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[text edit] Various fixes to spelling/grammar

CroWke 5 years ago
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1 changed files with 12 additions and 12 deletions
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      locations/MEastbed.qsrc

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locations/MEastbed.qsrc

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestB':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/mis_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A well dressed women is very much enjoying giving a blowjob, she must be a switch.'
+		'A well dressed woman is very much enjoying giving a blowjob, she must be a sub.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -100,8 +100,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestC':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedmff.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you watch the man notices you and motions you over, obeying you walk over to him. He keeps fucking the woman on the bed he says."Straddle her face and look at me."'
-				'You do as you was told and the womans tongue plunges into your pussy at once as she starts tongue fucking you. The man pulls you forward and kisses you as he keeps fucking the other woman.'
+				'As you watch the man notices you and motions you over. Obeying you walk over to him. While he keeps fucking the woman on the bed he says. "Straddle her face and look at me."'
+				'You do as you are told and the woman''s tongue plunges into your pussy at once as she starts tongue fucking you. The man pulls you forward and kisses you as he keeps fucking the other woman.'
 				'You orgasm before he does and when he does, he does deep inside or her. Once finished they get dressed.'
 				
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestC':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_pun1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women has been tied and gagged with a body massager strapped to her pussy. Poor thing, hopefully someone will let her go soon.'
+		'A submissive woman has been tied and gagged with a body massager strapped to her pussy. Poor thing, hopefully someone will let her go soon.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedrand6.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women is tied up and gagged, her domme is fucking her with a strap-on.'
+		'A submissive woman is tied up and gagged, her domme is fucking her with a strap-on.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -179,17 +179,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedrand6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You keep watching them, at the rough treatment the sub occasionally cries out through the gag, which only seems to annoy her dom, which gives her a smack each time and tell her to take it like a good whore.'
-				'Noticing you the dom turns and pulls out of her sub. "You come over here and show my worthless sub how to take it like a good whore."'
+				'You keep watching them. At the rough treatment the sub occasionally cries out through the gag. Which only seems to annoy her domme, who gives her a smack each time and tell her to take it like a good whore.'
+				'Noticing you the domme turns and pulls out of her sub. "You come over here and show my worthless sub how to take it like a good whore."'
 
 				act 'obey':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_ass += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/fffdomstrap.jpg"></center>'
-					'You undress and walk over to her as she unties her sub. As you get to the bed she grabs you and pushes you down face first on the bed. She crawls up on top of you and rubs the strap-on against your asshole.'
-					'With only the lube from her subs pussy juices she shoves it in your ass, sliding it balls deep in you, then she starts to furiously fuck you as she tells her sub this is how she should take it.'
-					'After a long time she beings to pant and sweat from her efforts in fucking you. Finally rolling off you to take a break, she looks at you. "You may go." You get up and get dressed leaving them still in the room.'
+					'You undress and walk over to her while she unties her sub. As you get to the bed she grabs you and pushes you down face first on the bed. She crawls up on top of you and rubs the strap-on against your asshole.'
+					'With only the lube from her subs pussy juices she shoves it in your ass, sliding it balls deep in you. Then she starts to furiously fuck you as she tells her sub this is how she should take it.'
+					'After a long time she beings to pant and sweat from her efforts in fucking you. Finally rolling off you to take a break, she looks at you. "You may go." You get up and get dressed leaving them in the room.'
 					
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_pun2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women appears to have broken the dress code and is being punished.'
+		'A submissive woman appears to have broken the dress code and is being punished.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_b7.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women is having her face fucked by a dom in a suit.'
+		'A submissive woman is having her face fucked by a dom in a suit.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'