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Fixed a few 'dead ends' in the events.

Netuttki 3 years ago
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locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_events':
 		'While you kissed Katja, someone came nearby sighed loudly, probably, appreciating the view.'
 		'"How beautiful," again it was Ivan, he was waiting for you or something. Not being distracted, you continued to kiss Katja.'
 		'"Look, look, lesbians." one guy yelled and pointed at Katja and you.'
-		act 'Glare the moron':gt 'katjaEv', 'moron'
+		act 'Glare at the moron':gt 'katjaEv', 'moron'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'moron':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/frenchkiss.jpg"></center>'
-			'Looking at Ivan, then for this idiot, it seems that Ivan didn''t notice, you sighed and said to the idoit. "Is that really necessary? She is my best friend and we want kiss, you just seem jealous.'
+			'Looking at Ivan, then at this idiot, it seems that Ivan didn''t notice, you sighed and said to the idiot. "Is that really necessary? She is my best friend and we want kiss, you just seem jealous.'
 			'"Lesbians, lesbians." He continued to scream like a freak, so much that people began to gather around to find out, what''s happening. Ivan stepped over next to you and put his hand on your shoulder, giving the idiot a glare as well. Boosted by Ivan''s support you continued. "We like boys, just not assholes like you!" with those words, you stood on tiptoe, clasping and Ivan''s head in his hands and gave him a deep long passionate kiss, with lots of tongue.'
 
 			act 'Kiss again':
@@ -675,14 +675,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'moron':
 				cla
 				if flag_KissEV = 0: flag_KissEV = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/prohorov_3.jpg"></center>'
-				'"And I can kiss all the boys." you said, under the joyous hubbub of guys gathering near you. You began to kiss all the boys in succession, carefully avoiding the that called you a lesbian.'
+				'"And I can kiss all the boys." you said, under the joyous hubbub of guys gathering near you. You began to kiss all the boys in succession, carefully avoiding the one that called you a lesbian.'
 				'Seeing this he said offended. "The redhead doesn''t like guys, I bet." hoping Katja will kiss him to prove him wrong.'
 				'But Katja recovered and said. "Wrong again loser.", and began to repeat your route, of kissing the boys.'
 				if $loc = 'gdkin':
 					'After kissing the last boy, you turn back and make sure Katja kisses all of them too. You now realise the guys are hoping for more and quickly drag Katja away before you accidentally start an orgy.'
 					act 'Return to dance': gt 'gdkin'
 				else
-					'Just as you, kissed the last boy, you turned around to see how Katja was doing with her kissing, but then the bell rang, and you all rushed to class.'
+					'Just as you kissed the last boy, you turned around to see how Katja was doing with her kissing, but then the bell rang, and you all rushed to class.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end
@@ -1102,7 +1102,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan1':
 		gt 'katjaEv','kathan3'
 	elseif dummy >= 3 and konki = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/lake.winter.jpg"></center>'
-		'It''s winter, and most activities on the lake are limited, if you had skates, Katja and you, could use them on the ice covered waters, but at the moment, it''s seems that only can look at the frozen waters, is better to look for something else to do.'
+		'It''s winter, and most activities on the lake are limited, if you had skates, Katja and you, could use them on the ice covered waters, but at the moment, it''s seems that you can only look at the frozen waters, is better to look for something else to do.'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	else
@@ -1195,7 +1195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan1':
 				'Katja screams as she loses her balance and slips. It''s seems that you aren''t really good at skating, and your intended "synchronized ice dancing" with the redhead has ended, with a tackle and Katja falling to the ground.'
 				'"Oh shit! Sorry Katja!"'
 				'With a silent "thud" and a lot of blow ice, the redhead ends up sitting on the lake''s frozen surface. It looks painful, except for the giggling coming from the girl''s mouth.'
-				'Ouch! Jajaja, my ass! <<$pcs_nickname>>, who had the bright idea to give you skates?'
+				'Ouch! Hahaha, my ass! <<$pcs_nickname>>, who had the bright idea to give you skates?'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act '...?':
@@ -1300,7 +1300,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan2':
 		'That is the thing that passes by your head in the aftermath of laying in the frozen soil. The snow, trying to its heart content, to pass the flimsy protection that your winter clothes try to give but you remember one thing.'
 		'"I am a Russian bitch! You can''t stop me Winter!"'
 		'You scream at the heavens, and with an effort of will, your arms and legs begin to move against the snow''s cold resistance, shaping it on your heavenly form''s visage, but winter is not defeated, and a sudden icy wind blows against your face, trying to stop you.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Snort! You are crazy! Just...Jajaja!"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! Snort! You are crazy! Just...Hahaha!"'
 		'You look to the smiling redhead, who is trying to stand, but fails and sits on the ground, laughing at your antics until you get up and help her to her feet. There in the ground are your silhouettes. It has been fun, but now you are cold and it is probably best to look for something else to do.'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
@@ -2357,147 +2357,130 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan14':
 			'Neither Katja nor Natasha seems to be aware of your mutual presence, or neither care. After all, the two are in totally different social circles and a politically correct aptitude to ignore one another is perfectly understandable.'
 			'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Look at that rack!"'
 			'Katja grabs your arm and pulls you away from the nerd. Maybe you should go and talk with her?'
+		end
+		act 'Prank Natasha':
+			menu_off = 1
+			*clr & cla
+			random_event = rand (1,100)
+			minut += 5
+			npc_rel['A14'] += 1
+			npc_rel['A16'] -= 1
+			gs 'stat'
+
+			if random_event < pcs_agil:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS4.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Ok Katja, get ready for a pic!"'
+				'She raises an eyebrow, gives you a conspiratory smile and prepares her phone as you sneak up behind the unsuspecting nerd. Natasha lets out a surprised scream as her butt is exposed, along with her brightly colored thong.'
+				'"Look Katja! Pink!"'
+				'There is a sonorous "click" and Natasha''s buttocks are preserved for the posterity.'
+
+				if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
+					'"Hey! What are... <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"'
+					'Natasha''s angry retort is cut short of blowing out as she realizes who her assailant was. Standing silently while looking between a snickering Katja and you, she quickly covers her butt. It seems like you have her well trained. Smiling, you bend towards her and whisper into Natasha''s ear.'
+					'"What I am doing? Whatever... I... Want... Slut."'
+					'The nerdy girl just looks at you with big puppy eyes and then obediently looks down. Yes, a well-trained bitch.'
+				else
+					'"Hey! What are you doing <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"'
+					'You and Katja snicker at the nerdy girl as she angrily covers her ass. She doesn''t share in the happy moment, looking at you like she could induce spontaneous combustion only with her gaze.'
+					'"What I am doing? It was just a prank, Natasha! It would have been worse if your ass wasn''t that pretty!"'
+					'The nerdy girl doesn''t say anything. She just continues looking at you angrily. However, as a nerd, Natasha doesn''t have the presence to really seem threatening.'
+				end
+				if hour >= 20:
+					act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+				else
+					act 'Continue window shopping':npc_rel['A16'] -= 1 & grupvalue[1] += 5 & grupvalue[3] -= 5 & mood += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
+					act 'Look for something else to do':npc_rel['A16'] -= 1 & grupvalue[1] += 5 & grupvalue[3] -= 5 & mood += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+					act 'Invite Natasha to hang around with you':npc_rel['A16'] -= 1 & grupvalue[1] += 5 & grupvalue[3] -= 5 & mood += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan15'
+				end
+			else
+				'<center><table><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big16.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big14.jpg"></td></table></center>'
+				'You aren''t a ninja, and the most flagrant clue to that is the puzzled expression on Natasha''s face as she turns towards you and slaps your extended hands as you try to expose her butt.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>? Katja? What are you doing?"'
+				'Katja mouths an embarrassed "Oops!" and realization appears on Natasha''s eyes as she peeks into your dumbfounded face. Maybe she isn''t sure what were you planning, but her steps back show a weariness towards the two of you. Now what? You turn towards Katja as her phone goes "click", followed by Katja giggling.'
+				'"Te-he! Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you look like Wile E. Coyote!"'
+				'Behind you, Natasha quickly leaves the scene as Katja bursts into laughter.'
+				'"Hahaha! Beep Beep! Hehehe, this is priceless!"'
+				'Rolling your eyes, you grab the giggling redhead''s hand and leave. Time to look for something else to do.'
 
-			act 'Prank Natasha':
+				if hour >= 20:
+					act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':mood -= 10 & minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+				else
+					act 'Continue window shopping':mood -= 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
+					act 'Look for something else to do':mood -= 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+		gs 'willpower', 'humiliation', 'self', 'easy'
+		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+			act 'Tease Natasha':
 				menu_off = 1
 				*clr & cla
-				random_event = rand (1,100)
+				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				minut += 5
-				npc_rel['A14'] += 1
-				npc_rel['A16'] -= 1
+				KatjaHorny += 20
+				pav_slut += rand(0,5)
 				gs 'stat'
-
-				if random_event < pcs_agil:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS4.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Ok Katja, get ready for a pic!"'
-					'She raises an eyebrow, gives you a conspiratory smile and prepares her phone as you sneak up behind the unsuspecting nerd. Natasha lets out a surprised scream as her butt is exposed, along with her brightly colored thong.'
-					'"Look Katja! Pink!"'
-					'There is a sonorous "click" and Natasha''s buttocks are preserved for the posterity.'
-
-					if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
-						'"Hey! What are... <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"'
-						'Natasha''s angry retort is cut short of blowing out as she realizes who her assailant was. Standing silently while looking between a snickering Katja and you, she quickly covers her butt. It seems like you have her well trained. Smiling, you bend towards her and whisper into Natasha''s ear.'
-						'"What I am doing? Whatever... I... Want... Slut."'
-						'The nerdy girl just looks at you with big puppy eyes and then obediently looks down. Yes, a well-trained bitch.'
-					else
-						'"Hey! What are you doing <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"'
-						'You and Katja snicker at the nerdy girl as she angrily covers her ass. She doesn''t share in the happy moment, looking at you like she could induce spontaneous combustion only with her gaze.'
-						'"What I am doing? It was just a prank, Natasha! It would have been worse if your ass wasn''t that pretty!"'
-						'The nerdy girl doesn''t say anything. She just continues looking at you angrily. However, as a nerd, Natasha doesn''t have the presence to really seem threatening.'
-
-						if hour >= 20:
-							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-						else
-							act 'Continue window shopping':npc_rel['A16'] -= 1 & grupvalue[1] += 5 & grupvalue[3] -= 5 & mood += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-							act 'Look for something else to do':npc_rel['A16'] -= 1 & grupvalue[1] += 5 & grupvalue[3] -= 5 & mood += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-							act 'Invite Natasha to hang around with you':npc_rel['A16'] -= 1 & grupvalue[1] += 5 & grupvalue[3] -= 5 & mood += 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan15'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS5.jpg"></center>'
+
+				if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8 and NatbelQW['Debt'] >= 500 and Katjaslut >= 20 and Katjahorny >=20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
+					'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+					'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
+					'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
+					'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
+					'"I can''t hear you slut."'
+					'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+					'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and sweet, loving Katja blushes, licks her lips, and paces nervously. She is horny and you have your favorite slave here.'
+
+					gs 'willpower', 'group', 'force', 'hard'
+					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+						act 'Take Natasha to Katja''s room':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
+							gs 'stat'
+							gt 'katjaEv','katnatsex1'
 						end
-					end
-				else
-					'<center><table><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big16.jpg"></td><td><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big14.jpg"></td></table></center>'
-					'You aren''t a ninja, and the most flagrant clue to that is the puzzled expression on Natasha''s face as she turns towards you and slaps your extended hands as you try to expose her butt.'
-					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>? Katja? What are you doing?"'
-					'Katja mouths an embarrassed "Oops!" and realization appears on Natasha''s eyes as she peeks into your dumbfounded face. Maybe she isn''t sure what were you planning, but her steps back show a weariness towards the two of you. Now what? You turn towards Katja as her phone goes "click", followed by Katja giggling.'
-					'"Te-he! Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but you look like Wile E. Coyote!"'
-					'Behind you, Natasha quickly leaves the scene as Katja bursts into laughter.'
-					'"Jajaja! Beep Beep! Jejeje, this is priceless!"'
-					'Rolling your eyes, you grab the giggling redhead''s hand and leave. Time to look for something else to do.'
-
-					if hour >= 20:
-						act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':mood -= 10 & minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
 					else
-						act 'Continue window shopping':mood -= 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-						act 'Look for something else to do':mood -= 10 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
+						act 'Take Natasha to Katja''s room (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
+				elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
+					'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+					'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
+					'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
+					'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
+					'"I can''t hear you slut."'
+					'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+					'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
+				else
+					'Walking without care to the nerd, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the girl can react, you push Natasha against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+					'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
+					'"Fuck! Natasha! You are getting me hot!"'
+					'She blinks, not knowing how to react and looks around nervously, before lowering her face and whispering.'
+					'"Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I... don''t like this game..."'
+					'You bend so your mouth is at Natasha''s ear.'
+					'"That is sad... because I... REALLY... WANT... TO... PLAY"'
+					'You then take a step back and release the embarrassed girl. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
 				end
-			end
-			gs 'willpower', 'humiliation', 'self', 'easy'
-			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Tease Natasha':
-					menu_off = 1
-					*clr & cla
-					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
-					minut += 5
-					KatjaHorny += 20
-					pav_slut += rand(0,5)
-					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS5.jpg"></center>'
-
-					if NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8 and NatbelQW['Debt'] >= 500 and Katjaslut >= 20 and Katjahorny >=20 and katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN = 1:
-						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
-						'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
-						'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
-						'"I can''t hear you slut."'
-						'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and sweet, loving Katja blushes, licks her lips, and paces nervously. She is horny and you have your favorite slave here.'
-
-						gs 'willpower', 'group', 'force', 'hard'
-						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-							act 'Take Natasha to Katja''s room':
-								*clr & cla
-								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
-								gs 'stat'
-								gt 'katjaEv','katnatsex1'
-							end
-						else
-							act 'Take Natasha to Katja''s room (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-						end
-
-						if hour >= 20:
-							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':mood -= 10 & minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-						else
-							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-						end
-					elseif NatbelQW['QWstage'] >= 8:
-						'Walking without care to your submissive slut, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the nerd can react, you push her against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
-						'"Slut! I want to see something sexy the next time I see you. Got it bitch?!"'
-						'She doesn''t answer, and just bites her lips and looks around nervously before you bend, this time whispering huskily in her ear.'
-						'"I can''t hear you slut."'
-						'"I... Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						'She answers meekly, and at that moment, you let her go. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
-
-						if hour >= 20:
-							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-						else
-							act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-							act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-						end
-					else
-						'Walking without care to the nerd, Natasha becomes aware of your presence, but before the girl can react, you push Natasha against a stand, cornering the surprised girl.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-						'She looks at you nervously, your action calling the entire shop''s attention, especially when your hands first grab Natasha''s waist, and then slide to her ass, making the nerd jump, but she doesn''t try to push you away.'
-						'"Fuck! Natasha! You are getting me hot!"'
-						'She blinks, not knowing how to react and looks around nervously, before lowering her face and whispering.'
-						'"Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, I... don''t like this game..."'
-						'You bend so your mouth is at Natasha''s ear.'
-						'"That is sad... because I... REALLY... WANT... TO... PLAY"'
-						'You then take a step back and release the embarrassed girl. Around you, people are whispering. Some smile, most frown and after a silent moment, an embarrassed Natasha runs out of the shop. A blushing Katja seems to go to say something, but stops, grabs your hand and follows the nerd girl. OK, it seems that it is time to look for something else to do.'
-
-						if hour >= 20:
-							act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':npc_rel['A16'] -= 5 & minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-						else
-							act 'Continue window shopping':npc_rel['A16'] -= 5 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-							act 'Look for something else to do':npc_rel['A16'] -= 5 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-						end
-					end
+				if hour >= 20:
+					act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':npc_rel['A16'] -= 5 & minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+				else
+					act 'Continue window shopping':npc_rel['A16'] -= 5 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
+					act 'Look for something else to do':npc_rel['A16'] -= 5 & gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 				end
-			else
-				act 'Tease Natasha (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
+		else
+			act 'Tease Natasha (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': Msg '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+		end
 
-			act 'Invite Natasha to hang around with you':gt 'katjaEv','kathan15'
+		act 'Invite Natasha to hang around with you':gt 'katjaEv','kathan15'
 
-			if hour >= 20:
-				act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-			else
-				act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-				act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-			end
+		if hour >= 20:
+			act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+		else
+			act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
+			act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -2532,13 +2515,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan15':
 		'"Hey! What the...?! Katja wait for me! I also want to play with Natasha!"'
 		 'You don''t know who is happier. Katja for having a life-size doll to play dress up with, or Natasha for being a life-size doll to play dress up. The spectacle takes the shop like a hurricane as you model all that is in stock.'
 		'Your group even poses for some photos, but in the end and after a great time together, it is time to look for something else to do.'
-
-		if hour >= 20:
-			act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
-		else
-			act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
-			act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
-		end
+	end
+	if hour >= 20:
+		act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+	else
+		act 'Continue window shopping':gt 'katjaEv','kathan14'
+		act 'Look for something else to do':gt 'katjaEv','kathan'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -2712,7 +2694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan18':
 			'...'
 			wait 1000
 			'...'
-			'Slurp...Life is good! With your hard-won slushie, you and Katja stroll pavlovsk''s streets...Slurp...High on sugar, you two realize how wonderful it is to be so fabulous...Slurp...And show the world all your sugary magnificence with a selfie...Slurp...Time to look for something else to do.'
+			'Slurp...Life is good! With your hard-won slushie, you and Katja stroll Pavlovsk''s streets...Slurp...High on sugar, you two realize how wonderful it is to be so fabulous...Slurp...And show the world all your sugary magnificence with a selfie...Slurp...Time to look for something else to do.'
 
 			if hour >= 20:
 				act 'It''s too late, acompany Katja to her home':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'