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[text edits] Changed text in Albina's quest line that was out of place

Vengeance11 4 years ago
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      locations/albinahome.qsrc
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      locations/journal.qsrc

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locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -13,18 +13,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	''
 	''
 	if AlbinaQW['albride'] = 1:
 	if AlbinaQW['albride'] = 1:
 		AlbinaQW['albride'] = 2
 		AlbinaQW['albride'] = 2
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-		''
-		'Albina takes you to her room and you sit down together.'
-		'Albina''s mother pops her head in, telling you that she heading out to do some errands and voicing her worry. Albina reassures her, saying that she has you for company as she walks her mother to the door.'
-		'Albina turns back to you and smiles affably. "<<$pcs_firstname>>! I have a bottle of fine wine for us to drink!"'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome1.jpg"></center>'
+		'Albina leads you to the sitting room and disappears into the kitchen. While she is gone, her phone vibrates on the table. You look and see that "Mother" is trying to call her. "Strange. She''s never mentioned her mother." you think to yourself.'
+		'The phone rings out as Albina returns with a bottle of wine and two glasses. She places them on the table and notices her missed call. She frantically picks her phone up and types a message before stuffing it in her pocket, giving you a weak smile. "Don''t worry about who that was <<$pcs_firstname>>. I have a bottle of fine wine for us to drink!"'
 		act 'Drink':
 		act 'Drink':
 			*clr & cla
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'wine'
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'wine'
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome1.jpg"></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinahome1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Albina directs you to take a seat in the sitting room. She returns with a bottle of wine and two glasses. She pours wine into the glasses and hands you one, sitting down next to you.'
+			'She pours wine into the glasses and hands you one, sitting down next to you.'
 			'You drink together with Albina. A smile beams across her face. "He''s gone! He''s finally gone!"'
 			'You drink together with Albina. A smile beams across her face. "He''s gone! He''s finally gone!"'
 			'She swiftly drinks all of her wine. "He was going down hard. I''ve been gathering evidence for years. All his emails, text messages, phone calls and witnesses all proving what a scumbag he is. I finally gathered enough to take him down!"'
 			'She swiftly drinks all of her wine. "He was going down hard. I''ve been gathering evidence for years. All his emails, text messages, phone calls and witnesses all proving what a scumbag he is. I finally gathered enough to take him down!"'
 			act 'Ask how her father reacted':
 			act 'Ask how her father reacted':
@@ -37,8 +35,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'Albina scoffs and tops up her glass with more wine. "Why does it matter? He''s gone and will be gone for a long time."'
 				'Albina scoffs and tops up her glass with more wine. "Why does it matter? He''s gone and will be gone for a long time."'
 				'"Hate him that much?" you ask as you take a sip from your glass.'
 				'"Hate him that much?" you ask as you take a sip from your glass.'
 				'Albina just glares at you. "Let''s just drink." she scorns.'
 				'Albina just glares at you. "Let''s just drink." she scorns.'
-				'You sit quietly for a while, sipping your wine while Albina again gulps down the contents of her glass. She sits in silence before suddenly throwing the glass in frustration, shattering it as it hits the wall.'
-				'"My father is a fucking bastard. If there is a hell, there is a special place reserved for him to suffer for what he''s done."'
+				'You sit quietly for a while, sipping your wine while Albina again gulps down the contents of her glass. She sits in silence before suddenly screaming and throwing the glass in frustration, shattering it as it hits the wall.'
+				'"Fucking bastard!! If there is a hell, there is a special place reserved just for you to suffer for what you done you fucking creep!!"'
 				act 'Ask what she''s talking about':
 				act 'Ask what she''s talking about':
 					*clr & cla
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 15
 					minut += 15
@@ -47,7 +45,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'"What are you talking about?" you ask, startled by her outburst. Albina looks at you meekly as tears well up in her eyes.'
 					'"What are you talking about?" you ask, startled by her outburst. Albina looks at you meekly as tears well up in her eyes.'
 					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, my father has raped and abused me from such an early age, I don''t even remember when it all began. I''ve spent my entire life being his plaything." she tearfully admits.'
 					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, my father has raped and abused me from such an early age, I don''t even remember when it all began. I''ve spent my entire life being his plaything." she tearfully admits.'
 					'"When my mother found out, he used his connections to stop her taking me with her when she left him."'
 					'"When my mother found out, he used his connections to stop her taking me with her when she left him."'
-					'But now that he''s going down, my mother came back here to live with and look after me. Get me counselling if I need it, you know? You have to excuse her caution earlier. She''s on edge about what my father can do, even in prison."'
+					'But now that he''s going down, she came back here to live with and look after me. Get me counselling if I need it, you know? That''s why she''s always checking up on me. She''s on edge about what my father can do, even in prison."'
 					*nl
 					*nl
 					'She continues. "The truth is his political campaign never took off. He loved abusing his position as a cop to bully others, including me, but when he retired, he didn''t have that power anymore. A political career was his chance to get that back."'
 					'She continues. "The truth is his political campaign never took off. He loved abusing his position as a cop to bully others, including me, but when he retired, he didn''t have that power anymore. A political career was his chance to get that back."'
 					'"Nobody was willing to back him however." She stops talking for a few seconds and you can clearly see her hands shaking. "That''s when...that''s when he decided to...whore me out to his friends. For ''a bit of fun'' with me, they would ''donate'' to his campaign fund.". She is on the verge of bursting into tears in front of you.'
 					'"Nobody was willing to back him however." She stops talking for a few seconds and you can clearly see her hands shaking. "That''s when...that''s when he decided to...whore me out to his friends. For ''a bit of fun'' with me, they would ''donate'' to his campaign fund.". She is on the verge of bursting into tears in front of you.'
@@ -552,7 +550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal1.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You slap her on the ass. "Get up, I''m not finished with you yet." She arches a brow, but does as you command and gets on all fours. You grab the bottle of lube and squirt some onto the dildo, rubbing it up and down the shaft until it is very slick and rub the excess onto her asshole.'
 	'You slap her on the ass. "Get up, I''m not finished with you yet." She arches a brow, but does as you command and gets on all fours. You grab the bottle of lube and squirt some onto the dildo, rubbing it up and down the shaft until it is very slick and rub the excess onto her asshole.'
-	'You kneel down behind her and line the head of the dildo up with her asshole and slowly push forward. There is a bit of resistance, but with a little more pressure the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo pops into her ass. She moans in a mixture of pain and pleasure as you start off with slow shallow strokes, but as her groans of pain turn into moans of pleasure, you take deeper and faster strokes. After a few minutes, you pull out of her ass and she looks back over her shoulder, obviously wondering why you stopped.'
+	'You kneel down behind her, line the head of the dildo up with her asshole and slowly push forward. There is a bit of resistance, but with a little more pressure the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo pops into her ass. She moans in a mixture of pain and pleasure as you start off with slow shallow strokes, but as her groans of pain turn into moans of pleasure, you take deeper and faster strokes. After a few minutes, you pull out of her ass and she looks back over her shoulder, obviously wondering why you stopped.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
 	act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
@@ -560,7 +558,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuck_albina_ass':
 		*clr & cla
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal2.jpg"></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/giveanal2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You can tell that she wants you to keep fucking her ass. You slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she crys out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm, her pussy spraying liquid onto the bed. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
+		'You can tell that she wants you to keep fucking her ass. You slide the dildo back into her hole with ease, making her moan in pleasure. You grab onto her hips and start fucking her balls deep, filling her ass with the entire dildo. After several minutes, you feel her ass tighten around your fake cock and she cries out as her body is rocked by an intense orgasm, her pussy spraying liquid onto the bed. You keep fucking her throughout her orgasm, only pulling out once her shudders have passed.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'albinahome', 'strapon_finish'

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locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends_family':
 	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man, which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about that, and if anything, seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
 	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man, which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about that, and if anything, seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
 	*nl
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/55.png"></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/55.png"></center>'
-	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunts live-in boyfriend, only that he doesn''t speak Russian very well and he is from Africa. He''s a very large and muscular man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
+	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunt''s live-in boyfriend, only that he is from Africa and doesn''t speak Russian very well. He''s a very large and muscular man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
 	*nl
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/31.png"></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/31.png"></center>'
 	'Great Grandpa Zlatek Knavs - Your great grandfather is a grumpy old man. He is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to the point where it is now barely fit to live in. He can walk, but requires a cane. He doesn''t really leave the house anymore, unless he really has to. Your mother and aunt were raised by your great grandparents.'
 	'Great Grandpa Zlatek Knavs - Your great grandfather is a grumpy old man. He is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to the point where it is now barely fit to live in. He can walk, but requires a cane. He doesn''t really leave the house anymore, unless he really has to. Your mother and aunt were raised by your great grandparents.'