glife.qproj

@@ -498,6 +498,7 @@
 		<Location name="NikoDreams"/>
 		<Location name="NikoPayback"/>
 		<Location name="NikoSlut"/>
+		<Location name="NikoWhore"/>
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="Anushka">
 		<Location name="anushka"/>

locations/AleksandraGo.qsrc

@@ -4,22 +4,22 @@ if npc_QW['A231'] = 1:
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you, "Are you ready to head to my house? Once I finish changing, we''ll head to the library."'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you, "Are you ready to head to my house? Once I finish changing we''ll go to the library."'
+	'You nod your head and say, "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'pre_library' & minut += 15
 elseif npc_QW['A231'] = 3:
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
 	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you, "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'You nod your head and say, "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'study_confront' & minut += 15
 elseif npc_QW['A231'] = 5:
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
 	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you in a hesitant tone, "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'secret_confront' & minut += 15
 elseif npc_QW['A231'] > 5:
 	npc_rel[$static_num] += 5
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ elseif npc_QW['A231'] > 5:
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she smiles and says, "Hey <<pcs_nickname>>, there you are."'
-	'Once you finally meet up with each other, she leans in an gives you a brief kiss on the lips. Once you break off the kiss, she asks "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'As you walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she smiles and says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, there you are."'
+	'Once you finally reach her, she leans in an gives you a brief kiss on the lips. You reluctantly break off the kiss and she asks, "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
+	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'bedroom' & minut += 15
 end
 

locations/AleksandraHome.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,110 @@ gs 'stat'
 if $args[0] = 'pre_library':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed and folder	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/alexHome/living_room.jpg"></center>'
-	'When you finally arrive at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home, you take a moment to admire the decour.  It''s rather plain, but quite clean.'
+	'When you finally arrive at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home you take a moment to admire the decour.  It''s rather plainly furnished and decorated, but it''s quite clean.'
+	'<<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> turns to you and says, "I''m going to head to my room to change. Please make your self at home in the meantime."'
+	'"No problem, I will just wait here on the sofa," you reply.'
+	act 'Wait for <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>':
+		*clr & cla
+		minut += 8
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
+		'After about 5 or so minutes, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally returns from her room. She has ditched her school uniform for a crop top and denim skirt which is a stark contrast to what she normally wears.'
+		'"Sorry about the outfit. I really need to do laundry and I didn''t have many options available. It''s so warm today that I needed to wear something that''s cooler than our uniform. Shall we head to the library now," <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> asks.'
+		'Caught a little off guard by her outfit it takes you a couple of seconds to collect your thoughts.  You eventually do and reply, "Sure, let''s go."'
+		act 'Go to the library': gt 'AleksandraHome', 'library' & minut += 10
+	end	
+end
+if $args[0] = 'library':
+	$loc = 'gdkbibl'
+	$location_type = 'public_indoors'
+	$menu_loc = 'gdkbibl'
+	$menu_arg = ''
+	gs 'stat'
+	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
+	'You arrive at the library and you can see <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s face light up. It becomes very obvious that this is her favorite place to be. You walk through the stacks of books with her occasionally pulling out a book that she thinks would be good for you to read.'
+	'Being rather indecisive you just can''t make up your mind and keep answering her suggestions with a maybe. Eventually, <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> starts to get a little annoyed at you, but continues on, none the less, with her suggestions.'
+	act 'Continue looking':
+		cla
+		minut += 20
+		'After about 20 minutes of searching, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally pulls a romance novel off the shelf that captures your interest. You agree that this is the book you want and start heading towards the desk to check it out of the library.'
+		act 'Check out the romance novel':
+			cla
+			minut += 5
+			w_book += 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			'You finish checking out the novel and start heading towards the exit. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> mentions that she has to use the bathroom before heading home and you to go as well.'
+			act 'Go to the bathroom':
+				minut += 5
+				$metka = 'womens'
+				$loc = 'gdktoilet'
+				$metkaM = 'womens'
+				$locM = 'gdktoilet'
+				$menu_loc = 'gdktoilet'
+				$menu_arg = 'womens'
+				$location_type = 'bathroom'
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Women''s Room</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/bathroom_women.jpg"></center>'
+				'You both arrive at the bathroom and briefly split up into your separate stalls to take care of your business. You didn''t have to go that bad, so you finish first then exit the stall to begin washing your hands.'
+				'While you''re washing your hands you hear a screech come from <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>''s stall. Thinking that there could be something wrong you knock on the door. You ask her if everything is alright. She opens the door then points to a hole in the wall.'
+				'"Some guy stuck his dick through that hole and asks if there was someone that could give him a good time."'
+				act 'Look back at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> <<$npc_lastname[$static_num]>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/skirt-bulge.jpg"></center>'
+					npc_QW['A231'] = 2
+					'When you look back at <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> to confirm that she should ignore the glory hole and you realize that she hadn''t finished putting her skirt back on. As a result you think you see a dick sticking out of the bottom of the skirt.'
+					'Caught completely off guard, you quickly look away without saying anything. You turn to the glory hole. You yell through it calling the guy on the other side a pervert and to grow up. You both exit the bathroom and start getting ready to leave.'
+					act 'Say goodbye':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 10
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
+						'You both stand near the door to leave the community center after leaving the bathroom. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says, "Thanks for coming to check on me when I screamed. You''re a really good friend <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'"No problem <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>, you would do the same for me right," you ask.'
+						if week = 5: 
+							$day_temp = 'Monday'
+						else
+							$day_temp = 'tomorrow'
+						end
+						'She replies, "Definitely. I''m going to walk home now. I''ll see you in school <<$day_temp>> <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'"See you <<$day_temp>> <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>."'
+						killvar $day_temp
+						act 'Stay at the Commuity Center': gt 'gdk'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+--- AleksandraHome ---------------------------------!!npc_QW['A231'] = -1: you outed alex to the school 
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 0: initial
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 1: library invite
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 2: accidentally saw cock
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 3: confront alex
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 4: confirmed trans
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 5: talk trans
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 6: relationship started
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 7: gave blowjob
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 8: had sex
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 9: had anal sex
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 10: pregnant by alex
+
+$location_type = 'indoors'
+menu_off = 1
+gs 'stat'
+
+if $args[0] = 'pre_library':
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed and folder	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/alexHome/living_room.jpg"></center>'
+	'When you finally arrive at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home you take a moment to admire the decour.  It''s rather plainly furnished and decorated, but it''s quite clean.'
 	'<<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> turns to you and says "I''m going to head to my room to change. Please make your self at home in the meantime."'
 	'"No problem, I will just wait here on the sofa" you reply.'
 	act 'Wait for <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>':
@@ -27,9 +130,9 @@ if $args[0] = 'pre_library':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
-		'After about 5 or so minutes, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally returns from her room. She has ditched her school uniform for a crop top and denim skirt, a stark contrast to what she normally wears.'
-		'"Sorry about the outfit. I really need to do laundry and I didn''t have many options available. It''s so warm today that I needed to wear something cooler than our uniform. Shall we head to the library now?" <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says.'
-		'Caught a little off guard by her outfit, it takes you a couple of seconds to collect your thoughts.  You eventually do and reply "Sure, let''s go."'
+		'After about 5 or so minutes, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally returns from her room. She has ditched her school uniform for a crop top and denim skirt which is a stark contrast to what she normally wears.'
+		'"Sorry about the outfit. I really need to do laundry and I didn''t have many options available. It''s so warm today that I needed to wear something cooler than our uniform. Shall we head to the library now," <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> asks.'
+		'Caught a little off guard by her outfit it takes you a couple of seconds to collect your thoughts.  You eventually do and reply, "Sure, let''s go."'
 		act 'Go to the library': gt 'AleksandraHome', 'library' & minut += 10
 	end	
 end
@@ -42,8 +145,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'library':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
-	'You arrive at the library and you can see <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s face light up. It becomes very obvious that this is her favorite place to be. You walk through the stacks, with her occasionally pulling out a book that she thinks would be good.'
-	'Being rather indecisive, you can''t make up your mind and keep answering with a maybe. Eventually <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> starts to get a little annoyed, but continues on none the less with her suggestions.'
+	'You arrive at the library and you can see <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s face light up. It becomes very obvious that this is her favorite place to be. You walk through the stacks with her occasionally pulling out a book that she thinks would be good for you to read.'
+	'Being rather indecisive you just can''t make up your mind and keep answering her suggestions with a maybe. Eventually <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> starts to get a little annoyed, but continues on none the less with her suggestions.'
 	act 'Continue looking':
 		cla
 		minut += 20
@@ -53,7 +156,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'library':
 			minut += 5
 			w_book += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You finish checking out the novel and start heading towards the exit. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> mentions that she has to use the bathroom before heading home, and you say that you might as well go as well.'
+			'You finish checking out the novel and start heading towards the exit. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> mentions that she has to use the bathroom before heading home and you say that you might as well go as well.'
 			act 'Go to the bathroom':
 				minut += 5
 				$metka = 'womens'
@@ -67,30 +170,30 @@ if $args[0] = 'library':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Women''s Room</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/bathroom_women.jpg"></center>'
-				'You both arrive at the bathroom and briefly split up into your separate stalls to take care of your business. You didn''t have to go that bad, so you finish first and exit the stall to begin washing your hands.'
-				'While you''re washing your hands, you hear a screech come from <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>''s stall. Thinking that there could be something wrong, you knock on the door and ask her if everything is alright. She opens the door and points to a hole in the wall.'
+				'You both arrive at the bathroom and briefly split up to go into your separate stalls. You didn''t have to go that bad, so you finish first then exit the stall to begin washing your hands.'
+				'While you''re washing your hands you hear a screech come from <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>''s stall. Thinking that there could be something wrong you knock on the door and ask her if everything is alright. She opens the door and points to a hole in the wall.'
 				'"Some guy stuck his dick through that hole and asked if there was someone here that could give him a good time."'
 				act 'Look back at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> <<$npc_lastname[$static_num]>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/skirt-bulge.jpg"></center>'
 					npc_QW['A231'] = 2
-					'When you look back at <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> to confirm that she should ignore the glory hole, you realize that she hadn''t finished putting her skirt back on. As a result, you think you see a dick sticking out of the bottom of the skirt.'
-					'Caught completely off guard, you quickly look away without saying anything. You turn to the glory hole and yell through it, calling the guy on the other side a pervert and to grow up. You then both exit the bathroom and start getting ready to leave.'
+					'When you look back at <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> to confirm that she should ignore the glory hole you realize that she hadn''t finished putting her skirt back on. As a result you think you see a dick sticking out of the bottom of the skirt.'
+					'Caught completely off guard you quickly look away without saying anything. You turn to the glory hole and yell through it. You end up calling the guy on the other side a pervert and for him to grow up. You then both exit the bathroom then start getting ready to leave the library.'
 					act 'Say goodbye':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
-						'You both stand near the door to leave the community center after leaving the bathroom. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says "Thanks for coming to check on me when I screamed. You''re a really good friend <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						'"No problem <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>, you would do the same for me right?" you reply.'
+						'You both stand near the door to leave the community center after leaving the bathroom. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says, "Thanks for coming to check on me when I screamed. You''re a really good friend <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'"No problem <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>, you would do the same for me right," you ask.'
 						if week = 5: 
 							$day_temp = 'Monday'
 						else
 							$day_temp = 'tomorrow'
 						end
-						'"Definitely. I''m going to start walking home now. I''ll see you in school <<$day_temp>> <<$pcs_nickname>>." she replies'
+						'"Definitely. I''m going to start walking home now. I''ll see you in school <<$day_temp>> <<$pcs_nickname>>," she answers'
 						'"See you <<$day_temp>> <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>."'
 						killvar $day_temp
 						act 'Stay at the Commuity Center': gt 'gdk'

locations/AnalPR.qsrc

@@ -1,184 +1,183 @@
-# AnalPR
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '1':
-	$metka = $ARGS[0]
-	$loc = $CURLOC
-    $location_type = 'event'
-	menu_off = 1
-
-	*clr & cla
-	prosti = 0
-	money += ProsMoney*100
-	gs'stat'
-	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
-
-	if pcs_ass < dick:
-		$analsex = 'Your anus stretches painfully while he fills your ass with his shaft, and you wince and beg him to take it easy for a little while. Fortunately, he listens. Once he feels he gave you enough time to adapt, he begins to move his hips. Slowly at first, but his thrusts accelerate more and more as he gets closer to his orgasm.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-
-	if pcs_ass >= dick:
-		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
-		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member, and it actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his length in. Your anus clasps around the base of his cock from time to time, and the man begins to thrust his hips against yours enthusiastically when he notices you can take it.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal30.jpg"></center>'
-	'You immediately feel the man''s hands on your ass cheeks when you get on your hands and knees in the back seat. The man confidently guides his condom-covered cock to your sphincter, and slowly thrusts all of his <<dick>> centimeters inside you.'
-	'<<$analsex>>'
-	'After a few minutes of fucking your ass, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against yours. He pulls out of you and takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
-	'The man ties a knot in the condom and tosses it out of the window carelessly.'
-	spafinloc = 3
-	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	gs 'cum_manage'
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '2':
-	$metka = $ARGS[0]
-	$loc = $CURLOC
-    $location_type = 'event'
-	menu_off = 1
-	
-	*clr & cla
-	prosti = 0
-	gs'stat'
-	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
-
-	if pcs_ass < dick:
-		$analsex = 'You feel a sharp pain and wince when the man pushes the tip of his <<dick>> centimeter member past your sphincter, and continues to work most of his length inside you. Fortunately, he listens when you beg him to go slow.<br>The guy holds still for a moment so your ass can get used to how far it''s being stretched out. After a little while you don''t think it''s going to get any better, and you tell the man he can start to fuck you with a forced, fake smile on your face.<br>He''s still careful at first, but soon forgets about your suffering and accelerates more and more. The man groans loudly while he hammers his cock inside your ass, ignoring your crying and mewling underneath him.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-	if pcs_ass >= dick:
-		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
-		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member, and it actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his length in. Your anus clasps around the base of his cock from time to time, and the man begins to thrust his hips against yours enthusiastically when he notices you can take it.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/mis/cowl<<rand(1, 6)>>.jpg"></center>'
-
-	'As soon as you lie down on the hood of the car, the man parts your legs and eagerly presses the tip of his cock against your anus.'
-	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'stat'
-	if klismaday ! daystart:
-		act 'Continue':gt'AnalPR','3'
-	else
-		money += 2000
-
-		cumanalRand = RAND(0,2)
-		if cumanalRand = 0:
-			spafinloc = 4
-			gs 'cum_manage'
-
-			'Suddenly the man groans loudly, and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man while he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. When he''s done covering your buttocks with his seed, he lets out a satisfied sigh and gives you your money.'
-			
-			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-		elseif cumanalRand = 1:
-			spafinloc = 7
-			gs 'cum_manage'
-
-			'Suddenly the man groans loudly, and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man while he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. Then the bastard suddenly aims his cock at your clothes, and shoots his load all over them!<br>You silently curse him, but force yourself to keep smiling as he lets out a satisfied sigh and gives you your money.'
-			
-			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-		elseif cumanalRand = 2:
-			spafinloc = 3
-			gs 'cum_manage'
-
-			'Suddenly the man groans loudly, and he holds still with his cock deep inside you. Then he very slowly pulls out, and a trickle of his sperm slowly runs out of your slightly gaping ass.'
-			'He admires his work for a moment, before giving the money he owes you with a satisfied smile on his face.'
-			
-			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-		end
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-		killvar 'cumanalRand'
-	end
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '3':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'When the man stops, you think it''s because he came. Instead, you hear swearing.'
-	'"What the fuck!? What kind of dirty whore are you, this is disgusting!" he yells.'
-	'When you turn around, you see the problem: his dick is covered in shit! You should really give yourself an enema first, if you want to sell your ass like this...'
-	'The man shouts angrily: "Get lost, whore... you''re lucky I''m letting you leave without beating you up! You can forget about your money!"'
-
-	act 'Leave quietly':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt'AnalPR','4'
-	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt'AnalPR','5'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '4':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	money += ProsMoney * 100
-	pcs_mood -= 30
-	pcs_health -= pcs_health/5
-	pcs_throat += 1
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Hey, I did what you wanted! You owe m-" you begin, but he doesn''t let you finish. The man angrily punches you in the stomach, making you double over in pain.'
-	'"Fine! You''ll get your money... but you will correct your mistake, whore!" he snarls angrily.'
-	'He kneels down and thrusts his smelly cock all the way into your mouth, and says with a mean grin: "Start sucking, slut. It''s not coming out until it''s completely clean!"'
-	'The taste and stench are terrible, and you really have to fight the urge to not vomit. You barely manage, partially because you''re afraid of what he would do otherwise...'
-	'A few minutes later, long after you licked and sucked his cock clean, the man is still fucking your throat violently. Then finally, he groans and cums inside your mouth.'
-	'He scoffs at you when he pulls away, while you roll to your stomach and dry heave a few times. That was disgusting!'
-	'He carelessly throws the money he owes you onto the ground and drives off, without saying another word.'
-	spafinloc = 12
-	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'deepthroat', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	gs 'cum_manage'
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '5':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	pcs_throat += 1
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You understand perfectly why he''s upset... that wasn''t very smart of you. You''ll have to think of a solution fast!'
-	'"I''m sorry, sir! Please allow me to make it up to you..." you tell him, while you drop to your knees obediently. This is going to be unpleasant, but you have to do something to keep him happy!'
-	'The man watches in disgust as you close your lips around his dirty cock. The taste and smell is awful! He''s still upset, but you can see his anger slowly fade away when you lick his dirty cock clean. It''s fully erect again by now, and you can tell he''s still very horny despite your mishap.'
-	'He then says: "Good enough. Lie down in the grass."'
-	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Let him fuck you':gt'AnalPR','6'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '6':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	pcs_vag = pcs_vag + 1
-	money += ProsMoney*110
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/car/sexcar20.jpg"></center>'
-	'You lie down obediently, giving the man a humble look as he takes place between your legs. He quickly put a condom on, not taking any more chances with you. You still have that awful taste in your mouth, but do your best to focus on giving the man pleasure.'
-	'The man drives his cock deep inside you and begins to fuck your pussy using long, firm strokes. He groans every time his hips slap against yours, and the intensity with which he fucks you makes you cry out as well.'
-	'After a few minutes, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against yours. He pulls out of you and takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
-	'While you lay on the grass, recovering from all the things you just had to do to not lose your customer, he theatrically throws a number of bills onto your body one by one. He''s smiling again, and is clearly in a good mood. He even added a little extra!'
-	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	gs 'cum_manage'
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-end
-
---- AnalPR ---------------------------------
-
+# AnalPR
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '1':
+	$metka = $ARGS[0]
+	$loc = $CURLOC
+    $location_type = 'event'
+	menu_off = 1
+
+	*clr & cla
+	prosti = 0
+	money += ProsMoney*100
+	gs'stat'
+	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
+
+	if pcs_ass < dick:
+		$analsex = 'Your anus stretches painfully as he fills your ass with his meaty shaft. You wince and beg him to take it easy for a little while. Fortunately, he listens to your request. You feel your anus muscles relax which signals that he can go much faster. He goes slow at first then slowly gains momentum as he pushes closer to his orgasm.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+
+	if pcs_ass >= dick:
+		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
+		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member. It actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his full length in. Your anus grips his cock from time to time in response to your building orgasm. The man begins to thrust his hips against your ass enthusiastically when he notices you are enjoying your ass being reamed.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal30.jpg"></center>'
+	'You immediately feel the man''s hands on your ass cheeks when you get on your hands and knees in the back seat. The man confidently guides his condom-covered cock to your sphincter and slowly thrusts all of his <<dick>> centimeters inside you.'
+	'<<$analsex>>'
+	'After a few minutes of fucking your ass, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against your ass. He pulls out of you then takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
+	'The man ties a knot at the open end of the condom to carelessyly toss it out of the window.'
+	spafinloc = 3
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'cum_manage'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '2':
+	$metka = $ARGS[0]
+	$loc = $CURLOC
+    $location_type = 'event'
+	menu_off = 1
+	
+	*clr & cla
+	prosti = 0
+	gs'stat'
+	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
+
+	if pcs_ass < dick:
+		$analsex = 'You feel a sharp pain and wince when the man pushes the tip of his <<dick>> centimeter member past your sphincter. He continues to work most of his length inside you. Fortunately, he listens when you beg him to go slow.<br>The guy holds still for a moment so your ass can get used to how far it''s being stretched out. After a little while, you don''t think it''s going to get any better, so you tell the man he can start to fuck you with a forced, fake smile on your face.<br>He''s still careful at first, but soon forgets about your suffering and accelerates more and more. The man groans loudly while he hammers his cock inside your ass. He ignores your crying and mewling coming from underneath him.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+	if pcs_ass >= dick:
+		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
+		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member. It actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his length in. Your anus grips the full length of his cock from time to time in response to your moaning. He begins to thrust his hips against your ass enthusiastically when he notices you are enjoying being fucked in the ass.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/mis/cowl<<rand(1, 6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+
+	'As soon as you lie down on the hood of the car, the man parts your legs and eagerly presses the tip of his cock against your anus.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'stat'
+	if klismaday ! daystart:
+		act 'Continue':gt'AnalPR','3'
+	else
+		money += 2000
+
+		cumanalRand = RAND(0,2)
+		if cumanalRand = 0:
+			spafinloc = 4
+			gs 'cum_manage'
+
+			'Suddenly the man groans loudly and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man as he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. When he''s done covering your buttocks with his seed he lets out a satisfied sigh and gives you your money.'
+			
+			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+		elseif cumanalRand = 1:
+			spafinloc = 7
+			gs 'cum_manage'
+
+			'Suddenly the man groans loudly and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man while he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. Then the bastard suddenly aims his cock at your clothes to shoot his load all over them!<br>You silently curse him, but force yourself to keep smiling as he lets out a satisfied sigh and places your money next to you.'
+			
+			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+		elseif cumanalRand = 2:
+			spafinloc = 3
+			gs 'cum_manage'
+			'Suddenly the man groans loudly and he holds still with his cock deep inside you. He very slowly pulls out which results in a trickle of his sperm to slowly run out of your slightly gaping ass.'
+			'He admires his work for a moment before giving the money he owes you with a satisfied smile on his face.'
+			
+			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+		end
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		killvar 'cumanalRand'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '3':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'When the man stops you think it''s because he came, instead, you hear swearing.'
+	'"What the fuck!? What kind of dirty whore are you? This is disgusting!" he yells.'
+	'When you turn around you see the problem. His dick is covered in shit! You should have really given yourself an enema first if you want to sell your ass like this...'
+	'The man shouts angrily, "Get lost you whore... you''re lucky I''m letting you leave without beating you up! You can forget about your money!"'
+
+	act 'Leave quietly':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt'AnalPR','4'
+	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt'AnalPR','5'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '4':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	money += ProsMoney * 100
+	pcs_mood -= 30
+	pcs_health -= pcs_health/5
+	pcs_throat += 1
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Hey, I did what you wanted! You owe m-," you begin to say, but he doesn''t let you finish. The man angrily punches you in the stomach which makes you double over in pain.'
+	'"Fine! You''ll get your money... but you will correct your mistake you whore," he snarls angrily.'
+	'He kneels down then thrusts his smelly cock all the way into your mouth. He says with a mean grin, "Start sucking slut. It''s not coming out until it''s completely clean!"'
+	'The taste and stench are terrible. You really have to fight the urge to not vomit. You barely manage partially because you''re afraid of what he would do otherwise...'
+	'A few minutes later, long after you licked and sucked his cock clean the man is still fucking your throat violently. He finally groans and cums inside your mouth.'
+	'He scoffs at you when he pulls away as you roll to your stomach and dry heave a few times. That was disgusting!'
+	'He carelessly throws the money he owes you onto the ground then drives off without saying another word.'
+	spafinloc = 12
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'deepthroat', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'cum_manage'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '5':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	pcs_throat += 1
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr1.jpg"></center>'
+	'You understand perfectly why he''s upset... that wasn''t very smart of you. You''ll have to think of a solution fast!'
+	'"I''m sorry sir! Please allow me to make it up to you...," you tell him as you drop to your knees obediently. This is going to be unpleasant, but you have to do something to keep him happy!'
+	'The man watches in disgust as you close your lips around his dirty cock. The taste and smell is awful! He''s still upset, but you can see his anger slowly fade away when you lick his dirty cock clean. It''s fully erect again by now and you can tell he''s still very horny despite your mishap.'
+	'He then says, "Good enough. Lie down in the grass."'
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Let him fuck you':gt'AnalPR','6'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '6':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	pcs_vag = pcs_vag + 1
+	money += ProsMoney*110
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/car/sexcar20.jpg"></center>'
+	'You lie down obediently while giving the man a humble look as he takes his place between your legs. He quickly put a condom on not taking any more chances with you. You still have that awful taste in your mouth, but do your best to focus on giving the man pleasure.'
+	'The man drives his cock deep inside you and begins to fuck your pussy using long, firm strokes. He groans every time his hips slap against your buttocks and the intensity with which he fucks you makes you cry out as well.'
+	'After a few minutes, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against your body. He pulls out of you and takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
+	'While you lay on the grass recovering from all the things you just had to do to not lose your customer. He theatrically throws a number of bills onto your body one by one. He''s smiling again and is clearly in a good mood. He''s even added a little extra!'
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'cum_manage'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+end
+
+--- AnalPR ---------------------------------
+

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movie 3':
 	pcs_mood += 20
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/seat2.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/cinema/kino_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Fedor continue to watch the movie until the credits eventually roll and then most people in the theater start to leave and you and Fedor wait for most of the people to leave while chatting about your favorite part on the movie then Fedor gets up and throws out the popcorn bags and cups.'
 	
 	act 'Finish date': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movie 4'

locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Vladimir <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/father.jpg"></center>'
-		'You enter the kitchen to see Your stepfather and Kolka laughing at a joke that you can''t quite hear. They both stop laughing as you enter. Anya offers you a chair which you sit on, as Anya sits down next to you. You look around in relief, <font color=#FF00FF>That whole thing was just a dream. Oh it feels so good to be back home.</font> You hear something bumping against the kitchen door.' 
+		'You enter the kitchen to see Your stepfather and Kolka laughing at a joke that you can''t quite hear. They both stop laughing as you enter. Anya offers you a chair which you sit on as Anya sits down next to you. You look around in relief, <font color=#FF00FF>That whole thing was just a dream. Oh it feels so good to be back home.</font> You hear something bumping against the kitchen door.' 
 		
 		act 'Turn to see what it is':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/ra8.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina, and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!...Don''t drop her!....Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
+							'You can faintly feel something entering your vagina and can feel your tears leaking down your cheeks. You can faintly hear some soft voices in the distance. "Hey watch her head!...Don''t drop her!....Come on get that door open!" A few seconds later, you hear someone whispering in your ear. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. This is your place now. You didn''t think that you can keep that precious body to yourself, did you?"'
 
 							act 'Turn around':
 								*clr & cla
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'								
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum10.mp4"></video></center>'								
-									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves, as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright?....She will be fine. She just needs some more rest....She''s moving. Do you think she is?..."'
+									'You suddenly hear Yurik groan as he begins pumping his cum inside of your pussy before walking away while saying to Niko, "What a worthless whore. Couldn''t even rock her hips a bit. If I wanted to fuck a blow up doll, I would have kept fucking her mother." He then leaves as you start hearing the soft voices again, but they sound closer. "Is she going to be alright?....She will be fine. She just needs some more rest....She''s moving. Do you think she is?..."'
 									
 									act '...':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Aftermath'
 								end	
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods':
 	VKSmiley = 3
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/woods/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can feel grass on your face which you quickly brush away before looking around, and noticing that you are in the middle of the woods with a mist that surrounds you. <font color=#FF00FF>What''s going on? Why am I here? How did I get here? Where am I?</font> You stand up then look around to try to get your bearings when you begin hearing music along with the sounds of laughing in the far distance. <font color=#FF00FF>Where is this music coming from? Was that a person laughing? Maybe they can help me.</font> you begin heading in that direction when you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine. <font color=#FF00FF>Something about that laughter is...unnerving.</font>'
+	'You can feel grass on your face which you quickly brush away before looking around and noticing that you are in the middle of the woods with a mist that surrounds you. <font color=#FF00FF>What''s going on? Why am I here? How did I get here? Where am I?</font> You stand up then look around to try to get your bearings when you begin hearing music along with the sounds of laughing in the far distance. <font color=#FF00FF>Where is this music coming from? Was that a person laughing? Maybe they can help me.</font> you begin heading in that direction when you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine. <font color=#FF00FF>Something about that laughter is...unnerving.</font>'
 	*nl
 	'You can hear someone laughing, far away.'
 
@@ -239,12 +239,12 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods 7':
 	*clr & cla
-	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee.mp3', 50
+	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee.mp3', 40
 	VKWoods = 7
 	VKSmiley -= 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/woods/7.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color=#FF00FF>Will I be trapped here forever? Oh wait, what is that?</font> You can see a pair of train tracks ahead of you, and you can hear the music getting louder, as you approach the tracks.'
+	'<font color=#FF00FF>Will I be trapped here forever? Oh wait, what is that?</font> You can see a pair of train tracks ahead of you and you can hear the music getting louder as you approach the tracks.'
 	if VKSmiley = 1:
 		'You can hear laughing close by.'
 		PLAY 'sound/happyhome/Smiley.mp3', 100
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods 8':
 	*clr & cla
-	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee.mp3', 100
+	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee.mp3', 60
 	VKWoods = 8
 	VKSmiley -= 1
 	gs'stat'
@@ -297,11 +297,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods Home':
 	*clr & cla
-	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee.mp3', 100
+	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee.mp3', 80
 	if VKHappyHome = 0:VKHappyHome = 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Happy Home">></font></h4></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/house/happyhome.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/mansion/happyhome.jpg"></center>'
 	if VKTeeHee = 0:
 		'You finally approach the end of the forest when you see a derelict house. As you walk toward the house, you can can see; what appears to be a woman standing in the middle of the path, leading to the house while crying. <font color=#FF00FF>She must be stranded here like me. Maybe I can help her.</font> you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine before seeing a strange looking <a href="exec:gt ''NikoDreams'', ''TeeHee''">cat</a> on a tree stump, licking its paw.'
 	else
@@ -324,11 +324,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'TeeHee':
 	end
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/residents/teehee.jpg"></center>'
 	if VKTeeHee = 0:
-		'You approach the cat and it turns to you with a creepy grin, as it says, "TeeHee who is thee?" You recoil in shock before replying, "You can talk?" The cat replies, "Only if you want me too, TeeHee." You respond, "Um what do you want exactly?" The cat replies, "What do I want? You approached me TeeHee." You respond, "You''re right. My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>. What is yours?" The cat replies, "My name is TeeHee and I am so happy to meet thee."' 
+		'You approach the cat and it turns to you with a creepy grin as it says, "TeeHee who is thee?" You recoil in shock before replying, "You can talk?" The cat replies, "Only if you want me too, TeeHee." You respond, "Um what do you want exactly?" The cat replies, "What do I want? You approached me TeeHee." You respond, "You''re right. My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>. What is yours?" The cat replies, "My name is TeeHee and I am so happy to meet thee."' 
 		*nl
 		'You pet TeeHee''s head, causing her to begin purring before saying, "This is the end of the path for now. Come with me to return to your own path TeeHee." You reply, "But that woman might need my help." TeeHee frowns as she responds, "She doesn''t need you for reasons you may think. You really should come with me, not WeePee."'
 	else
-		'We meet again <<$pcs_firstname>>. Have you come to re-join your own path, or do you wish to stay, and face WeePee''s wrath?'
+		'We meet again <<$pcs_firstname>>. Have you come to re-join your own path, or do you wish to stay and face WeePee''s wrath?'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Accept TeeHee''s offer': VKTeeHee = 1 & VKWoods = -1 & VKSmiley = 3 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Aftermath 2'
@@ -342,18 +342,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Smiley 1':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Smiley">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/residents/smiley2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you are walking through the forest you hear loud laughing behind you then suddenly feel something rubbing across your throat, causing a stream of blood to begin pouring out of your neck. You let out a scream as your energy fades, and the ground rushes toward you...'
+	'As you are walking through the forest you hear loud laughing behind you then suddenly feel something rubbing across your throat, causing a stream of blood to begin pouring out of your neck. You let out a scream as your energy fades and the ground rushes toward you...'
 
 	act 'Rest in peace': VKSmiley = 3 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Aftermath 2'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] =  'WeePee 1':
 	*clr & cla
+	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee.mp3', 0
 	PLAY 'sound/happyhome/WeePee2.mp3', 100
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"WeePee">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/residents/weepee.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach the crying woman, she instantly turns around then lunges toward you, shoving her hand into your chest, and pulling out your heart, as she she stares into your eyes, watching your life slowly drain away...'
+	'As you approach the crying woman, she instantly turns around then lunges toward you, shoving her hand into your chest and pulling out your heart as she stares into your eyes, watching your life slowly drain away...'
 
 	act 'Rest in peace': VKSmiley = 3 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Aftermath 2'
 end	
@@ -364,8 +365,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods Hide':
 	if VKSmiley = 1:
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Smiley">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/residents/smiley.jpg"></center>'
-		'You quickly duck behind a tree just as a horrific looking man, wielding a hammer, and wearing clown makeup, comes out of the mist. He begins laughing loudly as he walks past the tree that you are hiding behind. He doesn''t seem to notice you, as he then walks back into the mist.'
-		VKSmiley = rand(2,3)
+		'You quickly duck behind a tree just as a horrific looking man, wielding a bloody battle axe and wearing clown makeup, comes out of the mist. He begins laughing loudly as he walks past the tree that you are hiding behind. He doesn''t seem to notice you as he then walks back into the mist.'
+		VKSmiley = rand(3,4)
 		PLAY 'sound/happyhome/Smiley.mp3', 100
 	else
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
@@ -383,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00>Viktoria "Vicky" Meynold</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance..for us?" Vicky giggles, as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold, and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" Vicky replies, "After what happened at school, we were bored, so we decided to have you dance for us." You tilt your head. "Dance..for us?" Vicky giggles as she points to her right. You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. What are you waiting for?" Natalia adds, "Don''t worry, I threw away all your clothes. Whores don''t need clothes." You look down and notice that you are naked. Katja suddenly slams the bed frame. "Enough messing around! DANCE WHORE!"'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/Niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
 	
@@ -391,13 +392,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/cam/Cam2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You quickly stand up then begin dancing. <font color=#FF00FF>I need to keep dancing because ...Umm...Why am I dancing?</font> Vicky reaches forward then shoves her fingers inside of your vagina while Katja sticks her finger in your ass. Natalia walks up to you then begins squeezing your breasts. Vicky then says, "And they thought that Sonia was a whore." Katja giggles, as she responds, "That''s just silly. <<$pcs_firstname>> is the only whore here." Natalia replies, "I agree, I don''t even know why she thought that she could hide it." <font color=#FF00FF>Why are they being so mean to me? and why can''t I stop dancing?</font> Vicky gives your ass a firm smack, as she says, "Alright, we kept the boys waiting long enough!"'
+		'You quickly stand up then begin dancing. <font color=#FF00FF>I need to keep dancing because ...Umm...Why am I dancing?</font> Vicky reaches forward then shoves her fingers inside of your vagina while Katja sticks her finger in your ass. Natalia walks up to you then begins squeezing your breasts. Vicky then says, "And they thought that Sonia was a whore." Katja giggles as she responds, "That''s just silly. <<$pcs_firstname>> is the only whore here." Natalia replies, "I agree, I don''t even know why she thought that she could hide it." <font color=#FF00FF>Why are they being so mean to me? and why can''t I stop dancing?</font> Vicky gives your ass a firm smack as she says, "Alright, we kept the boys waiting long enough!"'
 
 		act 'Boys?':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/exposed1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Vicky pulls you toward the door which opens on it''s own, and you end up in the school hallway with all the boys hollering. "Hey everyone! The whore is here!" The boys all charge you and begin rubbing on your body while making lude comments,'
+			'Vicky pulls you toward the door which opens on it''s own and you end up in the school hallway with all the boys hollering. "Hey everyone! The whore is here!" The boys all charge you and begin rubbing on your body while making lude comments,'
 			'Artem: "Here is the whore again! <<$pcs_firstname>> doesn''t even care about trying to hide it."'
 			'Petka: "I know right? She is such a worthless whore. I almost don''t even want her anymore."'
 			'Radomir: "I know right? Her pussy is probably all stretched out by now. It''s like ground zero."'
@@ -422,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/hall1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Lesko then pulls you up on top of him, and you begin riding his dick while tears stream down your face. <font color=#FF00FF>Why is this happening? Why are they all laughing at me? Please someone make this stop!</font>'
+						'Lesko then pulls you up on top of him and you begin riding his dick while tears stream down your face. <font color=#FF00FF>Why is this happening? Why are they all laughing at me? Please someone make this stop!</font>'
 
 						act 'Continue riding Lesko':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -435,14 +436,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Friends':
 								gs'stat'					
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Anya <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/progulka.jpg"></center>'	
-								'Suddenly Anya grabs you by your hair then leads you to the door, as she says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> Mom needs to speak with you."'
+								'Suddenly Anya grabs you by your hair then leads you to the door as she says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> Mom needs to speak with you."'
 						
 								act 'Walk through the door':	
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost'+rand(4,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-									'You enter the room, recognizing it as your apartment. Your mother is standing in front of you with a sneer on her face. "<<$pcs_firstname>> You let those boys get you prenant? I can''t believe you!" Anya adds, "Not only that but she has also been eating my pussy." Your mother''s eyes widen, "SHE WHAT?" Kolka speaks up too. "She also had sex with me, and is the mother of my child." Your mother is seething with rage, as she grabs onto a knife then drives it into your stomach, causing a large stream of cum to leak out.' 
+									'You enter the room, recognizing it as your apartment. Your mother is standing in front of you with a sneer on her face. "<<$pcs_firstname>> You let those boys get you prenant? I can''t believe you!" Anya adds, "Not only that but she has also been eating my pussy." Your mother''s eyes widen, "SHE WHAT?" Kolka speaks up too. "She also had sex with me and is the mother of my child." Your mother is seething with rage as she grabs onto a knife then drives it into your stomach, causing a large stream of cum to leak out.' 
 
 									act 'Fall':	
 										*clr & cla
@@ -466,7 +467,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Classroom Dream':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/rest.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can feel yourself getting getting tired, so you lay your head down on your desk to rest, as you wait for the school period to end. After a few seconds, you hear, "Who''s that, sleeping in my class?" You immediately sit up, pretending that you weren''t laying down, as you continue listening to the teacher teach the lesson, "Always remember to double check the problem, so that you can be confident with your solution." Now let''s move on to the next lesson... How to treat a whore. For this lesson I will need a volunteer. Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, come up in front of the class."' 
+	'You can feel yourself getting getting tired, so you lay your head down on your desk to rest as you wait for the school period to end. After a few seconds, you hear, "Who''s that, sleeping in my class?" You immediately sit up, pretending that you weren''t laying down as you continue listening to the teacher teach the lesson, "Always remember to double check the problem, so that you can be confident with your solution." Now let''s move on to the next lesson... How to treat a whore. For this lesson I will need a volunteer. Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, come up in front of the class."' 
 
 	act 'Who me?':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -479,25 +480,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Classroom Dream':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/stand.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you reach the front of the class you feel your clothes falling off, you quickly try to grab them, but they dissolve in your hands. You try covering your body, but then the teacher shouts, "STOP COVERING YOURSELF YOUNG LADY! Whores should always keep their fuckholes on display." You can feel your body trembling, as you finally approach the front of the class. The teacher says, "Now this is what you do to a whore. Notice her pussy here? This is the best place to fuck, but don''t get carried away, or she could end up pregnant with a whore baby." He then motions you to come toward him.'		
+			'As you reach the front of the class you feel your clothes falling off, you quickly try to grab them, but they dissolve in your hands. You try covering your body, but then the teacher shouts, "STOP COVERING YOURSELF YOUNG LADY! Whores should always keep their fuckholes on display." You can feel your body trembling as you finally approach the front of the class. The teacher says, "Now this is what you do to a whore. Notice her pussy here? This is the best place to fuck, but don''t get carried away, or she could end up pregnant with a whore baby." He then motions you to come toward him.'		
 
 			act 'Move closer':	
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/blowjob1.gif"></center>'
-				'As soon as you get close the teacher grabs you then pushes you onto your knees. He pushes his penis against your lips, and says, "Open up, for your reward." You open your mouth, allowing his penis to enter. You begin sucking his dick eagerly, for what feels like a few minutes before he grabs your waist then lifts you up, dropping you on top of his desk.' 
+				'As soon as you get close the teacher grabs you then pushes you onto your knees. He pushes his penis against your lips and says, "Open up, for your reward." You open your mouth, allowing his penis to enter. You begin sucking his dick eagerly, for what feels like a few minutes before he grabs your waist then lifts you up, dropping you on top of his desk.' 
 
 				act 'See what he does':	
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'				
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/sex.jpg"></center>'
-					'He then pushes you over then rams his dick inside of you, and begins thrusting. All you can think about if the humiliation of being fucked by your teacher, in front of your class. <font color=#FF00FF>Why is this happening. Why me? Will I never have a normal life again? Will I always be...</font> You suddenly hear a soft voice whispering in your ear, "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, are you okay? Come on, get up..."'
+					'He then pushes you over then rams his dick inside of you and begins thrusting. All you can think about if the humiliation of being fucked by your teacher, in front of your class. <font color=#FF00FF>Why is this happening. Why me? Will I never have a normal life again? Will I always be...</font> You suddenly hear a soft voice whispering in your ear, "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, are you okay? Come on, get up..."'
 
 					act 'Continue':	
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/leave.jpg"></center>'
-						'You open your eyes then see all of the students getting out of their chairs and leaving the class while chatting with each other. You feel a hand on your shoulder shaking you, so you quickly turn to see Natalia with a concerned look on her face. "Are you alright <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You take a second to collect your thoughts before responding, "I don''t know why I keep having these terrible nightmares." Natalia rubs your back, as she responds, "Things must be so hard for you. I''m so sorry." Not wanting to worry Natalia, you give her a fake smile then say, "They''re just dreams, I''ll be fine."' 
+						'You open your eyes then see all of the students getting out of their chairs and leaving the class while chatting with each other. You feel a hand on your shoulder shaking you, so you quickly turn to see Natalia with a concerned look on her face. "Are you alright <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You take a second to collect your thoughts before responding, "I don''t know why I keep having these terrible nightmares." Natalia rubs your back as she responds, "Things must be so hard for you. I''m so sorry." Not wanting to worry Natalia, you give her a fake smile then say, "They''re just dreams, I''ll be fine."' 
 					
 						act 'Smile at Natalia':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -521,7 +522,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Puppeteer':
 	VKPuppetDream = 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/rest.jpg"></center>'
-	'You can feel the day drag on so slowly, so you rest your head on the desk trying your best to focus on anything but todays lesson, the light occasionally creeps in between your arms so you keep re-adjusting until you can no longer feel any light creeping in, causing you to feel at peace, as you slumber through the lesson.'
+	'You can feel the day drag on so slowly, so you rest your head on the desk trying your best to focus on anything but todays lesson, the light occasionally creeps in between your arms so you keep re-adjusting until you can no longer feel any light creeping in, causing you to feel at peace as you slumber through the lesson.'
 
 	act 'Wake up':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -583,7 +584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Puppeteer':
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-								'You quickly jump up screaming to then notice that you are still in class. The whole class is staring at you in shock. Mr. Tsarev asks; in a concerned voice, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> what''s wrong?" You stand, completely speechless for a few seconds before hearing the bell sound. You use this time to quickly pack up your things then head for the door, as some of your classmates whisper to each other.'
+								'You quickly jump up screaming to then notice that you are still in class. The whole class is staring at you in shock. Mr. Tsarev asks; in a concerned voice, "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> what''s wrong?" You stand, completely speechless for a few seconds before hearing the bell sound. You use this time to quickly pack up your things then head for the door as some of your classmates whisper to each other.'
 								*nl
 								'Arkadi: "Whoa, what is her problem?"'
 								'Niko: "Maybe <<$pcs_nickname>> is on the pipe or something?"'

locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Intro':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You give him a harsh stare as you shout, "Beat it punk! I''m not looking for a boyfriend!" He remains completely unfazed, as he responds, "I''m sorry that I bothered you." Niko never loses his smile, as he turns around and walks away. You can''t help but think to yourself. "Why was he so calm? What is it with that guy?" Before shaking your head and walking away.'	
+		'You give him a harsh stare as you shout, "Beat it punk! I''m not looking for a boyfriend!" He remains completely unfazed as he responds, "I''m sorry that I bothered you." Niko never loses his smile as he turns around and walks away. You can''t help but think to yourself. "Why was he so calm? What is it with that guy?" Before shaking your head and walking away.'	
 		
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end	
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Intro':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit down next to Niko, and you both spend the next few minutes, getting to know each other.'
+			'You sit down next to Niko and you both spend the next few minutes, getting to know each other.'
 			
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end	
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Intro':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You give him a harsh stare as you shout, "Beat it punk! I''m not looking for a boyfriend!" He remains completely unfazed, as he responds, "I''m sorry that I bothered you." Niko never loses his smile as he turns around and walks away. You can''t help but think to yourself. <font color=#FF00FF>Why was he so calm? What is it with that guy?</font> Before shaking your head and walking away.'	
+		'You give him a harsh stare as you shout, "Beat it punk! I''m not looking for a boyfriend!" He remains completely unfazed as he responds, "I''m sorry that I bothered you." Niko never loses his smile as he turns around and walks away. You can''t help but think to yourself. <font color=#FF00FF>Why was he so calm? What is it with that guy?</font> Before shaking your head and walking away.'	
 		
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end	
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 	end	
 	'<<$npc_notes[''A189'']>>'
 	if grupTipe[61] = 600:'Niko should not be available at this stage. If you are seeing this in game then please report this on the <font color=#FF00FF>Bug reports</font> thread or to <font color=#E400FF>Violet Kitten</font> on <font color="blue">Discord</font>.'
-	if grupTipe[61] = 4:'Niko is a Gopnik, and spends a lot of time doing what Gopniks usually do: be loud, and drink beer.'
+	if grupTipe[61] = 4:'Niko is a Gopnik and spends a lot of time doing what Gopniks usually do: be loud and drink beer.'
 	if npc_rel['A189'] < 20:'You and Niko don''t get along at all.'
 	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A189'] < 40:'You and Niko don''t get along very well.'
 	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A189'] < 60:'You and Niko have a normal relationship.'
@@ -104,13 +104,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 80:'You and Niko have a great relationship.'	
 	*nl
 	if NikoPayback = 2 and NikoPayed ! daystart:
-		'You approach Niko, and he turns to you with a puzzled look on his face. "Hmm, how did I not see you earlier? I thought that you might have been sick today, but here you are, so now to business. How will you be paying today?"'
+		'You approach Niko and he turns to you with a puzzled look on his face. "Hmm, how did I not see you earlier? I thought that you might have been sick today, but here you are, so now to business. How will you be paying today?"'
 	elseif NikoPayback = 2:	
 		'You approach Niko, he looks at you with a blank stare, "You''re all payed up today, so what brings you here?"'
 	elseif NikoPayback = 3:	
-		'You approach Niko, and he turns to you then says, "Leave me alone. You are nothing but trouble." You giggle as you walk away.'
+		'You approach Niko and he turns to you then says, "Leave me alone. You are nothing but trouble." You giggle as you walk away.'
 	else
-		'You approach Niko, and his eyes light up. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m so glad to see you again. Please take a seat and chat with me."'
+		'You approach Niko and his eyes light up. "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m so glad to see you again. Please take a seat and chat with me."'
 	end
 	
 	if NikoLuv > -4 and NikoPayback = 0:
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
 			if npc_rel['A189'] < 20:'You and Niko don''t get along at all.'
-			if npc_rel['A189'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A189'] < 40:'You sit down next to Niko, and you both spend the next few minutes, getting to know each other.'
+			if npc_rel['A189'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A189'] < 40:'You sit down next to Niko and you both spend the next few minutes, getting to know each other.'
 			if npc_rel['A189'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A189'] < 60:'You and Niko have a normal relationship.'
 			if npc_rel['A189'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A189'] < 80:'You and Niko have a good relationship.'
 			if npc_rel['A189'] >= 80:'You and Niko have a great relationship.'
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/fuckoff1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You extend your middle finger at Niko, as you walk past him. "Get lost loser." Niko turns his head as he responds. "Am I not worthy?" You continue to walk past him until you reach the hallway.'
+			'You extend your middle finger at Niko as you walk past him. "Get lost loser." Niko turns his head as he responds. "Am I not worthy?" You continue to walk past him until you reach the hallway.'
 			
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end	
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You cast your eyes down, as you reply, "You can use my body, as payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." Niko grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the less used restroom.'	
+			'You cast your eyes down as you reply, "You can use my body as payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." Niko grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the less used restroom.'	
 
 			act 'Head to the restroom with Niko':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 3'
 		end	
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up to Niko, and place your hand on his crotch, "I know that I already payed you in money, but I want to give you another special payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "Well, there''s no way, I''d say no to that. Let''s get going." Niko gives your ass a firm smack, as you both head toward the less used restroom.'	
+			'You walk up to Niko and place your hand on his crotch, "I know that I already payed you in money, but I want to give you another special payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "Well, there''s no way, I''d say no to that. Let''s get going." Niko gives your ass a firm smack as you both head toward the less used restroom.'	
 
 			act 'Head to the restroom with Niko':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 3'
 		end
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You reply, "I just want to talk. Is that alright?" Niko shrugs, as he replies, "Sounds fine with me, I have some spare time." You, and Niko spend the next few minutes, chatting about various topics.'
+			'You reply, "I just want to talk. Is that alright?" Niko shrugs as he replies, "Sounds fine with me, I have some spare time." You and Niko spend the next few minutes, chatting about various topics.'
 
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end	
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lunch Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sit down next to Niko, "Hello Niko, I remember you telling me something about a special activity that you have planned." Niko grins, as he replies, "I have something special for us today. Are you ready to find out what it is?" You suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine, as he says that. <font color=#FF00FF>Why do I feel so nervous? I can''t shake the feeling that something bad is going to happen.</font>'
+			'You sit down next to Niko, "Hello Niko, I remember you telling me something about a special activity that you have planned." Niko grins as he replies, "I have something special for us today. Are you ready to find out what it is?" You suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine as he says that. <font color=#FF00FF>Why do I feel so nervous? I can''t shake the feeling that something bad is going to happen.</font>'
 			
 			act '<font color=#FF00FF>Go with Niko</font>':
 				if soniaPS = 0:
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date Intro':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you are walking toward the hallway, Niko runs up behind you with a small box in his hand. "<<$pcs_firstname>> I have something for you." He then holds the box in front of you, and slowly opens it, revealing a beautiful purple necklace. "An elegant lady of such beauty, deserves equally stunning jewelry, but I must ask you for a boon in return. I ask only, for permission to take you out on a date after school. What say you?"'
+	'As you are walking toward the hallway, Niko runs up behind you with a small box in his hand. "<<$pcs_firstname>> I have something for you." He then holds the box in front of you and slowly opens it, revealing a beautiful purple necklace. "An elegant lady of such beauty, deserves equally stunning jewelry, but I must ask you for a boon in return. I ask only, for permission to take you out on a date after school. What say you?"'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/jewelry/Necklace1.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date Intro':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You give Niko a warm smile as you take the gift from him. "Thank you Niko, This necklace is so beautiful." Niko looks at you with such loving eyes. "I''m so glad you like it, how about I pick you up after school, and we can both head out together?" You reply, "I might be a bit late so just wait for me at the courtyard, okay?" Niko bows before you. "As you wish m''lady." He then backs away while keeping his head bowed until he turns the corner.'		
+		'You give Niko a warm smile as you take the gift from him. "Thank you Niko, This necklace is so beautiful." Niko looks at you with such loving eyes. "I''m so glad you like it, how about I pick you up after school and we can both head out together?" You reply, "I might be a bit late so just wait for me at the courtyard, okay?" Niko bows before you. "As you wish m''lady." He then backs away while keeping his head bowed until he turns the corner.'		
 
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end	
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date Intro':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/nodate.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m sorry Niko, but I''m not really looking for any kind of relationship right now." Niko gives you a warm smile, as he responds "Don''t worry about it m''lady, I will just wait for the time where you feel yourself ready, for such a venture." You giggle as you respond, "You''re so weird but thanks for understanding. I''ll see you later." You turn around and walk away.'
+			'"I''m sorry Niko, but I''m not really looking for any kind of relationship right now." Niko gives you a warm smile as he responds "Don''t worry about it m''lady, I will just wait for the time where you feel yourself ready, for such a venture." You giggle as you respond, "You''re so weird but thanks for understanding. I''ll see you later." You turn around and walk away.'
 
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/niko1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko, and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I hope that you are ready to have a good time."'
+	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I hope that you are ready to have a good time."'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 1':
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/Dates/Walk1.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I sure am." Niko gives you a warm smile as he responds, "I figured that we could go to an amusement park, out of town. I will pay our way of course, so come on, let''s get going." Niko takes your hand, and walks you to the train station where you both board the train and get seated.'	
+		'"I sure am." Niko gives you a warm smile as he responds, "I figured that we could go to an amusement park, out of town. I will pay our way of course, so come on, let''s get going." Niko takes your hand and walks you to the train station where you both board the train and get seated.'	
 		
 		act 'Go with Niko':gt 'NikoDates', 'Date 1_1'
 	end
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/niko2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko, and he lowers his cigarette before saying, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>> I wanted to tell you that I am sorry, for how I acted yesterday. I just wanted to you leave your shell a bit. You always seem so tense." You reply, "Tense? I guess I could try to lighten up a bit. Maybe." Niko smiles as he responds, "Good enough. So are you ready for a surprise I have for you? We could be out all afternoon."'
+	'You walk up to Niko and he lowers his cigarette before saying, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>> I wanted to tell you that I am sorry, for how I acted yesterday. I just wanted to you leave your shell a bit. You always seem so tense." You reply, "Tense? I guess I could try to lighten up a bit. Maybe." Niko smiles as he responds, "Good enough. So are you ready for a surprise I have for you? We could be out all afternoon."'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/walk4.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I sure am." Niko''s smile widens as he replies, "Great let''s get going." Niko wraps his arm around your waist, as he leads you toward the lake.'	
+		'"I sure am." Niko''s smile widens as he replies, "Great let''s get going." Niko wraps his arm around your waist as he leads you toward the lake.'	
 		
 		act 'Follow Niko''s lead':gt 'NikoDates', 'Date 2'
 	end
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 4':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko, and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Ahhh <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m so glad to see you. Are you up for a nice relaxing day at the beach?"'
+	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Ahhh <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m so glad to see you. Are you up for a nice relaxing day at the beach?"'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'New Life':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Niko smiles, as he responds, "Great now let''s head out." Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder then walks you toward the park.'
+		'Niko smiles as he responds, "Great now let''s head out." Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder then walks you toward the park.'
 		
 		gt 'NikoEv2', 'Park'
 	end	
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Intro':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/brother/upset.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko, and immediately notice that he is passed out. He must have have a lot to drink today.'
+	'You approach Niko and immediately notice that he is passed out. He must have have a lot to drink today.'
 	
 	act 'Walk away':gt 'gdkin'
 end
@@ -497,23 +497,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 	end	
 	'<<$npc_notes[''189'']>>'
 	if grupTipe[A189] = 600:'Niko should not be available at this stage. If you are seeing this in game then please report this on the <font color=#FF00FF>Bug reports</font> thread or to <font color=#E400FF>Violet Kitten</font> on <font color="blue">Discord</font>.'
-	if grupTipe[A189] = 4:'Niko is a Gopnik, and spends a lot of time doing what Gopniks usually do: be loud, and drink beer.'
+	if grupTipe[A189] = 4:'Niko is a Gopnik and spends a lot of time doing what Gopniks usually do: be loud and drink beer.'
 	if npc_rel['A189'] < 20:'You and Niko don''t get along at all.'
-	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A189'] < 40:'You, and Niko don''t get along very well.'
-	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A189'] < 60:'You, and Niko have a normal relationship.'
-	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A189'] < 80:'You, and Niko have a good relationship.'
-	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 80:'You, and Niko have a great relationship.'	
+	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A189'] < 40:'You and Niko don''t get along very well.'
+	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A189'] < 60:'You and Niko have a normal relationship.'
+	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A189'] < 80:'You and Niko have a good relationship.'
+	if npc_rel['A189'] >= 80:'You and Niko have a great relationship.'	
 	*nl	
 	if NikoLuv > -4 and  NikoPayback = 0 and NikoAlko = 0:
-		'You approach Niko, and he gives you a welcoming smile. "Good to see you again. would you like a drink?"'
+		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "Good to see you again. would you like a drink?"'
 	elseif NikoLuv > -4 and  NikoPayback = 0 and NikoAlko >= 2:
-		'You approach Niko, and he gives you a welcoming smile. "You''re looking lovely today, Would you like to dance."'
+		'You approach Niko and he gives you a welcoming smile. "You''re looking lovely today, Would you like to dance."'
 	elseif NikoPayback = 2 and NikoPayed ! daystart:
-		'You approach Niko, and he turns to you with a puzzled look on his face. "Hmm, you didn''t show up to school today, were you sick? Bah, it doesn''t matter, you''re here now, so let''s get down to business. My dick is dry and my wallet lite, which one of those issues, will you be solving today?"'
+		'You approach Niko and he turns to you with a puzzled look on his face. "Hmm, you didn''t show up to school today, were you sick? Bah, it doesn''t matter, you''re here now, so let''s get down to business. My dick is dry and my wallet lite, which one of those issues, will you be solving today?"'
 	elseif NikoPayback = 2:	
-		'You approach Niko, and he looks at you with a blank stare, "You''re all payed up today, so why are you talking to me? Trying to mooch a free drink off me?"'
+		'You approach Niko and he looks at you with a blank stare, "You''re all payed up today, so why are you talking to me? Trying to mooch a free drink off me?"'
 	elseif NikoPayback = 3:	
-		'You approach Niko, and he turns to you then says, "Leave me alone. You are nothing but trouble." You giggle as you walk away.'		
+		'You approach Niko and he turns to you then says, "Leave me alone. You are nothing but trouble." You giggle as you walk away.'		
 	end	
 		
 	if NikoLuv > -4 and  NikoPayback = 0:
@@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 			minut += 10
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'"I would love to." Niko opens up a bottle of alcohol then hands you the bottle, as he gives you a wink. You both spend the next few minutes drinking, and sharing stories.'		
+			'"I would love to." Niko opens up a bottle of alcohol then hands you the bottle as he gives you a wink. You both spend the next few minutes drinking and sharing stories.'		
 			
 			act 'Get up':gt 'gdkin'
 		end	
@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/fuckoff2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lift up your hands then extend your middle fingers on each hand, "I only drink with men, not boys." Niko shakes his head, as he responds. "Aww, you''re no fun." You turn around then walk toward the dance floor.'
+			'You lift up your hands then extend your middle fingers on each hand, "I only drink with men, not boys." Niko shakes his head as he responds. "Aww, you''re no fun." You turn around then walk toward the dance floor.'
 			
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'gdkin'
 		end	
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/disco/Niko.jpg"></center>'
-			'You downcast your eyes, as you reply, "You can use my body, as payment." Niko''s kneels down then begins rubbing your legs, as he replies,, "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." Niko grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the mens restroom.'	
+			'You downcast your eyes as you reply, "You can use my body as payment." Niko''s kneels down then begins rubbing your legs as he replies,, "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." Niko grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the mens restroom.'	
 
 			act 'Head to the restroom with Niko':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 3'
 		end	
@@ -598,7 +598,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up to Niko then place your hand on his crotch, "I know that I already payed you in money, but I want to give you another special payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "Well, there''s no way, I''d say no to that. Let''s get going." Niko gives your ass a firm smack, as you both head toward the mens restroom.'	
+			'You walk up to Niko then place your hand on his crotch, "I know that I already payed you in money, but I want to give you another special payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "Well, there''s no way, I''d say no to that. Let''s get going." Niko gives your ass a firm smack as you both head toward the mens restroom.'	
 
 			act 'Head to the restroom with Niko':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 3'
 		end
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You reply, "I just want to talk. Is that alright?" Niko shrugs, as he replies, "Sounds fine with me, I have some spare time, but don''t think that you''re getting any free beer off of me." You, and Niko spend the next few minutes, chatting about various topics.'
+			'You reply, "I just want to talk. Is that alright?" Niko shrugs as he replies, "Sounds fine with me, I have some spare time, but don''t think that you''re getting any free beer off of me." You and Niko spend the next few minutes, chatting about various topics.'
 
 			act 'Finish chatting':gt 'Nikoev', 'Disco Chat'
 		end	
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tell Niko. "I would love to stay, but I need to head home early today, or my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> will freak out." He responds "I know how parents can be, I will always be around, if you ever have a few minutes to spare." You give Niko a warm smile, as you wave goodbye.'
+			'You tell Niko. "I would love to stay, but I need to head home early today, or my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> will freak out." He responds "I know how parents can be, I will always be around, if you ever have a few minutes to spare." You give Niko a warm smile as you wave goodbye.'
 					
 			act 'Step away':gt 'gdkin'
 		end
@@ -677,7 +677,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Breakup':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Niko then gets noticeably angry, as he responds, "After all the time and money I spent on you? You will not leave me! I will get what I deserve!"' 
+		'Niko then gets noticeably angry as he responds, "After all the time and money I spent on you? You will not leave me! I will get what I deserve!"' 
 		
 		act 'Give him what he deserves':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Disco Breakup':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Niko then gets noticeably angry, as he responds, "After all the time and money that I spent on you? You will not leave me! I will get what I deserve!"' 
+		'Niko then gets noticeably angry as he responds, "After all the time and money that I spent on you? You will not leave me! I will get what I deserve!"' 
 		
 		act 'Give him what he deserves':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -730,7 +730,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Disco Breakup 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/brother/aftermath2.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You see Niko on the ground, squirming in pain, and can''t help but feel very satisfied, seeing Niko get what he deserved.'
+	'You see Niko on the ground, squirming in pain and can''t help but feel very satisfied, seeing Niko get what he deserved.'
 
 	act 'Step away':gt 'gdkin'
 end	
@@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Dimka':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/hug1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents, and your talents are not exactly...Unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
+				'You quickly wrap your arms around Niko, holding him tightly as you say, "Thank you so much Nikolai. I never thought that I''d be free from him. You are the best." Niko smiles as he responds, "Seeing you happy is thanks enough." You lower your head as you say, "I hope you don''t think less of me because of the video." Niko replies, "Not at all. We all have talents and your talents are not exactly...Unwanted." You can feel your cheeks getting red as you reply, "I only did that because.." Niko chuckles before saying, "Don''t worry about it, my princess. Shall we get back to discussing our activities for today?"'
 
 				if NikoEv >= 17:
 					act 'Sure thing':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Events'

locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko guides you through the park, as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly, and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of...a...Crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
+	'Niko guides you through the park as he says, "So I know this guy that can completely fix your reputation, but when I spoke to him, he was asking for a lot of money to do it, so I figured, if we work together then we could make the money to pay him for helping us." You ask, "Who is this friend exactly and can he really fix my reputation?" Niko responds, "Well, he is kind of...a...Crime lord, but don''t worry. As long as we pay up then we have nothing to fear. He can get anything he wants. This guy is fearsome, but always true to his word."'
 	*nl
 	'You ask, "But how much does he want exactly?" Niko replies, "Uh don''t worry about that. I will handle that when the time comes. Just know that it is a lot!" You shake your head, "How the hell will we be able to pay "A lot" to this man?"'
 
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/shady.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I figured out a great way to make money fast, just bear with me." You sigh then say, "Alright what do I need to do exactly?" Niko replies, "Just follow me." Niko leads you through the park then behind the cinema. When you both arrive then you see two men looking at you with a lustful gaze while rubbing on their crotches. Niko stops you for a few seconds then says, "Listen <<$pcs_firstname>>, Those guys over there are going to help us by giving us money, but they kind of, need you to do something first." You look back at Niko with a frown, "Do I have to have sex with them?" Niko wraps his arm around your neck, "You only need to suck them off. That''s all."'
 		*nl
-		'You lower your head, as you reply, "I don''t want to please anyone but you Niko." Niko rubs your cheek, as he replies, "You will be pleasing me by doing this. The money you earn will go toward restoring your reputation. After you''re done then you and I could head back to my place, for some "quality time," Doesn''t that sound good?"'
+		'You lower your head as you reply, "I don''t want to please anyone but you Niko." Niko rubs your cheek as he replies, "You will be pleasing me by doing this. The money you earn will go toward restoring your reputation. After you''re done then you and I could head back to my place, for some "quality time," Doesn''t that sound good?"'
 
 		act 'Okay':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -31,14 +31,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You give Niko a forced smile as you reply, "Okay, I''ll do it for you." Niko gives you a warm smile as he responds, "That''s my girl, so beautiful, loving, daring, and smart." You both continue walking toward the two men.' 
+			'You give Niko a forced smile as you reply, "Okay, I''ll do it for you." Niko gives you a warm smile as he responds, "That''s my girl, so beautiful, loving, daring and smart." You both continue walking toward the two men.' 
 	
 			act 'Follow Niko''s lead':	
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/shady.jpg"></center>'	
-				'As you both arrive, one of the men says, "She looks good." He then reaches out to touch you, but his hand is pushed away by Niko. "You need to pay up before you start touching." The guy chuckles, "Of course, of course. Where is my head?" He then nods to the other man, who reaches into his pocket then gives Niko some ruble which Niko counts before nodding to the men then taking a step back, signaling the men to use you. The men begin fondling your breasts, as they kiss your neck. <font color=#FF00FF>This feels so wrong, but Niko needs me to do this. He is counting on me. I must not let him down. I wont let you down Niko.</font>' 
+				'As you both arrive, one of the men says, "She looks good." He then reaches out to touch you, but his hand is pushed away by Niko. "You need to pay up before you start touching." The guy chuckles, "Of course, of course. Where is my head?" He then nods to the other man, who reaches into his pocket then gives Niko some ruble which Niko counts before nodding to the men then taking a step back, signaling the men to use you. The men begin fondling your breasts as they kiss your neck. <font color=#FF00FF>This feels so wrong, but Niko needs me to do this. He is counting on me. I must not let him down. I wont let you down Niko.</font>' 
 				*nl
 				'One of the men takes off your shirt then throws it to the ground. Niko immediately picks it up. One of the men begins pushing you to your knees.'		
 
@@ -46,13 +46,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters\pavlovsk\school\boy\fedor\fedorev2\home\3way/foreplay2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth, as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes, and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, You obediently switch dicks, and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning, as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
+					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, You obediently switch dicks and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
 
 					act 'Continue':	
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'	
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/cum/cumhair/cumhair1.jpg"></center>'
-						'The second man soon groans too then begins covering your hair in his cum. Once both men are done, they look down to you then say, "Wow you are really good, girl." Niko approaches you then says, "Great job Princess, I am very proud of you." One of the guys asks, "Can we have her again sometime?" Niko grins as he replies, "Sure you can, just call me when you have the money ready, and I''ll do the rest." The two guys high five, as they walk away.'
+						'The second man soon groans too then begins covering your hair in his cum. Once both men are done, they look down to you then say, "Wow you are really good, girl." Niko approaches you then says, "Great job Princess, I am very proud of you." One of the guys asks, "Can we have her again sometime?" Niko grins as he replies, "Sure you can, just call me when you have the money ready and I''ll do the rest." The two guys high five as they walk away.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'hair'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5				
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 							gs 'fame'
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/walk1.jpg"></center>'
-							'Niko rubs the back of your head. "Let''s get you back to my place, for your reward." You quickly feel your heart warm up. <font color=#FF00FF>My reward? He is going to reward me? What could it be? I really want to know.</font> You then reply, "Okay, Let''s go." Niko rubs your neck as he responds, "So eager, aren''t we? Good." He then chuckles, as he begins walking you toward his house.'
+							'Niko rubs the back of your head. "Let''s get you back to my place, for your reward." You quickly feel your heart warm up. <font color=#FF00FF>My reward? He is going to reward me? What could it be? I really want to know.</font> You then reply, "Okay, Let''s go." Niko rubs your neck as he responds, "So eager, aren''t we? Good." He then chuckles as he begins walking you toward his house.'
 
 							act 'Follow Niko':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Home Date'
 						end
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home Date':
 	minut += 10
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/bedroom/relaxing1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You arrive at Niko''s house, and Niko guides you inside then brings you his room where he lies down on the bed, for a few seconds before patting the bed, signaling you to join him. You lay down on the bed next to him. Niko rubs on your hips, as he says, "You are such a perfect girl. Do you know that?" You give him a very pleased smile. "Well, the perfect boyfriend deserves no less." You feel a little nervous, not knowing how he will respond, but he quickly does. "Aww, you''re so sweet <<$pcs_nickname>>. How would you like to have some fun?" You eagerly reply, "I would love too." Niko chuckles, as he responds, "Good then get washed up, and we will have some fun." You get up, nod then quickly run to the bathroom to wash up.'
+	'You arrive at Niko''s house and Niko guides you inside then brings you his room where he lies down on the bed, for a few seconds before patting the bed, signaling you to join him. You lay down on the bed next to him. Niko rubs on your hips as he says, "You are such a perfect girl. Do you know that?" You give him a very pleased smile. "Well, the perfect boyfriend deserves no less." You feel a little nervous, not knowing how he will respond, but he quickly does. "Aww, you''re so sweet <<$pcs_nickname>>. How would you like to have some fun?" You eagerly reply, "I would love too." Niko chuckles as he responds, "Good then get washed up and we will have some fun." You get up, nod then quickly run to the bathroom to wash up.'
 
 	act 'Wash up':gt 'NikoDates', 'Quick Wash'
 end
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss3.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Niko grabs you from behind then begins passionately kissing, and licking your neck. You tilt your head back, and give in to Niko''s passionate embrace. Niko begins walking you toward the bed while removing your top. You help Niko undress you, as you both inch closer to the bed. After you are fully undressed then Niko lifts you up and drops you onto the bed. Niko immediately pounces on top of you then begins passionately kissing you, as he rubs his penis against your vagina.'
+		'Niko grabs you from behind then begins passionately kissing and licking your neck. You tilt your head back and give in to Niko''s passionate embrace. Niko begins walking you toward the bed while removing your top. You help Niko undress you as you both inch closer to the bed. After you are fully undressed then Niko lifts you up and drops you onto the bed. Niko immediately pounces on top of you then begins passionately kissing you as he rubs his penis against your vagina.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 		gs'stat'	
 								
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/vag2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko starts pumping you even faster, as he gets more excited. You tilt your head back, enjoying Niko''s hard cock; ramming inside you, His strong arms wrapped around you, His dominance as he rams his dick roughly into your vagina.'
+				'Niko starts pumping you even faster as he gets more excited. You tilt your head back, enjoying Niko''s hard cock; ramming inside you, His strong arms wrapped around you, His dominance as he rams his dick roughly into your vagina.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 				gs'stat'	
 									
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 					minut += 5
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/cum/throat.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'Niko continues quickly thrusting his dick further inside of you until he suddenly pulls out of you then says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> open your mouth!" You obediently open your mouth, as Niko climbs on top of your chest then shoves his dick down your throat before groaning, filling you throat with his warm seed. Niko is having such a powerful orgasm that he doesn''t even notice that you are choking on his dick. <font color=#FF00FF>I''m choking. Should I pull away? No! Niko is so happy right now. I must let him finish. I just want you to be happy Niko.</font> You endure the chocking, as your eyes tear up.' 
+					'Niko continues quickly thrusting his dick further inside of you until he suddenly pulls out of you then says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> open your mouth!" You obediently open your mouth as Niko climbs on top of your chest then shoves his dick down your throat before groaning, filling you throat with his warm seed. Niko is having such a powerful orgasm that he doesn''t even notice that you are choking on his dick. <font color=#FF00FF>I''m choking. Should I pull away? No! Niko is so happy right now. I must let him finish. I just want you to be happy Niko.</font> You endure the chocking as your eyes tear up.' 
 					*nl
 					'You do your best to hold back from gagging, not wanting to interrupt Niko''s orgasm. After Niko is finished, he catches his breath then says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you are simply divine." You take a few seconds to catch you breath before leaning forward to kiss Niko.'	
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Yurik Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/avatars/threaten1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open, as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continues pulling you through the hallway, as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik...Just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
+						'You lean forward to kiss Niko then the door suddenly slams open as Yurik storms into the room. He grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the door. Niko jumps out of the bed then shouts, "Yurik what the fuck? I told you that I would repay you as soon as..." Yurik cuts him off, "Shut it boy! I know better than to trust you. I''m taking my prize now, but don''t worry, I will return her when I''m done." Yurik continues pulling you through the hallway as Niko follows closely behind while constantly trying to get Yurik to back down. "Come on Yurik...Just calm down man." Yurik replies, "I am calm." You then reach a bedroom with a partially open door. Yurik tosses you inside then pushes Niko back before closing the door in his face.'			
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
@@ -154,19 +154,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/deek/deek.jpg"></center>'
-								'You meekly nod, and he says, "Good, you know your place." Yurik lifts you up then drops you on the bed with your head at the foot of the bed then he quickly romoves his pants causing his 19 centimeter penis to spring out. <font color=#FF00FF>Ohh wow. his dick is so big. There is no way that will fit inside me.</font> Yurik approaches your face, as you lay still, in complete shock.'
+								'You meekly nod and he says, "Good, you know your place." Yurik lifts you up then drops you on the bed with your head at the foot of the bed then he quickly romoves his pants causing his 19 centimeter penis to spring out. <font color=#FF00FF>Ohh wow. his dick is so big. There is no way that will fit inside me.</font> Yurik approaches your face as you lay still, in complete shock.'
 
 								act 'See what Yurik does':	
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/throat/bed1.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'Yurik rams his dick into your mouth, forcing it down your throat. The force of his massive penis entering your throat is too much for you to take. You gag helplessly then begin pleading with Yurik. "Please sir, your dick is too big. It wont fit." Yurik grunts before responding, "It will fit just, keep your mouth open, and shut up." Yurik re-aligns his penis with your mouth then shoves it back in. You do your best to relax your throat, knowing that you have no choice, but to let Yurik have his way with you.' 
+									'Yurik rams his dick into your mouth, forcing it down your throat. The force of his massive penis entering your throat is too much for you to take. You gag helplessly then begin pleading with Yurik. "Please sir, your dick is too big. It wont fit." Yurik grunts before responding, "It will fit just, keep your mouth open and shut up." Yurik re-aligns his penis with your mouth then shoves it back in. You do your best to relax your throat, knowing that you have no choice, but to let Yurik have his way with you.' 
 
 									act 'Continue sucking his dick':	
 										*clr & cla
 										gs'stat'									
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/throat/bed2.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'You can feel Yurik''s hand rubbing on your sensitive parts. You close your eyes, trying to think of anything but the pain you feel, as Yurik roughly fucks your throat. You then open your eyes, and try looking around the room, but your vision is all blurry from the tears streaming from your eyes, so you close them again, waiting for this torment to be over.'
+										'You can feel Yurik''s hand rubbing on your sensitive parts. You close your eyes, trying to think of anything but the pain you feel as Yurik roughly fucks your throat. You then open your eyes and try looking around the room, but your vision is all blurry from the tears streaming from your eyes, so you close them again, waiting for this torment to be over.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 										gs'stat'	
 											
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/cum/throat1.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Yurik suddenly grabs firmly onto the back of your head then shoves his penis, as far down your throat as he can while groaning loudly. You can feel a surge of cum shooting down your throat which you have no choice but to swallow. Yurik pulls off of you, as you continue swallow the last of his cum. Yurik begins dressing himself then walks up to you; with tears streaming down your face, and says, "Whenever I am around, you will do whatever I say. Do you understand, girl?" You nod meekly, terrified of what Yurik could do to you. Yurik responds, "Good, i will be seeing you around, and don''t try to avoid me, or that will make me ANGRY." Yurik then gets dressed before grabbing you up by your hair then pulling to toward the door where he opens it up before tossing you into Niko''s arms then closing the door.'
+											'Yurik suddenly grabs firmly onto the back of your head then shoves his penis as far down your throat as he can while groaning loudly. You can feel a surge of cum shooting down your throat which you have no choice but to swallow. Yurik pulls off of you as you continue swallow the last of his cum. Yurik begins dressing himself then walks up to you; with tears streaming down your face and says, "Whenever I am around, you will do whatever I say. Do you understand, girl?" You nod meekly, terrified of what Yurik could do to you. Yurik responds, "Good, i will be seeing you around and don''t try to avoid me, or that will make me ANGRY." Yurik then gets dressed before grabbing you up by your hair then pulling to toward the door where he opens it up before tossing you into Niko''s arms then closing the door.'
 											gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -187,14 +187,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 												gs'stat'
 												'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
-												'You begin coughing erratically, as Niko holds you in his arms, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me that you are okay." Niko begins rubbing on your back gently. You continue coughing for almost a full minute, as Niko wipes away your tears. "I''m so sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>. My brother is such a brutish oaf. I will find a way to protect you from him, I promise." You finally finish coughing then return Niko''s hug, and begin crying in his arms, <font color=#FF00FF>He was so rough with me. I couldn''t stop him. He might do that again to me. Please no. Never again. Please.</font> Niko leads you toward the bathroom where he carefully, splashes some water on your face. He then washes your face before leading you back to his room.'
+												'You begin coughing erratically as Niko holds you in his arms, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me that you are okay." Niko begins rubbing on your back gently. You continue coughing for almost a full minute as Niko wipes away your tears. "I''m so sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>. My brother is such a brutish oaf. I will find a way to protect you from him, I promise." You finally finish coughing then return Niko''s hug and begin crying in his arms, <font color=#FF00FF>He was so rough with me. I couldn''t stop him. He might do that again to me. Please no. Never again. Please.</font> Niko leads you toward the bathroom where he carefully, splashes some water on your face. He then washes your face before leading you back to his room.'
 												
 												act 'Enter Niko''s room':	
 													*clr & cla
 													minut += 10
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/bedroom/laying.jpg"></center>'
-													'As you enter the room, Niko lays you down then climbs into the bed next to you. Niko begins running his fingers through your hair while staring into your eyes. You feel incredibly lightheaded, as your nerves have really drained you of any focused thought. You begin closing your eyes then feel your energy slowly fade away...'
+													'As you enter the room, Niko lays you down then climbs into the bed next to you. Niko begins running his fingers through your hair while staring into your eyes. You feel incredibly lightheaded as your nerves have really drained you of any focused thought. You begin closing your eyes then feel your energy slowly fade away...'
 													
 													act 'Sleep':gt 'NikoDreams', 'Friends'
 												end
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Wake':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open your eyes, and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, <font color=#FF00FF>It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?</font> Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m...I''m fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
+	'You open your eyes and see Niko with a concerned look on his face, he has his hand on your shoulder, shaking you. "<<$pcs_firstname>> are you alright? You looked like you were having an intense dream." You quickly look around the room then take several deep breaths, <font color=#FF00FF>It was a dream. It was only a dream. Oh my. I can''t keep doing this. Why does this keep happening to me? Why me?</font> Niko gives you a kiss on the forehead. "I''m so worried about you. Are you alright?" You nod slowly before saying, "I''m...I''m fine. I just had a nightmare, that''s all."' 
 	*nl
 	'Niko continues kissing your forehead before responding, "I will do everything in my power to protect you. Just stay strong. Okay <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You nod your head again before saying, "Thank you Niko. I always feel safe in your arms." Niko smiles as he wraps his arms around you.'
 
@@ -259,14 +259,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#9b5800><<"Petia Alkaev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/47.jpg"></center>'
-			'As soon, as you enter the locker room, you see Petia Alkaev waiting for you. Niko says, "Here she is." Petia responds, "I heard some things about you <<$pcs_nickname>>. Are they true?" You lower your head then ask, "What have you heard?" Petia replies, "I heard that you are Niko''s whore, and that you do anything Niko tells you too. At least that is what Niko said." You look to Niko, who has a wide smile on his face. Niko nods to you, "No need to be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>, tell him." You lower your head again then say, "Yes it''s true." Niko responds, "What''s true?" with a confident smile on his face.' 
+			'As soon as you enter the locker room, you see Petia Alkaev waiting for you. Niko says, "Here she is." Petia responds, "I heard some things about you <<$pcs_nickname>>. Are they true?" You lower your head then ask, "What have you heard?" Petia replies, "I heard that you are Niko''s whore and that you do anything Niko tells you too. At least that is what Niko said." You look to Niko, who has a wide smile on his face. Niko nods to you, "No need to be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>, tell him." You lower your head again then say, "Yes it''s true." Niko responds, "What''s true?" with a confident smile on his face.' 
 
 			act 'Tell them':	
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'You reply, "I am Niko''s whore." Petia smiles, as he responds, "Good, I always knew that you were a dirty girl. Now let''s do this." In your heart, you know what he wants, but you ask Niko anyway, "What do I need to do?" Niko replies, "Just suck his dick. It should be easy for you." You know that you''ve come too far to go back now, so you approach Petia then drop to your knees in front of him, as he eagerly unbuttons his pants."'
+				'You reply, "I am Niko''s whore." Petia smiles as he responds, "Good, I always knew that you were a dirty girl. Now let''s do this." In your heart, you know what he wants, but you ask Niko anyway, "What do I need to do?" Niko replies, "Just suck his dick. It should be easy for you." You know that you''ve come too far to go back now, so you approach Petia then drop to your knees in front of him as he eagerly unbuttons his pants."'
 
 				act 'Continue':	
 					*clr & cla
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'"You finally open your mouth and wrap your lips around Petia''s dick then begin licking, and sucking it firmly, doing your best to pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. You begin focusing on the softness, and warmth of his Petia''s dick in your mouth. You use your tongue to feel out the shape of his penis, brushing against your tongue, enjoying the loud moans that he lets out. <font color=#FF00FF>I must continue pleasing him. He need me to please him. He needs me.</font> You can feel yourself blushing as you continue sucking his dick more rapidly. You can tell by Petia''s constant squirming, that he is close to cumming.'
+						'"You finally open your mouth and wrap your lips around Petia''s dick then begin licking and sucking it firmly, doing your best to pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. You begin focusing on the softness and warmth of his Petia''s dick in your mouth. You use your tongue to feel out the shape of his penis, brushing against your tongue, enjoying the loud moans that he lets out. <font color=#FF00FF>I must continue pleasing him. He need me to please him. He needs me.</font> You can feel yourself blushing as you continue sucking his dick more rapidly. You can tell by Petia''s constant squirming, that he is close to cumming.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 						gs'stat'	
 									
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum1.11.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'<font color=#FF00FF>Now is my chance. The moment he and I have been waiting for. The time that he cums, for me... Cum for me, Petia. Cum for me!</font> You quicken your pace then feel his penis throbbing in your mouth, as he begins filling your mouth with his seed. You let Petia''s cum fill your mouth, as you push it around with your tongue, enjoying the warmth and texture of his cum, as it slides down your chin. Petia catches his breath before looking down to you, "Wow <<$pcs_firstname>>, Niko wasn''t lying when he said that you were the best at that. We need to do this again sometime."' 
+							'<font color=#FF00FF>Now is my chance. The moment he and I have been waiting for. The time that he cums, for me... Cum for me, Petia. Cum for me!</font> You quicken your pace then feel his penis throbbing in your mouth as he begins filling your mouth with his seed. You let Petia''s cum fill your mouth as you push it around with your tongue, enjoying the warmth and texture of his cum as it slides down your chin. Petia catches his breath before looking down to you, "Wow <<$pcs_firstname>>, Niko wasn''t lying when he said that you were the best at that. We need to do this again sometime."' 
 
 							act 'Turn to Niko':	
 								*clr & cla
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'	
-									'You look up to Niko, who counts the money before saying, "You were outstanding <<$pcs_firstname>>. We will have the money we need, in no time." Niko then kisses you on your forehead before saying, "Do you think that you can give me a quickie before we head back?" You eagerly nod, as you say, "Of course Niko, I''m always happy to please you." You quickly begin unbuttoning his pants then wrap your lips around his dick, licking, and sucking, as best you can, only wishing to please Niko.'	
+									'You look up to Niko, who counts the money before saying, "You were outstanding <<$pcs_firstname>>. We will have the money we need, in no time." Niko then kisses you on your forehead before saying, "Do you think that you can give me a quickie before we head back?" You eagerly nod as you say, "Of course Niko, I''m always happy to please you." You quickly begin unbuttoning his pants then wrap your lips around his dick, licking and sucking as best you can, only wishing to please Niko.'	
 										
 									act 'Suck Niko''s dick':	
 										*clr & cla
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 										gs 'boyStat', 'A189'										
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/Home/bedroom/sex/bj5.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'You can feel your heart all aflutter, as you continue sucking Niko''s dick. <font color=#FF00FF>Nikolai you are the only one I want to please. The only one love. Please realize that everything I do, I do for you. Please let me be the only one to please you. I will never fail you.</font>' 
+										'You can feel your heart all aflutter as you continue sucking Niko''s dick. <font color=#FF00FF>Nikolai you are the only one I want to please. The only one love. Please realize that everything I do, I do for you. Please let me be the only one to please you. I will never fail you.</font>' 
 										gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 										gs'stat'
 										
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'							
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow8.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'You can feel tears running down your cheeks, as you lose yourself in the moment. Niko suddenly begins groaning, as he fills your mouth with his warm seed which you try your best to swallow every drop of, wanting any part of Niko to stay inside you.'
+											'You can feel tears running down your cheeks as you lose yourself in the moment. Niko suddenly begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his warm seed which you try your best to swallow every drop of, wanting any part of Niko to stay inside you.'
 											gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 												gs'stat'
 												'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'	
-												'Niko looks down to you then says, "Oh <<$pcs_firstname>>, you are the most perfect being that could ever exist." Your cheeks are burning red, as you reply, "Thank you Niko, I love you with all my heart, and will always be yours. Forever." Niko leans forward then gives you a long kiss on your forehead before saying, "I am so lucky to have you. Now are you ready to head back?" You happily nod. Niko helps you up to your feet then takes you hand, and walks you out of the locker room, toward the cafeteria.'
+												'Niko looks down to you then says, "Oh <<$pcs_firstname>>, you are the most perfect being that could ever exist." Your cheeks are burning red as you reply, "Thank you Niko, I love you with all my heart and will always be yours. Forever." Niko leans forward then gives you a long kiss on your forehead before saying, "I am so lucky to have you. Now are you ready to head back?" You happily nod. Niko helps you up to your feet then takes you hand and walks you out of the locker room, toward the cafeteria.'
 												
 												act 'Go to the cafeteria':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'lunch'
 											end	
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs, as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko, and he returns the wave, as you walk away.'
+			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko and he returns the wave as you walk away.'
 
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'cafeteria'
 		end
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Vicky Talk':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vickysmile1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You turn around to see Vicky Meynold with a playful look on her face as she says, "You seem to be spending a lot of time with the boys. having fun out there?" You lower your head, feeling ashamed. Vicky approaches you and places both of her hands on your shoulders then says,. "You still with Niko aren''t you?" You keep your head lowered, as you reply, "Yes... I am." Vicky lightly rocks you from side to side. "Maybe this is the path for you. Maybe you are a... uhh... You know."'		
+		'You turn around to see Vicky Meynold with a playful look on her face as she says, "You seem to be spending a lot of time with the boys. having fun out there?" You lower your head, feeling ashamed. Vicky approaches you and places both of her hands on your shoulders then says,. "You still with Niko aren''t you?" You keep your head lowered as you reply, "Yes... I am." Vicky lightly rocks you from side to side. "Maybe this is the path for you. Maybe you are a... uhh... You know."'		
 
 		act 'finish her sentence':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Niko leans forward, and gives you a soft kiss before saying, "You''re always making me so proud of you." You give Niko a warm smile, causing him to give you another more passionate kiss. <font color=#FF00FF>His lips are so soft, and his kiss, so passionate. He really does love me. Oh Niko, keep kissing me. Please.</font>' 
+		'Niko leans forward and gives you a soft kiss before saying, "You''re always making me so proud of you." You give Niko a warm smile, causing him to give you another more passionate kiss. <font color=#FF00FF>His lips are so soft and his kiss, so passionate. He really does love me. Oh Niko, keep kissing me. Please.</font>' 
 		
 		act 'Sure':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#9b5800><<"Petia Alkaev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/47.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you enter the locker room you see Petia waiting for you. You immediately know what he wants, and you turn to Niko then ask, "Do you want me to suck his dick again?" But you say it with a smile. Niko looks at you with a surprised, but pleased look on his face, "You really seem to be getting into this, good, but no, he wants to fuck you this time. Don''t worry, he will pay a lot more this time. so take off your clothes." You obediently nod then remove your clothes. Petia watches you undress while removing his pants and stroking his penis.' 
+				'As you enter the locker room you see Petia waiting for you. You immediately know what he wants and you turn to Niko then ask, "Do you want me to suck his dick again?" But you say it with a smile. Niko looks at you with a surprised, but pleased look on his face, "You really seem to be getting into this, good, but no, he wants to fuck you this time. Don''t worry, he will pay a lot more this time. so take off your clothes." You obediently nod then remove your clothes. Petia watches you undress while removing his pants and stroking his penis.' 
 				*nl
 				'After fully undressing, you walk up to Petia then ask him, "How do you want me?" His jaw is hanging as he freezes for a few moments while scanning you body with his eyes. "SPEAK UP LOSER! TIME IS MONEY!" Niko exclaims. Petia jumps up in shock before replying, "Oh.. Oh.. Oh yes, Over.. By.. Um.. here..Climb on me." He then quickly sits on a bench. You can see the sweat trailing down his face.'
 				
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering you vagina, You feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too, and I gave it to him.</font>'
+						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering you vagina, You feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.</font>'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs'stat'	
 						
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'After Petia leaves, Niko walks up to you then gives you a passionate kiss before saying, "You did great today. We made some good money." You reply, "Thank you for helping me with this Niko, and for not abandoning me." Niko begins rubbing his hands over your body as he replies, "I will always look after my girl. No one will hurt you while I''m around. Now how about we have a little fun?" You let out a moan as Niko begins rubbing your clitoris. You look Niko in the eyes then say, "I''m always ready to please you."' 
+								'After Petia leaves, Niko walks up to you then gives you a passionate kiss before saying, "You did great today. We made some good money." You reply, "Thank you for helping me with this Niko and for not abandoning me." Niko begins rubbing his hands over your body as he replies, "I will always look after my girl. No one will hurt you while I''m around. Now how about we have a little fun?" You let out a moan as Niko begins rubbing your clitoris. You look Niko in the eyes then say, "I''m always ready to please you."' 
 
 								act 'Please Niko':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/mensrape4.mp4"></video></center>'
-										'Niko suddenly grabs your head with both hands then brings your face to his, as he asks, "<<$pcs_firstname>> who do you belong too?" Knowing what Niko wants you to say, you happily reply, "I am yours, Nikolai. I will always belong to you." Niko has a confident grin on his face, as he says, "And what''s your role?" You reply, "To please you, whenever you want, and fuck anyone you desire." Niko nods his head in approval, as he begins greatly increasing his pace. You can feel your body getting so hot when you think about how sexy it is to be dominated by Niko. Niko''s breathing increases, signifying to you that he is close to cumming.'
+										'Niko suddenly grabs your head with both hands then brings your face to his as he asks, "<<$pcs_firstname>> who do you belong too?" Knowing what Niko wants you to say, you happily reply, "I am yours, Nikolai. I will always belong to you." Niko has a confident grin on his face as he says, "And what''s your role?" You reply, "To please you, whenever you want and fuck anyone you desire." Niko nods his head in approval as he begins greatly increasing his pace. You can feel your body getting so hot when you think about how sexy it is to be dominated by Niko. Niko''s breathing increases, signifying to you that he is close to cumming.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 										gs'stat'								
 										
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 											NikoEv = 16
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Feeling so turned on, and blinded by the pleasure you scream out, "Cum inside me Niko! Please cum inside me!" Niko thrust one more time before shaking his head, and saying, "No!" Niko then pulls out of you and begins cumming on your ass.' 
+											'Feeling so turned on and blinded by the pleasure you scream out, "Cum inside me Niko! Please cum inside me!" Niko thrust one more time before shaking his head and saying, "No!" Niko then pulls out of you and begins cumming on your ass.' 
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 											gs'stat'			
 		
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 												*clr & cla
 												gs'stat'											
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/anal.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'Niko spends a few seconds draining his cum onto your ass before taking a few seconds to catch his breath. Niko then turns to you and says, "You were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. So fucking hot." You give Niko a soft kiss before replying, "I''m always happy to please you Niko." Niko gives you a very pleased smile, as he responds, "I really made the right choice in choosing you. That''s for sure. I have some plans for making big money, and I would like you to meet me <font color=#FF00FF>after school</font> where we can discuss it further. Alright I should really head back now." Niko begins buttoning up his pants before leaving the room.'
+												'Niko spends a few seconds draining his cum onto your ass before taking a few seconds to catch his breath. Niko then turns to you and says, "You were amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. So fucking hot." You give Niko a soft kiss before replying, "I''m always happy to please you Niko." Niko gives you a very pleased smile as he responds, "I really made the right choice in choosing you. That''s for sure. I have some plans for making big money and I would like you to meet me <font color=#FF00FF>after school</font> where we can discuss it further. Alright I should really head back now." Niko begins buttoning up his pants before leaving the room.'
 												gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 												gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 												gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -558,14 +558,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Talk':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you are leaving the cafeteria, you bump into Natalia Pavlova, she quickly says, "Oh <<$pcs_firstname>>. How are you doing? I''ve been really worried about you. I asked my mother about how to stop repeated nightmares, and she gave me 2 dissolvable tablets to give you. They are designed to help ease..." You place your hand on Natalia''s shoulder then say, "You don''t need to worry about me. I don''t get the nightmares anymore. I found the source of my nightmares, and faced it head on."' 
+	'As you are leaving the cafeteria, you bump into Natalia Pavlova, she quickly says, "Oh <<$pcs_firstname>>. How are you doing? I''ve been really worried about you. I asked my mother about how to stop repeated nightmares and she gave me 2 dissolvable tablets to give you. They are designed to help ease..." You place your hand on Natalia''s shoulder then say, "You don''t need to worry about me. I don''t get the nightmares anymore. I found the source of my nightmares and faced it head on."' 
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/smile1.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently, as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes, as she says, "I''m...just happy to help." She then waves, as she walk away while looking back at you.'
+		'Natalia''s eyes light up, "Really? That''s great! I was really worried that it would only get worst. Please let me know, if they come back." You rub her arm gently as you reply, "I will. Thank you Natalia. You are very sweet." Natalia blushes as she says, "I''m...just happy to help." She then waves as she walk away while looking back at you.'
 		
 		act 'Continue toward the hallway':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	end
@@ -592,16 +592,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko notices you approach then gives you a warm smile, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have been making many preparations, and I believe that we are ready to go big league with this business, so we have a very busy afternoon ahead of us. Are you ready to start really making money? I will also be giving you a cut of the profits because I wont have my girl going home empty handed after working so hard."'
+	'Niko notices you approach then gives you a warm smile, "Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have been making many preparations and I believe that we are ready to go big league with this business, so we have a very busy afternoon ahead of us. Are you ready to start really making money? I will also be giving you a cut of the profits because I wont have my girl going home empty handed after working so hard."'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/walk1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko wraps his arm around your waist then guides you through the residential district, toward the highway. You both spend a few minutes, chatting about various topics on the way there. When you arrive at the highway, Niko leads you toward a diner with many trucks, and motorcycles parked outside. You both enter the diner, and see a bunch of truckers, and bikers; eating lunch.' 
+		'Niko wraps his arm around your waist then guides you through the residential district, toward the highway. You both spend a few minutes, chatting about various topics on the way there. When you arrive at the highway, Niko leads you toward a diner with many trucks and motorcycles parked outside. You both enter the diner and see a bunch of truckers and bikers; eating lunch.' 
 		*nl
-		'Niko approaches one of the bikers sitting in the corner, and says to the biker, "Riding a bike all day must be tough work, I bet you could use some relief, right about now." The biker stares at Niko with a very angry look on his face. "You''re cruising for a bruising kid." Niko looks puzzled. "So you aren''t interested?"'
+		'Niko approaches one of the bikers sitting in the corner and says to the biker, "Riding a bike all day must be tough work, I bet you could use some relief, right about now." The biker stares at Niko with a very angry look on his face. "You''re cruising for a bruising kid." Niko looks puzzled. "So you aren''t interested?"'
 
 		act 'Continue':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -614,16 +614,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You step forward then wait to see what the biker will do. The biker begins looking you up and down then asks Niko, "Can I touch her a bit? I just want to make sure that she isn''t hiding anything down there." The biker points toward your vagina. Niko chuckles, "Fine, make it quick." The biker begins rubbing on your vagina, for a few seconds before saying, "I''m interested. How much?" Niko responds, "2000 <b>₽</b>" the biker scratches his beard, as he replies, "She better be real good, for that price."' 
+				'You step forward then wait to see what the biker will do. The biker begins looking you up and down then asks Niko, "Can I touch her a bit? I just want to make sure that she isn''t hiding anything down there." The biker points toward your vagina. Niko chuckles, "Fine, make it quick." The biker begins rubbing on your vagina, for a few seconds before saying, "I''m interested. How much?" Niko responds, "2000 <b>₽</b>" the biker scratches his beard as he replies, "She better be real good, for that price."' 
 				*nl
-				'Niko replies, "She certainly is." the biker responds, "So you say, but what guarantee do I have that you are telling the truth? She could be a breathing blow up doll, for all I know." Niko responds, "How about this, For this time only, you can use her now then pay me afterward? Doesn''t that sound fair?" The biker nods, "You have yourself a deal. Come on girl, we''re doing this in the bathroom." The man grabs you by your arm then leads you to the restroom, where he takes off his pants then points to his dick, as he says, "Alright girl, get to work."'
+				'Niko replies, "She certainly is." the biker responds, "So you say, but what guarantee do I have that you are telling the truth? She could be a breathing blow up doll, for all I know." Niko responds, "How about this, For this time only, you can use her now then pay me afterward? Doesn''t that sound fair?" The biker nods, "You have yourself a deal. Come on girl, we''re doing this in the bathroom." The man grabs you by your arm then leads you to the restroom, where he takes off his pants then points to his dick as he says, "Alright girl, get to work."'
 				
 				act 'Suck his dick':	
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/1/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You step in front of him before dropping to your knees then wrapping your lips around his dick. You begin licking, and sucking his dick, doing your best to please him. The man begins moaning loudly. <font color=#FF00FF>This man is enjoying this so much. It must have been a long time, if ever, that this man has received a woman''s touch. I may even be his first. I must do my best to make this his best day ever. He will remember me forever.</font> You increase the pace while feeling him fidgeting. After a few more seconds, the man says, "Oh fuck girrrrrl!" The man then begins squirming, as he sprays his load into your mouth and all over your face, you look up at the biker, and see an adoring look on his face, as he looks down at you.' 
+					'You step in front of him before dropping to your knees then wrapping your lips around his dick. You begin licking and sucking his dick, doing your best to please him. The man begins moaning loudly. <font color=#FF00FF>This man is enjoying this so much. It must have been a long time, if ever, that this man has received a woman''s touch. I may even be his first. I must do my best to make this his best day ever. He will remember me forever.</font> You increase the pace while feeling him fidgeting. After a few more seconds, the man says, "Oh fuck girrrrrl!" The man then begins squirming as he sprays his load into your mouth and all over your face, you look up at the biker and see an adoring look on his face as he looks down at you.' 
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -634,21 +634,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/1/bjcum1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You give him a friendly smile, as the cum leaks from your mouth. The biker says, "You are an amazing girl. You were definitely worth every ruble." You give the tip of the mans penis a kiss before he buttons his pants then gives you a wink before leaving the restroom. You wait for him to leave before spitting out the cum into the sink then shortly follow him out of the restroom.'
+						'You give him a friendly smile as the cum leaks from your mouth. The biker says, "You are an amazing girl. You were definitely worth every ruble." You give the tip of the mans penis a kiss before he buttons his pants then gives you a wink before leaving the restroom. You wait for him to leave before spitting out the cum into the sink then shortly follow him out of the restroom.'
 									
 						act 'Leave the restroom':	
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/npc/1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You see the biker shake hands with Niko then give him the money. Niko counts the money then gives the biker an approving nod before the biker takes his seat again. Niko turns to you, and says, "Good job <<$pcs_nickname>>. We are making some good progre..."' 
+							'You see the biker shake hands with Niko then give him the money. Niko counts the money then gives the biker an approving nod before the biker takes his seat again. Niko turns to you and says, "Good job <<$pcs_nickname>>. We are making some good progre..."' 
 							
 							act 'Turn around':	
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
 								gs'stat'							
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/cum/cumface/blonde/15.jpg"></center>'
-								'You turn to see a nearby trucker examining your face before shouting out, "Is that what I think it is? Hey guys look at this girl. She is walking around with cum leaking off of her face!" You freeze in place. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh shit! I forgot to wash up. How did I forget that? I''m walking around with cum dripping off my chin. How could I forget?</font> the truckers, and bikers in the room surround you then begin talking to each other.'
+								'You turn to see a nearby trucker examining your face before shouting out, "Is that what I think it is? Hey guys look at this girl. She is walking around with cum leaking off of her face!" You freeze in place. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh shit! I forgot to wash up. How did I forget that? I''m walking around with cum dripping off my chin. How could I forget?</font> the truckers and bikers in the room surround you then begin talking to each other.'
 								
 								act 'Listen to them':	
 									*clr & cla
@@ -666,7 +666,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 										'Biker3: I wonder how much she''s chargin''?'
 									end
 									*nl
-									'Niko chuckles, as he replies, "She is my girl, and it will be 2000 <b>₽</b>, per customer." All of the truckers, and bikers begin lining up in front of Niko giving him money, before approaching you. <font color=#FF00FF>Am I about to have sex with all these men? How can I satisfy that many men? I don''t know if I can even handle that.</font> The men begin undressing you, as they roughly finger your holes. You close your eyes, as one of the men pushes you down on your knees, as another shoves his dick into your mouth.'
+									'Niko chuckles as he replies, "She is my girl and it will be 2000 <b>₽</b>, per customer." All of the truckers and bikers begin lining up in front of Niko giving him money, before approaching you. <font color=#FF00FF>Am I about to have sex with all these men? How can I satisfy that many men? I don''t know if I can even handle that.</font> The men begin undressing you as they roughly finger your holes. You close your eyes as one of the men pushes you down on your knees as another shoves his dick into your mouth.'
 									
 									act 'Suck their dicks':	
 										*clr & cla
@@ -674,7 +674,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 										exhibition_exp += 1
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/gang/1.jpg"></center>'
-										'You begin obediently sucking the man''s dick, knowing that it is too late to go back now. You close your eyes and try to focus on how warm the man''s dick is in your mouth when the man suddenly groans, and pulls out of your mouth then covers your face in his cum. Another man quickly takes his place, as the man behind you grabs your head then pulls it toward his dick which you immediately wrap your lips around, sucking eagerly, knowing the sooner they cum, the sooner you can leave. The men begin talking to each other.'
+										'You begin obediently sucking the man''s dick, knowing that it is too late to go back now. You close your eyes and try to focus on how warm the man''s dick is in your mouth when the man suddenly groans and pulls out of your mouth then covers your face in his cum. Another man quickly takes his place as the man behind you grabs your head then pulls it toward his dick which you immediately wrap your lips around, sucking eagerly, knowing the sooner they cum, the sooner you can leave. The men begin talking to each other.'
 
 										act 'Listen to what they say':	
 											*clr & cla
@@ -683,8 +683,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 											gs'stat'									
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/gang/2.jpg"></center>'
 											'Trucker1: This girl is smokin'' hot. I hope she comes around here more often.'
-											'Waiter: Oh she can cum around here as much, as she wants.'
-											'The guys begin laughing as the man who''s dick you are sucking groans, giving you barely enough time to pull his penis out of your mouth where it covers your face with his warm cum. You feel the man''s cum dripping down your face, as another biker approaches you then takes a close look at you before saying, "I''m not sticking my dick in her cum covered mouth." He then lifts you up, and places you down on a nearby stool.'
+											'Waiter: Oh she can cum around here as much as she wants.'
+											'The guys begin laughing as the man who''s dick you are sucking groans, giving you barely enough time to pull his penis out of your mouth where it covers your face with his warm cum. You feel the man''s cum dripping down your face as another biker approaches you then takes a close look at you before saying, "I''m not sticking my dick in her cum covered mouth." He then lifts you up and places you down on a nearby stool.'
 											gs 'cum_call', 'face'
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
@@ -697,16 +697,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 												*clr & cla
 												gs'stat'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/gang/3.jpg"></center>'
-												'The men begin holding your legs open, as another lines his penis with your vagina. You suddenly feel the man shove his penis inside of your vagina, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill your body, and evoking a loud moan from you.'
+												'The men begin holding your legs open as another lines his penis with your vagina. You suddenly feel the man shove his penis inside of your vagina, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill your body and evoking a loud moan from you.'
 												'Biker1: This whore really likes her pussy fucked.'
 												'Trucker: I bet she has been waiting to get fucked all day.'
 												*nl
 												if sexcontra >= 3 or protect >= 2:
-													'You close your eyes, and only focus on the pleasure building up inside you. The man fucking you, suddenly groans, and you can feel his warm seed filling the condom inside you. The man continues thrusting, trying to milk himself dry inside of you. Another trucker approaches you then says "Looks like that hole is all used up. I guess I will have to take this one." The man rubs his dick against your anus.'
+													'You close your eyes and only focus on the pleasure building up inside you. The man fucking you, suddenly groans and you can feel his warm seed filling the condom inside you. The man continues thrusting, trying to milk himself dry inside of you. Another trucker approaches you then says "Looks like that hole is all used up. I guess I will have to take this one." The man rubs his dick against your anus.'
 													*nl
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum61.jpg"></center>'
 												else	
-													'You close your eyes, and only focus on the pleasure building up inside you. The man fucking you, suddenly groans, and you can feel his warm seed filling your pussy. The man continues thrusting inside you, trying to milk himself dry inside of you. Another trucker approaches you then says "Looks like that hole is all used up. I guess I will have to take this one." The man rubs his dick against your anus.'
+													'You close your eyes and only focus on the pleasure building up inside you. The man fucking you, suddenly groans and you can feel his warm seed filling your pussy. The man continues thrusting inside you, trying to milk himself dry inside of you. Another trucker approaches you then says "Looks like that hole is all used up. I guess I will have to take this one." The man rubs his dick against your anus.'
 													*nl
 													'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
 												end	
@@ -719,14 +719,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 													*clr & cla
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/gang/4.jpg"></center>'
-													'The man suddenly shoves his dick into your ass, causing a surge of pain to fill your ass. You scream out in pain, as Niko shouts, "Hey take it easy! She is not a fucking blow up doll!" The man nods then gives your ass a few seconds to adjust to his dick before casually fucking it.' 
+													'The man suddenly shoves his dick into your ass, causing a surge of pain to fill your ass. You scream out in pain as Niko shouts, "Hey take it easy! She is not a fucking blow up doll!" The man nods then gives your ass a few seconds to adjust to his dick before casually fucking it.' 
 													
 													act 'Anal':	
 														*clr & cla
 														minut -= 5
 														gs'stat'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/gang/5.jpg"></center>'
-														'<font color=#FF00FF>That man was so rough, but Niko...My Niko protected me like he said he would.</font> As the man continues fucking your ass, another man grabs your head then turns it to face a third man''s dick which you immediately wrap your lips around before licking, and sucking it eagerly. The pain in your ass fades, as pleasure takes it''s place. You close your eyes, and submit to the pleasure when another man approaches you.'
+														'<font color=#FF00FF>That man was so rough, but Niko...My Niko protected me like he said he would.</font> As the man continues fucking your ass, another man grabs your head then turns it to face a third man''s dick which you immediately wrap your lips around before licking and sucking it eagerly. The pain in your ass fades as pleasure takes it''s place. You close your eyes and submit to the pleasure when another man approaches you.'
 														gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 														gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5
 														gs'stat'									
@@ -771,11 +771,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 																	if sexcontra >= 3 or protect >= 2:
 																		'Completely entranced in the pleasure, you firmly suck on the man''s dick, wanting only to give the men the same pleasure that they are giving you. The men start breathing heavily, for a few seconds before groaning almost simultaneously, filling their condoms at the same time. You keep your eyes closed while only focusing on the condom simultaneously filling up inside you. The men milk their cocks, for a few seconds before sitting back in their seats.' 
 																		*nl
-																		'You look around to see who is next when you notice that everyone is sitting down, chatting with each other, as if nothing had happened. Niko helps you onto your feet then says, "You did amazing today! I am so proud of you. Get washed up then I will take you home, but don''t worry. I will give you a nice reward tomorrow." You meekly nod, as Niko walks you to the bathroom.'
+																		'You look around to see who is next when you notice that everyone is sitting down, chatting with each other as if nothing had happened. Niko helps you onto your feet then says, "You did amazing today! I am so proud of you. Get washed up then I will take you home, but don''t worry. I will give you a nice reward tomorrow." You meekly nod as Niko walks you to the bathroom.'
 																	else
 																		'Completely entranced in the pleasure, you firmly suck on the man''s dick, wanting only to give the men the same pleasure that they are giving you. The men start breathing heavily, for a few seconds before groaning almost simultaneously, filling your body from all sides with the big strong bikers and truckers cum. You keep your eyes closed while only focusing on their warm cum filling your entire body. The men milk their cocks inside you, for a few seconds before sitting back in their seats.' 
 																		*nl
-																		'You look around to see who is next when you notice that everyone is sitting down, chatting with each other, as if nothing had happened. Niko helps you onto your feet then says, "You did amazing today! I am so proud of you. Get washed up then I will take you home, but don''t worry. I will give you a nice reward tomorrow." You meekly nod, as Niko walks you to the bathroom.'
+																		'You look around to see who is next when you notice that everyone is sitting down, chatting with each other as if nothing had happened. Niko helps you onto your feet then says, "You did amazing today! I am so proud of you. Get washed up then I will take you home, but don''t worry. I will give you a nice reward tomorrow." You meekly nod as Niko walks you to the bathroom.'
 																	end							
 																	gs 'cum_call', 'face'
 																	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner 1':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs, as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait, for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko, and he returns the wave, as you walk away.'
+			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait, for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko and he returns the wave as you walk away.'
 
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 		end
@@ -837,7 +837,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner Washup':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="blue">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/facecleanse.jpg"></center>'
-	'You grab a few paper towels then approach the sink to clean yourself, as thoroughly, as possible while taking a few seconds to enjoy a splash of warm water on your face, leaving you feeling refreshed, as you finish up, and walk away from the sink.'
+	'You grab a few paper towels then approach the sink to clean yourself as thoroughly as possible while taking a few seconds to enjoy a splash of warm water on your face, leaving you feeling refreshed as you finish up and walk away from the sink.'
 	
 	act 'Dry off':gt 'NikoEv2', 'Diner Exit'
 end	
@@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Diner Exit':
 	money += 2400
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/payment.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk out of the diner to find Niko waiting for you. "You did great today <<$pcs_nickname>>. I am so proud of you. Here is your share of the profits." Niko hands you 2400 <b>₽</b> You look up to Niko then say, "I thought that you would give me half. There were at least six men in there." Niko places his hand on your shoulder with a sympathetic look on his face. "I wanted to split it half way, but it would take us too long to pay up on that debt. You don''t want your reputation to remain this way, do you?" You lower your head, as you reply. "I don''t..I''m sorry. I was just being greedy."' 
+	'You walk out of the diner to find Niko waiting for you. "You did great today <<$pcs_nickname>>. I am so proud of you. Here is your share of the profits." Niko hands you 2400 <b>₽</b> You look up to Niko then say, "I thought that you would give me half. There were at least six men in there." Niko places his hand on your shoulder with a sympathetic look on his face. "I wanted to split it half way, but it would take us too long to pay up on that debt. You don''t want your reputation to remain this way, do you?" You lower your head as you reply. "I don''t..I''m sorry. I was just being greedy."' 
 
 	act 'Listen to Niko':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -867,21 +867,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Reward 2':
 	gs 'fame'
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Niko, he throws his cigarette to the ground then wraps his arm around your lower back, and pulls you toward him before giving you a very passionate kiss. You eagerly begin massaging his tongue with your, in a long passionate kiss that lasts for a full minute before Niko slowly pulls away then says, "I''ve been thinking about you all day, and I am ready to reward you for all your hard work." Niko then begins leading you to his house.'
+	'As you approach Niko, he throws his cigarette to the ground then wraps his arm around your lower back and pulls you toward him before giving you a very passionate kiss. You eagerly begin massaging his tongue with your, in a long passionate kiss that lasts for a full minute before Niko slowly pulls away then says, "I''ve been thinking about you all day and I am ready to reward you for all your hard work." Niko then begins leading you to his house.'
 
 	act 'Niko''s house':	
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss3.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'As soon, as you enter Niko''s house he pulls you toward him then gives you another passionate kiss, as he begins undressing you. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh his kisses are so passionate. He wants me so bad. I want him too. Please take me Nikolai. Take me!</font> Niko finishes undressing you then begins removing his clothes, as you help him undress. Niko pulls you to the bedroom then pushes you onto the bed.'		
+		'As soon as you enter Niko''s house he pulls you toward him then gives you another passionate kiss as he begins undressing you. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh his kisses are so passionate. He wants me so bad. I want him too. Please take me Nikolai. Take me!</font> Niko finishes undressing you then begins removing his clothes as you help him undress. Niko pulls you to the bedroom then pushes you onto the bed.'		
 
 		act 'Lay back':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/cuni.mp4"></video></center>'		
-			'Niko spreads your legs then begin licking your vagina gently, but firmly. You lay back, enjoying Niko''s soft tongue on your clitoris. You look down to Niko then say, "Your tongue is so soft. Please keep doing that." Niko gives you a wink as he continues gently but firmly, licking on your clitoris, causing the pleasure inside of you to build up quickly. After a few minutes, you feel the pleasure building up to it''s climax when your body suddenly erupts into pleasure, causing your muscles to tighten up, as you spasm, unable to focus on anything, but the pleasure filling you. You let out a scream, as you reach the end of your climax. You take a few seconds to catch your breath before looking down to Niko with a loving smile on his face.'
+			'Niko spreads your legs then begin licking your vagina gently, but firmly. You lay back, enjoying Niko''s soft tongue on your clitoris. You look down to Niko then say, "Your tongue is so soft. Please keep doing that." Niko gives you a wink as he continues gently but firmly, licking on your clitoris, causing the pleasure inside of you to build up quickly. After a few minutes, you feel the pleasure building up to it''s climax when your body suddenly erupts into pleasure, causing your muscles to tighten up as you spasm, unable to focus on anything, but the pleasure filling you. You let out a scream as you reach the end of your climax. You take a few seconds to catch your breath before looking down to Niko with a loving smile on his face.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5
 			gs'stat'	
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Reward 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/lick1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You rise to your knees, then crawl up to Niko and lightly grip the shaft of his penis, slowly licking up the shaft to the top, where you gently kiss the tip of Niko''s penis while staring into his eyes to let him know how much he mean to you. Niko places his hand on your face, "You are so beautiful <<$pcs_firstname>>, the perfect girl." You can feel your heart beating faster, as Niko''s loving words warm your rapidly beating heart.' 
+				'You rise to your knees, then crawl up to Niko and lightly grip the shaft of his penis, slowly licking up the shaft to the top, where you gently kiss the tip of Niko''s penis while staring into his eyes to let him know how much he mean to you. Niko places his hand on your face, "You are so beautiful <<$pcs_firstname>>, the perfect girl." You can feel your heart beating faster as Niko''s loving words warm your rapidly beating heart.' 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 				gs'stat'	
 					
@@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Reward 2':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'				
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/bj.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You begin sucking on Niko''s dick. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh Niko you are so perfect. I only want to please you. To see you happy. To give you the bliss that you give me. I love you Nikolai.</font> Niko tilts his head back, as he lets out a light moan before looking down to you then saying, "<<$pcs_nickname>> come here." He beckons you to come closer.'
+					'You begin sucking on Niko''s dick. <font color=#FF00FF>Oh Niko you are so perfect. I only want to please you. To see you happy. To give you the bliss that you give me. I love you Nikolai.</font> Niko tilts his head back as he lets out a light moan before looking down to you then saying, "<<$pcs_nickname>> come here." He beckons you to come closer.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs'stat'	
 											
@@ -906,7 +906,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Reward 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/cowgirlkiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You crawl up to Niko''s face then give him a passionate kiss, as you grab onto his penis, and guide it inside of your vagina. You begin thrusting yourself on top of Niko''s dick, pushing it deeper inside you. Niko suddenly grabs onto your back then kisses you more firmly while pushing himself deeper inside you. After a few seconds, Niko ends the kiss to catch his breath, and you take this time to look him in the eyes, as you say,' 
+						'You crawl up to Niko''s face then give him a passionate kiss as you grab onto his penis and guide it inside of your vagina. You begin thrusting yourself on top of Niko''s dick, pushing it deeper inside you. Niko suddenly grabs onto your back then kisses you more firmly while pushing himself deeper inside you. After a few seconds, Niko ends the kiss to catch his breath and you take this time to look him in the eyes as you say,' 
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs'stat'
 						
@@ -915,7 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Reward 2':
 							minut -= 5
 							gs'stat'						
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/home/cowgirlkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'"I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart, and every fiber of my being." Niko has a guilty look on his face, as he says, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You a very precious to me." You continue staring into Niko''s eyes, as he continues thrusting his penis inside of you. Niko''s grunts, as he says, "I have to pull out now."'
+							'"I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart and every fiber of my being." Niko has a guilty look on his face as he says, "I love you too <<$pcs_firstname>>. You a very precious to me." You continue staring into Niko''s eyes as he continues thrusting his penis inside of you. Niko''s grunts as he says, "I have to pull out now."'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 							gs'stat'	
 												
@@ -923,7 +923,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Reward 2':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow8.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'You quickly pull off of Niko then wrap your lips around his dick, and begin sucking. Niko tilts his head back then begins cumming in your mouth, as you do your best to suck every drop out of Niko''s dick. Niko''s warm seed fills your mouth, as you continue swallowing, and sucking his dick dry. After Niko is fully spent, he gently grabs your face then brings it to his, giving you a gentle kiss on the lips before saying, "I am so lucky to have such a beautiful and obedient girl like you." You reply, "I feel so lucky to have you in my life too, Nikolai." Niko rubs on your forehead then gets up, and heads to the bathroom to get washed up.'
+								'You quickly pull off of Niko then wrap your lips around his dick and begin sucking. Niko tilts his head back then begins cumming in your mouth as you do your best to suck every drop out of Niko''s dick. Niko''s warm seed fills your mouth as you continue swallowing and sucking his dick dry. After Niko is fully spent, he gently grabs your face then brings it to his, giving you a gentle kiss on the lips before saying, "I am so lucky to have such a beautiful and obedient girl like you." You reply, "I feel so lucky to have you in my life too, Nikolai." Niko rubs on your forehead then gets up and heads to the bathroom to get washed up.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy 
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -946,13 +946,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik BJ':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Yurik Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/home/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you reach the bottom of the stairs, you suddenly hear "Hey girl." You turn to see Yurik sitting in the living room in front of the TV. He motions you to come toward him, so you comply, and Yurik says, "Suck my dick." Yurik then points to his crotch. You meekly nod your head, knowing what could happen if you dare to disobey him. You walk up in front of him then unbutton his pants, pulling out his gaint penis then wrapping your lips around it.'
+	'As you reach the bottom of the stairs, you suddenly hear "Hey girl." You turn to see Yurik sitting in the living room in front of the TV. He motions you to come toward him, so you comply and Yurik says, "Suck my dick." Yurik then points to his crotch. You meekly nod your head, knowing what could happen if you dare to disobey him. You walk up in front of him then unbutton his pants, pulling out his gaint penis then wrapping your lips around it.'
 	
 	act 'Suck Yurik''s dick':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/bj/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You begin sucking Yurik''s massive dick, trying your best to fit as much of it in your mouth, as you can. Yurik continues watching the TV, as if you weren''t even there. <font color=#FF00FF>Am I not doing a good enough job. Why isn''t he enjoying this? I must try harder.</font> You begin licking his penis rapidly, trying to get a response from him. You pull his dick out of your mouth, and begin licking the tip of it which causes him to grunt, and look down to you.'
+		'You begin sucking Yurik''s massive dick, trying your best to fit as much of it in your mouth as you can. Yurik continues watching the TV as if you weren''t even there. <font color=#FF00FF>Am I not doing a good enough job. Why isn''t he enjoying this? I must try harder.</font> You begin licking his penis rapidly, trying to get a response from him. You pull his dick out of your mouth and begin licking the tip of it which causes him to grunt and look down to you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 		gs'stat'	
 						
@@ -960,7 +960,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik BJ':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/abuse/slap1.mp4"></video></center>'	
-			'Yurik suddenly give you a firm, but not very powerful slap, as he says, "Hey don''t go fucking around down there. I told you to suck, not play with my dick, so get back to sucking."' 
+			'Yurik suddenly give you a firm, but not very powerful slap as he says, "Hey don''t go fucking around down there. I told you to suck, not play with my dick, so get back to sucking."' 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 			gs'stat'
 			
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik BJ':
 				minut -= 5
 				gs'stat'			
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/bj/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You meekly nod then continue sucking his dick. After a few seconds, Yurik looks down to you, and says, "You don''t need to worry girl. You''re doing good." You suddenly feel a lot more confident, knowing that he actually does enjoy what you are doing for him. After a few seconds, you can hear Yurik breathing loudly then he begins rubbing on your head.'
+				'You meekly nod then continue sucking his dick. After a few seconds, Yurik looks down to you and says, "You don''t need to worry girl. You''re doing good." You suddenly feel a lot more confident, knowing that he actually does enjoy what you are doing for him. After a few seconds, you can hear Yurik breathing loudly then he begins rubbing on your head.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 				gs'stat'	
 							
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik BJ':
 					minut += 5
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/bj/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'	
-					'You quicken your pace then suddenly Yurik groans, as he begins pumping your mouth full of his warm cum which you do your best to swallow every drop of. After Yurik is spent, he says to you, "I''m done girl. You can go back to Niko now." You get up then start walking away when you hear Yurik say, "And good job girl." You walk back up the stairs with a smile on your face.'
+					'You quicken your pace then suddenly Yurik groans as he begins pumping your mouth full of his warm cum which you do your best to swallow every drop of. After Yurik is spent, he says to you, "I''m done girl. You can go back to Niko now." You get up then start walking away when you hear Yurik say, "And good job girl." You walk back up the stairs with a smile on your face.'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy 
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -991,7 +991,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik BJ':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you reach the top of the stairs, you see Niko walk out of the bathroom. Niko gives you a smile, as he says, "Are you ready to head home. I''m ready to walk you home whenever you are ready." You return the smile, as you nod. Niko then takes your hand then walks you out of the house, toward your apartment. When you reach your apartment Niko says,  "I had a wonderful time with you today. It is fun to sometimes relax, and enjoy each other''s company isn''t it?" You nod happily, as you reply, "I always enjoy being with you." Niko chuckles before responding, "You are just too sweet, anyway have a good night." Niko leans forward then gives you a kiss on the cheek before turning around, and walking away.'
+						'As you reach the top of the stairs, you see Niko walk out of the bathroom. Niko gives you a smile as he says, "Are you ready to head home. I''m ready to walk you home whenever you are ready." You return the smile as you nod. Niko then takes your hand then walks you out of the house, toward your apartment. When you reach your apartment Niko says,  "I had a wonderful time with you today. It is fun to sometimes relax and enjoy each other''s company isn''t it?" You nod happily as you reply, "I always enjoy being with you." Niko chuckles before responding, "You are just too sweet, anyway have a good night." Niko leans forward then gives you a kiss on the cheek before turning around and walking away.'
 						
 						act 'Enter apartment':gt 'KorrPar'	
 					end	
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 		minut += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/walk1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko says, "Excellent, today we a going back to the diner to make a lot of money. We are making great progress, and I would like us to keep it up." You give Niko a nervous smile then he places his hands on your cheeks. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I will make sure that the customer only go one, or two at a time. No more group activities, unless you are cool with it." You give Niko a grateful nod, as he takes your hand then leads you toward the diner while you both chat about various topics on the way.'		
+		'Niko says, "Excellent, today we a going back to the diner to make a lot of money. We are making great progress and I would like us to keep it up." You give Niko a nervous smile then he places his hands on your cheeks. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I will make sure that the customer only go one, or two at a time. No more group activities, unless you are cool with it." You give Niko a grateful nod as he takes your hand then leads you toward the diner while you both chat about various topics on the way.'		
 		*nl
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/exterior1.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -1029,10 +1029,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 			'As soon as you both enter the diner, all of the patrons turn to you then start happily greeting you.'
 			'Biker1: "Hey girl, glad to see you back."'
 			'Trucker1: "You''re lookin'' good girl."'
-			'Trucker2: "I wish my wife looked as good, as you."'
+			'Trucker2: "I wish my wife looked as good as you."'
 			'Trucker3: "Is that the girl you were talking about? The slu...." another guy shoves him in the ribs before whispering, "Watch what you say. We don''t want her to leave."'
 			*nl
-			'You can feel your cheeks growing red, as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m...glad to be back." Niko then nods, and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want, and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you, as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
+			'You can feel your cheeks growing red as you respond to all of the attention. "Thank you all for welcoming me back. I''m...glad to be back." Niko then nods and says, "I agree. It is good to be back. If anyone would like to spend some time with my girl here then let me know what you want and I will set it up." Niko guides you to the corner of the room then sits down with you as a few men line up nearby, one of them asks you. "What is your name girl?"'
 
 			act 'Give them your real name':	
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'You tell them, "My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s nice to meet you." The man says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a very cute name, it really suits you." You give the men a friendly smile, as one of them approaches Niko.'
+				'You tell them, "My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s nice to meet you." The man says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a very cute name, it really suits you." You give the men a friendly smile as one of them approaches Niko.'
 				
 				act 'Continue':gt 'NikoSlut', 'Customer 1'
 			end
@@ -1054,7 +1054,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'You tell them, "My name is <<$NikoSlutName>>. It''s nice to meet you." The man says, "<<$NikoSlutName>> huh? That is is a pretty name." You give the men a friendly smile, as one of them approaches Niko.'
+				'You tell them, "My name is <<$NikoSlutName>>. It''s nice to meet you." The man says, "<<$NikoSlutName>> huh? That is is a pretty name." You give the men a friendly smile as one of them approaches Niko.'
 
 				act 'Continue':gt 'NikoSlut', 'Customer 1'
 			end
@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner 2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs, as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait, for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko, and he returns the wave, as you walk away.'
+			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait, for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko and he returns the wave as you walk away.'
 
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 		end
@@ -1097,20 +1097,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner Exit 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E600FB><<"Lera Tsarev & Lena Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/bully/park/1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You turn and immediately recognize the girls following you, as Lena Kotov, and Lera Tsarev. They both have wide grins on their faces. Lena then says to you, "Hey slut! How many cocks have you sucked today?" Lera then says, "I think the easier question would be how many cocks have you not sucked today?" You try to ignore them as they then walk right in front of you and Niko, and Lena says, "Why don''t you give us a little show, slut?" Niko then says in a stern voice, "Not now ladies!" Lena then says, "Awww are we hurting your little whore''s feelings?" She then begins laughing as Lera walks directly in front of you, blocking you from moving. "Hey little slut. We''re waiting for your show."'
+		'You turn and immediately recognize the girls following you as Lena Kotov and Lera Tsarev. They both have wide grins on their faces. Lena then says to you, "Hey slut! How many cocks have you sucked today?" Lera then says, "I think the easier question would be how many cocks have you not sucked today?" You try to ignore them as they then walk right in front of you and Niko and Lena says, "Why don''t you give us a little show, slut?" Niko then says in a stern voice, "Not now ladies!" Lena then says, "Awww are we hurting your little whore''s feelings?" She then begins laughing as Lera walks directly in front of you, blocking you from moving. "Hey little slut. We''re waiting for your show."'
 		
 		act 'See what Niko does':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'			
-			'Niko then shouts, "Enough girls! why don''t you both go to the disco, I heard that Vicky has been fucking the boys there. Roman sent me the pictures. He said that Vicky is now the new town slut. You should check it out." Lera sarcastically replies, "Oh my, I totally don''t want to miss that. Hey Lena, we need to start running over there before it is too late." She then jogs in place before giggling. Lena then says, "As if we would ever believe any of your bullshit Niko." Niko shakes his head then barges through them as he pulls you with him. You try to ignore the girls, as Niko leads you to your apartment. You can hear Lena singing, "Little slut, Little slut, where does she go? Little slut, Little slut, Who will she blow?" Before Lera answers, "Well everyone silly." They then follow you for another minute before getting bored and leaving.' 
+			'Niko then shouts, "Enough girls! why don''t you both go to the disco, I heard that Vicky has been fucking the boys there. Roman sent me the pictures. He said that Vicky is now the new town slut. You should check it out." Lera sarcastically replies, "Oh my, I totally don''t want to miss that. Hey Lena, we need to start running over there before it is too late." She then jogs in place before giggling. Lena then says, "As if we would ever believe any of your bullshit Niko." Niko shakes his head then barges through them as he pulls you with him. You try to ignore the girls as Niko leads you to your apartment. You can hear Lena singing, "Little slut, Little slut, where does she go? Little slut, Little slut, Who will she blow?" Before Lera answers, "Well everyone silly." They then follow you for another minute before getting bored and leaving.' 
 			
 			act 'Walk home with Niko':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'	
-				'You finally make it to your apartment your apartment, Niko grabs onto your shoulder then flips you around before giving you a very passionate kiss. Afterward Niko whispers in your ear, "I love you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Never forget it." You can feel your face growing flushed, as you reply, "I love you too Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." You then give him another passionate kiss before backing into your apartment.'	
+				'You finally make it to your apartment your apartment, Niko grabs onto your shoulder then flips you around before giving you a very passionate kiss. Afterward Niko whispers in your ear, "I love you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Never forget it." You can feel your face growing flushed as you reply, "I love you too Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." You then give him another passionate kiss before backing into your apartment.'	
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/endkiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 				
@@ -1135,7 +1135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner Slut':
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/walk1.jpg"></center>'		
-		'Niko says, "You''re always making me so proud. Let''s get going." Niko then takes your hand, and leads you toward the diner while you both chat about various topics on the way.'
+		'Niko says, "You''re always making me so proud. Let''s get going." Niko then takes your hand and leads you toward the diner while you both chat about various topics on the way.'
 
 		act 'Walk to Diner':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1146,7 +1146,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner Slut':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/drink.jpg"></center>'
-			'You both arrive at the diner, and Niko takes a seat then offers you one. Niko orders a few drinks, as you both make yourself comfortable. You and Niko spend the next few minutes chatting while you wait for customers to arrive.'
+			'You both arrive at the diner and Niko takes a seat then offers you one. Niko orders a few drinks as you both make yourself comfortable. You and Niko spend the next few minutes chatting while you wait for customers to arrive.'
 			
 			act 'Wait for customers':gt 'NikoSlut', 'Customers'
 		end	
@@ -1161,7 +1161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Diner Slut':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs, as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait, for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko, and he returns the wave, as you walk away.'
+			'"That sounds great but I really need to be somewhere very soon." Niko shrugs as he replies "Oh well. I guess it could wait, for another day. Visit me here when you are ready." You wave at Niko and he returns the wave as you walk away.'
 
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 		end

locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc

@@ -23,17 +23,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slowly open your eyes, and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
+	'You slowly open your eyes and see <<$VK_VikName>> playfully shaking your shoulder. "Hey there sleepy head! Did you sleep well?" You give <<$VK_VikName>> a warm smile. "I guess but...Where am I?" <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "After what happened at school, we couldn''t just leave you alone, to be abused by the boys, so we brought you back to our place." You scratch your head. "We?" <<$VK_VikName>> smiles then turns to her left.' 
 		
 	act 'Turn with her':	
 		*clr & cla		
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'		
-		'You turn to see Katja Meynold, and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "I''m so glad that you are okay. I was worried when you didn''t wake up." Natalia adds, "I also cleaned your hair for you. It was... Messy" You look around the room then back at <<$VK_VikName>>. "Thank you all, for helping me. I can''t believe what happened in school was not a dream. I want it to be a dream, so bad." You can feel tears forming under your eyes. Katja hugs you, as she says, "I don''t know what caused it, but we will find a way to make things better. You didn''t deserve what they did to you."' 
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'		
+		'You turn to see Katja Meynold and Natalia Pavlova sitting on the seats right next to the bed. Katja says, "I''m so glad that you are okay. I was worried when you didn''t wake up." Natalia adds, "I also cleaned your hair for you. It was... Messy" You look around the room then back at <<$VK_VikName>>. "Thank you all, for helping me. I can''t believe what happened in school was not a dream. I want it to be a dream, so bad." You can feel tears forming under your eyes. Katja hugs you as she says, "I don''t know what caused it, but we will find a way to make things better. You didn''t deserve what they did to you."' 
 		*nl
-		'<<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder then says, "There, there, you''ll be alright." Natalia gives you a very supportive smile as she lightly squeezes your hand, as Katja sighs, "What is going at school these days, first Sonia and now <<$pcs_firstname>>. These boys are animals." You reply, "Yes they are." Natalia places her hand on your leg, "<<$pcs_firstname>> what happened exactly?"'
+		'<<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder then says, "There, there, you''ll be alright." Natalia gives you a very supportive smile as she lightly squeezes your hand as Katja sighs, "What is going at school these days, first Sonia and now <<$pcs_firstname>>. These boys are animals." You reply, "Yes they are." Natalia places her hand on your leg, "<<$pcs_firstname>> what happened exactly?"'
 
 		act 'Tell them your story':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 				gs'stat'	
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/natalia.jpg"></center>'			
-				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back, as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
+				'You look up, surprised by their opinions of Niko. "But he treats me with such love and compassion. He always calls me his princess." Katja places her arms around your neck. "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can go out with whoever you want. I am just concerned that he will use you." You lay back as you consider your options, Natalia asks, "So how did you end up...naked at school?"'
 
 				act 'Return to your story':	
 					*clr & cla
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'	
-					'"Niko is always teaching me how to be more confident, and daring. He tells me to do things that are very scary at first, but end up being very exciting. I don''t know why it excites me so much, but I feel so alive when I am with Niko. He always makes me feel safe, and he tells me..." Katja cuts you off. "Makes you feel safe? Like how he kept you safe today?" You lower your head, and remain silent, for a few seconds before Katja says, "I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I just get so angry when I see good people getting used by assholes like him. Continue your story, please."' 
+					'"Niko is always teaching me how to be more confident and daring. He tells me to do things that are very scary at first, but end up being very exciting. I don''t know why it excites me so much, but I feel so alive when I am with Niko. He always makes me feel safe and he tells me..." Katja cuts you off. "Makes you feel safe? Like how he kept you safe today?" You lower your head and remain silent, for a few seconds before Katja says, "I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I just get so angry when I see good people getting used by assholes like him. Continue your story, please."' 
 
 					act 'Continue your story':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -64,21 +64,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 						gs'stat'					
 						'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/vicky.jpg"></center>'					
-						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence, and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new, and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself, and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down, and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision, and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice, and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
+						'You take a second before continuing your story. "He helps me find my confidence and break out of my safety bubble. I''m alway trying something new and facing my fears. I...I just don''t know what to do without him. Niko always guides me in bettering myself and feeling so alive." <<$VK_VikName>> places her hand on your shoulder, "If you really care for him then maybe you can work things out with Niko..." Katja immediately cuts <<$VK_VikName>> off, "No! You need to dump that freak! Do you really want to stay with a boy who stripped you down and let those gopnik punks...RAPE YOU!!!?" Natalia tries to calm her. "We might not like him, but it is <<$pcs_firstname>>''s decision and we can''t control her. We can only give her our advice and hope that she makes the right decision...on her own."'
 						
 						act 'Continue':	
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-							'You lightly grip your hair, as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up, and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
+							'You lightly grip your hair as you respond, "I just...need to think about this, for a while." <<$VK_VikName>> stands up and says in a cheerful tone, "Well you take all the time you need. If you need anything then don''t be afraid to holler." <<$VK_VikName>> then walks toward the door then motions the other girls to follow.' 
 
 							act 'Watch <<$VK_VikName>> leave':	
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'							
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
-								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'							
-								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together, and don''t worry, I wont lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room, as you lay down and close your eyes...'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'							
+								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together and don''t worry, I wont lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room as you lay down and close your eyes...'
 
 								act 'Rest':gt 'NikoDreams', 'Woods'
 							end
@@ -100,13 +100,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-	'You quickly jump up, and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead, as she responds,"Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
+	'You quickly jump up and see Katja with a concerned look on her face. "It''s okay <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were just having a bad dream." You look around the room, trying to get your bearings then turn to Katja, "Thank you Katja, I hope these nightmare don''t become a habit." Katja rubs your forehead as she responds,"Everything will be alright. You don''t worry need to worry about anything right now. You are among friends. Remember that." As she lightly rubs your forehead. You give her a smile and an approving nod. Katja returns the smile before saying, "Now that''s what I like to see, a fresh smile."' 
 	*nl
-	'You both giggle before Katja tells you, "Natalia has some activity that she thinks we will all enjoy. It''s hard to imagine what she has planned but who knows? It might be fun. Anyway you should get yourself washed up. A nice relaxing bath can work wonders for the body and mind. You should also see Vicky when you have the chance. She will be pleased to see you up.' 
+	'You both giggle before Katja tells you, "Vicky has something planned that she thinks we will all enjoy. It''s hard to imagine what it is but who knows? It might be fun. Anyway you should get yourself washed up. A nice relaxing bath can work wonders for the body and mind. You should also see Vicky when you have the chance. She will be pleased to see you up.' 
 	if NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'I know that Natalia will be excited to see that you''re okay. She was panicking over you. The two of you must be close." You nod then say, "I will go them and thank you for your help." Katja replies, "Don''t mention it. I coldn''t just leave you there." You give Katja an approving nod as you climb out of bed.'
+		'I know that Natalia will be excited to see that you''re okay. She was panicking over you. The two of you must be close." You nod then say, "I will go them and thank you for your help." Katja replies, "Don''t mention it. I couldn''t just leave you there." You give Katja an approving nod as you climb out of bed.'
 	else
-		'I''m sure Natalia will be pleased to see that you''re okay. She was seemed very worried about you. She obviously has a kind heart." You nod then say, "I will go them and thank you for your help." Katja replies, "Don''t mention it. I coldn''t just leave you there." You give Katja an approving nod as you climb out of bed.'
+		'I''m sure Natalia will be pleased to see that you''re okay. She was seemed very worried about you. She obviously has a kind heart." You nod then say, "I will go see them and thank you for your help." Katja replies, "Don''t mention it. I coldn''t just leave you there." You give Katja an approving nod as you climb out of bed.'
 	end	
 	act 'Get up':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Hallway'
 end	
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lounge':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Lounge</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/hall.jpg"></center>'
-	'Spacious room with a sofa and armchairs, on the wall hangs a large plasma TV, located next to the bookcase, and on the opposite side is the fireplace, from the hall there is access to a bright garden, overgrown with grapes'
+	'Spacious room with a sofa and armchairs, on the wall hangs a large plasma TV, located next to the bookcase and on the opposite side is the fireplace, from the hall there is access to a bright garden, overgrown with grapes'
 
 	if VKNatChat = 0:
 		'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoMeyHome'', ''Natalia Chat''">Natalia</a>, leaning against the fireplace. She appears lost in thought.'
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Lounge':
 	elseif VKAftermathEvent = 3 and VKNatChat = 4 and NikoAftermath = 1 and VKKatjaChat = 3:
 		'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoMeyHome'', ''Katja and Natalia 2''">Katja and Natalia</a>, sitting on the couch, chatting with each other.'		
 	elseif VKAftermathEvent = 3 and VKNatChat < 3 and NikoAftermath = 1:
-		'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoMeyHome'', ''Natalia Chat 3''">Natalia</a>, leaning against the fireplace, as she runs her fingers through her hair.'
+		'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoMeyHome'', ''Natalia Chat 3''">Natalia</a>, leaning against the fireplace as she runs her fingers through her hair.'
 	elseif VKNatChat = 4 and NikoAftermath = 1 and VKKatjaChat < 3:
 		'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoMeyHome'', ''Natalia Chat 4''">Natalia</a>, leaning against the fireplace. She look to you with a warm smile.'
 	elseif VKNatChat = 3 and NikoAftermath = 1 and VKKatjaChat = 3:
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Room':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Vicky''s room</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/vika_room.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'<<$VK_VikName>>''s room is always in a mess. It''s clean, but everything is scattered all over the place. There are soft toys laying around in enormous quantities, and all the walls are plastered with posters of pop stars and film actors.'
+	'<<$VK_VikName>>''s room is always in a mess. It''s clean, but everything is scattered all over the place. There are soft toys laying around in enormous quantities and all the walls are plastered with posters of pop stars and film actors.'
 	'There''s a laptop on the table by the window, it accidentally brings a sense of orderliness. The stacks of magazines resemble music speakers. The rooms centerpiece is the ginormous bed, next to it is a wardrobe. There''s a lone chair somewhere in the corner hidden under all the stuff.'
 	
 	if VKAftermathEvent = 3 and NikoAftermath = 1 and VKVickyChat = 3:
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Bathroom Locked':
 	*clr & cla
 	VKMeyLock = 1
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bathroom/door.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bathroom/locked.jpg"></center>'
 	'You try to enter the bathroom but the door is locked. <font color=#FF00FF>Hmm it''s locked. Katja or <<$VK_VikName>> must have the key. I should speak with them</font>'
 
 	act 'Walk away': gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Hallway'	
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoria [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the kitchen, as Katja, and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
+	'You walk into the kitchen as Katja and Natalia enter. You all take a seat at the table just as <<$VK_VikName>> approaches with a big chocolate cake. Katja says, "wow...That''s a big cake. Are you sure we can even eat all that?" <<$VK_VikName>> responds, "Well whatever we don''t eat, we can always pop in the fridge for later." <<$VK_VikName>> then grabs a knife then begins cutting the cake into slices, placing it on a plate then hands them out to each of you. Natalia takes a big bite of a cupcake then responds, "Thank you Vicky. This cake is so yummy." <<$VK_VikName>> nods with a warm smile on her face. "I''m glad that you like them. It took me freaking ages to get the batter right. Why is everyone else just staring? Eat up!" She then flutters her arms. You and the girls laugh as you all spend the next 15 minutes, eating cake while chatting about various topics.'
 	
 	act 'Finish eating':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 			gs'stat'	
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/smile1.jpg"></center>'				
-			'Natalia gets up next and says, "We should get going <<$pcs_firstname>>. Their mom should be coming home soon and we''d only disturb her." <<$VK_VikName>> nods, as she responds, "I''ll be waiting by the front door when you are ready to go, and before you go, can you do me a favor and make sure that Katja doesn''t use all my hair care products. I told her she can use some, but that Kat can''t keep her hands off my things." Natalia adds, "When you have a moment please see me in the lounge. I have something I would like to ask you." You nod at Natalia, as she, and <<$VK_VikName>> walk out of the kitchen.'
+			'Natalia gets up next and says, "We should get going <<$pcs_firstname>>. Their mom should be coming home soon and we''d only disturb her." <<$VK_VikName>> nods as she responds, "I''ll be waiting by the front door when you are ready to go and before you go, can you do me a favor and make sure that Katja doesn''t use all my hair care products. I told her she can use some, but that Kat can''t keep her hands off my things." Natalia adds, "When you have a moment please see me in the lounge. I have something I would like to ask you." You nod at Natalia as she and <<$VK_VikName>> walk out of the kitchen.'
 			
 			act 'Stand up':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Kitchen'
 		end	
@@ -387,15 +387,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vickysmile.jpg"></center>'
 	if VKVickyChat = 0 and VKMeyLock = 0:
-		'As you are approaching <<$VK_VikName>>, she looks up from her phone then flashes you a warm smile, as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re up? How have you been holding up? Everything has been so grim lately." You reply, "Thank you <<$VK_VikName>>. I am still really sore and kind of worried of my future. Do you think that there is any chance that I could undo what happened yesterday?" <<$VK_VikName>> lightly places her hands on your arms before replying, "Don''t worry about that. Kat and I are looking into it. Don''t worry." She then playfully shakes you side to side while smiling.' 
+		'As you are approaching <<$VK_VikName>>, she looks up from her phone then flashes you a warm smile as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re up? How have you been holding up? Everything has been so grim lately." You reply, "Thank you <<$VK_VikName>>. I am still really sore and kind of worried of my future. Do you think that there is any chance that I could undo what happened yesterday?" <<$VK_VikName>> lightly places her hands on your arms before replying, "Don''t worry about that. Kat and I are looking into it. Don''t worry." She then playfully shakes you side to side while smiling.' 
 		*nl
-		'You nod, as you reply, "You''re right, I should try to relax. I just don''t know why Niko just... Left me... He must have gotten held up with something important and couldn''t return in time to protect me. He might be looking for me right now." <<$VK_VikName>> firmly grabs onto your shoulders as she says, in a cute but stern tone, "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know that you must be feeling really frazzled after your ordeal but you need to try to relax." You take a deep breath then say, "I just... Need help... I need Niko to save me, like he always does..." You can feel tears streaming down your cheeks. "Do you really care for Niko? Even after what happened?" You downcast your eyes as you nod,' 
+		'You nod as you reply, "You''re right, I should try to relax. I just don''t know why Niko just... Left me... He must have gotten held up with something important and couldn''t return in time to protect me. He might be looking for me right now." <<$VK_VikName>> firmly grabs onto your shoulders as she says, in a cute but stern tone, "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know that you must be feeling really frazzled after your ordeal but you need to try to relax." You take a deep breath then say, "I just... Need help... I need Niko to save me, like he always does..." You can feel tears streaming down your cheeks. "Do you really care for Niko? Even after what happened?" You downcast your eyes as you nod,' 
 		*nl
 		'<<$VK_VikName>> says, "Then maybe you and him could work things out. There is always hope." You look up to her as you reply, "So do you think that I should stay with Niko? Kat didn''t seem to believe that." <<$VK_VikName>> says, "There is no where to go but up from here so if you feel happy with Niko then stay with Niko. Seems simple enough." You nod you head then say, "Well I have a lot of thinking to do." <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a playful smile, "Don''t spend all day thinking or you will have no time to start DOing... and also don''t be so damn formal. You can call me Vicky!" She then returns to playing on her phone.'
 	elseif VKVickyChat = 0:
-		'As you are approaching <<$VK_VikName>>, she looks up from her phone then flashes you a warm smile, as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re up? How have you been holding up? Everything has been so grim lately." You reply, "Thank you <<$VK_VikName>>. I am still really sore and kind of worried of my future. Do you think that there is any chance that I could undo what happened yesterday?" <<$VK_VikName>> lightly places her hands on your arms before replying, "Don''t worry about that. Kat and I will handle that. Don''t worry." She then playfully shakes you side to side while smiling.' 
+		'As you are approaching <<$VK_VikName>>, she looks up from her phone then flashes you a warm smile as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re up? How have you been holding up? Everything has been so grim lately." You reply, "Thank you <<$VK_VikName>>. I am still really sore and kind of worried of my future. Do you think that there is any chance that I could undo what happened yesterday?" <<$VK_VikName>> lightly places her hands on your arms before replying, "Don''t worry about that. Kat and I will handle that. Don''t worry." She then playfully shakes you side to side while smiling.' 
 		*nl
-		'You nod, as you reply, "You''re right, I should try to relax. I just don''t know why Niko just... Left me... He must have gotten held up with something important and couldn''t return in time to protect me. He might be looking for me right now." <<$VK_VikName>> firmly grabs onto your shoulders as she says, in a cute but stern tone, "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know that you must be feeling really frazzled after your ordeal but you need to try to relax." You take a deep breath then say, "I just... Need help... I need Niko to save me, like he always does..." You can feel tears streaming down your cheeks. "Do you really care for Niko? Even after what happened?" You downcast your eyes as you nod,' 
+		'You nod as you reply, "You''re right, I should try to relax. I just don''t know why Niko just... Left me... He must have gotten held up with something important and couldn''t return in time to protect me. He might be looking for me right now." <<$VK_VikName>> firmly grabs onto your shoulders as she says, in a cute but stern tone, "Listen <<$pcs_nickname>>, I know that you must be feeling really frazzled after your ordeal but you need to try to relax." You take a deep breath then say, "I just... Need help... I need Niko to save me, like he always does..." You can feel tears streaming down your cheeks. "Do you really care for Niko? Even after what happened?" You downcast your eyes as you nod,' 
 		*nl
 		'<<$VK_VikName>> says, "Then maybe you and him could work things out. There is always hope." You look up to her as you reply, "So do you think that I should stay with Niko? Kat didn''t seem to believe that." <<$VK_VikName>> says, "There is no where to go but up from here so if you feel happy with Niko then stay with Niko. Seems simple enough." You nod you head then say, "Well I have a lot of thinking to do." <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a playful smile, "Don''t spend all day thinking or you will have no time to start DOing." She then returns to playing on her phone.'
 	else
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vickysurprised.jpg"></center>'	
-			'You ask <<$VK_VikName>>, "Hey <<$VK_VikName>> the bathroom is currently locked. Do you have the key for it?" <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a surprised look before saying, "Who the hell locked it.... Kaaaaattt... Anyway where the hell is that spare key?" She then turns to the nearby desk then begins recklessly fumbling through it, causing this to fall out as she continues searching. "It''s gotta be around here somew... Wait!" She turns to her refrigerator then quickly grabs a vase on top of it as she exclaims, "There you are, you sneaky little snake." She then tosses you the keys then say, "There you go. Have fun!" before going back to playing games on her phone.'
+			'You ask <<$VK_VikName>>, "Hey <<$VK_VikName>> the bathroom is currently locked. Do you have the key for it?" <<$VK_VikName>> gives you a surprised look before saying, "Who the hell locked it.... Kaaaaattt... Anyway where the hell is that spare key?" She then turns to the nearby desk then begins recklessly fumbling through it, causing things to fall out as she continues searching. "It''s gotta be around here somew... Wait!" She turns to her refrigerator then quickly grabs a vase on top of it as she exclaims, "There you are, you sneaky little snake." She then tosses you the keys then say, "There you go. Have fun!" before going back to playing games on her phone.'
 			
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Kitchen'
 		end
@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Chat 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vickysmile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you leave the bathroom, <<$VK_VikName>> walks out of the kitchen then flashes you a playful smile, as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! You look all cleaned up. I bet you are feeling right as rain right now. I just finished baking us all something fun and sweet. You can get something to eat right now or help me fetch the girls. Your choice!"'
+	'As you leave the bathroom, <<$VK_VikName>> walks out of the kitchen then flashes you a playful smile as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! You look all cleaned up. I bet you are feeling right as rain right now. I just finished baking us all something fun and sweet. You can get something to eat right now or help me fetch the girls. Your choice!"'
 	*nl	
 	if VKKatjaBath = 1:
 		'<<$VK_VikName>> suddenly tilts her head and looks over your shoulder before saying, "Kat is that you coming out of the bathroom that our good friend <<$pcs_nickname>> was just bathing herself in?" Katja looks surprised and embarrassed as she replies, "Uhh, no... I wasn''t doing anything." <<$VK_VikName>> playfully says, "Not doing anything huh? Then why were you two alone in there?" Katja begins walking toward her room as <<$VK_VikName>> follows her while saying, "Were you both doing what I think you were? If so then you hasve been a naughty girl Kat" Katja puts her hand in front of <<$VK_VikName>>''s face as <<$VK_VikName>> follows her to her room before Katja slams the door in her face. <<$VK_VikName>> giggles as leans against the wall giving you approving wink.'
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Goodbye':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vicky2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open the front door then walk out, as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I wont argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
+	'You open the front door then walk out as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I wont argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
 	
 	if VKNatChat = 4:
 		act 'Walk home with Natalia':NikoAftermath = 0 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Walk'
@@ -532,7 +532,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
 	if VKKatjaChat < 1:
 		pcs_makeup = 3
-		'As you approach Katja, she waves you over. You stand next to her before she walks around you while keeping her eyes on the mirror. "Let''s gussy you up." Katja reaches into her hand bag then takes out her compact makeup case. She pulls out her brush then begins applying some makeup on you, for a few seconds before saying, "Look at that pretty girl in the mirror. Isn''t she lovely?" You reply, "I agree, she is so pretty, but what about me?" Katja smirks, as she places her fingertip on your nose. "I was referring to you, silly." You both giggle before Katja asks, "So, how are you holding up?" You reply, "I have a lot to think about." Katja responds, "Make sure that you take your time, and think carefully about your future because one wrong decision, can go a long way."' 	
+		'As you approach Katja, she waves you over. You stand next to her before she walks around you while keeping her eyes on the mirror. "Let''s gussy you up." Katja reaches into her hand bag then takes out her compact makeup case. She pulls out her brush then begins applying some makeup on you, for a few seconds before saying, "Look at that pretty girl in the mirror. Isn''t she lovely?" You reply, "I agree, she is so pretty, but what about me?" Katja smirks as she places her fingertip on your nose. "I was referring to you, silly." You both giggle before Katja asks, "So, how are you holding up?" You reply, "I have a lot to think about." Katja responds, "Make sure that you take your time and think carefully about your future because one wrong decision, can go a long way."' 	
 	else
 		'You approach Katja and she continues tweezing her eyebrow as she tells you, "You should talk to Natalia and Vicky then you should jump into the bath before Vicky hogs it." You nod as you walk toward the hallway.'
 	end	
@@ -545,9 +545,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
 			if VKNatChat = 0:
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
 			else
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
 			end	
 		
 			act 'Walk away':VKKatjaChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Katja Room'
@@ -574,9 +574,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat 2':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
 	if VKKatjaChat < 2 and VKKatBath = 1 or VKKatjaChat < 2 and VKKatjaBath = 1:
-		'You walk up to Katja, and she turns to you and smiles. "I hope that you enjoyed our time together." You give her a wink that she returns before saying, "Also I hope that Vicky has been making you nervous at all. She is sprite chicken that one. Can never sit still for long." You lightly giggle before replying, "Everything has been going great. I have really been enjoying my time here." Katja places both of her hands on your shoulders then says, "That''s great. I wouldn''t want to be known for being a terrible host." You and her then giggle as you say, "Speaking of Vicky, she finished whatever she was cooking and wants us to head to the kitchen." Katja nods and says, "Sounds good I have the munchies right now. See you there and don''t worry if you are running a bit late because I''ll be sure to save you a plate." Katja then leaves the room.'
+		'You walk up to Katja and she turns to you and smiles. "I hope that you enjoyed our time together." You give her a wink that she returns before saying, "Also I hope that Vicky has been making you nervous at all. She is sprite chicken that one. Can never sit still for long." You lightly giggle before replying, "Everything has been going great. I have really been enjoying my time here." Katja places both of her hands on your shoulders then says, "That''s great. I wouldn''t want to be known for being a terrible host." You and her then giggle as you say, "Speaking of Vicky, she finished whatever she was cooking and wants us to head to the kitchen." Katja nods and says, "Sounds good I have the munchies right now. See you there and don''t worry if you are running a bit late because I''ll be sure to save you a plate." Katja then leaves the room.'
 	elseif VKKatjaChat < 2:
-		'You walk up to Katja, and she turns to you and smiles. "All cleaned up I see. I hope that Vicky has been making you nervous at all. She is sprite chicken that one. Can never sit still for long." You lightly giggle before replying, "Everything has been going great. I have really been enjoying my time here." Katja places both of her hands on your shoulders then says, "That''s great. I wouldn''t want to be known for being a terrible host." You and her then giggle as you say, "Speaking of Vicky, she finished whatever she was cooking and wants us to head to the kitchen." Katja nods and says, "Sounds good I have the munchies right now. See you there and don''t worry if you are running a bit late because I''ll be sure to save you a plate." Katja then leaves the room.'
+		'You walk up to Katja and she turns to you and smiles. "All cleaned up I see. I hope that Vicky has been making you nervous at all. She is sprite chicken that one. Can never sit still for long." You lightly giggle before replying, "Everything has been going great. I have really been enjoying my time here." Katja places both of her hands on your shoulders then says, "That''s great. I wouldn''t want to be known for being a terrible host." You and her then giggle as you say, "Speaking of Vicky, she finished whatever she was cooking and wants us to head to the kitchen." Katja nods and says, "Sounds good I have the munchies right now. See you there and don''t worry if you are running a bit late because I''ll be sure to save you a plate." Katja then leaves the room.'
 	end	
 	
 	act 'Walk away':VKKatjaChat = 2 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Katja Room'
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Katja, and she turns to you. "I know that I said that I wouldn''t lecture you, but that boy Niko is not what he seems. He doesn''t care about you, he is just trying to use you. I only tell you this because I care about you. Don''t let this punk corrupt you." You look at your feet while you consider what she said. Katja begins rubbing on your shoulders, "You can do better then him <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t let him trick you into believing otherwise. I just needed to tell you that before I left. Please stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. You are too good a girl to be used like that." Katja gets up then waves goodbye, as she walks out of the bedroom.'
+	'You sit down next to Katja and she turns to you. "I know that I said that I wouldn''t lecture you, but that boy Niko is not what he seems. He doesn''t care about you, he is just trying to use you. I only tell you this because I care about you. Don''t let this punk corrupt you." You look at your feet while you consider what she said. Katja begins rubbing on your shoulders, "You can do better then him <<$pcs_firstname>>. Don''t let him trick you into believing otherwise. I just needed to tell you that before I left. Please stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. You are too good a girl to be used like that." Katja gets up then waves goodbye as she walks out of the bedroom.'
 	
 	act 'Walk away':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Katja Room'
 end
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat 4':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down next to Katja, and she turns to you and says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, it was great having you here. Feel free to pay us another visit sometime." Katja then winks at you before turning back to the TV screen.'
+	'You sit down next to Katja and she turns to you and says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, it was great having you here. Feel free to pay us another visit sometime." Katja then winks at you before turning back to the TV screen.'
 	
 	act 'Walk away':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 end
@@ -617,9 +617,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/lounge/Natalia3.jpg"></center>'
-		'Natalia''s eyes light up, as she responds, "Great are you ready to head out now or would you like to speak to <<$VK_VikName>>, or Katja first?"'
+		'Natalia''s eyes light up as she responds, "Great are you ready to head out now or would you like to speak to <<$VK_VikName>>, or Katja first?"'
 
-		act 'Stay to chat with <<$VK_VikName>>, and Katja':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
+		act 'Stay to chat with <<$VK_VikName>> and Katja':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 		
 		act '<font color=#FF00FF>Leave house with Natalia</font>':VKNatChat = 5 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Walk'
 	end	
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja and Natalia':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/lounge/Natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love too, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love too, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -662,13 +662,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	if VKNatChat = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/lounge/natalia3.jpg"></center>'
-		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile, as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I wont." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
+		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I wont." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
 		*nl
 		'You respond, "Thank you, for everything you all have done for me. I shutter to think of what would have happened to me if you weren''t around." Natalia replies with a warm smile before saying, "You are very welcome. Now you should take a relaxing bath before <<$VK_VikName>> is finished cooking."'
 		act 'Walk away':VKNatChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you approach Natalia, she says, "Is there something else you need?" You reply, "I just wanted to know where the bathroom is." Natalia points toward the end of the hallway. "The bathroom is at the ned of the hall. It looks nice. A lot better than my bathroom." You reply, "Mine too." You both giggle before you walk back into the hallway.'
+		'When you approach Natalia, she says, "Is there something else you need?" You reply, "I just wanted to know where the bathroom is." Natalia points toward the end of the hallway. "The bathroom is at the end of the hall. It looks nice. A lot better than my bathroom." You reply, "Mine too." You both giggle before you walk back into the hallway.'
 		act 'Walk away':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Hallway'
 	end
 end
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit, and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
+	'As you approach Natalia, she asks, "How did you like the cupcakes? I found them very tasty." You reply, "They were super yummy, <<$VK_VikName>> could win a cooking contest, if we had those, that is." Natalia giggles before asking, "We are going to be leaving in a bit and I wanted to ask you...Would you like to walk home with me?"'
 
 	act 'I would love too':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/lounge/natalia3.jpg"></center>'
-		'Natalia''s eyes light up, as she responds, "Great are you ready to head out now or would you like to speak to <<$VK_VikName>>, or Katja first?"'
+		'Natalia''s eyes light up as she responds, "Great are you ready to head out now or would you like to speak to <<$VK_VikName>>, or Katja first?"'
 
 		act 'Stay to chat with <<$VK_VikName>> and Katja':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 		
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat 3':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/lounge/natalia2.jpg"></center>'	
-		'"I would love too, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you, and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
+		'"I would love too, but I have other places I need to be today, maybe next time." Natalia lowers her head, "Okay I guess...Just stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>. I...I''m concerned for you." You reply, "That is really sweet Natalia, but I''m fine." Natalia responds, "I''m glad to hear that. Goodbye <<$pcs_firstname>>." Natalia then walks out of the house while giving both, you and <<$VK_VikName>> a friendly smile.'
 		
 		act 'Wave goodbye':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'
 	end	
@@ -731,11 +731,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Walk':	
 	*clr & cla	
 	minut += 5
+	music_loop = 0
+	close all	
 	NikoAftermath = 0
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/vicky/vicky2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You, and Natalia begin walking toward the front door. <<$VK_VikName>> asks, "Are you two ready to head out?" You both nod simultaneously as <<$VK_VikName>> holds the door open for you. As you are walking past <<$VK_VikName>>, she leans forward then whispers in your ear, "Don''t forget what I said earlier. Whatever makes you happier, is the path you should follow. What''s the point of living a boring life?" She then gives you a wink, as you and Natalia head into town.'
+	'You and Natalia begin walking toward the front door. <<$VK_VikName>> asks, "Are you two ready to head out?" You both nod simultaneously as <<$VK_VikName>> holds the door open for you. As you are walking past <<$VK_VikName>>, she leans forward then whispers in your ear, "Don''t forget what I said earlier. Whatever makes you happier, is the path you should follow. What''s the point of living a boring life?" She then gives you a wink as you and Natalia head into town.'
 	
 	act 'Continue walking':
 		*clr & cla	
@@ -752,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Walk':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/Natalia/love/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Natalia lowers her head, "Oh, ok then, sorry for asking." You both walk home in silence. When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, and remember to do whatever you feel is right. Goodbye." You wave goodbye to Natalia, as she walks away.'	
+			'Natalia lowers her head, "Oh, ok then, sorry for asking." You both walk home in silence. When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>> and remember to do whatever you feel is right. Goodbye." You wave goodbye to Natalia as she walks away.'	
 
 			act 'Enter your apartment':gt 'korrPar'
 		end
@@ -765,14 +767,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/park/sit.jpg"></center>'
-	'You, and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench, and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles, as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did, and be unphased." You nod, as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
+	'You and Natalia walk through the park while having small talk until you sit down on a bench and Natalia sits down next to you. Natalia smiles as she asks, "What do you plan to do with Niko?" You reply, "I don''t know yet. I need to sleep on it." Natalia nods slowly, "I guess that''s fair, I''m just worried about you. No one can go through what you did and be unphased." You nod as you reply, "Nothing will be the same, I know that, but I can still choose where I go from here." Natalia places her hand on your knee. "You don''t need to be alone in this. If you ever need anything then you can always talk to me." You give Natalia a warm smile as you reply, "That''s so sweet of you, but why do you care so much about what happens to me? I''m no one special."'
 	*nl
 	if SexTalkNatalia = 4 or NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-		'"I..um..care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds, as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
+		'"I..um..care for you, I..." Natalia remains silent for a few seconds as she rubs her arm while staring at the ground, in front of her.'
 		act 'Kiss her':VKNataliaKiss = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Kiss'
 		act 'Change subject':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	else	
-		'"I just couldn''t leave you like that. You looked so scared, and helpless. I needed to help in any way I can." You place your hand on her knee, "Thank you Natalia. You saved me." Natalia''s face grows red, as she replies, "I didn''t do it alone, but you''re welcome." Natalia gives you a meek smile.'
+		'"I just couldn''t leave you like that. You looked so scared and helpless. I needed to help in any way I can." You place your hand on her knee, "Thank you Natalia. You saved me." Natalia''s face grows red as she replies, "I didn''t do it alone, but you''re welcome." Natalia gives you a meek smile.'
 		act 'Continue talking':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Park 2'
 	end	
 end	
@@ -783,7 +785,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Park 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big240.jpg"></center>'
-	'You, and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home.  When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia, as she walks away.'
+	'You and Natalia continue chatting for a few minutes before Natalia looks at her phone then says, "Wow, I can''t believe it gotten so late. We should really get home." You both walk home.  When you reach your door Natalia says, "Stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>> and remember to follow your heart. Have a good night." You then wave goodbye to Natalia as she walks away.'
 	
 	act 'Enter your apartment':gt 'korrPar'
 end	
@@ -792,7 +794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 	*clr & cla	
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/kiss1.mp4"></video></center>'  	
-	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes, as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red, as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia, and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
+	'You place your hand on Natalia''s cheek then gently pull her face to yours. You both share a passionate kiss for what feels like two minutes. After you finish, you both stare into each others eyes as you whisper to her, "Thank you for saving me Natalia. i will never forget what you have done for me." Natalia''s face is very red as she replies, "I would do anything for you. You only need to ask." You reply, "You''re so sweet Natalia and I am so lucky to have you." Natalia gives you a trembling smile before she quickly darts forward, giving you another passionate kiss.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs'stat'	
 							
@@ -801,7 +803,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Kiss':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/park/natalia1.jpg"></center>'	
-		'After a long passionate kiss, Natalia begins giggling playfully then checks her phone before saying, "It''s getting late, maybe we should start heading home." You reply, "Sure, let''s walk home." As you are walking home, Natalia wraps her fingers around yours then gives you an innocent smile. When you arrive at your apartment, Natalia says, "Please stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, I care for you so much... Just remember to follow your heart, and I''m sure that everything will work out for you. Have a good night." Natalia then gives you a soft kiss before walking away while looking back at you with an innocent smile.'
+		'After a long passionate kiss, Natalia begins giggling playfully then checks her phone before saying, "It''s getting late, maybe we should start heading home." You reply, "Sure, let''s walk home." As you are walking home, Natalia wraps her fingers around yours then gives you an innocent smile. When you arrive at your apartment, Natalia says, "Please stay safe <<$pcs_firstname>>, I care for you so much... Just remember to follow your heart and I''m sure that everything will work out for you. Have a good night." Natalia then gives you a soft kiss before walking away while looking back at you with an innocent smile.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs'stat'	
@@ -863,7 +865,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bath':
 	minut += 20
 	gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meyhome/bathroom/bath.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/wash4.jpg"></center>'
 	'You turn the water on and watch as the bathtub slowly fills. You look around the room feeling rather lonely but nevertheless you wait for the tub to fill before carefully climbing inside and relaxing as the warm water sooths you sore body. After a few minutes, you begin slowly scrubbing yourself until you finally feel clean. You then rest for a few more seconds before you get up, dry yourself off then get dressed.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Bathroom'
@@ -890,37 +892,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kat Bath':
 		act 'Continue':	
 			cla & *clr
 			gs'stat'
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath1.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "Get in the tub." You do as she says and climb into the tub as Katja undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Sit up." You do as she says and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
 					
 			act 'Let Katja rinse you':	
 				cla & *clr
 				gs'stat'	
-				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath2.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'After Katja finishes rinsing off the soap she grabs onto the back of your head then pulls you forward toward her nipple and you obediently begin licking her nipple passionately while occasionally looking up to see her lightly bitting her lip, obviously pleased at your performance. She then lightly grips your neck, gently pushing you off her, before climbing on top of the side of the tub before spreading her legs and rubbing her pussy gently.'
 			
 				act 'Lick her pussy':	
 					cla & *clr
 					gs'stat'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath3.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You lean forward then begin lightly licking her pussy as Katja leans back against the wall. You continue licking her vagina gently at first then begin quickening your pace while occasionally looking up to see her tilting her head back and moaning. You can see her legs tensing up as you pleasure her.'
 					
 					act 'Continue':	
 						cla & *clr
 						gs'stat'
-						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath4.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/4.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'As you continue licking Katja''s pussy, you decide to slide one of your fingers into her vagina then do your best to please her with it. You run your finger inside of her, brushing her g-spot with the tip of your finger as Katja begins moaning louder. You look up to Katja to see her fidgeting as she moans out loud.'
 						
 						act 'Increase your pace':	
 							cla & *clr
 							gs'stat'
-							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath5.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/5.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'You increase your pace before Katja suddenly slams her head back. Katja''s body begins to spasm as she experiences a powerful orgasm. Her moaning is erratic and her hands tightly clench around the shelf. You look up at her and watch her writhing in pleasure. <font color=#FF00FF>Yes Katja. Feel what you mean to me. You deserve every second of pleasure I can give you. I want you to feel pure ecstasy.</font>'
 							
 							act 'Continue':	
 								cla & *clr
 								gs'stat'
-								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath6.mp4"></video></center>'
+								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/6.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'Katja finishes her orgasm then lays still for a few seconds, catching her breath before looking into your eyes and saying, "You did good <<$pcs_nickname>>... Real good." She then leans forward and places her hand on your cheek, "You''re such a good girl aren''t you?" She then shares a soft passionate kiss with you for what feels like an eternity, but an eternity that you welcome.'
 								
 								act 'Finish the kiss':	
@@ -1005,38 +1007,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Bath':
 		act 'Continue':	
 			cla & *clr
 			gs'stat'
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath1.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/receiving/1.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Realizing your pain, Katja quickly stops then whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry I just...I forgot." You stroke her cheek then say, "Take off your clothes then get in." Katja quickly undresses herself and joins you. She begins soaping up the sponge then says, "Can you sit up please." You nod and she begins lathering your body with the soft sponge while being very careful not to put too much pressure on your sore spots.'
 					
 			act 'Let Katja rinse you off':	
 				cla & *clr
 				gs'stat'	
-				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath2.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/giving/2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'After Katja finishes rinsing off the soap you grab onto the back of her head then pull her forward toward your nipple and she obediently begins licking your nipple passionately while occasionally looking up to see if you approve. You give her a nod then lightly grip her neck, gently pushing her off of you, before climbing on top of the side of the tub before laying back and spreading your legs and rubbing your pussy gently.'
 			
 				act 'Let Katja lick your pussy':	
 					cla & *clr
 					gs'stat'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath3.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/giving/3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'Katja leans forward then begin lightly licking your pussy as you lean back laying against the side of the tub. Katja continues licking your vagina gently at first then begins quickening her pace while occasionally looking up to see your reaction, obviously wanting to please you. You reach down then stroke her cheek as she continues licking your vagina.'
 					
 					act 'See what she does':	
 						cla & *clr
 						gs'stat'
-						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath4.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Katja slowly begins to slide one of her fingers into your vagina then dooes her best to please her with it. She runs her finger inside of you, brushing against your g-spot with the tip of her finger as you begin moaning louder. Katja looks up to you as you feel the pleasure building to an almost unsustainable amount, as you begin moaning loudly, feeling like you will burst into an orgasm at any second.'
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/giving/4.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'Katja slowly begins to slide one of her fingers into your vagina then does her best to please you with it. She runs her finger inside of you, brushing against your g-spot with the tip of her finger as you begin moaning louder. Katja looks up to you as you feel the pleasure building to an almost unsustainable amount as you begin moaning loudly, feeling like you will burst into an orgasm at any second.'
 						
 						act 'Orgasm':	
 							cla & *clr
 							gs'stat'
-							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath5.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/giving/5.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Katja notices your loud moaning then begins increasing her pace, causing you to suddenly slam your head back. You feel your breath stop as waves of pleasure begin pulsing throughout your body. You lose all control as your body is filled with perfect ecstasy. You can hear yourself moaning loudly and feel your body spasming wildly while Katja remains latched onto your vagina, licking vigorously. <font color=#FF00FF>Yes Katja. Please me. Show me what I mean to you. Make me feel pure ecstasy!</font>'
 							
 							act 'Continue':	
 								cla & *clr
 								gs'stat'
-								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/bath6.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'You finish your orgasm then lay still for a few seconds, catching your breath before looking into Katja''s eyes and saying, "You did great Kat... Really good." You then lean forward and places your hand on her cheek, "You''re such a good girl aren''t you?" You both then share a soft passionate kiss for what feels like an eternity, but an eternity that you welcome.'
+								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/natalia/love/bathroom/giving/6.mp4"></video></center>'
+								'You finish your orgasm then lay still for a few seconds, catching your breath before looking into Katja''s eyes and saying, "You did great Kat... Really good." She then leans forward and places her hand on your chest as you say, "You''re such a good girl aren''t you?" You both then share a soft passionate kiss for what feels like an eternity, but an eternity that you welcome.'
 								
 								act 'Meekly nod':	
 									cla & *clr

locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -9,16 +9,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/grab.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you are walking toward the hallway, you feel hands covering your mouth then you feel your ribs being struck, causing you to recoil in pain, as you are dragged into the nearby bathroom.'
+	'As you are walking toward the hallway, you feel hands covering your mouth then you feel your ribs being struck, causing you to recoil in pain as you are dragged into the nearby bathroom.'
 
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/scene.jpg"></center>'
 		if NikoVolkovQW = -1:
-			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up, as someone whispers in your ear, "You think that you can just dump me after all I''ve done for you? Well you are so fucking wrong! You will be my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice, as he continues stripping you.'	
+			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up as someone whispers in your ear, "You think that you can just dump me after all I''ve done for you? Well you are so fucking wrong! You will be my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice as he continues stripping you.'	
 		else
-			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up, as someone whispers in your ear, "You have been running your fucking mouth, for far too long, and now I have a few other uses for it. You will now be my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice, as he continues stripping you.'
+			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up as someone whispers in your ear, "You have been running your fucking mouth, for far too long and now I have a few other uses for it. You will now be my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice as he continues stripping you.'
 		end		
 
 		act 'Plead':	
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
 			if NikoVolkovQW = -1:
-				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for breaking up with you. I was just really upset, and didn''t give you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you don''t give a shit about me, but you will pay me back. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday, or I will be using your body, as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
+				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for breaking up with you. I was just really upset and didn''t give you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you don''t give a shit about me, but you will pay me back. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday, or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			else	
-				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. and never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! your not fucking sorry, but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday, or I will be using your body, as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
+				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. and never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! your not fucking sorry, but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday, or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			end	
 
 			act 'I understand':	
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b>, and Niko counts it before giving you an approving nod, "Excellent, See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>>, and don''t try to avoid me, or things will end badly, for you." Niko puts the money in his pocket then walks away. You take a minute to get dressed then try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
+						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b> and Niko counts it before giving you an approving nod, "Excellent, See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>> and don''t try to avoid me, or things will end badly, for you." Niko puts the money in his pocket then walks away. You take a minute to get dressed then try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
 
 						act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 					end
@@ -60,13 +60,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 					minut += 5
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You lower your head, as you slowly drop to your knees in front of Niko, he gives you a confident grin, as he begins unbuttoning his pants. You soon feel Niko''s penis rubbing against your lips, so you take a deep breath then wrap your lips around it, sucking it intently trying to make Niko cum, as quicly, as possible. Niko leans back while griping your head with one hand.'
+					'You lower your head as you slowly drop to your knees in front of Niko, he gives you a confident grin as he begins unbuttoning his pants. You soon feel Niko''s penis rubbing against your lips, so you take a deep breath then wrap your lips around it, sucking it intently trying to make Niko cum as quicly as possible. Niko leans back while griping your head with one hand.'
 
 					act 'Make Niko cum':	
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/facial1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You increase your pace as you look up at Niko, noticing how much he is enjoying your performance. You stare him in the eyes, as you hear him begin groaning. You suddenly feel Niko''s warm seed filling your mouth, one squirt at a time. You look up to Niko with his cum slowly leaking out of your mouth, Niko then looks down to you, and says, "What are you waiting for? Swallow my cum bitch!" You give Niko a meek nod then begin swallowing his cum, and after you finish, Niko pulls your head to the ground and says, "You missed a few drops, Lick it off the floor!" not wanting to anger Niko further, you obediently begin licking the last drops of cum off the floor. "Now that''s better, I''ll see you tomorrow. Remember what I said, and don''t ever try to avoid me."'	
+						'You increase your pace as you look up at Niko, noticing how much he is enjoying your performance. You stare him in the eyes as you hear him begin groaning. You suddenly feel Niko''s warm seed filling your mouth, one squirt at a time. You look up to Niko with his cum slowly leaking out of your mouth, Niko then looks down to you and says, "What are you waiting for? Swallow my cum bitch!" You give Niko a meek nod then begin swallowing his cum and after you finish, Niko pulls your head to the ground and says, "You missed a few drops, Lick it off the floor!" not wanting to anger Niko further, you obediently begin licking the last drops of cum off the floor. "Now that''s better, I''ll see you tomorrow. Remember what I said and don''t ever try to avoid me."'	
 
 						act 'Stand up':gt 'FedorMisc', 'Restroom'
 					end	
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk out of the cafeteria, and see Niko standing in the hallway on his phone.'
+	'You walk out of the cafeteria and see Niko standing in the hallway on his phone.'
 	
 	act 'Approach Niko':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You approach Niko, and a confident grin covers his face, as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?"'		
+		'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?"'		
 
 		if money >= 200:
 			act 'Money (200 <b>₽</b>)':	
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You downcast your eyes, as you reply, "You can use my body, as payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." Niko grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the less used restroom.'
+			'You downcast your eyes as you reply, "You can use my body as payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." Niko grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the less used restroom.'
 			
 			act 'Head to the restroom with Niko':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 3'
 		end
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/gschool_hall01.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lower your head then quickly walk past Niko, hoping that he won''t notice you, and to your relief, he doesn''t seem to notice. You let out a sigh of relief before heading to the hallway,'
+			'You lower your head then quickly walk past Niko, hoping that he won''t notice you and to your relief, he doesn''t seem to notice. You let out a sigh of relief before heading to the hallway,'
 
 			act 'Continue':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 		else
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/grab.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lower your head then quickly walk past Niko, hoping that he won''t notice you. After a few steps, you suddenly feel Niko''s hand on your throat, choking you firmly, as he whispers in your ear, "You wouldn''t be trying to avoid me, would you?" You meekly shake your head, trying to speak, but unable breath freely within Niko''s steel grip, Niko then pulls you into the restroom.'
+			'You lower your head then quickly walk past Niko, hoping that he won''t notice you. After a few steps, you suddenly feel Niko''s hand on your throat, choking you firmly as he whispers in your ear, "You wouldn''t be trying to avoid me, would you?" You meekly shake your head, trying to speak, but unable breath freely within Niko''s steel grip, Niko then pulls you into the restroom.'
 
 			act 'Continue':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 4'			
 		end	
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You drop down to your knees then begin unbuttoning Niko''s pants. Niko looks down at you with a confident grin, as you finish pulling down his pants. Niko rubs his dick against your lips, signaling you to suck on it. You wrap your lips around Niko''s dick then begin licking and sucking it firmly, not wanting to anger him. Niko then looks down at you and says, "Good girl. Keep it up." You continue sucking Niko''s dick at a moderate pace, not wanting to overdo it.'
+		'You drop down to your knees then begin unbuttoning Niko''s pants. Niko looks down at you with a confident grin as you finish pulling down his pants. Niko rubs his dick against your lips, signaling you to suck on it. You wrap your lips around Niko''s dick then begin licking and sucking it firmly, not wanting to anger him. Niko then looks down at you and says, "Good girl. Keep it up." You continue sucking Niko''s dick at a moderate pace, not wanting to overdo it.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'					
 		gs 'stat'	
 									
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/bj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'After a few more seconds, Niko begins moaning, as he runs his fingers through your hair before grabbing your head with both hands, and pushes his penis down your throat, as he begin spraying his warm seed down your throat. You try your best not to gag, as Niko continues to pump his warm cum down your throat while you swallow every drop of it. After Niko finishes, he looks down to you then says, "You are really good at that. I will see you again soon. Niko buttons his pants then walks out of the restroom."'
+			'After a few more seconds, Niko begins moaning as he runs his fingers through your hair before grabbing your head with both hands and pushes his penis down your throat as he begin spraying his warm seed down your throat. You try your best not to gag as Niko continues to pump his warm cum down your throat while you swallow every drop of it. After Niko finishes, he looks down to you then says, "You are really good at that. I will see you again soon. Niko buttons his pants then walks out of the restroom."'
 			*nl
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow8.mp4"></video></center>'			
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/virgin.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You downcast your eyes as you tell Niko. "I''m a virgin but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding, "Wow you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." Niko then gently guides you toward the sink then undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants, and pressing his dick against you vagina. Niko whispers in your ear, "I will take this slow for you ok?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his penis inside of your vagina, causing your hymen to stretch for his dick, and after a few seconds, you feel your hymen give. You can feel a slight pain in your vagina, as your hymen breaks, and is soon increase slightly when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his penis deeper inside you, and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
+			'You downcast your eyes as you tell Niko. "I''m a virgin but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding, "Wow you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." Niko then gently guides you toward the sink then undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants and pressing his dick against you vagina. Niko whispers in your ear, "I will take this slow for you ok?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his penis inside of your vagina, causing your hymen to stretch for his dick and after a few seconds, you feel your hymen give. You can feel a slight pain in your vagina as your hymen breaks and is soon increase slightly when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his penis deeper inside you and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'	
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'After a minute, all the pain fades and is replaced by pleasure. You try you best to give in to the pleasure. Niko begins fucking you harder before quickly pulling out of you then groaning, as he begin milking his penis over your ass. Squirt by squirt, Niko''s cum covers your asscheeks. Niko takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>, I can''t wait to fuck you again." Niko then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'			
+				'After a minute, all the pain fades and is replaced by pleasure. You try you best to give in to the pleasure. Niko begins fucking you harder before quickly pulling out of you then groaning as he begin milking his penis over your ass. Squirt by squirt, Niko''s cum covers your asscheeks. Niko takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>, I can''t wait to fuck you again." Niko then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'			
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/vaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You grab onto Niko''s hand then place it between your legs, as you say, "I want you to fuck my pussy." Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "Good girl. That was just what I wanted to hear." Niko then begin undressing you before spinning you around then pulling you toward him. You can feel Niko penis pressed against your vagina then suddenly feel it enter you, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill your vagina. Niko lightly grips your neck as he pushes you down on his rock hard cock, filling your vagina almost completely with his dick. You close your eyes, and give in to the pleasure filling you, as Niko continues to fuck your pussy.'
+			'You grab onto Niko''s hand then place it between your legs as you say, "I want you to fuck my pussy." Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "Good girl. That was just what I wanted to hear." Niko then begin undressing you before spinning you around then pulling you toward him. You can feel Niko penis pressed against your vagina then suddenly feel it enter you, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill your vagina. Niko lightly grips your neck as he pushes you down on his rock hard cock, filling your vagina almost completely with his dick. You close your eyes and give in to the pleasure filling you as Niko continues to fuck your pussy.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 				
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/vaginal2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko suddenly grabs onto your stomach and leg, lifting you up in the air, as he continues pushing you onto his hard penis. You start moaning out loud, as Niko whispers in your ear. "You are really liking it, aren''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>." You turn to Niko then nod, and that seems to excite Niko, resulting in him greatly increasing his pace. Niko continues fucking you until he suddenly pulls out of you then begin rubbing his penis in between your thighs, milking his dick on the ground in front of you. After Niko catches his breath, he turns to you and says, "You are a great fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you again soon." Niko buttons his pants before walking out of the restroom.'		
+				'Niko suddenly grabs onto your stomach and leg, lifting you up in the air as he continues pushing you onto his hard penis. You start moaning out loud as Niko whispers in your ear. "You are really liking it, aren''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>." You turn to Niko then nod and that seems to excite Niko, resulting in him greatly increasing his pace. Niko continues fucking you until he suddenly pulls out of you then begin rubbing his penis in between your thighs, milking his dick on the ground in front of you. After Niko catches his breath, he turns to you and says, "You are a great fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you again soon." Niko buttons his pants before walking out of the restroom.'		
 				gs 'cum_call', 'legs', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/ride.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You approach Niko then place your hand on his crotch, as you say, "I want to ride your cock, so why don''t you make yourself comfortable?" Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "You really are a naughty little minx, aren''t you?" Niko then unbuttons his pants then sits on top of a nearby toilet. You quickly undress, before approaching Niko''s hard penis before aliening it with your vagina then pushing Niko''s dick inside you. Niko begins lightly moaning as you begin riding his hard cock. You begin moaning with NIko, feeling only his hard penis, pushing its way deeper inside you.'
+		'You approach Niko then place your hand on his crotch as you say, "I want to ride your cock, so why don''t you make yourself comfortable?" Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "You really are a naughty little minx, aren''t you?" Niko then unbuttons his pants then sits on top of a nearby toilet. You quickly undress, before approaching Niko''s hard penis before aliening it with your vagina then pushing Niko''s dick inside you. Niko begins lightly moaning as you begin riding his hard cock. You begin moaning with NIko, feeling only his hard penis, pushing its way deeper inside you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 				
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/sex/bimbo.boy1,7.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You begin riding his hard cock while closing your eyes, and focusing on the pleasure building up inside of you. Niko begins spanking your ass while saying to you, "You really seem to be getting the hang of this <<$pcs_nickname>>. Good girl." Niko begins breathing heavier for a few seconds before his breath stops, as Niko pushes you forward then pulls out of you, covering your ass with his seed. You let out a needed moan, as Niko seed covers your lower back. Niko finishes milking himself on your ass when he says, "You are getting better. Well you are all payed up for today. See you next time." Niko then smacks your ass before buttoning his pants then leaving the restroom.'		
+			'You begin riding his hard cock while closing your eyes and focusing on the pleasure building up inside of you. Niko begins spanking your ass while saying to you, "You really seem to be getting the hang of this <<$pcs_nickname>>. Good girl." Niko begins breathing heavier for a few seconds before his breath stops as Niko pushes you forward then pulls out of you, covering your ass with his seed. You let out a needed moan as Niko seed covers your lower back. Niko finishes milking himself on your ass when he says, "You are getting better. Well you are all payed up for today. See you next time." Niko then smacks your ass before buttoning his pants then leaving the restroom.'		
 			gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyanal.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You lean forward then whisper in Niko''s ear, "I want you to fuck my ass." Niko''s eyes light up, as he replies, "I always knew that you were a wild girl. Let''s do this." He then gives your ass a firm smack, as he begins wetting his hand in the sink then lubing up his dick. You pulls down your pants then bend over, getting yourself ready for Niko. You close your eyes, and focus on Niko''s dick firmly pushing its way inside of your ass, evoking moans from you and Niko both.'
+		'You lean forward then whisper in Niko''s ear, "I want you to fuck my ass." Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "I always knew that you were a wild girl. Let''s do this." He then gives your ass a firm smack as he begins wetting his hand in the sink then lubing up his dick. You pulls down your pants then bend over, getting yourself ready for Niko. You close your eyes and focus on Niko''s dick firmly pushing its way inside of your ass, evoking moans from you and Niko both.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Niko begins thrusting his dick deeper in your ass, as you lift your leg up, placing it on the nearby toilet seat, givng Niko better access. You continue staring into Niko''s eyes when they suddenly squint. Niko groans as he begins pumping your ass with his warm seed.' 
+			'Niko begins thrusting his dick deeper in your ass as you lift your leg up, placing it on the nearby toilet seat, givng Niko better access. You continue staring into Niko''s eyes when they suddenly squint. Niko groans as he begins pumping your ass with his warm seed.' 
 			*nl
 			'You can feel his penis throbbing inside of you, filling you with a pleasant warmth. Niko catches his breath before saying, "You did good today. Keep it up." Niko smacks your ass before buttoning his pants then leaving the restroom.'	
 			gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy
@@ -306,17 +306,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 	if VK = 1:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "It''s time for you to put that mouth of yours to good use. Suck my fucking dick bitch!" Niko pulls down his pants then presses the tip of his penis against your lips.'
 	elseif VK = 2:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "Today you will be my little pee slut, understand?" You lower your head, and nod, as Niko pulls down his pants then says, "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
+		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "Today you will be my little pee slut, understand?" You lower your head and nod as Niko pulls down his pants then says, "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
 	elseif VK = 3 and pcs_vag = 0 or VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today, so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t...I''m...I''m a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin, and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours, or I will!"'
+		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today, so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t...I''m...I''m a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours, or I will!"'
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today, so spread those legs!"'		
 	elseif VK = 4:
 		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "You will be riding my dick today, so get over here." You meekly nod as you approach him. Niko unbuttons his pants then grabs you then turns you around before wrapping his hand around your neck, pulling you onto his dick.'
 	elseif VK = 5:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I want to fuck your ass, so spread those cheeks of yours." You meekly nod before bending over and spreading your cheeks, as NIko approaches you while unbuttoning his pants.'
+		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I want to fuck your ass, so spread those cheeks of yours." You meekly nod before bending over and spreading your cheeks as NIko approaches you while unbuttoning his pants.'
 	elseif VK = 6:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m fucking your ass, now get over here bitch!" Niko grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the urinal then shoves your head in it, as he unbuttons his pants.'	
+		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m fucking your ass, now get over here bitch!" Niko grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the urinal then shoves your head in it as he unbuttons his pants.'	
 	end	
 
 	if VK = 1:
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/bj3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You wrap your lips around Niko'' penis then begin sucking it firmly. Niko looks down to you then spits on your face before saying, "You are my fucking bitch! Don''t you ever forget that." You continue sucking his dick while trying to ignore Niko, as he occasionally spits in your face.'		
+			'You wrap your lips around Niko'' penis then begin sucking it firmly. Niko looks down to you then spits on your face before saying, "You are my fucking bitch! Don''t you ever forget that." You continue sucking his dick while trying to ignore Niko as he occasionally spits in your face.'		
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -347,13 +347,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/piss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You open your mouth and close your eyes, waiting for Niko to start. A few seconds later you feel warm liquid spraying in your face, filling your mouth, and getting in your nose. Niko shouts, "SWALLOW IT ALL BITCH!" You try your best not to gag, as you attempt to swallow all of him bitter tasting urine. You can''t keep your self from gagging as Niko continues shooting his urine down your throat. Niko suddenly rubs his penis against your lips before shoving it into your mouth.'			
+			'You open your mouth and close your eyes, waiting for Niko to start. A few seconds later you feel warm liquid spraying in your face, filling your mouth and getting in your nose. Niko shouts, "SWALLOW IT ALL BITCH!" You try your best not to gag as you attempt to swallow all of him bitter tasting urine. You can''t keep your self from gagging as Niko continues shooting his urine down your throat. Niko suddenly rubs his penis against your lips before shoving it into your mouth.'			
 			gs 'arousal', 'pee', -5, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 			act 'Suck Niko''s dick':	
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You know exactly what he want, and begin sucking Niko''s dick, trying your best to get him off as quickly as possible, knowing that the sooner he finishes, the sooner you can wash up and leave. You lick and suck Niko''s dick while trying your best to ignore the rotten taste in your mouth and the mildly burning of Niko''s urine on your face. Niko looks down to you then says, "There you go <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep behaving like this, and we will get along just fine." He then tilts his head back and begins moaning. Niko suddenly grabs the back of your head, and begin filling your throat with his warm cum, as you try your best to swallow every drop of it. After Niko finishes, he turn to you and says, "You are learning, Good keep it up." Niko then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+				'You know exactly what he want and begin sucking Niko''s dick, trying your best to get him off as quickly as possible, knowing that the sooner he finishes, the sooner you can wash up and leave. You lick and suck Niko''s dick while trying your best to ignore the rotten taste in your mouth and the mildly burning of Niko''s urine on your face. Niko looks down to you then says, "There you go <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep behaving like this and we will get along just fine." He then tilts his head back and begins moaning. Niko suddenly grabs the back of your head and begin filling your throat with his warm cum as you try your best to swallow every drop of it. After Niko finishes, he turn to you and says, "You are learning, Good keep it up." Niko then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You slowly approach the sink then spread your legs, as Niko approaches behind you. You can feel tears streaming down your face, as Niko drops his pants then rubs his penis against your vagina before forcing it inside, causing a powerful jolt of pain to fill your vagina. Niko waste no time, and begin thrusting his penis inside you very roughly, as he whispers in your ear, "Oops there goes your virginity. How does it feel to be a real woman?" You lower your head in silence while trying to focus on anything, but the pain.'		
+			'You slowly approach the sink then spread your legs as Niko approaches behind you. You can feel tears streaming down your face as Niko drops his pants then rubs his penis against your vagina before forcing it inside, causing a powerful jolt of pain to fill your vagina. Niko waste no time and begin thrusting his penis inside you very roughly as he whispers in your ear, "Oops there goes your virginity. How does it feel to be a real woman?" You lower your head in silence while trying to focus on anything, but the pain.'		
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				if pcs_vag = 0:pcs_vag += 1
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/virgin.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko quickly increases the pace of his thrusts, fucking you harder, as you close your eyes, waiting for it to be over. Niko''s breathing hastens before stopping, as he pulls out of you then begins spraying his warm seed over your ass. You wait for Niko to finish milking his penis on your ass before asking, "May I please go now?" Niko catches his breath before replying, "Yeah sure. You''re all payed up for today." You quickly grab a few paper towels then clean the blood off of your legs before grabbing your clothes, and getting dressed. After you are fully dressed, you quickly run out of the boys restroom.'
+				'Niko quickly increases the pace of his thrusts, fucking you harder as you close your eyes, waiting for it to be over. Niko''s breathing hastens before stopping as he pulls out of you then begins spraying his warm seed over your ass. You wait for Niko to finish milking his penis on your ass before asking, "May I please go now?" Niko catches his breath before replying, "Yeah sure. You''re all payed up for today." You quickly grab a few paper towels then clean the blood off of your legs before grabbing your clothes and getting dressed. After you are fully dressed, you quickly run out of the boys restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/vaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You slowly approach the sink then spread your legs, as Niko approaches behind you. You can feel Niko''s penis pressing against your vagina before he shoves it inside, evoking a moan from you, feeling his dick rapidly entering you. Niko whispers in your ear, "You like it when I shove my dick inside you, don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'You slowly approach the sink then spread your legs as Niko approaches behind you. You can feel Niko''s penis pressing against your vagina before he shoves it inside, evoking a moan from you, feeling his dick rapidly entering you. Niko whispers in your ear, "You like it when I shove my dick inside you, don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/vaginal2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You turn to Niko, as he points toward the mirror and says, "Look in that mirror. Do you know what you see? A filthy whore, getting what she deserves. Get used to that sight." You do as he says, as you feel, and see tears running down your cheeks. Watching you in tears must have pushed Niko to the edge, as he pulls out of you then begins covering your back with his warm seed. After Niko milks his penis on your back, he says, "Remember your place <<$pcs_firstname>>, and never try to avoid me again." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+				'You turn to Niko as he points toward the mirror and says, "Look in that mirror. Do you know what you see? A filthy whore, getting what she deserves. Get used to that sight." You do as he says as you feel and see tears running down your cheeks. Watching you in tears must have pushed Niko to the edge as he pulls out of you then begins covering your back with his warm seed. After Niko milks his penis on your back, he says, "Remember your place <<$pcs_firstname>> and never try to avoid me again." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/vaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You can feel Niko penis pushing its way inside of your vagina, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill you. Niko continues fucking you as he leans forward, and whispers in your ear. "Who do you belong to bitch?" Knowing better than to anger Niko, you reluctantly reply, "I belong to you Niko." Niko chuckles as he responds, "Yes you do, and never forget it." Niko wraps one of his arms around your stomach, and the other on your leg then lifts you up.'
+			'You can feel Niko penis pushing its way inside of your vagina, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill you. Niko continues fucking you as he leans forward and whispers in your ear. "Who do you belong to bitch?" Knowing better than to anger Niko, you reluctantly reply, "I belong to you Niko." Niko chuckles as he responds, "Yes you do and never forget it." Niko wraps one of his arms around your stomach and the other on your leg then lifts you up.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/thighs.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko continues fucking you as he keeps you off the ground. You can''t help but feel somewhat impressed at his strength, as he holds you up. You can hear Niko whispering in your ear. "How are you liking your fucking?" You look back at him then nod which seems to turn him on ,as he begins breathing faster. Niko''s breath suddenly stops as he pulls his dick out of you then begins rubbing his dick between your legs, milking his penis on the floor in front of you. After Niko finishes, you turn to him then ask, "Are you satisfied Niko? May I leave now?" Niko gives your ass a firm smack as he replies, "You can go now, but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes then get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
+				'Niko continues fucking you as he keeps you off the ground. You can''t help but feel somewhat impressed at his strength as he holds you up. You can hear Niko whispering in your ear. "How are you liking your fucking?" You look back at him then nod which seems to turn him on ,as he begins breathing faster. Niko''s breath suddenly stops as he pulls his dick out of you then begins rubbing his dick between your legs, milking his penis on the floor in front of you. After Niko finishes, you turn to him then ask, "Are you satisfied Niko? May I leave now?" Niko gives your ass a firm smack as he replies, "You can go now, but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes then get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyanal.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You feel Niko''s penis pressing against your anus then feel him suddenly force it inside you, evoking a groan of pain to escape you. Niko wastes no time, as he begins fucking your ass roughly. You let out a few groans of pain, as Niko continues fucking your ass before leaning forward then whispering in your ear. "How does it feel to know that you belong to me?" You look back at him in silence, not knowing what he wants you to say. Niko grins as he smacks your ass firmly.'
+			'You feel Niko''s penis pressing against your anus then feel him suddenly force it inside you, evoking a groan of pain to escape you. Niko wastes no time as he begins fucking your ass roughly. You let out a few groans of pain as Niko continues fucking your ass before leaning forward then whispering in your ear. "How does it feel to know that you belong to me?" You look back at him in silence, not knowing what he wants you to say. Niko grins as he smacks your ass firmly.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Knowing that the faster Niko cums, the quicker this torment will be over, turn to face Niko then stare into his eyes. Niko begins struggling to hold back from cumming then begins groaning, filling up your ass with his warm seed. You focus on the throbbing of his hard penis in your ass, filling you with his warm cum. After Niko finishes, he pulls out of you, causing a stream of cum to leak out of your ass, and onto the floor. Niko then says, "You did good <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you tomorrow." You then gather your clothes, and get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
+				'Knowing that the faster Niko cums, the quicker this torment will be over, turn to face Niko then stare into his eyes. Niko begins struggling to hold back from cumming then begins groaning, filling up your ass with his warm seed. You focus on the throbbing of his hard penis in your ass, filling you with his warm cum. After Niko finishes, he pulls out of you, causing a stream of cum to leak out of your ass and onto the floor. Niko then says, "You did good <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you tomorrow." You then gather your clothes and get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You look back at Niko, as he pushes his penis inside you, causing a sharp pain to fill your ass, evoking a groan from you, as you hold onto the bottom of the urinal. You can only feel the pain building up in your ass, as Niko continues roughly fucking you. Niko leans forward and grabs onto your hair, as he says, "You really shouldn''t have tried to avoid me bitch. This could have been quick and painless, but you had to piss me off."'
+			'You look back at Niko as he pushes his penis inside you, causing a sharp pain to fill your ass, evoking a groan from you as you hold onto the bottom of the urinal. You can only feel the pain building up in your ass as Niko continues roughly fucking you. Niko leans forward and grabs onto your hair as he says, "You really shouldn''t have tried to avoid me bitch. This could have been quick and painless, but you had to piss me off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -468,9 +468,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko suddenly lifts you up by your hair then pulls you toward one of the stalls before shoving your head into the toilet. You hold your breath as the water covers your face, hoping that Niko lets you out to breath soon. Niko pulls you out of the toilet for a few seconds to catch your breath before shoving you back in. All you can think about is not drowning, even as your anus is growing sore from Niko hard penis ramming inside. After a few more seconds, Niko suddenly pulls you out of the toilet, as he begins groaning, filling your ass with his warm seed.' 
+				'Niko suddenly lifts you up by your hair then pulls you toward one of the stalls before shoving your head into the toilet. You hold your breath as the water covers your face, hoping that Niko lets you out to breath soon. Niko pulls you out of the toilet for a few seconds to catch your breath before shoving you back in. All you can think about is not drowning, even as your anus is growing sore from Niko hard penis ramming inside. After a few more seconds, Niko suddenly pulls you out of the toilet as he begins groaning, filling your ass with his warm seed.' 
 				*nl
-				'Niko continues thrusting his penis inside you, milking it completely. After Niko finishes, he says, "Now hopefully you''ve learned your lesson, and won''t try to avoid me again." You turn to him then meekly nod, as he buttons his pants then leaves the restroom while you remain to catch your breath.'
+				'Niko continues thrusting his penis inside you, milking it completely. After Niko finishes, he says, "Now hopefully you''ve learned your lesson and won''t try to avoid me again." You turn to him then meekly nod as he buttons his pants then leaves the restroom while you remain to catch your breath.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -492,14 +492,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You move toward Fedor then wrap your arms around him as you say, "Fyodor I...I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back, as he responds, "Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, tell me what''s wrong." You can feel tears streaming down your face, as you reply, "Nikolai Volkov has been bullying me at lunch everyday. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist, "That little gopnik shit! I will make him pay. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>> the next time he tries I will bash his face in!"'
+	'You move toward Fedor then wrap your arms around him as you say, "Fyodor I...I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back as he responds, "Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, tell me what''s wrong." You can feel tears streaming down your face as you reply, "Nikolai Volkov has been bullying me at lunch everyday. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist, "That little gopnik shit! I will make him pay. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>> the next time he tries I will bash his face in!"'
 	
 	act 'Thank Fedor':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'		
-		'You quickly look up to Fedor then give him a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Fyodor, I always feel so safe with you." Fedor wipes your tears as he responds, "You will always be safe with me, and I will make sure that gopnik punk finds out the hard way what happens when someone fucks with you." You then reply, "Thank you Fyodor." before hearing the school bell. Fedor says, "Well it''s time for class. Don''t forget that i will always keep you safe." You give Fedor a loving smile before walking toward your next class.'
+		'You quickly look up to Fedor then give him a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Fyodor, I always feel so safe with you." Fedor wipes your tears as he responds, "You will always be safe with me and I will make sure that gopnik punk finds out the hard way what happens when someone fucks with you." You then reply, "Thank you Fyodor." before hearing the school bell. Fedor says, "Well it''s time for class. Don''t forget that i will always keep you safe." You give Fedor a loving smile before walking toward your next class.'
 	
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko, and a confident grin covers his face, as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big5.jpg"></center>'
-		'After turning the corner, Niko suddenly recoils back, as Fedor''s fist makes contact, causing Niko to drop to the ground, holding his face. Fedor shouts, "HOW DARE YOU TOUCH <<$pcs_firstname>>! I WILL SHOW YOU WHAT HAPPENS WITH SHITHEADS LIKE YOU." Fedor begins punching Niko as he tries to block the blows. Suddenly Fedor gets tackled.'		
+		'After turning the corner, Niko suddenly recoils back as Fedor''s fist makes contact, causing Niko to drop to the ground, holding his face. Fedor shouts, "HOW DARE YOU TOUCH <<$pcs_firstname>>! I WILL SHOW YOU WHAT HAPPENS WITH SHITHEADS LIKE YOU." Fedor begins punching Niko as he tries to block the blows. Suddenly Fedor gets tackled.'		
 
 		act 'Turn to Fedor':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -537,14 +537,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You turn to see Ivan Prokhorov standing over Niko. Ivan immediately rushes toward Roman, grabbing him by his arms then lifting him up before slamming him onto the ground. "Teaming up on my friend, and his girl? Not on my watch." Ivan then helps Fedor up before lifting up his foot then driving it into Roman''s face. Fedor takes a second to recover before immediately climbing on Niko then repeatedly punching him. After a few punches, Ivan pulls Fedor off then says, "Come on man, it''s done."'
+				'You turn to see Ivan Prokhorov standing over Niko. Ivan immediately rushes toward Roman, grabbing him by his arms then lifting him up before slamming him onto the ground. "Teaming up on my friend and his girl? Not on my watch." Ivan then helps Fedor up before lifting up his foot then driving it into Roman''s face. Fedor takes a second to recover before immediately climbing on Niko then repeatedly punching him. After a few punches, Ivan pulls Fedor off then says, "Come on man, it''s done."'
 				
 				act 'Place your hand on Fedor''s shoulder':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 1
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath before asking you, "Are you alright <<$pcs_firstname>>? You took quite a hit there." You quickly hug Fedor, as you reply, "I''m great, thanks to you two." Ivan replies, "It was nothing special. I just won''t let punks like them, hurt my friends." Fedor wraps his arms around you then says, "This is the last time that punk will ever hurt you. You are safe." You return the hug then hear the class bell, signaling the beginning of class. Fedor takes your hand then leads you toward you next class. While Ivan stays behind to "Chat" with Niko and Roman.'
+					'Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath before asking you, "Are you alright <<$pcs_firstname>>? You took quite a hit there." You quickly hug Fedor as you reply, "I''m great, thanks to you two." Ivan replies, "It was nothing special. I just won''t let punks like them, hurt my friends." Fedor wraps his arms around you then says, "This is the last time that punk will ever hurt you. You are safe." You return the hug then hear the class bell, signaling the beginning of class. Fedor takes your hand then leads you toward you next class. While Ivan stays behind to "Chat" with Niko and Roman.'
 
 					act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fyodor Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko, and a confident grin covers his face, as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I...I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -569,14 +569,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fyodor Help':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/down.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you reach the restroom, Niko tosses you to the ground then approaches you when suddenly, Fedor quickly walks into the room, and punches Niko in his face, knocking him to the ground before climbing on him, and punching him repeatedly. After a few punches Niko says, "Whoa chill out man, <<$pcs_firstname>> and I were just playing a game. Do you see? She is laughing right now." Fedor turns to you just as Niko winds up his fist, ramming it into Fedor''s face before quickly pushing Fedor off of him then running to the door. You quickly grab Niko''s shirt turning him to you before scratching him in his face then pushing him onto the ground, giving Fedor enough time to recover then climb on top of Niko again, punching him in the face.'	
+		'As you reach the restroom, Niko tosses you to the ground then approaches you when suddenly, Fedor quickly walks into the room and punches Niko in his face, knocking him to the ground before climbing on him and punching him repeatedly. After a few punches Niko says, "Whoa chill out man, <<$pcs_firstname>> and I were just playing a game. Do you see? She is laughing right now." Fedor turns to you just as Niko winds up his fist, ramming it into Fedor''s face before quickly pushing Fedor off of him then running to the door. You quickly grab Niko''s shirt turning him to you before scratching him in his face then pushing him onto the ground, giving Fedor enough time to recover then climb on top of Niko again, punching him in the face.'	
 
 		act 'Enjoy the show':	
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You watch in satisfaction at Niko getting what he deserves, for a few seconds before Fedor finally calms down then climbs off of Niko then walks up to you, and wraps his arms around you before asking, "Are you alright? He didn''t hurt you did he?" You reply, "No but I did enjoy you hurting him." Fedor chuckles, "Anyone who messes with you, wil share the same treatment.." You lean forward then give Fedor a passionate kiss which lasts for almost a full minute. After the kiss, Fedor says, "You should get back to recess before you miss it. I will have a chat with NIko. Go on, enjoy your recess." You give Fedor a kiss on the cheek before walking out of the restroom.'
+			'You watch in satisfaction at Niko getting what he deserves, for a few seconds before Fedor finally calms down then climbs off of Niko then walks up to you and wraps his arms around you before asking, "Are you alright? He didn''t hurt you did he?" You reply, "No but I did enjoy you hurting him." Fedor chuckles, "Anyone who messes with you, wil share the same treatment.." You lean forward then give Fedor a passionate kiss which lasts for almost a full minute. After the kiss, Fedor says, "You should get back to recess before you miss it. I will have a chat with NIko. Go on, enjoy your recess." You give Fedor a kiss on the cheek before walking out of the restroom.'
 			
 			act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 		end	
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Ivan then downcast your eyes before saying, "Ivan I need your help...I..." Ivan''s face saddens, as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'
+	'You walk up to Ivan then downcast your eyes before saying, "Ivan I need your help...I..." Ivan''s face saddens as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/hug1.jpg"></center>'	
 	
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan Help':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/angry1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You try to collect your thoughts before saying, "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he has been raping me at lunchtime and I..." Ivan agrily slams one of the lockers, as he says, "That slimy little shit! This will not continue <<$pcs_firstname>>, I will put an end to it. You don''t need to worry. I will end this." You wrap your arms around Ivan then say, "Thank you so much. I didn''t know what to do." Ivan replies, "That kind of shit is unacceptable. You will be safe again, I promise you that." You give Ivan a soft kiss on the cheek then walk away while he angrily begins cracking his knuckles.'			
+		'You try to collect your thoughts before saying, "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he has been raping me at lunchtime and I..." Ivan agrily slams one of the lockers as he says, "That slimy little shit! This will not continue <<$pcs_firstname>>, I will put an end to it. You don''t need to worry. I will end this." You wrap your arms around Ivan then say, "Thank you so much. I didn''t know what to do." Ivan replies, "That kind of shit is unacceptable. You will be safe again, I promise you that." You give Ivan a soft kiss on the cheek then walk away while he angrily begins cracking his knuckles.'			
 	
 		act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -612,14 +612,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan Help 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko, and a confident grin covers his face, as he says, "You showed up? Goo..." Niko quickly pauses when he notices Ivan approaching. Ivan drives his fist into Niko''s stomach then says, "I hear that you have been giving <<$pcs_firstname>> a hard time. Allow me to return the favor." Ivan then begins chocking Niko, as Niko tries to squirm out of Ivan steel grasp. After a few seconds, Ivan releases Niko, causing Niko to drop to the ground. Ivan stands over Niko and says, "That was a warning. Give <<$pcs_firstname>> a hard time again, and I won''t hold back."'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Goo..." Niko quickly pauses when he notices Ivan approaching. Ivan drives his fist into Niko''s stomach then says, "I hear that you have been giving <<$pcs_firstname>> a hard time. Allow me to return the favor." Ivan then begins chocking Niko as Niko tries to squirm out of Ivan steel grasp. After a few seconds, Ivan releases Niko, causing Niko to drop to the ground. Ivan stands over Niko and says, "That was a warning. Give <<$pcs_firstname>> a hard time again and I won''t hold back."'
 	
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/hug1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko quickly nods, obviously frightened of Ivan. Ivan then gives you a hug as he says, "You''ll be fine now. If he bothers you again then let me know, and I will set him straight." You gratefully nod, as Ivan turns around then walks away. You turn around to leave when you notice Vitek walking up to Niko then lightly places his foot on his back, as he says, "I always told you that your big mouth would get you into trouble." Vitek then steps off of Niko then laughs, as he walks away.'		
+		'Niko quickly nods, obviously frightened of Ivan. Ivan then gives you a hug as he says, "You''ll be fine now. If he bothers you again then let me know and I will set him straight." You gratefully nod as Ivan turns around then walks away. You turn around to leave when you notice Vitek walking up to Niko then lightly places his foot on his back as he says, "I always told you that your big mouth would get you into trouble." Vitek then steps off of Niko then laughs as he walks away.'		
 
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	end
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You say to Vitek, "Um Viktor I need..." Dan unintentionally cuts you off, "Oh yeah, have you guys seen that big breasted bitch handing out freebies by..." Vitek says, "Hold that thought. <<$pcs_nickname>> we''re having guy talk right now, you and I can chat later." You try add, "But I really need..." Vasily suddenly intentionally falls to the ground then says, "You need to cheer up, you look so glum. Here, I will tell you a joke rated everyone..." Dan adds, "You mean rated immature, right?" The guys begin laughing, as you get more agitated at them ignoring you.'
+	'You say to Vitek, "Um Viktor I need..." Dan unintentionally cuts you off, "Oh yeah, have you guys seen that big breasted bitch handing out freebies by..." Vitek says, "Hold that thought. <<$pcs_nickname>> we''re having guy talk right now, you and I can chat later." You try add, "But I really need..." Vasily suddenly intentionally falls to the ground then says, "You need to cheer up, you look so glum. Here, I will tell you a joke rated everyone..." Dan adds, "You mean rated immature, right?" The guys begin laughing as you get more agitated at them ignoring you.'
 	
 	act 'Scream out':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Vitek continuously kicks Niko in the ribs, as Vasily joins him while saying, "We''ll show you what happens to those who fuck with <<$pcs_firstname>>." After a few minutes, Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching you, wrapping his arms around you, and saying, "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I will make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on, and I''ll see you later." You lean forward, and give Vitek a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Viktor. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives you ass a light smack before responding, "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
+			'Vitek continuously kicks Niko in the ribs as Vasily joins him while saying, "We''ll show you what happens to those who fuck with <<$pcs_firstname>>." After a few minutes, Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching you, wrapping his arms around you and saying, "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I will make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on and I''ll see you later." You lean forward and give Vitek a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Viktor. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives you ass a light smack before responding, "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
 			
 			act 'Continue toward the hallway':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end	
@@ -663,15 +663,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help 2':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Vitek and he says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, want a drink?" You reply, "I need to ask for your help, Niko has been raping me at lunch and..." Vitek''s eyes widen as he says, "He did what?" You remain quite, as you feel tears dripping down your cheek. Vitek tosses his bottle to the ground, causing a loud shatter which draws everyone in the discos attention. Vitek angrily walks over the broken glass, as he approaches Niko. Niko suddenly asks, "Whoa what''s going on?" Vitek replies, "You have been fucking with my girl?"'
+	'You approach Vitek and he says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, want a drink?" You reply, "I need to ask for your help, Niko has been raping me at lunch and..." Vitek''s eyes widen as he says, "He did what?" You remain quite as you feel tears dripping down your cheek. Vitek tosses his bottle to the ground, causing a loud shatter which draws everyone in the discos attention. Vitek angrily walks over the broken glass as he approaches Niko. Niko suddenly asks, "Whoa what''s going on?" Vitek replies, "You have been fucking with my girl?"'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/down.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko immediately tries to run away when Vasily drives his fist into Niko''s face before saying, "You don''t fuck with <<$pcs_nickname>> without dealing with us." You can feel your heart warming up, as you realize how safe you are with Vitek, and Vasily around. Niko continuously tries to crawl away, but is grabbed by Vitek, who lifts him up then slams him onto the ground before climbing on top of him then repeatedly punching him in the face. Vasily approaches you then says, "You are safe now <<$pcs_firstname>>. We will make sure that Niko never touches you again."' 
+		'Niko immediately tries to run away when Vasily drives his fist into Niko''s face before saying, "You don''t fuck with <<$pcs_nickname>> without dealing with us." You can feel your heart warming up as you realize how safe you are with Vitek and Vasily around. Niko continuously tries to crawl away, but is grabbed by Vitek, who lifts him up then slams him onto the ground before climbing on top of him then repeatedly punching him in the face. Vasily approaches you then says, "You are safe now <<$pcs_firstname>>. We will make sure that Niko never touches you again."' 
 		*nl
-		'You give Vasily a hug as you respond, "Thank you all so much for your help. You''re the best." Vasily gives you a pat on the back before saying, "You don''t need to thank us. It''s a mans job to keep girls safe. Here have a drink on me." Vasily hands you a bottle of beer then turns back around to join Vitek, and Dan in beating Niko.'		
+		'You give Vasily a hug as you respond, "Thank you all so much for your help. You''re the best." Vasily gives you a pat on the back before saying, "You don''t need to thank us. It''s a mans job to keep girls safe. Here have a drink on me." Vasily hands you a bottle of beer then turns back around to join Vitek and Dan in beating Niko.'		
 	
 		act 'Walk away':gt 'gdkin'
 		act 'Have a drink then walk away': gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer' & gt 'gdkin'

locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,993 @@
+
+# NikoWhore
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 5
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
+	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. When you enter the locker room, Niko closes the door then takes a quick look around to see if anyone is there. Niko walks up behind you then whispers in your ear, "<<$pcs_firstname>> take off your clothes." You obediently do as he asks, removing all your clothes. Niko collects your clothes then puts them in a bag. You can''t help but feel nervous when you see Niko packing up your clothes. <font color=#FF00FF>Is he taking my clothes away? What if someone walks in? I wont be able to get dressed. I''m sure Niko knows what he is doing. Just follow his lead <<$pcs_firstname>>, just follow his lead.</font>'
+
+	act 'Take a deep breath':
+		*clr & cla
+		gs'stat'	
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/jewelry/cuffs.jpg"></center>'
+		'You reassure yourself as you see Niko take out the collar that you wore the other day then places it around your neck, followed by a pair of matching leather cuffs which Niko begins placing around your wrists. You can feel your heart racing even faster.'
+
+		act 'Continue':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+			minut -= 3
+			NikoDate_Day = daystart
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker1.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'Niko attaches the leash to your cuffs then walks you toward a nearby pipe before pushing you down, on your knees. Niko begins unbuttoning his pants then takes off his pants before pressing his penis against your lips, "Open your mouth." You obediently do as he commends, opening your mouth as his dick slides into your mouth then brushes against your throat. You can feel your gag reflex kicking in, but do your best to suppress it, not want to disappoint Niko. After a few thrusts, Niko pauses then gives you a confident wink while pointing down to his penis.' 
+			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+			gs 'stat'
+			
+			act 'Suck Niko''s penis':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs'stat'			
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker2.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'You immediately understand what he wants and begin sucking his dick thoroughly, trying your best to please him. Niko looks down to you and says, "You''re doing great <<$pcs_nickname>>, keep it up." Niko''s approval gives you a warm feeling in your heart. <font color=#FF00FF>I''m doing good. Niko likes what I''m doing for him. I only want to please you Niko. Please cum for me. I want your seed inside me.</font>'
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+				gs 'stat'
+								
+				act 'Make Niko cum':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs'stat'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'Niko begins lightly moaning before grabbing onto your hair then pushing his cock down your throat, filling your throat with his warm cum. You enjoy the warm feeling of his cum entering your throat and the rapid throbbing of his penis as it pumps your throat with his seed.' 
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A189', 1
+					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+						
+					act 'Continue':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs'stat'
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker3.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'After Niko is fully spent, he puts his pants back on before kneeling forward to attach the leash to your collar, which he then ties to the nearby pipe. Niko gives you an approving pat on the head before leaving the locker room.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+						gs 'stat'
+						
+						act 'Try to remove cuffs':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs'stat'
+							'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
+							*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
+							'You squirm for a few seconds, attempting to free yourself from the cuffs. <font color=#FF00FF>Where did Niko go? Did he forget to uncuff me? Maybe he just left to wash his hands before untying me. He wouldn''t forget about me. I just need to wait patiently, for him to return.</font> You spend the next few minutes trying to get comfortable until you hear the locker room door open. You quickly look up in excitement. <font color=#FF00FF>I knew that Niko wouldn''t forget me.</font> but as you look up...'
+							gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+							gs 'stat'
+							
+							act '???':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs'stat'
+								'<center><b><font color="green"><<"Denis [Dan] Ryzhov">></font></b></center>'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big10.jpg"></center>'
+								'You see Dan Ryzhov standing in front of you with a wolfish grin on his face, "Well well, I never thought that you were into this kind of stuff." He begins pinching your nipples. You then exclaim, "Dan stop! What are you doing here?" He replies, "Ever since I saw Niko walking you around then I''ve been keeping an eye on you and saw you doing some pretty naughty things and I like naughty things." He then lifts you to your feet.' 
+								gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+								gs 'stat'
+								
+								act 'Let go of me!':
+									*clr & cla
+									minut += 2
+									gs'stat'							
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker4.jpg"></center>'
+									'You shout at Dan, "Let go of me, or I''ll scream!" Dan''s grin grows even wider and who would hear you? Everyone is in the cafeteria, laughing and shouting over each other. Even if someone heard you, would you like them to see you chained up naked, like this? Maybe I should just walk you into the cafeteria where you can scream all you want." <font color=#FF00FF>I''m completely naked. If he walks me into the cafeteria then I will be completely humiliated.</font>'
+									gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+									gs 'stat'
+									
+									act 'Submit':
+										*clr & cla
+										gs'stat'
+										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker5.mp4"></video></center>'	
+										'You lower your head in submission, "Please don''t do that. I''ll stay quiet." Dan quickly turns you around then unbuttons his pants before sliding his dick inside of your ass, causing a surge of pressure and pain to fill your ass. Dan wastes no time and begins fucking your ass, slowly at first then continues picking up the pace. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe this is happening. Niko where are you? Please help me!</font> Dan continues fucking your ass when his phone begins ringing.'
+										*nl
+										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room...Sure you can come." <font color=#FF00FF>Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.</font>'
+										$orgasm_txt = ''
+										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
+										gs 'stat'
+
+										act 'Who was that?':
+											*clr & cla
+											gs'stat'
+											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker6.mp4"></video></center>'
+											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why...mmmmm...Why''d you....mmmm..Tell him abo...." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
+											$orgasm_txt = ''
+											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
+											gs 'stat'
+
+											act 'Turn to see':
+												*clr & cla
+												inhib_exp += 1
+												gs 'boyStat', 'A10'
+												minut -= 2
+												gs'stat'
+												'<center><b><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></b></center>'
+												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big9.jpg"></center>'
+												if kotovloveQW > 0:
+													kotovloveQW = -1
+													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a...whore and I can...Grr...prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
+													*nl
+													'"I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." You suddenly realize what that Dan must have recorded you as you sucked Niko''s dick in the hallway, after school. <font color=#FF00FF>There is no way I can talk my way out of this. What will Viktor do to me?</font> Vitek watches the video for a few more seconds before releasing Dan''s throat then turning to you with his face; seething with rage. "You fucking worthless whore!" He then lifts his hand and smacks you hard, knocking you to the ground. Vitek begins smashing a nearby garbage can in rage then Dan places his hand on Vitek''s shoulder, "It''s alright Vitek, you don''t need her, you never did." Vitek takes a few seconds to calm himself then brushes Dan''s hand off his shoulder as he unbuttons his pants then pushes his dick against your lips. "What are you waiting for, whore? Start sucking." You meekly nod before wrapping your lips around his dick.'
+												else
+													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then quickly begin whistling at you before Vitek says, "I thought that Dan was fucking with me when he told me about this." Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. "You take a second to catch your breath when you look up to see Vitek''s dick in your face. "What are you waiting for slut? Start sucking."'
+													*nl
+													'You plead, "Please don''t. I need to get back to..." Vitek wraps his hand around your throat. "That can wait, now get sucking." Dan pulls out of you, causing you to feel a rush of pressure as it evokes a moan to escape your mouth. Vitek immediately takes advantage of this and shoves his dick into your mouth.'
+												end
+												$orgasm_txt = ''
+												gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A10', 1
+												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+												gs 'stat'
+
+												act 'Suck Vitek''s dick':
+													*clr & cla
+													gs 'boyStat', 'A9'
+													minut -= 5
+													gs'stat'
+													'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/sex/rand_scoolboy6.mp4"></video></center>'
+													if kotovloveQw = -1:
+														'You begin obediently sucking Vitek''s dick, knowing better than to anger him further. Vasily has his dick out too and begins poking your cheek with it. You quickly pull away from Vitek''s dick then suck on Vasily''s hard cock. You spend the next few minutes alternating between their cocks while Vitek roughly squeezes your breasts.' 
+													else
+														'You begin obediently sucking Vitek''s dick, knowing better than to anger him. Vasily has his dick out too and begins poking your cheek with it. You quickly pull away from Vitek''s dick then suck on Vasily''s hard cock. You spend the next few minutes alternating between their cocks while Vitek squeezes your breasts.' 
+													end
+													gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+													gs 'stat'											
+													
+													act 'Submit':
+														*clr & cla
+														minut -= 5
+														gs'stat'
+														'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow9.mp4"></video></center>'
+														if kotovloveQw = -1:
+															'Eventually Vitek grabs your hair, forcing his dick down your throat as he fills you throat with his cum. You swallow as much as you can before Vasily pulls your head to his dick then begins cumming on your face, covering your face in his warm cum. You take a few seconds catching your breath as you listen to them talk.'
+															*nl
+															'Dan: I told you that she was a freak. She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass.'
+															'Vasily: Come on guys we already have Sonia, we don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too.'
+															'Dan: She might me like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. I saw the teachers, leaving the cafeteria while I was on my way here.'
+															'Vitek: Sounds good to me. You hear that <<$pcs_firstname>>? You gonna get, what a whore like you, deserves. Now get up! You''re coming with us!'
+														else
+															'Eventually Vitek grabs your hair, forcing his dick down your throat as he fills you throat with his cum. You swallow as much as you can before Vasily pulls your head to his dick then begins cumming on your face, covering your face in his warm cum. You take a few seconds catching your breath as you listen to them talk.'
+															*nl
+															'Dan: I told you that she was a freak. She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass.'
+															'Vasily: Come on guys, we already have Sonia, we don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too.'
+															'Dan: She might be like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong, for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. the boys are still on the stairwell.'
+															if hotcat >= 6 and salocatnow < 5:
+																'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> is much hotter than Sonia anyway. Let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
+															else
+																'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> looks like a overgrown pig, but we can always fuck her from behind. Alright let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
+															end
+														end	
+														gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A9', 1
+														gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+														gs 'boyStat', 'A11'
+														gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A11', 1
+														gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+														gs 'stat'
+
+														act 'Plead':
+															*clr & cla
+															inhib_exp += 2
+															gs'stat'
+															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/wos.jpg"></center>'
+															'<font color=#FF00FF>No this can''t be! Why is this happening? This will ruin my reputation forever. I will be an outcast like Sonia. The boys will abuse me. This can''t be happening.</font>"Please don''t do this. I will do anything! Please just let me go." Vitek pulls on your collar. "Less talking, more walking." Vitek walks you out of the locker room as Dan tells you, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, you will get used to it. Imagine it, every boy in school will be giving you a lot of attention. You will be popular among all the boys." You look back to Vasily and he whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I can''t help you. It''s too late." As he follows closely behind you.'
+															gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+															gs 'stat'
+															
+															act 'Continue walking':
+																*clr & cla
+																inhib_exp += 2
+																gs'stat'
+																'Your heart is pounding and you can feel tears streaming down your eyes. <font color=#FF00FF>I''m going to lose everything. My life will never be the same again. Please let this be a bad dream. PLEEEEEEASE!</font> You close your eyes, trying to wake up when you hear the sounds of chatting and laughter, informing you that you are passing the cafeteria.'
+																*nl
+																if fedorkozlovQW > 1 or fedorKozlovQW < -10:
+																	'You suddenly hear Fedor Kozlov shouting, "What are you guys doing with <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Dan begins laughing as he replies, "Didn''t <<$pcs_firstname>> tell you? She wants to join Sonia as our fuck puppet." Fedor looks to you with concerning eyes, "They are lying, aren''t they?"'
+																	if fedorKozlovQW < -10:
+																		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast2.jpg"></center>'
+																	else
+																		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big5.jpg"></center>'
+																	end
+																end
+																gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+																gs 'stat'
+																
+																if fedorkozlovQW > 1 and FedorLove = 1 or fedorkozlovQW < -10:
+																	act 'Run to Fedor':
+																		*clr & cla
+																		gs'stat'
+																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
+																		'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say, punk?" Dan approaches them and says, "Hey, I''m sure that Fedor is just misunderstanding what''s going on. Let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl, who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>> and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
+																		*nl
+																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?...Why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
+																		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation','exhibitionism'
+																		gs 'stat'
+																		
+																		act 'I promise [<font color=#c600ff>Break up with Niko</font>]':
+																			*clr & cla
+																			NikoBreakup = 1
+																			NikoEv = -1
+																			NikoLuv = -8
+																			NikoVolkovQW = -1
+																			minut += 5
+																			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+																			gs 'stat'
+																			if fedorkozlovQW < -10:
+																				'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big9.jpg"></center>'
+																				'Fedor leans over then whispers in your ear, "Run." You quickly begin running as Fedor runs to the nearby trash can then tosses it at Vitek. Vitek blocks it as Fedor charges him, tackling him to the ground. You continue running as Vitek and Dan, beat up on Fedor. You look back to see Dan climb off of Fedor then start to run to you before Vasily pretends to trip and falls on Dan, causing them both to fall to the ground, long enough for you to make you way to the locker room where you find the bag with your clothes in it. You spent a minute getting dressed before walking to the hallway, just outside of your classroom.'
+																			else
+																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/school/jocks.jpg"></center>'
+																				'Fedor suddenly pulls you behind him as he exclaims, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is not going with you and that''s final!" Vitek rams his fist into Fedor''s stomach, knocking him back and bringing him to his knees. You quickly sneak away as the gopniks surround Fedor, Shortly after, you hear someone shout, "What the fuck is going on here?" You see Ivan Prokhorov and a few of the other jocks, walking out of the cafeteria. Vitek shouts, "Get lost! This doesn''t concern you." Ivan walks right up to Vitek''s face then replies, "When you attack my friend then it does concern me." The jocks begin surrounding the gopniks.'
+																				*nl
+																				'Vitek looks around him as he spends a few seconds in silence before finally saying, "Oh well, I have better things to do anyway. Let''s get going boys." Vitek turns around then walks away as the jocks move out of their way, letting them go. Fedor turns to you then gives you a wink before being helped up by Ivan. You quickly run back to the locker room and find the bag with your clothes which you put on before returning to the hallway.'
+																			end
+
+																			act 'Hallway':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'afternoon'
+																		end
+
+																		act 'Remain silent [<font color=#FF00FF>Lose Fedor</font>]':
+																			*clr & cla
+																			if fedorkozlovQW > 1:fedorkozlovQW = -1
+																			if fedorkozlovQW < -10:fedorkozlovQW = -10 & FedorOutcast = -1
+																			npc_rel['A5'] = 25
+																			FedorLove = 0
+																			FedorHome = -1
+																			FedorShelter = -1
+																			minut += 5
+																			gs'stat'
+																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
+																			'You lower you head in silence. Fedor sighs as he responds, "I guess that you care for him more... Fine have fun with your new boyfriend. I just don''t care anymore." Fedor walks away without saying another word.'
+																			
+																			act 'Run to Fedor':
+																				*clr & cla
+																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/wos.jpg"></center>'
+																				'Vitek grabs you by your hair. "You''ve wasted enough of our time. Let''s get moving." Dan adds, "It''s time to show you off <<$pcs_firstname>>, Aren''t you excited?" The gopniks then walk you toward the stairwell.'
+																				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+																				gs 'stat'
+																				
+																				act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
+																			end
+																		end
+																	end
+
+																elseif fedorkozlovQW > 1 and FedorLove = 0:
+																	act 'Run to Fedor':
+																		*clr & cla
+																		fedorkozlovQW = -1
+																		FedorHome = -1
+																		FedorShelter = -1
+																		npc_rel['A5'] = 25
+																		gs'stat'
+																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
+																		'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say punk?" Dan adds, "Hey, I''m sure Fedor misunderstands what''s going on, let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>> and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
+																		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+																		gs 'stat'
+																		act 'See what happens':
+																			*clr & cla
+																			gs'stat'															
+																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
+																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You..You bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor nods as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
+																			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+																			gs 'stat'
+																			act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
+																		end
+																	end
+																else
+																	act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
+																end
+															end	
+														end	
+													end	
+												end	
+											end	
+										end	
+									end
+								end	
+							end	
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
+	*clr & cla
+	if grupTipe = 1:VKGroup = 1 & grupTipe = 5
+	if grupTipe = 2:VKGroup = 2 & grupTipe = 5
+	if grupTipe = 3:VKGroup = 3 & grupTipe = 5
+	if grupTipe = 4:VKGroup = 4 & grupTipe = 5
+	if grupTipe = 6:VKGroup = 6 & grupTipe = 5
+	school_lunch = 0
+	NikoEv = 10
+	grupTipe[61] = 600
+	inhib_exp += 10
+	if pav_sex < 230:pav_sex = 250
+	gs 'fame'
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/wos.jpg"></center>'
+	'You close your eyes as you are led down the hallway. You can hear students in the hallway talking about you.' 
+	*nl
+	if hotcat >= 6 and salocatnow < 5:
+		'Feofan: Holy crap, now <<$pcs_firstname>> is a whore too? I love this school!'
+	else
+		'Feofan: Holy crap, now <<$pcs_firstname>> is a whore too? Too bad she has the face and body of a greenskin orc.'
+	end
+	'Lariska Gruzdeva: "What the fuck was <<$pcs_firstname>> thinking? Why would she do this to herself? Is she that desperate for dick?"'
+	'Lina: "I always thought she was a nice girl, but I guess she was just a whore all along. She hid it well."'
+	'Christina laughs. "You are both so stupid, I knew she was a fucking whore all along, you just have to look at how she acts. So weak and pathetic and eager to please any boy, that payed any attention to her." You hear several of the other girls agree with her.'
+	if hotcat >= 6 and salocatnow < 5:
+		'Roman: "Fuck yeah! I''ve been wanting to fuck <<$pcs_firstname>> since I first saw her drop that chalk, in Anatoly''s class."'
+	else
+		'Roman: "I always thought about what it would be like to fuck <<$pcs_firstname>> since I first saw her drop that chalk, in Anatoly''s class. If only she wasn''t so ugly."'
+	end
+	'Lizaveta: "So another girl turning into a slut," She shakes her head. "Why do so many girls have no self respect? Well at least the boys are gonna love this." She then takes out her phone and begins recording you.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+	gs 'stat'
+	
+	act 'Continue toward the stairwell':
+		*clr & cla
+		inhib_exp += 5
+		gs 'boyStat', 'A154'
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
+		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
+		'You reach the stairwell and Vitek shouts out, "Hey boys! Look who has decided to join Sonia as the school whore! <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>!" The gopniks get noticeably excited as they begin talking to each other.'
+		if hotcat >= 6:
+			'Radomir Popov: "So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party. She looks good enough. Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> ever been with a real man before?'
+			'Valentin: "She is better looking than Sonia. I will give her that."'
+		else
+			'Radomir Popov: "So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party. She''s always looked trashy though, Like one of those trailer park girls.'
+			'Valentin: "Yeah I have seen better looking bitches in the chess club lineups."'
+		end
+		'Arkadi: "Enough gawking. I''m gonna fuck this bitch!"'
+		'Roman: "Now that is what I like to hear."'
+		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+		gs 'stat'
+		
+		act 'Continue':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs'stat'		
+			'<center><b><h4><font color=#927742><<"Ekaterina [Katyusha] Maksimov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big145.jpg"></center>'		
+			'The boys immediately take on aggressive postures, with wolfish grins on their faces. Ekaterina Maksimov suddenly says loudly enough to be heard over everyone. "You guys have to drag this fucking skank here? I trying to eat my lunch." She says while holding a sandwich in her hand. You have a moment of hope that someone might save you, but when your eyes meet her''s she gives you a look of utter disgust and your heart sinks. Dan smirks and turns towards Ekaterina Maksimov. "Hey if you don''t like it Katyusha, you can always go eat somewhere else."'
+
+			act 'See what happens next':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs'stat'			
+				'<center><b><h4><font color=#be0457><<"Pauline Sebagotulina">></font></h4></b></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big24.jpg"></center>'				
+				'Ekaterina stands up and gives Dan a shove. "Watch it or I will make you eat something of your own." Dan puts his hands up, then she walks up the stairs to apparently go eat in peace. Dan snickers once she walks away as Pauline pulls out her phone then begins recording you before saying, in a patronizing voice, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ll make you a star... Now smile for the camera."'
+				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+				gs 'stat'	
+				
+				act 'Lower your head':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lena.jpg"></center>'
+					'You lower your head in embarrassment. Not wanting to be recorded but not being in any position to stop her. Lena quickly approaches you then grabs you by your hair and holds your face up to the camera, "She said smile bitch! Do you have cum in your ears?" Lera then sarcastically adds, "Maybe she''s just shy." to which Lena replies, "Shy? Does she look shy to you?" Lena then runs her hand up your thigh to your pussy, pinching your clitoris. You can see the boys are getting very excited. Most of them are rubbing their crotches.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'flash', 3, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+					gs 'stat'
+					
+					act 'See what the Lena does':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs'stat'	
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/exposed1.jpg"></center>'
+						'Lena then says, "Alright let''s not keep everyone waiting. If <<$pcs_nickname>> wants some dick then lets get her some dick." She then pushes you to the boys, who quickly begin fondling your body. You can feel your body trembling as some of the boys begin running their hands across your body. Dan spanks your ass as he shouts out, "Alright, Who want''s to fuck this slut?" Your jaw opens in shock, your entire body trembling, knowing that everything you had in this school, your friends, your dignity and your reputation are completely lost now.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+						gs 'stat'
+						
+						act 'Continue':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs'stat'
+							'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Anushka [Nush] Konstantinov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
+							if npc_rel['A144'] >= 80:
+							'Anushka gets up and walks down the steps to you as she says. "Okay that''s fucking enough! Show''s over, now everyone get lost!" Roman steps up to her. "Fuck you bitch! Why do you care? Are you jealous of <<$pcs_nickname>>? Wish that you were in her place? I always knew you was a slut." Anushka slaps him across his face, causing him to recoil back before immediately winding his hand back to slap her. Valentin quickly grabs Roman by the wrist, stopping him while Arkadi says. "Come on, back off man, there is no need for that." While Radomir says. "Watch it, your talking about our girl there."'
+							*nl
+							'Things start to get real tense for a moment. Valentin then releases Roman''s wrist and says, "If you ever lay a hand on her then I will fuck you up and if somehow I can''t, you know what her dad would do to you." He says in a low tone full of menace. Mention of Anushka''s dad causes Roman to stiffen just a bit, before he turns to Anushka. "That''s your one free pass bitch, hit me again and I will drag your face through the dirt!" As he finally backs down, which you have never seen him do before. Valentin turns to Roman again. "Back off!" Just as Arkadi pulls Roman away while Roman gives Valentin a cold stare the whole time.'
+							elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
+								'Anushka gets up and comes down the stairs, stopping to look at you. "I tried to warn you about Niko, now look at what he''s has done to you." You look down unable to meet her gaze. "But I love him..." You hear her sigh and Alyona say. "Have some backbone and self respect." While Anushka says. "He doesn''t love you, no one that does, would let this happen. Come with us." Roman steps between you and them. "This slut isn''t going anywhere. You''d best leave before you end up joining her."'
+							else
+								'You can see Anushka and Alyona watching what is going on, when Anushka comments, "This is like watching a really bad porno, but still kinda turns me on." Dan turns towards them when he hears that. "Just speak up, we can give you a turn too." He says with a laugh. Alyona and Anushka both flip him off while Anushka says. "As if... I like to fuck but I am not going to be some slut who lets everyone fuck her whenever and where ever. If I ever wanted to fuck you, it would be on my terms not yours."'
+							end	
+		
+							act 'See what happens next':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs'stat'
+								if npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and npc_rel['A144'] < 80:
+									'<center><b><font color=#d54a51><<"Alyona Zima">></font></b></center>'
+									'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/big143.jpg"></center>'
+								else
+									'<center><b><font color="green"><<"Denis [Dan] Ryzhov">></font></b></center>'
+									'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big10.jpg"></center>'
+								end
+								if npc_rel['A144'] >= 80:
+									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body wont let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck you asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
+									*nl
+									'Valentin pulls Anushka away while Alyona follows, he pulls her to where the stairs exit out into the hallway. Anushka jerks her arm away from him. Valentin puts his hands in the air. "Just go Nush, you can''t do anything here... So just go." She shakes her head in disgust at him. "Fuck you Val." She then turns and walks off while Alyona gives Roman a dirty look as she follows Anushka. Valentin calls after them. "Come on, don''t be like that Nush." Then he starts walking back to the group. "Fuck... She is pissed." Radomir pats him on the shoulder. "She will get over it, she always does."'
+								elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
+									'Alyona pulls out a switch blade as a response to the threat. "Just try it asshole and I will cut your dick off!" Roman replies, in a menacing tone, "Do you even know how to use that thing little lady?" Valentin quickly grabs the girls then pulls them away. Arkadi pulls Roman back clearly trying to calm him down. While Valentin pulls Anushka by the arm to where the stairs lead out into the hallway. They seem to be arguing but you can''t hear what they are saying. Finally Anushka jerks her arm free and Alyona makes a threatening motion with the knife again.'
+									*nl
+									'Valentin puts up his hands and takes a step back. "Fucking assholes! All of you!" Anushka exclaims before giving you one final glance, her eyes begging you to come to her, but when you don''t, she just looks at you with pity then walks off, flipping Valentin off. While he shoots after her. "Don''t be that way Nush, come on!" Valentin then turns and walks back to the group as Lena says to you. "No one is coming to save you slut."'
+								else
+									'Dan takes a step closer to them. "Yeah? I''m cool with that, just let me know. We can do that now if you want." Anushka and Alyona look at him a moment then each other, then back to him before laughing. "As if." Then they get up and walk away together laughing, while a annoyed Dan turns back to you.'
+								end	
+								
+								act 'Watch them leave':
+									*clr & cla
+									gs'stat'
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/exposed2.jpg"></center>'
+									'Once Anushka and Alyona leave, Radomir Popov steps up to you then begins fingering your vagina, "I want to fuck her first." Dan laughs as he replies, "You mean second, right?" He then turns you around and spreads your ass cheeks, causing his cum to leak out of your ass. Radomir replies, "Ohh shit, she really is a filthy whore. I''m still fucking her though." He grabs you by the hair then unbuttons his pants and lays down as he pulls you on top of him.'		
+									$orgasm_txt = ''
+									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+									gs 'stat'		
+									
+									act 'Ride Radomir Popov''s cock':
+										*clr & cla
+										inhib_exp = 5
+										gs'stat'
+										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock1.mp4"></video></center>'
+										'You can feel Radomir''s penis enter your vagina causing a jolt of pressure as your weight pushes his cock completely inside of you. knowing that it is too late to go back, you begin riding Radomir. You can hear the boys cheering as they enjoy the show. You can still see Pauline recording you and the other girls cheering with malicious smirks on their faces.'
+										$orgasm_txt = ''
+										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+										gs 'stat'
+										
+										act 'Milk Radomir''s cock':
+											*clr & cla
+											gs'stat'
+											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum7.mp4"></video></center>'
+											'Radomir pulls out of you then begins cumming on your feet as you milk him. Feeling his cock throbbing in your hand, His warm cum landing on your feet. You use the comfort of his warm cum to distract you from your racing thoughts.'
+											$orgasm_txt = ''
+											gs 'cum_call', 'feet', 'A158', 1
+											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+											gs 'stat'
+										
+											act 'Continue':
+												*clr & cla
+												gs'stat'
+												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/stair1.mp4"></video></center>'
+												'Radomir crawls out from under you just as the other boys quickly approach you with their dicks in their hands. They immediately shove it in your face. You obediently begin sucking them one by one as you hear Lena sarcastically asks, "Are those enough dicks for you <<$pcs_nickname>>, or do you need more?" You try to ignore her as you continue sucking the boy''s dicks, doing your best not to leave anyone left out. After a few more seconds, Roman leans down to look you in the eyes before saying, "You ready to ride my dick bitch?"'
+												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+												gs 'stat'
+											
+												act 'Meekly nod':
+													*clr & cla
+													gs'stat'
+													'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/stair2.mp4"></video></center>'
+													'You meekly nod and Roman grabs you by the hair then pulls you in front of the stairs as he sits down, pulling you on top of his dick. You moan loudly as you feel his dick forcefully thrust into your pussy. You hold still for few seconds before Roman shouts, "Hurry up slut! Ride my dick." You quickly nod before thrusting on top of his dick as the other boys grab and fondle your breasts as Lera hollers, "Oh boy, look at her go to work!" Lena then says, "I wonder how many she can fit in there?" Pauline adds, "I''m sure we will soon find out." The girls laugh before you suddenly hear someone shout, "Eww what the fuck is this!?"'							
+													$orgasm_txt = ''
+													gs 'arousal', 'massage', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+													gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+													gs 'stat'
+											
+													act 'Turn to see who it was':
+														*clr & cla
+														inhib_exp += 1
+														gs'stat'
+														'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Elžbieta [Bella] Artamonov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big22.jpg"></center>'
+														'Bella Artamonov, who seems to have just walked down the stairs, continues shouting at the boys, "I don''t want to see this shit! Why can''t you fucking perverts just do this shit somewhere else?" She tries making her way past everyone with out letting anyone touch her. Dan replies, "You heard the girl. Let''s take <<$pcs_firstname>> back to the locker room. Everyone who wants to join can tag along." Dan and Roman grab your arms then lead you toward the locker room as many of the boys and a few girls follow along.'
+														gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
+														gs 'stat'
+														act 'Locker room': gt 'NikoWhore', 'Locker Room 2'
+													end
+												end
+											end	
+										end
+									end
+								end	
+							end
+						end	
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
+	*clr & cla
+	inhib_exp += 1
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock2.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'As soon as you reach the locker room, Dan shoves you into the crowd and Roman Yakovlev catches you then turns you around. You feel Roman''s penis entering your vagina then his pace begins increasing as he holds onto your waist, pushing you against his crotch. <font color=#FF00FF>This is it. This is my life now. How did I let this happen?</font> Roman leans forward and whispers in your ear, "How does my dick feel <<$pcs_nickname>>? Isn''t it the biggest dick you ever had?"'
+	$orgasm_txt = ''
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Nod':
+		*clr & cla
+		inhib_exp += 1
+		minut -= 5
+		gs'stat'	
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'You meekly nod, not wanting to upset him. After a few more seconds, Roman pulls out of you and groans, covering your back in his cum. Roman gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "Damn <<$pcs_firstname>>, you have a tight pussy. We have to do this again sometime." Arkadi suddenly shouts, "Hey Roman don''t hog her, all for yourself." Roman laughs as he pulls up his pants then pushes you toward the other boys, causing you to fall on your knees in front of the Gopniks, who are holding their dicks in their hand.'
+		$orgasm_txt = ''
+		gs 'cum_call', 'back', 'A157', 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+		gs 'stat'
+
+		act 'Suck their dicks':
+			*clr & cla
+			inhib_exp += 1
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock3.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'You wrap your lips around the first dick you see then use your hands to jerk off the other boys. Valentin begins rubbing your hair off of your face as he says, "That''s a good girl. Just like that." as he gives you an approving smile. You can hear some of the other gopniks talking about you.'
+			*nl
+			'Arkadi: "I never thought that <<$pcs_nickname>> would end up being a whore, did you?"'
+			'Radomir: "Well all girls are sluts. Some are just better at hiding it."'
+			'Lavrenti: "Come on guys, let''s not talk about <<$pcs_firstname>> like she isn''t here."'
+			'Lena: "Oh, are you her boyfriend now? Well if you want to ask her out, she is right there."'
+			'Lera: "Yeah you can go and give her a kiss but you might want to use this to wipe off the cum first... Unless you''re into that kind of thing." She holds a tissue in front of him which he swats away.'
+			'Lavrenti: "Shut it! That''s not what I meant."'
+			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+			gs 'stat'
+			
+			act 'Suck their dicks':
+				*clr & cla
+				inhib_exp += 1
+				minut -= 5
+				gs'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/sex/rand_scoolboy6.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'Arkadi gently rubs your head while giving you a warm welcoming smile. You pull away of Valentin''s dick then start sucking Arkadi''s dick. You spend the next few minutes, alternating between the cocks of the gopniks.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+				gs 'stat'
+
+				act 'Continue':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs'stat'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock4.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'After a few seconds, Vitek lifts you up by your shoulders then says, "Enough warm up, who is ready to fuck this bitch?" Dan waves his hand then says, "I could go for seconds." Vitek gives him an approving nod as he lifts you up then lowers you on top of Dan''s hard cock. You let out a loud moan as Dan''s cock enters you. You begin riding Dan''s dick, felling him pushing deeper inside you and enjoying the boys cheering you on. You look around and see a few of the nerdy boys peeking in from the doorway. They are rubbing their crotches, but then looking around to make sure that no one notices them. The fact that you are turning them on, causes you to feel even more aroused then you already are. Dan suddenly states, "Get ready for another facial, slut!"'
+					$orgasm_txt = ''
+					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+					gs 'stat'
+
+					act 'Take his load':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs'stat'
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/facial5.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'You quickly pull off of Dan then drop to your knees as he covers your face in his warm seed. You rub your face against Dan''s penis, enjoying how your face sticks to his dick as you rub against it. Dan pulls up his pants then says, "You''re a nasty little slut, aren''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Dan then casually walks toward the door leading out of the Locker room as he turns to Vasily and says, "Hey Shulga, you just gonna stand there? Go on, help yourself." Vasily lowers his head, obviously lost in thought before Lena approaches him and says, "Go on Shulga. What are you waiting for?" Lera stands right beside him then says, "Maybe he is in love with our little whore. Is that true Shulga? Do you loooovvve <<$pcs_firstname>>? Do you want her to have your babies?" Vasily shakes his head before responding, "No, of course not. I could never love a whore!" as he quickly approaches to you.'
+						gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A10', 1
+						gs 'stat'
+		
+						act 'Let Vasily fuck you':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock5.mp4"></video></center>'	
+							'Vasily spreads your legs then pushes his penis inside of you, causing a jolt of pleasure. Shulga''s hard cock enters you and starts rubbing against your g spot. Vasily stares you in the eyes with a very sad look on his face as he whispers, "I wish things ended up differently <<$pcs_firstname>> but there is no turning back now." as he continues fucking you, his frown disappears and he starts getting into fucking you. Increasing his pace.'
+							$orgasm_txt = ''
+							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+							gs 'stat'
+
+							act 'Make Vasily cum':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut -= 5
+								gs'stat'
+								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum110.mp4"></video></center>'
+								'You continue staring Vasily in his eyes as you hear him groan. He pulls out of you and sprays his warm seed all over your chest as you instinctively stroke his cock, milking his penis. Vasily then takes a few seconds to catch his breath before whispering in your ear, "You are so beautiful <<$pcs_firstname>>. Too bad it had to come to this but you''ll get used to it." He then climbs off of you then pulls his pants up and gives Vitek a high five before leaving the locker room. Vitek then lifts you up and says, "You better be ready bitch because I''m ready for seconds." Vitek then pushes you onto your knees then has you spend the next 10 seconds lubing his dick before he shoves it into your ass.'
+								$orgasm_txt = ''
+								gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A11', 1
+								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+								gs 'stat'
+
+								act 'Anal':
+									*clr & cla
+									gs'stat'
+									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog9.mp4"></video></center>'
+									'Vitek fucks your ass slowly at first, but then picks up the pace. You let out high pitch squeals as you feel Vitek''s penis rubbing against your inner ass. His big hard cock, pushing it''s way deeper inside you as his strong hands firmly grips you hair. Yuo feel completely at his mercy as he continues to ram is cock in your sore asshole.' 
+									$orgasm_txt = ''
+									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+									gs 'stat'
+								
+									act 'Close your eyes':
+										*clr & cla
+										minut -= 5
+										gs'stat'
+										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumAnal2.mp4"></video></center>'
+										'<font color=#FF00FF>Vitek is so strong and aggressive. He is always so rough. Why is he always so angry?</font> After a few more seconds, Vitek says, "This is what a whore like you deserves." Vitek then fills your ass with his warm seed. You can feel Vitek''s hot cum filling your ass and then leaking out as he pulls out of you. "You better get used to this <<$pcs_firstname>> Because this is your new life now." Vitek pulls up his pants then leaves the locker room.'
+										$orgasm_txt = ''
+										gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A9', 1
+										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+										gs 'arousal', 'end'
+										gs 'stat'
+
+										act 'Continue':
+											*clr & cla
+											minut -= 5
+											minut -= 5
+											gs'stat'
+											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock6.mp4"></video></center>'
+											'Valentin walks up to you then says, "I guess I''m up. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll make this quick." As he pushes his hard cock inside of your vagina causing a jolt of pain as your sore vagina is once again used. Valentin continuously rams his cock into your pussy, slamming the head of his penis against your g-spot. You don''t have enough breath to moan but with Valentin''s rough thrusts. You can feel Vitek''s cum leaking out of your ass as you hear Lera say, "Damn, look at <<$pcs_nickname>>, leaking like an overfilled water balloon." causing the girls to giggle. Valentin then pulls out of you and says, "Open your moth slut!"'
+											$orgasm_txt = ''
+											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+											gs 'stat'
+								
+											act 'Open your mouth':
+												*clr & cla
+												gs'stat'					
+												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images\shared\sex\cum\mouth\cum1,3.mp4"></video></center>'
+												'You obediently  open you mouth as Valentin grabs you head then holds it to his dick before jerking off then shooting his load onto your tongue. You keep your mouth open accepting his cum inside as you swallow it as quickly as you can to make room for more. The taste is horrible but you know that you have no choice. After Valentin fully drains his cock into your mouth he then brushes your cheek and says, "That''s how you do it <<$pcs_nickname>>." He then zips up his pants and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on the floor.'
+												gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A158', 1
+												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+												gs 'stat'	
+												
+												act 'Catch your breath':
+													*clr & cla
+													minut -= 5
+													gs'stat'
+													'<center><b><h4><font color=#e600fb><<"Yalena [Lena] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big20.jpg"></center>'
+													'You lay still, trying to catch your breath when Lena & Lera walk over you and say, "Enjoyed yourself? Well you better because I am going to make sure that you remember your place." Lera adds, "And I will be sure that the whole school remembers that you are nothing more than a filthy whore." Pauline also adds, "Don''t worry girls, I''ll make sure that no one forgets." As she continues to record you. She even pushes your ass cheeks apart to record the cum leaking out of it. Lena looks at you for a few seconds before saying, "Would you boys like to fuck <<$pcs_firstname>> too?" She then turns to the door where Artem, Petka and Petia are peeking through.'
+													gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
+													gs 'stat'	
+													
+													act 'See what happens next':
+														*clr & cla
+														gs'stat'
+														!!we don''t have to worry about it right now, but next release we need to revisit this and add in a alternative version if Sveta was dating Artem.
+														'<center><b><h4><font color=#fb00b7><<"Valeria [Lera] Tsarev">></font></h4></b></center>'
+														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big21.jpg"></center>'
+														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying...Hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
+														gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
+														gs 'stat'	
+														
+														act 'Continue':
+															*clr & cla
+															minut -= 5
+															gs'stat'
+															'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
+															*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
+															'You can feel all of your energy sapped, your will... Broken as you lay there in silence with the boys moving closer. You take this moment of silence to think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>So this is my life now. What did I do to deserve this? Why is this happening to me? This can''t be real.</font> Tears begin streaming down your cheeks as you hear footsteps. You look up to see Artem, Petka and Petia standing over you.'
+															*nl
+															if artembf = 1 and artembrokenheart = 0 and artemblok = 0:
+																artembf = 0
+																artemblok = 1
+																'Artem sadly looks down at you then says, "How could you? I loved you but you''re just a whore now." Lena leans forward and says in a mocking tone, "Aww was <<$pcs_nickname>> your girlfriend? Well you should be used to fucking her by now, so why not give it another go." Lera then squats down right next to you then puts one of her fingers in your vagina as she says, "She is really wet Artem, she obviously wants you to fuck her. So go on, give her what she wants and it''s not like she doesn''t owe you that much... Right?" Artem starts lightly rubbing his crotch as he watches Lera fingering you. Before nodding his head in agreement.'
+															end	
+															gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
+															gs 'stat'
+															
+															act 'See what they do':
+																*clr & cla
+																gs'stat'
+																'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock7.mp4"></video></center>'
+																'Petka begins fondling your breasts as Artem spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, You lay still as Artem begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see Artem, Petka, Petia, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. Artem''s pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
+																$orgasm_txt = ''
+																gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
+																gs 'stat'
+																
+																act 'See what Artem does':
+																	*clr & cla
+																	minut -= 5
+																	gs'stat'
+																	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/facial7.mp4"></video></center>'
+																	'Artem suddenly pulls out of you then begins painting your stomach with his cum before buttoning his pants then giving you a light kiss on the cheek before leaving the room. You suddenly hear heavy breathing over you. You look up to see Petia standing over you with his penis in his hand, stroking it over your face. He then suddenly groans as he begins cumming all over your face. Petia storms out of the room shortly after as Petka begins pushing his penis inside you.'
+																	$orgasm_txt = ''
+																	gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A2', 1
+																	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
+																	gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A159', 1
+																	gs 'stat'
+
+																	act 'Continue':
+																		*clr & cla
+																		gs'stat'
+																		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock8.mp4"></video></center>'
+																		'Petka begins fucking you, thrusting at an increased pace as he holds your legs open, giving himself easier access. You have no fight left, your strength is gone, your entire body is numb, you feel nothing as Petka continues using your body. <font color=#FF00FF>Wha...what''s going...feel...so hot...head...can''t think...why...</font>'
+																		$orgasm_txt = ''
+																		gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A6', 1
+																		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
+																		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+																		gs 'stat'
+																		
+																		act '...':
+																			*clr & cla
+																			gs'stat'
+																			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
+																			*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
+																			'You can feel your consciousness fading in and out. You can hear some words but they too seem to fade in and out... "You''ll be a star <<$pcs_nickname>>. An even bigger whore than Sonia."... "Well you look all tuckered out. Had a good time?"... "I think we broke our new toy."... "It looks like she passed out... Too much fun maybe."...'
+																			'Then you hear footsteps as they leave the room and everything starts to fade until you hear... "How could they do this to her?"..."Aww wow, she looks... Sticky."..."It''s not the time for jokes Vicky! We need to do something! We can''t just leave her like this!"...'
+																		
+																			act '...':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDreams', 'Family'
+																		end
+																	end
+																end
+															end
+														end
+													end
+												end
+											end
+										end
+									end
+								end
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
+	*clr & cla
+	if pav_sex < 230:pav_sex = 250
+	gs 'fame'
+	grupTipe[61] = 4
+	minut += 5
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos1.jpg"></center>'
+	'You walk into the school building and hear many of the students whispering to each other. One of the girls, calls out, "Look who it is, It''s <<$pcs_firstname>> the filthy whore!" You immediately lower your head in shame, pretending not to hear her.' 
+	
+	act 'Try to ignore them':
+		*clr & cla
+		gs'stat'	
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos2.jpg"></center>'
+		'One of the boys walks alongside you and says, "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I saw the pictures. You have such a gorgeous body, can I fuck it?" Roman pushes him aside and says, "Don''t listen to him. He doesn''t know how to treat a babe as fine as yourself, so why don''t you join me in the restroom, where we can get to know each other better?"'
+
+		act 'Accept his offer':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
+			*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
+			'<font color=#FF00FF>Maybe Roman can help me out, he is being nice to me when he doesn''t have to.</font> You meekly nod to the boy and his eyes light up as he replies, "Great! let''s get going." He then grabs your arm and guides you to the restroom.'
+
+			act 'Follow him to the Restroom':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs'stat'
+				'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Roman Yakovlev">></font></h4></b></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big157.jpg"></center>'
+				'You both arrive at the restroom and Roman pulls you to a mirror then stands behind you then whispers in your ear, "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were amazing yesterday and I can''t stop thinking about your rockin'' bod and cute face. I want another round and don''t worry, I''ll be gentle."' 
+
+				act 'Continue':
+					*clr & cla
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A154'
+					gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+					gs'stat'				
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/1.jpg"></center>'
+					'He begins undressing you as he runs his hands down your body. You can feel you shirt being removed, followed by your pants. Roman finishes undressing you then begins sliding his hand up your leg arriving at you vagina which he begins fingering as you close your eyes, letting him do as he wants to your body. After a few seconds, Roman begins taking off his shirt then pulling down his pants. Roman whispers in your ear, "I''ve never had a girl suck my balls before. I want you to be the first." He then lightly pushes down on your shoulders.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+
+					act 'Suck Roman''s balls':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut -= 5
+						gs'stat'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/2.jpg"></center>'
+						'You obediently begin licking Roman''s balls gently before wrapping your lips around them and sucking firmly. After a few seconds, Roman scoffs then says, "Easy <<$pcs_nickname>>, not so hard." You quickly stop before sucking again, but more gently this time.' 
+						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						
+						act 'Continue':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs'stat'						
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/3.jpg"></center>'
+							'You continue sucking while enjoying the warmth of Roman''s balls and how they occasionally bounce in your mouth. Roman looks down at you and says, "That a girl, keep doing that." You continue gently sucking on his balls, feeling excited, knowing that you are pleasing him. After a few more moments, Roman grabs onto your shoulders then lifts you up before kissing you passionately. You can feel your heart warming up. <font color=#FF00FF>He is kissing me so passionately. Maybe he cares for me. Please care for me. I need someone to care for me. Please care for me.</font>'
+							gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+
+							act 'See what he does next':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/4.jpg"></center>'
+								'Roman lifts you to your feet then turns you around before pressing his penis against your anus. You lean your breasts against the wall, knowing that Roman will soon fuck your ass.' 
+								
+								act 'Let Roman Fuck your ass':
+									*clr & cla
+									gs'stat'
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you...Ehh...take it slow...Ehhh...Please." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, It seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. <font color=#FF00FF>Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!</font> You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
+									gs 'arousal', 'end'
+									gs 'stat'
+
+									act 'Ride Roman':
+										*clr & cla
+										gs'stat'
+										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/6.jpg"></center>'
+										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. <font color=#FF00FF>Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!</font> to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. <font color=#FF00FF>So...He didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why wont anyone care for me anymore?</font> you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
+										gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A189', 1
+										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
+										gs 'arousal', 'end'
+										gs 'stat'
+
+										act 'Turn around':
+											*clr & cla
+											gs 'boyStat', 'A189'
+											gs'stat'
+											'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
+											'You turn to see Niko standing over you. "I''ve been so worried about you <<$pcs_firstname>>, I heard what happened yesterday and I am so sorry about what happened. What shitty luck, but don''t worry, your safe with me <<$pcs_firstname>>." He then hugs you.'
+
+											act 'Return the hug':
+												*clr & cla
+												minut += 5
+												gs'stat'
+												'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
+												'You return the hug as you think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>I know Katja told me that he is no good for me, but I need him. Niko takes care of me and I just want to make him happy. I know that he wouldn''t lie to me. I''m sure that he will even find a way to clear my reputation. I just need to do what he says. Ohh Nikolai, I love you so much.</font>' 
+	
+												act 'Continue':
+													*clr & cla
+													gs'stat'	
+													'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'												
+													'Niko kisses your forehead then says, "You know that you can always trust me right?" You eagerly nod with a big smile on your face, "Of course I do. I love you Nikolai." Niko returns the smile as he leans forward and gives you a very passionate kiss. After you both finish your kiss, Niko rubs your cheek then says, "I know that you''ve been through a lot, but you look so beautiful and your body is so perfect. Could you please suck my dick? I would be so grateful." He continues to rub your cheek gently.'
+
+													act 'Suck Niko''s dick':
+														*clr & cla
+														NikoEv = 11
+														minut += 5
+														gs'stat'
+														'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/kotovbj23.mp4"></video></center>'
+														'You reply, "Of course I will Niko. You need only ask." You eagerly unbutton his pants then pull out his dick before quickly wrapping your lips around it, hearing Niko moan as you do it. <font color=#FF00FF>It feels so good to be sucking Niko''s dick again. My man. Oh How I missed you. I don''t even care if I''m a whore, but I want to be your whore Niko. I only want to please you. Only you.</font>' 
+
+														act 'Continue':
+															*clr & cla
+															gs'stat'
+															'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum1.11.mp4"></video></center>'
+															'You continue sucking Niko''s dick firmly while staring into his eyes, enjoying the pleased look that he is giving you which shows you that you are doing a good job. Suddenly Niko''s eyes squint as he groans, filling your mouth with his warm seed which you swallow eagerly, enjoying the warmth of it sliding down your throat and even the sting as it goes down. Niko places his hand on your cheek, gently stroking it with his thumb as he says, "You are so perfect <<$pcs_firstname>>. I am so lucky to have you and don''t worry, I will find a way to fix what happened yesterday. Meet me after school and we will go out on a nice walk. We''ll discuss what to do next then." Niko kisses you on your forehead before zipping his pants then leaving the restroom.'
+															gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A189', 1
+															gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
+															gs 'arousal', 'end'
+															gs 'stat'
+
+															act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
+														end
+													end	
+												end	
+											end
+
+											act 'Pull away from Niko':
+												*clr & cla
+												gs'stat'
+												'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
+												'You suddenly pull away from Niko while shouting, "Where the fuck were you yesterday? You left me cuffed on the floor then I got raped and humiliated!" Niko sighs as he replies, "I totally forgot <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m sorry. I know that is no excuse, but we can make things better." You quickly shout back, "Make things better? How the fuck can you make things better? I am nothing but a whore to everyone now! I have lost everything!" Niko smirks as he replies, "I know someone that can restore your reputation for you." You recoil in shock, "Really? How?" Niko says, "Let''s talk about this at my place tonight."'
+
+												act 'Agree':
+													*clr & cla
+													NikoEv = 11
+													minut += 5
+													gs'stat'
+													'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
+													'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude wont solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. <font color=#FF00FF>I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.</font>' 
+													
+													act 'Kiss Niko':
+														*clr & cla
+														minut += 5
+														gs'stat'
+														'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
+														'You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head as Niko turns around then walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed then follow him out.'
+
+														act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
+													end
+												end	
+
+												act 'Refuse <font color="red">Break up with Niko</font>':
+													*clr & cla
+													NikoEv = -1
+													NikoLuv = -8
+													NikoDate = -1
+													NikoVolkovQW = -1
+													NikoPayback = 1
+													minut += 5
+													gs'stat'
+													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/ouch.jpg"></center>'
+													'You quickly push Niko away. "Fuck you! You are just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry, "You ungrateful bitch! I have done so much for you and spent so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward then ram your knee into Niko''s balls then spit on him before grabbing your clothes and walking out of the restroom.'
+
+													act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
+												end
+											end
+										end	
+									end	
+								end	
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+
+	act 'Walk away':
+		*clr & cla
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos3.jpg"></center>'
+		'You keep your head lowered as you quicken your pace. One of the boys smacks your ass hard, causing you to jump up, but you try to ignore it while you feel tears streaming down your face. <font color=#FF00FF>Is this what my life will be like for now on? Will things ever go back to the way they were before? Why is this happening? What did I do wrong? Can''t they just leave me alone?</font>' 
+		
+		act 'Continue walking':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs'stat'		
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos4.jpg"></center>'
+			'You continue quickly walking through the hall as you hear the students whispering about you, when you suddenly hear, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> are you alright? I''ve been so worried about you."'
+
+			act 'Look up':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk Of Shame 2'
+		end
+	end	
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
+	*clr & cla
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
+	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I...I''m scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
+
+	act 'Weep in his arms':
+		*clr & cla
+		NikoEv = 11
+		minut += 5
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00CC><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
+		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
+		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. <font color=#FF00FF>No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, He is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!</font>' 
+
+		act 'Embrace Niko':
+			*clr & cla
+			gs'stat'		
+			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'		
+			'You tighten your arms around Niko as he kisses your neck firmly. "Everything will be alright. I will find a way to fix this, just follow my lead and everything will be alright, ok?" You reply, "I will do whatever you say Nikolai, just please stay with me. I need you now more than ever." Niko responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m not going anywhere, now let''s get you to class." Niko guides you to your first class.'
+
+			act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
+		end
+	end	
+
+	act 'Push him away':
+		*clr & cla
+		minut += 5
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
+		'You suddenly pull away from Niko while shouting, "Where the fuck were you yesterday? You left me cuffed on the floor then I got raped and humiliated!" Niko sighs as he replies, "I totally forgot <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m sorry. I know that is no excuse, but we can make things better." You quickly shout back, "Make things better? How the fuck can you make things better? I am nothing but a whore to everyone now! I have lost everything!" Niko smirks as he replies, "I know someone that can restore your reputation for you." You recoil in shock, "Really? How?" Niko says, "Let''s talk about this at my place tonight."'
+
+		act 'Stay with Niko':
+			*clr & cla
+			NikoEv = 11
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
+			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude wont solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. <font color=#FF00FF>I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.</font>'
+
+			act 'Push him away':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs'stat'			
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod as Niko turns around then walks away. You quickly get dressed then follow him to the hallway.'
+
+				act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
+			end
+		end	
+
+		act 'Break up with Niko':
+			*clr & cla
+			NikoEv = -1
+			NikoLuv = -8
+			NikoDate = -1
+			NikoVolkovQW = -1
+			NikoPayback = 1
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/ouch.jpg"></center>'
+			'You quickly push Niko away. "Fuck you! You are just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry, "You ungrateful bitch! I have done so much for you and spent, so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward then ram your knee into Niko''s balls then spit on him before grabbing your clothes and walking away.'
+
+			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+--- NikoWhore ---------------------------------
+

locations/Nord.qsrc

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'redlight':
 	else
 		'A shop for sex toys is closed and will open at 11:00.'
 	end
-	if bordel > 0 and hour >= 20 or bordel > 0 and hour <= 3:'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
+	if bordel > 0 and (hour >= 20 or hour <= 3):'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
 
 	act 'Return to the Industrial Region (0:05)': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 

locations/ParChurch.qsrc

@@ -56,7 +56,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Mom':
 	cla & *clr
-	mom_church = daystart
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#CB00A2>"Natasha [<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>"</font></h4></b></center>'
 	if VKChurchNo = 4 or VKChurchNo = 5:
@@ -65,15 +64,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Mom':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost9.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	if motherKnowWhore = 0 and VKChurchIntro = 0:
-		'You walk into the church then look for a seat when you suddenly hear someone casually call out, "<<$pcs_firstname>> I never expected you to come here without me dragging you." You turn to see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. You reply, "Hey <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> then motions you to sit next to her.'
+		'You suddenly hear someone casually call out, "<<$pcs_firstname>> I never expected you to come here without me dragging you." You turn to see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. You reply, "Hey <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> then motions you to sit next to her.'
 	elseif motherKnowWhore = 0 and VKChurchNo < 4:
-		'You walk into the church then see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She quickly notices you then says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re here. Come here, take a seat." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> then motions you to sit next to her.'
+		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She quickly notices you then says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re here. Come here, take a seat." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> then motions you to sit next to her.'
 	elseif motherKnowWhore = 0 and VKChurchNo = 4:
-		'You walk into the church then see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She quickly notices you then get up and walks to you before saying, "<<$pcs_firstname>> we need to talk." She then guides you out of the church.'
+		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She quickly notices you then get up and walks to you before saying, "<<$pcs_firstname>> we need to talk." She then guides you out of the church.'
 	elseif motherKnowWhore > 0 or VKChurchNo = 5:
-		'You walk into the church then see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She peeks over in your direction then turns away from you, as if you were not there.'
+		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She peeks over in your direction then turns away from you, as if you were not there.'
 	else
-		'You walk into the church then see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She doesn''t seem to notice you.'
+		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sitting in the middle row. She doesn''t seem to notice you.'
 	end
 
 	if motherKnowWhore = 0 and VKChurchNo = 4:
@@ -137,6 +136,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Excuses':
 	cla & *clr
 	VKChurchEvents = 0
+	mom_church = daystart
 	gs'stat'
 	if VKChurchNo = 0:
 		VKChurchNo += 1
@@ -234,7 +234,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vigil':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/church'+ rand(9,10) +'.jpg"></center>'
 		'You decide to stay for the rite of mutual forgiveness and feel much better afterwards.'
-		act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+		if $args[1] = 'mom':
+			act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex_mom'
+		else
+			act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+		end
 	end
 end
 
@@ -274,7 +278,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'liturgy':
     vokal_exp += rand(0,3)
     gs 'stat'
 
-	act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+	if $args[1] = 'mom':
+		act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex_mom'
+	else
+		act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reducepavrep':
@@ -306,42 +314,59 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Narthex':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/enterchurch.jpg"></center>'
 	'You enter the church and the scent of incense and beeswax fills your lungs. Your eyes are drawn past the Narthex into the Nave with its walls covered in lovingly painted icons while a thousand points of light dance in joy throughout God''s house from the magnificent chandelier that hangs from the ceiling.'
 	'To your left as you enter, there is a counter where a deacon sells candles, icons, and prayer books. He smiles and nods at you absently, acknowledging your presence without really seeing you.'
+	act 'Leave the church': gt 'ParChurch' , 'start'
+	if ((week <= 5 and hour >= 7 and hour < 9) or (hour >= 16 and hour < 18)) and confessday ! daystart: act 'Go to confession': confessday = daystart & gt 'ParChurch2', 'confession'
+	act 'Light a candle':gt 'ParChurch', 'candle'
+	act 'Pray':gt 'ParChurch', 'pray'
+	act 'Talk to the Priest': gt 'ParChurch' , 'talk_priest'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Narthex_mom':
+	CLOSE ALL
+	$menu_loc = 'ParChurch'
+	$menu_arg = 'Narthex_mom'
+	menu_off = 0
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
+	gs 'stat'
+	PLAY 'sound/church/76139__dkustic__090227-01-people-church-concert.wav',30
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/enterchurch.jpg"></center>'
+	'You enter the church and the scent of incense and beeswax fills your lungs. Your eyes are drawn past the Narthex into the Nave with its walls covered in lovingly painted icons while a thousand points of light dance in joy throughout God''s house from the magnificent chandelier that hangs from the ceiling.'
+	'To your left as you enter, there is a counter where a deacon sells candles, icons, and prayer books. He smiles and nods at you absently, acknowledging your presence without really seeing you.'
 	if VKChurchEvents < 2 and hour < 14:
 		if VKChurch = 0 or VKChurch = 4:
-			if VKChurch < 4: VKChurch += 1
-			act 'Attend the Vigil':gt 'ParChurch', 'vigil'
+			if VKChurch < 4 and week = 6 and hour >=19 and hour <= 22: VKChurch += 1
+			act 'Attend the Vigil':VKChurchEvents += 1 & gt 'ParChurch', 'vigil', 'mom'
 		elseif VKChurch = 1 or VKChurch = 4:
+			if VKChurch < 4 and week = 7 and hour >= 9 and hour < 12: VKChurch += 1
+			act 'Join the Liturgy':VKChurchEvents += 1 & gt 'ParChurch', 'liturgy', 'mom'
+		elseif VKChurch = 2 or VKChurch = 4:	
 			if VKChurch < 4: VKChurch += 1
-			act 'Join the Liturgy':gt 'ParChurch', 'liturgy'
-		elseif VKChurch = 2 or VKChurch = 4:
-			if VKChurch < 4: VKChurch += 1
-			act 'Light a candle':gt 'ParChurch', 'candle'
+			act 'Light a candle':VKChurchEvents += 1 & gt 'ParChurch', 'candle', 'mom'
 			if VKChurch < 4: VKChurch += 1
 		elseif VKChurch = 3 or VKChurch = 4:
 			if VKChurch < 4: VKChurch = 4
-			act 'Pray':gt 'ParChurch', 'pray'
+			act 'Pray':VKChurchEvents += 1 & gt 'ParChurch', 'pray', 'mom'
 		else
-			act 'Attend the Vigil':gt 'ParChurch', 'vigil'
-			act 'Join the Liturgy':gt 'ParChurch', 'liturgy'
-			act 'Light a candle':gt 'ParChurch', 'candle'
-			act 'Pray':gt 'ParChurch', 'pray'
+			if week = 6 and hour >=19 and hour <= 22 and churchday ! daystart:
+				act 'Attend vigil': gt 'ParChurch', 'vigil', 'mom'
+			elseif week = 7 and hour >= 9 and hour < 12 and churchday ! daystart:
+				act 'Attend Divine Liturgy': gt 'ParChurch' , 'liturgy', 'mom'
+			end
+			act 'Light a candle':gt 'ParChurch', 'candle', 'mom'
+			act 'Pray':gt 'ParChurch', 'pray', 'mom'
 		end
 		act 'Leave early':gt 'ParChurch', 'Leave Early'
 	else
-		if hour = 12:
-			minut += 120 - minut
-		else
-		   minut += 60 - minut
-		end
-		if hour >= 14:hour = 14 - minut
 		if VKChurchQW < 6:VKChurchQW += 1
 		act 'Finish':gt 'ParChurch', 'Leave'
-	end
+	end	
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Leave Early':
 	CLOSE ALL
 	VKChurchEvents = 0
+	mom_church = daystart
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#CB00A2>"Natasha [<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>"</font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost9.jpg"></center>'
@@ -360,6 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Leave':
 	else
 		hour = 14
 	end
+	mom_church = daystart
 	VKChurchEvents = 0
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#CB00A2>"Natasha [<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>"</font></h4></b></center>'
@@ -421,7 +447,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'candle':
 		'You approach the iconostasis and light your candle in the dark church. It gives you a nice feeling and decide to say a little prayer. The darkness, combined with the pleasant sight of fire makes you feel warm inside.'
 	end
 
-	act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+	if $args[1] = 'mom':
+		act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex_mom'
+	else
+		act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pray':
@@ -489,10 +519,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pray':
 			'"That felt refreshing," you mumble to yourself.'
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+		if $args[1] = 'mom':
+			act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex_mom'
+		else
+			act 'Return to Narthex': gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'
+		end
 	end
 
-	if exhibitionist_lvl > 0:
+	if exhibitionist_lvl > 0 and $args[1] ! 'mom':
 		act 'Be naughty':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1

locations/_attributes_alternative.qsrc

@@ -303,6 +303,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 55:
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	CloStyle = 2
+	CloStyle2 = 4
 elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
 	CloQuality = 3
 	CloThinness = 3

locations/_attributes_school.qsrc

@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
 	CloBimbo = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3

locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomerGateBuyout':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'Your master approaches you, "Hello, slave slut."'
-	'"I have a customer here, who came to rent you for a while. Do whatever he asks of you."'
+	'"I have a customer here that came to rent you for a while. Do whatever he asks of you."'
 	buyout = 1
 	act 'Yes, Master.':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomerGo'
 end
@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomerGo':
 	gs 'stat'
 	i = rand(1,3)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/ledonfour<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Your master removes your regular chains and puts you on a leash.'
+	'Your master removes your regular chains and attaches a leash to your collar.'
 	'You are being led up the stairs into the house above your cellar.'
-	'When you came into the hall, your master orders you on your knees: "Kneel slave, and continue on your four legs, like a bitch you are."'
+	'When you enter the hall your master orders you on your knees, "Kneel slave then continue on your four legs just like the bitch you are."'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'You are led to a different room where the customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him.'
+		'You are led to the room where your customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him.'
 	else
-		'You are led to a different room where the customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him and your master leaves, closing the door behind him.'
+		'You are led to the room where your customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him and your master leaves. The only room door closes behind him leaving you alone with your customer.'
 	end
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer'
 end
@@ -174,35 +174,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer':
 		$bName = 'Leonid'
 		$bSurname = 'Nosov'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorekneel1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you are led to the room as usual, you see the man standing opposite to you.'
+		'As you are led to the room, as usual, you see the man standing opposite of you.'
 		'Right away you can see that he is just another bastard coming here to use your <<age>> years young body.'
-		'Your master leaves you in the center of the room, still kneeling with the leash attached to your collar.'
-		'As the door closes behind him, the customer slowly turns and you can finally see his face.'
+		'Your master leaves you in the center of the room. You are still kneeling with the leash attached to your collar.'
+		'As the door closes behind him the customer slowly turns, so you can finally see his face.'
 		act 'Look at his face':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-buyout1'
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorekneelmaster.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'The customer is a <<$heightType>> <<$bodyType>> <<$raceType>>.'
-		'Kneeling in front of him, you look up into his eyes and see a <<$charType>> look in his eyes.'
-		'You look back down and see his crotch directly in front of you. It''s obvious that he has something <<$dick_girth>> in his pants.'
+		'Kneeling in front of him, you look up into his eyes and see a <<$charType>> look there.'
+		'You then look down and see his crotch directly in front of you. It''s obvious that he has something <<$dick_girth>> in his pants.'
 	end
 
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'Your master tells the customer: "So this is her. You can make sure she''s a virgin, her hymen is intact."'
+		'Your master tells the customer, "So this is her. You can make sure she''s a virgin as her hymen is intact."'
 		'"I believe you. She''s not the first virgin slut that you''ve delivered to me, is she?"'
 		'"No, she definitely is not! How many has it been so far, four, five?"'
-		'"In your establishment, I have paid for six virgins in total. This one is the seventh.'
+		'"In your establishment I have paid for six virgins in total. This one is the seventh.'
 		if age < 17:
 			'"Good number. Good slut, too. She''s only <<age>> years old, I suppose her vagina will be especially tight."'
 			'"That''s how I like it."'
 		else
-			'"Good number. Good slut, too."'
+			'"Good number. She''s a good slut, too."'
 			'"We will see."'
 		end
 		act 'Sob and wait':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin1'
 	else
 		if buyout = 0:
-			'He is clearly expecting you to start doing something. You decide to:'
-			act 'Show him your assets':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-show'
+			'He is clearly expecting you to start work in pleasuring him. You decide to:'
+			act 'Show him your beautiful body':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-show'
 			act 'Unzip his pants':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-unzip'
 		end
 	end
@@ -212,14 +212,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/leonid/leonid.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you look up at his face a chill runs down your spine - you know him!'
 	'You remember this man from one of the parent-school conferences. It''s Dimka''s dad, <<$bName>>..'
-	'And obviously he recognizes you too: "Oh... what the... who do we have here? Isn''t this the known missing person, <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>?'
-	'With a trembling voice only a few words leave your mouth: "Th...that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>.."'
-	'"The police has already given up searching for you, you know. As if they made any effort, though..."'
+	'And obviously he recognizes you too, "Oh... what the... who do we have here? Isn''t this the known missing person, <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>?'
+	'With a trembling voice only a few words leave your mouth, "Th...that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>.."'
+	'"You do realize that the police have already given up searching for you. As if they made any effort though..."'
 	'"I-I don''t even know how long I''ve been here. The only thing I remember is being a plaything for these perverts..."'
-	'After these words there is a short period of silence. You just keep kneeling like you are trained to, straightening your back with your breasts jutting forward so to give your customers something nice to look at.'
+	'After these words there is a short period of silence. You just keep kneeling, as you are trained with your back straight and breasts jutting forward, so you give your customers something nice to look at.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorekneel2.jpg"></center>'
 	'Then suddenly the look on <<$bName>>''s face changes from surprised to something else.'
-	'He comes up to you and gently caresses your face: "Plaything, you say? And do you like it?"'
+	'He comes up to you and gently caresses your face, "Plaything, you say? And do you like it?"'
 	'Surprised by such a question you wait with your answer:'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'
@@ -242,20 +242,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout2':
 	'"I rather you wouldn''t let her know how I ended up."'
 	'"This establishment really gets the job done. I must commend the owner."'
 	'With these words he leaves the room. You can hear an echo of a discussion between him and your master.'
-	'After a while <<$bName>> comes back: "Let''s go <<$pcs_firstname>>.". He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room and into the hallway.'
+	'After a while <<$bName>> comes back, "Let''s go <<$pcs_firstname>>.". He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room to enter into the hallway.'
 	'"B-but... where are you taking me? I have never been in this part of the house before."'
-	'"You still don''t understand, slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you, I paid for you, you are my property. My slavegirl."'
-	'Surprised, you can only think; better be used by one man than by many random ones.'
-	'Still naked and collared, he leads you outside to his car and stuffs you into the trunk.'
+	'"You still don''t understand, do you slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you. I paid for you. You are now my property. You are... my slavegirl."'
+	'Surprised you can only think, it''s better to be used by one man than by many random ones.'
+	'You are still naked and collared as he leads you outside to his car. You are forced to get into his trunk.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-buyoutLeave'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout3':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreleonid1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'"In that case let''s have some fun, before we go straight to business."'
-	'He slaps your face so hard you lose your balance and fall down on the floor.'
+	'"In that case let''s have some fun before we get straight to business."'
+	'He slaps your face so hard that you lose your balance and fall face first into the floor.'
 	'You are taken by surprise by the blow - you had started to think that you were finally about to be saved from all of this.'
-	'But <<$bName>> seems to be as perverted as all the other men that have used you previously.'
-	'Stepping above you as you helplessly lay on the floor, he opens his zipper and pulls his dick out of his pants.'
+	'However, <<$bName>> seems to be as perverted as all the other men that have used you previously.'
+	'Stepping above you as you helplessly lie on the floor, he opens his zipper to pull out his dick.'
 	'You can clearly see his <<dick>> cm long <<$dick_girth>> dick swing above you in the air.'
 	act 'Suck on it':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-suckTip'
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
@@ -273,35 +273,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout3':
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefuckanalroughleonid2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are left lying on the floor, <<$bName>>''s cum still flowing out of your gaping ass.'
-	'He goes through the door and you can hear an echo of a discussion between him and your master.'
-	'In a few minutes <<$bName>> comes back: "I really like you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
-	'He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room and into the hallway.'
+	'You are left lying on the floor while <<$bName>>''s cum still flowing out of your gaping ass.'
+	'He goes through the door. You can hear an echo of your master''s and his voices discussing something you can''t make out.'
+	'In a few minutes <<$bName>> comes back, "I really like you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+	'He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room to enter into the hallway.'
 	'"B-but... where are you taking me? I have never been in this part of the house."'
-	'"You still don''t understand, slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you, I paid for you, you are my property. My slavegirl."'
-	'Surprised, you can only think; better be used by one man then by many random ones.'
-	'Still naked and collared, he leads you outside to his car and stuffs you into the trunk.'
+	'"You still don''t understand, do you slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you. I paid for you. You are now my property. You are... my slavegirl."'
+	'Surprised you can only think, it''s better to be used by one man than by many random ones.'
+	'You are still naked and collared as he leads you outside to his car. You are forced to get into his trunk.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-buyoutLeave'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyoutLeave':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/garage.jpg"></center>'
-	'Stuffed in the trunk you can hear the sound of the engine as he drives you somewhere unknown.'
-	'After about thirty minutes the car stops.'
-	'<<$bName>> opens the trunk. You appear to be in an underground parking garage.'
-	'You climb out, still naked and collared like a bitch. It seems he doesn''t care about your feelings at all.'
-	'He takes your leash and leads you through a door upstairs into a room that looks like an office.'
+	'Stuffed inside of the trunk you can only hear the sound of the engine and the pavement below as he drives you somewhere unknown.'
+	'After an unknown amount of time, the sound of the pavement stops and the engine shuts off. Their echoes from bouncing off the walls cease leaving only silence.'
+	'<<$bName>> opens the trunk. Your eyes blink to adjust to the dimly lit area and you that you are in a parking garage. There are no open spaces between the current level and the above one, so you think to yourself that this is underground.'
+	'You climb out still naked and collared like a bitch. It seems he doesn''t care about your feelings at all.'
+	'He takes your leash and leads you while you are on all fours up the stairs. You both exit through the upstairs stairwell door into a room that appears to be an office.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'leonid', 'firstTime'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin1':
 	minut += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Your master leaves and you start to shiver.'
-	'"Don''t worry slut, it will hurt only a lot!" the customer is clearly enjoying himself.'
-	'You run to the far corner of the room, a futile attempt to get as far away from him as you can.'
-	'He walks up to you and grabs you, dragging you to the center of the room, where a sort of bench stands.'
-	'You are bound to the bench, your legs spread as wide as they go, giving him ideal access to your naked virgin pussy.'
-	'Your head is bound so that you have an unobstructed view on your own pussy. Probably to make sure you watch as he tears it apart.'
+	'Your master leaves and your body starts to shiver.'
+	'"Don''t worry slut, because this will only hurt a lot," the customer says. He is clearly enjoying himself.'
+	'You run to the far corner of the room. It''s a futile attempt to get as far away from him as you can.'
+	'He walks up to you and grabs you by the hair. He drags you as a painful, terrified scream emits from your throat to something that looks like a bench in the center of the room.'
+	'He forcefully yanks your hair to make you climb onto the bench like structure. He punches you in the stomach and you collapse. He flips you over onto your back and binds your arms above your head with handcuffs. He follows with putting your legs into stirrups then follows with legcuffs to hold you in place. You realize that this gives him unlimited access to your virgin pussy.'
+	'Your head is bound so that you have an unobstructed view on your own pussy. This is to ensure that you watch as he tears your terrorified cunt apart.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin2'
 end
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin2':
 	minut += 2
 	pcs_mood = 5
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He starts to undress, finishing off with his pants. As he pulls them down, you can finally can see his naked member fall out.'
+	'He starts to slowly undress, with his back to you, to enhance your terror. With a clink on the floor you can tell that his pants, holding a belt, hits the concrete floor. He slowly turns around to face you and you can finally see his naked body. His cock sways for a moment before stopping in front of your face.'
 	'"With renewed terror you start to cry, because the sight of his <<dick>> cm thick <<$dick_girth>> phallus is just terrifying."'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin3'
@@ -317,19 +317,19 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin3':
 	minut += 10
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin3.jpg"></center>'
-	'He starts jerking his member, looking at you, bound and helpless, slowly making his cock hard.'
+	'He starts to jerk his cock, all the while looking at your eyes then to your bound and helpless nude body. The sight slowly makes his cock hard.'
 	'In his eyes you can see he relishes looking at you in your despair.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin4'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Finally he reaches for you, bringing the tip of his phallus in front of your pussy.'
-	'He covers his <<$dick_girth>> member in a thick layer of lube and starts slowly pressing against the opening of your vagina.'
-	'With his hands he spreads your pussy lips, easing the entry for his member.'
-	'"Now behold, girl. You are about to become a woman!"'
-	'He pushes it in with a single long trust, almost all the way inside your virgin pussy.'
-	'A terrible pain spreads throughout your lower body, a trickle of red blood running down the shaft of his cock.'
+	'He, finally, reaches for you and brings the tip of his phallus to the entrace of your virgin pussy.'
+	'He covers his <<$dick_girth>> member in a thick layer of lube then starts to slowly press against the opening of your vagina.'
+	'With his hands he spreads your pussy lips apart to help ease the entry for his member.'
+	'"Now behold girl. You are about to become a woman," he exclaims.'
+	'He pushes it in with a single long thrust that almost hits the bottom of your virgin cunt.'
+	'A terrible pain rips through your body that begins where your hymen was. It spreads like a fire throughout your body. A trickle of red blood runs down the shaft of his cock.'
 	pcs_vag += 1
 	stat['vaginal'] += 1
 	pain['vaginal'] += 20
@@ -339,9 +339,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin4':
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin5':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin5.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He leaves his cock inside you, enjoying your facial expressions and the sight of blood coating his cock.'
-	'Then he removes it, renewing your pain and enjoying himself again.'
-	'Being content with his accomplishment, he enters your pussy again and this time he fucks you brutally, often hitting your cervix with his <<dick>> cm long thick <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
+	'He leaves his cock inside you. He looks directly at your face to enjoy the expression that is on your face that is the reaction to you seeing your blood that is coating his cock.'
+	'He then slams his cock back into you. The pain you feel is renewed while he grunts in pleasure the shows he is enjoying himself.'
+	'He feels accomplishment in his handiwork and sneers at you. He brutally thrusts into your pussy over and over again. He often hits your cervix with his <<dick>> cm long thick <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
 	pain['vaginal'] += 10
 	pain['cervix'] += 10
 	pain['tummy'] += 10
@@ -352,21 +352,21 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin6':
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin6.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'"And now whore, you will receive your first cum, as the breeder you were always supposed to be and that you are about to become."'
-	'With new tears streaming down your cheeks, he spurts his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm <<dick>> cm deep inside your belly.'
+	'"And now whore you will receive your first cum. You will become the breeder you were always supposed to be."'
+	'As renewed tears streams down your cheeks he spurts his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm <<dick>> cm deep inside your pussy. You can feel hit your cervix and you shudder at the thought of you getting intionally pregnant from this monster.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'pussy', 'deflowering pervert'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Cry more':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin7'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin7':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin7.jpg"></center>'
-	'He rests with his dick deep inside you for a while, again enjoying the sight of your sobbing and despair.'
-	'"As his <<$dick_girth>> member becomes flaccid, he grabs a dildo that looks almost exactly like his own dick, probably having been modeled after it."'
-	'"The gift I just gave you, my cum, is not meant to just drip out of you. You will receive another gift. One that will keep it inside you."'
-	'With these words he lifts your ass in the air so the cum doesn''t flow out and pushes the dildo shaped after his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock all the way inside you, and then a little bit further. The dildo is pushed so deep into you that only its brightly coloured end is peeking out of your sorry hole.'
-	'When it''s in, he takes some pieces of duct tape and wraps it over your pussy, covering your lips and keeping the dildo firmly stuck inside.'
-	'He unties you from the bench, but tightens your hands behind your back, probably to keep you from removing the shaft.'
-	'"Now run, slut, and enjoy my gifts even more!" He leaves laughing.'
+	'He rests with his dick deep inside you for a while. He is enjoying the sight of your cries and the despair in your situation.'
+	'"As his <<$dick_girth>> member becomes flaccid it slides free of your abused pussy. He reaches out of sight and brings into view a dildo that looks almost exactly like his own dick. You think that it has probably been modeled from it."'
+	'"My cum that I just gave youis not meant to just drip out of you. You will receive another gift from me. One that will keep my present inside you."'
+	'With these words he lifts your ass in the air so the cum doesn''t flow out then brutally shoves the dildo, shaped after his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock, all the way inside you. The dildo is pushed so deep into you that only its brightly coloured base is peeking out of your abused hole.'
+	'When it''s in he takes some pieces of duct tape and wraps it over your pussy to cover your lips. This keeps the dildo firmly stuck inside.'
+	'He uncuffs you from the bench, but pulls your arms to be behind your back. This is probably to keep you from removing the shaft.'
+	'"Now run slut and enjoy my gifts even more," He leaves laughing.'
 	pain['vaginal'] += 10
 	pain['cervix'] += 10
 	pain['belly'] += 20
@@ -377,11 +377,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin8':
 	minut += 10
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin8.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your master comes in and finds you struggling on the ground, trying to shake the <<$dick_girth>> dildo out of you.'
-	'"Stop it, girl. You are just making it worse."'
+	'Your master comes in and finds you struggling on the ground. You are trying to shake the <<$dick_girth>> dildo out of you.'
+	'"Stop it... girl. You''ll just make it worse."'
 	'He grabs your leash and leads you back down to your cell.'
-	'As you follow the master by the leash, the plugged <<$dick_girth>> dildo moves inside you, causing you unpleasant sensations and pain.'
-	'Finally you are back at your bed.'
+	'As you follow your master, the plugged <<$dick_girth>> dildo moves inside you causing you further unpleasant sensations and pain.'
+	'Finally, you are back at your bed.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Lie down':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin9'
 end
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin9':
 	pcs_sleep += 70
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin9.jpg"></center>'
 	'Still having your hands bound you are put on your bed and tied to the wall on a short leash.'
-	'Your master leaves and you are left lying on the bed, still having your vagina plugged with this <<dick>> cm long <<$dick_girth>> dildo.'
+	'Your master leaves and you are left lying on the bed. Your vagina is still plugged by this <<dick>> cm long <<$dick_girth>> dildo.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Try to rest':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin10'
 end
@@ -401,13 +401,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin10':
 	'The sound of your master coming downstairs wakes you up.'
 	'You must have fallen asleep from the exhaustion.'
 	*nl
-	'Kneel and stick your ass high in the air, slut.'
+	'Kneel and stick your ass high in the air slut.'
 	'You are so desperate that you don''t even think about not doing what he orders you to do.'
-	'You just stick your ass as high as possible, pointing it so he has good access to both your ass and your ruthlessly plugged deflowered pussy.'
-	'Your master kneels down, removes the duct tape with a single pull and puts his fingers inside you, grabbing the stuck dildo.'
-	'Slowly he takes it out. Remnants of your virgin blood and the customer''s sperm are smeared all over it.'
-	'Your empty vagina gives you a rush of relief.'
-	'Your master unties you, adjusts your leash and as he leaves he tells you: "Be glad that you can be deflowered only once, silly girl."'
+	'You just stick your ass as high as possible. It points so he has good access to both your ass and your ruthlessly plugged deflowered pussy.'
+	'Your master kneels down to remove the duct tape with a single pull. You yelp in pain from the tiny pubic hairs that get ripped out with the tape. He puts his fingers inside you to grab the stuck dildo.'
+	'Slowly, he takes it out. Remnants of your virgin blood and the customer''s sperm are smeared all over it.'
+	'Your empty vagina gives you a rush of relief as the cool air rushes in to fill the void.'
+	'Your master unties you then adjusts your leash. As he leaves, he tells you, "Be glad that you can be deflowered only once you silly girl."'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdRoom'
 end
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-unzip':
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	'You reach towards his crotch and slowly start to unzip his trousers.'
-	'Pressing your face underneath his crotch, you pull down his shorts and a <<$dick_girth>> member falls out, landing directly on your face with a slapping sound.'
+	'Pressing your face underneath his crotch, you pull down his shorts and a <<$dick_girth>> member falls out. It lands directly onto your face with a slapping sound.'
 	if dick > 15 and dick < 25:
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/unzip1.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-unzip':
 	elseif dick >= 25:
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/unzip2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You stare at his <<$dick_girth>> cock with horror, imagining what terrible things this sizeable penis will do to your tender body.'
+		'You stare at his <<$dick_girth>> cock with horror. You image what terrible things this sizeable penis will do to your tender body.'
 	elseif dick < 15 and pcs_throat > dick:
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/unzip3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -469,8 +469,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-show':
 	minut += 10
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoretease<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You decide to tease the customer by showing him your sexy assets by jiggling your girly parts.'
-	'After some time behaving like a slut, it is obvious that he wants something more.'
+	'You decide to tease the customer by showing him your sexy breasts and jiggle them.'
+	'After some time of behaving like a slut, it is obvious that he wants something more.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-unzip'
 end
 
@@ -488,18 +488,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckTip':
 
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'<<$bName>> is starting to get very grumpy, obviously he''s not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
+			'<<$bName>> is starting to get very grumpy. He''s obviously he''s not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
 		else
-			'The customer is starting to get very grumpy, obviously he''s not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
+			'Your customer is starting to get very grumpy. He''s obviously not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
 		end
-		'Suddenly, without any warning, he takes a step back, pulling his <<$dick_girth>> member out of your mouth.'
-		'With an angry look in his eyes he slaps your face very hard, knocking you down to the cold floor.'
-		'He jumps on top of you with a piece of rope and ties you up.'
-		'"Even here one must train the slaves himself!" He shouts at you, forcing his <<$dick_girth>> dick all the way down your throat.'
-		'With your hands tied up you are unable to resist and all you can do is struggle to avoid suffocating as best you can...'
+		'Suddenly... without any warning, he takes a step back which pulls his <<$dick_girth>> member out of your mouth.'
+		'With an angry look in his eyes he slaps your face very hard which knocks you to the cold floor.'
+		'He jumps on top of your chest and with a piece of rope he ties you up.'
+		'"Even here, one must train the slaves himself," He shouts at you. He forces his <<$dick_girth>> dick all the way down your throat.'
+		'With your hands tied up you are unable to resist. All you can do is struggle to avoid suffocating as best you can...'
 		act 'Endure':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-suckForced'
 	elseif $charType = 'neutral':
-		'The customer seems displeased by your performance. You are starting to worry about what he''ll do if you don''t satisfy him well enough...'
+		'Your customer seems displeased by your performance. You are starting to worry about what he''ll do if you don''t satisfy him well enough...'
 		forceChance = rand(1, 100)
 		if forceChance <= 70:
 			act 'Continue sucking the tip':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-suckForced'
@@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckTip':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif $charType = 'kind':
-		'The customer seems pleased by your sucking skills, so you continue to tease the tip of his <<$dick_girth>> cock, looking at him with as much sensual abandon that you can muster under the present conditions.'
+		'Your customer seems pleased by your sucking skills, so you continue to tease the tip of his <<$dick_girth>> cock. You look at him with as much sensual abandon that you can muster under the present conditions.'
 		act 'Continue sucking the tip':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuck'
 	end
 end
@@ -545,8 +545,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckForceself':
 	gs 'stat'
 	i = rand(1,3)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreblowjobselfforced<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Knowing you will probably hurt yourself, you force yourself on his <<dick>> cm long cock all the way down to the balls anyway.'
-	'You start gagging and saliva is everywhere, but the customer seems more content now.'
+	'Knowing you will probably hurt yourself you force yourself on his <<dick>> cm long cock all the way down to be balls deep.'
+	'You start gagging and saliva freely flows from your stuffed mouth. Your customer seems more content now.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuck'
 end
@@ -560,13 +560,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckForced':
 	i = rand(1,6)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreblowjobforced<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if buyout = 1:
-		'<<$bName>> starts growling and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
+		'<<$bName>> growls and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
 	else
-		'The customer starts growling and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
+		'Your customer growls and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
 	end
 	'"What kind of slave are you when you can''t swallow my <<$dick_girth>> dick?"'
-	'He ties you up and forces his cock down your throat, showing you little to no concern.'
-	'You start to gag as he keeps pushing his member deep inside you, sometimes leaving you on the brink of passing out.'
+	'He ties you up and forces his cock down your throat. He shows you little to no concern for your wellbeing.'
+	'You start to gag as he keeps pushing his member deep inside you. Sometimes it leaves you on the brink of passing out.'
 	vagOrAss = rand (0,1)
 	if buyout = 1:
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalRough'
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckDeep':
 	gs 'stat'
 	i = rand(1,6)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreblowjob<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You swallow his <<$dick_girth>> cock all the way down to the balls.'
+	'You swallow his <<$dick_girth>> cock all the way down to his balls.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuck'
 end
 
@@ -595,20 +595,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuck':
 	gs 'stat'
 	endPunishment = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorecockremoved.jpg"></center>'
-	'It seems the customer is done with fucking your mouth as he removes his dick and steps back a bit, looking at you with a <<$charType>> appetite in his eyes.'
+	'It seems the customer is done with fucking your mouth as he removes his dick then steps back a bit. He looks at you with a <<$charType>> appetite in his eyes.'
 	if charType = 'sadistic':
-		'"What should I do to you next, bitch?"'
+		'"What should I do to you next bitch?"'
 	else
-		'So how do you want it next, love?'
+		'So how do you want it next love?'
 	end
-	'You are not entirely sure if he means that as a question or if he''s just saying that to himself.'
+	'You are not entirely sure if he means that as a rhetorical question or not.'
 
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		*nl
-		'You want to answer him, but the moment you open your mouth to talk, he slaps your face very hard, knocking you down on the cold floor.'
-		'"You thought I''m really interested in your slutty opinion?" He says laughing.'
+		'You want to answer him, but the moment you open your mouth to talk he slaps your face very hard. This knocks you down to the cold floor. Tears erupt from your eyes in response.'
+		'"You thought I''m really interested in your slutty opinion," He questionly laughing.'
 		'"A whore, and on top of that a slave whore, has no right to have an opinion."'
-		'You are unable to do anything except whimper like a small child. He ties you up and you know that it''s going to get even worse now.'
+		'You are unable to do anything, except whimper like a small child. He ties you up and you know that it''s going to get even worse now.'
 		vagOrAss = rand (0,1)
 		if vagOrAss = 0:
 			act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckRough'
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-beg':
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorebeg1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Please be kind to me sir, I''m so afraid and sore... please!'
+	'Please be kind to me sir. I''m so afraid and sore... please!'
 	if dick >= 15:'"I''m very afraid of your <<$dick_girth>> penis sir!"'
 	*nl
 	bekindChance = rand(1, 100)
@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-beg':
 		'A slave has no right to ask what will happen to it!'
 		hardChance = rand(1, 100)
 		if hardChance <= 50:
-			'"I will fuck you however I want, so shut up, bitch!"'
+			'"I will fuck you however I want, so shut up bitch!"'
 			if vagOrAss = 0:	
 				act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckRough'
 			else
@@ -702,7 +702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnal':
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefuckanal<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'The customer puts some lubricant on his <<$dick_girth>> cock and penetrates your ass.'
-	'He doesn''t care much about your feelings but he''s also not exactly hurting you on purpose.'
+	'He doesn''t care much about your feelings, but he''s also not exactly hurting you on purpose.'
 	*nl
 	if dick > pcs_ass:
 		pain['asshole'] += assDMG
@@ -731,10 +731,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalRough':
 	else
 		'The man takes you by your leash and positions your body as if it''s just meat to be used.'
 	end
-	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough anal fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure, whatsoever.'
+	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough anal fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure.'
 	*nl
 	if assDMG <= 0 :
-		'Fortunately his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your anus and intestines, not more than usual, anyway.'
+		'Fortunately, his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your anus and intestines, no more than usual, anyway.'
 		if buyout = 1:
 			act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumAss'
 		else
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalRough':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif assDMG <= 2:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain, as it bumps against your intestinal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain as it bumps against your intestinal walls.'
 		pain['asshole'] += assDMG
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalDeep'
@@ -769,23 +769,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalDeep':
 	'His member is <<$dick_girth>> and your ass is unable to accommodate it.'
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		*nl
-		'But he doesn''t care about that, even though he is obviously aware of it, and fucks you furiously hard.'
-		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, bitch?"'
-		'"Is it deep enough for you, or should I push a bit more?"'
-		'Obviously he''s enjoying this a lot. Doing this is probably the reason he came to this slave house.'
+		'But he doesn''t care about it, even though he is obviously aware, as he fucks you furiously hard.'
+		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you bitch?"'
+		'"Is it deep enough for you or should I push a bit more?"'
+		'Obviously, he''s enjoying this a lot. Doing this is probably the reason he came to this slave house.'
 		*nl
 	end
 	'With every stroke of his dick deep inside your intestines, you feel as if it''s your very stomach being poked by it.'
 	'A large bulge is noticeable every time he shoves it more than half the way inside you.'
 	*nl
 	if buyout = 1:
-		'After about half an hour of deep anal banging, <<$bName>> is about to cum.'
+		'After about a half an hour of deep anal banging, <<$bName>> is about to cum.'
 	else
-		'After about half an hour of deep anal banging, the man is about to cum.'
+		'After about a half an hour of deep anal banging, the man is about to cum.'
 	end
 
 	if (endPunishment = 1 or $charType = 'sadistic') and buyout = 0:
-		'"Now, I will feed you my seed, you unruly anal slave."'
+		'"Now, I will feed you my seed you unruly anal slave."'
 		act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cum'
 	elseif buyout = 1:
 		act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumAss'
@@ -803,18 +803,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckNormal':
 	if vagDMG <= 0:
 		'He''s not gentle, but it isn''t a very rough fuck either.'
 		'You have no problems accommodating his <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
-		'For some moments, you almost seem to enjoy it.'
+		'For some of the moments you almost seem to enjoy it.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub'
 		act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumGate'
 	elseif vagDMG <= 2:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain, as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckDeep'
 	else
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is insanely big for you.'
-		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix, or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
+		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG
 		pain['cervix'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -829,9 +829,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckRough':
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefuckrough<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'The man takes you by your leash and positions your body as if it''s just meat to be used.'
-	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure, whatsoever.'	
+	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure.'	
 	if vagDMG <= 0:
-		'Fortunately his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your vagina, not more than usual, anyway.'
+		'Fortunately, his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your vagina, no more than usual, anyway.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'bound'
 		if $charType = 'sadistic':
 			act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cum'
@@ -839,16 +839,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckRough':
 			act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumGate'
 		end
 	elseif vagDMG <= 2:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain, as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckDeep'
 	else
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is insanely big for you.'
-		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix, or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
+		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
 		'He seems to notice it too and realizes why you''re groaning so loudly.'
-		'Enjoying your suffering, he pushes his dick even deeper inside and you squeal like a pig being slaughtered.'
+		'Enjoying your suffering, he pushes his dick even deeper inside and you squeal like a pig being stuck.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG * 2
 		pain['cervix'] += vagDMG * 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'rough'
@@ -867,16 +867,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckDeep':
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		*nl
 		'But he doesn''t care about that, even though he is obviously aware of it, and fucks you furiously hard.'
-		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, bitch?"'
-		'"Is it deep enough for you, or should I push a bit more?"'
+		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you bitch?"'
+		'"Is it deep enough for you or should I push a bit more?"'
 		'"Do you feel me entering your cervix?"'
 		'Obviously he''s enjoying this a lot. Doing this is probably the reason he came to this slave house.'
 		*nl
 	end
-	'With every stroke of his dick deep inside your vagina, you feel as if it''s your very cervix being penetrated.'
+	'With every stroke of his dick deep inside your vagina you feel as if it''s your very cervix being penetrated.'
 	'A large bulge is noticeable every time he shoves it more than half the way inside you.'
 	*nl
-	'After about half an hour of deep vaginal banging, the man is about to cum.'
+	'After about half an hour of deep vaginal banging the man is about to cum.'
 	
 	if endPunishment = 1 or $charType = 'sadistic':
 		'"Now, I will feed you my seed, unruly fuck slave."'
@@ -963,14 +963,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumPussy':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorecumpussy<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if vagDMG > 0:
 		'As he delivers his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside your vagina, you can feel the tip of his <<$dick_girth>> cock at your cervix and even a bit inside it.'
-		'His bursting cum penetrates through the cervix directly into your womb, causing you both pain and a weird warm sensation.'
+		'His bursting cum penetrates through the cervix directly into your womb which causes you both pain and a weird warm sensation.'
 		pain['cervix'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'stat'
 	end
 	*nl
 	if cumVol = 3:
 		'With his <<$dick_girth>> dick buried inside your pussy, the customer delivers his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm inside you.'
-		'When he takes it out, some of the sperm drips out of you.'
+		'When he takes it out, some of the sperm drips out of your cunt.'
 	elseif cumVol = 4:
 		'With his <<$dick_girth>> dick buried deep inside your pussy, his tip touches your cervix.'
 		'He pumps your vagina full of his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm.'
@@ -981,13 +981,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumPussy':
 		'It feels painful but the warm sensation is weird and nothing like what you have felt before.'
 		'You feel as if your inner parts are stretching from the <<$cumType>> amount of cum being pumped into you.'
 		*nl
-		'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a bulge is noticeable on the lower part of your belly.'
-		'The customer looks at it with joy and punches at the bulge with his fist.'
-		'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
+		'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out the lower part of your belly bulges noticably.'
+		'The customer looks at it with joy then punches at your bulge with his fist.'
+		'The cum bursts out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
 		pain['cervix'] += 20
 		pain['tummy'] += 40
 	else
-		'The customer cums inside you. When he takes his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a small part of his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm drips out of you.'
+		'The customer cums inside you. When he takes his <<$dick_girth>> cock out a small part of his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm drips out of your pussy.'
 	end
 
 	pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1002,7 +1002,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorecumass<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if assDMG > 0:
-		'As he cums inside your anus, you can feel the banging of his <<$dick_girth>> cock against your intestinal wall.'
+		'As he cums inside your anus you can feel the banging of his <<$dick_girth>> cock against your intestinal wall.'
 		'A moving bulge is visible on your otherwise flat stomach as the phallus moves inside you.'
 		'His bursting cum fills you and it seems as if it went backwards up to your very stomach.'
 		pain['asshole'] += assDMG
@@ -1012,20 +1012,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 	if cumVol = 3:
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried in your intestines.'
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum, you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
+			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
 		else
-			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum, you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
+			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
 		end
 		'After his dick is removed, part of the sperm drips out of your gaping hole.'
 	elseif cumVol = 4:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, sometimes even hitting your intestinal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines sometimes even hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside you, you can feel your stomach growing larger...'
+			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside, you can feel your stomach grow larger...'
 		else
-			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside you, you can feel your stomach growing larger...'
+			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside the lower part of your belly bulges noticably...'
 		end
 		'You feel very full, even after he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> dick out of you.'
-		'After a few seconds a large portion of his <<$cumType>> amount of cum spurts out of you as if from a garden hose.'
+		'After a few seconds, a large portion of his <<$cumType>> amount of cum spurts out of you as if from a garden hose.'
 	elseif cumVol >= 5:
 		if buyout = 1:
 			'<<$bName>> <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines. With each stroke hitting your intestinal walls forcefully.'
@@ -1036,8 +1036,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 			'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep in your intestines. With each stroke hitting your intestinal walls forcefully.'
 			'You feel an increasing amount of pressure and stretching pain as he pumps your intestines with a <<$cumType>> amount of cum.'
 			*nl
-			'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a bulge is noticeable on the lower part of your belly.'
-			'The customer looks at it with joy and punches at the bulge with his fist.'
+			'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, the lower part of your belly bulges noticably.'
+			'The customer looks at it with joy then punches at the bulge with his fist.'
 			'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
 		end
 		pain['tummy'] += 20
@@ -1074,7 +1074,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumMouth':
 	if throatDMG > 0:
 		'Your aching throat is penetrated again.'
 		'He buries his <<$dick_girth>> cock to the hilt inside you.'
-		'While he''s cumming directly down your gullet, you can feel the pulsing of his member, painfully stretching your already sore throat.'
+		'While he''s cumming directly down your gullet you can feel the pulsing of his member. It painfully stretches your already sore throat.'
 		pain['throat'] += throatDMG
 		gs 'stat'
 	end
@@ -1088,7 +1088,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumMouth':
 		pcs_hydra += 40
 	elseif cumVol => 5:
 		'You are being pumped like a water bag. His <<$cumType>> amount of jizz fills your stomach and gullet.'
-		'You probably won''t need another meal today..'
+		'You probably won''t need another meal today...'
 		pcs_energy += 100
 		pcs_hydra += 90
 	else
@@ -1133,7 +1133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-end':
 		'The customer goes to the bathroom and your master soon returns to you.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-endPunishment'
 	elseif buyout = 1:
-		'<<$bName>> leaves you lying on the ground, his cum still dripping out of your ass.'
+		'<<$bName>> leaves you lying on the ground. His cum still dripping out of your ass.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-endPunishment'
 	else
 		'The customer goes to the bathroom and you are immediately lead back to the basement.'
@@ -1145,8 +1145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-endPunishment':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/kneelingslave1.jpg"></center>'
 	'After the customer is done with you, he calls for your master.'
 	'He tells your master how unruly you were and that further training should be applied to you.'
-	'Then he leaves.'
-	'Kneeling you look up at your master, only to see a grim face. You can tell something bad will happen.'
+	'He then leaves.'
+	'Kneeling, you look up at your master only to see his grim face. You can tell something bad will happen.'
 	act 'Be led back to the basement':gt 'abduction', 'abdFailedCustomer'
 end
 

locations/agentned.qsrc

@@ -17,18 +17,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kirsanova Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'The head office of the largest real estate agency in the area.'
+	'This is the head office of the largest real estate agency in the Leningrad Oblast.'
 	*nl
-	'At the reception you notice a banner, which is written in large print:'
-	'"Please note, that all transactions of purchases and sales are made exclusively through your bank account. Rent payments excluded."'
+	'At the reception you notice a large print banner,'
+	'"Please be aware that all sales transactions are made exclusively through your bank account. Rent payments excluded from this policy."'
 
 	if home_owned[1] = 1 and ArendHouseSL > 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> rental on your St. Petersburg apartment remaining. '+iif(money >= home_rent[1],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[1] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay rent at the moment')+''
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> rental on your St. Petersburg apartment remaining. '+iif(money >= home_rent[1],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[1] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay your rent at the moment')+''
 	end
 	if home_owned[4] > 0 and ArendHouseSL4 > 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> rental on your Pushkin apartment. '+iif(money >= home_rent[4],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[4] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL4 += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay rent at the moment')+''
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> rental on your Pushkin apartment. '+iif(money >= home_rent[4],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[4] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL4 += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to your pay rent at the moment')+''
 	end
 
 	if home_owned[1] = 2 or home_owned[3] > 0 or home_owned[5] = 1:
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'You own the following property:'
 		*nl
 		if home_owned[1] = 2: 'An apartment in St. Petersburg residential area'
-		if home_owned[1] = 3: 'An apartment in St. Petersburg residential area, that is currently occupied by your tenants'
+		if home_owned[1] = 3: 'An apartment in St. Petersburg residential area which is currently occupied by your tenants'
 		if home_owned[3] > 0: 'An cottage located in the cooperative village'
 		if home_owned[5] = 1: 'A plot of land in the St. Petersburg suburbs'
 		*nl
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if home_owned[1] = 1:
 			act 'Cancel the lease of the city apartment':
 				cla & *nl
-				'Warning: You won''t be able to return to your apartment, when you cancel the lease.'
+				'Attention: You won''t be able to return to your apartment when you cancel the lease.'
 				
 				act 'Return': gt'agentned', 'start'
 				act 'Cancel it': home_owned[1] = 0 & gs 'set_home', 4 & gt'agentned', 'start'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 		act 'Cancel the lease of the apartment in Pushkin':
 			cla & *nl
-			'Warning: You won''t be able to return to your apartment, when you cancel the lease.'
+			'Attention: You won''t be able to return to your apartment when you cancel the lease.'
 			
 			act 'Return': gt'agentned', 'start'
 			act 'Cancel it': home_owned[4] = 0 & gs 'set_home', 1 & gt'agentned', 'start'		
@@ -96,15 +96,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy':
 		end
 
 		if home_owned[3] = 0:
-			'There is a holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the village, for <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			'There is a holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the village for <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b>.'
 			*nl
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[3]:act 'Buy the cottage in the village': gt 'agentned','buy_dacha'
 		end
 
 		if home_owned[5] = 0:
-			'There is a plot in the suburbs with planning permission for a mansion for <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			'There is a plot of land in the suburbs with planning permission for a mansion for <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b>.'
 			*nl
-			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[5]:act 'Buy the plot in the suburbs': gt 'agentned','buy_Mansion'
+			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[5]:act 'Buy the land plot in the suburbs': gt 'agentned','buy_Mansion'
 		end
 	else
 		'We currently have no properties listed for sale.'
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your renovated apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your renovated apartment. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[1] = 0
 			ArendHouseSL = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your apartment. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[1] = 0
 			ArendHouseSL = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[3] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value3/100*95
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of the renovated cottage, with a loss of 1around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[3] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value3/100*95
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the vacant plot, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value5/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the vacant plot. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value5/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[5] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value5/100*95
@@ -263,12 +263,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent':
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	
 	if home_owned[1] > 0 and home_owned[4] > 0:
-		'We currently have no properties for rent.'
+		'We currently have no properties listed for rent.'
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0 and home_owned[4] = 0:
 		*nl
 		'There are two properties available for rent.'
 		*nl
-		'There is an apartment in the city residential area, and an apartment in Pushkin available'
+		'There are two apartments for available to rent. They are located in the city residential area and in Pushkin.'
 		act 'View the city apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_cityres'
 		act 'View the Pushkin apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_pushkin'
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0:
@@ -287,8 +287,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"We have a flat available right now in the residential area of St. Petersburg." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing."'
-	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? We can get you moved in right away."'
+	'"We have a flat available right now in the St. Petersburg residential area." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork, "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days. Payment will be automatically deducted from your account or you can come into the office to pay. When you sign for the lease you must make your first month''s rental payment upfront."'
+	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? You can move in right away," he calmly says.'
 
 	if money >= home_rent[1] or karta >= home_rent[1]:
 		act 'Agree and pay':
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 			if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 				gs 'set_home', 1
 			else
-				$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+				$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 				if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 1
 				killvar '$set_homeyn'
 			end
@@ -313,13 +313,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. Half an hour later, you’re handing over the money and getting the keys to your new apartment.'
+			'You take the pen then start filling out the paperwork. After writing for half an hour, you hand over the money and receive the keys to your new apartment.'
 
 			act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 		end
 	else
 		*nl
-		'You do not have enough money with you or in your bank account to rent this.'
+		'You do not have enough money with you or in your bank account to pay the rent.'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Decline':
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head, "Actually, I need more time to think about this."'
-		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
+		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he takes back the paperwork and stuffs it back into his desk drawer.'
 
 		act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	end
@@ -342,8 +342,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"We have a small apartment available right now in Pushkin’s city center. It’s a little bit pricey, but it’s been recently renovated to be more modern, and it looks quite nice. You won’t find a place like that outside of Pushkin." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing."'
-	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? We can get you moved in right away."'
+	'"We have a small apartment available right now that is in Pushkin’s city center. It’s a little bit pricey, but it’s been recently renovated to be more modern. It looks quite nice, so you won’t find a place like that outside of Pushkin." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last, but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing."'
+	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? You can move in right away," he calmly says.'
 	
 	if money >= home_rent[4] or karta >= home_rent[4]:
 		act 'Agree and pay':
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 			if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 				gs 'set_home', 4
 			else
-				$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+				$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 				if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 4
 				killvar '$set_homeyn'
 			end
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. An hour later, you’re handing over the money and getting the keys to your new apartment.'
+			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. After writting for an hour, you hand over the money and receive the keys to your new apartment.'
 
 			act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 		end
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head, "Actually, I need more time to think about this."'
-		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
+		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he takes back the paperwork and stuffs it back into his desk drawer.'
 
 		act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	end
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_cityres':
 	if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 		gs 'set_home', 1
 	else
-		$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+		$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 		if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 1
 		killvar '$set_homeyn'
 	end
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_cityres':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork to buy an apartment in the residential area. <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork to buy the apartment in the residential area. <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_dacha':
 	if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 		gs 'set_home', 3
 	else
-		$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+		$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 		if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 3
 		killvar '$set_homeyn'
 	end
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_dacha':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden on the co-op 5km up the north road. <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden in the co-op. It''s located 5km away from St. Petersburg. <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_Mansion':
 	if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 		gs 'set_home', 5
 	else
-		$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+		$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 		if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 5
 		killvar '$set_homeyn'
 	end

locations/alexgang.qsrc

@@ -5,17 +5,17 @@ menu_off = 1
 frost = 0
 minut += 30
 gs 'stat'
-'Arriving at Alexei''s apartment, he offers you various alcoholic beverages before sitting down at a table in the living room to chat, as always.'
-'Suddenly, the doorbell rings and Alexei walks out to answer it. You hear a man''s voice in the hallway: "Hello Alexei, I hope I''m not disturbing?" Alexey answers, "Not at all, my friend. Come in."'
+'After arriving at Alexei''s apartment, he offers you various alcoholic beverages before sitting down at a table in the living room to chat as he always does.'
+'Suddenly, the doorbell rings and Alexei walks towards the door to answer it. You hear a man''s voice in the hallway, "Hello Alexei, I hope I''m not disturbing?" He answers, "Not at all, my friend. Come in."'
 
 if alexgangbang = 0:
-	'You''re a little surprised and wondering who it could be. Then you see Alexander E., the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you and sits down on a chair.'
-	'Alexei pours alcohol into three glasses, and you spend some time drinking and talking together. Before long, Alexander asked you to call him by his nickname: Sasha.'
-	'After a while, though, Alexei puts the bottle aside and pulls his dick out of his pants. "Come over here, <<$pcs_firstname>>", he says. You look at him in surprise and glance at Sasha. Alexei urges you on, "C''mon, don''t worry, everything is fine."'
+	'You''re a little surprised and wondering who it could be, but then you see Alexander, the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you as he sits down on a chair.'
+	'Alexei pours alcohol into three glasses and hands them out. All of you spend some time drinking and talking together. Before long, Alexander asked you to call him by his nickname, Sasha.'
+	'After a while, Alexei puts the bottle aside to pull out his dick from his pants. "Come over here <<$pcs_firstname>>", he commands. You look at him in surprise then glance at Sasha. Alexei urges you on, "C''mon and get over here. Don''t worry since everything is fine."'
 else
-	'You see Alexander E., the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you and sits down on a chair.'
-	'Alexei pours alcohol in three glasses, and you spend some time drinking, talking, laughing.'
-	'After a while, Alexei puts the bottle aside and pulls his dick out of his pants. "Get over here, <<$pcs_firstname>>", he says.'
+	'You see Alexander, the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you as he sits down on a chair.'
+	'Alexei pours alcohol in three glasses in which you spend some time drinking, talking, and laughing together.'
+	'After a while, Alexei puts the bottle aside to pull out his dick from his pants. "Get over here <<$pcs_firstname>>", he commands.'
 end
 
 act 'Get on your knees and give head':
@@ -23,13 +23,13 @@ act 'Get on your knees and give head':
 	alexgangbang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<rand(29, 41)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kneeling before him, you pull Alexei''s pants all the way down and take a firm grasp of his erect cock.'
+	'Kneeling before him, you pull Alexei''s pants all the way down then take a firm grasp of his erect cock.'
 	'Leaning in closer, you give it a quick kiss with your <<$liptalk>> before guiding it into your mouth.'
-	'As you suck on his hard dick, Alexei relaxes in his chair, letting you take care of his needs.'
-	'Suddenly, he removes his penis from your mouth, pulls you up on your feet and leads you to the bedroom.'
+	'As you suck on his hard dick, he relaxes in his chair and lets you take care of his needs.'
+	'Suddenly, he removes his penis from your mouth and pulls you up on your feet. He leads you to his bedroom.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Alexei lifts you up and puts you down in front of the bed where Sasha has seated himself. He puts you on all fours, facing Sasha who is starting to unbutton his pants, leaving no doubt as to what you''re expected to do.'
+	'Alexei lifts you up to put you down in front of the bed where Sasha has seated himself. He tells you to get on all fours with your head placed before Sasha. Sasha who starts to unbutton his pants which leaves no doubt as to what you''re expected to do.'
 
 	act 'Give Sasha a blowjob':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -45,12 +45,12 @@ act 'Get on your knees and give head':
 		swallow += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/gang<<rand(16, 25)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Standing on all fours, you start sucking Sasha''s limp cock. As you lick, suck and roll your tongue around his dick, you can feel it slowly stiffening in your mouth.'
+		'Kneeling on all fours, you start sucking Sasha''s limp cock. As you lick, suck, and roll your tongue, while using the shaft with your hands, around his dick that you can feel it slowly stiffen in your mouth.'
 		gs 'dinSex', 'wear_condom'
-		'The position you''re in doesn''t make it easy for you to move your head the right way. However, with some determination you manage to keep Sasha''s cock in your mouth.'
+		'The position you''re in doesn''t make it easy for you to move your head up and down. However, with some determination you manage to keep Sasha''s cock in your mouth with the help of your hands.'
 		gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
-		'After a while, you feel Sasha''s hard cock begin to throb in your mouth. With a low grunt, he thrusts his hips forward and you feel his sperm coat the insides of your mouth.'
-		'He doesn''t cum a whole lot, and you easily manage to swallow all of it, but that doesn''t diminish the inherent thrill of the threesome you just had.'
+		'After a while, you feel Sasha''s hard cock begin to throb in your mouth and hands. With a low grunt, he thrusts his hips forward and you feel his sperm coat the insides of your mouth.'
+		'He doesn''t cum a whole lot, so you can easily manage to swallow all of it. It still doesn''t diminish the inherent thrill of the threesome you just participated in.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/andreihunter.qsrc

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ boyage = year - boyage
 
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Andrei</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big172.jpg"></center>'
-'Andrei is the leader of the group of hunters that frequent the woods and swamp by Gadukino. He''s <<boyage>> years old. He is divorced and lives near Gadukino.'
+'Andrei is the leader of the group of hunters that frequent the woods and swamp by Gadukino while living close by. He''s <<boyage>> years old and divorced.'
 if huntersAndreiQw < 0:'You and him have a bad relationship, because you offended him in the past.'
 if huntersAndreiQw >= 0 and huntersAndreiQw < 10:'You have a normal relationship with him.'
 if huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and huntersAndreiQw < 15:'You have friendly relations with him.'
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ act 'Chat (0:30)':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/talk1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	if huntersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chatted with Andrei, learning interesting tidbits about hunting.'
+	if huntersAndreiQw >= 0:'You chat with Andrei. You learn interesting tidbits about hunting from him.'
 	if huntersAndreiQw < 0:'You talk to Andrei. He makes it clear he''d rather not talk to you, but takes part in the conversation anyway.'
 
 	act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt1.'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You flirt with Andrei. He doesn''t say so aloud but he likes the attention. You notice him checking you out when he thinks you aren''t looking.'
+			'You flirt with Andrei. He doesn''t say so aloud, but he likes the attention. You notice him checking you out when he thinks you aren''t looking.'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile sweetly at Andrei while you flirt and are caught off guard when he suddenly goes in for a kiss.'
+				'You smile sweetly at Andrei while you flirt and you are caught off guard when he suddenly goes in for a kiss.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your lips touch and your heart skips a beat. Andrei takes control and continues aggressively, you find yourself responding to his whims.'
+					'Your lips touch... your heart skips a beat. Andrei takes control and continues aggressively, so you find yourself responding to his whims.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you", Andrei whispered, when your lips finally parted. You nod eagerly and Andrei gently took you by the hand and led you to his bed.'
+							'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you", Andrei whispers when your lips finally part You nod eagerly then Andrei gently takes you by the hand and leads you to his bed.'
 							act 'Go':gt 'hunterLoveSex','Andrei'
 						end
 					else
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 							gs 'stat'
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss3.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Maybe next time we won''t stop there, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Andrei says when your lips finally parted. "For now though, let''s get back."'
+							'"Maybe next time we won''t stop there, <<$pcs_nickname>>", Andrei says when your lips finally part. "For now though, let''s go back."'
 
 							act'Continue':gt $loc, $metka
 						end
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Sorry, Andrei, I can''t right now", you say. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
+					'"Sorry... Andrei... I can''t right now", you tell him. He leaves with an angry look on his face.'
 
 					act'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 				end
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if huntersAndreiQw >= 10:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You spend time together with Andrei. He can''t keep his hands and lips off of you as you lie there together. He is happy with your company, you see a look of satisfaction on his face and feel wonderful knowing you''re the one who put it there'
+			'You spend time together with Andrei. He can''t keep his hands and lips off of you as you lie there together. He is happy with your company. You can see a look of satisfaction on his face and feel wonderful knowing you''re the one who put it there'
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny >= 60:
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterflirt2.'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You catch Andrei''s eyes with yours and give him a look that leaves no doubt what you want. He nods, places an arm around your shoulders, and leads you inside.'
+		'You catch Andrei''s eyes with yours and give him a look that leaves no doubt what you want. He nods then places an arm around your shoulders to lead you inside.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterlove1.4.jpg"></center>'
-	'As soon as you walked up to Andrei he pulled you in for a kiss without saying a word. You have no time to get a word in as he pulls you along.'
+	'As soon as you walked up to Andrei, he pulled you in for a kiss without saying a word. You have no time to get a word in as he pulls you towards him.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterhands.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go with Andrei, his hands on your hips. You know how this ends and you really don''t mind.'
+		'You go with Andrei while his hands on your hips. You know how this ends and you really don''t mind.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0 and pcs_horny <= 60 and huntersAndreiQw >= 10 and temp
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
-		'"No, Andrei, not now." You quickly leave back the way you came.'
+		'"No, Andrei not now." You quickly leave back the way you came.'
 		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 	end
 end
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if huntersAndreiLove > 0:
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosila.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Andrei, I feel that our relationship has no future. I''m breaking up with you", you said. You leave while trying not to look at him.'
+		'"Andrei, I feel that our relationship has no future. I''m breaking up with you", you say. You leave while trying not to look back at him.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 	end
@@ -210,9 +210,9 @@ if huntersAndreiQw < 10 and huntersAndreiLove > 0:
 	huntersAndreiQw -= 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/brosil.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to talk to Andrei, but he cuts in before you can say anything.'
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, It''s over between us," he said firmly and walked away.'
-	'"Well , maybe it''s for the best," you think, as you leave in the other direction.'
+	'You want to talk to Andrei, but he cuts in before you can say anything.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, It''s over between us," he says firmly and walks away.'
+	'"Well , maybe it''s for the best," you think as you leave in the other direction.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 end

locations/andrey.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	if young_shop_work = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'You knock on Mr. Sobulyagin''s office door and when he sees you enter, his expression hardens. "What do you want?" he asks with a scowl.'
+		'You knock on Mr. Sobulyagin''s office door and when he sees you enter his expression hardens. "What do you want," he questions you with a scowl.'
 	end
 
 	if (young_shop_work = 1 and week = 5 and hour = 20) or (young_shop_work1 = 1 and week = 7 and hour = 15) or (young_shop_work2 = 1 and week = 5 and hour = 15):
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You knock on the door and someone calls you in from the other side, telling you to enter. When you enter, you''re greeted by the sight of a sour-faced older man reading papers at his desk. When he sees you, his expression hardens. "Surprised to see an old man managing a clothing store for teenage girls?" he grunts. You didn''t even say anything yet, but he doesn''t seem to care. "Yeah, I get that a lot..." he adds under his breath before sighing and looking back to his papers. "What do you need?"'
+	'You knock on the door and someone calls you in from the other side, "You can enter." After you enter, you''re greeted by the sight of a sour-faced older man reading papers at his desk. When he sees you, his expression hardens. "Surprised to see an old man managing a clothing store for teenage girls?" he grunts. You didn''t even say anything yet, but he doesn''t seem to care. "Yeah, I get that a lot...," he adds under his breath before sighing and looking back to his papers. "What do you need?"'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 	act 'Mention the for hire sign':
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'He barely glances your way as he shuffles some papers around. "Oh yeah, I forgot about that...well, the job is still open. I need an extra worker around the store and it needs to be a girl, a young girl," he says before suddenly dropping the papers and looking at you accusingly. "And before you start with that gender equality crap, I had a guy working here and all he cared about was getting into the pants of female customers rather than their wallets. I''m saving myself from another headache...<i>hopefully</i>."'
+		'He barely glances your way as he shuffles some papers around. "Oh yeah I forgot about that... well, the job is still open. I need an extra worker around the store and it needs to be a girl... a young girl," he says before suddenly dropping the papers to look at you accusingly. "Before you start with that gender equality crap, I had a guy working here and all he cared about was getting into the pants of female customers rather than their wallets. I''m saving myself from another headache...<i>hopefully</i>."'
 		*nl
-		'You''re at a loss for words, this wasn''t how you imagined the interview to go, but your silence goes unnoticed as the store manager continues to talk. "The salary is 205 ₽ a hour, alright? Trust me, no one is fighting you for the chance to work here but don''t think that means you can slack off. Miss work three times and you''re fired, no questions. I have two part-time positions, those are from 16:00 until 20:00, Monday through Friday. Or the weekend shift between 09:00 to 15:00."'
+		'You''re at a loss for words. This wasn''t how you imagined the interview to go, but your silence goes unnoticed as the store manager continues to talk. "The salary is 205 ₽ a hour alright? Trust me, no one is fighting you for the chance to work here, but don''t think that means you can slack off. Miss work three times and you''re fired... no questions. I have two part-time positions that are from 16:00 until 20:00 Monday through Friday or the weekend shift between 09:00 to 15:00."'
 		*nl
-		'He seems to have found what he was looking for, which is the employment documents "You''ll need to sign these to start work here." He holds them out to you, "So, are you interested?"'
+		'He seems to have found what he was looking for, which are the employment documents, "You''ll need to sign these to start work here." He holds them out to you, "So, are you interested?"'
 
 		act 'Don''t take the job':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 				young_shop_work = 1
 				minut += 5
 				*nl
-				'You find the conditions suiting, and without batting and eye you sign the documents.'
+				'You find the conditions suitable and without batting an eye you sign the documents.'
 				'You got a job in the youth clothing store ''Pussy-Cats''. Your first workday is on Monday at 15:00.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 			end
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 				young_shop_work1 = 1
 				minut += 5
 				*nl
-				'You find the conditions suiting, and without batting and eye you sign the documents.'
+				'You find the conditions suitable and without batting an eye you sign the documents.'
 				'You got a job in the youth clothing store ''Pussy-Cats''. Your first workday is on Saturday at 09:00.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 			end
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 !!				young_shop_work2 = 1
 !!				minut += 5
 !!				*nl
-!!				'You find the conditions suiting, and without batting and eye you sign the documents.'
+!!				'You find the conditions suitable and without batting an eye you sign the documents.'
 !!				'You got a job in the youth clothing store ''Pussy-Cats''. Your first workday is on Monday at 09:00.'
 !!				act 'Continue': gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 !!			end
@@ -93,26 +93,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'regular':
 	'<b><center><font size="4">Manager Andrew M. Sobulyagin</font></center></b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You knock on the door and Mr. Sobulyagin calls you in. Normally he would be reading the paper, but instead he''s just sitting there with a weird look on his face, almost like you scared him or something.'
+	'You knock on the door and Mr. Sobulyagin calls you in. Normally, he would be reading the paper, but instead he''s just sitting there with a weird look on his face. It''s almost like you scared him or something.'
 
 	if (week = 5 or week = 7) and young_shop_salary > 0:
 		if young_shop_miss = 0:
-			'"Came to get your pay?" he asks quickly and you nod. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen and see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
+			'"Came to get your pay," he asks quickly to which you nod yes. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money, and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen to see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
 		elseif young_shop_warned = young_shop_miss and young_shop_miss > 0:
-			'"Came to get your pay?" he asks quickly and you nod. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen and see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
+			'"Came to get your pay," he asks quickly to which you nod yes. He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money, and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen to see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with the money inside.'
 			'"You have missed <<young_shop_miss>> '+iif(young_shop_miss = 1, 'time', 'times')+'," he reminds you. "Don''t make a habit out of it. If you miss work 3 times, I will fire you.'
 		elseif young_shop_miss > young_shop_warned and young_shop_miss > 0:
 			young_shop_warned = young_shop_miss
-			'He gives you a hard look when he see''s it''s you. "You missed worked, remember what I said about missing work."'
-			'You nod. "I remember, I''m sorry."'
-			'He snorts slightly and shakes his head. "You better not forget about it the next time, here''s your pay." He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen and see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with your money inside.'
+			'He gives you a hard look when he see''s it''s you. "You missed worked, but remember what I said about missing work."'
+			'You nod. "I remember. I''m sorry."'
+			'He snorts slightly and shakes his head. "You better not forget about it the next time. Here''s your pay." He beckons you closer and you oblige. He digs around in his desk drawer for your money, and as you wait, you catch a glimpse of his computer screen to see an image of a naked woman. He must think you can''t see the screen from where you are. "Here you go," Mr. Sobulyagin says as he holds out a white envelope with your money inside.'
 		end
 
 		act 'Grab the envelope and leave':
 			minut += 15
 			money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
-			msg '<center>You''ve worked <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> hours and got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
-			'The manager counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it to you. With that he goes back to looking at the monitor of his computer.'
+			msg '<center>You''ve worked <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> hours and got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
+			'The manager counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it to you. With that done he goes back to looking at the monitor of his computer.'
 !! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 			young_shop_salary = 0
 			young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -128,14 +128,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'regular':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'"I would like to resign," You say as you walk up to his desk.'
-		'Mr. Sobulyagin gives you a confused look. "Are you sure? I mean...If you''re serious I can arrange everything right now." He scratches his head and starts pulling out the required paperwork but pauses a moment. "But why so suddenly?"'
+		'Mr. Sobulyagin gives you a confused look. "Are you sure? I mean... If you''re serious I can arrange everything right now." He scratches his head and starts pulling out the required paperwork, but pauses a moment. "Why so suddenly?"'
 		act 'Change your mind':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'"Actually, I''d like to think about this a bit more..." You say as you''re moving back towards the door. "Sorry for bothering you, Mr. Sobulyagin."'
-			'He shakes his head. "It''s fine, but if there''s nothing else, I''m busy right now."'
+			'"Actually, I''d like to think about this a bit more..." You say as you''re moving back towards the door. "Sorry for bothering you Mr. Sobulyagin."'
+			'He shakes his head. "It''s fine, but if there''s nothing else I''m busy right now."'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 		end
 		act 'Persist':
@@ -148,13 +148,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'regular':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'"I''ve already made up my mind on this, " You say firmly.'
+			'"I''ve already made up my mind on this," you say firmly.'
 			'"Alright, alright," Mr. Sobulyagin says and starts filling out several forms before handing them over to you to sign.'
 			if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 				money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
 
-				msg '<center>For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
-				'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. and hands it over to you.'
+				msg '<center>For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you got paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b></center>'
+				'Mr. Sobulyagin counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 				! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 				young_shop_salary = 0
 				young_shop_bonus = 0
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today!" Mr. Sobulyagin''s expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office?" he says dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office and closes the door. "Didn''t I tell you that missing work for three days means you''ll be fired! You''re no exception to the rules, girl."'
+		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today," Mr. Sobulyagin exclaims as his expression twists into a scowl when he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office," he asks dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office then closes the door. "Didn''t I tell you that missing work for three days means you''ll be fired! You''re no exception to the rules girl."'
 		act 'Agree and accept being fired':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -188,11 +188,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 			minut +=15
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'"You''re right, I''ve skipped out on work too many times," you sigh. Mr. Sobulyagin pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
+			'"You''re right. I''ve skipped out on work too many times," you sigh. Mr. Sobulyagin pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
 			msg 'You are no longer employed at this store.'
 			if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 				money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
-				'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
+				'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
 				'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 				! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 				young_shop_salary = 0
@@ -207,11 +207,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img src="images/pc/tears1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Please, I can''t lose the job! I really need the money, please don''t fire me! I promise to do better." As you say this, tears begin rolling down your cheeks.'
+			'"Please, I can''t lose the job! I really need the money. Please don''t fire me! I promise to do better," As you say this tears begin rolling down your cheeks.'
 			*nl
-			'Mr. Sobulyagin scoffs at you, obviously not swayed so easily by tears. He looks at you in silence, his dark eyes roaming over your body slowly as he licks his lips. "Listen, I''m not a bad guy," he says as he stands from his chair and walks to the door. "I''m willing to give you another chance, but you need to <i>show me</i> how important this job really is to you..." He cups his balls through his slacks and gives them a light squeeze.'
+			'Mr. Sobulyagin scoffs at you, obviously, not swayed so easily by tears. He looks at you in silence with his dark eyes roaming over your body slowly as he licks his lips. "Listen, I''m not a bad guy," he says as he stands from his chair and walks to the door. "I''m willing to give you another chance, but you need to <i>show me</i> how important this job really is to you..." He cups his balls through his slacks and gives them a light squeeze.'
 			*nl
-			'"Or you can leave and lose your job. It''s up to you, but those are your only options." He opens the door for you, allowing you to leave and lose your job if you don''t accept his offer.'
+			'"Or you can leave and lose your job. It''s up to you, but those are your only options." He opens the door for you allowing you to leave and lose your job if you don''t accept his offer.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today!" Mr. Sobulyagin''s expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office?" he says dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office and closes the door. He nods and seems to be talking to himself as much as he is talking to you. He leans against his desk and cupping his crotch as he is smiling at you. "Well you know the deal if you want to keep your job."'
+		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today," Mr. Sobulyagin exclaims as his expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office," he asks dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office then closes the door. He nods and seems to be talking to himself as much as he is talking to you. He leans against his desk and cups his crotch as he is smiling at you. "Well you know the deal if you want to keep your job."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse and get fired (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -253,11 +253,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'"You''re right, and I''ve decided that I''m not doing you anymore favors to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you but puts his dick away and pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
+				'"You''re right and I''ve decided that I''m not doing you anymore favors to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you, but puts his dick away. He pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them in silence.'
 				msg 'You are no longer employed at this store.'
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
-					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b>, with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
+					'For working <b><<young_shop_salary>></b> days you get paid <b><<young_shop_salary * 205>></b> with a bonus of <b><<young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>. Total income is <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b>'
 					'Mr. Sobulyagin. counts <b><<young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205>></b> <b>₽</b> and hands it over to you.'
 					! reset money,young_shop_salary,young_shop_bonus to zero for a new week
 					young_shop_salary = 0
@@ -278,9 +278,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today!" Mr. Sobulyagin''s expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office?" he says dryly. You sigh and follow him, he takes you into his office and closes the door. "You are missing too much work, the other employees are noticing. I am going to need something more from you to prove your deserve to keep your job."'
+		'"Well look who decided to drag their ass into work today," Mr. Sobulyagin exclaims as his expression twists into a scowl as he greets you at the store entrance. "I realize coming to work is difficult for you, but do you think you can spare me a moment and come into my office," he asks dryly. You sigh and follow him as he takes you into his office then closes the door. "You are missing too much work and the other employees are noticing. I am going to need something more from you to prove your deserve to keep your job."'
 		*nl
-		'He leans against his desk and cupping his crotch as he is smiling at you. "You can start of by sucking my cock then you can bend over and let me fuck you in the ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me that you still deserve to keep your job, got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat, and I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
+		'He leans against his desk and cups his crotch as he is smiling at you. "You can start off by sucking my cock then you can bend over and let me fuck you in the ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me that you still deserve to keep your job got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat. I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'anal', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punish':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'"You''re right, I''ve skipped out on work too many times and I''m not doing that anymore to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you but puts his dick away and pulls out a document from his desk drawer and begins to fill in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them without a word.'
+				'"You''re right, I''ve skipped out on work too many times and I''m not doing that anymore to keep my job." Mr. Sobulyagin scowls at you, but puts his dick away and pulls out a document from his desk drawer to begin filling in the blanks. A few minutes later he hands you some papers and you sign them without a word.'
 				msg 'You are no longer employed at this store.'
 				if young_shop_salary > 0 or young_shop_bonus > 0:
 					money += young_shop_salary * 205 + young_shop_bonus * 205
@@ -347,9 +347,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beg':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'"And why in the hell would I do that?" Mr. Sobulyagin scoffs.'
-		'"Oh please! I''ll do anything you want, I really need this job!" You say, trying your absolute best to convince him.'
-		'"Anything? Ha! Fine, I know what you could do!" The manager says as his eyes begin to wander all over your body. "You can start off by sucking my cock and then bend over and let me stick my cock into your ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me you''re a hard worker, got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat, and I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
+		'"And why in the hell would I do that," Mr. Sobulyagin asks scoffingly.'
+		'"Oh please! I''ll do anything you want. I really need this job!" You say trying your absolute best to convince him.'
+		'"Anything? Ha! Fine I know what you could do," The manager exclaims as his eyes begin to wander all over your body. "You can start off by sucking my cock then bend over and let me stick my cock into your ass. That''s the only way you can prove to me you''re a hard worker got it? If not then you''re just another lazy brat and I don''t need someone like that working for me."'
 		gs 'willpower', 'anal', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -357,8 +357,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beg':
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'Your face immediately turns beet-red as you try to comprehend what you''ve just heard. "You want me to give you a blowjob...and then have anal sex?" You don''t understand what the hell he''s thinking. "There''s no way I''ll do that!"'
-				'"Fine, then there''s the door!" Mr. Sobulyagin snaps, clearly upset with your answer.'
+				'Your face immediately turns beet-red as you try to comprehend what you''ve just heard. "You want me to give you a blowjob... then have anal sex?" You don''t understand what the hell he''s thinking. "There''s no way I''ll do that!"'
+				'"Fine then there''s the door," Mr. Sobulyagin snaps clearly upset with your answer.'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
 			end
 		else
@@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reapply':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\manager_andrew.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'Mr. Sobulyagin doesn''t mind having you back, since you ended it all on quite good terms.'
+	'Mr. Sobulyagin doesn''t mind having you back since you ended it all on quite good terms.'
 	act 'Accept your previous position':
 		cla
 		minut += 15
@@ -415,26 +415,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	'You swallow hard and nod your head. "If this means keeping my job...I''ll do it."'
 	*nl
-	'Mr. Sobulyagin smiles "Good girl. I''m happy to have such a hard worker here at the store," he says almost mockingly. He brings his hand to your cheek and cups it, admiring your face with a triumphant smirk. "On your knees," he commands as his hand suddenly moves to the top of your head to push you down towards his crotch.'
+	'Mr. Sobulyagin smiles. "Good girl. I''m happy to have such a hard worker here at the store," he says almost mockingly. He brings his hand to your cheek and cups it admiring your face with a triumphant smirk. "On your knees," he commands as his hand suddenly moves to the top of your head to push you down towards his crotch.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Falling to your knees, you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head, and then move on to licking up and down the entire shaft.'
+		'Falling to your knees you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head then move on to licking the entire shaft up and down.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth, your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his dick growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue. You pull his pants down to his knee''s to make it easier to suck his cock.'
+			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his dick growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue. You pull his pants down to his knee''s to make it easier to suck his cock.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You soon settle into a rhythm, your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+				'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually, he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj4.jpg"></center>'
-					'He keeps your head deep down his cock so that after a while your throat starts to feeling a little numb, as you hear him starting to grunt. "I''m about to cum," He yells out as he removes his hand from your head and leans fully back. You pull out, making a popping sound and set straight away with jerking him off.'
+					'He keeps your head deep down his cock, so that after a while your throat starts to feeling a little numb. You hear him starting to grunt. "I''m about to cum," He yells out as he removes his hand from your head and leans fully back. You pull out which makes a popping sound and set straight away with jerking him off.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'hj', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Finish':
@@ -450,9 +450,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired1':
 						*clr
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A101', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\bj5.jpg"></center>'
-						'He starts grunting louder. "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue." You do as he commands and he takes over jerking his cock. Suddenly he is shooting ropes of his hot cum in your mouth and all over your tongue. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum in your mouth. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp. "Now swallow." You do as you''re told and swallow his whole load.'
+						'He starts grunting louder. "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue." You do as he commands and he takes over jerking his cock. Suddenly, he is shooting ropes of his hot cum in your mouth and all over your tongue. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum in your mouth. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp. "Now swallow." You do as you''re told and swallow his whole load.'
 						*nl
-						'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how hard of a worker you are, and how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want, just make sure to not miss work anymore!" With these words he walks out of the office, leaving you to put yourself in order.'
+						'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how hard of a worker you are and how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips up his pants you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want. Just make sure to not miss work anymore!" With these words he walks out of the office leaving you to put yourself in order.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
@@ -475,24 +475,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, just let me give you a blowjob like usual." You say, trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
-	'"Listen, I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy and I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "So I''m willing to help you, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
+	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, so just let me give you a blowjob like usual," You say trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
+	'"Listen, I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy. I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "I''m willing to help you out, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
 	*nl
-	'Taking a deep breath, you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
+	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Falling to your knees, you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head, before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
+		'Falling to your knees you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth, your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm, your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -500,9 +500,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired3.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I''ve changed my mind, I can''t wait. I want your ass now, you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk, he quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
+				'"I''ve changed my mind and I can''t wait. I want your ass now, so you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk. He quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
 				*nl
-				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps, which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the lairing in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s on his cock.'
+				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the leering in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that done he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s left on his cock.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso'
 				minut -= 5
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 					*clr
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired4.jpg"></center>'
-					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk, while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you, he reaches up and pulls your top off, leaving your breasts exposed.'
+					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you, he reaches up and pulls your top off that leaves your breasts exposed.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 					gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired5.jpg"></center>'
-						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly, while you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole, leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
+						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly as you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 						gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -532,12 +532,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fired2':
 							gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A101', 1
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A101', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired6.jpg"></center>'
-							'He starts grunting louder, finally he pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around, dropping to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp.'
+							'He starts grunting louder then he, finally, pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around to drop to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it begins to go limp.'
 							*nl
-							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want, just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
+							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want. Just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
 							*nl
-							'You slowly stand up, your anus hurts <i>a lot</i>, it feels like someone has light it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance?" he asks, smiling smugly.'
-							'"Thank you very much!" You say, trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
+							'You slowly stand up and your anus hurts <i>a lot</i> because it feels like someone has lit it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance," he asks as he smiles smugly.'
+							'"Thank you very much," You say while trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'
@@ -561,24 +561,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\fired.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, just let me give you a blowjob like usual." You say, trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
-	'"Listen, I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy and I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "So I''m willing to help you, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
+	'"That''s not fair! You know how much I need this job, just let me give you a blowjob like usual." You say trying to convince Mr. Sobulyagin to let you keep your job without doing this.'
+	'"Listen I''m doing you a favor here. It''s well within my rights to fire you for missing work, but I''m not a bad guy. I can see you really want this job," he says while standing up from his chair. "So I''m willing to help you, but you need to prove to me how much you want this job."'
 	*nl
-	'Taking a deep breath, you nod your head. "Fine...I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
+	'Taking a deep breath you nod your head. "Fine... I''ll do it." You see Mr. Sobulyagin smile as places his hand on top of your head and pushes you down to your knees.'
 	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Falling to your knees, you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head, before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
+		'Falling to your knees you see he''s already unzipped his pants, pulled his cock out, and started stroking his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. It looks enormous in your small hands as you give it a few tentative pumps before opening your mouth. You start off by gently licking the head before you start sucking the head of his cock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few minutes you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth, your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
-			'You soon settle into a rhythm, your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him, which causes you to gag.'
+			'After a few minutes, you put his cock in your mouth and start moving your head back and forth with your tongue constantly rolling over the head of his shaft. You feel his cock growing and stiffening as you caress it with your mouth and tongue.'
+			'You soon settle into a rhythm with your eyes closing as you start to enjoy yourself a bit. Mr. Sobulyagin''s breathing quickens and you hear him moaning in pleasure. Eventually he places his hand on the back of your head and starts forcing you to deep throat him which causes you to gag.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'throat', 'stretch'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -586,9 +586,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired3.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I''ve changed my mind, I can''t wait. I want your ass now, you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk, he quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
+				'"I''ve changed my mind and I can''t wait. I want your ass now which you can clean up with your mouth after," he smirks and you feel your stomach turn slightly from the look he gives you. His hands start to roam over your body, squeezing and massaging your breasts through your top, as he turns you so your back and ass is facing him. He pushes you forward making you bend over his desk. He quickly removes any clothes in the way until your bare ass is exposed to him.'
 				*nl
-				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps, which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the lairing in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s on his cock.'
+				'He gives your ass checks several hard slaps which cause you to wince in pain. "Yeah, bad little girls get their ass punished and you have been a very bad girl." You can hear the leering in his voice as he gives your bare ass another hard smack. With that he spreads your cheeks and rams his cock up with your anus, he doesn''t even spit on your asshole, the only lubrication is the little bit of your slobber that''s left on his cock.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso'
 				minut -= 5
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 					*clr
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A101'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired4.jpg"></center>'
-					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk, while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you, he reaches up and pulls your top off, leaving your breasts exposed.'
+					'With a hard thrust he shoves his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep inside you. The sudden forceful pain causes you to cry out and try to squirm away, but your hips are pressed against the edge of the desk while his hands hold your hips in place. He quickly forces his cock, balls deep into your ass, the more you cry out and resist the more he seems to like it. While he is fucking you. He reaches up and pulls your top off to leave your breasts exposed.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 					gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired5.jpg"></center>'
-						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly, while you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole, leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
+						'He soon settles into a hard, pounding rhythm. You are tearing up from the pain and grip the table tightly while you try and endure the pain. Your asshole already feels like it is on fire, but he doesn''t relent the slightest. He just keeps pounding your little asshole leaving you to wish he would hurry up and finish.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'maso', 'rough'
 						gs 'pain', 7, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -618,12 +618,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rehired':
 							gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A101', 1
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A101', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\city\citycenter\mall\cats\sex\fired6.jpg"></center>'
-							'He starts grunting louder, finally he pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around, dropping to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it starts to go limp.'
+							'He starts grunting louder, finally, he pulls his cock out of your ass and you sigh in relief. He takes a step back from you. "Get on your knees and finish me off." You do as he says and turn around to drop to your knees. You take his dick in your mouth and start sucking it. You try not to think about where it just was, but at least the pain has stopped. Suddenly, he pulls his cock out of your mouth and starts shooting ropes of his hot cum all over your face and tits. After a few moments, his cock stops twitching and spurting cum on you. He lets go of his cock as it begins to go limp.'
 							*nl
-							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want, just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
+							'"You did very well, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''ve shown me how badly you want this job, so I''ll give you another chance." As he zips his pants, you look up to see him smiling down at you. "You''ve done enough for today, so you''re free to go home if you want. Just make sure to not miss work anymore!"'
 							*nl
-							'You slowly stand up, your anus hurts <i>a lot</i>, it feels like someone has light it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance?" he asks, smiling smugly.'
-							'"Thank you very much!" You say, trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
+							'You slowly stand up, your anus hurts <i>a lot</i>, it feels like someone has lit it on fire. You start to head towards the door, but he stops you. "Hey, don''t you think you should thank me for giving you another chance," he asks, smiling smugly.'
+							'"Thank you very much," You say trying your hardest to keep a smile on your face.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'pussykats', 'start'

locations/anekdot.qsrc

@@ -5,52 +5,52 @@ if anrand = 0:
 	'What is the difference between a snowman and a snow-woman?'
 	'Snowballs.'
 elseif anrand = 1:
-	'Somewhere in the Atlantic Ocean, two submarines, Russian and American, come to the surface.'
-	'The Russian one is old and rusty, the American one is new and sleek matte black.'
-	'On the Soviet one, the crew lounges about lazily, and a drunken captain yells at them: "Who threw a valenok on the control board? I''m asking you, who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
-	'From the American submarine, a clean-shaven, sober, and smartly-dressed captain yells scornfully: "You know, folks, in America..."'
-	'The Russian captain dismissively interrupts him: "America??! Ain''t no fucking America no more!!"'
-	'[He turns back to his crew] "For the last time, who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
+	'Somewhere in the Atlantic Ocean two submarines, Russian and American, come to the surface.'
+	'The Russian one is old and rusty while the American one is new and sleek matte black.'
+	'On the Soviet one, the crew lounges about lazily and a drunken captain yells at them, "Who threw a valenok on the control board? I''m asking you who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
+	'From the American submarine, a clean-shaven, sober, and smartly-dressed captain yells scornfully, "You know, folks, in America..."'
+	'The Russian captain dismissively interrupts him, "America??! Ain''t no fucking America no more!!"'
+	'[He turns back to his crew] "For the last time who threw a valenok on the control board?!"'
 elseif anrand = 2:
-	'Two old men on a bench in a nursing home:'
+	'Two old men on a bench in a nursing home.'
 	'One says, "My grandson asked me yesterday what I did during the sexual revolution."'
 	'The other replies, "So what did you tell him?"'
-	'"I told him I was captured almost immediately, and got a life sentence, washing dishes.'
+	'"I told him I was captured almost immediately and got a life sentence washing dishes.'
 elseif anrand = 3:
-	'My dog used to chase people on a bike a lot. It got so bad, finally I had to take away his bike.'
+	'My dog used to chase people on a bike a lot. It got so bad, finally, I had to take away his bike.'
 elseif anrand = 4:
 	'The bank was robbed today by a naked woman.'
 	'No-one could remember her face'
 elseif anrand = 5:
 	'I thought I''d tell you a good time travel joke - But you didn''t like it.'
 elseif anrand = 6:
-	'I heard a report about that stomach virus going around.'
-	'Apparently it causes 9 out of 10 people to suffer from diarrhea.'
+	'I heard a report about a stomach virus going around.'
+	'Apparently, it causes 9 out of 10 people to suffer from diarrhea.'
 	'I just can''t stop wondering about the one person who enjoys it.'
 elseif anrand = 7:
-	'I''m selling my parrot. Why? Because yesterday the bastard tried to sell me.'
+	'I''m selling my parrot. Why you ask? Because yesterday the bastard tried to sell me.'
 elseif anrand = 8:
 	'They threw me out of the cinema the other day for bringing my own food. Come on though, the prices are way too high and it''s been ages since I had a barbecue.'
 elseif anrand = 9:
-	'I went to the zoo the other day but they only had a dog on display. It was a shitzu.'
+	'I went to the zoo the other day, but they only had a dog on display. It was a shitzu.'
 elseif anrand = 10:
 	'An optimist sees light at the end of a tunnel and thinks it''s an exit'
 	'A pessimist sees light at the end of a tunnel and thinks it''s an oncoming train'
 	'A train driver sees two idiots on the tracks.'
 elseif anrand = 11:
-	'Yes, money can''t buy you happiness but I''d still feel a lot happier crying in a brand new BMW.'
+	'Yes, money can''t buy you happiness, but I''d still feel a lot happier crying in a brand new BMW.'
 elseif anrand = 12:
 	'Don''t be sad when a bird shits on your head. Be happy pigs can''t fly.'
 elseif anrand = 13:
 	'I used to believe the brain was the most important organ.'
-	'Then I thought, look what''s telling me that.'
+	'Then I thought, "Look what''s telling me that."'
 elseif anrand = 14:
-	'Light travels faster than sound'
+	'Light travels faster than sound.'
 	'That''s why a lot of people look smart until they start talking.'
 elseif anrand = 15:
-	'Stalking: When a couple enjoy long, romantic walks with each other but only one them is aware of that fact.'
+	'Stalking: When a couple enjoys long romantic walks with each other, but only one them is aware of that fact.'
 elseif anrand = 16:
-	'When a guy says he likes girls with a sense of humour, that doesn''t mean he wants a girl to be witty and funny'
+	'When a guy says he likes girls with a sense of humour that doesn''t mean he wants a girl to be witty and funny'
 	'He just wants someone to finally laugh at his jokes.'
 elseif anrand = 17:
 	'I never understood why "bra" is singular and "panties" are plural'
@@ -60,17 +60,17 @@ elseif anrand = 18:
 	'"Quite Lazy"'
 elseif anrand = 19:
 	'I always carry an EpiPen'
-	'My friend gave it to me when he was dying so it was obviously very important to him.'
+	'My friend gave it to me when he was dying, so it was obviously very important to him.'
 elseif anrand = 20:
 	'I bought a thesaurus yesterday'
-	'Not only is it terrible, it''s terrible.'
+	'Not only is it terrible, but it''s terrible.'
 elseif anrand = 21:
 	'A Chukcha sits on the shore of the Bering Strait. An American submarine surfaces.'
-	'The American captain opens the hatch and asks: "Which way is Alaska?"'
-	'The Chukcha points his finger: "That way!"'
-	'"Thanks!" says the American, shouts "South-South-East, bearing 159.5 degrees!" down the hatch and the submarine submerges.'
-	'Ten minutes later, a Soviet submarine emerges. The Russian captain opens the hatch and asks the Chukcha: "Where did the American submarine go?"'
-	'The Chukcha replies: "South-South-East bearing 159.5 degrees!"'
+	'The American captain opens the hatch and asks, "Which way is Alaska?"'
+	'The Chukcha points his finger. "That way!"'
+	'"Thanks," says the American then shouts "South-South-East, bearing 159.5 degrees!" down the hatch and the submarine submerges.'
+	'Ten minutes later, a Soviet submarine emerges. The Russian captain opens the hatch and asks the Chukcha, "Where did the American submarine go?"'
+	'The Chukcha replies, "South-South-East bearing 159.5 degrees!"'
 	'"Don''t be a smart-ass", says the captain, "just point your finger!'
 elseif anrand = 22:
 	'I have the heart of a lion and lifetime ban from the zoo.'
@@ -81,33 +81,33 @@ elseif anrand = 24:
 	'Give a man a fire and he''s warm for a day'
 	'Set him on fire and he''s warm for the rest of his life.'
 elseif anrand = 25:
-	'Father: Son, you were adopted'
-	'Son: What? I knew it! I want to meet my biological parents!'
-	'Father: We are your biological parents. Now pack up, they''ll be here to pick you up in 20 minutes.'
+	'Father says, "Son, you were adopted"'
+	'Son replies, "What? I knew it! I want to meet my biological parents!"'
+	'Father retorts, "We are your biological parents. Now pack up, because they''ll be here to pick you up in 20 minutes."'
 elseif anrand = 26:
-	'When I was younger, I felt like a man trapped in a woman''s body.'
+	'When I was younger I felt like a man trapped in a woman''s body.'
 	'Then I was born'
 elseif anrand = 27:
-	'I was raised as an only child, which really annoyed my sister.'
+	'I was raised as an only child which really annoyed my sister.'
 elseif anrand = 28:
-	'Father: Son, I don''t think you''re cut out to be a mime'
-	'Son: Why, was it something I said?'
+	'Father says, "Son, I don''t think you''re cut out to be a mime"'
+	'Son retorts, "Why? Was it something I said?"'
 elseif anrand = 29:
-	'My sister had a baby and they took a while to name her'
+	'My sister had a baby that they took a while to name her'
 	'I told her to name her soon before she turns into a criminal'
 	'I''m not having my niece on the news like all those other 17 year old criminals who have yet to be named.'
 elseif anrand = 30:
 	'I went into a shop for a book about turtles'
-	'The woman asked me "Hardback?"'
-	'I said yes, with the flippers.'
+	'The woman asked me, "Hardback?"'
+	'I said,  "Yes, but with the flippers."'
 elseif anrand = 31:
 	'Did you hear about the sick clown?'
 	'It was all shits and giggles.'
 elseif anrand = 32:
-	'My therapist says I have a preoccupation with vengeance'
+	'My therapist says that I have a preoccupation with vengeance'
 	'We''ll see about that'
 elseif anrand = 33:
-	'My father always used to say "Whatever doesn''t kill you, makes you stronger"'
+	'My father always used to say, "Whatever doesn''t kill you makes you stronger"'
 	'Until the accident at least.'
 elseif anrand = 34:
 	'The best time to add insult to injury is when you''re signing the cast.'
@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@ elseif anrand = 35:
 	'I wrote a letter to the post office about my mail being stolen'
 	'To make sure they read it I put it inside a birthday card.'
 elseif anrand = 36:
-	'I''m sure wherever my father is, he''s looking down on us'
-	'He''s not dead, just very condescending.'
+	'I''m sure wherever my father is that he''s looking down on us'
+	'He''s not dead. He''s just very condescending.'
 elseif anrand = 37:
 	'My father is a family man'
 	'He has three of them.'

locations/anushaptbr.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It is fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in varies piles. There are two beds crammed into the room on each side. There is a small TV on a stand in the room, with a Playstation console laying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'
+	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It is fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in varies piles. Two beds are crammed into the room with them parallel along the walls that leaves an open space in the center. There is a small TV on a stand in the room with a Playstation console laying partially hidden under some clothes that are in front of it.'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 	
@@ -19,45 +19,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear and anger. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
-		'The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear and anger. The older brother is maybe a 13 or 14, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls. Her younger brother is about a year or two younger.'
+		'The older brother gathers some courage, "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
 		*nl
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see what you were up to, cause I know you little shitheads are always up to something."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "Calm down. I just wanted to see what you were up to ''cause I know you little shitheads are always up to something."'
 		'"What do you care what we do? Shouldn''t you be off with your band or sucking some cock?"'
-		'Anushka reaches out and slaps him in the back of the head. "Watch what you say or I''ll beat your little ass."'
+		'Anushka reaches out and slaps him on the back of the head. "Watch what you say or I''ll beat your little ass."'
 		*nl
 		'He rubs the back of his head. "That''s what mother always says."'
-		'Anushka fumes a bit. "Fuck that bitch, don''t listen to her, listen to dad you little asshole."'
-		'He just rolls his eyes and ignores her and looks at you now. "Don''t tell me, is this one of the famous groupies we''ve heard so many stories about?"'
+		'Anushka fumes a bit. "Fuck that bitch and don''t listen to her. You better listen to dad you little asshole."'
+		'He just rolls his eyes and ignores her to look at you now. "Don''t tell me... is this one of the famous groupies that we''ve heard so many stories about?"'
 		act 'Excuse me?':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"What do you mean?" you ask.'
-			'"We heard a lot of great stories about the band and the groupies from Radomir." Maksim answers.'
-			'"Don''t listen to what he says. He''s making up most of that stuff just to impress you." answers an irritated Anushka.'
-			'"Well, at least lets hope this groupie is better than Alyona."'
+			'"What do you mean," you ask.'
+			'"We heard a lot of great stories about the band and the groupies from Radomir," Maksim answers.'
+			'"Don''t listen to what he says. He''s just making up most of that stuff to impress you," answers an irritated Anushka.'
+			'"Well, at least we can hope this groupie is better than Alyona."'
 			act 'Why''s that?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Well, she''s really mean to us. She always beats me up and won''t play games with us." the old brother says while looking at you sadly and the younger one nods in agreement.'
-				'"If you weren''t trying to film her while she is taking a shower, maybe she wouldn''t be kicking your ass, you little pervert." Anushka answers.'
-				'"Your brothers are really something else. But I guess even boys at this age think with their other head." you say.'
+				'"Well, she''s really mean to us. She always beats me up and won''t play games with us," the old brother says as he looks at you sadly. The younger one nods in agreement.'
+				'"If you weren''t trying to film her while she is taking a shower, maybe she wouldn''t be kicking your ass, you little pervert," Anushka answers.'
+				'"Your brothers are really something else. I guess even boys at this age think with their smaller head," you say.'
 				*nl
-				'Anushka nods in agreement, "Yeah, most of them are slaves to their lust, even if these are to young to even understand it yet."'
+				'Anushka nods in agreement, "Yeah, most of them are slaves to their lust even if these are too young to even understand it yet."'
 				'Maksim puffs up. "I''m not too young."'
 				'Anushka laughs at him and turns to you, "Maybe I should tell my dad what they''re up to."'
 				act 'Laugh':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'The brothers are looking at the two of you in total fear. Anushka continues on, "Look at them, they''re scared shitless."'
+					'The brothers are looking at the two of you in total fear. Anushka continues on, "Look at them! They''re scared shitless."'
 					'Maksim is fuming with anger and starts yelling, "Get out of our room!"'
-					'You and Anushka keep on laughing while the brothers are pushing you out their room.'
+					'You and Anushka keep on laughing while the brothers are pushing you out of their room.'
 					act 'Leave':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','hallway'
 				end
 			end
@@ -67,12 +67,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
-		'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want?" Then he notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought you groupie with you again."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a match" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one gathers some courage, "What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie with you again."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a match." She indicates by pointing to the gaming console in their room.'
 		'Maksim glances at his brother a moment then back to Anushka. "All of us?"'
 		*nl
-		'She nods. "That''s the plan, the two of us against the two of you."'
-		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard. We''ll definitely beat you this time."'
+		'She nods. "That''s the plan. The two of us against the two of you."'
+		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time."'
 		'Anushka quickly replies smiling, "You really think you can beat me this time? You got your asses handed to you the last time."'
 		'The boys nod at each other, "This time will be different. We''re sure we will win."'
 		act 'What''s this all about?':
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh, don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them and always beat their ass."'
+			'"Oh don''t worry. Sometimes I sit and play video games with them. I always beat their ass."'
 			'"Not this time!" Maksim looks at the two of you determined.'
 			act 'Sit down and play':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -88,44 +88,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-				'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering, they must be planning something.'
-				'"Let''s play." Timofey says smiling.'
-				'The four of you are playing for several minutes, you don''t really know what''s happening, it is some shooter game you have never played before, but Anushka does her best to explain as you play.'
+				'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering amongst themselves. They must be planning something.'
+				'"Let''s play," Timofey says smiling.'
+				'The four of you play for several minutes. You really don''t know what''s happening, because it is some shooter game you have never played before. However, Anushka does her best to explain as you play.'
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 					if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-						'The game is pretty much over, all of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose." Maksim taunts.'
+						'The game is pretty much over. Both of them are better players than you are. Anushka does what she can, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose," Maksim taunts.'
 						'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "You just got lucky is all."'
-						'"You suck, you suck!" Maksim chants and Timofey quickly joins in. "Losers, losers!"'
-						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go, they''re not going to stop acting like jackass''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+						'"You suck, you suck," Maksim chants and Timofey quickly joins in. "Losers, losers!"'
+						'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go. They''re not going to stop acting like jackasses anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 					elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-						'The game is pretty much a draw, with no one getting the upper hand. All of a sudden you make a mistake and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. Which allows her to secure the win while he is trying to recover.'
-						'He begins to yell, "Not fair, you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in. "Anushka''s a cheater."'
-						'"Don''t be such a crybaby I thought you said you were prepared this time?" she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face, despite her brother looking mad.'
+						'The game is pretty much a draw with no team getting the upper hand. All of a sudden you make a mistake and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to grab their victory, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. This allows her to secure the win while he is trying to recover.'
+						'He begins to yell, "Not fair... you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in, "Anushka''s a cheater."'
+						'"Don''t be such a crybaby I thought you said you were prepared this time," she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face despite her brother looking mad.'
 						*nl
-						'The comment only makes the situation worse and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka obviously taking it way too serious, after a bit Anushka gets fed up with them and starts yelling back at them.'
-						'All of a sudden the door opens and their dad is standing there and bellows. "Knock it off!" Anushka and the older of her two brothers shut up at once, they obviously know better than to test their dad.'
-						'"But dad! She cheated again." Timofey pleads with him.'
-						'"But dad nothing, weren''t you supposed to be studying?" Eduard asks.'
+						'The comment only makes the situation worse and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka and obviously taking it way too serious. After a bit, Anushka gets fed up with them and starts yelling back.'
+						'All of a sudden, the door opens and their dad is standing there. He bellows at everyone, "Knock it off!" Anushka and the older of her two brothers shut up at once. They obviously know better than to test their dad.'
+						'"But dad! She cheated again," Timofey pleads with him.'
+						'"But dad nothing. Weren''t you supposed to be studying," Eduard asks.'
 						*nl
-						'"Y-Yes..." both of them answer. "Well get to it" He says to them and then turns to Anushka and you. "You two get out of their room and Nush stop tormenting your brothers." he says he holds the door open ''til you both leave then he pulls it shut hard.'
-						'Anushka starts to respond. "I wasn''t..." but her dad interrupts her. "I don''t care, leave them alone so they can study. Take your friend to your room." With that he turns and goes back to the living room, while Anushka goes back to her room.'
+						'"Y-Yes...," both of them answer. "Well get to i,t" He says to them then turns to Anushka and you. "You two get out of their room. Nush stop tormenting your brothers," he says as he holds the door open ''til you both leave then he pulls it shut hard.'
+						'Anushka starts to respond, "I wasn''t...," but her dad interrupts her. "I don''t care. You leave them alone, so they can study. Take your friend to your room." With that he turns and goes back to the living room while Anushka and you go back to her room.'
 					else
-						'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot but enough the brothers come close but fall a little short in both matches.'
-						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad, we could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
-						'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault, Nush is just to good."'
-						'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts it. "It''s not Timos fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a tease tone and sticks her tongue out at him.'
-						'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka. "GO SUCK A DICK SLUT, THATS ALL YOU ARE GOOD AT!" He screams at Anushka.'
-						'Anushka eyes narrow. "Watch your mouth you little shit, it''s just a game."'
-						'Before anyone can say more the door suddenly opens and their dad is standing there and bellows. "Knock it off!" Everyone shuts up.'
-						'Then he looks at Maksim. "Did I just hear you call your sister a slut and tell her to suck a dick?" His voice is low and full of anger. Maksim visably shrinks under his dads gaze.'
+						'The game is pretty much over you. Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot, but enough that the brothers come close. They fall a little short in both matches.'
+						'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
+						'Timofey tries to defend himself, "It''s not my fault ''cause Nush is just to good."'
+						'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts him off, "It''s not Timos fault. I killed you three times when you kept trying to go through that courtyard. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again," she says teasingly and sticks her tongue out at him.'
+						'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka. "GO SUCK A DICK SLUT ''CAUSE THATS ALL YOU ARE GOOD AT," he screams at her.'
+						'Anushka eyes narrow. "Watch your mouth you little shit since it''s just a game."'
+						'Before anyone can say more, the door suddenly opens and their dad is standing there. He bellows, "Knock it off!" In response everyone shuts up.'
+						'He looks at Maksim. "Did I just hear you call your sister a slut and tell her to suck a dick?" His voice is low and full of anger. Maksim visibly shrinks under his dad''s gaze.'
 						'"She was teasing me." He weakly tries to defend himself, obviously knowing he is in trouble.'
-						'He turns and glares at Anushka. "Stop teasing your brothers, go to you room." When she starts to open her mouth, he cuts her off. "I don''t want to hear it, go to your room." With that she gets up in a huff and heads back to her room.'
-						'As you leave just before the door closes you hear Ed say to Maksim. "What have I told you about calling your sister a slut?"'
-						'Maksim voices cracks. "I''m sorry." The door closes before you can hear more, now you just hear the muffled sounds behind the door.'
+						'He turns and glares at Anushka. "Stop teasing your brothers and go to you room." When she starts to open her mouth he cuts her off, "I don''t want to hear it, go to your room." With that she gets up in a huff to head back to her room.'
+						'As you leave and just before the door closes you hear Ed say to Maksi,. "What have I told you about calling your sister a slut?"'
+						'Maksim voices cracks, "I''m sorry."'
+						'The door closes before you can hear any more, so now you just hear the muffled sounds emitting from behind the door.'
 					end
 					act 'Go to Anushka''s room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
 				end	
@@ -137,43 +138,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		if brotherroom = 1:
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting there talking about something. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
+			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see the boys sitting there talking about something. The older brother is maybe a 13 or 14, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls. Her younger brother is about a year or two younger.'
 			act 'What are you up to?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/brothers.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Nothing much really. We were just discussing what kind of band we were going to have when we get older." Maksim responds.'
-				'"Oh? So you want to be like your big sister and be in a band too?" You ask them.'
-				'Maksim shakes his head. "I don''t want to be like her, I want to be like Radomir. Be the band leader and get all the bitches for free. He''s the best."'
-				'Before you can respond Timofey cuts in. "Arkadi is the best or maybe Valentin, they give us stuff."'
+				'"Nothing much really. We were just discussing what kind of band we were going to have when we get older," Maksim responds.'
+				'"Oh? So you want to be like your big sister and be in a band too," you ask them.'
+				'Maksim shakes his head. "I don''t want to be like her, but I do want to be like Radomir. I want to be the band leader and get all the bitches for free. He''s the best."'
+				'Before you can respond Timofey cuts in, "Arkadi is the best or maybe Valentin, ''cause they give us stuff."'
 				act 'What does Valentin give you?':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'"He''s pretty cool, gives us his old video games sometimes. He also has a bike like dad and spends a lot of time with our dad." Timofey answers.'
-					'"Does he ever let you sit on his bike?" you ask.'
-					'"Yeah, he lets us ride with him sometimes, it''s so awesome." says Timofey.'
-					'"But at the same time he doesn''t let us drink..." says Maksim.'
+					'"He''s pretty cool and he gives us his old video games sometimes. He also has a bike like dad and spends a lot of time with him," Timofey answers.'
+					'"Does he ever let you sit on his bike," you ask.'
+					'"Yeah, he lets us ride with him sometimes. It''s so awesome," says Timofey.'
+					'Maksim says, "However, at the same time he doesn''t let us drink..."'
 					act 'Who lets you drink?':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Arkadi!" they both shout. "But don''t tell our dad or he will get mad."'
+						'"Arkadi," they both shout. "Just don''t tell our dad because he will get mad."'
 						'"Don''t worry I won''t tell your dad." you reassure them.'
 						act 'What about Radomir?':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 2
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-							'"He''s pretty cool. I want to be like him when I grow up." Maksim confidently says.'
-							'"Because he''s a good musician?" you ask.'
-							'"No because he''s a pussy magnet! He can get any girl he wants." Maksim answers, giving you his best seductive grin which is laughable at best.'
+							'"He''s pretty cool. I want to be like him when I grow up," Maksim confidently says.'
+							'"Because he''s a good musician," you ask.'
+							'"No, because he''s a pussy magnet! He can get any girl he wants," Maksim answers while giving you his best seductive grin. It''s laughable at best.'
 							*nl
 							'"That was way too much information for me. I think it''s time for me to head out. I''m feeling a bit nauseous."'
-							'With a disappointed look on his face Maksim says, then he turns to his brother as you are walking out and you over hear him say. "Bitches are a ruble a dozen, as Radomir says." Just as you close the door you hear the little brother agreeing, though likely have no idea what he is agreeing to.'
+							'With a disappointed look on his face Maksim turns to his brother as you are walking out which you overhear him say, "Bitches are a ruble a dozen just like Radomir says." Just as you close the door you hear the little brother agreeing. It''s very likely that he has no idea to what he is agreeing to.'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end
 					end	
@@ -188,28 +189,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/browrestle.jpg"></center>'
 				'"What are you boys up too?" You ask them.'
-				'Maksim looks at you, blushing, "N-Nothing. G-Get out of our room."'
-				'You look around the bed and see a porn magazine laying on the bed.'
-				'Timofey starts teasing him, "Ha-ha. You got caught by one of Anushka''s friends looking at the magazine."'
-				'"Shut up. You''re just a little kid what do you know..."'
+				'Maksim blushes while looking at you, "N-Nothing... g-get out of our room."'
+				'You look around the bed and find a porn magazine laying on it.'
+				'Timofey starts teasing him, "Ha-ha... you got caught by one of Anushka''s friends looking at the magazine."'
+				'"Shut up. You''re just a little kid, so what do you know..."'
 				act 'Grab the magazine':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'You walk up to them and grab the magazine. Maksim tries his hardest to stop you but you easily manage to push him away.'
-					'"Give it back, it''s mine!" Maksim says dejected. "It''s all your fault!" he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
+					'You walk up to them and grab the magazine. Maksim tries his hardest to stop you, but you easily manage to push him away.'
+					'"Give it back, because it''s mine," Maksim says dejected. "It''s all your fault," he says as he turns to his brother. "If you could only keep your mouth shut. I can''t wait to get my own room."'
 					'Timofey just keeps on sneering at his brother.'
 					act 'Calm down':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-						'"It doesn''t have to be all bad." you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
-						'"Wow. Two girls in one room... That is so hot." says Maksim. "Our sister is the only one with her own room, that''s so unfair."'
-						'"She is a girl after all. Wouldn''t it be awkward if she shared a room with you?." you try to explain.'
-						'"I guess... but she could sleep in the living room and then we could each have our own room." he says as if that was totally fair.'
-						'You looks through the magazine and the boy has some kinky tastes, you wonder who might have bought it for him. Then you throw the magazine back on the bed saying, "I won''t tell anyone your secret, but try to be nice to each other at least."'
+						'"It doesn''t have to be all bad," you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
+						'"Wow, two girls in one room... that is so hot," says Maksim. "Our sister is the only one with her own room, that''s so unfair."'
+						'"She is a girl after all. Wouldn''t it be awkward if she shared a room with you," you try to explain.'
+						'"I guess... but she could sleep in the living room then we could each have our own room," he says as if that was totally fair.'
+						'You look through the magazine and the boy has some kinky tastes. You wonder who might have bought it for him, so you throw the magazine back onto the bed saying, "I won''t tell anyone your secret, but try to be nice to each other at least."'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 					end
 				end	
@@ -222,29 +223,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				minut += 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksim.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Where''s your brother?" You ask him.'
+				'"Where''s your brother," You ask him.'
 				'Maksim gives you a annoyed look. "Why do you care? He is likely outside playing in the dirt like a stupid kid."'
-				'You smile at that and ask. "Why arn''t you playing with him?"'
-				'"I''m not a little kid, am practically a grown man." He tells you.'
+				'You smile at that and ask, "Why arn''t you playing with him?"'
+				'"I''m not a little kid ''cause I''m practically a grown man," he tells you.'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 				act 'Ask if he wants to play':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-					'You nod at that and try not to smile. "Oh I see, so do you want to play a game with me then?"'
+					'You nod at that while trying not to smile. "Oh I see, so do you want to play a game with me then?"'
 					if pcs_gaming <= 40:
-						'It looks like he is about to say no and then he smiles. "Ok but only if we make interesting."'
-						'"Interesting how?" You ask him.'
-						'He grins. "If I win you have to show me your boobs, if you win I will tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
+						'It looks like he is about to say no, but then he smiles. "Ok, but only if we make interesting."'
+						'"Interesting how," You ask him.'
+						'He grins. "If I win you have to show me your boobs, but if you win I will tell you a secret about Nush that you don''t know."'
 						act 'No, I don''t think so':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head. "No I don''t think so." You tell him.'
-							'He frowns. "Fine then get out of my room, get out!"'
-							'You back out of the doorway. "Ok ok I''m going."'
+							'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so," you tell him.'
+							'He frowns. "Fine then get out of my room. Just get out!"'
+							'You back out of the doorway. "Ok... ok, I''m going."'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end	
 							
@@ -254,7 +255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 							gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksimplay.jpg"></center>'
-							'The two of you start playing, it quickly becomes obvious he has played this game a lot and is very good at it. You try but you just are unable to keep up with him. A couple of times you come close but often you are just outmatched. After a couple of matches he pauses the game and looks at you with a lustful grin. "Ha Ha, you lost, now show me your boobs."'
+							'The two of you start playing, but it quickly becomes obvious he has played this game a lot and is very good at it. You try, but you are just unable to keep up with him. A couple of times you come close to matching him. However, oftentimes you are just outmatched. After a couple of matches, he pauses the game and looks at you with a lustful grin. "Ha Ha you lost, so now show me your boobs."'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 								act 'Refuse to show him your boobs (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -262,11 +263,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head. "No I don''t think so, you''re to young anyways."'
-									'His eyes flash, he is obviously furious with you. "You promised!"'
+									'You shake your head. "No, I don''t think so. You''re to young anyways."'
+									'His eyes flash because he is obviously furious with you. "You promised!"'
 									'You shrug. "I lied."'
-									'"GET OUT! Get out of my room!" He yells at you.'
-									'Not wanting anyone to come find out what is going on you quickly get up and leave.'
+									'"GET OUT! Get out of my room," he yells at you.'
+									'By not wanting anyone to come find out what is going on you quickly get up and leave.'
 									act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 								end
 							else
@@ -278,31 +279,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 								gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksimshow.jpg"></center>'
-								'Well you did agree and he did win. You stand up and then pull your top aside to expose your breasts to him. His eyes get huge as he starts at your tits. Before either of you can say anything you hear the front door slam and Timofey yelling and running down the hall. "Maksim, Maksim, come see, come see."'
+								'Well, you did agree and he did win. You stand up then pull your top up to expose your breasts to him. His eyes get huge as he stares at your tits. Before either of you can say anything you hear the front door slam. Timofey is yelling as he''s running down the hall. "Maksim... Maksim... come see... come see."'
 								*nl
-								'You pull your top back in place just before he bursts in the room, Maksim gives him a dirty look. "Why do you have to always ruin everything!"'
-								'Timofey stops obviously not understanding what is going on and looks between the two of you completely confused. "I just wanted to show you something." You use that time to slip out of the room and close the door behind you, leaving the two of them behind to argue.'
+								'You pull your top back into place just before he bursts in the room. Maksim gives him a dirty look. "Why do you have to always ruin everything?"'
+								'Timofey stops obviously not understanding what is going on. He looks between the two of you completely confused. "I just wanted to show you something." You use that time to slip out of the room and close the door behind you. You leave the two of them behind to argue.'
 								act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 							end
 						end
 					else
 						'He shrugs. "Sure I guess."'
-						'You walk over and take a seat next to him and pick up the other controller.'
+						'You walk over to take a seat next to him and pick up the other controller.'
 						act 'Play':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 20
 							gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/maksimplay.jpg"></center>'
-							'You play a game with him, he is pretty good but you are better and you manage to beat him, he just isn''t good enough to beat you and after a bit he seems to get annoyed by the fact he keeps losing and switches games. "I''m bored with that game." He switches to a single player game. You smile knowing he only switched games because he couldn''t win.'
+							'You play a game with him. He is pretty good, but you are better and you manage to beat him. Maksim just isn''t good enough to beat you. After a bit, he seems to get annoyed by the fact he keeps losing and switches games. "I''m bored with this game." He switches to a single player game. You smile knowing he only switched games because he couldn''t win.'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 						end
 					end
 				end	
 			end
 		else
-			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim and Timofey are here, doing whatever it is that boys do. Maksim stares at your tits for a couple of moments, before saying. "Get lost."'
-			'Timofey looks over and adds. "Yeah get lost, no girls allowed." After that they just ignore you.'
+			'You open the door and look in the brothers'' room. You see Maksim and Timofey are here. They do whatever it is that boys do. Maksim stares at your tits for a couple of moments before saying, "Get lost."'
+			'Timofey looks over and adds, "Yeah get lost, ''cause no girls allowed." After that they just ignore you.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 		end
 		killvar 'brotherroom'
@@ -320,74 +321,74 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rematch':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
 	if rand(1,2) = 1:
-		'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want?" Then he notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought you groupie with you again."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
-		'Maksim glances at his brother a moment then back to Anushka. "Ok fine."'
+		'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing whatever they were doing. The older one gathers some courage, "What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie with you again."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch." She points to the gaming console in their room.'
+		'Maksim glances at his brother a moment then back to Anushka. "Ok... fine."'
 		*nl
-		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard. We''ll definitely beat you this time."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies smiling, "You really think you can beat me this time?"'
-		'The boys nod at each other, "We''re sure we will win."'
+		'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing really hard and we''ll definitely beat you this time."'
+		'Anushka quickly questions him while smiling, "You really think you can beat me this time?"'
+		'The boys nod at each other. "We''re sure we will win."'
 		act 'Sit down and play':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
 			gaming_exp =+ rand(1, 3)
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
-			'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering, they must be planning something.'
+			'The brothers turn away from you and start whispering. You''re sure that they must be planning something.'
 			'"Let''s play." Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you are playing for several minutes, you don''t really know what''s happening, it is some shooter game you have never played before, but Anushka does her best to explain as you play.'
+			'The four of you are playing for several minutes and you don''t really know what''s happening. It appears to be some shooter game that you have never played before, but Anushka does her best to explain it as you play.'
 			act 'Finish':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'The game is pretty much over, all of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose." Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah yeah yeah, you won." Then she reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft I won it, Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass." Maksim says.'
+					'The game is pretty much over and both of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose," Maksim taunts.'
+					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah... yeah... yeah... you won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
+					'"Pfft I won it. Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass," Maksim says.'
 					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" Which quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go, they''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go. They''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The game is pretty much a draw, with no one getting the upper hand. Until Anushka starts to... well cheat. She uses her foot to keep jarring Maksim, or cover up Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try and return the favor to her and soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting trying to screw each other up than actually win the game. Which leaves you to take advantage of their distractions and win the match.'
-					'Maksim begins to yell, "Not fair, you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in. "Anushka''s a cheater."'
-					'"You was doing the same to me. So you were cheating too." she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face, despite her brother looking mad.'
+					'The game is pretty much a draw with no one getting the upper hand. Until Anushka starts to... well cheat. She uses her foot to keep jarring Maksim or cover up Timofey''s eyes with her hand at a critical moment. The brothers try and return the favor to her. Soon the three of them are more interested in wrestling and fighting trying to screw each other up than actually win the game. Which leaves you to take advantage of their distractions to win the match.'
+					'Maksim begins to yell, "Not fair, because you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in, "Anushka''s a cheater."'
+					'"You was doing the same to me, so you were cheating too," she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face despite her brother looking mad.'
 					*nl
-					'Maksim obviously doesn''t see it that way. "You started it and your groupie took advantage."'
-					'Anushka laughs at that. "Well who''s fault is that? If you wasn''t consumed with trying to get back at me you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won, though unlikely."'
-					'Maksim responds by yelling. "Shut up..."'
-					'Anushka interjects before he can say more. "Be quiet, you want dad to come back in here again?"'
-					'That makes him shut his mouth and glance at the door, as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When a moment passes and he doesn''t, Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He is loud but not to loud.'
+					'Maksim obviously doesn''t see it that way. "You started it and your groupie took advantage of the situation."'
+					'Anushka laughs at that. "Well who''s fault is that? If you wasn''t consumed with trying to get back at me. It''s unlikely that you would have noticed what she was doing and maybe won."'
+					'Maksim responds by yelling, "Shut up..."'
+					'Anushka interjects before he can say more, "Be quiet, do you want dad to come back in here again?"'
+					'That makes him shut his mouth and glance at the door as if expecting their dad to burst in any moment. When that moment passes and he doesn''t Maksim jumps on Anushka. "Cheater!" He is loud but not too loud.'
 					*nl
-					'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle and she quickly starts to get the upper hand, he just isn''t old enough or big enough yet to beat his older sister. Once it becomes clear she is about to pin Maksim down, Timofey jumps on her back. The three of them wrestle around, Anushka managing to pin one of them but not the other a times, only for the first one to get lose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinnng her down but in the end they all just give up. All panting and out of breath, laying in a heap.'
-					'Finally Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on lets go back to my room." She says to you out of breath. As you follow her out of the room the brothers start to play another game and Makism says. "Next time will win." Just as Anushka closes the door on them.'
+					'Anushka and Maksim start to wrestle. She quickly starts to get the upper hand because he just isn''t old enough or big enough yet to beat his older sister. Once it becomes clear she is about to pin Maksim down Timofey jumps on her back. The three of them wrestle around. Anushka manages to pin one of them, but not the other at the same time. This is because the first one gets loose as she tries to pin them both. They come close a few times to pinnng her down, but in the end they all just give up. All of them panting as they are out of breath and laying in a heap.'
+					'Finally, Anushka gets up and untangles herself from them. "Come on lets go back to my room." She says to you out of breath. As you follow her out of the room the brothers start to play another game and Makism says. "Next time will win." Just as Anushka closes the door on them.'
 				else
-					'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot but enough the brothers come close but fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad, we could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault, Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just to good."'
-					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts it. "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get to aggressive like always and make it easier for me to kill you. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a tease tone and sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door and then glares at Anushka.'
+					'The game is pretty much over you since Anushka and you are able to win. It''s not by a lot, but enough the brothers come close. They always fall a little short in both matches.'
+					'Maksim throws down his controller and turns on Timofey. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
+					'Timofey tries to defend himself, "It''s not my fault that Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts him off, "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get too aggressive like always which makes it easier for me to kill you. You''re just mad ''cause you got beat by a girl... again," She says in a teasing tone then sticks her tongue out at him.'
+					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, ''cause we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door then glares at Anushka.'
 					*nl
-					'"Get out, get out of our room." He says to Anushka as he pushes on her trying to push her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my god you are such a baby, I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
-					'He pushes her towards the door after she gets up. "Good then don''t, get out!"'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat."'
-					'Then she turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'Makism starts to yell but catches himself and while still loud doesn''t manage to yell. "Fuck you bitch, get out of our room!"'
-					'Then Timofey. Runs up to his sister. "No come back and play with us." He asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
-					'Instantly Anushka tenses and angry seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt." She says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leave, you hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					'"Get out... get out of our room," He says to Anushka as he pushes her to try and shove her off the bed.'
+					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God, you are such a baby. I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+					'He pushes her towards the door after she gets up. "Good then don''t... get out!"'
+					'Anushka sounds exasperated, "Fine, then, you little brat."'
+					'She turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+					'Makism starts to yell, but catches himself while still loud doesn''t manage to yell. "Fuck you bitch and get out of our room!"'
+					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "No, come back and play with us," He asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+					'Instantly, Anushka tenses up and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt." She says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
+					'As she closes the door and leaves, you can hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy by pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
 				end
 				act 'Go to Anushka''s room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
 			end	
 		end
 	else
-		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one visibly gathers up his courage; "What is it? What do you want?" Then he notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie along again."'
-		'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
+		'The two of you walk down the hall and enter her brothers'' room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing. The older one visibly gathers up his courage, "What is it? What do you want?" He notices you and starts staring at your tits. "I see you brought your groupie along again."'
+		'Anushka quickly replies, "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch." She points to the gaming console in their room.'
 		'Both of them get excited at that. "Yeah and this time we will beat you."'
 		'Anushka quickly replies smiling, "You really think you can beat us this time?."'
-		'The boys nod at each other, "This time will be different. We''re sure we will win."'
-		'Anushka laughs. "Nah I don''t think so, maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls."'
-		'Maksim looks mad at that. "Shut up and play!" Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a mutter taunting him.'
+		'The boys nod at each other. "This time will be different. We''re sure we will win."'
+		'Anushka laughs. "Nah, I don''t think so, maybe you boys just like getting beat by girls."'
+		'Maksim looks mad at that. "Shut up and play!" Anushka just laughs again and mimics what he said in a mutter that taunts him.'
 		act 'Play':
 			*clr & cla
 			gaming_exp =+ rand(1,3)
@@ -396,40 +397,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rematch':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Come on guys lets just have fun." You tell them.'
 			'"We will win this time!" Maksim looks at the two of you determined.'
-			'"Let''s play." Timofey says smiling.'
-			'The four of you are playing for several minutes, you are a lot better since last time. You learned a lot and you are helping out more than you did before. Enough that you and Anushka start to get the upper hand.'
+			'"Let''s play," Timofey says smiling.'
+			'The four of you are playing for several minutes. You''ve gotten a lot better since the last time you played. You learned a lot and you are helping out more than you did before. It''s enough that you and Anushka start to get the upper hand.'
 			act 'Finish':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/playgamebro.jpg"></center>'
 				if pcs_gaming <= 20:
-					'The game is pretty much over, all of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose." Maksim taunts.'
-					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah yeah yeah, you won." Then she reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair, which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
-					'"Pfft I won it, Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass." Maksim says.'
-					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" Which quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
-					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go, they''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
+					'The game is pretty much over. All of them are still better players than you are. Anushka does what she can again, but the brothers fairly easily manage to win back to back matches. Both brothers jump up and do some weird little victory dance. "Ha ha we win and you lose," Maksim taunts.'
+					'Anushka rolls her eyes at their antics. "Yeah, yeah, yeah, you won." She reaches over and ruffles Timofey''s hair which he tries and fails to dodge. "Good job kiddo."'
+					'"Pfft I won it, ''cause Timo almost caused us to lose if I didn''t carry his sorry ass," Maksim says.'
+					'Timofey pulls away from his sister. "Nuh-uh, I almost scored as good you as you did!" It quickly turns into them arguing over who did better.'
+					'Anushka gets up and shakes her head. "Come on lets go. They''re not going to stop acting like brat''s anytime soon." You get up and follow her out.'
 				elseif pcs_gaming <= 40:
-					'The two of you are just slightly better than they are and after some time you come out on top. Maksim gets mad and throws the controller down. "Fuck!" Then turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost, God you''re so stupid."'
-					'Timofey shakes his head. "You''re stupid, and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero and Nush tricks you every time."'
-					'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth you little shit, she doesn''t trick me." He yells as he starts wailing on his little brother. Before you can even react Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone, he''s right. I baited you out and then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
-					'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room, get out or I''ll tell dad you''re picking on us again."'
-					'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, lets get out of here." Just as you start to go out, Anushka stops and looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here and beat your ass." Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out and slams the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
+					'The two of you are just slightly better than they are and after some time you come out on top. Maksim gets mad, so he throws his controller down. "Fuck!" He turns on his brother. "It''s your fault we lost. God you''re so stupid."'
+					'Timofey shakes his head. "No, you''re stupid and you''re why we lost. You always have to try and be the hero, so Nush tricks you every time."'
+					'Maksim suddenly leaps on top of his brother. "Shut your mouth you little shit. She doesn''t trick me," He yells as he starts beating on his little brother. Before you can even react, Anushka grabs Maksim by the back of his collar and yanks him off Timofey. "Leave him alone, ''cause he''s right. I baited you out then <<$pcs_nickname>> killed you. It''s not his fault."'
+					'Maksim gets back up and pushes Anushka. "Get out of my room. Get out or I''ll tell dad you''re picking on us again."'
+					'Anushka just shakes her head and goes for the door. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>> lets get out of here." Just as you start to go out Anushka stops then looks back in. "Maksim, you better leave him alone or I''ll come back in here to beat your ass." Maksim rushes across the room and pushes the two of you the rest of the way out. He slams the door closed. Anushka angrily goes back to her room.'
 				else
-					'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot but enough the brothers come close but fall a little short in both matches.'
-					'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" Then turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad, we could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
-					'Timofey tries to defend himself. "It''s not my fault, Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just to good."'
-					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts it. "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get to aggressive and don''t work with Timofey, just trying to win it on your own. Your just mad cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a tease tone and sticks her tongue out at him.'
-					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door and then glares at Anushka.'
+					'The game is pretty much over you, Anushka and you are able to win, not by a lot, but enough the brothers come close only to fall a little short in both matches.'
+					'Maksim throws down his controller. "Fuck!" He turns on his brother. "Why are you so bad? We could have beat them if you didn''t suck so much."'
+					'Timofey tries to defend himself, "It''s not my fault. Nush and <<$pcs_nickname>> are just too good."'
+					'Before Maksim can respond Anushka cuts him off. "It''s not Timos fault and you know it. When you fall behind you get too aggressive and don''t work with Timofey. You''rejust trying to win it on your own. Also, you''re just mad ''cause you got beat by a girl... again." She says in a teasing tone then sticks her tongue out at him.'
+					'Maksim eyes flare at Anushka and it looks like he about to scream at her again. When she interjects, "Calm down, ''cause we don''t want dad in here again." With that he shuts his mouth and glances at the door then glares at Anushka.'
 					*nl
-					'"Get out, get out of our room." He says to Anushka as he pushes on her trying to push her off the bed.'
-					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my god you are such a baby, I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
+					'"Get out... get out of our room," he says to Anushka as he pushes on her trying to shove her off the bed.'
+					'Anushka gets up. "Oh my God you are such a baby, I don''t even know why I bother playing with you."'
 					'He pushes her towards the door after she gets up. "You only play with us to bully us. I don''t want to play with you anymore."'
-					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat, I won''t." Then she turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
-					'Makism starts to yell but catches himself and while still loud doesn''t manage to yell. "Go suck a cock or something."'
-					'Then Timofey, runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again won''t you?" He asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
-					'Instantly Anushka tenses and angry seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt." She says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
-					'As she closes the door and leave, you hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy and pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
+					'Anushka sounds exasperated. "Fine then, you little brat, I won''t." She turns towards you. "Come on lets go before this little shit starts to cry."'
+					'Makism starts to yell, but catches himself while still loud he doesn''t manage to yell, "Go suck a cock or something."'
+					'Timofey runs up to his sister. "You will play with us again won''t you," he asks in a somewhat pleading tone.'
+					'Instantly, Anushka tenses up and her anger seems to melt away. "Some other time squirt," she says to him with a smile and ruffles his hair much to his annoyance.'
+					'As she closes the door and leave, you hear Makism berating his brother for being a pussy while pleading with their sister to play games with them.'
 				end
 				act 'Go to Anushka''s room':AnushkaLoc=2&gt'anushapt','anushroom'
 			end

locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-	'Valentin sits across from you and Anushka takes the seat next to you, sliding her arm around your shoulders and pulling you close to her. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we need your help with a plan."' 
+	'Valentin sits across from you while Anushka takes the seat next to you. She slides her arm around your shoulders and pulls you close to her. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, we need your help with a plan."' 
 	*nl
-	'"What plan?", you ask, looking from her to Valentin and back. Anushka''s answer comes so fast that you are certain she was waiting for that exact question: "We want to drug Mr <<$rand_teacher>>, you know, so we can go have fun." You are almost certain you misheard her but she casually ignores your shocked expression and explains what part she expects you to play in this: "I will go up and distract him and when I do, we need you to drop these in his drink." She places several pills in your hand.'
+	'"What plan,", you ask. You look from her to Valentin then back. Anushka''s answer comes so fast that you are certain she was waiting for that exact question. "We want to drug Mr <<$rand_teacher>>... you know... so we can go have fun." You are almost certain you misheard her, but she casually ignores your shocked expression. She explains the part she expects you to play in this, "I will go up and distract him. When I do we need you to drop these in his drink." She places several pills in your hand.'
 	*nl
-	'You look at the pills, turning them this way and that uncertainly, and look up at the two of them again. "What exactly will these do to him?"'
-	'Valentin answers before Anushka can. "Make him tired, is all. He will sleep for a few hours and feel a little groggy for the rest of the day but nothing serious - we''re just gonna make detention a bit less boring, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''re not trying to kill him. So, you going to do it or not?"'
+	'You look at the pills then turning them uncertainly in your fingers. You look up at the two of them again. "What exactly will these do to him?"'
+	'Valentin answers before Anushka can, "They will make him tired is all. He will sleep for a few hours and feel a little groggy for the rest of the day, but nothing serious. We''re just gonna make detention a bit less boring <<$pcs_nickname>>. We''re not trying to kill him. Are you going to do this or not?"'
 	gs 'willpower', 'crime', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'This is WAY too sketchy - Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detention.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head and hand back the pills. "Sorry, guys, but I can''t be part of that. It just... does''nt feel right."'
-			'Valentin looks over at Anushka and says, "See, I told you she wouldn''t be game."'
+			'You shake your head and hand back the pills. "Sorry guys, but I can''t be part of that. It just... does''nt feel right."'
+			'Valentin looks over at Anushka then says, "See... I told you she wouldn''t be game."'
 			*nl
-			'Anushka shakes her head and gives you a disgusted look. "I thought you were cool. What a fucking loser." With that, they both get up and move over to another table. You spend the rest of the detention playing on your phone, trying to ignore the glares they shoot in your direction. It''s not easy, because you know that you didn''t just "turn down" somebody: You lost a lot of respect with the gopniks today.'
+			'Anushka shakes her head and gives you a disgusted look. "I thought you were cool. What a fucking loser that you are." With that they both get up and move over to another table. You spend the rest of the detention playing on your phone. You try to ignore the glares they shoot in your direction. It''s not easy, because you know that you didn''t turn down just "anyone". You have lost a lot of respect with the gopniks today.'
 			act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 		end
 	else
@@ -42,16 +42,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/anushdes.jpg"></center>'
-		'You nod. "Okay, let''s do this." Anushka grabs your head, turns your face towards hers and gives you a long, deep kiss with so much tongue and passion that even Valentin seems to start feeling a little awkward. Once she breaks the kiss, she turns towards him. "See? I told you she would do it." Valentin just shrugs slightly and smirks at you, still catching your breath from that kiss. Anushka crushes up the pills - with obvious skill - into a fine powder in less than a minute, then gets up and motions for you to follow her.'
+		'You nod. "Okay let''s do this." Anushka grabs your head to turn your face towards hers and gives you a long, deep kiss with so much tongue and passion that even Valentin seems to start feeling a little awkward. Once she breaks the kiss, she turns towards him. "See? I told you she would do it." Valentin just shrugs slightly and smirks at you. You''re still catching your breath from her kiss. Anushka crushes up the pills, with obvious skill, into a fine powder in less than a minute. She gets up and motions for you to follow her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3
 		gs 'stat'
-		'She walks up to the side of the teacher''s desk where Mr <<$rand_teacher>> is sitting while his drink is conveniently located at the opposite end, unguarded. You causally stroll over and sit down on the edge of the table, using your body to block his drink from view from the rest of the room. Mr <<$rand_teacher>> looks at the two of you questioningly. "Can I help you, girls?"'
+		'She walks up to the side of the teacher''s desk where Mr <<$rand_teacher>> is sitting while his, unguarded, drink is conveniently located at the opposite end. You causally stroll over then sit down on the edge of the table. You use your body to block his drink from view from the rest of the room. Mr <<$rand_teacher>> looks at the two of you questioningly. "Can I help you girls?"'
 		*nl
-		'Anushka leans forward and pulls her shirt and bra slightly down and apart, nearly exposing her nipples but definitely giving him a clear view of her cleavage. Her mock-anxious anxious tone, however, is what takes the cake: "Sir, what do you think that spot is? Should I be worried?"'
-		'He seems flustered at her actions, but quickly gets himself under control. "What spot? I don''t see anything."'
-		'She leans in a bit closer, pushing them together even more. "Right there, between my breasts."'
+		'Anushka leans forward then pulls her shirt apart and bra slightly down which nearly exposes her nipples, but definitely gives him a better view of her cleavage. However, her mock-anxious anxious tone is what takes the cake, "Sir, what do you think that spot is? Should I be worried?"'
+		'He seems flustered by her actions, but quickly gets himself under control. "What spot? I don''t see anything."'
+		'She leans in a bit closer and pushes her breasts together even more. "Right there... between my breasts."'
 		*nl
-		'He leans in slightly closer to get a better look and as he does, you drop the powdered pills in his drink. Anushka gives you an almost imperceptible nod, looks down and then leans back, letting go of her shirt to hide her cleavage again. "Oh, it''s gone!" She turns to you. "See? I told you it was just some lint." Then she gives Mr <<$rand_teacher>> another look and smiles. "Thanks anyways." Then she gets up and walks back to your table, with you following right behind her. He looks at the two of you for a moment and then shakes his head, obviously unsure what that was all about. He takes a big gulp from his cup, then another one a few minutes later. Within half an hour, he is slumped back in his chair, snoring, saliva running down his chin.'
+		'He leans in slightly closer to get a better look and as he does you drop the powdered pills in his drink. Anushka gives you an almost imperceptible nod. She looks down then leans back and lets go of her shirt to hide her cleavage again. "Oh... it''s gone!" She turns to you. "See? I told you it was just some lint." She gives Mr <<$rand_teacher>> another look and smiles. "Thanks anyways." Anushka gets up and walks back to your table with you following right behind her. He looks at the two of you for a moment then shakes his head. He''s obviously unsure what that was all about. He takes a big gulp from his cup then another one a few minutes later. Within a half an hour, he is slumped back in his chair, snoring, and saliva is running down his chin.'
 		act 'Go to the Teachers'' Lounge':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'boyStat', 'A158'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once the teacher starts snoring, Valentin gets up. "Come on, let''s go." Anushka follows suit and pulls you up as well. You wander down the halls ''til the three of you reach the teachers'' lounge. Valentin pulls some lockpicks from his pocket and expertly uses them to unlock the door. You and your companions head inside quickly and he locks the door behind you. While he does, Anushka pulls you towards a big leather couch. You both flop down on the comfy couch and Valentin sits down between you a few seconds later. He pulls a small flask from his jacket pocket and takes a quick gulp from it before passing it to Anushka, who takes a healthy swig and passes it to you.'
+			'Once the teacher starts snoring, Valentin gets up. "Come on let''s go." Anushka follows suit and pulls you up as well. You wander down the halls ''til the three of you reach the teachers'' lounge. Valentin pulls some lockpicks out from his pocket and expertly uses them to unlock the door. You and your companions head inside quickly and he locks the door behind you. While he does, Anushka pulls you towards a big leather couch. You both flop down on the comfy couch and Valentin sits down between you a few seconds later. He pulls a small flask from his jacket pocket. He takes a quick gulp from it before passing it to Anushka. She takes a healthy swig and passes it to you.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'No thanks (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -72,11 +72,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head denying the offered drink, he gives a snort and she rolls her eyes slightly. She soon pulls out a joint, lights it up and before long the two of them are mostly ignoring you while having a smoke and a drink together. It doesn''t take long for the two of them to start making out next to you, and you watch in fascination as he starts pulling his pants down.' 
+					'You shake your head denying the offered drink. He gives a snort and she rolls her eyes slightly. She soon pulls out a joint then lights it up. Before long, the two of them are mostly ignoring you while having a smoke and a drink together. It doesn''t take long for the two of them to start making out next to you. You watch in fascination as he starts pulling his pants down.' 
 					*nl
 					gs 'stat'
 					if hotcat >= 6:
-						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands, grabs your head and pushes you down into his lap.'
+						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands to grab your head and push you down into his lap.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Pull away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-								'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
-								'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-								'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party, then get lost."'
-								'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+								'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+								'Anushka seems completely unfazed. Before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+								'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party then get lost."'
+								'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 								act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 							end
@@ -100,13 +100,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-							'You reflexively open your mouth, wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down, making you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you - you are getting seriously turned on at the thought of having a threesome in the teachers lounge.'
+							'You reflexively open your mouth to wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down which makes you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you. You are getting seriously turned on at the thought of having a threesome in the teachers lounge.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'group'
 							act 'Her turn': gt 'anushka', 'Her turn'
 						end
 					else
-						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-						'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+						'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking his cock.'
+						'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 						act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 					end
@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj.jpg"></center>'
-				'You take the offered drink and take a swig as well. You immediately regret it, choking and coughing from the burning liquid, which gets them both laughing; whatever it is, it''s much stronger than you expected. Anushka soon takes out a joint and lights it up, passing it around as well. After only a few drinks each, the flask is empty. The joint doesn''t last much longer and with the flask drunk and the joint smoked, you are feeling pretty buzzed and watch in dazed fascination as he pulls his pants down.' 
+				'You take the offered drink then take a swig as well. You immediately regret it because you choke and cough from the burning liquid. This results in them both laughing. Whatever is in the flask it''s much stronger than you expected. Anushka soon takes out a joint and lights it up then passes it around as well. After only a few drinks each, the flask is empty. The joint doesn''t last much longer. With the flask drunk empty and the joint smoked to ashes you are feeling pretty buzzed and watch in dazed fascination as he pulls his pants down.' 
 				*nl
 				gs 'stat'
 				if hotcat >= 6:
-					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands, grabs your head and pushes you down into his lap.'			
+					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she reaches toward you with both hands to grab your head and push you down into his lap.'			
 					gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 						act 'Pull away (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -138,10 +138,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-							'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
-							'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-							'Valentin shakes his head a little. "Then be quiet and watch, maybe you''ll learn something today."'
-							'After that the two of them completely ignores you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone or watching the two of them fuck on the couch, wondering if you made the right decision.'
+							'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away. Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention. I really don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+							'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+							'Valentin shakes his head a little. "Be quiet and watch. Maybe you''ll learn something today."'
+							'After that the two of them completely ignore you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone or watching the two of them fuck on the couch. You wonder if you made the right decision.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 							act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 						end
@@ -153,13 +153,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 						npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 						npc_rel['A158'] += 1
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-						'You reflexively open your mouth, wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down, making you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you - you are getting turned on by this dream-like situation pretty quickly.'
+						'You reflexively open your mouth to wrap your lips around the head and start sucking his dick. She keeps forcing your head down which makes you gag slightly on his length every so often, but she doesn''t really have to force you. You are pretty quickly getting turned on by this dream-like situation.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'group'
 						act 'Her turn': gt 'anushka', 'Her turn'
 					end
 				else
-					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock, immediately starting to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
-					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
+					'As Anushka and Valentin make out she reaches down to close her hand around his cock and immediately starts to jerk him. After she has him good and hard, she lowers her head to start sucking Valentin''s cock.'
+					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, towards the door, which indicates that you should move away. Feeling a bit uncomfortable you get up and move away further from them. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 				end
@@ -173,44 +173,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcbj1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly, her hands are gone and you can feel her head next to yours, so you stop sucking and make room so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start taking turns bobbing, sucking and licking, passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you and occasionally licking it at the same time or kissing each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, as long as you please him.'
+	'Suddenly her hands are gone and you can feel her head next to yours. You stop sucking to make room, so she can suck his dick as well. The two of you start taking turns bobbing, sucking, and licking by passing Valentin''s cock back and forth between you. Both of you occasionally licking it at the same time or kissing each other while jerking him off instead. He seems perfectly content to let the two of you do as you please, so long as you please him.'
 	*nl
-	'While you get your turn to suck his dick again, Anushka takes your shirt off, then works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
+	'While it''s your turn to suck his dick again Anushka takes your shirt off and works on getting you out of the rest of your clothes. As soon as she has you completely naked, she kneels back down next to you. You move to let her suck his cock and while she''s busy, you return the favor by stripping her down as well.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute, the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down ''til he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
+	'As soon as her panties are off, she pulls her mouth off Valentin''s manhood with a loud plop and the two of you start helping him undress. Within a minute the three of you are all stark naked. She pushes him down ''til he is lying back on the couch and encourages you to straddle his lap.'
 	act 'No fucking':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowgirl.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick you. But I don''t want to get fucked."'
-		'Anushka doesn''t say a word to you, she just climbs on top of him herself, mounting him cowgirl style and starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing and kissing her lovely ass as she continues to ride him.'
+		'You shake your head. "Sorry, I will suck him or lick youm but I don''t want to get fucked."'
+		'Anushka doesn''t say a word to you, so she just climbs on top of him herself. She mounts him cowgirl style the starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing, and kissing her lovely ass as she rides him.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		act 'Suck him again':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcwbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'After riding him for a while, she pulls up and off him, letting his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over, grabs your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking his glistening dick, you can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck his dick for a while, letting you suck up all her pussy juice before pulling your head away and then easing herself back down on his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
+			'After riding him for a while, she pulls off of him to let his cock slide out of her sopping wet pussy. She reaches over to grab your head and pushes it down towards his waiting dick. You quickly open your mouth and start sucking his glistening dick. You can taste her pussy juices all over it. She lets you suck his dick for a while and lets you suck up all her pussy juices before pulling your head away. She eases herself back down onto his shaft. This time, however, she lets his cock slide up her ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowanal.jpg"></center>'
-				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast, bucking and grinding against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, taking his cock as deep in her asshole as it can go. Then she takes a loud shuddering breath, shaking all over with her eyes rolling up as she slowly comes to a stop, with his dick still buried up her ass.'
+				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast. Nush bucks and grinds against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, and takes his cock as deep in her asshole as far as it can go. She takes a loud shuddering breath... her body shakes all over with her eyes rolling up in the back of her head while she slowly comes to a stop. Valentin''s dick is still buried deep in her ass.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-					'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes, you hear Valentin panting and grunting as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock, so you know he is getting very close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she lifts up again and quickly gets off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him, pulling you down as well so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					'As Anushka''s orgasm finishes you hear Valentin pant and grunt as her ass squeezes and twitches around his cock. You know he is getting, so very close. It seems Anushka does as well, because she lifts up again to quickly get off him. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while she pulls you down as well, so you can join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though... as a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face right where she was aiming at. The next spurt she aims at her own face followed by your tits then her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you by coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
 					*nl
-					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
+					'When the well has dried up she diligently licks you clean and doesn''t leave a trace of his sperm on your body. Of course, you return the favor. When all the cum has been collected she gives you a deep... passionate french kiss. Both of you make sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done the three of you get dressed. Valentin unlocks the lounge door he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it. You''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nush was right. You''re a pretty cool chick. Not to mention you really know how to suck cock." You give Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
+					'Going back to the library you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside you each go your separate ways.'
 					
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
@@ -221,11 +221,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcvag.jpg"></center>'
-		'She''s right: You are sopping wet and ready. As you lower yourself down towards his crotch, she guides his cock into your pussy. You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly filling and stretching you open, and you start moaning softly, the sensation is incredible and somehow the alcohol is just adding to the feeling.'
+		'She''s right... you are sopping wet and ready. As you lower yourself down towards his crotch, she guides his cock into your pussy. You feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slowly filling and stretching you open. You start moaning softly because the sensation is incredible. Somehow, the alcohol is just adding to the feeling.'
 		*nl
-		'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick, and as if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up, fucking you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure, unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions and as they keep going you can feel yourself getting close already, the rising tingle in your body threatening to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
+		'You lift yourself up and begin riding his dick. As if that stimulation wasn''t enough for you, Anushka leans forward and starts licking your clit while he is bucking his hips up to fuck you from below. You are totally lost in pleasure with your body unable to keep up with all the sensations. All control over the situation has completely passed to your companions and as they keep going you can feel yourself getting close already. The rising electric shocks, that is spreading, in your body threatens to overwhelm your few remaining senses.'
 		*nl
-		'Just then, when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp, Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place, slamming her pussy down on his cock and impaling herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
+		'Just then; when you''re right on the edge and release is finally within your grasp; Anushka pulls you off his heavenly cock and takes your place. She slams her pussy down on his cock and impales herself time and time again. You are certain the little bitch did it on purpose, swapping places when you were so close, but you still return the favor of licking her clit while he fucks her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -5, 'group'
@@ -234,9 +234,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal1.jpg"></center>'
-			'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control, not while she''s straddling him and not when she pulls herself off and makes him get up. She lays herself down on the couch in his place, spreading her legs and gripping her butt cheeks, spreading them open as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease, even without any additional lubrication, and begins fucking her practically right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over, to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
+			'Unlike you, she leaves no doubt as to who is in control. While she''s straddling him and when she pulls herself off to make him get up to change positions. She lays herself down on the couch in his place. She opens her legs and grips her butt cheeks to spread them as well. Her expectation is obvious and Valentin, being a perfect gentleman, obliges her. He slips his dick into her ass with ease. Even without any additional lubrication he begins fucking her right away. She lets go of her own butt and motions you over to straddle her face. Who are you to refuse such an offer?'
 			*nl
-			'Her tongue laps at your clit and slit as soon as they are within reach and every now and then, her tongue darts inside of you as well. Meanwhile, Valentin lays himself down on his side and pounds her ass from behind, allowing him to lick and suck on your nipples while she eats you out. This goes on for some time, all three of you audibly content with this position, until Anushka makes the two of you move again.'
+			'Her tongue laps at your clit and slit as soon as they are within reach. Every now and then her tongue darts inside of you as well. Meanwhile, Valentin lays himself down on his side and pounds her ass from behind. This allows him to lick and suck on your nipples while she eats you out. This goes on for some time... all three of you audibly content with this position until Anushka makes the two of you move again.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'group'
 			gs 'arousal', 'breasts', -10, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -244,13 +244,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcanal.jpg"></center>'
-				'She gets up and has you lay down in her place, straddling your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. After the enthusiasm with which she treated you, you have no reservations about giving her pussy a thorough licking as well and you go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart, having Valentin kneel down between your legs.'
+				'She gets up and has you lay down in her place to straddle your face almost as soon as you''re on your back. You have no reservations about giving her pussy a through licking after the enthusiasm she treated you to. You go to town immediately. Meanwhile, she lifts up your legs and spreads them apart to have Valentin kneel down between your legs.'
 				*nl
 				gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
 				*nl
-				'You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole for a moment before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus into your ass.'
+				'You feel him rubbing the tip of his dick against your asshole, for a brief moment, before pushing the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock past your anus into your ass.'
 				*nl
-				'Not knowing how much experience you might have, he starts off slow and gentle for a moment, allowing you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass, each of them taking turns playing with your nipples, adding another tune to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that is filling your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
+				'By not knowing how much experience you might have, he starts off slow and gentle, for a moment, to allow you to get used to it. As soon as he feels you relax a bit, though, he starts hammering your ass just as hard and fast as he was pounding Anushka''s. She grinds her twat against your face as he claims your ass. Each of them taking turns playing with your nipples. This adds another instrument to the orchestra of pain and pleasure that fills your mind. You have completely lost all sense of time by now, but you don''t really care.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -15, 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -259,13 +259,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detccum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Through the haze of pleasure you can hear Valentin panting and grunting, and somehow you know he is getting close. So does Anushka, it seems, because she gets off your face right away and pulls him away from you as well, leaving you feeling suddenly empty. She has him stand and kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock, not for long though: Only a few seconds later, a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face, right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits, then her own tits - she spreads his spunk between the two of you, coating both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
+					'Through the haze of pleasure you can hear Valentin panting and grunting. Deep down, you instinctively know that he is getting close. Anushka does also, it seems, because she gets off your face immediately. She pulls him away from you as well which leaves your ass, suddenly, feeling empty. She has him stand and she kneels down in front of him while pulling you back up to join her. She grabs his dick and rapidly starts jerking his slick cock. It''s not for long though, because only a few seconds later a stream of sperm spurts out and hits you in the face. It''s right where she was aiming. The next spurt she aims at her own face, followed by your tits and, finally, her own tits. She spreads his spunk between the two of you which coats both of your tits and faces with his sticky cum.'
 					*nl
-					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean, not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor of course, and when all the cum has been collected, she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss, making sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done, the three of you get dressed again. While Valentin unlocks the lounge door, he gives you a smirk and says: "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and Nush was right: You are a pretty cool chick. Not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush, giving Anushka a sideways glance and find her grinning at you.' 
+					'When the well has dried up, she diligently licks you clean not leaving a trace of his sperm on your body. You return the favor, of course, and when all the cum has been collected she gives you a deep and passionate french kiss. She makes sure to share the cum you licked up together. With that done the three of you get dressed again. As Valentin unlocks the lounge door he gives you a smirk and says, "Okay, I admit it, you''re not as much of a killjoy as I thought <<$pcs_nickname>>. Nush was right. You are a pretty cool chick and not to mention a damn good fuck!" You blush then give Anushka a sideways glance to find her grinning at you.' 
 					gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Going back to the library, you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside, you each go your separate ways.'
+					'Going back to the library you see that the teacher is still out like a light and all the other students are gone. There is less than an hour of detention left anyways, so the three of you leave the school. Once outside you each go your separate ways.'
 					act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
 			end
@@ -282,44 +282,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie fight':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/wedgiefight.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are not about to let go first, you know Anushka well enough to know she has a twisted sense of humor. "No you let go first and then I will." You tell her.'
-	'"Yeah right, like I will fall for that." she replies, as the two of you wrestle around still pulling on each others panties. Then she suddenly switches tack and instead of yanking your panties up, she starts trying to yank your clothes off. You panic for a moment, letting go of her to hold onto your own clothes before she gets them off you. Still, she manages to show half your ass off to everyone that is watching. Now you know you are in a losing position, if you let go of your clothes she will pull them off, but if all you do is hold onto them, then you can''t do anything to her in response. Before you can figure out a change in plans the teacher walks in.'
+	'You are not about to let go first, because you know Anushka well enough to know she has a twisted sense of humor. "No, you let go first then I will," you tell her.'
+	'"Yeah right, like I will fall for that," she replies as the two of you wrestle around still pulling on each others panties. She suddenly switches tack, instead of yanking your panties up, she starts trying to yank your clothes off. You panic for a moment and let go of her to hold onto your own clothes before she gets them off you. She, still, manages to show half your ass off to everyone that is watching. Now you know you are in a losing position. If you let go of your clothes she will pull them off, but if all you do is hold onto them then you can''t do anything to her in response. Before you can figure out a different plan of attack the teacher walks in.'
 	*nl
-	'"Just what are the two of you doing?" Then he holds up his hand. "Actually, I don''t care. Both of you come with me. The rest of you behave until I get back." He then grabs both you and Anushka by the arms and drags the two of you out of detention towards the principals office.'
+	'"Just what are the two of you doing," He asks as he holds up his hand. "Actually, I don''t care, because both of you come with me. The rest of you behave until I get back." He then grabs both you and Anushka by the arms to drag you both out of detention. He''s directing you both towards the principal''s office.'
 	act 'In trouble':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Principal''s Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big134.jpg"></center>'
-		'He knocks, waiting until he hears "Enter" from inside and then proceeds to drags you both in. Once inside he releases the two of you and addresses the school principal. "These two where trying to pull each others clothes off in the middle of the library."'
-		'The principal doesn''t seem remotely surprised by this. "Miss Konstantinov, I have come to expect this kind of behavior from you, but <b>you</b> miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, I had hoped you would know better. It seems that hope was in vain." she nods to the teacher. "I will deal with them." With that he leaves the office and closes the door.'
+		'He knocks then waits until he hears, "Enter," from inside. He proceeds to drags you both in. Once inside, he releases the two of you and addresses the school principal, "These two where trying to pull each others clothes off in the middle of the library."'
+		'The principal doesn''t seem remotely surprised by this. "Miss Konstantinov, I have come to expect this kind of behavior from you, but <b>you</b> miss <<$pcs_lastname>> I had hoped you would know better. It seems that hope was in vain." She nods to the teacher. "I will deal with them." With that he leaves the office and closes the door behind him.'
 		act 'Punishment':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly, take off your clothes." She says as she pulls a chair over near her leather couch, taking a seat. Anushka quickly takes off all her clothes seeming not to care in the slightest. You, however, are a little slower but finally you manage to remove all of your clothes as well. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within an arms reach she grabs you and pulls you across her lap. She then proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red and stinging like crazy, while Anushka takes a seat on the couch and just watches you get spanked.'
+			'"Very well, since you both wanted to be naked so badly take off your clothes," she says as she pulls a chair close to her leather couch then takes a seat. Anushka quickly takes off all her clothes seeming not to care in the slightest. You, however, are a little slower, but finally you manage to remove all of your clothes as well. Once you are both naked, Miss Volkov motions you over. As soon as you are within an arms reach, she grabs you then pulls you across her lap. She proceeds to spank your bare ass until your buttcheeks are cherry red. The result is they are stinging like crazy, while Anushka takes a seat on the couch. She silently just watches you get spanked.'
 			act 'Next':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. Leave your clothes where they are, face the corner." You do as you are told, gingerly rubbing your butt as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh, it seems to be Anushka''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap, getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear Anushka moaning, either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking Anushka''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally she seems to grow tired of it, lifting Anushka off her lap and pointing to your corner. "Go join your friend."'
+				'Once she is satisfied, she pulls you up and points to the corner of her office. "Go stand over there. You leave your clothes where they are then face the corner." You do as you are told while gingerly rubbing your butt as you go. You glance back when you hear the slap of flesh on flesh. It seems to be Anushka''s turn. She is laid out across Miss Volkov''s lap and getting her ass spanked as well. As time passes, you can hear Anushka moaning. She''s either pretending to like it or really enjoying it. Miss Volkov seems annoyed at this and spends considerably more time spanking Anushka''s already glowing ass than she did with you. Finally, she seems to grow tired of it and lifts Anushka off her lap. She points to to your corner and commands Nush, "Go join your friend."'
 				act 'Standing':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
+					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together. Your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while. However, neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner while naked with your butts on fire.'
 					act 'Rebel':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank4.jpg"></center>'
-						'After a while, Miss Volkov either loses interest in the both of you or forgets about the two naked teenage girls standing in her office. Either way, she stops paying attention to you two. Some time later Anushka gives you a quick grin and leans over to say something. When you lean closer a bit to hear, you are surprised as she kisses you instead, it''s soft quick kiss, but you can feel some real passion behind it. A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again. "Alright you two, get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
+						'After a while, Miss Volkov either loses interest in the both of you or forgets about the two naked teenage girls standing in her office. Either way, she stops paying attention to you two. Some time later Anushka gives you a quick grin and leans over to say something. When you lean closer a bit to hear what she has to say you are surprised as she kisses you instead. It''s soft quick kiss, but you can feel some real passion behind it. A couple of hours later, Miss Volkov finally speaks to you again, "Alright you two you can get dressed and go home. I don''t want to see you in here again."'
 						*nl
-						'With that you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again. As the two of you head out, Anushka asks you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to come by my place?"'
+						'With that you quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed again. As the two of you head out, Anushka asks you, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you want to come by my place?"'
 						act 'Can''t':
 							cla
-							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs, "Sure whatever."'
+							'You shake your head. "Sorry Nush, I have some things I need to do, but maybe some other time." Anushka shrugs and replies noncommittaly, "Sure... whatever..."'
 							act 'leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 						act 'Sure':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-							'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+							'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex, you both live at, and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								if anushkaFirstvisit = 0:
@@ -347,37 +347,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_teacher_arg'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As you are sitting at a table, bored out of your mind and waiting for detention to end, you look around a bit and notice that Anushka has snuck off into the book stacks. You can just barely see her between the books and the row above. Once she catches you looking she smiles, pulls up her shirt and flashes you her boobs, quickly followed by her motioning you over.'
+	'As you are sitting at a table, bored out of your mind and waiting for detention to end, you look around a bit to notice that Anushka has snuck off into the book stacks. You can just barely see her between the books and the row above. Once she catches you looking she smiles, pulls up her shirt and flashes you her boobs. This is quickly followed by her motioning you over.'
 	act 'Can''t risk it':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/detention.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look around and consider it but then decide it''s too risky. When she looks back over you shake your head to say no. You can tell she is disappointed and soon disappears somewhere among the book stacks. The rest of detention passes very slowly, you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
+		'You look around and consider it, but decide it''s too risky. When she looks back over you shake your head to say no. You can tell she is disappointed and soon disappears somewhere among the book stacks. The rest of detention passes very slowly and you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
 		act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 	act 'Might be fun':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big144.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look around and when you''re sure that there is no one watching, you get up and quickly slip in behind one of the shelves. You make your way over to where you saw Anushka, as you get close you spot her much further back in the library waving you on. You follow her to near the very back of the library, far away from where everyone else is. She gives you a grin that you are all too aware means she''s cooking up trouble. "<<$pcs_nickname>> lets have some fun."'
+		'You look around. When you''re sure that there is no one watching you get up and quickly slip in behind one of the shelves. You make your way over to where you saw Anushka. As you get close you spot her much further back in the library silently waving you on. You follow her to near the very back of the library which is far away from where everyone else is. She gives you a grin that you are all too aware means she''s cooking up trouble. "<<$pcs_nickname>> lets have some fun."'
 		act 'What kind of fun?':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-			'Her playfulness tone and obvious excitement is making you nervous. "What kind of fun?" You say as you glance back in the direction you came to make sure no one else is coming this way.'
-			'"The best kind of fun! The thrilling, exciting and risky kind, of course." You hear her say behind you, and as you turn back towards her, you see that her top is gone and you have no idea where it went. Her shorts are around her ankles and her panties are already around her knee''s. You are a completely stunned. Seriously, you only turned away for a moment, how the hell did she get naked so fast? Not just that, but why is she naked in the first place?! Huh, she must have a lot of practice speed stripping...'
+			'Her playful tone and her obvious excitement is making you nervous. "What kind of fun," You ask as you glance back in the direction you came to make sure no one else is coming this way.'
+			'"The best kind of fun! The thrilling, exciting, and risky kind of course," You hear her say behind you. As you turn back towards her you see that her top is gone and you have no idea where it went. Her shorts are around her ankles while her panties are already around her knees. You are a completely stunned. Seriously, you only turned away for a moment, so how in the hell did she get naked so fast? Not just that, but why is she naked in the first place? Huh... she must have a lot of practice speed stripping...'
 			*nl
-			'"Well come on, take your clothes off." She says, waiting and obviously expecting you to start stripping as well. You really have no idea what to expect from her, if even half the stuff you have heard is true, she might want to molest you, have you paint each other blue and howl at the moon or just swap clothes.'
+			'"Well come on and take your clothes off," she says, waiting, obviously expecting you to start stripping also. You really have no idea what to expect from her. Even if half the stuff you have heard is true she might want to molest you, have you paint each other blue then howl at the moon, or just swap clothes with each other.'
 			*nl
-			'As you just stand there lost in your own thoughts and gaping like a fish, she decides to clear things up a bit. "Come on, haven''t you ever wanted to run around the school naked before? It''s thrilling knowing you could be caught at any time." Yep, she clearly sounds like she has done this before and she''s right, it would actually be <i>very</i> easy to get caught, but then again it might be quite thrilling.'
+			'As you just stand there lost in your own thoughts and gaping like a fish, she decides to clear things up a bit. "Come on haven''t you ever wanted to run around the school naked before? It''s thrilling knowing you could be caught at any time." Yep, it she clearly sounds like she has done this before and she''s right. It would actually be <i>very</i> easy to get caught, but then again it might also be quite thrilling.'
 			act 'No I don''t think so':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] -= 5
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-				'You step back and shake your head. "Sorry but I just can''t do that, we might get caught."'
-				'Her grin fades a little. "That''s what makes it fun, come on!"'
-				'"Sorry I just can''t." Then you turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly, you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
+				'You step back and shake your head. "Sorry, but I just can''t do that since we might get caught."'
+				'Her grin fades a little. "That''s what makes it fun, so come on!"'
+				'"Sorry I just can''t." You turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly and you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
 				act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -390,9 +390,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked.jpg"></center>'
-					'You blush a little at the thought and bite your lip, it could be fun and you actually would like to, but what if you got caught? "I don''t know Nush, what if we get caught?"'
-					'She can see your reluctance but also your willingness. She steps up close and starts pulling your shirt up. "You worry too much <<$pcs_nickname>>, you got to live in the moment. Besides it''ll be so much fun."'
-					'As she pulls your shirt over your head, you nod your head slightly. "Ok lets do this." You say as you start taking off your clothes.'
+					'You blush a little at the thought and bite your lip. It could be fun and you actually would like to, but what if you got caught? "I don''t know Nush. What if we get caught?"'
+					'She can see your reluctance, but also your willingness. She steps up close and starts pulling your shirt up. "You worry too much <<$pcs_nickname>> and you''ve got to live in the moment. Besides it''ll be so much fun."'
+					'As she pulls your shirt over your head, you nod your head slightly. "Ok, lets do this," you say as you start taking off your clothes.'
 					act 'Get Naked': gt 'anushka', 'naked'
 				end
 			else
@@ -409,23 +409,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 	gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/getnaked2.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you start stripping off your clothes she steps out of her shorts and panties saying, "That''s the spirit, I knew you were a fun girl." Once the two of you are both naked she gathers up the clothes and stuffs them behind some books on the bottom shelf of one of the cases. She gives your naked body a quick look over before heading towards the library''s side door. "Come on, we have to go out this way."'
+	'As you start stripping off your clothes, she steps out of her shorts and panties saying, "That''s the spirit! I knew you were a fun girl." Once the two of you are both naked, she gathers up the clothes to stuff them behind some books on the bottom shelf of one of the bookcases. She gives your naked body a quick look over before heading towards the library''s side door. "Come on we have to go out this way."'
 	act 'Into the halls':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Halls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/halls.jpg"></center>'
-		'The two of you walk down the halls, Anushka seems completely at ease walking around without any clothes on. Apparently she really doesn''t care if anyone catches her naked, or hell maybe she would even enjoy it more. As you walk around a while longer, you start getting a bit more comfortable with the situation. The two of you talk about normal stuff, like what''s going on in school, any good movies you''ve watched and so on. Just then, you hear the noise of a machine being turned on and notice that the sound is getting closer.'
+		'As the two of you walk down the halls, Anushka seems completely at ease walking around without any clothes on. Apparently, she really doesn''t care if anyone catches her naked or hell, maybe she would even enjoy it more. As you walk around a while longer, you start getting a bit more comfortable with the situation. The two of you talk about normal stuff, like what''s going on in school, any good movies you''ve watched, and so on. Just then... you hear the noise of a machine being turned on and notice that the sound is getting closer.'
 		*nl
-		'"Shit, the janitor is buffing the floors already!" Anushka says as she looks around.'
-		'You try to cover yourself up and get ready to make a run for it, when Anushka grabs your hand and pulls you into one of the classrooms.'
+		'"Shit, the janitor is buffing the floors already," Anushka exclaims as she looks around.'
+		'You try to cover yourself up and get ready to make a run for it, but Anushka grabs your hand and pulls you into one of the classrooms.'
 		act 'Cornered':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly duck into the room and pull the door closed behind you. You can still hear the janitor slowly coming in your direction as he polishes the floors. Anuska leads you into the back corner of the classroom, where someone would need to come all the way in to see you. She pulls a poster off the wall and lays down it on the floor, before sitting on top of it.'
+			'You quickly duck into the room and pull the door closed behind you. You can still hear the janitor slowly coming in your direction as he polishes the floor. Anuska leads you into the back corner of the classroom. It''s where someone would need to come all the way into the room to see you. She pulls a poster off the wall and lays down it on the floor before sitting on top of it.'
 			*nl
-			'Not having much of a choice, with nowhere else to go, you sit down next to her. You notice she seems to be completely comfortable being naked, while you find yourself unconsciously using your hands to cover up. She pulls a joint out from behind her ear - you never even noticed it there - and lights it with the single match that was stuck in the end of the joint. When she sees your dumbfounded look, she gives you a quick smile, "I knew we were going to be running around naked and I wanted to bring it. So I prepared." She takes a long drag off the joint and then offers it to you.'
+			'You don''t have much of a choice, since there is nowhere else, you sit down next to her. You notice she seems to be completely comfortable being naked while you find yourself unconsciously using your hands to cover up. She pulls a joint out from behind her ear, which you never even noticed it there, and lights it with the single match that was stuck in the end of the joint. When she sees your dumbfounded look she gives you a quick smile. "I knew we were going to be running around naked and I wanted to bring it, so I prepared." She takes a long drag off the joint and then offers it to you.'
 			act 'Smoke the joint with her':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] += 1
@@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile and take it from her, taking a long drag from the joint. Maybe it will help take your mind off the thought of getting caught naked in a classroom by the school janitor. You pass it back and forth between you as you make small talk, listening to the machine steadily getting closer.'
+				'You smile and take it from her. You take a long drag from the joint. Maybe it will help take your mind off the thought of getting caught, by the school janitor, naked in a classroom. You pass it back and forth between you as you make small talk while listening to the machine steadily getting closer.'
 				act 'Wait for the janitor to pass': anushLimitedQuestions = 4 & gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'drugs', 'resist'
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head. "No thanks, I am paranoid enough about getting caught bare assed without adding to it even more." She snorts in mild amusement at your answer and just smokes it herself. While the two of you make small talk, you hear the machine getting steadily closer.'
+					'You shake your head. "No, thanks I am paranoid enough about getting caught bare-assed without its effects adding to the situation." She snorts in mild amusement at your answer and just smokes it herself. While the two of you make small talk you hear the machine getting steadily closer.'
 					act 'Wait for the janitor to pass': anushLimitedQuestions = 4 & gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			else
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 					end
 					'After a bit you get curious where she gets her clothes, it''s quite obvious that she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like the ones she wears and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush, where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
-					'She lifts an eyebrow at that, looks down at her naked body and then grins, causing you to laugh a bit as well. Her unspoken comment about you asking about her clothes while she is naked, is not lost on you. "Dolls, well... Patchwork Dolls to be exact near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
+					'She lifts an eyebrow at that. She looks down at her naked body and grins causing you to laugh a bit as well. Her unspoken comment about you asking about her clothes while she is naked is not lost on you. "Dolls, well... Patchwork Dolls to be exact near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
 					'"If you stop by, tell Savva or Viola I said they still owe me a round from last time." You nod that you will, though you have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you suppose that you will find out.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
@@ -499,10 +499,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'You know it can be a touchy subject but you are just too curious. "Um Nush, do you ever worry, you know - about your reputation?"'
-			'She laughs a bit. "Which one? Where I am a nympho? a slut? a whore? a lesbian? Or do you mean that I am a party girl that spends all her time getting drunk or stoned and wasting her life? Or maybe how I am the band whore? You will need to be a bit more specific there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-			'You pause a moment, at first afraid she might get pissed but she seems more amused than anything. "Uh all of it I guess." Not sure what else to say, since her rep is kinda based on all of that and more.'
-			'She shakes her head. "Nope not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways and the stuff that is, shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone, then I do. Because I like it." she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around, that''s not what makes me, <b>me.</b> All that is just parts of me, and I do what I want, that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who get that are my friends. The rest.... fuck''em."'
+			'You know it can be a touchy subject, but you are just too curious. "Um Nush, do you ever worry, you know... about your reputation?"'
+			'She laughs a bit. "Which one? Where I am a nympho? a slut? a whore? a lesbian? Or do you mean that I am a party girl that spends all her time getting drunk or stoned and wasting her life away? Or maybe how I am the band whore? You will need to be a bit more specific there <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You pause a moment, at first afraid she might get pissed, but she seems more amused than anything. "Uh all of it I guess." You''re not sure what else to say, since her rep is kinda based on all of that and more.'
+			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not even in the slightest. Half of it isn''t even true anyways and the stuff that is shouldn''t be an issue. If I feel like fucking someone then I do. Just Because I like it," she shrugs slightly before continuing. "While I party a lot and screw around that''s not what makes me, <b>me</b>. All that is just small parts of me. I do what I want and that makes <b>me</b> happy. Those who understand that are my friends. The rest.... well... fuck''em."'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 		end
 		
@@ -515,8 +515,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'Looking at her for a moment all naked like that, you just have to ask. "So what''s the deal with always getting naked? I mean I know of a few times and if even half the gossip is true this is a pretty normal state for you." You say with a bit of friendly ribbing.'
-			'Snorting a bit, she seems to think a moment and then shrug. "Honestly I don''t know, I am proud of my body, not ashamed of it. I don''t see why it should be a big thing anyways. Plus I like that thrill you get from doing something a little taboo and where you can get caught, I just love it! Like knowing the janitor is going to be passing by this room shortly, maybe coming in and catching us without a stitch on us." She bites her lower lip a moment and looks mildly turned on. "I just love the thrill of almost getting caught or actually getting caught."'
+			'Looking at her for a moment, all naked like that, you just have to ask, "So what''s the deal with always getting naked? I mean I know of a few times and if even half the gossip is true this is a pretty normal state for you." You add a bit of friendly ribbing to your tone.'
+			'Snorting a bit, she seems to think a moment then shrugs. "Honestly I don''t know. I am proud of my body and not ashamed of it. I don''t see why it should be a big thing anyways. Plus, I like thrill that you get from doing something that''s a little taboo, where you can get caught, I just love it! Like knowing the janitor is going to be passing by this room shortly, maybe coming in to catch us without a stitch on." She bites her lower lip a moment and looks mildly turned on. "I just love the thrill of almost getting caught or actually getting caught."'
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 		end		
 
@@ -529,15 +529,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 !!ToDo: Is anushHearband set?
 			if bandpracticeinvite = 0:
 				bandpracticeinvite = 1
-				'"How is the band going?" you ask her.'
-				'Nodding a little she says. "Pretty good, you should come by and hear us play."'
-				'"Yeah that sounds great." You tell her.'
-				'"Nice, I will text you the next time we practice and you can come check us out. I think, well, I hope you''ll like our music. We are not as good as Rad likes to think we are but we are getting there." She takes down your phone number so she can text you in the future.'
+				'"How is the band going," you ask her.'
+				'Nodding a little she says. "Pretty good, but you should come by and hear us play."'
+				'"Yeah that sounds great," you tell her.'
+				'"Nice, I will text you the next time we practice, so you can come check us out. I think, well, I hope you''ll like our music. We are not as good as Rad likes to think we are, but we are getting there." She adds your phone number to her cell phone, so she can text you in the future.'
 			else
-				'"The band still going well?"'
-				'She lights up a bit. "Yeah we''re working on a semi permanent gig at a place where we will get to play every week, which would be awesome. You should totally come by some more of our practices or come to one of the shows, you can help out and be our roadie. You know, help us carry the heavy shit and get all set up and then break it all down again."'
-				'You nod to her. "Sounds good, let me know the next time and if I have time I will help out."'
-				'She gives you a quick sideways hug and you feel her breast push against the side of your arm. "Sweet, I will text you when we have our next gig and when we practice of course, so you can come listen."'
+				'"Is the band still going well?"'
+				'She lights up a bit. "Yeah, we''re working on a semi permanent gig at a place where we will get to play every week which would be awesome. You should totally come by to some more of our practices. Better yet, come to one of the shows. You could help out and be our roadie. You know, help us carry the heavy shit, get all set up, then break it all down again."'
+				'You nod to her. "Sounds good, but let me know the next time. If I have time I will help out."'
+				'She gives you a quick sideways hug and you can feel her breast push against the side of your arm. "Sweet... Of course, I will text you when we have our next gig or practice. That way you can come listen."'
 			end
 !!ToDo: A flag probably needs to be set here to keep track of Nush having Svetas number.
 			act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
@@ -548,26 +548,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			anushLimitedQuestions -= 1
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You know she is seeing some guys and girls, it is not really a secret. Not sure if you should even ask but you are curious. "So do you have a boyfriend? Or girlfriend?"'
-			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not really looking. I am young and carefree. I plan to - as they say - sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you, if that right person came along and just blew me away, then I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment and then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? You wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
-			'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and she makes it sound so dirty and exciting at the same time. But did you mean that?'
+			'You know that she is seeing some guys and girls, so it is not really a secret. You''re not sure if you should even ask, but you are curious. "Do you have a boyfriend? Or even girlfriend?"'
+			'She shakes her head. "Nope, not really looking right now. I''m young and carefree. I plan to, as they say, sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you. If that right person came along and just blew me away I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? Are you wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
+			'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and makes it sound so dirty, yet, so exciting at the same time. Did she mean that?'
 			act 'Maybe':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/scnakiss.jpg"></center>'
-				'You feel put on the spot, that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously that is why you asked. Either way a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess maybe, I have been thinking about it a bit."'
-				'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction, not sure you want to know it, but then you feel her place a finger under your chin and raise it up till you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face and you find yourself looking into her eyes. Then, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, not a lustful one, or not much, but something deeper and with more meaning. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you - all you know is that the kiss is amazing.'
+				'You feel put on the spot since that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously it is why you asked. Either way, a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess... maybe I have been thinking about it a bit."'
+				'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction and you''re not sure you want to know it. You feel her place a finger under your chin to raise it up until you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face. You find yourself looking into her eyes. The two of you have your lips meet and kiss. It''s a deep long passionate kiss. It''s not a lustful one, or at least there isn''t much lust, but it''s something deeper. This kiss holds more meaning than any words that could have passed between you two. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you... all you know is that the kiss was amazing.'
 				*nl
-				'Finally the kiss ends, both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back and sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. Then gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking but then again I''m not against the idea. So let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
+				'Finally, the kiss ends and both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back then sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. She gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking, but then again I''m not against the idea. Let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 			end
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head, this conversation really went off the rails and not at all what you meant. "No. I mean I like you, but not like that, not that-" She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on and seems amused by your response.'
-				'"It''s fine, I was just yanking your chain. I like things just how they are too."'
+				'You shake your head because this conversation really went off the rails and is not at all what you meant. "No, I mean I like you, but not like that... not that..." She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on. She seems amused by your response.'
+				'"It''s fine. I was just yanking your chain. I like things just how they are too."'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 			end
 			act 'I have a boyfriend':
@@ -581,31 +581,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
 					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Niko" You tell her.'
-					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, just... just be careful with him.'
+					'"Niko," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life do what you want. Just... just be careful with him.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
 					if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Fedor" You tell her.'
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Fedor," you tell her.'
 						'She arches a slender brow obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school."'
-						'You frown at her, you expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, those criminals where going to take everything form his family and he couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
-						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay, I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you." She says obviously trying to make peace.'
+						'You frown at her. You expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, because those criminals where going to take everything from his family. He couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
+						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay. I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you," she says, obviously, trying to make peace.'
 						'You nod accepting her apology of sorts and you both let the topic drop.'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 					else
 						if hotcat >= 5:
-							'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+							'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 							'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-							'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-							'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'Then she laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like an Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face. You realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it," She asks with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" As you think about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome," she asks as she winks as she makes a kissy face at you.'
 							act 'Maybe':
 								*clr & cla
 								minut += 5
@@ -613,8 +613,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
+								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it then I''ll talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
 								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 							end
@@ -625,9 +625,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun." You tell her.'
-								'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree, he is a guy after all."'
-								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah most likely and I''ll let you know what he says."'
+								'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure, yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks it could be fun," you tell her.'
+								'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways, I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree. He is a guy after all."'
+								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah, most likely, so I''ll let you know what he says."'
 								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 							end
@@ -636,49 +636,49 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 								minut += 5
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-								'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
+								'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
+								'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
 								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 							end
 						else
 							'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-							'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-							'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-							'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-							'Then she laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style and talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah take my big dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>, take it." Then she switches to a girly voice trying to sound like you. "Yes, yes Fedor fuck me with your big dick, YES!" Then she burst out laughing and you can''t help but join in.'
+							'She grins at you. "Right and who are you dating again?"'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help, but to join in.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 					end
 				elseif kotovLoveQW = 1:
 					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Vitek" You tell her.'
-					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, but doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time, with how much she talks about how great he is, at least when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something." She says with a smirk, you roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Vitek," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah... yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." She notices your facial expression from her bad mouthing your boyfriend, so she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life, so do what you want. Doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time because of how much she talks about how great he is. At least, when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something," she says with a smirk. You roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				elseif artQW = 3 or artQW = 10 or artQW = 20:
 					if hotcat >= 5:
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Artem" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
 						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking, so is he?"'
-						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Then seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah he is pretty good at it, good enough anyways."'
-						'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement, sure that strokes his ego." She says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself, do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking?"'
+						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah, he is pretty good at it... good enough anyways."'
+						'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement. I''m sure that strokes his ego," she says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself. Do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
 						act 'Maybe':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
+							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
@@ -688,9 +688,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun. But he is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say." You tell her.'
-							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy, all boys want to fuck as much as they can, two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, I doubt he is any different. Besides maybe I can teach him a new trick or two for you." She says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
-							'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him, if he would like to."'
+							'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure... yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks because it could be fun. He is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say," you tell her.'
+							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy and all boys want to fuck as much as they can. Having sex with two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, so I doubt he is any different. Besides, maybe, I can teach him a new trick or two for you," she says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
+							'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him if he would like to."'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
@@ -699,40 +699,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-							'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
+							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine," you tell her with a grin.'
+							'She makes a tsking sound. "Too bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 					else
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Artem" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
+						'You tell her, "You do know I have a boyfriend."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah... ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
 						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah, sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
 						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "What? Why would you ask that?"'
-						'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D or something like that."'
-						'You shake your head. "No we don''t, we make love."'
-						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh and talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
+						'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D, or something like that."'
+						'You shake your head. "No, we don''t, because we make love."'
+						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh then talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
 					end
 				elseif Rex_Love = 1:
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Rex" You tell her.'
-					'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. Then it seems she thinks of him. "Wait isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
-					'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah that''s him."'
-					'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years old?" She asks, obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
-					'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party." You tell her and then add. "Ok he is friends with my sister and she invited me to his party and thats when we meet." Then you talk about the night you meet him and your first date.'
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Rex," you tell her.'
+					'"Who," She asks as she cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. It seems that she thinks of him. "Wait, isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
+					'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah, that''s him."'
+					'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years older than you," she asks obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
+					'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party" You tell her then you add, "Ok, he is friends with my sister. She invited me to his party and that''s where we met." You talk about the night you met him and your first date.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				else
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"<<$boyfriend>>" You tell her.'
-					'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
-					'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him, he is just this guy I meet."'
-					'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you meet huh?" You laugh and then tell her about him.'
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"<<$boyfriend>>," you tell her.'
+					'"Who?" She asks, asshe cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
+					'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him. I just met him."'
+					'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you met huh?" You laugh then tell her about him.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				end
@@ -746,10 +746,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				anushAskedofAlyona = 1		
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You have heard some messed up things about Alyona and you know she is friends with Anushka and your curious. "You''re friends with Alyona right?" You ask and when she nods yes. "So how is she doing?"'
-				'Anushka''s eyes narrow ever so slightly and her tone takes on a cooler lot less playful edge to it. "Why?"'
-				'You rarely see Anushka not in a good mood but her body language and tone suggest you should tread carefully on this subject. "I was just curious, I heard some stuff and wanted to know if she was alright is all."'
-				'She looks at you a moment and then softens a bit. "She''s has a fucked up life, more fucked up than anyone I know. She is dealing and getting by well enough considering."'
+				'You have heard some messed up things about Alyona. You, also, know she is friends with Anushka, so you''re curious. "You''re friends with Alyona right?" You ask her. She nods yes back. "How is she doing?"'
+				'Anushka''s eyes narrow ever so slightly and her tone takes on a cooler, lot less playful, edge to it, "Why?"'
+				'You rarely see Anushka not in a good mood, but her body language and tone suggest that you should tread carefully on this subject. "I was just curious, because I heard some stuff and I wanted to know if she was alright is all."'
+				'She looks at you a moment then softens a bit. "She''s has a fucked up life and it''s more fucked up than anyone I know. She is dealing with it and getting by well enough considering."'
 				act 'Let it drop': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				act 'Is it that bad?':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -757,8 +757,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
 					'You know this might be a bad call but you want to know. "Is it really that bad?"'
-					'She arches her brows at you as if to say are you serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself but she would like blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is a abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad, so yeah. It''s really that bad. So just drop it."'
-					'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare, you change the subject.'
+					'She arches her brows at you as if to ask if you are serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself, but she would likely blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is a abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious, is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad... so yeah. It''s really that bad, So just drop it."'
+					'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare you change the subject.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 			end		
@@ -771,17 +771,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 				anushAskedGrad = 1	
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Curious about her plans for the future, you decide to ask what she plans to do once school is over. "Once we graduate what do you plan to do? Focus on the band more?"'
-				'"Sorta, I mean I plan to keep playing with the band and hopefully we can make it. But I am not going to depend on that, I plan to also go to the University in the city as well. So I have a back-up plan, in case the band never takes off."'
-				'You are a bit surprised, you always heard she was doing bad like all the gopniks. "Oh... I didn''t know you were doing that good in school."'
-				'She laughs a bit at that. "Yeah everyone is surprised by that, but I checked what grades I needed to go to the University and I make sure mine stay above that. So yeah, I am a smart bitch as well as a good looking one. What about you?"'
+				'Curious about her plans for the future, you decide to ask what she plans to do once school is over, "Once we graduate, what do you plan to do? Are you going to focus on the band more?"'
+				'"Sorta, I mean I plan to keep playing with the band and hopefully we can make it big. However, I am not going to depend on that, so I plan to also go to the University in the city as well. I have a back-up plan in case the band never takes off."'
+				'You are a bit surprised, since you always heard she was doing bad like all the other gopniks. "Oh... I didn''t know you were doing that good in school."'
+				'She laughs a bit at that. "Yeah, everyone is surprised by that, but I checked what grades I needed to go to the University. I make sure mine stay above that. Yeah, I am a smart bitch as well as a good looking one. What about you?"'
 				act 'I don''t know':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I''m not sure, I have a few options I guess." You tell her.'
-					'She nods a bit. "Well you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. Unless that''s what you want, not judging just saying."'
-					'Not sure what more to say about it, you decided to change the subject.'
+					'"I''m not so sure, but I have a few options I guess," you tell her.'
+					'She nods a bit. "Well, you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. That is, unless, that''s what you want. I''m not judging, but I''m just saying."'
+					'You''re not sure what more to say about it, so you decided to change the subject.'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 				act 'Go to the University':
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/'+iif(rand(0,1) = 0, 'weed', 'hiding')+'.jpg"></center>'
 					'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. Now I will know someone there for sure."'
-					'She gets thoughtful for a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates then when we go. As you said then we would know someone and we already get along. But lets talk about it some more when the time comes and decide then."'
+					'She gets thoughtful for a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates when we go. As you said, we would know someone and we already get along. Let''s talk about it some more when the time comes and we can decide then."'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
 				act 'Get married':
@@ -812,9 +812,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 						$boyfriend_temp = $boyfriend
 					end
 					
-					'You sigh in a way only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully <<$boyfriend_temp>> and I can get married soon."'
-					'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and then shrugs. "Well best of luck with that."'
-					'Not sure what more to say on the topic you decided to change it.'
+					'You sigh in a way that only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully, <<$boyfriend_temp>> and I can get married soon."'
+					'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and shrugs. "Well, best of luck with that."'
+					'You are not sure what more to say on the topic you decided to change it.'
 					killvar '$boyfriend_temp'
 					act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatwhilewaiting'
 				end
@@ -827,16 +827,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatwhilewaiting':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hallcheck.jpg"></center>'
 			'You start to say something more when she raises her hand to stop you. "You hear that?"'
-			'You listen and don''t hear anything at all. "No I don''t hear anything."'
-			'She grins at you. "Yeah means the janitor has moved on, so we can head out. Come on lets go." She gets up and heads for the door, she opens it slowly and then looks out both ways checking to see if it is clear. Then she steps out and hurries down the hall, with you just behind her.'
+			'You listen and don''t hear anything at all. "No, I don''t hear anything."'
+			'She grins at you. "Yeah that means the janitor has moved on, so we can head out. Come on, lets go." She gets up and heads for the door. She opens it slowly then looks out both ways checking to see if it is clear. She steps out and hurries down the hall with you following just behind her.'
 			*nl
-			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library, sneaking back in the way you left. Heading back to where you stashed your clothes the two of you start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on, the bell that signals detention is over starts ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "Perfect timing, as always. See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
+			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library to sneak back in the way you left. You both head back to where you stashed your clothes and you both start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on the bell that signals detention is over begins ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "That''s perfect timing as always. I''ll see you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
 			'With that the two of you leave school.'
 			act 'Can''t today': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			act 'Go with Anushka':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-				'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her families apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+				'The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'anushapt', 'firstvisit'
 			end
 		end
@@ -847,7 +847,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'meet_after_school':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You find Anushka waiting just outside the doors of school for you. "You ready?" She asks and you nod your head yes. The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her families apartment and takes you into the living room.'
+	'You find Anushka waiting just outside the doors of school for you. "Are you ready," she asks and you nod your head yes. The two of you walk back to the apartment complex and to her building. You go up to the fourth floor where she leads you into her family''s apartment and takes you into the living room.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'anushapt', 'firstvisit'
 end
 

locations/anushkachat.qsrc

@@ -24,40 +24,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So you and Rad use to date huh?" You ask her.'
-			'She sighs, looks at you a moment, you can tell this isn''t something she is to keen on talking about. "Yeah when I was young and dumb, right after they started their band, I started hanging out with them. Val told me about him and Rad starting a band and invited me to come listen to them."'
-			'You just nod as you listen as she continues. "Anyways they was kinda crap honestly back then, could barely play and the lyrics where awful, they mostly just did covers to practice back then." She pauses a moment as if remembering what it was like. "Even back then Rad was a decent singer a bit raw but you could hear the natural talent. He use to look at me, with that look. The ones boys give you when they really want you, back then it felt amazing to be looked at that way, now I know what that look really means." She finishes with a frown.'
-			'You prod her a little. "Then what?"'
-			'"Well he was already a bit of a bad boy even then, plus he was the lead singer of a band which was hot, and he payed attention to me the way young girls want guys to pay attention to them." She says with a laugh and shakes her head. "God I was so stupid back then. When he asked me out I agreed and we started dating and I became their number one fan."'
+			'"You and Rad use to date huh," you ask her.'
+			'She sighs and looks at you a moment, so you can tell this isn''t something she is too keen on talking about. "Yeah, when I was young and dumb. I started hanging out with them right after they started their band. Val told me about Rad and him starting a band. He invited me to come listen to them."'
+			'You just nod as you listen as she continues. "Anyways, they were kinda crap honestly back then, since they could barely play while the lyrics were awful. They mostly just did covers to practice with back then." She pauses a moment as if remembering what it was like. "Even back then, Rad was a decent singer, a bit on the raw, but you could hear the natural talent. He use to look at me with that look. It was the one that boys would give you when they really want you. Back then it felt amazing to be looked at that way, but now I know what that look really means," she finishes with a frown.'
+			'You prod her a little. "What happened next?"'
+			'"Well he was already a bit of a bad boy even then, plus he was the lead singer of a band which was hot. He paid attention to me in the way young girls want guys to pay attention to them," she says with a laugh and shakes her head, "God, I was so stupid back then. When he asked me out I agreed then we started dating. I ended up becoming their number one fan."'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-				'Then she sighs a bit. "At first everything was great, I already knew how to play guitar myself and we talked about that and I helped teaching him what I knew from my dad and he taught me what he knew and we both got better. I also helped him write original songs for the band. In time I asked him if I could join and he let me try out. Rad and Val agreed, shit head didn''t." Noticing the look on your face to her shit head comment she adds. "The bands previous drummer, a real asshole."'
-				'You get curious. "How was he a asshole? I mean other than not wanting you in the band?" You ask.'
-				'"It is hard to explain, he was always harping about me being in the band and that Rad spent to much time with me. It was like he was against us from the start but him trying to split us up only made our relationship grow tighter." She says obviously trying to explain it, but seems a bit unsure how to.'
-				'You nod. "Ok so being in the band caused you guys to break up?"'
-				'She gives you a confused look for a moment. "What? No, actually at first things where better than ever between Rad and me."'
-				'"So then what happened?" You press her a bit more.'
-				'She gives a loud sigh and you can tell she is starting to get annoyed talking about it. "Then we actual started to make a name for ourselves and I don''t just mean with the local kids, but we started to playing at some parties, at the time we just got free booze, drugs and got to hang out with older kids, even played at some of the underground parties as a opening act."'
+				'She sighs a bit, "At first, everything was great, because I already knew how to play guitar myself. We talked about that and I helped teaching him what I knew from my dad. He taught me what he knew and we both got better. I also helped him write original songs for the band. In time, I asked him if I could join, so he let me try out. Rad and Val agreed, shit head didn''t." She notices the look on your face to her shit head comment she adds, "He was the bands previous drummer. He was a real asshole."'
+				'You get curious. "How was he an asshole? I mean other than not wanting you in the band," you ask.'
+				'"It is hard to explain, but he was always harping about me being in the band and that Rad spent too much time with me. It was like he was against us from the start, but with him trying to split us up it only made our relationship grow tighter," she says obviously trying to explain it, but seems a bit unsure how to express herself.'
+				'You nod. "Ok, so being in the band caused you guys to break up?"'
+				'She gives you a confused look for a moment. "What? No, actually, at first things where better than ever between Rad and me."'
+				'"What happened then," you press her a bit more.'
+				'She gives a loud sigh, so you can tell that she''s starting to get annoyed talking about it. "We actually started to make a name for ourselves. I just don''t mean with the local kids, but we started to playing at some parties. At the time we just got free booze, drugs, and got to hang out with older kids. We even played at some of the underground parties as a opening act."'
 				act 'Go on':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-					'She frowns at you as you prod her even more to go on. "That''s when it started, suddenly I had guys hitting on me all the time even guys several years older who before never payed me any attention before. The girls was doing the same with the boys, but I didn''t care, Rad and I was together."'
-					'You can tell she is starting to get visible upset and not angry, but like maybe she actually might be on the verge of crying. Then she takes a deep breath calming breath and gets herself back under control and her vulnerable moment passes. "It was after one of the underground parties we played at. After we was done, we joined in with the dancing and partying, then I noticed Rad wasn''t anywhere to be seen. So I went to look for him... Yeah I found him fucking some other chick." Now she seems to be more angry again with saying that. "We fought, he said he was sorry and wouldn''t do it anymore and I forgave him. God I was so fucking stupid." She says harshly.'
-					'"But he didn''t stop I caught him several more times with different sluts always. I kept taking him back and forgiving him, then... then he has the nerve to fucking dump me, fucking asshole. Says it is what is best for the band." Then she goes quiet for a moment and looks kinda sad.'
-					'"In the end he was right, we should have never dated and should have broke up sooner. It was a good PR move for the band if we both are single to create the fantasy that our fans have a chance with us. It took me awhile to come to that realization." She says shaking her head.'
+					'She frowns at you as you prod her even more for her go on. "That''s when it started. Suddenly, I had guys hitting on me all the time even guys several years older. They had never before paid me any attention before. The girls were doing the same with the boys, but I didn''t care. Rad and I were together."'
+					'You can tell she is starting to get visibly upset, but not angry. It''s like she might actually be on the verge of crying. She takes a deep, calming breath to get herself back under control. Her vulnerable moment passes. "It happened after one of the underground parties we played at. After we was done, we joined in with the dancing and partying. I noticed Rad wasn''t anywhere to be seen, so I went to look for him... Yeah I found him fucking some other chick." Now she seems to be angry with saying that, "We fought over him cheating on me. He said he was sorry and wouldn''t do it anymore, so I forgave him. God, I was so fucking stupid," she says harshly.'
+					'"However, he didn''t stop because I always caught him several more times with different sluts. I kept taking him back and forgiving him. He had the nerve to fucking dump me that fucking asshole. He says it is what is best for the band." She goes quiet for a moment while looking kinda sad.'
+					'"In the end he was right. We should have never dated and should have broken up sooner. It was a good PR move for the band if we both are single to create the fantasy that our fans having a chance with us. It took me awhile to come to that realization," she says shaking her head.'
 					act 'Then what':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'"We fought all the fucking time, but Val convinced me to stay in the bad, Rad wanted me to stay too. But it made shithead leave, which likely is the best thing to come out of Rad and me dating, cause then we found Arkadi."'
-						'You are a bit confused if he dumped her why they still hook up. "If you guys broke up, why are you still hooking up?"'
-						'She shrugs a bit. "I got over it. I forgave him, we was both young and stupid. Now we are just friends and he is still a good fuck so why not." She says with a smile, but you are unconvinced that is all there is but then she changes the subject to a song she recently heard she liked, obviously not wanting to talk about it more.'
+						'"We fought all the fucking time, but Val convinced me to stay in the bad and Rad wanted me to stay too. However, it made shithead leave which, likely, is the best thing to come out of Rad and myself dating. ''Cause we found Arkadi then."'
+						'You are a bit confused if he dumped her then why they still hook up. "Why are you still hooking up if you guys broke up?"'
+						'She shrugs a bit. "I got over it. I forgave him, but we were both young and stupid. Now we are just friends and he is still a good fuck so why not," she says with a smile, but you are unconvinced that is all there is. She changes the subject to a song she recently heard and she liked. She''s, obviously, not wanting to talk about it any more.'
 						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					end
@@ -72,15 +72,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So whats the deal with you and Rad, you guys serious or something?" You ask her.'
+			'"What''s the deal with you and Rad? Are you guys serious or something," you ask her.'
 			'She gives you a what do you mean look. "What are you talking about?"'
-			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well guys are hooking up, but is that it or is there something more?" You ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind it doesn''t matter. But no we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
-			'You get the feeling she is holding something back. "So nothing serious then? No chance of you guys becoming a couple?"'
-			'Her smile completely disappears and you feel like you have touched on a touchy subject. "No." She pauses a moment before continuing. "We use to date, but things didn''t work out, so we broke up."'
-			'You get the feeling she really doesn''t want to talk about it, but you are also now curious what happened.'
+			'You smile to her knowing that she is having sex with him. "Well, you guys are hooking up, but is that just it or is there something more," you ask.'
+			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind it doesn''t matter, but no, we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
+			'You get the feeling she is holding something back. "There''s nothing serious then? No chance of you guys becoming a couple?"'
+			'Her smile completely disappears and you feel like you have touched on a sore subject. "No," she pauses a moment before continuing, "We used to date, but things didn''t work out. We ended up breaking up."'
+			'You get the feeling she really doesn''t want to talk about it, but you are also now curious about what happened.'
 			if radspy = 1 and valspy =1: 
-				'You also wonder if the reason she doesn''t want to talk about it is, because she is sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin, and if that causes problems with the band.'
+				'You also wonder if the reason she doesn''t want to talk about it is, because she is sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin. Does that cause problems with the band?'
 				act 'Problems in the band': gt 'anushkachat', 'radval'
 			end
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -93,14 +93,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So whats the deal with you and Val, you guys serious or something?" You ask her.'
-			'She gives you a what do you mean look. "What are you talking about?"'
-			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well guys are hooking up, but is that it or is there something more?" You ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no, but smiles at the question. "No we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
-			'"So nothing serious then? Then why hook up? I mean he is ok looking." You comment.'
-			'She giggles at that. "Well first he is just fun to hang out with and second he has a huge dick. He always leaves my pussy and ass aching but in a good way." She says with a grin, while she pretends like she is holding one massive dick. You both laugh at that and then she tells you about some of the times she and Val has hooked up before.'
+			'"What''s the deal with you and Val? Are you guys serious or something," you ask her.'
+			'She gives you a what-do-you-mean look. "What are you talking about?"'
+			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well, you guys are hooking up, but is that it or is there something more," you ask.'
+			'She shakes her head no, but smiles at the question. "No, we are just friends and occasionally fuck is all."'
+			'"So nothing serious then? Why just hook up? I mean he is ok looking," you comment.'
+			'She giggles at that. "Well, first, he is just fun to hang out with and second he has a huge dick. He always leaves my pussy and ass aching, but in a good way," she says with a grin while she pretends like she is holding one massive dick. You both laugh at that. She tells you about some of the times that she and Val has hooked up before.'
 			if radspy = 1 and valspy =1: 
-				'After that you can''t help but wonder if her sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin causes problems with the band.'
+				'After that, you can''t help but wonder if her sleeping with both Radomir and Valentin causes problems with the band.'
 				act 'Problems in the band': gt 'anushkachat', 'radval'
 			end
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -113,19 +113,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"So whats the deal with you and Marcus, I didn''t know you guys was friend let alone, you know..." You say to her.'
-			'She arches a slender brow. "What do you mean, you know?"'
-			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well guys are hooking up right? Or is it something more serious?" You ask.'
-			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind it doesn''t matter. We''re not, friends that is, not really. He is ok I guess."'
+			'"What''s the deal with you and Marcus? I didn''t know you guys were friends let alone... you know...," you say to her.'
+			'She arches a slender brow. "What do you mean?"'
+			'You smile to her knowing she is having sex with him. "Well, you guys are hooking up right? Is it something more serious," you ask.'
+			'She shakes her head no. "Where did you hear that? Never mind because it doesn''t matter. We''re not friends that is... not really. He is ok I guess."'
 			*nl
-			'You get a bit confused by that. "Then why are you hooking up, if you''re not friends?"'
-			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo, you know how people are. He''s black, he''s a American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong, both just makes it doubly taboo. Which makes it fucking hot, not to mention he has a big fucking dick."'
-			'You nod in agreement, he does have a big dick, least what you have seen of it. "So it''s just because he has a big dick and is black?"'
-			'She shrugs slightly. "Yeah pretty much, I mean just thinking about getting ploughed by his big black dick is making me horny again." She says with a laugh but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused again.'
+			'You get a bit confused by that. "Why are you hooking up if you''re not friends?"'
+			'She laughs. "Because it''s taboo and you know how people are. He''s black... he''s an American. Either would be enough for people to think it is wrong. but both just makes it doubly taboo. That makes it fucking hot and not to mention he has a big fucking dick."'
+			'You nod in agreement, he does have a big dick, least what you have seen of it. "Is it just because he has a big dick and is black?"'
+			'She shrugs slightly. "Yeah pretty much, I mean just thinking about getting ploughed by his big black dick is making me horny again," she says with a laugh, but you can tell she really is starting to get aroused again.'
 			*nl
-			'You laugh. "Ok, ok I get it, big black dicks make you horny."'
-			'She shakes her head slightly. "It''s not just that, or I should say only that. It is about everyone saying it''s wrong. It is the same reason I like fucking other chicks, or getting naked. Breaking the rules and rubbing it in their narrow minded faces is a huge turn on. I mean fuck what society thinks or wants us to think or how to act. The more people tell me good girls shouldn''t do this or that, the more I want to fucking do it. I say break all the fucking rules and live free."'
-			'You only nod at that, you know Anushka is a bit of a anarchist at heart, so not a surprise breaking social norms turns her on.'
+			'You laugh. "Ok, ok, I get it. Big black dicks are what makes you horny."'
+			'She shakes her head slightly. "It''s not just that or I should say only that. It is also about everyone saying it''s wrong. It is the same reason that I like fucking other chicks or getting naked. Breaking the rules and rubbing it in their narrow minded faces is a huge turn on. I mean fuck what society thinks or wants us to think or how to act. The more people tell me good girls shouldn''t do this or that is the more I want to fucking do it. I say break all the fucking rules and live free."'
+			'You only nod at that. You know Anushka is a bit of a anarchist at heart, so it''s not a surprise breaking social norms turns her on.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			if OluQW['sex'] = 1 and OluQW['nush_inv'] = 0:
@@ -135,14 +135,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					OluQW['nush_inv'] = 1
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-					'You grin like the cat that just ate the canary and she looks at you a little strange and then says. "What? Why are you looking like you have a big juicy secret? Come on tell me!" She demands'
-					'You keep grinning. "Well I kinda get it, I hooked up with a really and I mean really big black guy." You hold your hands apart, to show roughly how big Olu is.'
-					'She looks a bit surprised. "That''s even bigger than Marcus and he is the biggest guy I have ever been with. So where did you meet this Olu?"'
-					'"He is my Aunts boyfriend." You can see her surprised look at that but you hold up her hand to stop her from saying anything. "My Aunt knows, they have a open relationship and the are both ok with him hooking up with other girls and they are ok with it being me."'
+					'You grin like the cat that just ate the canary. She looks at you a little strange and asks, "What? Why are you looking like you have a big juicy secret? Come on tell me!"'
+					'You keep grinning. "Well, I kinda get it. I hooked up with a really big black guy. I mean a really, really big black guy." You hold your hands apart to show roughly how big Olu is.'
+					'She looks a bit surprised. "That''s even bigger than Marcus and he is the biggest guy I have ever been with. Where did you meet this Olu?"'
+					'"He is my Aunt''s boyfriend." You can see her surprised look at that, but you hold up her hand to stop her from saying anything. "My Aunt knows because they have a open relationship. They are both ok with him hooking up with other girls. They are, also, okay with it being me."'
 					'Anushka giggles at that. "Wow and I thought my family was weird."'
-					'You give her a sly look and ignore the weird family comment. "So would you want to give it a go, biggest you ever seen?" You ask her.'
-					'She laughs a bit more. "Yeah... sure why not. Next time you go see him send me a text and I might come over and give him a go."'
-					'After that the two of you start talking about some other boys and how well hung they are.'
+					'You give her a sly look and ignore the weird family comment. "Wwould you want to give it a go? It''ll be the biggest you have ever seen," you ask her.'
+					'She laughs a bit more. "Yeah... sure why not. Next time you go see him just send me a text and I might come over to give him a go."'
+					'After that, the two of you start talking about some other boys and how well hung they are.'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 				end
@@ -155,14 +155,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Seeing her clothes in the room, some hanging up, others draped over chairs a few laying on the floor. They are all of a similar style. After a bit you get curious about where she gets her clothes, it is obvious she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like she wears and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
-			'"Dolls, well Patchwork Dolls to be exact. Near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
+			'Seeing her clothes in the room with some hanging up there are others draped over chairs while a few are laying on the floor. They are all of a similar style. After a bit, you get curious about where she gets her clothes since it''s obvious she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like she wears and you rarely even see them much in the city. "Hey Nush, where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
+			'"Dolls, well, Patchwork Dolls to be exact. It''s near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
 			if Anush_dolls = 0:
 				Anush_dolls = 2
-				'"If you stop by, tell Savva or Viola I said they still owe me a round from last time." You nod that you will, though you have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you will find out you suppose.'
+				'"If you stop by tell Savva or Viola that I said they still owe me a round from the last time." You nod that you will. You have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you will find out you suppose.'
 			else
 				Anush_dolls = 2
-				'You tell her you''ve been there before and she says, "Next time you''re there tell them they still owe me a round."'
+				'You tell her you''ve been there before, so she says, "Next time you''re there tell them that they still owe me a round."'
 			end
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -174,13 +174,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		bandpracticeinvite = 1
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'The two of you sit close to each other; "I''ve heard a lot about your band. Most people tell me you''re really good."'
-		'"I guess so. Most the lyrics are written by me, so of course we''re good." Anushka replies nonchalantly. You roll your eyes a bit at her reply. Anushka''s is always like this.'
-		'"I would really like to watch you play sometime. Are you doing any gigs soon?" you ask.'
+		'The two of you sit close to each other. "I''ve heard a lot about your band. Most people tell me that you''re really good."'
+		'"I guess so. Of course we''re good because most the lyrics are written by me," Anushka replies nonchalantly. You roll your eyes a bit at her reply. Anushka''s is always like this.'
+		'"I would really like to watch you play sometime. Are you doing any gigs soon," you ask.'
 		*nl
-		'"That would be great, we usually have lots of fun at the gigs, they''re so energetic. Especially when the crowd gets going. The after parties are a lot of fun too, especially if you like to party. Yeah, you should definitely come by, I''m sure you wouldn''t regret it. Or you could come to one of our practices if you just want to hear us play and hang out."'
+		'"That would be great because we usually have lots of fun at the gigs. They''re so energetic, especially when the crowd gets going. The after parties are also a lot of fun too, especially if you like to party. Yeah, you should definitely come by, I''m sure you wouldn''t regret it. You could also come to one of our practices if you just want to hear us play and just hang out."'
 		'You nod. "Where do you practice?"'
-		'Anushka laughs a bit. "Rad somehow managed to get ahold of one of those old garages at the end of the courtyard and we converted into a place we can play." She explains roughly where it is, which isn''t to far from your stepdads garage.'
+		'Anushka laughs a bit. "Rad somehow managed to get a hold of one of those old garages at the end of the courtyard, so we converted it into a place we can play." She explains roughly where it is and it isn''t to far from your stepdad''s garage.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit next to Anushka, eager to ask about her the band members; "Tell me about the others in the band? I really want to know more about them."'
-		'"Well, there''s Radomir, he''s thinks he''s gods gift to everything, all the girls think he''s the shit, there is always some slut hanging off him, it seems. My mother has got a hard-on for him though and wants me to marry him or some shit, but fuck that. Even if I wanted to get married he isn''t someone I would consider. He started the band with Val, he is a pretty good singer, plays guitar pretty well and does a decent job writing some of our music. He does have a gift for giving people what they want and getting us noticed by people, I''ll give him that."'
+		'You sit next to Anushka and eagerly ask her about the band members, "Can you tell me about the others in the band? I really want to know more about them."'
+		'"Well, there''s Radomir. He thinks he''s god''s gift to everything and all the girls think he''s the shit. It seems that there is always some slut hanging off him. My mother has got a hard-on for him though and wants me to marry him or some shit, but fuck that. Even if I wanted to get married he isn''t someone I would even consider. He started the band with Val. He is a pretty good singer, plays guitar pretty well, and does a decent job writing some of our music. I''ll give him that he does have a gift for giving people what they want and getting us noticed by people."'
 		*nl
-		'"Then we have Arkadi, he''s can be fun and is usually up for whatever, he''s a great drummer. He is always trying to keep us focused on the music, which can get annoying at times. He also has got a serious temper and can cause shit to go sideways fast if you aren''t too careful. I''m glad he''s with us, the band would probably split up if it wasn''t for him. Yeah, he''s a loose cannon at times but I enjoy his company, plus he''s a great hard fuck, especially if you piss him off first." She says with a wink and a grin.'
+		'"We, then,  have Arkadi. He can be fun and is usually up for whatever you want to do. He''s a great drummer as well. He is always trying to keep us focused on the music which can get annoying at times. He also has got a serious temper and can cause shit to go sideways fast if you aren''t too careful. I''m glad he''s with us though, since the band would probably split up if it wasn''t for him. Yeah, he''s a loose cannon at times, but I enjoy his company. Plus he''s a great hard fuck, especially if you piss him off first," she says with a wink and a grin.'
 		*nl
-		'"Finally there''s Valentin, he is pretty laid back and a lot of fun to hang out with, plays a mean bass. He''s been with the band from the start, him and Rad started it all. He also manages things, Rad schmoozes them and then Val steps in to handle the details and work out a good deal for us, when we do gigs. Plus he''s got a really big dick." She says with a laugh.'
+		'"Finally, there''s Valentin. He''s pretty laid back and a lot of fun to hang out with. He also plays a mean bass. He''s been with the band from the start because Rad and him started it all. He also manages things for the band. When we do gigs, Rad schmoozes the client then Val steps in to handle the details to work out a good deal for us. On the plus side, he''s got a really big dick," she says with a laugh.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -203,14 +203,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"How did you get so free-spirited and not worry about being seen naked?" you ask Anushka while sitting on her bed.'
-		'"I don''t really know. I''ve always felt different than everybody else, it''s been like this, as far back as I can remember. I used to just love the sensation of the wind or the warmth of the sun on my bare skin. As I got older and discovered my sexuality, I started to enjoy showing off my body, and watching most guys and more than a few girls checking me out. It''s quite uplifting getting all the looks and I get so fucking turned on by that."'
-		'You sit there in silence wondering if you should dare to ask her about sex. You ask quietly; "I don''t mean to pry, but I''ve heard some rumors about your sexuality...?"'
+		'"How did you get so free-spirited and not worry about being seen naked," you ask Anushka while sitting on her bed.'
+		'"I don''t really know. I''ve always felt different than everybody else and as far back as I can remember that it''s been like this. I used to just love the sensation of the wind or the warmth of the sun on my bare skin. As I got older and discovered my sexuality, I started to enjoy showing off my body. I''d watch most guys along with more than a few girls checking me out. It''s quite uplifting to be getting all the looks, so I get fucking turned on by that."'
+		'You sit there in silence wondering if you should dare to talk to her about sex. You say quietly, "I don''t mean to pry, but I''ve heard some rumors about your sexuality..."'
 		*nl
-		'"What do you mean!?" she asks.'
-		'"Well, some people say you like guys but sometimes hook up with girls, others say you like girls but hook up with guys sometimes." Trying to not make it sound as if you are implying she is a slut, which is what many seem to think.'
-		'She shrugs slightly. "Honestly I don''t really care, if I like someone and I find them attractive, then I want to fuck them. I mean sex is great, it feels amazing and it something you can share with other people. So why not have sex with anyone you like and are attracted to?"'
-		'You open your mouth to respond but then, thinking about it, you realize she makes a valid point.'
+		'"What do you mean," she asks.'
+		'"Well, some people say you like guys, but sometimes hook up with girls. Others say you like girls, but hook up with guys sometimes." You try to not imply that she is a slut which is what many seem to think.'
+		'She shrugs slightly. "Honestly, I don''t really care. If I like someone and I find them attractive then I want to fuck them. I mean sex is great, it feels amazing, and it something you can share with other people. Why not have sex with anyone you like and are attracted to?"'
+		'When you open your mouth to respond is when you realize that she makes a valid point.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -221,8 +221,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I often see you hanging out with Alyona, aren''t you scared of her?" you curiously ask Anushka.'
-			'"Yeah, she''s my partner in crime and confidant. We hang out a lot and I really enjoy her company. She''s also our band''s number one fan. Most people are afraid of her but she doesn''t really give a fuck, that''s what I really like about her."'
+			'"I often see you hanging out with Alyona. Aren''t you scared of her," you curiously ask Anushka.'
+			'"Yeah, she''s my partner in crime and confidant. We hang out a lot and I really enjoy her company. She''s also our band''s number one fan. Most people are afraid of her, but she doesn''t really give a fuck which is what I really like about her."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -232,8 +232,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I don''t mean to pry, but you and your bothers seem to have a rocky relationship."'
-		'"I know we have a bit of a love hate relationship, they can be such little assholes but at the same time they have their moments when they''re an absolute blast. If Maksim could just stop creeping around and perving out on all my female friends. We would get along a lot better and if my mother would stop poisoning them against me and girls in general. I swear she wants to turn them into sexist assholes."'
+		'"I don''t mean to pry, but you and your brothers seem to have a rocky relationship."'
+		'"I know we have a bit of a love/hate relationship. They can be such little assholes, but at the same time they have their moments when they''re an absolute blast to be around. If only Maksim could just stop creeping around and perving out on all my female friends. We would, also, get along a lot better if my mother would stop poisoning them against me and girls in general. I swear she wants to turn them into sexist assholes."'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -242,17 +242,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What will you do if the music path doesn''t work out? Don''t get me wrong... I mean you''re talented and all but you might never catch your big break..." you say with a slight hesitation, afraid about how Anushka will react.'
-		'She looks at you smiling; "I''m not too worried about that, I''m certain we''ll make it. Either way it might not seem like it but I''ll let you in on a little secret even though you might not see me at school all the time or seeing me fucking off in class, I''ve got pretty good grades, good enough to get into the University in Saint Petersburg. I am planning to attend the University after school regardless how the band goes. I know my father wants me to study more and focus on being a good girl, but if he would just cut me some fucking slack I might surprise him."'
-		'Before you can say something she asks you. "What about you? What are your plans for the future?"'
+		'"What will you do if the music path doesn''t work out? Don''t get me wrong... I mean you''re talented and all, but you might never catch your big break," you say with a slight hesitation because you''re afraid about how Anushka will react.'
+		'She looks at you smiling. "I''m not too worried about that since I''m certain we''ll make it. Either way it might not seem like it, but I''ll let you in on a little secret. Even though you might not see me at school all the time or see me fucking off in class, I''ve got pretty good grades that are good enough to get into the University in Saint Petersburg. I am planning to attend the University after school regardless of how the band goes. I know my father wants me to study more and focus on being a good girl, but if he would just cut me some fucking slack I might surprise him."'
+		'Before you can say something she asks you, "What about you? What are your plans for the future?"'
 		act 'I don''t know':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m not sure, I have a few options I guess." You tell her.'
-			'She nods a bit. "Well you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. Unless that''s what you want, not judging just saying."'
-			'Not sure what more to say about it, you decided to change the subject.'
+			'"I''m not sure, but I guess I have a few options," you tell her.'
+			'She nods a bit. "Well, you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town. Only to end up married to some asshole and popping out his kids every few years. Not judging you, unless that''s what you want. I''m just saying..."'
+			'You''re not sure what more to say about it, so you decide to change the subject.'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -261,8 +261,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. Now I will for sure know someone there."'
-			'She gets thoughtful a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates then when we go. As you said then we would know someone and we already get along. But lets talk about it some more when the time comes and decided then."'
+			'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. For sure now, I will know someone there."'
+			'She gets thoughtful a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates when we go. As you said, then we would know someone and we already get along. Let''s talk about it some more when the time comes to decide then."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -288,8 +288,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			end
 
 			'You sigh in a way only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully <<$boyfriend_temp>> and I can get married soon."'
-			'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and then shrugs. "Well best of luck with that."'
-			'Not sure what more to say on the topic.'
+			'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look then shrugs. "Well best of luck with that."'
+			'You''re not sure what more to say on the topic.'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -299,20 +299,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You know she is seeing some guys, it is not really a secret and some girls. Not sure if you should even ask but you are curious. "So do you have a boyfriend? Or girlfriend?"'
+		'You know she is seeing some guys and girls, so it is not really a secret. You''re not sure if you should even ask, but you are curious. "Do you have either a boyfriend or girlfriend?"'
 		*nl
-		'Shaking her head no. "Nope, not really looking. I am young and carefree. I plan to, as they say: sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you, if that right person came along and just blew me away, then I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment and then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? You wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
-		'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and she makes it sound so dirty and exciting at the same time. But did you mean that?'
+		'She shakes her head no. "Nope, I''m not really looking. I am young and carefree. I plan to, as they say, sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you. If that right person came along and just blew me away then I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment and gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? Are you wanting to fill that <i>slot?</i>"'
+		'The way she says it makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt about what slot she means and she makes it sound so dirty while being exciting at the same time. Do you mean that?'
 		act 'Maybe':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel put on the spot, that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously that is why you asked. Either way a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess maybe, I have been thinking about it a bit."'
-			'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction, not sure you want to know it, but then you feel her place a finger under your chin and raise it up ''til you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face and you find yourself looking into her eyes. Then, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, not a lustful one, or not much, but something deeper and more. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you, all you know is that the kiss is amazing.'
+			'You feel put on the spot that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously you do mean it which is why you asked. Either way a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess maybe since I have been thinking about it a bit."'
+			'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction and you''re not sure you want to know it. However, you feel her place a finger under your chin to raise it up ''til you are looking at her. Her face is merely inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face. You find yourself looking into her eyes. Suddenly, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, with just a hint of lust, while being something deeper with more meaning to it. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you, but all you know is that this kiss is amazing.'
 			*nl
-			'Finally the kiss ends, both of you needing to breath a bit. She leans back and sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. Then gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking but then again I''m not against it. So let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
+			'Finally, the kiss ends and both of you needing to breathe a bit. She leans back and sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. She gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking but then again I''m not against it. Let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes, so you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -321,66 +321,132 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head, this conversation really went off the rails and not at all what you meant. "No. I mean I like you, but not like that, not that..." She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on and seems amused by your response.'
-			'"It''s fine, I was just yanking your chain. I like things just how they are too."'
+			'You shake your head because this conversation really went off the rails and not at all what you meant. "No, I mean I like you, but not like that... not that..." She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on. She seems amused by your response.'
+			'"It''s fine. I''m just yanking your chain. I like things just as how they are too."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
 		act 'I have a boyfriend':
-			*clr & cla
-			minut += 5
-			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"Niko" You tell her.'
-				'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, just... just be careful with him.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
-				if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
+				if rand(0,1) = 0:
+					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
+				else
+					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
+				end
+				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
 					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-					'She arches a slender brow obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school."'
-					'You frown at her, you expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, those criminals where going to take everything form his family and he couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
-					'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay, I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you." She says obviously trying to make peace.'
-					'You nod accepting her apology of sorts and you both let the topic drop.'
+					'"Niko," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "<<$pcs_nickname>> he is bad news and I don''t mean in the fun bad boy sorta way. I mean he isn''t what he seems." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life do what you want. Just... just be careful with him.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-				else
+				elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 5:
+					if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow obviously a bit surprised. "Fedor? Are you serious? I mean after he sucked Vasily''s dick in front of the whole school."'
+						'You frown at her. You expected her to be more understanding. "He didn''t have a choice, because those criminals where going to take everything from his family. He couldn''t pay them. He''s not gay!"'
+						'She holds up her hands. "I didn''t say he was gay. I don''t care if he is or bisexual or what ever. I was... never mind forget it. If he makes you happy then I am happy for you," she says, obviously, trying to make peace.'
+						'You nod accepting her apology of sorts and you both let the topic drop.'
+						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+					else
+						if hotcat >= 5:
+							'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+							'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like an Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend, but she couldn''t keep a straight face. You realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it," She asks with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" As you think about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome," she asks as she winks as she makes a kissy face at you.'
+							act 'Maybe':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								nushfedor3s = 1
+								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
+								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+								'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it then I''ll talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+								'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
+								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							end
+							act 'I will ask him':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								nushfedor3s = 1
+								npc_rel['A144'] += 1
+								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+								'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure, yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks it could be fun," you tell her.'
+								'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways, I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree. He is a guy after all."'
+								'You shake your head a little. "Yeah, most likely, so I''ll let you know what he says."'
+								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							end
+							act 'No, I don''t think so':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+								'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
+								'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
+								act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+								act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+							end
+						else
+							'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+							'She grins at you. "Right and who are you dating again?"'
+							'"Fedor," you tell her.'
+							'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock why not go for one of the better athletes like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light," she says with a giggle.'
+							'At first, you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
+							'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
+							'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Thinking about it you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
+							'She laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style while talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah... take my big dick <<$pcs_nickname>>... take it." She switches to a girly voice and tries to sound like you. "Yes... yes... Fedor fuck me with your big dick..... YES!" She bursts out laughing and you can''t help, but to join in.'
+							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+						end
+					end
+				elseif kotovLoveQW = 1:
+					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Vitek," you tell her.'
+					'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah... yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." She notices your facial expression from her bad mouthing your boyfriend, so she holds up her hand. "Hey, it''s your life, so do what you want. Doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time because of how much she talks about how great he is. At least, when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something," she says with a smirk. You roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
+					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+				elseif artQW = 3 or artQW = 10 or artQW = 20:
 					if hotcat >= 5:
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-						'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-						'Then she laughs. "I knew it! Hmm, you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
+						'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
+						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking?"'
+						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah, he is pretty good at it... good enough anyways."'
+						'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement. I''m sure that strokes his ego," she says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself. Do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
 						act 'Maybe':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
-							nushfedor3s = 1
-							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
+							'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. We will see, but I''ll let you know if we do."'
+							'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy. They all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment even if she was true or not. You decide to change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 						act 'I will ask him':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
-							nushfedor3s = 1
-							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
+							npc_rel['A144'] += 1
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun." You tell her.'
-							'Anushka giggles. "Sex is always fun, unless you are doing it wrong. Anyways I am sure if you ask nicely he will agree, he is a guy after all."'
-							'You shake your head a little. "Yeah most likely and I''ll let you know what he says."'
+							'You can''t help, but grin at that. You think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure... yeah, I will ask him and see what he thinks because it could be fun. He is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say," you tell her.'
+							'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy and all boys want to fuck as much as they can. Having sex with two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, so I doubt he is any different. Besides, maybe, I can teach him a new trick or two for you," she says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
+							'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him if he would like to."'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
@@ -389,108 +455,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-							'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
+							'Shaking your head no. "Sorry, but he is all mine," you tell her with a grin.'
+							'She makes a tsking sound. "Too bad. Oh well, if you change your mind let me know." You''re not sure what else to say to that, so you change the subject.'
 							act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 							act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 						end
 					else
-						'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-						'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-						'"Fedor" You tell her.'
-						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Fedor? Really? Come on now, if you were going to date a jock, why not go for one of the better athletes, like Lazar or Ivan? I mean, <b>Fedor</b>? He is kinda like Ivan-light." She says with a giggle.'
-						'At first you were starting to get mad at her, talking smack about your boyfriend but she couldn''t keep a straight face and you realize it is just Anushka being Anushka and yanking your chain. "Yes Fedor, I like him. He''s sweet."'
-						'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... uh-huh. Be honest <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s because he has a really big dick isn''t it?" She says with a grin, while pretending to hold a really big imaginary dick between her legs.'
-						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "I just like him ok?" Then, thinking about it, you bite your lip and add, "Well, maybe it is pretty big..."'
-						'Then she laughs. "I knew it!" She  grabs her pillow and starts pretending to hump it doggy style and talking in a gruff voice trying to sound like Fedor. "Yeah take my big dick, <<$pcs_nickname>>, take it." Then she switches to a girly voice trying to sound like you. "Yes, yes Fedor fuck me with your big dick, YES!" Then she burst out laughing and you can''t help but join in.'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-					end
-				end
-			elseif kotovLoveQW = 1:
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"Vitek" You tell her.'
-				'Anushka looks at you a long moment. "Really? <<$pcs_nickname>> yeah yeah, I get he has that bad boy vibe going for him, but you really could do better." Noticing your facial expression from bad mouthing your boyfriend she holds up her hand. "Hey it''s your life do what you want, but doesn''t it feel like you are dating Lena at the same time, with how much she talks about how great he is, at least when she isn''t bitching about him ruining her sex life, you would think she wants to suck his dick or something." She says with a smirk, you roll your eyes slightly and she lets it drop.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-			elseif artQW =  3 or artQW =  10 or artQW =  20:
-				if hotcat >= 5:
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Artem" You tell her.'
-					'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
-					'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-					'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... but the real question is. Is he any good at fucking, so is he?"'
-					'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "There is more to life than just sex." Then seeing the look on her face you add, "Ok yeah he is pretty good at it, good enough anyways."'
-					'Sh grins. "Oh good enough huh? That''s a ringing endorsement, sure that strokes his ego." She says the last bit while pretending to stroke a dick if she had one. "Hmm, well maybe I should find out for myself, do you think he''d be up for a threesome?" She says as she winks and makes a kissy face at you.'
-					act 'Maybe':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 5
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
-						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-						'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-					end
-					act 'I will ask him':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 5
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
-						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can''t help but grin at that and then you think about it and it does sound fun. "Sure yeah I will ask him and see what he thinks, it could be fun. But he is kinda sweet and shy, so I don''t know what he will say." You tell her.'
-						'Anushka giggles. "He''s a boy, all boys want to fuck as much as they can, two girls at once is like the most common fantasy they all have, I doubt he is any different. Besides maybe I can teach him a new trick or two for you." She says in a teasing tone and a wink.'
-						'You shake your head a little. "I doubt that, but I will ask him, if he would like to."'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-					end
-					act 'No, I don''t think so':
-						*clr & cla
-						minut += 5
-						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-						'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
-						'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
-						act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-						act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
+						'You tell her, "You do know I have a boyfriend."'
+						'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+						'"Artem," you tell her.'
+						'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" She seems to consider it a moment. "Well, I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do whatever you want. Yeah... ok, I can see the appeal," she says with a giggle.'
+						'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
+						'She snorts. "Yeah, sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
+						'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "What? Why would you ask that?"'
+						'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D, or something like that."'
+						'You shake your head. "No, we don''t, because we make love."'
+						'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh then talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
 					end
+				elseif Rex_Love = 1:
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"Rex," you tell her.'
+					'"Who," She asks as she cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. It seems that she thinks of him. "Wait, isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
+					'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah, that''s him."'
+					'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years older than you," she asks obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
+					'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party" You tell her then you add, "Ok, he is friends with my sister. She invited me to his party and that''s where we met." You talk about the night you met him and your first date.'
+					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				else
-					'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-					'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-					'"Artem" You tell her.'
-					'She arches a slender brow slightly. "Artem? The nerd?" Then she seems to consider it a moment. "Well I guess he is kinda cute and I bet you have him totally pussy whipped to do what ever you want, yeah ok, I can see the appeal." She says with a giggle.'
-					'You shake your head slightly at her comment. "He''s sweet and really nice to me."'
-					'She snorts. "Yeah sure he is... so do you guys dress up and pretend to be elves or something when you fuck?"'
-					'You roll your eyes at her slightly. "What? Why would you ask that?"'
-					'Sh grins. "You know that game all the nerds play, D and D or something like that."'
-					'You shake your head. "No we don''t, we make love."'
-					'Anushka makes a face like she is about to be sick and you shove her slightly. "Cut it out." With that you both laugh and talk about some of the dates you and Artem have been on.'
+					'You tell her, "I have a boyfriend you know."'
+					'She grins at you. "Right, so who are you dating again?"'
+					'"<<$boyfriend>>," you tell her.'
+					'"Who?" She asks, asshe cocks her head slightly, obviously, trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
+					'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him. I just met him."'
+					'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you met huh?" You laugh then tell her about him.'
+					act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+					act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 				end
-			elseif Rex_Love = 1:
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"Rex" You tell her.'
-				'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before. Then it seems she thinks of him. "Wait isn''t he the guy that throws parties all the time?"'
-				'You nod in agreement with that. "Yeah that''s him."'
-				'She get a inquisitive look on her face. "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years old?" She asks, obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
-				'You smile to her. "I was invited to his party." You tell her and then add. "Ok he is friends with my sister and she invited me to his party and thats when we meet." Then you talk about the night you meet him and your first date.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
-			else
-				'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
-				'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
-				'"<<$boyfriend>>" You tell her.'
-				'"Who?" She asks, she cocks her head slightly obviously trying to think if she has ever heard his name before.'
-				'You shake your head slightly. "You never meet him, he is just this guy I meet."'
-				'She smiles a bit. "Just some guy you meet huh?" You laugh and then tell her about him.'
-				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
-				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 			end
-		end
-	end
+		end	
 	if valeriaIntroduced = 1:
 		act 'Ask about her mother':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -498,11 +501,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You are not sure how you should ask this, but you are curious about what''s wrong with her mother. "I don''t mean to pry, but what''s wrong with your mother?"'
-			'Anushka glances at you. "You mean to ask, why is my mother a complete fucking cunt?" When she see''s the look on your face she waves her hand dismissively. "Don''t worry, everyone but her knows it. Honestly I don''t really know, she wasn''t always like this. When I was really young she was pretty fun and then she just... changed." She sighs and looks a little sad.'
+			'Anushka glances at you. "You mean to ask, ''Why is my mother a complete fucking cunt?''" When she see''s the look on your face she waves her hand dismissively. "Don''t worry, everyone but her knows it. Honestly, I don''t really know because she wasn''t always like this. When I was really young she was pretty fun then she just... changed." She sighs and looks a little sad.'
 			*nl
-			'"Best I can tell is my mother was a party girl looking for a guy she could latch onto, who would give her a party life forever. My dad was the biggest baddest mother fucker around back then, so perfect for my mother. But sometime after I was born, he settled down and I think it just hit her. This was her life, just that of a house wife and mother. She resents him, my brothers, and me for it and blames us for every bad thing that has happened in her life."'
+			'"The best I can tell is my mother was a party girl looking for a guy she could latch onto and who would give her a party life forever. My dad was the biggest, baddest motherfucker around back then and perfect for my mother. Sometime after I was born, he settled down and, I think, it just hit her. This was her life now to be just that of a house wife and a mother. She resents him, my brothers, and me for it. She blames us for every bad thing that has happened in her life."'
 			*nl
-			'Then her tone turns a bit hard. "She is just a loser bitch that wanted to live off a man and didn''t get her way, like my dad says. She''s just a waste of fucking space." Then she looks away for a moment before saying more. "I don''t really want to talk about this."'
+			'Her tone turns a bit harsh. "Like my dad says, ''She is just a loser bitch that wanted to live off of a man and didn''t get her way.'' She''s just a waste of fucking space." She looks away for a moment before saying more, "I don''t really want to talk about this."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -516,7 +519,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
 			if hotcat >= 5:
-				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it. She turns her head to look at you, her face not that far from yours and you can''t help it, you just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and give her a kiss. She returns your kiss fully.'
+				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it, but she turns her head to look at you. Her face is not that far from yours and you can''t help it. You just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over to give her a kiss. She fully returns your kiss.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop kissing and talk more': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
@@ -524,20 +527,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtmakeout.jpg"></center>'
-					'She wraps her arms around you neck and pulls you close and soon the two of you are kissing passionately. The kisses are full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more and more aroused.'
+					'She wraps her arms around you neck and pulls you close. Soon the two of you are kissing passionately. The kisses are full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more and more aroused.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Stop making out': 
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'hate'
-						'You pull away before things go too far and catch your breath. You see her slightly confused look and you feel a bit bad about it. "Sorry, I got carried away. Can we just go back to talking?" She frowns a little. "Yeah whatever." You know you annoyed her a little and you don''t blame her, you did just give her the girl equivalent of blue balls.'
+						'You pull away before things go too far and catch your breath. You see her slightly confused look and you feel a bit bad about it. "Sorry, I got carried away. Can we just go back to talking?" She frowns a little. "Yeah whatever." You know you annoyed her a little and you don''t blame her since you did just give her the girl equivalent of blue balls.'
 						act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 					end
 					act 'Peeking':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les1.jpg"></center>'
-						'As the two of you keep kissing she breaks the kiss and uses one of her hands to pull down your top and expose your breasts, she takes a long hard look at your breasts. "Nice tits" You can''t help it, just the way she says it in the moment makes you giggle, but your giggle is short lived as she starts kissing you again.'
+						'As the two of you keep kissing she breaks the kiss and uses one of her hands to pull down your top to expose your breasts. She takes a long hard look at your breasts. "You have nice tits." You can''t help it, but just the way she says it in the moment makes you giggle. Your giggle is short lived as she starts kissing you again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Undress her':
@@ -545,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'like'
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You don''t waste any time and start pulling her clothes off, she returns the favor and starts removing your clothes as well. It would go a lot faster if the two of you were''t also passionately kissing and caressing each others bodies. Regardless before long, you are both naked.'
+							'You don''t waste any time and start pulling her clothes off. She returns the favor and starts removing your clothes as well. It would go a lot faster if the two of you were''t also passionately kissing and caressing each others'' bodies. Regardless, before long you are both naked.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Get pleasured': gt 'anushkaev1', 'getpleasured'
@@ -553,7 +556,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					end
 				end
 			else
-				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it. She turns her head to look at you, her face not that far from yours and you can''t help it, you just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and give her a kiss. She returns your kiss a moment then stops and pulls away. Sensing she isn''t interested you decided to keep talking instead.'
+				'As you sit side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it, but she turns her head to look at you. Her face not that far from yours and you can''t help it. You just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and give her a kiss. She returns your kiss for a moment then stops to pull away. Sensing that she isn''t interested, instead you decide to keep talking.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian'
 				act 'Stop kissing and talk more': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 			end
@@ -565,8 +568,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You bite your lip a moment, unsure if you should ask. It might seem rude but you could really use a snack and drink. "Hey Nush you got anything to snack on or drink?"'
-		'She looks a bit surprised and then a bit abashed, which is a new look on her. "Yeah sorry, didn''t think about it. Feel free to just grab something if you want in the future but come on."'
+		'You bite your lip a moment because you are unsure if you should ask. It might seem rude, but you could really use a snack and drink. "Hey Nush, do you have anything to snack on or a drink?"'
+		'She looks a bit surprised and a bit abashed which is a new look on her. "Yeah sorry, I didn''t think about it. Feel free to just grab something if you want in the future, but come on."'
 		act 'Follow her':gt 'anushapt','snack'
 	end
 	if maksimQW >= 3:
@@ -575,7 +578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 1
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance over at Anushka. "Hey I actually had fun playing with your brothers last time, you think they would be up for a rematch?"'
+			'You glance over at Anushka. "Hey I actually had fun playing with your brothers last time. Do you think they would be up for a rematch?"'
 			'She grins at you and gets up heading for the door already. "Lets go find out."'
 			act 'Follow': gt 'anushaptbr', 'rematch'
 		end
@@ -588,24 +591,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radval':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'You pauses a moment not sure if you should ask but decided to anyways. "You''re sleeping with both Rad and Val right?" You already know the answer but asking is polite.'
-	'She gives you a slightly confused look. "Yeah, why?" Which turns into a what business of yours is it look when she answers.'
-	'You give her a friendly smile. "Well I was just wondering if it causes problems, if they got jealous or something of each other."'
-	'She looks at you for a long moment and then busts out laughing. "Are you fucking kidding me? Guys don''t give a shit as long as they get a turn, most guys would pimp out their girlfriend for a pack of smokes if they was out."'
+	'You pause a moment because you''re not sure if you should ask, but decided to anyways, "You''re sleeping with both Rad and Val right?" You already know the answer, but ask to be polite.'
+	'She gives you a slightly confused look. "Yeah, why?" Which turns into a what-business-of-yours-is-it-look when she answers.'
+	'You give her a friendly smile. "Well, I was just wondering if it causes problems like if they get jealous or something of each other."'
+	'She looks at you for a long moment and bursts out laughing. "Are you fucking kidding me? Guys don''t give a shit as long as they get a turn. Most guys I know would pimp out their girlfriend for a pack of smokes if they were out."'
 	act 'Not all guys':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You frown and ok some guys but not all are that way. "That''s not true some guys are sweet."'
-		'She gives you are you stupid look but then softens it a bit. "Ok sure some guys, the ugly ones or the ones lacking confidence that they can get another pussy. Sure they might be sweet, but only cause they fear not having any pussy."'
-		'You are a bit surprised by how jaded she already is, but maybe you shouldn''t be, it explains a lot. "Wow you are really jaded." You can''t help but call it like you see it.'
+		'You frown and reply, "Okay some guys, but not all are that way. There are some guys that are sweet."'
+		'She gives you are you stupid look, but then softens it a bit. "Ok, sure, some guys like the ugly ones or the ones lacking confidence that they can''t get another pussy. Sure they might be sweet, but only cause they fear not having any pussy."'
+		'You are a bit surprised by how jaded she already is, but maybe you shouldn''t be since it explains a lot. "Wow, you are really jaded." You can''t help, but call it like you see it.'
 		*nl
-		'She shrugs a bit. "Ever guy that talks to you or tries to get to know you, eventually tries to fuck you. Ok maybe not the gay guys but they don''t count. Tell me I''m wrong."'
-		'You open your mouth to deny it, but she has a point pretty much all of them do eventually try and screw you sooner or later. "Yeah but that doesn''t mean they don''t care." Even you are unsure if you believe that.'
-		'She gives you a smirk. "Maybe but my personal experience, what I have seen and heard from other girls says deep down all guys are that way. Besides why do you care?" She asks.'
-		'You shrug a bit. "Was just worried it might break up the band or cause problems."'
-		'She smiles and shakes her head. "Don''t worry about that, it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong but she obliviously doesn''t believe it and you don''t think you can change her mind so you let it drop.'
+		'She shrugs a bit. "Ever guy that talks to you or tries to get to know you will eventually try to fuck you. Ok maybe not the gay guys, but they don''t count. Tell me that I''m wrong."'
+		'You open your mouth to deny it, but she has a point. Pretty much all of them do eventually try and screw you sooner or later. "Yeah, but that doesn''t mean they don''t care." Even you are unsure if you believe that.'
+		'She gives you a smirk. "Maybe, but in my personal experience and what I have seen and heard from other girls says deep down all guys are that way. Besides why do you care," she asks.'
+		'You shrug a bit. "I was just worried it might break up the band or cause problems."'
+		'She smiles and shakes her head. "Don''t worry about that ''cause it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong, but she obliviously doesn''t believe it. You don''t think you can change her mind, so you let it drop.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -614,13 +617,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'radval':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'You frown and think about it, yeah you have seen a lot of guys treat guys like a sex object and nothing else, maybe she has a point. "Ok maybe but guys are still pretty territorial."'
-		'She shrugs a bit. "Yeah some are, like Vitek I could see him fucking around but being pissed if his ''girlfriend''" She does air quotes when she says girlfriend. "Was with another guys, because he thinks he owns her, it would be like some other guy taking his car with out asking."'
-		'You shrug a bit. "So you don''t think they are the same and might cause problem with the band?"'
-		'She smiles and shakes her head. "No, they are cool and we all have a understanding, friends with benefits but that''s it. Don''t worry about it, it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong but she obliviously doesn''t believe it and you don''t think you can change her mind so you let it drop.'
+		'You frown and think about it, ''Yeah you have seen a lot of guys treat girls like a sex object and nothing else. Maybe she has a point after all.'' "Ok maybe, but guys are still pretty territorial."'
+		'She shrugs a bit. "Yeah, some are, like Vitek. I could see him fucking around, but being pissed if his ''girlfriend,''" she does air quotes when she says girlfriend, "Was with other guys. All because he thinks he owns her it would be like some other guy taking his car without asking."'
+		'You shrug a bit. "You don''t think they are the same and might cause problem with the band?"'
+		'She smiles and shakes her head. "No, they are cool and we all have a understanding. We''re friends with benefits, but that''s it. Don''t worry about it since it has no effect on the band." You think she is wrong, but she obliviously doesn''t believe it. You don''t think you can change her mind so you let it drop.'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushkachat', 'chat'
 	end
 end
 
---- anushkachat ---------------------------------
+--- anushkachat ---------------------------------
+

locations/artemdate.qsrc

@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stand_up':
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/walk_save.jpg"></center>'
 											'After awhile you finally see Artem limping towards you. He smiles through busted bloody lips when he sees you. You rush over to him and help him walk, putting one of his arms over your shoulder. Artem wipes the blood from his face, deeply embarrassed you had to see him like this. "I''m glad you got away, they said they were going to rape you if they caught you." He says as he hugs you obviously not made you ran and left him. He seems genuinely glad you are safe. You walk in silence as you help him get home.'
 											*nl
-											'Once you get him home, you help him to bed and then clean up his wounds and tend to him as best you can. "Thank you <<pcs_nickname>> for everything. For helping me home, for going out with me and for helping me now. I just wish it could have been a better date."'
+											'Once you get him home, you help him to bed and then clean up his wounds and tend to him as best you can. "Thank you <<$pcs_nickname>> for everything. For helping me home, for going out with me and for helping me now. I just wish it could have been a better date."'
 											'You smile to him and place a finger on his lips. "Shhh, it''s fine, I am just sorry you got hurt."'
 											'He smiles. "Yeah well maybe our next date won''t be so exciting. The pain meds are kicking in, I could really use some sleep, see you later ok." He rolls over obviously not wanting to talk anymore and in obvious pain. So you get up and leave him to rest.'
 											act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'

locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 				else
 					if artlie = 2 or artembrokenheart = 1 or artemblok = 1:
 						'"Who should I tell him is here?"'
-						'"I''m <<pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'"I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 						'When she hears your name her demeanor changes swiftly. Frowning she says: "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
 						act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 					else

locations/bedrPar.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ end
 
 if pcs_magik >= 6 and spellbefshild = 1 and tobiQW = 0 and sisterHere < 2:gt 'tobiQW', 'start'
 
-if sisboyday + 1 = daystart and hour = 18: gt 'sisterQW', 'sisboyQW_expel'
+if anyaloc = 25: gt 'sisterQW', 'sisboyQW_expel'
 
 if sisterHere = 2 and popugai2 = 1 and sispopconf = 0:
 	*clr & cla

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if father_go = 1:
 				if brotherSex < 5 and brotherkiss >= 1 and brotherkisstalk < 1:
 					act'Talk about the kiss':gt 'brother', 'kiss_talk'
-				elseif brotherkisstalk = 1 or brotherSex > 4:
+				elseif brotherkisstalk = 1 or brotherSex > 4 and momloc ! 19:
 					act'Make out with your brother':gt 'brother2', 'kiss'
 				end
 				if NatbelQW['KolkaTease'] = 1:
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'Your brother is playing video games.'
 			end
 
-			if hour >= 23 and hour < 24 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherNightSex ! daystart:
+			if hour = 23 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherNightSex ! daystart and momloc ! 19:
 				'As you approach your sleeping brother, he suddenly opens his eyes and looks at you.'
 				!!sub/dom dialog needs fixing
 				!!if sub > 0 or (evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 75):
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				!!end
 			end
 
-			if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherEvSex ! daystart:
+			if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherEvSex ! daystart and momloc ! 19:
 				'When you get close, Kolka turns to you.'
 				!!sub/dom dialog needs fixing
 				!!if sub > 0 or (evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 75):

locations/cikl.qsrc

@@ -598,7 +598,12 @@ if ArrSize('$MenCal') = 60: killvar '$MenCal',0
 
 if lashair ! 1:
 	pcs_leghair += 1
-	pcs_pubes += rand(0,1)
+	!!Pubic hair growth at 1/2 per night
+	if pcs_pubes['growth'] > 1:
+		pcs_pubes['growth'] = 0
+		pcs_pubes += 1
+	end
+	pcs_pubes['growth'] += 1
 end
 
 if age < 18 and rand (0,2) = 0 and pcs_leghair > 0: pcs_leghair -= 1

locations/clothing_descriptions.qsrc

@@ -37,87 +37,87 @@ else
 end
 
 if CloThinness = 1:
-	$description = $description + ', which completely obscures your figure'
+	$description += ', which completely obscures your figure'
 elseif CloThinness = 2:
-	$description = $description + ', which somewhat obscures your figure'
+	$description += ', which somewhat obscures your figure'
 elseif CloThinness = 3:
-	$description = $description + ', which shows your figure somewhat'
+	$description += ', which shows your figure somewhat'
 elseif CloThinness = 4:
-	$description = $description + ', which shows your figure well'
+	$description += ', which shows your figure well'
 elseif CloThinness = 5:
-	$description = $description + ', which shows every detail of your figure'
+	$description += ', which shows every detail of your figure'
 elseif CloThinness = 6:
-	$description = $description + ', which intentionally reveals your intimate areas'
+	$description += ', which intentionally reveals your intimate areas'
 end
 
 if CloBra = 2:
-	$description = $description + ', the top leaves your breasts completely exposed'
+	$description += ', the top leaves your breasts completely exposed'
 elseif CloBra = 1:
-	$description = $description + ', the top replaces a bra (if you are wearing one)'
+	$description += ', the top replaces a bra (if you are wearing one)'
 elseif CloTopCut > 0:
 	if CloTopCut = 1:
-		$description = $description + ', includes a very modest top'
+		$description += ', includes a very modest top'
 	elseif CloTopCut = 2:
-		$description = $description + ', includes a modest top'
+		$description += ', includes a modest top'
 	elseif CloTopCut = 3:
-		$description = $description + ', includes a somewhat revealing top'
+		$description += ', includes a somewhat revealing top'
 	elseif CloTopCut = 4:
-		$description = $description + ', includes a very revealing top'
+		$description += ', includes a very revealing top'
 	end
 	if tits < 2:
-		$description = $description + ', that would hang loosely around your humble bosom'
+		$description += ', that would hang loosely around your humble bosom'
 	elseif tits < 5:
-		$description = $description + ', that would fit your decently-sized bosom'
+		$description += ', that would fit your decently-sized bosom'
 	elseif tits < 8:
-		$description = $description + ', that would tightly strain to contain your ample bosom'
+		$description += ', that would tightly strain to contain your ample bosom'
 	else
-		$description = $description + ', that your huge bosom would spill out of'
+		$description += ', that your huge bosom would spill out of'
 	end
 end
 
 if CloDress = 1:
 	if CloSkirtShortness = 1:
-		$description = $description + ' and a floor-length hemline.'
+		$description += ' and a floor-length hemline.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 2:
-		$description = $description + ' and a knee-length hemline.'
+		$description += ' and a knee-length hemline.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 3:
-		$description = $description + ' and a fairly standard hemline.'
+		$description += ' and a fairly standard hemline.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 4:
-		$description = $description + ' and a rather short hemline.'
+		$description += ' and a rather short hemline.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 5:
-		$description = $description + ' and a hemline that barely reaches past your groin.'
+		$description += ' and a hemline that barely reaches past your groin.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 6:
-		$description = $description + ' and a hemline not even long enough to hide your privates.'
+		$description += ' and a hemline not even long enough to hide your privates.'
 	end
 elseif CloPanties = 1:
-	$description + ' the bottom of which is so skimpy it replaces your panties.'
+	$description += ' the bottom of which is so skimpy it replaces your panties.'
 elseif CloPantsShortness > 0:
 	if CloPantsShortness = 1:
-		$description = $description + ' and long pants.'
+		$description += ' and long pants.'
 	elseif CloPantsShortness = 2:
-		$description = $description + ' and calf-length pants.'
+		$description += ' and calf-length pants.'
 	elseif CloPantsShortness = 3:
-		$description = $description + ' and knee-length shorts.'
+		$description += ' and knee-length shorts.'
 	elseif CloPantsShortness = 4:
-		$description = $description + ' and thigh-length shorts.'
+		$description += ' and thigh-length shorts.'
 	elseif CloPantsShortness = 5:
-		$description = $description + ' and shorts that don''t go past your crotch.'
+		$description += ' and shorts that don''t go past your crotch.'
 	elseif CloPantsShortness = 6:
-		$description = $description + ' and shorts so short, that they reveal your panties.'
+		$description += ' and shorts so short, that they reveal your panties.'
 	end
 elseif CloSkirtShortness > 0:
 	if CloSkirtShortness = 1:
-		$description = $description + ' and a floor-length skirt.'
+		$description += ' and a floor-length skirt.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 2:
-		$description = $description + ' and a knee-length skirt.'
+		$description += ' and a knee-length skirt.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 3:
-		$description = $description + ' and a fairly standard skirt.'
+		$description += ' and a fairly standard skirt.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 4:
-		$description = $description + ' and a rather short skirt.'
+		$description += ' and a rather short skirt.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 5:
-		$description = $description + ' and a miniskirt that barely reaches past your groin.'
+		$description += ' and a miniskirt that barely reaches past your groin.'
 	elseif CloSkirtShortness = 6:
-		$description = $description + ' and a microskirt not even long enough to hide your privates.'
+		$description += ' and a microskirt not even long enough to hide your privates.'
 	end
 end
 

locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ $koncepodos1 = {
     '"You want to rent it"?'
     '"I want to look at it first. If its too much hassle to do your job I can leave."'
     '"OK then you can go look at the apartment. It''s upstairs, room 17. I will not go with you, my legs ache."'
-    'What an unpleasant man. He has you sign a registrar and then says, "Follow me <<pcs_firstname>>."'
+    'What an unpleasant man. He has you sign a registrar and then says, "Follow me <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
     'You follow him through the dimly lit lobby and down a corridor. You can hear barely discernible sounds from various apartments, merging into ghostly mutterings that ste the hair on the back of your neck on end. You hear what sounds like a whisper, "Run."'
     'Stopping by an old dresser the old man rummages through a drawer, "Looks like you are in luck, my dear..."'
     'The old man puts a key in hand, "Here."'

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ $brit = {
 				minut += 15
 				pcs_leghair = 0
 				if pubestyle = 1:
-					pcs_pubes = 0
+					pcs_pubes = 1
 				elseif (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 9) or pubestyle >= 12:
 					pcs_pubes = 16
 				elseif pubestyle = 10 and pcs_pubes > 29:
@@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ $pirNips = {
 	:loopnipple_pir
 		if dyneval('RESULT = PirsF<<i>>_owned') = 1:*p '<a href="exec:pirsF = <<i>> & pierWearCount += 1 & dynamic $pirManage"><img src="images/pc/body/piercings/f<<i>>.jpg"	height="250" ></a>'
 		i += 1
-	if i <= 4:jump 'loopnipple_pir'
+	if i <= 7:jump 'loopnipple_pir'
 }
 
 $pirNavel = {
@@ -845,16 +845,17 @@ $pirPubic = {
 	:looppubic_pir
 		if dyneval('RESULT = PirsG<<i>>_owned') = 1:*p '<a href="exec:pirsG = <<i>> & pierWearCount += 1 & dynamic $pirManage"><img src="images/pc/body/piercings/g<<i>>.jpg"	height="250" ></a>'
 		i += 1
-	if i <= 7:jump 'looppubic_pir'
+	if i <= 10:jump 'looppubic_pir'
 }
 
 $pirManage = {
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
+	'<center>Piercing Management</center>'
 	*nl
 	if pirsA > 0:
 		if pirsA < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsA = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove tongue piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsA = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove tongue piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirTongue">Insert tongue piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -862,7 +863,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsB > 0:
 		if pirsB < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsB = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove lip piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsB = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove lip piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirLip">Insert lip piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -870,7 +871,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsC > 0:
 		if pirsC < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsC = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove ear piercings</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsC = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove ear piercings</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirEars">Insert ear piercings</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -878,7 +879,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsD > 0:
 		if pirsD < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsD = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nose piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsD = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nose piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirNose">Insert nose piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -886,7 +887,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsE > 0:
 		if pirsE < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsE = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove eyebrow piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsE = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove eyebrow piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirBrow">Insert eyebrow piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -894,7 +895,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		if pirsF < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsF = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nipple piercings</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsF = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nipple piercings</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirNips">Insert nipple piercings</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -902,7 +903,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsN > 0:
 		if pirsN < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsN = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove navel piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsN = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove navel piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirNavel">Insert navel piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -910,7 +911,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsG > 0:
 		if pirsG < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsG = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove pussy piercings</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsG = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove pussy piercings</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirPubic">Insert pussy piercings</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -1096,7 +1097,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 		'<a href="exec:dynamic $use_bcream & gt $loc, $metka">Apply breast cream.</a> Uses left: <<bcream_have>>.'
 	end
 
-	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage your piercings</a>'
+	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:*clr & cla & dynamic $pirManage">Manage your piercings</a>'
 
 	if fillimplant = 1 and siliconeBag >= 1:'<a href="exec:cls & siliconeBag -= 1 & silicone += 10 & gt $loc, $metka">Inject silicone into your breast implants.</a>'
 	if fillimplant = 1 and silicone >= 20:'<a href="exec:cls & silicone -= 10 & gt $loc, $metka">Drain silicone from your breast implants.</a>'

locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loss':
 			mood -= 10
 			christinaphotos = 3
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
 			'Now spread those legs so we can get a nice shot of that disgusting pussy and dirty ass of yours." You blush with shame but do as she says, she takes several more pictures laughing the whole time. "You are going to do anything I want any time I say it from now on or everyone in school will see these and I will kick your ass again, right?" You meekly nod on the verge of tears.'
 			*nl
 			'Then you feel a swift kick from behind, between your open legs, as Christina kicks you in the twat hard. You cry out and tears running down your cheeks as you grab your crotch and roll over onto your side with your legs squeezed closed. "Then say it! Say you are a little cunt and will do anything I say anytime I say it." Christina demands as she towers over you.'
@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		fightEnding = 0
 		Win += 1
 		mood += 10
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/losefight.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/losefight.jpg"></center>'
 		'Christina is a hell of a fighter, she is fast, hits harder than most boys and knows what she is doing. Yet despite all that she just isn''t a match for you. You finally land a few hard blows and she goes down gasping for breath, holding up her hand in a signal of no more, you smirk as she lays beaten at your feet. You reach down and pull her phone out of her pocket and then heave it as far as you can out into the lake where it plops into the water. Lina seems to be stunned that you beat Christina and she looks a little afraid of you. "Now neither you you seen me here naked right? And since I wasn''t here, that means I didn''t beat you ass, but from now on we both know who''s the bitch don''t we?" You say to both of them. Lina nods quickly Christina a little slower but she nods as well. With that you walk away from the two of them as Lina helps Christina back to her feet.'
 		act 'Walk off': gt 'gLake'
 	end
@@ -716,7 +716,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'surrender':
 			mood -= 10
 			christinaphotos = 3
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
 			'Now spread those legs so we can get a nice shot of that disgusting pussy and dirty ass of yours." You blush with shame but do as she says, she takes several more pictures laughing the whole time. "You are going to do anything I want any time I say it from now on or everyone in school will see these and I will kick your ass again, right?" You meekly nod on the verge of tears.'
 			*nl
 			'Then you feel a swift kick from behind, between your open legs, as Christina kicks you in the twat hard. You cry out and tears running down your cheeks as you grab your crotch and roll over onto your side with your legs squeezed closed. "Then say it! Say you are a little cunt and will do anything I say anytime I say it." Christina demands as she towers over you.'

locations/family.qsrc

@@ -117,9 +117,8 @@ if StoryLine = 1:
 
 	if indorf = 0:
 		if $loc = 'bedrPar2':
-			if hour < 6 or hour >= 21:
+			if moloc = 1:
 				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and stepfather are sleeping on the bed.'
-				if hour = 21:parsexrand = rand(0, 5)
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -178,20 +177,6 @@ if StoryLine = 1:
 			end
 		end
 
-		if $loc = 'kuhrPar':
-			gs 'dinmother'
-
-			if mother_go = 0:
-				if (week < 6 and hour >= 16 and hour < 21) or (week >= 6 and hour >= 7 and hour < 21):
-					*pl dyneval($d_mother[rand(4,8)])
-				end
-			else
-				if (week < 6 and hour >= 17 and hour < 21) or (week >= 6 and hour >= 7 and hour < 21 and hour ! 16):
-					*pl dyneval($d_mother[rand(4,8)])
-				end
-			end
-		end
-
 		if $loc = 'korrPar':
 			!! for future code I guess
 		end

locations/family_schedule.qsrc

@@ -8,387 +8,398 @@ anyaloc = 0
 kolloc = 0
 
 !!---ANYA---------------------------------------
-
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		!!Asleep
-		anyaloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		!!Family breakfast
-		anyaloc = 2
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
-		!!Helping mom clean up
-		anyaloc = 3
-	elseif hour < 8:
-		!!In Bedroom
-		anyaloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 20:
-		!!Shower*
-        anyaloc = 5
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
-		!!Walk to work
-		anyaloc = 6
-	elseif hour < 16:
-		!!Work
-		anyaloc = 7
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 10:
-		!!Walk home from work
-		anyaloc = 8
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!!Personal activities: Relaxing in bedroom, working out at the community center, etc (this is also the time frame Roma comes over some times)
-		anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 9, 10, 11)
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!!Family dinner
-		anyaloc = 12
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		!!Goes out to hang out with friends/Roma (this could be random so sometimes she stays home to give Sveta more time to talk to her)
-		anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 13, 14, 15)
-	else
-		!!In her room
-		anyaloc = 15
-	end
-else
-	if week = 7 and hour < 2:
-		!!Goes to a party
-		anyaloc = 24
-	elseif week = 7 and hour = 2 and minut < 20:
-		!!In her room drunk after party
-		anyaloc = 25
-	elseif hour < 9:
-		!!Asleep
-		anyaloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 9 and minut < 20:
-		!!Eat something in kitchen
-		anyaloc = 16
-	elseif hour = 9 and minut < 40:
-		!!Shower*
-        anyaloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 10:
-		!!In Bedroom
-		anyaloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 16:
-		!!On nice days goes to the beach, sometimes goes to the city with friends, or stays at home watching tv or reading etc
-        anyaloc = rand(17,19)
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 15:
-		!!Walk to community center
-		anyaloc = 20
-	elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
-		!!Works out at the community center
-		anyaloc = 21
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!!Walk home
-		anyaloc = 22
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!!Family dinner
-		anyaloc = 12
-    elseif hour < 19:
-		if week = 7:
-			!!helps mom clean up after dinner
-			anyaloc = 23
+!! sister_opr_indorf = 1 means Anya is in the village
+if sister_opr_indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			!!Asleep
+			anyaloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			!!Family breakfast
+			anyaloc = 2
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
+			!!Helping mom clean up
+			anyaloc = 3
+		elseif hour < 8:
+			!!In Bedroom
+			anyaloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 20:
+			!!Shower*
+			anyaloc = 5
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
+			!!Walk to work
+			anyaloc = 6
+		elseif hour < 16:
+			!!Work
+			anyaloc = 7
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 10:
+			!!Walk home from work
+			anyaloc = 8
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!Personal activities: Relaxing in bedroom, working out at the community center, etc (this is also the time frame Roma comes over some times)
+			anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 9, 10, 11)
+		elseif sisboyday + 1 = daystart and hour = 18:
+			!!in bedroom with Roma
+			anyaloc = 25
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!!Family dinner
+			anyaloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			!!Goes out to hang out with friends/Roma (this could be random so sometimes she stays home to give Sveta more time to talk to her)
+			anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 13, 14, 15)
 		else
-			!!Goes to a party
-			anyaloc = 24
+			!!In her room
+			anyaloc = 15
 		end
 	else
-		if week = 7:
-			!!in her room 
-			anyaloc = 15
-		else
+		if week = 7 and hour < 2:
 			!!Goes to a party
 			anyaloc = 24
+		elseif week = 7 and hour = 2 and minut < 20:
+			!!In her room drunk after party
+			anyaloc = 25
+		elseif hour < 9:
+			!!Asleep
+			anyaloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 9 and minut < 20:
+			!!Eat something in kitchen
+			anyaloc = 16
+		elseif hour = 9 and minut < 40:
+			!!Shower*
+			anyaloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 10:
+			!!In Bedroom
+			anyaloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 16:
+			!!On nice days goes to the beach, sometimes goes to the city with friends, or stays at home watching tv or reading etc
+			anyaloc = rand(17,19)
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 15:
+			!!Walk to community center
+			anyaloc = 20
+		elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
+			!!Works out at the community center
+			anyaloc = 21
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!Walk home
+			anyaloc = 22
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!!Family dinner
+			anyaloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 19:
+			if week = 7:
+				!!helps mom clean up after dinner
+				anyaloc = 23
+			else
+				!!Goes to a party
+				anyaloc = 24
+			end
+		else
+			if week = 7:
+				!!in her room 
+				anyaloc = 15
+			else
+				!!Goes to a party
+				anyaloc = 24
+			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
-
-
 !!---MOM--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
-		!!Asleep, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
-		momloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
-		!!shower
-		momloc = 2
-	elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
-		!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
-		momloc = 3
-	elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
-		momloc = 4
-		if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
-			!! Make Breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 1
-		elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-			!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
-			momloc[1] = 2
-		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
-			!! Family breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 3
+!!momloc [11] = daystart check in salon
+!!indorf = 1 means mom is in the village
+if indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
+			!!Asleep, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
+			momloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
+			!!shower
+			momloc = 2
+		elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
+			!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
+			momloc = 3
+		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
+			momloc = 4
+			if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
+				!! Make Breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 1
+			elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+				!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
+				momloc[1] = 2
+			elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
+				!! Family breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 3
+			else
+				!! Clean up breakfast table
+				momloc[1] = 4
+			end
+		elseif hour = 7 or (hour = 8 and minut < 10):
+			!!Cleaning random room in the house
+			!!variable set in cikl
+			momloc = momcleaning
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
+			!! Walking to work
+			momloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 16 and week < 5:
+			!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 18:00
+			momloc = 6
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 40 and week < 5:
+			!!Buying groceries for dinner and other stuff needed for home at the supermarket
+			momloc = 7
+		elseif hour < 17 and week < 5:
+			!!Walking home
+			momloc = 8
+		elseif hour = 17 and minut < 50 and week = 5:
+			!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 17:50
+			momloc = 9
+		elseif hour < 18 and week = 5:
+			!!Walking home
+			momloc = 10
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!Making dinner (On Friday she brings home leftovers from the cafe)
+			momloc = 11
+		elseif hour < 19:
+			!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
+			momloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 20:
+			if week = 1:
+				!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
+				momloc = 20
+			else
+				!! (cleaning the bathroom, sweeping, mopping, dusting, watching TV, taking a bath, etc in different rooms)
+				momloc = momcleaning2
+			end
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			if week = 1:
+				!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
+				momloc = 20
+			else
+				!! Watches TV with Vladimir
+				momloc = 13
+			end
 		else
-			!! Clean up breakfast table
-			momloc[1] = 4
-		end
-	elseif hour = 7 or (hour = 8 and minut < 10):
-		!!Cleaning random room in the house
-		!!variable set in cikl
-		momloc = momcleaning
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
-		!! Walking to work
-		momloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 16 and week < 5:
-		!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 18:00
-		momloc = 6
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 40 and week < 5:
-		!!Buying groceries for dinner and other stuff needed for home at the supermarket
-		momloc = 7
-	elseif hour < 17 and week < 5:
-		!!Walking home
-		momloc = 8
-	elseif hour = 17 and minut < 50 and week = 5:
-		!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 17:50
-		momloc = 9
-	elseif hour < 18 and week = 5:
-		!!Walking home
-		momloc = 10
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!!Making dinner (On Friday she brings home leftovers from the cafe)
-		momloc = 11
-	elseif hour < 19:
-		!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
-		momloc = 12
-	elseif hour < 20:
-		if week = 1:
-			!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
-			momloc = 20
-		else
-			!! (cleaning the bathroom, sweeping, mopping, dusting, watching TV, taking a bath, etc in different rooms)
-			momloc = momcleaning2
-		end
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		if week = 1:
-			!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
-			momloc = 20
-		else
-			!! Watches TV with Vladimir
-			momloc = 13
+			!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
+			momloc = 1
 		end
 	else
-		!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
-		momloc = 1
-	end
-else
-	if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
-		!! Sleep
-		momloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
-		!! Shower, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
-		momloc = 2
-	elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
-		!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
-		momloc = 3
-	elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
-		momloc = 4
-		if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
-			!! Make Breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 1
-		elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-			!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
-			momloc[1] = 2
-		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
-			!! Family breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 3
-		else
-			momloc[1] = 4
-			!! Clean up breakfast table
-		end
-	elseif hour = 11:
-		!!Cleaning random room in the house/laundry
-!! cleaning kitchen only one in use atm
-		momloc = 23
-	elseif hour = 11 and minut < 30:
-		!! Takes the car to town
-		momloc = 14
-	elseif hour < 12 and minut < 30:
-		!! Gets her nails done/hair cut at the salon or such things - On Sunday goes to the church during these hours
-		if week = 5:
-			momloc = 15
-		else
+		if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
+			!! Sleep
+			momloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
+			!! Shower, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
+			momloc = 2
+		elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
+			!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
+			momloc = 3
+		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
+			momloc = 4
+			if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
+				!! Make Breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 1
+			elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+				!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
+				momloc[1] = 2
+			elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
+				!! Family breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 3
+			else
+				momloc[1] = 4
+				!! Clean up breakfast table
+			end
+		elseif hour = 11:
+			!!Cleaning random room in the house/laundry
+	!! cleaning kitchen only one in use atm
+			momloc = 23
+		elseif hour = 11 and minut < 30:
+			!! Takes the car to town
+			momloc = 14
+		elseif hour < 12 and minut < 30:
+			!! Gets her nails done/hair cut at the salon or such things - On Sunday goes to the church during these hours
+			if week = 5:
+				momloc = 15
+			else
+				momloc = 16
+			end
+		elseif hour = 13 and minut < 30 and week = 6:
 			momloc = 16
-		end
-	elseif hour = 13 and minut < 30 and week = 6:
-		momloc = 16
-	elseif hour < 14:
-		!! Walks around different shops, looking at and buying stuff - On Sunday goes to church during these hours
-		momloc = 15
-	elseif hour < 17:
-		!!Helping out Sergey/Luda, going to Kolka's games?
-		momloc = rand(14,15)
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!! Making dinner
-		momloc = 11
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!!Family dinner (same as the family breakfast, Sveta doesn''t have to join it but we can have some family interactions like mom and step dad asking about how school was etc)
-		momloc = 12
-	elseif hour < 19:
-		!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
-		momloc = 13
-	elseif hour < 21:
-		!!Says she goes to see her sister, in reality sometimes see's her sister of fucks around with different people. - Sunday goes to evening mass
-		if week = 5:
-			momloc = 17
+		elseif hour < 14:
+			!! Walks around different shops, looking at and buying stuff - On Sunday goes to church during these hours
+			momloc = 15
+		elseif hour < 17:
+			!!Helping out Sergey/Luda, going to Kolka's games?
+			momloc = rand(14,15)
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!! Making dinner
+			momloc = 11
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!!Family dinner (same as the family breakfast, Sveta doesn''t have to join it but we can have some family interactions like mom and step dad asking about how school was etc)
+			momloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 19:
+			!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
+			momloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			!!Says she goes to see her sister, in reality sometimes see's her sister of fucks around with different people. - Sunday goes to evening mass
+			if week = 5:
+				momloc = 17
+			else
+				momloc = 18
+			end
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			!! Watches TV with Vladimir
+			momloc = 19
 		else
-			momloc = 18
+			!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
+			momloc = 1
 		end
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		!! Watches TV with Vladimir
-		momloc = 13
-	else
-		!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
-		momloc = 1
 	end
 end
 
 !!----STEPFATHER------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 10:
-		!! Sleep
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		!!Getting ready, sometimes has quicky
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		!!family breakfast
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
-		!!Reads paper in kitchen
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
-		!!Watching TV
-        sdadloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 45:
-		!! shave/get dressed
-		sdadloc = 5 
-	elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
-		!! Work (includes lunch time)
-		sdadloc = 0	
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!! Sets the table for dinner
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!! Family dinner
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 19 and minut < 45:
-		!! In garage or spending time with Misha
-		sdadloc = 8
-	elseif hour = 21 and minut < 45:
-		!! Watch tv in living room
-		sdadloc = 13
-    elseif hour < 22:
-		!! Take shower
-		sdadloc = 5	
-	else
-		!! Sleep - (small chance mom and step dad have sex before actually going to sleep)
-		sdadloc = 1
-	end
-else
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour < 8:
-		sdadloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 9:
-        sdadloc = 13
-	elseif hour < 11:
-		sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage		
-	elseif hour = 11 and minut < 10:
-		if week = 6:
+!!indorf = 1 means stepdad is in the village
+if indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 10:
+			!! Sleep
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			!!Getting ready, sometimes has quicky
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			!!family breakfast
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
+			!!Reads paper in kitchen
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
+			!!Watching TV
+			sdadloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 45:
+			!! shave/get dressed
+			sdadloc = 5 
+		elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
+			!! Work (includes lunch time)
+			sdadloc = 0	
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!! Sets the table for dinner
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!! Family dinner
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 19 and minut < 45:
+			!! In garage or spending time with Misha
 			sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+		elseif hour = 21 and minut < 45:
+			!! Watch tv in living room
+			sdadloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			!! Take shower
+			sdadloc = 5	
 		else
-			sdadloc = 0
+			!! Sleep - (small chance mom and step dad have sex before actually going to sleep)
+			sdadloc = 1
 		end
-	elseif hour < 13:
-		if week = 6:
+	else
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour < 8:
+			sdadloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 9:
+			sdadloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 11:
 			sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
-		else
-			sdadloc = 16
-		end
-	elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
-		if week = 6:
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage		
+		elseif hour = 11 and minut < 10:
+			if week = 6:
+				sdadloc = 8
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+			else
+				sdadloc = 0
+			end
+		elseif hour < 13:
+			if week = 6:
+				sdadloc = 8
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+			else
+				sdadloc = 16
+			end
+		elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
+			if week = 6:
+				sdadloc = 8
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+			else
+				sdadloc = 0
+			end	
+		elseif hour < 18:
 			sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			sdadloc = 13
 		else
-			sdadloc = 0
-		end	
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		sdadloc = 8
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		sdadloc = 13
-	else
-		sdadloc = 1
+			sdadloc = 1
+		end
 	end
 end
 
 !!---KOLKA------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 8:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour < 14:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 45:
-        kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
-	elseif hour < 17:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 45:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour < 21:
-		kolloc = 10
-	elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 23:
-		kolloc = 13
-	else
-		kolloc = 13
-	end
-else
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 10:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour < 18:
-        kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 8, 10, 11, 12)
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 21:
-		kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
-	elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 23:
-		kolloc = 13
+!!indorf = 1 means kolka is in the village
+if indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 8:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour < 14:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
+		elseif hour < 17:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			kolloc = 10
+		elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 23:
+			kolloc = 13
+		else
+			kolloc = 13
+		end
 	else
-		kolloc = 13
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 10:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 8, 10, 11, 12)
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
+		elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 23:
+			kolloc = 13
+		else
+			kolloc = 13
+		end
 	end
 end
 

locations/father.qsrc

@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ end
 
 if $clothingworntype = 'nude' and npc_pregtalk['A28'] = 0 and func('body_din','pregnancyVisibility') = 1:
     'Your stepfather looks at your belly with a surprised look on his face. He shakes his head in disappointment before looking back at you.: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re pregnant?"'
-    if npc_sex['A28']!0: 'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does: "All i can say is that i hope the baby is not mine... i''m so disappointed in you "<<pcs_nickname>>"'
+    if npc_sex['A28']!0: 'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does: "All i can say is that i hope the baby is not mine... i''m so disappointed in you "<<$pcs_nickname>>"'
     npc_pregtalk['A28'] = 1
     
 elseif $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and npc_pregtalk['A28'] = 0 and func('body_din','pregnancyVisibility') = 1:

locations/foto_shoot.qsrc

@@ -491,6 +491,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bikini':
 	minut += 120
 	modelpayfin = 325 + (modelpay) + (15*rand(0,5)) + (pcs_apprnc) + (min(city_modelling, 700)/2) + (pcs_mdlng/2 * 10)
 	modelfoto_bikini += 1
+	if pcs_inhib < 20: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(7,12)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(1,city_modelling)/10
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,6)
@@ -516,6 +517,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lingerie':
 	modelpayfin = 350 + (modelpay) + (15*rand(0,5)) + (pcs_apprnc) + (min(city_modelling, 700)/2) + (pcs_mdlng/2 * 10)
 	modelfoto_lingerie += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(6,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 25: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(7,13)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(0,city_modelling)/10
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,6)
@@ -543,6 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexy':
 	modelfoto_glamour += 1
 	modelfoto_ero_clo += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(5,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 30: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(7,12)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(1,city_modelling)/10
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(1,6)
@@ -563,6 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'transparent':
 	modelfoto_transparent += 1
 	modelfoto_nip += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(6,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 45: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(7,13)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(1,city_modelling)/10
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,8)
@@ -588,6 +592,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trans_ling':
 	modelfoto_nip += 1
 	modelfoto_lingerie += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(8,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 45: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(9,14)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(0,city_modelling)/10
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,8)
@@ -618,6 +623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'topless':
 	modelfoto_nip += 1
 	modelfoto_topless += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(6,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 50: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(8,14)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(1,city_modelling)/10
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,8)
@@ -641,6 +647,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tasteful':
 	modelpayfin = 600 + (modelpay * 2) + (15*rand(0,5))
 	modelfoto_tastenude += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(9,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 40: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(10,20)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(0,city_modelling)/4
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,10)
@@ -664,6 +671,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'topless_nude':
 	modelfoto_nude += 1
 	modelfoto_toplessnude += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(9,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 55: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(10,20)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(0,city_modelling)/4
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(3,10)
@@ -686,12 +694,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nude':
 	minut += 120
 	modelpay = (pcs_mdlng/2 * 10) + min(city_modelling, 700) + pcs_apprnc
 	modelpayfin = 600 + (modelpay * 2) + (15*rand(0,5))
-	if modelfoto_nude = 0: modelpayfin * 2 & foto_persuade = 0
+	if modelfoto_nude = 0: modelpayfin = modelpayfin * 2 & foto_persuade = 0
 	modelfoto_nude += 1
 	modelfoto_fullnude += 1
 	modelfoto_nip += 1
 	modelfoto_pussy += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(9,10)
+	if pcs_inhib < 60: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(10,20)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'modelling', rand(10,15)
 	if city_modelling > 200: gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(5,10)
@@ -732,6 +741,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erotic':
 	modelfoto_pussy += 1
 	modelfoto_asshole += 1
 	mdlng_exp += rand(1,4)
+	if pcs_inhib < 65: gs 'willpower','pay','self'
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'modelling', rand(5,10)
 	gs 'fame', 'city', 'porn', rand(5,15)
 	gs 'fame', 'pav', 'porn', rand(0,15)

locations/furi.qsrc

@@ -38,11 +38,14 @@ act 'Try to get a lift':
 	furi_driver = rand(1,20)
 
 	if nroad = 0:
-		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need to go to Pavlovsk, could you give me a lift if you''re going in that direction?"'
+		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need a ride, could you give me a lift?"'
 		furi_recog_city = rand(1,200)
+	elseif nroad = 10:
+		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need a ride, could you give me a lift?"'
+		furi_recog_gad = rand(1,200)
 	elseif nroad = 20:
 		furi_recog_pav = rand(1,200)
-		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need to go to St. Petersburg, could you give me a lift if you''re going in that direction?"'
+		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need a ride, could you give me a lift?"'
 	end
 	if furi_recog =< furibj:
 		if (furibj / 10) >= furi_driver:

locations/furisex.qsrc

@@ -52,12 +52,10 @@ elseif furisex = 6:
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
 	
-	act 'Leave his truck':
 	furisex = 0
-
-	if nroad = 0:nroad = 20 & gt 'pavCommercial'
-	if nroad = 20:nroad = 0 & gt 'nord'
-	end
+	if nroad ! 20: act 'Have him drop you off in Pavlovsk': gt 'pavCommercial'
+	if nroad ! 10: act 'Have him drop you off in Gadukino': gt 'gadukino'
+	if nroad ! 0: act 'Have him drop you off in St. Petersburg': gt 'nord'
 elseif furisex = 100:
 	if furibj >= 5:
 		'The driver starts the engine and unzips his trousers. His semi-hard cock flops out and without further instruction you reach over and jerk him a few times to get him properly stiff.'
@@ -137,12 +135,10 @@ elseif furisex = 101:
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
 	
-	act 'Leave his truck':
 	furisex = 0
-
-	if nroad = 0:nroad = 20 & gt 'pavCommercial'
-	if nroad = 20:nroad = 0 & gt 'nord'
-	end
+	if nroad ! 20: act 'Have him drop you off in Pavlovsk': gt 'pavCommercial'
+	if nroad ! 10: act 'Have him drop you off in Gadukino': gt 'gadukino'
+	if nroad ! 0: act 'Have him drop you off in St. Petersburg': gt 'nord'
 end
 
 --- furisex ---------------------------------

locations/gaddvor.qsrc

@@ -43,6 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 		if grandmaQW['chore_feed_chickens'] = 1 or (hour >= 6 and hour < 20 and month >= 4 and month <= 10):'In the yard there are several <a href="exec:gt ''gaddvor'',''chickens''">chickens</a> running around.'
 
 		if mira_guest = 1: Miraloc = 7 & 'Your friend <a href="exec: gt ''miroslava'', ''Start''">Mira</a> stands next to you.'
+		if MiraLoc ! 7: mira_guest = 0
 
 		act '<b>Leave and go into the village</b>':minut += 5 & gt 'gadukino'
 		if 	grandpaQW['chore_clean_yard'] = 1:
@@ -211,6 +212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chickens':
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
+	act 'Leave': gt'gaddvor'
 	!job Granny
 	if grandmaQW['chore_feed_chickens'] = 1:
 		act 'Feed the chickens':
@@ -226,7 +228,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chickens':
 			act 'Return back to your grandmother': minut += 1 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandma'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Leave': gt'gaddvor'
 end
 
 --- gaddvor ---------------------------------

locations/gadfield.qsrc

@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow':
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Close the book':gt $loc, $metka
+					act 'Close the book':gt'gadfield','cow'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow2':
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Close the book':gt $loc, $metka
+					act 'Close the book':gt 'gadfield','cow2'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow'
+					act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow3'
 				end
 			end
 			if temper >= 15 and sunWeather = 1 and mira = 0:
@@ -544,7 +544,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 					gs 'sweat', 'add', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow'
+					act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow3'
 				end
 				if pcs_sleep < 40:
 					act 'Take a nap (1:00)':
@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 						if temper >= 25 and sunWeather = 1:pcs_hydra -= 12
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow'
+						act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow3'
 					end
 				end
 				act 'Pick flowers (1:00)':
@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 					gs 'stat'
 
 
-					act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow'
+					act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','cow3'
 				end
 				act 'Read a book (1:00)':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -604,7 +604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow3':
 					end
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Close the book':gt $loc, $metka
+					act 'Close the book':gt 'gadfield','cow3'
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -107,19 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_edge':
 	else
 		if metmira = 1 and MiraLoc ! 3 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 10:
 			mirarand = rand(1,10)
-			if mirarand >= 6:
-				*clr & cla
-
-				gs 'Miroslava','miraclothes'
-				*nl
-				'As you walk through the forest, you hear a familiar voice call out to you, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, wait up!" You turn around and see Mira excitedly bounding up behind you.'
-				'"Want to join me on my walk?" she asks. "I love walking through the forest in the morning."'
-
-				act 'Say hi':
-					MiraLoc = 3
-					gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
-				end
-			end
+			if mirarand >= 6: MiraLoc = 3 & gt 'gadforest_event', 'mira_morning_walk'
 		end
 		if foresteventrand <= 2 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 16 and mushroom_pickersday ! daystart: mushroom_pickers = 1 & gt 'gadforest_event', 'mushroom_pickers1'
 		if foresteventrand <= 4 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 16 and mushroom_pickersday ! daystart: mushroom_pickers = 2 & gt 'gadforest_event', 'mushroom_pickers2'
@@ -128,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_edge':
 	! Events with or without Mira
 	if foresteventrand <= 8 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and month >= 4 and month <= 10 and gadboyday ! daystart:
 		if mitkaday ! daystart:
-			gt 'gadforest_event', 'mitka_temporary_event'
+			if MiraLoc = 3: gt 'gadforest_event', 'mitka_temporary_event'
 		!	gt 'mitka_forest_1', 'mitka'
 		!elseif kolyambaday ! daystart:
 		!	gt 'mitka_forest_1', 'kolyamba'
@@ -563,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bushcraft':
 
 		! bushcraft exp gained is random to keep it from increasing too fast
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
-			bushcraft_exp += rand(0,bushcraft_rand)
+			bushcraft_exp += rand(1,bushcraft_rand)
 		end
 	else
 		! use the lower chance of ripping clothes when Sveta has higher bushcraft
@@ -583,11 +571,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'torncloth':
 	if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
 		if (PCloThinness = 1 or PCloSkirt > 0) and PCloQuality < 5:
 			!skirts, not fit, and not high-class enough by illume
-			'Oops, your clothes get snagged and tear slightly.'
+			'<font color="red">Your clothes get caught on some brush and tear slightly.</font>'
 			dynamic $clothingworntype + 'H[<<clothingwornnumber>>] -= 1'
 			!add remove clothes if worn out
 			if dyneval('RESULT = <<$clothingworntype>>H[<<clothingwornnumber>>]') <= 0:
-				'Your ripped clothes were barely holding together, but now they have finally fell apart. You are naked now.'
+				'<font color="red">Your clothes were barely holding together, but now they have fallen apart completely. You discard the remains and are left naked.</font>'
 				gadforest_clothestorn = 1
 				gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadforest'
 				gs 'stat'

locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_nude_event':
 		if pcs_inhib < 50:inhib_exp += rand(2,4)
 		npc_rel['A60'] += 5
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadforest'
+		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'forest_edge'
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -169,6 +169,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_nude_event':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_morning_walk':
+	*clr & cla
+
+	gs 'Miroslava','miraclothes'
+	*nl
+	'As you walk through the forest, you hear a familiar voice call out to you, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, wait up!" You turn around and see Mira excitedly bounding up behind you.'
+	'"Want to join me on my walk?" she asks. "I love walking through the forest in the morning."'
+
+	act 'Say Hello': gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mushroom_pickers1':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -232,6 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mushroom_pickers3':
 	else
 		act 'Leave them be':gt 'gadforest','forest_outskirts'
 		act 'Say Hello':
+			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			if pickersQW <= 3:pickersQW += 1
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -128,8 +128,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'As you turn to leave, she stops you, "One last thing, here are some rubles for the train ticket to get you back to Pavlovsk."'
 
 		act 'Leave': gadstay = 0 & gt 'gaddvor'
-	!! Returning home after being lost; no penalty for not doing chores or disappointing either grandparent
-	elseif lost_girl = 1 and hour >= 6 and hour < 20:
+	!! Returning home after being lost at least overnight; no penalty for not doing chores or disappointing either grandparent
+	elseif lost_girl = 1 and hour >= 6 and hour < 20 and daystart > forest_lostday:
 		*clr & cla
 		lost_girl = 0
 		grandmaQW['disappointment'] = 0
@@ -143,9 +143,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		*nl
 		'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, your grandfather and I were so worried when you didn''t come back home from the forest."'
 		'"We are so glad you are back safe and sound. Go have a hot meal and shower and relax."'
-		'"Also, don''t worry about any chores today or tomorrow, just focus on recovering."'
+		'"Also, don''t worry about any chores today, just focus on recovering."'
 
 		act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'main'
+	!! Returning home after being lost but escaped within the same day; no reaction from grandparents and still expected to get chores done
+	elseif lost_girl = 1:
+		lost_girl = 0
+		gt 'gadhouse', 'main'
 	!!Grandma kicks Sveta out for being a whore
 	elseif grandmaQW['nudity_trouble_limit'] = 50 and hour >= 6 and hour < 20:
 		*clr & cla

locations/gadprostitutes.qsrc

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	!end
 	if hour >= 16 and hour <= 23:
 		! event to remove Sveta from being miras pimp if she becomes the boys slut, the village whore
-		if MiraLoc = 8 and mirapimp = 1 and (npc_QW['A63'] >= 10 or gadriver_gang = 2):
+		if MiraLoc = 8 and mirapimp = 1 and (npc_QW['A63'] >= 11 or gadriver_gang = 2):
 			*clr & cla
 
 			mirapimp = 2
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'As soon as you are face to face with Mira she winds up and smacks you across the face as hard as she can. You are stunned a bit by and stagger to the ground. You feel warm tears begin to run down your face.'
 			'Mira commands you, "Stand up bitch!"'
 			'You rise and meet her gaze, she looks very pleased with herself. "Remember that. Now you know exactly how that feels" she says.'
-			if npc_QW['A63'] >= 10:
+			if npc_QW['A63'] >= 11:
 				'Mira continues, "Look at you, just another slut. Mitka, Kolyamba, and Vasyan told me now much they all love fucking and sharing you now. You thought you were so much better than me, well no more! I''m not working for you anymore. You have proven yourself perfectly capable of enjoying getting shared by a group of friends."'
 			elseif gadriver_gang = 2:
 				'Mira continues, "Look at you, just another whore. All the village men can talk about is how much you moaned for each and every one of them. You thought you were so much better than me, well no more! I''m not working for you anymore. You have proven yourself perfectly capable of enjoying getting gangbanged by multiple groups of strangers."'
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if MiraLoc = 8:
 				'You see Mira standing below a streetlight a little ways down the road.'
 				! event to become miras pimp if not the boys slut, not the village whore
-				if mirapimp = 0 and npc_QW['A63'] < 10 and gadriver_gang = 0:
+				if mirapimp = 0 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11 and gadriver_gang = 0:
 					gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'hard'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 						act 'Make Mira your prostitute (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
 							'You call her over to you. Mira, hurries over and looks at you with downcast eyes.  "Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>.  You having a good night?"'
-							'You look at her angrily. "A better question, my lovely whore, is ''Are you having a good night''?  I want 500 <b>₽</b> per customer you have each night."  You tell her earnestly.'
+							'You look at her angrily. "A better question, my lovely whore, is ''Are you having a good night''?  I want 200 <b>₽</b> per customer you have each night."  You tell her earnestly.'
 							'Mira looks up in shock and with a hurt look on her face.  "What are you talking about?  Do you think I am a hooker?"'
 							'You step up to her and place your hand on her face.  Mira closes her eyes and leans into your hand.  You look into her eyes once she opens them and then SLAP her hard across the face.  Mira falls to the ground and starts to cry.  "You''re my property whore.  You will do whatever I tell you.  You will never lie to me ever again, or I swear I will make you pay.  Understand me?!"'
 							'Mira nods and she wipes away tears.'

locations/gadroad.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			mirarand = rand(1,10)
 			if mirarand >= 6:
 				MiraLoc = 5
-				'You can go drink with Mira, Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan at their <a href="exec:gt ''mitkabuh'',''partywithMira''">trailer</a> hidden in the woods.'
+				if npc_QW['A60'] >= 16 and gadriver_gang = 2:
+					'You can go drink with Mira, Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan at their <a href="exec:gt ''mitkabuh_group'',''partywithMira''">trailer</a> hidden in the woods.'
+				else
+					'You can go drink with Mira, Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan at their <a href="exec:gt ''mitkabuh'',''partywithMira''">trailer</a> hidden in the woods.'
+				end
 			else
 				'You can go drink with Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan at their <a href="exec:gt ''mitkabuh'',''partyalone''">trailer</a> hidden in the woods.'
 			end

locations/gadsarai.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	'You can store some extra mushrooms and berries here if you don''t want to carry them around all the time.'
 	'The left side of the barn has the stalls for your grandparents horse, cow, and boar.'
 
-	gs 'bicycle', 'gadsarai'
 	clr
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -50,6 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			act 'Return back to your grandfather': minut += 2 & gt 'gadhouse', 'grandpa'
 		end
 	end
+	gs 'bicycle', 'gadsarai'
 	if (month < 4 or month > 10) or (hour < 9 or hour > 20) or (grandpaQW['chore_feed_horse'] = 1 or grandpaQW['chore_brush_horse'] = 1 or grandpaQW['chore_lead_horse_to_field'] = 1 or grandpaQW['chore_bathe_horse'] = 1):
 		act 'Enter the horses stall': gt 'gadsarai', 'horse'
 	end

locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 						guy += 1
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You are actually feeling a bit ecstatic from all of this, you didn''t even notice that you''ve changed position. Your ass sticks out in the air teasing the men. While you were busy pleasing someone''s cock with your mouth, one of the men enetered your <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina from behind.'
+						'You are actually feeling a bit ecstatic from all of this, you didn''t even notice that you''ve changed position. Your ass sticks out in the air teasing the men. While you were busy pleasing someone''s cock with your mouth, one of the men entered your <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina from behind.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 						minut -= 5

locations/gschool_chats.qsrc

@@ -65,6 +65,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 					'When you walk in the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at your scandalous display of flesh from your uniform or lack therefor of. The nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you a space to walk up to them and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
 				end
 			end
+		else
+			'You are using the school uniform cheat and not wearing uniform, therefore there are no reactions to your uniform'
+			*nl
+			gs 'gschool_groups', 'nerds'
 		end
 		*nl
 		'The outcasts are mostly hiding away from everyone else, hoping that no one will pick on them today.'
@@ -160,9 +164,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		end
+	else
+		'You are using the school uniform cheat and not wearing uniform, therefore no one can react to your uniform.'
+		gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks2':
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
@@ -272,6 +284,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 			'Christina steps forward. "Get out of here with your whorish clothes, no one wants you around." You hear several murmers of agreement from most of the rest, it looks like even Igor, Katja, Vicky, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast, and Vanya appear to agree. They either give you the cold shoulder or refuse to meet your eyes. Feeling unwelcome you turn around and leave.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
+	else
+		'You are using the school uniform cheat so no one reacts to your uniform, this could be good or bad.'
+		gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
+		gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 

locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc

@@ -312,6 +312,47 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zinaida':
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'natalia':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	if NikoEv >= 17 and VKNatFollowup = 0:VKNatFollowup = 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big240.jpg"></center>'
+	if VKAftermathEvent > 0 and VKNatFollowup = 0:
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		VKNatFollowup = 1
+		'You sit down next to Natalia and she quickly turns to you with a warm smile as she says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> It''s so great to see you! I hope that you are feeling better. You have been through so much." You give her a forced smile as you reply, "I''m fine Nat. Thank you for caring." Natalia smile turns to a frown as she responds, "You''re still having the nightmares aren''t you? I am looking for a way to help you with those. I plan on asking my mother for something. She used to get a lot of nightmares when she was young so she may know of some good ways to get rid of them." You place you hand on her shoulder then say, "Don''t worry about me Nat. I''ll be fine." Nat places her and on yours then nods before you get up then head back to class.'
+	elseif NikoEv >= 17 and VKNatFollowup = 1:
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		VKNatFollowup = 2
+		'You approach Natalia and her eyes immediately light up as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! It''s always good to see you. I hope things have been going better with Niko." You give her an approving nod before she says, "Well if you ever need to talk about anything then please stop by. I always look forward to chatting with you." You then rub on Natalia''s shoulder as gives you a warm smile before you get up, to go to your next class.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A240'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 100:
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		VK = rand(1,5)
+		if VK = 1:
+			'You see Natalia drawing something in her notebook but she quickly closes it when she sees you then says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, how are you doing today?" You reply, "I doing great today, I just stopped by to chat with you. Do you have some time to chat?" She happily nods as she says, "For you? Of course!" You and Natalia spend the next few minutes chatting about your interests.'
+		elseif VK = 2:
+			'Natalia sits quietly staring at the other students chatting, looking very lonely. You approach her and wave. Natalia''s eyes immediately light up as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s so great to see you. Would you like to chat for awhile?" You nod then replay, "Of course I would." You both spend the next few minutes, swapping stories while laughing and joking.'
+		elseif VK = 3:
+			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida, "Come on Natalia,  you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies, "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia then say, "Hey Nat the guidance counselor want to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you a approving nod then says, "Okay I better go. See you Zin and you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers, "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
+		elseif VK = 4:
+			'As you approach Natalia, she closes her notebook then waves at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come and have a seat." You sit down next to Natalia then discuss current events while occasionally gossiping about your classmates.'
+		else		
+			'You can see Natalia tidying up her back when you sit down next to her. She immediately pauses what she is doing then turns to you with an instant smile on her face as she says, "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t notice you there. I''m sorry." You place your hand on her shoulder then reply, "Relax there is nothing to be sorry for. How have you been?" Natalia nods as you both spent the next few minute chatting about various topics.'
+		end
+	elseif npc_rel['A240'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 100:
+		'You s Natalia and as soon as she notices you, she quickly packs her stuff then begins walking away. She doesn''t seem to like you and has no intention of changing that.'
+	elseif pav_slut >= 100 and VKAftermathEvent = 0:
+		'As you approach Natalia she takes one look at you then packs up her things before quickly walking away from you. She obviously does not want to be seen with you.'
+	else
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		'You approach Natalia then sit down next to her as she quietly looks up at you. She says nothing as you begin discussing current events. Natalia listens and occasionally adds into the conversation.'
+	end
+
+	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -456,5 +497,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesco':
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
+
+
 --- gschool_chats2 ---------------------------------
 

locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -33,6 +33,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 	
 	if InvitationToDimkaNYparty = 1 and day = 31 and day = nyp_day: act 'Follow Dimka to the New Year''s party at his home': killvar 'InvitationToDimkaNYparty' & minut += 30 & gt 'sny', '3'
 
+	if hour = 14 and week < 6 and kanikuli = 0:
+
+		if NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
+			if week = 1 and NikoIntro = 0:
+				gt 'NikoEv', 'Intro'			
+			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 6 and NikoDate = 0:
+				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School'
+			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 8 and NikoDate = 0:
+				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School 2'
+			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 22:
+				gt 'NikoEv2', 'Recovery'
+			end
+		end
+	end	
+	
 	if week < 6 and hour = 14 and kanikuli = 0 and afterschool_day ! daystart:
 		afterschool_day = daystart
 		if rand(0,3) = 0:
@@ -130,12 +145,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 				if minut < 30:
 					'It''s too early for school now.'
 				else
-					if NikoEv = 10: gt 'NikoDates', 'Walk Of Shame'
+					if NikoEv = 10: gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk Of Shame'
 					act 'Wait for class': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 				end
 			elseif hour = 7:
 				if NikoEv = 10:
-					gt 'NikoDates', 'Walk Of Shame'
+					gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk Of Shame'
 				elseif minut <= 45:
 					act '<b>Go to class</b>': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 				else
@@ -155,7 +170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif hour = 8:
-				if NikoEv = 10: gt 'NikoDates', 'Walk Of Shame'
+				if NikoEv = 10: gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk Of Shame'
 				'You missed your whole first class, hopefully no one noticed.'
 				act '<b>Rush to class</b>':	demerit += 10 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 			elseif hour < 14:
@@ -218,20 +233,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 
 	if hour = 14 and week < 6 and kanikuli = 0:
 
-		if NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
-			if NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 6 and NikoDate = 0:
-				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School'
-			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 8 and NikoDate = 0:
-				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School 2'
-			elseif (NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoDate = 1) or NikoEv = 11:
-				'You can see <a href="exec: gt ''NikoEv'', ''Niko Dates''">Nikolai Volkov</a> smoking outside of the school.'
-			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv >= 17 and NikoEv <= 20:
-				'<a href="exec: gt ''NikoEv2'', ''Events''">Nikolai Volkov</a> is smoking outside of the school.'
-			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 22:
-				gt 'NikoEv2', 'Recovery'
-			end
-		end
-
 		if ivan_afterschool = 1: act 'Meet Ivan after school': gt 'gschool_sex', 'afterschool'
 
 		if LinaSlut > 0 and rand(1,10) < 3: 'You see Lina, Dan and Vasily leaving the school together.'
@@ -259,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10:
 				'You can see <a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Start''">Fedor</a> with his backpack around his arm, standing by himself.'
 			end
-			if NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoDate = 1 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart or NikoEv = 11 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
+			if NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoDate = 1 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart or NikoEv = 11:
 				'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoEv'', ''Niko Dates''">Nikolai Volkov</a> smoking outside of the school.'
 			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv >= 17 and NikoEv <= 20 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
 				'<a href="exec:gt ''NikoEv2'', ''Events''">Nikolai Volkov</a> is smoking outside of the school.'	
@@ -281,9 +282,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			end
 			if IgorLoverQW > 0 and igorkruglovday ! daystart and IdorBlock = 0: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''igorhome'', ''entrance''">Igor Kruglov</a>', '5'
 			if fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and kotovVSkozlov = 1:
-				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Strela Chat''">', '5'
+				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Strela Chat''">Fedor</a>', '5'
 			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and fedorkozqw = 2 and FedorLuv < -4:
-				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv2'', ''Fedor Breakup''">', '5'
+				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv2'', ''Fedor Breakup''">Fedor</a>', '5'
 			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10:
 				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Start''">Fedor</a>', '5'
 			end

locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 	menu_off = 1
 	pcs_grades += rand(0,1)
-	artslks_exp += rand(1,2)
+	artskls_exp += rand(1,2)
 	agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classart.jpg"></center>'
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			grupvalue[4] -= 1
 			grupvalue[3] += 1
 			pcs_grades += rand(0,1)
-			artslks_exp += rand(1,2)
+			artskls_exp += rand(1,2)
 			agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 			traits['nerd_lessons'] += 1
 			if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of art and famous artist.'
 			act 'Ask a question about the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
-				artslks_exp += rand(0,1)
+				artskls_exp += rand(0,1)
 				agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 				pcs_grades += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
@@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			'Mr. Vasilyev tries to convince you of the importance of todays lesson, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
-				artslks_exp += rand(0,1)
+				artskls_exp += rand(0,1)
 				agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 				pcs_grades += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/angryteacher.jpg"></center>'
@@ -841,7 +841,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				*clr & cla
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				grupvalue[3] += 1
-				artslks_exp += rand(0,2)
+				artskls_exp += rand(0,2)
 				agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 				pcs_grades += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'

locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			*nl
 			'Anatoly continues, "Do not let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." Anatoly reaches for some papers then begins handing them out while the boy crosses his arms trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
 		else
-			'A few students raise their hands and Anatoly points to Julia Milov, who answers, "The answer is four because Anna is the only one with bottle caps. Dina only has pebbles which might as well not be mentioned, as it does not pertain to the answer needed." Anatoly tilts his head in surprise at Julia''s answer while Christina whispers to one of the other girls, "Wow she is really smart. Is she studying to be a teacher or something?"'
+			'A few students raise their hands and Anatoly points to Natalia Pavlova, who answers, "The answer is four because Anna is the only one with bottle caps. Dina only has pebbles which might as well not be mentioned, as it does not pertain to the answer needed." Anatoly tilts his head in surprise at Natalia''s answer while Christina whispers to one of the other girls, "Wow she is really smart. Is she studying to be a teacher or something?"'
 			*nl
 			'Anatoly nods his head then says, responding, "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to, as a trick question. Now I would like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I will be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." Anatoly reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
 		end
@@ -141,9 +141,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				if (VKrand = 1 and npc_rel['A2'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 1 and grupTipe = 3):
 					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you faintly hear, "Psst!" You look toward Artem to see him holding up a paper scrap behind his seat which has the answer written out. You confidently look toward Mr. Anatoly before telling him the correct answer, resulting in a surprised look on his face before he says, "Hmm, very good, but do try to keep your head up during class, okay?" You give him a nod before he continues his lesson.'
 				elseif (VKrand = 2 and npc_rel['A12'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 2 and grupTipe = 3):
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Julia ask Mr. Tsarev, "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y" Mr. Tsarev turns to Julia then says, "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Natalia ask Mr. Tsarev, "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y" Mr. Tsarev turns to Natalia then says, "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
 					*nl
-					'Julia nods with a smile, as Anatoly turns around and continues his lesson, completely forgetting about you. Julia turns to you with a warm smile then turns back toward Mr. Tsarev for the rest of the period.'
+					'Natalia nods with a smile, as Anatoly turns around and continues his lesson, completely forgetting about you. Natalia turns to you with a warm smile then turns back toward Mr. Tsarev for the rest of the period.'
 				elseif VKrand = 3 and NikoLuv >= 2 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
 					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you suddenly hear Evgeny let out a yelp as his chair is pulled out from under him, causing him to fall to the ground. Mr. Tsarev recoils in shock before suddenly shouting, "NIKOLAI! WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU!?" Niko and most of the class are laughing loudly, as Anatoly shouts out, "NIKOLAI GO TO THE PRINCIPAL''S OFFICE NOW!" Niko packs his stuff in his bag then heads toward the door, giving you a wink as he passes by.'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -257,8 +257,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					'You giggle as you reply, "Sure sounds like fun." While sticking your tongue out at her, causing you both to giggle before turning back to your phones.'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
-			elseif VK = 2 and JuliaMiLoveQW >= 10:
-				'You continue browsing the web, when you suddenly receive a text message from Julia Milov; depicting your name, and her''s, inside of a heart together. You turn to Julia to see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before replying with, "You are so precious to me, Julia." Julia quickly replies, "I am so happy that I have you in my life." You reply to Julia, "Ohhh you are just so cute. Muah." Julia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
+			elseif VK = 2 and NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
+				'You continue browsing the web, when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia Pavlova; depicting your name, and her''s, inside of a heart together. You turn to Natalia to see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before replying with, "You are so precious to me, Natalia." Natalia quickly replies, "I am so happy that I have you in my life." You reply to Natalia, "Ohhh you are just so cute. Muah." Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 3 and NikoVolkovQW >= 5 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
 				'While you are browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko, reading; "Who is this beautiful creature, I see? This precious gem, sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around, and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko to see him with a loving smile. You then type back, "You are so sweet Niko." Niko gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'

locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 			gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback'
 		elseif NikoPayback = 2 and NikoPayback_Day ! daystart:
 			gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 2'
-		elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 14 and VKWip = 100:
+		elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 14:
 			lunch_event = daystart
 			gt 'NikoEv2', 'Vicky Talk'	
 		elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 16 and VKWip = 100:

locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beg_christina':
 		christinaphotos = 1		
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'labia', 'kick'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
 		'You reluctantly nod your head and meekly agree. "Ok." You tell her.'
 		'"That''s right bitch, I own your ass now, Now roll over and get on your hands and knees." You reluctantly do as she says and get down on your hands and knees.'
 		'She walks behind you. "Now spread those legs so we can get a nice shot of that disgusting pussy and dirty ass of yours." You blush with shame but do as she says, she takes several more pictures laughing the whole time. "You are going to do anything I want any time I say it from now on or everyone in school will see these pictures." You meekly nod on the verge of tears.'

locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc

@@ -247,9 +247,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters':
 	end
 
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'pantiless_flash':
-
-		act 'Further': gt 'swamp_yard', 'campfire'
-
 		*clr & cla
 		if hunter_sexual_comfort > 30:
 			hunter_collective_opinion += 1
@@ -264,6 +261,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters':
 		gs 'arousal', 5, 'flashlite'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
+		
+		act 'Further': gt 'swamp_yard', 'campfire'
 	end
 
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'boy_talk':

locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -19,35 +19,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	end
 
 	$tab_text += '<center><h2>Housing</h2></center>'
-	if pavSharedAptEnabled = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You share an apartment with three others in Pavlovsk. Bills are paid by the other tennants in exchange for your house services')
-	if home_owned[1] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment, in the city residential area. Rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically, in sum of <<home_rent[1]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL>></b> days')
-	if home_owned[1] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment, in the city residential area. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
-	if home_owned[1] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment, in the city residential area. It''s currently occupied by your tenants.')
-	if home_owned[2] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You live in a two-room apartment, in a large apartment complex, with your parents and siblings in Pavlovsk.')
+	if pavSharedAptEnabled = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You share an apartment with three others in Pavlovsk. Your bills are paid by the other tenants in exchange for your house services')
+	if home_owned[1] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment in the city residential area. Your rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically in sum of <<home_rent[1]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL>></b> days')
+	if home_owned[1] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment in the city residential area. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[1] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a two-room apartment in the city residential area. It''s currently occupied by your tenants.')
+	if home_owned[2] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You live in a two-room apartment in a large apartment complex. You live with your parents and siblings in Pavlovsk.')
 	if home_owned[3] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own small holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the communal village.')
-	if home_owned[4] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment, in Pushkin. Rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically, in sum of <<home_rent[4]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL4>></b> days')
-	if home_owned[5] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a vacant block, in the city suburbs. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
-	if home_owned[5] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a block in the city suburbs, upon which, you are building a house. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
-	if home_owned[5] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own an impressive mansion in the suburbs of St. Petersburg. Utility bills are on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[4] > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You rent a two-room apartment in Pushkin. Your rent for the apartment is subtracted automatically in sum of <<home_rent[4]>> <b>₽</b> us electric bill on 25th of each month. You are currently paid up for <b><<ArendHouseSL4>></b> days')
+	if home_owned[5] = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a vacant block in the city suburbs. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[5] = 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own a block in the city suburbs, upon which, you are building a house. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
+	if home_owned[5] = 3:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You own an impressive mansion in the suburbs of St. Petersburg. Your utility bills are due on the 25th of each month.')
 	$tab_text += '<center><h2>Work</h2></center>'
-	if workPTU > 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a teacher at the Lycée. Working days Mon-Sat, with 14.00 to 16.00. Salary 300r/day. Dress code - office clothes, Strict. The road from the apartment to the Lyceum takes 2 hours 10 minutes.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workKafe > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working as a waitress at The Roadhouse cafe. You need to come to work between 11 and 12, working days: Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday. At work, you can receive tips from customers, and payment is received on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workhosp > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a nurse in the city residential area clinic. You need to come to work between 8 and 9, during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and worksalon > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a masseuse in the city at the Beauty Bar. You need to come to work with 9 to 10, working days, Monday, Wednesday, Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workSec > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a secretary at Titran-Express. At work you need to come up 9, during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and tanwork > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a governess for Tanya, at Nicholas'' luxury city apartment. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 15, Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 9, Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 9, Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
+	if workPTU > 2:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a teacher at the Lycée and your schedule is Mon-Sat, with you teaching between 14:00 to 16:00. Your Salary is 300r/day. The dress code is Office Clothes, Strict. The road from the apartment to the Lyceum takes 2 hours 10 minutes.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workKafe > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working as a waitress at The Roadhouse cafe. You need to come to work between 11:00-12:00 while your working days are: Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday. At work, you can receive tips from customers and your wages are received on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workhosp > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a nurse in the city residential area clinic. You need to come to work between 08:00-09:00 during the week. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and worksalon > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a masseuse in the city at the Beauty Bar. You need to come to work with 09:00-10:00 while your working days are: Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workSec > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a secretary at Titran-Express. For work you need to come by 09:00 during the week Monday-Friday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and tanwork > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a governess for Tanya at Nicholas'' luxury city apartment. Salary is automatically transferred on the 25th of each month.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 15:00 Monday to Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work1 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Saturday and Sunday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and young_shop_work2 = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work in the city as a store clerk at Pussy-Cats - youth clothing store. Work starts at 09:00 Monday through Friday. The salary shall be issued once a week on Fridays.')
 	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workFabrika = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You work as a seamstress in a factory in Pavlovsk. Work is every day except Saturday and Sunday. Salary is automatically transferred on 25th of each month.')
-	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as clothing saleswoman. Work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday, starting at 8 AM. Salary depends on sales.')
-	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work in Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Work is every day from 16 to 19. Salary is 250 plus tips.')
-	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can deliver mail for the postmaster. Work starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450.')
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work part-time as a cleaner in pavlovo clinic. Work is from 16 to 21.')
-	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. Free schedule, every day from 15 to midnight. No salary, only tips.')
+	if workrin = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working at the market in Arthur''s tent as clothing saleswoman. You work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday with a start time of 08:00. Salary depends on sales.')
+	if maidqw = 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work in Pavlovsk hotel as a maid. Your work schedule is every day from 16:00 to 19:00 and your salary is 250 plus tips.')
+	if postjobQW = 2 or postjobQW = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can deliver mail for the postmaster. Teh work day starts each Saturday between 11:00 and 12:00. Salary is 450.')
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and gpoliuborka > 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work part-time as a cleaner in Pavlovosk clinic. Your schedule is from 16 to 21.')
+	if stripwork >= 1:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You can work as a stripper in the city industrial region. You have an opene schedule that can be every day from 15:00-00:00. No salary as you earn tips.')
 	if film > 0:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are working in the city industrial region as pornographic actress under the name <<$pfname>>')
 	if bumtolik = 4:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have been asked to help the homeless at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region.')
-	if bumtolik >= 5:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You volunteer at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region, working with the homeless. Working hours are from 9 to 17, Saturday and Sunday.')
+	if bumtolik >= 5:$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You volunteer at the Mercy Clinic in the city industrial region and work with the homeless. Working hours are from 09:00 to 17:00 on Saturday and Sunday.')
 	if model > 0: $tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You are a model working at ''Aphrodite Photography'' in St. Petersburg.')
 	if model > 0 and model_week = (daystart - week) / 7 and model_job_week >= 2:
 		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'You have no more modeling jobs available this week.')
@@ -69,9 +69,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 		end
 	end
 	if pfilmday[0] > 0 and hour < 11: 
-		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You are expected in the porno studio at 10:00.')
+		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You are expected to be in the porno studio at 10:00.')
 	elseif pfilmday[0] > 0 and hour >= 11 and hour < 13: 
-		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You should be at the porno studio, shooting!')
+		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You should be at the porno studio shooting!')
 	elseif pfilmday[0] > 0 and hour >= 13: 
 		$tab_text += dyneval($NoteBookLine,'<br>You missed a scheduled porno shoot!')
 	end
@@ -92,6 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	$tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''locations''">Locations</a></center>'
 	$tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''friends_family''">Friends & Family</a></center>'
 	if SchoolAtestat = 0 and storyline = 1: $tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''school''">School</a></center>'
+	$tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''clothing''">Clothing information</a></center>'
 	
 	$tab_text += '<center><h2>Relationships</h2></center>'
 
@@ -100,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	elseif grupTipe < 5 and grupvalue[grupTipe] > 30:
 		$journal_school_standing = ' You are in good standing with your clique.'
 	elseif grupTipe < 5:
-		$journal_school_standing = '<font color="red"> You are on the outs with your clique, you''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
+		$journal_school_standing = '<font color="red"> You are on the outs with your clique, so you''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
 	end
 	
 	if StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0:
@@ -255,13 +256,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'locations':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Pavlovsk</h2></center>'
-	'Pavlovsk is a small town, it is somewhat of a tourist spot thanks to Catharina Palace, the former palace grounds has been converted into a large park. The town of Pavlovsk is centered around the train station. There is an open air market near the train stations that is open year around, where many bargains can be found. The cafe where your mother works can also be found near the train station, catering to the visitors coming in by train. The downtown area has most of the businesses and some middle class housing, while the residential area is a mixture of houses and soviet era apartment blocks. Some of the wealthiest families live in houses near the park on the outskirts of town. While the poorest homes are found near the old industrial area where several old factories has long since been closed down, lay abandoned and are run down. The only factory that is still open is the G&M clothing factory which also has a local store front and a tailor that can adjust your clothing. The industrial area is now mostly a home to prostitutes and drugs dealers, it is not considered a safe area to walk around at night. Despite being a tourist destination the area is seen as fairly poor, without many jobs.'
+	'Pavlovsk is a small town. It is somewhat of a tourist spot thanks to Catharina Palace and the former palace grounds has been converted into a large park. The town of Pavlovsk is centered around the train station. There is an open air market near the train station that is open year around. There are many bargains that can be found. The cafe is where your mother works can, also, be found near the train station. It caters to the visitors coming in by train. The downtown area has most of the businesses and some middle class housing. The residential area is a mixture of houses and Soviet-era apartment blocks. Some of the wealthiest families live in houses near the park that''s on the outskirts of town. While the poorest homes are found near the old industrial area where several old factories has long since been closed down, lay abandoned, and are run down. The only factory that is still open is the G&M clothing factory which also has a local store front and a tailor that can adjust your clothing. The industrial area is now mostly a home to prostitutes and drugs dealers. It is not considered a safe area to walk around at night. Despite being a tourist destination the area is seen as fairly poor and without many jobs.'
 
 	'<center><h2>Gadukino</h2></center>'
-	'You''ve spent several summers at your grandparents village. It''s a real small village where everyone are very tightly knit together. You remember spending the days by playing with the local children by the river, visiting the local little shop that had everything a kid needs. While your great grandparents where younger they used to take you out in the woods where you picked mushrooms and berries. Your great grandfather also showed you around the hunting grounds, telling you all kind of stories about the hunters that come and visit the sleepy little village.'
+	'You''ve spent several summers at your grandparents'' village. It''s a real small village where everyone is very tightly knit together. You remember spending your days by playing with the local children at the river or visiting the local little shop that had everything a kid needs. While your great grandparents where younger they used to take you out into the woods where you picked mushrooms and berries. Your great grandfather also showed you around the hunting grounds. He told you all kind of stories about the hunters that come and visit the sleepy little village.'
 
 	'<center><h2>St. Petersburg</h2></center>'
-	'You''ve heard many rumors about the City from both family members and school friends and they all say it''s both a great place and a bad place. The few memories you have are connected to the big city park where you and your family visited once. They had a large amusement park with lots of rides and fun to be had. You also know about the University because you''ve overheard Anya and your mom argue about it. Sometimes your mother would drag you and Anya along to the big City mall while she was visiting the beauty salon, you got to run around there among the shops asking your mother to buy you some of the clothes available there.'
+	'You''ve heard many rumors about the City from both family members and school friends. They all say it''s both a great and bad place. The few memories you have are connected to the big city park where you and your family visited once. They had a large amusement park with lots of rides and fun to be had. You also know about the University because you''ve overheard Anya and your mom argue about it. Sometimes, your mother would drag you and Anya along to the big City mall while she was visiting the beauty salon. You even got to run around there among the shops asking your mother to buy you some of the clothes available there.'
 		
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'records'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -270,37 +271,37 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'friends_family':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/29.png"></center>'
-	'Mother Natasha - Your mother was born in Gadukino village is still quite young and attractive, you have done the math and know she had Anya when she was only sixteen years old. She works at the station cafe. Your grandmother died in child birth with your mother and your grandfather a couple of years later in the Afghanistan war.'
+	'Mother Natasha - Your mother was born in Gadukino village. She is still quite young and attractive. Since you have done the math, you know she had Anya when she was only sixteen years old. She works at the station cafe. Your grandmother died in child birth with your mother. Your grandfather was killed a couple of years later in the Afghanistan war.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/35.png"></center>'
-	'Father Mikhail Kuznetsov - You''ve never seen your biological father since their divorce, and as such you have no real memory of him.'
+	'Father Mikhail Kuznetsov - You''ve never seen your biological father since their divorce, so you have no real memory of him.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/28.png"></center>'
-	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father and married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Valdimir''s first born that you know of. While not working your stepfather will often be found working on his cars by the garage.'
+	'Step Father Vladimir - Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. Your mother divorced your biological father then married Vladimir when you were less than a year old. One year after being married, your parents welcomed your little brother Kolka, Valdimir''s first born child. Kolka is his only child that you know of. While not working, your stepfather will often be found working on his cars in the garage.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/33.png"></center>'
-	'Sister Anya - She is your older sister. She is two years your senior, she still lives at home sharing a bedroom with you. She works at the local supermarket instead of going to the University like your mother wanted. She spends most of her free time either partying, hanging out with her friends or with her boyfriend Roma.'
+	'Sister Anya - She is your older sister. She is two years your senior, but she still lives at home and shares a bedroom with you. She works at the local supermarket, instead of going to the University like your mother wanted. She spends most of her free time either partying, hanging out with her friends, or with her boyfriend Roma.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/34.png"></center>'
-	'Brother Kolka - He is your younger brother, born about a year after you. While you share the same mother, unlike you and your sister, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you, and enjoys football. When he is not playing football, or doing homework, he spends much of his free time hanging out with his friends.'
+	'Brother Kolka - He is your younger brother and born about a year after you. While you share the same mother, unlike you and your sister, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you and enjoys football. When he is not playing football or doing homework he spends much of his free time hanging out with his friends.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/30.png"></center>'
-	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister, she has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about the looks and talks and if anything seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
+	'Aunt Lyudmila Knavs - Your aunt Luda works at the pharmacy in Pavlovsk. She is your mothers older sister. She has a live in boyfriend named Olu that she meet while traveling. He is an African man which causes more than a few rumors and sour looks at your aunt. Your aunt doesn''t seem to care about the looks, talks, and if anything seems to enjoy flaunting her boyfriend in front of others.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/55.png"></center>'
-	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunts live in boyfriend. Only that he doesn''t speak Russian very well, he is from Africa and is a very large man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
+	'Oluuosegun "Olu" Maina - You don''t know much about your aunts live-in boyfriend. You only that he doesn''t speak Russian very well and he is from Africa. He''s a very large and muscular man. You know many in the area that find it disgraceful that your aunt lives with him.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/31.png"></center>'
-	'Great Grandpa Zlatek Knavs - Your great grandfather is a grumpy old man, who is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to the point where it is barely being fit to live in. He can walk, but requires a cane. He doesn''t really leave the house any more, unless he really has to. Your mother and aunt were raised by your great grandparents.'
+	'Great Grandpa Zlatek Knavs - Your great grandfather is a grumpy old man. He is always complaining about the village elders and how they have neglected the village to the point where it is barely being fit to live in. He can walk, but requires a cane. He doesn''t really leave the house anymore, unless he really has to. Your mother and aunt were raised by your great grandparents.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/32.png"></center>' 
-	'Great Grandma Elena Knavs - Your great grandma is extremely old, and almost never leaves the house. Most of the time she just sits on her bed watching TV, or slowly cleans the house. Having raised your mother and aunt Luda, she is like a grandmother to you and a mother to your mother. Having raised two generations of kids your great grandparents are now content with the peace and quiet of the village.'
+	'Great Grandma Elena Knavs - Your great grandma is extremely old and almost never leaves the house. Most of the time, she just sits on her bed watching TV or slowly cleans the house. Having raised your mother and aunt Luda, she is like a grandmother to you and a mother to your mother. She has raised two generations of kids, so your great grandparents are now content with the peace and quiet of the village.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/54.png"></center>'
-	'Mikhail "Misha" - Your neighbor''s name is Mikhail, though everyone calls him uncle Misha. He lives in the other apartment on the same floor as yours. Your mother always forbade you to talk to him, warning you that he used to be a local crime lord, and that you shouldn''t get involved with him. However, he has always been polite and nice to you. He is close friends with your stepfather, both have been evasive about how they met and became friends.'
+	'Mikhail "Misha" - Your neighbor''s name is Mikhail, though everyone calls him Uncle Misha. He lives in the other apartment on the same floor as yours. Your mother always forbade you to talk to him by warning you that he used to be a local crime lord and that you shouldn''t get involved with him. However, he has always been polite and nice to you. He is close friends with your stepfather, but both have been evasive about how they met and became friends.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/notebook/112.png"></center>'
-	'Sergey Shulgin - He lives in the same building as you with his son, your childhood friend Vasily. He has gray hair and a small beer belly, but still hearty looking. His wife, Vasily''s mother left when Vasily was still a small child. He has been close friends with your stepfather and mother for as long as you can remember. Oddly enough he never re-married after being left by his ex-wife.'
+	'Sergey Shulgin - He lives in the same building as you with his son, your childhood friend Vasily. He has gray hair and a small beer belly, but still hearty looking. His wife, Vasily''s mother, left when Vasily was still a small child. He has been close friends with your stepfather and mother for as long as you can remember. Oddly enough, he never re-married after being left by his ex-wife.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'records'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -309,28 +310,28 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>School</h2></center>'
-	'You attend the Secondary School in Pavlovsk, you have known most of your classmates your whole life. You are on friendly terms with some of them and less so with some others. The relationships you''ve had have changed over the years. The school is fairly new, a few years ago the new school was built, along with a new sports field that some students use after school hours, while the old school building was left to rot. When the school was built was state of the art, but as some years has passed it is starting to fall into disrepair. The old school is a shell of it''s former self and sometimes used by the students as a place to hang out. In the school there are four different cliques that most of the students belong to, the rest are the outcasts who no one wants to have anything to do with unless it is to pick on or abuse them.'
+	'You attend the Secondary School in Pavlovsk and you have known most of your classmates your whole life. You are on friendly terms with some of them and less so with others. The relationships you''ve had have changed over the years. The school is fairly new, it''s only been a few years ago that it was built, along with a new sports field that some students use after school hour. When the school was built it was state of the art, but as some years has passed it is starting to fall into disrepair. In the school there are four different cliques that most of the students belong to while the rest are the outcasts who no one wants to have anything to do with unless it is to pick on or abuse them. The old school building was left to rot and is now a shell of its former self. It''s sometimes used by the students as a place to hang out. '
 	*nl
-	'There are the cool kids, those with that IT factor, maybe they are wealthy, charming, posses a good sense of style, are just good looking, or all of the above. They are mostly concerned with appearances above all things. If you don''t look good they don''t consider you worthy. Next are the jocks, the athletes, they are all into one or more sports and spend most of their time working out or playing sports. They look down on those with no athletic ability, though they and the cool kids overlap a bit and mostly get along. Next are the nerds who are all into what many consider nerdy or geeky stuff, like cosplay, role playing games, or other fringe activities. Most of them are also very smart and do well in school, they tend to keep their heads down and focus on doing their school work while at school. The last group are the gopniks, they are a rowdy bunch, ranging from small time criminals, to party animals, or trouble makers. They thumb their nose at authority and often are barely passing their classes, leaving many to wonder why they bother coming to school at all.'
+	'There are the cool kids. They are the ones with that IT factor, maybe they are wealthy, charming, posses a good sense of style, are just good looking, or all of the above. They are mostly concerned with appearances above all things. If you don''t look good then they don''t consider you worthy. Next are the jocks or the athletes, they are all into one or more sports and spend most of their time working out or playing sports. They look down on those with no athletic ability. There is some overlap between them and the cool kids overlap a bit who mostly get along. Following them are the nerds who are all into what many consider nerdy or geeky stuff, like cosplay, role playing games, or other fringe activities. Most of them are also very smart and do well in school. They tend to keep their heads down and focus on doing their school work while at school. The last group are the gopniks. They are a rowdy bunch that range from small time criminals, to party animals, or trouble makers. They thumb their nose at authority and often are barely passing their classes. This leaves many to wonder why they bother coming to school at all.'
 	*nl
 	'<center><h2>Social Group</h2></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'You are a member of the cool clique in school, the royalty of the school. You get along with your fellow cool kids and most of the jocks, the nerds fear and live in awe of you, while the gopniks are just losers without a sense of style that try to act tough, when in reality everyone knows they are just jealous. On the weekends you are your fellows often go to the disco at the community center to hang out and dance the night away. Other times you hang out in small groups at each others houses or the occasional house party.'
+		'You are a member of the cool clique in school. They are the royalty of the school. You get along with your fellow cool kids and most of the jocks. The nerds fear and live in awe of you while the gopniks are just losers without a sense of style. They try to act tough, but in reality everyone knows they are just jealous. On the weekends you and your fellows often go to the disco at the community center to hang out and dance the night away. Other times, you hang out in small groups at each others houses or the occasional house party.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
-		'You are a member of the jock clique in school, you get along with your fellow jocks and most of the cool kids as well. The nerds live in fear and awe of you, the gopniks are wannabe toughs that just can''t physically keep up with you and your fellow jocks. You and your fellow jocks often get together at the school field or community center for pickup games for fun. At least when you are not working out. Sometimes you and some of the other jocks will attend some of the cool kids get together''s.'
+		'You are a member of the jock clique in school. You get along with your fellow jocks and most of the cool kids as well. The nerds live in fear and awe of you. The gopniks are wannabe toughs that just can''t physically keep up with you and your fellow jocks. Your clique often get together at the school field or community center for pickup games for fun. At least, when you are not working out. Sometimes you and some of the other jocks will attend some of the cool kids get togethers.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
-		'You are a member of the nerd clique in school, you and your fellow nerds mostly keep to yourselves and avoid the rest. The cool kids like to mock and emotional abuse you, the jocks often just bully you, and the gopniks are the worst of the lot, their torments know no bounds. Most of you attend a weekly DnD game at the community center library, at other times you sometimes gather together for study groups, or video game nights.'
+		'You are a member of the nerd clique in school. You and your fellow nerds mostly keep to yourselves and avoid the other cliques. The cool kids like to mock and emotional abuse you. The jocks often just bully you. The gopniks are the worst of the lot, because their torments know no bounds. Most of you attend a weekly DnD game at the community center library, but at other times you sometimes gather together for study groups or video game nights.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
-		'You are a member of the gopnik clique in school, you hang out with your other gopniks. Which means drinking, doing drugs, fucking, partying, fighting or just causing general mayhem. The school and Pavlovsk is your playground, you thumb your nose at authority. Some often wonder why you and the rest stay in school, but they just don''t get it. Where else could you find this much fun all forced together. You get along with most of your fellow gopniks.' 
+		'You are a member of the gopnik clique in school. You hang out with your other gopniks. This entails drinking, doing drugs, fucking, partying, fighting, or just causing general mayhem. The school and Pavlovsk is your playground, so you thumb your nose at authority. Some often wonder why you and the rest stay in school, but they just don''t get it. Where else could you find this much fun all forced together? You get along with most of your fellow gopniks.' 
 	else
-		'You are an outcast in school, no one really likes you, not even your fellow outcasts. It is pretty much every man for themselves. Sometimes you cluster near each other, more for defense than out of like. That way if some of the jocks or gopniks come around they will likely grab one of you to pick on and the others can slip away. Your life is a lonely life, school is often hell and you have no real friends. You spend most of your time alone.'
+		'You are an outcast in school. No one really likes you. Not even your fellow outcasts. It is pretty much every man for themselves. Sometimes you cluster near each other which is more for defense than out of like. That way if some of the jocks or gopniks come around they will likely grab one of you to pick on and the rest can slip away. Your life is a lonely life since school is often hell and you have no real friends. You spend most of your time alone.'
 	end
 	if grupTipe < 5 and grupvalue[grupTipe] > 70:
 		'You are well respected and liked within your clique.'
 	elseif grupTipe < 5 and grupvalue[grupTipe] > 30:
 		'You are in good standing with your clique.'
 	elseif grupTipe < 5:
-		'<font color="red">You are on the outs with your clique, you''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
+		'<font color="red">You are on the outs with your clique. You''re in danger of being outcast.</font>'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><h2>Class schedule</h2></center>'
@@ -370,76 +371,76 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teachers':
 	'<center><h2>Teachers & Facility</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/134.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Aleksandrina Volkov</center>'
-	'Aleksandrina Volkov is the school''s new headmistress. An attractive woman in her mid to late thirties, who always dresses well. She was recently brought in to improve the school results after the school was falling behind in the national test scores. She has a reputation for being a strict disciplinarian, but fair. She also comes off as cold and distant to the students.'
+	'Aleksandrina Volkov is the school''s new headmistress. An attractive woman, in her mid to late thirties, who always dresses well. She was recently brought in to improve the school results after the school was falling behind in the national test scores. She has a reputation for being a strict, but fair disciplinarian. She also comes off as cold and distant to the students.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/132.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ruslan Kuznetsov</center>'
-	'Ruslan Kuznetsov is the school''s special ed, career advisor and shop teacher, he also the assistant Headmaster. Is one of the few teachers that''s passionate about his job. He really believes that he can impact on the students future but is mostly ignored by everyone even his colleagues. Which recently has seen him start becoming bitter.'
+	'Ruslan Kuznetsov is the school''s special ed, career advisor, and shop teacher. He is, also, the assistant Headmaster. He is one of the few teachers that''s passionate about his job. He really believes that he can impact on the students future, but is mostly ignored by everyone... even his colleagues. This has recently had him start becoming bitter.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/26.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Anatoly E. Tsarev</center>'
-	'Anatoly Tsarev is the school''s math teacher. He''s a stern teacher, who always demands the best out of his students. His daughter Lera is in your class and a gopnik. He''s married to Vera, who works at the train station as a ticket saleswoman and as a cleaner in the garment factory. There are rumors that since Lesco his nephew has come to live with them, his marriage has been on the rocks.'
+	'Anatoly Tsarev is the school''s math teacher. He''s a stern teacher and who always demands the best out of his students. His daughter, Lera, is in your class and a gopnik. He''s married to Vera who works at the train station as a ticket saleswoman and as a cleaner in the garment factory. There are rumors that since Lesco, his nephew, has come to live with them that his marriage has been on the rocks.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/135.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yeva Sokoloff</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school, she likes to think she is tough often giving those in her class a hard look, which is funny coming from someone that looks like the little old lady in the market. But she is quick to send you to the Headmistress if you misbehave to much.'
+		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school and she likes to think she is tough oftentimes by giving those in her class a hard look. It''s funny coming from someone that looks like the little old lady in the market. She is quick to send you to the Headmistress if you misbehave to much.'
 	else
-		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school and has a very firm no nonsense teaching style, but can also be very kind and motherly to students that work hard and behave.'
+		'Yeva Sokoloff is the school''s geography and history teacher. She is the oldest teacher at school and has a very firm no-nonsense teaching style, but can also be very kind and motherly to students that work hard and behave.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/129.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Serafim Ivanov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. A former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no nonsense, teacher, who is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes and is brutal when it comes to his grading, to push his students to their greatest potential. He always has time to answer questions or help out if a student has trouble as long as they put in the effort. Many of the other students complains about how he picks on them, but the truth is he only accept the best from his students and has no sympathy for those that refuse to put in the work.'
+		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. This is to push his students to their greatest potential. He always has time to answer questions or help out if a student has trouble as long as they put in the effort. Many of the other students complain about how he picks on them, but the truth is he only accept the best from his students and has no sympathy for those that refuse to put in the work.'
 	else
-		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. A former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no nonsense, bitter teacher, who is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, he gives the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes, that he never would do with another student group. He seems to take delight when he catches one of the cool kids, jocks or Gopniks out, ridiculing them on how little they know.'
+		'Serafim Ivanov is the school''s science and computer Science teacher. He''s a former student of the school that returned to the town after college. He is a no-nonsense, bitter teacher that is known to pile on the homework, have many pop quizzes, and is brutal when it comes to his grading. He is also known to be unfair, because he gives the nerds a free pass with homework or even quizzes that he never does with another student group. He seems to take delight when he catches one of the cool kids, jocks, or Gopniks out by ridiculing them on how little they know.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/128.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Makar Vasilyev</center>'
-	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art, and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students and even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of the students.'
+	'Makar Vasilyev is the school''s music, art, and drama teacher. He is always warm and friendly to all of his students; even those not in his class. He always smiles and will always take the time to listen or help out the students. He is well liked by most of them.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/137.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Raven Braakman</center>'
-	'Raven Braakman is the school''s social sciences and English teacher. She is from South Africa, she married a Russian man and moved to Pavlovsk, a few years ago her husband died in a car accident. She has a strict teaching style, accepting only the best out of her students. It is rumored she is a bit of a party goer in her free time.'
+	'Raven Braakman is the school''s Social Sciences and English teacher. She is from South Africa that married a Russian man then moved to Pavlovsk. A few years ago her husband died in a car accident. She has a strict teaching style and accepts only the best out of her students. It is rumored that she is a bit of a party goer in her free time.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/130.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ilya Yenotin</center>'
-	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy but is unliked by most of the students, simply because he''s comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls chasing down the Gopniks, trying getting them to attend class.'
+	'Ilya Yenotin is the school''s literature, language, and your homeroom teacher. He does his best at keeping everyone happy, but is unliked by most of the students simply because he''s comes off as fake. You can often see him running down the halls chasing down the Gopniks and trying getting them to attend class.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/131.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Viktor Pavlovich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher and is the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a power build with a massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted, he often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest if not the meanest teacher in school.'
+		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is, also, the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He is tough on anyone that isn''t athletically gifted because he often yells at those lacking any athletic ability to the point of bringing them to tears. He is one of the meanest, if not the meanest, teacher in school.'
 	else
-		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher and is the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a power build with a massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He likes to use it on students, especially female students. He is single, and rumored to be a player. You''ve often seen him with different women around town.'
+		'Viktor Pavlovich is the school''s P.E. teacher. He is, also, the coach for the basketball and track teams. He looks like a former weight lifter, having a muscular build with massive upper body strength. He keeps a black painted paddle he calls the "Black Widow" hanging from his office. He likes to use it on students and especially female students. He is single and rumored to be a player. You''ve often seen him with different women around town.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/69.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Mikhail Nikolaevich</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, he almost worships the best of the jocks, always talking and laughing with them.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He is almost as bad as Mr Pavlovich with how he treats the students, except he almost worships the best of the jocks by always talking and laughing with them.'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Was heading towards the big leagues as a football and almost became a pro himself but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive, always wanting to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. He was heading towards the big leagues as a footballer and almost became a pro himself, but an injury shattered those dreams. He knows how to push you to get the most of yourself, because he''s enormously competitive. He always wants to win no matter what. If you want to be a part of the squad you''ll have to put in work one way or another.'
 	else
-		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher and is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport but hurt himself or something like that and now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
+		'Mikhail Nikolaevich is the school''s assistant P.E. teacher. He is the coach of the Pavlovsk girls volleyball team and football team. Some say he almost went pro in some sport but hurt himself or something like that, but now he tries to live through the glory of his students.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/138.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arina Orlov</center>'
-	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school, having just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey, which makes many of the students to ignore her during class, she has a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and very cute as well, which causes the boys to pay extra special attention to her sometimes.'
+	'Arina Orlov is the school''s biology and health teacher. She is the youngest teacher at school since she just finished college and this is her first job. She is a bit shy and mousey which makes many of the students to ignore her during class. This leads to her having a bit of a problem controlling her classes. She''s not much older than her students and very cute as well. This causes the boys to pay extra special attention to her sometimes.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/136.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Olga Aleksandrov</center>'
-	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse. Miss Aleksandrov just transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heel over this true beauty. The boys describe her as slim and stacked, the ideal woman.'
+	'Olga Aleksandrov is the school''s nurse. Miss Aleksandrov just transferred to your school at the start of the year. All the boys have fallen head over heel over this true beauty. The boys describe her as slim and stacked which is the ideal woman.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/133.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Rolan Matveev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught as he was rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties, while others say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, you and the other girls have caught him staring at you when he doesn''t think you are watching and then will quickly look away.'
+		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties. While other people say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, you and the other girls have caught him staring at you when he doesn''t think you are watching and will quickly look away.'
 	else
-		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught as he was rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties, while others say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, everyone agree''s he looks and acts creepy.'
+		'Rolan Matveev is the school''s janitor and handyman. He is quiet and rarely interacts with the students. There is a rumor going around that he got caught rummaging through the girls lockers stealing their panties. While other people say he stalks the girls and photographs them. Regardless if the rumors are true or not, everyone agrees he looks and acts creepy.'
 	end	
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
@@ -492,6 +493,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/16.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Natasha Belova</center>'
 	'Natasha is an excellent student and one of the smartest people in your school. Even though you are living in the same building, her parents are very poor, and it shows as Natasha is always dressed in second-hand clothes and can never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she doesn''t have many friends, as most of the other girls shun her or mock her poor clothing.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/240.png"></center>'
+	'<center><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></center>'	
+	'Natalia is a very smart but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships but her good looks and eagerness to help others, prevents her from being an outcast. She is rarely seen with anyone but one thing she always keeps with her, is a special notebook that she never lets anyone touch.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -522,7 +527,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
 
 	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
-		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
+		'<center>Fyodor "Fedor" Kozlov</center>'
 		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks the level of talent that Ivan does have. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
 	end
 
@@ -651,6 +656,217 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
 			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing she has an amazing sense of style able to pull off many great looks earning her the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother leaving this poor one behind, and instead having a life filled with luxury and sophistication.'
 		end
 	end
+
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Nerds</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/152.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Feofan Krupin</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 3:
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for super heroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. Ths doesn''t include his collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous super heroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students. He has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. He is the weekly game night Game Master and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
+	else
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy, and the like. He has a serious love for super heroes and loves talking about them, their movies, and comic books all the time. Ths doesn''t include his collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous super heroes. He does well in school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but is not bad looking even if it''s in a somewhat nerdy manner. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students. He has no trouble flirting with some of the girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is he runs some silly game night for the other nerds which has gotten some to call him the King of the Nerds.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/2.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Artem Chebotarev</center>'
+	'Artem Chebotarev is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks since he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in school and is popular with the other geeks. Thanks to his looks and good grades he has befriended a lot of jocks because he is also their tutor outside of school. Otherwise, he tries to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/142.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Zinaida "Zina" Alkaev</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 3:
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes, and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself by playing various games on her phone. Although she is great a video games, she knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, super heroes, and other important things. The boys seem to love that she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at games they play.'
+	else
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes, and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself by playing various games on her phone. Although she is fairly popular with the nerd boys for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner, unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/6.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Petka Klyuyev</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 3:
+		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other students since he prefers to only talk to his fellow nerds. He mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes.'
+	else
+		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people because he mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. If you need homework he is easy to bully homework out of since he is afraid of his own shadow.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/153.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Gerasim Vasilyev</center>'
+	'Gerasim Vasilyev is confined to a wheelchair from an early childhood accident. He is kind and nice to everyone even if most don''t return the favor. He is well accepted by his fellow nerds and surprisingly a few of the jocks. Most of the rest see him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/12.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Julia Milov</center>'
+	'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and really doesn''t have any friends in school other than her fellow nerds. She seems to like keeping to herself, but has sometimes been caught eyeing other girls while they change clothes after the gym lessons. It''s likely she''s jealous of their popularity.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/151.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Evgeny Kuznetsov</center>'
+	'Evgeny Kuznetsov is the school chess champion and you can always find him at the chess club at the community center. He is shy and very intelligent, but he has not shown any interest in girls or anyone else for that matter. Nobody would be surprised if he has mild autism.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/16.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Natasha Belova</center>'
+	'Natasha is an excellent student and one of the smartest people in your school. You live in the same building, so you know that her parents are very poor. It shows because Natasha is always dressed in second-hand clothes and can never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she doesn''t have many friends since most of the other girls shun her or mock her due to the poor quality clothing she wears.'
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'jocks':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Jocks</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/149.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Lazar Pajari</center>'
+	'Lazar Pajari is the school football star and best athlete in school. He is a central midfielder and the team captain. He excels in other sports as well, but his passion is football. At least when he is not chasing girls or more often being chased by girls. With whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls. Lazar is often seen with different girls. Ivan is his biggest competition in sports, but Lazar is the overall better athlete and Ivan is far more focused on boxing than other sports.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/3.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Ivan Prokhorov</center>'
+	'Ivan Prokhorov is a talented athlete who is able to succeed in any sport he takes part of. He is mostly into boxing and running at this time. Ivan is considered to be very good looking by the girls in school. He spends a lot of time training and is regularly away competing. He isn''t very sociable and, other than when he is training, tends to keep to himself. He is a true lone wolf, but he occasionally hangs out with Fedor. He is calm and collected by nature while some might even say apathetic.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/18.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Christina Zvereva</center>'
+	'Christina is one of your school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her having a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is, also, more than a bit of a bully to most of the other girls in school.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/8.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Svyatoslav Voinov</center>'
+	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus is football and many other sports the school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/22.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov</center>'
+	'Bella Artamonov is the most beautiful girl in school and knows it. This makes her come off as really arrogant. You don''t know her very well because she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself a adult already. Bella considers the rest of her classmates to be beneath her for being too young and childish. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around older people.'
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
+		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks the level of talent that Ivan does have. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/141.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Veronika "Ronnie" Sokolov</center>'
+	'Veronika Sokolov is called the ice queen by her fellow students behind her back. It''s for a couple of valid reasons. One of those reasons is that she is very talented ice skater. Talk of the town indicates that she might compete in the next winter Olympics. The other reason is because she is cold and indifferent to people. She never lets anyone get close to her. She, also, comes from one of the wealthier families in Pavlovsk.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/165.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Vanya Yanka</center>'
+	'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock that plays jokes on his teammates while, also, annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so most everyone likes him. Despite his easy going attitude, he is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/150.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Erast Vagin</center>'
+	'Erast Vagin is a huge boy and very strong. He lacks the good looks or the cleverness of the other jocks, but is always polite and a little shy. When he is playing sports his personality changes into a demon. He''s always fighting to win but putting his all into winning and nothing else. He is an average athlete that relies on his size and strength to win the day for him. He also sometimes spars with Ivan in a friendly manner.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/19.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Avelina "Lina" Starov</center>'
+	'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term you would use is Christina''s lapdog. She, usually, does anything Christina wants her to do as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself she would be a lot more popular.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/13.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Lariska Gruzdeva</center>'
+	'Larissa is a very athletic girl with an exceptional talent for volleyball. She has a very weak personality though and is very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. She spends most of her time trying to appease others, especially Christina. Her best friend is Christina. One can often see her chasing after Christina.'
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'outcasts':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Outcast</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/7.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Lesco Tsarev</center>'
+	'Everyone at school always bullies Lesco over anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev while also being the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarev''s after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very social. He seems to always be sad and just want to be left alone.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/159.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Petia Alkaev</center>'
+	'Petia Alkaev is the class mooch. He persistently asks others for food, money, cigarettes, and anything else not nailed down. He can''t take a hint and doesn''t know the meaning of "personal space". This is made worse by the fact that, he seems to be unaware what soap is. He is an unattractive overweight guy who makes the pretty girls uncomfortable by hitting on them repeatedly and constantly. No matter how many beat downs or cruel pranks pulled he just doesn''t seem to learn his lesson.'
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
+		'After a series of slutty behavior incidents, that crescendoed at the dance when Sonia got way too drunk and gave five guys, including Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob near the community center. Only to return with her face covered in their cum her reputation has been in shambles. Most of the girls in school all give her the silent treatment and pretend that she does not exist anymore. Meanwhile, all the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her knowing that she doesn''t have the strength to say no. Many say she has embraced being the cheap slut that happily lets anyone use her. Other people gossip that she has started to prostitute herself by the highway.'
+	end
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 5:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/5.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Fedor Kozlov</center>'
+		'Ever since Fedor gave Vasily a blowjob outside the school in front of everyone he has become a outcast. He claims that he was forced to and had no choice, but most thinks he just wanted to. Many of the boys call him a fag and often ask him if he has sucked any dicks lately. Even his former friend Ivan ignores him. The girls are nearly just as bad since many of them make fun of him as well. Now Fedor mostly keeps to himself and tries to avoid the other students.'
+	end
+	
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'popular':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h2>Cool kids</h2></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/1.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Dimka Nosov</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 1:
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him since he is considered the coolest kid in school. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He is the king of the school. Everyone wants to either be his friend or hang out with him.'
+	else
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him because he is considered the coolest kid in school. The guys tend to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor there are rumors saying that he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally torment the nerds and outcasts when given a chance.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/23.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
+	if grupTipe < 3:
+		'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family. She always does her best to look and dress well. She is considered to have the best sense of style in school and one of the prettiest girls in school. She is also an excellent dancer. She is always conducting herself properly because her father is trying to become the town mayor. Image is everything is probably Albina''s motto. She runs a dance troupe at the community center which only the prettiest and best dancers make it on her troupe. It is a real boon to be picked for it.'
+	else
+		'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family. She always does her best to look and dress well. She is considered to have the best sense of style in school and one of the prettiest girls in school. She is also an excellent dancer. She always conducts herself properly because her father is trying to become the town mayor. Image is everything is probably Albina''s motto.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/147.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Andrey Aleksandrov</center>'
+	'Andrey Aleksandrov''s family took part in the exchange student program. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African-American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends, so he tends to use Marcus rising popularity to boost his own. In the process, he spends a lot less time with his long time girlfriend Stasya. The school nurse is his aunt.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/17.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Irina Devyatova</center>'
+	'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl. She knows this and takes full advantage of her assets. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality that is hidden behind her sweet smile. She often makes the boys do her dirty work.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/140.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Yelizaveta "Lizaveta" Petrov</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 1:
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. She''s extremely nosy and is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion since she is all to eager to pry into the details. Pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicey gossip they have. If you want to know anything about anyone she is the one to ask. Luckily she doesn''t use your knowledge to tear others with. She seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
+	else
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. She''s extremely nosy and is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion since she is all to eager to pry into the details. She''s pretty, but most boys seem torn. They''re attracted to her. All the boys are afraid that she will tell everyone everything about them. This could lead to their whole life becoming public knowledge.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/15.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Viktoriya "Vicky" Meynold</center>'
+	'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On the one hand, she''s a smart ass and on the other hand, she''s a cheerful girl. She is very sociable with her being friends with many of the students in school. Vicky is considered to be one of the most popular girls in school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky can often be found at the disco with her sister and boyfriend Vanya Yanka. As a good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. When she was a child she took gymnastics which resulted in her having excellent flexibility. She''s a bit flighty and unpredictable, so you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, She makes decisions from her heart rather than her head more often than not. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/4.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Igor Kruglov</center>'
+	'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friends, so whenever you see one of them the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, a high pitched voice, and pretty face many consider him to be very feminine. Normally, a boy like him would be mocked. However, his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka though, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/139.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Stanislava "Stasya" Pavlov</center>'
+	'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch and always has been one. Now that her boyfriend Andrey seems to hang around the new exchange student Marcus more than her Stasya has became a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all. She never says anything around Marcus or Andrey, instead she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her. The nerds and the outcasts, especially, are her targets.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/14.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Ekaterina "Katja" Meynold</center>'
+	'Katja Meynold is a very attractive and petite girl. She''s a redhead with a special interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent. She, at times, can also be impulsive like Vicky. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/146.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Marcus Larson</center>'
+	if grupTipe = 1:
+		'Marcus Larson is an African-American exchange student, that arrived to the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school while being a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls. He always remarks about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability, and different views on life it has made him pretty popular with both the cool kids and the jocks. He is friendly and outgoing. However, if he wasn''t, so close friends with Andrey he would have likely been a jock instead.'
+	else
+		'Marcus Larson is an African-American exchange student, that arrived to the school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in school while being a good athlete. He seems to really enjoy Russia and has an eye for Russian girls. He always remarks about how they are so much more beautiful than the girls back home. He is a decent looking guy, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability, and different views on life it has made him pretty popular with both the cool kids and the jocks. He stays with Andrey''s family with whom he has become close friends with.'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/148.png"></center>'
+	'<center>Mefodiy Utkin</center>'
+	'Mefodiy Utkin is reasonably intelligent, but has average  grades. He''s fairly average looking, but possess a good sense of humor and the timing that goes with it. He isn''t too popular, but just popular enough to hang among the cool kids who like his humor.'
+
+	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 1:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/25.png"></center>'
+		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
+		if grupTipe = 4:
+			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl that doesn''t stand out much. A pretty, smart, and sociable girl Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. However, lately she has started hanging out with the gopniks trying to go to their parties. She lives with her mother in a small apartment because her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical, and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style that is able to pull off many great looks that earns her the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother and leaving this poor one behind. She yearns of having a life filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+		else
+			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl that doesn''t stand out much. A pretty, smart, and sociable girl Sonia loves to party and is rarely in a bad mood. She lives with her mother in a small apartment because her father left some time ago. Her mother is a nervous, hysterical, and scandalous woman who, when not at work in the Garment Factory, is often out drinking and flirting with men.'
+			'Sonia grew up to be a kind, cheerful, and sociable girl with good grades. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style that is able to pull off many great looks that earns her the envy of many other girls at school. She often dreams of having a better life away from her mother and leaving this poor one behind. She yearns of having a life filled with luxury and sophistication.'
+		end
+	end
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
@@ -661,71 +877,90 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 	'<center><h2>Gopniks</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/9.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Vitek Kotov</center>'
-	'Vitek Kotov is an aggressive and strong guy, who considers himself a gangsta. He is very loud, obnoxious and not very attractive. Lena is his twin-sister, whom he is overly protective of and that has caused more than a fair share of drama. He is the local leader of the Gopniks and as such is the most feared boy in school. Even some adults are afraid of him. He is even rumored to be involved with the local organized crime selling drugs.'
+	'Vitek Kotov is an aggressive and strong guy who considers himself to be a gangsta. He is very loud, obnoxious, and not very attractive. Lena is his twin-sister, whom he is overly protective of, which has caused more than a fair share of drama. He is the local leader of the Gopniks and as such is the most feared boy in school. Even some adults are afraid of him. He is even rumored to be involved with the local organized crime selling drugs.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/154.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Radomir Popov</center>'
-	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist, and leader of a local underground rock/punk band the Pizdá Buystvo(Pussy Riot), they are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole, thinking he should already be a star, thus being arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him, because they think he is cool or are just groupies, latching onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his mini fame to let him use as many girls as he can, as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
+	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist, and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named the Pizdá Buystvo(Pussy Riot). They are considered fairly talented. He is more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some of the girls obviously adore him, because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame. He is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can and as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/157.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Roman Yakovlev</center>'
-	'Roman Yakovlev is a psychopath, he''s one of the smaller kids, but is always causing trouble. He''ll start fights knowing that the other Gopniks will have his back. He has been known to start fights just because he was bored, as well as being especially cruel or sadistic. Once he smashed a bottle over a guys head and stabbed the guy in the face with the broken bottle, because he said the guy looked at him funny. He always has a snide remark and is not afraid to speak back to the teachers and other adults. Not doing great at school, not that he cares. The other gopnik''s find his attitude amusing and seem to like that he''s always getting them into funny situations.'
+	'Roman Yakovlev is a psychopath. He''s one of the smaller kids, but he is always causing trouble. He''ll start fights knowing that the other Gopniks will have his back and because he was also bored. He enjoys being especially cruel or sadistic to his victims. Once he smashed a bottle over a guy''s head then stabbed the guy in the face with the same broken bottle. All because he said the guy looked at him funny. Roman always has a snide remark and is not afraid to speak back to the teachers or other adults. He''s not doing great at school because he doesn''t care. The other gopniks find his attitude amusing and seem to like that he''s always getting them into funny situations.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/10.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Dan Ryzhov</center>'
-	'Dan Ryzhov is a tall and skinny guy, whose body language screams his disdain and contempt for others. He''s a very stubborn guy who will never let an argument be. He''s best friends with Vitek and Vasily, and is considered to be the smartest one of the bunch. Though most consider that to not be much of a feat.'
+	'Dan Ryzhov is a tall and skinny guy whose body language screams his disdain and contempt for others. He''s a very stubborn guy who will never let an argument be. He''s best friends with Vitek and Vasily. He is considered to be the smartest one of the bunch. Though most consider that to not be much of a feat.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/145.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Ekaterina "Katyusha" Maksimov</center>'
-	'Ekaterina Maksimov also known as Katyusha. She is not a traditional beauty, her face is too masculine for that. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can, stealing or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys, it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl other than Lena who can do that, but while the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother, Katyusha prefers fighting the boys herself. She practices Sambo in the park every day before school, regardless of weather. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers, claiming boxing is for pussies, real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik, it''s others that consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect. Which is really hard to do.'
+	'Ekaterina Maksimov also known as Katyusha. She is not a traditional beauty, since her face is too masculine for that. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets the booze in any way she can either by stealing or convincing others to get it for her. When she "plays" with the boys it only goes as far as she wants it. She is the only girl, other than Lena, who can do that. While the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother she prefers fighting the boys herself. Regardless of the weather, she practices Sambo in the park every day before school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming boxing is for pussies, because real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik since it''s others that consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect. Which is really hard to do.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/158.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valentin Bogdanov</center>'
-	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band, he the nicest guy in the band. This still doesn''t stop him from using his mini fame with the girls, to use them in return, it is just he is rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motor bike and ride across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad working on his motorcycle, when he is not hanging out with the band.'
+	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and he the nicest guy in the band. This still doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame with the girls and to use them. It is just that he is rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motor bike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/24.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Pauline Sebagotulina</center>'
-	'Pauline Sebagotulina is a bit of a wild child making her very unpredictable. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. No one dares to mess with her cause she''s been in more fights than anyone else, her and Katyusha can sometimes be found sparring together and starting fights with others.'
+	'Pauline Sebagotulina is a bit of a wild child which makes her very unpredictable. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. No one dares to mess with her ''cause she''s been in more fights than anyone else. Katyusha and her can sometimes be found sparring together and starting fights with others.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/156.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Arkadi Fyodorov</center>'
-	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from the Saint Petersburg, to Pavlovsk, he was also held back a year, he also looks a bit old for his age. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the Gopniks. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is.'
+	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was also held back a year, so he also looks a bit old for his age. He is very violent when angry. Especially, with anyone outside the Gopniks. He is, also, not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is while how lame Pavlovsk is.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/20.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Yalena "Lena" Kotova</center>'
-	'Lena Kotov is Vitek''s twin sister. Just like her brother, she is one of the local Gopniks. With a chip on her shoulder, she can be aggressive and unpredictable. She''s best friends with Lera, and they can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms during school, or hanging out together after school.'
+	'Lena Kotov is Vitek''s twin sister. Just like her brother, she is one of the local Gopniks. She has a chip on her shoulder, so she can be aggressive and unpredictable. She''s best friends with Lera. They can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms during school or hanging out after school.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/11.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Vasily Shulgin</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, who are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh, which makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father, after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you where younger you was good friends with him and as you both drifted towards the gopniks have stayed good friends.'
+		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, since they are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh. This makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you where younger you was good friends with him and as you both drifted towards the gopniks have stayed good friends.'
 	else
-		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, who are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh, which makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father, after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you where younger you was good friends with him, but as you grew up you have somewhat drifted apart.'
+		'Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek, since they are his best friends. His nickname is Shulga. He''s physically considered the weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the other ones laugh. This makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised just by his father after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you were younger you was good friends with him, but as you grew up you have somewhat drifted apart.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/144.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Anushka "Nush" Konstantinov</center>'
-	'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and backup vocalist in Radomir''s band, she and her band often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and not shy about her bisexuality, she is also a bit of a exhibitionist, her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She does surprisingly well in school, she seems to like getting into and causing trouble. She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally, what ever she deems the most fun at the time. Other than the band she hangs out a lot with Alyona, she and Radomir use to date.'
+	'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and backup vocalist in Radomir''s band. Her band and her often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and is not shy about her bisexuality. Nush is also a bit of a exhibitionist and her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She does surprisingly well in school, but she seems to like getting into and causing trouble. She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally with whatever she deems to be the most fun at the time. Other than the band, she hangs out a lot with Alyona which she and Radomir use to date.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/143.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Alyona Zima</center>'
-	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker, she lives to cause trouble or jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a fucked up family, her parents are alcoholics and drug addicts, most view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. Knowing this the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol, the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
+	'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker, since all she lives to cause trouble or jumps into any trouble she can find. She comes from a fucked up family as her parents are alcoholics and drug addicts. Most people view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. By knowing this, the teachers don''t even bother to try and help her out anymore. She can often be found drinking alcohol and the only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/21.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Valeria "Lera" Tsarev</center>'
-	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena, and they can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms, or hanging out together after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes Lena''s lead. It is rumored she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
+	'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family while her father works at the school as a teacher. She often hangs out with the Gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school. She is protective of Lena and always takes Lena''s lead. It is rumored that she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/155.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Lavrenti Romanov</center>'
-	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family, an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent, which lead to him and Dimika having a major falling out at the same time, since the fight he started hanging with the Gopniks. He is more of a follower, and the Gopniks like using his money, while tolerating him.'
+	'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He isan only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed last year. He became mean and violent which has lead to him and Dimika having a major falling out at the same time. Since the fight he started hanging with the Gopniks. He is more of a follower and the Gopniks like using his money while tolerating him.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/notebook/189.png"></center>'
 	'<center>Nikolai Volkov</center>'
-	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking, and partying then he is hanging out with Roman Yakovlev. Many say that he only spends time with Roman, for his money. Niko always seems confident, and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid, and unstable.'
+	'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying then he is hanging out with Roman Yakovlev. Many say that he only spends time with Roman for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'school'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'clothing':
+	'<center>Clothing information</center>'
+	*nl
+	'Clothing has a strength value, which decreases by 1 for every day you wear that outfit. At 0 it is ruined and you will have to throw it away.'
+	'You can attempt to fix outfits when its strength is very low and you have a high enough sewing skill. Clothes you throw away will then appear back in the shop.'
+	*nl
+	'Quality of clothing is ranked in this order:'
+	'	Crappy quality outfit'
+	'	Very low quality outfit'
+	'	Low quality outfit'
+	'	Average quality outfit'
+	'	Reasonable quality outfit'
+	'	Good quality outfit'
+	'	Outstanding quality outfit'
+
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'records'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
 --- journal ---------------------------------
 

locations/kompMFCanal.qsrc

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 *clr & cla
 gs 'stat'
 'One of the visitors asks: "Do you have a vibrator or dildo? I want to see your ass stuffed..."'
-if vibrator = 1 or dildo = 1 or middildo = 1 or largedildo = 1 or bigdildo = 1 or extradildo = 1 or superdildo = 1 or maddildo = 1:
+if vibrator = 1 or dildo = 1 or (middildo = 1 and pcs_ass >= 10) or (largedildo = 1 and pcs_ass >= 15) or (bigdildo = 1 and pcs_ass >= 20) or (extradildo = 1 and pcs_ass >= 25) or (superdildo = 1 and pcs_ass >= 30) or (maddildo = 1 and pcs_ass >= 35):
 	act 'Play with a toy':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'

locations/korrPar.qsrc

@@ -134,14 +134,14 @@ if momloc = 1:
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		'Your parents are asleep in their room'
+		act 'Go to your parents'' room': msg'Your parents are probably asleep, you shouldn''t go in right now.'
 	end
 else
 	act 'Go to your parents'' room':gt 'bedrPar2'
 end
 act 'Go to the living room':gt 'sitrPar'
 if momloc = 5:
-	'The bathroom door is locked as your Mom takes a shower'
+	act 'Go to the bathroom':msg'You try to open the bathroom door but it immediately stops, banging against the latch. You hear the water running and your mother shouting at the door. "Doesn''t anybody in this family know how to knock?!"'
 else
 	act 'Go to the bathroom':minut += 1 & gt 'vanrPar'
 end

locations/kuhrPar.qsrc

@@ -26,15 +26,22 @@ minut += 1
 gs 'stat'
 gs 'kit_din'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-if momloc[1] = 2:
-	npc_rel['A29'] += 1
-	cla & *clr
-	minut += 5
-	gs'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/gotovka.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> turns to you. "<<npc_nickname>> please set the table for breakfast." You sigh and grab the dishes.'
-	act 'set the table for breakfast': gt 'kuhrPar'
-	exit
+gs 'family_schedule'
+if momloc = 4:
+	if momloc[1] = 1:
+		'You <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is here, busy making breakfast.'
+	elseif momloc[1] = 2:
+		npc_rel['A29'] += 1
+		cla & *clr
+		minut += 5
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/gotovka.jpg"></center>'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> turns to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>> please set the table for breakfast." You sigh and grab the dishes.'
+		act 'set the table for breakfast': gt 'kuhrPar'
+		exit
+	elseif momloc[1] = 4:
+		'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here clearing away the breakfast dishes.'
+	end
 end
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Kitchen</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/kuhrpar.jpg"></center>'
@@ -42,12 +49,15 @@ if hour = 7 and week < 6 and indorf = 0:
 	'<a href="exec:gt''father''">Your stepfather</a>, <a href="exec:gt''mother''">mother</a>, <a href="exec:gt ''sister_chat'', ''sister_chat''">Anya</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> are sitting at the table eating breakfast. You could sit down and join them for breakfast or just grab something and go.'
 elseif hour = 7 and week > 5 and indorf = 0:
 	'<a href="exec:gt''father''">Your stepfather</a>, <a href="exec:gt''mother''">mother</a>, and <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> are sitting at the table eating breakfast. It seems your sister is sleeping in again. You could sit down and join them for breakfast or just grab something and go.'
-elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30 and indorf = 0:
+elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30 and indorf = 0 and anyaloc = 25:
 	'<a href="exec:gt''father''">Your stepfather</a>, <a href="exec:gt''mother''">mother</a>, <a href="exec:gt ''sister_chat'', ''sister_chat''">Anya</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> are sitting at the table eating dinner. You could sit down and join them for dinner or just grab something and go.'
+elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30 and indorf = 0:
+	'<a href="exec:gt''father''">Your stepfather</a>, <a href="exec:gt''mother''">mother</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''brother'', ''start''">Kolka</a> are sitting at the table eating dinner. You could sit down and join them for dinner or just grab something and go.'
 else
 	'The kitchen is not very impressive, but it has everything your family needs. Since everyone can''t always join for family meals, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> usually pre-cooks some meals and stores them in the fridge, to be handy for later. Of course, you could also just have a snack if you''re not that hungry.'
 end
-gs 'family_schedule'
+if momloc = 11: 'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here making diner.'
+if momloc = 13: 'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here cleaning up after diner.'
 if momloc = 23: 'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here cleaning.'
 
 if hour = 7 and breakfast_day ! daystart and indorf = 0: 

locations/ludahome.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
 				'You shake your head no. "No thanks, actually I should get going, but thanks anyways."'
-				'He nods and smiles "Ok see you nother time." He closes the door after you walk away.'
+				'He nods and smiles "OK see you nother time." He closes the door after you walk away.'
 				act '<b>Leave Luda''s apartment</b>': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
 			end
 			act 'Yes':
@@ -111,36 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 		elseif rand(7,10) <= 9 and (week < 5 and hour >= 18 and hour <= 22) or (week > 5 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 22):
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
-			if OluQW['met'] = 0:
-				OluQW['met'] = 1
-				'You stand outside your aunts apartment, knocking on the door. The door is answered by a large African man, who has a big friendly smile on his face "Hello can I help you?" He asks in heavily accented Russian.'
-				'You return his smile "Yes, is my Aunt Luda home?"'
-				'He shakes his head no "No she not home right now, you one her nieces?"'
-				'You nod "Yes I am <<$pcs_nickname>>, you must be Olu, my Aunts boyfriend. I have heard about you, nice to finally meet you."'
-				'He smiles even bigger "All good I hope. I will tell her you stopped by, it was nice meeting you."'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
-				act 'Ask if you can come in': 
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
-					'He pauses a moment and then nods opening the door wide for you to walk through. Once you step inside he closes the door behind you, he then leads you to the couch in the living room and takes a seat. He indicates for you to take as seat as well, once you do he says "What do you need?"'
-					!! Temporary loc measure
-					act 'I just wanted to talk': OluLoc = 5 & gt 'ludahome', 'chat_olu'
-					act 'Sorry I should go': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
-				end
-			elseif OluQW['met'] = 1 and OluQW['talked'] = 1:
-				'You stand outside your aunts apartment, knocking on the door. The door is answered by Olu, who has a big friendly smile on his face "Hello again." He asks in heavily accented Russian.'
-				'You return his smile "Is my Aunt Luda home?"'
-				'He shakes his head no "No she not home right now. Would you like to come in and talk again?"'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
-				act 'Go in and talk':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
-					'He opens the door wide for you to walk through. Once you step inside he closes the door behind you, he then leads you to the couch in the living room and takes a seat. He indicates for you to take as seat as well, once you do he says "What shall we talk about?"'
-					!! Temporary loc measure
-					act 'Sit down and chat': OluLoc = 5 & gt 'ludahome', 'chat_olu'
-					act 'Sorry I should go': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
-				end
-			elseif OluQW['sex'] = 1:
+			if OluQW['sex'] = 1:
 				'You stand outside your aunts apartment, knocking on the door. The door is answered by Olu, who has a big friendly smile on his face "Hello again." He asks in heavily accented Russian. When he sees it is you, his smile turns into a hungry grin as his eyes roam all over you body.'
 				'You return his smile "Is my Aunt Luda home?"'
 				'He shakes his head no "No she not home right now. We have time to have some fun, come in, come in."'
@@ -170,6 +141,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 				end
 				!! Temporary loc measure
 				act 'Agree to have fun': OluLoc = 5 & gt 'olu', 'olusex1'
+			elseif OluQW['met'] = 1 and OluQW['talked'] = 1:
+				'You stand outside your aunts apartment, knocking on the door. The door is answered by Olu, who has a big friendly smile on his face "Hello again." He asks in heavily accented Russian.'
+				'You return his smile "Is my Aunt Luda home?"'
+				'He shakes his head no "No she not home right now. Would you like to come in and talk again?"'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
+				act 'Go in and talk':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
+					'He opens the door wide for you to walk through. Once you step inside he closes the door behind you, he then leads you to the couch in the living room and takes a seat. He indicates for you to take as seat as well, once you do he says "What shall we talk about?"'
+					!! Temporary loc measure
+					act 'Sit down and chat': OluLoc = 5 & gt 'ludahome', 'chat_olu'
+					act 'Sorry I should go': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
+				end
+			elseif OluQW['met'] = 0:
+				OluQW['met'] = 1
+				'You stand outside your aunts apartment, knocking on the door. The door is answered by a large African man, who has a big friendly smile on his face "Hello can I help you?" He asks in heavily accented Russian.'
+				'You return his smile "Yes, is my Aunt Luda home?"'
+				'He shakes his head no "No she not home right now, you one her nieces?"'
+				'You nod "Yes I am <<$pcs_nickname>>, you must be Olu, my Aunts boyfriend. I have heard about you, nice to finally meet you."'
+				'He smiles even bigger "All good I hope. I will tell her you stopped by, it was nice meeting you."'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
+				act 'Ask if you can come in': 
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
+					'He pauses a moment and then nods opening the door wide for you to walk through. Once you step inside he closes the door behind you, he then leads you to the couch in the living room and takes a seat. He indicates for you to take as seat as well, once you do he says "What do you need?"'
+					!! Temporary loc measure
+					act 'I just wanted to talk': OluLoc = 5 & gt 'ludahome', 'chat_olu'
+					act 'Sorry I should go': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
+				end
 			else
 				'You stand outside your aunts apartment, knocking on the door. The door is answered by a Olu, who has a big friendly smile on his face "Hello again." He asks in heavily accented Russian.'
 				'You return his smile "Is my Aunt Luda home?"'
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'textanya':
 		act 'Say you would rather talk':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
-			'He looks a bit disappointed but then smiles "It''s ok, maybe some other time."'
+			'He looks a bit disappointed but then smiles "It''s OK, maybe some other time."'
 			act 'Sit down and chat':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/olutalk.jpg"></center>'
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'textnush':
 		act 'Say you would rather talk':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
-			'He looks a bit disappointed but then smiles "It''s ok maybe some other time."'
+			'He looks a bit disappointed but then smiles "It''s OK maybe some other time."'
 			act 'Sit down and chat':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/olutalk.jpg"></center>'
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'textnatasha':
 		act 'Say you would rather talk':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big55.jpg"></center>'
-			'He looks a bit disappointed but then smiles "It''s ok, maybe some other time."'
+			'He looks a bit disappointed but then smiles "It''s OK, maybe some other time."'
 			act 'Sit down and chat':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/olutalk.jpg"></center>'
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'textnatasha':
 		OluQW['nat_busy'] = daystart
 		'You wait a little bit before you get a reply "Just reading, what''s up?"'
 		'You smile and reply "Come over to my Aunt''s and work off some of your debt."'
-		'You wait long enough you are about to send another text, when you finally get a reply "Ok. Be there in a couple of minutes."'
+		'You wait long enough you are about to send another text, when you finally get a reply "OK. Be there in a couple of minutes."'
 		'You glance up to Olu and say, with a smile "Natasha is on her way."'
 		act 'Wait for Natasha': gt 'olu', 'olunat'
 	end
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/ludahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The first thing you notice is the god awful pea green tile, with a white sink just infront of a large shelf and mirror. You don''t know who picked it but they obviously don''t have any good taste. Other than that it is a fairly typical bathroom.'
+	'The first thing you notice is the god awful pea green tile, with a white sink just in front of a large shelf and mirror. You don''t know who picked it but they obviously don''t have any good taste. Other than that it is a fairly typical bathroom.'
 	'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec: gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
 	*nl
 	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/ludahome/living.jpg"></center>'
-	'The living room is clean and neat. A couch rests against one wall, with a entertainment center on the opposite wall that holds a fairly decent sized flat screen TV along with a dvd player. Inside one of the glass doors of the entertainment center you see several dozen dvd''s.'
+	'The living room is clean and neat. A couch rests against one wall, with an entertainment center on the opposite wall that holds a fairly decent sized flat screen TV along with a DVD player. Inside one of the glass doors of the entertainment center you see several dozen DVD''s.'
 	gs 'family_schedule'
 	if momloc = 20 and OluLoc = 5:
 		'Olu is sitting on the couch watching some sports and he seems pretty intent on it. When he notices you, he briefly looks up and smiles at you as you walk back in.'
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watchtv':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/ludahome/luda_olu_tv.jpg"></center>'
 		if hour > 22:
-			'As it starts to get late, Luda pats Olu on the leg. "Ok that''s enough for the night, we both need to get ready for bed." Olu glances at her and then picks up the remote and turns off the TV. As they both get up, Luda says to you. "I was wonderful you coming to visit but it is time for us to go to bed. Come back any time though." She says as she escorts you to the apartment door. Olu gives you a smile. "Good night." With that you say your good nights and leave.'
+			'As it starts to get late, Luda pats Olu on the leg. "OK that''s enough for the night, we both need to get ready for bed." Olu glances at her and then picks up the remote and turns off the TV. As they both get up, Luda says to you. "I was wonderful you coming to visit but it is time for us to go to bed. Come back any time though." She says as she escorts you to the apartment door. Olu gives you a smile. "Good night." With that you say your good nights and leave.'
 			act 'Leave Luda''s apartment': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_4'
 		else
 			'You remain seated next to your aunt and watch TV with them for another half a hour. Olu seems very intent on the show and mostly just watches it and doesn''t speak. Luda on the other hand periodically makes small talk with you about a variety of things, seemingly only half paying attention to the show.'
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'luda_mom_talk':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/ludahome/luda_nat.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take a seat next to them. "Sure sounds great." You tell her.'
-		'You see your <<$pcs_nickname>> give you a friendly smile, while Luda fills a cup with tea and offers it to you asking "What have you been up to dear?" Before you can even answer, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> does and she embellishes things. She makes it sound like things at home and what''s going on are better than they really are. You get the feeling she is trying to impress her sister on how great her family is, so you simply sit back and sip your tea. After a while they start talking about other of things, so you can finally join in. Your <<$pcs_nickname>> still cuts you off sometimes and answers for you, perhaps afraid you will shatter this illusion she is building up of your family.'
+		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> give you a friendly smile, while Luda fills a cup with tea and offers it to you asking "What have you been up to dear?" Before you can even answer, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> does and she embellishes things. She makes it sound like things at home and what''s going on are better than they really are. You get the feeling she is trying to impress her sister on how great her family is, so you simply sit back and sip your tea. After a while they start talking about other of things, so you can finally join in. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> still cuts you off sometimes and answers for you, perhaps afraid you will shatter this illusion she is building up of your family.'
 		act 'Get up from the table': gt 'ludahome', 'kitchen'
 		act 'Keep chatting': gt 'ludahome', 'luda_mom_talk', 1
 	elseif ARGS[1] = 1:
@@ -720,9 +720,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 			cla
 			LudaQW['olu_offer'] = 2
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You nod, it sounds like it can be fun. Having a man just in your same building you can visit anytime you are feeling horning and no one else will know about it? Sounds perfect actually "Ok sure Auntie as long as you are ok with it, yeah I wouldn''t mind helping out with his sexual energy." You say with a wink.'
+			'You nod, it sounds like it can be fun. Having a man just in your same building you can visit anytime you are feeling horning and no one else will know about it? Sounds perfect actually "OK sure Auntie as long as you are OK with it, yeah I wouldn''t mind helping out with his sexual energy." You say with a wink.'
 			'She laughs at that "Well I will let him know, also I should warn you. He likes butts, but don''t worry I keep a large supply of lube in the apartment." Seeing your face at the thought of a man described as hung like a horse fucking your ass she quickly adds "Don''t worry, it might hurt the first time but you quickly get use to it and it even starts feeling good after awhile."'
-			'You nod to that "Ok well hopefully it doesn''t take me long to get use to it then." Then the two of you start talking about anal sex and she shares a few tips with you on how to relax and making it feel better.'
+			'You nod to that "OK well hopefully it doesn''t take me long to get use to it then." Then the two of you start talking about anal sex and she shares a few tips with you on how to relax and making it feel better.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
 		end
@@ -738,8 +738,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 			cla
 			LudaQW['olu_offer'] = -1
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''m sorry aunt Luda, I thought about it but I can''t it is just to weird." You tell her.'
-			'"Oh, okay then... i understand and don''t give it another thought." she says and then changes the subject.'
+			'"I''m sorry aunt Luda, I thought about it but I can''t it is just too weird." You tell her.'
+			'"Oh, okay then... I understand and don''t give it another thought." she says and then changes the subject.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
 		end
@@ -753,7 +753,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 		'Luda pats the seat and sits close to you "<<$pcs_nickname>>, So tell me all about it, Olu told me the two of you had sex, I want to know all about it."'
 		'You tell her about it, the good and the bad "I am not sure how often I can do that though, he is so big and has so much stamina, it wears me out." You tell her.'
 		'She giggles a little "You don''t have to tell me about it, I fully understand and why I don''t mind that he sleeps with other women to give me a break, but feel free to sleep with him as much as you like, I really don''t mind " she says and you can tell she would like for you to do it a lot.'
-		'You give it some thought, you know a few other girls that might be interested as long as your Aunt doesn''t mind "Would it be ok if I brought another girl with me?"'
+		'You give it some thought, you know a few other girls that might be interested as long as your Aunt doesn''t mind "Would it be OK if I brought another girl with me?"'
 		'Luda thinks for only a moment  then nods yes "Of course dear as long as Olu likes them I don''t mind. Who did you have in mind?" She asks obviously a little bit curious.'
 		'You smile to her "I have a couple of friends that I think would be interested and maybe Anya. I wanted to make sure you didn''t mind first before asking them to join me."'
 		'She nods "Of course dear, of course. If they are interested bring them along, but it is up to Olu if he wants to sleep with them of course."'
@@ -798,9 +798,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 					'You look at your Aunt and then tell her "I know my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is a slut, I can''t believe she is such a hypocrite."'
-					'Luda looks a little surprised by your words "<<$pcs_nickname>> you should say that about your mother."'
+					'Luda looks a little surprised by your words "<<$pcs_nickname>> you should not say that about your mother."'
 					'You laugh a little "Why? It''s true." You dare her to deny it.'
-					'She sighs a little "Maybe so but it is still not nice to say. While I havn''t always agreed with her choices, she is human and makes mistakes and while she might be hard on you girls. She does it out of love because she wants what is best for you."'
+					'She sighs a little "Maybe so but it is still not nice to say. While I haven''t always agreed with her choices, she is human and makes mistakes and while she might be hard on you girls. She does it out of love because she wants what is best for you."'
 					'You decided it is best to just change the subject.'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
@@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"So Auntie tell me about your boyfriend, what''s he like?" You ask her curious.'
-			'She lights up at your questions "He is a fairly quiet man but wonderful, so kind and careing. Not to mention so big... and muscular. He really is the perfect man." She goes on to talk about some of the things they have done together and it really sounds like they are very much in love, certainly your Aunt is in love with him anyways. You also notice she never once mentions that he is black.'
+			'She lights up at your questions "He is a fairly quiet man but wonderful, so kind and caring. Not to mention so big... and muscular. He really is the perfect man." She goes on to talk about some of the things they have done together and it really sounds like they are very much in love, certainly your Aunt is in love with him anyways. You also notice she never once mentions that he is black.'
 			act 'How do people react?':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 3
@@ -872,7 +872,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"How do people treat you and him, you know with him being black?"'
-				'She frowns "Some people are ok with it, most just make comments behind our back but I know they do. Some say nasty things to our face, but I don''t care, he is a good man and I don''t care what color his skin is."'
+				'She frowns "Some people are OK with it, most just make comments behind our back but I know they do. Some say nasty things to our face, but I don''t care, he is a good man and I don''t care what color his skin is."'
 				'"It doesn''t bother you?" You ask'
 				'"Of course it bothers me but not as much as losing him would. If this is the price we have to pay to be together I am willing to pay it. Even if your grand parents disowned me because of it."'
 				'You nod and not sure what more to say you change the subject.'
@@ -886,7 +886,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"So how did the two of you meet?" You ask her.'
-				'She laughs "Well everyone thinks I meet him in my travels in Africa but that isn''t true. Actually his nephew Djibril goes to the University in Saint Petersburg and he was up visiting him. I was in the city at the time shopping after I had moved back here. We run into each other on the metro and I mean we ran into each other. He is so big he nearly knocked me down, but he caught me in his strong arms and kept me from falling. He apologized for running into him and I apologized for running into him and thanked him for keeping me from falling." Then she stops to sigh happily, this is obviously a happy memory for her.'
+				'She laughs "Well everyone thinks I met him in my travels in Africa but that isn''t true. Actually his nephew Djibril goes to the University in Saint Petersburg and he was up visiting him. I was in the city at the time shopping after I had moved back here. We run into each other on the metro and I mean we ran into each other. He is so big he nearly knocked me down, but he caught me in his strong arms and kept me from falling. He apologized for running into him and I apologized for running into him and thanked him for keeping me from falling." Then she stops to sigh happily, this is obviously a happy memory for her.'
 				*nl
 				'Then she continues "So then it was my stop and I got off thinking nothing more of it. A few minutes later he comes strolling up beside me and gives me some flowers he had bought somewhere telling me pretty flowers for pretty lady in his bad accented Russian. I thanked him and I blushed, he was so handsome, then he asked me out to coffee and well we hit it off and started dating and not long after I asked him to move in with me."'
 				'You are glad your Aunt found someone that makes her happy.'
@@ -900,7 +900,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"So what does he do? For a living I mean." You ask her.'
-				'"Well his visa expired so legally he can''t work, but while he could he saved up a little money and bought a van. Then he put some seats into it, cleaned it up real nice and now drives it around offering to give tourist rides to take them to all the different sites around the area. He makes ok money, though mostly he makes his money in the summers of course when there is a lot more tourist but he gets some fares year around. He mostly sits near the train station and tries to offer people rides. But I don''t care, I make enough for both of us, but it makes him feel good to work and it gives us a little extra spending money.'
+				'"Well his visa expired so legally he can''t work, but while he could he saved up a little money and bought a van. Then he put some seats into it, cleaned it up real nice and now drives it around offering to give tourist rides to take them to all the different sites around the area. He makes OK money, though mostly he makes his money in the summers of course when there is a lot more tourist but he gets some fares year around. He mostly sits near the train station and tries to offer people rides. But I don''t care, I make enough for both of us, but it makes him feel good to work and it gives us a little extra spending money.'
 				act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
 			end
@@ -912,10 +912,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A30', 'like'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Well I meet Olu earlier, when you weren''t home he was here and I came in and talked to him for awhile. I didn''t realize just how big he was until I was so close to him."'
+				'"Well I met Olu earlier, when you weren''t home. He was here and I came in and talked to him for awhile. I didn''t realize just how big he was until I was so close to him."'
 				'She laughs "Oh dear you have no clue how big he is, he is just as big all over." She say with a wink "Yes he told me you stopped by and the two of you talked. He liked you, he asked about you."'
 				'You blush a little "Really? What did he say?"'
-				'She smiles with a amused smile at your blush "Well he thought you were cute for one."'
+				'She smiles with an amused smile at your blush "Well he thought you were cute for one."'
 				act 'You don''t mind?':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
@@ -923,28 +923,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 					'You expect her to be upset but she doesn''t seem to mind at all her boyfriend finds you cute "That doesn''t bother you?"'
-					'She shakes her head no "Why should it? I don''t mind if he finds other women attractive. Just because we are together doesn''t make us suddenly blind to how attractive others might be, besides we are in a open relationship."'
-					act 'You have a open relationship?':
+					'She shakes her head no "Why should it? I don''t mind if he finds other women attractive. Just because we are together doesn''t make us suddenly blind to how attractive others might be, besides we are in an open relationship."'
+					act 'You have an open relationship?':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
 						LudaQW['open_rel'] = 1
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A30', 'like'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
-						'You are a little shocked you didn''t know they had a open relationship "You are in a open relationship? You mean you can sleep with other people?"'
+						'You are a little shocked you didn''t know they had an open relationship "You are in an open relationship? You mean you can sleep with other people?"'
 						'She laughs at your reaction "Yes and no it doesn''t bother me and it doesn''t bother him. We know we love each other and sex is just sex."'
 						if pav_slut >= 50 and LudaQW['olu_offer'] = 0 and pcs_vag ! 0:
-							'You nod a bit "Yeah ok I guess I can see that."'
-							'Then she stops and seems to be considering something before saying "Actually I am kinda glad of it, the man has a amazing stamina and just loves sex, he can''t get enough of it honestly. Don''t get me wrong I love sex but he wears me out, so I am glad he can burn up some of that sexual energy with other women."'
-							'You are a little surprised by that, but it does explain why she is ok with sharing him "I see Auntie." You say with a sly smile of understanding.'
+							'You nod a bit "Yeah OK I guess I can see that."'
+							'Then she stops and seems to be considering something before saying "Actually I am kinda glad of it, the man has amazing stamina and just loves sex, he can''t get enough of it honestly. Don''t get me wrong I love sex but he wears me out, so I am glad he can burn up some of that sexual energy with other women."'
+							'You are a little surprised by that, but it does explain why she is OK with sharing him "I see Auntie." You say with a sly smile of understanding.'
 							'She giggles at little at your comment "Well since he finds you cute and I am pretty sure you are sexually active, if you would want to spend some time with him and help burn off his sexual energy I won''t mind. So what do you think? I have to warn you thought he is hung like a horse."'
 							act 'Agree to spend time with Olu':
 								*clr & cla
 								LudaQW['olu_offer'] = 2
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
-								'You nod, it sounds like it can be fun. Having a man just in your same building you can visit anytime you are feeling horning and no one else will know about it? Sounds perfect actually "Ok sure Auntie as long as you are ok with it, yeah I wouldn''t mind helping out with his sexual energy." You say with a wink.'
+								'You nod, it sounds like it can be fun. Having a man just in your same building you can visit anytime you are feeling horning and no one else will know about it? Sounds perfect actually "OK sure Auntie as long as you are OK with it, yeah I wouldn''t mind helping out with his sexual energy." You say with a wink.'
 								'She laughs at that "Well I will let him know, also I should warn you. He likes butts, but don''t worry I keep a large supply of lube in the apartment." Seeing your face at the thought of a man described as hung like a horse fucking your ass she quickly adds "Don''t worry, it might hurt the first time but you quickly get use to it and it even starts feeling good after awhile."'
-								'You nod to that "Ok well hopefully it doesn''t take me long to get use to it then." Then the two of you start talking about anal sex and she shares a few tips with you on how to relax and making it feel better.'
+								'You nod to that "OK well hopefully it doesn''t take me long to get use to it then." Then the two of you start talking about anal sex and she shares a few tips with you on how to relax and making it feel better.'
 								act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 								act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
 							end
@@ -1060,16 +1060,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 					'She looks curious "Who is the lucky boy?"'
 					'"Rex" You tell her.'
 					'She shakes her head "I don''t think I know him." With that you tell her about Rex and as you do she starts nodding and has a knowing smile on her face'
-					'She get a inquisitive look on her face "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years old?" She asks, obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
-					'You smile to her "I was invited to his party." You tell her and then add "Ok he is friends with my Anya and she invited me to his birthday party and thats when we meet." Then you talk about the night you meet him and your first date.'
+					'She get an inquisitive look on her face "How did you meet him? Isn''t he a few years old?" She asks, obviously curious how you two crossed paths long enough to start dating.'
+					'You smile to her "I was invited to his party." You tell her and then add "OK he is friends with my Anya and she invited me to his birthday party and that''s when we met." Then you talk about the night you meet him and your first date.'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
 				else
 					'You tell her "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 					'She looks curious "Who is the lucky boy?"'
 					'"<<$boyfriend>>" You tell her.'
-					'She shakes her head "I don''t think I know him." With that you tell her about Niko and as you do she starts nodding and has a knowing smile on her face'
-					'"Well that is a interesting way to meet a boy but i have heard of worse ways, as long as he makes you happy that is all that matters." She says with a wink.'
+					'She shakes her head "I don''t think I know him." With that you tell her about <<$boyfriend>> and as you do she starts nodding and has a knowing smile on her face'
+					'"Well that is an interesting way to meet a boy but i have heard of worse ways, as long as he makes you happy that is all that matters." She says with a wink.'
 					act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
 				end
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A30', 'like'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You ask your aunt about her travels, she exicted tells you stories about her time in Europe. She started off traveling all over Europe then drifted further south into she ended up in Africa then she traveled all over there, which is where she meet Olu. She tells you a number of funny and some sex stories about her travels.'
+			'You ask your aunt about her travels and she excitedly tells you stories about her time in Europe. She started off travelling all over Europe then drifted further south into she ended up in Africa then she travelled all over there, which is where she meet Olu. She tells you a number of funny and some sex stories about her travels.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'ludahome', 'livingroom'
 		end
@@ -1114,14 +1114,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_olu':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/olutalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"So you and Luda seem to get along really well, do you love her?" You ask him curious.'
-		'He lights up at your questions "Yes very much, she is a very kind and loving woman, very understanding, she is the most wonderful woman I have ever meet." He goes on to talk about some of the things they have done together and it really sounds like they are very much in love, certainly he is in love with your Aunt anyways.'
+		'He lights up at your questions "Yes very much, she is a very kind and loving woman, very understanding, she is the most wonderful woman I have ever meet." He goes on to talk about some of the things they have done together and it really sounds like they are very much in love, certainly he is in love with your Aunt anyway.'
 		act 'How do people react?':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/olutalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"How do people treat you and my aunt, with you know you being black?"'
-			'He frowns "Some people are ok with it, most just make comments behind our back but I know they do. Some say nasty things to our face, but I don''t care, though any of them that say these things to her only do so once, where I can hear it."'
+			'He frowns "Some people are OK with it, most just make comments behind our back but I know they do. Some say nasty things to our face, but I don''t care, though any of them that say these things to her only do so once, where I can hear it."'
 			'You can understand why someone of his size could very easily convince someone else that they might not want to say more on the topic to Luda.'
 			'You can tell he would like to change the subject so you do.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_olu'

locations/meadow.qsrc

@@ -68,9 +68,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 	end
 
-	if MiraLoc = 2:
+	if MiraLoc = 2 and meadow ! 2:
 		act 'Go back to the forest': minut += 20 & MiraLoc = 3 & gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
-	else
+	elseif meadow ! 2:
 		act 'Go back to the forest': minut += 20 & gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
 	end
 

locations/miroslava.qsrc

@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 
-		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and hour >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] = 0 and sunWeather = 1 and MiraLoc ! 3:
+		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and hour >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3:
 			act 'Ask if she''s met the local boys?':
 				menu_off = 1
 				*clr & cla
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 					else
 						'You suggest drinking with the village boys and Mira readily agrees, then asks you to wait a couple of minutes while she changes. When she comes out, you go to drink with the group of boys near your house....'
 					end
-					if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and npc_QW['A63'] > 15 and gadriver_gang < 3 :
+					if npc_QW['A60'] >= 16 and gadriver_gang = 2:
 						act 'Continue':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh_group'
 					else
 						act 'Continue':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh'
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go hang out with those guys and drink a little?" Mira asks you. "I''m bored and want to party."'
-				if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and npc_QW['A63'] > 15:
+				if npc_QW['A60'] >= 16 and gadriver_gang = 2:
 					act 'Agree':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh_group'
 				else
 					act 'Agree':mira_guest = 0 & MiraLoc = 5 & minut += 15 & temp = 0 & npc_drunk['A60'] = 0 & gt 'mitkabuh'
@@ -995,7 +995,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 			minut += 2
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You coldly tell Mira that you saw her when she fucked Mitka in your meadow. You remind her that she swore not to tell anyone about your secret place. Mira turns red and flutters her eyes at you trying to look innocent as she mumbles that she''s sorry about breaking her promise. Mira asks if there is any way to make amends. You smile and remind her that she promised you three wishes if she ever revealed the meadow to anyone. Mira meekly nods her head confirming that she does indeed remember making that promise and is ready to fullfil them.'
+			'You coldly tell Mira that you saw her when she fucked Mitka in your meadow. You remind her that she swore not to tell anyone about your secret place. Mira turns red and flutters her eyes at you trying to look innocent as she mumbles that she''s sorry about breaking her promise. Mira asks if there is any way to make amends. You smile and remind her that she promised you three wishes if she ever revealed the meadow to anyone. Mira meekly nods her head confirming that she does indeed remember making that promise and is ready to fulfill them.'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'force'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1008,6 +1008,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
 					act 'Tell her to show you her pussy':
 						*clr & cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw3.jpg"></center>'
+						*nl
 						'"To start, you will pull down your panties and show me your pussy, and tell me what it felt like fucking Mitka in my meadow." you tell her sternly, "I want to know what is so special about his dick that you would exchange it for our friendship."'
 						'Mira gasps in shock from the sting in your words and jumps to her feet. She stares at you stupified and you can see the protest welling up in her but you don''t give her time to recover.'
 						'"If you want us to stay friends, you had better stick to the deal, and if you can''t keep your word then our friendship is over." you state, glaring at her angrily.'
@@ -1049,7 +1051,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You say you want to see Mitka fuck her ass because she told him your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from the suggestion and just looks at you, but you don''t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if your word doesn''t matter, then out friendship will end. Miroslav blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot. You decide to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
+				'You say you want to see Mitka fuck her ass because she told him your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from the suggestion and just looks at you, but you don''t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if your word doesn''t matter, then our friendship will end. Mira blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot. You decide to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
 				' - Wait, so it''s screaming you in the back of Mira, but you pretend to not notice and go on.'
 				' - Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, - after a couple of seconds until you hear a hysterical scream from Mira, I''ll think of something!'
 
@@ -1057,9 +1059,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 4 and Mira4day ! daystart:
-
+		*clr & cla
+		minut += 10
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw4a.jpg"></center>'
+		*nl
 		act 'Remind her that she has not atoned for bringing Mitka to the meadow':
-			cla
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw4b.jpg"></center>'
+			*nl
 			'You remind Mira that you are still not satified with her atonement and she asks you what you want her to do.'
 
 			act 'Tell her that you want to watch as Mitka fucks her in the ass':
@@ -1098,17 +1106,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 	else
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
-		if npc_QW['A63'] > 0 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13 and npc_rel['A60'] < 50: npc_rel['A60'] += 1
+		if (npc_QW['A63'] > 0 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13) and npc_rel['A60'] < 50: npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 		if npc_QW['A63'] >= 13 and npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and npc_rel['A60'] < 50:npc_rel['A60'] += 1
 		if Mira_no > 0 and miraday ! daystart:miraday = daystart & Mira_no -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		if MiraLoc = 1:gs 'miroslava', 'mira_river'
-		if npc_QW['A60'] < 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
+		if npc_QW['A60'] < 3 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
+			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'
+		elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 16 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, Mira can''t seem to focus and barely looks you in the eyes. She seems distracted by other thoughts.'
+		elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
 			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, you often refer to Mira as a whore, but she just pretends not to hear.'
-		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] < 30 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
-			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, Mira tries her best not to look you in the eyes, she seems distracted by other thoughts.'
-		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 30 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
+		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
 			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, but Mira isn''t listening, all she wants to talk about is sex.'
 		else
 			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'

locations/mitka.qsrc

@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_chat':
 			end
 		end
 	! Sveta is not the boys slut but has had sex with Mitka and she does not know Mira likes Mitka or Mira is the boys slut
-	elseif (npc_QW['A63'] > 0 and npc_QW['A63'] < 10) and (npc_QW['A60'] < 2 or npc_QW['A60'] >= 11):
+	elseif (npc_QW['A63'] > 0 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11) and (npc_QW['A60'] < 2 or npc_QW['A60'] >= 11):
 		*nl
 		'Mitka scratches his balls and adds with a grin: "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to have some fun?"'
 		mitkarand = rand(1,10)
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_chat':
 				else
 					'Mitka is clearly enjoying fucking your ass. He has a huge smile on his face as he holds you in place beneath him.'
 				end
-				'Mitka doesn''t bother to pull out and cums deep inside your ass. Breathing heavily, he gets off of you and says, "Still a good fuck, but I would prefer you pussy instead."'
+				'Mitka doesn''t bother to pull out and cums deep inside your ass. Breathing heavily, he gets off of you and says, "Still a good fuck, but I would prefer your pussy instead."'
 				
 				npc_rel['A63'] += 1
 				if npc_QW['A63'] < 10: npc_QW['A63'] += 1

locations/mitkabuh.qsrc

@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partyalone':
 		act 'Drink with the boys':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
-			minut += 30
+			minut += 15
 			npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 			npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 			npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 				end
 				act 'Drink the shot yourself':
 					cla
-					minut += 30
+					minut += 15
 					npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 					npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 					npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Make Mira drink the shot instead (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 						cla
-						minut += 30
+						minut += 15
 						npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 						npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 						npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 			act 'Drink with Mira and the boys':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
-				minut += 30
+				minut += 15
 				npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 				npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 				npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Make Mira drink the shot instead (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 						cla
-						minut += 30
+						minut += 15
 						npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 						npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 						npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 				end
 				act 'Drink the shot yourself':
 					cla
-					minut += 30
+					minut += 15
 					npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 					npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 					npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 			act 'Drink with the boys':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
-				minut += 30
+				minut += 15
 				npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 				npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 				npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
@@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 				npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 				npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)
 				npc_rel['A60'] += rand(0,1)
-				minut += 30
+				minut += 15
 				npc_drunk['A60'] += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				
@@ -1107,8 +1107,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_5':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/sex/mirawish1_2.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'By the time you catch up and find a good hiding spot, Mitka and Mira have already started. Mira is naked, lying on a wooden table with her fit up in the air.'
-		'Mitka is nailing her in the ass with his cock, just like Mira promised he would. Each time he pushes into her, Mira softly moans and the table creaks uder her.'
-		'The loud sounds of Mitka''s thursts can easily be heard from you where you are spying from. After 15 minutes Mira is wriggling her ass and mooing, having the time of her life.'
+		'Mitka is nailing her in the ass with his cock, just like Mira promised he would. Each time he pushes into her, Mira softly moans and the table creaks under her.'
+		'The loud sounds of Mitka''s thrusts can easily be heard from you where you are spying from. After 15 minutes Mira is wriggling her ass and mooing, having the time of her life.'
 		'This is too much for Mitka and he begins to noisily cum in her ass, not even bothering to pull out. He makes her clean his cock before heading back to drink with the other boys some more.'
 		'Mira looks around to try and spot you, but cannot see you in her drunk state.'
 		

locations/mitkabuh_group.qsrc

@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'partywithMira':
 		act 'Drink with Mira and the boys':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
-			minut += 30
+			minut += 15
 			npc_rel['A63'] += rand(0,1)
 			npc_rel['A62'] += rand(0,1)
 			npc_rel['A61'] += rand(0,1)

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -291,262 +291,257 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 
-		if momloc = 23:
-			! schedule copied from #family - should be identical.
-			act 'Chat':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut+=rand(10,15)
-				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
-				gs'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> Natasha is still quite young and attractive. She''s only <<motherAge>> years. She works at the station cafe.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] < 20: 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t stand you, and she avoids you as much as she can.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29'] < 40: 'You and <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> have a tense relationship.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A29'] < 60: 'You have a normal relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] < 80: 'You have a good relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80: 'You have a great relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
-				act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] < 20:
-					dynamic $d_mother[1]
-				exit
-				elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29']<40:
-					dynamic $d_mother[2]
-				exit
-				elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
-					dynamic $d_mother[3]
-				end
+		act 'Chat':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut+=rand(10,15)
+			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> Natasha is still quite young and attractive. She''s only <<motherAge>> years. She works at the station cafe.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] < 20: 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t stand you, and she avoids you as much as she can.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29'] < 40: 'You and <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> have a tense relationship.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A29'] < 60: 'You have a normal relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] < 80: 'You have a good relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80: 'You have a great relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] < 20:
+				dynamic $d_mother[1]
+			exit
+			elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29']<40:
+				dynamic $d_mother[2]
+			exit
+			elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+				dynamic $d_mother[3]
 			end
+		end
 
-			act 'Ask for some money':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 5
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'You ask your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> for some money.'
+		act 'Ask for some money':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+			'You ask your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> for some money.'
 
-				if SchoolAtestat = 0:
-					if motherPayDay = daystart:
-						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> frowns: "Again, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Did you forget I already gave you money today? Don''t be greedy!"'
-						act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
-					else
-						!! determines how much Sveta receives depending on relationship and grades
-						if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
-							moneyfrommom90 = 300
-							moneyfrommom70 = 150
-						elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60:
-							moneyfrommom90 = 250
-							moneyfrommom70 = 100
-						elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
-							moneyfrommom90 = 200
-							moneyfrommom70 = 50
-						end
-						
-						if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
-							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'dislike'
-							motherPayDay = daystart
-
-							if pcs_grades >= 90:
-								money += moneyfrommom90
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> smiles and gives you <<moneyfrommom90>> <b>₽</b>: "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve earned it. I''m glad you''re doing such a good job in school."'
-								act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
-							elseif pcs_grades >= 70:
-								money += moneyfrommom70
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> reluctantly gives you <<moneyfrommom70>> <b>₽</b>: "When you do better in school, I will give you more. In the meantime, this is all you deserve!"'
-								act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
-							else
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scoffs, and shakes her head: "Money? No way, <<$pcs_nickname>>. With how poorly you are doing in school, the only thing you deserve is the belt. You can have some money when you improve your grades, until then you get nothing."'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
-							end
+			if SchoolAtestat = 0:
+				if motherPayDay = daystart:
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> frowns: "Again, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Did you forget I already gave you money today? Don''t be greedy!"'
+					act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+				else
+					!! determines how much Sveta receives depending on relationship and grades
+					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
+						moneyfrommom90 = 300
+						moneyfrommom70 = 150
+					elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60:
+						moneyfrommom90 = 250
+						moneyfrommom70 = 100
+					elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+						moneyfrommom90 = 200
+						moneyfrommom70 = 50
+					end
+					
+					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'dislike'
+						motherPayDay = daystart
+
+						if pcs_grades >= 90:
+							money += moneyfrommom90
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> smiles and gives you <<moneyfrommom90>> <b>₽</b>: "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve earned it. I''m glad you''re doing such a good job in school."'
+							act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
+						elseif pcs_grades >= 70:
+							money += moneyfrommom70
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> reluctantly gives you <<moneyfrommom70>> <b>₽</b>: "When you do better in school, I will give you more. In the meantime, this is all you deserve!"'
+							act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
 						else
-							if (motherKnowWhore >= 1 or motherKnowSpravka >= 1) and npc_rel['A29'] < 40:
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t believe you would even ask, and shouts angrily: "Whores don''t get money from me! Get out of here, run to your stud and go ask him!"'
-							else
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scowls, shaking her head: "Why should I give you anything? Go get a job, you''ll get nothing from me." She really doesn''t like you very much.'
-							end
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scoffs, and shakes her head: "Money? No way, <<$pcs_nickname>>. With how poorly you are doing in school, the only thing you deserve is the belt. You can have some money when you improve your grades, until then you get nothing."'
 							act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 						end
-						killvar 'moneyfrommom90'
-						killvar 'moneyfrommom70'
+					else
+						if (motherKnowWhore >= 1 or motherKnowSpravka >= 1) and npc_rel['A29'] < 40:
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t believe you would even ask, and shouts angrily: "Whores don''t get money from me! Get out of here, run to your stud and go ask him!"'
+						else
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scowls, shaking her head: "Why should I give you anything? Go get a job, you''ll get nothing from me." She really doesn''t like you very much.'
+						end
+						act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 					end
-				else
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "You are old enough to earn your own money <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can''t keep depending on me forever. Get a job."'
-				end	
-			end
+					killvar 'moneyfrommom90'
+					killvar 'moneyfrommom70'
+				end
+			else
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "You are old enough to earn your own money <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can''t keep depending on me forever. Get a job."'
+			end	
+		end
 
-			act 'Ask about your biological father':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 5
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+		act 'Ask about your biological father':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 
-				if npc_rel['A29'] < 80:
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
-					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about him, it brings back too many bad memories. Just know that Vladimir, your stepfather, raised you and Anya as if they were his own daughters."'
-				else
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
-					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "I have no idea where Mikhail is and what he does now, I haven''t seen him in many years. We went to the same school when we were young, and were dating back then... nothing serious. Things weren''t great between us, but then I got pregnant with your sister Anya. Our parents forced us to get married. We tried to make the most of it, and for a while things didn''t seem so bad. A few months after I had you, we got into a huge argument though. We decided we couldn''t live together any more, and got divorced." You can''t help but notice she won''t tell you what the argument was about, but you don''t interrupt her. It''s rare enough to get her to talk about your real father as it is.'
-					'"A year later I married Vladimir, your stepfather. We had Kolka together, but Vladimir always treated you and Anya as if they were his own daughters too. He looked after you, bathed you, told you stories at night and took you for walks whenever he could." Those memories seem to have cheered her up, and she has a serene smile on her face. "Vladimir really is a wonderful man..." she adds, while you thank her for the story.'
-				end
-				act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] < 80:
+				'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+				'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about him, it brings back too many bad memories. Just know that Vladimir, your stepfather, raised you and Anya as if they were his own daughters."'
+			else
+				'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+				'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "I have no idea where Mikhail is and what he does now, I haven''t seen him in many years. We went to the same school when we were young, and were dating back then... nothing serious. Things weren''t great between us, but then I got pregnant with your sister Anya. Our parents forced us to get married. We tried to make the most of it, and for a while things didn''t seem so bad. A few months after I had you, we got into a huge argument though. We decided we couldn''t live together any more, and got divorced." You can''t help but notice she won''t tell you what the argument was about, but you don''t interrupt her. It''s rare enough to get her to talk about your real father as it is.'
+				'"A year later I married Vladimir, your stepfather. We had Kolka together, but Vladimir always treated you and Anya as if they were his own daughters too. He looked after you, bathed you, told you stories at night and took you for walks whenever he could." Those memories seem to have cheered her up, and she has a serene smile on her face. "Vladimir really is a wonderful man..." she adds, while you thank her for the story.'
 			end
+			act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+		end
 
-			act 'Ask for some new clothes':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 5
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'You wait until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is in a good mood, and then quickly swoop in: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing nice to wear. Can I please have some new clothes?"'
-				if pav_prostitute >= 100 and motherKnowWhore >= 1:
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is outraged by the suggestion. "Really <<$pcs_nickname>>? You have lots of customers, and you''re still asking me for clothes? You should have plenty of whore money, you can afford them yourself. Besides, I don''t know where to buy clothes for a whore."'
+		act 'Ask for some new clothes':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+			'You wait until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is in a good mood, and then quickly swoop in: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing nice to wear. Can I please have some new clothes?"'
+			if pav_prostitute >= 100 and motherKnowWhore >= 1:
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is outraged by the suggestion. "Really <<$pcs_nickname>>? You have lots of customers, and you''re still asking me for clothes? You should have plenty of whore money, you can afford them yourself. Besides, I don''t know where to buy clothes for a whore."'
 
-					act 'Move away from her':gt $loc, $metka
-				else
-					if SchoolAtestat = 0:
-						if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
-							if motherClotheMonth ! month:
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> lets out an exasperated sigh and throws her hands in the air. "Here we go again... <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing to wear!" she says, mocking your voice in a high pitch. You both laugh. "Alright then <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go see if we can find something."'
-
-								act 'Go to the store':
-									cla
-									npc_rel['A29'] = 70
-									motherClotheMonth = month
-									minut += 30
+				act 'Move away from her':gt $loc, $metka
+			else
+				if SchoolAtestat = 0:
+					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
+						if motherClotheMonth ! month:
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> lets out an exasperated sigh and throws her hands in the air. "Here we go again... <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing to wear!" she says, mocking your voice in a high pitch. You both laugh. "Alright then <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go see if we can find something."'
+
+							act 'Go to the store':
+								cla
+								npc_rel['A29'] = 70
+								motherClotheMonth = month
+								minut += 30
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/clothes_shopping.jpg"></center>'
+								'Going clothes shopping with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is always an interesting experience. You never get to pick your own clothes, but she brings you clothes that she thinks would suit you and lets you try them on. You would argue but her taste in clothing is actually very good, always picking out cute outfits for you to wear that are quite trendy too. You directly go towards the changing booths, wondering what she''ll bring you this time.'
+
+								act 'Try on the clothes she brings you':
+									*clr & cla
 									gs 'stat'
-									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/clothes_shopping.jpg"></center>'
-									'Going clothes shopping with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is always an interesting experience. You never get to pick your own clothes, but she brings you clothes that she thinks would suit you and lets you try them on. You would argue but her taste in clothing is actually very good, always picking out cute outfits for you to wear that are quite trendy too. You directly go towards the changing booths, wondering what she''ll bring you this time.'
-
-									act 'Try on the clothes she brings you':
-										*clr & cla
-										gs 'stat'
-										loop_counter = 0
-										:markbuyclomother
-										loop_counter += 1
-										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dressing_room.jpg"></center>'
-										if loop_counter = 300:
-											'After 30 minutes of trying on various outfits you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear.'
+									loop_counter = 0
+									:markbuyclomother
+									loop_counter += 1
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dressing_room.jpg"></center>'
+									if loop_counter = 300:
+										'After 30 minutes of trying on various outfits you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear.'
+									else
+										numrand = rand(1, 413)
+
+										gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cheap', numrand
+										!!not prostitute
+										if CloStyle = 4:jump 'markbuyclomother'
+										!!Sveta can wear it and not too revealing
+										if CloInhibit > pcs_inhib or CloInhibit > 30:jump 'markbuyclomother'
+
+										if cheap[numrand] = 0:
+											cheap[numrand] = 1
+											cheapH[numrand] = 50
+											cheapB[numrand] = pcs_hips
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/1cheap/<<numrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 										else
-											numrand = rand(1, 413)
-
-											gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cheap', numrand
-											!!not prostitute
-											if CloStyle = 4:jump 'markbuyclomother'
-											!!Sveta can wear it and not too revealing
-											if CloInhibit > pcs_inhib or CloInhibit > 30:jump 'markbuyclomother'
-
-											if cheap[numrand] = 0:
-												cheap[numrand] = 1
-												cheapH[numrand] = 50
-												cheapB[numrand] = pcs_hips
-												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/1cheap/<<numrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-											else
-												jump 'markbuyclomother'
-											end
+											jump 'markbuyclomother'
 										end
+									end
 
-										'You enter a changing booth and spend 30 minutes trying on various outfits: short ones, long ones, light ones, dark ones... Then finally her eyes light up, and she beams: "This one! This one is perfect!" She buys the outfit for you, and you go back home together. You thank your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and give her a hug.'
+									'You enter a changing booth and spend 30 minutes trying on various outfits: short ones, long ones, light ones, dark ones... Then finally her eyes light up, and she beams: "This one! This one is perfect!" She buys the outfit for you, and you go back home together. You thank your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and give her a hug.'
 
-										act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
-									end
+									act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 								end
-							else
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sadly shakes her head: I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, our budget is limited and we already went clothes shopping this month. You''ll have to manage with what you have in your closet for a little while, maybe we can go again next month."'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 							end
 						else
-							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, money is tight. We just can''t afford it right now."'
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sadly shakes her head: I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, our budget is limited and we already went clothes shopping this month. You''ll have to manage with what you have in your closet for a little while, maybe we can go again next month."'
 							act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 						end
 					else
-						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "No <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re old enough to earn your own money and buy your own clothes. Get a job if you want new clothes."'
+						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, money is tight. We just can''t afford it right now."'
 						act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 					end
+				else
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "No <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re old enough to earn your own money and buy your own clothes. Get a job if you want new clothes."'
+					act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 				end
 			end
+		end
 
-			act 'Offer to help around the house':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 60
-				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', rand(1,5)
-				pcs_mood -= 10
-				delin_beh -= 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
-				TotalMomPom += 1
+		act 'Offer to help around the house':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 60
+			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', rand(1,5)
+			pcs_mood -= 10
+			delin_beh -= 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
+			TotalMomPom += 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			MomPom += 1
+			:MomPom_jump
+			if MomPom = 1:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dishes.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do the dishes. You spend an hour washing the dishes in the kitchen.'
+			elseif MomPom = 2:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/cooking.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to help cook for tonight''s meals. You spend an hour in the kitchen helping out with the cooking.'
+			elseif MomPom = 3:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/sweep.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to clean the floor. You spend an hour sweeping the floors of the apartment.'
+			elseif MomPom = 4:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/laundry.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do a load of laundry. You spend an hour taking a load of clothes to the laundry and washing them, before bringing them home and folding them.'
+			elseif MomPom = 5:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/iron.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to iron some clothes. You spend an hour in the hallway ironing clothes.'
+			elseif MomPom = 6:
+				sdacharand = rand(10, 50)
+				money += sdacharand
 				gs 'stat'
-				MomPom += 1
-				:MomPom_jump
-				if MomPom = 1:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dishes.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do the dishes. You spend an hour washing the dishes in the kitchen.'
-				elseif MomPom = 2:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/cooking.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to help cook for tonight''s meals. You spend an hour in the kitchen helping out with the cooking.'
-				elseif MomPom = 3:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/sweep.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to clean the floor. You spend an hour sweeping the floors of the apartment.'
-				elseif MomPom = 4:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/laundry.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do a load of laundry. You spend an hour taking a load of clothes to the laundry and washing them, before bringing them home and folding them.'
-				elseif MomPom = 5:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/iron.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to iron some clothes. You spend an hour in the hallway ironing clothes.'
-				elseif MomPom = 6:
-					sdacharand = rand(10, 50)
-					money += sdacharand
-					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/grocery.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to run to the store, and buy some groceries. You head to the store and purchase the food, hauling the heavy bags home. The groceries cost you <<sdacharand>> <b>₽</b>, she gives you some money to cover the cost when you return home.'
-					'You have gain a few rubles for your effort.'
-				elseif MomPom = 7:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/pharmacy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to go to the pharmacy, to get some medicine. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s sister, Lyudmila, works there and always gives your family the medicine you need for free. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gave you a list of the items you need, and when you enter the pharmacy you see your aunt Luda behind the counter as always. She smiles when she recognizes you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! How are you? I hope everything is okay?"'
-					'"Hello aunt!" You greet her back, and have a chat with her before you give her list your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> made. Aunt Luda quickly gathers the items your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> wrote down, gathers them in a paper bag and hands the bag over to you. "Here you go, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Have a nice day, tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I said hi!"'
-					'You say you will and wave her goodbye. When you come home, you give your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> the bag. After a few minutes you realize you forgot to pass on aunt Luda''s regards to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but decide to not bother now.'
-				elseif MomPom = 8:
-					MomPom = 1
-					jump 'MomPom_jump'
-				end
-				act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/grocery.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to run to the store, and buy some groceries. You head to the store and purchase the food, hauling the heavy bags home. The groceries cost you <<sdacharand>> <b>₽</b>, she gives you some money to cover the cost when you return home.'
+				'You have gain a few rubles for your effort.'
+			elseif MomPom = 7:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/pharmacy.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to go to the pharmacy, to get some medicine. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s sister, Lyudmila, works there and always gives your family the medicine you need for free. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gave you a list of the items you need, and when you enter the pharmacy you see your aunt Luda behind the counter as always. She smiles when she recognizes you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! How are you? I hope everything is okay?"'
+				'"Hello aunt!" You greet her back, and have a chat with her before you give her list your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> made. Aunt Luda quickly gathers the items your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> wrote down, gathers them in a paper bag and hands the bag over to you. "Here you go, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Have a nice day, tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I said hi!"'
+				'You say you will and wave her goodbye. When you come home, you give your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> the bag. After a few minutes you realize you forgot to pass on aunt Luda''s regards to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but decide to not bother now.'
+			elseif MomPom = 8:
+				MomPom = 1
+				jump 'MomPom_jump'
 			end
+			act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+		end
 
-			if npc_QW['A29'] = 1 and npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and $loc = 'kuhrPar':
-				act 'Try to reconcile':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+		if npc_QW['A29'] = 1 and npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and $loc = 'kuhrPar':
+			act 'Try to reconcile':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 
-					mqwtRand = rand(1, 10)
+				mqwtRand = rand(1, 10)
 
-					if mqwtRand <= 2:
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -rand(1,5)
-						minut += 30
-						'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to hopefully patch up your horrible relationship. You''re not sure whether you said something wrong, or whether she''s just in a bad mood, but your attempt to reconcile backfired horribly; within moments the conversation turns into a screaming contest, and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> ends up disliking you even more.'
+				if mqwtRand <= 2:
+					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -rand(1,5)
+					minut += 30
+					'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to hopefully patch up your horrible relationship. You''re not sure whether you said something wrong, or whether she''s just in a bad mood, but your attempt to reconcile backfired horribly; within moments the conversation turns into a screaming contest, and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> ends up disliking you even more.'
 
-						act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
-					elseif mqwtRand > 2 and mqwtRand <= 8:
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
-						minut += 30
-						'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to try and patch up your horrible relationship. Despite your best efforts, the whole half-hour conversation consists mainly of a fairly aggressive monologue from your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> about morality, diseases and what awaits you in the future, if you do not change your ways. Still, there is some improvement in your relationship.'
+					act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
+				elseif mqwtRand > 2 and mqwtRand <= 8:
+					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
+					minut += 30
+					'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to try and patch up your horrible relationship. Despite your best efforts, the whole half-hour conversation consists mainly of a fairly aggressive monologue from your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> about morality, diseases and what awaits you in the future, if you do not change your ways. Still, there is some improvement in your relationship.'
 
-						act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
-					elseif mqwtRand > 8:
-						gt'mother','motherQW_2'
-					end
+					act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
+				elseif mqwtRand > 8:
+					gt'mother','motherQW_2'
 				end
 			end
-			gs 'mother', 'pregreact'
-		else
-			gt $loc, $metka
 		end
+		gs 'mother', 'pregreact'
 	end
 
 	if alko >= 3  and alkomday ! daystart:
@@ -1738,7 +1733,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'condom_steal':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you walk through the corridors you overhear some annoyed exhales coming form your parents room, you quickly take a peek seeing your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> rummaging through some of the stuff, "Where the hell are they..." you hear her quietly say, "I know I put them here, I always put them here..."'
 		'Not noticing you she keeps rummaging as you quietly slip out not wanting to bring attention to yourself...'
-	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
+	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'talk':
 		! Mom talking to step dad about the missing condoms
 		*clr & cla
 		motherQW['con_steal_talk'] = daystart

locations/nerd_game_night.qsrc

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'invite':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big152.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shake your head "Sorry, I can''t this week, I already made plans on both those days."'
-			'He looks disappointed. "Oh... ok, guess you are turning into a popular girl," he says with a grin.' 
+			'He looks disappointed. "Oh... ok, guess you are turning into a popular girl," he says with a grin.'
 			'You shake your head "Very funny."'
 			'He laughs a little obviously not that upset you turned them down "Anyways I will go let the rest know. We can try for next week, talk to you later." With that he walks off.'
 			gs 'nerd_game_night', 'invite', 'exit'
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_playing_on1':
 	'The battle with the dragon begins, Feofan weaves a scarying sounding battle as everyone takes turns taking a action. At one point most of the group is down, only Julia and Petka''s characters are still up. Julia is trying to heal Zinaida and Artem''s characters, while Petka''s sorceress is trying to cast a powerful spell. It looks like the dragon is about to finish off Petka''s character for sure and maybe Julia''s as well, but you have managed to sneak around the dragon as it is distracted, focusing on the rest of the party. At that point you decided to try out your back stab ability Feofan told you about that your character could do earlier. "I want to back stab the dragon."'
 	'Feofan looks surprised at first. "You have to be behi... Oh." He says looking at the figures on the map, seeing your rogue directly behind the dragon, he seems to have not noticed you moving behind his dragon.'
 	'Artem says "Yes!" Several of the others acknowledge what you have done which makes your feel good at their praise even if it is over just a game.'
-	'Feofan nods with a smile. "Ok then <<pcs_nickname>> roll your attack.'
+	'Feofan nods with a smile. "Ok then <<$pcs_nickname>> roll your attack.'
 	act 'Roll the dice':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 10
@@ -206,15 +206,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_playing_on1':
 		if temp = 20:
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			'You roll the dice and the 20 comes up, you here a slight gasp go around the table, you are not sure what just happened but everyone but Feofan looks happy. You know higher is better though. "You got a critical strike." Feofan informs you, well that sounds good you think as you roll your dice damage.'
-			'Feofan checks his notes a moment, then double checks them. "As the dragon rears back to let lose it''s firey breath, <<pcs_nickname>> rogue spots a weak point between two of it''s scales. Lunging forward she buries her sword into the dragon. It roars in pain and thrashes about tossing you aside, but you manage to land and roll safely taking no damage. Then the dragon falls over and moves no more, obviously dead." The rest of the group cheers and congratulates you on killing the dragon, you can''t help but feel good about it.'
+			'Feofan checks his notes a moment, then double checks them. "As the dragon rears back to let lose it''s firey breath, <<$pcs_nickname>> rogue spots a weak point between two of it''s scales. Lunging forward she buries her sword into the dragon. It roars in pain and thrashes about tossing you aside, but you manage to land and roll safely taking no damage. Then the dragon falls over and moves no more, obviously dead." The rest of the group cheers and congratulates you on killing the dragon, you can''t help but feel good about it.'
 		elseif temp => 11:
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			'You roll the dice and Feofan checks the numbers. "You managed to land a backstab on the dragon, roll your damage." Feofan informs you, well that sounds good you think as you roll your dice damage.'
-			'Feofan checks his notes a moment. "As the dragon rears back to let lose it''s firey breath, <<pcs_nickname>> rogue lunges forward scoring a back stab on the dragon. It roars in pain and thrashes about tossing you aside, but you manage to land and roll safely taking no damage. Then the dragon turns on you and tries to bite you." More dice are rolled and you manage to dodge the dragon, as the dragon focuses on you. Julia has manage to heal both Zinaida and Artem back up and it bought enough time for Petka to finish casting his sorceress most powerful spell. Which lands causing a great deal of damage with attacks from the rest the dragon finally falls over dead. The rest of the group congratulates you on landing a powerful hit and distracting the dragon, you can''t help but feel good about it.'
+			'Feofan checks his notes a moment. "As the dragon rears back to let lose it''s firey breath, <<$pcs_nickname>> rogue lunges forward scoring a back stab on the dragon. It roars in pain and thrashes about tossing you aside, but you manage to land and roll safely taking no damage. Then the dragon turns on you and tries to bite you." More dice are rolled and you manage to dodge the dragon, as the dragon focuses on you. Julia has manage to heal both Zinaida and Artem back up and it bought enough time for Petka to finish casting his sorceress most powerful spell. Which lands causing a great deal of damage with attacks from the rest the dragon finally falls over dead. The rest of the group congratulates you on landing a powerful hit and distracting the dragon, you can''t help but feel good about it.'
 		else
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			'You roll the dice and Feofan checks the numbers. "Your weapon hits the dragons scales but fails to pierce them." Feofan informs you.'
-			'Feofan checks his notes a moment. "As the dragon rears back to let lose it''s firey breath, <<pcs_nickname>> rogue lunges forward but fails to hurt the dragon. Then the dragon turns on you and tries to bite you." More dice are rolled and you manage to dodge the dragon, as the dragon focuses on you. Julia has manage to heal both Zinaida and Artem back up and it bought enough time for Petka to finish casting his sorceress most powerful spell. Which lands causing a great deal of damage with attacks from the rest the dragon finally falls over dead. The rest of the group congratulates you on distracting the dragon, you can''t help but feel good about it.'
+			'Feofan checks his notes a moment. "As the dragon rears back to let lose it''s firey breath, <<$pcs_nickname>> rogue lunges forward but fails to hurt the dragon. Then the dragon turns on you and tries to bite you." More dice are rolled and you manage to dodge the dragon, as the dragon focuses on you. Julia has manage to heal both Zinaida and Artem back up and it bought enough time for Petka to finish casting his sorceress most powerful spell. Which lands causing a great deal of damage with attacks from the rest the dragon finally falls over dead. The rest of the group congratulates you on distracting the dragon, you can''t help but feel good about it.'
 		end
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish the game night':
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night2':
 		'"That''s settled then," Feofan proclaims, "You grab all the loot and head out of the cave, and head straight toward the village, not caring what might await you..."'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'keep_playing_on2'
 	end
-	
+
 	act 'Just grab the trinkets':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'dislike'
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night2':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'keep_playing_on2'
 	end
 end
-	
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_playing_on2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
@@ -294,6 +294,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_playing_on2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/camp.jpg"></center>'
 		'You decide maybe that is a bit to much realism and decide to stay in camp, feeling a little embarrassed for suggesting it. Soon the party has the camp set up and eats dinner, they banter back and forth as their characters talking about what they plan to spend their share of the treasure on, before deciding the order of who is on watch during the night. After that everyone goes to sleep, taking their turns on watch until morning.'
 		'"We''re out of time," since all of you are having fun you let out a sigh, "Don''t worry, there are lots of adventures left to explore. We''ll pick it up the next time."'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'gdk', 'lobby'
+	end
 	act 'Go to the river and bath':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/bathing.jpg"></center>'
@@ -304,10 +306,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_playing_on2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/bathing_confront.jpg"></center>'
 			'You tell him, "I grab my sword and tell who ever is there to show themselves now."'
 			'Petka sighs, "Sorry I just wanted to check on you, I didn''t mean to spy on you."'
-			'Feofan then descibes how your character is standing their naked with her bare sword out. Then Petka blurts out, "<<pcs_nickname>> naked?" Then blushes as he realizes what he said. "I-I meant her character!"'
+			'Feofan then descibes how your character is standing their naked with her bare sword out. Then Petka blurts out, "<<$pcs_nickname>> naked?" Then blushes as he realizes what he said. "I-I meant her character!"'
 			*nl
 			'The others start laughing, "Sure you did," they wink, "<<$pcs_nickname>>''s naked body."'
-			'"I didn''t know you were such a perv, Petka!" The tension rises a bit before easing up as the rest tease Petka about his unfortunate choice of words. You tell him your fine and the return to camp, then you finish bathing, get dressed and head back to camp. After you do the rest of them take your lead and one at a time their characters all go and bath as well. Apparently enjoying the more immersive roll playing you are doing.' 
+			'"I didn''t know you were such a perv, Petka!" The tension rises a bit before easing up as the rest tease Petka about his unfortunate choice of words. You tell him your fine and the return to camp, then you finish bathing, get dressed and head back to camp. After you do the rest of them take your lead and one at a time their characters all go and bath as well. Apparently enjoying the more immersive roll playing you are doing.'
 			*nl
 			'As the party beds down for the night, You and the others keep teasing Petka throughout the rest of the game as it nears the end.'
 			'Feofan anounces, "We''re out of time," since all of you are having fun you let out a sigh, "Don''t worry, there are lots of adventures left to explore. We''ll pick it up the next time, hopefully Petka will get to see <<$pcs_nickname>> naked again." He says with a wink which gets everyone laughing again and Petka blushing once more, then the group gathers up their books and walk out of the library. Julia and Zinaida leave together, as does Artem and Petka. Gerasim and Feofan each leave on their own.'
@@ -326,7 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night3':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/gamenight.jpg"></center>'
 	'Feofan has already set up everything as you walk inside the library. There is a new map set on the table, it''s a map over the village you''re about to enter, "Wow, that looks great!" as everyone runs over to see what is being set up.'
-	'Feofan is clearly loving the attention, "Thanks, it took me several weeks to draw up the details and paint everything. Shall we get started?" All of you quickly take a seat around the table as Feofan begins, "After you break camp and pack up, you make haste to the village. You enter the sleepy village around midday."' 
+	'Feofan is clearly loving the attention, "Thanks, it took me several weeks to draw up the details and paint everything. Shall we get started?" All of you quickly take a seat around the table as Feofan begins, "After you break camp and pack up, you make haste to the village. You enter the sleepy village around midday."'
 	'He then describes the layout of the village, he points to the blacksmith shop where you can update your gear, the tavern where you can collect valuable information, the alchemist shop where you can buy different potions to help you out throughout the world. There''s even a rumor there''s a brothel somewhere within the village.'
 	'You all sit there in awe as Feofan explains further on and as soon he is finished Artem takes over, "Let us find an inn which we can use as a base and where we can rest at night." It doesn''t take long before you find a nice inn that you settle into.'
 	act 'Settle in':
@@ -445,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night3':
 				'Upon entering the blacksmith shop you can hear the clonking of a hammer hitting on heated iron. A tall man with broad shoulders is hammering away not really paying attention towards you, "Excuse me, sir!" The banging continues on, "Sir!" Artem and Feofan are role-playing to the point as the rest of you listen on, "My good sir, we would like to see what wares you have to offer."'
 				'The banging stops and the blacksmith looks up, he''s got dark eyes and looks more annoyed as if you were bothering him, "Did you bring a fortune with you? Only royalty has the means to buy what I''m offering."'
 				'You are taken back a little by his bluntness but you brush it off and look around his shop, "You got quite the quality stuff here."'
-				'"Thank you," he grunts, "You buying something or you''re just out to waste my time?"'	
+				'"Thank you," he grunts, "You buying something or you''re just out to waste my time?"'
 				act 'Listen on':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/blacksmith.jpg"></center>'
@@ -475,13 +477,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night3':
 							'Everyone starts laughing, you spend some time looking at the stuff you''ve managed to get hold of as your party sits at the local tavern, drinking and eating. "I can''t wait to see how all of this plays out." someone comments before Feofan calls a stop for the day. Shortly after that the game night is over and you all help Feofan to pack everything up and then everyone gathers up their books and walks out of the library. Julia and Zinaida leave together, as does Artem and Petka. Gerasim and Feofan each leave on their own.'
 							act 'Leave':gt 'gdk', 'lobby'
 						end
-					end	
+					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
 end
-		
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night4':
 	*clr & cla
 	nerd_game['stage'] = 4
@@ -509,10 +511,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night4':
 			'"What the hell is this?!" Zinaida yells out, "Why are you all so tense, didn''t we have a great time yesterday?" she smirks.'
 			'"L-Look here we don''t want any trouble, you hear that!" the barkeep yells behind the counter.'
 			'"Don''t worry we''re not here to look for a fight," Julia tries to calm the barkeep, "We''re just looking for some information."'
-			'Feofan takes over, "In the tavern you can see several patrons sitting in their own corners minding their own business. There''s <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''game_night'', ''woman''">a beautiful woman</a> sitting furthest back, almost hidden from the rest. She''s dressed in all black, observing your group. Closest to the bar counter you see a group of <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''game_night'', ''group''">rowdy men</a>, they''re big and wear big armor. They''re drunk and are talking loudly about some of the adventures they''ve been on.'
+			'Feofan takes over, "In the tavern you can see several patrons sitting in their own corners minding their own business. There''s <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''nerd_game_night'', ''woman''">a beautiful woman</a> sitting furthest back, almost hidden from the rest. She''s dressed in all black, observing your group. Closest to the bar counter you see a group of <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''nerd_game_night'', ''group''">rowdy men</a>, they''re big and wear big armor. They''re drunk and are talking loudly about some of the adventures they''ve been on.'
 			*nl
-			'And lastly an <a href="exec:minut += 3 & gt ''game_night'', ''oldman''">old man</a>, face covered in scars, enjoying his drink..."'
+			'And lastly an <a href="exec:minut += 3 & gt ''nerd_game_night'', ''oldman''">old man</a>, face covered in scars, enjoying his drink..."'
 			'Someone nudges you, "Pick one and go talk to them." You look around confused, "Don''t look so confused, you have the highest persuasion out of the whole group. So decide on a person to talk to and if anything happens we have your back."'
+			act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'woman'
+			act 'Go talk to the group': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'group'
+			act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'oldman'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -529,11 +534,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'woman':
 	'"Then don''t..." the woman interrupts you, and after a short silent moment, "You should find someone you love before it''s too late. Better to love than never to have felt it. I should know, I had the most fairest man in this kingdom but our relationship turned sour and I threw it all away... I heard that the heartbreak killed him in the end and now there''s a fortune just sitting there at that damned mansion."'
 	'"Why are you telling this to me? If there''s a fortune there don''t you want to keep that a secret? This sounds too good to be true." you grow a bit suspicious of her ulterior motives.'
 	'"I''m too stricken to visit that place ever again, but if your path would cross that way be sure to visit it, it''s quite secluded." she describes the location of the mansion while you carefully listen.'
-	if nerd_game['taverngroup'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the group': gt 'game_night', 'group'
-	if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'game_night', 'oldman'
-	act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'game_night', 'inform_them'
+	if nerd_game['taverngroup'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the group': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'group'
+	if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'oldman'
+	act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'inform_them'
 end
-			
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 60
@@ -553,7 +558,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 		'You ponder for a while, "I need to talk to my friends... I''ll be right back."'
 		'As you turn you back the men are hollering, "Did you see her ass?! I wouldn''t mind getting my hands on that. I bet I could make her scream all night long." The men continue to be rowdy as they order another round.'
 		'Feofan finishes by talking as one of the men. "Pay as the gold now and the information is yours or no deal."'
-		'Feofan then says. "Well <<pcs_nickname>> what are you going to do? Pay them or...?"'
+		'Feofan then says. "Well <<$pcs_nickname>> what are you going to do? Pay them or...?"'
 		*nl
 		'You really want the information and you think it''ll be right move for the group, "How much?"'
 		'What seems to be the leader licks his lips and tells you the price he wants you to pay, The price is pretty much the last of the gold your party has. "No haggling, you understand girl! That''s the price, take it or leave it!"'
@@ -568,9 +573,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 			'You look up trying to read your co-players what they think about it but they''re keeping true to the role-play playing out, "Alright, you''ve got a deal!"'
 			'He picks up one of the scrolls from his bag and throws it towards you, "There you have it girl! Now hand over the gold!"'
 			'You hand over the gold and quickly return to the group, you hear the other players cheer you on, pleased with your decision.'
-			if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'game_night', 'woman'
-			if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'game_night', 'oldman'
-			act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'game_night', 'inform_them'
+			if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'woman'
+			if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'oldman'
+			act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'inform_them'
 		end
 		act 'Decline':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -581,14 +586,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 			'"That''s way too much!" you shake your head, "I politely decline."'
 			'"Too bad then... Now leave us alone, we''re done with each other!" you can clearly hear that he''s upset...'
 			'As you return to the group, you hear the other players sigh, discontent with your decision.'
-			if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'game_night', 'woman'
-			if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'game_night', 'oldman'
-			act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'game_night', 'inform_them'
+			if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'woman'
+			if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'oldman'
+			act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'inform_them'
 		end
 	end
 end
-	
-if $ARGS[0] = 'oldman':	
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'oldman':
 	!Will send you out to old ruins where the players will meet his old dead crew
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 60
@@ -605,45 +610,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldman':
 	'"Where can I find this place, old man?" you curiously ask.'
 	'"I wouldn''t recommend you to go there, you''ll end up just like us, dead." the old man warns.'
 	'You shake your head, "We''re not afraid of anything!" and order another round and after a while you manage to pry out the information. After several more drinks that loosens his tongue and he describes how to find the necromancers lair.'
-	if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'game_night', 'woman'
-	if nerd_game['taverngroup'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the group': gt 'game_night', 'group'
-	act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'game_night', 'inform_them'
+	if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'woman'
+	if nerd_game['taverngroup'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the group': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'group'
+	act 'Tell your party what you learned': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'inform_them'
 end
 
 !Continuation of game night 4
-if $ARGS[0] = 'inform_them':	
+if $ARGS[0] = 'inform_them':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/party.jpg"></center>'
 	if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0 or nerd_game['taverngroup'] = 0 or nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0:
 		'You go back to your party and tell them what you found out, some of them seem excited by what you found out, while others are less interested. They discuss it for a few minutes while Feofan just watches all of you. After a bit Artem says to you. "Okay, go find out if there are any other options."'
-		if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'game_night', 'woman'
-		if nerd_game['taverngroup'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the group': gt 'game_night', 'group'
-		if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'game_night', 'oldman'
+		if nerd_game['tavernwoman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the woman': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'woman'
+		if nerd_game['taverngroup'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the group': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'group'
+		if nerd_game['tavernman'] = 0: act 'Go talk to the old man': gt 'nerd_game_night', 'oldman'
 	else
 		minut += 120
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You walk back to the group and tell them about the different adventures you''ve discovered from the patrons of the tavern. They all listen attentively to what you have to say, "Well, I feel like we should go and bash that Necromancer''s head in." Artem says.'
 		'"I disagree, I''m not too fond of that, I''d rather do something else." Julia counters. The arguing then starts getting more intensive as all of the players are trying to get their point across. The yelling is getting louder and louder as Feofan gets fed up and slams the table, "Now that I have your attention! Since you can''t decide what you should do, I suggest that you have a vote on what the next adventure will be."'
 		'There''s a lot of loud moans from the players, "I don''t care how you feel about it! Vote!" Feofan commands the players.'
-			act 'Vote for the mansion adventure':
-				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/party.jpg"></center>'
-				'All the players take turn to vote while Feofan writes down what every player voted for, "Great, now that the vote is decided I suggest that we call it for the day and pick up it next time."'
-				'"But we want to continue playing, we already know what adventure we''re going on." Gerasim sighs.'
-				'"That''s it for today!" Feofan stands firm, "Everyone needs to calm down as this discussion got out of line!" Then everyone gathers up their books and walks out of the library. Julia and Zinaida leave together, as does Artem and Petka. Gerasim and Feofan each leave on their own.'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'gdk', 'lobby'
-			end
-			if nerd_game['acceptpay'] = 1:
-				act 'Vote for the treasure map adventure':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/party.jpg"></center>'
-					'All the players take turn to vote while Feofan writes down what every player voted for, "Great, now that the vote is decided I suggest that we call it for the day and pick up it next time."'
-					'"But we want to continue playing, we already know what adventure we''re going on." Gerasim sighs.'
-					'"That''s it for today!" Feofan stands firm, "Everyone needs to calm down as this discussion got out of line!" Then everyone gathers up their books and walks out of the library. Julia and Zinaida leave together, as does Artem and Petka. Gerasim and Feofan each leave on their own.'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'gdk', 'lobby'
-				end
-			end
-			act 'Vote to kill the Necromancer':
+		act 'Vote for the mansion adventure':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/party.jpg"></center>'
+			'All the players take turn to vote while Feofan writes down what every player voted for, "Great, now that the vote is decided I suggest that we call it for the day and pick up it next time."'
+			'"But we want to continue playing, we already know what adventure we''re going on." Gerasim sighs.'
+			'"That''s it for today!" Feofan stands firm, "Everyone needs to calm down as this discussion got out of line!" Then everyone gathers up their books and walks out of the library. Julia and Zinaida leave together, as does Artem and Petka. Gerasim and Feofan each leave on their own.'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'gdk', 'lobby'
+		end
+		if nerd_game['acceptpay'] = 1:
+			act 'Vote for the treasure map adventure':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/party.jpg"></center>'
 				'All the players take turn to vote while Feofan writes down what every player voted for, "Great, now that the vote is decided I suggest that we call it for the day and pick up it next time."'
@@ -652,6 +648,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inform_them':
 				act 'Leave':gt 'gdk', 'lobby'
 			end
 		end
+		act 'Vote to kill the Necromancer':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/events/nerd_game/party.jpg"></center>'
+			'All the players take turn to vote while Feofan writes down what every player voted for, "Great, now that the vote is decided I suggest that we call it for the day and pick up it next time."'
+			'"But we want to continue playing, we already know what adventure we''re going on." Gerasim sighs.'
+			'"That''s it for today!" Feofan stands firm, "Everyone needs to calm down as this discussion got out of line!" Then everyone gathers up their books and walks out of the library. Julia and Zinaida leave together, as does Artem and Petka. Gerasim and Feofan each leave on their own.'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'gdk', 'lobby'
+		end
 	end
 end
 
@@ -690,8 +694,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_night5':
 		end
 	end
 end
-		
-			
+
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'board_games':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1

locations/nordtrain.qsrc

@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'centre':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 	'You pay for the ticket and board the next train going to the city center.'
 	'After 5 minutes, you see the office blocks and shops at the heart of the city. The train stops at its final destination, the busy station in the city center.'
 

locations/npcstatic5.qsrc

@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ if school_year = 2000:
 else
 	npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 20010330
 end
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Natalia is a very smart but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships but her good looks and eagerness to help others prevents her from being an outcast. She rarely spends time with anyone after school but some say to have seen her in the community center watching the starlets practice dancing.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Natalia is a very smart but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships but her good looks and eagerness to help others, prevents her from being an outcast. She is rarely seen with anyone but one thing she always keeps with her, is a special notebook that she never lets anyone touch.'
 npc_gender['A<<npctemp>>'] = 1
 gs 'npcstaticdefaults', 'defaults'
 gs 'npcstaticdefaults', 'group', 'nerd'

locations/olutaxi.qsrc

@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/taxi_parked.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you walk into the alleyway you see his van he converted into a taxi sitting there.'
 !!if first time seeing van in alleyway
-				if first_taxi = 1:
-					first_taxi = 0
+				if first_taxi = 0:
+					first_taxi = 1
 					'You wonder why he parked here. "Why is your van parked here?" You ask him'
 					'He stops at the van and unlocks it as he answers you. "Police write me tickets if I park in front of the station, so I leave it here and then run down and drive it up to pick up people at the front."'
 					'You shake your head. "That''s terrible, they shouldn''t harass you like that."'
@@ -52,8 +52,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 					'Djibril smiles in return. "It was nice meeting you as well."'
 					'You smile to Olu. "I will and thanks for the ride."'
 					'Olu returns the smile. "Any time, good bye." Once he you close the door and he is sure you are safely on the sidewalk he pulls away and drives off.'
+					act 'Go to Pavlovsk Residential area': gt 'pavResidential'
+					act 'Go to the Old Town': gt 'liam'
 !!this then dumps Sveta onto what ever street hub she asked him to drive her too.
-					act '': gt '', ''
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -107,8 +108,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/taxi_parked.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you walk into the alleyway you see his van he converted into a taxi sitting there.'
 !!if first time seeing van in alleyway
-				if first_taxi = 1:
-					first_taxi = 0
+				if first_taxi = 0:
+					first_taxi = 1
 					'You wonder why he parked here. "Why is your van parked here?" You ask him'
 					'He stops at the van and unlocks it as he answers you. "Police write me tickets if I park in front of the station, so I leave it here and then run down and drive it up to pick up people at the front."'
 					'You shake your head. "That''s terrible, they shouldn''t harass you like that."'
@@ -125,6 +126,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 					'He starts up the van and pulls it out of the alleyway, out onto the street. He is listening to some music you have never heard before, you don''t even know what they are saying. It doesn''t take to long before you arrive at your destination. He pulls over to the curb and stops his van. "We are here, you be careful now, yes."'
 					'You smile to him. "I will and thanks for the ride."'
 					'He returns the smile. "Any time, good bye." Once he you close the door and he is sure you are safely on the sidewalk he pulls away and drives off.'
+					act 'Go to Pavlovsk Residential area': gt 'pavResidential'
+					act 'Go to the Old Town': gt 'liam'
 !!this then dumps Sveta onto what ever street hub she asked him to drive her too.  act '':gt '', ''
 				end
 			end

locations/pirsingsalon.qsrc

@@ -130,6 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tongue_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 3000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 3000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 3000
 					dynamic 'pirsA<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsyaz'
@@ -216,6 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lip_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 4000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 4000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 4000
 					dynamic 'pirsB<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsgub'
@@ -302,6 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ears_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 1000:
 				act 'Buy these earrings for 1000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the earrings.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 1000
 					dynamic 'pirsC<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsysh'
@@ -388,6 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nose_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 2000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 2000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 2000
 					dynamic 'pirsD<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsnos'
@@ -474,6 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brow_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 2000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 2000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 2000
 					dynamic 'PirsE<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsbro'
@@ -560,6 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nip_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 6000:
 				act 'Buy these piercings for 6000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercings.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 6000
 					dynamic 'pirsF<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirssos'
@@ -646,6 +652,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'belly_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 7000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 7000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 7000
 					dynamic 'PirsN<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirspyp'
@@ -732,6 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubic_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 10000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 10,000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 10000
 					dynamic 'pirsG<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsvla'

locations/poli.qsrc

@@ -1236,9 +1236,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cosmetic1':
 	'String implants slowly absorb your body fluids and grow larger over time. We can also drain it for you if it becomes too large.'
 	*nl
 	if money >= 80000 and lashair = 0:
-		'<a href="exec:gt ''poli'', ''electrolysis''">Electrolysis treatment</a> - 80,000 <b>₽</b>'
+		'<a href="exec:gt ''poli'', ''electrolysis''">Electrolysis</a> laser hair removal of legs and pubic area - 80,000 <b>₽</b>'
 		else
-		'Electrolysis treatment - 80,000 <b>₽</b>'
+		'Electrolysis - laser hair removal of legs and pubic area - 80,000 <b>₽</b>'
 	end
 	if money >= 25000 and pcs_lip < 4:
 		'<a href="exec:gt ''poli'', ''lipPlus''">Lip enlargement surgery</a> - 25,000 <b>₽</b>'

locations/preCSB.qsrc

@@ -533,7 +533,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_start':
 				showobjs 1
 
 				!!Stuff from the backpack, phone
-				money += 5000
 				prezik = 3
 				pornMagazine = 40
 				balans = 200

locations/preCUST.qsrc

@@ -309,6 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 	end
 
 !!	SG Start Specific Variable Setting
+	if $ARGS[1] = 'CSB': money = 5000
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'SGS' or $ARGS[1] = 'CSB':
 		school[6] = 1
 		sisboyday = -2
@@ -583,8 +584,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 	end
 	
 !!setting default exercise outfit and setting coats
-	if goth_clothing = 1:
-		killvar 'goth_clothing'
+	if school_clothing = 1:
+		killvar 'school_clothing'
+		alternative[55] = 1
+		alternativeH[55] = 120
+		alternativeB[55] = pcs_hips
 		sportspantynumber = 44
 		sportsbranumber = 28
 		$sportsbratype = 'kats'
@@ -606,7 +610,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Done':
 		coat[5] = 1
 		coatH[5] = 200
 		defaultcoat = 5
-		sportscoat = 5	
+		sportscoat = 5
+		if school_clothing = 2:
+			school[10] = 1
+			schoolH[10] = 120
+			schoolB[10] = pcs_hips
+		elseif school_clothing = 3:
+			school[62] = 1
+			schoolH[62] = 120
+			schoolB[62] = pcs_hips
+		elseif school_clothing = 4:
+			alternative[19] = 1
+			alternativeH[19] = 120
+			alternativeB[19] = pcs_hips
+		elseif school_clothing = 5:
+			school[25] = 1
+			schoolH[25] = 120
+			schoolB[25] = pcs_hips
+		elseif school_clothing = 6:
+			school[26] = 1
+			schoolH[26] = 120
+			schoolB[26] = pcs_hips
+		end
+		killvar 'school_clothing'
 	end
 	sportsshoenumber = 21
 	$sportspursetype = $currentpursetype

locations/preSYS.qsrc

@@ -931,6 +931,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'socialite':
 		currentpursenumber = 4
 		fashionista_purses[4] = 1
 		bag = 1
+		school_clothing = 6
 		if player_avatar ! 1: pcs_hairlng = 200
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'socialgroup_setting', 10, 5, 0, 0, 0, 0
 		npc_rel['A140'] += 10
@@ -959,6 +960,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 			pcs_lip = 3
 			pcs_lashes = 2
 		end
+		school_clothing = 6
 		pcs_skin = 100
 		pcs_tan = 50
 		genbsize = 37
@@ -1047,6 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnikstart':
 		pcs_kick = 35
 		pcs_def = 35
 		pcs_makupskl = 20
+		school_clothing = 5
 		npc_rel['A9'] += 10
 		npc_rel['A10'] += 10
 		npc_rel['A11'] += 10
@@ -1090,6 +1093,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'troublemaker':
 		currentpursenumber = 16
 		dolls_purses[16] = 1
 		bag = 1
+		school_clothing = 5
 		if player_avatar ! 1: pcs_hairlng = 55
 		npc_rel['A24'] += 10
 		npc_rel['A155'] += 15
@@ -1208,6 +1212,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
 			pcs_lip = 2
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
+		school_clothing = 4
 		pcs_skin = 80
 		pcs_tan = 5
 		pcs_inhib = 40
@@ -1305,6 +1310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uglyduckling':
 			pcs_lip = 0
 			pcs_lashes = 2
 		end
+		school_clothing = 3
 		salo = 20
 		willpowermax = 70
 		gt 'preCUST', 'SGStart'
@@ -1340,6 +1346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goodgirl':
 			pcs_lip = 2
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
+		school_clothing = 3
 		salo = 80
 		genbsize = 17
 		npc_rel['A25'] -= 5
@@ -1398,6 +1405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut':
 			pcs_lip = 2
 			pcs_lashes = 1
 		end
+		school_clothing = 2
 		pcs_perform = 20
 		pcs_skin = 80
 		pcs_tan = 20
@@ -1473,7 +1481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'goth':
 			pcs_eyecol = 1
 			pcs_lashes = 1
         end
-		goth_clothing = 1
+		school_clothing = 1
         kosmetica = 25
 		stanok = 20
 		tampon = 10

locations/preSYS2.qsrc

@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Set money (<<money>>₽)': money = input 'Set Cash Amount' & gt'preSYS2','start'
 	if custom_csb ! 1: act 'Return to preset character menu': gt 'preSYS', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm these options':
+		dynamic 'grupvalue[<<grupTipe>>] = 50'
 		if $soc_grup = 'nerd':
 			traits['nerd_points'] = 60
 			traits['nerd_status'] = 2
@@ -41,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modapp':
 	cla & *clr
 	if genbsize = 0:genbsize = 12
 
-	'Choose base genetic breast size:'
+	'Choose base genetic breast size: (this is the genetic disposition and not the actual size at game start)'
 	nl
 	if genbsize = 2:
 		'Very small - Currently set'
@@ -248,6 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modpur':
 	if $currentpursetype = '': 
 		'You do not own a purse.'
 	else
+		bag = 1
 		if $currentpursetype ! 'boutique':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/purses/<<$currentpursetype>>/<<currentpursenumber>>.jpg"></center>'
 		else
@@ -270,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modpur':
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/island/dolls.png"></center>'
 		i = 1
 		:loopdollspurses
-		*p '<a href="exec:gt ''preSYS2'', ''modpur'', ''dolls'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/purses/cheap/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="300" /></a>'
+		*p '<a href="exec:gt ''preSYS2'', ''modpur'', ''dolls'', <<i>>"><img src="images/pc/purses/dolls/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="300" /></a>'
 		i += 1
 		if i <= 22:jump 'loopdollspurses'
 	end
@@ -392,15 +394,12 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modgrup':
 	*clr & cla
 	'Your current social group is <<$soc_grup>>.'
-	act 'Nerd, Geek, Student': $soc_grup = 'nerd'& gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
-	act 'Athlete, Jock':$soc_grup = 'jock'& gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
-	act 'Popular, Cool, Beautiful':$soc_grup = 'cool'& gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
-	act 'Gopnik, Rebel, Punk, Troublemaker':$soc_grup = 'gopnik'& gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
-	act 'Outcast, Loser, Goth, Ugly':$soc_grup = 'outcast'& gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
-	act 'Return':
-		gs 'preSYS', $soc_grup
-		gt 'preSYS2','start'
-	end
+	act 'Nerd, Geek, Student': $soc_grup = 'nerd' & grupTipe = 3 & gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
+	act 'Athlete, Jock':$soc_grup = 'jock'& grupTipe = 2 & gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
+	act 'Popular, Cool, Beautiful':$soc_grup = 'cool' & grupTipe = 1 & gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
+	act 'Gopnik, Rebel, Punk, Troublemaker':$soc_grup = 'gopnik' & grupTipe = 4 & gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
+	act 'Outcast, Loser, Goth, Ugly':$soc_grup = 'outcast' & grupTipe = 5 & gt 'preSYS2','modgrup'
+	act 'Return':gt 'preSYS2','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modatt':
@@ -426,7 +425,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modatt':
 	'</table></center>'
 	nl
 
-	act 'Return': gt'preSYS2','start'
+	act 'Return':
+		stren_lvl = pcs_stren
+		agil_lvl = pcs_agil
+		vital_lvl = pcs_vital
+		intel_lvl = pcs_intel
+		sprt_lvl = pcs_sprt
+		react_lvl = pcs_react
+		chrsm_lvl = pcs_chrsm
+		prcptn_lvl = pcs_prcptn
+		magik_lvl = pcs_magik
+		grades_lvl = pcs_grades
+		inhib_lvl = pcs_inhib
+		heels_lvl = pcs_heels
+		stren_lvlst = pcs_stren
+		agil_lvlst = pcs_agil
+		vital_lvlst = pcs_vital
+		intel_lvlst = pcs_intel
+		sprt_lvlst = pcs_sprt
+		react_lvlst = pcs_react
+		chrsm_lvlst = pcs_chrsm
+		prcptn_lvlst = pcs_prcptn
+		magik_lvlst = pcs_magik
+		grades_lvlst = pcs_grades
+		inhib_lvlst = pcs_inhib
+		heels_lvlst = pcs_heels
+		gt'preSYS2','start'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl':
@@ -453,7 +478,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_men':
 	'</table></center>'
 	nl
 
-	act 'Return': gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	act 'Return':
+		humint_lvl = pcs_humint
+		persuas_lvl = pcs_persuas
+		observ_lvl = pcs_observ
+		splcstng_lvl = pcs_splcstng
+		humint_lvlst = pcs_humint
+		persuas_lvlst = pcs_persuas
+		observ_lvlst = pcs_observ
+		splcstng_lvlst = pcs_splcstng
+		gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	end 
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_spo':
@@ -479,7 +514,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_spo':
 	'</table></center>'
 	nl
 
-	act 'Return': gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	act 'Return':
+		jab_lvl = pcs_jab
+		punch_lvl = pcs_punch
+		kick_lvl = pcs_kick
+		def_lvl = pcs_def
+		run_lvl = pcs_run
+		vball_lvl = pcs_vball
+		ftball_lvl = pcs_ftbll
+		wrstlng_lvl = pcs_wrstlng
+		shoot_lvl = pcs_shoot
+		bushcraft_lvl = pcs_bushcraft
+		chess_lvl = pcs_chess
+		icesktng_lvl = pcs_icesktng
+		gaming_lvl = pcs_gaming
+		jab_lvlst = pcs_jab
+		punch_lvlst = pcs_punch
+		kick_lvlst = pcs_kick
+		def_lvlst = pcs_def
+		run_lvlst = pcs_run
+		vball_lvlst = pcs_vball
+		ftball_lvlst = pcs_ftbll
+		wrstlng_lvlst = pcs_wrstlng
+		shoot_lvlst = pcs_shoot
+		bushcraft_lvlst = pcs_bushcraft
+		chess_lvlst = pcs_chess
+		icesktng_lvlst = pcs_icesktng
+		gaming_lvlst = pcs_gaming
+		gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_bea':
@@ -498,7 +561,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_bea':
 	'</table></center>'
 	nl
 
-	act 'Return': gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	act 'Return':
+		makupskl_lvl = pcs_makupskl
+		danc_lvl = pcs_danc
+		dancero_lvl = pcs_dancero
+		dancpol_lvl = pcs_dancpol
+		cheer_lvl = pcs_cheer
+		mblng_lvl = pcs_mdlng
+		makupskl_lvlst = pcs_makupskl
+		danc_lvlst = pcs_danc
+		dancero_lvlst = pcs_dancero
+		dancpol_lvlst = pcs_dancpol
+		cheer_lvlst = pcs_cheer
+		mblng_lvlst = pcs_mdlng
+		gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_art':
@@ -516,7 +593,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_art':
 	'</table></center>'
 	nl
 
-	act 'Return': gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	act 'Return':
+		vokal_lvl = pcs_vokal
+		instrmusic_lvl = pcs_instrmusic
+		photoskl_lvl = pcs_photoskl
+		artskls_lvl = pcs_artskls
+		perform_lvl = pcs_perform
+		vokal_lvlst = pcs_vokal
+		instrmusic_lvlst = pcs_instrmusic
+		photoskl_lvlst = pcs_photoskl
+		artskls_lvlst = pcs_artskls
+		perform_lvlst = pcs_perform
+		gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_job':
@@ -535,7 +624,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modskl_job':
 	'</table></center>'
 	nl
 
-	act 'Return': gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	act 'Return':
+		compskl_lvl = pcs_compskl
+		comphckng_lvl = pcs_comphckng
+		hndiwrk_lvl = pcs_hndiwrk
+		sewng_lvl = pcs_sewng
+		servng_lvl = pcs_servng
+		medcn_lvl = pcs_medcn
+		compskl_lvlst = pcs_compskl
+		comphckng_lvlst = pcs_comphckng
+		hndiwrk_lvlst = pcs_hndiwrk
+		sewng_lvlst = pcs_sewng
+		servng_lvlst = pcs_servng
+		medcn_lvlst = pcs_medcn
+		gt 'preSYS2','modskl'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'none':
@@ -638,7 +741,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'none':
 	stat['hj'] = 0	
 	stat['vaginal'] = 0
 	$soc_grup = 'outcast'
-	gs 'preSYS', $soc_grup
+	grupTipe = 5
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'modrel':

locations/road.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	if nroad = 0:
 		'You''re on the outskirts of St. Petersburg. You see a number of crudely made huts near the trees, a bunch of homeless people must have sought shelter here.'
-		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Pavlovsk, for a price...'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or Pavlovsk, for a price...'
 	elseif nroad = 1:
 		'You''re not very far from St. Petersburg. You see a bunch of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''psiklin'',''start''">luxury houses</a> not far from the road. That settlement looks like it''s very expensive to live in.'
 	elseif nroad = 2:
@@ -113,6 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		display_bb = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''train'', ''village''">railway platform</a> not far from the road. In the same direction, a dirt road leads to the village of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''gadukino''">Gadukino</a>.'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Pavlovsk or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
 		!if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and gadriver_gang = 2:
 		!	'You and Mira can both <a href="exec:gt ''gadprostitutes'', ''start''">prostitute</a> yourselves around here.'
 		!elseif npc_QW['A60'] > 15:
@@ -141,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'You are on the outskirts of the <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''liam''">old town</a> district of Pavlovsk about a five minutes down a cobblestone road is the old town center. It''s a fairly popular for tourists to explore with much of its old architecture still intact.'
 	elseif nroad = 20:
 		'The main road ends at the provincial town of Pavlovsk. You can see the castle in the distance.'
-		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to St. Petersburg, for a price...'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
 		'A small road leads to an almost hidden old <a href="exec:gt ''brothel'', ''lobby''">hotel</a>. Usually tourists use it when passing by or when visiting the old town of Pavlovsk.'
 	end
 end

locations/salon.qsrc

@@ -2,6 +2,7 @@
 $location_type = 'public_indoors'
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
+	if momloc = 15 and momloc[11] ! daystart: gt 'salon', 'mom'
 	$sexloc = $CURLOC
 	if week = 1 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 10 and worksalon = 1:gt 'salon', 'beginwork'
 	if week = 3 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 10 and worksalon = 1:gt 'salon', 'beginwork'
@@ -48,6 +49,51 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	act 'Leave':minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 end
+	
+if $ARGS[0] = 'mom':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/salon.jpg"></center>'
+	'As you enter the salon you see you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> waiting with your Aunt Luda. They haven''t seen you yet, they seem to just be chatting as they wait for their turn. The place seems to be fairly busy today.'
+	
+	act 'Ignore them and leave':gt 'torgcentr'
+	
+	act 'Go talk to them':
+		*clr & cla
+		minut += 5
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/momsalon.jpg"></center>'
+		'You walk over to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and Luda. "Hi <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Luda. You guys getting your hair cut?"'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks up at you and seems a little surprised to see you. "Yes and we are going to get a manicure as well, you should join us. I''ll pay."'
+		'Luda speaks up as well. "Yes dear you should join us." Just then your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> name is called and she gets up and takes a seat to get her hair styled. A free manicure would be nice, but that also means having to spend time with them and listening to them talk about boring stuff.'
+		
+		act 'Tell her your busy':
+			*clr & cla
+			npc_rel['A29'] -= 1
+			minut += 5
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/salon.jpg"></center>'
+			'You shakes your head. "Sorry I can''t, I already have plans."'
+			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sighs a little, obviously disappointed. "Well ok then, don''t stay out to late." You tell them bye and the say the same back to you, With that her and Luda go back to talking again as you leave.'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'torgcentr'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Agree':
+			*clr & cla
+			npc_rel['A29'] += 1
+			npc_rel['A30'] += 1
+			momloc[11] = daystart
+			minut += 20
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/momsvetsalon.jpg"></center>'
+			'You sit down next to Luda but only for a moment when her name is called and she gets up and gets her hair done. Next they are both taken to have a manicure done and you are called over to join them. The three of you sit near each other as you get manicures. Luda and your mom talk about a variety of topics, mostly gossip about what''s going on in Pavlovsk of the people they both know or stories about what happened at their work.'
+			'You chime in occasionally telling them about some stuff you have been up to of late. All and all it is a surprisingly fun time and you got a nice manicure out of it. Once you are finished, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> pays for both of you and Luda pays for herself. You all walk out together, Luda says. "Well I should get back and make dinner for me and Olu."'
+			'You <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and Luda share a brief hug. "Same here, Vlad wouldn''t know what to do and would likely starve if I don''t get dinner started soon." The both laugh at that, Luda tells you bye as she walks off and your mothers starts for home as well, as she says to you. "Diner will be ready in about half a hour, you should come home and join us." You tell her you might and with that she walks off as well.'
+			act 'Leave':gt 'torgcentr'
+		end
+	end
+end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'solyariy':
 	cla & *clr
@@ -502,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'epilyaciya':
 	cla & *clr
 	minut += 60
 	pcs_leghair = -10
-	pcs_pubes = -10
+	pcs_pubes = -5
 	inhib_exp += rand(1,5)
 	money -= 2000
 	if salonrand = 0 and masha = 0:gt 'salon', '0'

locations/saveupdater.qsrc

@@ -903,6 +903,9 @@ end
 if pcs_gaming_exp > 0: gaming_exp += pcs_gaming_exp & killvar 'pcs_gaming_exp'
 if nerd_night_game ! 0: killvar 'nerd_night_game'
 if nerd_night_game_day ! 0: nerd_game['game_day'] = nerd_night_game_day & killvar 'nerd_night_game_day'
+
+!!Masturbation check wasn''t being cleared
+mastrOnce = 0
 !! ----- Other bug fixes and cleanup ----- 0.8.0
 
 --- saveupdater ---------------------------------

locations/selfplay.qsrc

@@ -8,9 +8,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if mastrOnce = 0:
 		stat['mast'] += 1
 		mastrOnce = 1
+		org_temp = orgasm
 		if pcs_inhib < 30:inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 	end
 
+	if org_temp < orgasm:
+		act 'Finish': gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
+	exit
+	end
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if $loc = 'bedrPar' or $loc = 'gadsarai':'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/start.jpg"></center>'
@@ -66,9 +71,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 			'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
 
-			act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+			act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 
-			if pcs_horny > 0:gs 'selfplay', 'fingering'
+			if org_temp = orgasm:gs 'selfplay', 'fingering'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -99,220 +104,222 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 			act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
 
-			act 'Add a second finger':
-				cls
-				selfplaytime += 5
-				gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
+			if org_temp = orgasm:
+				act 'Add a second finger':
+					cls
+					selfplaytime += 5
+					gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
 
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/2.jpg"></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/2.jpg"></center>'
 
-				gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
-				gs 'stat'
+					gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
+					gs 'stat'
 
-				if pcs_ass >= 10:
-					'You relax and squeeze a second finger in, alongside the first. It slides in fairly easily.'
+					if pcs_ass >= 10:
+						'You relax and squeeze a second finger in, alongside the first. It slides in fairly easily.'
 
-					if agape > 0:
-						if agape = 2:agape = 3
-						if agape = 1:agape = 2
+						if agape > 0:
+							if agape = 2:agape = 3
+							if agape = 1:agape = 2
 
-						pcs_horny -= 50
+							pcs_horny -= 50
 
-						if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass -= 1
+							if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass -= 1
 
-						'Pushing a second finger into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
-					end
-				elseif pcs_ass >= 5 and pcs_ass < 10:
-					analplay += 1
-					'You slide a second finger into your asshole. You can feel your anus squeezing your fingers tightly.'
+							'Pushing a second finger into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+						end
+					elseif pcs_ass >= 5 and pcs_ass < 10:
+						analplay += 1
+						'You slide a second finger into your asshole. You can feel your anus squeezing your fingers tightly.'
+
+						if agape > 0:
+							if agape = 2:agape = 3
+							if agape = 1:agape = 2
+							pcs_horny -= 50
+							pcs_ass += 1
+							'Pushing a second finger into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+						end
+					else
+						pcs_ass += 1
 
-					if agape > 0:
 						if agape = 2:agape = 3
 						if agape = 1:agape = 2
+						if agape = 0:agape = 1
+
 						pcs_horny -= 50
-						pcs_ass += 1
-						'Pushing a second finger into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+						'When you slide in the second finger, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
 					end
-				else
-					pcs_ass += 1
 
-					if agape = 2:agape = 3
-					if agape = 1:agape = 2
-					if agape = 0:agape = 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
 
-					pcs_horny -= 50
-					'When you slide in the second finger, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
-				end
+					act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
+					if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
 
-				act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
 
-				if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
+					if org_temp = orgasm and agape < 3:
+						act 'Thrust three fingers in':
+							cls
+							selfplaytime += 5
+							gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/3.jpg"></center>'
 
+							gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
+							gs 'stat'
 
-				if pcs_horny > 0 and agape < 3:
-					act 'Thrust three fingers in':
-						cls
-						selfplaytime += 5
-						gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/3.jpg"></center>'
+							if pcs_ass >= 15:
+								'Your asshole is fairly loose, and you manage to slide three fingers in without much effort.'
 
-						gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
-						gs 'stat'
+								if agape > 0:
+									if agape = 2:agape = 3
+									if agape = 1:agape = 2
 
-						if pcs_ass >= 15:
-							'Your asshole is fairly loose, and you manage to slide three fingers in without much effort.'
+									pcs_horny -= 50
 
-							if agape > 0:
-								if agape = 2:agape = 3
-								if agape = 1:agape = 2
+									if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass += 1
 
-								pcs_horny -= 50
+									'Pushing three fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+								end
+							elseif pcs_ass >= 10 and pcs_ass < 15:
+								analplay += 1
+								'You slide three fingers into your asshole. You can feel your anus squeezing your fingers tightly.'
 
-								if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass += 1
+								if agape > 0:
+									if agape = 2:agape = 3
+									if agape = 1:agape = 2
 
-								'Pushing three fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
-							end
-						elseif pcs_ass >= 10 and pcs_ass < 15:
-							analplay += 1
-							'You slide three fingers into your asshole. You can feel your anus squeezing your fingers tightly.'
+									pcs_horny -= 50
+									pcs_ass += 1
+									'Pushing three fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+								end
+							else
+								pcs_ass += 1
 
-							if agape > 0:
 								if agape = 2:agape = 3
 								if agape = 1:agape = 2
+								if agape = 0:agape = 1
 
 								pcs_horny -= 50
-								pcs_ass += 1
-								'Pushing three fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+								'When you slide in three fingers, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
 							end
-						else
-							pcs_ass += 1
 
-							if agape = 2:agape = 3
-							if agape = 1:agape = 2
-							if agape = 0:agape = 1
+							if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
 
-							pcs_horny -= 50
-							'When you slide in three fingers, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
-						end
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
 
-						if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
+							act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 
-						gs 'stat'
-						'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
+							if org_temp = orgasm and agape < 3:
+								act 'Push four fingers into your asshole':
+									cls
+									selfplaytime += 5
+									gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
 
-						act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/4.jpg"></center>'
 
-						if pcs_horny > 0 and agape < 3:
-							act 'Push four fingers into your asshole':
-								cls
-								selfplaytime += 5
-								gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
+									gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
+									gs 'stat'
 
-								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/4.jpg"></center>'
+									if pcs_ass >= 20:
+										'Your asshole is very loose, and you manage to push four fingers into it.'
 
-								gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
-								gs 'stat'
+										if agape > 0:
+											if agape = 2:agape = 3
+											if agape = 1:agape = 2
 
-								if pcs_ass >= 20:
-									'Your asshole is very loose, and you manage to push four fingers into it.'
+											pcs_horny -= 50
 
-									if agape > 0:
-										if agape = 2:agape = 3
-										if agape = 1:agape = 2
+											if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass -= 1
 
-										pcs_horny -= 50
+											'Pushing four fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+										end
+									elseif pcs_ass >= 15 and pcs_ass < 20:
+										analplay += 1
+										'You manage to push four fingers into your asshole. You can feel your anus squeezing your fingers tightly.'
 
-										if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass -= 1
+										if agape > 0:
+											if agape = 2:agape = 3
+											if agape = 1:agape = 2
 
-										'Pushing four fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
-									end
-								elseif pcs_ass >= 15 and pcs_ass < 20:
-									analplay += 1
-									'You manage to push four fingers into your asshole. You can feel your anus squeezing your fingers tightly.'
+											pcs_horny -= 50
+											pcs_ass += 1
+											'Pushing four fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+										end
+									else
+										pcs_ass += 1
 
-									if agape > 0:
 										if agape = 2:agape = 3
 										if agape = 1:agape = 2
+										if agape = 0:agape = 1
 
 										pcs_horny -= 50
-										pcs_ass += 1
-										'Pushing four fingers into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+										'When you slide in four fingers, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
 									end
-								else
-									pcs_ass += 1
 
-									if agape = 2:agape = 3
-									if agape = 1:agape = 2
-									if agape = 0:agape = 1
+									if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
 
-									pcs_horny -= 50
-									'When you slide in four fingers, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
-								end
+									gs 'stat'
+									'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
 
-								if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
+									act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 
-								gs 'stat'
-								'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
+									if org_temp = orgasm and agape < 3:
+										act 'Put your whole hand in':
+											cls
+											SelfFisting += 1
+											selfplaytime += 5
+											gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
 
-								act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/5.jpg"></center>'
 
-								if pcs_horny > 0 and agape < 3:
-									act 'Put your whole hand in':
-										cls
-										SelfFisting += 1
-										selfplaytime += 5
-										gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
+											gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
+											gs 'stat'
 
-										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/5.jpg"></center>'
+											if pcs_ass >= 25:
+												'Slowly but surely, you manage to get your entire hand into your ass.'
 
-										gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
-										gs 'stat'
+												if agape > 0:
+													if agape = 2:agape = 3
+													if agape = 1:agape = 2
 
-										if pcs_ass >= 25:
-											'Slowly but surely, you manage to get your entire hand into your ass.'
+													pcs_horny -= 50
 
-											if agape > 0:
-												if agape = 2:agape = 3
-												if agape = 1:agape = 2
+													if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass -= 1
 
-												pcs_horny -= 50
+													'Pushing your whole hand into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+												end
+											elseif pcs_ass >= 20 and pcs_ass < 25:
+												analplay += 1
+												'It takes a lot of effort, but over the course of several minutes you manage to work your whole hand into your ass. You feel your anus squeeze your wrist tightly.'
 
-												if pcs_ass > 1:pcs_ass -= 1
+												if agape > 0:
+													if agape = 2:agape = 3
+													if agape = 1:agape = 2
 
-												'Pushing your whole hand into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
-											end
-										elseif pcs_ass >= 20 and pcs_ass < 25:
-											analplay += 1
-											'It takes a lot of effort, but over the course of several minutes you manage to work your whole hand into your ass. You feel your anus squeeze your wrist tightly.'
+													pcs_horny -= 50
+													pcs_ass += 1
+													'Pushing your whole hand into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+												end
+											else
+												pcs_ass += 1
 
-											if agape > 0:
 												if agape = 2:agape = 3
 												if agape = 1:agape = 2
+												if agape = 0:agape = 1
 
 												pcs_horny -= 50
-												pcs_ass += 1
-												'Pushing your whole hand into your already sore asshole was a bad idea. It hurts a lot and you feel like you damaged it further.'
+												'When you push your hand into your asshole, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
 											end
-										else
-											pcs_ass += 1
-
-											if agape = 2:agape = 3
-											if agape = 1:agape = 2
-											if agape = 0:agape = 1
 
-											pcs_horny -= 50
-											'When you push your hand into your asshole, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
-										end
+											act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 
-										act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+											if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
 
-										if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
-
-										gs 'stat'
-										'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
+											gs 'stat'
+											'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
+										end
 									end
 								end
 							end
@@ -403,18 +410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	if pcs_horny > 0:gs 'selfplay', 'fingering'
 
-	act 'Stop masturbating':
-		analplay = 0
-		selfplaytime = 0
-		mastrOnce = 0
-		proverkasisterhere = 0
-
-		if vaginaTemp > pcs_vag * 2:pcs_vag += 1 & vaginaTemp = 0
-
-		gt $loc, $metka
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
+	act 'Stop masturbating': gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 
 	if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:gs 'selfplay', 'van_vtor'
 
@@ -527,14 +523,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'van_vtor':
 		'You hear shouting from outside the bathroom: "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Are you drowning in there or something? What''s taking so long? Get out of there!"'
 
 		act 'Get out of the bath and dry yourself off':
-			analplay = 0
-			selfplaytime = 0
-			mastrOnce = 0
-			proverkasisterhere = 0
-
-			if vaginaTemp > pcs_vag * 2:pcs_vag += 1 & vaginaTemp = 0
-
-			gt $loc, $metka
+			gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 		end
 
 		exit
@@ -574,14 +563,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fingering':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
 
-			gs 'selfplay', 'fingering2'
+			if org_temp = orgasm: gs 'selfplay', 'fingering2'
 
 		elseif mesec > 0:
 			pcs_mood -= 5
 			'Your vagina has some dried up blood from your period on it. You attempt to shove your finger in, but then are kind of grossed out by the idea and reconsider.'
 		end
 
-		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -611,9 +600,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fingering2':
 
 		gs 'selfplay', 'fingering2', 1
 
-		if pcs_horny > 0 and pcs_vag > 0:gs 'selfplay', 'fingering3'
+		if org_temp = orgasm and pcs_vag > 0: gs 'selfplay', 'fingering3'
 
-		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -652,42 +641,59 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fingering3':
 
 		'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
 
-		act 'Fuck yourself with your fingers':
-			cls
-			selfplaytime += 10
-			gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
+		if org_temp = orgasm:
+			act 'Fuck yourself with your fingers':
+				cls
+				selfplaytime += 10
+				gs 'selfplay', 'sis_prov'
 
-			if pcs_vag < 10:
-				if vgape = 2:vgape = 3
-				if vgape = 1:vgape = 2
-				if vgape = 0:vgape = 1
+				if pcs_vag < 10:
+					if vgape = 2:vgape = 3
+					if vgape = 1:vgape = 2
+					if vgape = 0:vgape = 1
 
-				pcs_horny -= 10
-				pcs_mood -= 10
-			end
+					pcs_horny -= 10
+					pcs_mood -= 10
+				end
 
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/hand.jpg"></center>'
-			'You start to slowly move your hand, thrusting your fingers into your pussy again and again.'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/mast/hand.jpg"></center>'
+				'You start to slowly move your hand, thrusting your fingers into your pussy again and again.'
 
-			gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
-			gs 'stat'
+				gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
+				gs 'stat'
 
-			if pcs_vag <= 15:pcs_horny -= 10 & pcs_mood -= 10 & 'You''re stretching your pussy to the point where it becomes rather painful, and don''t get any enjoyment out of it.'
-			if pcs_vag > 10:pcs_horny += rand(10, 20) & 'Your pussy walls are stretched nicely from the finger fucking, and you feel a pleasant warmth spread in your lower body.'
+				if pcs_vag <= 15:pcs_horny -= 10 & pcs_mood -= 10 & 'You''re stretching your pussy to the point where it becomes rather painful, and don''t get any enjoyment out of it.'
+				if pcs_vag > 10:pcs_horny += rand(10, 20) & 'Your pussy walls are stretched nicely from the finger fucking, and you feel a pleasant warmth spread in your lower body.'
 
-			gs 'stat'
+				gs 'stat'
 
-			if pcs_vag < 20:vaginaTemp += 1
+				if pcs_vag < 20:vaginaTemp += 1
 
-			'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
+				'<<$AnyaMsg>>'
 
-			gs 'selfplay', 'fingering3'
+				gs 'selfplay', 'fingering3'
 
-			act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+				act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
+			end
+		else
+			act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Stop touching yourself':gt 'selfplay', 'stop'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'stop':
+	analplay = 0
+	selfplaytime = 0
+	mastrOnce = 0
+	proverkasisterhere = 0
+
+	if vaginaTemp > pcs_vag * 2:pcs_vag += 1 & vaginaTemp = 0
+
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
+	gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 --- selfplay ---------------------------------

locations/shop.qsrc

@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ end
 
 if $shoplocation = 'Anya':
 	cla
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/anyabusywork.jpg"></center>'
 	gs 'sister_chat', 'checks'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do not disturb me at work, can''t you see I have customers?""'
 	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt'shop','start'

locations/sitrPar.qsrc

@@ -1,105 +1,150 @@
 # sitrPar
-CLOSE ALL
-act 'Leave the room':gt 'korrPar'
 
-$metka = ''
-$loc = 'sitrPar'
-$menu_loc = 'sitrPar'
-$menu_arg = ''
-menu_off = 0
-$location_type = 'private'
-$locclass = 'livingr'
-clr
-minut += 1
-gs 'stat'
-gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Living Room</font></b></center>'
-'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/sitrpar.jpg"></center>'
-''
-'The living room has a <a href="exec:gt ''TV'',''pav''">TV</a>, which is near the window. In front of the TV is a <a href="exec:gt ''family'',''sofa''">sofa bed</a>, on which your brother sleeps at night. A large tapestry covers one wall, while the other wall has several shelves on it, stocked with books and other things.'
-*nl
-gs 'family'
-gs 'family_schedule'
-*nl
-gs 'subkid'
+if $ARGS[0] = '':
+	CLOSE ALL
+	act 'Leave the room':gt 'korrPar'
 
-if month = 12 and day >= 20:'A Christmas tree stands next to the TV, decorated with tinsel garlands and other ornaments.'
-if month = 12 and day = 31 and hour >= 20:
-	act 'Celebrate the New Year with your family.':
-		cls
-		npc_rel['A29'] += 10
-		npc_rel['A28'] += 10
-		npc_rel['A33'] += 10
-		npc_rel['A34'] += 10
-		money += 5000
-		hour = 23
-		minut = 0
-		minut += 120
-		pcs_sleep = 0
-		pcs_mood += 100
-		wipo += 1000
-		gs 'food', 'l_meal'
-		gs 'stat'
-		'You sit at the festive table laid in front of the TV and celebrate the New Year with your family, the TV providing some background noise. At the table people strike up a conversation and common problems are forgotten for a while, everyone is having fun talking to each other. At midnight, everyone wishes one another a happy New Year and enjoys the champagne and fireworks outside. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives you an envelope with a greeting card and 5000 <b>₽</b>. For a while you continue to watch TV, enjoying the champagne and company of your family, but after a while everyone is kind of tired and one by one they go to bed.'
+	$metka = ''
+	$loc = 'sitrPar'
+	$menu_loc = 'sitrPar'
+	$menu_arg = ''
+	menu_off = 0
+	$location_type = 'private'
+	$locclass = 'livingr'
+	clr
+	minut += 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Living Room</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/sitrpar.jpg"></center>'
+	''
+	'The living room has a <a href="exec:gt ''TV'',''pav''">TV</a>, which is near the window. In front of the TV is a <a href="exec:gt ''family'',''sofa''">sofa bed</a>, on which your brother sleeps at night. A large tapestry covers one wall, while the other wall has several shelves on it, stocked with books and other things.'
+	*nl
+	gs 'family'
+	gs 'family_schedule'
+	*nl
+	gs 'subkid'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
-	end
-elseif month = 1 and day = 1:
-	act 'Eat some leftovers at the festive table.':
-		cla
-		*clr
-		frost = 0
-		minut += 15
-		pcs_health += 10
-		pcs_mood += 20
-		fat += 2
-		pcs_energy += 20
-		pcs_hydra += 20
-		cumspclnt = 2
-		gs 'cum_cleanup'
-		pcs_breath = 0
+	if month = 12 and day >= 20:'A Christmas tree stands next to the TV, decorated with tinsel garlands and other ornaments.'
+	if month = 12 and day = 31 and hour >= 20:
+		act 'Celebrate the New Year with your family.':
+			cls
+			npc_rel['A29'] += 10
+			npc_rel['A28'] += 10
+			npc_rel['A33'] += 10
+			npc_rel['A34'] += 10
+			money += 5000
+			hour = 23
+			minut = 0
+			minut += 120
+			pcs_sleep = 0
+			pcs_mood += 100
+			wipo += 1000
+			gs 'food', 'l_meal'
+			gs 'stat'
+			'You sit at the festive table laid in front of the TV and celebrate the New Year with your family, the TV providing some background noise. At the table people strike up a conversation and common problems are forgotten for a while, everyone is having fun talking to each other. At midnight, everyone wishes one another a happy New Year and enjoys the champagne and fireworks outside. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives you an envelope with a greeting card and 5000 <b>₽</b>. For a while you continue to watch TV, enjoying the champagne and company of your family, but after a while everyone is kind of tired and one by one they go to bed.'
 
-		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/leftovers.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have finished the leftovers remaining on the table from the holidays.'
+			act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
+		end
+	elseif month = 1 and day = 1:
+		act 'Eat some leftovers at the festive table.':
+			cla
+			*clr
+			frost = 0
+			minut += 15
+			pcs_health += 10
+			pcs_mood += 20
+			fat += 2
+			pcs_energy += 20
+			pcs_hydra += 20
+			cumspclnt = 2
+			gs 'cum_cleanup'
+			pcs_breath = 0
 
-	act 'Get up from the table':gt $loc, $metka
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/leftovers.jpg"></center>'
+			'You have finished the leftovers remaining on the table from the holidays.'
 
-	end
-elseif momloc = 24:
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/uborka1.jpg"></center>'
-	if kanikuli = 0 and StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and week < 6:
-		if $clothingworntype = 'school':
-			'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up at and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Go to school, now!" With that she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does she adds ones more. "Go to school."' 
-			act 'Continue': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
-		else
-			if schtype = 0:
-				$schbrand = 'school'
-				schtype = 6
-			end
-			if schoolH[schtype] = 0:
-				$schbrand = 'school'
-				schtype = 6
+		act 'Get up from the table':gt $loc, $metka
+
+		end
+	elseif momloc = 24:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/uborka1.jpg"></center>'
+		if kanikuli = 0 and StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0 and week < 6:
+			if $clothingworntype = 'school':
+				'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up at and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Go to school, now!" With that she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does she adds ones more. "Go to school."' 
+				act 'Continue': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+			else
+				if schtype = 0:
+					$schbrand = 'school'
+					schtype = 6
+				end
+				if schoolH[schtype] = 0:
+					$schbrand = 'school'
+					schtype = 6
+				end
+				gs 'clothing', 'wear', $schbrand, schtype
+				'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up at and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Why are you not wearing your unifrom? Go get changed and go to school, now!" She follows you back to your room and watches as you change into your uniform, after that she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does she adds ones more. "Go to school."' 
+				act 'Continue':  gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 			end
-			gs 'clothing', 'wear', $schbrand, schtype
-			'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She looks up at and gives you a disappointed look. "What are you still doing home? Why are you not wearing your unifrom? Go get changed and go to school, now!" She follows you back to your room and watches as you change into your uniform, after that she practically pushes you out of the apartment and closes the door. As she does she adds ones more. "Go to school."' 
-			act 'Continue':  gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+		else
+			'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She hasn''t noticed you, she is intent on cleaning.'
+			act 'leave': gt 'korrPar'
 		end
-	else
-		'As you walk into the living room you see your mother sweeping the floor. She hasn''t noticed you, she is intent on cleaning.'
-		act 'leave': 'korrPar'
+		exit
+	elseif momloc = 19:
+		!! Watches TV with Vladimir
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/momvladtv.jpg"></center>'
+		'As you walk into the living room you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and Vladimir sitting on the couch watching tv, while Kolka sits in the armchair watching tv.'
+		act 'leave':gt 'korrPar'
+		
+		act 'Join them':
+			cla & *clr
+			pcs_mood += 10
+			minut += 30
+			npc_rel['A28'] += 1
+			npc_rel['A29'] += 1
+			npc_rel['A34'] += 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familytv.jpg"></center>'
+			'You move over to join them and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scoots away from Vladmir and pat the spot between her and him. You take a seat between them, Vlad barely even glances as you with a brief smile before he goes back to watching tv. Kolka never even looks up, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> pats you on the shoulder before returning her attention to the tv, apparently happy the family is spending time together.'
+			act 'leave':gt 'korrPar'
+			
+			act 'Keep watching':gt 'sitrPar', 'TVmom'
+			act 'Finish watching':gt 'sitrPar', 'TVend'
+		end		
+	end
+
+	if ocpd_room = 0 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox <= 0:
+		'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Unbox</a> your breast pump'
+	elseif kid >= 1 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox <= 0:
+		'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Unbox</a> your breast pump'
+	elseif ocpd_room = 0 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox = 1 and pcs_inbition > 40:
+		'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Try out</a> your breast pump'
+	elseif kid >= 1 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox = 1 and pcs_inbition > 30:
+		'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Try out</a> your breast pump'
 	end
-	exit
 end
 
-if ocpd_room = 0 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox <= 0:
-	'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Unbox</a> your breast pump'
-elseif kid >= 1 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox <= 0:
-	'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Unbox</a> your breast pump'
-elseif ocpd_room = 0 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox = 1 and pcs_inbition > 40:
-	'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Try out</a> your breast pump'
-elseif kid >= 1 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox = 1 and pcs_inbition > 30:
-	'<a href="exec: gt ''lact_bp'', ''bp_unbox_event''">Try out</a> your breast pump'
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'TVmom':
+	cla & *clr
+	pcs_mood += 10
+	minut += 30
+	gs 'family_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familytv.jpg"></center>'
+	'You continue to watch tv with the family, everyone seems very engrossed in the program and almost never says much. Though Kolka occasional makes a crack about what is happening, often getting shushed by Vlad or <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+	if momloc = 19: act'Keep watching TV with your family': gt 'sitrPar', 'TVmom'
+	act 'Finish watching':gt 'sitrPar', 'TVend'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'TVend':
+	cla & *clr
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/familytv.jpg"></center>'
+	'Once the show is over Vladimir picks up the remote and turns the tv off, he gets up. Then he stretches, before he turns and walks out of the room, likely heading to bed. <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gets up and says to you. "You should go to bed or at least go to your room so your brother can get his rest." She then turns to Kolka and says to him. "Don''t stay up, go to bed." With that she also leaves, after making sure you leave as well. As you walk out, you see Kolka putting his pillow and sheet on the couch.'
+	act 'leave':gt 'korrPar'
 end
 
 --- sitrPar ---------------------------------

locations/spell.qsrc

@@ -397,10 +397,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cosmetica':
 		if shave_menu = 1 or shave_menu = 2:
 			! Shave Pubes
 			if pubestyle = 1:
-				pcs_pubes = 0
+				pcs_pubes = 1
 			elseif (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 9) or pubestyle >= 12:
 				pcs_pubes = 16
-			elseif pubestyle = 10 and pcs_pubes >= 35:
+			elseif pubestyle = 10 and pcs_pubes > 29:
 				pcs_pubes = 26
 			elseif pubestyle = 11 and pcs_pubes > 10:
 				pcs_pubes = 0

locations/sportShop.qsrc

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 
 	if bookYog = 0 and money >= 1500:
-		act 'Buy "Benifits of yoga" (1,500 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Buy "Benefits of yoga" (1,500 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cla
 			minut += 5
 			money -= 1500
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			act 'Pick up a package':gt 'sportshop', 'start'
 		end
 	elseif bookYog = 0:
-		act 'Buy "Benifits of yoga" (<font color="red">1500 <b>₽</b></font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough money to buy that.</font>'
+		act 'Buy "Benefits of yoga" (<font color="red">1500 <b>₽</b></font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough money to buy that.</font>'
 	end
 	
 	if konki = 0 and money >= 3000:

locations/start.qsrc

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ $counter = 'counter'
 $usercom = 'inputProcessing'
 $fname = 'Tahoma'
 fsize = 12
-$version = '0.7.6.1 The rushed it out in time for Xmas bug fix version (who would have guessed this one would be buggy?).'
+$version = '0.8 The family update (part 1).'
 
 opPRE = 1
 

locations/stat_display.qsrc

@@ -624,11 +624,11 @@ elseif $clothingworntype = 'cheap' and clothingwornnumber = '414':
 	$stat_clothes_style = 'clothes'
 else
 	if PCloStyle = 4 and PCloBimbo = 1 and cheatBimbo = 0:
-		$stat_clothes_text = '<BR><font color = #FF00FF>You are dressed as a bimbo</font>'
-		$stat_clothes_msg = 'You''re wearing an outfit a bimbo or a prostitute would wear.'
+		$stat_clothes_text = '<BR><font color = #FF00FF>You are dressed as a bimbo/prostitute</font>'
+		$stat_clothes_msg = 'You''re wearing an outfit a bimbo, prostitute would wear.'
 		$stat_clothes_tooltip = 'Prostitute/Bimbo outfit.'
 		$stat_clothes_style = 'clothes_pb'
-	elseif PCloStyle = 4 and (PCloBimbo = 0 or cheatBimbo = 1):
+	elseif PCloStyle = 4:
 		$stat_clothes_msg = 'You''re wearing an outfit a prostitute would wear.'
 		$stat_clothes_tooltip = 'Prostitute outfit.'
 		$stat_clothes_style = 'clothes_p'
@@ -637,7 +637,7 @@ else
 		$stat_clothes_msg = 'You''re wearing exhibitionist clothes a bimbo would wear.'
 		$stat_clothes_tooltip = 'Exhibitionist/Bimbo outfit.'
 		$stat_clothes_style = 'clothes_eb'
-	elseif (PCloInhibit >= 40 or PCloThinness = 6) and (PCloBimbo = 0 or cheatBimbo = 1):
+	elseif (PCloInhibit >= 40 or PCloThinness = 6):
 		$stat_clothes_msg = 'You are wearing exhibitionist clothes.'
 		$stat_clothes_tooltip = 'Exhibitionist outfit.'
 		$stat_clothes_style = 'clothes_e'
@@ -1117,9 +1117,9 @@ if cheatStatusIcons = 0:
 	if deodorant_on = 1 and pcs_sweat < 20: $statusIconBarTab += '<td><a href="exec:msg $stat_sweat_msg"><img title="<<$stat_sweat_msg>>" height = <<set_siconht>> src="images/system/icon/status_icons/deodorant.png"></a></td>'
 
 	if pcs_sweat > 19: $statusIconBarTab += '<td><a href="exec:msg $stat_sweat_msg"><img title="<<$stat_sweat_msg>>" height = <<set_siconht>> src="images/system/icon/status_icons/need_shower.png"></a></td>'
-	
-	if pcs_leghair > 3 or (pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes > 3) or (((pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 7) or pubestyle = 12)  and pcs_pubes >= 15) or (pubestyle = 8 and pcs_pubes >= 20) or (pubestyle = 9 and pcs_pubes >= 25) or (pubestyle = 10 and pcs_pubes >= 40):
-		if (pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes > 3) or (((pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 7) or pubestyle = 12) and pcs_pubes >= 15) or (pubestyle = 8 and pcs_pubes >= 20) or ((pubestyle = 9 or pubestyle >= 13) and pcs_pubes >= 26) or (pubestyle = 10 and pcs_pubes >= 40):
+
+	if pcs_leghair > 3 or (pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes > 3) or (((pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 9) or pubestyle >= 12) and pcs_pubes > 19) or (pubestyle = 10 and pcs_pubes > 29) or (pubestyle = 11 and pcs_pubes > 10):
+		if (pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes > 3) or (((pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 9) or pubestyle >= 12) and pcs_pubes > 19) or (pubestyle = 10 and pcs_pubes > 29) or (pubestyle = 11 and pcs_pubes > 10):
 			$stat_shave_msg = 'You need to shave your'+iif(pcs_leghair > 3, ' legs and ', ' ')+'pussy.'
 		elseif pcs_leghair > 3:
 			$stat_shave_msg = 'You need to shave your legs.'

locations/swamp_yard.qsrc

@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	*nl
 	'Behind the hut there is a <a href="exec: gt ''swampspring'' ">spring</a>, if you continue a little further down there is a small <a href="exec: gt ''backwater'' ">creek</a> with relatively clean water.'
-	gs 'bicycle', 'swamp_yard'
+
 	if hunters_available = 1 and hunters_outside = 1 and huntersknow = 0:
 		*nl
 		'You spot some unfamiliar <a href="exec: gt ''hunters'', ''start'' ">people</a> standing in front of the hut.'
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 		gt 'swamp','stuck'
 	end
-
+	gs 'bicycle', 'swamp_yard'
 	act 'Go into the house':gt 'swamphouse', 'start'
 	if dirty_swamp_yard > 10:act 'Go out in the yard':hunterslut -= 1 & dynamic $dirty_swamp_yard
 

locations/taxi.qsrc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		$menu_arg = ''
 		menu_off = 1
 		minut += 5
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/taxi/taxi.base0,'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/taxi/base'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		'Seeing a taxi coming down the road you raise your arm and wave him down, as he stops you get in.'
 		'Fare 250 RUB.'
 
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 		taxi_pay = 0
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Taxi Driver', rand(30,46)
 		gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/taxi/taxi.base0,'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/taxi/base'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
 		'Having told the driver where you need to go, he chats in a friendly way as he drives. After awhile you finally break it to him that you don''t have any money. "I''m sorry but I don''t have any money."'
 		'He hits the brakes hard and pulls over, bringing the taxi to a sudden stop, he turns around and yells at you. "You fucking little cunt, I should take you to the police right now, it would serve your ass right!"'
 		'A chill runs through you at the thought of him taking you to the police. "Please, please don''t take me to the police. I''m sorry I was just desperate."'

locations/therapist.qsrc

@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoFuck':
 	!ride
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnofucksit<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 		$hypnofuck = '"Yes, sit on my lap, I want you to do the work for now."<br>He masturbates a little, then takes his hands away from his massive dick. "I want you to take it into your hands and lower yourself onto it. Take it deep into your pussy."<br>You do as he says, stepping above him with spread legs, then taking his massive pole into your hands you fit his tool into the entrance of your body. You feel yourself getting wet according to <i>Master</i>''s instruction, then take a deep breath and push your body onto his pole.'
-		$hypnofuck2 = 'He grabs your hips, moving your body to the rithm he wants you to ride him, and it is fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You just ride him like a cowboy, or in this case cowgirl.'
+		$hypnofuck2 = 'He grabs your hips, moving your body to the rhythm he wants you to ride him, and it is fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You just ride him like a cowboy, or in this case cowgirl.'
 	end
 	'<font color=brown>'
 	$hypnofuck
@@ -410,12 +410,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoAnal':
 	$cumdesciption3 = 'cum filled ass'
 	$cumdesciption2 = 'ass is full of fresh sperm, slowly leaking out of you'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A186', 2, 0, 15000, 60
-	randpos = rand(0,3)
+	randpos = rand(0,2)
 	'<font color=brown>'
 	if randpos = 0:
 	!on your back
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnoanalback<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		$hypnofuck = 'You walk to him, and he takes your hand and pushes you ontoour back.<br>"You look beautiful. I will fuck you so hard like a teenage boy," he says. "You will take it like a trooper. Unfortunately my wife lost all of her appeal, so I have to satisfy myself with your little rosebud."<br>He grabs your legs and genty pushes your legs apart, then kneeling between your legs he forces his dick through your muscles.'
+		$hypnofuck = 'You walk to him, and he takes your hand and pushes you on to your back.<br>"You look beautiful. I will fuck you so hard like a teenage boy," he says. "You will take it like a trooper. Unfortunately my wife lost all of her appeal, so I have to satisfy myself with your little rosebud."<br>He grabs your legs and genty pushes your legs apart, then kneeling between your legs he forces his dick through your muscles.'
 		$hypnofuck2 = 'He pounds deep into your ass, and the hard surface does not make it comfortable for you. You wince a few times while his balls rhythmically slap your asscheeks, laboring above you. You feel his sweat dripping down on your tits as you spread your leg as wide as possible to give him as much access as possible.'
 	elseif randpos = 1:
 	!on your back, couch

locations/train.qsrc

@@ -815,7 +815,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'young':
 							*clr
 							cla
 							gs 'stat'
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri.jpg"></center>'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 							'The journey is uneventful and you aren''t paying much attention to it, it doesn''t seem like long before you arrive at your destination.'
 							act 'Get off the train': gt $loc, $metka
 						end
@@ -867,7 +867,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 30	
 					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri.jpg"></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 					'The journey is uneventful and you aren''t paying much attention to it, it doesn''t seem like long before you arrive at your destination.'
 					act 'Get off the train': gt $loc, $metka
 				end
@@ -956,7 +956,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 									*clr & cla
 									minut += 30	
 									gs 'stat'
-									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri.jpg"></center>'
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 									'The journey is uneventful and you aren''t paying much attention to it, it doesn''t seem like long before you arrive at your destination.'
 									act 'Get off the train': gt $loc, $metka
 								end
@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 									*clr & cla
 									minut += 30	
 									gs 'stat'
-									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri.jpg"></center>'
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/electri' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 									'The journey is uneventful and you aren''t paying much attention to it, it doesn''t seem like long before you arrive at your destination.'
 									act 'Get off the train': gt $loc, $metka
 								end

locations/version.qsrc

@@ -2,6 +2,55 @@
 
 act 'Return': gt 'start'
 
+'0.8'
+'- Niko story rewrites and added material from Violet Kitten'
+'- Grandparents now potter about to feel more realistic by iron jack'
+'- New spells at the library from KeyMasterOfGozer'
+'- New relationship functions from KeyMasterOfGozer'
+'- new operating hours and restructure of photo files in photo studio from hornguy6'
+'- fixes for clothing that replace your bra and/or panties by hornguy6'
+'- New underwear added by hornguy6'
+'- Can see the equipment and prices in sports shop if you don''t have the money now thanks to Sicaa'
+'- Mom and Sergey scene from his hallway rewritten and added to by nutluck'
+'- CloDress variable added to all outfits that are one piece top and bottom by hornguy6'
+'- Further rework of grandparent variables by iron jack'
+'- Underwear can be removed and stashed in your purse now thanks to Sicaa'
+'- Hot or not website added to comp much like the one for girls in the school but this time for the boys by nutluck logo art by Kevin Smarts'
+'- Option to turn selfie popups on or off added by CroWke'
+'- QSPgui added to the repo as an alternative player by Kevin Smarts'
+'- expanded the ''Touch her belly'' option for pregnant Natasha by Sicaa'
+'- New maths tools added to shortgs file by Sicaa'
+'- New images from Snegurochka'
+'- New warning image from d4ltos'
+'- body shape variables added to the school girls by nutluck'
+'- Family meals added by julzor and option to join them by Kevin Smarts'
+'- Text edits from MidnightMoose'
+'- Cheerleading events by Vengeance_11 & the cheerleading skill'
+'- birth control implant added by julzor'
+'- Pubic hair image system centralised and recoded by Kevin Smarts'
+'- Luda & Olu revamp by Nutluck'
+'- rewrite gadukino forest, balance village time and money, new conversations and consequences with grandparents and more village stuff by sovietmercader'
+'- Mom schedule added by Kevin Smarts'
+'- laptop is usable in the hotelroom, hotel offers free Wi-Fi it''s 2016 after all thanks to julzor'
+'- New pubic hair colour options for various desigens and lengths from Kevin Smarts'
+'- Added willpower to the school, nerd trait and added the traits to certain starts by julzor'
+'- Some prettying up of the full custom stuff with descriptions for weights and images for the purses, plus it now all works for the CSB start by Kevin Smarts'
+'- mini events for incestuous PCs with cumeater trait after Nat-Kolka scenes from Sicaa'
+'- Added ability to add selfies from Anushka post sex to your phone from Kevin Smarts'
+'- Reworking of the breast and lactation system by Mi1ky_boobs'
+'- Revamped nerd game night by Blatte and Nutluck'
+'- revamped cursed schoolboy intro (forgot who wrote it, sorry - Sicaa)'
+'- social group reactions to Sveta''s choice of school uniform - by Nutluck'
+'- New events if Mom is at church from Violet Kitten'
+'- Father and fathersex files rewritten by EmporersTitan with code from nutluck and Violet Kitten'
+'- New hair colours and gossip in the hairsalon from Blatte'
+'- Link for Olu''s taxi at the train station from nutluck and code from Violet Kitten'
+'- Olu taxi from nutluck'
+'- Mom reactions from blatte/Akossi and some mini events from nutluck with some code from kevin and probably VK and who knows who else.'
+'- flash option for willpower added by Sicaa'
+'- Text edits from JamesDixon and ParusMajors'
+'- Bug fixes by hornguy6, Kevin Smarts, Sicaa, julzor, KeyMasterOfGozer, Violet Kitten and sovietmercader'
+
 '0.7.6'
 '- Warning to game start regarding content with disclaimer (about time we had one of these) by Kevin Smarts'
 '- Artem - mother and father added to apartment and can talk to them. - nutluck, crowke, and blatte'

locations/wardrobe.qsrc

@@ -283,8 +283,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'default_entry_set':
 	defpantynumber[i] = pantywornnumber
 	$defshoetype[i] = $shoeworntype
 	defshoenumber[i] = shoewornnumber
-	$defpursetype[i] = $currentpursetype
-	defpursenumber[i] = currentpursenumber
+	if bag = 1:
+		$defpursetype[i] = $currentpursetype
+		defpursenumber[i] = currentpursenumber
+	else
+		$defpursetype[i] = 'none'
+	end
 	defcoat[i] = defaultcoat
 
 	$def_clothing_temp = '<<$def_clothing_name[i]>>'