[added] revamped cursed schoolboy intro (forgot who wrote it, sorry)

locations/preCSB.qsrc

@@ -15,69 +15,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_0':
 	'You are Peter Ivanov.'
 	'<<$startdob>>'
 	'Your parents died shortly after you were born. Your only remaining relative, your great uncle Ivan, took you in. Your uncle has always made it clear that he took you in as a courtesy to your parents, not to become one himself. You two never became close, causing a lonely childhood.'
-
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/start3csb.jpg"></center>'
 		'You had a pleasant, undisturbed childhood when you were young. Although you don''t remember much from kindergarten, you do remember going to elementary school when you were 7 years old. While you wanted your uncle to act like the fathers of the other kids at school, you were never allowed to call him anything else than "sir."'
-
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/start4csb.jpg"></center>'
 			'Your teenage years were beset by the same changes as the rest of the boys your age: You got taller and gained a lot of muscle, your shoulders widened, your voice squeaked until it deepened, and hair sprouted from everywhere on your body.'
 			'You spent most of the last few years in a near-constant state of arousal, set off just by as little as a suggestively shaped vegetable. Thankfully the awkward changes and acne have started to subside, leaving you looking like the young man you will be.'
-
+			*nl
+			'But… But you are lonely. Maybe a little horny… who are you kidding? You are <b>very</b> horny. A horny 16 year old teen: that is the age when male sexuality peaks, according to the textbooks. Sadly your overflowing sex drive is not getting cared for by a loving girlfriend, instead you just walk around with a hardon almost every day, non stop.'
+			'You need a girlfriend, someone to talk to, to flirt with, to slowly but surely lure out of her various layers of clothing… a girlfriend. You would settle for a friend with benefits; it sounded hot in the tv-show you saw at one point. Or even just some school sex, but the girls in your class, at least the ones that are not utterly ugly, won''t give you any attention. Most ignore you, or when they do acknowledge you exist, they don''t take pity on you and instead often mock your awkwardness. You never learned how to talk to girls and because your mother died, you never had a female to help you understand girls. Now that is making your life, among other things, very hard.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/start5csb.jpg"></center>'
-				'During the last winter break, you decided to enjoy a Christmas party at a friend of a friend''s house. An incident involving a spiked punch bowl, mistletoe, and a drunken dare led to a picture of you kissing another man being circled around. Everything went downhill from there. Now everyone thinks that you are gay, regardless of your protests.'
-				'Everyone you knew quickly turned on you; nothing you could say worked to change their minds. You became an outcast and received regular beatings from the other guys.'
-
-				act 'Continue':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/ivancsb.jpg"></center>'
-					'A few days after the incident, you came home to find a livid Uncle Ivan. He grabs you by the collar and pins you against the wall, spittle hitting you as he screams into your face.'
-					'"What''s this I''m hearing about you being a fucking faggot?! What''s wrong with you? What, you want to suck cock you fucking fairy?!"'
-					act 'No!': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_1_straight'
-					act 'No! (Lie)': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_1_bi'
-				end
+				'Only recently your loneliness and your natural tendency for peeping resulted in calamity: you took a peek at the girls locker room at school. They were so beautiful, well most of them anyways. You got so horny watching them get undressed and then taking a shower you couldn''t help it, you don''t know what came over you. You pulled out your dick and started to masturbate, trying to stay out of sight, but apparently you made too much noise and when two girls come to investigate, they caught you and started screamig. You tried to run, but were caught and taken the head master who called your uncle and told him what you had done. Since then the girls at school haven''t stopped making cruel jokes about you being a pervert, or apparently how small a cock you supposedly have. You are not small! You are average, right?!'
+				'Everyone you knew quickly turned on you and nothing you could say worked to change their minds. You became an outcast and received regular beatings from the other guys.'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_2_name'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_1_straight':
-	*clr & cla
-	csb_bisexual = 0
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/ivancsb.jpg"></center>'
-	'You protest your innocence. It was just a drunken prank, nothing more. You manage to impress upon your uncle the truth, but he is still furious, more at the damage you are causing <i>his</i> reputation than anything else. He gives you an ultimatum: undo the damage you have done by proving your masculinity.'
-	'You have to convince a girl to have sex with you and post pictures by the end of the summer. If you fail, you will be disowned and have to fend for yourself.'
-
-	act 'Continue': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_2_name'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_1_bi':
-	*clr & cla
-	csb_bisexual = 1
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/bisexualcsb.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can''t tell him the truth. You''ve always enjoyed the sight of muscular men just as much as half-naked women.'
-	'But being a gay man, or even a bisexual one, in Russia is a death sentence. You''ve played the part all your life, trying to blend in by pretending to only like girls.'
-	'All it took was one moment of drunken weakness and your carefully constructed facade came crumbling down around you. And given the look on your Uncle Ivan''s face, that mistake will cost you dearly.'
-
-	act 'Continue':
-		*clr & cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/ivancsb.jpg"></center>'
-		'You somehow manage to deceive your uncle. Maybe he believes you, or maybe he just wants to, but he believes that it is only a drunken prank gone wrong. He is still furious, but it is more at the damage you are causing <i>his</i> reputation than anything else.'
-		'He gives you an ultimatum: undo the damage you have done by proving your masculinity. You have to convince a girl to have sex with you and post pictures by the end of the summer. If you fail, you will be disowned and have to fend for yourself.'
-
-		act 'Continue': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_2_name'
-	end
-end
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_2_name':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/mockingcsb.jpg"></center>'
-	'Unfortunately your reputation is in tatters. You''ve become the school outcast, no girl will give you the time of day, let alone agree to sleep with you. Out of desperation you turn to the Internet, fruitlessly looking for months before you finally manage to come across a girl from the nearby town of Pavlovsk.'
+	'Now your reputation is in tatters. You''ve become the school outcast, no girl will give you the time of day, let alone agree to sleep with you. Out of horny desperation and loneliness you turn to the Internet, to make friends. While on a forum for a mobile game you happened to meet a girl from the nearby town of Pavlovsk. You both liked the game and quickly hit it off and started talking almost every day.'
 
 	act 'Her name is ...':
 		$pcs_firstname = 'Svetlana'
@@ -107,9 +71,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_3':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/start7csb.jpg"></center>'
-	'Her name is <<$pcs_firstname>> "<<$pcs_nickname>>" <<$pcs_lastname>>. She was born on the same day as you. She has no friends in her home town, a result of not being a particularly outgoing or beautiful girl.'
-	'She enthusiastically responds to your messages, eager to finally have someone to talk to. You can''t believe your luck; this might be your saving grace.'
-	'You spend the next few weeks messaging back and forth. <<$pcs_nickname>> appears to crave your attention, telling you all about her life as well as her likes and dislikes.'
+	'Her name is <<$pcs_firstname>> "<<$pcs_nickname>>" <<$pcs_lastname>>. She was born on the same day as you. You don''t know why she seems to like you, maybe she is like you without many friends. You can''t believe your luck; this might be your saving grace.'
+	'You spend the next few weeks messaging back and forth. <<$pcs_nickname>> tells you all about her life as well as her likes and dislikes.'
 
 	act 'Continue': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_4'
 
@@ -145,6 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_4':
 	'She has a sister named Anya who is two years older than her. Anya chose to live at home instead of going to college, working at the local grocery in the day and partying at night.'
 	'<<$pcs_nickname>> has a half-brother Kolka, who is a year younger than her and really into football.'
 	'Her mother''s sister, Aunt Luda, lives on the top floor of the same building as her. Her stepfather''s best friend is called Uncle Misha, who lives across the hall. Her mother''s old friend Sergey Shulgin lives on the floor above them, and <<$pcs_nickname>>''s old childhood friend Vasily is his son.'
+	*nl
 	'Her grandparents live in a nearby village, where she occasionally spends a weekend.'
 	'You listen to her complaining about her extended family and about how she and Vasily drifted apart, comforting her as best you can. Yet you can''t help but feel a little jealous at how many caring relatives she has, given that your only relation is a great uncle who is about to kick you onto the streets for the sake of his own reputation.'
 	'You do the best you can to repress any resentment towards <<$pcs_nickname>> about how little she appreciates what she has.'
@@ -166,37 +130,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_5':
 	*clr & cla
 	if $month = 'August': $cbpre_text1 = ' the end of'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/talkingcsb.jpg"></center>'
-	'A couple months pass. You and <<$pcs_nickname>> continue to talk, and you learn even more about her life, from her envy of the confidence of the gopnik Anushka to her secret crush on the athlete Fedor.'
-	'In a short while, <<$pcs_nickname>> develops a massive crush on you, as you are the only boy who has ever paid any attention to her. As <<$cbpre_text1>>summer break approaches, you bring up the idea of meeting up. <<$pcs_nickname>> is excited at the prospect and you agree to meet at the café where her mother works.'
+	'A couple months pass. You and <<$pcs_nickname>> continue to talk, and you learn even more about her life, as <<$cbpre_text1>>summer break approaches, you bring up the idea of meeting up. <<$pcs_nickname>> is excited at the prospect and you agree to meet at the café where her mother works.'
 
 	killvar '$cbpre_text1'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/start6csb.jpg"></center>'
 		'Things at home haven''t been doing so well during this time.'
-		'Instead of the rumors dying, they have kept escalating over time. You''ve had to plan your routes home from school to avoid spots where you will be cornered and beaten. More than once you''ve gotten garbage thrown at you, and your uncle has become furious from the snide comments made about him by his coworkers.'
-		'You were quickly kicked out of any groups you used to spent time with, ending up with no friends. You find yourself hiding in your room most days, messaging <<$pcs_nickname>>. You live for the hope that after you meet up with <<$pcs_nickname>> everything will go back to normal. Just a few more days...'
-
+		'Instead of the rumors dying, they have kept escalating over time. You''ve had to plan your routes home from school to avoid spots where you will be cornered and beaten. You spend quite some time with chatting with her, and when the summer break comes and you finally get out of school you wonder whether you can finally meet your chat buddy -and maybe make her your girl...'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/brokenwindowcsb.jpg"></center>'
-			'The morning before you are set to meet up with <<$pcs_nickname>>, someone throws a brick through your window. This proves to be the last straw for your uncle, who tosses you out then and there. You barely manage to tell him about the impending meeting, prompting him to give you one last chance, "Either you come back with photos, or you won''t come back at all."'
-
-			act 'Continue':
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/leavingcsb.jpg"></center>'
+			'The morning you have agreed to meet her, you pack up condoms and some spare cash into a backpack, heading off to the train station in the hopes of getting a girl friend or at least getting laid.'
+			'On the train ride to Pavlovsk, you get a message from <<$pcs_nickname>>. Her parents have taken her to spend time with her grandparents in Gaduyinko. She is unable to get out of the trip, since her mother has been upset at how she has been spending so much time on her phone and not with her family.'
+			'With no other choice, you buy a second ticket to meet her at Gaduyinko.'
+			act 'Travel to Gaduyinko':
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/leavingcsb.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pack up condoms and some spare cash into a backpack, heading off to the train station to get laid.'
-				'On the train ride to Pavlovsk, you get a message from <<$pcs_nickname>>. Her parents have taken her to spend time with her grandparents in Gaduyinko. She is unable to get out of the trip, since her mother has been upset at how she has been spending so much time on her phone and not with her family.'
-				'With no other choice, you buy a second ticket to meet her at Gaduyinko. This is your last shot to regain your old life; you can''t let this chance slip through your fingers.'
-
-				act 'Travel to Gaduyinko':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg"></center>'
-					'You get off the train next to a small road in the middle of nowhere. A dirt road leads to a small village made up of rickety wooden houses and even more ruined ones. Unsure of which house is <<$pcs_nickname>>''s grandparent''s, you pull out your phone to text her that you have arrived.'
-					'A few minutes later, an excited teenage girl comes rushing down one of the dirt roads. You double-check a picture of <<$pcs_nickname>> on your phone, as this is the first time you have seen her with your own eyes.'
-
-					act 'Take a look at her picture': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_6_looks'
-				end
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg"></center>'
+				'You get off the train next to a small road in the middle of nowhere. A dirt road leads to a small village made up of rickety wooden houses and even more ruined ones. Unsure of which house is <<$pcs_nickname>>''s grandparent''s, you pull out your phone to text her that you have arrived.'
+				'A few minutes later, an excited teenage girl comes rushing down one of the dirt roads. You double-check a picture of <<$pcs_nickname>> on your phone, as this is the first time you have seen her with your own eyes.'
+				act 'Take a look at her picture': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_6_looks'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -206,7 +159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_6_looks':
 	*clr & cla
 	if player_avatar = 1:
 		'<center><img HEIGHT = 478 src="images/avatar.jpg"></center>'
-		'She looks exactly like in the picture she send you.'
+		'She looks exactly like in the picture she sent you.'
 		act 'Meet her': gt 'preCSB', 'intro_7'
 	else
 		custom_csb = 1
@@ -219,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_7':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
 	'She''s shorter than you but rather tall for a woman, with a body that is neither too fat nor especially skinny. On her chest rest a pair of decently-sized breasts. Her <<$curly>><<$pcdesc_hairlength>> hair is <<$pcs_haircol>>.'
 	'She has <<$pcs_eyecol>> eye with <<$pcs_lashes>>'+iif(glass > 0, ' hidden behind a pair of cheap glasses.', '.')
-	'She looks like she has spent some time in front of the mirror trying to pretty herself up, and her clothes are very clean. Despite that, she still looks rather average. Like she is the type of girl that would be a background character in another person''s life. Little wonder she isn''t very popular.'
+	'She looks like she has spent some time in front of the mirror trying to pretty herself up, and her clothes are very clean. Despite that, she still looks rather average. Like she is the type of girl that would be a background character in another person''s life.'
 
 	act 'Go for a walk':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -234,8 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_7':
 			act 'Take a rest and make a move':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/kisscsb.jpg"></center>'
-				'You see a large stone at the ruins and you and <<$pcs_nickname>> sit down. You start thinking to yourself, this could be your chance a simple kiss on the cheek would be enough to get your life back in order.'
-				'You turn to look at her face, she looks back. Yes, you can do this now where is your phone...'
+				'You see a large stone at the ruins and you and <<$pcs_nickname>> sit down. Being this close to a girl has given you a hardon, you pull out your shirt and do your best to hide it. Then she turns and looks at you and you feel this is your moment, you lean in to kiss her when suddenly...'
 
 				act 'What''s that sound?':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -490,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_9':
 																'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/hospitalroomcsb.jpg"></center>'
 																'You aren''t sure what to think.'
 																'On the one hand, you''ve lost your manhood forever. You''ll have to deal with skirts and periods and makeup and babies and all other sorts of girly things.'
-																'On the other hand, you''ve been granted a clean slate. No more beatings, no threats of becoming homeless, and you are gaining the family you never had. Plus, you''re going to be able to spy on girls in the locker rooms.'+iif(csb_bisexual = 1, ' And now nobody will look twice at you for kissing a man.', ' ')
+																'On the other hand, you''ve been granted a clean slate. No more beatings, no threats of becoming homeless, and you are gaining the family you never had. Plus, you''re going to be able to spy on girls in the locker rooms with out girls screaming this time.'
 																'Whining about the situation isn''t going to change it, so you resolve to deal with it one day at a time, living your new life as <<$pcs_firstname>> "<<$pcs_nickname>>" <<$pcs_lastname>>.'
 
 																act 'Continue':
@@ -565,13 +517,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_start':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/csb/checkingoutguycsb.jpg"></center>'
 		'Over the next week, you slowly became accustomed to your new life. You aren''t used to being a girl just yet, but you''ve come to think of yourself as <<$pcs_nickname>> instead of Peter, and <<$pcs_nickname>>''s family as your own.'
 		'There were a few incidents where you acted in some decidedly non-feminine ways. Luckily Tatiana''s alibi has proved helpful here as well, covering your mistakes.'
-		if csb_bisexual = 0:
-			'You''ve noticed some other mental changes apart from just thinking of yourself as <<$pcs_firstname>>. Perhaps it is a result of your new gender, but with your new body has come an attraction towards men. You are a little unsettled by these changes, but you can''t feel repulsed by these new desires any more than you could have been repulsed for finding girls attractive before.'
-			'The first time you saw a man''s penis was a mind-opening experience, awakening unfamiliar feelings. Luckily it seems that you''ve retained your attraction towards women, making your changing sexuality easier to deal with. So far, you haven''t had the time to really explore a woman''s pleasure.'
-		else
-			'You''ve noticed some other mental changes apart from just thinking of yourself as <<$pcs_firstname>>. While you were always attracted to men before, your new gender has changed the nature of that attraction. The first time that you saw a man''s penis brought a new need to be conquered, to be the one who gets fucked instead of the one who fucks.'
-			'While this type of desire isn''t completely unfamiliar, it is now far more dominant than before. So far, you haven''t had the time to really explore a woman''s pleasure.'
-		end
+		*nl
+		'You''ve noticed some other mental changes apart from just thinking of yourself as <<$pcs_firstname>>. Perhaps it is a result of your new gender, but with your new body has come an attraction towards men. You are a little unsettled by these changes, but you can''t feel repulsed by these new desires any more than you could have been repulsed for finding girls attractive before.'
+		'The first time you saw a man''s penis was a mind-opening experience, awakening unfamiliar feelings. Luckily it seems that you''ve retained your attraction towards women, making your changing sexuality easier to deal with. So far, you haven''t had the time to really explore a woman''s pleasure.'
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla