[fixed] Proofreading thread edits, the latestssss.

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
 						'After you finish explaining the new material, Kolka goes red with excitement and asks:'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Can you help me out here now?"'
 						if pcs_horny > 80:
-							act 'How could i say no if you keep asking so nice?': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
+							act 'How could I say no if you keep asking so nice?': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
 						else
-							act 'I think i could teach you a thing or two': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
+							act 'I think I could teach you a thing or two': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
 							act 'Maybe next time...': gt 'sitrPar'
 						end
 					end

locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 					end
 				end
 			end
-			act'"Give him "shower head"':
+			act'Give him shower head':
 				cla
 				npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 				if brotherbj < 1 and brotherfuck < 1:

locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	if month >= 4 and month <= 10:
 		if hour >= 6 and hour < 22:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gadforest1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your are at the edge of the forest. Mushrooms and berries grow here and you can often find other people picking them.'
+			'You are at the edge of the forest. Mushrooms and berries grow here and you can often find other people picking them.'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/forest/gadforest_night1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You are at the edge of the forest. Night in the woods is scary and uncomfortable.'

locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc

@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
 		'"Well, he said Pavlovsk is like living in a porn movie or video game. That Moscow is nothing like this."'
 		'The second boy laughs. "More like the girls there see through his bullshit and don''t give him play."'
 		'"Yeah, maybe, but I don''t know. The girls are just different there. I mean, normally it isn''t too hard to find a girl that will let you fuck her, but they are a lot more resistant there."'
-		'"Well, what do you expect? It''s Moscow, they are obsessed with being all prime and proper. Moscow is just boring, it''s not us that are different, but them."'
+		'"Well, what do you expect? It''s Moscow, they are obsessed with being all prim and proper. Moscow is just boring, it''s not us that are different, but them."'
 		'"Hmm yeah, you''re most likely right, but man it would be fun to live in a porn movie or video game though, wouldn''t it?"'
 		'"Fuck yeah it would!"'
 	elseif chat_rand = 39 and pav_sex > 25:

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						if SchoolAtestat = 0:
 							if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
 								if motherClotheMonth ! month:
-									'Your mother lets out an exasperated sigh, and throws her hands in the air. "Here we go again... "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing to wear!"" he says, mocking your voice in a high pitch. You both laugh. "Alright then <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go see if we can find something."'
+									'Your mother lets out an exasperated sigh and throws her hands in the air. "Here we go again... <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing to wear!" she says, mocking your voice in a high pitch. You both laugh. "Alright then <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go see if we can find something."'
 
 									act 'Go to the store':
 										cla

locations/nichTaras.qsrc

@@ -492,10 +492,10 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'session':
 			act 'Further':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/taras/mirrorEvent1f.jpg"></center>'
-				'He takes a vibrator and start working your clit.'
-				'It doesn''t take long before you feel an orgasm building up.'
-				'Your breath quickens while your gag still makes breathing difficult. Just as you are about to cum Taras holds your nose shut.'
-				'You feel your intense orgasm with every nerve. You try to move, to give into it, but your are tightly hold in place.'
+				'He takes a vibrator and starts working your clit.'
+				'It doesn''t take long before you feel an orgasm build up.'
+				'Your breath quickens while your gag still makes breathing difficult. Just as you are about to cum, Taras holds your nose shut.'
+				'You feel your intense orgasm with every nerve. You try to move, to give into it, but you are tightly hold in place.'
 				*nl
 				'Finally Taras removes his hand from your nose also removes the horrible gag.'
 				'"I am done with you for today. You can rest now, slut."'

locations/pavCommercial.qsrc

@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ if leonidSlave = 1:
 end
 
 if hour >= 7 and hour <= 18:
-	$desc_txt2 = 'a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos20''">vocational school</a>, where young adults can learn a trade.'
+	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos20''">vocational school</a>, where young adults can learn a trade.'
 else
 	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:msg ''vocational school, which is closed right now. It will reopen again at 7:00''">vocational school</a>.'
 end

locations/street_event.qsrc

@@ -1619,7 +1619,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 					'<<$streetev_title>>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/street/city/homeless.jpg"></center>'
 					'As you walk down the street you pass a couple of homeless men laying on a metro gate, using it for warmth in the freezing conditions.'
-					act 'Ignore her':gt $loc
+					act 'Ignore them':gt $loc
 				else
 					gt $loc
 				end

locations/street_walker.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 		prst_loc = 2
 	end
 	gs 'street_walker', 'start'
-	'You do a last minute check of your outfit and makeup, in a reflection in the window of a store. Yep you look good and like your are open for business. With a final look you turn and make your way down the sidewalk looking for a customer.'
+	'You do a last minute check of your outfit and makeup in a reflection in the window of a store. Yep, you look good and like you are open for business. With a final look you turn and make your way down the sidewalk looking for a customer.'
 	act 'Work the street': gt 'street_walker', 'event1'
 	act 'Leave (don''t work)': gt 'street_walker', 'end'
 end