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[fixes] Some grammer and a choice to stay after doing homework for Katya events from spectre1viper

Kevin_Smarts 3 năm trước cách đây
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      locations/katjaEv.qsrc

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locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -16,21 +16,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	if KatjaOTN > 0:
 		if KatjaHorny < 20:
-			'Katja looks at you, smiling. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?."'
+			'Katja looks at you, smiling. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?"'
 		elseif KatjaHorny >= 20 and KatjaHorny < 40:
-			'Katja looks at you, a naughty twinkle in her eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?."'
+			'Katja looks at you, a naughty twinkle in her eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?"'
 		elseif KatjaHorny >= 40 and KatjaHorny < 60:
-			'Katja looks at you, a faint blush on her cheeks and she looks at you mischievously. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?."'
+			'Katja looks at you, a faint blush on her cheeks and she looks at you mischievously. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?"'
 		elseif KatjaHorny >= 60 and KatjaHorny < 80:
-			'Katja is blushing fairly obviously and looks at you longingly. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?."'
+			'Katja is blushing fairly obviously and looks at you longingly. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?"'
 		elseif KatjaHorny >= 80:
-			'Katja is as red as a lobster and her chest is heaving from her heavy breaths. She''s idly rubbing her thighs against one another while she talk. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?."'
+			'Katja is as red as a lobster and her chest is heaving from her heavy breaths. She''s idly rubbing her thighs against one another while she talks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?"'
 		end
 	else
 		'Katja looks at you, smiling. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what do you want to do?."'
 	end
 
-	if fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and FedorKatjaChat = 0: FedorKatjaChat = 1 & 'You and Katja run into Fedor. He waves as he asks "Hey girls, what are you two up to?" Katja downcasts her eyes, noticeably embarrassed. "We are just going to do our homework together." Fedor thinks for a bit, then says, "Okay Then, I''ll see you some other time." Then turns and walks away.'
+	if fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and FedorKatjaChat = 0: FedorKatjaChat = 1 & 'You and Katja run into Fedor. He waves as he asks "Hey girls, what are you two up to?" Katja downcasts her eyes, noticeably embarrassed. "We are just going to do our homework together." Fedor thinks for a bit, then says, "Okay then, I''ll see you some other time." Then turns and walks away.'
 
 	if katja_debug = 1:
 		'KatjaLust - <<KatjaLust>>'
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			gt 'KatjaEv','kathan'
 		end
 	end
-	if meynoldQW >= 2: act '"Let''s going to do our homework, Katja"': minut += 5 & gt 'katjaEV','1'
+	if lernHome > 0 and meynoldQW >= 2: act '"Let''s get going to do our homework together, Katja"': minut += 5 & gt 'katjaEV','1'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '1':
@@ -113,18 +113,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_home.jpg"></center>'
-		if katschoolsex = 1 and KatjaHorny > 60 and rand (1,3) = 1: *clr & '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_go_home_tanga.jpg"></center>' & 'You walk through the streets of Pavlovsk together with Kate to her house. You and chatted about all sorts of trivia and have fun. Suddenly Kate stopped and turned around looking at you, a mischievous look lifted her skirt. Showing you her panties. '
-		if Katja_tanga_end = 1 and KatjaHorny > 60 and rand (1,3) = 1: *clr & '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_go_home_no_tanga.jpg"></center>' & 'You walk through the streets of Pavlovsk together with Kate to her house. You and chatted about all sorts of trivia and have fun. Suddenly Kate stopped and turned around looking at you, a mischievous look lifted her skirt. Showing you her tender pussy, she seems to have forgotten her panties.'
+		if katschoolsex = 1 and KatjaHorny > 60 and rand (1,3) = 1: *clr & '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_go_home_tanga.jpg"></center>' & 'You walk through the streets of Pavlovsk together with Kate to her house. You and chatted about all sorts of trivia and have fun. Suddenly Kate stopped and turned around looking at you, giving you a mischievous look and lifting her skirt, showing you her panties. '
+		if Katja_tanga_end = 1 and KatjaHorny > 60 and rand (1,3) = 1: *clr & '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_go_home_no_tanga.jpg"></center>' & 'You walk through the streets of Pavlovsk together with Kate to her house. You and chatted about all sorts of trivia and have fun. Suddenly Kate stopped and turned around looking at you, giving you a mischievous look and lifting her skirt, showing you her tender pussy, she seems to have forgotten her panties.'
 	end
-	'You walk through the streets Pavlovsk together with Katja to her house. You and chatted about all sorts of trivia and have fun.'
+	'You walk through the streets of Pavlovsk together with Katja to her house. You chat about all sorts of trivia and have fun.'
 
 	if AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] > 0 and AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 0:'Katja is very interested in how you are doing with your pro-dancing. In her opinion it is a very private team and there have been many rumors about Albina''s team.'
-	if kotovLoveQW > 0:'Katja asks you about your relationship with Victor Kotov, expressing her opinion about it. According to her Victor is rude and a true gangster.'
+	if kotovLoveQW > 0:'Katja asks you about your relationship with Victor Kotov, expressing her opinion about it. According to her, Victor is rude and a true gangster.'
 
 	if pirsA > 0 and pirsA < 10000 and KatjaKnowPirsA = 0:
 		KatjaKnowPirsA = 1
 		KatjaLust += 5
-		'Kate noticed you have a pierced tongue and chattered all the way trying to finding out all about it.'
+		'Kate noticed that you have a pierced tongue and chattered all the way trying to find out all about it.'
 	end
 
 	if flag_KissEV = 1: flag_KissEV = 2 & '"I liked kissing, even if we had to kiss all the boys too, well, all of them but the jerk that called us lesbians." suddenly said Katja. You only snorted in response.'
@@ -157,14 +157,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	katjaLernTimes += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-	'For half an hour you and Katja pour over your books, you fully learn the lessons and pretty well understand the materials.'
+	'For half an hour you and Katja pour over your books, you fully learn the lessons and pretty well understand the material.'
 
 	if katjaLernTimes >= 10: gs 'katjaEv', 'learning'
 
 	if mey_vika['key'] = 1:
 		act 'Leave the room': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	else
-		act 'Say goodbye and leave':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'katjaEv', ''
+		act 'Say goodbye and leave': minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 end