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[Grammar changes] Minor changes to fix grammar and headers.

Hooded Silence před 3 měsíci
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1 změnil soubory, kde provedl 7 přidání a 7 odebrání
  1. 7 7
      locations/pushkin_ballet_res.qsrc

+ 7 - 7
locations/pushkin_ballet_res.qsrc

@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 	act 'Enter the communal room':  minut += 5 & gt 'pushkin_ballet_res', 'communal_area'
 	act 'Go to the bathroom':  minut += 5 & gt 'pushkin_ballet_class', 'shower'  
 	act 'Go to the kitchen':  minut += 5 & gt 'pushkin_ballet_res', 'kitchen'
-	if week ! 7:
+	if week ! 7 and npc_trust['A3501'] >= 10:
 		!! act 'Visit Maya' :  minut += 5 & gt 'pushkin_ballet_res', 'maya_room'
 	end
 	!!act 'Knock on wardens door' :  minut += 5 & gt 'pushkin_ballet_res', 'warden_room'
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'feetcare':
 	minut +=30
 	feet_track = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
-	$setloc['StageTitle'] = 'Feet Soak'
+	$setloc['StageTitle'] = 'Feet Care'
 	$setloc['StageImage'] =  '<<$default_img_path>>ballet_events/feet_soak'
 	gs 'core_library', 'stage_title'
 
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 	minut += 60
 	mod_homework[week] += 1 
 	mod_daily_score[week] += 1
-	$setloc['StageTitle'] = 'Study'
+	$setloc['StageTitle'] = 'Ballet Studies'
 	$setloc['StageImage'] =  '<<$default_img_path>>ballet_residence/study'
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'core_library', 'stage_title'
@@ -411,16 +411,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'make_up':
 			pcs_makeup = 5
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
-		$setloc['StageTitle'] = 'Feet Soak'
+		$setloc['StageTitle'] = 'Make Up Practice'
 		$setloc['StageImage'] =  '<<$default_img_path>>/ballet_events/make-up'
 		gs 'core_library', 'stage_title'
 
 		if pcs_makupskl <= 30:
-			'You struggle to master the basics of applying your look, wasting a lot of your expensive make-up. You wonder if you should get help with practicing.'
+			'You struggle to master the basics of applying your look, wasting a lot of your expensive make-up. You begin to wonder if you need to get help with practicing.'
 		elseif pcs_makupskl >= 31 or pcs_makupskl <= 69:
-			'You try to replicate the deft strokes that you was taught in school apply the basic foundation. You struggle briefly with the eyelashes before they settle in place. It takes you a few attempts to finalise the blending of your looks but at the end of your practice you are happy with the results even though it won''t win any awards.'
+			'You try to replicate the deft strokes that you was taught in school as you apply the basic foundations and contouring. You struggle briefly with the eyelashes before they settle in place. It takes you a few attempts to finalise the blending of your final look but at the end of your practice you are happy with the results even though it won''t win any awards.'
 		elseif pcs_makupskl >= 70:
-			'You artfully apply the make-up look with a quick, practiced ease that would leave most girls with envy. The final look is almost flawless and you criticaly review the final result.'
+			'You artfully apply the make-up look with a quick, practiced ease that would leave most girls jealous with envy. The final look is almost flawless and you criticaly review the final result trying to find any imperfections.'
 		else
 			$ballet['error'] += 'Makeup skill failed check'
 		end