[Added] More Maksim content from Nutluck

locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # anushapt
-!2024/03/25
+!2024/04/03
 !AnushkaLoc tells us where Anvushka is located
 !----------------------------------------------
 !AnushkaLoc = 0 (Anushka not home)
@@ -12,6 +12,9 @@
 !AnushkaLoc = 7 (Anushka in the bathroom)
 !---------------------------------------------
 
+!!anushkaQW['edtalk'] += 1  how many times Sveta has talked to Ed in the living room
+!!anushkaQW['kidstory'] += 1 How many times Ed has told Sveta bout Anushka as a kid
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 	menu_off = 0
 	$track_loop = ''
@@ -36,10 +39,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 	'You walk up to the front door and knock.'
 	if hour >= 22:
 		'It''s too late in the day to visit Anushka.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif hour < 8:
 		'It''s too early in the day to visit Anushka.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 30:
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -47,27 +50,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Maksim. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Nush isn''t here right now. She''s driving around the country with the band, they went on tour, I wish I could have gone."'
 		'You nod to that, you remember that now. "Right, I can''t believe I forgot that, well hope they are having fun."'
-		'"Rad is likely banging all the bitch''s." His tone makes it sound like he is a little jealous. "Nush is likely getting gangbanged by the band or a bunch of random dude every night." He says smuggly like it is some kind of joke.'
+		'"Rad is likely banging all the bitch''s." His tone makes it sound like he is a little jealous. "Nush is likely getting gangbanged by the band or a bunch of random dude every night." He says smugly like it is some kind of joke.'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head. "You really shouldn''t say that about your sister."'
-		'He snorts derisively. "What are you my dad all of a sudden? Besides that''s what mom says."'
+		'He snorts derisively. "What are you my dad all of a sudden? Besides that''s what Mom says."'
 		'You just sigh, no point trying to talk to him about that. "Anyways do you know when they will be back?"'
-		'He shrugs. "She is suppose to be back sometime in August, mom said I can''t let any of her friends in while she is gone." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		'He shrugs. "She is supposed to be back sometime in August, mom said I can''t let any of her friends in while she is gone." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif yearstart > 1:
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Maksim. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Nush isn''t moved out, she moved to the city with Rad and the guys, they got some apartment near the Uni so she can go to school." He sounds like he is about to throw up thinking about choosing to attend more school, he doesn''t seem to like school much.'
+		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Maksim. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Nush isn''t here she moved out, she moved to the city with Rad and the guys, they got some apartment near the University so she can go to school." He sounds like he is about to throw up thinking about choosing to attend more school, he doesn''t seem to like school much.'
 		'You nod to that. "Oh... ok, do you have their address?"'
-		'He sighs loudly like you are huge bother. "No, Rad works at the music store in the mall, I try and stop by when I get time to go to the city. Maybe you can stop by and ask him." He makes it sound like he is real busy and traveling around doing important stuff.'
+		'He sighs loudly like you are a huge bother. "No, Rad works at the music store in the mall, I try and stop by when I get time to go to the city. Maybe you can stop by and ask him." He makes it sound like he is real busy and traveling around doing important stuff.'
 		*nl
-		'You snort slightly in amusement. "Your sister work there too?"'
-		'He rolls his eyes. "No." He says no like you are a idiot for asking. "She works as a waitress or something at a coffee shop near where they live, like she could get a cool job like Rad, she is just some dumb waitress."'
-		'You just sigh, you are briefly tempted to point out your mom is just a waitress too. But no point trying to talk to him about that. "Anyways thanks I guess."'
-		'He shrugs. "Whatever, mom said I can''t let any of her friends since she doesn''t live here anymore." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		'You snort slightly in amusement. "Your sister works there too?"'
+		'He rolls his eyes. "No." He says no like you are an idiot for asking. "She works as a waitress or something at a coffee shop near where they live, like she could get a cool job like Rad, she is just some dumb waitress."'
+		'You just sigh, you are briefly tempted to point out that your mom is just a waitress too. But no point trying to talk to him about that. "Anyways thanks I guess."'
+		'He shrugs. "Whatever, Mom said I can''t let any of her friends since she doesn''t live here anymore." Before you can even get a word in, he slowly closes the door checking you out as he does. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif ((hour >= 15 and hour < 20) or (week > 5 and hour >= 10 and hour < 20)) and locat['A144'] ! 22 and (rand(0,4) = 0):
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -75,24 +78,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/valeria.jpg"></center>'
 		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household knocking on the door. It''s some time before someone answers it. In the end, it turns out to be Anushka''s mother.'
 		'Her mother just stands there, glaring at you for a while. "Well now, don''t just stand there. What do you want? Oh wait, let me guess you want to see Anushka? Well, the little slut isn''t here, and I don''t know when she''ll be back, so why don''t you just go bother someone else?" Before you can even get a word in, she slams the door in your face, and you hear all the locks click into place. With nothing more to do, you turn to leave.'
-		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 24:
 		*clr & cla
 		AnushkaLoc = 0
 		band['practice_invite'] = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
-		'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s down in the garage the band rents and turned into some sort of cool studio. They''re likely practicing or partying with some bitches. You can wait for her in her room if you want, or you can just go down there."'
+		'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s down in the garage with the band, that they turned into some sort of cool studio. They''re likely practicing or partying with some bitches. You can wait for her in her room if you want, or you can just go down there."'
 		'You shake your head, but there''s nothing you can do about it. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? As you decide, you can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes as he stares straight at your tits.'
-		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 25:
 		*clr & cla
 		AnushkaLoc = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 		'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s at the disco or out sucking some guy''s dick or something. You can wait for her in her room if you want, or you can just go there."'
 		'You shake your head, but there is nothing you can do about it. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? As you decide, you can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes as he stares straight at your tits.'
-		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	elseif locat['A144'] = 22:
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -109,27 +112,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'He hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s taking a shower."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
-			act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt','shower_wait'
-			act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','nushshower'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+			act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt', 'shower_wait'
+			act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'nushshower'
 			act 'Ask how he knows that':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile a little. "How do you know she''s taking a shower?"'
 				'He blushes a little and sputters "I can hear the water."'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
-				act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt','shower_wait'
-				act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','nushshower'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+				act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt', 'shower_wait'
+				act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'nushshower'
 				act 'Tease him':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 					'You grin at him. "So you haven''t been spying on her taking a shower? She told me you spy on her and her friends."'
 					'He blushes red and sputters "No!" He doesn''t seem to know what to do, so he turns and walks away. Just before he goes into his room, he adds "Fuck you, I can hear the water." Before you can reply, he goes into his room and closes the door.'
-					act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt','shower_wait'
-					act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','nushshower'
-					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+					act 'Wait in her room': gt 'anushapt', 'shower_wait'
+					act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'nushshower'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 		elseif nushdoor <= 6:
@@ -138,8 +141,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household and hope that Anushka will open the door.'
 			'To your relief, she opens the door, smiling. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come on in."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		elseif nushdoor <= 9 and anushkaQW['tv_day'] ! daystart:
 			*clr & cla
 			AnushkaLoc = 5
@@ -147,7 +150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household and hope that Anushka will open the door.'
 			'To your relief, she opens the door, smiling. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come in, I was just watching some TV." As you go inside, she closes the door and heads for the living room where some action movie is playing on the TV. She practically falls down on the couch as she takes a seat.'
-			act 'Take a seat next to her': gt 'anushapt','nushlivroom'
+			act 'Take a seat next to her': gt 'anushapt', 'nushlivroom'
 		elseif nushdoor <= 10 and locat['A154'] = 23:
 			*clr & cla
 			AnushkaLoc = 2
@@ -155,23 +158,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household and wait for Anushka to open the door, but Maksim answers instead.'
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
-			'With a smug look on his face, he hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room getting pounded like the slut she is by Radomir."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			'With a smug look on his face, he hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room getting pounded like the slut she is by Rad."'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			act 'Enter':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big154.jpg"></center>'
 				'You ignore his comment and step around him to enter the apartment. Just then, you see Radomir walking up the hall towards the door, buckling his belt back in place. He gives you a huge grin and a wink. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, bad timing because you just missed out. Nush is in her room recovering from the ass fucking I just gave her."'
 				'He then reaches over and ruffles Maksim''s hair with his hand. "Your sister has a real nice tight ass, or at least she did." With that, he walks past both of you and leaves the apartment.'
-				'"See?" he sneers before walking back to his room.'
-				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				'"See?" Maksim sneers before walking back to his room.'
+				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 			act 'Go to her room':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/listen.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you reach Anushka''s bedroom door, you hear voices inside. One of them is Anushka, and the other is obviously a guy, probably Radomir if Maksim is to be believed. You can''t quite make out what they''re saying, so you lean against the door to hear better. You hear the guy say "Turn around and let me see that fine ass of yours."'
-				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Take a peek (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -180,8 +183,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/peek.jpg"></center>'
 						'Taking a little peek won''t hurt anyone. You glance around to make sure no one can see you, then you crack the door open to just barely peek in. You can just see Anushka stripping down to her underwear inside, but you can''t see the guy.'
-						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2','watch_nushrad'
+						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2', 'watch_nushrad'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Take a peek (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -195,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'With a smug look on his face, he hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room getting fucked by Val."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			act 'Enter':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
@@ -205,14 +208,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 				'He just grins a little. "Oh you know, just hanging out and having fun." He then turns to Maksim. "Are you going to come by later and help me work on my bike?"'
 				'Maksim responds to Valentin. "If my dad lets me. He''s on my ass about my homework." Val just nods at him. "Gotcha." He gives both of you a slight wave and walks out.'
 				'"See?" is all Maksim says before he walks back to his room.'
-				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 			act 'Go to her room':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/listen.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you reach Anushka''s bedroom door, you hear voices inside. One of them is Anushka, and the other is obviously a guy, probably Valentin if Maksim is to be believed. You can''t quite make out what they''re saying. You lean against the door to hear better, and you hear the guy ask "You wanna fuck?"'
-				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Take a peek (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -221,8 +224,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/peek.jpg"></center>'
 						'Taking a little peek won''t hurt anyone. You glance around to make sure no one can see you, then you crack the door open to just barely peek in. You can just see Anushka pulling down the pants of some guy that is lying on her bed. You can only see him from the waist down from your vantage point, so you can''t see his face, but you do see his hard dick spring free when his pants come off.'
-						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2','watch_nushval'
+						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2', 'watch_nushval'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Take a peek (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -236,22 +239,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring to ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'He hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room taking some black guy''s dick up her ass." he says with disgust.'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 			act 'Enter':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big146.jpg"></center>'
 				'You ignore his comments and step around him to enter the apartment. Just then, you see Marcus walking up the hall towards the door. He freezes in place, looking very embarrassed. He looks down to avoid eye contact. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was just hanging out... anyways I need to get going... see you at school, yeah?" Without waiting for a reply, he hurries out of the apartment.'
 				'Maksim gives him a disgusted look as he walks by, then looks at you. "She''s so disgusting." he sneers before he walks back to his room.'
-
-				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				act 'Walk past him': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 			act 'Go to her room':
 				*clr & cla
 				AnushkaLoc = 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/listen.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you reach Anushka''s bedroom door, you hear voices inside. One of them is Anushka, and the other is obviously a guy. You can''t quite make out what they''re saying. You lean against the door to hear better, and you hear the guy say "God, you''re so beautiful."'
-				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+				act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 				gs 'willpower', 'voyeur', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Take a peek (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -261,8 +263,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 						AnushkaLoc = 2
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/peek.jpg"></center>'
 						'Taking a little peek won''t hurt anyone. You glance around to make sure no one can see you, then you crack the door open to just barely peek in. You can see a naked Anushka dropping to her knees in front of a naked black guy who has his back to you.'
-						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2','watch_nushmar'
+						act 'Leave them in peace and leave the apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+						act 'Watch': gt 'anushkaev2', 'watch_nushmar'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Take a peek (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -276,9 +278,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'He hooks his thumb over his shoulder to point down the hall. "She''s in her room, likely getting stoned or masturbating to porn or something."'
-			'You ignore his comments and step around him to enter the apartment. He closes the door and heads back to his room.'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			if maksim_blackmail >= 1:
+				*nl
+				'You ignore his comments and start to step around him, to enter the apartment. But he puts his arm up blocking you from entering.'
+				'You give him a look of annoyance. "Do you mind?"'
+				'He grins. "Show me your tits!"'
+				'You know what this is about. You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you. "Seriously?"'
+				'He laughs. "If you want to come in, that''s the price now. So pay up or fuck off." You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so do you just leave or flash him.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Flash Maksim': gt 'anushkamaksim', 'hallway_flash_tits'
+			elseif maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] > 5:
+				*nl
+				'You ignore his comments and start to step around him, to enter the apartment. But he puts his arm up blocking you from entering.'
+				'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your tits again.'
+				'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, show me your pussy!"'
+				'You know what this is about. You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you. "Seriously?"'
+				'He laughs. "If you want to come in, that''s the price now. So pay up or fuck off." You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so do you just leave or flash him.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Flash Maksim': gt 'anushkamaksim', 'hallway_flash_pussy'
+			elseif maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] > 10:
+				*nl
+				'You ignore his comments and start to step around him, to enter the apartment. But he puts his arm up blocking you from entering.'
+				'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your pussy again.'
+				'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, I want to see it all! So come to my room and get naked."'
+				'You know what this is about. You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you. "Seriously? What about your brother."'
+				'He laughs. "If you want to come in, that''s the price now. Don''t worry that little shit is outside at the moment, we got time."'
+				'You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so do you just leave or flash him.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Go to Maksim''s room': gt 'anushkamaksim', 'maksim_room_naked'
+			else
+				'You ignore his comments and step around him to enter the apartment. He closes the door and heads back to his room.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+			end
 		end
 		killvar 'nushdoor'
     elseif (hour >= 15 and hour < 22) or (week > 5 and hour >= 8 and hour < 22):
@@ -290,27 +322,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 			'He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "What?" he asks.'
 			'You ignore his staring and ask, "Is Anushka home?"'
 			'"No, she''s not here right now. She''s probably out sucking some guy''s dick or something, but you can go wait for her in her room if you want."'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			act 'Why would you say that?':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 				'You are aghast that her brother would say such a thing about her. "Why would you tell people something like that?"'
 				'At first, he looks a little confused, as if he''s not sure what you mean, then just shrugs. "That''s what mom always says when I ask where Anushka is."'
 				'You shake your head, unsure what to think about this. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? Maksim just stands there staring at your tits, and you can actually feel him undressing you with his eyes.'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+				act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 			end
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 			'Maksim answers the door instead. He looks you over from head to toe, obviously trying to imagine you naked. "Anushka''s not here right now. She''s probably out sucking some guy''s dick or something, but you can wait for her in her room if you want."'
 			'You shake your head, but there''s nothing you can do about it. Should you go in and wait for her or just go? As you decide, you can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes as he stares straight at your tits.'
 		end
-		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	else
 		'You knock on the door several times, but no one answers. You assume that there probably isn''t anyone home at the moment.'
-		act 'Move away from the door': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+		act 'Move away from the door': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -337,18 +369,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 		'You stand still for a little while longer, listening for something, but nothing happens. After a while, you decide to move on, but you''re pretty sure that it was just Anushka''s younger brother, Maksim, spying on you.'
 	end
 	if AnushkaLoc ! 1:
-		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Anushka''s room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-		act 'Bathroom': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
-		act 'Anushka''s brother''s room': gt 'anushaptbr','brotherroom'
-		act 'Living room': gt 'anushapt','livingroom'
-		act 'Kitchen': gt 'anushapt','kitchen'
-		act 'Parents room': gt 'anushapt','anushparents'
+		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Anushka''s room': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		act 'Bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
+		act 'Anushka''s brother''s room': gt 'anushaptbr', 'brotherroom'
+		act 'Living room': gt 'anushapt', 'livingroom'
+		act 'Kitchen': gt 'anushapt', 'kitchen'
+		act 'Parents room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushparents'
 	else
 		'Anushka is standing next to you, looking at you expectantly. "What''s up, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
-		act 'Let''s check on your brother': AnushkaLoc = 3 & gt 'anushaptbr','brotherroom'
+		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		act 'Let''s check on your brother': AnushkaLoc = 3 & gt 'anushaptbr', 'brotherroom'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -358,8 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'anushapt', $ARGS[0]
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
-	gs 'stat'
-	
+	gs 'stat'	
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'The bathroom has seen better days. It looks like it hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time, with mold growing in the corners of the walls and floor.'
@@ -367,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
 	*nl
 	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'
-	act 'Leave the bathroom': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+	act 'Leave the bathroom': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	act 'Take a shower':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -383,7 +414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showergetout.jpg"></center>'
 				'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head, but you look out at him in consternation.'
 				'He looks up at you when you question him. It takes him a moment to realize who you are and he quickly zips up his pants. "Shit sorry... I thought you were my wife." He turns away and hurries for the door. "I''ll just be going... Sorry again." he says as he pulls the door closed. Unsure about what to think, you just decide to finish your shower.'
-				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 			end
 			if pcs_inhib >= 50:
 				act 'Give him a show':
@@ -395,7 +426,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 					'He is a bit surprised at first. "Oh sorry... I thought you were my wife." His eyes roam up and down your naked body as he pulls out his dick and starts to piss in the toilet. "Don''t mind me. Just get back to your shower." he adds with a smirk.'
 					*nl
 					'You keep showering with the curtain open while glancing at him every now and then, but after his first once over, he doesn''t really pay you much attention. Once he is done, he washes his hands and leaves. He closes the door behind him without even another glance at your naked body. You decide to continue with your shower, and you don''t have any more surprises after that.'
-					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 				end
 			end
 		elseif temp = 1 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 5:
@@ -410,10 +441,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 				else
 					'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head. "Get out of here you little pervert!"'
 					'He just laughs at you and keeps watching.'
-					'"Get out of her or I will tell your sister... or you dad." You tell him.'
+					'"Get out of here or I will tell your sister... or your dad." You tell him.'
 					'You see a flicker of fear in his eyes at the mention of his sister a lot when you mention his dad, he gives you a angry glare before closing the door leaving you in peace.'
 				end
-				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 			end
 			if pcs_inhib >= 50:
 				act 'Give him a show':
@@ -422,7 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showershow.jpg"></center>'
 					'Looking straight at him, you give him a smile. You pull the curtain wide open to give him the perfect view of your naked, wet, supple body. His eyes grow wide and he wastes no time, quickly coming into the bathroom, pulling the door closed behind him. After a few minutes of just watching you, you notice him pulling out his phone and trying to take a picture. You immediately shake your head at him. "No pictures or I will tell your sister that you snuck in here and started taking pictures of me in the shower." He doesn''t say anything, but gives you a look that''s a mixture of disgust, annoyance and fear at the mention of his sister.'
 					'He just settles in, enjoying watching you shower and dry yourself off. As you start getting dressed, you shoo him out of the room before finishing up.'
-					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -432,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 			act 'Take a selfie':
 				gs 'telefon', 'Phone_selfie_image_bathing', 'shower'
 			end
-			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt', 'bathroom'
 		end
 		if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 		killvar 'temp'
@@ -449,8 +480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushshower':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'anushapt', $ARGS[0]
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
-	gs 'stat'
-	
+	gs 'stat'	
 	AnushkaLoc = 7
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom/dry1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -527,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushshower':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/anushka/6.jpg"></center>'
 										'She lets the towel completely drop away and turns to put one foot on the edge of the tub. This gives you a nice view of her backside.'
-										'"Yeah, show me that cute little ass!" you tell her as you take a couple of more pictures until she throws the towel at you.'
+										'"Yeah that''s it, work that cute little ass!" you tell her as you take a couple of more pictures until she throws the towel at you.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Continue':
@@ -576,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_wait':
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	act 'Get out of the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+	act 'Get out of the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	act 'Chat': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 end
 
@@ -612,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She laughs a bit. "No, but he doesn''t know that. However, if he doesn''t or he keeps being mean to you, come get me. I will kick his ass for you, OK?"'
 		'He nods all happy and gets up from the table. He tries to dart out of the room, but she manages to give him a one armed hug that he tries his best to squirm away from. He manages to finally break free, then he hurries out of the kitchen.'
 		'She stands up and looks at you. "Got everything?" When you nod, she says "Sweet, let''s go back to my room."'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	elseif snacktime <= 5 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
@@ -623,7 +653,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'Her dad frowns at that. "That''s not funny. You shouldn''t even joke about stuff like that."'
 		'Anushka grins. "Oh come on, it was a little funny."'
 		'He just sighs and shakes his head slightly, resigned to what his daughter is like. "So, do you girls want a sandwich?"'
-
 		act 'No':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -634,12 +663,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			*nl
 			'He rubs his hand over the top of his head. "I am well aware of how old you are. See all these gray hairs? I didn''t have any of them until you became a teenager."'
 			'Anushka rolls her eyes as she gets some snacks and drinks. "Right... and mom and those brats had nothing to do with it."'
-			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
+			'He smirks at her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
-			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
+			'Anushka looks back, and in an exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
 			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		end
-
 		act 'Yes':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -650,9 +678,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'He rubs his hand over the top of his head. "I am well aware of how old you are. See all these gray hairs? I didn''t have any of them until you became a teenager."'
 			*nl
 			'Anushka rolls her eyes as she gets some snacks and drinks. "Right... and mom and those brats had nothing to do with it."'
-			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
+			'He smirks at her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
-			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
+			'Anushka looks back, and in an exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
 			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		end
 	elseif snacktime <= 7 and anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 0:
@@ -694,7 +722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 					*nl
 					'Anushka walks over to the fridge and grabs two drinks plus a bag of chips. She grabs you by the arm and leads you out of the kitchen. As you walk out, she glances back at her mother to scream "Bitch!"'
 					'"It was great to meet you. I do hope to see you again, even though I doubt you''ll be back..." you hear Valeria sarcastically say as you''re leaving the kitchen.'
-					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -715,7 +743,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'Instead of getting angry, her mom just laughs. "You''re one to talk. We both know you''re a clingy, needy, little slut that will do anything to get anyone to pay attention to you. The only reason you''re in that band of yours is because you slept your way into it and continue to be their slut just so they will let you stay."'
 			'Anushka raises her hand like she might hit her mother. For a tense moment, you think she might, but then she lowers it. "You don''t know anything about me! You''ve never wanted to know anything about me! I fucking hate you! I wish you would just fucking leave if you hate it here so much!" With that, she turns and grabs some snacks. She pushes them into your hands so hard and fast that you are barely able to keep hold of them as she says "Come on, let''s go."'
 			'Her mother shakes her head. "That''s right! Go running to your room and cry like you have always done when you are faced with the truth. I can''t believe I raised such a pathetic excuse of a daughter."'
-			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -727,7 +755,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 					'You can''t take listening to Valeria talk about your friend like that anymore. "You''re wrong! Anushka is a better person than you will ever be! If you would just talk to her for once instead of at her, you might realize just how great she really is!"'
 					'Anushka smiles at you and obviously appreciates what you said. Her mom just gives you a look of complete disgust. "You must be another one of those disgusting lesbians." she says scornfully before shooting an equally disgusted look at her daughter. "It is so sinful and shameful, but I guess I can''t expect my daughter to hang out with anyone decent." With that, she turns back to her cooking.'
 					'Anushka grabs you by the arm before you can say more. "Come on, let''s go. She just isn''t worth it."'
-					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -740,7 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She gets up and heads to the kitchen with you, the two of you talking and laughing the whole way.'
 		'As you walk into the kitchen, Anushka points to a refrigerator. "Grab some drinks out of the fridge and anything else good."'
 		'While you are doing that, she grabs a couple of snack cakes and chips from the cabinets, and once you both have your spoils from your raid on the kitchen, you head back to her room.'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	end
 	killvar 'snacktime'
 end
@@ -762,7 +790,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	if livingev = 1 and anushkaQW['dad_mom_livingroom'] = 0 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		livingev_day = daystart
 		'As you start to walk into the living room, you overhear some muffled voices that are getting louder and louder as they go on... You notice that the door is ajar and sneak towards it to see if you can make out what is being said.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Listen in':
 			cla & *nl
 			anushkaQW['dad_mom_livingroom'] = 1
@@ -770,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 			'You see Valeria standing in front of the TV, yelling at Eduard. "I want to see that little bitch punished! And for real this time!!!"'
 			'Eduard sighs, clearly annoyed by Valeria being in the way. "What''s wrong now Valeria? I just want to relax and watch the TV..."'
 			'Valeria continues. "She''s undermining me in front of the boys! She talks back to me, and the boys are picking up on it. They''ve started doing it as well! So put a fucking stop to it, or else I''ll do it for you!"'
-			'Eduard frowns at her. "You''ll do what?! You''re not the better influence either, calling your own daughter a slut, a whore, and God knows what else while the boys overhear you. They repeat it to Anushka and call her names. What is wrong with you? God dammit, she''s your own daughter!" Eduard screams back at her.'
+			'Eduard frowns at her. "You''ll do what?! You''re not the better influence here, calling your own daughter a slut, a whore, and God knows what else while the boys overhear you. They repeat it to Anushka and call her names. What is wrong with you? God dammit, she''s your own daughter!" Eduard screams back at her.'
 			'"Like I care about that little whore... She needs to be put in her place and I want you to do something for once! Enough with this daddy''s little princess shit!" she says scoffingly.'
 			'You worry about getting caught, so you sneak away from the door without making a noise.'
 			act 'Leave the room':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
@@ -820,7 +848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 						'"We should be on our way <<$pcs_nickname>>." Anushka whispers, then nudges you.'
 						'"Sure. It was nice to meet you." you say.'
 						'He raises his arm as he''s too into the program on the TV to answer by now.'
-						act 'Move away': AnushkaLoc = 1 & gt'anushapt', 'hallway'
+						act 'Move away': AnushkaLoc = 1 & gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -830,8 +858,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				gs 'stat'
-				edtalk = rand(1,5)
-				if edtalk = 1:
+				if anushkaQW['edtalk'] = 0:
+					anushkaQW['edtalk'] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
 					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
 					'An agitated Eduard calls you over. "Call me Ed. Come here <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need to ask you about something."'
@@ -848,7 +876,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							*nl
 							'You try to defend Anushka and yourself. "We both just know what we want, and we''re not afraid to enjoy life how we want, but we are the ones that call the shots. We are not just some boy toys to be passed around."'
 							'He sighs and leans back in the chair, looking a bit defeated with a worried look on his face. "Well, you''re not my daughter, and she is old enough to make her own decisions. I just hope the both of you don''t end up like..." He suddenly trails off, looking at you as if he had more to say.'
-							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							if momslut >= 1:
 								act 'End up like my mom?':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -857,7 +885,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 									'He nods a bit. "Yeah, I don''t mean anything by it... but your mom had one hell of a rep when she was younger, and it has followed her for her whole life. That is something I would like you and my daughter to avoid. I know it''s not fair, but that''s just the way it is."'
 									'It wouldn''t hurt to try and ease his mind a bit. "Don''t worry, we like to have fun, but we know better than to take things too far."'
 									'He sighs and nods, more in acceptance of things he can''t control than anything else.'
-									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -871,7 +899,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								'You look him straight in the eye and coldly say "I don''t know where those rumors came from. Someone must be talking behind our backs and trying to make us look bad. There''s no reason for us to act like that."'
 								'You''re still not sure if Eduard bought it or not, but he sighs despairingly. "I''ll take your word for it for now, but I''ll ask around some more to get to the bottom of this! There''s some explaining needing done here!" he says as he cracks his knuckles.'
 								'You let out a faint sigh of relief as he returns to his normal self.'
-								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Lie (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -887,7 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							*nl
 							'You try and defend Anushka. "She knows what she wants and isn''t afraid to enjoy life how she wants, but she never lets anyone take advantage of her. That is, unless she wants to take advantage of them."'
 							'He sighs and leans back in the chair, looking a bit defeated with a worried look on his face. "Well, she is old enough to make her own decisions. I just hope she doesn''t end up like..." He suddenly trails off, looking at you as if he has more to say.'
-							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							if momslut >= 1:
 								act 'End up like my mom?':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -896,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 									'He nods a bit. "Yeah, I don''t mean anything by it... but your mom had one hell of a rep when she was younger, and it has followed her for her whole life. That is something I would like my daughter to avoid. I know it''s not fair, but that''s just the way it is."'
 									'It wouldn''t hurt to try and ease his mind a bit. "Don''t worry she likes to have fun, but she knows better than to take things too far."'
 									'He sighs and nods, more in acceptance of things he can''t control than anything else.'
-									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -910,17 +938,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								'You look him straight in the eye and coldly say "I don''t know where those rumors came from. Someone must be talking behind her back and trying to make her look bad. There''s no reason for her to act like that."'
 								'You''re still not sure if Eduard bought it or not, but he sighs despairingly. "I''ll take your word for it for now, but I''ll ask around some more to get to the bottom of this! There''s some explaining needing done here." he says as he cracks his knuckles.'
 								'You let out a faint sigh of relief as he returns to his normal self.'
-								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Lie (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 						end
 					end
-				elseif edtalk <= 3:
+				elseif anushkaQW['edtalk'] = 1:
+					anushkaQW['edtalk'] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
 					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
 					'He turns to look at you and gives you a friendly smile. "Call me Ed. I have no idea where that girl is, but you can check her room if you want. If she''s not there, then there is no telling where she is." he says, sounding somewhat sad and worried.'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					act 'Is everything ok?':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
@@ -943,14 +972,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 								act 'Tell her I stopped by':
 									*clr & cla
 									'You nod and know how he feels. There''s no point in waiting for her since she could be gone for hours. "Thanks, you can just tell her I stopped by."'
-									act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+									act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 								end
 								act 'Thanks, I''ll wait':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 									'"Make yourself at home." he says with a small smile. "Just a bit of advice... if you can, avoid that... that..." Ed hesitates and grinds his teeth while he struggles to find the right words. "That woman... to put it nicely... She is always looking for a reason to pick a fight and argue with someone. Honestly, if it weren''t for the kids..." He trails off before falling silent for a few moments. You think he may have forgotten who he was talking to or that you''re even in the room, but eventually his expression softens.'
 									'"Just do your best to stay out of her way alright? You seem nice, and I''d hate to see her drive off another of Nush''s friends, especially one that could be a good influence on her."'
-									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -965,14 +994,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							'He shakes his head. "Enough of my depressing talk. There is no telling when she might be home. You''re free to wait for her in her room if you want, or I can tell her you stopped by when I see her next?"'
 							act 'Tell her I stopped by':
 								'You nod and know how he feels. There''s no point waiting for her. She could be gone for hours. "Thanks, let her know I stopped by. Bye."'
-								act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+								act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 							end
 							act 'Thanks I''ll wait':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 								'"Make yourself at home." he says with a small smile. "Just a bit of advice... if you can, avoid that... that..." Ed hesitates and grinds his teeth while he struggles to find the right words. "That woman... to put it nicely... She is always looking for a reason to pick a fight and argue with someone. Honestly, if it weren''t for the kids..." He trails off before falling silent for a few moments. You think he may have forgotten who he was talking to or that you''re even in the room, but eventually his expression softens.'
 								'"Just do your best to stay out of her way alright? You seem nice, and I''d hate to see her drive off another of Nush''s friends, especially one that could be a good influence on her."'
-								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -983,7 +1012,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 					'You nod. "Ok thanks, sorry to have bothered you. I''ll be quiet so you can watch your show."'
 					*nl
 					'Eduard just laughs. "We have three kids running around here, so there''s no need for that. Besides, if I saw you trying to be quiet and sneaking around, I would think you were up to something. Nush taught me long ago that if you see a kid being quiet or suddenly going quiet, it means that they are up to something." He shakes his head with a fond smile. "That does remind me of a time when Nush was younger..." He trails off and looks up at you. "Don''t mind me, I''m just reminiscing. I''m sure you''re not interested in hearing about that."'
-					act 'It''s fine, I would love to hear a story':gt 'anushapt', 'nushkidstory'
+					if anushkaQW['kidstory'] < 5:
+						act 'It''s fine, I would love to hear a story':gt 'anushapt', 'nushkidstory'
+					end
 					act 'Make an excuse':
 						cla & *clr
 						minut += 2
@@ -991,7 +1022,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 						'You shake your head. "I''m really sorry, but I should get going. Can I get a rain check for another time?"'
 						'He nods his head and says "Sure... sure... you have better stuff to do than listening to me. Go, go!"'
 						'You nod then say your goodbyes and quickly leave.'
-						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1004,7 +1035,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/living.jpg"></center>'
 				if rand(1,2) = 1:
 					'You turn and carefully tread out of the living room while Eduard is busy watching the TV. You quietly make it to the doorway to enter the hallway. With a final glance back, you see he is still sitting there watching TV, not having noticed you coming in at all.'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 				else
 					'You walk very carefully towards the door since you don''t want to make too much noise and disturb Eduard.'
 					'All of a sudden, you hear him clearing his throat. "Sneaking around are we?"'
@@ -1018,7 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 						'You shake your head. "I''m really sorry, but I should get going. Can I get a rain check for another time?"'
 						'He nods his head and says, "Sure... sure... you have better stuff to do than listening to me. Go, go!"'
 						'You nod then say your goodbyes and quickly leave...'
-						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1055,7 +1086,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Well it was nice talking to you, but I should likely get back to Anushka." you tell him.'
 							'He smiles a little. "Yeah, I wouldn''t want her wondering where you got off to. You girls have fun." he says before he turns back to the TV.'
-							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1084,7 +1115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
 	if kitchenev = 1 and anushkaQW['dad_mom_kitchen'] = 0 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		'As you start to enter the kitchen, you overhear some muffled voices that are getting louder and louder as they go on... You notice that the door is ajar and sneak towards it to see if you can make out what is being said.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Listen':
 			*clr & cla
 			anushkaQW['dad_mom_kitchen'] = 1
@@ -1098,11 +1129,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 			'"So what? Didn''t you have a similar reputation when you were seeing me?" he asks.'
 			'"You''re really getting on my nerves right now Eduard! You know what I''m capable of doing..." She crosses her arms as she turns her eyes towards a knife that''s lying on the kitchen counter...'
 			'Feeling that this is getting out of hand, you quietly move away from the door and start walking back down the hallway as the yelling continues behinds you.'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
 	else
 		'The room is not clean, and there are dishes on most of the available surfaces. The wood floor is not polished and only covers the areas being used. You''re surprised by the lack of a dining table.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Look in the fridge': gt 'anushapt', 'fridge'
 		dynamic $fill_bottle
 		dynamic $driwater
@@ -1220,7 +1251,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 	menu_off = 0
-
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'shortgs', 'setloc', 'anushapt', $ARGS[0]
 	minut += 1
@@ -1230,7 +1260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 	'The room is fairly barren. What is in here is disorganized and untidy, with everything all over the place. You see that there is a bed, a bookshelf and a dresser with a TV on it. The dresser appears to be cheaply manufactured and poorly constructed. Even though it''s minimally furnished, the room is still quite dirty.'
 	if hour < 7:
 		'You look into the bedroom and see Anushka''s parents asleep. They are both on the edge of their side of the bed, as far apart as the bed allows. You don''t want to disturb them, so you close the door and leave.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	elseif anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 1 and rand(0,1) = 0:
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1242,19 +1272,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 			act 'Ask about the band':gt 'anushapt', 'band'
 			act 'Photo album':gt 'anushapt', 'album'
 			act 'Ask about Alyona': gt 'anushapt', 'alyona_ask'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	else
 		'Since nobody''s here, you should probably leave, but you could take a look around if you''re curious.'
-		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+		act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		act 'Look around':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s parent''s room</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/momsdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 			'You snoop around, opening drawers and looking in the closet, but you don''t find anything of interest. The room is too disorganized for you to find much. The only thing of note is a vibrator with a large pack of batteries in one of the night stands.'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1272,8 +1302,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'band':
 		'Valeria turns serious. "Yeah, I mean if I were in her shoes I wouldn''t give two shits about the others and focus all my energy on Radomir."'
 		'"Anushka is a fool for not latching onto Radomir. Just look at him, perfect body and he''s a really talented musician. He''ll probably amount to something big. She''s really stupid for not latching onto him while she still can, before he makes it big and leaves her behind."'
 		'You can''t even get a word in as she just keeps talking with a dreamy sigh. "Just think about the life she could have living with a big rock star. Hell if I was younger, I would''ve made sure that Radomir was all mine."'
+		*nl
 		'"What about being free and living your own life just like she''s doing right now?" you ask.'
 		'She looks at you as if you just asked the most stupid question ever. "Who gives a fuck? I can''t for the life of me understand why any woman would want that instead of having a man provide the perfect life. She would be free to do whatever, like just party, spend his money, and do whatever she wants." Valeria replies.'
+		if anushkaQW['raddate'] = 2:
+			act 'Point out Radomir broke up with Anushka':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Um you do know Rad broke up with Nush, not the other way around." You tell her.'
+				'She gives you a look like you are an idiot. "I know what my darling daughter claims, most likely she was sleeping around and cheating on him."'
+				'You frown at that. "Actually Rad was cheating on her and she kept forgiving him."'
+				'She now looks annoyed. "No man is going to break up with a girl if she keeps forgiving him for cheating, then he can have his cake and eat it too. What nonsense."'
+				'You decide to push it a bit more. "Rad is the one that told me this."'
+				'She just shakes her head. "Oh I am sure he did, but if she wasn''t cheating she probably got all clinging and smothering with him, constantly being jealous anytime a girl even looked at him. Men don''t like that and she had to know with his talent he was going to attract girls. She should have done a better job making him happy and then he wouldn''t have had to break up with him. If she was smart she would do everything in her power to win him back, while she can."'
+				'You just sigh, you can tell there is nothing you can say that will convince her otherwise. So you decided it would be best to just change the topic.'
+				act 'Leave':
+					killvar 'nush_band'
+					killvar 'nush_album'
+					gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+				end
+				if nush_album = 0: act 'Ask about the photo album':gt 'anushapt', 'album'
+				act 'Bring up Alyona':gt 'anushapt', 'alyona_ask'
+				act 'How about the other bandmates?':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
+					'Valeria looks at you confused and begins to laugh. "Who? You mean the other two losers that are in the band? Don''t make me laugh, because they''re nothing compared to Radomir."'
+					'"Maybe you should just let her choose for herself." you answer.'
+					'"Listen here <<$pcs_nickname>>, I might not give two shits about Anushka, but the best outcome for me-" she stops and takes a deep breath. "For her I mean... is to hook up with Radomir and that''s the end of the story."'
+					'Seeing you''re not getting anywhere with Valeria you sigh, say goodbye, and turn around to leave.'
+					act 'Leave':
+						killvar 'nush_band'
+						killvar 'nush_album'
+						gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+					end
+					if nush_album = 0: act 'Ask about the photo album':gt 'anushapt', 'album'
+					act 'Bring up Alyona':gt 'anushapt', 'alyona_ask'
+				end
+			end
+		end
 		act 'How about the other bandmates?':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1297,7 +1363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'album':
 	*clr & cla
 	nush_album = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'There is an photo album on the nightstand that''s next to the bed. You walk up, open it up, and look at the photos inside. "Is that your family?"'
+	'There is a photo album on the nightstand that''s next to the bed. You walk up, open it up, and look at the photos inside. "Is that your family?"'
 	'In a rare occurrence, Valeria almost seems to smile as she picks up the old album and starts to look through the photos of her and her family.'
 	'"We all looked so happy then..." she says. "It was a whole different world back then. Come and have a look."'
 	'You sit next to her as she flips through the photo album. All of a sudden, you notice something...'
@@ -1305,7 +1371,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'album':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Is that who I think it is?" you ask smiling as you see a picture of a young Anushka running around completely naked.'
-		'"It sure is. She''s my first born. She should have been my pride and joy, but something happened that just made that girl hardheaded and stupid."'
+		'"It sure is. She''s my firstborn. She should have been my pride and joy, but something happened that just made that girl hardheaded and stupid."'
 		'She continues on. "Anushka''s has always been quite the exhibitionist. I remember her being around two or three years old and I was trying to make her wear clothes. As soon as I turned my back, she was always taking her clothes off and running around naked. It didn''t matter if we had someone over or if we were outside in public. She grew up, but didn''t change. Now she whores around, instead of focusing on trying to find a man to take care of her. It doesn''t matter what I tell her. She thinks she knows it all, the snotty little bitch." Her tone quickly changed from friendly to anger.'
 		*nl
 		'You debate saying anything, but feel you have to. "Maybe she wants to be her own woman and lead her own life without having to have a guy take care of her?"'
@@ -1393,8 +1459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushlivroom':
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/tv/tv_watch_1.jpg"></center>'
 		'The two of you watch some cheesy American action movie. You chat about how nice it will be when you are on your own without always having people around and parents telling you what to do. You barely pay attention to the movie as you talk. In fact, it ends, and something else comes on that you don''t even remember. After a couple of hours though, you hear keys in the lock of the door and Anushka says "Shit they''re home already. Come on let''s go." As she gets up and heads to her room, her brothers come running by on the way to theirs. They are quickly followed by Valeria complaining about where they ate. Ed walks by and gives you a slight nod, then goes into the kitchen.'
-
-		act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+		act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	end
 	if strapnumber > 0:
 		act 'Pull out your strap-on':
@@ -1418,7 +1483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushlivroom':
 					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/tv/tv_watch_1.jpg"></center>'
 					'The two of you watch some cheesy American action movie. You chat about how nice it will be when you are on your own without always having people around and parents telling you what to do. You barely pay attention to the movie as you talk. In fact, it ends, and something else comes on that you don''t even remember. After a couple of hours though, you hear keys in the lock of the door and Anushka says "Shit they''re home already. Come on, let''s go." As she gets up and heads to her room, her brothers come running by on the way to theirs. They are quickly followed by Valeria complaining about where they ate. Ed walks by and gives you a slight nod, then goes into the kitchen.'
-					act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Follow Anushka to her room': gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1431,35 +1496,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushkidstory':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
-	nushkidstory = rand(1,4)
-	if nushkidstory = 1:
+	anushkaQW['kidstory'] += 1
+	if anushkaQW['kidstory'] = 1:
 		'The corner of Eduard''s mouth turns upwards as he starts. "I remember one autumn day when I was out in the garage and our car was in there. I had just given it a tuneup. Nush had helped me until she got bored and started running around as usual trying to find trouble. I think she was about eight at the time." He shakes his head in amusement as he remembers it.'
 		'"As usual." you reply as a smile spreads across your face and Eduard gives you a relatable look. "So all of a sudden she disappears somewhere. I remember her playing around with my jacket. Before you know it, I hear the car start, and off it goes! Nush is sitting in the drivers seat with a huge grin on her face, driving towards the garage door on the opposite side..."'
+		*nl
 		'You gasp as he continues. "Don''t worry. I start yelling at her to stop and she hits the brakes. She manages to stop less than a meter from the other garage. I don''t know how she was able to reach the pedals while being able to see over the dashboard. Anyways, I''m pissed, and I yank open the door to really lay into her. However, she is sitting there all sad. She knows she did something wrong and she looks up at me with those big puppy eyes..." he says sighing. "I couldn''t do anything as my anger just melted away. I just pulled her out and got in the car to back it back into the garage."'
 		*nl
 		'"This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense. My mom would have tanned my hide if I had done that!" you comment.'
 		'He nods a little. "Yeah, I should have been harder on her when she was growing up. Maybe it would have curbed her wilder ways now." He shakes his head. "She has always managed to wrap me around her little finger, and with just a look, melt away my anger to make me a better man."'
-		'You give him an awww look, and he clears his throat. "Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble is my Nush." Eduard responds. With that, you can tell he is done with telling stories, at least for now. "Well thank you for telling me. I loved hearing about it. Anyways, I should get going." you tell him, and he nods to you as you leave the living room.'
-	elseif nushkidstory = 2:
+		'You give him an awww look, and he clears his throat. "Yeah, anyways the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble is my Nush." Eduard responds. With that, you can tell he is done with telling stories, at least for now. "Well thank you for telling me. I loved hearing about it. Anyways, I should get going." you tell him, and he nods to you as you leave the living room.'
+	elseif anushkaQW['kidstory'] = 2:
 		'The corner of Eduard''s mouth turns upwards as he starts. "I remember one of those warm spring days while Anushka was in preschool. She was creating havoc most likely. On this day, I was helping out at home looking after the baby when all of a sudden the phone rings and it''s the preschool..."'
 		'"You must''ve gotten lots of those back in the days!" you reply smiling and Eduard rolls his eyes. "I pick up the phone and there''s a hysterical teacher on the other side. She starts yelling that Nush is gone and that they can''t find her anywhere..."'
+		*nl
 		'You gasp as he continues. "I go to the preschool and join in the search. I even call some of my friends to help us look. The preschool even calls the police after a few hours." The way he says police sounds like he wants to spit the word. "Anyways... one of my friends finds her out near the palace. We still don''t know how she got there. When he brings her back, I ask what the hell she was doing and why she went off..." He sighs. "She just shrugs her shoulders and says that she felt like exploring the town. Turns out, my friend tells me, that she was conning tourists out of sweets then giving them bad directions. Apparently, she thought it was funny. That is until she got sick from eating too many sweets after I took her home. She threw up all over the place."'
+		*nl
 		'You continue on talking for a while about Anushka''s adventures while she was younger. "This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense." you comment.'
-		'"Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
-	elseif nushkidstory = 3:
+		'"Yeah, anyways the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
+	elseif anushkaQW['kidstory'] = 3:
 		'The corner of Eduard''s mouth turns upwards as he starts. "This is a good story, so Nush used to like playing games when she was younger. I bought a used PlayStation and she just loved it. She spent all her time on it for a while and always wanted the newest games for it. Anyways, some of the kids from the neighborhood had been talking about this new game that was just about to get released, so of course, she comes running and asks for me to buy it..."'
 		'"Quite spoiled." you reply as you smile and Eduard gives you a relatable look. "Here comes the best part. So I tell her that we can''t afford it right now. At first she pouts, but she quickly stops and leaves the room. She never was much of a pouter. After about 30 minutes, we hear the door slam shut and the house goes really quiet..."'
+		*nl
 		'You smile as he continues. "So what did my dear daughter do? Well, she took her little brother down the street and tried to sell him for the same price as that game cost. Luckily a neighbor walked past and had the two of them follow her home. This was after she promised that she would think about buying Maksim."'
 		'"I about hit the roof when the neighbor brings them back and tells us what happened. My wife gets hysterical about it... Anyways I start yelling at Nush asking her why she would do that. As calmly as you please, she explains if she sold him I wouldn''t have to pay for the game. Since we wouldn''t have to feed him, then we would have more money for more games." He shakes his head laughing. "That''s when I knew she wasn''t just going to be trouble like most kids, but that she was too smart for her own good."'
+		*nl
 		'You continue on talking for a while about Anushka''s adventures while she was younger. "This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense." you comment.'
-		'"Yeah, anyways, the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
+		'"Yeah, anyways, the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
 	else
-		'"Nush has always liked to take bike rides with me, specially when she was younger." he starts reminiscing. "So this one time we are riding along with her on the back of the bike. She was ten at the time I think. I was already going fast, and she was yelling to go faster... faster all the time."'
+		'"Nush has always liked to take bike rides with me, especially when she was younger." he starts reminiscing. "So this one time we are riding along with her on the back of the bike. She was ten at the time I think. I was already going fast, and she was yelling to go faster... faster all the time."'
 		'"I guess you listened?" you ask, but you already know what the answer will be.'
 		'Eduard starts laughing. "Well, of course, so we''re going way too fast and Nush is screaming out of joy when all of a sudden a police car appears behind us and pulls us over. The police officer and I are having a talk and all of a sudden, he turns towards Nush, and what does she do? Sticks out her tongue and flips him off. She was mad because he ruined her fun you see..."'
+		*nl
 		'You gasp as he continues laughing. "Luckily the police officer and I knew each other. He was a decent sort and just laughed it off. He petted her on her head and commented that she was going to be a real handful when she grew up. Boy was he right..." Eduard starts laughing.'
 		'You continue on talking for a while about Anushka''s adventures while she was younger. "This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense." you comment.'
-		'"Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
+		'"Yeah, anyways the little free-spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'
 	end
 	killvar 'nushkidstory'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'

locations/anushaptbr.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
 # anushaptbr
+!!2024/04/03
+!!maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1 - tracks the stage of his overall questline
+!!maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1 - tracks how many times Sveta has been blackmailed after agreeing to it
+!!maksimQW['blackmail'] = 1 = shows if Sveta has agreed to be blackmailed
+!!maksimQW['nush_games'] += 1 shows how many times Sveta and Nush have played her brothers in video games
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	$menu_loc = 'anushaptbr'
@@ -10,16 +15,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It''s fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in various piles. Two beds are crammed against opposite walls, leaving an open space in the center. There is a small TV on a stand in the room with a PlayStation console lying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'
-	
-	act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
-	
+	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It''s fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in various piles. Two beds are crammed against opposite walls, leaving an open space in the center. There is a small TV on a stand in the room with a PlayStation console lying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'	
+	act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'	
 	if AnushkaLoc = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 0:
 		maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear and anger. Maksim, the older brother, is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they are doing and look towards you in fear and anger. Maksim, the older brother, is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
 		'Maksim gathers some courage before speaking. "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
 		*nl
 		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see what you were up to because I know you little shitheads are always up to something!" Anushka quickly replies.'
@@ -27,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		'Anushka reaches out and slaps him on the back of the head. "Watch what you say, or I''ll beat your little ass!"'
 		*nl
 		'He rubs the back of his head. "That''s what mother always says."'
-		'Anushka fumes. "Fuck that bitch and don''t listen to her. You better listen to dad, you little asshole!"'
+		'Anushka fumes. "Fuck that bitch and don''t listen to her. You better off listen to dad, you little asshole!"'
 		'He just rolls his eyes and ignores her. "Don''t tell me... Is this one of the famous groupies that we''ve heard so many stories about?" he asks while looking at you.'
 		act 'Excuse me?':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -36,9 +39,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 			'"What do you mean?" you ask.'
-			'"We hear a lot of great stories about the band and its groupies from Radomir," he answers.'
+			'"We hear a lot of great stories about the band and its groupies from Rad," he answers.'
 			'"Don''t listen to him! He''s just making most of that stuff up to impress you!" Anushka snaps.'
-			'"Well, at least we can hope this groupie is better than Alyona."'
+			'"Well, at least we can hope this groupie is better than Alyona." Maksim says.'
 			act 'Why''s that?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
@@ -47,23 +50,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 				'"She''s really mean to us! She always beats me up and won''t play games with us," Maksim says as he looks at you sadly. Timofey nods in agreement.'
 				'"If you stop trying to film her while she''s taking a shower, maybe she wouldn''t be kicking your ass, you little pervert!" Anushka interjects.'
-				'"Your brothers are really something else. I guess even boys at this age think with their smaller head," you reply.'
+				'"Your brothers are really something else. I guess even boys at this age think with their smaller heads," you reply.'
 				*nl
 				'Anushka nods in agreement. "Yeah, most of them are slaves to their lust, even if they''re too young to even understand it yet."'
 				'Maksim puffs up. "I''m not too young!"'
-				'Anushka laughs at him and turns to you. "Maybe I should tell my dad what they''re up to?"'
+				'Anushka laughs at him and turns to you. "Maybe I should tell Dad what they''re up to?"'
 				act 'Laugh':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 					'The brothers are looking at the two of you in total fear as Anushka continues. "Look at them! They''re scared shitless!"'
 					'Maksim is fuming with anger and starts yelling. "Get out of our room!"'
 					'When you and Anushka just keep laughing, he and Timofey get up and push you out the door.'
-					act 'Leave': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anushapt','hallway'
+					act 'Leave': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 				end
 			end
 		end
-	elseif AnushkaLoc = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1:
-		if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2
+	elseif AnushkaLoc = 3 and maksimQW['nush_games'] = 0:
+		maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1
+		maksimQW['nush_games'] = 1
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -72,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		'Maksim glances at his brother for a moment, then back at Anushka. "All of us?"'
 		*nl
 		'She nods. "That''s the plan. The two of us against the two of you."'
-		'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard, and we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+		'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great, because we are getting really good at this game!"'
 		'"You really think you can beat me this time? You got your asses handed to you the last time!" Anushka quickly replies while smiling.'
 		'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
 		act 'What''s this all about?':
@@ -80,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them. I always beat their asses."'
+			'"Oh don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them. I always beat their asses." Anushka explains.'
 			'"Not this time!" Maksim looks at the two of you determined.'
 			act 'Sit down and play':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -97,14 +101,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-						'The game is pretty much over. Both of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1
+						'The game is pretty much over. Both of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers easily manage to win the first game, they have a big lead during the second game when Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed, he manages to get back up. It gives you a chance but Timofey manages to keep you from taking advantage of it, despite Anushka trying to cheat the brothers manage to win again.'
+						'Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose! Even if you did try and cheat, loser!" Maksim taunts.'
 						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "You just got lucky is all."'
 						'"You suck, you suck!" Maksim chants and Timofey quickly joins in. "Losers, losers!"'
 						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like jackasses anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-						'You start to get a handle on things, and for a while, the game is pretty much a draw with no team getting the upper hand. All of a sudden however, you make a mistake, and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory though, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. This allows her to secure the win while he''s trying to recover.'
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2
+						'You start to get a handle on things, and for a while, the game is pretty much a draw with no team getting the upper hand. All of a sudden, however, you make a mistake, and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory though, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. This allows her to secure the win while he''s trying to recover.'
 						'He immediately starts yelling. "You cheated! You always do this when you''re about to lose!"'
-						'"Yeah, Anushka''s a cheater!" Timofey chimes in.'
+						'"Yeah, Nush''s a cheater!" Timofey chimes in.'
 						'"Don''t be such a crybaby! I thought you said you were prepared this time?" she says, teasing them with a smile on her face.'
 						*nl
 						'The comment only makes the situation worse, and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka and taking it way too seriously. After a while, Anushka gets fed up with them and starts yelling back.'
@@ -113,13 +120,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 						'"But dad nothing. Weren''t you supposed to be studying?" Eduard asks.'
 						*nl
 						'"Y-Yes..." both brothers answer.' 
-						'"Well get to it!" he says to them, then turns to you and Anushka. "You two get out of their room. And stop tormenting your brothers, Nush!" He holds the door open until you both leave, then pulls it shut hard.'
+						'"Well get to it!" he says to them, then turns to you and Anushka. "You two get out of their room and stop tormenting your brothers, Nush!" He holds the door open until you both leave, then pulls it shut hard.'
 						'Anushka starts to respond, but Eduard interrupts her. "I don''t care! Leave them alone so they can study. Take your friend to your room." With that, he turns and goes back to the living room.'
 					else
-						'While it''s your first time playing, you manage to hold your own, and with Anushka''s skill, it becomes clear you two have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 3
+						'While it''s your first time playing, you manage to hold your own, and with Anushka''s skill, it becomes clear you two have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both games.'
 						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
 						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are too good!"'
-						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again," she says teasingly and sticks her tongue out at him.'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again!" she says teasingly and sticks her tongue out at him.'
 						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka. "GO SUCK A DICK! THAT''S ALL <i>YOU''RE</i> GOOD AT, SLUT!" he screams at her.'
 						*nl
 						'Anushka''s eyes narrow. "Watch your mouth, you little shit! It''s just a game!"'
@@ -129,21 +137,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 						*nl
 						'Eduard turns and glares at Anushka. "Stop teasing your brothers and go to your room." When she starts to open her mouth, he cuts her off. "I don''t want to hear it. Go to your room!" With that, she gets up in a huff and does as she''s told. You follow behind her.'
 						'"What have I told you about calling your sister a slut?" you hear Eduard ask as you leave.'
-						'Maksim''s voices cracks. "I''m sorry..."'
+						'Maksim''s voice cracks. "I''m sorry..."'
 						'The door closes before you can hear any more, leaving you unable to make out anything beyond muffled sounds.'
 					end
-					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end	
 			end
 		end
 	elseif AnushkaLoc ! 3:
 		brotherroom = rand(1,6)
 		menu_off = 1
-		if brotherroom = 1 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 3:
-			if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 3: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 4
+		if brotherroom = 1 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1:
+			maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You open the door and look into the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting talking about something. Maksim is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
+			'You open the door and look into the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting and talking about something. Maksim is 13 or 14, the age when boys start paying attention to girls. Timofey is about a year or two younger.'
 			act 'What are you up to?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -186,9 +194,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					end	
 				end
 			end	
-		elseif brotherroom = 2 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 4:
+		elseif brotherroom = 2 and maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2:
 			gs 'stat'
-			if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 4: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 5
+			maksimQW['QWstage'] = 3
 			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see them fighting on Maksim''s bed. They immediately stop when they see you.'
 			act 'What are you doing?':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -206,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 					'You walk up to them and grab the magazine. Maksim tries his hardest to stop you, but you easily manage to push him away.'
-					'"Give that back! It''s mine!" he says dejected. "It''s all your fault!" he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
+					'"Give that back! It''s mine!" he says dejectedly. "It''s all your fault!" he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
 					'Timofey just keeps on sneering at his brother.'
 					act 'Calm down':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -216,16 +224,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 						'"It doesn''t have to be all bad," you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
 						'"Wow, two girls in one room? That''s so hot!" Maksim says. "Our sister is the only one with her own room. That''s so unfair!"'
 						'"She is a girl after all. Wouldn''t it be awkward if she shared a room with you?" you try to explain.'
-						'"I guess, but she could sleep in the living room, then we could each have our own room!" he says, as if that would be totally fair.'
+						'"I guess, but she could sleep in the living room, then we could each have our own room!" he says as if that would be totally fair.'
 						'Giving up on reasoning with him, you shrug and turn to the magazine. As you flip through the pages, you realize the boy has some kinky tastes and wonder who might have bought something like this for him. Whoever it was, you figure there''s no harm in him looking at pictures, so when you reach the end, you throw the magazine back onto his bed. "I won''t tell anyone your secret, but try to be nice to each other at least."'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end	
 			end
-		elseif brotherroom = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 2:
+		elseif brotherroom = 3 and maksimQW['QWstage'] >= 3:
+			maksimQW['QWstage'] = 4
 			gs 'stat'
-			if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 2: maksimQW['QWstage'] = 3
-			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim in there alone, playing some first person shooter on the PlayStation.'
+			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim in there alone, playing some first-person shooter on the PlayStation.'
 			act 'Ask where Timofey is':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -240,24 +248,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 3
 					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod while trying not to laugh. "Oh I see. Do you want to play a game with me then?"'
-					'It looks like he''s about to say no, but then he smiles. "Okay, but only if we make it interesting."'
-					'"Interesting how?" you ask.'
-					'He grins. "If I win, you have to show me your boobs, but if you win, I''ll tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
-					act 'I don''t think so':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 3
+					if maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] > 10:
+						maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+						inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/naked_video_games.jpg"></center>'
+						'You nod while trying not to laugh. "Oh, I see. Do you want to play a game with me then?"'
+						'It looks like he''s about to say no, but then he smiles. "Okay, but you have to play naked."'
+						'You shake your head. "I don''t think so." you tell him.'
+						'He grins. "Do it or I will tell Nush you were spying on her."'
+						*nl
+						'You sigh once more being blackmailed by a boy who is barely a teenager, how did you get yourself into this. "Fine!" With that, you strip out of your clothes and pick up one of the controllers. The two of you play a game but you easily beat him, as he spends the whole time staring at your naked body instead of paying attention to the game.'
+						'With him still staring at your naked body you decided you had enough for now. Getting up you get dressed. "Hey you don''t got to get dressed we can play another game." He says.'
+						'You shake your head. "Maybe some other day." Once you finish getting dressed you leave.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 15, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so..." you tell him.'
-						'He frowns. "Fine then! Get out of my room. Just get out!"'
-						'You back out of the doorway. "Okay... Okay, I''m going."'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
-					end
-					act 'Deal': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result'
-					if pcs_inhib > 30: act 'Deal (Go easy on Maksim)': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result', 1
-				end	
+					else
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
+						'You nod while trying not to laugh. "Oh I see. Do you want to play a game with me then?"'
+						'It looks like he''s about to say no, but then he smiles. "Okay, but only if we make it interesting."'
+						'"Interesting how?" you ask.'
+						'He grins. "If I win, you have to show me your boobs, but if you win, I''ll tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
+						act 'I don''t think so':
+							*clr & cla
+							minut += 3
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
+							'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so..." you tell him.'
+							'He frowns. "Fine then! Get out of my room. Just get out!"'
+							'You back out of the doorway. "Okay... Okay, I''m going."'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+						end
+						act 'Deal': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result'
+						if pcs_inhib > 30: act 'Deal (Go easy on Maksim)': gt 'anushaptbr', 'race_maksim_result', 1
+					end	
+				end
 			end
 		else
 			'You open the door and look into the brothers'' room. You see Maksim and Timofey are here, doing whatever it is that boys do. Maksim stares at your breasts for a few seconds before telling you to get lost.'
@@ -338,122 +365,291 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rematch':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	if rand(1,2) = 1:
+	if maksimQW['nush_games'] = 1:
 		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room and they immediately stop doing whatever they were doing. Maksim gathers some courage. "What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your breasts. "I see you brought your groupie with you again."'
 		'"I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
 		'Maksim glances at his brother for a moment, then back at Anushka. "Okay, fine."'
 		*nl
-		'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
-		'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "You really think you can beat me this time?"'
-		'The boys nod at each other. "We''re sure!"'
-		act 'Sit down and play':
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 15
-			gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1, 3)
-			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-			'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering. You''re sure that they must be planning something.'
-			'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you play for several minutes. It''s the same shooter game as last time, and you''re a little bit better than before.'
-			act 'Finish':
+		if maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1:
+			'Both of them get excited. "Even when you tried to cheat we won easily, we will again too!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "You really think you can beat us this time? Keep in mind it was <<$npc_nickname>> first time playing that game, you know how it takes time to learn a game."'
+			'Timofey looks concerned while Maksim looks confident. "Pfft, girls suck at video games."'
+			'Anushka grins a bit and continues in a teasing tone of voice. "Then we do I... a GIIIIRRRLLLL always beat you when it''s just us playing uh?"'
+			*nl
+			'Maksim looks mad and turns on her. "Cause you always cheat!"'
+			'Timofey is starting to look upset as his brother and sister start to fight so you speak up. "How about we just play then uh?"'
+			'Anushka nods to that. "Yeah let''s just play and see what happens."'
+			'Maksim still looks angry but nods. "Fine!"'
+		elseif maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2:
+			'Both of them get excited. "If you don''t cheat again, we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him with a teasing smiling. "If you are half as good as you think then it wouldn''t have mattered."'
+			'Maksim responds. "Shut up!"'
+			'Then Timofey chimes in, obviously not liking it when his brother and sister fight. "Can we play now?"'
+			'Anushka''s face instantly softens. "Yeah sure we can."'
+		else
+			'Both of them get excited. "Your friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "You really think you can beat us this time?"'
+			'The boys nod at each other. "We''re sure!"'
+			act 'Sit down and play':
 				*clr & cla
+				maksimQW['nush_games'] = 2
 				minut += 15
+				gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1, 3)
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'The game is pretty much over and both of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
-					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" This quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
-				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The game is pretty much a draw with no one getting the upper hand until Anushka starts to cheat again. She starts jabbing Maksim with her foot and covers Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try to return the favor, and soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting than actually winning the game. With everyone else distracted, you take advantage and win the match.'
-					'Realizing what happened, Maksim starts yelling. "Not fair! You cheated again!"'
-					'"You were doing the same to me, so you were cheating too!" Anushka replies, teasing them with a smile on her face.'
-					*nl
-					'Maksim doesn''t see it that way. "You started it, and your groupie took advantage of the situation!"'
-					'Anushka just laughs. "Well whose fault is that? If you weren''t so consumed with trying to get back at me, you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won."'
-					'"SHUT UP!" Maksim yells in response.'
-					'Anushka interjects before he can say more. "Be quiet! Do you want Dad to come in here again?"'
-					'He immediately goes quiet and glances at the door, as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When the moment passes, Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He''s loud, but not too loud.'
-					*nl
-					'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle. She quickly starts to get the upper hand because he just isn''t big enough to beat his older sister yet. Once it becomes clear she''s about to pin him down, Timofey jumps on her back and the three of them wrestle around. Anushka manages to pin one of them, but the other gets loose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinning her down, but in the end, they all just give up, out of breath and lying in a heap.'
-					'Finally, Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on, let''s go back to my room," she says to you. As you follow her out of the room, the brothers start to play another game. "We''ll win next time!" you hear Maksim say as Anushka closes the door on them.'
-				else
-					'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault that Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good!"'
-					'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive like always, which makes it easier for me to kill you. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again," she says in a teasing tone, then sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he''s about to scream at her again until she interjects. "Calm down, we don''t want Dad in here again." He shuts his mouth and glances at the door, then glares at Anushka.'
-					*nl
-					'"Get out! Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
-					'He pushes her towards the door. "Good, then don''t... Get out!"'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat!"'
-					*nl
-					'She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'"Fuck you, bitch! Get out of our room!" he starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
-					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "No, come back and play with us!" he pleads.'
-					'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
-				end
-				act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
-			end	
+				'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering. You''re sure that they must be planning something.'
+				'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. It''s the same shooter game as last time, and you''re a little bit better than before.'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1
+						'The game is pretty much over and both of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
+						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
+						'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
+						'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" This quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
+						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2
+						minut += 15
+						'The game is pretty much a draw with no one getting the upper hand until Anushka starts to cheat again. She starts jabbing Maksim with her foot and covers Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try to return the favor, and soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting than actually winning the game. With everyone else distracted, you take advantage and win the match.'
+						'Realizing what happened, Maksim starts yelling. "Not fair! You cheated again!"'
+						'"You were doing the same to me, so you were cheating too!" Anushka replies, teasing them with a smile on her face.'
+						*nl
+						'Maksim doesn''t see it that way. "You started it, and your groupie took advantage of the situation!"'
+						'Anushka just laughs. "Well, whose fault is that? If you weren''t so consumed with trying to get back at me, you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won."'
+						'"SHUT UP!" Maksim yells in response.'
+						'Anushka interjects before he can say more. "Be quiet! Do you want Dad to come in here again?"'
+						'He immediately goes quiet and glances at the door, as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When the moment passes, Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He''s loud, but not too loud.'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle. She quickly starts to get the upper hand because he just isn''t big enough to beat his older sister yet. Once it becomes clear she''s about to pin him down, Timofey jumps on her back and the three of them wrestle around. Anushka manages to pin one of them, but the other gets loose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinning her down, but in the end, they all just give up, out of breath and lying in a heap.'
+						'Finally, Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on, let''s go back to my room," she says to you. As you follow her out of the room, the brothers start to play another game. "We''ll win next time!" you hear Maksim say as Anushka closes the door on them.'
+					else
+						maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 3
+						'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault that Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good!"'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive like always, which makes it easier for me to kill you. You''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... Again!" she says in a teasing tone, then sticks her tongue out at him.'
+						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he''s about to scream at her again until she interjects. "Calm down, we don''t want Dad in here again." He shuts his mouth and glances at the door, then glares at Anushka.'
+						*nl
+						'"Get out! Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
+						'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+						'He pushes her towards the door. "Good, then don''t... Get out!"'
+						'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine, I won''t, you little brat!"'
+						*nl
+						'She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+						'"Fuck you, bitch! Get out of our room!" he starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
+						'Timofey runs up to his sister. "No, come back and play with us!" he pleads.'
+						'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
+						'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					end
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+				end	
+			end
 		end
-	else
+	elseif maksimQW['nush_games'] = 2:
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. As you do you hear moaning sounds, you have heard enough porn to recognize that sound. Maksim looks up with huge wide eyes like he was caught in the middle of something. He slams a small laptop closed and the sounds stop as he turns bright red, you notice Timofey is nowhere to be found. Anushka just stops a moment, she obviously knows the sounds as well as she says. "Just what was you doing you little pervert?"'
+		*nl
+		'He looks scared, angry and embarrassed all at once. "Nothing! Go away!" He says as he tries to hide the laptop, only making it more obvious. Anushka suddenly rushes across the room and jumps on his bed with him and starts trying to wrestle the laptop away from him. He puts up a decent fight but he still hasn''t hit his growth spurt yet and she manages to get it away from him. With one hand she holds him at bay, while she opens the laptop with the other. Within a moment the sounds start up again, you walk over to see and within moments it changes from movie to movie. A compilation of girls getting cum facials or cum shot into their mouths, only to then stick out their tongues showing the cum before swallowing it.'
+		*nl
+		'Anushka laughs when she looks at him. "Oh my god you little pervert, you better not be showing Timo this smut."'
+		'Maksim lunges and grabs the laptop back, Anushka lets him take it back as he closes it again. He is obviously embarrassed to be caught by his sister, looking at porn. "Shut up, you do that all the time, with every guy around."'
+		'All the humor leaves Anushka''s face. "Shut up you little bastard. I do not!"'
+		'Now he looks a little smug like he feels he is controlling things. "That''s not what mom says."'
+		'You think you almost hear Anushka growl at the mention of their mom. "Don''t listen to that cunt, she is just a stupid jealous cunt, who''s time is past and now she lashes out at everyone."'
+		*nl
+		'Now he looks more confident the more upset she gets. "Mom didn''t make you into a slut! You are just a slut, like most girls." The last bit he says while looking at you.'
+		'For a moment she pulls back her hand like she might slap him but then drops her hand, for a moment he looked scared when it looked like she might. "Stop listening to her, she lies all the time." She says in a more reasonable voice, obviously trying to calm down.'
+		'He regains his smug look when he is sure she isn''t going to smack him. "Yeah sure, I see all the boys leaving your room all the time, we can hear you through the wall, while they pound you stupid, stupider than you already are, you dumb slut."'
+		*nl
+		'Anushka''s anger flares back up but she just takes a deep breath and looks at Maksim and shakes her head. "No use trying to talk to you, but you better not be showing Timo that stuff or telling him this crap, or I will kick your ass next time." Maksim wisely clams up, seems even he knows he has pushed his sister as far as he safely can. Then she gets up and leads you out of the room. "God I fucking hate that cunt!" Obviously talking about her mother, as you go back to her room.'
+		act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+	elseif maksimQW['nush_games'] = 3:
 		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and Maksim visibly gathers up his courage. "What is it? What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your breasts. "I see you brought your groupie along again."'
-		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
-		'Both of them get excited. "Yeah, and this time we will beat you!"'
-		'"You really think you can beat us this time?" Anushka quickly replies while smiling. '
-		'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
-		'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so. Maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls?"'
-		'Maksim looks mad. "Just shut up and play!"' 
-		'Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a mutter that taunts him.'
+		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see if you guys wanted to play some more?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
+		if maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1:
+			'Both of them get excited. "Even when you tried to cheat we won easily, we will again too!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "Fine, I admit you have won, twice. But keep in mind it was <<$npc_nickname>> second time playing that game, you know how it takes time to learn a game."'
+			'Timofey looks concerned while Maksim looks confident. "Pfft, girls suck at video games."'
+			'Anushka grins a bit and continues in a teasing tone of voice. "Then why do I... a GGGIIIRRRLLL always beat you when it''s just us playing uh?"'
+			*nl
+			'Maksim looks mad and turns on her. "Cause you always cheat!"'
+			'Timofey is starting to look upset as his brother and sister start to fight so you speak up. "How about we just play then uh?"'
+			'Anushka nods to that. "Yeah let''s just play and see what happens."'
+			'Maksim still looks angry but nods. "Fine!"'
+		elseif maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2:
+			'Both of them get excited. "If you don''t cheat again, we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him with a teasing smile. "If you are half as good as you think then it wouldn''t have mattered."'
+			'Maksim responds. "Shut up!"'
+			'Then Timofey chimes in, obviously not liking it when his brother and sister fight. "Can we play now?"'
+			'Anushka''s face instantly softens. "Yeah sure we can."'
+		else
+			'Both of them get excited. "Yeah, and this time we will beat you!"'
+			'"You really think you can beat us this time?" Anushka quickly replies while smiling. '
+			'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
+			'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so. Maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls?"'
+			'Maksim looks mad. "Just shut up and play!"' 
+			'Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a manner that taunts him.'
+			act 'Play':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1,3)
+				minut += 15
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Come on guys, let''s just have fun!" you tell them.'
+				'"We''ll win this time!" Maksim says as he looks at the two of you, determined.'
+				'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. You''ve gotten better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and are able to help out more than you did before.'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+						'It''s not enough, however, as all of them are still better players than you. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back-to-back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, go suck a dick that''s all your good at!" Maksim taunts as he looks directly at Anushka.'
+						'Anushka reaches out and grabs him by the shirt. "Shut your fucking mouth, I am so sick of your fucking shit." She looks visibly angry this time.'
+						'Maksim actually goes a little white, like he is actually afraid of her, while Timofey jumps up and grabs Anushka''s arm. "Stop... stop fighting, he didn''t mean it."'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka turns to look at Timofey and you see the anger melt away from her as she lets go of Marksim. "Ok for you." Then she kisses him on the top of his head much to his dismay, unable to get away from her until she finishes.'
+						'"EEEWWW stop it!" Timofey whines while Maksim laughs at him. Then he gives Maksim a dirty look while he is laughing. "Why do you both have to always be so mean."'
+						'Anushka rolls her eyes. "I wasn''t being mean."'
+						'Maksim decides to taunt his brother more. "Now you got all her sex cooties from all the guys she lets fuck her."'
+						*nl
+						'Timofey looks more distressed and then leaves the room. Anushka gives Maksim a dirty look. "Why do you always have to be such an asshole."'
+						'"Fuck you, get out!" Maksim says as Anushka just shakes her head in obvious disgust at her brother and then leaves the room.'
+						'You follow her, she catches up to Timofey as he is going into the bathroom. "Hey I don''t have cooties, stop listening to him."'
+						'He looks at her like she is stupid. "All girls have cooties, I need to wash them off." Then he goes into the bathroom closing the door.'
+						'Anushka just shakes her head and laughs. "God boys are so stupid, in a few years he will be chasing girls." Then the two of you go back to her room.'
+					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+						'The two of you are slightly better than they are, and after some time, you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad, if you didn''t suck so much we would have won."'
+						'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you suck and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero and try and win on your own, instead of sticking with me."'
+						'"I leave you because you suck and slow me down!" Maksim yells.'
+						'Before you can even react, Anushka tells him. "You want dad to come back in here?"'
+						'Maksim pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out!"'
+						'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s get out of here."' 
+						'Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out before slamming the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
+					else
+						'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive, and don''t work with Timofey. You just try to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... again." she says in a teasing tone.'
+						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka "Get out... Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+						'He pushes her towards the door. "You only play with us to bully us! I don''t want to play with you anymore!"'
+						'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat! I won''t!" She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+						'"Go suck a cock!" Maksim starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
+						'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again, won''t you?" he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+						'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
+						'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					end
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	elseif maksimQW['nush_games'] = 4:
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. As you do you only see Timofey on his bed reading a comic, he looks up at the two of you but doesn''t say anything. "Where''s your brother?" Anushka asks.'
+		'Timofey shrugs. "I don''t know, he ran off outside with his friends, they wouldn''t let me play with them." He says sadly.'
+		'You see Anushka''s expression softens along with her voice. "How about we play instead huh? What do you say?"'
+		'He perks up to that and closes the comic. "Really?" He now sounds excited and happy.'
+		'She nods. "Yep any game you want, as long as all three of us can play."'
+		'He jumps up and starts setting up the game. He ends up picking Crash Team Racing, a kids racing game similar to Mario Kart. Anushka looks at you as he gets it all set up. "Come on." The two of you sit on Maksim bed while Timofey hands you both a controler before sitting on his.'
+		'As you start playing it is obvious Timofey is pretty good at this game, likely his favorite game as he seems to know all just what to do.'
 		act 'Play':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1,3)
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Come on guys, let''s just have fun!" you tell them.'
-			'"We''ll win this time!" Maksim says as he looks at the two of you, determined.'
-			'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you play for several minutes. You''ve gotten a lot better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and are able to help out more than you did before.'
-			act 'Finish':
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/timo_play.jpg"></center>'
+			if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+				'They are both way better at the game than you are, you are pretty sure Anushka is better than Timofey because each time he messes up. She suddenly messes up to and seems unable to get going again until he passes her. You quickly realize she is keeping it close but letting him win on purpose, but he doesn''t seem to notice as he is into the game, getting excited as he wins. After playing a couple of times, he exclaims "I WIN!" Anushka just laughs as she gets up and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance. "Yeah you did, you are getting really good at it, but need to go." He suddenly looks crest fallen as she says you are going. "I will come play with your later, ok?"'
+				'He smiles again and nods. "Ok but I won''t take it easy on you."'
+				'She for her part just smiles. "I know you won''t." Then she turns to look at you. "Come on let''s go back to my room."'
+			elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+				'You are about as good as Timofey, you think Anushka is better than you both though. You notice each time he makes a mistake and you get in the lead she gets by him too suddenly, not long after she always manages to crash into you, letting Timofey get back ahead of both of you. You quickly realize she is keeping it close but letting him win on purpose, but he doesn''t seem to notice as he is into the game, getting excited as he wins. After playing a couple of times, he exclaims "I WIN!" Anushka just laughs as she gets up and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance. "Yeah you did, you are getting really good at it, but need to go." He suddenly looks crest fallen as she says you are going. "I will come play with your later, ok?"'
+				'He smiles again and nods. "Ok but I won''t take it easy on you."'
+				'She for her part just smiles. "I know you won''t." Then she turns to look at you. "Come on let''s go back to my room."'
+			else
+				'You are better than Timofey and maybe better than Anushka, each time she gets close to you, she always crashes into you. Which allows Timofey to get ahead again of both of you. You quickly realize she is keeping it close but letting him win on purpose, so you then join in and keep it close, but always let him get ahead before the end to win. He doesn''t seem to notice that you and Anushka are letting him win, as he is so into the game, getting excited as he wins. After playing a couple of times, he exclaims "I WIN!" Anushka just laughs as she gets up and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance. "Yeah you did, you are getting really good at it, but need to go." He suddenly looks crest fallen as she says you are going. "I will come play with your later, ok?"'
+				'He smiles again and nods. "Ok but I won''t take it easy on you."'
+				'She for her part just smiles. "I know you won''t." Then she turns to look at you. "Come on let''s go back to my room."'
+			end
+			act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
+		end
+	else
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and Maksim visibly gathers up his courage. "What is it? What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your breasts.'
+		'"Calm down. I just wanted to see if you guys wanted to play some more?" Anushka replies, pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
+		if maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 1:
+			'Both of them get excited. "Even when you tried to cheat we won easily, we will again too!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling. "Fine I admit you have won, a few times finally. But keep in mind <<$npc_nickname>> doesn''t own the game so she can''t practice like you two do all the time and you know how it takes time to learn a game."'
+			'Maksim sneers. "Like like excuses from a couple of pussies."'
+			'Anushka rolls her eyes and continues in a teasing tone of voice. "Like you know what a pussy is, now you want to play or not?"'
+			*nl
+			'Maksim looks mad and turns on her. "I do too!"'
+			'Timofey is starting to look upset as his brother and sister start to fight so you speak up. "Can we just play?"'
+			'Anushka nods to that. "Yeah let''s just play and see what happens."'
+			'Maksim still looks angry but nods. "Fine!"'
+		elseif maksimQW['nush_games_win'] = 2:
+			'Both of them get excited. "If you don''t cheat again, we''ll definitely beat you this time!"'
+			'Anushka quickly questions him with a teasing smile. "Like you don''t do the same thing all the time."'
+			'Maksim responds. "Shut up!"'
+			'Then Timofey chimes in, obviously not liking it when his brother and sister fight. "Can we play now?"'
+			'Anushka''s face instantly softens. "Yeah sure we can."'
+		else
+			'Both of them get excited. "Yeah, and this time we will beat you!"'
+			'"You really think you can beat us this time?" Anushka quickly replies while smiling. '
+			'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we''ll win!"'
+			'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so. Maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls?"'
+			'Maksim looks mad. "Just shut up and play!"' 
+			'Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a manner that taunts him.'
+			act 'Play':
 				*clr & cla
+				gs 'exp_gain', 'gaming', rand(1,3)
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'It''s not enough however, as all of them are still better players than you. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, we win and you lose!" Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
-					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" It quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
-				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The two of you are slightly better than they are, and after some time, you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost! God, you''re so stupid!"'
-					'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you''re stupid and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero, so Nush tricks you every time."'
-					'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth, you little shit! She doesn''t trick me!" he yells as he starts beating on him. Before you can even react, Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone! He''s right. I baited you out then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
-					'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out or I''ll tell Dad you''re picking on us again!"'
-					'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s get out of here." Just as you start to leave, Anushka stops and looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here and beat your ass."' 
-					'Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out before slamming the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
-				else
-					'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
-					'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive, and don''t work with Timofey. You just try to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... again." she says in a teasing tone, then sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he''s about to scream at her again until she interjects. "Calm down, we don''t want Dad in here again." He shuts his mouth and glances at the door, then glares at Anushka.'
-					*nl
-					'"Get out... Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
-					'He pushes her towards the door. "You only play with us to bully us! I don''t want to play with you anymore!"'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat! I won''t!" She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'"Go suck a cock!" Maksim starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
-					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again, won''t you?" he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
-					'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+				'"Come on guys, let''s just have fun!" you tell them.'
+				'"We''ll win this time!" Maksim says as he looks at the two of you, determined.'
+				'"Let''s play!" Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. You''ve gotten better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and are able to help out more than you did before.'
+				act 'Finish':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 15
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
+					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
+						'It''s not enough, however, as all of them are still better players than you. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Haha, see told you girls suck at video games!" Maksim taunts.'
+						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah. You won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job, kiddo."'
+						'"Pfft, I won it! Timo almost caused us to lose, but I carried his sorry ass!" Maksim says.'
+						'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" It quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
+						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on, let''s go. They''re not going to stop acting like brats anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
+						'The two of you are slightly better than they are, and after some time, you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost! God, you''re so stupid!"'
+						'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you''re stupid and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero, so Nush tricks you every time."'
+						'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth, you little shit! She doesn''t trick me!" he yells as he starts beating on him. Before you can even react, Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone! He''s right. I baited you out then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
+						'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out or I''ll tell Dad you''re picking on us again!"'
+						'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s get out of here." Just as you start to leave, Anushka stops and looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here and beat your ass."' 
+						'Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out before slamming the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
+					else
+						'Before too long, it''s pretty clear you and Anushka have the upper hand. The brothers keep it close, but they fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much!"'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+						'Before Maksim can respond, Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timo''s fault, and you know it. When you fall behind, you get too aggressive, and don''t work with Timofey. You just try to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad because you got beat by a girl... again." she says in a teasing tone.'
+						'Maksim''s eyes flare at Anushka "Get out... Get out of our room!" he says as he tries to shove her off the bed.'
+						*nl
+						'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you''re such a baby! I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+						'He pushes her towards the door. "You only play with us to bully us! I don''t want to play with you anymore!"'
+						'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat! I won''t!" She turns towards you. "Come on, let''s go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+						'"Go suck a cock!" Maksim starts to yell, but catches himself and lowers his voice partway through.'
+						'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again, won''t you?" he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+						'Anushka instantly eases up, and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time, squirt..." she says with a smile and ruffles his hair, much to his annoyance.'
+						'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Maksim berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					end
+					act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
-				act 'Go to Anushka''s room': AnushkaLoc = 2 & gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 			end
 		end
 	end

locations/anushkamaksim.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # anushkamaksim
-!2021/03/26
+!2024/04/03
 if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 	'He grins at you and looks you over as if he''s giving it some serious thought. "For now, just show me your tits."'
 	act 'Show him your tits':
 		*clr & cla
-		maksim_blackmail = 1
+		maksimQW['blackmail'] = 1
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/hallflashtits.jpg"></center>'
@@ -20,18 +20,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 		gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5, 'humiliation', 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-
 		act 'Follow him':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/maksim/downstairs.jpg"></center>'
 			'You follow him as he leads you down the stairs and outside to the playground. Once there, he walks over to a few boys around his age and stops. The boys check you out. "Who''s that?" one of them asks.'
-			'He has his back to your as he responds. You can only imagine the smug look on his face. "She does things for me."'
+			'He has his back to you as he responds. You can only imagine the smug look on his face. "She does things for me."'
 			'One of the boys snorts a laugh. "Sure she does."'
 			'He turns towards you. "Go buy me a pack of smokes."'
 			'"What?!"'
-			'"I said go buy me a pack of cigarettes." He gives you a stern look, but it just shows how young he is and isn''t not intimidating at all.'
-			'You sigh. This is only going to get worse. You''ll have to figure a way out of this, but for now you can only play along. You turn and start walking to the nearby kiosk.'
+			'"I said go buy me a pack of cigarettes." He gives you a stern look, but it just shows how young he is and is not intimidating at all.'
+			'You sigh. This is only going to get worse. You''ll have to figure a way out of this, but for now, you can only play along. You turn and start walking to the nearby kiosk.'
 			'As you walk away, you hear the boys talking, surprised that you''re doing what Maksim says as he acts smug.'
 			if money >= 150:
 				act 'Buy him cigarettes':
@@ -49,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 						'They all start muttering, seemingly surprised you actually did it.'
 						*nl
 						'Maksim takes the pack of cigarettes and passes them out to his friends. They all light up and a few of them cough, but it seems most of them have smoked before. After a few minutes, you''re about to leave when one of them starts talking to Maksim. "Having her buy you cigarettes is one thing..." You see the rest all nodding in agreement.'
-						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
+						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh, I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
 						'You give him a look of surprise and don''t move, but his stern glare tells you what will happen if you don''t.'
 
 						act 'Flash them your tits':
@@ -66,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 							'"I''m still breaking her in and it will be when I say." He gives his friends a look to show that he''s in charge here. "Now pay up!"'
 							'The boys start handing over money, way more than the cigarettes would cost. He must have bet them that you would show your breasts. You sigh again and can''t believe you''re more or less being pimped out by a young boy. They all stare at your breasts for a few more minutes before Maksim looks at you. "Okay, you can go. We''ll talk later." He tries to make it sound like he''s in charge and sexy at the same time. He failed, but his friends seem to have bought it.' 
 							'You can''t help but roll your eyes as you rearrange your clothes back in place and walk away.'
-							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -87,7 +86,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 						'They all start muttering, seemingly surprised you actually did it.'
 						*nl
 						'Maksim takes the pack of cigarettes and passes them out to his friends. They all light up and a few of them cough, but it seems most of them have smoked before. After a few minutes, you''re about to leave when one of them starts talking to Maksim. "Having her buy you cigarettes is one thing..." You see the rest all nodding in agreement.'
-						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
+						'Maksim smirks at them. "Oh, I see how it is. You have no faith in me! Okay then, let me prove it." He turns towards you. "Show me your tits."'
 						'You give him a look of surprise and don''t move, but his stern glare tells you what will happen if you don''t.'
 
 						act 'Flash them your tits':
@@ -104,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 							'"I''m still breaking her in and it will be when I say." He gives his friends a look to show that he''s in charge here. "Now pay up!"'
 							'The boys start handing over money, way more than the cigarettes would cost. He must have bet them that you would show your breasts. You sigh again and can''t believe you''re more or less being pimped out by a young boy. They all stare at your breasts for a few more minutes before Maksim looks at you. "Okay, you can go. We''ll talk later." He tries to make it sound like he''s in charge and sexy at the same time. He failed, but his friends seem to have bought it.' 
 							'You can''t help but roll your eyes as you rearrange your clothes back in place and walk away.'
-							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -121,16 +120,72 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_blackmail':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Fuck off, you little shit!" you snarl and he blinks in surprise, eliciting a smirk from you. He obviously expected you to agree without question.'
 			'Anger washes over him. "Fine bitch! I''ll just go and show her!"'
-			'You smirk at him. "Go right head, I''m sure your sister won''t mind that you were trying to blackmail one of her friends. Who do you think she''ll be more pissed at?"'
+			'You smirk at him. "Go right ahead, I''m sure your sister won''t mind that you were trying to blackmail one of her friends. Who do you think she''ll be more pissed at?"'
 			'He sneers at you and pauses before angrily walking away.'
 
-			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Tell him to fuck off (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway_flash_tits':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	AnushkaLoc = 2
+	maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/hallflashtits.jpg"></center>'
+	'You sigh as you pull your clothes aside and show him your bare breasts. His grin widens as he stares at you. A few moments pass and you''re about to say something when he reaches out with his hand.' 
+	'You quickly pull your shirt back down. "You said show you."'
+	'"Fine," he sneers before stepping out of your way. "Go on then."'
+	gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway_flash_pussy':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	AnushkaLoc = 2
+	maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	if PCLoSkirt > 0:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/flash_pussy_dress.jpg"></center>'
+		'You sigh as you lift your skirt to show him your naked pussy. His grin widens as he stares at you. A few moments pass and you''re about to say something when he reaches out with his hand.' 
+		'You quickly pull your skirt back down. "You said show you."'
+		'"Fine," he sneers before stepping out of your way. "Go on then."'
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/flash_pussy_pants.jpg"></center>'
+		'You sigh as you pull your pants down to show off your naked pussy to him. His grin widens as he stares at you. A few moments pass and you''re about to say something when he reaches out with his hand.' 
+		'You quickly pull your pants back up. "You said show you."'
+		'"Fine," he sneers before stepping out of your way. "Go on then."'
+	end
+	gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_room_naked':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	AnushkaLoc = 2
+	maksimQW['blackmail_flash'] += 1
+	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/strip_naked.jpg"></center>'
+	'You follow him to his room and just as he said Timofey is not there. Maksim sits on his bed looking at you with a huge grin. "Well go on, strip. Slow and sexy."' 
+	'You sigh loudly but then do as he says. You slowly start stripping out of your clothes, while he leers at you. Once you are finally naked, you stand there for a minute or two. "Ok you seen enough."'
+	'"Fine," he sneers. "You can go then." You quickly get dressed and once you are you leave his room.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Go back to the hall': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
+end
 
 --- anushkamaksim ---------------------------------

locations/gschool_gopnik_chats.qsrc

@@ -87,13 +87,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitek':
 		if npc_rel['A9'] >= 70:
 			'You sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily telling stories. "Hey, you''re friends with Zinaida, right?" Vitek asks when they notice you.'
 			'"Yeah, why? Want her to help you with your studies or something?" you reply.'
-			'"No no, nothing like that. We thought, being her friend, you could take a picture of Zinaida''s tits for us, you know?" He mimicks large breasts with his hands. "It''s Dan''s birthday." he coughs' 
+			'"No no, nothing like that. We thought, being her friend, you could take a picture of Zinaida''s tits for us, you know?" He mimics large breasts with his hands. "It''s Dan''s birthday." he coughs' 
 			'You just roll your eyes and ignore their request. You still don''t know how that rumor got started and instead talk with the boys for a while.'                          
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A9')
 		elseif npc_rel['A9'] <= 20:
 			'Before you can even say hello, Vitek forcefully shoves you into the wall as he walks past. You get the message and walk away.'           
 		else
-			'You sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily telling stories. "This isn''t the place where good girls like you should hang out." Vitek says when they notice you and tries to direct you back to where you came from.'
+			'You sit on the stairs near Vitek and listen to him, Dan and Vasily telling stories. "This isn''t the place where good girls like you should hang out." Vitek says when they notice you and try to direct you back to where you came from.'
 			'"Girls like me?" you reply.'
 			'"You know... Whatever, just keep quiet." He lights his cigarette and returns to chatting with the boys.'
 		end
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big154.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		'"Well well well, if it isn''t my favorite groupie slut." Radomir says as you approach.'
-		'You smile and put up with the comments, knowing this is now your place among the gopniks. He tells you that you should stop by practice some time, saying the boys could use some "stress release", which leads to him talking about the band and where they will be playing.'
+		'You smile and put up with the comments, knowing this is now your place among the gopniks. He tells you that you should stop by practice sometime, saying the boys could use some "stress release", which leads to him talking about the band and where they will be playing.'
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A154')
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] > 250:
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A154', 'dislike'
@@ -148,6 +148,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir':
 					gopnikbandQW['practice_invite'] = 1
 					'After the bell rings, you start to head to class when Radomir calls out to you. "Hey, you should stop by the garages sometime and listen to us." You tell him you will and you both head to class.'
 				end
+				if npc_rel['A154'] >= 50 and radomirQW['first_visit'] = 0:
+					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should come over to my place today and hangout, what do you say?"'
+					act 'Not today': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_no'
+					act 'Sure': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_yes'
+				end
 			else
 				'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you approach. He smirks a little when he sees you. "So what can I do for one of my fans?" You ask him how things are going for the band and he starts telling you about all the girls throwing their panties on stage. Asking him a few questions leads to the two of you talking about where the band''s going and the success it will have.'
 				func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A154')
@@ -175,6 +180,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir':
 					gopnikbandQW['practice_invite'] = 1
 					'After the bell rings, you start to head to class when Radomir calls out to you. "Hey, you should stop by the garages sometime and listen to us." You tell him you will and you both head to class.'
 				end
+				if npc_rel['A154'] >= 50 and radomirQW['first_visit'] = 0:
+					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should come over to my place today and hangout, what do you say?"'
+					act 'Not today': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_no'
+					act 'Sure': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_yes'
+				end
 			else
 				'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you approach. He gives you a slight knowing smirk when he sees you. "So what can I do for one of my fans?" You ask him how things are going for the band and he starts telling you about all the girls throwing their panties on stage. Asking him a few questions leads to the two of you talking about where the band''s going and the success it will have.'
 				func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A154')
@@ -202,6 +212,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir':
 					gopnikbandQW['practice_invite'] = 1
 					'After the bell rings, you start to head to class when Radomir calls out to you. "Hey, you should stop by the garages sometime and listen to us." You tell him you will and you both head to class.'
 				end
+				if npc_rel['A154'] >= 50 and radomirQW['first_visit'] = 0:
+					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should come over to my place today and hangout, what do you say?"'
+					act 'Not today': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_no'
+					act 'Sure': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_yes'
+				end
 			else
 				'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you approach. He gives you a wink when he sees you. "So what can I do for one of my fans?" You ask him how things are going for the band and he starts telling you about all the girls throwing their panties on stage and asking a few questions leads to the two of you talking about where the band''s going and the success it will have.'
 				func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A154')
@@ -229,6 +244,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir':
 					gopnikbandQW['practice_invite'] = 1
 					'After the bell rings, you start to head to class when Radomir calls out to you. "Hey, you should stop by the garages sometime and listen to us." You tell him you will and you both head to class.'
 				end
+				if npc_rel['A154'] >= 50 and radomirQW['first_visit'] = 0:
+					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should come over to my place today and hangout, what do you say?"'
+					act 'Not today': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_no'
+					act 'Sure': gt 'gschool_gopnik_chats', 'rad_invite_yes'
+				end
 			else
 				'Radomir is talking about the band''s latest gig as you approach. He gives you a wink when he sees you and starts telling you about all the girls throwing their panties on stage. Asking him a few questions leads to the two of you talking about where the band''s going and the success it will have.'
 				func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A154')
@@ -254,6 +274,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radomir':
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_invite_no':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A154', 'loathe'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big154.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Sorry, but I can''t. Maybe some other time?" you reply.'
+	'He frowns and shrugs. "Sure, whatever."'
+	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'rad_invite_yes':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	radomirQW['meet_after_school'] = 1
+	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A154', 'like'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big154.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Yeah, I would like that," you reply.'
+	'"Nice babe, I''ll wait for you at the doors after school."'
+	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'roman':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -379,14 +422,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'valentin':
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		'He smiles as you approach. "What''s up, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-		'You smile back. "Nothing much, just wanted to hang out and talk."'
-		'The two of you talk about a few things. He gets a little hands on with you at times, but you''re used to it. As you''re about to leave, he stops you. "Stop by the garage some time. I can always use a break and a quick fuck."'
+		'You smile back. "Nothing much just wanted to hang out and talk."'
+		'The two of you talk about a few things. He gets a little hands-on with you at times, but you''re used to it. As you''re about to leave, he stops you. "Stop by the garage sometime. I can always use a break and a quick fuck."'
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A158')
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] > 300:
 		if npc_rel['A158'] >= 60:
 			'He smiles as you approach. "What''s up, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-			'You smile back. "Nothing much, just wanted to hang out and talk."'
-			'The two of you talk about a few things. He gets a little hands on with you at times, but you''re used to it. As you''re about to leave, he stops you. "Stop by the garage some time, I can always use a break and a quick fuck."'
+			'You smile back. "Nothing much just wanted to hang out and talk."'
+			'The two of you talk about a few things. He gets a little hands-on with you at times, but you''re used to it. As you''re about to leave, he stops you. "Stop by the garage some time, I can always use a break and a quick fuck."'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A158')
 		elseif npc_rel['A158'] <= 20:
 			'"Hey, Valentin!" you greet him as you approach.'
@@ -442,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'valentin':
 			'"Yeah? Well, I don''t want to talk to you." You persist and he relents. He briefly chats to you before making it clear that he''s done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		else
 			'"Hey, Valentin!" you greet him as you approach.'
-			'He gives you a slight chin up greeting. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. What do you need?"'
+			'He gives you a slight chin-up greeting. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. What do you need?"'
 			'"I just wanted to talk is all," you reply.'
 			'He shrugs and you start talking to him. You wouldn''t say he''s eager to talk to you, but he doesn''t seem to mind either.'
 		end
@@ -466,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'valentin':
 			'"Yeah? Well, I don''t want to talk to you." You persist and he relents. He briefly chats to you before making it clear that he''s done talking, so you leave him in peace.'
 		else
 			'"Hey Valentin!" you greet him as you approach.'
-			'He gives you a slight chin up greeting. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. You get lost little nerd?"'
+			'He gives you a slight chin-up greeting. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. You get lost little nerd?"'
 			'"No, I just wanted to talk is all," you reply.'
 			'He shrugs and you start talking to him. You wouldn''t say he''s eager to talk to you, but he doesn''t seem to mind either. After a few minutes, you break off the conversation and bid him farewell as the looks some of the other gopniks are giving you make you nervous.'
 		end
@@ -475,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'valentin':
 		if npc_rel['A158'] >= 50:
 			'Valentin calls out to you as you approach. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do anything fun lately?"'
 			'You smile as you reply. "You know, this and that, causing a bit of mayhem when I can."'
-			'Valentin laughs. "Well then, we should hang out sometime and see what we can get up to together." His suggestive look and tone of voice makes it sound dirty. You don''t know if he''s being serious or is joking.'
+			'Valentin laughs. "Well then, we should hang out sometime and see what we can get up to together." His suggestive look and tone of voice make it sound dirty. You don''t know if he''s being serious or is joking.'
 			'You just shake your head at his comment and the two of you engage in a friendly conversation, mostly about the band or his bike.'
 			act 'Ask for a ride on his bike':
 				cla & *nl
@@ -492,7 +535,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'valentin':
 			'"Hey Valentin!" you greet him as you approach.'
 			'He gives you a slight nod in greeting.'
 			'"So what have you been up to?" you ask.'
-			'"Working on my bike and practicing with the band," he half heartedly answers, but warms up the more you talk to him. You mostly ask him about his music and his bike, which seems to do the trick.'
+			'"Working on my bike and practicing with the band," he half-heartedly answers, but warms up the more you talk to him. You mostly ask him about his music and his bike, which seems to do the trick.'
 		end
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A158')
 	else
@@ -519,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big11.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
-		'"I''m surprised you don''t walk bow legged the number of times you''ve been fucked, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Vasily says with a laugh.'
+		'"I''m surprised you don''t walk bow-legged the number of times you''ve been fucked, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Vasily says with a laugh.'
 		'You flip him the bird as you sit next to him. The two of you talk about a variety of things, although he keeps asking about who you''ve fucked or whose dick you just finished sucking.'
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A11')
 	elseif npc_rel['A11'] >= 50 and fame['pav_slut'] < 300:
@@ -697,7 +740,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti':
 		if npc_rel['A155'] >= 50:
 			'You approach Lavrenti as he leans against the wall near the stairs. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
 			'Lavrenti smiles at you while barely looking up from his phone. "Not much. I was just texting some girl I met recently."'
-			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good looking guy and now he has that bad boy vibe going for him as well. "Oh, you like her?"'
+			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good-looking guy and now he has that bad-boy vibe going for him as well. "Oh, you like her?"'
 			'He laughs and nods. "Fuck yeah! I tore her tight little ass up so much I doubt it''s tight anymore!" You smile at him and start talking about girls, then his legendary parties.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A155')
 			'Just before the bell rings, Lavrenti gets the attention of the other gopniks. "Hey guys, my parents will be out of town soon and I was thinking of throwing another party."'
@@ -727,8 +770,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti':
 		if npc_rel['A155'] >= 50:
 			'You approach Lavrenti as he leans against the wall near the stairs. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
 			'Lavrenti smiles at you. "Not a lot. I was just texting some girl I met."'
-			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good looking guy and now he has that bad boy vibe going for him as well. "Oh. So what did you think of class today?" you ask, wanting to change the subject knowing how gopnik boys talk about girls.'
-			'He sighs and shakes his head. He half ass talks about class, but the conversation soon turns towards him talking about his legendary parties and he starts telling you about some of the funny things that happened at some of the other gopnik parties.'
+			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good-looking guy and now he has that bad-boy vibe going for him as well. "Oh. So what did you think of class today?" you ask, wanting to change the subject knowing how gopnik boys talk about girls.'
+			'He sighs and shakes his head. He half-ass talks about class, but the conversation soon turns towards him talking about his legendary parties and he starts telling you about some of the funny things that happened at some of the other gopnik parties.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A155')
 			'Just before the bell rings, Lavrenti gets the attention of the other gopniks. "Hey guys, my parents will be out of town soon and I was thinking of throwing another party."'
 			!!act 'Ask to go to party':
@@ -750,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti':
 		if npc_rel['A155'] >= 50:
 			'You approach Lavrenti as he leans against the wall near the stairs. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
 			'Lavrenti grins at you and throws his arm around your shoulder in a friendly way. "Not much. I was just texting some girl I met recently."'
-			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good looking guy and now he has that bad boy vibe going for him as well. "So, you bang her yet?"'
+			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good-looking guy and now he has that bad-boy vibe going for him as well. "So, you bang her yet?"'
 			'He laughs and nods. "Fuck yeah! I tore her tight little ass up so much I doubt it''s tight anymore." You smile at him, used to how the gopnik boys talk and start talking about girls, then his legendary parties.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A155')
 			'Just before the bell rings, Lavrenti smiles at you. "My parents will be out of town soon and I was thinking of throwing another party."'
@@ -766,7 +809,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti':
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A155')
 			'He''s reluctant to talk to you and mostly talks to some of the other gopniks. Just before the bell rings, he mentions how he''s planning to throw another one of his parties soon.'
 			!!act 'Ask to go to party':
-				!!'You bite your lip and look at him with the cutest look you can muster. "Think I can get a invite?"'
+				!!'You bite your lip and look at him with the cutest look you can muster. "Think I can get an invite?"'
 				!!'He frowns at you. "Why the fuck would I invite you?"'
 				!!'"Come on, don''t be like that. It''ll be fun!" you reply.'
 				!!'He snorts. "Let me think about it." He then walks away without another word.'
@@ -774,7 +817,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lavrenti':
 		else
 			'You approach Lavrenti as he leans against the wall near the stairs. "So, what''s up with you Lavrenti?"'
 			'Lavrenti smiles at you while barely looking up from his phone. "Not much. I was just texting some girl I met recently."'
-			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good looking guy and now he has that bad boy vibe going for him as well. "So, you bang her yet?"'
+			'You''re not surprised by his answer. He was always a good-looking guy and now he has that bad-boy vibe going for him as well. "So, you bang her yet?"'
 			'He laughs and nods. "Fuck yeah! I tore her tight little ass up so much I doubt it''s tight anymore!" You smile at him, used to how the gopnik boys talk and start talking about girls, then his legendary parties parties.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A155')
 			'Just before the bell rings, Lavrenti smiles at you. "My parents will be out of town soon and I was thinking of throwing another party."'
@@ -846,7 +889,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ekaterina':
 			'As you approach her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?"'
 			'She glares at you. "What fucking business is it of yours?"'
 			'You raise your hands to show you didn''t mean anything by it. "I was just asking is all."'
-			'She starts to say something, but stops and gives you a look over before a dark smile creeps onto her face. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds. See what you''re made of." By the way she''s looking at you, you think she just wants an excuse to beat your ass.'
+			'She starts to say something but stops and gives you a look over before a dark smile creeps onto her face. "You should come by sometime and go a few rounds. See what you''re made of." By the way she''s looking at you, you think she just wants an excuse to beat your ass.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A145')
 		else
 			'As you approach her, you see her nursing some bruised knuckles. "Get in a fight?"'
@@ -875,7 +918,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lera':
 		'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "So, hopped on any cocks today bunny?" Lera inquires.'
 		'You sigh. "No, have you licked any pussy?"'
 		'"No, but you just might if you don''t watch your mouth!" Lera replies as she spreads her legs.'
-		'You both engage in a bit of back and forth banter for the rest of the break.'
+		'You both engage in a bit of back-and-forth banter for the rest of the break.'
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A21')
 	elseif npc_rel['A21'] >= 50:
 		if grupTipe = 4:
@@ -885,26 +928,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lera':
 			'You both engage in a bit of banter back and forth about how the school day has been.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A21')
 		else
-			'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you decide to approach her. "Hey Lera! What are you up to?"'
+			'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you decide to approach her. "Hey, Lera! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much. Just waiting for Lena."'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A21')
 			'The two of you continue talking for a while until Lena shows up and calls Lera over, ending your conversation.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A21'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 300:
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
+			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "Hi, Lera! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you and frowns. "None of your fucking business."'
-			'You continue talking to her, but it''s mostly one sided as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
+			'You continue talking to her, but it''s mostly one-sided as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
 		else
-			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "Hi Lera! What are you up to?"'
+			'As usual, you find Lera and Lena smoking on the stairs. "Hi, Lera! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you and frowns. "None of your fucking business, bitch!"'
-			'You continue talking to her, but it''s mostly one sided as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
+			'You continue talking to her, but it''s mostly one-sided as she alternates between ignoring you and making snide remarks.'
 		end
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A21')
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 300:
 		'"Don''t even come near me with that disgusting cum breath of yours!"'
 	else
-		'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you decide to approach her. "Hey Lera! What are you up to?"'
+		'Seeing Lera sitting on the steps without Lena, you decide to approach her. "Hey, Lera! What are you up to?"'
 		'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders. "Nothing much. Just waiting for Lena."'
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A21')
 		'The two of you continue talking for a while until Lena shows up and calls Lera over, ending your conversation.'
@@ -940,14 +983,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alyona':
 			'"At least someone else in this shitty place knows how to live. I''m tired of everyone telling me what to do, and especially what not to do!" she says in a complaining tone.'
 			*nl
 			'Maybe that''s why, although you''re not friends, you understand each other well. She complains for the next few minutes before stopping. "But enough of that, let''s listen to some music instead." She hands you one of her earbuds.'
-			'She shows you a few new songs, tells you about her new favourite bands and that she hopes they''ll come and play in the area one day.'
+			'She shows you a few new songs, tells you about her new favorite bands and that she hopes they''ll come and play in the area one day.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A143')
 			'Before the break is over, she takes back the earbud and stands up. "Okay, I''ve got some things to do. See you next time." With that, she leaves.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A143'] >= 50:
 			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Alyona greets you as you make your way up the stairs.'
-			'"Hey Alyona. How''s my favourite troublemaker?" you ask, giggling as you lean against the wall. "I know very well you have a story to tell. If you can''t find any trouble, you''re always happy to kick up a riot by yourself!" you add jokingly.'
+			'"Hey Alyona. How''s my favorite troublemaker?" you ask, giggling as you lean against the wall. "I know very well you have a story to tell. If you can''t find any trouble, you''re always happy to kick up a riot by yourself!" you add jokingly.'
 			'"Huh, you know me, right?" she replies. She takes a deep breath, then starts talking about all the things she''s been getting into lately. Some of the stories are wild, others are rather naughty, some are sad, and some aren''t exactly legal, though you''re not surprised by that at all.'
 			'"And what boring things happened to you?" she asks jokingly, looking at you and rolling her eyes. "I promise I''ll try not to fall asleep while I''m listening."'
 			*nl
@@ -969,7 +1012,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alyona':
 			*nl
 			'She looks at you. "Come on, I haven''t got all day for this..." she says urgently.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A143')
-			'For the next few minutes, you tell her what you wanted her opinion on. However, she gets tired of listening and stands up. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you could have asked someone else, actually. I''m going back to the others now..." With that, she leaves.'
+			'For the next few minutes, you tell her what you want her opinion on. However, she gets tired of listening and stands up. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you could have asked someone else, actually. I''m going back to the others now..." With that, she leaves.'
 			'You still have a little time left, but not enough to do anything, so you decide to head for the classroom and wait for the lesson to start.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
@@ -985,7 +1028,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alyona':
 		elseif npc_rel['A143'] <= 20:
 			'You see Alyona leaning against the wall. Her eyes are scanning the corridor as if to see if anyone can see her.'
 			'When you move a little closer, you see her pull a bottle of alcohol from her bag and she takes a few sips.'
-			'"Hey Alyona. I see you''re having a rough day..." you start to say. "You know, it''s not really healthy to drink so early. Or drink that much of alcohol at any time actually." Before you can say another word, she cuts in.'
+			'"Hey Alyona. I see you''re having a rough day..." you start to say. "You know, it''s not really healthy to drink so early. Or drink that much alcohol at any time actually." Before you can say another word, she cuts in.'
 			*nl
 			'"And you know what else isn''t healthy? To say that. You don''t want to accidentally get hurt, do you?!" she says in a threatening tone, then takes another sip. "What wasn''t clear?" she asks. "Go bother someone who cares!"'
 			'Seeing better not to push the matter, you decide to leave and spend the rest of the break somewhere else.'
@@ -1150,7 +1193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alyona_tampon':
 		else
 			'"Just take one," she waves dismissively at her bag on the floor before taking another drink from her flask.'
 			if rand(1,2) = 1:
-				'Not knowing what else to do, you start opening random zippers looking for a pad. Instead you find a tampon jammed into a cramped pocket sandwiched between several blunts.'
+				'Not knowing what else to do, you start opening random zippers looking for a pad. Instead, you find a tampon jammed into a cramped pocket sandwiched between several blunts.'
 				'"Can I take this?" you say, raising it up to show her.'
 				'"Yeah whatever," she shrugs and you run off to the bathroom to put the tampon in before class starts.'
 				isprok = 1
@@ -1182,7 +1225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			'She pushes you up against the wall and tries to kiss you while her hand reaches down to squeeze your ass. You break the kiss out of surprise by her bold actions more than anything else. "What are you doing?! I was only asking if you were okay."'
 			*nl
 			'She crowds you a bit more so you''re face to face. "You talk too much. I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
-			'Pauline speaks up at this point. "What the fuck? I''m about to eat my lunch! No one wants to see your lesbian shit, Nush! For fuck sakes, keep it in your pants for once!" She sounds very annoyed, but Anushka just ignores her. You notice most of the guys don''t seem to mind and even seem interested in watching, as does Lera.'
+			'Pauline speaks up at this point. "What the fuck? I''m about to eat my lunch! No one wants to see your lesbian shit, Nush! For fucks sake, keep it in your pants for once!" She sounds very annoyed, but Anushka just ignores her. You notice most of the guys don''t seem to mind and even seem interested in watching, as does Lera.'
 			act 'That''s not what I meant':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nomake.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1205,7 +1248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step crosslegged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She glances at you with a smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			*nl
@@ -1214,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			elseif CloSkirtShortness >= 4:
 				'You follow her gaze to your short skirt and see her smile widen. "Cute skirt."'
 			end
-			'"No, I was just doing some online window shopping. I guess you could call it that." She acts like she was about to say more, but stops and looks at you before shaking her head. "You know you could have just been one of us, instead of a sex toy for the boys to use whenever they want."'
+			'"No, I was just doing some online window shopping. I guess you could call it that." She acts like she is about to say more, but stops and looks at you before shaking her head. "You know you could have just been one of us, instead of a sex toy for the boys to use whenever they want."'
 			'You shrug. "I love sex, so it worked out."'
 			'She sighs. "Loving sex is great, I love it, but fucking stand up for yourself and control your own body! Have sex when you want to have sex, not them. Fuck whatever, do what you want." It takes a while, but the two of you are soon talking about her music, which leads to a variety of other subjects. The two of you talk and laugh until the bell rings.'
 			if npc_rel['A144'] >= 55 and anushkaQW['first_visit'] = 0:
@@ -1228,7 +1271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			'She rolls her eyes. "Whatever." You try to talk to her, but she mostly ignores you.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a slight smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			*nl
@@ -1237,13 +1280,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			elseif CloSkirtShortness >= 4:
 				'You follow her gaze to your short skirt and see her smile widen. "Cute skirt."'
 			end
-			'"No, I was just doing some online window shopping. I guess you could call it." She acts like she was about to say more, but stops and looks at you before shaking her head. "You know you could have just been one of us, instead of a sex toy for the boys to use whenever they want."'
+			'"No, I was just doing some online window shopping. I guess you could call it." She acts like she is about to say more, but stops and looks at you before shaking her head. "You know you could have just been one of us, instead of a sex toy for the boys to use whenever they want."'
 			'You shrug. "I love sex, so it worked out."'
 			'She sighs and shakes her head slightly. It takes a bit of effort for you to get her to talk, but the two of you are soon talking about her music, which leads to a variety of other subjects. The two of you talk until the bell rings.'
 		end
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 300:
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a friendly smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1261,7 +1304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 		elseif npc_rel['A144'] <= 20:
 			'She gives you a disgusted look. "Get the fuck away from me!" You sigh and, seeing the looks the other gopniks are giving you, turn and walk away.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a slight smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1275,7 +1318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 			'She glances at you with a friendly smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1300,7 +1343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			'You sigh, not getting to see whatever it is she found so amusing. "I just thought we could hang out?"'
 			'She rolls her eyes. "Like I would want to talk to you! I don''t find gossiping about who''s dating who or what clothes are in fashion this year interesting, so go bother someone that finds that shallow shit interesting." You try to talk to her, but she just ignores you, only occasionally responding with another barbed comment.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a slight smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1317,7 +1360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a friendly smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1337,7 +1380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			'You sigh, not getting to see whatever it is she found so amusing. "I just thought we could hang out?"'
 			'She rolls her eyes. "Like I would want to talk to you to a steroid junky like you!" You try to talk to her, but she just ignores you, only occasionally responding with another barbed comment.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties to anyone. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties to anyone. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a slight smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1346,15 +1389,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 				'You follow her gaze to your short skirt and see her smile widen. "Cute skirt."'
 			end
 			*nl
-			'"No, just checking something," she replies as she closes the computer and puts it away. "What do you need? Looking for some steroids so you can bulk up?" she asks while flexing in an over exaggerated way with a grin on her face.'
+			'"No, just checking something," she replies as she closes the computer and puts it away. "What do you need? Looking for some steroids so you can bulk up?" she asks while flexing in an over-exaggerated way with a grin on her face.'
 			'You sigh, unsure if she''s just teasing you or not. It''s hard to tell with Anushka. "No, I don''t want any steroids. I just wanted to hang out and talk is all."'
 			*nl
-			'She smirks. "Oh... So what flavor protein drink is best? I don''t like that powdered crap. I tried it once and it was nasty as Petia''s breath. I prefer liquid protein right from the tap if you know what I mean..." she says with a wink.'
+			'She smirks. "Oh... So what flavor protein drink is best? I don''t like that powdered crap. I tried it once and it was as nasty as Petia''s breath. I prefer liquid protein right from the tap if you know what I mean..." she says with a wink.'
 			'You shake your head, knowing exactly what she means and the two of you are soon talking about a variety of subjects. You talk and laugh until the bell rings.' 
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. You blush when you see her panties on full display like that. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. You blush when you see her panties on full display like that. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a smirk.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1374,7 +1417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			'You sigh, not getting to see whatever it is she found so amusing. "I just thought we could hang out?"'
 			'She scoffs. "Like I would want to talk to a loser like you! Get lost, you''re ruining my high." You try to talk to her, but she just ignores you, only occasionally responding to bully you verbally. After a while, you get tired of it and walk away.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. You blush when you see her panties on full display like that. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. You blush when you see her panties on full display like that. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a smirk.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1387,7 +1430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step with her knees pulled up almost to her chin, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step with her knees pulled up almost to her chin, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over and see her typing lyrics to a song. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a friendly smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			*nl
@@ -1408,7 +1451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			'You sigh, not getting to see whatever it is she found so amusing. "I thought we could just hang out?"'
 			'She rolls her eyes. "Whatever." You try to talk to her, but she just ignores you.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a slight smile.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			*nl
@@ -1422,7 +1465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 		end
 	else
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She looks over at you with a shocked look. "Oh my god, were you looking up my skirt pervert?" she says loud enough for everyone nearby to stare at you, which causes you to blush.'
 			*nl
 			'You shake your head. "No, no! Of course not!"'
@@ -1447,7 +1490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka':
 			'You sigh, not getting to see whatever it is she found so amusing. "I just thought we could hang out?"'
 			'She rolls her eyes. "Like I would want to talk to the likes of you!" You try to talk to her, but she just ignores you.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross legged, which gives you a nice up the skirt shot of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
+			'As you walk up the steps, you notice Anushka sitting on the top step cross-legged, which gives you a nice upskirt view of her panties. She''s using her knees to support a notebook computer that she''s typing on. Taking a seat next to her, you glance over at the screen as she''s closing it, missing whatever she was looking at. "New song?"'
 			'She glances to you with a smirk.'
 			func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A144')
 			if CloStyle = 2:
@@ -1563,11 +1606,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lena':
 	elseif npc_rel['A20'] >= 50 and fame['pav_slut'] < 300:
 		npc_rel['A20'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi, Lena! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you and shrugs her shoulders. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing much. Just waiting for this day to end."'
 			'The two of you talk for a while about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
 		else
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi, Lena! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you and arches a brow. "Nothing much. You lost <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			'You shake your head. "No, I just came over to see how you were and hang out."'
 			'The two of you talk for a while about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
@@ -1576,12 +1619,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lena':
 	elseif npc_rel['A20'] <= 20 and fame['pav_slut'] < 300:
 		npc_rel['A20'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi, Lena! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you with a frown. "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			'"I just wanted to say hi and see what you were up to."'
 			'"Yeah? Well, I don''t want to talk to you." You continue talking to her for a while, but it''s obvious that she has no interest in talking to you.'
 		else
-			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+			'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi, Lena! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you with a frown. "What do you want, freak?"'
 			'"I just wanted to say hi and see what you were up to."'
 			'"Yeah? Well, I don''t want to talk to you." You continue talking to her for a while, but it''s obvious that she has no interest in talking to you.'
@@ -1590,7 +1633,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lena':
 		'"What do you want, cunt? Shouldn''t you be sucking some cocks somewhere?" She turns away and ignores you.'
 	else
 		npc_rel['A20'] += 1
-		'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Lena! What are you up to?"'
+		'Seeing Lena sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi, Lena! What are you up to?"'
 		'She looks back at you and arches a brow. "You lost? Shouldn''t you be hanging out with your own friends?"'
 		'You shake your head. "I have a lot of friends. I just wanted to come over to see how you were and hang out."'
 		'The two of you talk for a while about how much school sucks and all the better things you could be doing with your time.'
@@ -1607,7 +1650,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pauline':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big24.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4 and gopnik_slut = 1:
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A24', 'dislike'
-		'As usual you find Pauline on the stairs. "What do you want?" Pauline asks in a non too friendly tone as you approach.'
+		'As usual you find Pauline on the stairs. "What do you want?" Pauline asks in a non-too-friendly tone as you approach.'
 		'You sigh slightly. "I just wanted to talk is all," you reply.'
 		'"Go talk to someone that cares then!" she says.'
 		'You talk to her for a bit and while she doesn''t ignore you, she also makes it clear she doesn''t approve of how you got into the gopniks.'
@@ -1649,7 +1692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pauline':
 			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps you approach her, "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you. "You lost nerd? Shouldn''t you be with your own kind?"'
 			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that. I just came over to see how you were doing."'
-			'The two of you continue talking for a while, mostly about how, about how crap all the stuff you like is and that you have no business hanging with the gopniks.'
+			'The two of you continue talking for a while, mostly about how about how crap all the stuff you like is and that you have no business hanging with the gopniks.'
 		end
 		func('npc_reactions', 'general', 'A24')
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
@@ -1674,7 +1717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pauline':
 			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps you approach her, "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
 			'She looks back at you and asks "You lost <<$pcs_nickname>>? Shouldn''t you be with your own kind?"'
 			'You shake your head. "Don''t be like that. I just came over to see how you were doing."'
-			'She narrows her eyes a little at you. "Yeah? Well no one cares how you''re doing, so go back to your own kind before I kick your ass back over there!" You try talking to her, but she just gets more agitated with you until you get up and leave.'
+			'She narrows her eyes a little at you. "Yeah? Well, no one cares how you''re doing, so go back to your own kind before I kick your ass back over there!" You try talking to her, but she just gets more agitated with you until you get up and leave.'
 		else
 			'Seeing Pauline sitting on the steps, you approach her. "Hi Pauline! What are you up to?"'
 			'She glances at you and then looks around before replying. "If there weren''t teachers around, I would kick your ass right now."'

locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/gschool.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	'Pavlovsk''s only school, where all the local children go for their education. Next to the school is the athletic field and a parking lot for the teachers, with a large grove of trees just beyond them.'
-	'Hidden behind these trees is the old school building, which was supposed to be renovated and used for advance classes after the new one was built, but budget cuts meant the project was cancelled and now the old building stands empty and abandoned. It''s a popular spot for students to skip class or hang out outside of school.'
+	'Hidden behind these trees is the old school building, which was supposed to be renovated and used for advanced classes after the new one was built, but budget cuts meant the project was canceled and now the old building stands empty and abandoned. It''s a popular spot for students to skip class or hang out outside of school.'
 
 	if ((hour = 6 and minut >= 30) or (hour >= 7 and hour < 18)) and mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and SchoolAtestat = 0 and kanikuli = 0 and suspended['on'] ! 1:
 		'With the school open you can go to the <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''gschool_grounds'', ''change_room''">changing rooms</a> by the gym and change your outfit.'
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 				'Everyone from your year is assembled in the auditorium of the school. Your teachers are standing on a platform in front of several rows of chairs where you and your classmates are sitting. Some parents and siblings are sitting in the back rows. Nobody from your family showed up.'
 			end
 
-			'Your Principial begins calling your classmates in alphabetical order. Finally it''s your turn.'
+			'Your principal begins calling your classmates in alphabetical order. Finally it''s your turn.'
 
 			if class['school_grade_average'] >= 90:
 				'You go up to the podium. As the Principal shakes your hand she announces "As every year I''d like to honor our best student of the year. Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> here performed exceptionally well in her studies and I think that deserves some recognition." She starts applauding and the auditorium quickly joins in.'
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 						menu_off = 1
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">School Hallway</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/gschool_hall0<<rand(0,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You don''t feel like attending all of your classes this morning and so make your way to the bathroom.'
+						'You don''t feel like attending all of your classes this morning and make your way to the bathroom.'
 						act 'Go to girl''s bathroom': gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'start'
 						act 'Go to boy''s bathroom': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'start'
 					end
@@ -246,6 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 
 		if Enable_tablemap = 0:
 			if anushkaQW['first_visit'] = 0 and meet_after_school = 1: '<a href="exec: gt ''anushka'', ''meet_after_school''">Anushka</a> is leaning against a tree just in front of the school.'
+			if radomirQW['first_visit'] = 0 and radomirQW['meet_after_school'] = 1: '<a href="exec: gt ''radapt'', ''meet_after_school''">Radomir</a> is leaning against a tree just in front of the school.'
 			if LariskaQW['story'] >= 5 and cheerleaders_on = 0: 'You see <a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''LariskaGo''">Lariska</a> impatiently walks back and fourth across the courtyard, as if she''s waiting for someone.'
 			if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 4 and cheerleaders_on = 0: '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''Zvereva_house_events'', ''Chris_walk_home''">Christina Zvereva</a> is walking across the school courtyard, looking irritated.'
 			if juliaQW['study_unlocked'] >= 1: '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''JuliaMilHome'', ''julia_go''">Julia</a> is sitting out on the courtyard, reading a book.'
@@ -301,7 +302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''NikoEv2'', ''Events''">Nikolai</a>', '5'
 			end
 			if st_count > 0:
-				'Near school yard, you see: '
+				'Near the schoolyard, you see: '
 				'<TABLE BORDER=1><<$show_table>></TR></TABLE>'
 			end
 		end
@@ -371,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 		elseif pcs_stam >= stammax / 5:
 			act 'Go for a run (1:00)': '<br><font color="red">You are so hungry you cannot face going for a run.</font>'
 		else
-			act 'Go for a run (1:00)': '<br><font color="red">You are to exhausted to do this. Recover your stamina before trying to go for a run.</font>'
+			act 'Go for a run (1:00)': '<br><font color="red">You are too exhausted to do this. Recover your stamina before trying to go for a run.</font>'
 		end
 	elseif ($clothingworntype ! 'danilovich_outfits' or $shoeworntype ! 'danilovich'):
 		'You could go for a run here if you were wearing sports clothes and shoes.'
@@ -455,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bulding':
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
 		menu_off = 1
 		'You''re in a good mood today as you enter the school. That changes when Dimka stops you in the hall on the way to class.
-		"I know what you did, bitch. Did you really thing I wouldn''t figure out it was you that wiped my hard drive?"
+		"I know what you did, bitch. Did you really think I wouldn''t figure out it was you that wiped my hard drive?"
 		Before you can deny anything, he continues, "I don''t even need that video to ruin your life. Just you wait. Soon the whole school will know what a whore you are."
 		His words fill you with dread as you make your way to class.'
 	end
@@ -504,7 +505,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SchoolRun':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You think you might be able to win, and sign up to participate in the competition. After quickly changing into your running gear you return to the track. The guys are having their race first, and you watch them as you prepare. As expected, Ivan wins. When the guys have finished, it is the girls'' turn.'
+	'You think you might be able to win and sign up to participate in the competition. After quickly changing into your running gear you return to the track. The guys are having their race first, and you watch them as you prepare. As expected, Ivan wins. When the guys have finished, it is the girls'' turn.'
 
 	act 'Go to the start':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -513,7 +514,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SchoolRun':
 		runnerQW['races_ran'] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/begsor.jpg"></center>'
-		'The 400m sprint event for girls is up next. You take off your jacket and go the starting line, mentally preparing yourself for the race.'
+		'The 400m sprint event for girls is up next. You take off your jacket and go to the starting line, mentally preparing yourself for the race.'
 		wait 725
 		'On your marks...'
 		wait 725
@@ -564,14 +565,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SchoolRun_result':
 		'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 4th place.'
 	elseif runnerQW['result'] < 45:
 		grupvalue[2] += 2
-		'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 3rd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you.'
+		'You run as fast as you can and manage to take 3rd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you.'
 	elseif runnerQW['result'] < 50:
 		grupvalue[2] += 3
-		'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 2nd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on your achievement.'
+		'You run as fast as you can and manage to take 2nd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on your achievement.'
 	else
 		runnerQW['pav_wins1'] += 1
 		grupvalue[2] += 5
-		'You run as fast as you can, and manage to reach the finish line first. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on winning the competition as you walk around with your arms raised in triumph.'
+		'You run as fast as you can and manage to reach the finish line first. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on winning the competition as you walk around with your arms raised in triumph.'
 	end
 
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'run', 1
@@ -601,7 +602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SchoolRun2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You think you might be able to win, and sign up to participate in the competition. After quickly changing into your running gear you return to the track. The guys are having their race first, and you watch them as you prepare. As expected, Ivan Prokhorov wins. When the guys have finished, it is the girls'' turn.'
+	'You think you might be able to win and sign up to participate in the competition. After quickly changing into your running gear you return to the track. The guys are having their race first, and you watch them as you prepare. As expected, Ivan Prokhorov wins. When the guys have finished, it is the girls'' turn.'
 
 	if christinaQW['fight'] = 1 or christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2:
 		if runnerQW['pav_wins2'] = 0:
@@ -679,14 +680,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SchoolRun2_result':
 		'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 4th place.'
 	elseif runnerQW['result'] < 40:
 		grupvalue[2] += 2
-		'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 3rd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you.'
+		'You run as fast as you can and manage to take 3rd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you.'
 	elseif runnerQW['result'] < 50:
 		grupvalue[2] += 3
-		'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 2nd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on your achievement.'
+		'You run as fast as you can and manage to take 2nd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on your achievement.'
 	else
 		runnerQW['pav_wins2'] += 1
 		grupvalue[2] += 5
-		'You run as fast as you can, and manage to reach the finish line first. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on winning the competition yet again while you walk around with your arms raised in triumph.'
+		'You run as fast as you can and manage to reach the finish line first. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on winning the competition yet again while you walk around with your arms raised in triumph.'
 	end
 
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'run', 1
@@ -695,38 +696,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SchoolRun2_result':
 	if runnerQW['pav_wins2'] = 3 and runnerQW['pav_stage'] = 1:
 		runnerQW['pav_stage'] = 2
 		if runnerQW['prof_stage'] < 2:
-			'You have won the competition three more times and Mr. Pavlovich awards you the second tier sports trophy in running.'
+			'You have won the competition three more times and Mr. Pavlovich awards you the second-tier sports trophy in running.'
 			runnerQW['prof_stage'] = 2
 		else
 			'You have won the competition three more times and Mr. Pavlovich awards you another trophy.'
 		end
 		if christinaQW['fight'] = 1 or christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2:
 			npc_rel['A19'] += 5
-			'Lina stands at at the finish line, gasping for breath. Even though you beat her again, she flashes you a bright smile in congratulations.'
+			'Lina stands at the finish line, gasping for breath. Even though you beat her again, she flashes you a bright smile in congratulations.'
 		else
 			'Christina stands nearby glaring at you the whole time, her hands balled into fists. She''s seething with rage, realizing she cannot beat you.'
 		end
 	elseif runnerQW['pav_wins2'] = 2 and runnerQW['result'] >= 130:
 		if christinaQW['fight'] = 1 or christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2:
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A19', 'love'
-			'Lina stands at at the finish line, gasping for breath. Even though you beat her a second time, she flashes you a bright smile in congratulations.'
+			'Lina stands at the finish line, gasping for breath. Even though you beat her a second time, she flashes you a bright smile in congratulations.'
 		else
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A18', 'loathe'
-			'Christina is gasping for breath at the finish line. She was unable to overtake you, and came second again. Christina avoids your gaze, not wanting to look you in the eye.'
+			'Christina is gasping for breath at the finish line. She was unable to overtake you and came second again. Christina avoids your gaze, not wanting to look you in the eye.'
 		end
 	elseif runnerQW['pav_wins2'] = 1 and runnerQW['result'] >= 130:
 		if christinaQW['fight'] = 1 or christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2:
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A19', 'love'
-			'Lina stands at at the finish line, gasping for breath. Even though you beat her, she flashes you a bright smile in congratulations.'
+			'Lina stands at the finish line, gasping for breath. Even though you beat her, she flashes you a bright smile in congratulations.'
 		else
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A18', 'loathe'
-			'Christina is gasping for breath at the finish line. She was unable to overtake you, and came second yet again. You just flash her a toothy grin and continue your victory lap. Through clenched teeth Christina growls at you. "You bitch!"'
+			'Christina is gasping for breath at the finish line. She was unable to overtake you and came second yet again. You just flash her a toothy grin and continue your victory lap. Through clenched teeth Christina growls at you. "You bitch!"'
 		end
 	end
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	if runnerQW['result'] > 50:
-		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds','Family extension'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'Family extension'
 	else
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end
@@ -766,7 +767,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'change_room':
 		end
 	end
 	*nl
-	'The locker room is accessed through the school gym, and is left unlocked until 18:30 each day for the use of students using the sports ground for training and events outside school hours. The room is cold, damp and filled with lockers, benches and not much else. You can <a href="exec: gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">change your outfit</a> by the lockers here'+iif(pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG > 0, ', and <a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">manage your piercings</a>', '.')+''
+	'The locker room is accessed through the school gym and is left unlocked until 18:30 each day for the use of students using the sports ground for training and events outside school hours. The room is cold, damp and filled with lockers, benches and not much else. You can <a href="exec: gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">change your outfit</a> by the lockers here'+iif(pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG > 0, ', and <a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">manage your piercings</a>', '.')+''
 	*nl
 
 	if (hour = 18 and minut >= 30) or hour > 18:
@@ -800,7 +801,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 	if $home['current'] = 'parents_home':
 		if npc_rel['A34'] > 50:
 			'You hear your name and turn to see Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>>... <<$pcs_nickname>> you won!" Kolka shouts while running towards you with a huge grin. He crashes into you and gives you a tight hug.'
-			'"Hey, how''s my favourite brother? Thanks for coming, I wasn''t aware you knew I was running."'
+			'"Hey, how''s my favorite brother? Thanks for coming, I wasn''t aware you knew I was running."'
 			'Kolka, still grinning, replies "Hey, you didn''t think I spotted you doing all those laps when the school was closed and training at the community center? You''re always out wearing your sports gear and carrying that water bottle, so you''re clearly not just meeting friends!"'
 		else
 			'You hear your name and turn to find Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you won! Well done."'
@@ -858,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 						pcs_breath = 0
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/restaurant_family.jpg"></center>'
-						'At the local Del Parco restaurant, you all spend a few hours enjoying your meal as your family encourage you to continue and improve, but stressing that they are very proud of what you''ve achieved so far.'
+						'At the local Del Parco restaurant, you all spend a few hours enjoying your meal as your family encourages you to continue and improve, but stressing that they are very proud of what you''ve achieved so far.'
 						'Your stepfather orders some wine and although your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives him a disapproving look, he gives you a glass so you can toast your victory.'
 						'At the end of a very enjoyable meal and some quality family time, you thank them again for their kindness and acknowledge that you really appreciate this as you know that money is tight. There''s a big family hug and you all return home.'
 						minut += 90
@@ -883,7 +884,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 					pcs_hairbsh = 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'After showering and changing, you head out and greet your mother. "Thanks for coming. It means a lot to me."'
-					'"Of course I''d come <<$pcs_nickname>>! I just want the best for you and I''m proud of you and your win. Come on, let''s go out for a bite to eat. I think we need to have a chat."'
+					'"Of course, I''d come <<$pcs_nickname>>! I just want the best for you and I''m proud of you and your win. Come on, let''s go out for a bite to eat. I think we need to have a chat."'
 					'"You don''t have to <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''m so glad you came and I know money is tight."'
 					'"That''s fine, so long as you don''t mind the station cafe. I want to see if we can patch things up between us."'
 					minut += 10
@@ -909,13 +910,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 						if npc_QW['A29'] > 0:
 							if npc_QW['A29'] = 1: npc_QW['A29'] = 2
 							'At the station cafe, your mother selects a corner spot away from the main area so you can keep your chat private.'
-							'You both initially have some general small talk during which she again congratulates you on your win and explains that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can, but you need to meet her half way.'
+							'You both initially have some general small talk during which she again congratulates you on your win and explains that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can, but you need to meet her halfway.'
 							'You''re initially unsure how to respond, but after a while in a very low shaky voice, you reply. "I''d love that, but why do you give me such a hard time just because I had sex?"'
 							'As your feelings start to come to the surface, you continue. "Yes, I had sex, but it doesn''t make me a bad person! And what gives you the right to immediately treat me like I''m a whore!? I can do the maths, you were 16 when you had Anya! That''s younger than me!"'
 							*nl
-							'Your mother sighs and a tear starts rolling down her cheek as she slowly replies "I know. Maybe I was a bit harsh, but I don''t want you repeating my mistakes. I want you to have the chance to go to university and make a better life for yourself."'
+							'Your mother sighs and a tear starts rolling down her cheek as she slowly replies "I know. Maybe I was a bit harsh, but I don''t want you to repeat my mistakes. I want you to have the chance to go to university and make a better life for yourself."'
 							'You feel bad seeing your mother cry and tell her that you''re careful and will try your best at school. You also reassure her that you are taking precautions.'
-							'Your mother responds that she accepts that she may have been a bit harsh and apologises.'
+							'Your mother responds that she accepts that she may have been a bit harsh and apologizes.'
 							'"Okay <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''ll try and yes it would be great to have my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> back!" you reply.'
 							*nl
 							'Your mother gets up and comes over to hug you. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, that''s all I can ask and I''ll try to be more supportive too. Just please talk to me if you''re worried about anything."'
@@ -923,8 +924,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 						else
 							'At the station cafe, your mother selects a corner spot away from the main area so you can keep your chat private.'
 							'You both initially have some general small talk during which she again congratulates you on your win and explains that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can, but she doesn''t want you staying out late as you could get into trouble. She continues by saying that she wants you to go to university so that you can make a better life for yourself.'
-							'Although you''re a little annoyed that she''s still treating you like a child, you do appreciate her concern. "I know <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and I''m sorry that you get worried when I get back a little late, but you know what time the disco finishes at and that I''ll never be home by midnight unless I leave earlier than my friends. They would laugh at me having to be home early for bedtime!"'
-							'Your mother thinks it through for a moment. "Okay, I can accept that. I''m also aware that you''re nearly 18, but that won''t stop me from worrying. Maybe I''ve been a bit harsh in my approach out of habit with Anya but, like I said, I only want the best for you. Can you at least try to meet me half way on this and do your best in school too?"'
+							'Although you''re a little annoyed that she''s still treating you like a child, you do appreciate her concern. "I know <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and I''m sorry that you get worried when I get back a little late, but you know what time the disco finishes and that I''ll never be home by midnight unless I leave earlier than my friends. They would laugh at me having to be home early for bedtime!"'
+							'Your mother thinks it through for a moment. "Okay, I can accept that. I''m also aware that you''re nearly 18, but that won''t stop me from worrying. Maybe I''ve been a bit harsh in my approach out of habit with Anya but, like I said, I only want the best for you. Can you at least try to meet me halfway on this and do your best in school too?"'
 							'Unsure how to respond, you sigh. "Okay <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''ll try. It''s just that it can get a bit overbearing."'
 							'Your mother continues. "Okay, let''s just try to get our relationship back to a good place. Please promise me that you''ll do your best in school too. Also, no matter what please know that you can always talk to me if something is worrying you. Please know that I do love you and want the best for you."'
 							'This is the closest you''ve felt to your mother for ages, so you get up and give her a hug. "Thanks <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. I''m glad we had this chat to clear the air. I love you too and it''ll be good to have my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> back." She hugs you back and you both finish your meals with some more relaxed conversation.'
@@ -965,7 +966,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer', 4
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/Sis_drink.jpg"></center>'
-					'You both have a few beers for the next few hours and spend time catching up. Feeling light headed and more than a little tipsy, you both leave the cafe and share a hug as you promise to meet up regularly and catch up. You know that you can see Anya at the community center on Friday evenings.'
+					'You both have a few beers for the next few hours and spend time catching up. Feeling light-headed and more than a little tipsy, you both leave the cafe and share a hug as you promise to meet up regularly and catch up. You know that you can see Anya at the community center on Friday evenings.'
 					minut += 100
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -984,7 +985,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 				'You hear <<$lover[lover_number]>> shouting your name and jog over to meet them. You both embrace with a cuddle and a kiss on the cheek.'
 				'"Hey love, well done."'
 				'"Thanks. And thanks for coming, it means a lot."'
-				'"Of course I''d come and support you. Now go and get freshened up and we''ll go out, my treat and you choose."'
+				'"Of course, I''d come and support you. Now go and get freshened up and we''ll go out, my treat and you choose."'
 				'You both have another cuddle before you head into the changing rooms to get showered and changed.'
 				minut += 4
 				act 'Go take your shower':

locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 	:reroll_jump1
 
 	if rolanmeet = 0 or mid($start_type,1,2) ! 'sg':
-		events = rand(0,17)
+		events = rand(0,20)
 	else
 		events = rand(0,22)
 	end
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/eatu.jpg"></center>'
 		'You see Anushka across the courtyard. When she notices you looking, she raises her hand up to her face and spreads two fingers in a V in front of her mouth before sticking her tongue out between them in the universal sign for ''eat me''. Before you can respond, she heads inside her building.'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
-		if pcs_vag ! 0:act 'Follow her': minut += 2 & gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'follownush'
+		act 'Follow her': minut += 2 & gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'follownush'
 	elseif events = 10:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/gop1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/water.jpg"></center>'
 		end
 		'You notice some young boys heading towards you, the oldest about your brother''s age. They are all holding water balloons or large open bottles of water. As they get closer, they suddenly run over and start throwing the water on you. They chase you across the courtyard until they break off when they see a new victim.'
-		!!ToDo: I don''t know if there is code for making Sveta wet and her clothes wet or not, if so please add it, if not maybe we should think about adding it. Since this would mess up the hair, could make wet clothes uncomfortable to wear and in winter greatly increase the odds of getting sick if Sveta doesn''t go change into dry clothes.
+!!ToDo: I don''t know if there is code for making Sveta wet and her clothes wet or not, if so please add it, if not maybe we should think about adding it. Since this would mess up the hair, could make wet clothes uncomfortable to wear and in winter greatly increase the odds of getting sick if Sveta doesn''t go change into dry clothes.
 		pcs_hairbsh = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 			'You spot a guy you think you recognize leaning against a wall near the storage buildings, but it''s hard to tell as his face is turned to the side and tilted down. There''s a girl kneeling in front of him, giving him an enthusiastic blowjob. You move to get a better view and realize it is Roma, your sister''s boyfriend and... Oh god! It''s your sister! She''s sucking him for all she''s worth, taking his dick all the way down her throat. Part of you knows you shouldn''t watch, but another can''t look away. Where did your sister learn these skills? Can she teach you?'
 			'You''re pulled out of your thoughts when you hear Roma moan, his hand gripping the back of Anya''s head as he cums hard in her mouth. Anya doesn''t resist and continues to suck, even after Roma removes his hand from her head. She sucks his cock clean before standing up. You instinctively duck, hoping you''re not noticed. They briefly kiss before walking away hand in hand.'
 		else
-			'You spot an extremely happy looking guy leaning up against the wall near the storage buildings as a girl gives him an enthusiastic blowjob. After a few minutes, you hear the guy moan, his cock never leaving the girl''s mouth as she continues to milk him for another minute before standing up. The two then walk away together.'
+			'You spot an extremely happy-looking guy leaning up against the wall near the storage buildings as a girl gives him an enthusiastic blowjob. After a few minutes, you hear the guy moan, his cock never leaving the girl''s mouth as she continues to milk him for another minute before standing up. The two then walk away together.'
 		end
 		killvar 'text_rand'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', -10
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/nushbenchtalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stop and take a seat next to her, and she glances over as you sit down. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" she asks.'
 			'"Just killing time. Bored, you know?" you reply.'
-			'She nods. "Yeah, I know how that is. I was so bored I was making up little stories for what the people are doing." She points at some old guy walking towards the garages. "Take him for example. He used to be part of the KGB. Now he''s a freelance assassin and was just hired to go kill that shrill of an old woman that is always sitting in the market yelling at every girl wearing a skirt higher than her ankle. You know the one."'
+			'She nods. "Yeah, I know how that is. I was so bored I was making up little stories for what the people were doing." She points at some old guy walking towards the garages. "Take him for example. He used to be part of the KGB. Now he''s a freelance assasin and was just hired to go kill that shrill of an old woman that is always sitting in the market yelling at every girl wearing a skirt higher than her ankle. You know the one."'
 			*nl
 			'You smile and nod. "So did you hire him?"'
 			'That gets a laugh from her. "Okay, your turn." You take a moment to find someone else and start making up your own story. The two of you spend the next few minutes laughing and making up stories about the different people you see passing through the courtyard before she gets a message and jumps up with a huge grin. "Need to go, see you later." She runs off without another word.'
@@ -336,7 +336,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 10
 					gs 'drugs', 'smoke', 1
-
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/boysmoke2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You take the cigarette and one of the boys lights it for you. You take a long slow draw off it. "Thanks. I needed that."'
 					'They smile in return. "Sure, no problem."' 
@@ -345,8 +344,255 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events1':
 				end
 			end
 		end
-	elseif events >= 18:
+	elseif events = 18:
 		gt 'pav_complexrolan'
+	else
+		*clr & cla
+		gs 'exp_gain', 'prcptn', rand(1,2)
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_friends.jpg"></center>'
+		if maksimQW['QWstage'] = 1:
+			'You notice a Maksim, Anushka''s little brother and a few boys his age, hanging out together smoking cigarettes.'
+			act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+			if maksim_blackmail = 1:
+				act 'Go over and talk to him':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 5
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
+					'You walk over to the boys and give them a smile. "What are you boys up to." you ask.'
+					'Maksim gives you a once over obviously checking out your body again as he grins. "Well if it isn''t my favorite slut."'
+					'One of the other boys asks Maksim. "Who''s the thot?"'
+					'Maksim glances over to him. "The slutty ass friend of my sister I told you guys about."'
+					*nl
+					'Another says. "This is her?" Suddenly they are all looking at you like a piece of meat. Maksim must have told them about seeing your tits.'
+					'You shake your head at them. "This one? What have you been telling your friends about me?" You ask Maksim.'
+					'Maksim grins as he says. "Only the truth. That you like spying on my sister getting fucked like a slut and how I caught you, then you showing me your tits." His friends hang on his every word, they all seemed impressed, likely none of them have seen a pair of tits in person before.'
+					*nl
+					'You sigh and now regret coming over. "Is that so?"'
+					'Maksim nods to you. "Yep, though I am not sure they quite believe me though. So why don''t you prove it to them."'
+					'At first, you can''t believe he would make this demand of you, but then you realize of course he would, he is trying to show off for his little friends. "Right here?"' 
+					'He looks around as do you. At least no one else is currently around if you have to do it. "Yeah right here, no one is around."'
+					act 'Flash them': gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'maksim_friends_flash'
+					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
+					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+						act 'Tell him no (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+							minut += 5
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
+							'You shake your head. "No. I am not going to show you and your friends my tits."'
+							'One of the other boys says to the rest. "See told you Maksim was lying." Others jump in with similar comments'
+							'Now Maksim turns red from anger and embarrassment. "If you don''t I will tell Nush you were spying on her."'
+							'You see how he is getting desperate, you sigh a bit and decide to throw him a bone. "Look our deal was I show... YOU... my tits, not your friends. So I am not breaking our deal."'
+							*nl
+							'Suddenly his friends all shut up and one of them asks. "Wait, he was telling the truth?" While Maksim moves over to stand next to you with a smug look on his face.'
+							'You nod. "Yeah but only him, not his friends." Suddenly all his friends look at him like he is the coolest person they ever meet. "Well I should get going." You decide now is a good time to leave before they start trying to get you to show them all your tits. As you are walking off, you feel a slap on your ass, you glance back to see a smug Maksim standing there watching you, you just shake your head and leave.'
+							act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+						end
+					else
+						act 'Tell him no (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+					end	
+				end
+			elseif maksim_blackmail = 2:
+				'You walk over to the boys and give them a smile. "What are you boys up to." you ask.'
+				'Maksim gives you a once over obviously checking out your body again as he grins. "Well if it isn''t my favorite slut."'		
+				'Several of the boys leer at you. "Maksim''s bitch is back."'
+				'The rest of the boys all laugh, they all seem to be like Maksim and have no respect for girls at all. Gopniks in the making you figure.'
+				*nl
+				'You shake your head at them. "What are you boys doing?" You ask Maksim.'
+				'Maksim grins. "Just talking about the sluts in school and which one of us is going to bang them first." His friends seem to all agree with his words a few others throw in a few choice words, one of them naming a girl you never heard of.'
+				*nl
+				'You shake your head slightly. "Is that so?"'
+				'One of his friends nudges him. Maksim glances at him then back to you. "I think we should extend our deal and you should flash my friends your tits."'
+				'At first, you can''t believe he would make this demand of you, but then you realize of course he would, he is trying to show off for his little friends. "Right here?"' 
+				'He looks around as do you. At least no one else is currently around if you have to do it. "Yeah right here, no one is around."'
+				act 'Flash them': gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'maksim_friends_flash'
+				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
+				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+					act 'Tell him no (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+						minut += 5
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
+						'You shake your head. "No. I told you last time, I''m at not showing your friends."'
+						'One of the other boys says to the rest. "You said you would talk to her." Others jump in with similar comments.'
+						'Now Maksim gives them an annoyed look. "I told you I would work on it." While Maksim moves over to stand next to you as he says to you. "Do it or I will tell Nush you were spying on her."'
+						'The look on his face says he is serious, you really don''t want her to know. Maybe she wouldn''t mind but maybe she would, you have to admit it is a little creepy spying on your friend having sex.'
+						act 'Agree to flash them': gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'maksim_friends_flash'
+						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
+						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+							act 'Tell him no again (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+								minut += 5
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
+								'You shake your head. "Nope, you will just have to tell her then."'
+								'Now Maksim looks angry. "Fine I will."'
+								'Then you smile to him. "Just remember if you do then you will never see these again." You say as your grab and lift your own tits.'
+								'You see the light go off in his head. He knows if he tells, he will have no blackmail over you to show you his tits in private. "Whatever get out of here." You are unsure what he will decided but you think he will keep your secret. As you are walking off, you feel a slap on your ass, you glance back to see a smug Maksim standing there watching you, you just shake your head and leave.'
+								act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+							end
+						else
+							act 'Tell him no again(<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+						end
+					end
+				else
+					act 'Tell him no (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				end
+			elseif maksim_blackmail >= 3:
+				'You walk over to the boys and give them a smile. "What are you boys up to." you ask.'
+				'Maksim gives you a once over obviously checking out your body again as he grins. "Well if it isn''t our favorite slut."'		
+				'Several of the boys leer at you. "Maksim''s bitch is back. Show us your tits again."'
+				'The rest of the boys all laugh, they all seem to be like Maksim and have no respect for girls at all. Gopniks in the making you figure.'
+				'You just sigh and soon all of them are badgering you to show them your tits.'
+				act 'Flash them again': gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'maksim_friends_flash'
+				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'hard'
+				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+					act 'Tell him no (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+						minut += 5
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
+						'You shake your head. "No. I showed you all last time, not in the mood today."'
+						'Now the boys all start trying to get Maksim to force you to flash them again.'
+						'Now Maksim gives them an annoyed look. "Shut up, let me deal with this." While Maksim moves over to stand next to you as he says to you. "Do it or I will tell Nush you were spying on her."'
+						'The look on his face says he is serious, you really don''t want her to know. Maybe she wouldn''t mind but maybe she would, you have to admit it is a little creepy spying on your friend having sex.'
+						act 'Agree to flash them again': gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'maksim_friends_flash'
+						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'hard'
+						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+							act 'Tell him no again (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+								minut += 5
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
+								'You shake your head. "Nope, you will just have to tell her then."'
+								'Now Maksim looks angry. "Fine I will."'
+								'Then you smile to him. "Just remember if you do then you will never see these again." You say as your grab and lift your own tits.'
+								'You see the light go off in his head. He knows if he tells, he will have no blackmail over you to show you his tits in private. "Whatever get out of here." You are unsure what he will decide but you think he will keep your secret. As you are walking off, you feel a slap on your ass, you glance back to see a smug Maksim standing there watching you, you just shake your head and leave.'
+								act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+							end
+						else
+							act 'Tell him no again(<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+						end
+					end
+				else
+					act 'Tell him no (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				end
+			else
+				act 'Go over and talk to him':
+					*clr & cla
+					minut += 5
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
+					if hotcat >= 5:
+						'You walk over to the boys and give them a smile. "What are you boys up to." you ask.'
+						'Maksim gives you a once over obviously checking out your body again. "What up slut?"'
+						'One of the other boys asks Maksim. "Who''s the thot?"'
+						*nl
+						'Maksim glances over to him. "One of my sisters slutty ass friends."'
+						'You shake your head at them. "No need to be rude."'
+						'Maksim reaches down and grabs his crotch lifting it a bit as he says. "Why don''t you do something useful with that pretty mouth of yours and suck my dick, like a good little slut." That makes his friends laugh, likely as he wanted, you are sure he is showing off for them.'
+						'You smirk to him. "I don''t date little boys, only grown men."'
+						'His friends laugh a bit at your comment, while Maksim gets dark red in anger. "I''ll show you who''s a man." He says as he starts to unbutton his pants. Not wanting to see his little dick you turn and walk off while flipping him the bird.'
+						act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+					else
+						'You walk over to the boys and give them a smile. "What are you boys up to." you ask.'
+						'Maksim gives you a look of annoyance. "What do you want? Isn''t it bad enough you come over to our apartment all the time, now you have to bother me when I am hanging out with my friends."'
+						'One of the other boys asks Maksim. "Who''s the cow?"'
+						*nl
+						'Maksim glances over to him. "One of my sisters ugly ass friends."'
+						'You shake your head at them. "No need to be rude."'
+						'Maksim takes a puff off his cigarette and makes a lame attempt to blow it at your face but you are not close enough. "We are not friends you dumb cow, so go away and stop bothering me." You sigh slightly and decide it is better to leave than argue with a bunch of pre-teens.'
+						act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		else
+			'You notice a few boys a few years younger than your brother, that can''t be more than twelve or thirteen, hanging out together smoking cigarettes. You think you have seen them around before, you think at least one of them lives in one of the other buildings.'
+			act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'maksim_friends_flash':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	maksimQW['blackmail_flash_friends'] += 1
+	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
+	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+	if maksimQW['blackmail_flash_friends'] >= 5:
+		if PCLoSkirt > 0:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/friends_pussy2.jpg"></center>'
+			'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your tits again.'
+			'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, show us your pussy!"'
+			'You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you, into showing him and his friends your pussy. "Seriously?"'
+			'He laughs. "Yeah now do it slut."'
+			*nl
+			'You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so you do as you are told and pull up your skirt showing off your bare pussy.'
+			'He stares are your pussy like the rest then looks up at your face and stares you right in the eye as he says. "Ok that''s enough, you can go."'
+			'You frown and drop your skirt, to cover your pussy back up. Then you walk away, not wanting to deal with them anymore, as you walk off you can hear his friends asking him all sorts of questions in awe of him.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		else
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/friends_pussy1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your tits again.'
+			'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, show us your pussy!"'
+			'You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you, into showing him and his friends your pussy. "Seriously?"'
+			'He laughs. "Yeah now do it slut."'
+			*nl
+			'You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so you do as you are told and pull down your pants showing off your bare pussy.'
+			'He stares are your pussy like the rest then looks up at your face and stares you right in the eye as he says. "Ok that''s enough, you can go."'
+			'You frown and pull your pants back up, to cover your pussy back up. Then you walk away, not wanting to deal with them anymore, as you walk off you can hear his friends asking him all sorts of questions in awe of him.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		end
+	elseif maksimQW['blackmail_flash_friends'] >= 10:
+		if PCLoSkirt > 0:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/friends_full2.jpg"></center>'
+			'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your pussy again.'
+			'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, show us everything!"'
+			'You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so you do as you are told and pull up your skirt showing off your bare pussy, while pulling down your top to expose your tits.'
+			'He stares at you like the rest then looks up at your face and stares you right in the eye as he says. "Ok that''s enough, you can go."'
+			'You frown and drop your skirt, to cover your pussy back up, while pulling up your top to cover up your breasts. Then you walk away, not wanting to deal with them anymore, as you walk off you can hear his friends asking him all sorts of questions in awe of him.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		else
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/friends_full1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your pussy again.'
+			'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, show us everything!"'
+			'You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so you do as you are told and pull down your pants showing off your bare pussy, while pulling down your top to expose your tits.'
+			'He stares at you like the rest then looks up at your face and stares you right in the eye as he says. "Ok that''s enough, you can go."'
+			'You frown and pull your pants up to cover your pussy back up, while pulling up your top to cover up your breasts. Then you walk away, not wanting to deal with them anymore, as you walk off you can hear his friends asking him all sorts of questions in awe of him.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
+		end
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim_blackmail/friends_tits.jpg"></center>'
+		'You sigh, knowing what he wants. "Fine!" You say as you start to show him your tits again.'
+		'He shakes his head and grins. "Not this time, show us your pussy!"'
+		'You can''t believe you let this little shit blackmail you, into showing him and his friends your pussy. "Seriously?"'
+		'He laughs. "Yeah now do it slut."'
+		*nl
+		'You sigh, you know the little snitch would tell Anushka, so you do as you are told and pull up your skirt showing off your bare pussy.'
+		'He stares are your pussy like the rest then looks up at your face and stares you right in the eye as he says. "Ok that''s enough, you can go."'
+		'You frown and drop your skirt, to cover your pussy back up. Then you walk away, not wanting to deal with them anymore, as you walk off you can hear his friends asking him all sorts of questions in awe of him.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation', 'sub'
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Move away': gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -408,7 +654,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events2':
 			'You spot a guy you think you recognize leaning against a wall near the storage buildings, but it''s hard to tell as his face is turned to the side and tilted down. There''s a girl kneeling in front of him, giving him an enthusiastic blowjob. You move to get a better view and realize it is Roma, your sister''s boyfriend and... Oh god! It''s your sister! She''s sucking him for all she''s worth, taking his dick all the way down her throat. Part of you knows you shouldn''t watch, but another can''t look away. Where did your sister learn these skills? Can she teach you?'
 			'You''re pulled out of your thoughts when you hear Roma moan, his hand gripping the back of Anya''s head as he cums hard in her mouth. Anya doesn''t resist and continues to suck, even after Roma removes his hand from her head. She sucks his cock clean before standing up. You instinctively duck, hoping you''re not noticed. They briefly kiss before walking away hand in hand.'
 		else
-			'You spot an extremely happy looking guy leaning up against the wall near the storage buildings as a girl gives him an enthusiastic blowjob. After a few minutes, you hear the guy moan, his cock never leaving the girl''s mouth as she continues to milk him for another minute before standing up. The two then walk away together.'
+			'You spot an extremely happy-looking guy leaning up against the wall near the storage buildings as a girl gives him an enthusiastic blowjob. After a few minutes, you hear the guy moan, his cock never leaving the girl''s mouth as she continues to milk him for another minute before standing up. The two then walk away together.'
 		end
 		killvar 'text_rand'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', -10
@@ -506,7 +752,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events2':
 						else
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/3stooges.jpg"></center>'
 						end
-						'Starting to feel nervous, you glance down at your phone. "Oh I didn''t notice the time, I need to get going." You wave at them and start walking away as you hear them laughing behind you.'
+						'Starting to feel nervous, you glance down at your phone. "Oh, I didn''t notice the time, I need to get going." You wave at them and start walking away as you hear them laughing behind you.'
 						act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 					end
 					act 'Make small talk':
@@ -582,7 +828,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events2':
 						grupvalue[4] -= 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/gopgirls.jpg"></center>'
-						'Starting to feel nervous, you glance down at your phone. "Oh I didn''t notice the time, I need to get going." You wave at them and start walking away as you hear them laughing behind you.'
+						'Starting to feel nervous, you glance down at your phone. "Oh, I didn''t notice the time, I need to get going." You wave at them and start walking away as you hear them laughing behind you.'
 						act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 					end
 					act 'Make small talk':
@@ -650,7 +896,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events2':
 					minut += 1
 					grupvalue[4] -= 2
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Starting to feel nervous, you glance down at your phone. "Oh I didn''t notice the time, I need to get going." You wave at them and start walking away as you hear them laughing behind you.'
+					'Starting to feel nervous, you glance down at your phone. "Oh, I didn''t notice the time, I need to get going." You wave at them and start walking away as you hear them laughing behind you.'
 					act 'Move away':gt 'pav_park', 'deeper_park'
 				end
 				act 'Make small talk':
@@ -827,7 +1073,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'male_gopnik_beer':
 					'You''re feeling pretty drunk and the guys seem to be amused at the sight of you. They exchange a few words that you can''t quite make out before Vasily speaks up. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really know how to drink."' 
 					'You nod at the compliment. "Yeah.... I do okay...." you slur in reply.'
 					*nl
-					'This seems to amuse them even more. "Yeah, I bet you could down a beer faster than Vitek, couldn''t you?" You give him a look, but feel like you could out drink anyone right now, so you drunkenly nod.'
+					'This seems to amuse them even more. "Yeah, I bet you could down a beer faster than Vitek, couldn''t you?" You give him a look, but feel like you could out-drink anyone right now, so you drunkenly nod.'
 					'Vasily grins widely. "Great! How about we make a bet? If you can drink one down faster than Vitek, we''ll buy you a case of beer, but if you lose, you have to walk around the complex completely naked. What do you say?"'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -865,7 +1111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'male_gopnik_beer':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/dandick.jpg"></center>'
 									'You smile at Dan before reaching over and grabbing his dick, but instead of stroking it, you dig your nails deeply into it, making him squirm and yell. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, let go before you rip my dick off!" Vitek and Vasily howl in laughter at this.'
-									'You give him a sadistic smile. "Give me a beer and I''ll let go..." He gives you a dirty look ,but winces as you dig your nails in even harder. He quickly hands you another beer and you take your time taking another drink before releasing him.'
+									'You give him a sadistic smile. "Give me a beer and I''ll let go..." He gives you a dirty look but winces as you dig your nails in even harder. He quickly hands you another beer and you take your time taking another drink before releasing him.'
 									'He puts his dick away and spends the next several minutes complaining. With the last of the beers drank, the boys get up and tell you that they''ll see you later before leaving. They don''t invite you to join them, so you take the hint.'
 									act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 								end
@@ -991,7 +1237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_1':
 				'You''re feeling pretty drunk, and the girls seem to be amused by the sight of you. They exchange a few words that you can''t quite make out before Lena speaks up. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really know how to drink."' 
 				'You nod at the compliment. "Yeah.... I do okay..." you slur in reply.'
 				*nl
-				'This seems to amuse them even more. "Yeah, I bet you could down a beer faster than Alyona, couldn''t you?" You give her a look, but feel like you could out drink anyone right now, so you drunkenly nod.'
+				'This seems to amuse them even more. "Yeah, I bet you could down a beer faster than Alyona, couldn''t you?" You give her a look, but feel like you could out-drink anyone right now, so you drunkenly nod.'
 				'Lena grins widely. "Great! How about we make a bet? If you can out down one faster than Alyona, Lera will walk around the complex naked, but if you lose, you have to do it. What do you say?" Lera gives Lena a look of surprise, but Lena just nods and Lera doesn''t say anything.'
 
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
@@ -1029,7 +1275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_1':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/eatmelera.jpg"></center>'
 								'You smile at Lera and reach over and pinch her clit between your index finger and thumb, which makes her squeal in pain as she grabs your arm with her hands. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, let go before you rip my clit off!" The other girls howl in laughter at this.'
-								'You give her a sadistic smile. "Give me a beer and I''ll let go." She gives you a dirty look, but winces as you dig your nails in even harder. She quickly hands you another beer and you take your time taking another drink before releasing her.'
+								'You give her a sadistic smile. "Give me a beer and I''ll let go." She gives you a dirty look but winces as you dig your nails in even harder. She quickly hands you another beer and you take your time taking another drink before releasing her.'
 								'She pulls her pants back up and spends the next several minutes complaining. With the last of the beers drank, the girls get up and bid each other farewell before they each go their own way.'
 								act 'Move away':gt 'pav_complex', 'start'
 							end
@@ -1198,7 +1444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_2':
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/beer' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'You''re completely wasted now, yet they still keep handing your beers and encouraging you to drink up.'
+						'You''re completely wasted now, yet they still keep handing you beer and encouraging you to drink up.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Had enough(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1229,7 +1475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'female_gopnik_beer_2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/passedout.jpg"></center>'
 							'You lose count of the number of beers you drink and everything becomes fuzzy before going black.'
-							'You don''t know how long you were passed out, but you feel sick to your stomach and your head is starting to hurt as you find yourself laying face down on the ground. As you slowly get up, you notice you''re completely naked other than your shoes and your purse laying a few feet away.' 
+							'You don''t know how long you were passed out, but you feel sick to your stomach and your head is starting to hurt as you find yourself lying face down on the ground. As you slowly get up, you notice you''re completely naked other than your shoes and your purse laying a few feet away.' 
 							'Panicking, you look around but don''t see anyone, just all the empty bottles by the bench where the girls once were.'
 							act 'Go home':gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'homenaked'
 						end
@@ -1259,7 +1505,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follownush':
 		act 'Join her':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/complex/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit next to her and the two of you start chatting about what''s been going on lately in your lives. Just as you were telling her about something your sister did, she leans over and kisses you. You''re briefly taken aback.'
+			'You sit next to her and the two of you start chatting about what''s been going on lately in your lives. Just as you were telling her about something your sister did, she leaned over and kissed you. You''re briefly taken aback.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Stop the kiss (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1435,7 +1681,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eatlera':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lera/sex/complex/eatlera1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You bite your lip and look at her inviting pussy. Part of you no longer cares about the beer, you just really want to eat her pussy. You glance at the other girls and they seem to be encouraging you to do it, so you get down on your knees. As you do Lera pulls her pants and panties off and pulls up her long shirt, lifting up one her legs and spreading them to give you easy access.'
-	'You lean in and start to lap at her clit and pussy. She moans softly as the other girls whistle and cat call. Lera, on the other hand, has her own words of encouragement. "Mmhmm... That''s right bitch, eat my pussy!"'
+	'You lean in and start to lap at her clit and pussy. She moans softly as the other girls whistle and catcall. Lera, on the other hand, has her own words of encouragement. "Mmhmm... That''s right bitch, eat my pussy!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5,  'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -1651,7 +1897,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boys':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/sex/apartment/nanal1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You sit down on the cushion. "Guys, can''t I just suck you off? I''m still a virgin."'
-					'They both scoff at that. "Bullshit!" one of them staes and you give him a serious look and nod.' 
+					'They both scoff at that. "Bullshit!" one of them stays and you give him a serious look and nod.' 
 					'They pause for a second and the other one says "Well good thing you go more holes then. Lay down on your side." He grins as you do it before adding "Don''t worry, we won''t pop your cherry."'
 					*nl
 					'One of them walks over, pushes you over so you''re laying on your side, and sticks his dick back in your mouth, making you unable to see what the other one is doing, but you feel him moving in behind you. A moment later, you feel slick fingers lubing up your asshole before you feel the head of his cock against it.'
@@ -1670,7 +1916,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boys':
 						act 'Back on your knees':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/sex/apartment/ncum.jpg"></center>'
-							'Several minutes go by until they both starting grunting, obviously getting close to cumming. They pull out of you as one of them says "Get on your knees and open your mouth, whore." You do as you''re told and they both start jerking their dicks in front of your face. Both of them start cumming at almost the same time, some of it going in your mouth and on your tongue, while the rest splatters your face.' 
+							'Several minutes go by until they both start grunting, obviously getting close to cumming. They pull out of you as one of them says "Get on your knees and open your mouth, whore." You do as you''re told and they both start jerking their dicks in front of your face. Both of them start cumming at almost the same time, some of it going in your mouth and on your tongue, while the rest splatters your face.' 
 							'Once they finish cumming on you, they grab you by the arms and pull you to your feet, drag you over to the door and shove you out into the hall naked with your face covered in their cum. "Get lost whore!" With that, they close the door in your face.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 							if pavapt_boyrand = 1:
@@ -1728,7 +1974,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boys':
 									act 'Back on your knees':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/sex/apartment/ncum.jpg"></center>'
-										'Several minutes go by until they both starting grunting, obviously getting close to cumming. They pull out of you as one of them says "Get on your knees and open your mouth, whore." You do as you''re told and they both start jerking their dicks in front of your face. Both of them start cumming at almost the same time, some of it going in your mouth and on your tongue, while the rest splatters your face.' 
+										'Several minutes go by until they both start grunting, obviously getting close to cumming. They pull out of you as one of them says "Get on your knees and open your mouth, whore." You do as you''re told and they both start jerking their dicks in front of your face. Both of them start cumming at almost the same time, some of it going in your mouth and on your tongue, while the rest splatters your face.' 
 										'Once they finish cumming on you, they grab you by the arms and pull you to your feet, drag you over to the door and shove you out into the hall naked with your face covered in their cum. "Get lost whore!" With that, they close the door in your face.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 										if pavapt_boyrand = 1: