Merge remote-tracking branch 'Alaratt/master'

locations/LariskaGo.qsrc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ gs'stat'
 
 '<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A13'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A13'']>></font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big13.jpg"></center>'
-'You go to Lariska and walk to her home.'
+'You join Lariska and start walking with her to her home.'
 
 act 'Go with Lariska':
 	cls
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ act 'Go with Lariska':
 
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A13'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A13'']>></font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big13.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk down the street to the house of Lariska for 15 minutes, discussing all the small stuff.'
+	'You walk down the street with Lariska, discussing small stuff until you reach her place, about 15 minutes later.'
 
 	act 'Enter her apartment':gt'LariskaHome'
 end

locations/LariskaHome.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if (hour >= 14 and hour < 19 and week < 6) or (hour >= 9 and hour < 19 and (week
 	if beInLariskaHome = 0:
 		'Entering the apartment, you see that it is decorated in a Japanese style.'
 		'"You have a nice apartment, Lariska." you say while looking around with interest.'
-		'"Thank you, Mother makes a good living, although she is only home on weekends usually." Lariska says with a sad voice.'
+		'"Thank you, Mother makes a good living, although she is only home on the weekends, usually." Lariska says in a sad voice.'
 		'You go into Lariska''s room.'
 		beInLariskaHome = 1
 	else
@@ -27,10 +27,10 @@ if (hour >= 14 and hour < 19 and week < 6) or (hour >= 9 and hour < 19 and (week
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/lariskamother.jpg"></center>'
-			'You knock on the door of Lariska''s apartment and a smart looking brunette opens the door. You look helplessly into her impressive cleavage and let out an involuntary sigh.'
-			'"Hello, are you looking for Lariska?" the woman asks you with a smile.'
+			'You knock on Lariska''s apartment door and a smart looking brunette opens the door. You look helplessly into her impressive cleavage and let out an involuntary sigh.'
+			'"Hello, are you looking for Lariska?" the woman asks with a smile.'
 			'"Yes, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>." you reply tearing your eyes away from her nearly exposed breasts.'
-			'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lariska has told me all about you. I''m Anna, Lariska''s mother. My bunny has been so joyous lately. I am glad that she has such a good friend! She needed someone to get her back on her feet. Well, go through to her room, I will not bother you."'
+			'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lariska has told me all about you. I''m Anna, Lariska''s mother. My bunny has been so joyous lately. I am glad that she has such a good friend! She needed someone to help get her back on her feet. Well, go on through to her room, I will not bother you."'
 			lariskaMotherKnown = 1
 		end
 		'You go to Lariska''s room.'
@@ -42,12 +42,12 @@ else
 	if lariskaMotherKnown = 0:
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
-		if hour >= 9:$text_home = 'I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lariska is not at home.'
+		if hour >= 9:$text_home = 'I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lariska is not home.'
 		if hour < 9:$text_home = 'I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, but Lariska is still in bed. She doesn''t get up before nine.'
 		'You knock on the dorr of Lariska''s apartment and a smart looking brunette opens the door. You look helplessly into her impressive cleavage and let out an involuntary sigh.'
 		'"Hello, are you looking for Lariska?" the woman asks you with a smile.'
 		'"Yes, I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>." you reply tearing your eyes away from her nearly exposed breasts.'
-		'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lariska has told me all about you. I''m Anna, Lariska''s mother. My bunny has been so joyous lately. I am glad that she has such a good friend! She needed someone to get her back on her feet. <<$text_home>>"'
+		'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lariska has told me all about you. I''m Anna, Lariska''s mother. My bunny has been so joyous lately. I am glad that she has such a good friend! She needed someone to help get her back on her feet. <<$text_home>>"'
 		lariskaMotherKnown = 1
 		act 'Go back to town':gt'pav_residential'
 		exit
@@ -70,9 +70,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 			minut += 30
 			gs'stat'
 			if pcs_grades >= 90:
-				'You did your homework together and Lariska explained the hard parts to you.'
+				'You did your homework with Lariska and figured out the hard parts together.'
 			else
-				'You did your homework together and figured out the hard parts together.'
+				'You did your homework together and Lariska explained the hard parts to you.'
 			end
 			act 'Take a break': minut +=10 & gt 'LariskaHome','in'
 		end

locations/LariskaStart.qsrc

@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'You are best friends.'
 	end
 	''
-	'As you leave the sports section, you notice Lariska Gruzdev, she looks nervous and is looking for someone. Her gaze stops on you and she waves her hand, calling you over to her.'
-	'Well this is interesting, she had never shown that much interest in you before, always stuck in Christina''s stranglehold she had always been distant and you could barely get a full sentence from her.'
+	'As you leave the sports section, you notice Lariska Gruzdev nervously looking for someone. Her gaze stops on you and she waves her hand, calling you over to her.'
+	'Well this is interesting, she has never shown that much interest in you before, always stuck in Christina''s stranglehold and so distant that you could barely get a full sentence from her.'
 	'Now that you have beaten Christina, she suddenly wants to talk. She does look more confident, happier and more active. Maybe she wants to thank you for beating up the bully?'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt'pav_commcenter'
@@ -46,22 +46,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly recover and now you can see that it is Lariska Gruzdeva who is pushing you against the wall. Her face is so close to yours, so you start blushing and become aroused.'
-			'Then, the penny dropped that she is not excited, but frightened. She is shuddering with fear and she is looking all around fearfully that somebody spotted you.'
-			'Her nose is touching your face, as she is turning her head from one side to other. You can''t help it, but you want to hug and calm her. You are touching her gently and put your arms on her shoulders and ask:'
-			'"Lariska, what happened? How can I help you?"'
+			'You quickly recover and now you can see that it is Lariska who is pushing you against the wall. Her face is so close to yours that you start blushing and become aroused.'
+			'Then the penny drops that she is not excited, but frightened. She is shuddering with fear and is looking around fearfully that somebody spotted you.'
+			'Her nose is touching your face as she is turns her head from side to side. You can''t help wanting to hug her to calm her down. You touch her gently and put your arms on her shoulders and ask:'
+			'"Lariska, what happened? How can I help?"'
 			act 'Soothe her':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>> ..." Lariska says and pauses.'
-				'You hug her tighter and stroke on her back gently. "What, Lariska?"'
+				'You hug her tighter and stroke her back gently. "What, Lariska?"'
 				'After calming down a little, Lariska takes a deep breath and starts talking quickly:'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you are in danger! Zvereva wants to set junkies on you .. "'
 				'You are totally numb now. "What junkies?"'
-				'"Well, she didn''t only give blow jobs to the trainer, but she also blew the junkies, who are selling drugs here. She also bought some super steroids and she wants to contaminate you with them! Tomorrow after the section, they want to catch and rape you!"'
-				'As soon as she said it, she runs away.'
+				'"Well, she didn''t only give blow jobs to the trainer, but she also blew the junkies who sell drugs here. She bought some super steroids and wants to contaminate you with them! Tomorrow after the section, they want to catch and rape you!"'
+				'As soon as she said that she ran away.'
 
 				if kotovLoveQW > 0:
 					act 'Call Kotov':
@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 
-						'"Hi Vitek. Listen, you said that you can protect me from anybody. I need you help now! Zvereva is going to dig a pit on me tomorrow. She wants to set her dealers on me so that they rape me."'
-						'"That bitch! Do not worry, I know these bastards, Nosov takes his dope from them. Nobody is dangerous, for me anyway! Do not worry about anything!"'
+						'"Hi Vitek. Listen, you said that you can protect me from anybody. I need you help now! Zvereva is going to dig a pit on me tomorrow. She wants to have her dealers rape me."'
+						'"That bitch! Don''t worry, I know these bastards, Nosov gets his dope from them. Nobody is dangerous, for me anyway! Don''t worry about anything!"'
 
 						KotovZverHelp = 1
 						act 'Leave':gt'pav_commcenter'
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 
-						'"Hey Ivan, listen, some perverts badgering me here, could you escort me home after section tomorrow?"'
+						'"Hey Ivan, listen, some perverts are badgering me here, could you escort me home after section tomorrow?"'
 						'"Sure, no problem <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 
 						IvanZverHelp = 1
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 
-						'"Hi Albina, could you help me? I will make it all up for to you."'
+						'"Hi Albina, could you help me? I will make it up to you."'
 						'"What happened?"'
 						'"Zvereva set junkies on me."'
 						'"Okay, don''t be afraid. I''ve got contacts, I''ll call right now, she''ll go away empty-handed."'
@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 
-						'"Fedor, I need your help, Christina has paid off some steroid pumping punks to rape me outside the sports center tomorrow, Can you please help me?"'
-						'"There is no way I''m letting them hurt you, I will wait for you outside the club and do all in my power to keep you safe."'
+						'"Fedor, I need your help, Christina has paid off some steroid pumping punks to rape me outside the sports center tomorrow, can you please help me?"'
+						'"There is no way I''m letting them hurt you. I will wait for you outside the center and do everything in my power to keep you safe."'
 						'"Thank you Fyodor, I knew I could count on you."'
 
 						FyodorZverHelp = 1
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You grab the enemy''s hands, pin him to the wall and hit his stomach with all your might. A cry of pain flies from your opponent''s mouth.'
+				'You grab the enemy''s hands, pin him to the wall, and hit his stomach with all your might. A cry of pain flies from your opponent''s mouth.'
 				act 'Look at the enemy':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
@@ -147,9 +147,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 					if npc_rel['A13'] < 20:'You have a bad relationship.'
 					''
-					'Right after you hit the stomach, you realize that it is Lariska, who is standing in front of you. She has tears in her eyes. You unclinch her immediately. As soon as you do, Lariska yells in your face:'
+					'Right after hitting them in the stomach you realize that it''s Lariska who is in front of you with tears in her eyes. You unclinch her immediately and as soon as you do she starts yelling into your face:'
 					'"Idiot, I wanted to help you!" and she pushes you back and runs away.'
-					'You had stood still five minutes in perplexity and thought about that you should apologize at school tomorrow, before you finally get off and go home.'
+					'You stand still for a few minutes, suprised, and think that you should apologize to her at school tomorrow, before finally going home.'
 					lariskaHelp = -1
 
 					act 'Leave':gt'pav_commcenter'
@@ -194,11 +194,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big19.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are leaving the club when you see Lina coming to you.'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait! Help me, please, to tidy up the equipment in the storage room, the trainer ordered me to do it, but the bulb burned out there. You will hold just the flashlight, and I do the rest!"'
-			'"Uhm, I''m sorry, Lina, but I must go home." You reply making a hint to Ivan.'
-			'"So let''s do it, I''ll move it and you will hold the flashlight." Ivan breaks in on your conversation.'
-			'"That''s okay, you don''t have to, I do it myself." Lina replies quickly and walks away.'
+			'You are leaving the club when Lina comes up to you.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait! Help me, please, to tidy up the equipment in the storage room. The trainer ordered me to do it but the bulb burned out in there. If you will just the flashlight I can do the rest!"'
+			'"Uhm, I''m sorry, Lina, but I must go home." You reply, making a hint to Ivan.'
+			'"So let''s do it, I''ll move it and you hold the flashlight." Ivan breaks in on your conversation.'
+			'"That''s okay, you don''t have to, I can do it myself." Lina quickly replies and walks away.'
 
 			act 'Go home':
 				cls
@@ -241,14 +241,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kiss.jpg"></center>'
 						'You walk slowly to Ivan and incline your face towards his. You hug and kiss and Ivan starts stroking gently your back.'
-						act 'Run your hand into his pants':
+						act 'Put your hand into his pants':
 							*clr & cla
 							pcs_horny += 10
 							minut += 3
 							gs'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/grab/cock2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shove your hand deeper into Ivan''s pants and your fingers are touching his big hard cock.'
+							'You shove your hand deeper into Ivan''s pants until your fingers are touching his big hard cock.'
 
 							act 'Masturbate':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 								if laris_rand1>=1:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/handjob/hand0,'+rand(0,1)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
 								spafinloc = 13
 								gs 'cum_manage'
-								'You pull out his hard cock from his pants and grasp it firmly with your hand. You are kissing Ivan passionately and pumping his cock up and down simultaneously. Finally, Ivan gives a groan of pleasure and you can see streams of his semen gushing out of his cock.'
+								'You pull out his hard cock from his pants and grasp it firmly with your hand. You kiss Ivan passionately as you pump his cock up and down simultaneously. Finally, Ivan gives a groan of pleasure and you can see streams of his semen gushing out of his cock.'
 
 								act 'Go home':gt'korrPar'
 							end
@@ -277,12 +277,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	elseif 	FyodorZverHelp = 1:
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ffe4><<"Avelina [Lina] Starov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big19.jpg"></center>'
-		'You leave the club then see Lina approaching you.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait! Help me please, I need to move inventory in the storeroom but the light blew out. Can you please help me move it while I go and get a flashlight?"'
+		'As you leave the club Lina approaches you.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait! Help me please, I need to move inventory in the storeroom but the light blew out. Can you please help me move it as soon as I find a flashlight?"'
 		'"Erm, forgive me Lina but I have to go home." you then give Fedor a nod.'
 		'"C''mon <<$pcs_nickname>>, I just need your help for a few minutes. I can move the heavy stuff." Lina pouts.'
 		'"Sorry but we can''t help you." Fedor says as he grabs your arm then pulls you away toward the street.'
-		'Lina, with a disappointed look on her face, turns and walks away.'
+		'Lina turns and walks away with a disappointed look on her face.'
 		'You turn to Fedor and say, "Thank you Fedor. I knew that I could count on you." Fedor gives you a kiss on the forehead then walks you home."'
 		*nl
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big19.jpg"></center>'
 		'You leave the club and see Lina.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait! Help me please, I need to move inventory in the storeroom but the light blew out. Can you please help me move it while I go and get a flashlight?"'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait! Help me please, I need to move inventory in the storeroom but the light blew out. Can you please help me move it as soon as I find a flashlight?"'
 		act 'Help':
 			if KotovZverHelp = 1:
 				numnpc = 9
@@ -305,8 +305,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_4.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Okay, why not." You say and follow Lina.'
-				'You go into a dark room and hear the door close behind you. You get knocked to the floor and feel hands pulling your clothes, trying to undress you. You are trying to resist, but you only accomplish that hands move to your throat, strangling you until your consciousness fades.'
-				'Suddenly you hear the noise of heavy blows on the door, after two strokes the door falls on you and the guy that was sitting on top. You are pinned under the door and can not move, but you hear the sounds of a fight around you. After a while it gets silent, and like through a haze you hear a faint voice from Kotova "Turn on the light!"'
+				'You go into a dark room and hear the door close behind you. You get knocked to the floor and feel hands pulling at your clothes, trying to undress you. You try to resist but the hands move to your throat, strangling you until your consciousness starts to fade.'
+				'Suddenly you hear the sound of heavy blows on the door and the door falls in on you and the guy that was sitting on top of you. You are pinned underneath and cannot move, but you hear the sounds of a fight going on around you. After a while it gets silent, and like through a haze you hear a faint voice from Kotova "Turn on the light!"'
 				act 'Recover':
 					cls
 					minut += 40
@@ -315,8 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 					'You open your eyes and see the worried face of Kotova:'
 					'"You''re, like, okay?"'
 					'"Yes, thank you, saved me!"'
-					'"Looks like we came just in time! Thanks to Prokhorov, he saw you and told me where to look! Narkoshi we broke bones, and Starov and Zverev we detain, so do not worry."'
-
+					'"Looks like we came just in time! Prokhorov saw you and told us where to look! We broke some of that crackhead''s bones and captured Lina and Christina, so don''t worry."'
 					act 'Keep silent':LinaSlut = 1 & gt'kotovSex'
 					act 'Don''t be too harsh with Lina, Zvereva had this planned!':gt'kotovSex'
 				end
@@ -326,20 +325,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_4.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Okay, why not." You say and follow Lina.'
-				'You go into a dark room and hear the door close behind you. You get knocked to the floor and feel hands pulling your clothes, trying to undress you. You are trying to resist, but you only accomplish that hands move to your throat, strangling you until your consciousness fades.'
-				act 'Recover':
+				'You go into a dark room and hear the door close behind you. You get knocked to the floor and feel hands pulling at your clothes, trying to undress you. You try to resist but the hands move to your throat, strangling you until your consciousness fades.'
+				act 'Wake up':
 					cls
 					minut += 15
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Like plasticine, you try to bend and wriggle out of the grip, but when your hip sticks out, you feel hands thrusting in your holes. You do not care at all, the only thought in your head is "run, I have to run away". Meanwhile, the boys begin to fuck you...'
+					'You wake up naked, unknown hands running up and down your body. You try to wiggle your way out of their grip but it just seems to excite them further. Gaining enough leverage to hold you still, the boys who have you start prodding your pussy and ass with their fingers before one says to you "If you bite me, I will beat you!" He then slips two fingers into your mouth while the others continue to play with your body.'
+					'Tired of just exploring, they pull their cocks out and start arguing with each other about who gets to go first. One of the guys seems to win the argument, so two of the other guys flip you over, and pull your knees apart, leaving you open for the one who gets to go first.'
 					act 'Further':
 						cls
 						pcs_horny += 10
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_6.jpg"></center>'
-						'While being fucked doggy style, your arousal gets the better of you. "If I can''t resist, I might as well enjoy it", you think, smiling.'
+						'As he starts thrusting in, your body begins to betray you. Your thighs become slick with your juices as your slit stretches to accommodate the size of the guy inside you. Sighing to yourself, you realize you are not getting out of this anytime soon, and try to force yourself to relax and accept this. Once they realize you aren''t going to keep fighting, the two guys holding your legs let go and start stroking themselves, waiting for their turn.'
 						act 'Further':
 							cls
 							pcs_horny += 10
@@ -347,13 +347,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_7.jpg"></center>'
 							if stat['bj'] >= 100:
-								$start_text = 'Still not entirely aware of your situation, you automatically start sucking the dick poking in your face.'
+								$start_text = 'Having had so many dicks in your mouth before, you automatically start sucking his dick like the pro you are.'
 							else
-								$start_text = 'You''re still not entirely aware of your situation, but you feel the dick being slammed down your throat.'
+								$start_text = 'Distracted by what was happening you are taken by suprise as you feel a dick being slammed down your throat. Gagging, you do your best just to keep breathing.'
 							end
+							! I have no idea if I fixed this below right or not - Alaratt
 							stat['bj'] += 1
 							stat['vaginal'] += 1
-							!! gs 'boyStat', ?
+							gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Rowdy guy', rand(18,30)
+                            gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
+							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 							cumprecheck = 1
 							cumarrkno =  0
 							gs 'cum_manage'
@@ -361,52 +364,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 							gang += 1
 							pcs_vag += 1
 							pcs_throat += 1
-							'After some shuffling as the guys switch positions, you feel a 28 centimeter giant stretching your pussy. The intense feeling makes you moan with pleasure. Another guy forces your mouth open and inserts his penis. <<$start_text>>'
+							gs 'stat'
+							'After some shuffling, the guys switch positions, and you feel a 28 centimeter giant stretching its way into your pussy. Unable to help yourself you moan with pleasure at the intense feeling. The guy with his fingers in your mouth takes them out and replaces them with his penis. <<$start_text>>'
 							act 'Further':
 								cls
 								pcs_horny += 10
 								minut += 5
-								gs'stat'
+								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_8.jpg"></center>'
-								'Finally you feel the guys are ready to discharge.'
-								'You are put in the center of the room and you stupidly smile at them playing with their trunks.'
-								act 'Watch':
+								'They keep taking turns, putting your mouth and pussy to the test before they finally seem ready to cum.'
+								'You are dragged onto the floor and left sitting up, your head pulled back, as they surround you while stroking themselves to the finish.'
+								act 'Wait for it':
 									cls
 									pcs_horny += 10
-									minut += 5
-									!! gs 'boyStat', ?
-									spafinloc = 12
-									cumarrkno =  0
-									gs 'cum_manage'
-									cumarrkno =  0
-									spafinloc = 11
-									gs 'cum_manage'
-									!! gs 'boyStat', ?
-									spafinloc = 12
-									cumarrkno =  0
-									gs 'cum_manage'
-									spafinloc = 11
-									cumarrkno =  0
-									gs 'cum_manage'
-									gs'stat'
+									gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Rowdy guy', rand(18,30)
+                                    gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
+                                    gs 'cum_call', 'face'
+                                    gs 'cum_call', 'mouth'
+									gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Rowdy guy', rand(18,30)
+                                    gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
+                                    gs 'cum_call', 'face'
+                                    gs 'cum_call', 'mouth'
+									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_9.jpg"></center>'
-									'They finish, pouring your face with warm sperm! They slap their dicks against your lips, gradually penetrating into your mouth and clearing them from the remnants of cum.'
+									'They finally cum, splattering your face with warm sperm.'
 									act 'Further':
 										cls
 										gs 'arousal', 'pee', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'group'
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_10.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Should we wash this whore?" You hear, like through a veil.'
+										'"Should we wash this whore?" You hear, as if from far away.'
 										'"Yeah, let''s do it!"'
-										'And your face gets hit by streams of urine'
+										'Next thing you know your face gets hit by streams of urine from several directions at once.'
 										act 'Further':
 											cls
 											minut += 5
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_11.jpg"></center>'
-											'"What a slut!" You let yourself be led by your arms, and suddenly you realize, that you are in the middle of the club and everyone is looking at you.'
-											'"Dance, slut!" with these words, you are thrust into the center of the crowd. Finally, your consciousness fades.'
+											'Shaken and in a daze, you let yourself be led without paying attention to where they are taking you until you suddenly realize you are in the middle of a club and everyone is looking at you.'
+											'"Dance, slut!" You are thrust into the center of the dance floor before, thankfully, your consciousness fades again.'
 											pav_sex += 30
 											act 'Wake':
 												cls
@@ -437,10 +434,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 												orgasm += 1
 												agape = 2
 												vgape = 2
-												gs'stat'
+												gs 'stat'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/sex/fight/start_end.jpg"></center>'
-												'You wake up covered in semen and with a bottle sticking out of your pussy. Your entire body is covered with obscene graffiti. Your whole body hurts, and your holes feel like glowing rods were shoved in all night.'
-
+												'You wake up covered in semen and with a bottle sticking out of your pussy. Your entire body is covered with obscene graffiti and everything hurts.'
 												act 'Leave':gt'pav_residential'
 											end
 										end
@@ -460,10 +456,10 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'IvanHelp_down':
 	cls
 	pcs_horny += 5
-	gs'stat'
+	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cock/cock3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You pull Ivan''s member out of his pants'
+	'You pull Ivan''s member out of his pants and start licking it.'
 	act 'Take it in the mouth':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
@@ -472,13 +468,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'IvanHelp_down':
 		spafinloc = 12
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		stat['bj'] += 1
-		gs'stat'
+		gs 'stat'
 
 		laris_rand1 = rand(0,50)
 		if laris_rand1<5:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/sex/boybj3.jpg"></center>'
 		if laris_rand1>=5 and laris_rand1<30:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/publ0,0.jpg"></center>'
 		if laris_rand1>=30:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/publ0,0.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You sit down on his haunches and begin to suck Ivan.'
+		'You go down to your haunches and begin to suck Ivan.'
 
 		gs 'dinSex', 'bj_swallow_random'
 
@@ -505,7 +501,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'IvanHelp_sex':
 	gs 'dinSex', 'wear_condom'
 	gs 'dinSex', 'vaginal_sex'
 	gs 'dinSex', 'sexcum'
-
+	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Go home':gt'korrPar'
 end
 

locations/liam.qsrc

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ end
 if arts = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''Marin'',''start''">Marina''s Apartment</a>'
 
 act 'Walk to the train station (0:15)':minut += 15 & nroad = 15 & gt 'pav_train'
-act 'Walk to Pavlovsk park (0:10)':minut += 10 & nroad = 10 & gt 'parks', 'start'
+act 'Walk to Pavlovsk park (0:10)':minut += 10 & nroad = 10 & gt 'pav_park', 'start'
 act 'Walk to the highway (0:05)':minut += 5 & nroad = 15 & gt 'road'
 
 act 'Wait':gs 'obj_din', 'wait'