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      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

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locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
 	if VK = 1:
 		VKrand = rand(1,2)
-		'You sit in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms as he begins the lesson. "Today, we''ll be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you''re looking for, especially with word problems. You''ll need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
+		'You sit in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms. "Today, we''ll be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you''re looking for, especially with word problems. You''ll need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
 		*nl
 		if VKrand = 1:
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Arkadi.'
@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'Mr. Tsarev chuckles. "Of course four plus two is six, but is that the number of <i>bottle caps</i> that they have? No. Anna has four bottle caps, but Dina has two <i>pebbles</i>. You need to pay better attention to the actual question."'
 			'Some of the other boys start laughing at Arkadi while some of the girls giggle.'
 		    'Mr. Tsarev continues. "Don''t let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one."'
-			'He reaches for some papers and begins handing them out while Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
+			'He reaches for some papers and starts handing them out as Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
 		else
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Natalia.'
 			'"The answer is four because Anna is the only one with bottle caps," she answers. "Dina only has pebbles, which might as well not be mentioned as it does not pertain to the answer needed."' 
 			'Mr. Tsarev tilts his head in surprise at Natalia''s answer while Christina whispers to one of the other girls. "Wow, she''s really smart. Is she studying to be a teacher or something?"'
 		    'Mr. Tsarev nods his head. "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to as a ''trick question''. Now I''d like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I''ll be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one."'
-			'He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
+			'He reaches for some papers on his desk and starts handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		VK = rand(1,3)
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				'"I was on my way here when some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform, so I had to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee, right?"'
 				'Mr. Tsarev sighs. "You couldn''t run home and change your shirt <i>before</i> the start of class?"'
 				'"Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time," Niko replies.'
-				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway."'
+				'"Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway," Christina chimes in.'
 				*nl
 				'Niko leans toward Christina. "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask."' 
 				'"I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." she whispers in a seductive tone.'
@@ -83,10 +83,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'Mr. Tsarev chuckles. "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
 			'"If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning."'
 			*nl
-			'Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk and begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve. Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer."' 
+			'Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, start laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk and starts writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve. Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer."' 
 			'"Yeah that''s... Real simple," Dimka sarcastically replies and Igor laughs.'
 			'Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I''ll begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve."'
-			'He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
+			'He reaches for some papers on his desk and starts handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		VKrand = rand(1,3)
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'"No, it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number," Mr. Tsarev replies.'
 		end
 		'"The smallest number in existence is... Nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I''ll be handing out some worksheets with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes."'
-		'He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
+		'He then starts handing out worksheets to the class.'
 	end
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaRevenge', 1
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		end
-		act'Play with your phone':
+		act 'Play with your phone':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
 			'You take out your phone and begin to play a game, hoping the boring lesson will be over soon.'
@@ -1158,7 +1158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys2':
-	if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2 and postphys_event ! daystart:postphys_event = daystart & gt 'Zvereva_sub_1', 'showers'
+	if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2 and postphys_event ! daystart: postphys_event = daystart & gt 'Zvereva_sub_1', 'showers'
 	*clr & cla
 	$loc_arg = 'postphys2'
 	$loc = 'gschool_lessons4'
@@ -1171,7 +1171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/postphys<<rand(1,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'You enter the girls locker room and find most of the other girls already inside, undressing, changing, heading for or returning from the showers, or simply chatting with each other. You ignore the girls in various states of undress around you, find your locker, and start to take off your clothes.'
 	gs 'gschool_gossip', 'gym'
-	act 'Have a shower':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'shower'
+	act 'Have a shower': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'shower'
 	act 'Get dressed': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
 end
 
@@ -1197,8 +1197,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 	gymshower = rand(1,10)
 	if gymshower = 1:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/showerspank.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few minutes basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower, but you do hear Bella talking to Albina.'
-	    'As you wash off the soap, you turn in time to see Bella start spanking Albina; most of the girls stop what they''re doing to watch. After several fairly hard smacks that echo into the room, they stop and laugh about it as Albina rubs her ass with strange glee and Bella smiles and nods her head, seemingly in approval. You turn back and finish your shower as Bella and Albina giggle at each other.'
+		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few minutes basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower.'
+	    'As you wash off the soap, you turn to see Albina bending over to let Bella spank her; most of the girls stop what they''re doing to watch. After several fairly hard smacks that echo into the room, they stop and laugh about it as Albina rubs her ass. You turn back and finish your shower as Bella and Albina giggle at each other.'
 		gs 'gschool_lessons4', 'shower_options'
 	elseif gymshower = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/picture.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1209,7 +1209,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/aylnushkiss.jpg"></center>'
 		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few minutes basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower.'
 		*nl
-		'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see see Anushka and Aylona sharing a kiss under one of the shower heads. Several other girls notice and a few whistle, make cat calls or yell encouragements. A few others look disgusted at the two of them kissing. Katyusha even says "Stop that you fucking dykes! That''s so disgusting." Anushka looks to Katyusha, makes a V with her fingers and sticks her tongue between them wiggling it back and forth. Katyusha glares at her, then shakes her head, turns off the water and walks into the locker room. Anushka and Aylona laugh about it before they go back to just showering.'
+		'As you wash off the soap, you turn to see Anushka and Aylona sharing a kiss under one of the shower heads. Several other girls notice and a few whistle, make cat calls or yell encouragements, but others look disgusted.'
+		'"Stop that, you fucking dykes!" Katyusha scowls. "That''s fucking disgusting!"'
+		'Anushka looks at Katyusha, makes a V with her fingers and sticks her tongue between them, wiggling it back and forth. Katyusha glares at her, then shakes her head, turns off the water and walks into the locker room. Anushka and Aylona laugh about it before they go back to showering.'
 		gs 'gschool_lessons4', 'shower_options'
 	elseif gymshower = 4 and npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1226,7 +1228,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				'"Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" Lera says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue as you stare up at her.'
 				'"What? You''ll suck the boys off, but won''t eat us out? Aren''t dick and pussy the same thing to you? Get to it, you fucking whore!" Lera says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking Lera''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as Lera orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you.'
 				'"Good slut," is all she says before Pauline takes her place.'
-				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
+				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they''ve all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Return to the locker room':
@@ -1246,9 +1248,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Try to leave unnoticed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
-				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. You look up, and to your despair, see that it was Christina. "Let''s make it a party girls! Now we have TWO sluts to eat us out!" she says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue.'
-				'With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking Christina''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as she orgasms hard, then slams your face back into her crotch. "Lick me clean bitch! I want you to drink every last drop of my cum!" When she''s finally done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you hard. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place.'
-				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and quickly run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
+				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia.'
+				'You look up, and to your despair, see that it was Christina. "Let''s make it a party, girls! Now we have TWO sluts to eat us out!" she says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue.'
+				'With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking Christina''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as she orgasms hard, then slams your face back into her crotch. "Lick me clean, bitch! I want you to drink every last drop of my cum!" When she''s finally done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you hard. "Good slut," is all she says before another girl takes her place.'
+				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they''ve all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and quickly run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Return to the locker room':
@@ -1310,10 +1313,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 	elseif gymshower >= 5 and gymshower <= 7:
 		if pcs_pubes >= 40:
 			gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'pube_bully'
+		if pcs_pubes > 25:
+			gt 'gschool_lessons4','pube_bully'
 		elseif grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
-			gt'gschool_lessons4', 'pube_compliment'
-		elseif pcs_pubes > 25:
-			gt'gschool_lessons4','pube_bully'
+			gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'pube_compliment'
 !!		elseif grupTipe = 4 or grupTipe = 2:
 !!			
 		else
@@ -1340,7 +1343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_bully':
 	'"You''d need a chainsaw to trim that!"'
 	'Other girls in the room uncomfortably ignore the exchange, pretending not to hear either because they don''t want to get involved or are just trying to avoid becoming a target themselves.'
 	act 'Take the abuse':
-		cla & *clr
+		*clr & cla
 		pcs_mood -= 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/nudepic.jpg"></center>'
 		'You try to ignore their insults, but it really gets under your skin and it shows. Seeing the impact, they double down on their abuse.'
@@ -1353,7 +1356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_bully':
 		act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_post_shower', 'post_shower'
 	end
 	act 'Tell them to fuck off':
-		cla & *clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/postphyssho1.jpg"></center>'
 		if grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5:
 			'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended.'
@@ -1388,7 +1391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_bully':
 	act 'Ignore it':
 		grupvalue[1] += 4
 		grupvalue[2] += 2
-		cla & *clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You roll your eyes and ignore them completely, turning on the faucet and rinsing your hair. They continue to sling insults at you, but you pay them no mind, picking up the soap and beginning to scrub your body.'
 		'After a few more tries, they realize that they aren''t going to get any reaction out of you and turn back to conversing amongst themselves, finally letting you shower in peace.'
@@ -1418,7 +1421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore_bully':
 		*nl
 		'To punctuate her point, she smiles and reaches forward, giving your ass a slap so hard and so sharp that it burns. And without another word, she turns back to her shower.'
 		act 'Cry':
-			cla & *clr
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/nudepic.jpg"></center>'
 			'Caught in the middle, you have no choice to but to keep heading towards the shower you chose. The other girls, seemingly egged on by Bella, also reach out to swat your ass along the way. Some of them giggle as they do, but what hurts more are the ones that don''t. They clap your cheeks with movements so casual they might as well have been giving a high five in the hallway. Like it''s just how they greet you.'
 			*nl
@@ -1427,7 +1430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore_bully':
 		end
 		
 		act 'Fume':
-			cla & *clr
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/bully_slap1.jpg"></center>'
 			'Caught in the middle, you have no choice to but to keep heading towards the shower you chose. The other girls, seemingly egged on by Bella, also reach out to swat your ass along the way. Some of them giggle as they do, but what hurts more are the ones that don''t. They clap your cheeks with movements so casual they might as well have been giving a high five in the hallway. Like it''s just how they greet you.'
 			*nl
@@ -1437,7 +1440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore_bully':
 	end
 	
 	act 'Ignore it':
-		cla & *clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/bully_slap2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You do your best to ignore it and keep heading towards the shower you chose. The other girls, seemingly egged on by Bella, also reach out to swat your ass along the way. Some of them giggle as they do, but what hurts more are the ones that don''t. They clap your cheeks with movements so casual they might as well have been giving a high five in the hallway. Like it''s just how they greet you.'
 		*nl
@@ -1556,19 +1559,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You go to your locker and don''t see or hear anyone. Just as you finish drying your hair, you think you hear something, so you turn off the dryer and listen. You can''t hear anything now, but you could have sworn there was a sound coming from inside one of the lockers.'
+				'You go to your locker, but don''t see or hear anyone. Just as you finish drying your hair, you think you hear something, so you turn off the dryer and listen. You can''t hear anything now, but you could have sworn there was a sound coming from inside one of the lockers.'
 				act 'Get dressed':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petkaleave.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ignore the sounds and just chalk it up to your imagination. You go back to getting dressed and you don''t hear any more noise. It must have been your imagination.'
+					'You ignore the sounds and just chalk it up to your imagination. You go back to getting dressed and you don''t hear any more noises. It must have been your imagination.'
 					act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 				end
 				act 'Investigate the noise':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/petka/sex/school/locker/petka2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You walk over to the lockers where you think you heard the noise come from. You get closer, look through the vents in the lockers and listen closely. As you get close to one it sounds like... someone breathing. Could someone be inside one of the lockers? "Is anyone there?" you ask, but hear no response. The breathing sound, if it ever existed, has stopped.'
+					'You walk over to the locker where you think you heard the noise come from and start peering through the vents as you listen closely. It sounds like... someone breathing?'
+					'"Is anyone there?" you ask, but hear no response. The breathing sound, if it ever existed, has stopped.'
 					act 'Open the locker': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_lockerroom'
 					act 'Ignore it':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1619,7 +1623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she''s done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1665,7 +1669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 								'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
-								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind," she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... Never mind," she says while shaking her head. She starts getting dressed while ignoring you and you do the same. As soon as she''s done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1691,7 +1695,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you, and you do the same. As soon as she''s done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1717,7 +1721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 									'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
-									'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind," she says, shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+									'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... Never mind," she says while shaking her head. She starts getting dressed while ignoring you and you do the same. As soon as she''s done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -1730,7 +1734,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 					end
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/getdressed.jpg"></center>'
-					'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. While you get dressed, you can still hear someone talking in the other row of lockers, most likely on the phone. At this point you can tell it''s Albina. '+iif(AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0,'She sounds very frustrated as she loudly argues with someone.','She''s happily speaking on the phone with someone.')+' Just as you finish dressing, she stops talking and walks round to where you are, wearing only a towel. She jumps when she notices you and briefly stares at you, perhaps wondering what you heard before she drops her towel and starts getting dressed while ignoring you.'
+					'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. As you get dressed, you can still hear someone talking in the other row of lockers, most likely on the phone. At this point you can tell it''s Albina. '+iif(AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0,'She sounds very frustrated as she loudly argues with someone.','She''s happily speaking on the phone with someone.')+' Just as you finish dressing, she stops talking and walks round to where you are, wearing only a towel. She jumps when she notices you and briefly stares at you, perhaps wondering what you heard before she drops her towel and starts getting dressed while ignoring you.'
 					'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 					act 'Finish dressing': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 				end
@@ -1832,7 +1836,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 			'Curious, you sneak toward the source of the soft, feminine sounds. As you get closer, you are sure you are about to come across some girls making out and, sure enough, when you peek around the next corner, you spy Lena and Lera making out and feeling each other up. Their display of passion is so infectious that you are tempted to join them, but they seem so into each other that you would feel guilty intruding on their tender moment. That doesn''t make it any less arousing to watch, though.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Leave them in peace':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
+			act 'Leave them in peace': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 			act 'Masturbate':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/mast<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'