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Spelling/grammar corrections to Kolka shower scenes.

Marou 7 роки тому
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locations/brother

@@ -1044,11 +1044,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_sex_end':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/shower.gif"></center>'
 	'You stay under the shower for a while, touching yourself, remembering Kolka inside of you.'
 	if brothersex > 10:
-		'You really enjoyed this little thirst, and in secret you are hoping in a repeat.'
+		'You really enjoyed this little tryst, and in secret you are hoping in a repeat.'
 	elseif brothersex > 0:
-		'You are a little bevilded that you just had sex with your own brother, in the shower, not the least, but you can''t deny that you enjoyed it, maybe more so because it is taboo.'
+		'You are a little bedevilled that you just had sex with your own brother, in the shower, not the least, but you can''t deny that you enjoyed it, maybe more so because it is taboo.'
  	else
-		'You can''t believe that you just had sex with your little brother. You are in a small shock, but also feel a strange glow too, even knowing that this is fundamentally wrong.'
+		'You can''t believe that you just had sex with your little brother. You are in a small shock, but also feel a strange glow, even knowing that this is fundamentally wrong.'
 	end
 	act 'Exit the bathroom':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc, $metka
 end