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Merge remote-tracking branch 'upstream/master' into minor-fixes

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      locations/AlbFatherQW.qsrc
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+ 1 - 1
locations/AlbFatherQW.qsrc

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ $din_zajava_albfather = {
 				AlbinaQW['StarletsShutDown'] = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/calling_outdoor.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly dial Albina''s number and, in a panic, tell her what happened. She calms you down and asks if you told them anything. She sounds pleased when you tell her that you did. She thanks you and hangs up..'
+				'You quickly dial Albina''s number and, in a panic, tell her what happened. She calms you down and asks if you told them anything. She sounds pleased when you tell her that you did. She thanks you and hangs up...'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'pav_commercial'
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/BDSM_Club.qsrc

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif BDSMmeet = 1 and BDSMday ! daystart:
 		if money < 10000:
 			'You go to the Club entrance but don''t have enough money, you try to negotiate a deal to pay later, but the staff, realising you are not going to pay, call security. You are walked back to the gate.'
-		elseif $clothingworntype ! 'uniform' or PCloStyle2 ! 1:
+		elseif $clothingworntype ! 'gm_uniform' or PCloStyle2 ! 1:
 			'You are not wearing a maid uniform and security refuse you entry.'
 		else
 			if $BDSMrole = 's':

+ 1 - 1
locations/BDSM_training.qsrc

@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 					'You are shaking, ready to cum, but Mistress knows her stuff, she doesn''t allow you to reach the peak, masterfully holding you on the crest of a wave.'
 					'"Mistress, PL... , please, let me cum!" You barely squeeze out, almost biting your tongue.'
 					'"I didn''t catch that." Mistress pretends.'
-					'"Please...you must...let me CUM!'
+					'"Please... you must... let me CUM!'
 					'"Too soon!"'
 					'Mistress withdraws her hand. You look at it, like a child, who was given candy, only to have it taken away. Unable to tolerate it, you reach a hand to your crotch.'
 					'No!'

+ 3 - 3
locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 							*clr&cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/anatoly/sex/bossex2.jpg"></center>'
-							'Anatoly puts you on your back, and begins to undress you. His kisses and his hands run all over your body, soon his hand finds it''s way between your legs.'
+							'Anatoly puts you on your back, and begins to undress you. His kisses and his hands run all over your body, soon his hand finds its way between your legs.'
 
 							bosstipsexrand = rand(1, 10)
 
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					if BurgerQW['sergeyQW'] = 1:
 						'The pimply young man chuckles, and sits on the edge of your desk. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re dynamite. We are very lucky to have a girl like you around," he says, leering at you.'
 					elseif BurgerQW['sergeyQW'] = 0:
-						'The pimply young man chuckles, and sits on the edge of your desk. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you seem like such a cool girl, do you think...I mean would you like, to go out with me after work?"'
+						'The pimply young man chuckles, and sits on the edge of your desk. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you seem like such a cool girl, do you think... I mean would you like, to go out with me after work?"'
 
 						act 'Eww, no way!':
 							*clr&cla
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bend':
 		'He starts rubbing the head of his cock against your little pussy.'
 		act 'Moan': gt 'BurgerTip', 'sex'
 	elseif bosstipsex > 8:
-		'He bends down and spits into your ass. Then you feel his finger start working it''s way into your backdoor.'
+		'He bends down and spits into your ass. Then you feel his finger start working its way into your backdoor.'
 		act 'Give it to him': gt 'BurgerTip', 'anal'
 	end
 end

+ 2 - 2
locations/FedorEv.qsrc

@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Vs Fedor':
 				gs 'stat'			
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/strela/fedor.jpg"></center>'				
-				'Dan replies: "We could askVadim Bely to take care of him. He''ll know how to punish Fedor in a way that he''ll never forget." Vitek nods: "Good plan. Set it up, will you?" He then turns to Fedor "We''re settling this tomorrow, kid. You better be here after school, it''ll be ten times worse for you if you don''t." He then waves for his friends to follow him "Come on guys. Let''s go have some beers in the park, I need to relax. <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you want to join us, you know where we''ll be." Vitek and Dan leave Fedor on the ground and head for the schoolyard exit, but Vasily walks over to Fedor and kicks him in the ribs one more time, still laughing that signature jackal laugh of his. He then joins his friends, and moments later they''re gone.'
+				'Dan replies: "We could ask Vadim Bely to take care of him. He''ll know how to punish Fedor in a way that he''ll never forget." Vitek nods: "Good plan. Set it up, will you?" He then turns to Fedor "We''re settling this tomorrow, kid. You better be here after school, it''ll be ten times worse for you if you don''t." He then waves for his friends to follow him "Come on guys. Let''s go have some beers in the park, I need to relax. <<$pcs_nickname>>, if you want to join us, you know where we''ll be." Vitek and Dan leave Fedor on the ground and head for the schoolyard exit, but Vasily walks over to Fedor and kicks him in the ribs one more time, still laughing that signature jackal laugh of his. He then joins his friends, and moments later they''re gone.'
 
 				act 'Leave the school courtyard':gt 'pav_residential'
 			end
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 		fedorkozqw = 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/hold.jpg"></center>'
-		'You giggle lightly then tell Fedor "I would love to go with you and watch some movies that I''m sure you downloaded... legally" as you grin at him he says, "Yeah.. about that..." which causes both of you to laugh simultaneously. Fedor then wraps his arm gently around your neck and leads you to his house.'	
+		'You giggle lightly then tell Fedor "I would love to go with you and watch some movies that I''m sure you downloaded... legally" as you grin at him he says, "Yeah... about that..." which causes both of you to laugh simultaneously. Fedor then wraps his arm gently around your neck and leads you to his house.'	
 		
 		act 'Go with Fedor to his home':gt 'FedorEv2', 'Home'
 	end

+ 7 - 7
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cinema':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/couple.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you enter the cinema Fedor takes the lead and shows the tickets to a man at the ticket check. You look around you see a young couple at the concession stand buying snacks causing you think about what snacks you might want, Until you feel Fedor''s hand on your back. Fedor then leads you to the concession stand and asks you what you would like.'
 	
-	act 'Small Popcorn and medium drink':
+	act 'Small popcorn and medium drink':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cinema':
 			act 'Watch the movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movies 2'
 		end	
 	end		
-	act 'Large Popcorn, snacks and a large drink':
+	act 'Large popcorn, snacks and a large drink':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 2':
 				*clr & cla				
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cinema/sex/kinosex3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make to much noise.'
+				'You slowly turn back to Fedor and notice that he forgot to zip his pants and you can see his underwear poking out, so you slowly reach out to zip it for him when you feel sudden excitement as your hand is over his crootch and with out thinking you reach into his pants and start rubbing on his penis. You can feel how rock hard his cock is and unable to stop yourself you start jerking him off hearing him softly moan. You then look up to him to see him biting his lip trying not to make too much noise.'
 				
 				act 'Continue jerking him':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virgintalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Fedor...This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time?... ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first?...I promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
+	'"Fedor... This is my first time" you tell Fedor and he responds with a puzzled look "First time...? ohh you mean... I see..." Fedor lightly bites his lip and asks "<<$pcs_firstname>>, Will you let me be your first...?  promise I will take it slow and be as gentle as possible but if you aren''t ready we could try another position" he asks while gently rubbing your legs.'
 	
 	act 'Lose Virginity <b><h4><font color=#ff00cc>[Go steady]</font></h4></b>':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -467,7 +467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Virgin Sex':
 		fedorKozlovQW = 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/virginvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'"It''s ok, I''m...I''m ready" you give him a sweet smile and he replies, "I''m so glad that you will let me be your first. I promise I will be gentle." you lightly grip his hand and respond, "I know I can trust you." Fedor smiles and starts rubbing his penis head against your pussy lips and after a few seconds slowly pushes his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your vagina. You feel his penis move deeper inside until it is pressing against your hymen and a second later, you feel it burst through and you can''t help but let out a loud moan when you feel your cherry get popped.'
+		'"It''s ok, I''m... I''m ready" you give him a sweet smile and he replies, "I''m so glad that you will let me be your first. I promise I will be gentle." you lightly grip his hand and respond, "I know I can trust you." Fedor smiles and starts rubbing his penis head against your pussy lips and after a few seconds slowly pushes his <<dick>> centimeter penis into your vagina. You feel his penis move deeper inside until it is pressing against your hymen and a second later, you feel it burst through and you can''t help but let out a loud moan when you feel your cherry get popped.'
 		*nl	
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park 2':
 				FedorLuv += 2
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/tracks4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You continue running your finger through his hair as he plays with your hair. After a few seconds on staring into his eyes you lower you head and bring your lips to his. You both share a very passionate kiss that lasts for what feels like an hour. Feeling his warm lips against yours and his hot breath on your chin. After a few more minutes you slowly pull away from him and he casually sits up and says, "Damn <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep kissing me like that and I''m going to fall for you real hard." you respond, "So my plan is working?... Good" You both share a chuckle then Fedor asks "Are you ready to head back home or would you like to relax here for a bit longer?"'
+				'You continue running your finger through his hair as he plays with your hair. After a few seconds on staring into his eyes you lower you head and bring your lips to his. You both share a very passionate kiss that lasts for what feels like an hour. Feeling his warm lips against yours and his hot breath on your chin. After a few more minutes you slowly pull away from him and he casually sits up and says, "Damn <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep kissing me like that and I''m going to fall for you real hard." you respond, "So my plan is working...? Good" You both share a chuckle then Fedor asks "Are you ready to head back home or would you like to relax here for a bit longer?"'
 				*nl
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/park/tracks5.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
@@ -1052,7 +1052,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Breakup':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-	'Fedor approaches you with a serious look on his face. "Look <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve noticed that you and I don''t seem to be progressing at all in this relationship and I feel like I would only be holding you back if I continued this, so I think we should break this off...I''m sorry that I couldn''t be the man you needed." and before you get to say a word he turns around and leaves.'
+	'Fedor approaches you with a serious look on his face. "Look <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve noticed that you and I don''t seem to be progressing at all in this relationship and I feel like I would only be holding you back if I continued this, so I think we should break this off... I''m sorry that I couldn''t be the man you needed." and before you get to say a word he turns around and leaves.'
 	
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 end		

+ 4 - 4
locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'Movies':
 	'As you and Fedor arrive at the cinema, Fedor presented the tickets at the entrance then brought you to the concession stand.' 
 	'Fedor then asks, "What can I treat my beautiful girlfriend to today?"'
 				
-	act 'Small Popcorn and medium drink':
+	act 'Small popcorn and medium drink':
 		*clr & cla			
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/caress.mp4"></video></center>'	
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'Movies':
 				
 		act 'Follow Fedor''s lead':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Food'		
 	end	
-	act 'Large Popcorn, snacks and a large drink':
+	act 'Large popcorn, snacks and a large drink':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/caress.mp4"></video></center>'			
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mens Room':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue">Restroom</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/ladies/ladiesrestroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The Men''s room is a little dirty and has a long <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, 2 sinks and 4 stalls.'		
+	'The men''s room is a little dirty and has a long <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>, 2 sinks and 4 stalls.'		
 
 	if EndMovie = 1:
 		act 'Leave the restroom':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Movies 3'
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Fedor':
 				
 	act 'Enter the ladies room':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Ladies Room'
 
-	act 'Enter the Men''s room':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Mens Room'			
+	act 'Enter the men''s room':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Mens Room'			
 	
 	act 'Pull Fedor in the men''s restroom':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Fedor Restroom'	
 end	

+ 8 - 8
locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3Way':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/ivan1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look closely at the person in the doorway then recognize him as Ivan. You exclaim. "Fedor, Ivan is standing in the doorway!" Fedor quickly stops and turns to Ivan and says, "Ohh shit, I totally forgot that I invited Ivan to hang out with me this afternoon." Ivan approaches you casually as he says, "I could come back later if this is a bad time but I wouldn''t say no to joining in on the fun... if you don''t mind sharing, that is." Fedor responds, "Sharing? Sharing wha.. ohh...I see." Fedor turns to you with a curious look on his face. "What do you think <<$pcs_firstname>>?"'
+		'You look closely at the person in the doorway then recognize him as Ivan. You exclaim. "Fedor, Ivan is standing in the doorway!" Fedor quickly stops and turns to Ivan and says, "Ohh shit, I totally forgot that I invited Ivan to hang out with me this afternoon." Ivan approaches you casually as he says, "I could come back later if this is a bad time but I wouldn''t say no to joining in on the fun... if you don''t mind sharing, that is." Fedor responds, "Sharing? Sharing wha... ohh... I see." Fedor turns to you with a curious look on his face. "What do you think <<$pcs_firstname>>?"'
 
 		act 'Invite Ivan to join':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way1':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed4.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"Cover me in your cum." you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick as he turns to Fedor. "You heard the girl, Let''s give her some body paint." Ivan then gives him a high five as they continue spit roasting you. After a few seconds Fedor pulls out and starts covering your stomach with his seed and soon after Ivan pulls out of your mouth and immediately begins spraying his load all over you face. They both continue covering your body as you try to catch their cum with your hand then rub it all over your body. Ivan turns to Fedor. "Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> is nasty...I almost envy you." as he gets out of the bed and exits the bedroom to clean up.'
+				'"Cover me in your cum." you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick as he turns to Fedor. "You heard the girl, Let''s give her some body paint." Ivan then gives him a high five as they continue spit roasting you. After a few seconds Fedor pulls out and starts covering your stomach with his seed and soon after Ivan pulls out of your mouth and immediately begins spraying his load all over you face. They both continue covering your body as you try to catch their cum with your hand then rub it all over your body. Ivan turns to Fedor. "Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>> is nasty... I almost envy you." as he gets out of the bed and exits the bedroom to clean up.'
 				*nl
 				'Fedor turns to you "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>. Maybe we can do it again sometime." You give him a mischievous smile as you respond, "Continue treating me right and I might agree to do this again." Fedor then replies, "You have yourself a deal." with a playful smile as he lifts you up and carries you to the bathroom to wash up.'
 				*nl
@@ -2821,7 +2821,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'TV Porn':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/tv/tvporn'+rand(1,5)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You begin cycling through adult channels watching various sexual acts being performed by professional pornstars..'
+	'You begin cycling through adult channels watching various sexual acts being performed by professional pornstars...'
 
 	act 'Get off couch':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Livingroom'
 	act 'Change channel':gt 'FedorEv4', 'TV'
@@ -3164,7 +3164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Love Talk':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 	'You sit down next to Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" Fedor responds, "I''m just thinking about how much my life has changes since I met you." You respond, "Changed for the better I hope." He turns to you with a wide smile on his face "Of course. I have never been as happy as I am with you and I just needed to tell you how much you mean to me."'
 	*nl
-	'You crawl up the bed and lay down beside him and reply, "I feel the same way about you...I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor'
+	'You crawl up the bed and lay down beside him and reply, "I feel the same way about you... I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/kiss.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3182,7 +3182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Love Talk Strela':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/fedor.jpg"></center>'
 	'You sit down next to Fedor and ask him "You look troubled. What''s on your mind?" With a tear sliding down his cheek, Fedor responds, "I keep thinking of that day where I felt completely helpless and almost lost everything to those bastards. The thought of what might have happened if you weren''t there, chills me to my very core." You crawl forward and lay next to him "It was a crazy day and I''m glad everything worked out in the end. I would hate for something like that to happen to you because of me." Fedor places his hand on your cheek "You saved me <<$pcs_firstname>> and I will never forget it. You are everything I could ever hope for in a girl."'
 	*nl
-	'You can feel your cheeks getting flushed as you respond, "Well you''re everything I need in a man and that is why I...I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor.'
+	'You can feel your cheeks getting flushed as you respond, "Well you''re everything I need in a man and that is why I... I love you Fyodor." Fedor looks shocked for a moment then responds, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You really mean everything to me and I never want to lose you." You respond, "You never will." as you lean forward and share a very passionate kiss with Fedor.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/kiss.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3335,7 +3335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Shelter':
 	FedorShelter = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor... I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out...of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
+	'You sit down next to Fedor then say, "Fedor... I need your help." Fedor quickly sits up then responds, "What do you need?" you downcast your eyes then say, "My mother threw me out... of my home, and I don''t know what to do." you begin sobbing as Fedor wraps his arms around you. "That''s horrible. I bet my mother will take you in. I will speak to her the next time I see her. Don''t worry I won''t let you live on the streets." you quickly wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest then say, "Thank you so much Fedor. I am so scared." Fedor kisses you on the forehead, as he responds, "I will always be here for you <<$pcs_firstname>>, whenever you need me." you give Fedor a soft kiss then get up and say, "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor responds with a thumbs up, and a smile.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -3363,9 +3363,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka Help':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit at the edge of the bed next to Fedor then lower your head, staring blankly at the ground, trying to collect your thoughts when you feel Fedor''s hand on your shoulder. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, what''s wrong?" You look toward him but are unable to look him in the eye. "Fedor...I need your help with something but I..." He sits up then wraps his arms around your waist. "<<$pcs_firstname>> whatever it is, you can talk to me."'
+	'You sit at the edge of the bed next to Fedor then lower your head, staring blankly at the ground, trying to collect your thoughts when you feel Fedor''s hand on your shoulder. "<<$pcs_firstname>>, what''s wrong?" You look toward him but are unable to look him in the eye. "Fedor... I need your help with something but I..." He sits up then wraps his arms around your waist. "<<$pcs_firstname>> whatever it is, you can talk to me."'
 
-	act 'It''s...It''s nothing':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
+	act 'It''s... It''s nothing':gt 'FedorEv4', 'Bedroom'
 	
 	act 'Ask him for help':
 		*clr & cla

+ 6 - 6
locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 1':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/school/lockerroom/lr1.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you both enter the locker room, you begin rubbing on Fedor''s crotch to warm him up as he begins kissing you gently. You can feel his hands start to wander over your curves, lightly caressing you as you begin pulling down his pants. you begin stroking Fedor''s hard cock which fills you with excitement, feeling his long hard warm penis in your hands as you stroke it gently.'
+	'As you both enter the locker room, you begin rubbing on Fedor''s crotch to warm him up as he begins kissing you gently. You can feel his hands start to wander over your curves, lightly caressing you as you begin pulling down his pants. You begin stroking Fedor''s hard cock which fills you with excitement, feeling his long hard warm penis in your hands as you stroke it gently.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 5, 'dom'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast Intro':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Fyodor [Masha] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-				'You slowly step toward Fedor and say, "Look Fedor...I never meant for any of this to happen." Fedor shouts "YOU AGREED TO GO OUT WITH VIKTOR WHILE DATING ME! How can you expect me to believe that you cared for me at all... Just go away <<$pcs_firstname>>. I have nothing for you." you step away from Fedor knowing that nothing you say will console him while thinking to yourself "If only he trusted me more, then maybe he would believe that my apology is sincere."'
+				'You slowly step toward Fedor and say, "Look Fedor... I never meant for any of this to happen." Fedor shouts "YOU AGREED TO GO OUT WITH VIKTOR WHILE DATING ME! How can you expect me to believe that you cared for me at all... Just go away <<$pcs_firstname>>. I have nothing for you." you step away from Fedor knowing that nothing you say will console him while thinking to yourself "If only he trusted me more, then maybe he would believe that my apology is sincere."'
 
 				act 'Walk away':gt 'pav_park', 'start'
 			end
@@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up to Fedor and he immediately turns to face you with a very welcoming smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve been reflecting on what we spoke about last time and I really need to thank you for cheering me up. I really needed that." You place your hand on his shoulder. "It was the least I can do Fedor." Fedor rubs your hand on his shoulder while still keeping his welcoming smile intact as he asks "So, is there anything I can do for you?" You wrap your fingers around his as you reply, "Fedor I...I just... I can''t stop thinking of you Fyodor. I need you in my life. Will you please take me back." Fedor replies with a shocked look on his face "If we hooked up again then Viktor will tear me apart. I''m just not strong enough to deal with him. I''m sorry."'
+			'You walk up to Fedor and he immediately turns to face you with a very welcoming smile on his face. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''ve been reflecting on what we spoke about last time and I really need to thank you for cheering me up. I really needed that." You place your hand on his shoulder. "It was the least I can do Fedor." Fedor rubs your hand on his shoulder while still keeping his welcoming smile intact as he asks "So, is there anything I can do for you?" You wrap your fingers around his as you reply, "Fedor I... I just... I can''t stop thinking of you Fyodor. I need you in my life. Will you please take me back." Fedor replies with a shocked look on his face "If we hooked up again then Viktor will tear me apart. I''m just not strong enough to deal with him. I''m sorry."'
 			
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -894,7 +894,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You move your face closer to Fedor''s. "I''ve never been more sure of anything in my life. Please Fyodor, kiss me now." Fedor stares into your eyes for a second before grabbing you shoulders then pulling you to him, kissing you very passionately for five minutes straight. After you both finish kissing, Fedor says, "Ok <<$pcs_firstname>> here is how it works. I will remain here after school, so whenever you would like to go out, just ask me here and we could sneak through town but know that I won''t be able to speak with you at school but we can go on anywhere that Viktor and his friends don''t hang out. Do you understand?" you nod your head and Fedor gives you a smile followed by a kiss.'
+					'You move your face closer to Fedor''s. "I''ve never been more sure of anything in my life. Please Fedor, kiss me now." Fedor stares into your eyes for a second before grabbing you shoulders then pulling you to him, kissing you very passionately for five minutes straight. After you both finish kissing, Fedor says, "Ok <<$pcs_firstname>> here is how it works. I will remain here after school, so whenever you would like to go out, just ask me here and we could sneak through town but know that I won''t be able to speak with you at school but we can go on anywhere that Viktor and his friends don''t hang out. Do you understand?" you nod your head and Fedor gives you a smile followed by a kiss.'
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
 
@@ -953,7 +953,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Vs Dimka':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'Fedor nods then tells you "You lure him to the other side of school and I will wait for you there." you give Fedor a kiss before responding "I will.. and thank you again Fedor. This means a great deal to me." Fedor gives you a wink as he walks off.'
+		'Fedor nods then tells you "You lure him to the other side of school and I will wait for you there." you give Fedor a kiss before responding "I will... and thank you again Fedor. This means a great deal to me." Fedor gives you a wink as he walks off.'
 
 		act 'Lure Dimka':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -984,7 +984,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Vs Dimka':
 					pcs_health -= 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/school/events/dimka/anal.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You feel Dimka''s hands on your ass cheeks, spreading them open. You suddenly feel a sharp pain as Dimka shoves his dick inside your asshole, causing you to shriek in searing pain before hearing some thumping behind you. You turn around to see Fedor sprinting at the both of you. Dimka quickly pulls off of you as he begins zipping his pants, he then angrily shouts "What the fu.." Fedor punches him in his face, knocking Dimka a meter away. Dimka quickly looks up at Fedor. "What the fuck is wrong with you!?" Fedor begins kicking him in his ribs while shouting "<b>How dare you fuck with <<$pcs_firstname>>! She is my girl and no one fucks with my girl!</b>" Fedor continues kicking Dimka in his ribs.'
+					'You feel Dimka''s hands on your ass cheeks, spreading them open. You suddenly feel a sharp pain as Dimka shoves his dick inside your asshole, causing you to shriek in searing pain before hearing some thumping behind you. You turn around to see Fedor sprinting at the both of you. Dimka quickly pulls off of you as he begins zipping his pants, he then angrily shouts "What the fu..." Fedor punches him in his face, knocking Dimka a meter away. Dimka quickly looks up at Fedor. "What the fuck is wrong with you!?" Fedor begins kicking him in his ribs while shouting "<b>How dare you fuck with <<$pcs_firstname>>! She is my girl and no one fucks with my girl!</b>" Fedor continues kicking Dimka in his ribs.'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					if fedorKozlovQW = -15:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast2.jpg"></center>'

+ 10 - 10
locations/HotelHole.qsrc

@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pavlin' :
 				pavldaystart2 = daystart
 			elseif pavtalk = 0:
 				PavlinQW = 6
-				'"<<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>> I ..." you start talking but he immediately interrupts you.'
+				'"<<$npc_nickname[''A217'']>> I..." you start talking but he immediately interrupts you.'
 				'"I hope you learned your lesson <<$pcs_firstname>>. I am sorry I had to do that but you need to understand the situation here."'
 				'You were hoping you could have an honest conversation with him about the incident but you understand now that that is not possible yet.'
 				pavtalk = 1
@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clown':
 		*clr
 		'Again, you think you saw something at the other side of the room.'
 		'You are getting scared.'
-		'The buzzing sound gets louder....'
+		'The buzzing sound gets louder...'
 		wait 1000
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -866,21 +866,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 		'Suddenly he takes your arms and attaches your leather bracelets to a chain hanging above your head.'
 		'"<<$pitfs>>Wait a minute, no one said anything about being tied up.<<$pitfe>>" You think as panic begins to creep into your mind.'
 		'Without warning you feel the whip lash across your back.'
-		'.....WHOOSH....'
+		'...WHOOSH...'
 		'"<<$pitfs>>AAARGH!<<$pitfe>>" Your mind reels.'
 		'You clench your teeth and take it.'
 		'Then another strike lands.'
-		'.....WHISHP....'
+		'...WHISHP...'
 		'"<<$pitfs>>Fuck this hurts, but I can''t let it show!<<$pitfe>>" Again you refuse to scream out, not wanting to give your torturer the satisfaction.'
 		'But then...'
-		'.....WHOOSH....'
-		'.....WHAP....'
+		'...WHOOSH...'
+		'...WHAP...'
 		'The whip snaps across each breast before you see it coming.'
 		'You finally scream out involuntarily, the unexpected spike in pain proving too much to ignore.'
 		'"<<$pitfs>>Damn it, I shouldn''t show any weakness! Who knows how far he will take this!<<$pitfe>>" You admonish yourself, but it is too late.'
 		'"Well, well, it looks like the little bitch can feel pain after all." The cruel pervert says, a smile plastered across his vile face.'
-		'.....WHIP....'
-		'.....SNAP....'
+		'...WHIP...'
+		'...SNAP...'
 		'Two more hits slice sharply across your sensitive nipples, eliciting one big scream after another.'
 		'The torment continues for what feels like an eternity. The client alternates randomly between striking yours breasts, back, and buttocks. But the worst by far is when he zeroes in on your quivering pussy. As the instrument slaps viciously across your labia you scream and beg, tears streaming down your tortured face, mascara straining your cheeks. When the whip lands directly on your clit you feel like passing out and vomiting at the same time, your stomach twisting in agony.'
 		*nl
@@ -1000,7 +1000,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 						fcolor = rgb(255, 255, 255)
 						bcolor = rgb(0, 0, 0)
 						lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
-						'Darkness .........................'
+						'Darkness ...'
 						act 'What is this?':
 							cla
 							:faintbegin
@@ -1008,7 +1008,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'PregBDSM' :
 
 								minut += 180
 								wait 1000
-								'.....................................'
+								'...'
 								if faintcounter = 3:'"<<$pitfs>>Where am I?<<$pitfe>>"<br>'
 								if faintcounter = 5:'"<<$pitfs>>Am I dead?<<$pitfe>>"<br>'
 								if faintcounter = 7:'"<<$pitfs>>What happened?<<$pitfe>>"'

+ 2 - 2
locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					end
 					act 'Yes, I need my money back':
 						cla
-						'"Y.. Y.. yes I have." You say with a quivering voice. "I need that money back, please! I''ll do anything you ask!" You beg and drop your eyes to the floor in submission.'
+						'"Y... Y... yes I have." You say with a quivering voice. "I need that money back, please! I''ll do anything you ask!" You beg and drop your eyes to the floor in submission.'
 						''
 						'"Just bring that tight ass in here and have some fun with us. I promise you''ll get what you''re after." The devious look on his face gives you second thoughts, but you enter the room anyways, feeling completely out of options.'
 						prosmoneyhot = 2
@@ -1354,7 +1354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					act 'Stay and watch for a bit':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/work/events/masturbate2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You crouch down so that she wont see you and have a perfect close view of her pussy.'
+						'You crouch down so that she won''t see you and have a perfect close view of her pussy.'
 						'She is moaning quite loudly now and you watch her insert a finger deeply inside.'
 							
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/KGZstart.qsrc

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ act 'Play a new game':
 	'PAPA_GANS inc.'
 	'are'
 	'Sundead.'
-	'As harsh and merciless this world. Not that past life was better or worse. All its advantages and disadvantages. You were probably wondering, what kind of a zombie apocalypse, there are pros? I''ll tell you ... Freedom. Freedom of action and freedom of choice, everyone is free to do what really wants. For me, the beginning of the end of the world, was liberation. And even now, I realize that I was only here because of their choice, their freedom.'
+	'As harsh and merciless this world. Not that past life was better or worse. All its advantages and disadvantages. You were probably wondering, what kind of a zombie apocalypse, there are pros? I''ll tell you... Freedom. Freedom of action and freedom of choice, everyone is free to do what really wants. For me, the beginning of the end of the world, was liberation. And even now, I realize that I was only here because of their choice, their freedom.'
 	'In a past life I was an ordinary man:he went to work, met a girl, paying loans and was going to fly on vacation at some resort. On a day when everything changed, I woke up surprisingly early, the sun''s rays coming through the curtains and joyfully heralded a new day, and with it the complete collapse of the old society.'
 	'My girl was not there, then I thought that she had gone to work early. How wrong I was. To my surprise, the apartment was not the light, and I put the coffee brewed in the old. Normally I do not have time to watch it, but that day I decided not to rush to work, and simply enjoy the morning. Fire a couple of balls, said that it would be necessary to go to the grocery store and absorb rather take breakfast and read long deferred detective.'
 	'My peace interrupted some noise outside the front door. I heard heart-rending cries, which ended after a few seconds. Still not understanding what was happening, I grabbed the phone and quickly dialed 911. As the tube was silence, frightening and ruthless, no beeps, no sound at all, just my own echo was given in the endless corridors of radio waves.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/LariskaHome.qsrc

@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	'The room is clean, and even smells like sage.'
 	*nl
 	'There is a shower, toilet, sink, <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, and even a separate bath tub.'
-	if lariloc = 13:'Since <a href="exec: gt ''LariskaHome'', ''bathroom_join_1''">Lariska</a> didn''t lock the door, you are able to enter unnoticed. Maybe you can join her....'
+	if lariloc = 13:'Since <a href="exec: gt ''LariskaHome'', ''bathroom_join_1''">Lariska</a> didn''t lock the door, you are able to enter unnoticed. Maybe you can join her...'
 	if lariloc = 20:'<a href="exec: gt ''LariskaHome'', ''bathroom_cleaning_1''">Lariska</a> is here, cleaning the bathroom.'
 	act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'LariskaHome', 'hallway'
 	if lariloc ! 13:

+ 1 - 1
locations/MHall.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'foyer':
 	end
 	if $BDSMrole = 's':
 		act 'Go to Dressing room': gt 'MDressing'
-		if ($clothingworntype ! 'uniform' or PCloStyle2 ! 1) and  $clothingworntype ! 'nude':exit
+		if ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_uniform' or PCloStyle2 ! 1) and  $clothingworntype ! 'nude':exit
 	end
 	act 'Go upstairs to the west wing landing':gt 'MLanding', 'west'
 	act 'Go upstairs to the east wing landing':gt 'MLanding', 'east'

+ 1 - 1
locations/MartinSex3.qsrc

@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinBlowjob':
 			else
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bar/martin/blowjob/dresssub_deep.mp4"></center>'
 			end	
-			'But that''s not enough for him yet. Martin wants to claim all of your mouth and more, and after only a hint of a warning, he takes what he wants: One assertive push at the back of your head is all it takes to drive his hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock down your <<$pcdesc_throat>> throat until your ' + iif(pirsD>0,'pierced ','') + 'nose almost touches his belly..'
+			'But that''s not enough for him yet. Martin wants to claim all of your mouth and more, and after only a hint of a warning, he takes what he wants: One assertive push at the back of your head is all it takes to drive his hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock down your <<$pcdesc_throat>> throat until your ' + iif(pirsD>0,'pierced ','') + 'nose almost touches his belly...'
 			*nl
 			'You can feel your gag reflex piping up, but Martin is insistent, holding you there just a few moments longer, groaning softly. You like having a dick in your mouth, but you <b>love</b> having one in your throat. There''s a sense of safety in this carefully-measured abuse, a sense of freedom in giving up control to somebody, a sense of empowerment and arousal in letting him use you for his own pleasure.'
 			*nl

+ 1 - 1
locations/MartinTalk.qsrc

@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'You lean forward, so close to Martin now that he can smell the alcohol on your breath. "Does that answer your questions?"'
 		*nl
 		'Baffled by your directness, Martin nods silently.'
-		'"Good," you say with an enticing smile. Then you point down the counter. "I think somebody''s looking for your attention, Mr Barman."'
+		'"Good," you say with an enticing smile. Then you point down the counter. "I think somebody''s looking for your attention, Mr. Barman."'
 		'That seems to shake him from his reverie. Grumbling, Martin goes about his duty, walking a little more stiffly than you are used to seeing him.'
 		*nl
 		'You cannot outright see the effect of your words, but the telltale hints of it alone somehow make your drink taste better.'

+ 11 - 11
locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I... I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 								gs'stat'							
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'							
-								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together, and don''t worry, I wont lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room, as you lay down and close your eyes...'
+								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together, and don''t worry, I won''t lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room, as you lay down and close your eyes...'
 
 								act 'Rest':gt 'NikoDreams', 'Woods'
 							end
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I wont be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
+		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I won''t be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
 		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysurprised.jpg"></center>'	
-			'You ask <<$VK_VikName>>, "Hey <<$VK_VikName>> the bathroom is currently locked. Do you have the key for it?" <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a surprised look before saying, "Who the hell locked it.... Kaaaaattt... Anyway where the hell is that spare key?" She then turns to the nearby desk then begins recklessly fumbling through it, causing this to fall out as she continues searching. "It''s gotta be around here somew... Wait!" She turns to her refrigerator then quickly grabs a vase on top of it as she exclaims, "There you are, you sneaky little snake." She then tosses you the keys then say, "There you go. Have fun!" before going back to playing games on her phone.'
+			'You ask <<$VK_VikName>>, "Hey <<$VK_VikName>> the bathroom is currently locked. Do you have the key for it?" <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a surprised look before saying, "Who the hell locked it... Kaaaaattt... Anyway where the hell is that spare key?" She then turns to the nearby desk then begins recklessly fumbling through it, causing this to fall out as she continues searching. "It''s gotta be around here somew... Wait!" She turns to her refrigerator then quickly grabs a vase on top of it as she exclaims, "There you are, you sneaky little snake." She then tosses you the keys then say, "There you go. Have fun!" before going back to playing games on her phone.'
 			
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Kitchen'
 		end
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Goodbye':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vicky2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open the front door then walk out, as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I wont argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
+	'You open the front door then walk out, as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I won''t argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
 	
 	if VKNatChat = 4:
 		act 'Walk home with Natalia':NikoAftermath = 0 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Walk'
@@ -545,9 +545,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
 			if VKNatChat = 0:
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
 			else
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
 			end	
 		
 			act 'Walk away':VKKatjaChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Katja Room'
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	if VKNatChat = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia3.jpg"></center>'
-		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile, as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I wont." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
+		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile, as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I won''t." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
 		*nl
 		'You respond, "Thank you, for everything you all have done for me. I shutter to think of what would have happened to me if you weren''t around." Natalia replies with a warm smile before saying, "You are very welcome. Now you should take a relaxing bath before <<$VK_VikName>> is finished cooking."'
 		act 'Walk away':VKNatChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
@@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park':
 	'You, and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench, and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles, as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did, and be unphased." You nod, as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
 	*nl
 	if SexTalkNatalia = 4 or NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'"I.. um.. care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds, as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
+		'"I... um... care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds, as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
 		act 'Kiss her':VKNataliaKiss = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Kiss'
 		act 'Change subject':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	else	
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 	*clr & cla	
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes, as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red, as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia, and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
+	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes, as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. I will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red, as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia, and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs'stat'	
 							
@@ -1006,7 +1006,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just...I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
+			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just... I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
 					
 			act 'Let Katja rinse you off':	
 				cla & *clr

+ 1 - 1
locations/Military.qsrc

@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/military/sex/rape2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You began to cry for help, when a dick is stuffed in your mouth.'
 		'"Here''s something to shut your mouth", came the voice of a rapist.'
-		'You tried to spit it out, but its getting worse as he thrust it down your throat, and began to throatfuck you.'
+		'You tried to spit it out, but it''s getting worse as he thrust it down your throat, and began to throatfuck you.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 14 - 14
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/d3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and...Niko won. The man hosting the event, hands Niko a stuffed bear. Niko holds it below his chin with an innocent smile on his face as he asks you, "Since I won, I would like to know if it would be too brazen of me to ask you for a kiss. What say you m''lady?"'
+						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and... Niko won. The man hosting the event, hands Niko a stuffed bear. Niko holds it below his chin with an innocent smile on his face as he asks you, "Since I won, I would like to know if it would be too brazen of me to ask you for a kiss. What say you m''lady?"'
 
 						act 'Agree to Kiss Niko':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_1':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and...You won. The man hosting the event, hands you a plastic gnome. Niko looks at the score, a little shocked as he scratches the back of his head. "I guess... You won. So what do you desire for your prize?" Niko moves his face closer to yours.'
+						'You and Niko grab a plastic gun then begin shooting the bottles as quickly and efficiently as possible. After a few minutes, the scores get tallied up and... You won. The man hosting the event, hands you a plastic gnome. Niko looks at the score, a little shocked as he scratches the back of his head. "I guess... You won. So what do you desire for your prize?" Niko moves his face closer to yours.'
 
 						act 'Kiss me':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1_2':
 								minut += 5
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-								'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence... yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
+								'"I trust you but I... I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence... yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand and walks you toward the train station.'
 								act 'Follow Niko':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Home Sad'
 							end
 						else
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick.." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!" Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch as he says, "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, it wont take long."'
+						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick..." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!" Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch as he says, "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, it won''t take long."'
 
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Cafeteria':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/hold.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you get up to walk out of the cafeteria, Niko wraps his arms around your shoulders and kisses you on the cheek. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, how is my princess doing?" You smile as you reply, "Your princess is doing well and she is much happier now that you are here." Niko sits down next to you and you both spend the next 5 minutes, gossiping about your classmates. Niko then leans toward you and whispers in your ear, "Hey do you remember when you said that you wanted to be more daring?" You reply, "I said that I wanted to cut loose more." Niko replies, "Yeah same thing, so how about you be more "daring" right now?" You tilt your head as you reply, "What do you mean?"'
 	*nl
-	'Niko gives you a wolfish grin as he replies, "I want you to suck me off right now." You can feel your face growing red as you respond, "I..I don''t know. What if someone sees us?" Niko rubs your back with one hand while he begins unbuttoning his pants with the other. "Now that''s the fun part, Let''s see what happens, shall we?"'
+	'Niko gives you a wolfish grin as he replies, "I want you to suck me off right now." You can feel your face growing red as you respond, "I... I don''t know. What if someone sees us?" Niko rubs your back with one hand while he begins unbuttoning his pants with the other. "Now that''s the fun part, Let''s see what happens, shall we?"'
 
 	act 'Suck Niko''s dick':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 																	*clr & cla
 																	gs'stat'															
 																	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d9.jpg"></center>'
-																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, you ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
+																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I won''t plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, you ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
 
 																	act 'Wait for ice cream':
 																		*clr & cla
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Home':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'			
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home3.jpg"></center>'
-				'feeling both shy and embarrassed, having Niko licking your sensitive area, causes your thoughts to race. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that Niko and I are having sex. His tongue is so soft and his arms so strong. There is no going back now, I hope he doesn''t get me pregnant..No! I can trust him. He cares for me and is really smart, I know he can control himself.</font> Niko says, "It''s your turn." as he grabs you by your shoulders and lifts you up before pushing your down on your knees.'
+				'feeling both shy and embarrassed, having Niko licking your sensitive area, causes your thoughts to race. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that Niko and I are having sex. His tongue is so soft and his arms so strong. There is no going back now, I hope he doesn''t get me pregnant... No! I can trust him. He cares for me and is really smart, I know he can control himself.</font> Niko says, "It''s your turn." as he grabs you by your shoulders and lifts you up before pushing your down on your knees.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -5
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', -5
@@ -817,7 +817,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Home':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home6.jpg"></center>'
-							'Niko pushes his dick inside of you, causing a rush of pleasure, feeling his hard cock pushing it''s way inside you. You lay back enjoying the thrusts as you continue to stare into Niko''s eyes, feeling his lustful gaze almost hypnotizing you into submission, wanting him to fuck you harder while feeling helpless to stop it, but also feeling satisfaction in that feeling.' 
+							'Niko pushes his dick inside of you, causing a rush of pleasure, feeling his hard cock pushing its way inside you. You lay back enjoying the thrusts as you continue to stare into Niko''s eyes, feeling his lustful gaze almost hypnotizing you into submission, wanting him to fuck you harder while feeling helpless to stop it, but also feeling satisfaction in that feeling.' 
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 							gs'stat'
 							act 'Ponder':
@@ -1031,14 +1031,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Hallway Strip':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko leads you out of the cafeteria as the other students enter. You and Niko wait for a few seconds before he leans forward and whispers in your ear, "Take off your clothes." You look back at Niko in shock, "But we are in the hallway outside of the cafeteria. Someone will see me for sure." Niko grins as he replies, "Everyone in there is too focused on chating and eating. i doubt that anyone will even look in this direction and if they do then I will cover you up before anyone recognizes you. You can trust me."'
+		'Niko leads you out of the cafeteria as the other students enter. You and Niko wait for a few seconds before he leans forward and whispers in your ear, "Take off your clothes." You look back at Niko in shock, "But we are in the hallway outside of the cafeteria. Someone will see me for sure." Niko grins as he replies, "Everyone in there is too focused on chating and eating. I doubt that anyone will even look in this direction and if they do then I will cover you up before anyone recognizes you. You can trust me."'
 
 		act 'Begin stripping':
 			*clr & cla
 			inhib_exp += 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/strip/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There... I took off my top... I feel more daring now... thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please...I...I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
+			'You look around to make sure that no one is looking before slowly reaching for your shirt and sliding it off while looking back to Niko and seeing the pleased grin on his face as you continue striping for him. You constantly look back at the cafeteria, checking if someone has noticed you. After removing your shirt, you look Niko in his eyes, "There... I took off my top... I feel more daring now... thank you, I should go now." You then quickly try to put on your top when Niko grabs it as he responds, "Come on now, don''t let fear get the better of you. Take it all off." You grab onto Niko''s hand, "Please... I... I can''t. Someone will see me." Niko whispers in your ear, "Don''t get cold feet now. Take it all off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs'stat'
 			
@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 									inhib_exp += 1
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'You finish licking all the cum off of Niko''s penis when Niko leans forward and gives you a kiss on the forehead, "That''s my girl, Always getting braver everyday. Well I''m gonna go clean up, I''ll be right back." Niko then walks toward the restroom. As he leaves you think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>Getting braver?... Ohh shit, I totally forgot where I was, what if someone saw me? ohh no, I hope no one saw me.</font> You quickly look around to see in anyone noticed you and you can see a few guy snickering as they both whisper to each other. You slowly rise to your feet, feeling your face growing red. You walk to the other side of the dance floor while keeping an eye out for Niko.'
+									'You finish licking all the cum off of Niko''s penis when Niko leans forward and gives you a kiss on the forehead, "That''s my girl, Always getting braver everyday. Well I''m gonna go clean up, I''ll be right back." Niko then walks toward the restroom. As he leaves you think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>Getting braver...? Ohh shit, I totally forgot where I was, what if someone saw me? ohh no, I hope no one saw me.</font> You quickly look around to see in anyone noticed you and you can see a few guy snickering as they both whisper to each other. You slowly rise to your feet, feeling your face growing red. You walk to the other side of the dance floor while keeping an eye out for Niko.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 									gs'stat'
 									
@@ -1310,7 +1310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 										*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-										'You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts, <font color=#FF00FF>I''m sure those guys wont be a problem. I have nothing to worry about. I just need to wait for Niko then I can go home and relax.</font>' 
+										'You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts, <font color=#FF00FF>I''m sure those guys won''t be a problem. I have nothing to worry about. I just need to wait for Niko then I can go home and relax.</font>' 
 										
 										act 'Continue':
 											*clr & cla
@@ -1334,14 +1334,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 													minut += 5
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/Valentin.jpg"></center>'
-													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes...I''ll be fine on my own."' 
+													'You stumble around looking for Niko and find him drinking with Valentin Bogdanov. You walk up to Niko and say, "Niko, you said that you''d... be right back. I was waiting... for you." Niko replies, "Ohh shit. I totally forgot, I''m sorry, would you like me to walk you home?" You reply, "It''s cool, we all forget things sometimes... I''ll be fine on my own."' 
 													
 													act 'Hear Niko''s reply':
 														*clr & cla
 														NikoEv = 8
 														gs'stat'										
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/d4.jpg"></center>'
-														'Valentin adds, "Damn Niko, she looks wasted, you should probably take her home." Niko responds, "You''re right, come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m taking you home." You try to object, "I''m fine...I...I can..." Niko igrores your protests and lifts you onto his back then carries you home.'
+														'Valentin adds, "Damn Niko, she looks wasted, you should probably take her home." Niko responds, "You''re right, come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m taking you home." You try to object, "I''m fine... I... I can..." Niko igrores your protests and lifts you onto his back then carries you home.'
 
 														act 'Rest on Niko''s back':minut += 10 & gt 'korrPar'
 													end	

+ 6 - 6
locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/ra8.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!... Don''t drop her!... Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
+							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head...! Don''t drop her...! Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
 
 							act 'Turn around':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods':
 	VKSmiley = 3
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/woods/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can feel grass on your face which you quickly brush away before looking around and noticing that you are in the middle of the woods with a mist that surrounds you. '+$OpenInnerThought+'What''s going on? Why am I here? How did I get here? Where am I?'+$CloseInnerThought+' You stand up then look around to try to get your bearings when you begin hearing music along with the sounds of laughing in the far distance. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Where is this music coming from? Was that a person laughing? Maybe they can help me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' you begin heading in that direction when you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Something about that laughter is...unnerving.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+	'You can feel grass on your face which you quickly brush away before looking around and noticing that you are in the middle of the woods with a mist that surrounds you. '+$OpenInnerThought+'What''s going on? Why am I here? How did I get here? Where am I?'+$CloseInnerThought+' You stand up then look around to try to get your bearings when you begin hearing music along with the sounds of laughing in the far distance. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Where is this music coming from? Was that a person laughing? Maybe they can help me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' you begin heading in that direction when you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Something about that laughter is... unnerving.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 	*nl
 	'You can hear someone laughing, far away.'
 
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00>Viktoria "Vicky" Meynold</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance.. for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but... where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance... for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
 	
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/cam/Cam2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You quickly stand up then begin dancing. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I need to keep dancing because ...Umm...Why am I dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky reaches forward then shoves her fingers inside of your vagina while Katja sticks her finger in your ass. Natalia walks up to you then begins squeezing your breasts. Vicky then says, "And they thought that Sonia was a whore." Katja giggles as she responds, "That''s just silly. <<$pcs_firstname>> is the only whore here." Natalia replies, "I agree, I don''t even know why she thought that she could hide it." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Why are they being so mean to me? and why can''t I stop dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky gives your ass a firm smack as she says, "Alright, we kept the boys waiting long enough!"'
+		'You quickly stand up then begin dancing. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I need to keep dancing because... Umm... Why am I dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky reaches forward then shoves her fingers inside of your vagina while Katja sticks her finger in your ass. Natalia walks up to you then begins squeezing your breasts. Vicky then says, "And they thought that Sonia was a whore." Katja giggles as she responds, "That''s just silly. <<$pcs_firstname>> is the only whore here." Natalia replies, "I agree, I don''t even know why she thought that she could hide it." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Why are they being so mean to me? and why can''t I stop dancing?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vicky gives your ass a firm smack as she says, "Alright, we kept the boys waiting long enough!"'
 
 		act 'Boys?':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 					'You begin sucking Lesko''s dick as the boys around you, begin hollering.'
 					'Lena: "Wow! <<$pcs_firstname>> is even sucking Lesko''s dick. What a fucking cumdumpster!"'
 					'Lera: "She seems to be enjoying it too. Gross!"'
-					'Mr Anatoly: Don''t look at me. I never taught her that.'
+					'Mr. Anatoly: Don''t look at me. I never taught her that.'
 					
 					act 'Continue':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -589,7 +589,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Puppeteer':
 								'Arkadi: "Whoa, what is her problem?"'
 								'Niko: "Maybe <<$pcs_nickname>> is on the pipe or something?"'
 								'Natalia: "I hope that she is okay."'
-								'Christina: "I bet she was just looking for attention. i wouldn''t put it past her."'
+								'Christina: "I bet she was just looking for attention. I wouldn''t put it past her."'
 								'Bella: "Maybe she is just a psycho bitch and she finally snapped."'
 								
 								act 'Quickly leave the classroom': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break' 

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/hug1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly... unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
+				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly... unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because..." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
 
 				if NikoEv >= 17:
 					act 'Sure thing':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Events'

+ 14 - 14
locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/shady.jpg"></center>'	
-				'As you both arrive, one of the men says, "She looks good." He then reaches out to touch you, but his hand is pushed away by Niko. "You need to pay up before you start touching." The guy chuckles, "Of course, of course. Where is my head?" He then nods to the other man, who reaches into his pocket then gives Niko some ruble which Niko counts before nodding to the men then taking a step back, signaling the men to use you. The men begin fondling your breasts as they kiss your neck. '+$OpenInnerThought+'This feels so wrong, but Niko needs me to do this. He is counting on me. I must not let him down. I wont let you down Niko.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+				'As you both arrive, one of the men says, "She looks good." He then reaches out to touch you, but his hand is pushed away by Niko. "You need to pay up before you start touching." The guy chuckles, "Of course, of course. Where is my head?" He then nods to the other man, who reaches into his pocket then gives Niko some ruble which Niko counts before nodding to the men then taking a step back, signaling the men to use you. The men begin fondling your breasts as they kiss your neck. '+$OpenInnerThought+'This feels so wrong, but Niko needs me to do this. He is counting on me. I must not let him down. I won''t let you down Niko.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 				*nl
 				'One of the men takes off your shirt then throws it to the ground. Niko immediately picks it up. One of the men begins pushing you to your knees.'		
 
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Yurik Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/intrude/yurik1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You fall to the ground then look back up at Yurik in fear. You can feel your whole body trembling. '+$OpenInnerThought+'What is he going to do to me. i''m not strong enough to resist him. He is so strong. What''s going to happen to me now?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Yurik wraps his hand around your neck, "Listen bitch, You will do whatever I say, when I say it. Do you understand?"' 
+							'You fall to the ground then look back up at Yurik in fear. You can feel your whole body trembling. '+$OpenInnerThought+'What is he going to do to me. I''m not strong enough to resist him. He is so strong. What''s going to happen to me now?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Yurik wraps his hand around your neck, "Listen bitch, You will do whatever I say, when I say it. Do you understand?"' 
 
 							act 'Nod':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/throat/bed1.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'Yurik rams his dick into your mouth, forcing it down your throat. The force of his massive penis entering your throat is too much for you to take. You gag helplessly then begin pleading with Yurik. "Please sir, your dick is too big. It wont fit." Yurik grunts before responding, "It will fit just, keep your mouth open and shut up." Yurik re-aligns his penis with your mouth then shoves it back in. You do your best to relax your throat, knowing that you have no choice, but to let Yurik have his way with you.' 
+									'Yurik rams his dick into your mouth, forcing it down your throat. The force of his massive penis entering your throat is too much for you to take. You gag helplessly then begin pleading with Yurik. "Please sir, your dick is too big. It won''t fit." Yurik grunts before responding, "It will fit just, keep your mouth open and shut up." Yurik re-aligns his penis with your mouth then shoves it back in. You do your best to relax your throat, knowing that you have no choice, but to let Yurik have his way with you.' 
 
 									act 'Continue sucking his dick':	
 										*clr & cla
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Wake':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, '+$OpenInnerThought+'It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m...I''m fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
+	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, '+$OpenInnerThought+'It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m... I''m fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
 	*nl
 	'Niko continues kissing your forehead before responding, "I will do everything in my power to protect you. Just stay strong. Okay <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You nod your head again before saying, "Thank you Niko. I always feel safe in your arms." Niko smiles as he wraps his arms around you.'
 
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'			
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'Niko says, "If you have the cash then I have the girl for you. Speaking of cash..." Niko extends his hand. Petia scratches his head before saying, "I don''t exactly have it on me but I''ll be more than ha..." Niko immediately darts across the room then grabs Petia by his neck and says, "Where is the money Shithead!?" Petia suddenly replies, "Oh I.. I.. have it right here. I was just joking." He reaches into his pocket then pulls out his wallet. Niko immediatly snatches it and takes all of the money before throwing it across the room. Petia hollers, "Hey man, you didn''t need to do that!" Niko then shoves him toward the door and Petia quickly runs out.'
+								'Niko says, "If you have the cash then I have the girl for you. Speaking of cash..." Niko extends his hand. Petia scratches his head before saying, "I don''t exactly have it on me but I''ll be more than ha..." Niko immediately darts across the room then grabs Petia by his neck and says, "Where is the money Shithead!?" Petia suddenly replies, "Oh I... I... have it right here. I was just joking." He reaches into his pocket then pulls out his wallet. Niko immediatly snatches it and takes all of the money before throwing it across the room. Petia hollers, "Hey man, you didn''t need to do that!" Niko then shoves him toward the door and Petia quickly runs out.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Vicky Talk':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysmile2.jpg"></center>'					
-				'Vicky gives you an approving nod before saying, "Then this is your role. You can follow your heart all the way to the promise land or whatever... Have I mentioned that I''m not religious?" Vicky''s cheerfulness makes you giggle for a second before replying, "So if I follow my heart then I will be happy and my heart yerns for Niko. This must be my role. I''m Niko''s whore..'
+				'Vicky gives you an approving nod before saying, "Then this is your role. You can follow your heart all the way to the promise land or whatever... Have I mentioned that I''m not religious?" Vicky''s cheerfulness makes you giggle for a second before replying, "So if I follow my heart then I will be happy and my heart yerns for Niko. This must be my role. I''m Niko''s whore...'
 	
 				act 'Continue':	
 					*clr & cla
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big159.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you enter the locker room you see Petia waiting for you. You immediately know what he wants and you turn to Niko then ask, "Do you want me to suck his dick again?" But you say it with a smile. Niko looks at you with a surprised, but pleased look on his face, "You really seem to be getting into this, good, but no, he wants to fuck you this time. Don''t worry, he will pay a lot more this time. So take off your clothes." You obediently nod then remove your clothes. Petia watches you undress while removing his pants and stroking his penis.' 
 				*nl
-				'After fully undressing, you walk up to Petia then ask him, "How do you want me?" His jaw is hanging as he freezes for a few moments while scanning you body with his eyes. "SPEAK UP LOSER! TIME IS MONEY!" Niko exclaims. Petia jumps up in shock before replying, "Oh.. Oh.. Oh yes, Over.. By.. Um.. here.. Climb on me." He then quickly sits on a bench. You can see the sweat trailing down his face.'
+				'After fully undressing, you walk up to Petia then ask him, "How do you want me?" His jaw is hanging as he freezes for a few moments while scanning you body with his eyes. "SPEAK UP LOSER! TIME IS MONEY!" Niko exclaims. Petia jumps up in shock before replying, "Oh... Oh... Oh yes, Over... By... Um... here... Climb on me." He then quickly sits on a bench. You can see the sweat trailing down his face.'
 				
 				act 'Approach Petia':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#9b5800><<"Petia Alkaev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big159.jpg"></center>'
-							'You continue watching Petia, twitching as he has the most powerful orgasm in his life. You can see the ecstasy on his face. The blissful pleasure he is feeling that leaves you envious. After a few seconds Niko approaches the two of you ands says, "Wow Petia, That was pathetic. You wont have any chance with a woman unless you pay for it. Now get the fuck out out of here. I need to speak with <<$pcs_nickname>>."' 
+							'You continue watching Petia, twitching as he has the most powerful orgasm in his life. You can see the ecstasy on his face. The blissful pleasure he is feeling that leaves you envious. After a few seconds Niko approaches the two of you ands says, "Wow Petia, That was pathetic. You won''t have any chance with a woman unless you pay for it. Now get the fuck out out of here. I need to speak with <<$pcs_nickname>>."' 
 							*nl
 							'Petia quickly collects his things while giving you a look of deep gratitude. This has clearly been the best day of his life. Petia puts his pants back on before leaving the restroom while staring at you the whole way.'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko notices you approach then gives you a warm smile, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have been making many preparations and I believe that we are ready to go big league with this business, so we have a very busy afternoon ahead of us. Are you ready to start really making money? I will also be giving you a cut of the profits because I wont have my girl going home empty handed after working so hard."'
+	'Niko notices you approach then gives you a warm smile, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have been making many preparations and I believe that we are ready to go big league with this business, so we have a very busy afternoon ahead of us. Are you ready to start really making money? I will also be giving you a cut of the profits because I won''t have my girl going home empty handed after working so hard."'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 														minut -= 5
 														gs'stat'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/gang/5.jpg"></center>'
-														''+$OpenInnerThought+'That man was so rough, but Niko...My Niko protected me like he said he would.'+$CloseInnerThought+' As the man continues fucking your ass, another man grabs your head then turns it to face a third man''s dick which you immediately wrap your lips around before licking and sucking it eagerly. The pain in your ass fades as pleasure takes it''s place. You close your eyes and submit to the pleasure when another man approaches you.'
+														''+$OpenInnerThought+'That man was so rough, but Niko... My Niko protected me like he said he would.'+$CloseInnerThought+' As the man continues fucking your ass, another man grabs your head then turns it to face a third man''s dick which you immediately wrap your lips around before licking and sucking it eagerly. The pain in your ass fades as pleasure takes it''s place. You close your eyes and submit to the pleasure when another man approaches you.'
 														gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 														gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 														gs'stat'									
@@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner Exit':
 	money += 2400
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/payment.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk out of the diner to find Niko waiting for you. "You did great today <<$pcs_nickname>>. I am so proud of you. Here is your share of the profits." Niko hands you 2400 <b>₽</b> You look up to Niko then say, "I thought that you would give me half. There were at least six men in there." Niko places his hand on your shoulder with a sympathetic look on his face. "I wanted to split it half way, but it would take us too long to pay up on that debt. You don''t want your reputation to remain this way, do you?" You lower your head as you reply. "I don''t..I''m sorry. I was just being greedy."' 
+	'You walk out of the diner to find Niko waiting for you. "You did great today <<$pcs_nickname>>. I am so proud of you. Here is your share of the profits." Niko hands you 2400 <b>₽</b> You look up to Niko then say, "I thought that you would give me half. There were at least six men in there." Niko places his hand on your shoulder with a sympathetic look on his face. "I wanted to split it half way, but it would take us too long to pay up on that debt. You don''t want your reputation to remain this way, do you?" You lower your head as you reply. "I don''t... I''m sorry. I was just being greedy."' 
 
 	act 'Listen to Niko':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1031,7 +1031,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 			'Biker1: "Hey girl, glad to see you back."'
 			'Trucker1: "You''re lookin'' good girl."'
 			'Trucker2: "I wish my wife looked as good as you."'
-			'Trucker3: "Is that the girl you were talking about? The slu...." another guy shoves him in the ribs before whispering, "Watch what you say. We don''t want her to leave."'
+			'Trucker3: "Is that the girl you were talking about? The slu..." another guy shoves him in the ribs before whispering, "Watch what you say. We don''t want her to leave."'
 			*nl
 			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m... glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
 
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Niko Search':
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/school/restroom/1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lick the tip of Dan dick before taking it into your mouth sucking it firmly, knowing that they wont let you go. Vitek and Vasily take out their dicks then begin lightly stroking it before you reach out and grab onto their dick and stroke it for them. Vasily rubs on the back of your head as he says, "You are doing well <<$pcs_nickname>>, can you suck me next?" You nod before pulling away from Dan then wrapping your lips around Vasily''s penis and sucking it gently while Vitek paws at your breasts, through your shirt. After a few more seconds, Vitek grows impatient and pushes his dick against your lips while saying,' 
+		'You lick the tip of Dan dick before taking it into your mouth sucking it firmly, knowing that they won''t let you go. Vitek and Vasily take out their dicks then begin lightly stroking it before you reach out and grab onto their dick and stroke it for them. Vasily rubs on the back of your head as he says, "You are doing well <<$pcs_nickname>>, can you suck me next?" You nod before pulling away from Dan then wrapping your lips around Vasily''s penis and sucking it gently while Vitek paws at your breasts, through your shirt. After a few more seconds, Vitek grows impatient and pushes his dick against your lips while saying,' 
 		if kotovloveQW < 0:	
 			'"What are you waiting for slut? Start sucking my dick. You made a fool of me and you will make up for it." You can feel your heart rapidly beating as you pull away from Dan''s dick then begin sucking Vitek''s dick, fearful of angering him further.'
 			*nl
@@ -1248,7 +1248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Search 2':
 			'Vasily: "Awww do you miss her or did she forget to take your call?"'
 			'Dan: "I just wanted to empty my balls is all."'
 			if kotovloveQW < 0:	
-				'Vikek: "We can always fetch <<$pcs_firstname>>. She wont dare say no."'
+				'Vikek: "We can always fetch <<$pcs_firstname>>. She won''t dare say no."'
 			else
 				'Vikek: "You can always look for <<$pcs_firstname>>. She seems to know her place."'
 			end	

+ 10 - 10
locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc

@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I... I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks... RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision... on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 								gs'stat'							
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'							
-								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together and don''t worry, I wont lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room as you lay down and close your eyes...'
+								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together and don''t worry, I won''t lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room as you lay down and close your eyes...'
 
 								act 'Rest':gt 'NikoDreams', 'Woods'
 							end
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I wont be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
+		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I won''t be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
 		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vickysurprised.jpg"></center>'	
-			'You ask <<$VK_VikName>>, "Hey <<$VK_VikName>> the bathroom is currently locked. Do you have the key for it?" <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a surprised look before saying, "Who the hell locked it.... Kaaaaattt... Anyway where the hell is that spare key?" She then turns to the nearby desk then begins recklessly fumbling through it, causing things to fall out as she continues searching. "It''s gotta be around here somew... Wait!" She turns to her refrigerator then quickly grabs a vase on top of it as she exclaims, "There you are, you sneaky little snake." She then tosses you the keys then say, "There you go. Have fun!" before going back to playing games on her phone.'
+			'You ask <<$VK_VikName>>, "Hey <<$VK_VikName>> the bathroom is currently locked. Do you have the key for it?" <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a surprised look before saying, "Who the hell locked it... Kaaaaattt... Anyway where the hell is that spare key?" She then turns to the nearby desk then begins recklessly fumbling through it, causing things to fall out as she continues searching. "It''s gotta be around here somew... Wait!" She turns to her refrigerator then quickly grabs a vase on top of it as she exclaims, "There you are, you sneaky little snake." She then tosses you the keys then say, "There you go. Have fun!" before going back to playing games on her phone.'
 			
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Kitchen'
 		end
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Goodbye':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vicky2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open the front door then walk out as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I wont argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
+	'You open the front door then walk out as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I won''t argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
 	
 	if VKNatChat = 4:
 		act 'Walk home with Natalia':NikoAftermath = 0 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Walk'
@@ -544,9 +544,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
 			if VKNatChat = 0:
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
 			else
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
 			end	
 		
 			act 'Walk away':VKKatjaChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Katja Room'
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	if VKNatChat = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia3.jpg"></center>'
-		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I wont." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
+		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I won''t." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
 		*nl
 		'You respond, "Thank you, for everything you all have done for me. I shutter to think of what would have happened to me if you weren''t around." Natalia replies with a warm smile before saying, "You are very welcome. Now you should take a relaxing bath before <<$VK_VikName>> is finished cooking."'
 		act 'Walk away':VKNatChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 	*clr & cla	
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
+	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. I will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs'stat'	
 							
@@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just...I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
+			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just... I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
 					
 			act 'Let Katja rinse you off':	
 				cla & *clr

+ 6 - 6
locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "Today you will be my little pee slut, understand?" You lower your head and nod as Niko pulls down his pants then says, "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
 	elseif VK = 3 and pcs_vag = 0 or VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t...I''m...I''m a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
+		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t... I''m... I''m a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!"'		
 	elseif VK = 4:
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You move toward Fedor then wrap your arms around him as you say, "Fyodor I...I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back as he responds, "Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, tell me what''s wrong." You can feel tears streaming down your face as you reply, "Nikolai Volkov has been bullying me at lunch everyday. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist, "That little gopnik shit! I will make him pay. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>> the next time he tries I will bash his face in!"'
+	'You move toward Fedor then wrap your arms around him as you say, "Fyodor I... I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back as he responds, "Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, tell me what''s wrong." You can feel tears streaming down your face as you reply, "Nikolai Volkov has been bullying me at lunch everyday. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist, "That little gopnik shit! I will make him pay. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>> the next time he tries I will bash his face in!"'
 	
 	act 'Thank Fedor':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I... I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fyodor Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I... I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fyodor Help':
 			minut += 2
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You watch in satisfaction at Niko getting what he deserves, for a few seconds before Fedor finally calms down then climbs off of Niko then walks up to you and wraps his arms around you before asking, "Are you alright? He didn''t hurt you did he?" You reply, "No but I did enjoy you hurting him." Fedor chuckles, "Anyone who messes with you, wil share the same treatment.." You lean forward then give Fedor a passionate kiss which lasts for almost a full minute. After the kiss, Fedor says, "You should get back to recess before you miss it. I will have a chat with NIko. Go on, enjoy your recess." You give Fedor a kiss on the cheek before walking out of the restroom.'
+			'You watch in satisfaction at Niko getting what he deserves, for a few seconds before Fedor finally calms down then climbs off of Niko then walks up to you and wraps his arms around you before asking, "Are you alright? He didn''t hurt you did he?" You reply, "No but I did enjoy you hurting him." Fedor chuckles, "Anyone who messes with you, wil share the same treatment..." You lean forward then give Fedor a passionate kiss which lasts for almost a full minute. After the kiss, Fedor says, "You should get back to recess before you miss it. I will have a chat with NIko. Go on, enjoy your recess." You give Fedor a kiss on the cheek before walking out of the restroom.'
 			
 			act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 		end	
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Ivan then downcast your eyes before saying, "Ivan I need your help...I..." Ivan''s face saddens as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'
+	'You walk up to Ivan then downcast your eyes before saying, "Ivan I need your help... I..." Ivan''s face saddens as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/hug1.jpg"></center>'	
 	

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -1310,7 +1310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner Interior':
 	if hour >= 7 and hour <= 17 and hour ! BorisDiner['Trucker']:
 		'You see a row of stools along the counter and booths along the walls next to the windows. A couple of waitress''s work behind the counter and carry food out to the booths, while a large man works in the back as a cook. Their is a <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Truckers''">trucker</a> sitting on a stool, enjoying his meal.'
 	elseif hour >= 7 and hour <= 17 and hour = BorisDiner['Trucker']:
-		'You see a row of stools along the counter and booths along the walls next to the windows. A couple of waitress''s work behind the counter and carry food out to the booths, while a large man works in the back as a cook. Their is a trucker sitting on a stool, enjoying his meal..'	
+		'You see a row of stools along the counter and booths along the walls next to the windows. A couple of waitress''s work behind the counter and carry food out to the booths, while a large man works in the back as a cook. Their is a trucker sitting on a stool, enjoying his meal...'	
 	elseif hour ! BorisDiner['Biker']:
 		'You see a row of stools along the counter and booths along the walls next to the windows. A couple of waitress''s work behind the counter and carry food out to the booths, while a large man works in the back as a cook. The stools and counters are nearly empty but you can see some <a href="exec:gt ''NikoSlut'', ''Bikers''">bikers</a> sitting at the tables, chatting and drinking beer.'
 	else

+ 11 - 11
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. When you enter the locker room, Niko closes the door then takes a quick look around to see if anyone is there. Niko walks up behind you then whispers in your ear, "<<$pcs_firstname>> take off your clothes." You obediently do as he asks, removing all your clothes. Niko collects your clothes then puts them in a bag. You can''t help but feel nervous when you see Niko packing up your clothes. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Is he taking my clothes away? What if someone walks in? I wont be able to get dressed. I''m sure Niko knows what he is doing. Just follow his lead <<$pcs_firstname>>, just follow his lead.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. When you enter the locker room, Niko closes the door then takes a quick look around to see if anyone is there. Niko walks up behind you then whispers in your ear, "<<$pcs_firstname>> take off your clothes." You obediently do as he asks, removing all your clothes. Niko collects your clothes then puts them in a bag. You can''t help but feel nervous when you see Niko packing up your clothes. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Is he taking my clothes away? What if someone walks in? I won''t be able to get dressed. I''m sure Niko knows what he is doing. Just follow his lead <<$pcs_firstname>>, just follow his lead.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 
 	act 'Take a deep breath':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker6.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why... mmmmm... Why''d you.... mmmm... tell him abo..." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
+											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why... mmmmm... Why''d you... mmmm... tell him abo..." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
 											$orgasm_txt = ''
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 									'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/photos/big10.jpg"></center>'
 								end
 								if npc_rel['A144'] >= 80:
-									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body wont let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
+									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body won''t let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
 									*nl
 									'Valentin pulls Anushka away while Alyona follows, he pulls her to where the stairs exit out into the hallway. Anushka jerks her arm away from him. Valentin puts his hands in the air. "Just go Nush, you can''t do anything here... So just go." She shakes her head in disgust at him. "Fuck you Val." She then turns and walks off while Alyona gives Roman a dirty look as she follows Anushka. Valentin calls after them. "Come on, don''t be like that Nush." Then he starts walking back to the group. "Fuck... She is pissed." Radomir pats him on the shoulder. "She will get over it, she always does."'
 								elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog9.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'Vitek fucks your ass slowly at first, but then picks up the pace. You let out high pitch squeals as you feel Vitek''s penis rubbing against your inner ass. His big hard cock, pushing it''s way deeper inside you as his strong hands firmly grips you hair. Yuo feel completely at his mercy as he continues to ram is cock in your sore asshole.' 
+									'Vitek fucks your ass slowly at first, but then picks up the pace. You let out high pitch squeals as you feel Vitek''s penis rubbing against your inner ass. His big hard cock, pushing its way deeper inside you as his strong hands firmly grips you hair. Yuo feel completely at his mercy as he continues to ram is cock in your sore asshole.' 
 									$orgasm_txt = ''
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																		*clr & cla
 																		gs'stat'
 																		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock8.mp4"></video></center>'
-																		'Petka begins fucking you, thrusting at an increased pace as he holds your legs open, giving himself easier access. You have no fight left, your strength is gone, your entire body is numb, you feel nothing as Petka continues using your body. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Wha...what''s going...feel...so hot...head...can''t think...why...'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+																		'Petka begins fucking you, thrusting at an increased pace as he holds your legs open, giving himself easier access. You have no fight left, your strength is gone, your entire body is numb, you feel nothing as Petka continues using your body. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Wha... what''s going... feel... so hot... head... can''t think... why...'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 																		$orgasm_txt = ''
 																		gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A6', 1
 																		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																			gs'stat'
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-																			'You can feel your consciousness fading in and out. You can hear some words but they too seem to fade in and out... "You''ll be a star <<$pcs_nickname>>. An even bigger whore than Sonia."... "Well you look all tuckered out. Had a good time?"... "I think we broke our new toy."... "It looks like she passed out... Too much fun maybe."...'
+																			'You can feel your consciousness fading in and out. You can hear some words but they too seem to fade in and out... "You''ll be a star <<$pcs_nickname>>. An even bigger whore than Sonia."... "Well you look all tuckered out. Had a good time...?" "I think we broke our new toy."... "It looks like she passed out... Too much fun maybe."...'
 																			'Then you hear footsteps as they leave the room and everything starts to fade until you hear... "How could they do this to her?"..."Aww wow, she looks... Sticky."..."It''s not the time for jokes Vicky! We need to do something! We can''t just leave her like this!"...'
 																		
 																			act '...':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDreams', 'Family'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram its way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-													'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude wont solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+													'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 													
 													act 'Kiss Niko':
 														*clr & cla
@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I...I''m scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
+	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I... I''m scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
 
 	act 'Weep in his arms':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me... Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 
 		act 'Embrace Niko':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -974,7 +974,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude wont solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 
 			act 'Push him away':
 				*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/Nudelake.qsrc

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and temper >= 15:
 		'Also, you can play <a href="exec:gt ''Nudelake'', ''voleybol''">beach volleyball</a>'
 	end
 elseif hour >= 6 and hour <= 20:
-	'Its too cold for any nudist activities.'
+	'It''s too cold for any nudist activities.'
 else
 	'The nudist beach is closed.'
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/ParChurch.qsrc

@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'candle':
 		'You approach the deacon selling candles. He seems confused when you hand him 20 rubles, then he smiles in understanding. You feel relieved that the debt is paid.'
 	elseif money < 10:
 		owechurch = 1
-		'You approach the deacon selling candles and indicate you would like a candle. When you look in your purse to pay, you realize that you have no money. The deacon sighs and hands you the candle anyway. you promise yourself to pay double next time.'
+		'You approach the deacon selling candles and indicate you would like a candle. When you look in your purse to pay, you realize that you have no money. The deacon sighs and hands you the candle anyway. You promise yourself to pay double next time.'
 	end
 	if hour > 6 and hour < 20:
 		pcs_mood += 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/ParChurch2.qsrc

@@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secrets':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/confession.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Father.. I don''t know how to say this," you say, fidgeting in your seat, "Me and my brother have grown quite close lately."'
+			'"Father... I don''t know how to say this," you say, fidgeting in your seat, "Me and my brother have grown quite close lately."'
 			'"Why would you think that''s a sin, child? God looks favourably upon close-knit families, especially when siblings are friends, rather than fighting."'
 			'"Well we certainly haven''t been fighting ever since..." The last part of the sentence gets caught in your throat, and you''re suddenly all too aware of what you''re about to confess to.'
 			'"Ever since what?" the priest asks gently, "What happened between your brother and you?"'

+ 3 - 3
locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if numnpc = 144:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Hey Anush you feeling ok? You kinda look flush, is something wrong? Would you like to talk about it?"'
 				'She leans in close and tries to kiss you, while one hand reaches down and squeezes your butt. You turn your head and pull away. "What are you doing? I was only seeing if you were ok."'
-				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk to much, I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
+				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk too much, I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -642,8 +642,8 @@ if numnpc = 231:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 			'As you walk to up <<$npc_firstname[''A<<numnpc>>'']>>, you feel your stomach drop to the floor due to how awkward the situation is. However you''re not about to let what happened end your friendship without at least clearing the air.'
 			'After about a minute or so of eye contact, you finally develop enough courage to speak first.'
-			'"Hi <<$npc_nickname[''A<<numnpc>>'']>>...." You say in a nervous and defeated voice.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>...." she replies in an equally nervous voice.'
+			'"Hi <<$npc_nickname[''A<<numnpc>>'']>>..." You say in a nervous and defeated voice.'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she replies in an equally nervous voice.'
 			'After taking a couple more seconds to fully collect your thoughs, you say "Look, I think we need to talk about what happened last time at your house. Given the subject, it would be best to do so privately. Can we meet after school to talk about it?"'
 			'<<$npc_nickname[''A<<numnpc>>'']>> doesn''t respond, and almost looks like she''s about to start crying. She finally wimpers "Are you mad at me or are you sickened by me?"'
 			'Not completely surprised by what she said, you hold firm in making sure to wait until the two of you are alone. "I don''t wan''t to discuss things here. Meet me after school so we can talk about this more. I promise I''m not going to hurt you if that is what you''re afraid of."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/Terminal.qsrc

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ $askfather = {
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_17.jpg"></center>'
 						'Sitting at the table, you order food and drinks, and dad started asking you about everything.'
 						'You started with enthusiasm and a lot of talk about yourself, what you do, where go to school. Talk about Anya, that she was not admitted to the university, and worked as a salesgirl in the supermarket.'
-						'You tell him about your mother, she remarried, and you now have a stepfather and half brother Kolka..'
+						'You tell him about your mother, she remarried, and you now have a stepfather and half brother Kolka...'
 						'After talking for awhile your father says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> I have to go, schedule to keep, I am here on weekends 12 00 to 14 00, I would be happy if you would visit me sometimes." With that he got up, paid for lunch and kissed you on the cheek goodbye.'
 						trfatherQW = 4
 						act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial'

+ 20 - 20
locations/UnitAppearance.qsrc

@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 200
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 100
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 100
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 200
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 300
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 100
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 200
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 200
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 200
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 200
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 300
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 300
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 250
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 250
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 300
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 250
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 300
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -708,7 +708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 100
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 100
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 100
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 100
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 100
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 100
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -822,7 +822,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 400
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 300
     unitPCloQuality = 2
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -860,7 +860,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitPXCloTopCut = 200
     unitPXCloBottomShortness = 250
     unitPCloQuality = 1
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 0
     $unitpantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -977,7 +977,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'GenerateSvetas':
     unitpcs_apprncbase = 0
     unitResetBase = 1
     unitpcs_hgt = 170
-    $unitclothingworntype = 'cheap'
+    $unitclothingworntype = 'gm_outfits'
     unitPCloQuality = 1
     unitbonusZ = 0
     unitPShoQuality = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/Vika.qsrc

@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'birthday':
 	b_vika_present_Day = daystart
 	'You don''t have time to say a word before Vika practically pounces on you.'
-	'"There is my favorite birthday girl, Happy Birthday!" she screeches as she hugs and kisses you on the cheek.'
+	'"There is my favorite birthday girl, happy birthday!" she screeches as she hugs and kisses you on the cheek.'
 	'"Wow! This is so unexpected," you reply.'
 	'"Here''s a present for you." Vika gives you a box. Inside is a silk pale blue sheer teddy.'
 	'"Oh, Vika, this is too much. It''s way too expensive of a gift." You are flattered she would give you such a nice gift.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/_body_image.qsrc

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clothes':
 			$body_image_msg += FUNC('$clothing_name', $clothingworntype, clothingwornnumber)
 		end
 
-		if $clothingworntype = 'uniform':
+		if $clothingworntype = 'gm_uniform':
 			if PCloStyle2 = 1:
 				$body_image_msg += '<br>This outfit is considered to be a maid uniform.'
 			elseif PCloStyle2 = 3:

+ 3 - 3
locations/_clothing_image.qsrc

@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fashionista':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/fashionista/dress/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/4formal/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'office':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_office':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/5office/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'school':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_school':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/6school/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exercise':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/7exercise/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fetish':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/8fetish/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exhibit':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/9exhibit/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'uniform':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_uniform':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/10uniform/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coat':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/clothing/11coat/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'

+ 8 - 8
locations/_clothing_name.qsrc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 36:$RESULT = 'A red bikini with small briefs and a boob tube style top. Attention grabbing without being indecent.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 37:$RESULT = 'A one-piece swimsuit in blue with white and pink stripes, it has a high neck and is designed for performance as much as looks.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 38:$RESULT = 'A floral design bikini with bows and ruffles just perfect for the beach but not so good for swimming in.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 39:$RESULT = 'A one-piece with so many cut-outs its could pass for a bikini, it has a bit of a spider web vibe and might just be the perfect thing for a sexy Goth.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 39:$RESULT = 'A one-piece with so many cut-outs, it could pass for a bikini. It has a bit of a spider web vibe and might just be the perfect thing for a sexy Goth.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 40:$RESULT = 'A leatherette bikini with scale detail to look like crocodile skin but in a glossy black. A little skimpy with string details.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 41:$RESULT = 'A fashionable one-piece swimsuit in Egyptian blue, it teases yet remains somewhat functional.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 42:$RESULT = 'A classic black bikini with white trim and florescent yellow detail, very chic.'
@@ -155,11 +155,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 149:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with actual zebras printed on them, you feel both silly and cute at the same time.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 150:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set, it has a triangle top with a side-string bottom that offers full coverage.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 151:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a triangle top and side-tie bottom in the color mineral alloy, it has crochet print.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 152:$RESULT = 'A bikini set in the color sangria, it has a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, its both flirty and functional.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 152:$RESULT = 'A bikini set in the color sangria, it has a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, it''s both flirty and functional.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 153:$RESULT = 'A bikini in dark periwinkle, it has a triangle top with tie-back and a classic bikini bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 154:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a triangle top and a Brazilian bottom, its traditional Japanese art print makes look exotic.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 155:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a tie-back top and a Brazilian bottom, the strings draws attention to your breasts.' 
-	if ARGS[1] = 156:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a bralette top and a cheeky Brazilian bottom, its blue if worn normally but black if worn reversed.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 156:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a bralette top and a cheeky Brazilian bottom, it''s blue if worn normally but black if worn reversed.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 157:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a twist Bandeau top and a string bikini bottom, it has decorative gold stripes.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 158:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a small triangle top and a g-string bottom that leaves very little to the imagination.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 160:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a triangle top and a little thong bottom that shows off your booty quite nicely.'
@@ -178,15 +178,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swimwear':
 	if ARGS[1] = 173:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a bralette top and a full bottom, it has the classy vibe to it.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 174:$RESULT = 'A bikini set in the Cerulean color, it has a classic bottom as well as a tie-back top that reveal part of the cleavage.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 175:$RESULT = 'A bikini in Sky blue color, it has a fashionable halter-top top and a classic bikini bottom.' 
-	if ARGS[1] = 176:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a strapless Bandeau top and a Brazilian bottom, its fun and flirty.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 176:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a strapless Bandeau top and a Brazilian bottom, it''s fun and flirty.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 177:$RESULT = 'A bikini in the color Laure, it has a front-tie top and a multi-string bikini bottom.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 178:$RESULT = 'A Triangle grey bikini top with rings and a scrunch Brazilian bottom, its both fashionable and functional.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 178:$RESULT = 'A Triangle grey bikini top with rings and a scrunch Brazilian bottom, it''s both fashionable and functional.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 179:$RESULT = 'A Triangle bikini top with a Brazilian bottom in multi-floral print.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 180:$RESULT = 'A pink ruffled bikini with a triangle top and a thong bottom, its both playful and flirty'
+	if ARGS[1] = 180:$RESULT = 'A pink ruffled bikini with a triangle top and a thong bottom, it''s both playful and flirty'
 	if ARGS[1] = 181:$RESULT = 'A black bikini set with a triangle top and a g-string bottom.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 182:$RESULT = 'A red bikini set with a triangle top and a sexy thong bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 183:$RESULT = 'A bikini set with a triangle top and a g-string bottom, its design reveals much of your body.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 184:$RESULT = 'A red bikini with a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, its sassy with class.'
+	if ARGS[1] = 184:$RESULT = 'A red bikini with a tie-back top and a cheeky bottom, it''s sassy with class.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 185:$RESULT = 'A black bikini with a a multi-colored top and a classic bikini bottom.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 186:$RESULT = 'A red bikini top with a deep plunge that shows off your cleavage and a small classic bottom.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 187:$RESULT = 'A black bikini with a deep-plunge top and a thong that shows your body off with minimum decency.'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'beach':
 	if ARGS[1] = 96:$RESULT = 'A two-piece set that''s totally see-through when wet, ideal for an attention-needing tramp!'
 	if ARGS[1] = 97:$RESULT = 'A transparent sky blue bikini that''s wholly see-through when wet, perfect for an attention-seeking bimbo.'
 	if ARGS[1] = 98:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s wholly see-through when wet, it is classy, in a bimbo kind of way.'
-	if ARGS[1] = 99:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s totally see-through even when its dry, it is perfect for an attention-needing bimbette!'
+	if ARGS[1] = 99:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s totally see-through even when it''s dry, it is perfect for an attention-needing bimbette!'
 	if ARGS[1] = 100:$RESULT = 'A transparent white bikini that''s wholly see-through when wet, perfect for an attention-wanting floozy.' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 101:$RESULT = 'A monokini that almost covers nothing, it''s perfect to show off your body, if that is your thing...' 
 	if ARGS[1] = 102:$RESULT = 'A monokini that almost covers nothing, it''s perfect for an attention-seeking bimbette!' 

+ 2 - 0
locations/_purse_image.qsrc

@@ -19,6 +19,8 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'cats':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/cats/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
 	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/moncheri/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'bomba':
+	$RESULT = 'images/pc/items/bomba/purses/<<ARGS[1]>>.jpg'
 end
 
 --- $purse_image ---------------------------------

+ 1 - 1
locations/abduction.qsrc

@@ -1061,7 +1061,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdConsiderSold':
 	menu_off = 1
-	'"Are you sure slave? You will stay here and continue to be used.." he asks.'
+	'"Are you sure slave?" he asks, after which he says "you will stay here and continue to be used..."'
 	act 'Yes, that''s what I want':gt 'abduction', 'abdNotSold'
 	act 'On second thought, I want to leave this place':gt 'abduction', 'abdSoldSauna'
 end

+ 2 - 2
locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout3':
 	act 'Suck on it':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-suckTip'
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-		act 'Do Nothing (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+		act 'Do nothing (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout3':
 			gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalRough'
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Do Nothing (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+		act 'Do nothing (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout4':

+ 1 - 1
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 				npc_rel['A23'] -= 2
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You shake your head. "Uhhh...I''m really not interested in doing that."'
+				'You shake your head. "Uhhh... I''m really not interested in doing that."'
 				'Albina puts the strapon away and you can tell she is a little disappointed. She comes back over and lies down beside you again. "You are so going to lose!" she laughs. You continue to play games for a while, although things are awkward between you. Eventually, Albina stops. "Well I had fun, but there is some stuff I need to take care of." she says as she turns the consloe off.'
 				'Getting the hint, you get up as well. "Yeah, I should probably get going myself." You exchange a brief hug before you leave.'
 				act 'Say goodbye and go home':gt 'pav_residential'

+ 5 - 5
locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 	young_shop_salary = 1
 	young_shop_bonus = 2
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
-	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job...I''ll do it."'
+	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job... I''ll do it."'
 	*nl
 	'Mr. Sobulyagin smiles. "Good girl. I''m happy to have such a hard worker here at the store," he says almost mockingly. He brings his hand to your cheek and cups it admiring your face with a triumphant smirk. "On your knees," he commands as his hand suddenly moves to the top of your head to push you down towards his crotch.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+				'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deepthroat him, which causes you to gag.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as he places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
+	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine... I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as he places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deepthroat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens, and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deepthroat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'

+ 5 - 5
locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -815,7 +815,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushcmast.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You keep rubbing your clit... you can feel your climax building... building.... You can feel yourself going higher and higher while riding the orgasmic wave of pleasure.'
+						'You keep rubbing your clit... you can feel your climax building... building... You can feel yourself going higher and higher while riding the orgasmic wave of pleasure.'
 						temp = rand(0,3)
 						if temp = 0:
 							'Just before you are about to explode, you hear someone snickering. Your heart leaps to your throat, pounding with fear, as you turn your head to see Maksim standing in the doorway. He''s watching you with the door wide open. Your blood runs cold, and you quickly rip your hand from between your legs then pull your clothes back in place as you yell at him. "Get our of here you little pervert!"'
@@ -1294,7 +1294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 				edtalk = rand(1,5)
 				if edtalk = 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
-					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
+					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
 					'An agitated Eduard calls you over. "Call me Ed. Come here <<$pcs_nickname>>, I need to ask you about something."'
 					'You freeze in your tracks as you cautiously reply "Sure... What''s up?"'
 					if pav_slut >= 200:
@@ -1379,7 +1379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 					end
 				elseif edtalk <= 3:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
-					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
+					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
 					'He turns to look at you and gives you a friendly smile. "Call me Ed. I have no idea where that girl is, but you can check her room if you want. If she''s not there, then there is no telling where she is." he says, sounding somewhat sad and worried.'
 					act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
 					act 'Is everything ok?':
@@ -1439,7 +1439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 					end
 				else 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/eduard.jpg"></center>'
-					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
+					'You smile at Eduard. "Hello Mr. Konstantinov, is Anushka around?"'
 					'He turns to look at you and gives you a friendly smile. "Call me Ed. I have no idea where that girl is, but you can check her room if you want. If she''s not there, then there is no telling where she is." he says as he goes back to watching TV.'
 					'You nod. "Ok thanks, sorry to have bothered you. I''ll be quiet so you can watch your show."'
 					*nl
@@ -1890,7 +1890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushkidstory':
 		'You give him an awww look, and he clears his throat. "Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble is my Nush." Eduard responds. With that, you can tell he is done with telling stories, at least for now. "Well thank you for telling me. I loved hearing about it. Anyways, I should get going." you tell him, and he nods to you as you leave the living room.'
 	elseif nushkidstory = 2:
 		'The corner of Eduard''s mouth turns upwards as he starts. "I remember one of those warm spring days while Anushka was in preschool. She was creating havoc most likely. On this day, I was helping out at home looking after the baby when all of a sudden the phone rings and it''s the preschool..."'
-		'"You must''ve gotten lots of those back in the days!" you reply smiling and Eduard rolls his eyes. "I pick up the phone and there''s a hysterical teacher on the other side. She starts yelling that Nush is gone and that they can''t find her anywhere...."'
+		'"You must''ve gotten lots of those back in the days!" you reply smiling and Eduard rolls his eyes. "I pick up the phone and there''s a hysterical teacher on the other side. She starts yelling that Nush is gone and that they can''t find her anywhere..."'
 		'You gasp as he continues. "I go to the preschool and join in the search. I even call some of my friends to help us look. The preschool even calls the police after a few hours." The way he says police sounds like he wants to spit the word. "Anyways... one of my friends finds her out near the palace. We still don''t know how she got there. When he brings her back, I ask what the hell she was doing and why she went off..." He sighs. "She just shrugs her shoulders and says that she felt like exploring the town. Turns out, my friend tells me, that she was conning tourists out of sweets then giving them bad directions. Apparently, she thought it was funny. That is until she got sick from eating too many sweets after I took her home. She threw up all over the place."'
 		'You continue on talking for a while about Anushka''s adventures while she was younger. "This makes what she''s like now make so much more sense." you comment.'
 		'"Yeah, anyways the little free spirited wild child looking for trouble my Nush." Eduard responds.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			'You know it can be a touchy subject, but you are just too curious. "Um Nush, do you ever worry, you know... about your reputation?"'
 			'She laughs a bit. "Which one? Where I am a nympho? A slut? A whore? A lesbian? Or do you mean that I am a party girl that spends all her time getting drunk or stoned and wasting her life away? Or maybe how I am the band whore? You will need to be a bit more specific there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'You pause a moment, at first afraid she might get pissed, but she seems more amused than anything. "Uh... all of it, I guess?" You''re not sure what else to say, since her rep is kind of based on all of that and more.'
-			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways, and the stuff that is shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone, then I do. Just because I like it." she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around, that''s not what makes me, <b>me</b>. All that is just small parts of me. I do what I want, and that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who understand that are my friends. The rest.... well... fuck''em."'
+			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways, and the stuff that is shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone, then I do. Just because I like it." she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around, that''s not what makes me, <b>me</b>. All that is just small parts of me. I do what I want, and that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who understand that are my friends. The rest... well... fuck''em."'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 		end
 		
@@ -633,7 +633,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 							'At first, you are mad at her talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face, and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
 							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" she says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
 							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it, you bite your lip and add "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She pretends to hump the air doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She pretends to hump the air doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
 							act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 						end
 					end

+ 1 - 1
locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							'You are mad at her for talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
 							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... Uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s because he has a really big dick, isn''t it?" she says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
 							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it, you bite your lip and add "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help but to join in.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end

+ 12 - 12
locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 							act 'Face sitting':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/strapon/strapme5.jpg"></center>'
-								'Once she has you soaking wet from her tongue lashes against your pussy. She crawls up on the bed, straddling your face, she easy down until her pussy is against your face. You start licking her in return, hearing her soft moans of pleasure just turns you own more.'
+								'Once she has you soaking wet from her tongue lashes against your pussy. She crawls up on the bed, straddling your face, she easy down until her pussy is against your face. You start licking her in return, hearing her soft moans of pleasure just turns you on even more.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Suck this':
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushrad':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A154'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spyrad4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Just as she is starting to moan in pleasure even louder than him, he pulls out of her and flips her over, grabbing her butt and giving her butt cheek a hard squeeze, followed by another hard slap that leaves a red outline of his hand on her bare ass, causing her to yelp again. "Fuck you have such a nice ass Nush." He tells her, she apparently knows what that means, as she quickly grabs the bottle of lube out of her night stand. But before she can use it, he grabs it from her. "Give me that, you always use to much." He growls, then he squirts just a little onto the head of his dick, rubbing it down the shaft of his dick. Once done with that he briefly rubs his fingers between her butt cheeks. It doesn''t look like he used much lube to you, nor hardly applied any to her.'
+				'Just as she is starting to moan in pleasure even louder than him, he pulls out of her and flips her over, grabbing her butt and giving her butt cheek a hard squeeze, followed by another hard slap that leaves a red outline of his hand on her bare ass, causing her to yelp again. "Fuck you have such a nice ass Nush." He tells her, she apparently knows what that means, as she quickly grabs the bottle of lube out of her night stand. But before she can use it, he grabs it from her. "Give me that, you always use too much." He growls, then he squirts just a little onto the head of his dick, rubbing it down the shaft of his dick. Once done with that he briefly rubs his fingers between her butt cheeks. It doesn''t look like he used much lube to you, nor hardly applied any to her.'
 				*nl
 				'He pushes her down until she is laying on her stomach, as he tosses the bottle aside and then leans forward, pushing his dick between her butt cheeks as she struggles a bit. "Rad you didn''t use enough lube." She says as she winces as he keeps struggling to push his dick between her butt cheeks. "Shut up Nush, this feels better, you feel really tight." He says just as shoves his hips forward hard, which causes her to jump a little and cry out in pain. "Ow fuck Rad, that hurt, you need to use more lube." She says in a obviously pain stressed voice. He pushes her head against the mattress. You can see her wincing in pain and white knuckling her grip on the bed sheets. "See I knew you didn''t need much lube, fuck your ass is tight." He says as he struggles to force his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock balls deep into her ass, moaning in pleasure as he does.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -651,7 +651,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'about_rad':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 		'You nod. "Ok I got time, then how about you just tell me."'
-		'She frowns at you, you can tell she is getting annoyed at the questions. "Because.... because when it''s great it''s amazing and when it''s not, well I deal."'
+		'She frowns at you, you can tell she is getting annoyed at the questions. "Because... because when it''s great it''s amazing and when it''s not, well I deal."'
 		'You can tell she is holding something back.'
 		act 'Let it drop': gt 'anushapt', 'bed'
 		act 'Press her for more details':
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch_nushval':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/spyval5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Once her orgasm has passed he slaps her ass again, as he pulls his dick out of her pussy. "Spread your ass for me baby." She grabs a bottle of lube out of her dresser, putting some of the lube on his dick and some on her ass, then reaches back with one hand, grabbing one of her butt cheeks and spreads it wide. He pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick gently into her ass, which elicits a loud moan of pain and pleasure for her.'
 					*nl
-					'He is fairly slow and not to deep at first, but once she starts moaning loudly and saying. "Yes!, Yes, fuck yes! Oh god yes!" He starts fucking her a lot harder and faster, finally slamming himself balls deep into her ass. She grips the sheets tightly, just as her body is rocked by another massive orgasm. She buries her face in her own shoulder partially muffling her cries of pleasure. You glance around to make sure no one else heard that and is coming to find out what is going on.'
+					'He is fairly slow and not too deep at first, but once she starts moaning loudly and saying. "Yes!, Yes, fuck yes! Oh god yes!" He starts fucking her a lot harder and faster, finally slamming himself balls deep into her ass. She grips the sheets tightly, just as her body is rocked by another massive orgasm. She buries her face in her own shoulder partially muffling her cries of pleasure. You glance around to make sure no one else heard that and is coming to find out what is going on.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Leave apartment': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'pav_complex','start'
@@ -819,7 +819,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs5.jpg"></center>'
-							'She lowers herself down on him until his cock slides into her pussy. They both moan in please as she does, she starts riding him hard and fast. You grab ahold of her hips and help pull her down so she takes all of him into her. He slaps your ass, but not to hard and then squeezes it and alternates between slapping and squeezing your ass, while Anushka rides him. After a few minutes he lifts Anushka off him and turns to you. "Lay down and spread you legs" He says as he helps you lay down.'
+							'She lowers herself down on him until his cock slides into her pussy. They both moan in please as she does, she starts riding him hard and fast. You grab ahold of her hips and help pull her down so she takes all of him into her. He slaps your ass, but not too hard and then squeezes it and alternates between slapping and squeezing your ass, while Anushka rides him. After a few minutes he lifts Anushka off him and turns to you. "Lay down and spread you legs" He says as he helps you lay down.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Get fucked':
@@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 								gs 'boyStat', 'A158'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs6.jpg"></center>'
-								'Anushka watches as he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your wet pussy, he starts fucking your pussy not to hard but just hard enough, moments later Anushka crawls back on top of him and straddles his face, he eagerly starts eating her pussy as he keeps fucking you.'
+								'Anushka watches as he slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your wet pussy, he starts fucking your pussy not too hard but just hard enough, moments later Anushka crawls back on top of him and straddles his face, he eagerly starts eating her pussy as he keeps fucking you.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group', 'lesbian'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Get fucked some more':
@@ -871,7 +871,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'val3some':
 													gs 'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/val/valnushs10.jpg"></center>'
 													'You shake your head no, as you support Anushka''s weight some as she recovers from her orgasm. "I don''t want to do anal."'
-													'He shrugs to you and then looks to Anushka. "Your ass ready for round two then babe?" She bites you shoulder blade, not to hard but enough you feel it and then looks back to him.'
+													'He shrugs to you and then looks to Anushka. "Your ass ready for round two then babe?" She bites you shoulder blade, not too hard but enough you feel it and then looks back to him.'
 													*nl
 													'You can feel her hips bouncing against your ass as she bounces and wiggles her ass at him. "Yeah, I want you to fuck my ass, fuck my ass like I''m a dirty little slut." She purrs to him.'
 													'He grins and says. "Your wish is my command." Just as he moves back up behind her and slams his dick back up her ass, causing her to cry out a little. He starts really hammering her ass this time and she seems to be loving it. She grips you tightly occasionally nipping and biting at the back of your neck as she moans loudly in pleasure. It doesn''t take to long until she has another huge orgasm. Then he says. "Fuck I''m about to cum."'
@@ -1105,7 +1105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mar3some':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/walkin3.jpg"></center>'
 	if hotcat >= 6:
-		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anunshka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus'' cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it to hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
+		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anunshka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus'' cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it too hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
 		'Anushka laughs at Marcus''s reaction before turning towards you and calmly asks "So what''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?" as if she was commenting on the weather instead of just having been caught with a black cock in her mouth.'
 		*nl
 		'You smile in return and tell her. "It looked like you guys were having so much fun, I thought I could join in as well."'
@@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mar3some':
 						act 'Suck his dick':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/spy/join/mar/marnushs5.jpg"></center>'
-							'You open your mouth and feel his wet dick slide into it, you can taste Anushka juices on his dick. You mostly just stay still and let him fuck your mouth, he doesn''t go to deep to gag you or to hard. You squeeze and spank Anushka''s butt while Marcus fucks your mouth. A couple of minutes or so go by when Marcus says. "Turn around <<$pcs_nickname>> I wan''t to bang you some more."'
+							'You open your mouth and feel his wet dick slide into it, you can taste Anushka juices on his dick. You mostly just stay still and let him fuck your mouth, he doesn''t go too deep to gag you or too hard. You squeeze and spank Anushka''s butt while Marcus fucks your mouth. A couple of minutes or so go by when Marcus says. "Turn around <<$pcs_nickname>> I wan''t to bang you some more."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'group', 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Eat Anushka while getting fucked': gt 'anushkaev1', 'eat_nush_fucked'
@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mar3some':
 	else
 		if pcs_mood > 10: pcs_mood -= 10
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'dislike'
-		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anushka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it to hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
+		'You walk in confident in joining them in their sexcapades, closing the door. You manage to walk all the way over to the bed before Anushka finally notices you and gives you a slight wave as she sucks Marcus cock. Perhaps hearing you or noticing her wave, Marcus turns his head and notices you. He is obviously surprised as he steps away and uses his hands to cover himself up. As he does he backs into the bed and ends up sitting on the bed, by virtue of backing into it too hard. He looks very confused at you then Anushka. "I... Uh... I mean..." He stammers obviously not sure what to say.'
 		'Anushka laughs at Marcus''s reaction before turning towards you and calmly asking "Do you mind <<$pcs_nickname>>? We are kind of busy." as if she was commenting on the weather instead of just having been caught with a black cock in her mouth.'
 		*nl
 		'Your smile falters at their reaction and tell them. "It looked like you guys was having fun, so I thought I could join in as well."'
@@ -1326,7 +1326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tell_about_olu':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
 	'You smile as you look at her like you have a big secret. Which perks her interest. "Well I am seeing a black guy too." You tell her.'
 	'Her eyebrow arches in curiosity. "Really who?"'
-	'You describe Olu to her and mention he lives in your building. She nods apparently knowing who you mean. "Yeah Ok I think I have seen him around the courtyard before. So he lives in your building huh? How did you meet? Cause I got to say he looks a little old for you."'
+	'You describe Olu to her and mention he lives in your building. She nods apparently knowing who you mean. "Yeah OK I think I have seen him around the courtyard before. So he lives in your building huh? How did you meet? Cause I got to say he looks a little old for you."'
 	'"Well his name is Olu and he is my Aunt''s boyfriend." You tell her.'
 	'Which gets a bit of a shocked look from Anushka. "Oh my god does your aunt know?"'
 	act 'Yes':
@@ -1466,7 +1466,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couch_fuck_her_ass':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/livingroom/couchstrap8.jpg"></center>'
 	'Standing up with the strapon firmly in place you point at her. "Turn around and get on your hands and knees you little slut, I''m gong to fuck your ass now!" She gives you a really turned on look and gets on her knees and turns around, so her ass is facing you. She grabs some lube and applies it to her asshole, while you apply a good amount to the dildo getting it nice and slick. You get up on the couch, lowering your self down and guiding the dildo. You line the tip of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo against her asshole. Pushing forward you feel some resistance and then you feel the head pop into her ass and she gasps. You grab ahold of her hips with your hands so she can''t pull away and you start slowly fucking her ass, working it deeper with each stroke.'
 	*nl
-	'You feel her trying to pull away a little, but with your hands on her hips, she really can''t. You tighten your grip on her hips and yank her back, forcing the strapon balls deep into her ass. "Don''t pull away from me bitch, you''re ass belongs to me now." You tell her as you start picking up a little speed as you fuck her.'
+	'You feel her trying to pull away a little, but with your hands on her hips, she really can''t. You tighten your grip on her hips and yank her back, forcing the strapon balls deep into her ass. "Don''t pull away from me bitch, your ass belongs to me now." You tell her as you start picking up a little speed as you fuck her.'
 	'"Tell me how much you love getting your ass fucked!" You tell her.'
 	'You moans loudly. "Oh yes I love getting my ass fucked, please fuck my ass!" She begs you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'dom'

+ 3 - 3
locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'striptease':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/strip4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Next you start to slowly pull your panties down, almost to the point your clit is visible then your pull them up a little teasing him, while your panties just barely obscure your pussy. Finally you pull your panties down to your mid thighs, showing off your pussy in all its glory.'
+			'Next you start to slowly pull your panties down, almost to the point your clit is visible. Then you pull them up a little teasing him, while your panties just barely obscure your pussy. Finally you pull your panties down to your mid thighs, showing off your pussy in all its glory.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get naked':
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
 							'You crawl over to him, noticing a bit of your blood on his penis. A quick glance between your legs reveals a small trickle has run out of your pussy too. Using some tissues from the nightstand you wipe the blood away before straddling Artem.'
-							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+							'You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before too much longer.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							act 'Mount him':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/sex/first9.jpg"></center>'
-								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before to much longer.'
+								'You crawl over to him, straddling him as you lower yourself down. You take hold of his penis and guide it as you lower yourself even more until it slides back inside of your pussy. You start eagerly riding him, controlling the action, as you do he starts to grunt more and more, you can tell he is going to cum before too much longer.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'cum surprise': gt 'artemEv', 'cum_surprise'

+ 1 - 1
locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/artemhome/living.jpg"></center>'
-	'The living room is clean and neat. A couch rests against one wall, with a throw rug between it and the tv stand. On the throw rug is a nice coffee table. On the tv stand sits a nice but not to big flat screen tv, while in the bottom of the stand is a neatly stored playstation. Along one side of the tv is a stand with several dozen movies.'
+	'The living room is clean and neat. A couch rests against one wall, with a throw rug between it and the TV stand. On the throw rug is a nice coffee table. On the TV stand sits a nice but not too big flat screen tv, while in the bottom of the stand is a neatly stored playstation. Along one side of the tv is a stand with several dozen movies.'
 	if hour < 6:
 		gt 'artemhome', 'timecheck'
 	elseif hour > 22:

+ 1 - 1
locations/bed.qsrc

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 								'<<$husName>> gets his dick out and starts masturbating. It is not what you expected, and at first you feel a little sad that he didn''t enter into you, but began to masturbate.'
 								'Then it starts to hit you, watching your husband masturbate as he watches you fuck the dildo, his face covered in pleasure, you scream and fall on the table, having experienced an orgasm.'
 								'The dildo is still sticking out of your ass. While <<$husName>> is still masturbating, looking at you stretched out on the table, you take the dildo from your ass and begin to lick it, looking into your husbands eyes.'
-								'The spectacle has him immediately cum all over the floor. You go to him, kiss him on the lips and he passionately kisses you back..'
+								'The spectacle has him immediately cum all over the floor. You go to him, kiss him on the lips and he passionately kisses you back...'
 
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 1 - 1
locations/bed2.qsrc

@@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wake_horny':
 	elseif SleepHorny = 2:
 		'You''re so horny that you''ve woken a second time. Your pussy is still wet and wanting attention.'
 		*nl
-		'You could try and get back to sleep again, but it''s doubtful that you will get much sleep, and continuously ignoring your needs wont help; maybe you should masturbate, and make the most of the time that''s left.'
+		'You could try and get back to sleep again, but it''s doubtful that you will get much sleep, and continuously ignoring your needs won''t help; maybe you should masturbate, and make the most of the time that''s left.'
 		*nl
 		'Soon you will have to get up one way or another.'
 	elseif SleepHorny >= 3:

+ 1 - 1
locations/bedr2x.qsrc

@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 			end
 
 			if strapon > 0:
-				act 'Dress Strap':
+				act 'Wear strap-on':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					menu_off = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/bedrPar.qsrc

@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ if ParrotQW['Owned2'] = 1:
 	if ParrotQW['Level'] = 3:
 		parfixrand = rand(0,9)
 		if parfixrand = 0:'When <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> sees you, he starts ''speaking''. He is saying "<b>What did you say to me?</b>"'
-		if parfixrand = 1:'When <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> sees you, he starts ''speaking''. He is saying "<b>3.1415926535897932384....</b>"'
+		if parfixrand = 1:'When <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> sees you, he starts ''speaking''. He is saying "<b>3.1415926535897932384...</b>"'
 		if parfixrand = 2:'When <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> sees you, he starts ''speaking''. He is saying "<b>Come closer, my friend.</b>"'
 		if parfixrand = 3:'When <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> sees you, he starts ''speaking''. He is saying "<b>Here kitty, kitty!</b>"'
 		if parfixrand = 4:'When <<$ParrotQW[''Name2'']>> sees you, he starts ''speaking''. He is saying "<b>I just met you, and this is crazy!</b>"'

+ 5 - 5
locations/beg1.qsrc

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
         act 'Go to the track field.':gt 'beg1', 'ross'
     elseif razradbeg >= 3 and razradbeg < 14:
-        'As one of your club''s best athletes, you can take part in a series of qualifying races in the professional circuit. Winning 9 out of 11 would qualify you for the St.Petersburg Track Championship, that is celebrated seasonally.'
+        'As one of your club''s best athletes, you can take part in a series of qualifying races in the professional circuit. Winning 9 out of 11 would qualify you for the St. Petersburg Track Championship, that is celebrated seasonally.'
         nl
         'Qualifying Races Attended: <<razradbeg - 3>>' 
         'Qualifying Races Won: <<razradbegK>>'
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
         cla
         razradbegK = 0
         razradbeg = 3
-        'You were unable to qualify for the St.Petersburg Championship.'
+        'You were unable to qualify for the St. Petersburg Championship.'
 
         ! WD: Argument is 'dressing room'
         act 'Go back to the dressing room':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
         cla
         razradbegK = 0
         razradbeg = 3
-        'You qualified for the <<year>> St.Petersburg Track Championship, taking place this season in the Petrovsky Stadium.'
+        'You qualified for the <<year>> St. Petersburg Track Championship, taking place this season in the Petrovsky Stadium.'
 
         act 'Go to the stadium':gt 'beg1', 'evro'
     end
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kval':
     else
         gs 'fame', 'city', 'running', rand(1,6)
         gs 'fame', 'pav', 'running', rand(1,3)
-        razradbegK += 1 & goldbeg += 1 & money += 2000 & 'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place! You get a gold medal, a prize of 2,000 <b>₽</b> and are one step closer to qualifying for the St.Petersburg Championship.'
+        razradbegK += 1 & goldbeg += 1 & money += 2000 & 'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place! You get a gold medal, a prize of 2,000 <b>₽</b> and are one step closer to qualifying for the St. Petersburg Championship.'
     end
     act 'Leave':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
 end
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'evro':
     
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/gym/race/begsor.jpg"></center>'
     'Your discipline: The Women''s 400 Meter Dash.' 
-    'This is the highest competition in the St.Petersburg area. From here, the professional runners, jump to the regional, national and eventually international scene. You will eventually reach those levels, with the possibility to reach the country Olympic Team, but for the moment, it is better if you concentrate on reaching the St.Petersburg Championship.'   
+    'This is the highest competition in the St. Petersburg area. From here, the professional runners, jump to the regional, national and eventually international scene. You will eventually reach those levels, with the possibility to reach the country Olympic Team, but for the moment, it is better if you concentrate on reaching the St. Petersburg Championship.'   
     'After changing into your running gear, you spend some time warming up before the race starts and observe the current attendance. The Petrovsky Stadium''s personnel is in full gear to manage the wave of spectators, journalist, and others that run around. Even with the fact, that track & field don''t attract the same attention level that football, it is evident that this is a great event, with maybe around 10000 spectators.'
     'When you and the other runners are called, you walk to your starting position, tense but ready.' 
     wait 725

+ 1 - 1
locations/bordel.qsrc

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel':
 			'The brothel madam comes over to you and says, "Our customers expect you to be clean, shaven, made-up and with your hair looking nice. Go and sort yourself out, now!"'
 
 			act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'bordel', 'dysh'
-		elseif $clothingworntype ! 'burlesque' and PCloStyle ! 4 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
+		elseif $clothingworntype ! 'fancy_burlesque' and PCloStyle ! 4 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			cla
 			'You need to wear an outfit that can be used for prostitution. If you haven''t got anything suitable and you are desperate, you could work naked but you will get paid less and might get treated badly.'
 			'You can change your clothes in the bathroom.'

+ 91 - 91
locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -173,9 +173,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar:order':
 	'"What would you like miss?"'
 	if alko >= 6 and abdCh <= prob_abdCh and hotelWhore = 0:
 		*nl
-		'You try to order another drink, but as you faint all that gets out of your mouth is some drunken babble..'
+		'You try to order another drink, but as you faint all that gets out of your mouth is some drunken babble...'
 		'The barman was obviously waiting for this moment.'
-		'He walks out of the bar, taking you in his arms and carrying away.'
+		'He walks out of the bar, taking you in his arms and carrying you away.'
 		'On the way you briefly regain consciousness from time to time, realizing that you are carried somewhere upstairs to what seems as one of the hotel rooms.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'brothel', 'abducted'
 	else
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pinchandfingertiedtobed.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'He jumps on to you, grabbing your ass and pinching your cheeks.'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It.. hurts.. Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a consciousness for a brief moment.'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouch! It... hurts... Ouch!"</font> The pain forces you back to a brief consciousness moment.'
 		'Aroused with your reaction, he pushes his finger into your pussy, one by one until there are four of them.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"What a whore! She''s already wet!"</font>'
 		'He uses the juiced fingers and thrusts them into your anus, once again forcing you back to a living world.'
@@ -228,8 +228,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now slut let''s get you your drink!"</font>'
 		'He reaches for a bottle of champagne from the minibar.'
-		'All you can hear in that moment is a popping sound as the bottle plug shoots out.. The barman covers the neck of the bottle with his thumb and shakes it to build up a pressure..'
-		'..and then he forces it into your anus as far as it goes, while the sparkling wine gushes out deep into your intestines.'
+		'All you can hear in that moment is a popping sound as the bottle plug shoots out... The barman covers the neck of the bottle with his thumb and shakes it to build up a pressure...'
+		'...and then he forces it into your anus as far as it goes, while the sparkling wine gushes out deep into your intestines.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Ayyyieeee!"</font> Again you scream aloud shaking both in surprise and pain.'
 		gs 'pain', 6, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 5
@@ -242,12 +242,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedtobedfuck.mp4"></video>  <video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedtobedanal.mp4"></video></center>'
 		*nl
 		'The champagne bottle is still inside your anus like a giant buttplug, but the flow has stopped.'
-		'He takes it and pulls it out. The wine slowly leaks out of your wrecked anus..'
+		'He takes it and pulls it out. The wine slowly leaks out of your wrecked anus...'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Well, now that the drink is taken care of, we have also got you an expensive enema, so now we can finally get to the business!"</font>'
 		'He cleans your ass from the remains of whatever little was inside.'
 		'His dick is not the biggest one, but it is quite thick.'
 		'Your pussy is a first victim of the phallus, and after short while he moves to your anus.'
-		'Another jolt of pain runs through your bottom, but this time you fade away for sure..'
+		'Another jolt of pain runs through your bottom, but this time you fade away for sure...'
 		anal_slip += 4
 		gs 'pain', 6, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 		guy += 4
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'You wake up, still being bound to the bed. Behind the curtains you can see that it is late morning.'
 		'Your head is in pain and spinning, your stomach is like on a water.'
 		'You feel strange fullness in your abdomen and your pussy and anus itch.'
-		'As you try to struggle out of the bounds you realize what has happened.. and what is left as a reminder..'
+		'As you try to struggle out of the bounds you realize what has happened... and what is left as a reminder...'
 		'You desperately try to push the plug out of your ass, but its rim is too wide and it rests well inside you.'
 		gs 'pain', 2, 'armL', 'bind'
 		gs 'pain', 2, 'armR', 'bind'
@@ -317,8 +317,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'Finally you hear the door open, someone is coming in.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"So girl, how was your night?"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What? Who are you? Untie me!"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I will, but first you will tell me how was your night."</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Wh.. How could it be? I don''t remember most of it, I lie tied naked to a bed with something stuck in my anus I do not even know what is! My pussy and anus hurt and I was probably raped whole night unconscious!"</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I will, but first you will tell me how your night was."</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Wh... How could it be? I don''t remember most of it, I lie tied naked to a bed with something stuck in my anus I do not even know what is! My pussy and anus hurt and I was probably raped whole night unconscious!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Well, you mostly covered it all. But you still didn''t tell me how did you like it."</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Please just untie me! All of me hurts like hell! Please!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"OK, but then you will answer me. And first we need to get rid of the plug, don''t we?"</font>'
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Quick or slow, girl?"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What?! No, don''t touch it!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Haha, they say do it swift, it hurts less! Let''s try it!"</font>'
-		'With those words he pulls the plug out, leaving your anus with huge gape..'
+		'With those words he pulls the plug out, leaving your anus with a huge gaping hole...'
 		gs 'pain', 3, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 		gs 'stat'
 		stage= 7
@@ -363,8 +363,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		if abdLike = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/abusedface.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You just admitted to a complete stranger, who abducted, tied and raped for a whole night, that you actually liked the experience..'
-			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I thought so. What a nice submissive slut you are. I have an offer for you.."</font>'
+			'You just admitted to a complete stranger, who abducted, tied and raped for a whole night, that you actually liked the experience...'
+			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I thought so. What a nice submissive slut you are. I have an offer for you..."</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"An offer?"</font> you didn''t know what to expect, but this is even more surprising.'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Yes. You know, this is not just a hotel. This is something more."</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What do you mean?"</font>'
@@ -374,11 +374,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Not a common brothel like the many others. This one is special."</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"How?"</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"It is a sado maso brothel. Whores get used by dominant males and vice versa."</font>'
-			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oh.. OK. And the offer?"</font> you are confused.'
+			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oh... OK. And the offer?"</font> you are confused.'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Well you just proved you like to be bound, abused, raped and humiliated. You''ve got the perfect CV. I want you to be one of our girls."</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Uhm... I, I need to think about it. I don''t know if I like it THAT much."</font>'
-			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"That''s OK. We don''t force our girls to work here. Most of the time at least.. But the pay is above anything you can get anywhere these days!"</font>'
-			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"OK, I understand. I''ll think it through.."</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"That''s OK. We don''t force our girls to work here. Most of the time at least... But the pay is above anything you can get anywhere these days!"</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"OK, I understand. I''ll think it through..."</font>'
 			'He looks at you as if he''s trying to read in you:'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Oh I think you will come soon enough. When you do so, go to whoever is behind the bar and tell him that you want a special drink. The Blue Blooded Russian. Everything else will be taken care of."</font>'
 			'He seems to be finished talking to you. On his way back to the door he tosses a pile of your clothes your way. Without a word he shuts the door and is gone.'
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:leave':
 	*nl
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		'The Receptionist looks up from his desk and gazes upon you: <font color=#<<$rec_font>>>"Didn''t you forget something, whore?"</font>'
-		'It takes you few seconds to realize that you are naked! <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oops.. let me get my clothes first, I guess.."</font>'
+		'It takes you few seconds to realize that you are naked! <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oops... let me get my clothes first, I guess..."</font>'
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/nude.jpg"></center>'
 		else
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:leave':
 		end
 		act 'Go back to suit up': gt 'brothel', 'brothel:section1:girlroom'
 	else
-		'The Receptionist pushes a hidden button, probably signaling the Errand Boy, because in a minute he arrives with the elevator.'
+		'The Receptionist pushes a hidden button, probably signaling the errand boy, because in a minute he arrives with the elevator.'
 		'<font color=#<<$rec_font>>>"Go <<$pcs_firstname>>, you are free to leave."</font>'
 	act 'Go to the elevator': gt 'brothel', 'lobby'
 	end
@@ -614,16 +614,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:lobby:cage:client':
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"Ahh, my pet is already in its place I see."</font>'
 		'He scans you through the bars with hungry eyes.'
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"Hmm, she looks young, exactly as I ordered. What is your age, slave?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I.. I am 18, Master."</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I... I am 18, Master."</font>'
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"No, tell me your true age, girl."</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Well.. it''s '+age+' years, Master."</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Well... it''s '+age+' years, Master."</font>'
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"Good, very good. Now let us go."</font>'
 	elseif MasterType = 1 and age >= 18:
 		rageMeter = 50
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"Ahh, my pet is already in its place I see."</font>'
 		'He scans you through the bars with hungry eyes.'
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"Hmm, she doesn''t look as young as I expected. What is your age, slave?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I.. I am '+age+', Master.</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I... I am '+age+', Master.</font>'
 		'He turns pale and is obviously annoyed.'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Idiots. I told them what I want, and they delivered me this. Bad for you slut, you will feel the cost of their failure."</font>'
 		'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"Let''s go you walking set of holes!"</font>'
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:start':
 		act 'Be quiet and await what''s next': gt 'brothel', 'brothel:section1:session:masterChooses'
 		!act 'Suggest an action': gt 'brothel', 'brothel:section1:session:slaveChooses'
 	else
-		'Without a word Master leads you to a device..'
+		'Without a word Master leads you to a device...'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', 'brothel:section1:session:masterChooses'
 	end
 end
@@ -656,8 +656,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:slaveChooses':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<h3>Playroom</h3>'
-	'<h5>You decided to suggest what your Master should do with you..</h5>'
-	'You ask him: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Master, please.."</font>'
+	'<h5>You decided to suggest what your Master should do with you...</h5>'
+	'You ask him: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Master, please..."</font>'
 	!!act '..let''s just have us sex and see where it leads':
 	!!act '..just bind me and use my holes':
 	!!act '..I''ve been a bad girl, I should be punished':
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play':
 		elseif stage = 5:
 			if like = 1:
 				'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>YES! That''s all a slut like you needs to feel!</font>'
-				'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>But I think you still don''t have enough..</font>'
+				'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>But I think you still don''t have enough...</font>'
 				stage = 4
 				act 'Continue':gt 'brothel', $sessionB
 
@@ -911,8 +911,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 		th = rand (1, 2)
 		if step = 0:
 			'The client now leaves all the toys behind and goes behind you. Unable to see him you can just guess what''s he doing behind your bare ass.'
-			'He puts his hands on your asscheeks, spreading them wide to get better look on both your holes..'
-			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming..'
+			'He puts his hands on your asscheeks, spreading them wide to get better look on both your holes...'
+			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming...'
 			if analplugIN = 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/spreadasswithplugfrombehind.jpg"></center>'
 			else
@@ -924,21 +924,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 			! pls not in anus
 			if th = 1:
 				if analplugIN = 1:
-					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display.. You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(At least he won''t put it in my anus.. the plug is already there..)</font>'
+					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display... You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(At least he won''t put it in my anus... the plug is already there...)</font>'
 					'Right at that moment the Client penetrates your pussy and thrusts his pole up to the rim!'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/insertvaginalwithplugfrombehind.jpg"></center>'
 				else
-					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display.. You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Oh just please just don''t put it in my poor anus!)</font>'
+					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display... You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Oh just please just don''t put it in my poor anus!)</font>'
 					'Right at that moment the Client penetrates your pussy and thrusts his pole up to the rim!'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/insertvaginalfrombehind.mp4"></video></center>'
 				end
 			!pls not in pussy
 			elseif th = 2:
-				'Both your pussy and your anus are well on display.. You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Please just don''t put it in my sore pussy!)</font>'
-				'Right at that moment the Client pushes his phallus in your tender pussy.. and all the way in!'
+				'Both your pussy and your anus are well on display... You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Please just don''t put it in my sore pussy!)</font>'
+				'Right at that moment the Client pushes his phallus in your tender pussy... and all the way in!'
 				if analplugIN = 1:
 					'The pain is intensified as the previously inserted anal plug is still in its place, rubbing the thin wall between your vagina and intestines.'
-					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he pounds your pussy even deeper..'
+					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he pounds your pussy even deeper...'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/insertvaginalwithplugfrombehind.jpg"></center>'
 					'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwuuch! Pleaaase no no take it ouuuut! Maaaster pleaaase!"</font>'
 					'Just as you say that the next pound of Client''s dick pushes out the plug, which falls out down between your bound legs.'
@@ -961,7 +961,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 			'After what seems as eternity, the Client seems to be closing to his orgasm.'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Yes Master, please fill me with your cum!"</font> You shout from the rest of your remaining energy, trying to get him cum as soon as possible.'
 			'It works as your words arouse him even more and finally he pumps all his vile seed deep into your vagina...'
-			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Yuk..I think it went even to my uterus! That''s gross!)</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Yuk... I think it went even to my uterus! That''s gross!)</font>'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/cuminpussyfrombehind.mp4"></video></center>'
 			step = 0
 			$subloc = '<<$base>>:end'
@@ -979,8 +979,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 		th = rand (1, 2)
 		if step = 0:
 			'The client now leaves all the toys behind and goes behind you. Unable to see him you can just guess what''s he doing behind your bare ass.'
-			'He puts his hands on your asscheeks, spreading them wide to get better look on both your holes..'
-			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming..'
+			'He puts his hands on your asscheeks, spreading them wide to get better look on both your holes...'
+			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming...'
 			if analplugIN = 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/spreadasswithplugfrombehind.jpg"></center>'
 			else
@@ -992,29 +992,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 			! pls not in anus
 			if th = 1:
 				if analplugIN = 1:
-					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display.. You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(At least he won''t put it in my anus.. the plug is already there..)</font>'
-					'But as if you said your thought aloud, in precisely that moment the Client sticks a warm hard pole right in your ass.. up to his rim!'
+					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display... You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(At least he won''t put it in my anus... the plug is already there...)</font>'
+					'But as if you said your thought aloud, in precisely that moment the Client sticks a warm hard pole right in your ass... up to his rim!'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/fuckanalwithplugfrombehind.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwuuch! Pleaaase no no take it ouuuut! Maaaster pleaaase!"</font>'
 					'Just as you say that the next pound of Client''s dick pushes out the plug, which falls out down between your bound legs.'
-					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he stretches your anus even more with his fallus.. Or maybe he does it on purpose!'
+					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he stretches your anus even more with his fallus... Or maybe he does it on purpose!'
 					analplugIN = 0
 					gs 'pain', 2, 'anus', 'stretch'
 					gs 'stat'
 				else
-					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display.. You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Oh just please just don''t put it in my poor anus!)</font>'
-					'But as if you said your thought aloud, in precisely that moment the Client sticks a warm hard pole right in your ass.. up to his rim!'
+					'Both your pussy and your anus are too well on display... You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Oh just please just don''t put it in my poor anus!)</font>'
+					'But as if you said your thought aloud, in precisely that moment the Client sticks a warm hard pole right in your ass... up to his rim!'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/fuckanalfrombehind2.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwuuch! Pleaaase no take it ouuuut! Maaaster please not in my ass!"</font>'
 				end
 			!pls not in pussy
 			elseif th = 2:
-				'Both your pussy and your anus are well on display.. You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Please just don''t put it in my sore pussy!)</font>'
+				'Both your pussy and your anus are well on display... You say to yourself: <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Please just don''t put it in my sore pussy!)</font>'
 				'Ironically you actually sigh in relief as the Client sticks his warm yet hard pole in your anus and not your pussy.'
 				if analplugIN = 1:
 					'But you entirely forgot about that thing already inside you!'
-					'The pain is intensified as the previously inserted anal plug is still in its place...in your ass!'
-					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he stretches your anus even more with his fallus..'
+					'The pain is intensified as the previously inserted anal plug is still in its place... in your ass!'
+					'The Client seems to disregard that, as he stretches your anus even more with his fallus...'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/fuckanalwithplugfrombehind.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwuuch! Pleaaase no no take it ouuuut! Maaaster pleaaase!"</font>'
 					'Just as you say that the next pound of Client''s dick pushes out the plug, which falls out down between your bound legs.'
@@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 		elseif step = 3:
 			'After what seems as eternity, the Client seems to be closing to his orgasm.'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Yes Master, please fill me with your cum!"</font> You shout from the rest of your remaining energy, trying to get him cum as soon as possible.'
-			'It works as your words arouse him even more and finally he pumps all his vile seed deep into your intestines... <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Finally..)</font>'
+			'It works as your words arouse him even more and finally he pumps all his vile seed deep into your intestines... <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(Finally...)</font>'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/cuminassfrombehind.mp4"></video></center>'
 			step = 0
 			$subloc = '<<$base>>:end'
@@ -1055,7 +1055,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/cummissionaryvaginal.mp4"></video></center>'
 		*nl
 		'Being still bound on your back, you finally expect it to end.'
-		'The Client increases his pace and groaning cums into your vagina, releasing the hot sperm down your pussy, reaching even to your cervix..'
+		'The Client increases his pace and groaning cums into your vagina, releasing the hot sperm down your pussy, reaching even to your cervix...'
 		$subloc = '<<$base>>:end'
 		gs 'cum_call', '', 'Master'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $subloc
@@ -1086,23 +1086,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 		*nl
 		if step = 0:
 			'The client now leaves all the toys behind and goes to you.'
-			'He starts to caress your face.. unable to move you just hold and endure his touches..'
-			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming..'
+			'He starts to caress your face... unable to move you just hold and endure his touches...'
+			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming...'
 			*nl
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/caressface.jpg"></center>'
 			step = 1
 			act 'Continue':gt 'brothel', $this
 		elseif step = 1:
 			'As you were afraid of, the Client takes his cock and thrusts it in your mouth: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>"Now let''s use this mouthy hole!"</font>'
-			'Unable even to react or moan, you are plugged with his meat, choking and dribbling all around..'
+			'Unable even to react or moan, you are plugged with his meat, choking and dribbling all around...'
 			*nl
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/fuckfacetied.mp4"></video></center>'
 			step = 2
 			act 'Continue':gt 'brothel', $this
 		elseif step = 2:
 			'His pace is increasing as orgasms builds in his cock.'
-			'The warm feel of his cum surprises you..'
-			'Most of the cum penetrates directly in your throat and down to the belly, the rests flows out around your mouth and his dick..'
+			'The warm feel of his cum surprises you...'
+			'Most of the cum penetrates directly in your throat and down to the belly, the rests flows out around your mouth and his dick...'
 			*nl
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/cuminmouth.mp4"></video></center>'
 			step = 0
@@ -1120,21 +1120,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:finish':
 		*nl
 		if step = 0:
 			'The client now leaves all the toys behind and goes to you.'
-			'He starts to caress your face.. unable to move you just hold and endure his touches..'
-			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming..'
+			'He starts to caress your face... unable to move you just hold and endure his touches...'
+			'You start to shake as you know what''s coming...'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/caressface.jpg"></center>'
 			step = 1
 			act 'Continue':gt 'brothel', $this
 		elseif step = 1:
 			'As you were afraid of, the Client takes his cock and thrusts it in your mouth: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>"Now let''s use this mouthy hole!"</font>'
-			'Unable even to react or moan, you are plugged with his meat, choking and dribbling all around..'
+			'Unable even to react or moan, you are plugged with his meat, choking and dribbling all around...'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/fuckfacetied.mp4"></video></center>'
 			step = 2
 			act 'Continue':gt 'brothel', $this
 		elseif step = 2:
 			'His pace is increasing as orgasms builds in his cock.'
 			'The warm feel of his cum surprises you as it lands all over your face.'
-			'The sticky white liquid gets in your eyes and nose, slowly dripping around your mouth..'
+			'The sticky white liquid gets in your eyes and nose, slowly dripping around your mouth...'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/cumonface.mp4"></video></center>'
 			step = 0
 			$subloc = '<<$base>>:end'
@@ -1159,7 +1159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckMouth':
 	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
-	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Uhm...a fucking of my pussy? Or anus?"</font>'
+	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Uhm... a fucking of my pussy? Or anus?"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Fucking indeed, but neither of those. Open your mouth!"</font>'
 	'You have no option but to do as he wants, opening your lips for his thick phallus.'
 	'You choke, saliva everywhere, but it seems he won''t stop until you either suffocate or until he cums!'
@@ -1186,11 +1186,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckAnal':
 	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
-	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your...anus!'
+	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your... anus!'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Owwwch!"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Didn''t expect such a quick entry, did you?"</font>'
 	'But again you are unable to answer, because he starts to pound you so fast and deep, that even an attempt to get a sound out of your mouth is futile.'
-	'You can just helplessly endure the hard fucking he''s giving you..'
+	'You can just helplessly endure the hard fucking he''s giving you...'
 	'As it wasn''t enough, he slaps your tits every now and then, making the whole experience even more hopeless.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
@@ -1215,11 +1215,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFuckVaginal':
 	'You are still bound on your back, with hands and knees tied together, exposing both of your holes.'
 	'The Client reaches to you, looking down to your round crotch.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"So what will it be, slut?"</font>'
-	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your...pussy!'
+	'Before you even try to decide how to react to this straight question, he forces his dick down your... pussy!'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Owwwch!"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Didn''t expect such a quick entry, did you?"</font>'
 	'But again you are unable to answer, because he starts to pound you so fast and deep, that even an attempt to get a sound out of your mouth is futile.'
-	'You can just helplessly endure the hard fucking he''s giving you..'
+	'You can just helplessly endure the hard fucking he''s giving you...'
 	'As it wasn''t enough, he slaps your tits every now and then, making the whole experience even more hopeless.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
@@ -1266,7 +1266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackFistAnal':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedonbackfistanal.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"How long dick are you able to take inside your ass, slut?"</font>'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..I don''t know master, I have never measured any."</font>'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I... I don''t know master, I have never measured any."</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Then we need to take the measurements, I''d say!"</font>'
 	'He takes a big bottle of lube, squirting it on his hand.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"No please, this won''t fit in me!"</font>'
@@ -1298,7 +1298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackVibroPussy':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedonbackvibropussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Is your pussy a sensitive one, girl?"</font>'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..I would say regularly sensitive, master."</font>'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I... I would say regularly sensitive, master."</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"After this, it will be nothing like regular, haha!"</font>'
 	'With those words his face turns grim - and you feel an unpleasant shiver down your back.'
 	'Your fears come true in few seconds - he takes out a giant vibration device!'
@@ -1326,7 +1326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackWhipPussy':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedonbackwhippussy.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Is your pussy a sensitive one, girl?"</font>'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..I would say regularly sensitive, master."</font>'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I... I would say regularly sensitive, master."</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"After this, it will be nothing like regular, haha!"</font>'
 	'With those words his face turn grim - and you get unpleasant shiver on your back.'
 	'Your fears come true in few seconds - he takes out a whip!'
@@ -1353,8 +1353,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBack':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedonbackkneeshigh.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'He brings some ropes and wooden sticks. <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(What does he need those for?)</font>'
-	'Soon you get to know what for - your titties! Not that he ties you, that would be expected, but he secures your tender tits with the wooden sticks, forcing them to get fuller and fuller..'
-	'You end up bound so securely, that all you can do is stare at him in expectation of what is coming next..'
+	'Soon you get to know what for - your titties! Not that he ties you, that would be expected, but he secures your tender tits with the wooden sticks, forcing them to get fuller and fuller...'
+	'You end up bound so securely, that all you can do is stare at him in expectation of what is coming next...'
 	gs 'pain', 2, 'breasts', 'bind'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $sessionB
@@ -1372,8 +1372,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:lieOnBack':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/onbackkneeshigh.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'The client reaches for your neck, forcefully leading you to one of the beds.'
-	'You know what''s coming.. he throws you on the soft pillows: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Lie on your back and put your knees as close to your head as you can!"</font>'
-	'You do as ordered..'
+	'You know what''s coming... he throws you on the soft pillows: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Lie on your back and put your knees as close to your head as you can!"</font>'
+	'You do as ordered...'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $sessionB
 end
 
@@ -1387,8 +1387,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 
 	if step = 0:
-		'The Client is obviously aroused beyond his expectation: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I have these beautiful nails and needles here with me.."</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What the..?"</font>'
+		'The Client is obviously aroused beyond his expectation: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I have these beautiful nails and needles here with me..."</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"What the...?"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"... and I think those nipples of yours are aching for them!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"You can''t be serious! This IS against the rules, let me out!"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Not if you agree with this. So what will it be?"</font>'
@@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 	elseif step = 1:
 		caneFeetCount = 0
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Would a bonus to your pay change your mind?"</font>'
-		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Wh.. what bonus?"</font>'
+		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Wh... what bonus?"</font>'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Ah, let''s say 50% more?"</font>'
 		act 'Say you''ll do it': step = 2 & bonus = 50 & gt 'brothel', $this
 		act 'Say you''ll do it fot 100% more': step = 3 & gt 'brothel', $this
@@ -1424,17 +1424,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 	elseif step = 4:
 		gs 'pain', 3, 'nipples', 'pierce'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'He comes with a set of needles of various sizes. Judging by the fancy bag he carries them in, he is not doing this to a first girl..'
+		'He comes with a set of needles of various sizes. Judging by the fancy bag he carries them in, he is not doing this to a first girl...'
 		'One by one he takes them out of the bag and slowly penetrates your areola.'
 		'It hurts like being at doctor taking blood, but worse, because they don''t take blood from your nipples in the hospital!'
-		'When you think it''s over he takes out one large needle with longer rod than the others..'
+		'When you think it''s over he takes out one large needle with longer rod than the others...'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now where do you think this one goes?"</font>'
 		'Not waiting for answer he stabs your nipple in the middle!'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/needlesintits.mp4"></video></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww"</font>'
-		'And af it wasn''t already enough, he moves with the needle inside you in and out..'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Pleaase, no more.. no more.."</font>'
+		'And af it wasn''t already enough, he moves with the needle inside you in and out...'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Pleaase, no more... no more..."</font>'
 		'Stepping away he looks at his doing, at your poor tits.'
 		'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Yes, no more. No more needles. Now to the nails!"</font>'
 		step = 5
@@ -1477,7 +1477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"I think you need more motivation, slut."</font>'
 			'With that he takes your feet and starts to cane your sensitive feet, increasing the pace with every stroke!'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww!"</font>'
-			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"So slave, what do you say now? Should I Continue with this, or do you agree with my offer?"</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"So slave, what do you say now? Should I continue with this, or do you agree with my offer?"</font>'
 			act 'Say you agree': step = 4 & gt 'brothel', $this
 			act 'Say you still don''t agree': gt 'brothel', $this
 		else
@@ -1486,7 +1486,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/canefeet.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Think about it slut! Think about your poor feet right now!"</font>'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww! Oww!"</font>'
-			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"So slave, what do you say now? Should I Continue with this, or do you agree with my offer?"</font>'
+			'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"So slave, what do you say now? Should I continue with this, or do you agree with my offer?"</font>'
 			act 'Say you agree': step = 4 & gt 'brothel', $this
 			act 'Say you still don''t agree': gt 'brothel', $this
 		end
@@ -1506,8 +1506,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:whiptits':
 	'<b>Orgasm meter: <<orgasmMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/whiptits.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a whip and repeatedly punishes your tender titties..'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww! Not.. Any.. More.. Please... Oww.."</font> with each stroke you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
+	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a whip and repeatedly punishes your tender titties...'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww! Not... Any... More... Please... Oww..."</font> with each stroke you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'pain', 2, 'breasts', 'slap'
@@ -1522,8 +1522,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:canetits':
 	'<b>Orgasm meter: <<orgasmMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/canetits.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a wooden cane and repeatedly punishes your tender titties..'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww! Not.. Any.. More.. Please... Oww.."</font> with each stroke you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
+	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a wooden cane and repeatedly punishes your tender titties...'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww! Not... Any... More... Please... Oww..."</font> with each stroke you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'pain', 2, 'breasts', 'spank'
@@ -1539,7 +1539,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:pinchtits':
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pinchtits.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'As you hang with hands tied, you can just watch as the Client takes a wooden pins and pinches your sensitive nipples and areolas.'
-	'First it is just unpleasant but the repeated attacks on your tits make it worse with each attempt..'
+	'First it is just unpleasant but the repeated attacks on your tits make it worse with each attempt...'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oww! Oww! Nooo! Owww!"</font> with each pinch you try to beg him to stop it but it seems to arouse him even more.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1576,7 +1576,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:bindtits':
 	'First you do not know what is his purpose, but as soon as he circles your breasts with the ropes, you know it well.'
 	'He ties the strings around your tits very tight, making them even more sensitive and as an addition turning more purple with each minute.'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Not so tight Master please!"</font>'
-	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Shut up slut!"</font> he obviously wants you to suffer..'
+	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Shut up slut!"</font> he obviously wants you to suffer...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'pain', 3, 'breasts', 'bind'
@@ -1629,7 +1629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:hangbyneck':
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/hangbyneck.jpg"></center>'
 	'First he bounds your hands behind the back.'
-	'As you stand there, you are getting more nervous about what''s he going to do with you..'
+	'As you stand there, you are getting more nervous about what''s he going to do with you...'
 	'The Client comes with another rope, attaching it to already prepared hook hanging from the ceiling.'
 	'To your horror he snaps the rope around your neck as if he''s going to hang you dead!'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
@@ -1647,10 +1647,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:hangbytits':
 	'<b>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/hangbytits.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'Client attaches another rope to your already bound tits, using a pulley attached to the ceiling.'
-	'You start to shake in the moment you connect the ropes attached to your breasts and the pulley above you..'
+	'You start to shake in the moment you connect the ropes attached to your breasts and the pulley above you...'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"No Master, you can''t be serious!! You will tear the off! It is against the rules, stop it!</font> you desperately try to avoid whats coming.'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"NO, it''s not against the rules. They won''t tear off, you''ll see!"</font> with those words he starts to pull the rope up, leveling you from the ground just by your tits.'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"AYYYEEEEEEEEEEEE!</font> you yell more from horror than actual pain, as you slowly realize..'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"AYYYEEEEEEEEEEEE!</font> you yell more from horror than actual pain, as you slowly realize...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'pain', 3, 'breasts', 'bind'
@@ -1773,7 +1773,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:electrocuteAssMax':
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'maso', 'bound'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwchhh! AAARHHHGHHGHGH!!!"</font> You are unable to even get out a senseless moan anymore..'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwchhh! AAARHHHGHHGHGH!!!"</font> You are unable to even get out a senseless moan anymore...'
 	'<font color=#'+$mas_font+'>"Now this is what I call a barbecue party!"</font>'
 
 	act 'Cry that you hate it and want him to stop':gt 'brothel', 'dislike'
@@ -1796,7 +1796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:shockAnus':
 	'You have obviously annoyed the Client by what you did.'
 	'He takes a long rod: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now where''s the fucking button!"</font>'
 	'A shiver runs through your spine and soon you know why! He sticks the rod in your anus, giving you an electrocuting your sensitive hole!"'
-	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!"</font> Tears run out of your eyes in pain and terror..'
+	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!"</font> Tears run out of your eyes in pain and terror...'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Don''t do it again slut! Or this will be halfway in your anus!"</font>'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'brothel', $sessionB
@@ -1856,7 +1856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:end':
 			recPlugCh = rand(0,100)
 			step = 2
 		if analplugIN = 1 and recPlugCh < prob_recPlugCh:
-			'Then he notices the anal plug that is still well inside your anus. He gigles aloud but says not a word.. this is not good..'
+			'Then he notices the anal plug that is still well inside your anus. He gigles aloud but says not a word... this is not good...'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pullplugfromass.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'With one hard pull he rips the plug out of your anus, causing your already weared anus additional pain!'
 			'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Ouuuuchhhhh! You moron, you didn''t even pay for this!"</font>'
@@ -1866,7 +1866,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:end':
 			act 'Yell at him to untie you': gt 'brothel', $this
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/receptionistgaze.jpg"></center>'
-			'You can read obvious disgust from his face. You rather not try to guess what he thinks about you.. The feel of his gaze on your bare body is frightening you even more than you already are..'
+			'You can read obvious disgust from his face. You rather not try to guess what he thinks about you... The feel of his gaze on your bare body is frightening you even more than you already are...'
 			act 'Beg him to finally untie you': gt 'brothel', $this
 		end
 	elseif step = 2:
@@ -1880,10 +1880,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:end':
 			act 'Leave': gt 'brothel', 'brothel:section1:girlroom'
 		end
 	elseif step = 3:
-		'As you try to get up, suddenly you realize the massive plug still deep in your anus..'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(I have to take it out..)</font>'
+		'As you try to get up, suddenly you realize the massive plug still deep in your anus...'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(I have to take it out...)</font>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/pullplugfromassyourself.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>Oww.. Oww.. Owwwch!</font> with loud wet "plop" the plug finally goes out!'
+		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>Oww... Oww... Owwwch!</font> with loud wet "plop" the plug finally goes out!'
 		step = 0
 		analplugIN = 0
 		gs 'pain', 4, 'asshole', 'stretch'

+ 2 - 2
locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 						if npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 0 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] <= 0:
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips "I didn''t know you had milk in your breasts. It tastes good!"'
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 0 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] >= 1:
-							'During writing Kolka licks his lips "Wow ... I didn''t know you had milk in your breasts... and it tastes familiar..."'
+							'During writing Kolka licks his lips "Wow... I didn''t know you had milk in your breasts... and it tastes familiar..."'
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] >= 1:
 							'During writing Kolka licks his lips and adds "Your milk tastes way better from the source...".'
 						elseif npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] = 1 and npc_tasted_sveta_milk['A34'] <= 0:
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 							'"It''s okay... It felt kind of good to be honest..." you admit with some embarrassment. "Just... ask next time? Please?"'
 							'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says, writing some things down in his notebook.'
 							if kid <= 0 and npc_know_sveta_lact['A34'] <= 0:
-								'Kolka looks up for short "Wait ... haven''t you said only pregnant women have milk?'
+								'Kolka looks up for short "Wait... haven''t you said only pregnant women have milk?'
 								'You blush a bit "I also said, that it can happen under other circumstances...'
 							end
 							'You sigh again. Taking a look in the textbook, it says the next part of the homework is about the external female organs: the vulva. You slyly smile to yourself.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -1972,7 +1972,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_swallow':
 						'You gasp in mock indignation. "Kolka! How dare you! I have never been anything other than ladylike! How could you call your beloved sister a slut?"'
 						'"Probably because she loves the taste of cum," he snickers at you while you rinse your hair one last time.'
 						'"Have you considered maybe it''s just yours?" you ask, looking over your shoulder.'
-						'"A cumslut is still a cumslut, even if its only for one kind."'
+						'"A cumslut is still a cumslut, even if it''s only for one kind."'
 						'You roll your eyes. He''s being a punk but you can''t find the anger to be annoyed with him. He does have a bit of a point after all.'
 						act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
 					end

+ 6 - 6
locations/budgetclothes.qsrc

@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'office':
 
 		:loopoffice
 			if gm_office[i] = 0:
-				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'office', i
+				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_office', i
 				gs 'clothing_QV', 'shop_filter'
 
 				if clothingfilter['quality'] = 0 or clothingfilter['qualitycheck'] = CloQuality:
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'officeclo':
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'office'
 	end
 
-	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'office',i, 2000
+	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'gm_office',i, 2000
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'uniform':
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uniform':
 
 		:loopuniform
 			if gm_uniform[i] = 0:
-				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'uniform', i
+				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_uniform', i
 				gs 'clothing_QV', 'shop_filter'
 
 				if clothingfilter['quality'] = 0 or clothingfilter['qualitycheck'] = CloQuality:
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uniformclo':
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'uniform'
 	end
 
-	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'uniform',i, 2000
+	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'gm_uniform',i, 2000
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 
 		:loopschool
 			if gm_school[i] = 0:
-				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'school', i
+				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_school', i
 				gs 'clothing_QV', 'shop_filter'
 
 				if clothingfilter['quality'] = 0 or clothingfilter['qualitycheck'] = CloQuality:
@@ -373,7 +373,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'schoolclo':
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'school'
 	end
 
-	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'school',i, 1500
+	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_item', 'shop', 'gm_school',i, 1500
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shoes':

+ 3 - 3
locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos7':
 		bumtolik = 8
 		'You calmly carried the plates on the table. Yet because of one of the tables you have not addressed sassy tone:'
 		'- Wow, look what the buffer! They are what size, beauty?'
-		'- What !? But how ... Uh ... I do not mind your business! - You blurt.'
+		'- What !? But how... Uh... I do not mind your business! - You blurt.'
 	end
 	act 'Finish':gt 'buklinik', 'olga2'
 end
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 														'You took from her bag a paper napkin and gently wiped his penis and stomach.'
 														'Can you tell me what parts of your body were most sensitive to touch? asked you.'
 														'- I was very pleased when you touched the legs and face, but honestly, every touch excited me.'
-														'Misha asked if he could kiss my Breasts..'
+														'Misha asked if he could kiss my Breasts...'
 														act'Give your chest':
 															cls
 															pcs_horny += 5
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/mercyclinic/misha.jpg" ></center>'
 		'- Of course! - he said immediately
 		Michael seemed less nervous than the first time, and indeed you too. The tasks that stood in front of you, and the problems had to fight, - all this appeared before you in a clearer light. You had to help Michael to lose their virginity and prepare it for a happy sex life with a future partner.
-		But still you had doubts that in the situation of Michael''s possible long-term relationship, but your classes could give him confidence in case such a possibility still exists that..
+		But still you had doubts that in the situation of Michael''s possible long-term relationship, but your classes could give him confidence in case such a possibility still exists that...
 		You talked a little bit about our last visit. Michael said that the same thing was experienced before you go to College: in his head thousands of circumstances that prevented him from doing so, but he still did and glad that she decided.
 		Then he announced that today wants to try something new..
 		- I want to do something that makes you happy.

+ 2 - 2
locations/burger.qsrc

@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boss':
 		if BurgerQW['Secretary'] = 2:
 			if week < 6 and hour < 10:'Anatoly Borisovich looks at you sternly, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re fired. Go away, we''re done, I love my wife more than you."'
 		elseif BurgerQW['Secretary'] = 1:
-			if week < 6 and hour < 10 and $clothingworntype = 'office':
+			if week < 6 and hour < 10 and $clothingworntype = 'gm_office':
 				act 'Work':gt 'burgerWork', 'start'
 
 				act 'Resign':
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boss':
 					gt 'burger', 'start'
 				end
 
-			elseif week < 6 and hour < 10 and $clothingworntype ! 'office':
+			elseif week < 6 and hour < 10 and $clothingworntype ! 'gm_office':
 				'Anatoly Borisovich looks at you sternly, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, why aren''t you dressed properly? Go home and come back tomorrow dressed appropriately, you''re not working today!"'
 			end
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/changingroom.qsrc

@@ -69,14 +69,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_swim_item':
 	FUNC('$clothing_name', $ARGS[1], ARGS[2])
 
 	$RESULT = '(strength '
-	dynamic '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[1]>>H[<<ARGS[2]>>]'
+	dynamic '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[1]>>_h[<<ARGS[2]>>]'
 	$RESULT += ')'
 	'<<$RESULT>>'
 
 	act 'Return':gt 'changingroom', 'view_swim_list'
 	
 	!! if the clothing is worn out
-	if dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>H[<<ARGS[2]>>]') <= 0:
+	if dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>_h[<<ARGS[2]>>]') <= 0:
 		'This item is worn and is not suitable for further wear.'
 		act 'Throw it away':
 			dynamic '<<$ARGS[1]>>[<<ARGS[2]>>] = 0'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_center.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ else
 	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The metro is closed and will reopen at 4:00''">the metro</a>'
 end
 
-'You have easy access to the <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gs ''city_train'', ''start''">train station</a> and <<$desc_txt1>> is only a short walk from there. Both connect you quickly to other parts of St Petersburg and the subway is great if you are tight on cash. If you can''t afford either, the <a href="exec:minut += 35 & gt ''city_park'', ''start''">central park</a> is a thirty minute walk from here and provides a more scenic route to the other city districts.'
+'You have easy access to the <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gs ''city_train'', ''start''">train station</a> and <<$desc_txt1>> is only a short walk from there. Both connect you quickly to other parts of St. Petersburg and the subway is great if you are tight on cash. If you can''t afford either, the <a href="exec:minut += 35 & gt ''city_park'', ''start''">central park</a> is a thirty minute walk from here and provides a more scenic route to the other city districts.'
 *nl
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:
 	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a>'

+ 10 - 10
locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 	act 'See the doctor':
 		*clr & cla
 
-		if ninelmet = 0:'A pretty young girl, in a light robe, sits at the desk. The robe is unbuttoned so that it does not hide her small but beautiful breasts. "Hello My name is Ninel Pavlovna, I am replacing your local physician" she said, scrutinizing you.'
+		if ninelmet = 0:'A pretty young girl, in a light robe, sits at the desk. The robe is unbuttoned so that it does not hide her small but beautiful breasts. "Hello, my name is Ninel Pavlovna, I am replacing your local physician" she said, scrutinizing you.'
 		if ninelmet = 1:'Ninel is sitting at her desk. She smiles at you and says, "Hello, dear."'
 
 		if pcs_horny < 30:
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 									'"Yes, my special magic is tantric. Heard of it?"'
 									'"No, I''ve never heard of..."'
 									'"It''s magic based on sensuality and sex. Roughly speaking, I can cast only when extremely aroused."'
-									'"So ..?"'
+									'"So...?"'
 									'"Basically, if we have sex, I can heal you. So, can I heal you?"'
 									'"Depends what you want in return."'
 									'"Nothing. Well, not exactly nothing, you see my gift has a pretty big drawback: I can only have orgasms when I conjure."'
@@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam18.jpg"></center>'
 											'With unnatural strength shes drives the dildo into your pussy.'
-											'You gasp in surprise at the rough treatment, how can someone with such soft hands...Suddenly she finds a perfect stroke and the initial pain turns to pleasure.'
+											'You gasp in surprise at the rough treatment, how can someone with such soft hands... Suddenly she finds a perfect stroke and the initial pain turns to pleasure.'
 											'Doctor keeps fucking you confidently, moaning with every jolt she seems to be enjoying it as much as you, and you are ecstatic. The unusual situation and Ninel''s skill quickly brings you to your peak.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian'
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 														'With trembling hands, you start to pull on your panties. Ninel already slipped her robe back on, only her flushed face betraying her apparent innocence.'
 														'"So... how do you feel?"'
 														'"Ooh... just perfect," you answer and only then realize how right you are. The sickness has disappeared, you are fully healthy and in good spirits. Even your mood has improved.'
-														'"Well, you see. It''s magic, baby. Mm-m ... You''re especially full of it, I don''t normally get so much pleasure. If you get sick again, please come and see me or phone me."'
+														'"Well, you see. It''s magic, baby. Mm-m... You''re especially full of it, I don''t normally get so much pleasure. If you get sick again, please come and see me or phone me."'
 														'"If you like, we could spend some time together, look for me in the clinic."'
 														'You promise to be sure to find her, clean up and leave.'
 
@@ -900,7 +900,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 5, 'sub', 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
 											
-						act 'Oh-h ..!':
+						act 'Oh-h...!':
 							*clr & cla
 							pcs_horny = 100
 							minut += 15
@@ -965,7 +965,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam09a.jpg"></center>'
 											'When she finishes, Ninel rises and slowly dresses, showing you her perky body. It''s unbelievable, and again excitement rises.'
 											'Ninel sees this and smiles.'
-											'"Oh, no. Enough is enough. But you come in another time for something else and we''ll have some fun.."'
+											'"Oh, no. Enough is enough. But you come in another time for something else and we''ll have some fun..."'
 											'You think to yourself that your next illness can''t come soon enough. You are healthy and satisfied, thanks to Ninel.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -1020,7 +1020,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel3':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/polsex03.jpg"></center>'
 					'You fall on the couch. Ninel knocks you on your side and continues. You drawl and loudly moan, from her chest too comes a deep and bestial growl.'
 					'"My God, you as well."'
-					'"I can not, it''s too much..!"'
+					'"I can not, it''s too much...!"'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 20, 'sub', 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1446,7 +1446,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_reception':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/milkbank/milk_reception.jpg"></center>'
 	'The woman at the reception looks at you annoyed and and stands up.'
-	'Nurse at the reception: Yes, yes ... go this way.'
+	'Nurse at the reception: Yes, yes... go this way.'
 	'She waves into a general direction down the hallway.'
 	'Nurse at the reception: There should be a sign on the door, it is only a small room.'
 	if lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] < 1: lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] = 1
@@ -1480,7 +1480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation_room':
 					'You are blushing a bit, knowing that your breasts feel a bit full today, and answer with a short nod.'
 				else
 					'Woman: Are you here for a donation?'
-					'You: Uhm ... Yes.'
+					'You: Uhm... Yes.'
 				end
 				'The woman nods happily and takes some papers and a pen out of her desk.'
 				'Woman: First of all, you have to sign this. Then we are going to take a sample from you.'
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation_room':
 					lact_ev['poli_pumptime'] = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk_time', 4, 50)
 					if lact_ev['poli_pumptime'] > 15:
 						'After 15 minutes, the woman detaches the pump, tilting her head a bit disappointed.'
-						'Woman: Hmmm ... this isn''t as much as we expected, but it should do.'
+						'Woman: Hmmm... this isn''t as much as we expected, but it should do.'
 						minut += 15
 						lact_ev['poli_milkedvolume'] = func('lact_lib','$get_breastmilk', 4, 15)
 					else

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_industrial.qsrc

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	'At the center of the industrial region is a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''city_industrial_train'', ''outside''">train station</a>.'
 
 	if week = 3 or hour < 16:
-		'The "Rabotnik" bar is here, but it seems to be closed. A sign by the door tells you that it''s open every day (except Wednesday) between 16:00 and midnight..'
+		'The "Rabotnik" bar is here, but it seems to be closed. A sign by the door tells you that it''s open every day (except Wednesday) between 16:00 and midnight...'
 	else
 		'The <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''qwBarPolet''">Bar "Rabotnik"</a> seems to be open.'
 	end

+ 2 - 2
locations/city_jorahouse.qsrc

@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ev14':
 		pcs_horny += 10 & 'You are not satisfied'
 	end
 
-	act '....':
+	act '...':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/jora/sex/klof14.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ev52':
 	'Jora hands you a dildo and says, "Insert this."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Insert Dildo':gt 'city_jorahouse', 'ev53'
+	act 'Insert dildo':gt 'city_jorahouse', 'ev53'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:

+ 3 - 3
locations/city_kafe.qsrc

@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 								'Still, you need these five hundred <b>₽</b>, so you take his cock in your hand and guide it straight into your mouth. The next five minutes, you carefully lick and suck it. Finally, the customer makes several short jerky movements with his hips and starts to pour hot cum into your mouth.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 								gs 'stat'
-								act '....':
+								act '...':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/cafe/sex/waitress_work_3_3.jpg"></center>'
 									'Filling your mouth to the brim, he takes his foot off the cash and you are finally able to pick it up.'
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 								gs 'stat'
 
-								act '....':
+								act '...':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrandcum.jpg"></center>'
 									'Finally the stimulation is too much for the guy. Hot sperm gets into your mouth and a little on your face. You and the Girl lick the dick until it''s nice and clean.'
@@ -612,7 +612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 				elseif kaferand = 8:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/public/ivrand5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Walking past the bar you see a girl squatting down, sucking some guys dick as he drinks beer ..'
+					'Walking past the bar you see a girl squatting down, sucking some guys dick as he drinks beer...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_kafe2.qsrc

@@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ira':
 					$irinaend = 'Going to the door she says goodbye to you and leaves.'
 				elseif npc_rel['A93'] >= 100 and IrinaQW >= 10 and IrinaSlut >= 2:
 					if Kavslut > 0:
-						$irinatalk = 'Ira, smiling, tells that she had long wanted to stop living like a nun and live freely and she thanks you for your help ..'
+						$irinatalk = 'Ira, smiling, tells that she had long wanted to stop living like a nun and live freely and she thanks you for your help...'
 					end
 
 					$irinaend = 'Standing at the door of her house Ira invites you to come to visit her.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/city_market.qsrc

@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 						'What are you wasting my time for? This type of clothing does not need to be resized.'
 					else
 						money -= 500
-						dynamic '<<$clothingworntype>>B[<<clothingwornnumber>>] = pcs_hips'
+						dynamic '<<$clothingworntype>>_b[<<clothingwornnumber>>] = pcs_hips'
 						'You undress and give the clothes you need adjusting to Jacob Solomonovich, it is fifteen minutes until your clothes and returned to you.'
 					end
 

+ 75 - 75
locations/clothing.qsrc

@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ $clothing_list_line = {
 	killvar 'clothing_temp'
 	gs 'clothing_attributes', $ARGS[1], ARGS[2]
 
-	if $ARGS[1] ! 'school' or ARGS[2] ! 6:
-		$RESULT += '<TD>' + dyneval '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[1]>>H[<<ARGS[2]>>]' + '</TD>'
+	if $ARGS[1] ! 'gm_school' or ARGS[2] ! 6:
+		$RESULT += '<TD>' + dyneval '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[1]>>_h[<<ARGS[2]>>]' + '</TD>'
 
 		if $ARGS[1] ! 'exercise' and $ARGS[1] ! 'coat' and CloStyle ! 5:
-			$RESULT += '<TD>' + dyneval '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[1]>>B[<<ARGS[2]>>]' + '</TD>'
+			$RESULT += '<TD>' + dyneval '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[1]>>_b[<<ARGS[2]>>]' + '</TD>'
 		else
 			$RESULT += '<TD></TD>'
 		end
@@ -57,10 +57,10 @@ $clothing_list_line = {
 	$RESULT += '<TD><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_item'', ''<<$ARGS[0]>>'', ''<<$ARGS[1]>>'', <<ARGS[2]>>">View</a>'
 
 	if $ARGS[0] ! 'sell' and $ARGS[0] ! 'resize':
-		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and $ARGS[1] = 'school' and ARGS[2] = 6:
+		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and $ARGS[1] = 'gm_school' and ARGS[2] = 6:
 			$RESULT += ' <a href="exec:gs ''clothing'', ''wear'', ''<<$ARGS[1]>>'', <<ARGS[2]>> & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Wear</a></TD>'
-		elseif ($ARGS[1] ! 'coat' and $ARGS[1] ! 'swimwear' and $ARGS[1] ! 'beach') and dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>H[<<ARGS[2]>>]') > 0:
-			if $ARGS[1] ! 'exercise' and CloStyle ! 5 and (dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>B[<<ARGS[2]>>]') < (pcs_hips - 8) or dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>B[<<ARGS[2]>>]') > (pcs_hips + 8)) or (ARRPOS('$CloLosTyp', $ARGS[1]) ! -1 and ARRPOS('CloLosNum',ARGS[2]) ! -1):
+		elseif ($ARGS[1] ! 'coat' and $ARGS[1] ! 'swimwear' and $ARGS[1] ! 'beach') and dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>_h[<<ARGS[2]>>]') > 0:
+			if $ARGS[1] ! 'exercise' and CloStyle ! 5 and (dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>_b[<<ARGS[2]>>]') < (pcs_hips - 8) or dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[1]>>_b[<<ARGS[2]>>]') > (pcs_hips + 8)) or (ARRPOS('$CloLosTyp', $ARGS[1]) ! -1 and ARRPOS('CloLosNum',ARGS[2]) ! -1):
 				$RESULT += '</TD>'
 			else
 				$RESULT += ' <a href="exec:gs ''clothing'', ''wear'', ''<<$ARGS[1]>>'', <<ARGS[2]>> & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Wear</a></TD>'
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ $clothing_list_line = {
 		$RESULT += '<TD>'
 		if cloc ! 1:$RESULT += ' <a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''dest1'', ''<<$ARGS[0]>>'', ''<<$ARGS[1]>>'', <<ARGS[2]>> ">Storage</a><BR>'
 		if cloc ! 0:$RESULT += ' <a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''dest0'', ''<<$ARGS[0]>>'', ''<<$ARGS[1]>>'', <<ARGS[2]>> ">Wardrobe</a><BR>'
-		if $ARGS[1] ! 'school' or ARGS[2] ! 6:
+		if $ARGS[1] ! 'gm_school' or ARGS[2] ! 6:
 			if cloc ! 2:$RESULT += ' <a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''dest2'', ''<<$ARGS[0]>>'', ''<<$ARGS[1]>>'', <<ARGS[2]>> ">Unwanted</a>'
 		end
 		$RESULT += '</TD>'
@@ -84,19 +84,19 @@ $clothing_list_line = {
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dest0':
 	*clr
-	dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>S[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 0'
+	dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>_s[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 0'
 	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dest1':
 	*clr
-	dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>S[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
+	dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>_s[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
 	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dest2':
 	*clr
-	dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>S[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 2'
+	dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>_s[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 2'
 	gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
 end
 
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Choose an item to sell</font></b></center></h3>'
 	end
 
-	if $ARGS[2] = 'gm' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office' or $ARGS[2] = 'school' or $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
+	if $ARGS[2] = 'gm' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
 		!'<center><b><font color="maroon">Viewing clothes from G&M</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/gm.png"></center>'
 	elseif $ARGS[2] = 'kats':
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 
 		if ARRSIZE('flamingos_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('flamingos_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''flamingos'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''flamingos''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/flamingos/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('coco_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''coco'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/city/residential/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('coco_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('coco_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''coco'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''coco''"><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/coco/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 		if ARRSIZE('fashionista') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''fashionista'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''fashionista''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 
 		if ARRSIZE('dolls_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('dolls_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''dolls'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''dolls''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''bomba'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/oldtown/tsar/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''bomba'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/oldtown/bomba/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 		if ARRSIZE('exercise') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''sports'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''sports''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/sports.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -232,15 +232,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 		end
 
 		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm':
-			if ARRSIZE('gm_outfits') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_outfits'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_outfits''">Regular G&M clothing</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('gm_outfits') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_outfits'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_outfits''">G&M Outfits</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('gm_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_dress'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_dress''">Regular G&M clothing</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('gm_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_dress'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_dress''">G&M Dresses</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''office'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''office''">Office wear</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('gm_office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_office'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_office''">Office wear</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''school'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''school''">School uniforms</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('gm_school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_school'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_school''">School uniforms</a></center>'
 
-			if ARRSIZE('uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''uniform'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
+			if ARRSIZE('gm_uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:$ward_list_store = ''gm_uniform'' & gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''<<$ward_list_page>>'', ''gm_uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 		end
@@ -269,41 +269,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'office':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopoffice
-				if gm_office[i] = 1 and gm_office_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'office' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'office', i)
+				if gm_office[i] = 1 and gm_office_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_office' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_office', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('office'):jump 'loopoffice'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_office'):jump 'loopoffice'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'school':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 
-			if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and gm_school_s[6] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'school' or clothingwornnumber ! 6):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'school', 6)
+			if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and gm_school_s[6] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_school' or clothingwornnumber ! 6):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_school', 6)
 
 			i = 1
 			:loopschool
-				if gm_school[i] = 1 and gm_school_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'school' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'school', i)
+				if gm_school[i] = 1 and gm_school_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_school' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_school', i)
 				i += 1
 				if i = 6: i = 7
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('school'):jump 'loopschool'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_school'):jump 'loopschool'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
 		end
 
-		if $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
+		if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopuniform
-				if gm_uniform[i] = 1 and gm_uniform_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'uniform' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'uniform', i)
+				if gm_uniform[i] = 1 and gm_uniform_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'gm_uniform' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'gm_uniform', i)
 				i += 1
-			if i <= ARRSIZE('uniform'):jump 'loopuniform'
+			if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_uniform'):jump 'loopuniform'
 
 			act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'clothwidth'
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopmisc_outfits
-				if misc_outfits[i] = 1 and misc_outfitsS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'misc_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'misc_outfits', i)
+				if misc_outfits[i] = 1 and misc_outfits_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'misc_outfits' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'misc_outfits', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('misc_outfits'):jump 'loopmisc_outfits'
 
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopmoncheri
-				if moncheri[i] = 1 and moncheriS[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'moncheri' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'moncheri', i)
+				if moncheri[i] = 1 and moncheri_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'moncheri' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'moncheri', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('moncheri'):jump 'loopmoncheri'
 
@@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_list':
 			$ward_list_store = $ARGS[2]
 			i = 1
 			:loopfancy_burlesque
-				if fancy_burlesque[i] = 1 and burlesque_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fancy_burlesque' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fancy_burlesque', i)
+				if fancy_burlesque[i] = 1 and fancy_burlesque_s[i] = cloc and ($clothingworntype ! 'fancy_burlesque' or clothingwornnumber ! i):*P dyneval($clothing_list_line, $ARGS[1], 'fancy_burlesque', i)
 				i += 1
 			if i <= ARRSIZE('fancy_burlesque'):jump 'loopfancy_burlesque'
 
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 		if CloInhibit + 10 > pcs_inhib and CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib: 'You find this outfit more revealing than you are completely comfortable with but that makes it quite exciting too.'
 	end
 
-	if $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
+	if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
 		if CloStyle2 = 1:
 			'This outfit is considered to be a maid uniform.'
 		elseif CloStyle2 = 3:
@@ -580,12 +580,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 		end
 	end
 
-	if $ARGS[1] ! 'shop' and ($ARGS[2] ! 'school' or ARGS[3] ! 6):
+	if $ARGS[1] ! 'shop' and ($ARGS[2] ! 'gm_school' or ARGS[3] ! 6):
 		$RESULT = '(strength '
-		dynamic '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[2]>>H[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
+		dynamic '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[2]>>_h[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
 		if $ARGS[2] ! 'exercise' and $ARGS[2] ! 'coat' and CloStyle ! 5:
 			$RESULT += ', hip size '
-			dynamic '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[2]>>B[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
+			dynamic '$RESULT += <<$ARGS[2]>>_b[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
 		end
 		$RESULT += ')'
 		'<<$RESULT>>'
@@ -617,25 +617,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 						h += (3 * CloQuality)
 						money -= price
 						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
-						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
+						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office':
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfits':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'moncheri':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'fetish' or $ARGS[2] = 'exhibit' or $ARGS[2] = 'fancy_burlesque':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 35 + <<h>>'
-						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'school' or $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 120 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 35 + <<h>>'
+						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 120 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'exercise':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 100 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 100 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'coat':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 250 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 250 + <<h>>'
 						else
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 60 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 60 + <<h>>'
 						end
-						dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'B[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
-						dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'S[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 0'
+						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_b[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
+						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_s[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 0'
 						gs 'stat'
 						gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					end
@@ -648,25 +648,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 						h += (3 * CloQuality)
 						karta -= price
 						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 1'
-						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'office':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
+						if $ARGS[2] = 'gm_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_office':
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 70 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'cats_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'cats_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'flamingos_outfits' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_dress' or $ARGS[2] = 'coco_outfits':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 90 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'moncheri':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'
-						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'fetish' or $ARGS[2] = 'exhibit' or $ARGS[2] = 'burlesque':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 35 + <<h>>'
-						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'school' or $ARGS[2] = 'uniform':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 120 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 15 + <<h>>'
+						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'fetish' or $ARGS[2] = 'exhibit' or $ARGS[2] = 'fancy_burlesque':
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 35 + <<h>>'
+						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'gm_school' or $ARGS[2] = 'gm_uniform':
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 120 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'exercise':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 100 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 100 + <<h>>'
 						elseif $ARGS[2] = 'coat':
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 250 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 250 + <<h>>'
 						else
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 60 + <<h>>'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 60 + <<h>>'
 						end
-						dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'B[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
-						dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'S[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 0'
+						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_b[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
+						dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_s[<<ARGS[3]>>] = 0'
 						gs 'stat'
 						gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					end
@@ -676,9 +676,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'wardrobe':
 		act 'Return':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
 
-		if $ARGS[2] ! 'school' or ARGS[3] ! 6:
+		if $ARGS[2] ! 'gm_school' or ARGS[3] ! 6:
 			!! if the clothing is worn out
-			if dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>H[<<ARGS[3]>>]') <= 0:
+			if dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>_h[<<ARGS[3]>>]') <= 0:
 				'This item is worn and is not suitable for further wear.'
 				if pcs_sewng >= 60 and tkan > 0:
 					cla
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 							cla
 							tkan -= 1
 							minut += 30
-							dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'H[<<ARGS[3]>>] += 30'
+							dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_h[<<ARGS[3]>>] += 30'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/sewing/fix' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 							'You spend 30 minutes fixing the outfit.'
 							act 'Return':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 			!! if the clothing is a type that checks for hip size
 			if $ARGS[2] ! 'exercise' and $ARGS[2] ! 'coat' and CloStyle ! 5:
 				!! if the hipsize is too far from your hipsize
-				dynamic 'RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>B[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
+				dynamic 'RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>_b[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
 				if RESULT < pcs_hips - 8 or RESULT > pcs_hips + 8:
 					if RESULT < pcs_hips:
 						'This item is too small for you to wear.'
@@ -736,13 +736,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 							if $loc_arg = 'tailor':
 								minut += 15
 								money -= 500
-								dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'B[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
+								dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_b[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
 								*nl
 								'You hand the clothing over to the tailor who takes it into the back. Fifteen minutes later, he presents your clothing back to you, adjusted to fit you perfectly.'
 							else
 								tkan -= 1
 								minut += 30
-								dynamic $ARGS[2] + 'B[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
+								dynamic $ARGS[2] + '_b[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
 								'You spend 30 minutes resizing the outfit.'
 							end
 							act 'Return':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
@@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 		act 'Keep item':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
 
 		!! value is based on the strength remaining
-		dynamic 'RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>H[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
+		dynamic 'RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>_h[<<ARGS[3]>>]'
 		if RESULT > 45:
 			'You can sell this item for 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 			act 'Sell':
@@ -816,11 +816,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'view_clothing_item':
 		act 'Leave item alone':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', '<<$ward_list_page>>', '<<$ward_list_store>>'
 
 		if $ARGS[2] ! 'exercise' and $ARGS[2] ! 'coat' and CloStyle ! 5:
-			if dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>B[<<ARGS[3]>>]') ! pcs_hips and money >= 500:
+			if dyneval('RESULT = <<$ARGS[2]>>_b[<<ARGS[3]>>]') ! pcs_hips and money >= 500:
 				'You can have this resized for 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 				act 'Resize':
 					money -= 500
-					dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>B[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
+					dynamic '<<$ARGS[2]>>_b[<<ARGS[3]>>] = pcs_hips'
 					gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', 'resize'
 				end
 			end
@@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'recover_lost_clothes':
 	if cloAction = 1:
 		gs 'clothing', 'wear', $clothType, clothNumber
 	elseif cloAction = 2 :
-		dynamic $clothType + 'S[<<clothNumber>>] = 1'
+		dynamic $clothType + '_s[<<clothNumber>>] = 1'
 	end
 
 	KILLVAR '$cloLoc'
@@ -943,11 +943,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wear':
 	$clothingworntype = $ARGS[1]
 	clothingwornnumber = ARGS[2]
 
-	dynamic $ARGS[1] + 'W[<<ARGS[2]>>] = 1'
+	dynamic $ARGS[1] + '_w[<<ARGS[2]>>] = 1'
 
 	gs 'clothing_attributes', $ARGS[1], ARGS[2]
 
-	dynamic '<<$ARGS[1]>>S[<<ARGS[2]>>] = 0'
+	dynamic '<<$ARGS[1]>>_s[<<ARGS[2]>>] = 0'
 
 	if CloStyle2 = 4:
 		$schbrand = $clothingworntype
@@ -1073,9 +1073,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swamp_clothes':
 	if ARGS[1] = 1:
 	!hessian clothing to owned, sets size and equipped.
 		misc_outfits[1] = 1
-		misc_outfitsS[1] = 0
-		misc_outfitsH[1] = 100
-		misc_outfitsB[1] = pcs_hips
+		misc_outfits_s[1] = 0
+		misc_outfits_h[1] = 100
+		misc_outfits_b[1] = pcs_hips
 		swamp_clothes = 1
 		gs 'clothing', 'wear', 'misc_outfits', 1
 	end

+ 24 - 24
locations/clothing_QV.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 	'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''gm''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/gm.png"></a></center>'
 
-	if ARRSIZE('school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''school''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/s.uniform2.png"></a></center>'
+	if ARRSIZE('gm_school') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''gm_school''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/s.uniform2.png"></a></center>'
  
 	if ARRSIZE('cats_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('cats_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''kats''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pussycat.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 	if ARRSIZE('dolls_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('dolls_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''dolls''"><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></a></center>'
 
-	if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/old town/bomba/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
+	if ARRSIZE('bomba_outfits') > 0 or ARRSIZE('bomba_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''bomba''"><img src="images/locations/oldtown/bomba/shop_name.png"></a></center>'
 
 	if ARRSIZE('exercise') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''sports''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/sports.png"></a></center>'
 
@@ -61,9 +61,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 		if ARRSIZE('gm_dress') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''gm_dress''">G&M dresses</a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''gm_office''">Office wear</a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('gm_office') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''gm_office''">Office wear</a></center>'
 
-		if ARRSIZE('uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''gm_uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
+		if ARRSIZE('gm_uniform') > 0:'<center><a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''list'', ''gm_uniform''">Work uniforms</a></center>'
 
 		act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing_QV', 'list'
 	end
@@ -142,13 +142,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		i = 1
 		:loopoffice
 		if gm_office[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'office', i
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_office', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if gm_office_s[i] = 0 and gm_office_h[i] > 0 and gm_office_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_office_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''office'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/5office/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if gm_office_s[i] = 0 and gm_office_h[i] > 0 and gm_office_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_office_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_office'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/5office/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('office'):jump 'loopoffice'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_office'):jump 'loopoffice'
 
 		act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing_QV', 'list'
 	end
@@ -167,18 +167,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		i = 1
 		:loopuniform
 		if gm_uniform[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'uniform', i
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_uniform', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if gm_uniform_s[i] = 0 and gm_uniform_h[i] > 0 and gm_uniform_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_uniform_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''uniform'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/10uniform/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if gm_uniform_s[i] = 0 and gm_uniform_h[i] > 0 and gm_uniform_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_uniform_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_uniform'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/10uniform/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('uniform'):jump 'loopuniform'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_uniform'):jump 'loopuniform'
 
 		act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing_QV', 'list'
 	end
 
-	if $ARGS[1] = 'school':
+	if $ARGS[1] = 'gm_school':
 		$ward_list_store = $ARGS[1]
 		*clr & cla
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Wardrobe</font></b></center></h3>'
@@ -190,19 +190,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		'<center>These are the school uniforms you own that are currently available for you to wear.</center><br>'
 		*nl
 
-		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and gm_school_s[6] = 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''school'', 6"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/6.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+		if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and gm_school_s[6] = 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_school'', 6"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/6.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopschool
 		if gm_school[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'school', i
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'gm_school', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if gm_school_s[i] = 0 and gm_school_h[i] > 0 and gm_school_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_school_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''school'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if gm_school_s[i] = 0 and gm_school_h[i] > 0 and gm_school_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and gm_school_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''gm_school'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/clothing/6school/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
 		if i = 6: i = 7
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('school'):jump 'loopschool'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('gm_school'):jump 'loopschool'
 
 		act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing_QV', 'list'
 	end
@@ -430,14 +430,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 
 		i = 1
 		:loopburlesque
-		if burlesque[i] = 1:
-			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'burlesque', i
+		if fancy_burlesque[i] = 1:
+			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'fancy_burlesque', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
-				if burlesque_s[i] = 0 and burlesque_h[i] > 0 and burlesque_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and burlesque_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''burlesque'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fancy/burlesque/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+				if fancy_burlesque_s[i] = 0 and fancy_burlesque_h[i] > 0 and fancy_burlesque_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and fancy_burlesque_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''fancy_burlesque'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/fancy/burlesque/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end
 		i += 1
-		if i <= ARRSIZE('burlesque'):jump 'loopburlesque'
+		if i <= ARRSIZE('fancy_burlesque'):jump 'loopburlesque'
 		act 'Return': killvar '$ward_list_store' & gt 'clothing_QV', 'list'
 	end
 
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 		*clr & cla
 		$ward_list_store = $ARGS[1]
 		'<h3><center><b><font color="maroon">Wardrobe</font></b></center></h3>'
-		'<center><img src="images/locations/old town/bomba/shop_name.png"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/oldtown/bomba/shop_name.png"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<center><table border=1><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''wardrobe'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to wardrobe list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''store'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to stored clothing list</a></TH><TH><a href="exec:gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_list'', ''unwanted'', ''<<$ward_list_store>>''">Switch to unwanted clothing list</a></TH></table></center>'
 		*nl
@@ -527,9 +527,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'bomba_outfits', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if bomba_outfits_s[i] = 0 and bomba_outfits_h[i] > 0 and bomba_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_outfits_s[i] = 0 and bomba_outfits_h[i] > 0 and bomba_outfits_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_outfits_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/goth_outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if bomba_outfits_s[i] = 0 and bomba_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/outfit/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_outfits_s[i] = 0 and bomba_outfits_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_outfits'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/goth_outfits/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -542,9 +542,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'list':
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'bomba_dress', i
 			if CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if CloStyle ! 5:
-					if bomba_dress_s[i] = 0 and bomba_dress_h[i] > 0 and bomba_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_dress_s[i] = 0 and bomba_dress_h[i] > 0 and bomba_dress_b[i] >= (pcs_hips - 8) and bomba_dress_b[i] <= (pcs_hips + 8):*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/goth_dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				else
-					if bomba_dress_s[i] = 0 and bomba_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
+					if bomba_dress_s[i] = 0 and bomba_dress_h[i] > 0:*p '<a href="exec:gt ''clothing_QV'', ''change'', ''bomba_dress'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/items/bomba/goth_dress/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 3 - 3
locations/clothing_attributes.qsrc

@@ -111,9 +111,9 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fashionista':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_fashionista', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'moncheri':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_moncheri', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'office':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_office':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_office', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'school':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_school':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_school', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exercise':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_exercise', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'fetish':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_fetish', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'exhibit':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_exhibit', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
-elseif $ARGS[0] = 'uniform':
+elseif $ARGS[0] = 'gm_uniform':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_uniform', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])
 elseif $ARGS[0] = 'coat':
 	*P FUNC('$attributes_coat', $ARGS[0], ARGS[1])

+ 4 - 4
locations/club.qsrc

@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 		end
 	else
 		menu_off = 1
-		'Its getting late and the music stops, looks like it might be time to go home.'
+		'It''s getting late and the music stops, looks like it might be time to go home.'
 		act 'Leave the dance floor': gt 'club', 'inside'
 	end	
 end
@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar0':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/bar1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Her flirting works on you. You move closer to her and begin to kiss her. At first, it feels weird for you, kissing a random woman that is, but it doesn''t take long for the kissing to move for awkward to passionately..'
+		'Her flirting works on you. You move closer to her and begin to kiss her. At first, it feels weird for you, kissing a random woman that is, but it doesn''t take long for the kissing to move for awkward to passionately...'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -901,7 +901,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bar0':
 					pcs_horny = 0
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/sex/bar4.jpg"></center>'
 					'You stand up and she goes down on you, starting to lick your flower and sticking two fingers into your now wet cunt. She''s very skilled with her tongue and it takes her only minutes to make you cum.'
-					'You''re blissfully smiling at her. "Thank you.", you say to her..'
+					'You''re blissfully smiling at her. "Thank you.", you say to her...'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
@@ -1251,7 +1251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 		end
 	elseif clubr = 1:
 		'"OK <<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you to go around the club getting people to try and hopefully switch to these spirits. You can''t go wrong here, just smile and give out free drinks."'
-		'"No need to hold back with it, the suppliers are paying and if you''re curious and want to try it, don''t its horrible. I''ll see you back here in an hour."'
+		'"No need to hold back with it, the suppliers are paying and if you''re curious and want to try it, don''t it''s horrible. I''ll see you back here in an hour."'
 		act 'Get to work':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60

+ 2 - 2
locations/cuminsidereact.qsrc

@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ if eff_contra ! 3:
 		end
 	elseif tmp = 2:
 		if $risk_boy ! '':
-			'You think about the load of sperm <<$risk_boy>> just pumped into your unprotected vagina ... and right now he has no clue.'
+			'You think about the load of sperm <<$risk_boy>> just pumped into your unprotected vagina... and right now he has no clue.'
 		else
-			'You think about the load of sperm swimming in your unprotected vagina ... and right now he has no clue.'
+			'You think about the load of sperm swimming in your unprotected vagina... and right now he has no clue.'
 		end
 	else
 		if $risk_boy ! '':

+ 1 - 1
locations/dachain.qsrc

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ if $args[0] = '':
 	if komp = 1:'Your <a href="exec: gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the table.'
 	*nl
 	
-	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 11:'Kopashatsya working in the garden, hmm ... maybe sometime <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos10''">motivate</a> for them to work quicker and smarter.'
+	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 11:'Kopashatsya working in the garden, hmm... maybe sometime <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos10''">motivate</a> for them to work quicker and smarter.'
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 12:'Leave in <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos11''">garden in lingerie and robe.</a>'
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and etoexhib = 13 and temp ! daystart:'I wonder how to <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos12''">garden</a>'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/dateF.qsrc

@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bartalk':
 						'"Damn <<$pcs_nickname>> you really know how to move. I bet all that dancing made you even thirstier."'
 						'You nod and she quickly gets up and gets more drinks.'
 						'You chug the drink down, quenching some of the thirst. "Look at you go. I love a girl that can keep a drink down."'
-						'By now you''re feel quite tipsy, feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
+						'By now you''re feeling quite tipsy and feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at the feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
 						act 'Excuse yourself':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 10

+ 1 - 1
locations/dateM.qsrc

@@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bartalk':
 						'"Damn <<$pcs_nickname>> you really know how to move. I bet all that dancing made you even thirstier."'
 						'You nod and he quickly gets up and gets more drinks.'
 						'You chug the drink down, quenching some of the thirst. "Look at you go. I love a girl that can keep a drink down."'
-						'By now you''re feel quite tipsy, feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
+						'By now you''re feeling quite tipsy and feeling your inhibitions fading away. You panic a little at the feeling and feel you must get a breather before you lose control.'
 						act 'Excuse yourself':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 10

+ 7 - 7
locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackmail':
 		'After avoiding Dimka for more than a week, you finally show up at his home. You enter his room nervously, but he actually seems happy and relaxed.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, it is so good to see you. How have you been?" Dimka says jovially as he ushers you into his room and closes the door behind you. You start to relax, thinking that everything will be fine when he suddenly grabs your throat from behind.'
 		'"I told you that you belong to me and you fucking decide to avoid me, you bitch!" he snarls as he grabs your hair with his free hand and bends your neck painfully sideways, "You piece of trash. I should snap your neck right now."'
-		'His voice changes, suddenly becoming pensive and quiet, "I could, you know, just add a little more pressure and, Snap! No more little <<$pcs_nickname>>. Fighting fear and suffocation you plead, "No, please Dimka, I.." '
+		'His voice changes, suddenly becoming pensive and quiet, "I could, you know, just add a little more pressure and, Snap! No more little <<$pcs_nickname>>. Fighting fear and suffocation you plead, "No, please Dimka, I..." '
 		'His hand on your throat tightens and you see spots in front of your eyes. Without warning, he lets go and throws you to the floor. As you lay there gasping for breath, he comes to stand over you. You recoil frightened.'
 		'"I missed you, <<$pcs_nickname>>, you need to come see me more often." Dimka says gently as he helps you to your feet, "Now let''s forget all this unpleasantness, shall we?"'
 		'You nod your agreement and Dimka is all smiles again, as he undresses you, you can''t stop shaking in fear.'
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse2':
 	if maxdradrug = 2: maxdradrug = 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/car.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka binds and ties your knees with a pair of little carts, tie you up with rope, attach a steering wheel to your back, covers your face in blue clown makeup and finally, puts a clown horn in your mouth and tapes it in place. "You know. I have been asking my father for a car. He says no. That I must wait until eighteen. So..I will comfort with you." Smilling, he put himself in position to shove his dick.'
+	'Dimka binds and ties your knees with a pair of little carts, tie you up with rope, attach a steering wheel to your back, covers your face in blue clown makeup and finally, puts a clown horn in your mouth and tapes it in place. "You know. I have been asking my father for a car. He says no. That I must wait until eighteen. So... I will comfort with you." Smilling, he put himself in position to shove his dick.'
 	gs 'dinsex', 'boy_puts_condom'
 	gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
 	'Ignoring foreplay, Dimka push his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock through your vaginal lips. Pain from the rape, bondage, forced position and, especially, the humiliation make you cry. "Peee." That stupid sound is the only thing that you can make. Dimka seems to enjoy it, and his laughs are probably the worst. "Peee". He tries to fuck you hard, but the wheel makes you drive away. Eventually he forces you against the wall pounding himself balls deep into your pussy, instead of moaning, you make funny clown sounds."Peee."'
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse3':
 	if maxdradrug = 3: maxdradrug = 4
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/car.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka binds and ties your knees with a pair of little carts, tie you up with rope, attach a steering wheel to your back, covers your face in blue clown makeup and finally, puts a clown horn in your mouth and tapes it in place. "You know. I have been asking my father for a car. He says no. That I must wait until eighteen. So..I will comfort with you." Smilling, he put himself in position to shove his dick.'
+	'Dimka binds and ties your knees with a pair of little carts, tie you up with rope, attach a steering wheel to your back, covers your face in blue clown makeup and finally, puts a clown horn in your mouth and tapes it in place. "You know. I have been asking my father for a car. He says no. That I must wait until eighteen. So... I will comfort with you." Smilling, he put himself in position to shove his dick.'
 	gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','lubri' & gs 'dinsex','analsex'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 end
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse5':
 	gs 'pain', 4, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/spank.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka ties you to a pole. Then he shows you a leather whip. "You know slut. I am really am understanding individual. And what I think you need, is a little of discipline. So.. Let see if I can help you." He begins to whip your ass. "One." Sharp flashes of pain burn through your drug induced euphoria and you begin screaming. "Two." You beg Dimka to stop. "Three." You sob and fight against the bonds. "Four." You understand that this is only the beginning. After several more, Dimka is satisfied and releases you.'
+	'Dimka ties you to a pole. Then he shows you a leather whip. "You know slut. I am really am understanding individual. And what I think you need, is a little of discipline. So... Let see if I can help you." He begins to whip your ass. "One." Sharp flashes of pain burn through your drug induced euphoria and you begin screaming. "Two." You beg Dimka to stop. "Three." You sob and fight against the bonds. "Four." You understand that this is only the beginning. After several more, Dimka is satisfied and releases you.'
 	act 'Leave':gt 'pav_residential'
 end
 
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse6':
 	if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 	minut += 20
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/nip.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok..Hm..I think that you don''t understand your position... Hmm, let''s see if you can learn something" then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurts, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He releases you.'
+	'Dimka make you lie down, and binds you until you are fully immobilized. He looks at you with a pensive expression. "Ok... Hm... I think that you don''t understand your position... Hmm, let''s see if you can learn something" then he clamps your nipples in small vices and tightens the jaws. It hurts, but then you see what he has prepared, and cry in terror. Suddenly he stabs a needle through your nipple. You howl in pain, but Dimka spits on you as you cry and sticks in another needle forcing you to howl again. You yell and swear at this fucking sadist, but Dimka coldly continues an to your ever growing horror, connect them to a battery. Little shocks run through your body, enhancing the sensation of helplessness. After an eternity of sobbing, pain and pleading. He releases you.'
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka pulls the needles out of your nipples and sets you free.'
 		gs 'pain', 7, 'nipples', 'pierce'
@@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse7':
 	if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/ton.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "As a slut, you have a dirty tongue. That can''t be, you must be clean for me. So..I am going to teach you a lesson in personal hygiene." You try to recoil in horror at the needles in his hands, but you are trapped. He grabs hold of your tongue and suddenly pushes a needle through it. You squeal and twitch from the sharp pain. Dimka amuses himself by sticking needles through your tongue, lips and cheeks. The more you howl in pain, the more excited he gets.'
+	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "As a slut, you have a dirty tongue. That can''t be, you must be clean for me. So... I am going to teach you a lesson in personal hygiene." You try to recoil in horror at the needles in his hands, but you are trapped. He grabs hold of your tongue and suddenly pushes a needle through it. You squeal and twitch from the sharp pain. Dimka amuses himself by sticking needles through your tongue, lips and cheeks. The more you howl in pain, the more excited he gets.'
 	if pirsA > 0:'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka pulls the needles out of your tongue and sets you free.'
 	if pirsA = 0:
 		pirsA = 1
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaabuse8':
 	sub += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/vag.jpg"></center>'
-	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex..Something about more blood flow... So... I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here... So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
+	'Dimka binds you until you are fully immobilized. "You know, a lot of people think that a piercing in the cunt enhances the pleasure during sex... Something about more blood flow... So... I was thinking, that you as my personal fucktoy need a little encouragement to come here... So let''s begin." Then he picks up a safety pin and pricks your labia. You howled at the sharp unbearable pain, struggling against your bonds, but Dimka does not calm down until he has sealed your entire vagina with safety pins.'
 	if pirsG > 0:'When he gets bored of watching you in pain, Dimka takes the pins out of your pussy and sets you free.'
 	if pirsG = 0:
 		pirsG = 1

+ 56 - 52
locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -291,61 +291,65 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkaparents':
 		'You snoop around, opening drawers, and looking in the closet. Everything is perfectly in place and neatly arranged. You don''t find anything of interest, Dimka''s parents seem pretty boring, you think to yourself.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'dimaHome','hallway2'
 	end
-	act 'Go into master bathroom':
-		*clr & cla
-		minut += 1
-		$loc_arg = 'bathroom'
-		$loc = 'dimaHome'
-		$locM_arg = 'bathroom'
-		$locM = 'dimaHome'
-		menu_off = 1
-		killvar '$locclass'
-		gs 'stat'
-		$location_type = 'bathroom'
-		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Master bathroom</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/masterbath.jpg"></center>'
-		'The master bathroom is a huge space with a large sink area and tile floors. The toilet sits along the far wall. You can''t help but feel impressed by the size of the walk-in shower and deep bathtub. It all looks very expensive.'
-		'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
-		*nl
-		if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'
-		if shampoo > 0:
-			act 'Take a shower':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 10
-				dynamic $showerdin
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
-				'<video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/mitsa.mp4"></video>'
-				'You take a quick shower.'
-				if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
-				act 'Get out of the shower':
-					'You get out of the shower and dry off.'
-					act 'Get dressed': gt 'dimaHome','Go into master bath'
-				end
+	act 'Go into master bathroom': gt 'dimaHome','dimka_master_bathroom'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'dimaHome','hallway2'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_master_bathroom':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 1
+	$loc_arg = 'bathroom'
+	$loc = 'dimaHome'
+	$locM_arg = 'bathroom'
+	$locM = 'dimaHome'
+	menu_off = 1
+	killvar '$locclass'
+	gs 'stat'
+	$location_type = 'bathroom'
+	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Master bathroom</font></h4></center>'
+	'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/masterbath.jpg"></center>'
+	'The master bathroom is a huge space with a large sink area and tile floors. The toilet sits along the far wall. You can''t help but feel impressed by the size of the walk-in shower and deep bathtub. It all looks very expensive.'
+	'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
+	*nl
+	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'
+	if shampoo > 0:
+		act 'Take a shower':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 10
+			dynamic $showerdin
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
+			'<video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/mitsa.mp4"></video>'
+			'You take a quick shower.'
+			if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
+			act 'Get out of the shower':
+				cla
+				'You get out of the shower and dry off.'
+				act 'Get dressed': gt 'dimaHome','dimka_master_bathroom'
 			end
-			act 'Take a bath':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 20
-				dynamic $bath
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
-				'<center><img  src="images/shared/home/bathroom/wash4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take a quick bath.'
-				act 'Get out of the bath':
-					'You get out of the bath and dry off.'
-					act 'Get dressed': gt 'dimaHome','Go into master bath'
-				end
+		end
+		act 'Take a bath':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 20
+			dynamic $bath
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
+			'<center><img  src="images/shared/home/bathroom/wash4.jpg"></center>'
+			'You take a quick bath.'
+			act 'Get out of the bath':
+				cla
+				'You get out of the bath and dry off.'
+				act 'Get dressed': gt 'dimaHome','dimka_master_bathroom'
 			end
-		else
-			'<font color="red">You''ve run out of shampoo and will have to buy some more before you can wash yourself.</font>'
 		end
-		gs 'din_van', 'prvt_pee'
-		dynamic $bteeth
-		dynamic $tampon
-		dynamic $basin
-		act 'Leave the bathroom': gt 'dimaHome','dimkaparents'
+	else
+		'<font color="red">You''ve run out of shampoo and will have to buy some more before you can wash yourself.</font>'
 	end
-	act 'Leave':gt 'dimaHome','hallway2'
+	gs 'din_van', 'prvt_pee'
+	dynamic $bteeth
+	dynamic $tampon
+	dynamic $basin
+	act 'Leave the bathroom': gt 'dimaHome','dimkaparents'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'guest':
@@ -938,7 +942,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_chat':
 		else
 			act 'No (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
-		!! I changed the else condition so it matches up with generic boyfriends, because i think the variable boyfriend doesnt exist ... if it does a third elseif must be added for boyfirend or generic boyfriends and the if conditions must be changed
+		!! I changed the else condition so it matches up with generic boyfriends, because i think the variable boyfriend doesnt exist... if it does a third elseif must be added for boyfirend or generic boyfriends and the if conditions must be changed
 		if NikoVolkovQW >= 5 or fedorKozlovQW >= 1 or pcs_lover ! 0:
 			act 'I have a boyfriend':
 				*clr & cla

+ 4 - 4
locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 3:
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big142.jpg"></center>'
 										'You catch up to Zinaida as she leaves the school building. She''s glued to her phone as always. You tap her on the shoulder and say, "Hey, Zinaida. You''re looking nice today."'
 										'Without looking away from her screen she says, "You''re lying, trying to be nice to me, so you must want something out of me, so what do you want, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-										'"Oh...well...uh I think you should go out with Feofan."'
+										'"Oh... well... uh I think you should go out with Feofan."'
 										'"Why?"'
 										'"Well um... Alright I''m gonna level with you. I need his help and he wants a date with you. What''s it gonna take?"'
 										'She thinks for a bit then pulls out some kind of usb adapter from her backpack and hands it to you saying, "Go to the computer room and plug this flashdrive into the back of the computer furthest from the door.
@@ -537,7 +537,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 1:
 			!dimaRevenge = 7!
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/revenge/boygirlarguing.jpg"></center>'
 			'You go around the hallway spreading rumors about Dimka, but everyone looks at you like you are full of it. It seems Lizaveta was true to her word, after all. You see Dimka having the same trouble. It seems you''ve both lost your credibility. At least your reputation is safe, since no one believes Dimka anymore. You are too stubborn to notice that though and keep trying to spread rumors while Dimka does the same.'
-			'Soon the two of you get into an argument, which turns into a screaming match. You are both screaming at the top of your lungs when the principal comes to break things up. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, Mr Nosov, in my office now!"'
+			'Soon the two of you get into an argument, which turns into a screaming match. You are both screaming at the top of your lungs when the principal comes to break things up. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, Mr. Nosov, in my office now!"'
 			act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big134.jpg"></center>'
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 1:
 				'"If you lay a finder on me, I''ll call my dad and he''ll sue you and this school into the ground." He seems to think he has won.'
 				'Miss. Volkov is out of patience at this point. "Listen, you little shit," she says angrily, "I will not be talked to that way by some spoiled brat. I know your father better than you, and nothing would piss him off more than a weak son who hides behind his name. You have one chance to get in line or I''ll be the one calling your father and making him come to school during his work hours to talk about his whiny son."'
 				'"You can''t talk to me that way," Dimka says nervously, "My father would..."'
-				'"That''s enough," she cuts Dimka off, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, go to class and tell your teacher that Mr. Nosov won''t be attending for the rest of the day." As you leave the office, you try and listen at the door. But it is thick and you can''t hear anything. You hear Mrs Sokoloff clear her throat as she catches you. She is the teacher manning the office at this time. After that you quickly go to class.'
+				'"That''s enough," she cuts Dimka off, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, go to class and tell your teacher that Mr. Nosov won''t be attending for the rest of the day." As you leave the office, you try and listen at the door. But it is thick and you can''t hear anything. You hear Mrs. Sokoloff clear her throat as she catches you. She is the teacher manning the office at this time. After that you quickly go to class.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1084,7 +1084,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 5:
 						*clr & cla
 						demerit += 40
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big134.jpg"></center>'
-						'Miss. Volkov looks at you. "I don''t know what''s on your mind miss <<$pcs_lastname>> but what have you done will have serious consequences...now go"'
+						'Miss. Volkov looks at you. "I don''t know what''s on your mind miss <<$pcs_lastname>> but what have you done will have serious consequences... now go"'
 						!!sent to princeipal''s office and earn 20 demerits, afterwards it goes to this scene.
 						!!Office doesn''t exist yet according to gschool_grounds.
 						act 'Back to class':

+ 9 - 9
locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina1':
 		'You hesitantly walk over and peer inside. You are... not sure what he was doing until you see the chains. What the hell? The sick fuck has improvised a bondage set in his closet.'
 		'"Ahh... Why that face?. And to think I spent all this time making this lovely gift for you!" He sighs. "Don''t worry I''m sure you will learn to appreciate it. So... come on, get in."'
 		'You''re looking apprehensively at the chains and start to consider making a run for the door when Dimka''s mobile sounds. Quickly, he answers the call.' 
-		'"Dimka here... Hm... Oh?... You''re on your way?... Hm... What?... No!... Of course, no!... Yeah, I''ll be waiting."' 
+		'"Dimka here... Hm... Oh...? You''re on your way...? Hm... What...? No...! Of course, no...! Yeah, I''ll be waiting."' 
 		'With an enthusiastic smile, Dimka shoves you into the closet and chains you up, even taking a moment to admire his work. The chains hurt you and the position doesn''t let you relax.'
 		'"Alright, this is what is about to happen: I''m going to close the door, and if I hear a <i>single</i> sound from you during this visit, you will be punished. Understood?"'
 		gs 'willpower', 'humiliation', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Listen':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D5.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Hey! I have an idea..." Lina is sitting on her knees with a puzzled expression as Dimka moves closer and suddenly starts to pull her top up, revealing her bra before she can properly react and stop him.'
 		'"Hey! What are you doing?!"'
-		'"You have an amazing body, you should show it off more, Lina. None of the other girls at school can compare, not even Christina!" Dimka reassures her, which seems to be working as she relaxes slightly. "Don''t worry, I''d never show anyone this, but I just can''t help it...you''re so beautiful! You don''t need to take anything else off...'
+		'"You have an amazing body, you should show it off more, Lina. None of the other girls at school can compare, not even Christina!" Dimka reassures her, which seems to be working as she relaxes slightly. "Don''t worry, I''d never show anyone this, but I just can''t help it... you''re so beautiful! You don''t need to take anything else off...'
 		'Lina shifts nervously, her cheeks flushed slightly after hearing Dimka''s confession. After a moment of consideration, she slips out of her bottoms, sitting there in sweater and panties as he continues to film her. Back in the closet, you try to ignore your drug-induced arousal but it gets more and more difficult. In the back of your mind, images and sensations pop up. You... Need... To... Do... Something...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'bound'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Listen':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/FD1.jpg"></center>' 
-			'Dimka kneels before you, he is your bitch, but you aren''t happy. He doesn''t know how to lick boots properly like a bitch should. This is unforgivable and only serve to piss you off. "Seriously? Why must I waste my time helping a little sick fuck like yourself? Come on!" You firmly kick him aside and he lays there, staring up at you with a pathetic look. "Poor little pet.." You sigh. "A good mistress must educate her wards. I''m far too good for you, you realize that, right?" You sit in a chair and let him clean them slowly and a bit sloppily. Why... won''t... he... learn?! You whip his back and he lets out a strained whimper. After trying to get him to clean your boots again you realize... he''s doing it on purpose! Of course, he''s a bratty little bitch. He''s getting off on this, but he knows better to ask for release. If he wants it so bad, then it seems like some pegging will be in order, but he won''t get his release so easily. With a smile, you relax and recline in your chair and watch a nervous Dimka who doesn''t realize what''s going to happen next...'
+			'Dimka kneels before you, he is your bitch, but you aren''t happy. He doesn''t know how to lick boots properly like a bitch should. This is unforgivable and only serve to piss you off. "Seriously? Why must I waste my time helping a little sick fuck like yourself? Come on!" You firmly kick him aside and he lays there, staring up at you with a pathetic look. "Poor little pet..." You sigh. "A good mistress must educate her wards. I''m far too good for you, you realize that, right?" You sit in a chair and let him clean them slowly and a bit sloppily. Why... won''t... he... learn?! You whip his back and he lets out a strained whimper. After trying to get him to clean your boots again you realize... he''s doing it on purpose! Of course, he''s a bratty little bitch. He''s getting off on this, but he knows better to ask for release. If he wants it so bad, then it seems like some pegging will be in order, but he won''t get his release so easily. With a smile, you relax and recline in your chair and watch a nervous Dimka who doesn''t realize what''s going to happen next...'
 			'You blink as your mind awakens from the sudden daydream. Dimka seems to has moved Lina to a new position. She kneels on the bed before him.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5, 'bound'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -373,7 +373,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D11.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Like this, Dimka?"'
-	'He groans, "Oh yeah... just like that, keep going." You didn''t notice until now that they''ve moved to the bed, where Lina has been giving him a handjob. As he calls her his girlfriend, you think she seems excited as she spits onto his cock and pumps him a bit faster, but judging by the look of discomfort, its obvious she did that to distract him so he doesn''t call her that again.' 
+	'He groans, "Oh yeah... just like that, keep going." You didn''t notice until now that they''ve moved to the bed, where Lina has been giving him a handjob. As he calls her his girlfriend, you think she seems excited as she spits onto his cock and pumps him a bit faster, but judging by the look of discomfort, it''s obvious she did that to distract him so he doesn''t call her that again.' 
 	'"Fuck... that''s much better!" Dimka then caresses the back of Lina''s head as his face twists with pleasure.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina7':
 		'Lina''s mind seems to be wandering as it takes her a moment to realize what he had said. "What? Oh, I''m fine I guess."'
 		'"Good!" Dimka replies back quickly.'
 		'"Right..." she says quietly. "So... what did you want, Dimka?"'
-		'"Well... I need to ask you something. Slut has been disobedient lately... More than usual, and I was thinking of teaching her a lesson. I wanted your help on figuring out what exactly her punishment should be...."'
+		'"Well... I need to ask you something. Slut has been disobedient lately... More than usual, and I was thinking of teaching her a lesson. I wanted your help on figuring out what exactly her punishment should be..."'
 		act 'Your fate is up to Lina...':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big19.jpg"></center>'
@@ -836,7 +836,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hooksex':
 	'You feel the shaft of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock pushing your vaginal lips slightly apart.'
 	if pcs_vag < 10:
 		'You howl in pain, without foreplay you are dry and Dimka is too mad to really care. Enduring his trusts you bite your lips and wait for him to cum.'
-		'"Oh yeah... For a Slut, you know how to maintain a tight cunt. I must.." He grunts with pleasure. "rethink your punishment"'
+		'"Oh yeah... For a Slut, you know how to maintain a tight cunt. I must..." He grunts with pleasure. "rethink your punishment"'
 		'He continues forcing himself painfully on you. In the meantime, you try to think of other things, anything, to forget about the rape. Your body reacts and some wetness makes the situation less painful. Fortunately, he finally reaches climax and cums.' 
 		'You two lie there, trying to catch your breath. He then stands up and leaves. "I''m going to shower to get rid of your stink, get out of my home."'
 		'You sob and redress getting out of this madhouse, quickly.'
@@ -1058,12 +1058,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubusdimka':
 	act 'Awaken your true self':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/succubusself.jpg"></center>'
-		'You let the power flood your body, leaving you feeling warm and...insatiably hungry.'
+		'You let the power flood your body, leaving you feeling warm and... insatiably hungry.'
 		'If Dimka thinks that he can rape you without consequences, he will be disappointed. He''s not in control anymore and you are not going to let him hurt you any further. Easily, you pull your wrists and legs apart, ripping the tape in the process. Glancing over your shoulder, you see Dimka looking at you confused. You turn to face him and see he''s trying to process what''s going on, but isn''t able to understand how this shift in power has happened suddenly. One of your hands rise to his chest, caressing it. He''s confused yet aroused and it makes you giggle knowing how helpless he is to his own primal desires of wanting to fuck while still knowing something isn''t <i>quite</i> right...'
 		act 'Time for dinner':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D19.jpg"></center>'
-			'"What the..?" Dimka mumbles.'
+			'"What the...?" Dimka mumbles.'
 			'You press a finger against his lips and whisper softly, "Shh... it''s okay, Master. I''m here to serve you." You lead him back to his couch and make him sit. For a moment, you consider your options. You could end him right here, right now but then you realize you have no idea where he''s hidden that recording of you and even if you did there''s no telling if he''s made copies. Until you can be sure you can get rid of that recording completely, you have to settle with playing as Dimka''s "dutiful" slave slut.'
 			'You stand over his member and slowly lower yourself down onto it in a reverse cowgirl position.'
 			'He lets out a drawn out groan, his face twisted in pleasure and confusion. "Oh... what are you doing?"'
@@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'linaundress':
 	'Tears form in her eyes.'
 	'Slap!!'
 	'The minutes pass while Lina''s skin gets redder.'
-	'Slap...Slap...Slap!!'
+	'Slap... Slap... Slap!!'
 	act 'Helplessly watch her be abused':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/D21.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_5.jpg"></center>'
 						'Looking at the naked girls, you bite your lower lip as your eyes roam over their bodies with a lustful look. Ira and Lena start kissing you all over while stripping you.'
-						'"Mmm.. Oh yes, don''t stop." you moan out. Lena sucks your clit and begins licking your wet pussy.'
+						'"Mmm... Oh yes, don''t stop." you moan out. Lena sucks your clit and begins licking your wet pussy.'
 						
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ $pavser = {
 	pcs_mood -= 10
     gs'stat'
     'For some reason when you enter the room, you decide to bow before graduating  and bow, after graduating from a deep curtsy.' 
-    'Shaking head, swept ... hair ... colors, came to the middle of the room and do a pirouette - slowly-slowly raised your hands in exaltation.'
+    'Shaking head, swept... hair... colors, came to the middle of the room and do a pirouette - slowly-slowly raised your hands in exaltation.'
     'You blinded sunny <<$pcs_nickname>> rained out of the window and the shade seemed to get closer.'
     'And then you notice him: a man sitting behind the couch against the wall, his face buried in his knees. You cry out and involuntarily raise your hand to your mouth, bit, fingers.'
 	act 'Look closer':dynamic $pavser1

+ 1 - 1
locations/dom_gor.qsrc

@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if edaD > 0:
 		edaD -= 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
 		if pcs_energy >= 100:
-			'You can no longer eat...For now at least.'
+			'You can no longer eat... For now at least.'
 		elseif pcs_energy >= 80:
 			pcs_energy += 40
 			'You push through to eat your meal.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loss':
 		gs 'pain', 5, 'cheeks', 'hit'
 		gs 'pain', 5, 'thighs', 'kick'
 		gs 'pain', 5, 'hair', 'stretch'
-		dynamic '<<$clothingworntype>>H[<<clothingwornnumber>>] = 0'
+		dynamic '<<$clothingworntype>>_h[<<clothingwornnumber>>] = 0'
 		'<<$streetev_title>>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/street/lostfight.jpg"></center>'
 		'You do your best, but there are just too many of them. Eventually they get you down on the ground and beat you, ripping out handfuls of your hair and tearing your clothes.'
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		'"Take that bitches!"'
 		'With one last kick, the bitch squad lies fallen before you, whimpering in pain thanks to the sound beating they''ve received at your hand, but as you look around for your next victim, a redheaded girl grabs you and pulls you away from the brawl turned riot, towards the waiting Vanya & Vicky.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I don''t know what to do with you! What were you thinking?!"'
-		'You...aren''t too sure why the hell you incited the massive brawl that now is being broken apart by the police, and as you try to look for a good answer, Vanya chooses that moment to express his opinion.'
+		'You... aren''t too sure why the hell you incited the massive brawl that now is being broken apart by the police, and as you try to look for a good answer, Vanya chooses that moment to express his opinion.'
 		'"Well... Katja, I want to say, well... That is hockey! Give me those five <<$pcs_nickname>>!"' 
 		'Katja looks dumbfounded as he raises his hand, more even when you clap it, followed by a shrugging Vicky, who jumps and does the same. As you turn smiling towards Katja, waiting for her to join, she facepalms, turns and begins to walk away, musing about your idiocy. Well, it is probably better if you follow her, so after saying goodbye to Vanya & Vicky, you go with her. It was "fun" but it is time to look for something else to do.'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
 			act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 		end
 	else
-		'The Club closes, the lights go off, the music fades and everyone begins to leave.'
+		'The club closes, the lights go off, the music fades and everyone begins to leave.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1172,7 +1172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 
 			if mentats_dose > 0:intel_exp += mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose)
 			if pcs_intel < 80:intel_exp += 1 + (mentats_dose - rand(0,mentats_dose))
-			if $clothingworntype = 'office' and (pcs_makeup = 1 or pcs_makeup = 2) and teachlevel < 70:teachlevel += 1
+			if $clothingworntype = 'gm_office' and (pcs_makeup = 1 or pcs_makeup = 2) and teachlevel < 70:teachlevel += 1
 			if pcs_makeup = 4:teachlevel -= 1
 
 			money += 150

+ 7 - 7
locations/event.qsrc

@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbi':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-	'The woman, stares at you, you catch her eye. She looks you up and down, smiles and licks her lips.'
+	'The woman stares at you, you catch her eye. She looks you up and down, smiles and licks her lips.'
 
 	act 'Turn away':gt 'moncheri', 'start'
 	act 'Get acquainted':gt 'event', 'lesbi1'
@@ -938,8 +938,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbi1':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to the woman. She looks at you with a twinkle in her eye "I am Natalya Petrovna, here''s my card, maybe you would let me take you somewhere interesting". Then the woman is very confident and it makes it hard for you think clearly.'
-
+	'You go to the woman. She looks at you with a twinkle in her eye "I am Natalya Petrovna, here''s my card, maybe you would let me take you somewhere interesting?"'
+    'The woman is very confident and it makes it hard for you to think clearly.'
 	act 'Paris?':gt 'event', 'lesbi2'
 end
 
@@ -948,11 +948,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbi2':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Paris?! Your cute, but for that you''d need to be absolutely stunning." She laughs and you feel a little embarrassed.'
+	'"Paris?! You''re cute, but for that you''d need to be absolutely stunning." She laughs and you feel a little embarrassed.'
 	'"Heh, thanks, but I was looking for a rich man, good effort".'
 	'"Guys? You can twist them around your little finger, if you want, you little cutie, but have you ever managed to force another girl to obey and do anything you desire?"'
-	if lesbian > 0:'Nuu..no..I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve been with girls, but not like that...'
-	if lesbian = 0:'Nuu..no..I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve never been with a girl to try such a thing...'
+	if lesbian > 0:'No... no, I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve been with girls, but not like that...'
+	if lesbian = 0:'No... no, I haven''t - You mumble. I''ve never been with a girl to try such a thing...'
 
 	act 'Ask to learn':gt 'event', 'lesbi3'
 end
@@ -966,7 +966,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbi3':
 	'You are suddenly interested, how do you control other girls like this? Maybe you''ll ask this woman to teach you.'
 	'Then you can find yourself a very docile simpleton and make her do your chores and save you having to put up with so many dumb guys.'
 	'Having deciding you asked, "Can you teach me that?"'
-	'"Teach?" She asked in surprise. "Teach .. hmm .. I think I might be able to help you!" The lady says with a grin. "Come visit me at my apartment."'
+	'"Teach?" She asked in surprise. "Teach... hmm... I think I might be able to help you!" The lady says with a grin. "Come visit me at my apartment."'
 	'You read the card and see that see lives in the city residential area, looking up again, Natalya is walking out of the boutique with a graceful and confident gait.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'moncheri', 'start'

+ 1 - 1
locations/father.qsrc

@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ if (hour > 10 and week < 6) or week >= 6:
                                         gs 'stat'
                                         gs 'panties', 'dispose'
                                         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/fatherim50.jpg"></center>'
-                                        'Wanting to see just how riled up you can get your stepfather, you bend over and slowly pull your panties down. "Is this better, Daddy?" you sweetly ask him, and your stepfather panics while you run your hands over your naked ass, gently kneading your ass cheeks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please don''t do that! Someone could come in at any second! What do you think your mother would do to you AND me if she saw this!?" he whispers, as he moves to you and frantically tries to cover you up. You sweetly smile at him and whisper: "Relax Daddy, we''re fine! Here, for later," as you stuff your panties in his pocket.'
+                                        'Wanting to see just how riled up you can get your stepfather, you bend over and slowly pull your panties down. "Is this better, Daddy?" you sweetly ask him, and your stepfather panics while you run your hands over your naked ass, gently kneading your ass cheeks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please don''t do that! Someone could come in at any second! What do you think your mother would do to you AND me if she saw this!?" he whispers, as he moves to you and frantically tries to cover you up. You sweetly smile at him and whisper: "Relax daddy, we''re fine! Here, for later," as you stuff your panties in his pocket.'
                                         act 'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
                                     end
                                 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/fbgameout.qsrc

@@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'football':
 											gs 'stat'	
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/pickupgames/football/dribblefail.jpg"></center>'
 											'With Christina closing in you take a step to the right making her follow you. As soon as she catches up to you, you change it up quickly turning to the left and dribble past her...'
-											'But Christina has already read what you''re up to and she quickly tackles you making you to lose the ball as you get tangled up...'
+											'But Christina has already read what you''re up to and she quickly tackles you making you lose the ball as you get tangled up...'
 											'She smirks as she passes by, "You really thought you could fool me with that silly move?"'
 											'Not long after that situation the game ends in a draw. As you approach the rest of your team you say, "I''m really sorry. I thought I could dribble pass her."'
 											'The others nod acting as they understand but deep down they''re disappointed that you couldn''t win the game. Not wanting to make further noise, you pick up your stuff in silence, say your goodbye''s and leave.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/femcyc.qsrc

@@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'preg':
 		elseif PregChem > 6959:
 			'Late.'
 		elseif PregChem > 7245:
-			'Very Late!'
+			'Very late!'
 		end
 		'You need to get to a clinic.'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/fight.qsrc

@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Attack':
 		end
 	!! Does physical damage, but not a lot
 	elseif fightAtk['TargetHealthLoss'] > 0:
-		'Its a glancing blow, but still hurts.'
+		'It''s a glancing blow, but still hurts.'
 	!! No physical damage was done.
 	else
 		'Defenses were not pierced.'

+ 4 - 4
locations/flash.qsrc

@@ -233,14 +233,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'full':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		else
 			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/' + rand(1,dress_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/dress/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,dress_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lift your skirt and top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		end
 	else
 		if $ARGS[1] = 'inside':
@@ -249,14 +249,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'full':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/inside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_ind_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		else
 			if pcs_pubes <= 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/' + rand(1,pants_out_full) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/flashing/pants/outside/full/hairy' + rand(1,pants_out_full_hairy) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Making sure there are no children around and its not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
+			'Making sure there are no children around and it''s not too busy you lower your pants and lift your top to expose both your pussy and breasts. Most people who see you are shocked but some look at you admiringly. You quickly cover up again enjoying a buzz of excitement.'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 5 - 5
locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fine_art':
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
-											'"Hey! ... HEY!!" you yell at her.'
+											'"Hey...! HEY!!" you yell at her.'
 											'She stops her maniacal laughing and finally looks back at you.'
 											'"That''s not the point! The point is that I don''t want to lose my virginity right now!" The woman frowns at you, this time with disappointment.'
 											'"And vhy not? Iz it becauze you have not found ze right man? Not to worry, Alexhandar iz great man. I know. He iz my zon. Zatisfies many girls. He vill-"'
@@ -2051,7 +2051,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'runway2':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fotograph.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I''m really sorry but I have to say no. I can''t be out that late or my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>- er, for, uhh... reasons...."'
+					'"I''m really sorry but I have to say no. I can''t be out that late or my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>- er, for, uhh... reasons..."'
 					'"Yeah, yeah, it''s fine, whatever," he says a bit more harshly than he needed to but you understand he''s under a lot of stress right now so you let it pass. At that moment, Anasasia passes by and the photographer''s attention is immediately diverted. "Anastasia! We need you! It''s an emergency!"'
 					'"Of course darling! What do you need?" As they frantically chatter away, you leave them be and go back to the main studio.'
 					act'Back to the studio':gt'foto','studio'
@@ -2121,11 +2121,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'runway2':
 							elseif model['runway_outfit'] = 4:
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/skill/runway/4.mp4"></video></center>'
 								if tits >= 3:
-									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder if the girl this outfit was designed for a girl with small breasts. It''s tight around your chest and you can feel it riding up with every step. In the short the time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely still hidden by its hem. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to let your sweater puppies free.'
+									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder whether the girl whom this outfit was designed for is a girl with small breasts. It''s tight around your chest and you can feel it riding up with every step. In the short time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely hidden. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to let your sweater puppies free.'
 								elseif tits >= 2:
-									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder if the girl this outfit was designed for a girl with smaller breasts than you. Or maybe even a girl who is completely flat. Even around your humble bosom, you can feel the material straining against your chest and it rides up with every step you take forward. In the short the time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely still hidden by its hem. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
+									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder whether the girl whom this outfit was designed for is a girl with smaller breasts than you. Or maybe even a girl who is completely flat. Even around your humble bosom, you can feel the material straining against your chest and it rides up with every step you take forward. In the short time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely hidden. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
 								else
-									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder what idiot designed this outfit. Even with your virtually flat chest, your body strains against the material. You can feel it riding up with every step you take forward. In the short the time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely still hidden by its hem. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
+									'As you walk forward, you can''t help but wonder what idiot designed this outfit. Even with your virtually flat chest, your body strains against the material. You can feel it riding up with every step you take forward. In the short time it takes you to get to the end of the runway, the top has risen so much that your nipples are just barely hidden. Within a few steps on the way back you need to pull it back in place. But at least once the walk is finished you''ll finally be able to take this thing off and breathe normally again.'
 								end
 							elseif model['runway_outfit'] = 5:
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/skill/runway/5.mp4"></video></center>'

+ 2 - 2
locations/foto_events2.qsrc

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kickboxing_documentary':
                     '"Your feeling about that victory? Your favorite color? A man in your life?"'
                     'The interview goes and goes like this during a long time, until your allocated time end, and then reluctantly the journalist leaves you to talk to another kickboxer.'            
                 elseif city_kickboxing >=60 and razradKik >= 2:
-                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the league, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seems to deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the gymnasium.'
+                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the league, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seem too deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the gymnasium.'
                 else
                     'You wait between shots, but the journalist seems to find somebody else more interesting and forgets to talk with you.'
 				end
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'track_&_field_documentary':
                     '"Your feeling about that victory? Your favorite color? A man in your life?"'
                     'The interview goes on and on like this for a long time, until you''re allocated time ends, and then reluctantly the journalist leaves you to talk to another runner.'            
                 elseif city_running >=30 and razradKik >= 1:
-                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the Championship, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seem to deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the field.'
+                    'Between shots, a journalist comes and asks you questions. Most of them, are fairly generic. Personal data, your opinions about the Championship, confirmation on their information. In general, it doesn''t seem too deep but it is evident that the journalist has his hands more than full, catching up with all the women in the field.'
                 else
                     'You wait between shots, but the journalist seems to find somebody else more interesting and forgets to talk with you.'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/foto_model_documentary.qsrc

@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'documentary_7':
 		foto_documentary['question_7'] = 6
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/special/interview/12.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'"I think for me, my ideal date is a romantic evening that ends with great sex. The sex is a big part of it, sure, but without the build up its nothing. A fancy restaurant in expensive clothing, wine and chocolates, starring at each other and taking in how beautiful the other person looks. All of these things just building, building, building our desire. And at the end of the night, when we''re at our limit, that''s when we let our inhibitions go. Hands get handsy, tongues get invasive, and every touch becomes passionate and expressive. And after we''re done we can bask in the afterglow of the evening and in each other''s presence," you smile.'
+		'"I think for me, my ideal date is a romantic evening that ends with great sex. The sex is a big part of it, sure, but without the build up it''s nothing. A fancy restaurant in expensive clothing, wine and chocolates, starring at each other and taking in how beautiful the other person looks. All of these things just building, building, building our desire. And at the end of the night, when we''re at our limit, that''s when we let our inhibitions go. Hands get handsy, tongues get invasive, and every touch becomes passionate and expressive. And after we''re done we can bask in the afterglow of the evening and in each other''s presence," you smile.'
 		'"<i>Just</i> those things?" the interviewer smiles back.'
 		'"And... in the afterglow of our orgasms too," you admit.'
 		*nl

+ 1 - 1
locations/foto_models.qsrc

@@ -1358,7 +1358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anastasiasextalk':
 			else
 				'"It''s also the most comfortable one," she says while turning over and spreading her legs. Several people passed by while Anastasia continues to talk about the intricacies of being gangbanged at an educational volume. You listen to her carefully but spare a glance at the models passing by. They don''t seem to be surprised by her behavior at all. You guess her reputation is a well known and no one actually minds or cares.'
 				'"See, if you try <i>this</i> position, bum down and pussy forward, even with only two cocks, it''s very hard to handle," she elaborates. "It''s almost impossible to find a comfortable way to give blowjobs and if you''re doing double penetration, the angle is very awkward on your asshole. <i>Very</i> uncomfortable. If you''re going to be penetrated by more than one boy or girl, I highly recommend the first position."'
-				'You nod understandingly at her explanation, raising an eyebrow when you notice she didn''t discount the option for girls with strap-ons..'
+				'You nod understandingly at her explanation, raising an eyebrow when you notice she didn''t discount the option for girls with strap-ons...'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'"Is there anything else you wanted to ask about?"'

+ 3 - 3
locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -573,9 +573,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'torncloth':
 		if (PCloThinness = 1 or PCloSkirt > 0) and PCloQuality < 5:
 			!skirts, not fit, and not high-class enough by illume
 			'<font color="red">Your clothes get caught on some brush and tear slightly.</font>'
-			dynamic $clothingworntype + 'H[<<clothingwornnumber>>] -= 1'
+			dynamic $clothingworntype + '_h[<<clothingwornnumber>>] -= 1'
 			!add remove clothes if worn out
-			if dyneval('RESULT = <<$clothingworntype>>H[<<clothingwornnumber>>]') <= 0:
+			if dyneval('RESULT = <<$clothingworntype>>_h[<<clothingwornnumber>>]') <= 0:
 				'<font color="red">Your clothes were barely holding together, but now they have fallen apart completely. You discard the remains and are left naked.</font>'
 				gadforest_clothestorn = 1
 				gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadforest'
@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dressing':
 			end
 		elseif $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 			! hessian sack from hunters is not allowed to leave the woods it is only supposed to be a temporary item
-			if $clothingworntype = 'cheap' and clothingwornnumber = 414:
+			if $clothingworntype = 'misc_oufits' and clothingwornnumber = 1:
 				act 'Wear your abandoned clothing (0:05)':
 					*clr & cla
 					menu_off = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_hunters':
 
 				'"I''m Andrei," replies the older man, "And these are my friends, from the village, Igor and Sergei."'
 				'"By any chance is your last name <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asked. You looked at him and nodded.'
-				'"Don''t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I ... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
+				'"Don''t be surprised <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look a lot like your mother when she was younger. I... Hmmm... very good to know, I''m also from Gadukino." said Andrei.'
 				*nl
 				'After chatting with them for about half an hour, the hunters begin to get up and gather their things.'
 				'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s time for us to go." said Andrei.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/grandparents/grandma.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your grandma is extremely old, and almost never leaves the house. Most of the time she just sits on her bed watching TV, or is slowly cleaning.'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-		'Grandma looks a little shocked but its nothing she hasn''t seen before.'
+		'Grandma looks a little shocked but it''s nothing she hasn''t seen before.'
 		'"Go put some clothes on dear, you''ll give your poor grandpa a heart attack if he sees you."'
 
 		act 'Maybe you should get dressed before talking to her':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadprostitutes.qsrc

@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'just_mira':
 
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraprost2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
 
-								'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums...and cums...and cums. '
+								'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums... and cums... and cums. '
 								'After the wild sex, Mira and the guy sit in the van and talk for a bit. He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking back towards the road. She smiles at you and shows you the money as you join her.'
 
 								act 'Finish':

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadriver.qsrc

@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mira':
 				'"My granma-ma and Pop-pop live here, my folks like to come here over the summer. They think the country air will be good for me."'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 7 and sunWeather = 1:
 				'You decide to strike up some conversation with Mira, "So what is there to do here in the village?"'
-				'"Its a lot quicker than town, we do have a shop, this lovely beach and there are some beautiful walks. Other than that there''s only the gopnik guys but they are just after one thing and I don''t want that, plus dad would kill me."'
+				'"It''s a lot quieter than a town, but we do have a shop, this lovely beach and there are some beautiful walks. Other than that there''s only the gopnik guys but they are just after one thing and I don''t want that, plus dad would kill me."'
 			elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 7 and sunWeather = 1:
 				if npc_rel['A60'] < 15:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 				'You and Mira are chatting about trivial things.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadukino.qsrc

@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_events':
 											act 'Hide':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/miraprost2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums...and cums...and cums. '
+												'You have to duck behind some bushes as they move outside the van. The guy continues to pound into Mira''s pussy until he cums... and cums... and cums. '
 												'After the wild sex, Mira and the guy sit in the van and talk for a bit. He gives her a nice wad of cash and she starts walking to the village. Seeing you, she smiles and says thanks.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 												gs 'stat'

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