[changed] text edits and better file organization

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -33,42 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_talk2':
 		!! Albina takes the lead
 		AlbinaQW['chat_rand'] = rand(1,2)
 		if AlbinaQW['chat_rand'] = 1:
-			'"What do you do for money <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Albina asks. "I used to get money for things from Starlets. Whatever my dad didn''t steal from me anyways. But that''s dried up now and I can''t rely on mama forever. Don''t tell me that everything you had came from Starlets?"'
-			act 'My mom':
-				cla & *nl
-				'"I get most of my money from my mom too," you say reluctantly. "Starlets was all the extra money I made too."'
-				'"Fuuuuck," Albina groans, flipping over to stare at the ceiling in frustration. "What else can I do? I''m <i>so</i> over getting fucked for money."'
-				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
-			end
-			act 'Odd jobs':
-				cla & *nl
-				'"Odd jobs here and there," you shrug. "There''s a lot of things to do around town. They don''t pay very much, but it gives me some spending money. You could try doing that?" Albina wrinkles her nose in disgust.'
-				'"I don''t want to <i>work</i> for a living," she says, sending both of you into giggles.'
-				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
-			end
-			
-			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk1'
-			
-			if film > 0:
-				act 'Tell her you''ve shot porn': cla & gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk1'
-			end
-			
-				
-			!!{if masseuse['jobtype'] ! 0:
-				act 'I work as a masseuse':
-					cla & *nl
-					
-					gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
-				end
-			end}
-			
-			if stripdancesum > 0:
-				act 'I''m a stripper':
-					cla & *nl
-					gs 'albina_chat','stripper_talk1'
-				end
-			end
-
+			gs 'albina_chat','job_talk1'
 		elseif AlbinaQW['chat_rand'] = 2:
 			if AlbinaQW['commando_know'] = 0:
 				gs 'albina_chat','underwear_talk'
@@ -84,12 +49,50 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_talk2':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'job_talk1':
+	'"What do you do for money <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Albina asks. "I used to get money for things from Starlets. Whatever my dad didn''t steal from me anyways. But that''s dried up now and I can''t rely on Mama forever. Don''t tell me that everything you had came from Starlets?"'
+	act 'My mom':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"I get most of my money from my mom too," you say reluctantly. "Starlets was all the extra money I made too."'
+		'"<i>Fuuuuck</i>," Albina groans, flipping over to stare at the ceiling in frustration. "What else can I do? I''m <i>so</i> over getting fucked for money."'
+		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
+	end
+	act 'Odd jobs':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Odd jobs here and there," you shrug. "There''s a lot of things to do around town. They don''t pay very much, but it gives me some spending money. You could try doing that?" Albina wrinkles her nose in disgust.'
+		'"I don''t want to <i>work</i> for a living," she says, sending both of you into giggles.'
+		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
+	end
+	
+	gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk1'
+	
+	if film > 0:
+		act 'Tell her you''ve shot porn': cla & gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk1'
+	end
+	
+		
+	!!{if masseuse['jobtype'] ! 0:
+		act 'I work as a masseuse':
+			cla & *nl
+			
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
+		end
+	end}
+	
+	if stripdancesum > 0:
+		act 'I''m a stripper':
+			cla & *nl
+			gs 'albina_chat','stripper_talk1'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk1':
 	act 'Embarrassed':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I... do some strip dancing in the city," you admit, blushing hard.'
 		if age < 18:
-			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina exclaims, her jaw dropping. "How? You''re underage!"'
+			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina''s jaw drops. "How? You''re underage!"'
 			if alterstrtimg = 18 or alterstrtimg = 19 or alterstrtimg = 20 or alterstrtimg = 21:
 				'"I''ve had a fake passport for years, Albina," you shrug uncomfortably. "Easiest way to get booze. Now it helps me with other things too."'
 			else
@@ -100,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk1':
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		else
-			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina exclaims and you laugh nervously.'
+			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina''s jaw drops and you laugh nervously.'
 			'"Y-Yeah. I needed money and it''s... an easy job," you reply.'
 			'"Say no more. I''ve always thought about doing it myself, I just don''t know what Mama would say about it..."'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
@@ -341,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'underwear_talk':
 		act'They''re cheap':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"They''re cheap and affordable," you shrug. "Not everybody''s a rich princess like you."'
-			'"I''ll have you know I get all my thongs from a seedy sex shop in the red light district for 500 <b>₽</b> a pop," Albina says, turning her nose up at you. "I''m no princess. I''m a dirty little girl who likes her panties cheap and easily snapped off."'
+			'"I''ll have you know I get all my thongs from a seedy sex shop in the red light district for 500 <b>₽</b> a pop," Albina says, turning her nose up at you. "I''m no princess. I''m a dirty little girl who likes her panties cheap and snappable."'
 			*nl
 			'You both laugh at that.'
 			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
@@ -538,14 +541,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I can''t help but notice when we''re in the locker room that you keep your pussy clean," you say. "Do you shave every day or something?"'
 		if AlbinaQW['shower_caught'] = 0:
-			'"You spying on me or something?" Albina asks with a raised eyebrow. She''s giving you a "glare" but you can also see a smirk tugging at the corner of her lips. When the full smile finally breaks out, she laughs and says, "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I hate stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
+			'"You spying on me or something?" Albina asks with a raised eyebrow. She''s giving you a "glare" but you can also see a smirk tugging at the corner of her lips. When the full smile finally breaks out, she laughs and says, "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I can''t stand the feeling of stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
 		elseif AlbinaQW['shower_caught'] = 1:
-			'"Is that what you were looking at when I caught you staring?" Albina says with a smug smirk. She holds the look for a few seconds before laughing. "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I hate stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
+			'"Is that what you were looking at when I caught you staring?" Albina says with a smug smirk. She holds the look for a few seconds before laughing. "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I can''t stand the feeling of stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
 		else
 			'"How often are you peeping on me in there?" Albina laughs. "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I hate stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
 		end
 		'She shivers with a grimace of disgust and annoyance.'
-		'"Waxing takes care of the problem for weeks at a time. Which is great cause shaving sucks too!"'
+		'"Waxing takes care of the problem for weeks at a time. Which is great cause shaving hurt my neck too!"'
 		*nl
 		if rand(1,100) < pcs_prcptn:
 			AlbinaQW['pube_hint'] = 1