin to walk again and you follow along until you reach a small clearing.'
 				else
-					inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+					inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 					gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You froze, not knowing what to do, whether to hide, or to ask for help. But it was too late to hide, the men noticed you and you moved to meet them.'
 					'As you walk up to the men, they don''t take their eyes off of you. You feel slightly uncomfortable being stared at by these strangers in this way, but this was your only option.'
-					'- What happened? - asked the older man, as you came closer. - And why are you in such a condition?'
-					'- I was lost - you said with tears in his eyes. And begin to ramble about what has happened to you since you became lost in the forest.'
-					'- Okay, okay, calm down, " he interrupted you. - It`s all over now. It`s good that you met us and not a pack of wolves.'
+					'"What happened?" asked the older man, as you came closer. "And why are you in such a condition?"'
+					'"I was lost," you said with tears in yours eyes. You begin to ramble about what has happened to you since you got lost.'
+					'"Okay, okay, calm down," he interrupted you. "It`s all over now. It`s good that you met us and not a pack of wolves."'
 					if wolf_know = 0:
-						'"There are wolves out here?" You ask terrified.'
-						'"Of course" said one of the hunters. "During the day they are mostly hiding or resting, but at night... Well walking in the woods is not advised."'
+						'"There are wolves out here?" you ask terrified.'
+						'"Of course," said one of the hunters. "During the day they are mostly hiding or resting, but at night... Well walking in the woods is not advised."'
 						wolf_know = 1
 					end
-					'"Yes good job, frighten the poor girl even more." said another hunter. "You look exhausted, it would be better if you sit down for a moment."'
-					'"Yes, indeed, let''s go sit down" you agree with the first hunter.'
+					'"Yes, good job, frighten the poor girl even more," said another hunter. "You look exhausted, it would be better if you sit down for a moment."'
+					'"Yes, indeed, let''s go sit down," you agree with the first hunter.'
 					'The hunters begin to walk again and you follow along until you reach a small clearing.'
 					hunterslut += 1
 				end
@@ -2419,13 +2419,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 						'"By any chance is your surname <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You looked at him and nodded.'
 						'"Don`t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 					else
-						'"Look what the cat dragged in." said the older man, looking at you closely, "It''s <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local whore.'
+						'"Look what the cat dragged in," said the older man, looking at you closely, "It''s <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local whore."'
 						'You look at him with a mixture of surprise and shock.'
 						'"Don''t be surprised, I`m also from Gadukino, and you look just like your mother when she was younger, and apparently you are a whore like her too." he said.'
-						'You don''t even remember us. We remember you from that day by the river with Uncle Stepan.'
-						'"I`m Andrei, " he added further, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
-						if gadriver_gang > 2:'I''m not a whore. I told Uncle Stepan to go to hell! I didn''t want that to happen to me!'
-						'"Don`t run away, we won''t hurt you." said Sergei, seeing your attempt to jump to your feet.'
+						'"You don''t even remember us. We remember you from that day by the river with Uncle Stepan."'
+						'"I`m Andrei," he added further, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
+						if gadriver_gang > 2:'"I''m not a whore. I told Uncle Stepan to go to hell! I didn''t want that to happen to me!"'
+						'"Don''t worry, we won''t hurt you," said Sergei, seeing your attempt to jump to your feet.'
 						huntersKnowSlut = 1
 						huntersRape = 1
 					end
@@ -2434,7 +2434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 					$npc_usedname['A174'] = 'Sergei'
 					huntersKnow = 1
 					'After resting for half an hour the hunters began to rise to their feet.'
-					'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, we will lead you out of the swamp," said Andrei. "Over there lies the road back to the village, and if you want, you can stay here with us a little longer."'
+					'"Okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we will lead you out of the swamp," said Andrei. "Over there lies the road back to the village, and if you want, you can stay here with us a little longer."'
 					act 'Go with them':hunters = 1 & minut += 60 & gt 'swamp_yard'
 				end
 			else
@@ -2454,46 +2454,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 					'"Please help!" you rushed to them, shouting.'
 					'"What happened?" They asked pointing their guns in different directions.'
 					'"I got lost in the woods!" You said with tears in your eyes.'
-					'"Ugh!" the older man groaned and spat at the ground. "You shouted so loudly that we thought, you were chased by a pack of wolves!".'
+					'"Ugh!" the older man groaned and spat at the ground. "You shouted so loudly that we thought, you were chased by a pack of wolves!"'
 					if wolf_know = 0:
-						'"There are wolves out here?" You ask terrified.'
-						'"Of course" said one of the hunters. "During the day they are mostly hiding or resting, but at night... Well walking in the woods is not advised."'
+						'"There are wolves out here?" you ask terrified.'
+						'"Of course," said one of the hunters. "During the day they are mostly hiding or resting, but at night... Well walking in the woods is not advised."'
 						wolf_know = 1
 					end
 					if huntersKnowSlut = 0 and gadriver_gang = 0:
-						'"Yes, a good scare will do you good <<$pcs_nickname>>" said another hunter. "It''s better to not wander far from the swamp."'
-						'"Yes, indeed, stay by the swamp." agreed the first. "The wolves stay away from there so you can come to visit us or just stay in the village."'
+						'"Yes, a good scare will do you good, <<$pcs_nickname>>," said another hunter. "It''s better to not wander far from the swamp."'
+						'"Yes, indeed, stay by the swamp," agreed the first. "The wolves stay away from there so you can come to visit us or just stay in the village."'
 						'The hunters begin to walk again and you follow along until you reach the swamp.'
 					else
-						'"Yes good job, scare her." said Igor. "It is better to stay by the swamp."'
-						'"Yes, indeed, let''s go to the swamp." agreed Andrei taking you by the hand. Grinning lecherously, he added. "And then we can have some fun..."'
+						'"Yes, good job, scare her," said Igor. "It is better to stay by the swamp."'
+						'"Yes, indeed, let''s go to the swamp," agreed Andrei taking you by the hand. Grinning lecherously, he added, "And then we can have some fun..."'
 						'You understood the hint.'
 						if pcs_horny < 40:'You obediently followed him, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-						if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'"It must be this way." you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-						if pcs_horny >= 70:'"Well, that''s exactly what you need right now." you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
+						if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'<i>It must be this way,</i> you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
+						if pcs_horny >= 70:'<i>Well, that''s exactly what I need right now,</i> you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
 					end
 				else
-					inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+					inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 					gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 					'"Please help!" you rushed to them, shouting.'
 					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what happened?" asked Andrei, when you came closer. "And why are you in such a condition?"'
-					'- I was lost - you said with tears in his eyes. And begin to ramble about what has happened to you since you became lost in the forest.'
-					'- Okay, okay, calm down, " he interrupted you. - It`s all over now. It`s good that you met us and not a pack of wolves.'
+					'"I was lost," you said with tears in your eyes. You begin to ramble about what has happened to you since you became lost in the forest.'
+					'"Okay, okay, calm down," he interrupted you. "It`s all over now. It`s good that you met us and not a pack of wolves."'
 					if wolf_know = 0:
-						'"There are wolves out here?" You ask terrified.'
-						'"Of course" said one of the hunters. "During the day they are mostly hiding or resting, but at night... Well walking in the woods is not advised."'
+						'"There are wolves out here?" you ask terrified.'
+						'"Of course," said one of the hunters. "During the day they are mostly hiding or resting, but at night... Well walking in the woods is not advised."'
 						wolf_know = 1
 					end
 					if huntersKnowSlut = 0 and gadriver_gang = 0:
-						'"Yes, a good scare will do you good <<$pcs_nickname>>," said another hunter. "Now, give her something to wear and let''s take her back to the swamp.'
-						'"Yes, indeed, let''s go to the swamp, " agreed the first, handing you a blanket that he pulled from his backpack. "And remember next time stay close to the swamp or to the village."'
+						'"Yes, a good scare will do you good, <<$pcs_nickname>>," said another hunter. "Now, give her something to wear and let''s take her back to the swamp."'
+						'"Yes, indeed, let''s go to the swamp," agreed the first, handing you a blanket that he pulled from his backpack. "And remember next time stay close to the swamp or to the village."'
 						'You quickly wrap yourself with the blanket and then follow the guys through the woods and back to the swamp.'
 					else
-						'"Yes good job, scare her." said Igor. "It is better to stay by the swamp."'
-						'"Yes, indeed, let''s go to the swamp." agreed Andrei taking you by the hand. Grinning lecherously, he added. "Did no one miss our little slut?"'
+						'"Yes good job, scare her," said Igor. "It is better to stay by the swamp."'
+						'"Yes, indeed, let''s go to the swamp," agreed Andrei taking you by the hand. Grinning lecherously, he added. "Did anyone miss our little slut?"'
 						if pcs_horny < 40:'You obediently followed him, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-						if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'"It must be this way." you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-						if pcs_horny >= 70:'"Well, that''s exactly what you need right now." you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
+						if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'<i>It must be this way,</i> you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
+						if pcs_horny >= 70:'<i>Well, that''s exactly what I need right now,</i> you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
 					end
 				end
 				!re-arrange and 1-layer out for logic error by illume
@@ -2536,15 +2536,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 					if gadriver_gang = 0:
 						'"I''m Andrei," replied the older man, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
 						'"By any chance is your surname <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You looked at him and nodded.'
-						'"Don`t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
+						'"Don`t be surprised, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmm... very good to know. I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 					else
-						'"Look what the cat dragged in." said the older man, looking at you closely, "It''s <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local whore.'
+						'"Look what the cat dragged in," said the older man, looking at you closely. "It''s <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, the local whore."'
 						'You look at him with a mixture of surprise and shock.'
-						'"Don''t be surprised, I`m also from Gadukino, and you look just like your mother when she was younger, and apparently you are a whore like her too." he said.'
-						'You don''t even remember us. We remember you from that day by the river with Uncle Stepan.'
-						'"I`m Andrei, " he added further, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
-						if gadriver_gang > 2:'I''m not a whore. I told Uncle Stepan to go to hell! I didn''t want that to happen to me!'
-						'"Don`t run away, we won''t hurt you." said Sergei, seeing your attempt to jump to your feet.'
+						'"Don''t be surprised. I`m also from Gadukino, and you look just like your mother when she was younger. Apparently, you are a whore like her too," he said.'
+						'"You don''t even remember us. We remember you from that day by the river with Uncle Stepan."'
+						'"I`m Andrei," he added further. "And these are my friends from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
+						if gadriver_gang > 2:'"I''m not a whore. I told Uncle Stepan to go to hell! I didn''t want that to happen to me!"'
+						'"Don''t worry, we won''t hurt you," said Sergei, seeing your attempt to jump to your feet.'
 						huntersKnowSlut = 1
 						huntersRape = 1
 					end
@@ -2555,7 +2555,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 					huntersKnow = 1
 
 					'Having chatted with you about this and that, for another hour or so, the hunters began to gather their things.'
-					'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go." said Andrei.'
+					'"Okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go." said Andrei.'
 					'"If you want, we can bring you to the swamp," he added after a short pause. "From there the road to the village is easier. Or if you want, you can even stay with us for a bit."'
 
 					act 'Go with them':hunters = 1 & minut += 60 & gt 'swamp_yard'
@@ -2572,12 +2572,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 					if huntersKnowSlut = 0 and huntslutsex > 0:
 						minut += 30
 						'Having chatted with you about this and that, for another hour or so, the hunters began to gather their things.'
-						'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go." said Andrei. "You should pay us another visit, ok?"'
+						'"Okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go," said Andrei. "You should pay us another visit sometime, okay?"'
 					else
-						' - Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, about time you showed up, " Andrei said with a satisfied smile, taking you by the hand.'
+						'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, about time you showed up," Andrei said with a satisfied smile, taking you by the hand.'
 						if pcs_horny < 40:'You obediently followed him, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-						if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'"It must be this way." you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-						if pcs_horny >= 70:'"Well, that''s exactly what you need right now." you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
+						if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'<i>It must be this way,</i> you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
+						if pcs_horny >= 70:'<i>Well, that''s exactly what I need right now,</i> you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
 					end
 
 					if huntersKnowSlut = 0 and huntslutsex > 0:
@@ -2622,10 +2622,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 				end
 			else
 				'The hunters spot you before you have a chance to decide what to do.'
-				' - Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, about time you showed up, " Andrei said with a satisfied smile, taking you by the hand.'
+				'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, about time you showed up,"  Andrei said with a satisfied smile, taking you by the hand.'
 				if pcs_horny < 40:'You obediently followed him, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-				if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'"It must be this way." you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
-				if pcs_horny >= 70:'"Well, that''s exactly what you need right now." you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
+				if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'<i>It must be this way,</i> you thought as you followed the guys, knowing where they were taking you and why.'
+				if pcs_horny >= 70:',<i>Well, that''s exactly what I need right now,</i> you thought, feeling your pussy screaming with desire. You went with the guys, you were so eager, you almost lead the way.'
 
 				temp_gadf = rand(1,2)
 				temphunt = rand(1,3)

+ 5 - 5
locations/gadforestswamp.qsrc

@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><H4>Swamp</H4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/panicswamp.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are stuck in the quagmire."I''m stuck!", you think in panic "What do I do?". '
+	'You are stuck in the quagmire."I''m stuck!" you think in panic "What do I do?"'
 
 	act 'Call for help':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -130,8 +130,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 10
 		swamprand = pcs_stren + pcs_agil
-		stren_exp += rand(0,1)
-		agil_exp += rand(0,1)
+		stren_exp += rand(1,2)
+		agil_exp += rand(1,2)
 		pcs_sweat += 30
 		temp_gads = RAND(1,100)
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -155,8 +155,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 10
 		swamprand = pcs_stren + pcs_agil
-		stren_exp += rand(0,1)
-		agil_exp += rand(0,1)
+		stren_exp += rand(1,2)
+		agil_exp += rand(1,2)
 		pcs_sweat += 30
 		temp_gads = RAND(1,100)
 		gs 'stat'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gadriver.qsrc

@@ -582,8 +582,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadbitch':
 					act'Return':gt'gadriver', 'gadbitch'
 				else
 					minut += 30
-					hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
-					grandmahelp += rand(0,1)
+					hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
+					grandmahelp += 1
 					horse_river = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					

+ 1 - 1
locations/garfather.qsrc

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ act 'Help':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 60
 	pcs_sweat += 10
-	hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
+	hndiwrk_exp += rand(1,3)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/father.jpg"></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gdkin.qsrc

@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 
 		if alko < 6 or pcs_horny <= 75 or pav_slut <= 25:
 			act 'Refuse':
-				if pcs_sprt <= 30: sprt_exp += rand(0, 1)
+				if pcs_sprt <= 30: sprt_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gt 'gdkin'
 			end
 		end
@@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_vrp':
 
 					if alko < 6 or pcs_horny <= 75 or pav_slut <= 25:
 						act 'Refuse':
-							if pcs_sprt <= 30: sprt_exp += rand(0, 1)
+							if pcs_sprt <= 30: sprt_exp += rand(1,2)
 							gt 'gdkin'
 						end
 					end

+ 15 - 12
locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vball2':
 		if loopcount < timemult: loopcount += 1 & jump 'vballtimeloop2'
 		loopcount = 0
 		timemult = 0
-		if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+		if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/gdksport.jpg"></center>'
@@ -705,7 +705,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vball4':
 	timemult = 0
 	npc_rel['A69'] += 1
 	pcs_dom += 1
-	if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+	if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/gdksport.jpg"></center>'
 	'Number of games <<volsesongame>>, Win - <<volsesonwin>>, lesions - <<volsesonloss>>.'
@@ -1168,9 +1168,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor First Date':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big5.jpg"></center>'
 	if fedorkozbreak = 1:
-		'You enter the sports club and see Fyodor Kozlov, standing by the front door. He looks as though he is waiting for someone and as soon as he sees you, he flashes you a smile and he approaches with an affable smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>." he says with a warm smile. He pauses for a moment then reaches into his pockets and pulls out 2 tickets and says, "Here is the deal ... I know that we had a bit of a bumpy relationship before but I would like to try again if you will. So what do you say? Wanna go on another date with me?'
+		'You enter the sports club and see Fyodor Kozlov, standing by the front door. He looks as though he is waiting for someone and as soon as he sees you, he flashes you a smile and he approaches with an affable smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>," he says with a warm smile. He pauses for a moment then reaches into his pockets and pulls out 2 tickets and says, "Here is the deal ... I know that we had a bit of a bumpy relationship before but I would like to try again if you will. So what do you say? Wanna go on another date with me?"'
 	else
-		'You enter the sports club and see Fyodor Kozlov, standing by the front door. He looks as though he is waiting for someone and as soon as he sees you, his eyes light up and he approaches you with an affable smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>." he says with a warm smile. He pauses for a moment then reaches into his pockets and pulls out 2 tickets and says, "Here is the deal ... I have an extra ticket to the movies and I would you like know if you would be up for a good comedy?"'
+		'You enter the sports club and see Fyodor Kozlov, standing by the front door. He looks as though he is waiting for someone and as soon as he sees you, his eyes light up and he approaches you with an affable smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>," he says with a warm smile. He pauses for a moment then reaches into his pockets and pulls out 2 tickets and says, "Here is the deal ... I have an extra ticket to the movies and I would you like know if you would be up for a good comedy?"'
 	end
 
 	act 'Agree':
@@ -1178,7 +1178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor First Date':
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/park/walk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I would like that." you said with a smile and Fedor responds: "Good, I hear that this movie will have us in stiches." with a delighted look on his face as he wraps his arm around yours then walks you to the movie theater.'
+		'"I would like that." you said with a smile and Fedor responds, "Good, I hear that this movie will have us in stiches." with a delighted look on his face as he wraps his arm around yours then walks you to the movie theater.'
 
 		act 'Watch a movie':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor First Date':
 			pcs_mood += 90
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/seat2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Fedor presentes the tickets at the entrance and together you walked into the theater. You look around and notice that the seats were mostly empty so Fedor leads you to the front row and both got seated. The lights dim then the movie starts. Fedor sits motionless and only occasionally glancing at you. The movie was quite interesting and you couldn''t help but laugh occasionally at the wackiness of the movie. When the movie ends, the lights turn on and Fedor walks you out. "<<$pcs_firstname>>. You seem like a cool girl. Maybe we could go out together. What do you say?"'
+			'Fedor presentes the tickets at the entrance and together you walked into the theater. You look around and notice that the seats were mostly empty so Fedor leads you to the front row and both got seated. The lights dim then the movie starts. Fedor sits motionless and only occasionally glancing at you. The movie was quite interesting and you couldn''t help but laugh occasionally at the wackiness of the movie. When the movie ends, the lights turn on and Fedor walks you out, "<<$pcs_firstname>>. You seem like a cool girl. Maybe we could go out together. What do you say?"'
 
 			act 'Agree':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1195,7 +1195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor First Date':
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/park/walk.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Sure, I would love to go out with you." you replied. Fedor was visibly delighted "Alright I look forward to hanging out with you again. Whenever you are up for another date then meet me in the school yard, after school." Fedor says as he walks you back home. The two of you have fun discussing your favorite movies as you continue your way home.'
+				'"Sure, I would love to go out with you." you replied. Fedor was visibly delighted, "Alright I look forward to hanging out with you again. Whenever you are up for another date then meet me in the school yard, after school." Fedor says as he walks you back home. The two of you have fun discussing your favorite movies as you continue your way home.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'pavResidential'
 			end
@@ -1209,9 +1209,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor First Date':
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
 				if fedorkozbreak = 1:
-					'You say to Fedor "Sorry Fedor but I don''t think that this is really working out. I''m sorry." Fedor looks visibly upset as he replies, "I guess it was never meant to be, I''m sorry for wasting your time.." Fedor then, silently walks you home.'
+					'You say to Fedor, "Sorry Fedor but I don''t think that this is really working out. I''m sorry."'
+					'Fedor looks visibly upset as he replies, "I guess it was never meant to be, I''m sorry for wasting your time." Fedor then, silently walks you home.'
 				else
-					'You say to Fedor "You seem like a cool guy but I''m just not ready for a relationship right now." Fedor was visibly upset as he replies, "I guess it wasn''t a good time, if you ever change your mind then pay me a visit at school." he says with a forced smile as he silently walks you home.'
+					'You say to Fedor, "You seem like a cool guy but I''m just not ready for a relationship right now."' 
+					'Fedor was visibly upset. "I guess it wasn''t a good time, if you ever change your mind then pay me a visit at school," he says with a forced smile as he silently walks you home.'
 				end
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'pavResidential'
@@ -1224,7 +1226,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor First Date':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor ">><<"[Fedor]">><<" Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-		'You said to Fedor "I have too much that I need to do right now... maybe some other time." Fedor then lowered his head with a frown. "Okay. Maybe some other time."'
+		'You said to Fedor, "I have too much that I need to do right now... maybe some other time."'
+		'Fedor then lowered his head with a frown. "Okay. Maybe some other time."'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'pavResidential'
 	end
@@ -1233,14 +1236,14 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Starletsreact':
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	'As you approach the Starlets, Albina looks at you in disgust. Loudly enough for the whole team to hear, she says "<<$pcs_nickname>>, no one wants to see some pregnant whore dance. Leave. You''re done." Tears welling in your eyes, you leave, the sound of laughter and taunting following your departure.'
+	'As you approach the Starlets, Albina looks at you in disgust. Loudly enough for the whole team to hear, she says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, no one wants to see some pregnant whore dance. Leave. You''re done." Tears welling in your eyes, you leave, the sound of laughter and taunting following your departure.'
 	act 'Continue':npc_pregtalk['A23'] = 1 & gt 'gdk'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'vballreact':
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	'As you approach the team, your coach notices you and calls you aside. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, are you pregnant? I can''t let you play like that. Also, a pregnant teenager would definitely reflect poorly on me and the rest of the team. Sorry, but off the team." Tears welling in your eyes, you leave.'
+	'As you approach the team, your coach notices you and calls you aside, "<<$pcs_firstname>>, are you pregnant? I can''t let you play like that. Also, a pregnant teenager would definitely reflect poorly on me and the rest of the team. Sorry, but you''re off the team." Tears welling in your eyes, you leave.'
 	act 'Continue':npc_pregtalk['A69'] = 1 & gt 'gdk'
 end
 

+ 9 - 9
locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 					*clr & cla
 					if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 						gs 'exhibitionism', 1
-						inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+						inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/bendover.jpg"></center>'
 						npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 						'You drop some books and bend over at the waist to pick up the books, showing off your ass.'
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 					end
 					act 'Stand up and try to start a conversation':
 						*clr & cla
-						'"Well, then I was lucky that it was you. A grown and respectable man and not some kid. I don''t really understand boys and therefore I prefer to make friends and chat with more mature people." you answer the teacher.'
+						'"Well, then I was lucky that it was you. A grown and respectable man and not some kid. I don''t really understand boys and therefore I prefer to make friends and chat with more mature people," you answer the teacher.'
 						'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>, their behavior is often bad." he says as he went down the hall. While leaving, he gently runs his hand over your back.'
 						pcs_horny += 3
 						act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'morning'
@@ -368,9 +368,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 			if SchoolGossip > 0:
 				'During the break, you are approached by some of the local Gopniks in your school, "I know why you look so glum <<$pcs_nickname>>, you miss our cocks! Ain''t that right, cocksucker? Don''t worry, you can come along with us. We''ll give you all the dick you want."'
 				*nl
-				'They put their hands around your arms and begin to guide you to the restrooms. Knowing you can''t take all of them on you follow along meekly, hoping for some miracle to get you out of this mess. Just when you arrive at the restrooms, Albina suddenly blocks the doorway: She''s come to your rescue! They try to shove her out of the way and pull you into the restroom, but she stands firmly in the middle of their doorway and doesn''t budge and inch, "Pull up your pants boys, and get out of here. <<$pcs_nickname>> is my friend. If I see you pestering her one more time, I''ll tell my father on you. You know who he is you don''t want to get on his bad side, trust me!"'
+				'They put their hands around your arms and begin to guide you to the restrooms. Knowing you can''t take all of them on you follow along meekly, hoping for some miracle to get you out of this mess. Just when you arrive at the restrooms, Albina suddenly blocks the doorway: She''s come to your rescue! They try to shove her out of the way and pull you into the restroom, but she stands firmly in the middle of their doorway and doesn''t budge and inch, "Pull up your pants boys, and get out of here. <<$pcs_nickname>> is my friend. If I see you pestering her one more time, I''ll tell my father on you. You know who he is. You don''t want to get on his bad side, trust me!"'
 				*nl
-				'The guys look at each other for a moment, and then decide to let you go. They curse loudly as they walk away, and you give Albina a weak smile in gratitude. She gives you an encouraging nod and continues on her way to her next class."'
+				'The guys look at each other for a moment, and then decide to let you go. They curse loudly as they walk away, and you give Albina a weak smile in gratitude. She gives you an encouraging nod and continues on her way to her next class.'
 				gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
 			end
 		else
@@ -1618,7 +1618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 			'You are in the mood anyways so why not, hopefully it isn''t to quick. They lead you to the men''s room, it''s just you and the Gopniks in there now. They all crowd around you in a circle, unzipping their pants, and pulling out their dicks.'
 			'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way.'
 			*nl
-			if pav_slut > 125: 'On one wall you see written in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>"</b>.'
+			if pav_slut > 125: 'On one wall you see written in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>></b>".'
 			act 'Start sucking':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A157'
@@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 							gs 'willpower', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/resistgop.jpg"></center>'
-							'"I''ll scream and when the teachers arrive I will tell him you tried to rape me." He fumes and leans in real close. "You''ll regreat this slut, I promise." With that he relents and leaves with the others going with him, all giving you looks you would rather not think about.'
+							'"I''ll scream and when the teachers arrive I will tell him you tried to rape me." He fumes and leans in real close, "You''ll regret this slut, I promise." With that he relents and leaves with the others going with him, all giving you looks you would rather not think about.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 					else
@@ -2032,7 +2032,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_gopnic':
 			'You are in the mood anyways so why not, hopefully it isn''t to quick. They lead you to the men''s room, one of the guys drives everyone else out; it''s just you and the Gopniks in there now. One of them leans against the door to block anyone else from coming in. While the rest all start unzipping their pants and pulling out their dicks.'
 			'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way.'
 			*nl
-			if pav_slut > 125: 'On one wall you see written in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>"</b>.'
+			if pav_slut > 125: 'On one wall you see written in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>></b>".'
 			act 'Start sucking':
 				*clr & cla
 				if r = 9:
@@ -2098,7 +2098,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_gopnic':
 								gs 'willpower', 'resist'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/resistgop.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I''ll scream and when the teachers arrive I will tell him you tried to rape me." He fumes and leans in real close. "You''ll regreat this slut, I promise." With that he relents and leaves with the others going with him, all giving you looks you would rather not think about.'
+								'"I''ll scream and when the teachers arrive I will tell him you tried to rape me." He fumes and leans in real close, "You''ll regret this slut, I promise." With that he relents and leaves with the others going with him, all giving you looks you would rather not think about.'
 								act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
 							end
 						else
@@ -2120,7 +2120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_bj':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'You know perfectly well, that the group of boys are not going to let you escape. You meekly let the boys drag you to the men''s room, hoping for a miracle to save you. It never comes. When you arrive at the men''s room, one of the guys drives everyone else out; it''s just you and the Gopniks in there now. He goes outside and keeps watch, while two of the others reach for their pants. Several more came in, to watch.'
-	'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way. On the wall of the restroom, you see written in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>"</b>.'
+	'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way. On the wall of the restroom, you see written in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>></b>".'
 	act 'Start sucking':
 		*clr & cla
 		if $boydesc = 'Vitek':

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 			minut += 60
 			schoolrunday = daystart
 			fat -= rand(2, 7)
-			run_exp += rand(0, 2)
+			run_exp += rand(1,3)
 			pcs_sweat += 20
 			gs 'stat'
 			if month > 2 and month < 9:

+ 8 - 8
locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Ask a question about the lesson':
 			*clr & cla
 			if rand(0,2) = 0: pcs_grades += 1
-			compskl_exp += rand(0,1)
+			compskl_exp += rand(1,2)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
 			if grupTipe=3:
 				'Mr. Ivanov nods approvingly. He happily spends some extra time explaining the topic again to you, and answers any extra questions you might have. You feel like you learned a lot, thoroughly understanding today''s lessons now.'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			end
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
-				pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
+				!!pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 				'The eyes of Mr. Ivanov grow narrower, and even though you roll your eyes at him, you sit through the rest of the lesson in silence, at least pretending to pay attention sometimes. You don''t learn anything today, though.'
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			end
 			act'Try to focus on the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
-				pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
+				!!pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,2)
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? Are you trying to get me to start smoking to pass the time? I''m not interrupting your classes, just leave me alone.'
+							'"What good would that do? Are you trying to get me to start smoking to pass the time? I''m not interrupting your classes, just leave me alone."'
 							'Your teacher doesn''t know what to say, and after a while just decides to continue her classes. Obviously, you don''t learn anything today. You hear one of the boys behind you mutter your being a bitch, you turn around and flip him off.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of music and famous artist.'
 		act 'Ask a question about the lesson':
 			*clr & cla
-			instrmusic_exp += rand(0,1)
+			instrmusic_exp += rand(1,2)
 			if rand(0,2) = 0: pcs_grades += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classmusic.jpg"></center>'
 			'Mr. Vasilyev smiles, always happy to see his students engaged in his class. He happily spends some extra time explaining the topic again, and answers any extra questions you might have. You feel smarter, thoroughly understanding today''s lessons now.'
@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			'Mr. Vasilyev tries to convince you of the importance of todays lesson, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
-				pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
+				!!pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
 				instrmusic_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
 				'The eyes of Mr. Vasilyev grow narrower, and even though you roll your eyes at him, you sit through the rest of the lesson in silence, at least pretending to pay attention sometimes. You don''t learn anything today, though.'
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			end
 			act'Try to focus on the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
-				pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
+				!!pcs_grades -= rand(0,1)
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				instrmusic_exp += rand(0,2)
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of art and famous artist.'
 		act 'Ask a question about the lesson':
 			*clr & cla
-			artslks_exp += rand(0,1)
+			artslks_exp += rand(1,2)
 			if rand(0,2) = 0: pcs_grades += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
 			'Mr. Vasilyev smiles, always happy to see his students engaged in his class. He happily spends some extra time explaining the topic again, and answers any extra questions you might have. You feel smarter, thoroughly understanding today''s lessons now.'

+ 64 - 65
locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc

@@ -67,12 +67,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_with_hunters':
                         *nl
                         'You follow Andrei outside. He gives you a cigarette, and the two of you continue on with your conversation. Suddenly Andrei, looking in your eyes, says:'
                         '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, could you help me out?"'
-                        '"Of course, Andrei, I''ll be glad to." you replied. "What do you need help with?" you asked a bit worried.'
+                        '"Of course, Andrei, I''ll be glad to," you replied. "What do you need help with?" you asked a bit worried.'
                         '"As you know <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have long been divorced for a long time," Andrei began. "But as every normal man, I need to relieve stress sometimes, well, you know what I mean..."'
                         'You look at his frankness with astonishment.'
-                        '"Now <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you could help me out now and then, I would be very graIn the sput of the moment, while the men cheer you on, you remove your topteful," Andrei continued.'
+                        '"Now, <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you could help me out now and then, I would be very grateful," Andrei continued.'
                         'You watch in disbelief, he''s clearly not joking around. You can see on Andrei''s facial expression that he''s being dead serious.'
-                        '"I won''t tell anybody about this, don''t worry, no one will know." he adds quickly. "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you say?'
+                        '"I won''t tell anybody about this, don''t worry, no one will know," he adds quickly. "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you say?"'
+						'After you hear him out, you start seriously considering his offer. It would be nice to help out a friend is nice, but you sense that there''s an ulterior motive.'
 
                         act 'Agree':
                             *clr & cla
@@ -85,10 +86,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_with_hunters':
 
                             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/thinks'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
                             *nl
-                            'After you hear him out, you start seriously considering his offer. It would be nice to help out a friend is nice, but you sense that there''s an ulterior motive.'
-                            '"Well Andrei, after carefully thinking about it, I''ll help you out. How do you want me to help you out?" you ask.'
+                            '"Well, Andrei, after carefully thinking about it, I''ll do it. How do you want me to help you out?" you ask.'
                             '"Damn, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I knew you would," he replied. "Well, I wouldn''t mind a blowjob now and then, that''s good enough for me."'
-                            '"Go back to the hut, and crawl under the table so no one notices." he adds while getting up from the bench.'
+                            '"Go back to the hut, and crawl under the table so no one notices," he adds while getting up from the bench.'
 
                             act 'Go': gs 'swamphouse', 'huntersmokBJ'
                         end
@@ -103,8 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_with_hunters':
 
                                 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/thinks'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
                                 *nl
-                                'After you hear him out, you start seriously considering his offer. It would be nice to help out a friend is nice, but you sense that there''s an ulterior motive.'
-                                '"No Andrei, I''m sorry but I refuse." you answer. "How could you even think that I would be accepting your offer?'
+                                '"No, Andrei. I''m sorry, but I refuse," you answer. "How could you even think that I would accept such an offer?"'
                                 'You got up from the bench and quickly went back to the hut.'
 
                                 act 'Return to the table': gs 'swamphouse', 'meal_table'
@@ -122,8 +121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_with_hunters':
 
                         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andreihanter.jpg"></center>'
                         *nl
-                        'You went outside for a smoke, with Andrei following after you, immediately saying:'
-                        '"Forget the cigarette <<$pcs_nickname>>, go back inside and crawl under the table, I need you so bad right now...'
+                        'You went outside for a smoke, with Andrei following after you, immediately saying, "Forget the cigarette, <<$pcs_nickname>>, go back inside and crawl under the table, I need you so bad right now..."'
 
                         act 'Go': gs 'swamphouse', 'huntersmokBJ'
                         if alko < 6:
@@ -136,7 +134,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_with_hunters':
 
                                 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/thinks'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
                                 *nl
-                                '"You know what Andrei, I''ve changed my mind. I''m more than happy to help a friend in need, but I''m not some whore that only exists for your pleasure."'
+                                '"You know what, Andrei, I''ve changed my mind. I''m happy to help a friend in need, but I''m not some whore that only exists for your pleasure."'
                                 'You got up from the bench and quickly went back to the hut.'
 
                                 act 'Return to the table': gs 'swamphouse', 'meal_table'
@@ -154,8 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_with_hunters':
 
                     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/andreihanter.jpg"></center>'
                     *nl
-                    'You went outside for a smoke, with Andrei following after you, immediately saying:'
-                    '"To hell with the cigarette <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need to relieve some stress."'
+                    'You went outside for a smoke, with Andrei following after you, immediately saying, "To hell with the cigarette, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need to relieve some stress."'
 
                     act 'Go': gs 'swamphouse', 'huntersmokBJ'
                 end
@@ -273,19 +270,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters':
         boy_talk = 1
         
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/fireside_drink.jpg"></center>'
-        '"So, Sveta, anyone special in your life?" Igor asks, slurring noticably'
+        '"So, Sveta, anyone special in your life?" Igor asks, slurring noticably.'
         
         act 'Yes, actually':
             cla 
             act 'Finish chatting': gt 'swamp_yard', 'fireside'
             hunter_sexual_comfort -= 5
             hunter_collective_opinion += 3
-            '"Yeah I have been seeing someone for a while", you answer'
+            '"Yeah I have been seeing someone for a while," you answer'
             if hunter_sexual_comfort < 35 and hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
-                '"Now that''s a lucky guy heh." says Andrei. "Let us know if he dares upset you though, we will show him"'
+                '"Now that''s a lucky guy, heh," says Andrei. "Let us know if he dares upset you though, we will show him."'
             elseif hunter_sexual_comfort > 50:
                 cla
-                '"Bet he is not as fun as us" says Andrei. "Also bet he is not as fun to suck off as us" he says, his eyes stripping you already.'
+                '"Bet he is not as fun as us," says Andrei. "Also, bet he is not as fun to suck off as us," he says, his eyes stripping you already.'
                 if hunter_collective_opinion > 40 or alko < 5: 
                     act 'Maybe another time boys, not feeling it now': gt 'swamp_yard', 'fireside'
                 end
@@ -299,12 +296,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters':
             act 'Finish chatting': gt 'swamp_yard', 'fireside'
             hunter_sexual_comfort += 1
             hunter_collective_opinion += 1
-            '"No, I do not really have someone. At least no one special.", you answer'
+            '"No, I do not really have someone. At least, no one special," you answer.'
             if hunter_sexual_comfort < 25 or hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
-                '"How come?" says Igor. "Those... uh... boys in your class musssss... be stipud" drunkenly slurs Igor'
+				'Igor is fairly drunk and his words are slurred, "Those boysss in your classsss must be pretty shtupid then..."'
             else
                 cla
-                '"Well guess it is better that way. You do not have someone to think about while we are having some fun" says Andrei'
+                '"Well, guess it is better that way. You do not have someone to think about while we are having some fun," says Andrei.'
             end 
         end
     end
@@ -316,33 +313,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters':
 
         !TODO: Add event branch with no panties and short skirt or nude
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/fireside_drink.jpg"></center>'
-        '"So, Sveta, have you ever done it with a boy" Andrei asks, grinning mischievously.'
-        act '...no':
+        '"So, Sveta, have you ever done it with a boy?" Andrei asks, grinning mischievously.'
+        act 'No':
             cla 
             hunter_sexual_comfort -= 5
             hunter_collective_opinion += 1
-            '"Huh...what? No I have not!" you answer, blushing to your ears'
+            '"Huh... what? No, I have not!" you answer, blushing to your ears.'
             if hunter_sexual_comfort < 35 and hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
-                '"Stop embarrassing the little lady" says Sergey. "She is our guest, we have to be polite"'
+                '"Stop embarrassing the little lady," says Sergey. "She is our guest, we have to be polite."'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'swamp_yard', 'fireside'
             elseif hunter_sexual_comfort > 50:
-                '"Wow so you really are a full on tease." says Igor'
-                '"Since you are such an innocent young lady why don''t you give us a little show without clothes blocking your innocence'
+                '"Wow, so you really are a full on tease," says Igor.'
+                '"Since you are such an innocent young lady, why don''t you give us a little show without your clothes blocking your innocence?" adds Andrei.'
                 !TODO: Implement event
                 !if hunter_collective_opinion > 30 and alko < 4: act 'Maybe another time boys, not feeling it now': gt 'swamp_yard'
                 !act 'You get up and start getting into rhythm with some imaginary music': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'dance_show', 'nude'
                 act 'Maybe another time boys, not feeling it now': gt 'swamp_yard', 'start'    
             end    
         end    
-        act 'Uhh... kinda...': 
+        act 'Yes': 
             cla
             hunter_sexual_comfort += 5
-            'You blurt out a small "yeah!" before going all red in the face. Why are you even telling these men that you have had sex? You look down embarrassed.'
+            'You blurt out a small ''yeah'' before going all red in the face. Why are you even telling these men that you have had sex? You look downright embarrassed.'
             if hunter_sexual_comfort < 35 or hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
-                '"Well uhhh... it is normal at your age. You are not a little kid anymore" says Sergey'
+                '"Well, uhhh... it is normal at your age. You are not a little kid anymore," says Sergey'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'swamp_yard', 'fireside'
             elseif hunter_sexual_comfort > 50:
-                '"That means you know how to have fun. Say, how about we play together a bit?" says Andrei before the hunters get up and start approaching you'
+                '"That means you know how to have fun. Say, how about we play together a bit?" says Andrei before the hunters get up and start approaching you.'
                 !TODO: Implement event
                 !if hunter_collective_opinion > 30 or alko < 4:
                      act 'Maybe another time boys, not feeling it now': gt 'swamp_yard'
@@ -377,13 +374,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters':
         *clr & cla
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanters1.jpg"></center>'
         '"Hey, Sveta, can you do us a favor?" says Andrei, seeing you approach them. "We are in desperate need of some entertainment. Say, why don''t you help us with that?"'
-        '"And I mean that as in sucking us all off of course." He adds.'
+        '"And I mean that as in sucking us all off of course," he adds.'
 
         act 'Kneel down to oblige the boys': gt 'hunter_favors', 'nighttime_entertainment'
         if alko < 7:
             act 'Refuse the perverts. You are not their personal fucktoy':
                 *clr & cla
-                '"Do I look like your private whore? Suck each other off if you are that desperate" you say, stomping off to the roar of laughter that erupts in response'
+                '"Do I look like your private whore? Suck each other off, if you are that desperate," you say, stomping off to the roar of laughter that erupts in response.'
 
                 if hunter_collective_opinion > 20:
                     hunter_collective_opinion += 5
@@ -400,13 +397,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters':
         *clr & cla
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanters1.jpg"></center>'
         '"Hey, Sveta, can you do us a favor?" says Andrei, seeing you approach them. "We are in desperate need of some entertainment. Say, why don''t you help us with that?"'
-        '"And I mean that as in sucking us all off of course." He adds.'
+        '"And I mean that as in sucking us all off of course," he adds.'
 
         act 'Kneel down to oblige the boys': gt 'hunter_favors', 'nighttime_entertainment'
         if alko < 7:
             act 'Refuse the perverts. You are not their personal fucktoy':
                 *clr & cla
-                '"Do I look like your private whore? Suck each other off if you are that desperate" you say, stomping off to the roar of laughter in response'
+                '"Do I look like your private whore? Suck each other off, if you are that desperate," you say, stomping off to the roar of laughter in response.'
 
                 if hunter_collective_opinion > 20:
                     hunter_collective_opinion += 5
@@ -428,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join_drinking':
     if hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
         !Comfortable enough for letting her get wasted for drunken bangings
         if hunter_sexual_comfort > 40:
-            '"Sure, Sveta, help yourself for as much as you want. Drink irresponsibly." says Andrei with a wolfish grin.'
+            '"Sure, Sveta, help yourself for as much as you want. Drink irresponsibly," says Andrei with a wolfish grin.'
             act 'Further':
                 gt 'hunter_interactions', 'drink_with_hunters'
             end    
@@ -437,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join_drinking':
             if alko < 3:
                 gt 'hunter_interactions', 'drink_with_hunters'
             else
-                '"I don''t  know, Sveta." says Andrei. "What if you turn out to be a mean drunk? You should perform a dare for us to prove we can safely have you wasted."'
+                '"I don''t  know, Sveta," says Andrei. "What if you turn out to be a mean drunk? You should perform a dare for us to prove we can safely have you wasted."'
                 if alko < 5:
                     act 'Further': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'pick', 'innocent'
                 elseif alko < 6:
@@ -453,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join_drinking':
             if alko < 3:
                 gt 'hunter_interactions', 'drink_with_hunters'
             else
-                '"No Sveta, go away" says Sergei. "It is not good for you to get blackout drunk so young. You have had enough for now"'
+                '"No, Sveta, go away," says Sergei. "It is not good for you to get blackout drunk so young. You have had enough for now."'
                 act 'Further': gt 'swamp_yard', 'fireside'
             end    
         end
@@ -462,7 +459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join_drinking':
         if hunter_sexual_comfort > 30:
             !Friendly enough to let her put a bit of effort for some booze
             if hunter_collective_opinion > 20:
-                '"You see, Sveta" says Andrei. "We had to work hard to make the money for this booze here. You should work for it just like us. Say, how about you provide some entertainment for us?"'
+                '"You see, Sveta," says Andrei. "We had to work hard to make the money for this booze here. You should work for it just like us. Say, how about you provide some entertainment for us?"'
                 if alko < 1:
                     act 'Further': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'pick', 'innocent'
                 elseif alko < 3:
@@ -474,7 +471,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join_drinking':
                 end
             !Sexualy comfortable enough to ask for sexual favors, but not friendly enough for something light
             else
-                '"What does this look like to you, free booze charity?" says Sergei. "You gotta pay up or put out and we are not interested in your money"'    
+                '"What does this look like to you, a free booze charity?" says Sergei. "You gotta pay up or put out and we are not interested in your money."'    
                 if alko < 4:    
                     act 'Further': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'pick', 'softcore'
                 else:
@@ -483,7 +480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join_drinking':
             end        
         !Not comfortable or friendly enough to let her get booze
         else
-            '"Go away Sveta" says Igor. "We do not want you to join us, got better things to do than babysit a drunk teen"'
+            '"Go away, Sveta," says Igor. "We do not want you to join us, got better things to do than babysit a drunk teen."'
             act 'Walk away': gt 'swamp_yard'
             if inhibition < 60: 
                 act 'Ask nicely again. With a pair of visual aids': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'flash_tits' 
@@ -496,7 +493,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'drink_with_hunters':
     *clr & cla
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/fireside_drink.jpg"></center>'
-    'Holding up two bottles, Igor approaches you "Take your pick Sveta: vodka, or beer?"'
+    'Holding up two bottles, Igor approaches you, "Take your pick Sveta: vodka, or beer?"'
     act 'Drink vodka':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
@@ -528,36 +525,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
         act 'Walk away': gt 'swamphouse'
         if $ARGS[2] = 'innocent':
             if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-                '"How about you show us your panties" says Andrei. "Wondering what color your underwear is, just scientific curiosity that''s all"'
+                '"How about you show us your panties," says Andrei. "Wondering what color your underwear is, just scientific curiosity that''s all."'
                 
                 if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
                     act 'Show him your panties, for science': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'flash_thong'
                 else
                     hunter_sexual_comfort += 1
-                    'You tell Andrei that you are not wearing any panties with a blush. "I do not believe you" he says with a smirk. "We need empirical proof. Solid evidence or nothing."'
+                    'You tell Andrei that you are not wearing any panties with a blush. "I do not believe you," he says with a smirk. "We need empirical proof. Solid evidence or nothing."'
                     act 'Show them your unclad ass': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'flash_ass'
                     act 'Let them see your pussy': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'flash_pussy'
                 end
             else
                 hunter_sexual_comfort += 2
-                'After thinking for a moment, Andrei asks "How about you dance by the fire a bit?"'
-                '"Just express how free you are unrestricted by civilization or some other artsy fartsy crap. We will even clap you a tempo!" says Andrei"'
+                'After thinking for a moment, Andrei asks, "How about you dance by the fire a bit?"'
+                '"Just express how free you are, unrestricted by civilization or some other artsy fartsy crap. We will even clap you a tempo!" says Andrei.'
                 act 'Dance naked by the bonfire': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'nude_dance'
             end    
         end
 
         if $ARGS[2] = 'strip':
             if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-                '"I can barely understand you over all those clothes" says Andrei. Noticing your confused stare, Sergei says "He means we want you to take your clothes off"'
+                '"I can barely understand you over all those clothes," says Andrei.'
+				'Noticing your confused stare, Sergei says, "He means we want you to take your clothes off."'
                 act 'Strip off your clothes and toss them in the hut': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'strip_outfit'
             elseif $pantyworntype ! 'none':
                 hunter_sexual_comfort += 1
-                '"Your dare is to get rid of those panties" says Sergei plainly.'
+                '"Your dare is to get rid of those panties," says Sergei plainly.'
                 act 'Take off your panties': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'strip_panties'
             else
                 hunter_sexual_comfort += 2
                 '"Did you ever think about becoming a model?" asks Igor.'
-                'Before you answer he adds "Let''s do an erotic nude pose. Why don''t you go lay prostrate there with your butt towards us? Maybe emphasize your butt a bit? I think it will look really sexy"'
+                'Before you answer he adds, "Let''s do an erotic nude pose. Why don''t you go lay prostrate there with your butt towards us? Maybe emphasize your butt a bit? I think it will look really sexy."'
                 act 'Dare to be an erotic model': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'present_pussy'
             end
         end
@@ -568,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
             else
                 hunter_sexual_comfort += 2
                 if alko < 4:
-                    '"I want to see you play with your titties" says Sergei'
+                    '"I want to see you play with your titties," says Sergei.'
                     act 'Oblige him': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'present_tits'
                 else:
                     '"So, Sveta, I am scientifically curious again. Can you show us how you jill off? Just a little demonstration, and you get your booze."'
@@ -579,7 +577,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
 
         if $ARGS[2] = 'hardcore':
             if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-                '"I want you to suck my dick if you want some booze" says Sergei. "You get two free drinks eh?" quips Andrei behind him'
+                '"I want you to suck my dick if you want some booze," says Sergei.'
+				'"You get two free drinks eh?" quips Andrei behind him'
                 act 'Kneel down in front of Sergei': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'blow_clothed'
             else
                 if $pantyworntype ! 'none': 
@@ -587,11 +586,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
                     gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'pick', 'strip'
                 elseif hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
                     hunter_sexual_comfort += 3
-                    '"I want to fuck you" says Igor heatedly. "I want to taste you, I want to be inside you. You are driving me crazy, Sveta"'
+                    '"I want to fuck you," says Igor heatedly. "I want to taste you, I want to be inside you. You are driving me crazy, Sveta!"'
                     act 'Lay down on the blanket': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'blanket_fuck' 
                 else
                     hunter_sexual_comfort += 2
-                    '"Seeing you prance around naked is getting me real hot and bothered" says Andrei. "I need you to relieve me, I want to fuck that little pussy of yours"'
+                    '"Seeing you prance around naked is getting me real hot and bothered." says Andrei. "I need you to relieve me, I want to fuck that little pussy of yours!"'
                     act 'Approach Andrei on his chair': gt 'hunter_interactions', 'booze_dare', 'chair_fuck'
                 end            
             end        
@@ -607,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
         
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/fireside_night/flash_thong.jpg"></center>'
         'You do not think it is a big deal so you slide your pants down a bit to show off your panty clad ass.'
-        'After a few seconds you cover back up much to your friends'' dismay. They had a good enough look to satisfy their "scientific curiosity".'
+        'After a few seconds you cover back up much to your friends'' dismay. They had a good enough look to satisfy their ''scientific curiosity''.'
 
         gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
         minut -= 1
@@ -626,7 +625,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
 
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/fireside_night/flash_ass.jpg"></center>'
         'You pull up your bottom to expose your uncovered ass. Noticing Andrei trying to move closer probably to cope a feel, you cover back up.'
-        '"You have a cute butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>" comments Igor. You blush slightly at his remark.'
+        '"You have a cute butt, <<$pcs_nickname>>," comments Igor. You blush slightly at his remark.'
         
         gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5
         minut -= 4
@@ -639,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
         *clr & cla
         act 'Ask for a drink again':
             *clr & cla
-            '"That''s a nice pair you got there" says Andrei. "Ask us nicely like that enough times and we might work something out"'
+            '"That''s a nice pair you got there," says Andrei. "Ask us nicely like that enough times and we might work something out."'
             hunter_sexual_comfort += 4
             hunter_collective_opinion -= 2
             act 'Further': gt 'swamp_yard', 'fireside'
@@ -665,8 +664,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
         end
 
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/fireside_night/pantiless_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
-        'You pull up your skirt to show the hunters what is under. Since you were not wearing panties that means they get a direct view of your exposed pussy'
-        'You feel yourself getting a little wet feeling the breeze on your exposed pussy, bared for the hunters'' viewing pleasure'
+        'You pull up your skirt to show the hunters what is under. Since you were not wearing panties that means they get a direct view of your exposed pussy.'
+        'You feel yourself getting a little wet feeling the breeze on your exposed pussy, bared for the hunters'' viewing pleasure.'
 
         gs 'arousal', 'flash', 8
         minut -= 7
@@ -706,7 +705,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
         gs 'arousal', 'end'
         gs 'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/fireside_night/strip_clothes.jpg"></center>'
-        'You start taking off your clothes at the hunters'' request. "Yes" says Andrei, "Take it all off."'
+        'You start taking off your clothes at the hunters'' request. "Yes," says Andrei. "Take it all off."'
         if $pantyworntype = 'none':
             'You are now completely naked in front of the hunters'
         else    
@@ -762,7 +761,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
         gs 'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/fireside_night/pussy_spread.jpg"></center>'
         'Before you even start thinking, your hands start gliding through your now moist folds, spreading them apart to show off the pinkness inside.'
-        'You realize the hunters can tell exactly how turned on you are getting by this, the gleaming pinkness inside completely bared for them,'
+        'You realize the hunters can tell exactly how turned on you are getting by this, the gleaming pinkness inside completely bared for them.'
         
     end
 
@@ -780,7 +779,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'booze_dare':
         gs 'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/hunter/fireside_night/exhibition_tits_2.jpg"></center>'
         'You lightly grab one of your tits, gently massaging it. Twirling around and prodding with your finger, you slowly make your way to your nipple.'
-        'Then you pull and twist it until it becomes diamond hard, starting to moan lightly at the touch. You can tell Sergei''s very pleased with the show'
+        'Then you pull and twist it until it becomes diamond hard, starting to moan lightly at the touch. You can tell Sergei''s very pleased with the show.'
     end
 
     if $ARGS[1] = 'masturbate_1':
@@ -1154,7 +1153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_bet':
     if $ARGS[1] = 'win':
         cla & *clr
         !TODO: Make this part have mroe stuff
-        '"Hah!" you exclaim. "I win!", before looking back.'
+        '"Hah!" you exclaim. "I win!" before looking back.'
         'Andrei is nowhere to be seen. That bastard ran away!'
         
         hunter_collective_opinion += 15
@@ -1164,7 +1163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shooting_bet':
     if $ARGS[1] = 'lose':
         cla & *clr
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/AndreiHanter.jpg"></center>'
-        '"Well seems like that did not work out as expected. Now, give me a moment while I think" says Andrei.'
+        '"Well seems like that did not work out as expected. Now, give me a moment while I think," says Andrei.'
         'Just a second after you start thinking about what perverted scheme he can come up with, "Oh I know!" he says.'
 
         !lost_bet_temprand = rand(1,4)
@@ -1699,7 +1698,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'striptease':
                     *clr & cla
                     minut += 10
                     pcs_horny += rand(5,10)
-                    inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+                    inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
                     gs 'stat'
                     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance1.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
                     *nl
@@ -1709,7 +1708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'striptease':
                         *clr & cla
                         minut += 10
                         pcs_horny += rand(5,10)
-                        inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+                        inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
                         gs 'stat'
                         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance2.'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
                         *nl
@@ -1719,7 +1718,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'striptease':
                             *clr & cla
                             minut += 10
                             pcs_horny += rand(5,10)
-                            inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+                            inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
                             gs 'stat'
                             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/dance3.jpg"></center>'
                             *nl

+ 6 - 6
locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	npc_rel['A14'] += 10
 	lernHome = 0
 	lern += rand(2, 4)
-	intel_exp += rand(0, 1) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
+	intel_exp += rand(1,2) + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
 	katjaLernTimes += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big14.jpg"></center>'
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 				'Katja invites you to take a walk in the park.'
 
 			elseif KatjaSlut > 150:
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go to the park, and try and find some boys.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go to the park, and try and find some boys."'
 			end
 
 			act 'Go to the park':
@@ -513,16 +513,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'moron':
 		*clr
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/frenchkiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'Looking at Ivan, then for this idiot, it seems that Ivan didn''t notice, you sighed and said to the idoit. "Is that really necessary? She is my best friend and we want kiss, you just seem jealous.'
+		'Looking at Ivan, then for this idiot, it seems that Ivan didn''t notice, you sighed and said to the idoit. "Is that really necessary? She is my best friend and we want kiss, you just seem jealous."'
 		'"Lesbians, lesbians." He continued to scream like a freak, so much that people began to gather around to find out, what''s happening. Ivan stepped over next to you and put his hand on your shoulder, giving the idiot a glare as well. Boosted by Ivan''s support you continued. "We like boys, just not assholes like you!" with those words, you stood on tiptoe, clasping and Ivan''s head in his hands and gave him a deep long passionate kiss, with lots of tongue.'
 		act 'Kiss again':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			if flag_KissEV = 0: flag_KissEV = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/prohorov_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"And I can kiss all the boys." you said, under the joyous hubbub of guys gathering near you. You began to kiss all the boys in succession, carefully avoiding the that called you a lesbian.'
-			'Seeing this he said offended. "The redhead doesn''t like guys, I bet." hoping Katja will kiss him to prove him wrong.'
-			'But Katja recovered and said. "Wrong again loser.", and began to repeat your route, of kissing the boys.'
+			'"And I can kiss all the boys." you said, under the joyous hubbub of guys gathering near you. You began to kiss all the boys in succession, carefully avoiding the one that called you a lesbian.'
+			'Offended, the lone boy turned to Katja. "The redhead doesn''t like guys, I bet," he smugly stated, hoping the girl would prove him wrong.'
+			'But Katja recovered and said, "Wrong again, loser!" Katja begins kissing the other boys.'
 			if $loc = 'gdkin':
 				'After kissing the last boy, you turn back and make sure Katja kisses all of them too. You now realise the guys are hoping for more and quickly drag Katja away before you accidentally start an orgy.'
 				act 'Return to dance': gt 'gdkin'

+ 2 - 2
locations/kruchess.qsrc

@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ else
 
 		act 'Spend an hour practicing with assistance from the coach':
 			*clr & cla
-			chess_exp += rand(0,1)
-			intel_exp += rand(0,1)
+			chess_exp += rand(1,2)
+			intel_exp += rand(1,2)
 			minut += 60
 			gs 'stat'
 

+ 11 - 8
locations/kseniyaQW.qsrc

@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event3_1':
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get started':
 		*clr & cla
-		mdlng_exp += rand(0,2)
+		mdlng_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/kseniya/strip4.jpg"></center>'
 		'You hand her the bag and strike a pose, Kseniya laughs.'
 		'"More natural! That ugly building is showing through, try the path." She points to the track by the clearing.'
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event3_1':
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Pose on the track':
 			*clr & cla
-			mdlng_exp += rand(0,2)
+			mdlng_exp += rand(1,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/kseniya/strip5.jpg"></center>'
 			'You walk over to the path, lift you arms over your head and try to look more natural.'
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event3_1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get behind the tree':
 				*clr & cla
-				mdlng_exp += rand(0,2)
+				mdlng_exp += rand(1,3)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/kseniya/strip6.jpg"></center>'
 				'A man walks past with his dog, he doesn''t seem to notice or care and you quickly relax.'
 				'He is still behind you as you start posing again, You''re really getting in to this and can''t stop smiling.'
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event3_1':
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'One more pose':
 					*clr & cla
-					mdlng_exp += rand(0,2)
+					mdlng_exp += rand(1,3)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/kseniya/strip7.jpg"></center>'
 					'Still smiling you find a large tree stump and sit down on it. You realise you are exposing yourself quite in this position.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event3_1':
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Finish':
 						*clr & cla
-						mdlng_exp += rand(0,2)
+						mdlng_exp += rand(1,3)
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/kseniya/strip8.jpg"></center>'
 						'You tell Kseniya you are done and want your clothes back.'
 						'She suddenly looks very stern and says, "If you want your clothes you are going to have to spread those legs."'
@@ -205,12 +205,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event3_1':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/kseniya/strip9.jpg"></center>'
 							'You tell Kseniya you are done and want your clothes back.'
-							'"Over there. Sit down hand between your legs, that''s the one"'
+							'"Over there. Sit down hand between your legs, that''s the one."'
 							'As you try and pose you realise your pussy is soaking wet and your nervousness about exposing yourself is completely overcome.'
 							'Kseniya hands you back your clothes and gives you a business card, it is for a shop in Old Town. How odd.'
-							'"It was fun and I''m glad I found you. I have others to find though so good bye." Kseniya blows you a kiss and leaves. By the time you are dressed she is long gone.'
+							'"It was fun and I''m glad I found you. I have others to find though so goodbye," Kseniya blows you a kiss and leaves. By the time you are dressed she is long gone.'
 							*nl
-							'You look at the card again "Expression of You" just off Pushkin High Street. Open Mon-Sat, 08:00 - 18:00'
+							'You look at the card again:'
+							'<b>Expression of You</b>'
+							'<i>Pushkin High Street</i>'
+							'<i>Open Mon-Sat, 08:00 - 18:00</i>'
 							gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10, 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							minut -= 5

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+ 196 - 195
locations/lesbimistress.qsrc


+ 6 - 6
locations/park.qsrc

@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				parkrand = rand(0, 10)
 
 				if parkrand >= 8:
-					'A shade steps out of the shadow from a tree and runs up to you. Before you can react, he hits you and drags you into the bushes. "Relax and enjoy this", he says.'
+					'A shade steps out of the shadow from a tree and runs up to you. Before you can react, he hits you and drags you into the bushes. "Relax and enjoy this," he says.'
 					gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Rapist', rand(18,40)
 					gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 					act 'Fight':
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'luna':
 				money -= 50
 
 				if pcs_sprt < 30:sprt_exp += 1
-				if pcs_sprt >= 30:sprt_exp += rand(0, 1)
+				if pcs_sprt >= 30:sprt_exp += rand(1,2)
 
 				pcs_willpwr += 10
 				pcs_mood += 10
@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape1':
 	SUB += 3
 	money = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/rape.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly, you are hit on the head. You wake up sometime later in a bush. Somehow you''re not able to move your arms, they must be tied up. As you look down at yourself, you realize that you''re not wearing anything and before you can even react some dude is ramming his dick into your cunt. "Shit", you think yourself, "I''m being raped."'
+	'Suddenly, you are hit on the head. You wake up sometime later in a bush. Somehow you''re not able to move your arms, they must be tied up. As you look down at yourself, you realize that you''re not wearing anything and before you can even react some dude is ramming his dick into your cunt. "Shit," you think to yourself. "I''m being raped!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 5, 'vaginal', 'rape'
 
 	act 'Try to resist':
@@ -742,7 +742,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape1':
 		stat['anal'] += 1
 		SUB += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/rapean.jpg"></center>'
-		'It doesn''t take long for the rapist to realize you''re not resisting. "Good girl!", he says to you. He pushes you onto your knees, seems he intends to take you doggy-style. He spreads your buttocks and pushes his cock into your ass. You cry out in pain, but he holds your mouth shut and doesn''t stop fucking your asshole.'
+		'It doesn''t take long for the rapist to realize you''re not resisting. "Good girl!" he says to you. He pushes you onto your knees, seems he intends to take you doggy-style. He spreads your buttocks and pushes his cock into your ass. You cry out in pain, but he holds your mouth shut and doesn''t stop fucking your asshole.'
 		gs 'arousal', 15, 'anal', 'rape'
 
 		act 'Go on':
@@ -754,9 +754,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape1':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			SUB += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/cum.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Give me a blowjob and you''ll get your reward for not resisting, girl.", he tells you. You nod obidiently and move on your knees and begin to give him head.'
+			'"Give me a blowjob and you''ll get your reward for not resisting, girl," he tells you. You nod obidiently and move on your knees and begin to give him head.'
 			gs 'arousal', 15, 'bj', 'rape'
-			'It doesn''t take long for him to groan out in pleasure, "You better swallow it all, slut!" Shortly after that you can taste his hot cum inside your mouth and you swallow every drip of it, somehow enjoying the taste. Then he stand up, buttons up his pants and takes your money. While you were still liking your fingers clean from any drips of cum, he smiles and says to you, "Have a nice day slut."'
+			'It doesn''t take long for him to groan out in pleasure, "You better swallow it all, slut!" Shortly after that you can taste his hot cum inside your mouth and you swallow every drip of it, somehow enjoying the taste. Then he stand up, buttons up his pants and takes your money. While you were still licking your fingers clean from any drips of cum, he smiles and says to you, "Have a nice day slut."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 
 			act 'Stand up and leave':gt 'park', 'start'

+ 5 - 5
locations/party_girls.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 	i = rand(1,18)
 	if i = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I am dating a divorced man. He is very kinky and I''m afraid I can not keep up with it.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I am dating a divorced man. He is very kinky and I''m afraid I can not keep up with it."'
 	elseif i = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I have a very childish voice. I sound like a Japanese schoolgirl. The guy I''m dating says he likes it, but I''m still insecure about it."'
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I like how men go wild, when I touch them through their shorts. It really excites me and I do it as often as I can."'
 	elseif i = 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "A year and a half ago, an attractive neighbor moved in. I really want to fuck him and constantly try to seduce him with my outfits, but we haven''t had sex yet. I''m afraid he will move out soon.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "A year and a half ago, an attractive neighbor moved in. I really want to fuck him and constantly try to seduce him with my outfits, but we haven''t had sex yet. I''m afraid he will move out soon."'
 	elseif i = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "It really infuriates me, when I feel close to orgasm and then the guy wants to change position. It happens to me all the time."'
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bra':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
-	inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_girls_party_gost_5_' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
 	'Yielding to the general madness, you pull your top off exposing your bra to the frantic shouts of the boys. In this state your dancing clearly will look much more spectacular.'
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bra':
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc,$metka
 	act 'Dance topless':
 		cls
-		inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_girls_party_gost_6_' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bra':
 		act 'Move away':gt $loc,$metka
 		if Rex_Love = 1: act 'Drag him to the restroom':gt 'party_girls', 'rex'
 		act 'Undress':
-			inhib_exp += rand(0,2)
+			inhib_exp += rand(1,4)
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/pavtrainhall_events.qsrc

@@ -666,7 +666,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trinkets':
 	tovpay = tovarand * 300
 	money += tovpay
 	tovarL -= tovarand
-	sprt_exp += rand(0, 1)
+	sprt_exp += rand(1,2)
 	TorgVokzalTimes += 1
 	pcs_dom += 1
 	gs 'stat'

+ 84 - 84
locations/postdeliveries.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	'You enter a posh apartment building, and a grey-haired man comes downstairs once you tell him you have a package for him over the intercom.'
 	'"Excellent, right in time for tonight! Thank you!" he smiles. You have him sign as per usual, and were just about to walk away when you suddenly feel his hand on your shoulder.'
 	'"Uhh, excuse me miss... could I ask you for a favour?" he asks. You can tell he''s nervous.'
-	'When you don''t tell him off immediately, he continues: "You see... it''s for my wife. Our love life has been rather stale, and I''m hoping to breathe some new life into our relationship with this. It''s an anniversary gift."'
+	'When you don''t tell him off immediately, he continues, "You see... it''s for my wife. Our love life has been rather stale, and I''m hoping to breathe some new life into our relationship with this. It''s an anniversary gift."'
 	'He pats his hand on the parcel. "I''m not 100% sure if I ordered the right size, though! You look like you''re roughly her size. Would yo- would you mind putting it on real quick?" he stutters nervously. "She''d kill me if I got it wrong!"'
 	''
 	act 'Refuse and continue your round':
@@ -185,10 +185,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		cla
 		posteventQW1 = 1
 		'"I don''t know... maybe. Depends. What did you buy your wife?" you ask him.'
-		'Glad to hear you didn''t shoot down the idea right away, he shrugs: "It''s lingerie. A fancy gown, of sorts. I don''t know, I think she''d like it."'
-		'When he sees your hesitant look, he adds: "You can change in the bathroom, I wouldn''t see anything inappropriate! The gown will cover you up! Please, I''m a married man! I only want to make my wife happy!"'
+		'Glad to hear you didn''t shoot down the idea right away, he shrugs, "It''s lingerie. A fancy gown, of sorts. I don''t know, I think she''d like it."'
+		'When he sees your hesitant look, he adds, "You can change in the bathroom, I wouldn''t see anything inappropriate! The gown will cover you up! Please, I''m a married man! I only want to make my wife happy!"'
 		''
-		'After a few seconds of palpable silence, he pleads: "Please? I just need to see how it fits. I really need this to go well... my marriage might depend on it! I''m begging you!"'
+		'After a few seconds of palpable silence, he pleads, "Please? I just need to see how it fits. I really need this to go well... my marriage might depend on it! I''m begging you!"'
 		''
 		act 'Refuse':
 			cla
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			cla
 			posteventQW1 = 2
 			'"That... sounds interesting, but I really don''t have time," you apologize to the man. "I still have some mail to deliver."'
-			'He ponders for a moment, and suggests: "How about you come back after you finish your round? My wife won''t be home for a few more hours. Please?"'
+			'He ponders for a moment, and suggests, "How about you come back after you finish your round? My wife won''t be home for a few more hours. Please?"'
 			'"I''ll think about it. I really have to go now! Maybe see you later!" you say, and continue your round.'
 			act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 		end
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		act 'Refuse and ask him to sign':
 			cla
 			'"Uhh, no. I just need you to sign here please?" you ask him, handing him the clipboard.'
-			'Arsen signs where you want him to, looking at you with some regret. He says: "Are you sure? I bet Jenya could show you a trick or two! You two really seem to hit it off..."'
+			'Arsen signs where you want him to, looking at you with some regret. He says, "Are you sure? I bet Jenya could show you a trick or two! You two really seem to hit it off..."'
 			'His girlfriend nods eagerly and gives you a warm smile.'
 			'"I''m sure she could!" you laugh. "But I have a job to do."'
 			'Jenya kisses her boyfriend passionately, as you turn your back to them and head for the door. "Don''t worry, babe. I''ll take care of you!" she tells him. "Maksim, you ready?"'
@@ -241,10 +241,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		act 'Ask if they can wait until you finish your round':
 			cla
 			posteventQW2 = 2
-			'You point at your bag apologetically and say: "I want to but I can''t right now, I still have some deliveries to do! Maybe I can come back when I''m done with my round, though?"'
-			'The girl looks at Arsen and smiles: "What do you think, babe? I can just give you a quick BJ now, and we''ll play more when she''s back? Please? I really like her!"'
-			'Arsen looks you up and down again. He hates the idea of having to wait, but definitely wants you to join. He sits back down in his beanbag chair and shrugs: "I guess," while he grabs the water pipe again. "Start sucking then."'
-			'"Just a second, babe!" she tells him, as she walks you to the door and gives you a wicked grin: "This is gonna be great! I can''t wait to get my hands on you... see you soon!"'
+			'You point at your bag apologetically and say, "I want to but I can''t right now, I still have some deliveries to do! Maybe I can come back when I''m done with my round, though?"'
+			'The girl looks at Arsen and smiles, "What do you think, babe? I can just give you a quick BJ now, and we''ll play more when she''s back? Please? I really like her!"'
+			'Arsen looks you up and down again. He hates the idea of having to wait, but definitely wants you to join. He sits back down in his beanbag chair and shrugs, "I guess," while he grabs the water pipe again. "Start sucking then."'
+			'"Just a second, babe!" she tells him, as she walks you to the door and gives you a wicked grin, "This is gonna be great! I can''t wait to get my hands on you... see you soon!"'
 			'She gives you a quick kiss on the lips and closes the door.'
 
 			act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
@@ -261,9 +261,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	'"What!?" a man shouts in an annoyed voice, when you ring the door bell to an apartment in a well-off neighbourhood. When the door opens, you''re looking at a man in his 30s. He looks like a businessman.'
 	'"Yea? What do you want?" he shrugs. He doesn''t even try to hide that he''s ogling your body from top to bottom, not paying much attention to what you''re saying.'
 	'"I have a parcel for you, sir!" you tell him. "Sign here please? Sir?"'
-	'The man looks at the parcel and sighs: "I ordered that months ago! You guys are terrible..."'
-	'When you try to tell him that''s not your fault, he cuts you off: "Look, I''m not even fucking that girl any more! Her parents moved away and took her with them when they found out about me. So desperate to protect their girl..."'
-	'He laughs, and then looks at you closely. A creepy grin appears on his face and he says: "Say... let me ask you something, girl. Do you like clothes?"'
+	'The man looks at the parcel and sighs, "I ordered that months ago! You guys are terrible..."'
+	'When you try to tell him that''s not your fault, he cuts you off, "Look, I''m not even fucking that girl any more! Her parents moved away and took her with them when they found out about me. So desperate to protect their girl..."'
+	'He laughs, and then looks at you closely. A creepy grin appears on his face and he says, "Say... let me ask you something, girl. Do you like clothes?"'
 	'"Are you kidding? Of course I like clothes!" you shrug. "What girl doesn''t?"'
 	'"Then I have a proposition for you! Come in for a moment," he grins. He steps aside and beckons you to enter his apartment.'
 	''
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		cla
 		posteventQW3 = 1
 		'"Uhh... why?" you ask him. "What do you want?"'
-		'He casts a quick look down to the street to make sure no one''s listening in, and says: "You say you love clothes? I love cute little girls like you. You get whatever''s in this box if you suck my dick. I can guarantee you: you''ll want what''s in this box. And I want that mouth on my cock. Win-win. So... interested?"'
+		'He casts a quick look down to the street to make sure no one''s listening in, and says, "You say you love clothes? I love cute little girls like you. You get whatever''s in this box if you suck my dick. I can guarantee you: you''ll want what''s in this box. And I want that mouth on my cock. Win-win. So... interested?"'
 		''
 		act 'Ask if you come back after your shift':
 			cla
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 			act 'Say you probably won''t be coming':
 				cla
 				'"I don''t know... I don''t think I''ll be coming, sir. I just need you to sign here so I can be on my way," you tell him.'
-				'The man smirks at you, but signs where you ask him to and pulls the box out of your hands: "We''ll see. That''s what you girls all say, until you get sick of the crappily paid jobs you''re doing now and realize how much more comfortable your lives can be. Come find me, if you change your mind. And if you''re brave enough."'
+				'The man smirks at you, but signs where you ask him to and pulls the box out of your hands, "We''ll see. That''s what you girls all say, until you get sick of the crappily paid jobs you''re doing now and realize how much more comfortable your lives can be. Come find me, if you change your mind. And if you''re brave enough."'
 				'He winks at you, and then slams the door shut before you can say anything more.'
 				act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 			end
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		act 'Tell him you''re not interested':
 			cla
 			'"I''m not that kind of girl, sir. I just need you to sign here so I can be on my way," you tell him.'
-			'The man smirks, but signs where you ask him to: "Suit yourself."'
+			'The man smirks, but signs where you ask him to, "Suit yourself."'
 			'He slams the door shut before you can even say anything more.'
 			act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 		end
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	act 'Just get his signature and leave':
 		cla
 		'This guy gives you the creeps! "Uhhh... I don''t think so, sir. I just need you to sign here so I can be on my way," you tell him.'
-		'The man smirks, but signs where you ask him to: "You''d rather be poor, huh? Suit yourself."'
+		'The man smirks, but signs where you ask him to, "You''d rather be poor, huh? Suit yourself."'
 		'He slams the door shut before you can even say anything more.'
 		act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 	end
@@ -317,16 +317,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent4-1.jpg"></center>'
 	'A rather sleazy looking man opens the door when you ring the bell, wearing nothing but a robe.'
-	'He grins at you and says: "I haven''t seen you on the job before..."'
-	'Before you can say anything, he opens his robe and shows you his semi-erect cock: "If you know what''s good for you, I want to feel those hands of yours on my cock within the next ten seconds... just like your colleagues have before you. Unless you want the postmaster to receive complaints about you opening and damaging mail during your round?"'
-	'"But your mail is fine! That''s not fair!" you exclaim, to which the man replies: "Oh, really? Does this look fine to you!?"'
+	'He grins at you and says, "I haven''t seen you on the job before..."'
+	'Before you can say anything, he opens his robe and shows you his semi-erect cock, "If you know what''s good for you, I want to feel those hands of yours on my cock within the next ten seconds... just like your colleagues have before you. Unless you want the postmaster to receive complaints about you opening and damaging mail during your round?"'
+	'"But your mail is fine! That''s not fair!" you exclaim, to which the man replies, "Oh, really? Does this look fine to you!?"'
 	'He makes a big tear in the envelope, and balls his fist to crumple it. "Because it sure as hell doesn''t look fine to me!"'
 	if pcs_dom > 15:
 		act 'Say you don''t care if he reports you':
 			cla
 			''
-			'"It was fine when I got here! Look... sign, don''t sign, I don''t care. The postmaster will believe my word over yours, when he hears about this!" you tell him, and you see the man''s confidence waver a little. You add: "If <b>you</b> know what''s good for you, you sign before this gets out of hand."'
-			'The man regains his posture quickly and scoffs: "We''ll see who he believes! I''m not signing shit, unless you do what I want. And I happen to know the postmaster. If there''s one thing he hates, it''s complaints... trust me. What''s it gonna be, girl?"'
+			'"It was fine when I got here! Look... sign, don''t sign, I don''t care. The postmaster will believe my word over yours, when he hears about this!" you tell him, and you see the man''s confidence waver a little. You add, "If <b>you</b> know what''s good for you, you sign before this gets out of hand."'
+			'The man regains his posture quickly and scoffs, "We''ll see who he believes! I''m not signing shit, unless you do what I want. And I happen to know the postmaster. If there''s one thing he hates, it''s complaints... trust me. What''s it gonna be, girl?"'
 			'You take another good look at him, but you can''t tell whether the man is bluffing or not. From your dealings with the postmaster so far, you''re not quite sure who he''d believe either. Still, he always seemed like a reasonable man. Surely he''d believe you?'
 			''
 			act 'Back down and agree to jerk him off': gt 'postevents', '4'
@@ -369,8 +369,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postevent5-1.jpg"></center>'
 	'When you just finished your round and are on your way back to the post office, you encounter a small group of guys chatting outside a hostel. Probably tourists.'
-	'When you walk past them, one of them greets you: "Excuse me? Hi! We''re not from here, we''re just visiting for the weekend. Would you like to sit down and hang out with us for a while? You look like you could use a break!"'
-	'Another guy pitches in: "We were hoping you could point us to some interesting things to do around here? We got rooms for the whole weekend, but besides the palace this place seems pretty boring!"'
+	'When you walk past them, one of them greets you, "Excuse me? Hi! We''re not from here, we''re just visiting for the weekend. Would you like to sit down and hang out with us for a while? You look like you could use a break!"'
+	'Another guy pitches in, "We were hoping you could point us to some interesting things to do around here? We got rooms for the whole weekend, but besides the palace this place seems pretty boring!"'
 	if postamountrand = 0: 'You cast a quick glance at your phone and realize you have some time to spare.'
 	if postamountrand = 1: 'You cast a quick glance at your phone and realize you''d roughly be back at the post office by 15:00. You can''t stick around for too long though...'
 	if postamountrand = 2: 'You cast a quick glance at your phone and realize you''re already behind schedule. You should probably keep going...'
@@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postevent5-2.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Uhh yea, I can spare a few minutes!" you say, and the guys give you a friendly smile and escort you into the building.'
 		'They lead you to their room, and they all sit down on their bunk beds. You get to know the guys a little, they''re tourists from Novgorod who were told there''s a lot to do in Pavlovsk.'
-		'One of the guys leaves the room for a moment and comes back with a tray of beers. He offers you one too: "I know you have to get back to work soon, but... one for the road?"'
+		'One of the guys leaves the room for a moment and comes back with a tray of beers. He offers you one too, "I know you have to get back to work soon, but... one for the road?"'
 		''
 		act 'Not while you''re working!':
 			cla
@@ -391,9 +391,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 			'"I really shouldn''t. Thanks for the offer, though!" you tell the guy, declining the beer.'
 			'The guys chat with you for a few minutes more, and you tell them about things they can do in Pavlovsk during their stay. They don''t seem particularly interested in any of your suggestions, though.'
 			'Then, one of them very subtly shakes his head ''no'' to the others. You were probably not supposed to see that...'
-			'One of the others interrupts you and says: "Well, it''s been nice getting to know you, but we shouldn''t keep you from your work any longer. Are you done any time soon? Perhaps you could guide us around town later? We''d love to hang out with you some more!"'
+			'One of the others interrupts you and says, "Well, it''s been nice getting to know you, but we shouldn''t keep you from your work any longer. Are you done any time soon? Perhaps you could guide us around town later? We''d love to hang out with you some more!"'
 			'Taking this as your cue to leave, you pick up your bag and think for a second. Do you?'
-			'Deciding to just leave it in the middle for now, you simply say: "I''ll think about it. Bye guys!" and leave the hostel.'
+			'Deciding to just leave it in the middle for now, you simply say, "I''ll think about it. Bye guys!" and leave the hostel.'
 			act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 		end
 	end
@@ -504,14 +504,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 	if temper > 0: '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/angrydog.jpg"></center>'
 	if temper <= 0: '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/angrydogw.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you arrive at your next address, you see a large dog baring its teeth as soon as you reach for the gate. There''s no way you''re opening that!'
-	'You cast a quick glance at your signature sheet and realize: "I can''t just ignore this house..."'
+	'You cast a quick glance at your signature sheet and realize, "I can''t just ignore this house..."'
 	'Wait, did you just see someone moving indoors?'
 	if pcs_intel > 60:
 		act 'Count out the houses and go around the back':
 			cla
 			minut += 2
 			'You quickly spot that the front and back yards aren''t connected, and try to go around the back after counting out which house you need to be at.'
-			'The home owner is a bit startled to see you suddenly entering her back yard, but understands: "Oh don''t worry about Boomer! I know he looks scary, but he just wants to play!"'
+			'The home owner is a bit startled to see you suddenly entering her back yard, but understands, "Oh don''t worry about Boomer! I know he looks scary, but he just wants to play!"'
 			'She signs for her mail so you can continue your round. You can still hear the dog barking angrily when you leave the street... no matter what that lady says, there''s no way you would enter that yard!'
 			
 			act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
@@ -537,7 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/shops.jpg"></center>'
 	'You come up to a block of rather shoddy looking shops, where you have to deliver a small package. For some reason the numbers on the posters don''t seem to align with the address numbers!'
 	'Despite your best efforts to try and find the correct address, finding the place is a struggle. The store owners aren''t very helpful either, just shrugging and grunting when they realize you''re not here to buy something from their shop.'
-	'At long last, you find a staircase leading upwards, to a shabby office. The man looks at you as if he doesn''t have time, and mutters: "You''re late, I needed this an hour ago! Leave now so I can work!"'
+	'At long last, you find a staircase leading upwards, to a shabby office. The man looks at you as if he doesn''t have time, and mutters, "You''re late, I needed this an hour ago! Leave now so I can work!"'
 	'After some convincing he finally signs so you can leave, but only after complaining about how late you are once more. What a jerk...'
 
 	act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big16.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	'Your next address is a familiar one: it''s Natasha Belova''s, one of your classmates. It looks like you have bad news for her, it''s not one but two final notices! Damn, how much debt is this girl in!?'
-	'Natasha''s face saddens when she sees the envelopes in your hand as she opens the door: "Oh no, not again... hi <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+	'Natasha''s face saddens when she sees the envelopes in your hand as she opens the door, "Oh no, not again... hi <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 	'Some tears are starting to well in her eyes as she signs your sheet, so you can continue your round. She weakly waves you goodbye, feeling rather ashamed you see her in this predicament.'
 	''
 	*nl
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 		act 'Remind her she still owes you money too':
 			cla
 			'"I hope this doesn''t mean you ignore your debt to me?" you ask her sternly.'
-			'She bites her lip and shakes her head: "I... I won''t, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll find a way to repay you."'
+			'She bites her lip and shakes her head, "I... I won''t, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll find a way to repay you."'
 			'"Good," you give her a satisfied nod, and leave her apartment.'
 			if natsub > 0: 'You smile evilly as you walk down the stairs, replaying her words over and over in your mind. "I''ll find a way to repay you!" she said... you can think of several ways! Whether she''ll like them is a different matter...'
 			act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '14':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'"I forgot my phone!" you shrug apologetically. "I was in the area anyway, and I thought I''d come pick it up quickly."'
 		'"Ah I see... you''re such a scatterbrain sometimes!" she smiles, and returns to the kitchen.'
-		'Your stepfather gives you a grateful nod as he signs your sheet, and whispers: "Phew! Thanks, <<$pcs_nickname>>... I didn''t want your mother to find out I bought her something! I''m waiting for the right time to give it to her, you see?"'
+		'Your stepfather gives you a grateful nod as he signs your sheet, and whispers, "Phew! Thanks, <<$pcs_nickname>>... I didn''t want your mother to find out I bought her something! I''m waiting for the right time to give it to her, you see?"'
 		'You give him a conspiratory nod and turn around, you still have more mail to deliver! As you walk down the stairs, you can''t help but wonder what he bought her.'
 		act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 	end
@@ -643,10 +643,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 	'A rather scary looking guy opens the door at your next address, an apartment on the fourth floor of a building. He has a scar across his eye, and gives you a distrusting look.'
 	'"I have a package for Mr. Y-" you begin, but he interrupts you.'
 	'"Did anyone follow you?" he asks you sharply. "Well?"'
-	'When you say you don''t think so, he glances down the hallway and asks you again: "Are you sure? Think hard!"'
+	'When you say you don''t think so, he glances down the hallway and asks you again, "Are you sure? Think hard!"'
 	'He pulls the package out of your hands when you take too long to answer and opens it right away. The contents bring a smile to his face, though you can''t see what''s in it.'
-	'He says threateningly: "You didn''t see me! If anyone asks, you saw nothing, heard nothing and met no one! Understood?"'
-	'When you nod nervously, he grunts: "Good. Now get lost."'
+	'He says threateningly, "You didn''t see me! If anyone asks, you saw nothing, heard nothing and met no one! Understood?"'
+	'When you nod nervously, he grunts, "Good. Now get lost."'
 	'When he turns around, you can see the clear outline of a gun in his jacket. Yikes!'
 	'You definitely don''t want to bother him again, so you quickly forge a signature on your sheet and walk down the stairs again. There''s no way you''ll get complaints about this package... but you can''t help but wonder why he was so paranoid. And rather: what you just brought him!'
 
@@ -660,10 +660,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postclinic.jpg"></center>'
-	'The next address is the Pavlovsk clinic. The girl at the reception looks at you for a moment and says: "Oh, mail. That''s for the doctor. He''s in his office, third door on the right. Could you go bring it to him? I''m kinda busy right now."'
+	'The next address is the Pavlovsk clinic. The girl at the reception looks at you for a moment and says, "Oh, mail. That''s for the doctor. He''s in his office, third door on the right. Could you go bring it to him? I''m kinda busy right now."'
 	'You shrug and walk down the hallway, opening the door where she said he''d be. You freeze...'
 	'In front of you are two dead people, on metal tables. One male, one female. Both naked. And very much dead. This must be some sort of mistake! They can''t possibly expect you to come in here!'
-	'As you are backing out of the room, the reception girl comes racing down the hall, out of breath: "I meant the second door on the right! The second door! I''m so sorry!"'
+	'As you are backing out of the room, the reception girl comes racing down the hall, out of breath, "I meant the second door on the right! The second door! I''m so sorry!"'
 	'"Uhh, t-that''s okay..." you mutter, still rather rattled.'
 	act 'Let the girl take you to the doctor''s office':
 		cla
@@ -688,7 +688,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 	'Just when you were about to thank him, you''re a bit taken aback by what you see when you enter his apartment: a nearly naked girl lies on the couch, with her wrists and ankles all cuffed together!'
 	'"Don''t mind her," the guy grins smugly. "The silly cunt couldn''t keep her mouth shut, and now she''s being punished. Isn''t that right, honey?"'
 	'The girl doesn''t make a sound, but just looks at you with her big blue eyes. You can tell that she''s deeply embarrassed to be seen like this, but doesn''t seem to be in distress. Apparently this is normal to her?'
-	'"The guys are on their way, you just lie there and be pretty for a while!" he smirks. Then he turns back to you and says: "I swear, sometimes I think she does it on purpose! Horny little bitch... anyway, here''s a pen. You can keep that. Have a nice day, miss."'
+	'"The guys are on their way, you just lie there and be pretty for a while!" he smirks. Then he turns back to you and says, "I swear, sometimes I think she does it on purpose! Horny little bitch... anyway, here''s a pen. You can keep that. Have a nice day, miss."'
 	'He ushers you out the door, and you quickly cast one more glance at the girl on your way out. You wonder what he has in store for her...'
 
 	act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
@@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 	'You can already faintly smell the marijuana as you go near the house. When you knock on the door a completely nude girl opens it almost immediately.'
 	'If walls of smell existed you just got hit by one... the smell of ganja is impossible to ignore, it''s making your eyes tear up!'
 	'"Uhh... hi. I uhhh... hi. I have mail for you," you stumble, while you rub the tears from your eyes and ogle the girl''s nude body. "So uhhh... hi."'
-	'She doesn''t seem the slightest bit insulted, and grins: "No need to be embarrassed, sweetie! Take it in... look as much as you want. I have nothing to hide! Especially not from a cutie like you..."'
+	'She doesn''t seem the slightest bit insulted, and grins, "No need to be embarrassed, sweetie! Take it in... look as much as you want. I have nothing to hide! Especially not from a cutie like you..."'
 	'She has another puff of her cigarette and blows the smoke away with a seductive smile on her face, striking a pose. She idly begins to knead her boob, too! She seems to be incredibly horny.'
 	'"Damn, you''re no fun..." she groans mockingly, when you try to just get her to sign so you can be on your way. "Are you sure you don''t want to come in for a little while? You seem stressed, I bet I could help you relax..."'
 	'You respectfully decline the offer, and turn around to continue your round. You''d swear you feel a bit wobbly, just from standing near that house for so long!'
@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '19':
 	'The door swings open at your next address before you can even ring the doorbell. You have to do a quick double-check when you see who opened the door; the man is naked, and what a man he is! His body looks about as perfectly chiseled as a man''s body can get, and a humongous semi-hard cock swings between his legs.'
 	'He scrapes his throat insistently, and suddenly you realize you have been staring at his cock for nearly ten seconds!'
 	'"Wow... I err... I have mail... so uhh... yea!" you blabber, still unable to take your eyes off his body. His cock in particular!'
-	'The man laughs and takes your clipboard out of your hands, while you just stand there. He signs, and asks: "Should I go look for my mail in your bag, or...?"'
+	'The man laughs and takes your clipboard out of your hands, while you just stand there. He signs, and asks, "Should I go look for my mail in your bag, or...?"'
 	'This snaps you back to reality, and you quickly mutter an apology while you find his mail.'
 	'"Thanks! You have a nice day, miss!" he says, giving you a friendly nod before closing the door again.'
 	'You bury your head in your hands for a moment and let out a deep sigh; what must that man be thinking of you right now? That was definitely not your proudest moment...'
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '20':
 		'The tea is scalding hot! You and her chat about trivial things, while you keep testing your tea to see if it''s safe to drink yet. You''re wasting time here!'
 		'The lady seems to be so happy to have a visitor, you don''t dare to get up until you finish the tea. You barely manage to stop her from pouring you another cup!'
 		'"Thank you so much, I wish I could but I really have to go!" you smile apologetically at the woman.'
-		'"I understand... you youngsters, always on the move!" she laughs heartily. She offers you a small paper bag: "Here, at least take some cookies! You look like you could use a snack for the road!"'
+		'"I understand... you youngsters, always on the move!" she laughs heartily. She offers you a small paper bag, "Here, at least take some cookies! You look like you could use a snack for the road!"'
 		'The burly guys give you a friendly nod on your way out of the building, wishing you a good day. Maybe this area isn''t so bad after all... and those cookies are really good, too!'
 		act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 	end
@@ -801,7 +801,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '23':
 	'Curious as to what''s going on, you push aside a few branches and get an eyeful of a brunette''s ass! Her pants and panties are around her knees, and she''s grinning proudly at her boyfriend... until she sees you.'
 	'"Eeeep!" she squeaks, and quickly pulls up her pants again.'
 	'You giggle a bit, the embarrassed face of the girl makes her look all the cuter! You keep walking, realizing the show''s over, and in the background you can hear the two bickering.'
-	'The girl is furious: "I told you this would happen! You said you''d keep an eye out!"'
+	'The girl is furious, "I told you this would happen! You said you''d keep an eye out!"'
 	'"Come on, show me again! It''ll be fine. See? She''s no longer looking!" the guy says, laughing.'
 	'"You think that was funny!? You can be such an ass sometimes!" the girl sneers at him, as you walk around the corner and out of earshot. Sounds like he''s in trouble...'
 
@@ -827,8 +827,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '25':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/domme.jpg"></center>'
 	'You knock on the door several times, but no one answers! Still, you know someone''s home... you can clearly hear activity indoors.'
 	'Just when you are about to give up, the door finally opens. The woman who opens the door is panting slightly, her hair is a bit disheveled and she looks all sweaty. That''s not the first thing you notice though! The first thing you notice is her attire: all leather, and very revealing!'
-	'You can''t help but check out the rest of her outfit, and then notice the enormous strap-on she''s wearing. She''s playfully bobbing it up and down with a whip, and asks in a demanding voice: "Yea? What do you want?"'
-	'When you don''t respond quick enough, she coughs insistently and reminds you: "My eyes are up here, girl! Make it quick, I have things to do."'
+	'You can''t help but check out the rest of her outfit, and then notice the enormous strap-on she''s wearing. She''s playfully bobbing it up and down with a whip, and asks in a demanding voice, "Yea? What do you want?"'
+	'When you don''t respond quick enough, she coughs insistently and reminds you, "My eyes are up here, girl! Make it quick, I have things to do."'
 	'She gives you a scolding look, and you feel yourself shrinking a bit in front of her.'
 	''
 	act 'Apologize and give her her mail':
@@ -836,7 +836,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '25':
 		'"I have a package for uhh... Maitresse Madeline. That''s you, right?" you mumble. "I''m sorry, I jus-"'
 		'"That''s me," she interrupts you. "Excellent timing! He was so proud he could just about take this one... this''ll take him down a few pegs!" she grins evilly, and quickly signs for the package. "Thanks, dear."'
 		'Surely she''s not talking about the strap-on? Judging from the size of the package, it''s even larger than the strap-on she''s wearing now!'
-		'She quickly closes the door while tearing the box open, and through the door you can hear her voice: "The Black Stallion I ordered just arrived, sweetie! I hope you''re ready!"'
+		'She quickly closes the door while tearing the box open, and through the door you can hear her voice, "The Black Stallion I ordered just arrived, sweetie! I hope you''re ready!"'
 		'Poor guy...'
 		act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 	end
@@ -847,9 +847,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '26':
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/smallboy.jpg"></center>'
-	'During your round you suddenly feel a gentle tug on your bag, and hear a soft voice behind you that says: "Uhhh... excuse me, miss?"'
+	'During your round you suddenly feel a gentle tug on your bag, and hear a soft voice behind you that says, "Uhhh... excuse me, miss?"'
 	'When you turn around, you see nothing at first. Until you look down; there''s a small boy, holding a note with a big pink heart on it.'
-	'"You deliver notes, right?" he asks. When you nod, he continues: "Could you deliver this note, please? It''s for that girl over there!"'
+	'"You deliver notes, right?" he asks. When you nod, he continues, "Could you deliver this note, please? It''s for that girl over there!"'
 	'He points in a general direction, where you see a girl his age walking on the other side of the street with her mother. They move around the corner and disappear from sight.'
 	act 'Deliver the note for him':
 		cla
@@ -863,8 +863,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '26':
 		'"Of course, sir! Give me the note and I''ll go bring it to her!" you tell him.'
 		'The boy gives you the note with a big smile on his face, and you quickly walk in the direction you last saw the woman and her daughter go.'
 		'You lose track of them for a moment, but after a quick search you see them walking. "Excuse me, miss! I have a note for you!" you shout after them, and walk towards them.'
-		'The mother looks at you a bit surprised, but you stop her before she can say something and say: "Not for you... but for you!" as you hand the note to the little girl.'
-		'She needs her mother''s help to read the note, but a big grin appears on her face when her mother explains who it''s from. It may have cost you a few minutes, and it will cost you a few minutes more to get back on track, but the feeling you get from seeing her genuine happiness is amazing! When you''re about to leave, her mother stops you and gives you 100 <b>₽</b> and says: "What a nice thing of you to do! Thank you so much, that made her day!"'
+		'The mother looks at you a bit surprised, but you stop her before she can say something and say, "Not for you... but for you!" as you hand the note to the little girl.'
+		'She needs her mother''s help to read the note, but a big grin appears on her face when her mother explains who it''s from. It may have cost you a few minutes, and it will cost you a few minutes more to get back on track, but the feeling you get from seeing her genuine happiness is amazing! When you''re about to leave, her mother stops you and gives you 100 <b>₽</b> and says, "What a nice thing of you to do! Thank you so much, that made her day!"'
 		act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 	end
 	act 'Decline and say you''re in a hurry':
@@ -893,14 +893,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'resume':
 				if postbandQW = 0:
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/shush.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''re almost done in the streets you''re not supposed to be in! With only a few mail pieces to go, you suddenly hear a deep voice behind you: "You, girl. Come here!"'
+					'You''re almost done in the streets you''re not supposed to be in! With only a few mail pieces to go, you suddenly hear a deep voice behind you, "You, girl. Come here!"'
 					'Before you can do anything, two men catch up to you and block your path.'
 
 					act 'See what they want': gt 'postdeliveries', 'bandits'
 				else
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/shush.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''re almost done in the streets you''re not supposed to be in! With only a few mail pieces to go, you suddenly hear a deep voice behind you: "I see you came back to play! We''ve been keeping an eye on you for a while..."'
+					'You''re almost done in the streets you''re not supposed to be in! With only a few mail pieces to go, you suddenly hear a deep voice behind you, "I see you came back to play! We''ve been keeping an eye on you for a while..."'
 					'Before you can do anything, two men catch up to you and block your path.'
 
 					act 'See what they want': gt 'postdeliveries', 'bandits'
@@ -946,15 +946,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandits':
 		''
 		act 'Tell them they can''t do that':
 			cla
-			'The guys laugh heartily when you say: "Hey, you can''t do that! Give that back!"'
-			'"Shut the fuck up. If you want to be left alone on our turf, you should''ve stayed out of our sight," he barks. He signs on your sheet and gives you a cruel grin: "There, you have the signature you need. Now get lost... unless you came to play?"'
+			'The guys laugh heartily when you say, "Hey, you can''t do that! Give that back!"'
+			'"Shut the fuck up. If you want to be left alone on our turf, you should''ve stayed out of our sight," he barks. He signs on your sheet and gives you a cruel grin, "There, you have the signature you need. Now get lost... unless you came to play?"'
 			'Well, so much for that idea! Hopefully the postmaster won''t find out about that forged signature.'
 			''
 			act 'Ask what they''re talking about':
 				cla
 				postbandQW = 1
 				'"What do you mean, play!? Let go of me!" you shout at him.'
-				'The man tightens his grip on your shoulders and says: "Shut up and listen. We had a deal with the previous delivery girl. Eager little slut, she was! She even made a game out of it... if she used our streets during her round, she''d do what we want if we caught her. Since you took her place, that goes for you too. We''ll go easy on you this time, but now that you know the rules: if we see you again around here, you better be ready to put out if you want to keep your job. Understood?"'
+				'The man tightens his grip on your shoulders and says, "Shut up and listen. We had a deal with the previous delivery girl. Eager little slut, she was! She even made a game out of it... if she used our streets during her round, she''d do what we want if we caught her. Since you took her place, that goes for you too. We''ll go easy on you this time, but now that you know the rules: if we see you again around here, you better be ready to put out if you want to keep your job. Understood?"'
 				'He doesn''t wait for an answer but walks away with his friend, leaving you alone to collect your thoughts. What the hell did they make that girl do!?'
 				act 'Deliver the last envelopes in your bag':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 			end
@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandits':
 				'"Hey, come back here!" the guy yells, but you running away clearly caught them by surprise.'
 				'You''re a good enough runner to outrun them, despite the bag you''re carrying.'
 				'Once you''re sure you''ve lost them, you stop to catch your breath. They probably gave up on chasing you.'
-				'You smile to yourself: "Nice try, idiots..."'
+				'You smile to yourself, "Nice try, idiots..."'
 				act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 			elseif begresult >= 23 and randrun = 1:
 				'You manage to break free from them and start running, but the strap of your bag gets caught on a fence when you try to run away.'
@@ -1015,25 +1015,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 	cla
 	if postbandQW = 1:
 		'Your heart is pounding in your chest when the two men somewhat forcefully drag you behind a building.'
-		'When you get there, the man who does most of the talking grins: "Like I said... we had a deal with the former delivery girl. Haven''t seen her in a while by the way, only seen some older guy. Any idea where she is?"'
-		'You shake your head: "I don''t even know who she is!"'
+		'When you get there, the man who does most of the talking grins, "Like I said... we had a deal with the former delivery girl. Haven''t seen her in a while by the way, only seen some older guy. Any idea where she is?"'
+		'You shake your head, "I don''t even know who she is!"'
 		'"Shame, I liked her. But it doesn''t matter," he shrugs. "You''re here now. Anyway, the deal with her was that in exchange for free passage, she''d... take care of us, from time to time. If you know what I mean, and I think you do."'
-		'There''s an icy silence in the air for a few seconds, and he adds: "Let''s start simple. Show us your tits."'
-		'You give him a hesitant look, and the other guy pitches in: "Come on, girl. Just show us your tits, and you can go. Unless you want to lose your job..."'
+		'There''s an icy silence in the air for a few seconds, and he adds, "Let''s start simple. Show us your tits."'
+		'You give him a hesitant look, and the other guy pitches in, "Come on, girl. Just show us your tits, and you can go. Unless you want to lose your job..."'
 		'He pulls a lighter out of his pocket, lights it and moves it dangerously close to a fistful of envelopes. If you don''t do something now, he''ll torch them.'
 		act 'Agree to show your boobs':
 			cls
 			postbandQW = 2
 			postexhibi += 1
-			inhib_exp += rand(0,3)
+			inhib_exp += rand(1,4)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postboobs1.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No, wait!" you blurt out, quickly stopping him. "I''ll do it..."'
-			'"I knew you would!" he grins, putting out his lighter but keeping it in his hand. He adds: "Go on, then... we don''t have all day!"'
-			'You quickly look around you to make sure no one else can see you, and pull your clothes aside. When you proceed to correct your clothes, the first guy slaps your hands away and says: "Not so fast! You''re done when we say you are."'
-			'After another ten seconds of awkward silence, the quiet one nods approvingly and says: "Very nice."'
+			'"I knew you would!" he grins, putting out his lighter but keeping it in his hand. He adds, "Go on, then... we don''t have all day!"'
+			'You quickly look around you to make sure no one else can see you, and pull your clothes aside. When you proceed to correct your clothes, the first guy slaps your hands away and says, "Not so fast! You''re done when we say you are."'
+			'After another ten seconds of awkward silence, the quiet one nods approvingly and says, "Very nice."'
 			gs 'arousal',5 ,'flash'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'While you quickly cover up, his friend smiles benevolently and offers you your bag: "See, what wasn''t so bad!"'
+			'While you quickly cover up, his friend smiles benevolently and offers you your bag, "See, what wasn''t so bad!"'
 			'You quickly take it out of his hands and leave, assuming they''re done with you. From the greedy looks in their eyes, you figure they will probably expect more from you if they catch you again.'
 			act 'Continue your round':gt 'postdeliveries', 'resume'
 		end
@@ -1045,13 +1045,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postburn.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you don''t speak up, he theatrically moves the envelopes into the flame. Within seconds, the contents of your bag are consumed by the flames.'
 			'"You could''ve easily prevented this! If only you weren''t such a prude..." he grins cruelly.'
-			'His friend mockingly pretends to be warming his hands over the smouldering remains of the letters and laughs: "Good luck finding a new job. Now get lost!"'
+			'His friend mockingly pretends to be warming his hands over the smouldering remains of the letters and laughs, "Good luck finding a new job. Now get lost!"'
 			'When you pick up the empty bag and return to the street dejectedly, you realize he''s right. You''re going to get fired, for sure!'
 			act 'Return to the post office':gt 'postdeliveries', 'finishround'
 		end
 	elseif postbandQW = 2:
 		'You follow the two men to behind the building again, while one of them digs through your bag.'
-		'The first one claps his hands and grins: "Alright, girl. You know what we want."'
+		'The first one claps his hands and grins, "Alright, girl. You know what we want."'
 		act 'Show your boobs again':
 			cls
 			postexhibi += 1
@@ -1068,7 +1068,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 		end
 	elseif postbandQW = 3:
 		'"Strip!" one of them orders you, once you''re behind the building.'
-		'"Like... everything?" you ask them. You quickly expose your boobs again and offer: "I can show you my boobs again! See?"'
+		'"Like... everything?" you ask them. You quickly expose your boobs again and offer, "I can show you my boobs again! See?"'
 		'"Everything!" he barks impatiently, ignoring your tits. "I want to see what our new slut looks like..."'
 		'His friend is only paying half attention to you, while skimming through your letters of today to see if there''s anything of interest among them.'
 		'He doesn''t find anything to his liking in your bag, and looks at you intently now.'
@@ -1089,7 +1089,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 				cla
 				'You shrug and laugh it off, quickly putting your clothes back on before the talkative one changes his mind. If it was up to the other guy, you would have his cock in your mouth by now!'
 				'"It''s okay, you''ll get lots of practise soon enough. The former delivery girl was terrible at it, at first... but by the end she sucked like a pro!" the creepy one says.'
-				'He gives you your bag, and the friendlier one of the two adds: "Consider this your last freebie. You know what we want. You better be ready to put that mouth to work, if we catch you in our streets again!"'
+				'He gives you your bag, and the friendlier one of the two adds, "Consider this your last freebie. You know what we want. You better be ready to put that mouth to work, if we catch you in our streets again!"'
 				'Then he lets you leave. Their words keep lingering in your mind, though. They obviously expect you to put out next time, demanding you give them a blowjob just to walk through some streets! And who knows what else they''ll want, after that! Is it even worth it?'
 				'You complete your round without any more issues. The guys see you walking several times more, but other than a few lewd remarks they leave you alone.'
 
@@ -1131,16 +1131,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 				cls
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A105'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postbj11.jpg"></center>'
-				'Figuring you''re better off staying on his good side, you stop and ask: "Uhhh... was I supposed to help you too?"'
+				'Figuring you''re better off staying on his good side, you stop and ask, "Uhhh... was I supposed to help you too?"'
 				'"No. But you will now. Come this way," he laughs.'
 				'Without waiting for an answer he grabs you by the arm and forcefully drags you to another room of the apartment. He doesn''t bother to undress but simply takes his cock out of his pants, expecting you to do the rest.'
 				'He groans when you close your lips around his shaft obediently and makes you take the full length of his cock down your throat several times, testing your limits thoroughly. His cock is even bigger than his friend''s, and you have to open your mouth as far as you can to allow him access.'
-				'Finally he dumps his load all over your face, and he grins at you: "You''re even more eager than the last Postslut! We''re going to have a lot of fun with you..."'
+				'Finally he dumps his load all over your face, and he grins at you, "You''re even more eager than the last Postslut! We''re going to have a lot of fun with you..."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
 				gs 'stat'
-				'While you get dressed again, you overhear the two guys talking. One of them says: "Wha... she did you too!? I told her she could leave! Maybe she enjoys this a lot more than we thought?"'
+				'While you get dressed again, you overhear the two guys talking. One of them says, "Wha... she did you too!? I told her she could leave! Maybe she enjoys this a lot more than we thought?"'
 				act 'Continue your round':
 					cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postgirl.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1158,10 +1158,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A104'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/posthj1.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Please, sir! You can''t make me do this! Please..." you beg him, interrupting his counting. "Anything but this..."'
-			'The man sighs deeply, and then says: "Well, you''re getting me off one way or the other!" After a few seconds of silence, he adds: "Fine. I guess you can use your hands, this time. You better make it good, though!"'
+			'The man sighs deeply, and then says, "Well, you''re getting me off one way or the other!" After a few seconds of silence, he adds, "Fine. I guess you can use your hands, this time. You better make it good, though!"'
 			'Realizing that''s the best offer you''re going to get, you kneel down before him and begin to jerk him off.'
 			'"Spit on it, girl. Make it nice and slippery, and show some more enthusiasm!" he orders you, and you comply quickly. "Yeah, that''s it..."'
-			'After a few minutes he groans: "I''m gonna cum! Jerk me off over your tits!"'
+			'After a few minutes he groans, "I''m gonna cum! Jerk me off over your tits!"'
 			'Seconds later, warm jets of his sperm splatter all over your tits. You feel a twinge of pride when you see how thoroughly satisfied the guy is. That wasn''t so bad!'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1180,12 +1180,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 				'"Open your mouth, girl. I''m not asking again!" he threatens you in a menacing voice.'
 				'You realize he''s not going to let you walk away and sigh, before closing your lips around his shaft obediently. Maybe he''ll go easy on you?'
 				'Unfortunately, he does not. He makes you take the full length of his cock down your throat several times, testing your limits thoroughly. His cock is even bigger than his friend''s, and you have to open your mouth as far as you can to allow him access.'
-				'After a few minutes of uncomfortable throat fucking he finally shoots his load down your throat, and grins at you: "You''re even better than the last Postslut! I''m already looking forward to next week..."'
+				'After a few minutes of uncomfortable throat fucking he finally shoots his load down your throat, and grins at you, "You''re even better than the last Postslut! I''m already looking forward to next week..."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 				gs 'stat'
-				'While you get dressed again, you overhear the two guys talking. One voice says: "Wha- she did what!? She refused to blow me, and only gave me a handjob! That bitch... is she still here?"'
+				'While you get dressed again, you overhear the two guys talking. One voice says, "Wha- she did what!? She refused to blow me, and only gave me a handjob! That bitch... is she still here?"'
 				act 'Leave quickly':
 					cla
 					'You quickly find your bag and leave the apartment, before they come find you again. There''s no way either of them will settle for a handjob now, if they catch you again...'
@@ -1258,7 +1258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postbj<<postbjrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 			if postbjrand > 7:
-				'You grin at the guys and say: "No need to argue, guys! Why don''t you both come in with me?"'
+				'You grin at the guys and say, "No need to argue, guys! Why don''t you both come in with me?"'
 				'The guys can''t believe their ears and both follow you inside, where you undress and kneel down between the two of them. "Come on, boys! Show me how much you want me!" you encourage them, and the guys scurry to pull their pants down.'
 				'You blow both of them in turns, jerking off the cock you don''t have in your mouth. You''ve spent enough time with the guys by now to know what they like, and both of them shoot their loads in no time at all.'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A104'
@@ -1271,11 +1271,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bandsex':
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 				gs 'stat'
 				'"Already!?" you laugh, and the guys actually seem a bit disappointed in themselves.'
-				'You wink at them and smile: "That''s okay, I still had fun! Maybe you''ll last longer next time..."'
+				'You wink at them and smile, "That''s okay, I still had fun! Maybe you''ll last longer next time..."'
 			else
 				'You''re so accustomed to servicing the guys by now, you don''t feel any shame or hesitation any more. It''s just part of the job.'
 				'You take one of them by the hand and lead him into the building, before they can even decide who gets to spend time with you.'
-				'You quickly undress and drop to your knees, and begin tugging at his pants: "Come on, big boy!" you grin at him. "Help me out a little... you do want me to blow you, right?"'
+				'You quickly undress and drop to your knees, and begin tugging at his pants, "Come on, big boy!" you grin at him. "Help me out a little... you do want me to blow you, right?"'
 				'The guy is actually a bit taken aback by how eager you are nowadays, and quietly lets you take his cock out of his pants.'
 				'You begin jerking and sucking him off immediately, trying to get him off as quick as possible so you can resume your round.'
 				'Sure enough, he doesn''t last long. "That''s it! There you go..." you smile sweetly at him, when you feel his sperm land on your face.'
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'finishround':
 		'"What happened? Why are you back so early?" he asks, rather worried.'
 		'"They... they torched everything! Some guys stopped me, and they burnt all the letters! Just for the hell of it!" you blurt out. "There was nothing I could do..."'
 		'That last bit is a lie, but he doesn''t have to know what they wanted you to do!'
-		'He shakes his head angrily and says: "I warned you to avoid those streets! I knew this was going to happen... damnit. You leave me no choice. You''re fired!"'
+		'He shakes his head angrily and says, "I warned you to avoid those streets! I knew this was going to happen... damnit. You leave me no choice. You''re fired!"'
 !! you''re back early
 	elseif hour = 14 and minut <= 30:
 		postlate -= 1
@@ -1315,15 +1315,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'finishround':
 		postlate += 3
 		if postlate <= 3:
 			'"You''re late, what happened?" the postmaster asks when you return to the post office.'
-			'You shrug and say: "I got held up a little... I managed to deliver everything, though! See?"'
-			'His anger dissipates when he sees your sheet, with all the signatures where they should be. He smiles benevolently and says: "Well... it can happen, I guess. Nice job getting everything done."'
+			'You shrug and say, "I got held up a little... I managed to deliver everything, though! See?"'
+			'His anger dissipates when he sees your sheet, with all the signatures where they should be. He smiles benevolently and says, "Well... it can happen, I guess. Nice job getting everything done."'
 		elseif postlate > 3 and postlate < 12:
 			'"You''re late again," the postmaster remarks when you return to the post office. "Did you at least manage to deliver everything?"'
 			'When you nod, his stern expression softens a little.'
 			'"Well... alright then," he says, still a bit reluctant. "It''s important people get their mail on time, though. Don''t make a habit out of it!"'
 		elseif postlate >= 12 and postlate < 15:
 			'"You''re late... yet again!" the postmaster scoffs when you enter the post office. Your remarks that you did deliver everything fall on deaf ears.'
-			'"I don''t care! Everyone knows that mail is delivered before 15:00! You may be getting lucky with people still being home after that, but your luck won''t last," he remarks, mumbling something about how you make the postal service look bad. Then his voice grows louder again, and he says: "I will not stand for this! Be late one more time and you''re fired! You hear me?"'
+			'"I don''t care! Everyone knows that mail is delivered before 15:00! You may be getting lucky with people still being home after that, but your luck won''t last," he remarks, mumbling something about how you make the postal service look bad. Then his voice grows louder again, and he says, "I will not stand for this! Be late one more time and you''re fired! You hear me?"'
 			'Knowing it''s no use to argue, you nod. If you want to keep this job, you really need to look at the clock more next time...'
 		else
 			postjobQW = 999
@@ -1332,7 +1332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'finishround':
 !! you''re back at the normal time
 	else
 		if postlate > 0: postlate -= 1
-		'You return to the post office on time, with an empty bag. The postmaster smiles at you when he sees you come in and says: "Hello, <<$pcs_firstname>>... I assume everything went okay?"'
+		'You return to the post office on time, with an empty bag. The postmaster smiles at you when he sees you come in and says, "Hello, <<$pcs_firstname>>... I assume everything went okay?"'
 	end
 	''
 !! possible responses to what happened during your round

+ 12 - 12
locations/qwBarEncounters.qsrc

@@ -71,11 +71,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					minut += 60
 					gs 'stat'
 					Jaska_Ev = 1
-					'Jaska smiles and hands you his pool cue. You watch him gather the balls into the triangle and set them up in the middle before grabbing another pool cue off the wall. "Alright, since it’s your first time, I won’t bore you with the technical shit, and keep it simple." He says as he moves behind you, his hand on the small of your back as he gently pushes you closer to the table.'
-					'"Like this?" You ask, following his lead. You lean down low to the table and allow yourself to be moved this way and that way by Jaska. Before you know it, an hour has passed and he tells you that you’ve got the basics down, even going as far as to say you could probably beat some of the regulars.'
+					'Jaska smiles and hands you his pool cue. You watch him gather the balls into the triangle and set them up in the middle before grabbing another pool cue off the wall. "Alright, since it’s your first time, I won’t bore you with the technical shit, and keep it simple," he says as he moves behind you, his hand on the small of your back as he gently pushes you closer to the table.'
+					'"Like this?" you ask, following his lead. You lean down low to the table and allow yourself to be moved this way and that way by Jaska. Before you know it, an hour has passed and he tells you that you’ve got the basics down, even going as far as to say you could probably beat some of the regulars.'
 					*nl
-					'"Well, that’s all I got time to teach you," Jaska says, glancing down at his watch. He grabs his worn-out leather jacket and slips it on. "Next time, we’ll play for real!" He says before pausing, "There will be a next, right?"'
-					'"Of course. Just make sure you have your wallet ready, you tease. He laughs before saying one last goodbye and walking out the door.'
+					'"Well, that’s all I got time to teach you," Jaska says, glancing down at his watch. He grabs his worn-out leather jacket and slips it on. "Next time, we’ll play for real!" he says before pausing. "There will be a next, right?"'
+					'"Of course. Just make sure you have your wallet ready," you tease. He laughs before saying one last goodbye and walking out the door.'
 
 					act 'Return to the bar': gt 'qwBarPolet', 'bar'
 				end
@@ -129,23 +129,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			cla
 			if $boozeVar = 'beer':
 				money -= 140
-				agil_exp += rand(0,1)
-				react_exp += rand(0,1)
+				agil_exp += rand(1,2)
+				react_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer'
 			elseif $boozeVar = 'vodka':
 				money -= 150
-				stren_exp += rand(0,1)
-				vital_exp += rand(0,1)
+				stren_exp += rand(1,2)
+				vital_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 			elseif $boozeVar = 'wine':
 				money -= 180
-				chrsm_exp += rand(0,1)
-				prcptn_exp += rand(0,1)
+				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
+				prcptn_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'wine'
 			elseif $boozeVar = 'spirit':
 				money -= 200
-				intel_exp += rand(0,1)
-				sprt_exp += rand(0,1)
+				intel_exp += rand(1,2)
+				sprt_exp += rand(1,2)
 				gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 			end
 			minut += 15

+ 1 - 1
locations/qwBarPolet.qsrc

@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'RandomDrinkEvents':
 	!DrinkingRand ALWAYS NEEDS TO BE ADJUSTED FOR NEW EVENTS!!!
 	DrinkingRand = RAND(1,14)
 	pic_rand = RAND(1,6)
-	observ_exp += rand(0,2)
+	observ_exp += rand(1,3)
 
 	if DrinkingRand = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/event7.jpg"></center>'

+ 4 - 4
locations/saunawhore.qsrc

@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'simplystrip':
 	if pcs_inhib < 40:
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	elseif pcs_inhib >= 40 and pcs_inhib < 60:
-		inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
+		inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	end
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sex/simplystrip'+rand(1, 2)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You remove your clothes and toss them aside, mentally preparing for the task ahead. The client looks vaguely irritated - perhaps he expected something a bit more provacative?'
@@ -300,11 +300,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjobCaress':
 		'He scowls at your pathetic attempt and pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
 		question = rand (1, 3)
 		if question = 1:
-			'He slaps your face hard and shouts: "What the hell is wrong with you? What kind of a whore is this bad at sucking cock?"'
+			'He slaps your face hard and shouts, "What the hell is wrong with you? What kind of a whore is this bad at sucking cock?"'
 		elseif question = 2:
-			'He slaps your face hard and shouts: "My cock isn''t tasty enough for you to suck on properly, bitch?"'
+			'He slaps your face hard and shouts, "My cock isn''t tasty enough for you to suck on properly, bitch?"'
 		elseif question = 3:
-			'He slaps your face hard and shouts: "Christ, what kind of a good-for-nothing whore are you?"'
+			'He slaps your face hard and shouts, "Christ, what kind of a good-for-nothing whore are you?"'
 		end
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'cheeks', 'slap'
 		'Furious, he grabs you roughly by your arms, painfully twisting them behind your back, and slams you down on the bed.'

+ 14 - 13
locations/swamphouse.qsrc

@@ -259,10 +259,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterswork1.2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You see Andrei talking with Sergei in the hut.'
-		'"Come in <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time to consummate the marriage," Andrew jokingly remarked. "I hope you''re willing to do anything we say.'
-		if klismaday ! daystart:'"I''m sorry, I don''t know if I''m ready yet..." you say . "I haven''t been able to clean myself as you asked, maybe we could skip it this time?.'
-		if klismaday ! daystart:'Well, we could <<$pcs_nickname>>..." said Andrew. "But since you''re already here, you not being all dolled up doesn''t matter to us. But don''t dare to try to fool us next time, we will not forget."'
-		'"There are some bushes not far from here, we could take her with us there, no one would be able to find us. Should we tell Igor to join us?" said Sergei. "Nevermind Igor, it would take him to long time to join us."'
+		'"Come in, <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time to consummate the marriage," Andrei jokingly remarked. "I hope you''re willing to do anything we say."'
+		if klismaday ! daystart:'"I''m sorry, I don''t know if I''m ready yet..." you say . "I haven''t been able to clean myself as you asked, maybe we could skip it this time?"'
+		if klismaday ! daystart:'"Well, we could, <<$pcs_nickname>>..." said Andrei. "But since you''re already here, you not being all dolled up doesn''t matter to us. But don''t dare to try to fool us next time, we will not forget."'
+		'"There are some bushes not far from here, we could take her with us there, no one would be able to find us. Should we tell Igor to join us?" said Sergei.'
+		'"Nevermind Igor, it would take him to long time to join us," Andrei opined.'
 
 !!ToDo: The huntersex location doesn''t exist
 !!		act 'Follow the guys':
@@ -341,7 +342,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swamphousenude1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You take a deep breath and decided to disregard your nerves and leave it as it is. Upon entering the hut, the hunters can''t help themselves, they start staring at your most private parts.'
-				'"Damn, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look really good. The things I would want to do to you..." said a somewhat aroused Andrei.'
+				'"Damn, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look really good. The things I would do to you..." said a somewhat aroused Andrei.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -358,7 +359,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				hunterknowday = daystart
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/swamphousenude1.jpg"></center>'
 				'Seeing you naked, the men just shake their heads...'
-				'"Look here <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you want to charm us, you will need to think of something else." said one of the guys.'
+				'"Look here, <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you want to charm us, you will need to think of something else," said one of the guys.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 !!			end
@@ -380,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 !!		if temphunt = 3:'You enter the hut and bump into Igor. He comes over saying smiling "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I need to empty my sack, help me out..."'
 !!		if pcs_horny < 40:' You obediently follow suit, knowing what he wants.'
 !!		if pcs_horny >= 40 and pcs_horny < 70:'"Come and get me..." is all you manage to say before spreading your legs.'
-!!		if pcs_horny >= 70:'"I was hoping this would happen," you think to yourself, feeling your wet pussy screaming with desire. You jump on him, taking charge, leaving him stunned about who wants it more.'
+!!		if pcs_horny >= 70:'<i>I was hoping this would happen,</i> you think to yourself, feeling your wet pussy screaming with desire. You jump on him, taking charge, leaving him stunned about who wants it more.'
 
 !!		act 'Go': gt 'huntersex', 'sluthomesex'
 !!	end
@@ -496,8 +497,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stackmagazines':
 			lastreadday = daystart
 			pcs_nerd += 10
 		end
-		if pcs_intel >= 50:intel_exp += RAND(0,1)
-		if pcs_intel < 50:intel_exp += RAND(0,2)
+		if pcs_intel >= 50:intel_exp += RAND(1,2)
+		if pcs_intel < 50:intel_exp += RAND(2,3)
 		blizoruk+=1
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		minut += 60
@@ -516,8 +517,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stackmagazines':
 			lastreadday = daystart
 			pcs_nerd += 10
 		end
-		if pcs_sprt >= 50:sprt_exp += RAND(0,1)
-		if pcs_sprt < 50:sprt_exp += RAND(0,2)
+		if pcs_sprt >= 50:sprt_exp += RAND(1,2)
+		if pcs_sprt < 50:sprt_exp += RAND(2,3)
 		blizoruk+=1
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		minut += 60
@@ -537,8 +538,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stackmagazines':
 			lastreadday = daystart
 			pcs_nerd += 10
 		end
-		if pcs_sprt >= 50:sprt_exp += RAND(0,1)
-		if pcs_sprt < 50:sprt_exp += RAND(0,2)
+		if pcs_sprt >= 50:sprt_exp += RAND(1,2)
+		if pcs_sprt < 50:sprt_exp += RAND(2,3)
 		blizoruk+=1
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		pcs_willpwr += 100

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