locations/AnalPR.qsrc

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if klismaday ! daystart:
-		act 'Continue':gt'AnalPR','3'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'AnalPR', '3'
 	else
 		money += 2000
 
@@ -113,8 +113,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	'The man shouts angrily, "Get lost you whore... you''re lucky I''m letting you leave without beating you up! You can forget about your money!"'
 
 	act 'Leave quietly':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt'AnalPR','4'
-	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt'AnalPR','5'
+	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt 'AnalPR', '4'
+	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt 'AnalPR', '5'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '4':
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	'He then says, "Good enough. Lie down in the grass."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Let him fuck you':gt'AnalPR','6'
+	act 'Let him fuck you':gt 'AnalPR', '6'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '6':

locations/BDSM_training.qsrc

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are in the Club, security check your name off the list and let you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money and the security guard takes you into a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you understand, almost the entire wing is a large room for BDSM-sessions.'
+	'You are in the Club, security checks your name off the list and lets you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money and the security guard takes you into a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you understand, that almost the entire wing is a large room for BDSM sessions.'
 	'Hanging from the ceiling chains with hooks and ropes, on the walls – lashes, whips, handcuffs, gags.  Submerged in the darkness of the far end of the hall you can just make out pads, tables, crosses and some odd device, you can only guess as to what it does. You are met by the lady from yesterday, her suit replaced by tight leather.  She holds in her hands a stick with glands at the ends.'
 	'"W-Hello," you just about manage.'
  	'"Get undressed." Orders Mistress. "Now!"'
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		'"This is for electrical shocks." Explains Mistress. "You will meet him later."'
 		'She licks the contacts, then shifts her gaze to you.'
 		'"Are you still dressed, bitch?"'
-		'The whip touchs your skin just below the neck. You tense, waiting for the blow. The lady laughs.'
+		'The whip touches your skin just below the neck. You tense, waiting for the blow. The lady laughs.'
 		'"Scared? Good!"'
 		'She moves away and looks at you. You realize what to do, and quickly take off all your clothes.'
 		'"Spread your legs! Hand behind your back! And the other!"'
@@ -48,9 +48,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'The Mistress removes from the wall and you puts on you, a leather collar, then wrist cuffs and ankle bracelets with hooks. The collar presses. You reach up to loosen it, but that earns you a slap. The Mistress walks around, the toe of her boot pushes your feet.'
+			'The Mistress removes you from the wall and puts a leather collar on you, then wrist cuffs and ankle bracelets with hooks. The collar presses. You reach up to loosen it, but that earns you a slap. The Mistress walks around, the toe of her boot pushes your feet.'
 			'"That''s right! This is the posture of attention. Does this position make the sub?'
-			'"I don''t know, Mistress!" You answer. Between your legs burns a flame, you feel it building, and flowing down your legs.'
+			'"I don''t know, Mistress!" You answer. Between your legs burns a flame, you feel it building and flowing down your legs.'
 			'"Of course not, but you listened." Mistress nods.'
 			'She walks around you, unceremoniously grabbing and squeezing, pushing fingers into your most secret holes. You feel like produce she might buy.'
 			'"Listen to the rules. During the session, all commands are executed quickly and without hesitation. Failure to comply will be punished – always! You call me Mistress, in conversations with others you call me "Mistress ELEKTRA". Hope that''s clear, what''s my name?'
@@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_4.jpg"></center>'
 				'Mistress hits you a few times on your inner thighs.'
-				'"During the session the submissive only speaks with permission. You may ask for permission to speak, but only if very important. Without permission sub only breathes. Permission is required to move, change positions or cum... we may only cum with permission.'
+				'"During the session, the submissive only speaks with permission. You may ask for permission to speak, but only if very important. Without permission sub only breathes. Permission is required to move, change positions or cum... we may only cum with permission.'
 				'Cumming without permission will be punished. You will usually be given just one minute to cum. Don''t manage it in that minute and you stop, immediately. When you cum, we need to report it.'
 				'The hostess walks around you, patting the whip on your shoulders, ass and back.'
-				'"Now the main thing, safe word, to stop, this word is "red". As soon as you say "red", the session is ended. If your mouth is busy, three times shake your head and hum "and-and". If you can''t shake your head three times you slam the palm of your hand. Clear?"'
+				'"Now the main thing, safeword, to stop, this word is "red". As soon as you say "red", the session is ended. If your mouth is busy, three times shake your head and hum "and-and". If you can''t shake your head three times you slam the palm of your hand. Clear?"'
 				'"Yes, Mistress!'
 				
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 							'Mistress leads you to the diagonal cross and latches the bracelets to you. You can not move.'
 							'"Failure to comply will be punished."'
 							'Skillfully, Mistress plays with your clit, first fingers, then various tools. You moan, ready to cum, but she is very much aware. Noticing your condition, she removes her hand from your flower and whips you in the stomach.'
-							'Gradually the excitment calms, but you can feel it there, just below the surface. She again starts to caress you, alternating caresses with spanking.'
+							'Gradually the excitement calms, but you can feel it there, just below the surface. She again starts to caress you, alternating caresses with spanking.'
 							
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'bound'
@@ -182,10 +182,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'BDSMend':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_10.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Well, enough for today." You do not immediately understand, when Mistress announces the completion of the session. "A good start, but there is still work to do."'
+	'"Well, enough for today." You do not immediately understand when Mistress announces the completion of the session. "A good start, but there is still work to do."'
 	'"Is that all?" You ask, having temporarily forgotten about the real world.'
 	'"Almost..."'
-	'Mistress puts you on your knees in front of her and forces you to lick her pussy. The session had excited not only you, but Mistress to, and she cums from a few movements of your tongue. After, having licked up every drop from Mistress, you go.'
+	'Mistress puts you on your knees in front of her and forces you to lick her pussy. The session had excited not only you, but Mistress too, and she cums from a few movements of your tongue. After, having licked up every drop from Mistress, you go.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_5.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Well, you deserve a little encouragement..."'
-					'Mistress unties you, flips you on your back and locks you up again. She holds up a huge vibrator and know it is intended for your pussy. Soon it has you ready to cum. Looking at Misstress, you ask.'
+					'Mistress unties you, flips you on your back and locks you up again. She holds up a huge vibrator and knows it is intended for your pussy. Soon it has you ready to cum. Looking at Misstress, you ask.'
 					'"Mistress, cum! Please!'
 					'"No! And don''t look at me with those puppy dog eyes! Not allowed!'
 					'Mistress almost brings you to orgasm, then takes the vibrator.'
@@ -258,8 +258,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_7.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Let''s get weaving..."'
-							'Mistress unties you, leads to a large box, makes to climb on top with your butt in the air. Squinting your eyes, you see, she is unwinding rope. Immediately it is obvious, she has great experience.'
-							'Ropes cover your ankles, wrists, knees and pulling your neck, forcing your nose to the box. After a few minutes you realise, that can''t move. Your ass points to the ceiling, feet apart, displaying your pussy and ass. From helplessness and complete openness you get excited once more.'
+							'Mistress unties you, leads to a large box, makes to climb on top with your butt in the air. Squinting your eyes, you see, she is unwinding the rope. It is Immediately obvious, that she has great experience.'
+							'Ropes cover your ankles, wrists, knees and pull your neck, forcing your nose to the box. After a few minutes you realize, that can''t move. Your ass points to the ceiling, feet apart, displaying your pussy and ass. From helplessness and complete openness, you get excited once more.'
 							'"Welcome to rope club!" Announces Mistress and spanks your butt with her palm.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_9.jpg"></center>'
-									'Mistress Fucks you with a strapon and again brings to your peak, but does not give you the finish the desire.'
+									'Mistress Fucks you with a strapon and again brings you to your peak, but does not give you the finish the desire.'
  									'"Boring..." Disappointedly Mistress pulls out, while you try to catch your breath. "How about hanging you?"'
 									'Mistresses fingers flash so quickly, you can''t keep up. She changes the location of the ropes, turns to you and rattles some chains. You realize with horror, she has tied you hanging from the ceiling chain. The motor sounds, and your body rises.'
 									$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -318,11 +318,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 													agape = 2
 													gs 'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r3_13.jpg"></center>'
-													'"And now for the ass!" Declares Mistress and knocks you sideways. You lose you balance and she quickly has you upside down supported on your shoulders and bound hands.'
+													'"And now for the ass!" Declares Mistress and knocks you sideways. You lose your balance and she quickly has you upside down supported on your shoulders and bound hands.'
 													'Her strapon rests on the edge of your anus, Mistress hisses with displeasure and with a sharp move of her hips, drives it in entirely. You scream and moan, but quickly the pain turns to pleasure.'
 													'"Oh fuck, cum! Please!" You can hardly form the words.'
 													'"Fuck you, bitch! Fine, hurry it though!"'
-													'With those words you are rapidly ograsming, which is immediately followed by a second extremely intense one. You squirm so much, that even the ropes are coming free.'
+													'With those words you are rapidly orgasming, which is immediately followed by a second extremely intense one. You squirm so much, that even the ropes are coming free.'
 													$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 													gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 													gs 'stat'
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	pcs_horny += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r4_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the training hall for your next training session. Mistress said you, this session is the last one before you will be admitted to the mansion. If you manage to fulfill all her instructions.'
+	'You enter the training hall for your next training session. Mistress said this session is the last one before you will be admitted to the mansion. If you manage to fulfill all her instructions.'
 	'"Did you dress up pretty for me?" Says Mistress as she checks you out in a predatory manner, "Well, ready then? Get undressed and get over here!'
 	act 'Obey':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r4_4.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Leg!"'
-				'You lift up your leg. Mistress is holding a thin cane, with considerable force, see hits the sole of your foot.'
+				'You lift up your leg. Mistress is holding a thin cane, with considerable force, she hits the sole of your foot.'
 				'"And again..."'
 				'Mistress walks around you asking questions, at the slightest hitch in your response you get hit by the cane.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound', 'feet'
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 						'"Well, you know the rules... Now let''s see you in action..."'
 						'Mistress frees you from the cage and puts you on your knees.'
 						'"Come!" She says imperatively, you understand, she''s not talking to you.'
-						'From a dark corner you see someone covered from head to toe in what appears to be tight leather. The man, his cock the only thing not covered, is dangling between his legs, a thick sausage. The mask on the mans head has two holes for his eyes. He bows to Mistress and walks closer.'
+						'From a dark corner, you see someone covered from head to toe in what appears to be tight leather. The man, his cock the only thing not covered, is dangling between his legs, a thick sausage. The mask on the mans head has two holes for his eyes. He bows to Mistress and walks closer.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'maso', 'bound'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Await orders':
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r4_9.jpg"></center>'
 									'"Stop!" Orders Mistress.'
-									'You stop, freezing in position. Mistress gets clothespins tied to ropes, and begins to attach them to you. The clothespins hurt, especially on your nipples and tongue, but you endure. At a silent command from Mistress, you resume movement.'
+									'You stop, freezing in position. Mistress gets clothespins tied to ropes and begins to attach them to you. The clothespins hurt, especially on your nipples and tongue, but you endure. At a silent command from Mistress, you resume movement.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'maso'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Grind':
@@ -491,7 +491,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dom':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r2_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter the club, security check your name off on their list and let you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money they direct you to a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you see that almost the entire building is a large room for BDSM-sessions.'
+	'You enter the club, security checks your name off on their list and lets you in.  You give an elderly bookkeeper money they direct you to a small outbuilding away from the mansion. As you enter, you see that almost the entire building is a large room for BDSM sessions.'
 	'Hanging from the ceiling chains with hooks and ropes, on the walls – lashes, whips, handcuffs, gags.  Submerged in the darkness of the far end of the hall you can just make out pads, tables, crosses and some odd device, you can only guess as to what it does. You are met by the lady from the front desk, her suit replaced by tight leather.'
 	'She holds in her hands a long whip.'
 	act 'Greet her':
@@ -507,15 +507,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dom':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/r2_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mistress Elektra walks over to a women, naked except for collar and cuffs and attaches a leash to her collar.'
+			'Mistress Elektra walks over to a woman, naked except for collar and cuffs and attaches a leash to her collar.'
 			'"A sub should be obedient and not speak unless spoken to, unless naked or wearing bondage gear, sub women should dress as maids and men as butlers."'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/r2_6.jpg"></center>'
-				'Elektra helps the sub into a harness and boots then points to the floor. The submissive women kneels down, being careful to position her legs and arms very precisely.'
+				'Elektra helps the sub into a harness and boots then points to the floor. The submissive woman kneels down, being careful to position her legs and arms very precisely.'
 				'"This is the "slave" position, it displays your dominance over the sub. A dominant can do anything to a sub, but must not cause lasting harm."'
-				'"You must also stop immediately if they use their safe-word, this is always "red". As soon as they say "red", the session is ended. If their mouth is busy, they can shake their head 3 times and hum "and-and". If they can''t do either they can slam the palm of their hand. Clear?"'
+				'"You must also stop immediately if they use their safeword, this is always "red". As soon as they say "red", the session is ended. If their mouth is busy, they can shake their head 3 times and hum "and-and". If they can''t do either they can slam the palm of their hand. Clear?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Carry on':
@@ -525,8 +525,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dom':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/r3_5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Elektra removes the harness and boots from the sub and leads her to a rectangular section of wooden floor and ties to it. Making a show of how she tied the knots and talking you through it.'
 					'"This isn''t actually required as I have covered the rules, except to say you must wear expensive or formal clothing when visiting the club. So this is a little bonus for you."'
-					'You do feel quite aroused and are about to thank Elektra, when she hands you a body massager. Normally she would have to ask to cum, but as this is your treat, you can stop when ever you like. For the first time since you met Eletra she cracks a smile.'
-					'Using the body massager you tease the sub for about 10 minutes, but stop short of letting her orgasm. Eletra surprises you by kissing you on the cheek, "I think I''m going to like having you around."'
+					'You do feel quite aroused and are about to thank Elektra, when she hands you a body massager. Normally she would have to ask to cum, but as this is your treat, you can stop when ever you like. For the first time since you met Elektra she cracks a smile.'
+					'Using the body massager you tease the sub for about 10 minutes, but stop short of letting her orgasm. Elektra surprises you by kissing you on the cheek, "I think I''m going to like having you around."'
 					'She walks back to the front gate with you and gives you a shiny new membership card. Suddenly realising she is still in her leather outfit she blushes lightly and briskly walks back.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe_give', 10, 'dom', 'lesbian'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2, 'lesbian'

locations/BelSex.qsrc

@@ -19,13 +19,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 	belybj = rand(0,2)
 	if belybj = 0:
 		'<<$boydesc>> puts his large hands on your shoulders and forces you downwards. Even though you''re trying to cooperate and drop to your knees as soon as you realize what he wants, he''s still kind of rough with you. "Start sucking, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-		act'On your knees':gt 'BelSex', 'bj1'
+		act 'On your knees': gt 'BelSex', 'bj1'
 	elseif belybj = 1:
 		'<<$boydesc>> tugs at your clothes, letting you know that he wants you naked. You quickly obey and assist him in taking your clothes off. He nods approvingly, definitely liking what he sees. "Very nice, girl... but you''d look even better with my cock in you."'
-		act'Drop down on your knees':gt 'BelSex', 'bj2'
+		act 'Drop down on your knees': gt 'BelSex', 'bj2'
 	else
-		'<<$boydesc>> is staring intently into your eyes, pawing between your legs while you unbutton his pants, grabbing hold, you strip them down to his knees. His cock is hanging freely, twitching from excitement...'
-		act'What now?':gt 'BelSex', 'bj3'
+		'<<$boydesc>> is staring intently into your eyes, pawing between your legs while you unbutton his pants, grabbing hold, and pulling them down to his knees. His cock is hanging freely, twitching from excitement...'
+		act 'What now?': gt 'BelSex', 'bj3'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj1':
 	belact -= 1
 	picrand = rand(0,12)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You take <<$boydesc>>''s <<dick>> cm cock in your mouth and begin stimulating his glans. You can clearly see on <<$boydesc>>''s face that he''s getting irritated at you for trying to prolonge things and just wants you to suck him off quickly.'
+	'You take <<$boydesc>>''s <<dick>> cm cock in your mouth and begin stimulating his glans. You can clearly see on <<$boydesc>>''s face that he''s getting irritated at you for trying to prolong things and just wants you to suck him off quickly.'
 	'You do your best to suck him off, trying to go deep as possible, but <<$boydesc>> is not pleased. He grabs you by the back of your head and begins forcing it closer and closer towards his fat stomach. You start gagging but he just tells you to relax your throat and it will all be fine.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'deepthroat'
@@ -53,17 +53,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj1':
 			belsexpayment = 300
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act'Get up':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+			act 'Get up': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 		end
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belyvag = rand(0,3)
 		if belyvag = 0:
 			 '<<$boydesc>> grunts loudly while you suck him off. "Time to give you a real pounding!"'
-			act'Get in position':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
+			act 'Get in position': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
 		elseif belyvag = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> paws at your ass while you suck him off before he tells you "Get on your back, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m going to fill you up."'
-			act'Lie down on your back':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
+			act 'Lie down on your back': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
 		elseif belyvag = 2:
 			'<<$boydesc>> looks down on you as you''re sucking. He pulls out his cock, lifts you up and throws you onto the bed. "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			act 'Get on all fours':gt 'BelSex', 'doggy'
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 	belact -= 1
 	picrand = rand(0,12)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You look at <<$boydesc>> with lust in your eyes. Dropping down on your knees without being asked, you unbutton his pants, exposing his full erect cock. Wrapping your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips around his strong and warm cock, you quickly begin by sucking the head, caressing it with your tongue and lips.'
+	'You look at <<$boydesc>> with lust in your eyes. Dropping down on your knees without being asked, you unbutton his pants, exposing his fully erect cock. Wrapping your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips around his strong and warm cock, you quickly begin by sucking the head, caressing it with your tongue and lips.'
 	'<<$boydesc>> lets out a small groan, clearly enjoying himself. Turned on by seeing <<$boydesc>> enjoying the blowjob, you start sucking his cock while caressing his balls.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'prostitution'
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 
 	if belact <= 0:
 		'Your tongue is giving every bit of his cock it can reach its attention as you bob your head back and forth.'
-		'Your lust takes over and you take him as deep into your mouth as you can, keeping him there until you start to gag and have to come up for air. Taking few breaths to recover, you take him inside again, rapidly moving your head, sucking and deepthroating him for all you''re worth.'
+		'Your lust takes over and you take him as deep into your mouth as you can, keeping him there until you start to gag and have to come up for air. Taking a few breaths to recover, you take him inside again, rapidly moving your head, sucking and deepthroating him for all you''re worth.'
 		act'Keep sucking':
 			cls
 			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A113', 1
@@ -98,17 +98,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 			belsexpayment = 300
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+			act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 		end
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 	belyvag = rand(0,3)
 		if belyvag = 0:
 			 '<<$boydesc>> grunts loudly while you suck him off. "Time to give you a real pounding!"'
-			act'Get in position':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
+			act 'Get in position': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
 		elseif belyvag = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> paws at your ass while you suck him off before he tells you "Get on your back, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m going to fill you up."'
-			act'Lie down on your back':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
+			act 'Lie down on your back': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
 		elseif belyvag = 2:
 			'<<$boydesc>> looks down on you as you''re sucking. He pulls out his cock, lifts you up, and throws you onto the bed. "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			act 'Get on all fours':gt 'BelSex', 'doggy'
@@ -143,17 +143,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj3':
 			'He squeezes the last few drops of sperm into your mouth and then sticks his dick in your mouth. You swallow his cum obediently and then suck his dick clean, licking every tasty inch of it you can reach. Once he goes soft in your mouth, he pulls out his cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+			act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 		end
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 	belyvag = rand(0,3)
 		if belyvag = 0:
 			 '<<$boydesc>> grunts loudly while you suck him off. "Time to give you a real pounding!"'
-			act'Get in position':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
+			act 'Get in position': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal1'
 		elseif belyvag = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> paws at your ass while you suck him off before he tells you "Get on your back, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''m going to fill you up."'
-			act'Lie down on your back':gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
+			act 'Lie down on your back': gt 'BelSex', 'vaginal2'
 		elseif belyvag = 2:
 			'<<$boydesc>> looks down on you as you''re sucking. He pulls out his cock, lifts you up, and throws you onto the bed. "Show me your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			act 'Get on all fours':gt 'BelSex', 'doggy'
@@ -170,8 +170,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal1':
 	picrand = rand(0,7)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/vadim/sex/mitka<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'<<$boydesc>> lifts you up, grabs you by the hair, and shoves you onto the bed. You land on your back, as he quickly moves in, you spread your legs. He starts touching your pussy lips with his fat fingers, you let out a moan as he penetrates you with his finger.'
-	'"That''s enough, you''re all wet and ready now." he says. He grabs hold of his penis slowly slides his member into your wet cunt, softly parting your nether lips. As your pussy walls envelops his cock you let out a soft moan.'
-	'Hanging over you, looking into your eyes he starts build up quite a bit of speed. "You''re a pretty good fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I''ve had better." he says as his sweat drips all over you.'
+	'"That''s enough, you''re all wet and ready now." he says. He grabs ahold of his penis and slowly slides it into your wet cunt, softly parting your nether lips. As your pussy walls envelop his cock you let out a soft moan.'
+	'Hanging over you, looking into your eyes he starts to build up quite a bit of speed. "You''re a pretty good fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I''ve had better." he says as his sweat drips all over you.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -182,19 +182,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal1':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie3.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>>''s movements speed up as he keeps pounding you balls deep without showing any signs of slowing down. You think this will go on for a while, but suddenly you hear <<$boydesc>> grunting while cumming deep inside you.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass," he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
-			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you that he wants your ass next.'
+			act 'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan; "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -217,19 +217,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal2':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie1.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>> groans loudly. His cock stiffens as you feel a jet of warm sperm hitting deep inside your womb.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass," he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
 			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			act 'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan. "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -239,8 +239,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 	sex_temp += 1
 	picrand = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/doggy/vagdog<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'With his cock rock hard and nicely wet he lifts your body, turns you around, and tells you to get on all fours on the floor. He gets down on his knees. Streching your butt cheeks slowly, he runs his shaft along your wet pussy, teasing you, all of a sudden he shoves his cock into your pussy and starts pounding away, not caring about your enjoyment. He just wants to fuck.'
-	'Holding you by the hips, he pounds on without slowing the pace, only occasionally stopping to catch a breath. "Isn''t he going to slow down soon?" you think to yourself. But you''ve underestimated him, instead he grabs your hair and pushes himself even deeper inside.'
+	'With his cock rock-hard and nicely wet he lifts your body, turns you around, and tells you to get on all fours on the floor. He gets down on his knees. Stretching your butt cheeks slowly, he runs his shaft along your wet pussy, teasing you, all of a sudden he shoves his cock into your pussy and starts pounding away, not caring about your enjoyment. He just wants to fuck.'
+	'Holding you by the hips, he pounds on without slowing the pace, only occasionally stopping to catch a breath. "Isn''t he going to slow down soon?" you think to yourself. But you''ve underestimated him, instead, he grabs your hair and pushes himself even deeper inside.'
 	'You moan loudly as he rams his cock deeper and deeper. You hear him panting and grunting he must''ve reached his limit...'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'sub', 'prostitution'
@@ -252,19 +252,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie4.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'<<$boydesc>> keeps on pounding you from behind. You feel his cock getting stiffer and twitching inside of you. You turn your head and look him in the eyes, pleading that he pulls out and cums on your ass instead. But <<$boydesc>> isn''t budging. He keeps on going, pulling your hips towards him, filling your womb with splashes of semen.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass." he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
-			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you that he wants your ass next.'
+			act 'Present your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan. "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -274,8 +274,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl':
 	sex_temp += 1
 	picrand = rand(1,6)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/cowgirl/vagcow<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$boydesc>> lies on the bed. He smirks as he tells you that you''ll be doing all the work today. You look at him, still a bit confused after the blowjob you''ve given him. Wasn''t that enough? "Don''t waste my time <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come here!" Not daring to do upset him even more, you crawl on top of <<$boydesc>> and guide his cock inside your vagina.'
-	'He grabs your hips, controlling the rhythm as you to ride him. He wants it fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You keep riding him at the same rhythm as he moves his hands grabbing you breasts instead.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> lies on the bed. He smirks as he tells you that you''ll be doing all the work today. You look at him, still a bit confused after the blowjob you''ve given him. Wasn''t that enough? "Don''t waste my time <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come here!" Not daring to upset him even more, you crawl on top of <<$boydesc>> and guide his cock inside your vagina.'
+	'He grabs your hips, controlling the rhythm as you ride him. He wants it fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You keep riding him at the same rhythm as he moves his hands grabbing your breasts instead.'
 	'Unable to think of anything but the pleasure, you moan so loudly that you are almost screaming. Wanting to ride out this intense feeling, you completely forget that you''re supposed to please <<$boydesc>> as you orgasm while riding him.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -288,19 +288,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl':
 		belsexpayment = 600
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/creampie2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You keep switching the tempo as you ride <<$boydesc>>, from the looks on his face he''s ready to explode. You speed up even more wanting him to finish as soon as possible. As you''re thinking about pulling out not wanting him to cum inside you, you realize that you are too late. <<$boydesc>> suddenly explodes inside of you.'
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 	if belact > 0:
 		belanal = rand(0,2)
 		if belanal = 0:
 			'<<$boydesc>>''s sweat is dripping all over your body. He is huffing and puffing as he pulls out. "Give me a second to catch my breath and then I''ll finish this. Give me your sweet little ass," he says, breathing heavily'
-			act'Take him in your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
+			act 'Take him in your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal1'
 		elseif belanal = 1:
-			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you to that he wants your ass next.'
-			act'Present your ass':gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
+			'<<$boydesc>> wipes the sweat off his forehead, clearly worked up from fucking you. Nevertheless, he''s not done with you and tells you that he wants your ass next.'
+			act 'Present your ass': gt 'BelSex', 'anal2'
 		else
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls out of your pussy as the sensations make you moan. "Oh don''t worry sweetheart, I''m not done yet. It''s your asshole next. Assume the position."'
-			act'Get fucked from behind':gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
+			act 'Get fucked from behind': gt 'BelSex', 'analdoggy'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal1':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. He huffs and puffs quite heavily now. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips, his movements more erratic, and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles from your asshole once he pulls out his cock.'
 
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/analcum.jpg"></center>'
 		'You can tell <<$boydesc>> is close to his orgasm. His cock is stiff and has gotten larger inside your anus. Seconds later he firmly grabs your hips and you feel his cock spasming inside you as he shoots his cum deep inside your asshole. The cum feels kind of warm inside you, and it slowly dribbles out as you get up off of him.'
 
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'analdoggy':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/kafeanpie.jpg"></center>'
 		'You''re at your limit and just as you want to beg him to take it easier, you feel him twitching behind you. All of a sudden you feel his warm cum shooting inside you. It slowly dribbles down your thighs as he pulls out of you.'
 
-		act'Take a shower':gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
+		act 'Take a shower': gt 'BelSex', 'shower'
 	end
 end
 

locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					'The senior manager Ilyushkin shows up in your office.'
 					
 					if $BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmailPhoto'] = '' or BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmail'] > 1:
-						'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a sceptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
+						'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a skeptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
 
 						if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 							act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 									*clr&cla
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/anatoly/sex/bossbjs.jpg"></center>'
-									'You kneel before your Anatoly, and shower his groin with gentle kisses and little licks. He is rock hard and ready in no time. You tease him a little by sucking on just the tip of his cock, for awhile. When it looks like he can''t take it anymore, you slide his entire cock into your mouth. You bob your head up and down vigorously, savoring the taste of the boss''s cock. Before you can finish him, he pulls himself from your mouth, and motions for you to follow him to the bench.'
+									'You kneel before your Anatoly, and shower his groin with gentle kisses and little licks. He is rock-hard and ready in no time. You tease him a little by sucking on just the tip of his cock, for awhile. When it looks like he can''t take it anymore, you slide his entire cock into your mouth. You bob your head up and down vigorously, savoring the taste of the boss''s cock. Before you can finish him, he pulls himself from your mouth, and motions for you to follow him to the bench.'
 
 									gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 		elseif $BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmailPhoto'] = '' and BurgerQW['IlyQWBlackmail'] > 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/work.jpg"></center>'
 			'The senior manager Ilyushkin shows up in your office.'
-			'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a sceptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
+			'Ilyushkin grins, "Honey, I need you to put your stamp on these papers." You give Ilyushkin a skeptical look, as you find your company stamp. Then you put your stamp on the papers, and hand the back to Ilyushkin.'
 
 			if BurgerQW['WorkShift'] = 1:
 				act 'Have your lunch': gt 'burgerWork', 'work'
@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal2':
 	pose = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/anatoly/sex/bossanal2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You brace yourself, as he pushes his rock hard cock against your tight little sphincter.'
+	'You brace yourself, as he pushes his rock-hard cock against your tight little sphincter.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
 	!!gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A74', 1

locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -721,9 +721,7 @@ $cheatmenu['visualage'] = {
 }
 
 $cheatmenu['avatar_hair_set'] = {
-	$av_hair = input("Input your custom hair:")
-	if $av_hair='':exit
-	avatar_hair = 1
+	$face_style['avatar_hair'] = input("Input your custom hair:")
 	dynamic $cheatmenu['looks']
 }
 
@@ -786,14 +784,16 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 	'<center><table  width="90%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" valign="top">'
 	'<tr><td width="33%" cellpadding="20" valign="top">'
 	'<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> (<<$pcs_nickname>>). <a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''rename'']">Rename</a>'
-	if player_avatar = 1:
-		'Custom Avatar: <a href="exec:player_avatar = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">ON</a>'
-	else
-		'Custom Avatar: <a href="exec:player_avatar = 1 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">OFF</a>'
-	end
-	if avatar_hair = 1:
-		'<a href="exec:avatar_hair = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Custom Hair: ON</a>'
-		'<<$av_hair>>'
+
+
+	if face_style['type'] = 1: '<a href="exec: dynamic $cheatmenu[''change_avatar_path'']">Change current profile path:</a> <<$face_style[''avatar_path'']>>'
+	if face_style['type'] ! 0: '<a href="exec: face_style[''type''] = 0 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Use the dynamic profile system</a>'
+	if face_style['type'] ! 1: '<a href="exec: face_style[''type''] = 1 & $face_style[''avatar_path''] += iif($face_style[''avatar_path''] = '''', ''images/avatar.jpg'', '''') & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Use a fixed profile image</a>'
+	if face_style['type'] ! 2: '<a href="exec: face_style[''type''] = 2 & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Use the rendered profile system</a>'
+
+	if $face_style['avatar_hair'] ! '':
+		'<a href="exec: $face_style[''avatar_hair''] = '''' & dynamic $cheatmenu[''looks'']">Custom Hair: ON</a>'
+		'<<$face_style[''avatar_hair'']>>'
 	else
 		'<a href="exec:dynamic $cheatmenu[''avatar_hair_set'']">Custom Hair: OFF</a>'
 	end
@@ -937,6 +937,12 @@ $cheatmenu['looks'] = {
 	'</td></tr></table></center>'
 }
 
+$cheatmenu['change_avatar_path'] = {
+	$face_style['avatar_path'] = input('Where is the avatar image located? (Leave blank for "images/avatar.jpg")')
+	if $face_style['avatar_path'] = '': $face_style['avatar_path'] = 'images/avatar.jpg'
+	dynamic $cheatmenu['looks']
+}
+
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 !! Appearance Stats
 !!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 2':
 				*clr & cla				
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cinema/sex/kinosex3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make too much noise.'
+				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock-hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make too much noise.'
 				
 				act 'Continue jerking him':
 					*clr & cla

locations/FedorEv4_sex.qsrc

@@ -1909,7 +1909,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Shower 2':
 							IvanPregChat = 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/Shower/shower4.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'Fedor gives you a passionate kiss as he increases the pace of his thrusts and you do your best to match his thrusts with your own. After a few seconds, Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb with its warmth as you continue thrusting your hips attempting to drain his dick completely. Fedor gives you a passionate kiss and then looks you in the eyes as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> what have i done to deserve a perfect girl like you?"'
+							'Fedor gives you a passionate kiss as he increases the pace of his thrusts and you do your best to match his thrusts with your own. After a few seconds, Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb with its warmth as you continue thrusting your hips attempting to drain his dick completely. Fedor gives you a passionate kiss and then looks you in the eyes as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> what have I done to deserve a perfect girl like you?"'
 							*nl
 							'His words of affection catch you off guard as you are left speechless for a few seconds then you recover your thoughts and respond, "You''ve treated me with love and affection and handled my heart with care and that is why you deserve everything I can offer you." You both stare at each other in silence until Fedor gives you another long kiss and then dries off and gets dressed before leaving the room.'
 							*nl

locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hall':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/school/Hall/Sex/hall1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You pull down Fedor''s pants, revealing his rock hard penis which you wrap your fingers around and begin stroking as he caresses your cheek, admiring your beauty. You continue stroking his penis as you look into his eyes to see a very lustful look in them, turning you on, knowing how badly he wants you.'
+		'You pull down Fedor''s pants, revealing his rock-hard penis which you wrap your fingers around and begin stroking as he caresses your cheek, admiring your beauty. You continue stroking his penis as you look into his eyes to see a very lustful look in them, turning you on, knowing how badly he wants you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 

locations/Gnpc.qsrc

@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 1:
 			cla
 			GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You think about what he said. Because of the rumours, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
+			'You think about what he said. Because of the rumors, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end

locations/HotelRoom.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'normal':
 	end
 
 	if hotelRoom[$region] ! 0:
-		if money >= 100:act'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)':gs 'food', 'h_food'
+		if money >= 100:act 'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
 		act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 		if $region = 'pav': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
 		gs 'wardrobe', 'default_clothing_options'
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'better':
 	end
 
 	if hotelRoom[$region] ! 0:
-		if money >= 100:act'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)':gs 'food', 'h_food'
+		if money >= 100:act 'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
 		act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 		act 'Have a coffee (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_cof'
 		if $region = 'pav': gs 'prostitution_functions', 'prostitute_outfit_at_home'
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'best':
 	end
 
 	if hotelRoom[$region] ! 0:
-		if money >= 100:act'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)':gs 'food', 'h_food'
+		if money >= 100:act 'Order room service (0:30) (100 <b>₽</b>)': gs 'food', 'h_food'
 		act 'Drink some water (0:01)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 		act 'Have a coffee (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_cof'
 		act 'Make some tea (0:05)': gs 'beverage', 'bev_tea'

locations/JuliaMilHome.qsrc

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptdoor.jpg"></center>'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
+	act 'Leave':gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_3'
 	if kanikuli = 0 and hour > 6 and hour < 15 and week < 6:
 		'You knock on the door, but no one comes to answer. Julia must not be home.'
 	elseif hour > 20 :

locations/KatjaHomeTalk.qsrc

@@ -1237,12 +1237,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_talk1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Yeah. I''ve given a few," you admit.'
 				'"What''s it like?" Katja asks, eyes wide with excitement.'
-				gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk2'
+				gs 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'bj_talk2'
 			end
 		elseif stat['bj'] > 0:
 			minut += 3
 			katjaQW['horny'] += 5
-			gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk2'
+			gs 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'bj_talk2'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'No':

locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rabota':
 				'You click the button for the full job description, but it''s brief and not entirely helpful.'
 				'<i>Are you a girl who likes exposing herself on camera in erotic situations for other people''s pleasure? If so, then come to this address and ask for Dimitri! Under 21s preferred.</i>"'
 				'A quick search of the listed address tells you that it''s located somewhere in the red light district of the city.'
-				if pornstudio = 0: 'You''ve heard rumours that an underground porn studio is located somewhere in that area.'
+				if pornstudio = 0: 'You''ve heard rumors that an underground porn studio is located somewhere in that area.'
 				if pornstudio = 1: 'The porn studio is located in that area. This job listing suddenly makes more sense to you.'
 				
 				if pcs_inhib >= 40:

locations/LBZhouse.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	act 'Let him lead':
 		*clr & cla	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bimbo.knees3.jpg"></center>'		
-		'<<$boydesc>> continues kissing you as he begins unzipping his pants, revealing his bulge. He proceeds to run his hand across your body, feeling your breasts, all the way down to your ass. Looking down, you see his cock is rock hard.'
+		'<<$boydesc>> continues kissing you as he begins unzipping his pants, revealing his bulge. He proceeds to run his hand across your body, feeling your breasts, all the way down to your ass. Looking down, you see his cock is rock-hard.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5 
 		gs 'stat' 

locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start4':
 		'They live in the residential area of the city, and it''s a short drive there. You''re fairly sure the guy is the one in charge of this relationship, and when you arrive at their home, you''re proven right.'
 		'He acts like a director, telling you and the other girl to do all sorts of acts on one another while he watches, and then has the two of you please him together.'
 		'He''s particularly interested in your ass. "I hope you like anal, sweetie..." he whispers in your ear after a while. "Because my girlfriend won''t take anything up there, you''ll have to take it for the both of you!"'
-		'Fortunately he takes it slow, and it doesn''t feel all that unpleasant. The girl is very fascinated by it all, and asks you a few questions while she absent-mindedly rubs your clit and kisses your boobs as if you''re doing her a huge favour. After all: as long as her boyfriend enjoys your ass, her''s can remain unfucked.'
+		'Fortunately he takes it slow, and it doesn''t feel all that unpleasant. The girl is very fascinated by it all, and asks you a few questions while she absent-mindedly rubs your clit and kisses your boobs as if you''re doing her a huge favor. After all: as long as her boyfriend enjoys your ass, her''s can remain unfucked.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 120, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 120, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'

locations/LakeBoyDy.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ride':
 			minut+=5
 			gs'stat'
 			'The apartment is actually in decent shape. The minimal amount of furniture and decorations don''t make it look very hospitable though, and you assume this might just be one of the places Vadim rented for business or pleasure, not for living in. Noticing you''re spending too much time looking around and aren''t following him swiftly enough, he grabs you by your hair and pulls your face to his, roughly shoving his tongue in your mouth. You can smell the tabacco on his breath, and do your best to ignore the taste as he kisses you.'
-			act'Kiss him':gt 'BelSex'
+			act 'Kiss him': gt 'BelSex'
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/LariskaSex.qsrc

@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_miss_give_1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/home/strapgive_4.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Lariska lays on her back, opens her legs, and spreads her cheeks, inviting you in. As you ease the dildo in, already wet from her mouth, she groans in both pain and pleasure, clearly enjoying it.'
-	'Pulling her legs over each of your shoulders you start thrusting into her ass as she cries out "Uhh, don''t stop! Fuck my ass!" Needing no more encouragment you pick up your speed, pounding her with everything you have.'
+	'Pulling her legs over each of your shoulders you start thrusting into her ass as she cries out "Uhh, don''t stop! Fuck my ass!" Needing no more encouragement you pick up your speed, pounding her with everything you have.'
 	'Her cries of pleasure and pain grow with each moment, until she starts orgasming, hard. You wrap your left arm around her legs to keep her from kicking you and start pinching her nipples with your right. She grips the bed sheets with both hands as her chest heaves and her eyes roll back in her head.'
 	'As her body starts to settle down, you pull out, drop her legs, and crawl up next to her to snuggle for a few minutes, until her breathing normalizes. She looks at you in adoration, and you cannot help but to plant a few soft kisses on her lips, happy just to be there with her.'
 	pcs_horny += 10

locations/MartinSex.qsrc

@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				end
 
 				if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and cycle ! 0:
-					act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt'MartinSex','MartinTease'
+					act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt 'MartinSex', 'MartinTease'
 				end
 
 				if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and stat['bj'] > 20:
-					act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt'MartinSex3','MartinBlowTease'
+					act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
 				end
 
 				act 'I understand (calm)':
@@ -237,11 +237,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and cycle ! 0:
-			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt'MartinSex','MartinTease'
+			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt 'MartinSex', 'MartinTease'
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and stat['bj'] > 20:
-			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt'MartinSex3','MartinBlowTease'
+			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
 		end
 
 	elseif MartinSexTalk = 2 and MartinSex = 0:
@@ -387,11 +387,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and cycle ! 0:
-			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt'MartinSex','MartinTease'
+			act 'Go on the offensive - Strip':MartinStripVar = 1 & gt 'MartinSex', 'MartinTease'
 		end
 
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and stat['bj'] > 20:
-			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt'MartinSex3','MartinBlowTease'
+			act 'Be even more aggressive - Give Martin a blowjob': MartinConvinceBJ = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3', 'MartinBlowTease'
 		end
 
 	else
@@ -537,7 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTease1':
 				gs 'stat'
 				killvar 'MartinStripVar'
 
-				act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='missionary' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
+				act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='missionary' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinSexDyn'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinTease2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					killvar 'MartinStripVar'
 
-					act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='doggystyle' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
+					act 'Let Martin fuck you':$martinpos='doggystyle' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinSexDyn'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/MartinSex2.qsrc

@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexPrep':
 	end
 	
 	act 'Get him off with your mouth':MartinSexStop = 1 & gt 'MartinSex3','MartinBlowjob'
-	act 'Have anal sex instead':MartinSurpAnal = 1 & gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
-	act 'Ask Martin to wear a condom':MartinPrezik = 1 & gt'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
+	act 'Have anal sex instead':MartinSurpAnal = 1 & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
+	act 'Ask Martin to wear a condom':MartinPrezik = 1 & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinSexDyn'
 	if $martinpos = 'cowgirl' or $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl':
 		act 'Lower yourself onto his dick':gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexDyn'
 	elseif $martinpos = 'sideways' or $martinpos = 'doggystyle' or $martinpos = 'missionary':
@@ -239,9 +239,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn':
 	
 	if $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl' or $martinpos = 'doggystyle':
 		if $martinpos = 'doggystyle':
-			act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
+			act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
 		elseif $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl':
-			act 'Lower your ass onto his dick':gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
+			act 'Lower your ass onto his dick':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinAnalDyn':
 				$orgasm_txt = ''
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+				act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -915,7 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PainalDyn':
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'asshole', 'tear'
 			pcs_horny -= 30
 					
-			act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+			act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -959,7 +959,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Mouth':
 	pcs_energy += 5
 	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 	
-	act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+	act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Face':
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Face':
 	'It takes a moment or three until Martin stops painting your face white, but when you tentatively open your eyes, you are met with a smile of self-satisfaction and adoration.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy, 1
 	
-	act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+	act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Tits':
@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCumshot_Tits':
 	'That''s all the invitation Martin needs: With a final moan, the first hot jet of cum hits your breasts, soon followed by another, and another. By the time his cock stops twitching, your breast and chin are covered in sperm. Cleaning up is gonna take a while, but with a single look at Martin and the satisfied boyish grin the sight of you puts on his face, you know that it''s worth it.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $boy, 1
 	
-	act 'Get cleaned up':gt'MartinSex2','MartinCleanup'
+	act 'Get cleaned up':gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinCleanup'
 end	
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinCleanup':

locations/MartinSex3.qsrc

@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinBlowjob':
 				! '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bar/martin/blowjob/dressdom_deep.mp4"></center>'
 			! end	
 			! 'But that''s not enough for you. You like having a dick in your mouth, but you <b>love</b> having one in your throat. Martin seems a little too gentlemanly (or intimidated by your attitude) to take what he doubtlessly wants, so when you feel his cock approach that magic threshold in the depths of your mouth again, you force your head down further than before, plunging Martin''s hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock down your <<$pc_desc[''throat'']>> throat until your ' + iif(pirsD>0,'pierced ','') + 'nose almost touches his belly.'
-			! 'You hold it there for a moment, revelling in the feeling of self-inflicted abuse, before you pull back, only to go right back down again. You''re not holding back, and you''re making it all too clear to Martin that you don''t want him to hold back either as you''re taking him deep again and again, all the way to its base, proud and horny at your accomplishment.'
+			! 'You hold it there for a moment, reveling in the feeling of self-inflicted abuse, before you pull back, only to go right back down again. You''re not holding back, and you''re making it all too clear to Martin that you don''t want him to hold back either as you''re taking him deep again and again, all the way to its base, proud and horny at your accomplishment.'
 			! gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'deepthroat', 'dom'
 		! end
 		! *nl
@@ -310,8 +310,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinPussyLick':
 	act 'Lie down on your side (Sideways)':$martinpos='sideways' & gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexPrep'
 	act 'Get up and tell Martin you wanna ride him (Cowgirl)':$martinpos='cowgirl' & gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexPrep'
 	act 'Get up and tell Martin you wanna ride him (<b>Reverse</b> Cowgirl)':$martinpos='rev_cowgirl' & gt 'MartinSex2','MartinSexPrep'
-	act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':$martinpos = 'doggystyle' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
-	act 'Lower your ass onto his dick': $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl' & gt'MartinSex2','MartinAnalDyn'
+	act '"Fuck my ass, Martin"':$martinpos = 'doggystyle' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
+	act 'Lower your ass onto his dick': $martinpos = 'rev_cowgirl' & gt 'MartinSex2', 'MartinAnalDyn'
 			
 	act 'Blueball him - Get dressed and leave':
 		cls

locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You climb on top of Petia and feel his rock hard penis entering your vagina, the jolt of pleasure causing you to moan loudly. Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony, as you start riding his cock. He breathes heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills the condom, cumming almost immediately.'
+						'You climb on top of Petia and feel his rock-hard penis entering your vagina, the jolt of pleasure causing you to moan loudly. Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony, as you start riding his cock. He breathes heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills the condom, cumming almost immediately.'
 					
 						act 'Watch Petia cum':
 							*clr & cla

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 3':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/3/Ride1.jpg"></center>'
 			'You lightly push the man down on the toilet. "I want to ride that hard cock of yours."' 
 			'The man happily smiles. "Hell yeah! We can do that."' 
-			'You slowly approach and mount the man''s rock hard cock while keeping your ass to his face. You feel his dick slowly pushing its way inside you, causing a very gradual build of pleasure to fill your body as you start riding him at an increased pace.' 
+			'You slowly approach and mount the man''s rock-hard cock while keeping your ass to his face. You feel his dick slowly pushing its way inside you, causing a very gradual build of pleasure to fill your body as you start riding him at an increased pace.' 
 			'The man starts moaning as you ride him. "Damn girl, you''re so fucking hot!"'
 			
 

locations/Nudelake.qsrc

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ if PCloswimwear = 1 or $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		gs 'bras', 'wear', $lastwornbratype['swim'], lastwornbranumber['swim']
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/dress/dress_nudebeach.jpg"></center>'
 		'You put your clothes back on.'
-		act'Continue':gt'Nudelake'
+		act 'Continue': gt'Nudelake'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -40,12 +40,12 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and hour >= 6 and hour <= 20:
 				'You want to change into a swimsuit, but with no changing room here and your pussy oozing juices down your leg, coupled with the thought that people will see, horrifies you. You abandon the idea.'
 				'"I should sort out my arousal first." you think to yourself.'
 
-				act'Continue':gt'Nudelake'
+				act 'Continue': gt'Nudelake'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/dress/swimsuit_nudebeach.jpg"></center>'
 				'You wrap a towel around yourself and you''re ready to change into your swimsuit.'
 
-				act'Choose outfit':gt'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
+				act 'Choose outfit': gt'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if temper >= 15 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and hour >= 6 and hour <= 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/secluded_beach/self/shyness.jpg"></center>'
 				'Even though no one is around, you don''t feel confident enough to actually take your clothes off.'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'Nudelake'
+			act 'Continue': gt'Nudelake'
 		end
 	end
 

locations/ParkKafe.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'table':
 		if pk_rand = 1:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''youth''">group</a> of younger people making noise.'
 		if pk_rand = 2:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a younger lonely <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''the_boy''">man</a> sitting by the table.'
 		if pk_rand = 3:'You are watching the world go by when you see some <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''blacks''">Africans</a>.'
-		if pk_rand = 4:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''woman''">woman</a> who''ve just recieved her meal.'
+		if pk_rand = 4:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''woman''">woman</a> who''ve just received her meal.'
 		if pk_rand = 5:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a middle-aged <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''man''">man</a> sitting and observing the people at the café.'
 		if pk_rand = 6:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice a <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''seniors''">senior</a> walking back and forth outside the café.'
 		if pk_rand = 7:'Observing the people while enjoying your meal you notice two <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''guys''">sporty guys</a> sitting at a table and drinking beer.'
@@ -1117,7 +1117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_boy':
 											'You pull down his pants and briefs then his cock pops out. It stands ready for you to play with. You look at him and lick your lips as you move in. You start playing with his head and he groans lightly as you keep on teasing him.'
 											*nl
 											'"Want me to keep teasing you?" you playfully ask him. The only response you get is his head shaking no as you grab hold of his shaft and start sucking him off. You bob your head front and back while savoring every moment. Gosha is also enjoying himself. He grabs the back of your head to slightly push you deeper and deeper.'
-											'"Don''t stop, <<$pcs_nickname>>..." you hear him panting as he says. He''s rock hard and you can feel that he''s ready to cum. You tease him a little more as you wrap your lips around him one last time. He explodes in your mouth.'
+											'"Don''t stop, <<$pcs_nickname>>..." you hear him panting as he says. He''s rock-hard and you can feel that he''s ready to cum. You tease him a little more as you wrap your lips around him one last time. He explodes in your mouth.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub'
 											gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', '127', 1
 											gs 'stat'

locations/Prostitute.qsrc

@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work2':
 							if prostRand <= 50:
 								pose = 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/car/sexcar<<rand(1, 7)>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'You lean against the car and expose your bare ass to the man. He''s not wasting any time and immediately gets behind you, eagerly rubbing his cock against your vagina. The feeling of a rock hard erection rubbing on your pussy lips excites you. Your hips move involuntarily seeking out more friction. The man smiles at your eagerness to be fucked and grants your wish by slamming powerfully his hard member deep into your willing vagina. '
+								'You lean against the car and expose your bare ass to the man. He''s not wasting any time and immediately gets behind you, eagerly rubbing his cock against your vagina. The feeling of a rock-hard erection rubbing on your pussy lips excites you. Your hips move involuntarily seeking out more friction. The man smiles at your eagerness to be fucked and grants your wish by slamming powerfully his hard member deep into your willing vagina. '
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'prostitution', 'unknown'
 								gs 'stat'
 							elseif prostRand <= 75:

locations/Serge_kuh.qsrc

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vodka':
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/event/alko5.jpg"></center>'
-							'"My turn. <<$pcs_nickname>>, get on the table, I''ll return the favour now", Sergey grins.'
+							'"My turn. <<$pcs_nickname>>, get on the table, I''ll return the favor now", Sergey grins.'
 							'You''re not really sure what he means by that, but you''re not about to say no! You obediently sit down on the corner of the table, and pull up your legs. "Like this, uncle Sergey?" you ask him.'
 							'Sergey gives you a pleased nod: "Excellent. Now, let me help you with these..."'
 							'He begins to tug at your clothes, wanting easy access to your wet slit. "There we go... show me that young pussy and those cute tits of yours, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
@@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'izdev13':
 									pcs_horny += 10
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/sex1-9.jpg"></center>'
 									'Sergey gives you a minute or two to catch your breath, holding perfectly still. He never pulls his cock out of you though; he''s not finished with you yet, and his posture is making it very clear that he''s not about to let you go.'
-									'He then helps you up from the table and lies down on it himself, his erection still pointing straight up in the air. "Ride me, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I made you feel good... now it''s time for you to return the favour", he grins.'
+									'He then helps you up from the table and lies down on it himself, his erection still pointing straight up in the air. "Ride me, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I made you feel good... now it''s time for you to return the favor", he grins.'
 									'You happily do as he says, and slowly lower yourself onto his cock after you climb on top of him. You have full control over the situation like this, and ride him eagerly. Sometimes increasing the pace and fucking him enthusiastically, sometimes slowing down to catch your breath and tease him at the same time.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -1528,7 +1528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'izn2':
 	'"Speak up, girl! Answer the question" he insists, pretending he didn''t hear you. You loudly repeat your answer, and Sergey grins: "Actually... why don''t we have a little chat about you? Sit down."'
 	'When you sit down at the table, Sergey begins to ask you all sorts of questions. Intimate questions! How long ago you''ve lost your virginity, how many partners you''ve had, your favourite position, whether you like anal sex, how often you masturbate...'
 	'You answer all his questions truthfully, without exaggerating. Sergey likes your answers and continues asking more and more. "Do you like sucking dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-	'All these questions have really made you think about your sexuality... and you feel very turned on right now! Your pussy is wet, you feel a tingle in your lower abdomen, and your nipples are rock hard, poking through your clothes again.'
+	'All these questions have really made you think about your sexuality... and you feel very turned on right now! Your pussy is wet, you feel a tingle in your lower abdomen, and your nipples are rock-hard, poking through your clothes again.'
 	'Sergey notices you fidgeting in your chair and laughs: "You''re thinking about cock right now, aren''t you? Here, suck."'
 	'He pulls you down to the ground in front of him, and exposes his fully erect penis. Deciding you don''t need to get used to it slowly, he begins to fuck your throat right away.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'

locations/Terminal.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ $askfather = {
 				'You went to your father but forgot about the semen smeared on your face.'
 				'You tell him who you are and his eyes widen as rage builds within him.'
 				'"You fucking whore, Get fuck out of here, go back to your slut of a mother."'
-				'You feel very ashamed and realise looking for your father has been a terrible mistake as you have blown any hope of ever building a relationship with him.'
+				'You feel very ashamed and realize looking for your father has been a terrible mistake as you have blown any hope of ever building a relationship with him.'
 				trfatherQW = -1
 				act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'Terminal'
 			else

locations/Vika.qsrc

@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'awake_actions':
 						minut += 60
 						npc_rel['A220'] += 5
 						$sexloc = 'uni_dorm'
-						gt'lezbsex','start'
+						gt 'lezbsex', 'start'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Suggest you do something fun (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'

locations/Voltrener - WIP.qsrc

@@ -144,21 +144,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 					'Spewing out a torrent of words, you rush out the door and slam it shut behind you.'
 					*nl
 					'<i>What were you thinking?</i>'
-					act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				end
 				
-				act'Follow him':gt'Voltrener','massage'
+				act 'Follow him': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage'
 			elseif vball['coach_lust'] >= 30:
 				'You see his gaze roam up and down your body and for a moment, you think he might be considering it before he suddenly looks away.'
 				'"No, you just need... rest. Don''t bother me right now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 				'He immediately turns back towards whatever he was working on on his desk.'
 				*nl
 				'<i>Tch. So close.</i>'
-				act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			else
 				'"No <<$pcs_lastname>>, you just need rest. Go home. Don''t bother me with this."'
 				'He doesn''t even give you another look as he continues looking at his stats.'
-				act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
 		elseif vball['coachsex'] >= 1:
 	end
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				*nl
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Despite the fact that it''s just a massage you can''t help but be aroused. Arousal builds to excitement, and before you know it you find yourself quivering in orgasm, biting hard on your lip to keep from crying out. "Are you feeling okay <<$pcs_lastname>>? Something wrong?" You simply shake your head in response, not trusting yourself to speak.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 30
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			elseif vball['coach_massage'] <= 4:
 				'It''s just as good as last time. You groan in pleasure as the coach''s hands work through your sore muscles, gasping when he hits those perfect spots that can''t help but turn you on.'
 				*nl
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Eventually you can''t take it anymore, and you find yourself climaxing under his touch. Even as every muscle in your body tenses up again, he doesn''t let up. "You''re <i>very</i> tight <<$pcs_lastname>>. You need to loosen up some more." Breathing slowly, you choose not to respond.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 25
 				gs 'arousal','foreplay', 5
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			elseif vball['coach_massage'] = 5:
 				'He''s starting to get bolder now.'
 				*nl
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'When your climax comes, you don''t even try to hide it. It starts as soft grunts before becoming loud moans and then a gasping cry as you cum hard, your clit fingered through your pants as you ride out your orgasm.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 15
 				gs 'arousal','foreplay', 15
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			else
 				'<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s hands roam your body freely and you moan in response to his touch. Half massage, half foreplay, you enjoy yourself while <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> enjoys your body. Sore muscles are worked loose and erogenous zones are teased and played with. Through one way or another, you find yourself supremely relaxed.'
 				*nl
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage':
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Under <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s magic touch, you find yourself gasping in orgasm in no time at all.'
 				gs 'arousal','massage', 15
 				gs 'arousal','foreplay', 15
-				act'Finish':gt'Voltrener','massage_end'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'Voltrener', 'massage_end'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 		!! IMAGE LINK
 		'"Much better," you say, stretching your arms behind your back so your breasts push out against your top, heavily emphasizing your stiff nipples. "Thanks for the massage Coach."'
 		'"You''re welcome <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now hit the showers."'
-		act'Yes Coach':gt'gdksport','start'
+		act 'Yes Coach': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		
 		act'Gonna join me?':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 				'"Nobody likes a tease, <<$pcs_lastname>>," he sighs.'
 				'"You know you love it," you say, slipping out the door.'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'gdksport','start'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 			'"Why not?"'
 			'"We just... can''t." He takes a further step away from you. "You need to go. Now."'
 			'You sigh in dejection, moving out the door without another word.'
-			act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 		else
 			'"What are you doing <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 			act'Nothing':
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 				'"But-"'
 				'"<b>Out.</b>'
 				'You sigh in dejection, moving out the door without another word.'
-				act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
 			
 			act'Paying you back for your massage':
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 				'"But-"'
 				'"<b>Out.</b>'
 				'You sigh in dejection, moving out the door without another word.'
-				act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 			end
 			
 			act'Seducing you':
@@ -339,9 +339,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 					'"But-"'
 					'"OUT!"'
 					'Taken aback by his anger, you shrink away and leave his office. You can only hope this hasn''t damaged your relationship with him too much.'
-					act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				else
-					'Mikhail''s body tenses up but he doesn''t move. It gives you a great opportunity to feel his rock hard erection beneath his clothes.'
+					'Mikhail''s body tenses up but he doesn''t move. It gives you a great opportunity to feel his rock-hard erection beneath his clothes.'
 					'"I want you," you whisper under your breath. "Don''t you want me too?"'
 					'"I... This is..." He hesitates.'
 					act'Pull out his cock':
@@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 								'You quickly clean the cum up off the floor, wiping your hand with a tissue while you''re at it. Once that''s done, you move over to him and share one more kiss before quietly leaving his office.'
 								*nl
 								'<i>Maybe this will be the start of something else...</i>'
-								act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 							end
 							
 							act'Lick your hand clean':
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'massage_end':
 								'Finally, you move over to <<$npc_nickname[''A69'']>> and give him one more gentle kiss before departing his office.'
 								*nl
 								'<i>Maybe this will be the start of something else...</i>'
-								act'Leave':gt'gdksport','start'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 							end
 						end
 					end

locations/Voltrener.qsrc

@@ -193,11 +193,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 							end
 						end
 					elseif fame['pav_slut'] > 200:
-						'You ask the coach about joining the team. The coach thinks for a minute, "Hey <<$pcs_lastname>>, I hear loads of rumours about you. Such as you being a <<$gnikname>>. Is this true?"'
+						'You ask the coach about joining the team. The coach thinks for a minute, "Hey <<$pcs_lastname>>, I hear loads of rumors about you. Such as you being a <<$gnikname>>. Is this true?"'
 						act 'It''s all lies':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/mikhail/volleytrener6.jpg"></center>'
-							'You tell him it''s not true and that some of the kids have been spreading false rumours about you.'
+							'You tell him it''s not true and that some of the kids have been spreading false rumors about you.'
 							'He doesn''t appear to be convinced, the only options are to go aggressive or drop it, for now.'
 							act 'Drop it': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 							gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'

locations/VoltrenerSexShower.qsrc

@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 				act 'On your knees':
 					cls
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voltrenersexshower23.jpg"></center>'
-					'You drop to your knees and take a moment to admire Mikhail''s impressive, rock hard member. As it moves closer, you start to work your tongue, carefully licking first the head of the penis and then the whole thing, with determination burning in your eyes.'
+					'You drop to your knees and take a moment to admire Mikhail''s impressive, rock-hard member. As it moves closer, you start to work your tongue, carefully licking first the head of the penis and then the whole thing, with determination burning in your eyes.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Take it in your mouth':

locations/_face_image.qsrc

@@ -1,95 +1,287 @@
 # $face_image
 
-!!use with - <img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>">
+!!use with - <img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<func(''$face_image'')>>">
 
-if player_avatar = 1:$RESULT = 'images/avatar.jpg' & exit
+if face_style['type'] = 1:
+	if $face_style['avatar_path'] = '': $face_style['avatar_path'] = 'images/avatar.jpg'
+	$result = $face_style['avatar_path']
 
-!! These images are missing from my copy of the image folder, so I am commenting them out for now
-!!if glass = 2:
-!!	$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/hcolglass<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
-!!	exit
-!!end
-!!if glass = 1:
-!!	$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/nerd.jpg'
-!!	exit
-!!end
-!!if shorthair = 1:
-!!	$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/shcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
-!!	exit
-!!end
+elseif face_style['type'] = 2:
+	$result = 'images/pc/body/head/'
 
-
-$RESULT = 'images/pc/body/hairstyles/'
-
-if pcs_haircol > 3: 
-	$RESULT += 'colours'
-	jump 'skipsteps'
-end
-
-!! length
-if pcs_hairlng > 400:
-	$RESULT += 'vlng'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 260:
-	$RESULT += 'lng'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 160:
-	$RESULT += 'medlo'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 80:
-	$RESULT += 'med'
-elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
-	$RESULT += 'short'
-else
-	$RESULT += 'vshort'
-end
-$RESULT += '/'
-
-!! style for medium or longer hair
-if pcs_hairlng > 80:
-	if hbraids > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'braids'
+		!!----------GLASSES----------
+	!! stylish
+	if glass >= 2:
+		$result += 'stylish/'
+	!! cheap
+	elseif glass = 1:
+	!!	$result += 'cheap/'	!! missing !! will load stylish !!
+		$result += 'stylish/'
+	!! none
+	else
+		$result += 'noglass/'
+	end
+	
+	!!----------EYE COLOR----------
+	!! hazel
+	if pcs_eyecol = 0:
+	!!	$result += 'hazel/'	!! missing !! will load blue !!
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	!! grey
+	elseif pcs_eyecol = 1:
+	!!	$result += 'grey/'	!! missing !! will load blue !!
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	!! green
+	elseif pcs_eyecol = 2:
+		$result += 'green/'
+	!! blue
+	elseif pcs_eyecol = 3:
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	!! other
+	else
+	!!	$result += 'other/'	!! missing !! will load blue !!
+		$result += 'blue/'
+	end
+	
+	!!----------HAIR COLOR----------
+	!! black
+	if pcs_haircol = 0:
+		$result += 'black/'
+	!! brunette
+	elseif pcs_haircol = 1:
+		$result += 'brunette/'
+	!! red
+	elseif pcs_haircol = 2:
+		$result += 'red/'
+	!! blonde
+	elseif pcs_haircol = 3:
+		$result += 'blonde/'
+	!! other
+	else
+	!!	$result += 'other'	!! missing !! will load brunette !!
+		$result += 'brunette/'
+	end
+	
+	!!----------HAIR LENGTH----------
+	!! very long
+	if pcs_hairlng > 400:
+	!!	$result += 'very_long/'	!! missing !! will load long !!
+		$result += 'long/'
+	!! long
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 260:
+		$result += 'long/'
+	!! medium long
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 160:
+	!!	$result += 'medium_long/'	!! missing !! will load medium !!
+		$result += 'medium/'
+	!! medium
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 80:
+		$result += 'medium/'
+	!! short
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
+		$result += 'short/'
+	!! very short
+	else
+		$result += 'very_short/'
+	end
+	
+	!!----------HAIR STYLE----------
+	!! messy/tangled
+	if pcs_hairbsh = -1 or pcs_hairbsh = 0:
+		$result += 'messy/'
+	!! braids
+	elseif hbraids > 0:
+		$result += 'braids/'
+	!! pigtails
 	elseif hpigtail > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'pigtails'
+		$result += 'pigtails/'
+	!! curly-bangs-buns
 	elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-bangs-buns'
+	!!	$result += 'curly-bangs-buns/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+		$result += 'curly/'
+	!! curly-bangs-scrunch
 	elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-bangs-scrunch'
+	!!	$result += 'curly-bangs-scrunch/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+		$result += 'curly/'
+	!! curly-bangs
 	elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-bangs'
+	!!	$result += 'curly-bangs/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+		$result += 'curly/'
+	!! curly-buns
 	elseif curly > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-buns'
+	!!	$result += 'curly-buns/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+		$result += 'curly/'
+	!! curly-scrunch
 	elseif curly > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly-scrunch'
+	!!	$result += 'curly-scrunch/'	!! missing !! will load curly !!
+		$result += 'curly/'
+	!! bangs-buns
 	elseif hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs-buns'
+	!!	$result += 'bangs-buns/'	!! missing !! will load bangs !!
+		$result += 'bangs/'
+	!! bangs-scrunch
 	elseif hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs-scrunch'
+	!!	$result += 'bangs-scrunch/'	!! missing !! will load bangs !!
+		$result += 'bangs/'
+	!! curly
 	elseif curly > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'curly'
+		$result += 'curly/'
+	!! bangs
 	elseif hbangs > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs'
+		$result += 'bangs/'
+	!! buns (updo)
 	elseif hpingripw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'buns'
+		$result += 'buns/'
+	!! scrunch (ponytail)
 	elseif hscrunchw > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'scrunch'
+		$result += 'scrunch/'
+	!! normal
 	else
-		$RESULT += 'normal'
+		$result += 'normal/'
 	end
-!! style for short hair (other images don''t exist)
-elseif pcs_hairlng <= 80 and pcs_hairlng > 30:
-	if hbangs > 0:
-		$RESULT += 'bangs'
+				
+	!!----------MAKEUP----------
+	!! none
+	if pcs_makeup = 1:
+		$result += 'no_makeup_'
+	!! light
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 2:
+	!!	$result += 'light_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! vibrant
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 3:
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! heavy
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 4:
+	!!	$result += 'heavy_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! professional
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 5:
+	!!	$result += 'prof_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! bimbo
+	elseif pcs_makeup = 6:
+	!!	$result += 'bimbo_'	!! missing !! will load vibrant !!
+		$result += 'vibrant_'
+	!! smeared
 	else
-		$RESULT += 'normal'
+		$result += 'smeared_'
 	end
-!! style for very short hair (other images don''t exist)
+	
+	!!----------CUM----------
+	if cumloc[11] = 1:
+		!! enormous
+		if cumvol[11] > 250:
+		!!	$result += 'enormous'	!! missing !! will load decent !!
+			$result += 'decent'
+		!! huge
+		elseif cumvol[11] > 100:
+		!!	$result += 'huge'	!! missing !! will load decent !!
+			$result += 'decent'
+		!! decent
+		elseif cumvol[11] >= 20:
+			$result += 'decent'
+		!! small
+		else
+		!!	$result += 'small'	!! missing !! will load decent !!
+			$result += 'decent'
+		end
+	!! none
+	else
+		$result += 'no_cum'
+	end
+	
+	$result += '.jpg'
+
 else
-	$RESULT += 'normal'
+	!! These images are missing from my copy of the image folder, so I am commenting them out for now
+	!!if glass = 2:
+	!!	$result = 'images/pc/body/hcolglass<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
+	!!	exit
+	!!end
+	!!if glass = 1:
+	!!	$result = 'images/pc/body/nerd.jpg'
+	!!	exit
+	!!end
+	!!if shorthair = 1:
+	!!	$result = 'images/pc/body/shcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
+	!!	exit
+	!!end
+
+	$result = 'images/pc/body/hairstyles/'
+
+	if pcs_haircol > 3: 
+		$result += 'colours'
+		jump 'skipsteps'
+	end
+
+	!! length
+	if pcs_hairlng > 400:
+		$result += 'vlng'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 260:
+		$result += 'lng'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 160:
+		$result += 'medlo'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 80:
+		$result += 'med'
+	elseif pcs_hairlng > 30:
+		$result += 'short'
+	else
+		$result += 'vshort'
+	end
+	$result += '/'
+
+	!! style for medium or longer hair
+	if pcs_hairlng > 80:
+		if hbraids > 0:
+			$result += 'braids'
+		elseif hpigtail > 0:
+			$result += 'pigtails'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-bangs-buns'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-bangs-scrunch'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-bangs'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-buns'
+		elseif curly > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'curly-scrunch'
+		elseif hbangs > 0 and hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs-buns'
+		elseif hbangs > 0 and hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs-scrunch'
+		elseif curly > 0:
+			$result += 'curly'
+		elseif hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs'
+		elseif hpingripw > 0:
+			$result += 'buns'
+		elseif hscrunchw > 0:
+			$result += 'scrunch'
+		else
+			$result += 'normal'
+		end
+	!! style for short hair (other images don''t exist)
+	elseif pcs_hairlng <= 80 and pcs_hairlng > 30:
+		if hbangs > 0:
+			$result += 'bangs'
+		else
+			$result += 'normal'
+		end
+	!! style for very short hair (other images don''t exist)
+	else
+		$result += 'normal'
+	end
+
+	:skipsteps
+	$result += '/'
+
+	!! color
+	$result += 'hcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
 end
 
-:skipsteps
-$RESULT += '/'
 
-!! color
-$RESULT += 'hcol<<pcs_haircol>>.jpg'
 
 --- $face_image ---------------------------------
 

locations/act_extras1.qsrc

@@ -13,15 +13,15 @@
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Background Shower Girl':gt'act_extras1','back_shower'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt'act_extras1','car_flash'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt'act_extras1','cadaver'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Dildo Girl':gt'act_extras1','cucumber'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt'act_extras1','lockertits1'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt'act_extras1','lockertits2'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt'act_extras1','lockertits3'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt'act_extras1','showertits'
-	if $acting['role'] = 'Werewolf Victim':gt'act_extras1','werewolf'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Background Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'back_shower'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt 'act_extras1', 'car_flash'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'cadaver'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Dildo Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'cucumber'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'lockertits1'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'lockertits2'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $acting['role'] = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt 'act_extras1', 'lockertits3'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras1', 'showertits'
+	if $acting['role'] = 'Werewolf Victim':gt 'act_extras1', 'werewolf'
 end
 
 !! EXTRAS
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'back_shower':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -56,11 +56,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car_flash':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/extra/car_flash.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Filming starts and you follow the director''s instructions of flirting, taunting, and teasing while playing with your boobs before pulling up your top to <i>really</i> shake them for the camera and give your best party girl "Woooooo!"'
 		*nl
-		'You do a few takes for variation, a few in the wide, a few close up, and a few just mixing up your movements to see what looks good before the shoot is finished. All in all, the camera wasn''t filming for very long but the setup for the stage and the equipment pushed the time to about 40 minutes. But with that done, you''re free to leave the set and collect your pay.'
+		'You do a few takes for variation, a few in the wide, a few close-up, and a few just mixing up your movements to see what looks good before the shoot is finished. All in all, the camera wasn''t filming for very long but the setup for the stage and the equipment pushed the time to about 40 minutes. But with that done, you''re free to leave the set and collect your pay.'
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 								actress['pay'] += 1
 								acting['jobdone'] = 1
 								actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-								act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+								act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cucumber':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	'Even with only one take, due to the need for organization and setup, the whole process takes about 20 minutes, but after that you''re done and can collect your pay.'
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertits':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 

locations/act_extras3.qsrc

@@ -13,15 +13,15 @@
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
-	if $role = 'Background Shower Girl':gt'act_extras3','back_shower'
-	if $role = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt'act_extras3','car_flash'
-	if $role = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt'act_extras3','cadaver'
-	if $role = 'Dildo Girl':gt'act_extras3','cucumber'
-	if $role = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt'act_extras3','lockertits1'
-	if $role = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt'act_extras3','lockertits2'
-	if $role = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $role = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $role = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt'act_extras3','lockertits3'
-	if $role = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt'act_extras3','showertits'
-	if $role = 'Werewolf Victim':gt'act_extras3','werewolf'
+	if $role = 'Background Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'back_shower'
+	if $role = 'Spring Break Flasher':gt 'act_extras3', 'car_flash'
+	if $role = 'Valya Zakharovna aka Corpse Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'cadaver'
+	if $role = 'Dildo Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'cucumber'
+	if $role = 'Naked Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'lockertits1'
+	if $role = 'Undressing Locker Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'lockertits2'
+	if $role = 'Modest Cheerleader' or $role = 'Underwear Cheerleader' or $role = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':gt 'act_extras3', 'lockertits3'
+	if $role = 'Hot Shower Girl':gt 'act_extras3', 'showertits'
+	if $role = 'Werewolf Victim':gt 'act_extras3', 'werewolf'
 end
 
 !! EXTRAS
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'back_shower':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car_flash':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 								actress['pay'] += 1
 								acting['jobdone'] = 1
 								actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-								act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+								act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cucumber':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits1':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits2':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	'Even with only one take, due to the need for organization and setup, the whole process takes about 20 minutes, but after that you''re done and can collect your pay.'
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertits':
 	actress['pay'] += 1
 	acting['jobdone'] = 1
 	actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-	act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'werewolf':
 		actress['pay'] += 1
 		acting['jobdone'] = 1
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
-		act'Finish':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 	end
 end
 

locations/act_main1.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_nude1':
 	'You film a nude sex scene with another actor but for some reason the logistics of it all are taking forever. They''ve had you laying naked on this bed for 20 minutes and every time you think they''re about to start something else comes up.'
 	*nl
 	'You spend another 20 minutes more laying on that bed, bored out of your mind while you wait for this scene to actually get filmed.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  Generic nude sex scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_nudesex1':
 	'You film a nude sex scene with another actor but for some reason the logistics of it all are taking forever. They''ve had you laying naked on this bed for 20 minutes and every time you think they''re about to start something else comes up.'
 	*nl
 	'You spend another 20 minutes more laying on that bed, bored out of your mind while you wait for this scene to actually get filmed.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  Generic dialogue scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue1':
 	'You film a "morning after" scene with somebody. After going through all the boring dialogue, you end with the comedic one liner.'
 	'"Where''s my buttplug?"'
 	'And the director calls cut.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue2':
@@ -46,22 +46,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue2':
 	'You film a scene about you and a bunch of other characters playing games <i>wayyyyy</i> too competitively.'
 	'"It''s a sock asshole!" you say as you pitch a pen into another actor.'
 	'It takes a little while, but eventually the scene wraps up and you go to break.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_dialogue3':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/generic/dialogue/3.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a scene with your character''s weird and quirky friend. Most of the scene is you just being there and keeping a straight face while your counterpart does some <i>really</i> weird gestures.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 !! ----------------------  Generic miscellaneous scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_misc1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/generic/misc/1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You film a raunchy scene of your character participating in a drinking contest. The scene involves spilling a very large amount of beer down the front of your rather thin top. By the end of the scene your tits are soaked, sticky, and absolutely freezing in the cold air conditioning of the set. Which you''re sure must be on purpose because your nipples are rock hard and visible through your top as well. It''s like they say, sex sells.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	'You film a raunchy scene of your character participating in a drinking contest. The scene involves spilling a very large amount of beer down the front of your rather thin top. By the end of the scene, your tits are soaked, sticky, and absolutely freezing in the cold air conditioning of the set. Which you''re sure must be on purpose because your nipples are rock-hard and visible through your top as well. It''s like they say, sex sells.'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  Generic underwear scenes for random inserts ---------------------------------------
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gen_underwear1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/generic/underwear/1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a scene with your character seeming to be down and on hard times, too lazy to do anything in her apartment except drink beer or put on clothes.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -79,21 +79,21 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_Start':
 	if act_unashamed['scenes'] = 0:
-		gt'act_main1','Unashamed_Intro'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'Unashamed_Intro'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'nude_sex':
-		gt'act_main1','nude_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'nude_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'nude':
-		gt'act_main1','nude<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'nude<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'clothed_sex':
-		gt'act_main1','clothed_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'clothed_sex<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'dialogue':
-		gt'act_main1','dialogue<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'dialogue<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'misc':
-		gt'act_main1','misc<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'misc<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'underwear':
-		gt'act_main1','underwear<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'underwear<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	elseif acting['scenetype'] = 'swimsuit':
-		gt'act_main1','swimsuit<<rand(1,10)>>'
+		gt 'act_main1', 'swimsuit<<rand(1,10)>>'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_Intro':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/set1.jpg"></center>'
 					'The director calls cut as you finish up your first take. You spend a while longer cleaning up the bits that needed correction or the director wanted to tweak before going to the break.'
-					act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+					act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude/1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a topless after sex scene with flirty dialogue between you and one of this season''s love interests.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude2':
 	'"Oh, fuck that!" you say, jumping out of the shower and grabbing a towel.'
 	'"What? Is this really such a big deal?"'
 	'"Yes! Are you fucking kidding me?!"'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude3':
 		'"Shit. Well, if I can help at all, you''ll let me know right? Cause you like me, don''t you?"'
 		'You snicker back at Vitaly and reach down to take a big grab of his ass.'
 		'"Oh please, you know I only like you for your sweet fuckable ass." The line is delivered with clear sarcasm to show you''re just teasing, but also avoids the implied question the character was really asking about. "Anyways, I gotta go. I have to pick up my sister from school," you say, getting up to end the scene.'
-		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+		act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude4':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude/4.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a topless after sex scene with flirty dialogue between you and one of this season''s love interests.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  "Unashamed" nude sex scenes ---------------------------------------
@@ -218,26 +218,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex1':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_5.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Once back in position, you spend several more takes dry humping against each other until the director calls cut and finishes the scene.'
-						act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+						act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		gs'arousal','vag',2
+		gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 		'The director calls action and you and Vitaly fall forward onto the bedpost. His dick is deep inside your pussy, the real thing being better than any kind of simulation you could do otherwise. You your ass back towards him and focus on the sensation of him thrusting in and out of you, using your real arousal to maintain a lusty expression. You continue through several camera angles until someone knocks on the door of the set and you both turn towards the sound.'
 		'"What?" Vitaly calls out.'
 		'"Is Yulya in there?" someone says from the other side of the door.'
 		act'Keep filming':
 			cla & *clr
-			gs'arousal','vag',2
+			gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_2.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You shake your head to signal him to deny it.'
 			'"No!" he calls back.'
 			'"Bullshit! Tell her I''m not fucking leaving till she faces me!"'
 			act'Keep filming':
 				cla & *clr
-				gs'arousal','vag',2
+				gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'"Ugh, turns out lesbians are <i>super</i> possessive" you say, continuing the scene.'
 				'"I fucking love you Yulya! I fucking love you you bitch!" You lean back, pulling the sheet with you to give crotch coverage and sit back on Vitaly''s cock. It''s actually a terribly awkward position and you have to work hard to not accidentally bend his dick in half even as it hits uncomfortable angles inside you. Though useful before, the real sex is proving to be distracting.'
@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex1':
 				'"So what do you want to do? Cause I have to pick up my brother in a few minutes."'
 				act'Keep filming':
 					cla & *clr
-					gs'arousal','vag',2
+					gs 'arousal', 'vag',2
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_4.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'"Yulya! Come out here and face me!"'
 					'You turn back towards Vitaly. "I''ll let you borrow my car if I can hide under your bed?"'
@@ -253,10 +253,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex1':
 					'"Hang on, I haven''t cum yet," and you lean forward and let him re-mount you, his cock in a much more comfortable position than it was before.'
 					act'Keep filming':
 						cla & *clr
-						gs'arousal','vag',5
+						gs 'arousal', 'vag',5
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude_sex/1_5.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You spend several more minutes worth of takes fucking each other until the director calls cut and finishes the scene.'
-						act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+						act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex2':
 		'The next shot is a hard cut of you and Vitaly flopping down on your bed.'
 		'"Oh my god, that was incredible. Are you normally this good? What made this time so different?"'
 		'"..."'
-		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+		act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 		if acting['realsex'] = 0:
 			'He''s not actually licking your pussy but you can feel his breath on your clit and it''s <i>very</i> irritating. Your hand didn''t go down because you were acting, you were trying to stop from squirming too much and ruin the shot. It''s like something tickling your face during a haircut. You just want to stop and scratch the itch but now isn''t the time or place.'
 		else
-			gs'arousal','cuni',10
+			gs 'arousal', 'cuni',10
 			'Even while you were filming the close up shot, this extra has been steadily licking your pussy and for fuck''s sake he''s really good at it and it''s fucking distracting! When your hand went down to grab the sheets earlier, that wasn''t acting, that was an involuntary reaction. But you guess that''s kind of the whole point of this scene isn''t it?'
  		end
  		'Someone calls out the next line of what the person on the other end of the phone is supposed to be saying.'
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 				'"Yeah alright well you''re off the hook but I need you for dinner."'
 				'"SURE!" you say a little louder than you were planning to as the extra blows on you again. "OKay, I''ll sEe you later!"'
 			else
-				gs'arousal','cuni',10
+				gs 'arousal', 'cuni',10
 				'You gasp as you feel the extra tease your clit with his tongue but somehow barely manage to keep focused on the next line. You smack him on the head instinctively to try get him to slow down.'
 				'"No no! I can! I can! I--just thought if it wasn''t busy-?"'
 				'"Yeah alright well you''re off the hook but I need you for dinner."'
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 					'You feel exhausted and on edge at the same time, being kept in orgasm denial for the better part of 20 minutes now. You really need to cum. Maybe you have time to rub one out during the break or something.'
 				end
 				gs'stat'
-				act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+				act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex4':
 		'You pretend to deal with it for a few seconds longer until you slap him away.'
 		'"Stop! Stop! No, nope. Nice fucking you but I''m going. Can''t deal with it, see you later."'
 		'You finish up the more boring parts of the scene and soon enough it''s time for a break.'
-		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+		act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex5':
 			'"That doesn''t count and you know it Yulya. We fucked in the bathroom that night too unless you were too drunk to remember it."'
 			'"Oh for fuck''s sake! Just hurry up and cum already, I can''t deal with this today."'
 			'The argument continues until Vitaly "cums" and you get dressed and leave in a rush. The scene ends with Vitaly looking dejected and unsatisfied alone in the room.'
-			act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+			act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_incest1':
 	'You strip off your robe revealing your naked body underneath. You walk away, calling back, "You coming?"'
 	'Misha debates with himself staring forward while the camera maintains visual of your ass in the background.'
 	'"Fuck. On one hand she''s my sister. I could get in serious trouble for this." Then he nods his head to the side in concession. "Fuck it, my dick''s not getting any softer," and then follows you up the stairs.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_incest2':
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_incest2':
 		*nl
 		'The irony of this scene and how you''ve fucked your brother in real life is not at all lost on you.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  "Unashamed" dialogue scenes ---------------------------------------
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue1':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue2':
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue2':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue3':
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue3':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue4':
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dialogue4':
 	else
 		'Your performance overall is alright, the frustration and emotion of the character showing through but the director wanted some more evocative visuals in the scene and has makeup put some fake tear eyedrops in. You hold them carefully in your eyes, trying not to blink until action is called and the scene is filmed. The scene is finished shortly and the director calls break while they set up the next scene.'
 	end
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'misc1':
 	'You film a scene where your character fingerblasts her friend in the middle of a sauna, looking bored out of her mind.'
 	*nl
 	'Given all the other lascivious scenes in this show, you''d think that a scene like this would be for sex appeal but the tone you get from the director makes it seem like it''s going to be played for laughs instead.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'misc2':
@@ -517,14 +517,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'misc2':
 	'You film a scene where you go for coffee with a friend and end up breaking down crying in front of her as you confess confused feelings over your fuck buddy Vitaly. You have feelings for him, you don''t, he''s just a good friend, no you want something more, it''s just about the sex, but then why do you want to be with him all the time, this and that and everything else. As you stop to breathe your friend decides to console you by initiating a kiss. You get drawn further and further into it until the scene ends with just a few more lines of dialogue.'
 	'"Feel better?"'
 	'"Oh just pay the bill and let''s just get to your place already, I''m completely soaked."'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'misc3':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/misc/3.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You film a scene where you and the rest of your character''s family are rushing off to deal with the crisis of the episode.'
-	act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
+	act 'Go to break': gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 end
 
 

locations/act_minor1.qsrc

@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@
 !! roletype = 9 - A main character with nude scenes
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
-	if $role = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt'act_minor1','club_flash'
+	if $role = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt 'act_minor1', 'club_flash'
 	if $role = 'Diner Waitress':
 		if costuming['check'] = 1:
-			gt'act_minor1','diner_waitress1'
+			gt 'act_minor1', 'diner_waitress1'
 		elseif costuming['check'] = 1:
-			gt'act_minor1','diner_waitress2'
+			gt 'act_minor1', 'diner_waitress2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'club_flash':
 								actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 								actress['minor_role'] += 1
 								!! insert payment and reset stuff
-								act'Leave':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'diner_waitress1':
 					acting['scenes_filmed'] += 1
 					acting['scene_outfit'] = 2
 					'"Cut!" the director yells. "Alright, that''s good for this scene. Let''s move on to the next one. Remember everybody, we''re meeting at set <<acting[''setnumber'']>>! Set <<acting[''setnumber'']>>! Don''t forget! <<$pcs_lastname>>, go back to makeup and get changed for the next scene."'
-					act'Leave':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'diner_waitress2':
 						actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 						actress['sex_scene'] += 1
 						actress['minor_role'] += 1
-						act'Leave':gt'movie_studio','sets'
+						act 'Leave': gt 'movie_studio', 'sets'
 					end
 				end
 			end

locations/actress.qsrc

@@ -23,14 +23,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/acting/script.jpg"></center>'
 	'You open up your copy of the script and skim the words thinking about what to do.'
-	act'Put down the script':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Put down the script': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act'Practice for your role (0:15)':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/acting/rehearse.jpg"></center>'
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 1
 		'You spend a bit of time practicing your lines and actions. Most of the time is just spent memorizing the dialogue, you can''t really get into the mindset of the role in only fifteen minutes.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 	
 	act'Practice for your role (0:30)':
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 2
 		'You spend some time practicing your lines and actions. Most of the time is just spent memorizing the dialogue, but you manage to incorporate some of the posture your character might have and how you might hold yourself during filming.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 	
 	act'Practice for your role (0:45)':
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 3
 		'You spend a good amount of time practicing your lines and actions. You manage a good amount of progress on memorizing your lines and even think of a few hand motions your character might use.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 	
 	act'Practice for your role (1:00)':
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'scene_prep':
 		minut += 15
 		audition['scene_prep'] += 5
 		'You spend a full hour practicing your lines and actions. Not only do you get a decent amount of time in memorizing your lines, but you really manage to get into character during this time. How you should hold yourself, how you should talk, how you should <i>feel</i>, and you feel a good deal more confident in getting into the role.'
-		act'Continue':gt'actress','scene_prep'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'actress', 'scene_prep'
 	end
 end
 

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-	act 'Make small talk': gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
-	act 'Talk about sex': gt'albina_sex_chat','sex_talk_start'
+	act 'Make small talk': gt 'albina_chat', 'small_talk2'
+	act 'Talk about sex': gt 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk_start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'small_talk':
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-	act 'Keep talking': gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
+	act 'Keep talking': gt 'albina_chat', 'small_talk2'
 	act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 end
 
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk2':
 	cla & *nl
 	'"What about you? Do you shave?"'
 	if $pube_style['word'] = 'shaved':
-		!! clean shaven
+		!! clean-shaven
 		act 'I hate bush too':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'

locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'stat'
 !!	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
 	if AlbinaQW['albride'] = 1:
-		gt'albina_house_events','first_visit'
+		gt 'albina_house_events', 'first_visit'
 	else
 		gt 'albinahome', 'hallway'
 	end
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 							'"It''s okay..." you continue on cooing. "I forgive you Albina. I''m not holding this against you."'
 							'"But I-!"'
 							'"I don''t care. You''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and she becomes completely unintelligable for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
-							act 'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','first_visit2'
+							act 'Continue':gt 'albina_house_events', 'first_visit2'
 						end
 					else
 						'She turns to face you, eyes brimming. "And when it wasn''t enough, he sold my friends too."'
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 						'"It''s okay..." you continue on cooing. "It''s not your fault."'
 						'"But I-!"'
 						'"It''s not. No matter what you tell yourself, it wasn''t your fault. And no matter what you think, you''re still my friend." Your last words cause her to bawl even harder and she becomes completely unintelligable for the next few minutes as she releases what you can only imagine to be years of frustration and trauma.'
-						act 'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','first_visit2'
+						act 'Continue':gt 'albina_house_events', 'first_visit2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 	if AlbinaQW['winter_hot_tub_dip'] < 1:
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t know you were here! I was just going to go for a swim, care to join me?"'
 		'"You want to go swimming in <i>this</i> weather?" you ask, raising your eyebrow, following her as she walks past you down the stairs.'
-		'Albina smirks at you. "Not swimming, just a quick dip! Just long enough to get your nipples rock hard."'
+		'Albina smirks at you. "Not swimming, just a quick dip! Just long enough to get your nipples rock-hard."'
 		'"And <i>why</i> would I want to do that?"'
 		'"So you can jump in the hot tub after!" She looks at you pointedly. "What, you mean you''ve never jumped in the lake before a sauna session before? Don''t you know anything about enjoying yourself, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		'She drops her robe, revealing that she''s wearing only a skimpy bikini thong as she starts strutting towards the back door. Opening it up, she shudders as a cold wind blows over her before glancing back at you. "Well? You coming or what?"'
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 				'You rather brazenly decide to take your panties off and throw them into your pile of clothes before climbing into the hot tub naked. Albina, normally rather daring around you, is taken aback by your decison, but decides to join you. She wriggles around and pulls her thong off before tossing it aside and smiling.'
 				'"Oh <i>fuck</i>..." she moans softly. "Good choice <<$pcs_nickname>>. This is <i>much</i> better..."'
 				*nl
-				'You soon realise what she means when you sit down and instantly feel the jets of warm water softly tickling your clit. It''s slowly turning you on and you can feel your juices flowing in response to the stimulation. It seems to have the same effect on Albina, who reaches over and turns up the bubbles even more. You lose track of time, but it''s a very pleasurable experience.'
+				'You soon realize what she means when you sit down and instantly feel the jets of warm water softly tickling your clit. It''s slowly turning you on and you can feel your juices flowing in response to the stimulation. It seems to have the same effect on Albina, who reaches over and turns up the bubbles even more. You lose track of time, but it''s a very pleasurable experience.'
 				act 'Continue':
 					minut +=6
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_1':
 		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 		AlbinaQW['visiting'] = 0
-		act'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 
 	act 'It was okay':
@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tv_1':
 		minut +=24
 		gs 'stat'
 		AlbinaQW['visiting'] = 0
-		act'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 end
 

locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/alblaz1.jpg"></center>'				
-	'You glance around to make sure nobody is nearby, then crack the door open slightly to peek in. You can see Albina in her underwear, squatting in front of Lazar. She pulls his jeans down and his impressively sized and rock hard dick springs free.' 
+	'You glance around to make sure nobody is nearby, then crack the door open slightly to peek in. You can see Albina in her underwear, squatting in front of Lazar. She pulls his jeans down and his impressively sized and rock-hard dick springs free.' 
 	'She starts licking and jerking it before she takes it into her mouth and starts bobbing her head up and down his shaft as she sucks his dick. After a few seconds of this, she gags as she takes it further into her mouth and down her throat, deepthroating him as far as she can before pulling her head back up and coughing. Lazar barely lets her breath before he shoves his dick back into her mouth, moaning in pleasure as he holds her down as long as possible.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	gs 'stat'

locations/albina_mother_events.qsrc

@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 
 		act 'Finish':
 			CLOSE ALL
-			gs'arousal','end'
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		end
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 				'You smile and move your hand back down between her legs. Being rather flexible, Albina lifts her leg straight up and places her foot against the shower wall, giving you better access to her pussy, which is dripping wet in anticipation. You slide two fingers inside her and start finger fucking her pussy as your thumb massages her clit. She moans loudly in pleasure as she leans against you to steady herself. A few minutes of this is enough to bring her to the edge and she starts moaning even louder. "Don''t you dare stop <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m about to cum!" You finger her even faster and she lets out a pleasured shriek as her pussy starts squirting her juices over your arm. She steadies herself against you as she rides through the pleasure of her orgasm. You pull your fingers out of her and shove them in her mouth. She sucks on them before smiling at you.' 
 				'"Ohhh <<$pcs_nickname>>, that... that was amazing! Just let me finish up in here and I''ll be out." You nod and step out of the shower, grabbing one of the nearby towels and wrapping yourself in it before walking back into her bedroom.'
 				'As you dry off, you hear the water turn off and a naked Albina casually strolls into the room.'
-				'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favour." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
+				'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favor." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 					'You firmly squeeze her ass in your hand before pushing her down onto all fours. She looks back and gives you a knowing smile as you kneel down next to her and spread her ass. She moans and giggles as you start rimming her asshole before grabbing you by the hair and holding you tightly against her, forcing your face between her ass cheeks as you continue pleasuring her backdoor. She soon relaxes enough for you to start pushing the tip of your tongue against her hole and it eventually penetrates. You start tongue fucking her ass in addition to rimming it, all to Albina''s immense pleasure. She reaches back and starts fondling her clit, her grip on your hair tightening as she approaches orgasm. Hearing her moans getting louder and her breathing more ragged, you start going even faster, pushing your tongue as deep as you can into her ass before Albina suddenly lets out a pleasured shriek as her pussy starts squirting juices. She lets go of your hair and you continue eating her ass as she rides through her orgasm. Once she recovers, she pulls herself up and the two of you sit in the shower making out for a few minutes before Albina breaks the kiss and smiles at you.' 
 					'"Ohhh <<$pcs_nickname>>, that... that was amazing! Just let me finish up in here and I''ll be out." You nod and step out of the shower, grabbing one of the nearby towels and wrapping yourself in it before walking back into her bedroom.'
 					'As you dry off, you hear the water turn off and a naked Albina casually strolls into the room.'
-					'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favour." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
+					'"You were amazing in there and I want to return the favor." She walks over and pushes you down onto her bed. "I''m going to eat your ass until you cum. And I won''t take no for an answer!"' 
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish':
 							CLOSE ALL
-							gs'arousal','end'
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 						end

locations/albina_school_sex.qsrc

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 	*clr & cla
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/maekup.jpg"></center>'
-		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. She walks over to the mirror to touch up her makeup when her phone pings with a text message and she suddenly takes off. "I''d love to return the favour, but I promised Vicky I''d do something with her before our next class. I need to go, but I owe you one!" she says and winks at you before walking out the door with some sway in her hips. You clean up at the sink and prepare to leave yourself, feeling very horny and a little disappointed that you won''t get a release.' 
+		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. She walks over to the mirror to touch up her makeup when her phone pings with a text message and she suddenly takes off. "I''d love to return the favor, but I promised Vicky I''d do something with her before our next class. I need to go, but I owe you one!" she says and winks at you before walking out the door with some sway in her hips. You clean up at the sink and prepare to leave yourself, feeling very horny and a little disappointed that you won''t get a release.' 
 		act 'Continue': 
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. A sly grin appears on her face as she pulls her phone out and looks at it. "We''ve got just enough time for me to return the favour..." she says before pushing you down onto the toilet and kneeling in front of you.'
+		'Satisfied, she climbs off of you and helps you to your feet. "That was amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that," she says before pulling her thong back on and fixing her skirt. A sly grin appears on her face as she pulls her phone out and looks at it. "We''ve got just enough time for me to return the favor..." she says before pushing you down onto the toilet and kneeling in front of you.'
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			'She pushes your skirt up and is surprised at what she sees. "No panties <<$pcs_nickname>>? You are a naughty girl!" she says with a laugh before spreading your legs and burying her face in your crotch.'
 		else
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_2':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/class3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh... Oh wow. That was... Amazing... I really needed that..." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour," she says before she sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
+			'"Oh... Oh wow. That was... Amazing... I really needed that..." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favor," she says before she sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
 			'Seeing this, she stops licking your pussy and stands up; you barely have time to ask what''s happening before she jams her fingers deep inside you and starts fingerbanging you. "That''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>, cum for me." she whispers teasingly in your ear before making out with you. You moan loudly into her mouth as she brings you to orgasm. You lie panting on the desk as she pulls her fingers out and sucks on them. "Mhmm. You taste really fucking good, you know that?" she says teasingly with a wink.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 6, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/albina_sex_chat.qsrc

@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_pill_hassle_condom_ver':
 	act 'Too much hassle':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just easier to put a condom on the guy''s cock before he fucks me. If the condom breaks, I can just get a morning after pill."'
+		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just easier to put a condom on the guy''s cock before he fucks me. If the condom breaks, I can just get a morning-after pill."'
 		'"I guess that''s fair," she concedes. "Just takes one missed day to get knocked up. That''s why I take mine religiously. I set alarms and everything to remind me. You don''t know what you''re missing out on, though. Bareback is the best."'
 		*nl
 		'She grins a slutty grin at you.'
@@ -804,7 +804,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_pill_hassle_no_condoms':
 	act 'Too much hassle':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just one more annoying thing to do. I just want to have sex and enjoy it. Besides, I can always get a morning after pill."'
+		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just one more annoying thing to do. I just want to have sex and enjoy it. Besides, I can always get a morning-after pill."'
 		'"You''re crazy," she says while shaking her head. "Condom or bareback, I wouldn''t fuck guys <i>at all</i> if I wasn''t on birth control... but that''s why I need to be on birth control."'
 		*nl
 		'You both erupt into laughter.'

locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina1':
 			   *clr & cla
 			   gs 'stat'
 			   '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
-			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realise your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
+			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realize your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
 			   'She finishes her performance as the music ends and you sheepishly avoid eye contact with her as she walks up to you, breathless.'
-			   '"Not so loud mouthed now are you?" she gleefully remarks with a laugh. "Now why don''t you fuck off and take your humble ass back to the amateur corner where you belong?"' 
+			   '"Not so loud-mouthed now are you?" she gleefully remarks with a laugh. "Now why don''t you fuck off and take your humble ass back to the amateur corner where you belong?"' 
 			   if grupTipe = 4:
 					'"A junkie like you will never dance with <i>us</i>!"'
 				else
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina2':
 			   *clr & cla
 			   gs 'stat'
 			   '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
-			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realise your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves that you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
+			   'The music starts playing and you instantly realize your mistake in trying to compare yourself to Albina. She flawlessly performs a number of dance moves that you could never even hope to do, all with a smug smile on her face directed at you.'
 			   'She finishes her performance as the music ends and you sheepishly avoid eye contact with her as she walks up to you, breathless.'
 			   '"Not so loud mouthed now are you?" she gleefully remarks with a laugh. "I''m in a good mood today. I want to see you dance. Get your ass up and prove you''re as good as you claim."'
 			   
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'StarletsEnd':
 	cla
-	'You enter the locker room and immediately see the disapproving looks on the girls faces. Albina walks over to you and, looking severly disappointed, shakes her head. "Why <<$pcs_nickname>>? You used to be cool, but now you''ve gone and done this to yourself. I''m sorry, but I just can''t have someone like you being associated with us anymore."' 
+	'You enter the locker room and immediately see the disapproving looks on the girls faces. Albina walks over to you and, looking severely disappointed, shakes her head. "Why <<$pcs_nickname>>? You used to be cool, but now you''ve gone and done this to yourself. I''m sorry, but I just can''t have someone like you being associated with us anymore."' 
 	'She motions to the door and you walk out in shame as tears well up in your eyes.'
 	starlets_practice = 0
 	minut += 2

locations/albina_starlets_sex.qsrc

@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bjd.jpg"></center>'
 			'The two men watch with hungry perversion as you stand and reluctantly undress in front of them. Once you''re naked, they unbuckle their pants and pull their cocks out before one of them grabs you and forces you to your knees.'
-			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
+			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock-hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
 			'"Very good little lamb. Now take my cock. Take it all!" one of the men barks and forces his entire length into your mouth, causing you to choke. The two men laugh and force you to keep sucking and jerking them off.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'dick', 'group', 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 6, 'dick', 'group', 'sub', 'rough', 'humiliation'
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bjd.jpg"></center>'
 			'The two men watch with hungry perversion as you stand and reluctantly undress in front of them. Once you''re naked, they unbuckle their pants and pull their cocks out before one of them grabs you and forces you to your knees.'
-			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
+			'He maintains tightly grabs your hair and holds you in place as you lick, jerk, and suck the two cocks until they''re both rock-hard. You look up at the two men, seeking their approval.'
 			'"Very good little lamb. Now take my cock. Take it all!" one of the men barks and forces his entire length into your mouth, causing you to choke. The two men laugh and force you to keep sucking and jerking them off.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'dick', 'group', 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 6, 'dick', 'group', 'sub', 'rough', 'humiliation'
@@ -721,7 +721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore6':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/reward.jpg"></center>'
 						'The man flips you back onto your back and spreads your legs. You moan heavily as his tongue returns to your clit and starts swirling away as his fingers slide into your wet hole and start working their magic once more.'
 						'Your pussy starts tightening and the man picks up the pace. Soon enough, you let out a scream and squeeze your legs around his head as you''re brought to an explosive orgasm. You release the man from your grip and lay on the bed riding the waves of pleasure rushing through you.'
-						'The man is sitting on the edge of the bed as you step off. "Oh one last thing." He grabs hold of your ass, his cum still wet on your cheek. "You''re going home like that." You blush at him, but obidiently slide your panties back over your cum covered ass. He gives you a final smack on the ass and lets you leave.'
+						'The man is sitting on the edge of the bed as you step off. "Oh one last thing." He grabs hold of your ass, his cum still wet on your cheek. "You''re going home like that." You blush at him, but obediently slide your panties back over your cum covered ass. He gives you a final smack on the ass and lets you leave.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'sub'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -1, 'sub'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'

locations/albina_wine_event.qsrc

@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			else
 				AlbinaQW['wine_convo_1'] = daystart
 			end
-			gs'albina_wine_event','pussy_taste'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'pussy_taste'
 		elseif AlbinaQW['wine_convo'] = 2:
 			!! Shaving convo
 			if AlbinaQW['wine_convo_2'] = daystart: 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','boob_size_talk'
 			
 		elseif AlbinaQW['wine_convo'] = 7:
-			if AlbinaQW['commando_know'] = 0: gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			if AlbinaQW['commando_know'] = 0: gt 'albina_wine_event', 'wine_chat1'
 			if AlbinaQW['wine_convo_7'] = daystart: 
 				gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 			else
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_talk':
 	if pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes <= 3:
-		!! clean shaven
+		!! clean-shaven
 		'"I can''t believe how many girls at school don''t shave their pussy," Albina says with a disgusted look on her face. "How can they stand having all that hair down there?"'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer1'
 !!	elseif pcs_pubes <= 10:
@@ -306,10 +306,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dominate_albina':
 	
 	act 'Bend you over and spank you':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"First, I''d bend you over my lap," you smile gently, running your fingers through her hair. Something in your voice makes her eyes go wide. She glances to the side, as if realizing that her head is exactly where you said you''d bend her over.'
+		'"First, I''d bend you over my lap," you smile gently, running your fingers through her hair. Something in your voice makes her eyes go wide. She glances to the side as if realizing that her head is exactly where you said you''d bend her over.'
 		'"Then, I''d sit you up so your ass is nice and high," you continue. "And then I''d <i>spank you within an inch of your life.</i>" You keep your easy tone, but give Albina a hard stare and her breath hitches. "I''d keep going until your ass is red and swollen. Let my fingers trail over your pussy, edging you until you <i>beg</i> me to let you cum. And then, <i>I won''t.</i>"'
 		*nl
-		'Albina''s face flushes red and she swallows reflexively. Looking down her body, you see her nipples are rock hard and her thighs are practically dripping with girl cum.'
+		'Albina''s face flushes red and she swallows reflexively. Looking down her body, you see her nipples are rock-hard and her thighs are practically dripping with girl cum.'
 		'"That..." she gulps. "Would be a pretty good way of doing it..."'
 		*nl
 		'She tears herself away from your gaze and buries her face in her wine glass, taking big desperate gulps.'
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbation_talk':
 	'"How often do you masturbate <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Albina asks loudly, without even a shred of shame or decency.'
-	act 'Embarassed':
+	act 'Embarrassed':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Albina! That''s..." you stammer and trail off. You suddenly can''t look at her anymore and your face grows hot for reasons you try to rationalize is just the wine.'
 		'"Oh please. Don''t be such a prude <<$pcs_nickname>>," she rolls her eyes. "I know you do it, everyone does. I have to get off when I feel the urge or I just can''t concentrate. Even if you don''t do it <i>every</i> day, I know you do."'
@@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbation_talk':
 		act 'Rarely':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Rarely," you say with a shrug.'
-			'"Ha!" she chortles. "I call bullshit. There isn''t a girl our age who doesn''t schlick off on a regular basis. I know for a fact that even Katja does it."'
+			'"Ha!" she chortles. "I call bullshit. There isn''t a girl our age who doesn''t slack off on a regular basis. I know for a fact that even Katja does it."'
 			act 'No time':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"No, I''m serious! I would do it more often, but I just don''t have time," you sigh. "I''m too busy with other things to masturbate. By the time I get home, I''m practically asleep."'
@@ -412,13 +412,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbation_talk':
 			act 'No privacy':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I don''t have any privacy," you say dryly. "Unlike you, I''m not an only child in a big ass mansion. I share a room with my sister, have a little brother who doesn''t respect boundaries, and a mother who loses her mind at the slightest mention of sex! It''s extremely rare for nobody else to be home so I rub one out in peace."'
-				'"Excuses, excuses," she says while rolling her eyes. "Ever heard of a shower dildo? Or just a shower head? It''s not like your brother is using the bathroom while you shower, is he?"'
+				'"Excuses, excuses," she says while rolling her eyes. "Ever heard of a shower dildo? Or just a showerhead? It''s not like your brother is using the bathroom while you shower, is he?"'
 				if brothershowertalk > 0:
 					'Your face feels hot as you think about all the times you''ve let Kolka in while you were showering and quickly move to hide it by taking a gulp of wine. Fortunately, Albina takes your silence for a victory.'
 					'"You need to start thinking with your dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she giggles giddily as she takes another sloppy slurp of wine.'
 				else
 					'You frown, wanting to come up with an argument against her, but she has an undeniable point. Albina takes your silence for a victory.'
-					'"You need to start thinking with your dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she giggles giddily as she takes another sloppyof wine.'
+					'"You need to start thinking with your dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she giggles giddily as she takes another sip of wine.'
 				end
 				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
@@ -498,7 +498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'porn_talk':
 		act 'Vanilla porn':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Just vanilla stuff," you shrug. "Blowjob, some fucking, finish with a facial. That''s enough for me to get off."'
-			'"Boooooorriiiing!" she hollars at the top of her lungs.'
+			'"Boooooorriiiing!" she hollers at the top of her lungs.'
 			act 'Blush':
 				cla & *nl
 				'Your face flushes with heat unrelated to the wine.'
@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boob_size_talk':
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','large_tits'
 		else
 !!			$titsize = 'K cup'
-			'"Your tits are so fucking huge," Albina says while staring in wide eyed awe at your enormous breasts that hang above her. "How do you survive carrying those puppies around?"'
+			'"Your tits are so fucking huge," Albina says while staring in wide-eyed awe at your enormous breasts that hang above her. "How do you survive carrying those puppies around?"'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','huge_tits'
 		end
 	end
@@ -772,7 +772,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'commando_talk':
 				'"That''s why I wear thongs," she smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
 				act'Maybe I should switch':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"Maybe I should switch," you mumble. "That sounds like a good in between."'
+					'"Maybe I should switch," you mumble. "That sounds like a good in-between."'
 					'"Yeah... Lemme see dat ass..."'
 					'"Albina, I''m already commando most days. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
 					'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "Fuck... What were we talking about?"'
@@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk':
 		'"<i>Bitchy?!</i>" she sputters.'
 		'"Yeah, too bitchy."'
 		'"What the fuck is that supposed to mean?"'
-		'"You''d rip the balls off the first guy who called you a slut," you say matter of factly. "You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
+		'"You''d rip the balls off the first guy who called you a slut," you say matter-of-factly. "You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
 		'"...Fuck."'
 		'"See? Bitchy," you smile before smugly sipping your wine.'
 		'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back and takes a much bigger gulp.'
@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'With Albina right on your lap, you find your thoughts drifting to her mother. Her hair, her facial structure, she really is her mother''s daughter. It''s easy to tell where she got her good looks from.'
 		*nl
-		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you blurt out, autocompleting your thoughts before it finishes passing through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
+		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you blurt out, auto-completing your thoughts before it finishes passing through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
 		'"I <i>know!</i>" Albina whines beneath you. "I got ass for days, but she''s gots tits to match. Big bootyful bouncy fucking tits that give her cleavage in a motherfucking t-shirt. <i>And</i> a great ass! Life is so un-fucking-fair!"'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
@@ -929,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-					'Despite her supposed acceptance, it''s easy to tell that Albina is trying to be stoic, covering up for the still-open wounds inside her. Taking her head in your arm, you pull her close against your chest. She stiffens at your touch, but slowly loosens up, closing her eyes and nuzzling her face into your breasts. The two of you sit like this for a few minutes and when you finally release her, a real smile is spread across her face.'
+					'Despite her supposed acceptance, it''s easy to tell that Albina is trying to be stoic, covering up for the still-open wounds inside her. Taking her head in your arms, you pull her close against your chest. She stiffens at your touch, but slowly loosens up, closing her eyes and nuzzling her face into your breasts. The two of you sit like this for a few minutes and when you finally release her, a real smile is spread across her face.'
 					*nl
 					'No further words are necessary between you.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
@@ -973,7 +973,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbate_answer2':
 	act 'Showerhead':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"In the shower usually," you say. "Lots of privacy, can take my time, and I can use the showerhead. The pressure on my clit never fails to get me off."'
+		'"In the shower usually," you say. "Lots of privacy can take my time, and I can use the showerhead. The pressure on my clit never fails to get me off."'
 		'"A good showerhead is a girl''s best friend," she nods.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 	end
@@ -992,7 +992,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masturbate_answer2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I use a dildo too," you say. "But not on my ass. And I usually do it in the shower."'
 			'"Oh, you''ve got a shower dildo too?"'
-			'"Yeah. Showering is a good time for it. Privacy, can take my time, and I can use the showerhead to make it even better."'
+			'"Yeah. Showering is a good time for it. Privacy can take my time, and I can use the showerhead to make it even better."'
 			'"Mmmm..." She rubs her thighs together unconsciously. "I love that too. Except I-"'
 			'"Shove it up your ass, yeah yeah," you interrupt.'
 			'"Aww, you know me so well!" she drunkenly giggles.'
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
 		cla & *nl
 		'You hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
 		'"I''s sho itchy," you mumble around the glass.'
-		'"<i>Right?!</i>" she says, sitting up to look at you with wide exhasperated eyes before laying her head back down on your lap.'
+		'"<i>Right?!</i>" she says, sitting up to look at you with wide exasperated eyes before laying her head back down on your lap.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
@@ -1027,10 +1027,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Easy maintanence':
+	act 'Easy maintenance':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Mmmm," you hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
-		'"I''s defini''ly eashier tha ''ay," you mumble around the glass. "I have no patience for styling down there. Easier to shuck it all off. Don''t know why they all don''t do the same."'
+		'"I''s definitely easier tha ''ay," you mumble around the glass. "I have no patience for styling down there. Easier to shuck it all off. Don''t know why they all don''t do the same."'
 		'"Shaving is a pretty annoying chore," she agrees. "But that''s not what I mean. It''s just so <i>fucking itchy!</i>"'
 		'She scowls while looking between her legs, seemingly disgusted at the mere thought of hair growing between them.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
@@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer5':
 	
 	act 'Maybe I should try shaving':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Hmmm, you might have a point," you muse. "You look pretty sexy all clean shaven down there. Maybe I should try it some time," you mumble before taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside it.'
+		'"Hmmm, you might have a point," you muse. "You look pretty sexy all clean-shaven down there. Maybe I should try it sometime," you mumble before taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 end
@@ -1258,11 +1258,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_tits':
 	act 'It bothers me a lot':
 		cla & *nl
 		if pcs_cupsize <= 5:
-			'"Of course it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your flat chest. "I''m flatter than drywall, Albina. Guys like big boobs, things they can grab and play with. At the least, they want a view. I can''t even give them that. I''m practically a boy!"'
+			'"Of course, it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your flat chest. "I''m flatter than drywall, Albina. Guys like big boobs, things they can grab and play with. At the least, they want a view. I can''t even give them that. I''m practically a boy!"'
 		elseif pcs_cupsize <= 10:
-			'"Of course it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "I barely have any curve to me. I wouldn''t have cleavage if I wore a V-neck down to my stomach. I see the looks that other girls get that I don''t. Including you!"'
+			'"Of course, it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "I barely have any curve to me. I wouldn''t have cleavage if I wore a V-neck down to my stomach. I see the looks that other girls get that I don''t. Including you!"'
 		else
-			'"Of course it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "Big boobs draw all the attention. They''re so much hotter than small boobs."'
+			'"Of course, it bothers me!" you say uncomfortably while looking down at your modest chest. "Big boobs draw all the attention. They''re so much hotter than small boobs."'
 		end
 		'"It''s the worst when I''m with Irina and Bella," she mumbles, a furious blush spreading through her cheeks. "But even nerdy Natasha has bigger tits than us. It drives me crazy!"'
 		
@@ -1355,7 +1355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'like_your_boobs':
 		'"But big boobs are sexier!" she moans. "It''s not fair! I want big tits!"'
 		act 'Your boobs are perfect':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Well <i>I</i> think your boobs are perfect," you say above Albina''s loud tantruming. "You should learn to love them too."'
+			'"Well <i>I</i> think your boobs are perfect," you say above Albina''s loud tantrum. "You should learn to love them too."'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','mom_boobs'
@@ -1376,7 +1376,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mom_boobs':
 	act 'Is this because of your mom?':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/event/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stare at Albina for a moment, judging her exppression, peering deep into her psyche.'
+		'You stare at Albina for a moment, judging her expression, peering deep into her psyche.'
 		*nl
 		'"Is this because your mom has big boobs?" you blurt out.'
 		'"No!" she says immediately and her face grows even more red.'
@@ -1436,15 +1436,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boob_play':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/boob_play.jpg"></center>'
 			'You silently nod down at her and your nipple immediately tingles with pleasure as you feel her pierced tongue start working circles over it.'
-			'After a few seconds of this, she takes your breast into her mouth and starts sucking on it while continuing to lick your now rock hard nipple and using her free hand to keep squeezing your other breast. You moan softly in pleasure as she expertly teases you.'
+			'After a few seconds of this, she takes your breast into her mouth and starts sucking on it while continuing to lick your now rock-hard nipple and using her free hand to keep squeezing your other breast. You moan softly in pleasure as she expertly teases you.'
 			if pregchem >= 4380:
-				'As your pleasure builds, you feel something else and realise too late that Albina''s actions have caused you to start lactating! You''re unable to pull away before breast milk starts spurting out of you - and into her mouth.'
+				'As your pleasure builds, you feel something else and realize too late that Albina''s actions have caused you to start lactating! You''re unable to pull away before breast milk starts spurting out of you - and into her mouth.'
 				'You quickly pull away. "Oh my god! Albina, I''m so sorry! I didn''t mean to do that!" you say in a panic and feel your face turning red as Albina turns her head and spits your milk out.'
 				'"Calm down <<$pcs_nickname>>, it wasn''t your fault. I should''ve expected it considering your... condition," she replies before a grin appears on her lips. "It was actually kind of hot."'
 				'You still feel a little embarrassed as you untangle yourselves from each other and Albina cleans herself up before you both grab your glasses and snuggle down on the couch together.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event', 'end'
 			else
-				'You feel your pleasure slowly building as Albina continues playing with your nipple, but she abruptly, and rather teasingly, stops just as it''s getting good. You pull away and look down to see her smiling up at you. "Have fun?" you ask with a grin.'
+				'You feel your pleasure slowly building as Albina continues playing with your nipple, but she abruptly, and rather teasingly stops just as it''s getting good. You pull away and look down to see her smiling up at you. "Have fun?" you ask with a grin.'
 				'"That was so fucking hot!" she replies with a giggle. "Your tits are amazing! I could suck on them all day!"'
 				'"You can suck on these puppies whenever you feel like it," you giggle back before you untangle yourselves from each other and grab your glasses before snuggling down on the couch together.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'albina_wine_event', 'end'
@@ -1479,7 +1479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What the hell do you think you''re doing, young lady?!" Zoya asks before grabbing Albina by the ear and yanking her to her feet. "Drunk in the middle of the day?! And while <i>naked</i>?!"'
-		'"Ow! Ow ow ow ow ow!" Albina whines in pain while standing on her tip toes trying to escape her mother''s grasp. "We''re just having some fun! Lay off Mama!"'
+		'"Ow! Ow ow ow ow ow!" Albina whines in pain while standing on her tiptoes trying to escape her mother''s grasp. "We''re just having some fun! Lay off Mama!"'
 		'Zoya ignores her pleas. "I thought even you had better sense than this, Albina!"'
 		'"What are you gonna do? <i>Spank me</i>?" Albina glares back rebelliously. "Don''t be such a bitch!"'
 		'"What did you just say to me?!" Zoya sputters before she drags Albina off towards the stairs, howls of pain following. "I am your <i>mother</i>! I will not tolerate such disrespect!"' 

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedroom':
 		if month >=11 or month <=3:
             AlbinaQW['activities'] = rand(1,3)
             if AlbinaQW['activities'] = 1:
-                gt'albina_house_events','swim_winter1'
+                gt 'albina_house_events', 'swim_winter1'
             end
         end
 		if AlbinaQW['extra'] ! daystart: 
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dancing':
 			'"Eyes up here, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Anyway, if you want, I could teach you about stripping and pole dancing?"'
 			act 'No thanks': AlbinaQW['SportDay'] = daystart & gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			act 'Teach me stripping': gt 'albinahome', 'stripping'
-			act 'Teach me poledancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
+			act 'Teach me pole-dancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/train.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dancing':
 		'She smiles at you. "Well? Want me to teach you some things?"'
 		act 'No thanks': AlbinaQW['SportDay'] = daystart & gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		act 'Teach me stripping': gt 'albinahome', 'stripping'
-		act 'Teach me poledancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
+		act 'Teach me pole-dancing': gt 'albinahome', 'poledancing'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 		'After a few minutes, Albina moves on with her lesson. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you ready?" she asks and you nod your head. "Okay. Start off with a little teasing. Run your tongue around the tip while jerking them off."'
 		'You do as she says and she makes you look up at her. "Eye contact, <<$pcs_nickname>>. They like that." You nod at her and look her in the eye as you continue jerking off her fake cock. "Good. Now some guys like taking control, but only let them do that if it''s what you want. That''s enough teasing anyway. Now I want you take as much of the shaft into your mouth as you can."' 
 		*nl
-		'You obdiently take as much of the dildo into your mouth as you can without choking. "Good," Albina says. "Now start bobbing your head up and down; imagine that you''re sucking on a popsicle while swirling your tongue around the head. And keep using your hand."'
+		'You obediently take as much of the dildo into your mouth as you can without choking. "Good," Albina says. "Now start bobbing your head up and down; imagine that you''re sucking on a popsicle while swirling your tongue around the head. And keep using your hand."'
 		'You spend the next few minutes practicing on the dildo until your arm and jaw start to ache and you stop. You pop the dildo out of your mouth and look up at Albina, who smiles. "You''re a natural, <<$pcs_nickname>>! If I had a dick, then my cum would be all over your face by now."'
 		'You smile at the compliment. "Time for me to fuck you now," Albina says with a grin.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -833,7 +833,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_refuse':
 	'Albina smiles. "That''s okay, but if you want to do it with me or want some advice, then just ask. It''s best to get help from someone with... experience on the matter," she says with a grin.'
 	'You grin back. "I''ll be sure to ask the master buttslut for any of her wisdom."'
 	'She punches you in the arm. "Damn right you will."'
-	act 'Do something else' :gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
+	act 'Do something else': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
@@ -858,7 +858,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Finish' :gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 	end
 end
 

locations/alexandriaChat.qsrc

@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		elseif random_event = 28:
 			'"That sound strange. Romantic, but strange."'
 			'Aleksei tries to stop himself from showing a smug smile by hitting his cigarette, but it''s evident in his tone that he is failing.'
-			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I must admit. Dancing under the moonlight to the sound of <i>Por Una Cabeza</i> with a thousand year old dead princess is difficult to surpass."'
+			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I must admit. Dancing under the moonlight to the sound of <i>Por Una Cabeza</i> with a thousand-year-old dead princess is difficult to surpass."'
 
 		elseif random_event = 29:
 			'"So... If secret global conspiracies like The Council and The Veil are a reality, there must be others out there, like the MIB and Area 51."'
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 
 		elseif random_event = 30:
 			'"That sounds a lot like the A-Team."'
-			'Aleksei raises a hand in a dismissing gesture, only to stop halfway as realization crossing his eyes.'
+			'Aleksei raises a hand in a dismissing gesture, only to stop halfway as realization crosses his eyes.'
 			'"I suppose? I can see the similarities, <<$pcs_lastname>>. A Warband of brothers always on the road, enemies at our back and new horrors in the future. Obviously, it wasn''t as romantic as it sounds, but... my friends would have loved that comparison."'
 		end
 
@@ -228,9 +228,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
-			'"At its most basic, schools and arts are academic disciplines that help a wizard learn how to manipulate mana and cast spells. As all crafts in our world, most wizards need to specialize to attain any measure of power, truly multi-mathematical masters are unheard of."'
+			'"At its most basic, schools and arts are academic disciplines that help a wizard learn how to manipulate mana and cast spells. As with all crafts in our world, most wizards need to specialize to attain any measure of power, truly multi-mathematical masters are unheard of."'
 			'"Magic schools are general areas where magic seems to work without clear limits, and beyond some basic spells that form their core teachings, a wizard can pass hundreds of years exploring its applications. The schools are Air, Earth, Electric, Fire and Water"'
-			'"Arts, on the other hand, are more specialized, without the academic deepness and power than the schools'' possess. However, they are less mana exhausting, with an undetermined number of specializations. As a clarification, the term <i>minor</i> is a misnomer used by the uneducated. The arts are in itself powerful tools, and their lower mana cost compared with the schools make them more attractive to the less powerful of our brethren. As an example, your acquaintance that practices the flesh-crafting or body-modding art."'
+			'"Arts, on the other hand, are more specialized, without the academic deepness and power that the schools'' possess. However, they are less mana exhausting, with an undetermined number of specializations. As a clarification, the term <i>minor</i> is a misnomer used by the uneducated. The arts are in themselves powerful tools, and their lower mana cost compared with the schools makes them more attractive to the less powerful of our brethren. As an example, your acquaintance that practices the flesh-crafting or body-modding art."'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about magic':gt 'alexandriaChat',	'magic'
 
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'"The so-called mutants and psychics, if we must use a modern vulgarism, form an interesting phenomenon in The Council''s periphery. They are normally grouped under The Wizards'' chair, as they lack magical power or a unifying agenda."'
-			'"Mutants are in general any lifeform that has been altered through magical means that let them perceive beyond The Veil. You and I aren''t considered mutants because our magical talents give us full-wizard status. Those that lack magical talent fall into this category. Beyond that, there isn''t a unifying factor, as mutants can go from wretched beings that must be euthanized to erase their suffering, to the more... <i>fortunate</i> that win some magical enhancements, like your acquaintance, Gustav."'
+			'"Mutants are in general any lifeform that has been altered through magical means that let them perceive beyond The Veil. You and I aren''t considered mutants because our magical talents give us full-wizard status. Those, that lack magical talent fall into this category. Beyond that, there isn''t a unifying factor, as mutants can go from wretched beings that must be euthanized to erase their suffering, to the more... <i>fortunate</i> that win some magical enhancements, like your acquaintance, Gustav."'
 			'"Psychics, on the other hand, are the brown dwarfs of the magical world. Born with enough magic to see beyond The Veil, but lacking enough strength to manipulate mana, At best, they will have some minor magical talents, like seeing the dead, talking to goldfish or predicting the weather."'
 			'"Mutants and Psychics live in a nebulous zone on the edge of The Veil, their relationship with both sides varying in a case-by-case scenario. Most of them live relatively normal lives, beyond the interest of The Council. Of course, there are exceptions that, for one reason or another, end up entangled in magical matters, but they are the exceptions to the rule."'
 
@@ -287,8 +287,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'"The Veil is a global, self-sustained, delusional magical effect that hijacks the pattern recognization capacity on the mundanes'' brains, so the affected look for alternative explanations to any perceived magical event. As this method isn''t perfect, there is a veritable risk that continued exposure to magic will damage the mental health of any given observer. As a side note, The Veil only affects humans."'
-			'"The original proposal came from the High Sidhe around the 10th century, who wanted to <i>veil</i> their holdings from mundane influence, and promised magical knowledge and gifts to those that helped them. From this came a centuries-long collaboration between hundreds of high-level wizards, me and Rikudo included, that ended with decades-long rituals. Around 1350, The Veil was fully functional, and we began to see the unwanted side-effects."'
-			'"What was the cause? Nobody is sure, the most likely are that we somehow exceeded our goals or that somebody altered the ritual. The most likely candidates were the High Sidhe or Rikudo, but nobody is sure."'
+			'"The original proposal came from the High Sidhe around the 10th century, who wanted to <i>veil</i> their holdings from mundane influences and promised magical knowledge and gifts to those that helped them. From this came a centuries-long collaboration between hundreds of high-level wizards, me and Rikudo included, that ended with decades-long rituals. Around 1350, The Veil was fully functional, and we began to see the unwanted side-effects."'
+			'"What was the cause? Nobody is sure, the most likely cause is, that we somehow exceeded our goals or that somebody altered the ritual. The most likely candidates were the High Sidhe or Rikudo, but nobody is sure."'
 			'"And to end, the answer to the questions all youngsters ask; Yes, we can take down The Veil, but it would require a significant effort similar to its creation as a rushed job would have apocalyptic consequences and there isn''t political support in The Council for this idea. The reason for this is that most of us see The Veil as actually being a good thing. We, the wizards, can continue our quest for knowledge without the pestering masses interfering. As for them, look at what humanity has achieved after the European Renaissance. What new peaks will they reach now that we have distracted them with quantum theory?"'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about magic':gt 'alexandriaChat',	'magic'
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 
 				'Even with the evident derision in Aleksei''s words, you don''t feel any hostility against The Succubae.'
 
-				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, it''s obvious that I don''t exactly approve your new... <i>lifestyle</i>, but like others, Succubae are chained by their own needs, so I try to be sympathetic. No... What I don''t like is that most of your brethren seem to lose sight of the extraordinary powers they inherit in a quest for more... decadent experiences. You''re probably waiting for me to spill some of their secrets, but I''m not going to do that. Your trickster is doing the work for me, but I will tell you a tidbit."'
+				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, it''s obvious that I don''t exactly approve of your new... <i>lifestyle</i>, but like others, Succubae are chained by their own needs, so I try to be sympathetic. No... What I don''t like is that most of your brethren seem to lose sight of the extraordinary powers they inherit in a quest for more... decadent experiences. You''re probably waiting for me to spill some of their secrets, but I''m not going to do that. Your trickster is doing the work for me, but I will tell you a tidbit."'
 				'"Thanks to an ancient curse, The Succubae are chained to The High Sidhe reproductive cycle. That is what gives you an extraordinary leeway and let your brethren act like royalty. Some try to act on that like idealized <i>Faeric Ladies</i>, but most fail, enjoying the perks but ignoring any responsibility, and this is a potential danger, and opportunity, for you."'
 				'"You have suddenly entered an exclusive club, jumping the figurative line, and most Succubae will react to that, in diverse, sometimes dangerous ways. At least until they find the next shiny toy, leaving you in that nebulous place between where those on their way up meet those on their way down, a place of vast potential."'
 
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			'The mere mention of that name makes Aleksei grit his teeth, and his posture grows more tense.'
 			'"Rikudo... No name in this world can fill my heart with so much hate... The creator of The Talisman of Power, an item destined to give the <i>man</i> that acquired it, powers beyond the reach of the High Sidhe... Hmpf... I believed myself smarter than that supreme trickster, and in my hubris, ended up cursed to be a <i>woman</i> and have my prize forever beyond my reach."'
 			'Aleksei drags his cigarette, trying to calm himself, but the vitriol soon returns to his voice.'
-			'"So, you want information about him/her/it/them? There isn''t any... Rikudo is an enigma, the essence of chaos, one of the <i>old guard</i> appearing and disappearing randomly, wearing many masks, and helping or hindering us in aid of an unknown goal. Some call Rikudo the Keyser Soze of the magical world, and doubt its existence. Some youngsters even look at him as some kind of Promethean figure. You want my opinion <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
+			'"So, you want information about him/her/it/them? There isn''t any... Rikudo is an enigma, the essence of chaos, one of the <i>old guards</i> appearing and disappearing randomly, wearing many masks, and helping or hindering us in aid of an unknown goal. Some call Rikudo the Keyser Soze of the magical world and doubt its existence. Some youngsters even look at him as some kind of Promethean figure. You want my opinion <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 			'He then looks at you fiercely, making you shiver under his gaze.'
 			'"Rikudo is real! Very real. I have met <i>HIM</i>, been tricked by <i>HER</i>, been cursed by <i>IT</i> and even killed a pair of <i>THEM</i>. There will be a reckoning someday and Rikudo''s name will be erased by my hand, but until that time, if you hear about Rikudo, just run and pray that you don''t end up entangled in another of Rikudo''s mad schemes."'
 
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			'"Let''s begin with some basic information <<$pcs_lastname>>. Reinhold is a high-level agent for The Council, under the aegis of The Wizards'' chair, who has been lucky enough to claim oversight over your case. He isn''t only a master of the Time art, but a hero in every definition of the term, as he has fought against forces beyond the mouth of madness and won. We made the same oaths to protect the inhabitants of this world, and even if we don''t see them in the same light, he has won my respect."'
 			'Aleksei bends slightly towards you, with a conspiratory smile.'
 			'"And here is the part where I take away the blindfold from your eyes and explain some details. Reinhold is playing with your welfare. His intentions maybe altruistic, but most people will only see him trying to disrupt The Council''s status quo in favor of The Wizards'' chair. The problem? Reinhold has decided on a hands-off approach where any magical knowledge can only be filtered down through his apprentice, limiting your growth, and making you... less desirable to the powers-that-be. That plan has imploded, but what hasn''t changed is that you are mostly alone, as nobody is going to risk a confrontation to save you from any mismatch you can walk uninformed."'
-			'After saying this, he reclines in his chair, letting smoke drift from his nostrils like an ancient dragon.'
+			'After saying this, he reclines in his chair, letting the smoke drift from his nostrils like an ancient dragon.'
 			'"What do you think about your <i>handler''s</i> actions <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			'Sarcasm drips from his voice as Aleksei lets you know his feelings for Tatiana.'
 			'"I suppose that we can lose some semi-valuable minutes talking about your <i>teacher</i>. She is Reinhold''s apprentice, older than she looks, a flesh crafter and a trickster, or... pardon me... a <i>body modding wizard</i> and <i>prankster</i>... and now we can jump to a more in-depth analysis."'
 			'Aleksei pauses to put the now burned-out cigarette in an ashtray, and lights another before continuing.'
-			'"That woman''s limited magical potential makes her a little bird under the wing of a bigger one, and smart enough to not make waves so more powerful predators evade her for fear of Reinhold''s retribution, but she is ambitious and wants more. Her plan to use her meretrix arts to entice Reinhold and use him for her own advancement has failed, but now she has another opportunity in you. That woman is leeching your magical power to raise her own at the same time. She latches to your case, waiting for an opportunity to advance in status. Under other circumstances, I would applaud her ambition, but she is a trickster, and they don''t understand anything about loyalty or morals. Her betrayal is inevitable, so remember to keep your friends close and her closer."'
+			'"That woman''s limited magical potential makes her a little bird under the wing of a bigger one, and smart enough to not make waves so more powerful predators evade her for fear of Reinhold''s retribution, but she is ambitious and wants more. Her plan to use her charms to entice Reinhold and use him for her own advancement has failed, but now she has another opportunity in you. That woman is leeching your magical power to raise her own at the same time. She latches to your case, waiting for an opportunity to advance in status. Under other circumstances, I would applaud her ambition, but she is a trickster, and they don''t understand anything about loyalty or morals. Her betrayal is inevitable, so remember to keep your friends close and her closer."'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
 
@@ -411,8 +411,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, you must understand this. Civilizations have risen and crumbled, history made and forgotten, but The Council has existed in one form or another under the High Sidhe leadership from as early as the last glacial period. They have rewritten history, altered landscapes and are behind the greatest lie ever created. Impressive feats for an organization to which the average wizard only gives lip service."'
 			'Aleksei reclines in his chair and looks to the ceiling before continuing.'
-			'"The Council is supposed to be a democratic quorum for the magically gifted, a place to settle disputes without bloodshed and a bridle for the unruly horse that is the standard wizard. It''s divided into Chairs that represent and care for the needs of specific magical subspecies, the most promiment The High Sidhe, <i>primus inter pares</i> with the right to veto, but largely uncaring about political affairs. The Succubae happily try to reign in their place wit great opposition from The Wizards, the most numerous group. In short terms, The Council is the governing body of the magical world."'
-			'He sighs. "I may sound bitter, but my tenure with them wasn''t happy. Like all governments, The Council is a cesspool of drama and backroom deals, a place for the undistinguished penpushers of our society to feel important. My job was going from crisis to crisis without help or acknowledgement, siphoning away my resources and time from more worthy undertakings. In the end, I quit without remorse."'
+			'"The Council is supposed to be a democratic quorum for the magically gifted, a place to settle disputes without bloodshed and a bridle for the unruly horse that is the standard wizard. It''s divided into Chairs that represent and care for the needs of specific magical subspecies, the most prominent The High Sidhe, <i>primus inter pares</i> with the right to veto, but largely uncaring about political affairs. The Succubae happily try to reign in their place with great opposition from The Wizards, the most numerous group. In short terms, The Council is the governing body of the magical world."'
+			'He sighs. "I may sound bitter, but my tenure with them wasn''t happy. Like all governments, The Council is a cesspool of drama and backroom deals, a place for the undistinguished penpushers of our society to feel important. My job was going from crisis to crisis without help or acknowledgment, siphoning away my resources and time from more worthy undertakings. In the end, I quit without remorse."'
 			'"In general, I must say that the common wizard doesn''t care or even give any thought about their decisions, and beyond maintaining The Veil or stopping Existential Threats, The Council tends to delegate any policing action to the local magical or mundane authority. This is something that you youngsters must understand, The Council WILL NOT intervene to save the miscreants from any lynching mob triggered by their foolishness, not even you <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
@@ -427,16 +427,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 			gs 'stat'
 			if succubusQW > 4:
 				'"Your <i>Queen</i>? Conqueror of high and low beds? You want to know about your clique''s role model?"'
-				'You lick your dry lips at the word <i>Queen</i>, your instinct telling you that this title would be better attached at your name, and whatever Aleksei can tell you about The Lilith could be useful to take it for your own.'
+				'You lick your dry lips at the word <i>Queen</i>, your instinct telling you that this title would be better attached to your name, and whatever Aleksei can tell you about The Lilith could be useful to take it for your own.'
 
 			else
 				'"Ah yes, the self-proclaimed <i>Queen</i> of the Succubae, conqueror of high and low beds. Why can''t you youngsters think with something above your waist?"'
 				'You lick your dry lips as Aleksei''s words trigger your memories of the alien woman, something in the back of your head wanting to know everything about the Faeric lady.'
 			end
 
-			'He sighs. "Well, the first thing you must to know is how seriously she takes her duties in The Council, as that name is a joke. Somebody began to use it around two hundred years ago and it stuck. Childishly, I assume, because it sounds somewhat <i>mystical</i> to the bunch of hicks that run towards her so-called <i>court</i> but let''s be merciful. It''s evident that trying to reign over her notoriously unruly sisterhood is a hard job, so she passes the days <i>socializing</i> and <i>entertaining</i> The High Sidhe, milking their influence and trying to convince them to break the chains that their ancestors, in all their wisdom, imposed on the Succubae."'
+			'He sighs. "Well, the first thing you must know is how seriously she takes her duties in The Council, as that name is a joke. Somebody began to use it around two hundred years ago and it stuck. Childishly, I assume, because it sounds somewhat <i>mystical</i> to the bunch of hicks that run towards her so-called <i>court</i> but let''s be merciful. It''s evident that trying to reign over her notoriously unruly sisterhood is a hard job, so she passes the days <i>socializing</i> and <i>entertaining</i> The High Sidhe, milking their influence and trying to convince them to break the chains that their ancestors, in all their wisdom, imposed on the Succubae."'
 			'Woah, that sounds bitter, and it seems that he hasn''t stopped.'
-			'"So now I explain where she offended me on a personal level. During my tenure, she was constantly dismissing my efforts, ignoring Rikudo''s threat and loading me with the jobs that nobody seemed to like. That I can understand, in the sort of backstabbing atmosphere The Council seems to promote. My problem is that she dismissed my curse, as that <i>name</i>... Alexandria... was her idea!"'
+			'"So now I explain where she offended me on a personal level. During my tenure, she was constantly dismissing my efforts, ignoring Rikudo''s threat and loading me with jobs that nobody seemed to like. That I can understand, in the sort of backstabbing atmosphere The Council seems to promote. My problem is that she dismissed my curse, as that <i>name</i>... Alexandria... was her idea!"'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
 
@@ -450,9 +450,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'people':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, <i>Est potentia ex testamento</i>, was the motto from the honorably disbandment <i>Council Army Forces</i>, a force that i have the privilege to command."'
-				'Aleksei smile at those words, obviously they mean much for him, and during a long moment, he looks to the ceiling lost in his thoughts, before continuing.'
+				'Aleksei smile at those words obviously, they mean much to him, and during a long moment, he looks to the ceiling lost in his thoughts, before continuing.'
 				'"I will not explain in deep all the details, <<$pcs_lastname>>, but what I will give you is this: We were the iron fist of The Council, enforcers of their will, and for a thousand years, the <i>Creme de la creme</i> of the world military forces. We used all to win, martial training, the last technology, and the more powerful magics all bend to our will to spill the blood of our enemies. I will not taint our history with lies, we did some of the most atrocious war crimes in the name of the uncaring High Sidhe, but thanks to us, today there are a lot fewer monsters waiting in the shadows of the world."'
-				'He takes a deep drag from his cigarette, a proud smirk in his lips that soon turns in a gesture of absolute ruthlessness.'
+				'He takes a deep drag from his cigarette, a proud smirk on his lips that soon turns into a gesture of absolute ruthlessness.'
 				'"I must say <<$pcs_lastname>>, that that girl, has committed a serious mistake taking our legacy in vain, as even now, decades after our disbandment, those words - <i>Est potentia ex testamento</i> - carry a lot of weight in our corner of the world."'
 
 				act 'Continue talking about people':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'people'
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'electric1':
 
 	else
 		'"Yes, I will teach you, but remember that this is a <i>Quid pro quo</i> thing, so don''t make me regret it."'
-		'Aleksei opens a drawer and pulls out some papers that he silently reads before sighing in exasperation and look at you.'
+		'Aleksei opens a drawer and pulls out some papers that he silently reads before sighing in exasperation and looking at you.'
 	end
 
 	'"Reinhold had the initiative to send some interesting data about your training <<$pcs_lastname>>. I don''t know why he tolerates this nonsense as the teaching technique of his ex-apprentice is obviously sub-par. That or they are actively stalling your growth, so you are chained to them. Of course, in the likely event that both theories are true, you are fortunate to have found me."'
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'electric3':
 		
 		'Aleksei is silent at your question, looking at you with curiosity "You dodn''t know... Isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 		'"Know what? Is there a problem?"'
-		'An amused smirk creeps into Aleksei face as he deign to answer "<<$pcs_lastname>>, that depend on your point of view at the prospect of being pregnant."'
+		'An amused smirk creeps into Aleksei''s face as he deigns to answer "<<$pcs_lastname>>, that depends on your point of view at the prospect of being pregnant."'
 		'You take a moment to process those words. Are you really with child? Well... it seems that you must ask for a medical appointment.'
 		
 		act 'Talk about other things': thinkpreg = 1 & knowpreg = 1 & minut += 5 & gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -650,8 +650,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
         gs 'stat'
         '<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
-        '"It''s seems that Mr.Kudashov, has put it in a security box and... well... sold the key to a woman called Ana, and... she had challenged me for it possession..."'
-        'You grimace as those words fill the room, and a suddenly very tense Aleksei, raise an eyelid. The next moments lengthening as you can feel the wizard''s displeasure.'
+        '"It''s seems that Mr.Kudashov, has put it in a security box and... well... sold the key to a woman called Ana, and... she had challenged me for its possession..."'
+        'You grimace as those words fill the room, and a suddenly very tense Aleksei, raises an eyelid. The next moments lengthen as you can feel the wizard''s displeasure.'
         '"Interesting, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please, explain to me in detail what happened."'
         'You... follow with your <i>encounter</i> with Filipp Kudashov, his double cross, and finally Ana''s call. During it, he takes out a tablet and seems to look for something, and even when you end your tale, he takes some minutes loss in... whatever he is doing.'
         '"Ehm... what now?"'
@@ -668,9 +668,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/saber.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you deliver those words, Aleksei put a package over his desk, and begin to open it. Inside, shrouded in red cloth, is the sword.'
 		'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>, let''s talk about this sword, that that little nuisance has sent me with a detailed and <i>colurfull</i> description of your actions."'
-		'You freeze, as Aleksei fix his gaze into yours... He seems <i>superficially</i> calm, but if eyes are a window to the soul... Well... It has been good to know you <<$pcs_nickname>>.'
-		'"Let''s be clear <<$pcs_lastname>>. I am old, I know betrayal in all forms and colors, and even with that, it always surprises me human pettiness... It seems that putting my confidence in you, was... unwise. In time you will help me to find those who are behind this travesty, but until then, our <i>study methodology</i> must be re-evaluated."'
-		'He then, stand up and walking menacingly behind you... put his hands over your shoulders... and let fall into your hands some leather straps...'
+		'You freeze, as Aleksei fixes his gaze into yours... He seems <i>superficially</i> calm, but if eyes are a window to the soul... Well... It has been good to know you <<$pcs_nickname>>.'
+		'"Let''s be clear <<$pcs_lastname>>. I am old, I know betrayal in all forms and colors, and even with that, it always surprises me, human pettiness... It seems that putting my confidence in you was... unwise. In time you will help me to find those who are behind this travesty, but until then, our <i>study methodology</i> must be re-evaluated."'
+		'He then, stands up and walks menacingly behind you... put his hands over your shoulders... and let fall into your hands some leather straps...'
 		'"Let''s start now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 
 		act 'There is no escape': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'grumpy2'
@@ -683,9 +683,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 		'As you deliver those words, Aleksei put a package over his desk, and begin to open it. Inside, shrouded in red cloth, is the sword.'
 		'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>, let''s talk about this sword, that that little nuisance has sent me with a detailed and <i>colurfull</i> description of your actions."'
 		'You can only frown in silence at the item, that has given you so many troubles, from your silent reaction, Aleksei, take advantage dragging into his cigar and continuing.'
-		'"This, <<$pcs_lastname>>, is war. Let me explain something to you, people like me are just plain simple too powerful. When there is some kind of irreparable rift between parties, we can''t just sort this out with a backstreet brawl... too much collateral damage... That is a reason for The Council continued existence, but not all of us accept their arbitration... and some of the most imaginative of our brethren, resort to these acts of pettiness to settle any perceived grievance."'
+		'"This, <<$pcs_lastname>>, is war. Let me explain something to you, people like me are just plain simply too powerful. When there is some kind of irreparable rift between parties, we can''t just sort this out with a backstreet brawl... too much collateral damage... That is a reason for The Council continued existence, but not all of us accept their arbitration... and some of the most imaginative of our brethren, resort to these acts of pettiness to settle any perceived grievance."'
 		'"Ok... so... what now?"'
-		'Alex rises from his chair and paces up and down around the room, seemingly lost in his thought before turning towards you and give an exasperated sigh.'
+		'Alex rises from his chair and paces up and down around the room, seemingly lost in his thought before turning towards you and giving an exasperated sigh.'
 		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -693,7 +693,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Now <<$pcs_lastname>>, i must search the miasma that are my so-called <i>enemies</i>, looking for the idiot that has decided to waste our precious time on this childish <i>attack</i>."'
+			'"Now <<$pcs_lastname>>, I must search the miasma that are my so-called <i>enemies</i>, looking for the idiot that has decided to waste our precious time on this childish <i>attack</i>."'
 			'"You don''t have an idea of who can be behind this?"'
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, that isn''t the question, no, take this lesson to heart... When you are as old and powerful as I am, the problem is to crib through the cesspit of incompetence that rise regularly against you... is not that I don''t have an idea about who is behind this, no... my problem is that I have, <i>too many ideas</i>, but... let''s leave this for later, we must talk about your actions aftermatch."'
 			'Aleksei takes a long drag from his cigar, to calm himself before continuing.'
@@ -718,10 +718,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></center>'
-				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, at risk to sound ill-bred, I want to ask you a question... Why you decided to lie with the little nuisance?"'
-				'The air freeze as he says those words, and you try to find a satisfactory answer, to the question asked by the irascible wizard. Fortunately, before you can mess this a little more, Aleksei, choose to throw you a bone.'
+				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, at risk of sounding ill-bred, I want to ask you a question... Why you decided to lie with the little nuisance?"'
+				'The air freezes as he says those words, and you try to find a satisfactory answer, to the question asked by the irascible wizard. Fortunately, before you can mess this a little more, Aleksei, choose to throw you a bone.'
 				'"Ehm... <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you find my question... <i>inpropper</i>... is not like I want to be privy of your <i>affairs</i>, but that woman is an agent for, at the moment, a unknow enemy, whose objectives are at best nebulous."'
-				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
+				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, first teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell, and then helping you to take away the idea of another dalliance with that <i>woman</i>."'
 
 				act 'Follow your master': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'nice2'
@@ -734,8 +734,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></center>'
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, at risk to sound ill-bred, I want to ask you a question... Why you didn''t lie with the little nuisance?"'
 				'You look confused at the irascible wizard. "I was supposed to do it?" Aleksei locks his eyes on yours, as he stands there letting the cigar burn away.'
-				'"Of course no! <<$pcs_lastname>> you did the correct! I just thought that..." He stops in his track and seems to consider his answer before continuing. "Well <<$pcs_lastname>>, it doesn''t matters, is evident that as my apprentice you have the <i>Gravitas</i>, to do the correct and ignore the siren''s call from some loose moral woman, that obviously is working for one of my so-called enemies."'
-				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and lead you outside his home... towards a waiting limousine?'
+				'"Of course no! <<$pcs_lastname>> you did the correct! I just thought that..." He stops in his tracks and seems to consider his answer before continuing. "Well <<$pcs_lastname>>, it doesn''t matter, is evident that as my apprentice you have the <i>Gravitas</i>, to do the correct and ignore the siren''s call from some loose moral woman, that obviously is working for one of my so-called enemies."'
+				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and lead you outside his home... towards a waiting limousine?'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell, but first... I think a little shopping is necessary."'
 
 				act 'Mon Cheri?!':
@@ -743,8 +743,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 					minut += 13
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/boutique/butik.jpg"></center>' 
-					'A silent and somewhat sullen Aleksei, take you in the limousine towards the city center and a... very high class <i>women</i>''s clothes boutique, the sort, that entertain the shoppers with champagne and have shoes in the one hundred thousands rubles rank.'
-					'"I admit, <<$pcs_lastname>>, that I wasn''t expecting for me to come to this establishment, but... you need a recompense, and sadly, my curse acting through the <i>aprentice link</i>, will, without doubt, end in a more <i>girly</i> outcome so... we will need to ride the wave and find something of good taste that you can wear, without embarrassing both of us."'
+					'A silent and somewhat sullen Aleksei, take you in the limousine towards the city center and a... very high class <i>women</i>''s clothes boutique, the sort, that entertain the shoppers with champagne and have shoes in the one hundred thousand rubles rank.'
+					'"I admit, <<$pcs_lastname>>, that I wasn''t expecting for me to come to this establishment, but... you need a recompense, and sadly, my curse acting through the <i>apprentice link</i>, will, without doubt, end in a more <i>girly</i> outcome so... we will need to ride the wave and find something of good taste that you can wear, without embarrassing both of us."'
 					'Saying this, he made a gesture, and the boutique''s staff surge towards you.'
 
 					act 'Try on the gowns the retainers bring to you':
@@ -756,8 +756,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria.jpg"></center>'
 						if loop_counter = 300:
-							'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactlly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody call him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glade that make the staff blanch... promptly making them to put all their attention into you, but you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear. This seems to amuse Aleksei - and fright the shop''s staff - that take you back towards the limousine.'
-							'"Sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>, that was a waste of our valuable time, that could have been used for more worthy endeavours... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
+							'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff''s attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody calls him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glade that makes the staff blanch... promptly making them put all their attention on you, but you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear. This seems to amuse Aleksei - and fright the shop''s staff - that takes you back towards the limousine.'
+							'"Sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>, that was a waste of our valuable time, that could have been used for more worthy endeavors... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
 							'The rest of the trip towards his home, go without problems, and when you arrive, Aleksei don''t lose time in taking you to his room.'
 						else
 							numrand = rand(1, 100)
@@ -777,8 +777,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 							end
 						end
 
-						'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactlly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody call him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glade that make the staff blanch... promptly making them to put all their attention into you, until you find a gown that seem to <i>complement your eyes</i>, an somewhat quicklly - but extremely politely - Aleksei and you are accompanied towards the limusine.'
-						'"That was... interesting <<$pcs_lastname>>, but sadlly a necesity, as is inescapable that you, as my aprentice, will require to attempt certain societal gatherings where... so-called <i>masters</i> will judge you based onlly on your apparence... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
+						'You spend the next 30 minutes trying on various gowns, with the full complement of the shop''s staff fuzzing all over you, and making you feel like a <i>pretty princess</i>. Aleksei on his part seems somewhat mortified at the staff''s attention, that doesn''t seem to understand what exactly is your relationship, and don''t know how to treat him. That attention is cut short after somebody calls him... <i>Miss</i>, triggering a seething glare that makes the staff blanch... promptly making them put all their attention on you until you find a gown that seems to <i>complement your eyes</i>, an somewhat quickly - but extremely polite - Aleksei and you are accompanied towards the limousine.'
+						'"That was... interesting <<$pcs_lastname>>, but sadly a necessity, as is inescapable that you, as my apprentice, will be required to attempt certain societal gatherings where... so-called <i>masters</i> will judge you based only on your appearance... sigh... let get that for late and indulge us on something more worthy of our time."'
 						'The rest of the trip towards his home, go without problems, and when you arrive, Aleksei don''t lose time in taking you to his room.'
 
 						act 'Continue':	minut += 13 & gt 'alexandriaSex', 'nice2'
@@ -791,7 +791,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell."'
-				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
+				'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'nice2'
         
@@ -802,7 +802,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Is evident, that I must to up your training <<$pcs_lastname>>, teaching you the secrets of the Lighting spell."'
-			    'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands in your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
+			    'Aleksei, then walk towards you, put his hands on your shoulders, and push you towards the studio''s exit.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaSex', 'grumpy2'
 			end  
@@ -817,8 +817,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sword':
 	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
 		'"Hum... I haven''t made much progress to recover it."'
-		'Aleksei just raise an eyebrow, looking nonplussed, and answer somewhat drilly...'
-		'"And... What is impeding you to find this child <<$pcs_lastname>>? Sigh... She will be around the city center during the weekdays, and it''s challenge will be somewhat physical, so... is better if you dress properlly."'
+		'Aleksei just raises an eyebrow, looking nonplussed, and answers somewhat drily...'
+		'"And... What is impeding you to find this child <<$pcs_lastname>>? Sigh... She will be around the city center during the weekdays, and it''s challenge will be somewhat physical, so... is better if you dress properly."'
 		'You shut up, is better if you look for Ana, you don''t know how much time you have, and... Aleksei won''t take that well if you procrastinate.'
 		
 		act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tractatus':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><table><tr><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/tractatus.jpg"></tr></td></table></center>'
 	'Aleksei is already sitting in his chair in the studio, some kind of leatherbound book on his lap. "I find myself in a conundrum <<$pcs_lastname>>, as now you are irretrievably tangled in this childish feud. If you were one of my agents, I would have spirited you away from the current situation, but, alas, is evident that even if The Council isn''t involved in the current mess, they are going to limit any reasonable option, so... I must lend this to you."'
-	'Aleksei pass you the text, that now you realize isn''t a book. In fact, is a set of yellowish sheets, sewn together, written elegantly in... <i>Latin</i>? and keep in some kind of leather portfolio. The set seems <i>handcrafted</i> and <i>centuries</i> old, but well preserved, with a tingle of magic.'
+	'Aleksei passes you the text, that now you realize isn''t a book. In fact, is a set of yellowish sheets, sewn together, written elegantly in... <i>Latin</i>? and keep in some kind of leather portfolio. The set seems <i>handcrafted</i> and <i>centuries</i> old, but well preserved, with a tingle of magic.'
 	'"This - written by me - <i>tractatus</i>, is and advanced <i>discourse</i> on unarmed combat. I am not sure when exactly it turned magical, but that is the nature of magic... unpredictable. It''s primary power, is that in exchange for some mana, it will train your unarmed combat skills without the need to do the physical part, letting you grow - let''s hope - in the security of your home... additionally, you don''t need to know Latin to understand it. It''s limitation is somewhat confusing, the number of <i>lessons</i> are variable but seems related to your performance on any task related to me. I assume that this last adventure will have granted you some uses."'
 
 	act 'Continue': gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'

locations/alexandriaEv.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 		'At that moment the front door opens, and Alexandria get out, locking her gaze with Reinhold, and suddenly, the air around you feel cold and heavy with tension.'
 		'"There is a problem? Ehm... Reinhold isn''t it?"'
 		'The mentioned, walk slowly until he is in front of you and to the right, with his left hand slightly raised in a protective(possessive?) gesture in front of you.'
-		'"Yes, Councilor, and I am here to talk with <<$pcs_firstname>> in an official matter, so... if you excuse us."'
+		'"Yes, Councilor and I am here to talk with <<$pcs_firstname>> in an official matter, so... if you excuse us."'
 		'Alexandria look around the street, looking for something, before returning her gaze towards you two, a purple flash flicking through her eyes, and Reinhold quickly put himself between the two of you. There is a sudden flash, and you blink surprised as something appears on Reinhold''s hand. The item seems to flick around your visual field, in some sort of focused(and powerful) Haste spell... It''s a gun! Fuck! Are they going to fight here?!'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'hard'
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/thelilith/thelilith.jpg"></center>'
 				'You must stop this, they are two high-level wizards in the middle of the street, go figure the level of damage, so there is only a thing you can do... stand before Reinhold, look him into the eyes and...'
 				'"Ok Reinhold, you better go."'
-				'Reinhold looks like he has just received a backhanded blow and Alexandria look at you with renewed interest and during a moment there is silence, before Reinhold talk again.'
+				'Reinhold looks like he has just received a backhanded blow and Alexandria looks at you with renewed interest and during a moment there is silence before Reinhold talks again.'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t think is a good idea, so please, listen to me and..."'
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever seen, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Reinhold, It''s seems that your protege''s words sound truer than you seem to imagine, as our presence here attest."'
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				pcs_willpwr += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Aftermatch':gt'alexandriaEv','interview2'
+				act 'Aftermatch':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview2'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Ask Reinhold to leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 
 			if rand(1,100) < pcs_persuas:
 				npc_rel['A241'] +=2
-				'You must stop this, they are two high-level wizards in the middle of the street, go figure the level of damage, so there is only a thing you can do... stand between the two, look into their eyes and...'
+				'You must stop this, they are two high-level wizards in the middle of the street, go figure the level of damage, so there is only one thing you can do... stand between the two, look into their eyes and...'
 				'"Ok you two stops right now! I don''t care who do you think you are, this is a public place, so stop the cock wielding contest!"'
 				'The two of them seem to ignore your words, but after some tense heartbeats, they slowly turn towards you. Reinhold seems intrigued at your words and Alexandria... is smiling? At least her next words sound... amused?'
 				'"And <<$pcs_lastname>> how do you think, we must resolve..."'
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Aftermatch':gt'alexandriaEv','interview2'
+			act 'Aftermatch':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview2'
 		end
 
 		act 'Wait for a resolution':
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Aftermatch':gt'alexandriaEv','interview2'
+			act 'Aftermatch':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act '"A man?"':gt'alexandriaEv','interview3'
+			act '"A man?"':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview3'
 		end
 
 		act 'Defend Tatiana':
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act '"A man?"':gt'alexandriaEv','interview3'
+			act '"A man?"':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview3'
 		end
 
 		act 'Let her rant':
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview2':
 			minut += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act '"A man?"':gt'alexandriaEv','interview3'
+			act '"A man?"':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview3'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+			act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 		end
 	else
 		if succubusQW = 5:
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+				act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 			end
 		else
 			act '"That is horrible!"':
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+				act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 			end
 
 			act '"Hm?"':
@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 				'Then, he takes a drag from his cigarette, and wait for you to digest this explanation, before tilting his head like he was hearing something.'
 				'"Hm... Interesting. <<$pcs_lastname>> we have company."'
 
-				act 'End the interview':gt'alexandriaEv','interview4'
+				act 'End the interview':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'interview4'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview4':
 		pcs_mood += 50
 		'Aleksei, begin to concentrate on a spell, charging the room with static and making your hair stand, before a purple flash fills the room and something magical exit it.'
 		'"Hm... That will teach her a lesson <<$pcs_lastname>>, but..." Aleksei turns towards you with a half-smile, and intrigued eyes "I think that you must go and see if your <i>friend</i> is safe, we will continue our talks later."'
-		'He then stands, and signal towards the door, waiting for you to follow, and as you leave the room towards the exit, Aleksei decides to say something.'
+		'He then stands, and signals towards the door, waiting for you to follow, and as you leave the room towards the exit, Aleksei decides to say something.'
 		'"I must admit, that this has ended better than I expected <<$pcs_lastname>>, is my impression that you have the potential to master the high arts, and... even taking into consideration, my personal interest on you, I''m tempted to offer you something."'
 		'Aleksei put out the cigarette in an ashtray, the next words exiting somewhat excited from his mouth.'
 		'"I offer you the possibility of an apprenticeship under my wing. This will protect you, partially from The Council and Reinhold interests, but, I expect respect and diligence, so... until the next time and remember, my door is open only on daily hours."'
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview4':
 		'"You told her that? And she confirmed it? Because I don''t have much information about..." You blink surprised at her lack of concern, which prompts her to sigh and change the theme. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, when I talked about Reinhold and The Council, I was... well, <i>having fun at your expense</i>. But the truth is that you must be a little wary of their intentions. I wanted to win some time before talking to Reinhold and prevent, that some red-lipped succubus charmed you away to some gilded cage, and for Alexandria... Look, is my fault ok? I wasn''t expecting for you to run after her, but <<$pcs_nickname>>, you must understand that she is the equivalent of a walking magical WMD. She can impose terms at The Council, and ending on her grasp... Well, that can trigger all sort of bad scenarios with you in the middle, something that Reinhold is trying to prevent."'
 		'After this explanation, that you don''t know if belive, Tatiana turn back and return to her hideout, leaving you alone to digest the new situation.'
 
-		act 'Continue':gt'city_suburbs','start'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'city_suburbs', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -404,17 +404,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'filipp':
 			'"Ohh! The sword! yeah! That horrible situation with the police! Ehm... I will need some minutes to look where it is stored, but in the meantime, you can fill into some minor <i>red tape</i>!"'
 			'He winks at you as he pronounces the words <i>red tape</i>, before reclining back into his chair, and open slightly his legs so you can have a perfect line of sight, of his corduroy covered crotch. To make the situation even more obvious, he picks a cup with the words <i>to bribe or not to bribe</i>'
 
-			act 'Get out of here':gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+			act 'Get out of here':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 
-			act 'Kneel': gt'alexandriaEv','kneel'
+			act 'Kneel': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'kneel'
 
 			act '"Mr. Aleksei already paid you"': gt'alexandriaEv', 'persufilipp'
 
 			if money >= 5000:
-				act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt'alexandriaEv','contribution'
+				act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'contribution'
 			end
 			if succubusQW > 4:
-				act 'Call your True Face': gt'alexandriaEv','succubribe'
+				act 'Call your True Face': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'succubribe'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kneel':
 		'Kneeling, you roll your eyes and decide to finish this quickly and without fuss, so, you take out his <i>tool</i>... and gasp... this guy is <i>big</i>, easily 25cm! and he doesn''t seemed in full swing!'
 		'"Impressed Ms.Assistant? I call it <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot</i> and it keeps me happy! So, I supposed that is a good moment to practice the skills learned, under Mr.Aleksei...  <i>service</i>."'
 		'You content yourself, with the knowledge, that probably Aleksei will kill this guy, in the meantime, you begin to lick his <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot</i>, carefully going from its base to the tip, giving him little laps to the head, before returning down, all of it accompanied with your hands massaging his balls.'
-		'"Good technique Ms.Assistant! But now... i think you need to take it more <i>deep</i>."'
+		'"Good technique Ms.Assistant! But now... I think you need to take it more <i>deep</i>."'
 		'You open your mouth and put the now very turgid <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot''s</i> head. It''s BIG! but you manage to suck the humongous thing, at the same time, you accompany the blowjob with some hand play. On his part, Mr.Kudashov seems to enjoy your job and grab himself to his chair, slightly raising his hips, as you, quickly lead him to climax."'
 		'"Yes! Yes! Ms.Assistant! You have a great... GRAHH! YEAH!!!!!"'
 		'Suddenly, The jerk grabs your head and takes away <i>Sir-Lance-A-Lot''s</i>, so his semen can fly all over your face. Mr.Kudashow''s seems utterly satisfied with your new <i>outlook</i>, and after resting some moments, pass you a post-it with a number.'
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kneel':
 		'Before you can protest, a policeman enters and <i>escort</i> you, out of the room, as you can see a devil-may-care smile on Mr. Kudashov''s face. It seems that you have been tricked.'
 	end
 
-	act 'A call?': gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+	act 'A call?': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'contribution':
@@ -495,10 +495,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'contribution':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/bribes.jpg"></center>'
 	'With the most cynical sigh that you can manage, you take your wallet, pick five thousand rubles, and boringly, put them into Mr. Kudashov''s cup. He, in turn, has the gal, to look disappointingly to your action, and mumbling something. "There is no way to get some tail in this job." Pick a post-it with the number 159 and pass it to you.'
 	'"What is the meaning of this?!"'
-	'Giving a tired sigh, Filipp, return to his work, but have the decency to answer.'
+	'Giving a tired sigh, Filipp, returns to his work, but has the decency to answer.'
 	'"Mr. Aleksei''s possession is in a security box in the local VTB bank. That is the number, but you will need a security key. I give it to that other girl, Ana, now I have work to do. Gregor! Take her out!"'
 	'Before you can protest, a policeman enters and <i>escort</i> you, out of the room, as you can see a devil-may-care smile on Mr. Kudashov''s face. It seems that you have been tricked.'
-	act 'A call?': gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+	act 'A call?': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'succubribe':
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubribe':
 	'Bending sexily at your waist, you carefully rearrange the lapels on his shirt, before whispering sultrily into his ear.'
 	'"Mr. Kudashov... You are so lucky that I don''t have a chastity cage right now."'
 	'Without waiting for more stupid words, you straighten your back and get out of his <i>office</i>, your hunger transforming into rage. You are going to kill that BITCH!'
-	act 'A call?': gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+	act 'A call?': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'persufilipp':
@@ -545,20 +545,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'persufilipp':
 		end
 	else
 		'Filipp Kudashov tilts his head and looks at you with smugness "Ms. Assistant, I don''t know what are you insinuating but..." You cut him before he can continue.'
-		'"No Mr.Kudashov, listen to me. I am as you say <i>Mr.Aleksei''s Assistant</i>...  I work for <i>Mr.Aleksei</i>... No some two-bit criminal... No some mediocre penpusher... No Mr. Kudashov, I work for someone with <i>true power</i>, so don''t try to play with me and for extension Mr.Aleksei. We have a deal, you were generously compensated, so were is the sword?"'
+		'"No Mr.Kudashov, listen to me. I am as you say <i>Mr.Aleksei''s Assistant</i>...  I work for <i>Mr.Aleksei</i>... No some two-bit criminal... Not some mediocre penpusher... No Mr. Kudashov, I work for someone with <i>true power</i>, so don''t try to play with me and for extension Mr.Aleksei. We have a deal, you were generously compensated, so were is the sword?"'
 		'You don''t know if call your words a bluff, mostly because you are pretty sure they are true, but will Filipp take them seriously?'
 		'"Snort... Pfff... Jajaja... Yeah... Sure... Ms.Assistant"'
 		'Filip covers his smiling face with the cup and gives it some little taps. Is evident that the idiot don''t believe you, and is willing to challenge Aleksei''s annoyance. He has a death wish, but you must make a decision... Submit to his wishes or get out of here.'
 
-		act 'Get out of here':gt'alexandriaEv','anacall'
+		act 'Get out of here':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacall'
 
 		act 'Kneel': gt'alexandriaEv', 'kneel'
 
 		if money >= 5000:
-			act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt'alexandriaEv','contribution'
+			act 'Give him a 5K <i>contribution</i>': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'contribution'
 		end
 		if succubusQW > 4:
-			act 'Call your True Face': gt'alexandriaEv','succubribe'
+			act 'Call your True Face': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'succubribe'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -575,26 +575,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase1':
 	'"Est potentia ex testamento!"'
 	'Around you two, the spectators giggle at Ana''s antics, probably believing that this is some kind of spectacle, but... the truth is... that you don''t have fucking idea why she is doing that!'
 	'"Ana! Where is the key?!"'
-	'She blinks confused, grimace, points at you, and mouths an "Ups!", before beginning to frantically search around his many pockets until she shows you a key in her open hand.'
+	'She blinks confused, grimaces, points at you, and mouths an "Ups!", before beginning to frantically search around his many pockets until she shows you a key in her open hand.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
-		'"Sexy! Stop for a moment and hear my reasons! In my defense, I will say, that I was paid a fuckton of money to get that sword! I mean a SUV was parked in front of my home!"'
+		'"Sexy! Stop for a moment and hear my reasons! In my defense, I will say, that I was paid a fuckton of money to get that sword! I mean an SUV was parked in front of my home!"'
 		'Around you, more people begin to gather to see the spectacle, you even hear their comments "The red-eyed is the good one, isn''t it?" You don''t know how to take that.'
 		'"Ok, look Sexy, let''s make a deal! You really don''t owe Alexandria anything! I have this little expense account, and I can skim around... let''s see... 35000 rubles if you turn back?"'
 		'"What if I refuse Ana?"'
 		'"Pfff... Then you lose everything! I will run away and there is no way that you can catch me!"'
 
 	else
-		'"Ok! Sorry! I didn''t want to put me into St.Petersburg''s sexiest prodigy bad side, but... sniff... I thought that you will understand! Sniff... I am only a mutant girl fighting to survive in a world with the darkest powers!"'
+		'"Ok! Sorry! I didn''t want to put myself into St.Petersburg''s sexiest prodigy bad side, but... sniff... I thought that you would understand! Sniff... I am only a mutant girl fighting to survive in a world with the darkest powers!"'
 		'She then, put on puppy dog eyes, even managing to begin to cry, her face quickly filling with snot. "Dawww! Forgive the poor girl!" That is the public that obviously can''t take this absurd situation seriously.'
 		'"So... Sexy... I was thinking of doing something to fix this situation! I just will run away, and you chase after me, but... obviously, you will never catch this cutie! Then you can return to Alexandria, and tell about, how that cute cross between Playmate and Terminator escaped! You will save face, and I will win a fuckton of money! What do you say?"'
 	end
 
 	act 'Just leave, this is ridiculous.': AlexandriaMissionQW -= 1 & AlexandriaQW = 17 & gt 'city_center'
 
-	act '"Challenge accepted!"': gt'alexandriaEv','anachase2'
+	act '"Challenge accepted!"': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anachase2'
 
-	act 'Kick Ana in the guts, then grab the key!': gt'alexandriaEv','anafight1'
+	act 'Kick Ana in the guts, then grab the key!': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anafight1'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
 		act 'Accept the bribe.':
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase1':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana3.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Ok, Ana"'
-			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stand there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
+			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stands there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
 			'"Seriously Sexy? I mean... this isn''t some trick to sucker-punch me and try to take away the key?"'
 			'You are going to answer, but Ana has begun to carefully walk backward, putting back the key, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a parked black SUV, and finding what she was looking for, she trow it towards you.'
 			'"So... Sexy... Why are even?"'
@@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase2':
 	'....'
 	wait 725
 	'"Go! Beep Beep!"'
-	'And then she turns from the sidewalk! Run straight into the street traffic! And do an impressive jump over an unsuspecting car! There is an immediate panic reaction coming from the surprised drivers, that do the impossible to try to no slam into the loonie, that now stand defiantly in the middle of the street.'
+	'And then she turns from the sidewalk! Run straight into the street traffic! And do an impressive jump over an unsuspecting car! There is an immediate panic reaction coming from the surprised drivers, who do the impossible to try to slam into the loonie, that now stands defiantly in the middle of the street.'
 
 	act 'You aren''t crazy! Abandon this chase!': AlexandriaMissionQW -= 1 & AlexandriaQW = 17 & gt 'city_center'
 
@@ -654,11 +654,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase2':
 			dummy = rand(1,100)
 			gs 'stat'
 			if dummy <= pcs_run:
-				gt'alexandriaEv','anachase3'
+				gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anachase3'
 			elseif dummy >= pcs_run and dummy >= 90:
-				gt'alexandriaEv','anacrash1'
+				gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anacrash1'
 			else
-				gt'alexandriaEv','anachase4'
+				gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anachase4'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase2':
 			'Finally, the spell is completed, and time seems to slow, as your brain capacity to process information is multiplied.'
 			'"EPP!!!" Ana, give a little yelp, surprise plastered all over her face, as you launch yourself after her. If she thinks that you are going to back off, she is going to be disappointed, and with the surprise on your side, you rush to grab the annoying nut.'
 			'"Sexy! Don''t touch, we aren''t that close!"'
-			'You ignore her rant, as your hands close over her... arm?! There is sudden <i>squishi</i> sensation, and it <i>breaks</i> in black-crimson ribbons? Ana, then, sidestep you, and with a black-crimson mist trailing her, she begins a mad dash down the street, it seems that is going to be harder than you thought.'
+			'You ignore her rant, as your hands close over her... arm?! There is a sudden <i>squishi</i> sensation, and it <i>breaks</i> in black-crimson ribbons? Ana, then, sidesteps you, and with a black-crimson mist trailing her, she begins a mad dash down the street, it seems that is going to be harder than you thought.'
 
 			act 'Run!':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -719,13 +719,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase3':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana run through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
+	'Ana runs through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
 	'"You can''t catch me! You can''t catch me!"'
 	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! But is not enough... All that is just theatrics, and you have hard-trained your running skills... You don''t do <i>fantasy</i> moves... You don''t waste your breath... and finally, she is at your reach... a hand quickly closing on her back.'
 	'Then, she is already gone, her jacket dissolving in the same black-crimson mist, as she twists, sidesteps, and runs towards an alley, doing a series of jumps that leave her in a fire exit just over your head.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
-		'"Woah! I mean! Woah! Sexy I am pretty fast, but you?! That is awesome! What if I double my offer! Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
+		'"Woah! I mean! Woah! Sexy I am pretty fast, but you?! That is awesome! What if I double my offer? Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
 
 	else
 		'"Woah! I mean! Woah! Sexy I am pretty fast, but you?! That is awesome!"'
@@ -764,16 +764,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase4':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana''s number</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/selfie.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana run through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
+	'Ana runs through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
 	'"You can''t catch me! You can''t catch me!"'
-	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, make it impossible for you, to keep with the mad rush, and in a moment, she leaves you heaving in the middle of the street'
+	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, makes it impossible for you, to keep up with the mad rush, and in a moment, she leaves you heaving in the middle of the street'
 	'"Ring! Ring!"'
 	'Your phone ring... is Ana...'
 	'"Come on Sexy! What are you waiting for?! Look, two more blocks! Turn left at the stop signal and look up!"'
-	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her with a shit-eating-grin in a fire scape just over your head.'
+	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her with a shit-eating-grin on a fire escape just over your head.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
-		'"Oh Sexy! You disappoint me, That was too hard for you? Hm... Let''s then end this quickly! What if I double my offer! Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
+		'"Oh Sexy! You disappoint me, Was it too hard for you? Hm... Let''s then end this quickly! What if I double my offer? Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
 
 	else
 		'"Oh Sexy! You disappoint me, That was too hard for you?"'
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase4':
 	act 'Do some PARKOUR! and block her way!': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase6'
 
 	if spellKnown['shock'] = 1 and pcs_mana >= 20:
-		act 'The paint job in the fire scape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
+		act 'The paint job in the fire escape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
 	end
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
@@ -841,7 +841,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anacrash1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/crash.jpg"></center>'
 	'Ana run through the traffic demonstrating cinematic levels of agility and strength, doing backflips over cars, and filling the air with the driver''s insults, as she creates an insane ruckus just to stop you.'
 	'"You can''t catch me! You can''t catch me!"'
-	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, make impossible for you, to keep with the mad rush, and be aware of the traffic...'
+	'And yes... somehow... sing-songing all the way, without catching her breath! All that, makes it impossible for you, to keep up with the mad rush, and be aware of the traffic...'
 	'"SCREEEEE!!!"'
 	'You barely register the sound of a car''s brakes, as the driver try to evade you... there is an impact... a weightlessness moment... and you find yourself in the ground... pain shooting through your body.'
 
@@ -871,10 +871,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hospital':
 	close all
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><table><tr><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/alexandria2.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/clinic/wakeup.jpg"></tr></td></table></center>'
-	'A mix of pain and numbness hit you as conscience return. You are lying down in a hospital bed, in what it seems to be the ER, with an IV and medical equipment monitoring your health. "Feeling better <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You turn towards the voice, and see Aleksei observing you, a cigarette in his hands in defiance to the hospital''s rules.'
+	'A mix of pain and numbness hit you as your conscience returned. You are lying down in a hospital bed, in what seems to be the ER, with an IV and medical equipment monitoring your health. "Feeling better <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You turn towards the voice, and see Aleksei observing you, a cigarette in his hands in defiance of the hospital''s rules.'
 	'"Oh... What the hell?" You groan in discomfort and palpate, your body, the shadow of some kind of magical effect dissipating quickly. Everything seems to be in it''s place and with some effort manages to sit in the bed.'
-	'"I''m... sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>. I wasn''t expecting this task to escalate, and you end needing urgent medical attention. I... have taken the liberty to heal the most grievous wounds and ordered to clean your clothes. Take your time to recover and then return to me, we need to talk."'
-	'Saying that Aleksei departs, leaving you to the care of the medical staff that helps you to get up and dress. After a last medical examination - that leaves a baffling physician assuming that your wounds were misdiagnosed - you are put in a wheelchair and escorted to the hospital''s exit.'
+	'"I''m... sorry <<$pcs_lastname>>. I wasn''t expecting this task to escalate, and you end up needing urgent medical attention. I... have taken the liberty to heal the most grievous wounds and ordered to clean your clothes. Take your time to recover and then return to me, we need to talk."'
+	'Saying that Aleksei departs, leaving you to the care of the medical staff that helps you get up and dress. After a last medical examination - that leaves a baffling physician assuming that your wounds were misdiagnosed - you are put in a wheelchair and escorted to the hospital''s exit.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'city_residential'
 end
 
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'heal1':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana''s number</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/selfie.jpg"></center>'
-	'You lie there in the ground as pain and shock try to put you down, and chaos descent over the street, as the traffic stop and somebody begins to call an ambulance... but you don''t accept it... Gritting your teeth, a word of power is forced out and a balming sensation travels your injured body.'
+	'You lie there in the ground as pain and shock try to put you down, and chaos descent over the street, as the traffic stops and somebody begins to call an ambulance... but you don''t accept it... Gritting your teeth, a word of power is forced out and a balming sensation travels your injured body.'
 	'"Hey girl don''t move!"'
 	'You ignore whatever is trying to help you and rise, your bones and flesh knitting back together... is not enough... but you will live'
 	'"Ring! Ring!"'
@@ -896,7 +896,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'heal1':
 	'"<i>Madre de dios</i>! <<$pcs_nickname>> are you ok?!"'
 	'"No Ana, I am not ok! Where the fuck is the key!"'
 	'"Ehm... I am... Look, two more blocks... Turn left at the stop signal and look up."'
-	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her fingering in a fire scape just over your head.'
+	'She then hangs up, leaving you to follow her instructions, and find her fingering in a firescape just over your head.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
 		'"Hm <<$pcs_nickname>> Hm... Maybe you want to take it easy... What if I double my offer... Hm? 70000 Rubles?"'
@@ -932,7 +932,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anacarchase':
 	'Ana stand a moment there, looking at you totally out-witted. Then straight her back and race down the street, a black-crimson mist trailing her way as she supernaturally accelerates, trying to leave your car behind, but is not enough, as she not only must go faster but deal with the scared drivers.'
 	'Finally, she has enough and suddenly turns towards a side alley, trying to lose you, but as you try to follow her, she stops mid-step, turns, and runs back! Instinctively making you hit the brakes.'
 	'"SCREEEEE!!!"'
-	'The car stop painfully as the suspension fight against the inertia, trying to don''t ran over Ana, that continues her unstoppable race, finally ending it, using your car''s hood to jump at a fire escape.'
+	'The car stops painfully as the suspension fights against the inertia, trying not to run over Ana, who continues her unstoppable race, finally ending it, using your car''s hood to jump at a fire escape.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
 		'"Sexy, you are a crazy bitch! What if I double my offer! Think about that! 70000 Rubles!"'
@@ -989,11 +989,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jail':
 	AlexandriaQW = 17
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/police/pavhold.jpg"></center>'
-	'After your little scuffle, a pair of serious-looking policemen take you to the police station near the courthouse. You soon realize that something is amiss when they take away your phone and wallet without any search, promptly putting you in a cell, and during the next hour, you see cops come and go around the cell block, but without exception, they ignore any of your calls, or try to collect a declaration.'
+	'After your little scuffle, a pair of serious-looking policemen take you to the police station near the courthouse. You soon realize that something is amiss when they take away your phone and wallet without any search, promptly putting you in a cell, during the next hour, you see cops come and go around the cell block, but without exception, they ignore any of your calls, or try to collect a declaration.'
 	'"Hey Sexy! Take this!" With a TUDD a plastic bag fall to the ground, launched through the cell window, by a climbing Ana. In it, there is a 2L Coke and some sandwiches.'
 	'"What the hell?! What is happening Ana?!"'
 	'"Jeez! Ok... look Sexy... ehm... it wasn''t my idea! <i>Da Boss</i> think that you have abandoned the race too soon... so... well... you are going to pass this day <i>en chirona</i>... hm... so sorry! Bye! I have exams!"'
-	'"Wait! Ana! What the fuck!" but is too late, Ana has run away and has left you alone... so... you only can sit and wait. You pass the next 24 hours, bored out of your mind, without other things to do except sleep and look to the slowly peeling paint in the walls, until the time pass, and without fanfare, you are escorted out of the cell towards the street.'
+	'"Wait! Ana! What the fuck!" but is too late, Ana has run away and has left you alone... so... you only can sit and wait. You pass the next 24 hours, bored out of your mind, without other things to do except sleep and look at the slowly peeling paint on the walls, until the time passes, and without fanfare, you are escorted out of the cell towards the street.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'city_residential'
 end
 
@@ -1006,9 +1006,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anabribe1':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana3.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ok, Ana"'
-	'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stand there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
+	'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stands there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
 	'"Seriously Sexy? I mean... this isn''t some trick to sucker-punch me and try to take away the key?"'
-	'You are going to answer, but Ana, give a jump, backflip mid-air, and land behind you, before begin to carefully walk backward, putting back the key, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a black SUV that just parked, and finding what she was looking, she trow it towards you.'
+	'You are going to answer, but Ana, give a jump, backflip mid-air, and land behind you, before beginning to carefully walk backward, putting back the key, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a black SUV that just parked, and finding what she was looking, she trow it towards you.'
 	'"So... Sexy... Why are even?"'
 	'You grab the item, a little pouch with money inside. That is the moment that chooses Ana to jump inside the SUV and drive away.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
@@ -1023,8 +1023,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 	close all
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><table><tr><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/tv.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></tr></td></table></center>'
-	'You quickly climb after Ana, just for her to do an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like spider-man, and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There something catches her attention, make Ana smile, and enter the building through a near open window.'
-	'You end your climbing and enter the window, that leads you towards a living room... where in a side is a broken TV and in the other a group of very pissed Gopniks... that seems to be threatening a not impressed Ana...'
+	'You quickly climb after Ana, just for her to do an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like Spider-Man, and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There something catches her attention, make Ana smile, and enter the building through a near open window.'
+	'You end your climbing and enter the window, that leads you towards a living room... with a broken TV to one side and a group of very pissed Gopniks in the other... who seem to be threatening a not impressed Ana...'
 	'"Ok guys! I said I am sorry! Hey, Sexy! Take one for the team and remember! Spartak forever!"'
 	'The group is distracted by your sudden entrance and Ana''s words. That is the signal for her to jump up to the ceiling, rebound, and somehow do a free-running maneuver that put her behind the angry fellows... coincidentally beside the exit door... that promptly cross.'
 	'"What the fuck?! You know that bitch?! You are going to pay for our TV! The Zenit was playing today!"'
@@ -1036,13 +1036,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			AlexandriaMissionQW += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t have time to lose with this shits! So... uncaring over their aptitude, you walk towards them, crack your knuckles, and confront the <i>shitmouth</i>.'
+			'You don''t have time to lose with these shits! So... uncaring over their aptitude, you walk towards them, crack your knuckles, and confront the <i>shitmouth</i>.'
 			'"Ok dude... get out of my way or I pray to god, my feet will kick your ass so hard, that you will taste your own shit."'
 			'The Gopnikcs seemed to rise to the challenge, obviously, accustomed to violence and with the numbers on their side, you don''t seem intimidating... and then the whispers begin...'
 			'"Kickboxing master! Really mean left hook! She took him in a round!"'
-			'They grunt, and part, so you can exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to saw Ana one floor lower.'
+			'They grunt, and part, so you can exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to see Ana one floor lower.'
 			'"Woah! Sexy! Can you teach me how to do that?!" Then trying to talk like Batman, she says "I am Sexy!"'
-			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dance between the coming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
+			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dances around the incoming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
 
 			act 'Follow her': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
 		end
@@ -1058,11 +1058,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></center>'
 			'You don''t have time to lose with this shits! So... uncaring over their aptitude, you walk towards them, take away your wallet and press 15K, against the <i>smartmouth''s</i> chest.'
 			'"Ok dude... just pick one better this time."'
-			'The Gopnikcs are speechless, their mouths are frozen on whatever shit they were gonna say. Then begin to scramble to take the money.'
-			'"Fuck! Where is the nearest shop! Shit! Take my car! Ouch! You stepped on my son-of-a-bitch!"'
-			'You somehow dance between the frantic fans, and exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to saw Ana one floor lower.'
+			'The Gopniks are speechless, their mouths are frozen on whatever shit they were gonna say. Then begin to scramble to take the money.'
+			'"Fuck! Where is the nearest shop? Shit! Take my car! Ouch! You stepped on my foot, son-of-a-bitch!"'
+			'You somehow dance between the frantic fans, and exit the apartment towards the building''s stairs, just to see Ana one floor lower.'
 			'"Hey Sexy! I was expecting something with more... well, blood and teeth... but I quest if it works..."'
-			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dance between the coming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
+			'Trying to reach before the end of her tirade, you jump down the stairs, making Ana scream and scramble down the building towards the street, where she again dances around the incoming cars to cross towards a multistory car park.'
 			act 'Follow her': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1089,10 +1089,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			'"Ok guys, I am sorry for what that nut said! I am in the same situation! That freak had been messing with me all day long, and I was trying to teach her a lesson!"'
 			'You try to defuse the situation, but only seem to win time, as they seemed <i>really</i> pissed, at the prospect of losing today Zenith''s match... Fortunately, that wasn''t your plan... as the truth is, that you only wanted to win time, until you can reach the window.'
 			'"Fuck! That bitch is trying to scape!"'
-			'<i>To late</i>, you think as finally, you cross the opening, and quickly close it after you. The Gopniks crowding, impeding your persecution, and letting you run away down the fire escape, towards the street... where you don''t know where ana has gone.'
+			'<i>To late</i>, you think as finally, you cross the opening and quickly close it after you. The Gopniks crowding, impeding your persecution, and letting you run away down the fire escape, towards the street... where you don''t know where ana has gone.'
 			'"Ring! Ring!"'
 			'Your phone ring with Ana''s number.'
-			'"Hey Sexy! Still alive?! Good! But what is entertaining you? I am bored in this parking lot! What are you waiting?!"'
+			'"Hey Sexy! Still alive?! Good! But what is entertaining you? I am bored in this parking lot! What are you waiting for?!"'
 			act 'Follow her': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
 
 		else
@@ -1103,7 +1103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase5':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/gopniks.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Ok guys, I am sorry for what that nut said! There''s no need to get pissed, The Spartak is a great team!"'
-			'Shit! That was probably one of the worst things to say, as The Zenith has a traditional rivalry with Moscow-based teams... of which the Spartak is part... and these guys seem Harcore Zenith fans... so with murder in their eyes, they throw themselves at you.'
+			'"Shit! That was probably one of the worst things to say. The Zenith has a traditional rivalry with Moscow-based teams, Spartak being one of them, and these guys seem like hardcore Zenith fans." With murder in their eyes, they throw themselves at you.'
 			act 'BRAWL!':
 				*clr & cla
 				$boydesc = 'Pissed Gopniks'
@@ -1162,9 +1162,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase6':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/city/ana/parkour.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You take some moments to stretch, and show off to a puzzled Ana, then... without hesitation, run towards a garbage container and using it as a trampoline, you jump towards her, grabbing the stairs'' railing and propelling behind a surprised Ana.'
 		'"Sexy! <i>Eso mola</i>! But... two can play to that!"'
-		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like spider-man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
+		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like Spider-Man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
 		'"That isn''t going to help you, Ana!"'
-		'You scream at that nut, and climb after her, reaching the rooftop, seeing Ana running away quickly, but... she is far from winning, as that black-crimson mist signal her pass, and you using hard-earned skills, jump between rooftops, slide down rain gutters and scare terrace dwelling pets to reach to her.'
+		'You scream at that nut and climb after her, reaching the rooftop. You see Ana running away quickly, but she''s far from winning. That black-crimson mist signals her path, and using your hard-earned skills, you jump between rooftops, slide down rain gutters, and scare terrace-dwelling pets to catch up to her.'
 		'"Woah Sexy! The <i>Parkata Urbatsu</i> is strong in you!"'
 		'She screams and tries to lose you, descending to the street level, and dancing through traffic. Her objective is a multistory car park but is not enough and as she enters the building, you enter through a window, just in front of her... The chase has ended.'
 		act 'Endgame': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachasefinal'
@@ -1221,9 +1221,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase6':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/crash.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take some moments to stretch, and show off to a puzzled Ana, then... without hesitation, run towards a garbage container to use it as a trampoline(<i>somehow</i> that work), you jump towards her, grabbing the stairs'' railing and propelling yo behind a surprised Ana(<i>somehow</i> that work <i>again</i>).'
 		'"Sexy! That is Cool! But... two can play to that!"'
-		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like spider-man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
+		'She then... give an inhuman-looking jump towards the opposite wall, latch at it like Spider-Man and continue with a series of acrobatics that put Ana two floors over you! There, she gives a bowing and begins to climb towards the rooftop.'
 		'"That isn''t going to help you, Ana!"'
-		'You scream at that nut, and climb after her, reaching the rooftop, seeing Ana running away quickly, but... as you try to reach to her, you fumble a jump, and fall towards the street! Fortunately, some clotheslines and a low height save your life.'
+		'You scream at that nut, and climb after her, reaching the rooftop, seeing Ana running away quickly, but... as you try to reach to her, you fumble a jump, and fall towards the street! Fortunately, some clotheslines and the low height save your life.'
 
 		act 'You fall unconscious': gt 'alexandriaEv', 'hospital'
 
@@ -1250,13 +1250,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase6':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take some moments to stretch, and show off to a puzzled Ana, then... without hesitation, run towards a garbage container to use it like a trampoline and jump towards her... At least, that WAS the plan.'
 		'"Pfff... Sexy? Hmm... What are you doing? Te-He!"'
-		'Ana look at your sprawling form on the ground, a hand over her mouth... Yes... Because free-running look easy on the films, and you just made a fool of yourself as your improvised acrobatics, has ended with you falling on your ass, and Ana trying to contain a giggle'
-		'"Ok Sexy! Let act like... this has not happened!"'
+		'Ana look at your sprawling form on the ground, a hand over her mouth... Yes... Because free-running looks easy on the films, and you just made a fool of yourself as your improvised acrobatics, has ended with you falling on your ass, and Ana trying to contain a giggle'
+		'"Ok Sexy! Let acts like... this has not happened!"'
 
 		act 'Climb after her!': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase5'
 
 		if spellKnown['shock'] = 1 and pcs_mana >= 20:
-			act 'The paint job in the fire scape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
+			act 'The paint job on the fire escape has peeled away... and you know Electric Shock...': dummy = rand(1,100) & gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase7'
 		end
 
 		if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
@@ -1296,11 +1296,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase7':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/zap.jpg"></center>'
 		'For what you understand, <i>magical</i> electricity, don''t necessarily work like the <i>natural</i> one. At the same time, Electrical Shock your only spell of the Electrical School, isn''t really that powerful to push enough charge through the stairs to affect Ana.'
 		'"Sexy! What are you waiting for?!"'
-		'That means, that even if you generate a charge powerful enough, it''s doubtful that it reaches the infuriating nut... so what to do? Well... Probably Aleksei knows a better answer, but the only thing that you can think off is to overpower the spell... and pray.'
+		'That means, that even if you generate a charge powerful enough, it''s doubtful that it reaches the infuriating nut... so what to do? Well... Probably Aleksei knows a better answer, but the only thing that you can think of is to overpower the spell... and pray.'
 		'"Sexy?"'
-		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting cross through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stair...'
+		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting crosses through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stairs...'
 		'"ARGGG!!!!!"'
-		'Ana scream as the overpowered TASER-like spell reach to her and make Ana fall... Convulsing... maybe you must look that she hasn''t suffered a heart attack...'
+		'Ana screams as the overpowered TASER-like spell reaches her and makes Ana fall... Convulsing...  you should probably make sure, that she hasn''t suffered a heart attack...'
 		'"Ana?"'
 		'You climb towards Ana''s prone form, some of that black-crimson mist surrounding her trembling body, but before you can touch her... she gets up and jumps towards a nearby window, breaking it and entering in the building.'
 
@@ -1316,9 +1316,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase7':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/true.jpg"></center>'
 			'Taking care to don''t be cut with the broken cristal, you pass through the window, to what seems to be a storeroom.'
 			'"Ana?"'
-			'There isn''t answer, except some kind of animal growls, coming from behind a rack, and as you approach to investigate, a hand reach out and grab around the corner... behind... slowly rising from a prone position is Ana... Or would be Ana, if her torso wasn''t now a giant gaping maw, full of teeth, and tentacle-like tongues.'
+			'There isn''t answer, except some kind of animal growls, coming from behind a rack, and as you approach to investigate, a hand reached out and grabs around the corner... behind... slowly rising from a prone position is Ana... Or would be Ana, if her torso wasn''t now a giant gaping maw, full of teeth, and tentacle-like tongues.'
 			'"BOOOOOOOOOO!"'
-			'Ana, scream, covering you in copious amounts of spit, before turning, and doing a <i>Slimer</i> impersonation, run out of the room, towards the building stairs. You stand there a moment... confused... before running after the quickly reforming mutant, and evading panicked neighbors.'
+			'Ana, scream, covering you in copious amounts of spit, before turning, and doing a <i>Slimer</i> impersonation, running out of the room, towards the building stairs. You stand there a moment... confused... before running after the quickly reforming mutant, and evading panicked neighbors.'
 			'"Come back Ana! I swear to god! You can''t scape me!"'
 			'Most of Ana''s velocity seems to have faded, as most of her attention seems to be on reforming herself, she even is run over by a car, as she tries to cross a street full head-on towards a multistory car park, where finally you reach her.'
 
@@ -1338,11 +1338,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachase7':
 		'"Sexy! What are you waiting for?!"'
 		'That means, that even if you generate a charge powerful enough, it''s doubtful that it reaches the infuriating nut... so what to do? Well... Probably Aleksei knows a better answer, but the only thing that you can think of is to overpower the spell... and pray.'
 		'"Sexy?"'
-		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting cross through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stair...'
+		'Slowly, and with care, you follow the spell instructions, and soon blue lighting crosses through your fingers, then... you pour mana into it, making it unstable... and release it towards the stair...'
 		'"ARGGG!!!!!"'
-		'You scream as the overpowered TASER-like spell reaches to the stairs... bounce back... and discharge its energy on you... there is a kaleidoscopic halo and, you find your mana quicklly evaporating.'
+		'You scream as the overpowered TASER-like spell reaches the stairs... bounces back... and discharges its energy on you... there is a kaleidoscopic halo and, you find your mana quicklly evaporating.'
 		'"Ohhhh... Pretty! Sexy, I give you extra points for a beautiful display, but... what exactly was your plan?"'
-		'Gritting the teeth to suppress a scream, you look at your smoking hands. That wasn''t a good idea, better think on an alternative, to catch Ana.'
+		'Gritting your teeth to suppress a scream, you look at your smoking hands. That wasn''t a good idea, better think of an alternative, to catch Ana.'
 
 		act 'Climb after her!': gt 'alexandriaEv','anachase5'
 
@@ -1363,10 +1363,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachasefinal':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/boss.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana stand in the silent parking, with her arms stretched and that black-crimson mist forming a vaguely blade-like nimbus around her left arm... All in all, his pose would not be out of place, in an anime.'
+	'Ana stands in the silent parking, with her arms stretched and that black-crimson mist forming a vaguely blade-like nimbus around her left arm... All in all, his pose would not be out of place, in an anime.'
 	'"Ok, Sexy, this is enough! I have given you every excuse to give up! I don''t know what class of power have Alexandria - <i>cough</i> - The Great Bitch - <i>cough</i> - over you, but this is enough!"'
 	'"Then give me the key Ana!"'
-	'"I can''t Sexy! I am like Jack from Bioshock, compelled to go forward against forever increasing odds! Think in poor little mutant me, Sexy! I am not a kickass sorceress like you!"'
+	'"I can''t Sexy! I am like Jack from Bioshock, compelled to go forward against forever-increasing odds! Think in poor little mutant me, Sexy! I am not a kickass sorceress like you!"'
 	'Ana has the gall to pout and cross her hands in a pleading gesture. Is evident, at least for you, that this girl isn''t going to take you seriously, and during a long moment, the two of you stand there in an impasse, before Ana decides to break the silence.'
 
 	if npc_rel['A241'] = 1:
@@ -1397,9 +1397,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anachasefinal':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana3.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Ok, Ana"'
-			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stand there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
+			'Ana blinks surprised at your answer, and during a moment stands there open-mouthed, apparently, trying to process your answer.'
 			'"Seriously Sexy? I mean... this isn''t some trick to sucker-punch me and try to take away the key?"'
-			'You are going to answer, but Ana has begun to carefully walk backward, and looking for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a just arriving black SUV, and finding what she was looking for, she trow it towards you.'
+			'You are going to answer, but Ana has begun to carefully walk backward, and look for something else in her pockets, all the time warily eyeing you. Finally, her retreat put her back against a just arriving black SUV, and finding what she was looking for, she trow it towards you.'
 			'"So... Sexy... Why are even?"'
 			'You grab the item, a little pouch with money inside. That is the moment that chooses Ana to jump inside the SUV and drive away.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
@@ -1461,10 +1461,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anascore':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
 	'You try to put as much seriousness as you can to your words, if this nut has the gal to <i>think</i> that she can stop you, she is going to be disappointed.'
 	'"Oh come on Sexy! That is so cute! Really?! I am..."'
-	'She answers you with this mockingly smile on her lips, before abruptly stop... surprised? She turns her head slightly like she was listening to something, before turning towards you, a more serious expression on her face. Then, she looks for something in a pocket that trow at you.'
+	'She answers you with this mockingly smile on her lips, before abruptly stopping... surprised? She turns her head slightly like she is listening to something, before turning towards you, a more serious expression on her face. Then, she looks for something in a pocket and throws whatever it is at you.'
 	'It''s a <i>key</i> but now that you can examine it, not the sort used on security boxes. You are going to retort to the annoying fuck before she rise her hands in a conciliating gesture.'
 	'"Yeah I know! It just... Look sexy, I don''t have the key, but if you come with me, I will tell you where is the sword! Ehm... Girl Scout Word!"'
-	'Ana pout, giving puppy eyes, as she raises a hand in the three-finger salute.'
+	'Ana pouts, giving you her best puppy eyes, as she raises a hand in a three-finger salute.'
 	act 'Go with the loonie':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anamotel'
 end
 
@@ -1475,14 +1475,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anaryan':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana made an interesting <i>confused dog</i> impersonation, when she tilt her head, at the same time one of her hands - seemed on its own <i>mind</i> and compelled for your use of Jack''s codewords - search the pockets... The display truly unnerving.'
+	'Ana made an interesting <i>confused dog</i> impersonation, when she tilted her head, at the same time one of her hands - seemed on its own <i>mind</i> and compelled for your use of Jack''s codewords - search the pockets... The display truly unnerving.'
 	'"Hey! What are you doing!"'
 	'Her screams, fill the parking, as Ana finally realizes her rebel hand movements, but is too late to stop <i>it</i>, before the key is trow towards you.'
 	'"Thanks... Ana?!"'
 	'You look at the key, but now that you can examine it, is not the sort used on security boxes. You are going to retort to the annoying fuck, but she seems lost in a bout of crazy shrieks of laughter.'
 	'"BWAHAHAHA! Oh my! <i>Tu cara</i>! It''s priceless! You were expecting that something like that worked?! Come on Sexy!"'
-	'Ok, you are going to scrub the ground with her face! You reach for her, but stops as she rise her hands in a defeated gesture, her head slightly turned like she was listening to something.'
-	'"Sexy! I surrender! You win! Yeah! <i>I don''t care! She win!</i>! Look sexy, I don''t have the key, but if you come with me, I will tell you where is the sword! Ehm... Girl Scout Word!"'
+	'Ok, you are going to scrub the ground with her face! You reach for her but stop as she raises her hands in a defeated gesture, her head slightly turned like she was listening to something.'
+	'"Sexy! I surrender! You win! Yeah! <i>I don''t care! She wins!</i>! Look sexy, I don''t have the key, but if you come with me, I will tell you where is the sword! Ehm... Girl Scout Word!"'
 	'Ana pout, giving puppy eyes, as she raises a hand in the three-finger salute.'
 	act 'Go with the loonie':gt 'alexandriaEv', 'anamotel'
 end
@@ -1494,13 +1494,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana5.jpg"></center>'
-	'Ana take you, to a motel''s room, where she jumps in the bed and kneel.'
+	'Ana take you, to a motel''s room, where she jumps in the bed and kneels.'
 	'"Well Ana, where is the sword?"'
-	'Ana don''t seems to want to look at your face, and during a moment kneel there in silence. Finally, when she finally talks, it is without her normally flamboyant style.'
+	'Ana doesn''t seem to want to look at your face, and for a moment kneels there in silence. Finally, when she finally talks, it is without her normally flamboyant style.'
 	'"At this time my boss will have sent it to Alexandria" You blink, and some really nasty words surge towards your mouth, but Ana continues, shortcircuiting your outburst "Sorry! It wasn''t my idea! Really! This is the sort of game our bosses use to limit the <i>collateral damage</i>! It''s a message to Alexandria! And... a test to take your mettle!"'
 	'You facepalm, suddenly very tired. "So... Now what Ana?!"'
 	'Ana shrugged "You won, so I suppose that is a point for Alexandria. Additionally... Ehm... I don''t know how to say this... My boss explained to me that i... well... you know... Hm... After all this running around, you are sweaty, and maybe you want a shower... and I can... scrub you? If you want!"'
-	'A moment? The room? The shower? Is she insinuating herself to you? Oh hell no! That weirdo is... Suddenly, there is a change in Ana''s posture, and some of the unearthly vibes she has been transmitting disappear... She now looks more... Normal? Insecure? Timid? Cute? Was she affecting you with some kind of magic? What can you do now?'
+	'A moment? The room? The shower? Is she insinuating herself to you? Oh hell no! That weirdo is... Suddenly, there is a change in Ana''s posture and some of the unearthly vibes she has been transmitting disappear... She now looks more... Normal? Insecure? Timid? Cute? Was she affecting you with some kind of magic? What can you do now?'
 
 	act 'Don''t put on crazy! Run away!': AlexandriaQW = 18 & gt 'city_center'
 
@@ -1510,26 +1510,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/sex/AS1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Ana get up and walk towards the bathroom. Her <i>clothes</i> reabsorbed in a twirl of black-crimson mist, making her look... <i>fuller</i> and very naked, and during a moment, you doubt what to do, before walking towards the cute blonde, taking off your clothes along the way.'
-		'She is already in the shower, when you, half-naked, reach her, and before she has time to open the water, you step into the shower, a fresh and minty fragrance filling the small space. Ana just looks at you with his trademarked big puppy eyes as you bend to kiss the shorted girl''s lips.'
-		'She freezes as your tongue fight to go beyond her mint-flavored lips, and you realize your error... Ana is looking at you with doe-like and frightened eyes... then, the damnedest, snort, and puts her forehead on your chest for support, as paroxysms of laughter rock her body.'
-		'"<i>Lo siento <<$pcs_nickname>>! Te-He! Virginal e Inocente?! Te-He! Por Dios no</i>!" Ana - <i>slowly</i> - calms and look at you with this big-goofy smile "<<$pcs_nickname>> Sigh... Now more seriously, yeah... I have never been with a woman and feel out of my comfort zone so... well... sorry, but I am not as experienced as you."'
-		'"Ana, What do you mean by <i>experienced</i>?!" At your question, she just rolls her eyes. "Oh! Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Alexandria is a lot of things, but <i>chaste</i> isn''t one of them! It would be surprising, if she hasn''t tied you to her bed, and have her way with your ass!"'
-		'You mussed over Ana''s word, remembering your <i>teaching lessons</i> with Aleksei, and strange words find their way towards your mouth. "So... Ana... You want to learn what <i>Aleksei</i> taught me? What if I ask you to kneel?"'
-
-		act 'She do it.':
+		'Ana gets up and walks towards the bathroom. Her <i>clothes</i> reabsorbed in a twirl of black-crimson mist, making her look... <i>fuller</i> and very naked, and during a moment, you doubt what to do, before walking towards the cute blonde, taking off your clothes along the way.'
+		'She is already in the shower, when you, half-naked, reach her, and before she has time to start the water, you step into the shower, a fresh and minty fragrance fills the small space. Ana just looks at you with her trademarked big puppy eyes as you bend to kiss the shorter girl''s lips.'
+		'She freezes as your tongue tries to get past her mint-flavored lips, and you realize your mistake. Ana looks at you with frightened, doe-like eyes. Then she snorts and rests her forehead on your chest, laughing uncontrollably.'
+		'"<i>Lo siento <<$pcs_nickname>>! Te-He! Virginal e Inocente?! Te-He! Por Dios no</i>!" Ana - <i>slowly</i> - calms and looks at you with this big-goofy smile "<<$pcs_nickname>> Sigh... but seriously, yeah... I have never been with a woman and feel out of my comfort zone so... well... sorry, but I am not as experienced as you."'
+		'"Ana, What do you mean by <i>experienced</i>?!" At your question, she just rolls her eyes. "Oh! Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Alexandria is a lot of things, but <i>chaste</i> isn''t one of them! It would be surprising, if she hasn''t tied you to her bed, and had her way with your ass!"'
+		'You mussed over Ana''s word, remembering your <i>teaching lessons</i> with Aleksei, and strange words find their way towards your mouth. "So... Ana... Do you want to learn what <i>Aleksei</i> taught me? What if I ask you to kneel?"'
+
+		act 'She does it.':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 3, 'dom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/sex/AS2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Ana don''t hesitates, and with eyes full of determination, she kneels before you in submission, then... as an afterthought, Ana open the water, and grab a bar of soap and sponge. "Well... I promised to scrub you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'You try to equate Ana sudden meekly act, with her late craziness, as somehow your brain look for some trick, and new words fill the shower. "Don''t use that Ana."'
-			'Again, she doesn''t falters, and without taken away her eyes from your face, she grabs your tighs and begins to kiss your leg, adding little laps to the sweaty skin. You meanwhile take away what is left of your cumbersome clothes until nothing is separating your skin from Ana''s mouth.'
+			'Ana doesn''t hesitate, and with eyes full of determination, she kneels before you in submission, then... as an afterthought, Ana turns the water back on, and grabs a bar of soap and a sponge. "Well... I promised to scrub you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You try to reconcile Ana''s sudden meekness with her recent craziness, as your brain searches for a trick. New words fill the shower: "Don''t use it, Ana."'
+			'Again, she doesn''t falters, and without taking her eyes from your face, she grabs your tighs and begins to kiss your leg, adding little laps to the sweaty skin. You meanwhile take away what is left of your cumbersome clothes until nothing is separating your skin from Ana''s mouth.'
 			'"Are you so desperate to be my sub, Ana? Hm? Then, show me <i>Mutant Girl</i>."'
 			'The new christened Mutant Girl, look at you intensely and again without vacillation, put her forehead in a silent supplication gesture, against your <i>mons Venus</i>, waiting for whatever order you quickly aroused mind can think, and during a long moment, you two stay like this with the water falling over you.'
 			'"Get up Mutant Girl!"'
-			'Your dominant hand, close over Ana''s throat... <i>Hard</i>... and make her stand. She doesn''t gasps or tries to stop you, as you use your superior height to make her tiptoed as she is put against the shower''s wall.'
+			'Your dominant hand, close over Ana''s throat... <i>Hard</i>... and make her stand. She doesn''t gasp or try to stop you, as you use your superior height to make her tiptoed as she is put against the shower''s wall.'
 
 			act 'Kiss her... and more.':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1541,9 +1541,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/sex/AS3.jpg"></center>'
 				'You lick Ana''s minty flavor from your lips, as with a hand, you slowly raise one of her legs. Is a tribute to her strength and flexibility that even reaching the height of your head, Ana doesn''t lose her balance.'
 				'"Ok Mutant Girl, I don''t want to see you lower that leg... understood?"'
-				'Ana nods, and, with the raised leg never wavering a millimeter, fix herself against the shower walls. Meanwhile, you begin your journey down, kissing little by little her body, taking attention to her neck, bust, stomach, and finally her pubic mound.'
+				'Ana nods, and, with the raised leg never wavering a millimeter, fix herself against the shower walls. Meanwhile, you begin your journey down, kissing her body little by little, giving extra attention to her neck, bust, stomach, and finally her pubic mound.'
 				'"Don''t get nervous, we have reached the best part Mutant Girl."'
-				'Even with the water falling over you two, your tongue probing of her nethers show you Ana''s excitement and another thing... minty! Satisfied with this knowledge, you raise a hand to finger the salacious mutant, as you redirect your tongue to feast on her pink bean.'
+				'Even with the water falling over you two, your tongue probes her nethers, tasting Ana''s excitement and another thing... mint! Satisfied with this knowledge, you raise a hand to finger the salacious mutant, as you redirect your tongue to feast on her pink bean.'
 				'"<i>Me corro! Me corro!</i>"'
 				'In no time you have the horny Ana shaking in orgasmic bliss, and during a moment her form <i>ripple</i> showing you... brunette hair? But is just a moment before she recovers her self-control, and you observe Ana''s blissed-out expression.'
 				'"Woah! That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>! Ehm... Can we sit on the floor? Is your turn, and I want to try something!"'
@@ -1565,10 +1565,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 					'"Hey Mutant Girl! I am supposed to be the one giving commands!"'
 					'Ana give you innocent eyes, before literally <i>slither</i> down the wall and over you, in a tangled mess of arms and legs, that somehow end without breaking your neck against the wall, and with the two of you sitting, water falling over as your vaginas touch in a scissoring position.'
 					'"I think you will open to suggestions <i>Mistress</i>"'
-					'Ana then, pout and flutter her eyes in a parody of innocence, before giggling and begin to rock against you... frotting her lower lips against yours, trying to stimulate the flesh of your nether regions... and failing... growing frustrated as she, even with her extraordinary flexibility, seems incapable to guide both of you towards your release.'
+					'Ana then, pouts and flutters her eyes in a parody of innocence, before giggling and begin to rock against you... frotting her lower lips against yours, trying to stimulate the flesh of your nether regions... and failing... growing frustrated as she, even with her extraordinary flexibility, seems incapable to guide both of you towards your release.'
 					'"Stop Mutant Girl... let me help you..."'
-					'You somehow extend a hand without losing balance in the wet floor, and caress her face, before grabbing one of her hands and put it between you two, where your flesh meet, using it as a fixed point, were you two begin to frot, slowly taking you towards your mutual satisfaction.'
-					'"<i>Si! Ya llego!</i>." Her scream, proclaim her second orgasm of your bout of sex, and during a moment it seems that this is the end... until she bends, grabs your head, and kisses you... an impossibly long tongue going beyond your lips, as the hand between you two, goes crazy, forcing your own release soon after.'
+					'You somehow extend a hand without losing balance on the wet floor, and caress her face, before grabbing one of her hands and putting it between you, where your skin meets, using it as a fixed point, where you two begin to frot, slowly taking you towards your mutual satisfaction.'
+					'"<i>Si! Ya llego!</i>." Her scream, proclaims her second orgasm of your bout of sex, and during a moment it seems that this is the end... until she bends, grabs your head, and kisses you... an impossibly long tongue going beyond your lips, as the hand between you two, goes crazy, forcing your own release soon after.'
 
 					act 'Afterglow':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1584,14 +1584,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anamotel':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Ana</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/ana/ana6.jpg"></center>'
-						'After the weird experience of cumming with a tentacle-like-minted-tongue filling your mouth, Ana fulfills her promise to scrub you, and you end your shower. Then, you two return to the bedroom, where she, thanks to her powers, <i>regrow</i> her <i>clothes</i> and fix her appearance.'
-						'However on your part, you must pass for the more <i>slow</i> and <i>traditional</i> methods to put back your clothes and tidy your looks. All the time, with a strangely silent Ana that lie in the bed.'
+						'After the weird experience of cumming with a tentacle-like-minted-tongue filling your mouth, Ana fulfills her promise to scrub you, and you end your shower. Then, you two return to the bedroom, where she, thanks to her powers, <i>regrow</i> her <i>clothes</i> and fixes her appearance.'
+						'However, on your part, you must pass for the more <i>slow</i> and <i>traditional</i> methods to put back your clothes and tidy your looks. All the time, with a strangely silent Ana that lie in the bed.'
 						'"What happened, Ana? Are you falling for me?"'
 
 						if npc_rel['A241'] = 0:
-							'Ana roll her eyes "What? No! Come on Sexy! I am straight! I recognize, that It was fun, but... sorry... our bosses are going to be at each other throats in no time, and well... even without taking that into consideration, I prefer my lovers tall, dark-skinned and very male."'
+							'Ana rolls her eyes "What? No! Come on Sexy! I am straight! I recognize, that It was fun, but... sorry... our bosses are going to be at each other throats in no time, and well... even without taking that into consideration, I prefer my lovers tall, dark-skinned and very male."'
 							'"So... what happened back there?" She shrugs "just some little fun? Sexy, at the end of the day, we are rivals, and... is probably better that we leave any emotional attachment back there... in a safe place."'
-							'Saying this she doesn''t seems in the mood to talk more, and you take your things and leave the room.'
+							'Saying this she doesn''t seem in the mood to talk more, and you take your things and leave the room.'
 
 						else
 							'Ana snort "Oh my god! No! Look, I am sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you need more than fulfill my lesbian fantasy, for this straight girl to rethink her sexual orientation! I prefer my lovers tall, dark-skinned, and very male, but... I can add certain tall Russian woman!"'

locations/alexandriaHome.qsrc

@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 		act 'Training': gt 'alexandriaChat', 'training'
 		
 		if  AlexandriaQW > 13 and AlexandriaQW < 20:
-		    act '"About that sword"': gt'alexandriaChat','sword'
+		    act '"About that sword"': gt 'alexandriaChat', 'sword'
 		    
 		end
 		

locations/alexandriaSex.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice1':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N3.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you try to play with your trapped cunt, he slaps your hand and forcefully takes it away.'
 			'"Ordering me again <<$pcs_lastname>>? What am I supposed to do with you? I think I must meditate on it, but until then, don''t you think that your bosom needs some attention?"'
-			'You bite your lips to stop a retort, and obediently raise your hands towards your rock hard nipples and begin to play with them. Aleksei just looks down at your ever-growing arousal with an amused smirk while humming a lullaby.'
+			'You bite your lips to stop a retort and obediently raise your hands towards your rock-hard nipples and begin to play with them. Aleksei just looks down at your ever-growing arousal with an amused smirk while humming a lullaby.'
 			'"Hm?! What the... Yes!"'
 			'It takes you by surprise when Aleksei suddenly and forcefully opens your legs and starts lapping away at your pussy like a rabid dog, the sensation quickly cutting through the knot in your stomach and releasing an orgasm that lashes against your magical core, triggering an even more powerful orgasm.'
 			'"Isn''t it better when you listen to me <<$pcs_lastname>>?"'
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice1':
 					'As a dutiful apprentice, you understand your master''s commands without words, and following them, you begin to kiss and fondle Aleksei''s gorgeous body until you end up in a tangled mess with your face over his beautiful love box.'
 					'"Remember my apprentice... slow... We have all the time to enjoy this."'
 					'"I will try <i>master</i>..."'
-					'You expect some kind of retort, but Aleksei just gives his archetypical half-smile and caresses your hair, putting only the slightest strength to mark the rhythm as he relaxes and lets you pleasure him. With moans of pleasure signalling his pleasured arousal, you slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a beautiful display of pleasure.'
+					'You expect some kind of retort, but Aleksei just gives his archetypical half-smile and caresses your hair, putting only the slightest strength to mark the rhythm as he relaxes and lets you pleasure him. With moans of pleasure signaling his pleasured arousal, you slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a beautiful display of pleasure.'
 
 					act 'Afterglow':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice1':
 						end
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N6.jpg"></center>'
-						'After cuddling for a few minutes, Aleksei gets up and sit on a nearby chair, where he proceeds to light a cigarette and look at the void. His posture is slightly slouched, yet strangely relaxed when compared with Aleksei''s always ram-rod demeanor'
+						'After cuddling for a few minutes, Aleksei gets up and sits on a nearby chair, where he proceeds to light a cigarette and look at the void. His posture is slightly slouched, yet strangely relaxed when compared with Aleksei''s always ram-rod demeanor'
 						'"That was strange. I wasn''t expecting Rikudo''s magic to force us into this situation <<$pcs_lastname>>. However, I must say that is fascinating! I have not had this sort of insight into Rikudo''s work in centuries. I assume, that it has been as... enlightening to you as it was to me?"'
 						'You answer by stretching sexily over the covers and extending your hands, a slight electric flash illuminating your smiling face and making Aleksei cover a smile with a drag of his cigarette before he walks up and kneels by your side.'
-						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, this is an opportunity I can''t refuse. With your approval, we will continue with more of these <i>teaching sessions</i>, but I want to emphasize that this has been enjoyable, and I am sure that neither of us regrets what just happened. However, this can''t be anything more that an exchange for my knowledge'
+						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, this is an opportunity I can''t refuse. With your approval, we will continue with more of these <i>teaching sessions</i>, but I want to emphasize that this has been enjoyable, and I am sure that neither of us regrets what just happened. However, this can''t be anything more than an exchange for my knowledge'
 						'He caresses your face before getting to his feet and, with a disgusted grimace, collects his discarded lingerie and exits the room, leaving you alone with your thoughts. As Aleksei said, you will need more <i>teaching sessions</i>, but for the moment, you must get dressed.'
 						'"What the...?"'
 						'As you rise from the bed, you realize the fresh feeling over your skin, and your perfectly arranged hair. Did Aleksei''s curse <i>clean</i> you in an act of utter bullshit?'
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy1':
 				'"Well <<$pcs_lastname>>, time to teach you some magic."'
 				'You look at him scornfully. You are sore, tired and breathless with bound hands and wobbly legs, and he wants you to continue? A look at Aleksei''s determined eyes tells you one thing. "No" isn''t the answer he is expecting.'
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>> You are a wizard, a literal <i>willworker</i> that can make the world cry like a little girl. So why should pain, fatigue or mental duress be allowed to have power over you?"'
-				'He then grabs your chin, sending some mana through your nervous system as he begins to whisper words of power, again and again, until you grit your teeth and push mana to your bound hands, repeat his words and a sudden flash of electricity illuminates the room.'
+				'He then grabs your chin, sending some mana through your nervous system as he begins to whisper words of power, again and again, until you grit your teeth and push mana to your bound hands, repeats his words and a sudden flash of electricity illuminates the room.'
 				'"It is evident that I''m a great teacher <<$pcs_lastname>>, so how will you thank me?"'
 
                 act 'It''s his turn':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy1':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Aleksei sits on the low table and grabs your hair, positioning you between his thighs, with a leg over one of your shoulders so you end up fixed in place. His hot, wet pussy is pushed firmly against your mouth.'
 					'"Remember my pet. Slow. We have all the time to enjoy us."'
-					'You can''t retort with your face firmly in his crotch. He relaxes and lets you pleasure him, his moans of pleasure signalling that you''re doing a good job. You slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a dominant display of pleasure.'
+					'You can''t retort with your face firmly in his crotch. He relaxes and lets you pleasure him, his moans of pleasure signaling that you''re doing a good job. You slowly raise his hips until you feel his climax in a dominant display of pleasure.'
 
 					act 'Resting':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy1':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
 						'This time, you can barely talk after the session and collapse over the table with a smug-looking, cigarette smoking Aleksei looking down at you with what you hope is satisfaction, because you are going to need some rest if he wants to encode.'
-						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I suppose that this lesson is over. It''s seems that the curse it''s stronger than i thought, but... We have learned something isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>? so... our deal is unchanged. I must clear up some facts, however. The truth is that this is only the beginning. I will escalate our methodology."'
+						'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, I suppose that this lesson is over. It seems that the curse is stronger than I thought, but... We have learned something isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>? so... our deal is unchanged. I must clear up some facts, however. The truth is that this is only the beginning. I will escalate our methodology."'
 						'He then kneels and again grabs you by your chin before continuing.'
 						'"You may dislike my methods, but at the end of the day, that is irrelevant. I have not had this sort of insight into Rikudo''s work in centuries, and I am not going to refuse it, so... this is the new deal <<$pcs_lastname>>. If you want the knowledge that I can impart, we will continue these <i>teaching sessions</i>."'
 						'He then removes the ropes and exits the room, leaving you to try and get to your feet.'
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N3.jpg"></center>'							   
 	'Lying down over Aleksei''s fluffy bed, you treat him with the vision of your hands caressing your body, arousing the flesh, trying and failing to elicit a reaction beyond amusement from your master.'
 	'"Hm... Okay, let''s continue with some thaumaturgic terms"'
-	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
+	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock-hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
 	'His lips in the nook of your neck signal the beginning as he slowly caresses and kisses his way down your body, words of power weaving magic all over your skin, making you heave and dig your fingers into the sheets as you let the wizard overload your senses.'
 	'You are groaning over a needed release as his face reaches your pussy and stops... He smells it and looks at you wickedly before he starts devouring your love button, making you climax in a torrent of magical force that wipes away all your tension and leaves you exhausted.'
 	'"You have done well, my new apprentice."'
@@ -373,9 +373,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N5.jpg"></center>'
 	'After being driven to an intense climax and learning more about the Electrical School, you can''t do anything more as a dutiful apprentice than show your master all the tricks you have learned.'
 	'"<<$pcs_lastname>>... Don''t rush, I''m not going anywhere."'
-	'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
+	'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei''s statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
 	'"Hm... Yes, my apprentice... Hm... You are doing well..."'
-	'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
+	'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hands travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 	'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei caresses your hair as you lie with your head in his pussy. You have not been able to make him scream like a bitch, but there is always another training lesson.'
 
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs2':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'								   
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
-	'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even more tight, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
+	'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even tighter, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
 	'"Repeat after me <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	'Maybe a little too soon, Aleksei grabs you by the chin so he can raise your face towards his so nothing obstructs the line of vision as words of power are pronounced and magic energy begins to fill the room as you follow his example and will your mana.'
 	'"Hm... Well, that will be all for now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
@@ -489,8 +489,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs3':
 	gs 'stat'							   
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes with your head between your teacher''s toned thighs that cross behind your neck so you can''t escape.'
-	'"Ah-Ah-Ah... With care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
-	'You eat out Aleksei, his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice making sure that you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it is not enough. Only elicit moans and even more nagging escape his mouth, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of his hand travels sensually down his body he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
+	'"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
+	'You eat out Aleksei, his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice making sure that you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it is not enough. Only elicit moans and even more nagging escape his mouth, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of his handw travels sensually down his body he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 	'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you catching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
 
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N3.jpg"></center>'
 	'Lying down over Aleksei''s fluffy bed, you treat him with the vision of your hands caressing your body, arousing the flesh, trying and failing to elicit a reaction beyond amusement from your master.'
 	'"Hm... Okay, let''s continue with some thaumaturgic terms"'
-	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
+	'With this, he lies on top of you, your rock-hard nipples poking against his perfect bosom and his amused gaze against your dilated pupils. You know that Aleksei won''t let you climax until he decides that the lesson is over.'
 	'His lips in the nook of your neck signal the beginning as he slowly caresses and kisses his way down your body, words of power weaving magic all over your skin, making you heave and dig your fingers into the sheets as you let the wizard overload your senses.'
 	'You are groaning over a needed release as his face reaches your pussy and stops... He smells it and looks at you wickedly before he starts devouring your love button, making you climax in a torrent of magical force that wipes away all your tension and leaves you exhausted.'
 	'"You have done well, my new apprentice."'
@@ -542,9 +542,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL1':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N5.jpg"></center>'
 			'After being driven to an intense climax and learning more about the Electrical School, you can''t do anything more as a dutiful apprentice than show your master all the tricks you have learned.'
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>... Don''t rush, I''m not going anywhere."'
-			'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
+			'A sardonic smile accompanies Aleksei''s statement as he lies comfortably on his bed, a hand caressing your head and marking your rhythm as you lap at his cunt and try with all your heart to break that confident facade and make him scream like a bitch.'
 			'"Hm... Yes, my apprentice... Hm... You are doing well..."'
-			'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
+			'You caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it''s not enough. Only elicit entertained half-smiles appear on his face, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hands travels sensually down his body and he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 			'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei caresses your hair as you lie with your head in his pussy. You have not been able to make him scream like a bitch, but there is always another training lesson.'
 
 			act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL1':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
-		'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even more tight, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
+		'After making you orgasm in a session of magical bondage, Aleksei reclines you against the wall and hovers over your tired form, the ropes, seemingly even tighter, digging into your itching flesh as he waits for you to catch your breath.'
 		'"Repeat after me <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 		'Maybe a little too soon, Aleksei grabs you by the chin so he can raise your face towards his so nothing obstructs the line of vision as words of power are pronounced and magic energy begins to fill the room as you follow his example and will your mana.'
 		'"Hm... Well, that will be all for now <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
@@ -604,7 +604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes with your head between your teacher''s toned thighs that cross behind your neck so you can''t escape.'
-			'"Ah-Ah-Ah... With care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
+			'"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
 			'You eat out Aleksei, his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice making sure that you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth and tongue, but it is not enough. Only elicit moans and even more nagging escape his mouth, pushing you a little more in a restless effort until you see him close his eyes and hear a change in his breathing as one of his hand travels sensually down his body he soon moans in constricted pleasure,'
 			'For the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you catching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
 
@@ -617,12 +617,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N7.jpg"></center>'
-    'Aleksei, don''t run to take away your clothes, in fact, he goes slow, taking with care every piece of your outfits and carefully folding them. You in the meantime bit your lips and moan, as every touch coming from the powerful wizard, sends a pleasant mana discharge up your body''s nerves.'
+    'Aleksei, don''t run to take away your clothes, in fact, he goes slow, taking with care every piece of your outfits and carefully folding them. You in the meantime bit your lips and moans, as every touch coming from the powerful wizard, sent a pleasant mana charge up your body''s nerves.'
     '"Good, my apprentice, good. You are learning to be patient and... <i>obedient</i>."'
-    'Blushing at the strange level of flattery on Aleksei''s voice, you <i>obedientlly</i> bend over the bed, so the now very naked wizard, have an easy job taking off the rest of your clothes. You don''t know what exactly he is perceiving, but you? a beautiful woman, with just the right amount of make-up in a well-lit room taken out from a film... Yes, <i>his</i> curse is bullshit.'
+    'Blushing at the strange level of flattery in Aleksei''s voice, you <i>obedientlly</i> bend over the bed, so the now very naked wizard, has an easy job taking off the rest of your clothes. You don''t know what exactly he is perceiving, but you? a beautiful woman, with just the right amount of make-up in a well-lit room taken out from a film... Yes, <i>his</i> curse is bullshit.'
     '"Nice my apprentice, very... nice. Now, sit on the headboard and present you to me."'
     'You don''t doubt, and wiggling your ass, climb unto the bed, exposing as much you can to the wizard and tantalizingly dragging yourself towards the headboard, where you sit on the fluffy pillows, and lean back, opening your legs so Aleksei has a close-up of your aroused pussy.'
-    'Aleksei stands beside the bed, obviously please as his eyes travel your body, then climb unto it, and kneel between your legs. The next moments pass in silence until Aleksei extends a hand and delicately grabs your chin, an amused smirk into his lips.'
+    'Aleksei stands beside the bed, obviously pleased as his eyes travel your body, then climbs unto it, and kneels between your legs. The next moments pass in silence until Aleksei extends a hand and delicately grabs your chin, an amused smirk on his lips.'
 
     act 'He goes down on you.':
         *clr & cla
@@ -631,11 +631,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
         gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 	    gs 'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N8.jpg"></center>'		
-        'The grab turns into a caress, that slowly goes down your neck towards your bust, where he stops a minute to slowly fondle your diamond hard nipples, seemingly pleased with the ragged moans, his mana-enhanced touch elicit. You in the meantime clench your teeth, grab the headboard, and somehow resist the urge to dip your hands between your tensed legs.'
+        'The grab turns into a caress, that slowly goes down your neck towards your bust, where he stops a minute to slowly fondle your diamond-hard nipples, seemingly pleased with the ragged moans, his mana-enhanced touch elicits. You in the meantime clench your teeth, grab the headboard, and somehow resist the urge to dip your hands between your tensed legs.'
         '"Hm... It''s seems that you have waited enough my apprentice. Let''s see if we can end this in a pleasant note."'
-        'Aleksei hand continue its travel towards your wetness, were sweetly, begin to push a finger between your drenched folds... and then stop. You gasp and instinctively try to move your hips to indulge your needs, but again and again, Aleksi moves away his finger, all the time an evil smile on his lips.'
-        '"Patience my aprentice... i don''t want to <i>feel</i> you... i want to <i>taste</i> you."'
-        'He then, begin to bend, first to kiss your bosom, and after that, to lick your blood-engorged love bud, at the same time, the until that moment quiescent fingers, begin to play with the rest of your aroused pussy. The room fills with your unrestricted sex-induced moans, accompanied by the sound of his mouth sucking your wet flesh. Aleksei barely contains your rising hips, as the constant stimulation, begins to charge your nerves with mana-enhanced arousal, quickly peeling away any rational thought, except the need for his tongue. Finally, the arousal is just too much and all the accumulated magical tension... explode... as your mind turns to mush and your body shakes in a mind-shattering orgasm.'
+        'Aleksei hand continues its travel towards your wetness, where sweetly, he begins to push a finger between your drenched folds... and then stop. You gasp and instinctively try to move your hips to indulge your needs, but again and again, Aleksi moves away his finger, all the time an evil smile on his lips.'
+        '"Patience my apprentice... I don''t want to <i>feel</i> you... i want to <i>taste</i> you."'
+        'He then, begin to bend, first to kiss your bosom, and after that, to lick your blood-engorged love bud, at the same time, the until that moment quiescent fingers, begin to play with the rest of your aroused pussy. The room fills with your unrestricted sex-induced moans, accompanied by the sound of his mouth sucking your wet flesh. Aleksei barely contains your rising hips, as the constant stimulation, begins to charge your nerves with mana-enhanced arousal, quickly peeling away any rational thought, except the need for his tongue. Finally, the arousal is just too much and all the accumulated magical tension... explodes... as your mind turns to mush and your body shakes in a mind-shattering orgasm.'
         
         act 'Learn some magic':
             minut += 10
@@ -644,15 +644,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
             'Enjoying your mana-enhanced afterglow, you lie no-cuddling over Aleksei, with your head resting on his beautiful bust, as he caresses your scalp, his mind seeming on another place, probably thinking in whatever insights your magical link has shown him.'
             '"Enough <<$pcs_lastname>>, is time to continue your training."'
-            'Aleksei accompany his words with a pair of finger taps to the back of your head before rolling, putting you two on your side, and grabbing your face with both hands, begin to say words of power. You shortly join in a magical duet, filling your mind with knowledge. Finally, instinctively, you interlock a hand, with one of Aleksei''s ones, and extending the united member, you concentrate to unleash a shower of sparks in the middle of the bedroom.' 
-            'The magical display only last a second, and end with you looking into Aleksei''s amused eyes... then, something catches your attention... from the corner of the eye, you see a strange item... a transparent dildo has found its way to Aleksei''s fluffy bed, and sit innocently by your side - <i>AlExAnDrIa HaVe a BeAuTiFuLl RuMp IsN''t It?</i> - You blink at the strange thought, and look down at the sex toy - <i>YeS, ShE WiLl ApPrEcIaTe A LiTtLe LoVe DoWn ThErE</i> - Yeah! That is a great idea!'
+            'Aleksei accompanies his words with a pair of finger taps to the back of your head before rolling, putting you two on your side, and grabbing your face with both hands, begin to say words of power. You shortly join in a magical duet, filling your mind with knowledge. Finally, instinctively, you interlock a hand, with one of Aleksei''s ones, and extending the united member, you concentrate to unleash a shower of sparks in the middle of the bedroom.' 
+            'The magical display only lasts a second, and with you looking into Aleksei''s amused eyes... then, something catches your attention... from the corner of the eye, you see a strange item... a transparent dildo has found its way to Aleksei''s fluffy bed, and sit innocently by your side - <i>AlExAnDrIa HaVe a BeAuTiFuLl RuMp IsN''t It?</i> - You blink at the strange thought, and look down at the sex toy - <i>YeS, ShE WiLl ApPrEcIaTe A LiTtLe LoVe DoWn ThErE</i> - Yeah! That is a great idea!'
             
             act 'FiRsT, TaStE HeR':
                 *clr & cla
                 gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	            gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N10.jpg"></center>'
-                'You smile and try to put as much sultriness you can on your next words "Master! Will you let your <i>obedient</i> apprentice to <i>requite</i> your largesse?" Aleksei don''t answers but look at you with curiosity, and you take that like a keep going. You, then push him to his side until he is on all fours.'
+                'You smile and try to put as much sultriness you can on your next words "Master! Will you let your <i>obedient</i> apprentice to <i>requite</i> your largesse?" Aleksei don''t answers but looks at you with curiosity, and you take that like a keep going. You, then push him to his side until he is on all fours.'
                 '"Let me <i>serve</i> you master."'
                 'Kneeling by his side, you bend and begin a trail of kisses, down her back towards his buttocks, where with care, you open them and proceed to cover with kisses his puckered hole, all the way feeling Aleksei''s tenseness through your lips. He quickly loses that strain and with care, you begin to stick your tongue into the supernaturally clean b-hole.'
                 'There is a jolt of... something... and your head is flooded with the taste of... a thunderstorm annihilating an army, of old musty books whispering dark secrets and of... agelessness. You blink, your <i>mundane</i> mind trying to understand the alien tastes, but... your growing <i>magical</i> one? Just delight on the taste of true power.'
@@ -665,12 +665,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
                     gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	                gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N11.jpg"></center>'
-                    'Cleaning your mouth with the back of a hand after your feast, you rise and look to an expectant Aleksei. He is obviously flustered and heaving, but his eyes look at you with curiosity, waiting for your next move that is, slide a hand down his tummy towards his drenched cunt. During a moment, your hand plays with Aleksei''s well-groomed bush before change objectives, and finger his wet snatch.'
-                    'Aleksei give a contented sigh and languidly rest his head in the bed, surrendering completely to your ministrations. You take cue of this, and without stopping your attack to his box, you grab the dildo, that soon finds itself against Aleksei''s backdoor, and with care, you begin to push.'
+                    'Cleaning your mouth with the back of a hand after your feast, you rise and look to an expectant Aleksei. He is obviously flustered and heaving, but his eyes look at you with curiosity, waiting for your next move that is, slide a hand down his tummy towards his drenched cunt. During a moment, your hand plays with Aleksei''s well-groomed bush before changing objectives, and finger his wet snatch.'
+                    'Aleksei gives a contented sigh and languidly rests his head in the bed, surrendering completely to your ministrations. You take cue of this, and without stopping your attack to his box, you grab the dildo, that soon finds itself against Aleksei''s backdoor, and with care, you begin to push.'
                     '"Hmmm..."'
-                    'Aleksei pleasured wailings, fill your ears, as you begin to love with daintiness, his accommodating innards, slowly, but without pause, rising the cranky wizard excitement. You are totally engrossed in the act to give him a well-deserved orgasm, and in a reciprocity gesture - and with flexibility worthy of porn - Aleksei turn slightly to grab your face and look into your eyes.'
+                    'Aleksei pleasured wailings, fill your ears, as you begin to love with daintiness, his accommodating innards, slowly, but without pause, rising the cranky wizard excitement. You are totally engrossed in the act to give him a well-deserved orgasm, and in a reciprocity gesture - and with flexibility worthy of porn - Aleksei turns slightly to grab your face and look into your eyes.'
                     '"Ahhh..."' 
-                    'You are so utterly lost into Aleksei''s eyes, that barely hears the orgasmic moan, that accompanies his climax. He trembles and through your skin contact, feel the shivers that signal the highlight of all your work before his limbs fail, and Aleksei drops boneless in orgasmic bliss.'
+                    'You are so utterly lost in Aleksei''s eyes, that barely hears the orgasmic moan, that accompanies his climax. He trembles and through your skin contact, feel the shivers that signal the highlight of all your work before his limbs fail, and Aleksei drops boneless in orgasmic bliss.'
 
                     act 'No-Cuddling':
                         *clr & cla
@@ -695,11 +695,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nice2':
 						end
                         gs 'stat'
                         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
-                        'No-cuddling again, over Aleksei''s comfortable bosom, you somewhat startled, observe the disintegrating dildo on his hands. Now that your <i>teaching lesson</i> has ended, you can see with clarity how Aleksei''s curse has manipulated you again.'
+                        'No-cuddling again, over Aleksei''s comfortable bosom, you somewhat startled, observe the disintegrating dildo in his hands. Now that your <i>teaching lesson</i> has ended, you can see with clarity how Aleksei''s curse has manipulated you again.'
                         '"Fascinating! Isn''t it <<$pcs_lastname>>? Your magic interacts with my curse, in truly interesting ways! Beyond altering your thought patterns and senses, now we have <i>Creatio ex nihilo</i>! All of this without true volition!"'
                         'Aleksei doesn''t seems to mind that his curse has basically made you a brainwashed <i>ass</i> crazy, that essentially has had her way with his butt, in fact, he seems genuinely in a good mood after the whole act, as he is caressing your hair as he muses over the whole situation.'
-                        '"Well, it has been illuminating, but i think that this <i>teaching lesson</i> has come to an end, and i must think in how to <i>reward</i> you the next time <<$pcs_lastname>>"'
-                        'He says this as the dildo finally disappear, and during a moment, Aleksei observes the know empty hand, before takin it towards your buttocks and... slice a finger towards your asshole, where he plays a little with it, before rise up from the bed, re-dress and leave the room.'
+                        '"Well, it has been illuminating, but I think that this <i>teaching lesson</i> has come to an end, and I must think on how to <i>reward</i> you the next time <<$pcs_lastname>>"'
+                        'He says this as the dildo finally disappears and during a moment, Aleksei observes the know empty hand, before taking it towards your buttocks and... slice a finger towards your asshole, where he plays a little with it, before rising up from the bed, re-dress and leave the room.'
                         act 'Redress and follow him.':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'tractatus'
                     end
                 end
@@ -751,22 +751,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy2':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G10.jpg"></center>'
                 'Aleksei returns to your sigh and sits on the stool, a smirk on his lips as he lights another cigar and observes you squirm and sob. The sensations are overwhelming. You suffer painful cramps all over your bound limbs... Your asshole burns after the <i>cleaning</i> and the rubbing <i>analhook</i>... but the WORST is that you are incredibly aroused, and beyond moaning or grunting, there is nothing that you can do to quell the burn in your loins.'
                 '"Don''t worry <<$pcs_lastname>>! Just relax! We have all the time in the world!"'
-                'Aleksei look at you with the most beatific expression that you have ever seen, like he, in His infinite goodness, is doing you a favor. The mocking display extends several minutes that don''t help your arousal before he finally gets up and after delicately rearranging your hair, walk away beyond your line of sight.'
+                'Aleksei look at you with the most beatific expression that you have ever seen, like he, in His infinite goodness, is doing you a favor. The mocking display extends several minutes that don''t help your arousal before he finally gets up and after delicately rearranging your hair, walks away beyond your line of sight.'
                 '"BRRRRR"'
-                'Aleksei press a vibrating-something against your needed clit, at the same time, he uses his other hand to play with your vagina and asshole. "Oh, God!" You scream in surprise to the creator, trash against the tight ropes that dig into your skin, and lose all reasoning, as finally, Aleksei decide to <i>play</i> with your needy cunt and anus, but <i>somehow</i>, even with that, you can''t reach the climax.'
+                'Aleksei presses a vibrating something against your needed clit, at the same time, he uses his other hand to play with your vagina and asshole. "Oh, God!" You scream in surprise to the creator, trash against the tight ropes that dig into your skin, and lose all reasoning, as finally, Aleksei decides to <i>play</i> with your needy cunt and anus, but <i>somehow</i>, even with that, you can''t reach the climax.'
                 '"Good <<$pcs_lastname>>, good, now you can have your release."'
-                'With that words, <i>something</i> magical click in your head, and all the tension accumulated against your core, explode in a body-shaking magical orgasm, making you give a silent scream as all your muscles tense fighting against the ropes.'
+                'With those words, <i>something</i> magical clicks in your head, and all the tension accumulated against your core, explodes in a body-shaking magical orgasm, making you give a silent scream as all your muscles tense fighting against the ropes.'
                 
                 act 'Learn some magic':
                     *clr & cla
                     minut += 10
 	                gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G11.jpg"></center>'
-                    'It takes a while for your mind, to get clear from the mana-enhanced <i>petite mort</i>, and perceive a silent Aleksei looking intensely into your eyes. He then, when finally realize that you are more or less cognizant, rise your head by your hair... and kiss you. It''s only a moment, and immediately, he withdraws his head but maintaining your lower lip between his teeth... There is sharp sensation, pain and you taste blood... He has bitten your lip!'
+                    'It takes a while for your mind, to get clear from the mana-enhanced <i>petite mort</i>, and perceive a silent Aleksei looking intensely into your eyes. He then, when finally realizes that you are more or less cognizant, raises your head by your hair... and kisses you. It''s only a moment, and immediately, he withdraws his head but maintains your lower lip between his teeth... There is a sharp sensation, pain and you taste blood... He has bitten your lip!'
                     '"Now <<$pcs_lastname>>, let''s see if you can learn something."'
-                    'Uncaring, Aleksei twist your head and put his mouth beside your ear. Then, words of power began to push into your mana-overloaded brain, building the foundations for a new spell. Somehow, you push over the discomforts and pains, and join Aleksei in a magical duet, that little by little begins to channel all your overflowing mana in a sudden lightning flash, that send sparks flying all over the room.'
+                    'Uncaring, Aleksei turns your head and puts his mouth beside your ear. Then, words of power began to push into your mana-overloaded brain, building the foundations for a new spell. Somehow, you push over the discomforts and pains, and join Aleksei in a magical duet, that little by little begins to channel all your overflowing mana in a sudden lightning flash, that sends sparks flying all over the room.'
                     '"Nice <<$pcs_lastname>>... very nice..."'
-                    'Aleksei then, take away your ropes, making you fall down painfully, before return to the stool, and open his thighs.'
+                    'Aleksei then, take away your ropes, making you fall down painfully, before returning to the stool, and opening his thighs.'
   
                     act 'You get the message':
                         *clr & cla
@@ -778,9 +778,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy2':
                         '"What are you waiting <<$pcs_lastname>>? You are a will-worker! Just come here!"'
                         '<i>Encoraged</i> by Aleksei''s words, you fight against cramps, soreness, pain, and the blood in your mouth to somehow rise to a doggy position. The next crawl towards the waiting wizard, eternalizes, as you fight to move your sleeping extremities.'
                         '"Only a litte more <<$pcs_lastname>>!"'
-                        'Finally, breathless, you reach between Aleksei''s spread legs, where he grab your hair and forcefully makes you dip into his beautiful pink box. Understanding what is expecting from you, you open your mouth and begin to eat the cranky wizard only for another jolt of mana to shake your mind... tasting... a thunderstorm annihilating an army, old musty books whispering dark secrets and... agelessness. You blink, your <i>mundane</i> mind trying to understand the alien tastes, but... your growing <i>magical</i> one? Just delight on the taste of true power.'
+                        'Finally, breathless, you reach between Aleksei''s spread legs, where he grabs your hair and forcefully makes you dip into his beautiful pink box. Understanding what he is expecting from you, you open your mouth and begin to eat the cranky wizard only for another jolt of mana to shake your mind... tasting... a thunderstorm annihilating an army, old musty books whispering dark secrets and... agelessness. You blink, your <i>mundane</i> mind trying to understand the alien tastes, but... your growing <i>magical</i> one? Just delight in the taste of true power.'
                         '"Hm... ¨You are learning <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-                        'Suddenly, you are re-energized and launch yourself to devour Aleksei''s pink bottom. Your hands grabbing firmly his thigs as you try to drink on Aleksei''s <i>unearthly</i> flavor, filling the room with the sound of your lapping, and Aleksei''s silent moans, until you sense him tensing as he climaxes.'
+                        'Suddenly, you are re-energized and launch yourself to devour Aleksei''s pink bottom. Your hands grabbing firmly his thighs as you try to drink on Aleksei''s <i>unearthly</i> flavor, filling the room with the sound of your lapping, and Aleksei''s silent moans, until you sense him tensing as he climaxes.'
 
                         act 'Some afterwords':
                             *clr & cla
@@ -809,9 +809,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grumpy2':
 						    end
                             gs 'stat'
                             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G4.jpg"></center>'
-                            'A pleased Aleksei look down at your prone form, too sore and tired to do much more than heave in the floor, but.... strangely, coming out utterly satisfied from the rough treatment. After some moments of introspective smoking, he bent, grab your chin, and look into your eyes.'
+                            'A pleased Aleksei looks down at your prone form, too sore and tired to do much more than heave in the floor, but.... strangely, coming out utterly satisfied from the rough treatment. After some moments of introspective smoking, he bent, grabbed your chin, and looked into your eyes.'
                             '"<<$pcs_lastname>>, It''s evident to me, that you have enjoyed this lesson beyond whatever the curse made you feel... What do you think about that? Hm? Well, at the end of the day it''s unimportant, as it seems that you can''t learn without discipline."'
-                            'Saying this, Aleksei rise, grab his carefully folded clothes, and exits the room, leaving your slowly recovering body on the floor, until with a great deal of willpower you manage to get up.'
+                            'Saying this, Aleksei rises, grabs his carefully folded clothes, and exits the room, leaving your slowly recovering body on the floor, until with a great deal of willpower you manage to get up.'
                             
                             act 'Redress and follow him.':gt 'alexandriaChat', 'tractatus'
                         end
@@ -827,11 +827,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL2':
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/moaning6.mp3',10
     gs 'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N8.jpg"></center>'
-    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, get himself naked and crawl towards you.'
+    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, gets himself naked and crawls towards you.'
     '"Good, my apprentice, good. You are learning to be patient and... <i>obedient</i>."'
-    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begin the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives a well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, do his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
+    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begins the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, do his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
     '"So be it, my apprentice."'
-    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begin to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimate your body in an orgasmic wave.'
+    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begins to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimates your body in an orgasmic wave.'
     'After this, you slide down the headboard and cuddle with Aleksei so you can continue with your <i>lesson</i>.'
 
     act 'Continue':
@@ -839,10 +839,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL2':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
         'After getting eaten by Aleksei, and being overflowed with mana, you lie over his comfortable bust. He doesn''t seems to dislike your need to cuddle and scratch lazily your scalp.'
-        '"Ok, my aprrentice, that is enought procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
-        'He then, grab your head and look deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
+        '"Ok, my apprentice, that is enough procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
+        'He then, grabs your head and looks deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
         '"Good my apprentice... good... now show me."'
-        'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminated the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
+        'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminates the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
 		
         act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -868,9 +868,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nL2':
 			end
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N10.jpg"></center>'
-            'Aleksei has made you climax, and fill your mind with arcane knowledge, so is time to being reciprocal and give something back to your master, so... you put him in his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
-            'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue dig into that delicious hole - a light sigh in his lips as the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reach towards his pubic mound and play with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
-            'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caress your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
+            'Aleksei has made you climax, and fill your mind with arcane knowledge, so it is time to reciprocate and give something back to your master, so... you put him in his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
+            'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue digs into that delicious hole - a light sigh on his lips as the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reaches towards his pubic mound and plays with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
+            'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caresses your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
             'After this, you again cuddle with him thinking in your lessons, until he pats lightly your backhead, to signal the end of your little runt.'
 
             act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -885,18 +885,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G10.jpg"></center>'
     'Aleksei, ties you with ropes in utter silence, ignoring your grunts of pain, as your body is bound so you can''t enact any move. When he is sure you can''t move your extremities, he hangs you face down from the ceiling. Aleksei then, takes away slowly his clothes, letting you come under cramps as he ignores your suffering.'
     '"Well... Let''s begin <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei, disappear from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and push a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
-    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, play with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that work your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
+    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei disappears from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and pushes a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
+    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, plays with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that, he works your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
     
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G11.jpg"></center>'
-        'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully make you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he rises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bit slightly your lips.'
+        'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully making you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he raises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bite your lips slightly.'
         'Pay attention <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-        'Aleksei put his mouth beside your ear, and begin to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
+        'Aleksei puts his mouth beside your ear and begins to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
         'Hm... Well done <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-        'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, release the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
+        'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, releases the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
         
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -926,8 +926,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gL2':
 			end
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
-            'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thigs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
-            '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Whit care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
+            'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thighs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
+            '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
             'And you munch... and munch... with Aleksei''s hand in your head, marking the rhythm, and his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice, so you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth, and tongue... and is not enough... only elicit more nagging from the elder wizard, pushing you a little more, in a restless effort... until you see him close the eyes, and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually his body, and soon the blonde, moan in constricted pleasure,'
             'During the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you, recatching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
             
@@ -959,11 +959,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns4':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N8.jpg"></center>'
-    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, get himself naked and crawl towards you.'
+    '<i>Obediently</i>, you take your clothes for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you crawl towards the bed''s headboard for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... <i>Obediently</i> you sit on the fluffy pillows and open your legs for the enjoyment of your <i>master</i>... Then, you watch in silence as a chuckling Aleksei, gets himself naked and crawls towards you.'
     '"Good, my apprentice, good. You are learning to be patient and... <i>obedient</i>."'
-    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begin the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives a well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, do his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
+    'He then, caress delicately your chin and giving you a half-smile begins the long-road towards your burning sex, taking care that your bosom receives some well-earned attention, making your sigh as goosebumps trigger all over your skin. The next minutes pass with you heaving and moaning as Aleksei, does his dammest to impede you from cum! He eats and caresses your cunt, only to retreat and observe pleased at you squirm obediently, wetting his sheets and forcing yourself to don''t rush your hands towards your sex, until you finally can''t stop and plead.'
     '"So be it, my apprentice."'
-    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begin to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimate your body in an orgasmic wave.'
+    'Then, and only then, Aleksei let your arousal rise without impediment under his ministrations. You moan, scream and trash as mana begins to gather in your core, in sync with your sexual excitement, until you climax and a torrent of power sublimates your body in an orgasmic wave.'
     'After this, you slide down the headboard and cuddle with Aleksei so you can continue with your <i>lesson</i>.'
 	
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -993,10 +993,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns5':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N9.jpg"></center>'
     'After getting eaten by Aleksei, and being overflowed with mana, you lie over his comfortable bust. He doesn''t seems to dislike your need to cuddle and scratch lazily your scalp.'
-    '"Ok, my aprrentice, that is enought procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
-    'He then, grab your head and look deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
+    '"Ok, my apprentice, that is enough procrastination, is time for your next <i>lesson</i>"'
+    'He then, grabs your head and looks deep into your eyes. His mouth opens and unearthly words fill your head with arcane knowledge. Little by little you join him in a duet, at first labored but soon easily as you work through your magical connection.'
     '"Good my apprentice... good... now show me."'
-    'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminated the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
+    'You stir over Aleksei and extend a hand, soon, as you push mana through words of power, sparks begin to form between the fingers until there is an electrical flash, and magical lighting illuminates the room. Aleksei observe your demonstration with a critical eye, before assenting with approval. After that, is just you two, lazily lying in each other arms, before a sudden magical compulsion in the back of your head, made you move. Aleksei looks at you in understanding... is time to continue with his part of the <i>lesson</i>.'
 
     act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
 end
@@ -1024,9 +1024,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ns6':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/N10.jpg"></center>'
-    'Aleksei has made you climax, and fill your mind with arcane knowledge, so is time to being reciprocal and give something back to your master, so... you put him in his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
-    'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue dig into that delicious hole - a light sigh in his lips as the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reach towards his pubic mound and play with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
-    'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caress your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
+    'Aleksei has made you climax, and filled your mind with arcane knowledge, so it is time to reciprocate and give something back to your master, so... you put him on his fours, and delicately begin to kiss his back down to that beautiful rump that hides his little brown star.'
+    'He doesn''t stop you as your tongue digs into that delicious hole - a light sigh on his lips is the only reaction - and your mind is flooded with strange visions and sensations, as your magics <i>connect</i>, making you shudder as mana begin to flow between you two. Instinctively, one of your hands reaches towards his pubic mound and plays with his well-groomed bush... but that isn''t your final destination... After some moments, you reach to his perfect box, and begin to work.'
+    'The room fills with Aleksei''s dainty moans and your wet laps, as you edge his wet box and hot asshole, pleasuring the unflappable wizard. The only signal that he is getting near his climax, is when he finally caresses your face, so you turn and look into Aleksei''s eyes, as he cum.'
     'After this, you again cuddle with him thinking in your lessons, until he pats lightly your backhead, to signal the end of your little runt.'
     
     act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
@@ -1061,8 +1061,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G10.jpg"></center>'
     'Aleksei, ties you with ropes in utter silence, ignoring your grunts of pain, as your body is bound so you can''t enact any move. When he is sure you can''t move your extremities, he hangs you face down from the ceiling. Aleksei then, takes away slowly his clothes, letting you come under cramps as he ignores your suffering.'
     '"Well... Let''s begin <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei, disappear from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and push a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
-    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, play with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that work your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
+    'You contain your breath because you know what is going to happen. Aleksei disappears from your line of sight as he walks behind you, and push a finger up your rectum... "AHHHH!" You scream as an electrical jolt cleans your innards, and make you shake in your bounds... Then, without care for your sore asshole, Aleksei begins to smear some K-Y Jelly inside it. Your ragged breath fills the room at the mix of sensations as the Jelly touches the sensitive inner skin.'
+    '"Hmpf" That barely whispered grunt, is the only sound that occasionally says Aleksei to accompany your grunts and moans. He, with utter detachment, play with you, first stirring your asshole with an analhook and after that works your cunt with a magic wand. Your body suffers from painful cramps, your asshole is sore and stretched tight, and occasionally magical jolts shake your body. Even with all that you can negate your arousal, and little by little Aleksei manages to forcibly made you cum, triggering your core to suffuse your body in mana.'
     
     act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
 end
@@ -1094,11 +1094,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs5':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G11.jpg"></center>'
-    'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully make you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he rises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bit slightly your lips.'
+    'After hanging you from the ceiling, and forcefully making you climax, Aleksei stands in front of you. He smokes and seems strangely pleased with your squirming and sore form. Finally, after some moments of introspection, he rises your head by your hair, and kisses you, not forgetting to bit slightly your lips.'
     'Pay attention <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'Aleksei put his mouth beside your ear, and begin to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
+    'Aleksei put his mouth beside your ear and began to spell words of power. You fight through the numbness provoked by the manna-enhanced climax, your tired body, and sore limbs, managing to somehow join him in the spell crafting, and little by little something unearthly begins to form in the room. There is a flash and momentarily lighting illuminates the room.'
     'Hm... Well done <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-    'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, release the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
+    'After that, Aleksei rearranges your hair, before without too much fanfare, releases the ropes, that tie you, and you fall painfully to the ground, ready for your next <i>lesson</i>.'
 
 	act 'Redress and follow Aleksei':gt 'alexandriaHome', 'study'
 end
@@ -1130,8 +1130,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gs6':
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/sex/G5.jpg"></center>'
-    'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thigs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
-    '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Whit care <<$pcs_lastname>>, you aren''t a vulgar meretrix!"'
+    'After a session of magical bondage and some <i>teaching</i> from Aleksei, done in his unmistakable style, you find yourself, kneeling on hardwood, wrapped in bondage ropes and with your head between your teacher toned thighs, that cross behind your neck, so you can''t scape this munching session.'
+    '"Ah-Ah-Ah... Easy now, <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re not some common harlot!"'
     'And you munch... and munch... with Aleksei''s hand in your head, marking the rhythm, and his constant nagging and <i>helpfull</i> advice, so you <i>properly</i>, caress, lick, penetrate, sink, slurp and stroke all around his pussy using your fingers, mouth, and tongue... and is not enough... only elicit more nagging from the elder wizard, pushing you a little more, in a restless effort... until you see him close the eyes, and hear a change in his breathing as one of Aleksei''s hand travels sensually his body, and soon the blonde, moan in constricted pleasure,'
     'During the next minutes, a smug Aleksei sits relaxed, smoking a cigarette as he observes you, recatching your breath, a silent question in the air... do you want another session?'
 

locations/andreihunter.qsrc

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ else
 			if huntersAndreiQw < 10 : huntersAndreiQw += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 
 		if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ else
 										minut += 5
 										gs 'stat'
 
-										act'Continue':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+										act 'Continue': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 									end
 								end
 							end
@@ -145,11 +145,11 @@ else
 								huntersAndreiQw -= 50
 								gs 'stat'
 
-								act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+								act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 							end
 						end
 					end
-					act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+					act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Spend time together':
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ else
 					pcs_mood = 100
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+					act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 				if pcs_horny >= 60:
 					act 'Have sex':
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ else
 				end
 			end
 		end
-		act'Leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Leave': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 end
 

locations/anush_bedroom.qsrc

@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 										npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 										'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
-										'Once in bed, you waste no time pulling her clothes off, and she returns the favour and starts to remove your clothes as well. It would go much faster if the two of you weren''t also passionately kissing while caressing each others'' bodies. Regardless, you''re soon both naked.'
+										'Once in bed, you waste no time pulling her clothes off, and she returns the favor and starts to remove your clothes as well. It would go much faster if the two of you weren''t also passionately kissing while caressing each others'' bodies. Regardless, you''re soon both naked.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 										act 'Get pleasured': gt 'anushkaev1', 'getpleasured'
 									end
@@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
-			'Anushka''s eyes brighten up as you ask her. She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, strumming a few bars to check it''s still in tune. "I''ll play you the very first song I ever learned. It''s one of my dad''s favourites." She starts playing and then singing the song. It takes you a moment to recognize that she''s playing and singing ''Wanted Dead or Alive'' by Bon Jovi.'
+			'Anushka''s eyes brighten up as you ask her. She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar, strumming a few bars to check it''s still in tune. "I''ll play you the very first song I ever learned. It''s one of my dad''s favorites." She starts playing and then singing the song. It takes you a moment to recognize that she''s playing and singing ''Wanted Dead or Alive'' by Bon Jovi.'
 			*nl
 			'You''re impressed with her talent. She''s a good singer, better than some people you''ve heard on the radio, but is an even better guitar player. As she ends her song, you clap your hands. "Wow, I''ve heard you''re good, but I didn''t know that you were this good!"'
 			'She blushes at your compliment. "Thanks. I work hard at it, so it''s nice to be appreciated for it," she replies as she gets up and puts her guitar back in its place.'
@@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushplay.jpg"></center>'
-			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar. "Sure, I''ll play you something else. This is a lot more our generation." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it''s still in tune. "This is the first song Rad and I worked on learning together. It''s ''Make Me Wanna Die'' by The Pretty Reckless. It''s also when my obsession, and girl crush, with Taylor started."'
+			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar. "Sure, I''ll play you something else. This is a lot more our generation." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it''s still in tune. "This is the first song Rad and I worked on learning together. It''s ''Make Me Wanna Die'' by The Pretty Reckless. It''s also when my obsession, and girl crush, with Taylor, started."'
 			*nl
 			'She motions to the band poster on her wall. She starts playing and singing the new song; it still has that rock feel like the others, but is more modern.'
 			'She plays and sings just as well as before. When she ends her song, you clap your hands and praise her. "Another great song. You really are good at this."'
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 				'"What?" she asks, having been lost in thought.'
 				'"What you just said, about how he thought it was perfect for you guys and in the end, you guess he was right?" You don''t know if she was just being obtuse or evasive.'
 				*nl
-				'She turns silent, making you think she was being evasive and knew precisely what you meant, before she sighs. "Rad thinks I was a good girl playing a bad girl and that he corrupted me and made me fall in love with him and life. So to him, the song was always about that. He saw himself as the seductive charmer that drew me in."'
+				'She turns silent, making you think she was being evasive and knew precisely what you meant before she sighs. "Rad thinks I was a good girl playing a bad girl and that he corrupted me and made me fall in love with him and life. So to him, the song was always about that. He saw himself as the seductive charmer that drew me in."'
 				'She shrugs. "I suppose there''s a tiny bit of truth to that, but I was already well on my way to being a wild rocker chick by that point. He might have sped me into who I always was going to be, but he didn''t make me." She stops, but you know there''s more to it. You''re not sure she wants to talk about it though.'
 				act 'Let it go': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 				act 'Press it': 
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar':
 			'She reaches over and grabs the acoustic guitar. "Sure, I''ll play you something else. This one I learned shortly after seeing the uncensored music video for it." She strums the guitar and checks to ensure it''s still in tune. "It''s ''Heaven Knows'' by The Pretty Reckless."'
 			'She starts playing and singing the new song, playing and singing just as well as before. When she ends her piece, you clap your hands and praise her. "Another great song. You really are good at this."'
 			*nl
-			'Thanks. I still remember the first time I watch the music video for this." She bites her lower lip, clearly getting a little turned on thinking about it. "When Taylor pulled off her robe and flashed her naked body... Oh man, that was so fucking hot. I can''t lie; I''ve rubbed one out more times than I care to remember thinking about that scene while staring at that poster," she says while indicating The Pretty Reckless poster on her wall.'
+			'Thanks. I still remember the first time I watched the music video for this." She bites her lower lip, clearly getting a little turned on thinking about it. "When Taylor pulled off her robe and flashed her naked body... Oh man, that was so fucking hot. I can''t lie; I''ve rubbed one out more times than I care to remember thinking about that scene while staring at that poster," she says while indicating The Pretty Reckless poster on her wall.'
 			'You giggle and glance at the poster. You could see Anushka rubbing one out while looking at the poster. Thinking about her rubbing one out, laying on the bed she''s now on, is starting to make you a little horny. You shake your head to banish the thought and change the subject while she puts the guitar back in its place, talking about her future music career.'
 			act 'Continue':gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		elseif anushkaQW['guitar_play'] = 5:
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_play_together':
 		minut += 60
 		'You don''t make any mistakes and don''t have any trouble keeping up with her. In fact, you feel confident that you outplayed her. You play together for about an hour before she stops. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think you''re better than I am!" she says with a smile.'
 		'You return her smile. "Thanks. I''ve been working hard on trying to master it."'
-		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practising and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
+		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practicing and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
 		act 'Get off the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
 		act 'Chat to her': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end

locations/anush_bedroom_city.qsrc

@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush_guitar_play_together':
 		minut += 60
 		'You don''t make any mistakes and don''t have any trouble keeping up with her. In fact, you feel confident that you outplayed her. You play together for about an hour before she stops. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think you''re better than I am!" she says with a smile.'
 		'You return her smile. "Thanks. I''ve been working hard on trying to master it."'
-		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practising and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
+		'"Well, it sounds like it was time well spent. I had fun and think we should totally do this again." The two of you talk about your different styles of practicing and any tips or tricks you learned along the way that might help each other.'
 		act 'Get off the bed': gt 'anush_bedroom_city','anushroom'
 		act 'Chat to her': gt 'anushkachat_city', 'chat'
 	end

locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 	else
 		'Anushka is standing next to you, looking at you expectantly. "What''s up, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		act '<b>Leave Anushka''s apartment</b>': gt 'pav_complex','start'
-		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+		act 'Let''s go to your room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Let''s check on your brother': AnushkaLoc = 3 & gt 'anushaptbr','brotherroom'
 	end
 end
@@ -612,7 +612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She laughs a bit. "No, but he doesn''t know that. However, if he doesn''t or he keeps being mean to you, come get me. I will kick his ass for you, OK?"'
 		'He nods all happy and gets up from the table. He tries to dart out of the room, but she manages to give him a one armed hug that he tries his best to squirm away from. He manages to finally break free, then he hurries out of the kitchen.'
 		'She stands up and looks at you. "Got everything?" When you nod, she says "Sweet, let''s go back to my room."'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	elseif snacktime <= 5 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week >= 6 and (hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))):
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
 			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
-			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		end
 
 		act 'Yes':
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'He smirks to her. "Ok... yeah... They may have had a little bit to do with it as well."'
 			'As the two of you walk out of the kitchen and back towards her room, he follows you both out and heads for the living room. "Have fun girls... but not too much fun."'
 			'Anushka looks back, and in a exacerbated tone says "Dad!" before she leads you back into her room'
-			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+			act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 		end
 	elseif snacktime <= 7 and anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 0:
 		anushkaQW['valeria_introduced'] = 1
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 			'Instead of getting angry, her mom just laughs. "You''re one to talk. We both know you''re a clingy, needy, little slut that will do anything to get anyone to pay attention to you. The only reason you''re in that band of yours is because you slept your way into it and continue to be their slut just so they will let you stay."'
 			'Anushka raises her hand like she might hit her mother. For a tense moment, you think she might, but then she lowers it. "You don''t know anything about me! You''ve never wanted to know anything about me! I fucking hate you! I wish you would just fucking leave if you hate it here so much!" With that, she turns and grabs some snacks. She pushes them into your hands so hard and fast that you are barely able to keep hold of them as she says "Come on, let''s go."'
 			'Her mother shakes her head. "That''s right! Go running to your room and cry like you have always done when you are faced with the truth. I can''t believe I raised such a pathetic excuse of a daughter."'
-			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+			act 'Follow Anushka back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 					'You can''t take listening to Valeria talk about your friend like that anymore. "You''re wrong! Anushka is a better person than you will ever be! If you would just talk to her for once instead of at her, you might realize just how great she really is!"'
 					'Anushka smiles at you and obviously appreciates what you said. Her mom just gives you a look of complete disgust. "You must be another one of those disgusting lesbians." she says scornfully before shooting an equally disgusted look at her daughter. "It is so sinful and shameful, but I guess I can''t expect my daughter to hang out with anyone decent." With that, she turns back to her cooking.'
 					'Anushka grabs you by the arm before you can say more. "Come on, let''s go. She just isn''t worth it."'
-					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+					act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Defend Anushka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'snack':
 		'She gets up and heads to the kitchen with you, the two of you talking and laughing the whole way.'
 		'As you walk into the kitchen, Anushka points to a refrigerator. "Grab some drinks out of the fridge and anything else good."'
 		'While you are doing that, she grabs a couple of snack cakes and chips from the cabinets, and once you both have your spoils from your raid on the kitchen, you head back to her room.'
-		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt'anush_bedroom','anushroom'
+		act 'Back to her room':AnushkaLoc=2& gt 'anush_bedroom', 'anushroom'
 	end
 	killvar 'snacktime'
 end
@@ -1370,7 +1370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstvisit':
 	end	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/etaj4.jpg"></center>'
 	'Anushka leads you to her apartment, and the two of you talk a bit as you go. It''s nothing important, just idle small talk to pass the time. Once on the fourth floor of her building, she leads you to apartment 17. It''s one of the corner apartments. You know from your own building these are the bigger three bedroom apartments. She unlocks the door with her keys and leads you inside. "Let''s see if my dad is home." she tells you as she leads you to the living room.'
-	act 'Continue': AnushkaLoc = 5 & gt'anushapt','livingroom'
+	act 'Continue': AnushkaLoc = 5 & gt 'anushapt', 'livingroom'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nushlivroom':

locations/artem_date_events_uni.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstdate':
 	npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/walk_<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enjoy a pleasant walk in the around the quad while making small talk with Artem.'
+	'You enjoy a pleasant walk around the quad while making small talk with Artem.'
 	'After a while, you end up near the small movie theater on campus. Artem''s eyes light up when he sees it. "Hey, let''s go see a movie!"'
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'

locations/artem_dorm.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/dorm/artemroom/artem_dorm_room.jpg"></center>'
 	'The dorm room has two beds. The one on the left belongs to Artem''s roommate while the one on the right is Artem''s.' 
 	if $locat['A2'] = 'dormroom_ studying_or _relaxing':
-		'Above his bed is a small <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''bookshelf''">bookshelf</a> full of books, and the wall is plastered with sci-fi, fantasy, anime and super hero posters. At the foot of his bed is a small desk with a <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''computer''">laptop</a> on it. Artem is sitting on a couch facing a tv against the wall.'
+		'Above his bed is a small <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''bookshelf''">bookshelf</a> full of books, and the wall is plastered with sci-fi, fantasy, anime and super hero posters. At the foot of his bed is a small desk with a <a href="exec:gt ''artem_dorm'',''computer''">laptop</a> on it. Artem is sitting on a couch facing a TV sitting against the wall.'
 	elseif $locat['A2'] = 'dormroom_asleep':
 		'Artem is getting ready to go to sleep, so you better leave.'
 	else
@@ -74,7 +74,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bookshelf':
 		act 'Ask to borrow a book':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
-			gs 'stat'
 			artemQW['artfall'] += 1
 			artem_borrowed_book = 1
 			artembook = 5
@@ -97,11 +96,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bookshelf':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artem_dorm/artemroom/bookshelf.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I brought your book back," you tell him as you take it out of your purse and put it back in place on the shelf, right where you got it from.'
-			'"Did you like it?"'
+			'"Did you like it?" he asks.'
 			act 'I did':
 				cla
 				'"Yeah, it was good."'
-				'Artem''s face lights and he joins you at the bookshelf. "Yeah, I really liked that one too."'
+				'His face lights up and he joins you at the bookshelf. "Yeah, I really liked that one too."'
 				act 'Look at more books': gt 'artem_dorm','bookshelf'
 				act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 			end
@@ -109,9 +108,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bookshelf':
 				cla
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
 				if pcs_intel <= 40:
-					'"It was a bit complicated for me," you admit, embarrassed.'
+					'"It was a bit complicated for me," you admit, feeling a little embarrassed.'
 				else
-					'"It was a bit too bland for me. In the end, it just bored me. I could guess the outcome right at the start, and it turned out I was right."'
+					'"It was a bit bland and just bored me in the end. I could guess the outcome right at the start, and it turned out I was right."'
 				end
 				'Artem looks crushed at your answer.'				
 				act 'Look at more books': gt 'artem_dorm','bookshelf'
@@ -138,9 +137,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Go online': gt 'Komp', 'start'
 		act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 	else
-		'You look at the computer, then at Artem. Artem meets your gaze... and breaks into a smile. "Go ahead and use it if you want. I don''t mind."'
+		'You look at the computer, then at Artem. He meets your gaze and breaks into a smile. "Go ahead and use it if you want. I don''t mind."'
 		act 'Go online': gt 'Komp', 'start'
-		act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
+		act 'Find something else to look at': gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -170,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Artem''s Dorm Room</font></h4></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/hugging.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you sit beside him, you look at him for maybe a bit too long because he turns to look at you. You lean over to give him a kiss and he returns it fully.'
+				'As you sit beside him, you perhaps look at him a little too long because he turns to look at you. You lean over to give him a kiss and he returns it fully.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop kissing and talk': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
@@ -178,7 +177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Artem''s Dorm Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
-					'He pulls you in close and you''re soon passionately making out, the kisses full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more aroused as he scoots back until his back is against the wall and he pulls you onto his lap. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you straddle him.'
+					'He pulls you in close and you''re soon passionately making out, the kisses full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more aroused as he scoots back against the wall and pulls you onto his lap. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you straddle him.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Stop making out': 
@@ -213,7 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... not yet. I want to wait still."'
+								'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... Not yet. I still want to wait."'
 								'He looks visibly disappointed, but nods and smiles. "Sure, I understand. I don''t want to pressure you, so whenever you''re ready is fine."'
 								act 'Talk to him': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 							end
@@ -241,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-									'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... not yet. I want to wait still."'
+									'You pull your hand away and climb off him. "No, I can''t... Not yet. I still want to wait."'
 									'He looks visibly disappointed, but nods and smiles. "Sure, I understand. I don''t want to pressure you, so whenever you''re ready is fine."'
 									act 'Talk to him': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 								end
@@ -259,7 +258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem smiles at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to go for a walk in the quad?"'
+		'Artem smiles at you. "Do you want to go for a walk on the quad?"'
 		act 'Stay here': 
 			*clr & cla
 			artemQW['artfall'] -= 4
@@ -275,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure, we could go for a walk. That sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure. That sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave the dorm room with him, heading for the quad.'
 			act 'Walk in the quad': gt 'artem_date_events_uni','firstdate'
 		end
@@ -283,7 +282,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem smiles at you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, would you like to go out on a date?"'
+		'Artem smiles at you. "Would you like to go out on a date?"'
 		act 'Stay here': 
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
@@ -298,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure, we can go out on a date. That sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure. That sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave his dorm room with him.'
 			act 'Go on a date': gt 'artem_date_events_uni','artem_date'
 		end
@@ -306,7 +305,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem has an embarrassed look on his face when he says:'
+		'Artem has an embarrassed look on his face.'
 		if artemQW['stripsee'] = 0:
 			'"You know... I''ve never seen a girl naked before. Only in pictures... Maybe you could..."'
 		else
@@ -318,14 +317,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/flowers.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you sit down to talk, Artem suddenly produces a bouquet of flowers and offers it to you. "I got these for you, I hope you like them."'
+		'As you sit down to talk, Artem suddenly produces a bouquet of flowers and offers it to you. "I got these for you. I hope you like them."'
 		act 'Accept the flowers':
 			*clr & cla
 			$giftedflowers = 'Artem'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'adore'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
-			'You smile at him and mutter, "Awww, they''re beautiful! You shouldn''t have!"'
+			'You smile at him. "Awww, they''re beautiful! You shouldn''t have!"'
 			'He blushes. "Not as beautiful as you..."'
 			'He leans in and kisses you before you can pull away and gently begins to caress your <<$titsize>> breasts through your clothes.'
 			minut += 2
@@ -338,7 +337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You push his hands away. "Wait... You''re going too fast, please stop!"'
-					'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes.'
+					'He does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes.'
 					act 'Just talk': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 				end
 			else
@@ -347,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			act 'Enjoy his touch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
-				'You return his kiss as his hands keep awkwardly groping at your breasts. He sits with his back against the wall and pulls you on top of him. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you keep making out. After a few seconds, he takes one of your hands and pulls it down to his crotch.'
+				'You return his kiss as his hands keep awkwardly groping at your breasts before he sits with his back against the wall and pulls you on top of him. You can feel the hard bulge in his pants as you keep making out. After a few seconds, he takes one of your hands and pulls it down to his crotch.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Give him a handjob': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'hj'
@@ -378,14 +377,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/flowerstrash.jpg"></center>'
 			'You look at Artem compassionately, but don''t take the flowers. "Thank you... They''re very nice, but we''re just friends... I don''t want to give you the wrong idea by accepting them, you know?"'
 			'Artem sighs, and disappointedly throws the flowers into the trash.'
-			'After a couple of minutes of awkwardness as you try and talk to him but it is obvious he no longer feels like talking to you, you finally make your goodbyes and get up and leave his dorm room.'
+			'There''s a few minutes of awkwardness as you try and talk to him, but it''s obvious he no longer feels like talking to you, so you get up and leave his dorm room.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
 	elseif artemQW['date'] >= 6 and artemQW['date'] <= 8 and artemQW['dateask'] ! daystart:
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem smiles at you as he walks over and hugs you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, would you like to go out on another date?"'
+		'Artem smiles at you as he walks over and hugs you. "Would you like to go out on another date?"'
 		act 'Stay here': 
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
@@ -400,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artemQW['date'] += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure, we can go out on a date. That sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile. "Sure. That sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave his dorm room with him.'
 			act 'Go on a date': gt 'artem_date_events_uni','artem_date'
 		end
@@ -417,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		'Artem reassures you. "Relax, <<$pcs_nickname>>. My roommate will be out all night. So please... Let''s just sit down and chat?"'
 		'You relax a little and nod at him. "Okay... I have to admit, that does sound nice."'
 		'You spend the next half hour talking about your plans for the future. The bottle of wine is empty before you know it, and you feel a bit tipsy.'
-		'After you''ve drank most of the wine and talked for a while, Artem is silent for a few seconds before he asks "<<$pcs_nickname>>, will you be my girlfriend?"'
+		'After you''ve drank most of the wine and talked for a while, Artem is silent for a few seconds before he takes a deep breath. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, will you be my girlfriend?" he quickly asks.'
 		minut += 30
 		if pcs_hydra >= 100:
 			pcs_hydra -= 5
@@ -426,20 +425,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		end
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'wine', 2
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Tell him no':
+		act 'No':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', -25
 			artemQW['artembrokenheart'] = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/artemcry.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head. "I''m sorry if you got the wrong impression Artem. I like you, I really do, but I don''t want to be your girlfriend."'
+			'You shake your head. "I''m sorry if you got the wrong impression, Artem. I like you, I really do, but I don''t want to be your girlfriend."'
 			'He looks so heartbroken that he might cry. "Is there someone else?"'
-			'You sigh slightly. "It''s not that. I just don''t want to be anyone''s girlfriend right now. Can''t we just keep doing what we are? Be friends and go out on dates?"'
+			'You sigh. "It''s not that. I just don''t want to be anyone''s girlfriend right now. Can''t we just keep doing what we''re doing? Be friends and go out on dates?"'
 			*nl
-			'Tears star rolling down his cheeks as he stands up. "I get it, you want to just date anyone. Well I can''t do that! I thought we had something special, but I guess I was wrong. Please leave now and never come back!" You know there''s nothing you can say and trying to explain will only make things worse, so you get up and head for the door.'
+			'Tears start rolling down his cheeks as he stands up. "I get it. You want to just date anyone. Well I can''t do that! I thought we had something special, but I guess I was wrong. Please leave and never come back!" You know there''s nothing you can say and trying to explain will only make things worse, so you get up and head for the door.'
 			'"I''ll see you later, okay?" you say, but he turns away from you. Once you close the door, you can hear him crying. Not sure what else to do, you just leave.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
-		act 'Tell him yes':
+		act 'Yes':
 			*clr & cla
 			artemQW['bf'] = 1
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'adore'
@@ -560,12 +559,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re unsure how to bring this up. "I was hanging out with Nush the other day, and well, we started talking about you."'
-				'Artem looks at you questioningly. "Oh? Why did you guys talk about me?"'
-				'You smile as you look at him. "Because you''re my boyfriend, silly."'
-				'Artem looks a bit sheepish. "Oh... Uh... So what did you guys talk about?"'
+				'He looks at you questioningly. "Oh? Why?"'
+				'You smile as you look at him. "Because you''re my boyfriend, silly!"'
+				'He looks a little sheepish. "Oh... Uh... So what did you guys talk about?"'
 				*nl
-				'You can tell he''s curious, and a little anxious. "Lots of stuff, but eventually we started talking about sex and ... anyway, we talked about it and wondered if you might be interested in a threesome?"'
-				'Artem looks a bit nervous. "Uh... Are you sure?"'
+				'"Lots of stuff, but eventually we started talking about sex and ... Anyway, we talked about it and wondered if you might be interested in a threesome?"'
+				'He looks almost shocked. "Uh... Are you sure?"'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a slightly surprised look. "You don''t want to? I thought all guys wanted to have sex with two girls at the same time?"'
 				'He nervously laughs. "Well yeah, but she has such a reputation..." You can tell there''s more to it by how he''s acting.'
@@ -575,10 +574,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
-					'He sighs. "I''m afraid. Afraid of what she''ll think or say. She''s... really experienced. What if she thinks I''m no good?"'
+					'He sighs. "I''m afraid. Afraid of what she''ll think or say. She''s... Really experienced. What if she thinks I''m no good?"'
 					'You lean over and give him a kiss. "She''s not like that. She might give you some advice, but she''s not the type to lay back and judge others. Instead, she''s more likely to encourage you to do what she likes."'
 					*nl
-					'He starts to nod. "Okay yeah, I would like to be with two girls, and if she''s your choice, then I''m good with it." He seems to want to say more, but he stays silent.'
+					'He starts to nod. "Okay yeah, I''d like to be with two girls, and if she''s your choice, then I''m good with it." He seems to want to say more, but stays silent.'
 					'You smile, catching it. "What?"'
 					'He blushes. "Nothing."'
 					'You raise his face to yours to look into each other''s eyes. "Just tell me. We should be honest with each other about everything."'
@@ -605,15 +604,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready for our threesome?"'
-					'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a nervous smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. As ready as I''ll ever be."'
-					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it will be fun." He just nods and doesn''t say anything more, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
+					'He looks into your eyes and nods with a nervous smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. As ready as I''ll ever be."'
+					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it''ll be fun." He just nods and doesn''t say anything, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
 					*nl
-					'You pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, what''s up? You ready to come over for that threesome with Artem?"'
-					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, where at?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can feel Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
+					'You pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, what''s up? You ready to come over for that threesome?"'
+					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, where at?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can sense Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
 					'You text back. "Artem''s dorm room, just knock and he''ll answer the door."'
 					'She just texts back several more sexual innuendo emojis.'
 					*nl
-					'You put your phone down. "Well, she''s on her way." He tidies up the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
+					'You put your phone down. "She''s on her way."'
+					'He tidies up the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Wait for Anushka': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'anushka_3some'
@@ -632,9 +632,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					'You decide to see if Artem wants to have another threesome with Anushka. "I was thinking, since you had fun last time when we had a threesome with Anushka, what would you say about doing it again?"'
 					'He seems a little surprised. "Yeah, she said maybe, but that sounded more like a polite no to me..." He pauses and gives you a hopeful look. "Do you think she might be willing to do it again?" He''s trying to hide his eagerness from you.'
 					*nl
-					'You nod. "Yeah, I think I she would be into it. Do you want me to?"'
+					'You nod. "Yeah, I think I she would be into it. Do you want me to ask?"'
 					'He blushes, but nods. "Yeah. Yeah, I think I do."'
-					'You smile at his blush. "Ok next time I see her I will ask." He just nods to that and the two of you talk about last time for a little bit.'
+					'You smile at his blush. "Okay, next time I see her, I''ll ask."'
+					'He just nods to that and the two of you talk about last time.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
 				end
@@ -650,22 +651,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
 					if artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2 or anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1:
-						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome Nush again?"'
-						'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Oh yeah, I''m ready. This time I''m going to totally make her my little bitch, I am going to tear her little pussy and tight ass up." He seems very eager for a second go around.'
-						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t get to carried away, we all want to have fun and YOUR little bitch?"'
-						'He blushes a bit at your last comment. "I know, I won''t be to rough. I just want her to know after today that when we have our fun together that I own her ass and she is OUR little bitch." He says with a smile. You laugh and shake you head at his comment.'
+						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome with Nush again?"'
+						'He looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Oh yeah, I''m ready. This time I''m going to totally make her my little bitch! I''m going to tear her little pussy and tight ass up!" He seems very eager for a second go around.'
+						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t get too carried away. We all want to have fun and... Wait, <i>your</i> little bitch?"'
+						'He blushes. "I know, I won''t be too rough. I just want her to know after today that when we have our fun together, I own her ass and she''s OUR little bitch," he says with a smile.'
+						'You laugh and shake you head at his comment.'
 					else
-						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome Nush again?"'
-						'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. This time will be different, no holding back. I''m going to show her who''s the boss." You think he is more talking to himself than you at this point.'
-						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it will be fun." He just nods and doesn''t say anything more, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
+						'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to have a threesome with Nush again?"'
+						'He looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Yeah, I''m ready. This time will be different, no holding back. I''m going to show her who''s the boss." You think he''s more talking to himself than you at this point.'
+						'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Don''t worry, it''ll be fun."'
+						'He just nods and doesn''t say anything, but you can tell he''s also eager under his nervousness.'
 					end
 					*nl
 					'You pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, what''s up? You ready to come over for another threesome with Artem?"'
-					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, dorm room again?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can feel Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
+					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "Sure, dorm room again?", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis. You can sense Artem looking over and reading what she wrote.'
 					'You text back. "Yes, just knock and he''ll answer the door."'
 					'She just texts back several more sexual innuendo emojis.'
 					*nl
-					'You put your phone down. "Well, she''s on her way." He tidies the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
+					'You put your phone down. "She''s on her way."'
+					'He tidies the dorm room while waiting for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. You can''t help but smile; he''s serious about getting a little payback. He sits back next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Wait for Anushka': gt 'artem_nush_sex_uni', 'anushka_3some1'
@@ -681,12 +685,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					minut += 30
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to fuck our pet bitch Nush again?"'
-					'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Hell yes, tell her to get her ass over here right now." He seems very eager for another go.'
-					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Ok I will tell her you want her ass over here right now." He just grins at you and watches as you pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, Artem says to get your slutty ass over to his dorm room right now so he can fuck it again."'
+					'You give him a kiss. "So, are you ready to fuck our pet bitch again?"'
+					'Artem looks into your eyes and nods with a confident smile. "Hell yes, tell her to get her ass over here right now!" He seems very eager for another go.'
+					'You smile and give him a reassuring pat on the leg as you look at him. "Okay, I''ll tell her you want her ass over here right now." He just grins at you and watches as you pull out your phone and text Anushka. "Hey, Artem says to get your slutty ass over to his dorm room right now so he can fuck it again."'
 					*nl
 					'It takes a minute or so before she responds. "One slutty ass on the way", followed by a bunch of sexual innuendo emojis.'
-					'You glance over at him, you know he read along but you tell him anyways. "Well, her ass slutty as is on the way for your fucking pleasure." He laughs then gets up to tidy the room while you wait for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. Afterwards he sits back down next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
+					'You glance over at him. "Her slutty ass is on the way for your fucking pleasure."'
+					'He laughs, then gets up to tidy the room while you wait for her, stopping at his dresser and digging into the bottom drawer before setting a bottle of lube down on the end table. Afterwards, he sits back down next to you to wait for Anushka to show up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Wait for Anushka': gt 'artem_nush_sex_uni', 'anushka_3some2'
@@ -700,7 +705,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
 				'You wonder just how kinky he is. "Artem, we''ve been having sex and it''s been great, but I was wondering if you might want to try something new?"'
-				'Just the word sex, and you have his full attention. "Uh sure, I guess so. Is it a new position you want to try?" As he talks, he starts taking off his pants.'
+				'Just the word sex, and you have his full attention. "Uh sure, I guess so. Is it a new position you want to try?"'
+				'As he talks, he starts taking off his pants.'
 				act 'Show him the strapon':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 1
@@ -710,8 +716,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					if strapnumber >= 4:
 						'You pull the strapon harness with its <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo out of your purse and hold it up, showing it to him. "I thought we could use this."'
 						'His eyes bulge when he sees how big it is and starts shaking his head. "Hell no! That thing is massive! There''s no way you''re sticking that in me!"'
-						'You sigh. "Come on baby, I''ll go easy on you. I let you fuck me in the ass, so it''s only fair. You''ll enjoy it, I promise."'
-						'He keeps shaking his head and laughs a little. "Fair? That thing is way bigger than I am! Maybe if it was my size or smaller, I might consider it but not that thing." You try to convince him, but he''s stead fast against it and pushes you to have regular sex instead.'
+						'You sigh. "Come on baby, I''ll go easy on you! I let you fuck me in the ass, so it''s only fair. You''ll enjoy it, I promise."'
+						'He keeps shaking his head and laughs a little. "Fair? That thing is way bigger than I am! Maybe if it was my size or smaller, I might consider it but not that thing!"'
+						'You try to convince him, but he''s stead fast against it and pushes you to have regular sex instead.'
 						act 'Have sex': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'sex'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'start'
 						act 'Keep talking': gt 'artem_dorm', 'chat'
@@ -719,7 +726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 						'You pull the strapon harness with its <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo attached out of your purse and hold it up, showing it to him. "I thought we could use this."'
 						'His eyes bulge when he see''s what you''re holding. "Wait... You want to wear that and... you know..."'
 						'You grin at his reaction. "Come on baby, I''ll go easy on you. I let you fuck me in the ass, so it''s only fair. You''ll enjoy it, I promise."'
-						'He looks at the dildo, then to you, and back again before finally sighing and nodding slightly. "Okay fine, but you can''t tell anyone we tried this, you swear?"'
+						'He looks at the dildo, then to you, and back again before finally sighing and nodding slightly. "Okay fine, but you can''t tell anyone we tried this, okay?"'
 						'You nod. "I swear I won''t tell anyone unless you''re okay with it."'
 						'He frowns at how you worded it, but it seems good enough. "Okay, if it''ll make you happy, then I''ll try it, but if it starts to hurt, we''re stopping." You nod in agreement.'
 						act 'Put on harness': gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'strapon_first'
@@ -740,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 end	
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'artemgirlfriend':
-	act 'Tell him to stop it':
+	act 'Tell him to stop':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You smile at him as you push his hands away. "Artem, wait! All in good time, okay? We''ll get there, just please... Slow down a little."'
@@ -782,14 +789,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'askedstrip':
 	act 'Agree to strip': gt 'artemhome', 'stripagree', 0
 	gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-		act '"No way!" (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+		act 'No way (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decline. "No, I wouldn''t be comfortable doing that."'
 			if artemQW['stripsee'] = 0:
-				'You can tell he''s seriously let down by your refusal. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, all the other guys have seen a naked girl before. Please?"'
+				'You can tell he''s seriously let down by your refusal. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, all the other guys have seen a naked girl before! Please?"'
 			else
 				'You can tell he''s seriously let down by your refusal. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really enjoyed watching you naked last time. Please?"'
 			end
@@ -812,7 +819,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'askedstrip':
 			act 'Agree to strip': gt 'artem_dorm', 'stripagree', 1
 		end
 	else
-		act '"No way!" (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+		act 'No way (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -827,8 +834,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripagree':
 	else
 		'You give him a serious look. "You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 	end
-	'You see him visible swallow as he blushes before nodding. "Yes, I do. I would really love it if you did."'
-	'You think it over for a moment before nodding. "Okay fine. Sit back and enjoy the show." He grins widely as you start slowly stripping out of your clothes, teasing him as you do. You might as well have some fun with this.'
+	'You see him visibly swallow as he blushes before nodding. "Yes, I do. I would really love it if you did."'
+	'You think it over for a moment before nodding. "Okay fine. Sit back and enjoy the show."'
+	'He grins widely as you start slowly stripping out of your clothes, teasing him as you do. You might as well have some fun with this.'
 	act 'Start stripping': gt 'artem_dorm', 'striptease'
 end
 

locations/artem_sex.qsrc

@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hj':
 	act 'Finish him off':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/hj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Several minutes go by and you''re starting to think this will take a while when cum suddenly starts shooting out of his cock. It flies up, narrowly missing your face, and lands on his pants, the bed and your hands. "Wow, that was amazing, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re the best!"'
+		'Several minutes go by and you''re starting to think this will take a while when cum suddenly starts shooting out of his cock. It flies up, narrowly missing your face, and lands on his pants, the bed and your hands.'
+		'"Wow, that was amazing, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re the best!" he blurts out.'
 		if artemQW['hj'] = 0:
 			'You smile at him. "Was that your first time?"'
 			'He blushes hard. "Sorry... Was it that obvious? I''ll do better next time..." He''s deeply embarrassed at the idea of thinking he did something wrong.'
@@ -343,8 +344,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_surprise':
 	if rand(1,10) = 1 and noprotect = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstcpie.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you''re riding him, getting lost in your own pleasure, you glance down and see him tense up before feeling his cum shoot into you. It oozes out of your pussy as you lift yourself up.'
-		'That''s when he realizes that he just came inside you. "Oh my god, I''m so sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t mean to do that!"'
-		'You smile at him as you get off him. "It''s okay, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved, obviously thinking you''re on birth control.'
+		'That''s when he realizes that he just came inside you. "Oh my god! I''m so sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t mean to do that!"'
+		'You smile as you get off him. "It''s okay, don''t worry about it." He looks relieved, obviously thinking you''re on birth control.'
 		act 'Continue': gs 'artem_sex', 'after_sex', 'cp'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstfacial.jpg"></center>'
@@ -498,7 +499,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_fuck':
 	artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, revelling in his undivided attention. Once you''re fully naked, he mutters "Lie down on your side, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+
+	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, revelling in his undivided attention.'
+	'"Lie down on your side," he mutters once you''re naked.'
+
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Lay on your side':
@@ -544,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_anal':
 	artemQW['anal'] += 1
 	artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, revelling in his undivided attention. Once you''re fully naked, he mutters "Get on your hands and knees, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+	'You start stripping before him, giving him a little show as you remove your clothes, reveling in his undivided attention. Once you''re fully naked, he mutters "Get on your hands and knees, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get on your hands and knees':
@@ -583,7 +587,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some1.jpg"></center>'
-	'He just nods and you talk about how things will go before your phone buzzes; it''s a text from Anushka containing more emojis. Seeing this, Artem gets up and leaves the room, returning a few minutes later with Anushka following him. "Not a bad looking apartment. Looks way nicer than any of the others I''ve seen around here."'
+	'He just nods and you talk about how things will go before your phone buzzes; it''s a text from Anushka containing more emojis. Seeing this, Artem gets up and leaves the room, returning a few minutes later with Anushka following him.'
+	'"Not a bad looking apartment," she says. "Looks way nicer than any of the others I''ve seen around here."'
 	'He nods, but you can see the proud smile. "Thanks."'
 	'She looks around the room and you can see her smirking. "Yep, exactly how I pictured it. Nerd nirvana." He glances at you, but doesn''t say anything. You''re not sure if he knows how to take what she just said.'
 	*nl
@@ -612,7 +617,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_oral2':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You look at her inviting ass and pussy and can''t help yourself. You move in behind Anushka, bury your face in her pussy and start licking. She starts quickly getting wet as she moans loudly.' 
+	'You look at her inviting pussy and can''t help yourself. You move in behind Anushka, bury your face in her pussy and start licking. She starts quickly getting wet as she moans loudly.' 
 	'You eat her out for a few minutes with no idea what Artem is doing before you pull away and see him staring at you wide-eyed and flushed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -627,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_bj':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Youall strip down before you push Artem onto his back on the ottoman. His dick is already hard from watching what happened or at the thought of what will come. You get on your hands and knees on the couch between his legs and start stroking his cock with your hand before you take it into your mouth, bobbing your head up and down on his shaft. As you do, you feel a warm wet tongue starts lapping at your clit as Anushka starts eating you out.'
+	'You all strip down before you push Artem onto his back on the ottoman. His dick is already hard from watching what happened or at the thought of what will come. You get on your hands and knees on the couch between his legs and start stroking his cock with your hand before you take it into your mouth, bobbing your head up and down on his shaft. As you do, you feel a warm wet tongue starts lapping at your clit as Anushka starts eating you out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -666,13 +671,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_bj':
 					act 'Encourage Artem to take charge':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some9.jpg"></center>'
-						'You slide off the ottoman and pat his cheek. "Just do it!" Anushka stands up and he glances at you, so you give him a nod of encouragement. Emboldened, he grabs Anushka and pushes her down on the ottoman in a mammer that''s forceful for him.'
+						'You slide off the ottoman and pat his cheek. "Just do it!" Anushka stands up and he glances at you, so you give him a nod of encouragement. Emboldened, he grabs Anushka and pushes her down on the ottoman in a manner that''s forceful for him.'
 						'She gasps a little at his sudden action, then looks up at him and bites her lower lip. You can tell it turned her on. "I didn''t think you had it in you. Maybe you''re not the shy submissive nerd I always took you for..."'
-						'He grabs her leg and pulls her towards him until her ass is almost hanging off the end. He then pushes her legs apart and plunges his cock back into her pussy, causing her to moan as you move up towards her head and sit on her face. She starts eating you out as you glance at Artem and give him a reassuring smile.'
+						'He grabs her leg and pulls her towards him until her ass is almost hanging off the end. He then pushes her legs apart and plunges his cock back into her pussy, causing her to moan as you move up towards her head and sit on her face. She starts eating you out as you glance at Artem and gives him a reassuring smile.'
 						'"Can you hand me the lube?" he asks after a few minutes.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 2, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Hand Artem the lube':
+						act 'Hand him the lube':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some10.jpg"></center>'
 							'You reach over and grab the lube while grinding your pussy against Anushka''s face and pass it back to him. You don''t know if Anushka heard him or if she''s just ignoring what the two of you are saying. You keep riding her face until you hear her muffled groan louder and glance back to see that Artem has inserted his dick into her ass and is slowly and gently butt fucking her.'
@@ -703,7 +708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_rough1':
 	anushkaQW['domnush'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some11.jpg"></center>'
 	'He''s being slow and gentle, but know he wants to get rough with her, so you climb off her and kneel beside her waist so you can get a good look at Artem''s cock sliding in and out of her ass. "Come on, fuck her already! Give it to her like you mean it!"'
-	'Anushka looks up at him while biting her lower lip, but doesn''t say anything. He looks at you when you speak up, then looks at her, and his gaze hardens just a bit before he looks back at you and nods. He starts ramming into her harder than before, but is still not going all out. Anushka responds by moaning louder.'
+	'Anushka looks up at him while biting her lower lip, but doesn''t say anything. He looks at you when you speak up, then looks at her, and his gaze hardens just a bit before he looks back at you and nods. He starts ramming into her harder than before but is still not going all out. Anushka responds by moaning louder.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_sex', 2, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Ask him to butt fuck you': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_anal'
@@ -715,7 +720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_anal':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A2'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some12.jpg"></center>'
 	'You reach up and cup his face in your hands, holding his gaze so he looks directly into your eyes. "I want you to fuck my ass now."'
-	'He grins widely at you and you move to straddle Anushka''s face while Artem moves around behind you, near the top of her head. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and works it in before he gently slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock up your ass, pausing when you tense up and only moving again when you relax. He''s soon slowly yet lovingly fucking your ass while Anushka eats you out.'
+	'He grins widely at you and you move to straddle Anushka''s face while Artem moves around behind you, near the top of her head. He squirts some lube onto your asshole and works it in before he gently slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock up your ass, pausing when you tense up and only moving again when you relax. He''s soon slowly, yet lovingly fucking your ass while Anushka eats you out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -735,14 +740,14 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you, and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
+	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
 	'She sits up and gives you a bemused look as Artem takes a step back to watch, eager to get it stuck back in. Anushka gets up and you get on the ottoman bench with your head facing Artem before you encourage her to straddle you and start licking her pussy. You push her forward so her upper body is lying on you, then slide your hands back to her ass and pull her ass cheeks apart, causing her asshole to gape a little. This is all the encouragement Artem needs as he quickly steps closer and slides his dick back up her ass. You can hear her moan loudly as he does.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Let him finish': 
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have what it takes to fuck a girl roughly, then that''s on him. You know he''ll be a little disappointed in himself for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
+		'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have what it takes to fuck a girl roughly, then that''s on him, but you know he''ll be a little disappointed in himself for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 4, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get on your knees': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_facial'
@@ -757,7 +762,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
 			'You stop licking her pussy to say a few encouraging words. "Come on, baby! Fuck this slut''s ass! Show her who''s boss!"'
-			'Instead of Artem responding to you, Anushka does. "Save your breath. This pussy boyfriend of yours doesn''t know how to fuck me like a man." You can tell by her teasing tone that she''s also encouraging him to get rougher.'
+			'Instead of Artem responding, Anushka does. "Save your breath. Your pussy ass bitch of a boyfriend doesn''t know how to fuck me like a man." You can tell by her teasing tone that she''s also encouraging him to get rougher.'
 			'"Shut up, slut!" he growls before he starts fucking her harder, causing Anushka to start crying out and moaning loudly before you feel her body spasm as an orgasm rips through her, causing her to get pretty loud. After she cums, he starts to slow down a little again.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -765,7 +770,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 			act 'Let him finish': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some15.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have it in him to pound a girl like she''s nothing more than a wet hole for his pleasure, then that''s his fault. You know he''ll be a little disappointed in himself for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
+				'You decide not to encourage him further. If he doesn''t have it in him, then that''s his fault, but you know he''ll be a little disappointed for not taking full advantage of his opportunity as you keep licking Anushka while Artem fucks her ass. It doesn''t take much longer before he starts to grunt, and you can tell he''s about to cum. In fact, he soon pulls out of Anushka''s asshole and starts stroking his cock.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get on your knees': gt 'artem_sex', 'anushka_3some_facial'
@@ -783,8 +788,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some16.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Don''t slow down, baby. Tear that ass up and show her who owns it!" you tell him as you grab hold of her hips to stop her from pulling away, as you go back to licking her pussy.'
 					'You feel his hands reach up and firmly grab her by the hips, one hand reaching up to hold her by the shoulder as he slides his dick nearly entirely out of her before slamming it back in and hammering her balls deep. You can feel her trying to pull away, but he holds her firm. "That''s right bitch, tonight your ass is mine!"'
-					*nl
-					'Her moans start turning into grunts, but he''s not done. "Who''s the pussy assed bitch now!?" When she doesn''t respond, he reaches up and grabs her by the hair and turns her head until she can look back over her shoulder at him, as he looks at her, while fucking her ass. "I asked you a question bitch, and now your going to answer it." Then in a more firm voice he says again. "Who''s the pussy assed bitch now!?" You''re a little shocked that you''ve brought this side out of him, but are also feeling a little proud.'
+
+					'Her moans start turning into grunts, but he''s not done. "Who''s the pussy assed bitch now!?"'
+					'When she doesn''t respond, he reaches up and grabs her by the hair before turning her head until she''s looking back over her shoulder at him. "I asked you a question, bitch! Answer it!" You''re a little shocked that you''ve brought this side out of him, but are also feeling a little proud.'
+
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Let this play out':
@@ -794,10 +801,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
 						'You can hear her grunts turning back into moans as well, not to mention her already soaking wet pussy is soaking your face even more, she is getting off this big time. Your thoughts are interrupted as she answers him. "OOOHHH... I... am..." Her reply is breathless.'
 						'You can hear the excitement in his voice, it seems he is really starting to get into this. "You are what?"'
-						'"OH... OH... I''m.... the pussy.... assed bitch." She struggles to get out from the hard fucking Artem is giving her but her ever increasing soaking pussy tells you she is loving it.'
+						'"OH... OH... I''m.... the pussy.... assed bitch." She struggles to get out from the hard fucking Artem is giving her, but her ever increasing soaking pussy tells you she''s loving it.'
+
 						*nl
-						'"That''s right you are. Now I own your ass and I''m going to tear it up because there''s nothing you can do about it!" You have to admit you wasn''t expecting him to be this assertive, seems he has grown up a bit since the Pavlovsk days.'
-						'She grips your leg tightly. "Oh fuck... Oh fuck... Not... So hard." She''s starting to resist, but is still enjoying being used.'
+						'"That''s right. I own your ass and I''m going to tear it up because there''s nothing you can do about it!"'
+						'You have to admit that you wern''t expecting him to be this assertive as she grips your leg tightly. "Oh fuck... Oh fuck... Not... So hard." She''s starting to resist, but is still enjoying being used.'
 						'"Shut that slut mouth up! I''ll show you the same mercy you''ve shown me over the years. None!" You can tell by his deep breathing, grunts and tensing body that he''s trying really hard not to cum so he can keep fucking her, but it''s too much and he jerks out of her. "I''m cumming, bitch!" he cries out.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -841,7 +849,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 	'You let go of Anushka and get up, grabbing some tissues to clean yourself before passing the box to her. Artem soon follows suit and starts cleaning himself up. Once you''re all cleaned up, you start dressing before Anushka grabs her purse off the floor where she dropped it.'
 	*nl
 	if artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 1:
-		'"I must admit, the sex was better than I expected, especially from a nerd. At best, I was expecting this to be lackluster, but you surprised me, Artem. You fuck better than I expected, but still not great either." She looks directly at you and smirks. "You still got a fair bit of work training your nerd on how to fuck like a man, though." You are pretty sure she is teasing him on purpose, just to yank his chain and not because she really means it, but you doubt Artem will understand that.'
+		'"I must admit, the sex was better than I expected, especially from a nerd. At best, I was expecting this to be lackluster, but you surprised me, Artem. You fuck better than I expected, but you''re not that great either."'
+		'She looks directly at you and smirks. "You''ve still got a fair bit of work training your nerd on how to fuck like a man."'
+		'You''re pretty sure she''s teasing him and doesn''t really mean it, but you doubt Artem will understand that.'
 		act 'Defend Artem':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
@@ -850,11 +860,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Nush!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did great. You got off, so what more do you want?" You lean over and kiss him quickly. "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch."'
-			'She just laughs. "Don''t fill his head with lies. He was okay. You eating my pussy is what put me over the edge. He still has a lot to learn. Later losers." As she starts walking out of his room, he glances at you briefly before looking back at her.'
-			'"That might be true, but I know that today I tore your ass up and from now on when we see each other in school..." He pauses a moment while she stops and looks at him to let him finish. "We''ll both know my dick was buried deep in your ass." She lifts her eyebrows briefly in surprise, then grins in amusement.'
+			'She just laughs. "Don''t fill his head with lies. He was okay. You eating my pussy is what put me over the edge. He still has a lot to learn. Later losers."'
 			*nl
-			'"The little tiger has a bit of a roar. I like it." She then glances at you. "I might even be tempted to try this again. Maybe..." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close.'
-			'Artem gives you a side fist pump. "Fuck yeah, I stood up to her." Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'As she''s about to walk out of his room, he glances at you briefly before looking back at her.'
+			'"That might be true, but I know that I tore your ass up and from now on when we see each other at school..." He pauses while she stops and looks at him. "We''ll both know my dick was buried deep in your ass."'
+			'She lifts her eyebrows briefly in surprise, then grins in amusement. "The little tiger has a bit of a roar. I like it..." She then glances at you. "I might even be tempted to try this again. Maybe..."'
+			'She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close.'
+			'Artem gives you a side fist pump. "Fuck yeah, I stood up to her!" Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			act 'He had fun': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_had_fun'
 			act 'Ask how he feels': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_how_he_feels'
 		end
@@ -864,12 +876,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			artemQW['nush3some'] = -1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. Even you admitted he wasn''t bad, and you did get off. Don''t worry, I promise he''ll be even better next time."'
-			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys who know how to fuck." Looking at your expression, she sighs begrudgingly. "While I did get off, that was more from you licking my pussy than anything he did, but he wasn''t bad. He just needs a bit more fire." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade away as he listens to the two of you. "Anyways, see you losers later," she adds in a teasing tone as she walks out of his room. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. Even you admitted he wasn''t bad, and you did get off. I promise he''ll be even better next time."'
+			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys who know how to fuck." Looking at your expression, she sighs begrudgingly. "While I did get off, that was more from you licking my pussy than anything he did, but he wasn''t bad. He just needs a bit more fire."'
+			'You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade away as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, see you losers later," she adds in a teasing tone as she walks out of his room. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re plenty good for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and walks you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 		end
@@ -880,21 +893,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good."'
-			'She rolls her eyes slightly and shakes her head a little. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What... ever... Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good..."'
+			'She rolls her eyes slightly and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What. Ever. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'Artem still seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'Artem still seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
 			'He snorts softly. "Sure... Thanks for standing up for me then."'
 			act 'You need to stand up for yourself':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry, but she''s my friend, and I thought you could stand up for yourself."'
-				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
+				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... That she intimidates me. I''m not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
-				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her ass there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
+
 				'"Thanks, I needed that." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
@@ -907,14 +921,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				'He starts to say something. "No... I''m nearly an adult, and I should''ve stood up to her. My girlfriend shouldn''t have to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me that she intimidates me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to roughly fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good."'
+				'He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2:
 		'"I must admit, I was expecting this to be lackluster at best, but you surprised me, Artem. You were better than I expected." She looks directly at you and bites her lower lip. "You trained your nerd pretty well. I might be tempted to try again one day."'
 		'You grin at her comment. "I told you he was a great lover."'
-		'She just laughs. "Maybe, he is a great ''lover''." She makes it sound like it''s a bad thing. "But he''s still not a great fuck, at least not yet." You are pretty sure she is teasing him on purpose, just to yank his chain and not because she really means it, but you doubt Artem will understand that.'
+		'She just laughs. "Sure, he''s a great ''lover''," She makes it sound like it''s a bad thing. "But he''s still not a great fuck, at least not yet."'
+		'You''re pretty sure she''s just teasing him on purpose and doesn''t really mean it, but you doubt Artem will understand that.'
 		act 'Defend Artem':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
@@ -922,54 +938,59 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Ha!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did great. He tore your slutty ass up." You turn to Artem "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch."'
+			'"Ha!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did great. He tore your slutty ass up." You then turn to Artem. "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch."'
 			'She just laughs. "He was pretty good, but not great, and we both know it. Hell, look at him. Even he knows it." You glance over at Artem and his shoulders slump and his grin fades.'
+			'As she''s about to leave his room, he glances at you before looking back to her, then straightens up his shoulders. He seems more confident all of a sudden.'
 			*nl
-			'As she starts to walk out of his room, he glances at you for a moment before looking back to her, then straightens up his shoulders and something changes. He seems more confident all of a sudden. "That might be true. I might not be, as you put it, a great fuck, but what''s also true is that I bent you over and tore your ass up, showing you no mercy, and you couldn''t do anything about it. You just meekly and submissively took it, from a lowly nerd like me, while I made you my bitch." She lifts her eyebrows in surprise at what he says. She starts to retort, but before she can, he finishes. "When we see each other around school from now on, we will both know that tonight I totally made you my bitch and nothing will ever change that."'
+			'"That might be true. I might not be, as you put it, a great fuck, but what''s also true is that I bent you over and tore your ass up, showing you no mercy, and you couldn''t do anything about it. You just meekly and submissively took it, from a lowly nerd like me, while I made you my bitch."'
+			'She lifts her eyebrows in surprise. She starts to retort, but before she can, he continues. "When we see each other at school, we''ll both know that I totally made you my bitch, and nothing will ever change that."'
 			act 'Let him get it all out':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once he finishes, an amused grin appears on her flushed face as she glances over at you. You just shrug and she looks back at him. "Wow, the mouth on him. Where was this Artem earlier? Would you have even done any of that if <<$pcs_nickname>> and I hadn''t encouraged you?" She steps up to him and places a hand on his chest while looking him in the eye and shakes her head.'
-				'"I don''t think so. I like this new Artem. He''s sexy, but I don''t buy that it''s you." She then walks out, stopping at the door to glance back one last time. "At least not yet," she says with a grin.'
+				'Once he finishes, an amused grin appears on her flushed face as she glances over at you. You just shrug and she looks back at him. "Wow, the mouth on him. Where was this Artem earlier? Would you have even done any of that if <<$pcs_nickname>> and I hadn''t encouraged you?" She steps up to him and places a hand on his chest while looking him in the eye.'
+				'"I don''t think so," she says. "I like this new Artem. He''s sexy, but I don''t buy that it''s you." She then walks out, stopping at the door to glance back one last time. "At least not yet," she says with a grin.'
 				*nl
-				'He doesn''t back down from her. "You''re wrong and next time you will know it too."'
-				'She gives a slight snort. "Who says their will be a next time."'
-				'He steps up right to her crowding her until he bumps into her forcing her to take a step back as he says in a firm voice. "I do." Then quickly glances at you, before looking back to her. You don''t know if he was looking from encouragement from you or to check if he crossed a line, either way he seems to believe he is good to go as, he crowds her even more forcing her to take a step back again. "See I finally figured you out, deep down you like guys that bully, dominate, and humiliate you." He keeps crowding her and making her back up more and more until he finally corners her in the corner of his room next to the door.'
+				'He doesn''t back down from her. "You''re wrong and next time you''ll know it too."'
+				'She snorts. "Who says there will be a next time?"'
+				'He steps up right to her, crowding her and forcing her to take a step back. "I do," he says in a firm voice and quickly glances at you before looking back at Anushka. You don''t know if he was looking from encouragement from you or checking if he crossed a line, but he seems to believe he''s good to go as he crowds her even more. "I finally figured you out. Deep down, you like guys that bully, dominate and humiliate you." He keeps crowding her and making her back up more and more until he finally corners her.'
+
 				act 'Just watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She smiles at him when her back bumps into the corner and is unable to back up more. "Is that so?" She tries to act tough and defiant, but her breathless tone confirms what he is saying, she sounds and looks really turned on now.'
-					'You can''t see his face but his tone says he is in command of what is going on and knows it, while he places his hands on the wall on each side of her giving her no where to go. "Yeah it is, I also know you loved getting fucked and dominated by a nerd, just like you are loving this." He pulls his right hand off the wall and slides it between her thighs and up her skirt, a moment later you hear her gasp a little. "Your wet pussy agrees with me, the idea of getting owned and humiliated by a nerd like me makes it even better. Doesn''t it?"'
+					'She smiles at him when her back bumps into the corner and she''s unable to back up more. "Is that so?" She tries to act tough and defiant, but her breathless tone confirms what he''s saying.'
+					'You can''t see his face, but his tone says he''s in command and knows it. He places his hands on the wall on each side of her, giving her nowhere to go. "Yeah, it is. I also know you loved getting fucked and dominated by a nerd, just like you''re loving this..." He pulls his right hand off the wall and slides it up her skirt, causing her to gasp. "Your wet pussy agrees with me. The idea of getting owned and humiliated by a nerd like me makes it even better, doesn''t it?"'
 					*nl
-					'You can just barely see her face past his shoulder and she looks very turned on and also in as much shock as you are by how Artem is acting, you have never seen him like this and Anushka''s pussy isn''t the only one soaking wet from this. When she doesn''t respond he places his right hand back on the wall to block any escape and says forcefully and loudly. "Say it!"'
-					'Breathlessly and quietly so quiet you can barely hear her words. "Yes." There is a pause, as she looks up at him, you never really noticed before how much taller Artem is over Anushka, you know she is fairly short at about 160cm tall but he towers over her at nearly 180cm tall. His face must have encouraged her as she then continues a bit louder so you can more easily hear her. "Yes... I love the idea of a nerd making me his bitch... and humiliating me."'
+					'You can just barely see her face. She looks very aroused and also in as much shock as you are by how Artem is acting; you''ve never seen him like this. When she doesn''t respond, he places his right hand back on the wall to block any escape. "Say it!" he demands in a forceful tone.'
+					'"Yes..." she replies so quietly that you can barely hear her. There''s a pause as she looks up at him towering over her. "I love the idea of a nerd making me his bitch... And humiliating me..." she continues.'
 					act 'Keep watching':
 						*clr & cla
 						artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 3
 						anushkaQW['artem_dom'] = 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-						'You see his shoulders relax as his hands slide down from the wall as he steps back to make space for her. "So like I said, there will be another time, we will let you know where and when, got it?"'
-						'She casts her eyes down and bites her lower lip as she nods. "Yes." She says softly.'
-						'He crosses his arms and looks down at her. "Good, now get your little ass out of here." He says, then she moves past him to the door and opens up the door. As she does Artem reaches out and gives her ass a hard slap, hard enough it makes her jump a little and yelp, while the sound of the smack on the ass carries across the room. As Artem turns toward you, you can see her eyes wide and a huge grin on her face, you can tell she loved ever moment of that, just as you did. Then she mouths the word wow to you and gives you a wink as she leaves closing the door. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+						'You see his shoulders relax as his hands slide down from the wall and he steps back to make space for her. "Like I said, there will be another time. We''ll let you know where and when, got it?"'
+						'She casts her eyes down and bites her lower lip as she nods. "Yes..." she says softly.'
+						'He crosses his arms and looks down at her. "Good. Now get your little ass out of here," he orders and she moves past him to the door and opens up the door. As she does, Artem reaches out and slaps her ass hard enough that the sound carries across the room.'
+						'As Artem turns to you, you can see a grin on her face that tells you she loved ever moment of that and she gives you a wink as she closes the door. You hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 						act 'Ask how he feels':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-							'He walks back over and sits down next to you. You smile to him and kiss him. "I won''t lie, I was impressed by how you handled her, I am proud of you." You say to him and kiss him again. "So, how did that make you feel?"'
-							'He looks thoughtful for a second. "You know what? I feel great, I really do." He pauses, as if he''s considering what to say next, you give him time to collect his thoughts. "I don''t know... I just suddenly had enough and I was like hell with this I am going to push back for once." Then he grins. "As I told her what I thought and realized she was backing down from me...from ME!" He shakes his head a bit. "Thats when I had a real surge of confidence, so I pushed back even more. Thats... thats when it suddenly hit me, she liked it and... I don''t know it is like so many things suddenly clicked in my head and just seemed so much better."'
+							'He walks back over and sits next to you. You smile and kiss him. "I won''t lie, I was impressed by how you handled her. How did it make you feel?"'
+							'He looks thoughtful for a second. "You know what? I feel great, I really do." He pauses, as if he''s considering what to say next. "I don''t know... I just suddenly had enough and thought I push back for once. As I told her what I thought and realized she was backing down from me... from ME!" He shakes his head. "That''s when I had a real surge of confidence, so I pushed back even more. That''s... That''s when it suddenly hit me: She liked it and... I don''t know, it''s like so many things suddenly clicked in my head and it just seemed so much better."'
 							*nl
-							'You give his hand a reassuring squeeze. "I''m glad you had this moment, confidence looks good on you."'
-							'He turns his head and looks at you. "Thanks, I mean it, it was your encouragement that helped me get here, with out you..." He trails off.'
-							'You shakes your head. "No while I might have helped get you here a little faster this is who you always was, who I always saw you to be, you would have got here on your own, I am just glad I could help."'
-							'He smiles to you. "Thanks... I still can''t really believe I fucked Nush like a slut and then made her my bitch afterwards, forcing her to agree." He sounds elated beyond words, he looks like the weight of the world has lifted off him. Apparently all the bullying has bothered him more than he said and now it seems to have lifted at least for now.'
+							'You give his hand a reassuring squeeze. "I''m glad you had this moment. Confidence looks good on you."'
+							'He turns his head and looks at you. "Thanks, but it was your encouragement that helped me get here. Without you..." He trails off.'
+							'You shake your head. "No. While I might have helped get you here a little faster, this is who you always were, who I always saw you to be. You would have gotten here on your own eventually, but I''m just glad I could help."'
+							'He smiles. "Thanks... I still can''t really believe I fucked Nush like a slut and then made her my bitch afterwards, forcing her to agree." He sounds elated beyond words and looks like the weight of the world has lifted off him.'
+
 							act 'Ask if he wants to do it again':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 10
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-								'"So does that mean you want to do this again?" You ask him.'
-								'He nods. "Hell yes and next time I am going to totally own her." Then he looks at you and blushes a bit. "I mean I would like to if you want to, of course."'
-								'You can''t help but grin at how he can be so dominate one moment but still blush and care about your feelings the next. "Well let me think about it, but I think maybe we can, you made sure she would say yes already, so why waste that. I will let you know when I am ready to invite her again." You also want to talk to Anushka about this now.'
-								'He nods. "Of course, just let me know." The two of you talk for a bit more before he finally says. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+								'"So does that mean you want to do this again?" you ask.'
+								'He nods. "Hell yes! Next time I''m going to totally own her!" Then he looks at you and blushes a bit. "I mean I''d like to, if you want to, of course."'
+								'You grin at how he can be so dominant one moment, but care about your feelings the next. "You made sure she said say yes already, so why waste that? I''ll let you know when I''m ready to invite her again." You also want to talk to Anushka about this now.'
+								'He nods. "Of course, just let me know." The two of you then talk for a while before he stops. "My mom will be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 							end
 						end
@@ -984,9 +1005,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. He''ll be even better next time, I promise."'
-			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck you properly. Artem shows some promise, but he''s a long way from that. Even with prompting from both of us, he was only okay." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, I need to get going. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'She just laughs. "Next time? I don''t know about that. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck me properly. Artem shows some promise, but he''s a long way from that. Even with prompting from both of us, he was only okay." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fade as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, I need to get going. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
 			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her, she is who she is, but hey, I got to fuck her in the ass, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so I''m good." He gives you a tight-lipped smile before walking you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
@@ -999,11 +1020,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes as he takes a breath. "Is that so? Then why were you asking me to slow down then, huh?"'
-			'She snorts. "Oh, I''ll give it to you that for the last few minutes, you started to actually fucked me like a man, but that was only after <<$pcs_nickname>> and I encouraged you several times." She steps up close to him and taps him on the chest. "Which means you have it in you, but where was that earlier, hmm? The last few minutes don''t make up for the rest."'
-			'His grin fades and he sighs. "Sorry I wasn''t very good."'
+			'She snorts. "Oh, I''ll give it to you that for the last few minutes, you started to actually fuck me like a man, but that was only after <<$pcs_nickname>> and I encouraged you several times." She steps up close to him and taps him on the chest. "Which means you have it in you, but where was that earlier, hmm? The last few minutes don''t make up for the rest."'
+			'His grin fades and he sighs. "Sorry I wasn''t very good..."'
 			*nl
-			'She rolls her eyes and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What... ever... Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
-			'As she leaves, you can see he still seems happy, but tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'She rolls her eyes and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "What. Ever. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'As she leaves, you can see he still seems happy, but tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
 			'He snorts softly. "Sure... Thanks for standing up for me then."'
 			act 'You need to stand up for yourself':
@@ -1011,15 +1032,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry, but she''s my friend, and I thought you could stand up for yourself."'
-				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Hell, even she was right. I was pretty meek and passive until the very end."'
+				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... That she intimidates me. Hell, she was right! I was pretty meek and passive until the very end."'
 				act 'Look on the bright side':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite, but look on the bright side. You just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-					'He laughs at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little. Hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+					'He laughs at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! I guess I got her back a little. Hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
 					*nl
-					'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yeah, with how you were pounding her ass there at the end? You felt her trying to pull away! I bet her asshole feels like it''s on fire right now and will be really sore tomorrow."'
-					'He looks at you and laughs even more, and you laugh with him. "Thanks, I needed that." Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+					'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yeah, with how you were pounding her there at the end? You felt her trying to pull away! I bet her asshole feels like it''s on fire right now and will be really sore tomorrow."'
+					'He looks at you and laughs even more, and you laugh with him. "Thanks, I needed that." Looking at him, he seems happy, but you can tell her words bothered him. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 					act 'He had fun': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_had_fun'
 					act 'Ask how he feels': gt 'artem_sex', 'nush3some_how_he_feels'
 				end
@@ -1037,15 +1058,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry. I should have stood up for you."'
-				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly a adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
+				'"No. I''m nearly an adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		'"It wasn''t nearly as bad as I expected it to be. Don''t get me wrong, it wasn''t good either, but I expected it to be terrible. I''m just disappointed with a case of girl blue balls. I''ll need to rub one out tonight." She looks directly at you and smirks. "You still have a lot of work training your nerd to fuck like a man." You glance at Artem and see her words hit home.'
+		'"It wasn''t nearly as bad as I expected it to be. Don''t get me wrong, it wasn''t good either, but I expected it to be terrible. I''m just disappointed with a case of girl blue balls. I''ll need to rub one out tonight." She looks directly at you and smirks. "You still have a lot of work training your nerd to fuck like a man."'
+		'You glance at Artem and see her words hit home.'
 		act 'Defend Artem':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
@@ -1054,16 +1076,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Nush!" you say in a scolding tone. "He did just fine." You lean over and kiss him quickly. "You were great. Nush is just being a bitch!"'
-			'She just laughs. "Don''t lie to him. He needs to hear the truth if he ever wants to get better. Hell, I couldn''t even get off with you eating me out at the same time." Sglances at him before speaking to you again. "Look at him; even he knows it." You glance over at Artem, and notice that his shoulders are slumped and his grin has faded. "Later losers. I''m off to get off." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'She just laughs. "Don''t lie to him. He needs to hear the truth if he ever wants to get better. Hell, I couldn''t even get off with you eating me out at the same time." She glances at him before speaking to you again. "Look at him; even he knows it."'
+			'You glance over at Artem and notice that his shoulders are slumped and his grin has faded. "Later losers. I''m off to get off." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'When she leaves, Artem sighs. He still seems somewhat happy, but her words have bothered him a lot. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'When she leaves, Artem sighs. He still seems somewhat happy, but her words have bothered him a lot. Just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			act 'Look on the bright side':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile and kiss him again. "Look on the bright side! You got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass. How many people ever get to say that?"'
-				'He looks at you and laughs while shaking his head. "You''re right... you''re right. I just wish..."'
+				'He looks at you and laughs while shaking his head. "You''re right... I just wish..."'
 				'You look at him. "Wish what?"'
-				'He sighs. "I wish I had taken better advantage of the situation, maybe really paid her back some for all the teasing she''s put me through over the years."' 
+				'He sighs. "I wish I had taken better advantage of the situation, maybe really paid her back for all the teasing she''s put me through over the years."' 
 				'Before you can reply, he kisses you before walking you to the door. It seems it didn''t bother him too much, so you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
@@ -1071,7 +1094,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
-				'He laughs and shakes his head. "It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her; she is who she is. I''m good, honestly." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. It seems it didn''t bother him too much, so you head on your way.'
+				'He laughs and shakes his head. "It''s okay. I''m not sure what I expected from her; she is who she is. I''m good, honestly." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. It seems it didn''t bother him too much, so you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1082,11 +1105,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 			'You look at her. "Nush, come on. I''m working on it. It takes a while to train boys. He''ll be even better next time, I promise."'
-			'She just laughs. "No, I don''t think so. There won''t be a next time. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck you good, ones that can get me off." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fades as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, this was a mistake I don''t plan on repeating. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'She just laughs. "No, I don''t think so. There won''t be a next time. You know I only like being with guys that know how to fuck me good, ones that can get me off." You glance over at Artem and see his shoulders slump and his grin fades as he listens to the two of you. "Anyway, this was a mistake I don''t plan on repeating. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her; you getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and walks you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 		end
@@ -1097,23 +1120,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			artemQW['nush3some_again'] = 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good."'
+			'You don''t want to get in the middle of this. You glance at him, but don''t meet his eyes, and his grin fades as he sighs and looks at her. "Sorry I wasn''t very good..."'
 			'She rolls her eyes slightly and shakes her head. You know she dislikes it when people won''t stand up for themselves. "Not good? Dude, you couldn''t even get me off!"'
-			'He blushes at the comment. "Sorry," he says meekly while looking down at the floor, unable to meet her gaze.'
-			'"What... ever... Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
+			'He blushes at the comment. "Sorry..." he says meekly while looking down at the floor, unable to meet her gaze.'
+			'"What. Ever. Later losers." She walks out of his room and you hear the front door open and close a few seconds later.'
 			*nl
-			'Once she leaves, you can tell her words bothered him a lot, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon, and I need to get started on my homework."'
+			'Once she leaves, you can tell her words bothered him a lot, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My mom should be home soon and I need to get started on my homework."'
 			'You smile and kiss him again. "Don''t listen to her. You were great as always."'
 			'He snorts softly. "Sure... Thanks for standing up for me then."'
 			act 'Stand up for himself':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry, but she''s my friend, and I thought you could stand up for yourself."'
-				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
+				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... That she intimidates me. I''m not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
-				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her ass there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
 				'"Thanks, I needed that." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
@@ -1123,10 +1146,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry. I should have stood up for you."'
-				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly a adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
+				'"No. I''m nearly an adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right! Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1137,7 +1160,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_had_fun':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You smile and kiss him again. "I''m glad you had fun."'
-	'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that." He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+	'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that."'
+	'He kisses you again before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 end
 
@@ -1151,27 +1175,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You smile at him. "I''m glad you had fun."'
-		'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that." He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+		'He laughs and hugs you. "Thank you, thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that."'
+		'He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 	end
 	act 'Press him':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You cock your head slightly. "You wish what?"'
-		'He shakes his head and blushes. "Nothing, forget I said anything."'
+		'He shakes his head and blushes. "Nothing, forget I said anything..."'
 		'You grin at how adorable he''s acting. "Artem, please. Relationships are about sharing and I want to know how you feel."'
-		'He looks at you before nodding slightly. "Okay... yeah, you''re right. If it was you, I would want to know what you thought too." He pauses and takes a deep breath as if steadying himself. "I just wish I had taken charge more. I know you encouraged me, but I wish I''d done it myself or even gone further."'
+		'He looks at you before nodding slightly. "Okay... Yeah, you''re right. If it was you, I would want to know what you thought too." He pauses and takes a deep breath, as if steadying himself. "I just wish I had taken charge more. I know you encouraged me, but I wish I''d done it myself or even gone further."'
 		act 'Let him continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 			if artemQW['rough_anal_nush'] = 2:
-				'He pauses again. "I just wish I''d grabbed her by the hips sooner and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she felt like her asshole was on fire." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she and others tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge you know?" He ends it looking and sounding a little sheepish.'
-				*nl
+				'He pauses again. "I just wish I''d grabbed her by the hips and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she felt like her asshole was on fire." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge, you know?" He looks and sounds a little sheepish.'
 				'You''re a little surprised by this outburst, but also proud that he''s gaining self-confidence. "Wow! I didn''t know the bullying bothered you this much." He starts to say something, but you keep going. "But I get it, I really do. She and the other gopniks have bullied and sometimes hurt you, and you just wanted some payback. It''s only natural."'
 				'He relaxes a little, seemingly relieved you''re not upset by what he just said. "Yeah... I just regret missing my only chance to really get some payback." You think about what he said. You know you could likely talk her back into coming back eventually, but do you want to share your boyfriend with her again?'
 			else
-				'He pauses again. "At the end, I wish I had just grabbed her by the hips and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she pleaded with me to stop." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she and others tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge you know?" He ends it looking and sounding a little sheepish.'
-				*nl
+				'He pauses again. "At the end, I wish I had just grabbed her by the hips and fucked her ass as hard as I could until she pleaded with me to stop." His tone becomes harder and more vicious before he realizes what he said and blushes. "I mean, I don''t want to really hurt her..." He looks at you and blushes more. "Okay, maybe hurt her a little... Just to get some payback for all the times she tormented me at school. It would have been nice to really get some revenge, you know?" He looks and sounds a little sheepish.'
 				'You''re a little surprised by this outburst, but also proud that he''s gaining self-confidence. "Wow! I didn''t know the bullying bothered you this much." He starts to say something, but you keep going. "But I get it, I really do. She and the other gopniks have bullied and sometimes hurt you, and you just wanted to get a little revenge. It''s only natural."'
 				'He relaxes a little, seemingly relieved you''re not upset by what he just said. "Yeah... I just regret missing my only chance to really get some payback." You think about what he said. You know you could likely talk her back into coming back eventually, but do you want to share your boyfriend with her again?'
 			end
@@ -1180,7 +1203,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 				artemQW['nush3some'] = -1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You smile at him. "Yeah you did, but at least you had fun and got her back a little."'
-				'He laughs and hugs you. "You''re right. Thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that." He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+				'He laughs and hugs you. "You''re right. Thank you for everything. I had a great time. I really needed that."'
+				'He kisses you before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 			end
 			act 'Invite her again':
@@ -1192,7 +1216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 				'He seems unsure. "Yeah, she said maybe, but that sounded more like a polite no to me..." He pauses and gives you a hopeful look. "Do you think she might be willing to do it again?" He''s trying to hide his eagerness from you.'
 				*nl
 				'You nod. "Yeah, I think I can talk her into it. Do you want me to?"'
-				'He blushes, but nods. "Yeah. Yeah, I think I do." You consider it, but he''s all fired up to use it as an excuse to get back at her. You could tell him not to be too rough, or encourage him to let out his frustration on her to gain more confidence. You don''t think she would mind; she is into the rough stuff.'
+				'He blushes, but nods. "Yeah. Yeah, I think I do." You consider it, but he''s all fired up to use it as an excuse to get back at her. You could tell him not to be too rough, or encourage him to let out his frustration on her to gain more confidence. You don''t think she would mind; she''s into the rough stuff after all.'
 				act 'Only if you''re nice':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1201,9 +1225,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 					*nl
 					if grupTipe = 4:
 						'He then looks like he''s suddenly thought of something. "Hey, you''re friends with all the gopnik girls. Do you think you could talk the rest of them into it too?"'
-						'You give him a slightly shocked look. He''s asking you to set him up with other girls so he can get a little revenge on them. "I''ll think about it. We can talk about it some other time." He nods in understanding, then gives you a kiss and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+						'You give him a slightly shocked look. He''s asking you to set him up with other girls so he can get a little revenge on them. "I''ll think about it... We can talk about it some other time..."'
+						'He nods in understanding, then gives you a kiss and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 					else
-						'He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+						'He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acts. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 				end
@@ -1211,7 +1236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause, and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
+					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
 					'He looks surprised by your comment. "Really!?"' 
 					act 'Yes':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1221,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 							'He looks dumbfounded as he sits and looks at you. "So let me get this straight. You''re okay with me hate fucking your friend for all the years she and the other gopniks bullied me? You''re okay with me taking my frustration, humiliation and anger out on her?"'
 							'You giggle at his expression. "If that''s what you need, then yes, that''s exactly what I want you to do."'
 							*nl
-							'He looks and sounds sceptical. "And you think she''ll be okay with it?"'
+							'He looks and sounds skeptical. "And you think she''ll be okay with it?"'
 							'"It doesn''t matter what she wants; this is about you. Like her, the rest didn''t care what you wanted when they bullied you. Besides, Nush is a good sport. She''ll understand that you need a little payback, especially after what you said to her today." You think about telling him that you''re pretty sure she''s into being dominated, but that might ruin it for him, and if this makes him happy, it''s a win-win for everyone. "So, is that a yes?"'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -1231,7 +1256,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 								'He blushes again. "Sorry, I didn''t mean for it to sound like that."'
 								*nl
 								'You hug him. "It''s okay. I know how you meant it."'
-								'He returns the hug. "Thank you, I think I needed this more than I realized." It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+								'He returns the hug. "Thank you, I think I needed this more than I realized." It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1242,7 +1267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 								'He starts nodding. "Hell yes! Oh man, I can''t wait. Next time, I won''t show her any mercy at all."'
-								'You laugh and roll your eyes slightly at him. It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him anymore, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
+								'You laugh and roll your eyes slightly at him. It seems like a weight has been lifted from his shoulders as he gives you a kiss before walking you to the door. As you leave, you think about what just happened. Not only do Anushka''s words seem to not have bothered him, but there''s something about his stance, tone of voice and how he acted. He seems to have gotten a little more confident from today''s events.'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 							end
 						end
@@ -1259,39 +1284,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 	artemQW['artem_dom'] -= 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slip on the harness, and he helps you buckle it in place as he takes his pants off. You can tell by how he''s acting that he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help. Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
+	'You slide the harness on and he helps you buckle it in place before he takes his pants off. You can tell he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help.'
+	'Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon4.jpg"></center>'
-		'He gets on his knees in front of you and grabs the back of your legs with his hands before slowly opening his mouth and taking the dildo in. He starts slowly sucking on it; by his expression, you don''t think he''s really into it, but is doing it to make you happy. "Okay, take off your shirt and get on the bed."'
+		'He gets on his knees in front of you and grabs the back of your legs with his hands before slowly opening his mouth and taking the dildo in. He starts slowly sucking on it; by his expression, you don''t think he''s really into it, but is doing it to make you happy.'
+		'"Okay, take off your shirt and get on the bed," you tell him.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get the lube':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon5.jpg"></center>'
-			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed. You smile at him. "You need to roll over." He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube he got to use on you before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some lube between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
-			*nl
+			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed as you smile at him. "You need to roll over."'
+			'He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some lube between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
 			'He glances back over his shoulder at you. "That feels weird."'
-			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay, just take a deep breath and relax." Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready, Artem?" He just nods in response. You line up the dildo and slowly push it into his asshole until the head pops in and Artem hisses in pain, causing you to stop moving. "Just breathe." He does as you instruct, and you wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
+			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay. Just take a deep breath and relax."'
+			*nl
+			'Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready?"'
+			'He just nods in response and you line the dildo up and slowly push it into his asshole, causing him to hiss in pain.'
+			'"Just breathe," you tell him and he does as you instruct. You wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'D<<strapnumber>>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You start to slowly fuck him with the strapon, only thrusting about half the length of the dildo into him. "How does that feel?"'
+				'You start slowly fucking him with the strapon, only thrusting about half the length of the dildo into him. "How does that feel?"'
 				'He doesn''t answer at first. "Not as bad as I thought. It stopped hurting."'
 				'You slowly slide the entire length of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo into his ass, causing him to moan as you climb on top of him, laying on his back as you slowly start fucking him. "Sounds like you like that."'
 				*nl
 				'He glances back over his shoulder at you. "It feels weird, but yeah, I kind of like it."'
-				'You give him a reassuring smile. "Great, because I love this. Now take a deep breath." You push it in as far as it will go and start steadily fucking him, picking up the pace as he starts moaning louder. By the sound of it, he''s starting to enjoy it.'
+				'You give him a reassuring smile. "Great, because I love this. Now take a deep breath."'
+				'You push it in as far as it will go and start steadily fucking him, picking up the pace as he starts moaning louder. By the sound of it, he''s starting to enjoy it.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Start fucking him hard and fast':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You start to pick up speed until you''re really hammering his ass. "Fuck yeah, take my cock bitch!"'
-					'His moans turn to grunts, and he puts his hands back against your hips to slow you down. "Slow down, not so hard! That hurts!"'
+					'You start to pick up speed until you''re really hammering his ass. "Fuck yeah, take my cock, bitch!"'
+					'He pushes his hands against your hips to slow you down. "Not so hard! That hurts!"'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Keep fucking him hard':
@@ -1299,33 +1331,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 						minut += 5
 						artemQW[strapon] = -1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You don''t do as he asked. "Come on baby, just relax."'
-						'His his grunts turned to pained grunts. "Stop! That hurts!" He shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
+						'You don''t do as he asks. "Come on baby, just relax."'
+						'His moans quickly turn to pained grunts. "Stop! That hurts!" he cries out and shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
 						'You frown. "Sorry, I just got carried away. Forgive me?"'
-						'He sighs. "Okay, I forgive you, but that''s it. I''m not doing that again." You start to speak, but he shakes his head. "No! Never. Again. I''m going to go take a shower. Talk to you later."'
+						'He sighs. "Okay, I forgive you, but that''s it. I''m not doing that again." You''re about to speak, but he shakes his head. "No! Never. Again. I''m going to go take a shower. Talk to you later."'
+						*nl
+						'You sigh and slide the harness off before leaving his apartment.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 					end
-					act 'Ease up a bit':
+					act 'Ease up':
 						*clr & cla
 						artemQW[strapon] = 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ease up abit, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... fuck... Ah..."'
-						'You grin as it sounds like he''s really starting to enjoy it. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
-						'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
+
+						'You ease up a little, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
+						'You grin. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
+						'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it."'
+						'He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more, but ater several minutes, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt again."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You roll off him, pulling your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
-							'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
-							'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
+							'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming.'
+							'"I guess you really liked it..." you say once he finishes.'
 							*nl
-							'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I think I need to shower, and I really should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
-							'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+							'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He then raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+							'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
+							'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I need to shower and should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
+							'You nod and he kisses you before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 						end
 					end
@@ -1334,21 +1371,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 					*clr & cla
 					artemQW[strapon] = 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep the pace up, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... fuck... Ah..."'
-					'You grin as it sounds like he''s really starting to enjoy it. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
-					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
+					'You keep your steady pace, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
+					'You grin. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
+					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it."'
+					'He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more, but after several minutes, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt again."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You roll off him, pulling your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
-						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
-						'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
+						'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming.'
+						'"I guess you really liked it..." you say once he finishes.'
 						*nl
-						'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I think I need to shower, and I really should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
-						'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He then raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+						'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
+						'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I need to shower and should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
+						'You nod and he kisses you before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 					end
 				end

locations/artem_sex_uni.qsrc

@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artem_bj':
 				artemQW['bj'] += 1
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/bj4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You open your mouth and wrap your lips around his shaft while you keep stroking it with your hand. He moans loudly as soon as his cock is inside your mouth. After spending barely a few seconds sucking it, you suddenly feel a stream of cum shoot in your mouth without warning. The surprise of it causes you to pull away.'
+				'You open your mouth and wrap your lips around his shaft while you keep stroking it with your hand. He moans loudly as soon as his cock is inside your mouth. After spending barely a few seconds sucking it, you suddenly feel a stream of cum shooting into your mouth without warning. The surprise of it causes you to pull away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Continue':
@@ -285,11 +285,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							if analplugin = 1:
 								'He immediately grabs your buttplug and slowly pulls it out of your ass.'
 							end
-							'With his encouragement you get into a doggystyle position.'
+							'With his encouragement, you get into a doggystyle position.'
 							act 'Get butt fucked':gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'anal'
 						else
 							'You take his dick out of your mouth. "Would you like to fuck me in the ass?"'
-							'"Uh, yeah, sure," he stutters. "That sounds great." He seems a little surprised at your suggestion, but likes the idea. With his encouragement, you get into a doggystyle position.'
+							'"Uh, yeah, sure," he stutters. "That sounds great." He seems a little surprised at your suggestion but likes the idea. With his encouragement, you get into a doggystyle position.'
 							act 'Get butt fucked':gt 'artem_sex_uni', 'anal'
 						end
 					end
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							if mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] > 0:
 								mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] -= 1
 								noprotect = 0
-								'You grab a condom out of your purse and tell him to put it on. He struggles do so, but eventually manages to get it.'
+								'You grab a condom out of your purse and tell him to put it on. He struggles to do so, but eventually manages to get it.'
 							else
 								noprotect = 1
 								'"You do have a condom, right?" you ask.'
@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 	act 'Anal bliss':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/firstanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once you get used to his dick filling up your ass, he starts going a little deeper, but keeps thrusting gently, more making love to your ass than fucking it. You moan in pleasure and start rubbing your clit with one of your hands to make it feel better. You even start pushing back against him to take him a little deeper.'
+		'Once you get used to his dick filling up your ass, he starts going a little deeper but keeps thrusting gently, more making love to your ass than fucking it. You moan in pleasure and start rubbing your clit with one of your hands to make it feel better. You even start pushing back against him to take him a little deeper.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some':
 	*clr & cla
 	artemQW['nushart_oral'] = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some1.jpg"></center>'
-	'He just nods and you talk about how things will go before there is a knock on the dorm room door. Hearing this, Artem gets up and answers the door, you can see Anushka standing in the hallway. He stands aside so she can walk in, he closes the door and locks it after she does. "Not a bad looking dorm room." She says.'
+	'You talk about how things will go before there''s a knock on the door. Hearing this, Artem gets up and answers it, and you see Anushka standing in the hallway. He stands aside to let her in before he closes the door and locks it. "Not a bad looking dorm room," she says.'
 	'He nods, but you can see the proud smile. "Thanks."'
 	'She looks around the room and you can see her smirking. "Yep, exactly how I pictured it. Nerd nirvana." He glances at you, but doesn''t say anything. You''re not sure if he knows how to take what she just said.'
 	*nl
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you, and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
+	'You get up, pulling yourself away from all those sensations that were threatening to overwhelm you and slap Anushka on the thigh. "Get up and switch with me."'
 	'She sits up and gives you a bemused look as Artem takes a step back to watch, eager to get it stuck back in. Anushka gets up and you get on the ottoman bench with your head facing Artem before you encourage her to straddle you and start licking her pussy. You push her forward so her upper body is lying on you, then slide your hands back to her ass and pull her ass cheeks apart, causing her asshole to gape a little. This is all the encouragement Artem needs as he quickly steps closer and slides his dick back up her ass. You can hear her moan loudly as he does.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_doggy':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/artemroom/sex/nush3some14.jpg"></center>'
 						'You can hear her grunts turning back into moans as well, not to mention her already soaking wet pussy is soaking your face even more, she is getting off this big time. Your thoughts are interrupted as she answers him. "OOOHHH... I... am..." Her reply is breathless.'
 						'You can hear the excitement in his voice, it seems he is really starting to get into this. "You are what?"'
-						'"OH... OH... I''m.... the pussy.... assed bitch." She struggles to get out from the hard fucking Artem is giving her but her ever increasing soaking pussy tells you she is loving it.'
+						'"OH... OH... I''m.... the pussy.... assed bitch." She struggles to get out from the hard fucking Artem is giving her but her ever-increasing soaking pussy tells you she is loving it.'
 						*nl
 						'"That''s right you are. Now I own your ass and I''m going to tear it up because there''s nothing you can do about it!" You have to admit you wasn''t expecting him to be this assertive, seems he has grown up a bit since the Pavlovsk days.'
 						'She grips your leg tightly. "Oh fuck... Oh fuck... Not... So hard." She''s starting to resist, but is still enjoying being used.'
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*nl
 			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My roommate should be home soon, and I need to still study tonight."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re plenty good for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and watches you leave his dorm room.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
@@ -835,8 +835,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 							*nl
 							'You give his hand a reassuring squeeze. "I''m glad you had this moment, confidence looks good on you."'
 							'He turns his head and looks at you. "Thanks, I mean it, it was your encouragement that helped me get here, with out you..." He trails off.'
-							'You shakes your head. "No while I might have helped get you here a little faster this is who you always was, who I always saw you to be, you would have got here on your own, I am just glad I could help."'
-							'He smiles to you. "Thanks... I still can''t really believe I fucked Nush like a slut and then made her my bitch afterwards, forcing her to agree." He sounds elated beyond words, he looks like the weight of the world has lifted off him. Apparently all the bullying has bothered him more than he said and now it seems to have lifted at least for now.'
+							'You shake your head. "No while I might have helped get you here a little faster this is who you always were, who I always saw you to be, you would have got here on your own, I am just glad I could help."'
+							'He smiles to you. "Thanks... I still can''t really believe I fucked Nush like a slut and then made her my bitch afterward, forcing her to agree." He sounds elated beyond words, he looks like the weight of the world has lifted off him. Apparently all the bullying has bothered him more than he said and now it seems to have lifted at least for now.'
 							act 'Ask if he wants to do it again':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 10
@@ -863,7 +863,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*nl
 			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My roommate should be home soon, and I need to still study tonight."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her. You''re getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her, she is who she is, but hey, I got to fuck her in the ass, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so I''m good." He pauses and frowns and then looks at you in all seriousness and says. "Look. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. It''s okay. Not sure what I expected from her, she is who she is, but hey, I got to fuck her in the ass, something I never dreamed would ever happen, so I''m good." He pauses and frowns and then looks at you in all seriousness and says. "Look. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and watches you leave his dorm room.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
@@ -962,7 +962,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 			*nl
 			'You and Artem sit in silence, but just as you''re about to say something, he interrupts you. "My roommate should be home soon, and I need to still study tonight."'
 			'You smile and try to kiss him, but he turns his head and you end up kissing his cheek. "Don''t listen to her; you getting better, and you''re good enough for me."'
-			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favour and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
+			'He sighs loudly and shakes his head. "Yeah, sure. I know she''s your friend, but I just don''t and never will like her. Honestly, I don''t like how you act around her. So please do me a favor and don''t invite her to hang out with us anymore, okay?"'
 			'You sigh and nod before he gives you a tight-lipped smile and walks you to the door.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				'He starts to say something, then stops and sighs before nodding his head in agreement. "You''re right. I should have stood up to her, but I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me. I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me... that she intimidates me. Not sure what I expected from her anyway. She is who she is."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him another hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
-				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
+				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. I guess I got her back a little; hopefully, it hurt." He blushes at his own words and glances at you. "Do you think it did?"'
 				'You smile at him and give him a reassuring look. "Hell yes, how you were pounding her ass there at the end. I bet her ass will be sore tomorrow too." He glances at you, then laughs, and you laugh with him.'
 				'"Thanks, I needed that." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushka_3some_cleanup':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You give him a hug, but he doesn''t really return it. "I''m sorry. I should have stood up for you."'
-				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly a adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
+				'He starts to say something. "No. I''m nearly an adult and I should have stood up to her! I shouldn''t need my girlfriend to defend me, but I''m just so used to her and the other gopniks picking on me, that she intimidates me. She was right; I was pretty meek and passive until the very end when you both encouraged me."'
 				*nl
 				'You give him a hug. "She''s more bark than bite. Plus, you just got to fuck one of your bullies in the ass."'
 				'He nods and smiles at your comment. "Yeah. Yeah, you''re right. Not only did I get to fuck her, but I tore her ass up, something I never dreamed would ever happen. Yeah, I think I''m good." He kisses you and thanks you for a great time before walking you to the door. Hoping this didn''t bother him, you head on your way.'
@@ -1083,7 +1083,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nush3some_how_he_feels':
 					artemQW['artem_dom'] += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause, and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
+					'You think for a few seconds before nodding. Anushka likes the rough stuff, and more importantly, you think this will do Artem some good. "Okay, I''ll try and talk her into it, but..." You pause and can tell he''s expecting you to ask him to not be too rough next time. "Only if you promise to not hold back."'
 					'He looks surprised by your comment. "Really!?"' 
 					act 'Yes':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1131,7 +1131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 	artemQW['artem_dom'] -= 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slip on the harness, and he helps you buckle it in place as he takes his pants off. You can tell by how he''s acting that he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help. Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
+	'You slip on the harness and he helps you buckle it in place before he takes his pants off. You can tell he''s nervous and do your best to give him reassuring smiles, but it doesn''t seem to help. Once the harness is in place, you look at him. "Come and suck my dick, baby," you tell him with a grin.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1141,10 +1141,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 		act 'Get the lube':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon5.jpg"></center>'
-			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed. You smile at him. "You need to roll over." He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube he got to use on you before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some lube between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
+
+			'He stops sucking on the dildo and takes off his shirt before sitting back on the bed as you smile at him. "You need to roll over." He blushes, but rolls over onto his stomach as you open his nightstand and take out the lube he got to use on you before crawling onto the bed on your knees. You lube up the dildo before squirting some between his ass cheeks and working it in.'
+
 			*nl
 			'He glances back over his shoulder at you. "That feels weird."'
-			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay, just take a deep breath and relax." Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready, Artem?" He just nods in response. You line up the dildo and slowly push it into his asshole until the head pops in and Artem hisses in pain, causing you to stop moving. "Just breathe." He does as you instruct, and you wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
+			'You give him a reassuring smile. "It''s okay. Just take a deep breath and relax." Once he and the dildo are lubed up, you cap the bottle of lube and toss it aside. "You ready?" He just nods in response and you line up the dildo and slowly push it into his ass until the head pops in and he hisses in pain, causing you to stop moving. "Just breathe."'
+			'He does as you instruct, and you wait until you feel him relax before pushing the dildo further into him.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
@@ -1169,10 +1172,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 					act 'Keep fucking him hard':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
-						artemQW[strapon] = -1
+						artemQW['strapon'] = -1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You don''t do as he asked. "Come on baby, just relax."'
-						'His his grunts turned to pained grunts. "Stop! That hurts!" He shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
+						'You don''t do as he asks. "Come on baby, just relax."'
+						'His grunts turn to pained groans. "Stop! That hurts!" He shoves you off before sitting up and glaring at you. "What the hell, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! That hurt!"'
 						'You frown. "Sorry, I just got carried away. Forgive me?"'
 						'He sighs. "Okay, I forgive you, but that''s it. I''m not doing that again." You start to speak, but he shakes his head. "No! Never. Again. I''m going to go take a shower. Talk to you later."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 2
@@ -1181,46 +1184,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_first':
 					end
 					act 'Ease up a bit':
 						*clr & cla
-						artemQW[strapon] = 1
+						artemQW['strapon'] = 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You ease up abit, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... fuck... Ah..."'
+						'You ease up a bit, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
 						'You grin as it sounds like he''s really starting to enjoy it. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
-						'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
+						'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You roll off him, pulling your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
-							'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+							'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
+							'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would..." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
 							'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
 							*nl
 							'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I think I need to shower, and I really should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
-							'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+							'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his room with a massive grin on your face.'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 						end
 					end
 				end
 				act 'Fuck him nice and steady':
 					*clr & cla
-					artemQW[strapon] = 1
+					artemQW['strapon'] = 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon7.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep the pace up, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... fuck... Ah..."'
+					'You keep the pace up, making sure not to go too hard as you lift yourself up so you can more easily thrust into him. He starts moaning a little louder as you do. "Oh... Fuck... Ah..."'
 					'You grin as it sounds like he''s really starting to enjoy it. "You like taking my cock in your ass, don''t you?"'
-					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
+					'He raises his head, but doesn''t look back at you. At first, you''re not sure he even heard you. "Uh... I... Ah... YES... Yes, I like it." He keeps moaning louder, which only turns you on more. Finally, after several minutes of this, his moans start to subside. "Okay, I think we need to stop. It''s starting to hurt a little again."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/strapon/first_strapon1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You roll off him, pulling your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
-						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
+						'You roll off him and pull your dildo out of his ass, making him moan as you do. Once you''re off him, he quickly gets up and slides off the bed; as you watch, he starts furiously jerking off and quickly starts cumming. "I guess you really liked it," you say once he finishes.'
+						'He glances at you and turns as red as you think is humanly possible. He looks down, refusing to meet your eyes. "Yeah, it felt much better than I thought it would..." He raises his gaze to look at you. "Did you like it?"'
 						'You nod your head. "Yes, I had a lot of fun. Maybe we can do it again?"'
 						*nl
 						'"Let me think about it," he replies and you nod as you start removing the harness and cleaning the dildo while he cleans himself up. "I think I need to shower, and I really should finish my homework. See you tomorrow?"'
-						'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his apartment with a massive grin on your face.'
+						'You nod. "Sure, see you tomorrow." He kisses you briefly before leaving his room and going to the bathroom. Placing the strap-on back in your purse, you leave his room with a massive grin on your face.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 					end
 				end

locations/artstudia.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod1':
 	act 'Leave':gt'ugol'
 	
 	if arts = 1:
-		act 'Go to the art studio': artsb = 1 & gt'artstudia','bodimod2'
+		act 'Go to the art studio': artsb = 1 & gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod2':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>The studio of the artist</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pushkin/artscor.jpg"></center>'
 	'The walls of the hallway leading to the art school are decorated in a variety of art. Even if the sign out front did not indicate this was the school, this hallway would be a dead give away.'
-    act 'Leave':gt'artstudia','bodimod1'
+    act 'Leave':gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod1'
 	
 	if rand(0,2) = 0 and arts_day ! daystart:
 		'There are a number of students gathered here. Some of them have removed their clothes and have already been painted by Masya.'
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod3':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pushkin/artstudio/downud.jpg"></center>'
 	'After agreeing to join one of the projects, you strip naked and have most of your body painted along with several other students. Once all of you are painted, you are sent to one of the busier streets in the Old Town to model the art.'
 	'After several hours and more than a bit of harassment from some of the men, the project is over, and you all head back to the studio.'
-	act 'Leave': gt'artstudia','bodimod2'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod2'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod4':
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodimod4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pushkin/artstudio/downud.jpg"></center>'
 	'After agreeing to join one of the projects, you strip naked and have most of your body painted along with several other students. Once all of you are painted, you are sent to one of the busier streets in the city center to model the art.'
 	'After several hours and more than a bit of harassment from some of the men, the project is over, and you all head back to the studio.'
-	act 'Leave': gt'artstudia','bodimod2'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'artstudia', 'bodimod2'
 end
 
 --- artstudia ---------------------------------

locations/audition_reflections.qsrc

@@ -176,39 +176,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection_thoughts':
 	
 	act'Normal':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','normal'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'normal'
 	end
 	
 	act'Dirty':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','dirty'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'dirty'
 	end
 	
 	act'Hollow':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','hollow'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'hollow'
 	end
 	
 	act'Angry':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','angry'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'angry'
 	end
 	
 	act'Horny':
 		cla
-		gs'audition_reflections','horny'
+		gs 'audition_reflections', 'horny'
 	end
 	
 	if audition['result'] >= audition['requirement']:
 		act'Powerful':
 			cla
-			gs'audition_reflections','powerful'
+			gs 'audition_reflections', 'powerful'
 		end
 	end
 	
 	if audition['result'] < audition['requirement']:
 		act'Upset you didn''t get the part':
-			gs'audition_reflections','powerful'
+			gs 'audition_reflections', 'powerful'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'normal':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dirty':
@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dirty':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hollow':
@@ -835,7 +835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hollow':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'angry':
@@ -860,7 +860,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'angry':
 		*nl
 		'Your rage continues to burn inside as you stand trembling in the hallway but in the end, you can''t tell who you''re really angry at. The man you gave your body to? Or yourself for choosing to do it...'
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'horny':
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horny':
 	
 	gs 'arousal','end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 		
 	gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 1, 'masturbate'
 	pcs_horny += 50
@@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horny':
 	end
 	gs 'arousal','end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'powerful':
@@ -1087,12 +1087,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'powerful':
 	end
 	*nl
 	'As long as you''re willing to use your body, you can get anything you want in this industry. And that makes you feel more empowered than ever.'
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'upset':
 
-	act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 end
 
 
@@ -1123,7 +1123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 			'So you auditioned, you got fucked, you didn''t get the role in the end. But you don''t feel too upset about it either. Maybe this is a sign that things won''t so bad? Maybe if you can keep this up you might just be able to make it in this industry.'
 		end
 		'You shrug your shoulders and continue on with your life.'
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Dirty':
@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 				'How could you let this happen? You traded a part of yourself, something precious and valuable and for what? A bit part in an acting gig? You shudder as you feel another glob of cum drip from your pussy and run down your leg and you wonder if your legs will ever feel clean again...'
 			end
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Hollow':
@@ -1172,7 +1172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 				'... hollow. You bring your hand to your face and run your hand down your cheek, feeling where the cum was smeared across your face. You just fucked a guy and let him cum on your face so you could land a role in an acting gig. You gave him your first time to get this job and now that you have it you just... don''t care. Your just-fucked pussy throbs between your legs, and you cum ooze from it to run down your leg, leaving your insides feeling aching and empty. You feel a similar emptiness in your chest and wonder just what it was that you gave up when you let that man take your virginity...'
 			end
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Angry':
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 				'<i><b>Angry!</b></i> Your eyes well up with tears of rage and you wipe at your face to clear them. What the fuck was that?! So you didn''t do well enough in the audition to get the role and then what happened? You got pressured into doing something and ultimately gave up your virginity. Is this what is going to happen working in this industry? Just time after time of getting literally fucked over by people? Your rage continues to burn inside as you stand trembling in the hallway, cum dripping from your pussy and running down your leg, but in the end, you can''t tell who you''re really angry at. The one who took your virginity, or yourself for giving it up...'
 			end
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	act'Horny':
@@ -1356,7 +1356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 		
 		gs 'arousal','end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 	
 	if audition['result'] >= audition['requirement']:
@@ -1377,7 +1377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virgin_reflect':
 			end
 			*nl
 			'As long as you''re willing to use your body, you can get anything you want in this industry. And that makes you feel more empowered than ever.'
-			act'Continue':gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 		end
 	end
 	

locations/audition_sex1.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 	if will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
 		act'Chicken out (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	else
-		act'Chicken out (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+		act 'Chicken out (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 	end
 	
 	act'Tentatively blow him':
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 				if will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
 					act'Run away (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				else
-					act'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+					act 'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 				end
 				
 				act'No! Please! I''ll do a better job!':
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/reluctant/bj3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'"No, wait! Please! I''ll do a better job, I promise! Please! I''ll really try!"'
 					'"Fine," he growls. "But your clothes are still coming off. And you better do better than you''re doing now! I''m not giving you this part for some halfway decent head."'
-					act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+					act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 				end
 
 				if stat['vaginal'] = 0 and will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 						'"No wait! Please! I''m a virgin!" you cry out. "I don''t want... my first time..."'
 						if rand(0,1) = 0:
 							'"Fine," he growls. "But your clothes are still coming off. And you better do better than you''re doing now! I''m not giving you this part for some halfway decent head."'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 						else
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/grope.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'"A virgin huh?" he says with a hungry look. "Well if you''re a virgin, then I could <i>definitely</i> give this part for you..." His hands are all over you now, groping you through your clothes. "... that is if you... give something to me..."'
@@ -123,13 +123,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 							cla & *nl
 							'"No!" you gasp, shaking out of his grasp as you feel his fingers grab at your crotch. "No! Only a blowjob!"'
 							'"Fine," he growls. "But your clothes are still coming off. And you better do better than you''re doing now! I''m not giving you this part for some halfway decent head."'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 						end
 !!						act'What about anal instead?':
 !!							cla & *nl
 !!							'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 !!							'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-!!							act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','reluctant_anal1'
+!!							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_anal1'
 !!						end
 						
 						act'Give in':
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 							'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes. "Okay. I''ll let you... fuck me..."'
 							'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 							'"Then let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin'
 						end
 
 						act'Freeze in panic':
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 								'"Huh?"'
 								'You blink and come back to reality. While you were lost in your panic thoughts, <<$boydesc>> took off all your clothes and has you naked right in front of him. "A little weird how you zoned out like that, but as long as your pussy''s still tight..." He grabs you by the shoulder and roughly shoves you face first onto the desk. You tense up as you feel something hovering right between your legs."
 								"Wait, I-!"'
-								act'<i>AAHHHHHH!!</i>':gt'audition_sex1','panic_virgin1'
+								act '<i>AAHHHHHH!!</i>': gt 'audition_sex1', 'panic_virgin1'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 !!						cla & *nl
 !!						'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 !!						'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-!!						act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_anal1'
+!!						act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_anal1'
 !!					end
 					
 					act'Give in':
@@ -179,17 +179,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj1':
 						'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes. "Okay. I''ll let you... fuck me..."'
 						'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 						'"Then let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-						act'Take off your clothes':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_fuck1'
+						act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_fuck1'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 		
-!!		act'Put in real effort': gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj3'
+!!		act'Put in real effort': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj3'
 		
 		act'Undress and try harder': 
 			audition['undress'] = 1
-			gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj2'
+			gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj2'
 		end
 		
 !!		act'Let him take control':
@@ -249,12 +249,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 					'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, first your lips and then wiping away the cum that dripped from them onto your clothes. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him.'
 					'"Well, I thought that was quite enjoyable, didn''t you?" he asks, still smirking. "I think you''re a fine choice for this role. After all, you''ve got such a pretty mouth."'
 					'He slides the paper closer towards you and a pen with it. "Just sign here and the casting will be official."'
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 				else
 					'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, first your lips and then wiping away the cum that dripped from them onto your clothes. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him.'
 					'"Well, I thought that was quite enjoyable, didn''t you?" he asks, still smirking. "I think you''re a fine choice for this role. After all, you''ve got such a pretty mouth."'
 					'He slides the paper closer towards you and a pen with it. "Just sign here and the casting will be official."'
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 				end
 				
 !!				act'Just leave':
@@ -272,9 +272,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 !!					actress['cast_couch_walk'] = 1
 !!				end
 				if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 				else
-					act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+					act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -308,17 +308,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Once the floor is as clean as you think you can get it (though you''re pretty sure it''s still going to stain), you take a moment to gather your clothes and redress yourself. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role now':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role now': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 							end
 						
 							act'Stand up':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Swallowing again to cope with the aftertaste, you ignore your clothes for the moment and stand up as you see <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and has resituated himself behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 							end
 						else
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you wipe your mouth and body clean before picking up your disgarded clothes and pulling them back on. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 						
 						act'Just clean yourself':
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you wipe your hands and breasts off before carefully wiping your mouth clean. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk. You ignore your disgarded clothes for the moment and you stand, still naked, to face him.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 						
 						
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Not bothering to clean yourself up, you stand up, still naked and covered in cum, and watch as <<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants to resituate himself behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you wipe your mouth clean before crawling over to your disgarded clothes and pulling them back on. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end	
 						
 						act'Just wipe your mouth':
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking the tissues up from the floor, you carefully wipe your mouth clean before tossing the used tissue into a wastebasket. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already resituated himself behind the desk. You ignore your disgarded clothes for the moment and you stand, still naked, to face him.'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_swallow_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_swallow_end'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You pull your clothes on while he watches you, leering the whole time.'								
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 
 							act'Just get dressed':
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your tired eyes a few times before pulling on your clothes, unavoidably smearing them with cum from your body as you do.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you," he smirks "You should wear that out."'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You leave your clothes where they were thrown on the ground and stand up naked to face him.'
 							end
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 						end
 						
 						act'Too stunned to care':
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your puffy eyes a few times and stand up naked, watching and waiting as <<$boydesc>> pull his pants up and sit down at the desk again.'
 							end
 							'"That''s a good look on you," he smirks "You should wear that out."'
-							act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+							act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -516,14 +516,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your clothes, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 							act'Too stunned to care':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink a few times and stand, watching <<$boydesc>> pull his pants up and sit down at the desk again.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you," he smirks. "You should wear that out."'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 									'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You pull your clothes on while he watches you, leering the whole time.'								
-									act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+									act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 								end
 
 								act'Just get dressed':
@@ -558,7 +558,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 									'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your puffy eyes a few times before pulling on your clothes, unavoidably smearing them with cum from your body as you do.'
 									'"See? That''s the spirit! Wear it with pride," he smirks.'
-									act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+									act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 								end
 							end
 							
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 									'You take them and begin cleaning yourself up, wiping your face and then wiping away the cum that dripped onto your breasts, and then finally cleaning off your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled his pants up and is sitting behind the desk again with a sheet of paper on it between you and him. You leave your clothes where they were thrown on the ground and stand up naked to face him.'
 								end
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 							
 							act'Too stunned to care':
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_bj2':
 									'You look blankly at the packet in front of you but for some reason you can''t summon the will inside you to be bothered by the cum covering your face. You blink your puffy eyes a few times and stand up naked, watching and waiting as <<$boydesc>> pull his pants up and sit down at the desk again.'
 								end
 								'"See? That''s the spirit! Wear it with pride," he smirks.'
-								act'Find out if you got the role':gt'auditions','reluctant_facial_end'
+								act 'Find out if you got the role': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_facial_end'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -642,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 				audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
 				'Suddenly and without any warning whatsoever <<$boydesc>> thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your whole body tenses up and your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside. When he pulls out you feel something gush from your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 !!			end
 			'You squeeze your eyes tight, not saying anything and just endure his relentless fucking, waiting for it to be over. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out of your pussy.'
 			audition['cast_couch'] = 12
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Not inside me!':
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 !!				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out after it.'
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -695,14 +695,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Emotion wells up inside you but you steel yourself. You are determined not to humilate yourself further by crying when you feel another glob of cum flicked from <<$boydesc>>''s cock onto your face and it almost breaks you right then, but you barely contain it. Your lips quiver, but no tears fall from your face.'
-						act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial1'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial1'
 					end
 					
 					act'Cry':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Tears fall from your eyes and mix with the cum on your face. You put your head in your hands taking deep breaths, trying to cover up the huffing of the sobbs that come from your heaving chest.'
-						act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial2'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -751,14 +751,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'You take the packet and wipe your mouth coughing heavily into the tissues as you do. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'After coughing a few more times, you decide you don''t want to stall this any longer, you want this audition to end and ignore the packet, standing up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -773,7 +773,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 					'With nothing else you can do, you decide to endure it, even as his cock and his cum chokes your throat. To stop yourself from actually suffocating, you force yourself to swallow his vile semen, eliciting a wide smile from <<$boydesc>>.'
 					*nl
 					'"Outstanding," he says, grinning ear to ear as he withdraws himself from your mouth. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 					'You wait until the torrent of cum stops filling your mouth and <<$boydesc>> pulls away. The moment he does you spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -807,14 +807,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_fuck_cum':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'Emotion wells up inside you but you steel yourself. You are determined not to humilate yourself further by crying when you feel another glob of cum flicked from <<$boydesc>>''s cock onto your face and it almost breaks you right then, but you barely contain it. Your lips quiver, but no tears fall from your face.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial1'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial1'
 			end
 			
 			act'Cry':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'Tears fall from your eyes and mix with the cum on your face. You put your head in your hands taking deep breaths, trying to cover up the huffing of the sobbs that come from your heaving chest.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_facial2'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_facial2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -832,15 +832,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh my god! He just came inside me!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by. <i>What if I get pregnant?</i>'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -858,15 +858,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -875,24 +875,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_creampie':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
-				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning after pill from the pharmacy."'
+				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning-after pill from the pharmacy."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
-				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -904,8 +904,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Love the look on a girl''s face after she''s been pasted," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial1':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -924,15 +924,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial2':
 	'"Oh come on, it''s just a bit of cum," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Between sobs, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
 	'"Just wipe it off. I''m sure this isn''t the first time someone''s fucked you and dropped a load on your face. Calm down.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 		'Staring at the packet, your vision blurs and you can''t bring yourself to pick it up. You stand up sniffling and covered in cum, waiting for <<$boydesc>> to deliver to you the results of your audition.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. You should you wear that more often."'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -971,14 +971,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panic_virgin1':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Emotion wells up inside you but you steel yourself. You are determined not to humilate yourself further by crying when you feel another glob of cum flicked from <<$boydesc>>''s cock onto your face and it almost breaks you right then, but you barely contain it. Your lips quiver, but no tears fall from your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','panic_virgin2'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'panic_virgin2'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cry':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Tears fall from your eyes and mix with the cum on your face. You put your head in your hands taking deep breaths, trying to cover up the huffing of the sobbs that come from your heaving chest.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','panic_virgin2'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'panic_virgin2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panic_virgin2':
 		'<i><<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>></i>'
 		'"Congratulations! You officially cast as <<$audition[''role'']>>. Thank you for auditioning," he says, his smile breaking into a grin.'
 		'"Thank you for casting me," you say flatly and exit the room.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	end
 	
 	act'Don''t bother':
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panic_virgin2':
 		'"Are you sure you don''t want to clean up?"'
 		'You blink at him blankly.'
 		'"Well anyways, this is the paperwork that means you''ve got the job if you just sign here," he gestures at a line at the bottom of a page.'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','facial_signature_upset'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'facial_signature_upset'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1041,10 +1041,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin':
 		if rand(0,1) = 1:
 			'Suddenly he pulls out of you.'
 			'"Get on your knees," he says, pulling you off the desk and shoving you to the ground. '
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial'
 		else
 			'Suddenly, he begins to pick up his pace.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1062,14 +1062,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_facial':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'The cum that dribbles down your face causes something to bubble up inside you and suddenly you want to cry, not knowing entirely why. The feeling fades and just as you think it''s about to pass, <<$boydesc>> flicks one last glob of cum from his cock onto your forehead. The impact on your face nearly causes you to instantly burst into tears but taking deep breaths through your nose, you somehow hold it back.'
-		act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial2'
 	end
 	
 	act'Cry':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cry_facial3.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Everything that''s happening is just too much and you burst into tears, the droplets that fall from your eyes mixing with the cum that already coats your cheeks. You heave shuddering breaths as sobs wrack your body and you hang your head in your hands, unable to contain your blubbering emotions.'
-		act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial2'
 	end
 	
 	act'Take it in stride':
@@ -1078,7 +1078,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_facial':
 		'Opening your eyes, you look down at yourself. <<$boydesc>> cum is everywhere, you can even feel it in your hair. Looking up at him, he seems to be very satisfied with his work that he''s left all over your face and breasts.'
 		*nl
 		'All things considered, you don''t know if you''re entirely comfortable with everything that just happened or how he pressured you into it, but at the end of the day it was still your decision, so you take it in stride.'
-		act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1087,14 +1087,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_facial2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ahh, virgins really are the best," <<$boydesc>> says, pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 		'Unable to bring yourself to care about your current state, you stand up, cum covered and naked, to face <<$boydesc>> as he pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
 		'"I like that look," he says. "You should wear that more often."'
-		act'Find out the results':gt'auditions','reluctant_virgin_results'
+		act 'Find out the results': gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_virgin_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1117,8 +1117,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 				'"Ahh yeah, creampies really are the best" <<$boydesc>> says, picking a pack of tissues out of the desk and wiping himself off before tossing them over towards you.'
 				'<i>It''s a good thing that I started birth control a while back. I guess being careful paid off,</i> you think to yourself as you feel another glob dribble down your leg.'
 			end
-			act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck!':
@@ -1137,8 +1137,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 				'"Apparently I can," <<$boydesc>> says, picking a pack of tissues out of the desk and wiping himself off before tossing them to you.'
 				'<i>It''s a good thing that I started birth control a while back. I guess being careful paid off,</i> you think to yourself looking at the cum dangling from your fingers.'
 			end
-			act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		end
 		
 		if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:
@@ -1150,8 +1150,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 				'"Huh? Well, you should have said something then." <<$boydesc>> doesn''t seem to feel guilty or regretful in the least, even having the audacity to have a grin on his face.'
 				'"I didn''t think you were going to just cum inside me without warning!" you cry.'
 				'<i>Oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck! What if I get pregnant??</i>'
-				act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+				act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -1173,11 +1173,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 					'<i>It''s a good thing that I started birth control a while back. I guess being careful paid off,</i> you think to yourself as you feel another glob dribble down your leg.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+			act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 		end
 		
-		gs'willpower','cum_inside','resist'
+		gs 'willpower', 'cum_inside','resist'
 		if will_cost >= pcs_willpwr:
 			act'Not inside me! (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1191,7 +1191,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 						'"Please! Don''t cum inside me!" you beg.'
 					end
 					'"Fine, then get on your knees," he says, pulling out of you and roughly shoving you to the ground.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_virgin_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_virgin_facial'
 				else
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boydesc
@@ -1209,8 +1209,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_creampie':
 						'"Whew," <<$boydesc>> says. "Now that''s a tight pussy. Almost came inside anyways just to feel what it was like."'
 					end
 					'He moves over to the other side of the desk and pulls a packet of tissues from a drawer. After wiping himself off, he throws it in front of you, still bent over the desk with cum coating your backside.'
-					act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean_dress'
-					act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_clean'
+					act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean_dress'
+					act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_clean'
 					act'Don''t bother':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1280,9 +1280,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_clean_dress':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1335,9 +1335,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_clean':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','reluctant_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'reluctant_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1377,9 +1377,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_clean_dress':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1442,9 +1442,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_clean':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1507,9 +1507,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_clean':
 	end
 	act'Find out the results':
 		if audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 		else
-			gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/audition_sex2.qsrc

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						else
-							act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-							act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+							act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+							act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your breasts but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"Good choice. I love your suit. And especially the accessories you chose to go with it."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -194,14 +194,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -217,14 +217,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 				end
 				act'Jerk him off into your mouth':
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 					end
 				end
 			elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 3:
@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 !!							cla & *clr
 !!							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 !!							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 !!						end
 !!						act'Don''t bother':
 !!							cla & *clr
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 !!							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 !!							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 !!							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 !!						end
 !!					end
 					
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'"... no," you say hesitantly. "I''ll... do what you want..."'
 								'"Good," he says. "Now bend over."'
-								act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal2'
+								act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal2'
 							end
 							
 							act'... yes':
@@ -423,13 +423,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								else
 									'"For fuck''s sake! Well, this better be the best blowjob of your fucking life or you won''t even have a chance at this! Get back down there!" he says, shoving you to your knees.'
 								end
-								act'Blow him':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj2'
+								act 'Blow him': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get assfucked':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal2'
+							gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal2'
 						end
 					else
 						'"A virgin huh?" he says with a hungry look. "Well if you''re a virgin, then I could <i>definitely</i> give this part for you... that is, if you give something to me in return..."'
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							else
 								'He roughly shoves you down onto the desk. Immediately, you can feel him pressing into your asshole.'
 							end
-							act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal1'
+							act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal1'
 						end
 						act'What about anal instead?':
 							cla & *nl
@@ -456,10 +456,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 								act'Take off your clothes':
 									gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 									gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-									gt'auditions','neutral_anal2'
+									gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal2'
 								end
 							else
-								act'Bend over':gt'auditions','neutral_anal2'
+								act 'Bend over': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal2'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -469,10 +469,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 							'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 							'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
 							audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							act'Ask him to use a condom':
 								audition['condom'] = 1
-								gt'auditions','neutral_virgin2'
+								gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -480,10 +480,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 			else
 				act'Do as he says':
 					if rand(0,1) = 1:
-						gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
+						gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck1'
 					else
 						audition['surprise_anal'] = 1
-						gt'audition_sex2','neutral_anal1'
+						gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_anal1'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj3':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj3':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj4':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj4':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -639,20 +639,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. They''re all your own juices anyways since he came in the condom. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well. It''s not like there''s anything to clean up since he used a condom. The rest are all your own juices.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
@@ -674,7 +674,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 				end
 				audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 				'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
@@ -692,20 +692,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. They''re all your own juices anyways since he came in the condom. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well. It''s not like there''s anything to clean up since he used a condom. The rest are all your own juices.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			else
 				cla & *clr
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'You decide not to say anything and close your eyes, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of cum and pussy juice spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -756,7 +756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_facial'
 				end
 				act'Stick out your tongue':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me," you grunt between thrusts.'
 			'"Now that''s how you impress me at an audition!" <<$boydesc>> pumps twice more and then thrusts balls deep into you. He grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. You wait patient while his cock pulses several times before he withdraws himself from you, cum spilling out after.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cum wherever you want':
@@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boydesc
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<<$boydesc>> says the last word and he thrusts balls deep into you, grunting as you feel him release his load inside you hot spill out inside you. You wait patient while his cock pulses several times before he withdraws himself from you, cum spilling out after.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_creampie'					
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_creampie'					
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -873,14 +873,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -896,14 +896,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -917,7 +917,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -930,7 +930,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -945,7 +945,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_facial'
 		end
 		act'Stick out your tongue':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_fuck_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -999,15 +999,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1025,15 +1025,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1042,24 +1042,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_creampie':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
-				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning after pill from the pharmacy."'
+				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re complaining about getting creampied? If you don''t want to get pregnant, you shouldn''t have sex. Goodness knows I wasn''t your first time," <<$boydesc>> smirks. "If you''re really that scared go get yourself a morning-after pill from the pharmacy."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
-				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1071,8 +1071,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_facial':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Love the look on a girl''s face after she''s been pasted," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_facial':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
 		if audition['condom'] = 1:jump 'cum_choice2'
@@ -1191,20 +1191,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the blood now leaking from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the blood now leaking from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1213,7 +1213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
 					'"Guess you really were cherry," he says, noting the trickle of blood running down your leg.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			else
 				cla & *clr
@@ -1226,7 +1226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'You decide not to say anything and close your eyes, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of cum and pussy juice spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1242,7 +1242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid and pussy juice slightly tinged with red spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1254,7 +1254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_facial'
 				end
 				act'Stick out your tongue':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1280,7 +1280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -1290,7 +1290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1309,7 +1309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me," you grunt between thrusts.'
 			'"Now that''s how you impress me at an audition!" <<$boydesc>> pumps twice more and then thrusts balls deep into you. He grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cum wherever you want':
@@ -1321,7 +1321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boydesc
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<<$boydesc>> says the last word and he thrusts balls deep into you, grunting as you feel him release his load inside you hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_creampie'					
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_creampie'					
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1365,14 +1365,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1388,14 +1388,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1409,7 +1409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1422,7 +1422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1436,7 +1436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin_facial'
 		end
 		act'Stick out your tongue':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1462,7 +1462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1472,7 +1472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1491,15 +1491,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1518,15 +1518,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1535,25 +1535,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_creampie':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
-				'"I don''t see what the problem is," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "Your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill if you''re afraid of getting pregnant. Or don''t, maybe you''ll have a great kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in there," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"I don''t see what the problem is," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "Your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill if you''re afraid of getting pregnant. Or don''t, maybe you''ll have a great kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in there," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'<i>It''s a good thing I was already on birth control,</i> you think to yourself. <i>I could''ve ended up with this guy''s baby growing inside me...</i>'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
-				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
+				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. Besides, your pussy was so tight, it was practically begging me to cum inside it! Just buy a morning-after pill. Or don''t, maybe you''ll get pregnant. I bet it''d be a real handsome kid. You''ve got a gold mine of DNA in that pussy of yours," <<$boydesc>> smirks arrogantly.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1565,8 +1565,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_facial':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ahh, virgins really are the best," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -1575,14 +1575,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_facial':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 	end
 end
 
 
 !! ---------------------------------------- Anal -------------------------------------------------
 if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_anal1':
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_doggy/fuck1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You cry out in shock when <<$boydesc>> suddenly plunges his cock into your ass dry.'
 	if audition['surprise_anal'] = 1:'<i>Fuck!</i> He didn''t tell you he was going to assfuck you! <i>Fucking warn a girl!</i>'
@@ -1590,7 +1590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_anal1':
 	'The next few minutes are filled with the sound of your grunting and his as you hang on for dear life, holding the edges of the desk in a death grip while <<$boydesc>> drives into your ass again and again with no regard for your personal comfort.'
 	'"Gotta love assfucking defenseless girls!" he cries smugly, giving your ass a few slaps for his own benefit.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex2','neutral_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_assfuck_cum'
 end
 
 
@@ -1605,10 +1605,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_anal2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal','custom'
 		'<<$boydesc>>''s cock enters your ass and you grunt in discomfort, your rectum painfully dry. However uncomfortable it is for you, he doesn''t seem to mind and quickly builds up to a steady rhythm.'
 	end
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'"Man oh man, do I love fucking a vulnerable girl''s ass!" he grunts, emphasizing his words with each thrust. You can hear the smugness in his voice.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex2','neutral_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_assfuck_cum'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
@@ -1624,7 +1624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he goes balls deep, cock pulsing. You groan at the sudden intrusion and feel a hot liquid spurting into your ass. When his cock stops pulsing he withdraws, you immediately feel cum drip from your gaping asshole.'
-			act'Continue':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1664,14 +1664,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1687,14 +1687,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1708,7 +1708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1721,7 +1721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1741,14 +1741,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Ahh, love a good assfuck," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 				'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-				act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean_dress'
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_clean'
+				act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean_dress'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_clean'
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Unable to bring yourself to care about your current state, you stand up, cum covered and naked, to face <<$boydesc>> as he pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
 					'"I like that look," he says. "You should wear that more often."'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1776,7 +1776,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1786,7 +1786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_assfuck_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/audition_sex3.qsrc

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
@@ -119,11 +119,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						else
-							act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
-							act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+							act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
+							act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your breasts but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it and simply stand up.'
 								'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 								'"Good choice. I love your suit. And especially the accessories you chose to go with it."'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, wiping your chin first and then your clothes, and finally your hands to make sure there is nothing remaining. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum hanging from your chin and spattering your clothes but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -188,14 +188,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -211,14 +211,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 							
 							act'Don''t bother':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-								act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+								act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 				end
 				act'Jerk him off into your mouth':
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 						'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 					
 					act'Spit it out':
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 						'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 						'"Tch."'
 						'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-						act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+						act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 					end
 				end
 			elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 3:
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 !!							cla & *clr
 !!							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 !!							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 !!						end
 !!						act'Don''t bother':
 !!							cla & *clr
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 !!							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 !!							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 !!							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-!!							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+!!							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 !!						end
 !!					end
 					
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 							'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 								'"... no," you say hesitantly. "I''ll... do what you want..."'
 								'"Good," he says. "Now bend over."'
-								act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_anal2'
+								act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_anal2'
 							end
 							
 							act'... yes':
@@ -417,13 +417,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								else
 									'"For fuck''s sake! Well, this better be the best blowjob of your fucking life or you won''t even have a chance at this! Get back down there!" he says, shoving you to your knees.'
 								end
-								act'Blow him':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_bj2'
+								act 'Blow him': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_bj2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get assfucked':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex1','slutty_anal2'
+							gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_anal2'
 						end
 					else
 						'"A virgin huh?" he says with a hungry look. "Well if you''re a virgin, then I could <i>definitely</i> give this part for you... that is, if you give something to me in return..."'
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							else
 								'He roughly shoves you down onto the desk. Immediately, you can feel him pressing into your asshole.'
 							end
-							act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_anal1'
+							act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_anal1'
 						end
 						act'What about anal instead?':
 							cla & *nl
@@ -450,10 +450,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 								act'Take off your clothes':
 									gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 									gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-									gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal2'
+									gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal2'
 								end
 							else
-								act'Bend over':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal2'
+								act 'Bend over': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal2'
 							end
 						end
 						
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 							'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes and taking a deep breath. "Okay. I''ll let you fuck me... If you promise to give me the role."'
 							'<<$boydesc>> grins wolfishly.'
 							'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-							act'Take off your clothes':gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+							act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 							act'Ask him to use a condom':
 								audition['condom'] = 1
 								gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
@@ -473,10 +473,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 			else
 				act'Do as he says':
 					if rand(0,1) = 1:
-						gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'
+						gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck1'
 					else
 						audition['surprise_anal'] = 1
-						gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'
+						gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal1'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj3':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj3':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj4':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj4':
 			'You consider the cum covering your face and coating your hands but decide you just can''t be bothered to clean it up and simply stand up.'
 			'<<$boydesc>> pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 			'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -598,23 +598,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 				'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, bending over and spreading your pussy lips to show him the proof.'
 				'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 				audition['bonus'] += 10
-				act'Lose your virginity':gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+				act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 			end
 		end
 		act'Get fucked':
 			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 			else
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 			end
 		end
 		if mc_inventory['normal_condoms'] > 0:
 			act'Put on a condom on him':
 				audition['condom'] = 1
 				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 				else
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -626,23 +626,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 				'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, laying back on the desk and spreading your pussy to show him the proof.'
 				'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 				audition['bonus'] += 10
-				act'Lose your virginity':gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+				act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
 			end
 		end
 		act'Get fucked':
 			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 			else
-				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'
+				gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck1'
 			end
 		end
 		if mc_inventory['normal_condoms'] > 0:
 			act'Put on a condom on him':
 				audition['condom'] = 1
 				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 				else
-					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'
+					gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck1'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -696,20 +696,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Now that <<$boydesc>>''s finished fucking you, you don''t want to continue being naked in front of him and ignore the packet, picking up your clothes. They''re all your own juices anyways since he came in the condom. By the time you''re finished, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy and get dressed':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Afterwards, you reach for your clothes. <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and watches you get dressed from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Wipe your pussy':
 					audition['bonus'] += 5
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_pussy.mp4"></video></video></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you pull out a tissue, wiping your pussy and cleaning up the juices that leak from your lower lips. Once satisfied, you stand up to face <<$boydesc>>, who has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -717,7 +717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'You don''t bother getting dressed, hoping it will earn you some extra points with <<$boydesc>>, and you ignore the packet of tissues to clean up as well. It''s not like there''s anything to clean up since he used a condom. The rest are all your own juices.'
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				audition['cast_couch'] = 12
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				end
 				audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 				'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
@@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			end
 			'You decide not to say anything and just keep moaning along, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, thick globs of cum dripping out after.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Why don''t you finish on my face?':
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				end
 				'"Why don''t you finish on my face?" you ask him. "Bet I''d look great with your cum all over me."'
 				'"Why don''t I do what I please?" <<$boydesc>> grunts back and thrusts himself balls deep into you. You feel his cock start pulsing and something hot spills out inside you. After a few moments he pulls out, a slurry of white liquid spilling out after it. "You look better with cum coming out of you."'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				if audition['position'] = 3:
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -811,7 +811,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'"I put it on just for you!"'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me!" you mew. "Pump me with your baby batter! Fill me up!"'
 			'Your words must have sent him over the edge because <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and begins groaning. Inside your pussy you can feel his cock pulsing and spurts of liquid painting your insides, and you moan, squeezing tight and trying to milk him for all he''s worth. A few moments later, he removes himself from you and you feel the dribble of cum spill from your pussy.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Where do you want to cum?':
@@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<<$boydesc>> cuts you off by thrusting balls deep into you and groaning loaudly. Inside your pussy you can feel his cock pulsing and spurts of liquid painting your insides, and you moan, squeezing tight and trying to milk him for all he''s worth. A few moments later, he removes himself from you and you feel the dribble of cum spill from your pussy.'
 				'"I want to cum inside you," he says belatedly, grinning.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_creampie'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'<<$boydesc>> cuts you off by pulling out of you and throwing you to the floor, jerking off in front of your face.'
@@ -879,7 +879,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'"I put it on just for you!"'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -938,14 +938,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -961,14 +961,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -982,7 +982,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, smiling with your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1014,7 +1014,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck_cum':
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'"I put it on just for you!"'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1043,15 +1043,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1069,15 +1069,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1088,29 +1088,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_creampie':
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
 				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re the one who offered to have sex," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes. "You have a problem with someone creampieing you, maybe you shouldn''t be slutting it up in back rooms of talent agencies without birth control. That just seems stupid."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t clean up':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
 				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without getting knocked up. If you''re that afraid of getting pregnant, maybe you shouldn''t be slutting it up in back rooms of talent agencies without birth control. That just seems stupid," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1207,7 +1207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he thrusts deep into your pussy, cock pulsing. Your eyes go wide when you feel something filling you up inside and when he pulls out you feel it gush from your pussy.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 1:
 		if audition['condom'] = 1: jump 'cum_choice2'
@@ -1223,7 +1223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			end
 			'You decide not to say anything and just keep moaning, waiting for it to happen. After a couple more pumps <<$boydesc>> thrusts balls deep into you and grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides out, a slurry of cum and pussy juice slightly tinged with red spills out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Not inside me!':
@@ -1238,7 +1238,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 				'"Please! Don''t cum inside me! Not insi-!" Your voice cuts off and eyes go wide as <<$boydesc>> thrusts himself balls deep and you feel something hot spill out inside you. His cock pulses several times inside you before sliding out, a slurry of white liquid and pussy juice slightly tinged with red spills out after it.'
-				act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 			else
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_miss/fuck2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1250,7 +1250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-					act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_facial'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_facial'
 				end
 				act'Stick out your tongue':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1276,7 +1276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
@@ -1286,7 +1286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 							'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 							'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			end
 			'"Cum inside me," you grunt between thrusts.'
 			'"Now that''s how you impress me at an audition!" <<$boydesc>> pumps twice more and then thrusts balls deep into you. He grunts and you feel something hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'
 		end
 		
 		act'Cum wherever you want':
@@ -1317,7 +1317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boydesc
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<<$boydesc>> says the last word and he thrusts balls deep into you, grunting as you feel him release his load inside you hot spill out inside you. <<$boydesc>> waits until he finishes his orgasm and then slides his cock out, a slurry of cum, pussy juice, and blood spilling out after it.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_creampie'					
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_creampie'					
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1361,14 +1361,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1384,14 +1384,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1405,7 +1405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1432,7 +1432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You flinch instinctively when you feel hot liquid spatter across your face.'
-			act'Continue':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin_facial'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin_facial'
 		end
 		act'Stick out your tongue':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boydesc
@@ -1458,7 +1458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1468,7 +1468,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_cum':
 					'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1487,15 +1487,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_creampie':
 			'<i>Oh no... Why did I let him cum inside me? I could get pregnant!<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 		end
 		'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-		act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+		act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 			
-		act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+		act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 		
 		act'Don''t bother':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-			act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+			act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1514,15 +1514,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_creampie':
 				'<i>How did I let this happen...<i> you think to yourself, looking up at <<$boydesc>> as he passes by.'
 			end
 			'He''s already pulled a packet of tissues from the desk and is wiping himself off with them. When he''s done, he leaves the packet next to you.'
-			act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+			act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-			act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+			act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 			
 			act'Don''t bother':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed and sits down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, enjoying the visuals of his work.'
-				act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+				act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 			end
 		end
 		
@@ -1533,29 +1533,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_creampie':
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking??"'
 				'"What?" he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk. "You''re the one who offered to have sex," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes. "If you''re that afraid of getting pregnant, maybe you shouldn''t be offering up your virginity in the back room of talent agenciy without birth control. That just seems stupid."'
 				'<i>I guess this is why I''m on birth control...</i> you think to yourself, glaring at him while he wipes his cock off. He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t clean up':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			else
 				'"What the fuck!" you shout. "You just came inside me! What the fuck were you thinking?? I''m not on birth control!"'
 				'"Well you should have thought of that before deciding to fuck someone," he says, pulling a pack of tissues from the desk to clean his cock off. "That''s not my problem if you''re too stupid to trade sex for favors without taking birth control. If you''re that afraid of getting pregnant, maybe you shouldn''t be slutting it up in back rooms of talent agencies without birth control. That just seems stupid," <<$boydesc>> says, rolling his eyes.'
 				'He leaves the packet next to you on the desk.'
-				act'Clean yourself up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
+				act 'Clean yourself up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
 				
-				act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+				act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 				
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'<i>Fuck it,</i> you think to yourself. You decide to ignore the tissues and your clothes, choosing to wait for the results while <<$boydesc>> gets dressed to sit down behind the desk. Wiping your pussy now wouldn''t do anything, you might as well just use it to your advantage while you can. Just as he takes his seat you feel another glob of his cum dribble down your leg. He smiles as he sees it, seeming to enjoy the visuals of his work.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1567,8 +1567,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_facial':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ahh, virgins really are the best," you hear <<$boydesc>> say. Carefully opening your eyes, you look past strands of cum to see him pulling some tissues from the desk to clean himself up. He tosses the packet down to you on the floor.'
 	'You look down at the tissues in front of you.'
-	act'Clean up and get dressed':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean_dress'
-	act'Just clean up':gt'audition_sex1','slutty_clean'
+	act 'Clean up and get dressed': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean_dress'
+	act 'Just clean up': gt 'audition_sex1', 'slutty_clean'
 	act'Don''t bother':
 		cla & *clr
 		audition['bonus'] += 5
@@ -1577,14 +1577,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_facial':
 		'He pulls up his pants and sits down behind the desk. Looking at you he smirks.'
 		'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 		'Looks like your bet is paying off'
-		act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin_results'
+		act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin_results'
 	end
 end
 
 
 !! ---------------------------------------- Anal -------------------------------------------------
 if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_anal1':
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/table_doggy/fuck1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You cry out in shock when <<$boydesc>> suddenly plunges his cock into your ass dry.'
 	if audition['surprise_anal'] = 1:'<i>Fuck!</i> He didn''t tell you he was going to assfuck you! <i>Fucking warn a girl!</i>'
@@ -1593,7 +1593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_anal1':
 	'"Gotta love assfucking defenseless girls!" he cries smugly, giving your ass a few slaps for his own benefit.'
 	'"Oh yeah! Harder!" you groan as sexily as possible, trying to roll with the punches.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex3','slutty_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_assfuck_cum'
 end
 
 
@@ -1608,10 +1608,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_anal2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal','custom'
 		'<<$boydesc>>''s cock enters your ass and you grunt in discomfort, your rectum painfully dry. However uncomfortable it is for you, he doesn''t seem to mind and quickly builds up to a steady rhythm.'
 	end
-	gs'arousal','anal',rand(4,14)
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal',rand(4,14)
 	'"Man oh man, do I love fucking a vulnerable girl''s ass!" he grunts, emphasizing his words with each thrust. You can hear the smugness in his voice.'
 	*nl
-	gs'audition_sex3','slutty_assfuck_cum'
+	gs 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_assfuck_cum'
 end
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
@@ -1627,7 +1627,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			audition['creampie_surprise'] = 1
 			'After a few minutes, you feel him tense up and without warning he goes balls deep, cock pulsing. You groan at the sudden intrusion and feel a hot liquid spurting into your ass. When his cock stops pulsing he withdraws, you immediately feel cum drip from your gaping asshole.'
-			act'Continue':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 		end
 	elseif audition['cum_choice'] = 2:
 		'After a few more minutes, <<$boydesc>> grunts.'
@@ -1667,14 +1667,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 					
@@ -1690,14 +1690,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Taking the tissues, you pull them out and clean your hands off, also taking a moment to wipe the corners of your mouth. When you''re done, you stand and face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 						
 						act'Don''t bother':
 							cla & *clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 							'Looking down at the cum on your hands, you decide you can''t be bothered to clean them off right now and stand up to face <<$boydesc>>.'
-							act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+							act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1711,7 +1711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Making firm eye contact with <<$boydesc>>, you take a deep breath and gather the cum in your mouth and gulp it down, sticking your tongue out after to show you swallowed everything.'
 					'"Outstanding," <<$boydesc>> says, grinning ear to ear. He pulls a pack of tissues from the desk and wipes himself off before pulling up his pants. You stand to face him and find out the result of the audition.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				
 				act'Spit it out':
@@ -1724,7 +1724,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					'You know he told you to, but you don''t really like the idea of swallowing and spit the cum out into your hand. Looking up at <<$boydesc>>, he has an irritated expression on his face.'
 					'"Tch."'
 					'He pulls a packet of tissues from the desk and wipes himself clean. He sees the cum on your hands, but just puts the pack back in the desk without offering you any.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1756,7 +1756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 					'Picking up the packet, you clean yourself off, carefully wiping your mouth and your cheeks and around your eyes and finally your hands. By the time you''re done, <<$boydesc>> has already pulled up his pants and has been watching you from behind the desk.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 				act'Don''t bother':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_assfuck_cum':
 					'"That''s a good look on you. I bet you wear that often."'
 					'"I put it on just for you!"'
 					'Looks like your bet is paying off.'
-					act'Find out the results of your audition':gt'auditions','slutty_results'
+					act 'Find out the results of your audition': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_results'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/auditions.qsrc

@@ -55,17 +55,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'setup':
 		if audition['unique'] > 0:
 			gt'auditions_minor1', 'unique'
 		else
-			gt'auditions_minor1','general_dialogue'
+			gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_dialogue'
 		end
 	elseif audition['roletype'] = 6 or audition['roletype'] = 7:
 		gt'auditions_secondary', $audition['role']
 	elseif audition['roletype'] >= 8:
 		gt'auditions_main', $audition['role']
 	else
-		if $audition['type'] = 'general':gt'auditions','general_dialogue'
-		if $audition['type'] = 'extra':gt'auditions','extra'
-		if $audition['type'] = 'titty':gt'auditions','tit_audition'
-		if $audition['type'] = 'general_titty':gt'auditions','general_tit_audition'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'general':gt 'auditions', 'general_dialogue'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'extra':gt 'auditions', 'extra'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'titty':gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition'
+		if $audition['type'] = 'general_titty':gt 'auditions', 'general_tit_audition'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 	'"Ahh, yes. Thank you for coming. Just stand there for now please." She looks at you with a critical eye, making notes on a paper in front of her.'
 	if pcs_skin < 40:
 		'"Your skin is awful, you have acne everywhere. You need a better facial care routine. Actually, I''m sorry I have to stop right here. You simply don''t have the face for this role. Next please!" She calls out to the hall while unsympathetically shooing you out with her hand.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	else
 		if pcs_skin >= 40 and pcs_skin < 60:
 			'"Your skin could be a little better but nothing the makeup department can''t cover up. Now show me your breasts please."'
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/hallway.jpg"></center>'
 				'Blushing, you can''t do it and leave the room red faced while you hear the casting director sneer in disgust again.'
 				'"Next!"'
-				act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 			end
 			if pcs_inhib < 50:
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 							'"Ahh, uhh, yeah I did..."'
 							'"Hrmph. Maybe I should think about getting one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 						end
-						act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 					end
 				
 				end
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 						'"Ahh, uhh, yeah I did..."'
 						'"Hrmph. Maybe I should think about getting one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 					end
-					act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 						'"Ahh, uhh, yeah I did..."'
 						'"Hrmph. Maybe I should think about getting one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 					end
-					act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition':
 					'"Yes! They used to be a lot smaller but I thought I''d upgrade."'
 					'"Hrmph. Maybe I should about get one of those myself some time..." she mutters.'
 				end
-				act'Continue':gt'auditions','tit_audition_result'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'auditions', 'tit_audition_result'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition_result':
 		'"Well, if it were up to me, I''d hire you. You''ve got a great complexion and nice perky boobs, but the director specifically asked for, in his own words, ''big fat titties,'' and unfortunately you''re just too small. Thanks for coming anyways, maybe another time. Next!"'
 		'You''re a bit stunned at how quickly you were dismissed based on something as discriminatory as the size of your breasts, but you don''t know what else to do so you simply prepare to leave.'
 		'"Can somebody please be intelligent enough to only send in busty girls? Thank you!"'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	elseif first_tit_audition = 0:
 		first_tit_audition = 1
 		'"Well, you''ve got great tits! You''re hired."'
@@ -248,14 +248,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tit_audition_result':
 		else
 			'You start as you suddenly realize you were so surprised you never pulled your top back into place when she said you were hired. As you put everything back in place, you think about all that time you spent preparing for this audition and wonder why you even bothered...'
 		end
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	else
 		'"Welp, you''ve got great tits! You''re hired."'
 		'"Really? Great! Thank you!"'
 		'"Mhmm, yeah. Sure thing. Congratulations on landing the role of <<$audition[''role'']>>. Filming is in <<acting[''shoot_day''] - daystart>> days. Don''t be late Now clear out please, I need to keep auditioning other roles."'
 		'You knew this audition was never going to test your acting skills, you''ve done these before, but it still feels nice to be hired, even if it''s just for your breasts.'
 		!!insert variable to say the audition was successful
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	end
 
 end
@@ -297,9 +297,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_swallow_end':
 		'"Here''s the contract. Just sign here and it''s all official."'
 		act'Sign the contract':
 			if $clothingworntype = 'none':
-				gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+				gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 			else
-				gt'auditions','signature'
+				gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_swallow_end':
 			else
 				'Completely stunned, you quickly get dressed and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
 			end
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_swallow_end':
 			else
 				'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial_end':
 		'"Yeah I suppose so," he says as if musing to himself. "I think you''re a fine choice for the job. Shame you can''t wear your audition makeup for it though." He continues to smirk at you.'
 		'<<$boydesc>> reaches over to a stack of papers and looks through it for a bit before pulling one out and sliding it across the table towards you with a pen.'
 		'"Here''s the contract. Just sign here and it''s all official."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','facial_signature_upset'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'facial_signature_upset'
 	else
 		'"Pfff," he huffs. "As if. I''ve had better before. Either get better at acting or practice giving head cause neither one is a good enough justification to get you the job. Now get out. I have real applicants to audition."'
 		act'Leave the room':
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial_end':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, finding yourself not exactly surprised, but also unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_facial_end':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -417,9 +417,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 			'"If you''re free on Fridays I''d be happy to toss you a few rubles to fuck it again," he says, sliding the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
 		end
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 		else
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 		end
 	else
 		'"Well a deal''s is a deal... but I don''t think you really held up your end."'
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'Clench your jaw in anger and leave':
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 			if actress['cast_couch_deny'] > 0:'<i>Great, another stingy fucker,</i> you think to yourself. <i>And another wasted audition spent on the casting couch.</i>'
 			
 			'As pissed off as you are, there isn''t anything you can do about this. You grab your things and stomp to the door, slamming it shut on the way out.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 !!{		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end}
 	end
 end
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_results':
 		'"Well, a promise is a promise," he says, reaching into a stack of papers. "Damn, what a tight pussy," he continues to speak as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulls out.'
 		'"Not much of an actress, but a great fuck. Maybe you should be doing porn instead. Though if you were, I might never get to fuck you again, ha!"'
 		'With his last comment, he slides the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 	else
 		'"Well a promise is a promise... but you weren''t <i>that</i> good a fuck."'
 		'You feel the blood drain from your face.'
@@ -523,7 +523,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reluctant_virgin_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -589,9 +589,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 			'"If you''re free on Fridays I''d be happy to toss you a few rubles to fuck it again," he says, sliding the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
 		end
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 		else
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 		end
 	else
 		'"Well a deal''s is a deal... but I don''t think you really held up your end."'
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'Clench your jaw in anger and leave':
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 			if actress['cast_couch_deny'] > 0:'<i>Great, another stingy fucker,</i> you think to yourself. <i>And another wasted audition spent on the casting couch.</i>'
 			
 			'As pissed off as you are, there isn''t anything you can do about this. You grab your things and stomp to the door, slamming it shut on the way out.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_results':
 		'"Well, a promise is a promise," he says, reaching into a stack of papers. "Damn, what a tight pussy," he continues to speak as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulls out.'
 		'"Not much of an actress, but a great fuck. Maybe you should be doing porn instead. Though if you were, I might never get to fuck you again, ha!"'
 		'With his last comment, he slides the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 	else
 		'"Well a promise is a promise... but you weren''t <i>that</i> good a fuck."'
 		if cumloc[0] > 0:
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_virgin_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -760,9 +760,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 			'"You''re my favorite kind of actress you know that?" he says, pulling a sheet from a stack of papers. "Anyone ever tell you what a great ass you have? Real tight and very slappable," he continues to say as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulled. He slides it over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
 		end
 		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 		else
-			act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+			act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 		end
 	else
 		'"True talent my ass, I''ve met street whores with more ''talent'' than you."'
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'Clench your jaw in anger and leave':
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 			if actress['cast_couch_deny'] > 0:'<i>Great, another stingy fucker,</i> you think to yourself. <i>And another wasted audition spent on the casting couch.</i>'
 			
 			'As pissed off as you are, there isn''t anything you can do about this. You grab your things and stomp to the door, slamming it shut on the way out.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -840,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_results':
 		'"You''re my favorite kind of actress, you know that?" he says, reaching into a stack of papers. "So many of them are all, <i>''Noo-ooo! I want to save my first time for someone special!''</i>," he continues to speak as he scribbles a few marks on the sheet he pulls out.'
 		'"You knew what to do to get what you wanted. Besides, no one stays cherry for long in this business."'
 		'With his last comment, he slides the paper over to you with a pen. "Just sign this and it''s all offical."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','naked_signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'naked_signature'
 	else
 		'"Please, I''ve had loose old whores who were better than you."'
 		if cumloc[0] > 0:
@@ -873,7 +873,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_results':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blink, unable to conjure a response.'
 			'Without another word, you pick up your things and leave the room, stepping out into the hallway.'
-			act'Close the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Close the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 		
 		act'What the fuck?!':
@@ -901,7 +901,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_virgin_results':
 					'You''re still fuming, but you can see that you really don''t have any real options here. You yank your clothes back on and stomp your way to the door, flinging it open and slaming it shut behind you.'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'signature':
 	*nl
 	'"Congratulations <<$pcs_firstname>>. You are officially cast as <<$audition[''role'']>>. Thank you for coming."'
 	'"Thank you for casting me," you nod back and then take your copy of the contract and step out into the hallway.'
-	act'Shut the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+	act 'Shut the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_signature':
@@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_signature':
 	end
 	gs 'clothing','wear_last_worn'
 	gs 'underwear','wear'
-	act'Shut the door':gt'auditions','reflection'
+	act 'Shut the door': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 end
 
 
@@ -968,7 +968,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_signature_upset':
 	'As the pen scribbles on paper, a drop of cum falls from your face and spatters on the page next to your name, as if dotting it with finality.'
 	'"Congratulations! You officially cast as <<$audition[''role'']>>. Thank you for auditioning," he says, his smile breaking into a grin.'
 	'"Thank you for casting me," you say quietly, taking your copy of the contract and step out into the hallway.'
-	act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_signature_slutty':
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@ end
 !! ----------------------------------- Sexual Favors -----------------------------------------
 if $ARGS[0] = 'audition_escape':
 	gs 'willpower','pay','resist'
-	gs'auditions','role_denied'
+	gs 'auditions', 'role_denied'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I have to go!" you yelp and rush out of the room.'
 	act'Rush out the door':
@@ -993,7 +993,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'audition_escape':
 			'<i>Well, that''s another horny casting director escaped.</i>'
 			'Shaking your head, you continue on down the hall, the audition definitely over.'
 		end
-		act'Leave':gt'talent_agency','start'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'talent_agency', 'start'
 	end
 
 end
@@ -1049,7 +1049,7 @@ end
 
 	
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection':
-	gs'arousal','end'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		gs 'clothing','wear_last_worn'
 		gs 'underwear','wear'
@@ -1057,16 +1057,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection':
 	gs'stat'
 	if audition['cast_couch'] > 0:
 		if actress['cast_couch_vag'] = 1 and audition['cast_couch_virgin'] = 1:
-			gt'auditions','virgin_reflect'
+			gt 'auditions', 'virgin_reflect'
 	!!	elseif actress['cast_couch'] = 1:
-	!!		gt'auditions','reflect_first_time'
+	!!		gt 'auditions', 'reflect_first_time'
 		else
-			gt'audition_reflections','reflection_thoughts'
+			gt 'audition_reflections', 'reflection_thoughts'
 	!!	else
-	!!		gt'auditions','reflection_refused'
+	!!		gt 'auditions', 'reflection_refused'
 		end
 	else
-		gt'auditions','reflection_end'
+		gt 'auditions', 'reflection_end'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1077,7 +1077,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reflection_end':
 	else
 		gs 'auditions','role_fail'
 	end
-	gt'talent_agency','hallway'
+	gt 'talent_agency', 'hallway'
 end
 
 !!if $ARGS[0] = 'reflect_first_time':

locations/auditions_minor1.qsrc

@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue':
 		'"Your skin is awful," he says shaking his head. "Don''t you have any kind of skin care routine at all? I''m sorry, but I just can''t cast you for this role like that. Please work on that before you audition for another role like this."'
 		*nl
 		'You''re shamefully shooed out of the room as the next girl is called in.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	else
 		if pcs_skin >= 40 and pcs_skin < 60:
 			'"Hmm, your skin is a little rough but it''s nothing the makeup department can''t fix. Very well, please start your audition."'
 		else
 			'"Good skin," he mutters to himself while marking on a paper. "Will be good for the camera, but how will her acting be? Okay, please read the lines you were given."'
 		end
-		act'Continue':gt'auditions_minor1','general_dialogue2'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_dialogue2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -45,16 +45,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue2':
 			'You do... okay. You didn''t do a lot of preparation for the scene, but at least it isn''t your first time reading the script. It isn''t a strong performance, but it isn''t a weak one either. But maybe you should have put in some more work...'
 		end
 		'...'
-		act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','general_dialogue_result'
+		act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_dialogue_result'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_result':
 	gs 'auditions', 'audition_result'
 	if audition['result'] >= audition['requirement']:
-		gt'auditions_minor1','general_audition_success'
+		gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_audition_success'
 	else
-		gt'auditions_minor1','general_audition_fail'
+		gt 'auditions_minor1', 'general_audition_fail'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_success':
 	end
 	'"Yes, you have the job. Now make sure to keep rehearsing before it''s time to shoot. Remember, the scene is scheduled to film in <<acting[''shoot_day''] - daystart>> days. Don''t be late, he says while shuffling through some papers on the desk. Eventually he pulls one out, double checks it, and slides it across the table to you with a pen.'
 	'"Here''s your contract. Just sign here and it''s a done deal."'
-	act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+	act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_fail':
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_dialogue_fail':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/hallway.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Oh... okay. Thank you for having me..."'
 		'Dejected and humiliated you leave the room and exit to the hallway where a perky girl is already excitedly preparing to go in. The door closes behind you and the truth of what happens comes with it. You failed the audition.'
-		act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 	end
 	gs 'auditions_minor1','casting_couch'
 end
@@ -115,14 +115,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'You stop suddenly as <<$boydesc[0]>> cuts you off with a wave.'
 				'"Stop! I''ve heard enough! You didn''t get the role now leave!" he points towards the door. "Or I will get security to escort you out."'
 				'Dejected and humiliated you leave the room and exit to the hallway where a perky girl is already excitedly preparing to go in. The door closes behind you and you slouch in place. Well, it''s really over now. You failed the audition.'
-				act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 			else
 				actress['audition_pressure'] += 1
 				'You stop suddenly as <<$boydesc[0]>> stands up and walks around the desk towards to you.'
 				'"Really? You''ll do anything?" He steps very close to you, close enough to feel his breath. "Do you really mean that? Anything?"'
 				'"Huh-? I... I, uhh..."'
 				gs 'willpower','misc','resist','easy'
-				act'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+				act 'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 				
 				act'"Uhmm... Umm......"':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -130,11 +130,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 					'"Uhmm... Umm......" you freeze not knowing what to do. "I- Eeek-!"'
 					'You yelp as you feel <<$boydesc[0]>>''s hand take a huge grab of your ass.'
 					'"I can get you this part," he whispers in your ear. "But what are you willing to do to make that happen?" <<$boydesc[0]>> moves his hand to your shoulder and begins to push you down towards the floor.'
-					act'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions','audition_escape'
+					act 'Run away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gt 'auditions', 'audition_escape'
 					
-					act'Don''t resist':gt'audition_sex1','reluctant_bj1'
+					act'Don''t resist':gt 'audition_sex1', 'reluctant_bj1'
 					
-					act'Kneel down and blow him':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj1'
+					act 'Kneel down and blow him': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj1'
 				end
 				
 				act'"I''ll do anything" (neutral)':
@@ -145,11 +145,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 					audition['position'] = rand(1,3)
 					if audition['position'] = 1:
 						'"Then get on your knees."'
-						act'Kneel down':gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj1'
+						act 'Kneel down': gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj1'
 						act'Undress first':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex2','neutral_bj1'
+							gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_bj1'
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 2:
 						'"Then take off your clothes and bend over."'
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'He flips up your skirt.'
 										'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 									end
-									act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_assfuck2'
+									act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_assfuck2'
 								else
 									cla & *clr
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/grope.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -193,13 +193,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 											'He roughly pushes you down onto the desk and flips up your skirt.'
 											'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 										end
-										act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_anal2'
+										act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_anal2'
 									end
 									act'What about anal instead?':
 										cla & *nl
 										'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 										'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_anal1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal1'
 									end
 									
 									act'Give in':
@@ -207,24 +207,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes and taking a deep breath. "Okay. I''ll let you fuck me... If you promise to give me the role."'
 										'<<$boydesc[0]>> grins wolfishly.'
 										'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin1'
 									end
 								end
 							end
 						end
 						act'Bend over':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 3:
@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'He flips up your skirt.'
 										'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 									end
-									act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_assfuck2'
+									act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_assfuck2'
 								else
 									cla & *clr
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/actress/sex/grope.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -269,13 +269,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 											'He roughly pushes you down onto the desk and flips up your skirt.'
 											'"No panties. You little <i>whore</i>. I bet you came here hoping this would happen didn''t you?" he says, pushing his cock into your asshole.'
 										end
-										act'Get fucked':gt'audition_sex1','neutral_anal2'
+										act 'Get fucked': gt 'audition_sex1', 'neutral_anal2'
 									end
 									act'What about anal instead?':
 										cla & *nl
 										'"What if I gave you my ass instead?" you ask hesitantly. "Not my virginity, but I''ll let you fuck my ass. For the role."'
 										'"Well let''s see that ass and then we''ll decide if you get the role."'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_anal1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_anal1'
 									end
 									
 									act'Give in':
@@ -284,24 +284,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 										'"Okay," you whisper, closing your eyes and taking a deep breath. "Okay. I''ll let you fuck me... If you promise to give me the role."'
 										'<<$boydesc[0]>> grins wolfishly.'
 										'"It''s a promise. Now let''s get those clothes off," he says, now pulling at your clothes with renewed vigor.'
-										act'Take off your clothes':gt'auditions','neutral_virgin1'
+										act 'Take off your clothes': gt 'auditions', 'neutral_virgin1'
 									end
 								end
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get on the desk':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck1'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
+								gt 'audition_sex2', 'neutral_fuck1'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -313,11 +313,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 					audition['position'] = rand(1,3)
 					if audition['position'] = 1:
 						'"Then get on your knees."'
-						act'Kneel down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_bj1'
+						act 'Kneel down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_bj1'
 						act'Undress first':
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 							gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-							gt'audition_sex3','slutty_bj1'
+							gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_bj1'
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 2:
 						'"Then take off your clothes and bend over."'
@@ -337,27 +337,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 								'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, bending over and spreading your pussy lips to show him the proof.'
 								if rand(1,2) = 1:									
 									'"So?" You feel a hovering presence above your hands, a little too high for where he should be to line up with your pussy. "I was going to assfuck you."  And you gasp when his cock immediately starts pushing into your asshole.'
-									act'Get assfucked':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_assfuck2'
+									act 'Get assfucked': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_assfuck2'
 								else
 									'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 									audition['bonus'] += 10
-									act'Lose your virginity':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin2'
+									act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin2'
 								end
 							end
 						end
 						act'Bend over':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin2'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck2'
 							end
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 3:
@@ -378,22 +378,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 								'"By the way, I''m a virgin," you say hoping to entice him for a more favorable audition, laying back on the desk and spreading your pussy to show him the proof.'
 								'"A virgin huh?" He gives you a hungry look. "Well, don''t mind if I do then..." he continues, lining his cock up with your pussy.'
 								audition['bonus'] += 10
-								act'Lose your virginity':gt'auditions','slutty_virgin1'
+								act 'Lose your virginity': gt 'auditions', 'slutty_virgin1'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get on the desk':
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal1'
 							end
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
 							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_virgin1'
 							else
-								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'
+								gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal1'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Well..." you start. "What if I suck your dick?"'
 				'"Let''s see how good you are first," he responds while pushing you down to your knees.'
-				act'Kneel down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_bj1'
+				act 'Kneel down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_bj1'
 			end
 			
 			act'"I''ll fuck you for it"':
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Well..." you say with a sultry smile. "What if I fuck you for it?"'
 				'"Then you''d have to be naked," he says tugging at your clothes.'
-				act'Strip down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck'
+				act 'Strip down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_fuck'
 			end
 			
 			act'"I''ll let you fuck my ass"':
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/room.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I''ll let you fuck my ass if you give me the part," you say.'
 				'"Then get naked," he says tugging at your clothes.'
-				act'Strip down':gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal2'
+				act 'Strip down': gt 'audition_sex3', 'slutty_anal2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'unique':
 	!! this is to leave room for the possibility of having more files than just this one
-	if $audition['role'] = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt'auditions_minor1','SluttyClubGirl'
+	if $audition['role'] = 'Slutty Club Girl':gt 'auditions_minor1', 'SluttyClubGirl'
 	
 end
 
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SluttyClubGirl':
 			'...'
 		end
 		'You''re nearing the end of the dialogue and according to the script, your character flashes her breasts and you wonder if you should do that in an audition like this or if it''s not necessary and you would embarrass yourself.'
-		act'Finish the audition without flashing':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_skip_flash'
+		act 'Finish the audition without flashing': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_skip_flash'
 		if pcs_inhib < 50:
 			if pcs_inhib > 40:
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'force', 'easy'
@@ -503,12 +503,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SluttyClubGirl':
 				gs 'willpower', 'skill', 'pcs_inhib', 'force', 'hard'
 			end
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash your tits (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_flash'				
+				act 'Flash your tits (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_flash'				
 			else
 				act 'Flash your tits (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You''re too shy to show him your breasts.</font>'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash your tits':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_flash'
+			act 'Flash your tits':gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_flash'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_flash':
 	elseif pcs_inhib > 50:
 		'You pop your top and flash the casting director without any reservation, holding the pose for a couple seconds before putting your top back down again. It''s not like you mind showing off your body off. Whether or not the role demands it, you just don''t have a problem with it.'
 	end
-	act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+	act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 		'He looks very irritated.'
 		*nl
 		'What are you going to do about it?'
-		act'Just accept the results':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+		act 'Just accept the results': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 		act'Redo the line and flash him':
 			cla & *clr
 			audition['flash'] = 1
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 				'You do so without any reservation, holding the pose for a couple seconds before putting your top back down again. It''s not like you mind showing off your body off. If he wanted to see your tits he just should have asked to begin with.'
 			end
 			'"How was that?"'
-			act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+			act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 		end
 		
 		act'Just flash him':
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 			'You do so without any reservation, holding the pose for a couple seconds before putting your top back down again. It''s not like you mind showing off your body off. If he wanted to see your tits he just should have asked to begin with.'
 		end
 		'"How was that?"'
-		act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+		act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 	end
 	
 	act'Just flash him':
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_skip_flash':
 		'You don''t redo the line, simply pulling up your top and flashing your tits at him.'
 		'"There."'
 		'He seems a little amused by your attitude, but otherwise doesn''t say anything as you pull your top back down.'
-		act'Finish the audition':gt'auditions_minor1','minor1_result'
+		act 'Finish the audition': gt 'auditions_minor1', 'minor1_result'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_result':
 		'You smile brightly, happy you got the job.'
 		'"Which reminds me," he says, shuffling through some papers on his desk, looking for one in particular. Finding it, he slides it forward with a pen.'
 		'"Here''s your contract. We''re filming in <<acting[''shoot_day''] - daystart>> days. Keep practicing in the meantime. Sign here and it''s a done deal."'
-		act'Sign the contract':gt'auditions','signature'
+		act 'Sign the contract': gt 'auditions', 'signature'
 	else
 		if audition['result'] > audition['requirement'] - 10:
 			if audition['flash'] = 1:
@@ -657,9 +657,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minor1_result':
 			'Dejected and humiliated you leave the room and exit to the hallway where a girl who is clearly braless is already pushing past you to go in.'
 			*nl
 			'The door closes behind you and the result is cemented: failure.'
-			act'Leave':gt'auditions','reflection'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'auditions', 'reflection'
 		end
-		gs'auditions_minor1','casting_couch'
+		gs 'auditions_minor1', 'casting_couch'
 	end
 end
 --- auditions_minor1 ---------------------------------

locations/ballet_npc.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Gasha'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Gasha'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Morozova'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Gasha'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'The youngest in the class at 15, close friend of Nikita as the grew up in the same village. Nikita and Galina are often seen in each others company in the local coffee shop and rarely seen alone leading to rumours. She''s a bit of a foodie, and love sweet things which conflicts with keeping in shape for her dance career.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'The youngest in the class at 15, close friend of Nikita as the grew up in the same village. Nikita and Galina are often seen in each others company in the local coffee shop and rarely seen alone leading to rumors. She''s a bit of a foodie, and love sweet things which conflicts with keeping in shape for her dance career.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 20000705
 npc_gender['A<<npctemp>>'] = 1
 npc_bust['A<<npctemp>>'] = 9
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf '
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Baryshnikov'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19820920
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf is a charming and handsome man, he was on course to become one of Russia''s best ballet dancers until a stage accident cut short his career. Today he works at the dance school as a instructor, agent and a board member. Many rumours about his life have swirled around him over the years but none have been proven.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Rudolf is a charming and handsome man, he was on course to become one of Russia''s best ballet dancers until a stage accident cut short his career. Today he works at the dance school as a instructor, agent and a board member. Many rumors about his life have swirled around him over the years but none have been proven.'
 npc_gender['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 gs 'npcstaticdefaults', 'defaults'
 $npc_thdick['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'slim'

locations/ballet_secrets.qsrc

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'init':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if week < 7 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 17:
-		'You enter the shop and greeted by a riot of displays showcasing ballet and other dance equipment. A woman is sewing something in the corner and glances at you before continuing.'
+		'You enter the shop getting greeted by a riot of displays showcasing ballet and other dance equipment. A woman is sewing something in the corner and glances at you before continuing.'
 		if balletqw['ballet_secrets'] = 1:
 			act 'Approach the woman': gt 'ballet_secrets', 'first_visit'
 		else
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'init':
 			act 'Leave shop': gt 'pushkin_sq'
 		end
 	else
-		'You look at the shop window and realise it''s closed, there is a security door to the left of you that allows you access the studio areas if you are a member.'
+		'You look at the shop window and realize it''s closed, there is a security door to the left of you that allows you access the studio areas if you are a member.'
 		act 'Return to Okhlopkov Square' : gt 'pushkin_sq'
 		if balletqw['membership'] >= daystart:
 			act 'Swipe membership card': gt 'ballet_secrets', 'reception'
@@ -50,15 +50,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'You are greeted by a middle aged woman. "Hello, how may I help you?" She askes politely.'
-	'"Hello, I am <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>. I am part of the ballet school intake." you give her a smile and hand over the schools letter as proof.'
+	'"Hello, I am <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>. I am part of the ballet school intake." you give her a smile and hand over the school''s letter as proof.'
 	'The woman smiles warmly, "Ah you are the new students for this year?" she claps her hands and then takes yours, "Come, come we must measure your feet and order your shoes"'
-	'Before you say anything she''s dragging you through the shop towards the back we are are greeted by a wall of shoes and there is pictures on the wall signed by dancers with shoes next to them. You look at the woman.'
-	'"Yes, they are all dancers who are or have been clients of our establishment", she noticed your gaze and explains with pride."We will only provide the best for the school."'
+	'Before you say anything she''s dragging you through the shop towards the back we are greeted by a wall of shoes and there are pictures on the wall signed by dancers with shoes next to them. You look at the woman.'
+	'"Yes, they are all dancers who are or have been clients of our establishment", she noticed your gaze and explained with pride."We will only provide the best for the school."'
 	!! TODO:  Set up gate for sponsored or not, not implemented system needs to be added to the end of year assessment.
 	'"But where are my manners I am Darya Pushkina, I am the owner of this shop and facilies" she exclaims, "now to your fitting grabbing a tape measure and fitting tools for your feet"'
-	'For the next hour Madam Pushkina bombards you with questions of whether you want leather or cotton fabric, how many satin shoes and a myriad other questions before she finally relents.'
-	'"Of course as you are aware the school is sponsoring these costs, but only for the first year she says and you will need to manage your own equipment after this.", Madame Pushkina advises.'
-	'"Is there anything else you neeed? No? Good, I will see you again in two weeks for your final shoe fitting. I would like to extend my congratulations and wish you a successful career Ms. <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
+	'For the next hour, Madam Pushkina bombards you with questions of whether you want leather or cotton fabric, how many satin shoes and a myriad other questions before she finally relents.'
+	'"Of course, as you are aware the school is sponsoring these costs, but only for the first year she says and you will need to manage your own equipment after this.", Madame Pushkina advises.'
+	'"Is there anything else you need? No? Good, I will see you again in two weeks for your final shoe fitting. I would like to extend my congratulations and wish you a successful career Ms. <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pushkin_sq'
 	act 'Return to shop': gt 'ballet_secrets', 'init'
 end
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reception':
 	gs 'core_library', 'stage_title'
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'As you enter you are greeted warmly by the gym staff. The gym has an industrial feel reflecting the buildng being converted from an old factory.'
+	'As you enter you are greeted warmly by the gym staff. The gym has an industrial feel reflecting the building being converted from an old factory.'
 
 	'There is a <a href="exec: gt ''food'', ''watercooler''">drinking fountain</a> near the doors to the gym hall to refill your water bottle.'
 
@@ -116,8 +116,8 @@ if $ARGS[0]= 'enrol':
 	end
 	act 'Return to the studio entrance': gt 'ballet_secrets', 'reception'
 
-	'The gym offers a weekly or monthly subscription for of 1,500<b> ₽</b>	or 5,000<b> ₽</b> respectively to use the facilities with some courses included. Physio appointments are charged seperately.'
-	'The subscriptions includes classes in gymnastics, yoga and introductory ballet. For advanced classes there is an additional instructor charge. A physical trainer is on hand to assist at all times if you so need one.'
+	'The gym offers a weekly or monthly subscription for 1,500<b> ₽</b>	or 5,000<b> ₽</b> respectively to use the facilities with some courses included. Physio appointments are charged separately.'
+	'The subscriptions include classes in gymnastics, yoga and introductory ballet. For advanced classes, there is an additional instructor charge. A physical trainer is on hand to assist at all times if you so need one.'
 	'We also have a small café which attracts a members discount and your membership card can purchase items directly from the vending machine which will be billed to your account.'
 
 	if money >= 5000 or karta + bankDebtLimit >= 5000:

locations/bdsm_garden.qsrc

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/uniform.jpg"></center>'
-		'A strapping young dom is checking a sub is adhering to the dress code. Looks like she forgotten her panties.'
+		'A strapping young dom is checking a sub is adhering to the dress code. Looks like she forgot her panties.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/drink.jpg"></center>'
-		'A dominate woman is forcing a naked man to drink from the fountain.'
+		'A dominant woman is forcing a naked man to drink from the fountain.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/race.jpg"></center>'
-		'A cluster of people are gathered around five women bent over in a row masturbating, you quickly realize everyone is betting on who will orgasm first. You briefly wonder if their is a prize for winning.'
+		'A cluster of people are gathered around five women bent over in a row masturbating, you quickly realize everyone is betting on who will orgasm first. You briefly wonder if there is a prize for winning.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gEV1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/randgirl.jpg"></center>'
 	if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
-		'Another submissive women approaches you and says, "If you are looking to earn a nice bonus, there are a group of older men at the outside dining table. If you strip off, go over to them and have sex with them, they will give you a load of cash."'
+		'Another submissive woman approaches you and says, "If you are looking to earn a nice bonus, there is a group of older men at the outside dining table. If you strip off, go over to them and have sex with them, they will give you a load of cash."'
 		'This isn''t exactly the BDSM you come here for, but it is not breaking any rules and you have the choice.'
 		act 'Strip and go meet the older men':gs 'clothing', 'strip' & gt 'bdsm_garden', 'gEV2'
 	else
-		'Another submissive women approaches you and says, "If you are looking to earn a nice bonus, there are a group of older men at the outside dining table. If you go over and have sex with them, they will give you a load of cash."'
+		'Another submissive woman approaches you and says, "If you are looking to earn a nice bonus, there is a group of older men at the outside dining table. If you go over and have sex with them, they will give you a load of cash."'
 		'This isn''t exactly the BDSM you come here for, but it is not breaking any rules and you have the choice.'
 		act 'Go and meet the older men':gt 'bdsm_garden', 'gEV2'
 	end
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gEV3':
 	dick = RAND(12,21)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/grup2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Half of the men are already naked and probably asked the sub who spoke to you. You leave them no doubt as to your intentions and lead one of the men on to the table.'
+	'Half of the men are already naked and probably asked the sub who spoke to you. You leave them no doubt as to your intentions and lead one of the men onto the table.'
 	'You crawl on top of him and already aroused in anticipation, you quickly take him inside and start to grind.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'group'
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gEV6':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/grup5.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Not wanting this to turn into a creampie party, you get yourself onto all fours and spend sometime sucking on the cocks that you have otherwise been neglecting.'
+	'Not wanting this to turn into a creampie party, you get yourself onto all fours and spend some time sucking on the cocks that you have otherwise been neglecting.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -193,8 +193,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gEV8':
 	gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'Old Man'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/grup7.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You remain in position lending a helping hand were needed and take another 6 cumshots to your face.'
-	'As you reveal in your successful work, you realise for the first time that there was 7 men there.'
+	'You remain in position lending a helping hand where needed and take another 6 cumshots to your face.'
+	'As you reveal in your successful work, you realize for the first time that there were 7 men there.'
 	'You get up, still naked and your face covered in cum. The men have had their fun and are leaving. You find 2,000 <b>₽</b> on the table.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 10, 'sub', 'group'

locations/bed_events.qsrc

@@ -104,6 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exit':
 	killvar '$sleep_events_priority'
 	killvar 'temp_slev_id'
 	killvar '$temp_sleep_event_chosen'
+	InSleep = 0
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'continue':

locations/bed_get_out_events.qsrc

@@ -101,6 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exit':
 	killvar '$sleep_events_priority'
 	killvar 'temp_slev_id'
 	killvar '$temp_sleep_event_chosen'
+	InSleep = 0
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'continue':

locations/bedr.qsrc

@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@ if husbandrink = 11 and husbanstrapon > 0 and husbandrinkday ! daystart:
 		menu_off = 1
 
 		if husbanstrapon = 1:'"Honey, you were so drunk last night that I decided to teach you a lesson and put a butt plug up your ass."'
-		if husbanstrapon = 2:'"I wanted to make you happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole. When you still didn''t cum, I took a small dildo and some lube and put in it your ass; I''ve never seen you cum like that before. I even gave you a secong blowjob. Forgive me, but you seemed to enjoy it so much that I could''t stop. I just wanted to make you happy," you lie to him.'
-		if husbanstrapon = 3:'"I wanted to make you happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole. When you still didn''t cum, I put in a second finger you began to move your ass towards my fingers, moaning heavily. I thought that you liked it, so I put on a strap-on. You enjoyed it so much that you finished over and over again, and I continued until I was tired. I then licked all the cum off your body and went to sleep. I just wanted to make you happy and you were enjoying it," you lie him.'
+		if husbanstrapon = 2:'"I wanted to make you happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole. When you still didn''t cum, I took a small dildo and some lube and put in it your ass; I''ve never seen you cum like that before. I even gave you a second blowjob. Forgive me, but you seemed to enjoy it so much that I could''t stop. I just wanted to make you happy," you lie to him.'
+		if husbanstrapon = 3:'"I wanted to make you happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole. When you still didn''t cum, I put in a second finger you began to move your ass towards my fingers, moaning heavily. I thought that you liked it, so I put on a strap-on. You enjoyed it so much that you finished over and over again, and I continued until I was tired. I then licked all the cum off your body and went to sleep. I just wanted to make you happy and you were enjoying it," you lie to him.'
 
 		if harakHusb = 2:
 			husbizvradd = 0
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 					gs 'boyStat', $HusID
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy, 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/h1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pull out the plug and replace with it with a dildo. <<$husName>> doesn''t even budge as you slowly move the dildo in and out, trying not to wake him up. You notice his cock starts to get rock hard, and he starts to moan softly in his sleep. His dick starts to throb, like he''s going to cum. You take his dick in your mouth and don''t need to suck on it for long. You swallow his cum before carefully putting his underpants back on.'
+					'You pull out the plug and replace it with a dildo. <<$husName>> doesn''t even budge as you slowly move the dildo in and out, trying not to wake him up. You notice his cock starts to get rock-hard, and he starts to moan softly in his sleep. His dick starts to throb like he''s going to cum. You take his dick in your mouth and don''t need to suck on it for long. You swallow his cum before carefully putting his underpants back on.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo_give', 20
 					minut -= 20
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy, 1
 					pcs_horny += 30
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/h2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You put on the strapon and pull out the butt plug. You gently move the shaft of the strap-on inside his ass and <<$husName>> moves, but doesn''t wake up. You continue to slowly move it in and out, trying not to wake him. You notice his cock is getting rock hard and he starts to moan softly in his sleep. Hoping that he won''t wake up, you increase your speed and push the entire length of the strap-on into his ass as you start to stroke his dick. Realizing he''s not far from cumming, you pull out and finish him by giving him a blowjob. He cums in your mouth and you swallow before carefully putting his underpants back on.'
+					'You put on the strapon and pull out the butt plug. You gently move the shaft of the strap-on inside his ass and <<$husName>> moves, but doesn''t wake up. You continue to slowly move it in and out, trying not to wake him. You notice his cock is getting rock-hard and he starts to moan softly in his sleep. Hoping that he won''t wake up, you increase your speed and push the entire length of the strap-on into his ass as you start to stroke his dick. Realizing he''s not far from cumming, you pull out and finish him by giving him a blowjob. He cums in your mouth and you swallow before carefully putting his underpants back on.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 20
 					minut -= 20

locations/bedr2x.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ gs 'music_actions', 'clear_restrictions'
 
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/bedr2.jpg"></center>'
 *nl
-if pcs_magik >= 6 and spellbefshild = 1 and tobiQW = 0:gt'tobiQW','start'
+if pcs_magik >= 6 and spellbefshild = 1 and tobiQW = 0:gt 'tobiQW', 'start'
 'A bright and beautiful bedroom, with modern and stylish furniture.'
 *nl
 'The room is dominated by <a href="exec:gt ''bed'',''start''">full sized bed</a>'
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 					gs 'boyStat', $HusID
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/h1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pull out the plug and stick the dildo up his ass instead, <<$husName>> did not move. You began to slowly move the dildo trying not to wake him. After a bit his dick begins to get hard in front of your face, and <<$husName>> moaned softly, but didn''t wake up. You start to really work the dildo in his ass, stroking it deep in his ass, before too long his cock started to throb. You wrap your lips around his cock, you barely even started to suck his dick when suddenly your mouth is filled with a jet of sperm, you swallow it all and carefully cleaned his penis, then you pulled his pants back up.'
+					'You pull out the plug and stick the dildo up his ass instead, <<$husName>> did not move. You began to slowly move the dildo trying not to wake him. After a bit, his dick begins to get hard in front of your face, and <<$husName>> moaned softly, but didn''t wake up. You start to really work the dildo in his ass, stroking it deep in his ass, before too long his cock started to throb. You wrap your lips around his cock, you barely even started to suck his dick when suddenly your mouth is filled with a jet of sperm, you swallow it all and carefully cleaned his penis, then you pulled his pants back up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo_give', 20
 					minut -= 20
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy, 1
 					pcs_horny += 30
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/h2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You put on the strapon and pull out the butt plug. You gently move the shaft of the strap-on inside his ass and <<$husName>> moves, but doesn''t wake up. You continue to slowly move it in and out, trying not to wake him. You notice his cock is getting rock hard and he starts to moan softly in his sleep. Hoping that he won''t wake up, you increase your speed and push the entire length of the strap-on into his ass as you start to stroke his dick. Realizing he''s not far from cumming, you pull out and finish him by giving him a blowjob. He cums in your mouth and you swallow before carefully putting his underpants back on.'
+					'You put on the strapon and pull out the butt plug. You gently move the shaft of the strap-on inside his ass and <<$husName>> moves, but doesn''t wake up. You continue to slowly move it in and out, trying not to wake him. You notice his cock is getting rock-hard and he starts to moan softly in his sleep. Hoping that he won''t wake up, you increase your speed and push the entire length of the strap-on into his ass as you start to stroke his dick. Realizing he''s not far from cumming, you pull out and finish him by giving him a blowjob. He cums in your mouth and you swallow before carefully putting his underpants back on.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 20
 					minut -= 20

locations/bedrPar.qsrc

@@ -183,9 +183,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<a href="exec:gt ''sister_chat'', ''talking''">Anya</a> is getting ready to go out.'
 				elseif locat['Anya'] = 15:
 					if anyaQW['bathroom_dildos'] > 0:
-						gt'sister_chat','bathroom_dildo_talk1'
+						gt 'sister_chat', 'bathroom_dildo_talk1'
 					elseif sisterQW['sex_room'] > 0:
-						gt'sister_chat','sex_room_talk1'
+						gt 'sister_chat', 'sex_room_talk1'
 					end
 					'<a href="exec:gt ''sister_chat'', ''talking''">Anya</a> is sitting on her bed, reading a book.'
 				elseif locat['Anya'] = 26 or (locat['Anya'] = 1 and locat['Anya_party_day'] >= daystart - 1):
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				if mc_inventory['sewing_fabric'] <= 0:'You do not have any fabric.'
 				if pcs_sewng >= 80:
 					if newgobelen = 0 and mc_inventory['sewing_fabric'] > 0: 
-						act'Start a new tapestry':gt 'sewing', 'tapestry'
+						act 'Start a new tapestry': gt 'sewing', 'tapestry'
 					elseif newgobelen >= 1:
 						'Your tapestry is <<newgobelen/10>> percent finished.'
 						act 'Work on the tapestry':gt 'sewing', 'tapestry'

locations/beg.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		pcs_mood += 2
 		gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 30, 'run'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/exercises/gym/fit5.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend half an hour practising 100 meter dashes to improve your speed, as well as doing several rounds around the stadium to work on your stamina. You are sweaty all over by the end of it, obviously, but you also feel that you''re a little better than before.'
+		'You spend half an hour practicing 100 meter dashes to improve your speed, as well as doing several rounds around the stadium to work on your stamina. You are sweaty all over by the end of it, obviously, but you also feel that you''re a little better than before.'
 
 		! WD: Argument is 'dressing_room'
 		act 'Go to the dressing room':gt 'fit', 'dressing_room'

locations/begin.qsrc

@@ -92,8 +92,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'real_character':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>CHARACTER SELECTION</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/shared/character_creation_1.jpg"></center><center>'
 	*nl
-	'This game has two ways to display your character''s face, either dynamically depending on your hair style and colour or a fixed image of your choice.'
-	'To use a fixed image, replace the image "avatar" in the "images" folder of the game with a file of the same name and format (.jpg) and select "Use a fixed image".'
+	'This game has three ways to display your character''s face:'
+	'    1. Dynamically using real images. The result will depend on your hair style and colour or a fixed image of your choice.'
+	'    2. To use a fixed image. You can set the path to the image or replace the image "avatar" in the "images" folder of the game with a file of the same name and format (.jpg) and select "Use a fixed image".'
+	'    3. Dynamically using generated images. The result will depend on your hair style and colour, eye colour, glasses, makeup, and visible cum'
+
 	'Please note, this choice can be changed in the cheat menu at any time. Only one fixed image can be used at a time and will be the same across all saves.'
 	'Your fixed image is your own personal choice, and is based on your personal preferences. By default, the game uses an avatar image from the site wikimedia.org.'
 
@@ -107,16 +110,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'real_character':
 
 	'</center>'
 
-	act'<center><b>Use the dynamic profile system</b></center>':
+	act '<center><b>Use the dynamic profile system</b></center>':
 		cls
 		gt 'begin', 'start'
 	end
-	act'<center><b>Use a fixed profile image</b></center>':
+	act '<center><b>Use a fixed profile image</b></center>':
+		cls
+		face_style['type'] = 1
+		gt 'begin', 'use_avatar_menu'
+	end
+	act '<center><b>Use the rendered profile system</b></center>':
 		cls
-		player_avatar = 1
+		face_style['type'] = 2
 		gt 'begin', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'use_avatar_menu':
+	$face_style['avatar_path'] = input('Where is the avatar image located? (Leave blank for "images/avatar.jpg")')
+	if $face_style['avatar_path'] = '': $face_style['avatar_path'] = 'images/avatar.jpg'
+
+	'You have selected: <<$face_style[''avatar_path'']>>. Is this correct?'
+
+	act 'Yes': gt 'begin', 'start'
+	act 'Try again': gt 'begin', 'use_avatar_menu'
+	act 'Use a different character': gt 'begin', 'real_character'
+end
+
 --- begin ---------------------------------
 

locations/belpicknick.qsrc

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 		gs'stat'
 		'You drink the vodka as you were told, and feel a shiver run down your spine. Your throat burns when you swallow it, but soon after a pleasant warmth spreads throughout your body. A few minutes later, you feel absolutely hammered.'
-		act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', '1'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'belpicknick', '1'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			'The criminals are not impressed in the slightest, and one of them yells: "What kind of crap is this!? My elderly aunt Katinka could do a better job!"'
 			'His friend agrees: "Yea, this is fucking terrible!"'
 			'"Maybe she''s better at other things. Given how bow-legged she''s dancing, perhaps a different kind of show is in order", Siple says as he hands you an empty bottle. "Go ahead slut, entertain us."'
-			act'Shove the neck into your vagina':gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_light'
-			act'Shove the bottom into your vagina':gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_hard'
-			act'Shove the neck into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
-			act'Shove the bottom into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
+			act 'Shove the neck into your vagina': gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_light'
+			act 'Shove the bottom into your vagina': gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_hard'
+			act 'Shove the neck into your ass': gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
+			act 'Shove the bottom into your ass': gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
 		end
 		if pcs_danc >= 40:gt 'belpicknick', 'dance'
 	end
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vb_light':
 	'Okay, so dancing is not something you do well. You have to entertain them with the bottle now, and decide to take the easiest route: you spread your legs and put the neck of the bottle against your pussy lips. You slowly push it in as far as it will go, trying to make a show of it by spreading your legs as far as you can and fucking yourself slowly with the neck of the bottle.'
 	if rand(1,100) <= 10:		
 		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated: "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
-		act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 		gs 'willpower', 'gangbang', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Run away from them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -95,9 +95,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vb_light':
 		end
 	else
 		'The guys are not impressed however. "What kind of weak shit is this? You''d better put some more effort into it, otherwise we''re going to do it for you."'
-		act'Shove the bottom into your vagina':gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_hard'
-		act'Shove the neck into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
-		act'Shove the bottom into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
+		act 'Shove the bottom into your vagina': gt 'belpicknick', 'vb_hard'
+		act 'Shove the neck into your ass': gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
+		act 'Shove the bottom into your ass': gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
 		gs 'willpower', 'mast', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Run away from them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vb_hard':
 	end
 	if rand(1,100) <= 80:
 		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated: "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
-		act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 		gs 'willpower', 'gangbang', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Run away from them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -137,8 +137,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vb_hard':
 		end
 	else	
 		'The bandits look at each other for a second, and then shake their heads: "Not good enough, slut. Put it in your ass and be quick about it, otherwise we''re doing it for you."'
-		act'Shove the neck into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
-		act'Shove the bottom into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
+		act 'Shove the neck into your ass': gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_light'
+		act 'Shove the bottom into your ass': gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
 		gs 'willpower', 'mast', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Run away from them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ab_light':
 	end
 	if rand(1,100) <= 70:	
 		'Even though the criminals seem enthralled by your show, one of them is getting frustrated: "Whatever. You shouldn''t be putting bottles up there, but our cocks! Get over here whore, it''s time you get fucked."'
-		act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 		gs 'willpower', 'gangbang', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Run away from them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ab_light':
 		end
 	else
 		'The bandits look at each other for a second, and then shake their heads: "Not good enough, slut. Use the other end and be quick about it, otherwise we''re doing it for you."'
-		act'Shove the bottom into your ass':gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
+		act 'Shove the bottom into your ass': gt 'belpicknick', 'ab_hard'
 		gs 'willpower', 'mast', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Run away from them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ab_hard':
 		'The realization of what they really want from you scares you. But not as much as earning their displeasure does. So you decide to go as far as you can with this: you spread your legs and put the bottom of the bottle against your puckered butthole. After lubricating it with a bit of saliva and stretching a bit with your fingers you actually manage to get it in, even though it hurts a lot. Deciding you don''t want the guys to take over for you, you soldier on and slowly push it in as far as it will go, trying to make a show of it by spreading your legs as far as you can and fucking yourself slowly with the bottom of the bottle.'
 	end
 	'The guys slap each other on the back, thoroughly impressed: "What an ass, look at it stretch! It''s gonna take all of our cocks combined in there to even feel something!"'
-	act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'belpicknick', 'gang'
 	gs 'willpower', 'gangbang', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Run away from them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -241,11 +241,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
 			'Suddenly the cock you''re currently sucking on is pulled away from you, and <<$boydesc>> pushes you onto your back saying he wants to try another hole now.'
 			belsexpayment += 25
-			act'Lie on your back':gt 'belpicknick', 'missionary'
+			act 'Lie on your back': gt 'belpicknick', 'missionary'
 		else
 			belsexpayment += 25
 			'Suddenly the cock you''re currently sucking on is pulled away from you, and <<$boydesc>> tells you to get on all fours saying he wants to try another hole now.'
-			act'Get on your hands and knees':gt 'belpicknick', 'doggy'
+			act 'Get on your hands and knees': gt 'belpicknick', 'doggy'
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'missionary':
 	gs 'stat'
      
 	if times_picknick <= 0:
-		act'Get up':gt 'belpicknick', 'end'
+		act 'Get up': gt 'belpicknick', 'end'
 	else
 		gs 'belpicknick', 'poisk'
 		act'Continue':
@@ -293,10 +293,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'missionary':
 			gs 'stat'
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'All of a sudden, <<$boydesc>> slows down and tells you to get on all fours, saying he wants to try another hole now.'
-				act'Get on your hands and knees':gt 'belpicknick', 'doggy'
+				act 'Get on your hands and knees': gt 'belpicknick', 'doggy'
 			else
 				'You stay in position for the next guy.'
-				act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'missionary'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'belpicknick', 'missionary'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 	if gmember = 4:tatarGangTimes -= 1
      
 	if times_picknick <= 0:
-		act'Get up':gt 'belpicknick', 'end'
+		act 'Get up': gt 'belpicknick', 'end'
 	else
 		gs 'belpicknick', 'poisk'
 		act'Continue':
@@ -358,10 +358,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 			gs'stat'
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'<<$boydesc>> pushes you onto your back saying he wants to try another hole now.'
-				act'Lie on your back':gt 'belpicknick', 'missionary'
+				act 'Lie on your back': gt 'belpicknick', 'missionary'
 			else
 				'You stay in position for the next guy.'
-				act'Continue':gt 'belpicknick', 'doggy'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'belpicknick', 'doggy'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
-		act'Sit down':gt 'belpicknick', 'end'
+		act 'Sit down': gt 'belpicknick', 'end'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	if rand(1,100) <= 70:
 		minut += 60
 		'Vadim looks at you again, and sees how dirty you are, "I don''t want cum stains on my car seats. Still, we can''t just leave her here... put her in the trunk." Two of the guys push you in the trunk a bit more forcefully than is needed; it''s not like you have any energy left to resist after what happened here. After a bumpy ride the car pulls to a stop on the outskirts of Pavlovsk, and Tatar got out of the car to open the trunk. He pulls you out of the trunk, throws down your clothes next to you and gets back in before they race off, leaving you to fend for yourself. Your body feels exhausted as you slowly get dressed, and make your way to town.'
-		act'Return to Pavlovsk':gt 'pav_commercial'
+		act 'Return to Pavlovsk': gt 'pav_commercial'
 	else
 		minut += 10
 		'Siple looks at your face in disgust. "That looks fucking disgusting... there''s no way you''re getting in our car. Find your own way home, slut!"'

locations/beverage.qsrc

@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bev_vod':
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 		gs 'beverage', 'afteralcohol'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/barordervodka.jpg"></center>'
-		'The vodka shot disappears, like it was only water, and<<$mtxt>>'
+		'The vodka shot disappears like it was only water, and<<$mtxt>>'
 		gs 'stat'
 		killvar '$_drink'
 

locations/billiard.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'randwin':
 		act 'Leave':gt 'billiard'
 	elseif billwin > 10 and billvar = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/strapon.jpg"></center>'
-		'You win, put your strapon, and look at the guys, "Come on girls panties down and asses up, now I''m going to fuck this whole harem."'
+		'You win, put on your strapon, and look at the guys, "Come on girls panties down and asses up, now I''m going to fuck this whole harem."'
 		'You fuck them all in turn.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 10, 'dom'

locations/billsvid.qsrc

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/4.jpg"></center>'
-	'She leans over the table and squatting yourself behind her, you press your lips to her pussy. You kiss her and caress with your tongue until she came.'
+	'She leans over the table and squatting yourself behind her, you press your lips to her pussy. You kiss her and caress with your tongue until she comes.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You stand in front of the table, legs spread, and <<$telsob>> dropping to her knees in front of you begins to kiss your pussy, but her tongue does not bring you to the desired state.'
+	'You stand in front of the table, legs spread, and <<$telsob>> drops to her knees in front of you and begins to kiss your pussy, but her tongue does not bring you to the desired state.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	*clr & cla
 	bilsvidkiy = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/6.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$telsob>> climbs on the table and spreads her legs wide. Picking up the cue you decide to try and pot the pink in the middle pocket. <<$telsob>> diligently responds your movements and rhythm. A few minutes later collapsing on the table in a shuddering orgasm.'
+	'<<$telsob>> climbs on the table and spreads her legs wide. Picking up the cue you decide to try and pot the pink in the middle pocket. <<$telsob>> diligently responds to your movements and rhythm. A few minutes later collapsing on the table in a shuddering orgasm.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 
 	bilsvidukiy = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit on the edge of the table, throwing one leg on the table. "How''s my cueing action?" <<$telsob>> jokes as she dramatically uses her tongue to moisten her cue, before quickly inserting it into your pussy. You squeal in surprise. She diligently fucks you with the cue, turning it in different directions, you''re massaging your clitoris with a finger. After a few minutes pleasant sensations spread through your body and you float into a world of orgasm.'
+	'You sit on the edge of the table, throwing one leg on the table. "How''s my cueing action?" <<$telsob>> jokes as she dramatically uses her tongue to moisten her cue, before quickly inserting it into your pussy. You squeal in surprise. She diligently fucks you with the cue, turning it in different directions, you''re massaging your clitoris with a finger. After a few minutes of pleasant sensations spread through your body and you float into a world of orgasm.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	act 'Kiss her':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/11.jpg"></center>'
-		'When <<$telsob>> once again put her hand on your stomach, you move closer to her and kiss. Her hand immediately slipped under your clothes and massages your breast.'
+		'When <<$telsob>> once again put her hand on your stomach, you move closer to her and kiss. Her hand immediately slipped under your clothes and massaged your breast.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 						act 'Lick her':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pool/sex/16.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn around so that your face is above her pussy, and start licking her. In a few minutes you feel as her body shake and <<$telsob>> groans strongly pressing against your pussy, and then you are shrouded in pleasant waves of orgasm.'
+							'You turn around so that your face is above her pussy, and start licking her. After a few minutes, you feel her body shake and <<$telsob>> groans strongly pressing against your pussy, and then you are shrouded in pleasant waves of orgasm.'
 
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'

locations/blackmailer.qsrc

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'init_blackmail':
 		'The flash of a camera illuminates the inside of the church, but the source eludes you.'
 	elseif strpos($loc, 'zaprF') > 0:
 		$blackmailQW['init_flashloc_desc'] = 'while washing cars'
-		'You briefly think a car turned on their headlights, before you realise it was the flash of a camera, the source of which already gone.'
+		'You briefly think a car turned on its headlights before you realize it was the flash of a camera, the source of which is already gone.'
 	else
 		$blackmailQW['init_flashloc_desc'] = ''
 		'You think you notice the flash of a camera from the corner of your eye, but its source is already out of view.'
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ end
 					else
 						'You were too late!!'
 					end
-					'<it>You can leave the cash in the city, pav, and pushkin parks, and the gadukino forest.</it>'
+					'<it>You can leave the cash in the city, pav, Pushkin park, and the Gadukino forest.</it>'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/blowPR.qsrc

@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/car/bj.jpg"></center>'
 	'You slide your hand onto his crotch, once you''re in his car. The man quickly drives to a quiet area, about two streets away. You can feel an impressive bulge when you reach into his pants, and compliment him on his nice cock when you liberate it. He''s nearly fully erect already, and if you look closely you can actually see the cock throbbing.'
 
-	if mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] > 0:act 'Put on a condom, using your mouth':sexcontra = 3 & gt'blowPR','1'
-	if mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] = 0:act 'Get him hard with your mouth':gt'blowPR','2'
+	if mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] > 0:act 'Put on a condom, using your mouth':sexcontra = 3 & gt 'blowPR', '1'
+	if mc_inventory['equipped_condoms'] = 0:act 'Get him hard with your mouth':gt 'blowPR', '2'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '1':
@@ -50,11 +50,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	elseif prosti = 1:
 		'After you give the man a blowjob for a while, he grunts that he''s ready to fuck you now.'
 
-		act 'Continue':gt'NormPR','1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'NormPR', '1'
 	elseif prosti = 2:
 		'After you give the man a blowjob for a while, he grunts that he''s ready to fuck your ass now.'
 
-		act 'Continue':gt'AnalPR','1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'AnalPR', '1'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 
 	'You close your lips around his member and flick your tongue over the tip of his cock teasingly. It stands at full erection in no time.'
 
-	act 'Suck on his cock':gt'blowPR','12'
+	act 'Suck on his cock':gt 'blowPR', '12'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '12':
@@ -155,11 +155,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	elseif prosti = 1:
 		'After you suck him off for a while, the guy reminds you that that''s not why you''re here. He''s ready to fuck you now.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt'NormPR','2'
+		act 'Further':gt 'NormPR', '2'
 	elseif prosti = 2:
 		'After you suck him off for a while, the guy reminds you that that''s not why you''re here. He''s ready to fuck your ass now.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt'AnalPR','2'
+		act 'Further':gt 'AnalPR', '2'
 	end
 end
 

locations/body_desc.qsrc

@@ -1247,8 +1247,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hair':
 	end
 
 	!Hair length
-	if avatar_hair = 1:
-		$hair = $av_hair
+	if $face_style['avatar_hair'] ! '':
+		$hair = $face_style['avatar_hair']
 		!! I do not really understand how the avatar system works in terms of hair growth and such, so these descriptors will just have to do
 		$pc_desc['hair length'] = 'normal length'
 		$pc_descWordy['hair length'] = 'normal length'

locations/booty_call.qsrc

@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'text1':
 		elseif booty_call['text'] = 3:
 			'	<b><font color="blue">fucking you on my bed</font></b>'
 		end
-		gs'booty_call_start','text2'
+		gs 'booty_call_start', 'text2'
 	end
 
 	act'Me too':
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'text2':
 		'<b><font color="pink">i have stuff to do</font></b>'
 		'	<b><font color="blue">shit</font></b>'
 		'	<b><font color="blue">maybe next time then</font></b>'
-		act'Put your phone away':gt'somewhere'
+		act 'Put your phone away': gt'somewhere'
 	end
 
 	act'I''m on my way':
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'text2':
 		end
 		!! missing code
 		!! confirm player is coming over
-		act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 
 	act'I''ll swing by later':
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'text2':
 			'"How about <<contMeetHour[Call4Date["ContactIndex"]]>>:00?."'
 			'<<$Call4Date["CallerName"]>>, "Okay <<$Call4Date["SvetaName"]>>, see you at <<contMeetHour[Call4Date["ContactIndex"]]>>:00."'
 
-			act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself1':
 	!! better way of randomizing this? personality based?
 	if rand(1,3) = 3:
 		'You don''t receive a response. He must be busy.'
-		act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	elseif rand(1,2) = 2 and hour < 18:
 		'	<b><font color="blue">im at work</font></b>'
 		act'Sorry, never mind':
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself1':
 			'<b><font color="pink">sorry</font></b>'
 			'<b><font color="pink">never mind</font></b>'
 			'<b><font color="pink">i''ll text you later</font></b>'
-			act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 
 		act'This is a booty call':
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself1':
 			'<b><font color="pink">this is a booty call</font></b>'
 			'	<b><font color="blue">ill probably be free at 19:00</font></b>'
 			'	<b><font color="blue">wanna come then?</font></b>'
-			gs'booty_call_start','invite_yourself2'
+			gs 'booty_call_start', 'invite_yourself2'
 		end
 
 		act'I wanna fuck':
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself1':
 			'<b><font color="pink">when do you get off?</font></b>'
 			'	<b><font color="blue">ill probably be free at 19:00</font></b>'
 			'	<b><font color="blue">wanna come then?</font></b>'
-			gs'booty_call_start','invite_yourself2'
+			gs 'booty_call_start', 'invite_yourself2'
 		end
 	else
 		'	<b><font color="blue">i was thinking about your naked body in my bed</font></b>'
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself1':
 			'	<b><font color="blue">i want to fuck you right now</font></b>'
 			'<b><font color="pink">i''m on my way <3</font></b>'
 			!! missing code
-			act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 
 		act'Can I come later?':
@@ -424,20 +424,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself1':
 				cla & *nl
 				'<b><font color="pink">i dont know</font></b>'
 				'<b><font color="pink">figure something out til i get there</font></b>'
-				act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+				act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 
 			act'Try to stay hard':
 				cla & *nl
 				'<b><font color="pink">just try to stay hard</font></b>'
 				'<b><font color="pink">i don''t want to get there and find out my meat stick has gone soft</font></b>'
-				act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+				act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 
 			act'Dream on it':
 				cla & *nl
 				'<b><font color="pink">dream on it ;)</font></b>'
-				act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+				act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself2':
 		'<b><font color="pink">maybe another day</font></b>'
 		!! missing code
 		!! add prevention so you can''t ask again today
-		act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 
 	act'Yes':
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite_yourself2':
 		!! missing code
 		!! add event to schedule
 
-		act'Put away your phone':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Put away your phone': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 end
 

locations/booty_call_sms.qsrc

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'default_booty_call':
 				$SMSTree['a3'] = 'what were you thinking about?'
 						!! boy response 1
 					if npc_finance[$ARGS[1]] = 2 and func('homes_properties_attr', 'get_property_attribute', '$town', $home['current']) ! 'city' and npc_residence[$ARGS[1]] >= 3:
-						$SMSTree['a4'] = 'i booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
+						$SMSTree['a4'] = 'I booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
 					else
 						if $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'blowjob' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
 							$SMSTree['a4'] = 'your mouth around my cock'
@@ -143,25 +143,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'default_booty_call':
 				$SMSTree['b3'] = 'me too'
 						!! boy response 2
 					if npc_finance[$ARGS[1]] = 2 and func('homes_properties_attr', 'get_property_attribute', '$town', $home['current']) ! 'city' and npc_residence[$ARGS[1]] >= 3: 
-						$SMSTree['b4'] = 'i booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
+						$SMSTree['b4'] = 'I booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
 					else
 						if $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'blowjob' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-							$SMSTree['b4'] = 'i want to feel your mouth around my cock'
+							$SMSTree['b4'] = 'I want to feel your mouth around my cock'
 						elseif npc_know_virgin[$ARGS[1]] ! 1:
 							if $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'creampie' and (npc_condom_conscious[$ARGS[1]] = 0 or npc_bareback[$ARGS[1]] = 1) and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'i want to pump you full of cum'
+								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'I want to pump you full of cum'
 							elseif npc_sex_speed[$ARGS[1]] = 3 and rand(0, 2) = 0:
 								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'come over i want to hear you screaming my name'
 							elseif $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'facial' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'i want to cum all over your face'
+								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'I want to cum all over your face'
 							elseif $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'mouth' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'i want to watch you swallow my cum'
+								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'I want to watch you swallow my cum'
 							elseif $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'tits' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
 								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'let me glaze your tits with my cum'
 							elseif $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'doggy' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'i want to pound you on all fours'
+								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'I want to pound you on all fours'
 							elseif $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'cowgirl' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'i want you to ride my cock like theres no tomorrow'
+								$SMSTree['b4'] = 'I want you to ride my cock like theres no tomorrow'
 							else
 								if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 									$SMSTree['b4'] = 'lets fuck like bunnies today'
@@ -341,9 +341,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sugar_daddy_booty_call':
 	
 						!! boy response to 1st reply, choice A
 					if ($home['current'] ! 'city_apartment' and $home['current'] ! 'niko_apartment' and $home['current'] ! 'university_dorm' and $home['current'] ! 'city_house' and $home['current'] ! 'maid_bedroom') and npc_residence[$ARGS[1]] >= 3:
-						$SMSTree['a4'] = 'i booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
+						$SMSTree['a4'] = 'I booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
 					else
-						$SMSTree['a4'] = 'i want to see you. why dont you come by my apartment?'
+						$SMSTree['a4'] = 'I want to see you. why dont you come by my apartment?'
 					end
 							!! player 2nd reply, choice A
 						if hour < 21:
@@ -408,11 +408,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'new_booty_call':
 			$SMSTree['f2'] = 'sorry'
 				$SMSTree['fa3'] = 'didn''t see your message until now'
 					$SMSTree['fa4'] = 'whatsup?'
-				$SMSTree['fb3'] = 'i was doing something'
+				$SMSTree['fb3'] = 'I was doing something'
 					$SMSTree['fb4'] = $SMSTree['fa3']
-				$SMSTree['fc3'] = 'i was at the gym'
+				$SMSTree['fc3'] = 'I was at the gym'
 					$SMSTree['fc4'] = $SMSTree['fa3']
-				$SMSTree['fd3'] = 'i was in class'
+				$SMSTree['fd3'] = 'I was in class'
 					$SMSTree['fd4'] = $SMSTree['fa3']
 
 
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'new_booty_call':
 		! Date invite
 
 	elseif $npc_rel_type[$ARGS[1]] = 'sugar_daddy':
-		$SMSTree['10'] = 'i want to see you'
+		$SMSTree['10'] = 'I want to see you'
 			$SMSTree['11'] = 'ive booked a hotel room'
 
 	elseif $npc_rel_type[$ARGS[1]] = 'casual_date' or $npc_rel_type[$ARGS[1]] = 'fuckbuddy':
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'new_booty_call':
 			$SMSTree['a11'] = 'what were you thinking about?'
 					!! boy response 1
 				if npc_finance[$ARGS[1]] = 2 and func('homes_properties_attr', 'get_property_attribute', '$town', $home['current']) ! 'city' and npc_residence[$ARGS[1]] >= 3:
-					$SMSTree['a12'] = 'i booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
+					$SMSTree['a12'] = 'I booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
 				else
 					if $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'blowjob' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
 						$SMSTree['a12'] = 'your mouth around my cock'
@@ -466,25 +466,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'new_booty_call':
 			$SMSTree['b11'] = 'me too'
 					!! boy response 2
 				if npc_finance[$ARGS[1]] = 2 and func('homes_properties_attr', 'get_property_attribute', '$town', $home['current']) ! 'city' and npc_residence[$ARGS[1]] >= 3: 
-					$SMSTree['b12'] = 'i booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
+					$SMSTree['b12'] = 'I booked a hotel room in Pav. why dont you come by?'
 				else
 					if $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'blowjob' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-						$SMSTree['b12'] = 'i want to feel your mouth around my cock'
+						$SMSTree['b12'] = 'I want to feel your mouth around my cock'
 					elseif npc_know_virgin[$ARGS[1]] ! 1:
 						if $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'creampie' and (npc_condom_conscious[$ARGS[1]] = 0 or npc_bareback[$ARGS[1]] = 1) and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'i want to pump you full of cum'
+							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'I want to pump you full of cum'
 						elseif npc_sex_speed[$ARGS[1]] = 3 and rand(0, 2) = 0:
 							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'come over i want to hear you screaming my name'
 						elseif $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'facial' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'i want to cum all over your face'
+							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'I want to cum all over your face'
 						elseif $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'mouth' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'i want to watch you swallow my cum'
+							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'I want to watch you swallow my cum'
 						elseif $npc_cum_pref[$ARGS[1]] = 'tits' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
 							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'let me glaze your tits with my cum'
 						elseif $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'doggy' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'i want to pound you on all fours'
+							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'I want to pound you on all fours'
 						elseif $npc_fav_pos[$ARGS[1]] = 'cowgirl' and rand(0, 2) = 0:
-							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'i want you to ride my cock like theres no tomorrow'
+							$SMSTree['b12'] = 'I want you to ride my cock like theres no tomorrow'
 						else
 							if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 								$SMSTree['b12'] = 'lets fuck like bunnies today'
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'new_booty_call':
 			!living with husband/wife
 			if npc_dirty_lover[$ARGS[1]] = 1:
 				$SMSTree['10'] = 'come home'
-					$SMSTree['11'] = 'i want to fuck you senseless'
+					$SMSTree['11'] = 'I want to fuck you senseless'
 			elseif npc_sensual_lover[$ARGS[1]] = 1:
 				$SMSTree['10'] = 'are you coming home soon'
 					$SMSTree['11'] = 'lets make love'
@@ -510,9 +510,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'new_booty_call':
 		else
 			if npc_dirty_lover[$ARGS[1]] = 1:
 				$SMSTree['10'] = 'come over'
-					$SMSTree['11'] = 'i want to fuck you senseless'
+					$SMSTree['11'] = 'I want to fuck you senseless'
 			elseif npc_sensual_lover[$ARGS[1]] = 1:
-				$SMSTree['10'] = 'i want to see you'
+				$SMSTree['10'] = 'I want to see you'
 					$SMSTree['11'] = 'lets make love'
 			else
 				$SMSTree['10'] = 'you should come over'

locations/boy_updater.qsrc

@@ -144,6 +144,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'schedule_update':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'trait_updates':
+	if $npc_rel_goal[$boy] = '':
+		if npc_goal[$boy] = 1:
+			$npc_rel_goal[$boy] = 'sex'
+		elseif npc_goal[$boy] = 2:
+			$npc_rel_goal[$boy] = 'casual'
+		elseif npc_goal[$boy] = 3:
+			$npc_rel_goal[$boy] = 'serious'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'unique_NPC_stat_seed':
 	if $boy = 'A11':
 		

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -200,18 +200,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	if $loc = 'sitrPar' or ($loc = 'family' and $loc_arg = 'sofa'):
 		if locat['Kolka'] = 11 or locat['Kolka'] = 2:
-			act'Chat with Kolka':gt 'brother2', 'chat'
+			act 'Chat with Kolka': gt 'brother2', 'chat'
 			if locat['Stepdad'] ! 10 and locat['Mother'] ! 19 and locat['Mother'] ! 24:
 				if brotherSex < 5 and brotherkiss >= 1 and brotherkisstalk < 1:
-					act'Talk about the kiss':gt 'brother', 'kiss_talk'
+					act 'Talk about the kiss': gt 'brother', 'kiss_talk'
 				elseif brotherkisstalk = 1 or brotherSex > 4 and locat['Mother'] ! 19:
-					act'Make out with your brother':gt 'brother2', 'kiss'
+					act 'Make out with your brother': gt 'brother2', 'kiss'
 				end
 				if NatbelQW['KolkaTease'] = 1:
 					act 'Ask if he liked the show': gt 'brother2', 'nattalk'
 				end
 				if brotherSex > 6 and brotherSex < 9 and brother_DTR = 0:
-					act'Talk about your relationship':gt'brother2','DTR'
+					act 'Talk about your relationship': gt 'brother2', 'DTR'
 				end
 			end
 			
@@ -292,13 +292,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'You look at your brother sleeping peacefully on the couch.'
 				if brotherrand < 5:'As you look, you can clearly see the outline of his morning wood pitching a tent under the blanket.'
 				if week < 6 and kanikuli = 0:
-					act'Wake him up for breakfast':gt'brother2','wakeup'
+					act 'Wake him up for breakfast': gt 'brother2', 'wakeup'
 					if brotherwakeup >= 10:
 						if brotherSex >= 5:
-							act'Wake him up with a handjob':gt'brother2','morninghj'
+							act 'Wake him up with a handjob': gt 'brother2', 'morninghj'
 						end
 						if brotherSex >= 6:
-							act'Wake him up with a blowjob':gt'brother2','morningbj'
+							act 'Wake him up with a blowjob': gt 'brother2', 'morningbj'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'You shake your head, "Sorry, little brother. I''m busy right now."'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'sitrPar'
 			end
-			act'Agree to help him':gt 'brother_lessons', 'homework'
+			act 'Agree to help him': gt 'brother_lessons', 'homework'
 		else
 			act'Offer help with homework': gt 'brother_lessons', 'homework'
 		end
@@ -535,7 +535,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_talk':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act'Leave':gt 'korrPar'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_talk':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act'Leave':gt 'korrPar'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_talk':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act'Leave':gt 'korrPar'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -697,11 +697,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
 			'Kolka quickly nods along, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I promise, not a word to anyone!"'
 			'After his promise you consider what to do.'
 
-			act'Get undressed':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
+			act 'Get undressed': gt 'brother', 'brother_voyeur_ev4'
 			act'Don''t do it':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	elseif npc_QW['A34'] > 3:
-		act'Undress again':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
+		act 'Undress again': gt 'brother', 'brother_voyeur_ev4'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'easy'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -945,7 +945,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_go_away2':
 	minut += rand(5,10)
 	npc_rel['A34'] -= 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/b (13).jpg"></center>'
-	'Turning to look at him, you give your brother a hard stare, "Kolka, if you don''t leave right now, I''m gonna spray you with the shower head."'
+	'Turning to look at him, you give your brother a hard stare, "Kolka, if you don''t leave right now, I''m gonna spray you with the showerhead."'
 	'Caught red-handed, Kolka backs away slowly and the door clicks shut.'
 	'<i>Ugh, boys...</i> you think to yourself, rolling your eyes in annoyance. You finish showering and dry yourself off.'
 
@@ -1004,7 +1004,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev2':
 	picrand = rand(1,7)
 	if npc_rel['A34'] <50:npc_rel['A34'] += rand(1,2)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/c (<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
-	'You turn to face the door, giving Kolka a better view of your body and then erotically squeeze your <<$titsize>> tits. Your fingers graze over your <<$pc_desc[''nipples'']>> nipples and you can''t help but give them a slight pinch. You reach for the detachable shower head and begin spraying water over your chest, all the way gazing at your awestruck sibling. You close your eyes and in the heat of the moment, your heart flutters and you let out a light moan.'
+	'You turn to face the door, giving Kolka a better view of your body and then erotically squeeze your <<$titsize>> tits. Your fingers graze over your <<$pc_desc[''nipples'']>> nipples and you can''t help but give them a slight pinch. You reach for the detachable showerhead and begin spraying water over your chest, all the way gazing at your awestruck sibling. You close your eyes and in the heat of the moment, your heart flutters and you let out a light moan.'
 
 	gs 'arousal','foreplay', 3, 'incest'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev3':
 	pcs_mood += 15
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/d (<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
-	'You move your feet a little wider apart and move the shower head down your body until it hovers just over your aching pussy. The spray of water is intense against your oh-so-sensitive lips and <<$pc_desc[''clit'']>> clit. It doesn''t take long before the sensation is too much and you orgasm - wave after wave hitting your entire body, you bite down on your tongue to muffle your moans, but are unable to keep completely silent; the occasional gasp escaping your lips.'
+	'You move your feet a little wider apart and move the showerhead down your body until it hovers just over your aching pussy. The spray of water is intense against your oh-so-sensitive lips and <<$pc_desc[''clit'']>> clit. It doesn''t take long before the sensation is too much and you orgasm - wave after wave hitting your entire body, you bite down on your tongue to muffle your moans, but are unable to keep completely silent; the occasional gasp escaping your lips.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'arousal', 'clit_vibe', -5, 'incest' ,'masturbate'
@@ -1130,12 +1130,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev4':
 		'He pleads, "No, no, I do need help!"'
 		'You sigh, "Fine then, let''s hurry up so we can get this over with." You slowly move your hands away from your breasts.'
 		'Kolka nods along, "Um, yeah, okay..."'
-		act'Get started':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev5'
+		act 'Get started': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev5'
 	elseif npc_QW['A34'] > 4:
 		'You check to see if the door to the hall is closed, then silently yet quickly take off your clothes. Feeling a bit embarrassed as you sit in a chair, you cover your <<$titsize>> breasts with your hands and close your legs tightly.'
 		'Kolka licks his lips while ogling your body, "They say repetition is the key to learning."'
 		'"Sure, they do," you reply, rolling your eyes.'
-		act'Get started':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev5'
+		act 'Get started': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev5'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1158,7 +1158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev5':
 		end
 		'"Oh..." is all Kolka can manage to say as he stares at your nakedness.'
 		gs 'brother', 'virginitydialog'
-		act'Continue':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev6'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev6'
 	elseif npc_QW['A34'] > 4:
 		if analplugIN = 1:
 			'You turn your ass towards your brother and lean forward, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$pc_desc[''pussy'']>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has an anal plug inserted into it.'
@@ -1169,7 +1169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev5':
 		end
 		'"Wow, nice view!" Kolka says after a short pause.'
 		gs 'brother', 'virginitydialog'
-		act'Continue':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev6'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev6'
 
 	end
 end
@@ -1271,7 +1271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev6':
 		else
 			act 'Refuse and get dressed (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
-		act'Give Kolka a closer look':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev7'
+		act 'Give Kolka a closer look': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev7'
 	elseif npc_QW['A34'] > 4:
 		'Your brother points to your legs, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, can you show me?" He moves his arms apart, mimicking you spreading your legs.'
 		'A small thrill runs up your spine, "Again?"'
@@ -1283,7 +1283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev6':
 		else
 			act 'Refuse and get dressed (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
-		act'Give Kolka another close up look':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev7'
+		act 'Give Kolka another close up look': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev7'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1345,7 +1345,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev7':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act'Continue':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev8'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev8'
 			end
 		else
 			if npc_QW['A34'] = 5:
@@ -1364,7 +1364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev7':
 			else
 				act 'Refuse and get dressed (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
-			act'Get down on the floor':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev8'
+			act 'Get down on the floor': gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev8'
 		end
 
 	end
@@ -1423,7 +1423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev8':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act'Get dressed':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Get dressed': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	elseif brotherSex >= 4:
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1457,7 +1457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev8':
 			'Kolka catches his breath and looks down at you, "Nice one, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Good job! Just remember: this is our little secret!" He stands and pulls his pants up before going over to the couch.'
 			'You don''t say anything as you get slowly gather your clothes.'
 
-			act'Get dressed':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Get dressed': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	elseif brotherConfidence > 10 and brotherSex < 4:
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1492,7 +1492,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev8':
 			'Kolka signs contently, clearly out of breath. He pulls his pants up and plops down on the couch.'
 			'Slowly you get up, refusing to make eye contact. The room is very quiet as you gather your clothes.'
 
-			act'Get dressed':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+			act 'Get dressed': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/brother2.qsrc

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Continue':gt'brother','start'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'brother', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'DTR':
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nattalk':
 			end
 			'"Of course, I promise." He says without hesitation.'
 			'"Good, I''ll keep you informed."'
-			act'Continue':gt'brother','start'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'brother', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Tease him':
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nattalk':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/kolka/brother.jpg"></center>'
 		'"She was dripping wet all day long." You say, eyeing the growing bulge in his pants.'
 		'You lean in close to him and whisper in his ear, "Now you''ll have something to jerk off to tonight."'
-		act'Continue':gt'brother','start'
+		act 'Continue': gt 'brother', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -681,17 +681,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kiss_lips.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'With your stepfather gone, you take the opportunity you have and start kissing your brother.'
 	'Your lips and tongues intertwine with pleasure and satisfaction.'
-	act'Finish':gt'brother2','kiss_end'
-	act'Keep making out':gt'brother2','kiss2'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'brother2', 'kiss_end'
+	act 'Keep making out': gt 'brother2', 'kiss2'
 
 	if brother_lesson_oral = 1:
-		act 'Have him give you head':gt'brother2','cuni'
+		act 'Have him give you head':gt 'brother2', 'cuni'
 	end
 	if brotherSex >= 4:
-		act'Give him a handjob':gt'brother2','hj'
+		act 'Give him a handjob': gt 'brother2', 'hj'
 	end
 	if brotherSex >= 5:
-		act'Give him a blowjob':gt'brother2','bj'
+		act 'Give him a blowjob': gt 'brother2', 'bj'
 		!!act'Sneak into the shower with him':
 	end
 end
@@ -702,10 +702,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kiss_lips.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You continue making out with your brother. His hands gently feel up your body, inciting pleasure and excitement wherever they go.'
-	act'Finish':gt'brother2','kiss_end'
-	act'Give him a handjob':gt'brother2','hj'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'brother2', 'kiss_end'
+	act 'Give him a handjob': gt 'brother2', 'hj'
 	if brotherSex >= 5:
-		act'Give him a blowjob':gt'brother2','bj'
+		act 'Give him a blowjob': gt 'brother2', 'bj'
 		!!act'Sneak into the shower with him':
 	end
 end
@@ -719,7 +719,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_end':
 	'"Yeah..."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act'Finish':gt 'sitrPar'
+	act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cuni':
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cuni':
 						'"Well, if you don''t want to..."'
 						'Kolka pulls his already very hard cock out. "No! I want to!"'
 						'You start jerking it as you lean in to kiss him.'
-						act'Give him a handjob':gt'brother2','hj'
+						act 'Give him a handjob': gt 'brother2', 'hj'
 					end
 					act 'Give him a blowjob':
 						cla & *clr
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cuni':
 						gs 'stat'
 						if brotherSex < 6: brotherSex = 6
 						brotherbj += 1
-						'"Get that cock out and I''ll return the favour," you tell him and he starts pulling his cock out.'
+						'"Get that cock out and I''ll return the favor," you tell him and he starts pulling his cock out.'
 						'"I thought we were short of time?" he asks and you smile.'
 						'"You won''t take that long..."'  
 						'"Shut up!" he retorts as he guides your head towards his hard cock.'
@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hj':
 	'You wrap your hand around it feeling the warmth and his quickening pulse. Continuing to kiss him you start to pump it vigorously, your mouth suppressing his moans and gasps as you work his cock hard and fast.'
 	brohj = 1
 	act'Keep going': gt 'brother2', 'hj2'
-	act'Give him a blowjob':gt'brother2','bj'
+	act 'Give him a blowjob': gt 'brother2', 'bj'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hj2':
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 		'"I can''t believe you just swallowed like that," he says, breathless.'
 		'"We shouldn''t leave a mess for <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and dad to find, right?" you say, giving him a clean smile.'
 		'After licking his cock a little bit more to make sure it''s clean, you finish up by helping him put it back in his trousers, lest your mother suddenly walk in and wonder what you''re doing together.'
-		act'Finish':gt'sitrPar'
+		act 'Finish': gt'sitrPar'
 	end
 	
 	act'Pull back':
@@ -900,7 +900,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 		'You quickly pull back and kneel in front of Kolka as he furiously jerks off in front of you. You close your eyes just as you feel his hot cum spatter against your face, flinching as it does. When he''s finally done, you feel a few droplets drip down your cheeks onto the carpeted floor.'
 		'Peeking through cum-slathered eyes, you look at your brother, saying, "Maybe we shouldn''t have done it like this. Now we need to clean up before someone spots us."'
 		'Leaving Kolka to clean his semen out of the carpet, you slink towards the bathroom to wash off your face.'
-		act'Finish':gt'vanrPar'
+		act 'Finish': gt'vanrPar'
 	end
 	
 	act'Stick your tongue out':
@@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 			'Leaving Kolka to clean his semen out of the carpet, you slink towards the bathroom to wipe off .'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act'Finish':gt'vanrPar'
+			act 'Finish': gt'vanrPar'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -942,7 +942,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 	act'Leave him alone':
 		cla
 		'You shrug, realizing that you''re not going to find a way to wake him up any time soon without him being mad at you and decide to leave him be.'
-		act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 	
 	act'Yank his blanket off':
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 			'"I hate you."'
 			'"Oh stop being so melodramatic," you say, rolling your eyes and tossing his blanket into the corner. "Now get ready for school before <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> yells at you."'
 		end
-		act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+		act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	end
 		
 	if brotherSex >= 2 or pcs_inhib >= 35 or npc_rel['A34'] >= 75:
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 						'"More motivation for you to wake up," you smile. You cover yourself up, putting your clothes back in place. "Bet it''s difficult to go back to sleep with an erection that hard. Now go get dressed."'
 					end
 					'"Alright," he says, yawning one more time before folding his blanket for storage and beginning the process of getting ready for school.'
-					act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+					act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 			
 				act'Trick him and don''t do it':
@@ -1049,7 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 			'His eye cracks open to look at you, seemingly intrigued.'
 			'"How?"'
 			'"With a handjob of course!"'
-			'"Hmmm..." He seems to consider for a moment before throwing off his blanket and revealing to you a rock hard erection showing through his pajama pants. "Deal."'
+			'"Hmmm..." He seems to consider for a moment before throwing off his blanket and revealing to you a rock-hard erection showing through his pajama pants. "Deal."'
 			act'Give your brother a handjob':
 				cla & *clr
 				gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
@@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 				'"Alright!" he says cheerfully, waddling away with his pants around his ankles to find some tissues to clean himself up.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup':
 				'"Okay, okay," he says, getting up and tidying up the couch from where he was sleeping.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+				act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1105,11 +1105,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeupresponse':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'tits' and $clothingworntype = 'nude' and $braworntype = 'none':
 		'He cracks open an eye. "I don''t need to get up to do that."'
 		'You look down at yourself and remember that you''re already topless. Right. That wasn''t a very good plan...'
-		act'Back to the drawing board':gt'brother2','wakeup'
+		act 'Back to the drawing board': gt 'brother2', 'wakeup'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'pussy' and $clothingworntype = 'nude' and $pantyworntype = 'none':
 		'He cracks open an eye. "I don''t need to get up to do that."'
 		'You look down at yourself and remember that you''re naked. Right. That wasn''t a very good plan...'
-		act'Back to the drawing board':gt'brother2','wakeup'
+		act 'Back to the drawing board': gt 'brother2', 'wakeup'
 	elseif brotherwaketrick = 1:
 		'He opens his eyes slowly, looking at you with suspicion.'
 		'"You''re not just going to leave like you did last time are you?"'
@@ -1153,7 +1153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'show':
 		'"Good." You cover yourself up, putting your clothes back in place. "Now go get dressed."'
 	end
 	'"Alright," he says, yawning one more time before folding his blanket for storage and beginning the process of getting ready for school.'
-	act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'trick':
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trick':
 	'"Listen here you little-!"'
 	'<b><i>"Hey!"</i></b> your mother shouts from the bedroom. "What is all this racket going on so early in the morning?! You two get along or so help me I will spank you! I don''t care how old you are!"'
 	'Glaring silently at one another, the two of you retreat after a ceasefire being called by your mother. This probably wasn''t good for your relationship though...'
-	act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'morninghj':
@@ -1199,7 +1199,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'morninghj':
 	'"I''ll think about it," you say, rolling your eyes in amusement as you walk away, your brother automatically beginning to get ready for school.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'morningbj':
@@ -1227,7 +1227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'morningbj':
 	'Having been given sufficient positive reinforcement, he obediently gets up and starts going about tidying the sofa and getting ready to go to school.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 --- brother2 ---------------------------------
 

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
 								'Picking up the pace for a quick burst of speed, you feel his hot cum burst all over your hand. Pulling back, you smile at the look of bliss on his face before leaning in for one more loving kiss.'
 								'"I think we''ll have to call the session early if that''s alright with you," you say, purposefully looking down at the sticky cum covering your hands. "I''m gonna go get cleaned up. You should soon too unless you want <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> to catch you with your dick out like that."'
 								'"Y-yeah..." he mumbles back, still dazed from his orgasm.'
-								act'Finish and get up':gt 'sitrPar'
+								act 'Finish and get up': gt 'sitrPar'
 							end
 							act'Put your mouth over his tip':
 								cla & *clr
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I promise not a word to anyone!"'
 				'After his promise you consider what to do.'
 
-				act'Undress':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
+				act 'Undress': gt 'brother', 'brother_voyeur_ev4'
 				act'Don''t do it':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			end
 
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
 					'Kolka looks up at you in surprise. "Really? You''ll really do it?"'
 					'"Yeah, I''ll do it," you say. "Like you said, it might help if you get to see the real thing. I''m happy to do it to help my little brother," you smile.'
 					npc_rel['A34'] += rand(2,3)
-					act'Undress':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
+					act 'Undress': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -281,14 +281,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
 					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You do your best to go through the text with your brother and explain it to him but he''s still really struggling with it. Even you have to admit, those pictures and diagrams really aren''t very good.'
-					act'Finish':gt $loc, $loc_arg
+					act 'Finish': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 				end
 
 				act'Use your body as an example and explain it that way':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/sitrpar.jpg"></center>'
 					'"I think I have a pretty good idea..." you say mischievously while he looks at you quizzically.'
-					act'Undress':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
+					act 'Undress': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
 			cla
 			*nl
 			'"Sure," you grin at him. "Just let me get ''presentable'' for you," you say with a wink before you start undressing.'
-			act'Undress':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
+			act 'Undress': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
 		end
 
 		act'"Maybe i try something else this time"':
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I promise not a word to anyone!"'
 			'After his promise you consider what to do.'
 
-			act'Undress':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
+			act 'Undress': gt 'brother', 'brother_voyeur_ev4'
 			act'Don''t do it':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		end
 	end
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/4.jpg"></center>'
 				'You lay back and spend the rest of the lesson letting Kolka use your body as a map, tracing your blood vessels with his finger to understand where they all go and where they branch out from.'
 				*nl
-				'As the lesson goes on, you suddenly realize that the gentle touch all over your body is actually turning you on a little bit. The tracing of his fingers feel like a lover''s caress and you feel warmth in your hips signalling that you''re starting to get wet.'
+				'As the lesson goes on, you suddenly realize that the gentle touch all over your body is actually turning you on a little bit. The tracing of his fingers feel like a lover''s caress and you feel warmth in your hips signaling that you''re starting to get wet.'
 				pcs_horny += 15
 				act'Continue':
 					cla & *clr
@@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 						'<i><b>sigh</b> Boys...</i>'
 						'Looking at the next part of the homework it talks about the anatomy of the vulva but doesn''t go on to the internals. At least you''ll be able to use your arousal for the lesson now..."'
 					end
-					act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
+					act 'Continue the lesson': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
 				end
 
 				act'"Wai-! Sto-... Ohhh..."':
@@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 							npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1
 							npc_breastfeed_by_sveta['A34'] = 1
 							npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] = 1
-							act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
+							act 'Continue the lesson': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
 						end
 					else
 						milkedvolume = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 0, 2)
@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 								'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says, writing some things down in his notebook.'
 								'You sigh again. Taking a look in the textbook, it says the next part of the homework is about the external female organs: the vulva. You slyly smile to yourself.'
 								'<i>Well, at least I didn''t get wet for nothing.</i>'
-								act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
+								act 'Continue the lesson': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
 							end
 							
 						else
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 								'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says, writing some things down in his notebook.'
 								'You sigh again. Taking a look in the textbook, it says the next part of the homework is about the external female organs: the vulva. You slyly smile to yourself.'
 								'<i>Well, at least I didn''t get wet for nothing.</i>'
-								act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
+								act 'Continue the lesson': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 				'"So if you''re ever given the chance to add to your V-card collection, listen and be understanding," you tell him and he nods.'
 				'After a few more questions, you continue with the lesson.'
 				'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 			else
 				if vagtype = 2:
 					'"Is it supposed to look this loose?" he asks, causing you to blush hard.'
@@ -704,26 +704,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
 						cla
 						'"I''ve had a lot of sex..." you say slowly.'
 						'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 					end
 
 					act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
 						cla
 						'"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There have been a few uhh, big guys inside me...", you trail off.'
 						'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 					end
 				elseif vagtype = 2:
 					'"I masturbate a lot..."'
 					'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+					act 'Continue': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 				elseif vagtype = 3:
 					'"No... Not all..." you force out. "I masturbate a lot, okay...?" you mutter somewhat ashamed.'
 					'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+					act 'Continue': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 				else
 					'After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+					act 'Continue': gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/brother_shower_sex.qsrc

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 # brother_shower_sex
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_menu':
-!!	act'Jerk him off':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'mutual_masturbation'
-	act'Blow him':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
-	act'Fuck him':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck'
-	act'Offer him your ass':gt'brother_shower_sex','brother_shower_anal'
+!!	act 'Jerk him off': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'mutual_masturbation'
+	act 'Blow him': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
+	act 'Fuck him': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck'
+	act 'Offer him your ass': gt 'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_anal'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mutual_masturbation':
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 						'"Sorry Kolka, I just couldn''t help myself! Blowing you was too much fun and I didn''t want to stop." You keep licking and sucking on his tip as if to make your point. "I hope you''ll forgive me."'
 						'"Okay, fine... " He''s still clearly disappointed but he nods anyways. "But next time I want to cum on your face!"'
 						'"Maybe," you say with is what is probably a very frustrating wink.'
-						gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+						gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 
 					act'But I just washed my face':
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 							'"Cum is hard to clean off! Even in the shower! It''s all sticky and gets everywhere. Even if you wipe it off your face, it gets on your hands, and then you have to be careful to get it all off before you run it through your hair."'
 							'Kolka opens his mouth to say something but nothing comes out. Guess he thought better of it.'
 							'"Hrmph! Always asking to cum on a girl''s face, never thinking about what a mess it makes or the trouble it causes for her! Boys!"'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 
 						act'Cum is still dirty':
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 							'"It''s not dirty! Besides, I hear that cum is good for a girl''s skin. You should be <i>asking</i> me to cum on your face!"'
 							'"Pfft~!" You roll your eyes. "And where did you hear that? From some porno you were watching with your friends?"'
 							'"No!" he says quickly. You turn off the water and pull back the curtain, rolling your eyes again. "... maybe..." you hear him mutter again under his breath behind you.'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 					end
 
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 							'Your brother stares at you for a moment, giving you a look.'
 							'"Slut." he says.'
 							'"Cum dispenser." you smile back.'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 						'"Sorry Kolka, I just couldn''t help myself! Blowing you was too much fun and I didn''t want to stop." You keep licking and sucking on his tip as if to make your point. "I hope you''ll forgive me."'
 						'"You could have at least swallowed if you weren''t going to let me give you a facial," he grumbles as you stand up.'
 						'"Maybe next time," you say with is what is probably a very frustrating wink.'
-						gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+						gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 
 					act'But I just washed my face':
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 							'"Cum is hard to clean off! Even in the shower! It''s all sticky and gets everywhere. Even if you wipe it off your face, it gets on your hands, and then you have to be careful to get it all off before you run it through your hair."'
 							'Kolka opens his mouth but nothing comes out. Guess he thought better of whatever he was about to say.'
 							'"Hrmph! Always asking to cum on a girl''s face, never thinking about what a mess it makes or the trouble it causes for her! Boys!"'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 
 						act'It''s still dirty':
@@ -129,16 +129,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 							'"It''s not dirty! Besides, I hear that cum is good for a girl''s skin. You should be <i>asking</i> me to cum on your face!"'
 							'"Pfft~!" You roll your eyes. "And where did you hear that? From some porno you were watching with your friends?"'
 							'"No!" he says quickly. You turn off the water and pull back the curtain, rolling your eyes again. "... maybe..." you hear him mutter again under his breath.'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 					end
 				end
 			end
-			act'Let him cum on your face':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_facial'
+			act 'Let him cum on your face': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_facial'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act'Let him fuck you':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck'
+	act 'Let him fuck you': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck'
 end
 
 
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 			'"It''s okay Kolka. I''m not mad. Let''s get you into the club. Why don''t I show you the <b>member only</b> entrance?"'
 			'"Don''t you mean member<b>s</b> only entrance sis?" he asks, confused.'
 			'"That''s not what I said," you whisper, pushing your hips back and swallowing him straight to the hilt.'
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first3'
+			act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first3'
 		end
 		act'This doesn''t make you''re special':
 			cla
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 			'"There''s been a lot of members in that club." You position his tip at your entrance, lining him up for what you''re about to do next.'
 			'"A <b>lot.</b> Of <b>members.</b>" On your emphasized words, you thrust your hips backward to take his entire cock inside you in one go, causing your brother to gasp and grab you by the hips to steady himself.'
 			'"Inside. <i>My. <b>''Club.''</i></b>" you whisper into his ear.'
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first3'
+			act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first3'
 		end
 	else
 		brotherfuck += 1
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 				cla
 				'"Yeah. I am." You smile at him. "I''m giving my first time to you little brother."'
 				'Still smiling, you push your ass towards him and impale yourself on his cock.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
 			end
 
 			act'No, I''m not (lie)':
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 				brothervirginlie = 1
 				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but I lost my virginity a while back little brother."'
 				'You''re not really sure why you''re lying to him about this, but there''s no time to think about that as you push your ass towards him and impale yourself on his cock.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
 			end
 
 			act'No, I''m a slut (lie)':
@@ -203,14 +203,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 				brothervirginlie = 2
 				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but yours is just going to be one more of many different dicks that have been inside my pussy little brother."'
 				'You''re not really sure why you''re lying to him about this, especially with the implication that you''re a huge slut, but there''s no time to think about that as you push your ass towards him and impale yourself on his cock.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
 			end
 		else
 			act'No, I''m not':
 				cla
 				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but I lost my virginity a while back little brother."'
 				'With one more quick jerk on his cock for good measure and push your ass towards him, swallowing his length with your pussy.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
 			end
 
 			act'No, I''m a slut':
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 				brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 				'"Nope!" You smile at him. "Sorry to disappoint, but yours is just going to be one more of many different dicks that have been inside my pussy little brother."'
 				'You''re not really sure why you''re telling him about this, especially with the implication that you''re a huge slut, but there''s no time to think about that as you thrust your hips backward to take his entire length inside you in one go. Your brother gasps at the rush of having his cock entirely swallowed by your pussy, grabbing you by the hips to steady himself.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first3'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first3'
 			end
 
 			act'Yes, you''re my first time (lie)':
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first':
 				'"Yeah. I am." You smile at him. "You''re my first time little brother."'
 				if guy >= 10:'You feel a little bad for lying to him, but you figure it''ll probably make him feel special if he thinks you''re giving him your virginity, especially considering the numerous quantity of dicks that''ve been inside you. You give his cock one more quick jerk for good measure and start pushing him in.'
 				if guy < 10:'You feel a little bad for lying to him, but you figure it''ll probably make him feel special if he thinks you''re giving him your virginity. You give his cock one more quick jerk for good measure and start pushing him inside you.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_first2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -281,13 +281,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first2':
 				elseif knowpreg = 1:
 					'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself, <i>I''m already pregnant.</i>'
 				else
-					'<i>Damn...</i> You close your eyes, sighing as you feel another glob of Kolka''s cum drip from your pussy. <i>I should go buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy...</i>'
+					'<i>Damn...</i> You close your eyes, sighing as you feel another glob of Kolka''s cum drip from your pussy. <i>I should go buy a morning-after pill from the pharmacy...</i>'
 				end
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+			act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		else
 			'Suddenly, you feel your brother tapping you on the shoulder.'
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_fuck_cum'
+			act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_fuck_cum'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first3':
 	'Kolka''s really getting into it. He pumps in and out you, member slick with your juices. His hands come up to grab your breasts and you gasp when they''re used as leverage to fuck you harder, his cock reaching even deeper inside you. His cock! Oh god! It''s driving you insane! Even though it''s his first time, he''s actually pretty good! Fuck! You should have jumped on his dick ages ago!'
 	'Several minutes go by with you unable to think about anything except how good fucking your brother feels.'
 	'Suddenly, you feel him urgently tapping you on the shoulder.'
-	act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_fuck_cum'
+	act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_fuck_cum'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck':
@@ -398,10 +398,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagv_analv':
 						'You both quietly return to washing before Kolka asks "Was I, um... Was it okay? Did you enjoy it?"'
 						'"It felt uncomfortable at first and even a bit painful," you say, wincing at the mere memory. "But by the end it was... well let''s just say, yes, I enjoyed it. But let me know when you''re about to cum next time, okay?"'
 						'"Does that mean that there will be a next time?" he asks with a hopeful expression on his face.'
-						'"No promises," you say as you realise that he''s not the only one looking forward to trying it again.'
+						'"No promises," you say as you realize that he''s not the only one looking forward to trying it again.'
 						*nl
 						'The sit under the water together for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
-						act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+						act 'Finish': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagnv_analv':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						dynamic $showerdin
 						gs 'stat'
-						act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+						act 'Finish': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagv_analnv':
 				'Straightening up, you both go back to washing yourselves in silence before you turn to face him.'  
 				'"You really are the best sister." Kolka says.'  
 				'"I know," you reply with a wide grin.'
-				act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				act 'Finish': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_anal_vagnv_analnv':
 			'Straightening up, you both go back to washing yourselves in silence before you turn to face him.'  
 			'"The things I do for you..." Kolka says with a cheeky grin.' 
 			'You just pull a face and stick out your tongue before you both giggle and get out of the shower.'
-			act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			act 'Finish': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -577,14 +577,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 			gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A34', 1
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/jerkoff1.mp4"></center>'
 			'"Not inside me!" you cry out. You quickly pull yourself off him and turn around, grabbing his cock with your hand and jerking him furiously until he groans and you feel his hot cum spattering all over your stomach.'
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+			act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
-		act'Suck him off':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_swallow'
+		act 'Suck him off': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_swallow'
 
-		act'Let him cum on your face':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_facial'
+		act 'Let him cum on your face': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_facial'
 		
-		act'Fuck him till he cums':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_creampie'
+		act 'Fuck him till he cums': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_creampie'
 
 		act'Fill me up!': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_fill_me_up'
 		
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 						'"Well how was I supposed to know that?"'
 					end
 				end
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+				act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -628,25 +628,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 				end
 			end
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] = 0:'"Sorry," you smile apologetically. "I''m not on birth control and I can''t afford to get knocked up. Especially not by my little brother."'
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+			act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 		
-		act'Fuck him till he cums':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_creampie'
+		act 'Fuck him till he cums': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_creampie'
 			
-		act'Fill me up!':gt 'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_fill_me_up'
+		act 'Fill me up!': gt 'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_fill_me_up'
 		
 	elseif brothercumchoice = 3:
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>-! I''m almost there! Let me cum on your face!"'
-		act'Let him cum on your face':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_facial'
+		act 'Let him cum on your face': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_facial'
 
-		act'Ignore him, make him come inside you':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_forced_creampie'
+		act 'Ignore him, make him come inside you': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_forced_creampie'
 
 	elseif brothercumchoice = 4:
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>-! I''m almost there! Can I cum in your mouth?"'
 		brotherbjcomment = 3
-		act'Let him cum in your mouth':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_swallow'
+		act 'Let him cum in your mouth': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_swallow'
 
-		act'Ignore him, make him come inside you':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_forced_creampie'
+		act 'Ignore him, make him come inside you': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'shower_forced_creampie'
 			
 	elseif brothercumchoice = 5:
 		act'Continue':
@@ -673,8 +673,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 						'"What?? But you said-!"'
 						'"Well you didn''t tell me about it! How was I supposed to know?!"'
 						'"Fuck!"'
-						'<i>Maybe I can get a morning after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						'<i>Maybe I can get a morning-after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 					
 					act'"I''m not but it''s okay"':
@@ -683,8 +683,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 						'"Actually... I kinda stopped using it a while ago..."'
 						'"What?? But you said-!"'
 						'"I know, I know. I''m sorry Kolka, this is my fault, I should have told you. But now you know I guess?" you smile weakly at him.'
-						'<i>Maybe I can get a morning after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						'<i>Maybe I can get a morning-after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 				else
 					act'"Was just asking"':
@@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 							'"You didn''t feel me come inside you?" he asks, raising an eyebrow?"'
 							'"I did, I just didn''t understand why you were cumming without making me cum first. I thought you were a better lover than that," you respond wryly.'
 						end
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 					
 					act'"You still need to ask" (tease)':
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 						'"Well," you chide him, "you still need to ask."'
 						'"How come? It''s not like you''re in any danger are you?"'
 						'"No, but I like telling you to come inside me," you smirk.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 					
 					act'"You still need to ask"':
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 						'"How come? It''s not like you''re in any danger are you?"'
 						'"No, but you still need to ask. It''s my pussy and it''s my right to choose whether you''re filling it with cum or not."'
 						'"Tch. Whatever."'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 				end
 			else
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on birth control," you reassure him. His expression melts with visible relief. "But still, you need to be more careful. If I forget to take my pills or stop for some reason, you cumming inside me like that could be really dangerous. I could really get pregnant."'
 						'He nods back at you in understanding. "I''m sorry," he says again. "I''ll be more careful in the future."'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 					
 					act'"I''m on birth control so you don''t have to worry"':
@@ -735,7 +735,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 						'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on birth control," you reassure him. His expression melts with visible relief. "So that means you can come inside me as much as you like and you don''t have to worry."'
 						'You wink at him and his jaw drops open. He looks down at your cum dripping pussy and you can feel a hunger exuding from him.'
 						'<i>Oops. I might have just created a monster,</i> you think to yourself.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 					act'Play a prank on him':
 						cla & *nl
@@ -751,8 +751,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
 							'"What the fuck! Are you fucking kidding me?!"'
 							'"Would you rather I not be?" you giggle, his reactions sending you into another fit. "Would you rather have had your sperm swarming around my unprotected uterus looking for eggs to impregnate?"'
-							'"You know what I mean!" His anger has you cackling further and you have to spray yourself in the face with the shower head just to calm down.'
-							act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+							'"You know what I mean!" His anger has you cackling further and you have to spray yourself in the face with the showerhead just to calm down.'
+							act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 					end
 				else
@@ -763,7 +763,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 								'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on my period right now. I don''t think I can get pregnant on my period."'
 								'His face sighs with visible relief.'
 								'"We got lucky this time. Consider it a freebie," you smile at him.'
-								act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+								act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 							end
 							act'"You need to be more careful!"':
 								cla & *nl
@@ -771,11 +771,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 								'"I know! I know! I''m sorry!"'
 								'You huff out in anger but turn back to face him again anyways.'
 								'"Look, I was on my period this time and I don''t think I can get pregnant on my period. But you should know better! If I wasn''t on my period right now this could have been really bad! So show some self control next time!" He nods fearfully in agreement.'
-								act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+								act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 							end
 						elseif knowpreg = 1:
 							'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself, <i>I''m already pregnant.</i>'
-							act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+							act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						else
 							act'"It''s okay, it was an accident"':
 								cla & *nl
@@ -784,8 +784,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 								'"But-!"'
 								'"Yeah, I know. I could get pregnant from this. But we''ll just have to hope I don''t. We can''t change it now, we''ll just have to be more careful in the future."'
 								'"The future? You mean..."'
-								'"Yes, I''m still going to keep fucking you Kolka," you smile at him. "Just cause this happened doesn''t mean I''m going to leave you alone. So just learn from the mistake and we''ll move on from it together, okay? Maybe I can buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy later."'
-								act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+								'"Yes, I''m still going to keep fucking you Kolka," you smile at him. "Just cause this happened doesn''t mean I''m going to leave you alone. So just learn from the mistake and we''ll move on from it together, okay? Maybe I can buy a morning-after pill from the pharmacy later."'
+								act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 							end
 							act'"You need to be more careful!"':
 								cla & *nl
@@ -796,8 +796,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 								'"I know! I know!"'
 								'"Fuck! What the fuck were you thinking?!"'
 								'You continue to swear at your brother for the next minute while he pleads for your forgiveness.'
-								'<i>Maybe I can get a morning after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
-								act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+								'<i>Maybe I can get a morning-after pill from the pharmacy,</i> you think to yourself.'
+								act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 							end
 							act'"What the fuck!"':
 								cla & *nl
@@ -807,8 +807,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 								*nl
 								'<i>Fuck! Fuck! Fuck! Fuck, fuck!</i>'
 								*nl
-								'<i>Idiot! ... I wonder if I can get a morning after pill from the pharmacy...</i> you think as you watch the cum spill from your pussy and run down the drain.'
-								act'Continue':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+								'<i>Idiot! ... I wonder if I can get a morning-after pill from the pharmacy...</i> you think as you watch the cum spill from your pussy and run down the drain.'
+								act 'Continue': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 							end
 						end
 						if brother['cp_accident'] >= 5:
@@ -819,14 +819,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 								'"Well what if you started taking birth control? Then I can cum in you as much any time right?"'
 								'"That''s not the point Kolka. You need to have more self control!"'
 								'<i>Though he is right...</i>'
-								act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+								act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 							end
 						end
 					else
 						'"It''s okay Kolka, I''m on birth control," you lie. His expression melts with visible relief. "So that means you can come inside me as much as you like and you don''t have to worry."'
 						'You wink at him and his jaw drops open. He looks down at your cum dripping pussy and you can feel a hunger exuding from him.'
 						'<i>Oops. I might have just created a monster,</i> you think to yourself. <i>Well it''s not like I could have told him the truth that I''m a magical sex demon now could I?</i>'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
+						act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -860,13 +860,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Come on Kolka, let''s finish up quickly before someone starts wondering where we are."'
 			'You stand up without further comment, letting the water run over your body a little more and making sure your hair is thoroughly rinsed.'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
 		act'Stare intimately':
 			cla & *nl
 			'Looking into his eyes, you stare at him and lean forward to give him a very long and intimate kiss on the tip of his cock before standing up. The two of you hold each other in continued silence, spending a few more minutes under the water and basking in the afterglow together.'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 		
 		act'Yuck':
@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 			'"Yeech," you wince, sticking out your tongue. "That''s gross."'
 			'"But you swallowed it anyways?" Kolka asks, confused.'
 			'"Spitting is quitting," you smirk.'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
 		if pcs_traits['cumeater'] = 1:
@@ -885,7 +885,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 				if brotherbjcomment = 1:
 					'"That really tastes good to you?"'
 					'"Mhm," you nod, letting the water run through your hair a little more. "Didn''t used to at first. But maybe it''s just an acquired taste. Or maybe little brothers are just the best vintage of cum!" You grin and wiggle your eyebrows at him.'
-					gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+					gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 				elseif brotherbjcomment = 2:
 					'Kolka regards you with a bit of a look as you stand back up.'
 					'"What?" you ask at him.'
@@ -897,7 +897,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						'"Have you considered maybe it''s just yours?" you ask, looking over your shoulder.'
 						'"A cumslut is still a cumslut, even if it''s only for one kind."'
 						'You roll your eyes. He''s being a punk but you can''t find the anger to be annoyed with him. He does have a bit of a point after all.'
-						gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+						gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 
 					act'Careful what you say':
@@ -906,10 +906,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						'"Hey, I can''t help it if my big sister is a slut!" he grins. "I just call it like I see it, and girls who swallows are usually sluts. Besides, I don''t think I have to worry too much. If you stopped blowing me, where else would you get your favorite drink?"'
 						if broshowerfuck = daystart:
 							'You roll your eyes. "I''m a slut remember? Maybe I''ll just go around the corner and blow someone else!" you growl at him. Tearing back the curtain, you step out of the tub somewhat annoyed with Kolka. Partially because he''s being a punk, but also partially because he''s actually kind of right. Fucking your brother in the shower and swallowing his cum <i>is</i> pretty slutty...'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						else
 							'You roll your eyes. "I''m a slut remember? Maybe I''ll just go around the corner and blow someone else!" You growl at him and shut off the water. Tearing back the curtain, you step out of the tub somewhat annoyed with Kolka. Partially because he''s being a punk, but also partially because he''s actually kind of right. Swallowing your brother''s cum <i>is</i> pretty slutty...'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 					end
 
@@ -918,7 +918,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						'"Uhmm... yeah? What tipped you off? Was it the part where I gave you shower head?"'
 						'"No, it was the part where you swallowed my cum like a shot of vodka. Only sluts swallow like that," he says, grinning.'
 						'You punch him in the arm playfully but you aren''t really mad. He does have a point after all.'
-						gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+						gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 
 					act'Kiss him to gross him out':
@@ -929,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						'He rips open the shower curtain and you grin back in satisfaction as he stumbles out to escape.'
 						'"Well maybe you shouldn''t be calling girls sluts just because they''re nice enough to swallow your cum!"'
 						'<i>Well,</i> you think to yourself. <i>I didn''t <b>just</b> swallow. I did also say I thought it was tasty. I suppose that is a bit slutty isn''t it?</i>'
-						gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+						gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 
 					act'Only for you(sisterly)':
@@ -940,11 +940,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						if broshowerfuck = daystart:
 							'"Hey! What''s wrong with that?" you grin at him. "I''d say it''s pretty weird to for your sister to let you fuck her in the shower. I thought you liked that! Don''t you want me to be a slutty weirdo then?"'
 							'"Bah!" he says, clambering out of the shower to escape you, grumbling as he does so. "More slut and less weirdo!"'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						else
 							'"Hey! What''s wrong with that?" you grin at him. "I''d say it''s pretty weird to get slutty blowjobs from your sister in the shower. I thought you liked that! Don''t you want me to be a slutty weirdo then?"'
 							'"Bah!" he says, clambering out of the shower to escape you, grumbling as he does so. "More slut and less weirdo!"'
-							gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+							gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 						end
 					end
 
@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						'"Yes, I''m a slut," you murmur into his ear. "I would never be a slut for anyone else Kolka," taking his hand. "But I''ll happily be a slut for you."'
 						'With your final words you press his hand against your pussy and the heat between your legs.'
 						'Neither of you say anything for a few minutes, standing still with your breasts still pressed against him and his fingers gently working themselves in and out of your pussy. You realize you can''t stay in there together too long, lest someone become suspicious and you wistfully pull away, Kolka''s fingers slipping from your pussy as you do.'
-						gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+						gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -976,13 +976,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It happens sometimes. Just try to warn me a little sooner next time, okay?" He nods promisingly.'
 			if brotherbj > 5:'You suppress a grin when he promises to do better in the future. You''ve given him enough blowjobs to suspect that he doesn''t give any warning because he wants to cum in your mouth. He never seems to have this problem when he asks to give you a facial. <i>Oh well,</i> you mentally shrug to yourself. <i>What''s a girl to do?</i>'
 			'"Now come on, let''s finish up before someone wonders where we are."'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		elseif brotherbjcomment = 2:
 			'"A little warning next time maybe?"'
 			'"Sorry sis. Your mouth just felt so good and your blowjobs are so great and... Sorry... I just couldn''t hold it."'
 			'"It''s okay Kolka," you smile up at him. "It''s not like I can be mad at you for saying I''m good at giving head." You give him a quick kiss on the tip of his cock before standing up.'
 			'"Now come on, let''s finish up before someone wonders where we are."'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 			'"Hardy, har, har." Even with your eyes closed, you can feel his self satisfied grin radiating towards you. You squeeze your eyelids tighter, feeling blindly for the water stream to rinse Kolka''s cum off, pushing him out of the way when you realize he''s blocking it. "You ever consider going out with my foot up your ass?"'
 			'"Hey, I''m only asking! You never know, you might start a new trend!" You finish wiping the last of his cum off your face, grimacing when you see that it''s now stuck to your hands instead. You turn, wiping it on your brother''s arm. "Hey!"'
 			'"Maybe you should try wearing it yourself," you retort sarcastically, ignoring his complaint. "''You never know, you might start a new trend!''"'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
 		act'Only on Sundays':
@@ -1017,7 +1017,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 			'You hear him snicker and grin at him with closed eyes, flicking your tongue out to have a taste of the spunk slowly dripping down your face. You motion for Kolka to move aside and let you rinse your face off.'
 			'"Good for spreading a reputation as a town slut too," he adds.'
 			'Finishing rinsing off your face you reply, "Well it''s not like they can complain about wearing my best makeup to church," causing you both to muffle laughter.'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
 		act'Why? Are you willing to help?':
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 			'You wipe the spunk out of your eyes to can see Kolka grinning at you. "Well of course I would! What kind of brother would I be if I wasn''t willing to help my sister put on her best makeup?"'
 			'"Mhm," you hum, sucking the tart semen off your fingers. "And you would be doing this for completely selfless reasons with no ulterior motive I''m sure, especially not to get a free blowjob in the morning."'
 			'You rinse the rest of the cum off your face as Kolka continues, "Of course I wouldn''t be doing this <i>just</i> for blowjobs. I''d hope to get a few morning fucks in too!" You smack his arm, rolling your eyes but smiling anyways.'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
 		act'I only did this because I owed you one':
@@ -1043,21 +1043,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 				cla
 				*nl
 				'"It''s not all that bad I guess," you say. "It''s just not something I want <i>every</i> time, you know?"'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 			act'I prefer to swallow':
 				cla
 				*nl
 				'"Nah," you say. "I prefer to swallow."'
 				'You grin lewdly at him and you can practically feel him drooling.'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 			act'I prefer creampies':
 				cla
 				*nl
 				'"Nah," you say. "I prefer it when people come inside me."'
 				'You grin lewdly at him and you can practically feel him drooling.'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 				
 		end
@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 			'"Really?" Kolka helps you find the showerhead and you start scrubbing your face, annoyed at how it ends up sticking to your hands instead of just sliding down the drain. "If it''s so annoying, why do girls you let people give them facials?"'
 			'Your eyes finally clear of the viscous liquid, you look pointedly at Kolka. "Why do boys always want to cum on girls faces?" you ask, raising an eyebrow and before realizing there''s still a wad of spunk still stuck in it.'
 			'Kolka''s lips twist as he sees your point. "Well... We don''t <i>always</i> want to cum on your faces... Sometimes we want you to swallow instead." Your face finally clean, you shut off the water, rolling your eyes at your brother''s justification.'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
 		act'Why don''t you find out?':
@@ -1080,7 +1080,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 			'"Yeesh, I was just asking," Kolka complains.'
 			'"Yeah, well I''m just telling," you respond, grimacing as you wipe the sticky liquid from your eyes so you can find the showerhead.'
 			'<i>Ugh. Maybe I should have just swallowed,</i> you think to yourself. <i>At least I wouldn''t have to deal with this mess if I had.</i>'
-			gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+			gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 		end
 
 		act'Feels pretty good':
@@ -1097,7 +1097,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 				'Finding the showerhead at last, you start to rinse off your face, responding, "Yeah, well, anyone who says they like to swallow is either a liar or a slut." Your face washed clean, you blink a couple times to see Kolka grinning at you.'
 				'"And what does that make you? A girl who lets her little brother cum on her face?"'
 				'You pause and smile back at him before answering. "A good sister."'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 
 			act'Tastes good too':
@@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 				'"Oh! So girls really do like to eat cum! I always wondered if that was just something they did in pornos."'
 				'You wipe your eyes so you can look at him and suck the spunk off your fingers.'
 				'"Oh yeah. I wish all face masks were as edible as a facial. Though they could probably never be this satisfying."'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 				'"But if you like eating cum so much, why did you let me cum on your face?"'
 				'You give your hand another lick, sucking on the tips of your fingers where you scrapped the cum out of your eyebrow.'
 				'"''Cause I''m a good sister," you smile at him.'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1138,7 +1138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 				'"So... Why do you let me do it? Just because you promised?"'
 				'Finally rinsing your face clean, you turn to face him, meeting his eye.'
 				'"''Cause I''m a good sister."'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 
 			act'It''s just messy':
@@ -1148,7 +1148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_facial':
 				'"Ahh. I see. So... Why did you let me do it today? Just because you promised? Cause we''re in the shower and it''s easier to clean?"'
 				'You turn towards him, meeting his eye, his cum still coating your face.'
 				'"Cause I''m a good sister."'
-				gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+				gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1164,7 +1164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_creampie':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'Looking back at Kolka with a self satisfied smirk, you slip off his cock, feeling cum gush from your pussy and spatter on the bath tub floor.'
 	*nl
-	gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+	gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 	if succubusflag = 0:
 		if knowpreg = 1 or thinkpreg = 1:
 			'You chuckle to yourself, "Well, at least I can''t get any more pregnant than I already am!"'
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_creampie':
 		elseif mesec > 0:
 			'"Happy?" you ask him. He nods back at you with a self-satisfied grin. "Just feel lucky that I''m on my period. I might not have let you do that otherwise."'
 		else
-			'You watch as another glob of cum dribbles from your pussy, plopping onto the tub floor. <i>I need to buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy. What if I get pregnant?</i>'
+			'You watch as another glob of cum dribbles from your pussy, plopping onto the tub floor. <i>I need to buy a morning-after pill from the pharmacy. What if I get pregnant?</i>'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1236,7 +1236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_forced_creampie':
 				'<i>Goddamn it,</i> you think, looking down to watch another glob of cum drips from your snatch. <i>Fuck. I shouldn''t have done this anyways. This gets me pregnant?</i>'
 			end
 		end
-		gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+		gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 	end
 
 	act'It felt too good':
@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_forced_creampie':
 		else
 			'<i>Shit... I probably should have had more self control...</i> you think to yourself, watching another glob of cum dribble from your pussy. <i>What if this gets me pregnant?</i>'
 		end
-		gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+		gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 	end
 
 	act'Too much mess':
@@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_forced_creampie':
 				'<i>Shit...</i> Another glob of cum dribbles from your pussy, plopping onto the tub floor. <i>Maybe I should have let him cum on my face after all... What if I get pregnant?</i>'
 			end
 		end
-		gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+		gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1313,10 +1313,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_fill_me_up':
 			'"Happy?" you faintly smile at him. He nods back at you with a self-satisfied grin. "Just feel lucky that I''m on my period. I might not have let you do that otherwise."'
 		else
 			'He has a grin on his face while he watches the cum spilling out of you.'
-			'<i>Huh...</i> you think, basking in the afterglow. <i>I''ll have to buy a morning after pill from the pharmacy...</i>'
+			'<i>Huh...</i> you think, basking in the afterglow. <i>I''ll have to buy a morning-after pill from the pharmacy...</i>'
 		end
 	end
-	gs'brother_shower_sex','ending_route_routine'
+	gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'ending_route_routine'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------------------------------------------- Ending ---------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -1324,9 +1324,9 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ending_route_routine':
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	if broshowerfuck = daystart:
-		act'Continue':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_end'
+		act 'Continue': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_fuck_end'
 	else
-		act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+		act 'Finish showering together': gt'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1355,7 +1355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 				'"Sounds good," he grins at you. "Besides, you can''t be the only girl I have sex with. I need to fuck a real virgin some day. Not some loose slut throwing freebies to her brother."'
 				'You smack his arm but smile anyways. "Yeah, but I still have <i>your</i> virginity. No matter how many other girls'' you take, yours will always be mine!"'
 				'The two of you banter back and forth for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
-				act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				act 'Finish': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 			end
 			act'Yes, I love you':
 				cla & *clr
@@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 				'"Yeah. I love you too sis," he says, gently kissing you. He seems happy but a little wistful. "I wish I could have taken your virginity too though."'
 				'You quickly try to console him. "I''m sorry Kolka! I''m sorry I couldn''t save it for you. But I''ll make it up to you! Because you''re going to get to far more of me than the person who took it. You''ll have me forever..."'
 				'The sit under the water together for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
-				act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				act 'Finish': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1382,7 +1382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 			'"Dicking machine."'
 			'"Cocksleeve."'
 			'The two of you banter back and forth for a little while longer before you realize someone might notice that your brother is missing and become suspicious. You quickly shut off the water and dry him off, gathering Kolka''s clothes and shooing him into the hallway.'
-			act'Finish':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			act 'Finish': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1412,7 +1412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 					'Your brother out of the room you lean back onto the door and close your eyes, feeling bad for what you just did. Maybe you shouldn''t have lied to him about that after all...'
 					brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 					brothervirginlie = 0
-					act'Finish up':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					act 'Finish up': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 				end
 			else
 				'"If that was your first time, how come you didn''t have a hymen? Isn''t that supposed to tear the first time a girl has sex? I didn''t feel it when I put my dick inside you."'
@@ -1434,7 +1434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 						'He nods back at you, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
 						brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 						brothervirginlie = 0
-						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+						act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
 					
 					act'Kiss him goodbye (just a peck)':
@@ -1444,7 +1444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 						'He smiles back at you and picks up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
 						brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 						brothervirginlie = 0
-						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+						act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
 
 					act'Kiss him goodbye (intimate)':
@@ -1454,7 +1454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 						'He smiles back at you and picks up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
 						brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 						brothervirginlie = 0
-						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+						act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
 
 					act'Until next time (grab his cock)':
@@ -1463,7 +1463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 						'"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his dick a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
 						'Startled, he does as you say, picking up his clothes and peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there before slipping out the door.'
 						brothervirginlie = 0
-						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+						act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1520,7 +1520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 						*nl
 						'The conversation winding down, the two of you remember that you have to get your brother out of here, lest the rest of your family grow suspicious of his absence. Leaving the shower running, you quickly help him towel off. Afterwards, he collects his clothes, gives you another quick kiss on the cheek, and slips out the door into the hallway. Your brother gone, now there''s nothing left to do but turn off the water and dry yourself off.'
 						brothervirginlie = 0
-						act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+						act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1540,7 +1540,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 					brothervirginlie = 0
 					'"Well, glad you enjoyed yourself," you say, ruffling his hair, smiling when he cringes back in response to the child-like treatment. "See you later bro."'
 					'He nods back at you, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
-					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 				end
 
 				act'Kiss him goodbye':
@@ -1550,7 +1550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 					'You lean in to give your brother an intimate kiss, then stepping back to meet his eyes.'
 					'"See you later," you whisper.'
 					'He smiles back at you and picks up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
-					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 				end
 
 				act'Until next time (grab his cock)':
@@ -1559,7 +1559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 					'A sly smile on your face, you step forward to grab him by the cock.'
 					'"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his dick a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
 					'Startled, he does as you say, picking up his clothes and peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there before slipping out the door.'
-					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+					act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 				end
 			end
 			act'Kick him out':
@@ -1578,7 +1578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 					'<br>Your brother out of the room you lean back onto the door and close your eyes, feeling bad for what you just did. Maybe you shouldn''t have lied to him about that after all...'
 				end
 				if pcs_horny > 70 and brothervirginlie ! 2:'And fuck! You''re still so goddamn horny!'
-				act'Finish up':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				act 'Finish up': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 			end
 		end
 	end

locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ razors_to_use['legs']  = min(3, max(1, (pcs_leghair*4)/20))
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 	dick = npc_dick['A<<34>>']
-	if brothershowertalk > 0:gt'brother_voyeur','showertalk2'
+	if brothershowertalk > 0:gt 'brother_voyeur', 'showertalk2'
 	brothershowertalk += 1
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 				'<i>Boys will be boys after all...</i> you muse to yourself, a smile subconsciously turning the corners of your own lips.'
 				bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
 				if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'ass_compliment'
 				else
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			'You casually talk to him about his day while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 			else
-				act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			'You casually chat with him about how he''s doing in school while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 			else
-				act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -113,9 +113,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			'You chat with him about his friends and what he does for fun with them while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 			else
-				act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 	if npc_QW['A34'] <= 1: npc_QW['A34'] = 2
 	brothershowertalk += 1
 	npc_rel['A34'] += rand(2,3)
-	if brothershowerlook = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','brothershowerlook'
+	if brothershowerlook = 1:gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brothershowerlook'
 	cla & *clr
 	if brothershowerask ! daystart:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 	end
 
 	act'Continue':
-		if brothershowerlook >= 1:gt'brother_voyeur','brothershowerlook'
+		if brothershowerlook >= 1:gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brothershowerlook'
 		*clr & cla
 		if npc_rel['A34'] < 50:npc_rel['A34'] += rand(1,2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -165,9 +165,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 			'"Just don''t tell anyone else about it!" you laugh when he furiously nods in promised agreement. The two of you happily talk about random topics while you finish up your shower. For the most part, Kolka continues to look at your face but you can''t help but notice the frequent quick glance at your breasts that ever so slightly widens his smile.'
 			'<i>Boys will be boys after all...</i> you muse to yourself, a smile subconsciously turning the corners of your own lips.'
 			if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'ass_compliment'
 			else
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -178,9 +178,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 				'You casually talk to him about his day while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			elseif brothershowertalk > 5:
 				'He happily talks to you about his day, though he still sits on the toilet facing away. He also still takes a few looks at you now and again but they aren''t as sneaky and they mostly seem to be glances to see your face. <i>Not that his eyes don''t wander downward anyways...</i> you notice with a smile.'
-				gs'brother_voyeur','day_talk'
+				gs 'brother_voyeur', 'day_talk'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 		end
 
 		act'Ask how school''s going':
@@ -190,9 +190,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 				'You casually chat with him about how he''s doing in school while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			elseif brothershowertalk > 5:
 				'He energetically talks to you about school and how it''s going for him, though he still sits on the toilet facing away. He also still takes a few looks at you now and again but they aren''t as sneaky and they mostly seem to be glances to see your face. <i>Not that his eyes don''t wander downward anyways...</i> you notice with a smile.'
-				gs'brother_voyeur','school_talk'
+				gs 'brother_voyeur', 'school_talk'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 		end
 
 		act'Ask him about his friends':
@@ -202,9 +202,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 				'You chat with him about his friends and what he does for fun with them while you shower. He sits on the toilet seat and faces away from you, awkwardly answering all your questions and queries, but you still see him occasionally stealing glances at your naked body. Not that it bothers you any, as you simply smile to yourself, amused that he thinks he''s still being sneaky.'
 			elseif brothershowertalk > 5:
 				'He cheerfully talks to you about him and his friends and what they get up to together, though he still sits on the toilet facing away. He also still takes a few looks at you now and again but they aren''t as sneaky and they mostly seem to be glances to see your face. <i>Not that his eyes don''t wander downward anyways...</i> you notice with a smile.'
-				gs'brother_voyeur','friend_talk'
+				gs 'brother_voyeur', 'friend_talk'
 			end
-			act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 		end
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 55:
@@ -220,9 +220,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'Deciding it''s too risky, you continue the conversation normally, though you find yourself unconsciously rubbing your thighs together and the denial of your release increasing your frustration some more.'
 					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 					else
-						act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+						act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 					end
 				end
 				act'Do it':
@@ -257,9 +257,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 						end
 
 						if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
-							act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+							act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 						else
-							act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+							act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 	*nl
 	'What do you want to talk about with him today?'
 	if npc_rel['A34'] >= 70 and brothershowerask ! daystart:
-		act'Ask if he wants to shower with you':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_ask'
+		act 'Ask if he wants to shower with you': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together_ask'
 	end
 
 	act'Ask him about his day':
@@ -298,13 +298,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 			'He happily talks to you about his day, only rarely taking glances at your exposed breasts. For the most part, his attention seems to be focused more on the conversation than your naked body.'
 		end
 		*nl
-		gs'brother_voyeur','day_talk'
+		gs 'brother_voyeur', 'day_talk'
 		act'Continue':
 			bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
 			if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
-				gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				gt 'brother_voyeur', 'ass_compliment'
 			else
-				gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -318,13 +318,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 		elseif brothershowertalk >= 10:
 			'He energetically talks to you about school and how it''s going for him, pretty much only taking a look at your ass when you turn around to wash or rinse. For the most part, he seems to be more engrossed by the conversation than your naked body.'
 		end
-		gs'brother_voyeur','school_talk'
+		gs 'brother_voyeur', 'school_talk'
 		act'Continue':
 			bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
 			if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
-				gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				gt 'brother_voyeur', 'ass_compliment'
 			else
-				gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -338,13 +338,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 		elseif brothershowertalk >= 10:
 			'He cheerfully talks to you about him and his friends and what mischief they get up to together, only looking at your pussy when his attention is inadvertently drawn by you washing between your legs. For the most part, he seems more engaged in the conversation than your naked body.'
 		end
-		gs'brother_voyeur','friend_talk'
+		gs 'brother_voyeur', 'friend_talk'
 		act'Continue':
 			bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
 			if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
-				gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
+				gt 'brother_voyeur', 'ass_compliment'
 			else
-				gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+				gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friend_talk':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together_ask':
-	if brother_shower_times > 0:gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together'
+	if brother_shower_times > 0:gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together'
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk4.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Hey Kolka," you say.'
@@ -440,14 +440,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together_ask':
 	'Kolka''s eyes go wide at your suggestion. "Woah... R-really...?" he asks in disbelief.'
 	'"What, a girl can''t take shower with her younger brother?" you grin. "What is the world coming to?"'
 	'"But what if <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> finds out?" he asks hesitantly.'
-	act'Maybe he''s right, it''s risky':gt'brother_voyeur','brothershowerlook'
+	act'Maybe he''s right, it''s risky':gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brothershowerlook'
 
 	act'Just close the latch':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk5.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Just close the latch! It''ll be fine!" you insist.'
 		'You can see he''s still conflicted, but in the end his baser instincts win and he starts to undress, unable to pass up an opportunity to shower with a female.'
-		act'Let him get in':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_first'
+		act 'Let him get in': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together_first'
 	end
 
 	act'What, are you chicken?':
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together_ask':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk5.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Prove it."'
 			'Your challenge can''t be passed up and Kolka practically starts throwing his clothes off to climb into the shower with you.'
-			act'Let him get in':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_first'
+			act 'Let him get in': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together_first'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -469,19 +469,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together_ask':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalkbusy.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Fuck <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!" you scoff. "I don''t care if she finds you in here with your cock up my ass, I''ll do what I want! Now are you going to get in here with me or what?"'
 		'He hesitates for a moment and you can see he''s still conflicted but in the end his baser instincts win and he starts to undress, already sporting a fine erection from your description of anal sex with him.'
-		act'Let him get in':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_first'
+		act 'Let him get in': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together_first'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together_first':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
-	'He''s clearly very tense right now. His responses to your questions are somewhat forced and his movements awkward. It doesn''t take a genius to figure out he''s uncomfortable because he''s trying to hide his rock hard erection.'
+	'He''s clearly very tense right now. His responses to your questions are somewhat forced and his movements awkward. It doesn''t take a genius to figure out he''s uncomfortable because he''s trying to hide his rock-hard erection.'
 	act'Just ignore it':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershower.jpg"></center>'
 		'You realize that this is something he''s just going to have to get over and adjust to so you don''t say anything. He''s embarrassed enough and it''s at least very understandable. Although you silently feel quite flattered that he finds your body so arousing.'
-		act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+		act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 	end
 
 	if pcs_inhib >= 50:
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together_first':
 			'He looks at you suspicious, but still embarrassed. "Really? Do you mean it?"'
 			'"Mhm," you say, as you continue to scrub yourself. "I''m the one who invited you in after all. I don''t have a right to complain about your body''s natural responses. Besides, it''s actually a little flattering to be honest," you say with a wink.'
 			'He seems to relax a little more after that and you continue to wash together until you''re feeling clean and rinsed off.'
-			act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+			act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 		end
 
 		act'Compliment his cock':
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together_first':
 			'"Don''t be like that!" you grin at him and playfully punch his arm. "I''m telling you you''ve got a nice dick!"'
 			'"Thanks I guess..." he mutters.'
 			'"Hey, if you''re not gonna be a ''shower'' you might as well be a ''grower!'' Careful there! You might end up pleasing a girl with that one day!" you say with a wink.'
-			act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+			act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -526,15 +526,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 			'"So, how was your day?" you ask cheerfully.'
 			if brother_shower_times < 3 or brotherSex < 4:
 				'"It, uhh... was... g-good... uhm..." he stammers.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_first'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together_first'
 			elseif brotherSex >= 4 and brother_shower['grope'] = 1:
 				'"Getting better by the moment..." he says, sliding up behind you.'
-				act'"Eek-!"':gt'brother_voyeur','showerfun'
+				act '"Eek-!"': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'showerfun'
 
 			elseif brother_shower_times >= 3 or brotherSex >= 1:
 				'Kolka answers readily, telling you the ins and outs and interesting things that happened during his day.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -545,18 +545,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 			'"So, how''s school going?" you ask cheerfully.'
 			if brother_shower_times < 3 or brotherSex < 1:
 				'"It''s... Uhh... fine..." he stammers.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_first'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together_first'
 
 			elseif brotherSex >= 4 and brother_shower['grope'] = 1:
 				brother_shower['grope'] = 2
 				'"It''s fine, but I''ve been having a little trouble paying attention in class lately," he says, stepping behind you.'
 				'"Why''s that?"'
-				act'"Eek-!"':gt'brother_voyeur','showerfun'
+				act '"Eek-!"': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'showerfun'
 
 			elseif brother_shower_times >= 3 or brotherSex >= 1:
 				'Kolka answers readily, telling you the ins and outs and interesting things that are going on at school.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -566,11 +566,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 			'"So, how''s your friends? Zhendos and Mishan?" you ask cheerfully.'
 			if brother_shower_times < 3 or brotherSex < 1:
 				'"They''re... Uhh... fine..." he stammers.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_first'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_together_first'
 			elseif brotherSex >= 4 and brother_shower['grope'] = 1:
 				brother_shower['grope'] = 3
 				'"Who cares about them?" he says, stepping behind you.'
-				act'"Eek-!"':gt'brother_voyeur','showerfun'
+				act '"Eek-!"': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'showerfun'
 
 			elseif brother_shower_times >= 3 or brotherSex >= 1:
 				'Kolka answers readily, telling you about the mischief he gets up to with his friends.'
@@ -580,23 +580,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 					'<br>"Yeah, you should join us again sometime," he grins. "It''s always so much better when you have a nice slut there to give handjobs."'
 					'<br>You give him the finger but grin back at him anyways.'
 				end
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 	if pcs_inhib >= 50 or npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
-		act'Suggest you wash each other (0:10)':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash_first'
+		act 'Suggest you wash each other (0:10)': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash_first'
 	end
 
 	if brother_shower_times > 2:
 		if pcs_inhib >= 50 or npc_rel['A34'] > 80:
 			if pcs_horny >= 50:
-				act'Use the shower head on your pussy':
+				act'Use the showerhead on your pussy':
 					npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 					cla
 					*nl
-					'"Hey, hand me the shower head will you?" you say to your brother.'
+					'"Hey, hand me the showerhead will you?" you say to your brother.'
 					if brotherfuck < 1:
 						'"What for?" he asks, still complying and handing it over.'
 						'"Got an itch I need to scratch," you smile mischievously.'
@@ -611,11 +611,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 							'Panting hard and legs still shaking, you hand the showerhead back to Kolka, a weak smile on your face.'
 							'"Thanks, I really needed that."'
 							'"N-no problem," he stammers, not really sure what to do after having a staring contest with his masturbating sister.'
-							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+							act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 						else
-							'Maintaining eye contact with Kolka, you place the showerhead between your legs, blasting a powerful jet of water into your pussy. He stares back at you, smiling as he gently jerks his rock hard cock. You stare at each other until you can''t take it anymore and cum hard, your orgasming ratcheting up in intensity with every second you continue to hold your brother''s eyes.'
+							'Maintaining eye contact with Kolka, you place the showerhead between your legs, blasting a powerful jet of water into your pussy. He stares back at you, smiling as he gently jerks his rock-hard cock. You stare at each other until you can''t take it anymore and cum hard, your orgasming ratcheting up in intensity with every second you continue to hold your brother''s eyes.'
 							'Finally, your legs give out from under you and you collapse to your knees on the shower floor. Stepping up to you, your brother takes the showerhead from you and places it back on its mount. You smile at him weakly before he puts his hand on your head, saying, "Well, it seems you got your rocks off, but I''ve still got something for you to take care of..."'
-							act'Blow him':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
+							act 'Blow him': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
 						end
 
 						$orgasm_or = 'no'
@@ -637,10 +637,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 					'"Huh?" He asks, confused. "What is it?"'
 					'His eyes go wide when as your hand slips up his leg and grips his member. Slightly panicked, he looks back at you when you start to kneel.'
 					'"It''s my mouth around your cock!"'
-					act'Blow him':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
+					act 'Blow him': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
 				else
 					'Looking at Kolka, he glances back at you to see a mischievous twinkle in your eye. Without a second''s thought or warning, you get on your knees and wrap your lips around his <<dick>> cm cock.'
-					act'Blow him':gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
+					act 'Blow him': gt'brother_shower_sex', 'brother_shower_bj'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash_first':
-	if brotherwash > 0:gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+	if brotherwash > 0:gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk4.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Hey, I''ve got an idea. How about we wash each other?"'
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash_first':
 	'"Don''t be like that!" you say. "You''re doing me a favor and I know that means I have to pay the ''play with boobs'' tax. So cheer up kiddo!" you say, putting his free hand back on your breast and squeezing with his hand. He seems to perk up a bit at that.'
 	'"Besides, you wash my back I''ll wash yours. I might just cop a feel myself," you whisper, firmly grabbing his cock and lathering it with the leftover soap on your hand. With that, you turn your back to him, saying, "So do you want to wash each other or not?" He nods eagerly. "Then let''s get started!"'
 	brotherwash += 1
-	act'Wash each other (0:05)':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+	act 'Wash each other (0:05)': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
@@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 				'"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him with a shrug. He looks at you in confusion. "I''m out of razors. Can''t shave without a razor kiddo."'
 				'"Oh." He looks around at the contents of the shower to see that you really are out of razors. "You know, you should really be more responsible sis. You shouldn''t let yourself run out of shaving supplies like that."'
 				'You roll your eyes at his suggestions of responsibility, recognizing that they''re obviously motivated by to his preference for clean-shaven girls.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 
 				if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotheranal > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 					act'Have some fun':
@@ -717,7 +717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 				'"Nah," you say dismissively. "Don''t feel like doing it right now."'
 				'Kolka''s mouth twists in disappointment. "You know, you really should. Nobody likes girls with hairy legs and a bush between them. You''ll get bullied by other girls and never get a boyfriend if you don''t shave."'
 				'You roll your eyes at his suggestions, recognizing that they''re obviously motivated by to his preference for completely clean-shaven girls.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 
 				if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotheranal > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 					act'Have some fun':
@@ -736,7 +736,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 				'"No?" you say questioningly. "I like it this way!"'
 				'Kolka''s mouth twists in disappointment. "You know, you really should reconsider. Nobody likes girls with hairy legs and a bush between them. You''ll get bullied by other girls and never get a boyfriend if you don''t shave."'
 				'You roll your eyes at his suggestions, recognizing that they''re obviously motivated by to his preference for completely clean-shaven girls.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 
 				if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotheranal > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 					act'Have some fun':
@@ -748,19 +748,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 				end
 			end
 
-			act'I should shave':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+			act 'I should shave': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 
 			act'Just for you':
 				brother_shower['shave_ask1'] = daystart
-				gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+				gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+	act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 	if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotheranal > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 		act'Get frisky':
 			brother_shower['grope'] = 4
-			gt'brother_voyeur','showerfun'
+			gt 'brother_voyeur', 'showerfun'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -793,11 +793,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_shave':
 			'You could cheer him up with something sexual.'
 			act'Put his hand on your pussy': gs 'brother_shower_sex', 'sex_menu'
 		end
-		act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+		act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 	end
-	gs'brother_voyeur','shave_both'
-	gs'brother_voyeur','shave_legs'
-	gs'brother_voyeur','shave_pussy'
+	gs 'brother_voyeur', 'shave_both'
+	gs 'brother_voyeur', 'shave_legs'
+	gs 'brother_voyeur', 'shave_pussy'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_both':
@@ -826,7 +826,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_both':
 						'"There," you say, rinsing off the last of the hair, stubble, and lather. "Satisfied?"'
 						'You take his hand and press it against your freshly shaved pubic region, letting him feel the smoothness for himself. He does so greedily, taking the opportunity to also fondle your pussy, making you moan into him.'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 
 						act'Lean into it':
 							cla & *nl
@@ -841,7 +841,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_both':
 						'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling.'
 						'You put your hands on either side of your pussy and say, "Well? Satisfied now?"'
 						'"Yeah..." he says, trailing off at the end, obviously hypnotized by your pussy, causing you to roll your eyes.'
-						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -869,7 +869,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_legs':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "Razor''s gone dull." You thumb the razor to show him. Need a sharp razor to shave. <i>Especially</i> down there," you smile.'
 						'"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
-						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 						if brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5: gs 'brother_voyeur', 'get_frisky'
 					end
 				else
@@ -887,9 +887,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_legs':
 								gs 'brother_voyeur', 'shower_end'
 							end
 
-							act'I guess I did': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 1 & gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+							act'I guess I did': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 1 & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 							
-							act'Oh alright': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 2 & gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+							act'Oh alright': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 2 & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 						end
 
 						if brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5: gs 'brother_voyeur', 'get_frisky'
@@ -910,15 +910,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_legs':
 									gs 'brother_voyeur', 'shower_end'
 								end
 
-								act'I guess I did':	brother_shower['shave_request'] = 1 & gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+								act'I guess I did':	brother_shower['shave_request'] = 1 & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 
-								act'Oh alright': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 2 & gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+								act'Oh alright': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 2 & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 							else
 								'"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you just kept it smooth..." he mutters.'
 								'Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
 							end
 
-							act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+							act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 							if brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5: gs 'brother_voyeur', 'get_frisky'
 						end
 					end
@@ -937,9 +937,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_legs':
 									gs 'brother_voyeur', 'shower_end'
 								end
 
-								act'I guess I did':	brother_shower['shave_request'] = 1 & gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+								act'I guess I did':	brother_shower['shave_request'] = 1 & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 
-								act'Oh alright': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 2 & gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_shave'
+								act'Oh alright': brother_shower['shave_request'] = 2 & gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_shave'
 							else
 								'"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you just kept it smooth..." he mutters.'
 								'Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
@@ -977,7 +977,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_legs':
 								'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling.'
 								'You put your hands on either side of your pussy and say, "Well? Satisfied now?"'
 								'"Yeah..." he says, trailing off at the end, obviously hypnotized by your pussy, causing you to roll your eyes.'
-								act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+								act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -1020,7 +1020,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_pussy':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "Razor''s gone dull." You thumb the razor to show him. Need a sharp razor to shave. <i>Especially</i> down there," you smile.'
 						'"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
-						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+						act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 					end
 				else
 					act'"Too lazy"':
@@ -1044,7 +1044,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_pussy':
 						'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling.'
 						if brothershave = 1:
 							'<br>As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-							'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+							'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean-shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
 						end
 						act'Continue':
 							if brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
@@ -1059,7 +1059,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_pussy':
 								'You put your hands on either side of your pussy as if to frame it for him.'
 								'"Well? Satisfied now?"'
 								'"Yeah..." he says, trailing off at the end, obviously hypnotized by your pussy. You to roll your eyes in response.'
-								act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+								act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -1082,7 +1082,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_pussy':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.jpg"></center>'
 					'"There," Thrust your hips forward, presenting your freshly shaved pussy to him. "Happy now?"'
 					'"Yeah..." he says, trailing off at the end, obviously hypnotized by your pussy. You to roll your eyes in response.'
-					act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+					act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1109,32 +1109,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showerfun':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I''m not in the mood to take care of you right now Kolka. Bother me some other time."'
 				'Suitably chagrined, the rest of your shower together elapses in only the sound of splashing water and frothing suds.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 			end
 
 			act'I don''t have time (angry)':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Fuck, Kolka! I don''t have time for this today! Can''t you keep your hands to yourself for five minutes?"'
 				'Suitably chagrined, the rest of your shower together elapses in only the sound of splashing water and frothing suds.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 			end
 
 			act'I don''t have time (apologetic)':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I''m afraid I don''t have time to fool around today Kolka," you say, giving him an apologetic smile over your shoulder. "Maybe some other time, okay?"'
 				'He nods, obviously disappointed and you finish up your shower together chatting and washing as normal.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 			end
 
 			act'Only when I say so':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I know it''s tempting to get handsy but you can only touch when I say so." You give him a sly smile over your shoulder. "I''m still your big sister Kolka. Show some respect for her, eh?"'
 				'He looks at you wistfully but nods and you finish up your shower together chatting and washing as normal.'
-				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+				act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+				act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1145,8 +1145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showerfun':
 			'"Not today Kolka."'
 			'You push him back, leaving a confused look on his face. You smile at him saying, "As much as I''d love to, I just can''t find the time to help you out today. I guess you''ll have to take things ''into your own hands'' later." You give his cock one last teasing caress and a firm squeeze before getting back to showering.'
 			'The rest of your shower is uneventful, but Kolka''s erection does seem to be more of a raging hard-on than usual.'
-			act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
-			act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
+			act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
+			act 'Suggest you wash each other': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_wash'
 		end
 		act'Get into it':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -1190,14 +1190,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_end':
 			cla
 			'"Well, glad you enjoyed yourself," you say, ruffling his hair, smiling when he cringes back in response to the child-like treatment. "See you later bro."'
 			'He nods back at you, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
-			act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 		end
 		act'Kiss him goodbye':
 			cla
 			'You take a towel and wrap it around yourself before leaning in and giving your brother a quick kiss on the lips.'
 			'"See you later."'
 			'He''s taken aback by the kiss, but smiles anyways, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
-			act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+			act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 		end
 		if pcs_inhib >= 60 or npc_rel['A34'] > 85:
 			act'Until next time (grab his cock)':
@@ -1205,7 +1205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_end':
 				'A sly smile on your face, you step forward to grab him by the cock.'
 				'"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his member a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
 				'Startled, he does as you say, picking up his clothes and peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there before slipping out the door.'
-				act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+				act 'Finish drying off': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1219,7 +1219,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_end':
 		'"Out!"'
 		'Still dripping wet with his clothes in his arms, you shove Kolka into the hallway naked. If your parents ask about it, you''ll just tell them he was peeping on you and you sprayed him with the showerhead.'
 		if pcs_horny > 70:'And fuck! You''re still so goddamn horny!'
-		act'Finish up':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
+		act 'Finish up': mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1232,7 +1232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ass_compliment':
 	'"Hmm? Sure, what is it Kolka?"'
 	'"You have a great ass!"'
 	'Feeling his smile radiating from behind you, you look over your shoulder and give him a grin and a little shake of your ass to show your appreciation for his compliment.'
-	act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'shave'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
@@ -1263,7 +1263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				*nl
 				'"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "I''m out of razors. Can''t shave without a razor kiddo."'
 				'"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
-				act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 
 		else
@@ -1276,7 +1276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Not with you watching!" you laugh. "That''s a bit intimate. Maybe I will when you''re not around."'
 				'"Hmm..." He seems disappointed.'
-				act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 			
 			if pcs_pubes < 21:
@@ -1289,7 +1289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 					elseif pcs_pubes >= 11 and pcs_pubes < 21:
 						'"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
 					end
-					act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+					act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 				end
 			else
 				act'"Nah, I''m too lazy"':
@@ -1298,7 +1298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 					'"Nah," you say. "I''m too lazy to do it. If I start shaving now, I''ll have to keep shaving every few days. Too much trouble to maintain."'
 					'"Hrmph. No wonder it''s such a mess down there..." he mutters.'
 					'You glare at him a little but he doesn''t see it as he''s already crossed his arms and looked away, still frowning.'
-					act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+					act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 				end
 			end
 			
@@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 						'"Oh Kolka," you roll your eyes. "If you think that every girl out there is going to keep it smooth, you''re going to be in for a rude surprise."'
 						'"But it looks better that way!" he complains.'
 					end
-					act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+					act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -1338,9 +1338,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 					'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling.'
 					if brothershave = 1:
 						'As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-						'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+						'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean-shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
 					end
-					act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+					act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -1364,7 +1364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 								*nl
 								'"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "Razor''s gone dull." You thumb the razor to show him. Need a sharp razor to shave. <i>Especially</i> down there," you smile suggestively.'
 								'"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
-								act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+								act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 							end
 						else
 							act'"Nah, I don''t feel like it right now"':
@@ -1372,7 +1372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 								*nl
 								'"Nah," you say, continuing to run the razor over your legs. "I don''t feel like doing it right now. Too much work."'
 								'Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-								act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+								act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 							end
 
 							if pcs_pubes < 21 or shave_length > 0:
@@ -1386,7 +1386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 										'"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
 									end
 									'Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-									act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+									act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 								end
 							else
 								act'"Nah, I''m too lazy"':
@@ -1395,7 +1395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 									'"Nah," you say. "I''m too lazy to do it. If I start shaving now, I''ll have to keep shaving every few days. Too much trouble to maintain."'
 									'"Hrmph. No wonder it''s such a mess down there..." he mutters.'
 									'You glare at him a little but he doesn''t see it as he''s already crossed his arms and looked away, still frowning. He seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-									act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+									act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 								end
 							end
 
@@ -1407,7 +1407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 									if pcs_pubes > 20:'"Hrmph. More like a jungle..." he mutters. You glare at him a little but he doesn''t see it as he''s already crossed his arms and looked away, still frowning. "I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
 									if pcs_pubes < 21:'"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
 									'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-									act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+									act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 								end
 							end
 
@@ -1429,14 +1429,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 								'<br>Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling.'
 								if brothershave = 1:
 									'<br>As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-									'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+									'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean-shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
 								end
-								act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+								act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 							end
 						end
 					else
 						'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-						act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+						act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1468,9 +1468,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 						'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your freshly shaved pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling.'
 						if brothershave = 1:
 							'<br>As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-							'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+							'<br>You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean-shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
 						end
-						act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+						act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 					else
 						if (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 8) or pubestyle >= 12:
 							if pcs_pubes >= shave_trigger + 5:
@@ -1494,9 +1494,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 						end
 						*nl
 						if pcs_pubes > 0:
-							gs'brother_voyeur','shave_not_done'
+							gs 'brother_voyeur', 'shave_not_done'
 						else
-							act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+							act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -1516,7 +1516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
 			'You don''t feel the need to shave right now and finish up showering as normal.'
-			act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+			act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 		end
 
 		if mc_inventory['razor'] >= razors_to_use['all'] and pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3:
@@ -1535,7 +1535,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
 				'You casually continue the conversation with your brother while lathering up your legs and crotch before starting to carefully shave them. You notice your brother make a few curious peeks but decide not to say anything and simply continue on with your business and the conversation.'
 				'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
-				act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1550,7 +1550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You casually continue the conversation with your brother while lathering up your legs before starting to carefully shave them. You notice your brother make a few curious peeks but decide not to say anything and simply continue on with your business and the conversation.'
 				'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, enjoying the feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
-				act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1570,7 +1570,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
 				'You casually continue the conversation with your brother while lathering up the area between your legs before starting to carefully shave it. You notice your brother make a few curious peeks but you decide not to say anything and simply continue on with your business and the conversation.'
 				'Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy, enjoying the feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
-				act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+				act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1588,15 +1588,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_not_done':
 		'"But it looks better that way!" he complains.'
 		'"Get used to disappointment," you chuckle.'
 		if brother_shower['together'] = daystart:
-			act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+			act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 			if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 				act'Get frisky':
 					brother_shower['grope'] = 4
-					gt'brother_voyeur','showerfun'
+					gt 'brother_voyeur', 'showerfun'
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+			act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -1607,15 +1607,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_not_done':
 		'Kolka watches eagerly.'
 		'"Get used to disappointment," you chuckle.'
 		if brother_shower['together'] = daystart:
-			act'Finish showering':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+			act 'Finish showering': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 			if brothersex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 				act'Get frisky':
 					brother_shower['grope'] = 4
-					gt'brother_voyeur','showerfun'
+					gt 'brother_voyeur', 'showerfun'
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+			act 'Dry off': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'dryoff'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1626,7 +1626,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dryoff':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_2.mp4"></center>'
 		'Eventually your conversation ends and Kolka excuses himself while you dry yourself off.'
 		minut += 10
-		act'Leave':gt $loc
+		act 'Leave': gt $loc
 
 	elseif brothershowerlook = 1:
 		cla & *clr
@@ -1639,7 +1639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dryoff':
 			'"Okay. I''ll see you later <<$pcs_nickname>>!" he says before slipping out the door and closing it behind him.'
 			'You smile faintly and go back to making sure you''re wiped dry.'
 			minut += 10
-			act'Finish':gt $loc
+			act 'Finish': gt $loc
 		end
 
 		act'Dry off and leave with Kolka':
@@ -1647,7 +1647,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dryoff':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you''re done, the two of you leave the bathroom together.'
 			minut += 10
-			act'Leave':gt 'korrPar'
+			act 'Leave': gt 'korrPar'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1659,7 +1659,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalkbusy':
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," he whispers. "Can I come in?"'
 	'"Did you want to talk right now?" He nods furiously and starts to widen the door to come in you stop him. "I''m sorry Kolka! I''m kind of busy today, I don''t have time to take a longer shower right now. Maybe next time, okay?" you say apologetically.'
 	'"Oh, okay..." he says dejectedly before closing the door and leaving you to finish your shower. You feel bad, but you really just don''t have time for him right now.'
-	act'Get out and dry off':gt $loc
+	act 'Get out and dry off': gt $loc
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'get_frisky':
@@ -1683,7 +1683,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_end':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_end_2':
-	act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
+	act 'Finish showering together': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'brother_shower_end'
 	act'Have some fun':
 		cla & *clr
 		*nl

locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 						'- Yes, it is true.'
 						'- Thank you very much, I just can''t believe my ears.'
 						'You have chatted on other topics. You calmed down a bit and by this point already came up Vika, you said goodbye and left.'
-						act'Go':gt'buklinik','olga2'
+						act 'Go': gt 'buklinik', 'olga2'
 					end
 					gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'easy'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -629,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'Silently without speaking with Michael, you were waiting for Vick, as he sadly looked at you. As soon as she came you got ready and left. Vika was surprised that you didn''t even say goodbye.'
 							'<br><B>END of CURRENT STORY : REFUSE</B>'
-							act 'Go': gt'buklinik','olga2'
+							act 'Go': gt 'buklinik', 'olga2'
 						end
 					else
 						act 'Wait For Vika (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -887,7 +887,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 																dynamic $showerdin
 																'You take a quick shower and get dressed, then you say goodbye to Michael and you are ready to leave. Soon Vika arrives.'
 																if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
-																act 'Leave': gt'buklinik','olga2'
+																act 'Leave': gt 'buklinik', 'olga2'
 															end
 														end
 													end
@@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 											bumtolik = 16
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/kiss_cheek.jpg" ></center>'
 											'Goodbye, Michael.'
-											act'Go': gt'buklinik','olga2'
+											act'Go': gt 'buklinik', 'olga2'
 										end
 										act'A kiss on the lips':
 											cls

locations/casting.qsrc

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'callboard':
 
-	act'Leave':gt'talent_agency','start'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'talent_agency', 'start'
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/callboard.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tryout':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/front.jpg"></center>'
 	'You decide to try for this one and go to the front desk to schedule the audition. The lady at the desk quickly puts your information into her computer and rummages through a file cabinet to pull out a script for you.'
 	'"Okay! You''re all set! Don''t be late!"'
-	act'Take the script and leave':gt'talent_agency','start'
+	act 'Take the script and leave': gt 'talent_agency', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'general_tryout':
@@ -124,20 +124,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'general_tryout':
 	'"Hi, I was just looking at the callboard and saw that they were holding auditions for <<$audition[''role'']>> today?"'
 	'"Yes! They are! Just go to the general audition room at the end of the hall. If the door is open, you''re free to go in."'
 	'"Thanks," you nod.'
-	act'Continue':gt'talent_agency','start'
+	act 'Continue': gt 'talent_agency', 'start'
 end
 
 !! ----------------------  Automation ---------------------------------------
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'details':
-	gs'casting','audition_schedule'
+	gs 'casting', 'audition_schedule'
 	'Pay: <<acting[''pay'']>> <b>₽</b>'
 	'Audition time: 16:00-18:00, <<$week[audition[''week'']]>>, <<audition[''calendar_day'']>> of <<$audition[''month'']>>.'
 !!	'Shoot time: <<acting_shoot_time>>:00'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'general_details':
-	gs'casting','audition_schedule'
+	gs 'casting', 'audition_schedule'
 	'Pay: <<acting[''pay'']>> <b>₽</b>'
 	'Walk in auditions today. Ask receptionist for details.'
 !!	'Shoot time: <<acting_shoot_time>>:00'
@@ -151,14 +151,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'BackShowerGirl':
 	$costuming['outfit'] = 'nude'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15 * rand(0,roletype))
 	'Uninhibited girls wanted for the role of <b>Background Shower Girl.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Background Shower Girl'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -169,14 +169,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SpringBreakFlasher':
 	audition['roletits'] = 4
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	'Big boobed girl wanted for the role of <b>Spring Break Flasher.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Spring Break Flasher'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -184,16 +184,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cadaver':
 	audition['roletype'] = 3
 	$costuming['outfit'] = 'nude'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
-	gs'casting','audition_schedule'
+	gs 'casting', 'audition_schedule'
 	'Young pretty girl wanted for the role of <b>Dead Girl 2</b>'
-	gs'casting','details'
+	gs 'casting', 'details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'cadaver'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -205,14 +205,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'DildoGirl':
 	costuming['pantynumber'] = 31
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	'Big boobed girl wanted for the role of <b>Dildo Girl.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Dildo Girl'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -222,14 +222,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'NakedLockerGirl':
 	$costuming['outfit'] = 'nude'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	'Young pretty girl wanted for the role of <b>Naked Locker Girl.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Naked Locker Girl'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -244,14 +244,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'UndressingLockerGirl':
 	$costuming['pantydrawer'] = 'filled with thongs. She picks one out and'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15 * rand(0,roletype))
 	'Big boobed girls wanted for the role of <b>Undressing Locker Girl.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Undressing Locker Girl'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -262,14 +262,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ModestCheerleader':
 	$costuming['outfit'] = 'cheerleader'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15 * rand(0,roletype))
 	'Pretty girls wanted for the role of <b>Modest Cheerleader.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Modest Cheerleader'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -281,14 +281,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'UnderwearCheerleader':
 	$costuming['underwear'] = 'cats'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15 * rand(0,roletype))
 	'Pretty girls wanted for the role of <b>Underwear Cheerleader.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Underwear Cheerleader'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -301,14 +301,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ToplessCheerleader':
 	$costuming['pantydrawer'] = 'to pull out a random pair of panties'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	'Young pretty girl wanted for the role of <b>Topless Cheerleader 3.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Topless Cheerleader 3'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -318,14 +318,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'HotShowerGirl':
 	$costuming['outfit'] = 'nude'
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	'Young pretty girl wanted for the role of <b>Hot Shower Girl.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Hot Shower Girl'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -336,14 +336,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'WerewolfGirl':
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	audition['roletits'] = 4
 	'Big boobed girl wanted for the role of <b>Werewolf Victim.</b>'
-	gs'casting','general_details'
+	gs 'casting', 'general_details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Talk to the receptionist':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Werewolf Victim'
-		gt'casting','general_tryout'
+		gt 'casting', 'general_tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -356,21 +356,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'DinerWaitress':
 !!	acting['costume_unique'] = 1
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	acting['scenecount'] = 2
-	gs'casting','audition_schedule'
+	gs 'casting', 'audition_schedule'
 	'Casting season two of "The Line", a television police drama. Pretty girls wanted for the role of <b>Diner Waitress.</b>'
 	'Description: A diner waitress meets a main character at her workplace before having a one night stand with him.'
 	'Requires nudity: Yes'
 	'Must be comfortable with simulated sex scenes'
 	'Number of scenes: <<acting[''scenecount'']>>'
 	'One dialogue scene, one sex scene.'
-	gs'casting','details'
+	gs 'casting', 'details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Try out for this role':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Diner Waitress'
-		gs'casting','tryout'
+		gs 'casting', 'tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -381,21 +381,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'HotBartender':
 !!	acting['costume_unique'] = 1
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	acting['scenecount'] = 3
-	gs'casting','audition_schedule'
+	gs 'casting', 'audition_schedule'
 	'Casting for the role of <b>Vera:</b> Female, 18-25'
 	'Description: Vera is an attractive bartender who hooks up with the main character after his girlfriend has just broken up with him. She appears again to talk to him when he shows up at the bar later.'
 	'Requires nudity: Yes'
 	'Must be comfortable with simulated sex scenes'
 	'Number of scenes: <<acting[''scenecount'']>>'
 	'Three dialogue scenes, including one sex scene.'
-	gs'casting','details'
+	gs 'casting', 'details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Try out for this role':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Vera'
-		gs'casting','tryout'
+		gs 'casting', 'tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -408,20 +408,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SluttyClubGirl':
 	audition['unique'] = 1
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
 	acting['scenecount'] = 1
-	gs'casting','audition_schedule'
+	gs 'casting', 'audition_schedule'
 	'Casting "Snare: The Seventh Seduction", a feature length horror film. Pretty girls wanted for the role of <b>Slutty Club Girl (Day Player):</b> Female, 18-30'
 	*nl
 	'Role Description: A party girl the main character meets at a club and unsuccessfully tries to flirt with.'
 	'Requires nudity: Yes'
 	'Number of scenes: <<acting[''scenecount'']>>'
-	gs'casting','details'
+	gs 'casting', 'details'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Try out for this role':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Slutty Club Girl'
-		gs'casting','tryout'
+		gs 'casting', 'tryout'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'YulyaGavrikov':
 	audition['room'] = rand(1,5)
 	acting['filmdays'] = 40
 	acting['pay'] = (audition['roletype'] + 1) * 800 + (15*rand(0,roletype))
-	gs'casting','audition_schedule'
+	gs 'casting', 'audition_schedule'
 	'Casting "Unashamed,"for the lead female role of <b>Yulya Gavrikov (Lead):</b> Female, 18-25'
 	*nl
 	'Synopsis: Unashamed is a comedic drama that follows the Gavrikov family as they struggle through their problems of self image, romance, sexual identity, work and life balance, and most of all what it means to stick together as a family and be able to love each other without shame.'
@@ -443,12 +443,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'YulyaGavrikov':
 	'Audition: Room <<audition[''room'']>> - 16:00-18:00, <<$week[audition[''week'']]>>, <<audition[''calendar_day'']>> of <<$audition[''month'']>>.'
 	'Filming duration: 2 months'
 	act 'Return':
-		gs'casting','clearcasting'
+		gs 'casting', 'clearcasting'
 		gt'casting', 'callboard'
 	end
 	act'Try out for this role':
 		$audition['role'] = 'Yulya Gavrikov'
-		gs'casting','tryout'
+		gs 'casting', 'tryout'
 	end
 end
 

locations/city_hotel.qsrc

@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reception':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/hotel/receptionist.jpg"></center>'
 			'She looks in the computer: "I see you already have a room here. As it is already booked and paid for the only way to change it to a different room, would be to cancel your existing booking. To do so without notice would forfeit your payment, I would advise against this, but you may do so if you wish."'
 			act'Yes, cancel your booking': hotelRoom['city'] = 0 & gt'city_hotel'
-			act'No':gt'city_hotel'
+			act 'No': gt'city_hotel'
 		elseif hotelRoom['city'] = 0:
 			act 'Yes':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reception':
 
 				act 'Step away from the reception desk': gt'city_hotel'
 			end
-			act'No, thank you':gt'city_hotel'
+			act 'No, thank you': gt'city_hotel'
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/city_house_res_misc.qsrc

@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livroom':
 		*nl
 		if pcs_sewng >= 80:
 			if newgobelen = 0 and mc_inventory['sewing_fabric'] > 0: 
-				act'Start a new tapestry':gt 'sewing', 'tapestry'
+				act 'Start a new tapestry': gt 'sewing', 'tapestry'
 			elseif newgobelen >= 1:
 				'Your tapestry is <<newgobelen/10>> percent finished.'
 				act 'Work on the tapestry':gt 'sewing', 'tapestry'

locations/city_island.qsrc

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ end
 'The university and shops and clubs that cater to the students dominate this area of the city.'
 
 !call random events from [street_events], and display them before show location.
-if streetevent_hour + 2 < hour:gt'street_event','city_island', 'main'
+if streetevent_hour + 2 < hour:gt 'street_event', 'city_island', 'main'
 
 gs 'street_event', 'city_island', 'extras'
 

locations/city_kafeend.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		gs 'city_kafeend', 'end_sex'
 	elseif kafe_rand = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/cafe/sex/arand4.jpg"></center>'
-		'Coming out of the cafe, you notice a girl squatting and giving a guy a blowob at the side of the building.'
+		'Coming out of the cafe, you notice a girl squatting and giving a guy a blowjob at the side of the building.'
 		gs 'city_kafeend', 'end_sex'
 	elseif kafe_rand = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/cafe/sex/arand5.jpg"></center>'
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		gs 'city_kafeend', 'end'
 	elseif kafe_rand = 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/cafe/sex/arand11.jpg"></center>'
-		'Coming out of the cafe, you have to step over drunk girl passed out that right in front of the entrance lying on the pavement.'
+		'Coming out of the cafe, you have to step over a drunk girl passed out right in front of the entrance lying on the pavement.'
 		gs 'city_kafeend', 'end'
 	elseif kafe_rand = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/cafe/sex/arand12.jpg"></center>'