Merge remote-tracking branch 'Vengence_11/master'

locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 	dynamic $showerdin
 	if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & 'Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 	
-	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush<<rand(1,6)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 	
 	'You head back to the locker room, where you strip from your uniform and head into the showers. You find an empty stall and step inside. You turn the water on and enjoy the sensation of it on your skin.'
 	'You turn the water off, grab your towel and head back to the lockers. You get dressed, place your uniform back in your locker and get ready to leave.'

locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			if hotcat < 5:
 				if rand(0,1) = 0:
 					'"Hello Mr Tsarev. You are so handsome." you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
-					'"<<$pcs_lastname>>, you shouldn''t be saying things like that." but still smiles back at you in response.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you shouldn''t be saying things like that." but still smiles back at you in response.'
 				else
 					'You go to greet him, but notice he is quite sour. You decide to cheer him up with a smile and wave to him.'
 					'In response, the teacher smiles back at you and goes on about his business.'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			else
 				if rand(0,1) = 0:
 					'"Hello Mr Tsarev. You are so handsome." you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
-					'"Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''d pay you a compliment, but we are not supposed to have such informal relationships with students." he replies, but still smiles back.'
+					'"Thank you Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I''d pay you a compliment, but we are not supposed to have such informal relationships with students." he replies, but still smiles back.'
 					npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 				else
 					'"Good morning Mr Tsarev. I see you have a new suit, so chic." you say in a very erotic voice.'
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			if hotcat < 5:
 				'You hurry down the hallway. You are already late, so decide to just pass by. He wasn''t even looking in your direction.'
 			else
-				'"Good morning <<$pcs_lastname>>. No time to say hello to your teacher?" he asks.'
+				'"Good morning Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. No time to say hello to your teacher?" he asks.'
 				'"Oh Mr Tsarev! Good morning. Sorry I didn''t notice you. I was busy day dreaming." you reply and run away.'
 			end
 
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 		else
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big26.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Good morning <<$pcs_lastname>>. Why don''t you say hello? A teacher can''t punish or reward such actions. You''ve still got this year''s exam and should behave more kindly." he jokes.'
+			'"Good morning Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Why don''t you say hello? A teacher can''t punish or reward such actions. You''ve still got this year''s exam and should behave more kindly." he jokes.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big26.jpg"></center>'
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big26.jpg"></center>'
 				if rand(0,4) > 0:
 					'You stumble and fall into your teacher''s arms as he deftly catches you.'
-					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Are you ok, did you hurt yourself?" Once he makes sure you are fine, he goes on about his business.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Are you OK, did you hurt yourself?" Once he makes sure you are fine, he goes on about his business.'
 				else
 					'You stumble and fall in front of him. However, he lacks the agility to catch you. You bruise your knees form falling as he bends over to help you up.'
 					'"Oh-Oh-Oh, my leg hurts. Oh please look, is it alright?" you say and stretch out your leg in front of his face. He begins to inspect your leg, one hand at the ankle, the other stroking your thigh, just above the bruise.'
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 	if break_rand = 1 and hotcat > 5:
 		cla
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none' and pcs_inhib < 60: inhib_exp += 2
-		'As you walk through the hallways, a hand suddenly swoops in, giving you a hard swat on the ass!'+iif($pantyworntype ! 'none', '', 'The palm of his hand coming into contact with your panty-less butt cheeks creates an audible clap that sounds through the entire hallway.')
+		'As you walk through the hallways, a hand suddenly swoops in, giving you a hard swat on the ass.'+iif($pantyworntype ! 'none', '', 'The palm of his hand coming into contact with your panty-less ass cheeks creates an audible clap that sounds through the entire hallway.')
 		gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1060,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif break_rand = 24:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/legsup.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you stop at your locker, a girl starts to taking pictures of her two friends, who start posing at once in funny, seductive or teasing stances. They seem to be really enjoying playing around.'
+		'As you stop at your locker, a girl starts taking pictures of her two friends, who start posing at once in funny, seductive or teasing stances. They seem to be really enjoying playing around.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # gschool_lessonsev1
+! This file contains the class events for PE, biology, science, computer and Russian.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 	fizperand = rand(1,32)
@@ -13,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		pcs_mood += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and some of the other girls get down on your knees together, enjoying the attention of the watching boys while you all show off your asses to them. Deciding to tease them even more, the girls all pull their pants down at the same time. Of course you join in, and enjoy the small boost of confidence as the boys drool over the panty-clad bottoms swaying in front of them. Mr. Pavlovich is keeping his distance, he''s obviously unsure what to think of all this.'
+		'You and some of the other girls get down on your knees together, enjoying the attention of the watching boys while you all show off your asses to them. Deciding to tease them even more, the girls all pull their pants down at the same time. Of course you join in, and enjoy the small boost of confidence as the boys drool over the panty-clad asses swaying in front of them. Mr. Pavlovich is keeping his distance, obviously unsure what to think of this.'
 	elseif fizperand = 3:
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_mood += 20
@@ -27,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		pcs_mood += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand5.jpg"></center>'
-		'Ivan offers to help you with a workout on the exercise balls. Lariska is enthusiastic about the idea and asks if she can join in too; of course you agree. After you and Lariska each fetch a ball and get ready, Ivan has you do all sorts of stretches and exercises. After a while, you realize that in every pose Ivan suggests, you are showing off either your breasts or your ass. One look at his face confirms that this was the exact purpose of suggesting them. Ivan is having the time of his life ''coaching'' the two of you. With a lewd smile, you redouble your efforts and show off your ass as much as you can.'
+		'Ivan offers to help you with a workout on the exercise balls. Lariska is enthusiastic about the idea and asks if she can join in too; of course you agree. After you and Lariska each fetch a ball and get ready, Ivan has you do all sorts of stretches and exercises. After a while, you realize that in every pose Ivan suggests, you are showing off either your breasts or your ass. One look at his face confirms that this was his intention all along. Ivan is having the time of his life ''coaching'' the two of you. With a lewd smile, you redouble your efforts and show off your ass as much as you can.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	elseif fizperand = 5 and temper >= 20 and sunWeather = 1 and hotcat >= 6:
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		pcs_mood += 20
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand6.jpg"></center>'
-		'Today you''re training with some free weights. In the current exercise, you''re supposed to keep your legs straight while the dumbbells are on the ground. Noting the class got awfully quiet, you look between your legs and notice the majority of the class and several more bystanders gawking at your ass. You hold the position for a few seconds longer than you need to, reveling in their praises while they compliment your figure.'
+		'Today, you''re training with some free weights. In the current exercise, you''re supposed to keep your legs straight while the dumbbells are on the ground. Noting the class got awfully quiet, you look between your legs and notice the majority of the class and several more bystanders gawking at your ass. You hold the position for a few seconds longer than you need to, reveling in their praises as they compliment your figure.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	elseif fizperand = 6:
@@ -43,13 +44,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		'During gym class, you hear a commotion from one side and you look over to see two boys shoving each other. They are from your brother''s grade and the first one shoves the second one again and it quickly starts escalating. A few punches are thrown and soon the two of them are down on the ground fighting. The coach rushes over and quickly pulls them apart, before sending them straight to the principal.'
 	elseif fizperand = 7:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/tinydick.jpg"></center>'
-		'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell his efforts are not working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and he keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes over behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
+		'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell they aren''t working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes over behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
 		*nl
-		'Unfortunately for Igor, his underwear went with the shorts and now he''s standing half naked in front of a bunch of girls. What''s worse is that now everyone can see how very small his penis is, making you and the others gasp and giggle, several girls even pointing and laughing loudly. Soon the whole class is in stitches, Igor desperately trying to pull up his shorts and failing, while cursing at Vitek and calling him all kinds of names. You almost feel sorry for him; not only is he a terrible flirt, but the whole class has seen his very tiny penis.'
+		'Unfortunately for Igor, his underwear went with the shorts and now he''s standing half naked in front of a bunch of girls. What''s worse is that now everyone can see how tiny his dick is, making you and the others gasp and giggle, several girls even pointing and laughing loudly. Soon the whole class is in stitches, Igor desperately trying to pull up his shorts and failing, all while cursing at Vitek and calling him all kinds of names. You almost feel sorry for him; not only is he a terrible flirt, but the whole class has seen his tiny dick.'
 	elseif fizperand = 8 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/wedgie.jpg"></center>'
-		'During a break in gym class, you are chatting with several other girls when you feel someone''s hands reach down the back of your shorts, grabbing hold of your panties and sharply yanking them up. Dan yanks your panties up so hard that your feet actually lift off the ground for a moment. You cry out in pain, quickly turn around and see Dan laughing while several others are watching and laughing as well.'
+		'During a break in gym class, you are chatting with several other girls when you feel someone''s hands reach down the back of your shorts, grab hold of your panties and sharply yank them up so hard that your feet actually lift off the ground for a moment. You cry out in pain, quickly turn around and see Dan laughing while several others are watching and laughing as well.'
 		act 'Don''t retaliate': grupvalue[4] -= 2 & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -60,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
 				grupvalue[2] +=1
-				'He starts to back up but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which just got the others laughing harder. A couple of the other girls move over to give you moral support and give the guys dirty looks. Plus they use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass, putting everything back in it''s proper place.'
+				'He starts to back up but you manage to kick him hard in the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg while holding his shin in pain, which just got the others laughing harder. A couple of the other girls give the guys dirty looks and walk over to give you moral support and use their bodies to shield you from the rest of the class so you can peel your panties out of your ass, putting everything back in it''s proper place.'
 				act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys'
 			end
 		else
@@ -76,17 +77,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				grupvalue[4] +=1
 				demerit += 20
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/beathisass.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your first kick catches him on the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg. Not expecting any more, his attention wanders and he doesn''t see you charging him. You run into him and knock him to the floor, where you''re quickly on top of him, sitting on his chest and starting to punch him straight in the face.'
+				'Your first kick catches him on the shin, causing him to hop around on one leg. Not expecting any more, his attention wanders and he doesn''t see you charging him. You bash into him, knocking him to the floor, and quickly climb on top of him. You start furiously punching him in the face, beating him senseless in front of everyone.'
 				*nl
-				'He is a bit stunned by this sudden attack and at first he just covers up to try and block some of your punches, before he finally starts to fight back. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and with one powerful yank, pulls you off Dan and nearly tosses you on your back. He steps between the two of you, stopping Dan and you from going at it again. He turns to you and says, "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest but he doesn''t want to hear it and points at the door.'
-				act 'Go to the principals offices': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+				'He is stunned by this sudden and vicious attack and tries to block your incoming blows to no avail. Luckily for him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and with one powerful yank, pulls you off a bloody and beaten Dan, nearly throwing you on your back. He then steps between the two of you, stopping you from going at it again. He turns to you and says "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest, but he doesn''t want to hear it and points sternly at the door.'
+				act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			end
 		else
 			act 'Beat his ass (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 	elseif fizperand = 9:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/hanging.jpg"></center>'
-		'During class, Albina gives you a tap on the shoulder, giggling and pointing at Vitek. You look over and see the tip of his dick hanging out the one leg of his shorts. You giggle as well, but you are also quite impressed and maybe just a little turned on at the sight... he is certainly very well endowed. It takes him a bit to notice the girls giggling at him and even longer to figure out why. Once he does, he makes a big show of tucking his dick back away by adjusting and pulling down on his shorts a bit, all the while standing there with a huge smile on his face.'
+		'During class, Albina gives you a tap on the shoulder, giggling and pointing at Vitek. You look over and see the tip of his dick hanging out the leg of his shorts. You giggle as well, but you are also quite impressed and maybe just a little turned on at the sight... he is certainly very well endowed. It takes him a while to notice the girls giggling at him and even longer to figure out why. Once he does, he makes a big show of tucking his dick away by adjusting his shorts, all the while standing there with a huge smile on his face.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	elseif fizperand = 10:
@@ -107,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something, while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. Then you pick up the item and quickly stand up, before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of a extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
+				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. You pick up the dropped item and quickly stand up before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of a extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -118,16 +119,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		end
 	elseif fizperand = 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/bendoverff.jpg"></center>'
-		'While Ivan is watching Lina moves up behind Lariska and pushes her forward at the shoulders making her bend over. She proceeds to pretend to hump Lariska, obviously trying to mimic Ivan''s voice and speech. "Oh Lariska I want to fuck your ass!" which gets several of the other students to laugh, even Ivan. It is quickly broken up by Mr Nikolaevich.'
+		'During class, Lina notices Ivan watching Lariska and so moves up behind her and pushes her forward at the shoulders, making her bend over. She proceeds to pretend to hump Lariska, obviously trying to mimic Ivan''s voice and speech. "Oh Lariska, I want to fuck your ass!" which gets several of the other students to laugh, even Ivan. It is quickly broken up by Mr Nikolaevich.'
 	elseif fizperand = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/doublebutt.jpg"></center>'
-		'During class Lina and Lariska are whispering and giggling about something. After some time, they pull down their back of their shorts to flash ther panty clad asses at several of the more popular jock boys.'
+		'During class, Lina and Lariska are whispering and giggling about something. After some time, they pull down the back of their shorts to flash their panty clad asses at several of the more popular jock boys.'
 	elseif fizperand = 13:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/dry3some.jpg"></center>'
-		'Near the end of class, three of the underclass girls are talking and giggling. When they notice some of the more popular boys looking their way, they start horsing around. One bries her face in her friend''s breasts and the third one behind her pretends to hump her. After a few moments, once several guys are watching, they stop, laughing as they move away.'
+		'Near the end of class, three of the underclass girls are talking and giggling. When they notice some of the more popular boys looking their way, they start horsing around. One buries her face in her friend''s breasts and the third one behind her pretends to hump her. After a few moments, once several guys are watching, they stop, laughing as they move away.'
 	elseif fizperand = 14:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/hardon.jpg"></center>'
-		'At the end of class when, everyone is allowed to do their own thing, as long as they are doing something physical. You notice one of the boys using the bench press and see that there seems to be a tentpost in his pants. He is sporting one hell of a hardon, with several of the other girls having noticed as well and giggling about it.'
+		'At the end of class, everyone is allowed to do their own thing so long as long as they are doing something physical. You notice one of the boys using the bench press and see that there seems to be a tentpost in his pants. He is sporting one hell of a hardon, with several of the other girls having noticed as well and giggling about it.'
 	elseif fizperand = 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/stretchhump.jpg"></center>'
 		'Lina is on the floor doing the splits leaning all the way forward, stretching. Lariska comes up behind her and lays on top of her, pretending to hump her. Lina laughs about it and ignores her at first. After a couple of minutes, they break it up.'
@@ -151,12 +152,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		if scooltiperand = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s currently sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			gs'stat'
@@ -164,12 +165,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she says softly. "This is why you should wear panties to school, I won''t report you over it, but I suggest you wear them in the future."'
+				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she softly says "This is why you should wear panties to school. I won''t report you, but I suggest you wear some in the future."'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard. While solving it, you accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties and your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Miss Orlov sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'	
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard. While solving it, you accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean, and totally forget that not only are you are not wearing any panties, but also have a butt plug stuffed in your ass. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your classmates. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Miss Orlov sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'	
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -179,9 +180,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan is snickering behind you. Miss Orlov looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan snickers behind you. Miss Orlov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -195,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A10'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say. "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Miss Orlov gives Dan a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Miss Orlov gives Dan a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Dan denies it, but Miss Orlov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -222,7 +223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Miss Orlov and turn around, slapping Dan with all the force you can muster. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
 					'Miss Orlov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -230,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan is snickering behind you.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan snickers behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -245,7 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					act 'Come get some more':
 						cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Dan, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards the teacher, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Dan, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards the teacher, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -253,9 +254,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 							'You spend the rest of class with Dan''s hand coming and going to squeeze your breast and tweak your nipple, still careful to make sure the teacher doesn''t catch on.'
 							if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand, slipping your two middle fingers up your dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand and slip two fingers into your dripping wet pussy. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear your teacher say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Miss Orlov ask "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -263,9 +264,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 							else
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it up under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them up your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them inside yourself. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Miss Orlov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Miss Orlov ask "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Miss Orlov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -279,8 +280,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan is snickering behind you. Miss Orlov is looking at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Miss Orlov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Dan snickers behind you. Miss Orlov is looking at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -294,8 +295,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A10'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is snapping my bra stap." Miss Orlov gives Dan a look. "Is this true?"'
-					'Dan denies it, but Miss Orlov doesn''t believe him and sends him  to the principal''s office.'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Miss Orlov, Dan is snapping my bra stap." Miss Orlov gives Dan a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
+					'Dan denies it, but Miss Orlov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -321,14 +322,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Miss Orlov and turn around, slapping Dan with all the force you can muster. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
 					'Miss Orlov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/juliabra.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment. Most of your fellow students don''t study but do a variety of things. Julia catches your eye and as you look over, she opens her shirt to show off her bra, then blushes bright red, closes her shirt and pretends to be busy for the rest of the class.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment. Most of your fellow students don''t study, but do a variety of other things instead. Julia catches your eye and as you look over, she opens her shirt to show off her bra, then blushes bright red, closes her shirt and pretends to be busy for the rest of the class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -338,7 +339,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'Lavrenti quickly wiggles himself out, gets the desk upright again and hurriedly sits down again, blushing furiously all the while. After making sure he is OK, Miss Orlov gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing around the class, you notice Lavrenti reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after the teacher shoots her a few dirty looks at the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing around the class, you notice Lavrenti reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after the teacher shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
 			'You get an alert on your phone. After quickly checking that Miss Orlov is busy, you sneakily pull it out of your purse and rest it in your lap. You lean back a bit, glancing down to see that someone has sent you an image. You open it up, expecting something innocent - only to be confronted by a photo of someone''s dick. You hear snickering from one side and look up to investigate, but you can''t tell who it was or exactly where it came from. Unsure what to do about it, you decide that you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
@@ -348,10 +349,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'You notice Dan keeps flicking Artem''s ear whenever Miss Orlov looks away. Poor Artem''s ear is already bright red from all the flicking and he looks like he is on the verge of tears.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He has pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He has pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/danshowdick.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last bit of class to work on your homework. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you hear someone giggle. You think it was Irina but you''re not sure. As you glance up and look around, you quickly spy what was the cause of it. Dan has he pants unzipped, with his dick out. He is saying something to Irina who is now mostly ignoring him, though does take a peek now and again as does Natasha. Apparently what ever Dan wanted isn''t going to happen and he finally puts his dick away at the end of class bell.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last few minutes of time to work on it. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you hear someone giggle. You think it was Irina but you''re not sure. As you glance up and look around, you quickly spy what was the cause of it. Dan has he pants unzipped, with his dick out. He is saying something to Irina, who is mostly ignoring him, although she does take a peek now and again, as does Natasha. Apparently what ever Dan wanted isn''t going to happen and he finally puts his dick away at the end of class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -360,17 +361,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she gets up and leaves the class. Of course, once she is gone everyone starts talking and only a few of the nerds actually study. Irina gets up and sits on the edge of Miss Orlov''s desk and starts taking selfies. She ignores the boys hoots and cat calls until the end of class when the bell rings.'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/natpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last bit of class to work on your homework. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you glance around and notice Natasha is sitting with her legs slightly apart, showing off her panties to anyone that looks. You doubt she is aware of it, as she seems completely engrossed in working on her homework.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov assigns your homework and then gives you the last bit of time to work on it. She starts grading papers from yesterday''s assignment, and most of the class turns their attention to working on their homework assignment while they can. After a few moments, you glance around and notice Natasha is sitting with her legs slightly apart, showing off her panties to anyone that looks. You doubt she is aware of it, as she seems completely engrossed in working on her homework.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/natsit.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she gets up and leaves the class. Of course, once she is gone everyone starts talking and only a few of the nerds actually study. Most of the students get up and walk around, even Natasha puts her books away and gets up and sits on the back of her chair, giving you a smile when you look her way.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov tells the class to study quietly as she gets up and leaves the class. Of course, once she is gone everyone starts talking and only a few of the nerds actually study. Most of the students get up and walk around. Even Natasha puts her books away, gets up and sits on the back of her chair, giving you a smile when you look her way.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/biology/natskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov calls Natasha up to the blackboard to write out the assignment. Once done Natasha returns to her seat and sits down, unaware that the back of her skirt has caught on the seat, which shows off her panty clad ass as she sits through the last of class. Several other students notice as well.'
+			'Near the end of class, Miss Orlov calls Natasha up to the blackboard to write out the assignment. Once done Natasha returns to her seat and sits down, unaware that the back of her skirt has caught on the seat, which shows off her panty clad ass as she sits through the rest of the class. Several other students notice as well.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -380,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			'The lesson pauses briefly when one of the other students asks Miss Orlov a question about her assignment. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Lazar turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your general direction? Even the teacher walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Lazar again, and find him staring at you. It looks like he''s trying not to make eye contact, however, otherwise he would have noticed you looking back at him. You wonder what his deal is.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -405,7 +406,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 19:
 			cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decide to sit next to...'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decide to sit next to...'
 			act 'Irina':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -496,13 +497,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		scooltiperand = rand(1,18)
 		if scooltiperand = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -511,15 +512,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she says softly. "This is why you should wear panties to school, I won''t report you, but I suggest in the future you wear them."'
+				'Before you can answer the question Miss Orlov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass, and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Miss Orlov comes over to help you back up and block the view of your ass as best she can. Once you are back on your feet she softly says "This is why you should wear panties to school. I won''t report you, but I suggest you wear some in the future."'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. On accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is also stuffed with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Your teacher prods impatiently. You''re teacher is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where your teacher sits, they can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so they start to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your classmates. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Miss Orlov sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt and, with a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -529,7 +530,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself a pair and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_10.jpg"></center>'
@@ -549,7 +550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Andrey grins when he realizes he''s been caught, and he winks at you before turning back to face the blackboard. While Stasya, having finally noticed what her boyfriend is doing, gives you a dirty look.'
+				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Andrey grins when he realizes he''s been caught, and he winks at you before turning back to face the blackboard. Stasya, having finally noticed what her boyfriend was doing, gives you a dirty look.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			
@@ -572,7 +573,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decide to sit next to...'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decide to sit next to...'
 			act 'Irina':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -611,7 +612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A141'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Veronika. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Miss Orlov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. She clears her throat a few times and even hushes you once, before she finally tells you to be quiet or she''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Veronika. She is her usual cold and distant self and doesn''t say much, but doesn''t seem to mind you talking to her. You often get dirty looks from Miss Orlov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. She clears her throat a few times and even hushes you once, before she finally tells you to be quiet or she''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Vanya':
@@ -633,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/science/andstaskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Stasya saying. "Stop it Andrey." When you glance over you see Andrey is trying to pull her skirt up and she is trying to hold it down. She is talking softly and trying not to draw attention while trying to make him stop. After a few more hissed whispers, he lets go and says something along the lines of. "You don''t have to be such a prude all the time." Stasya glares at him and class goes back to normal.'
+			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Stasya saying "Stop it Andrey." When you glance over you see Andrey is trying to pull her skirt up and she is trying to hold it down. She is talking softly and trying not to draw attention while trying to make him stop. After a few more hissed whispers, he lets go and says something along the lines of "You don''t have to be such a prude all the time." Stasya glares at him and class goes back to normal.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12:
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -643,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/science/iristagossip.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Irina and Stasya sitting next to each other gossiping and overhear a bit of it as Stasya says. "Oh my god Igor got pantsed at the dance last Friday and he had the tiniest dick." She holds up her hands with her fingers less than 10cm apart. Irina giggles at that as does Stasya. Once they get a few looks, they talk even quieter and you can''t make out what else they are gossiping about.'
+			'As you sit in class listening to the lesson, you hear Irina and Stasya sitting next to each other gossiping and overhear a bit of it as Stasya says "Oh my god Igor got pantsed at the dance last Friday and he had the tiniest dick!" She holds up her hands with her fingers less than 6cm apart. Irina giggles, as does Stasya. Once they get a few looks, they talk even quieter and you can''t make out what else they are gossiping about.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -656,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/science/staoverdesk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends, Stasya starts to get up and knocks her book off the front of her desk. While still in her desk, she stands up and bends over to grab the book off the floor, inadvertently giving everyone in class behind her a look at her panty clad ass until she straightens up. A few snickers and giggles causes her to look back as she seems to understand what happened. She quickly smooths out her skirt and leaves class with Andrey.'
+			'As class ends, Stasya starts to get up and knocks her book off the front of her desk. While still in her desk, she stands up and bends over to grab the book off the floor, inadvertently giving everyone behind her a look at her panty clad ass until she straightens up. A few snickers and giggles causes her to look back as she seems to understand what happened. She quickly smooths out her skirt and leaves class with Andrey.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -704,9 +705,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Vasily''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Vasily''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily is snickering behind you. Mr. Ivanov looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily snickers behind you. Mr. Ivanov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -720,7 +721,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A11'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is grabbing my breasts." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is grabbing my breasts." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Vasily denies it, but Mr Ivanov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -747,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr. Ivanov and turn around, slapping Vasily with all the force you can muster. Vasily recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
 					'Mr. Ivanov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principals office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Vasily (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -755,7 +756,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily is snickering behind you.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Ivanov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily snickers behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -770,7 +771,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					act 'Come get some more':
 						cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Vasily, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards Mr. Ivanov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You pinch your lips together, trying to silence another moan as you feel your molester''s fingers give your still sensitive nipple another quick pinch before retreating again. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to one side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until you''re looking sidelong at Vasily, who has been groping you. You lift the corner of your mouth in a small smile, making a "Come here!" motion with your index finger, winking at him before you scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you''ve turned back towards Mr. Ivanov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -778,9 +779,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'You spend the rest of class with Vasily''s hand coming and going to squeeze your breast and tweak your nipple, still careful to make sure Mr. Ivanov doesn''t catch on.'
 							if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand, slipping your two middle fingers up your dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your swollen clit through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually you decide that the small tip doesn''t provide enough stimulation, so you shift the wet fabric to the side, giving you full access to your now bare pussy. You reach down with one hand and slip two fingers up your dripping wet pussy. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -788,9 +789,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							else
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
-								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them up your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
+								'Enjoying the feeling of Vasily''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. You take the pencil you were using to take notes, push it under your skirt and start prodding and playing with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is just too tempting to resist and soon you abandon your little pencil in favour of your two middle fingers, quickly shoving them inside yourself. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Vasily seems to have caught on to your arousal and starts kneading and pulling harder at your breast. In a moment of perfect coincidence, you pinch your clit just as Vasily gives your sensitive nipple a quick squeeze. The combined stimulation is too much and your knees fly together, trapping your hand as your legs clench from the sudden orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Vasily''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr. Ivanov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With bright eyes and a confident smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Ivanov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -803,8 +804,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Vasily behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mr Ivanov. "Is there a problem, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily is snickering behind you. Mr. Ivanov is looking at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Vasily behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mr Ivanov. "Is there a problem, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, while Vasily snickers behind you. Mr. Ivanov is looking at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -818,7 +819,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A11'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is snapping my bra stap." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Ivanov, Vasily is snapping my bra stap." Mr. Ivanov gives Vasily a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Vasily denies it, but Mr Ivanov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -844,8 +845,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					npc_rel['A11'] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr. Ivanov and turn around, slapping Vasily with all the force you can muster. Vasily recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, some of them even laughing.'
-					'Mr Ivanov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principals office!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'Mr Ivanov''s voice cuts sharply through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Vasily (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -857,12 +858,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Glancing around the class, you notice Vasily reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after Mr Ivanov shoots her a few dirty looks at the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
+			'Glancing around the class, you notice Vasily reaching around the girl sitting in front of him and grabbing her boob. At first, she tries to fend him off and tell him to stop, but after Mr Ivanov shoots her a few dirty looks for the noise she''s making, she just gives up and tries to ignore his groping hands.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			if soniaPS = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Mr Ivanov engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts flirting with him openly and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr. Ivanov. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia. You wonder why she isn''t sent to the principal''s office. If anyone else had done that, they would been kicked out of class.'
+				'Mr Ivanov engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts openly flirting with him and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr. Ivanov. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia. You wonder why she isn''t sent to the principal''s office. If anyone else had done that, they would been kicked out of class.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -872,7 +873,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/soniaflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back every time Mr. Ivanov is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Artem every time Mr. Ivanov looks away, whhile the other boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
+			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Artem every time Mr. Ivanov looks away, while the other boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -890,17 +891,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Vasily letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Vasily letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what that looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decide to sit next to...'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decide to sit next to...'
 			act 'Vasily':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Vasily. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Vasily. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Albina':
@@ -908,7 +909,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A23'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Albina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Albina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Lizaveta':
@@ -916,7 +917,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A140'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Lizaveta. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Lizaveta. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Alyona':
@@ -924,7 +925,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A143'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Artem':
@@ -932,7 +933,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Artem. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Artem. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Gerasim':
@@ -940,7 +941,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A153'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Gerasim. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Gerasim. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Zinaida':
@@ -948,7 +949,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A142'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Zinaida. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally she tells you to be quiet or she will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Zinaida. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally she tells you to be quiet or she will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Sonia':
@@ -956,7 +957,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A25'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Ivanov, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
@@ -964,7 +965,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			'The lesson pauses briefly when one of the other students asks Mr. Ivanov a question about the lesson. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Artem turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your general direction? Even Mr. Ivanov walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Artem again, and find him staring at you. It looks like he''s trying not to make eye contact, however, otherwise he would have noticed you looking back at him. You wonder what his deal is.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -994,9 +995,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teachdis.jpg"></center>'
 				'Your heart is pounding. Mr Ivanov is much older than you, why is he looking at your legs like that? Isn''t he supposed to know better? You try to straighten your skirt as inconspicuously as you can, attempting to make it look natural, like a random afterthought and not because of his staring.'
-				'Your teacher doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show, and calls attention to you, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
+				'Your teacher doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show, and calls attention to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
 				*nl
-				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology, "I''m sorry, Mr. Ivanov."'
+				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology. "I''m sorry, Mr. Ivanov."'
 				'For the remainder of the class, he keeps shooting glances in your direction. He seems to be having a great time in class today and you suspect that you''re the reason.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -1022,9 +1023,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[1] +=1
 					demerit += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say'
-					'"Mr Ivanov, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
-					'A loud laughter erupts in the classroom, and he raps his desk several times until he gets the class to quieten down. "Go to the principal''s right now Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>.'
+					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Ivanov, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
+					'A loud laughter erupts in the classroom, and he raps his desk several times until he gets the class to quieten down. "Go to the principal''s right now Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>!'
 					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					else
 						pcs_horny +=40
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/spreadb.jpg"></center>'
-						'The thoughts of him checking you out so sneakily turn you on a great deal and the fact that you know you should know better make it even hotter. Throughout the class you keep spreading your legs whenever he looks your way and you can tell the looks of your bare pussy are causing him a great deal of arousal as well. Unable to control yourself, you occasionally give yourself a quick rub over your exposed pussy lips, preferably when he looks at you. Towards the end of the class, your pussy lips are soaked in your juices and you absent-mindedly put your finger in your mouth for a taste. '
+						'The thoughts of him checking you out so sneakily turn you on a great deal and the fact that you know you should know better make it even hotter. Throughout the class, you keep spreading your legs whenever he looks your way and you can tell the looks of your bare pussy are causing him a great deal of arousal as well. Unable to control yourself, you occasionally give yourself a quick rub over your exposed pussy lips, preferably when he looks at you. Towards the end of the class, your pussy lips are soaked in your juices and you absent-mindedly put your finger in your mouth for a taste. '
 					end
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1069,8 +1069,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When Mr. Ivanov looks at you, he''s staring right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now.'
 					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> what is the meaning of this!?" Mr. Ivanov says angrily.'
 					'You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look, and I''m telling the principal."'
-					'He''s slightly nervous now, knowing you caught him staring. He still tries to posture himself. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!"'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'He''s slightly nervous now, knowing you caught him staring and tries to compose himself. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Flip him off (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1083,7 +1083,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/albbendover.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr. Ivanov has available in class. Albina is one such student. She takes one of the books to one of the long empty tables and bends over the table, resting her elbows on it while standing on her toes. This gives a nice look up her skirt at her panties. You are fairly certain that she is doing it on purpose, but she ignores the lewd comments from Vasily.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr. Ivanov has available in class. Albina is one such student. She takes one of the books to an empty table and bends over it, resting her elbows on it while standing on her toes. This gives a nice view up her skirt at her panties. You don''t know if she is doing it on purpose since she angrily glares at Vasily when he makes lewd comments out loud.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1091,17 +1091,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 18:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/alyrage1.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov calls Alyona up to the computer at the font of the class, with the large monitor facing the rest of the class so everyone can see what you are doing on it. He ask Alyona to trouble shoot a problem he has created on a small program. She tries but fails to figure it out. He starts mocking her inability to, as he puts it, "Solve even the most basic of problems that a three year old could have solved by now."'
-			'At that point, Alyona loses it and gets up and screams. "Fuck you, you worthless motherfucker! I''m tired of your shit!" Mr. Ivanov is caught off guard and tells her to calm down, but she grabs the small trash can next to his desk, dumps it out and then throws it at his empty desk.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov calls Alyona up to the computer at the front of the class, with the large monitor facing the rest of the class so everyone can see what you are doing on it. He asks Alyona to troubleshoot a problem he has created on a small program. She tries but fails to figure it out. He arrongantly starts mocking her inability to, as he puts it, "Solve even the most basic of problems that a three year old could have solved by now."'
+			'At that point, Alyona loses it. "Fuck you, you worthless motherfucker! I''m tired of your shit!" Mr. Ivanov is caught off guard and tells her to calm down, but she grabs the small trash can next to his desk, dumps it out and +throws it at his empty desk.'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/alyrage2.jpg"></center>'
-				'He fumes. "That''s enough young lady. I''m taking you to the principal''s office." he says as he starts walking torwards her, but she grabs a chair and violently yells at him. "I will bash your fucking head in with this chair if you even dare try to touch me asshole!" This causes him to stop and take a step back, the whole class is stunned by this. Alyona is known to have a violent streak, but normally she spends most of her time sleeping in class.'
+				'He fumes. "That''s enough young lady. I''m taking you to the principal''s office." he says as he starts walking torwards her, but she grabs a chair and violently yells at him. "I will smash your fucking head in if you even dare try to touch me asshole!" This causes him to stop and take a step back, the whole class stunned. Alyona is known to have a violent streak, but she normally spends most of her time sleeping in class.'
 				
 				act 'Keep watching':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/alyrage3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Mr Ivanov somewhat calmly says "Fine I won''t touch you, but you are going to the principal''s office." She screams and throws the chair across the room into the wall, then in a much more calm tone says. "Fine, whatever, let''s go." She heads out of class with Mr. Ivanov trailing behind her. Once they are gone, everyone starts talking about what just happened and sending texts on their phones. Neither of them return to class before the bell rings.'
+					'Mr Ivanov somewhat calmly says "Fine I won''t touch you, but you are going to the principal''s office." She screams and throws the chair across the room, then in a much more calm tone says "Fine, whatever. Let''s go." She heads out of class with Mr. Ivanov trailing behind her. Once they are gone, everyone starts talking about what just happened and sending texts on their phones. Neither of them return to class before the bell rings.'
 					
 					act 'Leave the classroom': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1109,17 +1109,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 19:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/lizalb.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Albina and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and when they notice Gerasim has his phone out, they give him their phones and ask him to take several pictures of them together. They do a variety of poses together before collecting their phones from him.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Bella and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and when they notice Gerasim has his phone out, they give him their phones and ask him to take several pictures of them together. They do a variety of poses together before collecting their phones from him.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/lizskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Albina and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and looking at something on Albina''s monitor. Lizaveta leans over to get a better view, which gives a nice view of her thigh.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, they sit next to each other to talk. Bella and Lizaveta end up sitting next to each other talking and looking at something on Bella''s monitor. Lizaveta leans over to get a better view, which gives a nice view of her thigh.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 21 and soniaPS = 1:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/soniabutt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. It is a fairly hard assignment and you are sure it will take to the end of class to finish. Sonia walks past you up to Mr Ivanov''s desk and tells him she doesn''t understand and asks if he can help. He turns his monitor so she can see it and he starts explaining to her what he just explained to class. While he is doing this, Sonia leans forward and pulls her skirt up and her panties down, showing the whole class her naked ass and pussy. Several students take out their phones and start taking pictures of her, but she doesn''t seem to mind in the slightest.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. It is a fairly hard assignment and you are sure it will take to the end of class to finish. Sonia walks past you up to Mr Ivanov''s desk, tells him she doesn''t understand and asks if he can help. He turns his monitor so she can see it and starts explaining to her what he just explained to class. While he is doing this, Sonia leans forward, lifts her skirt up and pulls her panties down, showing the whole class her naked ass and pussy. Several students take out their phones and start taking pictures of her, but she doesn''t seem to mind in the slightest.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1127,7 +1127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 22:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/soniashirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr Ivanov has available in class. Sonia sits on one of the desks, her legs slightly spread and showing off her panties as she unbuttons her shirt until you can see between her boobs from her neck to her skirt. Mr Ivanov tells her "Sit down and button your shirt."'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, some of them get up and start checking out some of the computer books Mr Ivanov has available in class. Sonia sits on one of the desks, her legs slightly spread and showing off her panties as she unbuttons her shirt until you can see between her boobs. Mr Ivanov scolds her "Sit down and button your shirt."'
 			'Sonia smiles to him seductively. "I thought you liked what you saw."'
 			'He blushes and repeats himself. "Sit down now." Sonia, with a bemused smile, sits back in her chair and slowly buttons her shirt back up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
@@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 23:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/computer/zinlean.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, Albina, who is still working on it, asks Zinaida if she would come over and help her, since Zinaida was the first one done as always. She goes over and starts trying to help explain things to Albina. Mr Ivanov doesn''t seem to mind, but then again, he lets the nerds get away with a lot. As Zinaida helps Albina, she leans forward more and more until you can almost see up her skirt, although her tights would ruin any view even if you could see anything.'
+			'At the end of class, Mr Ivanov gives a final assignment for the day. As your fellow students finish it, Albina, who is still working on it, asks Zinaida if she would come over and help her, since Zinaida was the first one done as always. She goes over and starts trying to help explain things to Albina. Mr Ivanov doesn''t seem to mind, but then again, he lets the nerds get away with a lot. As Zinaida helps Albina, she leans forward until you can almost see up her skirt, although her tights would ruin any view, even if you could see anything.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1166,7 +1166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -1175,15 +1175,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Yenotin poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Yenotin that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Yenotin poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Yenotin that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. By accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Mr Yenotin prods impatiently. Mr. Yenotin is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Yenotin sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your classmates. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Yenotin sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and with a devious smile and cloth in hand, start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -1193,7 +1193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Stasya is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself a pair and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_10.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1211,7 +1211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			if soniaPS = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Mr. Yenotin engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts flirting with him openly and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr Yenotin. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia.'
+				'Mr. Yenotin engages the class in conversation. Sonia starts openly flirting with him and keeps dropping none too subtle sexual innuendos at Mr Yenotin. He does his best to try and ignore them, but after a bit you notice him starting to blush and that his crotch is developing a serious bulge. Sonia notices too, so with a naughty twinkle in her eyes she pulls her shirt open, flashing her tits at him and the rest of the class. He quickly tells the class to read some chapters in their textbook while he hurries to sit down at his desk, though his eyes linger on a smiling Sonia.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8 and soniaPS = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/soniaflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back every time Mr Yenotin is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Marcus every time Mr. Yenotin looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
+			'You hear some whispers and see some other students looking towards the back of the room every time Mr Yenotin is not looking. You glance back and see Sonia flashing her boobs at Marcus every time Mr. Yenotin looks away, while the boys take pictures of her each time and keep encouraging her to show more.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1239,7 +1239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Svyatoslav letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Svyatoslav letting go of Lesco''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1249,7 +1249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A146'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Marcus. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Marcus. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Stasya':
@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A139'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Stasya. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Stasya. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Alyona':
@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A143'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Alyona. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Ekaterina':
@@ -1273,7 +1273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A145'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Ekaterina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Ekaterina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Svyatoslav':
@@ -1281,7 +1281,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Svyatoslav. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Svyatoslav. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Paulina':
@@ -1289,7 +1289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A24'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Paulina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Paulina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Sonia':
@@ -1297,15 +1297,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A25'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Sonia. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
-			act 'Lesco':
+			act 'Irina':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
-				npc_rel['A7'] += 1
+				npc_rel['A17'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'During class you sit next to Irina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'During class you sit next to Irina. You spend most of the class talking quietly with each other, though the two of you often get dirty looks from Mr. Yenotin, mostly when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principal''s office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
@@ -1313,7 +1313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			'The lesson pauses briefly when one of the other students asks Mr Yenotin a question about his lesson. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Marcus turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your general direction? Even the teacher walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Marcus again, and find him staring at you. It looks like he''s trying not to make eye contact, however, otherwise he would have noticed you looking back at him. You wonder what his deal is.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1338,22 +1338,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15 and (soniafall = 5 or soniaPS = 1):
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/soniadare1.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you work on your class assignment, you hear Paulina talking to Sonia. "I dare you to walk up to Mr Yenotin desk and ask him for help. Then bend over his desk and pull your panties down and your skirt up showing off your butt."'
+			'As you work on your class assignment, you hear Paulina talking to Sonia. "I dare you to walk up to Mr Yenotin and ask him for help. Then bend over his desk, pull your panties down and show everyone your ass."'
 			'Sonia blushes a little, but also looks thrilled at the idea. "Everyone would see."'
-			'Paulina nods. "Yeah everyone would see how badass you are."'
+			'Paulina nods. "Yeah, everyone would see how badass you are."'
 			'Sonia looks around, spots you looking at them and grins as she gets up and heads up to Mr Yenotin''s desk.'
 			act 'Ignore them and wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/soniadare2.jpg"></center>'
-				'She stops at his desk and starts talking to him quietly. You can''t hear what she is saying but he is smiling and nodding to her before he starts explaining something to her. She leans forward over the desk, then reaches back and pulls her skirt up and then her panties down, showing off her bare ass and pussy to the whole class. When Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking just about the whole class pulls out their phones and starts taking pictures of Sonia''s naked ass.'
+				'She stops at his desk and starts talking to him quietly. You can''t hear what she is saying, but he is smiling and nodding at her before he starts explaining something to her. She leans forward over the desk, lifts her skirt up and then pulls her panties down, showing off her bare ass and pussy to the whole class. When Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, just about the whole class pull out their phones and start taking pictures of Sonia''s naked ass.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
 			'For today''s lesson, Mr Yenotin decides to have the class to read a passage from an old literature book out loud, one that even native Russian speakers sometimes find difficult with the slightly different pronunciations. You and your classmates open the book and Mr Yenotin tells Stasya to begin from the top of the page. She sighs and starts reading loudly. After a couple of pages Mr. Yenotin stops and thanks Stasya. He looks around for someone to take over, spotting Marcus. "Why don''t we have our exchange student read some pages? You need the practice anyway."'
-			'Marcus looks worryingly around, hesitating. "Can I skip it this time?" he asks. Mr Yenotin is shaking his head."Don''t worry Marcus, go on. It''ll be fine."'
+			'Marcus looks worryingly around, hesitating. "Can I skip it this time?" he pleads. Mr Yenotin is shaking his head. "Don''t worry Marcus, go on. It''ll be fine."'
 			*nl
 			'Marcus clears his throat and begins reading. He''s painfully slow at times and his American accent doesn''t help but he does his best. As he comes to a difficult part, he starts stammering and gets stuck trying to pronounce a word correctly.'
 			'While Marcus is trying to tackle the word, you hear someone snickering behind him. It''s Alyona. "M-M-Maybe you should t-t-try once again. Are you slow or something?" The rest of the class starts laughing while Marcus shamefully stares down on his desk...'
@@ -1368,9 +1368,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					grupvalue[1] += 1
 					grupvalue[4] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Not wanting to partake in the bullying you decide to speak up. "Oh, shut up Alyona. It''s not like you''re any better. At least Marcus has got an excuse. What''s yours, drunk again?"'
+					'Not wanting to partake in the bullying, you decide to speak up. "Shut up Alyona. It''s not like you''re any better. At least Marcus has an excuse. What''s yours, drunk again?"'
 					'Alyona reacts as expected. She leaps from her desk and heads straight towards you. "What the fuck did you say to me bitch? You don''t know anything about me. You say something like that to me again and I will fuck you up bitch!"'
-					'Before she reaches you, Mr Yenotin steps in and deescalates the situation, telling Alyona to return to her desk. The class sits there in silence for a moment before Mr Yenotin tells Lesco to read instead. After a while, you notice Marcus looking at you, nodding gratefully.'
+					'Before she reaches you, Mr Yenotin steps in and defuses the situation, telling Alyona to return to her desk. The class sits in silence for a moment before Mr Yenotin tells Lesco to read instead. After a while, you notice Marcus looking at you, nodding gratefully.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1390,8 +1390,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act'Do nothing':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Not wanting to partake in the bullying, but also not wanting to piss off Alyona or the gopniks, you don''t say anything. Mr Yenotin says to Marcus "Please continue." He then gives Alyona a look. "Please be nice, treat others as you would like them to treat you." This doesn''t have the effect he was hoping for as it just gets her and several other students laughing.'
-				'After a bit, Marcus is still struggling and now Paulina joins in as well in taunting Marcus, interrupting him each time he almost gets the word right. Soon about half the class has joined in and Mr. Yenotin gives up. "That''s enough Marcus, it was a good job. Now how about we have someone else read for a bit. Alyona, why don''t you read the next part?"'
+				'Not wanting to partake in the bullying, but also not wanting to piss off Alyona or the gopniks, you don''t say anything. "Please continue." Mr Yenotin tells Marcus while giveing Alyona a disapproving look. "Please be nice and treat others as you would like them to treat you." This doesn''t have the effect he was hoping for as it just gets her and several other students laughing.'
+				'After a few minutes, Marcus is still struggling and now Paulina joins in as well, interrupting him each time he almost gets the word right. Soon about half the class has joined in and Mr. Yenotin gives up. "That''s enough Marcus, it was a good effort. Now how about we have someone else read for a bit? Alyona, why don''t you read the next part?"'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act'Take over reading':
@@ -1399,7 +1399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				npc_rel['A146'] += 1
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hate that Marcus is being bullied but you don''t want to piss off Alyona or the other gopniks either, so you wait for Marcus to stop again and you start reading instead. You know it isn''t your turn, but you don''t care. Mr Yenotin smiles at you and doesn''t seem to mind. Marcus lets out a sigh of relief and gives you a grateful smile, while Alyona just rolls her eyes at you for ruining her fun.'
+				'You hate seeing Marcus being bullied but you don''t want to piss off Alyona or the other gopniks either, so you wait for Marcus to stop again and you start reading instead. You know it isn''t your turn, but you don''t care. Mr Yenotin smiles at you and doesn''t seem to mind. Marcus lets out a sigh of relief and gives you a grateful smile, while Alyona just rolls her eyes at you for ruining her fun.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
@@ -1409,8 +1409,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teachdis.jpg"></center>'
 				'Your heart is pounding. Mr Yenotin is much older than you, why is he looking at your legs like that? Isn''t he supposed to know better? You try to straighten your skirt as inconspicuously as you can, attempting to make it look natural, like a random afterthought and not because of his staring.'
-				'Mr Yenotin doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show and calls attention to you "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
-				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology, "I''m sorry, Mr. Yenotin."'
+				'Mr Yenotin doesn''t appreciate you interrupting his show and calls attention to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, stop fidgeting in your chair like that. It''s distracting."'
+				'You quickly let go of your skirt. He can still see up your legs, but you don''t have the courage to do anything about it now. Your cheeks turn crimson red as you mumble an apology. "I''m sorry, Mr. Yenotin."'
 				'For the remainder of the class, he keeps shooting glances in your direction. He seems to be having a great time in class today and you suspect that you''re the reason.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -1433,8 +1433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'stat'
 					grupvalue[1] +=1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say'
-					'"Mr Yenotin, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
+					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Yenotin, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"'
 					'A loud laughter erupts in the classroom and Mr Yenotin looks embarrassed. He opens his mouth as if he wants to say something in defense, but thinks the better of it and just lets you have your win. After a while, he manages to get the class back under control and continues to teach, carefully avoiding your legs.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1475,9 +1474,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					npc_rel['A26'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/fuckoff.jpg"></center>'
 					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When the teacher looks at you, he''s staring right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now.'
-					'"What is the meaning of this <<$pcs_nickname>>!?" your teacher says angrily.'
+					'"What is the meaning of this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>!?" Mr Yenotin says angrily.'
 					'You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look and I''m telling the principal."'
-					'Flustered, Mr. Yenotin leaves the class for a moment. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if maybe someone else knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Yenotin returns to class and resumes his lesson like nothing happened, carefully avoiding you with his eyes. Everyone in class is very surprised you did not get kicked out after what you just did.'
+					'Flustered, Mr. Yenotin leaves the class for a moment. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if anyone knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Yenotin returns to class and resumes his lesson like nothing happened, carefully avoiding eye contact you. Everyone in class is very surprised that you didn''t get kicked out after what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1485,19 +1484,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 18:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/alyonachalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr Yenotin calls Alyona up to the front of the class and asks her to write on the chalkboard what he recites. He faces the class talking about a complex sentence structure, but instead of writing what he says, Alyona starts using the chalk to draw a female naked backside and then a large dick sticking in it''s ass. This gets the whole class laughing and Mr Yenotin is confused and tries to calm everyone down. He finally turns around and see''s whats on the chalkboard and rushes up to wipe it clean. He then tells Alyona to take a seat as he starts writing what he says on the chalkboard himself as he tries to continue the lesson.'
+			'Mr Yenotin calls Alyona up to the front of the class and asks her to write what he recites on the chalkboard. He faces the class talking about a complex sentence structure, but instead of writing what he says, Alyona starts drawing a female''s naked backside with a large dick in it''s ass. This gets the whole class laughing and confuses Mr Yenotin, who tries to calm everyone down. He finally turns around, sees what''s on the chalkboard and rushes up to wipe it clean. He then tells Alyona to take a seat as he starts writing what he says on the chalkboard himself as he tries to continue the lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 19:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/alyonasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice some smoke drifting your way near the end of class. You turn and see Alyona sitting there, looking bored while smoking a cigarette. When Mr Yenotin sees it, he walks back and says to her. "There is no smoking in class."'
-			'She gives him a bored look. "I know." She replies as she takes another drag of her cigarette.'
+			'You notice some smoke drifting your way near the end of class. You turn and see Alyona sitting there, looking bored while smoking a cigarette. When Mr Yenotin sees it, he walks up to her and says "There is no smoking in class."'
+			'She gives him a bored look. "I know." she replies as she takes another drag of her cigarette.'
 			'He gives her a frustrated look. "Please put that cigarette out."'
 			'She gives him a half ass, bewildered look. "What cigarette?"'
-			'He sighs. "The one you''re smoking..." before he just gives up and takes the cigarette from her and walks back to the front of the class, where he puts it out and throws the butt in the trash can before continuing his lesson.'
+			'He sighs. "The one you''re smoking..." before he just gives up, takes the cigarette from her and walks back to the front of the class, where he puts it out and throws the butt in the trash can before continuing his lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/paulpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Paulina stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "Thats as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be ... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
+			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Paulina stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "That''s as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be ... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # gschool_lessonsev2
+! This file contains the class events for geopgraphy, math, history and shop 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -10,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -19,12 +20,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mrs. Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mrs Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forget that you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties and your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe the board. You totally forget that not only are you are not wearing panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug. When you bend over you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -57,11 +58,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained grasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Valentin letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained grasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Valentin letting go of Artem''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 			act 'Mefodiy':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -124,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as one of the students asks Mrs Sokoloff a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Artem turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mrs. Sokoloff walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Artem again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -165,16 +166,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					act 'Scream':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classcum.jpg"></center>'
-						'You feel something wet hit the side of your face and shoulder from behind. You look over just in time to see Vitek finish jerking off on you.'
-						'"What the hell are you fucking insane?" you shout as you feel the consistency of cum on your fingers as you try and wipe the wetness from your face.'
-						'"Listen here-." Just as the boys are about to reply, they stop as Mrs Sokoloff returns.'
+						'You feel something wet hit the side of your face and shoulder from behind. You look over just in time to see Valentin finish jerking off on you.'
+						'"What the hell?! Are you fucking insane?!" you shout as you feel the consistency of cum on your fingers as you try and wipe the wetness from your face.'
+						'"Listen here-" Just as the boys are about to reply, they stop as Mrs Sokoloff returns.'
 						act 'Don''t tell on them':
 							*clr & cla
 							npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 							npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You quickly start wiping the cum off you while giving them dirty looks. One of the girls from another grade gives you some tissues to help. You quickly clean yourself and your clothes up as best you can. Mrs Sokoloff notices you and asks "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> what are you doing?"'
+							'You quickly start wiping the cum off you while giving them dirty looks. One of the girls from another grade gives you some tissues to help. You quickly clean yourself and your clothes up as best you can. Mrs Sokoloff notices you and asks "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, what are you doing?"'
 							'You glance up at her and then turn to clean up the rest of your shoulder while looking at the boys. "Something must have dripped on me from the ceiling and I was just cleaning it up." Mrs Sokoloff looks up at the celling, as if expecting something to fall from it for a few moments and then goes back to teaching the class.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
@@ -191,10 +192,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 								grupvalue[4] -= 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
 								'You quickly get out of your seat and run to Mrs Sokoloff, telling her what happened.'
-								'Straight away, she begins to yell for Vitek and Valentin to come to the desk. "The principal will have a field day with you two. How could you do something disgusting like this?"'
-								'While the boys keep to their story that they''re innocent, Mrs Sokoloff turns to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> you''re excused to visit the toilet to wash off."'
+								'Straight away, she begins to yell for Vitek and Valentin to come to the desk. "The principal will have a field day with you two. How could you do something so disgusting?"'
+								'While the boys keep to their story that they''re innocent, Mrs Sokoloff turns to you. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''re excused to visit the toilet to wash off."'
 								*nl
-								'When you return all cleaned up, the boys are gone. Mrs Sokoloff tells you that they''ve been sent to the principal and that it was the right thing you told her.'
+								'When you return all cleaned up, the boys are gone. Mrs Sokoloff tells you that they''ve been sent to the principal and that you done the right thing telling her.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
 						else
@@ -206,8 +207,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/geography/geography.jpg"></center>'
 			'For today''s lesson Mrs Sokoloff is talking about the continent Africa. She''s going through the rich flora and fauna that can be found there.'
-			'She tells you to open the book to page 150, where you see a photo of a tribe. They''re wearing a minuscule amount of clothes. "Look at them, they''re nude." outbursts a laughing Lazar. "They all look like Marcus!" he continues on.'
+			'She tells you to open your books to page 150, where you see a photo of a tribe. They''re wearing a minuscule amount of clothes. "Look at them, they''re nude." outbursts a laughing Lazar. "They all look like Marcus!" he continues on.'
 			'"Shut up!" yells Andrey. "Are you so butthurt that they all have bigger cocks than you?" he asks Lazar.'
+			*nl
 			'The whole class bursts out in laughter. "How the hell do you know that? Have you been looking at Marcus''s cock? What a faggot!"'
 			'"Fuck you, that wasn''t what I meant. It''s well known that black people have got bigger cocks." Andrey quickly replies.'
 			'"Well, everyone has a bigger cock than you, but why not ask the class expert on cocks? What do you say <<$pcs_nickname>>, is there some truth to that?" Lazar asks and the whole class turns toward you.'
@@ -215,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/fuckoff.jpg"></center>'
 				'You look around at the class as everyone sit on the edge of their chairs in anticipation.'
-				'You only answer them by showing the middle finger while still reading the history book.'
+				'Your answer is showing them the middle finger without even looking up from your book.'
 				'"Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. Share your knowledge." Lazar sighs.'
 				'As you''re about to tell them off, Mrs Sokoloff clears her throat, telling everyone if they keep it up, they will be sent to the principal. Everybody settles down and the class goes back to normal.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -224,9 +226,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide to tease them a little and begin laughing. "Well, from what I''ve noticed you guys are in big trouble if Marcus begins going after all the girls. There''s a reason they say ''once you go black you never go back.''"'
-				'The boys are sitting there with their mouths wide open. They can''t believe what they just heard.'
-				'You continue laughing. "You lot really are fucking stupid! How the hell should I know that? Tell you what. Next time you have gym class, stand next to each other and compare your little dicks, faggots."'
-				'"That''s enough! You''ve had your fun." Mrs Sokoloff angrily says. You quickly settle down and return to the lesson.'
+		        'The boys are sitting there with their mouths wide open. They can''t believe what they just heard.'
+				'You continue laughing. "You lot really are fucking stupid! How the hell should I know? Tell you what. Next time you have gym class, stand next to each other and compare your little dicks, faggots."'
+				'"That''s enough! You''ve had your fun." Mrs Sokoloff angrily shouts. You quickly settle down and return to the lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
@@ -235,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/geography/stasyaskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class as everyone is getting up to leave, you hear Andrey and Stasya talking and him saying he will miss her, as they don''t have next class together. Stasya unzips her skirt and pulls it wide open, showing him her panties while sticking her tongue out at him. He grins but then grumbles a bit as he adjusts his crotch. "Damnit now I am going to have a hard on thinking about you all next hour. She laughs and they walk out together.'
+			'At the end of class as everyone is getting up to leave, you hear Andrey and Stasya talking and he says how he will miss her, as they don''t have next class together. Stasya unzips her skirt and pulls it wide open, showing him her panties while sticking her tongue out at him. He grins but then grumbles a bit as he adjusts his crotch. "Damnit! Now I''m going to have a hard on thinking about you for the next hour!" She laughs and they walk out together.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -267,12 +269,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you are not wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of both of your holes. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
+				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you aren''t wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of both of your holes. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
 				*nl
 				'Dimka: "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you certainly know how how to put on a show."'
 				'Igor: "Yeah, you have some nice holes there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 				if npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4 and NikoVolkovQW >= 5 and NikoPayback = 0:
-					'With a confident smirk on his face, Niko says, "That''s my girl right there."'
+					'With a confident smirk on his face, Niko says "That''s my girl right there."'
 				elseif npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4 and NikoPayback > 0:
 					'With a confident smirk on his face, Niko says "I always knew that you were a proud little whore."'
 				elseif npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
@@ -285,7 +287,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you are not wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of your pussy, as well as the butt plug currently stuffed up your asshole. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
+				'Mr Tsarev calls you up to the blackboard to answer a question. As you begin solving the problem, you drop the chalk on the floor. You quickly bend over to pick it up, having forgot that you are not wearing any panties and giving everyone in the class a clear view of your pussy, as well as the butt plug currently stuffed in your asshole. The boys begin whistling and hollering while many of the girls begin whispering to each other.'
 				*nl
 				'Dimka: "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you getting that ass loose for later?"'
 				'Igor: "Yeah, you have some nice holes there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
@@ -308,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you look around the classroom, waiting for the lesson to begin, you pause to admire the expensive looking stockings that Sonia is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you look around the classroom, waiting for the lesson to begin, you pause to admire the expensive looking stockings that Sonia is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			VK = rand(1,3)
@@ -320,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				gs 'stat'
 			elseif VK = 2 and soniaPS = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'As Mr Tsarev has everyone work on solving math problems, Sonia raises her hand then asks for assistance. As Mr Tsarev shows begins tutoring Sonia, she begins openly flirting and dropping not to subtle innuendos while he does his best to dismiss her advances, but you notice a bulge forming in his pants. At this point, Sonia pulls open her shirt and flashes her breasts at Mr. Tsarev and the whole class. Mr Tsarev pauses in shock for a moment before saying, "That is very inappropriate behavior." He then does his best to silence the class before rushing back to his desk. You occasionally catch him staring back at Sonia when he believes that no one is looking.'
+				'As Mr Tsarev has everyone work on solving math problems, Sonia raises her hand and asks for assistance. As Mr Tsarev begins tutoring Sonia, she begins openly flirting and dropping none too subtle innuendos while he does his best to dismiss her advances, but you notice a bulge forming in his pants. At this point, Sonia pulls open her shirt and flashes her breasts at Mr. Tsarev and the whole class. Mr Tsarev pauses in shock for a moment before saying "That is very inappropriate behavior." He then does his best to silence the class before rushing back to his desk. You occasionally catch him staring back at Sonia when he believes that no one is looking.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -333,7 +335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			else
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Sonia Ivanko">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/soniasmile.jpg"></center>'
-				'You hear the sound of something hitting the ground and turn around to see Sonia picking up her lipstick. Sonia is wearing a transparent blouse that does a very nice job of emphasizing her breasts to anyone willing to look her way. Sonia places her lipstick in her bag when she notices you looking, then gives you a warm smile before turning back to the front of the class.'
+				'You hear the sound of something hitting the ground and turn around to see Sonia picking up her lipstick. She is wearing a transparent blouse that does a very nice job of emphasizing her breasts to anyone willing to look her way. She places her lipstick in her bag when she notices you looking, then gives you a warm smile before turning back to the front of the class.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
@@ -356,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as Natasha asks Mr Tsarev a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle a few drawing in your notebook. When you look back up, you notice Igor turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction?'
 			*nl
 			'Even Mr Tsarev walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing with his lesson. Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Igor again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Button your shirt':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -405,7 +407,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Tsarev, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!" Loud laughter erupts in the classroom and Mr Tsarev is obviously embarrassed. He opens his mouth to speak, but realizes that speaking might make things worse, so he tries his best to get the class back under control before continuing the lesson, carefully avoiding your legs.'
+					'He can''t be doing that! You pull your skirt over your legs so he can''t look at you any more and loudly say "Mr Tsarev, be careful! If you keep staring at me like that, your eyeballs might pop out of their sockets!"' 
+					'Loud laughter erupts in the classroom and Mr Tsarev is obviously embarrassed. He opens his mouth to speak, but realizes that speaking might make things worse, so he tries his best to get the class back under control before continuing the lesson, carefully avoiding your legs.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -444,9 +447,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					grupvalue[3] -= 1
 					npc_rel['A26'] -= 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/fuckoff.jpg"></center>'
-					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When Mr Tsarev looks at you, he stares right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now. "Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>, what is the meaning of this!?" Mr. Tsarev says angrily. You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look, and I''m telling the principal." He looks slightly nervous now, knowing that you caught him staring at you. He still tries to posture himself. "<<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!" You have no intentions of getting up and add, with a sly smile, "And I don''t know, maybe your wife?"'
+					'He can''t do this! What a pervert! You squeeze your legs together and loudly clear your throat. When Mr Tsarev looks at you, he stares right at your extended middle finger. Everyone in class notices and all eyes are on you now. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, what is the meaning of this!?" Mr Tsarev says angrily. You''re not impressed in the slightest and boldly tell him "One more look, and I''m telling the principal." He looks slightly nervous now, knowing that you caught him staring at you and tries to compose himself. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, get out of class!" You have no intentions of getting up and add, with a sly smile, "And I don''t know, maybe your wife?"'
 					*nl
-					'Obviously flustered, Mr Tsarev leaves the classroom for a moment to collect his thoughts. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if maybe someone else knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Tsarev returns to class and resumes his lesson as if nothing had happened, carefully avoiding eye contact with you. Everyone in class is very surprised that you did not get kicked out after what just happened.'
+					'Obviously flustered, Mr Tsarev leaves the classroom for a moment to collect his thoughts. Your classmates, unsure of what just happened, softly talk with one another, asking if anyone knows what it was all about. After a minute or so, Mr Tsarev returns to class and resumes his lesson as if nothing had happened, carefully avoiding eye contact with you. Everyone in class is very surprised that you didn''t get kicked out after what just happened.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else
@@ -454,25 +457,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/chrislar.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class is ending Christina, Lariska, and Vanya are all talking. The girls get up and hug, posing together as Vanya takes Lariska''s phone and takes several pictures of them together.'
+			'As class is ending Christina, Lariska and Vanya are all talking. The girls get up and hug, posing together as Vanya takes Lariska''s phone and takes several pictures of them together.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/chrissoniabully.jpg"></center>'
-			'Sonia and Christina are called to the front to both work on the same problem to see who can get it done faster. Christina stops in the middle of it and grabs the back of Sonia''s skirt and pulls it up, showing off her butt cheeks as she is only wearing thong panties. This gets a lot of hoots and hollars from the rest of the class. Mr Tsarev tries several times to get the class back in order and sends both girls to sit back down.'
+			'Sonia and Christina are called to the front to both work on the same problem to see who can get it done faster. Christina stops in the middle of it, grabs the back of Sonia''s skirt and pulls it up, showing off her ass cheeks as she is wearing a thong. This gets a lot of hoots and hollars from the rest of the class. Mr Tsarev tries several times to get the class back in order and sends both girls to sit back down.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/larskirtup.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, Lariska leans forward in her seat to talk to Christina sitting in front of her today. As she does Arkadi, who is sitting behind her, grabs her skirt and pulls it up, showing off her panty clad ass. It takes her a while to wrestle the hem of her skirt out of his hands and get it back in place, blushing as most of the class laughs.'
+			'During class, Lariska leans forward in her seat to talk to Christina, who is sitting in front of her. As she does Arkadi, who is sitting behind her, grabs her skirt and pulls it up, showing off her panty clad ass. It takes her a while to wrestle the hem of her skirt out of his hands and get it back in place, blushing as most of the class laughs.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12 and soniaPS = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/soniachair.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends, Mr Tsarev gives the class the last five minutes of class to do what they want. Some students talk to their fellow students next to them, a few get up and walk around. Sonia gets up and tries to step over a desk, but ends up straddling the back of a chair. Instead of stepping the rest of the way over it, she stops and bites her lower lip, then scoots back and forth along the chair. Before anyone really notices what she is doing, the bell rings and everyone leaves class.'
+			'As class ends, Mr Tsarev gives the class the last five minutes to do what they want. Some students talk to their fellow students next to them, a few get up and walk around. Sonia gets up and tries to step over a desk, but ends up straddling the back of a chair. Instead of stepping the rest of the way over it, she stops and bites her lower lip, then scoots back and forth along the chair. Before anyone really notices what she is doing, the bell rings and everyone leaves class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -487,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/dare3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You unfold the note and read it. It says. ''I dare you to take a picture of your pussy and send it to Mr Tsarev.'' After reading the note, in a bit of a surprise at what she wrote, you glance up and you see both Christina and Lariska encouraging you to do it. Lariska, who is sitting next to you, even leans over and whispers "Do it."'
+					'You unfold the note and read it. It says ''I dare you to take a picture of your pussy and send it to Mr Tsarev.'' After reading the note, a bit surprised at what she wrote, you glance up and you see both Christina and Lariska encouraging you to do it. Lariska, who is sitting next to you, even leans over and whispers "Do it."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 						act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -509,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/dare4.jpg"></center>'
 						if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
-							'You bite your lip, look around and figure why not? A thrill of excitment runs down your spine at what you are about to do. You make sure no one else is watching, then spread your legs and pull up your skirt, pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed and take a photo of your pussy. You quickly pull your panties back in place and pull your skirt back down once you have the picture.'
+							'You bite your lip, look around and figure why not? A thrill of excitment runs down your spine at what you are about to do. You make sure no one else is watching, then spread your legs, pull up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed and take a photo. You quickly pull your panties back in place and pull your skirt back down once you have the picture.'
 						else
 							'You bite your lip, look around and figure why not? A thrill of excitment runs down your spine at what you are about to do. You make sure no one else is watching, then spread your legs and pull up your skirt, exposing your pussy since you are not wearing panties and take a photo of your pussy. You quickly pull your skirt back down once you have the picture.'
 						end
@@ -519,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						act 'Send the image':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/math/dare5.jpg"></center>'
-							'You send the image through the school wifi so your number doesn''t show up. The nerds long ago set it up long ago for the cool kids so texts could be sent anonymously. After you send it, Mr Tsarev stops what he is doing when his phone buzzes and looks at it. There is a shocked look on his face for a moment before he looks around at the class, obviously trying to figure out who sent it. A few minutes later, the bell to end class rings.'
+							'You send the image through the school wifi so your number doesn''t show up. The nerds set it up long ago for the cool kids so texts could be sent anonymously. After you send it, Mr Tsarev stops what he is doing when his phone buzzes and looks at it. There is a shocked look on his face for a moment before he looks around at the class, obviously trying to figure out who sent it. A few minutes later, the bell to end class rings.'
 							act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					end
@@ -553,9 +556,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 		npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/touchhands.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You lightly run your fingers across the palm of his hand as you listen to his explanation. After he quickly checks to make sure that no one notices, he reciprocates and takes your hand in his left hand. Seconds later, you feel his right hand resting on your back, gently rubbing it as he continues to explain a difficult to understand part of today''s lesson. You move your hips a bit closer to his, and lean closer to him as you continue listening to his explaination. When he is done with his explanation, you whisper in his ear, "You''re so smart and kind, Anatoly. I wish you would teach classes at the University, so I could go to your classes for several years more when I finish here. There is still so much that you can teach me."'
+		'You lightly run your fingers across the palm of his hand as you listen to his explanation. After he quickly checks to make sure that no one notices, he reciprocates and takes your hand in his left hand. Seconds later, you feel his right hand resting on your back, gently rubbing it as he continues to explain a difficult to understand part of today''s lesson. You move your hips a bit closer to his, and lean closer to him as you continue listening to his explaination. When he is done with his explanation, you whisper in his ear. "You''re so smart and kind, Anatoly. I wish you would teach classes at the University, so I could go to your classes for several years more when I finish here. There is still so much that you can teach me."'
 		*nl
-		'You notice a small shiver roll down his spine as he responds "Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>...I mean Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I should let you get back to work." He then quickly walks back to his desk while occasionally glancing back at you.'
+		'You notice a small shiver roll down his spine as he responds. "Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>...I mean Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I should let you get back to work." He then quickly walks back to his desk while occasionally glancing back at you.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 	act 'Coerce him':
@@ -564,9 +567,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashteach.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You edge closer and closer to him as he continues to explain some solutions. You step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. He stares at your chest for a few seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward and whisper in his ear "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear. "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
+		'You edge closer and closer to him as he continues to explain some solutions. You step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. He stares at your chest for a few seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward and whisper in his ear. "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear. "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
 		*nl
-		'Even though he''s clearly uncomfortable doing this, you feel his fingers rubbing over your wet pussy lips. You encourage him some more. "That feels so good Anatoly. Can you feel how wet I am?" Making sure that no one else is watching what he is doing, his actions grow more and more bold as he begins to rub your pussy more firmly. He then plunges in two fingers and begins to fuck you with them. You let out light moans as your heart is pounding faster. Obviously worried that someone might notice, Mr Tsarev slowly pulls his fingers out then says "You should let you get back to work." He gets up then walks back to his desk. He takes a quick look around to make sure that no one notices before placing his two fingers in his mouth, swallowing your juices.'
+		'Even though he''s clearly uncomfortable doing this, you feel his fingers rubbing over your wet pussy lips. You encourage him some more. "That feels so good Anatoly. Can you feel how wet I am?" Making sure that no one else is watching what he is doing, his actions grow more and more bold as he begins to rub your pussy more firmly. He then plunges two fingers in and begins to fuck you with them. You let out light moans as your heart is pounding faster. Obviously worried that someone might notice, Mr Tsarev slowly pulls his fingers out then says "I should let you get back to work." He gets up and walks back to his desk. He takes a quick look around to make sure that no one notices before placing his two fingers in his mouth, swallowing your juices.'
 		*nl
 		'It is clear that Mr Tsarev definitely won''t be forgetting today''s lesson anytime soon.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -583,13 +586,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teacherhelp.jpg"></center>'
 			'You smile at him empathetically and you put your hand on his shoulder for a brief moment to say to him "Would you like me to have a talk with her? My father left when I was still a baby. Your daughter doesn''t know what she''s missing, I would kill to have a father as great as you. I bet I could help her realize that. How about you take me home sometime, to talk to her?"'
 			*nl
-			'He responds "That is a kind offer, but I need to solve my issues on my own." You lightly squeeze on his shoulder before saying "Are you sure? I would love to come home with you someday, maybe you can tutor me. I''m sure that a strong man like you can teach me many things." Anatoly''s eyes widen before he replies, "Uhh maybe some other time. I should let you get back to work." He stands up then returns to his desk. You notice him sweating more than usual.'
+			'He responds "That is a kind offer, but I need to solve my issues on my own." You lightly squeeze on his shoulder before saying "Are you sure? I would love to come home with you someday, maybe you can tutor me. I''m sure that a strong man like you can teach me many things." Anatoly''s eyes widen before he replies. "Uhh.. maybe some other time. I should let you get back to work." He stands up and returns to his desk. You notice him sweating more than usual.'
 		end
 		act 'Be helpful':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teacherhelp.jpg"></center>'
-			'You suggest "Are you frightened that you might say something that might push her away while trying to help her with her drinking habits? You are a teacher, you educate us all for a living. You just need more confidence in yourself as well as an ability to take chances from time to time. You can even teach your daughter about the ways of life, like you do in class every day."'
+			'"Are you frightened that you might say something that might push her away while trying to help her with her drinking habits? You are a teacher, you educate us all for a living. You just need more confidence in yourself as well as an ability to take chances from time to time. You can even teach your daughter about the ways of life, like you do in class every day." you explain to him.'
 			*nl
-			'He nods his head slowly before responding. "You make a really good point. Maybe if I just speak with her without second guessing myself, I can actually make some progress. Thank you Miss... <<$pcs_firstname>> for your advice. You seem to have a great understanding of people in general." He gives your shoulder a light squeeze before returning to his desk.'
+			'He nods his head slowly before responding. "You make a really good point. Maybe if I just speak with her without second guessing myself, I can actually make some progress. Thank you Miss... <<$pcs_firstname>>, for your advice. You seem to have a great understanding of people in general." He gives your shoulder a light squeeze before returning to his desk.'
 		end
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -605,7 +608,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see some guys have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -614,15 +617,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mrs Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mrs Sokoloff poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with and totally forgoe that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mrs Sokoloff that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:	
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. By accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Mrs Sokoloff prods impatiently. Mrs Sokoloff is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mrs Sokoloff sits, she can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so she starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and with a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -636,9 +639,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Roman''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Roman''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman snickering behind you. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -652,7 +655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A157'] -= 10
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is grabbing my breasts." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is grabbing my breasts." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Roman denies it, but Mrs Sokoloff doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -662,7 +665,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/breastg.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -679,7 +682,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mrs Sokoloff and turn around and slap Roman with all your force. Roman recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mrs Sokoloff''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Roman (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -687,7 +690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, with Roman behind you snickering.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mrs Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman snickering behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -703,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A10'] += 2
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molesters fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Roman, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mrs Sokoloff, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Roman, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mrs Sokoloff, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -713,7 +716,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Roman''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your hard clitoris through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually, you get bored of it and shift the fabric to the side to get access to your bare pussy and insert your two middle fingers. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -723,7 +726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Roman''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is too tempting and you abandon your pencil for your two middle fingers to penetrate your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Roman seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Roman squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves of pleasure and you feel Roman''s hand slide away just before you hear Mrs Sokoloff say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mrs Sokoloff. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -736,8 +739,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Roman behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mrs. Sokoloff. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Roman behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mrs. Sokoloff. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman snickering behind you. Mrs Sokoloff looks at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -751,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A157'] -= 10
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is snapping my bra." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman an look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mrs. Sokoloff, Roman is snapping my bra." Mrs Sokoloff gives Roman a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Roman denies it, but Mrs Sokoloff doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -761,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/engaged.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mrs Sokoloff, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with Mrs Sokoloff now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -778,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mrs Sokoloff and turn around and slap Roman with all your force. Roman recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mrs Sokoloff''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Roman (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -786,11 +789,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'During class, there is a loud crashing sound from the back of the class. You along with everyone else in the class turn to look. In the back, Petka is still sitting at his desk, but now the desk is laying on its side on the floor. The whole class bursts out laughing at him.'
-			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is ok, Mrs Sokoloff gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
+			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is OK, Mrs Sokoloff gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get a alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someone''s dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -801,11 +804,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Roman letting go of Igor''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Roman letting go of Igor''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Marcus':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -876,7 +879,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as one of the students asks Mrs Sokoloff a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Petka turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mrs. Sokoloff walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Petka again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -900,7 +903,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/lenatchair.jpg"></center>'
-			'At the end of class, Mrs.= Sokoloff asks the class to study quietly as she leaves the classroom a few minutes before the end of class. Most of the students start talking or get up  and start walking around as soon as she leaves. Lena on the other hand, walks up to Mrs Sokoloff''s desk, sits down in her chair and starts rolling and spinning around on it, seemingly having the time of her life.'
+			'At the end of class, Mrs Sokoloff asks the class to study quietly as she leaves the classroom a few minutes before the end of class. Most of the students start talking or get up and start walking around as soon as she leaves. Lena on the other hand, walks up to Mrs Sokoloff''s desk, sits down in her chair and starts rolling and spinning around on it, seemingly having the time of her life.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/lenlerskirt.jpg"></center>'
@@ -911,18 +914,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/lenlerupskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you notice Petka keeps looking back past you at the back of class. You turn your head to follow his gaze and see Lena and Lera sitting side by side with their legs slightly spread apart, just enough to show off their panties. They seem amused by all the looks they are getting.'
+			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you notice Petka keeps looking back past you to the back of the class. You turn your head to follow his gaze and see Lena and Lera sitting side by side with their legs slightly spread apart, just enough to show off their panties. They seem amused by all the looks they are getting.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/leratongue.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you glance around in boredom and notice Lera doing the same. When she see''s you looking at her, she sticks out her tongue at you. She has a surprisingly long tongue, maybe that is why Lena likes her so much? You hear Mrs Sokoloff clear her throat and you look back to the front of class to wait for class to end.'
+			'As Mrs Sokoloff lectures the class on some dull moment in history no one cares about anymore, you glance around in boredom and notice Lera doing the same. When she sees you looking at her, she sticks out her tongue at you. She has a surprisingly long tongue, maybe that is why Lena likes her so much? You hear Mrs Sokoloff clear her throat and you look back to the front of class to wait for class to end.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/history/linaskirt.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, Mrs Sokoloff calls Lina up to the front of class to write an answer on the chalkboard. As she does, you and everyone else in class notice the back of her skirt is pulled up, held up by what looks like her pantyhose. You don''t think she is aware of the view she is giving the class as several students whistle or laugh. Lina seems confused and when Mrs Sokoloff tells the class to quieten down, she see''s what is causing the ruckus, grabs the back of Lina''s skirt and pulls it down. Only then does Lina realize what happened and blushes a bright red and turns back to the chalkboard to write out the answer. She sits back down, where she looks sheepish for the rest of the class.'
+			'During class, Mrs Sokoloff calls Lina up to the front of class to write an answer on the chalkboard. As she does, you and everyone else in class notice the back of her skirt is pulled up, held up by what looks like her pantyhose. You don''t think she is aware of the view she is giving the class as several students whistle or laugh. Lina seems confused and when Mrs Sokoloff tells the class to quieten down, she sees what is causing the ruckus, grabs the back of Lina''s skirt and pulls it down. Only then does Lina realize what happened and blushes a bright red and turns back to the chalkboard to write out the answer. She sits back down, where she looks sheepish for the rest of the class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -955,7 +958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see Vitek, Dan, and Vasily have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see Vitek, Dan and Vasily have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -964,15 +967,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Kuznetsov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Kuznetsov that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Kuznetsov poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forget that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr. Kuznetsov that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and analplugin = 1:
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. By accident, you drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean. You hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidently drop the cloth needed to wipe the board clean and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that you''re not wearing any panties while your ass is currently stuffed full with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Mr Kuznetsov prods impatiently. Mr Kuznetsov is right, might as well get on with it.'
-				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy currently filling your ass. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Kuznetsov sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look, but you quickly snap back up and adjust your skirt. With a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing ever happened.'
+				'With a coy smile, you slowly begin to bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your class. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut. From where Mr. Kuznetsov sits, he can''t see what everyone is fussing over, so he starts to move to get a better look. You quickly snap back up, adjust your skirt and with a devious smile and cloth in hand, you start wiping away at the board as if nothing happened.'
 			else
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
@@ -982,7 +985,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_9.jpg"></center>' 
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Viktoria is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some of those stockings and if you can afford them.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to begin, you can''t help but admire the expensive looking stockings Viktoria is wearing. With a tinge of jealousy, you wonder where you could buy yourself some and if you can afford them.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/urok7.jpg"></center>'
@@ -990,9 +993,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Dan''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear Mr Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear Mr Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan snickering behind you. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1006,7 +1009,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A10'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Kuznetsov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Mr Kuznetsov gives Dan a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr. Kuznetsov, Dan is grabbing my breasts." Mr Kuznetsov gives Dan a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Dan denies it, but Mr Kuznetsov doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1033,7 +1036,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Kuznetsov and turn around and slap Dan with all your force. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mr Kuznetsov''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1041,7 +1044,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan snickering behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -1057,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A10'] += 2
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobgr.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Dan, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Kuznetsov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Dan, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Kuznetsov, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -1067,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your hard clitoris through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually, you get bored of it and shift the fabric to the side to get access to your bare pussy and insert your two middle fingers. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1077,7 +1080,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Dan''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is too tempting and you abandon your pencil for your two middle fingers to penetrate your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Dan seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Dan squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Dan''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Kuznetsov say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you, Mr Kuznetsov. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1090,8 +1093,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Dan behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan snickering behind you. Mr Kuznetsov looks at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1115,7 +1118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head at Mr. Kuznetsov and desperately want to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with Mr Kuznetsov now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mr. Kuznetsov, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with Mr Kuznetsov now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end			
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1132,7 +1135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Kuznetsov and turn around and slap Dan with all your force. Dan recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
 					'Mr Kuznetsov''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Come and see me after school."'
-					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Dan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1153,7 +1156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class, you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Dimka':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -1222,7 +1225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'The lesson takes a brief pause as one of the students asks Mr Kuznetsov a question about her paper. With nothing to do for the moment, you doodle lazily in the margin of your notebook.'
 			'When you look back up, you notice Marcus turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mr Kuznetsov walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Marcus again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/closeshirtfo.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1246,7 +1249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 12 and hotcat => 6:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/shop/nushpussy.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to end, you glance around bored. You notice Anushka looking back at you, but you think nothing of it. When you meet her eyes again, she grins and reaches down between her legs as she spreads them apart and she turns to face you. She pulls her panties aside to reveal her pussy and gives you a amused smirk as your eyes drift down to her hand movements. You hear Mr Kuznetsov clear his throat and you look back to the front of class. When you glance back later, she is sitting normally again and either doesn''t notice your glance or is ignoring it.'
+			'As you sit in class waiting for the lesson to end, you glance around bored. You notice Anushka looking back at you, but you think nothing of it. When you meet her eyes again, she grins, reaches down between her legs and spreads them apart before turning to face you. She pulls her panties aside to reveal her pussy and gives you an amused smirk as your eyes drift down to her hand movements. You hear Mr Kuznetsov clear his throat and you look back to the front of class. When you glance back later, she is sitting normally again and either doesn''t notice your glance or is ignoring it.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1255,7 +1258,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/shop/paulnushhump.jpg"></center>'
 			'Near the end of class, Mr Kuznetsov tells the class to study quietly as he leaves class a few minutes early. Of course, once he is gone no one listens and everyone starts wandering around messing with the tools. Meanwhile, Anushka starts to tease Fedor, asking him if he wants to fuck her until she makes him blush. When he finally admits he is attracted to her, Paulina swoops in behind Anushka, pushes into her and pulls up the back of her skirt.'
 			*nl
-			'She starts pounding her hips against Anushka''s ass. "Oh Anushka you''re so hot, I have always wanted to fuck you." Paulina says, obviously trying to sound like Fedor, Anushka plays along. "Oh Fedor, you have such an almost average sized dick, it almost feels good." This gets the rest of class laughing and Fedor blushing even more. His humiliation ends when the bell rings.'
+			'She starts pounding her hips against Anushka''s ass. "Oh Anushka you''re so hot, I have always wanted to fuck you." Paulina says, obviously trying to sound like Fedor, and Anushka plays along. "Oh Fedor, you have such an almost average sized dick! It almost feels good!" This gets the rest of class laughing and Fedor blushing even more. His humiliation ends when the bell rings.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1309,7 +1312,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You open your mouth and start to speak, but as you do, he suddenly rockets out of his chair, standing up and leaning across his desk. Before you have time to react, he grabs you by your tie and jerks you closer to him. "Did I fucking tell you you can speak? You will speak when I tell you to and you will by God learn to respect or at least fear me!"'
+			'You open your mouth and start to speak, but as you do, he suddenly rockets out of his chair and leans across his desk. Before you have time to react, he grabs you by your tie and jerks you closer to him. "Did I fucking tell you you can speak? You will speak when I tell you to and you will by God learn to respect or at least fear me!"'
 			act 'Punishment':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -1322,11 +1325,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 					end
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'rough'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'butt plugged':
+					act 'Plugged':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop4.jpg"></center>'
-						'"You think your some bad little girl? Well I will show you what happens to bad little girls!" With one hand he pulls your cheeks apart and before you even have a chance to protest, he shoves the unlubriated butt plug up your ass. It hurts and really doesn''t want to slide in, but by sheer brute force he forces it in. You wince in pain as he does.'
+						'"You think you''re some bad little girl, huh? Well I will show you what happens to bad little girls!" With one hand he pulls your cheeks apart and before you even have a chance to protest, he shoves the unlubriated butt plug up your ass. It hurts and really doesn''t want to slide in, he forces it in with sheer brute force. You wince in pain as he does.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5, 'rough', 'maso'
 						gs 'pain', 'asshole', 1, 'stretch'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1334,7 +1337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 10
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop5.jpg"></center>'
-							'Once he has the plug fully seated up your ass, he pulls over a chair and sits down. He roughly grabs you, bends you over his knee and proceeds to spank you open handed. Not only does each swat sting, but each swat also jams the plug up your butt to its base. You grit your teeth and bare the pain.'
+							'Once he has the plug fully seated up your ass, he pulls over to a chair and sits down. He roughly grabs you, bends you over his knee and proceeds to spank you. Not only does each swat sting, but each swat also jams the plug up your ass to its base. You grit your teeth and bare the pain.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5, 'rough', 'maso'
 							gs 'pain', 'asscheeks', 2, 'spank'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1357,14 +1360,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 										*clr & cla
 										minut += 5
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop8.jpg"></center>'
-										'Several minutes pass as he fucks your mouth, only for him to abruptly stop. He walks around the desk and roughly grabs hold of the butt plug in your ass and yanks it out, causing you to gasp in pain before you close your mouth again. He shoves the butt plug in your mouth. "That''s it bitch, suck that plug clean." He fucks your mouth with the butt plug as you try not to think about where it just was.'
+										'Several minutes pass as he fucks your mouth, only for him to abruptly stop. He walks around the desk, roughly grabs hold of the butt plug in your ass and yanks it out, causing you to gasp in pain before you close your mouth again. He shoves the butt plug in your mouth. "That''s it bitch, suck that plug clean." He fucks your mouth with the butt plug as you try not to think about where it just was.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'bound', 'deepthroat'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'No lube':
 											*clr & cla
 											minut += 10
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop9.jpg"></center>'
-											'With the plug nice and clean, he pulls it out of your mouth and drops it on the desk. He rolls you onto your back and uses one hand to pull your butt cheeks apart. Seconds later, you feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock against your loosened asshole. He just shoves it in, the only thing making the pain bearable is the butt plug having already stretched it out and your saliva acting as lube.'
+											'With the plug nice and clean, he pulls it out of your mouth and drops it on the desk. He rolls you onto your back and uses one hand to pull your ass cheeks apart. Seconds later, you feel the head of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock against your loosened asshole. He just shoves it in, the only thing making the pain bearable is the butt plug having already stretched it out and your saliva acting as lube.'
 											'It takes him a couple of minutes of roughly fucking your ass to finally shove his dick balls deep inside you. Once he does, he begins to pound your ass hard and furiously.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'bound'
 											gs 'pain', 'asshole', 1, 'stretch'
@@ -1373,16 +1376,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 												*clr & cla
 												minut += 10
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop10.jpg"></center>'
-												'After several minutes, you can feel your saliva not offering much in the way of lubrication anymore. Apparently he can as well. Maybe out of pity, or more likely because it feels better for him with a little lubrication, he pulls his dick out of your ass and takes off his pants. Once naked, he climbs up on the desk and straddles your chest. He grabs you by the hair and painfully yanks on your head while shoving his dick back in your mouth.'
+												'After several minutes, your saliva isn''t offering much in the way of lubrication anymore. Maybe out of pity, or more likely because it feels better for him with a little lubrication, he pulls his dick out of your ass and takes off his pants. Once naked, he climbs up on the desk and straddles your chest. He grabs you by the hair and painfully yanks on your head while shoving his dick back in your mouth.'
 												*nl
-												'He moans slightly. "You best suck it clean and get it nice and wet, because that is the last lubrication you''re going to get." He starts fucking your face, going balls down in your mouth again. You gag repeatedly, but do your best to coat his dick with your slobber.'
+												'He moans slightly. "You best suck it clean and get it nice and wet, because that is the last lubrication you''re going to get." He starts fucking your face, going balls down in your mouth again. You gag repeatedly, but do your best to coat his dick with your drool.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'bound', 'deepthroat'
 												gs 'stat'
-												act 'Lots of slobber':
+												act 'Anal':
 													*clr & cla
 													minut += 15
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop11.jpg"></center>'
-													'Once satisfied, he crawls back off the desk and unties your legs, then he promptly flips you over onto your stomach and half pulls you off the desk until you are bent over it. He lifts your right leg, bending it and places your knee on the desk. With your ass nice and spread by your position, you feel him shove his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock back into your ass. This time, it is not nearly as bad. Your asshole already stretched out and with fresh slobber for lubrication, it slides it pretty easily and he bottoms out balls deep inside you. He begins to pound your ass again.'
+													'Once satisfied, he crawls back off the desk and unties your legs. He promptly flips you over onto your stomach and half pulls you off the desk until you are bent over it. He lifts your right leg and places your knee on the desk. With your ass nice and spread by your position, you feel him shove his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock back inside you. This time, it is not nearly as bad. Your asshole already stretched out and with fresh saliva for lubrication, it slides in pretty easily and he bottoms out balls deep inside you. He begins to pound your ass again.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'bound'
 													gs 'pain', 'asshole', 1, 'stretch'
 													gs 'stat'
@@ -1390,7 +1393,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 														*clr & cla
 														minut += 4
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop12.jpg"></center>'
-														'The lubrication from your slobber seems to have completely faded away, yet he doesn''t stop. It is starting to hurt again when he finally pulls back out of your ass. He rolls you back over onto your back and spins you around on his desk so your head is next to him. He forces his dick back into your mouth, making you suck him clean again. He pulls back out and says. "Open you mouth and keep it open slut." Doing as you are told, he jerks his dick a few times before you feel the streams of cum shooting into your mouth.'
+														'The lubrication from your drool seems to have completely faded away, yet he doesn''t stop. It is starting to hurt again when he finally pulls back out of your ass. He rolls you back over onto your back and spins you around on his desk so your head is next to him. He forces his dick back into your mouth, making you suck him clean again. He pulls back out and says "Open you mouth and keep it open slut." Doing as you are told, he jerks his dick a few times before you feel the streams of cum shooting into your mouth.'
 														*nl
 														'Several spurts of cum later, he lets go of you and gets dressed. Once he is finally fully dressed, he unties your hands and pulls you off the desk roughly, causing you to fall roughly to your knees. He throws your clothes at you as he sits back down at his desk. "Get the fuck out of my office, I don''t expect to see you in here again. If I do, then I will keep showing you what happens to bad little girls until you get it. Now get the fuck out!"'
 														if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1414,7 +1417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop_punishment':
 						end
 					end
 				else
-					'He quickly walks around his desk and once he is standing next to you, he shoves you forward, bending you over his desk. He pulls up your skirt and violently yanks down your panties. You can hear the tearing fabric as he does. He gives your bare ass one hard open handed swat that stings. He lays into your ass, smacking about a dozen times until he leaves it red and stinging. With tears in your eyes, he finally stops, pulls you up by your tie and shoves you towards the door. "Now get out of here and start behaving in my class." You put you clothes back in place as best you can and then walk out.'
+					'He quickly walks around his desk and once he is standing next to you, he shoves you forward, bending you over his desk. He pulls up your skirt and violently yanks down your panties. You can hear the tearing fabric as he does. He gives your bare ass one hard open handed swat that stings. He lays into your ass, smacking about a dozen times until he leaves it red and stinging. With tears in your eyes, he finally stops, pulls you up by your tie and shoves you towards the door. "Now get out of here and start behaving in my class!" You put your clothes back in place as best you can and then walk out.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'rough'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'spank'

locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # gschool_lessonsev3
+!This file contains the class events for literature,
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 	*clr & cla
@@ -15,7 +16,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big4.jpg"></center>'
 			'"What''s wrong, Igor? Why don''t you call me a slut like you and Dimka did to my friend yesterday!"'
 			*nl
-			'You look up to see Lizaveta and her clique surrounding Igor like wolves cornering their prey. Even from where you''re sitting, you can see how tense and rigid his body is as he keeps his head hung low, doing his best to ignore them by focusing on his school work, but Lizaveta demands his full attention. Before he can react, she snatches the paper out from under his pen and holds it above his head.'
+			'You look up to see Lizaveta and her friends surrounding Igor like wolves cornering their prey. Even from where you''re sitting, you can see how tense and rigid his body is as he keeps his head hung low, doing his best to ignore them by focusing on his school work, but Lizaveta demands his full attention. Before he can react, she snatches the paper out from under his pen and holds it above his head.'
 			*nl
 			'"Dimka is the only reason you''re considered popular!" she hisses before leaning in closer. "If it weren''t for him, you''d be nothing but a cum dump for all the boys in the school. I''m sure you''d love it, especially if that meant you''d get fucked by Dimka."'
 			*nl
@@ -88,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Ms Braakman poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Ms Braakman that, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Ms Braakman poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forget that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Ms Braakman that, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
@@ -104,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/work.jpg"></center>'
-			'Ms Braakman has the class working in pairs for today, so everyone has their desks pushed together, side by side with their partner''s. You''ve been paired together with Roman, and as usual he isn''t doing any of the work; instead he''s scribbling crudely drawn pictures in his notebook.'
+			'Ms Braakman has the class working in pairs today, so everyone has their desks pushed together, side by side with their partner''s. You''ve been paired together with Roman, and as usual he isn''t doing any of the work; instead he''s scribbling crudely drawn pictures in his notebook.'
 			act 'Get to work':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/events/roman_touch.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -190,7 +191,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big152.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you overhear Feofan excitedly telling a boy about the last convention he went to.'
+			'During class, you overhear Feofan excitedly telling a boy about the last convention he attended.'
 			'"Feofan, not to be rude, but I don''t really care." the boy says.'
 			'"Just wait, I haven''t gotten to the best part!" Feofan says before continuing. You can''t tell if he lacks self-awareness or is just really thick.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -250,7 +251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 		'"Screw reading! <<$pcs_nickname>>''s mouth is better suited for sucking cock." you overhear someone say from behind you. You turn around and it''s none other than Petia staring back at you. Unashamed, a perverted smile spreads across his face. You get the feeling he''s undressing you with his eyes.'
 		act 'Say nothing':
 			*clr & cla			
-			'Unable to respond, you turn around without confronting him. You hear him chuckle and mutter something incoherent under his breath, but he doesn''t say anything else for the remaining class period. Replaying the encounter in your head, a part of you wonders if saying nothing was the right thing to do.'
+			'Unable to respond, you turn around without confronting him. You hear him chuckle and mutter something incoherent under his breath, but he doesn''t say anything else for the remainder of class. Replaying the encounter in your head, a part of you wonders if saying nothing was the right thing to do.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Blush':
@@ -273,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 				grupvalue[2] -= 1
 				grupvalue[3] -= 1
 				npc_rel['A159'] += 2
-				'"You''re right, and I''m pretty damn good at it, too!" you say with a playful smile. A few kids nearby overhear you and start to whisper amongst themselves, the girls quick to bash you and the guys eagerly wanting to put your skills to the test. Before you know it, the whole class is stealing glances at you, some looking disgusted, others lustful. You''re sure that by the end of the day, the whole school will know about how proud you are of your cocksucking skills.'
+				'"You''re right, and I''m pretty damn good at it, too!" you say with a playful smile. A few nearby students overhear you and start to whisper amongst themselves, the girls quick to bash you and the guys eagerly wanting to put your skills to the test. Before you know it, the whole class is stealing glances at you, some looking disgusted, others lustful. You''re sure that by the end of the day, the whole school will know about how proud you are of your cocksucking skills.'
 				cla
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -295,13 +296,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 				grupvalue[4] += 1
 				pcs_mood += 10
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"Fuck off pig!" you warn, jaw clenched and eyes narrowed. As if he had been slapped across the face, Petia''s expression falls and is replaced by a mixture of surprise and fear as he cowers slightly under your heated gaze.'
+				'"Fuck off you fat, disgusting pig!" you shout, jaw clenched and eyes narrowed. As if he had been slapped across the face, Petia''s expression falls and is replaced by a mixture of surprise and fear as he cowers slightly under your heated gaze.'
 				*nl
 				'"I was just joking..." he says quietly while sinking back into his seat.'
 				*nl
 				'"Damn <<$pcs_nickname>> isn''t fucking around." Anushka marvels, giving you a nod of approval.'
-				'"Just hit that fat piece of shit, no one''s going to care." Roman comments as he turns to face Petia with a scowl.'
-				'"Jesus Christ, when are you gonna realize no one likes you, especially chicks!?" Arkadi adds, his lips curled back in disgust. Before you know it, the three gopniks have zeroed in on the outcast, giving him a verbal lashing he''ll spend all day recovering from.'
+				'"Just hit that fat piece of shit! Nobody''s going to care." Roman comments as he turns to face Petia with a scowl.'
+				'"Jesus Christ, when are you gonna realize no one fucking likes you, especially chicks!?" Arkadi adds, his lips curled back in disgust. Before you know it, the three gopniks have zeroed in on the outcast, giving him a verbal lashing he''ll spend all day recovering from.'
 				act 'Get back to work':
 					*clr & cla
 					'Leaving it to the gopniks to finish what you started, you go back to work.'
@@ -330,9 +331,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 				grupvalue[1] += 1
 				grupvalue[3] -= 1
 				grupvalue[4] += 1
-				'"You''re too fat to even see your own dick, so what would you know about blowjobs, besides being a pro at giving them?" Your smile drops as the last words are spoken. There''s a moment of stunned silence before laughter breaks out in the class. Watching Petia''s face flush bright red as he struggles to defend himself fills you with a smug satisfaction.'
+				'"You''re too fat to even see your own dick, so what would you know about blowjobs besides being a pro at giving them?" you say with a mocking smile. There''s a moment of stunned silence before laughter breaks out in the class. Watching Petia''s face flush bright red as he struggles to defend himself fills you with a smug satisfaction.'
 				*nl
-				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>! I don''t want to hear that kind of language in my class!" Ms Braakman shouts, barely managing to speak above the noise in the class.'
+				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! I don''t want to hear that kind of language in my class!" Ms Braakman shouts, barely managing to speak above the noise in the class.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -367,8 +368,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 		act 'Apologize':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big137.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I'' really sorry, Ms Braakman. I promise not to do it again."'
-			'Ms Braakman says nothing for what feels like an eternity, until she finally lets out a heavy sigh, "Don''t do it again." she says, holding your phone out. With a grateful smile, you take it and quickly make your way to the door before she can change her mind.'
+			'"I''m really sorry, Ms Braakman. I promise not to do it again."'
+			'Ms Braakman says nothing for what feels like an eternity, until she finally lets out a heavy sigh. "Don''t do it again." she says, holding your phone out. With a grateful smile, you take it and quickly make your way to the door before she can change her mind.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -378,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/raven/angry.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Whatever, can I just have my phone back?" You sigh, crossing your arms over your chest as you roll your eyes impatiently.'
+				'"Whatever, can I just have my phone back?" you moan, crossing your arms over your chest as you roll your eyes impatiently.'
 				'Ms Braakman''s expression darkens as she stands from her seat, the sound of the chair scraping against the floor cutting through the silence like a knife. As she comes out from behind her desk, you notice she''s holding something in her hand. It isn''t until she''s standing a few steps away that you realize it''s the long wooden pointer she uses during class.'
 				'"I think that answers my question." she says, her voice low and oddly calm. "Turn around, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 				act 'Obey':
@@ -399,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 							*nl
 							'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spreading across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 							*nl
-							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					else
@@ -419,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 							*nl
 							'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spreading across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 							*nl
-							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+							'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					end
@@ -446,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 								*nl
 								'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spread across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 								*nl
-								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling up your panties. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
@@ -468,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getphone':
 								*nl
 								'By the end of the caning, you''ve collapsed completely onto the desk, your sensitive flesh throbbing and covered with bright red welts. Ms Braakman steps back to admire her work, a twisted smile spreading across her face as she listens to your muffled whimpers.'
 								*nl
-								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_nickname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
+								'"Clean yourself up fast Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t want to be late to your next class." she says, her voice dripping with smug satisfaction as your phone is dropped onto the desk you''re still bent over. Slowly, you stand up straight and use the back of your hand to wipe away the tears before carefully pulling your skirt back down. Grabbing your phone, you keep your head hung low as you inch your way to the door and down the hallway to your next class, trying your best to hide the pain.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
 						end
@@ -497,7 +498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Bella looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Bella looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s currently sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/badlanguage.jpg"></center>'
@@ -531,7 +532,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 1
 					grupvalue[1] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/badlanguage.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Sure, repeat after me: I''m a worthless cock-sleeve who enjoys being a cumdump to all the boys in school."'
+					'"Sure, repeat after me: I''m a worthless cock-sleeve who enjoys being a cum dump to all the boys in school."'
 					'Lera and Lena seem surprised with how much you say, but you reassure them it''s a really good insult; the worst of the worst. With a smile, they repeat the sentence, completely unaware of what they''re actually saying.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -548,7 +549,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big15.jpg"></center>'
-				'Vicky taps you on the shoulder and shows you a small makeup bag, "Want me to put some makeup on you? Katja showed me some tips last night and I''m looking to try them out on someone." she asks. "Other than myself, that is." she adds with a laugh.'
+				'Vicky taps you on the shoulder and shows you a small makeup bag. "Want me to put some makeup on you? Katja showed me some tips last night and I''m looking to try them out on someone." she asks. "Other than myself, that is." she adds with a laugh.'
 				act 'Decline':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A15'] -=1
@@ -562,7 +563,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					npc_rel['A15'] +=1
 					pcs_makeup = 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/eavesdrop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod your head and Vicky is quick to situate herself in front of you. She''s hesitant at first, but as she works she starts to gain confidence. She doesn''t do anything too crazy, and when you look at yourself in her little pocket mirror, you''re quite pleased with the freshly applied light makeup.'
+					'You nod your head and Vicky is quick to place herself in front of you. She''s hesitant at first, but as she works she starts to gain confidence. She doesn''t do anything too crazy, and when you look at yourself in her little pocket mirror, you''re quite pleased with the freshly applied light makeup.'
 					'"Wow, this looks really good. You''re a natural." you tell her. Vicky''s face lights up and she gives you a quick hug before returning to her seat.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -590,9 +591,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					npc_rel['A141'] +=1
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/eavesdrop.jpg"></center>'
-					'"You''re all just jealous that Veronika has more talent in her big toe than all of you combined." you say with a smirk. "It must really scare you knowing that she''s going to do something with her life while the rest of you will end up pregnant before your 21st birthday, by a deadbeat who will see you as nothing more than a warm hole he can stick his dick in."'
+					'"You''re all just jealous that Veronika actually has a talent that isn''t dick riding." you say with a smirk. "It must really scare you knowing that she''s going to do something with her life, while the rest of you will end up pregnant before your 21st birthday by a deadbeat who will see you as nothing more than a warm hole he can stick his dick in."'
 					*nl
-					'The girls are staring at you in silence and Veronika is looking at you in disbelief. Did you go too far? You start to worry you did something wrong, but then you notice the smallest hint of a smile on Veronika''s face.'
+					'The girls are staring at you in stunned silence and Veronika is looking at you in disbelief. Did you go too far? You start to worry you did something wrong, but then you notice the smallest hint of a smile on Veronika''s face.'
 					'"S-screw you <<$pcs_nickname>>!" one of the girls stutters as she and her group quickly retreat with their tails between their legs.'
 					cla
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -623,14 +624,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/lenler.jpg"></center>'
-			'Ms Braakman leaves near the end of class and tells everyone to study quietly. As soon as she is out the door, everyone starts talking or getting up. Lena and Lera go up to sit on the teacher''s desk, talking to Radomir. When Radomir starts flirting with Lena, she returns it in kind when Lera suddenly turns and kisses Lena full on the lips in a long, slow and passionate kiss which Lena returns. Most of the other students hoot, holler or whistle encouragements to them. They keep making out for a couple of minutes until the bell that ends class rings.'
+			'Ms Braakman leaves near the end of class and tells everyone to study quietly. As soon as she is out the door, everyone starts talking or getting up. Lena and Lera go up to sit on the teacher''s desk, talking to Radomir. When Radomir starts flirting with Lena, she returns it in kind when Lera suddenly turns and kisses Lena on the lips in a long, slow and passionate kiss which Lena returns. Most of the other students hoot, holler or whistle encouragements to them. They keep making out for a couple of minutes until the bell that ends class rings.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/lenlerbras.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class Lena, Lera and Radomir are talking. He is bragging about some girl he banged recently, Lena and Lera exchange looks and then pull their shirts open to show off their bra''s. This causes Radomir to stammer in mid sentence as he gets distracted by the boobs neatly on display in front of him. After he stops talking, they laugh and pull their shirts closed, which causes him to grumble.'
+			'Near the end of class Lena, Lera and Radomir are talking. As he is bragging about some girl he banged recently, Lena and Lera exchange looks and then pull their shirts open to show off their bras. This causes Radomir to stammer in mid sentence as he gets distracted by the boobs neatly on display in front of him. After he stops talking, they laugh and pull their shirts closed, which causes him to grumble.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -638,7 +639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10 and hotcat => 5:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/leraeatme.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice Lera squirming around in her seat during class and decide to see what''s wrong. "What''s up" you ask.'
+			'You notice Lera squirming around in her seat during class and decide to see what''s wrong. "What''s up?" you ask.'
 			'She glances at you and seems like she is about to have a sharp retort, but then closes her mouth and seems to really look at you and then says "Nothing you couldn''t fix for me." She sticks her tongue out between two of her fingers in the universal ''eat me'' sign. You can''t help but blush a little as it caught you a little off guard, as Lera seems to only pays attention to Lena. Before you can reply though, Ms Braakman clears her throat and gets you both looking forward again. She spends the rest the class keeping an eye on both of you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -678,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'working':
 				npc_rel['A154'] -=1
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				'You frown and shake your head. "Seriously?" he asks, genuinely surprised by your refusal, which doesn''t come as a surprise. He seems to think everyone is obsessed with him, especially the girls.'
-				'Radomir''s eyes narrow as he leans back into his seat. "Well...fuck you." he curses. You shrug indifferently and go back to work.'
+				'Radomir''s eyes narrow as he leans back into his seat. "Well fuck you then." he curses. You shrug indifferently and go back to work.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -779,7 +780,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'working':
 				grupvalue[2] -= 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"Sorry, but I''ve still got a lot to finish," you reply, pointing to your own work. Ivan''s smile fades and he looks disappointed, but he shrugs his shoulders and leaves you alone.'
+				'"Sorry, but I''ve still got a lot to finish." you reply, pointing to your own work. Ivan''s smile fades and he looks disappointed, but he shrugs his shoulders and leaves you alone.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -798,19 +799,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help_radomir':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 		npc_rel['A3'] += 1
 		*nl
-		'After awhile, Radomir hands you back your paper, "Thanks babe." he says, once again winking at you.'
+		'After a while, Radomir hands you back your paper. "Thanks babe." he says, once again winking at you.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 		pcs_mood -= 10
 		*nl
-		'Radomir has had your paper for awhile, so you turn around to see what''s taking him so long, but he''s busy talking to someone behind him. Your paper is sitting on his desk, and it looks like he hasn''t finished copying your answers.'
+		'Radomir has had your paper for a while, so you turn around to see what''s taking him so long, but he''s busy talking to someone behind him. Your paper is sitting on his desk, and it looks like he hasn''t finished copying your answers.'
 		act 'Take your work back':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A3'] -=2
 			'Fed up, you take your paper back. He doesn''t notice at first, but when he finally turns back around and sees it missing, he starts to look for it. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think I lost your work."'
 			*nl
-			'"You didn''t lose it, I took it back since you weren''t doing anything with it." you reply. Hearing this, Radomir tries to explain that he had just turned around for a moment and asks you to give him another chance, but you refuse. Angry, he mutters something under his breath before leaving you alone.'
+			'"You didn''t lose it. I took it back since you weren''t doing anything with it." you reply. Hearing this, Radomir tries to explain that he had just turned around for a moment and asks you to give him another chance, but you refuse. Angry, he mutters something under his breath before leaving you alone.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Wait for him to finish':
@@ -830,9 +831,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help_radomir':
 		npc_rel['A154'] +=2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big154.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'Radomir taps you on the shoulder, "Hey, I think someone stole your paper," he says. You stare at him for a moment, unsure if this is some kind of joke or if he''s telling the truth. "Yeah, I think it''s gone. Damn...I didn''t even get to finish copying. I wonder if Bella will let me borrow hers..."'
+		'Radomir taps you on the shoulder. "Hey, I think someone stole your paper." he says. You stare at him for a moment, unsure if this is some kind of joke or if he''s telling the truth. "Yeah, I think it''s gone. Damn...I didn''t even get to finish copying. I wonder if Bella will let me borrow hers..."'
 		'"Was it stolen or did you lose it, Radomir?" you ask with a glare.'
-		'Again, Radomir shrugs his shoulders, "I might have lost it, who knows. Just go get another sheet and start over." he says with a laugh as he gets up and makes his way over to Bella. Taking his advice, you quickly try to fill out another worksheet, but you only manage to get it halfway done before class is over. Ms Braakman isn''t pleased and gives you a bad mark for today.'
+		'Again, Radomir shrugs his shoulders. "I might have lost it, who knows. Just go get another sheet and start over." he says with a laugh as he gets up and makes his way over to Bella. Taking his advice, you quickly try to fill out another worksheet, but you only manage to get it halfway done before class is over. Ms Braakman isn''t pleased and gives you a bad mark for today.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 		npc_rel['A154'] +=1
@@ -871,7 +872,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk to class, you see Valentin and Radomir have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
+			'As you walk into class, you see Valentin and Radomir have drawn a goofy scene on the blackboard, making it look like they''re characters in a computer game. You share a laugh with them as you sit down; that certainly brightened your mood.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -885,7 +886,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex',  2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forget that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
@@ -897,7 +898,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_6_2.jpg"></center>'
 				end
-				'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself, "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
+				'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -907,9 +908,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Radomir''s hand away, but he jerked it away as soon as you squeaked and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand slide around your side and grab one of your boobs. You squeak loudly and try to smack Radomir''s hand away, but he jerks it away and all you manage to do is smack your own boob.'
 			*nl
-			'You hear you Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir behind you is snickering. Mr Vasilyev looks at you curiously.'
+			'You hear you Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir snickering behind you. Mr Vasilyev looks at you curiously.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -923,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A154'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Radomir is grabbing my breasts." Mr Vasilyev gives Radomir a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Radomir is grabbing my breasts." Mr Vasilyev gives Radomir a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Radomir denies it, but Mr Vasilyev doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -934,7 +935,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				cla
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
-				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -950,8 +951,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					npc_rel['A154'] -= 3
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Vasilyev and turn around and slap Radomir with all your force. Radomir recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
-					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Radomir (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -959,7 +960,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Embarrassed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir behind you is snickering.'
+				'You squeak loudly as his fingers quickly pinch your sensitive nipple and your hand quickly flies to your breast to shield it from further attack. You hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir snickering behind you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Enjoy':
@@ -973,7 +974,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					act 'Come get some more':
 						cla
 						npc_rel['A154'] += 1
-						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Radomir, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back a few inches. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Vasilyev, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
+						'You bite your lip to silence the moan that wants to escape as you feel your molester''s fingers give your nipple a quick pinch before retreating. After the hand is gone, you move your hand to the opposite side of your face, as if to scratch an itch and simultaneously glance over your shoulder until your eye is on Radomir, who groped you. You give him a smile out of the corner of your mouth and use your index finger make a "Come here!" motion at him as you wink and scoot your chair back. His eyes fill with surprise and excitement and a few seconds after you turn back to face Mr Vasilyev, you feel his hand massaging your breast again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 						act 'Enjoy more':
 							cla
@@ -982,7 +983,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Radomir''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your hard clitoris through your quickly soaking panties. Eventually, you get bored of it and shift the fabric to the side to get access to your bare pussy and insert your two middle fingers. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches slightly, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurse''s office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -992,7 +993,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 								'Enjoying the feeling of Radomir''s hand massaging your breast and his fingers tweaking your nipple, you decide to take advantage of the opportunity. The pencil you were using to take notes goes under your skirt and begins to prod and play with your already exposed clitoris. But your bare pussy is too tempting and you abandon your pencil for your two middle fingers to penetrate your already dripping snatch. They easily slide between your wet lips and your breathing hitches, matching the rhythm of your pistoning fingers.'
 								*nl
-								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply, "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'Radomir seems to have caught on and starts to knead your breast and pull at your breast harder. In a moment of perfect coincidence, your pinch your clit right as Radomir squeezes your sensitive nipple and your knees fly together, your legs clenching hard in orgasm. You bite your lip hard as you ride out the waves and you feel Radomir''s hand slide away just before you hear Mr Vasilyev say "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Are you feeling alright? Do you need to go to the nurses office?" With confident eyes and a bright smile, you reply. "No thank you Mr Vasilyev. I''m perfectly alright."'
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10, 'exhibitionism'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1005,8 +1006,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7 and $braworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/brasnap.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull your bra strap away from your body and before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Lavrenti behind you.'
-			'Then you hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lavrenti behind you is snickering. Mr Vasilyev looks at you accusingly.'
+			'During class, you feel a hand grab and pull on your bra strap. Before you can turn or protest they let go, causing it to snap back painfully. You let out a little yelp and turn to glare at Lavrenti behind you.'
+			'Then you hear Mr Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lavrenti snickering behind you. Mr Vasilyev looks at you accusingly.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <=  pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell on him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1020,7 +1021,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 3
 					npc_rel['A155'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Lavrenti is snapping my bra stap." Mr Vasilyev gives Lavrenti a look. "Is this true?"'
+					'You straighten up and say "Yes Mr Vasilyev, Lavrenti is snapping my bra stap." Mr Vasilyev gives Lavrenti a disapproving look. "Is this true?"'
 					'Lavrenti denies it, but Mr Vasilyev doesn''t believe him and sends him to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -1032,11 +1033,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				npc_rel['A155'] += 1
-				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head at Mr Vasilyev, desperately wanting to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with Mr Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
 				if n_tanga = 3:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga5_6.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you sit in the classroom you hear Katja asking from behind you "<<$pcs_nickname>> I dropped my pen, be a dear and pick it up for me?" You sigh and look under her desk, immediately noticing her bare pussy between her widely spread legs. The little minx is doing it on purpose! A bit flustered, you pick up her pen and hand it back to her. When you do, she gives you an innocent grin and gets back to what she was doing as if nothing happened.'
+					'As you sit in the classroom, you hear Katja asking from behind you "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I dropped my pen. Be a dear and pick it up for me please?" You sigh and look under her desk, immediately noticing her bare pussy between her widely spread legs. The little minx is doing it on purpose! A bit flustered, you pick up her pen and hand it back to her. When you do, she gives you an innocent grin and gets back to what she was doing as if nothing happened.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				else
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1055,8 +1056,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					npc_rel['A155'] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/rand_scoolboy1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You ignore Mr Vasilyev and turn around and slap Lavrenti with all your force. Lavrenti recoils, his hand going to his cheek. Students start murmuring about what happened, while some laugh.'
-					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office."'
-					act 'Go to the Principals office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+					'Mr Vasilyev''s voice cuts through the noise. "That''s enough of that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Go to the principal''s office!"'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Slap Lavrenti (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1064,11 +1065,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'During class, there is a loud crashing sound from the back of the class. You along with everyone else in the class turn to look. In the back, Petia is still sitting at his desk, but now the desk is laying on its side on the floor. The whole class bursts out laughing at him.'
-			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is ok, Mr Vasilyev gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
+			'Petka, blushing, quickly gets out of the desk and gets it back upright and sits back down in it. After making sure he is OK, Mr Vasilyev gets the class back under control and finishes the lesson.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image. Opening the image, you see a picture of someone''s dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone. You pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image. Opening the image, you see a picture of someone''s dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1079,11 +1080,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Petia''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly, that looked like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained gasp, as do several others. You glance over just in time to see Lavrenti letting go of Petia''s underwear. He pulled it half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looked like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Katja':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -1113,7 +1114,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 				npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sit next to Valentinduring class. You spend much of the class talking quietly to each other, often getting looks from Mr. Vasilyev when you get to loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
+				'You sit next to Valentin during class. You spend much of the class talking quietly to each other, often getting looks from Mr. Vasilyev when you get to loud. He clears his throat a few times and even hushes you once, finally he tells you to be quiet or he will send you to the principals office.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Lariska':
@@ -1154,7 +1155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			'When you look back up, you notice Petia turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mr Vasilyev walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			*nl
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Petia again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Petia''s face turns red when he realizes he''s been caught, and he immediately turns back to face the blackboard.'
@@ -1193,7 +1194,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 17:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/music/larflute.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Mr Vasilyev is helping Petka, Lina and Lariska are talking about how to give a blowjob and they seem to disagree. After a few moments of heated but quiet debate, Lariska decides to show what she means on her flute. After showing how she means to give a blowjob on the flute, Lina comes around to her point of view. Several of the guys watchin also seem to agree with Lariska about how to give a blowjob.'
+			'As Mr Vasilyev is helping Petka, Lina and Lariska are talking about how to give a blowjob and they seem to disagree. After a few moments of heated but quiet debate, Lariska decides to show what she means on her flute. After showing what she means, Lina comes around to her point of view. Several of the guys watching also seem to agree with Lariska.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1205,7 +1206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/music/larlinpiggy.jpg"></center>'
-			'When the bell rings to end class and everyone starts to leave, Lina drops her books and Lariska uses the distraction to jump on her back. This causes Lina to fall down on her hands and knees while Lariska starts talking to her like a horse, telling her to giddy up and such.'
+			'When the bell rings to end class and everyone starts to leave, Lina drops her books and Lariska uses the distraction to jump on her back. This causes Lina to fall on her hands and knees while Lariska starts talking to her like a horse, telling her to giddy up and such.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1245,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Albina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. Currently she''s sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
+			'Irina looks like she has it all figured out. Her grades are excellent, all the guys in school like her, and she doesn''t have to answer to anyone. She''s currently sitting back in a chair, giving herself a manicure.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 3:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -1259,7 +1260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				gs 'exhibitionism', 2
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex',  2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_4_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean with, and totally forgot you are not wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
+				'Before you can answer the question Mr Vasilyev poses you, you have to clean the blackboard. You accidentally drop the cloth used to wipe it clean and totally forgot that you aren''t wearing panties. The whistling and shouting from the boys and murmurs of disapproval from most of the girls behind you tell you that everyone has a clear view of your bare ass and both of your holes are on display for everyone to see. Everyone but Mr Vasilyev that is, who has no clue why the class is so riled up and desperately tries to calm them down.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
@@ -1270,7 +1271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_6_1.jpg"></center>'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/scoolrand_6_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself, "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
+					'Katja is trying to draw your attention for some reason. When she notices you''re watching, she quickly makes sure no one else is paying attention and then puts one leg on her desk, revealing her bare pussy to you. You bite your lip and give her an appreciative nod as you think to yourself "Damn, I''ll have to take a closer look into that after classes are over!"'
 					gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1305,11 +1306,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/wedgieb.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a pained grasp, as did several others. You glance over just in time to see Anushka letting go of Zinaida''s panties sitting in front of her. She pulled the panties half way up Zinaida''s back. You wince slightly, that looks like a painful wedgie'
+			'You hear a pained grasp, as did several others. You glance over just in time to see Dan letting go of Petia''s underwear. He pulled the panties half way up his back. You wince slightly at what looks like a painful wedgie.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand =< 11:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to.'
+			'As you arrive in class you look around and decided to sit next to...'
 			act 'Erast':
 				*clr & cla
 				chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
@@ -1396,7 +1397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			'When you look back up, you notice Feofan turning his head away. You don''t think much of it at first, until you catch him a second time. Was he looking at you, or just in your direction? Even Mr Vasilyev walks by and pauses next to your desk for a moment before continuing on.'
 			*nl
 			'Class resumes, and things return to normal, but part-way through the lesson, you look to Feofan again, and find him staring at you. He''s clearly not trying to make eye contact, however, or he would have noticed you looking back at him.'
-			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good look at your cleavage.'
+			'Following his gaze down, you spot what''s caught his attention: your uniform has lost a button, which is giving him a good view of your cleavage.'
 			act 'Pull your shirt closed':
 				cla
 				'You quickly grasp both sides of your blouse and pull them tightly together. Feofan''s face turns red when he realizes he''s been caught, and he immediately turns back to face the blackboard.'
@@ -1421,7 +1422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/natpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'Natasha asks Anushka if she can borrow a pencil as she seems to have lost hers. Anushka agrees and offers her one, but keeps pulling it slightly out of reach of Natasha, who keeps stretching to reach it. When she is half standing up in her desk to reach forward to grab it, By the time Natasha grabs the pencil from Anushka, she has given everyone behind her a nice look at her panty clad ass.'
+			'Natasha asks Anushka if she can borrow a pencil as she seems to have lost hers. Anushka agrees and offers her one, but keeps pulling it slightly out of reach of Natasha, who keeps stretching forward to reach it. By the time Natasha grabs the pencil from Anushka, she has given everyone behind her a nice look at her panty clad ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1436,7 +1437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Next picture':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/julnushalbvic2.jpg"></center>'
-				'As Feofan kneels to take their picture again, Mr Vasilyev watches, looking pleased at Feofan''s serious take on taking pictures. Julia, Albina, and Vicky pose seriously again while Anushka doesn''t stick her tongue out this time, but instead lifts up the front of her skirt to show off her panties.'
+				'As Feofan kneels to take their picture again, Mr Vasilyev watches, looking pleased at Feofan''s seriousness. Julia, Albina and Vicky pose seriously again while Anushka doesn''t stick her tongue out this time, but instead lifts up the front of her skirt to show off her panties.'
 				*nl
 				'Feofan blushes as Mr Vasilyev speaks up. "That''s enough of that Miss Konstantinov."'
 				'Anushka gives him an innocent look. "What? Isn''t this art class?"'
@@ -1444,7 +1445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				'Anushka gives him a sweet smile and rattles off names of artists. "Is their artwork not appropriate art?"'
 				'Mr Vasilyev looks surprised by the question. "Those are some classic artists. Of course there is nothing wrong with their work."'
 				*nl
-				'She then smiles, as if she expected that responce. "Yes, but doesn''t some of their work show nudity? I only showed my panties, so why is their work OK and this isn''t?"'
+				'She then smiles, as if she expected that response. "Yes, but doesn''t some of their work show nudity? I only showed my panties, so why is their work OK and this isn''t?"'
 				'Mr Vasilyev gives a bone weary sigh and starts trying to explain why art can show many things, but not everything is appropriate for school. It seems to be a losing discussion and you are sure Anushka is just yanking his chain for the fun of it. The rest of the class quickly loses interest in the discussion and goes back to doing their own thing.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1453,7 +1454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/vickypanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice Erast paying special attention to Vicky today and it seems she has noticed as well. At one point, she turns to sit sideways in her desk and spreads her legs, causing her skirt to ride up until it gives Erast a very nice view of her panties. His eyes get big as she giggles, straightens her skirt back in place and turns back to the front of class.'
+			'You notice Erast paying special attention to Vicky today and it seems she has noticed as well. At one point, she turns to sit sideways in her desk and spreads her legs, causing her skirt to ride up until it gives Erast a very nice view of her panties. His eyes grow wide as she giggles, straightens her skirt back in place and turns back to the front of class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1461,7 +1462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		elseif scooltiperand = 16:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/nushvic.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, when Mr Vasilyev lets the class have some free time to experiment with their own artwork, some of the girls get together to gossip about boys. Vicky starts talking about a date her and Vanya recently went on, she even goes so far as to act out a little bit of it. At one point, she bends over and talks about how she was rubbing her butt against Vanya''s crotch while dancing, but before she can say what Vanya did, Anushka steps up behind her, grabs her hips and starts dry humping her. "This is what he was wanting to do to you." She gets all the girls to crack up, most agreeing that is all any boy talks about.'
+			'Near the end of class, when Mr Vasilyev lets the class have some free time to experiment with their own artwork, some of the girls get together to gossip about boys. Vicky starts talking about a date her and Vanya recently went on, even going so far as to act out a little bit of it. At one point, she bends over and talks about how she was rubbing her butt against Vanya''s crotch while dancing, but before she can say what Vanya did, Anushka steps up behind her, grabs her hips and starts dry humping her. "This is what he was wanting to do to you." She gets all the girls to crack up, most agreeing that is all any boy talks about.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1485,7 +1486,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				*clr & cla
 				if hotcat => 6:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/nushpanties2.jpg"></center>'
-					'When she notices you looking, she gives you a little kissy face and then reaches down to her panties and pulls them aside to show you her bald pussy, smiling at you. Before you can look away, you hear Mr Vasilyev clear his throat. When you glance to him, he gives you a stern look. "Please pay attention Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know art history is a bit dry and boring, but this will be on your test." You nod to him and as he goes back to the lecture, you glance back and see that Anushka is now sitting normally.'
+					'When she notices you looking, she gives you a little kissy face and then reaches down to her panties and pulls them aside to show you her bald pussy, smiling at you. Before you can look away, you hear Mr Vasilyev clear his throat. When you glance to him, he gives you a stern look. "Please pay attention Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know art history is a bit dry and boring, but this will be in your test." You nod to him and as he goes back to the lecture, you glance back and see that Anushka is now sitting normally.'
 				else
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/art/nushpanties1.jpg"></center>'
 					'When she notices you looking, she gives you a little smirk but then turns her attention away from you. She apparently doesn''t care if you look up her skirt at her panties.'

locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -40,11 +40,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Kats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at the Pussy Kats clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Monday through Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workFabrika = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a seamstress in a factory in Pavlovsk. Work is every day except Saturday and Sunday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.')
-	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work in the Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 250 <b>₽</b> plus tips.')
-	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can deliver mail for the postmaster. Teh work day starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450 <b>₽</b> .')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work part-time as a cleaner in the Pavlovosk clinic. Your schedule is from 16:00 to 21:00.')
-	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. You have an opene schedule that can be every day from 15:00-00:00. No salary as you earn tips.')
+	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as a clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.')
+	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 250 <b>₽</b> plus tips.')
+	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You deliver mail for the postmaster. The work day starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450 <b>₽</b> .')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work part-time as a cleaner in the Pavlovosk clinic. Your schedule is from 16:00 to 21:00.')
+	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. You have an open schedule that can be every day from 15:00-00:00. No salary as you earn tips.')
 	if film > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working in the city industrial region as a pornographic actress under the name <<$pfname>>')
 	if bumtolik = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been asked to help the homeless at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region.')
 	if bumtolik >= 5:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You volunteer at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region and work with the homeless. Working hours are from 09:00 to 17:00 on Saturday and Sunday.')
@@ -138,17 +138,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 		if grupTipe = 0:
 			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are not a member of any particular school social group.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 1:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of the popular, cool, and beautiful.'+$journal_school_standing)
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of the popular, cool and beautiful.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 2:
 			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of jocks and natural athletes.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 3:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of nerds, geeks, and good students.'+$journal_school_standing)
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of nerds, geeks and good students.'+$journal_school_standing)
 			if nerd_game['game_day'] > daystart: $tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been invited to a games night on <<$week[(week + (nerd_game[''game_day'']  - daystart))]>> at 20:00 in the community center library.')
 			if nerd_game['game_day'] = daystart: $tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been invited to a games night tonight at 20:00 in the community center library.')
 		elseif grupTipe = 4:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of gopniks, rebels, punks, or troublemakers.'+$journal_school_standing)
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of gopniks, rebels, punks or troublemakers.'+$journal_school_standing)
 		elseif grupTipe = 5:
-			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of losers, teacher''s pets, sluts, and the ugly.')
+			$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'Your school social group consists of losers, teacher''s pets, sluts and the ugly.')
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends_family':
 	'Father Mikhail Kuznetsov - You''ve never seen your biological father since your parents divorced, so you have no real memory of him.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/28.png"></center>'
-	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father then married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married, your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Valdimir''s first born child. Kolka is his only child that you know of. When not working, your stepfather will often be found working on his cars in the garage.'
+	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father then married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married, your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Vladimir''s first born child. Kolka is his only child that you know of. When not working, your stepfather can often be found working on his cars in the garage.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/33.png"></center>'
 	'Sister Anya - She is your older sister, two years your senior, but she still lives at home and shares a bedroom with you. She works at the local supermarket instead of going to the University like your mother wanted. She spends most of her free time either partying, hanging out with her friends or with her boyfriend Roma.'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'friends_family':
 	'Brother Kolka - He is your younger brother, born about a year after you. While you share the same mother, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you and enjoys football. When he is not playing football or doing homework, he spends much of his free time hanging out with his friends.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/30.png"></center>'
-	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man, which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about that, and if anything, seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
+	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mother''s older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man, which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about that, and if anything, seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/55.png"></center>'
 	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunt''s live-in boyfriend, only that he is from Africa and doesn''t speak Russian very well. He''s a very large and muscular man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
@@ -426,12 +426,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 	if grupTipe = 3:
 		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. This is to push his students to their greatest potential. He always has time to answer questions or help out if a student has trouble as long as they put in the effort. Many of the other students complain about how he picks on them, but the truth is he only accepts the best from his students and has no sympathy for those that refuse to put in the work.'
 	else
-		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense, bitter teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, giving the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes that he never does with another student group. He seems to take delight in catching the cool kids, jocks, or gopniks out by ridiculing them on how little they know.'
+		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense, bitter teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, giving the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes, which he never does with the other cliques. He seems to take delight in catching the cool kids, jocks and gopniks out by ridiculing them on how little they know.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/128.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Makar Vasilyev</center>'
-	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art, and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students; even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of them.'
+	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students; even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of them.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/137.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Raven Braakman</center>'
@@ -439,12 +439,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/130.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ilya Yenotin</center>'
-	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language, and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy, but is unliked by most of the students simply because he''s comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls, chasing down the gopniks and trying getting them to attend class.'
+	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy, but is disliked by most of the students simply because he comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls chasing gopniks, trying to get them to attend class.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/131.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Viktor Pavlovich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is also the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from a wall in his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted because he often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest, if not the meanest, teacher in school.'
+		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is also the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from a wall in his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted and often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest, if not the meanest, teacher in school.'
 	else
 		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is also the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from a wall his office. He likes to use it on students, especially female students. He is single and rumored to be a player. You''ve often seen him with different women around town.'
 	end
@@ -452,20 +452,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/69.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Mikhail Nikolaevich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, except he almost worships the best of the jocks by always talking and laughing with them.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and the football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, except he almost worships the best of the jocks by always talking and laughing with them.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He was heading towards the big leagues as a footballer and almost became a pro himself, but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive. He always wants to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad, you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and the football team. He was heading towards the big leagues as a footballer and almost became a pro himself, but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive. He always wants to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad, you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
 	else
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport but hurt himself or something like that and now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and the football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport, but hurt himself or something like that and now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/138.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arina Orlov</center>'
-	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school, having just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey, which makes many of the students to ignore her during class. This leads to her having a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and is very cute as well. This causes the boys to pay extra special attention to her sometimes.'
+	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school, having just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey, which causes many of the students to ignore her during class. This leads to her having a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and is very cute. This causes the boys to sometimes pay extra special attention to her during class.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/136.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Olga Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse. Miss Aleksandrov just transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heels over this true beauty. The boys describe her as slim and stacked; the ideal woman.'
+	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse, having transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heels over this true beauty, describing her as slim and stacked; the ideal woman.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/133.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Rolan Matveev</center>'
@@ -485,21 +485,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/152.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Feofan Krupin</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. He is the weekly game night Game Master and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that are way out of his league. He is the Game Master for the weekly game night and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
 	else
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but is not bad looking even if it''s in a somewhat nerdy manner. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is he runs some silly game night for the other nerds which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds".'
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but isn''t bad looking for one. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is that he runs some silly game night for the other nerds, which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds."'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/2.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Artem Chebotarev</center>'
-	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of school. Otherwise he tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
+	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of school. He otherwise tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/142.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Zinaida "Zina" Alkaev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. The boys seem to love she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at games they play.'
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. The boys seem to love that she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at the games they play.'
 	else
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is fairly popular with the nerd boys for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is fairly popular with the male nerds for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/6.png"></center>'
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 	if grupTipe = 3:
 		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other students, preferring to only talk to his fellow nerds and mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes.'
 	else
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. He is afraid of his own shadow and thus an easy target for bullying; other students are known to steal his homework.'
+		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. However, he is afraid of his own shadow and is thus an easy target for bullying; other students are known to steal his homework.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/153.png"></center>'
@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/240.png"></center>'
 	'<center><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></center>'	
-	'Natalia is a very smart, but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships but her good looks and eagerness to help others prevents her from being an outcast. She is rarely seen with anyone but one thing she always keeps with her is a special notebook that she never lets anyone touch.'
+	'Natalia is a very smart, but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships, but her good looks and eagerness to help others prevents her from being an outcast. Despite this, she is rarely seen hanging out with anyone. She also fiercely guards a notebook she likes to keep private, never letting anyone read or even touch it.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -539,7 +539,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 	'<center><h2>Jocks</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/149.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lazar Pajari</center>'
-	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and the best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in other sports as well, but his passion is football, least when he is not chasing girls or, more often being chased by girls, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports. While Lazar is the over all better athlete, Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
+	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and the best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in several sports, but his passion is football, at least when he is not chasing after girls or, more often not, being chased by them, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with several different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports. While Lazar is the over all better athlete, Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/3.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ivan Prokhorov</center>'
@@ -547,20 +547,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/18.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Christina Zvereva</center>'
-	'Christina is one of your school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is also more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
+	'Christina is one of the school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is, however, more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/8.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Svyatoslav Voinov</center>'
-	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football as well as many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
+	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football, as well as many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/23.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
-	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is known to have a short temper and is intimidating if angered. She runs a dance troupe at the community center that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are rumours about her home life, but nobody dares mention them in front of her.'
+	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is well known for her short temper and is intimidating if angered. She leads a dance troupe that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are several rumors about her going around school, but nobody dares mention them in front of her out of fear of incurring her wrath.'
 	
 	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
 		'<center>Fyodor "Fedor" Kozlov</center>'
-		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks the level of talent that Ivan does have. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
+		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks Ivan''s level of talent. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/141.png"></center>'
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/165.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Vanya Yanka</center>'
-	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so everyone likes him and despite his easy going attitude, is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
+	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so everyone likes him. Despite his easy going attitude, he is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/150.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Erast Vagin</center>'
@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/19.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Avelina "Lina" Starov</center>'
-	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually does anything Christina wants her to do, as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, would be a lot more popular.'
+	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually does anything Christina wants her to do, as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, she would be a lot more popular.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/13.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lariska Gruzdeva</center>'
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
 	'<center><h2>Outcast</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/7.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lesco Tsarev</center>'
-	'Everyone bullies Lesco about anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very social. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone.'
+	'Everyone bullies Lesco about anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very socialable. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/159.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Petia Alkaev</center>'
@@ -601,13 +601,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
 	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
 		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
-		'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance when Sonia got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, her reputation has been in shambles. The girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
+		'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance where she got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, Sonia''s reputation has been in shambles. The girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
 	end
 
 	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
 		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
-		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone, he has become a outcast. Fedor claims he was forced and had no choice, but most people think he just wanted to. Many of the boys mock him, often asking if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly as bad, as many of them make fun of him as well. Fedor now mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
+		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone, he has been an outcast. Fedor claims he was forced and had no choice, but most people think he actually wanted to do it. Many of the boys mock him, often asking if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly as bad, as many of them make fun of him as well. Fedor now mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
@@ -622,16 +622,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 	if grupTipe = 1:
 		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He is the king of the school and everyone wants to either be his friend or hang out with him.'
 	else
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there are rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting the nerds and outcasts when given a chance.'
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there are rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting the nerds and outcasts when given the chance.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/22.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov</center>'
-	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it, which makes her come off as really arrogant. You don''t know her very well since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around people much older than herself.'
+	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it, which makes her come off as arrogant. You don''t know her very well since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids." She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around with people much older than herself.'
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/147.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Andrey Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girl friend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
+	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girlfriend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/17.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Irina Devyatova</center>'
@@ -640,33 +640,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/140.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yelizaveta "Lizaveta" Petrov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she doesn''t use her knowledge to tear others about. She seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
 	else
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty, but most boys seem torn, attracted to her but afraid she will tell everyone everything about them and their whole life becomes public knowledge.'
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and most boys seem torn. Thay are attracted to her, but are afraid she will tell everyone everything about them and their whole life becomes public knowledge.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/15.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Viktoriya "Vicky" Meynold</center>'
-	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students in school and is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya Yanka. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head more often than not. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
+	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students in school and is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/4.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Igor Kruglov</center>'
-	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face many consider him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
+	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face, many consider him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/139.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Stanislava "Stasya" Pavlov</center>'
-	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but now that her boyfriend Andrey seems to hanging around the new exchange student Marcus more than her, she has become a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
+	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but now that her boyfriend Andrey hangs around with Marcus more than her, she has become a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/14.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ekaterina "Katja" Meynold</center>'
-	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a special interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but at times can also be impulsive. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
+	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a keen interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but at times can also be impulsive. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/146.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Marcus Larson</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead.'
+		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead.'
 	else
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
+		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/148.png"></center>'
@@ -678,10 +678,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She has started hanging out with the gopniks, trying to go to their parties. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
 		else
 			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -690,212 +690,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Nerds</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/152.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Feofan Krupin</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. He is the weekly game night Game Master and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
-	else
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but is not bad looking even if it''s in a somewhat nerdy manner. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students and has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is he runs some silly game night for the other nerds which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds".'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/2.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Artem Chebotarev</center>'
-	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of school. Otherwise he tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/142.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Zinaida "Zina" Alkaev</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. The boys seem to love she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at games they play.'
-	else
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is fairly popular with the nerd boys for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/6.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Petka Klyuyev</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other students, preferring to only talk to his fellow nerds and mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes.'
-	else
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. He is afraid of his own shadow and thus an easy target for bullying; other students are known to steal his homework.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/153.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Gerasim Vasilyev</center>'
-	'Gerasim Vasilyev is confined to a wheelchair from an early childhood accident. He is kind and nice to everyone, even if most don''t return the favor. He is well accepted by his fellow nerds and, surprisingly, a few of the jocks. The rest see him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/12.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Julia Milov</center>'
-	'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and doesn''t really have any friends other than her fellow nerds. She seems to like keeping to herself, but has sometimes been caught eyeing the other girls while they are changing after gym lessons, likely jealous of them.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/151.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Evgeny Kuznetsov</center>'
-	'Evgeny Kuznetsov is the school chess champion and you can always find him at the chess club at the community center. He is shy and very intelligent, but has not shown any interest in girls, or anyone else for that matter. No one would be surprised if he has mild autism.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/16.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Natasha Belova</center>'
-	'Natasha is an excellent student and one of the smartest people in your school. Even though you both live in the same building, her parents are very poor and it shows as Natasha is always dressed in second-hand clothes and can never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she doesn''t have many friends as most of the other girls shun her or mock her poor clothing.'
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Jocks</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/149.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Lazar Pajari</center>'
-	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and the best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in other sports as well, but his passion is football, least when he is not chasing girls or, more often being chased by girls, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports. While Lazar is the over all better athlete, Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/3.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Ivan Prokhorov</center>'
-	'Ivan Prokhorov is a talented athlete who is able to succeed in any sport he takes part in. He is mostly into boxing and running and is considered to be very good looking by the girls in school. He spends a lot of time training and is regularly away competing. He isn''t very sociable and, other than when he is training, tends to keep to himself, although he occasionally hangs out with Fedor. He is calm and collected by nature, some might even say apathetic.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/18.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Christina Zvereva</center>'
-	'Christina is one of your school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is also more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/8.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Svyatoslav Voinov</center>'
-	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football as well as many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/23.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
-	'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer who is trying to conduct herself properly as her father is trying to become the town mayor, but she is known to have a short temper and is intimidating if angered. She runs a dance troupe at the community center that only the prettiest and best dancers are allowed to join. There are rumors about her home life, but nobody dares mention them in front of her.'
-	
-	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Fyodor "Fedor" Kozlov</center>'
-		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks the level of talent that Ivan does have. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/141.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Veronika "Ronnie" Sokolov</center>'
-	'Veronika Sokolov is called the "Ice Queen" by her fellow students behind her back for a few reasons. One is that she is a very talented ice skater, there is even talk about how she might compete in the next winter Olympics. The other is because she is cold and indifferent and never lets anyone get close to her. She comes from one of the wealthier families in Pavlovsk.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/165.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Vanya Yanka</center>'
-	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so everyone likes him and despite his easy going attitude, is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/150.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Erast Vagin</center>'
-	'Erast Vagin is a huge boy and is very strong. He is not a looker or even clever, but is always polite and a little shy. When he is playing sports he changes into a demon, always fighting to win, putting his all into winning and nothing else. He is an average athlete and relies on his size and strength to win the day for him. Other than playing sports, he sometimes boxes with Ivan.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/19.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Avelina "Lina" Starov</center>'
-	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually does anything Christina wants her to do, as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, would be a lot more popular.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/13.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Lariska Gruzdeva</center>'
-	'Lariska is a very athletic girl, with an exceptional talent for volleyball. However, she has a very weak personality and is very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. She spends most of her time trying to appease others, especially Christina. She considers Christina to be her best friend and she can often be seen following her around school.'
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Outcast</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/7.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Lesco Tsarev</center>'
-	'Everyone bullies Lesco about anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very social. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/159.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Petia Alkaev</center>'
-	'Petia Alkaev is the class mooch. He persistently asks others for food, money and cigarettes. He can''t take a hint and doesn''t know the meaning of "personal space", which is made worse by the fact that he seems to be unaware of what soap is. He is an unattractive, overweight loser who makes girls uncomfortable by repeatedly hitting on them. No matter how many beatdowns he suffers or how many cruel pranks are pulled on him, he doesn''t seem to learn his lesson.'
-
-	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
-		'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance when Sonia got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, her reputation has been in shambles. The girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
-	end
-
-	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
-		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone, he has become a outcast. Fedor claims he was forced and had no choice, but most people think he just wanted to. Many of the boys mock him, often asking if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly as bad, as many of them make fun of him as well. Fedor now mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
-	end
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
-	*clr & cla
-	'<center><h2>Cool kids</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/1.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Dimka Nosov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He is the king of the school and everyone wants to either be his friend or hang out with him.'
-	else
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there are rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting the nerds and outcasts when given a chance.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/22.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov</center>'
-	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it, which makes her come off as really arrogant. You don''t know her very well since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around people much older than herself.'
-	
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/147.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Andrey Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girl friend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/17.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Irina Devyatova</center>'
-	'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl. She knows it and takes full advantage of it. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality hidden behind her sweet smile. She often makes the boys do her dirty work.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/140.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Yelizaveta "Lizaveta" Petrov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she doesn''t use her knowledge to tear others about. She seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
-	else
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty, but most boys seem torn, attracted to her but afraid she will tell everyone everything about them and their whole life becomes public knowledge.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/15.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Viktoriya "Vicky" Meynold</center>'
-	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students in school and is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya Yanka. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head more often than not. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/4.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Igor Kruglov</center>'
-	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face many consider him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/139.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Stanislava "Stasya" Pavlov</center>'
-	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but now that her boyfriend Andrey seems to hanging around the new exchange student Marcus more than her, she has become a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/14.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Ekaterina "Katja" Meynold</center>'
-	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a special interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but at times can also be impulsive. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/146.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Marcus Larson</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead.'
-	else
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student. He arrived at the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school and is a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views has made him pretty popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/148.png"></center>'
-	'<center>Mefodiy Utkin</center>'
-	'Mefodiy Utkin is reasonably intelligent, with middle-of-the-road grades. He is fairly average looking, but possesses a good sense of humor and timing. He isn''t too popular, just popular enough to hang among the cool kids, who like his humor.'
-
-	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 1:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
-		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She has started hanging out with the gopniks, trying to go to their parties. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
-		else
-			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much. Pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She lives with her mother in a small apartment after her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
-			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother, one filled with luxury and sophistication.'
-		end
-	end
-	
-	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
-	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-end
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Gopniks</h2></center>'
@@ -905,7 +699,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/154.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Radomir Popov</center>'
-	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named Pizdá Buystvo (Pussy Riot). They are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can and as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
+	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named Pizdá Buystvo (Pussy Riot). They are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can, as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/157.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Roman Yakovlev</center>'
@@ -917,11 +711,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/145.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ekaterina "Katyusha" Maksimov</center>'
-	'Ekaterina Maksimov, also known as Katyusha. She is not a traditional beauty since her face is too masculine. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can, either by stealing it or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl, other than Lena, who can do that. While the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother, she prefers fighting the boys herself. Regardless of the weather, she practices Sambo in the park every day before school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming boxing is for pussies and that real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik since it''s others that consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect, which is really hard to do.'
+	'Ekaterina Maksimov, known as "Katyusha", is not a traditional beauty since her face is too masculine. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can, either by stealing it or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys, it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl other than Lena who can do this. While the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother, she prefers fighting the boys herself.'
+	'Regardless of the weather, she practices Sambo in the park every day before school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming "boxing is for pussies" and that real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik, but other people consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect, which is really hard to do.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/158.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valentin Bogdanov</center>'
-	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and the nicest guy in the band. This still doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame with the girls to use them. It is just that he is rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motorbike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band.'
+	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and the nicest guy in the band. However, this doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame to use girls. He is just rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motorbike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad, working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/24.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Pauline Sebagotulina</center>'
@@ -929,7 +724,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/156.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arkadi Fyodorov</center>'
-	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was also held back a year, so he also looks a bit old for his age. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the gopniks. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is.'
+	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was held back a year, so looks a bit older than his fellow students. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the gopniks. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/20.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yalena "Lena" Kotova</center>'
@@ -949,19 +744,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/143.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Alyona Zima</center>'
-	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker. She lives to cause trouble and jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a troubled family as her parents are alcoholics and drug addicts. Most people view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. Knowing this, the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol and the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
+	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker. She lives to cause trouble and jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a troubled family as her parents are alcoholic drug addicts. Most people view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. Knowing this, the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol and the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/21.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valeria "Lera" Tsarev</center>'
-	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, but her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together, smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes Lena''s lead. It is rumored that she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
+	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, but her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together, smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes her lead. It is rumored that she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/155.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lavrenti Romanov</center>'
-	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent, which has lead to him and Dimika having a major falling out at the same time. Since the fight, he started hanging with the gopniks. He is more of a follower and the gopniks like using his money while tolerating him.'
+	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent, which resulted in him and Dimika having a major falling out. Since the fight, he has been hanging with the gopniks. However, he is more of a follower, the gopniks tolerating him while using his money.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/189.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Nikolai Volkov</center>'
-	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying, he is hanging out with Roman Yakovlev. Many say that he only spends time with Roman for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
+	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying, he is hanging out with Roman, with many saying that he only spends time with Roman for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg